User blog comment:Ms.Wilson/My first pasta./@comment-4833240-20130817065703

Your repetition of the phrase "Do you remember me?" would have been scarier and more memorable if it had been used more infrequently and at more appropriate intervals. The concept has been done before, and its execution was passable at best.

I know this is your first pasta. Mine wasn't that good either, but I made sure to fix all the grammar and spelling errors in a timely matter. We all have to start somewhere, I suppose. If you need help coming up with an idea or editing spelling/grammar, please leave me a message on my talk page or contact me in chat.