Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5952769-20171202125304/@comment-5952769-20171216094410

This was actually based on nightmares. One of the scariest nightmares I've ever had, plus two later dreams that fit together oddly well. I stuck pretty close to what I remember from the dreams, which is probably why the characters don't make a lot of sense. I'll work on that.

I've now had three people read and comment on this story, and I'm relieved that no one has told me to radically change the plot, despite it being sort of surreal and nonsensical. I can trim some parts, but I don't know which ones you're concerned about.

Thanks for the feedback!