Talk:A Game of Impostors/@comment-25941663-20160503140903/@comment-26054278-20160504003129

Thank you very much for the feedback.

I did attempt to change some elements of it (make Deobeul's monologues a lot more vague and less clear, add a bit of surrealism at moments), and I do think that it is now (at least a bit) more interesting and less centered on exposition than it previously was.

I actually am a massive fan of The Stanley Parable, and I did want this story to partially have that vibe to it, so I'm glad that it was effective there.

Once again, I am very thankful that you took the time to give your thoughts.