Talk:From Flesh to Stone/@comment-25037895-20150622203319

The character introductions seemed more informative than engaging IMO. They could be shortened, and the dialogue in that section is a little mechanical (like people wouldn't word it that way). However, the rest of the story is pretty decent besides the very last line, like WhyAmIReadingThis said, it's very melodramatic. Also, sucking the spirit out of someone through the eyes is a little worn-out, but the story doesn't really need that either, it just seems like a cheap attempt at shock value. I feel like the story may be better if it wasn't explained how the being turns people to stone. Just taking those bits out of the story would improve it. Nonetheless, it meets the QS IMO.