Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24797411-20140418183538/@comment-24797411-20140419002053

Good idea. I have to say though she is young she isn't one of the "creepy little girl" pastas like Sally. When you first look at it seems that way, I was planning on a origin of her explaining what she is. I would like to keep the line she uses after she killed Penny "Aw, what's wrong? have a nightmare?" because if it was real life speaking the tone would be sarcastic and cruel sounding though those words are what a mother would use to a child that just had a dream. In her origin it would be what her mother said to her when she was normal. She isn't 8 like Sally was though she is technically 16 which is a youthful yet more mature age. I'm keeping her the one who gives them the nightmares. It will be explained in the origin. She dresses dark yet still silly and youthful but not to youthful like the classical nightgown. Goth mixed with young. I will be posting the origin if you check that out it might explain some things to you. I want her to go into the house of the victim making readers wonder how she got in and that she is real no just in the dream. But I like the idea of her being the dream bringer just because of her having that power yet looking still so weak in a way. Thank you for your ideas I will try and change the idea of her being a little girl pasta.