Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24900907-20140504221433/@comment-5239282-20140504224600

There are quite a few spelling and grammatical errors, but that's to be expected considering English's your fourth. Caring diligence toward its maintenance can elevate the quality to decent. I can aid with that, if you like.

The story's nothing special. I kept myself entertained trying to guess when and where the ghost'd pop up. Fleshing it out to include a much more detailed account can make it a real winner.

It also ends a bit unfinished. I know it's an attempt to leave it open-ended, but it's more like a car driving off a cliff than the man hanging off the cliff. ;p

More than that, however, I can't find anything I know that'd violate the blacklist filter.