Talk:Symmetry/@comment-5946174-20140210214212

This might have been more enjoyable if not for the pervasive use of the word "it." The "it" of which you spoke is quite obviously Obessive-Compulsive Disorder; you didn't have to keep using that infernal word throughout the course of the story. This only redemption of this tediously repetitive story was the vivid imagery used when the character dug out his eyes. 7/10