Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27007772-20150202184506

(In Torment will be a story that messes with time. Expect a lot of scenes that won't make sense until the end of the story. Also, In Torment will be released along side a sequel story, as In Torment is more of a set up for a large horror series than a horror story itself. It will have horror, though. This first teaser will give you an idea of the writing style of the story)

-Preview 1: Intro Teaser-

Freezing rain and snow blew in the strong winter wind, through the thick of Cook Forest State Park. Trees, lacking all leaves, moved and swayed with the wind, as the snow and freezing rain pushed forward. The cold elements started to reflect the light polution of a small town, Marienville, as they began to brush up against a white, seemingly 1950's era home. The snow and rain were halted, but the chilled wind carried on through the cracks in the window frame.

The chill pushed its way into the bedroom of Jackson Wilkerson, as he pulled the blankets even higher to his ears for warmth. While his eyes were closed, Jackson began to hear a creaking noise in his darkened room- his door.

The creaking sound of walking came into his room. It sounded like to many footsteps to be a normal person. The lights flicked on just as he opened his eyes. It took a few seconds, but his eyes adjusted. There stood Natalie Sutton and Joseph Kaufman, long term friends of Jackson's.

"Wake up, lazy bastard. Just because school's canceled doesn't mean you get to sleep until 4pm." said Joseph, stepping closer to Jackson's bed. With a comical sigh, he stood up slowly from his bed, stretching out his back the second he stood up. He was fully clothed, exlcuding a shirt. Joseph tossed him one he had laying on the computer desk to the side of his room, and he caught it, throwing it on right away.

With slightly dropped eyelids, Jackson spoke up. "I should probably catch a shower before we go anywhere."

Natalie cocked her head to this. "As if not showering ever stopped you before. Come on, you promised we would get outside today, and Joseph and I waited for like, 15 minutes outside your door. It's not even noon yet" she exclaimed.

Jackson stared forward for a second, before walking forward adn grabbing his hoodie that he had hanging on his door, and putting it on.

"Fine. Let's go, then" he responded, more annoyed.

The trio walked down the stairs to the livng room, and opened the front door to leave. As the door opened, it allowed a small gust of freezing wind to brush agains them. Joseph gave a small shiver before allowing a small laughter to escape him. They closed the door behind him, and started walking down the main, cement road.

Jackson took a breath of the fresh, chilling air. "So, what's the plan, were are we going?" He questioned.

"I guess we could go down to Natalie's place." Joseph answered. 