Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24352864-20140322191756/@comment-24694408-20140325202917

Wow, this is really good. I noticed the few things mentioned before but I assume that they'll be fixed or they've already been fixed.

It was to the point, intriguing and realistic.

The only thing I would potentially say is that where yoou say something along the lines of 'I wasn't sure whether it was a ghost or not' I kind of thought that most people can figure that out for themselves. Maybe it's just me.

Once again, it was very good.

Bluebunglebee