Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26536577-20150628155556/@comment-26512885-20150701203131

I think that he should be described as a fairly normal boy but with adjectives that suggest that he isnt normal. For instance he could be described as pasty appose to just saying he was pale. Or stating that his stare was empty  could also help create the desired effect.

I think the main thing with this one is subltety though. Hope this helped, looking forward to seeing how this one turns out