Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33957951-20171215212855/@comment-33957951-20171217215303

I really appreciate the feedback, looking back on it, a lot of plot points don't make sense at all and I will be sure to rewrite those parts. This is my first time writing a story on here, and I did read a lot of the writing advice, however my punctuation is obviously sub-par and i'll be sure to fix it.

A few things though; when talking about the person at the front desk, I describe her as "Her head spun around in a circle on her neck time after time, as if she was a toy and someone had winded up a crank implanted on her back." Basically, I was trying to describe a women that has a head that is capable of turning 360 degrees around her neck. What can I do to make the wording less awkward?

When my story is completely fixed, should I post it back here again, or can I just re-upload it? From what I read it seemed that I would get banned if I attempted to do that. What is the correct way of going about this?