Talk:New Stepmom/@comment-25052433-20140901081111

Like a scolding from a wicked stepmother, so comes this review.

What went right:

-A lot actually. This was a fun and fresh little pasta that was a nice change of pace.

-Writing this as a blog/advice seeking was brilliant. As stated above, this is a concept that I haven't seen too much of. The fact that you wrote the stepmom asking for the advice in a casual, perfectly normal tone, served to magnify her insanity in a very original way.

-From start to finish this was a great pasta. Its short writing style and twisted plot really reminded me of the older style of pastas. In other words, this was a breath of fresh air as a story, and for that, I thank you.

What could use a coat of therapy:

-Honestly, I don't have too much in the way of critique here. I wouldn't change a thing on this one.

All around, excellent short pasta. You combined suspense and murder, but most of all, you interjected some comedy into this that actually worked very well. A great read from start to finish.