Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25388195-20140910140442

About three days ago i posted my first pasta, my friends and family liked it, ( Sent it to my dad and he sent it to everyone) the only problem is that i havn't realy had any opinions from people who i don't know, as it seems to have gone unoticed, I was wondering if some of you could read it and review it for me. I would love the feed back from the community here. The story was called "Still Not Over" Thank you for reading this

~GreenAppleStories 