Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20180817061439/@comment-26444017-20180818002927

I got through the first half, and I like the story so far. I'm a fan of the Saw movies, and it is very reminiscent of them to me. I'll probably go through with an edit of it, as there are certain grammar issues and punctuation issues that occure somewhat frequently, but overall, the narrative is to my personal liking.