Talk:The Gym Teacher/@comment-26326346-20150728072206

The Gym Teacher is a piece of work that I meant to read a long time ago, but always found myself too short on time to do so in a single sitting, until tonight.

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I truly did not see the ending coming (or any of the events). I thought that we were just going to have a really sick man killing things, but nope, you took it a step further by making him a Werewolf. I just have to state that I feel that this story is nothing short of a masterpiece. You made a world that felt very real because of all the details you gave, especially the little details which went a long way. The character progression was also so amazing that it made the characters feel alive.

The only criticism that I have (and it is an extremely light one) is that "the security store" didn't have a name. I loved the realism, I loved the main character being obsessed, I loved the obsession leading to his destruction, I loved the detail and I really loved the pasta!

I'm looking forward to more of your work, Humboldt.

P.S. I loled at the line about Humboldt County XD