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It does somewhat. On the flash back scene, have you any suggestions on how I should make the flashback transition less abrupt?

Also I'm currently working on the same story only seen from the point of view of the Jeffery Mahr character who's more sympathetic with Rus and Kevin, and he explains more about the background of the house and how it became haunted in the first place. He also sees the Lurker before the audience as well as something else that cause the Lurker to react negatively, and it has something to do with the toy duck moving.