User talk:EmpyrealInvective/Archive 30

Doom Vroom Riddles Your Talk Page With Stupidity
Hi, Empyre! Did you check out E3 and if so, what games from it interest you? Here's a list of everything shown off at E3:  Tyranny, Mafia 3, Watch Dogs 2, and Agents of Mayhem on my end. Oh, so Bethesda has said that they aren't working on Elder Scrolls 6 and are going to work on two new IPs before they do so, so maybe they'll put out something new that you like more than Elder Scrolls 6 (if I recall right, you don't care for Elder Scrolls 6 all that much). I am hoping for a Sci-Fi RPG and a Spy RPG. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  22:02, June 16, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry for putting words in your mouth then. I've heard Shadow of Colossus and the Persona series are really good, but I've not gotten to play either of them. Resident Evil 7: Bio-hazard is supposedly going to be like the first two (3?) Resident Evils and will see the return of herbs with shooting getting a bit of a backseat treatment. It'll be more survival horror based instead of a shooter. Interestingly, the E3 footage and the demo aren't actually going to be in the final game, so it's best to be cautious since that's really weird and sketchy. There's a couple more I'm interested in: Resident Evil 7, Ghost Recon Wildlands, Prey, South Park and Dead Rising 4. Still waiting for information on my single player Star Wars games though, haven't had one that was single player and not released for phones since 2010 (Force Unleashed II). I'll probably buckle and get Lego Star Wars 7 out of the bargain bin (cause bs dlc practices exist for it, but I am starved for Star Wars games). Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  14:25, June 17, 2016 (UTC)


 * 6 was really weird. It tried to capture the classic experience with Ada, COD with Chris, Resi 4 with Leon, and something completely new with Wesker's son (can't remember his name, spoilers maybe, but you aren't going to finish it). It just had a big lack of direction and suffered an identity crisis because they couldn't stick to just one style of play. I got to where I enjoyed it, but I really had to switch off my brain and throw it out the window to do so. The idea of Wesker having a son was really stupid to me for example (Wesker was the only thing that kept me interested in 5). You might look into Days Gone for your zombie fix, if you don't like what you see and hear about 7. It's different in principle, but it looks like a great zombie game and I'd be all over it if it wasn't PS4 exclusive. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  21:47, June 17, 2016 (UTC)


 * Dead Rising 4 is a timed Xbox One/PC exclusive in case you didn't know, so there will be a bit of a wait for you (rumor is a year) until you can play it. Timed exclusivity and bought exclusivity is so stupid, at least exclusivity can make sense when a Microsoft or Sony owned studio personally develops a game. I have the impression that Days Gone is going to be single player only based upon the gameplay they released at E3, but I could be mistaken. Definitely a single player campaign tho. I'm really jealous of missing out on Days Gone and the new Spiderman game (yes, a Spiderman game is a PS4 exclusive :| ). Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  00:09, June 18, 2016 (UTC)


 * Better now then you going to the store to buy it at release XD It'll just be like how Rise of the Tomb Raider was exclusive to Xbox One for 6 months. If you have Windows Gaming then you can play it on PC, so there's that. All of Microsoft's games that were announced at E3 this year were both available on Xbox One and Windows Gaming. Playstation seems to be locking down on exclusivity as most of their games aren't even playable on PC. It (Days Gone) won't. I looked up the company that is making it and it was SIE (Sony Interactive Entertainment, I presume). Every game they've ever made, starting back on the PS2, has been exclusive to Playstations, womp womp. I'll probably buy a PS4 again when the PS5 comes out like I did with the PS3. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  01:10, June 18, 2016 (UTC)


 * *crosses fingers and waits for Sega to appear and smash both Microsoft and Sony into the ground because it would be funny* The entirety of this gen has been a flop for me, I own 17 games on the Xbox One and of those 17, 10 of them are either remasters or available on last gen consoles (I only bought remasters because they were packaged with a game that I didn't own). Microsoft's Scorpio is all, but a verbal admission that they released the Xbox One too soon. Microsoft's strategy appears to be to put out a new console and call it an upgrade, so that their fanbase doesn't get pissed off. Microsoft has yo-yo'd so much on whether or not the Scorpio will have games exclusive to it.


 * I'm expecting Sony to turn around and do the same thing with the Neo. I think the reason they didn't announce the Neo was so they could see what exactly Microsoft was doing and how far they could push things. Even though the Playstation 4 is more powerful than the Xbox One, they've been toning down the frame-rate to match that which the Xbox One puts out when they release the same game for both systems. I'd best stop before I start to rant further, but needless to say, I think they made these consoles too soon (which is odd, because the 360 was 8 when the Xbox One came out and that was the longest Console Generation ever). I'm just worried that they're going to keep pushing things (rushing through console generations) until the developers literally cannot break even. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  02:10, June 18, 2016 (UTC)

How to start a story
I just got a great idea for a story and I've made sure that nobody else has had the same story idea. The only problem is that I'm not sure what to click to start writing my story. Could you give me some pointers? Thanks! AliceCooper99 (talk) 16:41, June 17, 2016 (UTC)

Oops
I accidentally posted an unfinished story. Is there any way for me to undo this? Also, is there any way for me to save a story so that I can work on it at a later date? AliceCooper99 (talk) 18:35, June 17, 2016 (UTC)

Ei mano!
How are you? It's been a long time since I checked anything on this wiki or Wikia overall. I've been super busy with lots of important shit, especially because I'm moving to another city soon. It seems liek thing changed a bit as well, but I obviously have 0% of interest of contributing anything.  You called me that?  Guess what? THAT'S NOT MY NAME!  22:06, June 17, 2016 (UTC)

Troll detected
This user has vandalized this story a couple of times. Seems to be worthy of an indefinite ban. Found using racial slurs. Vandalized a user's profile page.

 Ruckus Q uantum   14:34, June 18, 2016 (UTC)

Quick Question
Hi, I just recently posted a story called "The Smile Man, which you deleted.  I believe I figured out why it was deleted, due to spacing errors that I had made when moving the story over into the Wiki from my typing program.

I was wondering what the rules are on putting my story back, now that i've fixed the spacing errors?

ThisDarkNight (talk) 18:20, June 19, 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I'd like to ask why my pasta was deleted so I can work on my skills for the future. I have an idea but I'd like to confirm. Thanks. Daimondhead2 (talk) 20:50, June 20, 2016 (UTC)

Help needed.
Hey Empy,

Not sure if you could do this or not, but I uploaded the story I am planning on adding to the contest in the WW. I just finished writing it tonight and wanted to get a feel for how well it is received. Would you be able to give me some feedback on it? Its title is Blobster.

Thanks,

JohnathanNash (talk) 03:27, June 21, 2016 (UTC)

Okay, well I hope you can get to it, but if you can't I understand.

Thanks,

JohnathanNash (talk) 03:33, June 21, 2016 (UTC)

Eggcellent
There are a few errors in An Egg.

""Yup," I said" Needs period.

""Now you're getting it." I said, with a congratulatory slap on the back." Period after "it" needs to be a comma.

""And you're John Wilkes Booth, too." I added." Period after "too" needs to be a comma.

"Don't get hot and flustered,  use a bit of mustard!"  03:36, June 21, 2016 (UTC)

Not sure if this is right
I checked my edit count via the badges panel at the right side of my profile page and found out I really have made more than 380 article edits in my whole time here on this site. My statistics (the chart at the bottom of my page) says otherwise. I figured out the edit count on the badges panel included my edits on previously deleted articles. Do you think this might affect my standing as a possible candidate for rollback? I really don't have high hopes yet, just thought of bringing this up.

 Ruckus Q uantum   10:00, June 21, 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I was given a notification that you deleted the story Caroline Missing, only a minute after it was edited, I hae indeed read your reasonings to delete it and I don't see any of these reasons connecting to this story. Can I ask you why you deleted it? NightmaresRemainForever (talk) 20:52, June 21, 2016 (UTC)

Story on Blog
Here. MrDupin (talk) 15:46, June 22, 2016 (UTC)


 * Done.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 15:52, June 22, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Thank
No problem, but in fact things have been going pretty well around here without you. Honest!

*barricading door with scores of blood-thirsty trolls on other side*

By the way, I was wondering if you were able to get the other admin's thoughts on a Rollback app which doesn't meet the 450 requirement. I feel like I've made a bit of an effort in the last week or so to prove myself, and I feel like I would be able to manage being a Rollbacker if an exception were to be made. Anyways, just wondering.

"Don't get hot and flustered,  use a bit of mustard!"  21:57, June 22, 2016 (UTC)


 * Well in that case, I'll most likely put up the application in a couple days or so. There's one thing I'm a bit confused by, however. On the requests page it says to "Create a subpage with your username (i.e. Project:Requests for Rollback/Username )". If I put " * /Dr. Frank N. Furter/ " under the "Open Applications" header, will this automatically create a "Creepypasta Wiki:Requests for Rollback/Dr. Frank N. Furter" page?


 * "Don't get hot and flustered,  use a bit of mustard!"  22:19, June 22, 2016 (UTC)


 * Ahh, alright. Thanks. Expect to see that application soon enough. "Don't get hot and flustered,   use a bit of mustard!"  22:34, June 22, 2016 (UTC)

My story "One Less Soul"
Hi, Empy. I do not know if you remember our conversation a while ago, about my story "One Less Soul"; a submission to the 666 words literary exercise that I wanted to get published on the site? Since then I've put alot of work into it and given it more debth; I've had it out on the writer's workshop board and gotten 1 comment back (which was really helpful), but my 2nd revision hasn't got any; which is not surprising; as it has been added a whole bunch of new stories since then.

However, what I am so clumsily trying to ask is: what can one do to try to get attention to one's story again? Is it for instance allowed to post it again on the writer's workshop board after a while (I haven't done this, in case it is not allowed to do so)?

Got any tips regarding this subject?

As a shameless self promotion; here's a link to my story, in case you want to see it for yourself. http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:539023

Thanks again for all the help!

InScythe (talk) 15:35, June 23, 2016 (UTC)

Ok, I will try to do that. Thanks for the helpful advice!

InScythe (talk) 16:04, June 23, 2016 (UTC)

yeah you could have told me to not do that, rather than just delete my creepypasta, but otherwise was that the only part that needed work?

bruh please stop deleting my creepypasta like i am getting tired and please stop really cause first i am into creepypasta want to make my own creepypasta so please stop deleting my creepypasta and why are you always deleting my post and is targeted to my account like i want to know you but deleting my creepypasta post is getting really annoying.

RachetCreepypasta (talk) 21:32, June 23, 2016 (UTC)Japseline Blanco

I just worked hard on that and you just delete my post like thats not cool really..

RachetCreepypasta (talk) 21:34, June 23, 2016 (UTC)Japseline Blanco

I swear i gonna kill you if you keep deleting my post

RachetCreepypasta (talk) 22:44, June 23, 2016 (UTC)fuck you

thats okay with me if you ban my account. I don't give a shit anymore because I use to love making creepypastas but I went here to make my own creepypasta and I was happy as I was making my 1 creepypasta but as I was fucking finished with my creepypasta, YOU UGLY ASS deleted my 1 one and I put so much effort on it. how would you feel if you wrote a creepypasta and was finish with it and you submit then I deleted your creepypasta? huh? I AM SICK OF YOUR UGLY ASS DELETING MY FUCKING POST WHEN I HAVE PUT MORE EFFORT ON IT AND WORKED ON IT SO HARD! you know what? that why nobody in this wiki don't like you even the staffs. EVEN SLENDERMAN,JEFF,BEN ETC DON'T FUCKING LIKE YOU AND COMING FOR YOUR ASS RIGHT NOW. so yea, I guess you are the person to ruin Creepypasta for everyone.

LOLLLLL, look ugly ass, i don't give a shit but at least my head doesn't look like your ass. bruh I feel so bad for your wife but seriously you are ONE son of a bitch and you're the reason why creepypasta is ruin. you have ruin creepypasta but i gonna still make my own creepypasta on how your face is ugly af and that if you look at your face, you can die cause of your ugliesness.

BYEEEEEEEEEE mother fucker go to hell mother fucker

Well
After that hate-filled shitpost, I figured you could use some Curry to improve your night. "Don't get hot and flustered,  use a bit of mustard!"  02:25, June 24, 2016 (UTC)


 * I... what? Did actual human beings write that? I feel kind of disturbed after reading that page, but of course there were some funny ones too ("CALL CHRIS HANSEN, THIS MAN WANTS TO PUT HIS FINGER IN MY ASS!"). I guess some people feel like they need a virtual punching bag to work out their frustrations. Sad. It's gonna take three- no, four Curry videos to make me feel good again after all that... "Don't get hot and flustered,   use a bit of mustard!"  02:49, June 24, 2016 (UTC)

Dear admin,

I am trying to add a creepypasta named Poolman. I know you blocked my ip address from making new pastas a few days ago. I have revised this creepypasta and am trying to post it. It is not letting me. Will it be ok if I send you a copy of my creepypasta for you to look over?

Thanks,

Dynamic Nightmare Fuel (talk) 14:12, June 24, 2016 (UTC)

Hii! I was just wondering why my story got deleted? ^^Charlottelaaantz (talk) 16:50, June 24, 2016 (UTC)

Ah thank you so much for pointing those things out! i will take a new look at my story and redo where it's wrong! :)

Charlottelaaantz (talk) 20:19, June 24, 2016 (UTC)

Hi Empy,

I am completely lost on how to contribute. I know Im not doing it right but the instruction are a little confusing to me (not a tech savy person and never used a wiki except this one). Is there a video, step by step guide, or progression chart any where so I can see the exact steps? Thanks for tour help.

I have made a request to please reupload "Julienne's Lover part 1" after it's premature deletion. I was in the process of formatting the document. My Chrome browser prevents me from copy-pasting, and I don't appreciate my work not being given a chance.

Sincerely,

G.M. Danielson (talk) 03:12, June 25, 2016 (UTC)

Julienne's Lover part 1 was a finished story, specifically a complete 1st part. The entire story is over 20,000 words...it was my impression that such lengthy stories would not be uploaded unless in manageable parts. I don't see why a finished story, whether it is in parts or a stand-alone, cannot be uploaded. I understand the reasoning with The Elder Gods, viz., that was clearly a draft.

Hello, forgot to leave my signature for the last comment, apologies.

G.M. Danielson (talk) 03:27, June 25, 2016 (UTC)

I need help.
Hello, could I ask you a few questions? I need some help. (Please don't ban me.)

LovecraftianTerror (talk) 19:25, June 26, 2016 (UTC)LovecraftianTerror

Please help me man, I don't know what I'm doing wrong. Please just talk to me.

LovecraftianTerror (talk) 19:42, June 26, 2016 (UTC)LovecraftianTerror

(I don't know how to respond quite yet, however, I am willing to learn. I feel like I'm very well wrote, which is why I reuploaded it, believing it was accidental. I can't find any grammatical errors, would you please help me? Also, the story is supposed to be rushed, due to the fact that it is an introductory, and nothing more. I can't completely fathom this site quite yet, and I would hate for you to ban me, or for me to be a thorn in your side. Just tell me what to do, and I'll do it, sir.)

Hey, i recently uploaded 2 creepypastas and they were both deleted. Can I ask why? If yes, do you have any recommendations you could give me? Nothing personal, I understand everything happens for a reason.

P.s, I am not quite sure how this signature thingy works.

DarkenedFire (talk) 20:18, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

(I'm sorry, I'll watch a video om how go respond in a moment.)

Please don't ban me for saying this, because I'm merely speaking my mind. I don't believe you fully understand the English language, and, there's no reason to be ashamed of that. You probably didn't take poetry classes, or, fell asleep during them, given that you don't understand dramazitation. That being the reason I used periods, rather than commas. Assuming your age, (I'm assuming you're around 15.) I'm not that you were aggravated by my wording, it being Lovecraftian, especially since I copy pasted from one of his books, in that specific sentence. He's very well known for his ever-so difficult wording, and, in general, books. To help you grow accustom to this, I suggest reading some pulp fiction. I highly insist that you read "Dream Quest of Unknown Kaddath". Once again, I mean no disrespect or harm while informing you of this, I am just trying to inform you. I feel as if you are very intelligent, so I'm trying to appeal to you in a logical way, rather than an emotional way. Also, I did mot plaugerise his wording, I did source him for that sentence. With kind regards, LovecraftianTerror (talk) 22:08, June 27, 2016 (UTC)LovecraftianTerror

Poem? Not likely, it's just a good element to use, in my opinion. Also, I'm sorry that I seemed to be condescending, and, rereading it, I can see why you believe I was. You're probably somwhere around my level of intelligence, given your ranking here. If you still feel like I'm being condescending, remind yourself you far out rank me, and I'm pleading with practically all my might, AND that I'm making a fool of myself. It's not that I don't wish to improve my story, it's simply that I believe doing so would kill the pulp vibe, which many readers haven't been introduced to here, and I feel that some would like it. I plea (not sarcastically or ironically) that you consider remembering that pulp fiction is quite an aquired taste, and that they are known for being short and rushed. (Yes, I understand that comma wasn't required, but I enjoy using them, as to give my work emotion.)  I strongly bid you read Lovecraft and Lord Dunsey, as you MAY enjoy my work. (Given that I don't traditonally do pulp fiction, I strongly insist on the "may" part.) If I were to prove I could write an entirely new story with a not-so rushed story line, would you consider posting this story?

I'm sorry,  I just wanted to do pulp fiction SO bad, I just don't know how to. I'm sorry I wasted so much of your time. I'll work to better at it, before ever even attempting again. Also, could I possibly leave the story on your page when I think it's good enough, just for you to tell me what to improve?

Okay, I wasn't trying to humble-brag. I'm clearly doing something wrong when it comes to creepypasta. Is it more about complicity rather than simplicity. Should I make "I Know You Can" longer? It won both a local and a regional story contest I entered it into back when I was in 10th grade. I feel as if there is something I'm missing, even if it is simply needing to make the story longer. COuld you point out specific errors you believe are there so I can correct it?

I do see your point, but, considering I can think of few realistic creepypastas, I didn't believe it was an issue, and, given that this DOES (< Please don't regard that as being rude, I'm trying to be as nice as possible.) have feedback, (Positive ones) I think it's fine. COuld we possibly bring in a third party of any kind?

Eh, I think I'm losing it. I shouldn't care this much about it. I really shouldn't care at all. But, I do. What bothers me about this, is I used to be regarded as a wonderful author, however, I've grown lazy. It's to much of a bother to me now to even write one of my longer better stories. Pehaps my laziness is why I'll fail. But who knows. You know what? I'll stay up all night, just to get a story wrote, and, I'll type it out completely. I'm going to go all in. Sorry for pestering you.

Fine. I'll take it to the reader's workshop. You win.

Blog Story
I found this. It is an old blog (from 2013), but it seems to gain about 200 views each week (if the insights page is to be trusted). MrDupin (talk) 20:47, June 28, 2016 (UTC)


 * By the way, what does the Sort template actually do? I notice that it has no effect on how pages get sorted on All Pages, so what is its purpose? MrDupin (talk) 21:09, June 28, 2016 (UTC)


 * I see, thanks. MrDupin (talk) 22:10, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Why is my story deleted?

Re: Edits
(Meant to respond two hours ago but damn power went out) Real sorry about that, I assumed that it was technically changing the plot of the story. I'll try not to fuckup like that again.

And just so I won't embarrass myself again in my rollback app, would you please confirm that these are the correct naming conventions? "Nouns, verbs, and the first and last words in a title are capitalized. Articles, (a, as, the) conjunctions, (and, but or, so, for, yet) and short prepositions (at, in, on, of, to, off, by) remain uncapitalized." Thanks, apologizes once again. "Don't get hot and flustered,  use a bit of mustard!"  02:24, June 29, 2016 (UTC)


 * In that case, the app should be going up tomorrow. Finally, would I be going by AP capitalization for the titles? "Don't get hot and flustered,   use a bit of mustard!"  02:49, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Whoops!
Just got your message Empy, my sincere apologies! I had no idea that could be done! Thank you! Luigifan100 04:17, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Okay, so I am trying to appeal a story but I do not see an option to add my comment on the appeals page anywhere. The story is "David Laughs in His Sleep". It was deleted for reupload (plus a 3 day ban which I found a little harsh). I think it is safe to say I have no idea how to properly use the wiki and am trapped in Writers Workshop for any story I write. I have no idea how to use the showcase, even after reading through it. I am not getting how you post a link to the page and only the name shows up. I understand how to submit for contribute, but have no clue what to do after. Back to the appeal, without a way to add to the appeal page how can I appeal this?

Demuerto 12:25, June 29, 2016 (UTC)Demuerto

RE: User Templates
Thank you so much for the suggestion! I much prefer the second template you provided. :) I appreciate the assistance!  --BlizzardLemon (talk) 18:24, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Thank you very much for the info, friend! I'll keep that in mind. I don't think anyone will want to narrate my work, but you never know! :D--BlizzardLemon (talk) 19:02, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

I am sorry for bugging you. But I am curious as to why my story, "Hangman Harold" was deleted. I've checked the quality standards and find that I can not find any complications. But there might have been a few things I have missed. I do not wish for a restoring of the story. But I do wish an explanation to see what I have done incorrectly. And I apologize for not meeting the standards, if that is the problem. Scary Rolly Polly Michael (talk) 19:43, June 29, 2016 (UTC)Scary Rolly Polly Michael

Hey empy. I have uploaded a second draft of "The Babysitter" (not separate) on the writers workshop. I've already asked christian but I wanted to ask you to review it as well.

Creepypastalover32 (talk) 03:44, June 30, 2016 (UTC)Creepypastalover32Creepypastalover32 (talk) 03:44, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

Extra Images
I don't know if purging useless images is an important thing but there are some that could be deleted now that I'm not using them. I didn't realize that I could just replace an image so I was uploading the new versions as separate images. The files are: JLTR.png, NRTOR.png, PTJO.png, rowboat.png, spiderland.png, dogchildren.png, and dogchildren2.png. I know it sounds like a peon job, but as I always say: "Peon them before they peon you!" XD Umbrello (talk) 04:33, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

I think I dun goof'd
Hello,

So, in an attempt to ensure my story (Past's Landing) was free from blacklisted subjects, I removed all explicit video game references (i.e. Playstation 2 and SNES) and I resubmitted it a third time. The trouble with that this time around is it said I'm now disallowed from posting it. I would appreciate perhaps having an admin review it and give it the approval (or denial), then see where we go from there.

Diovengeance92 (talk) 04:44, June 30, 2016 (UTC)Damien I.O.

Thank you very much for the criticism. It will help the next time I attempt a pasta.I usually try to keep the grammar and speling my number one priority. So I do forget completely about consistency and clarification. But before posting, I'll check to make sure I don't slip up as much. Again, thank you very much. Scary Rolly Polly Michael (talk) 13:46, June 30, 2016 (UTC)Scary Rolly Polly Michael

The original pasta was named Polman. Here is the link to the story: https://www.dropbox.com/s/0nel13ifwyhe0vn/Poolman%2C%20an%20original%20creepypasta%20by%20Dynamic%20Nightmare%20Fuel.txt?dl=0

Forgot the signature

Dynamic Nightmare Fuel (talk) 21:18, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

Hey Empy,

I know you might be kind of tired of seeing me around here, as I may have come off as agitating in the past, due to my actions. However, I've come to ask what "channels" I have to go through to get my story re-approved.

Now, before you ask if it's the same terrible story, no, it isn't. I've spent the last couple of months detailing the pasta, and adding new features to make it less... Tryhard-ish? Anyway, just curious as to where I can request it to be re-added, I think you might like this newer version way better than the previous.

Thanks!

Tony Potato (talk) 02:22, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

PSA: Demon Summoning
So I wrote a story called "PSA: Demon Summoning," posted it, and it almost immediately got deleted. I'm not exactly sure why it was, to be honest. Is it because it's a comedy story? I'm genuinely confused. Please let me know. Thank you.

The Goddamn Dorkpool (talk) 18:31, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Oh, ok, thanks for letting me know. I probably should post it on my site or something.

Anyway, thanks for responding and explaining.

The Goddamn Dorkpool (talk) 18:53, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Glad you enjoyed the humor of the story, and thanks for saying so.

Also, the story is posted to my site now. I've got a link, if you're curious:  http://dorkpoolriffs.weebly.com/etc

The Goddamn Dorkpool (talk) 01:07, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Check the Front Page
Thanks for the congratulations! It means a lot to have my story chosen. And it's great to be able to contribute to a great community.

ChristianWallis (talk) 20:59, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Videos
I didn't even think about that. Thanks for the heads-up and the edits! I appreciate all the help. :-D Raidra (talk) 01:47, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Story
May I please have a copy of the '"My Obsession," the Video' story that was deleted? I want to upload it to the writers' workshop. My on-harddrive copy seems to have been overwritten... Thanks.

DUMBLECUCK (talk) 10:32, July 2, 2016 (UTC)Dumble


 * Done.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 12:15, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Hello my story got deleted and I was wondering how would I be able to post the story back with the grammar checked.

Deletion Request
I just posted a pasta that I'm not too proud of. It was an older story, about a year and some change old that I just said "fuck it I'm posting it" without really taking into consideration the quality standards and the cliche of it. I was wondering if you could delete it. The Picker Thanks in advanced. GreyOwl (talk) 19:58, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Proposition
So firstly I have to thank you for your Support vote on the rollback app, so obviously thanks a lot for that.

I'm not sure if you're familiar with The Velvet Underground, but they were an avant-garde rock group from the 60s-70s, and Lou Reed was the lead member. They made a song in 1968 which featured a rock instrumental in the right speaker and a short story narration in the left. It was titled "The Gift". The story was written by Lou Reed while he was in college. I like the story and think that it might make an interesting addition to the wiki, however I'm not sure if it's up to quality standards. When you have some spare time, would you mind giving the short story a read and weighing in on its possible inclusion to the site? No rush.

And by the way, you that said this user did a bad edit, but it appears you never reverted their edit. "Don't get hot and flustered,  use a bit of mustard!"  02:38, July 4, 2016 (UTC)


 * Alright, sweet, I'll get the thing proofread, formatted, cited, video-linked, and posted when I get the chance. Thanks. "Don't get hot and flustered,   use a bit of mustard!"  03:29, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

Much appreciated. Happy Fourth. "Don't get hot and flustered,  use a bit of mustard!"  18:08, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

I'm about to rename the story "Devoted To Light" to "Devoted to Light". The "Rename associated talk page" box is checked and I assume this story doesn't need a redirect. Does the "Rename subpages of talk page" box remain unchecked? The form states that "This page has no subpages.". Sorry. "Don't get hot and flustered,  use a bit of mustard!"  02:20, July 6, 2016 (UTC)


 * No I don't believe I do, thank you. One thing I've noticed however is that my name hasn't turned green; I assume I just need to wait longer for it to take effect. I'll go ahead and rename that page then. "Don't get hot and flustered,   use a bit of mustard!"  02:38, July 6, 2016 (UTC)


 * Oh, maybe my name having punctuation is messing it up? Or my signature, somehow? I really have no idea either, to be honest. Getting the help of a tech-savvy individual would probably be best. Maybe they can fix it, on the MONITOR! Also, I'm hoping this isn't really some sort of anti-alien, speciesism thing.


 * So despite your incorrect renaming statement, if I'm renaming a page, is having "Rename associated talk page" checked and "Rename subpages of talk page" unchecked ideal? "Don't get hot and flustered,   use a bit of mustard!"  03:05, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

I've got the story ready for posting, only problem is that there is already a story here named "The Gift". Coincidentally looking over it I'm not sure if it meets QS. Please let me know what you think of it; if it does meet QS then I'll come up with a new name for Lou Reed's story here. " Don't get hot and flustered ,  use a bit of mustard !"  01:11, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Editing
I can't say if this counts as vandalism or as an appropriate edit, but I thought I'd bring it to your attention anyway.

ChristianWallis (talk) 13:31, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

URGENT AND IMPORTANT
Hi Empy,

Do you have a personal email or any way I can contact you offsite quickly? There's something I need to tell you which can't be delayed.

Thanks

Tiaxn (talk) 15:01, July 4, 2016 (UTC)
 * Sorry about the late reply (ironic, I know). Please check your inbox.
 * Thanks

Blogicle
Found this blogicle.

 Ruckus Q uantum   16:39, July 5, 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for deleting my story
I just wanted to say thank you as I didn't really think it was of good enough quality myself and realized I should have made a better plot. I will revise more from now on. Best Regards, TbombTheAltHistorian (talk) 21:46, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

Hey! I want to thank you for giving me honest feedback on my story! Im sorry i wasted your time with it and im sorry it wasnt that good.

Aidanmcg666 (talk) 00:10, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Spam comment
Thought I'd bring this spam to your attention.

ChristianWallis (talk) 10:22, July 8, 2016 (UTC)


 * Done.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 10:30, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

A small question
Hello. I'm sorry to bother you, but I recently posted a story called "Woman With A Screwdriver" and it instantly got deleted. Like, a few seconds after it was posted. I'm really confused, but is it a spin-off or is it because I forgot to change the mode from Visual to Source? Unless, my wording and/or sentences are confusing.

Again, sorry to bother you and please answer to stop being so confused. Probably sounded kind of demanding, even if it wasn't intended to be. That One Gaming Author (talk) 22:50, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Would you like to review something for me?
I know you are a busy man, but if you could find the time to review my story on the writers workshop, Venomous, I'd be extremely grateful. I was considering posting it to Whitix's contest, so I'll need all the help I can get. There should be little to no grammtical errors, and the story is not too long, so hopefully it shouldn't take much of your time!

Thankyou in advance, Anarchic Operations (talk) 01:37, July 9, 2016 (UTC)

Further discussing deleted story.
I'm not really sure if I should be replying in the "Deletion Appeal" section or here, but since the deletion section is an important Wiki tool I don't think it would be wise to clog it up with continual conversation. So, I'm just going to say my piece here:

There was a narrative to the story. Certainly it was unclear, ambiguous and left a lot more questions than answers - but is the necessarily a bad thing? Horror is supposed to leave you confused and uncomfortable. It's supposed to confuse you, it's supposed to leave things to your imagination. Knowledge is the apex predator of fear, and the more rules you give your story and it's universe the less scary it becomes. A big part of fear is not knowing what's going on. That's why we're all afraid of the dark.

Would you have found the story more acceptable if it was explained that the reason a man's brain was hooked up to a computer system was that an especially scummy company or organization was trying to build a superintelligent, obedient artificial intelligence to create dynamic advertisements and marketing and all of it was part of an even bigger plot by an Illuminati-type organization to get millions of people to buy dangerous products that make them submissive and infertile?

Maybe I could have given just a little bit more information to make the narrative more coherent, but isn't mystery and ambiguity a vital part of horror fiction? And if the narrative I just described (as an example, not the definitive explanation of the story) is flawed or doesn't entirely make sense, wouldn't ambiguity and mystery be an effective way to compensate for that problem?

I'm sorry if you're annoyed or bothered by this message, but I have a lot of thoughts on this matter and the topic in general, and I feel the need to express them. DoctorBleed (talk) 23:40, July 9, 2016 (UTC)

My final question for tonight is this:

If I submit the story to the writer's workshop, add more content to it, make the plot more coherent and give the reader more to work with, is there a chance my story can go back up? Am I allowed to try to fix it? Or is it completely rejected and not allowed to be on the site period? DoctorBleed (talk) 00:09, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

So, would you be alright with me submitting a new, rewritten draft to the Writer's Workshop? Because I actually am quite willing to rewrite the story fresh from the start if I can make it better. DoctorBleed (talk) 00:21, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Then the challenge is accepted. If the original format is unacceptable, I can easily change the framing device. There's more than one way to tell a story but a human brain kept alive by machines. DoctorBleed (talk) 00:32, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

URGENT
This user recently posted this page which may seem blank with the exception of the delete template, but check the history and you will see that the page was originally a picture of a penis. I think this goes against the rules of this wiki if not wikias TOU. WhatIsDees (talk) 15:13, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Possible plagarism
Good morning Empy, some users are reporting this story: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Sawney%27s_Cave#comm-546918, as being copied word for word from wikipedia, however here is the link for the wikipedia article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sawney_Bean. It may have been copied from there or elsewhere, but I am not sure. Thanks! Luigifan100 14:04, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

REASON OF DELETION ?
im still unclear, would you tell me why my story was deleted, not that i really care im just woundering, i belieave the story was called" K Y O K I

zumokiworks335 22:55, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

Hi! I realized that you recently deleted my pasta.

I would like to know your reasoning behind doing so. I have looked through the Quality Standards, yet I can't find the reason why. Maybe I'm just blind.

I'm thinking of writing a book, so I would like to know my mistakes this time, so I don't make them again.

Thanks

DarkRose111 (talk) 19:41, July 12, 2016 (UTC)Nicole aka Blade

hey despite my terrible skill at writing creepypastas is there somewhere on the wiki where i can practice writing and get feed back at the same time or maybe something close to what im asking for??

zumokiworks335 05:48, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

I'm Back c:
Hey! Haven't been on here for awhile. Anyways could you give me some tips on writing a CreepyPasta? It's good to see you! Haven't talked in awhile.

Your's

SilentKillerlurks (talk) 09:08, July 13, 2016 (UTC)SilentKillerlurks

Thank you! I'll be sure to go onto those links. There's one thing i ask. Will the chat room ever come back?

Yours SilentKillerlurks (talk) 09:25, July 13, 2016 (UTC)SilentKillerlurks

question
I saw your (in my eyes) very helpful critique of the story Ms Candycane and I wondered if you could maybe spare some time to look at my story in the workshop titled 'Gracious Host'. It's my first and I would love to know how I can improve it.

Apologies if you don't want someone asking directly.

Nachtrae (talk) 09:48, July 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the reply. No worries on being busy, I know how that feels! Take your time! Nachtrae (talk) 19:12, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re:
Why exactly was my story deleted? CappkaTalk 17:19, July 13, 2016 (UTC)
 * Well? It doesn't take 10 minutes with a quick respond. CappkaTalk 17:30, July 13, 2016 (UTC)
 * I didn't realise you go quite in depth with story reviews, so I thought I was going to get a quick response for something minor. Anyway, I'm regards to the story, I don't think you completely understand the narrative.


 * "The voices explained his surroundings quite well" and the "****" were supposed to signify that the court was all in a man's [killers] head. I also tried to imply this with "his mind a tangle of broken words and flawed logic". Basically, I'm trying to capture the essence of a psychopath, so I wrote the story in that manner to show fragmentation and insanity. It's a little complicated, and mainly the fault of my purposeful vagueness with the characters.


 * I don't really understand how "flowery" or some slight grammatical stuff that's only a result of different dialect detracts from the story, but that's a matter of taste.


 * Anyway, thanks for responding, and sorry for my impatience (just a little misunderstanding on my part). One final thing, though, will I be able to post again once I revise the story a little bit (and get feedback)? CappkaTalk 18:30, July 13, 2016 (UTC)
 * I thought some of the ridiculousness of the court section ("...of this tradition", "The murder of this man is now legalised nation-wide.") sort of implied that to an extent, but I guess I got it wrong. Also, I didn't use a thesaurus when writing the story, or try to use big words, I just wrote the story as I always do. Anyway, here's a link to the revised story, I've fixed all the issues you had: http://pastebin.com/UPTLrJ6v
 * CappkaTalk 19:12, July 13, 2016 (UTC)
 * I see where you're coming from, but I feel the words I use are best suited for the story. Anyway, I really appreciate the type of feedback you give, considering all the other stuff you do on here. I used to have an account on another wiki unaffiliated with wikia, where I was an admin and had 13000 edits in one year, so I get the amount of work you do. CappkaTalk 19:27, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

A million thanks!
I appreciate it! :-D ~skeleton-related pun pending~ ;-) Raidra (talk) 01:27, July 14, 2016 (UTC)
 * "I'm doing a few other things atm"- a tactful way to say, "I'm having to put up with hateful crybabies!" Raidra (talk) 01:40, July 14, 2016 (UTC)
 * I misread that as "pooping in" at first. In any case, good luck with everything, have a good night, and may you have plenty of humerus moments! Raidra (talk) 01:58, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

License
Yeah, dude, I'm just going through and changin them all to cc by-nc. If you could do a figure in the fog and possibly her red right hand (not sure if it's locked...it was a spotlighted pasta) I'd surely appreciate it.

Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 02:50, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Well, much obliged. I don't care what everyone else says, Emp. You're OK in my book!

Re:
I feel I fixed everything you felt was wrong with the story, or so I thought. Is there anything inherently wrong with the story ("flowery" language e.g.), or is this just a matter of grammar?

Not looking for a new indepth review, just a brief explanation. CappkaTalk 05:57, July 14, 2016 (UTC)
 * What exact "story" issues are you referring to? Is it the language I use, or the previous contradictions you found? CappkaTalk 06:06, July 14, 2016 (UTC)
 * The reason I don't give insight into the patients overall character or motivations is because he is insane; I'm trying to paint a picture of his own insanity. The first section (the patients mind) is purposefully vague and slightly nonsensical because I'm trying to present to the reader an interesting way in which his affliction (schizophrenia or similar disorder) functions. The entire court is him ("Any discussion of this tradition" - the patient feels murder is a tradition, "the loss of life, the possible mass hysteria, the victims," - the patient considers what might result, "The murder of this man is now legalised." - the patient comes to a conclusion), so I tried to make it slightly irrational and confused.


 * Capturing how an insane person thinks isn't always easy, so I attempted to do it in a different way. With the court section, tht is the patient's thought process, done in a millisecond. After the "****", the story then changes to real life, showing the result of the patient's insanity. It's not written in great detail to demonstrate his perception of the world: outside matters, interactions, e.g. don't matter to him because he is consumed by his mind. Even though I wrote it in third person, the story is from the patient's point of view the whole time.


 * I completely understand your gripes with my piece, but it's entirely about the protagonists insanity. It defines who he is, his actions, and what he will do. I guess I didn't imply that enough, so maybe that's where the problem lies. CappkaTalk 07:33, July 14, 2016 (UTC)
 * The story was a little experimental, so those peculiarities you feel aren't unjustified. Anyway, psychopathy from insanity doesn't have motivations, people suffering from these sorts illnesses (at least in popular culture) who kill do it to cause chaos for no reason. That was my thought process when writing the piece, thus I tried to show how all-consuming insanity can be for a murderer, but I guess the lack of insight does more harm then good. I'll do some further revision for the second section before posting again. Thanks for all the help. CappkaTalk 13:01, July 14, 2016 (UTC)
 * Revised the second section as per your feedback, here's the link. Is it good enough to post on the wiki yet? CappkaTalk 15:57, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Question
Excuse admin. I have made a creepypasta in the form of a screenplay. It is 91 pages long. Can I upload it here? Thanks.

Creeper50 (talk) 13:56, July 14, 2016 (UTC)Creeper50


 * Addressed.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 14:45, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Why I made Number 17
Hello there Empy!

I am the author of the denied Number 17 and I want to tell you something about that.

First, I rushed the story because of homework and exams and I did not have time to watch for mistakes

Second, I really hate that girl. So you were right. I AM a hater.

Third, the power cut also happened to me the exact day and I was scared shitless. And when I saw her on TV, I thought that everyone was screwing me.

Fourth, you asked why the protagonist raged. Well, I forgot to mention that the protagonist was a sociopath who hated everyone better than him.

The third one and the total hate about her led to the creation of this obscurity.

Whatcha say?


 * Addressed.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 15:05, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

hey, um empy,  I had just posted a blog post that was pitching a creepypasta idea, and it got deleted right away, what gives...?

zumokiworks335 00:25, July 15, 2016 (UTC)

Applying for rollback
I failed to follow your advise, Empy. Temptation got the best of me, and I can't stop myself from doing it. Huhh, welp, what has been done is done. Just knew I had to tell you this.

And hey, before I forget, can you revoke Tio's rollback rights? Because, you know, just for the formalities.

 Ruckus Q uantum   19:02, July 15, 2016 (UTC)

Question about a creepypasta
Hi, I was wondering if you could tell me whether or not my story is okay to be upload to the creepypasta wiki. My story is called "No Control" and it is in the writer's workshop. I got some feedback on it from another user, and I have used that feedback to refine my story. Would you be able to tell me if the story's okay to post? I don't want to post it and have it be deleted right away.

Also, this is my first time leaving a talk message, so I hope I'm doing it correctly.

PositivelyToxic (talk) 00:13, July 16, 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, take your time.

PositivelyToxic (talk) 00:22, July 16, 2016 (UTC)

workshop review
Hey Empy,

I realize you're probably busy with managing the salt mines and deleting stories, but could you take a peek at the two stories I have in the Workshop (that are not yet uploaded as a completed story) and share your thoughts? One's 'White Light' and the other is 'Return Him'.

Thanks!

Nachtrae (talk) 14:00, July 16, 2016 (UTC)

ps: I'll throw further review requests in here to not swamp you with more and more new sections added.


 * No problem man, I realize we all have our own lives that are vastly more important than a hobby on the internet. I'm very grateful for your feedback on 'White Light' and will be taking your advice to heart.


 * Good luck on the move!


 * Nachtrae (talk) 16:44, July 16, 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I uploaded my story about 10 minutes ago and it was taken down. I assume it was because of the "Wall of Text" rule. I am very sorry about that, as I didn't realize that it had been reformatted when I pasted it in from my Google Doc. I respectfully request permission to reupload it in the correct format. Thank you.

TheRealLancaster (talk) 00:25, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for your reply, but I have one more question. Is it a good start?

TheRealLancaster (talk) 00:54, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

What about the title? I will be completely happy as long as you got the meaning behind the title.

TheRealLancaster (talk) 01:04, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Yes, yes, but do you know what it MEANS? TheRealLancaster (talk) 01:09, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

It is actually in reference to the name of the recording: "Ghost Tape 10"

The phrase "Number 10" was also used among the Southern troops as a way of describing something as "Really bad" or, in my uncle's words, "Something being pure evil, like the work of the Devil."

TheRealLancaster (talk) 01:18, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Hey, I wanted to speak to an admin. What do you guys think of the some ordinary gamers wiki?

I have been working out the grammatical errors. BUt the story issues i have to ask you about. The old man is mentioned only a little for a reason. I woulnd't put something random into a story. I say the OLd Man loved to hunt, especially predator hunting (coyotews). HIs house is the abandoned one. It's no coincidence that the "creature's" lair is in that same place. And that the creature kills coyotes. Is the creature a demon of the old man, who was thought to be a murder? it's made to make you think. I want it to be a subtle idea about the whole mystery of where the creature came from and what it is. As for the ending, The narrator just went through a horrible expierence. He's not going to be mentally stable after that. The guy just saw one of his lifelong friends ripped to shreds. He is in shock, and is trying to block out the memory, The traumtic experience happened wiht nature, so his mind is trying to turn nature back into a positive thing for him again. This is why he goes to fish at the end. I repeat at the beinning and the end of the story. "Fishing is relaxing, because you are alone with nature."

HIs mind has resorted to this as is something good with nature that keeps him still... going? It's hard to describe. Like a detachmentfrom reality. Basically he is blocking out all  now bad memories associated with nature by thinking abiut his best one and bbbeing obssesed on it. You get the idea hopefully. For the deer flipping out, im not a doctor, but that actually happned the first time i went deer hunting. the whole shooting it three times happened. I'm assuming it has to do with a muscular  and nerve reaction.

If this si the second message youve gotten from me like this, sorry. my computer froze when i was senidng this meesage the first time and i dont know if it ended up sending, I am working with the grammer issues, however i have reason for the story "issues". There is a reason I did not mention the old man again. I didn't levae him out on purpose. I said that the old man loved to hunt,escpecially predator (coyote) hunt. His old house is also the abanonded hosue where the creature's lair is. This is not a coincidence. It is implieng that the creature could possibly a demon or ghost of the old man. He was a suspected murder. I'm trying to make the readers think about it. For the ending: The narrator just saw his best friend ripped to shreds, and a lot more traumatizing stuff. No one would still be ok mentally after that. He is in shock, his mind is trying to bblock out the traumatzing memories. To do this he becomes stuck on the good memories he has about nature. There is a reason I say "Fishing is calming, because you are alone with" twice. At the beginning and at the end. He has become detached from reality. It's sorta hard to explain but you get the idea. It's supposed to be complelty left field. You are supposed to be shcoked at it. But once you think about it, it makes sense. As for the deer flipping out, it happened to me in real life. The whole having to shoot the deer three times happned too. I'm not a doctor, I don't know what causes it, I assume it's the nerves and the muscles spazzing. Sad shit dude, I was like 8 and almost started crying. I actually ment horrible, i have no idea how perfume ended up there lol sorry. All the story stuff is there for a reason. If you read carefully, you'll notice i describe the creature at the beginning of the story (Deer has black soulless eyes, bobcat lips curled in snarl, pointed ears.,the trees branches are like long arms with claws at the end.) Sure it has a bit of backstory and extra stuff in the beginning, but so did Penpal, and that is a great Creepypasta. I'm sorry im not going to give a mindless story were some 2d protaginst sees a creepy looking person by there bed and thats suppsoed to give someone a indepth story. Stories are ment to nhave deeper meanings. I had to shoot the deer three times. forshadowing the three major encounters with the deer. There are three chracters. Three is a recurring number. Not for a particular reason. Mainly becuase I like a story to have more than a barebones surface. Sorry i went on for a while there.

Sorry I just got your message I didn't mean to send it twice So don't think i got really mad or something. But i did talk about some more issues with my story at the very end of the second one so you could just tread the end. My computer froze and i thought it didn't send the first time

I'' try to make it more obvious in the story, but I assume most people shoudl be able to connect the dots, if they are paying the kind of attention someone should when reading a book. Penpal was a crepypasta that started out with a lot of excess, and has a lot of unknown plot points. Like the old lady. It's a creepypasta, It's supposed to be mysterious. I mean how much more obvious could i get without telling the reader directly. shoudl i write in bold text: the demon/creature who likes to hunt coyotes lives in the same old house of the mysetrious old man who liked to hunt coyotes. And for me, it's not really the ghost of the old man, It's kinda of like a what if possibiltiy for readers. I like stories to be more depth than: A creepy man smiled at a 2d chracter in his bed. The End. It's not even supposed to be a big part of the story. I have like two sentances refrecning it. It also build the creepy atmoshpere of the farm and the lake.

If you really pay attention too, you'll notice i describe the entire creature at the beginning too. (Dead deer's eyes soulles and all black, bobcat curled lips and pointy ears, tree branches long arms with claws.) My favorite is the soulless eyes of the dead deer. Tells you a lot about what the creature truely is. He is a lot more than just a cretaure. A metaphor for the worst of nature, more like it. A metaphor for the dark side of nature. What other creepypastas get that deep?

To be honest i think Creepypasta is shit. everytime i post something it's either bugged or deleted for no reason.

Too Funny?
Remember that story I wrote not too long ago, "PSA: Demon Summoning?" Well, I wrote something...similar. It's, in a way, slightly creepier, but it's still very humorous.

Now, rather than post the new story (called "How To Deal With A Haunting") right away, and risk it getting almost immediately deleted (seriously, you delete fast. Go you), I thought it best to ask you if this story would be accepted on the Wiki. You know, save us both some time and effort.

Anyway, the story's hereif you wouldn't mind taking a look.

Thank you.

The Goddamn Dorkpool (talk) 01:56, July 20, 2016 (UTC)

Rollback Deadline Question
In regards to the deadline, which is the 21st, is the deadline the start of the 21st (midnight) or the end of the 21st (11:59 PM)? I was wondering because I wanted to know how long I have before changing my vote; trying to give as long of a response time for Ruckus as possible. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  19:47, July 20, 2016 (UTC)


 * Sounds good. Thank you! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  20:00, July 20, 2016 (UTC)

Application
Empy, can you please delete my rollback application page? I know it's sudden and kind of unprecedented; I'm asking you of this not because I fear I'll get more opposes than supports, but because I know I'm currently not in the right shape to handle such enormous task. Real-life pressure has rendered me incapable of contributing generally anything to the Wiki. That's primarily the reason why you barely see me make edits after I applied for rollback.

It sucks, I know, it definitely makes me feel like a bag of steaming shit, but it just has to be done. I think being a rollback here doesn't make my already terrible situation any better. Possibly, it would just make my real-life stress worse.

After going through too much pressure in real life, I've finally come to believe... maybe the position's not just for me and that the rollback application wasn't a good idea to begin with....

I hope I didn't bother you too much. Thank you for at least considering my petty application.

 Ruckus Q uantum   12:44, July 21, 2016 (UTC)


 * Done.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 13:17, July 21, 2016 (UTC)

Appeal
dude this is no hate but give people a chance to better thare storys befor you just deleat it and that was a tru story so wtf. you take what you do to far. did you even read my story and give the publick a chance to give thare comment on my story. Badthinghappen (talk) 02:07, July 23, 2016 (UTC)

Hey buddy, been doing some side work for another channel and I am currently doing your Evils, Angels and Ethereals again. There is not much difference in Solomon's Key, just improved visuals with the same narration and music score. Abraham's Dagger, I totally re-did and gave it a treatment it deserves. I hope you like it.

https://youtu.be/jnfIPwOaHHM

Solomon's Key https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vFHTt1ucpOk

KillaHawke1 (talk) 14:47, July 23, 2016 (UTC)

Dear EmpyreaLnvective

I would like some sugesstions for uploading my story as you are not aware I have a disabilaty associated with this kind of thing so I would appreciate some suggestions but I may need some help im sorry if it does not meet the code and thank you for going over my story

The Creepy Artist (talk) 17:41, July 23, 2016 (UTC)The Creepy Artist

Deleted Pasta
Hey Empy,

I got a message saying that you deleted my creepypasta "A Midnight Thirst".

I was wondering the specific reason why it was. All I got was a message that said it didn't meet the quality standards and I read them and I haven't completely understood why it didn't. I checked my spelling and grammar several times before submitting it. I was pretty sure it passed the minimum standards. I felt the message I got was pretty vague.

The only thing that I got after reading the Quality Standards page is that I felt like my wording in the last sentence and my title were awkward. We are our own worst critics after all.

I do want to be a better writer and don't want to through a hussy fit over this incident. To be honest, I am a little upset. Not because it got deleted, but it's because I don't know what I did wrong. Vagueness upsets me more than harsh criticism.

I've posted it on the Writer's Workshop to get some feedback from more people. I'm pretty sure I should've done that first before submitting it now that I think about it LOL.

All I ask is these two things if possible. I'm pretty sure you have a lot to work through as an admin:

Can you tell me what I did wrong and tell me what I could've done better?

Can I have another chance submitting it again?

Sincerely:

RobWalker (talk) 21:38, July 23, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry
Hi there empy!

You banned me three days ago for intimidation and trolling.

I am really sorry for what I did before and sorry for possibly causing controversy.

I learnt my lesson after that.

That is all I want to say.

Hello. I released I pasta known as "My Online Friend." It was deleted literal seconds after it was posted, and according to the page, it was done by you. Please explain.

Mr. Dankster (talk) 23:45, July 23, 2016 (UTC)Mr. Dankster

Thank you for your criticisms and specifics on what I can improve. I will definitely read over your message whenever I decide to make another story similar to this one. I would also like to thank you for going out of your way to respond to my question.

Mr. Dankster (talk) 01:22, July 24, 2016 (UTC)Mr. Dankster

Hey Travis. It's been a while. I wanted to ask you for a favor. I'm trying to get published in magazines, and I need someone to go through and delete all of my stories. A lot of the reqs stipulate that stories can't have been published or posted in any capacity prior to submission. I had a good time on here, but I'm pretty awful at managing my time, and with school coming back in September I'll be totally consumed. Can you erase what I've posted? With extreme prejudice.

Deletion Request
Hey Travis. It's been a while. I wanted to ask you for a favor. I'm trying to get published in magazines, and I need someone to go through and delete all of my stories. A lot of the reqs stipulate that stories can't have been published or posted in any capacity prior to submission. I had a good time on here, but I'm pretty awful at managing my time, and with school coming back in September I'll be totally consumed. Can you erase what I've posted? With extreme prejudice.

--GarbageFactory (talk) 05:15, July 25, 2016 (UTC)


 * Done.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 08:19, July 25, 2016 (UTC)

headsup
a user by the name of Why_u_no_929 vadalized ChristianWallis' page (replaced Christian's whole page with 'asshole'). I restored the content since I got the notification anyway, but figured I'd give you a headsup.


 * Done.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 08:08, July 25, 2016 (UTC)
 * And a troll falls. Yay!
 * Nachtrae (talk) 08:11, July 25, 2016 (UTC)

Question
ok you say my story was crap so can you give me some tips on how to make my storys better

Badthinghappen (talk) 14:04, July 25, 2016 (UTC)


 * Done.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 14:09, July 25, 2016 (UTC)

Hello
Sorry about double posting this. Made a slight mistake on leaving the message and wanted to fix it. I wanted to take a moment and say thank you again for reading my story and the message you left. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it and I understand your reasoning. Also, thank you for your offer of feedback! I would love to get your opinion after I go through some revisions on the previous story and on others in the future. I need to really crack down on myself and write more and I'm hoping to do more of that. Anyway, thank you again and take care. Omegaokami (talk) 00:23, July 27, 2016 (UTC)

I posted a revised story in a reply to my thread

Tide16

What do you think?\

Don't just leave me hanging man

hey im kinda new around here.i posted a story on the talk page i think (you told me to press the 'contribute' button then 'submit a story') but when i pressed them the loading seems to take forever.i guess im just asking for a little help on the basics of how to use this wiki Wwwdeucewww (talk) 18:06, July 27, 2016 (UTC)wwwdeucewww

I have fixed those two now. May I ask what stories issues. If you read the whole thing, you should have noticed I changed the monster by describing its presence as numbing. And when it grabs the protgaonist, the numbness swallows him...

Taking this seriously? I spent months writing this story and the last week and a half proofreading it. I'm sorry I dont see every little mistake. And you call three it's  instead of its lazy? I guess my story is good enough now though. But who would care abou the story? We're not on  website made for stories, nah

I'm sorry, Empyreallnvective. You're right, I didn't real you're whole review. I had skimme d over the parts like when you were telling me abiu the moonlight and everything. I was just in such a rush to get back to proffreading. I have gone back through and I am fixing the issues you have states yourself. I understand your frustation. Please forgive me

Tide16 (talk) 23:25, July 27, 2016 (UTC)

However this was always there:

 There was enough moonlight seeping through to see a little bit of the cave. And the first thing that had come into my sight was a body. A body that had been mutilated and gutted.

Sorry forgot

Tide16 (talk) 23:48, July 27, 2016 (UTC)

Well, this went and ruined my day :(

Cnoiles here..

What the heck?

Delete it in under 3 minuetes!?

Never mind, I saw your link.. Sorry

- Cnoiles

The Party Store Didn't Have Enough Candles
Happy birthday, ya dirty, booger eating, jenkem huffing, Rite-aid brand whisky drinking, Four Loko butt chugging, House of the Dead watching, E.L. James reading, tumblr account having, John Denver loving, pervert! "John fucking Denver!" Anyway, hope it's a good one, brother.

Jay Ten (talk) 10:20, July 28, 2016 (UTC)
 * Happy birthday, amigo, hope you have a good day :)


 * 11:04, July 28, 2016 (UTC)

Evil, Angels, Ethreals
Job's Ashes is a wrap. I hope you enjoy it! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vqYfNA1WdIs KillaHawke1 (talk) 03:46, July 29, 2016 (UTC)

Ayyyyy
Hey. You might remember this babylicious face. I sort of kind of remember you! I've been off for a really long time and decided to seek someone I actually recognized. Is everybody I remember dead? Are we already in a new generation of Pasta Pals? It's like walking back into the middle school you went to and having everything you remember be suddenly brought back and yet still seeming so distant, if that makes any sense. How are things? How are you? Did I even like you? I don't remember! Remind me about the stuff.

Your majorly confused baby pal,

Indefinitesilence (talk) 03:43, July 30, 2016 (UTC)

... you hated me? Uh, okay. YOU VILLAINOUS SCUM. I SHALL INHERIT ALL THE EDITS. THEY WILL BE MINE AND YOU WILL BE DETHRONED FROM YOUR POSITION AS ADMIN.

Thank you for talking to a lowlife on-again off-again Creepypasta skank like myself, you ultra busy admin person. Enjoy the rest of your... umm... *INSERT TIME ZONE AND RELATIVE DAY HOUR HERE*

Indefinitesilence (talk) 04:22, July 30, 2016 (UTC)