Talk:The Devil Game/@comment-24890120-20160517202938

To me, the entire thing minus one line is elaborately written with thorough details, steps and devilish (teehee) humor. But one line that chipped off an entire point from my rating.

"What? You want out that badly ALREADY? Must be one Hell of an imagination you've got on you."

This one line more or less destroys or at least seriously hinders whatever subtle buildup the story tried to advance (which, if the author is actually the devil itself, is self-explanatory). I still enjoyed the base story/description though.

About an 8/10 since my original rating was going to be about a 9/10.