Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33077235-20180926023609/@comment-33077235-20180926170442

DrBobSmith wrote: Simon,

Forget this one. Go back to Mr. Demise. That story idea could be worked into something interesting if you put in the necessary effort.

The summation by Ned Wolfkin and Resdraon on Dream n Play is correct. The story would get deleted very, very quickly and I don't think it is salvageable. Mr. Demise shows some promise. This one looks just like so many other stories we see that are marked for deletion within minutes and are gone off the wiki within an hour or two.

Dr. Bob O thx I did right abandoning it long ago Im still looking for how to improve Mr. Demise