Talk:The Gym Teacher/@comment-37962570-20190617050028

Oh gosh, how do I describe this? I have always been a person with a very strong stomach. Even descriptions of horrible things don't make me gag but, seeing blood in real life does. It's a very strange thing. This story was filled with descriptions that could make me puke, I even almost did, but I believe that is what makes this story mildly decent. The way it started out strong and mostly carried that throughout the whole story was amazing. The ending was quite abrubt though. It ends when something bad is about to happen - then cuts to a new scene? I can understand doing this and describing what happened but no description is provided. Now to say you can imagine what happened is very wrong; people take things many ways. Like, did they all get murdered? Did one of them escape? It's a very strong ending structure that many stories seem to attempt at. Now, I would say out of endings, this one is very clean but, not amazing. Overall, about a 8/10.