Talk:Easy Assembly/@comment-28348041-20160503152415/@comment-5101683-20160511055817

I am not good at reviewing things. However, this is rather original. The fact that the taking apart of her body is extremely detailed and filled with thoughts and the scene with the mother isn't is also a good thing.

I can't find any actually bad things, which is why I am not good at reviewing things. But for the first thing you have written here, it's very good.