Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26154067-20150806025332/@comment-25046567-20150814190749

If you try to post this on the Wiki, I'm sure it will be removed for breaking the Wiki's quality standards. Take the time to go back through and fix the simple things like grammar, punctuation, and capitalization (for example, any "I" that stands alone MUST be capitalized). As for as the actual content of your pasta, I think you may be battling with the “creepy video game” cliche. Although this topic is overdone, if you fix the grammatical mistakes in your writing, it could improve your pasta as a whole. Just make sure that before you post this you have gone through and edited your writing with a fine-toothed comb. Good luck!