Talk:Strangled Red/@comment-33852622-20171230165947

MY RATING!

Detail 10/10 You described everything in detail that allowed me to picture it in my head! NOICE

Grammar 9/10 A few spelling mistakes every now and then. WHATEVER!

Cliches 10/10

Evidence 10/10 With the one image you do have, it looks pretty legit. Good job!

Originality 10/10 You used the usual creepy lavender town creepypasta, and the creepy S13v3n thing spooped me.

OVERALL POINTS 49/50!

You have passed my test. you are not the gratest, but very close! Advice for next time, try rereading to catch any spelling mistakes!

other than that scary as fuck! i almost soiled my self!