Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-43391742-20190804183542/@comment-5733573-20190805054342

At the very least, think of a way you can establish the fairies in the beginning. Maybe the narrator, who loves her garden, has heard that fairies can be protective of plants and flowers. Maybe this prompts her to perform some sort of ritual to draw fairies to her garden. Maybe it works, but she has no idea they'll turn out to be evil until it's too late. Something like this would tie the whole story together and give the narrator more agency than simply being an unfortunate victim.