Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26250475-20150622061609/@comment-25037895-20150622211844

Repetitive wording. Examples:
 * I was awaked by a weird odor, the odor of flowers.
 * "Awaked" shows up four times early on.
 * "Odor" is used three times in the first and fourth paragraph.

Awkward wording:
 * Even it was at midnight, there should be weak light.
 * but I didn’t touch my switch, and my wall
 * the fear and the sanity stopped this crazy idea.
 * Maybe for my own safe
 * the garden in my dream, lying on the soil, with denser odor, cold breeze and plant rustle surrounding me.
 * Even her scream was turned into intermittent dry cry
 * she felt an extremely pain from her heart

Punctuation issues:
 * What in the world did that mean(?)!