User talk:AMarbleHornet

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EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:51, June 7, 2015 (UTC)

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15:28, June 8, 2015 (UTC)

Story deletion Your story has been deleted because it doesn't meet the wiki's quality standards. If you feel that it did meet the standards, please state your case on Deletion Appeal. Make sure you follow the instructions to the letter there, or your appeal will be automatically denied.

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06:21, June 9, 2015 (UTC)

EmpyrealInvective (talk) 11:59, June 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded story Please don't re-upload your deleted story. It is against the rules. If you feel your story is well-written or meets the Quality Standards criteria, make a case on deletion appeal or post it into our Writer's Workshop for comprehensive user review. If you re-upload a deleted pasta again, you will receive a 1-day suspension from editing.

17:15, June 9, 2015 (UTC)

RE:
The way your story looked had no impact on the deletion - it is against our rules to reupload deleted stories, if you have improved your story and think it should be on the 'site, you need to submit a deletion appeal.

With regards to your story going "wacky" though, you need to not indent your paragraphs. That should fix it.

17:23, June 9, 2015 (UTC)

EmpyrealInvective (talk) 03:39, June 10, 2015 (UTC)

EmpyrealInvective (talk) 03:44, June 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re:
I'm gonna' be honest with you, the story was all over the place and was hard to make sense of. It was incredibly rushed and had just about every issue a story can have. The protagonist's reactions were incredibly unnatural, and the whole story was just bizarre. There were dozens of mistakes in grammar/spelling/punctuation/missing words/extra words. Please consider using our Writer's Workshop and also reading our Writing Advice pages. Good luck.

Jay Ten (talk) 02:09, June 15, 2015 (UTC)


 * Well that's not the kind of bizarre I was meaning. Perhaps I should've said nonsensical instead.  The story is a long ways from being up to quality standards.  You're gonna' have to try the workshop if you want it to have a chance, but it's going to take a complete overhaul.  Most people spend days or even weeks making sure their story is just right.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 03:19, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

Story deletion Your story has been deleted because it doesn't meet the wiki's quality standards. If you feel that it did meet the standards, please state your case on Deletion Appeal. Make sure you follow the instructions to the letter there, or your appeal will be automatically denied.

'''DO NOT ATTEMPT TO REUPLOAD YOUR PASTA. If you upload it again, you'll receive a 1-day ban from editing, as per the rules.'''

Read the Deletion FAQ for details on the 'what' and 'why' of the deletions we make.

Read this guide and these blog posts for further details on how you can improve your story/stories to make them meet our quality standards.

For additional help, submit your story to the Writer's Workshop for feedback.

06:48, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Off Topic Board
Hey, please don't tell off users who have posted off-topic threads in the off-topic board. One, it's perfectly fine there anyway, and two, it's not your job to. If you see a thread in the wrong board, don't add a message pointing it out, as this will further bump down other posts, just let an admin or moderator know, and they'll move the thread. We won't generally tell people off for doing something like that, since it's so easy to fix, so there's no need to feel awkward about getting us involved. Additionally, if you're incorrect (as you were on the thread in question), this will stop us having to let the user know about this and save everyone a lot of effort.

Thanks,

18:55, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Apologies
I may have jumped the gun a bit and made some assumptions. I appreciate the maturity in your response and apologize if I came off as inflammatory. Many people don't appreciate honest feedback; glad we can be kind to one another. Whitix (talk) 20:58, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

EmpyrealInvective (talk) 05:51, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for the confusion
Hello I wasn't able to get back to you on your story you asked me a question which was "Also, Irene... I can't tell if it's the Irene I showed this story to. Names are a curse." I just wanted you to know that i'm not the Irene you might know of I just happen to stumble upon your story, sorry if I caused any confusion.

I look forward to reading another story until than best of luck.

Not So Quicksword Irene (talk) 02:12, July 18, 2015 (UTC)Not So Quicksword Irene

Quality Control Templates
I saw your comment just posted, and just to let you know, there's these templates for letting admins know if you think any story is not up to Quality Standards.

reason for admin review, reason for deletion.

These templates are for any user to add, but only an admin can remove them. As for the "reason", it can be spelling, punctuation, spacing, capitalization, wording, storyline, or formatting issues, etc.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   04:07, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * Certainly, please add signatures to the talk page messages by adding four tildes (~).

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   04:22, July 30, 2015 (UTC)