Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32734223-20170731141801/@comment-32734223-20170813113739

Thanks a bunch, this is exactly the kind of feedback I really needed! I'm working on making the suggested improvements now.

When I've done so, shall I post another draft in the Writer's Workshop (I'm conscious of spammin' the place up), or upload without further approval (I'm also conscious it might still not be ready, haha)?

Thanks again for your time and kind criticism! <3