Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-43331652-20200111104932/@comment-43331652-20200201102815

Thank you for readind this story, I appreciate all the feedback you have given me. I have published a final draft with fixed spelling errors and I will use your advice on past tense and the other tips in the next part. Just so you know, the reason I use the word biters is that, I'm not sure if you know this but in the walking dead, all the charcters there are in an alternative universe and don't know about zombies, leaving the zombies to be called walkers. I have the same type of world and thats why I named the zombies "biters". Also, the only reason I have not shown the goverment quarenting an area where the zombies are is because it's simply the very beggining of an apocalypse. For now only top offficers of the law really know about the outbreak and only in the next final part will the goverment find out about this, isolate an area for the zombies, and eventually take the virus our in that area. I hope this can explain a couple of things and thanks again!