Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26425680-20171129125032/@comment-26425680-20171130100053

Thanks, Vngel, that's exactly the type of feedback I was looking for. You're interpretation about why Corbin gave Charlie the chance to save Magda is correct. He was being punished by the Rule Maker for breaking a rule. It wasn't something he did willingly. I'll change it up a bit to make sure it's clearer. As far a building a collection of Christmas stories goes, I have no plans to return to this universe anytime soon. I was about halfway through figuring out the plot to this story before I even realized that I could build it around the killer from TPBB, so it was one of those things that just sort of worked out that way.