Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25165298-20140711043102/@comment-4832646-20140711181411

Fucking phone. Anyways, for example, what kind of party is this? Most college kids get drunk during the party. And a teacher telling them to go to bed? When does this happen. Plus, it's terribly rushed. I could write something like this in literally two minutes.

There's no character devlopment, no plot, nothing makes this a story, let alone a terrible story. The story doesn't have any descriptive premise and the dialogue is just cheesy.