Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33530808-20140821212024

Okay, everyone I just wanted to say that this I doubt will be that good, but here ya go. I'm looking for feedback and also if an admin and do the thing to let me post it.

 The Light came weakly from the horizon…. The cycle had begun. The Light started brightening up my world, but the angels of death quickly dispersed its loving embrace. The beautiful landscape outside my window grew dark and cold. The cycle had just begun and I already longed for the Light. I sat and watched the chaos outside for hours….. The cycle had ended and the demons returned to their perches. As usual I felt the Frost running through my veins to my heart whispering promises of eternal peace….. at a cost…

 Death’s Lullaby.

 I have had enough! I Could no longer take the eternal torture of the lullaby! I took a knife and cut deep into my arms and legs, I took needles and shoved them through my skin, trying to remove the frost from my bloodstream. I had given up. The cold melody stayed with me another night. I had nightmares of demons feasting on the open wounds that I had left for them.

 I woke up for another cycle to find that it was no nightmare. The demons had ripped the flesh off of my arms in the night. I did not care anymore. I decided to break the law and venture from my dwelling, to find a speck of light untouched! I ran to it. I stood a breath’s width away just admiring it. I reached for the light, just as an angel of death destroyed it,  beat me for my harsh offense, and sent me back to my dwelling. Angry with myself, I grabbed a blade from the kitchen, Death’s Lullaby propelling itself through my body, shrieking its melody in a harsh tone. I realized cutting my wrists would do nothing to help me…….. I slowly raised the blade to my neck, and drew it across my skin. As the blood dripped down my body,  I realized that my blood was once again warm.

 With my last breaths i felt the calming embrace promised by:

Death’s Lullaby  