Talk:An Illegal Investigation of Ballintully Springs/@comment-4849011-20150818011013

I love descriptive, evocative stories like this! In my mind I could picture the scenes (the single light illuminating the car, the dew on the grass, the sand on the shore, etc.), hear the rattling of the Red Bull cans, and imagine the feel of the chills and stinging spirit saliva. I really felt for the character, and the story didn't rely on gore or cliches - just an atmospheric build to a chilling (no pun intended) conclusion. I also like how there was actually a reason for the car not starting near the end. This was definitely an effective and well-written tale. If only there were more like this one!