Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24191206-20140410182103

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This is an old story I wrote awhile back that got taken down after a month b/c it wasn't good enough.

I understand that this wasn't a good story. I had a tough time writing this so it didn't come out as great as I wanted it to.''

''So Can anyone help me fix this? ''____________________________________________________________________________

Up on the Roof Top

For the past few nights before I go to sleep for the night. I've been hearing scratching at my bedroom window; like something begging to be let inside. I don’t know who or what been doing this and I've been too afraid to peer from behind the curtains to see what horrors await me.

It scratches at my window nonstop until 11:00 each night when it gets fed up and begins to pace back and forth like a predator waiting for its prey to become its next meal. It just paces back and forth; back and forth all night long!

I haven’t slept in weeks, possibly even months; I've lost track after the first week or two. What am I supposed to do? I can’t tell anyone; they’ll think I’m crazy! Besides, what would I say? I don’t even know what’s really out there.

I have to see what the hell has been keeping me up at night. It’s driving me insane night after night; I just have to know. I’ll do it tonight right when it starts scratching again. Hopefully it might just be a raccoon. “God please just let it be a raccoon!”

Well wish me luck... I’ll need it.

“Oh God!” What was that thing? It saw me now and its pacing in front of my window now. It sees me as its prey. Well If I’m going to die I’m not going out without a fight. “'Come on! Come at me!'”

Oh boy now it’s pissed...Well if that thing thinks I’m easy prey...

It’s Dead Wrong!

“Come on! Fight Me! Fight me if you dare!”      *CRASH* 