Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26007602-20150201230613/@comment-26007602-20150203203340

MrDupin wrote: I don't think I will be able to add anything substantial to what Unersame said. Maybe I will read it sometime when my schedule opens up a bit. I hope that's fine with you.

Take your time. I'm in no rush. I'm working with Unersame's suggestions, but curious to see how obvious the symbolism is and how clear the rest of the story is.