Talk:The Face That Watches/@comment-29326682-20160827152250

Gold! I loved this. I'm guessing your British for using "mum", but I can't judge though. The style of writing is constant, though with it's ups and downs, still makes a great story. The description of the man is spot on. Even the character change in this story is perfect. The detail of the narrator's family is completely accurate. I guess I enjoyed this story the most out of all the horror/creepy stories I've read on this site or any other site. Epilogue? Extended ending, maybe? I fancy the conclusion, it sums up all the horror stacked inside the reader's mind. After reading this, I heard a loud *bang* from outside. Nearly scared the crap out of me. Well done!