Talk:Necrosleep/@comment-1901106-20171010191429/@comment-44396263-20191112230903

I agree with almost everything but I don't think it's long intro is bad. I think without the long detailed introduction to Reed this story would have been very bad. The long build up is cool to me. However, the progression from his normal life to insanity due to the pills is way too predictable and rapid. I think Reed being a miserable loner is relatable and it's a good thing that the main protagonist isn't always your everyday person but this time more like a lost junkie.

And yea the satanistic shit is too tryhard and unfitting.