Talk:The Venetian Raven

It's all right. The parts that stuck out to me are, I think, ones that you could stand to emphasize further: the masks, the materials decorating his room, and the title - I assume "raven" refers to the birdlike mask, but why "Venetian"? Actually, since the man wears two different masks in this story, you might want to add a picture of one or both of them - it would help the reader visualize in lieu of a longer (and potentially clunky) prose description. Javer80 (talk) 02:06, September 15, 2012 (UTC)