Talk:Not Tonight/@comment-5306249-20200221033712

Temperance is definitely a trickier card to manage compared to the rest. While I think this story managed to fulfill the theme to a reasonable degree, I also felt the scariness did not reach its maximum potential for a scenario of this caliber; similarly, the theme could have been executed more effectively.

I think the mindset of the psychopath could have been more personal or nuanced, if that makes sense. Its certainly creepy in some aspects, but also a little overly-campy in tone at the same time. For a relatively short story about a damaged individual who is trying to withhold their violent tendencies, it still hits the mark for realism and theme.

Style: 4/5 Horror: 3/5 Entertainment: 3/5 Theme: 4/5 Total: 14/20