Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25024572-20150406162649/@comment-26054278-20150408153901

Sorry this took me a while to get to.

Personally, I think this one is probably better than your last one. The concept is more original, and it is certainly very interesting. I'd say it deserves to be on the wiki. It isn't particularly scary in a fearful or intimidating way, but more so in a psychological way.

Other than that sentence that was already pointed out, I don't really know what else to change. I liked it.