Talk:The Long List/@comment-25052433-20150221002531

Well, you knocked another one out of the park. Excellent story from start to finish.

Your grammar, tempo and tense were all spot on, so no need to really comment there.

The plot was interesting and gripped me as a reader right away and just kept me scrolling down for more. The retribution factor was heavy here, and was satisfying. The eventual insanity helped this piece to transcende from what it was to something else all together, and was delivered very well with a smooth transition.

All around great story. Keep writing, you have a serious gift for this.