User talk:Tyberzannisultra

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LOLSKELETONS (talk) 04:51, October 12, 2013 (UTC)

Little Talk story
Tyber-

Read the story you posted up on my talk page, I like! I'll be reading it a few more times over, maybe making edits to some parts if they need it but don't worry, I won't tell anybody about the end :)

Overall really good! Definitely think you should post it up

Disco Circus (talk) 05:37, September 24, 2014 (UTC)

Thank you very much for taking the time to read it! I'm looking foward to seeing your rendition of it, although I hope you will keep the dialogue the same, because those parts are based off the original song ;)

Tyberzannisultra (talk) 06:09, September 24, 2014 (UTC)Tyberzannisultra

Hahaha I'll try to keep as faithful as I can, nothing too big

Disco Circus (talk) 05:24, September 25, 2014 (UTC)

Good, I'm excited to see you edit!

Tyberzannisultra (talk) 20:36, September 25, 2014 (UTC)

Started keeping track of the edits and writing them down piece by piece. Got a post on my user blog with the ones I've made so far if you wanna see that

Disco Circus (talk) 07:24, September 26, 2014 (UTC)

Looking good so far! Thanks for the help! I'll check back again later, no rush :)

Tyberzannisultra (talk) 07:47, September 26, 2014 (UTC)

New Story
I just received your new message about your troll pasta story about centipedes so I'm going to check it out.--User: Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 17:47, September 29, 2014 (UTC)

I have a new story in progress that's called Far Liath Weather, although I might change the title as soon as I finish the work. If you have the time, you can review this and let me know what needs more work. I really appreciate it.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:376718--User: Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 19:06, September 30, 2014 (UTC)

I just submitted a entry into Chilling Tales for Dark Nights 's October 2014 Flash Fiction Horror Writing Contest

It's called "Historic Points of Interest--Ferrisville"

If you're interested, you can vote on it

http://www.chillingtalesfordarknights.com/2014/11/03/updated-voting-method-vote-now-october-2014-flash-fiction-horror-writing-contest-gallery-and-voting/

I'm also working on an updated version of this story>

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:393035

--User: Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 18:11, November 3, 2014 (UTC)

A New Question
I have a rather important question on this particular blog that needs an urgent answer. It's not really a Matter of Life or Death question. >

A Creepypasta Question About Elves And What To Name Them User: Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 02:13, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Review Request
Hey I was wondering if you could review my story in the writers workshop forum, it's called "The Art of Death". I would appreciate if, in your spare time, you could read over it though please keep in mind that it's only about half done.

Listing to and fro
Well, we all knew that the thread would be closed eventually, but it was sure fun while it lasted. I thank you for your compliment (and yes, I do know how cranky Nooth can get). Here are the countdown moments I said I'd find for you.

AFI’s 100 Years… 100 Songs (American Film Institute, 2004)
 * 46. “Don’t Rain on My Parade” from Funny Girl
 * 16. “Evergreen” from the 1970s version of A Star Is Born
 * 13. “People” from Funny Girl (In the special Barbara said at first she thought, “Shouldn’t the happiest people in the world be the ones who don’t need people?” but then she realized what the message of the song was and agreed)
 * 8. “The Way We Were” from The Way We Were (This is a sad song, but it was used in a funny scene in The Naked Gun 2 ½: The Smell of Fear)

AFI’s 100 Years… 100 Movie Quotes (American Film Institute, 2005)
 * 81. “Hello, gorgeous” from Funny Girl (James Brolin said that she did say this to him once, but it didn’t sound right)

200 Greatest Pop Culture Icons
 * 66. Barbara Streisand (Some entries on the list were disappointing, but I agree that Barbara should be included)

100 Greatest Women of Rock & Roll (Vh1, 1999)
 * 31. Barbara Streisand (Recently Vh1 had a new “Greatest Women” countdown, but it turned out that it was just women from the past twenty-five years or so. From the little I saw it was disappointing)

100 Greatest Love Songs (Vh1, I think it was either 2003 or 2004)
 * 22. “You Don’t Bring Me Flowers” by Neil Diamond and Barbara Streisand (According to the segment, they originally recorded two solo versions. A DJ somewhere started playing the solo versions together, and the manufactured duet proved so popular that the record company realized they needed to have them record a real duet)

100 Most Unexpected TV Moments (TV Guide and TV Land, sometime in the 2000s)
 * 20. Barbra Streisand crashes “Coffee Talk” on Saturday Night Live

100 Moments That Rocked TV (Vh1 and TV Guide, 2003)
 * 84. My Name is Barbra, the special that introduced a lot of TV viewers to the singer. (Wait, have we been spelling it wrong this whole time!? I don't know what's what anymore!)

25 Greatest Rock Star Cameos (Vh1, sometime in the 2000s)
 * 1. Barbra Streisand crashes “Coffee Talk” on Saturday Night Live

100 Greatest Artists of Rock & Roll (Vh1, 1998)
 * 34. Buddy Holly (Just a few years ago Vh1 came out with a 100 Greatest Artists list. I haven’t seen the whole thing, but since there are a lot of contemporary artists I fear that the list won’t focus as much on pioneers. I’ll have to see if I can find a copy of the new list)

100 Greatest Rock & Roll Moments on TV (Vh1, pre-2003)
 * 70. In his last television appearance, Buddy Holly performs “Peggy Sue” on American Bandstand (They didn’t have the actual footage, so they showed different footage and talked about Buddy Holly and The Crickets appearing on the show. I forget if it were that same episode, but Dick Clark said that on one episode Buddy confided that he hated to fly. If this were on that episode, then how creepy is that?)

100 Greatest Videos (Vh1, 2001)
 * 27. “Buddy Holly” by Weezer (I know it’s the song title and not the artist, but I’m including it anyway)

Also, "Superstition" was on a couple lists circa 2000-2001. It was number seventeen on the 100 Greatest Pop Songs list (MTV and Rolling Stone) and number twenty-two on the 100 Greatest Rock Songs list (Vh1). That was back when both channels still cared. ~signs and reminisces~ Raidra (talk) 04:27, November 8, 2014 (UTC)

Ahh, you have come through for me! With this information, we shall rule the world!

When she says "Hello gorgeous" it comes out "Hellow gworgeous"

And yes, it is Barbra. We've been doing it wrong.

That is creepy!

Superstition on a Pop list? That can't be right...

So tell me, dear Raidra, did you have all this committee to memory? Did you have to look any of this up or did you already have it on file? I appreciate the time you've taken to compile this for me and present it oh, so neatly. These days it seems as though everyone takes amusement in utterly annihilating my talk page.

I used to watch Vh1 when I was just a wee thing. Thanks for bringing back some memories : )

☢Tyberius Zann☢ Tyberzannisultra (talk) 08:31, November 8, 2014 (UTC)

You're certainly welcome! I'm happy to do it for someone who appreciates it! I looked them up in print-outs and books I had, but interestingly enough, I did have several of these lists completely or partially memorized at one time. Ah, the days when Vh1 was good. Memmmoriesss... light the corners of my minddd...

I think the scanner washed it out a little, but here's a drawing of Van and Genie. As you can see, Van was feeling a little cranky in this drawing. Genie's alias is "Chemist" and Van's is "Subject" (on account of him being subject to health problems due to his drug addiction and now being a test subject for an experimental medicine), but Genie and The White Tigress (the heroine who interacts with Genie and Van) refuse to call him that because they have respect for people. If you want to be Van's friend, you don't call him Subject. I also posted three other characters, Sackcloth (the fair maiden with the sleeping gas gun and the ash gun) and her two assistants, Outfitter and Outsider. Raidra (talk) 14:53, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for bringing this all up for me to see. I remember falling asleep in front of the TV to Vh1's countdowns. Those really were the days. I found a few of my favorite songs on that channel!

I like these drawings! The scanner seems to be working fine; as they appear to be of high quality. You have a nifty style, it reminds me of Egyptian hieroglyphics, (everything is profile, the eyes are quite large and the feet are long, characters are depicted as almost canine in nature). Very nice, very unique. I believe I have another artist to compete with now ;)

I think Outsider is my favorite.

Tyberzannisultra (talk) 00:21, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

~laughs~ I don't know about competition, but I'm glad you liked them! I appreciate the compliments about my style.

I actually have a scene in mind for when I do the issue introducing Outsider. Sackcloth, the vigilante Outsider assists, is really a wealthy woman. I plan to have a scene in which Outfitter and Outsider are outside a fancy club or restaurant that they were barred from earlier. The snooty guy at the door still won't let them in, but then he discovers who they're friends with and he falls over himself welcoming them in. Who doesn't love A) an underdog finally getting recognition and B) a snooty guy having to humble himself (other than the snooty guy)?

I'm writing a guide for my heroes and villains. Here are the entries for Outsider, Outfitter, and Sackcloth (In case you're wondering why I didn't post entries for Genie and Van, it's because I haven't finished them yet).

Outfitter and Outsider

Secret identities- Outfitter: Carter Reeves. Outsider: Jared Martin

Birthplaces- Outfitter: California. Outsider: Pennsylvania

Occupations- Outfitter: army surplus store clerk. Outsider: clothing store clerk

List of powers, abilities, and weapons- combat skill, marksmanship, ninja stars

Status- minor allies, members of Shophetim

First appearances- Shophetim#16

Personalities- Outfitter and Outsider have caring, helpful, and brave personalities. They both felt a connection to Ramona Rue, going on to become her close friends and assistants in her Sackcloth activities. Outfitter is more serious, but he isn’t stern. Outsider is more mellow and casual, but he has definite senses of duty and honor.

Appearance- Outfitter and Outsider are male Caucasian humans. Outfitter has light brown hair with three tufts and Outsider has blond hair with three tufts. Outfitter often wears a turquoise shirt, gray pants, black boots, and a reddish-brown belt with a gold buckle. Outsider often wears a light gray shirt with a white skull in an orange flame, light brown pants, short white boots, dark red fingerless gloves, a black leather belt with silver studs, and a silver cross necklace. They both wear gray backpacks while crime-fighting.

Entry- When Ramona Rue, on her way to becoming the vigilante Sackcloth, entered the army surplus/camping supplies store in which Carter Reeves worked, he felt a connection to her. After selling her gloves, boots, and a protective mask, he suggested that she go to the store where his friend Jared worked. Jared felt the same connection to her and sold her the rest of the supplies she needed. The two friends saw Sackcloth in action and realized that she was the same woman. Later on, they helped Sackcloth and The White Tigress stop the crook who had attacked Sackcloth. Moved by how caring the young men were, Sackcloth invited them to fight crime by her side. They gladly accepted, Carter taking the codename “Outfitter” and Jared going by “Outsider”. They now assist Sackcloth in her battle against injustice.

Description of powers, abilities, and weapons- Both Outfitter and Outsider are good fighters and can hit a target with accuracy. They are armed with ninja stars which can be used to injure or distract an opponent.

Weaknesses- Outfitter and Outsider are susceptible to the same weaknesses as an ordinary person (extreme temperatures, poison gas, etc.).

Trivia- Outsider’s name comes from the genre outsider music, which is unconventional music performed by social outsiders or by musicians who live and work in seclusion. Outfitter’s workplace was inspired by a (now-closed) Dayton store called G.S. Outfitters. When trying to name the character I found the word, thought of the store, and realized the name was right there all along.

Sackcloth

Secret identity- Ramona Rue

Birthplace- Pennsylvania

Occupation- heiress/designer

List of powers, abilities, and weapons- gas gun, ash gun, combat skill, stealth, intelligence

Status- vigilante, member of Shophetim

First appearance- Shophetim#16 (Ramona first appeared in WT#77)

Personality- Sackcloth is bright, confident, dignified, and strong-willed. When inspiration hits her she’ll start drawing designs anywhere, even at a business luncheon or dinner with friends, but she is far from self-absorbed and continues to engage in conversation. She is proud, but is also unpretentious and doesn’t hesitate to lower herself to help others. At one point she started to succumb to temptation and entered into an unscrupulous business deal. However, her better nature came out when she found out what kind of person she was dealing with and tried to end her dealings with him. When tortured by the criminal, she refused to give into him and only became more determined to stop him. She became a vigilante to stop him and continued because she wanted to help others. She doesn’t care about whether people know her secret identity or not. She is very good friends with Tad Thomas and Tabitha Thomas, better known as The White Tigress, and is very close to her sidekicks, Outfitter and Outsider, who helped her in her time of need.

Appearance- Sackcloth is a female Caucasian human with long, thick, red hair. Her costume consists of a black shirt, skirt, boots, and protective mask, a brown sackcloth poncho, a silver belt, and white gloves. She also coats her neck with ashes.

Entry- Ramona Rue is a wealthy and intelligent designer (clothing accessories, furniture, toys, etc.) who lives in a city not far from Karasburg. She got involved with a businessman who turned out to be a sadistic criminal. When she tried to end her dealings with him, he had his men torture her. When she refused to give into him, he drugged her, told her to stop him if she could, and abandoned her in a ditch. Determined to stop him (and not knowing her friend Tabitha Thomas was really The White Tigress), she decided to form her own crime-fighting identity. Getting materials from the men later dubbed “Outfitter” and “Outsider”, she made herself weapons and a costume. The White Tigress, investigating Ramona’s disappearance, found her and, along with Outfitter and Outsider, stopped the evil businessman. Wanting to help others who were suffering at the hands of criminals, she decided to continue being a vigilante. She now fights for justice with the help of Outfitter and Outsider.

Description of powers, abilities, and weapons- Sackcloth is very smart with a good degree of stealth. She is a good fighter and is armed with two special guns. One shoots ashes (to distract an opponent) and the other shoots knock-out gas (to knock-out an opponent).

Weaknesses- Sackcloth is susceptible to the same weaknesses as an ordinary person (extreme temperatures, poison gas, etc.). Her mask protects her against poison gas, so she can only be gassed if she’s not wearing her mask.

Trivia- Sackcloth was inspired by multiple sources. The mask came from, of all things, an episode of the cartoon Camp Lazlo. The idea of a penitent heroine came from Biblical passages about people repenting in sackcloth and ashes. I also decided it would be a riveting story to have a mysterious, penitent character who turned out to be a familiar figure. Those factors combined to form Sackcloth. Sackcloth’s gas gun makes sense because of her mask, but it’s also reminiscent of various Golden Age vigilantes, such as the original version of Sandman from DC Comics. Also, there really are guns that can fire a spray of mace. In keeping with the penitence theme, her last name is a word meaning “regret”, “sorrow”, or “remorse”. Raidra (talk) 14:36, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Costume Contest
The page is up and ready to be viewed! Thanks for contributing and making the contest successful. Have a good one.

EmpyrealInvective (talk) 23:55, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks, bud. Third place? Not bad, eh?

Tyberzannisultra (talk) 23:57, November 9, 2014 (UTC)