User blog comment:Bountybear/It has come to my attention.../@comment-24486291-20140323053702

Being self-conscious of writing a story is the exact reason that you would post it in the Writer's Workshop. If you have a fear of it being rejected or deleted, you can have literate and intelligent people go over it and give you their opinion on it. After they've given you advice, you can improve your story and then you don't have to worry about it being bad.

This is why I'm glad that the Writer's Workshop exists. Please utilize it! I promise, constructive criticism will be the least of your worries if you end up posting an awful pasta. I'm not saying that your pasta will be awful, but there's nothing to really base your writing skill on here but what you've written. Your punctuation and grammar all more or less seem to be in order.

I'm not exactly sure what you're so worried about! Show us what you've got and post your story in the Writer's Workshop.