Talk:Never Let You Go/@comment-28110107-20160415223849

I really enjoyed this story a lot. I listened to H. by Tool while I read it and Maynard James Keenan's haunting lyrical style and Tool's overall unsettling sound in that particular track made it as if I were even more in the story. It fits, as it should, since you said you did draw inspiration from it. If this were a short film, only as long as the Tool song, I would watch it- repeatedly. The suspense was thick and the excitement built up to an end that I wasn't ready for at all. Really solid work. If you were to write anything else, I'd want to read it immediately.