Talk:Curiosity Killed the Rat/@comment-24040907-20140918061607/@comment-4893169-20140923181316

So there is a cursive handwriting font? I just used the italic-type, although the person who was reviewing this story on the forum used the term "cursive" when referring to italic font, although I think "cursive" is more like regular handwriting.

Yes, I think I see what you mean. The reader gets in Marc's shoes when he's reading the baby sitter's letter and feels the same sense of loss. I think in reality, little kids would react differently, while some would be highly confused, others like Marc would be somewhat mature enough to understand to grasp the situation.

I really don't want to change the character to make him more panicky and dufous-like. I think I'll just follow some of the advice and explain just who exactly did write the letter, and make the appropriate line breaks between the letter text and the rest of the story.

I think this is the account you're looking for. I send a return message back on my deviant art site about the trouble you've been having.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:Hellhound_iscariot666