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Doli's father, Daniel Soul was an artist and a doll maker. He had always loved  dolls and he made them look like real people.

It was a quiet day in January 6th, 1999.

Doli opened her eyes when she heard the wind loudly hitting her window. She got up and put on her black dress, ubuttoned yellow sweater, white stockings, and black shoes.

She went to the kitchen and was greeted by her father's warm smile. They said good morning to each other and then Daniel gave a kiss to her daughter's cheek and Doli left the house to go to school.

The school day went normally.

She didn't have any friends because she was socially unskilled and had no idea how to act around other kids.

Also, because everyone was jealous of her beauty. Her long, curly black hair, bright grey eyes, pale and silky skin and red lips looked almost too perfect.

She always got along well with adults, though. They were charmed by her shy and quiet attitude, however she liked to be alone, so she didn't chat much with anyone.

Doli's mother died, when she was little, from a bad heart condition, that Doli herself had, too.

Doli didn't smile or cry much. The only time she had ever cried was when her mother died. She didn't even cry at birth.

Sometimes the other girls at school would tease her and call her disgusting out of jealousy, but Doli wasn't hurt by their bullying, not even once. Of course she knew why they bullied her.

She and her father moved around a lot. When she first entered the school,  when they moved to their current town, everyone immediately hated her.

Doli loved reading stories, so after school she went to library to pick up some books. When she was trying to reach a book from the top of the shelf, it dropped on the floor, and to the other side of it. She went around the shelf and saw a boy with brown hair and green eyes picking up the book. He looked at Doli and asked with a kind smile:

Did you drop this?

Without an answer Doli slowly took the book from the boys hands and turned around. Before she could leave the boy asked:

''I've never seen you at school before. Are you new?''

Doli slowly turned around again and nodded.

''Pretty new. I moved here a month ago,'' she quietly answered.

''Well, then. My name's Craig Yockey. It's hard to make friends when you're new, so let me help you to become popular,'' he kindly said and lifted his hand for a shake.

Doli Soul, she said and shook his hand.

Her hand was pretty cold, but Craig ignored it, since it was really cold outside, anyway.

They spent the rest of the day reading books together, talking to each other about pointless things but both of them still had pretty much fun.

When it was six o'clock and it was the library's closing time, Doli had to leave. Craig's mother owned the place, so he stayed and waited for his mother to be ready to leave.

''You don't smile much, do you? Will you come here tomorrow, too?'' Craig asked and smirked before Doli left.

''I-I don't know. Maybe I will,'' she stuttered.

When Doli went home, her dad was working on his dolls, as usual.

''How was your day? Why'd you come home so late?'' Daniel asked.

''I think I made a new friend. I spent all day with him,'' Doli answered.

''Great. Just be careful when you're with him,'' her father sneered.

The next day Doli didn't have to go to the library, because she met Craig accidentally in the school hallway, when he was on the way to the bathroom.

Both of them went to the school's library to chat before the next period started.

''I'm on the sixth grade. What about you?'' Craig asked with that same kind smile from yesterday.

Same, Doli answered.

They still had five more minutes to talk before the next period would start.

Hey Doli, I think you- ..

Craig was interrupted by a girl, that Doli knew from her class. Her name was Madison Britt. There was two other girls behind her.

''She doesn't deserve all that attention you're giving her. Why do you never talk to any other girls? Is it because you think she looks better than us?'' Madison asked and raised her left eyebrow.

''What? It's because she's new and I know it's hard to make friends,'' Craig answered with a confused look on his face.

''You don't even like girls. We know you're friends with her only because she looks better than anybody else,'' Madison said with a angry look.

Shut up, you're annoying me, Doli said and looked at the girls with cold eyes.

Madison felt shivers going through her back.

Shut up, you ugly pig! She yelled.

But you just admitted i'm pretty, Doli said with a smirk on her face.

Madison had enough. She pulled Doli from her dress and hit her in the face as hard as she could.

Craig, Madison and her friends were shocked.

There was no blood. The right side off her face just.. shattered.. almost completely. The side of her face had cracks all over it and one pretty big shard dropped on the floor from her face completely.

You could see no brains, the inside of her head was just dark. Then, all of a sudden, you could see a light coming from inside of the crack.

It was white, small and round, beating delicately like a child's heart. It dissappeared to thin air.

The good part of Doli's soul. Gone.

Doli stared at the girls with a cold look. Her eyes were completely empty.

You.... Ruined my beaty, Doli said with an almost echoing, quiet and cold voice.

She snapped. She grabbed the shard from the floor beside her and started smashing Madison's face with it. They both fell to the floor. Her strength was inhuman. The library filled with a blood chilling, insane laughter. It was the first time Doli had ever laughed in her whole life.

Craig tried to grab her to make her stop but she hit him with her elbow and he fell on the floor. He stood up and ran away.

Madison's friends were screaming and didn't know what to do.

After hitting Madison about thirty times she stopped. She threw the shard away and Madison's face was so full of blood, it was impossible to recognize her anymore. Her teeth were all over the floor and her eyes were popping out of her head.

Doli stood up and turned around. Her face was completely covered in blood. She gave Madison's friends a blood chilling smile.

The girls screamed as loud as they could and then tried to run away but Doli grabbed one of the friends and snapped her neck, then grabbed the other girl, pushed her on the floor and smashed her face againts it. After that she took a chair that was next to a table in the library and started smashing the girls with it.

She was laughing insanely and after she was done and made the girls look unrecognizable, she played in the pool of blood and kept giggling.

The library was empty now but after a while a teacher came to check on what was happening. Craig was behind him and both of them were shocked to see the room full of blood and the three lifeless bodies.

Doli turned to look at them and Craig ran away, again.

The teacher tried to talk some sense into her.

''Calm down, Ms. Soul. Come with me and let's sort this out, alright?''

I have no soul, Doli answered coldly.

She calmly walked up to the teacher and gently grapped his hand. Then she pulled it off of him completely. The teacher was screaming in pain and Doli crushed his eyes with her fingers, making him blind. Then she snapped his neck.

She walked the school hallway quietly and saw Craig at the end of it.

W-Who are you?What are you? he stuttered, while shaking from fear.

''I'm Doli. I'm twelve. Though, I've been twelve since 1976,'' she answered with a big smirk.

Doli ran to Craig and before he could do anything, Doli smashed his head to the wall, making him faint.

Doli left the school building and headed for her home.

A few people saw her walking in street and they were all shocked to see her shattered face.

When she was home, she quietly entered through the front door and grabbed a kitchen knife from the kitchen.

Daniel was working on his dolls at his room, as always. Doli sneaked behind him, without him noticing and stabbed his neck with a knife.

Daniel fell on the floor from his chair and with the last breaths he took, Doli whispered in her father's ear:

It's your fault I am what I am

After her dad was dead she walked out of the room. With each step she took, she quietly snapped her fingers in joy and giggled.

She took a matchbox from the kitchen drawer and set her house on fire.

Daniel Soul's Diary, August 10th, 1976.

''Today it is my 32nd birthday and I found my daughter dead. No one else knows about this yet. I found her dead in her bed. She probably died because of her bad heart condition. I don't know what to do.....'

'August 21st, 1976.

''I can't take it anymore. Her body is in my basement but it smells so bad I can't even go there anymore! But I just wanna see her beautiful face, just one more time.''

August 22nd, 1976.

''I have decided. I'm gonna make a doll that looks exactly like her. That way, I can see her pretty face anytime I want.''

After everything that happened, Doli went missing.

There were murders in a lot of places, where the victim's face would be completely unrecognizable and there would be words on the wall written with the victim's blood;

I have no soul.

(I'm Finnish, so I usually have trouble with the grammar. I spent 5-6 hours to make this story, so it would be a shame to just let it go to waste. Please, tell me if there's any grammar mistakes and tell me if there's anything I could do to make the story better.) 