Talk:The Harbinger Experiment/@comment-25170312-20150801220808

Honestly, it's not bad, but once I got about a third of the way through I knew exactly how the rest of the story would go. And it didn't miss a beat. The Tiny Tim song was the only thing I didn't expect, but didn't really add anything. A Pasta of the Month should be unique in some way. This one wasn't original in the least. Kind of sad.