Talk:He Says He Loves Me/@comment-25975226-20150305103843

I really liked this. Only two grammar things.

1. "how beautiful I was; Even when my illness" - Even should be even. It doesn't need a capital.

2. " As I was devouring this man, who had taken such good care of me the last couple of months. He let out a sigh, resting his hand on what was left of my hair." - Not strictly a grammatical error, it's just a fragment sentence. As I was....and then it ends without finishing. You can edit this if you want to.

Other than that, I love zombies, so of course I loved this! (Although not to the extent of keeping one to turn me!) Very well written :)