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Mmpratt99 deviantart wrote:

I'll see if I could do a horrific ending that hopefully won't turn into an accidental comedy.

It's those last three words that stop me. "swallowing her whole." Either one of those cats became elephant sized or she became the size of a mouse. If that is really what you want, then you have to specify it. "Eating her up" could work. Less specific and not blatantly physically impossible.