Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24101790-20151017205338/@comment-27012445-20151018035853

This was a fun read. The only comment I have is the opening sentence. I was confused about Maddie's gender. Seeing a female name, but being referred to "his office" and not realizing it was her grandfather kind of threw me off. Also, when I was reading this, I was getting a vibe this was a period piece, like 19th century. I was actually a bit disappointed it was present day since it would have added an interesting twist, but that is not really a criticism at all. In the end I really enjoyed it. Top notch writing.