User blog comment:ShawnCognitionCP/Anti-Cliche Creepypasta Contest/@comment-24466828-20150510165517/@comment-27007772-20150512201756

The story didn't use the cliche in a way that put it apart in any special way, and wouldn't surpass our quality standards.

The writing was very bland, and you hardly used any emotion. Questions didn't have a question mark, and exclamation wasn't used when it was needed.

A few plotholes such as a chain appearing that had never been detailed before, and a window scene straight out of The Exorcist.

4/10 Below Average