Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25847009-20141211154230/@comment-24281984-20141211161836

AURAMAGIC wrote: you have to admit that people can find any reason to kill, Grizzly Bear It didn't feel real enough in this story to be believed. It was just your average killer story. Not scary, nothing really new, way too few details about the character to care about them- that's why it's a weak story to me. Someone else might think otherwise. This is just one review by one person.