Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20170322170153/@comment-28266772-20170322181534

I really appreciate the input. It's exactly that sort of insight that helps; I'm hoping to tone down the grittiness and up the horror. It will always have some NSFW gore but I don't want it to be dominated utterly by it. Thank you for the feedback, it's extremely helpful (the mechanical stuff especially). I'm going to rest for a bit and come back to this.