Talk:Brother's Treasure/@comment-33050632-20170907145654

9.5/10 I've been reading many many stories here and this is one of the few that really stands out imho. In fact it made me register to CP cos i just had to comment. Other comments do not give proper creds to this (admittedly quite long but totally worth it) story. Apparently it's been edited repeatedly so I cant judge earlier drafts, but except for some minor spelling errors the writing seemed just fine to me. Loved the story, turning points, different POV's and the empathic brotherly love. Beautifully layered, making me want to read on and on. Extra props for the demon's first getting to know the flaws of it's human host body, then discovering it's demon power. Also really liked the Frankie character, subtle but freaky. Not necessary for the story but not distracting, in fact only adding to the creepiness. Would love to read more about his past and future, should the writer find the time to get into that ;)