Talk:A Heartwarming Christmas Tale/@comment-24101790-20161224180316

I enjoyed the story, the desperation built nicely as things began to fall apart and needed more attention as his mother's situation got worse. I changed the category from places to items/objects (for the wooden soldier) as it really didn't occur in a specific place and the location wasn't really tantamount to the story. All in all, I liked how the monster seemed to grow as the situation deepened and the act of taking care of the house was what drives the monster off (quite like a child making up a story to liven up chores using their imagination).