Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25048323-20140611191724/@comment-25048323-20140611212723

I get the police officers and the creature. But tbh my point of giving no actual detail for the girl was one: i wanted the reader to make up their own character, maybe base it off of them and out themselves in her position or just use their imagination. And two: I'm not exactly sure how to add in the detail about the girl and have the story flow nicely.