Talk:I Am a Big Boy/@comment-33089254-20170916004919/@comment-24101790-20170916050306

Lol, I meant to write bad on purpose, guys...

It seems like someone's already dissected your story which you're ignoring currently. How will my pointing out the misuse of "For I whither amongst the bones of defeat" convince you to attempt to improve your writing given all we've seen of you recently?