Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180430095534/@comment-35447404-20180506201643

A few side-notes: Maybe end the text with a newspaper report from the time, the weird neighbours could even offer an interview giving their perspective from the incident.

You should change the object from gourds... Something weirder, rarer or something that could help the whole cold war paranoia motiff that invasion of the body snatchers explored back in those days. It's such a rich vein that one. Machinery, weapons, strange behavior... So much can be done with it.