Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25477067-20150302182845/@comment-26114676-20150320221718

The only thing that really bothers me about this is the title. Skinwalkers are creatures that steal someone's skin and walk around pretending to be that person. I grew up less than five miles away from the Navajo reservation in Arizona. I was told all the lore, legends, and generally creepy stories from the old traditional Natives. Reading this disappointed me more than the movie 'Skinwalkers' disappointed every Navajo I knew in Arizona.

However, that's not to say that this story is bad. The concept is interesting and with a bit of work it has the potential to be a great story. Keep up the writing.