Talk:Empty House/@comment-26030957-20150303013647

Your characters were very believable and the first person narration gave a very realistic feel to the story. It was creepy and fun with a nice rising tension. You added just enough stoner culture and personal tidbits to make it feel very real but at the same time not weigh down the story too much and interrupt the flow.

I wanted them all slaughtered, of course, maybe one cannibal survivor eating the other's corpses and making some kind of lawn furniture out of their bones- but hey- that's just me. I want every story to end like that.