Talk:The Moon Children/@comment-25477067-20160202163149/@comment-26325410-20160216175400

Hello http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:SOURCECODE01 ,

This is the author of the story here, on a different account. I'm sorry I couldn't get back to you sooner. I was blocked for vandalism (it's my old account and I forgot that if I didn't specify what I was doing, they would assume I was trying to vandalise it).

I want to first say that appreciate your review, but keep in mind I wrote this story when I was eleven. Of course it's going to be unsatisfying. In fact, I thought this myself and was actually trying to re-write it when I got banned.

About the poem - it's a shame you felt like this, but this was purely off my own head. I clearly didn't feel like I'd rhymed myself into a corner at the time, but I can see where you're coming from; I'll take your advice and change the format.

If I'm honest, I do struggle with such frank constructive critism, but I know you're only giving me advice and I appreciate that.

Much thanks,

MockingBound (talk) 17:54, February 16, 2016 (UTC) Mockingbound MockingBound (talk) 17:54, February 16, 2016 (UTC) (formerly MockingBound (talk) 17:54, February 16, 2016 (UTC) Silverie MockingBound (talk) 17:54, February 16, 2016 (UTC))