Talk:Sister's Computer/@comment-5733573-20180915161240/@comment-7602529-20180926155155

I personally think its fine. No need for a clue. Its fine how it is. Maybe you could add how he didn't care about what was on the tabs but other than that, its fine.

The ending is random, bloodstained clothes is weird. I thought he found her at first and thats why his veins were cold...