Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31111342-20170128030448/@comment-28428152-20170129022735

Its very interesting, abd I like how its written as if somebody were telling it over a campfire. Its shirt and to-the-point. The only recommendation i would make is maybe add a little but more detail about tge realm at tge end, because the end seemed reallky confusing until the last sentence. Maybe you could add something about the liss of physical senses or something