Talk:Humanity/@comment-25189687-20171012015338

More of a commentary than a creepy fic, but I actually kind of liked what you were doing with it. To those confused, the "mirror entity that watches you" was not the main monster. This did not have a main monster, it's not "Jeff The Killer" or "Slender". The story is about the idea that any nightmare entity of any kind is as true as the life we give to it. The references to insanity and the mirror are literary devices - they are telling us to be mindful of what's within our own heads and the nightmares that we can create.

Yes, there is a touch of cliche, and yes this idea could have been explained better. I also have to agree that "Sweet Dreams" was a weak ending. But I appreciate what you were trying to do with this one. It's a good potential idea that just needs a bit of polish. Don't give up, you have talent.