Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30157838-20161007215711/@comment-30157838-20161016213943

I ran your edits through, apologies for the time it took. With your approval, I'll happily post it under the collaboration.

I believe I can also offer up the introduction (and perhaps the first 'chapter,' so to speak,) to my longer story for your perusal, I'd be very interested in seeing if the idea intrigues others as much as it does me. Up to you, but I assumed it would be an offer you might be interested in.

Thank you for the help, again.