Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29652084-20170823103622/@comment-29652084-20170823231652

EmpyrealInvective wrote:

Magical Toddler wrote:

EmpyrealInvective wrote: Starting with the basic, you switch from single spacing to double spacing throughout the story. Being uniform with one format would be best. I know about the spacing issue already. I just hadn't corrected it yet (I think it happened while I was transferring the story from my Docs to here) as it was somewhere around 6 in the morning and I was exhausted at the time.

But thanks for the review. I'll be editing on it sometime tonight. No problem. Best of luck. Edited some. Also, any way to make this dialogue sound a bit more natural?