Talk:The Old TV/@comment-25618483-20141105204314

The pasta was a little underdone, but the ended was pretty cool. You do have a few spelling and or grammar issues in this story. Couple times I had to re-read the sentence to catch what you were saying due to your choice of word placement.

All in all though it is a neat story i think it just needs a little bit of work.

Once again, super cool ending.