Talk:The Lonely Stars/@comment-25941663-20150317163304

This was very well written, well done. Character development is amazing and your description of the claustrophobic environment is superb.

Initially, when he didn't get a response, I thought that something bad had happened back on earth and somehow he was the last man alive, cursed to drift away from his home until the day he dies. But after reading all the way through, I have the impression that somehow, this anomaly made him travel at the speed of light for a split second (or something), effectively sending him in the future.

All in all, the ending was very satisfactory.

The only critisicm I can give is that the voices don't really fit that well in the story, but that's a very tiny nitpick.