Talk:Daddy Isn't Very Good at Cooking/@comment-5733573-20180726184538/@comment-26444017-20180727062111

Glad you liked. I realize it's a little predictable. Although, that does raise a question I was grappling with. Should I change the title? Is the title part of the predictability problem, priming the reader for the twist before it comes?

I'm curious to hear your thoughts on that.