Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-26054278-20151208024514/@comment-28088262-20151224230718

I agree with the lack of development with Liu, but I guess he needed to act his age.

Also Randy's betrayal is crucial for building sympathy from the reader towards Jeff, but now I actually consider it, is that what should really be happening? Does it even do anything to help the story? I don't know.

We've been accustomed to feeling sorry for Jeff before the accident (well, we're meant to anyway) a bit like we feel sorry for Frankenstein's monster, even though he kills a child. I think it would be better if the story was crafted to make the reader sympathise with Jeff less because in my mind it doesn't make sense. If you want to make him scary, why not make him a psycho from the beginning?

I'd like to hear your thoughts, Grimm?