Talk:Funnymouth/@comment-26268601-20150505043525

This is my favorite story from slimebeast. At first you sit there trying to decode what community is saying. Then once you finish the story and re-read you understand the gibberish that makes you sick to your stomach. The humor and sarcasm adds to the plot perfectly without distracting the readers attention. Also the idea of having you own world in which you are like a God being tampered with makes you feel threatened no? What's worse is the reality of the situation that you thought you had some control over shows how helpless we really are. I also enjoy how the narrator becomes just like funnymouth.

On a few side notes, one I have a thing with teeth that totally messes with me. Two I actually have spent the past week waking up checking to see if my jaw was broken... I was not even really scared at this story!

My grade:10 out of 10