Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4846904-20141026224849

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12:00 PM, 1989.

It was a weekend and I was up late watching TV. In 1989, my family didn't have a very nice TV. It was pretty low quality and only had 12 channels. I checked all of them however nothing was on. However I was still surfing through the channels. Eventually, I came across a strange channel. Even though the TV didn't have numbers that I could tell the channels by, I could recognize each channel by the programs they would air. This program, however, was weird. I could not recognize what channel this was, so I was curious.

What I saw was a man in a really strange room. There was a clock and a strange statue in the background. The lighting effects were strange and it made the atmosphere creepy. This was shown for about ten seconds with nothing happening. Then, this happened. A man with a white face and black eyes walked into the scene. He was absolutely horrifying. His voice was muffled so I couldn't hear him very well but he was just standing there talking. He stopped and disappeared. It then transitioned to another scene with 4 children. They were all standing in a line in the same room. They were balling but I couldn't hear it. The man came back. He took out a knife from his pocket. Without delay, he started to repeatedly stab the first child in the eye graphically. I was in shock. He took out the childs eye. He then forced the other child to eat it. I was on the verge to tears. The third child was a girl. The man slowly started unclothing her. Since I was only 6, even though I didn't know what this guy was doing to her, I was still shocked. Once he was done, he got a rope and hung the girl from the ceiling. With the last 2 children, he got his knife and cut off one of their legs then licked them before throwing them. For a few seconds, he was staring in front of the camera with a blank expression. It then zoomed into him walking into a weird thing, sort of like a display case. It then looked as if he shut down. I then cried and went to my parents bedroom. I showed them the TV but it didn't show anything but static. They then hit me for staying up late and forced me to go to sleep. That night, I had a nightmare about that man. It went on for years.

12:00 PM, 2014

Although I was over what happened, I never forgot about it. It traumatized me for life. It left me with so many questions. I looked it up but there wasn't anybody who've saw it.

However, at 12:00 PM, 2014, I was channel surfing again when I saw something that frightened me. It was a picture of that same man, in that same display case, in that same house. It said that the show was called "Puppet" and it was on channel 666. 