Talk:A Child's Doll/@comment-24550863-20140518135207

I think this is a wonderful story of friendship. This one had a sense of originality.

But I don't get how Amelia had time or was even able to stuff the paper into Swiper's body and stitch it up. I haven't heard of 6 year olds being able to sew. The main had to cut the thread to get the paper out so I'm pretty sure it was sewn in, even if not properly sewn.

I love how Amelia cares for her Swiper doll so much to come get it even after she died. That was the highlight of the story for me. You also wrote the letters pretty well too.

12.5 / 15