Talk:Thousand Yard Stare/@comment-4897892-20141111150154

This is an interesting story, but the beginning smacks heavily of "As You Know, Bob", when one character tells another basic facts about the world so that the audience can overhear. His parents would already know it's been two years since Pearl Harbor, and they'd probably also know what he's been doing these last two years, unless they've been estranged...


 * rereads it* wait, is the "See you soon" meant to imply that his parents are already dead? That might make sense... But not the info on how he got blown to bits and had a note on him, if the narrator just found this in a box of memorabilia. All in all, interesting concept, but needs serious plot patching.