Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24101790-20170204172123/@comment-25941663-20170204194834

I liked the new additions, especially the one about the fallen wanderer.

"tried to pull himself free and aI watched in horror" - The 'aI' in the middle should be 'I'.

"Due to t they" - A rogue 't' appears.

You used the word ululating twice. I suggest trying to find something different, as the word stands out and the repetition is more evident.