Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24841732-20141010150639/@comment-25226524-20141011154326

"... too much description can ruin a story." Of course it can, just like not enough can (usually more so than too much). I think you're being far too subjective with your view of the story. I understand that you like it, and that's great, but he asked for advice, so I gave it. I think the story is pretty good as well, but I gave him my thoughts on where I felt he needed to improve, it wasn't an attack. My first comment wasn't directed at your comment, it was directed at the story, so there's no need to take offense. We can disagree on this, it's honestly not a big deal.

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