Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24841494-20140407130508/@comment-24608253-20140410011350

I was going to say to be careful with your semi-colon usage, but you corrected a lot of it in the second going at it... I think there is a saying from someone famous that you should only use a semi-colon once in your lifetime or not at all. I enjoyed reading your story, though. Grammar is just difficult, and it is almost impossible to memorize, so make sure to look up how to use it and have someone edit your writings. Even if it's your dog. Yes, your dog can read. Amazing, I know.