Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-25169949-20151029103942/@comment-25169949-20151114235643

Also, some critique question's I'd like to ask:


 * How well did I tackle the emotional aspect of the story; which was supposed to be a big part of it.


 * Was it clear that the protagonist was supposed to be an asshole?


 * Did you get an idea of which character I was using as the main "villain"?


 * After finishing it, what did you think was going on?