Talk:20 Questions/@comment-26508355-20150618103500

Really good story - 8/10. I especialy liked the tad bit of comedy added in just for flavour. I also recently had a nightmare that went something like this so thank Christ I'm not reading this at night. The one major problem that I see a lot is the death of the protagonist. How's he telling his story if he's dead? But I guess you have to use first person because it's relatable. Also, tiny bits of style mess-ups here and there.