Talk:Tooth Faerie/@comment-36185808-20180714033020

As short as it is, it's a great read! It had the right amount of chills and had a great buildup to the monster. The one thing I would say to keep in mind is pacing—keep the story at a somewhat slower pace to create a better buildup to the horrific moment and draw it out longer with anything else you think should have been included. Other than that, I enjoyed this a lot!

8/10