Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30771515-20170123074702/@comment-31111342-20170129173633

Not bad. It does remind me a lot of Candle Cove, which isn't necessarily bad but it takes me out of the story. And towards the end, I got so used to seeing their screen names that having real names just confuses me.

But I am interested to see where this goes, and it is certainly creepy.