Talk:The Purple Balloon/@comment-30651889-20161202215806

A beautifully written story, and fast paced enough to keep the least interested reader going. Written with no cliches that I could see, and a twist ending that is awesome. I've read this story multiple times because it's so good, and I love that this community is using new ideas. Keep up the good work you two! The only part I didn't really like is the beginning, because it could use some more explanation, but that's just me. It really is a great pasta, one of the best on this site. Even the people I showed this story to have loved it. 10/10 Please do more great work, and make this Wiki all he better while your at it. Thank you.