Talk:Date Night/@comment-5733573-20180830014459/@comment-35911608-20180830174301

Thank you for these points. I've changed the areas where the wording was a bit strange to make more sense, and included the woman's interest in kids on her profile.

I decided to keep the part where the man forgets if he mentioned having a kid, as an attempt to be a little misleading and lead the reader down the possibility that she's just a kidnapper, only for it to twist into something worse. I'd like to see what you think.