Talk:Joke's on You/@comment-24532164-20160308012432/@comment-5654933-20160308033830

while I appreciate your concern, I wrote this story... almost 4 years ago, so please try to check stuff like that, I wrote this when I was 14 for a fun thing to do, and an experiment into the second person writing style. Not that your condescending tone is making you seem any more mature, have a good day though