Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5101683-20180722190535/@comment-35711173-20180723044624

The first two points are definitely true. The paragraphs are so long it is difficult to read the story. A ferret is smaller than a house cat.

I think you are underestimating the third problem. Yes, you can find and fix the problems but there are dozens of problems, perhaps a hundred. Once you know how to fix those specific problem spotted by Grammarly, you need to move onto other issues. Your grammar is not that bad but you use a lot of "filler" words without meaning. Your sentences are long and aren't varied in length, leading to boredom by the readers. I'd be careful with the adverbs outside of dialogue. I see too many. I spot capitalization errors as well.

You need to edit the story down. It moves really slowly. Doing this will fix many of the other issues too.