Talk:Necrosleep/@comment-26045820-20150126171446

Okay, I have no idea how this got pasta of the month.

This certainly isn't bad, but some of this writing just comes off as stupid. First off, the cliche names are cringe worthy Hail A. Stan? If I came across that I would either laugh uncontrollably or assume that trolls have now degressed their IQ's back another 10 points. The buildup and concept however, are quite good, they give an honest depiction of a man who has given up on humans and feels no need to ever come into contact with them. But let's face it, this protagonist is just braindead stupid at points, not for taking the pills exactly, but for being so stupid as to put things like the goat head off as printing mistakes, and assuming that occult medicine is a genuinely helpful practice. And the video of the dog head revival was proven fake a long time ago, so that just streches the disbelief even farther. But I am still genuinely impressed with the way that some things on this pasta are described and built up to. While this is not a bad pasta, blatantly stupid writing and cliche hidden website trope are what drags this down hard for me.

I'll give it a 5 or 6/10