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I completely agree with you Keizo. The use of past and present tense in the story makes it somewhat difficult to read. Did they move to some kind of ghetto? I mean really, 12-13 year old boys walking around armed with knives to go to school? If that's the case, then why would the police arrest Liu and send him to jail for a year! What, no court proceedings. The parents just let the cops take him away and don't even go with him. If these kids are really bullies like the story suggests, then the police and everyone else would know what kind of jerks these kids are and lock THEM up for assault. The party scene...the grown ups just stand around and watch???

Sorry, but I just don't think that this story is very good at all. I give it

2/10