Talk:No Limits/@comment-4849011-20160809010036

First off, your illustration was great as usual. Second, sometimes it’s hard to distinguish between someone being hospitable and someone trying to fatten you up.

This story was familiar because you later revisited in another story (I won’t say the name because I don’t want to ruin the surprise for those who haven’t read it). Like I said in my review for that one, the story within the story reminded me of the Grimm’s tale "Mother Trudy", and the white weasel was a great choice for the monster's helper because of the symbolism. I didn’t care much for Adrienne, but her vague dreams of grandeur were interesting. Also, I think a lot of us can identify with wanting something so badly (Hopefully none of us will become Garkian chow). You handled the false resolution well. I can see some readers going, “This is no better than ‘It was all just a dream!’ Boo!” and then realizing how it really ended and going, “OH MY GOSH!” The dragon quill was one of those great whimsical touches, and the creepypasta references were nice too (Plus, it’s always good to remind people that Slenderman and Jeff are fake).