Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29076144-20160715191116/@comment-24101790-20160718033017

Read your rebuttal, but it really didn't help much with the story. You should be alluding and referencing these things in the story itself rather than adding and explaining it in an addendum (especially since the coyote killing could simply be nature preying on nature.) If you have to explain it to someone later, then you're not really doing a good job with the story.