Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27029037-20150929163320/@comment-26007602-20150929205800

Hey, just a heads up, this story violates the "No Spinoff" rule, and will certainly be deleted here. You can post it on spinpasta I believe, but you can't post any FNaF stories here unless you make a spinoff appeal (which in this story's current state, will be denied).

Structurally, the story has issues. Grammar is lacking, the story lacks any real build up to the finale, and makes little sense. I advise if you want to write spinoffs, to write them in a way so that people unfamiliar to the content can understand them. Newcomers won't understand any of the animatronics as you don't describe them in the least and will be sorely confused.