User blog comment:Halofan11/My page deleted. FOR WHAT?/@comment-10950063-20140214033536/@comment-4832646-20140224035831

Just because a story is above the reading comprehension abilities of a fourth grader does not mean it's terrible.

And your story, no, did not have plot. It didn't have '''anything. '''How did John die? What does the chemical testing on animals have to do with anything? What's with this being with the chainsaw? You have literally nothing except a bunch of randomly scattered pieces.