User blog comment:Elmokiller97/jeff the killer/@comment-25271824-20140809114718

Jeff The Killer's story is horribly written in my opinion, it makes no sence.

1. Burning eyelids.

How can he blink? Oh wait he doesn't have any eyelids. Looks like another Russian Sleep Expirement. Wow.

2. Fire and Alchohol.

Alchohol isn't flammable.

3. luxurious hair.

His hair should've burned off.

4. Kawaii? Hell no.

He shouldn't be a model. He should be a killer. He doesn't like hugs. He likes slitting necks.

5. Random change.

So a kid almost getting killed changes to normal Jeff moving into a new town? That makes sence.

It's badly written. Of course, there are other reasons. But, I'm pretty sure that the creator of creepypasta can do better than THAT.