Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20190516082446/@comment-28428152-20190517234211

Yeah, I got busy with school, so I didn't have a lot lf time to do much writing, but I've been brainstorming a lot lf stuff for the story.

As far as the new monster goes, I figured there's not quite enough scare factor with the story, since the Nameless is a bit too human, so I dug up this monster, which I have used before in another story. It'll be a part of Ben's story too in the second draft.

As far as the blunt goes, it's mainly there yeah as comic relief but I'm also going to be exploring addiction soon in the story, and it sort of foreshadows the fact that Clay abuses weed due to PTSD, since they're priorities are a bit off in that scene.

But thank you for pointing that out about the last few bits of it, I definitely see what you mean and will leave a note to fix that in the second draft of the story. Didn't really intend to rush the ending or anything, just wanted it to leave off at the point where Clay's finally on Jan's side of things