Talk:In the Right Light.../@comment-24381191-20140522172139


 * starts to clap slowly* You're an awesome writer. You really know how to describe everything, and although this story isn't scary, it just pulls the reader in. Until the gore. At least you had a reason for the gore being in there, but I strongly disprove of gore. Looking forward to more stuff from you, one word of advice though, cut down on the gore. Keep writing.