Talk:Cupcakes/@comment-25083849-20140622195723

This is honestly stupid. The first problem is that it has WAY too much blood and gore. This is a problem for a lot of pastas, even the good ones. Why I say this is because you don't want your reader to literally be sick or get disgusted. Great pastas like BEN Drowned work because there's little to none of that stuff, and it's still able to scare. This may sound really dumb, but I think the author should've chosen a different source material. Yes, MLP has a huge adult fanbase, but don't forget that the show is targeted towards younger children. One day they could be typing My Little Pony on Google and find this story (or the video), and boom! You have a scarred child! If the author picked something like Ren and Stimpy, which is geared more towards adults, then this would make sense. Ren going insane and brutally murdering Stimpy probably wouldn't happen, but it's more reasonable (for lack of a better term) than Pinkie Pie tearing Rainbow Dash to shreds! Sorry if this is too long, but I just don't agree with this story.