Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9967354-20140523110415/@comment-24918243-20140528034847

Finally got through it all :)

It was good. Long but good. I do think this would do a lot better in printed form then on the internet tough, due to the attention span most people who are surfing the web have. I guess I'll have to read the other story in order to get the full effect from this one.