Talk:How to Carve a Pumpkin/@comment-35071950-20191031021818

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Definately a good pasta with a cool and funny concept. However, more detail and descriptions (perhaps even details about the character and the place he's in) would've, well, "fattened" up the pasta a bit more and made it longer and more entertaining/enjoyable. Seriously, it's so bland that I almost didn't read to the end to get that epic twist.