Talk:Things in the Woods/@comment-26444017-20180809000856

Toward the end, some things don't make sense. The prior ranger never existed? Like, I get that that's spooky, but it just doesn't seem to tie in with the rest of the story.

I found the use of grammar and punctuation to be far better than usual. Word choice could be improved a bit in some places to help the descriptions. My biggest gripe, I think, is that the beings in the woods are never described. They are clarly fast and sneaky, but the narrator gets a good look at them toward the end, a look that is not described to us.

Overall, not bad in my opinion. A bit of touch up would go a long way, but the story is pretty good.