Talk:The Paths

I think this was an O.K. pasta. It had realistic traits that made it even more creepier, and more 'believeable'.

It's Creepiness is a 3/5. It was pretty short.

It's storytelling is a 3/5 aswell. It had actual things you'd find in dialoug between real people. but again, it was pretty short.

Overall, it's Okay. As previously stated. It needs some editting, and extending, though.

Homestuck1010 (talk) 06:21, June 7, 2013 (UTC)