Talk:Roll-Call/@comment-10502460-20180306065658

Very well done. I like how throughout the story the reader is kept in suspense as to what is going on. First it's just seems like everyone's tired and salty, then it appears that bad news is about to be delivered to the unit, then it seems like the narrator and his four friends are about to get a big ass-chewing or hazing from their commander or something, etc, until the reveal at the end.