Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20190418144550/@comment-35711173-20190420005706

Solonor1987,

This story isn't ready to be published. You have to accept that and correct those issues.

Most of your story is composed of run-on sentences. You need to learn how to punctuate sentences and break them up. I have shown you what http://www.scribens.com finds.



Computer tools can tell you when something is probably wrong. They are limited in making it correct because the computer program doesn't understand what your story is about. You as the author need to learn the rules on how to craft an English sentence. Once you have done your best to fix the problems, use the tools to check your work. Keep on correcting your work until the web sites like scribens and grammarly report that your story is without issues.

Even after they get it to thinking the story is clean, then you need to carefully read the story and make sure it is correct.

Below is a very good link. Please read it, understand it and use it to correct your story.

https://thinkwritten.com/punctuating-dialogue/