Talk:Rainbow Factory/@comment-10690258-20140609181546

This is AMAZING. It has emotion, it has horror, and it makes so much sense. I can't see any plotholes, but that may be because I don't watch my little pony. One or two grammar mistakes, and it's sometimes confusing wether some of them are male or female, but other than that it is one of the best looking creepypastas in terms of writing. The only thing that can be considered a "mistake" can be frogiven, as it is probably a confusion: it is NEVER good to start the story with the big creepy thing, and it is reccomended to build up for the scary point to make it as good as possible, but this story right here seems to wait a liiiiiiiiittle too much to get to the stuff that puts "creepy" in "creepypasta". But this story is so long and so impossibly welll-written, that I'm not so sure if you can consider it a creepypasta, and the mistake mentioned before mainly applies to that category. As a story, and nothing else, this is almost flawless. I reccomend this to anyone who enjoys a good scary read. And it's probably even scarier for a true brony.

9.9/10

P.S.: This is obviusly better than Cupcackes, as the pinkie pie creepypasta relies way to much on gore, and it actually doesn't have anything else. Read the second sentence in this comment to see why I totally prefer Rainbow Factory over Cupcackes. The latter still isn't bad though.