Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4656382-20180113081513/@comment-4656382-20180113202618

Thanks for your response Mr.Dupin!

Lilith already feels long enough as it is, so I may just rewrite this story a bit. I don't want to make the stories for the second-hand characters too long, but I may end up rewriting more than just this one.

Thanks for your feedback!