Talk:The Russian Sleep Experiment/@comment-25417080-20140916180129

The story is alright (a bit clicheed, but it's older and the cliche is rather classic, so that's forgiveable), but that ending. No. It's like the author finished writing the story then went "oh I know how to make it edgy!!!1' and jizzed all over himself adding the last patient's speech.

I'm actually fairly convinced that this was posted online, then someone else added that, based on the writing style. As other commenters have mentioned, it's around in multiple iterations as an urban legend. It sounds like someone found it and went 'no i know how to make it better lol'