Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37319763-20190120192812/@comment-37319763-20190120231543

Just a Guy That Likes Creepypastas wrote: How does the title relate in any way to the pasta?

The reason why this was removed was probably because of the lack of actual story. It's like something an internet troll would write on Facebook in 2012 to scare little children. Maybe if you actually wrote a narrative to go along with the ideas you've expressed in the pasta, it would be suitable, but not in its current state.

Also, despite only being a few sentences long, it's got a few grammar and spelling issues. because the victims are turned into a bunch of pop culture refrences