Talk:Never Go into an Old McDonald's/@comment-24877518-20150401074501

This is an obvious attempt to cash in on "Abandoned by Disney". It reads practically like a remake, but with mcdonalds. The beginning, where the guy sets up the location and story, the middle, where he explores an abandoned location where nothing truly supernatural happens, and then the end where the supernatural thing happens, and we all shit our pants.

Except, Abandoned by Disney is based off an actual place that is not quickly debunked by one quick google search like this one almost certainly is (I didn't actually bother, because I'm lazy.). So, in short, this story pretty much has nothing good going for it. Stolen premise, poor writing, contrived plot, and clueless creepypasta protagonist extraordinaire.

If I had to put a number rating on this, I'd give it, say...2/10, try again, bub.