Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26220663-20151002151539/@comment-27024986-20151002174430

Althought BelowXero has a quite mean reply, he was right. Even I, who I suck at grammar, I realized all these fatals mistakes you have done. I recommend also to try to write the story with Word and put a lot more focus into it since its like you are jumping from a subject to another. Plus I didnt felt any creeps from it.