Talk:The Horseman in the Night/@comment-25941663-20150214141105

One thing I forgot, you used trifle a bit too much (three times, I think). This is a tiny nitpick, I know, but I thought I should let you know that the last time I read 'trifle', my immersion was broken for a second.

Maybe that's just me, but I don't hear the word trifle that often so it kinda stood out here.