Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4849011-20160604033711/@comment-25569708-20160619000859

No problem at all Raidra, I'm happy you found my response somewhat helpful. And as for that guy who gave you negative criticism with a backhanded insult without even following through on his offer, there's a word for people like him (and it's "a-hole"!). I'm glad to see that the theme I picked up on is the one you were going for. Sorry for confusing the war memorial with a grave, I wrote that review around four in the morning and I was somewhat delirious, lol. I found it intriguing that you infused this story/series with some of your personal experiences, that shows me how seriously you take these stories and how much the overall theme means to you. As a reader I really appreciated that.

I expected as much about the swear part, I figured you knew the impact the censored swear would have on the character of Daniel, it's not even a big deal honestly. And I figured Daniel's parents raised him better than that, he just seems like a nice boy. ;) Good to hear you fixed the typos in both this story and The Houseguest, and I must admit that I did not pick up on that Bible reference, my bad. And yeah, I have no idea what's going on with those football references, haha.

The next part will be science fiction inspired you say? Sounds cool, I'll absolutely be antici... pating it. I'll also check out the other Basilisk stories too. Oh, and as for throwing toast, to be honest that's getting a little stale (Get it? Am I funny?). Here's the official list of what you should be throwing, it's down to a science. An exact science, I tell you!