Talk:The Sadness Is Sickening/@comment-25647977-20141114003446/@comment-26522754-20160205202118

I have to agree with you there. Jack the Ripper wasn't killed, his identity was never figured out, and he died by natural causes like TheBloodyAngel said. You could've just made your own character rather than using Jack the Killer and creating false historical references. Plus the end doesn't really make sense since you made it into the hospital and fell at the doors. How did Mr.Crow stab Jack? It was a good read but a few mistakes that could have made it better if not done. 5/10