Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26158862-20150313022921/@comment-26158862-20150317002439

huh. guess i never thought about that. well i do have some reason as to why there are crappy conclusions and plot holes:

1) i don't exactly know good gas mileage for cars in the 1950s, and I haven't started driving yet so i don't know that much about cars and stuff

2) everything, even if it is excellent, starts out with SOME kind of need of editing (usually)

3) i didn't look far enough into the original story to pick up all the important small details

4) I'm horrible at geography, especially in the East Coast cuz i don't live anywhere near there

5) there were some things i got too lazy to specify apparently

also a side note, if you feel like there are things that need editing, hell, you can do it yourself! i really don't mind people editing my stories as long as they don't create huge-ass plot holes in an already good plot and if they don't completely change the central idea of the story. if this sounded like a lecture, it wasn't supposed to be, by the way.