Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33531395-20190913113020/@comment-9041013-20190913203242

You know, as much as closing yourself off from the world can be true to a depressed person. Literally not speaking to anyone for months on end is a bit exaggerated. Emma would have to tell her parents or a friend or someone that she needs time alone and then go off into her little rabbit hole. People would worry but not to the point of being mad at her when she makes her comeback.

Once you get the same add fifty five times from different sites you either start using add blocker or begin to think something is wrong with your internet provider.

"My name is JUST Katie" super suspecious... give her a last name. I wouldn't buy into a "Just Katie" being a psychologist I can trust.

Story goes nice and all, and then "why don't you kill him?" Ugh... what? We don't see the actual progress they've made so Im having a hard time to believe Katie could form a bond strong enough to make Emma kill anyone for her.

Also the "monster in the softwere" gig is rather bad when you don't give me a solid monster. What is Katie, why is it there, what drives it? I need to know to bother with caring.