Talk:Crescent Forest/@comment-26675653-20150717024043

This story was enjoyably interesting to read! I just wish you had more dialogue when it came to the travelers to make this story a bit more exciting and I wish you individualized the characters instead of always mentioning them as "the travelers" because that seemed really repetitive to me. Other than that, your discription of the setting was well written, this just needs a little clean up!