Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27493054-20160608143034

This is a story about a newly-found, classified planet found between the orbit of Earth and Mars, which is getting closer and closer to Earth every time it has completed a full rotation around the Sun, meaning it gets nearer each year.

Since it was just recently discovered, a team of NASA astronauts investigate the storm-ravaged ground of this planet, only to fall into a ravine, weirdly affected by Earth-level gravity. As they try to find a way out through the tunnels inside, they realize they are not alone, as secrets of NASA's previous missions and shocking changes in universal truths unveil themselves, to minds not capable of surviving through these discoveries.

This is my first creepypasta concept, so feedback is appreciated! 