Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32764586-20180816005151/@comment-9041013-20180816113501

Honestly, It was hilarious, but it was also kind of dark. So it works... any suggestions, make the Johnson more sinister. Make the Johnson take his time and to force him to suffer for a long period of time detailing it more and more and more up to the disgusting description of a rotten penis.

Ah... I feel the food rising.

Also, less of a talking penis because it reminds me of the Foot Monster from Courage The Cowardly Dog... weird shit, and more of a voice inside of the guys head... maybe... It could add a lot to the humorous side and the creep factor as the guy tries to balance himself between thinking he's going crazy and his Johnson rotting away.

I do recommend you also add some of these lyrics to the story, in one way or another.

"My sex-change operation got botched

My guardian angel fell asleep on the watch

Now all I got in a Barbie Doll-crotch

I got an angry inch"

Ah, also bionic penises... just think about the endless horrifying possiblities.

P.s this story suspeciously reminds me of something I wrote...