Talk:My Wife/@comment-24917464-20140508133335

Few comments: first, there is an error in tense(past, present). "I didn't want to go on, but here I am typing this. So, since I wanted..." Went from past-tense, to present, and back to past, or was is past, present, past, present, pa-... whatever. Simply put, keep the tense in check.

And second&lastly, what a useless husband. Doesn't matter if your wife turns out to be a 'ghoul', SHE'S YOUR GOD-GIVEN WIFE! A better person/man/husband would have accepted the fact that he married and fell in love with a ghoul and stuck with her/it through thick and thin. If there's anything to be afraid of in this story, it's not the gas that makes you hallucinate, it's the dark and evil acts man is capable of in times of stress.