Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-17834624-20140721040440/@comment-25148755-20140721052216

"I didn't want to continue reading any of the other entries, finding the first one to be fairly boring to begin with from start to finish."...pretty much.

You've got tense issues starting with the very first entry and they continue through a lot of the story. There are multiple logic flaws not the least of which being why a teacher is bothering herself with a computer file a student wordlessly gave her. Also, why does she feel the dread when she's trying to open it?

The way you've broken the story down makes it hard to follow between the narrator talking and the journal entries. Part of that is some weird bold formatting stuff you have going on about halfway in. I honestly have no idea where you are going with this, and I can't say there is anything in it yet that is particularly scary or disturbing.

I do like the title though.