Talk:Alternate 21328/@comment-3541151-20150204152625

An amazing perspective of the story! It's as if all the plotholes of The Cell Phone Game were leading up to this. I won't write this off as the best CP ever, or anything, but it was such a great read, and much better than the original, and it knows it is.

Now, obviously, with the flaws and inconsistencies of the first one, the way Rottenbacher details it as "Jacks no-nothing perspective", is interesting, and true to the contrast of this one to the previous.

I like how their finally going in depth of the game, and while we understand more, we don't understand everything. This will make readers want to stick around for future swquels, if they can keep this quality.

I hope this gets more attention, because now the grand storytelling of The Cell Phone Game deserves to be told, and I look forward to the continuation. It's RARE, that a sequel to an unimpressive product will not only shock you with it's quality, but get you into the franchise!

While personally not my favorite pasta, it's high on my list. 8/10