Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180915161121/@comment-9041013-20180918175944

I do too think that this version is deeper and better. It's nice to see something go sideways without anyone getting physically hurt. I think that was a hard one to pull, but you've done so finely. So I guess have it proofread, wait a bit more and see if anyone suggests anything else noteworthy and then post it.

Good job