Talk:Ghost Dancer/@comment-25975226-20150303113024

I'm writing this as I read.

"The man jumped down into the creek and cast his second Tomahawk into Hiamovi’s side, where is stuck." - Where it stuck.

" Soon the man would be upon him, and he would he discovered." - He would be discovered.

Wow. Just wow. You are such a great story teller, and I found that I couldn't stop reading (much like your other stories!). This flowed beautifully, and even though it was specifically creepy so to say, I thoroughly enjoyed it and couldn't stop! Well done, sir. Please inform me when you have written a novel :)

