Talk:Curiosity Killed the Rat/@comment-24040907-20140918061607/@comment-24040907-20140918203007

My friend, your comment truly made my day. Actually, the metaphor I was going for was in reference to Mr. Wonders blindness, and how it would be next to impossible for him to successfully navigate a labyrinth. (Although he could probably do it just because he's awesome)

Actually, I don't think you should change a thing about this story. The pacing and depth balanced perfectly without drawing out too much. My troubles were caused entirely by my own ignorance of the prequels, which I would do well to read sometime!