Talk:Evil in the Suburbs/@comment-25941663-20160320165414/@comment-28015149-20160320204533

This shit took me like 5 hours to write. I need more feedback lol. Did you need more or less details? I had some weird events from my neighbor i ommited. Should i have put more into the ending? It was supposed to be ambigious but still leave you thinking. I was going to have him pour blood into the coat hanger bag and describe a mass of mashed up, unidentifiable organs twitching around and moving while "drinking" the blood. But it was creepier for me at least to never tell you what was moving around in that bag, or if someone was just hanging by their throat in the coathanger. Thank you for your feedback though. I appreciate you giving this long story a read.