Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27280438-20160114125758/@comment-26981815-20160116135636

Mikemacdee wrote: Your thread title is a huge clue.

"i tried posting this but they said it don't meet standers" => "I tried posting this, but they said it doesn't meet the standards."

Same with your comments, even. They alone show you're careless in your writing, nevermind the story itself. You're probably too young you be attempting long works of fiction just yet.

Like they said, don't try to repost it, or it'll get deleted again, and you'll probably get in trouble. Read more books at your school's library. Find the sorts of books you like and read more of them. Read some books you don't really care for. Copy passages from those books to get a feel for how they write. Write more stuff, maybe share the pieces you feel confident about in the writer's workshop. Most importantly, don't read creepypasta or fanfiction. Drop it like a bad habit and focus on proper written works. Creepypasta and fanfiction are both also written by people who don't know what they're doing, which makes them terrible examples and terrible reading material. Wait, you are suggesting they make a good pasta by not reading pastas?

... Isn't that the opposite of what they should do...?