Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-27838637-20160517072309/@comment-27838637-20160608074553

Thanks for the feedback! It will definitely help me improve in the future.

Actually, if you check out the comments on the post, you will see that somebody has given me an awesome idea for a sequel. I'd be in to writing a sequel (provided this story is well received), and that would probably be the right time to explore the villain a little more. I aimed to focus this story around the idea that 'less is more', so I understand it is a bit vague and there is alot of room to flesh out more of the same story and universe.

I am always willing to give feedback on a story. I'll be sure to check out 'Be Good to Him' and return the favour that you have given me here.

A_O.