Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10789912-20160107091137/@comment-25037895-20160124063441

Here's what I noticed:

"What she say (said) shocked her with horrific memories"

" "They were in the hallway the trap door led too (to)!" "

"changes whenever Enki wants it too (to)"

" "Have you been her (here) before as well?" "

"The air was a lot ticker (thicker) here,"

"Grabbing her had (head) and jumping on his feet"

"He hear hear (heard) the ceiling and both walls being chipped away"