Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28754051-20160615072326/@comment-28754051-20160617013250

I changed the ending, I'm a little more happy with it now. There always seems like little tweaks can be made to improve it, but it might just be because it's my baby. This is the first time I wasn't wholley unsatisfied with the end though, so that's good! Let me know what you think.