Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27123040-20151028190837/@comment-27131439-20151029200320

I see what appears to be a Joker face in the inkblot, which is spooky enough, but the build-up seems to be a little too intense for something that can be easily understood by the reader, and assessed for exactly how scary it is. The note about making it first person sounds solid, and the inkblot should probably be described, rather than removed.