Talk:Jeff the Killer/@comment-24961441-20140519175554

This is the most unbelievable and unrealistic things I have ever read in my entire life.

Firstly, it is too long. This does not need to be long at all, I could have made a better page that made more sense and had a realistic tone by using only 5 words: Jeff The Killer is loose...

The tone is way off and the story doesn't allow the characters to develop: as soon as you see jeffs brother he is in prison. What? Why?

It's very unrealistic, this looks like it was written from the perspective of: ERMAGHERD! I GOT A IDEA I THINK IS GOOD. I WILL WRITE IT UP WITHOUT LETTING ANYONE SEE IT! YEAH THAT WILL WORK! Well I must sadly tell you that you FUCKED UP.

By the end you are asking yourself why? and what the fuck did I just read? If you have any writing skill you will read this and say how shit it is, if not you will probably think this is the greatest horror story of all time.

I'm getting a bit ranty now, so I will draw this to a close. This is a very badly written and very badly told horror story. It has the potential to be really very good. But, who is going to change it?