Talk:Echoes from Blasphemy/@comment-4715955-20160128220855/@comment-27012445-20160128223614

I can totally see where you're coming from, and I think I know what happened. I hit one of those bursts in which the writing was coming out very naturally and with ease, kind of like being in the zone. I found I enjoyed this style in which the characters spokes and went with it. However, that doesn't mean everything should all remain in the final draft. As demonstrated here, the dialogue, which I had fun writing, still may have hindered the story flow in the end.

Which just shows, I am a very inexperienced writer, having only just written my very first story this past September. I am quickly learning that editing out content for the sake of story flow and tone is much more complicated than I realize and continues to be a challenge. I really appreciate your assessment of the story. You honed in on the areas of my writing that I realize still need development. Thanks so much.