Talk:New Friends/@comment-31953669-20180506225924

I don't know if I'm allowed to edit it (new to the wiki), but there's a grammar mistake.

" “Who knows?” The green-eyed figure raised an eye ridge "

That line lacked a period.

Other than that... this is the first Pasta I've read, and I don't really know much about horror in general, but I think this is pretty good.