Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25944865-20141231025534/@comment-25944865-20150102001004

I think it's important to show how neurotic and on-edge the character is throughout, because it makes you wonder if his mind's all there to begin with, chip or no chip. Which it isn't. Which is why he still hears it even after he rips it out. There wasn't anything wrong with it.