Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25305839-20161104031725

A short Creepypasta. Read it and tell me what I should improve, but be nice about. I wanna become a better writer, not kill myself because I'm a bad writer.

Stop fearing the darkness and what lurks in it. People who fear the dark use nightlights which is a waste of electricity and a waste of electricity could result into society collapsing because we run out of energy.

Stop fearing Gays. Their feelings will be hurt and it will want them to get revenge and have a war that's between straight and gays, which will end up with lots of people dying.

Stop fearing spiders. People who are afriad of them would try to kill them all. If they succeed, it will end with bugs and other invertebrates will be all over the place since their are no spiders to eat them. With so many bugs, they will destory our crops and there will be a lack of food for the 7 billion people in the world. Parasitic bugs will kill off our livestock and other domestic animals and disease-filled bugs like mosquitoes will spread deadly diseases, killing off humanity.

Stop fearing mice and rats. Just like spiders, people who fear them will try to kill them all. If they succeed, scientists wouldn't have anyother animals to do experiments on so they can find cures for deadly diseases that could wipe out humanity.

Stop fearing tight, enclosed spaces. If we want more room, we will eventually use up all the land on Earth and all of the ecosystems will be destroyed from the construction of building more bigger houses and buildings. Most of the life on Earth will be extinct. Without the animals and planets, we won't have air, food, clothes, and other vital resources to live. Humanity will be extinct. Also, after all the room being used up on Earth, it will get crowded which will make day-to-day life difficult and if there are still people with claustrophobia in the world while it's crowded, they will panic and go insane and, depending how severe their phobia is, kill themselves to end their agony.

Stop fearing it all! Fearing keeps us alive but trying not to die will kill us or make us go insane. It's time to face your fears! 