Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24651624-20150504004551/@comment-24651624-20150507030932

well thanks for the help and i'm doing my best. I wrote it as pet saves owner thing especially with a cat to try to make it different than most stories. most have them killed or useless, both of which I deplore. I don't like stories with dead animals used as shock factor it rubs me the wrong way.

I cat work on it, it just might take awhile. researching egyptian cat mythology is a hard process. not much is written about it which makes it harder.

yes, I do like your suggestions they're helpful. as for the grammar thing I did my best for now. I wish i had a beta reader (editor) and wordpad hates my father's computer so i'd probably have to use a different program aside from notepad. thanks again.