Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-4665292-20180608193616/@comment-35911608-20180620161711

Jdeschene wrote: Squidmanescape wrote: Oh. I thought the story was that the demon made him think that he was in a relationship by pretending to be women his age, then turning invisible and mimicking what he did to said women except against his daughter. I really don't think there's anything in the text that supports that. However, I do think we can all agree that the fact that three separate people have come up with three separate interpretations means the author needs to seriously clarify what it is that's going on in this story. I agree, because I had interpreted it as the FATHER being the rapist, and it was some kind of split personality thing going on. Idk, that's just how I read it. But regardless this story does need work.