Talk:A Night Spent Waking Up/@comment-26187170-20150416195850

It's a little hard to follow in the beginning, at least until you get the shifting prospective down. Once I got that part, I was able to enjoy the read. Nicely done and pretty vivid imagery without being over graphic. 7/10 cups of pasta. Would get an 8 or an 8.5 if it was a bit clearer at the beginning.