Talk:Senior Year: The First Saturday/@comment-5269370-20140212225004/@comment-22515846-20140228165936

Thank you for the feedback! This is exactly the kind of review I need to know where there's work to be done.

I'm trying to work on my writing, which I feel can get repetitive in the format, and I feel that my descriptions are sometimes too detailed and sometimes too lacking. Still an amateur with a long way to go.

If you read the rest of the series, please let me know what you think. I want to know if I'm going uphill or downhill, losing a good plot, being cliche, etc. This is my first attempt at a series. I want it to be good. Again, thank you so much for the review!

I also JUST posted Part 5, if you're up to date.