Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28420405-20160715142937/@comment-29015383-20160715203426

Yes, you should definitely emphasize they're in a park much more often! You have to make these things clear to your reader you know!

I think the story could definitely work if you dive deeper into the helpless fear of being stuck up there, hanging upside down. Heh, maybe even go further. The locks fail just as they're about to be rescued. Or maybe one (or two) of the bars fail and as the thing comes to a stop, people fall out. There's some disturbing possibilities.