Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27246594-20151119020222/@comment-27039545-20151119175448

Okay, I'll speak up, and I'll be blunt.

The Pasta itself, at this moment, isn't that scary, the grammar could be better, and the paragraph arrangement isn't too amazing. An introduction would be a nice touch as well, but not necessary for all Pastas. A better name might also be a good idea, but, again, not necessary.

I'm assuming this isn't done, so this is all I can say at the given time.

Have a pleasant day,

-Bladeclus