User talk:Bennings

RE:
It's a bit of both, there were a few grammatical issues and it really isn't advisable for someone to completely re-write a story and post it as it can cause conflicts. A major issue was the story itself. It built-up the scene and gave backstory, but there was little to no payoff and that just resulted in it being fairly generic. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:57, October 3, 2015 (UTC)