Talk:Cousin Tommy/@comment-24513095-20140106155212

Strangely I felt the opposite of CrashingCymbal. It did have a really strong plot-thread nearly from the beginning, but at the end it seemed to fall a bit flat without much explanation of what had happened. I am aware that giving the reader a sense that something big happened, but not going into details, I'm aware this is a thing, but it is not a thing I am keen on, it's almost like saying the author couldn't think exactly how to end it! (Not trying to be horrible, but just saying that this is the case for many many stories, on here, and otherwise)