Talk:Afternoon Tea/@comment-29507836-20170710104745

This is horrid for a spotlighted pasta, compared to the others. It's good and all, but I honestly don't think this deserves to be a spotlighted pasta. Looking at it, all I can notice is the missing punctuation marks and the awful dialogue. All I can notice is the predictability of what happens. All I can notice are the big plot holes. I come back here every month to read the PotM or such, and yet I come back to this. Quite disappointing.