Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26319234-20160420192010/@comment-24101790-20160423190413

Dragonfire149 wrote: also, that stuff you dredged up? thats from a site totally unrelated to creepypastas and years in the past, completely irrelevant in the here and now, so that's invalid evidence,

Seems pretty relevant to your character and your previous insistence that you couldn't fix the story because your 'mind has shut most of the memories of that time away, only allowing the memories to resurface when it feels I'm more prepared to handle them,'. Those links showcase how you tried to do this in the past and used key points from both. As for it being invalid, I'm not sure you know how evidence works. I'll just leave this quote from Chris (Chris 11 Jul 2012 09:20), a moderator for that site right here:

"... it's way beyond childish. You said your girlfriend was murdered by a maniac. Before, you also said you were from the 1500's, and your wife was murdered... and that you're here in this life to avenge her death. To everyone: The wife, "coincidentally", was a 17 year old with blue hair and purple eyes."

Now where do parts of that seem familiar??? Let's just include this quote as well while we're focused on that site. "i REALLY hate it when ppl doubt my intelligence, let alone call me a liar through some posts!" ~ You (10 Jul 2012 02:54). I suggest if you dislike that fact, then you stop lying. Simple as that. If you don't wanna get called on your childishness, stop acting like a child. Also, I suggest you re-read that thread as a lot of the people there make some helpful comments. I have screen caps of the postings if you would like that refresher.

As for your story, which you seem to still be deflecting criticism for: it's unrealistic, fails to draw the audience in, have believable characters, still has multiple plot holes, and generally isn't well-written. I would advise you to move on or take it to an RP board if you're looking for attention because I don't think you can salvage it. Feel free to keep complaining about the fact that you've been caught in multiple lies in the past and still continue to pretend, but I've moved on to other stories.