Talk:The Strangest Security Tape I've Ever Seen/@comment-26835140-20161029145955

While this is a great story indeed, I'm a bit confused on the antagonist's motive. Sure the protagonist is stuck in a seemingly-infinite time loop and so is everyone else, but why is 'Jeremy' stealing oil? it made sense during normal time: you know get the oil, sell that shit, make bank. But now it doesn't make any sense as to why he would steal the oil. Yes his house was burnt down by 'the estranged kid' which we all know is Jeremy (which, in my opinion was a bit of the story that seemed glued on at the last second, which I understand; it's an important detail and you couldn't've gone into a 3 paragraph spiel about it.) and he used motor oil to do it. But this time loop doesn't take place in 1993, so why does he want motor oil? I know i'm late but some kind of explanation would be really satisfying!

By the way i'm gonna throw you an overall 8.5/10. a 4/10 on creepiness as there was only one 'creepy' part of the story and one fear of being stuck in a time loop, a 10/10 on your english build; as your sentence structure is very strong and I see almost no grammatical errors, and a 9/10 on your character build! The main protagonist is very relatable and sort of embodies the parts of the protagonists that no one else wants to put in their stories. Which is very refreshing and honestly quite necessary. Good job!!