Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25582513-20141026034817/@comment-25582513-20141026035856

alright thanks. first time i wrote a creepypasta so thanks for the constructive critisim. i also have seen some of the things but i never saw the qualitiy standards so yeah, thanks. I also chose to introduce the dark figure in the first sentence because it would make sense, and near the end he says he lives near the forest so may have chose to walk threw the forest which i will edit in.