Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20181024015838/@comment-28428152-20181024021900

I liked this one has the air of a classic, though the sentence “Don’t be sad, now you don’t have to divide your love. I can be the only son.” seems a bit advanced for a three year old. A few minor mistypes here and there, nothing too major. I am a bit confused about the end, though. Was he about to push Jacob off the bridge? And is the choice not to the one he references in the last sentence?