Talk:Ocean Underground/@comment-25052433-20150701053607

This was a fun read and a very interesting story. I idea of a mysterious ocean just popping up in someone's back yard is a very original idea that certainly has a nice creepy touch. The main character's slow slide into madness delivered a nice slow burn or suspense, and the ending left a satisfying chill.

This was a great pasta, and it flows very well with a nice pace and tempo. It's a bit long, but it was easy to read quickly because it keeps the reader wanting more.

Great job on this one! Well done.