Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190621084611/@comment-26444017-20190622082230

Formatting errors: 'I stopped at Walmart the way home'; should have 'on' after 'Walmart'

'I quickly found what he was looking for'; should be 'what I was looking for'

'Pickle juice, a can of Coors and Pepsi'; should be another comma after 'Coors'

'I poured brake fluid in the fluid'; unsure. Maybe the second 'fluid' should be 'tank'?

'53-year-old Very Reverend'; never heard the term 'Very Reverend', but I may just be ignorant on this.

Great story overall. I really enjoyed it.the newspaper clipping adjustment was done well, really nade it stand out. Good shit.