Talk:Sin Hallucinations/@comment-27007772-20150211203238

I find it funny that in the character dialog, it literally says "WTF!". That means the character literally proclaimed the abbreviation, not the actual phrase.

The obsession overtone was very nice and did match your subject very well. The pace was pretty good and the dangerous overtone of sin (Which you could have easily spoiled by making a Satanism pasta, oh I'm so glad you didn't) was a perfect lead for this.

The use of Latin was grand, as I am a fan of the language myself, and each character representing a sin was a nice idea.

Over all, your play on the subject you were given was refreshing and well made, and you seemed to have an idea pre-this contest.

6.5/10