Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-39380631-20190528145139/@comment-39380631-20190528184751

DrBobSmith wrote: The 2009 stuff seems like it could be the basis of a good story about being trapped in a cave.

The 2017 stuff is straight SCP and makes no sense as part of a creepypasta to me. Someone finds a bunch of eight year old murder victims tucked away in a cave. Hey, that's what cops do. A bunch of eight year old stiffs is MILD compared to what cops really have to look at. You're right. If I'm gonna have police officers go clinically insane, I have to go all the way. I'm definitely gonna have to go darker, but not to the point of cliche gore. Thank you for the feedback!