Talk:Judith Barsi/@comment-27422371-20160105143948

Eh. This was... decent. It's not amazing, but the concept is brilliant and the gore aspect is well executed. But it was the lack of.... everything that killed it for me. There was so much build up, but it led up to about 2 lines of laziness. I found myself getting lost at bits and sometimes I couldn't make sense of things. Overall, a decent story. 6/10