Talk:Abandoned by Disney/@comment-26882028-20150812065214

This particular creepypasta was i ntriguing and somewhat believable, initially. Unsettling details such as eternally swinging meat hooks, sinks and toilets dripping despite the water being cut off for an age, mysterious voices, and the general terrifying awe that comes with an abandoned place were exciting. What was lackluster, however, was the clearly shoehorned gore at the end of the spookfest. Our buddy slimebeast clearly meant well, by praying on the familiar and comforting figure of Disney, which always did seem as if it had something to hide. He did a little bit of research to give a little bit of believable backstory on a 'real' abandoned Disney park, which became a convenient segway into his own story. However, if he wanted his ending to have the real impact he clearly intended, he'd do a little more research into the decay of human bodies.You see, there's no way that a skull could have fallen from inside Donald's head. Inside a contained environment like we are led to believe the room was, untouched by scavengers like bugs and rats, a human corpse would take over TWELVE YEARS to have all that gooey flesh, brains, hair, and other undesirables disintegrate. It would take even longer inside a hot, stuffy and highly contained environment like a costume head. It would have been more believable for the head to come out with chunks of rotting, stinking flesh, liquified brain matter, and hair still clinging to both the inside of the mask and to the skull itself. It DEFINITELY wouldn't have shattered.If the place was untouched for years by the elements and guarded by this unspeakable demon that possessed nega-mickey as we are led to believe, there is NO WAY all organic matter could be gone by the time our tragic hero has that Donald head clutched in his curious fingers.Unless this was all hallucinations caused by our loveable demon with two big circular ears, I'd say the finale needed a little more buildup and believability.