Talk:Family/@comment-24790745-20140408140508/@comment-24790739-20140408152640

Sorry, i think i didnt clarify that enough, the room wasnt covered in flesh, the skin was covering the window, and the light that came through the skin made the room look red, and because the body had no skin, the flesh gave a shiny effect to the body, not the room, but the body wasnt haging in the window, it was on the floor

Since this is my first creepypasta, this is exactly what i want, constructive criticism so i can keep changing and improving the story :)