Talk:Five/@comment-28060931-20160821222144

Okay, I'm in awe at how this got past the QS. I'm no admin but Poor grammer, bad phrasing, and a cliché protagonist that resemboes JTK is enough to downgrade this to the writers workshop.

The charecter gets bullied, goes ape-shit and kills people. Where the hell did he get the gun from, anyway? Oh and only four friends were listed at the begening.

Sorry if I was too harsh, but I don't this is a good story.