Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-40138781-20190714042733/@comment-36627132-20190714052507

I suggest not using bold text, it makes the story unpleasant to look at.

As for the story itself, more than half of it is the narrator exposting it us that he is all alone and the last half of it is him saying about how he fears something will take him before coming to accept it.

There is very little substance to this story and it is very lacking in content.