Talk:The Showers/@comment-25987771-20150113230643

Quite the Pasta. I appreciate that this one had character development, especially on the part of Mr. Mays. I've seen people that I respected as a child turn out to have very sad lives when I became an adult, so that struck a sweet spot.

Sadly, the payoff isn't as good as the build-up. But that doesn't mean it's automatically bad, it's still deeply atmospheric and definitely qualifies as a 'do not read before bedtime' story. I just wish the climax had more than an evil little girl in it.

Ah well, still a great read that I'll definitely recommend. Cheers!