Talk:The Girl Standing at the End of Church Street/@comment-24218712-20131126222902

I couldn't actually post the origional the way it was before. As in properly formatted and such. So, my bad. I didn't really know how to work this site, since this is my first time posting anything here. However thank you everyone for the reviews. I know I am not a very good writer, but I was concerned about the fact that if I made it too long no one would read it and immediately give up once it took up too much space. If anyone want's to help me re-write this, or give me better ideas, you are welcome to. Thanks.