Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27206683-20151113055917/@comment-27186445-20151113142148

With creepypasta's I don't think you need any indentation on your paragraphs (please someone correct me if I'm wrong but I don't think I've seen many, if any creepypasta's that are indented like that). I would try and avoid using capatilized letters to portray excitement. Grammar needs some work, for instance the first sentence:

Short range, decent road conditions, decent customers, you know, your average middle class neighborhood oh, lastly, a greater than average wage an overall a great job.

I think it would look better like:

Short range, decent road conditions, decent customers, you know, your average middle-class neighborhood. Oh, and lastly, a greater than average wage for an overall great job.