Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30728029-20170514140718/@comment-27838637-20170514143839

First thing's first; your story has numerous capitalization and spacing errors.

"(I) think we should commit genocide against Japanese people.Maybe nuke them again(?)

Your final sentence should have a question mark as it poses a question, not a statement.

As for the story itself, I think it is much too short. There is no real story here, and unfortunately there are almost no horror elements. The title doesn't really relate to what little story is written, so it's hard to provide any feedback at all. Realistically more sentences could be added to lengthen this up and provide a more intriguing story, whilst also actually relating anime to the creepypasta.

On a side note I don't think swear words are allowed to be in the title of a story. I could be wrong, you may need to confirm this with an admin.

Ultimately I think this story will not pass the minimum quality standards of the wikia. Even if you did apply the critiques I gave you, the story would pale in comparison to the other micropasta on the site, as they need to be exceptionally good quality to be accepted on the wikia.