Talk:The Unpowered House/@comment-24085584-20140322063326

This story has potential to be a maddening downward spiral, but, as WaveDivisionMultiplexer pointed out, an improvement of removing the evidence of the "Insects", and allowing the character/reader to live in the psychotic state until dying a slow, painful death would have done it more justice. It's not a bad story by any means. I just feel like it has the potential to be much, much better.

3/5