Talk:Showhouse/@comment-25941663-20150201105420

I liked it. It was an interesting concept -that I don't see very often- and it was executed superbly. As the story went on, I found myself more and more disgusted by the 'crowd' and their atrocious needs. To be honest, I was a bit sympathetic for the admins, although their lack of action was apalling at times.

The scariest about the story is that I can totally see it happening. I am 100% sure that in a similar situation, the internet mobs would behave the exact same way.

Plotwise, the story had some minor issues. For one, I cannot understand why the three contestants accepted to come to the show in the first place. Didn't they know what they were in for? Also, I don't think that the last paragraph (after 'bets are concluded') adds anything to the story. On the contrary, I felt kinda disappointed by the conclusion. I think the story would better off without that part.

Overally, a very well written story. Congratulations.