Talk:Daddy's Little Princess/@comment-11345660-20160111033818/@comment-11345660-20160111060727

Well, I certainly wouldn't go that far. Different visions are the choices you get at a literary sandwich shop. Without them, reading these stories would get very dry and stale. I'm sure there is a reason there are some stories that are banned on here, because they grew repetative. I think if everyone wrote the same, wouldn't we see the same stuff every time?

I certainly wouldn't call this story dissapointing, I just think a piece of it could be better handled. Other than that and some nitpicks, I think it's terrific!