Talk:Angler - Horrors of the Battlefield/@comment-35711173-20190523021449

The first thing that hit me, oddly enough, was your use of yards. The US military is almost entirely metric. The sights on a standard issue M4 are in meters. Distances are expressed in metric units. This is to facilitate working with metric using countries. We've been doing this for I don't know how long, definitely since the early NATO days. The battle sights of a M14 are metric.

It plays like a combat scene from a video game, not real combat. It has potential, but you need to study more about what soldiers in combat sound like and act like.

Your use of English is by far from the worst I have seen, not by a long shot. Still, you made a number of very obvious mistakes.

I suggest you take the story to the Writer's Workshop in the forum.