User blog comment:Whitix/Summer 2016 Creative Writing Contest!/@comment-25052433-20160703034445/@comment-25052433-20160704133055

Lol, thanks for checking it out, glad you enjoyed it. When I get some time I'll read yours and leave you some feedback. I sort of went out on a limb with this one and created a more tongue-in-cheek story, but in the end I was happy with the way it turned out.