User talk:Jay ten/Archive 9

Re: No Hay Falla
We managed to keep everything running smoothly. I did start a few fires since then (as I am want to do from time to time), but we got the admin team working to put out some of those Centralia-esque blunders as we speak. Jokes aside, good to have you back. I'll unlock those pages, also your blog is locked for commenting (not sure if that's intentional). EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:40, April 7, 2016 (UTC)


 * Entendido. Emp immediately opens up the commenting section and spams it with poorly-written Spanish messages. A final note: my latest story might be a bit too topical... EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:49, April 7, 2016 (UTC)


 * "I'll be ok I think. I'm on muscle relaxers and Ativan, so... yeah." Pretty sure that's how most of my stories should be read in the first place. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:59, April 7, 2016 (UTC)

Welcome Back
Hope you have a good recovery soon, it's good to see you back on the wiki.

∆  SoPretentious   ∆   20:45, April 7, 2016 (UTC)
 * I second that emotion! Raidra (talk) 00:20, April 8, 2016 (UTC)

Hola
No more bullshit or beating around the bush. I'm gonna be straight-forward on this one...

Welcome back, Jay. Welcome back to hell, the place where you belong. And hey, be clean and pay attention to your doctor/s.

Sincerely,

That Graphic Artist Wannabe

 Ruckus Q uantum   03:30, April 8, 2016 (UTC)

Welcome Back
I came back from my long stretch away from this site and wondered where you went!! It was actually quite sad to see "Retired". Regardless, I'm glad you're back! GreyOwl (talk) 06:52, April 8, 2016 (UTC)

Glad You've Returned
I'm happy that you are back. I hope you get to keep your kidney and I'm wishing you the best. It certainly sounds like you've been through a lot and have quite a bit more to go through, but hopefully that comes to an end and you can relax. If you ever need to vent or scream, then feel free to do it at me on my talk page. I won't take it personally. I'll stop with the awkwardness. It's good to have you back! Take it easy Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  14:46, April 8, 2016 (UTC)


 * Thank you. Oh, don't worry about wearing me down. I appreciate the criticism because you are letting me know of issues with my writing. I often feel that people are just humoring me or are afraid to say anything negative (which in and of itself is negative because I can't get better that way). You've given me this goal to write something that blows you away, so I've got a goal now XD Thanks again! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  16:39, April 8, 2016 (UTC)

Hey
Just saw your blog. I am not good with words and wishes so I'll just wish you the best. And for one, I'm glad you returned. Hope you have fun here. Have a nice day Jay. MrDupin (talk) 15:20, April 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re: How dare you?!
-Correct my errors. All of the edits you did are correct (as usual). I always tend to mix up punctuation rules for movies and magazines so thanks for clearing that up and catching the small typos along the way. Are there any areas in the story you think I need to improve on? EmpyrealInvective (talk) 15:39, April 8, 2016 (UTC)


 * Alright, thanks. Don't feel pressured to review it anytime soon. Just keep up with the good edits. As for nightmares, I don't know what you mean... EmpyrealInvective (talk) 15:49, April 8, 2016 (UTC)

Blog post
Hi Jay! I just read your blog post, and all I have to say is wow. I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors! With love, Luigifan100 22:31, April 8, 2016 (UTC)

List of well-wishers
The list of well-wishers is growing exponentially! At this rate you might have to archive your talk page by next week. ;-)

Oh, I love Smokey Robinson! I'm doing pretty well, though I have sinus headaches from time to time. Ah, thanks! :-D That was sweet of you. That was a lot more thoughtful than the Allmark card- http://www.passionup.com/fun/fun255.htm. Happy belated various holidays to you too! On February 2 Comedy Central had an all-day marathon of Groundhog Day, which was appropriate. One time I saw a news segment in which Punxsutawney Phil predicted six more weeks of winter, and somebody loudly booed.

I don't know if you remember our conversation about the World Sauna Championships, but here's an update- they did end it after that horrifying incident. It turned out that one of the contestants who died was on painkillers. I just threw up my arms and thought, "Great! Drug use is ruining this sport too!" Raidra (talk) 00:50, April 9, 2016 (UTC)
 * Done! Wow, with us talking about the sauna championship horror and my talk page getting too long, it really is like old times, isn't it?
 * I am feeling better today, so maybe the power of the Allmark card helped! ;-) It might be interesting to see an Allmark card commercial. It might be like the gallows humor joke/urban legend in which this cowboy comes home and a friend meets him & tells him, "Your dog is dead."  "What? How?"  "It ate too much horse flesh."   "My horses?"  "Yep. A stray spark from the house fire did it."  "My house..."  "It was too many candles from your mother-in-law's funeral."  "Widow Thompson is dead?"  "Yep. Heart attack.  It was the shock of her only daughter running off with a hired hand."  "What?  Are you telling me my wife has left me, and I'll have to raise our three children alone?"  "Huh? Oh. No, they all died in the house fire."  Thinking about it, I think they ripped that off in Robin Hood: Men in Tights.  Robin's friend gave him all this bad news and finished with something like, "Bet it's good to be back, eh, Robin?"  Do you think S.F.W.  would be the feature film for the Allmark Hall of Fame?
 * It's too bad Mythbusters ended. Maybe the Eskimo blood would heat one up instead.  Competitor, five minutes before entering the sauna- I have a secret weapon!  Competitor, ten minutes into the competition- Ahhh, that just made it worse! Raidra (talk) 00:24, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

I Read Your Blog Post
I read your blog post, and I'm really sorry that all of this has happened to you. I hope that you'll be okay. Good luck in your future endeavors, and nice having you as a part of this wiki. You did a great job at being an admin.

BrianBerta (talk) 01:29, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Vandals at the Gate
Thanks for catching that, Cleric already banned the vandals so all I had to do was check to make sure they didn't get anything else. Have a good one. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 13:48, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

Howdy, Jay ten. I saw your edit on my CreepyPasta, "Damian". I was just wondering what that meant. I'm not sure if it's good or bad or a weird symbol or something? Just wondering what it means :P

TheSkiesShallPour (ArrowPelt) (talk)TheSkiesShallPour (ArrowPelt)

Howdy! I changed my CreepyPasta into the paragraph format. I understand if you still need to delete it -.-

TheSkiesShallPour (ArrowPelt) (talk)TheSkiesShallPour (ArrowPelt)

No! It's not mint condition anymore!
Men in Tights was a funny movie. "Lend me your ears!" (Crowd plucks off ears and tosses them onto stage) Oh, that's cold!

I appreciate the interest. Hmm... I believe my three most recent stories are "Van's Nightmare", "Masks for Sale", and "Fu Manchu's Serum". I also have this thread with two drafts of one story- a two-for-one! http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:524064 Raidra (talk) 00:57, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

Welcome Back
Hey I read your blog or whatever and I hope you are doing well. I will be praying for you for sure. God bless you. I hope to see you back on the admin team eventually, I thought you were very good at it. Welcome back, wish you all the best.

User:DarthWeezer1994 06:23, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

Greetings
I'm probably a little late with this, but I just wanted to say it's good to have you back. When you left, it was kinda abrupt. It was pretty strange to see your user page with Retired on it. You were always very good around the site, even though you didn't have stories posted here (though I think I remember reading something with Ned the Nihilist in the title). Anyway, I hope you'll be able to solve everything in your life and eventually return as an admin.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 18:40, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

My paper weapons
Thanks for telling me about "The Smiling Man". That was a good one! :-D

Here are some blogs I did recently. I hope I'm not tooting my own horn here. I just wondered if you'd be interested. Raidra (talk) 00:40, April 12, 2016 (UTC)
 * http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Raidra/My_Paper_Weapons,_Part_One
 * http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Raidra/My_Paper_Weapons,_Part_Two
 * http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Raidra/My_Paper_Weapons,_Part_Three
 * http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Raidra/Fantasy_Arsenal

Hi
Good to see you're back. LOLSKELETONS (talk) 01:54, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

At least I didn't use toilet paper
~laughs at Jay's paper shortage title~ Thanks! :-D By paper weapons I mean paper models based on/inspired by real weapons (or, in some cases, fantasy weapons). Saying that reminded me of the flashback to the 1980s Peanut Pageant on the cartoon Class of 3000. "The peanut... is neither a pea... nor a nut..." Believe it or not, I have some Word files with descriptions of other weapons, but since I don't plan to make paper models of those, they're not pertinent to the conversation. Apparently I'm not the only one doing work like this- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HHDgxpotg6Q.

Yeah, a lot of people don't know how to do subtle and effective horror anymore. Like you say, less than be more. I think a lot of horror writers need to study films like The Changeling (from 1980) and When A Stranger Calls (the real one, not the remake). I haven't read the actual story (just a summary of it), but Stephen King wrote a short story called "Sorry, Right Number" which also sounds like it would be in the less is more category. . This is probably an unfounded question, but "The Brown Spot" isn't a NSFW one, is it? Because Humboldt can tell you that I run from those. I started to read his "Rumpelstiltskin", but then a message popped up noting that it was NSFW. I thought, "I'm outta here!" and fled the scene. I have an idea of what I can handle. For the record, though, I did leave a good review for the one or two paragraphs that I did read. Raidra (talk) 02:17, April 13, 2016 (UTC)

Just a friendly message...
Back to be an admin, eh? That's pretty good news, congratulations. I hope you do better this second time around, and I really hope you won't mess things up again. Just a friendly message.

 Ruckus Q uantum   16:48, April 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * I see Don Rickles is in the building.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 17:02, April 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * No, Jay. I'm joking about the "mess it up" part, just thought I might get myself a few laughs before going back to my nightmare that is the contest (Revolt), but I sincerely congratulate you on your return. No jokes, it's good to see a wracked-up admin getting back to his feet. And you've proven once again that you're not gonna let anything get in your way!


 * And yeah, I'll keep my head on straight, and you must to!


 * http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/creepypasta/images/thumb/5/56/RQS.gif/100px-RQS.gif 17:09, April 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * And my new signature is still broken. :(

Check the ordinances in your paper state
Remember- a balisong with a blade over two inches is illegal in paper California. I know if I met someone armed with a paper weapon, I'd nod respectfully and then head another way.

Though I didn't get to watch it regularly, Class of 3000 had some funny lines. You know how many cartoons depict their characters with four-fingered hands? Well one episode opened with the students talking about how hard they'd worked. The rich kid lamented, "I've worked my ten fingers to the bone!" and another student asked, "You have ten fingers?! You really are rich, aren't you?" The Peanut Pageant episode I mentioned earlier had a scene in which a couple of the students had to round up a couple of elephants. One of them suggested using mice to scare the elephants into going where they needed to go. The other one replied, "I think that's just a myth," and the first one, referring to the elephants, replied, "They don't know that!" Interestingly, Mythbusters had an episode in which they tested that by going to one of those reserves where wild elephants can roam free. When the elephants saw the mouse, they stopped, backed away, and went another way. They certainly weren't panicked like you see in the cartoons, but they were unsettled. Maybe that's their equivalent of meeting some random person wielding a paper weapon.

Thanks! That's both for letting me know the stories had been posted and for remembering my squeamishness! :-) I have TBS and TWiR pasted onto a word file so I can read them later. It sounds like they'll be good! Interestingly enough, I did see that title the other day and I did decide to skip it.  Sounds like I dodged a bullet!

I was flipping through the channels one time and came across an episode of Family Guy in which Peter and Lois were at the doctor's office. [Incidentally, every time someone mentions Seth MacFarlane, I make the exact same comment- "That guy's talented! He doesn't have to work blue!" People criticize his Oscar gig, but there was a Sound of Music gag that cracked me up!] The doctor kept making comments that sounded like horrible medical news, but were really just comments that weren't appropriate to the conversation. "I'm not sure how to say this. (Peter and Lois gasp in fear) Kim Bay-singe-er... Kim Bass-singe-er... Kim Bass-sing-grr? Now, let's look at your chart.  It's Cancer. (Peter and Lois have horrified reaction)  It says here you were born in late June, so that makes you a Cancer, right?  I'm afraid that liver is going to have to be taken out now. (Peter and Lois have stunned reaction.  Doctor goes to microwave) Yep, this liver's going to get dry if I leave it in the microwave any longer." After five or six examples of this Lois pleaded, "Please, doc, no more schtick! We can't take it anymore!" In addition to hoping the news is good, I'm also hoping that you don't get get a run-around like that. You have a good one too! Raidra (talk) 01:21, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

"You're fine"
Peter- Oh, so now you're coming onto me!?

Lois- Peter, he's not flirting with you! He's just saying you're healthy!

Dr. Hartman- (after pause) Is there a reason it can't be both?

I know that was from another episode, but I had to add it. I also saw a scene from The Cleveland Show with Dr. Fist telling Cleveland, "Your son has one of the most commonly over-diagnosed childhood ailments, sleep apnea, except he really does have it, probably." I told my aunt that because I knew she'd get a kick out of it. She's said, "I hate it when they say, 'What you might have...' because I don't go to find out what I 'might' have; I go to find out what I do have!"

"Hey, guys, let's go scare some elephants! C'mon, it'll be a laugh riot!"

It's my pleasure. I'm glad you're not one of those people like this Whose Line Is It Anyway? segment. They had a clip in which this monster reached out from a closet and grabbed a scientist's arm (This was actually from a classic B-movie, but I can't remember the title right now). As the monster violently shook the mad scientist's arm, Colin Mochrie dubbed, "Buy an encyclopedia! Buy an encyclopedia! I'm working my way through correspondence school!"

Well, I'm signing off. Have a good night! Raidra (talk) 02:48, April 14, 2016 (UTC)
 * I appreciate that. It's no trouble at all.  I've already reviewed TBS (I think you'll like what I had to say) and I hope to review TWiR tomorrow.  Oh, Whose Line was and is one of the funniest shows on television!  I saw the first episode of the new version, and I cracked up laughing during the first segment.  They did "Let's Make a Date" and this big guy (I think his name is Gary Anthony Williams) played the "bachelorette".  He started, "Bachelor Number One, I'm known on the streets for my love of gravy," and I cracked up because it was just so random.  I never eat or drink while watching that or Mystery Science Theater 3000 because I don't want something to go through the wrong tube due to me having a laughing fit. Raidra (talk) 00:53, April 15, 2016 (UTC)

Seeking companion who loves mashed potatoes to feel complete
I saw part of that. Manos, from what I've read and seen, is one of those movies that's unbearable without the MST3K treatment, but their lines were hilarious. I cracked up when one of them noted, "He looks like Bill Buckner," because the character really did look like ballplayer Bill Buckner. Another great yet simple moment was when it showed the little girl as one of the brides (which was abhorrent), and one of the guys loudly booed. Have you ever seen the MST3K version of either Hobgoblins or Pumaman? Those were great! As for Whose Line, the new incarnation is hosted by Aisha Tyler and on the CW. I think it may be on break right now; I'm not sure.

I know what you mean about proofreading because the same thing has happened to me! Speaking of which, here's a poem I found- http://www.cmiiw.com/spelling.htm. Thanks! It's my pleasure. I'll have to check out the others sometime- except, of course, for the ones I won't. Ah, you know what I mean. One of my friends told me about the time he was in the hospital and the medicine made everyone look like Blu from Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends. Raidra (talk) 01:39, April 16, 2016 (UTC)


 * That was the same thing I thought- "You cannot make this stuff up."


 * I think that's what made the scene so great- that guy saying just what the viewers were thinking. I wonder how people who actually saw the movie at the drive-in theater reacted.  Interestingly enough, my late father ran a drive-in at one point (many years before I was born).  I just asked Mom (who worked in the concession stand) if they ever showed any bad movies, and she replied, "Oh, yeah.  I can't think of one right off, but he didn't have the money to run good ones.  I'm sure there were some bad ones."


 * Earlier today I was thinking about something and I thought about a scene from Whose Line Is It Anyway? that I recently shared with Doom Vroom. If I remember correctly, Ryan was playing Superman and Colin was playing Lois Lane.
 * Superman- Just let me get my gun.
 * Lois- You have a gun?!
 * Superman- I live in a bad neighborhood.


 * If I had to guess, I'd say Superman's gun came with his pee, see, and he uses it to defend against mobs wielding kangaroo tails. You're certainly welcome, and you have a good one too! Raidra (talk) 00:53, April 17, 2016 (UTC)
 * Hey, it would be a lot better than any Superman movie the major motion picture studios have produced in a long time! How weird would it be if one of those bad drive-in movies involved Superman and some of those other elements?  If you showed Sonny Tufts movies at a drive-in you might have a visit from a man, his dog, and his talking car (That's a My Mother the Car reference). Reader's Digest has articles like "13 Things Your Child's Teacher Won't Tell You", "50 Things Your Emergency Room Doctor Won't Tell You", etc.  If they ever have a "Things Your Drive-In Theater Operator Won't Tell You", here's one for the list.  Mom told me that the woman who worked in the concession stand before she came told her to use a lot of salt in the popcorn so people would come back to buy drinks.  This isn't something Mom did purposely, mind you, just something that was suggested. Raidra (talk) 01:08, April 18, 2016 (UTC)

Hey
Hey man,

I'm really sorry for not messaging you sooner, I've just been away from the wiki for too long :/

I really hope you make a quick recovery, it's great to have you back.

16:50, April 17, 2016 (UTC)

Been good!
Glad to see that you're back and very glad to hear from you. Things are good, the job is still taking up a ton of my writing time, but I've found ways to sort of work around it.

Stay cool brother!

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 01:43, April 19, 2016 (UTC)

good that you're back
The other admins told me you were dealing with some unidentified personal stuff, so I don't hold anything against you; plus I figured if you really felt the way you did, you'd have jumped on my ass a LONG time ago, so I was pretty sure something was up. That's some serious shit you've been dealing with, so I hope it all works out.

Keep a positive outlook at all times. That can make a world of difference when dealing with cancer -- as in, a "doctors told him he had a week to live, but that was ten years ago" difference. It's uncanny, and sounds hokey, but it works. --Mikemacdee (talk) 02:28, April 20, 2016 (UTC)

Welcome Back
Glad to see you're back. Maybe I will come back soon as well. ‎الله أكبرAllahu Akbarالله أكبر 02:49, April 20, 2016 (UTC)

Well...
Welcome back, goofball. ;)

Mystreve (talk) 22:48, April 20, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Thanks Man
I've been in a similar situation where irl stuff made me lash out at people online, so last thing I wanna be is a hypocrite. It was never as serious as what you're dealing with, either. --Mikemacdee (talk) 02:31, April 21, 2016 (UTC)

Inquiry
Jay, I believe editing stories filed under Historical Archives are prohibited. Can you please specify, it's pretty unclear to me.

19:36, April 21, 2016 (UTC)


 * Do you think my edit on The Algorithm is good faith, or otherwise bad faith? Not mad, though — just concerned. RQS.gif 20:08, April 21, 2016 (UTC)

The Diary of Regina Roberts Seems To Be Gone
I tried to click the page for the creepypasta, but it seems to be gone. Sorry that I could not respond. I am glad that you wrote for a relative, I hope they like it. Hellhound iscariot666 (talk) 00:28, April 25, 2016 (UTC)

No Problem
No problem, I also plan on writing an old creepypasta of mine in the Writer's Workshop, but I am pretty much to lazy about posting it. It's about five to six pages long.

Hellhound iscariot666 (talk) 01:07, April 25, 2016 (UTC)

Hi there
Hi jay!!! How's everything? I was just writing this message to wish you a wonderful day! Bye for now! Luigifan100 04:28, April 25, 2016 (UTC)

"They Mostly Come At Night"
Hey Buddy, If you have the opportunity, would you be able to take a look at something I just dropped into the WW. Now it is a fan fiction, but I wrote it in such a manner that if you saw the movie you would immediately recognize it and if you hadnt, it would be a nice little Scifi horror. I didnt want a blatant ripoff of places and character. I want something clever and smart. Everything is left to the imagination for the reader to interpret. I hope it works. thanks for your time.KillaHawke1 (talk) 20:11, April 25, 2016 (UTC)

Yes
Everything is going great on my end, thank you for asking. If you ever want me to be a contest judge, feel free to ask anytime! Luigifan100 04:52, April 26, 2016 (UTC)

Request
Ayo Jay! I need you to do something for me. Can you please delete my creepypasta Eleventh Island and remove Killahawke'e PotM nomination of this story? I'm currently working on it now and this must be taken down before I could put it up to the site. I some issues with the story and it, IMO, ought to be fixed.

 Ruckus Q uantum   15:45, April 30, 2016 (UTC)

Re:
I'm not really sure Jay. One thing I'm certain of is it's gonna take quite a long time to fix (because I'm completely rewriting the whole thing, changing the characters and the plot but retaining the setting). I fear I can't get it up before the admins pick a new PotM. There's even a possibility I won't get it done this month.

Thanks. I'd just tell Killahawke to nominate another pasta. Mine was bad anyway, shouldn't receive pretty much any attention at its current state. You can delete it now. Thanks again.

 Ruckus Q uantum   17:38, April 30, 2016 (UTC)

RE:
Yeah, I just saw. Thanks :) 14:44, May 1, 2016 (UTC)

Picture
If you could, that would be awesome. I really struggle with inserting images correctly. Just finished The Brown Spot. I love those type of storie with the anomalous object that appears out of the blueKillaHawke1 (talk) 15:04, May 1, 2016 (UTC)

The picture is perfect! Thanks so muchKillaHawke1 (talk) 15:14, May 1, 2016 (UTC)

Apology
I just wanted to apologize for my previous comment to the author of the Uncle Grandpa article. I should have never made it personal. I was upset about the content of the article and the insinuations the author was making about the show and it's characters, but that was no reason to lash out the way I did. I have apologized to the author and to a person that was offended by my comment. Please, I hope you will accept my apology and know that if I have a complaint in the future I will stick to the issues and stay away from personal attacks. Thank you.

Nibor74 (talk) 04:11, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

Story.
I want to contest the deletion of the "Australian Swamp Story" on the grounds that it was copied directly from 4chan and that altering the grammatical errors and idiosyncracies would be to remove a layer of the story's meaning.

Jinmenken8 (talk) 14:31, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

The Preacher
I haven't had a chance to sit and think about "The Preacher" and the story yet. The are still separate things in my head, but I have to say that being a stranger to the band, they blew me away. Tonight I am going to read it again with the song playing as it was meant to be experienced....which by the way is a brilliant element to add to story writing and immersing a reader into the plot. KillaHawke1 (talk) 15:06, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

Fair enough. Making the capitalizations is no problem Jinmenken8 (talk) 16:03, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

A Possible Sequel/Prequel?
Hey Jay! You know that I absolutely have fallen in love with your stories, and when I got to read your latest, and I believe to be the goriest story — Verner the Vigilante — I can say that I've become as corrupted as you (at least for the moment: watching murder footages for research and playing Silent Hill 2 at night have their fair shares... you know, the blood and guts, and all those fog and static noises and gasp! nurses and Pyramid Head).

If you plan working on a prequel or a sequel to these stories, email me and I'll drop in my two cents of insanity. ;)

Here's my email: ruckusquantum@gmail.com. You, Killahawke and me can work together to form something shady and unimaginable... and that'll be darn awesome ( it might just be in par with Humby's works).

 Ruckus Q uantum   17:58, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

Impeccable Timing
Thanks for checking on me! Tio and I have been busy working on a collaboration pasta. I don't know how much I'm allowed to say about it so I'll leave it at that. I actually started typing up a new Creepypasta last night before I went to bed, so that's a thing. I do suspect a rewrite or two as it doesn't feel quite right, but I want to get the pathway of the story figured out first. I find the concept of it very unique and interesting anyway. I'm trying to make it "piss your pants scary" and then I think I'm going to take a temporary break from writing Creepypasta and write a couple of other subjects. I have also been writing a story about a female sellsword that isn't set on Earth, but is very similar to Earth (not a Creepypasta). I don't know if that interests you, but it's very Japanese inspired and what is done can be read here: http://pastebin.com/yY5YHP7L

How have you been? You have anything new in the works? Glad to have you back :) Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  17:14, May 5, 2016 (UTC)


 * That's good! Hopefully I can make it happen, lol. Take your time and don't force yourself, it isn't remotely finished. Oh yeah, I remember reading Ned the Nihilist XD I'll be sure to check them out, but I don't know how long it will take for me to get to it. I finally read Abandoned by Disney and its series for the first time yesterday and that's supposed to be a classic. Graphic stuff doesn't bother me. I've dealt with a couple of cadavers and have seen a few crime scene photos in person ;) Okay! I'll be sure to comment on some of your stories as I read them too! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  20:23, May 5, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Saw Your Messages
I certainly appreciate that. That's very thoughtful of you. When the time is right I'll let you all know what's happening. Thanks, and best wishes to you as well. Raidra (talk) 00:43, May 12, 2016 (UTC)

hello,

i mean not to be rude or seem rude at all.i am just wondering what could be done to get my story back onto the site.Skinless (talk) 14:28, May 12, 2016 (UTC)skinless
 * Here’s the update/explanation. Recently my mom has had to deal with a left big toe that refused to heal.  Yesterday she went to a wound specialist.  They had her stay at the hospital while they did some tests.  It turned out that the bone was infected, and last night they told us the options weren’t good.  This afternoon they removed the toe.  To quote a line from a Family Guy scene I came across while flipping through the channels, “Had better days, Lois. Had better days.”  Luckily the surgery went well, and we’re optimistic her recovery will go well too.  We’re thankful because things could be a lot worse.  I won't be doing any heavy work on the wiki for a while, but I can still converse with my friends.  Thank you again for your concern and well-wishes.
 * @Skinless- I appreciate you being cordial, and I mean that sincerely. Raidra (talk) 03:36, May 13, 2016 (UTC)

Anonymityec1.11 (talk) 22:03, June 4, 2016 (UTC)Anonymityec1.11

New Story in the Making
Hey Jay! I've got some news to share.

Recently I just finished writing my new story titled "Butterfly Effect", which is about JFK's assassination gone horribly wrong — with a comical twist, of course, at the end. It's currently being reviewed by a couple of friends to whom I asked for help earlier, and Lord Cthulhu bless their damned souls they did, my story needs tons of fixing. I'd like to thank Killahawke, Tiololo and Pokemon3687 for their critiques. (Or just give me your email if you want to get an advanced reading and I'll shoot you off a rough copy of my story). ;) It should be up in the site by this month...

That being said, after completing my newest alternate history tale — after a month of exhaustive writing, long sessions of researching and extensive fact-checking — the nightmares (and lengthy periods of writer's block) have finally ended. I'm so glad to have a week-long rest after thirty consecutive days of stress and weeping (which is I think a bit too much for someone as young as I am). God help mee damned soul.

But sadly, I think it's about time to repeat the creative proccess once again and beat myself up. Yeah, I'm being masochistic, no doubts, but that plays a major role in my improvement as a writer. No point in passing it up... So what am I going to write next?

Well, lo and behold, my next story is inspired by your bloody fantastic stories Ned the Nihilist and Verner the Vigilante. Surprise surprise. Your monologue creepypastas have inspired me so much in the past (and dirtied my mind, as well) so I decided to try them out and recreate the newly-found "Jay ten phenomenon" these stories hold. I titled the story "The Prosecution of John Hartsfield" so it would sound mysterious and serious, but in facts it's otherwise. Don't know if I'll succeed or not, but we'll find out next month or two.

I have laid down the storyline and the punchlines I want to throw. I've also begun writing the intro, which discusses the backstory of John. But so far, frankly, I haven't made any proper advancements yet. I think I need your great help too. Halp.

Interested?

 Ruckus Q uantum   19:43, May 12, 2016 (UTC)


 * That's awesome. Thanks for your support. I'll make sure you'll get to read the new story when it's done. But before that, the other new story first; I'll send you a rough copy of Butterfly Effect maybe later in time and ask for some constructive criticism... because why not? You're awesome Jay. Thanks a lot again for helping a random dude like me.


 *  Ruckus Q uantum   03:21, May 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re:Birthday
Thank you. Things haven't been the best for me. I'm not really involved in wikia that much at all anymore. I'll still try to drop by every so often. What's up with you? --Jojo risin&#39; (talk) 13:31, May 14, 2016 (UTC)

Thanks again
We're hoping she'll be out of the hospital in a couple days (She's staying there so the place can drain and they can make sure there's no infection left). I'll keep you posted. Just offering your support and well-wishes is a help to me. You have a good one too. :-D

Oh, there's one other thing. Remember in my Face Bank blog (http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Raidra/Awesome_and/or_Creepy_Coin_Bank) you joked that they wanted us to make the sidewalks heated? Sometime after that we had a cold spell and I thought, "I wish the sidewalks were heated too!" Raidra (talk) 00:16, May 15, 2016 (UTC)
 * Mom was released from the hospital today. She isn’t feeling the best right now due to the antibiotics, but she’s able to walk as long as she puts her weight on her heel, and my aunt and I are here to help.  She had a lot of good nurses (most of which were male, interestingly enough) and a lot of well-wishers during her hospital stay, so that’s good.  We appreciate everyone who’s given their support. Raidra (talk) 00:10, May 17, 2016 (UTC)
 * Your comment about good ideas reminded me of something my friend told me. I told him about a craft show in which they were making wallets or something out of duct tape, and he told me that a friend of his did that.  He added that he told his friend he should do something with the idea before someone else did it, and now it was too late.  He was disappointed for his friend's sake. Raidra (talk) 00:12, May 17, 2016 (UTC)
 * Mom's health has improved since she first got home. She felt uneasy yesterday, but she's felt better today, and she's getting around pretty well.  We're hoping she'll be able to attend my nephew's high school graduation on Saturday.  I've shared the comments people have made and she appreciates all the well wishes. :-) Raidra (talk) 01:47, May 19, 2016 (UTC)

Email
Check your inbox ASAP. I've sent you a copy of my story.

 Ruckus Q uantum   14:19, May 15, 2016 (UTC)


 * Done


 * <span style="font-size: 110%; color: #00FFFF; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;"> Ruckus <span style="font-size: 110%; color: #FF0000; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;">Q uantum   14:36, May 15, 2016 (UTC)

Many thanks about Life of the Party.
Many thanks for the very valid criticisms you have given on my attempted creepypasta: Life of the Party. I ignorantly thought my story was up to snuff but I really have to thank you for the glaringly obvious problems you have pointed out with it. I may have been proud of what I had written 2 days ago, but now I am genuinely embarrassed by it. That's not a bad thing, mind you. It only means now I'll try to be able to write much better in the future with much more narrative and logical cohesiveness.

So by all means, thank you very much. I really needed it. Vengur (talk) 02:14, May 16, 2016 (UTC)

Здравствуйте, Господин Jay Ten
Thanks for the thanks. I just especially regret saying that the story was good enough to post (when in fact it wasn't), and as a result I just kind of felt like a big dummy. I will make sure all future reviews of mine on the WW are truly of Tim Curry-quality.

Dr. Frank N. Furter ( talk ) 23:20, May 16, 2016 (UTC)

Why was my creepypasta deleted?

Story Time
I've been quite lazy and neglectful when it has come to your latest story (I blame it on my nature and the release of Stellaris, which came out last Monday, the game that I have managed to sink 84 hours into at current). I shall sit down and read it tomorrow. It's the kind of story that needs to be read in one sitting so that it all soaks in properly. I'm looking forward to it and will get back to you on it tomorrow! Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  05:33, May 18, 2016 (UTC)


 * More like my neck and back because I've been sitting at my desk to play it XD Well, I really liked Ned the Nihilist: A Misanthropic Monologue, so if a sequel exists than reading it is a must. I also need an excuse to pry myself away from Stellaris :3 If I only have a line's worth of feedback to give than I'll have to reread it because things didn't soak up in my brain while reading.


 * No foolin? I'm glad it is more in line with what you enjoy! I'm still trying to figure certain things out with it, heck, I just came up with a title for it the day before yesterday. I'm going to call it Ikarigatari which is Japanese for Tale of Ikari and is a reference to Katanagatari. I'm intending the story to be a love note to a bunch of different things, most notably Sunrider: Mask of Arcadius (though it isn't going to be terribly similar). Namely, there was a character in the game named Icari who is also a mercenary with a Mech called the Phoenix. I'm wanting to see about lining up some cash and having Aimee Smith, Icari's voice actress, narrate Ikarigatari and post it to YouTube. No idea how that would work out, but I'm trying to make my projects more fun and fresh for myself.


 * Speaking of Ikari, I have this funny little idea that I'm going to try to do where she never kills anyone with a sword, at least directly. I'm just going to have her kill people in really strange ways (like that one guy she drowned). I'm also doing my best to treat her sword, the Phoenix, as a living bird when I describe it. The story is going to revolve around her trying to get it back. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  18:49, May 18, 2016 (UTC)


 * Yeah, that is good. Hopefully I can keep that small bit of success going, that would get me far. You shouldn't feel like an ass when you are just speaking your mind (hypocritical advice if I've ever given some). Thank you for always giving me feedback and being honest with me instead of coddling me. What I've read of yours I've found to be good, but I think that maybe you are your own harshest critic and might not ever be satisfied with yourself. I could be completely wrong about that, but that's what I honestly think.


 * YouTube is such a mixed bag though. Their copyright system is complete garbage last I heard and the comment sections are usually cesspits rather than providing for thought provoking discussion. That said, it is appealing to me too. If I were to start a channel, it would just be exclusively things I've written or made mainly for the fact that I really despise my voice. The main problem that I can see would be keeping people hooked to the channel. At current, I believe I have seventeen stories that I'd be willing to share on there and that would only take so long to get through. If I struggled to put out new content then people would be come disinterested and start unsubbing. Still, I do like the possibility of sharing my stories with more people.


 * I like the way that you do rape. Wow, that's an odd sentence. You do it in a "this guy is a sick fuck and this is who he is" kind of way and not the ever tiresome "I want you to feel sorry for this character, so here's a rape. Feel sorry for this character!" kind of way. You take these disturbing themes and handle them in a way that they deserve to be handled. It is super respectable. Also, I just finished reading Verner the Vigilante: A Disturbingly Delicious Diatribe and left a message on the page.


 * I just pulled up its Wikipedia page and I see that it is a directorial debut and a $1 million budget film, I tend to appreciate those. I really like seeing what people do with small budgets. In fact, I believe that smaller budgets tend to make for better movies as opposed to the bigger budgeted ones. Deadpool for instance, they had a lot more they wanted to do with the film such as a massive gunfight, but the major budget cut led to them having Deadpool accidentally leave his guns on the taxi and thus led to one of the funniest moments and best fights in the film. I'll definitely check it out when I come across it :D Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  22:12, May 18, 2016 (UTC)


 * I forgot I posted this on here. I drew a picture of Ikari a while back and thought I'd share it with Raidra (and now you, yay). I didn't have a good way to take a picture of it, so I ended up using my laptop's webcam which is why the quality is kind of bad. Also, the pictures weren't taken as perfect halves. Anyway, I thought this might amuse you. Ikari_shot_1.jpg Ikari_shot_2.jpg  Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  15:57, May 20, 2016 (UTC)

I'm not very good at drawing things myself. I absolutely cannot draw something without a point of reference. I look and see where the lines are on something and then drawn them the best that I can and that's how I come up with drawings. So I'm pretty much copying, just in a freehand non-tracing way. I saw that a couple of hours after you posted it. I'm interested to see where you take things and I really appreciate how each story works as a stand-alone so that it is always finished should you not want to make another. You have a good one too! Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  20:22, May 20, 2016 (UTC)

Just a thought
People in Trollpasta Wiki are such ignorant bastards, aren't they? How could they just flip me off like "shiet, who the feck are ye? Ye don't look like ye belong here, so get yer ass out and off ye go!"

Just my thoughts, though; was paying a short visit on TPW chatroom, telling them I was just having a short look then leave soon, when one user sarcastically told me he "cared" much about me. Wow, just wow, I'm choking on my own vomit right now. That's remarkably... pathetic.

<span style="font-size: 110%; color: #00FFFF; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;"> Ruckus <span style="font-size: 110%; color: #FF0000; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;">Q uantum   14:45, May 20, 2016 (UTC)


 * That makes a lot of sense I think. It's Trollpasta Wiki, the largest, deepest cesspool of those hideous-looking creatures which live in a dark, stale place unbeknownst to civilized men (caves simply put; I'm just practicing my writing anyway), so maybe these things are bound to happen. I was a first-timer there to begin with, maybe those silly goblins just like to play silly games with the silly newcomers. I'll keep that in mind Jay, definitely.


 * Anyway, with the help of the oh great Photoshop, here's how the (possibly) Capture3.png wordmark looks like when put on a black background. I've altered it a bit anyway if you didn't notice, made the strokes twice thickers so it could be easily seen from dark or small screens. I n my opinion, this looks wonderful. Actually seems a bit more faithful and closer to Lovecraftian horror and horror fiction in general, if you were to ask me. How does it look to you? Needs an alteration or two? Give me your thoughts.


 * <span style="font-size: 110%; color: #00FFFF; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;"> Ruckus <span style="font-size: 110%; color: #FF0000; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;">Q uantum   15:24, May 20, 2016 (UTC)


 * And I'll add that it's almost the end of vacation here in my country, so it's likely I'd be inactive for a long time. I'll be coming to school these following weeks, and this year would surely be a very busy year for me (as I'm actually put in a position I could certainly not refuse: a literary writer on our campus newspaper and a potential participant/winner on an international journalism contest... yikes!). I'll try to keep up as much as I can, if not always. Wish me luck, I hope I don't get some bad blood boiling with my teachers and bad grades on my card, 'cause I'd be dead if do. Just saying, thought you might be interested.
 * <span style="font-size: 110%; color: #00FFFF; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;"> Ruckus <span style="font-size: 110%; color: #FF0000; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;">Q uantum   15:34, May 20, 2016 (UTC)


 * And oh, check my new (sort of) DeviantArt site . It's definitely worth a shot. I've posted some artworks there, book covers, posters and the stuff, and a few never-seen-before client works. I swear, it's interesting!
 * <span style="font-size: 110%; color: #00FFFF; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;"> Ruckus <span style="font-size: 110%; color: #FF0000; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;">Q uantum   17:55, May 20, 2016 (UTC)

Bulletin
Today Mom had a follow-up appointment. Thankfully the doctor said it’s healing well and she didn’t have to walk on her heel anymore. She has another appointment next week, and the doctor thinks he can take the sutures out then. It's going well, but I think I'll wait a little longer to share the "Ah, what's just one toe!" joke. ;-) Also, before you say anything, I plan to archive my talk page soon. Raidra (talk) 00:23, May 24, 2016 (UTC)

Ruckus reporting
I think I found some shady stuff here. Bother checking it out?

<span style="font-size: 110%; color: #00FFFF; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;"> Ruckus <span style="font-size: 110%; color: #FF0000; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;">Q uantum   18:28, May 24, 2016 (UTC)


 * Anytime. Just leave me a message if you've decided.


 * <span style="font-size: 110%; color: #00FFFF; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;"> Ruckus <span style="font-size: 110%; color: #FF0000; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;">Q uantum   04:34, May 25, 2016 (UTC)

Who wants to defile the new talk page?
Thanks. Don't worry, it's cool. I knew what you were doing, and I know it came from a good place, so I can appreciate the dark humor. Your timing and intent were both good. If you had made some comment like, "Ah, what's one toe?" right after I broke the news, that would have been another story. I would have been more aghast than that woman walking out of the audience in The Producers ("Well! Talk about bad taste!"). Dad had an interesting sense of humor at times, and I'm not always good with words. Seriously, is this message any good? I have no idea! You have a good one too. :-D Raidra (talk) 00:23, May 25, 2016 (UTC)
 * Well, that was fast! ~laughs~ Raidra (talk) 00:24, May 25, 2016 (UTC)
 * Here’s some more good news- Mom had her stitches removed today. Thankfully her recovery has gone well, and hopefully it will continue to. Raidra (talk) 00:08, June 1, 2016 (UTC)

Ikarigatari
How is your day going? Still feeling better? I'm doing alright myself. I put that 85 hours in Stellaris to shame by raising it to 107 XD I just did a two and a half to three hour writing session on Ikarigatari tonight, so my brain is pretty darn exhausted.

I thought I'd let you know that Ikarigatari has nearly doubled in size since you read it, unless you've been reading it behind my back :P I didn't know if you were wanting to read the whole thing as it was being worked on, when it was done, or at your leisure, so I decided to go ahead and inform you. My memory might be faulty, but I believe this was the line that was last finished when you read, so you might CTRL + F it if you don't want to read through all the same stuff again: [Ikari replied dodging the question and ignoring the extended hand.]

There is no rush. Just read it whenever you want to :) I hope you enjoy it and good luck on your move. You can read it here: http://pastebin.com/yY5YHP7L Good night and take it easy! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  06:25, May 30, 2016 (UTC)


 * Ah, sweet. I'll take that as a sign of interest then XD I'm more inspired than ever right now, because I just finished Sunrider: Liberation Day which is the sequel to what contained the character that served as the inspiration to write the story. I've also found a way to contact the voice actress that I'd like to read the story, so that also has me excited (if not a bit nervous). She is a rather interesting individual, so it would be cool to be able to talk to her and maybe become friends. Not in the showboating, "I'm friends with a voice actress, look at her" way, but in the genuine way.


 * The company is going to do a re-haul on some of the game's weaker points too. So it will be even more fun and addicting :D You have a good one too!  Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  19:46, May 30, 2016 (UTC)


 * I've started playing around with a video game programming software called Ren'Py and I've made a Visual Novel out of Ikarigatari. I have no means of making character models or backgrounds at the moment, but I am looking into buying a Wacom Tablet which will hook up to my PC and allow me to draw on there. I borrowed the background pictures that I put into the VN from Fate Stay Night (hey, you'd get sick of looking at a checkered screen with text). The coding is rather simple. Here's a screenshot of it: Game_2.png. If you look across the bottom right hand corner, you'll see a save menu among a few other options. I just wanted to show you because I thought it was neat and am somewhat proud of it :D Well, have I guess I'll have it finished in about 10 years, lol. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  19:39, May 31, 2016 (UTC)


 * Thank you for the support. Doing the same old thing gets kind of tiresome, you know? Alright, I'll keep you updated :) I've also got a thread going on my forums for it that I intend to update (it has some more information and pictures regarding it). Lol Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  04:50, June 2, 2016 (UTC)

Excuse me sir, but can you please explain to me why you deleted my post? I was sure to be careful following the standards of this page. I can't understand why you deleted my post. I tried my best. 1st a little background about me. as I have told the other guy I have frontal lobe damage which I got when I was an infant. I have a learning disability that has yet to be identified. but i will give you the short short version: I can't understand things most adults would my age would. so if you are gonna explain something to me than please explain it to me like you would a child. Christopher Avilez (talk) 19:20, May 30, 2016 (UTC)

==Sade-me=

Thanks for getting that. As for the quotes, yeah, I was torn between Marquis de Sade and Orwell for the quotes ("Being in a minority, even in a minority of one, did not make you mad. There was truth and there was untruth, and if you clung to the truth even against the whole world, you were not mad."). I decided that Sade was a bit more resonant to horror/writing.

Mother to child: "Oh, it seems we turned up an informative movie... "120 days of Sodom". I don't like where this is going." EmpyrealInvective (talk) 15:42, June 1, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Re:
Thanks! You too! Raidra (talk) 00:25, June 2, 2016 (UTC)

Hi Jay,

I'm new to the wiki and just wanted to apologize about submitting my unfinished project. I actually was hoping it would only save the project for me to finish later on, but I guess that's not the case. I did have every intention on completing it, I just didn't know how to safe a draft.

It won't happen again.

Sincerely,

-spookiestspaghetti

You're a literary guy. ..
. . . thought you might like to read my review of Louise Erdrich's newest novel LaRose

Glad to see the Camus avatar back you absurdist bastard! HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 18:38, June 3, 2016 (UTC)

Story Confirmation
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:541484

Hello Jay, it's MarioFan5050 and I just have a favor to ask you.

So the above thread leads to a WW draft I made, and I've been improving it little by little from the original with help from critics. I'm sorry for being impatient and taking up your time like this, but when you have time, could you please look at it and confirm whether it's up to Quality Standards or not? You don't have to do it if you're too busy or you don't want to - it would be appreciated if you do, however.

(And also, I didn't go to Empy because I already requested once but he seems rather busy, so I'm just pelting you with work this time. Just kidding, I'm once again sorry for this extra load of crap for you to do.)

Best regards,

User:MarioFan5050 (talk · edits) 01:31, June 4, 2016 (UTC)MarioFan5050

Thanks
Hi Jay,

I wanted to thank you for telling me about the categories. I had no idea and it was entirely my bad. As for the editing, I usually publish first and then go back and edit. I happened to be doing this as you deleted my post. Since I have now learned that admins on here respond quicker than I can edit, I will edit before publishing. Thank you for reminding me to look at editing the works again though and thanks for being kind about my accidental mishaps. If you wouldn't mind looking at the works again and seeing if everything is good I would appreciate it.

Thanks,

Anonymityec1.11 (talk) 22:03, June 4, 2016 (UTC)Anonymityec1.11

Reviews
Hey,

Thanks again for the tips. Like I said, I usually post then edit. I've gone back and made all of the changes you pointed out; although, I couldn't find the its/it's mistakes. If you could point them out or just edit them I would appreciate it. Anyways, besides those errors I think we should be all good.

Thanks again,

Anonymityec1.11 (talk) 22:58, June 4, 2016 (UTC)Anonymityec1.11

ABD Typo
Hey Jay, sorry to bother you but I believe I have found a typo in Abandoned By Disney. The line "It had fallen out of the mascot head and shattered into pieces at me feet" is incorrect because of the "me feet" part. I checked out the story on SlimeBeast's website and on there the typo is corrected. Once you finish up with your latest victim you may want to rectify it. Thanks

"Don't get hot and flustered,  use a bit of mustard!"  21:13, June 5, 2016 (UTC)


 * I'm unsure of how someone could get any sleep in your basement, but I guess enough gut-pussy fu- you know what, nevermind. Truthfully I have thought about one day perhaps applying to be a rollbacker, that neat button and the title rights could be quite useful to me. As far as I can tell I need 450 article edits, so it seems I have a few hundred article edits to go. When I eventually do reach that 450, however, I will give it some serious thought. Thanks a lot for mentioning all that and considering me.


 * "Don't get hot and flustered,  use a bit of mustard!"  22:03, June 5, 2016 (UTC)

Butterfly Effect Going Well
Hey Jay. I just want to tell you that writing Butterfly Effect is going really well. I took your advices and it really helped me a lot in developing this story. The first copy was short and feels a bit empty, but now I've decided to not kill off Oswald to quickly. I have also expanded the story a bit; I plan to include where Oswald kills Tippit and where Jack Ruby shoots Oswald dead. Research is pretty damn hard, especially trying to find the route the Presiden't limo took on the way to the hospital, but I know I'll get through this.

Wish me luck. I hope I get this published soon.

<span style="font-size: 110%; color: #00FFFF; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;"> Ruckus <span style="font-size: 110%; color: #FF0000; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;">Q uantum   14:53, June 6, 2016 (UTC)

P.S. I have a new story up.

Just Some Idea
I think I have something in mind Jay. What if Creepypasta Wiki hold some sort of an awards system where people can nominate and vote for a monthly NSFW creepypasta? (Something Not-Safe-For-Work Pasta of the Month... NSFWPotM.)

I think it might make a good fit, although I'm not sure about you and other people. Just a thought though.

<span style="font-size: 110%; color: #00FFFF; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;"> Ruckus <span style="font-size: 110%; color: #FF0000; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;">Q uantum   15:43, June 7, 2016 (UTC)

Hey buddy, So I really dug your technique on the insertion of music into a story. It stuck in my head until I found the song I needed and was finally got it out. This little diddy was the end result. Its called "Can You Feel It Coming?" which is currently in the WW. However, I would check out the narration...it's probably one the best I've ever done. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YIvqYPgPxp4 KillaHawke1 (talk) 03:13, June 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Trip
Glad to hear it. Enjoy your time with your bro and get settled into the new area. Remember all the Spanish swear words I didn't teach you and you'll be fine. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 23:26, June 9, 2016 (UTC)

Contest Draft
Alright, I've written my proposal with your offer to (possibly) spotlight the winner. If this doesn't work, let me know and I'll change it. I said that this would run until July 18th as well; does that seem agreeable?

Here's the link: http://pastebin.com/p4jnLXam

Let me know if there's anything that needs to be changed! Whitix (talk) 02:34, June 14, 2016 (UTC)

Hola! Muy bien!
Gracias, mi hermano! I'm doing well. It's funny you should ask because Mom had an appointment earlier today. I'm happy to report that they were impressed by her recovery. The site of amputation had healed well enough that they removed the bandage. She had been seeing the podiatrist every week, but he likes her improvement so much that her next appointment is in eight weeks. She’s going to visit someone to make her a special shoe insert. We’re blessed that her recovery has gone so well, and that there have been so many people asking about her well-being. :-D

Speaking of speaking Spanish, there was a Sesame Street segment years ago with a woman teaching her parrot to be bilingual (They weren't Muppets; it was a live-action segment with a real woman and her pet parrot). I'll have to look harder for it, but I did find this- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IrFxl91nrvE. Thankfully there wasn't a sauna tragedy in this number. I'll certainly be giving moral support; I'll just be facing the other way covering my eyes the whole time in case something goes horribly wrong. Go, Jay, go! Raidra (talk) 00:49, June 15, 2016 (UTC)

Story
excuse me but I sent you a message regarding my story that you took down and you didn't give me a response back. please I would like to know what I did wrong so that I can improve on future stories. if not than I will keep making the same mistake over and over again. so please tell me what I did wrong.Christopher Avilez (talk) 07:49, June 15, 2016 (UTC)Chris Avilez

New Story on WW
Aye, hearing out your thoughts about my new story over on Writer's Workshop would be fantastic.

<span style="font-size: 110%; color: #FFFFFF; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;"> Ruckus <span style="font-size: 110%; color: red; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;">Q uantum   10:44, June 16, 2016 (UTC)

Violence in Stories
This is not me trying to have a go at the violence in your stories. I am sorry to disappoint you.

However, considering that you seem to be fairly skilled at writing violent stories, I wouldn't mind getting your advice on something. How does one make a story violent without receiving comments like; 'the story relies on gore and violence too much' or, 'the violence is pointless and cheap'. I am fully aware that people will always be critical, but I am confused at which points and under what circumstances it is more acceptable to be graphic, and how to effectively pull off a graphic scene in a story without making it seem cheap and pointless.

I understand you are busy, but I am willing to wait as long as it takes for a reply, as it is for my new story I am hoping to upload soon.

Anarchic Operations (talk) 13:29, June 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re:
No probs Jay. Any time will work out just fine. I've been working my ass out on school these last few days, with all these towers of homework and seas of performance outputs I've got to do, so I can relate to the stress and discomforts you currently suffer from... not to mention my constant retrogade depression and hopelessness (they're brief, but boy how they affect me; barely having any sleep these days).

So hows Puerto Rico? Is it good? Have you kept distance from the bad stuff? I hope you're doing good, because I think you've got some spooky apparition coming your way. Good luck!

<span style="font-size: 110%; color: #FFFFFF; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;"> Ruckus <span style="font-size: 110%; color: red; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;">Q uantum   08:55, June 22, 2016 (UTC)

RE: Adminship
I haven't really thought about it. I'm not sure I would have the time to be of much more help than I am now, to be honest. If though there is/arises a need for a new admin, I can step up if you will have me. MrDupin (talk) 18:34, June 22, 2016 (UTC)

Split
Firstly, how is the move treating you? Also, I think you should enter the summer contest on here because more crazy and creepy stories is always good and it would up the competition considerably (I think I may drop out, because I'm so focused on Ikari). On another note: I didn't know if you were still keeping an eye on my story, but I thought that I'd tell you that I am splitting it up across different links so as to help prevent theft. I am pretty paranoid and there are a fair amount of unique views that I can't account for, sooo maybe it is well founded? Here's the link for part two, if you are interested: I've reached 7,000 words, yay! Lucky seven... thousand! It's the longest thing I've ever written by about eight hundred words so far :D Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  03:07, June 23, 2016 (UTC)


 * That's good to hear! I'm a bit jealous, because I want to move too *sad trombone sounds* Understandable! I haven't seen a lot of entrants to it, so I'm hoping it picks up soon. Maybe I'll sharpen a stick and go around poking people until the start entering and writing up something?


 * Thank you! There's no rush at all and I hope I haven't been coming across as needy. I'm just really happy to have someone, especially you since my stories tend not to do anything for you, like it :D Things are meh. My oldest friend (as in, have been friends with him longer than anyone else) is moving to California, so I won't likely ever see him again and to top it off, he's my Dungeons and Dragons group's Dungeon Master D: I'll live though. I got used to my friends moving around 5th grade. Thank all applicable persons for the internet and the friendship that brings! You have a good one too :) Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  19:31, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

The Train Derails in Boston
You're a sick fuck, you'd probably like this book. The Train Derails in BostonHumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 15:36, June 23, 2016 (UTC)

Warrior Poet
Well obviously I would never turn down a title like "warrior poet" - it's the coolest nickname I've ever had (for some reason 'Wally' just won't stop haunting me). And no juicy family gossip I'm afraid - it was all a simple misunderstanding involving time travel and the assassination of Princess Diana.

And thank you very much for your message. It's much appreciated.

ChristianWallis (talk) 14:21, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Advice
Thank you very much for the advice! Trying to get my feet wet with editing! I appreciate the feedback. I don't mind wasting my own time, but would hate to be create unnecessary work for others!--BlizzardLemon (talk) 15:21, June 29, 2016 (UTC)BlizzardLemon

Re: Check the front page
Thank you guys so much! I am super happy that I got Potm. This is a great wikia/community and I love contributing and reading others' works. I think you admins do an amazing job of keeping this place running. You have an incredible work ethic. This wikia has completely resurrected my interest in writing, and I'm so thankful I stumbled across it.

ChristianWallis (talk) 13:09, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Hi Jay Ten

Very new to the wiki as im sure your aware.

I had uploaded a very short story called Wall which had been deleted and i was curious as to why.

Im sorry if i had missed anything regarding the quality standards and if theres anything i can do to improve what i had wrtitten.

Thanks for your time.

Arcadia1255 (talk) 13:16, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Hi Jay Ten,

Thanks for your quic response with that. I can only apologise for the basic errors, I havent written anything proper before and I have been creating short stories in short timescales recently to get some creativity going. I understand the cynacism gained however, I cant hold it against you.

I've submitted to the workshop and will have a good proof read and go from there! Would it be best to raise a delete appeal or contact you direct? Thanks for your help again.

Arcadia1255 (talk) 13:47, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Much appreciated, I have made some edits and ran through the spell check. It looks good to me. Thanks for all your help with this.

Yup, I had changed these as I was trying to be careful with the format but iI also prefer the original. Changed. Thanks Jay.

Thank you very much for the repaste of my story.

DUMBLECUCK (talk) 01:01, July 3, 2016 (UTC)Dumble

Important update regarding Tiololo
Hi Jay, I know you're waiting for news about Lucas, so please check the blog for the latest update. Thanks.

Tiaxn (talk) 19:46, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

Shady thread
This thread doesn't seem quite right to me. Bother checking it out, Jay?

<span style="font-size: 110%; color: #FFFFFF; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;"> Ruckus <span style="font-size: 110%; color: red; font-family: 'Courier New', san-serif;">Q uantum   13:50, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Review?
Hello there. I've just posted the first draft of my new story, Venomous onto the Writers Workshop! I'd be very grateful if you could give me a review, as I wish to submit it to Whitix's contest (if I can get it published onto the Wiki that is...)

Anarchic Operations (talk) 14:38, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

We come in peace! (wink wink)
Hey thanks. You're the one who floated me the idea, so you're really the top one to blame when I accidentally rollback an entire userpage thank here. The only thing is that my username isn't yet green; Empyreal didn't know why (the coding looks fine) so we're trying to get that figured out.

Anyways have fun down there, see you around.

" Don't get hot and flustered ,  use a bit of mustard !"  17:01, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Checking mate
There isn't a lot to report, but I appreciate you asking. I'm happy to report that all is well. :-) She hasn't had the mold for the shoe insert yet, but she's walking well and feeling well. She has a walker if she feels she needs it, but most of the time the cane is sufficient.  Interestingly enough, she had an outpatient procedure on one of her sinuses today (the removal of something called a complex mucus seal).  Thankfully that went well too.  She's doing well, but we're all tired (We left home about 7:45 AM because the procedure was scheduled for 8:45 AM).

Did I hear that your move was successful? How are things? Well, I picked up that they're a bit chaotic, but I hope the infamous Seinfeld episode wasn't accurate. No, not this episode, this episode. Raidra (talk) 00:48, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Ouch!
That reminds me of one of the humorous horror stories Alvin Schwartz had in the last chapter of Scary Stories to Tell in the Dark. It was called "Bloody Fingers" and was about a bloody-fingered ghost that haunted a room at a hotel. Any time a guest would try to stay a night in that room, the ghost would appear and wail, "Bloody fingers!...Bloody fingers!" causing the guest to flee in terror. One night a guitarist checked in and the ghost appeared as he was practicing his guitar. The man continued to practice while the ghost wailed, "Bloody fingers!" Finally the guitar player stopped and said, "Cool it, man! Get yourself a Band-Aid!"

Thank you. Here's wishing you and yours well too. :-) Raidra (talk) 00:16, July 10, 2016 (UTC)
 * Oh, cripes, did the photo get deleted for graphic content, or did I just imagine a photo? Aaahh- oh, here, I have something for you. I love this story and I'm sure you will too- http://www.insideedition.com/investigative/2049-inside-edition-investigates-psychic-detectives-who-claim-to-find-missing-persons.  I love seeing frauds get busted. :-D Raidra (talk) 00:16, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

Stunning new video evidence of psychic hoaxes!
I was trying to find the video that I knew briefly discussed the segment (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VfRKbvNOgEc), and guess what I found- the actual segment! Enjoy this lowlife getting busted in living color: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IErIDQJc9JE. The funniest part, I think, is when the psychic asks, "Wait a minute, you didn't disappear?" followed by Guerrero stating, "I'm right here." X-D

I'm thinking of archiving my talk page tonight, so prepare to wipe your bloody fingers on my fresh clean page. ;-) Raidra (talk) 17:55, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

Ew, there's moldy applesauce in here!
I'm not great at formatting picture either, but isn't the defilement of the page the important part?

You're certainly welcome. Lisa Guerrero looked at her like, "Seriously?! What is your problem!?" At the end that fraud sounded like an irate version of Jamie Foxx's Doc Rivers impression. Raidra (talk) 01:14, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

My Story
Hello,

My story was recently deleted, and I've already tried asking EmpyrealInvective, however, he hasn't responded to me in 20 minutes since I asked, so I assume he is offline. Would you be able to tell me what I did wrong? CappkaTalk 17:42, July 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * Answered them. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 18:01, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

One more thing to say
No, I did not say that I want to put it back, because I told that it was rushed.

Besides, I wrote the remaked and entirely original version of Number 17 at the workshop.

P.S And what about copyright violations? Did I do that?