Talk:My Mistake/@comment-5733573-20180821183055

I like this quite a lot. It was funny, intriguing, painfully ironic, and highly enjoyable. The narrator is a likable character despite his failings, or perhaps because of them. All in all, good story!

I would have liked some things to be a bit smoother, so an extra proofread would have been a good idea. But even without that, this story was a fun and easy read. Nice work!