Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20180622074808/@comment-26444017-20180622113844

Thanks a ton. I really wasn't sure about this one, but I'm glad to see positive response.

I will definitely go back through and italicize. I agree, it probably will make it much easier to distinguish.

I like the idea of the narrator winding up on the news himself. The story being told from his point of view may make that idea difficult to execute, but it's on the table no doubt.

Oh, and as for the character feeling real, it may be because a lot of this is based around what I actually do for a living and where i actually work. If it feels real, then I can't really complain.