Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31584402-20170331163853/@comment-24101790-20170331165150

I'd suggest looking over the cliches page as this hits a lot of tropes which makes the story pretty generic like the 'feeling you're being watch', 'the monster is telling the story', and the 'turn around ending'. There really isn't any build-up or effective description to sell the story either. This would likely be deleted if it were posted.