Talk:Death the Kid/@comment-25833700-20150126173014

The plot is good, but it lack descrption.There's no back story on the killer or any reason why he's killing. You really have something with the story, but overall it's flat, the characters have no personality either. Don't worry though, you can't please everyone and it makes for a good rough draft. Keeping working, you can't write a masterpiece overnight.