Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24487239-20150127224138

Firstly, I understand that it is up to the discretion of the admins to keep the streets of the wikia clean from the trash pastas. I would like an appraisal of the reason this pasta was deleted, it may not be scary enough to be on the site or it may simply be too vague, either of those could be true but I would appreciate any specifics. Be as harsh as you want, any criticism is good criticism.

I was stolen from my home, 

''The men, they locked me away. ''

They do not sit on any throne, 

''But I fear I’ll be here to stay. ''

  

On the first day, they hurt me, 

''I can’t give them what they want. ''

I’ve been blinded, and cannot see, 

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal">''<span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">But the sounds of this hell still haunt. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">  

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">On the second day, I was afraid, 

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal">''<span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">The men wouldn’t speak at all. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">I feel my soul begin to decay, 

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal">''<span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">But my mind was the first to fall. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">  

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">On the third day, they broke me, 

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal">''<span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">I would say what they wanted to hear. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">But the horror didn’t stop, 

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal">''<span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">And I feel my end is near. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">  

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal">''<span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">On the fourth day, I broke them. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal">''<span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">I heard the men weeping together. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal">''<span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">   They saw where the darkness stems. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:center;line-height:normal">''<span style="font-family:"Baskerville Old Face","serif"">It left a bad taste in my mouth, forever. '' <ac_metadata title="No One Walks Away The Same: Removed"> </ac_metadata>