Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24773406-20140408125155/@comment-24190515-20140414194319

Your writing style is reminiscent of Jack Kerouac, but not in a good way. The lack of (and misuse of) proper punctuation made it impossible for me to read beyond the third paragraph. I wish that I could give some positive criticism, but until you add some punctuation and run a spell check, I really can’t.