Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25558572-20140521050022/@comment-24821182-20140521050342

If the story ends up being clichéd, it won't be because of things you've listed. It sounds like you could take these elements and write a good story, and I think you should give it a try.

You can post it here on the Writer's Workshop when you're done, and I'll take a look at it.