Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150511053919/@comment-25037895-20150512050105

Until I read your comment, I thought the girl in the basement was a ghost or a hallucination. I think the story would be much improved, if you incorporated, "the old man cooked the girl's dad and is serving him to her," into the storyline. I was a little confused as to why the plate was mentioned, but I can see why now.