Talk:The Chernobyl Evolution

Honestly, this gave me a headache. The grammar was in need of a lot of work and so was the writing. There were mistakes every other word which I tried to fix up a bit, as welll as huge plot holes in the story. Also, it sounds like its a bastardized, B-Cut version of "The Chernobyl Diaries". There were no explinations, no real build up (It pretty much jumped straight to the "climax" of the story), and even the title of the pasta makes no real sense. The idea is a good one, I love Chernobyl based stories, but it needs a lot of work. Good Luck. Rainbow~Pariah (talk) 02:59, July 24, 2012 (UTC)