User blog comment:MooseJuice/Moose Sez: Ten Bad Pasta Designs to Avoid/@comment-5462738-20130211143742

Um .... Mr. MooseJuice sir? Would my story be on the abomination list? The reason I am asking is because my story is really a part of my book that I am currently writing and I posted it on this site to see if I could get any feedback on what I have so far. Could you please look at my story and tell me what you think? I would be very greatful! My story is The Frightening Dream.