Talk:Woman in the Window/@comment-3541151-20150204122041

Well, the writing itself is pretty good, however...

Yeah you know this isn't going to end well-but hey this stories outcome prepared you for that!

Onto the review.

I like the concept of being haunted by strange forces, and some of the build up was okay in this one, but overall this was a very silly story. It's not only senslessly brutal, but it's just... itself.

The ghost just does what it does without any rhyme or reason.

Also in the end was that really the villains plan, to have him take his own life? Really?

I used to be disturbed by that ending, notice "used". It's a damned cliche!

And I take it back, the writing is "good" in the sense that it's descriptive, it really just veers in unpredictible turns as if it's unsure of it's destination.

All in all, a dumb suicide note, a dumber story. 2/10