Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26107461-20160628062327

"Come on! it's time to go!" said Requis as he finishes putting equipment in the car. Requis; 27, athletic, strong, and smart. Requis was often bossy; he often pestered his friend Ryan. Ryan; 23, short, stocky, clumsy. "Hold on let me get something!" said Ryan. Ryan quickly walked up the stairs of his home to retrieve his combat knife. "Since we're going hunting I figured we'd need this for emergency use" said Ryan. "That would be a wise idea, now get your ass in the car!" said Requis. Ryan and Requis had been friends since they were toddlers. Nothing would ever break the bond that they had. The two friends were going deep into their local woods to hunt for game. So they got in the car and set out for their destination.

When they arrived at the entrance of the woods they noticed something new; the area was less packed than usual. "Well thats strange, there are usually a lot of people here." said Requis. "Hell, that's more game for us then!" said a cheerful Ryan. The both of them drove to a lesser known spot in the woods. The area they were in did not have much room for the car. So they decided to leave it near the entrance. They both set up camp, got their rifles, and went out to hunt. They both figured it would be good to stick together while hunting.

Ryan and Requis both crouch behind a large rock. Requis peeks around with his gun ready. Ryan spectates Requis. They see a large brown elk in the distance. "Ain't that a beauty." whispered Ryan. Requis takes aim with his rifle and holds his breath. He fires the weapon and gets a clean shot at the elk. The bullet rips through the elks flesh and into it's heart, killing it instantly. The boys get up and cheer for their success. They go to where the elk was and drag it to camp. "We gotta go get me a head for my wall now!" said Ryan. "Don't you think we should wait until tomorrow? It's starting to get a little dark." said Requis. "I think we still have time. If we make it quick." said Ryan. " Go on your own, I'll stay and start up the fire" Requis said. Ryan walked back to where they originally were and could not find any game. He decided to walk deeper into the woods in search for game.

When Ryan got really deep in, he heard a sound. Something was moving around not to far away from him. He crouched down and listened carefully for any more sounds. As he did this he heard one to his far left. It was the sound of crunching leaves. Ryan turned around slowly and raised his gun in the darkness. The creature looked like a very large elk. It was hard to see in the darkness. Ryan takes aim and fires at the thing. When he shoots at it, it lets out a skin crawling scream. The shriek was a deep tone and sounded like it was in anguish. Ryan takes another shot at the thing and the screams continue. Ryan becomes horribly frightened at the sound it was making so he flees back to camp. "Requis! Requis!" Ryan shouted as he made it back to camp. "What?! What's the matter!?" a worried Requis says. "I think I shot at a bear of some sorts! The thing was throwin a fit and screamin!" says a petrified Ryan. "It was unlike any bear I have ever heard!" says Ryan. Requis looks around and see's nothing in the darkness. The darkness grows around them. "Listen it is real dark out here. You might just be tired or something." Requis says concerned. "Lets just get some sleep alright.." Ryan looks around, and hears nothing. "Alright" Ryan says.

Ryan tosses and turns in his sleeping bag thinking about what he heard earlier in the night. The scream echoing in his head makes him shiver with immense fear and anxiety. Suddenly,  he sees a very large figure pass by his tent. When he sees this he almost starts to panic, but he does not want the thing to hear him. Then he realises the thing went over to Requis's tent. A loud, deep, hoarse roar is heard. Ryan's blood starts to boil as he hears Requis start screaming in his tent. Ryan cannot let Requis die! Ryan musters up the courage to race out his tent with his rifle. Ryan sees the creature tearing apart Requis's tent. The creature is 10 feet tall, stands on 8 legs that are bent out of proportions, It's body is covered in dark thick fur, and its staring directly Ryan. Ryan pisses himself in utter fear as he feels his heart stop beating. He starts shooting at the thing and it let's out that scream again. The creature finishes off what is left of Requis and his tent and charges and full speed at Ryan. 