Talk:The Legend of Ol' Mother Cleaver/@comment-5306249-20200221033855

I found this story to be particularly well-rounded. The dialogue felt natural, the world-creation and build up were effective, and the creepiness was certainly worthy of a high score. Thematically the process of Mother Cleaver going about and performing her own Justice works in effect to the conclusion. My only qualms are about prefacing the story with a lampshade: its not so much that the lampshade was placed at the beginning and end, but mostly that the term ‘cliche’ was used as opposed to maybe something less contextually conspicuous. It was not very obnoxious, but still a personal gripe. Overall this came closest to the classic Creepypasta feel out of all entries.

Style: 4/5 Horror: 4/5 Entertainment: 4/5 Theme: 4/5

Total: 16/20