Talk:Summer in Texas/@comment-25383866-20141015130007/@comment-4849011-20141017045856

Coincidentally, my mother and one of my aunts are both retired Language Arts teachers (teachers of grammar, spelling, etc.), so I can give you some pointers if you want me to.

Yeah, I wasn't ready to go to bed just yet, so I decided to go ahead and read this instead of waiting until morning. I agree with a lot of what Banningk1979 said. The characters were realistic with an interesting relationship, and I understood them better after reading this. I could care about them and root for them. Since I've already read "Ole' Broken Bones Pete" I saw the foreshadowing parts in this right away and thought, "Uh, oh, you guys are in trouble!" It would be interesting to have an "Ole' Broken Bones Pete" sequel about Jason's response to the events in that story.