Talk:The Devil Went Down to D.C./@comment-35711173-20190523113349

I like the story overall, even though I voted recently for a certain President who kind of resembles yours. But you have violated the Constitution of the English language.

Did you check your story with a tool like http://www.grammarly.com before publishing it? Grammarly shows almost a hundred errors on your story. Spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors as well as having more than one speaker in the same paragraph.

Please take your story to the Writer's Workshop in the forums. People will help you there.