Talk:Orwin/@comment-6064672-20150829034413

I stopped reading before I even finished the first paragraph. A huge factor in creepypasta is believeability. The good creepypastas can at least make you suspend your disbelief pretty willingly, and the authors put forth effort to at least make these events seem plausible, even if they are farfetched. A quick Google search of Orwin and who all won the 2007 State High School football championships in their divisions completely nulls and voids anything you have to say past that.