Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20181202003607/@comment-9041013-20181202113152

Well like Wizard said, it's a lot of "Saw" in one story. The thing with this series is that you can sum it up pretty much as "You see what you Saw them all" yes the pun is intentional. Gorno isn't very interesting. This isn't very interesting to be honest, sure it makes sense and it's properly described... the emotional toll on Carol is front and center as it should be.

Other than that, there's not much appeal to this to anyone who's not huge on gorn.

The ending does not add much, if anything, it can subtract from the value of the story, Peter seems to be inhumanly tolorant to pain and somehow managed to untie his legs with a single hand while lying upside down and heavily bleeding... It's just not doing anything good, plotwise.