Talk:The Final Fate of Mary Ford/@comment-26030957-20170112182823

Congratulations on winning Spotlighted Pasta!

I love ghost stories, especially ones set in old-timey settings, so it's no wonder I loved this story.

I also appreciated how you have a real story here, in that the narrative documents an arc in the character's development. She begins as a rascally little girl, moves on to a ghost, where she begins to harbor true feelings of hate and maliciousness. Then, in the end, has her great epiphany, her moment of realization, which frees her from her earthly bonds.

Great stuff.