Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26581765-20150707055637/@comment-26581765-20150707071520

On the part about not focusing on the killer, I kind of beg to differ. I totally see why this would be focusing on the killer, but really, Greyscale and Tobias are two different people, but in one body. Yes, the "one body" part would make it lean to your side, but hey, not all Creepypastas have to be written the same, am I right? Now notice, this is just a friendly rebuttal; I'm not saying you're wrong.

Here is an idea I have come up with to help it not be cliche;

We have a highschool dropout who is feeling "stalked" in a sense and he slowly becomes consumed by this "other self".

This is only a general idea so far. I don't think there have been any other CPs of this, but correct me if I'm wrong

I do hope this isn't viewed as hatred, meanness, etc. I mean no harm here.