Talk:The Living House/@comment-25471033-20180808212136

This was actually pretty good. It seemed liked it had kind of a rhythm, like a poem, but not a poem. The concept was pretty cool, an actual, living house, with moving everything. The description was slightly lacking, everything just seemed kind of to-the-point, but I feel like that might have just been what the creepypasta was supposed to do, what with the rhythm. I really liked the ending though, I love creepypastas that make you question what truly is going to happen. Is this guy going to be able to find a way out? Will he become a permanent resident of this house, just like his last one? Maybe the furniture were living people too, and now he'll just be a chair! The only actual problem I had with this is the beginning, we're getting parts of his life story, like him never leaving his house, where it doesn't need to be. This guy is going to enter a living, breathing house, and that's terrifying to anyone, but I don't think it'll raise suspense just because he's an introvert too.

8/10!