Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-17739056-20140704170557/@comment-28088262-20140710164327

Oh yeah, and my 'help' to help you improve in future...even though you're not working on it anymore I guess.

1. Get rid of the stuttering. One or two stutters only will do the job.

2. Replace the comma in the last sentence with a semicolon or dash. Whichever you prefer.