Talk:The Algorithm/@comment-25471033-20180814203225

I really liked this one, it had a twist that I honestly didn't expect. The description painted a picture, but the entire pasta was not completely based off of description alone. I also liked how vague the ending was, was it real, or all in his head? Was he able to live a normal life after that? Probably not, but anyways, the only other thing I could think about changing is adding a little more creepiness. However, I'm not sure how, but maybe make it more like it really happened. That's really hard to do in a first person creepypasta, and honestly, that's why I don't tend to like them as much. 9/10