Talk:Jeff the Killer/@comment-25558572-20140521190712/@comment-24987614-20140526172841

this however is a good story. you are correct. they do need a little more advanced vocabulary but it was entertaining to read. if you really want something that could be considered scary because it had great storyline, good grammar,and good development, i would say check out Sonic.exe and Pokemon:Strangled red (when i saw that one the word "Asphyxiated" confused me for a bit.)