Talk:The Chimera Project/@comment-35711173-20190723220619/@comment-40254315-20190724114015

Yeah I get that. This is only my second Creepypasta so I am still learning.

Just for clarification the bad grammar towards the end is intentional, it's meant to show that he's struggling to type due to his transformation.

Other than that, would you mind pointing out where my English could be improved? Not meaning to be patronising, I just would like to know so that I know what to do in the future.

Thanks for the feedback! :)