Talk:Imperfect Transition/@comment-24938299-20140529194758

I think it was an alright pasta. However, since there was very little backstory described, was a bit hard for me to follow, but in this case it does make you wonder and expand your thoughts a little more. I also think you had a good usage of vocab in this story as well. Although it was very brief, I enjoyed it quite a bit. 7/10