Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27024716-20150708172413/@comment-26872802-20150708173754

This reminds me a lot about Survivor Type by Steven King. Here's my review (1 to 10, 10 being the highest) -

Creativity - 4

As interesting as the concept may be, it seems slightly cliched and the build up is quite boring.

Intensity - 3

As I said, the build up wasn't good. If the story was longer or the diary submissions weren't so short, then it would be better.

Writing - 8

A thing I like to see in modern Creepypastas is a modern touch, especially when in a teenage diary or teenage writing. You accomplished this well.

Horror - ?

There wasn't much horror in this story, since it doesn't really strike fear into me.

Overall - 6

It's a decent Creepypasta, plus I wouldn't want to hurt your feelings since you're my friend. I liked this, though it was flawed, it was okay.

-- I'm not saying it was bad. I'm saying it was decent. --