Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24965033-20140720234702/@comment-25198101-20140720235758

Sentence 1 (Original): My Grandmother owned this very creepy ass house with these very creepy looking stuffed scarecrow bears she had on shelves in one of the rooms.

Sentence 1 (Edited): My Grandmother owned a creepy ass house. In one of the rooms, she had shelves full of very creepy looking stuffed scarecrow bears.

I would like to help, but it would be extremely meticulous to type every change in these comment boxes. We could try using the chat system to communicate, beyond that, I'm out of ideas.