Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26169026-20150304202536/@comment-26169026-20150309233836

I don't feel like you were harsh at all. I wanted someone to help otherwise I never would have posted it. I don't normally write supernatural stories. All feedback is highly appreciated. I'll take your comments into consideration. Looking at your criticism, it makes me realize why I don't write supernatural stuff. I should have just stuck with my normal writing.

Thank you.