Talk:Valentine's Day/@comment-25112232-20140627183944

A story of unrequitted love and hasty revenge. It was an okay read. I at least did not feel the urge to stop reading out of boredom. The story was ok, although technically in the sense of ghosts and unfinished business, they usually aren't free to completely do whatever they like. The main character seemed more like just an invisible man.

I'd rate it a 7, but I didn't see a point of throwing in that "F" word, as you didn't use any other expletives. 6.5/10