Talk:Tobit: The Lady and the Maiden of Knowledge/@comment-26326346-20151124072929

-SPOILERS and speculation that may be spoilers-

This was a great entry. I was really taken by the characters, especially Al, what a bro. I feel like it was brave to do a dream world concept like you chose to do, but you pulled it off marvelously.

The next entry is certainly going to be interesting because everything has come together. I'm guessing that the magic word is "please" XD

Alright, I should have enough text typed out now so that the following spoiler won't appear in the recent activity feed. While I'm guessing that you have some great plans for Tabitha, I have to say that I was disappointed that they left her alive. I felt that Al should have killed her as she'll only be a threat to Soka (and everyone) later on. I guess that maybe since Al is Soka's courage and strength, it wouldn't kill Tabitha because she was real (Soka wouldn't kill anyone), was that your reasoning?

It's just a minor gripe and I feel that you probably have some way of explaining it that makes sense to me.

Really great story as always and I can't wait to see who the leader is (I'm banking on Pinkerton, that'd be shocking as hell and would put him in a whole new light. Haven't really got to see any backstory on him as far as I remember and I'm betting there is a significant story-related reason as to why).

Hey Banning, you had two more Tobits planned, right?