Talk:Lost Episodes/@comment-26054278-20150221225325/@comment-26144761-20150226095734

I get what your saying but it is super subjective, for example...

"Somewhere out there, this chubby Star Wars nerd from our highschool has all three original films flawlessly cut together, with edited-in effects that would've made George Lucas himself cry out: 'Enough meddling!!'

We charged him like twenty dollars for the only copy, because we were idiots."

This for me was to show by that time Sid was already a master at what he does but at the time they were still innocent little kids who would sell such a masterpiece for just 20 dollars. This gave me an idea of the situation before it got so much worse.



"He just kept drawing as I stood there. The silence was disturbing, and in that moment I could smell the B.O. coming off of him. It wasn't just sweat, either. It was a mingling of that and a foul ass and piss-soaked cloth."

This paints quite a vivid picture of the obsession, to a point where he doesnt even wash anymore. Showing that he had already lost his mind.





And surely, the note on the door was left by Sid himself so noone would break in??? or notice that they were missing?? thats what I thought anyway.

Lastly, your point about the twist not working in reality... I think you would struggle to find a twist that actually works in real life on this site? Then again may be I am wrong.



Anyway tho I get what you mean tho, but I do like this story, its original.





