Talk:This Room Is Always the Hottest/@comment-25941663-20150127112501/@comment-26036894-20150127150145

Thanks for that, I actually had a lot of problems uploading this since it was my first time using wiki pages, so if some words here and there got cut, that's why. It was supposed to be protecting him, so i'll probably re-edit the wording in the future.

I had a few ideas for the ending, but everything I came up with was just felt even more cliche and unoriginal or just ruined the build up I tried to get going. Giving the second creature coming at the narrator a face, or a figure, just felt like it took everything away that I tried to make unique about this story, but thanks for the commentary it's greatly appreciated and hopefully the next few things I post will be better. I'm going to play around with these templates some more too.