Board Thread:News and Announcements/@comment-5970395-20130114012413

Okay so this is my first pasta... And I'm plaining on editing it till its perfect obviously I went a little to long and dragged it on and on. I apologies if the site takes it down. Ill post the final story after my girlfriend edits it and I check it. This is just a preview. If you have any suggestions to make it better in anyway please tell me.  