Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9967354-20140523110415/@comment-24821182-20140523170828

I thought it was great, and I don't really have anything negative to say about it that hasn't been touched on already. I would have commented on the digressions, but then I realized they're intentional and meant to give us a better understand of the narrator, and they also deliver the story in a more genuine way than simply listing what happened chronologically.

It is very well-written, and I could imagine it possible getting PoTM. It's certainly better than what's on the menu this month.