Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31532017-20161130072138/@comment-27905100-20161202000113

Of everything I've observed while scouring across this never-ending yet stunning world; (This should be a comma) I've never witnessed life displaying such unusual behavior before. They refer to themselves as humans I presume, not a fitting or accurate name if you ask me. (Please address this soon, I want to know what you mean by 'not accurate')

My fellow brothers and sisters, you know I don't tolerate being laughed off  right? (Being 'laughed off' isn't a thing. Being 'Laughed at', however, is.) Knows (That (<-) should be 'You know.) what I'm capable of  yet have the audacity to make me a running joke. And to answer some of you, I've heard the reputation regarding these apes. Notorious for their violence amongst others and their own despite retaining high levels of intelligence. But ponder for (a) second, what differentiates them from the rest of the crowd?

Kinda obvious actually, like most intelligent lifeforms they've adapted numerous writing systems. Not an impressive feat you might consider, but take a good damned (Good damned isn't a thing you can say. I would change this to something more like 'good, close look.) closer look. You might notice several of their writings appear to be written in a form of storytelling; (This should be a comma.) quite (You should put something there, such as 'contrary') to what our father does.

The tremendous amount of effort they're willing to undergo to write a story out instead of speaking it is simply astonishing. Nothing I've seen before has ever exhibit such a strange nature and everything they've written is portrayed so accurately. I couldn't even begin to imagine the time it takes to produce such amazing (I feel like the word 'amazing is out of place here) content.

I've personally read their works starting from the most well-known to the least of the bunch and I still can't get over it. (A comma would fit better there) And little do they know that by creating such spectacular works, they're becoming Gods in a way. Creating countless intricate dimensions; (A comma would fit better there as well) all slightly different from another, I believe all of you have seen it at least once.

Best part is, their willingness to subject their own creations to simple yet painful scenarios solely to entertain themselves and others alike. And you thought our oldest brother was cruel. Oh man, do humans deserve that title now.

I wouldn't be too harsh though, being fictional work themselves had its toll on them after all. (I don't think this last sentence needs to be a separate paragraph.)