User talk:EmpyrealInvective

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Dear Empyreallnvective,

I would kindly like to ask for the opprotunity to show my pasta. It was a poem regarding my own personal experience with shadow people and the possibility of them being a figment of my imagination. If my story was deleted soley on the grounds that I am a bad writer, I assure you that my poetry is better than my regular writing. I will understand completely if you immediately delete my story, but may I please atleast have the opprotunity to show it?

The-bard-of-horror (talk) 16:09, April 1, 2016 (UTC)The-bard-of-horror

Excuse me, I just wanted to clarify that I wasn't trying to edit another user's talk page. What happened is I changed my username recently and for some reason the old one now appears as a separate account (maybe it's supposed to, i don't know), so the alterations I made on that page were actually made while i had my old username (VengefulButterfly). Sorry about the misunderstanding.

Phantasmanomaly (talk) 17:20, April 1, 2016 (UTC)

Dear Empyreallnvective,

The wiki says i can't post my story due to an "Extension hook" Does that mean my story is too long? Ruby-Alphastar (talk) 21:14, April 2, 2016 (UTC)Ruby Alphastar

Dear Emoyreallnvevtive,

I don't mean to use your time, but i'm afraid i don't quite understand. What does that mean? Ruby-Alphastar (talk) 21:21, April 2, 2016 (UTC)Ruby Alphastar

Dear Empyreallnvective,

Thank you. I'm sorry for using your time. Ruby-Alphastar (talk) 21:26, April 2, 2016 (UTC)Ruby Alphastar

Dear Empyreallnective,

I have read your above message but I am still confused. I would like to understand what I have done wrong with my story 'Don't Turn On The Faucet'. I thought it was the spellings so I checked them over with both grammerly and Google Docs. But you have deleted it again. What am I doing wrong? I am new to posting stories on here so I just need a little guidance as to what I'm doing wrong.

Fujoshi56 (talk) 23:26, April 2, 2016 (UTC)Madam Creepypasta

Okay. I understand. I will work on my character and her story some more. Also thank you for informing my of my errors. I will work on those as well. I am very sorry for the errors on my story

Fujoshi56 (talk) 23:59, April 2, 2016 (UTC)Madam Creepypasta

Now what?

Armentitron (talk) 19:33, April 3, 2016 (UTC)Armentitron

You not be nice to my friend me mad me fight the systom like a modern day robin hood

Hi.

Just so you know the reason my story was re-uploaded was because after I had done editing it after the first upload it vanished so I thought I had stuffed it up and erased all the text so I re-uploaded it. I hadn't realised you had taken it down so quickly. Just saying.

--Armentitron (talk) 03:14, April 5, 2016 (UTC)Armentitron

I apologize for adding my story to a category it did not belong to. It won't happen again. Beetle bub (talk) 17:26, April 5, 2016 (UTC)Beetle bub

Request for a staff blog post
Sir, the staff blog section is looking a bit stale and, frankly, depressing. I'd like to propose a six-hundred-and-sixty-six word pasta freestyle. NOT A CONTEST. Just like Someguy's three-hundred-word-pasta staff blog last year. I really enjoyed that blog and writing to an exact word length was a great exercise and evoked a lot of story telling essentials from me. Honestly, I loved it.

So, here goes, "The Humboldt Lycanthrope 666 word pasta write." That's it. All fun and games and everyone is a winner. Whadaya think?

HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 03:51, April 6, 2016 (UTC)

Dude, are you not reading what I'm writing? The only rule is 666 words. No quality standards, no judging, no winners, no losers. Just like Someguy123's 300 word pasta staff blog last year. Open to everyone who can manage to use exactly 666 words. That's it. A showcase. A gallery. An exhibition of pastas written using exactly six hundred and sixty-six words. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:54, April 6, 2016 (UTC)

To make myself clearer. At such a short length, all the pastas could be posted on the blog as comments. And it is not a contest. Just a fun challenge with no winners or losers. An artistic exercise. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:58, April 6, 2016 (UTC)

All righty then, sir. I'm going to go and make a blog and hope you find it fit enough to place in the staff section. I hope to find a 666 word pasta by you on display there at some point. Honestly, I think we may see some beautiful writing from this thing. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 05:18, April 6, 2016 (UTC)

how do I send a private message?
my question is, how would I create a link to somthing? My pasta was deleted a while ago, and I inproved it and I want to send it to you to see if I can repost it. So like I said, how would I go about doing this?

A.a.ron23 (talk) 19:39, April 6, 2016 (UTC)A.a.ron23

I have more questions
thank for your feedback! I have more questions though, how do I post my story to writers workshop? I cant figure it out. Also what is pastebin? and how do I use it?

A.a.ron23 (talk) 20:05, April 6, 2016 (UTC)A.a.ron23

I edited my story
so I edited my pasta '"late to the party an old 40's tale" like you told me too, and want to see what you think of it now. here it is: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:534128#2 one more thing, I turned it into parigraphs like you said. but for some reason that didnt copy.

edit:

thanks for the feedback. the reason im trying to get this reposted is because its supost to be the first part in a four part series, outher wise id just give up.

A.a.ron23 (talk) 21:50, April 6, 2016 (UTC)A.a.ron23

Hola mi hermano
Been trying to learn a little Spanish in my time off (been using Dualingo app). Just wanted to apologize for leaving the site shorthanded, especially so abruptly. I know it was a shitty thing to do, but I was losing my mind at the time. I'm sure you'll see my blog so I won't bother linking it. Hope everything's been going well. I see you have a new story out. I'll be checking that out.

Jay Ten (talk) 20:34, April 7, 2016 (UTC)


 * P.S. I can't edit my profile. Says it's protected. Help a noob out.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 20:39, April 7, 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks man. I actually left off commenting to keep everything as simple as possible. I feel awkward enough as it is.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 20:46, April 7, 2016 (UTC)


 * Ha. I would probably only recognize ten percent of the words. As for the new story, I'll be ok I think. I'm on muscle relaxers and Ativan, so... yeah.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 20:56, April 7, 2016 (UTC)


 * I edited your latest story. Hope you agree with everything. I changed quotes to italics when referencing films. If you have a differing opinion feel free to change them back. I'll only be slightly offended (or livid... who knows).


 * Jay Ten (talk) 15:30, April 8, 2016 (UTC)


 * No problem. I don't know man, I really liked it. I think I may give it another read later without the concern for editing. I actually have occasional nightmares about things being in my body, so I was cringing and borderline gagging through the most of it.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 15:43, April 8, 2016 (UTC)


 * Lmao. The original front baby harness.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 15:55, April 8, 2016 (UTC)

Dear Empyreallnvective,

I only wish to inqure for the reason as to why my story, A Letter in the Mail, was deleted. I read the cliches and writing advice, but I couldn't really pinpoint anything. My story didn't have any incorrect grammar, punctuation, capitalization, or spelling, and it seemed free of all the cliches you listed aside from possibly one. So, I'm just curious as to why it happened. Was it too boring? Not creepy/scary enough? Or were there more cliches than I saw? I'm not upset about its deletion, just curious.

Also, I wasn't trying to repost my story. I was trying to edit it so it would be free of all the tiny arrows and had proper spacing. I was in mid-edit when the thing went blank, and I just thought your software had screwed up. I didn't know you had deleted it.

Masked Cat (talk) 23:53, April 8, 2016 (UTC)

Vandals
Just look at the recent contribs of this and this person. The first one hit the DA and the other hit two stories. I think I fixed everything.

Jay Ten (talk) 11:29, April 9, 2016 (UTC)


 * Check this when you get back. I'm not gonna bother undoing all of that since I'm guessing you're going to delete it anyway, but figured you'd want to see that. I noticed that person has been warned a couple times already for bad editing.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 21:07, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

Vandalism
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:SpeciousKitty?diff=1188886&oldid=681014

23:41, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

Alright. I'll add them to my user page from now on. Is that OK?

Creeper50 (talk) 20:52, April 11, 2016 (UTC)Creeper50

Since all my artworks I've posted were made at different times, can I edit one of my blog posts to add more?

Creeper50 (talk) 20:56, April 11, 2016 (UTC)Creeper50

Alright. I have now posted a blog post where I plan to add my future works when they are done. Thanks for pointing out the rules, by the way.

Creeper50 (talk) 21:02, April 11, 2016 (UTC)Creeper50

I ain't going to die, even when you shove my face in shit.

Hi i erote the hoe to summon jericho that you deleted and was just wondering  what i did wrong to have it deletedLokiEnvy (talk) 06:59, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

Hello! I've been rewriting an old story of mine, and I'd like to get this out of the way before I get accused of plagiarism. The story I'm rewriting is entitled "The Day James Died." Said story was first published on a different account (Which belonged to me), I believe the username was "The_Wittiest_Degenerate." I know that there are rules regard having two accounts, but 1)I made this account because I found myself unable to access the old account, 2)I made this blunder before I knew of the rules regarding alt. accounts and 3)I no longer use the other account. Is there some way to delete the old account? Should I just leave it there to die and not touch it? Thank you in advance. Sodapop And Adrenaline (talk) 02:20, April 13, 2016 (UTC)

Critique Request
Hello. I've recently uploaded a short story to Writer's Workshop and I was wondering if it would be possible if you could come by and take a look at it. I've been trying to write wrtie well thought out short stories that not overshadowed by the glaring issues of too much detail and back history lore. Perhaps you can give me some much-needed feedback on how to make this particular plot line much more tightly woven as well polished and suspenseful. >

2412 E Cochran Rd

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 03:14, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

RE: Critique Request
I left a reply to your response. Thank you for the feedback.

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 05:50, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

Hi, Empy.

I was just wondering why you closed my thread, One Less Soul, on the Writer's Workshop Board?

It said it was because it was "Posted to contest page", but technically it wasn't a contest; it was a literary exercise.

Am I not allowed to post it there because I've posted it on the blog? Because I want to try to meet the quality standards to publish it on the site later on.

Sorry if I'm mistaken here, I'm not very used to posting things on the wiki. Just wanted to get a clarification of what is allowed and such.

Thanks!

InScythe (talk) 08:14, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

Hi again, ok, I see; thanks for clearing that up. :)

But it is okay to publish it to the site after a while, am I right? (As long as it meets quality standards, of course.)

Thanks again, you've been to great help!

InScythe (talk) 15:25, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

No need to say sorry, I appreciate your feedback! I guess I'll rework it then; firstly break the word limit and secondly rewrite and add more detail, since I feel that I have a good starting point.

Thanks for all your help!

InScythe (talk) 15:36, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

Hey, this is ExerciseDancefloors, I was just wondering if you have a back up of my story on record so that I could fix it. I would also like to know if there was something in my story you didn't like, as I could fix that as well. ExerciseDancefloors (talk) 21:17, April 14, 2016 (UTC)ExerciseDancefloorsExerciseDancefloors (talk) 21:17, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

RE: The Number of the Beast proposal
I've got an idea, a crazy one. If a member writes sixty-six 666-word pastas (does that make sense?) they get to choose a spotlighted pasta, even their own. If a member writes six-hundred and-sixty-six 666-word pastas, they get to choose pasta of the month.

To show my honest intentions, by hosting this contest, I am ineligible of winning or even having one of my own pastas chosen. As a consultation prize, everyone who writes six 666-word pastas gets a badge (not official) made by me (it will be way better then Jay's Bat Shit Crazy Badge, too. I promise) to put on their homepage (if they choose to paste it there that is).

Dude, does this sound like some fucking fun or what? I'm currently writing a bitching 666er (I think). Will be posting soon. H3LL AND FIRE ARE SURE TO BE RELEASED! };) HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 03:50, April 15, 2016 (UTC)

What are the odds and how long would it take for one of these crazy motherfuckers to have the tenacity and verasity to pump out sixty-six 666 word pastas. But it could be done! Three a day for two months. We got to do it and see who has the tenacity to do such an outrageous thing.

Oh and you can expect some 666ers from me coming up. I'm looking at some free time so BEWARE. Speaking of stories less than 700 words, you should check out Shotgun Honey and Crack The Spine. They are very resputable magazines who I think would like your short work. So resputable, in fact, that they have failed to accept an entry by yours truly, though thay may change.

HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:07, April 15, 2016 (UTC)

Uh, meant, one a day for two months. Or three a day for twenty days. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:11, April 15, 2016 (UTC)

I can see what you mean about the generic thing and agree to a point, though it's more about exercising those mental muscles than actual content. Sometimes quanity can trump quality when it comes to raw physics, it's a stamina issue. Whatever, I'm still going to offer whomever can write six 666-word pastas a badge made by me, and who ever can write sixty-six 666-word pastas oral sex. That's right, I will talk about sex with them. You know, questions like, "do you understand the boundaries of a first date and how no means no?" and "Don't do anything you aren't comfortable with." We'll talk about it. Oral sex. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:33, April 15, 2016 (UTC)

Christ, I'm sure the kids these days could probably show an old man like me a thing or two. Just can't help a play on words. The weirder the better (my motto). Lol, good night, good buddy. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:46, April 15, 2016 (UTC)

HELLO
I will find you, as of my other victims.. you aren't my last. So I wrote this for you..

sovle it and you won't DIE as I have

I am the demon of galicvertyou the powers of evgerdard will haunt you forever...

YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED...

yeah and don't send me anything back.. I don't read any of it...

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YOU ARE CURSED

Nana8257634 (talk) 03:35, April 17, 2016 (UTC)

i just noticed your old job.. voulnteer wow.. sissy

DIE

DIE

DIE LIKE A PIG

yeah im not threatining you........ ;)

Question
I just have one question; you don't have to answer, I know it was below quality standards, but why did you delete my story? I was thinking maybe I can copy and paste it into the writers workshop possibly, and then I can get it reviewed so it can be better in the future.

If you can, please just undelete it so I can copy and paste it, thanks. You don't have to, however.

AGirlCalledKeranique (talk) 12:10, April 17, 2016 (UTC)


 * Partially addressed.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 13:16, April 17, 2016 (UTC)

maybe you should actually try reading my creepy pasta, cuz ive never once see a single creepypasta story about the television show Tosh.O or the animation "Racist Mario" and my creepypasta story had both integreated into the same story. please give my story a chance

Dang man, what I do wrong

--HP Spookcraft (talk) 02:36, April 18, 2016 (UTC)HP Spookcraft

I don't think my last message reached you, that's why you might get two messages from me. Anyways, what was wrong with my story

--HP Spookcraft (talk) 02:58, April 18, 2016 (UTC)HP Spookcraft

Shady stuff
[http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:HaloKnight_S117/Hi I sense some pointsgaming over here. Bother checking it out?]

16:24, April 18, 2016 (UTC)

In Torment in Hell
Could you please put the version of In Torment in Hell made by User: Black Metal Ist Krieg back up? I was unaware I was signed into my alternate account when editing my own story. My bad. Sorry for the confusion. ShawnHowellsCP (talk) 20:32, April 18, 2016 (UTC)

Question regarding improving translation for a story
Hello EmpyrealInvective, I have a question regarding a creepypasta that I was hoping you could answer.

One my new favorite creepypastas "Vomit Industries" (http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Vomit_Industries) is translated from Italian to English and, as a result, has various wording and punctuation issues. I was thinking of perhaps improving the translation myself (while keeping as close to the original author's wording as possible), but I am unsure if I am allowed to do so. Would I have to contact the original author of the story first, or could I just go in and fix it up myself without permission?

Thank you.

Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 20:35, April 18, 2016 (UTC)

Hello again, I have just edited and updated the pasta. Due to the sometimes poor translation, some sentence meaning were unclear. I did my best to make the story more readable in English while not changing the plot. Please let me know what you think of the revisions if you have the time, and let me know if you have any concerns about the changes. (http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Vomit_Industries)

Thanks.

Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 22:48, April 18, 2016 (UTC)

Alt
No issue at all. Simply block that account. As stated, I was unaware of being logged into it. ShawnHowellsCP (talk) 21:01, April 18, 2016 (UTC)

Excuse me, Empy, is it OK if I make a blog postexpressing my thoughts on Donald Trump if it is not too forceful?

Creeper50 (talk) 21:55, April 19, 2016 (UTC)Creeper50

I understand your point about my appeal, and I'm okay with leaving it off the site for quality standards reasons. I respect your opinion, and I've begun to notice that my definition of horror is vastly different from others. Also, to people that who have not played the game Little Inferno, I'm realizing, the story makes absolutely no sense. I think I was trying to convey a sense of discord and almost choppiness with the story, creating something that seemed odd and almost laughable but at the same time slightly disconcerting. I have failed in that aspect, so I'm willing to back off on the subject. Also, I apologize for not proofreading my pasta, it was very inconsiderate to not do so or to ignore the rules you have posted on the site. I respect that you have guidelines and will proceed to follow them in the future to the best of my ability. Thank you for answering my appeal in a polite and patient matter. :) TwilightDagger (talk) 02:45, April 20, 2016 (UTC)

Title
Hey buddy, would it be possible to change a story's Title? I am finding that the title is off putting and people are reluctant to read it. If i can get them to read, they are usually pleasantly surprised that there is a bit of light hardheartedness to the character. Being that the title is the first thing they will read in a story and most like is the very thing that a reader uses to decide if they will read a story or not I wanted to change the title to from Body Lice - Part One to "The Kiss of Avu N'geelub". thank you KillaHawke1 (talk) 04:19, April 20, 2016 (UTC)

Question
So, let's say you posted a story in the Writer's Workshop. How do you know whether it is qualified to be posted on the wiki publically? Does an admin have to confirm it?

Truly,

User:MarioFan5050 (talk · edits) 04:52, April 20, 2016 (UTC)MarioFan5050

Re: Re: WW
Okay, thank you for answering.

User:MarioFan5050 (talk · edits) 05:03, April 20, 2016 (UTC)MarioFan5050

Hello, EmpyrealInvective,

I was wondering why you took my pasta, "Two Broken Hearts," down. I am extremely confused about that, as it was less than 5 minutes after I had written it, and it's my personal story turned into a pasta thanks to some minor changes in the story I made before publishing it the first time. I was also wondering if you could send me a copy of it so I could send it to the Writer's Workshop for peer evaluation to see what I messed up and could improve. I mean, you don't have to, but I would very much appreciate it if you did. Thank you for taking the time to read this.

Dragonfire149 (talk) 18:17, April 20, 2016 (UTC)Dragonfire149

Hello again, Empy,

I fortunately remembered the story and decided to rewrite it and post it in the Writer's Workshop. I was hoping to get a few reviews about it from there. This was shortly before you were able to retrieve a copy of my story for me, which I am deeply grateful for, by the way, so thank you for that, and I was wondering if you could take a look at some of the revisions I did from there. It's not a lot, but someone from the FNAF wiki told me to elaborate in the story, and I did a bit of elaborating for some of the details. Thanks again for retrieving a copy of my story, and thank you for taking the time out of your busy day to read this.

Dragonfire149 (talk) 19:27, April 20, 2016 (UTC)Dragonfire149

Message
Left you one on FB. Let me know what you think. Mystreve (talk) 22:49, April 20, 2016 (UTC)

Also
Your new picture here is weird. Just saying. ;) Mystreve (talk) 22:50, April 20, 2016 (UTC)
 * "Yup." ~ me
 * Mystreve (talk) 23:05, April 20, 2016 (UTC)

Something for your listening enjoyment
Thought you might enjoy listening to this one. Still one of my favorites KillaHawke1 (talk) 04:33, April 21, 2016 (UTC)

Hey Emp
Can you upload the latest revision of Pearl.avi on Pastebin? Thanks in advance.

SOMEGUY123 (talk) 14:57, April 23, 2016 (UTC)

Dear Emptyreallnvective,
This is concerning the new Writer's Workshop thread titled 2412 E Cochran Rd (With Different Endings)(Unreviewed). I noticed you had it removed. I'm only allowed to use that original post then? If I post my new revision there, that would be okay?

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 15:14, April 23, 2016 (UTC)

Your Permission
Dear EmpyrealInvective,

I wanted your permission to read/record your creepypasta "I Don't Know You From Adam" and upload it to YouTube. If you don't want me to I'll happily understand your reasons for that, nor will I go behind your back and read it any way. The reason why I wanted to  read it aloud and post it to YouTube was that I would like to see your wonderful work where others can hear it, not just read it.

If you would like me to read it and post it, I'll be more than willing to credit you and link your story in the discription.

Thank you,

RequiemRose (talk) 15:28, April 23, 2016 (UTC) RequiemRose

Re:
How embarrasing. I forgot Animals and Beings are relatively the same. And I thought the pictures would add to the effect the story has given. Sorr for these mishaps, Empy, gonna make sure not gonna do it again. Shame on me.

18:23, April 23, 2016 (UTC)

Abraham's Dagger
I thought you might enjoy this. KillaHawke1 (talk) 19:43, April 23, 2016 (UTC)

2412 E Cochran Rd Revision and Re: WW
I have updated the original thread by completely editing the original story. Also I would like to apologize for the multiple revision error.

2412 E Cochran Rd (With Different Endings)

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 21:03, April 23, 2016 (UTC)

Re: WW
Thank you. I will include the old story in the comment section since it would prove to be a distraction to the reader.

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 21:19, April 23, 2016 (UTC)

Possible plagiarized story
Hello EmpyrealInvective, sorry to bother you again, but I had a concern regarding a certain old pasta on this wiki.

I was reading this quite interesting pasta: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Case_of_Clairvius_Narcisse when I noticed a few odd punctuation errors that only seemed to be in a few strange places. The rest of the pasta was very high quality, in fact, it almost seemed to be college thesis-level. I became curious and googled some of the text, and it turns out the entire thing is copied and pasted from an online article about the subject: http://www.biology-online.org/articles/dead_man_walking.html No credit of any kind seems to be given to the original author of the article "Dead Man Walking" from which the pasta is copied. The pasta is quite old (2011), and I am not sure if it matters anymore, but if this pasta is indeed plagiarized then I just wanted to bring it to your attention. Thank you. Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 06:53, April 24, 2016 (UTC)


 * Ah, ok. I wouldn't keep bugging you with stuff except for the fact that you seem to currently be the most active admin here. Thanks. Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 07:10, April 24, 2016 (UTC)

Trilogy
Now that is how you finish off a trilogy. Awesome journey, that was! KillaHawke1 (talk) 18:52, April 24, 2016 (UTC)



Deletion Inquiry for Liam
Why, exactly, was my creepypasta deleted? I know it didn't meet the quality standards, but what was the specific thing wrong with it? See my talk page if you don't remember that latest story of mine that you deleted.

PARIS twitter.com/ParisAndStuff_  (talk) 22:04, April 25, 2016 (UTC)Paris

Error I Cannot Fix
Here

I noticed several punctuation errors with quotations. For example " “What’s your name?”,". WhatIsDees (talk) 00:20, April 26, 2016 (UTC)


 * Made some corrections.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 00:33, April 26, 2016 (UTC)

Story posted on talk page
Check out this. The user posted a story on their talk page. MrDupin (talk) 17:32, April 26, 2016 (UTC)


 * Beat me to it. Nevermind. MrDupin (talk) 17:32, April 26, 2016 (UTC)

So, I read over the quality standards and regulations. I am having quite the issue understanding why my murder mystery story had been deleted. It showed no premise as a spin-off of any sort and I had already left a comment in editing that I needed some assistance with the text. This site is rather complicated with its formatting.

--Chibi-Works (talk) 20:37, April 26, 2016 (UTC)Chibi-works

Sorry about that
Oh man, I'm sorry, still not used to any of these communities to be honest with you. I actually only threw it up there because I assumed it had to be reviewed and touched up there to be posted in the writer's showcase forum, is it okay if I post it up there, then? Sorry if it seems like I'm whoring out my story or anything, I'd just really like to see what people think. Thanks so much for the heads up.

AVoiceFromTheTrees (talk) 05:53, April 27, 2016 (UTC)

Hi Admin!

About the deletion of my story, I never knew there was already a page called "Stan" and that it was deleted ages ago. If I may change the title of my story into another unique one and still apply the same plot, would it be valid?

Reply as soon as possible

Sgt.HootGibson (talk) 05:57, April 27, 2016 (UTC)

Thanks a lot for the info, man. Appreciate your help, sorry I just jumped in there without knowing enough about how the site functions.AVoiceFromTheTrees (talk) 05:58, April 27, 2016 (UTC)

Blank
[http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Sweet_Relief What? ], this was just created (can only give it an external link), and it is entirely blank. WhatIsDees (talk) 14:07, April 27, 2016 (UTC)

SInce I know it's not OK to make blog posts about my pasta ideas, is it OK if I make a blog post that mentions my idea at some point?

Creeper50 (talk) 20:55, April 27, 2016 (UTC)Creeper50

The blog post is me asking others what the oddest idea for a pasta they came up with. At some point, toward the end, I say what my answer to that question would be.

Creeper50 (talk) 21:00, April 27, 2016 (UTC)Creeper50

Alright. Thank you. On another note, where can I find the list of rules for the offtopic board?

Creeper50 (talk) 21:02, April 27, 2016 (UTC)Creeper50

Am I allowed to remove incomplete sentences?
Hello EmpyrealInvective, I was editing a pasta, and I found an incomplete sentence in it. I was wondering if I am allowed to remove it from the pasta during editing. This is the story: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Greatest_of_All_Time

The line is, "Those who have dared to returned after forfeiting the game once claim that they have seen the"

Thank you.

Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 03:14, April 28, 2016 (UTC)


 * Well, I scoured King Irving's contributions to see if he might've had the story on the Writer's Workshop at one time in a more complete form, but no dice. Looks like he hasn't been active since Thanksgiving time. Honestly, I can't figure out what he was about to say in the story. If I had to guess, I suppose I could come up with something, but I don't really feel comfortable with changing the plot of the story. Perhaps you could bring closure to the mysterious hanging sentence?


 * Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 03:41, April 28, 2016 (UTC)




 * Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 03:57, April 28, 2016 (UTC)

I'm Concerned about A User on My Talk Page
Hi there Empy. I recently got a message from a guy called Logan Vernier. I need help finding a way to prevent this user from further contacting me on this wiki because let me tell you! This guy is bad news!

He has stalked people on other sites (such as Scarlet Otaku on her Ask.fm page awhile back). He has also harrassed other users on sites like Skype. [http://pastebin.com/CSLNQvWp Just recently, he called my friend Doodles a racist because she used the n word in one of her videos. Keep in mind though that the word was not being directed AT someone.] Here's the link to the video the word was being used in:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HIpdSGT-ZmQ

He says he apologized for doing this but that won't stop him from possibly doing it again. For example, on[http://commentarydb.wikia.com/wiki/Message_Wall:Logan_Vernier the CommentaryDB wiki, he was warned by an admin to stop undoing reverted edits on various pages. ] The edits that were reverted were a variety of joke edits he did on various articles on the wiki. He kept doing this and eventually, the admins got so fed up with him, that they blocked him. [http://commentarydb.wikia.com/wiki/Special:Contributions/153.107.193.206 He tried using another IP to edit, but that one got blocked too. ]

I gave this guy more than enough chances and I told him on Skype that if he bothered my friends again, we'd be through. He recently called my friend Doodles a racist and that was the straw that broke the camel's back.

I don't want to have anymore contact with this guy and I blocked him on Skype, YouTube, and my Re-Animated wiki. He has followed me from that wiki onto here. Before things get out of hand, I want him to be blocked from this wiki.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   15:09, April 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "I'm Afraid I Can't do that Dave" message
Well if this user starts harassing me on this wiki, I'll let you know as soon as possible. I have stopped contacting this user after he called my friend a racist.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   15:21, April 28, 2016 (UTC)

Hello, Empyrealinective so I had uploaded my very first creepypasta today, it was Yoshi Failed, I was just wondering why it was deleted. I have no problem with it as it was only my first story on this wiki, just wanting to know what I did wrong and what I need to improve.

Creepypastalover32 (talk) 23:23, April 28, 2016 (UTC)Creepypastalover32Creepypastalover32 (talk) 23:23, April 28, 2016 (UTC)

Dear Empyrealinvective,

Thanks for your response, like I said that story was my first creepypasta so I wasn't expecting it to be a great story or even just okay. So thanks for your advice and I'll try to reflect on what you said for my next one :)

Creepypastalover32 (talk) 23:50, April 28, 2016 (UTC)Creepypastalover32Creepypastalover32 (talk) 23:50, April 28, 2016 (UTC)

Could you please tell me the issue with my pasta?

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Hook_Up_the_Hooker

What about it didn't meet Quality Control?

I see, my aim with this story was to present it from the perspecitve of someone delusional.

The "It" in place of "she" was intentional, as he said he saw her as a demon so he no longer saw her as a human, just as an object trying to trick him essentially.

I did the constant commas to give a sense of a frantic, delusioned mindstate. I do however agree with most other points you made.

Maybe it just makes sense in my head lol, I wanted to try something more unique. Once looked at it from this perspective does it seem better or should I simply avoid this method of writing altogether?

True, yeah that makes a lot of sense. I'll keep these things in mind next time I write, I admittedly should have had a more solid foundation for where I was going with it and how it was presented.

If I may ask, would you be able to take a look at my other story when you have the time and tell me what you think of that? I was recalling most of it so the foundation is solid and it's told in a standard story format.

Delusion is Reality <-- Is the name

Thanks for your time and feedback.

I have a copy it's fine. But honestly stuff like that I am kind of clueless on, I've asked a friend to fix the grammar etc in it. In terms of the actual story could you give me a bit of feedback if that's even interesting? From my perspective a lot (pretty much all of them) of popular stories out there I read do nothing for me in terms of enjoyment, however this could be just as boring to peopple but I enjoy it more as it's made by me.

If you catch my drift.

I appreciate the time, just want to know if this is worth doing.

Quotational Errors On a Protected Page
Here I noticed some quotational errors on this protected page such as:

“You have no idea what I went through to get these,” He said the night before.

--WhatIsDees (talk) 02:19, April 30, 2016 (UTC)

Sleeptek.
Heh. There's more context here than you'd ever see. Juuust look for it ;)



(Oh, and I have quite the privelledge of editing my own talk page, unless you mind.)


 * LOL, no you don't. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 02:30, April 30, 2016 (UTC)

Watt
I replied to you on Wattpad. I'll keep an eye on my inbox for a few more hours before I head off to bed. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  02:50, April 30, 2016 (UTC)

Thank you. I really appericated that you were able to give me constructive criticism to make my story better. Sorry I tend to violate a lot of rules, as I'm quite new in writing creepypastas. But I like to thank you for the advice you had given me, and for you effort in trying to get this story re-uploaded. Thanks :)

Coding error story
Hello EmpyrealInvective, don't get hot and flustered, but in my travels I found this story, which looks like someone took an ice pick to its coding. Makes you cry! Do you think you could remedy it?

Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 04:34, April 30, 2016 (UTC)


 * OH, EMPY! Thank you.


 * Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 04:45, April 30, 2016 (UTC)


 * Yes, very much so! I had feared that you'd forgotten, glad to see that I was wrong! How 'bout that?


 * Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 04:53, April 30, 2016 (UTC)


 * That... that is commitment. Tim Curry himself would be awfully pride. Er- I mean, proud.


 * Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 05:01, April 30, 2016 (UTC)


 * True, but that wouldn't stop Tim from having him for dinner...


 * Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 05:09, April 30, 2016 (UTC)

Ha ha! I knew you had a RHPS story, everyone does! If I were thousands of miles away from my homeland and I could only bring one thing, then a RHPS DVD would probably be it. And truthfully, being straight male, and even though he's 70, I would still bang the living hell out of Tim Curry if I had to.

Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 05:22, April 30, 2016 (UTC)

Critique Request
I understand that you may possibly be quite busy (and may, therefore, not have the most time to read three stories), but, seeing your work as an admin, I figured that you would be a very good judge for telling the quality of a pasta.

I wrote The Magician's Game a while back, and I later made a (sort of connected) sequel called A Game of Impostors. I'm not sure if you read either of them or not, but I decided to make one final entry to the series, titled "The Imitator's Perfect Hell". It is the most lengthy of the three, but also the one I'm the most conflicted about. I'm not entirely sure if I delivered the ending of the pasta or not, or if it even made sense without being a cop-out or being weak.

Of course, the other two stories are required for full understanding of this one, and that is why I understand if you can't get to them. However, I would be most appreciative if you could take a look at the story at some point.

I currently have the final installment up on the "Writer's Workshop". Here is the link: The Imitator's Perfect Hell (Draft)

Thank you for your time. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 17:10, May 1, 2016 (UTC)

Once again, thank you. I'm in no rush, so take as long as you need. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 18:19, May 1, 2016 (UTC)

Critique
I'm really sorry for taking up your time like this, but I figured I needed some good solid criticism for this creepypasta I uploaded on the WW. I'm really more impatient on this than others because of that it's my first big-length story I made, but it's rather long and takes time.

So yes again, I apologize for taking up your time, and I'm not forcing you to do this, I just thought that I at least wanted someone to know that that story existed. Please take your time if you decide to read and give your opinion about it.

Click on the above link if you wish to do so.

User:MarioFan5050 (talk · edits) 19:21, May 1, 2016 (UTC)MarioFan5050

A Groovy Review Request
Hello again EmpyrealInvective, I was wondering that if you had some spare time within the next few days, you might be able to give me a quick review on my story currently in the Writer's Workshop, "The Deaths of Lela and Raymond Howard" and see if it is up to standards. It's not very long, and I would appreciate your time and your coming up to the 'Shop and seeing what's on the... top?

Thank you.

Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 01:26, May 3, 2016 (UTC)


 * This week? This week? I think you can do better than that!


 * Just kidding, that sounds good. Until then, with a bit of a mind flip, I'll go into a time slip.


 * Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 01:41, May 3, 2016 (UTC)


 * I'm alright with that, a mental mind fuck can be nice.


 * Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 01:48, May 3, 2016 (UTC)


 * Ah, that's too bad. What is a "despidida" by the way? And I'd note that whenever someone watches RHPS for the first time, they are one very confused boy/girl.


 * Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 02:09, May 3, 2016 (UTC)


 * Ah, okay. Not as clear to me as Tim Curry "pornographia". I will look forward to your review.


 * Dr. Frank N. Furter (talk) 02:14, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

Can you please restore my blog post? It was a serious blog post asking a serious question. TwilightDagger (talk) 04:00, May 4, 2016 (UTC)

Damn you guys are getting quicker and quicker each time I upload. It's like a quickdraw. My story didn't even get a chance to breathe. Merciless.

Yes that's correct. It was written in about half an hour on a whim after I watched Mulholland Drive. I didn't actually use a thesaurus at all it's just the words that felt right for me. Why is this a big deal?

--Armentitron (talk) 21:31, May 4, 2016 (UTC)Armentitron