Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25682745-20150218132812

Note: this is considered a free verse poem

 Brain Power



 Fresh, clean sheets, straight out of the wash!

'' They clothed that cancerous old hag. ''

 Nice and warm, they smell like linen!

'' You cut off her fingers one by one and mopped up the blood with it. ''

 Now, let’s just spread them over the mattress.

'' Oh, the same way you spread out and sorted her intestines? ''

 And then cover them with a blanket…

'' You mean dirt? ''

 As I drift to sleep, comfortably

'' As she drifted to sleep, agonized. ''

 And when I wake up, it’s back to work at the hospital!

'' And when she woke up, she recalled she forgot to apologize. ''

 Another day, another nickel, I suppose.

'' Another prick here, another lash there. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> “That poor old lady,” I’ll start with the nurse.

<p class="MsoNormal">'' “Have mercy!” she’ll shakily shriek. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> And then, on to the operation! How exciting!

<p class="MsoNormal">'' The vivid sight of hell, flooding her vision. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> First a snip here, then a cut there!

<p class="MsoNormal">'' She would cry, but they cut out your tear ducts. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> “What was that?” I say, thoughts prodding at my skull.

<p class="MsoNormal">'' What? You understand me? ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> “Well, yes, I suppose so.”

<p class="MsoNormal">'' Lovely! Now, you have to do what I say. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> “Why’s that?” the nurse grows suspicious.

<p class="MsoNormal">'' I’m your conscience. Kill this child. Nurse, too. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> “A-alright then,” bloodlust pools in my stomach.

<p class="MsoNormal">'' Wait until the bitch isn’t looking. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> She turns, I stab. What a wonderful stress reliever!

<p class="MsoNormal">'' Wait until the child’s awake. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> Tick, tock, tick, tock, tick, tock. “Shouldn’t the sleepy pill wear off soon?”

<p class="MsoNormal">'' Play with the nurse until the child wakes up. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> I guess maybe I can dissect her.

<p class="MsoNormal">'' Yes. Dissect her. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> Let’s see, bones go over here, guts go over here.

<p class="MsoNormal">'' Run. The authorities are coming. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> I’ve always wanted to see what it’s like jumping out of a window.

<p class="MsoNormal">'' Fool! Go downstairs. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> Running from security is fun!

<p class="MsoNormal">'' Now you can jump out a window and remain unscathed. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> Wheee!

<p class="MsoNormal">'' Take the van. Kill the driver. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> “Here, sir. Does this rag smell funny?”

<p class="MsoNormal">'' Shit. We’re caught. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> “  Aw, I wanted to play chase a bit more.”

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<p class="MsoNormal">'' ~sentenced to life, 14 years after the murders~ ''

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<p class="MsoNormal">'' Why did you listen to me, you dumbass? ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> “Hey… shut up! I don’t like you!

<p class="MsoNormal">'' I hate you! You’re worthless scum! ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> “STOP IT! GET OUT OF MY HEAD!”

<p class="MsoNormal">'' I AM YOUR HEAD. I AM YOU. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> “LET ME DIE! PLEASE!”

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<p class="MsoNormal">'' YOUR ACTIONS WERE UNNECESSARY. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> “YOU TOLD ME WHAT TO DO! THIS IS YOUR FAULT!”

<p class="MsoNormal">'' YOU ARE UNNECESSARY. DESTROY YOURSELF. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"> “PLEASE! KILL ME! END MY LIFE!”

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<p class="MsoNormal"> Prisoner Death Assessment

<p class="MsoNormal"> ID: 35712

<p class="MsoNormal"> DoB: 4/14/68

<p class="MsoNormal"> DoD: 3/05/14

<p class="MsoNormal"> Age at Death: 46

<p class="MsoNormal"> Cause of death: Repeated concussion, suicide

<p class="MsoNormal"> Mental Illnesses: depression, schizophrenia, Bipolar disorder

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<p class="MsoNormal"> Notes: complained about white sheets prior to death: “The sheets aren’t clean enough!” “They fucking need to be white as snow, got it?”

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<ac_metadata title="First Creepypasta, feedback/constructive criticism appreciated."> </ac_metadata>