Talk:Dead Matter/@comment-35711173-20190919212833

The basic story isn't bad, but something is confusing. It's like there's a detail to know who is who that's confusing me, and the confusion hits right here.

A dull thump resounded through the room as the composite bolt penetrated the private’s skull and collided with the panel behind it, scattering grey matter onto the severed circuitry.

Who is the private?