Talk:Beware Omegle/@comment-25420140-20150424223742

Things to Make It Better:

1. Make the mask be different (I suggest a mask of a person with blood dripping from his/her eyes)

2: Don't call it the "Pumkin Man" (Trust me, It's not scary, just stupid)

3: Make sure you tell what the death is like, like this:

"He began to rip out my ribs, I began to see black, but I tried to fight it. Then he ripped out my heart and blood spurted in my face, he leaned in and said,

'Nice try, don't fight, It's a waste of suffering.'

Then I saw blackness."

4: Try to add more suspense. For Example:

"I began to walk upstairs to Brads, room, my heart was pounding wildly. Finally,  got to Brad's door, after what seemed like hours I opened the door and..."

5: Don't have the photo be of the same man in both cameras, that'll just confuse the readers.

That's all I have.