Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26017882-20150118030216

Hello everyone Skeleton here newest member of this wiki (At least I think considering I only joined a few minutes ago) anyways I just wrote my first pasta I have not uploaded it because I'm not sure it meets the strictly enforced quality standards. Secondly i'm fairly new to writing and I don't have a lot of experience with it. Thirdly I'm not sure it would be well recevied as I just wrote the first thing that came to mind so it might come off as a bit rushed. All that aside  I want to get some advice and feedback on what I have so far and maybe get ideas on how to flesh it out if it needs fleshed out. Thank you everyone who took the time to read this and help me out!

Your's truely Skeleton

(Here is a link to the pasta itself. http://pastebin.com/WfX55j31 )

  