Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25825682-20171229192845/@comment-25825682-20180226162900

Thanks again for the review, I do appreciate them. I'm glad the story flows better now.

I'll do a few more edits to clear up the murkiness in the beginning of the first conversation, and I'll then submit the story later on.

Again, thanks for the feedback you have given me. Now I have a better feel on writing shorter to midlength stories!