Talk:In Your Nightmares I Will Live/@comment-24872430-20190704043651

General Quality - 22/25 - Almost no complaints, just a few word choices that stuck out.

Horror Factor - 20/25 - YES. The story does a great job relaying the emotions of a convict on death row, the horror of not knowing what you're facing, and the fear of your family coming to harm. The latter could have been expanded a bit more, but otherwise, a fantastic job.

Lyrical Interpretation - 25/25 - Absolutely perfect. Not much else to say.

Entertainment Value - 23/25 - I was captivated the entire way. Some parts were a tad stuttery, but it was amazing most of the whole experience.

Total Score : 90/100

There's really nothing that can be said that's an inherent flaw here, besides some structural issues and overall 'horror' factor, but this one is really, REALLY good. A story based on an actual execution, molded originally around the target song, without simply rehashing the lyrics. Very excellent work, and I want more.