Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4849011-20160816012054/@comment-4849011-20160828170638

~takes off glasses dramatically~ Sweet mercy pie, what have I unleashed on an unsuspecting world?

Seriously, though, I'm sorry to see that you were disappointed, but I can understand the issues you had. I'm glad you liked the Monster a Go-Go reference. I guess in a way this story is just like a 1950s B-movie- either you're going to enjoy it or you're going to think, "Well that was stupid..." In summary, you'd rather have the narrator describe chaos caused by the program being released before the aphasia effect kicks in?