Talk:The House That Death Forgot/@comment-39095959-20190411005818

I feel the fact that she doesn't like driving at night wasn't fully utilized in the story. The main point is that it should have played into why she would stay at the house. She ends up staying in the house because her tires are slashed but she should welcome an opportunity to not drive. The only reason she wants to leave is because she has work in the morning which is a fact that hadn't been presented beforehand and has little bearing on the rest of the story. If she had just stayed from the beginning the tires wouldn't have to be slashed before so running at the end would have seemed more sensible.

The story was definitely still worth the read.