Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10502460-20190529070124/@comment-9041013-20190529191314

To be honest, Owl, I feel the same way as Nova, it's just randomly there that the mother forgets her child or "dumps him" at places all the time. It felt like it could be a plot of its own. Maybe if it wasn't as much of an abandonment and more of a "you're a grown kid you can handle yourself while we go to other attractions" kind of thing. That could work. That could add up to the character of Austin being this odd-ish kid who had seen something and people don't believe him about it because he also (out of the visible plot) portrays his mother as this mean woman who neglects him, which is untrue.

The climax is rather befitting of you, I liked that. It's fresh, as you tend to write em'.

Just this side plot thing, it was really weird and out of place. Almost distracting from the main goals.