Talk:Recorder/@comment-26253657-20150329162154

This story started good with a point to make you think and then sort of collapsed. As someone else has said down in the comments it has an 'I'm coming for you' cliche about it which isn't very believable, creepy or interesting. The writing style is good and brings across someone who is a devoted yet slightly insane servant and if you were the real recorder then you wouldn't say that on the internet unless you wanted to be caught.

6/10.