Talk:My New Best Friend/@comment-25094403-20150322215055

I think this is a very good idea for a story. It has a lot of potential and a lot of good ideas, but they're not executed very well. If it had been fleshed out a little more and beta read, I think it cvould have been a solid 8 or 9 out of 10. You're a good author with a lot of potential, just don't overuse elipsies (... - that's what they're called) and make sure to get a beta reader. I'm happy to do that if you ever need me to. :)