Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-11335105-20140525223718

Can you guys please tell me if this is good or not and help me develop it more?

One night a boy around the age of 12 decided it would be funny to troll a unpopular girl at his school. Her name was Addi and she was bullied everyday, she was currently going through serve depression and was very suicidal. They very next morning at school it was announced that Addi had killed herself and that mean messages from the user Trollfacelol were found on her Facebook page. The boy recognized his trolling account username and he didn't care that she had died because of him. 2 weeks later while the boy was trolling someone else, Addi's ghost came and killed the boy. Copy this message and post it somewhere else or Addi's ghost will come and kill you. 