Talk:Insula/@comment-17660443-20160917202702

I liked this a lot! Love me a good space horror story. My main complaint is the abundance of italicized words throughout the story; italics are typically used for emphasis, and if you emphasize too much, it loses its impact and the narrative doesn't flow quite as smoothly. There were a few grammar issues here and there too, but overall very enjoyable and well-written.