Talk:The Ones from Beyond/@comment-27335928-20151206221605

6/10, I would have liked this beter if it had been written as a story instead of a letter to the public, for example, zoning in on the life of the person who this is coming from instead of just talking about it the way it does. I like it, but the idea just doesn't work in it's current format. Keep writing, you'll get better! :D