Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-6822927-20190326201531/@comment-36627132-20190327013750

Spelling and Grammar Issues: "his alarm clock began ringing." I suggest using another word than "ringing", it's not a telephone or a doorbell. "Please, tell me where I can a doctor!" you forgot the word "see".

Plot Issues: This story feels like a loose string of events about someone who wakes up with no knowledge of anything. No one is so plain that God will just forget them, He loves everyone equally. The ending sounds like a joke. In my opinion this is pretty lacking in creepy content.