Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26097514-20150210225459/@comment-26007602-20150213001700

There is no indication this is a poem. However, I believe most of my points still stand (Except the sentence fragment bit).

In addition, I think it is very difficult to determine this is a poem, as it lacks any meter or rhyme. Rhyme isn't required, but it is usually a good idea to add to give it a better flow. Poetry typically doesn't use much punctuation and almost never has more than one sentence per line.

Now I hate poetry. That being said, even I realize that this poem needs meter or some kind of prose. Just because you write one sentence per line, doesn't make it a poem. I honestly couldn't tell you how to induce meter; you'll need someone else to help you with that. Read some poetry from Poe if you don't get what I'm talking about.

Poetry (At least on this wiki) should also be thought provoking, or have some kind of deeper meaning. This has neither. All you're doing is telling an incredibly vague story of some monster. As I said, you need to do more with this story to make it work, because there's nothing creepy or thought-provoking about this at all in its current state.