Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4849011-20160201003616/@comment-4849011-20160411003552

When I saw you had left a response I wondered if it would be a good review or something along the lines of "This sucks! Boo!" It turns out it was a little of both! Seriously, though, thanks for checking this out and sharing your thoughts! I'm sorry you didn't care much for the introduction, and I can understand why you feel the way you do. Maybe sometime I'll see if I can make it seem more organic. I'm really glad to hear that you liked the story overall, and I honestly felt honored by what you had to say. :-D I'm off to check out The Smiling Man!