Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10869901-20140512073709/@comment-10950063-20140512191345

All right, I'm going to keep going, but before I do I want to make something clear. I know this all my seem mean. This might seem really rough, like we're coming at you really hard. And it's okay to be upset, this is your work and people are taking it apart. It's okay for that to hurt. But we're doing this because we want to help you become a better writer. Maybe you'll decide that writing's not for you, but if you want to stick with it then this is the kind of thing you need.