Board Thread:Administration/@comment-24304936-20150114214448/@comment-26021179-20150120023648

However leaving out too much detail can make it sound lazy.

E.g. "...and so his door was left open one night.

That very night something entered his home, something that he dismissed as mere gush of wind when it slid over him in the midst of his semi-present slumber..."



see the above example is quite contrived and all around lazy. We have no scafold to form a creature or any definite conclusion that this creature is a threat. For all we know this thing could be a house moth.