Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26662506-20160726123702/@comment-26662506-20160726124815

Jay ten wrote: The first thing I'm going to suggest is reading over this page - style guide - and then going back over this story. A lot of the issues with this story are explained on that page. Good luck! Yeah I see a few problems with my ...'s I'm going to fix that up now. If you have anything that involves specifics please feel free to notify me