Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26460610-20150603055952/@comment-26460610-20150603205855

Thank you for your opinion. You have very valid points. But I am going to make his full story. Giving charaters more detail and so on. This was like an idea for a bigger story. And thank you, he is supposed to be obnoxious ass. My reasoning will be explained in the full story. I'm thinking of posting a few chapters at a time. Thanks for the feedback.