Talk:That Which Watches/@comment-1705775-20151224062719

nice concept but Giygas speech isn't always the best way to bring an otherworldly element to a monster, I think all "dark" fiction writers are guilty of it at some point but there's a wide variety of speaking patterns and sounds that can bring out a creepy factor and don't remind us as much of Zalgo and the ilk.

Try high-pitched infantile voice, child-like speech patterns, gurgling, a voice that switches between masculine and feminine.. stuff like that.