User talk:EmpyrealInvective/Archive 27

Story deleted?
Just came to ask why my story (Reticence) was deleted. Read the post and I'm really not sure. --Alalattack (talk) 20:49, March 7, 2016 (UTC)

why do you delted ever page i make there just like the others there creepypastas why?

Re
I definitively appreciate the honor. I had no clue I was even nominated for weeks. Thank you so much. GreyOwl (talk) 01:53, March 8, 2016 (UTC)

RE
Oh, sorry. I saw that a lot of people used it in quotations without spacing. GreyOwl (talk) 20:25, March 8, 2016 (UTC)

Review Request
Hello, Empy. A while back (as in, over half a year ago, when the story was uploaded), you critiqued In Torment III, and helped fix a bit of the story with me. I'd like to let you know that In Torment 4, the next chronological story, has been released, and that I'm looking for both reviews and insight. If you'd like to read the story, it'd be greatly appreciated. If not, thank you for reading this message. ShawnHowellsCP (talk) 10:08, March 9, 2016 (UTC)

Review Request (if you have time)
So, I followed your advice and made a post on the Writer's showcase forum. I know that since you're an admin, you have other duties to attend to and maybe have other stories to read. But, if you can, it'd be nice to have a review since my stories are relatively obscure like the majority of creepypastas. Not all my stories are great, but I believe that this one is one of my better ones. But, I do understand that opinions tend to vary and I wish to become a better writer. If you do review it, I will be grateful. If not, that is fine too. &#34;I always stand in doubt. Does not one want to understand the implications of their actions and the riddles society give them?&#34; - A Stranger. (talk) 16:16, March 9, 2016 (UTC)

The Other Side of the Curtain
For 'The Other Side of the Curtain', when you are referring to a human as a serial killer, should it be categorized by monsters. That will help to know in the future, I realized it didn't really fit with Reality either; but in some sort of bented logic it can change your perception on how you think of showers.

Anyway, let me know if a story has to do with a human killer, if the monster category is needed.

 Get Ready!  ( Here I come ) 17:45, March 9, 2016 (UTC)

Not exactly what I was asking. It wasn't that the context clues supposed to me something else, I want to know if a story is told like this, and the killer is human, what's the category.

 Get Ready!  ( Here I come ) 17:50, March 9, 2016 (UTC)

Help please. I tried to archive my talk page since it's been sitting there for two years. But I mistakenly deleted it. :-)

So I may have messed up a little bit, I had tried to archive my talk page since it has existed for going on 2 years, but I accidently linked it wrong, now it's eleted.

Is there a reason a whole creepypasta story dissapears
The creep is gone for some weird reason. Also this isn't the first time, I've been directed to a pasta. With just a title and no story.

တရားသူကြီးကို တစ်ဖက်သတ်အစွဲ (talk) 19:46, March 9, 2016 (UTC)

Excuse me, empy. I posted a new first draft of a creepypasta on the writer's workshop. Could you give critique on it? Thanks.

Creeper50 (talk) 21:13, March 9, 2016 (UTC)Creeper50

Question
Made an accidential formating error on user Johnathan Nash's talk page. Won't let me fix for some reason. What should I do. တရားသူကြီးကို တစ်ဖက်သတ်အစွဲ (talk) 19:02, March 10, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Notice
I would like to apologize about my minor changes. In the future, I would like to make bigger and more important changes

Thanks
I will keep this in mind. From now on, I will not change single words/ things that work. However, if the change helps sentence structure/ make more sense, then I will make that change.

Thank you for your help.

Spelling
Just a quick question, when writing creepypastas, is it acceptable to use the Canadian/British English spelling of certain words and their variants? &#34;I always stand in doubt. Does not one want to understand the implications of their actions and the riddles society give them?&#34; - A Stranger. (talk) 22:27, March 11, 2016 (UTC)

Alright, thanks for the clarifying the issue! &#34;I always stand in doubt. Does not one want to understand the implications of their actions and the riddles society give them?&#34; - A Stranger. (talk) 21:26, March 12, 2016 (UTC)

Story Deletion
Hello, you recently deleted a story I made called "My Mother Told Me How I Was Born" and stated the reason to be not meeting standards. May I ask what standards were not met so that I may work on it or just scrap it? I have already gone through the guidlines and standards many times and I'm a bit confused, could you please elaborate?Half-Breed2014 (talk) 23:21, March 14, 2016 (UTC)Half-Breed2014

hi I am dropping this message because my story was just deleted and I would like to know why. was it because it fell under a jeff rip off? like in my story my kid does go crazy and kill his mom and dad. (hopefully you read the story and got a proper idea as the story was completely different from JTK) but if it was for a different reason plz message me a reply saying why as I would like to use this info to improve future story's.

(I messed up on last message forgot to put my name) not sure if last message went through or not so.

hi my name is (Forget the nsa the illuminati is watching you now (talk) 04:41, March 15, 2016 (UTC))forget the nsa the illuminati is watching you now] is that how it works? sorry very new to this place made my acc earlier yesterday anyway my I looked at the faQs and my think only had the characteristic of a JTK rip off and if you took the time to read the story (I hope you did) then you know that it was very different then JTK. but if it was for a different reason then plz drop a message saying what is was as I would like to use that info to improve future pastas

Sorry, when I saved my story They Feel It Too, the text dissapeared. Any ideas on what it could have been? TheLocoTrain (talk) 06:18, March 15, 2016 (UTC)

You deleted my new pasta titled Orarapsychis. You put no reason other then that it did not meet quality standards? I spell checked, and read through it multiple times. Very hard to try to improve your writing when it is something as dull as "quality standards". I think being a little more specific would make you not get so much "hate" and "internet rage". Regardless, I really care nothing about you, just wondering why it was deleted? ShiaLaBeouf1567 (talk) 08:05, March 27, 2016 (UTC)Goddllyy

Despicable Me
[Insert obligatory hateful message here]

I caved and got the Fallout 4 season pass before it went to $50 due to not wanting to wait until 2017/18 for a Game of the Year edition. I was also prompted to buy it when I realized that Dead Rising 3's Apocalyptic Edition is still going for $40 despite the fact that Dead Rising itself came out as an Xbox One launch title, so yeah... I'm ashamed with myself XD

By the way, I recommend setting up an all melee (Batman) build for Fallout 4: It's super fun and has revitalized the game for me while I wait for the DLC. Of course, I occasionally cheat and either shoot or grenade those that I cannot reach.

Here's something that's sort of funny and might make you laugh. I posted all my stories from here onto a Wattpad account (thought it might make things easier in regards to fighting plagiarism on my stories if I put them on their site and hey, might reach more people that way, right?). Well, they decided to reclassify my Creepypasta from Horror to Fan Fiction despite it meeting their community guidelines' definition of Horror and not Fan Fiction which they then linked me to. So that's funny. It isn't really that big of a deal (not mad about it), but I'm trying to appeal it and get some more clarification for the change. I will probably just delete them if they leave it under Fan Fiction because I feel that is a bit misrepresentative of my work and likely won't reach the intended audience anyway. Just some more insight into the Wattpad scene for you though. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  21:37, March 15, 2016 (UTC)


 * Sweet! I heavily modded Righteous Authority and ran with it on my first playthrough, the burning damage it did was deadly. On my current run I am mainly using Bladed Knuckles (Brass Knuckles with blades), though I do have an 'Instigating Aluminum Rolling Pin' which does double damage when the target is at full health XD Curiously, I don't recall ever coming across a Gauss Rifle in any of my playthroughs and I was level 60 something when I quit my first one (so I'm guessing it is level locked like the Enclave Power Armor). Haha, I actually missed recruiting Hancock on my first run, but he's certainly interesting! Oh, you'll have to sleep in order to save in the new one.


 * Haha, I hope so. Yep, that's what I replied in my appeal. Oh, now there's an idea! *Runs off and makes a sock puppet called Doom Beep* I got a response from them while I was typing this. They told me that they mark Creepypastas as Fan Fiction by default because they tend to be based off existing tropes/material and recommended that I categorize it as short story with a blurb about how it isn't Fan Fiction. I still feel it'd be better off under Horror, but I don't see much point in pressing further as short story is acceptable to me. Oh, there's a Copyright tag when you hit "Edit Story" which has all the different licenses. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  22:20, March 15, 2016 (UTC)


 * Oh, that would make sense considering how it was pretty much an Enclave weapon and how the Brotherhood is basically the Enclave 2.0 (they probably looted them off Enclave soldiers in the Capital Wasteland). I had that quest glitch on me two different times when I got in the vertibird to board the Prydwyn. First time, the vertibird flew off the map with me on board, second time I got shot down in it somehow; super glitchy quest, but fun. I managed to get everyone with the exception of Hancock on my first go. Funnily enough, I knew he was a companion, but never set off the flag for him to become my companion. I ignore power armor too. One place that you should explore near is the Shamrock Taphouse, nuff said.


 * Yeah, but at least I got the option to mark it as something else. I'm not sure if I understand things entirely, but there are rankings for the stories by category which has to do with how likely they'll get recommended as reading or advertised. Horror had around 800 entries whereas I imagine fan-fiction and short stories have way more because they are loose terms. Yes, I'll just bear with it for now. If I get to where I dislike it then it isn't like I can't take my toys and go elsewhere. The consistency around here (disregarding the historical archives, I guess) is why I really love it here. It is really easy to figure out what is what and one is able to do pretty much whatever with their stories. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  02:37, March 16, 2016 (UTC)


 * Heh, I did too. I ended up siding with the Railroad and then felt like a scumbag when I realized that I placed the value of philosophy over that of human life, ah well. The internet 'unanimously' hates Garvey XD That's awful! I haven't had any probably with elevators yet. What system are you playing on, Download Installbox One myself.


 * The current situation is acceptable to me albeit somewhat questionable. It is possible that they might. I never dug too deep, I just looked to see that they had horror and short story categories. I'm just waiting for the day that I get banned for plagiarism, whether it is because someone else on there had plagiarized a story of mine from the wiki and posted it on Wattpad before I made an account on there or because they find the same stories posted on here (even though the username is the exact same) XD As far as I am aware I have only had one of my stories plagiarized and the person credited me after I private messaged him and another had shared one of my stories, but claimed that they didn't write any of the stories that they had posted (which is fine with me even though I wasn't credited).


 * Well, if you do make a Wattpad and want a custom cover let me know. I'm not any good yet, but I've been messing around with gimp, so maybe I'll be good at it by the time you ask (if you do). If not, I guess at least it'd amount to more practice, lol. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  03:22, March 16, 2016 (UTC)


 * I think what it lacked was a moment of triumph in the story which doesn't get undercut later. I kind of felt like every single victory I had was cut down to size later on. That said, I had a lot of fun siding with the Institute and the Minutemen (they aren't so bad when you start dressing and arming your troops at the Castle). I guess that Bethesda thought that the Minutemen was a reasonable equivalent to an Independent Faction. I wish you better luck with your PS4 than I had with mine, mine died at 11 months after purchase.


 * Today I learned that one of the two games that I am excited for which comes out this year (Stellaris, the other being Mafia 3) is coming out on May 9th, yay! Here's all the Developer Diaries if you are interested, though it's PC exclusive and will need a good one to run it: Speaking of good PC's, I'm going to have to buy a new PC to play it :| Ah well, I've got like 8 games that I want which my PC can't play anyway (2009 Dell).


 * Sure it wouldn't make any sense, but sense doesn't always come into play. Personally, I don't think it would be worth your time, but who knows. My insights tell me that a grand total of 2 person(s) has viewed my stories on Wattpad and one of them was me. To put things into perspective, I uploaded them a month ago yesterday. It seems to have a Facebook-like system of "follow me and read my stories and I'll do the same to yours". Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  04:03, March 16, 2016 (UTC)

Hey there, I was wondering if you could put my blog in the Writing Advice Blog Section, I think it is unique and helpful. If not, let me know why, so I'm not leaving this open ended.

Thanks!

 Get Ready!  ( Here I come ) 15:41, March 16, 2016 (UTC)


 * Yeah, them removing Ron Perlman from narrating didn't sit right with me. I'm happy for the cameo he had as the news reporter at the beginning, but he should have had more of a role. X-COM 2 does look good and I might get it after I get a stronger computer, but I'm sort of on the fence because of the consequence of permanently losing soldiers (I have a lot of negative consequences as is in real life, lol). I haven't played any of the Fire Emblem games, but I hear that Awakening is pretty good, although the translation team screwed the pooch on certain parts. I was actually going to get Birthrights, the newest Fire Emblem, but I found out that they removed content from the North American release and rewrote a couple of characters which is a massive turn-off (I hate censorship, even if something stupid like a petting minigame is basically all that is lost, I'm still paying the same price for less content).


 * You are always welcome to post them on the VSN, if you want: I set up a 'User Writings' section way back when that I'm practically the only one that uses anyway. The community size has been greatly reduced, but we're still averaging around 60 unique logins and 200 unique guests a day. The only thing that VSN has going for it that some of the big sites don't is that it lets you see how many views a topic (story) has. Not much of an option, but it exists for you. If you do join then just be sure to use a unique password and email (you can get burner mails here: .  Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  18:20, March 16, 2016 (UTC)


 * He's the reporter on the TV at the beginning of the game that talks about the confirmed nuclear detonations. I gathered that when you said you were looking forward to the survival mode. I'm a wuss and like to take things easy, though I did beat New Vegas' survival mode because it was the last achievement I needed. I've also beaten every COD game since Modern Warfare 2 on Veteran, though I don't have Black Ops 3 yet, but other than that I stick to easy or normal. I usually enjoy messing with console commands on PC and making overpowered characters after I've beaten a game once or twice too. I've seen some really hilarious and amazing mods for X-COM 2 such as Shrek faces for everyone XD


 * I just sort of view it as a mix of "you can't handle this because you live in the United States" and paying the same for less. I realize that might not be the intent and that they probably have focus groups and data to support the cuts, but I just really dislike it. Just me complaining really. It does suck when plot points and character development is lost due to poor translations/localization though.


 * Makes sense to me. I honestly couldn't tell you if those are unique views or not. That said, I wish this wiki had a more accessible way to check views, because as it stands now it is a real pain (I go in through insights and as far as I know you just have to scrolls through everything until you find whatever you are looking for). Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  20:22, March 16, 2016 (UTC)

I read through the page saying some of the reasons why a page would be deleted. I could see some confusion, so I will try to clear things up.

I know it was riddled with spelling/grammatical errors. That was to symbolize that Angel was slowly going insane, and was writing the journal in a very bad state of mind.

If it was like any other journal pasta, I apologize. That's my favourite kind of pasta, and I guess all the ones I read rubbed off on me until I just made a generic pasta.

It was overall kind of rushed, and that killed the suspense. I apologize.

I couldn't find many other reasons. i'm planning on re-posting it in the Writer's Workshop for extra feedback, but please elaborate on why you deleted it.

~Mi Torta, a.k.a. Longanimals


 * Ah, that's understandable. Diamond City (and the hub areas in general) was a major letdown for me. None of them really clicked with me or made me go "Wow, how innovative of those survivors". I also don't care for Travis (sorry), the Diamond City Radio Host, because he talks way too quietly and takes forever to get to the point. I'm not nearly into COD as most others and I feel that the series peaked a long time ago. I just do a tad bit of multiplayer and go through the campaign once or twice. Modern Warfare 2 is still my favorite in regards to both the story and the multiplayer. Oh gosh, lol! Oh, this is worth a laugh or two: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tqpp3dDJa5k


 * Maybe one of these days wiki will mess with the core code based upon user feedback? One can dream. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  06:33, March 17, 2016 (UTC)


 * Didn't know if you had done that quest or not, so I didn't mention it before, but I still hate him even after the quest because then he comes across like a douche. You're either forced to have him with social anxiety or enough arrogance to power a room full of armchair analysts, both extremes made for a poor host in my opinion. I feel like Bethesda might have felt like "Well, the player can create their own dream settlements, so good enough" which is unfortunate if the case. Developers tend to be better at designing stuff, not to mention all the tools they have access to that the majority of the player-base doesn't. Yeah, the vaults weren't memorable at all and pre-release most people were able to guess what Vault 111 was all about. I'm hoping that some DLC/Mods/Updates add more interesting vaults. That is a bummer, but it is something that I've done without and can continue to do so without. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  06:57, March 17, 2016 (UTC)

New story!
Hey, Empy. It's been a while. I recently wrote a story for class and decided to put it up on the WW a couple days. Would you care to give it a look? I'm not sure it's on the level of Twenty, but I think it turned out pretty well and I want to upload it once I get some opinions on it and clean some stuff up.

Here's the link for ya: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:530810

No rush, or anything. I just want some feedback and no ones looked at it yet. Thanks!

Seviren (talk) 23:58, March 17, 2016 (UTC)Seviren

No problem, man. Like I said; no rush. Thanks

Seviren (talk) 00:50, March 18, 2016 (UTC)Seviren

An Average Story
Hello. I don't know if my story, An Average Story should be deleted for Housekeeping reasons. If it shouldn't, then remove the M4R please.

 Get Ready!  ( Here I come ) 13:57, March 18, 2016 (UTC)

I definitely would like a copy, because I was going to salvage it but didn't really know where to start...I didn't really go into detail on why I marked it for review, but a lot of the things you mentioned with repeating words is part of it. I seem to have that problem a lot with my stories.

As far as the story goes, I noticed that I had trouble getting immersed into the story as well; and the ending needed some major re-working. I honestly am not sure how it fell through the cracks, or why I didn't upload it to Writer's Workshop a year ago, but...

Micropastas
I have a couple of micropasta's that I think are decent, but not amazing, just something to add to my contributions I guess...There's two...I want some good constructive, because if they're nearly good enough for a micropasta QS, then I will take the advice and go through them. They're like really litle micropasta's, and the endings could be fixed, but other than that I think they are near good enough.

I had posted them ot writer's workshop nearly two years ago, but I got opinions from two people who I haven't seen on the wiki for a long itme. So if you could, just tell me what you think(I'm probably deluding myself, I don't know.), I'm not going for 10/10, but a nice little contribution to the stories on the wiki.

Thanks,

 Get Ready!  ( Here I come ) 18:59, March 18, 2016 (UTC)

I wasn't really managing my An Average Story, first. In fact, I was going through chronological order and fixing a number of stories that had good concepts but failed miserably on terms of quality. Strictness is fine, I understand that. That's not the point, those two were the next on the list. And I think they both have good concepts.

 Get Ready!  ( Here I come ) 23:52, March 18, 2016 (UTC)

Hey there, I want to apologize for posting my story like that. I kind of was in a rush and acted on impulse. I did edit somewhat, fixed many errors that I saw. As for the story plot holes, I will agree to disagree. As in my edited story, I had mentioned that I had fallen asleep after tackling the friend. When I woke up, I found him in the bed. I didn't have time to read the marked for review, could you tell me what it said so I could fix it up. It was the project I was working on. Maybe, I shouldn't try to salvage stories that had already failed, it won't be useful. Get Ready!  ( Here I come ) 23:52, March 18, 2016 (UTC)

Admin Questions?
Hey There, I hope i'm not bothering you but i've been thinking abut it for a few weeks now- How exactly does one become an admin on creepypasta? is it like extremely complicated tests and stuff or is it like you just ask and you're in? not that i wanted to be an admin- it's just something that crossed my mind. LMTyo13 (talk) 20:44, March 18, 2016 (UTC)

Haha seems cool! thanks for clearing it up! LMTyo13 (talk) 20:49, March 18, 2016 (UTC)

Issues with the BEN DROWNED entry
Hello! My name is Wyatt, and I've been running the Jadusable Wiki for a few years now. For a while, I have noticed that the version of the pasta commonly referred to as BEN DROWNED on this wiki is, sadly, flawed and contains edits not made to the original version. Allow me to explain.

When Alex Hall wrote this story in 2010, he posted it to 4chan first, then when the subsequent ARG picked up, he was able to post it in its entirety on the then-current game website. After the new community Within Hubris was created, he made the final edits to it and posted it there. This version on Within Hubris is the de facto official version of the story. However, there are differences in this story ranging from minor grammatical errors and entire paragraphs ommitted to the addition of a single line not present in any of Alex Hall's original drafts.

The line in particular that does not belong is the very last one. Nowhere in any incarnation of the story does the phrase, "...You shouldn't have done that, Matt.  You shouldn't have done that..." appear. In fact, Matt is not the subject of that story arc at all, and is a character from the ARG portion of the story.

I would be happy to provide you with the most efficient version for the wiki format, if that is no problem to you. Keep in mind that as the runner of the Jadusable Wiki, I have experience and know as much as possible on this matter. This is also a personal matter to me, as this story has had an incredible impact on my life due to the people I met through it, so I would love to do it justice by not allowing this version to be known as the real one.

I hope you can get back to me about this soon. Thank you for your time! Circle Hunter (talk) 22:42, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

Alright! The 4chan version is now partially lost, since the original text has timed out. Screenshots of the first two chapters have survived here and here. The second version from the ARG site, which unfortunately does not exist anymore, has been preserved and posted on a recreation of the website here. The official version is hosted on the second Within Hubris forum here. Also, I feel like I should mention that the official name of the story is The Haunted Cartridge, and my personal suggestion for the title is The Haunted Cartridge (BEN DROWNED). Circle Hunter (talk) 23:07, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

Great. Could you let me know what decision you come to? Circle Hunter (talk) 23:11, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

Hey! It's been a little over a week, and I was hoping to know where you are on this situation. Circle Hunter (talk) 02:36, March 28, 2016 (UTC)

Really, thing isn't that other sites have revised or amended versions, it's that this site has an incorrect and edited version that negates a whole other arc of the story. I don't mean for that to sound like anybody is at fault, but whoever has edited this story as it currently is has done wrong by the original author. It has been a problem for a while, and at this point, considering this tweet from the author confirming that arc 3 of the story will happen this year, this is something that I worry will have a negative effect. I know the kind of traffic that Within Hubris (the recreation of the original, which houses the official version) receives, which is significantly less than this one does. Only those who read the wiki I run know that the second version's recreation even exists, and the 4chan posts in the screenshots are, for the most part, left alone in this wiki's version. Everything points to this site being the main source of reading the story, and it is nowhere near as available from other sources as you imply. Please trust me, I've been in this community for five years and I cannot stand that people have read even the final phrase of this site's version. Most people that don't understand that there is even more to the story are likely misinformed due to this. There is so much more to the story and it isn't fair to the author that all the work he put into this ARG is not being seen due to (what is likely) one person's wrong edit. I've seen your blog posts and how much you care for preservation of the original work due to your stance on plagiarism. Is this really any different in concept? I apologize for the long wall of text, but this is incredibly important to myself and the community I'm a part of. Circle Hunter (talk) 02:59, March 28, 2016 (UTC)

Before I try to contact the others, I can verify the roots for you. First of all, Alex Hall's twitter description. Next, we have the document that Post #5 in this story is pasted from, TheTruth.rtf, which was uploaded on September 15, 2010, a month before this pasta's wiki article existed. Here is the Internet Archive's save version of the second site 's download for the very same document. Another Internet Archive page, of Jadusable's (Alex Hall's) YouTube channel from July 2012 shows, after some scrolling down, two videos ("Methods of Revolution Official Announcement" and "The Truth about Jadusable and Methods.wmv") on the very same channel that contains the videos linked in each version of this story, including this site's. These two videos have been mirrored here and here, and will prove without doubt that I am providing you with the original source. Also, if you were to fast forward on the Archive page that I provided you with, you will see that the username is now Alex Hall. I hope what I've given you has helped! Circle Hunter (talk) 04:07, March 28, 2016 (UTC)

[https://web.archive.org/web/20121013013408/http://www.youtube.com/user/Jadusable/videos? Here] is a better Internet Archive page of Jadusable's channel, showing the videos themselves. This is from October 2012. You can also see a link to the Twitter page I provided you with! Circle Hunter (talk) 16:06, March 28, 2016 (UTC)

I'm very sorry to triple-message you like this! I just want to know if you've had the time to check out the sources I gave you. This situation has me kind of anxious for whatever reason. Anyway, if you have the time to get back to me or read/watch through the stuff I provided, I'd sure be grateful. Circle Hunter (talk) 03:36, March 29, 2016 (UTC)

I said that the wrong part of this text is mainly the final line. I gave you the document that has existed since earlier than this wiki's article. It is incredibly wrong that a "historical post" is incorrect. It may seem minor, but if you understood that the story continues and that Matt is a totally different person, it becomes major. I have put so much time into this that it would be wrong of me to not try for this. Historical or not, the point I made earlier about this wiki receiving significantly more readers than websites that 20 people know exist at this point still stands. This becomes a detriment to the story that is about to continue. For as long as this false edit has lasted, people have just assumed that the story ends there, and are even given an ending that isn't true. There is a point to editing it: to make it as it was intended. You can't just leave it, knowing that sources exist that prove that it's wrong. I have worked hard enough in this community to warrant this. If you're worried about how time consuming it would be, I am prepared to edit the article myself if allowed to do so. After all the trouble I've gone through to have this amended, I would not squander the chance. After having required verification and receiving no correspondence from the other admins (which I will be sure to message soon if necessary), I don't understand why you would tell me there is no point. Everything I have given you points to this being the correct course of action. Even if you don't see the point, please take my word for this. It boils down to this fact: historical or no, it's false, and defaced stories are an insult to the writer.

I would also like to point out that while I may have been in charge of this wiki for a few years, I am pretty much a one-man staff, and a college student, who is still mastering Wikia. The time I have has been devoted to improving content that exists, so I have not made it to deleting the residue from older times. You should have seen the place in the year between the other admins leaving and myself taking over. Category:Snoop Dogg's Doggies was the least of my worries. Circle Hunter (talk) 04:29, March 29, 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for removing it. This was the problem I had in the first place, and my other comments about edits were only suggestions. You have helped immensely by removing that line, so I sincerely do thank you. I apologize if what I've said sounds hostile in any way. However, I would like to let you know that I am constantly working on ways to improve my own wiki, and though that may not be reflected in its current state, which is still considerably more organized than it has been in earlier stages, I do have big plans and a lot of work underway at this time. I was not putting this wiki's matters over another, but it remains that this was on the to-do list regardless.

Before I go, I have a request for you. I do understand that this may be against a policy somewhere, and I don't expect such a pleasantry after this exchange and how heated it may have gotten, but I would be just as grateful if you were to include a final thought in that article. That this portion is not the complete story, and that it continues and is documented on the Jadusable Wiki. This is something I realize sounds selfish, and I have been hesitant to ask you, but it's desparate times here, as evidenced by the timer on the front page, and with the story continuing sometime in the near future, we need the help that this would provide. Anyone who enjoys the story deserves to know that there is more to it. Again, thank you for taking the time for this. I am grateful. Circle Hunter (talk) 05:00, March 29, 2016 (UTC)

A Thanks and A Couple Quick Questions
I would like to thank you for deleting my page. To be honest, it helped me for future reference. Now, i was wondering about the part that says "(and the only contributor was...)". Now, if I were writing a creepypasta, wouldn't that mean I'd be the only one writing it? Now, that's saying I don't plan on doing a group creepypasta or anything of that manner. So, if there's anything wrong with my claim, please inform me on such.

TheVeryFancyHorse New (talk) 12:13, March 20, 2016 (UTC)

New Story :)
Hey, I posted a story I think meets the Quality Standards. It's part of my collection that I've been working on for a couple of months. I've decided to upload one story at a time from the collection so I'm not multi tasking with a bunch of edits. I looked at it, I've edited several times since uploading.

Not the best addition, on basis of Micropastas. But I think it edges the QS if not slightly. I like it, so I didn't really think I needed a second opinion. But if you have one, then please, let me know so I don't waste my time going through the Deletion Appeal.

 Get Ready!  ( Here I come ) 22:04, March 20, 2016 (UTC)

Story deletion
Hey, just wondering why mg story (late night smoke) was deleted. I read all the pertaining 'whys' and it's not very clear. Id really like to be able to post it, so if I could get a clear telling of what needs fixed that'd be great.--Debaucheryforme (talk) 04:16, March 22, 2016 (UTC)

Story deletion
Thank you. While I do appreciate the advice I would like to clarify a few points. The sound of her foot dragging was the first indication of her presence I gave, and the dream part was entirely intentional. I was actually expanding on a poem I wrote, as I'm much more accustomed to poetry but was trying my hand a story writing. I understand the necessity for more details at the end, and wasn't intending to rush it, rather I was dragging out the details on the creature to make sure the full extent of terror was understood. I do appreciate the feedback, and am currently working to make it better. Any more feedback or constructive criticism is more than welcome. Are there any good points to my story? Things well written, things nicely developed? And of course any other advice. Also, I'm not quite understanding how the specified sentence was awkward? --Debaucheryforme (talk) 05:52, March 22, 2016 (UTC)

New Story - Cont.
Hey, could you check out my story? It's definitely worthy of QS, but I want to  know if it is actually any good or not.  Nathan Leachman  |  Talk  17:22, March 22, 2016 (UTC)

Deletion Question
Hello, empyrealactive. I understand that my pasta was deleted due to lack of certain standards. I need clarification on what exactly was wrong with my submission. Since you enacted the deletion, I am sure you have good reason. I just need to know the reason. I think I may have made a sentence too long, but I still would like to upload my pasta if at all possible. If it is possible to reupload a revised version of the pasta or if it is o.k. to upload it to another platform(eg. my wikia or blog)  please let me know. Until then, I will try and see if I can find what I did incorrectly through the rules and guides on the wiki.

Best Wishes,GED perfection entertainment (talk) 22:49, March 22, 2016 (UTC)greeneyedanwrites

Was it because my story was too cliche? I checked the page of cliches and realized that I used quite a lot of those cliches;) I can't help it, I live for the cliche, but yeah, I'll try to cut back on it next time I write a creepy pasta. That's probably not the only reason as to why you may have taken it down, please let me know what else I need to improve on, thank you! GrimJungleBook (talk) 02:24, March 23, 2016 (UTC) GrimJungleBook GrimJungleBook (talk) 02:24, March 23, 2016 (UTC)

You're a good critic, what was wrong with my poem? --Debaucheryforme (talk) 04:23, March 23, 2016 (UTC)

Hi,

I just came to ask why my story was deleted? What did I even do wrong? I literally waited out my three day block just to post the story and then you just delete it. Why?

Adminship
Would I be able to gain my administrator rights back? My reading retention is much better, and hopefully is here to stay.

∆  SoPretentious   ∆   01:42, March 25, 2016 (UTC)


 * Alright, sounds good. I'm up for it, if you change your mind, I'd be ready to go sooner.


 * ∆  SoPretentious   ∆   02:21, March 25, 2016 (UTC)

Hiss
Hi! First off, thank you so much for introducing me to the site. I just wrote my first story for it, and I was just hoping  if you could let me know if I did it correctly for future posts.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Hiss

Provided it meets quality standards, does everything else look correct? I just want to break noob habits quickly.

Thank you so much for all of the help,

Krystal

KreepyKrystal (talk) 02:24, March 25, 2016 (UTC)

Request For Critique
I have two stories in Writer's Workshop that I would like some honest feedback about and I wondering if you would care to take a look at these.

Dolbeer in Winter--Part Two

The Way Through the Woods

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 23:53, March 25, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Review
Thank you for accepting my request message. Hopefully, I can get The Way Through the Woods finished by tonight.

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 00:00, March 26, 2016 (UTC)

Hi, this may sound stupid, but how do I write an edit summary? --Hopefullygoodgramar (talk) 02:26, March 27, 2016 (UTC)

Oh well. I lost it anyway. Probably for the best, eh? --Hopefullygoodgramar (talk) 02:29, March 27, 2016 (UTC)

Thank you. Maybe I can retool it at some point. --Hopefullygoodgramar (talk) 02:37, March 27, 2016 (UTC)

Thank you again. I'm actually relieved at having had some criticism. I was trying for a bit of an odd approach, but that really didn't work. As or the ending, well, I just wanted to leave it at that and let the viewer imagine the carnage to follow.

Again, thanks for the input and I'll try to forge a better story. --Hopefullygoodgramar (talk) 03:06, March 27, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, I figured that. That's why I'm rewriting it :) Hope whatever it becomes down the line will be to the site's standards and yours as well. --Hopefullygoodgramar (talk) 03:30, March 27, 2016 (UTC)

I would like to know why you deleted my Humanity's Instincts pasta. I read this over a few times, and even checked out the grammar on a website, and it was 100% decent. I also feel the pasta addressed an under-referenced issue. Please give me a reason you deleted it.

Retire
Question: can you put the Retired template on my talk page? I'm quitting the wiki.

الله أكبرAllahu Akbarالله أكبر 02:27, March 29, 2016 (UTC)

"Don't you want somebody to love?"
Hey, Emp, would you mind deleting the story I just recently posted called "Raw Head and Blood Bones" as I just realized that the story was already on the wiki and anyway the title was misspelled.

Courtyard    You want me to kill you, right?  04:27, March 29, 2016 (UTC)

Story Deletion
I'm only here to ask why you deleted my pasta, Re404. I know that it did not meet the quality standards, I just want to know what about it didn't. Thanks if you reply, and I am not mad at all and hope that i do not come across as mad. I WAS the one who wrote the bad creepypasta.

Thanks!

KnotSnappy (talk) 18:57, March 29, 2016 (UTC)

Writers workshop deletion
To Empyreallnvective

I would like to make an inquiry as to why my recent contribution to the Writer's workshop (which I notice you reccommend) was deleted. If the reason was that I'd used a new page rather than update the old one for my reprised version of 'Chess ritual' I will say that I had reason to believe that would get the post no notice at all, if memory of past experience serves. As this is the only reason I could think of which would negate your need to provide feedback, I hope you will respond to my inquiry.

Yours: The Cyborg Pie (talk) 23:24, March 30, 2016 (UTC)

Your a bs im starting my own wiki

Adminship
Would I be able to gain my administrator rights back?

∆  SoPretentious   ∆   07:10, March 31, 2016 (UTC)

Possible Contest
Hi EmpyrealInvective,

I might have an idea for a contest. Right now, the rules just a basic outline:

Contest: Avatar Photoshop Challenge

Possible Rules: 

''1. Have a set list of specific users (chosen through voting using a poll maybe) up to 10 or whatever. Example: Ruckus, Shadowswimmer, Empy, etc. ''

''2. Only three participants can select one user at a time. Example: only three people can choose Ruckus from the list. ''

''3. Must Photoshop the current avatar for the user in the list. Another note, participants do not need to own Photoshop to participate. Any photo-editing software can used. ''

''4. Top winner for each participant will have their Photoshopped picture worn by their respective user for a month. Other participant get a honorable mention or a page on a blog displaying all art like Tiololo (Rinksuro13) did.''

Again, the rules are subject to change. Originally, I posted this on Ruckus' blog. I don't really want to host it, but he seemed willing to do so. He most likely will pick the other judges too if this gets approved. I'm willing to help with any brainstorming if needed. That's pretty much the proposal. I wanted to see if this was a plausible idea before going into greater depth.

I posted the original link to the blog below:

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:RuckusQuantum/A_Mess_Dedicated_to_MrDupin

Vngel W (talk) 20:16, March 31, 2016 (UTC)


 * You have a point. I wasn't sure if the idea could be expanded upon or not. No biggie, thanks for replying.


 * Vngel W (talk) 20:25, March 31, 2016 (UTC)

Dear Empyreallnvective,

I apologize for the inconvienience, but I would like to know if you feel that my story may have potential for this website after I make changes or if I would be better off uploading it to another website?

02:28, April 1, 2016 (UTC)The-bard-of-horror


 * Try posting your revised story on the Deletion Appeal but before you do that I strongly suggest you ask Emp about the downfalls of your story.


 * Courtyard    You want me to kill you, right?  02:37, April 1, 2016 (UTC)


 * That's actually a really bad method as it typically results in a denial as they haven't presented a revision of the story or fixed any issues present in their story. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 02:39, April 1, 2016 (UTC)