Talk:Protector/@comment-25975226-20150116111112/@comment-25975226-20150117004954

Yes, as I said the ending still suits. I could really feel the protagonist's despair when he had to let go, but then also sort of a sweet relief knowing his daughter would still be safe. The 'he's already dead' twist was done well, but I kept expecting the man, as the protagonist watched his daughter ride away in the car, to lower the barrel of the gun, curtly say thank you and then leave, kidnapping his daughter. But this was a really good story. Excellent stuff!