Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25051266-20141105204615/@comment-25226524-20141107023325

I commented on your updated version. For future reference, you can just edit the original post instead of making a new one. That way, you don't have this old one floating around out there where people may review it and end up telling you to change things that you've already changed. Just in case you don't know, to edit a post just hover your mouse over the lower right corner of the post and click "More" then click "Edit". Since this is your old version, you can also just click "Remove" under the "More" tab.