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If I could just add to no. 6;

It's good to give your readers some idea of what a character looks like, but we don't need to know about every jacket, hoodie, t-shirt, pair of pants, skirt, sock, shoe, bra, earring, necklace, bracelet, ring, broach, hair-tie, and shade of lipstick they wear throughout the pasta. Yes, I'm sure you're dying to show off your fabulous fashion sense, but at the end of the day, readers don't care if Amy was wearing two rings on her left hand, two bangles on her right wrist, a ruby flower choker, diamond stud earrings, and a cute pink sundress unless the items play a significant role in your story.

Other than that, excellent tips.