Talk:Dear Mrs. Chalmers/@comment-32764586-20180616171242

This is actually a really good story. It had a bit of a cliche start to it. A guy who murders hookers on Halloween because he knows he won't stand out? Yea, it's been done many times. However, the thought of a little boy seeking this guy out to become like him? Not nearly as popular of an idea. I didn't really feel too scared by this story to be honest. Maybe it's the length and lack of fleshed out people. A story doesn't need to be that way, but it could help in scare factor. Still, I found it well written, and a killer writing a letter as the narrator of this story is a very underused and undervalued approach. I did really enjoy this!