Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27018401-20150421121313/@comment-26027963-20150428050134

I read it down to the picture, and man, I saw a lot of spacing issues when it comes to slashes, put them like-this, not like- this. A few capitalization issues here and there, like with "Witer- themed", two issues in two words.

Plot- it's a classic, the reason it may have been deleted is because the object following around someone is popular. They may have thought spinoff.

How's that for story improvement advice!?

I hope this story goes far!