Talk:NoEnd House 3/@comment-36223176-20180717093008

There are two main things about this story I want to talk about: Actual criticism and about the comments.

For criticism, only NoEnd House 1 could've existed on it's own, as many could just speculate that the 10 etched into the door really mean't David was never going to escape. NoEnd House  was creepy, mysterious, and generally well-written with an ending that didn't exactly entail sequels. Then comes NoEnd House 2, where instead of either A., leaving David's tale with him being seemingly trapped forever, or B. just giving closure and letting David escape, we get a POV change to his girlfriend that bascially goes through the same things with minor changes, and then unlike NoEnd House, it has a twist that kind've fixed the fact no one could explain how Peter told David, but just is bait for this one. Unlike the first this one had more errors in logic, storytelling, and wasn't as well written. Then finally comes this, the story we can say will never be finished as I believe Channel Zero is where this series will end. This is a two-parter that shouldn't be a two-parter because both the stories are so short. This a story that ruins some of things that was great about the original. As David stumbles around outside the house, he goes into a service trapdoor and meets the reason this story failed compared to the original, and even the second. It attempts to explain the house, and destroys the fabric of this story with the most cliche reasons that you could write. David's friend was actually a witch this whole timeand is the reason the house exists, and his sister is going to go on an adventure with David to save everyone and the house. Remember how I mentioned how NoEnd House was mysterious? That's gone, as well as the creepy factor that we gain from the mystery, because we know exactly why htis house exists why. That's the main issue with this story and why so many people were disappointed.

Now let's talk about the comments, where people did what fans of things like Jeff the Killer, Laughing Jack, and even some fans of Sonic.exe did, they complained about the criticism. The story deserved the criticism, if we can't give the story criticism it won't get better. Shut up, don't complain because people don't like what you do. I liked the original, and even if this was his intent, the criticism is completely justified in it's existance.