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I feel like it needs more details to give it a feel. I don't even have a general feel for the where of it, not even the part of the country or even for sure what country.

I would consider an ending of not where the guy fled but since it was an ultra-cheap rent controlled building he stayed and ... what happened with green hands later. At least it might lead to a twist and an elevation of the story. Why are the green hands staying in the building? Why do they want water? What are they afraid of?