Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44101957-20191029014351/@comment-36627132-20191029020207

The overall story suffers from capitalization issues. For example " i changed medication" the word i is not capitalized. Also, words that start dialogue should be capitalized. On top of that there are quite a few punctuation errors. I suggest using a spell checker for your next story.

Overall, it's pretty difficult to make a Creepypasta about nightmares and hallucinations scary because there is no real reason to fear them, as they aren't even real in-universe.

"[I] saw a purplish black figure standing behind me." I advise against using this as it is reminiscent of the much hated Sonic.exe.