Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-26891175-20150904154743/@comment-30093481-20150904160102

Oh, I'm sure you're fifteen. Yep, Mmhmm, yeah.

Even if you didn't write like a ten-year-old, the story would still be bad enough to delete. It had no build-up, no backstory, and pointless, edgy violence to try to hide all the other mistakes. It wasn't scary, in fact I found the way you wrote it to be pretty funny.

I think you'd better pay more attention in school, kiddo. Grammar's important.