Talk:The Beast of Genov/@comment-27007772-20150220201501

You are in group E. I assigned the fairytail subject to group D. I don't know if this story will be counted by the rest, but I'm still going to review it.

The plot was a VERY refreshing idea. The idea of a monster that is actually good and helps people is completely unappreciated in Creepypastas in general, and I am very glad you had the guts to take it.

Plot- 3/3

The writing and grammar was pretty on point, with the description of the beast allowing my mind to run rampant with ideas putting the creature together like a puzzle. There were no cataclysmic/sentence ruining typos, and that's great.

Writing/Grammar- 3/3

But, here is the sad part. It never hit that creepiness I came to expect. In fact, it left me with a romantic/touching feel by the end. I came out being happy and kind of warm inside, something a pasta should rarely do. I really do think you would be perfect at writing a Horror/Romance novel, though.

Creepiness -1/4

Final Score-7/10