Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20190213101433/@comment-35711173-20190214211326

BloodySpghetti wrote:

In regards to translating The GSK into this story, I'd have to double or triple the length just to make him more lifelike, in this case. sorry that it disappointed you. Thank you regardless.

Bloody Spaghetti,

I'm sorry for not phrasing my feedback clearly. I didn't mean to ask for a translation of the GSK. I was trying to say that I didn't have the feeling of the horror or the craziness of the GSK. You don't need to translate that whole long list of rapes and killings. You couldn't - almost all the killings happened after the guy was sacked from the force.

Dr. Bob