Talk:Annie96 Is Typing.../@comment-32745322-20170803110441

I actually love this pasta. Its so tense, and you can really get into it. The way it starts with two friends just having a conversation about school, and other things is really well thought out, and the bit about Johnny doing something at school makes you think whether Johnny is the person that was in the garden (I don't think sdo, but lost of people do.) This way the tension builds is realistic, and perfectly paced. The only thing Id have liked at the end would be a little response from Annie96 that suggests that something more sinister has happened that her just being killed. Or something written backwards or something like that just before she goes offline. Its an awesome story though, and definitely my favourite. 9/10