Creepypasta Wiki talk:Writing Advice/What is Poetry? (Or, Probably Why Your Poem Was Deleted)/@comment-4833240-20140214215453/@comment-17758905-20140216021907

Reading this poem I'd have to say this: It doesn't fall under all the do's. There's no depth in it. It's all surface. We all know that some creature is killing them all. There's no similes and metaphors. It's more of a story than a poem.