Talk:The Number of Darkness/@comment-25024572-20150715151041

The last time I read a story involving lesbian incest, it also involved masochism and MLP. (Seriously) It was awful.

This story, however, like most of your stories, is great. The journal entry format is used pretty well here, especially during the ending (In fact, I wonder if the only reason the journal entry format was used was for the ending). The writing and vocabulary in the story seems authentic, like something someone from that time would say. Definite kudos there.

The characters all feel real to an extent (though, I will admit, when the Reverend first came and started arguing, the only thing going through my head was, "Huh. This must be how it feels for someone who's read the Bible to argue with people who use the Bible to say homosexuality is bad.") which is always a good thing.

Really, there's nothing really bad I can say about this story. All I can really do is exact praise and make witty (ish) comments.