Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-25783468-20150519044845/@comment-25037895-20150519053648

I think the story is really great, "socialistic" means in accordance with socialism. The word you are looking for is "sociable." I think the story had great tension and description. It was well worded in my opinion also. The conclusion I didn't see coming. Somehow that took me by surprise, even though its a simple ending. Overall, I think the story works very nicely. I sent you a message, and I'm fairly sure that your story was rejected by the spam filter because of the word "slenderman". It only shows up once, so it should be no problem to just take out that sentence. Its not really adding to the story much anyways. Very well done.