Talk:Only the Tips/@comment-8113745-20150703040704

I really like it but heres my rating.

Starting with 10/10 here we go.

Character developement is ok, but i wish it would be better -half a point (9.5)

The plot isnt very good, like describe why one wanted to go in the tunnel and one didnt etc -1 point (8.5)

The description of the characters isnt very good, hair colour? Age? And mostly all you said for the "Creature" was black sludge,inhuman face, and horns -1.5 points (7/10)

Ending, wasnt very good, try using a finishing paragraph instead of part of a sentence -half a point

Overall rating is 6.5/10