Talk:The Endeavor/@comment-24996913-20160216213149

I love this. I love the slight humor, the imagery, and of course i like Abaddon. Your characters had just enough development to keep me invested in your story. Not many people can balance humor with horror well, so i was more than impressed by your obvious skill with doing so. I don't know what my the spawning was very well received in my imagination. I imagined the head, i imagined the people being tortured in the background, it was all too real in my head. I absolutely loved this pasta, and i will read it a few more times. Great work.