Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-39005953-20190402131942

This is the latest version of a free form short story i worked ok recently. Could advise as to how i could improve the narrative and potentially increase content. Original format was different in gdocs, so i may end up changing the most obvious portions, including the all caps.

SEVERE WEATHER ALERT FOR EASTERN SEABOARD

THIS IS A SEVERE WEATHER ALERT BEING BROADCASTED AT THE REQUEST OF THE NATIONAL WEATHER SERVICE. AT APPROXIMATELY 0700 HOURS CST AN UNUSUAL TROPICAL STORM WAS LOCATED 900 MILES OFF THE EAST COAST OF THE UNITED STATES. THE STORM IS UNUSUAL IN THAT IT APPEARS TO BE MADE OF CANINE APPENDAGES AND TISSUE AND IS RAPIDLY APPROACHING INLAND WITH SIGNIFICANT TURBULENCE. ALL RESIDENTS ARE ADVISED TO STAY INSIDE AND BARRICADE DOORS AND WINDOWS IF UNABLE TO EVACUATE WITHIN THE NEXT 4 HOURS. THE STORMS SPEED HAS CONSIDERABLE FORCE AND DAMAGE INFLICTED BY RAINING DOG PARTS HAVE ALREADY BEEN REPORTED AS FAR AS MAINE, RHODE ISLAND AND CONNECTICUT. DO NOT APPROACH PROJECTILES WHILE THEY ARE STILL ANIMATE. DO NOT ATTEMPT TO CHASE DOWN RUN AWAY PETS.

SEVERE WEATHER ALERT FOR MIDWEST INLAND AND EASTERN SEABOARD

THIS IS A CONTINUOUS SEVERE WEATHER ALERT BEING BROADCASTED AT THE REQUEST OF THE NATIONAL WEATHER SERVICE. AT APPROXIMATELY 0900 HOURS CST THE IRREGULAR TROPICAL STORM BREACHED INLAND. THE EYE OF THE STORM CURRENTLY IS ABOVE PENNSYLVANIA WITH TURBULENCE EXTENDING AS FAR AS CHICAGO AND SOUTH CAROLINA. INSULATION OF ALL OPENINGS INCLUDING DOORS AND WINDOWS LEADING INTO YOUR HOME IS RECOMMENDED. CITIZENS OWNING ANY DOMESTIC CANINES ARE URGENTLY REQUESTED TO LEAVE THEM OUTSIDE. DO NOT LET THEM IN. IGNORE ANY AND ALL VOCALIZATIONS, INTELLIGIBLE OR OTHERWISE.

SEVERE WEATHER ALERT FOR ALL STATES

THIS IS A CONTINUOUS SEVERE WEATHER ALERT BEING BROADCASTED AT THE REQUEST OF THE NATIONAL WEATHER SERVICE. THIS BROADCAST WILL CONTINUE UNTIL ALL SEVERE WEATHER HAS CEASED. ISOLATE ALL DOMESTIC CANINES. DO NOT LET THEM IN. SEAL EVERY CRACK LEADING TO THE OUTSIDE. IGNORE ALL VOCALIZATIONS FROM OUTSIDE UNTIL THE STORM HAS PASSED. IF POSSIBLE, SEND LOVED ONES TO LOWER LEVELS OF YOUR HOMES. DO NOT LEAVE YOUR HOMES. DO NOT LEAVE YOUR HOMES. DO NOT LEAVE YOUR HOMES.  