Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35447404-20180506194632/@comment-35447404-20180506224410

BloodySpghetti wrote: EmperorinYellow wrote: BloodySpghetti wrote: Well, I have nothing to add here anymore, maybe from aside the fact that I'm pretty sure it should be written, "They sustained multiple injuries; yada, yada, yada...". I would like you to consider reading my "The Necropolis" story and my "Beyond The Necropolis" trilogy. All of them could be found on my profile page. I don't want to completely cut the info about the crew because to Dr. Alexa it's a way of memorializing them, seeing as it's possibly the end of the world.

I'll definitely give those a read, thanks for all the help! You've made this story better! no, not cut the info, just change the comma there to ; I have no idea how you call this mark. That would be a semi colon. It is not a semi comma, that is used in musical notation. Glad to be of help for a change!