Talk:The Silent Vixen/@comment-25730260-20141120120850

most of the stories on this site don't really give me that.. thrill, that I'm looking for. especially the short stories. but this was really good! it had my heart going and I felt a desire to finish the story, rather than push through in hopes it'll have a promising ending. I have no problem with the title, in fact my only criticism is maybe a little more backstory on the creature would be nice, or an ending with an explanation of what just happened. good job!