Talk:Blue Moon/@comment-26054278-20150417005525/@comment-4458203-20150417032842

I wholeheartidly agree with everything you said. To be honest I didn't think this story was particularly great either. I think I need to face the fact that I'm just awful with spelling and grammar. I'll be sure to get an outside source to proofread and edit any future stories.

The main character's sarcasm was admittedly mostly just my own sense of sarcasm seeping through, rather than being something I intended to do with the character from the start. The foreshadowing was indeed very obvious, amongst other problems.

So thank you for the Review.