Talk:Dawkson's Cave/@comment-26475253-20150809154140

This is a GOOD pasta. People should be taking notes. It's set apart from others in the fact that it's more of a in-hindsight type deal. It was realistic, and really my only problem with any of this is the fact that the drunk acts stupid sometimes (She didn't get to go to no eternal paradise) but other times pretty intelligent (and unable to do anything about it). This is, of course, only a small thing, as using the word can't would probably better befit a drunk. Overall, one of my favorites. 9/10