Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26268104-20151224205149/@comment-26007602-20151226231816

I think you should describe the main setting. Since this is a screenplay, you can afford that luxury. Where is the story mainly set? The small town? If so, give us some details about it. Give it a name. What do citizens do in the background? What is the weather like? Stuff like that. This isn't a story, so you can do more telling than showing here.