Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180705051303/@comment-9041013-20180707220005

DrBobSmith wrote: BloodySpghetti wrote:

You do know that the Queen of Sheba is a (semi) mythological figure? which well... brought on this response from me. Also, Hyenas aren't the only matriarchal animals out there :P But if this is your intention, so shall be it.

I still don't understand why the have to be super mascular in natural form... can't they just be "healthy" looking? Bloody Spaghetti,

If the Queen of Sheba is just a myth, this is all the more reason for the name to be used. It's like saying "Hercules forklifts" or "Thor brand hammers." The name is famous and it improves brand name recognition.

That appearance is healthy and normal for a female spotted hyena. They are 20% larger than males and they are incredibly powerful and muscled. Also, the shock of the unveiling of them from helpless victims to testosterone-fueled nightmares was deliberate. I wanted readers to never look at that foreign woman hidden under those long clothes quite the same way again because you never know what she REALLY is. Honestly, if I look at a fat foreign woman who exumes poverty, I'll know she's storing fat because she had nothing to eat at the mother land. In actuality, the Queen of Sheba was a real life title of an arabic or proto arabic polity some two thousand and something years ago. The mythological Queen of Sheba is the Abassynian none possible lover of King Solomon. Teehee. In your story you say that people with certain magic can turn into Hyenas, thus indicating they are more human than Hyena... here you say, She is more Hyena than human. Giving me her ability to transform into a Hyena makes me weary enough of foreign fat women with fluffy clothes. Alright, I don't need her to be Rich Piana with a pseudopenial vagina. Look at female contact atheletes... they all look like murder machines. Have you seen Cris Cyborg or Shayna Baszler?

LOOK AT THIS WOMAN, LOOK AT ER'

Queen of Spades

Here's another example of a bigger than life woman athlete who's not a giant monster washboard bellied beast

The pro wrestler Alpha Female (Marie Gabert) she is though six feet tall or so, which makes her above average, but there are taller women.

would you mess with either of them? and hell you might be bigger... or your every day joe is probably bigger than both of them.