Talk:Emot Emoc/@comment-5269370-20140805134741

I found this quite enjoyable, I must say. You have a writing style that is very peculiar to this site, especially in writing your antagonist. They were not menacing, but still eerie in a... charming, kind of way. It's odd, but I like it. Very unique!

Also, some of your descriptions were great. I especially liked "Darkness devoured him, leaving his shadow to abandon him and a cold blanket of air cast, so cold it revealed his breath."

As for the plot, I found it wasn't anything special, up until the end when the daughter is discovered. It was good,but I thought there could have been a few more twists and turns in it then there already was.

6.9/10