User blog comment:Lolipopgore/considering/@comment-24101790-20181002152601

Hey, first off, welcome to the wiki!

I'd strongly suggest using the writer's workshop to get feedback before posting to the main site as a lot of stories posted to the wiki tend to not meet quality standards due to issues that could have been worked out in the forum and get deleted. The writer's workshop is a place to take your stories and have people help you out by telling you what your strengths and weaknesses are in terms of plot and grammar.

Best of luck!