Talk:Road Kill/@comment-24996913-20140830075054

Very freaky! I love animals and I love science so this makes me a little nervous, haha. But, onto the important stuff... I did see a few minor punctuation issues. But, all in all, this was a good science pasta with a serving of chills. I usually avoid journal styled writing, I don't know why I suppose it bores me, but this was tolerable. The story made me forget about the format. Lastly, this was well written and I definitely appreciated the diction. The problem with a lot of people who write science pastas is the lack of heightened vocabulary, fitting for the characters within the stories. Being that it is supposed to resemble professional, educated people, it annoys me when I see that. But, you balanced it perfectly. I felt as if those were real scientists/doctors. Nice job!