Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36516240-20180829161047/@comment-36516240-20180829163506

EmpyrealInvective wrote: I'm sorry, but there really isn't a lot of plot here. What plot there is on the video is pretty generic (OC vehicle is abused, murders, mutilates themselves, etc.) and the text repeats a lot of the errors present in your other stories (improper capitalization, punctuation, typos, awkward wording, and a rushed plot that feels more like the cliff notes than an actual complete story) that were deleted for being below quality standards.

I would suggest using a word doc to write out your story so you can spend some time working on the plot and correct all the mechanical and plot issues throughout the story.

well i don't know who created this video, its not a creepypasta or something, I just wanted to post this video to people to see. there is no thing to explain here.