Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27078981-20151015012400/@comment-26908800-20151015073444

Your spelling is fine, the only problem you have is reduplication of ideas.

Exs. "this one had a brand new door and padlock locking it" The word "padlock" indicates something is locked. So just leaving it as, "this one had a brand new door with a padlock" is fine.

" which snapped it clean without effort" you can drop the "which" and leave it at "it snapped clean without effort." Written English can be done with more brevity than conversational English.

Just edit it with an eye towards things like that. Not that there are many.