Talk:Stitched/@comment-32802129-20170808090649

Pretty good overall, although I think there are two areas that could be developed. Firstly, I was pretty well immersed in the story until the horrific death of the 5yr old, which hardly seemed to register with the main character. Some overpowering emotion there might add to the believeability. Secondly, the ending fell a bit flat for me, not really offering an explanation of what it was or making the reader believe the creature is still out there. Great read though!