Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27070566-20160825152626/@comment-27070566-20160827224922

ChristianWallis notes taken. Thank you for your kind advices. As i said this was my first try. With holder pastas being blacklisted i might give a shot at another type of ritual pasta or just a creepy pasta. This kind of story wasn't really on my taste ( as i was forced to keep it short ). I will try something that will allow me to expand on details and possibly the weird wording will get fixed. Even though i said this wasn't on my taste, i tried it to see if i could convey spooks in a short story with little detail to it. 

Again, thanks for your help! And i will do my best to make the most of it.