Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26893881-20150802152044/@comment-26475253-20150802165508

Alright, scathing review time: This is crudely written. Severely so, I'm afraid. There is next to no sign of tact used while writing this, no eloquence found. The story itself is rushed to smithereens and makes almost no sense. Please try working on a story before simply posting what you think might make a good remake of the Exorcist. make the dialogue vaguely believable, and maybe, JUST MAYBE, you'll have a story.