Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20191014225230/@comment-27132971-20191023211251

The story revolves around a..."celestial being" (I guess) who is confused about the actual difference between Angels and Demons.

Then, all of a sudden, we realize he has no idea what human/physical concepts are like (even language), and then he begins speaking in a way that leaves me confused and unsure of anything after I finish reading.

Ultimately, I have to say, this isn't a bad story. Not much in the way of actual horror, but it does seem to have eerie undertones, and I particularly liked the ending.

There is just one problem I have though...

="I myself take the shape of a large canine with no eyes and a perpetual human smile, topped with fur laced wings in the shape of primate arms."=

The obvious reference to Smile Dog sort of messed up the story for me.