Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-23872426-20170819024924/@comment-24101790-20170819031909

No problem, if you're ever looking for writing practice, this workshop is excellent for spotting issues and trouble shooting. In fact, I posted here couple of times to get feedback for a couple of my stories, and after review and revision, one of those stories ended up winning PotM after I put in the time to re-work it. Keep putting in the work and I think you can make this story much more effective that the urban legend it's based on.