Talk:For Love and Hot Chocolate/@comment-26326346-20150510065116

I'm glad that Blain won. I'd expected him to wreck and die at the end, honestly. Mr. Pinkerton was great, I really liked how he said something about a circus and a clown and then ended up having his "office" being located in a circus tent. The trials were really creative as well. I was really happy when Blain threw the hot chocolate in Peaty's face, because that's what my mind first thought of (which made it a realistic action for the character to do).

Really great and descriptive. It was an enthralling story. 10 out of 10!