Talk:Redacted/@comment-25947144-20180228004505

General quality: Didn't find any major issues. 24/25

Horror factor: The memory removal process was the scariest part of the story, and one of the few. The form of cautionary tale and the mystery behind the 'sins' of the narrator sadly don't go in the story's favor, only with the feeling of torment in the end being considerable to be part of horror. 16/25

Lyrical interpretation: To be honest, I'd have a pretty hard try to figure out which of the songs this entry was based on. The idea you constructed the plot around is not the main one. 11/25

General entertainment: Can't complain too much here. Length and pacing were adequate. 19/25

Final score: 70/100