Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180831220106/@comment-9041013-20180907214734

L0CKED334 wrote: DrBobSmith wrote: The Darts were really good cars. That 225 slant 6 was a nice, solid engine. All around very reliable and pleasant and they lasted FOREVER.

This would be a very logical car for someone who was intelligent and had done some homework. In that price range, they were always the Consumer Reports best buy. Good to know, so what do you think of the story with my changes? You think it's got the meat it needs to be complete? (haha that rhymes) Yeah, obviously this part is the build up to the climax, and it's good as it is.