Talk:Out in the Woods/@comment-25026735-20140804024642

I went back to read the story after reading the reviews, to see if I missed something. It didn't scare me or make my skin crawl like many pastas have. It is well written, but it left me wanting more. How did all this begin? Does it happen to all the maternal females? I can deal with something that never ends, but I've gotta have a start and a middle. I didn't have either with this story.