Talk:Teeth.jpg/@comment-6516317-20141031075401/@comment-4518745-20141102215349

I'm inclined to agree. The writing itself is mostly mediocre and suffers from a lack of proofreading. It's also sloppy and convoluted in a few areas and could overall use some refining. Strong ending though. Maybe 6/10

P.S. Watch out for creepy plot holes Nommeh. LOL