Talk:My Baby/@comment-5269370-20140508221455

I was originally highly praising of this story, and to be honest, I still am. You've done a great job revamping it. The plot is now easier to follow, yet the writing is as equally effective as it had been in the original version of the story.

The one thing I really love about the story is the imagery you used, and how you kept re-referring to these images in the story. The cicadas, the cigarette smoke, the rose petal withering and dying as the plot's dark theme progressed. Very good. Keep it up :)