Talk:And She Danced/@comment-25052433-20150801232407

This was really good, with my only complaint being the ending. This is a common cliche here on this site, and I had hoped it wouldn't happen here, based on the quality of the story before.

Why would the character spend his/her last moments, knowing that the monster was outside the window, writing a story? Would the police be called? Wouldn't he do his/her best to escape? Why sit there and write a story?

It rather defies human logic.

Otherwise though, I enjoyed this. The writing was very good, I can tell that you took your time and double checked your work. The plot was interesting and your descriptions were nicely done.

Just that ending...been done so many times.