Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25033184-20140608215811/@comment-25033184-20140610005639

Thanks for all your feedback, I geuss i'm going to have more work then I thought! but let me first explain some things:

@Noothgrush, an elipsis is made up of 3 periods I just happend to add 2 more, I dont know maybe for a longer pause? who knows what i was thinking at the moment, it was quite late. Also, it is in fact supposed to say "drugged" not "dragged" as in people who must take medication for certain issues in the mind? He was saying that he did not want to be put on any medications, not that he didn't want to be dragged to a point of insanity. Then there is the "heroes" misspelling in which i had correctly written but autocorrect would not leave me be and I believed that maybe I was wrong. Now i know i should have trusted my gut. Thank you for the pointers, I will go correct my many errors right now.

@Resident DeVir I actually didnt want to go into detail about his identity because I have been reading creepypastas for a while now, studying how different people write them, and I found that I liked the pastas that focused on the story instead of going into detail to introduce the character. So when I wrote it I was trying to shape the story to my idea of a good creepypasta. Anyways, thank you for the rest of the feedback!