Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25333848-20140825231639/@comment-3999760-20140830055059

Alright, time for the review.

This pasta appears to be well-written with a brilliant flow to it. I can't judge too much since this is only the first few parts, but the plot seems to solid so far. You seem to have a good build up, and I'll like to see where you take the story from here. Once again, I can't really add too much input because of these are the first parts, but it seems to be well-written with a potential of an interesting plot.