User blog comment:Ironicguy57/My first pasta!/@comment-5689653-20121106222715

I liked this story. It was simple and scary at the same time, not trying to be some mish-mosh of several plotlines. The most terrifying part to me, though, is the fact that the main characters were either intuitive enough or crazy enough to bring gasoline and a chainsaw with them. o.O I feel like the end was a bit sudden, though. Maybe make it a bit longer, I'd enjoy that. :D 8.5/10, nice pasta.