Talk:Mr. Widemouth/@comment-26253657-20150403134601

Mr Widemouth is creepier than the Pasta itself. To make this a little more comprehensible you (the author) could perhaps investigate into the graves and how the children died.

At first I was thinking 'this creature is just the child's fever'. But at some point in the story - the juggling bit, most likely - I realised that Mr Widemouth was something else entirely. But what was he? A demon, a spirit, a teddy bear with nightmares attached?

Very creepy overall and the ending sends true shivers down your spine. 8.5/10.