User blog:TeaCupsinBlackandWhite/Creepypasta Riff: The One and Only

Well hi. I am cleaning out that arcive in my Google Drive, so I am just going to riff until I can't anymore. How about a little prelude to this story. The first love will always be the hardest to get over, but just remember that it can be avoided if you appease the spirits. Anyhow, let's get this over with:

The One and Only. Isn’t that a book by Emily Giffin? 

Maggie was about 7 years old And Sally was six, thank you. . She used to play lots of toys Oh I love to “play toys”.  and games Would you like to play a game? . Most of all she imagined herself as a princess How sweet. . You know in every fairytale story there's the princess looking for her prince <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Except for in Brave, and Mulan, and Beauty and the Beast. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.7999999999999998;margin-top:4pt;margin-bottom:6pt;"><span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Maggie felt like when she grew up she would find her true love and have a happy ending <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">In other words, she is going to discover the world of comics and anime and become obsessed with fictional characters. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. One year ago she died of a heart disease <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">That’s ironic, with that whole love thing you just mentioned. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.7999999999999998;margin-top:11pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"><span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Her parents were devastated <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Wow, parents in a Creepypasta with a proper reaction to their kids. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. They had her funeral and put <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#1155cc;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:underline;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">photos<span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> of her all over the house <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">There weren’t already photos of her hanging up? <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. Since her parents were so devastated they got another child. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">They magically got another child? Did someone come up to their door saying “You look sad, have a baby!”? <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> It was a baby girl <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">I am seeing a pattern here, already. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. Her parents named her Elizabeth.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.7999999999999998;margin-top:11pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"><span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Elizabeth almost had the same personality as Maggie but had a darker one <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Is this going to become some sort of “You can never replace me” twist to it? <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. Elizabeth was just the <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#1155cc;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:underline;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">complete<span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> opposite of Maggie <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">You just said that Elizabeth was just like Maggie. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. Elizabeth wasn't really a normal girl after all <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Oh god, please, tell me why. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.7999999999999998;margin-top:11pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"><span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Elizabeth would have a big imagination. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Didn’t Maggie have an imagination too? Also, I swear a talking notepad made us all agree to never be creative again. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> She had dreams about Maggie <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">But she wouldn’t know that, would she? <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> and her playing, telling each other their dreams <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Ghost’s have dreams too. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">, and all of that. Elizabeth told her parents that she has seen Maggie. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">You mean her parents told the young child that her sister died around her age, and she just knew that she was dreaming about Maggie? <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> Her parents were a little worried. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">/A little/? <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> They would see Elizabeth Playing <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Why is that capitalized? <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> outside and as if they saw her talking to herself. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">That is something that kids do, especially if it’s a kid with no siblings, did you try to get her any friends? <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> Her parents called her to talk about Maggie <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">So she didn’t know Maggie? <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.7999999999999998;margin-top:11pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"><span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">They told her she died and told her what she used to love <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">So much for a “she’ll be ready when she is older”. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. Her parents showed the picture of Maggie to Elizabeth <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> So they did take down the pictures that they had put up before. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. Maggie was holding some flowers and wearing a cute dress and had a suspicious look on her <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#1155cc;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:underline;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">face<span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> Ooh, suspicion on a child’s face in a photograph, this must be Creepypasta. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> A few days after Elizabeth was thinking about Maggie <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Either this sentence needs a comma, or this sentence needs a comma. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. Maggie showed up in her dreams and said "find a prince for me and he has to be the one and only". <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">This should say something about the teachings of her parents, she is seven and is only thinking about boys! Hell, she is dead and still that is on her mind, imagine how she would’ve been at thirteen! <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> Elizabeth would have that dream every night. Elizabeth couldn't stop thinking about it. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Peer pressure is stronger than you think

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.7999999999999998;margin-top:11pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"><span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">8 years later, Elizabeth was now 16 years old <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Oh, I thought she was going to be fifty or something. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. She had a high school life <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">That poor girl <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> and lived her life perfectly <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Never mind, then. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. She has best friends and has a boyfriend named Alex  Elizabeth and Alex have been dating since their Freshman year. They were so in Love. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Forget proper tenses, they don’t matter anyhow. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> They both planned to go to college and have a good career. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Her parents never told her to be careful, did they? <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.7999999999999998;margin-top:11pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"><span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Elizabeth had a good day with Alex and enjoyed the rest. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">The rest of what? <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">That night she had the same dream come up since her childhood <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Wait, are you saying she had the same dream every night, or do you still have troubles forming sentences? <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. It was Maggie telling her.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.7999999999999998;margin-top:11pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"><span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">"Find a prince for me and he has to be the one and only" <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Some people never grow up, especially when they die and it becomes physically impossible for them to do so <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.7999999999999998;margin-top:11pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"><span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Elizabeth got bothered and told her to stop and look for her own <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> Rude. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. The next day Elizabeth was telling Alex about her childhood. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">They haven’t talked about their childhood before? They have been dating for like a year or so (she should be a sophomore) and there was never a chance to share childhood stories that might be somewhat relevant for whatever reason? <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> She told him her story when she was little and would see Maggie. Alex thought she was crazy so she left her alone for a while. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Yup, they sure were in love. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> when she had the photo of Maggie she thought Alex took the photo <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">That sentence doesn't make sense. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.7999999999999998;margin-top:11pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"><span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">She called him and said he was going to burn the photo, to end her memory of her childhood. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Memories are not photographs, they are the nightmares that will haunt your dreams for eternity. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> Elizabeth drove to Alex's house and knocked <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">“Do you wanna build a snowman?” <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.7999999999999998;margin-top:11pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"><span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">The door was <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#1155cc;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:underline;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">open<span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;"> so she walked in without saying anything but silence <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">“ Silence! I kill you!” <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. She walked to his living room and was shocked for what she saw <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">There is a reason people don’t walk into other people’s houses when they aren’t invited in. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">. Alex was on the floor dead with his throat slit open. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:#d4d4d5;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Maggie, that’s not nice.

<span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(212,212,213);white-space:pre-wrap;">He was holding A knife in his hand <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(212,212,213);font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;white-space:pre-wrap;">Your capitalization is misleading. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(212,212,213);white-space:pre-wrap;">. Alex had attempted to commit Suicide. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(212,212,213);font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;white-space:pre-wrap;">He didn’t attempt it, he did it. Also, again with the capitalization. <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(212,212,213);white-space:pre-wrap;"> Then she saw the photo of Maggie, and message was written in blood and had said "Where's your one and only? <span style="font-size:15px;font-family:Arial;color:rgb(212,212,213);font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;white-space:pre-wrap;">Dead on the floor, come on Maggie, you had a problem with your heart, not your eyes!

There is nothing like a bit of good old sibling rivalry to tie a family closer to the depths of Hell! Any way, the concept seemed orthodox to me, a bit plain. There was a few things that made me enjoy the story, but it was hard to read at some points. But whatever, what did you think? Did you like this riff? Do you wish my partner would have his throat slit because I wouldn't give my sister what she wanted? Do you wish I would have my throat slit because of someone else's little sister? Tell me in the comments below!