Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26097843-20150220005535/@comment-26097843-20150220050053

i had to come up with something to get him there. also this is a beginning basic outline. the grey monster is like a lure for the paper people. also the paper people are. . .well imagine this you know how everything is supposed to be 3D well the paper people are flat like paper. its kind of creepy-ish. and when was the last story you read that didn't have some sort of cliche thing happen. every disney movie ever does the same thing over and over again. blah blah blah. ok i'm done rambling. so the paper people are supposed to be other worldly or evil because i have no reason. the just are. like i said beginning draft. also i wrote most of it while i was depressed and that affects the writing outcome quite a bit. yadda yadda yadda explanation crap. blegh. so yeah. lotta work to do i know. more character developement more on the plot stuff like that. thank you for your input its been noted on notes for noting thank you for your time its so freakin late and i am so freakin tired.