User blog comment:ShawnCognitionCP/Anti-Cliche Creepypasta Contest/@comment-28938497-20150513222941/@comment-27007772-20150602030833

Very, very sorry. I had fallen into a very busy schedule and had to help some things around my life for a while. It was unprofessional of me to ignore a contest in which I had started, especially without making an announcement to you all. I apologize for any disturbance.

The story was well balanced in writing and detail, with some parts getting a bit over descriptive. Some parts seemed to zone out a bit (end description), but that fits very well into the category of a Lovecraftian story.

Grammar and concept were both on the point they needed to be, and your writing style boosted it to the point of a fun read.

7.5/10

Good enough to surpass the contest and be entered to the site, in my opinion.