Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24935146-20140616161835/@comment-24957984-20140617012436

ScrewYouDinkleberg wrote: However, we're not supposed to be forced to know something about to understand the story as a reader. You should make the story feel like a stand alone reading, not something related to other thing. By the way, the story is rushed, incomplete, and nonsensical. A story that ends with "to be continued" would be deleted by an admin if it was posted as an article. There's a lot of work to do. If you're taking this seriously, I'd recommend you searching about how to write creepypastas by this own wiki, or even a basic story in the internet.