Talk:The Foundation for a Better World/@comment-25083225-20150408235821

This was a pretty good pasta ^^ If I were to change anything about it though, I would add more detail about the narrator's personal reaction and experiences with the transition into the FBW's supremacy, like having him watch a heterosexual pride parade on television and describing the kind of imagery and his reactions, alongside him noticing changes in the video propaganda and media. There would be an obvious change in the medias tone once things became more whitewashed and conservative. I imagine the politicians, celebrities, and personell that are pushed out by the FBW's agenda are very selfish, treat their fans as inferior, and are "triggered" by anything that doesn't 100% suit their fancy, so I would have made a comment on how those people are pushing their agenda by programming more immature and defensive behavior within the masses, convincing people that EVERYTHING needs to be censored. It would also be cool to have a comment on the masses of this future. The people would be so frightened by the FBW's strict punishments of inappropriateness that they would be afraid to have sex or even talk about it to a doctor or their own spouse.

In short, the only issue I had with the pasta was that there could have been so much more, but the fact that a pasta like this made someone think so much should attest to its quality. 3.5/5