Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25546552-20141017032946/@comment-24381191-20141021181457

There isn't really much in this. Maybe you sould flesh it out a little more. Also, you don't need to leave a line after every sentence. You spelled sense 'since' It sould be like this:

''When you flick a switch and light bathes the room, where does the Darkness drain? ''The thought buzzed through my head quickly.

"I just can't shake the thought," I whisper to myself as I gaze into the sunset. As my eyelids begin to wall off my view, an idea floods into my mind.

What if light only shrouds the Darkness?

For an instant I glimpse around my cold and decrepit bedchamber, it all makes sense...

As I open my eyes many hours later, my vision can't help but be dragged to the edge of my room. In the corner, a chilling void that is easily distinguishable. Last night, I ran to the switch, but now I know that even in the light, the Darkness is still watching.

I don't really like the picture (sorry) but the story is good as an idea, flesh it out more, maybe add some incident.