Talk:It's There Again/@comment-29507836-20161022153622

Very nice. A sense of mysteriousness and vagueness, but I feel that it lacks necessary information needed for it to be in the perfect space where it is not senseless and not a plain story.

Also, I feel that the plot is unoriginal and lacks creativity.

However, the way you wrote the sequence of events made it just that more interesting. It really felt like I was reading what the thoughts of the person was that was experiencing it.

Overall, I rate this a 6/10.