User talk:Dorkpool/Archive 1

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SOMEGUY123 (talk) 22:06, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Clown Dogs
Hey, Dorkpool. I just wanted to say thanks for telling people to read my pasta. There's so much out there (and a lot of it is really good, way better than I thought it would be when I came to this site last week) that it's hard to get noticed at all. Yeah, I'll tell you straight up- I know nothing of photo-shop, but my sister replaces heads on her pictures (to make them look better) and I figured if she can do it so could this girl. Anyway, thanks for the publicity     }:)

HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 22:34, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

No problem. Always glad to give constructive criticism. And keep up the good work.

Dorkpool (talk) 14:26, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

New Pasta
Hi, Dorkpool. I just wanted to let you  know that I published a new pasta- The Abalone Thief. I worked really hard on it and even included photos I had taken. Check it out if you get a chance and let me know what you think. Thanks so much

HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 20:32, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

Email
Hey Dorkpool,

Noticed that you asked for emails to go along with pasta Riff requests. Figured I would send you mine, although I promise you I won't get offended and swear my wrath. Feel free to have fun with it, because like I always say, there is no such thing as bad exposure.

Email: banningk1979@gmail.com

Banningk1979 (talk) 21:30, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Alrighty then. Thanks for having a sense of humor. I'll email my Riff once I'm done.

Dorkpool (talk) 21:33, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks bro!
I appreciate you taking the time to riff on my story. I agree with you that it is a pretty funny story when you think about it.

Again, thanks for the riff.

Best,

Banningk1979 (talk) 22:58, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Hey, no problem. Thanks for giving me the opportunity to do the Riff. It was literally my pleasure.

Anyway, I'm going to post it now, with the intro and everything.

And thanks for having a sense of humor.

Sincerely,

Dorkpool (talk) 23:15, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe you'll like this one better
Maybe you'll like this one better-  Looks like We Got a Live One Here, Boys HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 18:36, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

As a Riff or a review?

Dorkpool (talk) 22:23, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

New story
Hey bro, if you get a chance, I wrote a new story, Tobit: The Bleeding Sky, give it a read and leave me your thoughts.

Banningk1979 (talk) 02:06, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

New Poltergeist movie trailer out
Trailer for the new Poltergeist movie is out- waiting for a review HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:21, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

Your Blog
Had to delete your blog as there wasn't anything in it. Are you having issues with publishing it? 13:58, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

I reposted it with content. Sorry about all that.

Dorkpool (talk) 14:27, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

I'm IN
THANK YOU so much for the compliment! IM IN ONE HUNDRED PERCENT

Okay, thanks. This is going to be awesome! Alstinson (talk) 00:39, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

I have to know now, which ones did you like. Alstinson (talk) 00:46, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks so much man means a lot. In the process of reading your squidwards suicide riff Alstinson (talk) 01:10, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

What would be a good time to drop by your email to discuss the project. Alstinson (talk) 01:11, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

You made a lot of good points in your Squidward's Suicide riff. Why DID he go back? LOL

Alstinson (talk) 02:47, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Nice Riffs!
So I checked out a few of your riffs and i gotta say, I find them hilarious! My favorite so far is the Squidward's Suicide riff. For me, while S.S is historically significant to Creepypasta culture, i will say that looking at the pasta today, it hasn't aged very well. I may check out your riff on Smile Dog next. Keep up the good work!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 04:55, February 24, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 04:55, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

You're Welcome!
Yeah! I like how you distinguish the parts where you talk with italics. It really helps separate the story from your comments. By the way, can you sign your posts so i can reply to them easier?

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 16:36, February 24, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 16:36, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Italics" message
No Problem! If i find a bad story, i may send you the link to the pasta to see if you think it's riff worthy. My favorite genres of pastas are: "Lost Episodes", "Dreams/Sleep", and "Experiments". I might find some bad pastas in there that aren't historical archive. I might even send you my reviews on them.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 19:27, February 24, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 19:27, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Replying to the Replies of Replingness" message
I might have you take a look at RapRat since that happens to be a "Dreams/Sleep" and a "Lost Episode" pasta all in one. Here's the link to the pasta: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Rap_Rat. Enjoy!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 17:37, February 25, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 17:37, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Next Tobit chapter is posted
Hey brother,

The next chapter in my Tobit series is posted and ready for review!

Tobit: Blood and Obligations

Banningk1979 (talk) 07:31, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks!
No Problem! I'm always glad to find riff material. Anyway, can you link me to that "Poison" story? I wonder what's in the story... Hmm... maybe it contains Hyper Realistic Piggys who said the line: "Don't eat all the poi, son!" or maybe it's a Pokepasta about the origin of either Koffing, Ekans, or Grimer.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 18:00, February 26, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 18:00, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Poison" message
Oh My God! I thought you were talking about a story or something! Whoops! Silly me! Yeah i heard something about a girl who goes by the name "Poison" on one of your riffs or something. I guess i forgot about that for a minute! Yeah I'm busy working on a creeypasta myself. It's been peer reviewed and i'm making a few changes to the story.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 21:42, February 26, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 21:42, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Creepypasta" Message
Yeah I'll send it to you either by Email or by Pastebin once it's done and has the kinks worked out. It has taken me awhile to write it. Then again, a wise person once said "In order to do something right, it takes time." The most i'll say about it is that i want it to be a combination of a Lost Episode and a Dreams/Sleep pasta that relies on psychological horror. I did hear back from the person who's peer reviewing the story with me and they said that they will send me their thoughts on where the story should go in chapter 5.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 00:25, February 27, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 00:25, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Email" message
Ok. Thanks for informing me of your preferred communication method! That will make it so much easier on me when i'm sending it to you.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 02:25, February 27, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 02:25, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Multi-reply" message
Well, it looks like i have found more riffing material for you: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Hooked I think i'm getting real good at this! I can't beleive how much material i found for you so far! Also, is Poison going to be doing the riffs on this account for a time being? Is Poison the one who did the Harley Quinn riff? Just curious.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 03:52, February 27, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 03:52, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

About the pasta "Hooked"
I think i might've sent you a pasta called "Hooked". Well here's my review of it: Um... Okay, i have a few things to say about this pasta:

Pros: 

* The pasta's short length was nice. When I read this, I was suprised to see that there were only six journal enties written for this pasta. You see, When i think of a Lost Episode pasta that uses the Diary/Journal entry format, I instantly think of 1999. While I do think 1999 is a great pasta, The artificial extension kind of made the pasta decline in quality and makes me feel as though it has overstayed its welcome. For a person who tends to like longer Creepypastas, I didn't mind the short length of the pasta and felt like it is just right and avoided dragging itself out.

Cons: 

* Cliches relating to Satan, 666, etc don't make a pasta any more creative, scary, or entertaining. In fact, when you add in these cliches, it takes the reader out of the story and makes it seem rather laughable. Here are a few examples of this i found in the story: (1): "Not only was his name strange, but it was a code. If you scramble the letters a little, you get something dark: Satan the Devil." (2): "I went on Google and found a Wikipedia article stating that Tanas was born on June 6, 1976. In date form, it is 6-6-6. Or 666. He IS the devil. " This is the same problem I had with another Creepypasta called "Necrosleep". Overall, I found this to be a rather unenjoyable pasta. While I admire the pasta for keeping itself short and sweet, it wasn't enough to save the pasta from being terrible. Keep this in mind, whenever I review a pasta, I try my best to find the pros and cons of the pasta. For me, If the the only good thing about your pasta is the length, then you really need to go back and try again.
 * I think the story is trying to make the protaganist more paranoid as the story progresses but for me, it happens WAY too fast. Now I don't have a problem with stories like this if done right. However, while i don't mind the short length of this pasta, this type of story doesn't seem very suitable for a short pasta because the transformation seems rather rushed and abrupt. To improve this, you could've done one of two things. 1) Extend the length of the pasta to flesh out the protaganist and give the audience the time to experience what they're going through. 2) Take out this element and replace it with something more suitable for a short length pasta.

Reply to "Teacup" message
Thanks for clearing up some confusion! I'll go find her account now. Also, I'll keep finding riff material for you... I'll look in the "Dreams/Sleep" catagory for more duds.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 15:20, February 27, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 15:20, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Name" message
Oh sure! You can use either TheAzumangaDaiohFan or Hailey Sawyer. Whichever one you're most comfortable with. By the way, how come there are no Creepypastas or horror movies for that matter that feature Geese as horrible monsters? I say this because not only are they needlessly agressive, but they also produce 1-2 pounds of excrement a day. I have a bunch of geese where I live and they are terrorists. America, if you want to win the war on terror, please eliminate all of the geese first!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 17:53, February 27, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 17:53, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Geesypasta" Message
Lol xD love the heading title! Anyway, thanks for adding my name in your newest blog. I also left you a comment on the blog as well. I don't know if you saw it yet, but if you do, um.... Thanks! Maybe someone will make a Geesypasta. I might make the pasta when I finish my new Creepypasta. I don't know when that will be though. However, I'll take my time with it to make it as good as I possibly can, even if it takes a long time.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 18:54, February 27, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 18:54, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Inspiration for "GeeseyPasta"
http://www.buzzfeed.com/chelseac16/proof-that-geese-are-actually-demon-spawn-from-hel-bi8s#.vupkaxemL.

http://www.fearof.net/fear-of-ducks-phobia-anatidaephobia/

http://globerove.com/canada/canadian-geese-dangerous-attacks/10694

Reply to "Miss Mosaic" message
Yeah I will admit that the part where the protaganist said they wouldn't dive into blood or gore was rather distracting. I feel like the author was trying to be something like this: "Hey Guys! I'm so meta! Screw blood and gore cuz that's what periods are for! Am I clever yet?" Yeah when somebody says something like: "Don't worry! You won't find the hyper realistic crap you see in those OTHER pastas here! LOL!" It's rather distracting and just takes me right out of the story for a moment. Yeah other than that, I enjoyed this pasta. I think if more Lost Episode pastas were like 1999 and Miss Mosaic, then i think people would enjoy the Lost Episode genre more. I did a review of Miss Mosaic in the comment section on that page. I can dig it up for you if you want.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 22:53, February 27, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 22:53, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to that reply on "Miss Mosaic"
Yeah I do like a few Lost Episode pastas. Right now there seem to be less than 105 left on this wikia alone. Yet there's plenty more on Spinpasta. I've read a few on there and from what i've read so far they range from mediocre to UUUGH!! Here: http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Category:Lost_Episodes

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 01:36, February 28, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 01:36, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Replyception message
Well, 1999 is one of those "Historic" pastas that still manages to stand the test of time unlike Squidward's Suicide. That pasta does have a lot to like about it. Anyway, Spinapasta is more catered towards people who enjoy Lost Episode pastas which I don't mind, but it doesn't make the stories any less mediocre or awful. I also had this idea for a Pokemon Theorypasta. So I'm sure you know about Lavender Town from the Gen 1 (Red, Green, Yellow, and Blue), right? Basically, this is the town that spawned pastas such as Lavender Town Syndrome. Well, in this town you go into the Pokemon Tower that holds the graves of dead Pokemon. You first fight your rival on the second floor and then progress to the next floor. It's here that the trainers you face (The Channelers) are possesed ghosts in the tower. But here's where the theory kicks in. What truly caused the possessions to happen? Was it the unresting spirit of Cubone's mother? Did the Channelers do some sort of ritual? Was it related to Mr. Fuji getting kidnapped? I don't know if someone else has made a pasta of this yet but if not, someone should. If the pasta is well written, contains few cliches, and is engaging, then I think it can work. What do you think?

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 02:30, February 28, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 02:30, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Idea" message
Oh ok then. Do you know anyone that knows anything about Lavender Town though? If so, can you tell me who they are? By the way, i've been looking into the "Ritual" pasta catagory and there might be some riffing material there. There is one about a mysterious diner in Wyoming that's basically stuck in a timewarp. If you enter, you'll be transported back to the 1950's or something. When I read it, I found it to be rather ridiculous. It's quite short but I think you'll love coming up with material for it. Here: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_50%27s_Restaurant.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 18:12, February 28, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 18:12, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Short" message
If the pasta is supposed to be a joke, I think someone should move it to the Trollpasta wiki then. Anyways, I'll ask Poison about Lavender Town then.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 20:32, February 28, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 20:32, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "CREEPYCAPS.ugh" message
I may show that pasta to one of the admins on this site, like UnderScore or Empy. By the way, do you need a hug? Here, i'll give you one! *Hugs Dorkpool* I sent Poison a message about the Poketheory and I hope to hear back from her soon. in the meantime, keep on riffin'.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 02:11, March 1, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 02:11, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Frustration" message
Thanks! *gives Dorkpool a million hugs* Here, i'll riff a line from Pearl.avi for you because you're so awesome. Here's the line: "Well now that we have the introduction all settled I'd like to let you all know that I have, or rather had, a very rare copy of a SpongeBob episode written by none other than Steven Hillenburg." Me: 'But then everything changed when the fire nation attacked! '

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 02:35, March 1, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 02:35, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Googilan hugs" message
Wow! That's a lotta hugs! I may get around to it sometime but my hands are a bit full with my Creepypasta and homeschooling work and whatnot. But yeah, I've never done a text riff before but I'll try to make one anyway.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 02:50, March 1, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 02:50, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Pasta Noir Riff
Hmmmm.... I admit I'm flattered by your wanting to riff my story. I have read some of your riffs and enjoyed them. Yes I am proud of my story and I'm assuming you wouldn't be a Dick like pumped4fruit&dairy. I can handle criticism and riffs, I would see it as like my story meing roasted. I would absolutely be honored if you riffed it. Thanks for asking permission... Definately a classy move there. Go right ahead and thank you for reading that monster! Be sure and post that you have my full permission to riff or some of the other users may come to my defense as they did in pump's terrible review. Just saying. Let me know when you have the first done. Thanks again. Blacknumber1 (talk) 17:27, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Hello
Hey man, I am so glad you liked my story He Was a New Man, thanks. Be sure to check out The Long List which people really seem to like as well. Do you really speak Klingon? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:07, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Riff request
Hey, buddy. How about a riff of that story I just asked you to read? The Long List. It's pretty fucking dark, but, you know, I've been reading a few of your riffs, and, man, you're on fire! Some comedy juxtaposed with that darkness might be real fun. Best regards, bro HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:52, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Archive" message
Oh yeah! I read it just now... I'm still learning how the whole "Archive" thing works. In fact, someone else had archived my talk page for me. What a nice person! They deserve a Baymax hug!



Hailey Sawyer (talk) 18:33, March 2, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 18:33, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Baymax Hug" message
I'm suprised that no one has thought of hugs as a solution to war before. Yeah, i'm watching Titanic right now. It's the James Cameron one. I guess I'm too lazy to change the channel in the morning. #NightOwlsForever Oh My God! A Titanic Creepypasta! Someone make that a thing!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 15:23, March 3, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 15:23, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

About the riffs
I wanted to get your permission if I could start my own riffing series in the blogs; but it will be with fanfictions, not creepypasta. I know it's not a major thing, but I don't want anyone to feel like I'm stealing your thunder. lol --&#34;The good mean well. We just don&#39;t always end up doing well.&#34; ~ Isaac (talk) 18:21, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Titanic Pasta" message
Oh! Then it turns out Jack was Slenderman or something! Lol! Or maybe it could be a pasta about a recovered diary from one of the passengers on the Titanic or something. Lol! I'm imagining Slendy's face plastered over Jack's face, like that picture of Elsa you have on your profile page.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 18:02, March 4, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 18:02, March 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Slendy Titanic" message
Ooh! I have an idea... Jeff the Iceburg! Then again, someone should make the Iceburg the villan of a Titanic adaptation... Like SNL did with its adaptation of Titanic. You know, Jason Vorhees, Freddy Kruger, and Leatherface have NOTHING on the Iceburg! The Iceburg killed more people than Jason, Freddy, and Leatherface combined! With that said, I feel bad for the Iceburg not being a classic villan character.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 17:36, March 5, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 17:36, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Fairytale
I have just written the sweetest little fairytale. It is just charming. Enjoy hehehe Rumplestilskin HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 22:22, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Slender Jack" message
Lol! That picture made my day! Yeah the Iceburg is underrated.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 15:11, March 6, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 15:11, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re Fairy tale
Hahahahaha- tricked you! Yeah, that was definitely some fucked up shit. I want it riffed but not now. Let it sink in for a bit. I'll let you know when. I'm actually looking forward to it, I think your joviality and my utter darkness make a great pair together. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 17:16, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Photoshop" message
Thank you! On another note, whenever I click on the box that says "You have New Messages" it no longer takes me to my talk page. Instead, it takes me to an empty message wall. So basically, the senario can be summed up like this:


 * Sees the "New Messages" box and clicks on it*


 * The page is redirected to an empty message wall*

Wayne:...Not!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 17:19, March 7, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 17:19, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Glitchpasta" message
Well I just got back to my dad's house and it turns out that same glitch is also present on my computer's layout of the Creepypasta wiki. Oh yeah, if somebody DOES make a Creepypasta out of this glitch then they should call it: ''The Tale of The Taunting Glitch. ''That's all I got for today.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 21:07, March 8, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 21:07, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

I may riff Raprat
Ok. I thought about what pasta I wanted to riff on and I think Raprat is going to be the story of choice. I have thought of a few good jokes for the pasta in question. I know I sent the pasta to you as a request for a possible riff, but I really want to do the riff. Granted I've never done a "Text Riff" before but nevertheless, it should still be a fun experience to try something new.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 00:18, March 9, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 00:18, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Rap Rat" message
No, it's ok. We can riff on the same pasta as long as I don't rip off what you said. I got some of my own jokes up my sleeve. By the way, I didn't notice it. Maybe it's recently uploaded and usually takes awhile for the Wikia to show it as a new entry? Ah... The quirks of Wikia. By the way, do you use the "create a new blog post" editing page to riff the pastas or do you use a seperate text program and then paste it onto the editing page?

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 00:27, March 9, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 00:27, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Smartass" message
So I have this line in my riff and I can't really think of another game that gave me nightmares besides the one in the line: Ever heard of "Nightmare?" 'Yeah, I have! But where I'm from, it's called Five Nights at Freddy's. '

Oh my god! The glitches gave me an idea for a musical parody: "If there's strange glitches in your neighbourhood... Who ya gonna call? Glitchbusters! If there's something weird and it don't look good, who can ya call? Glitchbusters!"

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 01:13, March 9, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 01:13, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Regarding the "Rap Rat" riff
Ok, so since there are a couple of parts to the pasta, I'm going to split my riff up into two or three parts since the pasta is a bit much for me to tackle all in one part. Plus, it gives me more time to work on jokes for said pasta.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 02:38, March 9, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 02:38, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

The riff is finished!
So I finished my riff on the first part of the RapRat pasta! I may send it to you to look over... Can you send me your email if you didn't already?

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 06:32, March 9, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 06:32, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Disregard My Last Message
Here's a pastebin link to the riff to make it easier for you: http://pastebin.com/SHS43g8M

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 08:02, March 9, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 08:02, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Riff" message
Ok. The riff is now uploaded onto the Creepypasta wiki. Here's the link to it: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:TheAzumangaDaiohFan/Azu_Riffs:_Rap_Rat_3/8/15

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 17:19, March 9, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 17:19, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Idea" message
Sure! That's sounds interesting... I need to work a bit more on my Creepypasta first though. I'll give it some thought. I may need to go back and read BEN Drowned... Hey! Wait a minute! I see a pun here! Me: So... it looks like this guy's *puts on some shades* BEN Drowned... The Who: YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! What was I saying? Oh Yeah! I need to go back and read Ben Drowned because it's been awhile since I read it.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 01:46, March 10, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 01:46, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Spider-Man" message
Sorry! I got hungry and ate the hyphen. I haven't BEN able to finish reading Ben Drowned because of the the length. My pasta has chapters and may be a bit long. I don't nessesarily have a problem with length. However, it can be a problem if the pasta is padded out or doesn't do a good job of keeping the reader interested.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 16:38, March 10, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 16:38, March 10, 2015 (UTC)