Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28598766-20160623195207/@comment-28266772-20160629134923

I was hoping someone would be able to offer feedback on this before it slipped away, but I've noticed now that your post is slinking lower and lower down the page. I'm limited in the feedback I can offer simply because I'm not that well versed in poetry. But I can at least let you know that I enjoyed your poem, and thought it was pretty good.

However, I would be aware of this post when submitting (in particular the part at the bottom by Empyrealinvective) where it is stressed that the quality standards for poems are much higher than they are for stories. Similarly there is a post here by an old admin which offers a guide on the wikia's standards for poetry (although, I must admit I don't think I see anything that your poem does wrong so I'm not sure it's going to be a lot of use to you).

So I guess all I can really say are four distinct things.

1 - I liked your poem, but I'm crap at poetry so it might not mean much.

2 - The wikia seems to have much higher standards for poetry than it does stories

3 - It might be worth messaging one of the admins (I think empyrealinvective is a good bet, although he is awfully busy) to get more knowledeable feedback. There's nothing wrong with asking for feedback on this wikia, so don't be shy.

4 - You could, instead, just submit it and see if it's accepted. But there's a risk since if it's deleted, you can't just reupload a newer improved version at a later date, you would have to go through deletion appeal.