Talk:Unheard Messages/@comment-24996913-20141004210416

I sort of like how rushed the story is. I think it's fitting for the rushed sense you feel while reading it and as the messages progress quickly into a panic. I enjoyed this read, and I think you've done a good job with the prose and descriptive work. The only reason I tagged this weird was because I can't think of anything else it categorizes as, so don't take offense.