Talk:Perfect Symmetry/@comment-5733573-20181219184331

I enjoyed this. You definitely made the gentleman sound delicious, and of course I love a good "sick bitch" hero.

It's definitely a little rough around the edges in places, but I'm very impressed by the subtle misdirection. I thought for sure this would be a sexy-but-meh vampire story when she started licking things, but then you really surprised me. Very nice work!