Talk:He Waits for You/@comment-33671402-20171127205059

Wow! Great pasta!!! The only thing that I didn't like about it was that it is TELLING YOU what you will feel... it needs to tell you what you need to do not what you will do... just say it in a different way like this ex

You’ll then gather enough will to take your hands, and gently lift him off you, placing him to your side. You get a better look at him.

to fix this and make it more of a ritual change it to something more like this

Now, Lift his hands off you and place them to your side. You may get a better look at him.

You See??? THAT is how a ritualpasta is written!