Talk:Penny for the Guy/@comment-27707170-20170312234827

The fact he didn't check his glove compartment immediately is kind of dumb. I get that he assumed that it was food, but if a new gang was emerging in my neighborhood, and my dog, along with a lot of others people's dogs, went missing, I would check it as soon as I smelled it. I mean, I don't like the Guy Fawkes masks in the first place. The guy was a terrorist trying to obliterate the British government because of religious reasons. He shouldn't be looked up to. Beyond that, what was the connection the killer had to the main character? It seems like he was the main target (since the killer slaughtered his dog and put it in his glove compartment, tagged his house, constantly stalked him, killed a girl he was interested in, and killed his neighbors), but the guy isn't curious about who the killer is after he died, or even that the body disappeared. I'd be extremely paranoid that I was in constant danger. So this story was decent, but there were some holes in it. 6/10