Talk:Faint Giggles/@comment-5733573-20180605023637

I like this. I think it could be even better if you expanded it with some more description and dialogue, specifically in the scene where the narrator wakes up. It would also be nice to have more of the dream beyond just the image of the clown and the sounds. Maybe the clown could do something extra unsettling? In any case, it's an enjoyable first pasta. I'm excited to see how your talents develop.