Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27859657-20160713044525/@comment-27859657-20160713052524

i;ll be honest this story is rushed, i hadn't even mad the origanal. and the picture is actually after she died, but non the less i want to make this story work regardless of how many changes i'll have to make. i've only made one creepypasta before so i don't have very much exsperiance in doing so, aside from being a online role-player and all...usual stories that i write are usually ment in a anime style but i guess it won't work very well here, and i'll have to adopt a more realistic style of writing when making creepypasta's...i'll have to do the same for the K Y O K I story as well...i also should learn how to proof read better, cause i didn't think there was anymore to it then just making sure all the words were spelled correctly...