Talk:The Mangrove Mirror/@comment-28266772-20160803132008

I think this is a good story and you demonstrate a lot of skill at writing but unfortunately I feel as though all that tension is built and lost for no real reason. There's no catharsis or climax and instead you try to cash in on the tension by going the "this really happened" route which is pretty cliched and cheesy. Shame cause other than that I enjoyed this story.