Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27029037-20151001153933/@comment-26475800-20151021220626

Make your sentences more complex. A two sentence story is hard to do, and if the sentence structure is weak, well it makes it that much less of a read. You have three sentences, all of them are incredibly short, and could be turned into one sentence, with the same effect. But three short sentences, the longest being 7 words long, doesn't show much talent. For me a mircopasta, at least of this length, is a way to show your skill with grammar and words.