Talk:Bodyshock/@comment-6862307-20141107053528/@comment-25614296-20141221013502

Really the only thing I thought you didn't provide some insight on was the title. (Although not directly linked to the story in question) Honestly, the title seems somewhat irreverent to the story itself as it progresses.

Aside from that and even thing else mentioned above I give this pasta a 9/10 and don't you think things ''like the almighty master who bumps off his prodigee so that he "Can't fail again." ''is just one factor of why this pasta is something that can easily become an interesting movie?