Talk:Lilly Lizzy/@comment-25476452-20141111080159/@comment-4952988-20141112003355

If you are interested, I read outloud and rewrote the story. I am dyxlexic and find it hard to sometimes proofread things. Feel free to tell me how you like it now.

Sincerely

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