Talk:The Will of the Fates/@comment-28266772-20200218143600

I think at one point you mistake winch for wench, but since I was unsure I left it unchanged. You just might want to double check.

Overall I really liked it. I'd say it gets a 5 out of everything except creepiness which I'd give a 4. At the end of the day you went for an overt action story and it's right up my street because I love Conan and Clark Ashton Smith and this reads like it's right out of the pages of one of those books. But it still trades a little bit of atmosphere for thrill so I took a point out of that category.

Still, a very strong entry. 19/20. Probably the best story I've read on the wikia in a long time.