Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25201450-20140919221800/@comment-25188530-20140919224152

Really nice story! It's actually pretty believable (unlike a lot of stories on here), mainly because she doesn't just dissapear or end up being a hallucination when she was in your house, because you pointed out that you heard her run out and slam the door. I also loved that song! The lyrics really make it a good atmosphere for a horror story! Usually I have some advice for people, but you're on a roll! Keep up the good stories, and you could become as famous as "Where Bad Kids Go" or "1999"! Good luck, and review on my outline for my new story, Flip For Heads! (its a discussion topic, so you don't have to look it up on the wiki search)