Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20190119214558/@comment-9041013-20190121152041

Well the English made it very hard to read. So work on that first.

As for the story itself, do you know why they keep on retckoning Michael Myers? Cause him being "pure evil" is a concept the screenwriters can play with. Other than that Slasher villains usually have some messed up backstory to them which makes them the bad guy. You need that.

The whole story reads like its not a real story, who can scream in class without getting kicked out? nobody. Make the story imitate real life. Make it seem like something that could happen