Talk:The "Giver" Experiment/@comment-28266772-20160622154253/@comment-28783448-20160622161428

Thank you for informing me on these issues. The reason I must've missed  this past-present tense stuff was because I was proofreading this around 11:30 at night. As for criticisms of the actual story, thank you for telling me the pros/cons, which I will mopst definitely consider when writing.

P.S. Thanks for the bit on the Writer's Workshop. I wl do that next time.

Thanks,

Mr. Dankster