Talk:Arthur/@comment-27731963-20160206055712

Would have been better and more believable if the author had left out the bit about the narrator finding all his friends and family dead in the living room. That scene just seemed cheesy and unnecessary. I think it would have been more effective for the narrator to have awoken from a loud crash or something and found Arthur there staring at him while holding a knife or something, with the last few sentences remaining the same.

The setup was pretty good, though. 6/10