Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5952769-20170125115538/@comment-5952769-20170130135135

Banned In CP wrote: An interesting and creative read, though there could be more explanation as to why she was traumatized. If this was it, then why didn't she blow it off as a dream? Or a hallucination? I think that it's pretty sound save the ending, which could use some more fleshing out. I thought this was a good place to end it. No falling action, just the indication that the surreal experience snapped her mind. Do you think there's a better way to do it?

By the way, how do you edit a thread title? On other threads, I remember being able to remove "unreviewed" after someone reviewed it.