Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26990009-20190501171912

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The following is full of previously classified information about an individual by the name of Peter Michaels. The subject was in his mid-twenties and was a Nintendo fanatic before events took place. The events he described included depressing imagery, uneasy feelings, and disturbing moments found on the cartridge which led to Michaels ending up there, however he goes into greater detail later on. What our search team found was a voice recorder with the title Sonic2.mp3 on the label. After reviewing the contents, it was found out that it contained the last recorded words between Michaels. The whereabouts of these two are unknown, however the therapist is confirmed to be missing.

The subject discusses buying a game cartridge at a popular flea market in his hometown. This cartridge was confirmed to have the same hardware as legitimate Sonic video game copies. Our team took many hours of research to uncover if any alterations to the cartridge could have been created, though they came up with no answers. Michaels goes on to discuss the sticker being torn and dulled in color, as if from overuse. He then begins talking about the title screen of the game, describing a very depressing color scheme with dark and unsaturated colors, and a rainy sky with a rusted Sonic the Hedgehog icon in the midst of it all. He soon begins to stumble over his words. He eventually is able to pull himself together and discuss with his therapist what happened with the cartridge. 