Talk:Bottoms Up/@comment-7673575-20190703083832

I expected... quite a few things from this one. But not the body horror mixed in with an incredible amount of dark humour. And I'm absolutely loving it.

General Quality - Flawless Victory for this one. Formatted quite well, no errors found. 25/25

Horror Factor - I must say, it's a bit lacking. It's less of a pain and more of that feeling of a stone in your gut. The protagonist's relaxed attitude to him being dead/dying is a bit of a turn off, but at the same time, refreshing. Stil, Raven's explanation of how death works, and the image of a post-skirmish battlefield littered with gore, both give this a decent save. 19/25

Lyrical Interpretation - While I was really more hoping for the battle itself rather than the grim aftermath, I must say, you nailed it like the bloody Romans. 25/25

Entertainment Value - Was I entertained? Absolutely. Like I said in the intro: large part of appeal of this piece is the dark humour (one could almost say gallows humour). I found myself laughing out loud more than once before the grim parts started, and even then, I had a few laughs. Two more things that added to the fun were the authentic British (stars aligned for this one) and the Protagonist and Raven dialoguing like one wasn't eating another's corpse. 25/25

Bonus Points - Protagonist's description of how the army works. +10

Malus Points - The image of a Raven Rimjob is now seared into my mind. -10

Final Score: 94/100