Talk:Rainbow Factory/@comment-9532929-20130908031521

Dayum. This Fan Fic. Was....AMAZING. I really loved the ending. But it also made me cry. I also like how bits of the song are scattered around the fan fic. Haha. But anyway. To the things I did not like...Why did Rainbow Dash not care? She almost finished a perfect sentence..But then she had to remember her anger..I wanted to know the rest...But anyways...Its spelled O'Ryan. Originally how it was said. So.. I might be wrong though. But anywho....My vote would be 8 out of 10. Nicely done.