Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25941663-20180803171503/@comment-35711173-20180803200242

The phase of the war easily can be changed. It could be November of 1941. It could also be something more interesting, like the monsters feeding on people are Heydrich,  Goebbels,  Hitler,  etc. They could be taken from Sebastopol to Berlin.

Waffen Ss wouldn't have mp40's. That doesn't sound like a duty you would give the wehrmacht. A minor note, easily fixed by being less specific.