Talk:Hitchhiker's Object/@comment-25052433-20140819055521

If you see me hitchhiking, I won't be holding a sign either, at least, not in the traditional sense. I will be holding a piece of paper though, and if you get close enough to read it, you'll something really terrifying.....a review!

What went right:

-As far as a ritual themed pasta goes, you did this really well. Personally I found it better than the majority of the 'Holder' pastas that are all over this site.

-I found it very original that you put the reader in the antagonist position. At first I was thinking this was going to be the traditional 'evil hitchhiker' story, but this was new and done well.

What would cause me to keep on driving:

-This sort of falls into the 'for what it is' type of pastas. In that, I mean that it really doesn't have much in the way of plot or setting. It just sort of is what it is. While this is great for a quick fright, it doesn't really lead into much else. The advantage of writing these type of stories is that you can get away with explaining very little, because the content of the pasta also serves as the plot and purpose. Once again, this is great for a quick scare or a fast read, but it lacks the legs to really call itself a traditional story.

With all that said, for what it is, this is a fine little tale. 7/10