Talk:Orange Tabby/@comment-16747654-20130909232533

This story could certainly use some editing! I like the premise, but there are some inconsistencies. First, you say no one had ever possessed a cat like that, but then you say that is reminded you of your cat. If the implication is that they are the same creature, then there is a problem. Second, you do not use particularly descriptive language in this piece. You have lists to describe the appearance of a few aspects of the story; however, most of the imagery is barren. It was a good attempt, though! Keep working on it, and make sure to open it up to edits so that it can improve over time. Otherwise, it will remain in it's current, seemingly incomplete, state. 2/5