Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-14341590-20160103195647/@comment-26007602-20160108205751

I'm glad you found use in my minimal review. Did you have questions for me? I don't see any in your reply. I called part of your beginning cliché because I have seen that opening in so many other ritual stories. I'm saying you could have a more original opening. It doesn't make sense to me why the author would say, "Don't perform this ritual", and then go ahead and list the steps in order to perform it.