Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26535938-20150626230942/@comment-26723520-20150717184742

I mean this could of used some more build up like how it started effecting him mentally and such. Also with the child porn part it needed to be worked on better instead of just for shock value. Finally the part where they decided to kill themselves,instead of trying something else first, they do it in such an over the top manner really filling a bathtub before they cut their wrists?