Talk:Runs in the Family/@comment-25319269-20141028231029

4/10

I think this has potential, the mind of a psychopath is a scary place but this guy... He was a bit too obnoxius and lacks subtlety. And I think it's alittle too cliche aswell. Also it seems that the townspeople are a little too stupid to be realistic. Have a think about rewrite to this.