Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180510104152/@comment-34823985-20180510111326

I wrote it, so it has a definite rhythm for me, but yeah, it's sometimes difficult for me to convey the rhythm in my head to the reader. I'll think about ways to smooth it out a bit. I'll also hope a few other people chime in, and say something different about it. ;b LOL! Thanks for reading, Bloody.