Talk:Dinner Guest/@comment-5733573-20180817185823/@comment-36393004-20180817213907

I made a few changes. I made sure we were in past tense from beginning to end. Fixed a few of my grammatical problems. I reworded a few things to try to help with the flow and added an ending that I hope wraps it up better. I had tinkered with the idea of having her telling this story to someone else who was trapped there but I didn't think that worked much better.