Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28862560-20160627172357/@comment-24101790-20160627184053

Zimmer550king wrote: Wow thanks, I would definitely improve on my story and upload a revised draft here. Really appreciate the feedback.

A helpful tip: If you post the revised version in the comments below, it'll bump your story to the top of the forum page so you can get additional feedback. Best of luck to you.