User blog:GameSmashDash/Tell me what I could do better when you take down something!

Okay I'm pretty hard to piss off, but when my work is taken down, I'm fine with that. But when someone takes it down at least tell me what I could do better next time! I don't want to repeat the same Mistakes! If I repeat the same mistake, I'll end up getting my creepypasta taken down. As a writer I love to be told what I was doing wrong so I don't make the same mistakes! I love trying to fix up a story and see if I can make the story more awesome, but no, for some reason they couldn't tell me! "By the way, you should of done, this and this and this," or something like that so I know what to do better! Just taking it down isn't helping me fix my mistakes so I don't repeat the same miistake over and over. By the way, if you want the creepypasta perfect in every way, I don't know what to tell you besides, go fuck yourself! I'm trying at least. Tell me what I did wrong. Not enough build up! Not neat or properly placed paragraphs! Characters were boring! Just tell me so I know what to, better! What if someone took something away from you and they shake there head and didn't tell you whats the fucking probelm or probelms! It's like hide and seek. You try to find the person to ask what you could do better but have to find there hiding spot but with user names instead! Bottom line here is that what your doing, isn't working besides talking down the work and I think we would see alot more creepy work on here!