Talk:The Shaman/@comment-25052433-20150520222208

This was enjoyable and set the tone very well for the ending. The twist wasn't quite as sharp as it could have potentially been, but still in all, it was a great pasta. The narration style reminded me almost of a legend being told or perhaps a bit of regional folklore. The tempo was nice and the the length was just about perfect.

Keep writing, this was good.