Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180921153801/@comment-36393004-20180923175520

A lot of valid points and appreciate all the feedback As for the errors, I rewrote this on a laptop that is two times too small for my hands. I am use to using a standard keyboard. I will probably wait until I am back at work tomorrow to rewrite this story again, to try to keep that from happening.