Talk:My Wife Does Something Strange When We Sleep/@comment-32144034-20171102145223

The story has an interesting concept, yet it gets a bit confusing as I read further (especially at the ending.) There are a bit of grammar errors, including the use of too many run-on sentences. Might I also suggest using "chapters" to divide the paragraphs to make it more organized? Other than my complains, the rest of the story is good. Keep up the good work!