Talk:Ritual to Experience the "Other Side"/@comment-4470175-20160604235702

I do like how you take advantage of horror movie cliches for effect in your storytelling. It plays out as well as any other 'ritual' creepypasta goes, so it lacks any real originality, except of course my previous point. The realism found within this tutorial also gives it an edge over the other ones I see. It's for the msot part well written. Overall, goob job!

8/10