Talk:Running Out of Tombstones/@comment-24466828-20180101162359

This is really good. I liked the ambiguity this story raised involving whether The Lark was real or not, because I have my doubts about its existence. I think it's possible that there isn't any monster and the smell comes from all the bodies he kicked down the pit. I tend to like "It's all in your head" stories, so I found this one to be highly compelling. In addition, I found the writing to be really good due to the brief references to tobacco and Westerns which were sprinkled throughout the pasta. If I had to criticize anything, I suppose the very ending where it hints that Jax will start murdering real people was a bit of a predictable character moment as I had a feeling that Jax would eventually have to start doing it. However, since so little of this pasta was spent on that aspect, this is largely excusable.

9/10