Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28299494-20160628152608/@comment-28266772-20160630132121

I think empy has succesfully picked out all the mechanical issues with the story - and because he knows much more about creepypastas than I do he's a more reliable source of advice with regards to whether a story is cliched or not. A good way to improve your writing skill is to read the style guides on this wikia, and also read as many of the suggested reading stories that you can.