Talk:The M Show Fan Club/@comment-5784644-20171123002104

God, clever little twisting like this is so rare in the Creepypasta community. Just that one line about the show not being to blame and being great is such a clever little touch that brings this entire story together. From that one line, you immediately trust the show itself and think nothing of the Fan Club. There's only this vague sense that something isn't going right when the bus arrives because, again, you don't think anything of the Fan Club. Then when the police arrive and it's revealed that the Fan Club never existed and it was just some scam to kidnap children, it comes as a shock because the reader trusts the show and, by that train of logic, the Fan Club. Any other story would have not included that line altogether, making it very obvious the Tour was just a front for a kidnapping scheme. Such a nice detail that genuinely elevates the entire rest of the story.