Talk:The Walk

Review (3/5)-
First of all, I want to thank the author for reading and requesting my review. Oh well, let's get down to business, shall we? This pasta is an alright read, but it wasn't the common things that threw me off. It was how vague and mysterious it was. I didn't get most of it, and I must apologize, but I felt as if the story just didn't come together. It just seemed like one turn after another, with no real emotion or story in play. I didn't spot many grammar conflicts, and the story it's self was quite long. If it wasn't for the maze of a story, I would have liked it. You can take the review as good in the sense of the common errors that I usually bite at, but at the same time, the story needs to be, well, more clear. Actually, I'm pretty lost of words when it comes to the story, I'm not sure how to describe how I feel about it. I guess I can just leave my review, and you can infer, eh? I think I'll give this pasta a 3/5. It was well written as far as common error goes, but when it comes to story, it was too vague and odd to comprehend fully.

Dburch111 (talk) 01:09, October 30, 2012 (UTC)Dburch111