Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35911608-20180821164405/@comment-35911608-20180823010535

BloodySpghetti wrote: Oh, that's even better now... I mean, some people would be wondering about the identity of "her", but I think it adds to it. We don't need to know who she is, all we need to know is that he doesn't want to kill a human being.

Good job Thank you :)