Talk:Ashes: An Airman's Diary/@comment-25148755-20150307204948

Didn't really like this one. The writing style was excellent, as usual. Unfortunately, there were enough things factually wrong with it that, having had some military experience myself, wouldn't allow me to get fully immersed in the story. Plus, using the name Snowden just made me think of the whistle blower who released all the top secret documents to wiki leaks...that's actually who I thought you were referring to at first.