Talk:The Gym Teacher/@comment-26129088-20150501143641

I cringed. That's two points for you, now.

Ok...ok. Ok. I'm not sure how to express myself in regards to this pasta. As I said to you before, I am utterly terrified of werewolves. The issue I had with this one was the fact that the werewolf was a pervert. This, at first, made it difficult to take seriously, but you revealed that his transformations were due to his "beast" being brought out by the deadly sin of Lust, and that other "beasts" would come out of people from other sins (Greed, Envy, Gluttony, etc.). I thought that was very interesting. I can't necessarily say that I was "scared" of this werewolf. Just disturbed. Being as obsessed with werewolves as I am, it's kind of to a fault. The traditional giant, man-shaped wolf creatures with the predatory facial features (pointed ears, face, perpetual sharp-toothed glare, etc.) who are faster, stronger, and more witty than you and are HUNTING you in the dark moon lit woods are the ones that give me seizures.

The story itself was great. The character/plot development, the wording/descriptions, and yes, the indirect references to your other pastas (you sneak) were also great. In addition, I wanted to thank you for introducing me to a few more real-life whackjobs (Fish, Kurten, Bundy, etc.) I hadn't known about before.

This was a satisfying pasta.