Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20141201170216

i need help to save my story  called The haunted Santa Village before i make the appeal because i really want to have my story saved please.

This story happen in the Colorado, a bunch of teenage kids in their winter coats was walking to visit an old Santa village attraction, who was abadoned long time ago because of something  no one talk about. The three teenagers names was Carolyn and her twin brother Charlie who was caucasian american, and their friend is an African American boy  named Shawn.

"Hey Guys!" Said Carolyn who was front of them, "What is it 6" said  Charle and Shawn togheters, "Were soon arrived to destination" said Carolyn to the two behind her, "are you sure ?" said Charle, "Yeah, i am pretty sure were here" she replied again. They finally arrive in the old Santa Claus village, shawn finally reply "Damn!!! This place is quiet scary!!!,  "Come on ! Youdon't really believe in ghost don't you?" replied Charles mocking of his friend fear, "Yeah only little kids believe in that" said carolyn also mocking of Shawn fear, "I am not a littlr kid" said Shawn angry by his friends ignorance. When they are still walking Shawn heard something, "Do you hear that?", "Is maybe only the wind Shawn" said Carolyn, "True don't worry!" said Charle.

The wind was still whistle, but Shawn know it was not the wind he heard, but the scream of a little boy calling for help with a scared ghost voice, his friends seem to not believe what he just said, because they do not believe in the story of ghost hauntinng the abadoned Santa Village. The two others think is just a joke, Shawn really believe this story and think is real, because he know something was wrong with this place, but do not know what really happen, he was really scared of the place.

"Guys i really think we should go !" said Shawn, "Are you serious ?" Said Carolyn, "Yes i am" replied shawn, "Ah man ! You're a big baby !" said Charle, Two teenagers laugh at what their friend said, "I am not amused"  said Shawn, They arrive to the old Santa Claus house, and taqke a look from around them, they see the door was unlocked, so they go inside the house. "Whoa ! Is amaizing!!!" Said Carolyn, "Yeah is awesome" Charle also amaized by the place,  "Okay is maybe a little bit fun" replied Shawn, "Are you kidding ? This place is faboulous" said Carolyn heritated by her friend frightness. "I think we should Split?" said Charle exited to visit the house, "Good  idea" Replied his sister, " Guy i think we shouldn't !" said Shawn with more fear, " Ah come on Shawn! Nothing will happen to us !" said finally Charle before leaving with carolyn leaving their friend behind.

Now left alone, Shawn have no choice to go his own way in a dark coner, he tries to be brave like his friends, but his fear get over him every time he heard the floor crackle under his footsteps. When he finally see light fin front of him he was in the Santa's throne room, he was amaized by the thorone who was still clean and beautiful, when he was still looking at the throne he finally hear a bunch of children who was laughing. He jumped back after hearing this, he was believe it was his friends who put a prank, but see nobody around him. Suddenly with the laugh of the children he also heard a Santa Claus laugh, he was not knowing what todo he was now scared, so he run looking for his friends.

"Guys where are you? finally said Shawn, but no answer from them, he finally arrive to a strange door, this time he do not hear laughing, but children screaming and the laugh of a young man. Shawn wanted to turn around and run, but the curiosity get him and open the door, he see the horror who was behind this, this room  was covered of children blood this room was the place of child massacre. Shawn can't even smell the blood, his eyes stop on an old news paper with the picture of a young African American man above the picture it said "Child serial killer arrested,  and put on death row". Fear  for his friends Shawn still calling them, but still no answer he see a freezer in a coner he decide to take a look by opening the door, he see with fear his friend dismembered of their vital organ.

when shawn wanted to run he hear a man laugh behind him, and when he turn around he see the ghost of the serial killer, so he screamed "No! Please! No! AAAAAAAAAAAh!, it was his last word,  the three teenagers were now missing, and nobody know what happen to them because they do not they were the next victims. This story happen in the Colorado, a bunch of teenage kids in their winter coats was walking to visit an old Santa village attraction, who was abadoned long time ago because of something  no one talk about. The three teenagers names was Carolyn and her twin brother Charlie who was caucasian american, and their friend is an African American boy  named Shawn.

"Hey Guys!" Said Carolyn who was front of them, "What is it 6" said  Charle and Shawn togheters, "Were soon arrived to destination" said Carolyn to the two behind her, "are you sure ?" said Charle, "Yeah, i am pretty sure were here" she replied again. They finally arrive in the old Santa Claus village, shawn finally reply "Damn!!! This place is quiet scary!!!,  "Come on ! Youdon't really believe in ghost don't you?" replied Charles mocking of his friend fear, "Yeah only little kids believe in that" said carolyn also mocking of Shawn fear, "I am not a littlr kid" said Shawn angry by his friends ignorance. When they are still walking Shawn heard something, "Do you hear that?", "Is maybe only the wind Shawn" said Carolyn, "True don't worry!" said Charle.

The wind was still whistle, but Shawn know it was not the wind he heard, but the scream of a little boy calling for help with a scared ghost voice, his friends seem to not believe what he just said, because they do not believe in the story of ghost hauntinng the abadoned Santa Village. The two others think is just a joke, Shawn really believe this story and think is real, because he know something was wrong with this place, but do not know what really happen, he was really scared of the place.

"Guys i really think we should go !" said Shawn, "Are you serious ?" Said Carolyn, "Yes i am" replied shawn, "Ah man ! You're a big baby !" said Charle, Two teenagers laugh at what their friend said, "I am not amused"  said Shawn, They arrive to the old Santa Claus house, and taqke a look from around them, they see the door was unlocked, so they go inside the house. "Whoa ! Is amaizing!!!" Said Carolyn, "Yeah is awesome" Charle also amaized by the place,  "Okay is maybe a little bit fun" replied Shawn, "Are you kidding ? This place is faboulous" said Carolyn heritated by her friend frightness. "I think we should Split?" said Charle exited to visit the house, "Good  idea" Replied his sister, " Guy i think we shouldn't !" said Shawn with more fear, " Ah come on Shawn! Nothing will happen to us !" said finally Charle before leaving with carolyn leaving their friend behind.

Now left alone, Shawn have no choice to go his own way in a dark coner, he tries to be brave like his friends, but his fear get over him every time he heard the floor crackle under his footsteps. When he finally see light fin front of him he was in the Santa's throne room, he was amaized by the thorone who was still clean and beautiful, when he was still looking at the throne he finally hear a bunch of children who was laughing. He jumped back after hearing this, he was believe it was his friends who put a prank, but see nobody around him. Suddenly with the laugh of the children he also heard a Santa Claus laugh, he was not knowing what todo he was now scared, so he run looking for his friends.

"Guys where are you? finally said Shawn, but no answer from them, he finally arrive to a strange door, this time he do not hear laughing, but children screaming and the laugh of a young man. Shawn wanted to turn around and run, but the curiosity get him and open the door, he see the horror who was behind this, this room  was covered of children blood this room was the place of child massacre. Shawn can't even smell the blood, his eyes stop on an old news paper with the picture of a young African American man above the picture it said "Child serial killer arrested,  and put on death row". Fear  for his friends Shawn still calling them, but still no answer he see a freezer in a coner he decide to take a look by opening the door, he see with fear his friend dismembered of their vital organ.

when shawn wanted to run he hear a man laugh behind him, and when he turn around he see the ghost of the serial killer, so he screamed "No! Please! No! AAAAAAAAAAAh!, it was his last word,  the three teenagers were now missing, and nobody know what happen to them because they do not they were the next victims. This story happen in the Colorado, a bunch of teenage kids in their winter coats was walking to visit an old Santa village attraction, who was abadoned long time ago because of something  no one talk about. The three teenagers names was Carolyn and her twin brother Charlie who was caucasian american, and their friend is an African American boy  named Shawn.

"Hey Guys!" Said Carolyn who was front of them, "What is it 6" said  Charle and Shawn togheters, "Were soon arrived to destination" said Carolyn to the two behind her, "are you sure ?" said Charle, "Yeah, i am pretty sure were here" she replied again. They finally arrive in the old Santa Claus village, shawn finally reply "Damn!!! This place is quiet scary!!!,  "Come on ! Youdon't really believe in ghost don't you?" replied Charles mocking of his friend fear, "Yeah only little kids believe in that" said carolyn also mocking of Shawn fear, "I am not a littlr kid" said Shawn angry by his friends ignorance. When they are still walking Shawn heard something, "Do you hear that?", "Is maybe only the wind Shawn" said Carolyn, "True don't worry!" said Charle.

The wind was still whistle, but Shawn know it was not the wind he heard, but the scream of a little boy calling for help with a scared ghost voice, his friends seem to not believe what he just said, because they do not believe in the story of ghost hauntinng the abadoned Santa Village. The two others think is just a joke, Shawn really believe this story and think is real, because he know something was wrong with this place, but do not know what really happen, he was really scared of the place.

"Guys i really think we should go !" said Shawn, "Are you serious ?" Said Carolyn, "Yes i am" replied shawn, "Ah man ! You're a big baby !" said Charle, Two teenagers laugh at what their friend said, "I am not amused"  said Shawn, They arrive to the old Santa Claus house, and taqke a look from around them, they see the door was unlocked, so they go inside the house. "Whoa ! Is amaizing!!!" Said Carolyn, "Yeah is awesome" Charle also amaized by the place,  "Okay is maybe a little bit fun" replied Shawn, "Are you kidding ? This place is faboulous" said Carolyn heritated by her friend frightness. "I think we should Split?" said Charle exited to visit the house, "Good  idea" Replied his sister, " Guy i think we shouldn't !" said Shawn with more fear, " Ah come on Shawn! Nothing will happen to us !" said finally Charle before leaving with carolyn leaving their friend behind.

Now left alone, Shawn have no choice to go his own way in a dark coner, he tries to be brave like his friends, but his fear get over him every time he heard the floor crackle under his footsteps. When he finally see light fin front of him he was in the Santa's throne room, he was amaized by the thorone who was still clean and beautiful, when he was still looking at the throne he finally hear a bunch of children who was laughing. He jumped back after hearing this, he was believe it was his friends who put a prank, but see nobody around him. Suddenly with the laugh of the children he also heard a Santa Claus laugh, he was not knowing what todo he was now scared, so he run looking for his friends.

"Guys where are you? finally said Shawn, but no answer from them, he finally arrive to a strange door, this time he do not hear laughing, but children screaming and the laugh of a young man. Shawn wanted to turn around and run, but the curiosity get him and open the door, he see the horror who was behind this, this room  was covered of children blood this room was the place of child massacre. Shawn can't even smell the blood, his eyes stop on an old news paper with the picture of a young African American man above the picture it said "Child serial killer arrested,  and put on death row". Fear  for his friends Shawn still calling them, but still no answer he see a freezer in a coner he decide to take a look by opening the door, he see with fear his friend dismembered of their vital organ.

when shawn wanted to run he hear a man laugh behind him, and when he turn around he see the ghost of the serial killer, so he screamed "No! Please! No! AAAAAAAAAAAh!, it was his last word,  the three teenagers were now missing, and nobody know what happen to them because they do not they were the next victims. This story happen in the Colorado, a bunch of teenage kids in their winter coats was walking to visit an old Santa village attraction, who was abadoned long time ago because of something  no one talk about. The three teenagers names was Carolyn and her twin brother Charlie who was caucasian american, and their friend is an African American boy  named Shawn.

"Hey Guys!" Said Carolyn who was front of them, "What is it 6" said  Charle and Shawn togheters, "Were soon arrived to destination" said Carolyn to the two behind her, "are you sure ?" said Charle, "Yeah, i am pretty sure were here" she replied again. They finally arrive in the old Santa Claus village, shawn finally reply "Damn!!! This place is quiet scary!!!,  "Come on ! Youdon't really believe in ghost don't you?" replied Charles mocking of his friend fear, "Yeah only little kids believe in that" said carolyn also mocking of Shawn fear, "I am not a littlr kid" said Shawn angry by his friends ignorance. When they are still walking Shawn heard something, "Do you hear that?", "Is maybe only the wind Shawn" said Carolyn, "True don't worry!" said Charle.

The wind was still whistle, but Shawn know it was not the wind he heard, but the scream of a little boy calling for help with a scared ghost voice, his friends seem to not believe what he just said, because they do not believe in the story of ghost hauntinng the abadoned Santa Village. The two others think is just a joke, Shawn really believe this story and think is real, because he know something was wrong with this place, but do not know what really happen, he was really scared of the place.

"Guys i really think we should go !" said Shawn, "Are you serious ?" Said Carolyn, "Yes i am" replied shawn, "Ah man ! You're a big baby !" said Charle, Two teenagers laugh at what their friend said, "I am not amused"  said Shawn, They arrive to the old Santa Claus house, and taqke a look from around them, they see the door was unlocked, so they go inside the house. "Whoa ! Is amaizing!!!" Said Carolyn, "Yeah is awesome" Charle also amaized by the place,  "Okay is maybe a little bit fun" replied Shawn, "Are you kidding ? This place is faboulous" said Carolyn heritated by her friend frightness. "I think we should Split?" said Charle exited to visit the house, "Good  idea" Replied his sister, " Guy i think we shouldn't !" said Shawn with more fear, " Ah come on Shawn! Nothing will happen to us !" said finally Charle before leaving with carolyn leaving their friend behind.

Now left alone, Shawn have no choice to go his own way in a dark coner, he tries to be brave like his friends, but his fear get over him every time he heard the floor crackle under his footsteps. When he finally see light fin front of him he was in the Santa's throne room, he was amaized by the thorone who was still clean and beautiful, when he was still looking at the throne he finally hear a bunch of children who was laughing. He jumped back after hearing this, he was believe it was his friends who put a prank, but see nobody around him. Suddenly with the laugh of the children he also heard a Santa Claus laugh, he was not knowing what todo he was now scared, so he run looking for his friends.

"Guys where are you? finally said Shawn, but no answer from them, he finally arrive to a strange door, this time he do not hear laughing, but children screaming and the laugh of a young man. Shawn wanted to turn around and run, but the curiosity get him and open the door, he see the horror who was behind this, this room  was covered of children blood this room was the place of child massacre. Shawn can't even smell the blood, his eyes stop on an old news paper with the picture of a young African American man above the picture it said "Child serial killer arrested,  and put on death row". Fear  for his friends Shawn still calling them, but still no answer he see a freezer in a coner he decide to take a look by opening the door, he see with fear his friend dismembered of their vital organ.

when shawn wanted to run he hear a man laugh behind him, and when he turn around he see the ghost of the serial killer, so he screamed "No! Please! No! AAAAAAAAAAAh!, it was his last word,  the three teenagers were now missing, and nobody know what happen to them because they do not they were the next victims. This story happen in the Colorado, a bunch of teenage kids in their winter coats was walking to visit an old Santa village attraction, who was abadoned long time ago because of something  no one talk about. The three teenagers names was Carolyn and her twin brother Charlie who was caucasian american, and their friend is an African American boy  named Shawn.

"Hey Guys!" Said Carolyn who was front of them, "What is it 6" said  Charle and Shawn togheters, "Were soon arrived to destination" said Carolyn to the two behind her, "are you sure ?" said Charle, "Yeah, i am pretty sure were here" she replied again. They finally arrive in the old Santa Claus village, shawn finally reply "Damn!!! This place is quiet scary!!!,  "Come on ! Youdon't really believe in ghost don't you?" replied Charles mocking of his friend fear, "Yeah only little kids believe in that" said carolyn also mocking of Shawn fear, "I am not a littlr kid" said Shawn angry by his friends ignorance. When they are still walking Shawn heard something, "Do you hear that?", "Is maybe only the wind Shawn" said Carolyn, "True don't worry!" said Charle.

The wind was still whistle, but Shawn know it was not the wind he heard, but the scream of a little boy calling for help with a scared ghost voice, his friends seem to not believe what he just said, because they do not believe in the story of ghost hauntinng the abadoned Santa Village. The two others think is just a joke, Shawn really believe this story and think is real, because he know something was wrong with this place, but do not know what really happen, he was really scared of the place.

"Guys i really think we should go !" said Shawn, "Are you serious ?" Said Carolyn, "Yes i am" replied shawn, "Ah man ! You're a big baby !" said Charle, Two teenagers laugh at what their friend said, "I am not amused"  said Shawn, They arrive to the old Santa Claus house, and taqke a look from around them, they see the door was unlocked, so they go inside the house. "Whoa ! Is amaizing!!!" Said Carolyn, "Yeah is awesome" Charle also amaized by the place,  "Okay is maybe a little bit fun" replied Shawn, "Are you kidding ? This place is faboulous" said Carolyn heritated by her friend frightness. "I think we should Split?" said Charle exited to visit the house, "Good  idea" Replied his sister, " Guy i think we shouldn't !" said Shawn with more fear, " Ah come on Shawn! Nothing will happen to us !" said finally Charle before leaving with carolyn leaving their friend behind.

Now left alone, Shawn have no choice to go his own way in a dark coner, he tries to be brave like his friends, but his fear get over him every time he heard the floor crackle under his footsteps. When he finally see light fin front of him he was in the Santa's throne room, he was amaized by the thorone who was still clean and beautiful, when he was still looking at the throne he finally hear a bunch of children who was laughing. He jumped back after hearing this, he was believe it was his friends who put a prank, but see nobody around him. Suddenly with the laugh of the children he also heard a Santa Claus laugh, he was not knowing what todo he was now scared, so he run looking for his friends.

"Guys where are you? finally said Shawn, but no answer from them, he finally arrive to a strange door, this time he do not hear laughing, but children screaming and the laugh of a young man. Shawn wanted to turn around and run, but the curiosity get him and open the door, he see the horror who was behind this, this room  was covered of children blood this room was the place of child massacre. Shawn can't even smell the blood, his eyes stop on an old news paper with the picture of a young African American man above the picture it said "Child serial killer arrested,  and put on death row". Fear  for his friends Shawn still calling them, but still no answer he see a freezer in a coner he decide to take a look by opening the door, he see with fear his friend dismembered of their vital organ.

when shawn wanted to run he hear a man laugh behind him, and when he turn around he see the ghost of the serial killer, so he screamed "No! Please! No! AAAAAAAAAAAh!, it was his last word,  the three teenagers were now missing, and nobody know what happen to them because they do not they were the next victims. This story happen in the Colorado, a bunch of teenage kids in their winter coats was walking to visit an old Santa village attraction, who was abadoned long time ago because of something  no one talk about. The three teenagers names was Carolyn and her twin brother Charlie who was caucasian american, and their friend is an African American boy  named Shawn.

"Hey Guys!" Said Carolyn who was front of them, "What is it 6" said  Charle and Shawn togheters, "Were soon arrived to destination" said Carolyn to the two behind her, "are you sure ?" said Charle, "Yeah, i am pretty sure were here" she replied again. They finally arrive in the old Santa Claus village, shawn finally reply "Damn!!! This place is quiet scary!!!,  "Come on ! Youdon't really believe in ghost don't you?" replied Charles mocking of his friend fear, "Yeah only little kids believe in that" said carolyn also mocking of Shawn fear, "I am not a littlr kid" said Shawn angry by his friends ignorance. When they are still walking Shawn heard something, "Do you hear that?", "Is maybe only the wind Shawn" said Carolyn, "True don't worry!" said Charle.

The wind was still whistle, but Shawn know it was not the wind he heard, but the scream of a little boy calling for help with a scared ghost voice, his friends seem to not believe what he just said, because they do not believe in the story of ghost hauntinng the abadoned Santa Village. The two others think is just a joke, Shawn really believe this story and think is real, because he know something was wrong with this place, but do not know what really happen, he was really scared of the place.

"Guys i really think we should go !" said Shawn, "Are you serious ?" Said Carolyn, "Yes i am" replied shawn, "Ah man ! You're a big baby !" said Charle, Two teenagers laugh at what their friend said, "I am not amused"  said Shawn, They arrive to the old Santa Claus house, and taqke a look from around them, they see the door was unlocked, so they go inside the house. "Whoa ! Is amaizing!!!" Said Carolyn, "Yeah is awesome" Charle also amaized by the place,  "Okay is maybe a little bit fun" replied Shawn, "Are you kidding ? This place is faboulous" said Carolyn heritated by her friend frightness. "I think we should Split?" said Charle exited to visit the house, "Good  idea" Replied his sister, " Guy i think we shouldn't !" said Shawn with more fear, " Ah come on Shawn! Nothing will happen to us !" said finally Charle before leaving with carolyn leaving their friend behind.

Now left alone, Shawn have no choice to go his own way in a dark coner, he tries to be brave like his friends, but his fear get over him every time he heard the floor crackle under his footsteps. When he finally see light fin front of him he was in the Santa's throne room, he was amaized by the thorone who was still clean and beautiful, when he was still looking at the throne he finally hear a bunch of children who was laughing. He jumped back after hearing this, he was believe it was his friends who put a prank, but see nobody around him. Suddenly with the laugh of the children he also heard a Santa Claus laugh, he was not knowing what todo he was now scared, so he run looking for his friends.

"Guys where are you? finally said Shawn, but no answer from them, he finally arrive to a strange door, this time he do not hear laughing, but children screaming and the laugh of a young man. Shawn wanted to turn around and run, but the curiosity get him and open the door, he see the horror who was behind this, this room  was covered of children blood this room was the place of child massacre. Shawn can't even smell the blood, his eyes stop on an old news paper with the picture of a young African American man above the picture it said "Child serial killer arrested,  and put on death row". Fear  for his friends Shawn still calling them, but still no answer he see a freezer in a coner he decide to take a look by opening the door, he see with fear his friend dismembered of their vital organ.

when shawn wanted to run he hear a man laugh behind him, and when he turn around he see the ghost of the serial killer, so he screamed "No! Please! No! AAAAAAAAAAAh!, it was his last word,  the three teenagers were now missing, and nobody know what happen to them because they do not they were the next victims. This story happen in the Colorado, a bunch of teenage kids in their winter coats was walking to visit an old Santa village attraction, who was abadoned long time ago because of something  no one talk about. The three teenagers names was Carolyn and her twin brother Charlie who was caucasian american, and their friend is an African American boy  named Shawn.

"Hey Guys!" Said Carolyn who was front of them, "What is it 6" said  Charle and Shawn togheters, "Were soon arrived to destination" said Carolyn to the two behind her, "are you sure ?" said Charle, "Yeah, i am pretty sure were here" she replied again. They finally arrive in the old Santa Claus village, shawn finally reply "Damn!!! This place is quiet scary!!!,  "Come on ! Youdon't really believe in ghost don't you?" replied Charles mocking of his friend fear, "Yeah only little kids believe in that" said carolyn also mocking of Shawn fear, "I am not a littlr kid" said Shawn angry by his friends ignorance. When they are still walking Shawn heard something, "Do you hear that?", "Is maybe only the wind Shawn" said Carolyn, "True don't worry!" said Charle.

The wind was still whistle, but Shawn know it was not the wind he heard, but the scream of a little boy calling for help with a scared ghost voice, his friends seem to not believe what he just said, because they do not believe in the story of ghost hauntinng the abadoned Santa Village. The two others think is just a joke, Shawn really believe this story and think is real, because he know something was wrong with this place, but do not know what really happen, he was really scared of the place.

"Guys i really think we should go !" said Shawn, "Are you serious ?" Said Carolyn, "Yes i am" replied shawn, "Ah man ! You're a big baby !" said Charle, Two teenagers laugh at what their friend said, "I am not amused"  said Shawn, They arrive to the old Santa Claus house, and taqke a look from around them, they see the door was unlocked, so they go inside the house. "Whoa ! Is amaizing!!!" Said Carolyn, "Yeah is awesome" Charle also amaized by the place,  "Okay is maybe a little bit fun" replied Shawn, "Are you kidding ? This place is faboulous" said Carolyn heritated by her friend frightness. "I think we should Split?" said Charle exited to visit the house, "Good  idea" Replied his sister, " Guy i think we shouldn't !" said Shawn with more fear, " Ah come on Shawn! Nothing will happen to us !" said finally Charle before leaving with carolyn leaving their friend behind.

Now left alone, Shawn have no choice to go his own way in a dark coner, he tries to be brave like his friends, but his fear get over him every time he heard the floor crackle under his footsteps. When he finally see light fin front of him he was in the Santa's throne room, he was amaized by the thorone who was still clean and beautiful, when he was still looking at the throne he finally hear a bunch of children who was laughing. He jumped back after hearing this, he was believe it was his friends who put a prank, but see nobody around him. Suddenly with the laugh of the children he also heard a Santa Claus laugh, he was not knowing what todo he was now scared, so he run looking for his friends.

"Guys where are you? finally said Shawn, but no answer from them, he finally arrive to a strange door, this time he do not hear laughing, but children screaming and the laugh of a young man. Shawn wanted to turn around and run, but the curiosity get him and open the door, he see the horror who was behind this, this room  was covered of children blood this room was the place of child massacre. Shawn can't even smell the blood, his eyes stop on an old news paper with the picture of a young African American man above the picture it said "Child serial killer arrested,  and put on death row". Fear  for his friends Shawn still calling them, but still no answer he see a freezer in a coner he decide to take a look by opening the door, he see with fear his friend dismembered of their vital organ.

when shawn wanted to run he hear a man laugh behind him, and when he turn around he see the ghost of the serial killer, so he screamed "No! Please! No! AAAAAAAAAAAh!, it was his last word,  the three teenagers were now missing, and nobody know what happen to them because they do not they were the next victims. This story happen in the Colorado, a bunch of teenage kids in their winter coats was walking to visit an old Santa village attraction, who was abadoned long time ago because of something  no one talk about. The three teenagers names was Carolyn and her twin brother Charlie who was caucasian american, and their friend is an African American boy  named Shawn.

"Hey Guys!" Said Carolyn who was front of them, "What is it 6" said  Charle and Shawn togheters, "Were soon arrived to destination" said Carolyn to the two behind her, "are you sure ?" said Charle, "Yeah, i am pretty sure were here" she replied again. They finally arrive in the old Santa Claus village, shawn finally reply "Damn!!! This place is quiet scary!!!,  "Come on ! Youdon't really believe in ghost don't you?" replied Charles mocking of his friend fear, "Yeah only little kids believe in that" said carolyn also mocking of Shawn fear, "I am not a littlr kid" said Shawn angry by his friends ignorance. When they are still walking Shawn heard something, "Do you hear that?", "Is maybe only the wind Shawn" said Carolyn, "True don't worry!" said Charle.

The wind was still whistle, but Shawn know it was not the wind he heard, but the scream of a little boy calling for help with a scared ghost voice, his friends seem to not believe what he just said, because they do not believe in the story of ghost hauntinng the abadoned Santa Village. The two others think is just a joke, Shawn really believe this story and think is real, because he know something was wrong with this place, but do not know what really happen, he was really scared of the place.

"Guys i really think we should go !" said Shawn, "Are you serious ?" Said Carolyn, "Yes i am" replied shawn, "Ah man ! You're a big baby !" said Charle, Two teenagers laugh at what their friend said, "I am not amused"  said Shawn, They arrive to the old Santa Claus house, and taqke a look from around them, they see the door was unlocked, so they go inside the house. "Whoa ! Is amaizing!!!" Said Carolyn, "Yeah is awesome" Charle also amaized by the place,  "Okay is maybe a little bit fun" replied Shawn, "Are you kidding ? This place is faboulous" said Carolyn heritated by her friend frightness. "I think we should Split?" said Charle exited to visit the house, "Good  idea" Replied his sister, " Guy i think we shouldn't !" said Shawn with more fear, " Ah come on Shawn! Nothing will happen to us !" said finally Charle before leaving with carolyn leaving their friend behind.

Now left alone, Shawn have no choice to go his own way in a dark coner, he tries to be brave like his friends, but his fear get over him every time he heard the floor crackle under his footsteps. When he finally see light fin front of him he was in the Santa's throne room, he was amaized by the thorone who was still clean and beautiful, when he was still looking at the throne he finally hear a bunch of children who was laughing. He jumped back after hearing this, he was believe it was his friends who put a prank, but see nobody around him. Suddenly with the laugh of the children he also heard a Santa Claus laugh, he was not knowing what todo he was now scared, so he run looking for his friends.

"Guys where are you? finally said Shawn, but no answer from them, he finally arrive to a strange door, this time he do not hear laughing, but children screaming and the laugh of a young man. Shawn wanted to turn around and run, but the curiosity get him and open the door, he see the horror who was behind this, this room  was covered of children blood this room was the place of child massacre. Shawn can't even smell the blood, his eyes stop on an old news paper with the picture of a young African American man above the picture it said "Child serial killer arrested,  and put on death row". Fear  for his friends Shawn still calling them, but still no answer he see a freezer in a coner he decide to take a look by opening the door, he see with fear his friend dismembered of their vital organ.

when shawn wanted to run he hear a man laugh behind him, and when he turn around he see the ghost of the serial killer, so he screamed "No! Please! No! AAAAAAAAAAAh!, it was his last word,  the three teenagers were now missing, and nobody know what happen to them because they do not they were the next victims. This story happen in the Colorado, a bunch of teenage kids in their winter coats was walking to visit an old Santa village attraction, who was abadoned long time ago because of something  no one talk about. The three teenagers names was Carolyn and her twin brother Charlie who was caucasian american, and their friend is an African American boy  named Shawn.

"Hey Guys!" Said Carolyn who was front of them, "What is it 6" said  Charle and Shawn togheters, "Were soon arrived to destination" said Carolyn to the two behind her, "are you sure ?" said Charle, "Yeah, i am pretty sure were here" she replied again. They finally arrive in the old Santa Claus village, shawn finally reply "Damn!!! This place is quiet scary!!!,  "Come on ! Youdon't really believe in ghost don't you?" replied Charles mocking of his friend fear, "Yeah only little kids believe in that" said carolyn also mocking of Shawn fear, "I am not a littlr kid" said Shawn angry by his friends ignorance. When they are still walking Shawn heard something, "Do you hear that?", "Is maybe only the wind Shawn" said Carolyn, "True don't worry!" said Charle.

The wind was still whistle, but Shawn know it was not the wind he heard, but the scream of a little boy calling for help with a scared ghost voice, his friends seem to not believe what he just said, because they do not believe in the story of ghost hauntinng the abadoned Santa Village. The two others think is just a joke, Shawn really believe this story and think is real, because he know something was wrong with this place, but do not know what really happen, he was really scared of the place.

"Guys i really think we should go !" said Shawn, "Are you serious ?" Said Carolyn, "Yes i am" replied shawn, "Ah man ! You're a big baby !" said Charle, Two teenagers laugh at what their friend said, "I am not amused"  said Shawn, They arrive to the old Santa Claus house, and taqke a look from around them, they see the door was unlocked, so they go inside the house. "Whoa ! Is amaizing!!!" Said Carolyn, "Yeah is awesome" Charle also amaized by the place,  "Okay is maybe a little bit fun" replied Shawn, "Are you kidding ? This place is faboulous" said Carolyn heritated by her friend frightness. "I think we should Split?" said Charle exited to visit the house, "Good  idea" Replied his sister, " Guy i think we shouldn't !" said Shawn with more fear, " Ah come on Shawn! Nothing will happen to us !" said finally Charle before leaving with carolyn leaving their friend behind.

Now left alone, Shawn have no choice to go his own way in a dark coner, he tries to be brave like his friends, but his fear get over him every time he heard the floor crackle under his footsteps. When he finally see light fin front of him he was in the Santa's throne room, he was amaized by the thorone who was still clean and beautiful, when he was still looking at the throne he finally hear a bunch of children who was laughing. He jumped back after hearing this, he was believe it was his friends who put a prank, but see nobody around him. Suddenly with the laugh of the children he also heard a Santa Claus laugh, he was not knowing what todo he was now scared, so he run looking for his friends.

"Guys where are you? finally said Shawn, but no answer from them, he finally arrive to a strange door, this time he do not hear laughing, but children screaming and the laugh of a young man. Shawn wanted to turn around and run, but the curiosity get him and open the door, he see the horror who was behind this, this room  was covered of children blood this room was the place of child massacre. Shawn can't even smell the blood, his eyes stop on an old news paper with the picture of a young African American man above the picture it said "Child serial killer arrested,  and put on death row". Fear  for his friends Shawn still calling them, but still no answer he see a freezer in a coner he decide to take a look by opening the door, he see with fear his friend dismembered of their vital organ.

when shawn wanted to run he hear a man laugh behind him, and when he turn around he see the ghost of the serial killer, so he screamed "No! Please! No! AAAAAAAAAAAh!, it was his last word,  the three teenagers were now missing, and nobody know what happen to them because they do not they were the next victims. This story happen in the Colorado, a bunch of teenage kids in their winter coats was walking to visit an old Santa village attraction, who was abadoned long time ago because of something  no one talk about. The three teenagers names was Carolyn and her twin brother Charlie who was caucasian american, and their friend is an African American boy  named Shawn.

"Hey Guys!" Said Carolyn who was front of them, "What is it 6" said  Charle and Shawn togheters, "Were soon arrived to destination" said Carolyn to the two behind her, "are you sure ?" said Charle, "Yeah, i am pretty sure were here" she replied again. They finally arrive in the old Santa Claus village, shawn finally reply "Damn!!! This place is quiet scary!!!,  "Come on ! Youdon't really believe in ghost don't you?" replied Charles mocking of his friend fear, "Yeah only little kids believe in that" said carolyn also mocking of Shawn fear, "I am not a littlr kid" said Shawn angry by his friends ignorance. When they are still walking Shawn heard something, "Do you hear that?", "Is maybe only the wind Shawn" said Carolyn, "True don't worry!" said Charle.

The wind was still whistle, but Shawn know it was not the wind he heard, but the scream of a little boy calling for help with a scared ghost voice, his friends seem to not believe what he just said, because they do not believe in the story of ghost hauntinng the abadoned Santa Village. The two others think is just a joke, Shawn really believe this story and think is real, because he know something was wrong with this place, but do not know what really happen, he was really scared of the place.

"Guys i really think we should go !" said Shawn, "Are you serious ?" Said Carolyn, "Yes i am" replied shawn, "Ah man ! You're a big baby !" said Charle, Two teenagers laugh at what their friend said, "I am not amused"  said Shawn, They arrive to the old Santa Claus house, and taqke a look from around them, they see the door was unlocked, so they go inside the house. "Whoa ! Is amaizing!!!" Said Carolyn, "Yeah is awesome" Charle also amaized by the place,  "Okay is maybe a little bit fun" replied Shawn, "Are you kidding ? This place is faboulous" said Carolyn heritated by her friend frightness. "I think we should Split?" said Charle exited to visit the house, "Good  idea" Replied his sister, " Guy i think we shouldn't !" said Shawn with more fear, " Ah come on Shawn! Nothing will happen to us !" said finally Charle before leaving with carolyn leaving their friend behind.

Now left alone, Shawn have no choice to go his own way in a dark coner, he tries to be brave like his friends, but his fear get over him every time he heard the floor crackle under his footsteps. When he finally see light fin front of him he was in the Santa's throne room, he was amaized by the thorone who was still clean and beautiful, when he was still looking at the throne he finally hear a bunch of children who was laughing. He jumped back after hearing this, he was believe it was his friends who put a prank, but see nobody around him. Suddenly with the laugh of the children he also heard a Santa Claus laugh, he was not knowing what todo he was now scared, so he run looking for his friends.

"Guys where are you? finally said Shawn, but no answer from them, he finally arrive to a strange door, this time he do not hear laughing, but children screaming and the laugh of a young man. Shawn wanted to turn around and run, but the curiosity get him and open the door, he see the horror who was behind this, this room  was covered of children blood this room was the place of child massacre. Shawn can't even smell the blood, his eyes stop on an old news paper with the picture of a young African American man above the picture it said "Child serial killer arrested,  and put on death row". Fear  for his friends Shawn still calling them, but still no answer he see a freezer in a coner he decide to take a look by opening the door, he see with fear his friend dismembered of their vital organ.

when shawn wanted to run he hear a man laugh behind him, and when he turn around he see the ghost of the serial killer, so he screamed "No! Please! No! AAAAAAAAAAAh!, it was his last word,  the three teenagers were now missing, and nobody know what happen to them because they do not they were the next victims. This story happen in the Colorado, a bunch of teenage kids in their winter coats was walking to visit an old Santa village attraction, who was abadoned long time ago because of something  no one talk about. The three teenagers names was Carolyn and her twin brother Charlie who was caucasian american, and their friend is an African American boy  named Shawn.

"Hey Guys!" Said Carolyn who was front of them, "What is it 6" said  Charle and Shawn togheters, "Were soon arrived to destination" said Carolyn to the two behind her, "are you sure ?" said Charle, "Yeah, i am pretty sure were here" she replied again. They finally arrive in the old Santa Claus village, shawn finally reply "Damn!!! This place is quiet scary!!!,  "Come on ! Youdon't really believe in ghost don't you?" replied Charles mocking of his friend fear, "Yeah only little kids believe in that" said carolyn also mocking of Shawn fear, "I am not a littlr kid" said Shawn angry by his friends ignorance. When they are still walking Shawn heard something, "Do you hear that?", "Is maybe only the wind Shawn" said Carolyn, "True don't worry!" said Charle.

The wind was still whistle, but Shawn know it was not the wind he heard, but the scream of a little boy calling for help with a scared ghost voice, his friends seem to not believe what he just said, because they do not believe in the story of ghost hauntinng the abadoned Santa Village. The two others think is just a joke, Shawn really believe this story and think is real, because he know something was wrong with this place, but do not know what really happen, he was really scared of the place.

"Guys i really think we should go !" said Shawn, "Are you serious ?" Said Carolyn, "Yes i am" replied shawn, "Ah man ! You're a big baby !" said Charle, Two teenagers laugh at what their friend said, "I am not amused"  said Shawn, They arrive to the old Santa Claus house, and taqke a look from around them, they see the door was unlocked, so they go inside the house. "Whoa ! Is amaizing!!!" Said Carolyn, "Yeah is awesome" Charle also amaized by the place,  "Okay is maybe a little bit fun" replied Shawn, "Are you kidding ? This place is faboulous" said Carolyn heritated by her friend frightness. "I think we should Split?" said Charle exited to visit the house, "Good  idea" Replied his sister, " Guy i think we shouldn't !" said Shawn with more fear, " Ah come on Shawn! Nothing will happen to us !" said finally Charle before leaving with carolyn leaving their friend behind.

Now left alone, Shawn have no choice to go his own way in a dark coner, he tries to be brave like his friends, but his fear get over him every time he heard the floor crackle under his footsteps. When he finally see light fin front of him he was in the Santa's throne room, he was amaized by the thorone who was still clean and beautiful, when he was still looking at the throne he finally hear a bunch of children who was laughing. He jumped back after hearing this, he was believe it was his friends who put a prank, but see nobody around him. Suddenly with the laugh of the children he also heard a Santa Claus laugh, he was not knowing what todo he was now scared, so he run looking for his friends.

"Guys where are you? finally said Shawn, but no answer from them, he finally arrive to a strange door, this time he do not hear laughing, but children screaming and the laugh of a young man. Shawn wanted to turn around and run, but the curiosity get him and open the door, he see the horror who was behind this, this room  was covered of children blood this room was the place of child massacre. Shawn can't even smell the blood, his eyes stop on an old news paper with the picture of a young African American man above the picture it said "Child serial killer arrested,  and put on death row". Fear  for his friends Shawn still calling them, but still no answer he see a freezer in a coner he decide to take a look by opening the door, he see with fear his friend dismembered of their vital organ.

when shawn wanted to run he hear a man laugh behind him, and when he turn around he see the ghost of the serial killer, so he screamed "No! Please! No! AAAAAAAAAAAh!, it was his last word,  the three teenagers were now missing, and nobody know what happen to them because they do not they were the next victims. This story happen in the Colorado, a bunch of teenage kids in their winter coats was walking to visit an old Santa village attraction, who was abadoned long time ago because of something  no one talk about. The three teenagers names was Carolyn and her twin brother Charlie who was caucasian american, and their friend is an African American boy  named Shawn.

"Hey Guys!" Said Carolyn who was front of them, "What is it 6" said  Charle and Shawn togheters, "Were soon arrived to destination" said Carolyn to the two behind her, "are you sure ?" said Charle, "Yeah, i am pretty sure were here" she replied again. They finally arrive in the old Santa Claus village, shawn finally reply "Damn!!! This place is quiet scary!!!,  "Come on ! Youdon't really believe in ghost don't you?" replied Charles mocking of his friend fear, "Yeah only little kids believe in that" said carolyn also mocking of Shawn fear, "I am not a littlr kid" said Shawn angry by his friends ignorance. When they are still walking Shawn heard something, "Do you hear that?", "Is maybe only the wind Shawn" said Carolyn, "True don't worry!" said Charle.

The wind was still whistle, but Shawn know it was not the wind he heard, but the scream of a little boy calling for help with a scared ghost voice, his friends seem to not believe what he just said, because they do not believe in the story of ghost hauntinng the abadoned Santa Village. The two others think is just a joke, Shawn really believe this story and think is real, because he know something was wrong with this place, but do not know what really happen, he was really scared of the place.

"Guys i really think we should go !" said Shawn, "Are you serious ?" Said Carolyn, "Yes i am" replied shawn, "Ah man ! You're a big baby !" said Charle, Two teenagers laugh at what their friend said, "I am not amused"  said Shawn, They arrive to the old Santa Claus house, and taqke a look from around them, they see the door was unlocked, so they go inside the house. "Whoa ! Is amaizing!!!" Said Carolyn, "Yeah is awesome" Charle also amaized by the place,  "Okay is maybe a little bit fun" replied Shawn, "Are you kidding ? This place is faboulous" said Carolyn heritated by her friend frightness. "I think we should Split?" said Charle exited to visit the house, "Good  idea" Replied his sister, " Guy i think we shouldn't !" said Shawn with more fear, " Ah come on Shawn! Nothing will happen to us !" said finally Charle before leaving with carolyn leaving their friend behind.

Now left alone, Shawn have no choice to go his own way in a dark coner, he tries to be brave like his friends, but his fear get over him every time he heard the floor crackle under his footsteps. When he finally see light fin front of him he was in the Santa's throne room, he was amaized by the thorone who was still clean and beautiful, when he was still looking at the throne he finally hear a bunch of children who was laughing. He jumped back after hearing this, he was believe it was his friends who put a prank, but see nobody around him. Suddenly with the laugh of the children he also heard a Santa Claus laugh, he was not knowing what todo he was now scared, so he run looking for his friends.

"Guys where are you? finally said Shawn, but no answer from them, he finally arrive to a strange door, this time he do not hear laughing, but children screaming and the laugh of a young man. Shawn wanted to turn around and run, but the curiosity get him and open the door, he see the horror who was behind this, this room  was covered of children blood this room was the place of child massacre. Shawn can't even smell the blood, his eyes stop on an old news paper with the picture of a young African American man above the picture it said "Child serial killer arrested,  and put on death row". Fear  for his friends Shawn still calling them, but still no answer he see a freezer in a coner he decide to take a look by opening the door, he see with fear his friend dismembered of their vital organ.

when shawn wanted to run he hear a man laugh behind him, and when he turn around he see the ghost of the serial killer, so he screamed "No! Please! No! AAAAAAAAAAAh!, it was his last word,  the three teenagers were now missing, and nobody know what happen to them because they do not they were the next victims. 