Talk:Teeth.jpg/@comment-25734921-20141121032928

3/10. I'm not sure why this is POTM. The story had a lot of potential but the writing was awful, and I figured the whole thing out way before the characters even got close. There was no mystery. It was written in an extremely predictable fashion and there were little contradictions here and there that made me shake my head. This could have been a good pasta, it was just executed terribly...