Talk:The Ragged Man/@comment-26100710-20161004063457

Meh. Grammatical errors, and you're trying too hard. I highly doubt that's how you actually talk, and a wise professor once told me that your writing will seem convoluted and silly if you try to make it sound TOO intellectual. Always write the way you would talk and the flow will be so much better. This was just kind of a chore to read.