Talk:A Cult of Metal/@comment-24101790-20170525211750/@comment-3126148-20170526103119

I appreciate the critique! That mistake is representative of one of my worst and most prevalent traits as I write, and is a huge pet peeve of mine! I will be moving to correct that specific error quite quickly, as I do know how the line should read. Regardless, I'm glad you enjoyed the piece even with the errors that inhabit it! I can safely say that there will be more coming. I don't know that they'll all be this length, but for the more in depth stories which introduce and explore multiple facets of the lore I think this is about the appropriate size for me.