Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25980873-20160120071720/@comment-26326346-20160131054126

Well, that was... disturbing. Your description was dead on as always and I found the plot fascinating. I also figured out that it was going to turn to cannibalism after he starting downing all of the food, however, I don't think that is necessarily a bad thing because you had both characters act as parallels to each other (one was super thirsty and drank; the other hungry and ate). I found this to be a bit of a humorous piece despite its disturbing nature. The line "Dude, I ate my mom!" was just hilarious to me. Overall, a cautionary tale about not accepting things from strangers (especially drugs). Great job!