Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-17739056-20140704170557/@comment-9967354-20140705141522

Hmm. Cut the sword? Its teeth are good 'nuff. I'm not good at thinking up monsters, though. So my suggestion is, however you change it, you could describe it more efficiently by comparing it to something almost comical. I'm not trying to mock it, here. I just think making it seem more fantastical will make the description -whatever it is- seem more legit, if that makes sense.