Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181003190023/@comment-36393004-20181004172220

Ok, caught up on what you have posted so far. I am really getting into this and will try to keep up with the coming entries. I really want to know what happens with Ben. As for any critique, I would go back over the first part of this. There is a few times where you don't capitalize Ben's name, words at the beginning of a quote, and there was one or two points where the word was supposed to have "ed" at the end but had "es" instead. Just minor things.