Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-2240864-20140612220044/@comment-24419286-20140613045836

ChaoZStrider wrote: I would make Jeff more of an adult and still have him be a burn victim, however, he wouldn't look like his damn picture. The "white" skin would be a mask and the hair would be a wig. His insanity would be caused by all the pain and trauma from being almost burnt to death. However, this wouldn't be what makes him start killing people. There would be an incident that finally sets him off.

The mask is important because most psychopaths who wear a mask do so to that if they get caught, they can be classified as insane and get away from the entire justice system without jail time. The identity he creates while he wears the mask is the one who commited the murders. Perhaps when Jeff isn't killing, he could be a more normal, kind, courteous individual while in the he is cold, calculated, and unfeeling(merciless if you will).

Perhaps his fighting ability could be attributed to some sort of military service, if he fought in a war he could also have PTSD, which could help to attribute why he snapped in the first place. Sounds way less shitty than the original, actually better.