Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20151011060730/@comment-27012445-20151011194026

It was kind of hard to follow. Like the statement "those zombies never died." It took me a couple of times to get the context of the zombies still being alive as opposed to they would not die. I didn't understand Brian's role. Was he a doctor, did he send a patient out for a bite to eat? The end could be worded better to be more clear.