User blog:SnakeTongue237/A Story in the Writer's Workshop/Uncertainty.

I recently finished the first rough draft of my newest pasta "Shared Blood Runs Thick ." Which is now in the Writer's Workshop and awaiting reviews. It is a tale of brotherhood that has a couple of twists and turns. Beyond that I can't really say much without giving it away. I would be all to appreciative of anyone who could stop by and give that story their feedback. I am always glad to see reviews of my work.

For the second part of this blog post, I must ask everybody's opinon on something. A few months ago, I wrote a story entitled "Detour." This was a peice inspired primarily by real life crimes committed by satanists, and as such, it held very little back. I released the pasta only on the Starpolar Wikia for two reasons: first of all, the graphic nature of the story itself, and secondly, I felt strangely unconfident in it. Looking back on it now, I understand my lack of confidence: The story sucks. The phrasing is awkward, the storyline is predictable, and there are several cliches. However, lately I've been considering taking another look at it and maybe trying to make it a little better. The plot of "Detour," is about a couple celebrating their anniversary in the Great Smoky Mountains. They are kidnapped by a satanic cult and tortured horribly in the caverns of the mountains (Yeah, seriously. That's it.)

Thanks to anyone who helps me with these topics.