Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20151103223822/@comment-27123781-20151103224645

Alright... Ok... I see what you did there. You clever ba@#$rd. From the begining of the story I was like, "man... You are better than this." At the 4th line I started to get a good theory of what might happen. When they said grave, I thought I had this plot cracked wide open...and I did... until the last line. You played me like a fiddle. Bravo.