Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444401-20190908202324/@comment-9041013-20190909112127

Can you please not do this "random onset madness" thing? This is not how insanity works, let alone something of that scope. It takes a lot of time and there would've been earlier signs that something is wrong with the girl. The way it just suddenly pops doesn't make it scary. It makes it silly.

Now let's say the doll is actually a real monster and is doing something to the girl, again, the sudden appearence of its threat is killing the whole thing. It's unbelievable and unreliable.