Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20150303214112/@comment-4893169-20150309221701

Thanks many MrDupin. I fixed everything mentioned in the review. To answer your first question; the narrator could of gotten that Futurama episode name from either the Internet or episode list guide. I'm more into slow tension-building and psychological horror than having way too much cliche gore or violence. I don't know if I can get this even more creepier.