Talk:Fallen Rage/@comment-25052433-20150516231133

Excellent story. It made up in most of it's lackings in the sheer fact that it was just plain fun to read. I would suggest changing Lucifer to some generic demon. I only say this because using the 'big dog' in the story sort of seems a bit over the top. I feel an entity like Lucifer wouldn't be too interested in just messing around with one guy, he'd be far more likely trying to control entire nations.

Now, if you had this guy somehow moving up in politics or something, that could make a great Lucifer story.

Either way, this was a really cool story and a pleasure to read. Keep writing!