Talk:Wendigo: A Terrifying Story/@comment-43930161-20190925170802

this was pretty boring to tell you the truth. first, wendigos are way faster than human beings and wont even give them time to run. Wendigos also imedently eat their pray, unlike in this story where it feels more like some idiot is pretending to be a wendigo when they are not. calling the name of the wendigo isnt even how you sommon it, are you trying to rip off bloody mary or something? Wendigos yes, can possess humans, but not through their dreams. Wendigos can only possess people if the person is hungry or is willing to eat another human being. This story is also all over the place, who shares a tent with more than 2 people!? tents are never big enough for that. when a wendigo possesses people, im just adding this, the person isnt changed entirly, they still act somewhat like themselfs though hunger drives them mad. ALSO wendigos transform imedently not after like, 2 days. over all this story was crap, and too fast paced for its own good, have more moments in this so you get a grip for your made up characters, make it more realistic, dont write this really fast since you wanted this to be made in under 10 minutes. im not trying to be rude but like, really calling this terrifying story is way more than overrated it literally should be not so spooky wendigo story