Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150529193644

Author's Note: This is my first poem, admittedly, I am not sure as to whether or not I should add periods and commas at the end of each line. Guidance is appreciated. _____________________________________________________________________________

Around the corner and into the kitchen I peek I manage to spy that which I seek I slowly approach, stabbing my knife into the target's flesh After the skin has been removed, I take a bite; tastes fresh As I eat, I hear a gasp It came from the home owner who attempts his retreat I drop the stolen orange and lunge The owner trips and begins to cry out as my knife takes the plunge That day I learned, orange goes well with human meat To be quite honest, I am proud of my feat Fear not, it was all in good taste For I am poor and do not like to waste  