Talk:The Girl in the Picture/@comment-44591115-20191204203825

After reading all the other comments, I realized they were all probably under the age of 12. While I'm not a masterful writer, I can tell when something is good, and something is bad. This story is, to put it simply, really bad. The pacing is rushed and forced. It feels like one giant run-on sentence, and the characters are unlikeable. I'm not homophobic, and I'm fine with a gay protagonist, but it doesn't feel right in this story. Feels almost like a pushed, "Oh god I need to have LGBT representation!". No you don't. Some of the best stories don't have a single LGBT person. The "twist" is boring and overused, and the giant creature out of nowhere is too unbelievable. You also can remember every small detail and word, even though you were only 12. Obviously its a creepypasta and fake, but this sounds like something out of an 8-year-old's cub scout campfire story. 1.5/10

If you want a great read, I recommend PenPal. Possibly the greatest creepypasta I've ever read. It's a very long read, (2.5+ hours). But it's very realistic, something that could happen. And it's the only creepypasta to ever actually make me a little scared/weary