Talk:Happiness for Sale/@comment-25471033-20181213211246

My habit when reading pastas is to look through the comments to see if reading it is worth my time. All I saw was 10/10's, "Looking for more like this" type of comments. A 10/10 LoZ pasta? "Not possible!" I said. Thus I read it, and while I unfortunately don't believe it deserves a 10/10 rating, it definitely gets at least an 8. The story telling was great, it wasn't a hacked video game pasta, and it was actually kind of creepy to read. The one thing I would do without is the blood and vomit. (Why was there even vomit in the first place?) It kind of takes away from it by adding unncessary detail. The part where you describe the legs slowly sliding down his throat was perfect though, add more detail like that. Like I mentioned, I'd rate this an 8/10