Talk:Things in the Woods/@comment-36393004-20180809180910

I like the idea and when things are left to interpretation it can sometimes add to a story. In this case a little seed of description of what we are dealing with could help it grow in the reader's mind. I also wasn't fond of the spacing. It might just be a personal preference thing but each time a segment broke I paused a bit and there were so many I felt like I was starting over a lot. Again, not a big deal but it slightly disrupted my personal experience.