Talk:The World Belongs to Him/@comment-24313563-20140924125706/@comment-5239282-20140927160604

Thanks a lot. Do you think it was because of the story's sentence structure and pacing? That's been a bane of mine; I think a lot of my writing suffers from lingering too much on a paragraph. I often comb through my older stories from time to time and slim them down, but it's often too little, too late.

That said, an 8.5 is much more than I would ask for. Thank you. x_x