User blog comment:Bluecap/No sonic.exe please/@comment-10950063-20140130030508/@comment-10950063-20140130031302

Okay, now that that's out of the way.

Don't write a video game creepypasta. They are almost impossible to write well. They tend to be repetitive, cliched, silly, they frequently have characters acting not like real people, but like people in creepypasta, it's hard to be engaged with things that are happening in a video game that is inside of the story and you're placing your main character is a passive role.

Other than that, I've made several blogs with writing tips: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:ImGonnaBeThatGuy#Writing_Advice_Blogs