User blog comment:Zumokiworks335/a practice in proofreading/@comment-24101790-20161211191006/@comment-24101790-20161211193522

Sorry you disagree with the third one, but my review points out the numerous issues that were present as well as the wording issues that still are in the poem ("But not nearly before your skin but soon I start killing again…") That being said, you can turn down any advice given. It's not going to help you in any way and will likely end up with your story getting posted on the troll pasta wiki with lines like:

Can you feel the sunshine? (Sonic R might need royalties for that line) Hear the joyful screaming? Sorry I can’t, because of my parents screaming. … Hydrogen after hydrogen. (I understand, my parents cry chemicals all the time, side note: water is composed of hydrogen and oxygen) Blowing in my stomach. Must be world war 2. … Can you feel it…"

Best of luck to you in the future.