Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5239282-20140807153534/@comment-24931430-20140807172307

This isn't that bad, nor good. I like the setting and the idea. But then again, too much rhyming, perhaps you should change the rhyme schemes once in awhile? Maybe use the ABAB or ABCD?

But in all honesty...

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