Talk:Drought/@comment-26480939-20180828202952

This isn't all that bad, honestly. I like the whole "Non-Standard Game Over" style of this pasta. It actually reminds me a bit of "Misbalanced", but focusing more on Groudon than Kyogre or Rayquaza.

That being said, there are a few things I need to correct or point out:

1. The cartridge design for Ruby Version does not have Groudon on it. I have a copy of Ruby myself and can confirm this. My cartridge only has TPC's name on it, the series logo, the text "Ruby Version", the ESRB (this is an American version I'm describing here) rating (E for Everyone) logo, the Nintendo logo, some serial data that reads "AGB-AXVE-USA" and the Nintendo Seal of Quality on a metallic red sticker.

2: There's mention of "Archie and Max". I believe you meant to put Archie and Maxie, the team leaders of the villains in Gen 3 games.

3: It's highly improbable that a GBA cartridge, hacked or legitimate, would be able to radiate such extreme amounts of heat as to cause burns and whatnot without undergoing severe damage of the cartridge itself.

Just had to point out a few things which bugged me a little, being a superfan of Pokémon who has researched the series quite a bit.