Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29970504-20160915144139/@comment-25941663-20160915153456

You have a good grasp on grammar and sentence structure. You got the basics down, and that's very important.

I just think the problem with this story is the plot. It's nothing special, just a run of the mill psychopath. If you wrote something different, it would have stayed on the wiki. The generic idea did you in, I'm afraid.

I don't have much of an advice on this. Just keep practising and keep reading. That's the only way to improve. Then, the great ideas will start coming. You just have to be persistent.

Happy writings!