Talk:An Itch/@comment-25052433-20140818074503

I know something else, something that will attach itself to you, much like a painful itch. It's coming for you right now, it's....a review!

What went right:

-Honestly, just about everything. For what it is, this is a great little pasta. It's short and sweet and delivers.

-Reality played well into this one. We all itch, we are all annoyed by this itch, and yet, there are those times that it becomes so irritating that it does take our focus off of driving or some other activity that should have our undivided attention.

-The ending is done well. I like how you mixed in how sometimes, if we look fast enough, we can see the monster. Mix that thought into our minds while we are scratching an itch, and you've got a good recipe for a genuine chill.

What part of this story I just can't seem to scratch:

-Honestly I found nothing to critique on this end. It was a good story, served its purpose and delivered a chill. Well done.

8/10.