Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24859608-20140617173641/@comment-24918243-20140618170930

The only thing I would change is that he was stabbed several time on the head.

First off, if that had happened it would have been extremely obvious, not to mention bloody. Secondly, the head is probably one of the worst places to stab someone if you are trying to kill them. The skull pretty much acts as an armor or carapace. So if I was going to stab someone, the head would be the last place I would do it to.