Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31375374-20170223144849

Year 2746

It took em 50 years of research, 150 years of building it. But they did it. After more than 200 years of work, we, the human kind, had a way of transporting humans through the whole universe. They’ve created a machine that warped space time, which allowed for the traveling through dimensions. Dimensional fucking traveling. Nobody expected that it was possible, but they did it.

We found civilizations, we founded new colonies, we swapped techs with the new civilizations. With the dimensional traveling, new problems rose. Intergalactic crime. That’s where I come in. My name is Steven. I am what you call an intergalactic detective, police officer, what you want to call it. My job is to solve crimes in the whole universe.

Lately, there has been a murder spree of 5 kills. The details are listed down below.

We found the body at 7am. There was blood everywhere. On the street, on the walls, hell, the blood was spread out over the whole fucking alley. It was gruesome. We couldn’t recognize the body, there was no wallet, nothing. We had no way of knowing who it was. Only thing we knew was that it was a beggar, someone who lived on the street that’s it.

The first clue came after a couple hours. A big ‘’A’’, painted with blood on a car down the road. After that we found an I.D. The name of the beggar was Audry. Last name unknown.

A couple days later, I was asked to describe the crime scene. ‘’Blood, blood everywhere’’, I said. ‘’His heart lay a couple meters away from him, his intestines were wrapped around what was left of his neck’’. ‘’His skull was smashed in, probably with a hammer. ‘’His eyeballs lay in the palm of his hands… At Least 2 meters away from the rest of his arm’’. It was the most gruesome crime scene I’ve ever seen, and I’ve seen a lot of crime scenes.

The beggar was the first of five.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">The second kill was in the Alpha Centauri System, you know, with the triple suns.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">The victim was hanging from a meat hook. The hook was inserted in her… anus. Her legs were dangling from a bit of flesh. Her head was all fucked up. Her hair was wrapped around her neck, tightly. We suspect that the cause of death was from a stab through her heart, but looking at her body.. Everything is fucked up. Yet again was blood sprayed around the whole alley. We found her I.D. in her stomach. Her name was Ophelia. Last name unknown.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Since I need to list everything that we saw at the crimescene… Here it is:

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Her hair was wrapped around her neck. The meat hook was inserted in her anus, which was dangling from a rope tied to a wooden beam. Her legs were dangling from a bit of flesh. Her heart was pierced with a sharp object, probably a needle. Her arms were stuffed in her boots. Her stomach was opened, her I.D. stuffed inside. Her face was fucked up. We also found, in the mess of blood and intestines, a ‘’O’’, made from blood.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">She was the second.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">We had no clue who the killer was, but it was someone who accessed to a way of teleporting through dimensions, since the first kill was just a couple days before and there is no way that someone can fly 20 light years in a couple days. I asked around a bit at the research facility, at they gave me a huge lead. They were testing dimensional teleporting on animals. Mutated animals, to be precise. One of the mutated animals escaped, a really important one, since he was infused with the teleporting goo stuff. His tracker broke down, so we had no clue where he was. He is our number one suspect.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">The third murder and fourth murders were in the Kepler system. The murderer fused the two bodies together, with a tiny but strong thread. Their I.D.’s lay on a stone, a couple meters away from the bodies. Their names were Helena and Reinard. Last names unknown. They were family. They died hand in hand, literally, since their hands were sown together. The line of thread started at their mouths, and ended at their belly buttons. Again, the legs were torn of, their arms were in a weird position, sown behind the back of of the victims. Cause of death: A huge hole, through their stomachs. This murderer really was creative with his ways of killing and torturing. Blood was everywhere, and again, we found an ‘’H’’ and an ‘’R’’, drawn in blood.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">After a couple days staying in the Kepler system, I went home. I sat down on a chair with everything I had from this case. The first murder on a beggar called Audry. The second, the murder of a maid called Ophelia. The last two murders, on two, what we suspect, 17 years olds, called Helena and Reinard. All four murders had a couple things in common. The letters, drawn in blood. The gruesome murder scene. Legs torn of. All four had pierced hearts and bite marks.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">The letters intrigued me the most. A, O, H, R. I couldn’t form a word from it. I jumped up when I heard my phone ringing. They found a fifth body.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">It took me a couple seconds to travel to the correct system. They found the body in the sewers, or at least, part of the body. We found both legs, with an I.D. in one of the pockets of the pants. Her name was Katie. There were bite marks on the legs, near the thighs. There was no blood at scene, which was weird.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">One of the officers came running from another part of the sewers. They found the rest of the body.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">This time, it was the typical bloody crime scene. Her head was smashed against the side of the sewers. Her heart was inserted in her mouth. Her intestines were wrapped around her neck, and tied to a guard rail. Her fingers were stuffed into her ears, and her arms were inserted in her cut open lungs. Her teeth were smashed out, which was a first timer.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">We still had no clue who the murderer was, and we haven’t found the escaped mutant from the research facility. There was a big ‘’K’’, made from blood, on the side of the sewer. One of the officers went home, after saying he felt like he was watched by something.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Again, I stayed a couple days in the system before returning home. I took all the information I had, and went to the galactic databank. I am almost sure who the murderer was. It all started when the officer said he felt like he was watched. I had this before, a couple years before. Murder spree of 6. At all of the 6 crime scenes officers went home because they felt like they were being watched. A door was slammed shut,  down the hallway. Probably a secretary or something. I searched in the databank for ‘’the invisible killer’’. That’s how we named it. The drawing of him instantly popped up. A dark hooded figure, with red eyes. We had one without the hood. Red eyes, huge grin filled with teeth. His murder spree stopped…  Dammit, this fucking recorder is messing up. He’s close. I know it. I’m fucked. If anyone finds this recorder, my name is Steven. He is ba---.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">They found Steven’s body… Or what was left of it. A big ‘S’’ was drawn on the wall with blood.

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