Thread:TheKillerCat/@comment-10950063-20140224195341/@comment-4832646-20140224220821

TheKillerCat wrote: And what if Smiling Lou is already there in a new story, and the story is about how he is acting and dealing with the different people. So not a story how he became who he is, just a story like his adventures or somethin like that....like a day in his life or somethin, if you know what I mean. Cause I worked long to get to Smiling Lou and I couldnt think of an other, good pasta character. It would not work. The problems lie in the character.

Imagine something you truly fear. Not Jeff, not something obviously non existant, but something that could be real, and then emphasize that fear. That's one simple, but not completely instructable, method for a story.

Read some of the Suggested Reading pastas to learn what makes a pasta decent. The four I linked are all from that category. Then think of an original idea and use description and literary devices. Also, correct your grammar. As Guy said, have a friend help you.