Talk:O Holy Seer/@comment-5306249-20200221033749

Combining the vulnerability of a child with that of restless sleep made for an effective tone. I think the idea of staying faithful to gut instincts was a good inclination towards the tarot theme (self-reflection/stillness), but I also felt it struggled a little to be totally effective. Some of the wording felt out-of-place (saying ‘cool’ as opposed to something setting appropriate), but the effort spent describing events was solid and made me think of my own childhood. This story has a sense of rustic charm to it.

Style: 4/5 Horror: 4/5 Entertainment: 3/5 Theme: 4/5

Total: 15/20