Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25688537-20150713171118/@comment-26715482-20150717154853

May I ask what happened to the best friend?, it seems that they got off scott free. The whole part about the character being a coder just seems forced in, you should flush out the characters more I felt very little when the sister and the girlfriend where harmed since they where barely explained. Finally the whole bit about the writer dying in the end ruins the entire story since who is writing the experience in such detail if the only one experiencing it died?.