Talk:The Church in the Woods/@comment-26326346-20160525220945/@comment-26326346-20160527163233

It isn't noticeable that it is your first story which is a good sign since most first stories are bad. I don't have much love for my first story myself because it gives off a false impression of my current writing capabilities and there is so much that I'd do different if I had written it now. That's part of the beauty of writing though, we can always look back to where we started at and see how much we've improved.

I haven't read part 2 yet, but since this is all one overarching story that is going to connect in someway, I'd say it is okay that this part is a bit of a slow burner. A lot of good stories start out rather uneventful and slow afterall :)