Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140910203423/@comment-24996913-20140912184432

I appreciate your honesty. I did write this a lot quicker than I usually do, so I can understand what you're saying about it feeling rushed. I kind of thought making him sane one moment and insane the next would capitalize on how passionate he was about tattoos with meaning. I do agree that it may be idiotic of him to wait for the girl to leave after getting her tattoo, but I think I'll add something so that it seems less chaotic with reality. I'll also fix that repeated sentence, as I also felt it was unnecessary, but I second guess myself regularly. Thanks for the suggestions :)