Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26193563-20150622185523/@comment-26475800-20150622210841

Although, everyone else had already killed the idea of your ending, which it was very predictable, but it also wasn't a terrible way to end the story. You do need to make us care about who is getting killed or why they are being killed. Show how much of a bitch this woman is, show some of the evil things she had done. Personally, this story was far from being one of my favorites, mostly because of the subject matter, but it could be made better and into something that could work. Keep plugging away and you will get it.