User blog comment:Widward/My Thoughts On Harbringer Experiment/@comment-24101790-20180223141511

"he could've get (sic) help instead he decided (sic) to write down about his experince (sic)"

This line is oddly illuminating about the story and your review. You should have gotten help before you wrote down your experience with the story as this is riddled with typos, punctuation errors, run-on sentences, and awkward wording. It really highlights the fact that you didn't put a lot of time into this.

I have my qualms with the Harbinger Experiment as well, but to come at it this ill-prepared and un-focuseddoesn't help your case. In fact, it hurts it. How exactly do you expect people to focus on your feedback issues in a story when you're unable to proof-read your own writing?

1/10: Writing needs improvement.