Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25217349-20140723205724/@comment-25217349-20140723221312

Thanks Umbrello! The cursing was something I was feeling unsure about, I kind of didn't want it but I also kind of did, meh. I think I agree with you though. I'm wondering if the ending is unclear because I was trying to go for unambiguous. I was trying to set it up so that you find out Holly's abuser is actually a woman who killed Lily and skinned her in a way similar to the character in the movie scalped his victims. That explains why Lily's face looks so deformed and the hair is bloody. Maybe I didn't do a good enough job writing it to lead the reader to that conclusion w/o stating it explicity though. Any tips on how to do that?