Talk:Half-Baked Sun Cakes/@comment-20042001-20130917205556

I would like to take this moment to thank you. This is the one creepypasta I have commented on so far that showed none of the glaring errors of many I have read. The feeling that something's wrong persists, without escalating to the point of going too far.

This is just wonderfully subtle, a real breath of fresh air with all of these bloody, gory, mass-killing creepypastas. I adore what you did here, making it seem like an episode simply missing most of the ponies, but the Spike doll hinting at something more. Little touches like the stove not lighting and Twilight acting as if it had also point at the truth very nicely.

The story isn't gross-out scary like so many others, this is just great, continuous uneasiness. An air of off-ness, something's wrong but not in that obvious "Hey let me shove this horror into your face" way.

The only part I disliked about this was the song, which kind of confused me with its placement. Just... Ave Maria? Wasn't this supposed to be about Twilight in an abandoned Equestria?

Honestly, I wish I could say everything I liked about this story, as I really just absolutely adore it, but it'd probably take up too much space.