User:Doomy-gloomy

It was a warm fall Halloween night as I recall, me and my friends, Jack Jane and me were out trick or treating. i was a zombie, Jack was a dog and Jane was a cat. We when through the hole block, but back then we were nine and ten years old so we weren’t allowed to go outside of the neighborhood. I sighed because we went to all of the houses and we only got a few bags of chips, three chocolate bars and some gum. I went to turn back to go to the direction of my house when Jane grabbed my wrist. I turned around and i was about to yell at her when she said “come on! Let’s go to that house over there behind the hill!"

i looked at her and said" you know my mom she would kill us if we went-" then i got cut off by jack" oh come one stop being suck a scardy cat matt". I looked at him and said" oh come on guys your parents would kill you t-" then I got cut off by them both taunting me" scardy cat, scardy cat, Matthew is a scardy cat~" with anger I grabbed them both by their costumes and said" FINE! Let’s go." " YAAY" they both screamed as they dragged me to the house, as we got closer to the house i could see other houses and more kids with a bunch of candy “guys look we hit the jackpot for candy, WERE RICH WITH CANDY" i said jumping up and down in joy" hey wait" said Jane" look some kids are missing the house that we can see from are side of the neighborhood"

I look to see and it was true, none of the kids were even going ten feet near that house" LETS GO SEE THE HOUSE MATT AND JANE!" jack said with joy in his words" ITS LIKE ONE OF THOSE PARANORMAL ACTIVITY THINGS WE COULD BE GHOST HUNTERS" I was about to say something when jack started to drag us to the house, and tried to get out of his grip but, since he was the oldest he had more strength so I gave up and let him drag us to the house.

When we got to the house we just stood there. The house was an ugly color of brown and the roof had a hole in it, the windows were dirty and no one could see throw it. As we scan the house from top to bottom we noticed something ...odd, it was the door. As everything else was all broken and all run down the door look brand new, it was a pick white door with a wooden handle. To break the silence I said "SO!" I clapped my hands together and rubbed them back and forth making a weird sound that would make jacks teeth grind together. “Who’s going to go and ring the door bell first!" they both looked at each other then me. In my gut I had a feeling it would be me " YOUR GOING FIRST" they said pointing at me ”w-w-why me?!?" I said sort of scared.

"why you SCARED scardy cat boy" Jack said mocking me again" because I’m the youngest" I said telling I didn’t want to do it" but you are the smartest and you’ve lived here your whole life we just moved here about a year ago" said Jane" yeah a girl can’t go so you got to go” said jack arguing with Jane" fine ill go" I sad with a shake going throw my whole body" ill only ring the door bell, BUT THATS IT OK GUYS" they shook their heads and sat on the ground staring at me to go up to the house. I went up to the house trying to hide the fact that I was scared, the steps to go to the door were all creaky and they looked like they would about to break if a feather touched it. When I got to the door I felt I could breeze go near my hand and the breeze pushed my hand up a little from my side, the funny thing is it wasn’t cold outside. And the breeze was freezing cold. I brushed it aside and went to ring the door bell, but when I was an inch away from ringing it, the pitch white door opened slowly.

It had a creek but when the door opened nothing was there. There was a note on the ground. I picked up the note and read it, it said" hello, would you like to play a game, it’s simple just come into the house and try to find all the items on the list....but you must stay quiet.... "it seemed to have more to the note but the rest of the  was ripped off. I looked on the back for the rest of the word but all there was a list of things. “this must be the things I got to find" said jack reading over my shoulder.

I jumped in the air because I did dint know he was there I turned to him and said: WHAT ARE YOU DOIN HERE!? I THOUGHT YOU GUYS WERE GOING TO SIT THERE ON THE GRASS!”. Jane looked at me and said “when we saw the door open we came over here to see what was going on, then we read the note over your shoulder, and we want to do this scavenger hunt to Matt". "Yeah Matt let’s do it" said Jack. "Fine let’s go". I said knowing if I said no Jack would drag me into the house. When we came into the house the door slammed behind us. I heard in my eat a little girls laugh, it made me shiver, I guss jack heard it to if he gave..the same look as me. We turned around then when we turned back we noticed something odd, Jane wasn’t here she was gone but where she used to stand there was a note.

I picked up the note, but on this note there was blood. I read it out loud for jack to hear. "She wouldn’t stay quiet matt, just hope your friend stays quiet to". it seemed to be read in a missing way, like a warning. I looked up slowly at jack with fear in my eyes. Jack was about to say something when I ran over and covered his mouth. I showed him the first note about us having to be quiet, and he shook his head and we looked around. When all of a sudden I saw a paper fly into my candy bag.

It said "you’re first thing you must find is two candy eyeballs” I read that note out loud because I thought if I didn’t read anything other than the note I would end up like Jane...gone. We stared to walk around the house trying to find some sort of candy eye. The house was disgusting! The roof was all moldy and I swear I could hear rats in the walls. I couldn’t handle grows things so I kept my hand over my mouth. We searched the house for about ten minutes when we got to a hall way.

And at the end of the hall way we saw..something..i-i though it was jane, sitting on the ground not moving for some strange reason. Jack went to run up to her, and I put my hand in front of him "what? It’s Jane! What are you so scared of Matt!?" he whispered in my ear. "Because, remember in those scary movies how it’s always someone else then they scare you and you scream" I whispered back, “So let’s just get closer to see!” I said quietly. we got a little closer then we heard moans from the girl at the end of the hall way. "Jane is that you?" we both said trying to yell quietly. She didn’t respond. As we got closer we could see her clearly instead of her eyes there was candy eyeballs! l-like someone took her eyes out,and replaced them!

It made me sick, and I almost puked. I ran over to Jane when I heard her heart beat there was none. I look at Jack as he was almost about to cry. I could always cry without making a sound but I didn’t know about Jack. So I covered his mouth because he was about to make a noise. “SHHH!!" I said. Then a note appeared on Jane’s head. I grabbed the note as soon as I saw it and read it out load. "Great job you found the candy now enjoy Matt and Jack, or do you want to get out of here?" before I read the hole note Jack yelled out load to the roof.

"WE WANT TO GET OUT OF HERE WE WANT TO SEE ARE MO-" he stopped when I looked at him. He was turned around staring at someone on the other end of the hall way. I shook jack thinking he was going crazy, I told him to calm down and we turned around, I nearly jumped out of my socked when I saw this, right in front of us was Jane! She ran over to use and said "what are you guys doing? Come on. Oh! you found the candy eyeballs good!~". we were both shaking in shock when we looked at the thing we thought was Jane, was a doll with an X's on its forehead. We took the eye balls and we put it in our bag and continued.

We walked through the whole house. When we saw a light on a table and on the table was another note. Well let’s see what this one says" I said to Jane and Jack. "Let’s see, great you found the eyeballs but now you need two more things. Seven candy teeth and a candy nose. Good luck~" I paused. “well isn’t that-" I turned around to see that Jack and Jane were both gone. I started to get worried, I wanted to yell for them but..i couldent,i sat on the ground and started to think But I could hear music. Peaceful Music. Music that could put a raging bull to sleep.

Then at the other side of the room I saw Jack and Jane. Slowly walking towards the music moving slowly like zombies. Somehow don’t remember what happens next, because it’s like I zoned out. But when I woke up I I was laying agents a wall, in a very creepy hallway, I started to look around when i saw Jane and jack. it looked like they were sleeping on the ground. I went over to them when, I saw the grossest thing ever.

Jacks teeth were replaced with candy teeth! And Jane’s nose was replaced with a candy nose! BLOOD! LEAKING FROM THERE EARS! A-AND THERE MOUTHS! And they both had X's on their four heads. And out of their eyes was the grossest. They didn’t have any eyes! all there were was black glue and it was leaking out of their eyes. I crawled back and bumped into a corner. I could hear rain on the roof and it was thundering. But I can’t remember how long I stood there. It was about ten minutes when I could see someone at the end of the hall way all I could see was a shadow. When the lighting flashed I could see the person clearly. it wasn’t even a person. it was a monster! b-but it had a female figer. it had jet black hair and a blue and white t-shirt.

She had dark blue jeans and a sweater around her waist. She had X's on her hands and they were on her sweater. Her hair was covering her left eye and her mouth was sewed together with a silver piece of thread. She also had music notes on her cheeks and her eyes. Those damn eyes! They wernt even eyes! They were black were it should be white, and her eyes were red with black X's through them. They were soulless! And she had something grey coming out of her back..No there were four coming from the bottom of her back. And then two on her top of her back. it started to walk closer to me. I stood there still not making a sound. When it bent down to my level I was thinking in my head “what the heck is this monster!?!” it looked at me with this death stare and said in a teenager like voice.

“You think I’m a monster!? I’ll show you monster!!”. “MATT!” I was so scared and shocked. How did she know my name? I went to run away but one of those things was coming out of her back. It grabbed me and I tried to get out of her grip. I wiggled and fought, but it didn’t do anything. I still tried but then her hand covered my mouth and she said to me. "shhhhhh hush now quit now"."WAIT!” I managed to scream out as she was about to cut my throat. "What are you!?" the strange girl paused. She said in a demonic voice. "My name is MK and that’s all you shall know" I-I blacked out from there...after I woke up I was out side of the house breathing heavily.  I looked around to see if Jane or Jack was there...but no one was there. police officers started to surround me, my mother, crying heavly. I ran over the hill and I saw two teens about to go into the house. I was about to yell for them to get away from the house...I-I was about to warn them!..but my vocal cords were cut, strangled, it hurt to even breath,..its been seven years ever since that target day,i n-never said anything that happened in that tragic night, it pains me to even think about it! and that damn thing!! I-I it drives me mad! I cant get the damn image of of my head!...hold on I think someones at my door.......run.