Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24191206-20140410182103/@comment-24191206-20140410230935

Well here's the thing. First: this whole event actually is based over a time-span of 1 week. The lack of sleep the main character has dealt with had made it hard to tell how much time has really passed.

Second: The main character has no-idea what is out in-front of his window so he has no clue what to tell anyone besides that whatever it is; is not a normal animal but a monster. No one ever believes something like that.

Finally: The main character chose not to try and see what is behind the curtain (despite the angle) for his own safety because he knew whatever it was saw him as prey and it was the predator on the hunt for food.

Thanks for the critique and tell me anything else you think might help it get better

(maybe a better ending b/c i actually took out the horrible (Rushed) ending so people won't see this story as a lost cause.)

I was aiming more toward something like a news report of a disappearance/murder and that the perpetrator is still at large. (When this was originally posted I had this ending in but I didn't do it like a news report would normally go)

What I posted here was not the good copy of "Up on the Roof Top" but it's rough copy (Because that's all I had left after the original post got taken down).

Please do give more critiques to help this story become a great one and be Re:titled to...

The Predator at my window