Talk:Buryman/@comment-19990256-20140213151629

As MrTheredfan said, the story was actually not that bad, but then you had the whole Raichu thing happen.

Look, I see what you were trying to do with it, but come on, that's just simply ridiculous. Especially since you started the story off fullying knowing the capabilities of the GB at the time. It was just unnecesary, is all, and it ruined the story a bit for me. However, I liked it, and you kept it interesting for the most part. 6/10.