Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24872476-20140427231040/@comment-24833538-20140428034256

I loved the entire idea behind it. It was very suspensfull for me because i didn't know what to expect! But i do agree with Umbreon in that it did need more plot. Im not sure on exactly what it needs as far as plot, but that's just because it's not my story, but i think you have something good going.