Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37090617-20181003215425/@comment-9041013-20181004004902

Hmmm so a hacked haunted version of a game? cute, adds some flavor to it, still not realistic enough. How did he do it through a game? That's where it flops. You need to elaborate on all that dark web jazz. I suggest longer interaction between the characters and more of a back story to the game. Spread it over a few game sessions, make the game playable and somewhat attractive etc etc

Also your English needs a whole lot of work, a WHOLE LOT of work