Creepypasta Wiki talk:Deleted Page/Jeff the Killer/@comment-24351109-20131229001045

I've never understoof why this was so popular, even the picture is just a badly done photoshop of the overly-attatched girlfriend meme. It's written much in the manner of how the main character from Birdemic spoke the entire film. Blandly. Kids don't talk like that. It's so odd that they have him speak in this fashion, it's odd and doesn't fit a child's mannerisms at all. The story doesn't make much sense at all; either. I know people want these things to always be a true story but they just aren't. Part of the fun is imagining it, not trying to force people to believe it like it actually happened. But it just makes zero sense and is badly written. The "fight" between the boy and Jeff couldn't have been more then 5 minutes, yet the police are there in seconds. How was a the killer not able to fight off a child who had to have been much smaller than him to begin with; still groggy from sleep and unable to see very well (according to the story)? After this it just becomes one dragged on story that I couldn't stop chuckling at. I'm not a great writer, I make typos constantly. But I'm not submitting anything other than a comment. This just has such a horribly awkward pace, isn't fun to read and is just written poorly. I will never understand why this is so popular. It's great people like it and have fun with it, but the kids who take this crap to heart worry me. Be a better writer than this for your own sake.