Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180303032925/@comment-9041013-20180315193356

I'd call this a true dark comedy,  it's dark, it's horror'ish, because people die, somewhat gruesomely and it's in a way comedic - considering how lightherted the whole situation around the story is. You could say it criticizes stuff, like the middle class whatever society and stuff. Thus this is a dark comedy.

Not that it's bad, but I did feel its a bit cartoonish, what the hell are these creatures and why do they seem to be more confusing than the human body, which is extremely fragile while being herrendously powerful (I mean, you could generate the force of a small vehicle crashing into a human with a kick). They can be squashed like bugs literally, but have enough force to pull a human wherever. Also, why would the family keep the hamster bowel so long after it's death? The kid is the stereotypical prankster kid, of the cartoon type. I would like to say, this is, a millenial piece of work. Bleh.

That being said, for a first'ish piece, not bad.