Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26818406-20150729060902/@comment-26475253-20150729070525

Um. Quite a lot of spelling errors and spacing issues. I do rather like the notion of something horrific stealing a phone and posing, much like a doppelganger. Doesn't seem like the type of monster to do it though, this one. This seems like a pure brute type, as far as description goes. I think he would've broken the phone trying to text. Overall, I'd say it needs to be revised, but can easily be salvaged and edited into a working story.