Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181024003601/@comment-9041013-20181024095849

Ehh... I knew this wouldn't phase me and it didn't, that being said, I've come to witness worse in real life so it's not that you wrote a bad piece here. You still wrote a great chapter (even though again, the title chapter is numbered wrong). That being said, I'm not sure if it does trigger the emotional response you're looking for from the readers as we know this was a result of The Nameless' actions committed on Mike. Then again, people got concerned for my well being over a story once... so, you know, most people would probably feel awful for Jan.

That being said, The Nameless is "evil" for evil's sake I assume. Not my cup of tea really with creatures of his calliber but sure, he's entertaining enough ;O

Still good job.

P.s good Hellraiser reference, doesn't get enough credit.