Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44482918-20200205003216/@comment-24101790-20200205003521

There are widespread capitalization (failure to properly capitalize sentences and randomly mis-capitalizing words), punctuation (punctuation missing from almost every sentence), spacing (failure to properly space after the rare instances where you do use punctuation), awkward wording, run-on sentences, and plot issues (the plot is extremely rushed, overuses cliches common in this genre, and the descriptive elements of the plot need fleshing out) which resulted in your story failing to meet our quality standards.