Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25569105-20141022174551

Hello people of the Creepypasta forums!

I am having sincere trouble with a pasta idea,The Red Van.It entails a haunted van that was possesed after an accident in the workshop by an alcoholic husband.Enthralled yet?

.....no?...ok then some backstory could be needed I suppose.

So this couple,despite all their faults,stays together and runs a successful car repair shop. One day the husband,Micheal Kagen,accidentaly slips on a release for a jack,crunshing his wife under a white van.Years and many AA meetings later ,he is no longer an alcoholic but he can't get rid of the guilt it caused,manifesting psychologically as illusions of a red van following him around ,till he commits suicide.I just want to know how to avoid  cliches while doing that.As a thirteen year old with an interestin horror I really want to make this happen.Any advice? 