Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24381191-20140904164608/@comment-24381191-20140909132126

Jemaba wrote: Okay, I've only written one creepypasta so far, so I'm no expert. And I love the way you've written this; it drew me in and had a consistent tone. I thought it was great, but I'm not sure if it was that creepy. Now, having your entire planet blow up is pretty damn scary to experience, but when I'm just reading it, it felt more driven towards drama and/or tragedy. That's just what I thought, but I'm new to the wiki so maybe everything I just said is irrelevant. I know it doesn't fit too well on the wiki :P You're right. It's a place devoted to scary stories and this was not scary at all. The fact is, it's pretty hard to make something like this scary unless I actually put you on an exploding planet, which I might have been able to do if I was a space pirate, but no one is that lucky. *sobs*

I have posted it on the main wiki, over here, no, not there, HERE