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Hsshall wrote: I renamed my pasta from "Lefty" to "Left-Hand Jen"

Its also a bit edited.

The pasta:

Jenny was a 17 year old girl who actually had a pretty good life. Her mother had really bad anemia, and she (her mother) was pregnant. She was hunting with her father one day, and they found no deer. They went back to their hunting cabin, and when they got there, her mother's friend was on the couch. Her father asked why she was there, and she said she had to tell them some terrible news from their mother. Jenny's dad told Jenny to wait outside. When the conversation ended, Jenny's father left the cabin and rushed to the car. He didn't tell her the news. They just went home and unpacked their things, and Jenny put her gutting knife on her bookcase, and never touched it since. They got back in the car, and drove to the hospital. She saw that her baby sister died of premature birth, because his mother's anemia couldn't fight off germs, so she became really sick, and the placenta, the umbilical cord, everything, became detached.

Her life went downhill from there.

She had more of a temper, her family started to irritate the crap out of her, she started swearing, her life became bad. The only positive thing she had was her boyfriend, Marcus. He loved her with more than his life.

One day, during church, the priest was saying his homily.

"If your right eye causes you to sin, gouge it out, and throw it away. It is better to lose one of parts then having your whole soul be thrown into Gehenna. And, if your right hand causes you to sin, cut it off, and throw it away, for it is better to lose one of your parts then have your whole soul be thrown into Gehenna."

Jenny thought about that line.

One week later, on June 14th, 2014, Jenny finally lost her sanity.

She woke up, and saw her iPod wasn't on its charger like it usually was. Assuming she just forgot it downstairs, she got breakfast, and went to watch some TV, when she heard her ten year old sister, Lilly, saying something to their parents. She walked in, and saw Lilly holding her iPod. She was reading his texts aloud to their mom and dad. "My family kinda irritates me, but at least I still have you, Marcus." Lilly read. Their mom and dad bursted into laughter. Jenny was humiliated, embarrassed, and angry. She ran up, slapped Lilly in the face, took her iPod back, and grabbed a book. She tossed it at Lilly, and Lilly started to cry as Jenny left the house to calm down in the backyard. Jenny came back, and her dad was pissed off.

"Jenny, get your ass over here!" her dad barked.

"You better apologize to your sister!" her mom said.

"I served her right!!! That's what she gets for reading my texts!!!" she barked back.

"Well, it's your fault for leaving it down here!! Now give me your iPod, you're not having it for the rest of the fucking day!!" her dad said, and got up to take it from her.

"Lilly stole it from me while I was sleeping!! And how is she the innocent little angel?! She needs punished for reading my texts out loud!!" Jenny snapped.

"We don't care! You hurt your sister!" her dad yelled.

"You know what?! Go fuck yourself, dad!!" Jenny said, as she pushed her father away.

"Jenny!!! Watch your mouth!!!" her mom said, as she got up.

"Shut the hell up, mom!! I am tired of this asshole yelling at me!!!" Jenny said.

"You know what?! You're not having your iPod, Computer, OR TV for the rest of the damn summer!!!" her mom said.

"Guess what! Have it!!!" Jenny said.

Jenny took the iPod and threw it at her dad. It hit him in the foot, and she ran to her room and locked the door. She almost went insane, and cried. She was tired of her family treating her poorly. Her dad tried coming in.

"I am sorry, sweetie" her dad said sorrowfully.

"Shut the fuck up, dad! I hate you!!" she screamed.

She continued crying, then she thought of the priest's homily.

"If your right hand causes you to sin, cut it off, and throw it away."

Jenny thought for a moment, and started chuckling. She looked at the gutting knife on the bookcase, and picked it up. Her dad pick-locked the door, and he came in, and found his daughter, with her right eye gouged out and right hand cut off.

"What the fuck?!!!" Jenny's dad yelled.

"Dad, if the priest said 'If your right hand causes you to sin, cut it off, and throw it away.', then I pleased God by doing this! Hey, you have done the same. Wanna try?" Jenny said as she reached out the knife to her dad. She started laughing ballistically.

"Honey, call the police!!" her dad yelled to her mother.

Jenny looked at her dad. "Why call the police?" she wondered.

"Jenny, you've lost your fucking mind!" her dad barked.

"And you haven't?!" she yelled.

Jenny stabbed her dad. She went for Lilly. "Jenny?" Lilly said. She stabbed Lilly, and noticed her mom saw her stab her little sister. Jenny's mom grabbed the phone. "Police! My daught-" she got cut off, because Jenny killed her. She picked up the phone, and said "Hello!"

"Who is this?!" the police yelled.

Jenny hesitated, and said "Left-hand Jen." and hung up. She left her home, and no one knows what happened afterwords. All people report, is a girl, with her right eye gone, and her right hand too, shoving a knife into the victim's right eye, then saying:

"I have freed you." TO EVERYONE COMMENTING:

There is a new version of the pasta. It is the final copy, so leave your suggestions THERE.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:329641