Talk:Subject 52

This was great! For your first story, you really hit well with it! The whole thing was very emerging, and reminded me of the films Rec or Alien. The dialogue was spot on, and it really made the characters seem human. You had a perfect amount of description that allowed me to visualize the story as I read it. The only thing I would suggest changing would be putting "This is my first story. Hope you liked it" right at the bottom. It just kind of caught me off guard a little, as I thought it was going to still be the story, so it's better to put those notes at the top. But all in all it was excellent, especially for a first. This will probably be going on my favorites list. Keep on writing! Emeryy (talk) 12:50, June 13, 2013 (UTC)