Talk:Understand?/@comment-4903141-20140729184445

That was actually a great story, but the punctuation, pacing, and word choice need some serious work. Other than those problems it was great like I said, but I'll give it a 6/10 for the problems holding it back. For future reference, "it's" is a combination of "it" and "is", while "its" without the apostrophe signifies ownership. Keep it up ^^