User blog comment:Fallenstrenght/I have no idea what I'm doing. Help, please?/@comment-25148755-20150216183404

Highly recommend posting your story on the Writer's Workshop here. You should be able to get at least a couple other writers to go over your story with suggestions and corrections. I'd say if you can get it to where you have general approval on the workshop you'll have about a 95% chance of your story not getting deleted when you post it to the main page.