Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25280829-20140808171905/@comment-25286366-20140812010959

The writing was very high quality. Some aspects of it were cliche, though. It's a typical "creepy doll pasta". I honestly do not know how to make it any better, except maybe for a few details like why the doll is acting the way it is, more about the girl, and how a full grown man got overpowered by a doll. (Sorry for my harshness)