Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24714617-20140321033236/@comment-24714617-20140321175001

Wow thanks. I'm no grammar expert so Word did all my correcting. If someone were to edit the story, I'd be much obliged.

Anyway, it's nice to get positive feedback on your first pasta. As for the epilogue thing, I think that it'd detract from the immediate feel of the story and from its believability because I'd have to say that the church just vanished too or that another strange cult was installed there as if nothing had happened a la time travel. Or I could say that it was just abandoned but with no one to mantain the place, that should be obvious.