Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20140923012345/@comment-4893169-20141002013900

So the dialogue doesn't need further tinkering then? I'm thinking that the Nye-Am would have be the result of genetic drift, instead of scientifically-enhancement. I'm tinkering with this idea that their primitive ancestors might have wandered accidently into an portal into Faerie Territories and either through natural selection or maybe biological uplifting by Faerie intervention, they might have been genetically enhanced.

And about Bureaucratic Control God of Endless Torment and False Hopes, it's referring to the deity of the one of the alternate worlds (not the one featured in the story) now run by a religious Oligarchy. It's on the pariah list of earth-worlds to be avoided, although immigrants/defectors from this world sometimes worship this Tyrant God.