Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27838637-20160707143147/@comment-27838637-20160708144003

Thankyou very much for the critique. This story has been a nightmare to create and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

This is quite short in comparison to Please Be Careful, and I was worried that the pacing would have been too fast. I could work in a few paragraphs from my old drafts if you think it would help?

Also, I was worried that the killer would have been too unlikeable. I tried to make him out to be a bit of a bad-ass, and in my mind his actions were justified. What did you think of the killer and his motivations?

And speaking of motivations, did you find the twist at the end to be surprising at all (even though you already knew it was coming)? I tried to make the motive more original than the typical; 'they were rapists', or 'they were murderers'.

Sorry for all the questions, I'm just doubting my work a bit too much (mainly due to how many rewrites the concept has had) and wanted confirmation/opinions on these few points.

I'm not busy tomorrow so I'll definitely give your story a read and review!

A_O.