User talk:EmpyrealInvective

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Vexatious matters
Empy, could you extend my deadline for the song competition to sometime after the 5th July? I have an exam on the 4th ;;;;;A;;;;;

Otherwise I'd be happy to discuss it.

Rinskuro13 15:20, May 27, 2015 (UTC)Rinskuro13

Empy, I made a post called "No One Will Remember Your Name" and I was wondering if your could tell me why you removed it? Thanks Rhyvee (talk) 22:04, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

I love your stories. Thanks for writing them!

Hello, my name is Adrian and I recently came back to this website, after not being on it for a while, only to see that a story I had written was now under your name. I'm not sure exactly how the whole copyright thing works on here but I just want to know if I could again take credit the story I wrote.

GlasgowSmile (talk) 19:35, June 14, 2015 (UTC)GlasgowSmile/Adrian

Deletion Appeal
Haha. I see that not much has changed around here. :)

Mystreve (talk) 04:27, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

HIA!!!! I'm not really sure how his thing works but I got a notification from @Empyreallnvective or in other words you. I didn't know what to do so I just clicked (talk) so I clicked it and here I am. well MR UNICORN says HIA!!:) as well

Why did you delete my pasta? I looked over the article you linked and everything seems to check out MrEVIL123 (talk) 03:00, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to email
Thanks for the help. I added the names in front of the speaker-changing lines. I haven't though added links to stories that are not his, I don't feel like that's neccessary. I also haven't linked to his off-wiki stories and I have correctly linked the rest.

I think the interview is pretty much ready. Let me know when to post it. MrDupin (talk) 13:18, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Hullo
Hi Empyre. I know you're slightly short of time, but I wanted to show you something very important.

How do you like THIS

LUCAS THE PERVY DRUNK CAT  ➾ babe let’s get high together ➾  17:11, May 28, 2015 (UTC)Rinskuro13

Nav
I'm adding the nav template to the ones in this series. "Tales: London Wiley & Putnam, 6, Waterloo Place." Here's a link. I wouldn't add the navigation to sort them alphabetically.

I added the only missing piece in the series earlier and there's protected stories in that series, I was about to send you a message asking you to add the nav template to those.

« So Pre te nt  io us » 22:50, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

whaddup
Noticed some things on a protected pasta. The Masque of the Red Death has a broken sound clip at the bottom. The Fall of the House of Usher → Through which came flowing, flowing, flowing<

« So Pre te nt  io us » 01:49, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

Quick question
Do you know how to get rid of the 'Rinskuro13' at the end of my signature?

Don't really know why or how it's there. Kinda ruins the fun.

LUCAS THE PERVY DRUNK CAT  ➾ babe let’s get high together ➾  17:57, May 29, 2015 (UTC)Rinskuro13

If you would so kindly tell me why Cranberry Juice was deleted sir. Christopher Michael Richardson (talk) 02:57, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

I sumbmitted a story to the workshop that is short and has no grammar spelling or unbelievable factors in it.Christopher Michael Richardson (talk) 03:22, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

I just thought it seemed like something that would be a category. "Crimes" also seems like a viable category. Just a thought. --Doctor Quirkenstein (talk) 19:47, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

It's Time
It's been a couple of days, so I guess it's time to vandalize your talk page again *twirls villain mustache* I had a couple of questions for you. Firstly, I just wanted to be sure that I archived my talk page correctly. The second order of business is that I was wondering if you could do me a solid and give me some advice on making poetry after looking over this: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:466005 If you're busy, then it's cool, but I'd really appreciate some critiquing :) Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular!  03:59, May 30, 2015 (UTC)


 * You fell for my trap, for I knew that you would leave a header were you to respond, haha. In all seriousness though, I thank you for the advice. I wasn't in doubt of or questioning Grizzly or anything (sorry if I came across that way), I just wanted more advice. I looked at a couple of Edgar Allan Poe's Poetry, but I didn't really understand it, so I just reverted to making my lines rhyme; attempted AABB. I'm probably going to leave it on the WW for a while and scrap it, before giving poetry a serious study. I want to write a poem, because I haven't done it before and I want it to be up to standard and the best that I can get it (writer's growth and all that). I noticed that both Mr. Lovecraft and Poe wrote a lot of poems, so I figured that might be a way to go. Eh, if it gets blacklisted by the time I have one ready then I'll do a spin-off appeal. Again, thanks for the feedback, Empyre :) Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular!  04:28, May 30, 2015 (UTC)


 * You planned ahead like the master Ninja that you are XD


 * I didn't think you were, but I didn't know if you saw my reply to her or not. I'd actually learned that she is a former admin from her talk page when I was leaving her a message about that, being an admin would suck in my opinion, you'll never see me try to run for it (props to you for keeping the wiki together). I'm just here to kick back and relax, while occasionally trying to make articles a bit better than when I found them. I'll be sure to check them out starting with The Cremation of Sam McGee. Thanks for the insightful response :) Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular!  04:57, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

So my story was taken off. then a message way saying you did it. I have tried many times to understand why it was taken but I have reading problems and the message is hard for me to understand. So if you could send a note explain things better, that would be nice.

Thanks

(Prodestiny (talk) 12:54, May 30, 2015 (UTC)Prodestiny Prodestiny (talk) 12:54, May 30, 2015 (UTC))

hello :) i was wondering and am sorry if you have mentioned the answer somwhere else but, for my story that was deleted, if i could change it to the suggestions given and put it up again please? I am an aspiring writer and wanted feedback on it, got some but only after you deleted it. I wish to take into consideration your advice and improve it to post it again. Thank you for your time Stella Von Trott (talk) 14:44, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

Request For Critique
I was wondering if you could possibly review this new story past that I'm going to add to The Last Day of October--Bookstore Horror

The Last Day of October--Bookstore Horror (new part)

I'm hoping to have this new part wrapped up by the end of next week. It just keeps growing like an amoeba.

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 16:57, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

Okay. Thank you.

Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 17:43, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for all the support
I appreciate all the support!

Banningk1979 (talk) 17:39, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

the unfinished page
Honestly, I dont know what your talking about by an unfinished page, I made another story that will be into parts, but, can you explain the unfinished story thing, because, I dont get it

Sorry I forgot to add (Trainfan110 (talk) 19:45, May 30, 2015 (UTC))

Is it ok if I make a creepypasta About a proxy named, Night the cannibal?--Jadestonex4 (talk) 00:49, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

Is it better?
I fixed it; so can I make it to she is her own story? Not slender man Based. That means she can`t be a proxy?--Jadestonex4 (talk) 01:12, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

Help Me ?
Can you please tell me the standards I haven`t met so I can fix it as soon as possible? Thank you for replying.--Jadestonex4 (talk) 01:19, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

I understand
I`m actually looking over the story and see what I missed, but what`s the story issue?--Jadestonex4 (talk) 01:30, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

One more question,I think.
How do I correctly space the dialogue?--Jadestonex4 (talk) 01:34, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re
Not bad. About 95% sure I have an IT job I've been after for a bit, so shall see. How are things with you and your family? Mystreve (talk) 02:15, May 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * "Godfather" sounds a lot cooler too. And let's face it, you'd be kind of a creepy uncle.
 * Mystreve (talk) 02:27, May 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * Any time, my friend. My Facebook message feature (and ear) are always open.
 * Mystreve (talk) 02:32, May 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * Mystreve (talk) 02:32, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

OK,I guess so
Are you suggesting that I don`t do a catch phase for her? I changed it saying that she dealt with this all her life. and I put two spaces in each dialogue sentence to make it each paragraph and described the feeling when they said something. I also replaced multiple pronouns with her name or the other people to make sense. I also replaced the first paragraph to a setting which happens a month after she escaped.--Jadestonex4 (talk) 03:17, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

This makes no sense. I put it inside the worskshop. Mr.Dupin told me what to do. I did exactly what Mr.Dupin said. Why. I fixed spacing, talking and more.Christopher Michael Richardson (talk) 04:47, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

Critique Request
Do you think you could give some kind of review to Something Awful?

I liked it at first, but I'm kinda losing my confidence in it. Tell me what you think.

EtherBot (talk) 06:22, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

um...excuse me....why did you delete my story "Pedophile"? It was a complete story and it had upwards of 30+ comments on it. I don't understand why you deleted it.  Hi. This is a Signature. Click on it  n stuff   06:39, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

and if for some reason you're going to keep it deleted...can I at least get the content from it somewhere so I can save it?  Hi. This is a Signature. Click on it  n stuff   06:41, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

Duplicate Page
Arizona and The Gas Station are the same page. Delete the latter since it was uploaded 2 years after Arizona.

SOMEGUY123 (talk) 07:45, May 31, 2015 (UTC)


 * Hot Chocolate and Snow are also the same page. SOMEGUY123 (talk) 08:15, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

Jahni200 (talk) 20:26, May 31, 2015 (UTC) Um....okay I didn't know where the rules for uploading went but cam you please send me my story (===puppet child===) back to me. I spent so long on that thing and I just want the text back for me to keep. I may upload it on another site that won't delete it. I don't need it  undeleted just the text back in hands.

A Favor? Please?
I want some kind of reward for the winner of my contest, so I was wondering, can their pasta be put into the contest winners category? I know it's a small reward, but I think it would be sufficient enough. Thanks Emp! Da Dancing Mudkipper Says: So you think you can dance!? (CrazyWords) 20:30, May 31, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords


 * Wow, thanks Emp! I really wanted a reward. Da Dancing Mudkipper Says: So you think you can dance!? (CrazyWords) 20:36, May 31, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords

WHY DID MY STORY GET REMOVED?????!?!!?!?!?!?

IT WAS MY FIRST EVER SO PUT IT BACK UP!

Interview is up
(fingers crossed, hoping I didn't mess this up)

Hey, Empyre, I just posted the interview. I hope it is good.

Thanks. MrDupin (talk) 12:08, June 1, 2015 (UTC)

I admit it, I only read the last page..
...honestly, I can barely understand a word that drunken Irish man says. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:18, June 2, 2015 (UTC)

Non Servium
Did you just leave the word "cockles" on my talk page? I may just have to report this abuse of power. What kind of cockles and bull show are you running around here anyway? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:27, June 2, 2015 (UTC)

Your criminal use of word play leaves me between a cock and a hard place given your level of authority here. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:38, June 2, 2015 (UTC)

I know it's only cock and roll, but I love it, so go ahead and rock out with your cock out, what's an old punk cocker like me going to do about it anyway. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:43, June 2, 2015 (UTC)

COCKles OF AGES! STILL ROLLING COCKles AND ROLLING!!! HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 03:08, June 2, 2015 (UTC)

Im very sorry I didnt read the rules it was very embarrasing--??

That goes for me too, Empy. Fuck the rules, Rip 'em up. No. No. No. No. No. No.--looky, I just uploaded my deleted pasta again!

S'up? Cock got your tongue?HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 03:38, June 2, 2015 (UTC)

Dude, don't be a cock. Cock of ages rhymes with rock of ages so is definitely word play, ditto with cock and roll. Always got to be getting all cocky and making up rules. You make 'em, I break 'em. Cock chaos! (I'll stop now, sorry, just trying to make word play go all criminal--you drew first blood)  HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 03:47, June 2, 2015 (UTC)

Voting Poll
Thank you EmpyrealInvective for fixing the lines and numbers

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 04:14, June 2, 2015 (UTC)

In Torment Series
Hello, Empy. I'm sorry to bother you, but I was wondering if you could take a look at the sequel to In Torment in the Writer's Workshop? It's fairly large, but even some insight on a single paragraph would help a great deal.

I don't like doing these talk messages, and that is why I've only sent this to very specific people (You, Durpin, Humbolt, banningk). The story would get no attention/insight otherwise, probably because of scale.

Thank you for reading this message. http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:467228 ShawnHowellsCP (talk) 20:33, June 2, 2015 (UTC)

Help with a Wiki
This message isn't acutually about this wiki, it is about my own. I need help making my site similar to this one, and since you are an admin on this site, I am wondering if you could give me tips on making my sire better, and how to make new tabs like where to apply for staff and how to limit the abilities of just normal users on the site, because only rollbackers and admins should have high status. I would also like if you could give me some commands for writing and editing the site. ThanksAcutex49 (talk) 13:44, June 3, 2015 (UTC)

LOL BRAIN!!!!
I saw that you edited Spiderland right away, so I looked at the edit and I couldn't stop laughing. XD Umbrello (talk) 01:06, June 4, 2015 (UTC)


 * Thanks, man. I appreciate it. The reason I laughed so hard is because there's this episode of Teen Titans GO! where this villain named The Brain accidentally calls his plan "Project B.R.I.A.N." ... I basically did the opposite, lol. Umbrello (talk) 01:12, June 4, 2015 (UTC)

Hey, Quick Question
Can I base the pasta off the title? Thanks! Da Dancing Mudkipper Says: So you think you can dance!? (CrazyWords) 01:14, June 4, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords

Thanks!
Hey Empty! Not sure if you remember, but a month or so ago you recomended Cat's Cradle for me and I recently picked it up from the bookstore. It's a pretty interesting read (from what I can tell, Vonnnegut's stuff always is), and I just wanted to say thanks for the recomendation. Ameagle (talk) 04:01, June 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re: POTM Nominations
Oh, I'm sorry. I wasn't aware of that rule. Thank you for telling me. Ameagle (talk) 00:24, June 5, 2015 (UTC)

Yo
Can you get me the latest deleted revision of this page please?

Shining-Armor ( talk ) 03:03, June 5, 2015 (UTC)

profile
The edit you just made on your profile should read: "interviews" instead of "interview".

kk* SoPre tentious *ttyl  04:01, June 5, 2015 (UTC)

Category Suggestion
I'm pretty sure this topic has been brought up before, but what about the category "Micropastas?" Given to pastas with less than 300 words, much like the category Poetry.

Also, although I know it was some time ago, why was the "Classics" category removed?

Classical Retard -> Dammit, you're cold. 23:12, June 5, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, thanks.

Classical Retard ==> Dammit, you're cold. 23:27, June 5, 2015 (UTC)

Can I please have The Air Conditioner back, as I was editing it before you deleted it. I was trying to fix it but I couldn't because you deleted it.

hi!

so i just was working on a creepypasta, which was partly finished and was deleted because it was unfinished.

if there is such a possibility, id like to have a copy of the deleted pasta, because i was writing it on the website itself, and dont have any saves of it on my hard drive. i spend over 2 hours on it and it would be a shame if i had to start over as it costs me really a lot of time to write it.

Variobond (talk) 20:37, June 6, 2015 (UTC)variobondVariobond (talk) 20:37, June 6, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the copy mate i appreciate it and will try to get an edit on the grammatical and capital issuesVariobond (talk) 20:49, June 6, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry
I accidentally ended up recreating a trollpasta, Smoking Hot, when I tagged the page for deletion. I think that you deleted it the moment I tagged it as the page credits me for creating it. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular!  23:57, June 6, 2015 (UTC)
 * *Adds delete template to the top of your talk page in response to my ban* I'll try to give those pages a few minutes from now on in case you or another admin is deleting them, so as to cut back on doubling your workload. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular!  00:14, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * I just meant waiting 5-10 minutes to see if it's been handled or not. This was my second duplication and I've been here for a little over a month, so I ought to be more careful of it. I hate the idea of creating more problems instead of solving them, keeps you from getting rusty though :P Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular!  00:35, June 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you please let me publish my creepypasta? I tried but it said it was spam. It was about Super Mario Galaxy but I don't think there's a copywrite issue because there are other Mario creepypastas on this site. Can you tell me what I need to do to publish it? Thanks.

Kassie Macabre

Kassie Macabre (talk) 13:41, June 7, 2015 (UTC)

Here's my creepypasta. Please publish it onto the creepypasta wiki. If you don't like it, please tell me what I need to work on. file://localhost/Users/jeanmarshall/Desktop/spnpasta.wikia.com:wiki:The_Truth%3Fvenotify=created.webloc Kassie Macabre Kassie Macabre (talk) 15:28, June 7, 2015 (UTC)

Writing Advice
May I ask why was the Writing Advice page protected? I asked Underscorre about the blogs and he said everything was fine. MrDupin (talk) 21:29, June 7, 2015 (UTC)


 * I don't really see the benefits of protecting the page. It is very easily monitored the way it was. Unless by protecting the page you also prevent people from creating subpages. In any case though, the chance of a user wanting to add an advice blog is so slim it doesn't make a difference.


 * Anyway, the page description needs some updating. It reads "telling you what  not  to do in your stories" while most blogs tell what one should do. A minor issue, but still. MrDupin (talk) 21:54, June 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re: The Second Collaborative Project is Live!
Thanks for the heads up, Empy. --The Damn Batman (talk) 21:51, June 7, 2015 (UTC)

Did you delete my story because of the one sentence with all capitals. It was called Not Me. I just want to make sure so I can change it really quickly and reupload it. Answer ASAP. Thank you! Weerd101 (talk) 21:56, June 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you elaborate. I'm not sure what errors there were. Not trying to be rude or anything. I would just like to know for future reference.Weerd101 (talk) 22:01, June 7, 2015 (UTC)

Writing advice blog
Would you add this to the writing advice page? Unless you think there's anything missing/wrong with the page. Or if it doesn't fit in with the writing advice pages, or something, just delete the page.

kk* SoPre tentious *ttyl  03:00, June 8, 2015 (UTC)

MyBloodyQueen (talk) 03:20, June 8, 2015 (UTC)I checked the Blacklist. I fully understand, but I was wondering more along the lines such as rape, graphic and gory murder or torture, incest. Are topics like that allowed if done delicately or are they not allowed in general. I would like to have as much information as I can before uploading any of my stories so that I can make sure all rules are followed to a T. Some of my stories contain such subjects but they are descriptive without being obscene. If not allowed to use out right, is it okay to allude to the aforementioned subjects.

MyBloodyQueen (talk) 03:30, June 8, 2015 (UTC)== Response. ==

Thank you for letting me know. I greatly appreciate it and understand completely. I look forward to uploading a story very soon.

RE: Writing Advice Blog
Go ahead and just add it onto the one I already wrote. It'll be fine. Senjumaru Shutara 13:06, June 8, 2015 (UTC)


 * It's no problem. Sorry I haven't been that active again. Things over at the other wiki haven't been working too well, and when I'm not busy with that, real life's been clouding things up. One of these days, though, you and I should collab on a story sometime. I've got a few ideas. Senjumaru Shutara 20:08, June 8, 2015 (UTC)


 * Also, I need another favor. Can you track down all the Brothers Grimm Fairytales that were here? I already got Cinderella and The Juniper Tree. Senjumaru Shutara 02:03, June 9, 2015 (UTC)


 * I put them up. Senjumaru Shutara 02:07, June 9, 2015 (UTC)


 * I actually couldn't tell you. It's been awhile. Sorry. Senjumaru Shutara 02:29, June 9, 2015 (UTC)


 * That is actually what I've been using. I wanted to retrieve the ones from here because they were already fixed. Senjumaru Shutara 02:47, June 9, 2015 (UTC)


 * Also, I was hoping your works could be posted there as well. We're trying to hit a very big goal. Senjumaru Shutara 04:21, June 9, 2015 (UTC)

Troll Pasta
I was inspired by my ability to accidentally recreate pages with troll pasta on them and ended up writing my first troll pasta, Jeff Teh Tiller: http://pastebin.com/PhWApmw5 It's my masterpiece! Anyway, I thought you might enjoy it (or find it offensive, lol). Feedback is appreciated, especially in the making errors department (I'm not sure I made enough). No rush or anything, the pasta on this wiki is far more important. Just wanted some of your thoughts. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular!  17:04, June 8, 2015 (UTC)

Dude. You deleted all 4 of my uploads. Why? MummaCatSoup (talk) 23:07, June 8, 2015 (UTC)

Why did you delet the story of James? Why did you Delet the Mind = Blown? What are you talking about with Capitalisation? My creapy poems are written in an unorthodox metre, so each new line was capitalised for the asthetic and to let the reader know it was a new verse. Please explain to be why you deleted 6 fucking submission without so much as a proper explanation?

so...
This user was blocked on starpolar.wikia.com for being underage, there's a screenshot and everything. Shouldn't he be blocked on here also?


 * http://prntscr.com/7eskc1 kk* SoPre  tentious *ttyl  02:16, June 9, 2015 (UTC)

kk* SoPre tentious *ttyl  02:06, June 9, 2015 (UTC)

RE: Thanks for the Welcome!
Thanks for the welcome! I will leave a messsage here if I need anything. Thanks! ItalianFood15 (talk) 13:03, June 9, 2015 (UTC)

Money Matters (*sheepish smile*)
Sorry, it turns out that I was in such a rush to do the competition that I didn't read the 'prizes' bit properly. I'm a student in high school and don't have a credit card (thus no paypal account) yet. If I do happen to win a prize in the song competition, a suggestion would be to give the money to the person below me.

LUCAS THE PERVY DRUNK CAT  ➾ babe let’s get high together ➾  15:46, June 9, 2015 (UTC)Rinskuro13

Hey, no offense but why can't I put my creepypasta on this wiki if you accepted creepypaatas like 'TEH DAY OF ALL TEH BLOOD' and 'A Haunting Most Mario?' I deleted it from the spinpasta 2.0 wiki and I'm going to try to fix all the things you said were wrong. I only added gore because I thought there had to at least be a little in it to make it a creepypasta. When I'm done improving it I'll put it back on the spinpasta 2.0 wiki. Please check it out then.

Kassie Macabre

Kassie Macabre (talk) 17:34, June 9, 2015 (UTC)

Hey, why did you delete 'Generic The Facetaker?' It was one of my favorite creepypastas. Can you please let Acutex49 put it back on the wiki? Thanks.

Kassie Macabre

Kassie Macabre (talk) 18:09, June 9, 2015 (UTC)

Why was my thing deleted...? Tehbigcheez (talk) 21:21, June 9, 2015 (UTC)

Why did you delete it? I need specific wording to understand what was wrong.

Dr4gonSl4yer024 (talk) 00:26, June 10, 2015 (UTC)

Possible Story Review?
Hello, I'm sorry to bother you with this, but can look over my story, please. I rewrote the first section and I need to know whether it's moving too slow or not. Also, any grammatical advice and plot fallacies I'll more than accept.

Here's a link to it http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:468817

If you can't do it at this time, please message me back.

A-3 Loki (talk) 17:51, June 10, 2015 (UTC)

Deletion (this is not an appeal)
Hi, I created the Hallway in the Attic and read over the quality standards, but I am still confused about why it was deleted. I'm not angry or anything, but i am just a little confused. Can you please elaborate for me? All of my pastas have been deleted and I just want advice on what I did wrong with this one. Thank you!

Brotherkarthus111 (talk) 21:27, June 10, 2015 (UTC)

Elimadness (talk) 23:21, June 10, 2015 (UTC)Hi. Be sure to check out my pastas. You may like them, and thank you for welcoming me to Creepypasta wiki

I would like to know why you deleted my story LiesJdrummer329 (talk) 00:59, June 11, 2015 (UTC)Jdrummer329

Okay two things It was neverunedited and second of all if I post it again WITH an edit summary will you look it over?

Can I reupload it with an edit summary?Jdrummer329 (talk) 01:13, June 11, 2015 (UTC)Jdrummer329

What exactly does welcome mean if it means yes what should i put in the edit summary box?Jdrummer329 (talk) 01:24, June 11, 2015 (UTC)Jdrummer329

What does /* Re: Story */ mean?Jdrummer329 (talk) 01:34, June 11, 2015 (UTC)Jdrummer329

Cliche clarification
I do know that having the narrator as evil, possessed, or a ghost is not allowed, but does it count as either of these if the person is linked to another human and their actions spontaneously switch for short periods of time? I'm sorry if this sounds confusing, but this is as simple as I can put it. Thanks!

Brotherkarthus111 (talk) 20:18, June 11, 2015 (UTC)

Hi, you deleted my first ever pasta aand I would like to know why because it took me 3 weeks to write, i wrote it in a jornal and now i typed it LIKE WHT THE HELL BRUH

Hey Empyreallnective, TheDarkOne2.0 here! I have a question for you. There's a different story I want to post in the Writer's Workshop first, but I don't really know how to do so. Can you help me with that?

Sincerely, --TheDarkOne2.0 (talk) 22:35, June 11, 2015 (UTC)TheDarkOne2.0

Hi I was wondering why you deleted my pasta. I looked through the article that should have answered why it was deleted but as far as i know, my story seems to check out.

Thank you.
Thanks. I knew it had to do something with trolls and such.

I don't want to chat on there, but thank you for informing me. Really helps. --CreepySheep (talk) 03:17, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

I made a new creepypasta but I couldn't post it on the creepypasta wiki. I looked at the blacklisted subjects and Edward Scissorhands and Sweeney Todd weren't on it. It's a creepypasta about them. I couldn't put it on the spinpasta wiki because they only accept creepypastas about things like Mario and Minecraft, so it's on the trollpasta wiki. Please put it on this wiki. Thanks. Here it is: file://localhost/Users/jeanmarshall/Desktop/trollpasta.wikia.com:.webloc Kassie Macabre Kassie Macabre (talk) 17:31, June 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * Working link. 17:34, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

Critiques
Since there's nothing to do for me now on the wiki, I would like to take on the impossible task of critiquing (fuck, how the hell you spell it).

For starters, how do I set up that hot-ass page with supposed critiques splayed up and down. Basically, how do I do a critique page and, should I ever, upload critiques onto it.

For second starters, I'm going to create a blog to ask people for requests, just checking if that's against the rules or not.

I'm just bored here, browsing through hundreds of pastas, and I hope you can give me a hand (right or left?) around here.

Cheers,

Classical Retard ==> Dammit, you're cold. 18:01, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Re:
Wow, thanks! This will be fun.

I'll definitely be looking forward to taking a look at your awesome stories.

Classical Retard ==> Dammit, you're cold. 18:12, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

I hope you don't have a headache
I sure did this morning. It felt as if something had taken a shit in my mouth. The lights were too bright and everyone was talking way too loud. lol. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 18:41, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

MY POOR STORY WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?????????????????????????????? I WORKED HARD ON IT!!!!

Critique Blog
I don't think anyone's ever going to find out about my cute critique blog, and somehow it isn't showing up on my own user blogs, so is there another way to let people know that I'd like requests for pastas?

Cheery dope,

Classical Retard ==> Dammit, you're cold. 18:48, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

Story review
Hello again! I just wrote another pasta, and I do think that it is better than all my others, so I was wondering if you could review it. I am sorry to keep bothering you, and it is okay if you need some more time to do so. Thank you!

Here is the link. http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:471315

Brotherkarthus111 (talk) 19:47, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the welcome. Just a quick question, I am trying to upload an avatar picture via my iPad and I'm failing miserably. The picture is within the size and pixels specified. It's driving me nuts. I have contacted wikia for help, but that takes a couple of days. If you can help me out I'd really appreciate it.Urmawife Nowdave (talk) 01:36, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Why is my story getting deleted?

Oh yeah...

Affiliation
Greetings, I am Sonicfan919. I am here on behalf of the Bring Your Ideas to Life to propose a partnership between our wikis. I know that Creepypasta Wiki is a very large and famous wiki while Bring Your Ideas to Life Wiki is currently small but affiliation between our wikis would be beneficial for both of us. If we become affiliated, both of our wikis will be visited by a network of creative writers. Bring Your Ideas to Life is extremely lenient towards articles and as a result, if we are affiliates you could direct users that won't adhere to some of the rules to my wiki where they could post their work. Partnering with my wiki would be simple, we'd just display each other's link on our wikis. I feel that we would be great partners because we are both story-based wikis. It would be a great honor to be partners.

If you have any questions, ask. I hope we can work something out. ......... (talk) 05:23, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Would love to know how my pasta was a spin-off of something. None of the characters I created were based off of anything.

HansWulf (talk) 05:36, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

HansWulf

I completely understand and I thank you for taking the time to read my message. ......... (talk) 06:24, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Site Rules
While I was looking back through, I noticed the Site Rules need some updating and format changes: Thus far, those are the only issues I've noticed. I'd edit them myself, but they're obviously protected, being Site Rule pages and all. Senjumaru Shutara 10:57, June 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) The site rule pages I wrote on my phone back when I was an administrator still have transparent blocks due to the bullet point character on the phone not registering. These need moved to normal bullet points for consistency.
 * 2) Some rule pages make several references to the now non-existent VCROC.
 * 3) The Vandalism Policy has a link to the wrong Spinpasta.
 * 4) On the hub, the bullet points between some of the page links lack spacing, making the page look awkward.
 * I've fixed all of these issues where I could find them. 11:16, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

In Torment In Hell
Hello, Empy. I just wanted to say that In Torment In Hell is out now. I know you already took a look at it in the writers workshop, but this version has more chapters, and the actual ending. Thank you for reading. ShawnHowellsCP (talk) 16:23, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Hello Empty,

I am sorry about the confusion of my story. It was unfinished and I was still working on it. I did not want to post it; I just wanted to edit half of the story and paste the rest.

Thank you, Weird Message

Your Body and You
My story, Your Body and You has been tagged as NSFW and I don't really think it deserves that tag. Readers have told me it deserves a PoTM nomination, and now the story can't get it. Could you give it a look for me and give me your opinion?

Thank you so much, Ameagle (talk) 02:02, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, forget about it. I got it sorted out with SoPretentious. Sorry to waste your time. Ameagle (talk) 02:09, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, ok. Thanks. Ameagle (talk) 02:12, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

Contest Slots
Hello Empy, just a quick question about available space for contests. I wanted to host a Lovecraftian style contest around August 20th in honor of Lovecraft's birthday, but if I'm not mistaken, I believe Blacknumber has reserved the month of August for his Freestyle competition. Is that correct? And if so, when is the next available space for a contest? Thanks in advance. Whitix (talk) 23:39, June 15, 2015 (UTC)


 * Ah, I see. I don't have a full proposal yet, as I wanted to ensure the date would work.  I'll take your advice and wait a bit so it's not overshadowed by Blacknumber's contest.  Thanks again. Whitix (talk) 00:14, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

NACHOS! Hello Nachos. Oh wait, they don't exist 01:13, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Why did you delete my creepypasta? It was my first one to publish.

I worked hard and tried to look off writing ideas off of the Creepypasta Wiki.

I think I followed the wiki qualities, right? Sorry if I sounded rude.

Just please? What can I do to make it to the wiki? I am a creative writer.

I do not like discouragement. Reply ASAP please.

Licensing
I've found pastas that contain the template and other pastas that contain a message informing users that the license is incompatible with the wiki. I know nothing of the subject, myself, I could easily research the information, but I was thinking you might know, and that would be faster. Should the pastas with the template be deleted (and possibly given the same message as these ones, Mold, Ivory Spires), is it fine the way it is, or should the template (and the license) be removed from the pages that have it?

kk* SoPre tentious *ttyl  03:49, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

So sorry about the story submission! , but thank you very much for explaining were and how your supposed to do it and for removing the story! Again, so sorry! Melancholy-cp (talk) 12:14, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Hello again! I was wondering what I could do better with The Codex. I did notice that it might go under the excessive gore category, but what else could I do to fix it? Thabk you for the help! Brotherkarthus111 (talk) 21:00, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Collab
If you're still around, come over to Starpolar for a bit so we can start talking about our collab. Senjumaru Shutara 22:42, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Hello, I am messaging you today because I am wondering why my Creepypasta  The Crow's Gaze has been deleted from the site a few minutes after having been published. The message I received states that it did not meet the Quality Standards, and does not state any specifics as to what criteria it did not meet. I would simply like an explanation as to why it was deleted so I can avoid making this mistake in the future.

Thank you for your time,

SpookyPesto (talk) 23:46, June 16, 2015 (UTC)SpookyPesto

Thank you for telling me about what mistakes I made while making my story The Crow's Gaze. I will be sure to make further changes in the future. is there any way I may access the original story to edit it so I can apply the necessary changes to correct it? It was a sort of off-the-top-of-my-head kind of story, but I would still like to edit it to be able to be on the CreepyPasta wiki. I kept it as one big paragraph believing it would be short, seeing how I had not too many ideas for it. is it possible you could recover it for me or give me the original story somehow so I may edit it to meet the criteria?

Thanks,

SpookyPesto (talk) 00:25, June 17, 2015 (UTC)SpookyPesto

Thanks for the link. My web browser won't allow me to go to the story editor page, saying it may be temporarily down or moved to a new location, but thanks anyway. I'll be sure to avoid my previous mistakes in my next story.

Have a nice day,

SpookyPesto (talk) 00:59, June 17, 2015 (UTC)SpookyPesto

Double standarts
To tell you the truth, I think the management here has a lot of double standarts. Let me explains, meanwhile you guys pride yourself over the high quality of the content, the only thing that matters as it seems to the admins is the appearence of the works - grammar, capitalization and punctuation. I've read a lot of material over the years Ive been a part of this community and for the last six months for the most part, only generic, unintentionally overly foreshadowed and overly blunt material is accepted.

I mean I check around the site, find some good story, remember it's name, decide to show it to my friends a couple of weeks later - story's gone... just like this one story about some demonic being who came as a mistake out of a satanic ritual and wanted to start a kind of cult of demons/monsters, it's a new idea and the story itself was good... and if the whole theme is over used, any holder containing conjuration of creatures or spirits should be deleted to in my opinion. On the contrary to that, stories about psychotic girls who lose their minds and randomly murder people stay on list. you're probably already figured out which Im talking about. I swear, I get around pastas and I read comments giving raitings like "1/10" or "well this is cliche" and other comments that shouldn't be on a high quality pasta in large quanitties yet these bad pastas stay.

Honestly, I must also add some of my own personal feelings, no matter what post and no matter how good people outside of this site think my material is, everything I post since the beginning of 2015 just gets deleted for "quality standarts" most of the time unexplained, hilariously one Pasta I wrote was deleted by an admin that was around this site less than the pasta itself, and not only it got deleted, much just "Jeff the Killer" it was gone without a trace... simply none existent in the database.

Another pasta of mine that was here for months was deleted for being "illogical" well let me break it down to the genius who decided whats logical and what's not, most pastas that dont include some element of twisted reality in the readers mind or arent psychological material are illogical and should be deleted under the category of being unrealistic and illogical.

But let's leave me aside... I honestly think it's kind of stupid to let one person read a pasta and decide if it's good enough or not, especially if that person has been immersed in the genre for a really short period of time.

My last point, hate it or love, is that this site and it's content have become way too PG to be considered "Horror" or Gruesome, I mean the worst content we have is a slashing of neck and some bleeding...

You dont really have to reply though

BloodySpghetti (talk) 13:40, June 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * I hope this isn't serious. 14:45, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

To a master story teller
I'd love to see where you can take my story My Greek Vacation on the This is NOT a contest blog. It's not too NSFW, is it? You know me, so easily carried away. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 16:18, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Hello,

I recently uploaded a story that was deleted (I wonder how many times a day you hear that) titled "1:27 AM". So I checked the forums as well as the link you provided to see why. I'm still having a bit of trouble pinpointing what exactly it could be. I understand it was more than likely a very mediocre piece overall. And some of the formatting may have been screwed up. This was my first post to this site and it all seemed so overwhelming, so it's not really surprising that something went wrong. Do you think you could tell me what I did wrong, and maybe spare a tip or two to help me improve and keep from making the same mistakes? I'm always looking to improve.

Thank you so much for your time, and sorry to nag. MassMickley (talk) 21:01, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your reply
Thank you for getting back so quickly. The error with two quotes in the same paragraph was completely accidental. It was written correctly, but the formatting was just pretty confusing, so I had to paste it in like three different times. I'm very sorry about all that. It's really quite embarrassing.

Have a great day! MassMickley (talk) 21:28, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

hello there!

I am new to this website, and I have been reading the rules for commenting on each pasta; but are we allowed to place in some theories in the comments?

EX. pasta: Suicidemouse.avi theory/comment(summarized): "what if this was made during world war 2... they could have possibly made this to kill off the kids in America, so they would not suffer when the Nazis win. but since we won, the cartoon was canceled." (btw, this was an actual comment posted on the pasta that I gave as an example.)

And if I created any grammar mistakes then I'm sorry. there is no auto-correct on my computer. :P

I hope you reply to before I'll make any mistakes... --ThatMichaelLeroifan13 (talk) 00:16, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

It's a true story. Where do you get off? I can't change a true story, so forget it. Don't forget, if you ban me, I'll keep coming right back with different accounts.

okay, thank you for the information! :) --ThatMichaelLeroifan13 (talk) 01:08, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

I would like to know why you returned The Wire Philosophy creepypasta back to its original form. I had edited it before you, putting a "t" after an "i" it the beginning of a sentence.

"... I kind of looks like it has a big mouth..." is what was originally posted.

"... It kind of looks like it has a big mouth..." is how I edited.

So I'll ask you again why my edit was reversed?

MonarchMKUltra (talk) 03:01, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, okay. Thanks for the clarification. MonarchMKUltra (talk) 03:10, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

About your message on my talk page...
Um, about the message you left on my talk page (sorry, I'm still new, so excuse me if there's actually a "Reply" button somewhere), I didn't make the cemetery story, only edited it a bit.- Vulcrow, the Destined One 12:35, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Mr. Travis,

You have delted both my creepypastas, The TY Conspiracy, and They Always Watch. My friend and I worked hard on this, and we would like an explanation. Thanks. (Creepy Geeky (talk) 00:51, June 19, 2015 (UTC))

Mr.Travis

We explained it very well. You were a bit over dramatic saying "We need a lot of work". We did a rough copy, and planned out the story   on a sheet of paper. Besides, this is our first Creepypasta, so please un-delete it. We will take in consideration of what you said for our next Creepypasta, "The Looking Glass". This story was meant to be a fun read for viewers, and not taken into such consideraion like you did. We admire your thorough ways in editing, but this was for fun, not for serious conversation. And now, a message from my friend:


 * 1) Nobody'sPerfect

(Creepy Geeky (talk) 01:16, June 19, 2015 (UTC))

If I may put in, there are many crappy stories on this website that has worse punctuation, spelling, grammer, and plotlines than ours! Our story may be a little rushed, but we don't regret what we did, like the author of Ticci Toby! we did take time on ours, and we actually tried to fill in any plotholes! We also wanted this story not to be as scary, but more a campfire story, like Mr. Widemouth! So does it matter, I ask you? Besides, I can't find Writer's Workshop!

(Creepy Geeky (talk) 01:33, June 19, 2015 (UTC))

My friend wants to call you a jerk, but I do not agree with this method of "revenge". You are not a jerk. I have checked out your stories, and I enjoyed them very much. But please, let our story back on the Wikki, for isn't this the way we get better? One day, we'll have amazing stories like you, because we learned form our mistakes! Thank you :D

(Creepy Geeky (talk) 01:49, June 19, 2015 (UTC))

Heavy is the head....
....that eats the crayons. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:28, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Why did you delete my pasta I worked all day on it :C!

Do at least still have my Pasta? next time ill take it to the workshop. Ive been working on it all day.

Hey,

You recently deleted my story, called 515. I really worked hard on it, I was getting comments and stuff, I'd just like to know how I can improve it so I can get it back.

Thanks,

Burnandbleed (talk) 13:36, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

vote today
I put up my app for admin, just thought you didn't notice.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   21:09, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry about this first time making one of these will do better next time thanks

Spam Blog
This blog is spam. MrDupin (talk) 22:06, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Great story
Trav,

I already mentioned this on the story comments, but I wanted to take a second to bring it here too. I really liked your latest story, and since it fits the criteria for my contest so perfectly, I wanted to know if you were considering entering it. You certainly should, as it's a great story.

Best,

Banningk1979 (talk) 22:41, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

You deleted my post after I uploaded it, and I don't understand why...

Kietram (talk) 02:44, June 20, 2015 (UTC)KietramKietram (talk) 02:44, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

RE: Thanks
Thank you sir for your kind words. I'm glad that my reviews help the author and the site as a whole. I've been reviewing stories there for awhile and the fact that it helps the site and other users is a big plus. Thanks for reminding me that it's not a waste of time. Whitix (talk) 04:36, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

I noticed that my story has been deleted. What could I do to make it better?

Am I doing it right?
Hey Empy, just a quick question. I decided to try my hand at quality control and marker this story for deletion, but it seems the user was able to remove the delete now tag. I thought only administrators were able to remove that tag; am I marking the story correctly? Whitix (talk) 04:18, June 21, 2015 (UTC)


 * Took care of it. Inside there is thunder in your heart   04:43, June 21, 2015 (UTC)

Deletion of story?

Why did you delete my page?! (The Rainbow Studios)

I worked alot on that! Why does it matter if it doesn't meet quality expectations, this wiki is able to have infinite creepypastas! That was my first creepypasta, of course it doesn't meet quality expectations!

Please recover my page, that was my first creepypasta I've ever made.

- CreepsMcCreepy

CreepsMcCreepy (talk) 19:40, June 21, 2015 (UTC)

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/From_Flesh_To_Stone hey, it's SpookyPesto! i was hoping you could read my new story "From Flesh To Stone", please let me know what you think and, before deleting it (if you do), tell me what I could improve on and I will be completely glad to edit it.

Thanks,

SpookyPesto (talk) 04:40, June 22, 2015 (UTC)SpookyPesto

Hello, I noticed that my recent pasta From Flesh To Stone has been marked for review for a few things that confuse me; one is punctuation, which I thoroughly checked, double checked, and triple checked to make sure was correct, and seems correct to me. the second is capitalization, which, when looking back at it, seems completely correct. then there are 'story issues' and 'wording'. 'would like a second opinion'. i would love an explanation to further help me understand the reason for these issues so I may edit the story to be unmarked and kept on the wiki.

Thanks,

SpookyPesto (talk) 04:51, June 22, 2015 (UTC)SpookyPesto

okay, how do I edit the listed genres on the story? I can edit it right now, just give me some advice on what to change. What genres do you believe it should be listed under? I put it under all those genres since I didn't quite know exactly what to put it under.

Thanks for your help,

SpookyPesto (talk) 04:57, June 22, 2015 (UTC)SpookyPesto

I really appreciate your feedback, thank you. Yes, I do admit the whole sanatorium/psych ward/asylum thing is overused, I just had a small idea for a story and couldn't really think of anything else that wasn't cliche that went along with my idea for the monster girl. And it was a kind of rushed story, I couldn't think of anymore content to add to the story itself, any suggestions would be great though. Thank you for your help and advice,

SpookyPesto (talk) 05:30, June 22, 2015 (UTC)SpookyPesto

If I fix up the points ou brought up, can I please re-upload 515?

Burnandbleed (talk) 14:54, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Dharma
After leaving a review on it and coming across on it again, I was wondering if Dharma was up to quality standards or not. I understand that the writer of this particular story is a well-known one, and I have no grudge against him/her, but just mentioning it.

Also, can you review another short story of mine's? On the WW board, named "Father's Rage" as I wasn't sure if you reviewed the last short story I posted. Of course, you always don't have to.

Cheerz,

Classical Retard ==> Dammit, you're cold. 19:05, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Adminship Voting
I was wondering if giving feedback on requests for Adminship is locked to just Administrators, Rollbackers and/or long time members of the site? I couldn't find anything about it in the rules. I have a lot to say, but I didn't want to go in there and post if I'm not supposed to do so. I tend to only crash parties in person. I'm positive that I understand how the posting works and the procedure. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular!  20:34, June 22, 2015 (UTC)


 * Thank you! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular!  20:50, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Story Deleted
Hey empy,

I saw that you had deleted a story I had posted, after I posted it I reread it and found a few grammatical errors, is this why it was deleted? Could you please let me know?

Thanks,

JohnathanNash (talk) 23:40, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

That is all very good advice, thank you. So if I fix all of those thing, add more, change the narrative prospective, and build up to the ending more, do you think this will pass an appeal?

Okay, thank you for that, I may change it or I may just abandon it, don't know yet. But if I change it I will post it to the WW first I suppose.

Quick Question
Hey Empy,

Just found out that I could edit my talk page, so could I delete anything that I no longer want on that page or does it need to stay up? I've seen people who have put their talks into archives, and wasn't sure if you needed to do that when it came time to or if you wanted to make space to just delete things. Sorry forgot to sign. JohnathanNash (talk) 01:00, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

That's what I thought. Already had gotten a warning and a deletion today and didn't want to upset anyone or break any more rules. thanks, JohnathanNash (talk) 01:10, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Truthfully, I wasn't going to take those down. That just means that I need to write better, or check my work before posting more thoroughly, or keep as a reminder. I wanted to get rid of the welcome and there was another one that I had edited, which I thought I was replying to the person who wrote it when I did so, but just left what I wanted him to see on my page. JohnathanNash (talk) 01:17, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for allowing me to do that.

It has been one week
Hey there!

So it has been one week since I returned to go around, use templates and try to be helpful. Should I ask for rights back yet?

--&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 15:32, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

You read Chuck Palahniuk?
Check this out, funny as hell: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RB8sAKb9tPU   HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 19:25, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Hi, I have a question to ask.

What exactly was wrong with my pasta and how can I fix it to make it able to be shared on this site?

Your feedback will help me a lot. Thank you.

In need of a review
Hey Empy,

I have posted a new story in WW titled Indian Rope Trick and I would like to know what you think about it, can you give me a review and let me know?

Thanks,

JohnathanNash (talk) 04:32, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

New Tobit Chapter
Trav,

New Tobit story, which of course means I've spent the last hour trying to let as many people know. You're one of them lol.

Pleaes check it out if you get time, and leave some good old feedback.

Tobit: Hiya Toby and the Unwashed

Best,

--Banningk1979 (talk) 04:46, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Delete this?
Tried to leave a redirect because that's what I was told to do. It left the whole page behind, if you look at the history, you'll see that it should be like this "The Rose Family Secret" not this "The Roses Family Secret".

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   19:07, June 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * Done. 19:12, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

DanteDustep (talk) 21:00, June 24, 2015 (UTC) Listen, I'm just a teen author who wants to get a start early. Why did you delete "Greetings, Michael" Instantly? You said it wasn't up to quality standards, yet I found it had failed to meet none of your quality standards. Thank you for reading this, and please get back to me as soon as possible.