Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30771515-20170115014935/@comment-31020499-20170117183602

Too many beats in: It is said that if he shows you / You have no choice but to watch .

Maybe: 'Tis said if he shows you / No choice but to watch

da dum da da da da / da dum da da dum

I don't mean too rigidly following a rhyme scheme. Like a song that breaks it's own rules to reach a climax towards the end...and the chorus adds extra notes.... we get to change the beat at times. Also please spell Jehova with an H: Jehovah. The beings I speak with say you're referring to Pandora's Box (it unleashes a pandemic of small pox, they tell me.) See French artist, Odilon Redon's 'Pandora'.

PS: Last week was blocked from Cryptid Wiki for "adding nonsense & gibberish" to a page... I had politely added a heading "Psychic Identification" followed by what I know (from my Spirit Guides) about the Mongolian Death Worm. My entry now removed. So far my comment re Indrid Cold in Obscure Urban Legends Wiki is still there. Many people use fiction to share their truths & thus avoid censure by skeptics.