Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44781210-20200126141542/@comment-5306249-20200128203145

I dont feel too strong about the premise as it comes off more as a self-righteous villain monologue than another species I can empathize with. What exactly makes this Other better fit for the world than humans? How do they plan on so easily wiping out humanity when clearly they haven’t had much issue with them for some time now? Why didnt they do it before?

Theres truth to the reality of the scenario, but it doesn’t feel like theres much at stake. If there was a proper setting and characters to empathize/get to know, the premise would be more sound.