Talk:Ted the Caver/@comment-24390507-20140119040200

I've been reading creepypastas for not even a year now, and this is literally the first day i'm posting anything at all in anything related to this whole thing. I'd like to say quick that anyone who takes the time to write these, no matter how bad (and let's face it, theres some really bad ones) deserves at least some credit. People shoud be encouraged to use their imagination and create all sorts of things with it. With that said though, here's my review.

I thought the story was written really, really well and was definitely interesting enough to keep me reading. However way too much of it was just cave exploring info and all. There literally coulve been full pages taken out of this story without it taking anything away from the stroyline. There was far too little creep and way too much technical information and really just boring cave exploring talk. The little creep there was, was good, it had me on the edge of my seat, and then sadly, went nowhere at all. To me it's a good, well written story, but not really one of the better creepypastas. Weird to see people raving about it, there was like a page of anything frightining or scary or suspenseful and 17 pages of cave exploring info. i do hope the writer sharpens his creepy skills and does more.