Talk:Awakening/@comment-9041013-20150418155118

I'm going to pull a Joker and say, why so predictable? It was pretty obvious that in the end someone is going to be raping the narrator, or something of the sort, because a creepypasta just can't end peacefully, can it?

Also I disliked how it all became so illogical at the end, you can never be so terrified you don't notice a duvet being pulled off you and a someone or something large climbing on top of you, on the contrary, he should've noticed that and the ending should've been somewhat more violent or action filled. I personally find it kind of stupid that your whole story is realistic and then there's this completely surreal part where fear works the opposite way it actually does.

And why the hell did Eyeless Jack's picture is here? you don't even connect it in any way to the plot, it feels like he's here to draw the attention. Your story would've been just as good with Jeff the killer or even an unknown killer/assulter.