Talk:How Does It End?/@comment-26326346-20160504212609

Well that escalated! Not quickly though.

It was a great read from start to finish and I was hooked. I enjoyed all the little bits of info about Eric and Jessica's relationship and I loved watching the toxicity of it all burst at the end. It was nice to witness the explosion after finding out that the relationship had been crumbling for months/years. You also completely misdirected me when I was reading. I legitimately thought he was going to tie her up to where she could only type and I was really interested in seeing how that could be done in such a way that one couldn't get away!

Eric's fate was amusing. I laughed when he killed Jessica and thought, "Well, I guess you aren't going to ever know how it ends, huh, dumbass?" I was really surprised when he decided to finish the novel.

I do find the idea of someone finishing my stories frightening, especially someone that I don't trust. I'd actually rather be stabbed repeatedly by the letter opener than to have that happen. Irrational, I know XD I feel like this story might resonate deeper with writers for that reason, at least it did with me.

Great job, Empyre!