Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20170911154933

This is the first part of the story i work on, i know it might not be accepted same if i corrected some of my grammar, i might give the other part after it just on the Reverso grammar corrector the "i" always become "I".

When I was a little boy I always watching some TV show, I loved some of them one in particular in that one it was a little robot named Crocus who was similar to a clown. Of course he was a robotic clown, but all kids of my age at the time loved him, he was very exceptional 