Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26908800-20151022060935/@comment-26908800-20151024045619

Okay, yeah I am going to have to step back from the piece and then re-read it. I've toyed with the idea of a doing a transcript thing, but I am trying to keep the demon extemporaneous and "saucy" (think of the letters serial killers like Jack the Ripper, the Zodiac, and the Son of Sam sent to the press.) I am basing my demonology on the accounts of exorcists and the Roman Ritual, Fallen Angels, more intelligent and contemptuous of men.

As side note: memorandum is supposed to be heavily redacted, then maybe I can work a re-write into three parts: memorandum, transcript of an interview, then finally action.

This is going to be a doozie.