Talk:The Cell Phone Game/@comment-5547824-20150610101422

The plot and characters feel like something from a really bland anime or something, to be honest. The characterization was a mixed bag. Jack is basically nobody, Stephanie kind of descending into evil was at least kind of interesting, if a bit cliched, Rottenbacher felt like a cartoon villain. The whole thing with him was way too exaggerated to even try to take seriously.

I'd say that at the beginning of the story, Jack spends a bit too much time establishing things only to throw them out the second the plot starts. He goes into fair detail about how he was at his old school only to completley throw that out the second he gets to his new school. He establishes traits for his new circle of friends, only for none of them except Stephanie and Sam to play any role in the story at all.

It felt like an alright idea with some really rushed execution.