Talk:Mullaghbrack/@comment-28578739-20160717190809

I'm visiting Ireland this fall and couldn't help but have a little gander at this story!

You wrote the characters very well - the reader gets to know them seamlessly without needing a buttload of cookie cutter information. It's hard to like either of them, but I assume that is the point.

I'm probably the only one, but...

I felt a disconnect between the concept of all these genocides, heads on spikes, mass rapes, infanticide and an alleged giant bug-like creature that also kills and eats people. I have a lot of questions regarding it, but I'll end up significantly filling the comment post like a nuisance. Of course mystery is important in stories, and when done well can add a lot of eerie allure, but even just a little extra detail to tie the two together would have been a welcome addition. My pardons in advanced if I had missed something.

I think there is one clue, with discovered cave paintings?

In the meantime, nice work on the pleasantly fluid writing style!