Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4499225-20150301064232/@comment-26141044-20150301064807

There is no story here, I see nothing. Even as a micropasta, a guy talking about "his misery and wishing it would go away" isn't a strong enough pillar to support a storyline. If this is just the START of a story, then forget everything I just said and continue writing. But considering that this seems like one story, I can't even give it a rating because there is hardly anything here.