Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20181214071705/@comment-35711173-20181214160511

L0cked and Bloody Spaghetti,

Thank you both for the reviews. You diagnosed my problems with the story accurately. Yes, this was a dream that I keyed in. It shows a lot of the problems with keying in a dream. (Rushed, weird, makes no sense.) You are also both right about the precise point where the story goes South.

Dr. Bob