Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4875419-20160513233934

So yeah, 98% of this wiki doesnt even knows that I do exist, but anyways. My name's Julian. That's it, no more info about me, now, directly to the point:

The first time I stood in this page, I got rid of my time quickly by reading many amazing stories that were here (specially The Russian Sleep Experiment and The Theatre, IMO), a lot of time passed and I decided to make the second step on trying to reach my true talent: Writing a Pasta.

So, you must be wondering (or not): ''Oh! What did you write?'' Well.... I ef'd up, I wrote a horribly atrocious pasta that many would think that it was a TrollPasta (which actually wasn't, I wrote it with the knowledge I had, which was, too little), after reading that it was erased, I gave up for a bit and just kept in my actions as a reader and not a writer. Later on (that is, yesterday), I decided to write another story because after hearing some music and reading some occultist stuff, my mind was flowing with ideas. My second official-and-of-course-deleted story was called The Darkest Night, I finally left my spelling mistakes behind (if you saw the horror of a Pasta I did for the first time, you would understand) and I tried to do my best, but I read today that it got deleted, and I'm not even mad, well yeah, I feel a bit decayed and confused, but well, I took my time to read the page that would solve my doubts and, well, I still have doubts. So I read about the Writer's Workshop, a place where you can get tips on how to become a better writer or at least how to write a quality-standard meeting Pasta. Being totally honest, one of my hobbies is to write, and yeah, one of them is in english of course and it sucks (I took the time to read it again and realized that Word's spelling corrector made some kind of a chaos in it). So I've got another idea for a Pasta, but instead of going all fingerhappy on my keyboard and posting something that would look like a ''Guys! I'm being serious'' Joke from 4chan, I've decided to go to this page and ask for help. If you're still reading up to this point and haven't thought that I'm just another wanna-be that will fail, doesnt matters what, then, thank you! You would be one of the few supports I've got.

So, the first thing is on getting tips from many writers of the wiki on how can I make a good story. Yes, I've got the grammar, and even if I do make a mistake, I make sure what did I do wrong and correct it. I've got also a good creativity, but even with that, I do need to read and get some inspiration to write something that doesn't causes you an eyesore. I also take this seriously, when I'm writing, I try to make it as serious as possible, but I get to the point where something would either make the reader to 'facepalm or to simply laugh at the screen and believe I'm being a troll (I was banned once from a forum and its chat by acting as a troll, when I was being totally serious [RP, long story, don't ask]), any other human like me would have thought 'Why do I keep writing on english wikipedias when my mother tongue is Spanish? I could write a good creepypasta on the spanish version of the Creepypasta wiki! thing is, I'm not a big fan of writing a story there, I may try it (maybe today, I have a whole day to do it) and see if I can make the difference, but I do actually love writing in english. It has more of a storytelling ring to it than the spanish language. Anyways, I'm sorry I'm dragging you away with all of this (If I was saying this on real life, 99% of those who are around me would have already told me to shut up). So yeah, In resume, I need tips about everything.

Second (and last) on the list is the new story my mind's brewing. Here I make a question, have you ever played a game called Exmortis? If you have, then I'm telling you first that it is a good game and second that my story will be kinda related to that of Exmortis (PLEASE don't take this as plagiarism or anything like that! I'm taking inspiration from that story to make my own, if you see something similar between the game and the story I may publish someday, dont accuse me of being a plagiarist), I saw some videos of the game (and played it myself a lot) and I've got an idea to write, so you, human who's reading this and has played the game, can you help me with some ideas to prevent plagiarism or copy from the original story but that uses the same theme (Demonic apocalypse). If you don't know Exmortis, then you can help me in two ways:

1. Play the game or read about it OR watch some videos about it. When you've got the idea about it, give me some advice! I'd be very grateful

2. Use your imagination to make something related to Demonic Apocalypse ''or stuff like that. For example: 'And so the plague roared on earth, as the forces of [Demonic prince/lord name] ravaged through earth, erasing any kind of life that they stumbled upon, from a single microscopic life form to any kind of mammal that was unlucky enough to be there. or '[City name] was attacked today, the perpetrators seemed like creatures out of hell itself, the result was the death of more than five hundred citizens in the area, the carnage was profound, as the five hundred corpses found all around [City name] were severely deformed. Some corpses had bit marks, other corpses were totally dismembered, others were found disemboweled and hanged on places no one could have imagined. 

Also, before I forget it, I can get pretty sadistic when it comes to these kind of themes, because, fully honest, no Demonic Apocalypse is going to leave the place intact, I feel that such catastrophe NEEDS to leave a serious scar on the place, and because of that, I kinda get frustated whether the reader may like some gory details or he/she may despise it. Can you help me on that too?

Well, that's all. I thank wholeheartedly to those who help me or took the time to read all of this. Thanks once again and have a good time. Adiós.  