Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24779263-20140405184534/@comment-24841494-20140407124108

Arrogant-Bandit wrote: Hi GraydonL,

First, thanks for your reply. I'll certainly read, edit and extend my pasta with your comments in mind. At first I wanted to add more detail and descriptions but was afraid it would drag the story out, so it's good to hear it might not be a bad idea to still add some of it.

Second, sorry about the "dickish" post made by myself, about myself. Chalk it up as a bit of uncertainty mixed with impatience >_< (I can delte it, but then I don't know if your quote post would be coming "out of the blue" all of a sudden)

Again thanks for the recommendations, they are appreciated. =)  Wow, I feel stupid. I thought that was someone else. lel. I can't wait too see the updated story though, it was definitely site worthy. Believe it or not, the end actually sent a shiver down my spine, which is rare since I have been so desensitized, even rarer for a gamepasta to cause it.