Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27176417-20151108045230/@comment-27176417-20151108055418

Hi Empyreallnvective, thanks for the response. I knew that the creepypasta wouldnt be perfect and that it wasnt original enough, but the main reason I posted it onto this website was to see where I went wrong (like many others im sure) and how I could approve upon those areas for the next creepypasta I write which will hopefully be original and at least half deacent. I am 14 years old and this creepypasta will be nothing like the ones to come...well I hope so anyways :)