Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30881196-20180424071054/@comment-30881196-20180424195302

Thanks. Mechanics is a weakness for me, so I am always thankful for advice on improving my mechanics. They were filler lines, but I will clean those up.

Pretty much, I wanted it to be obvious that David is a spooky monster as a red herring. The world is set in a reality were "badass monster hunters" lost the war against supernatural evils. In order to survive, they are reliant upon their own monsters.

The monster inspiration was drawn from anime like Devilman's Jinmen and Tokyo Ghoul. I did enjoy Prototype though.

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