Talk:Periodic Nyctophobia/@comment-29507836-20161013071611/@comment-4849011-20161014003410

Thanks! I'm glad you found it descriptive, thrilling, and different. :-D

I understand the point about it being too perfect. Here's a behind-the-scenes look at why I did what I did. The second paragraph, the one talking about freezing with fear in the bathroom, describes a real event. After it happened I thought, "What if it were worse? What if I had an attack like that, and it turned out there was a blackout?" That's how this story came about.

I'm glad you liked it overall. Thanks again for the feedback.