Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28420405-20160705203714/@comment-28420405-20160706140650

ChristianWallis wrote: Sorry it's just in the context of "as she voicelessly gaped at the air" it was the use of 'air' that made me think of gasp.

no worries! I changed it a bit, hopefully it makes more sense now.

ahh damn, I guess I gotta get my creative juices flowing for the title. I kinda like it now, but I don't think it's going to catch enough attention. I like puns too, obviously >_<