User blog comment:Witnessme/Creepypasta Short Story Contest/@comment-27063290-20151012234028

Four o’clock in the afternoon, the doorbell rang. Ten year old Lawrence yelled through the closed door, “Who is it?”

A woman’s voice replied, “Lawrence is that you?.”

Lawrence opened the door, an attractive couple stood before him in matching workout clothes. He had never seen them before

“Hello Lawrence,” the woman said with a toothy Colgate smile.

“Is Emily here?” the man next to her asked.

Just then Lawrence’s older Sister Emily walked up behind him “Who is it Lawrence?” Emily asked.

The smiling man stepped forward with something clutched in his hand, he pressed it against Emily’s neck, Emily started to shake,

her eyes rolled up into her head and she fell to the ground.

The sporty couple moved fast, shoving his sister into a large burlap sack. Lawrence was too stunned to move.

The man threw the sack over his shoulder, the couple smiled down at Lawrence, the woman said “Thank you.” and then they were gone.



Lawrence walked down the hall and into his room. He sat down at his computer and with a few keystrokes brought up his ad.



''Free to a good home. One bratty twelve year old sister, she is ugly and makes me do all her chores.''

'' She answers to the name Emily. Please come between three and six pm because then my parents will be at work. ''

Ask for Lawrence.

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<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:14px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;">Lawrence smiled and hit delete.