Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-7482321-20140516010250/@comment-7482321-20140519002307

Thanks a ton for your criticism, I revised some of the "He" sentences.

I supposed the challenge with this micropasta is trying to show that he thinks his cat is under the blanket using third person. I think i'll rewrite this pasta sometime.

I have one quick question. Must all pastas be run through the Writers Workshop before being normally posted?

Thanks again.