Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27012445-20161206081102/@comment-25226524-20161206175032

Well, damn... that's not what I was expecting. Existential and disturbing. This is impressive but also makes me very uncomfortable (very rare for me). I'm glad to see this wasn't normal restricted poetry. I rather enjoy some lyrical writing and have done a small amount of spoken word writing myself (completely unstructured and unrestrained). This made me feel a great deal of sympathy for the narrator, but also for everyone. I really liked it.