Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25825682-20150723152004

-Note: (tried to fix the errors this time, hope this turned out a bit more decent).

It was noontide of winter,

And mid-time of night.

The spheres in their course

Shone soft, through the light.

I was alone like a leaf

Drifting from the tree.

When you saw my grief,

A mass, of numb seas.

From that source I was taken

Into my sorrow, I could not awaken.

Soon I felt your joyous heart,

Gentle like a Meadowlark.

Then you give your love away,

I wish you wouldn’t let her stay. The minutes shared never mine,

Lost within the hands of time.

In my youth, there was no dawn

Just a stormy life could be drawn.

You swore no other, whereupon,

I struggled to get your attention

When I call it brings apprehension.

It confuses me to my core,

Because I know you won’t mention,

I deserve you more!

From the trenches of good or ill

The enigma that binds me still;

What do you want these harpies for,

I know you love your Zach more.

You must know our bond had grown strong,

But where could I have gone so wrong?

You were there when I needed you, So I’m here for you too.

Take me off to benighted end, So all their eyes can’t comprehend. Say that my love relieves your pain,

So the full truth can be regained.

Your hesitant joy she will undo

This you will come to see through.

You can't deny this isn't true,

She does not know you like I do

With sharp lightning in the sky

As your fury passed me by,

From the sound of this storm

All my thoughts took dark form.

Left frozen in this fog teeming

While these voices just keep screaming,

My realm is split, I need to handle,

I’ll light a flint, then miss the candle!

Some say that my love isn’t true,

But believe me as I showed you.

My love for you will always shine,

It’s with you ‘till the end of time.

Our house is gone from saving flame,

Her masquerades were all in vain.

Now that girl is gone forever,

Setting the fire wasn't that clever. 