Talk:Grandma's Apartment/@comment-26075314-20160101083059

I do love the suspense you built up in this. There were a few grammatical errors, but they are few and I can overlook them. The main thing that gets me is the ending. It comes kinda abrupt and is seriously anticlimactic. I love the idea that people's imaginations are far more powerful and can come up with better, scarier endings on their own, but they do need a little more of a push in that direction with your ending or else it will just fall flat.

Now obviously, I love your stories and will continue reading your stories, I'm just telling you this as a friend. But anyways, loved the story, 7.5/10 I've seen you write much better bro. Show me some of that deliciousness.