Talk:June's Diary/@comment-14000207-20140217202435

Besides some spelling errors, this is a genuinly unnerving story. I like how you said "torch" instead of "flashlight" because it gives us a bit more insight t the culture of where they are, which I really can percieve as Britain. The last part was the best, as it states that "the shadow", or "the being" is literally madness in disguise. But it still had its drawbacks, such as Cathy randomly appearing, and the strings of almost unreadable words.

8.5/10