Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24962525-20140522051052/@comment-24962525-20140523035850

Johnathen stuart wrote: "Later that day the police find that she was killing herself they take her to crazy room where people try to kill himself or killing others. After checking on her the police was shock that she was dead."

Tell me crystal... did you review your story before submitting it? Or do you simply not understand the use of proper grammar? I did read it myself and I have my friend helping me with English just fyi my English is poor and its not my frist language but thanks for rating tho