Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25089042-20140622035719/@comment-25091096-20140622183633

Wow. I have to say, the minimalistic approach to a kidnapper's/serial killer's journal like this is something that I have not seen before. Most journal pastas of the same subject (that I've seen atleast) are usually drowning in descriptions. This pasta being devoided of that really puts an emphasis on how psychopathic the speaker is since the bare facts that he/she has written down are gruesome by themselves, but does not phase him/her enough to elaborate more. It's a very endearing aproach, indeed.

I don't know for sure if the formating is ok with the admins (they've been really uptight with their standards these days). I personally think it should be fine for the type of style that this pasta is written in.

There's alot of things that really leaves me curious in this pasta. The piggy character, was he a former victim turned partner or something? Did the speaker ever get caught or is he/she still roaming free? The point that this is just an exerpt from a journal with no names (except for the victims, of course) found in a garage sale really leaves the reader nervously looking over their shoulders.

Well done.