Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20150223054547/@comment-25428589-20150223190224

What Natalo's said basically applies to the whole thing. There is a ridiculous number of grammar mistakes and the plot is confusing & bland due to its odd writing style. If you don't mind me asking, is English your native language? If not, what is? There are a variety of Creepypasta wikis in other languages and if you write in your own language you might be more successful.