Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28060931-20160918203623/@comment-27624616-20161104002859

I'm not sure if it makes sure that he carved his story into the Medical Kit either. I mean this is a long story, how do you 1.) carve into a plastic container without the giant human-dissecting monster mere feet away from you not hearing and 2.) running out of space to carve?

What happens to Bill? A question best unanswered. Great execution there.

What happens to the main character? Yet again, a question best unanswered, executed well.

I just don't get why the character would spend so much time carving a memoir into the medical kit? Why not spend that time searching for a way out? The character wakes up, witnesses Bill's murder, and immediately retreats to carving a memoir. The character expresses a feeling of sickness, but why is no action taken about that feeling (take vomit as an example).

Have you heard of SpellCheck? It's free with Google Docs, and Microsoft Word. It seems like it would be a useful tool for you.

All in all, this draft would be a 5/10 at best.