Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20141231040024/@comment-25825682-20141231092053

So far the story seems good, I'm not a grammar master though. I did notice a slight mishap at least to me  "I was just glad I didn’t stowed my delicate camera and binoculars in my back pack and not in my suitcase" I'm not sure stowed fit there. It would read better as "stow," after the "I was just glad I didn't" considering "was," makes it a past tense. I also saw "back pack" as separate when it's the compound word "backpack," that's all I can say for now.