Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20180915053007/@comment-35711173-20180915081436

I wouldn't re-do the Gatekeeper yet. For one thing, Rule one in the Rules section of the challenge gave an age range for the participants of the challenge. It says "they must be between ages of 13 and 60, and it is desirable that they are in their teens or early 20s." That's why I went with 31 as the age for my character.

Somebody had to be the sucker before the Marine boot tossing Marine. I don't know where the Japanese woman fits in there.