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Also, it is considered long and tedious because it is. It takes a long time to get anywhere on this story, It takes a lot of reading until he reaches Winslow's house and when there we are given a tour of the old man's house, most of which does not actually add anything to the story.

It also feels like there is a lot of pointless dialogue.