Talk:Raven

A bit of work.
You could use a bit more work. I'm not a pro at writing stories, so I'm not one to correct your ideas. For me, this story wasn't too bad. I liked that it gave me a couple of chills (only 2 times, subtle). The reason for the chills is because I live in an area where ravens are all the time, eating out of the dumpsters. Since I'm not really religious, or very superstitious, it didn't have that much of an effect on me. I give this story a 3.5 / 5, which is fair. It still means it was quite good. Keep up the great job! YakuYabai  ∆Talk∆  04:59, May 11, 2013 (UTC)