Talk:Bank Robbers/@comment-25425104-20140924113822

I did a lot of revising to this article in the hopes of trying to make it better. If you don't want your feelings hurt, take this down and submit it to WW; so it can be further worked on. I LOVE the idea you have going on here, but the way it's written tells me blantly that it was rushed; mainly because it lacks descriptive words; in which I have attmepted to in put in various places of the Pasta. I fixed a few grammar errors as well, and I have a few opinions I'll gladly share with you via PM. Like I said, sumbit it to WW, before a mod finds it and has it removed. 7/10