Talk:Sabbath/@comment-27838637-20180228061725/@comment-27838637-20180228070822

Ah! An oversight on my behalf. Still would have liked to see a little more fire imagery or the imagery of people retreating in fear from the devil. But 24/25 is a near perfect score anyway.

As for horror factor I've tried more to look at all entries objectively as how well the elements of horror were used; not so much how scary I found the story. I tried to do the same with the entertainment side of things.

I understand the need behind the interspersed comments, and most of the time they worked quite well. I just think it was overdone in certain places. As for the run-on sentences, I thought it may have been a stylistic choice and I didn't deduct marks for that despite the comment I made.

Personally though, I really liked the story. Don't feel hard-done-by with a score of 84/100, I'm trying my hardest to be tough on these stories so all my reviews are fair.