User blog comment:Mmpratt99 deviantart/Writer's Block Trouble--Need Help to Get it Unblocked!/@comment-26326346-20150822183634/@comment-26326346-20150828015850

I noticed an error, just use Ctrl + F and copy paste a couple of words from it to find it:

“Are there any more news articles from that time period?” Kes asked.

The hippopode shook her head again. “Well, we did,” she said, adjusting her gold-rimmed spectacles. “Unfortunately, the library suffered extensive cyclone damage last October--ruined much of our WWII news archive as well as most of the study and work area..."

The responding dialogue doesn't line up with the first line of dialogue because of "Well, we did," I recommend changing the first line of dialogue to say:

"Do you have any more news articles from that time period?" Kes said.