Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44246754-20191027204522/@comment-9041013-20191028004050

On top of what Ned said, there's a bunch of structural issues. You're supposed to start a new paragraph each time a different person speaks.

The use of caps doesn't make anything more accentuated in a good way, it just comes off as lazy and silly.

And you should work on your overall styling.