Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36877863-20181130182930/@comment-36877863-20181203223858

BloodySpghetti;

You've said your piece. I've legitimately considered the points you brought up. And all that being said, you have mostly just told me the story was bad and that I should rewrite the whole thing according to your specifications. You have been sarcastic and mocking in a situation where it was in no way necessary.

"A bad attempt to confuse me, I guess..."

"iTs JuSt A sToRy"

"Uh, you asked me for help..."

"The whole thing is just too obvious"

"this is way too easy"

I believe you that you are trying to help, but you could have said any or all of these things in a direct but non-aggressive way. I would welcome your feedback, but not your confrontation.