Talk:Poisoned to the Rotten Core/@comment-5564808-20141202053439

This was an interesting read. Very redolent imagery, fairly unique, good rhymes, and a tone that is menacing, divine, macabre, dramatic and somber all at once (the ending is rather cool too). Some of the phrasing seems a bit awkward/questionable, so I'd recommend checking through that and revising. Finally, I like the "Somewhat Damaged" reference of the title.