Talk:The Witch & The Wedding Gift/@comment-25941663-20170630160220/@comment-28266772-20170630160912

Thanks for the feedback Dupes! It's really appreciated. I'm glad you liked it and I agree with you about pacing. I find it hard to gauge these things at the time, and sometimes I'm so keen on cutting out unnecessary bits I think it can hurt the overall story and there was a lot of this story left behind. But I'm trying hard to get a better sense of how to structure stories, and hopefully it'll pay off in the future.