Talk:Dark Woods Demon/@comment-24927388-20140522230420

This was a pretty good pasta. For some reason it reminds me of Evil Dead and I have no idea why. But I thoroughly enjoyed this. I thought the part with the deer in the pasture was a little unrealistic. I wouldnt think anybody running in fear for their life would stop to bag a deer, but this guy bein the bad ass hunter he is I brushed that off. Also the part with the log I was thinking it would take a while to clear it out of the way, and wondering why the creature didnt take its chance while Jacob waited for kenny, or when they were preoccupied with cutting the log up. Once again I brushed that off as maybe the creature didnt want to kill either of them just torment them, and what better way to torment than to know somethings out there waiting but staying unseen. 8/10