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GAMING FAN2 wrote: It is a little scary if you think about it. If a story is good you don't have to think too hard about why it is scary. The only time "you have to think about it" makes a good story is when you come to the realization of something that happened in or at the end of the story.

On top of that, this story is cliches galore.