Talk:Still Waters/@comment-28060931-20161112101725

I liked this story, it was well thought out.

The only problem I have are a few moments of awkward wording. I would reccomeneing reading through tye story out loud; if that's an option for you, of course.

Also, Elizabeth's dialogue seems... Flowerly. I don't when this is set, but people usually don't talk like “How dare you smile while I wither away! Do you find joy in the suffering you caused!”

But I liked the charecters and the plot-twist was good.