Talk:Sonic.exe/@comment-24374167-20140103095211

Where do I even begin with my negative opinions? Time to make a list:

- Improper use of punctuation

- Change's between tenses in time

- General grammar issues

- Spelling Errors

- Standard horror cliches

- Overuse of blood and violence

- Illogical fear from the narrator

- Using the word " Hyper-Realistic"

- Constant references from other games

- Constant use of accurate measures of time ( 25 seconds, 2 minutes, etc.)

- An unsuspensful ending

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In the end this all seemed like a trollpasta or as if it was written by some child with a serious case of the "try-hards". Good to read for a laugh or a drunken read with friends, but not much else.

Final Score: 1/10