Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26248322-20150327010136/@comment-26248322-20150329182600

Thank you so much for the response apologies for not answering sooner! Yes, it is unfinished, but I am stuck on how to continue it. I definatly need to rewrite it, as I also sent this to a friend and you and him both came up with good things for me to change. Any ideas on how to continue?