Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20150728030040/@comment-25037895-20150728042641

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“Will you be with me when the time comes(?)” Caitlyn said.

“What happened out there(?)” he asked.

This and the dehydration cause(d)

Her face gnarled as she couched (coughed), and

she was able to lye (lay, lie) back

that should have been the first thing I should have noticed was wrong (used the word "should" twice)

I shined the flashlight into to (the) woods

we keep out (our) coven a secret

Again she sat closed her eyes. (wording issue)

He (His) face was thinner

So, I did the only think (thing) I

But I don’t think I was able to get away. I think they had done something to me when I couldn’t run any longer. (awkward wording)

I had gotten check (checked) in.

Morn (mourn) me, but don’t morn (mourn)

The storyline was gripping. Well done.