Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24976741-20140524195924/@comment-24927388-20140524205909

Its pretty good, the end is a little confusing. Was tshe just being paranoid and it was actually her cats eyes? Or was it one of the creatures in the form of her cat, or possibly that had taken over her cat? I guess it could be left up to interpretation, I personally think it would be a great story if the cat was really a creature, but I dont know how you would incorporate that into the story. Over all I feel it was well written, and has potential.