Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33077235-20180925204000/@comment-9041013-20180926091227

Well, whatever this creature is, my point stands... telling the kid he has died and that his father killed him to "save him" from his Cancer before trying to actually kill him or the soul... that would work, because it's a child and not used for a cheap shock value plot point.

Fix your English though, as well.