Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24982950-20160320171614/@comment-24859608-20160320212400

The Cyborg Pie wrote: Not sure how you could overdo and rush something, but overall you make good points, so thanks man. I think I picked up over explaining things from english at school perhaps?

I've an idea for that creepy element to chess You want things to flow, and feel natural. That can take some time, rather than two sittings. There are also a lot of grammar and formatting errors, but I'd get someone like Empy to look at that.