Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25332942-20140823180840

It came from our garden.

I was only seven years old...We moved to a new house in Glasgow.The first night,I heard a cracking noise. It came from our garden.I watched throught my window,I saw a door like light.I felt like I was medidating.The light  grabbed me.It was a tunnel!!!! I was walking throught it but when i got too far it was getting darker and the walls became red. "Welcome to your mind,a never ending tunnel.".It was a man with a grey face and black veins like scars."He grabbed a rusty hook and tried to stab me when I get close to him. He was aiming and his face got devilish.I ran away.He was controlling my mind ,he kept telling "You can't escape." "You've entered my kingdom" and "Be with us!" . I entered my house.I felt tremors. My house was falling down.The Monster teleported and tried to stab me. He missed and he hit the wall. The wall had a crack that became bigger and bigger. The crack opened and the light that came from it hit the creature.It was yelling,his body was full of dark scars and his body exploded. The next day I was in the hospital.We moved to our old  house.I never knew why the new one had that portal,was it cursed or haunted.When we came back to the old house,nothing happened. 