Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37090617-20181003215425/@comment-33470154-20181004013219

Unless I’m misremembering something, this will get automatically flagged for content - I believe Xbox is a blacklisted word. An admin would have to manually approve this, which, quite frankly, they probably won’t do. The idea is okay, and I firmly believe that with enough work you can turn almost any idea into at least a decent CP, but this one definitely lacks execution. One major issue for me is that you mention the narrator not being able to turn off the Xbox. That needs to be explained, it comes out of nowhere and, even though I’m not an Xbox player, I’m fairly sure you can shut any console down at any time with the power button, or, failing that, unplug the console.