Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20160909215816/@comment-25226524-20161001185729

Those weird replacements are just part of fast typing coupled with being in your head. I do it all the time. I actually have a problem where I do it while reading as well.

I wouldn't change the revelatory part, I would just consider some way of alluding to why he does what he does. It was clear to me he was an adult version of the baby, but I was unsure of his motives. Perhaps it is best left unsaid, I just wanted to mention that fact that I was unsure. It may be something others will ask.