Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36299239-20190304064951/@comment-36299239-20190310031430

Hi ChristianWallis

Wow! I really can't thank you enough for the thorough feedback you've given me. I now have a much clearer idea of what I can work on to make this piece better and you've given me a lot of stuff I can apply to future stories as well (even something as simple as reading my writing aloud, as obvious as it may seem, was not something that had occured to me before).

I'm a little time-poor at the moment, so I don't think I'll be able to fix up the story any time soon, but when I do I'd love if you could look it over for me again.

Seriously, thank you!