Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25037672-20140608060800/@comment-24821182-20140608134108

I think the ending was weak, and I can almost tell it was hastily written to tie up the loose ends, like confirming the Indian was in fact related to the accident that maimed the workers. I think you should add more substance to it, make a series of weird occurrences plague the workers over the span of several days, and give us some more background on the piece of forest they're planning to chop down.

Also, I don't know why it's relevant to have the story take place in 2045, as forests being destroyed is a problem we're facing today. Why couldn't the trees just be part of a Native American reservation that the industry has decided to chop down?

There's also some missing punctuation here and there, particularly during dialogue.