Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26007602-20150501010846/@comment-25037895-20150503142711

It does explain a lot when you put it that way. I think that explanation really doesn't add to the story any. You could turn the story into a dream or something, but then, it would make the story less suspenseful. I think it is good without the symbolism. The factory doesn't make me think of society. If it became a part of someone's imagination, then I think the excitement level would drop way down.