User blog comment:Time2Gam3/Creating my new story please help out/@comment-5790583-20120517134817

For review your story:

1. Don't grammar check till your all the way done with it. Throw it into Microsoft Word or something then just do spell check.

2. Release it as a whole, not parts. People get angry at this.

3. If you want, talk to a friend or even me to proof read the story to see if it needs improvement anywhere. I'm sure they'd be, and I wouldn't mind either, reading it to help you out.