Talk:Still Your Passenger/@comment-24101790-20150629013041

Once again Rinskuro, your stories do not disappoint. I enjoyed how you decided to show the devastation and depression of Elizabeth first before backtracking to the events leading up to it. It made for an engaging story and her refusal to part with her husband’s corpse after all that time had passed spoke leagues about one’s refusal to let go and come to terms with the past.

I enjoyed how you worked the lyrics into the story itself although a few times I felt like some didn’t need to be as referenced or given as much emphasis (italicizing) as the other ones. (“rolled the window down”, “the spines of the ‘nice cool seats’ stopped them”, “’knees were cushioned' after the rebound.”) All in all, it was a very involving story about grief, loneliness, and being trapped by the past. Good job.