Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25623211-20141107184522/@comment-25623211-20141110225428

Tyberzannisultra wrote: Entropypersonified wrote:

Tyberzannisultra wrote: You're welcome, bud. Good luck with school and I hope to read more from you. I already wrote a story called ticker on this site and I have my own website for this sort of thing @ www.vivoloco.wordpress.com and I'm still working on this story as it needs to expand into at least a full short story, or the first chapter of a novel. Yes, I apologize for my lateness. I couldn't find Ticker on here, so I went and read it on your website. I thought it was good, well-written, and a bit scary. During my reading of it I thought to myself, "Oh, the ticking means he's insane, and tied to some clock-related murder." and from there I was able to predict that he killed his wife. I wasn't expecting the rest, though.

I liked the transition between "horrible ticking" and "glorious ticking" that occured with the introduction of the Clock girl. I have a pretty trippy image of her in my mind, thanks to your artful descriptions. Perhaps I could do some fan art of her, and maybe add it to the page as a little bonus for your readers? You'd have to link me to the page first, of course :) Sadly I'm not an artist, I've been looking for one to help me for a while but so far they all want money I don't have yet. Also glad you caught that the story was in a city based on Chicago, probably will call it the Windy city but it def won't be the exact same XD. ENTROPY is gonna travel all over the place. Really glad you enjoyed ticker :3