User blog comment:Dinner1234/Jeff and His Story/@comment-16771274-20140203185347

It was...odd, in the way the kid was like 13-14 or so and that he'd suddenly have some insane breakdown, after no hints of him having any sort of childhood trauma or mental illnesses( they can be hard to detect, I should know, but like seriously, there was no build up) at least with others that are similar, such as ticci-toby or stuff as such, there is a reason as to why the person would turn out that way( childhood truama, ...slendy....0.0) and I didn't see why there needed to be a brother who got arrested in the first place, it could just be some jerks who got wild in a fight. Speaking of which, since when did kids that age even get so violent? I mean, fights are common and such, but really? 8-9th graders ACTUALLY setting people on fire? -_- Maybe possible, but kinda unrealistic.

Idk, the whole thing was a good story, but a lot of things were out of place. Geez, I'm probably around the dude's age and I KNOW puberty isn't that tough on your sanity @-@