Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35559560-20180512013113

I'm writing 96 page comic book as a test bed for future stories and just to get my foot out the door. The good news is I have a solid outline/synopsis of what it's gonna be about, so I don't have writer's block. The BAD news is there are a LOT of sections where I have written the monsters chase the heroes that I feel like it has become tedious. I don't want to give away too much of my story but the idea is that the monsters cannot be hurt by bullets or fire but they can be weakened and repelled by liquid nitrogen.

My point is that I want to know if there are any recommendations for what I can do to make sure the monster chasing sequences do NOT get representative, or if you can give me your two cents could you at LEAST tell me a novel or a short story or ESPECIALLY a creepypasta about a protagonist getting chased by monsters? Not just 2 monsters, but like 5 or at MOST 10. It would REALLY help me out and I can finish it before my self-imposed deadline ends.

Thanks a million! 