Talk:It Has a Rather Lovely Ending

Nice work
Most video game creepypasta's boil down to the same basic concept but I like how original this one is. My advice is that you've done the video game thing and now move on to a new pasta IMMEDIATLY. You don't want to get a reputation as just another kid with a laptop writing generic video game pasta. Great story though! I like the idea of a video game that affects the mind.