Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20170505232842/@comment-28428152-20171008185251

Sorry about the three month response, I totally forgot to respond. Yeah, I'll definitely take the grammatical stuff into consideration, though as far as the time period goes, it's confusing because it's set in a very distant future, in a world that I'll be writing a book series about eventually. (The year is actually mentioned briefly, (" this being the night of Friday, March seventeenth, 5665 Second Age", which is about 10,000 years from now). I'll try to work on the Captureman's introduction as well, and describing the imagers (which are cameras, but ordinary people have no understanding of the mechanics of technology and have assigned their own names to it.