Talk:A Nice Hot Shower/@comment-25226524-20140804215328

I made some minor edits, mostly to formatting, but for some reason my editor is throwing in extra spaces. I just wanted to apologize, but it won't let me fix it. Anyway, your story is pretty well written, but I think it needs something at the end. Instead of refusing to get out of bed, maybe she forces herself to get up, and as she leaves the room, she fails to notice the last of a spider horde as it scurries under the bed. Something along those lines might help make it more like a creepypasta I think.