Talk:Bones at the Bottom of the Lake/@comment-4893169-20150115005859

The sisters featured seem well throughout and three-dimensional in their actions and conversations, but there doesn't seem to be much of a mention of the Melissa character other than she was visiting and then she falls out of the canoe and drowns. Maybe you can describe her when she first makes an appearance, what she looks like and what her personality is, maybe what her home life is like and why she's visiting them in the first place. Also, would you mind taking a look at my pasta>http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:416018? It's currently on the WW and I'm really in need of reviews.