Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32764586-20180217215030/@comment-32764586-20180218042351

Umbrello wrote: I was really getting into it and then it became a "to be continued" type thing which was a let down. I don't think you should save the doctor for part 3 if that's what you're planning. It's like if in The Empire Strikes Back, Luke says, "Now, to find Darth Vadar!" and then the credits roll.

The writing is great so I wouldn't worry about that. There were a few odd things I noticed but nothing major (I forget what they are now... sorry!) Also, very few errors. Just a couple typos. Again, I forget what they are lol. It's late! Sue me!

Funny, that was exactly what I thought it to be. I remembered everyone liking that movie though. Sorry if it's a bit of a let down, but I'm prob gonna go with it. Part three will be longer and involve a lot more story now that the characters are established. I'll look over the writing a few more times and perfect it. This is gonna be epic umbrellBRO!