Talk:Nightmare's Revenge/@comment-6684440-20131219061230

Wow...Where to start.. Wel l first off I loved this creepypasta! Although, Pokemon games are overused in pastas, I feel like this one really has potential, but it wasn't all brought out. Like SpellcraftQuill said, there were A LOT of cliche elements used, Like 666, getting something you get that seems unimportant until the end, knowing your name, almost managing to kill you. But the one thing that reallly pi*sed me off, was that you used the cliche as hell feature where, The save file is deleted, and the antagonist coming out of the game. This is wayyyy overused, this creepypasta has a HUGE amount of potential, just make a lot of edits and you'll be in my top 5 pastas. Grammar/spelling/punctuation: 10 Creepiness: (not really sure, the cliche elements took a lot out of the creepy part..let's just say..) 6 Original elements:  4 (waaayyyy too little, needs work on originallity)  Total score:  20/30 There's a free 20/30 for you, don't spend it all in one place ^-^.-Astral