Talk:Tobit: Theory of Two/@comment-25941663-20150526145322

That "The Devil Tobit of Antarctica".

I liked how you managed to put so much 'happening' in this pasta. Generally, having that many points of interest confuses the reader, but this wasn't the case here. Well done.

I also loved how Derrick was portrayed here. I like how his confidence leads him to his doom, it makes for a very entertaining/interesting read.

Allens turned out to be a much more vital character that I thought he would be. That was a nice surprise.

I don't have much more to say. This was a very fascinating read. Looking forward to the next installment.