Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5292796-20140708014320/@comment-25037895-20140708020930

"it kept that human's soul safe for." two things: the use of the word "human's" is a little redundant and in this sentence "for" would be a proposition which cannot end a sentence. It makes no sense like this:

That is not a very thrilling rollercoaster; It went.

Am I supposed to guess how it goes?