Talk:The Phone Recording/@comment-25112831-20140703062642

OKay, so it wasn't the best i've seen but I think everyones overexaggerating a little... It wasn't the worst. I think you had a story that you could really do something with. Maybe have a go at rewriting though, there is lots of room for improvement. Posting on writer's workshop isn't a bad idea because there are always lots of people willing to give you good writing advice! Good luck :P