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This sounds better, less vague.

Daddy sounds human. Homo Sapiens. Nuts but Homo Sapiens. Would the story go better if he weren't? Daddy is a vampire who drinks blood of corpses and Junior eats the remains? Or even something truly exotic and terrorizing? Just an idea but your imagination is the limit.

Junior must know what is happening. He is a part of it. Why does he participate? How do they evade detection and capture by law enforcement? Even after one gourmet meal the cops would be hunting for a killer, unless the game harvested was something that the cops wanted to disappear. There are lots of ways that can go, down to Daddy being a vampire and on the police force.

Feel free to use or toss any of these ideas and questions.