Talk:My Grandfather Suffered from Dementia/@comment-27670640-20160207072306

A pretty good pasta whLich conveys symptoms and the descent of dementia quite well. I think this "Charlie Rosen" being an actual demon was a bit of a typical turn. This demon could of been an onset symptom of dementia as suffered by the narrator.

I believe it would have been much more effective if the narrator was the SON, and not the grandson of the Grandpa. This would of instead turned the generic demon twist into an interesting story about a the end and start of dementia.

Afterthought: Though to be honest the authors connection between DEMENtia and a DEMON is unique.

Well written, believable and original. The demon twist I still see as a flaw but attributing dementia to him is clever enough. Lacks creepiness.

8/10, GREAT pasta.