Talk:Anna5788/@comment-28423057-20160626043016

It was good up until the ridiculous logic at the end. He's just going to accept this as fact and kill himself in his prime instead of oh, I don't know, NOT STRANGLING ANNA?

Suicide is ultimately one of the most cowardly and selfish things somebody can do. The only thing he changed is who got hurt. His GF might leave him (though that knowledge might actually let him know she's unhappy, and take steps to find out and, if possible, fix the problems in their relationship), but as far as we know right now she still loves him, and will probably be devastated. Not to mention his other friends, surviving members of his family, and so on.

3/10. Most of it is well written and paced, but the ending was terrible. It felt very rushed and poorly thought out.