Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25547916-20150731172119/@comment-26475800-20150731224324

To add onto the tab aspect, if you use them your story either will be deleted or won't be read, it would cause a scroll bar to appear and you would have to scroll through the entire paragraph.

The story wasn't bad in itself, you have something with this story. However, you may want to make it a little clearer. Some of the wording gets slightly confusing and if you rework it so it is a little easier to understand this story will be great.

But you should definitely keep this story, it will be well worth it.