Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25396021-20140908235448

Hi all,

Decided to post a creepy pasta I wrote about a year ago. I'm completely unfamiliar with wiki and unfortunately not very tech-saavy.

I received one review from Banning (very helpful!) but I am actively looking for more feedback to improve some portions (namely the ending) of my pasta.

If you take the time to read and review please also read the comment and reply section :) you can find my pasta here:

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Nanny_of_Ellie_Boyce

Or just search by the title: 'The Nanny of Ellie Boyce'

Thanks so much and keep up the spookiness!

-Jon 