Talk:That Wretched Grin/@comment-30191106-20170324151826

When I first looked at this I thought about how this was going to be a terrible 'Lost Episode' deal but with a book. I was pleasantly surprised. Even the child being found hanging actually worked, unlike most pastas, at first, I had assumed it would fall apart from there, but it didn't. Well done over all. I quite enjoyed the rhyme at the end by the way.