User blog comment:Astro-chan/RANT: They deleted my story/@comment-3999760-20150901011310

I just read your deleted pasta, and I'll tell you why your pasta was deleted. The most severe flaws in your story is that it seemed you attempted to create an OC and wrote a "story" to introduce your character. This may have not been your intention, but the pasta seemed painfully rushed with various cliches that reduced the originality and quality of your story. There is a blog post that highlights the main faults about I encountered in your story.

My message to you is to not get discouraged or distraught from writing because your pasta got deleted. Read the advice blogs and style guides on how creepypastas should be written. If you're unsure about posting your work, post it on the Writer's Workshop to get informative critiques.