Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29015383-20160714143121/@comment-29015383-20160716200344

Hadn't thought of him getting arrested out on the streets. I just had this mental image in my mind of how the arrest played out and went with that. I'll play with it some. And you're right, the blogpost part left a hole. I have plugged that up with your suggestion.

I promise to keep going over the story and pester people into giving me advice. Thank you for your suggestions so far. Because of you, a Stockholm syndrom, abuse story turned into something much more sinister.

You have one twisted mind, you know that?