Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33077235-20180922174343/@comment-24101790-20180922180958

Simon Slaughters wrote: EmpyrealInvective wrote: Is there a reason why this is a separate thread? Keep everything condensed into a single post rather than violate the forum rules by flooding it with the same story multiple times.

As for your question, I'd focus on the story issues other users pointed out in the other threads (there's a reason why keeping everything in a single post is best for both authors and reviewers). Someone helped me redo it and I edited it a little more. So that's why it's a new post not trying to break any rules. :) That still doesn't mean that it should take up a new post and knock another story looking for feedback from the 1st page (So far you have four separate threads for this single story and a number of them overlook feedback about the plot itself and its issues). To do some basic math, out of the 25 places on the 1st page, this story takes up 16% with its multiple posts. As you're still requesting feedback, that likely means people trying to help you are going to point out the same issues said in previous posts that you're missing by moving to new threads which means that when you eventually do decide to post (if you've missed the previous advice on the story and other mechanical issues Arc missed), you're likely to have your story deleted again for not meet quality standards.