Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36013915-20180629060821/@comment-9041013-20180630142311

EJ Magalad wrote: BloodySpghetti wrote: First off, Bazaars all look shady to people who've never seen one. It's an open roof old styled enclosed market places or street with a bunch of counters where goods are sold. Mostly in middle eastern style of things.

Also, you should make it look a little different than usual, perhaps go on to say that each person sees it as the perfect shirt but no one notices this detail because they all just enjoy the shirt and compliment the pratagonist. As for not taking it off, you could mostly keep it to him being attached to it, but then you could also mention how he gets it stuck in something or moves it a bit but it wouldn't bundge only for him to shrug it off as "weird" and carry on with his stuff.

If you want to take it to an emotional attachment extreme, have at some point people start saying its not as good as the pratagonist feels it is to throw him into arguments and verbal fights with people.

I do stand by the closing scene in which they have to tear it off him. Thanks for the tip I actually have an idea on how to start and end the story. I am actually telling the story through my character's perspective though. I just want them to describe how people are worried about him instead of switching perspectives from character to another character. Would be nice if you or someone else could give a tip on how to write a story only in first person. Ah, from a first person perspective, I guess a physical description of a worried person would work, give off the appearence of worrying on a character and give them a monologue or part in a dialogue in which their worrying is displayed.