Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-27008899-20160513000114/@comment-27008899-20160513150602

Thanks Christian. I considered formating the story the way you suggested regarding the body being last. But I felt that the reader would already assume that, taking away the surprise that the husband was from another dimension. I thought this over and felt this was the best method, as well as the better reveal. I agree with the body comment about forgetting. Was trying to give a bit of insight to the ending, but I get your point. I will fix this. Thanks for your feedback.