Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-11243334-20151109014719/@comment-27176417-20151109122722

I love this creepypasta. It does have some issues, like some parts of the story feel like a drag but honestly the the good things about it well over come these issues. The excellent use of characterisation creates a bond with the characters, actually making you care about what happens to the characteristation. I'll be reading the next creepypasta you post (if you decide to making more creepypastas) thats for sure.