Talk:Bad Night Out/@comment-5733573-20180525135359

I literally lol'd. The ending is one of my favorites of all the creepypastas I've read because it's just so darkly funny. Another great piece from you overall, although some of the details in the middle slow it down too much. It's not really intrinsic to the story that you took an Uber to the theater, etc. Apart from that, I thoroughly enjoyed this. I really like your quirky style.