Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181019010044/@comment-36393004-20181019151305

Ok, finally was able to read this. I did not see any glaring errors but it does seem rushed compared to the other installments. I like that you are bringing in the other characters and opening up the world. I like knowing there is a bigger picture (even though it's still hazy at the moment). This was just interesting enough to make me wonder how this all started and why. I liked it though, just like all the others.