Talk:Milkers/@comment-6862307-20140117142125

(Spoiler warning, just in case you are scrolling down on accident or checking the comments early for whatever reason.)

Is it odd that I actually sort of guessed what the "milkers" were early? I had the thought simply when he was asked about his secret for making such tasty milk. But that didn't necessarily damage the story none. I don't think this is going to be one of my favourites, but I still enjoyed it and it was genuinely disturbing - even if I wasn't as shocked at the reveal of the milkers as some may have been. I like the ambiguity of the ending though and your writing is incredibly solid. My main gripes are personal nitpicks, mainly that I kind of wish these NSFW pastas almost always have to include rape whenever women are involved. I kind of have issues with that subject in general, and so I guess it bugs me that its such a common thing now - but I don't want you to think I'm railing against you personally for using it. Even though it's a shaky subject with me, in order to really get me upset and in a tizzy over it is if for whatever reason I get the impression that the author is trivializing it and using it as their only weapon for shock value. But I'm starting to go on a rambling tangent. The story was good, I can't say I liked it as much as some did but nonetheless the solid writing and disturbing content still left an impact.

7.5/10