Talk:Eyeless Jack/@comment-24459532-20140127234644

I think this story is so dumb...

I mean, it's a little creepy, but you have a lot of errors.

If your kidney had been stolen, you'd be in absolute deathly pain. You wouldn't be able to walk, and the doctor wouldn't just say "sorry", he'd put you on medication and you wouldn't be able to leave the hospital to be home "the next day", and you would probably be given a replacment.

The doctor wouldn't be the one to tell you that your brother was dead, it would be the police. That's their job, not the doctors.

If there was something standing over you in the night, do you really think you'd have enough time to reach other, find a camera, turn it on, wait for it to load up, put it in focas, and snap a picture? Only if he gave you at least 15 seconds. I don't know, maybe he likes his picture taken.

Oh, and if your parents really named you and your brother Mitch and Edwin, they most hate you.

3/10