Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34296765-20160531232029/@comment-25569708-20160603072020

Well, I saw that Invective said double-spacing was in fact allowed, so it looks like Fuckface Frank strikes again. Please disregard my previous comments.

One final thing I would quickly note is that "crawling all over the boy and tormenting him with stinging bites relentlessly." would probably read a bit better as "crawling all over the boy and tormenting him with relentless stinging bites." And now that I think of it, it would take a very long time for the mother to completely fill the box with bugs. Therefore, it would probably be a good idea for you to make note of that, and perhaps write the boy's reaction to the filling as it is happening. Just a thought.