Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140731082945/@comment-25148755-20140801050124

Well done. A couple grammatical errors ('lay' not 'laid' in the first paragraph, use an apostrophe for James's room). Interesting enough concept, like the open ended ness of it although for some reason this was my least favorite of the three stories of yours I've read. James being a long lived robot is something of a nice twist. 7/10.