Talk:The Purse/@comment-10950063-20131118164143

Have her explaining it's a purse done in dialogue. Actually, you might want to make the whole conversation into dialogue. It's more engaging than just telling us what was said and it can provide a better build. Build is important and there's not much to this story. It's pretty much: Here's a lady, oh, she's a psycho. I would suggest having it be a conversation, but don't have the narrator actually say baby until the end. At baby, you can do the reveal. This would let the reader get a little more drawn in.