User blog comment:BrianBerta/Poll on bad creepypastas/@comment-26027963-20150426203320/@comment-24466828-20150426203610

I'm not the biggest fan of Squidward's suicide. It uses children as plot devices and the gore in unnecesary. Also, it's cliched.

Laughing Jack isn't as bad because the mother is a good chharacter but that's really my nly praise for the story. The rest is just clches, unnecesary characters and gore, and plotholes.