Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25847009-20170425150415

Keep in mind that Part 2 is still being worked on and that part 1 will only be posted on the wiki when all errors have been corrected.

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The story starts off in the psychopath's young life and will build toward his current life, there will be a revenge plot, making this a truely interesting creepypasta. Sources include bestgore.com, contacts and chatsites to give you and accurate representation of what it would be like in the shoes of a psychopath. Enjoy!

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The Mind of a Pshychopath (Part 1)

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You know, I wasn't always this far down the path of going mentally insane. I had a home like you, a loving family, hell I slept with a teddybear till I was 7 years old. Sometimes you just stay stuck in the path you've taken. There are some like me who didn't want to turn back to the normal path. I chose to develop a pleasure in pain, not like those fourty year old guys who play with gimp masks.

My story begins as an innocent child who wondered to far on the normal side of the internet. My chat partners always talked about these websites where they saw, well they saw things I wouldn't be able to comprehend untill I too experienced it for myself. They told me about a type of untraceable browser. The type they use to buy drugs and go to weird websites because of boredom.

I decided to install this SRWare Iron they told me about and used a wiki full of websites to browse when I was bored. This browser kept me entertained for the remainder of a few years of my highschool life. I even managed to get myself some contacts on some chat based websites, even managed to be the main seller of weed and ecstasy at the parties I went to.

But you know what happens when you start getting curious about some website url that keeps floating around the darkweb chat sites. One of my contacts told me that it was some fantasy site that wasn't worth the bitcoins to apply to. Needless to say, I visted the website and they were as organised as any other random url you would find on the deepweb.

There were options to some privileges which you could sign up for like gold membership would have access to full hd quality and platinum membership would allow you to make demands of the host. I figured that this was some kind of cam girl type of deal but deepweb style.

There were also dates to when the shows would start and the closest show was tomorrow. There was also a chatbar that I was unable to see since I was not a member. I told my other contacts about that site to see if I could get any other information, but they all told me that they hadn't bothered to even look.

I decided to see what this was all about and skip the party I was going to sell some product, and got myself ready to have my curiosity take over. An hour from showtime and I got on the deepweb, punched in the url and used my bitcoins to buy a membership. I introduced myself to the chat that opened up, and they all welcomed me. We talked about the site and they told me this is one of the redrooms that opened up a month ago.

Jackpot, I always knew that the deepweb had some redrooms but all the ones I visted was fake or the url expired before I got a chance to take a look.

A few seconds before showtime and the screen was filled with some curtains, like it was an opera. The host welcome us to a special show, he told us that the victims were just about to be delivered, he kept us company till a truck could be heard. Large objects could be heard that dragged against the floor. The curtain opened to see 3 people tied up in a tiled but spotless room, and various torture devices.

The host introduced the unconscious victims, the first was Jerry Clauberfield a pedofile in his current neighborhood, he was kidnapped in his sleep. Second was Samuel Watson, he beats his wife and children, he was kidnapped, walking to work. The third victim was Cathy Sorrell, she stalks teenages in dark allys of the night and forces them to do horrible acts at gunpoint, she was drugged and taken while performing her nightly ritual.

The host asked for an execution methood from the platnum member, bunch of names flying from the chatbar from the pit and steel crowbar untill the host decided. The first execution would be performed by Saw torture. The camera was moved to another room where what looked like a swingset without any swings. Jerry was hung upside down with rope tied to both of his feet and he was injected with a strange liquid.

Jerry soon woke up screaming, and the host and a strange man with a mask came into the room and they picked up the two handed saw that was on the floor. Slowly they placed the saw on his crotch and the signal was given to his assistant to begin. They went through the bones as if they were butter, and after a few minutes they were at the stomach section of Jerry. The screaming was unforgetable, like a dog being beaten on the street. Jerry began to scream less and less untill the life in his eyes dried up.

There he hanged, split almost in half, organs hanging close to the ground. The host immediately turned to the camera and asked for the next execution methood. More words came flying through the the chat but it seems that one word stuck with the host. It was the Heretics Fork, again the camera was picked up and put into another room with Samuel being dragged on a chair, and his head was held upwards while a two ended fork was positioned between his chin and his chest. He was injected with the same fluid as Jerry, Samuel woke up and was told to keep his chin up or the sharp object would puncture his arteries and he would bleed out.

He was given another injection that relaxed his muscles, now the challenge wasn't the piercing and keeping his head up. It was staying awake long enough and not letting the muscle relaxers get to his head. Needless to say, he held out for thirty minutes before his arteries were pierced and he bled out two minutes later. He kept whispering words of apology while he bled out till the life left his eyes.

The host now for the third and last time turned to the camera and asked for the next methood for execution. This time he chose the first word that popped up on the chat bar. It was something called the Judas Cradle...

For the third time the camera was moved to another room with what I can only discribe as a big wood block object with a sharp point at the top and extending outwards. Cathy was dragged, stripped and tied to a pully system that would slowly lower her onto the sharp object over time. She was injected and she awoke but did not even scream. It was as if she just accepted her fate. She was told what would happen to her as she looked around.

The cradle was lubricated and the pully system was activated, and as the process started all she did was look at the camera while her intestines were stretched infront of the audience watched. Three minutes later you could see blood and fecal matter pour to the ground. Cathy was thought to still be awake after 5 minutes, but we were surprised when her head slowly moved towards her chest while the life left her body.

The feedback of the camera shutdown and everyone in the chatbar said goodbye. This gave me a moment to get my head straight. I tried convincing myself that I didn't enjoy the screaming, the blood but my ear to ear smile was telling me otherwise... _______________________________________________________________________________________

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