Talk:Hymn of the Night/@comment-35273729-20180425163058

I fixed some of the errors, however I was greatly disappointed in the plot and story. What was the problem? Why were the children there? Who were the children? Who was the main character? What role did the creepy guy in the beginning play? What role did the dazed woman play? What was the main character? Why did the children arrive? Also, nothing adds up in the story. It was very confusing, not scary, and so strange to the point where it annoyed me. As I was fixing grammatical errors, I found that it was poorly written, to the point where I couldn't edit it to be at least presentable. The main character is hateable, and it's just so...bad! I'm sorry, but I just don't know how I could ever enjoy something like this. I rate it 1/10.