Talk:The Blood Keeper/@comment-25042659-20140609153754/@comment-24044893-20140609194351

While some of your criticism I can agree with, I do believe you took it a little too far. First off, I think the writer was using the term "professional" facetiously, only using this word to describe to the reader that he and his group of friends went from goofing off to becoming very focused, showing that they were serious about ghost hunting, not actually professionals in the field. Also, even if they were professionals, why would the writer have to give an example of ghost hunting to prove that he knew what he was talking about? That would be highly unnecessary considering the story is not about ghost hunting. The writer was simply, in my opinion, showing his connection to the cemetery, and giving himself a little bit of a back story. Speaking of which, why do you also state that we should know more about what he does with his time (job, school, etc)? This would also be pointless to add to the story. It seems that you find it a tad bit unbelievable that the character doesn't work or go to school and walks to the local cemetery to hang out with friends whenever he wants. To me, he seems like a somewhat typical jobless teenager without a car whom isn't necessarily going anywhere with his life at the moment. There are many high school graduates like this. This creepypasta, simply put, is a very engaging story that is well written. Yes, it could be better, but it has redeeming qualities and is decent as it sits.