Talk:Laughing Jack/@comment-26376620-20150508021510

5/10. This story seemed to have a pretty okay set up at first, but as all creepypastas have this problem, for some stupid reason dead kids and organs exposed is supposed to be scary when really it's distasteful and a massively overused cliche. The writing can be pretty poor at times, and overall isn't a very good story. To all clamining it's "scary" and "a good story" need to go out and pick up a REAL book.