Talk:Button Day/@comment-24628104-20150315032552

Hmm. It was okay, I guess. It's not all that creepy... I think this could be made into a novel, where Lauren escapes, and learns more about this "Red Button Day". It is revealed why she doesn't remember what Red Button Day is and why she is the only one that isn't okay with it. (I'm thinking slight mind control of the population, courtesy of the "dear" leader.) This has a lot of promise for a story about a strong female protagonist. As a creepypasta, I'll rate it 6/10 for a lack of creepyness, but 10/10 for a potential novel. :) Your spelling and grammar is great, too.