Talk:When Rain Comes/@comment-1216259-20150509072403

"The rain falls strongly now; if you were not wet before, you are now."

Suddenly this story turned from horror to erotic.

While I'm here, I might as well say something serious: This idea intrigues me, but that's mainly because I love mythology stories. It's not really that "scary" as a story, except for the whole "He's gonna get ya!" twist at the end.

As a scare, that's cliche, but it would work with the mythology theme.

Also, as I indicated, the writing is a little silly at times.