Talk:Contrition/@comment-38239143-20190821152757

I'm currently reading PoTM nominees, this is the first one I've read and i must say, a great start. This story is quite interesting, very disturbing, but it isn't like creepypastas that use big words just to sound smart and trick you into thinking they're SpOOpy. This story uses descriptive wording correctly and actually manages to make you fear for what might happen to the poor girl. A great read!