Talk:My Dark Web Experience - 'The Visiting'/@comment-26675653-20150721185027

This was a decent read. I thought the plot was interesting! There was a lot of grammar mistakes and I think you could've added a bit more detail when it came to the setting. With that said, there is also some details that aren't necessary (for example: The display picture was simply a white background with 'The Visiting' written in Arial Black font.). Just be careful with little things like that for future reference! :D