Talk:The Smiling Man/@comment-27675561-20160125191049

i feel like this story is missing a lot of elements. SHe got the stalking part down really well and the creepy part. but I don't feel like there was a good build up or a good climax to the story there. Sounds like someone had a nightmare, crawled out of bed, and wrote the story down. And then posted it. but- If that's the case- If it's just supposed to be a short creepy component, I think it was done well.