Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35911608-20180823132725/@comment-33488654-20180823233533

RedNovaTyrant wrote: I also just realized that I didn't see that last paragraph. Maybe I missed it cuz I was on mobile at the time. I guess like I said in the last response, a look at that "universal guilt" concept and killing oneself might be better explored in another story. In this case, Ben's mom had obviously died from the illness he had created, and having no parents and basically killing his own mother, he took his life as a result. That be a pretty good concept mate.