User talk:Nicky2006

behind those doors
have you ever passed a house with a feeling that the house is different ....me and my bestfriend maria walk pass a dark black door "aye" maria says with a chill "did you feel that ?" she says looking at me while she rubs her arms up and down ." yeah " i say while doing the same .me and maria keep walking and i turn around feeling like were being watched then keep walking. the next day me and maria walk pass the door again " ah the chills again jeez it never chnages " she says. the doors open by it self. me and maria stare at each other " um..do we go inside " maria says freaking out. " idk about you but i am" i say grinning. as i walk inside a  big breeze wooshes out "woah " i say while feeling chilly and then turn around " maria you comin?" . maria walks in and we start looking around.

"well lets check the place out " i say chuckling

o-ok  maria says while staring at the doors

me and maria looks around and the doors shuts loudly. maria runs to the doors while puching it

why wont it open!?" maria screams '

calm down lets just look around for another way to leave  i say smiling

maria eyes widen as she looks behind me and starts shivering

''hm? whats wrong '' i turn around and see a black huge figure with glowing eyes looking down at us

w-what is that  maria says shaking

maria dont move  i say while staring at the figure

the black figure makes a screaming noise making the whole plae shake and rumble. me and maria scream and run to a empty room and lock the doors.

i wanna leave ! maria cried

i look at the closet while it opens and two arms appear and then clap and a young lady with a maid outfit comes out with a knife in her hands and scream "she made me!" . me and maria cover our ears and scream. the maid lady disappears leaving a letter behind and a picture. me and maria uncovers our ears and open our eyes and see the letter and picture.

what did she mean by that  maria cried more

i crunched down and picked up the letter and photo. the photo had a little girl with dark long soft hair and next to her was a lady with a young lady next to her with light short hair and a maid outfit.

''the lady who screamed ... '' i say while i look at the picture

i look at the latter and see writing with a little blood the writing said "im sorry sofia im so sorry your mother made me ". i look at maria.

lets get out of here i feel that if we stay anylonger we will never get out i crumbled the paper up and put the picture in my pocket.

me and maria open the door and look to the left and right seeing nothing. we walked out slowly trying to make no noise. as we walked maria fell and was being dragged from the leg to a closet

''ahhhhh help me! nicky ! " maria screamed as shes being pulled''

i pulled maria from her hand trying to grab her but then the black figure appears behind her and grabs her and disappears.

MARIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" i screamed

i ran around the place and open everydoor trying to find her " where is she ?!" i cried "bring her back!" . a mirror appeared in front of me and maria appears in it. she has a white long dressed with white heels and her black long soft her flowing on her pale skin her eyes closed while shes standing "maria!" i screamed while bangning on the mirror

please let her go!"

the black figure appear behind me next to it was the young maid lady and the little girl. i started at the little girl then to maria they both seem to be waring the same thing while having the same hair style i gasp and tear up the little girl was somewhat part of marias family. long ago marias great great grandmother and grandfather moved into a big house with 2 twin girls one was sofia and other was mimi both twins were always together one day maria great great grandmother had a fight with sofia about her future sofia disappaeared no one knew were mimi got lonely and decided to search for her twin she later find out that the maid who read stories and played with them killed sofia mimi was filled with anger she killed the maid andwhen she find out her mother and father made her she killed them too she died to she held so much anger it made her go crazy. next to sofia appeared the mom, dad , but mimi didnt appear insted and appeared next to me. she galred at me her long dark hair flowed on her skin she looked like she tried to tell me something. it was almost like she wanted to say sorry sofia appear next to her and they looked at each other.

"you dont have to feel sorry anymore " i said looking at mimi "its ok your mother and father are wrong for making the maid kill sofia " sofia looked at her mother and father and they looked back the mother galred at her and everything went black a sudden scream came from the mother  . she grabed sofia from the hair and disappeared with her so did the black figure and the father. as they disappeared the mirror disappeared with maria."wait ! maria!" i tryed to grab maria but she disappeared. mim iwent crazy with anger

''calm down! i can help if you bring back maria!" mimi looked at me and held her hand it looked like she knew where they went but she couldnt go since shes dead ."i see if you come into me you can show me where they are ?" mimi nodded i held her hand as she went tru me i screamed and yelled . in my head i can hear mimis voice it was scary . i walked like i knew where i was going i ended up in a big wrecked house i looked up at the window to the right and saw sofia in pain " so this is where you all died " mimi appeared out of me and look up to sofia and disappeared back in me . i walked inside and the mother glaring at me "um let go of maria and sofia they didnt do anything ! whatever happen to you and sofia got nothing to do with maria " the black figure appeared behind me and disappeared with me to a white epmty place "w-where am i?" i looked around and saw mimi she said in a soft sweet voice " ill never forgive them never " mimi looked at me " help me please " . i look at her " you can talk?" . "she pointed to a door "please help". i look at the door and walk in i look around and seem to be inside the living room of the big house again but everything look different it looked clean and new. i look around and see aofia and mimi playing and laughing i tunr around and see the mom calling sofia i suddenly appear in a room where sofia and the mom are fighting " listen young lady you are gnna do what i say got it !" . " never ill never kill my own sister !! " sofia says yellling. " if she dies then everything will be perfect your father doesnt have to wast so much money on her your sister is useless " the mother says chuckling. "mimi is not useless if you want her to die then ill die to " sofia says with fear. " if you want it that way " the other claps her hands twice and the maid walks in with a knife and the father walks in too. sofia gasps and tries to run away but her father grabs her by the arm and ties her hand and feet up the maid looks at sofia and tears up " im sorry my lady ". "o hurry up already you useslles piece of nothing " the father says punching the wall. " yes sir! " the maid says and looks a sofia then stabs her. i gasp and tears up then appears in the big house this time in my time .''

i cant believe they killed her..."

the mother and father plus the maid and the black figure appear again infront of me they look like theyre gonna get me ."no i wont die ! " i look at the mirror where maria is "im not giving up " i take out the picture i had of sofia and point at it "this you killed your own daughter did you not love her!? i yell . the mother glared at em and screamed loudly . i squeak and fall  n-not yet" i get up and yell again " screaming and running away wont help ! why would you kill my sister !?"

"huh my sister? i didnt mean to say that '' i look to the side and see me self  as mimi i look at the mother and father and maid and yell as i was in all this " why did you kill my sister !? i wont forgive you ill never forgive you! I HATE YOU! ' every rumbles and the mother eyes widen and sees her own daughter dead laying on the floor her starts to tear up. the mother rushes to sofia and cries and screams "im sorry" everything stops rumbling and a soft warm feeling appear. sofia gets up and smiles then mimi appears they hug and laugh and the mom, father and maid disappear this time forever. the mirror shadders and everything darkens i later wake up in bed gasping ''

hey u ok?" maria looks at me 

um ya " i look at her and smile 

me and maria walk pass the dark door this time with a smile and look at the doors and chuckles. the door opens with sofia and mimi walking out laughing. i look at them and smile "thank goodness "

about what " maria laughs "your going cookoo

"lets go idiot " i laugh and ruun with maria Nicky2006 (talk) 03:22, February 7, 2015 (UTC)