Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25623211-20141107184522/@comment-25623211-20141107192257

1. He has combat experience from his previous years as a serial killer and other training, I'll attempt to clarify that somewhere along the line. The story was something short I wrote in a single sitting, so I realized it needed much more detail; but as it was for school I needed something done immediately. 2. I'm restraining myself simply to connect with superhero comics which have to sensor the word and it will be joked about at least once later on. 4. Thanks for advice on that and the story in general