Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27280438-20160114125758/@comment-25769703-20160114140636

There is something called the English language which you can utilise. I didn't have to read your work. But I did, it's plain and simple re-read it so many mistakes... it's beyond me how you even think this is good work. It was pulled down for being blantantly bad. Please re-read edit, use the correct Grammer, spacing and punctuation to string together something half decent enough to read without filling in unnessisary details.

'DON'T TELL ME WHAT REAPERS DO I AM FULL AWARE WHAT THE JOB Of REAPERS IS I WAS ONE FOR CENTURIES BUT NOW I AM MUCH MORE AND I DO THIS BECAUSE I CAN YOU DAMNED MORTALS DON'T DESERVE LIFE YOU ARE NOTHING AND BECAUSE IT IS FUN' <--- tell me is this correct... did you read what you wrote before you put it up.

'NO NO NO PLEASE AHHHHHHHHHHH' <--- What is this. It's awkward. You could of written (I refused to die at the hands of the reaper, my death was certain. Then tell the audience or the reader the way he screamed. Not just 'AHHHHHHHHH'.. I found that very comic and hillarious. 

