Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33488654-20180903163712/@comment-33488654-20180905000840

BloodySpghetti wrote: The drivers see a werewolf(?) and act like it's all good... what? I have nothing to feel for, it's basically "oh look a cryptid, cool".

Give the characters emotions, make the animal more dangerous, make the truck get stuck for a while as the animal stalks it and plays mental games on the drivers etc.

Make it seem like a hunter and hunted scenario, but this is well, too plain I guess...

Good luck to you.

(Also, just let them call it a werewolf... or beast... or something less complicated than "humanoid dog with glowing eyes") Changed it to fit to the suggestions.