Talk:My Baby/@comment-24067675-20140227130711

This was beautifully written. I don't normally read alot of pastas anymore, but I do not regret clicking that "Random Pasta" button.

This was filled with many ideal possibilities, but you took it to the fullest extent of what had happened. The fact that you describe what the mother sees, from her point of view I might add, makes this very genuine, and at the same time, those types of PoV's are very hard to pull off. First person PoV are easier said than done, and to have one come out to this extent and caliber, I would say this is one of the best I have read so far.

10/10