Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20151104055425/@comment-25565206-20151104120657

I really liked it. The only thing I would say was maybe go into a little more detail about what all is done for the inspiration. A little more detail about the knives and acid baths, not to much just enough to get a good visual without over doing it with gory details. Being a music person I thought this was well done.