Talk:Jeff the Killer/@comment-24825685-20140416191911/@comment-24555799-20140428225928

And:

3. Fire dyed his hair.

4. Jeff is a child, and he can somehow kill his family AND escape without getting caught.

5. Jeff became insane from getting mugged TWICE.

6. Vodka and bleach would make your skin red. Not smooth and white. And it wouldn't make you loose your nose.

7. The tense swaps every 2 sencentces.

8. The cops didn't take him in after he killed three people.

Not to bash your opinion, but I didn't think this was a good pasta.