Talk:Blobster/@comment-4715955-20160701112941/@comment-26475800-20160701115355

I'm working on that, kinda. But, could you tell me why? I really appreciate the advice, I just also like to have a reason behind it. Not only that, but it helps me when I'm editing to keep an eye out for those kinds of things.

I know I was a little long winded with this story. I've been in a bit of a King/Barker kick, and both of those guys are really long winded, so that could have contributed to the length of this.

Also, if you don't mind letting me know what you thought of the story, in your completely honest opinion. It will help me to become a better writer.

Thanks,