Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-17739056-20140704170557/@comment-17739056-20140705135152

Booboofinger wrote: The story is okay.,but the whole monster out of a D&D game, with a zig-zag sword seems a bit over the top. I also thought would had died of hemorage before the ambulance came. Yeah I HATE the ending. As I asked WaveDivisionMultiplexer, any advice for the demon?