Talk:Princess Ann/@comment-9041013-20160628204200

Honestly this needs more recognition.

I mean its not an outstanding amazing magnificent pasta but it's a pretty good piece, you've managed to catch my eye with the picture of the doll and the first paragraph, good job on that Mr. or Miss...

I have no freaking clue if you were trying to describe the girl's condition to be schizophrenia but it definitely came out this way. Perfectly blunt case of parranoid schizophrenia. There's this poor girl with the disease that sees a freaking Seven (yes the number) beating on her family members and when she being a child tries to warn them the seven yells at her it didnt do anything. Same thing with the girl in your piece - a seemingly innocent thing, ei dolls, laugh at her and mock her on every ocassion until a creepy dolls comes by and then the girl's condition takes a turn to the worst (I honestly hope you had no intention of making it a tuned down chucky doll thing).

So I hope this gets more famous and good job on keeping me interested :)