Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32220947-20151121003445/@comment-27080023-20151122133850

Is it meant to be set out that way? It was a little off putting to be honest in terms of reading it.

I have to say, I didn't find this creepy at all, but it was kind of weird. I was almost "what the heck did I just read" after I finished it. That is not necessarily a bad thing though as I like strange things.

Your writing is good (in my opinion you use a few too many elipsis). I don't know if this is a "creepypasta" but your description was very good and the wording :)