Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27371749-20151209190914/@comment-26448563-20151210211751

I think that the story here has some really serious potential. I think that the idea of Lucifer interacting with a fallen angel is a very good one. There are a few small mistakes here and there, but it is not a massive problem. You could try to take some more time before you reveal that your character is a fallen angel but other than that, I enjoyed reading the pasta. If you can't get it put on the wiki don't worry. I haven't managed to get a creepypasta on here.