Talk:Caligari on VHS/@comment-26425680-20190604033128

I'm not typically a fan of lost-episode/lost-movie pastas, mostly because they lack any sort of originality. What makes this particular story okay is that you didn't go overboard - meaning that you weren't subject to some sort of ridiculous haunting that went on and on - it was just isolated to that one moment in time. That's what gives it credibility, as if it might be true. Your writing is solid enough, so try branching out into something a little more creative next time.