Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26069126-20150202192214/@comment-26069126-20150206095411

Thanks for your comments. I will think of a better title. The bad man would be the vampire that visited him one night recently as he only killed his parents a few days ago,  and his age is meant to be a surprise. You don't find out ending or twists to movies until it's over,  such as The Sixth Sense (the only movie I could think of with an ending that you're not supposed to know). Thanks for your overall review though.