Talk:Those Who Die Peacefully in their Sleep/@comment-26075314-20161025232858

This started off amazingly; it was unique, creative and catchy. But the fact that it starts off rhyming, rolling off the tongue, and then just...stops just kinda throws me out of it. Now it might just be me cuz I have been known to have a very biased opinion towards poems that rhyme, but it's just my thoughts on this.