Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20160228043611/@comment-25037895-20160303073739

The paragraph before this has a repeated sentence (the underlined sentence):

"Everywhere she looked, in the lounge and kitchen area, there were pile of rubbish, and it wasn’t the old-fashioned sort you tend to see in movies or read about in books. The mess looked new as if the owners had simply left it all behind only a month or two ago. "

" "You must be imaging (imagining) things." "

I think the storyline works, I enjoyed reading this one.