Talk:Snowblinded/@comment-25941663-20190724224709

"mythic Norsemen king" - Is it "Norseman" instead? Or "Norsemen's"?

"where such weather was more often than not" - Maybe you have it right, but this reads a bit awkwardly. It was 'more often -' what?

"Deep, morbid part of her mind" - I think there is an 'A' missing at the start of the sentence.

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That was quite a nice story, really enjoyed it! I loved how you set up the two characters and their relationship, it felt quite real and the characters were very likeable. The concept itself is great, I always love snow and what is hidden behind it. I also love stories about pre-historic civilizations. This ticked many boxes for me, and I was thoroughly entertained.