User blog comment:TreyTheNinja/Evaluate my Pasta/@comment-4436047-20110923011459

It wasn't the best... 4/10 maybe. You didn't allow time for the characters to develop (which would include yourself), you used a bit of a cliche (Slendy, really?) and you didn't add any suspense to it. 3 paragraphs may work, but not in this scenario. Next time, let your characters play out and PUSH THE ENVELOPE. And remember: if it creeps you (as the author) out, it will probably creep the audience out as well.