Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190813084030/@comment-9041013-20190816145134

"On his two plums" works fine. Though, in lieu of the "like an arab", why not be cheeky about it and name her "Marie" as a girl might be named in the Francophone Christian community of Lebanon.

I am missing the part where his arm and head are killing him, give it a tad bit more description sauce.