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Welcome to my talk page ! How goes the ? Just make sure  doesn't bother you too much. You know what I always say, " ." Also, don't let your long-standing fear of  get the better of you. Feel free to leave a message and sign it with four tildes (~) Like this: ~ Also note, keep messages civil. If you leave an acerbic message expect me to respond in kind.

I just wanted to apologize for the multiple times I reloaded my deleted story. I am brand new to this site and I thought my story was being deleted accidentally, and I didn't realize there was a talk page where admins were trying to get in touch with me. Again I am very sorry. It won't happen again. I will review grammar and spelling and hopefully get my story correct. Have a great day! Spacecattt (talk) 21:56, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

I don't wanna throw a pity party, but I'd like to know why my pasta was deleted, please. I figured going to the person who deleted it would be the best way. If it was a formatting issue, it's because I foolishly posted it from my phone, and I do apologize in general for wasting your time with a substandard post. Also, I'd like a copy of it, because I couldnt find it on the wiki in time to copy and paste it before it was deleted. Thank you.

Cpatterson205 (talk) 22:02, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Fairytale
I have just written the sweetest little fairytale. It is just charming. Enjoy hehehe Rumplestilskin

HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 22:17, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Alright point taken
I'm at least still fixing the misspellings. BedrockPerson :D  23:11, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

TRAVIS :D
Sorry, lol. I've been gone for so long, and so much has happened. How you've been? I know this isn't the place to ask questions like this, but I'm just wondering.

Howdy Ho! (talk)

I saw! I'm so happy for you! And you deserve to be a b-crat. Like, I wouldn't have wanted anyone else to be one that's on this site besides you, if a camapign was did for it. You're just, cut out for it. lol What happened to the chat?

Howdy Ho! (talk)

I went on spinpasta recently looking for a few individuals, actually. In a way, I am happy the chat was taken off. However, there is no way to PM people unless you result to the sister sites. Which takes effort. Well, I'm persuing my dreams of becoming a roll backer. Talked to SOMEGUY about it yesterday, and he agreed that if I can get my article edits up and be active for a month or two, it'll make up for the months I was abscent. God, I hope so. I'd really hate to run, to just have my hopes and dreams crushed by a bunch of ugly "-" signs. I think I know the rules pretty well around here, though. I obviously still need work, but I'm sure I know the good, the bad, and the ugly.

Howdy Ho! (talk)

Won't be an issue for me, I never do bad edits. The only downfall is, that I over do it because I sniff out anything bad in the pasta. It's whatever though. It was nice talking to you Travis! I'll stop blowing up your messages now. Talk to you soon! Ciao! P.S. - The top of your Talk Page introduction has a minor grammar mistake, but I thought you'd want to know about it. (Also, don't let you(r) long-standing fear of)

Howdy Ho! (talk)

Re: Warning
OMG that's so friggin' weird o_o. The first time I tried to edit, I hit "Preview" and it showed the entire thing as one ¶, and only some of it, the rest was gone! But, I went into Visual and made sure it was fine, which it was. When I hit Publish the page looked fine. Sorry, it didn't show up for me .-. BedrockPerson :D 23:16, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Damn your fast
Thanks HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 23:38, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Dubage
So just a random question.

Since you live in Colorado do you smoke weed?
 * Inb4 Empy changes his profile pic to this. 20:29, March 6, 2015 (UTC)
 * Well played sir, well played. My avatar could also use bloodshot "Squidward's Suicide"-esque red eyes. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:31, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Please inform me why my story was not up to quality standards. I worked hard on it, and wish to have it published. Thank you.

Simmer2001 (talk) 22:53, March 6, 2015 (UTC)Simmer2001

Always happy to help
Trav,

I am more than happy to lend my assistance in maintaining the Showcase, especially since I was one of the early supporters for the idea.

Just give me a quick bit of info on what I would be expected to do, and of course, how to actually go about doing it. (I don't know how to move articles at the moment, so I would a crash course in that.)

Thanks,

Banningk1979 (talk) 23:46, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Sounds good
Yeah, I'm in, so go ahead add the promotion so I can start feeling it out.

Thanks for the oppurtunity! Banningk1979 (talk) 00:27, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the precise help, but I was wondering if by any chance, the story could be allowed to be accessed so I could get the story I worked pretty hard on. Thank you! Simmer2001 (talk) 02:13, March 7, 2015 (UTC)Simmer2001

can u tell me why mines was deleted? and how can i go back and edit it?04:29, March 7, 2015 (UTC)Yuki sane (talk)

Military stuff
Hey, happy to help, but not sure how much of it you'll be able to fix. First off, I love Catch-22, unfortunate that I didn't catch that reference.

So a few things: being in the airforce, he'd be an airman, not a soldier (minor thing since most people think of anyone in the armed services as a 'soldier'...really it only applies to army.)

Larger issues: He wouldn't be out of the military that fast. Now, since the character was born in 1985 and is a first lieutenant, I read this from the view of the current war in Iraq/Afghanistan. The homecoming is unrealistic...in reality you come back on big planes with the rest of your unit. Once you get home to your post there is a big welcoming ceremony and then over the next weeks you go through a battery mental tests to determine if you have anything that rattled loose over there. If they do determine you have something wrong with you, you get a crap ton of help (there have been some issues with vets who are out of the military having their benefits delayed, but somebody like this guy would have been getting seen from the second he set foot back on American soil.)  Bottom line, there's no one month cut off to mental help. And if he'd been identified as having mental issues, it would have probably taken them at least a year to get out of the military (assuming his time was up...as an officer there would be less likelihood of this happening...guys that fly get time added to their contract since they have to go through two years of flight school, meaning they are going to be in for at least 5-7 years.  Currently, a commissioned officer makes 1LT around 1.5 years and captain around 4.)

Lastly, (and this is probably the biggest as it's most essential to the story) he wouldn't have been able to see that kind of detail on the old man. The idea of bombers "swooping in" as you have him in this story is a thing of the past. Now pilots have laser guided munitions that they drop from a looong way off. An RPG wouldn't be taking down a fast mover like this (maybe...maybe a stinger missile) but instead would only be effective against helicopters (but those don't carry bombs). All that aside, there is a black and white thermal camera feed that pilots use for targetting. You can see all kinds of stuff on it, as far as where people are moving around and such (because thermal) but in reality its no more personal than waxing aliens in a video game...you can't see facial expressions or the like  Also, we didn't tend to bomb population centers in this war...really the only times were if guys on the ground could identify a building enemy was holed up in, they can call in a plane with a precision JDAM that would absolutely obliterate the building it hit, but not cause (too much) collateral damage around it.

So anyway, like I said, this was the sort of stuff that kept me from fully immersing myself in the story but, as a lot of it has to do with what makes the story have a point, I'm really not sure how much of it you can fix, lol. Hope that helps!

Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 21:13, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

My S*itty Mistakes
I've done goofed Travis. And I need help with undoing some really crappy edits if you're actually up right now as I am typing this.

Edit #2: I'm sure there's more to come (many many more) but here's this one for right now. (It keeps saying conflicting edits or something, then it just redos what I undid...?)

Mistake 1, Mistake 2, Mistake 3, Mistake 4 Mistake 5 Mistake 6 Mistake 7 (Not really sure if it's a mistake, you be the judge.)

Howdy Ho! (talk)

Possible fix
So I was just thinking about it: if you change the time/location of your story a lot of the stuff would fix itself. The biggest issues (help for mental issues/getting out that soon after redeployment/not being able to see the man up close due to technology) would be fixed if you changed the setting to Vietnam or earlier because we didn't have a good understanding of the mental trauma issues back then, the rules of engagement allowed for more atrocities, and the targeting tech was a bit more up close and personal. Also, if you set it back in WWII, it would fix the title, since it wasn't until the 50s (I think...it was after WWII anyways) that the Air Force became a separate branch from the army...so "soldier" would work in this case. Hope this helps!

Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 03:24, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Questions Concerning my Health on CP
I've really blown up your talk page within the past week. This is one of the reasons on why I wish there was chat still, but it's also a good thing it's gone I suppose. I'm going to reread the entire rules again; I don't think anyone on this site is feeling as horrible as I do. I feel like I owe this site now, although it has been taken care of. Is there any way at all to reset my edit stats? Because my article edits are false, as we all now know. I'm beginning to question what all is going to happen from here on out concerning me becoming a roll backer, I obviously don't know what I'm doing. If you read the conversation between me and Under, you'd know I did talk to SOMEGUY about this. A question I asked him that he didn't get time to reply to was what all do you need to do to a story for it to be considered a "good edit"? How much of it do you need to do? Thank you so much Travis, you have no idea how much of a help you are.

Edit #2- I'm not sure if you remember Maulle, but apparently when she/he applied to become a rollbacker, it was denied because she/he made poor edits. I'm confused on what she/he did wrong, and I'm scared that I'm prone to make the same mistakes. The Application

Edit #3- Alright, thanks. It means a lot, it really does.

Howdy Ho! (talk)

Formatting help?--Bakedbreadjen (talk) 07:39, March 8, 2015 (UTC)
Hello! This is my first time as an author and I just published my story. Except I'm not satisfied with how it's displayed/formatted and I have no idea on how to make it come out the way it exactly is like in the Visual Editor. any help/advice? It'd be much appreciated, thanks!

Story marked for review
Hello.

I came by to leave a message because of a story I wrote being marked for review. I understand the paragraphs were kinda liong and needed to be spaced out a bit better, but my question is as follows.

How long will it remain marked for review? I don't want to tell all of you how to do your jobs or anything, but I want some assurance it won't spend eternity in the "marked for review" category. Also, I see you did edit it and reviewed the changes, which made sense. So, how long will it spend in marked for review? Any idea? If you don't know exactly im fine, but I just wanted to know. I'm not upset or anything, I just really want to get it out there again soon. good day.Lilahdog568 (talk) 20:24, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Hello. My name is Travis (AKA Ninjatsl) I was just wondering why you deleted my Creepypasta 'Suits'. I got I didn't meet the 'Quality Standards' but if you could give me some more information about the deletion, I would really appreciate it. Ninjatsl (talk) 22:08, March 8, 2015 (UTC)Travis

So sorry
I'm so sorry about that, Empy. I don't know how that happend and I frankly feel foolish and embarassed. Is it possible to get you to just erase all my comments? That won't happen again, I can assure you. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:11, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

I saw on Humboldts page that one of the reasons you didn't want to erase his comments is that it would leave me speaking to myself. If it has any affect, I completely understand getting angry and saying shit you regret later- it happens to me a decent amount. If Humboldt still wants the messages gone, I obviously allow you to erase mine as well. ShawnHowellsCP (talk) 16:15, March 12, 2015 (UTC)

Category
Having trouble erasing the "Monster" category from In Torment. Mouse literally won't even click it, no clue why. ShawnHowellsCP (talk) 01:56, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

re team pasta
Thanks as always, Empy. Yeah, I can type 85 words a minute and my grammar ain't so bad, but I readily admit I just suck with programming. So, what do we have to do to get more people to contribute to the collaborative cliche pasta? I'm thinking about hitting up some talk pages. I can't believe Jay hasn't contributed - YES, I KNOW YOU ARE LISTENING, JAY, SO PLEASE CONTRIBUTE! HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:46, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Message
I was wondering if I am able to remove that message you sent me on my talk page. As said on the reply I originally sent on my talk page, I did not intend vandalism at all and I was really just curious about the Abuse Filter, seeing if it could catch 'fazbear'. Apparently it did not, so I deleted it as soon as my fingers could make the mouse click to undo the edit.

So, is it ok to remove that message, as it makes my history on the Wiki look bad, and I did undid the mistake before anyone else could possibly click on the page and find out. Once again, I was not intending anything to harm the page, it was just a test and mistake gone wrong.

Thank you. MyWorld (talk) 03:14, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Acutally i saw something strange. go onto nercosleep.net/backdoor it acutally works. Ricards322 (talk) 12:26, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Cliched Pasta
Hey Empy. Remember how you sort of participated in that "Cliched Pasta" that HumboltLycanthrope started? Well, I have completed a pasta of my own that is cliched as all hell and I would like to know where to post it. My blog doesn't seem right since we aren't supposed to use blogs for feedback and the WWorkshop is wrong too, because I am not trying to get it posted. Is there anywhere I can post this?

Here's the link, just in case you want it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JJpy4oAZ8bWNWPq78jRCsNWiD1zZTZ7WWKWlFgM7U4U/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks, SOURCECODE01 (talk) 17:38, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Interview Date
Mike wants to know when we're doing the interview. He is busy the weekend of the 21st. Would the 24th be okay? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 17:41, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

yee
yee --&#34;The good mean well. We just don&#39;t always end up doing well.&#34; ~ Isaac (talk) 21:29, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Why did you delete my pasta?!
I know it doesn't have story, but that's the point. If you're about to be executed and need to type something supernatural, you would rush it! That's what makes it seem more realistic!
 * Wait maybe you deleted because that's the truth!... ok no I'm just over exaggerating. Those were pretty good reasons.

New micro
I just wrote a micro. 300 words. It's a silly little thing but I thought you might want to read it. The Fearless Vampire Killing Brothers   HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 19:00, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re Creature of the Night
Hahahaha- thanks for that! HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 20:37, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Archived Blogs
Out of curiosity, when a blog becomes archived, can it become un-archived? Alstinson (talk) 23:39, March 10, 2015 (UTC) That's a good idea, though I don't want to rush into it. The Blog is fine the way it is, for now. Alstinson (talk) 02:08, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

why did you delete my pasta im angry give it back? why houlr you delete my pasta you jerk give it back

Ninja'd
Hehe, sorry 'bout that. And thanks, I am glad I can be of help. MrDupin (talk) 21:00, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

Interview Questions
So I've got a rough draft of questions to ask Mike. Can I e-mail them to you so that you can review them and tell me if I am on the right track? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 16:07, March 12, 2015 (UTC)

Hey, I wanted to know why exactly creepypastas cannot be large? Or is it just the style that you write it in has to be interesting? I really want to upload some of my customs. Jinpai (talk) 22:57, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Made another mistake
Not sure what happened, but the story vanished for me and I can't undo because it said I was the first one to edit it..http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Imp

Favor
Any chance you could walk me through archiving my talk page? It's starting to get out of hand.

Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 23:13, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Too easy. Thanks for doing that, and the info.

Hi...so something glitches on We R Leegun page. Had to read the end in reader mode which doesn't let me see or post reviews.

So you get it here. And this is an honest question. Why was I not reading that on my kindle after paying $2.99? Maybe this site is fulfilling enough. But Gods what about the people who don't read here?

Anyway great story...loved all the refrences I got. The ending was sad but in an honest way. Not just fucked up for the sake of it.

Take care...kris Kase519 (talk) 00:11, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for telling me what was wrong, I feel it will really help with my future pastas. Jinpai (talk) 00:44, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

I've seen weirder things on kindle. Trust me. Honestly I do hope you think about publishing some work...it can be much more simple than you would think. I have not finished the other zombie novella. But prob will tomorrow. And I would give up any grammar I had going in to write as well as you do. I didn't go through just your's one after another so I had plenty to compare them to. Your writing along with a few others really sticks out.

I also think you would be very cool to hang out with. :-)


 * Favorite? It's so hard to pick just one. I loved you peace corp group. And I like how you tackle war. The cost is almost always higher than the reward.


 * As someone who enjoys refrences have you read Ready Player One? I'm guessing you may be a bit young to get them all but it is a great read.


 * Take care...kris Kase519 (talk) 01:24, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

User page story
This user posted a story on his user page. MrDupin (talk) 13:33, March 14, 2015 (UTC)


 * Problem has been sorted by Lolskeletons. MrDupin (talk) 13:43, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

The Buzzing Story Revision Problems
I made The Buzzing back in February, but I checked today, and somebody appears to have changed sections and made it a huge text wall. I'm not sure how to get rid of those revisions, so do you mind fixing for me? Thank you. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 21:42, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Mystery Science" message
I love the riffers in Mystery Science! I also enjoy rifftrax as well and I have been looking more into it through avaliable free online footage... "I'm just a poor girl... I have no big money!" How's Colorado, by the way? I heard it was very green out there!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 21:58, March 14, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 21:58, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Rifftrax" message
I recall seeing previews of various Rifftrax episodes on their website and I remember that you'd have to pay to see the full episode which sucks for me. I can get you the link to this site as soon as I can. Hailey Sawyer (talk) 22:47, March 14, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 22:47, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blog Questions
Thanks for fixing that, and I'll do what you suggested in the future. I do, however, have a question as to how I would be able to make a page that consists of certain reviews I have done, and be able to update it as I create more. I'd appriciate it if you could tell me as to how I would do this. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 22:51, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

RE: Critique Page
I'd personally prefer to just create the page like the latter option. I'm perfectly fine with informing people that I've made the page/promoting it if I want to. I'm assuming I would simply copy/paste the reviews I want in there, but if I'm wrong, please tell me. Thanks for the help. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 23:18, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Broke" message
No Kidding! So is 99.9% of the American Population!

American Economy: Only the 1% may enjoy Rifftrax! Hailey Sawyer (talk) 23:51, March 14, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 23:51, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Critique Page Up
I went ahead and made the page. Thank you for telling me how to do it, and here is the link:

My Critiques  AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 00:13, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

If I come off as rude or angry, I apologize in advance. I had created an account quite a while ago and uploaded a story, which was deleted several hours later. Then, a few moments ago, I tried to log in again to upload a revised version of the story but was unable to login. Stupidly in irritation, I created a second account and uploaded the revised story. That was deleted a few minutes afterwards. Please could you explain why this happened as I am very confused and slightly upset. Consciously Insane (talk) 00:50, March 15, 2015 (UTC) Consciously Insane

I'd like to congratulate you on nearing 50 stories on this wondeerful website. I would also like to ask your permission to read your story "A Small Piece of Lead" on my new creepypasta youtube channel. I will be sure to link this account page in the video also linking the story. I will give full credit to you as it is due. You really do wright some marvelous stories.Dontay127 (talk) 12:33, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Hello http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:EmpyrealInvective. I just joined this last night and I posted a pasta "Ajax Verruck Colons"  and it keeps getting deleted. What am I doing wrong on it that keeps it from being posted?

I heard it from a movie, I didn't realize about my act of plagiarism. EXTREME sorryness

RisingFusion (talk) 21:37, March 15, 2015 (UTC)RisingFusion

thank you for deleting my story  i'm not mad or anything it was short i know but anyway thank you

Hello

I'm typing this becuase I want to find out specifically why my Creppypasta "The hooded man" was taken down so I can avoid doing the same misake is the future. Alen Rocks! (talk) 22:00, March 15, 2015 (UTC)Alen Rocks!Alen Rocks! (talk) 22:00, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Would it be possible for me to attempt to rewrite the story The Smiling Stranger? EpicBro Gamez Retchetpsute (talk) 02:09, March 16, 2015 (UTC)EpicBro Gamez Retchetpsute

Thank you for your response, and while it isn't exactly the greatest news I appreciate the feedback. It wasn't until the day after I initialy wrote the first stroy (which I wrote before the 'Poems from The Smiling Stranger' but didn't publish it.) that I realized the similarities, and as you have pointed out I did use lines from the Animeme Rap Battle. (which I'm still kicking myself for not putting the citation as intended.) Even though you advise against it I'm still going to attempt to if not re-write the story then I will post a differant one, because I feel strongley for the character. EpicBro Gamez Retchetpsute (talk) 03:52, March 16, 2015 (UTC)EpicBro Gamez Retchetpsute

Yay now I can sleep better?

Empyreallnvective, may you suggest an idea for a new pasta? I'm running out of ideas, as they have been taken. Also, I wish you can write more of your short stories; they're better than your long ones. RisingFusion (talk) 22:09, March 16, 2015 (UTC)RisingFusion

My Contest
So I remember telling you about my SOOPER SEKRETZ contest coming up for the wiki's writers, and I'm wondering if it's okay to propose it now? I'm worried about competition with, like, the collaborative pasta blog and Natalo's recent challenge. --&#34;All busted up, lips wired shut. I know you less now than I did before.&#34; (talk) 22:25, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

(RE) Warning! Unfinished page
Thanks for letting me know! And wow are you fast! Haha! Actually though I thought it would be fine to post it like this because it would be updated in parts like chapters. Also on a side note, how would one add a section list for a story with multiple parts. Kind of like how you can click on the titles of messages to go to said message. Do you know what I mean?

Supersatan25 (talk) 02:37, March 17, 2015 (UTC)


 * Thanks! Supersatan25 (talk) 02:46, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Oh okay.

But I usually get bored with long ones: the short ones, with their abrupt cut endings, do send shocks to the reader.

RisingFusion (talk) 04:15, March 17, 2015 (UTC)RisingFusion

So fresh AND so clean
I wrote another story, inspired by Natalo's prompt-blog. It's not bad. Walk-In if you wanna read it.--GarbageFactory (talk) 12:57, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Questions
I was looking at the Request Page and I noticed that the edit limit had been doubled for roll backers. Is this due to the removal of VCROC? I personally believe that with that many edits, there should be more privileges given to the user, before jumping to adminship. You alone should know that being an admin is a huge responsibility, and requires good judgment, knowledge of this Wiki's Rules/Standards, as well as patience. Being a roll backer, doesn't allow you to do much. I've talked to other admins about what being a roll backer really was, and they each said that it doesn't really do anything, and is pratically useless. To me, it's just like having a title, instead of just being a "user". Knowing this, I'm lost for words on why it was deleted, versus the roll backer "rank". I guess what I'm asking is why was VCROC deleted if it didn't really have an "effect", and why does it jump from Roll Backer to Admin. I just think there should be a middle area, even when Simba had applied for adminship a long time ago, it was rejected because he was not given the abilites of a VCROC (was still a roll backer); meaning he didn't know all he should have before taking the big leap to becoming an admin. Having the VCROC rank also helps determine who would make a good canidate and would be capable of being an admin before the rights are passed. It just makes sense to me. Ex.- How would Simba had looked if he was an admin doing what he did? More importantly, how would he have made the site look? Maybe I'm completely wrong, but I just thought I should share my thoughts with you. Thanks!

Reprieve Talk Page 19:49, March 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * Very valid point and information. But still, shouldn't there be some way to learn how to be an admin? Let alone, prepare? I know there is (or at least was) the Creepy Pasta Training site; it's just that there being a huge leap just kinda seems like going from an average worker who just earned a promotion, to a CEO. If one day I wanted to become an admin, I'd be very hesitant to submit an application, due to the fear of not knowing what all to do. Maybe I'm over thinking it, it just kind of sounds funny to me. But it was a very good choice to up the standards for Roll Backer. About the VCROC, I think it should have stayed with maybe a few changes to the privileges. (Not even sure if that's possible, however.)   Reprieve  Talk Page 21:53, March 17, 2015 (UTC)


 * Hm. I guess if that's how things work, then I'll have to see for my self in the far future. Thanks Travis!
 * Reprieve Talk Page 10:44, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

Five Days
I see that on a story I marked for review you had put, "Do not retag stories with M4R that were cleared." How do you check to see if it had already been marked for review before? Reprieve Talk Page 19:13, March 18, 2015 (UTC)


 * Well, I guess I apologize for marking it for review (again)? It's clear that I am still a noob in some fields of knowledge on this site. I did check to see if it had been examined by admins, however I didn't see that it was marked for review already. Quick question: That story had obvious plot holes, but are plot holes allowed in pastas? Or are they only eligilble for deletion if it's excessive? Just making sure so I won't make it a habit of placing stories in M4R that don't belong there, because they appear to have plot holes. I don't see plot holes discussed too much in the Quality Standards, either. (Sorry if I bombard you with questions. I just want to make sure I know what I'm doing, is all. If I'm a burden to you, just say so and I'll ask other admins. I guess this is like my training for a roll backer, haha.)
 * Reprieve Talk Page 20:26, March 18, 2015 (UTC)


 * I'm not arguing, but this is why I had marked it for review (so you didn't think I didn't actually read it or that I just M4R because yolo) because of these reasons:


 * The author fails to mention on how long she was out there: "I found you on one of my attempts to scavenge supplies and clothing from the wreckage." Yes, one could assume it was relatively soon after the wreckage due to the fact that she is still alive. In my opinion, those context clues could have went more than one direction, as it was obvious my first reaction was "OMG, NO! PLOT HOLE." That is why I find it highly important for details to make sure this confusion does not happen to be added to a story. I.E. - "I found you not too long after I had gathered myself together the day of the crash." The author also does not mention where this takes place. It just says it was snowing and it was waist deep. If it was a blizzard and as cold as God knows what (like in Canada or Alaska) (the man keeps saying it was "so cold"), both of the characters would have died from hyperthermia. Based on what the article says, she only had thin blankets and clothing. It's common sense that she would not have made it, because in cases such as those; you need heavy set clothing. Also, the story even states that the fire was "Sitting a few feet in front of her is a man and a small fire, not big enough to heat much of anything, but rather a dim light source." It's also been five days that she has been out, in a cold tunnel/cave. I think you know where I'm headed with this.


 * And in all honesty, if someone bounded me up and I did not know the individual; regardless I would have asked other questions before asking, "Where are you sleeping?" Or, being completely calm with the entire situation. I'm sure a lot of people would have. Umbrello makes a very good observation, "The worst part is how casual the woman is. He tells her to just go to bed and they'll talk about it in the morning? Are you kidding me?"


 * That last point does make a bit of sense to me now. But it's very strange and awkwardly written that he says "There was another person in the cave with you, yes." As if he knew for sure, and was not assuming.


 * Something else I don't know if anyone else noticed, all the information about the crash is said is that "   It hit the side of the mountain. We were the only survivors.  " LOL, I'm sorry but I can't help but to laugh. I don't know if it 's because I'm in an aviation class or because it's common sense, but if a plane goes down and hits into a mountain, it's going to explode. And if it doesn't explode, there's going to be more survivors. (Due to the fact that people would have been trying to get out of the wreckage.) Unless it's going to be some Final Destination crap where random shards of everything hits everyone in the face but two people. From the sounds of it, it did not explode. And if the woman did receive injury, it would have had to have been intense. (A broken leg, burned scars, bleeding from a certain area in the body that was harmed.) They don't even give any thought on to explain if it didn't explode, or where it crashed (in some trees and wooden limbs hit everyone in the face but you and I) There's way too much that I could continue on about (the crash wise), that I am now too burned out to even finish typing.


 * Once again, I am not arguing. I'm just explaining why I had marked it for review.
 *  Reprieve  Talk Page 21:25, March 18, 2015 (UTC)


 * Well I'm the minority here anyways, I can't delete a story. So if you think it meets the standards, then it does. There was way too many questions left unanswered, through my eyes. I honestly don't think it needs to be deleted, just put into a place like WW for revising. Anyways, thanks for your patience Travis! (No seriously, thanks.)  Reprieve  Talk Page 21:59, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

Hello and thanks for editting my story. I didn't know what category to place it in so thanks for that. I'm new at this so I'm glad for all the assistance. Chrysaliarus (talk) 01:21, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Removal of "Three Passengers"
Hello, I wanted to ask you to revert the deleted article or at least give me a chance to reupload it, as I believe my reasons of not committing to the page rules are mostly technical.

The problems are due to wikia's new layout and editor scripts that are working awfully in every browser that I tried. Majority of the time the editor itself refused to load, plus the page loads itself painfully slow. Finally I used my smart phone to upload the story, and look and behold it got immediately removed. Bottom line: if keeping the article removed for now makes your life easier, good, but please do not remove a possibility for me to reupload the story.

It's not my intention to ignore the given rules, especially the technical ones, but I only work with the tools I'm given, and the ones provided by wikia are extremely limited and very poor. I had to change the preferences just to write you this complaint and I don't think that should be happening. If the reasons are other than the technical, but story wise, please give me specifics.

Thanks for your time, good day.

?
When you get a minute, would you look at the recent activity and see if you can tell what the thing is that reads: No title on the Empty board (it's not very far down, about 30 min. ago). I have no idea what is going on with it. You'll see what I'm talking about I think.

Jay Ten (talk) 17:25, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

RE: "Empty" Board
As a matter of interest, how did you remove it? I kept getting redirected to one of the broken message walls. 17:36, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

So, my creepypasta I posted. Which standards did I miss? It seemed in regulation to me, if you can clarify, it would be much appreciated.

Runn1ng1nTh3D4rk (talk) 19:15, March 20, 2015 (UTC)Runn1ng1nTh3D4rk

Thanks for unblocking me! I'm fairly new here so i'll try my best not to make that mistake again. Livycat 23 (talk) 22:54, March 20, 2015 (UTC)


 * Alright, thanks! Livycat 23 (talk) 23:02, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

(Hopefullygoodgramar (talk) 23:04, March 20, 2015 (UTC)) Hello! I am a bit annoyed that I can't find the Scource button on my story editing page. I can only find the damned thing when I'm writing a blog post. Where is the Scource button?

(Hopefullygoodgramar (talk) 23:17, March 20, 2015 (UTC)) Thank you for the help :)

Note
Just wanted to make sure this didn't go unnoticed.

Jay Ten (talk) 13:20, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Sons of Odin
Saw you added catagories. Did you like it? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 19:41, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

That's eleven pastas in two months
It looks like I'll be matching your fifty by the end of the year! lol  HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 20:49, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Hello, UndeadMusicQueen here. So I'm sort of new to this site and just wanted to now what specifically got my story deleted. Was it my spelling? Was my story pointless? Were my paragraphs too long? Thank you. -UndeadMusicQueen

Pasta gone?
Hey, I wrote The Jungle Book VHS Cover, which you deleted. Just would like to know why. Didn't seem to break any rules, but hey, enough people commented negatively that it might've violated quality standards without me knowing. Thanks. I, Da Cashman (talk) 03:42, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

A contest suggestion...
G'day Empyre! I want to suggest a contest, a contest for graphic artists out there. I still don't know what to call it, but I think I can explain it.

In this contest, all graphic artists on this site will be encouraged to create their fan-made logo of Creepypasta Wikia. I think that's the simplest explanation I can give you. There will be three winners, and the winners' works will be used as the site's main logo, one month for each logo. To be sure, ask Cleric if he'll allow to change the logo.

If you know someone on this site who's also a graphic artist, we will include them on the panel of judges. Also, since I'm the one who proposed this contest, include me as one of the judges. BTW, here's what I created:

What do you think? Does it look great? Well, I'm expecting for your reply.

 ← <font color="#FF0000">I' <font color="FF6600">l <font color="#FF9900">l <font color="#FFCC00">j <font color="#FFFF33">u <font color="#CCFF00">s <font color="#99FF00">t <font color="#66FF00">l <font color="#33FF00">e <font color="#00FF00">a <font color="#33FF33">v <font color="#66FF66">e <font color="#99FF99">t <font color="#CCFFCC">h <font color="#FFFFFF">is message <font color="#CCFFFF">h <font color="#99FFFF">e <font color="#66FFFF">r <font color="#33FFFF">e.  <font color="#999999"> →  07:00, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Question
Sorry to bug you but not sure who else to ask. How do stories get linked? I mean when you look at a new story there are no boxes below with other stories. When it's been here awhile there are 3 stories toward the bottom of the page. They are often similar themes. Is that automatic? Or does someone pick?

Thanks...kris Kase519 (talk) 18:08, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Excuse me, but I would like to know what quality standards my story did not meet. If you just delete it and not tell me what was unsatisfactory, I cannot improve as a writer. So please, enlighten my darkened situation.Insomnimaniac (talk) 23:28, March 22, 2015 (UTC)Insomnimaniac

The Monster Wore Red Deletion
I've been told that you deleted my story. To be completely honest, I'm a bit frustrated because I have edited this peice multiple times and made absolute sure that there were no spelling, grammar, puctuation or spacing problems. It would be really helpful if you could tell me what quality standards went unmet.Insomnimaniac (talk) 23:42, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Interview
So, I'm doing the interview tomorow. I just wanted to clarify something. Mike won the Damn fine pasta contest, right? And when exactly was that? Is there any other accomplishments I should know about or mention? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 23:44, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Did you see...
Did you see 's "incredible" attempts at hacking users viewing A Small Piece of Lead? Here and here. We're clearly dealing with a professional here, lol. 18:13, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

hello there, why did you mark my story for review? Newroleplayer (my devianart username) (talk) 22:24, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

HOLEH!
You got the Platinum! An entire year man, congrats!! BedrockPerson :D 00:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Question
Which story of mine did you delete? I mean, I'm just asking so i can go look at it and make sense of it allLilahdog568 (talk) 01:16, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

3.5 hours into the interview
and everything is going good. He's wrapping up now. Question:  what is the template to use to highlight his user page? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:17, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, link it in the blog
Banning told me to link everything whenever possible. Did I phrase that wrong? You know I'm an idiot when it comes to this tech stuff, bro. Oh- there's mike again, going on 4 hours now. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:28, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you
and thanks for this great opportunity. This has been a fabulous experience and I am so glad I discovered Mike's incredible stories. Now I just need to read everyone of your stories. (and Bannings, and etc., etc., etc.- this shit is like a fucking drug, man, and I've got a problem.) HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:42, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Me, Myself, and I
Thank you. I'll look into the punctuation but as far the formatting errors, if you don't mind could you tell me what needs fixing. Also, the capitalization errors were not mistakes. "It" was capitalized on purpose because it is the name of this creature. However, would it be sutible to put it as "IT" to make it more noticable to be a part of the story and not an error? Although that might confuse people and make them think it's a fan fiction of Stephen King's "IT" lol

Supersatan25 (talk) 02:14, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for fixing it! Ironically, I was actually in the middle of editing it my self when it said that someone else was in the process of editing it.

Supersatan25 (talk) 04:04, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Done.
Four and a half hours and I loved every minute. Giving Mike the final edit and then I'll post. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:23, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Absolutely my pleasure,
HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:34, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Hello I'm new to creepypasta wiki, but not creepypastas. So you deleted my pasta just kinda wandering why?... It sucked didn't it, I knew my dyslexia would get in the way. Well... Sorry to be any trouble

Midna666Twilight (talk) 05:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Neptune
Yep, I thought so. I'll tweek a bit today and tomorrow. BedrockPerson :D 00:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Whenever I try to save my new page it says Permission Denied what do? I do please help.Kittenlove31250 (talk) 00:58, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Hello. I'm sorry if I just didn't see it while reading the rules, seeing as I got a little lazy and less thorough, but is cursing allowed in stories? Or is it not allowed due to some of the readers being younger? I myself am of a fairly young age (though still old enough to make an acct of course) so I would understand the reasoning behind not letting people curse. And is all cursing banned? Or only the major ones such as the f  or the b word? Once again, sorry if I just didn't notice that rule whilst reading it. I was kind of over excited to make my story.FionnaBraveheart (talk) 02:39, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Posting the interview right now
Hope I don't fuck up too bad. Please inform me if I do. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 03:52, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I already fucked up
the formatting somehow. I used the template you gave me! AHHH! I suck at computers

Thanks, buddy. I don't know why Jozsa's Grove isn't linking. It's spelled correctlyHumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:03, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Should I not be trying to fix this
while you are working on it? I don't understand why some of his stories aren't linkingHumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:24, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks
HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:26, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Demo Reel Lost Episode
I was wondering if you could give me a link to this pastebin entry Alstinson (talk) 20:39, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks. Have a good afternoon. Alstinson (talk) 20:56, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Hello. My is CreppySpider, and I wanted to know exactly why I got my recent creepypasta: Reject, taken down. I'm not not mad or anything. I just want to be informed so the next time I want to write something, I'll be careful. Creppyspider100 (talk) 21:06, March 25, 2015 (UTC)CreppySpider

Ok, first of all, you deleted my pasta, can you tell me the reasons why please? and i have no idea what this signature thing is so im sorry if i dont put it

interview debacle
He made it sound like the whole site staff was pissed at me over my little faux pas. If that's the case, why would I want to stick around?

I really didn't mean any harm, I just thought it's a wiki, everyone contributes to improve things, and he was offline and somehow I figured he'd see my remark fastest if I commented. Writers are rarely good at making the best social decisions, but I didn't expect the Spanish Inquisition, nor to have all the responsibility pinned on me. I'm sorry in any case, and I'll try to keep my big mouth shut from now on. --Mikemacdee (talk) 23:33, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

please don't apologize
It's not your fault wiki formatting is wonky, and I'm grateful that you tried to mediate us. I'm just angry that he heaped his job responsibilities on me when I pointed out formatting problems. Being annoyed that I used the wrong form of contact is understandable. My dumb mistake, and I'll remember to use the talk page next time (hopefully).--Mikemacdee (talk) 23:54, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I've ran my story many times though multiple spell checking and grammar programs also websites. i have no idea what is wrong?

-Carsontolgy (talk) 00:21, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

SorrowPasta (talk) 02:23, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe I'm not cut out for writing. I tried two attempts to make a really good story and both stories get deleted for reasons.

I'm just going to read some "pastas" and make a series of "riffs" and "reviews".

All I can say is, I'm not really upset that my stories got deleted because sometimes I don't know what other elements to use.

So, that's pretty much my message to everyone on here especially you.

I'm sorry if the stories never really met any of the site's standards, but I have tried my best.

Til next time, stay "creepy" and enjoy the rest of the week.

SorrowPasta (talk) 02:39, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

I understand,sometimes new writers like me get a little nervous.

But with the help of the advice you provided, I might get the hang of story writing one of these days.

All that needs to be done is to keep reading several times and search for any errors.

And that's pretty much all I got to say. Again, thanks for the advice and feedback.

Spam Page
Hi, Yhang12 made a annie96 is typing page, with nothing on it. Luigifan100 04:54, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Hello. It's me CreppySpider.

Okay, I understand. But, is there any possible way I could get it back so I can copy it on OpenOffice and improve it from there. I spent a while on Reject so I don't really want it to dissappear.

Thanks.

Creppyspider100 (talk) 15:57, March 26, 2015 (UTC)CreppySpider

;-;
Gee, I sure wish senpai would talk to me more often.

<font color="black" style="background-color: white;">~I LUV U DAWG~     <font color="white" style="background-color: black;">~PLS TALK TO ME~    16:39, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

I'm making a trilogy in the works. I want to know how I can link the stories together so you can use those Previous and Next buttons to cycle through the stories. Thank you in advance,

Floating Doge (talk) 18:41, March 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * Done :) 18:53, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Capital D Colon

 * makes a new message because someone made a dumb thing under me|| I'm alright, I guess. I've kinda abandoned the place since the chat thing. I need ways to contact you, because I still consider you a friend, but communicating through talk pages is kind of time consuming and a hassle.

<font color="black" style="background-color: white;">~I LUV U DAWG~     <font color="white" style="background-color: black;">~PLS TALK TO ME~    21:27, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Colon Lower Case C
Yeah, but are you ever even online?

<font color="black" style="background-color: white;">~I LUV U DAWG~     <font color="white" style="background-color: black;">~PLS TALK TO ME~    21:33, March 26, 2015 (UTC)


 * Alright, sweet. I'll probably message you later about something. I would get on skype now, but my phone isn't connected to wifi and my school computer doesn't have skype. There were two tornados a  couple miles away from my house last night
 * <font color="black" style="background-color: white;">~I LUV U DAWG~     <font color="white" style="background-color: black;">~PLS TALK TO ME~    21:41, March 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * YOU WOULDN'T KILL ME, YOU LOVE ME.


 * <font color="black" style="background-color: white;">~I LUV U DAWG~     <font color="white" style="background-color: black;">~PLS TALK TO ME~    22:35, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

i worked hard on that god damen story  all of it was realy every last bit of it so if you  have some motherfucking time then please email me at homicidalliu99@gmail.com

and sorry about my the hate full words

cant you just email  me what you  want to talk about im  kinda busy right now  so  email

lol I cant believe you fell for it

I got ten profiles on here with storys you like

but hell I fucking got you I put that story on there just to see what you would say

Buy see you later

P.s I'll never tell who this is

Wait a Minute Colon Closing Parenthesis
I've been messaging you fairy casually, but no one here knows me anymore. Let me integrate myself by asking you questions like a new user.

How do i aply 4 founder? *doesn't sign post*

<font color="black" style="background-color: white;">~I LUV U DAWG~     <font color="white" style="background-color: black;">~PLS TALK TO ME~        13:16, March 27, 2015 (UTC)


 * Anyway, Travis. I messaged you on Skype. I don't know if you have responded yet, because I gotta wait for wifi when I get home. semicolon dash semicolon. Send help.


 * <font color="black" style="background-color: white;">~I LUV U DAWG~     <font color="white" style="background-color: black;">~PLS TALK TO ME~    21:42, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Blank Blog
Hi Empyre, I found this blank blog post. MrDupin (talk) 14:57, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
 * Taken care of. 15:41, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Hey would I be able to appeal if I fixed the errors and tried again with the ending?

~Fungalzombie

Page needs renaming
Hi Empyre,

This page needs renaming. It should be: "An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge". (the word occurrence needs two 'r's)

Voting Page
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Creepypasta_Wiki:Pasta_of_the_Month/Voting_Page

this has the wrong date on the top in blue text The Flea bitten Wolf (talk) 02:54, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

RE: Story Deletion
I'd like to know why 'The Green Man' was deleted, please.

EtherBot (talk) 09:11, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

The Pack Leader
hey Empy, probably getting tired of hearing from me (since you are the main admin I find the most helpful) anyway my creepypasta http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Pack_Leader has been marked for review and the reason why by the mod is "<span style="color:rgb(212,212,213);font-weight:bold;">This isn't creepy. It is decenlty written, but it reads more like a wolf love story than a creepypasta." I was wondering if this is a Valid reason that it gets marked for review because one guy doesn't find it creepy. one man's defintion for creepy will most likely be different then another The Flea bitten Wolf (talk) 13:10, March 29, 2015 (UTC)


 * When I edited the page last year with my defunct account, I thought it was alright. Maybe it's just me, but I think it's wrong taking personal opinions when deleting articles. The problem was solved now though. Katarina Porisso (talk) 13:19, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Hey EmpyrealInvective,

Thanks a lot for the feedback. This was really an exploritory post for my writing, just testing the waters. The feedback is much appreaciated and I'll edit my piece before I re-upload it. Thanks again,

MattTieneMattTiene (talk) 17:45, March 29, 2015 (UTC)