Talk:Virtual Slayer of Pennsylvania/@comment-26241695-20150527154733

Okay..so..you obviously know what you're talking about. Your grammar and word choice is perfect, and I can tell that you were really, really trying to make this type of story work. It just..it never will. It will never be scary, because it's been abused so many times. 10/10 for effort, but for that actual story, i'd have to go with a 4/10. Sorry.