Talk:Running Out of Tombstones/@comment-25226524-20161011145538

Man, I have to say your writing has improved significantly. Not to say your other stuff is bad, but this was very well written. It actually had me guessing at what the hell was really going on until the very end, which is extremely rare. I partially knew what was happening, but the boy being in the old lady's coffin really threw me for a loop and confused me. There were some small things I wasn't crazy about, like the few times you seemed to break the style/flow by using sentences like "Oh well" and "Oh God". That's a bit of a shift in perspective, in my opinion, and took me out of the story for a moment. The only other complaint I have is the ending wrapped up too quickly. Don't get me wrong, you did a great job with it, but I personally would have liked to see and feel a bit more of that final scene.

This is a really good story, my friend, and it shows very noticeable improvements. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. I was curious, did you take those pictures?