Talk:Surveillance/@comment-24998709-20140529125839

To be honest, I love this. Just made an account to comment on something that is aggravating/confusing me. Could you clarify this?

"There's a strange, heavy feeling to the air like at any minute I might suffocate. I jump when I hear a car go by outside. I turn around for a second to watch it; to see if they see the creature. But they don't. They just keep on driving. I turn back to the monitor and the bottom of my stomach drops out. The car never showed up on the screen; I should be able to see it just exiting the view of the camera now, but instead all I see is the dark road. The creature still appears there, but when I take another look outside, I can't see it anymore. The screen has been frozen for more than an hour."

Please? I don't understand how he looks out the window, sees the car and the creature, looks back, and its been an hour? Please clarify thanks! Otherwise, amazing story.