Talk:The "Giver" Experiment/@comment-28783448-20160621231031

After a day or two, I may submit this to Some Ordinary Gamers for constructive criticism, as I want to know what was good and what could be done better. The reason I'm asking this of specifically him is because I noticed that I agree on a lot of his points when critiquing Creepypastas. In the meantime, feel free to tell me the pros/cons about the story.

Thanks for reading,

Mr. Dankster