Talk:Braid/@comment-25471033-20181214215720

The comments were right, this was one hefty pasta to digest. The description was phenomenal, even though it was really long I was able to keep reading throughout the entire thing. As to be expected with these stories, I was hoping that the protagonist could get away, but once again he was just another helpless victim. I like how it all came together at the end, and the little notes of warnings along the way kind of helped guide the reader into where the protagonist was messing up at. My only thing is, I don't know where these warnings came from. Did the Voice tell her to tell others, is it just a known fact this guy forgot about, is it something the people of Azaela town knew but wouldn't share? I don't know. BUT, I give it a 9/10