Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4127458-20150509021003/@comment-4127458-20150509021543

This isn't formatting correctly. Here is the formatted version here if I can't get this right in source mode.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Mt8QCF6h3FctklPjxoXZz4cS5Olygx6ZD_RKpbPEwxQ/edit