Talk:20-20/@comment-24050927-20131015133655/@comment-4715955-20140307063945

I doubt the author is, but I certainly am. Mark Twain advised writers to, "Always choose the right word, not its second cousin." This story is riddled with examples of this -- for one, using "said under her breath" when "muttered" should've been used (you say things "under your breath" when you don't want them heard by anyone). I simply couldn't make sense of the nightmare scene, either, and the ending was the final pretentious nail on the self-righteous coffin. Was this whole thing really supposed to be nothing more than anti-abortion propaganda? Apparently it worked, because nobody's aborted this page from the wiki yet.