Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28856385-20190102110255

(Note: I don't know why the story is in bold, as it won't go back to normal no matter what I did. It might be because I copy and pasted this from Google Doc [but none of it was in bold anyway].)

'''My partners and I sighed in relief as we threw the final wooden pieces of the stage into the nearby storage of our school. Some of us clapped and cheered that it was finally over, someone was calling their mom to let them go to the cast party. It was almost 12 P.M. We had been working on tearing down the stage and cleaning up the dressing room for 2 hours. And they weren’t fast 2 hours, as it was obvious. We went back to the school and we were basically given many thanks from our director for the play before we all rushed to our cars.'''

'''I’m going to back up for a minute. We had finished the second showing of our school’s fall musical. This year’s choice was “Little Shop of Horrors”. We all thought it was a good choice, and honestly, we did pretty fine. We had some rough times during rehearsals, like our director getting angry at us for reminding him that we were legally required to leave at 5 on Wednesdays, but we kept going. Honestly, opening night was so much better than our second night. Our second night was awful. Seymour’s actor, Haden, lost his voice (but was able to somewhat get it back on Act 2), forcing the musical director to sing for him (but the mics just weren’t loud enough for him). Timings were thrown off, tears were shed, but we pulled through.'''

'''After our second night, we had to clean up our dressing room and strike down the huge stage, consisting of the shop, a brick wall for the dentist’s office, and a stoop. All of that had to go, and this year, we had to send all the pieces into the storage. My parents and I negotiated on when I should come back home from the cast party. 2 A.M. Fine by me, really. My friend Amber was willing to take me to Kaitlyn's house, where the cast party was. She also brought Emmy with her, and we were singing and dancing around on the way there. In front of us was Trey and we accidentally passed Kaitlyn's house, and he took a long time to turn around, and we almost had a car crash, so we were pretty angry at him.'''

'''Going inside, we said hi to Kaitlyn's dad before we all went downstairs to find pizza, soda, popcorn, a pinball machine, a pool table, and basically a bar waiting for us. We all indulged ourselves. I was basically the one eating the most pizza, and I was able to play pool ball for the first time. I wasn’t so good at the game, as told by the cue ball jumping over the balls I’m trying to strike. I wasn’t the only one struggling, as shown by Emmy realizing that her tea was actually fermented and alcoholic. She almost started crying in guilt from bringing the fermented tea over, but Kaitlyn was okay with it. I volunteered to drink the rest of the tea since Emma didn’t really like tea.'''

'''After an hour of indulgence, we all decided to play some games before we watched the Little Shop of Horrors movie, with Rick Moranis. One of the games we decided to play was “Never Have I Ever”, and it was definitely embarrassing. It was also kind of vulgar, given that some people put a finger down for “having sex” and “vaping”, and I didn’t know that my friends had done this. I should’ve expected it, however. When it came to my second turn, I really didn’t know what to do and I thought of something funny just to burn my turn.'''

'''“Never have I ever murdered someone,” I said. Everyone looked at me in disbelief before Emmy laughs, therefore sparking the rest of the room to laugh with her, me joining in as well. I honestly was expecting them to point out how stupid my joke was. At the corner of my eye, I saw someone’s finger go down. I stopped laughing and immediately shot a glance at Korgen, who wasn’t laughing either. He looked pretty blank, as well. Apparently, I wasn’t the only one as the laughter slowly died down and everyone stares at Korgen.'''

'''“...Haha! You’re- good joke, boy!” Emmy laughed, but Korgen never said anything and her smirk dimmed. I was the first one to slowly back away from the room. What happened next was probably the most horrifying situation I’ve ever experienced in my life. Korgen suddenly pulled a knife from his pocket and stabbed Leanna, my crush, in the head. Everyone screamed in horror as Leanna dropped dead, and we began to run out of the room, pushing each other. Korgen continued to stab the people that were farthest from the door as we all tried to run up the stairs. I’m not sure how but he suddenly ran in front of the stairs, blocking all of us and tried to slash at me, as I was the first ready to run up the stairs, but I was able to jump back, knocking over my other friends behind me.'''

“You’re not going anywhere!” Korgen yelled.

'''“DAD! HELP US!” Kaitlyn screamed, and Korgen frowned in frustration. Kaitlyn’s dad ran over to see what was happening but Korgen threw the knife right into his head, instantly killing him. Kaitlyn cried as we all screamed as Korgen tried to get the knife from his head. I charged him and tackled him over, and the rest rushed to the front door, unlocking the door and running to their cars. Korgen slashed me in the stomach and it felt burning as I screamed in pain. Korgen was overweight so he had a struggle trying to get up, so I ran outside holding my stomach. I saw all the cars starting to leave and I screamed at everyone to stop and let me get in. But no one stopped. They didn’t even look at me as they all sped away, almost running into each other, leaving me alone.'''

'''I saw Korgen run towards me with the knife, and I immediately began running down the road but my wounds had me leaning over, making me slower as it hurt just to run and breath. I felt Korgen tackle me and I began to flail as he cut my arms and face, resisting him from trying to stab in the head.'''

'''“Korgen, please! Stop!” I begged, but he wouldn’t listen to me. After a couple minutes of struggling and me getting more cut and bruised, someone ran up and slammed Korgen’s head with a pole, knocking him out instantly. I laid there on the ground crying before I passed out from the blood I had lost.'''

'''I woke up in the hospital with my mom, dad, and sister next to my bed. They all sighed in relief, cried and hugged me. I had stitches on my huge slash across my stomach and bandages all around my cut marks. I’m really happy to be able to survive. My friends that survived the massacre arrived at the hospital an hour after I woke up and cried, hugging me. They all apologized for leaving me at Kaitlyn’s house, but they thanked me for essentially saving their lives. Out of those who were there, Leanna, Trey, Tristen, and Faith had died. I was mourning the most for Leanna, as I had a crush on her since Kindergarten. She was just such a nice girl, and now she’s gone.'''

'''Korgen got life in prison. When questioned, apparently his motives were that we had been the rudest to him during rehearsals and he thought that no one there was his friend. He wasn’t right, we all thought he was really cool, especially when he made “okay, now that’s epic” as a little running gag during rehearsals. We all thought what he said had no real motive at that point, and that he had done something too extreme. Now we definitely aren’t his friends anymore.'''  