Talk:The Last Man Standing/@comment-34032049-20180115204321

Great short pasta. Creating a loop is a great way to break a story free from the over used "it was just a dream" ending. You created A large scale setting (a world void of human life), built a character, provided a climax, added a twist, and planted tastfully unanswered questions in the head of the reader. all in less than a page of a paper.

only criticism would be work on your writing. and the point where he wakes up, realizes it was a dream and goes back to his chair could have supported a little more substance although it did fine without it.

nice job 8/10