Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30589357-20170216023921/@comment-30589357-20170216025055

EmpyrealInvective wrote: It's because you're using visual editor instead of source mode. These coding errors are present: "“You know I never wanted to move.” " Additionally there's not enough content here to give an adequate review (besides pointing out the punctuation, wording, and capitalization errors) for the story. There's nothing here to even indicate what the premise is going to be or where the horror is going to stem from.

"And I promised your dad  take(to missing before take?) you somewhere far if he got caught."

"penelope (Penelope)said(./,) “and you know what would have happened if we stayed in cali (Cali), right.(?)""

"“You know it was for the best of us, dear.” penelope said" Ok man...Im actually kinda sorry now for wasting your time but thank you for pointing out my errors. Being new to writing, I'm going to take every piece of feedback I get and hopefully that will help me improve.