Talk:The Cove Below the Yellow House/@comment-32305582-20170616185651

So, the abortion doctor keeps some sort of sharklike creature(s) in the cove that he uses to cover up evidence of his practice, and by consuming the remains it developed a taste for human flesh? That's what I got out of it, anyway.

All in all, this was a very well-written story. The characters were interesting and the plot moved around in unpredictable ways, which I like. There were a couple of points of confusion, though. One, why were the kids still allowed to swim after so many deaths and disapperances and why wasn't the beach closed, and two, was there any significance as to why Grandma needed to use Frenchie to poision the creature? Couldn't she have just poisoned the remnants of the abortion that the doctor gave her? Not sure if I am just missing something or not, but those two things in particular seemed a little unclear.

9.5/10. Keep writing stories.