Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20181001004513/@comment-9041013-20181003110308

It literally suffers from the same problems as before, just in differerent phrasing. And on top of that, you've also added the worst parts of our sci-fi fantacies and made them into a heavenly dream. I know I shouldn't be making personal remarks, but you are too stubborn for your own good.

How can we perform super advanced neuroscietific surgery that is possible impossible and cannot get rid of cancers we're dealing with today to a moderate success... Again, otherwise the plot won't work otherwise and you are too stubborn to come up with a new idea.

Who on earth from the 25th century (I am just throwing a futurist point in time here) would want to go to old Kyoto to live there? Nobody, because back in old Kyoto... you die from Flu. Sure, Japanese people are on average healthier than Westeners, and were so throughout history due to their better diet and more active lifestyle, but still... from advanced society to paper buildings society? Yeah... no amount of Romantization would keep anyone from the future in our time for longer than a week because we are living in a world "too inconvinient" where you still have to use use buttons.

In Singapore I think there are three or four major religious communities, you still don't see three generations of the same following each following a different religion.

I guess my work here is done.