Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25270738-20140926094606

i need some help english is not my first language so my pasta is not very good please help

this is a true story about me. one night when i was up late reading creepypasta my power went out so i decided to go to sleep. i read creepypasta all the time so i am never bothered by it but for some reason i could not sleep to this day i don't know why i know it is not because of the stories but i felt scared and could not sleep i sat up all night. when the sun came up the power came back on so i went to the kitchen and made myself some eggs. all day i could not figure out why i couldn't sleep the night befor. that night instead of reading i just went to bed. again i could not sleep. i just layed in bed staring at the walls and the ceiling. not knowing what to do i looked on google to see if i could find help sleeping right as i was about to click a link the power went out again.i was worried i just set in the dark not able to sleep not wanting to move. this went on for about three more days.

finally i asked my mom to take me to the hospital. as we were driving i saw something weird there was a man standing on the sidewalk just looking at me. i just thought i was seeing things due to the lack of sleep. at the hospital the doctor said i was fine and he had no idea why i could not sleep he had given me some sleeping pills and said not to take more than one a day. there was something odd about this man he looked just like the man on the sidewalk the way he looked at me. his eyes were brown and he had this weird smile like he was glad i couldn't sleep. as we were driving home i did not see the man. i dont know why but for some reason i felt sad he was not there like i missed him i don't know what it was but i felt sad. that night i went to my room and took one pill as the doctor had instructed as i lay in bed hoping it would work i felt something in the dark like someone was there watching me. after an hour i fell asleep.

i had a dream, well i think it was a dream. that i was in bed unable to move but i was not alone there were a few other people around me and that man was standing in the room just laughing and looking at us like he was happy we were stuck here and then one of the people around me said something that to this day haunts me at night he said "we are the sleepless bodys" and then another person started and another until thea all were saying it even i was saying it. "we are the sleepless bodies, we are the sleepless bodies" over and over for what felt like days. than everything went to black and i woke up. i layed in my bed for hours just thinking i have no idea what happened if it was a dream or not. my mom came into the room and asked if i was ok before i could answer she left just left without saying a word. i got out of bed and walked to the living room and saw him the man sitting on the couch but he was the doctor that gave my pills. he looked at me and smiled as he said"how did you sleep?" i looked at him for a minute before saying "fine i feel a bit drowsy but feel a lot better than not sleeping. may i ask why you are here and how you know where i live?" it was just then i notest no one was in the house but me and him and he said"are you not happy to see me? i thought after last night you would be at least happy to move and not be saying that same thing over and over."i just stood there in shock not knowing what to say or do i was scared.

all i remember after that is waking up in the hospital in an empty room all alone. the door opened and a doctor walked in not the same one thank god but he seemed nice he told me i passed in my house in a coma like state for three days due to not sleeping for so long. he said i was going to stay there for a few days to monitor me. to this day i can't tell if it was a dream or not. after i was let out the doctor gave me some pills i never took them i was am to afraid. since that night there are some days that i wake up and can't move like my brain is awake but my body is not i have no idea what it is or what to do all i know is we are the sleepless bodies. 