Talk:The Lookout Tower/@comment-25170312-20150616000926

This is excellent. I don't usually like these types of pastas but this one was very well done. It could almost be the beginning of a movie. My only complaint is that "Bayne" kind of rhymes with "name", which sounded a little odd when I read it. I think this is just short enough to be a micropasta, which in itself is hard to pull off. Good work!