Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10502460-20180328021546/@comment-34823985-20180330050448

I should have said before that I do like this story. It's a cool idea, and the story works as it is. I'm still a bit uncomfortable commenting on people's stories. I want feedback on my stuff, so I feel the need to reciprocate. If you agree the ending needs some work then by all means make some revisions, but if you're happy with it then that's that. Either way I'll check it out when it's on the site.