Talk:Something Is Wrong/@comment-26932599-20151009150158

This was an amazing pasta, I really enjoyed reading it and you brought out the plot really well. However, I think you missed out a word. "until I eventually tired of hide and seek."

At the beginning I had already started to think how funny and ironic it would've been if one of the aunt's children were actually abnormal, and I wasn't disappointed towards the end. I feel that you should've explained more on the part that when the aunt had found out about the discovery of her child. It just was kinda sudden with no explanation on what she was doing there, though I'm assuming that this was the time she'd come out to feed her child (?)

Overall, this is the best pasta I've read in a while so I'd say a 9/10. I'll be looking at your other stories shortly too wwwwww