Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180816103412/@comment-26444017-20180816105151

Personally, I had no problem with this. I thought it was written well, and the unfolding of events, though possibly a bit forced, are explaned by the supernatural force of the mirror. The ending is perfect, as it clears up everything that the beginning left vague. I wouldn't say you should scrap it. Seems like a goodie to me.