Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26028829-20150121090823

The Puskia Monster

||Based on the The Rake||

Some group of me and my friends were up camping in the far northwest in canada....we had heard stories of this thing...the puskia monster that has lurked around in the woods its whole life...we have taken caution and decided to take a gun with us...because you never know right? Joe ..he was a unsuspicious guy...the idiot stole my girlfriend a few years ago...now they are married and i honestly dont know why i even bother being friends with him but still..theres something special about him....the road...was very harsh but we still manage to get to the same spot every time we go camping up here...but little did i know it would be the last time i would see my friends....because the second day, 1986 of september the 8th something horrible happend that night....it all started by..noises in the bushes and when kate decided she had to go pee, it all took a step to the worse....she saw a snake and as you should never do...scream and move quickly....it bit her in the leg and she froze, standing there crystal white...little did we know, the snake was not poisonous...but we thought it was....so we rushed to the closest hospital but the way there was full of trees...when we had all gotten back in the car and driven for half an hour something appeared in the road.. i cant remember fully what it was before jack drove the car right off the road because he didn't want to kill the thing as it looked like an in danger animal species...but i was wrong,the second after the crash IT JUMPED ON THE CAR BUT...the strangest thing is...none of us got a clear view on what it was... it tried ripping the cars roof of and jack got the shotgun and rushed out of the car... but it disappeared before he opened the door...he walked a little out from the car and checked the forest line, we all thought it was a really bad choice but at the time we didn't know what to do because we was so scared...we were stranded far up in north canada in the chilling night! Jack got out ,All of us ran out of the car to find jack! we screamed and shouted as loud as we can but..no answer..we tried calling for help, the police, everything! but.. no signals or answers...it was dark...really dark, jack were nowhere to be seen until we heard screams and growls over in the horizon of the road....thats when we all started to think what has really happend...it was all so CLEAR! now we..were hunted...but by what?....we had no idea what to do,there was atleast 2 hours of driving back to civilizati.....(*sounds of screaming people and growls*) oh god....by the lord of the holy christ my friends! i'm alone now...all alone in this gods forsaken nowhere....i don't know what to do...i'm all alone... and that thing is out there eating my friends right now...i managed to slip away into a hole in the ground but i have no idea on how long i will be able to stay alive if it comes to search for me....after a while that felt like forever, i got up from the hole with plants over me and started running deeper in....another stupid decision...i started to get really hungry by now...the good thing is that its soon sun rise...i can see it between the huge pines and cold wind that the sky is yellow.... I continued to run and run and run until i just..fell on my face into the mud....my whole face was covered and i tried taking it away from my eyes, right before it was gone i heard growling behind me ...puskia attacked me from behind and gave me several deep wounds and almost punctured my left kidney....when i saw the opportunity i kicked it away from me and it hit a tree with a broken branch, the branch was sharp..like a spike and went through its chest...its foul screams of evilness and destruction was so horrifying but it just DID NOT WANT TO DIE before it get me..as its victim...its slave...its food...to prevent this i hit its head with a rock so hard i heard cracks come out of his head and it just fell apart....it looked dead to me now so i started screaming as loud as i can for help until it scared the crap out of me and came ...back alive...i realised i had to run away, i found the road again and ran out to it through the bushes in the forest..it was sunrise now and bright...i saw a car coming towards me and i walked right into the road to stop it......it stopped and the driver picked me up and asked what the hell had happened...i just told him to drive...DRIVE you idiot i screamed! ..but it was too late before the puskia came out from the forest and jumped on the car...the driver got panicked and rushed us in 100 miles per hour back to civilization and turned me in to the police...they asked a lot of questions i couldn't answer...so they put me in a jail cell for now until later in case i came up with something...i feel safe....home. the next day they took me to court and i was sentenced for mass murder of my own friends...its unbelievable ...but i guess i guess..i deserved it.... i'm happy again....solitary is my true home...safety...safety............

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