Talk:The Scariest Night of My Life/@comment-26298997-20190617061311

I'm a critical person by nature and until that last line I was ready to criticize you for not just having your narrator call the police. Really nice job. Didn't scare me but definitely entertained. I will say I'm not a big fan of stories beginning by asking if someone wants to hear a story. In real life conversations it makes sense but if I don't want a story I can just go to another tab or click the x button. Still it's a fairly common device and it gets the job done so it's fine. 7/10.