Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26671016-20141103215408/@comment-26671016-20141103222156

Omar717 wrote:

The only worry I have is that the route of the story, from the prologue at least, appears to be somewhat predictable. I mean I already have a feeling that by the end of the story the main character will end up brutally killing the ones that picked on him. If I'm right then that is a serious issue, if im wrong then you can forget about this complaint. Also the phrase "But they would pay" just feels like far too much foreshadowing. Good point, I'll keep that in mind.