Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26193563-20150622185523/@comment-26502770-20150622192459

RisingFusion wrote: Please suggest some ways to improve the story instead of replying snappish remarks. Also, stories can be short, hence the term "short story." First I told you whats wrong with the story so you can fix it and second I didn't say short stories are bad. For you expanding on the whole thing is a good idea and its a good concept you can expand on the story and have a detailed murder maybe describe the protagonist covering his tracks and have add more background to the charecters