Talk:Evisceration Plague/@comment-27007772-20141021173448

Not that bad, but has a few timing issues. For instance, chapter five says Nathan stopped speaking five days prior, but he literally spoke the day before that.

Also, this is a borderline gorepasta. The premise is interesting enough to lay that aside, but if it didn't build up the way it did, it wouldn't have been on Creepypasta wiki very long.

Overall and interesting experience.

6.5/10