Talk:Stairs/@comment-25883967-20151021052601

Predictable AF. I'm sorry but the 'immobile old lady isn't actually an old lady and isn't actually immobile and is actually the murderer' troupe is so overused that it's not even funny. Even if the troupe wasn't overused, I could still see the twist coming from a mile away. However, your writing style, spelling, grammar etc isn't bad. Even though the story was generic and boring, it was still very well written. The amount of 12 year old bronies in the comment section on this pasta saying shit like 'omg 9/10' or 'i voetd dis as pasta of teh mont' is just cringe worthy. 3/10