Talk:Tomato Soup/@comment-24618087-20140328194223

Along with what everyone has said, the story doesn't say what happened to the wife due to the wreck, only that she "wasn't so lucky." You also mentioned that the couple broke up, yet it's never specifically said why, only with the assumption that the reckless driving caused it.

And just as the others have said, there's really no point in the kitchen and bathroom scenes, unless you're implying a connection between these sights and the man's recklessness when driving.

I'd have to give this a 4/10.