Talk:The Ferryman/@comment-24550863-20140506091718


 * D Great job! I love this story!! A bit of a twist ending you had there :)

However I can still spot many grammatical errors, especially from "It was about a week later since his fifth absense, so he hadn't been to school in about two weeks; four more days and he'd be expelled. ..." to the end. From here there are some phrases I don't understand. What does fifth absense mean? Wasn't he absent for a few weeks? These are the kind of errors I spotted.

Other than that, there is also an error right at the start. Repeating "Have" twice. Is it on purpose?

What I really loved was Charon's character, and the way you described his eyes. I love this kind of twost ending. Great job :) Tell me on my talk page if you would like me to help you edit the errors.