Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10502460-20180221231815/@comment-32764586-20180224170125

I'm not exactly sure about how I feel about this one, to be honest. It seems kind of generic or bland I guess. It mocks the stereotypical alien abduction tropes but doesn't seem to offer anything new. It seems like this story is over before it started with little memorable things in between. A kid gets abducted by aliens, goes to an alien school, a girl named Luna asks him questions, he gets hurt and goes back to earth. I know a lot of creepypastas don't need to make any sense, and a story should almost never explain things out to you. But when this story was over I was just kind of like confused, and not in a good way. The writing is well done, but I can't say much for the story overall.