Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20190526125216/@comment-26475800-20190527015458

Let's break down this reply.

"I did corrected and they all tell me the same thing atleast some tell me where  I should not put much ponctiation."

I did is a complete thought, so it could use a period or comma after it.

Corrected is just thrown in there, it is out of the blue. What did you correct? Is this part of the I did statement before? If so it wouldn't be corrected, it would be correct it. If you're referencing something that was said in a comment above, maybe make that known to who you're talking to.

Who is they? Is it the sites that say where the errors are? I doubt that any of those sites are saying that you're using too much ponctiation, whatever that is. Sorry, that was a little mean, but you're arguing with the points that were mentioned to help you, so my patience is a little slim for helping you with this story now.

"And I don't were its not too much ponctuation in La Bruja  yes its a good story, but  still a lot of ponctuation."

What don't you? Again, we don't have any idea what you're talking about and it should have a comma or a period after that. Unless you're missing some words there. There should be a period after La Bruja, that much is for sure. Yes should be capitalized, because it's the start of a new sentence.

Let me break this down a little more for you so you can read your story as it is written and see where the problems are for yourself. Read it out loud, that way you can hear where the problems are and if you still don't see anything wrong with the way it is written above, I don't know what I can do to help you. So what you want to do is keep reading, don't stop or pause until you come to a period or a comma. A comma is a perfect place to get a breath, and a period is a full stop. Read it like it is written and see if you have any trouble with making sense of what is written.

If you can read that, and still don't think that there is any trouble with the punctuation, than I don't know how else to explain it to you. Editing and proofreading are some of the most important parts of writing. As someone who used to hate editing and proofreading, I've come to learn how helpful they can be. A simple proofread of this story could save a bunch of time and make it easier to actually get a real review of it.