Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4495951-20140615103049/@comment-4495951-20140616135914

Thewhy wrote: Ooh la la. I liked the story.The plot was written as well as a professional author, but there were a few errors I saw. Check your spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Other than that, it was awesome. It was a touch of a red pepper to my lips. Thank you, great you like it!