Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27027028-20160119193623/@comment-27027028-20160120050126

flaws flaws flaws. yes so many flaws. i know. i'm working on it. really i only posted to see if what people thought i could do as i ws sitting at my computer staring blankly and hating myself for this crap load. as you pointed out it has at least a spark of hope which is nice. so i'll work it out and use things better. and i know over the top ending. sorry. i just wanted to end it somehow and in my fit of anger at myself i went over the top. I'll work with it. thanks. i got nothing to do tomorrow....yeah I'll work on it tomorrow....