Talk:Amazing World of Gumball - The Grieving/@comment-25983847-20150107234518

This could have been very good but it lost me towards the end.

Firstly, the ending and the reason you kept watching just ruined the entire thing. You kept watching because you couldn't turn your TV off? What, were ghosts keeping it on? And you were the only house in the world to see it? And also, the ending, the serial killer just happened to find the tape, then was somehow able to mimic the art style of the animators and then snuck into a TV station, aired it on YOUR TV and only yours? I know these stories are fake but make them more believable. No story is going to be scary, eerie, etc., if you don't make it believable. Why couldn't you have kept watching just because you were sickeningly curious, or couldn't look away? Why couldn't the serial killer have worked with the animators, so he knew where they buried the tape and could mimic the style? And what happened with your parents and your younger brother?

This could have been good, like I said, but it wasn't. 2/5, the beginning was okay.