Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24410994-20140521140953/@comment-4832646-20140527191915

Indefinitesilence wrote: Noothgrush wrote: If we're lucky it never will be again. Think critically for a moment about that story. It's amongst the most trite, juvenile, ugly, horrendously written pieces of writing that I've ever read. Go out and read some more. Seriously, stack this story up with some of the better rated stories here, stack that story up with those shitty anthology books of mediocre horror. It doesn't even pass on the most basic fucking standards of quality. I honestly think of Sonic.exe in a visual representation as a nerdy kid in a school hallway that drops all his books and papers. He's trying to grab them all up, but other children keep walking past and causing his papers to flutter away. That's what this story is like. He's trying to compile his thoughts and feelings into a coherent and well-thought-out story, but he just can't. I see it as that one person who just doesn't even care if he graduates high school and only passed for a bit because his teacher liked his girlfriend. Then they broke up so he's stuck there.