Talk:Ronald McDonald House/@comment-37232386-20181019150744

Where do I even begin?

1) The "bad kid" who "always fucks up" and doesn't care about anything but himself and being a badass...carries a photo album with photos of every single one of the dozen former foster families in it.

2) The facility has clowns working every single position of their super secret office located next to two working factories because who gives a shit about discretion and secrecy?

3) Nobody from the working factories has noticed weird shit next door?

4) The hallways and rooms have ZERO SECURITY CAMERAS AND NO GUARDS.

5) Is the murdering of about 50 or so people (including caseworkers) connected to every single kid really necessary? And don't caseworkers notice other caseworkers vanishing? That's hundreds dead. No authorities have deduced

6) Who in the hell brings a camera to a murder for the purpose of taking sequential photos leading up to it? Just show the aftermath. It's just as effective.

7) The newspaper date is 1992...and...? I mean, I understand it meant it was old trash and nobody had been in the area for a couple decades but some sort of line to point that out would have gone a long way in explaining that.

8) An "abandoned McDonalds"...with a working sign...

9) ...and a working laptop just sitting there that STILL WORKS.

10) Instead of running for his life, he "sits down to write his story"?

11) Outside in the rain where the laptop can short out?

I mean, I'm assuming that they drugged him with something that makes him become like them but this is unclear.

5/10