User blog comment:Underscorre/Jeff the Killer Rewrite Contest!/@comment-25547916-20151007014246/@comment-6554265-20151007024248

Love the writing, and I love how realistic and casual it is. Realistic dialogue and interaction between characters, the hilarity that the horrid shit that is the original JTK was written by an angsty bullied teen (I myself especially find it funny since I theorized Jeff was a self insert of the anonymous author since the beginning), and the ending is genuinely creepy. I have to admit, though, I kinda wish the ending strayed more into tradition, (Jeff embracing his psychopathy and becoming an efficient serial killer, starting with the bullies and his family), but this works too.