Talk:The Bell Chimed/@comment-25941663-20160923013926

Pretty good story. I kinda guessed the ending, but it didn't really matter. This was nicely written with great wording and pacing. It flowed smoothly all along.

The ending though is what really pushed this story forward. That last paragraph is an absolute work of art. Colorful, full of life and death, motion and atmospheric. One of the most poetic paragraph I've read on the site.

Well done, this was amazing.