Talk:It Came from Blood Point Road/@comment-24480175-20140319011133

This story does have punctuation problems, which I can fix.

As for the story itself, it's a good idea, but I feel that it wasn't executed very well. You can tell when you read this story that it has more potential. Not that this is bad by any means, but it felt rushed sometimes, especially the ending. However, with some more details and grammatical improvement, this could be a very good story.