Talk:Gypsy Camp/@comment-4849011-20150210004843/@comment-4459060-20150212030811

Sounds good, and I see the points you made. In my personal opinion, I was not happy with the ending result of my pasta. I cant wait for the next time around to try some new things and hopefully deliver a more successful end product.

I had a larger idea in mind but what came out in the page wasnt what I had intended. I wanted to get more into developing the characters and actually making them a bit likeable, but by the end of writing I realized I had completely missed my mark. Not dissapointed with I wrote, but I view this piece as more of something to build up from. More of something to look at and ask, "What can I change here to make things better?" Now Im just going on and on, but thanks for your input. It was fun trying something new and experimenting with some things that worked and others that didnt :)