Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27091999-20151019200544/@comment-27091999-20151102223620

Ok so I edited some stuff. I think I got all the stuff you guys/gals(?) were talking about. If not feel free to tell me. I made it longer, is that better? worse? Sorry it took so long. Does the source mode thing look right to you? I wrote this in word and copied and pasted it in source mode so does that work? I don't know. Sorry!