Talk:Blobster/@comment-4715955-20160701112941/@comment-26475800-20160702013037

Thank you for giving that feedback. It is very helpful for editing and making this work better. A lot of my stories are a lot shorter than this and not so biased on the characters, but I was trying something new with this. Apparently it had fallen flat in your eyes. As for the name I know it sounds goofy, and I was going to write something goofy with that name, but I saw the contest and decided to make it more serious.

As for the monster, that's really a shame that it had fallen flat for two people now. I couldn't help myself with the monster, I was trying to make something so big and otherworldly, but apparently I just haven't gotten that under control just yet. Hence the reason this is not trying to be published on a legit mag.

I am happy that you had taken the time to read the story, and also that you have given such informative feedback. Maybe the next thing I publish here will be a better read for you.