Talk:A Figure in the Fog/@comment-27052708-20151008130656

Nice story to give people something to think about. Sadly you started it off kinda weird. In my opinion, you switched from having a story about a abusive father and how i gets to a point where the mother is talking about leaving if the father did anything else to Jamie or Lester, to them going to the Wicker House and trying to make the sprit return where it belonged. Maybe if you some how were able to merge them with adding a little more content than it would've made more sense to me.

4/10