Talk:The Reflections/@comment-10950063-20131118164714

This needs fleshed out. What kind of things change? How do they get worse? How do reflections prevent people from doing things? It's all very vague and that prevents it from creating any kind of feeling. And it causes the "twist" to be kind of silly. For a twist to be effective the story needs to build up to it. Expand on everything, but especially the motives of the reflections. Make them universal so that the reader is thinking, "Hey, that sounds like how I feel" and then throw in the twist.