Talk:Dead Bart/@comment-26193563-20150404190837

Guess who will be sleeping?

Me.

This pasta is very bad, no development, it's just like "Squidward's Suicide." There is nothing that is so particulary creepy about it. And the usage of "hyper-realistic." It's so goddamn OVERUSED. And used wrongly too.

The word choice is poor, very.

And the story "tries" to make it mysterious and vague, but at the end it just winds up to a bunch of bloated, nonsensical, crap.

2/10

How did this become a once-classic? Lemme think.