Talk:Lost Episodes/@comment-26054278-20150221225325/@comment-26054278-20150226111833

Star Wars Paragraph: We already knew that information before the paragraph. They already explained how good he was at what he did, and the one teen already established that he kind of wanted it to do normal teenage things (ex. Put girls in it).

The B.O. Paragraph: I know, but the reader already knew that from the conversation that happened right before it. We didn't need that paragraph because we already had a conversation and details before it.

The thing about other stories is that while they have that supernatural element in them, they usually do not have plotholes. While some could not take place in reality, the ones that do not usually need to make sense to work. This one has so many problems in it. Do the parents have friends? Apparently not if nobody is checking on them. Also, you can not say it was left by Sid, because if it was just a fake by Sid, then who is paying the electric bill to keep the electricity on?

Autopilot is grounded in reality and could actually happen. Just an example.