Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10319977-20160102141602/@comment-25941663-20160105214959

You don't have to update the original post, but I suggest it simply because people will read that first.

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"His face has scars" - Replace 'has' with 'had'.

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This one was more suspenseful. Personally, I think it meets the Quality Standards, but it's up to the admins.