Talk:A Night in the Hospital/@comment-26326346-20150913184252

I love the security guard's initial "eh, screw it, I'm fired" attitude, it makes the beginning a lot more light-hearted in my eyes which acts as a perfect buffer for the dark tone later on in the story. I figured out the twist based on the initial information that the security guard had screwed up, but that didn't make me enjoy it any less. This was a good read and you did a great job giving Christine and the main character personality.

You covered something really dark without going into a total gorefest mode which made the story all the better. Broken bones tend to cause me to cringe, while blood not so much.

I admittedly haven't read a lot of your stories, I think this is actually the second one with A Small Piece of Lead being the first. I'll have to check more of them out, I really like your writing style.