Talk:My Friend, Ethan/@comment-26254996-20150819201646

A lot of questions. How old is this kid supposed to be? I know this is some what nitpicky, but he sounds older so he should know his parents number. That and why is screaming normal in his neighborhood? Wish you would have explained that because it sounds odd and doesn't make sense really. And the ending seemed rushed and abrupt. I get the whole "leaving it open to interpretation for drama and suspense" thing, but it didn't quite end for it to take that effect. Sorry for this, just a few pointers. It was still good and I enjoyed that it wasn't super long like some pastas!