Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150430062138/@comment-26326346-20150501071526

I made all of the changes that you suggested. I hated going the unknown/undiscovered species route, but I couldn't find any small, black, venomous snakes through a google search.

My laptop has some decent sized holes for adapters and for it to air out. That got me thinking about how big the holes could have been on an older more bulky laptop and I figured that a small snake might be able to crawl in such a model.

Thank you for the feedback and for calling my pasta original. I hope that you continue to give me feedback and suggestions for my Creepypasta :)