Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27012445-20170807162703/@comment-32461413-20170812233736

The use of the name Tabitha after the character has been established is a bit excessive, especially in the beginning.

You sometime switch the pronouns of the demon from "it" to "he" which is confusing. Also, based on the description, can this thing even be considered a man?

This is a really solid story. Well written. The twist was great, the detail was nice. Awesome work. I enjoyed every word.