Talk:Cremated/@comment-35711173-20180719173304

Shanethedonut,

I didn't spot anything wrong with the story - except possibly an American from Sioux City using centimeters. Yet somehow I didn't feel satisfied.

Maybe the killer teddy bear was too cliche, too much of a trope, spinning its head around like Linda Blair in the Exorcist.

The section discussing the abortion is somewhat confusing. Was it a murder of a baby that had been born, a miscarriage or a medically induced abortion? Do medically induced abortions report the gender of the aborted fetus to the woman?

How long was the POV away? It sounds like many years.

Does it seem odd that the mother would tell all about the abortion? Like why tell her? If it has been that many years then why not take it to the grave?

Wait - was a father involved at all? Was there ever a husband? I know divorces happen and all but ... no mention at all?