Talk:The Girl in the Blue Dress/@comment-24618087-20140320170957/@comment-25326117-20140913103834

This story also has some grammar issues, which made it somewhat confusing to understand.

I was at least expecting Phil to die in his sleep since the ghost seemed to imply it with what she said to Gavin in the dream. Also, why would the girl want the protagonist to have sex with her? I mean, didn't she want to kill Gavin the protagonist?

I am glad that I am not the only one that found flaws within this creepypasta.