Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150423072004/@comment-26326346-20150424183612

I cut out the question and the first paragraph (the flow felt lost without the question).

So, state that one of the bodies looked different than the rest in some sort of fashion which indicates that the victim was special to the owner?

Hmm... Maybe I could have that victim be painted in a way that tries to hide that she is decomposing and have her situated in a way that she is sitting on top of the corpse pile (which would show her to be more special than the other victims in some way)?

I think that is the way I'll go.

Thank you for the advice! It is really appreciated and shall be taken to heart. I'll change the title to say 2nd revision after I've made the change.