Talk:My Daughter

Hello, this is my first pasta, and it might not be that great so please go easy on me. Special thanks to ObliterationoftheSelf for giving me ideas for the pasta. I hope you all enjoy it, and please give me constructive critisism so I can improve on it. Thank you. &quot;A child&#39;s rhyme stuck in my head, it said that life is but a dream...&quot; 00:28, February 9, 2012 (UTC)