Talk:Hitchhiking/@comment-5886533-20140331030540

Nice. 7/10 for sure. I have an even deeper fear for hitchhiking now. Perfect grammar; no errors that I saw. Great vivid descriptions, too. However, it was a bit predictable thanks to the title. I also was a little confused as to why he got back into the RV. Sure, I get that he was afraid that the redneck would chase and catch him, and that the redneck knew the whole time that the progonist saw the remains, but if I were the protagonist I'd rather take my chances running to a gas station than to get back in a RV with a murderer who could take me god knows where and do who knows what with me. Please, write more! :)