Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25039889-20140608204403

jst a lil preface to my stori i hav been workeing on this for months so i hope u all enjoy and plz give me feedback.

1 day, a lil boy went over the hill to what is now known as the prayere. here he stood, silent, not moving at all. for the 1 who shall not be mentiened, got em. now, the 1 who shell not be mentioned was a guy. the guy stood up locking at the boy and he said what are you even doing son i got you now and you cannot escape i am horribly sorry where are your parents even they should keep better wach on u because now i might kill you actually let me thnk abt tht im not so sure perhaps i should just pretend to kill u but may be i should leve u for ded!!!!!! the cretures come out at night. you are foolish boy. i leve u for ded. after this nonsense the man leave. the boi knew what to do not. he was left in a situaion only a hero cld fix. may be he was 1. yes!!!! perhaps he did not knw it yt!!!!!!!! he is the 1 hero!!!!! then the creture came out and he killed him.

THE END

Srry bt the textwall but this stori is so good it makes up for it 