Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20151004213335/@comment-25170312-20151005032414

Not So Quicksword Irene wrote: "but Owen and Drew only took a few each" So wouldn't the old crazy coot have gone after the other two kids for taking more than one? Other than that the story was pretty nice not spooky to me but still a nice read.

P.S : You're the bloke who wrote the story about dandelions correct? You have a point. Maybe I should take out the part about it being a trap and just make it that he snapped when someone took more than just a few. Something like, "I can deal with kids taking two or three, but the whole fucking bowl? You make me sick!" Not those exact words, but something similar perhaps.

And yeah, I'm the Dandelions guy, lol. I shelved that story.