Talk:Conquest/@comment-5733573-20180818052323/@comment-9041013-20180818122528

Well admittedly, poetry isn't my usual cup of tea, so there's that.

First off, thanks for pointing out the specific location of the word "Atop", I did fix that.

Also, I simply found the part about individual lines being not particularly poetic funny, not the whole critique. Mostly because it's about as vogue as you can get. I mean, I don't find Judah Halevi's twelve century poem "My Heart Is In The East" to be very poetic, at all. I mean it's awfully short and barely has space for a rhythm at all, but here we are, almost nine hundred years after it was written, still reciting this poem. So there's that.

As for me being insecure, I wouldn't post it if I were, would I? A bunch of people have drawer literature they'd never share out of the fear of being criticized. I could also delete it now that you mention how it's not good in your eyes, but I'll keep it at that.