User talk:Dorkpool/Archive 2

Archive
I archived your talk page. Don't worry, I'm just a more fabulous version of this piece of cancer. ;DDD Fabulous War Boy (talk) 16:57, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Spider-Reply" message
Yeah I'm still trying to figure out what happens in the actual episode in chapter 5 (All I know is that the episode will start out with a cold opening). I can send you the pasta via email or pastebin. I'm currently having it peer reviewed and maybe you could give your thoughts on it. I'll send you some ideas I have about the pasta via email.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 18:21, March 10, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 18:21, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

New Micro
I just wrote a micro. 300 words. It's a silly little thing but I thought you might want to read it. The Fearless Vampire Killing Brothers   HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 19:01, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Part 2 of the Rap Rat riff is almost done!
So... The second part of the Rap Rat story is way shorter than the last! Which made it a bit easier for me to work on. I will say that in this part, there was a lot more reference humor than the last part. I'll send the riff fragment to pastebin when it's done.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 23:05, March 10, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 23:05, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

My second riff part is done!
Ok so i'm going to send you the link to the second part of my riff via pastebin. Here's the link: http://pastebin.com/fuAhDkaw

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 00:25, March 11, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 00:25, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

New Riff Up Now!
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:TheAzumangaDaiohFan/Azu_Riffs:_Rap_Rat_%28Part_2%29_3/10/15

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 15:14, March 11, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 15:14, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

Micro pastas
I've been writing micro-pastas lately. If you want to check them out The Music Lover, The Fearless Vampire Killing Brothers, and The Dream. They're real short (duh- they're micro-pastas)  and kind of silly, but I think you might like them nonetheless. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 20:10, March 12, 2015 (UTC)

Hey! Can you take on Hetalia episode 23.5. I would like to see your opinion on it.

:)
HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 15:33, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Unsigned message
Just thought I would drop in and help with your issue. The person who left you the unsigned message is King Sombrysalis. MrDupin (talk) 16:35, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Your Icon
So... I see your a fan of Mystery Science Theater 3000! No way! So am I! One of my favorite episodes is where they riff a horror movie called The Screaming Skull. "Ah! The film broke and it was horrible!" Is one of my favorite lines in that episode.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 17:14, March 14, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 17:14, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Mystery Science" message
Yeah! I've been wanting to check out some more Mystery Science and Rifftrax stuff and I think free online footage of Rifftrax is hard to come by if you want to see an entire episode.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 22:25, March 14, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 22:25, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Rifftrax episodes" message
Ah! Thanks for the advice! Now I'll be able to watch Rifftrax for free! YAY!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 17:48, March 15, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 17:48, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Your art and photo shop and other stuff
Hey, buddy. Remember that first story I posted Clown Dogs? Well, I know you are really great with photo shop so I was wondering if you could take that dog clown image I have at the end (or maybe we could find another one, I even have a couple of dogs and I would dress them as clowns and send the pictures to you) and make a really iconic creepypasta image with it. You know, give it a grin and evil leering eyes. Wouldn't that be cool? On a more personal note, I hope I'm not invading your privacy with this question, but are you in the Navy? I picture you as a sailor out at sea in a Destroyer or something. It's so weird not knowing anything about all these users but knowing their personalities so well. If you ever want to message me privately I'm on skype as humboldtlycanthrope and I have a Facebook page under the same name. I also think Rumpelstiltskin is due a riff soon, but how your are going to get past that NSFW thing is beyond me. Check you later, bro. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 03:25, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Grand" message
Alright! I'll see them when I have a chance. In other news, I saw tge trailer to Eragon in theatres and I thought of an alternate title for the movie: "Lord of The Dragon Star Wars". I haven't read the books so I don't know how faithful the movie is to them. However, based on what you said about the movie, It's probably a bad adaptation.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 19:15, March 16, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 19:15, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Eragon" message
Well the one good thing about Last Airbender is that Toph, the blind earthbending girl, wasn't Shamalized!


 * Sees Legend of Korra movie where Toph is Shamalized*

Toph: Blah! Blah! Blah! Here Korra! Take this piggy of exposition. It will guide you on your journey where you'll face some really rudely bad guys of evilness. Also, drugs are bad, m'kay? They come from the evil dudes of rudley badness, m'kay?

Sokka: Boo! Go back to the Fire Nation! *Throws bun at the screen*

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 22:16, March 17, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 22:16, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Riff Stuff
It's sort of a dead art, so I wanna help fellow riffers when I can. Keep at it and try changing it up a bit each time 'til you find a way that works for ya.--Mikemacdee (talk) 02:17, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

RE: RE: Riff stuff
I've done crossovers before with Fan-Friction, so it's probably not out of the question. I just got a lot on my plate at the moment.--Mikemacdee (talk) 12:41, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Shamalamadingdong" message
Lol yeah he would! I really haven't been feeling good recently. I have a sore throat, stuffy nose, and sometimes it's hard for me to breath! Ugh! Hopefully I'll get better but I'll have to wait and see.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 15:24, March 20, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 15:24, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Sick" message
Thank you! I feel like it's not going away soon and It's really irritating me!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 22:07, March 20, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 22:07, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Heyyo
I'd prefer to give you my e-mail over skype. I hope you weren't too mean. I just wrote a new one for Koromo's mythology challenge. Sons of Odin  Catch you later. Oh- I'm interviewing Mike Mac Dee on Monday, can you think of anything I can ask him? He is officially my favorite writer on this wiki, by the way. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 19:27, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Did you get my skype?
HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 23:46, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Are you...
Stephen S. or is there another Dorkpool out there? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 23:49, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Not as good as The Long List
But still pretty fucking funny. So sorry you didn't make it into the Village People (I laughed my ass off when you said that by the way) HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 00:48, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Believe" message
Thank you! I'm starting to feel a little better compared to Thursday or Friday when I was extremely sick. I hope to finish my RapRat riff now that I'm back at my dad's house.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 21:58, March 22, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 21:58, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Improvement
The one you linked me already shows signs of being funnier and more readable -- it got me with the first line. However, you're turning these out at such a constant rate I'm starting to wonder if you do any editing at all, which is another, more important area for improvement. I spend at least two weeks editing an episode of Fan-Friction -- the adventure AND the riff separately -- and that's not including the time spent writing both in the first place. Before you make any new ones you ought to go back and improve the old ones. --Mikemacdee (talk) 23:31, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Quality over Quantity
This brings out my most fundamental values as a writer. "I never re-read what I write" is almost the antithesis of writing. Writing is absolutely not a field where you can "fire and forget" your work as often as possible. Proofreading and editing makes up 90% of the writing process, hence why it takes weeks if not months to polish a short story, and years to finish a novel. Slapping a project together, uploading it, and immediately forgetting about it is what typical creepypasta authors do, and it's exactly the reason their submissions get rejected from sites with any semblance of quality standards. You're not doing anyone a favor by skipping the lengthy editing phase: all it does is make you look more and more like you don't care about what you're doing the longer you keep it up. If a writer doesn't make a habit of actually proofreading his/her work before submitting it anywhere, he/she really shouldn't be writing in the first place, or at the very least they should keep it to themselves. I already wrote an essay about the importance of proofreading, and it's hosted here and on my main site I believe, so I won't bother ranting onward lest I become redundant. Give it a look and maybe that'll help you out, too.

I'll grant you that simple riffs like yours wouldn't necessarily take months of work to polish, but you should still be spending at least a week on each one, if not longer. Worry less about a rapid-fire schedule and more about whether the end result is any good or not. Mikemacdee (talk) 08:34, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

The Final Part of the Rap Rat Riff is done!
Here's the pastebin link: http://pastebin.com/t1E8ajiq

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 01:35, March 24, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 01:35, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Finale" message
Hey thank you! Anyway, the riff is now on the wikia: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:TheAzumangaDaiohFan/Azu_Riffs:_Rap_Rat_%28Part_3%29_3/23/15

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 02:11, March 24, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 02:11, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Riffs
I really like your Riffs, and at the point in time I am writing this, I have lost about three hours reading them. Three hours just...gone. I was wondering if you'd be in interested in Riffing one of my Pasta's? They are In My Arms, Birdhouse, Keep Me Safe, and Repeat. I wouldn't really have a preference on which one. If you don't want to or don't have the time I understand.

Chronobunny (talk) 08:23, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reply-

Thank you. I'm sure your riff on my Pasta will be great to read. How do you want me to give you my email address? Just on your talk page or...?

Chronobunny (talk) 19:00, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-reply-

Okay, my email is bunnyfox13@gmail.com Thank you again, I'm looking forward to reading!

Chronobunny (talk) 19:11, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can't find Miss Mosaic riff
Can you link me to your riff on Miss Mosaic? I can't find it in your blog page. I even tried searching for it on the Creepypasta search bar under blogs and it wasn't there.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 01:05, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 01:05, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Riff Link" message
Aww thanks! How did you manage to find it? I know! You MUST be a psychic pokemon! OMG! Best discovery 1,000,000/TurtleNoises Would see again!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 01:32, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 01:32, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Dorkpool" message

 * Realizes the thing that could've easily been done and the "Game Over" music from Sonic The Hedgehog 1 plays*

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 01:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 01:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Huh?" message
I could've googled the name of the riff...

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 05:06, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 05:06, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Just A Notice
I went ahead and added links to all of your riffs of any of the pastas I have reviewed (as you have done for me with "The Black Friday Incident" Riff and your "Lost Episodes" Riff). Let me know if you support this and I'll continue to leave links to your riffs at the end of my reviews. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 01:10, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Possible Request? (Reply to "Re: Just A Notice")
Glad to know you approve. Anyway, I was thinking that we might be able to possibly do some sort of cross-review of some sort in the future. I understand if you are very busy/don't want to (as a matter of fact, I'm not exactly sure if how and if our styles would mix in a single review/riff), but if you like the idea, perhaps we could agree on which pasta to do. Let me know what you think. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 01:26, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Re: Possible Request
It depends on what kind of length you would want the story to be. For example, we could look at the most famous Jeff The Killer sequel, Jeff Is Back . I've also got a version of "Clockwork: Your Time Is Up" on my computer that I should be able to upload to pastebin or something if you want a copy of it. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 01:37, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Another Re: Possible Request?
Jeff Is Back is a good choice then. I consider it a technical sequel because it was the most popular and it was one of the few Jeff The Killer stories that was actually on this Wiki before the clean-up. Whether it is by the same author or not, I don't know. Anyway, my main confusion lies in how exactly the format would be. We both have different approachs (your riffs as compared with my reviews), so I'm not sure if we should kind of merge them both or just go for a full-on riff. I'd be fine with either. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 01:49, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

The Next Re: Possible Request?
I thought for a bit and I figured we should just both work on the intro, riff, and end. It makes more sense that way. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 14:17, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re to End All Res (I Think): Possible Request?
Alright then. We can work on it whenever is most convient. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 20:19, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

One Last Re: Possible Request?
That would work perfectly well. If you want my email to send it to me, I have left it below (just do not put the parentheses around the @).

AGrimAuxiliatrix(@)gmail.com AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 21:01, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re: A Notice
I've sent you it. I didn't make the intro or outro, however, which I suppose you might have wanted me to do. Anyway, tell me what you think. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 23:22, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re + Re + Re: A Notice
Draft 4 has now been sent. Take your time. You know, get some coffee, relax a bit, whatever you'd like. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 23:55, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re^5: A Notice
And now we have Draft 6, in which I didn't have to change much at all. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 00:15, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Intro/Outro
Went ahead and sent you the 1st draft. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 00:55, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re^3: Intro/Outro
Please do. It would certainly help things not get confusing when we were replying to our comments. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 01:10, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re^5: Intro/Outro
Alright. Draft 3 sent. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 01:44, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re^7: Intro/Outro
I have nothing to add or fix.

I recommend you post it under your Blogs and I will simply put it on "My Critiques" page (as "My Critiques" is not a blog at all). AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 01:58, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Riff Question
I was simply wondering how the riff in question would be posted.

For example, if you were to post it as one of your blogs, it would probably make more sense to have you open it up rather than me.

Just a thought. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 18:23, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re^2: Riff Question
I think that would probably work rather well. If you want to just take the "Intro/Outro" Draft 4 and just cut down some of my parts + Increase your parts, that might work. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 19:13, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re^4: Riff Question
I'm sure it would be fine the way you post it, you don't have to send it to me. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 19:27, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re: It's Up
Lovely. I like how it turned it out. I'll have my (nearly identical) version up in a moment. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 20:04, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Mine Is Up
If you want to take a look at it, I have included the link below. The only difference is that we both have a different intro paragraph.

My Critiques/Jeff Is Back Rifftique