Talk:Quiltmakers/@comment-29507836-20161009031739

Very short, yet descriptive enough to be creepy. Its wording was nice, improvable, but still nice. I also loved that the plot contained the antagonists to be old women. Even though you used three old ladies, which may I say are usually harmless and charming, it still creeped me out once I knew what their purposes were. The buildup was quite nice, too.

However, I find that the "luring" of the victims is quite cliche. I also find that the old women may not have been old women at all, but it was not clarified whether or not they were real people at all. I'm not sure whether it's best to keep that information locked up or revealed, but in this case I'm leaning more onto the reveal of what they really were.

Overall, I liked the short story, and I think that I'm going to give this a solid 6/10.