Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24450775-20150515141643/@comment-26326346-20150515162254

I like it and I didn't see any grammatical errors. The thing at the end was really creative. I wonder if the question it posed was polite or one filled with malice (a hidden meaning). I wonder where the main character heard the whumping sounds before?

Great job! Keep up the good work :)