Talk:The Russian Sleep Experiment/@comment-24893144-20140502163150

Great story. I actually stumbled across this thinking that it was an actual documented experiement. (Not knowing anything about what creepy pasta is before today.) Given the historical backdrop and the fact that similar types of experiementation was being conducted by the US government around that time it is conceivable that this could have happened.

It totally had me until the "what are you" paragraph. That part ruined it. Up until that point the story had a very matter-of-fact documented feel. Then it became a storytelling narration. On top of this, the subject's calculated and intelligent response to the doctor's question is very much out of character for someone who is in a totally demented and crazed state

If it the story had kept a consistent voice and omitted the moralistic ending, I might have left the page only partially skeptical, but still believing that this experiement had actually taken place.