Talk:Red Paint/@comment-25052433-20150831172716

What sets this one apart from many stories about mental illness in characters, is the amount of quality character development that went into the main character here. Though this story was short, you did a fantastic job of really letting us get to know Juni, even going into her dynamic with the town she lived in.

It helped the reader understand her distress, so when she began to develop feelings for Arial, it came across as a normal human progression, rather than a forced plot device. To do this in a horror story is a rare gem and a hallmark of talent, but to do this in such a short horror story, really showcases your superior writing and character development abilities.

While there are other stories that follow a similar patern, you certainly demonstrated the right way to do it here. Amazing job!