Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20180915053007/@comment-36393004-20180915054725

Ok, I have to admit that was really well writen and was fun to read but there are modifications it will need to fit in as a following chapter so that it flows with what came before it. Honestly, this is how it should have started. It is more vague and leaves the following authors room for interpretations. Did you read the notes regatding stipulations of how the house is different to each person? Just curious. Your Gatekeeper starts off slightly different than the one that we began with but becomes the same a few paragrapghs in. You can feel the frustration in his words. Regardless of the outcome, be proud of what you have written here.