Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26267869-20150401191514/@comment-25941663-20150404123425

I'm sorry there's no way this meets the Quality Standards of the wikia.

First of all, your story is just a big sentence. You should try breaking it up a bit.

Second, this is way too short to be good. Writing such short pastas is a very difficult undertaking and only a few can pull it off. You should try fleshing out your stories more, adding background, character interaction etc.

When a new speaker is talking, you should make a new paragraph, like this:

"Hi," Mike said.

"Hey," John replied.

You should capitalize a word when a sentence starts.

Read more stories. You should be reading more stories posted on the site to get a better feel of what is acceptable and what isn't.