Talk:Under the Endless Stairs/@comment-25306758-20140919021923

Fairly creepy 6.5/10. The way its presented seems a little awkward though. It doesn't always rhyme, which is OK if its a poem, but its written like a rhyming story. It shouldn't rhyme off and on. Instead I'd put a rhyming poem at the beginning as an intro, then write the rest as a story with no rhyming