User blog comment:Banningk1979/Writer's Lounge Part 4: An Interview with EmpyrealInvective/@comment-5632489-20141201235846/@comment-24101790-20150104211427

You monsters! I guess a deal's a deal. You set to work in the writer's workshop reviewing stories and as I must uphold my end of the bargain... Here.

The story has been spaced so it is no longer a wall-o-text and commentary has been added in parenthesis. I also attached the foreword I wrote with that as an added bonus as a way of saying sorry, for the late upload. Enjoy what you have wrought, the worst story to have ever been written.