Talk:Test Subject 323/@comment-31077845-20170216221941

"And in other news, a recent study out of ME university indicates that only one out of ten people who attempt to write horror fiction know how news anchors talk. Well that's all for now, tune back in at 11 for our report on why news programs seem to understand dramatic timing, including professor Meeleep Deedleedeep, also of ME university, on why whenever anything notable happens you always happen to be tuned into a news report providing exposition on that very event. This has been Doowop Singman, and we'll see you again at 11."

Also, thank god there's only one Amy Peterson in the world and everyone knows her, or they might have to actually do something like show a picture of her and say "Amy Peterson of ___ township" like they normally have to when reporting on missing persons or murder victims.

Also, I try not to be 100% negative, but there really wasn't much good about this story. It was unrealistic and relied on silly clichés and generally didn't seem to have much effort put into it.