Talk:Professionalism/@comment-28360473-20160602110618

This was a great concept! Original, horrifying, and pretty satisfying as well. However, the story moves quite quickly, and I think that it would've been much stronger as well had more details been presented. I mean considering that this is a story which follows a man's personal struggle dealing with a man who brought such loss to him, how could you not have added details? Information about the narrator and how he felt throughout the story, his late son and what he meant to the narrator, and the killer and who he was. Such details would've made the story far stronger.

Still, great job. Wonderful concept but more details could've brought the story much farther. 7.8/10