Talk:Greywater/@comment-3541151-20150222011902

The immagination of Greywater is incredible, and overall adds to the Grey storytelling. I had a Fairly Oddparents joke I wanted to say, but couldn't find the link. Moving on.

The need to forget is a relatable terror of the human condition, as well the inability to do such. The story does analyse this question... in the MOMENT that it's told.

It is an awfully short story to tackle such ideas with, and ironically my Critique COULD be longer than it, but I digress.

The feel of the story is nervousness, we feel that in the character. His uncertainty, his need to forget, the story knows how to set it's TONES. The twist adds to the morbidity and solidifies the stories attempts at being the edgy fright that it is.

If I had to complain about anything, it's-UGH-Why pool water?! GAG!

All in all a fun micropasta, a neat shock therapy, although too short for some of the deeper concepts. If not as short as it was, it could have been better, in my opinion. 6/10