Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33719196-20191116040215/@comment-33719196-20191116180751

When I was doing research on the event that the story is based off of, I felt like that is too cliche, so you will see more twists. I had a harsh feeling that the word “loo” was not just from parts of Canada. So I guess I’ll put it under American terms such as “bathroom” so people can be familiar with that.

Oh shoot, I should have made it clear that there was a chance that the pilot left the plane and that is why the protagonists are panicking a bit. Unfortunately, I will have to keep some wonky wording because this story is based off of modern times and it’s just how people talk. We don’t exactly speak formally when we are in a conversation with someone we know or will be with. So I guess that stays in.

Yeah, thanks for the advice. I’m trying to adapt to this way of writing in this wiki, but yeah. I’ll be updating