User blog comment:HumboldtLycanthrope/Any black metal, crust punk, or viking metal fans out there?/@comment-26027160-20150324212612/@comment-26027160-20150325065913

It sounds good to me. You shouldn't add the other part, as you'll simply repeat yourself doing so. That will sound off.

To be honest, I've never heard about mankind considering themselves descendants to Odin. After a short research, I found this "Ynglingeætten", or the "Favoured offspring" (literal translation), who are the eldest known Norse reign dynasty. In order to make light of them being "chosen" and better than others, they said that their "ætt" (family blood line) came from Odin and Frigg. However, they were the only ones who considered themselves to be the descendants of Odin. The Norwegian and Swedish kings were believed to be a part of this bloodline. So no, not every man "came" from Odin.

But that's just details. I don't think that you should change your story due to that. It's good as it is :)