Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25239238-20140731094121/@comment-24381191-20140731112941

Not very well-written. The whole thing's just a wall of text, and it's too short. Kind of boring, honestly. The only part I actually liked was:   The people that you call “insane” are actually the gatekeepers, people who are trapped in this hell, but have broken the veil of Reality. People like me.

You could base an entire pasta around this premise.