Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190813084030/@comment-35711173-20190813153951

Thank you both for your reviews. They were very helpful.

Ready - no. It's not. I took it as far as I could, but I could feel that it will take a couple of more drafts to develop it sufficiently. I'm figuring it will be around the first of the month before this story is ready to post.