Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24841732-20140902172613/@comment-25170312-20140902195818

Very well written, creepy, and sad. I can't really think of anything that would need improvement. I'm a little curious if the door shut by accident or if there's some hidden reason. I was also a little confused as to when it takes place, because I was wondering if the technology of that kind of door mechanism was available at the time. But by the end I didn't care about those things, since everything else was solid.