Talk:Hung, Drawn and Quartered/@comment-10789912-20160921141831

Excellent use of the first cliche, "teenagers summon a demon". This was a rather straightforward cliche that led to many equally cliche plots (Ouija boards, a mockingly-done ritual, things of that nature) that we have all seen a thousand times over. You, instead, used it in a more interesting manner.

The writing style was very nice, and very slim on actual dialogue. Certain parts reflected the classic writing styles of Tolkien or Lovecraft, for instance- especially with the method of wording things. I very much enjoyed that.

Though the plot was simplistic, the spotlight really does land on the effective and great writing behind it. As far as a story itself goes, it wasn't exactly creepy or scary, but as far as a demo of your writing skills? It was excellent.

7.5/10