Talk:The Demon Tobit of Delphia/@comment-28088262-20151225204823

Can't believe I've only just read this! I was inspired after the upload of your most recent Tobit story, and boy was I missing out. This story totally consumed me. Here are my favourite things about this story: Off to read them all now.
 * The authentic feel of the descriptions of Derrick's feelings
 * Character development of Sergio
 * The ritual - the writhing of the victim while being masked by the head suggests something painful could be happening in there
 * Dr Unus :-D LMAO