Talk:Cold Storage/@comment-5614678-20161205200311/@comment-5614678-20161207154712

I'll get to work fixing it right away, because I loved writing this story and am very proud of it. I actually did think it was a minor mechanical error that could be quickly fixed, but now that you've pointed the problem out, I'll get right to sorting it out. It's a challenge (since I didn't even know about 'present progressive tense' until now) but I'm up to it.