Talk:The Sanctuary's Mortuary/@comment-26105248-20150213162040

I thought it was great up until it started relying on rotted, tumorous flesh for shock value. The suspenseful buildup, the believable setting, the competent writing; I just wish it had an actual, realistic scare factor, like if he'd been permitted to leave the hospital because he had some weird, hypnotic thing done to him that would entrance others to come to the hospital so the experiment could continue.

Also, I got the disgusting vibe from our two medical scientists, but not an actual threatened feeling. If they'd demonstrated some level of malicious intent maybe, or an ability to incapacitate or overwhelm our hero, I might have taken them more seriously. I mean, even our protagonist laughs at what these creatures are, and suffers no discernable consequences for it. I

'll simply say that it was an alright story, has a few things going for it, but has the potential to be so much more. 5/10