Talk:Distant/@comment-27553469-20160211210006

Not the best. The writing was OK. But there was an absolute lack of characterization, plot, and not even a twist to make up for any of it. All of the things that occured in the Pasta seemed highly unrealistic--though, that wouldn't be a bad thing with accordance to other awesome Pastas on here. There are quite a few pot holes burned through the whole story as well, plus it's slightly hard to follow lat into the introduction.

Just one of those borderline average Pastas on here... 4.5/10