Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-8205697-20161012233014

Even a reworking shows just how bad this story is. You did the best you could with the material and it's still awful. Not your fault, this just isn't a frightening story at all and never has been.

Having said that, I liked what you did by changing the original from the kid's party (? never understood that at all)  to the visit at Randy's house, that whole segment was well done and adds a ton to the finished product. You also got me there--I was thinking that Randy wasn't a complete ass--so good job!

When there's no image attached, the fact that this story just isn't scary is even more painfully obvious.

Jeff the Killer is DOA as a story.