Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20181130223415/@comment-34823985-20181201010412

I remember this story. I'm glad to see you've picked it up again and made some revisions. The added detail of Kyle in the dumpster is what this story needed. DrBobSmith does make a good point about the noisy trash truck, though. Hmm...

Maybe think back to a situation you got yourself into that you discovered was much easier getting into than out of. True story: I got stuck in one of those couch/bed thing-a-ma-jig-jigs when I was a kid. I laid in wait to scare my brother.

I heard him enter the room and went to spring out, but I hadn't thought about how to open it from the inside. I got my foot caught as well. My brother still brings that whole fiasco up every now and again. "Hey doofus, you remember that time you pranked yourself?". Anyways, good luck on your story. :)