User blog:Caravanoflives/Help with editing

Hi. I may be a bit new to writing but I have gotten some reviews from English majours and I hope to get different riviews from other aspiring writers like you people. If you have any poointers for me I will appreciate it. I mostly write things about anything Supernatural. I will appreciate any help. In exchange I would like to help you all with your own. Please any feedback wll be welcomed.