Talk:Whistler/@comment-25226524-20141103013335/@comment-25361316-20141103021503

Thank you Jay, I'm happy to hear you thought it was so good!

What I meant to convey with that passage was that, since the door to the narrator's room had been opened and also the door to the guest room had been opened, the thing wanted the narrator to sleep in the guest room that night. The implication is that by doing this he got the whistling to stop, "appeasing" the presence, but also made the rather more drastic mistake of bringing it along with him when he left. The logic as to how this presence works is supposed to be kind of inscrutable, but maybe I could make it more clear that It wanted the narrator in that room...maybe by making more of a note that every other door on the floor was shut and locked?

Again, thanks for your praise. I'll definitely be writing again next time I find myself in a spoopy state of mind