Talk:Eyeless Jack/@comment-25012681-20140621175158

I said previously that I liked the story, but now that I look at it, it doesn't seem true.

I know, dumb comment, but you want somebody to have nightmares about this. This doesn't seem very true to me. The doctor seemed to careless. And I agree with people asking where the body went. I previously said that the shortness of the story and lack of vocabulary adds to it because of how much horror he was in, but I wasn't in that horror. And just asking, how did he know the "thing" was going for his lungs? And was "Eyeless Jack" just a nickname for the creature? If that was his real name, how did he know it?

I thought it was really amazing, but I read it a few more times and realized it was ''fine. ''

510.