Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4427347-20140324144859

So a few weeks back, I posted a creepypasta called Nightlights. Personally, I think it needs some work before I start on the sequel, and was hoping a few people could give some tips on it. (And yes, you don't have to remind me about all the ellipses at the end. I can fix that.)

Nightlights 