Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25000365-20150711050721/@comment-25000365-20150714044015

Kinda awful wrote: I too liked the idea, but I think that it should be told from the perspective of a character rather than 'you'. Also It lacked detailed decription, which lead to it feeling rushed and not that creepy or scary Thanks. I personally have never liked stories in second person myself. And yes, it did lack description.