Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27018401-20141110173203/@comment-25679985-20141114005238

you said you thought formating to be the reason it got deleted? well it may be because this could be mistaken for a "haunted file" pasta or a "haunted game" pasata both of which are blacklisted and not allowed.

also there are several points where you could change the tense and the word would fit, I.E. "I tried to shot him" to "I tried to shoot him" there are several of these kinds of mistakes that can easily be fixed and by fixing them improving not only the flow of the story but improving the quality as using the correct tenses could qualify as grammer and that can get a story deleted.