Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34541920-20180228234724/@comment-34823985-20180301014151

Quite interesting, but maybe you could give some suggestions on what to talk about. Subjects in Loki's wheel house, so to speak. Also the last paragraph has a redundancy. I think it's a redundancy. "You can talk about anything, for any amount of time." and then "Once you do it one time, you can do it for an indefinite amount of time." I also think you should be clearer on just how dangerous it could be conversing with the Trickster God. Lot's of potential here. Thanks for reviewing my story and good luck.