Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-12695236-20140621101152

Hey guys. I've already posted my story "The Clown, the Paint and the Circus" on the site but have not received constructive feedback on it. You may have read the first part "The Clown the Paint and the Turbines" which MrCreepyPasta read out on his Youtube channel. He has also emailed me saying he is going to read this one to, but when that is I don't know! He has many stories to read before mine!

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Clown%2C_the_Paint_and_the_Circus

It would be great if people took a look and tell me if they liked it, what they thought could have been better etc.

Thanks for your time

Elliot  