Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28467653-20160515214806/@comment-26407997-20160516005628

Probably the reason why it was rejected is becuase of how confusing the story is.What escactly were the shapeess creatures?I did read this kind of fast,so maybe I missed something,but still too cun fusing.Why has catherine not been in town for 20 years?I feel like if we knew alot more about the characters it would be a better story.

Sorry this was such a short review,I`m kind of in a rush now.