Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-28479573-20160517031609/@comment-34296765-20160521013527

I recommend adding humorous quips to the introduction and the end. It hooks people in and gets them all giddy, and unprepared for the horror that's about to come.

Also, instead of just zooming on one static image, build the atmosphere by adding multiple creepy images, and even a mini-video or so if it's possible. Music helps too.

Those are just my opinions, but if it helps you than great! Good luck.

(Here's some creepy music you could use:)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0YeeVhz_iXw

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Y6BDbkYNDE

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IwZeTUdSkB8

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MK84iaAjI2c