Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150505190955/@comment-25037895-20150506001625

Can you give me an example of the simple phrasing? I'm a bit unsure of what you mean exactly. Thank you for the feedback and suggestions! I appreciate them :) Here's a few:


 * 1) It was dark and he had only his flashlight and knife to aid him.
 * 2) The police found no signs of a struggle, but came to the conclusion that Kyle and Paul had been kidnapped
 * 3) The beast dropped what it was holding, which hit the ground with a thud, and turned to face Isaac.
 * 4) The fifty-two residents of Stanley were on edge and worried about whether their family would suffer next.