Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26814449-20150724020710/@comment-26475800-20150724113254

Asuosogait,

If you feel like your story is good enough for this site you can post it and see what happens. I gave you my opinion of things that could be changed and things that were good. I said the way it was written like a journal was good, but if it is a journal don't break the fourth wall which you do with this:

"Guys, I really must tell you what happened after that night."

If it is a blog however, that will work. But if it is a blog you would either already have a fallowing, or you are just wanting to tell what had happened to you, so the intro isn't needed about being brave, IMO.

If you think this story is good enough, or you do some edits with the grammar, which you said you found, than post it. No one can stop you from posting it and I could be wrong and it will be a hit, which I hope it will be for you.

Sorry for where should we start comment, that was harsh, I was having a rather rough day yesterday and took it out on you a little bit. It was uncalled for and I shouldn't have done so. So sorry about that.