Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25036236-20140612132233

Here is the edited version of my pasta, "The Furtim Seductor"

There's just some changes, AND the photos are in.

Here is the pasta:

"Furtim Seductor" (Latin for "Stealthy Deceiver") is an entity of unknown gender, species, age, or origin. Its physical characteristics can be... well... anything. But its main characteristics is a human with pitch black skin, blood-red eyes, and a traumatizing smile. Reports say that the Furtim Seductor can take on a form of its victims' loved ones, thus gaining trust from its victim. It will even speak the victim's main language, even though its main language is Latin. Eventually, it will lead its victim to an unknown place where the two can be alone. When the Furtim Seductor reveals itself, it will cover the victims eyes and revert to its natural form. It will always be one foot taller than its victim. If there is more than one victim, however, it will be a foot taller than the tallest one, cover two of the victims eyes, and tell the others (if there are more than two) to turn around and cover their eyes. How it takes on forms is unknown, and how it kills its victims is also unknown. The Furtim Seductor also causes photo distortion while in its natural form, making it impossible to take photos of it.



A CNN reporter interviewed someone who was fortunate enough to escape the Furtim Seductor.

"I was with my girlfriend Julie one day. For the past 3 days, her eyes were slightly red, which I thought was because of allergies or tiredness. She told me to come to the woods with her. I asked her why, she said she wanted some "alone time" with me. I went along with her, and when we were pretty far in the woods, she put her hands over my eyes, and when she removed it, it wasn't her anymore. It was a pitch black figure, with red soul-piercing eyes, and sharp teeth, that showed off a horrifying smile. I ran, and told my parents what happened. I saw Julie again, she says that she was in some weird limbo ever since the 3 days started."

If the victim is six or younger, the Furtim Seductor will just torment the victim until the victim gives up and takes it.

"My daughter Anna, who is four, was gone one night. My wife Jennifer and I called the police. They investigated her room, and found a drawing."



The drawing was of the Furtim Seductor.

It is highly advised that if someone has slightly red eyes, then they should leave that person alone, because it could be the Furtim Seductor. And it is also advised that adults keep a watchful eye on young ones.

Here is how you tell Bloodshot eyes from The Furtim Seductor in disguise:

The first sighting of the Furtim Seductor was in Latium, Italy, where Latin is mostly spoken. Italians which live in Latium claimed that they saw it, which was the first time ever that the Furtim Seductor was reported.

They also claim, that before it kills its victim, it will say:

"Ave Satanas"

which, in Latin, means:

"Hail Satan 