Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5752201-20160916185046/@comment-29709755-20160919214228

This is actually really good, though to be honest I kinda like the little quirks in the translation. If anything, I'd make it a little more crude so it sounded like a Russian dude talking to me. That's just me of course. Other people will probably nitpick it to pieces, if that's what you're in to.