Talk:Hello Can You Hear Me/@comment-25052433-20140830170521

My phone rang today. The only response on the other end was a voice....reading me this review.

What went right:

-Very creepy story. Short, sweet and well told.

What should have gone to voicemail:

-The only issue I ran into was the end when you say that she dialed a random number. Was it really random? Did she just spin through her contacts and drop her thumb on the screen with her eyes closed? Otherwise, she chose a number 'at random' but the number itself wouldn't have been random, as she would have chosen it. That brings me into the other issues, which lies more in the realm of common sense and reality. Why would she choose a number at random? Seems to me, if I woke up in a cell with no knowledge of how I got there, the first number I would be calling would be the police. Short of that, a family member would be the second choice. Why would she just pick a number at random and dial it out?

Other than that plot hole, the rest of the story was great and a fun read. Great work.