Talk:Sheltered Life/@comment-25971368-20150330180617

This story was okay, but there's not enough information to really piece it together. The story of the creature that apparently ate Alicia's mother really wasn't necessary--it was obvious that she died in childbirth or at least tried to escape after giving birth to Alicia (the dad said that the mother died after she "ran outside to share her gift with the rest of the world"). And then when the father said that the creature lives in their basement, that's incredibly contradictory. If the creature is on the inside and Alicia is supposed to be safe from the creature in the inside, why doesn't Alicia notice this and really begin questioning the faith in her father. And it seems like he has some sort of cannibalism crop going on, as there were drills down in the basement and a skeleton, and after eight years I don't think a corpse would be a skeleton unless its organs and flesh was harvested.