Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25024572-20150317165623/@comment-25024572-20150318105854

Shadowswimmer77 wrote: Eh. The fact that the narrator says he is basically expecting the intruder implies he is somehow ready for whatever is coming. To me this takes away the "jump scare" aspect which is what these micros tend to live and die off of. I did that to make this a bit...different from most of these kind of things. Apparently it didn't work. Oops.