Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181020071418/@comment-28428152-20181020190132

I'm glad you like the characters, Bloody. I wanted to make the characters in the first Volume a bit more black and white (such as grandparents=totally good vs. The Nameless and David=totally bad) to reflect Ben's innocence and worldview, but with these next two Volumes, I'm trying to make the characters more morally ambiguous and complex to reflect an adult worldview.

And Locked, I did a quick little fix, made Jan directly address Daniel by name.

Also, just wanna say that I'm really glad you two are taking the time to read these entries, it means a lot and helps a ton. I'm trying to read your guys' stories myself, haha