User blog comment:Mmpratt99 deviantart/Who Should I Talk To If I'm Having A Problem With Plot Development?/@comment-25073641-20160410070124

You should, at least, ask someone who has already written a novel/novella/short story collection/anthology.

Empy is a great writer and has contributed several stories, a few novellas and some anthologies to this site, several of them distinguishable and quite unique (non-cliche) so you might want to consider him.

Banning is fantastic when it comes to plot development and originality. If you've read his Tobit series, that is. He's ideal, and he would advice you well IMO.

Jake Wick is an upcoming novelist (not an advertisement, I swear). Well, since he's writing a novel, you might want to ask him about how he develops his story and how he makes things original.

If you know Pokemongreen3867, ask him. He's written some stories, and has sold his own novella "Parallel Duality". I'm not sure if he would respond to your queris, bul I'll tell him if you do ask. We have email contact.

I think that's it.