Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26287994-20150914153430/@comment-26287994-20150915153124

i fixed what you stated and lots you didnt mention but i want to see what other people think thank you very much if there are any more errors tell me and what do u think of the story line itsself i added 4 more pages, 2 doctors notes, lots more info to anser most questions so if anymore reviews there that would be helpful