Talk:Becoming Cat/@comment-32492816-20180322215712

Is it weird I found this kind of beautiful in a way? I mean, it may be because I'm a cat person, but it didn't really scare me. What do the cats even want to do to this woman anyway? They don't seem malevolent. I mean, they gave her a son and all; that doesn't seem evil to me.

This is beautifully written, but I suggest rethinking the tone of your story. It seems more a tale of positive rebirth than a story of horror and transformation. It could easily be either one, but you should perhaps adjust the tone if you want it to be horror.