Talk:Daddy's Little Princess/@comment-25975226-20160118111502

Okay so I maybe shouldn't have read this but I did anyway so there's no going back. Again, such high quality and deep writing. Honestly Humboldt, your stories are always so scary and have great endings. Some of the best endings I've ever read....usually. This ending was kinda rushed to say the least. I'm sorry to say it but this pasta, instead of following the trend of your usual writing and upping the chill factor on the last pasta, it's really just sort of stayed at that level. Maybe it was the word limit that rushed you, I'm not sure. I feel really bad to give you this critique because I know my work is no where near up to the standards yours is. But that's just my opinion I guess. It's still a really chilling story, and amazing writing, it's just that ending that bugs me a little.