Talk:I Made a Teddy Bear for My Daughter/@comment-5733573-20180704132049

I liked this a lot. It could have been so cliche. In fact, I thought I knew where it was going from the start, but you managed to fake me out. Really nice.

One thing, though. This wording feels a little awkward: "and used a makeshift skeleton fashioned its bones to hold the arms and legs in place from inside." Is something missing there?

In any event, nice story. Short and strong.