Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20180401020416/@comment-9041013-20180401094511

You made me listen Rammstein's Spring with this poem. I thought the character would make the jump and you would cut off the poem mid fall, as to have us asking the same questions, but you've decided to go the safer path and just say "yeah, you can contemplain dying, but don't do it on purpose".

The rhymes, though, the rhymes... I like your rhymes.