Talk:The Devil Game/@comment-7673575-20180111082809

For a scare factor, it's pretty moderate. But I'll be damned if this isn't one of the best written texts I've read in my entire 20 years. Putting this under my Suggested Reading list.

Two minor things I dislike about this, though: But that aside, it is a marvelous piece.
 * Luci never tells us how to answer if asked for our full name. I guess I could conjure up an answer that is vague enough, but still correct, but would he consider it correct?
 * As this story uses subtle and cold fear, the second to last line of text is a dead giveaway. If it was kept ambiguous, the entire pasta would be so much better.