Talk:Rora/@comment-24040907-20150228005706

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.



For the first half of the story, I thought that Rora was an unborn child, sitting in the womb losing its mind. I was proven quite wrong toward, however, at the brilliant twist ending.



>Readers Beware, Spoilers Below<



For years, classic fairy tales have been remade and retold, each time from a different point of view. But this story touches upon a side I’ve never seen before. What was Aurora dreaming about while she was asleep?



The nightmare of Aurora was masterfully done, described in such rich, vibrant detail that you can almost feel the darkness of the story encompassing you as you read. Talk about atmospheric!



Now, this next part is very subjective, so bear with me. When I saw the picture attached to the story, I recognized it as Maleficent, but I still didn’t catch on that this was Sleeping Beauty! I swear, that is how well done the twist was. I was so engrossed in the descriptive detail you provided that I completely forgot that the subject was “Fairytale”. This effect lasted until the “prick, prick, prick” line. Then I thought “Oh yeah, that’s the spinning wheel!”



And the entire story climaxes in paragraph 26, which has got to be one of the most gorgeously written paragraphs I’ve ever read.



>In the voice of the announcer from Unreal Tournament< 

'''GODLIKE! '''

