Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-2240864-20140612220044/@comment-25036236-20140616222457

Firerock2245 wrote: I would redo the picture, make the story longer, fix the grammar, etc. So many things to do. But my #1 favourite thing to do would be to redo the characters' personalities. The bullies I would make more dimensonal. Jeff, well, I don't really know. He's somewhat dimensional. Liu, I would give more purpose. But, all in all, it would be fun to rewrite the Pasta. Also, why didn't Jeff go to Juvy? It was clearly him they saw fleeing the scene!!!