Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24463401-20150101223446/@comment-25665684-20150101235154

Very clever and well-written! I can't think of anything you could change, really; your style and grammar are impeccable. I think it's good to go, but the last sentence bugs me a little. How does the author know the thoughts aren't his and that he doesn't exist? Maybe you meant to leave that question open. Nevertheless, great story.