Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-39380631-20190528145139/@comment-39380631-20190529143248

BloodySpghetti wrote: "I entered a cave with a broken leg... which I obviously knew was broken because of horrible pain and not anything else"  - first mistake. If you want me to believe in an injury either keep at "I was injured in X part of my body" or be specific and realistic to a degree, obviously not asking you for a complete medical analysis. A sprained ankle might make a sound that someone people would think is the breaking of bones, would swell and go blue but that's just damaged ligaments and you can't walk on that. I know first hand.

"I explored places on a leg I said I couldn't walk on two sentences ago" - Yeah nah, the pain alone would deter anyone from trying to explore a cave. Not to mention it being a cave adding more factor in for the person to just sit and wait for help at the entrance of the cave.

How on earth do you go climbing knowing full well a drop of water to the eye will make you lose your footing and potentially kill you?

Bones heal overtime... considering he managed to step on it, the bones must've been pretty much in proper positioning.

It just doesn't work as much of a story I can take seriously.

I'm sorry. Don't be sorry. Critisism is something I can handle, that what drafts are for. I understand where you're coming from; some stuff just either is flat out dumb or contextually incorrect. But that what the workshop is for, so I actually thank you very much for the feedback that you can't take it seriously, because it shall improve my writing greatly.