Talk:Radiator's Miscommunication/@comment-25749828-20141127044921

This story has potential. I am confused about the radiators though...when they were telling Lucas to leave were they trying to help him by warning him about the super? If the radiators were part of the super's machinery to cook the tenants in that apartment building than I assume they would try to lure the tenants into staying in the apartment, not get them to leave.

I also thought you were going to go somewhere with the dried red stains on the radiators in the introduction. You could try to work that in some how or just take it out as unnecessary. I was waiting for it to come up again and when it didn't I thought it detracted  from where the scary emphasis should be.