Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35949526-20180621220502/@comment-9041013-20180622154444

"Like a normal newbie, I ran into bullies. Those wh0res, more disgusting the cafeteria lunch. I was ready to kick those butts the time I walked in. I didn’t make the bad-a$$ entrance, no matter how badly I wanted. I didn’t want to f##k up my first day, that’s all. When I reached my locker, I couldn’t believe my sh!t of a luck. The one next to mine was all decorated girly-like, which disturbed me a lot. That chick, dressed in a cheer leader style, ran up to me with her fake boobs bouncing along, just slapped me in the face, shouting, “Who do you think you are? Staring at MY locker!” Great. I have head issues, more like mental disorder. As the doctors say. I saw red. Complete red. Yep, that girl will now have to deal with Miss. SO-F##KING-ANGRY." I gave up after that part. I couldn't... why did you type this like some cringy youtuber censoring his curse words to not get banned off Youtube?

Also, the story is very Jeff The Killer esque... I do advise you to check out some information about serial killers and violent offenders so you could get a better hang of what drives an abnormally violent person's mind, you could also check out lectures by Jordan Peterson on the subject. He articulates that matter very well.

Get a more realistic view of what drives serial murderers and run with it, but for the love of god avoid this type of f$$$king r3t4rded m0r0nic censorship, typing thing.

I do appreciate your efford though, nonetheless