Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31342130-20180403022800/@comment-28428152-20180403035141

It needs to be heavily proof-read. I apologize, but it's very generic, I feel like I've read it a thousand times before. The whole lost-episode genre has been overplayed, and unless you add a very fresh spin on it, then it's just slight variations of the same formulas. What you could do is maybe try to make the story about something, send some kind of message and using the imagery as a metaphore for the message or even messages. Or just some other variation that makes it stand out from the thousands of others