Talk:Bikini/@comment-24243395-20131202160644

i must agree with mcfishcake, this is definitely more of a theory than a creepypasta and should be posted somewhere intended for theories.

i honestly did not find any scare or chill factor anywhere in this, the information was scrambled every which way, and the ending was completely out of place. perhaps, if you wanted to make this into a true creepypasta, take out the spongebob factor at the end and make it into a story where the crabs slowly began to become more and more human, forming an organised order of rule, but the whole thing is disrupted when the land animals are added into the mix. the crabs, with help from the land animals, realise how unfair the ruling order is and mutiny against the ruler. war breaks out as the crabs become even more intelligent, and soon crabs rule the world.

(that was a joke, by the way.)

overall, this was a very disorganised read and i wouldn't choose to read it again. 1/10