Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25024572-20161221194340/@comment-25024572-20161221195412

Shadowswimmer77 wrote: This was actually rather entertaining. You won't be able to post it here,Jeff stories are strictly off limits and are not up for spinoff appeal. However, you should definitely put it up over on spin pasta.

As for the story itself,other than some grammatical errors I thought it worked well. The jokes were pretty good, although at times I thought I might have stumbled onto the set of the next Deadpool movie. I any event though, job well done. Thanks!

Out of curiosity, what grammatical errors were there?