Talk:Insula/@comment-17660443-20160917202702/@comment-26399604-20160919135630

Thank you for taking time out to read this and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

I originally had my suspicions about the italicized words, but I wanted to see how they would fair to readers first. Seeing how they were a bit of a distraction, I went ahead and toned down on them greatly. Thanks for bringing that forward.