Talk:Just My Nightmare/@comment-27007772-20150503044332/@comment-24954258-20150503164808

Thanks for the critique it was very informative, which is what I was looking for. I'll make sure to fix the grammar and awkward phrasing when I have the time, and I'll also fix any dialog problems as I now know to fix them. I'll also fix the ellipsis as I often make that mistake and didn't catch it the first time around, I'll try to polish up the ending, and run on sentences to hopefully make this a much better read overall. So again thank you for the critique it is much appreciated, and very helpful.