Talk:Not Dead ~Poem~/@comment-5733573-20180602223219

I love the idea so much, but this really doesn't need to be a poem. For one thing, there's really nothing "poetic" about the way you've written it, and the poem fromat doesn't add anything, so it really might as well be a story. That being said, as soon as I realized what I was reading, I got chills, not because it's particularly scary (although it is certainly unsettling and disturbing), but because the idea is just so goddamn good, if you'll pardon the pun. Really great concept.