User talk:Raidra/Archive 5

Clean Talk Page - Ruined!
Ha, S.F.W. would definitely be a strong contender. I forgot about that part from Men in Tights, but it cracked me up remembering it. And yeah, I had a feeling the Eskimo blood would likely bring more problems than it fixed, but that's what the public school system gives us these days. I knew I should've taken that Blood Doping 101 course in college. I think the professor's last name was Armstrong or something like that.

Have you written any new stories during my absence? I really need to get something new going.

Jay Ten (talk) 00:46, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

American Graffiti
Yeah, I'm feeling quite a bit better :) My neck just throws itself out for no reason at all anymore which usually results in a headache. Yes, you understand! You know, that was kind of the problem with the Dark Knight trilogy, "I'm Batman and I'm going to beat the evil out of you."

Yep, you can't see one of the legs because it is behind the alien (I don't even know if leg is an appropriate term since they are all one connected mass, lol). One thing that you can't see about the blue alien is that the back of its head is flat and has little tendrils that I made with my fingers and pushed inward. Thank you :D

I bought myself this bad girl today: http://www.bestbuy.com/site/asus-desktop-intel-core-i7-8gb-memory-1tb-8gb-hybrid-hard-drive-gray/4669600.p?id=1219794344234&skuId=4669600 She's a really top of the line model. My only wishes are that she came with Windows 7 64bit and 16 GB's of Ram instead of the 8 GB's. She should last me for a very long time as she's up to date. I ended up spending $1,204 by the time all was said and done; will be worth it when she gets here in 11 days and I go on a buying spree for all the games I missed out on XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  02:47, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

Oh, I got some work done on Ikari tonight and thought I'd ask you for some feedback: http://pastebin.com/yY5YHP7L What do you think about it so far? I'm trying to never describe her sword, Phoenix, as a sword, but rather as a bird. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  06:35, April 10, 2016 (UTC)


 * Maybe I ought to started drinking a glass of milk every day in the hope of building stronger bones, but that would really mess with my water diet (drink a glass of caffeinated pop and nothing but water a day).


 * Lol. It's the least I could do. Thank you for all the feedback that you have left for me :D


 * I had accidentally listed it as private instead of unlisted. Well, Ikari could have been considering it cut off with her floating down stream XD Yeah, I was wanting to highlight that the sword is special to her. One thing of note is that the story doesn't take place on Earth, but rather a place really similar (the first line hints at it). It should be view-able now: http://pastebin.com/yY5YHP7L Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  02:01, April 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * I finished coloring my drawing of Ikari. Sorry about the quality, it's the webcam again. I took shots of the top half and lower half so that the quality would be higher. I'm going to see about using a scanner for it in the future. It's probably hard to see, but her coat has yellow accents, patches and cufflinks on it. I'm not sure yet, but I'm toying with the idea of sending her to the thirteen colonies (alternate universe pre-United States) which would match her coat's colors. Hey, maybe her coat came from there? Ikari_shot_1.jpg Ikari_shot_2.jpg You might not have got the opportunity to read the message above this, so I tried to put it on the same line. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  20:36, April 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * I dislike water for the most part, but it tastes a lot better to me than it used to. What's your favorite milk, juice, and soda? My favorite milk is chocolate, my favorite juice is orange juice (preferably without pulp), and my favorite pop is Mountain Dew Code Red.


 * I'm glad to hear that you liked the story and the drawing. There was this one guy whose name I can't remember, but he went through utter hell and survived. I remember reading about how he placed his leg on a maggot-infested log so they'd clean the rotten skin off. The whole story is going to revolve around Ikari trying to track down and retrieve her stolen sword. I think that everyone she kills won't be killed by a sword, though I might troll and make it look like they are going to and then have something else happen XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  01:16, April 12, 2016 (UTC)


 * I love Strawberry milk too! I haven't had either of those other kinds, but I find regular milk okay as long as I don't have to drink it all in a single sitting. Yes, that's the good stuff. I don't like pulp though, whenever I get some with pulp I drink through my teeth to filter it out. All juice is really good with the exception of tomato. Oh, Root Beer (when done right) and cream soda is real good too.


 * He was early American, maybe back when it was still just the thirteen colonies. I don't remember what happened to him exactly, but his group left him behind when they thought he wouldn't survive. He then got mauled by a bear, crawled for 100's of miles, and eventually found Native Americans who helped him back to health (I might be accidentally making that last part up and they had actually been what attacked him in the first place. I can't remember for certain). He ended up hunting down his former party members and was going to kill them, but then decided that they weren't worth it (and let's face it; they sort of had it coming). I really wish I could remember where I read about him or at least remember his name; one of the toughest guys of all time. Thanks, I hope so. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  03:17, April 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * That's gross. I used to stock Clamato on the shelves at walmart, yick. I don't mind the taste of pulp, so much as it is the texture that bothers me. I don't like drinking and having something solid slithering down my throat.


 * I have not seen The Revenant yet, but I've only heard good things about it. But, I guess it was real XD


 * I think that's the one that I saw part of last Christmas. The cast was all different and Ralphie was a teenager. It is funny that hardly anyone knows considering how ingrained in pop culture A Christmas Story is. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  03:45, April 14, 2016 (UTC)


 * I've never had tofu, but hope to some day. Well, as long as it isn't hard for me to swallow. That's always awful, part of the not being able to breathe fear.


 * 'Christmas in July Story'? XD I'm not proud to admit it, but my first instinct was also "Baaa?" In my defense, I call animals whatever their term is and don't bother with the gender specific terms. I miss 'The Weakest Link' that was a fun show. I also miss '1 vs. 100' and 'Win Ben Stein's Money'. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  04:58, April 15, 2016 (UTC)


 * It'll probably be awful, because the only way to have it in my area would be for me to make it myself DX You understand completely! Sure, I think I may have heard the term before a looong time ago, but I'm not sure. I always liked it when multiple members of the Mob missed questions that anyone ever should be able to answer. Heh, yeah I've heard it. Lol, Bob Saget willing to die for our entertainment. I used to love America's Funniest Videos, but after her stopped hosting I just didn't find it funny. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  06:34, April 16, 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks! I'll give it a thorough look tomorrow as it is late, 2AM, here. I bet the communication section is going to be really cool, people were really creative when it came to communicating over long distances. Ah, so they trained Batmen? That saving lives bit is a lot neater than it initially sounds compared to assassination when you think about it. They would have had to infiltrate and then exfiltrate with whomever they rescued unseen, really cool.


 * That's how I felt in regards to the Hannibal tv series. I didn't even know it existed until it was cancelled after two seasons due to low viewings (it's really good, I hear). I'm honestly surprised that AFV is still relevant since the internet became a thing for most american households. Those big television companies definitely make weird decisions when it comes to priorities. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  07:10, April 17, 2016 (UTC)

I looked over it a bit today. It was a bit shorter on some sections of information then I expected, but that information must have been hard to come by considering that stuff happened hundreds of years ago XD All that I read over was really captivating. I understand them using strawhats in anime now! There might actually have been a Korean Batman, but I don't know. Before DC relaunched the comics with the New 52 there was a series called Batman INC that didn't get to finish. In it Bruce Wayne announced to the world that he had financial ties to Batman and started funding a worldwide Batman program. It was an interesting concept.

I used to hate it when that would happen. I hardly watch TV anymore, but when there's something new I want to watch I usually turn to the internet instead of tuning into a station for their broadcast. I really like being able to watch things on my own schedule and not having to worry about the networks screwing things up. I'm so grateful for the internet :D Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  02:26, April 18, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "How NOT To Depict Demintia" message
There's actually a blog dedicated to reviewing every single episode of Full House and the founder of the blog, Billy Superstar, is currently reviewing every single episode of Fuller House which I think is a sequel to the original series. It's quite a funny blog and I recommend giving it a read. Here's a link to the blog: https://therealfullhousereviewed.wordpress.com/

Since he reviewed every Full House episode ever, here's the links to his review on the Disneyworld episode:

Part 1: https://therealfullhousereviewed.wordpress.com/2013/01/25/season-6-episode-23-the-house-meets-the-mouse-part-1/

Part 2: https://therealfullhousereviewed.wordpress.com/2013/02/01/season-6-episode-24-the-house-meets-the-mouse-part-2/

Thanks for filling me in on Dementia. I didn't know that much about it so I was a little confused. Now I have a better understanding of the situation. THANKS RAIDRA!

I was talking with Doom about another idea for a pasta. Getting separated from your group is a terrifying experience especially in a place like Disney World. How about I write a Creepypasta about a little girl who gets separated from her father and brother at Disney World and throughout the story, she is trying to find them. Along the way, she encounters people in mascot suits who are trying to grab her (which the girl interprets as kidnapping but in reality they're trying to help reunite her with her group), gets bumped around like a pinball amongst the crowds, and all sorts of other misadventures. I think getting lost somewhere is a very realistic fear because it can happen very easily whether because someone gets distracted and wanders off, gets lost in big crowds, or forgets where everyone is.

I started developing the idea and I've been researching the Disney parks about their lost child protocols and I think I have a good understanding about how they work. Doom recently suggested that I make up a Disney park but I kind of want to keep it as real as possible. Though, I will keep the suggestion in mind.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  16:29, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

RE: paper weapons
Wow! That's amazing. Just the mammoth list itself is impressive. I don't think I've ever seen such a comprehensive list of weapons. It could actually be a great resource for writers. If I ever write a martial arts or Anime inspired story I will definitely return to your blog for weapons Intel. My ten-year-old son is a Naruto fanatic and he got a real kick out of it, too. Thanks so much for sharing. :) HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:01, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

National Paper Shortage Now Explained
Wow... that is a lot of blog... and a lot of paper. I'm actually unfamiliar with paper weapons, but it appears I've been given a comprehensive list of every piece ever imagined. It's definitely interesting. I'll be giving them a look over as I can. I admire your commitment. Very impressive. Thanks for sharing.

Oh, and yeah, I think "The Smiling Man" is pretty great. It's not a masterpiece or anything, but it is so simple and yet it works so well. I think it's a great example of how less can be more if done properly. I actually had a rather minimalist story on the site a while back. It wasn't the same type of minimalism as TSM, but I was also hoping to show how it's possible to do more with less. Maybe I'll bring it back up sometime or send you a pastebin link to see what you think (just in case you already read it, it was called "The Brown Spot"). Even though I don't really care for the story itself, I do feel like it was a decent example.

Jay Ten (talk) 01:43, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Abandoned by Distracted People" message
For this Disney pasta, I had to do a lot of research on Disney World parks, especially about how the cast members handle situations where a child is lost. Here are a few sources I looked at:

1. http://guff.com/16-secret-rules-for-disney-employees

2. http://www.lolwot.com/15-shocking-secret-employee-rules-disney-doesnt-want-you-to-know/6/

3. http://cp.disneycareers.com/en/onboarding/fl/working-here/disney-look/overview/overall-guidelines/

4. http://www.overentertainment.com/secret-facts-about-disneys-rules-for-their-employees/10/

5. http://emgn.com/entertainment/15-secret-rules-disney-employees-arent-allowed-tell/

6. http://diply.com/different-solutions/disney-employee-rules/150512

I also started working on my Pokepasta again. Here's what I added:

"Before I was able to figure out what happened next, I suddenly found myself inches away from a dark blue door with a black bar running through the middle of it. I leaped up and hit the black bar with all of my might. To my surprise, I had enough strength to open the door just wide enough for me to get through. The door lead to a room with dark blue walls where the paint had seemed to be chipped away in certain spots. The floor was made of solid grey concrete and unlike the linoleum floors in the hallway, I was no longer having trouble keeping my balance. However, the sound of my footsteps seemed to be amplified as they echoed throughout the barren room.

A few moments later, I made my way towards a small staircase and grabbed the thin wooden handrail beside it. I slid down the rail like a penguin with my arms and hands loosely gripping the rail."

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  05:27, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

Mark My Words: A TP Shortage Will Be the Cause of WW3
Yeah, I actually clicked the pictures and saw they were models. From what I could see, they looked like some nice artwork. Still, you could likely papercut a small town into submission with that arsenal. I'm sure you're on some sort of government watch-list now (welcome to the team!) I've actually never seen Class of 3000, nor had I even heard of it until you mentioned it. I'll try to give it a watch sometime if I ever get the chance.

As for my story "The Brown Spot", it's most certainly not NSFW. I actually tend to write more extreme pieces, but I also like to write 100% clean pieces as well. I actually knew you didn't like to read NSFW from reading some earlier exchanges (my memory is like a steel trap when it wants to be - other times it's like steel wall). I only have one of those on the site right now, but definitely stay away from it. It's not pointless gore, more of a confused philosophical rant from a rather unstable individual who's keeping a woman in his basement, but I'd hate to lose your respect after reading it, lol. Ned the Nihilist: A Misanthropic Monologue is the story, so if you ever see that title, please skip it. I actually want to look over and possibly alter TBS before I put it up (which may be later today), but if you want to read another one of mine that I just put up, it's called The Woman in Red. It's another one that is 100% clean, but it's not like TBS in style. The old version is on creepypasta.com, but this is a heavily altered version that works much better in my opinion. Check it out if you get the chance. People over at cp.com seemed to like it and find it chilling. It's a very simple, storytelling writing style. I'll let you know when I put up TBS.

Welp, I'm off to the chiropractor. Have a good one!

Jay Ten (talk) 11:12, April 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * I went ahead and restored The Brown Spot. I might rewrite it later, but I just got some crap news from the hospital and don't feel like messing with rewriting it at the moment. Nothing serious, but they're just delaying my finding out if I have cancer by making me go to another doctor before they'll do my biopsy. I think they want me to go insane so they can put me in the system forever, lol. Anyway, whenever you're in the mood, feel free to give those two stories a read. Hopefully you enjoy them.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 16:11, April 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Breakin the Mouse's Rules!" Message
Really? I never really noticed that on those sites. Which specific sites that I listed show that? Because I'm really confused right now.

What I showed you occurs after a flashback that occurred while the protagonist was running out of their room and into the hallway. Here's what I have so far: http://pastebin.com/QDYfzdxy

Thanks for the link about Alzheimer's and Dementia by the way.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  19:52, April 13, 2016 (UTC)

"This Doesn't Look Good, No This Doesn't Look Good at All...
...My nephew drew a picture of me. It doesn't look a thing like me. Look at the nose, it's all wrong!" - Dr. Hartman.

I've seen that one you're talking about too. Definitely feels like that sometimes. As for elephants and mice, I'm choosing to continue my fantasy that elephants jump around on their tip toes and scream at the sight of a mouse and also that the mice get a huge kick out of this.

Thanks for making copies of my stories to read. I appreciate it. And definitely don't feel like you need to review them or anything. I'd just be happy knowing whether you enjoyed them or not. I mostly just like knowing that they're being read. One of the reasons I rarely ask people to read my work is because I hate the thought of someone feeling obligated to leave some lengthy feedback, when all I really want is just a simple two or three sentence response. I actually just uploaded a new one that is also family friendly called The Diary of Regina Roberts and the Diamond Tree Mystery. It's another one of my stories where the horror is mostly implied and even unanswered to some extent.

Hope all is well.

Jay Ten (talk) 02:10, April 14, 2016 (UTC)


 * LOL. I remember that one too. Dr. Hartman is one of my favorite characters on there. I used to watch Whose Line a lot, but there were so many of them I think I missed that one. I'm definitely not a pushy person. It takes a lot out of me to ask even the tiniest favor. I'd never make it as a salesman. That show used to get me rolling at times. Anyway, thanks for being willing to give those stories a look. Take your time. If you ever have anything specific you want me to give a read, just let me know. Have a good one!


 * Jay Ten (talk) 12:45, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

I'm Known on the Streets for My Love of Gravy
Lmao. I didn't even know they had new ones. I'm so out of touch. Speaking of MST3K, I just watched them do Manos: The Hands of Fate a few weeks ago. I couldn't hardly keep it together. I had always heard about how bad that movie was, but I really wasn't prepared.

Thanks for fixing those two mistakes in my story. It always amazes me how hard it is to catch those things when it's your own story. I've probably re-read that story 20+ times and never noticed those mistakes. Again, thanks for reading. I'm really glad you liked it. Hopefully you enjoy my others when you get around to them. BTW, I added another one today, lol. It's a first person, present tense account of a man who wakes up in the middle of the woods and has no clue how he got there. It's not so much scary as it is a story of complete despair. It's a story about consequences. All my stories are on my profile page now, so just pick through them as you feel like it (I would avoid not only the NSFW one, but the Slightly NSFW one as well). I just want people to read them when they're in the mood to read (hopefully) an interesting story, rather than just when I ask. You can take a month to read the next one and it won't bother me a bit, seriously. This medicine I'm on makes me ramble real bad when it gets late, lel. Goodnight!

Jay Ten (talk) 02:01, April 15, 2016 (UTC)


 * Yeah, I laughed when he booed the little girl bride. Our reaction was the same and pretty much simultaneous. That movie really is unbearable. And no, I haven't seen either of those others, but I was thinking about watching the "Hobgoblins" one. I'll let you know if I do. And I like the spellchecking poem. I think the second line should be changed to "It came with my pee, see". And wow, that kangaroo tail story— I don't even know what to say. It's like one of those things you honestly couldn't make up. Better than fiction. Thanks again for reading and editing. I'm really glad you've liked what you've read. Have a good one!


 * Jay Ten (talk) 12:41, April 16, 2016 (UTC)


 * "I'd say Superman's gun came with his pee, see, and he uses it to defend against mobs wielding kangaroo tails." Lol. I think we've got the next great Superman comic book idea. We're gonna be rich! That's really cool your dad ran a drive-in; I bet he saw a lot of terrible old movies. I'd love to have an old drive-in fully stocked with all the horrible B movies from back then. If I had internet there, I'd probably never leave. I should probably be careful saying that lest I end up in a Lansdale's The Drive-in situation.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 17:52, April 17, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Malcolm 10: The Inginging" message
Man, the Malcolm films just aren't as great as they used to be huh? I mean why would you make 10 films based on Malcolm In The Middle? They're totally unfaithful to the show anyway. I mean, why did they genderswap all the characters? Are they trying to make Ghostbusters 2016 look like a GOOD movie? Oh Hollywood, you so quirky! By the way, Malcolm in The Middle is a super awesome show that you should totally watch.

So Doom had suggested an idea for what should happen next in the R.L Stine pasta. Here's what he said: "I think you should continue your pasta by having Kristy go to the room that Hotaka is in and have them talk with Hotaka bringing up how the police officer ran off and then try to come up with something from there." I'm going to try and come up with a way to take that idea out of summary form. I've also been making a few changes to the pasta. Here's the pastebin link: http://pastebin.com/zwHaFT85

Are you liking the Pokepasta so far?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  04:24, April 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Lion Cannon 2: Wut Lion?" Message
Maybe Kopa could've been male and female at the same time. Or maybe it has the ability to change its gender at will like Clownfish, wrasses, moray eels, and gobies. Those are my theories on The Lion King Cub CATastrophe.

As for my R.L Stine pasta, I'm thinking about making the protagonist a bit younger than myself. This is one of the hints for the protagonist's age: "I remember watching a show called Goosebumps on Cartoon Network when I was a little girl." Goosebumps aired on CN from 2007 to 2009. I remember seeing promos for the show on that network actually. This was during the time where CN had live action programming on their network. Ugh! Thank God they never did that again!

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  00:43, April 19, 2016 (UTC)

Four! And Shadowing
I love that when it is done well. Foreshadowing makes things look more professionally done and thought out. It always makes me look back and say, "I remember this being hinted. I wonder how far they plan ahead with this?" It's really neat.

I hate reboots and reality events in comics. At a certain point it'll probably become necessary, but I'd love to see the Batman characters get old and keep developing. I think that Spiderman has suffered the most from the reality events because he used to be married and had a daughter, see that was interesting and now it is all undone. I just really like seeing these characters grow up, learn, and live their lives (that sounds odd). It's just really unfair to do that to the comic readers who have stuck through thick and thin.

We've got a few more channels recently as well. I think we've had MeTv for two years now, but we got this awesome Sci-Fi channel that plays 'B' Sci-Fi films and shows like 'The Outer Limits', which is one of my all time favorites. Don't have any Antenna TV though I had tried talking my parents into that or just switching fully over to Netflix though they've been shortening their selection and are raising their price to $10 a month now.

There isn't much left that I watch. I tend to watch Bar Rescue, Impractical Jokers, Undercover Boss, American Dad, Family Guy, and How I Met Your Mother with some Extreme Couponing and Extreme Cheapskates on the side. TV just isn't what it used to be. It's really neat having anime as an alternative because a lot of those are super creative and different from each other. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  17:49, April 19, 2016 (UTC)


 * Haha, yeah. Sure, feel free to do so!


 * There's a few interesting takes on an old retired Batman. In one such tale he ends up turning a gang into a group called the Batman and personally trains all of them which was pretty interesting. Then there's Beyond and a different story where he uses machines, Batwraiths, I believe, to patrol and protect Gotham. Barbara Gordon as Oracle is the perfect example of that. When she got shot and paralyzed it was impactful and it lasted for decades (unfortunately, the New 52 had her recover from being paralyzed). Don't get me wrong, Barbara Batgirl is my favorite female protagonist from DC, but it was so meaningful and consequential. Terry McGuinnes dying and being replaced by Tim Drake in Batman Beyond is another good example, though I was somewhat salty about that one considering Drake hadn't fought crime for decades when he adopted the mantle.


 * Yes! I didn't know if you had that as well, though it makes sense due to us being on the same timezone (rather not say where exactly on the internet). Lol. Some of them movies are the greatest in the cheesiest of ways XD Comet TV was a welcome surprise to me. I'm glad that someone decided to play Sci-Fi movies since the Syfy channel can't seem to do their job right anymore. I remember that I would used to tune in every Saturday night for one of their movies. Good times!


 * I skimmed through the video and I am happy to say that I've seen at least one of them on the list; FLCL. I watched it a month ago actually, it was really funny and great. It's about growing up in a nutshell. What's funny is that it is getting a second season despite the fact that it aired nearly ten years ago. The second season was announced right after I finished watching it XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  03:58, April 20, 2016 (UTC)


 * Follow your dreams! That's a pretty good message. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  20:16, April 20, 2016 (UTC)


 * I'm pretty bitter right now, so I don't feel like much of anything. I just wanted you to know that I saw your message and I'm not ignoring you. I just need some time to cool off before I start talking like I'm at a guttermouth convention {hope that's funny}. I'm pissy right now because I went out of town and picked up my new computer today and the video card is burned out or not soldered correctly according to tech support, so now I have to take it back tomorrow and have them fix it and worry about whether or not they'll honor the warranty. To put things into perspective, I'll be swallowing $300-$400 for the video card if they don't honor the warranty and I can't do a chargeback for some reason. I'm sure they'll honor it, but it is frustrating, such a beautiful computer and it should absolutely work brand new from the factory. Anyway, I'll talk to you tomorrow when my mood isn't bad. I apologize for any rudeness on my part. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  06:23, April 21, 2016 (UTC)


 * Sorry about yesterday and for brushing you off. I was really cranky and I didn't think it was a good idea to be talking when I was like that. Good news is that it works. The PC had some weird architecture to it and I and the tech support person I talked to had made a wrong guess about it. Basically, I was trying to plug my monitor into the motherboard instead of the graphics card. They had a graphics card plug in where the motherboard was at and that was the only one (so I had to by an adapter to make things work, but I'm really happy). Thank you for being really nice and understanding.


 * On the subject of Batgirl's recovery; I felt they botched it big time because you have had her go through this ordeal for decades and then a new canon was established and they undid it in an easy and insignificant way that made it not seem important. The least they could have done was show her recovering and dealing with trying to walk for a few issues. Instead they made her afraid by guns, but not afraid enough to where it stopped her from dealing with them. If they wanted to go the afraid of guns route they should have went all in and had her undergo training with Batman to overcome her fear of gun. I bet you Batman started out afraid of guns too, he was at least traumatized by one, so the training would have made sense.


 * No, unfortunately. I watched things like: Dinocroc, Night of the Living Dead III and IV, Pumpkinhead and things like that. Some where originals and some weren't, but they were all neat to watch in their own cheesy way.


 * That's a large portion of it to me. It's different and interesting. Regular tv bores me because it is usually either a sitcom or reality show, but with anime there are many different genres and ways they can go. I tend to like the writing in anime better than what most movies or tv shows manage to deliver. My friend's joked that they needed to have me watch more old shows so that they'd get more seasons too XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  03:27, April 22, 2016 (UTC)


 * Yeah, really frustrating all around. Honor among rivals. That's a really cool approach on things. The traditional villain would exploit that fear, not sit on it and never use it. It kind of reminds me of the Dungeons and Dragons alignment system which is thorough and cool. It has Lawful Good, Neutral Good, Chaotic Good, Lawful Neutral, Neutral Neutral, Chaotic Neutral, Lawful Evil, Neutral Evil, and Chaotic Evil. Not entirely sure where Renegade would fall on such a system, but I think maybe Neutral Evil, possibly even Chaotic Good? Not trying to be super nerdy here, but that alignment system is a pretty helpful thing to consider when making characters for stories. Lawful Good would be someone like Commissioner Gordon, Chaotic Good would be someone like Batman or Robin Hood. Neutral Neutral just means that the individual doesn't care about anything. Lawful Evil is someone who is bad and abuses the laws to their own benefit and Chaotic Evil is someone like the Joker.


 * I've never seen the original, but it was a sequel called something like Blood Feud that I had watched. Sometimes it is just funny watching people do something as stupid as dark magic and then being surprised that the result is something evil XD Never heard of Mosquito, but it sounds delightful!


 * I feel like Japan tends to put more emphasis on storytelling, while US tends to put more emphasis on relationships (which usually don't go anywhere on TV shows). I'll toast a glass of sparkling grape juice to that XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  18:12, April 23, 2016 (UTC)


 * I'm glad you like it! Looks like you've already done some research into it. I can never remember the Neutrals that well. That's how I feel about most of your characters too. I haven't seen one that is downright evil, just does bad things, but have good qualities too. I guess it would make sense that there are anti-villains since anti-heroes exist XD Maybe one day you'll do "What if" stories? Those are always neat!


 * Haha. I could never stand Friends or Seinfield. I always immediately change the channel or insist that the channel is changed when either of those two shows come up on screen, so boring and drawn out XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  05:19, April 24, 2016 (UTC)


 * I think flashbacks would be a neat way to do it too! Yeah, I hear you. That would be leagues better than the traditional "I'm good now." *dies*.


 * One movie that comes to mind that everyone ever seems to love, but I dislike is Tron. I was watching the TV Guide channel and saw that it was on and was like, "Oh, Tron! Everyone likes that movie, should be good." I switch to it and five minutes later I was all "What is this!?" XD


 * Roughly 5% is the number of authors that are successful (this statistic came from Stephen King in his novel On Writing). It doesn't surprise me that people sell out and/or cast their visions aside in a bid to be what they perceive as success. It is a shame and lots of interesting things are lost/watered down because of it. However, I wouldn't define compromise on such a scale or selling out as success. Telling one's story is the important part. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  04:35, April 25, 2016 (UTC)

It's the worst when people start talking up something based on popular opinion. I've never even seen the Godfather, maybe one day. I will get super annoyed if they start talking in Italian and there aren't any subtitles though. I wanna know what your characters just said!

Sounds about right, King also threw it in the trash and someone (I believe his wife, Tabitha) dug it out and told him to stop feeling sorry for himself and do something with it. *Looks at Batman V Superman and then Captain America: Civil War* (Okay, it isn't out yet, but I guarantee it will be competent). Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  01:23, April 26, 2016 (UTC)

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So I think I have something for chapter 12. Here's how it will go:

"A few moments later, Kristy dashed up the stairs and made her way towards the master bedroom where Hotaka was now slowly making his way down the hall with his head facing down towards the floor. "Hey Hotaka! I saw that Sugimoto lady making a mad dash out of the house. Is everything alright up here?" Kristy asked loudly. Hotaka collapsed to his knees while still keeping his head down. "Kristy..." Hotaka said in a low voice, "I shouldn't have told you that story out loud." Kristy jumped back a couple of inches and yelped "What?! Why?" Hotaka let out a deep and slow sigh and began to explain. "Well, let's just say that things go from bad to worse for both the storyteller and listener after the tale is told."

Kristy began rubbing her eyelids with her fingers and let out a rough sigh. "Listen Hotaka! What happened today WASN'T your fault, okay!" Hotaka nodded his head. "You know what, Kristy. You're right. I mean, kitchens getting destroyed is just an everyday occurrence." Kristy smacked her hand against her face and growled. "Look Hotaka... You've obviously been through a lot today so I want you to go home and get some rest. Maybe you'll feel better tomorrow." Hotaka took a deep breath and gradually got up off of the floor. "You know what Kristy, maybe you have a point. By the way, I'm sorry about what I said regarding your kitchen." The two had bowed to each other and said farewell."

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  02:44, April 20, 2016 (UTC)

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I'm glad to hear that you liked what I wrote. It's now an official part of chapter 12! The story still needs a few adjustments before I can continue working on the actual chapter itself.

There was a game called Little Nemo: The Dream Master released by Capcom in 1990 for the NES. It's a great game with an awesome soundtrack. However, the one problem I had with it was cheap enemy placement. Not only does this occur nearly all through the game but it also makes the game a bit too hard. I think if they remade the game and modified the enemy placement, the game would've been perfect.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  08:20, April 21, 2016 (UTC)

Looking forward to it
I'm excited to hear what you think. I'll be looking forward to your feedback.

Best,

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 13:08, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Cheap! Cheap! Cheap!" message
To answer you Pokemon related question, no. I have never played Pokemon Stadium. I've seen it at Gamestop (Formerly EB Games in America) way back in my childhood when the N64 was still kind of new but I haven't played it. Pokemon XD: Gale of Darkness was my true introduction to 3D Pokemon games. It has everything Stadium has to offer and more. I got my Gamecube around 2005 or 2006 and it still works even today! Take that Father Time!

So I got a new Haunting Hour review up on my blog: http://littleazusblog.blogspot.com/2016/04/every-haunting-hour-ever-33-scarecrow.html

The next episode I'm going to be reviewing has a character that kind of looks like Jeff the Killer except he's actually scary. I'll have to look at the amount of episodes season two has but I think it's less than twenty. I just checked and there are at least eighteen episodes in season two. I have reviewed about eleven episodes from this season. So I have about seven episodes left to review.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  17:42, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

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There are some stories that I found to be scary or a chill giver at the very least when I first read them. Examples of these stories include: Lavender Town Syndrome, Rap Rat, and ''Abandoned by Disney. ''However, when I read them much later, the scariness factor had worn off dramatically and I was able to see a lot of the flaws in these stories much more easily. Jeff the Killer is a story that NEVER scared me, even when I first read it. I guess this is because there was no sense of realism to it. With the other three examples, they felt a LOT more beliveable than ''Jeff the Killer. ''Yes, that's right! Even Abandoned by Disney with its "Costume coming to life with no explanation" ending felt a lot more real than Jeff the Killer! That's saying a lot really.

Speaking of Abandoned by Disney, what are your thoughts on Slimebeast, the author of Abandoned by Disney? For me, I think Slimebeast is capable of writing good stories but sometimes he gets a little stubborn when somebody reviews his stories. For example, the YouTube channel, MichealLeroi, did a reading of Abandoned by Disney a few months ago and Slimebeast got a little bit upset at them. Slimebeast and this YouTube channel have since made peace with each other so there's that.

I'm thinking of making a first person point and click game based on the Abandoned by Disney story. In this game, you play as the guy from the story (who will be named Ralph in the game) and you go around and explore Mowgeli's Palace. While exploring, you need to collect pieces of a diary which gives you clues as to why the place became abandoned. When you collect all of the pieces, you find out the following:

1. The place that the palace is located in had a curse placed on it hundreds of years ago by the local people. This curse affects people you do not use the land for the benefit of its inhabitants. Disney falls under this category for destroying homes and not making back the money spent on the resort's construction.

2. The writer of the diary had heard stories related to the curse by the locals and tried to tell their superiors about it but they were hesitant to believe them because the curse wasn't immedietly affecting them, therefore they had very little reason to worry about it. As the weeks passed on, the curse slowly took its toll on the place.

3. The first sign of the curse was the health of the employees. Some of them contracted tropical related illnesses and the ones who didn't were forced to double their workload and as a result, became overstressed. This resulted in some of the employees out right quitting their jobs. Disney covered this up by hiring anyone they could find regardless of the person's overall situation. In other words, they practially gave out jobs.

4. The sceond sign of the curse was when the vultures started attacking the wildlife and a few of the guests at the resort. This sign is based on an incident that happened at Disney's Discovery Island back in 1989 where Discovery Island came under controversy due to rifles being fired at hawks, vultures beat to death, and the destruction of ibis and egret eggs and nests by employees.

5. The third sign of the curse was the animatronics (which is what the inverted Mickey is revealed to be), acting as though they had a mind of their own. The animatronics had enough strength to, as the diary writer described it, "Hug a child so tightly to the point where their bones would get crushed,"

These ideas may change as I think about the idea more and more but I think they do a good job of explaining why the resort became abandoned.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  04:57, April 23, 2016 (UTC)

Critique Request
I have just put up a recent work on the Writer's Workshop. This is my second edit. My original story is featured in the comment section.

2412 E Cochran Rd (Still Needs Feedback)

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 21:40, April 23, 2016 (UTC)

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Regarding the sports commentator, one does not simply wring a duck's neck and hang him over a shower rod!

I think if the vultures were endangered or were under some sort of special protection then it wouldn't be legal to hurt or kill the vultures and their eggs. Speaking of vultures, the vultures in the Disney animated film The Jungle Book were supposed to be played by The Beatles hence why the characters vaguely resemble them but they turned down the role.

I haven't been able to find any good programs that would allow me to make a first person point and click game. Oh well, I'll keep looking! Maybe I'll try using Scratch or something to refine basic programming skills.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  02:37, April 25, 2016 (UTC)

Forgot Something!
I started doing a bit more modification to my Haunting Hour Pasta. I began fixing up more run on or awkward sentences. Here's the pastebin link to the latest version: http://pastebin.com/R4PjZPV5

Should I put this part in:

"This neighborhood was kind of boring to me though. For one thing, there wasn't much to do. There were no basketball courts, baseball fields, or anything of the sort. Heck, there weren't even other kids my age to hang out with! It seemed as though everyone in this neighborhood was around Erika's age, which was around fifty or sixty."

Or leave it out if it seems like padding?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  23:27, April 25, 2016 (UTC)

Raidra the Archivist
Yeah, it's super fine XD Thank you! I was worried for a second because I thought the site messed up and wiped my talk page, but then I saw that you archived it. I've had a name picked out for it for a while :)

Probably so, but it's annoying and inconvenient like you said. It would drive me nuts to not know what was said because I wouldn't know how important it was to the film. I've seen part of Airplane!, it's a classic laugh riot. I intend to see the whole film in a single sitting one of these days.

I can agree to that. He really thinks fondly of her and he gives her a lot of shout outs in On Writing, it is really sweet and I'm happy things have worked out so well for the two of them. No need to feel guilty :) It takes quite a bit to bother me and this was something that you did to be nice, so I'm not upset or inconvenienced at all. Sorry it took me so long to reply, I hope I didn't leave you sweating it for a long time. I went to bed early last night because I'm really sick and because there was bad storms so I had to unplug everything. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  15:01, April 27, 2016 (UTC)


 * It's really awful when you do it right and then look up and see the archive link is red as though it doesn't exist because the Wiki hasn't caught up XD There's always the revert button though, so that's handy. I wanted to be a surgeon, but couldn't because I wasn't so good with the maths. It would have been a comfortable living and I'd have been helping people at the same time (well, hopefully helping). The PG rating is pretty funny because it did a lot of risky stuff.


 * Not today, but hopefully tomorrow. I've got a sore throat and coughing that won't go away. I'll kill it off eventually. Yesterday was pretty annoying. There were four potential tornado producing wall clouds near my town, but they ended up not doing anything, well, one of them did spawn a rope tornado, but it went back up right after touching down XD I don't talk on the telephone, but I do sometimes shower during a thunderstorm. Sometimes you gotta get around and those tend to stick around for a very long time. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  05:18, April 28, 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks! I was going to go job hunting this week too :( Going to have to go as soon as this crud clears up before them graduates get all the openings. I'll try that tomorrow if I don't clear up tonight, because I don't have any Dr Pepper in the house (he doesn't make house calls that often). I've been drinking a lot of hot tea with honey and water, like four/five bottles a day. I tried some whiskey yesterday, so I think I'll try salt water tonight. They're lucky we aren't like the people from Fairly Odd Parents or we'd chase them out of town every time they were wrong XD They were annoying me the other day because we had four possible tornado drop in locations near my town and they kept moving their radar up toward the city they are stationed at saying "Oh no, looks like we've got a lot of hail heading our way. Check out all this hail! It might cause some damage." I'm all, "Come on, we've got the potential for four tornadoes!" (they probably spent more time checking out that hail which didn't amount to nothing than they did the potential tornadoes) Priorities :| Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  02:36, April 29, 2016 (UTC)


 * Things are looking up for my health. I'm not coughing as much and my throat doesn't feel that sore. I also went to the Chiropractor and got my neck snapped back into place -I tried to wait until I was better, but I couldn't no more- and everything feels significantly better right now. I still haven't tried the Dr Pepper yet, because I didn't go to the store today, though I am very interested in trying it after heating in a sauce pan now. I tend to like tea when it is made right -not the garbage that McDonalds and Pizza Hut sells- but I've got some special tea for my throat that tastes pretty nasty. I can still drink it without much issue, thankfully. I love Ginger Ale, that stuff is great for dealing with sickness.


 * Ha! They do that down here too. Sometimes it is really funny watching the weather people try to figure out how big the hail is because some people don't leave a size reference in their pictures. LOL


 * I've never been to a theatre, let alone a dinner theatre. It sounds like fun! I'm glad it moved you to tears :P Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  01:30, April 30, 2016 (UTC)


 * Having it snapped hurts a bit and I usually tense up before he snaps it, so he'll usually tell me to squeeze my feet together (that way my mind goes off it and he can snap my neck easily). It sure is better than not having it snapped though! Mountains! I'm so jealous! I've only been through mountains when I went to see Mount Rushmore in South Dakota back when I was in fourth grade. Mountains sure are pretty. I'd really like to go through some again one day. "TRADITION! ~music~ TRADITION!" Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  02:03, April 30, 2016 (UTC)


 * I don't know how Fiddler on the Roof goes (I've heard of it), but it sounds worth checking out. One thing a lot of people overlook is the advancements made in food. We've got fridges, microwaves, ovens, toasters, freezers, etc. It's really convenient and amazing to be able to cook something whenever and to be able to save most things for later. Not to mention there are things like fast food and dine in's, so we don't have to kill, pick, and/or make the stuff ourselves. It's truly great.


 * I don't remember the trip that well because I was in fourth grade, but I do remember going to this Flintstones themed park and eating a "Brontosaurus Burger" which made the whole trip worth it XD I also got to ride a horse which was fun! I'd really love to ride again one of these days, but alas I've not had the opportunity. Cottages! Now I want to go! Gosh that's beautiful. We don't have anything remotely like that in my state. I'll keep that in mind :) Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  01:16, May 1, 2016 (UTC)


 * Uh-huh. I'm such a wimp I doubt I could survive without those (fans and air conditioners, I know I can't without the running water) XD I'd put up with sitting on the runway for an hour to get to fly on a plane, that'd be awesome! Well, as long as we didn't crash. Ah, who am I kidding, it'd still be awesome. Haha, nope. It was big, but nowhere near that big! That would have been fun. I grew up off generic playgrounds which they ended up taking the teeter-totters and merry-go-rounds out because kids would stand under or get thrown off *grumbles*. Great times :D Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  01:23, May 2, 2016 (UTC)


 * Any stories that you've been working on? I'm getting ready to write another Creepypasta and this one will be set in an Asylum. I will attempt to make it a truly terrifying tale; dark, but in ways that add to the story. I feel it will be different from everything else I've written at least XD


 * I know you aren't really interested in the Batman V Superman film, but it has been determined that it won't pass the $1 Billion mark and the Warner Executives are reportedly unhappy and might begin to reevaluate how they are having those movies pushed out (that'd be great). They were gloating that it would make an easy Billion right before release, lol. I think it is sitting at $800 Million-something.


 * My illness feels nearly all gone. All that stuff that was in my throat feels completely broken up and I got my smell back, finally (for better or worse). Anyway, I thought I'd message you first tonight, because I'm thinking about heading off to bed and getting some sleep early. I'm just really tired tonight. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  00:14, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

A life without dressings and seasonings would be apocalyptic. That's correct, spices and tobacco were favorites among pirates. A lot of their food would be rotten and infested when they went to eat it because they didn't have any reliable way to preserve it out at sea and they would usually get sick because of it. It truly would have been miserable. Nice drawings! I wish I could draw a house and make a floor plan that well! It certainly looks like you thought of everything for it. I remember they took out a set of swings when I went to elementary. They had us sell cookie dough and if enough was sold, we'd get new playground equipment. I worked hard and so did the others, we succeeded in the goal. Our reward? The old swingset was put back in and painted silver. That's actually the earliest negative memory that I have, kind of an interesting one though.

Getting started is the hard part, isn't it? I have such a hard time motivating myself at times and I dislike myself for it. One of these days I'll make enough short stories to form a respectable collection!

I read today that the solo Batman film is going to be crammed full of villains. Reportedly most of the main ones will be in it. Could be good if they don't screw it up, but I don't know. I wish they had just made a film where he fights Red Hood instead.

Thank you! I slept really well last night :) Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  23:50, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Open Windows and Fans" message
Sorry I couldn't get this message to you last night. Wikia (which is what this wiki is a part of) was doing some maintenance on their site. This meant that you couldn't make any edits to the wiki. When I finished reading your message, I went to scroll up and I accidentally hit the edit button near your message. I made no edits to the message and quickly X'ed out of the page. When I went to read an article on this wiki, I saw that I got logged out of my account. I saw that I was back to 1,500 edits as opposed to the 1,502 edits I had earlier today but I was glad to see that my wiki account didn't get banned. When I tried to login though, I was redirected to a white page with this text at the top of it: "Our main datacenter is down, you are accessing our backup datacenter. We are working to fix the problem." Did you have the same problem or was I the only one experiencing this issue?

As for the windows and fans part, I modified that part because for one thing, I felt that it made the character come off as too whiny. I also changed it because I had another idea for the ending that ties in the open windows part. The algae will be revealed to have hallucinogenic effects on people under the age of 18 or 21 because their lungs are more sensitive to its scent. Long exposure to the scent within a half or full mile radius will trigger and intensify the hallucinogenic effects. Because it's a neighborhood where older adults are the majority of the residents, this effect on younger people wasn't previously known to the the state's environmental protection agency. The scent builds this sort of mold like substance on the lungs which contaminates the bloodstream and travels up to the brain causing the hallucinogenic effects.

One possible explanation for the origin of the lost episode could be that it was a forgotten school project by Erika's college age son named Darren who left it behind during one of his visits to her house. I'm thinking about the idea but I'm not sure if the origin should be explained at all.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  21:23, April 27, 2016 (UTC)

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I never heard of people going to Disney during the Super Bowl until now to be honest. The last time I went to Disney, I went in December of 2008 and travelled through all four parks in one day since me, my dad and my brother were going to visit other family members the next day. I would love to go again sometime. I'd have to get some big water jugs to put money in though. That's what my family did when they wanted to go on a grand vacation. They'd get some five gallon water jugs and everyone would contribute to it by putting money in the jug.

I've been recently working on my website for my Pokemon fan fiction, specifically the "About Me" section. Weebly is a site that's much easier to work with on a computer than a mobile device. I'm trying to make the site similar to how Dorkpool set up his Weebly site because not only are black backgrounds are easier on the eyes, especially when reading at night without a blue light filter, but I think the blog theme will be the best suited theme for the series.

I've made changes to later parts of the story. If you're interested, I can send you a pastebin link.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  08:47, April 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "We've Got to Have... Moneeeeeeeey" Message
Regarding the Haunting Hour reviews, they don't have a Weebly site. They're on my Blogger page because they're perfect for the site's format. Since Pokemon Garnet is its own separate thing, I don't want the Garnet episodes to clutter up my main blog. I may move the Haunting Hour reviews to their own separate blog once I review all of the episodes. I'm nearly halfway done reviewing the whole series and I have a brand new review coming out next Friday! For season 2, I have reviewed 12/18 episodes so I'm not that far off from completing this season.

So I started a wiki dedicated to showcasing my work and letting other people post stuff relating to me as an author. I would give you the link to it, but it's not in a presentable state yet. It might seem a bit weird but if Slimebeast can have an entire wiki dedicated to him, I don't think having a wiki dedicated to me should be that much of an issue.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  05:12, May 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Weirdest Travel Guide Ever" Message
I always bring more money than I need whenever I feel like I'm going to buy something that day. My mom gave me some really good advice and this is: "It's better to have it and not need it than to need it and not have it." I think this is some pretty smart advice because I've been in situations where I needed something and didn't have it like lip balm for example (chapped lips are really painful so you can imagine how awful the situation was).

So you wanted a link to my wiki right? Well since the wiki looks more presentable, I guess I could link you to it: http://haileysawyer.wikia.com/wiki/User:TheAzumangaDaiohFan

That's one of the most detailed pages on the wiki by far. Would you mind drawing a picture for the platypus bunny story? It's this one here: http://haileysawyer.wikia.com/wiki/The_Girl_Who_Cried_Platypus_Bunny_and_Whatnot

I have an idea for what should happen next in the pasta. After Hotaka and Kristy bow to each other, The episode could shift to night time where we see Kristy's mom setting up a sleeping bag in Kristy's room. A while later, we see Kristy trying to fall asleep. She eventually does but ends up having nightmares. The next day Ashe wakes up and she's really tired. She also starts to hear voices, which is weird to her because she has stayed up all night once and we get this line: "Oh God, please don't tell me I'm THAT tired!" Or something else like that.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  20:49, May 2, 2016 (UTC)

Apology
Hello this is Nibor74. I just wanted to let you know I have apologized to the writer of the Uncle Grandpa article. You were right. I should have never made it a personal attack against the author. I was upset at the insinuations that were being made about the show and it's characters and I got angry. I should not have lashed out like that. It was childish and just plain wrong. For what it's worth, I am truly sorry.

Nibor74 (talk) 04:01, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

Thank You
Thanks. No apology necessary. You were standing up for what's right and my behavior was very trollish. You have a good night as well. 😊

Nibor74 (talk) 04:31, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "I'm Getting Very Sleepy" Message
I'm writing this message late at night and feel kind of tired. Anyway, chapped lips are really painful, especially when you lick them in the winter time.

I've recently posted a couple of my upcoming projects on the homepage of my wiki if you're interested. I plan on posting some more upcoming projects soon but for now I'm too tired.

I've been thinking over my idea for what should happen in the pasta next. Maybe instead of having Kristy hear the voices after one night of no sleep, she can feel very tired and be a bit more clumsy and seemingly sick. After a couple of days her condition gets worse and she starts to hear voices. Her parents decide to take her to a doctor to have her evaluated.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  05:39, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

Raidra, wow you have done a lot of research! That was so cool to read. I read all of it! As far as my own experience goes, I am a licensed "Ninja weapons specialist - advanced level" (believe it or not). Not exactly something i can list on my resume. I teach Iaido, Kenjutsu, Shinobi gatana, rokushakubo, senban shuriken, bo shuriken, shindake, shuko, kusari fundo, common items as weapons, kuboton. It's not a huge list like what you have compiled but each takes time to become proficcient in. The class i teach just spent a year and a half learning kenjutsu level 1 or kihon. They just barely scratched the surface. Ive always been a huge fan of weapons. Blacknumber1 (talk) 20:58, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

Blueprints of Success
Happy Star Wars Day! I'm starting to imagine that you have a shelf full of books that you've put together; one with the weapons, one with comic books, and one with housing plans. Am I wrong? XD LOL I've never ever heard of someone going door to door selling mattresses, let alone there being a fundraiser that does this. Oooh, Knightfall would make a great film!

Bakom is the word I get when I hold my tongue and say "Bacon". I'm on to you and your love of bacon, Raidra! Seriously though, who could hate bacon? I noticed that he makes dolls, does he ever use them as tools (booby-trap them for example) or is it solely for fun? He sounds interesting. I really like his humble beginnings. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  21:06, May 4, 2016 (UTC)


 * Yay, I was right! I've got to start doing that myself, that's actually really neat and professional. Aw, I was imagining half a fifth grade class carrying a Queen-sized Mattress from house to house, while one knocks door to door until they sell it. I guess that's as cruel as the mental image is funny though. My town has a lot of churches, but I don't think many people come from different towns to go to them. The dying/dead surrounding towns still have their churches left.


 * Jim Gaffigan is hilarious! I love how he cracks jokes about food (I don't actually remember anything specific, but I remember his voice and laughing when he talked). My friend has listens to comedians in his car and when I'm with him we tend to listen to Carlin and Gaffigan.


 * Yep, that's why I wondered about the dolls. Silly me, he probably booby-traps his garden :P "I'm not planting tomatoes. I'm planting deceit." *Sticks a landmine disguised as a tomato into the ground* Ooh, that's crafty. I'd probably fall prey to the bookmark myself XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  04:03, May 5, 2016 (UTC)


 * I'm looking forward to it! Sweet, that'll be fun to look at. Ha ha. I really should spend more time listening to Gaffigan. I'm sure I could find some of his bits on YouTube. Being stuck to something forever would be awful, heck, just a long time would be bad. Honey might work. Have a beehive nearby and release the bees upon the helpless individual. Yeah, a scarecrow made to look like a guard would be clever. The intruder tries to stealthily knock it out and bam, caught! There's certainly some tactfulness when it comes to hiding/disguising something in plain sight. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  03:19, May 6, 2016 (UTC)


 * That's creative and brilliant. Mannequins are pretty unsettling anyway. Good thing she didn't itch or have to sneeze XD


 * I like the idea of The Welcome House (specifically that it is shared). It's a really odd concept that the one doesn't ambush the other there, yet it makes sense that they don't do it because of how they are and how it is sacred ground to them. It sounds like it is basically a physical manifestation of how Flying Fox and Specter are similar in that it is of both good and bad history.


 * I also really like the idea of someone donning a gas mask and flooding a room with poison gas just because they want some alone time. You should definitely do that scene! I do love your hideouts and how you have interesting situations arise in them. You really know how to make them unique. It's too bad you don't design buildings for a living. I bet you'd design some really cool ones (each one would probably come with a unique secret room) XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  03:16, May 7, 2016 (UTC)


 * That makes sense. Good thinking, I've never thought of villain hideouts being maintained while they are away. They probably tend to have henchmen do it on the rare occasions when their hideouts aren't destroyed, though they almost always are or they relocate. Lol. I hope they don't get kicked out!


 * That was nice of him. I always have to suffer through conversations when I'm with my dad and he runs into somebody XD That's neat! Raidra had talent even as a child, huh? I've always been somewhat a fun of maps (floor plans are a lot like that in my opinion). I don't know why, maybe I just like being able to see everything at once? It's pretty neat when you come across something that doesn't match up with the blueprints/map, though it might not be for whoever made that mistake or change.


 * Yay! *Puts up railroad crossing sign inside of house* I don't know, maybe someone just has a really good sense of humor! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  02:44, May 8, 2016 (UTC)


 * That's why there are groups like 'The Justice League' and 'The Legion of Doom'. "Don't worry bud, you can live here and not have to worry about insurance!" Now there's an idea for a story! "How did I end up in the sewer? This place I'm trying to rob doesn't match up with the blueprints! Ah, sewer gator!" Doing it wrong is an interesting way of protecting your work XD LOL


 * It looks like it is going to be a feelspasta. You did a great job of describing the house. You were really thorough! I am really interested in what all the cubs mean. Specter seems to really like lions and perhaps identifies with them or is using them to showcase his past. I feel like the statues outside might symbolize Specter and a family he once had, but I'll just have to wait and see! I don't have any of the things that you described as having at your house at mine. I saw Lion King 2 back when I was young, probably around 10 or so and I didn't like it either. I don't remember anything about it now. The original isn't surpassable though, so I don't know why they made a sequel in the first place XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  14:45, May 9, 2016 (UTC)


 * You mean your email notified you that you received a new message on the wiki, right? If you mean I emailed you, I totally didn't, because I don't have your email address and hardly ever check my email :| Lol, I love movies like that. There's a comedy western movie that's name escapes me at the moment, but there is a part where the villain is recruiting bad guys and everyone from Nazis to the KKK shows up and this one guy is chewing gum. The villain looks at the gum chewer and asks, "Did you bring enough for everybody?" and the gum chewer replies "No." which causes the villain to respond by shooting him. There's also another scene where they are all fighting and break through the set and end up fighting through another movie XD


 * That is sad. I wonder if that is the event that triggered the criminal in him or if there was something else that made him walk down that path? Unicorn and qilin is my favorite of the bunch. I'm biased though, I really like Unicorns.


 * Speaking of Foxes, I got my video game that I've been waiting on forever; Stellaris. It is a space strategy game and it is different each time because the galaxy and races randomly generate. Well, my neighboring race happened to be Space Foxes and they were so cute. Unfortunately they were jerks, so I conquered and enslaved them (because I'm a bigger jerk). Fun times :D Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  15:54, May 10, 2016 (UTC)


 * Yep! Can't believe the name escaped me! I didn't know he made Men in Tights. I love his work, Spaceballs was great! He's actually making a second one now. Ha ha, clay peasants.


 * So his life is even sadder than that. I feel like a lot of things start with the phrase "What if" when I start writing XD It is really fun to find ways that make sense to link things together, though one has to be careful otherwise the world seems small. Woohoo!


 * I followed it extensively. I spent close to 20 hours watching videos of the developers streaming the game (they would get together and play every Thursday). There was a lot of love put into it. Random generation has been around for a long time, hasn't it? I love things that are different on each playthrough. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  14:58, May 11, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry to hear that. I hope that things resolve themselves in the best manner possible if at all possible, if not then my condolences. This year has been rough on a lot of people, but I hope that it ends up being a good one for you. Thank you for taking the time to respond. I'm always here if you want to talk about anything :)

Ha ha. Wolverine has been everywhere, even the vacuum of space can't stop him XD

Yeah. A lot of that comes down to investors and having to appease them by getting the game out as quickly as possible. It's really sad because most of the big companies cut corners now, especially Ubisoft. Far Cry 4 came out in 2014 for example, well they released Far Cry Primal in February of this year and do you know how they managed that? It turns out that they reused the exact same map. Back in the day when assets were reused it was called an expansion and you were charged expansion prices, but now it constitutes a new game and new game prices. Really sad.

There being a ramp is more proof that Specter is a good guy, he makes his hideouts wheelchair accessible. Love the description of the trap door. Most superheroes have to enter hideouts with normal doors on them. The furnishings i The Welcome House were important as it added to the character of said house which was a major point of the story; here the hideout not so much :P I always have trouble on deciding how much information I should reveal about rooms. I don't want to give too much and risk boring the reader and it seems superfluous when it isn't important.

Yay, the solitude chamber! This was very well written. I am looking forward to more :) Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  15:38, May 12, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Much Better! I Mean It Just Is" Message
I've been doing a bit more research on sleep deprivation. I found out that you don't usually experience hallucinations until you've been deprived for at least two to three days. That's one of the reasons why I decided to rework my idea.

"After the two had parted ways, the episode had cut to a scene showing the front of Kristy's house. The sky behind it was now a navy blue colour with very few white dots scattered about. I also noticed that the streetlights in front of the house had a milky white glow to them." That's what I have for the next part so far.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  23:24, May 5, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Navy Blue Song" Message
I recently added the latest part with the establishing shot of Kristy's house to my story. So after the shot, it will cut to Kristy's mom setting up a sleeping bag in her daughter's room. Kristy is still upset about it but not as much as earlier. This time, she apologizes for the way she reacted to the missing bed earlier but her mom tells her that they were going to go bed shopping tomorrow anyway and to just rest up seeing as how she had a big day. She has the nightmares and the next day Kristy is tired and is a bit more clumsy than usual. She and her mom later arrive at a furniture store. Here, as Kristy is looking around at the beds and she goes to try out some of the beds to see how good they are by lying down in them. Because she is tired, she eventually nods off. Not sure if the nightmares will come back here.

I also got a new Haunting Hour review up so if you didn't get a chance to read it yesterday, it's still up on my blog site. I'm still kind of surprised Slimebeast has his own wiki. I looked at the logo for the wiki and it didn't seem very fitting so I designed a new one for them (I used an online font generator to get the slime effect). Here it is:



The logo must be 250 x 50 or less in order to fit into the part where the logo goes (top left under the white Wikia banner). I left the logo on the home page's talk page and I haven't gotten any feedback so far.

I also added a new favicon to my wiki. This is the image before it was converted into a favicon:



A faivcon is like a logo that's located on the lefthand side of a browser tab. It's 16 x 16 which is so small, you wouldn't be able to see it properly on this page. Since this is my first favicon, I decided to go with something basic and visable on the browser tab.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  02:25, May 8, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Gary Larson x Cows" message
I think I have a book with most if not all the Far Side comic strips in it. It was a purple paperback book that I got a few Christmases ago. I might've put it away somewhere but I'll look for it sometime later.

In other news, I added a new part to my R.L Stine pasta. It goes like this: "A few seconds later, the focus shifted to Kristy's room where Kristy's mother was busy setting up a temporary bed made up of at least a dozen milk crates and a purple sleeping bag. Kristy then walked into the room where she was immediately greeted by her mother. " I'm trying to figure out what the two characters will say without starting off with the word "Sorry".

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  14:55, May 9, 2016 (UTC)

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So I decided to try and fix up the story Sonic.exe. Here are the first few paragraphs of the rewrite:

The day was foggy and the rain was pouring down hard. I was lying down on my bed, playing Crash Bandicoot. I found myself yawning very frequently and nearly every part of my body besides my arms seemed nearly impossible to lift. A few moments later, my blinking got slower and slower until my eyes completely closed.

I was soon woken up by the sound of someone talking outside. I then heard my mail box's creaky metal door opening. When the talking stopped, I paused my game to see what I got in the mail. The only thing in the mailbox was a white rectangular envelope with my name and address on the front of it and the name "Tom" tucked away in the upper left hand corner. I instantly recognized it as my best friend's name and my heart began to race. I hadn't seen him since we attended that film festival in Rhode Island last year.

I ran inside as fast as I could in order to escape the heavy rain. As I sat down on the couch in the living room, I wasted no time opening the envelope and quickly pulled out the contents. In the envelope, I found a CD ROM protected by a transparent jewel case and a note. I briefly looked at the CD ROM and saw the words "Aguja Ratón Vuelva a Elaborar" written on the case. I decided to look at the note hoping that there was a translation for the words on the case. When I opened up the note, I was greeted by these words:

"María, I can't take it anymore, I had to get rid of this thing somehow before it was too late, and I was hoping you'd do it for me. I can't do it, he’s after me, and if you don't destroy this CD, he'll come after you too! Please María, destroy this god-forsaken disc before he comes after you too, it's too late for me. Destroy the disc but do it quick otherwise he'll catch you. Don't even put that disc in your computer! It's what he wants, just destroy it. Please! From your friend, Tom."

By the time I finished reading the note, my heart had instantly sunk and I felt an icy jolt run across my body. A million thoughts were rushing through my mind and my breathing started to speed up. A few moments later, a lightbulb went off in my head and I rushed over to the phone mounted up in the kitchen. As soon as I picked up the phone, I dialed Tom's number. I stood there until I heard these words, "Hey! It's Tom! Sorry I can't get to the phone right now. If you leave a message with your name and number, I'd be happy to call ya back as soon as I can!"

Before I had the chance to leave a message, I slammed the phone back into its wall mount and picked it up again. I rapidly dialed 911 and repeatedly tapped my foot on the floor until someone eventually picked up on the other end. "911 what's your emergency?" A woman with a British accent asked. I told her about the envelope I received from Tom and how I found its contents to be rather concerning. I also told her how he never answered when I tried to call him.

I'm surprised that no one has tried their hand at this yet. Or maybe someone has and we don't know about it.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  18:27, May 10, 2016 (UTC)

No worries!
I hope everything is okay. Take the time you need and get everything situated at home. We'll all still be here when you get matters sorted out.

Best wishes,

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 00:35, May 12, 2016 (UTC)

Saw Your Messages
I noticed you didn't say what it was, so I won't ask, but I hope everything's ok. If you need anything, my talk page is always open.

Jay Ten (talk) 00:38, May 12, 2016 (UTC)

RE:Family situation
Sorry to hear about your mom's toe. Hopefully, she'll recover soon and best wishes to her. I'm not going to be the wiki for a while due to having to help my parents fix up a rental. It's a real pain when real life barges in when you have so many ideas swirling around in your head.

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 03:56, May 13, 2016 (UTC)

Are You Still Taking Messages Here?
So I was looking over the first chapter of my Haunting Hour pasta and I found a problem with this paragraph:

"However, there was another episode made after "Goodwill Towards Men" that was never part of the original run. Oh don't get me wrong! From what I understand, this WAS supposed to be with said run but I haven't seen it on Discovery Family nor have I seen it anywhere on the internet where I could watch it for free! When all of my available sources hit dead ends, it seemed like I would never know the truth behind this episode."

Let me break it down. First, the paragraph doesn't address how the protagonist knows about the episode if she found little to no information about it on the Discovery Family channel or the internet? This is before she visits Erika's house and finds the episode by the way. I think I put this in because this pasta was inspired by a blank iMDB page relating to an episode of season four but in the context of the story, it's never elaborated on that much nor makes any sense.

Second, it comes off as just a bit TOO coincidental. She does research on this episode and then in the next chapter, finds the episode. I tried to rework this part to address some of these issues. Granted, I might make a few more changes but I might as well show you what I have.

"From what I saw, the series seemed to end in its 4th season on the episode "Goodwill Towards Men" and I was rather disappointed that it had ended so suddenly. I think this had to do with the fact that I found it pretty underwhelming for a series finale. After the series ended, I went back and watched a few episodes from Season 4 of The Haunting Hour on the DVR at my mom's house. It was a rather hit and miss season but not anything atrocious. The only episode in the entire series that I considered god awful was Poof De Formage. Ever since the Goodwill Towards Men episode first aired, I constantly wondered whether or not it was even intended to be the series finale as I always felt like the network wanted to air another episode but couldn't do so for whatever reason.

Chapter 2

When the warmer months came, my brother and I decided to go up to Cape Cod and stay with my mother's friend Erika for a little while. Our mother didn't object to it since she and Erika were on good terms. Not only that but she also felt like we were mature enough to go by ourselves, but reminded us to be on our best behaviour anyway."

Let me know what you think of this change.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  15:23, May 13, 2016 (UTC)

No Clever Title
Oh wow. That is rough, but I'm glad she's okay. If I ever lose a toe then I hope it is my pinky toe, because those things always seem to find a way to hit something and hurt forever. Why end toes, why? What does your mom's recovery involve and is she moving any different, if you don't mind my asking (I've always been curious as to how useful toes actually are). Thank you for sharing that with me, I appreciate the trust :)

Ha! I have a bulletin board in my bedroom that I like to pin stuff on and you reminded me of something that I've got posted on there: http://ogun.stanford.edu/~bnayfeh/plan.html It is oh so true!

You and your mom take care! I'm sure she appreciates you being there and giving support; you're a good daughter. This year has been too much of a mixed bag to be able to call it good. There's been a lot of big changes and most of them haven't been good, but don't worry about me. I adapt, somehow XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  16:01, May 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * Ah. I don't know why, but I had figured that she had already been released. Quickest recovery ever, lol. It is good that she can move around as long as she puts weight on her heel though.


 * I know what you mean. The existence of end toes confound me. Feet would be a lot more durable without them and just some extra foot padding there instead. I've sprained an ankle from jumping of the bleachers in gym class on my 15th birthday (a dodgeball was up there. I went to get it and someone through a dodgeball at me so I leapt off that way I wouldn't get out. Unfortunately, it hurt so bad that I had to sit out anyway) and I got sent home with crutches. I will concur that end toe pain is greater XD


 * One time in high school one of us was given something to say by the teacher and they had to pass it along to the next person who also had to pass it on and so on until the class got the message. The whole point of it was to see how distorted the message would become. I don't remember what the message was, but I do remember that it was distorted beyond all repair by the time it reached the last person XD


 * I loled at schmuck. Great job on the skull and crossbones and gas masks. Those are things I have never been able to draw well. Thank you for the story! I hope yours is too! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  21:08, May 14, 2016 (UTC)


 * Happy Birthday! *blows in noisemaker*


 * Yeah, that'd be nice. At least she'll be able to see it no matter what. High School graduation is today here. Kind of bummed out it is so soon here, because I was hoping to have a job before graduation. Now that job market is going to get even more impossible.


 * Metal? They sure don't make them like they used to (because they hurt people). Sounds like some cool shoes though. Maybe he had metal decorations on his shoes too? "I've been there and done that. I needed stitches." XD


 * Stan Lee is hilarious. I remember that he got a phone call on his birthday to let him know that they were killing off Peter Parker and Stan noted: "Most people get told happy birthday when they reach 80, instead I got a dead Spiderman." I found this while trying to find the nose armor in google: http://www.marvunapp.com/Appendix4/earthmagnetostuck4.jpg Inside joke, Iron Man knows.


 * Haha. The uncertain way of handling things; don't show it. I do that all the time when writing and I feel like there is something I can't quite pull off. I find a different way to show it. Lol. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  16:47, May 15, 2016 (UTC)


 * I barely made it to wish her a happy birthday yesterday as well. I didn't realize it was also her birthday.


 * I hope it is good news! I'm wishing her the best. Yeah, it sure is. A few towns over from me, someone brought a gun to the graduation for some stupid reason and it accidentally (yes, reportedly it was an accident???) went off and hurt some people; didn't kill anyone. "Oh, I brought this loaded gun to a place where it has no business being, but don't worry nothing bad will happen. Oops, it just went off. Looks like I shot myself in the foot here, metaphorically of course, because the bullet actually ended up in that tree over there." Seriously though, why would anyone bring a gun to such an event?


 * Ha ha. *Imitates Patrick from the suds episode* "I want some metal shoe decorations too."


 * That is funny. I don't think the nose looks horrible, but it definitely looks better without the nose. I love all the subtle and not so subtle jabs the comics made about it XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  23:52, May 16, 2016 (UTC)


 * That's good! Being at home and out of the hospital should lift her spirits significantly. Male nurses are becoming more and more common, my dad had a bunch of male nurses back when he had heart surgery two years ago. Nothing wrong with that though (even though some people still scream that nursing is a female job, much like with mechanics being male only, neither are true). There's no such job that is gender locked, you know?


 * Having a gun because you are paranoid and then being the problem is actually sort of funny in a very twisted way. No way! I don't know if I can believe the magazine or not, that's really funny. I want to know if he got fined or arrested. "Excuse me, sir. Would you please stop shooting the ceiling out of excitement? It is ruining the movie for everyone else."


 * Heh, Cyranose. Raidra, spoilers. I guess it explains Specters funding though. Now you have to retcon him as having an English accent :3 Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  16:42, May 17, 2016 (UTC)


 * My apologies if I sounded like I was on a soapbox, looking back it sort of looks that way to me XD It is cool seeing these old stereotypes being abolished. Times are changing and it often seems to be for the worse to me, but it is definitely nice to see some good changes sprinkled in there.


 * The argument could potentially be amazing. "Sir, I am going to have to ask you to leave, besides, Julia Roberts performance was shallow and lacking." "Her performance was great" *fires two rounds into the ceiling* "It was lacking!" *Usher pulls out a gun and shoots four rounds into the ceiling* That might make for a good comedy routine actually, haha.


 * Specter sounds like he is easy to disappoint :P I'm curious as to whether or not he has an end game in all of this, suspicious Vroom is suspicious. It is an interesting development. Not many could gain access to such a place in theory and that was certainly one great way to go about it. It'd be nice to see him turn too because it shows character development. It doesn't have everyone locked into a certain routine/static world. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  05:02, May 18, 2016 (UTC)


 * I'm glad to hear that she is doing better :)


 * Did you know that polygraph tests are easy to beat? All you have to do is hurt yourself during the test questions (the questions the ask that they obviously know the answer to). When you hurt yourself during them, it causes spikes in the reading and everything else won't spike in comparison which makes it look truthful.


 * He's sincere, wow. Someone being reformed is something you don't see everyday, don't immediately kill him off while he's being good or you'll be following that overused "bad guy turns good and immediately dies" trope :P Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  17:01, May 19, 2016 (UTC)


 * It'll be interesting to see it done. It's always neat to see villains work with heroes, though I guess Specter is also a hero now in this case XD


 * Oh, he's fine in regards to his heart. He had the surgery in October 2014 and went back to work in March 2015. Unfortunately, he may need to have back surgery now. We don't know yet. He had an appointment to find out scheduled for the other day and took a vacation for it and everything, but the doctors office called and left a voice message, cancelling his appointment within 24 hours of him needing to be there. He's had that appointment for 5 months and has been relying on pain pills because he's in a lot of pain, so we kind of want to throttle someone for pulling that. He's supposed to get in 3 weeks from now, so well see then, maybe. I've always found it ridiculous that if a person cancels a doctors appointment they have to pay a fee, but if the doctors office cancels an appointment then there is no consequence for them. Thank you for asking :) Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  15:46, May 20, 2016 (UTC)

My New Trollpasta
Remember what I said earlier that I'm writing a grandma scam trollpasta? Here it is. Read it and tremble in fear!

 Ruckus Q uantum   18:11, May 13, 2016 (UTC)

RE:Family situation2
Yeah, fortunately, we didn't have to deal with any raccoon or treasure-hunting gangsters issues although the neighborhood is in a rather rough patch. However, the previous tenants were rather hippish and took all my mom's curtains and hooks...also they didn't clean up the house, but we managed to get everything pretty much all right again. Hopefully, people will stop by on Open House Day.

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 21:40, May 13, 2016 (UTC)

I heard about the Shrimp Story, but thought it was an actual event.

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 05:21, May 14, 2016 (UTC)

Re:
Well that's not good. I really hope everything goes as well as it can in a situation like that. I'm sure that won't be an easy transition for her. Again, if you need anything (not that I can do much), feel free to message me. Have a good one.

Jay Ten (talk) 13:00, May 14, 2016 (UTC)


 * Lol, I totally forgot about that blog. See, I have good ideas, they just need time to become relevant! Anyway, tell her we all hope she gets better very soon.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 16:31, May 15, 2016 (UTC)

RE:Family situation3
Who knows? The Shrimps in the Curtain Rods could of happened and we don't know the actual incident since there's so many variations of that story. Yeah, I remember the dead fish pranks in Grumpy Old Men especially the end where the Maxguy snuck a fish in Snyder's car.

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 02:43, May 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Birthday Girl" message
Thank you for that. It's not the 15th over here yet. I live in the northeastern United States and we use Eastern Standard Time. Right now it's around 11 o' clock here. I'll make an announcement regarding my birthday tomorrow on this wiki's blog but I'm going to be out playing laser tag with the homeschooling graduates. The place we're going to however doesn't offer birthday discounts which really sucks.

Blameitonjorge has a new video uploaded so I'm going to wwatch that now.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  03:07, May 15, 2016 (UTC)

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The funny thing is that we were originally going to play laser tag but we decided to play bowling instead. For one thing, the bowling alley and laser tag games were all in the same place. Second, there were only four or five of us that showed up so even if we wanted to play laser tag, I don't think we would have had enough people. We had to rush through the bowling since we only paid for a half hour of rental time for the lane (yup it's that kind of bowling). I prefer duckpin bowling but I did have a lot of fun regardless. Afterwards, we went over to Chili's since it was near the mall and I ordered the honey chipolte ribs. Compared to other resturants where the rib meat is kind of papery, these ribs actually tasted like real meat. I have some left over so I'm going to have that for lunch today.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  18:03, May 16, 2016 (UTC)

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What were the falling outs with The Backstreet Boys? I probably wasn't around for that so can I get filled in on it? Were they addicted to ribs? Did Chili's secretly inject their food with a secret super mutant formula? The suspense is killing me!

I've been doing research on the effects of anaesthesia, specifically general anaesthesia, out of pure curiosity and and from what I have read, it makes people very loopy once the anaesthesia wears off. Did this happen to your mother after her surgery?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  17:22, May 17, 2016 (UTC)

Very happy to hear good news
Kara,

Very pleased to hear that all is well on the home front. I know how stressful and scary those situations can be, and it is good to know that everything is turning out well. Take all the time you need and focus your energy on your family. Family first, always.

Best wishes,

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 00:57, May 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re:
That's great to hear. Thanks for keeping us updated. I hope the rest of her recovery goes as smoothly as possible. When her mood is better (much better) tell her I said, "Ah, what's one toe anyway? We've got ten of them for crying out loud! Who needs that many of anything?! And think of all those awful stubbings you no longer have to worry about."

Jay Ten (talk) 13:05, May 19, 2016 (UTC)

RE:Family situation3
That's good to hear that your mom is now home and she might be able to attend your nephew's high school graduation. My parents are planning another open house, but we pretty much got the house improved enough. People with one or two pets are fine, but no little kids.

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 17:49, May 19, 2016 (UTC)

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Well that's good to hear. I hope she makes a full, speedy recovery! No way! I'm also graduating on Saturday! It's a homeschooling graduation and I just had to attend a rehersal for it yesterday. I didn't get back until around 8 or 9 o' clock at night. I was really tired last night if you couldn't tell.

I've been working on a new part in the R.L Stine pasta as well as my new Haunting Hour Review. I'm almost done with the review and I'm hoping to have it uploaded by tomorrow. If not, my brithday blog should go into more detail as to why it wasn't uploaded. Anyway, here's the part I'm working on: '''"Hey there, sweetie!" Kristy's mother said softly. Kristy had stretched out her arms as far as they could go and began to yawn. She then turned her head to the right and noticed the bed her mother had set up. "Now that's what I call a bed!" Kristy giggled wearily. Kristy's mother had giggled a bit as she grinned and scratched the back of her neck. "Well, I know it's not the comfortable thing ever but I think it should get you through the night. Then after that, you can pick out whatever kind of bed you want at the store."'''

Feel free to tell me what you think about it.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  00:13, May 20, 2016 (UTC)

No brats allowed
I've never heard that joke before but that's pretty funny.

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 03:00, May 20, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Graduation Theme Song" Message
They may play the traditional graduation theme song. You know, something like this. From what I heard at the rehearsal, they will be doing the pledge of allegiance followed by a prayer (it's a religious homeschooling group after all).

I've also got a new Haunting Hour review on my blog and I may upload my next review early (next Friday) depending on how I feel. I may have more to say about the second part more so than the first part.

So I have a list of material from the R.L Stine pasta that didn't quite make the cut. This list has been growing since January of 2015. I've recently added some things to it such as the description of a bunk bed that was never mentioned anywhere else in the story. Here's the link to the scrapped material list: http://pastebin.com/Rv6NJwmh

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  00:33, May 21, 2016 (UTC)

Undercooked Characters
Yeah, it makes the characters look one dimensional and lacking in personality. People see how successful Game of Thrones and The Dark Knight was and think that grimdark automatically equals success; it doesn't. Sad scenes work best when they follow up on comedic ones. I'm more apt to care when something bad happens to a funny person, rather than a one-sided person who is always grimdark and sad.

Ha, I thought you were going to curse XD I was all "No Raidra, noooo! Don't swear like Vroom does." Thank you again! Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  16:39, May 21, 2016 (UTC)


 * Didn't the Joker ask the host if he could keep the mug he was drinking from and then smash it and use it to slit the TV host's throat after he said yes? That's pretty funny in a morbid way. I might be blending the scene with the one from Under the Red Hood where the Joker asks for a glass of water and does the same trick. Heck, maybe he just really likes doing that and has something against mugs.


 * It'll catch up to her and she'll get expelled. Then taking the time to write the actual paper won't look so bad XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  02:34, May 23, 2016 (UTC)


 * LOL Batman and the Joker can never go into business together making Ice Cream Floats. Smashed glasses and liquefied ice cream everywhere, I tell you.


 * I've tried doing that with a couple of things, but I find that Google isn't great for that. I am really glad no one stole those, because I know how much work you put into them!


 * Completely random, but sort of not since food came up: I made a homemade Pizza Sub and it was so good. I've decided that I'm going to dabble in making homemade pizza. I'm fairly confident in my ability to do so since I spent two years working at Pizza Hut and know their tricks and secrets from six years ago XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  04:16, May 23, 2016 (UTC)


 * I always tip delivery drivers and I will leave a few dollars as a tip when I dine in anywhere unless the service is bad (I'd like to think that I'm not that picky because I used to be a server and know how off the rails things can get).


 * I'm glad to hear it! I bet walking on her heel is killing her or feels really weird.


 * There's a frog hanging out around my house and it won't stop croaking, sooo loud. At first it was kind of funny, but now it is annoying. It gets really excited whenever I mow or whenever it rains heavily. I've been making jokes about how the police are going to come knocking on our door in the middle of the night and fine us for the noisy frog. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  01:53, May 24, 2016 (UTC)

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So I graduated from homeschooling. Funny thing though, I still got a high school diploma instead of something like a G.E.D. It was a very good ceremony and I was trying to hold back my tears the entire time. There were some who did the same such as the parents and one girl just let out the waterworks as she was coming up on stage to receive her diploma. All of the graduate's parents were allowed a one or two minute (about 250 or so words) speech yet the guy who was giving the opening prayer seemed like he was going on for way longer than that. I thought we were going to throw our hats so i took out all my bobby pins that were holding my cap up but after everything was said and done, no one threw up their caps. Then again, it was an indoor ceremony so I imagine that wouldn't be safe to do. Quite a few of my family members showed up and next Sunday, my dad's family is going to get together and throw a party for me. It will be less hectic anyway.

I've been investigating this program called Visionaire Studio and it's a program that allows you to make an adventure game without having to put in a line of code. They do offer a freeware version for both Windows and Mac but if I want to buy the full version, it costs about forty nine Euros. Since I live in America, I don't have easy access to Euros outside of currency exchanges at the bank and even then, I'm pretty sure there are fees involved. Here's the link to the Visonaire website: http://www.visionaire-studio.net/ I recently downloaded the free version on my computer and I masy try it out some more once I get back to my dad's house.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  03:44, May 23, 2016 (UTC)

No brats allowed2
I like that story, and it's true too. Most animals, dogs included, seem more honest and way behaved than most people. I wonder if this particular story ended up on Trollpasta.

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 22:55, May 23, 2016 (UTC)

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I can just imagine what the girl's graduation speech was like. Maybe it went something like this:

"Ladies and gents! As the honorary speech giver of the 2016 graduating class, allow me to give you the most original speech you have ever heard! Somewhere over the rainbow, you and I can make a difference. Because a dream is a wish your heart makes when you're fast asleep. However, I always like to look on the optimistic side of life, but I am realistic enough to know that life is a complex matter. Our hearts go up to eleven and uh... thank you San Francisco and good night!!! (Sticks out tongue like Gene Simmons)"

I found a series of tutorial videos on how to use Visionaire Studio on YouTube. If you're interested, you're more than welcome to click this link:

https://www.youtube.com/watch v=TUVE8BmsC7I&list=PLfsiC3OLVf-5sx9vCG70nryBdskH-ggIP

I got a new part for the story: ""Hey there, sweetie!" Kristy's mother said softly. Kristy had stretched out her arms as far as they could go and began to yawn. She then turned her head to the right and noticed the bed her mother had set up. "Now that's what I call a bed!" Kristy giggled wearily. Kristy's mother had also giggled a bit as she grinned and scratched the back of her neck. "Well, I know it's not the most comfortable thing ever but I think it should get you through the night. Then after that, you can pick out whatever kind of bed you want at the store tomorrow." Kristy once again yawned and shuffled over to her bed where she wasted no time crawling into the sleeping bag.

Kristy's mother walked over to the other side of the room and flicked off the lights. She wished her daughter a goodnight and shut the door behind her."

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   03:18, May 24, 2016 (UTC)

For Crying Out Loud, Archive This Thing!
Oh, wait, did you say you plan on archiving it soon? I forgot. Anyway, that's great news about your mother. I'm glad everything is going as smoothly as possible. I actually felt some regret after sending that last message because I remembered that not everyone is ok with the use of humor to deal with the misery and absurdity of life. I'm bad about trying to make light of things as a way of coping or helping others cope, but I often forget it can come across as rude and uncaring. Hopefully it's obvious that that's not the case. Anyway, continue giving her our best wishes. Have a good one.

Jay Ten (talk) 14:16, May 24, 2016 (UTC)