Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25839052-20140927050701/@comment-25839052-20140927074621

EmpyrealInvective wrote: A few points: "Immediately ask him "What will happen when they all come together?". (Period not necessary as question mark is the proper closer.)

As for the numbers, I can't really help on that front. (I'd select an unoccupied number or maybe one beyond the set list.)

To be honest, if I was a massive fan of holders pastas, I would like to hear more details about the ordeals you have to go through to obtain the object and its effect/power on the holder. Without that, the story does't really have the feel of a Holders pasta. Ok here it is!

Holder Of Education

In any city, in any country, go to any library you can get yourself to. Walk up to any staff member and ask them to see someone who calls himself the Holder of Education. If the member of staff looks confused, ignores you or anything similar, flee from the library and never ask again. But, if they look like they just realized something, you're in the right place. They will lead you into a long corridor that might or might not of been there before. They will then take you to a large yellow door then disappear.



When you enter the door, you are greeted by an extremely large maze. It is quite difficult and has many twists and turns. Most don't get out alive, but if you do, you will find a large man standing in front of you and staring at you. Immediately ask him "What will happen when they all come together?" He will start talking to you in a language that nobody could ever understand. But even though you can't understand him, whatever he is saying sounds very gruesome and horrible. He will then vanish. Then turn back and try get back through the maze.



If you can't remember the way back or don't get back in time, you will soon die and your soul will be trapped in the maze forever. If you succeed, you will be standing outside the library holding a book. The book is object 539 of 539. It must never be read.