Talk:I Am a Big Boy/@comment-26054278-20150212012522

Looking at this story again, I certainly enjoy it quite a bit, but I don't think it is a 10/10. I mean, the idea is interesting, I love the ending, and you certainly seemed to replicate the thoughts and mannerisms of a child rather well. However, I don't feel as though the build-up is particularly spectacular or that intersting. It is still good to read and carries the plot until the final twist hits home, but I don't feel it has that extra push to make this a 10/10 story. 9/10.