Talk:Necrosleep/@comment-25361316-20150123231934

That was SUPER good. Really nice build. I think the only thing I would've changed were the blatant satanic references, the goat's head and the doctor's name being Hail A. Stan and all that. I think it would've been scarier if there were no direct occult references at all and the story just left you to wonder where these horrible pills had come from in the first place. It also started to remind me a little too much of the famous Pasta "Psychosis" near the end. But overall I really loved it-very unnerving and written in a highly convincing voice.