Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20160607015942

Dogma:

There’s nothing more incredible,

there’s nothing more absurd.

Then listening to the people

who claim to know God’s word.

But do we really know

what happens after death?

When your body shrivels up

and just your soul is left.

Is there only one God

or many in the skies?

Can you feel them watching

with their all seeing eyes?

What may be true to you

is not the truth to me.

You think God’s in heaven,

I think they’re in the seas.

So this I ask you calmly

with so much eagerness.

Do you think there’s such a thing

as tranquil heavenly bliss?

This was the first and only poem I've written and would like to know if anyone thinks it is any good. 