Talk:Bloodied Trees and Bright Lights/@comment-27142711-20160720133038/@comment-29203990-20160720145253

Thank you for your critique. Yes, I have to agree with you on the characters. While the main character I have no issue with, I feel like Matthias and the Shadow Man (name in progress) are both pulling the story down. I have a few ideas in how to deal with this, but it will take a lot of writing and adding more scenes. I just worry that the creepypasta will become a bit too long and that exploring the mythos would bore the hell out of the reader.

However, I will try to make as interesting as possible in the future.

Thank you again.