Talk:Abandoned by Disney/@comment-25372245-20140921085749

This was an interesting and remarkably developed piece but I felt it needed more desturbing elements. Even while he was exploring it read like a history book for me up until the Mascot Area which however at the same time is where it started to feel less believable, it developed the atmosphere of a Goosebumps book if anyone remembers those (I loved them in the third grade). If you don't know them, it's a children's horror series because of which the fiction is quite far'fetched.

Most of that was how the Mickey costume was inverted, apart from being impossible (why would they manufacture such a Mickey costume?) something about that was a bit awkward. Now had it come out inverted in the positive of his photograph that would have been much better. Though of course he had to lose the film or the author would've obligated himself to include at least a few of the photographs here and either he didn't feel like photoshopping them or doesn't have the skill. The costume coming to life was another element, very "Night of the Living Dummy" which is a book in the Goosebumps series or actually probably more so Chucky.

Something I did like was the human skull in the costume head. He should have done more with that, made it more of a central element.

Overall 3/5 stars, the third star only granted for how well thought out and written it is.