Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20160729155428/@comment-28266772-20160730215848

I'm really glad you liked it! I was deeply concerned about the first section being a bit... over the top. But when you start with Voldemort and decide to add a sprinkle of 'gang rape' it's going to get dark. So I'm happy you liked it. However now I'm a bit concered about the second section. I wanted to use it to build up tension but I think I abused the down time to just go into exposition. I'm concerned that it might just end up being a bit of tonal whiplash. I guess what my concerns are is that there's too much talk, and too little fatso. I'm looking forward to hearing how you think it ranks up compared to the first part.