Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32764586-20180429035333/@comment-32764586-20180429130002

Kolpik wrote: And Bloody strikes again! LOL! You're getting plenty of review for your money on this story Icydice. Plenty to work with. Good luck on the story. I'd love to reread it when it's on the site. I added some of the suggestions by both you guys. Any further suggestions?