Talk:Saturday Night: Eternity/@comment-23974155-20131026001553

I like the idea of this, well done. It needs a bit of fine tuning, parts of the story don't quite gel... Like, why would anyone want to be tortured and tested to become 'hate, love, willpower' and risk dying or being hugely deformed. I think the story should have been more based of government testing or something. 5/10