Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29275171-20181111051520/@comment-9041013-20181112050346

NedWolfkin wrote: Galaxilord1954 EX wrote: I certainly like a lot of your suggestions, having Tyran be a demented leader like Nero or Caligula even is more or less what I intended for when developing the character. Ned, what do you think of his suggestions, by chance? I'd say it would add a much-needed depth to the character. Definately consider it.

BloodySpghetti wrote: You know, I have the bible in the original tongue and that phrase "Mot Yumat" or "You shall die" appears a few times, usually as a death sentence rather on the spot. Also, no one is really told that they are immortal.

This is the last thing I'm responding to on the subject as I don't want this to go off-topic.

First off, it doesn't matter if it sometimes means immediate death, He never said He would kill them right then and there. He flatly said "You will surely die", nothing about killing them on the spot. It's like if a person tells another person they will die if they drink poison, and if the other person doesn't believe them because the poison doesn't kill them the instant they swallow it.

Second, they didn't need to be told they were immortal. If you as a reader needed to be told this by anyone but the author of the book, its not necessarily cannonical infornation. The same applues to all forms of literature really.

Anywho, have a good day