Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25360281-20150111053551/@comment-25500640-20150113232049

to be honest it isn't my expertise as theories are not the average creepypasta, however there are still some things even in a theory pasta that need to happen to make it a pasta at all. it seems almost like a list of facts rather than a story, put in some more descriptive parts to it, make a story out of it rather than just a list of what uncle grandpa does. have an explanation for why he says "goodmorning" a lot.