Talk:This Room Is Always the Hottest/@comment-25941663-20150127112501

I have find a small error: "of my covers with my and", after 'my' you forgot to put a word.

Overally, it was a good read. The concept was a bit unoriginal but interesting nonetheless. It always kept me guessing at what might happen next.

Unfortunately, the ending ruined the experience for me. I don't really understand what is happening. Has the pale monster been protecting the narrator all along and now that it's gone something bad is going to happen? Or did it just get angry and is going to do something bad to the narrator? Or something else entirely?

Generally, I love stories that end in an open-ended manner and make me think, but this story is a bit too ambiguous. Give us a tiny bit more info and it will be much better.

Having said all that, this is an amazing pasta for a first attempt. Well done.