Talk:Blobster/@comment-25569708-20160708193956/@comment-26475800-20160731221039

Those were all good points and I'm glad you pointed those out. I'm also glad that you enjoyed the story as a whole. I am going to do a full re-write on this when I get some time to do it. I have a hard time with getting onto these sites and even time to write lately. I work a full time job and when I get home, I have two young ones that I have to watch. My wife has been traveling a lot lately and that doesn't give me much time outside of work and kids.

But thanks again for the feedback.