Talk:The Ninth Child and the Starving Ghost/@comment-5733573-20180626162511

This was brilliant! There wasn't a moment I didn't love. The plot and characters are on point and the ending is absolutely devastating.

Grammar and typos were an issue throughout, but these can be fixed with proofreaing. Just remember to carefully look over your next story.

I just found this so wonderful and delicious (no pun intended).