Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24918243-20140612053158/@comment-24918243-20140613045429

You are absolutetly right once again, Resident. (Besides the grammar of course, but that's a given ; )

The ending kind of fizzed a bit, basically for two reasons. The first, is that in a lot of ways, it contains some autobiographical elements in it. The girl is my daughters age, and pretty much is based on her. There are also a lot of similarities between her dad and me. Even the dialog at the end is very much like ones we had and have. The only real difference is my nickname for her is "Bookworm" and not pumpkin and none of my books teach you how to successfully summon an imp.

The other reason, is i think it was getting rather long winded. Kind of what I believe is longer then a pasta should be. What to do you think?

I do want do a final version. But my big concern is if it's going to be to long if I add more?