Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25308679-20160704223755/@comment-25308679-20160705172936

Thank you guys... I only skimmed for now, but I'll take a special looks at the individual advice and perhaps post a second draft on here before submitting it as a finished work? (I also wouldn't call this a second draft - as I mentioned, this is a piece that had already been workshopped but I wanted to clean up more before posting here.)

Thank you for the attention!