Talk:Forever/@comment-18476824-20140113002125/@comment-24416192-20140113004021

Thanks for the feedback mate!

This is actually the first time I wrote something where there's a central question that is the actual theme of the text (in this case: "What is going on?") without giving an actual answer. I had some trouble with what information I had to/could leave out to make the reader think about it but without leavinf too much out, and I believe that's where I've gone wrong.

Anyway, thanks for the feedback, cheers! :)