Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5241980-20150605025925/@comment-5241980-20150607022706

Whitix:

Thanks a lot for the critique. I actually totally get what you're referring to, and after having sat on the story for a couple days, I've more or less come to the same conclusion. And the spacing thing... yeah I'm not sure what that is. I think I just messed up the formatting somewhere along the line, because it wasn't like that in Word. Should be fixed by the time I put up the second draft (which I'm about two-thirds done with).

Thanks again!!!