Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25033184-20140608215811/@comment-24957024-20140611011004

Okay, let's see. No one refers to anything as a dreadful gift. It's either a gift, or it's bad. Also, a child who wa hearing voices all the time since birth would think it normal and tell their parents accidentally. something like "Mummy, how do you do that without movin your mouth?" it would just happen. So, one way to make it so that his is okay is to have someone in her life that can also read minds to teach her. PLOT TWIST: This person steals her away and tells her to use her powers to kill others? IDK it sounded better than flipping out at a party with a lot of people who would have little to no problem over coming one person wit ha knife. Also, you change tenses. A lot.