Talk:A Room/@comment-25087149-20140621002138

Sorry I just don't even get the fucking point of writing this intricate of a story if your not going to explain a god damn thing. Why did literally anything in this story happen? I might as well have read the first paragraph and then went and rubbed one off because I would have almost all the same information I have now. You don't have to explain EVERYTHING, but Herbert was literally a pointless character who only existed to further the plot. So was the guy beneath him. Fuck this story. It was entertaining and intresting and I had a great time reading it, but fuck this story.