Talk:Princess Diana/@comment-24821182-20141005191008

I'm really not sure what I think of this story. It seems really random, and while I get that the randomness emphasizes the wild nature of Diana, I can't make up my mind about whether it actually works or flops. It reads like it was written in one long sitting, without much forethought on the action or pacing. I also think Chase is the single most unlikeable protagonist I've seen in a long while, but I suppose that goes well with him getting his comeuppance in the end.

There are certain humorous moments that make the story almost enjoyable, but overall I don't think this is a high-quality pasta.