Talk:EmpyrealInvective's Collection of Short Stories/@comment-25073641-20150418171005

Overall, it's a good read, and I'm a little bit inspired to do write some. I'll be both praising and criticizing individual stories:

1. It was very well-written and engaging, but the plot is... somewhat... I don't know; I can't explain it clearly. It's a little bit of a cliche (considering the protagonist seeing him/herself). 7.5/10

2. That pasta is just badly good. Something there is unique, and something there is, sorry for my term so pardon me, copied, or the likes. It's definitely written concisely, though. 6.9/10

3. Not bad, at all. Pretty well-written, and the plot tackles the topic of cannibalism vaguely enough to be unique and shocking at the same time. 8.4/10

4. What the fuck did I just read? 3/10

5. That's a great read. I totally the way it was written, definitely descriptive and bright, full of vivid language. The plot, eh... is all about the world being torn to pieces, and the remaining human beings going insane? I just understood the first to the climax part, but at the end, it made me scratch my head out of confusion. 8/10

6. Such vague, much style, such creepy, more creeps; how to creepypasta again? 7.6/10

7. Wow! No exact words can describe such genuinity. 9/10

8. Good read, but it was way too short. I needed more, there was something missing there. Judging the writing style, it's actually clear and simplistic, and I really liked it a lot. 8.6/10

9. This pasta should be put in a separate page, because I want to nominate it sometimes. This deserves a lot of attention from the public. At the start, it was already encouraging, forcing me to read furthermore, and when I read about the stars that were actually eyes, that dumbfounded me; it caught me off-guard, and I was left helpless. 10/10

10. Hmmm, not bad. Had a great potential, but it was not expanded. 6/10

11. I didn't read. It's out of my taste. ??/10

12. I'll be honest, but it was more of "You're next!" cliche, just reworded. It didn't aroused me; it was even vague. 2/10

13. Heh. I couldn't even begin explaining everything. 5/10

14. This left me with one last question: What happened to their child? I loved the way you left it open-ended. 7.3/10

15. Ha! I didn't see the twist coming! Pretty decently well-written, but lacks some description, in my opinion. 7.9/10

16. 4.6/10. Don't ask for reasons, or else I'll cut your lips off.

17. ''"BEAUTIFUL descriptions and details make the twist more HURTFUL and SHOCKING. This is the best, it's beyond brilliant. A tale couldn't be that good, with the concept of heartwarming turned cold!" ''I would agree to what Alstiton said. 9.7/10

18. Hehe, this is from your trollpasta, isn't it? 5.8/10