Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20160209052643/@comment-26326346-20160210015452

I'm going to see about adding a flashback after they exit the prison, but I don't know if I can do it without breaking the pacing of the story. I'm going to let it sit for a few days and see if anyone has a suggestion in regards to this or if I come up with something. I made all the other changes based upon your feedback. Thanks again :)