Talk:Two Possibilities/@comment-26179768-20170215002804

Not bad, but, well, it's a story of a spaceship where everyone dies. Not very new. Also, I understand the characters are facing a hellish situation, and their minds are blurred from the cryostasis, but it's hard to identify with characters who act so stupidly and abnormally, unless we witness their slow decline into madness. Begining already kind of insane doesn't work so well. The thing about the main character speaking to family and friends was kind of cheesy for someone in her situation. I don't think those things matter anymore when you're slowly dying in the interstellar void. A brief mentioning, would have been better. I liked the ending, though. the whole rivet gun thing and the character's final realization that even if it doesn't kill her right away, it wouldn't matter. That was a pretty good insight on her mental state. And I also liked the spitting on the grave part. I liked it A LOT. It's good to see character's development, and their feelings change in a not so fair way, it's good to see imperfections in characters, very refreshing. All in all, this was a good read.