Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-37644303-20190904035337/@comment-9041013-20190904113258

It reads like a parody of the Ring, that's not good.

Also, nobody's going to believe that Elizabeth Weinberg the restless ghost was going to kill them.

I suggest you make up a story of encountering her and surviving her wrath, like any other ghost story. No need to try and make us feel like we're threatened by a figment of your imagination.