Talk:A Stroll Down The Park/@comment-24155491-20140613082944

There's a LOT of extra information in this story that could be dropped. It's not particularly interesting stuff and mostly serves to slow the story down. After a while I just started skimming until I got to the creepy part.

I'm assuming there's some significance to his mom being the last person to see Mr. Thomas alive because that detail doesn't pop up until the end but I'm not sure what that significance is. Did the hobo ghost zombie appear to the narrator because the narrator's mother murdered the hobo? Was there any significance to the mother being a slut? Did that have to do with a potential murder?