Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26335047-20150422093732/@comment-26054278-20150426153107

Lordnmaster wrote: So I got this up on the site under the title "The E Track," but it got deleted for quality standards. If someone -- hopefully Empyreal, who deleted it -- could explain what in it didn't meet quality standards, that'd be helpful. Personally, I think that the story actually suffers from being overwritten. I know that sounds like an odd complaint, but I thought that the story was incredibly pretentious and... well, overwritten. While some stories can be written with not enough detail and few word choices, this story seems to have way too much detail and a ridiculous amount of word choice that makes it come off as almost snobbish.

Also, while I can see the ideas you are going for (kind of), I think everything was a bit too odd and a bit too vague throughout most of the story.

You'll have to question Empyreal on the exact details, but those reasons above would be my guess.