Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30861466-20180505175756/@comment-30861466-20180505195037

BloodySpghetti wrote: This is shit. It's lousily written, I mean, you actually make 40+18 into 68, somehow. It's not funny, it's got nothing going on for it.

Just meh.

Okay firstly I'd appreciate it if you don't use profanity I only used it in my story to fit the character. Secondly can you please give some constructive criticism instead of pointing out a maths error? Although that is helpful