Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33077235-20180911001124/@comment-36627132-20180911035228

DrBobSmith wrote: Ned,

I suggest having the author focus on one issue at a time, starting with that deathly wall of text. Let them show the initiative to learn that much before giving them the next assignment. I was going for a break-down style, but if you think I should go one issue at a time I will do so next time.