Talk:Marrysville

Wait, what?
So... it's a desert town, in the middle of the woods you took a shortcut through to get there? A desert town somewhere where the 'germans' once held territory during an undisclosed time period? Unless you set up the place properly, the rest of the story won't make any sense. Also, the ghosts weren't particularly scary, as they didn't affect the main character at all, and the atrocity is pretty tame by (for example) WW2 standards.

You could have written about the French village where the German Army rounded everyone up at gunpoint, locked them in the church, and then set fire to it, shooting any who managed to get out. Now that was a significant atrocity.

3/10

Trismagestus 21:15, March 20, 2012 (UTC)