Talk:Hanging Gardens/@comment-5946174-20131028144543/@comment-5025667-20131031175027

You make a good point, and I'm glad I asked honestly. I wanted to keep the first half ambigious, allowing the speaker to only get a glimpse rather than a stare. If I started to include specific references to religion, I was afraid that it would also take away the mystery. Not answering any questions, and posing more in regards to the first half was sort of the point of the first half. The second half was supposed to give an answer to the narrator WHY he should have never came, and his punishment thereafter. The ending was not trying to pull any tricks in regards to our narrator's death. It was very heavily foreshadowed in the beginning, after all.

I'll expand the latter half more to make it not as rushed, and see what I can do. I've been yearning to return to the Gardens someday anyways.