Talk:The Silent Chalkboard/@comment-26027963-20150503223131

I got your message... I loved reading this.

Pros:

Plot - Simple and sturdy, a rare combination for a shorter pasta.

Twist - The way you made the twist quick and sharp made it feel like someone stabbed all your senses you use to predict.

Length - The length was also perfect. It wasn't to long where I lost interest, but not short enough where it left me wanting more.

Cons:

Noises - I think the noises would've been louder, and more constant.

All in all, 8/10.

That was really good.

I'm C r a z y W o r d s, I love y o u <font color="#C0C0C0">a <font color="#808080">l <font color="#696969">l!  Talk to me Baby! Contributions! 22:31, May 3, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords