Talk:I Found a Digital Camera in the Woods/@comment-26054278-20150309005505

This thing amazes me by how a person can post a bunch of pictures of nature (with no creepy elements), write a quick two paragraphs about finding the camera, and then posting it to a wiki to somehow get the category, "Historical Archive". I did not call it a story because this isn't a story. This is a photo gallery. Are the photos creepy? No. People seem to be claiming there is a man in some of them, but honestly, pretty much everything in the background people could point to and say, "That right there... is a man."

However, how is the actual writing? Even the actual two paragraphs have errors. For example, one sentence says, "When I approached, I saw it was a digital camera!" That is not a sentence, as it should say, "When I approached it, I..."

Also, there is a tense swap in the second paragraph ("It's a 3.3 megapixel Powershot S20!" when it should be, "It was a 3.3 megapixel Powershot S20!"). Therefore, this story doesn't even work on a writing level.

As a photo gallery, it is boring and repetitive, getting about a 3/10. As a "story", I proudly declare it as 0/10.