Talk:Squeal/@comment-24983065-20150216044807

It felt too rushed for my liking.

The beginning was too cliché. "this is a warning" has been done to death.

And similarly the ending was far too cliché, the author somehow managing to write their warning from inside an Asylum? Probably one of the most overused endings for scary stories and creepy pastas ever.

Good effort though, 4/10.