Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20160628193135/@comment-25170312-20160628214206

Wow, thank you both so much! I actually wrote this pasta based on a picture i found on the web of two kids in dog masks. I'm gonna post it with the pasta.

About the semicolons, would it work if I change some of them to em dashes? I wanted to cut off the "I" at the beginning of the some of the sentences because it was getting excessive, but I have a habit lately of going overboard with em dashes so I used semicolons. I should probably just stop using semicolons, lol.