Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-19733524-20131107042656

I have an idea for a pasta, but i don't know if its good or not. This would be my first ever pasta :

A man spends his whole life making a time machine because he wanted to build one since he was a child. He builds it and atempts to go back in time, but something goes horribly wrong. He dies from ___ (i'll think of that later) but the time machine still worked. His soul is sent back in time and he needs to warn his child self not to follow his dream, or it will be a never-ending cycle of him growing up and going back in time.

Any input? 