Talk:Peter's Shadow/@comment-26054278-20150209232813/@comment-26054278-20150210121932

It isn't the style of writing, it is just the fact that the main plot is explained very lazily and rather terribly. I wouldn't care how they wrote as long as they made a good plot and put effort into the story, which is clearly lacking here.

If it was explained well but I disliked the style of writing, I would have said I disliked the style of writing. Lazy writing is quite different and technically not a style.