Talk:The Stairway/@comment-25941663-20151023130807

This had a nice feel to it. It reminded me of older creepypastas, something I don't see very often nowadays.

The pacing was good too. The little scares leading up to the finale were a nice touch, but they could have been a bit creepier. They didn't hold much substance, they felt a bit like filler. It wasn't bad, but it could have been better.

McNeal was a very nicely written character, great job. My only problem with your character development was Astor. I believe she overreacted and she came off as annoying.

The ending was great too. Fantastic.

All in all, great work. I enjoyed this greatly, so well done.