User:EmpyrealInvective/Archive 16

Think about it
So, I designed a new logo, and a few people say it's sick. Might have been bored looking at the old, lifeless (but cool) logo. What if we spice it up? Waiting for your opinion!



Ruckus Quantum 19:58, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

sigh

BlueBurry (talk) 21:45, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry about my unfinished page being contributed, I had a name in mind for it that I didn't get to before I hit create, so I had to save and exit, where before I could delete it, you did. Thank you, and I apologize. Clandestine Arcanum (talk) 00:08, May 10, 2015 (UTC)ClandyArc

Oh, nosir, I've been writing for most of my life, just feel like putting some of my darker side on here... >:3Clandestine Arcanum (talk) 00:19, May 10, 2015 (UTC)ClannyArc

Is It Better Now?
Hey, is my story, You Were Paranoid better now? Thanks! I'm C r a z y W o r d s, I love y <font color="#ADD8E6">o <font color="#ADD8E6">u <font color="#C0C0C0">a <font color="#808080">l <font color="#696969">l!  Talk to me Baby! Contributions! 01:53, May 10, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords

please take this off
I gave the wrong name to a signature page, I re-named it correctly. I would really prefer it not to be deleted. Could you remove the deletenow tag? Its here, User:SoPretentious/Signature.

<span style = "display: inline; border: 8px solid green; background-color: black; border-radius: 12px; padding: 30px;"><span style = "color: white; font-family: 'Gabriola'; font-size: 32px;" title = "My Favorite Pastas and Other Stuff">Profile Message Contributions   06:14, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

I want my story to be removed from marked for review. Can someone go over it and fix any minor grammar mistakes? I vastly improved on the story Mr.MellowDramatic (talk) 14:38, May 10, 2015 (UTC)Mr.MellowDramatic

WW story
Remember the "Unlocked Doors" story? (If you don't, whatever.) I made some edits to it with the same concept, and I hope you'll take a look at the thread and see if it meets up to QS.

If it doesn't, please point out mistakes and how to fix them.

R*I*S*I*N*G*F*U*S*I*O*N 23:05, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Blog
Thanks for deleting my blog (not really but whatever). :\

R*I*S*I*N*G*F*U*S*I*O*N 23:14, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

RE
My bad sir, but thanks.

R*I*S*I*N*G*F*U*S*I*O*N 23:25, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re: The Green Man
I took some inspiration from several sources and made a somewhat heavy revision of The Green Man.

https://www.scribd.com/doc/264876678/The-Green-Man

Some things I was initially trying to convey didn't come out as well as I had hoped in the original story. And among them was that "The Doctor" and "Nathan" were two different characters with the same body. "The Doctor" was essentially everything Nathan wanted to be. So any time the story is talking about his dreams, or his officialities, it would be set as "The Doctor"

But Nathan's most human moments were the ones were "The Doctor" is more of a mask. I added a bit more of this in the second draft, (Seen in that link up there,) but I'm not really sure if it comes through.

It also was supposed to have at least a subtle red herring for a watchful eye. With the description being the friend dying, the mention of his friend being forgotten, and this whole thing being set next to a graveyard. I kinda hoped that at least one person would assume that his friends would be the threat of the plot, and that the Green Man in question would be a surprise.

I realized after posting the link that I still hadn't completely fixed the capitalization issue for "The Doctor" "The doctor" and "the Doctor," but at the very least, it's supposed to be "The Doctor" from start to finish.

Tell me what you think of draft 2.

EtherBot (talk) 01:22, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

How to get a creepypasta recognized for pasta of the month
Long time no see! Anyways, I was wondering, in sense I've been thinking of ideas for new creepypastas, I was wondering how your supposed to get one of your own creepypastas recognised for a chance at "pasta of the month". Thank you

Sacrid7174 (talk) 01:51, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Doh!
That figures. Yours is much more in-depth, so if you think having two responses is too much, feel free to remove mine. I ninja you and still get showed up; it hurts so bad! 1.5 - 105

Jay Ten (talk) 17:51, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Another story deleted?
What I do this time to get "It Shall Be Sweet" deleted?

Supersatan25 (talk) 23:58, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

You are a REALLY GOOD WRITER. I just felt like I needed to tell you that. Continue to write, and never stop!

Have you ever considered publishing any of your novellas? They are really good and I'd consider buying them.

Tin77 (talk) 00:00, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re: story
Ok, well first of all I do have a way with writing my poetry that it changes meter at parts but it's just how I write. I guess I could always post it somewhere else. Anyway I also wanted to point out the fact that the words you pointed out that didn't rhyme, were slant rhymes. If you don't know what that is, (I'm not sure if you do or not), it's when words don't directly rhyme like car/bar/far etc., but sound like they should rhyme like the ones you pointed out.

Re: Thanks

I personally think you should go for "We are Legion" as that is probably my favorite story by you.

Tin77 (talk) 00:32, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Hello, and thank you for replying to my message on the collab project. I just have a question: how do I sumbit my contribution? HardyGal (talk) 08:15, May 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * Ninja'd! 08:38, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Review Request On Sequel Chapter to The Last Day of October
I really would like very much a review on this story since I'm hoping to get it on the main wiki so I can start on the next chapter > The Last Day of October--Bookstore Horror

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 21:48, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks!
Thank you so much for all your help! I tried to take your critique to heart and have put my paper in  the workshop! Thankyou for letting me try again, I will attempt a repeal once my story gets feedback! Maximinus585 (talk) 03:59, May 14, 2015 (UTC)Maximinus585

Duplicate Article
I accidentally created a duplicate article: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Wheels_On_The_Bus_Kid I was editing it and after I hit submit it said that I created the page. I think it got moved because of the title being improper. I was hoping that you would delete it for me. Sorry for the mess up. Doom Vroom (talk) 07:07, May 14, 2015 (UTC)


 * Please disregard. Underscorre took care of it. Doom Vroom (talk) 08:02, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Contest Request
I noticed that you deleted my contest in the blogs. I understand why you did it as I read your message you sent me.

It said that you need permission. So can I have permission to make a conest?

You can read about my contest here. http://pastebin.com/QRBz8qM0

If you don't like it then that's okay. I'm fine with that.

BrianBerta (talk) 21:10, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Ok I'm really mad I keep writing story's and they get deleted for no apparent reason, for instance my newest one got deleted from this sentence I was a very happy kid, I loved school, had lots of friends, and I did not do any wrong ok what the hell is wrong with that. My god AnonymousMurderUnknown (talk) 22:59, May 14, 2015 (UTC)Orange

I read through your reasons why you delete stories, but I'm not that bright and my questions were not answered. If you could please get back to me I would love it, Thanks.

My story was: The Murderer in the Mist

Kianna320 (talk) 22:43, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the help. I'll try and make my story better.

Kianna320 (talk) 22:58, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

--hat in hand, staring sheepishly down at shoes--
Hello, sir--very understated and humble--would you please read my story Nightingale and tell me what you think. I worked oh--so--hard on it and my mom says it's real good. I don't have an army of fan girls yet, like you, so I need help. Thank you so much, your holiness, it means a lot to me. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 23:55, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Hi Empyreallinective it's TheDarkOne2.0 I attempted to start writing a creepy pasta but couldn't find a way to save it so I could finish it later. Does that mean I have to publish what I have so far then go back to edit it?

In case you didn't notice
I proofread religiously and it was SoPretentious who put those quotes together. I know I don't need to tell you how I feel about people editing my work. The last time I let someone edit my work was a catastrophe. I'm glad you pointed it out to me before it was judged, though your comment still makes me look a bit foolish. Do you think you could remove it? I know it's a silly, nothing thing; it's just that I put a lot of time into that story. Probably too much time. I even joined the Humboldt Historical Society, which cost me thirty five bucks. Thanks, man. And thanks for reading my story! HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 03:40, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Holy shit are you fast. Careful, buddy, speed kills, you know. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 03:43, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Dear EmptyrealInvective,

I am very sad you deleted my story. I am suffering already, and I am out of ideas to keep myself from being brought down again.

http://i.imgur.com/3hbJDZZ.jpg

http://imgur.com/LRRCLcJ

http://imgur.com/SequefP

​Sincerely,

Megan DeWolfe (talk) 23:41, May 16, 2015 (UTC)Megan DeWolfe

Thanks for the advice bro. I'll try to fix it and then repost it. Cya CoolFTW (talk) 00:47, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

PS. Plz don't ban me for reposting a new version of it...

Help
Hey I was wondering if you would help me with how to post a story on here. I am new here so I don't know what to do. Earlier I tried to upload a story but was deleted shortly after, twice, and it said not to post a duplicate or I'll be blocked. I was wondering if there's still a way to post it at some point and maybe tell me how to correctly post a page so I can avoid something like this. Any tips are greatly appreciated. --Abyss Infinity (talk) 01:02, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

I was wondering about my story and whether you thought it was good enough to be on the wiki, as it has still been marked for review. GrantGrantdomo (talk) 21:06, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for letting me know, I will fix the problems in the story. GrantGrantdomo (talk) 22:39, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

hi13:29, May 18, 2015 (UTC)13:29, May 18, 2015 (UTC)13:29, May 18, 2015 (UTC)~

Re: note on videos
Alright, got it.

<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 16px;" title = "Better a diamond with a flaw than a pebble without. —Confucius">SoPretentious <span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "It is more shameful to distrust our friends than to be deceived by them. —Confucius">Talk &middot;<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "When you have faults, do not fear to abandon them. —Confucius">Edits 16:59, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Writer's Lounge Question
Hi Empyre, I wanted to ask you something about the interview, if you have time. I have written down about 10 questions (stealing shamelessly from previous interviews) but I would like your opinion on something. I couldn't come up with that many questions about WriterJosh's stories (only 2-3). I will mainly ask about general stuff. Is that a problem?

By the way, the interview will take place this weekend (by email). If Josh replies within the next week, I will have finished the interview by the 3-5th of June. Is that OK or should I speed things up? MrDupin (talk) 17:57, May 18, 2015 (UTC)


 * Thanks, this cleared things up. I don't think though that sending you the questions would be necessary, mostly I rehashed questions from previous interviews + added some story-specific questions. MrDupin (talk) 21:16, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Can I have my "The Real Game" story back?
Could you send the story privately to me please? If it can't be on the wiki, can't I at least have my story in "My Documents" ?

What... happened to... page...?

I see... some mlp around the page as well... but... well... nevermind... Could you at least give me what I typed...?

Christopher Michael Richardson (talk) 03:11, May 20, 2015 (UTC)Hello Mr.Editor. Although you have deleted my past stories, I am happy to be here. Your feedback lets me learn, and someday i will write a story, and you pass it. Thank you for everything, I will be badk tommorrow or the day after to try again.

Dear Enpyreallinvective, I realized why my story was deleted, I used Microsoft Word 2013 to make the story, I was just asking what is the best Microsoft Word? and do you think my story had a good plot?

Hi, before i posted any stories i wanted to clarify something. Rule 2 of the User Conduct says to not post anything that contains homophobia, religious intolerance, etc. Does this include things of that nature in stories if they are PURELY for character development? Thank you for any responce.Redamnation (talk) 20:50, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

There's a Protected Pasta That Needs Editing
Would you unlock this pasta? Love. It needs spacing changes and at least one word, "embarrassed" is spelled wrong. If you'd rather make the changes, then embarrassed is in the paragraph that starts with, "I broke the rules many times..." and it's in the last sentence in that paragraph.


 * On that note, "embarrassed" is spelled wrong in this pasta, which is also locked, Humper-Monkey's Ghost Story. It is located on the paragraph that starts with a quote, "Almost" said Bishop...


 * Also, Dark Woods: The Elmridge Grasp is locked, and has "desperately" and "emanated" both spelled wrong, they are in the paragraph that starts with, "Believe it or not, about two hours later..." I just glanced at that one, though, I bet it has more errors.

<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 16px;" title = "Better a diamond with a flaw than a pebble without. —Confucius">SoPretentious <span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "It is more shameful to distrust our friends than to be deceived by them. —Confucius">Talk &middot;<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "When you have faults, do not fear to abandon them. —Confucius">Edits 23:38, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Just wanted to say hi, and keep up the good work! Your doing Great! Heatrist (talk) 04:25, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Occurring
I noticed "occurring" is spelled wrong on the Halloween category page. Would you change it?

<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 16px;" title = "Better a diamond with a flaw than a pebble without. —Confucius">SoPretentious <span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "It is more shameful to distrust our friends than to be deceived by them. —Confucius">Talk &middot;<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "When you have faults, do not fear to abandon them. —Confucius">Edits 09:54, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * Fixed. 09:59, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Contest Idea...Oh God, not another one!
Hey Trav,

I realize that as of late we have been flooded with different writing contests, which to me is a good thing, since it is bringing in new stories and getting everyone to step up their game. I even did one for Crazywords, Of Beauties and Beasts, just in case you want to read it.

So, in light of all of this, I got the idea in my head that I want to do one too. Now, I realize that we are a little contest heavy right now, so I was thinking of proposing the idea to you and the other admins (who I'll be sending this message to as well, just to crowd source the idea) now, and launch the contest itself at the start of June.

The idea that I have is a demon/devil themed contest. I would keep it pretty open ended, not assigning anyone specific goals or terms to write within. The only rule would be that the theme of the story would have to be demon centric, the plot and the rest is up to the writer. Other rules, like length of story and such will be added in pending approval.

Basically I would open up the first 20 days of June for submissions, and I will read and grade as they come in. The 20th-25th would be the judging, with the winner being announced at the end of June.

Now, here is where I would need admin support, beyond just approving the contest. I want to offer prizes, but I don't have a bunch of game codes to give out like Guy did in his contest last year. Basically, the prize ideas I came up with look like this,

The winning author gets a choice of either being the automatic spotlighted pasta for the month of July, or an automatic nomination for Pasta of the Month. It would be their choice as to which prize to accept.

The contest would be essentially open to anyone, regardless of user rights, accept for me, since I would be the primary judge. I am still thinking of whether or not I want to offer assistant judging positions to anyone else.

Either way, this is still very much in the planning phase, and much of it is going to rely on admin support and approval, especially for prize portion. I am mostly looking for feedback and suggestions at this point, as maybe you have a better idea of potential prizes, if you're not keen on the ideas that I came up with.

If the idea gets blessed off on, I will write a Staff Blog with the contest rules and guidelines so that people who want to get an early jump on this can.

Let me know your thoughts on this. As I said before, it would kick off in June, so that gives us the rest of this month to close out current contests, plus, if you do approve, you can factor that against any other potential contest proposals that may pop up.

Thanks for you time and consideration,

Banningk1979 (talk) 19:21, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Shoo Fly Don't Bother Me
Read your mind, am I right? There's a misspelling on this protected pasta. The Showers

(paragraph start) They approached the building as a group, looking in the semi-open sliding door to find a big, empty room. Hanging, florescent lights ''←should be "fluorescent lights." ''


 * Also, I noticed the same misspelling on three of the fifty foot ants stories. It's actually sort of interesting... Florescent means flowering or vigor. Then there is fluorescent lights. If you don't want to unlock the stories then I'll send messages to help you locate the misspellings. It would be much easier to unlock (then possibly re-lock) the pasta after the mistakes are corrected, considering there's multiple misspellings and the length of the pasta. (As I have a word-finder program on my computer, it's rather simple.) 22:18, May 21, 2015 (UTC)


 * Ok, I didn't know that existed. Well, have a good one. Would you leave a header on my talk page next time? 22:26, May 21, 2015 (UTC)


 * Third, Fourth, and Fifth. It's repeated like four times on the third one, I didn't look at the others yet, they may be correct if it's not talking about fluorescent lights. Florescent is just a uncommon word. 22:32, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 16px;" title = "Better a diamond with a flaw than a pebble without. —Confucius">SoPretentious <span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "It is more shameful to distrust our friends than to be deceived by them. —Confucius">Talk &middot;<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "When you have faults, do not fear to abandon them. —Confucius">Edits 22:09, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Hello! My name is Alice but i am not roleplaying when i say this i am being very serious about this people call me Sharpie bt it is nice to meet you and i hope we can become friends soon

Sharpiethekiller211 (talk) 00:29, May 22, 2015 (UTC)Alice

i will change my profile for you then Sharpiethekiller211 (talk) 00:33, May 22, 2015 (UTC)Alice

okay i am sorry but i do like roleplaying though.....so i will not do it again

Then i will stop just so i do not get banned. Sharpiethekiller211 (talk) 00:43, May 22, 2015 (UTC)Alice

So I wrote a draft of my creepypasta on the writiter's workshop. I wound love to hear your opinion and whether or not it would get deleted at current state

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:463203

I thought you were going to PUNish me but instead you Empythised with me
HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 16:19, May 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * After seeing that header, I'm not sure I want to use this wiki anymore... 16:23, May 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * The first casualty of our pun-based war... Oh the humanity! EmpyrealInvective (talk) 16:30, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

I'm just a PUNdit for BOLDly taking LOCOutions as far as possible
Just chicken in with you to make sure our conversation last night didn't run a fowl when poultry subjects got brought up.

HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 17:06, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Why did u delete my message

I was wondering if you could return my pasta because I noticed shortly after that someone else has removed another puppet. I thought it would be easier to ask instead of retyping all of it--II FAMINE II (talk) 18:23, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

sorry im new and i wasnt sure how this whole thing worked my bad fam

Poetry
Since I have a writer's block at the moment (I always had one) I decided I would like to turn my attention to poetry. Now, obviously, the writing I will have to do on my own, but what I'm asking is that how the formatting works. Basically, I would want a poem to look more like "Hypno's Lullaby" than "The Blue-Faced Baby," mainly because of the spacing stuff. But then, in Source Mode, if you write a phrase then press Enter without space between the previous statement, it all merges to one line, which is something I don't want. Can you offer a hand here?

Thanks,

R*I*S*I*N*G*F*U*S*I*O*N 22:29, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for being dumb, but what do you mean "putting around?" Like on the top and bottom?

R*I*S*I*N*G*F*U*S*I*O*N 22:35, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks.

R*I*S*I*N*G*F*U*S*I*O*N 22:38, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, I'll keep that in mind.

R-I-S-I-N-G-F-U-S-I-O-N 22:41, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Another Day, Another Typo...
Dark Woods: The Elmridge Grasp viens → veins

<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 16px;" title = "Better a diamond with a flaw than a pebble without. —Confucius">SoPretentious <span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "It is more shameful to distrust our friends than to be deceived by them. —Confucius">Talk &middot;<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "When you have faults, do not fear to abandon them. —Confucius">Edits 22:44, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

I know eggsactly what you mean
Hey, it's Punboldt. I don't want to eggrovate you or egg you on, but if you think I'm chicken, I'm a crepe not. Just don't make an eggsample of me. Seriously, though, I canine wait to hear your story about euthanizing that dog. Well the euth and I'se got to go tend to that flock, so omelete you go for now. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 23:39, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

I'm gettting a little eggsaserbated myself. I feel like that guy in that Poe story The Pit and the PUNdalum, laying there watching Empy's razor sharp wit inching closer, and closer. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 00:49, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

RE: The Hook
I think I fixed most of the errors. You can protect it again. MrDupin (talk) 21:37, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Application submitted
Ok, application is submitted for Admin Rights. I think I submitted it correctly lol.

Thanks again for your support and confidence.

Banningk1979 (talk) 23:14, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Hello,

Sorry about posting it under the talk page my apologies its my first time posting on this wiki. Other than editing the story what did you think was it scary or not? Give me your opinion

Empy,

Thank you for your opinion I will use my knowledge of creepypastas and other things to write it and your advise Thanks btw your stories are amazing.

-Zeb

Hourglass Rose (talk) 01:07, May 24, 2015 (UTC) Could you please tell me what I did wrong so that I will not make the same mistake?

Hourglass Rose (talk) 01:13, May 24, 2015 (UTC) Alright, will do! Thanks!

Hourglass Rose (talk) 01:24, May 24, 2015 (UTC) Thank you for your help! I'll think a little about the story and maybe read a few to improve my grammar.

Could you tell me what was wrong with my pasta? I'm new here and learning how to write one. Ukufa (talk) 01:36, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ukufa - "There's a monster in my closet"
Please let me know what was wrong with my pasta, so I can improve on it. I think you should tell the author what's wrong, then delete it. That's a better system for you and us, so you don't get flooded with mail like "pls tell me wutz wrong wit ma pasta" - Everybody wins.

RE: -
If I were to fix it up, and then post it in the writer's workshop, could I repost it?

RE: - Ukufa

OK good, so could you send me my story, so I can fix it up?

Okay, no problem. Thanks- Ukufa

protected pasta
The Damned Thing suprise → surprise.

Sometimes I wonder how this even happens, my computer fixes the mistake automatically upon spacing after typing the word, then I have to go back and spell it wrong again.


 * The Slenderman Cometh wether → whether 03:41, May 24, 2015


 * Also, I was thinking that The Slenderman Cometh should be listed on The Slender Man under, "Pastas Involving the Slender Man."  03:57, May 24, 2015 (UTC)


 * Thanks. One more thing, The Slender Man misspelling: "According to legend, he was a fairy ho (who) lived in the Black Forest."

<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 16px;" title = "Better a diamond with a flaw than a pebble without. —Confucius">SoPretentious <span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "It is more shameful to distrust our friends than to be deceived by them. —Confucius">Talk &middot;<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "When you have faults, do not fear to abandon them. —Confucius">Edits 03:30, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks! Sorry about the passive aggressive edit summary, by the way. That was uncalled for. LethalPen (talk) 04:59, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

?
Are you giving out some songs to more than one person, or was that an accident? Just wanted to make sure you hadn't lost your monocle again.

Jay Ten (talk) 14:39, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

this is my header guys
Hi Empyreallnvective! It's TheDarkOne2.0 and I've just noticed that my story was deleted on Thursday May 21. A message from you led me here. So sometime soon, can you tell me why my story "Demon's Heir" was almost instantly deleted? I just want some clarification on where I might have gone wrong.

Sincerely,

--TheDarkOne2.0 (talk) 18:20, May 24, 2015 (UTC)TheDarkOne2.0

spinoff inquiry
Hi again Empyreallnective. Let me make some points about my story "Demon's Heir".

First, the punctuation is actually proper. You might live in the U.S., but I'm actually Canadian (btw, how do I show that information on my talk page?), and I'm sure people do know what makes our countries different.

Second, I know that some of my sentences don't look right. I kind of inherited that problem from my mother.

Third, can you be specific on the cliches? I tried to avoid some of them.

And then there's the Spin-off and Black list thing. I know Jeff the Killer is in it, but isn't he only in there for two scenes? And isn't the Slenderman in only one scene? Ticcy Toby was kind of unavoidable, though, as I like his story better than Jeff's, and I wanted to mention him in at least one of my stories. And isn't he in there for only three scenes?

Even though I did add those characters in, what about my main protagonist, Nissa? Technically, she is no spin off character (except for being Ticcy Toby's cousin). And she's a vigilante, not a serial killer, there is a difference. If you've watched anything related to Batman or the show Arrow, you know what I mean. I know I haven't seen any vigilante stories here yet, though you might have.

Sorry if I ended up going overkill on your talk page.

Sincerely,

--TheDarkOne2.0 (talk) 19:05, May 24, 2015 (UTC)TheDarkOne2.0


 * Took care of it. [[Image:ThBHXA8CGT.jpg|50px]]<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 16px;" title = "Better a diamond with a flaw than a pebble without. —Confucius">SoPretentious <span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "It is more shameful to distrust our friends than to be deceived by them. —Confucius">Talk &middot;<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "When you have faults, do not fear to abandon them. —Confucius">Edits[[Image:Black and white color phoenix tattoos (6).jpg|38px]] 19:23, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Well then, I will put "Demon's Heir" on Spinpasta.wikia.com later. But I do have a question considering another story I want to write.

I want to do a "Lost Episode" style story that I promise won't have much gore (or any hyper-realism) in it. In fact, I want it to look something like The Ring.

Would I still have to go to the Spin-off Appeal in order to do a story like I've mentioned? If not, where do I go then?

Sincerely,

--TheDarkOne2.0 (talk) 19:56, May 24, 2015 (UTC)TheDarkOne2.0

Fix This?
There's a broken link in this pasta The Stepmother it goes to a deleted pasta. It's at the bottom. I checked the deletion logs. I just wanted to make sure I knew what's going on.

<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 16px;" title = "Better a diamond with a flaw than a pebble without. —Confucius">SoPretentious <span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "It is more shameful to distrust our friends than to be deceived by them. —Confucius">Talk &middot;<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "When you have faults, do not fear to abandon them. —Confucius">Edits 20:09, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Quick Question
Where do I post the page? Do I post it as a submission or somewhere else?

BrianBerta (talk) 20:42, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

NSFW
Hello! I had a question crop up while I was figuring out my contest entry. I was wondering how not safe for work am I allowed to get? In particular, I am concerned about a part that I came up with that has a soldier helping a villager deliver a baby which is effected by Agent Orange, the baby is going to be fused and stillborn (a real effect of Agent Orange). I was wondering if that is too far or was acceptable? Doom Vroom (talk) 21:33, May 24, 2015 (UTC)


 * Alright, thank you. Yeah, I'm doing my best to approach it delicately since it deals with war (especially Vietnam). You know what's sad? Vietnam was never covered in my High School or College education. We only focused on The Fur Trade, American Revolution, Civil War, World War 1, World War 2 and glossed over The Cold War throughout all of my education. Mercifully, we went over the Romans in College. At least I'm learning because of the contest XD Doom Vroom (talk) 21:48, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Thoughts
Just wondering, when do you think I should re-apply for adminship? I have my app ready. I also noticed that I have as many edits since my promotion to rollbacker, that Banningk1979 did since his. His spanned over 4 months, and mine has spanned about 3 weeks. I don't really see much of a difference, I have made a thousand edits since then. But, there's a need for staff. The wiki has 1 active bureaucrat, and 2 active admins. I was going to wait a week, but I was thinking of just putting it up sooner since I checked the differences in our timelines/edits.

<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 16px;" title = "Better a diamond with a flaw than a pebble without. —Confucius">SoPretentious <span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "It is more shameful to distrust our friends than to be deceived by them. —Confucius">Talk &middot;<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "When you have faults, do not fear to abandon them. —Confucius">Edits 21:39, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re:Adminship
As far as editing mistakes, those seem like minor hiccups that happen, especially considering I've averaged over 40 edits per day for nearly a month. The fact that you could come up with 4 or 5 examples of bad edits speaks to my consistency. My adding the Marked for Review category is hit or miss, and to that I would say that those are fine because adding the Marked for Review is not the same as choosing to delete a story. I still think there's a few instances that were very much on the fence with adding the category and then it being removed. The Silkie Chicken being one that still lingers on my mind from time to time. I think I could offer the most assistance in outlining the issues with writers when a pasta is deleted.

There is maybe only 10-20 instances of pastas I have added M4R and the pasta has stayed. I would venture to guess that half (if not more) of my archived revisions were pastas deleted after my marking it for review. My archived revisions have reached a total of 390. I make it a point of mine to not edit pastas that I feel will be deleted. That point drives the number of archived revisions that equal deletions upwards. Asking for the pasta to be reviewed is a good idea anyway, when the quality is in question. Also, there has never been an instance of my stylistic revisions being removed, because they are always good, none have been over-the-top, and I strive to keep a story clean and precise.

The fact of the matter is, I meet all the requirements since my return to the wiki (besides six months activity, but that is accomplished when adding the previous activity before the respite), and my activity before that was more thorough, precise work. You are right that I could slow down. Then I would be doing less. When I first got back, there was 40 some odd pastas that needed to be sorted still.

I think that I interact plenty with other users on the wiki, even seeking ways to help people through avenues far beyond the normal user.

I think your response was very detailed, I would ask that you read this on my sandbox:

A concise application.

<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 16px;" title = "Better a diamond with a flaw than a pebble without. —Confucius">SoPretentious <span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "It is more shameful to distrust our friends than to be deceived by them. —Confucius">Talk &middot;<span style = "color: black; font-family: 'Arabic'; font-size: 12px;" title = "When you have faults, do not fear to abandon them. —Confucius">Edits 23:59, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Hey, no cool deleting my friend's pasta :(

The pasta "Lost Chapters" should have been a warning, before deletion. I mean, he just lost all of his work, cuz he doesn't have a computer, he has a smartphone, in which he used to type and post his story. I would have edited it for him, whatever errors were there. It also could have been placed in an "unfinished" category, or something.

The main thing is, there needs to be warnings, before deleting people's stuff. Our whole Google+ community was looking forward to this story :( And, to delete someone's work, then tell them upon deletion "oh btw, check out our do's and don'ts for creepypastas", not right bro :(

TeamGXOne (talk) 04:47, May 25, 2015 (UTC)TeamGXOne

Thank you so much for telling me! I didn't know that without permission from the author I could get in serious trouble for editing a story. Thank you. I'm sorry that I did that. I'm just thankful you told me. - Longgonedead Longgonedead (talk) 05:55, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re:Adminship
I've thought about it some, and I think you're being unfair. I'm going to take your advice, and make that a solid bureaucratic move on your part. It's not in my nature, but it's something I should learn before I'm an admin anyway. A settled pace would make me an overall better contributor. Thanks.

« So Pre te nt  io us » 07:35, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Interview Update
Josh just replied to my interview questions. His responses are about 1600 words in total. Is that alright? I can ask him a couple more questions if need be.

As he didn't take that much time to respond, I will have the interview ready by the end of May. MrDupin (talk) 11:23, May 25, 2015 (UTC)


 * Alright, a couple of questions later and his answers amount to about 2000 words. If that's enough, I will start editing the interview. MrDupin (talk) 18:19, May 25, 2015 (UTC)


 * To be fair, two out of five interviews have less than 2000 words. Also, I asked Josh 15 questions, I don't want to push him for more.


 * If you think the interview needs more, I will try and come up with a couple more questions. But they will either be a bit personal (something I want to avoid) or possibly uninteresting. MrDupin (talk) 18:59, May 25, 2015 (UTC)


 * Well, I think that (at worst) by the end of the week I will have it ready. Only thing I need to do is space it out a bit. Also, because the interview was conducted via email, it probably has some fluidity issues. Can I send it to you (after I edit it) to see if it's a problem? MrDupin (talk) 19:15, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Ban
I forgot, shit, sorry about that.

<font color="white" style="background-color: red;">Rinskuro13 20:19, May 25, 2015 (UTC)Rinskuro13

About my Paradise pasta...
Thank you for your feedback. I have fixed some of the details that you pointed out were wrong with my story. I would like to publish my story on this site, but am not sure exactly how to go about it. I don't really want to make a story where George goes mad with power or ruins the world with his powers-those have been done too many times before. I was interested with about your suggestion to talk about the darker side of human nature, but I am unsure of exactly how I could fit that into my story, so any help would be greatly appreciated. Nevertheless, I will try to edit my story some more and post it here in the future t try and make it closer to the concept of a Creepypasta/

The G &#38; P Trixie (talk) 20:21, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Adios
Goodbye, friend. nice knowing you. Alstinson (talk) 20:45, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Escuse me, but the story you just deleted, I'm Reading A Scary Story, I would like it to be undeleted. The fact is that every time I edited it to give paragraphs, It went back to a wall of text after I hit save changes. I need help with that, because that is what I believe is the only stories fault. Also, I cannot find turn off visual editor. So the site is actually causing the wall of text, when I made paraghraphs, and turn off visual editor is no where in site. Sincerely,                                                                                                                                                                        Christopher Michael RIchardson Christopher Michael Richardson (talk) 23:24, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

hi i like your avatar

aliens are real 03:48, May 26, 2015 (UTC)Platychief

GREETINGS EMPYREALINECTIVE
I was just wondering if I could ask you something...

Can stories have the same title?

Th3.5cu1p7ure (talk) 05:39, May 26, 2015 (UTC) Th3.5cu1p7ure

Short story publishing query
Hi Empy - I've recently decided to enter an online writing competition, and I want to use a pasta which I have written. Specifically, this story. However, the rules in the competition state that the submitted article must not be published anywhere else online, and I'm pretty sure they will check.

Is it possible if you could delete the entire page? Will it appear in search engines?

(And if you wouldn't mind critiquing it a little before you deleted it, I would be over the moon.)

Cheers

<font color="white" style="background-color: red;">Rinskuro13 09:28, May 26, 2015 (UTC)Rinskuro13

Ref: deletion query
Alright, thank you.

Do you think the Creepypasta website counts as a 'reputable literary site' which I can reference if I want to start a writing career or something? I know there is some controversy surrounding this site, especially with what happened earlier (slenderman killing incident) ...:/...

<font color="white" style="background-color: red;">Rinskuro13 19:12, May 26, 2015 (UTC)Rinskuro13

Pestering Time
Hi, I was reading a protected article called Herobrine and I'm pretty sure I spotted an error in it. The error being that perused was used in place of pursued. Actually, there's also a comma in place of a period in that sentence as well. Here's the sentence and the one before it for context: "He didn't stay long, he looked at me and quickly ran into the fog. I perused out of curiousity, but he was gone,"

I apologize in advance if errors are left on purpose in historical articles for historical purposes. I just thought I'd point that out. Doom Vroom (talk) 23:05, May 26, 2015 (UTC)


 * Thank you, Empyre. Doom Vroom (talk) 23:09, May 26, 2015 (UTC)


 * Will do! Being banned is a small price to pay for proper grammar (unless I'm being banned to the Phantom Zone). Doom Vroom (talk) 23:12, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

The Monsters You've Created
Hey, I'd just like to say thanks for even considering my story on this site, regardless of it being turned down. Unfortunately, the story was too difficult of a task for me to handle (making a good FNAF story along with a well-written story in general) and I overestimated my abilities. Hopefully future work I will post or existing content of mine on this site (April 12th Mind Story and Revolution) are and will be better and up to your standards. Again, thank you for your time.

Sshakenbakee (talk) 02:18, May 27, 2015 (UTC)Sshakenbakee

Email Sent
Hopefully the email/interview was sent. MrDupin (talk) 09:28, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

A Favor
Could you please archive my old talk page and then move my archives to my new username? I'm pretty sure that they're protected, so if you could, that would be appreciated. Thanks~ Senjumaru Shutara 10:10, May 27, 2015 (UTC)
 * Done. 11:02, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re:
I see, that makes sense. I can understand it's hard for a user-run site to host 100% outstanding work, but I do agree that things have been getting better over time, especially when those certain users realise that this isn't a place to post crap and get tired. I might give my pastas a chance when it comes to referencing.

And also, video game project? Sound epic! Enlighten me.

<font color="white" style="background-color: red;">Rinskuro13 11:35, May 27, 2015 (UTC)Rinskuro13