Talk:I Don't Know What to Do/@comment-25052433-20140901091532

Much like an undesired divorce decree, so comes this review.

What went right:

-This was a good story. The twist was well played, as I honestly didn't see it coming until the bathtub scene. Well done.

-Your use of atmosphere and description played well into the husband's mental condition. You held back just enough information to keep me guessing until the end, when you delivered a very satisfying conclusion.

-Keeping it real. You did a good job with the realism here. Divorces and affairs can cause people to just go nuts. This played very well into the reality of what a broken family can become. Great job.

What should have been drowned in the tub:

-I'm either losing my touch, or these pastas are just getting better by the day. Seriously, I wouldn't change anything on this one. This was a short and sweet little dose of ill fated reality. For that, I thank you.

Overall, this was a good, solid little story. Excellent work.