Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20181115065841/@comment-34823985-20181115214437

Thanks for the feedback, guys. Yeah, I'm currently working on a different ending. I am also considering a title change. I agree with Bob that the two stories only have one word in common, but my title does kind of suck. It did, however, inspire this entire story, so I guess it did its job. :)

I was hoping Beth having a breakdown would make sense because you never really know what's bubbling inside a person. I once got threatened by a guy with a tire iron just because I acknowledged him knocking his car door into mine. Yes, I guess this is a "I hate my vegan relative" story. Hey, you can write a story about anything, really.

I didn't know coyotes weren't pack animals. Huh, learn something knew everyday. I just assumed they were because they used to congregate in my yard at night years ago. I'm hoping that fact won't matter since this isn't really a natural occurrence. I'll work on clarifying that. Appreciate y'all reading it and telling me what you think.

Hey No time, I hope to have this done by Saturday. I'm not insisting you narrate it, so only do it if you like the final product and want to. I'll let you know when it's done.