Talk:Corrolis/@comment-39925291-20190626233535/@comment-35711173-20190627030712

Burger Fan FM,

Welcome to Creepypasta, and welcome to your first Creepypasta. Your first story is getting a better reception than mine. It was quickly deleted.

Please listen to everything Red Nova Tyrant says about the story. He is correct in his evaluation.

The Writer's Workshop is a wonderful place. Feedback from the other writers there has often meant the difference in my stories between even boring myself and something I can be proud of.