Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25208426-20140721203603/@comment-25148755-20140724135956

You fixed most of the grammatical/formatting issues so that's good. I'm unfamiliar wig Animal Crossing but I'll take your word On the details.

The biggest problem is the site doesn't take gaming pastas. Also there's nothing particularly scary/creepy about what you have here.

Bottom line not badly written, ok premise but if you want to post and not have it deleted it'll have to be on another wiki (troll pasta, spin pasta, another gaming pasta, etc)