Talk:My Baby/@comment-24946232-20140516233453

Wow, I really enjoyed this. So atmospheric, I really found myself in the story. I loved your descriptions and the flow and pace.

Desribing the the ghostly girl in white  as a " little girl in her early teens" threw me off a bit though... but it made the narrative more haunting.

With the sex: is he committing necrophelia? does he take the corpse into bed with him? Or is he just imagining the sex? Intentional ambiguity?