Talk:After the Fall/@comment-35711173-20181011173557

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This is good going. Come back to this story in a few months when you can look at it with fresh eyes.

This story is 13,246 words. That's 2/3 of a novella. Did you ever read the original novella "Weyr Search" by Anne McCaffrey. One story, and it became the base for a whole series of novels. As a gut feeling, I think that as you develop you will grow enough to make this into a trilogy.

Dr. Bob