Talk:A Figueira da Praça XV de Novembro/PT/@comment-25558572-20140725220623

This was a pretty interesting concept, so it did manage to be a little unnerving. The writing style was a little awkward at times and the simplicity made it a bit bland, but I can excuse that because it's an an Alternate Language. The pacing was also a bit off and the ending abrupt, although the originality of the concept and the easily readable style makes up for that.

So overall, this could have been a bit better-written, but it's still a fairly good read. It really could do more to be creepier, though.