Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25701413-20141127052538/@comment-25226524-20141127184830

You can either leave a message on their talk page, or you can jump into chat and see if any of them are around. I'm not sure if anyone will get to it very quickly today, since it's a holiday. If you're not too worried about it, you can just submit it and see what happens. I actually think that ending works well. I'm not sure if I've read/reviewed any of your other work or not, but I definitely see potential in your writing. You also show a lot of promise with the fact that you're willing to take criticism and make changes/learn from it (something a lot of people aren't willing to do).