Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28420405-20160816123509/@comment-28420405-20160817132227

ChristianWallis wrote: Loved your ending! Did the narrator piss on Robbie's corpse or was that just me!? Not to say anything against it, it just shocked me so much I wasn't even sure!

LOL! That was Kellen falling into the open wound, sitting directly in poor Robbie's stomach, which had been flayed by the other boys for eating. The wetness was the blood seeping into his clothes! Your reaction made me chuckle.

Thanks so much! I'll be posting this soon.