Talk:The Old English Village/@comment-25052433-20140911084548

Like a wish gone bad, your review is granted.

-Ritual pastas. Some are great, so are awful. This one was amazing. Well done.

-This was scary and quick paced. I like that in a short, concept driven story. You nailed the tempo with the wording here, and I enjoyed every second of reading this one.

-As far as changes go...well, this is a ritual pasta, so as long as it told the story that you wanted it to tell, there really isn't much I could suggest. You seem to have hit all your goals with this one, and it delivered big on suspense.

Well done.