User blog comment:PinkGhost062/I can't submit my story./@comment-24101790-20170602201530

I would suggest taking it to the writer's workshop as it seems to be triggering the 2nd filter (which restricts Slenderman, FNaF, video games, etc. stories) Additionally while taking a quick look over your story, I noted a number of mechanical (capitalization, punctuation, wording issues) as well as some story issues that could use correction while we attempt to figure out what's tripping the filter.