Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26900569-20150825232818/@comment-26475253-20150826015957

You have paragraphing problems here, as it's just a BIT too big for my mind to process. There was a spacing error and a spelling error or two, but besides that, you have your average pokepasta. If these are allowed now, I would still suggest avoiding them if you wish to take your pastas seriously. Pokepastas, while generally earning rave reviews by the younger population (anyone 12-13 & under, I find), it rarely makes a connection with the mature community. I'm also unsure if lost games/cartridges/etc are still accepted on this wiki, although I'm sorry if this is a false thought. I'm sorry, but I think you need to do ALOT of work on this is you'd like to salvage a good story.