Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25557766-20141019161136/@comment-25546552-20141019203630

I feel like if your gonna get any feedback about this it would say "It's to cliche".

I will admit I was thinking that whilst reading, but I think sometimes its okay.

Even after saying that though, I did enjoy reading it. Although I always say that, so someone else may come with a much harsher outlook. But I think a harsher critique helps a lot more then a nicer one in most cases.