Talk:Tommy Take a Picture/@comment-26132401-20150221220058

2/10

This is terrible in almost every aspect. Aside from just being an extremely boring ghost story, it's terribly written. Lines like "What the fuck? What the fuck? What the motherfucking fuck?" and " Rapping outside my window. Literally, coming up with freestyle raps about my brother's death. Shit is fucking crazy. The raps are pretty fresh tho." and " Have you ever seen the corpses in the movie The Ring? Awful movie" makes me question if this is even an actual attempt at a creepypasta.