Talk:The Colosseum/@comment-26298997-20170509030619

Weird. I like weird. I feel like the mythology detracts from the creepiness. It would have probably been more effective to focuse on a singular character or multiple characters who made different choices that way you could have show a person leave early on, one stay and be ripped to pieces and one complete the task but later die due to something like Russian roulette. The russian roulette twist doesn't work because of its improbability once we bring the story back into the real world. If you made it about a particular character you could at least show why they ended up playing Russian roulette which would make the twist effective. All in all the pasta has more good aspects than bad. 6/10.