Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25148755-20140718050027/@comment-25197543-20140719024958

I like this. I like the idea behind it, and it's one of those great creepypasta endings I always love that hints what you think didn't happen actually did.

Personally, I think the pregnancy scene is just little bit rushed, like she blurts it out too quickly. I think you could extend that just a little bit longer. Otherwise, it's pretty good.