Talk:Squidward's Suicide/@comment-25429247-20140917005809

This is terrible for so many reasons. 1. The tense swaps are ridiculous. It's incredibly hard to read.

2. The content. Just because you have dead, mutilated children doesn't make it scary. If you want to make something scary, learn how to use suspense.

3. An intern would not be in the same room as anyone in that story. Sorry, it's just how it goes.

4. Hyper-realism does not exist for moving images. It's strictly for photography or art.

5. Do not ever tell us how to feel. This means no phrases that are or are similar to the following, "And the scariest part was," or "The most unsettling part was,"

6. Also, the idea isn't scary in the slightest. Seriously, a SpongeBob character committing suicide? Yeah, no.

In conclusion, this story is awful.