Talk:Day of the Worm/@comment-26112985-20160220061820

Fantastic. I very much enjoyed this piece and will soon begin to read your other works, KillaHawke.

The plot of this story is brimming with potential. I can see this story going in many different directions. I also really liked the idea of telling a tale through the monologue of one person. While Jay Ten was an admin on this site, he had a pasta using the same idea that was brilliant. But what grabs my attention here, and really makes me admire your talent, is the imagery. You were able to illustrate a picture with words in a way that shows a lot of talent. Very impressive.

"I see a day in which black rain falls from the sky. A downpour of ropy strands of greenish-black tar pours from the clouds. Its touch brings corrosion and decay upon all it falls upon."

Awesome. Keep writing.