Talk:The Cab/@comment-4620507-20131017223849

Plot: 9/10

This being a ritual pasta, there's not really much of a plot that's present in the pasta. However, I would have liked some sort of closure at the end- maybe a pattern recognized by the narrator, such as maybe before the end of the dream the cab driver turns around, and the person keeps on doing The Cab to find out the driver, and he/she ends up being the driver themselves? It's an unnerving plot- I'd just like to see more of that plot. 

Originality: 10/10

Just because it's a ritual pasta doesn't mean it can't deal with the unknown and creep you the fuck out.

Ending: 8/10

Okay, so people who perform The Cab don't report whether or not it's really a dream or not... creepy, yes, BUT THE SUBJECT OF THE STORY IS THE CAB ITSELF! NOT BLOG POSTERS THAT ARE INFERRED BY THE NARRATOR TO BE SO SCARED BY THE TRUTH OF THE CAB THAT THEY DON'T SHARE THEIR STUFF WITH OTHER SCARED BLOGGERS! The pasta opens up the dream that The Cab brings... maybe open it up a bit more? Please?

Writing: 10/10

Yes.

Overall Experience: 9/10

Apart from the ending, I can say that my jimmies are officially rustled.

Final score: 46/50

This ritual pasta is obviously one of the better ones out there that aren't afraid to take things beyond the "do this and you'll die" stuff.