Talk:The Sweeping/@comment-3508932-20140929065224

At first I thought you were doing a lame copy of The Disappearance of Ashley, Kansas. I was mildly disappointed. Then the phenomenon that engulfed the town merely became a plot device. It was a clever twist on something that is perceived as a classic on here. I applaud that you made humans be the real horror in this story, rather than some unexplained weather occurence.

I was partially reminded of Stephen King's Under the Dome.

9/10