Talk:Clown Dogs/@comment-25052433-20150123195102

This was a really great pasta. It was short and sweet, but delivered a very quick, unnerving and satisfying result.

-You wrote this with many contemporary social issues in play, like the very real problem with cyber-bullying on social media. You succeeded in creating a plot that opened in a realistic setting.

-The characters were kept simple but beleavable.

-The clown dog revenge was very creepy. It related to the plot in the form of revenge seeking, but veered away just enough to be scary. Had you just had the dead girl sending the threatening messages over Facebook, this would have run the risk of almost being cliche, but adding in the clown dog pictures added that element of originality that really set this one apart.

Overall, this story delivered. It contained the elements of the early days of Creepypastas, and provideded that eerie sense of realness that a lot of stories don't pack anymore.

Excellent job!