Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36877863-20181116180456/@comment-9041013-20181116204909

Well it's really trope-ridden, nothing is quite original with your important plot points.

Old man goes fishing in the open sea alone... for some reason... finds a statue he shouldn't be able to lift alone and lifts it... because random bouts of superhuman strength whenever it is neededf for the sake of a plot are fine in literature(?)... brings it home and turns into a fish man.

This id definitely not something I'm going to rememeber, it's just plain and uninteresting.

Luckily enough, the world is somewhat clear on it's own, so you got this one right