Talk:He Waited For/@comment-11545155-20160828125625

I'm going to be honest here, this story was not a good example of a Creepypasta, for starters, the series started with a pair of haunted shoes or some shit, then some fuckin' demon makes Liuanne (or whatever the fuck her name is) murder her brother, and from then on it just went more and more all over the place, not being able to stick to the plot that it's supposed to be revolving around, further alienating the reader. 2/10