Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-14992725-20160116203527/@comment-24466828-20160116224519

1 and 2. I don't really think that Jeff's parents names being changed and the smile being removed is really a big deal to be honest. It is very minor and it shouldn't really effect the story at all.

3. I actually liked the changes to this story. It made me feel like I was reading something entirely original. I don't see how you can re-write the entire pasta and not change the plot. There are huge flaws in the original story which revolve around its plot and you kind of have to change the plot to fix them.

4. The flare could've just skinned his cheek or narrowly hit him. It's still possible to survive. However, cutting off your eyelids and carving a smile onto your face would kill you because the wounds would get infected and you would probably die as a result of it. Jeff actually went to the hospital in this story so that's why he didn't die right away from the flare.

5. I think that Jeff was starting to go insane in the bathroom. That's why he didn't cut a smile onto his face. It's good that he didn't cut a smile onto his face though because then Liu would see him and the ending to this pasta would turn into the ending of the original pasta. The ending to this when he spares Liu and leaves him to discover his parent's deaths is a much more effective ending.

6. You went into no detail why this pasta isn't scary. Also, "boring" is one of the most generic arguments ever. I found this story to be much more entertaining than the original version.

I can respect your opinion, but these are the reasons why I disagree with what you said.