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I was citing it as a different method to approaching the story. You seem to waver between a dry opening and a more personal experience. Neither of which you really do effectively as it feels more like you're trying for either a factual story or a personal experience. That one is more of a factual introduction to BEK whereas the others I cited are more personal experiences.

As for it seeming like it was information they picked up from a radio station, I would be careful about that statement as your encounter follows the same trajectory as the multiple other ones that are present on the site. Wouldn't it theory weaken your story the fact that I could listen to it on a late night radio station or read it off of Reddit without there being anything to draw me in (like a more visceral/emotional depiction)? You can claim it's true, but without having the story being effectively told, it's going to get lumped in with the other ones as something you picked up off of Strange Matters.