Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27857924-20160225002649/@comment-25037895-20160225015303

It's fine to post on reddit and this site. In the future, please apply this category to your stories from reddit: Category:Reddit Pastas.

The story was deleted because it's pretty anti-climactic IMO. The EYE seems so cutting-edge, but then becomes useless so quickly, there's not enough build-up and the story is not thought-out. It's not exciting or suspenseful or interesting IMO.