Talk:NES Godzilla Creepypasta/@comment-5929965-20150911023608

Even if drawn out, I like the world-building that occurs as Zach plays the game, and learning of its anomalies. I haven't heard of the game up until discovering this pasta, but I can imagine it being a good cover of the original beneath the changes.The build-up paid off, although the Christian refs and Melissa's sudden involvement towards the end sorta ruined it for me. Although I did find Red to be a very menacing character.

Speaking of Melissa, I wish she wasn't introduced like she was; being mentioned midway and somewhat slapped on. It would have been nice for the author to establish their relationship earlier on. Or maybe if the implications of Red haunting her were implied earlier on.

I'm not sure about anybody else, but I considered Solomon's victory screen light comical relief.

I just don't understand why Zach would put that game on Ebay for some poor soul to purchase. Wouldn't it be better to just destroy it if it were that dangerous? And if you couldn't maybe just keep it in a box somewhere? If his actions were to ensure a sequel, there are more logical ways for the game to be played through again.

But regardless of the flaws, I found it a fair read. I'll give the author credit for the effort, especially in the screenshots. I hope that he'll reocognize the flaws so they don't repeat in Replay, if they haven't already.

I give this pasta a 6/10.