Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28255303-20160420022533/@comment-28255303-20160420211646

Well I can explain why the endings seem weird, ending 2 is more of an alternative ending and not a continuation of the last. I can understand why it seemed rushed as well, I simply came up with the idea to write it in class and then wrote it, not like i had been planing for months or something. I'll probably keep working on it and try to make it better.