Talk:The Red Road/@comment-247250-20140903193402

Seemed like you started ambitious and got lazy by the time you were describing them stepping inside the barn. Pentagrams? Laaaaaaaaaaaame. We should have gotten more of what happened to Kyle than "he got pulled in and vanished" and certainly more than "a pig head on a white jumpsuited man's body" for the creature. With more drama in the chase, this could be an interesting story. Right now, there isn't enough here to make me even shrug.

Overall, although there are grains of an intriguing story, I have to give this about a 4/10. Just not enough there to warrant any higher.