Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20181121135933/@comment-3563804-20181121173449

DrBobSmith wrote: Solonor1987,

You need a lot of work with your basic English. Your biggest problem is your use of paragraphs. Read the blog entry below and see if it helps. Then correct your problems here in the Writer's Workshop. Don't post it on the main site until you have fixed all your problems here first. As is, this story would be marked for deletion within minutes. User_blog:Fatal_Disease/How_to_Start_a_New_Paragraph_Or:_How_I_Learned_to_Not_Make_a_Wall-o-Text I  already  tried some doe s not work all corrector said the same things  they things its no errors.