Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-6822927-20190326201531/@comment-9041013-20190328000530

Ehh, there isn't much in terms of horror here, I don't get what Im supposed to be scared or creeped out by? Are you going for a sort of supernatural dementia angle? That doesn't look like that, it just looks like a man has random progressive loss of informational memory. He doesn't lose all of his memories (like skills, and eventually how to use his body.)

Dementia is scary, this isn't... it's kind of rushed and well, lacking in depth.

I repeat again, take your time with writing stories, read a lot... formulate ideas, think hard about what would make them horror related and then take your time to write them down, and work on any technical issues. Take your time, that's the key.

You don't have to post once a week or whatever, it's fine, this site is not going anywhere.