Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31424920-20190902155407/@comment-9041013-20190902195112

It's overall pretty good.

As the Doctor said however, the dialogue seems a little off. Someone gets insulted over and over without any sort of retaliation seems weird, I mean, you could just make Jack seem like he views himself (appropriately) above humanity and doesn't mind reminding Nick of that sort of position.

I have to say this however, I am kind of missing the horror on that one. Where is it?