Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25379190-20141011000754/@comment-11185420-20141011002126

To be completely honest I don't see it, what makes this a creepypasta that is.

Expand the narrative, typically Creepypastas fit into one of two catagories the kind that make you think, and the kind that freak you out/scare you. This feels too mixed I don't get it really. The ending esspecially, it's like wtf, this is the end?

Problems: Narrative is too short, ending isn't good.

Please take this as honest criticism.