Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33893118-20171207184321/@comment-25941663-20171207191757

I am afraid this story does not meet the Quality Standards.

First of all it has technical issues like capitalization ("... not what i'm here ..."), apostrophe ("... It’s skinny ...") and dialogue punctuation ("... what I'd do without you. ...", I suggest you read this) issues.

The main issue though is the plot. It just isn't creepy and doesn't escape cliches, like the main character reading creepypastas. To get better at coming up with stories, I suggest you read stories on the Suggested Reading category and stories on my profile, under "Favourite Stories". There are a ton of fantastic stories there that will give you an idea of what we are looking for.

In order to get better, you need to practice more. You have the right mindset since you came here for feedback, so you just need to keep it up. Keep writing and reading and with time you will get better.

Happy writing!