Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26114676-20150320213930/@comment-26017819-20150320223138

it's really not that bad. The ending was a bit of a surprise. How do the strange mentally unbalanced identify him/her outside of their home or practice? that's me being a little detail-picky. What do you do with their stoies, do you become one of them? these are directions you could take it, but all-in-all, it's by far not the worst I've read.