User blog:Fairly7Local/Interactive Story - YOUR OPINION WANTED

I've been working on an interactive story which I'm planning to be fairly lengthy with a lot of routes, bit like a text video game. Been using subpages hosted on my own user page to allow navigation for it, and I wanted to see what you guys thought of the work in progress so far, as well as any ideas about whether I could actually transfer this into an actual story page on the wiki, with its own subpages. Admin advice for the technical issues associated with this would be appreciated here. I tried not to add in too many emotions or opinions in description if it seems a bit bland, as the idea is that you form your own.

The story is directly accessible from my user page, and I've pasted it here as well. Enjoy your trip and tell me what you think! I would be very grateful for any feedback.

You’re a guy in his mid-thirties who works an office job. Your life is decent enough – you make an acceptable wage and go out every so often with a few friends, but you get terribly bored and lonely sometimes, especially as you feel the middle aged years creeping up. You've dated a few women in the past but none of your relationships ever worked out. Now you've been single for a few years, and one day you decide it's time to get laid.

You go on a dating website and set up a profile, posting the most handsome photo you have of yourself. Immediately, you get a few requests. As you scroll through your inbox, you notice a message from a woman with the most beautiful face you have ever seen in your entire life. You click on her profile. Her name is Jennifer, and she lives five miles away from you. She posted a few pictures, and sweet baby Jesus, she's hot!

"Hey baby," read her first message. "Nice profile. Want to meet up? I've been single for a very long time, and I'm sick of it. Looking for a man that can satisfy my needs."

"Sure babe, let's meet up! Where would you like to go?"

"I live pretty close to the cinema or the restaurant. It's up to you."

Watch a movie with her

Take her out to the restaurant