Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9584883-20150101142648/@comment-4849011-20150103011851

Now with both me and CreativityPays you have two editors eager to give you any additional grammar help/advice you might need. You may be an amateur, but you've practically gathered your own staff! How many writers on here can brag about that?

In my review for the earlier draft, I noted that I smiled at how tongue-in-cheek "Scarypasta" was. Now you've taken the breaking of the fourth wall further by making "Summer in Texas" an element of the story, and I love it! It's an interesting way of bringing Sarah/Chloe into it. This was interesting to start and it only becomes more interesting with each new development. I'd say more, but a lot of what I liked about this one I liked about the previous draft, so I'll just point to my post on that one and nod. Keep it up! ~points to previous post and nods~