User talk:EmpyrealInvective/Archive 36

Greetings.
I would like to inquire about why my pasta wasn't reviewed until now. While I realize you may be busy or otherwise have other pastas to review (or you may not be into the genre), I think it's not a good sign that my pasta wasn't reviewed for the past two days.

I am sorry to bother you about that, but I would appreciate it if you wrote your input on the pasta. Judging by your other reviews, your insight should help me on what to do to make the pasta better (or if I should re-write it entirely).

Again, I'm sorry about this. With my regards,

PookaMustard 15:31, August 23, 2017 (UTC)

Deletion Question
Did you have to delete my pasta? Did it meet quality standards? If not, then why? I did my best! It was not dumb.

Page Rename
Gute Nacht, kleiner Hund needs to have the 'k' in 'kleiner' capitalized. I can't rename pages without the rollback right, so mind nailing this for me? Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 02:28, August 25, 2017 (UTC)

Deletion 1
Can't you allow just ONE more? I promise to be original, the best way I can. Also, can you make sure, No matter (if it has Quaility standards) how good my pasta is, NEVER EVER EVER Make it Pasta of the month. Even if I change my Mind, NEVER make it so.

RockoFan2006 (talk) 16:46, August 25, 2017 (UTC) Me

I understand. You know, I have to post my story on Trollpasta wiki now. I can't do geoshas lost episode wiki, because the Quaility standard thing. One more thing, can you be my friend? RockoFan2006

Deletion 2
Hey man, read through the required material before getting here. Just curious so I can improve. You recently deleted my story "Bison" for not meeting quality standards. I read through the quality standards pretty thoroughly so I am just wondering if you can expand upon this. Thanks, Kindly, Lavecki (talk) 18:45, August 25, 2017 (UTC)Lavecki

Thanks for the feedback on this. The story you are thinking of is actually a riddle about a man who orders a food and kills himself after taking one bite. linked here. And I will admit it was a bit of the inspiration for it. I can see what you mean by the little errors of redundancy and the gramatical errors. I will disagree with you a little bit about the ending being shoehorned in as I had established that they were poor and built up that they didnt get much in the way of meat (which protein is necessary to survive) but I will agree that I can do more to improve upon the set up.

That said, it seems like you guys are having more stringancy given to current stories rather than older stuff that is currently on the wiki, I am not saying this as an attack or anything but I am just curious as to why this is? I assume its just easier to stop more incomming than to clear out old items.

Either way thanks for the feedback.

"I'm sorry, but that feels like a bit of a stretch"

It seems like you are under the impression that children know everything about their parents finances. The character is an unreliable narrator. Saying things like  "we pretty much grew enough to sustain ourselves and a little extra for trade." Is something the narrator is assuming as a child. Additionally the mother is trying to put food on the table for her child, if one year the crop wasnt as good the mother probably isn't going to tell the child that and make sure that they never notice, even if she isnt eating as much.

Like I said, I can do more to show this but it definitly isn't a stretch or something that is shoehorned in.

Do you ban kids? For example, if a 10 year old had a Fandom account, would they get banned? If they did, then would it be infinite?

Old User Help
Hello, I used this Wikia account years ago and I needed some help. I don't want my contributions or chat logs to show up via search engines (i.e. Google). Can you help me with deleting my contributions and my chat logs? If not, can you give me advice on how to? Thanks. LLL (talk) 21:20, August 25, 2017 (UTC)

Que picante!
Are you spanish? This is NOT racisim.

Rawr
Ya ninja'd me. xD I had that template applied right as you deleted it. :P Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 00:33, August 26, 2017 (UTC)

Regarding my copyright
Hello,

I take issue with your explanation of copyright.

Creative Commons ("CC") is an additional way for me to license my works to the world. I'm intimately familiar with CC-BY-SA, CC-BY-NC, CC-BY, and everything in between.

Stating that my story, "Black Rice", is my copyright is not vague. It reiterates that the story is my intellectual property. I choose to include that because most content on here is considered CC-BY-SA. However, I do not permit anyone to use my story under such a license unless with express permission. Thus, I will not include a CC license.

Thank you,

--[Abysmii] [talk] [My readings] 00:54, August 26, 2017 (UTC)

Regarding my copyright 2
Understood.

--[Abysmii] [talk] [My readings] 01:03, August 26, 2017 (UTC)

Screaming From Inside My Car About How Taxes are Theft While the Road Workers Slowly Bury It in Cement
User blog:Magical Toddler/Unsolicited Advice on Characters!

Got a new advice blog up. Let me know if you got something to add. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 04:30, August 26, 2017 (UTC)


 * Fixed the link. Since I had to search for it and DA is weird as hell, it wasn't the right url. I just didn't pick up on that until you let me know. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 05:32, August 26, 2017 (UTC)


 * By the way, I know you resigned from it and all, but why don't you try getting your crat rights back? From what I've noticed, there's not a single active crat here. You're the only active (former) crat here. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 22:18, August 26, 2017 (UTC)

The Old Bus
Hey! So, a pasta of mine was deleted (The Old Bus). The strange thing (and the point of the whole thing) is that I never got a message about it; it disappeared like the freaking Roanoke colony (I'm a nerd... :3). Was it because it looked like I copied another pasta? Because I gave credit for that, and I think I changed it enough that it's not plagiarism. Oh, crap, I just realized I should've taken this to Deletion Appeal...(Or should I? Apologies, I'm a chattermouth. :3) -Luna-Chan the Jailbird

Vandal
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Annabelle?diff=1290849&oldid=1265897

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Special:Contributions/Freesty123

Vandalized the Annabelle page with an illegal streaming link and other stupid shit. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 12:00, August 27, 2017 (UTC)

Collab Project
Polling thread's up. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 11:21, August 29, 2017 (UTC)

Edits
Hey thank you for the warning. I just signed up for this today and would like to know what I specifically what I edited. No rudeness was intended in this message. I would just like to know. Emptyeyed (talk) 00:02, August 30, 2017 (UTC)Emptyeyed

Ok. See, I thought that if it was able to be edited that we could because I was exploring the Writer's Workshop and just adding a part. I thought that was what I was supposed to do. Emptyeyed (talk) 00:05, August 30, 2017 (UTC)Emptyeyed

Ok, thank you. I thought if there was something that I thought should be there I could add it and the other person would review it to see if he/she agreed with the change. Also, I checked out the Salt Mines, it was a beautiful idea. I laughed a little. But, anyway thanks for the warning.

Review Request 1
Greetings,

I have submitted my latest story, 'In the Name of Love' in the writer's workshop. Kindly review it.

I must mention that the story can have a lot of issues. Potentially, I might be toying with the definiton of a succubus. Then again, the story is about 3500 words long, so it would be unfair of me to expect fewer errors than more in this story.

Actually, I'm down with some infection that has rendered me indoors for a long time. So, I guess writing the story was more of a getaway for me than a serious attempt, But then again, I certainly believe I've experimented with something new, so, personally, I enjoyed writing the story. Now, I await the response.

Regards,

Man&#39;s best friend (talk) 15:11, August 30, 2017 (UTC)

/* Edits */
Hello,

This is completely out of left field, but helped me unlock my story, The Puppetmaster's Regime, when I attempted some minor revisions several years ago. After a great hiatus and some serious thought I'd like to tackle a serious overhaul of the series. However I wanted to check with you first to see if this would even be possible, since they are very old pastas that have been collecting dust for a while.

Thanks

Hagenisnotacat (talk) 19:32, August 30, 2017 (UTC)

Welcome to the Hotel California
Can you add my latest advice blog with the rest of them in my little section? Btw, I've got another one planned too (as vague writing seems to have become the next new thing that needs talked about in detail.) It will have to wait some though - my power went out so I'm using my phone atm. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 02:23, August 31, 2017 (UTC)

The Self Deprocating Poet and the Case of Writers Block
Hello, I saw that my new poem was erased. I'm not here to bitch, or complain... In fact, I feel like the poem was very subpar. I am just asking for some feedback on the poem. I have been under a significant spell of writers block, caused in part by deppression and I am just looking for feedback on the poem itself. It's been hard for me to write anything but trash this past month or two, and I feel like this is the best thing that I have written for a while (which is saying something). I believe that as an administrator that you can review the poem, but I will post it here for reference.

OriginalSkin1969 (talk) 06:00, August 31, 2017 (UTC)

Oi
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Shandow_and_cat/The_Psycho_Girl

Translated this real quick. It's a blogicle. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 22:39, August 31, 2017 (UTC)

Re: Review
Thank you for reviewing the story, and thank you once again for your concern :) Regards, Man&#39;s best friend (talk) 12:51, September 1, 2017 (UTC)

"The Right Spot" Deletion
Good afternoon.

I'd like to inquire as to why my pasta "The Right Spot" was deleted from the site moments after being posted, as I am confused as to why it does not meet your site's quality standards. Please get back to me as soon as possible.

PassionFroott (talk) 17:33, September 3, 2017 (UTC)

Deleted Pasta
Hello,

My name is Blake, from the Steel Donut Collective. We do light-hearted riffs on Youtube on writing of dubious quality, and we recorded a riff of this story: Test Subject 113. We like to display the text of the story on-screen, so viewers can read along. I'm not sure if it's possible, but could we get access to the text, just so we can use it for the video? I understand if it's not possible, but I'd figure I'd ask. Thanks!

Mdcowboy (talk) 21:26, September 3, 2017 (UTC)

Issues with adding video files?
Can't seem to add a couple new narrations. When I click the 'play' sort of looking button in edit mode and copy/paste the youtube html address, nothing happens (as opposed to the normal appearing of a thumbnail). Doesn't seem to be working properly on Jay's Horror Network wiki either. Just curious if it is just me, or if there is something happening with the wikia at large.

Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 01:44, September 4, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks
Yo, thanks for all the help in formatting my pastas.

I'm anxious to see what you think about my latest, Come In, We're Open, and maybe some of my older works.

You're a huge inspiration, and I hope to see more of your content on this wiki!

skin taker (talk) 03:31, September 4, 2017 (UTC)Noctevoire

Thanks again
I read your suggestions and I'll do my best to fix the issues you saw with my pasta, although as an answer to you question, I was trying to make the character's view ambiguous for the most part (avoid usage of words with strong connotations like horrifying or disturbing), to keep her stance secret until the end. The changes in phrasing are kind of meant to convey a gradual adapting to the situation. But, I agree, they sound a bit too out-of-place when put next to each other.

I hope you can give similar feedback on my other pastas, but if you can't or don't have the time, I understand fully.

Duskfallen (talk) 04:00, September 4, 2017 (UTC)Noctevoire


 * EDIT: I also want to mention that I have big plans for this series, with the second installment called Cleanup in Aisle II, which focuses on a health inspector making a routine check, and the third called Closing Time, which is told from the perspective of the store owner himself. I'll spoil it a little for you here: The man is actually good at heart, and is only running the store because the being that is the store is giving him something in return.
 * Overall, it's meant to be a more "fun" series, although this by no means replaces "scary".
 * Duskfallen (talk) 04:11, September 4, 2017 (UTC)Noctevoire

Undertsandable
...but that removed all the other edits I made, like all the commas I added.

If possible, could you restore just those edits?

EDIT: lol, misspelt understandable and now can't change it

Duskfallen (talk) 01:33, September 5, 2017 (UTC)Noctevoire


 * Sorry I had to make you go thru that, but I have to take a hiatus and review some photos for my portfolio. Have a mervelous day.
 * Duskfallen (talk) 01:33, September 5, 2017 (UTC)Noctevoire

RE: Heads-Up
It's no big deal. I'd PREFER it be up and ready by Halloween, but that's because of simple festivity preference. (When I made the original project, it was basically a Halloween celebratory thing that was cool at the time)

But, that's not a bad thing. It gives extra time and thus a bit of extra length. That can't do any harm. Would've been nice to know beforehand, though. :/ Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 03:46, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

spam
I think ths is spam http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:JeffyTheAutistic/Sonic.exe_is_a_Masterpiece what say you? Skyrim90000 (talk) 15:05, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Werewolf contest cancellation
So sorry to hear you couldn't squeeze my contest into the busy creepypasta schedule. I understand, though. But, to be fair, I gave you all the logistics and scheduling way back in April and it was approved. I cleared my schedule for October to be free to read all the stories and leave detailed critiques. Honestly, I do have a fan or two around and I think it could have been a boon to the wiki, especially as I would have critiqued each and every story. But, whatever. Good luck with everything. Now my October is completely free! Maybe I can get some writing done and get to all those novels on my reading list. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 15:59, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Uh, say what, dude? We talked about it on messenger just a few weeks ago and it was a go. It wasn't just one message burried on your talk page. Not at all. We discussed it several times. Did you really forget that? Really? I mean, I can go back and find the exact day we talked about it on messanger and you said it was all set. If what you're saying is true, you've got one bad memory, then, dude. This whole thing feels really strange to me. I guess the wiki is so popular and booming right now you can't keep your shit straight and little people like me just fall through the cracks. Good luck with your "big" writing project. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 16:14, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Change in Plans
I already changed the deadline to Thanksgiving; all that's left to kickstart the project is a (highlighted) thread that lets people know it exists. I won't putting that up just yet; I'm waiting for Die to make the first entry and go from there. I don't think I'll be changing the deadline back just yet, as there isn't really a point beyond personal preference. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 21:23, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Hey EmpyrealInvective,

I am writing to let you know that there is an error in wording for the story http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Mount_Pleasant regarding this line: " March 13 only brought more mystery. There lay only undisturbed, virgin snow where the perplexing lamppost had stood the evening before."

It should read as follows: "March 13 only brought more mystery, nonetheless. Where the perplexing lamppost had stood the evening before lay only undisturbed, virgin snow."

"Mount Pleasant" was a transcription of one of the stories read by theLittleFears on YouTube. This is the exact spot of the video where this wording is used:  https://youtu.be/PQYcOqquzW0?t=1m40s

(Not sure if I'm supposed to sign with E. Braunstein (talk) 17:54, September 7, 2017 (UTC) then my name or not, so I'll sign with my name here.)

E. Braunstein (talk) 17:54, September 7, 2017 (UTC)Ellobro

Story
Just to let you know that this http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Swyvern does not meet the QS. Thank you. Skyrim90000 (talk) 05:06, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Yo again
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:EmoDragon123/Rocko%27s_modern_life

Caught a blogicle. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 20:22, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Deletion of an Unfinished Page
Hello. I couldn't find the reason as to why you deleted mine. I was not finished with it and I was going to later work on it once I was done to actually make it scary. I had forgotten to add that it wasn't finished. If you thought I was done with it, I wasn't. If there was another reason why you deleted it, please let me know. Thanks and have a nice day.CreepypastaKat (talk) 23:50, September 8, 2017 (UTC)


 * sorry but you can't post undone stories to this wikl, ever. it doesn't matter if you were "going to later work on it" or not. you can save it on a text editer but not on here. good luck. Skyrim90000 (talk) 01:07, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

Oi!
JESSİE COOK, JESSİE COOK ABOUT LITTLE INFORMATION, Please Be Careful

This guy keeps removing the Delete template. His story is an OC story, he blanked the page, and directly uploaded his OC. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 23:34, September 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * Also, caught another blogicle: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Kilgorio/guest_infinit_hacked_my_acound


 * Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 00:33, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

New
I've made a new account. Would you please delete the last one I was using. I felt like making a new username. Additionally, on the last application I made for administrator, I left off that I demoted myself on the previous account, and then it was brought up that I resigned. Only wanted to clarify, I was not trying to resign, only demote myself temporarily. I'm not sure if it makes any difference on whether I can be an administrator right away, that's cool with me either way. I verified my email was the same on both accounts the only way I know how on this message. I've seen a link to something called usercheck, which is for verifying emails, but I can't find it. Would you be able to give me that link?

Myateal (talk) 10:37, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

Yo again
The Greatest Good of the Greatest Number needs the Historical Archive/PD category. It's a work by Gertrude Atherton and is in the Public Domain. I believe I added this story before the category was created, which is why it is not in there already. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 09:38, September 14, 2017 (UTC)

Deletion
I recently had a story, " Just Breathe " Deleted, Can you give me a few tips on whati did wrong perhaps?

I recently had a story deleted, " Just Breathe " I was wondering what i did wrong? If so can I have a few tips on improving a story next time?

~SW

Rollback Question
I know I'm a long way from becoming one, but I was checking the Rollback requirements on the Requests page and saw that one of the requriements is that you "must know the wiki naming conventions."

I was wondering if you could tell me the "naming conventions" are.

Thank you for your time.

Suomynona404 (talk) 19:42, September 15, 2017 (UTC)

Taxing the poor to feed the rich!... Wait a moment
Just a heads up; I'll probably add a few more of Gertrude Atherton's works to the site after I'm through reading them. I recently managed to procure a copy of The Bell in the Fog and Other Stories, which is cool. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 21:13, September 15, 2017 (UTC)

Collab thread
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:593000 Mind giving it a highlight? Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 20:18, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

Question
Hi. I was just wondering why you deleted my pasta "The JPG Nightmare". If you can please explain.

Rectrixadam (talk) 02:31, September 19, 2017 (UTC)Rectrixadam

apology
Hi There,

How's it going? I'm not sure if you remember me. I wanted to apologise for how things have seemed to have kicked off online these last few days. After you deleted my story I admit I was a bit salty and complained to some of my other writing friends. It all seems to have spiraled out of control from there. I wanted to say I totally respect your opinion regarding the issues with my story and am trying to take it on board for my future writing. I can't help but feel like I've accidentally started all of this and it was never my intention for things to get as crazy as they have or for anyone to have feelings hurt or to feel like they're in the wrong. So, I'm sorry dude. Before all this kicked off I was actuallygoing to ask you if you wanted to do an interview on my podcast as the main (ish) mod responsible for QC on the wiki. That offer is still open if you want to but obviously I understand if not.

Thanks,

Simon Stex85 (talk) 20:05, September 20, 2017 (UTC)stex85Stex85 (talk) 20:05, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

CSS
The CSS operates by basically reading the url. Helel's name should actually be like this:

a[href$=":Helel_ben_Shahaar"], a[href$="/Helel_ben_Shahaar"]{

Just giving you a heads up. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 21:01, September 20, 2017 (UTC)


 * It's no problem. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 21:13, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Re: No need for apologies
Thanks man, I'm glad. In terms of the podcast, my channel is here: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCiSGvfvC8QPpOsK8w21woBg then general theme is that it's for aspiring creepypasta writers. So we just talk about a story you've written, one you like and what you think of the scene in general. Obviously you don't have to speak for the wiki as a whole. Your opinions are all good. In the interest of transparency I have interviewed Abysmii and Dead Palette. I'm totally neutral though. I'm just interested in what people think! Let me know if you're interested. Obviously no worries if not!

Thanks,

Stex85 (talk) 21:23, September 20, 2017 (UTC)stex85Stex85 (talk) 21:23, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Question about my unfinished story?
hey invective, im here to request something: indeed my story was incomplete, and lacking in some cases, but can you give me one chance to revitalize and post my finished story again? i apologize for the previous repost, that was a minor accident caused by my computer. anyways, i hope i can hear back from you soon.

LionPrince13 (talk) 04:46, September 21, 2017 (UTC)Lionprince13

New Wicker Saga Story
Hey, Empy! If/when you have the time, hoped you might check out my new Wicker Saga story Sins of the Father. Thanks in advance!

Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 13:25, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re: Spinoff Question
Hello :). I was wondering If I could write a Slenderman story. I know that thousands of others have written stories. But I wanna try writing my own version of Slenderman. One that isnt the over-powered creatures that everyone knows. But I wanna know if its okay to use this character.

SentinelKnight (talk) 14:57, September 21, 2017 (UTC)SentinelKnight

In the off-chance you didn't notice...
Slimebeast removed all his pastas.

I more messaged you to ask if you had any idea this was happening, and if you need any help from me.

" I was living the dream ... That is, until I woke up " 23:03, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

Question about my old story
hey empy, don't mean to be annoying, but since i've asked people to review my current story i decided to ask this: could i remake my old story involving Ethan? I'm not starting it right away, I need planning and stuff, but if you could get back to me with an answer, i'll understand either way, anyways bye. LionPrince13 (talk) 04:07, September 22, 2017 (UTC)LionPrince13


 * Sorry to bother you again, but can you do something about this guy? He's made a bunch vandalisms (in taste only he would consider good) and is generally not doing anything good.


 * " I was living the dream ... That is, until I woke up " 05:31, September 22, 2017 (UTC)

A Place for a Bambi Creepypasta
Hi. Its me again. Remember that Bambi Creepypasta I wrote? So, basically, lost Episodes or Haunted Gaming Creepypastas are not allowed here anymore, right? So can you please send me a link for that site you told me where I could post them?

I'm asking that, not because of my Bambi Creepypasta, because I noticed it was a little... Too... You know, too mainstream. So I attempted to actually Rewrite the story of JC-the-Hyena, "Sonic.exe". Yeah, that story where Sonic cries blood and stuff...

I rewrote it to, well, MAKE SENSE. So, where can I post it again, signed by the person you never thought would ever get in this wiki again, NichProductions (talk) 03:10, September 24, 2017 (UTC)NichProductions

Alright, thank you once again for your hints and for the links. I hope this goes well.

Maybe one of these days I will manage to actually create a story from scratch. Until then, I will be fixing (atleast trying to) some Creepypastas. Thank you once again, NichProductions (talk) 06:36, September 24, 2017 (UTC)NichProductions

Mind if you look over my new story version too?
I took some reading to NoEnd House and a tiny fraction of The Showers. Shack of Shadows' second half is almost completely remade. I wanted to ask if you could look over that with Helel sometime. Bye! LionPrince13 (talk) 06:52, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

A Spinpasta Deletion
Ok, I'm back again. It turns out NOT EVEN SPINPASTA WANTS MY STORY.

Nobody wants my stories. What the fuck do I do? Am I really THAT BAD of a writer? Well, clearly Creepypasta wikis HATE ME with all their hearts, so WHERE THE HELL DO I POST MY STORIES? What do I do? Hell, I scrolled over my story to make sure I fixed ANY grammatical errrors, added a few things here and there, basically, completly fixed all that was wrong, but it still got deleted. Can you PLEASE explain me what in the fuck do I do? NichProductions (talk) 14:44, September 24, 2017 (UTC)NichProductions AKA the guy that must be either the most hated person in the Creepypasta community, or just the most confused bastard in the world.

PS: Since they fucking deleted the story, I just lost all the improvement I made to it.

So fuck.

Damn, its like you're active 24/7. Well, anyways, I just did that. I really can't understand what I did wrong! I mean, come on, its SPINPASTA, which means, well, that it was made for lost episodes, haunted games and such, right? You yourself sent me the sites and told me those were the kind of Wiki's I should I post those kinds of stories to. And besides, It looks even better than my Bambi Creepypasta, that for sure, I noticed that thing needs LOTS of rewritting until it gets REALLY good. Heck, I even made Sonic become something more scary than just "Sonic with bleeding eyes". And I was descriptive.

Damn, its like you're active 24/7. Well, anyways, I just did that. I really can't understand what I did wrong! I mean, come on, its SPINPASTA, which means, well, that it was made for lost episodes, haunted games and such, right? You yourself sent me the sites and told me those were the kind of Wiki's I should I post those kinds of stories to. And besides, It looks even better than my Bambi Creepypasta, that for sure, I noticed that thing needs LOTS of rewritting until it gets REALLY good. Heck, I even made Sonic become something more scary than just "Sonic with bleeding eyes". And I was descriptive. NichProductions (talk) 14:59, September 24, 2017 (UTC)NichProductions (Forgot to add this at first)

IT LIVES
Did you guys miss me???? <3

I got a new story idea that I couldn't put down, so I threw up all the words in the workshop under the name "My Beating Heart". Got a moment to read it over??

Nachtrae (talk) 17:54, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

The saltmines keeping you busy huh? Take your time!

Nachtrae (talk) 18:04, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Done...???
i worked out some of the bugs, but im gonna predict i didnt work out all of them. i also forgot to mention empy that since Jason, I took a gigantic cut from creepypasta's, then tried to write Ethan, then took another break, so its not like i spent all these years writing, im still very inexperienced, so i understand if i annoy you with each imperfect post i make. I'll await your review. again. LionPrince13 (talk) 01:42, September 25, 2017 (UTC)

Re-posting
Hey. Question. Can you post an updated version Of your story if it has been awhile and you made Some changes to improve it?

--Jvhorror (talk) 16:25, September 26, 2017 (UTC)Jvhorror.

How does the deletion appeal work?? Is That when someone supports your story and confirms it?--Jvhorror (talk) 20:57, September 26, 2017 (UTC)Jvhorror

I just read that section. Which do you recommend By my regards? Jvhorror

Unrelated note
How about I never do a story again? Will that make you happy? (AustinDR) (talk), 04:52, September 26, 2017 (UTC)

Suicidemouse
Can you unlock the Suicidemouse.avi page? I have some information to add.--HolUp (talk) 01:58, September 27, 2017 (UTC)

The author of the original Suicide Mouse Pasta on 4chan from 2009 is named "Alexander Culafi". Proof: http://suicide-mouse.wikia.com/wiki/The_%22Suicidemouse.avi%22_(Creepypasta)_-_Real_or_Fake%3F#OP_Reveal. Could you add this to the page?--HolUp (talk) 21:11, September 27, 2017 (UTC)

May i ask why my creepypasta was removed? if it's the date I can move it but I put effort in this. This was my first post and I was looking forward to some honest critique so I could become a better writer. If you could offer me a more precise evaluation of how the story could be better or if there are some elements I need to change I would appriciate it.

I look forwards to a response

-MisterYenzMisterYenz (talk) 18:11, September 30, 2017 (UTC)

Deletion Information Request
Hey! I was just wondering why you might have deleted my micropasta. I read the Micropasta Requirements and it followed all of them, along with Quality Standards.

XZonafer (talk) 01:27, October 1, 2017 (UTC)XZonafer

Just so you know
Hey Empy,

Just so you know, there is a blog post here: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Pennywise04/float not sure if that is allowed or not, but don't think it is.

Best,

JohnathanNash (talk) 04:30, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

Re: View
I just wanted to let you know that I really deeply appriciate the help that you have provided me. If there is no objection on your end I would like to repost a revised version of the piece sometime later when I get some time on my hands. The fact that you went the extra mile to help me means so much to an aspiring writer like me. I'll do my best to offer more context to the story. MisterYenz (talk) 05:48, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

About the Undertale: No Mercy thing
Okay, so, I was working on the Undertale page, and I wasn't even done with it, and it was deleted for not being finished? ARE YOU KIDDING? I was planning to continue the page, but I was in nighttime, so I didn't have enough time to finish re-writing it.

Astronautofglory203 (talk) 15:52, October 3, 2017 (UTC)

Re: Re: Name
Thanks a lot, I appreciate it!

StevieGLiverpool (talk) 21:50, October 3, 2017 (UTC)

Page would not paragraph. Wonder if you could help.
Al Aaraaf would not paragraph properly despite fixing it twice. Wonder if you can help.

(Reference that I'm using - https://en.wikisource.org/wiki/Al_Aaraaf)

Thanks - Hello There Neighbor (talk) 22:25, October 4, 2017 (UTC)

Review
Hi. I forgot to put the word ‘feedback’ on My recent post in the writers aud forum. Do you guys still check it? Anyway it’s there if You wanna take a gander to see what I did wrong until one day I get it right.

Hi I would like some assistance to see if this story I have written for 2 years now meets the standards on this wiki It is called The Creature I have written it on google docs I would really appreciate it Call of duty noob (talk) 19:11, October 8, 2017 (UTC)

Pretty Please...
Can I get a category for my stories under my username? I meet all the given criteria.

Thanks.

SnakeTongue (Nelson Smith) (talk) 22:12, October 9, 2017 (UTC)

Julian's Deleted Story
Hey you recently deleted my first story I have ever put on the creppy pasta wiki. I was wondering why? I read your post about why it may deleted and I believe it does not fall under any of these things. I also dont think some "admin" should be going around and deleting people hard work before taking to them.

Thanks,

Julian

Hey
Hey Empy, I was wondering. Do you have the time for Discord? Bringer Of The Light (talk) 03:40, October 12, 2017 (UTC)

Deletion Information about The Haunted Game Genie
Excuse me, but I would like to know the reason why my story was taken off the website, please.

My story isn't really about gaming at all, the gaming aspect was just used as a plot device, that's all, and I do not believe it's similar to any other previous stories, I add new spins, different directions, and a whole different story in the mix, I just gained inspiration from previous pastas, movies, books, etc. So I do hope you take in these considerations when over looking my story again, and I do indeed find the rule of not being able to have an emotional driven story unorthodox, you need to be emotionally driven to feel what the characters are feeling at the moment to understand them more, fear itself is an emotion, and if we can't have any emotional driven plots or storry elements then this site shouldn't allow any horror stories at all. TheJoeCool (talk) 04:02, October 12, 2017 (UTC)

Since you are an expert reviewer of creepypastas, what do you think of this one?
Hello, EmpyrealInvective, the creepypasta wikia of my country, Italy, translated this creepypasta and made it creepypasta of the month! I personally think it is just the average big ending shock that actually was done a thousands time, though, and was really disappointed when I read it. Maybe it can be okay, but in no way a creepypasta of the month. Really, I saw a dozen creepypastas on Reddit with a twist like this. What do you think of that? It is fairly short, it will not take you much time to read it, if you want.

https://www.reddit.com/r/shortscarystories/comments/2ejsjg/seeing_red_the_first_day_of_school/?st=j8of4nnv&sh=93f21951

Thanks.

Grand Albert (talk) 16:24, October 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re: re: D
Yes, it is true; but people will not stop to regard average creepypastas from Reddit with standard ending twists as masterpieces and the italian creepypasta wikia certainly will not. I reiterate in saying that it is an euphemism to claim that it is not worth of a monthly feature. I bet you will agree with me on this. Thanks for your time; this time I really needed to read another one's opinion, because it is not the first time the italian creepypasta wikia does something like this.

Grand Albert (talk) 09:36, October 13, 2017 (UTC)

Deleted Scene
Sorry about that, Empy. I had to delete that section for the word limit, and I just wanted to make sure it got to see the moonlight. (It was exactly 4,000 words without it; I wanted to write so much more...)

Won't happen again!

Duskfallen (talk) 18:07, October 12, 2017 (UTC)Noctevoire


 * No problem. I don't intend for the scene to be judged as part of the story; I just want it to be associated with the story.

Duskfallen (talk) 18:15, October 12, 2017 (UTC)Noctevoire

On your talk page it says a reason for it's deletion may be because it was a more emotional driven story. When writting the story I thought it was clear that the only parts written in real time was the end of the story when the main character is not using proper grammar, mainly using lowercase and etc. And the part of the mother calling him was written in real time because his mom calls him while he is writting. In the description I stated that this story was an experiment on writting a story that was taken from somebody's note book, and how there was a police report shown at the end, and the newspaper clipping, and my usage of [ turning the page] was ment to seem like a police officer was looking though a case file, and how I use a different and more messy font at the end like somebody was writing in a rush, and how some letters were the color red, like the character's blood is falling on the page of the journal, and I stated that I would like to see if people liked this way of writing, I also state I wrote the story in under an hour, and I felt like I half-ass the story. My last point is the thing about the "Game Genie" showing weird images on the screen was actually true, my "Game Genie" did actually show an image a white oval that actually looked a bit more detailed than what the NES was capable of doing, I even took pictures of my T.V. screen, I was going to put them in the story, to seem like the main character took these pictures and taped them into his journal. This story wasn't made to be good, it was made to see if people liked this style of writing. I was actually inspired by Stephen King's Carrie, in that book it's writen as if the police is interviewing or interrogating the students at the high school to learn what happened. I do hope you understand this and put my story back on the site so I can get feedback on the writing style, NOT the story or plot. TheJoeCool (talk) 00:57, October 13, 2017 (UTC)

Story Deletion (Lambs House)
did it not meet your quality standards? what's up?

Anon1798 (talk) 01:59, October 18, 2017 (UTC)me

what was so bad about my story

what was so bad about my story?

Anon1798 (talk) 02:04, October 18, 2017 (UTC)

yeah i would like if you went into more detail.

mostly the awkward wording and story issues

Thanks so much for the review.

Here's one last question and answer this honestly:

Should I scrap the story all together? Is the main plot not good?

OR Could i touch it up with your suggestions and create a good story? If so, consider this a rough draft

You mentioned "other plot issues" do you mind pointing those out too?

Hi Empy, sorry for the duplicate pages. I thought there was a problem with my internet and thought the story didn't post, so I tried it again. Thanks for pointing this out to me.

Hi Empy. I was scrolling through your salt mines and saw a message that struck me as familiar. It was then that i realized I was the one who posted it. The "commence the butthurt" one was me. Two years ago when I was 12 and made am account named Tikiboy03. Needless to say I meet the age requirment now, and I'm much more mature, amd I would rather move on. Althought I am not sure how it works I was wondering if it were possible to get me the stories deleted from that account, just for kicks. Hell, maybe I'll try completely rewriting them to make them any good. Thanks :).

Whoops I forgot to signature the above message

--Icydice (talk) 22:30, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Hi,

I was wondering if you can help me. I just wrote and narrated an original Creepypasta of my own and I want to post it. I have no idea where to post or how to post. Could you let me know please.

ThankyouRipleyGH 06:15, October 23, 2017 (UTC)

Okay so you deleted my creepypasta. That's fine whatever, I understand I suppose, but can I at least view it or get back the story I wrote, I mean it was pretty shitty, but damn, I at least wanna save it in a text document so I laugh about it. I wish it was reuploaded on Trollpasta at least. Which is uh, the place I should've posted it in the first place. Crap.

It was my story you just recently deleted, Wally Bear is dead. It was removed because it failed to meet quality standards which I understand why to be honest. So I was asking if you can allow me to recover so I can upload it somewhere else like trollpasta I guess. Which is where I should've uploaded it in the first place. So yeah, can you recover my Wally Bear is dead creepypasta?

Ah, thank you.
Ah I see the paste bin link. Okay thanks man, I was little confused on the whole messaging thing, didn't realize you were sending messages to me until now. Well, I'll go send this silly pasta to the trollpasta website, I suppose. Thanks again.

Reposting Stories
Hi Empy, just a quick question. If I rewrite a story do I submit it through a deletion appeal or is there a different avenue to submit it through? - Thanks Lavecki (talk) 15:37, October 24, 2017 (UTC)Lavecki

Why exactly was my story deleted? I see no grammar issues nor cliches. M.B.S. 1023 (talk) 20:06, October 24, 2017 (UTC)M.B.S. 2304

I understand most of the reasons for my story being deleted. The only thing I have a problem with is your sentence, “Feel free to read most books.” It sounds as if you think I’ve never read a single book in my life, when I have in fact read many.

Deletion Request
Hi there, could you please help me delete this old page I made, The Mannequin Factory, so that I can post a new, revamped version of it?

05:33, 28/10/2017 05:33, October 28, 2017 (UTC)

thank you
you are awesome bro User talk:KillaHawke1

Thanks for your advice
If possible, can I ask for more? How do I get more people reading my Pasta? Is there a place where I can meet people/friends to perhaps introduce the pasta to? Do I just go around promoting it?

08:24, 28/10/2017 08:24, October 28, 2017 (UTC)

Follow up question
How do I know what my licence is? And where do I find narrators?

11:16, 30/10/2017 11:16, October 30, 2017 (UTC)

I tried?

I'm back
been a while huh? i've been listening to the jeff story by BanningK and i ditched Shack of Secrets a while back, i hardly did any writing too. i was just wondering if i could try and rework Ethan's backstory instead, i'd like another chance, lemme know LionPrince13 (talk) 21:25, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Asking
I asked Banning himself since he's an admin if i could get approval to rewrite my story, since you're an admin and he hasn't responded as quick as you, could I get your approval to repost it? LionPrince13 (talk) 01:36, November 4, 2017 (UTC)

I heard you were a harsh critic.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:597612?useskin=oasis.

Would like a few opinions on it. Thanks.

--Custom signature? pfft, as if I were that creative (talk) 23:19, November 5, 2017 (UTC)

Oh, that's alright. If you're really busy then take mine off the list, I won't put even more on you at the moment. Thanks anyway.

--Custom signature? pfft, as if I were that creative (talk) 23:48, November 5, 2017 (UTC)

Hello EmpyrealInvective, recently I noticed that you blocked a vandal by the username of PickleGoatse with the reason "Underage/ToU violation." However, what proof do you have that this user is underage? While vandals may not be pleasant to have across the network, I don't think it's a good idea to assume one's age based on their behavior. Whether or not the blocked user is a good person, it just gets on my nerves when admins assume that a user is underage based on their behavior. Age =/= maturity. Thanks for reading. RedBomb1 (talk) 18:56, November 6, 2017 (UTC)

Re: Categories
Hey there, thanks for the notification.

I wouldn't mind this personal category thing, you're an admit no? I guess you could attend to the matter then.



BloodySpghetti (talk) 19:57, November 6, 2017 (UTC)

I'm not in a hurry or anything, so it's fine.

Have a nice day, mate

Story Usage
Hello,

I am here to ask a few questions about navigating this page, and to complain about a course of action that happened without my permission.

How do you let people know your story is a first draft and that you're searching for feedback? I've never written a horror story, and I had a really good idea. I typed the basis of it pretty much, but instead of feedback, it got deleted because an admin didn't like the story. I'm doing a complete rewrite of it, too. I've removed the "I see things others cant" cliche, and gave more background information about cetain events, too.

Can you also explain to me each forum? I'm used to TV show/video game forums, and only ever written stuff of fanfiction.net or Amino. Very different layout. So could I get a briefing on how the layout here works?

And finally, someone in this community took the first draft of my story and moved it to the Trollpasta Wiki. I'm not mad that it's there, I'm mad because they did so without permission. I am extremely anti-plagarism, and don't take people using my work without permission. If you can figure out a way to get it removed, that'll be great.

Thank you! LavenderBeautydance (talk) 21:44, November 6, 2017 (UTC)

Why
Why did you get rid of my stories? and why can't I post anymore?

Plagriaism
Hitchker

I wanted you to know that this story was plagriaized.

I found this story on here, and the person who posted it here didn't give credit.

This short story was written by the author Anthony Horowitz, who wrote a collection of short horror stories.

It was made into a graphic novel, and here's the proof.

Thanks.

Suomynona404 (talk) 18:06, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Hello. thank you for the feedback on my pasta. I will review my mistakes and try not to make the same mistake again.

TheLibrarian657 (talk)TheLlibrarian657

My Pasta
Thank you for telling me about my creepypasta, I needed the feedback, even if it is being deleted. But why do I still see it on the site? https://www.reddit.com/r/creepypasta/comments/77naay/the_woman/?st=j904dec1&sh=190cc66d

J.E.MCreepypastas (talk) 20:06, November 8, 2017 (UTC)KiraElijah of J.E.M Creepypastas

Whoops
Sorry, I was on the wrong site. honest mistake

J.E.MCreepypastas (talk) 20:37, November 8, 2017 (UTC)J.E.M Creepypasta's KiraElijah

Hi, I´m really sorry if I´m bothering you but I noticed you were one of the admins. I´m in the process of creating several different Creepypastas (only one of which I´m slightly confident in) and to be fairly honest I´m a tad mixed up with all the rules for submitting. Again I´m really sorry if I´m bothering you but I was wondering if when I was done writing, I could send it to you as a sort of rough draft so I can correct the issues before posting it? I just don´t want to take up someone´s time to read something that goes against rules that I´m not following. Thank you so much if you chose to help me! I hope you have a wonderful day sir.

Ann234 (talk) 21:24, November 8, 2017 (UTC) Ann234

Re- View
I understand. I´m sorry for pestering but thank you very much for taking time out of your busy schedule to answer my question. I appreciate the help and I will definitely be checking the page you suggested. Thank you once again!

Ann234 (talk) 22:01, November 8, 2017 (UTC) Ann234

Re: author category
Hey! Sorry it's taken me so long to respond to this! I'd totally be down for having my own author category; thanks so much for thinking of me. But I'm not actually sure I qualify - like 7 of my stories are also on creepypasta.com, so not necessarily exclusive to this site.

What would make my life a lot easier, though, would be if I could put up some sort of page with links to all the chapters of Black Friday, all in one place. It's kind of a bitch giving people the link to the first chapter and just sort of saying "click 'next chapter' again and again until you get to the end."

Thanks again!!

NickyXX (talk) 05:25, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

License
Awesome, thanks for the info. I'll keep it as creative commons for now, but I'm going to do some research to see the other options. Also, thanks for updating the categories!

The Soul Fister (talk) 12:53, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Question
Would shapeshifting creatures be against the guidelines? LionPrince13 (talk) 22:56, November 13, 2017 (UTC)