Talk:The Origin of Laughing Jack/@comment-3541151-20150112023325/@comment-25655620-20150211073008

I think Candylandip is right, but not completely.

While I too think this is a decent, if not good story, certanly better than the first one, BUT there are too many issues to give it a 8/10.

The angel: okay this is not a major problem, all pastas have an element of fantasy, but it would be nice if it was explained a little bit.

The cat: the problem it's not the author forgets about it, he doesn't, the problem is why the fuck would a clown that's meant to play with children be packed with a super strenght? that makes no sense.

The adult Isaac: now we are in deep shit, the latter half of the story is HORRIBLE. While I was reading the story, I was hoping that maybe this one ould be good, but nope. Here, nothing is clear, why would Isaac torture people? or even kill them? because of the boarding school? don't make me laugh. Also why doesn't anyone notice the murders?

The gore: Just like the first story, this one has gore just for having gore, you might say that it's a "signature" of the author, but I don't care it's still bad.

Laughing jack at the ending: Why the fuck would laughing jack kill Isaac? The story makes clear that, since he change his liking to match Isaac liking, he should kill other people with Isaac, not kill him.

Sorry but even by being generous, I can't give this more than 6/10, still better then the first one tough.

Also, WHAT? youhaven't seen better pastas? you must be new here.

BEN drowned, Tulpa, The russian sleep experiment, Abandoed by disney, Normal porn for normal people, Mr widemouth, Godzilla NES just to name a few.

check them, they are good.