Talk:Crush/@comment-35711173-20180719084317

Jdeschene,

It feels to me like the last few paragraphs of this story were rushed. All of a sudden we transition from a domestic scene to Mom going nuts and tossing the boy out to a horror scene. There isn't any explanation or build up. Not even after we're told something is very wrong with this "crush" do we get to learn anything. Does Myra survive? Has this thing been tracking Judi for decades?