Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-40058099-20190707221219/@comment-9041013-20190708015530

Okay so, what's the umm... scare factor? Oh this thing can snap and hurt people? So can real people... everywhere, of all ages... Should I be afraid of people now?

As DrBob said, we should have a feel for it after reading the story, but other than "it's an alien" I can't seem to think of anything and "Just an alien" doesn't quite work for me.

It's a little too naked.