Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140803215745/@comment-24996913-20140805041541

Haha, I'm rather bad at naming characters. If it were up to me they'd all have the same names from story to story. But, I agree with you on all of your points. I just needed someone to tell me. I will be smoothing this story out and lengthening the ending to provide more detail. I'm actually quite bothered that it's giving off a twilight vibe. I surely have to fix that (hahaha).