Talk:What We've Become/@comment-24281984-20141119181633

While not particularly strong story- or character-wise, I liked this. The concept was simple and executed well enough to feel chilling to read, and the grammar and description was just about perfect. It was really almost too short to be fully enjoyed. I couldn't really call it a story, again, because it doesn't really read like one, but it's nonetheless interesting and well-written.