Talk:Rain Will Surely Fall/@comment-25041416-20140630232726

"Not to mention they try to live multiple realities at the same time and they find themselves trapped in a whole range of metaphysical ridiculous humanity, as they keep tripping on what they’ll never be" This is literally incoherent nonsense. There is...a lot of this in your writing.

I don't mean that there are times when your writing is difficult to parse the way, for example, Kant can be difficult to parse. I mean there are long strings of words posing as sentences that don't mean anything at all when read in the order in which you have assembled them. You ought to consider fixing this.