Board Thread:Site Questions/@comment-35333294-20190219040429

I'm quite a new guy in the sense that I've never writen a 2SPOOPY4ME story before, however as you. . . probably can't see, actually, I'm somewhat profound in terms of vocabulary, and I at least know how to construct A STORY (also I'm a grammar nazi too). But GOD DAMN, some of these overhyped creepypastas really didn't age well, eh?

'Nuff food for thought here, I was just wondering If I could prepose an idea I literally just came up with (that will more than likely be instantly shot down, or just left forgotten).

How's about I try and turn fruitless gore / snore fests into decent, C- pieces of horror? (but don't count on it). All I'ma do is NOT EDIT THE ORIGINAL, 'cause that's just dumb, but instead just make a new article with far better grammar, slightly changed story to make better sense, and throw all that HybER ReALiSTIk BL00D out the fucking window?

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Should probably show some semblance of proof that can actually accomplice such a monumental feat . . . SO here's a example from a rather "well known" tale:

Original:

"I remember what the image looked like in that split second before the game cut to black; The sky had darkened, the title emblem was rusted and ruined, the SEGA 1991 was now instead SEGA 666, and the water had turned red, like blood, except it looked hyper-realistic."

My Version:

"I still recall what the screen had shown me during that last frame . . . The sky had turned pitch black, darker than night. The ring-like emblem that housed the blue blur had rusted and decayed, barely recognizable. SEGA's trademark date was changed into the demonic numbers of the beast. What was once sparkling water turned into blood, so real that I'm sure the Genesis couldn't possibly handle it. But how? Whoever made this ROM must've been very skilled in order to pull off such sadistic shit."

And yes, I'm fully aware that some creepypastas have been retold, but not all of 'em!

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This is dumb, why am I even trying? I'm probably gonna get banned for this alone, so why?

Why not?

*Vsause music plays* 