Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26158862-20150313022921/@comment-25148755-20150317021557

No worries. Sorry if my review came off harsh. I typically don't like to edit things other than blatant grammatical errors since, in the end, it's the author's story, not mine.

As far as the other stuff goes, they're just things to think about if you are planning on trying to post it to the main site. The concept itself is interesting, but the execution could do with some tweaking.