Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26876932-20161022210702/@comment-25477067-20161024183349

What even is this? The plot is going in so many directions, I can't follow it evem after the second read through. First it's a rather bad minecraft story, but then tapes? And this dude is like terrified by other people? And then Grand Prix? And 17 17 17? All of a sudden, LOST TAPES. Honestly, it's like you can't stay on less than 9 topics at the same time. All of these random people, and you're trying to get at some point with their names, but I've just slogged through so much exposition and plot changes I have no idea whether you told us what's going on or if you are just as confused as the rest of us about the whole thing.

Oh, and both Lost Tapes and Video Game pastas are blacklisted BTW. But I'm not sure if its either, because it CHANGES SO MUCH.