Talk:The Attic in the Basement/@comment-24118811-20141228165248

Good story, but a few things. I liked the story overall but when it got to the end of the story where he started to talk about witchcraft, I think it sort of ruined it and just took the magic and mystery out of the whole situation, and sometimes cliffhangers are kinda good, in this case

Plus about the protagonist, why didn't he just break the window and tried to climb down, even though he might think he kind of deserved it or what not, and also at the end it just wandered off, but I liked how he tried to save it using the life message, but this story wasn't bad I actually like it, toward the end though, but overall good story and originality