Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33795301-20171204011353/@comment-5952769-20171208114640

The pillar could use more development. I wasn't sure why it was so important.

As for where to publish the story online, I'm sorry to say I don't have much experience with that. If you're really ambitious, you could try sending it to a magazine or e-zine that publishes short science fiction.