Talk:The Limitless Dimension/@comment-35359331-20180426190216

Wow... this whole story is quite enthralling. I'll break down my thoughts here.

1. The narrator is never named, and no background unrelated to Hernan is given, which shows that the main character of this story is not the bewildered narrator, but the clearly delusional scientist with a possible god complex.

2. At no point did I find any major grammatical errors, which suggests to me that you worked on this for quite a long time before releasing it.

3. The descriptions used give just enough detail for me to form an image in my head, as well as create an unsettling atmosphere, but not so much detail as to ruin the immersion.

4. ''"Only a shred of my conscious remained, and it refused the madness I drowned in." ''I cannot even come close to describing how this one line made me feel, and unless I were able to show you my mind, I don't think I'll ever be able to describe it.

5. The pacing was perfect. At no point did I feel as if the story needed to progress at a faster pace, or as if it needed to slow down. Because of this, I felt no in inclination to skim over any parts of the story.

I loved this entire story, and I think you should publish it.

10/10