Talk:Squidward's Suicide/@comment-26508042-20150618072551/@comment-26319234-20150623205512

and along with the horrible cliches, the narrator kept switching tenses in the middle of sentences, which is a big no-no when it comes to writing a good whatever, whether its a book, a movie, or a creepypasta. even i, a person who gets creeped out pretty easily, didnt think this was scary in the least.