Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-6822927-20190324172709/@comment-36627132-20190325011610

All the same there is no excuse for disrespect. If his disrespect is because his father is abscent you should make it known rather than making us guess. Actually, until it is mentioned, we have no clue that he is from a single parent home.

And come to think of it, why was Winslow so upset over him seeing all that stuff? That went virtually nowhere. Never mind what he exposes him to later.

The thing is that people come here for stories that creep them out. Morals stories, especially ones that aren't realistic, just aren't scary. In fact, adding a moral makes it less scary.