Talk:The Teacher/@comment-4715955-20170228011020

"No one could understand why Mr. Lane would do anything like that."

Neither do I.

The story isn't scary, and it's not immersive. Using a journalistic style of narrative isn't a bad thing, but you have to be able to use it well. And the story needs to make sense, too: it's impossible to believe that an empathetic man of moral fiber like Mr. Lane would NOT turn Serial Killer Kid in, knowing full well that by not doing so more people would die. It's utterly ridiculous, and it makes the story as a whole ridiculous.