Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24490614-20141027025622/@comment-25585263-20141027031557

Really intresting, I want to see what happens next lol, I personally think you could go ahead and sumbit this no problem, it'd even make a great sequel.

Oh, and since you're a fan of Sci-Fi, I wrote a pasta called Ocean Skies, if you feel like reading something short.