Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27838637-20160727122520/@comment-28266772-20160801084035

That's cool man - and it's hard for me to say. I'll try to offer specific suggestions when you get the rest of your story up. I guess scariness is so subjective it's hard to say. But once your story is up I'll get some feedback to you in 24hrs.

Also if you are free I'd appreciate some feedback on my story the witch & the fatso. You don't need to give in-depth feedback--Jay ten helped a lot by offering a proof read--but even just one paragraph summarizing your feelings on it. Word of warning though - the witch story is pretty out there.