Talk:Won't You Come Out and Play?/@comment-31077845-20170214184217

I guess it's ok, except for the "Oh, yeah, they randomly let all the crazy people out of the asylum for 12 hours every two weeks. You know people in mental asylums. They're great with being left unsupervised around other people and their stuff". I've seen some pretty contrived premises in my life, but that's definitely up there in the ranks. Also "An insane man has been repeatedly knocking on my window and sending me crazy letters...you should let me stay home some time when he's here!" "Ok son, I guess so!", so apparently his parents aren't exactly going to be winning any parenting awards either.

Also, "play with me"? Is it possible to get any more cliché?

So actually it's really not that ok, it's a terrible premise with a nonsensical plot and points that LOOK like they were supposed to lead to somewhere but never did and overall, in almost every sense, is just not good. It looks like maybe it once had the possibility of being alright, but the author got bored halfway through and decided to just kind of lazily tie it up and be done with the thing.