Talk:Doors/@comment-2088880-20150716085316

On one hand, the twist fades into obviousness by the fourth paragraph. On the other hand, the narrative is still really well put together and the story is legitimately unsettling and heartrending.

Just one issue: Where'd this dog learn to speak English? It could refer to someone by name to get their affection, and its little girl only did "most" of the talking.