Talk:20 Questions/@comment-25471033-20180103202048

One thing that I've come to learn in my class and also through extensively reading these creepypastas is that letting the narrator die at the end is basically just letting them go too easy. Make them suffer, make this guy not only terrified, but make it something like eternal damnation (that's kind of too much, but you get what I'm coming from). Or, as Lizedits said, make the narrator be in third person, that way it makes sense if the protagonist dies. But in my opinion, still don't kill him, again, make him suffer. In the end though, this is a terrifying concept and even though I would never click on a random pop-up, this shows that you should never do just that because it could be death trying to devour you. 7/10