Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444401-20150715024759/@comment-24190515-20150715144219

I like it. There are a few punctuation and sentence structure issues that I would change, but overall it's good.

All of the stories from you that I have read up until have been overtly fictional. This one came from someplace else. It's obviously told from the heart. I'd love to see more like it. You're really coming into your own as an author.

2 thumbs up!