Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26179512-20150308191100/@comment-26054278-20150308193104

Ainsley joshua vandewardt wrote: Okay But The Character is Nice Your character is very, very cliche and is not a good character, I'm afraid. It is just like every other "Jeff The Killer" rip-off. Also, even the whole "knifes in his hands" bit isn't original, because Tim Burton already made "Edward Scissorhands". I'm sorry, but none of this story, not even the character, should be rewritten, and I say you should just move on to a completely new story.