Talk:Daddy's Little Princess/@comment-24463401-20160121015138

Great story, Humbolt. The story manages to have a pretty creepy atmosphere coupled with an interesting premise. I liked how you used lines from the song as a way to signify the shift in narrators. That's a pretty unique way of incorporating the lyrics into the story. It's little touches like that make the story one of the better Creepypastas I've read in a while. The overall piece is pretty solid. Besides a few minor nitpicks I had, which can easily be passed over, I really enjoyed this story. Keep up the good work!