Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26900569-20150825232818

Heya, everyone. I've come here today to post a summery of my first Creepypasta, and to ask a few questions if anybody can spare the time to answer them. This was a story I've been wanting to write for some time, as there isn't very many Creepypastas (at least well-known ones) that revolve around Pokemon X & Y, even though there's a lot of potential with using a game that has many new technologies and features that have never been seen before in any previous installment of the Pokemon games. I decided I wanted to take advantage of this and write a Creepypasta that hopefully can be different some-what from the rest, as I do understand that it's difficult to come up with completely original ideas for this genre of Creepypasta. However, I hope you'll enjoy what I've come up with so far. The summery of the story goes something like this:



The main female protagonist (haven't thought of a name for her yet) just moved into a new apartment with her mother, where she finds a mysterious box hidden in the back of one of the room's closets. The mother insists that the maintenance workers must have forgotten to remove it when cleaning out the living space, and says that it contains a few things left behind by the last occupant that she might be interested in. The box had a few things that weren't too interesting, such as a hat, a few open letter envelopes, and a small box filled with trinkets and knick-knacks. That's until she finds a Pokemon Y game cartridge inside the box, finally striking a bit of gold. The physical game itself looked fine, looking practically new, in fact. She felt a bit sorry for the person who left this game behind after she popped into her 3DS to play it, as it looks like he/she didn't even have a game file saved to it yet before abandoning it. Whoever left this behind must have been in a hurry...perhaps toomuch in a hurry... That is until she started a new game, and made an unexpected, new friend in the way she would've never guessed was even possible. Slowly, a series of mysteries and odd events begin to unravel as she finds out the true identy of her new friend...and the entity that stalks him. Unfortunately, the game cartidge holds a dark secret that has been kept tucked away from the public eye in order to not cause panic of the residents of the city the protagonist lives in. However, she must uncover it and bring it to light in order to save the new friend she's now grown fond of...

"My friend, MATT."



So what do you guys think of it? What changes should I make? Do I have any cliches that I'm not aware of that needs to be changed? I'm a bit new to writing these, so any feedback would be apprecated! Also, by the by, the full version of this story will come complete with pictures that coincide with it (which I wont post quite yet).

Now about those questions...the main concern that I had with posting a pasta like this is the fact that it's a Pokemon Creepypasta, which I heard, after a bit of searching around, that the Creepypasta Wikia was no longer accepting Pokepastas. Is this true? And if it is, how will I be able to write this pasta if it will only result in it being rejected or deleted? If anybody knows the answers, please tell me, because I'll be very saddened if there's no way to post this story on here. :(

Again, I appreciate anyone who has any thoughts, suggestions, or even answers for my very first post on here. Just be sure to be gentle, please. Thanks a bunch!  