Talk:Foryeti Me Not/@comment-24101790-20151014030740

I enjoyed it, I especially liked the ending. I changed it from the category of monsters to cryptids as I believe Yetis fall into that classification. One of my only qualms was this line:

"Gilbert gasped and tried to hide the blunt behind his back, but was too late. Orwell snatched the marijuana instrument from the red-head's hands and tossed it off the side of the mountain." "Marijuana instrument" seems a bit of an awkward phrase there. Especially since a blunt is just a cigar/cigarillo and really isn't a tool/instrument. I guess you could say he had a roach clip, but that line just stuck out as odd to me.

Other than that small thing, I enjoyed the setting and cryptic use. (Not a very widely-covered category here) Sorry for getting side-tracked and taking so long to get back to you.