Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25217349-20140723205724/@comment-25170312-20140723221720

Oh, I actually thought that the killer was some kind of supernatural being that had taken both girl's souls and was like a mish-mosh of the souls of all the babysitter's that it took (I've seen too many asian horror movies). But now that you explain it, that makes more sense. Actually, that makes is way more creepy that she abused the main character while wearing Lily's face. If that was more clear, this would be far scarier.