Talk:Insanity's Grasp/The Journal of Christopher Autry

Excuse me...but to be honest, excessive spaces between lines and paragraphs are really, really annoying. It stretches the page vertically and creates unnecessary space in the story.

Leaving that aside, this isn't a bad story, although there are some parts that need a bit more of detail. By example, what kind of prank ended killing three people on Halloween? And something about that hacksaw seems odd too.

But after that it is well, a nice pasta, I liked the end where Autry thought he could fly. I think it was a nice touch. 6/10WhyAmIReadingThis (talk) 14:10, February 15, 2013 (UTC)