Talk:Dog Children/@comment-27838637-20160813071658/@comment-25170312-20160813171453

I guess I didn't really think about the possibility of Cappy being in on it. It makes a lot of sense to interpret it that way and I suppose it does make it confusing that he gets eaten. I'll have to think about that one. And I figured the protagonist is hot and tired which is why he loses his patience so fast, but I didn't really communicate that. In retrospect, it just seems like he can't deal with rude kids. Maybe I'll put in a line or two to make it a little more believable. Thanks for the review!