Talk:Skinnybones/@comment-25340844-20141015145513

I can't help being bothered by the fact that her starving herself didn't have any negative consequences. Yeah; she got locked in a closet and died, but that happened because another girl hated her. I was expecting some kind of lesson about what happens when one becomes too obsessed with their appearance. Instead the message was more along the lines of "sometimes people suck."

Schools are busy places. Didn't she shout or bang on the door to get someone's attention? There's no way that'd go unnoticed. And there was no janitor working at the school for at least two weeks? Kids are fucking messy; the place'd be filthy.

The writing itself was pretty good. No problems there. 5/10 overall.