Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-39934715-20190703002936/@comment-39934715-20190703141919

DrBobSmith wrote: https://www.grammarly.com I know I am the killjoy of everything, but you've got to clean up the spelling, punctuation and grammar errors. Please spend the time to do so. It wouldn't stay long on the main Wiki with this number of mistakes, no matter how good the overall story is. Grammarly will spot about half the errors that I see, but even just that will help a lot. It's not a perfect tool, but it does help.

Too many of the sentences are far too convoluted and run-on as well. This is a good example.

Ever since coming home from the accident, she would make a routine out of coming downstairs wasted, taking her meds, and locking herself in her room for the rest of the day before coming out high in the middle of the night to fuck with me.

I've been using http://www.hemingwayapp.com/ recently, and it a good job of identifying some types of errors, especially run-on sentences and overuse of adjectives. Alright, I'll work on cleaning it off. What did you think of the story itself, though?