Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10502460-20190201061914/@comment-9041013-20190201151826

I think this would've been more shocking if we didn't know that Hollywood is full of scumbags who hurt people on the regular.

It's just really horror-feeling inducing as it is, I think.

Maybe try to dramitize the story somehow. You can have him play a cruel prank on all those in attendance without hurting the kid involved. For example having him pretend to kidnap the kid and hold him hostage in that room.