Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33979162-20190724181519/@comment-35911608-20190729135131

Uh, so this is a shorter rewrite of Caterina Valentine, which was posted to the workshop a while ago. And there's little to no change from it being a JTK spinoff. I'll be blunt: Caterina Valentine was a better draft. Even that had a tinge of development. But neither are acceptable in their current forms.

As Ned pointed out, I'm noticing that this is more about creating a character rather than telling a story. It's forcing all of these images and details to try and make Cat iconic, to give people something to draw. As well as just being ridden with cliches and hardly any attachment to realism.