Talk:Demeyes/@comment-26030957-20150223214539

Nice twists and turns. When you say egg timers do you mean the little hour-glasses or the plastic dial timers? Since it is about a serial killer it could have been a little bit gorier (but you know that's just me, I'm a sucker for gore IF it's written well). The poem at the end really made it. Seriously, I loved that, I could just picture three little girls swinging jump ropes and chanting it. Just like that old Wes Craven film: 1-2 Freddy's coming for you, 3-4 better lock the door, 5-6 grab your crucifix, 7-8 gonna stay up late, 9-10 never sleep again. But your rhyme was way better than old Wes's.