Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26251513-20160522192554/@comment-26251513-20160523015117

Krazysquirrel05 wrote:

Hey  man cool story!!! XD I hope you don't get angry or offended but  I edited and revised it so it flows and sounds a bit smoother, just helping >^_^<   - A.squirrel

Do you desperately desire something? Do you desire something so badly that you will do anything to get what you want, even kill somebody? Would you go as far as to replace something you want with somebody you love? If so, then follow these requirements and you may very well get it.

First, you must take the blood of someone you know and love dearly. It cannot be somebody you don't hold close to your heart, and if you do initiate this ritual with the blood of someone you don't know, or hold contempt towards. The misfortune that ensues will be your own. You will also require a doll, Any shape, color, size, just as long as it's a doll. Although, it's much easier if it is small. This will speed up the burying part of the process. This doll will allow you to trade the life of your victim for the treasure you seek to obtain.

Second, you must inject the doll with the blood of your beloved sacrifice. Go into the woods with absolutely no intrusion  from contact with another human, and recite these words three times, “Delictorum meorum non possum solvere”. Once you have finished the chant dig a hole in the ground and bury the sacrifice's vessel.

Promptly return to your place of dwelling. Wait until  the moon is highest in the sky. At the precise moment the the moon reaches maximum altitude every single source of light and heat in your house will cease to work. whatever you do, do not utter a word, do not react to anything you may hear or feel, nor are you to look at anything or open your eyes for absolutely any reason. moments later, you will hear a whisper as quite as a breeze in the night sky. The voices of which can be of many kinds, such as young lass, or that of someone with a deep rasp as if being forced out by a man on his death bed. As I stated before, do not react to anything in any "way" "shape" or "form". After the voice is finished  it's chant, your house will return to its prior state as if nothing ever happened. When this happens you will be startled to see the light through your eye lids but KEEP YOUR EYES SHUT! What you will see "will" kill you if you were to look at it. The thing will try whatever it can to force you into opening your eyes, do not allow it to succeed lest you wish to meet your own demise. When the thing begins to chant again, it's okay to open your eyes. The lights will be on. Go to the darkest place in your house. What you want will be there. If you try and grab it, it will disappear. There in front of you will appear a door, that of which did not previously exist. Or a hatch, if you are in a basement. Proceed to enter, you will find yourself in a hallway full of broken furniture and ruined paintings. It should look similar to a hotel but with the distinct feeling that it is not of the world to which you belong. The Door/Hatch will slam close behind you and lock. Go down the hallway, you will notice that the doors on both sides will all possess the same number, 199. continue walking. When you enter a room at the end of the hall you will find two  doors unlike all the rest, one of the doors says 200 whilst the other door will say 1. Going through the door whith the number 1 is the only chance you get to end the ritual if you wish to spare your victim. If you wish to claim your prize enter the door marked 200. through the door is a person pieced together by the very fabric of time and every shadow of every nightmare you have ever encountered. Act like it isn't there, and just go through the door behind it.

The things that lay beyond this door are not for the faint of heart. Behind this door you will face your every fear. physical and emotional, it'll be there. Try your best to get out of the room. The longer you are in that room, the harder it is to free yourself. When you manage to get out of the room, the ritual will be complete. You will be back at the darkest place of your home and you will be holding what you wanted. Or, if it was something like love, or fame, then you will receive it the next day or so. And no, your house will hold no mark of what had happened their. congratulations! You beat all odds and traded the life and soul of a loved one for something of no true value or worth. I hope your gain was worth their loss... OMG, thanks ;). Mind copy+paste this into my story?