Talk:Just a "Nightmare"/@comment-5946174-20131028150851/@comment-5025667-20131028212259

I actually didn't know that was a cliche. I made the last two paragraphs repeat because it just looked better to me, at least in my head. I wasn't intending to fall into any cliche, and this likely won't change it in that sense, but I'll keep that in mind I suppose. My word choice has always been a little odd.

This was my first time using second person in any sort of writing. I'll work out those kinks on it, so thank you for pointing them out. Keep in mind that most of the pastas you are reviewing were written months ago (this one back in late June) so I have been practicing as a writer since then.