Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27008899-20151105041421

I have recieved some negative feedback on this. I want to see if it is consistant. Tear it apart if you must.

Extended Stay

The following messages were received on my cell phone between October 2nd to November 1st, 2015. I would estimate the male voice to be in their 30's. The caller ID was always unknown.

Message 1: October 2, 2015

"Hey babe, I finally made it to the hotel. No wonder we couldn't find it on Google Maps, this place is way out in the middle of nothing. I'm just glad I have a signal. It's beautiful here. My room is huge! Anyway, make sure you thank Dr. Arnold for telling us about this place. I love you and I will be home in a month."

Message 2: October 9, 2015

"Hi honey, I just called to check on you. I hope you are good. I miss you. I met a really nice guy today who says Dr. Arnold also told his wife this is a great place for men to just get away from the stress of work. Before he said that I didn't realize, but everyone here is a guy. I think I saw Dr. Arnold in the lobby this morning too. Anyway, I love you baby. Talk to you later."

Message 3: October 16, 2015

"Hey Jen, Dr. Arnold is here. I spoke with him a few minutes ago. Where did you say you met him? It was weird because he kept asking me all about you. He kept asking me if I thought you missed me. It was, strange (a low hum starts to become audible here and the caller pauses for a good 10 seconds). I...I love you baby."

Message 4: October 19, 2015

"Jen, I really need you to answer. Something really strange is happening in this hotel. Remember the guy I told you about last week? At dinner tonight he just stared at me. I kept asking him if he was ok but he just, stared. As though I wasn't there. When I told Dr. Arnold he said it was all a part of the process (again a low hum starts in the background and the caller pauses. The following sentence was said by the caller in a monotone voice). I must go now. They are calling for me."

Message 5: October 23, 2015 (The low hum can be heard throughout this message. Also note the callers voice is very solemn and cold in this message)

"Hello Jennifer, I hope you are well. Dr. Arnold said that I'm almost better and should be able to return home soon. I...lu...(he almost sounded normal for a second but quickly snapped back). Goodbye."

Message 6: October 31, 2015

"Help me Jen! Dr. Arnold is a mad man. He...he killed my friend. He cut his throat and started drinking his blood. The entire hotel staff joined in. We all just watched. We couldn't move. It was like I was in a dream. I...I don't know why but I came to and realized what was happening. I'm in the woods behind the hotel. You have to call the police! Please (barking dogs in the distance draw closer to the caller as he goes on)! Oh god! They found me. If I never see you again please know I love you more than anything. I'm sorry. Ahhhhh! (He screams as a snarling creature sounds is heard close to the receiver. After that the line goes dead)"

Message 7: November 1, 2015

"Yes this message is for Jennifer Markum. Mrs. Markum, this is Dr. Arnold. I regret to inform you that while staying with us your husband appears to have had a psychotic episode. He began ranting about monsters drinking blood and being chased in the woods. Please know that our facility and staff are well equipped to handle this and he will be cured of his delusions in no time. However, he will not be able to contact you for some time. I will call you to inform you when you may visit later this week. If you have any questions please call my office Monday. We will do all we can to help your husband. Have a great day." 