Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28647200-20160611075039/@comment-24101790-20160611080105

There are so many issues here. A majority are spelling, wording, punctuation, and capitalization.

You don't capitalize proper nouns, you don't capitalize the start of multiple sentences. There are numerous misspellings here ("a flash light coz its so dark o the street.", " i deside to walk to my house", "then i said to my parent what i saw they tell me its just a "aswang" but to me its not coz i saw him in my two eyes ", "my friend called it a the blader reaper ", etc. You forget to properly punctuate sentences and contractions. " i cant sleep so i desided to walk around", "i look around and i didnt saw any person .", "then i said to my parent what i saw they tell me its just a "aswang" but to me its not coz i saw him in my two eyes .", etc.

There are a lot of awkwardly worded sentences: "i told to my friend of what i saw", " i step back a little then he smile at me creepy and a blade tentacles comes out ", " every day i watch news lots of people are missing .", " then he tell me that he saw it too a guy with a blade tentacles on the back", etc.

I'm sorry, but there are so many issues here, that I'm not going to even delve into the story issues as there are too many punctuation, capitalization, wording, and story issues to focus on at the moment. It feels like these issues need to be addressed before we even begin to focus on the numerous story-based issues.