Talk:The Winter/Their Apartment/@comment-26030957-20150228032336

Have you been reading Jack Kerouac recently? Very, very beat. Avenging Angel, this might just be one of your best yet: short, tough, very realistic but at the same time very surreal. Dreamlike. As always, I noticed no grammar or punctuation mistakes. If I could offer up one bit of criticism it would be to take out the, "or somewhere near there" after you state the year was 1985. I was just reading somewhere, it escapes me at the moment, that the more precise you are about things, the more universal the story becomes.

And WOW that video. It floored me, bro. Straight floored me.

Excellent work.