Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44457704-20191120013437/@comment-44457704-20191120152720

thank you,

You onesly did not get the fact that I am still learning. Iam just so Girl trying to get better. Also you probly dont know this cause I did not say this but this is the origanal a story I wrote at 6...

I am trying to get the same affect of when I first wrote it. The reason its so short is cause back then I was a little girl who didn't know the differnts of what a chapter ad a page was....

I can start over if thats what you want!! I do hate this myself but being tired and writing dont mix otherwise I would have made it better longer and more to your aproval.

Thank you for your feedback