Talk:Birdhouse/@comment-25941663-20150228102637/@comment-25941663-20150228210407

My only suggestion is that you somehow use the birdhouse from the title. Make Tobias go there. Then have him disappear, or something. Maybe imply that the Angels got him.

I am sure you will come up with something better.

My problem with the current ending is that it has nothing to do with the buildup. How are the Angels and all the other stuff Tobias was saying connected with it? If you can find the link, you will have a very good pasta in your hands.