Talk:Emily My Love/@comment-5410845-20160411233439

It's a good story, but there are a few things I find iffy about it. One, why is the man's name Griffin? Two, why didn't Alex immediately call the police when he found Griffin? There are those two questions along with a few unnecessary sentences. EX: ""Hey, I'm Alex, just moved in a month ago." I don't like my real name, so I don't really tell it to anyone, Alex is my middle name."

Overall, a 7/10.