Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26169026-20160129192530/@comment-26169026-20160130014216

I appreciate your comments and you're right. Looking at it from the outside, versus writing it. I think I'm going to put this to the side, until I get the rest of the story to go along with it. Because really, it wasn't originally intended to be a story just the backstory to a character that was involved in a much larger story... when I have more of the rest of the story worked out, I'll come back to this. Thanks.