Talk:The Preservers/@comment-25052433-20160610042631

Oh wow, can't believe I missed this one for so long. As always, excellet work and amazing writing, as is the standard in the works that you produce. This story in particular had a great element of suspense as the main character dug deeper into the investigation. I really admired how effective the short yet intense meeting between the main and the preserver when the encounter finally happened. Nothing quite as nerve racking as finding out that what we know as the human life span is all being manipulated, or, as you put it, managed.

This one leaves a few lingering questions, such as how long humans might actually live if these beings were not involving themselves in our lives. The idea that an extended life span would bring on the end of the world also left a nice pit in my stomach.

Simply put, this is one of the best I've read in sometime. Keep up the great work!