Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37090617-20181006214715/@comment-9041013-20181007183547

First fix your English, it's all over the place.

Then fix the plot, it just seems like one of those silly ghost stories kids make up to laugh about, "the toilet ghost of our school" or something. You could come up with some sicko wanting to kidnap and torture kids, but instead it's an abnormally large test freak monster? Ehhh

I don't know, this needs a bunch of re-writing.