Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180814192603/@comment-9041013-20180815001504

That is interesting and entertaining, but feels like undeveloped.

Perhaps get more details involved... like how war would look like, give it similarities to human war... all the disturbing parts that is. Perhaps make God kind of a severe donkey, have him send angels to occupy humans to do his "darker" operations, prompting the rebels to wear other humans and then do some creepy stuff in a supermen sorts of fighting.

There's this movie called "Legion" where God gets sick of humanity and sends his angels to possess humans and destroy them using supercharged meat suits. Michael decides to beef with his dad over that decision. So you could kind of display how Angels and god aren't cool by having them be bad in their suits, or just their actual forms... do some gory stuff perhaps.

This a decent idea, but it's just way too cheery-action centered.