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Well. Thank you for your response and critique. It is an old and not so infamous pasta anyway. My apologies if Carnation County didn't meet up to your "quality standards." I'll take your critique as a lesson on writing better stories. Plus, yes. I've overused the ellipse punctuation to simply create a dramatic atmosphere for the reader. My apologies for that as well. Unfortunately, Carnation County was not original as well. Since you've took your time to read it, you might have caught a bit of Candle Cove and Suicide Mouse in the pasta. This pasta wasn't meant to "rip off" any successful CreepyPasta that was done by other creative authors. Though it may have served as an inspiration or admiration to those authors. Hopefully I'll create a more original and "Heart Stopping" CreepyPasta in the future. For now though, thank you again for your critique and response to my question.