Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-34521278-20180130033808

I rather like this retelling of the Jeff The Killer story. It gives Jeff a little more motivation like his power complex given how his parents treated him. I've read the uncut version, and I rather prefer this one as it keeps the ages of Jeff and Liu up to interpretation so it doesn't seem to unrealistic. I also like the addition of Jeff boxing at one point, which would explain why he's so good at fighting. There were some continuity errors I found, (Jeff's last name being Wood not "Woods" and his parents being named Margret and Peter instead of Matt and Shelia.) however they don't change the quality of the story, I'm just nitpicky. I also enjoyed the backstory to Randy. It made him seem like a fleshed out character instead of a gun-toting stereotypical bully. I also liked how he didn't kill Liu in the end. Mostly because in the original, he really had no reason to as Liu went to juvy for him.

I kinda wish there was a little more backstory to Jeff in this version to give a little more insight about how he was as a child, I feel that would justify his murderous transition more. Overall I feel like this is a nice homage and improvement to the story. Keep up the good work, I'd love to read more of your writings! :3