Talk:Shadow, Fog and Firelight/@comment-24040907-20140919054604

Boom! Thunderbolt! This series is getting good. You've set up an enthralling atmosphere that feels both consistent and engrossing, introduced numerous characters that bring back old memories of childish awe and wonder, and also threw me into the Twilight lake of mythical creatures and teenaged girls. However, I was actually most fascinated by the three supernatural characters that were shown, and I view the dream sequence as a welcome change of pace. I like Kes the most thus far. But what in oblivion does the dream mean? And what happened to the kid that got hit by lightning? I guess I'll have to read the sequels to find out!

One thing that didn't make sense is this: "Kes looked from one to the other, and felt a slight chill run down the back of her neck to her sandaled feet. This was just like a scene from The Sopranos where the hoods were discussing a hit list of potential targets."

Kes doesn't know what Teenybopper means, yet she knows The Sopranos so well that she can mentally compare her experiences to scenes from said film? That was the only inconsistency that I could find, however, and is mostly subjective in nature.