Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26360765-20150501135627/@comment-26027963-20150501140337

You might wanna scrap this. It was written very fast and the errors are nearly uncountable. There is no punctuation or capitals, the misspellings and grammer is uncountable. Your "plot" isn't really a plot at all, it's more of just a cliché.

Sorry to be brutal, but no one likes liars.