Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4519961-20140403041810

Im starting up a review series via my blog and website "Sputnik Music" titled "Indie Spotlight" where I pick very unkown albums and showcase them in a review. Ive written one for this album but I feel like theres somethign about my writing that I did wrong. If you guys could probs tell me whats wrong with it id appreciate it!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BlRVosL0jnHL8ZFIXsqTZymdpXzWAnRpQhYkbdLQYDU/edit?usp=sharing 