Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35911608-20190527170905/@comment-35711173-20190527173300

I like it.

Read it out loud to yourself a few times. In particular, I saw "thunderous applaud" of a rifle. Thunderous applause might work from an English standpoint but not from a firearms standpoint. You would only get that sound if the weapon was full auto, and a full auto rifle is very difficult to handle.