Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20150302110545/@comment-24996913-20150302203329

Thanks for reviewing this again. I remember you stating the characters were fleshed out well the first time you reviewed it, but I understand when opinions change once read over a few times. Lily was turning to shield herself from the glass (a compulsory action) even though she had already been cut up a bit. I hope that explains that part a bit more. anyways, thanks for leaving me constructive feedback :)