Talk:Project Nexus V1/@comment-5101683-20160428234035/@comment-5101683-20160428235702

However, I have to add that you never mention music until the end of the story.

I usually like stories where almost nothing is explained. But here, you haven't given us any actual traits to like about in the characters. We don't know how they came here, everyone acts as a kind of placeholder (except the narrator), and the narrator doesn't say anything about himself. The reason I say all this is because I just realized that this is the first version, and this is still okay.

I wish you luck for V2.