Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27857924-20160225002649/@comment-27857924-20160225021204

Also, I am planning to edit my story so that it is less anticlimactic. Should I spend more time explaining how the EYE ended up causing the disaster in the story? To help the build-up, should I talk about the alien world in greater detail? Also, do you have any advice on how to make it more interesting? Would more detail or perhaps relatable things help?