Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20180317200228/@comment-32764586-20180317210610

So I actually really did like this. You tend to overuse commas a lot, but that's okay. As for the story I really enjoyed it. It like a little action in my horror story and this gave me a huge thrill. This may be my personal opinion, but after you clean this up I'd consider this trilogy to be better than mine. Great job on this Bloody!!!