Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5542146-20181029055238/@comment-5542146-20181029191032

I meant to fix those after pasting from document form, but I passed out before that. You really didn't have to try to white-knuckle those blocks of text you know? XD Any way, thanks for the feedback so far. Bloody, what would you suggest to make it more climactic and less random while keeping with the theme? (I'll post my next CP tomorrow, and I will MAKE SURE to space out the paragraphs when copy-pasting from the document lol)