Talk:Thief/@comment-26030957-20150130013715

Excellent writing, really superb. I believe this is the first pasta I have ever read that takes place during the French revolution. I particularly liked the first paragraph; it evoked a sophisticated and classical ambiance that was maintained throughout the story with the mentioning of Mozart's The Magic Flute, the descriptions of the once lavish room with its "intricately carved doors" and the constant references to the mutilated victims as art. Certain images that struck me and gave a really chilling feel were the scratched legs of the furniture and the faces scratched off of the tiny portraits. These really helped establish an aura of dread that was truly creepy. An elegant and scary little piece, indeed. A pleasure to read and great pasta. 10/10

There are two tiny nit pics I have. When you say, "The room is plunged in almost complete darkness, bearing no windows and the only light source being the gap on the wall"- because plunged is a verb it sounds as if the room was lit and then went dark, not that it was already dark, which is what I believe you meant. Also, you said, "he is carrying a small hammer on his right hand"- I believe you want to say "he is carrying a small hammer IN his right hand." 