Talk:The Decision/@comment-26193563-20150403153002/@comment-4955311-20150403172130

Well, not to say I don't like it, the story is a bit too short, the emotional factor is pretty low, and while not cliché the situation seems predictable. If the latter doesn't make sense, I'll explain: The narrator's dilemma is a concept somewhat overused in CP, and while his/her progression into anxiety and confusion is well constructed, it also falls short to overuse. It's not a bad pasta, it really isn't. It's just sort of....just a normal pasta.