Talk:The Hissing/@comment-26112985-20160222051915

Well, I've recently asked you to review one of my stories, so I'm going to go ahead and return the favor ahead of time. Craigslist is a real horror show. It always has been, and always will be, a place for sick people to thrive. But anyways, this was a good story. Not perfect by any means, but good in it's own right. What I did like about this story was the plot itself. Just like Natalo said below, I don't really think I've seen this sort of thing done before, and it works well for what it is. Sort of reminds me of the Sherlock Holmes mystery "The Case of the Speckled Band." The idea of a live creature living inside a device you regularly use is enough to make a person uncomfortable for sure.

With that said, there are a couple issues I have here. What did the snake eat when it was inside the laptop? It was there for a couple of months, so I have to wonder, exactly how did it survive? There was also a couple of problems with the dialogue (But I won't give you too hard a time for that, writing dialogue is hard.)

All in all, I rate this a 7.5/10