Talk:Sarah's Story/@comment-25941663-20150722185157/@comment-25148755-20150723015006

Thanks for the review DUP! I agree this went a little too fast. I'm planning on lengthening it just a bit, probably adding another day between the Lilith and Frank attacks to add a bit of foreshadowing and whatnot. You're spot on regarding what happen end to Frank...that was one of the major things I was trying to establish here. Glad you liked it!