Talk:Its Constant Creeping/@comment-4470175-20160626003250

The concept is very good. I liked the idea of a metaphorical battle between a person and their anxiety, or whatever 'it' represented. It was very well written - the eloquent vocabulary creates a good feel to the creepypasta. If I had to list one criticism, I think it ended a bit soon. I'd like you to have gone into more detail, explore more paths - make the story feel a bit more whole. This could be a really good creepypasta, but it doesn't feel like it's there yet.

Great concept. Great writing.

7/10