Talk:The Feind House/@comment-25143862-20180214172833/@comment-32289854-20180214181020

Thanks! Out of the three of them, I actually consider this my weakest piece for the reason you listed above. The original format of the story was a collection of 3 paragraph long flash pieces posted over a long span of time. When I cleaned it up for the No Sleep Podcast, some of the carry overs like the repetitions you mentioned slip through my attention.