Talk:The Vessel

Plot: 8/10

The plot takes a little while to "speed up"- for the entire first half of the pasta, I was seeing the pasta as another boring, cliche monster pasta. The ending made up for that, however.

Originality: 9/10

The dark has been indeed visited before, but not in this manner. Nicely done.

Ending: 9/10

I liked the ending, although I found it to be a bit similar to The Family Portrait's ending. Still, it was shocking- the narrator realizing that there was something in the darkness after all.

Writing: 10/10

Perfect. Really conveys the tone of the pasta.

Overall experience: 10/10

It was a good pasta; makes one question the dark.

Final score: 46/50

Alcatraz? That's your name? Alcatraz... Destiny's a bitch, huh? 12:20, March 19, 2013 (UTC)