Talk:For Love and Hot Chocolate/@comment-24996913-20150126233412

I am so sorry I couldn't review faster. I was extremely busy at the time you requested it, but I'm here now. So let's get to it.

I absolutely loved this from beginning to end. You already know I loved the first installment you wrote, and this ties into perfectly. I didn't find myself getting bored, as I usually do with lengthy stories, and your descriptive work was impressively fitting.

The character development was excellent. Pinky was such a creepy guy from the start, at least to me, and if I were blain I would've shut the door on his face the second he arrived. You made the characters seem so real that I almost felt like I knew blain personally. I always root for the main character, usually, so it was no surprise I was doing the same for mr. Stubborn blain.

I can tell you put a lot of effort in this, and I can say that I see little to no errors grammatically or conceptually. Though Jay did point out the period thing, as I did notice that as I was reading as well.

All in all, another amazing story to add to your collection. Fantastic job!