Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5733573-20180821191524/@comment-35711173-20180821193223

Jdeschene, splitting up like that, I knew what was going to happen. I would never do that. Not going into what the officers believe to be a crack house with a number of addicts in it. Then the guy didn't keep in radio contact and didn't alert his partner, call for medical assistance,  backup, etc.

Bare minimum, he should have his night stick out as well. This cop sounds real stupid. Don't think so? Call your local police non-emergency number and explain that you are an author and want to know policy for such a sweep.

Yes, it is critical to get it right because you lose suspension of disbelief if you don't, at least with a lot of people.

I look forward to seeing the next draft.

Dr. Bob