Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-12695236-20140621101152/@comment-12695236-20140622132642

Hey Hopia! Thank you for the feedback! I have took into account what you have said and have changed the parts you spoke about. At least I hope I have changed them enough to satisfy the audience! Now, I can't edit The Clown, the Paint and the Turbines anymore because it is already known on various sites and various Youtuber's have narrated it, but The Circus I have edited. I changed the last line of Big Top, and the last line of the entire story, which hints that Big Top is alive......:D The titles I won't change at the moment because people know the stories by the title mainly, but my next part will be a different title! Melody's link with the children after the events has been backed up now. It's not as spontaneous as it was originally. Now, I will have a look at your stories to!

Thanks!

Elliot