Talk:The House at the Corner/@comment-1787373-20140515101851

This story is full of typos. You have words that don't need capitalization capitalized, and words that need it don't have it. It was an interesting story, but the mistakes did make it a little hard to follow. Fix the errors, and word it a little better and it'll be a great story. The flow wasn't really there but I liked the idea of the story.