Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20190829215235/@comment-4893169-20190901002455

''DrBobSmith wrote: I think it's more a matter of what won't work, and that's having a household moggie swallow her whole. My style would be to have it go to the very end when she lost consciousness, screaming in frenzied agony. That doesn't have to be your style. You can choose what works for you. That moment of realization that this will turn into the end soon because she can't defeat that many housecats and is already suffering injuries might well work.''

I'll see if I could do a horrific ending that hopefully won't turn into an accidental comedy.