User blog comment:Whitix/Offering Reviews/@comment-25170312-20151208232923

I've been asking everyone and their mother to review my series but I'm not sure if anyone is going to do it. It starts with my first creepypasta that I submitted over a year ago and continues for three more parts (it's far from finished). I got some feedback on the first two parts (a lot of help from Shadowswimmer) but since then I've made a lot of changes. I basically haven't gotten any feedback on parts 3 and 4 which I feel are better than parts 1 and 2. I'm not entirely confident in the whole thing so I'd really like an in-depth analysis. Thanks in advance if you decide to check it out.