Talk:Alien Hand Syndrome/@comment-5269370-20140709095100

Pretty good story. I quite liked the ending, and the deterioration of the character's arm. Quite enjoyable.

My advice to you would be to remove the bit at the start that states "Let just apologize in advance for any weird grammar errors, as I'm actually writing this on some pirated voice recognition software, and I haven't really had time to calibrate it." and to actually fix the grammar errors in your story.

I really loved the reference to the internet as the "hypochondriac's handbook." Genius.

7.2/10