User blog comment:Caravanoflives/Help with editing/@comment-29507836-20161111005019

I'm not really that much of a writer myself, however I heavily suggest that you proofread your stories quite a lot, as said by others already. Try seeing your stories as a reader and not as the author of your stories so that you can figure out what is lacking in your story. Other than that, all I can really say is that you should enjoy writing. If you get stressed, take a breather.

I wish you the best of luck!