Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25477067-20141117201841/@comment-25701413-20141119185218

I'm liking the change to the ending, fire doesn't seem to be used against many creepypasta monsters compared to how useful and common a weapon it is.

I also like the  possibility that the author's gone crazy you raise in the 2nd last paragraph, as it brings a whole new meaning to the story. That said, the phrasing of "but it was probably just a dream because there wasn't any blood" seems a little clunky.I know it's more than a bit cliche, but perhaps something more along the lines of "I thought I killed someone yesterday, yet as I look down the bloodstains fade before my eyes. I've started to catch myself hoping this ordeal is taking place in a white, padded room somewhere, as the alternative is too much for a mind to bear alone."

Finally, I like the timestamped blog posts, but it does raise a question about the beginning half. It isn't part of the posts, as it has no timestamp and evidently starts around the time of the last post, yet is followed on from by the posts. Perhaps a change to the start, to keep the format consistent?