Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24381191-20140816190242/@comment-25226524-20140816202345

Well, to be honest, this is pretty good so far. I personally don't see many things you need to work on other than a few minor mistakes here and there. There are a few missing words and extra words, but nothing that affected the integrity of the story. I personally like this because one of the most famous asylums in the country is near where I live, and there are numerous stories/legends about the place (it actually had a low budget ghost hunters/found footage type film made about it).

All in all, I think the writiing is pretty solid, and you're keeping a pretty good pace going. I really can't see anything specific that needs worked on with what you have so far. I look forward to reading the conclusion.