Talk:The Frowner/@comment-31077845-20170216052211

Brah, decide on a creepy thing and stick with it. Just tossing together every horror cliche you can think of and calling it a pasta does nothing but prove you're familiar with horror cliches. I'll say the ending was slightly better, but...actually no, it would be more accurate to say the ending was less bad than the rest of the story. The whole thing was bad, but the ending, despite being ridiculous and contrived, was a little less ridiculous nad contrived than the rest.

Ordinarily I'd try to be a little more constructive rather than just pointing out how terrible a story was, but if a person isn't going to put any effort into their work there's not much point in putting effort into responding to it, now is there?