Talk:Dead Animals Have Been Showing Up Near My House Recently/@comment-33470154-20181013232048

This is an example of a blog post pasta done right. The main character is relatable and his actions are sensible in the modern world. You drawing from personal experience made it work really well, as you actually know what you did in a similar situation. The story ends without a definitive fate for the character, leaving us wondering what exactly happened. Did he die? Did he just go to school? Maybe he had a defective CO detector and was actually the one mutilating frogs, but just forgot about it and the story was never updated because he died of CO poisoning! If I had to gripe about one thing, it would be that it occasionally feels a little too polished, for lack of a better word. I wouldn’t expect an average teen on the Internet, especially one freaking out about mutilated small animals, to type everything perfectly and with such good flow.

My final score is 9.75/10. Couldn’t find any glaring flaws, subtle and effective. Good job!