Talk:Birdhouse/@comment-28494448-20160521225014

I too was confused by how the narrator did things to people that don't exist. I was glad to see your comment below explaining that a bit more. I think something as simple as adding in "I've told Tobias I've tried to get them to stop" somewhere in the second to last paragraph would spell that out a bit more and ot make readers sit there and wonder whose tires he actually slashed. I do like the tone of this story. The delusions the man suffer under are nothing fun and can be terrible to hear. And then the hint that maybe he isn't all that delusional at the end? That's what turns this from a sad story into something more horrifying.