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You have the freedom to expand on him in whatever way you wish. That means you can delve deeper into things you've already touched upon, or you can better establish any possible "quirks".

Again, the psychological weakness wasn't explored very deeply or well. However, I wouldn't simply expand on that; I would definitely try and flesh him out better. His dialogue, as an example, is fairly generic.

In the scene where he speaks with the leader of the settlement, the settlement leader's tone tells a lot about who he is. The leader, through being kind of passive-aggressive and a little harsh, can be inferred to be decisive and very willing to take risks in order to achieve his goals. Our main character, however, doesn't have any distinctive dialogue. Don't go over the top with it, but perhaps it could help.