Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25847009-20150124160721

Wrote it a few months ago, please review

Have you ever hated someone so much that the only thing you want to do is to put them through misery and pain? If so, you have come to the right place. This curse was used on Japanese spies that went rogue in the ages of the samurai, and is still used by secret organizations today as a form of unnoticeable torture. The target will be plagued by misfortune, which could range from minor injuries all the way to deadly situations from which the subject cannot escape. This was also used by the Indians after the technique was discovered in the late 1800's. It is important not to speak about what you have done to anyone, otherwise the curse will have the opposite effect. This happens for reasons unknown, since its creation was originally used for wooden keys of that era but was modified by the aforementioned secret organizations in the late 1900's to affect metal keys.

To begin, you will need one of the subject's keys. You must make sure that it is not an important key, since important keys are easily missed by owners. You might have a hard time even getting close to your victim's keyring, but after you acquire this, you will need the following:  If you have the above mentioned, then follow the steps to begin the ritual:
 * Ash of a burnt down tree/log/sticks to capture a spirit.
 * A silver container to make sure that the spirit does not escape while it was captured.
 * A knife or sharp object to anger the spirit by stabbing it while captured.
 * Rice to make sure that the spirit can become more powerful and do more harm.
 * A pen and piece of paper to make sure that the spirit hits the right target.
 * Salt as a precaution, to pour around the silver container so, if the spirit escapes both the ash and silver container, this will provide you with enough time to complete the ritual if the spirit is a very strong one.
 * Water to lay the container in, maybe inside a sink or somewhere else, just as long as you can retrieve it again in a short amount of time.
 * 1) Pour the ash into your silver container and begin to pour the salt around the silver container, these are your 3 titanium walls, blocking the spirit trying to attack you.
 * 2) Now place the key inside the ash slowly.
 * 3) Chant, "I've got a treat for you," fifteen times.
 * 4) After 5 minutes, take your knife or sharp object and stab the ash, which is now the spirit's body, eight times, which will anger it and make it stronger.
 * 5) Now pour the rice into the silver container, this will cause the curse effects to become stronger.
 * 6) After pouring the rice, the spirit will be back in the container, if it could escape both the ash and silver container.
 * 7) Write your target's name on the piece of paper and drop it into the silver container.
 * 8) Go to your water source and let the container soak for thirty minutes, so you can give the spirit time to make the key its home.
 * 9) After the thirty minutes, you should take the key out of the container slowly and return it to where you found it.

Warning
If the target dies, the spirit will come for you, so cover all openings of your house with salt, otherwise you might see that same key appear in your house and you will die.

And Music:

  