Talk:The House That Death Forgot/@comment-6702838-20131206134737

Great story, except for the ending.5/10

Why the hell did she go outside? Everyone told her not to, and their wounds were proof enough of their words. Completely unreasonable decision to even open the door, much less to go outside. I mean the guy was on the porch, why the hell would she try to attack him? That was a very out of character action for Melinda and it basically ruined the rest of the story. I'd like to see a second draft of this with a more meaningful ending instead of yet another shitty horror movie decision "hurr durr I'm gonna explore the dark outside even though everyone told me to stay"