Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31532017-20161101085537

First attempt at making a really short pasta. 6 drafts are included in here, pick 1 that you think might work. If changes need to be made or if combinations of certain sentences might work, feel free to say it. Also if you want to give advice on all of the drafts, feel free to do so.

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Before going to bed, I always made sure that the door was titled slightly enough to allow some bits of light into the room. As it helps me to sleep a lot easier. When I woke up one morning, I realized the door was closed even though I was the only person living in the house.

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Before going to bed, I always made sure that the door was opened just enough so that it can allow some light into the room as it helps me to sleep a lot easier. When I woke up, the door was closed even though nobody else lives here besides me.

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Before going to bed, I always made sure to adjust the door slightly enough to allow some light into the room as it helps me to sleep a lot easier. When I woke up, the door was closed even though nobody else lives here besides me.

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Before going to bed, I always made sure that the door was adjusted slightly so that it can allow some light into the room as it helps me to sleep a lot easier. When I woke up, the door was closed even though nobody else lives here besides me.

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Before going to bed, I always made sure that the door was adjusted slightly, so some light can enter into the room as it helps me to sleep a lot easier. When I woke up, the door was closed even though nobody else lives here besides me.

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Before going to bed, I always made sure that the door was adjusted slightly so that light can get into the room as it helps me to sleep easier. When I woke up, I realized that the door was closed even though nobody else lives here besides me. 