Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25547916-20141017032514/@comment-25546552-20141017052903

I will admit, being a guy I was wincing a bit during the "operation". Although I feel that operation isn't quite the appropriate word; more like "Meat Mincing".

But,it was very good. I liked it quite a bit. I did half-guess his situation early on, this may be my over-active imagination or just what you were going for? Well, possibly either or a little of both.

I saw hardly any blatant grammatical errors(blatant would be anything that I notice in my case).

The one that stood out was:

"I’ve know the doctors’ is scary, but you’ll feel better when it’s done.” I would assume your going for this: "I know the doctors’ is scary,"

Overall it was quite good. And it had me intrigued by the end of the first sentence.