Talk:They Came/@comment-24391646-20140623051833

7/10

Honestly I feel it needs more story. I could basically sum this up in just a few sentences. I love pastas where there are so many details that I just dont want to leave out when I tell them again. More orginality needed here. Make it something for me to remember. Not just

They came to his house

They got him

They killed him

Maybe hes a ghost now