Talk:The Forest of Things You Want to Happen/@comment-25052433-20150602191308

Wow, this was really amazing! I must admit, this was one of the best psychological pastas that I have read in a long time. The twist as the child realizes the truth at the end really delivered that perfect surge of creepy satisfaction.

Your writing and grammar here were pretty spot on. I made a couple of very minor adjustments, but overall this one was written very well. This is an excellent pasta and a perfect addition to our library. Keep writing!