Talk:Out in the Woods/@comment-25388800-20140905173957

Eh, not really that great. Tension was built all right but I had to roll my eyes at "  she saw me standing half behind a tree right near the window, grinning wide and staring at her, my one visible eye stretched wide open, showing all the white"  because I was instantly reminded of Jeff the Killer and how absolutely trash that story was. It's cliche, and not really scary whatsoever. But that's just a minor discrepency.

This did't really deliver at all. The tension that was built never payed off.

4/10.