Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150505190955/@comment-25037895-20150506075747

SoPretentious wrote: Doom Vroom wrote:
 * 1) The police found no signs of a struggle, but came to the conclusion that Kyle and Paul had been kidnapped
 * 2) The beast dropped what it was holding, which hit the ground with a thud, and turned to face Isaac.
 * 3) The fifty-two residents of Stanley were on edge and worried about whether their family would suffer next.

Any suggestions on what to change them to say?

Here:
 * 1) I noticed this sentence was changed, and it seems improved.
 * 2) During the struggle, the beast lost its grip, and an object shattered onto the floor. The creature was angered by this, posturing to face Isaac.
 * 3) The small-town residents of Stanley, all fifty-two of them, were struck with a wave of anxiety and none could tolerate the thought that their family would be next.