Talk:Eyeless Jack/@comment-24036107-20131010214506

Wow, I can't believe that this was supposed to be scary. Even as a story it's dumb. I'm not trying to be an... okay yeah. I'm being an ass because this is stupid and I don't like it. The build up is good but the ending is crap! The doctor just says. that his brother was killed by something. His body wouldn't be back in the fucking house. That one part made everything that the story was doing WORTHLESS! And he never said to his parents 'HEY! Ethan's fucking corpse is still here!'