Talk:Just One Minute

paragraphs ....
this needs them.

However, I will say that I like the concept you have. Someone makes a bargain for extra minutes of life, and then realizes he is stuck living out the last minute of countless lives. It's a very Twilight zone twist. However, the story could be better.

It is not very suspenseful. It doesn't build very well. Maybe more focus on him dying in the last minute of someone's life a few times. You have a really solid idea. Danatblair (talk) 23:57, July 8, 2013 (UTC)