Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33531395-20180527223025/@comment-25975226-20180528042911

Okay, there is definitely a lot that can be fixed with this story, but before I get into details I need to ask you a couple of questions.

1. Is there a reason why the main character remains without gender? Why do you refer to the main character as them/their/they. I'm only asking because there doesn't seem to be a specific purpose for it, and it would be less clumsy and easier for you to just right he/him/his or she/her instead of them/they. If there is a specific purpose for this choice it wasn't clear.

2. I'm not sure I understand what you were trying to achieve with the ending. Could you please explain it to me?