Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20160909215816/@comment-28266772-20160910204920

Hey guys, thank you very much for you feedback. I appreciate you taking the time to read it since it's not exactly short. I'm going to take some time out and think about what I want to do with this one, I had certain intentions that I fell short of. I've got plenty of time until the competition ends anyway.

I was originally aiming for ambiguity but I'm not sure it's worked out here. The basic interpretation would be that the woman is a classic psychopath, hence the narcissism. But I'll look into it and rebalance things over the coming week.