Talk:A Noel in Black/@comment-28088262-20151225125241

Another Californian werewolf pasta with beastiality and a bunch of drug names XD. I have no idea who that's by. Even though the majourity of things have been said, here's what I really liked about the story:


 * The description of how Caleb felt when he shot the rat in the tunnels got to me for some reason. It brings out the more human side of Caleb because he is able to see the turnabout from monster to vulnerable. It was one of my favourite descriptions I've read of yours and quite short but impacting. I also love how you links back to the rat near the end: Then the beast appears who is really only a little girl.  It also symbolises Caleb himself to a certain extent. Really effective.


 * I liked the references to your other stories. I spotted the connection to The Gym Teacher immediately, and looking in the comments I recognized many more. This story makes a great addition to your universe.


 * How you build sympathy for Caleb from the reader unlike Mr Kirby. The sympathy is crafted cautiously as if out of one's control, a bit like how we feel for Frankenstein's monster.