Talk:25, 26/@comment-25148755-20151224192946/@comment-26227302-20151224201342

I thought the motivation of the intruders was described enough; I never intended for this to have any relation to 49,50 originally and tying it in was a fairly last minute decision but the idea of 'typical' burglars acting in that way seemed unrealistic, so I thought that linking it to the sort of 'government conspiracies' in 49,50 was a good idea at the time.

The idea I was trying to put across in this was that it was supposed to be a kind of children's Christmas story (the type that usually have some kind of moral message)  that wasn't meant to have any kind of 'scariness' up until the ending where it suddenly becomes a 'horror' story. That's just what I was aiming for when I wrote it but I understand it may not have come across it like that to others. Just out of curiousity, what kind of spelling/grammatical errors are there?

Thanks for your comments however, I really appreciate the time you gave reviewing my work.