Talk:Pandora's Box/@comment-1671931-20141105203105/@comment-25566037-20141207024423

Thank you, I appreiciate the feedback, I'm always thankful for you not being so rude about it :) I don't feel I want to change the story, but my future stories will definietly be more descriptive and have more detail. That's something I've been wanting to work on for the longest time, Thank you for advice!