Talk:The Long List/@comment-25226524-20150220181649

This was a great piece of writing, and the short amount of time you created it in makes it that much more impressive. Everything about this story works. It's dark, gritty, and provokes a wide range of emotions. I love stories involving revenge being taken upon deplorable characters such as these. Coupled with the great writing, the addition of the supernatural element kept this from being just another revenge story. I think this is another great addition to your expanding library of stories. Keep up the good work and good luck with the competition.