Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20141118060220/@comment-25786235-20141130162733

Mmpratt99 deviantart wrote: Okay. Well, in my final draft, which is now labelled 'Umbra,' I took out the extra sentences on the aunt and just left a few explanation like you advised. So you think I should trim off some of the description of Chelsea's bad habits? Hey sorry got banned for no reason so I made a new account. Still need someone to check it out?