Talk:Depression/@comment-4843510-20170802235157

Random paragraphing didn't make any sense. Also we were told everything and shown nothing. The idea of Uncanny Valley was hardly explored and brushed off as a "she think she saw something". We're also told what to feel, not shown as seen in "She was scared" and "This was getting scary". The writing is merely passable and the concept was relatively interesting but poor in execution.