Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24942109-20150719211023/@comment-25037895-20150719215607

Space out the dialogue so two speakers are never in the same paragraph.

""So then please go in the bushes." She said." Dialogue like this should be punctuated with a comma, not a period. Example: "So then please go in the bushes," she said.

"coming-finally". Spacing issue. Parts like this need a space on each side, or an em-dash (—).