Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34190740-20180106000450/@comment-7673575-20180106015955

Thank the Lords you finally figured out that this exists.

First, I have to tell you: your story is still riddled with grammar errors, mostly faulty capitalization and wrong use of interpunction, but it is sometimes downright confusing (Even though no one came outside, did not mean no school). I understand what you are trying to say due to many years of diligent study of English and reading a lot of books, but other people may not.

Furthermore, the plot of the story is very weak and severely overused. Ending is weak, and the story is filled with logical inconsistencies that not even a 13 year old would make.

In its current form, this story cannot even be considered for uploading. I suggest you | take your own advice from your comment on this thread, and learn some basic grammar.

Lastly, if you wish to update your story, do it on the same thread. Multiple threads for the same story are messy, pointless, and take up too much space. I'll delete your older threads, and you'll walk away with just a warning this time. But should you do it again, there will be consequnces.