Talk:The Russian Sleep Experiment/@comment-26147515-20150226025218

This story is amazing. The word choices are great and the stroy is very unique in it's own way. However the end was a little dissapointing. Anti climactic if I were to name it. It just seemed kind of rushed and cliche. As if the writer was tired with the story and rushed the end to get it done. It's something I have done as well. Of course other than that it was a great story. Please note that this is not hate but merely my observation to help the writer improve. Everyone is always trying to improve their writing and this is merely some constructive critism.