Talk:Venomous/@comment-PixCity-20161009023358/@comment-Anarchic Operations-20161021085801

This story was such a nightmare to write that I was almost letting a Taipan bite me just to end the pain, so any rating above a 5 makes me happy. In all seriousness it was a tough story to write because the kills were mainly based on luck. I think this rewrite was the most realistic, but even then I can see how it could be unrealistic in some parts. I also tried to make the story a little disjointed and unnatural so I'm happy to hear that you thought it was written well. As always, I thank you for the review and I look forward to hear more critiques from you in the future!