Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140906061925/@comment-24996913-20140906063715

Nommehzombies wrote: Oooo I liked this. I think there needs to be a little bit more to the story when what I assume was a Grim Reaper of sorts came into her room, and maybe just add a little more here and there, but other than that, pretty solid.

Thank you. I do feel I need to deepen the reaper a bit. I'll definitely take that advice. :)