Talk:Dead Woods

This story is ok, not very creepy. I have some advice: Whenever you mention another creepypasta character inside if a creepypasta itself, it destroys the story, and also the suspension of disbelief. For example, the author of this story mentioned Slenderman. That killed the story for me. Learn from your mistakes.

Mattination1 (talk) 11:13, April 28, 2013 (UTC)