Talk:Innocent Souls/@comment-25170312-20151101022412/@comment-25170312-20151121190832

It's never too late. That's what I love about this site. Nothing is set in stone. I've gone back and reworked my first two pastas long after they were posted (and I'm still not satisfied with them). You might want to get a second opinion, though. I'm surprised no one else has critiqued this, but it's still going to be spotlighted for another week or so. Hopefully someone will weigh in. Still, it never hurts to re-evaluate your work.