Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25024572-20170719191711/@comment-32461413-20170722161815

Interesting. I enjoy the crude humor.

It is hard just to have song lyrics without any way to interpret them. There is no song to accompany it, so it is hard to tell how it should be heard. Even if you were to say that it should be sung to the tune of the wheels on the bus or anything, it would make more sense. Even sheet music would help in some way. As it is now, it is an odd poem.

Obviously because of the crude humor and clear satirical nature, this would belong more on the Trollpasta wiki. I think it does really well sum up a lot of the lost episode genre.