Talk:Stairs/@comment-26054278-20150424010701/@comment-26054278-20150424013120

Key word: "Reaches". I'm skeptical how much noise the simple act of reaching for something very slowly can draw. I can understand hearing the withdrawal of the gun, but when I reach for something, the noise usually comes from the act of actually pulling the item out or lifting it as opposed to reaching for it.

I understand what the author tries to do here, but for such a short pasta, specific details need to be right and nitpicking is key.