Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20170819212316/@comment-4893169-20170824195730

''Raidra wrote--You're certainly welcome. :-) The older (pre-2000s) sitcoms are the best because a lot of them actually remembered to be funny and have good writing. Luckily there are channels that rerun them. I recently watched an episode of Night Court while waiting for my pizza in a restaurant, so that was good. I don't know what that episode of The Drew Carey Show was called, but it was the one in which everyone but Drew and Mimi got invitations to a party.

I agree that it would make more sense. You'd just need to change the opening a little (like saying, "At least the others had ceased those pitiful mewling noises," or something to that effect).''

Well, I'll look up the name just as soon as I get enough free time to myself. I'm going to go with your suggestion and change the opening line. Thank you again for the editing advice. Really appreciate the help.