Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26214168-20150410204914/@comment-26299456-20150411112211

line 1 para 4 |was also very bullied|-> |was also bullied| line 1-2 para 4 |followed a progam to learn to protect themselves|-> |attended a school program to learn to protect himself| line 2 para 4 |It worked for him but his enemies knew him too long|-> |It worked, but his enemies had known him for too long| line 3 para 4 |wasn't bully|-> |wasn't bullied| line 3 para 4 |Happy end|-> |Happy ending| line 4 para 4 |could be|-> |could have been| P.S I can't do this anymore, sorry