Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25679985-20141113225701/@comment-25226524-20141113235456

No problem. It takes a little while to get things figured out at first. Any time you post something, always switch to source mode first. It removes all font and background coding and also has a spell check (it doesn't auto correct, but it underlines misspelled words). Depending on what you're doing, you can switch to source mode by either clicking the bracket symbol as you do here, or by clicking a tab at the top right that says "source." You can actually make it your default editor if you want, by going into your preferences.

I haven't read the story, but I did notice a couple things in the first couple sentences that I'll go ahead and tell you about. The first one is that you need a comma between the last word and the closing quotation mark of the first sentence (experiment,"). The second is that you don't capitalize the first word following dialogue when it's identifying the speaker or all part of one sentence, unless it's a word that is always capitalized, of course (...buzz you in!" the secretary said...).

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