Talk:Seaton's Aunt/@comment-24532332-20140318192342

I liked the style this was written in; I couldn't stop reading. However, although there was a creepy and offputting vibe, I feel it never crescendoed. I feel there could definitely be more put in - it's almost as if there is as much left out as written in. That may have been the intent, but as a reader, I wish to know more of what happened. What exactly befell poor Arthur? Was his aunt as merciless as he said? I would be thrilled if there were a sequel of sorts.

Once again, wonderful writing. I just wish there had been more for the ending.