Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190515084101/@comment-35711173-20190521084350

Thank you one and all for your feedback. I've taken it all very seriously and have tried to answer the issues. Your review of this draft would be very much appreciated. Based on your next comments, I'm really hoping to get to a more solid draft over the Memorial Day Weekend.

Tell me what works and what doesn't.