Talk:Blacking Out/@comment-43788753-20200206171350

I like the story, it is a good one, but maybe you should have someone really close to him, or the only person who cared about him get killed off, I feel that if you kill off someone really close to the main character it will really mess him up badly, and don't use blackouts as a way for him to hurt someone. You should give him some serious anger issues or really bad bi-polar, have him be a sweet and good person and when the close person dies, he changes completely into someone who doesn't care about anything but that person he was close with. Have some family members hate him and only care about him after he dies. I'm super sorry if this doesn't make any sense to you but I think it might help a little bit. Again, my apologies if this comes off as rude to you. But keep up the good work dude! (or ma'am, not gonna assume)