Talk:Notices/@comment-24561482-20140227004059

I liked this pasta. Grammar and punctuation - 10/10 Plausibility - 10/10 Creepiness - 7/10

This story didn't make me cringe while reading, but it didn't quite reach the level of creepiness that I would expect from a CreepyPasta. It has an original concept, that I wouldn't think of myself, but sadly, I wasn't satisfied. A for effort. :-)