Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25558572-20140630002957/@comment-11012411-20140630032218

The premise is not anything excessively unique, but of course, every general creative idea has been done in some way, shape or form, and this story in itself sounds grotesquely-interesting. The last part has become something of a cliche in horror movies, so in all honesty, to make it more unnerving to the reader, I'd advise maybe the person with the centipede inside of them perhaps suddenly wake up in their home and waking up a relative or a friend with ululations of pain and agony, and it bursts out when they check up on them, demanding what's wrong. I find that more exciting and frightening, in my opinion.