Talk:The Specter at the Feast/@comment-4849011-20170816155358

I like the description of the nightmares and their effects. It makes it relatable and realistic (which makes sense considering the story was influenced by actual nightmares). I also think it's great that we got some more of Kes's backstory. In comparing this to the original I noticed some changes to the text. For instance, the original had the line, "She quickly added, 'Wow, you people are really nice! A welcoming party in my honor? I thought that was only for veterans and people who did great things like winning Tour du Faerie or climbing to the top of Mt. Ulinshan,'" while this version has the line, "I quickly added, 'Wow, you people are really nice! A welcoming party in my honor? I thought that was only for veterans and people who did great things like winning Tour de France or climbing to the top of Mt. Blanc.'"  Was this to move this to more of a "real-world" setting? I'm not complaining or anything, just noting the changes.