Talk:Doli Soul/@comment-25340844-20141003220700

I'd advise changing her name, firstly because it sort of gives away the ending (I assume "Doli" is pronounced "Dolly?" and secondly because, as a general rule, real people just don't have names like "Doli Soul." It makes it really hard to immerse yourself in the story.

Also, I can't feel anything but extreme dislike for a character who uses "They're all just jealous of how unimaginably pretty I am" as an excuse for people not liking them.