Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25253035-20140821065641/@comment-25253035-20140821091257

SoPretentious: Deleted the cliches you said. Anything else I should rid? And also, after this, can I finally make a page for my story?

Godzilladude123: Thanks for the positive reception. True, I'm not really that good with accent diction. But I fixed some. Again thank you :)