Talk:Poking Others' Fear with a Stick/@comment-25052433-20150610164834

Great job on this story! It's probably no secret that whenever a new pasta shows up, there is always that moment of wondering, is this going to be good, are am I about to read some story about Jeff the Killer meeting Smile Dog while watching Squidward kill himself from playing too many haunted video games.

Needless to say, yours landed quite safely on the good side of that equation, hell, even great. This was very well written and ambitious. Nice ending, great character build up and setting descriptions.

I hope to see more from you in the future, as you certainly have talent!