Talk:Humannequin/@comment-25234323-20140215213218

I admit, out of the 4 PoTM nominees I read from you, this is probably the best. But at the end it goes down in quality. First of all, "'''I HAVE NO MOUTH BUT I MUST SMILE". '''It's clear what is being referenced here, but it ends up making the story less scary. Second of all, how was the protagonist supposed to write this whole story in 5 minutes? 10 is more realistic.