Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33488654-20180916191751/@comment-7064562-20180916211841

TheWizardOfTheWoods wrote: Get the entire chapter down before posting here. Without the full context, we can't offer a ton of advice. Agreed. Like I said, with just a few sentences, saying candle so much really derailed my interest. Posting more of a story might, in general, fix this as an issue. Posting sentence by sentence and making them perfect means little if the glue putting them together doesn't stick.