Talk:Crossing the Line/@comment-26475800-20160129234800

I liked this story a lot. It is most likely because I have a soft spot for these kinds of stories, I don't want to really give much away so I will keep it like that. Although, I have to admit that I knew Luthor was dead before I got to that part, but the journey there was great.

The inclusion of the Mintour was great. Not really sure why more people don't use that monster, but rather the same stale monsters. It really is a fearsome beast.

You were able to include you humor in this story, which is something that I think you do very well and kind of envy you for that. You have a great skill for writing like that, and it helps the story.