Talk:Vivid/@comment-5733573-20180905053607/@comment-36393004-20180905150930

The premise for this story centered around the dream involving the man almost shooting his son. I actually had a dream just like that, it scared me to death. When thinking of a story, this dream came to mind. I wondered how aweful it would be if a dream such as that were to come true. The rest was built around that concept.

I understand your concern though. He showed no reason he wanted to hurt his family, but the point I tried to make is that he had no control. Maybe I should have written that differently to make it less confusing. Maybe have him wake up after the event had already happened. I can see where that would lose some people.

I will also look at my paragraph and sentence structuring. I had a coworker look over this and fix some of my earlier problems before posting this.