Talk:The Melon Head Illustration/@comment-25216062-20150330164027

I think it was nice and dark in the beginning, but a little rushed. If you had drawn out his researching and her reactions (or even have left little obscure hints) it might have been a little more... i don't want to say interesting, cause it was plenty interesting. But I'm speaking as someone who doesn't like "cliff hangers" as it were. I really would like to know what exactly happened to her.