Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30589357-20170216023921/@comment-24101790-20170216024256

It's because you're using visual editor instead of source mode. These coding errors are present: "“You know I never wanted to move.” "

Additionally there's not enough content here to give an adequate review (besides pointing out the punctuation, wording, and capitalization errors) for the story.

"And I promised your dad  take(to missing before take?) you somewhere far if he got caught."

"penelope (Penelope)said(./,) “and you know what would have happened if we stayed in cali (Cali), right.(?)""

"“You know it was for the best of us, dear.” penelope said"