Talk:Mother's Love/@comment-10319977-20150131181946

My critique:

Personally, I would change the first sentence of the second paragraph from "she has never acted so weirdly" to "she has never acted this oddly", but that's just my preference.

As far as the story itself goes, I loved the setup; the only thing I disliked is the ending. It's good that you left a lot up to the imagination, but in this case I feel it was too much. I think adding on a little bit would help a lot, so that the reader at least has an idea of how it ends/whether or not it's a delusion.