Talk:Persistence/@comment-35793119-20180608143924

I like this, it's very well written. I like the fact that it's told from the point of view of the prey Animal, (In. My mind I see it as a Deer, but I could be wrong)

It shines light on the predatory nature of humans, and our animalistic past, something people in this age subconsciously or otherwise, refuse to acknowledge.

I've read a few of your stories now, and I can honestly say your talent as  a writer speaks for itself.

I look forward to reading more of your work.