Talk:The Trouble with Women

Could someone make sense of this story to me, please? The tale's pace is very ... erratic. It's almost as though bits and pieces of it have been purposely snipped out. It jumps from the protagonist drawing for his elder sister, to his elder sister somehow appearing with him beneath a pile of pants while she's supposed to be in school, to Whisker exposing himself to "Bashika" (who is she again?) before finally skipping over to a visit to his aunt's house.

In between all that, his sister asks him to dispose of a certain "something". I assumed it was the Hulk drawing, but then it turns out to be a "snoopy dog". Snoopy as in the cartoon character Snoopy? Or is this some breed of dog I've yet to come across? The story neglects to mention why its relevant at all, or how they discovered it, or why they're so determined to dispose it.

And who the hell is "Van Mom"? There isn't a single mention of this "Van Mom" until 'someone' crawls into Whisker's bed. And yet he mentions dreaming about her giving "big boy" kisses to him "weeks" ago. And yet why is it that the reader is somehow left unaware of who this character even is uptil this point?

The ending din't make any sense either (he grabs the snoopy dog and feels good. The End ...?), although that's no surprise, given how little sense every other part of the plot made. Are some parts of the story missing or something? Did my browser somehow screw up, and only loaded certain fragments of the full text? Or is the tale supposed to be this screwy? The Fatastic Spiderine 14:51, January 20, 2012 (UTC)