Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25558572-20140731084242/@comment-25558572-20140801011340

Thanks. There is a lot of prhasing here I need to fix. Sadly, I don't think there is a way for me to make this any more original, although I guess making the boy's identity as a ghost more subtle would help. I plan on posting this, but not before I do a lot of editing.