Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27123040-20151028190837/@comment-26425680-20151030023236

The problem with this is that your inkblot picture isn't even close to being creepy. If you consider the other pastas that have pictures associated with them, the images themselves genuinely creep people out. Maybe you were going for some sort of "find the horror within yourself" motif, I dunno. By the way, you have a fantastic core idea. An actual story about Vincent Argo and his paintings would make for a great pasta, in the right hands. As is, there simply isn't enough here for the reader to chew on.