Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25891880-20150121210034/@comment-5321651-20150123034953

There are multiple cases of you using the same implication twice in a sentece using different words:

"I wasn't that interested in camping much"

"I don't think I've ever had so much fun as a kid back then"

And then there are some sentences that just don't make any sense:

"After that camping trip, we went to a lot more of them every year, but not until two years ago. "

If you publish it as is, I am almost certain it will be deleted.