Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-39532078-20190529130025/@comment-35711173-20190530171027

I'mThat1Guy,

You have a lot of English language issues. Also, Bloody Spaghetti was right on with his critique on the story line. I wouldn't do a deletion appeal until you had fixed all of those and the story was well received here in the Writer's Workshop.

Dr. Bob.