Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20150725025222/@comment-26425680-20150725221107

Whether or not you should add more really depends on what you want this pasta to be. In its current form, I'd call this an appetizer, basically something short that gets me in the mood to read more. There's nothing wrong with appetizer pastas, but I get the feeling that the rest of the story is already in your head, trying to burst out. Go ahead and add to this; you're a chef, give us a main course.