Talk:The Final Weeknight/@comment-25112232-20140627194042

Very nice follow-up! I like the inclusion of new characters. That really gives more background on who they are and what they've been through when you get to experience them interacting with other humans.

I also very mcuh enjoyed switching the narrative off to another character while still keeping the original main person in there.

I'd say you could go another couple of rounds with this story. Although, I think you could only pull off 1 more character switch if you decided to try that again. After that, you'd need to have something new happen with the main character (rather than them just dissapearing and the scarecrow moving on to another).

Here's to hoping you make another:  9/10