Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25196212-20140723003632/@comment-25148755-20140723012053

No one cares that it's your first pasta. I'm not saying that to be mean, I'm saying it because it's the truth. However, I'll give you a 'thataboy' for taking the time out of your day to put words to computer screen since its a rarer thing in the age of video games and Netflix.

There is no way what you have here won't get deleted by the mods. If you want a more detailed breakdown of what's wrong with it, we'd be more than happy to give it to you, but it isn't going to be an easy fix.