Talk:Feeling/@comment-25941663-20150216111230

The pasta is nicely written and flows smoothly up until the end, which feels a bit rushed. I would have liked more build-up and character development. Right now, you have a nice premise but the story feels unfinished. It isn't a bad story, I actually found it pretty good, but if you want to take it to the next level, you need to add to this. Flesh out the characters more and tell us more about the guy's adventures with the 'feeling'. That way the ending can have a much larger impact to the reader.

Happy writing.