Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27012445-20160822170734/@comment-28266772-20160823142001

Hey,

I really liked this. It felt a bit similar to The Thing at parts but in a nice referential way, not in a redundant way. It was a lot of fun. My only thing was that I didn't like the lyrical references, but I've noticed you tend to do that with your stories so I appreciate it's part of your style, it's just not to my taste. I couldn't identify any mechanical errors, and I thought the style was functional and effective, and the plot was enjoyable. Overall this was a good story.