Talk:12 Polaroids/@comment-25471033-20181218205155

This was pretty cool, it kind of reminded me of the holders series, except, as one person said, there's no obvious consequences. I agree with a previous comment of the entity coming out being a bit much, but it's okay because it didn't take too much away from the story. The concept was creepy, and I don't know if I'd ever want to try it because so much could go wrong, but some people are so daring that they would definitely want to do this. My only problem is the entire last line, it makes sense but barely, and honestly I'd say just get rid of it. Overall, 9/10