Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20181203115538/@comment-9041013-20181204114156


 * In character* That's fucking disgusting

Well it's nice, but the ending is kind of dry. What's up with people making their stories kind of lacking in intent recently D= Can you add something to solidify something in this. Maybe make this guy be a "you got the wrong guy" scenario that the bad guys can't let go and they just torture him to death, somehow mention it or something. Or give it some basic ending, he's a bad guy, he's a good guy who pissed off someone... maybe something purely sadistic.

Just something.