Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27921456-20160305185533/@comment-24859608-20160305191946

Like I said on your talkpage, welcome to Creepypasta! I like that you take interest into fixing your work. There was a lot of capitalization and punctuation mistakes in it. The story is a little bit bland, but it was actually not that bad; kind of heart-warming.

The issue why I put it as marked for review was because the entire story was a wall of text. space out your paragraphs, etc. stuff like that. The grammar just helped me confirm my decision, but the story wasn't terrible. Just poorly edited.