Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33418823-20180821130107

Before I upload this creepypasta, I would like people to review it and if there's something wrong like a grammar mistake or cliche I try my best to fix it so here is the story so you can see if there is a problem or not.

(Like all other creepypastas, this is not real and i don't really own hamsters) I used to own a hamster named Uno and he was like my best friend but I am hiding from him due to this horrible incident

I gave Uno his hamster food and watched him run around the hamster wheel but I needed to go to work so I left, after getting back from work i heard a hamster squeak so i ran to the living room only to see a dead hamster and it was Squeaks my other hamster and she was half eaten with a bit of blood and I was shocked to see that Uno was missing.

After some days I found Uno but a bit bigger than expected and he had blood around his mouth, I grabbed him and took him home to wash him but I saw another dead hamster at home at it was Rosie and her head was missing and more blood was shown.

Later I had a nightmare where I was in my room with my friends and family only for a giant Uno to appear and approaching us carefully and then ate me,  I woke up only to be at the same spot I was in only to notice I fell asleep and I heard gunshots so we left only to see Uno with a gun shooting people, his fur was messy and he was covered in blood and he was big enough to be the same size of a lion and then he ate someone and the worst part were the eyes since they looked  very crazy

Me and my friends and family ran to hide but one of us tripped and got shot by Uno and we saw buildings were on fire and we hid inside the house, I hear the wooden floor creaking and a hamster's shadow was moving, Oh my gosh he foun--


 * A gun shot can be heard and dead bodies of people can be scene in the room*  Rest in peace my owner.... 