Talk:You Are Mine/@comment-11386456-20140217060208

So he was the Disturbed mascot the whole time? lol In all seriousness, I thought this creepypasta was pretty good, but... well, I was with it right up until the end. The whole "I'm coming for you next" thing just always feels like a cheap attempt to make the reader feel fear, whereas the story should be able to do that on it's own. Other than that, it had some good build up and atmosphere. The part about him being the killer and the last two victims was a bit predictable, but a fitting way to tie everything together. I probably would have ended it with the main character racked with guilt over killing his friends, and deciding to prevent future bloodshed by killing himself. But, that's just my opinion. Overall, I'd give this a solid 8/10. Well done.