Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25314309-20140817062709/@comment-25170312-20140817065130

A few reasons could be that it's just one big paragraph, it doesn't really make any sense or seem to have a point, and it's not creepy or unnerving. And it's so cryptic that it reads like a blur. Maybe that's the intent? I wouldn't say it's bad, just not a creepypasta.