Talk:Umbra Domina/@comment-25052433-20150502001649

My birthday is Dec. 5th. I turned 8 years old on the day that your two characters met.

Onto the story, I enjoyed it a lot. You added some interesting historical art facts that are always fun. I wish you would have added more detail and depth into what the wife actually was and what her motives were all about. I feel there was a lot more story to be told here.

Still, great pasta, keep writing!