Talk:The Seven Silver Coins Ritual/@comment-5733573-20180613012603

It's okay. I like the detail and the overall flow. The one thing that really, really doesn't work is this:

"You’ll have become the eighth coin. He’ll want to come back for you, if you let him know where you are. Yet, the marked hand will forever be resistant to fire and any other damage. It will also have superhuman strength."

I have to be honest and say that this part is kind of silly. It's just way too much. I hope you'll consider revisiting what you were thinking there.