Talk:Big Bad Wolf/@comment-24618087-20140328165042

One thing I love about the creepypasta comments is that there's too much "OMG I LOVE IT!!! MORR!!!!" and not enough actual reviews, which is where I come in.

One thing that bothered me when I first read this, and now, is how the story's played out. It's not the gender of the protagonist, it's the age that concerns me. The only indication was that she was nine, but against a werewolf or whatever couldn't actually stand a chance, much less cut off a dick. Which leads to another thing, that there were a lot of interactions with the beast's penis, too much for comfort.

Other than that, I did see some grammar issues, and the sudden urge she had for stabbing seemed random and like a reference.

Honestly, I'd give this a 7/10.