Talk:Desperation Steak/@comment-24381191-20140710184124

First off, there's nothing much in the story. It's just about a bunch of cannibals living in a town that's off the map. There's no hook. After the first few paragraphs, it feels extremely boring.

Like I said before, there's not much in the story. I wouldn't know what to do with it if I wrote it. Not every idea is a good idea that might be entertaining on paper, or in this case, a computer screen. I used to have so many ideas for pastas everyday, then I took a critical look at them, and 'Noped' out of half of them. You don't have to wriite, or publish each piece of work.

You could have used this as a practice story, you needn't publish it. And why do you use 'whatcha' so much?

I guess this comment wasn't very helpful but I'm bad at this kinda stuff.