Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35973449-20180625045115/@comment-26444017-20180629204816

Little spelling things are inevitable. It's no biggie.

The level of ambiguity is perfectly acceptable in my opinion. There were just some things toward the end, namely the discovery of Janice and her father, that didn't feel connected to the main conflict. Maybe I'm just missing it, or maybe they aren't meant to be connected at all, but I don't have enough information to say either way.

With the idea of ambiguity in mind, I would say that this is the most likely thing to annoy more critical readers because it feels like an extraneous detail that isn't relevant to the main struggle. Beyond that, I have no major complaints.