Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20170819212316/@comment-4893169-20170821193212

To ChristianWallis

Thank you for making this thorough review. I have the mechanical issues corrected out in pen on the draft I just printed off. I'm right now working on the style issues, such as expanding the flashback scene with more conversation and action at finding the gun under the floorboards, and maybe one or two characters feeling sympathetic for the geeky character.

That's great to hear that you're going to work on the O Willow Waly story prompt. I would very much like to see what new horror aries from a creepy hobby horse theme.