Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26981815-20160126064453

As you *might* know, I'm all ears for any suggestions for my creepypastas (or creepypasta, to be precise). And when I get a suggestion, I come here to get feedback on it to see if it's worth implementing.

So, someone suggested that I change the ending of The Ghost With Red Pupils. Their idea is that (WARNING: SPOILER. If you haven't read the pasta, then go read it before reading on), instead of the girl appearing in the end holding Tobias' decapitated head, I should instead turn Tobias into a pale, red pupilled ghost. They reckon it's more of a shocker.

So, what do you think? Should I change the ending?

(I won't change the ending unless I have at least, say, 70-75% positive reviews on this idea of at least 10 comments.)

Thanks. 