Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27838637-20160727122520/@comment-27838637-20160812130739

[http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Exhausted New and revised story is completed and posted! Please give it a read and tell me what you think of the final version. I took everybody's advice into account so hopefully it turns out to be a pretty decent story!]

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