User:CorruptedJake1905

So ive been working on a new pasta monster for months now and it was denied for being to "jeff the killer" like. My monster is nothing like JTK. His name is Xiro. He is a 16 year old psychopath who escaped from a mental asylum. He is immune to death and thinks that death is really a beautiful woman so he kills people to please her. He is 6 foot 5 inches tall. He has pale blue skin because he tried to kill himself by getting locked in a meat freezer. He wears a straight jacket that is black and has ripped out arm holes in it. He has tattered jeans and black sneakers. His hair is a light gray color and his eyes are pure red because he popped all of the blood vessels in his eyes. His main weapon is a sickle that he uses to make his victims bleed to death with and he also uses two meat cleavers to cut his victims limbs off after they die. I can't say anymore about him without spoiling further stories but I would like to know if people think he is too much like Jeff the Killer or not. Thank you for your time.