Talk:The Country Road/@comment-25226524-20140817022946

Just to let you know, there are some serious issues with the past and present tense of this story. I would fix them, but it will take some serious rewording. So in this case I'm going to leave it up to you, the author. I fixed many of the run-on sentences, but as for the mixing tenses, it's just too much of an overhaul for me to feel comfortable doing it.