Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25332563-20140821201134/@comment-24957984-20140821202747

You're supposed to put your pasta in the thread, as the rules say, Also, try posting your story here before posting as an article next time, and I had to rename your story as well.

I didn't like much the story. It's pretty much a description of how a random artist/assassin does his work. While it's not a horrible idea, the plot is bland and there's nothing special to say about it. In the end of the day, it has a quite clichéd plot.

I'm not going to mention grammar/spelling stuff since it's the author's job to write correctly, and there weren't obvious issues. However, I'd add more paragraphs.

It probably does meet the Quality Standards, but barely.