Talk:Dirty Movie/@comment-31077845-20170207182313

Wait, what? Either the timeline is just confusing or it's impossible. It at least SOUNDS like the dog was already bloody by the time the drinking started, which would make it tough for him to be drunk for when it happened. And the whole thing just doesn't make sense in general. So there's a really creepy guy who's showing a morbid fascination with the people's chihuahua, and they kinda just...let him wander around their house? And he was an assistant camera operator. If he was pissing everyone off, why wouldn't they all tell him to get the fuck out? And then, pretending the timeline is just confusingly worded and the dog was...assaulted, after the protagonist started drinking, so what, everyone's just kinda standing around, not really wondering where this horribly offensive fellow is, and while I don't know the layout of the house, not noticing him going downstairs or just generally immediately running and grabbing the dog before doing anything else?

This guy is an alcoholic, so in order for him to get blackout drunk enough to start losing parts of the night he would've really had to have been hammering that shit back for some time, again, all while nobody is wondering "Hey, where is that really fucked up guy at in our house?". So somehow this all goes on and...what, the holly guy comes and gets the protagonist and gets him to film this? And nobody noticed? Or the protagonist guy is just wandering around these people's house holding a camera and by pure circumstance happened to come across a dude raping a dog in a 7 minute window? Then both of them went up and out and the dog was found separately? And the guy wasn't too drunk to not remember the bloody dog and all and was able to run out to try to catch holly and jorge, but was drunk enough to not remember having filmed this presumably not long before?

Yo story makes no sense bro. None whatsoever. Also, alcohol usually doesn't function that conveniently for your narrative.