Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5952769-20171116113024/@comment-5952769-20171208102256

Thanks for the critiques. They're both helpful.

You pointed out shifts I hadn't noticed in the style of writing. It's always difficult to write in a different "voice" without reverting to my normal style.

When you say I should include "a little bit more on the giants," do you mean more backstory, or more manifestations?