Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26416562-20151003132951/@comment-24313563-20151004005259

This needs s0me revisi0n. N0t t00 much, but there's definitely s0me issues in the writing. That being said, I d0n't quite think that it w0uld be w0rth y0ur time. This st0ry is far fr0m a creepypasta, and b0rders m0re 0n just an0ther c0nspiracy the0ry. The first tw0 paragraphs were just n0ting facts, and n0t really any true st0ry telling, and then we thr0w in a rand0m invisible m0nster that the g0vernment decided was s0 danger0us that they sh0uld kill pe0ple wh0 kn0w ab0ut it. I just d0n't see this making it 0nt0 the site.