Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20190629171243/@comment-33904527-20190706221948

AlixeTiir wrote: I like the story, but it needs meter, or rhyme, or something. As it stands now, it feels less like a poem and more like words in a jar. The finished product of this story is up on the site if you want to see the more polished version (though it's not a poem anymore, just a regular story).