Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27064985-20181021134649/@comment-36393004-20181021140359

AND THEN A SKELETON POOPED OUT!

But seriously, rushed plot that had a cliche ending. That doesn't even mention all the grammar and spelling errors. The basic idea could become something good but this just doesn't do it. I would suggest reading from a few established authors here to see what I mean and always proofread, proofread, proofread. I am just glad you put it in the workshop first.