Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9584883-20150219161937/@comment-25825682-20150223090834

I read the story and the previous versions and I have to say I do like it. Although I seen and read revenge plots before I enjoy them from time to time. On to a review, well there was something bugging me concerning the ellipsis. There were noticeable two dotted ones and it confused me a bit. Were they meant to be there, because as far as I know that's used almost entirely in computer language.

Maybe I'm wrong or was it to imply representative origin construction that's a less-dramatic and drastic ellipsis. Shorter pauses, perhaps. Less meandering and long-winded. Other than that I do like the story so far. I can't wait to read it more. :)