Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25217349-20140723205724/@comment-25558572-20140723220608

The post you quoted was to the poster before you, not to you. It seemed like you skimmed over the story because you said something about sisters when there are clearly no sisters in the piece, and there is a reason the abusers face is deformed. Thanks for your feedback though, parts of it were helpful. What parts?