Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444401-20160229224028/@comment-26425680-20160304191739

I'm wondering if maybe you're a fan of slasher films. This really reads like a scene out of an 80s cut-'em-up gorefest. Essentially, your characters are introduced simply so that they can get filleted after the obligatory T&A have been served up. The slasher genre has its fans, so I'm sure there are some people who will like this, but I personally can't help but feel this is just a rehash of stuff I watched a long time ago, superfluous sex included. You did do a good job of building up the suspense, but in the end there's really not much story here for me to enjoy.