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My current outline for a creepy pasta outline, what do you guys think? (BTW I'm new, if this is the incorrect area for this post, please redirect me to the correct spot.

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 SETTING/PLOT: A military base in southeastern South Dakota. Present day, (July 14, 2015) A young recruit barely half way through basic face a unnatural seemingly malevolent creature.One by one his fellow recruits are killed or go missing. Story told through a letter written as the last survivor, to his girlfriend explaining the events, discovered near an unrecognizable corpse and a tall bipedal human like beast, also dead from several dozen bullet and even stab wounds. Spaced between the story as breaks are military reports of similar events in various locations all over the world as well as scientific reports on the beasts anatomy. A single paragraph epilogue told through the beasts POV.

 CREATURE: tall thin solid black humanoid, so black it looks more like empty space. Burning lavender eyes, and no other facial features. slightly taller than human, 7 feet tall. thin lithe figure almost like a jungle cat. Impossibly fast, but not teleporting. more innocent, and kills the same reason a toddler might break his toys, out of sick curiosity. Known as the “Beast” or “the shadow” in text. “Ignotus Metus Bestia” Scientifically (Unknown Fear Beast)

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