Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25074573-20140625152329/@comment-9967354-20140625155944

Vengam wrote: Thank you, I just edited the grammatical errors.

If you want to know my intentions: The Man has fought in WW2 so he's around 90 years old. His House is inhabited by strangers, his wife has vanished and his bank account is blocked. A lot of things have happened that he can't remember. He has altzheimer and should be under medical supervision. The strange man has Monicas eyes so he's probably her son and the protagonists is his father. He is about to shoot his own son.

Wow I am so thick. .-.