Talk:Clown Dogs/@comment-25383866-20150123001243/@comment-26030957-20150123030458

Thanks so much for your reply. I know Facebook ghosts are nothing new; but, I'm new here and it seemed apt, as did the teenage protagonist which I tried to bathe in irony. As for your edit, I don't believe it was necessary for I was trying to go for a sense of guilt from our protagonist, let's call her Margaret (notice I never gave her a name?  It's funny how you can get away with that in stories so short). In the first sentence (which honestly I would have sighed over if I read it for the first time, I mean really:  "I saw it all," augh-stereotype- but hey, I was totally going for this creepypasta thing- I love it!)- but back to what I was saying- in the first line, Margaret laments her role in the horrific events that follow. She further torments herself over the role she played at the end. Her regret is a recurring theme in the narrative and I kind of think that sentence should stay. 



You know, I followed with the image of clown dogs (no small nod to Smile Dog- excellent pasta) and if you or anyone you know have any creepy photos of clowns and dogs I'd love to see them! ThanksHumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 03:04, January 23, 2015 (UTC) 