Talk:Eyeless Jack/@comment-25037251-20140608031713

This plot has so much potential, but.....just wow. This is sort of sad, because 1. it's really short, 2. The doctor and how he was 'so sympathetic', 3. Just how blunt the entire story was, 4. It was very rushed and gave absolutely no background information, and 5. I was not captured at all throughout the story. I was never on the edge of my seat, or scared at any point. This story could have a lot of potential plot wise, but it needs more details. I rate this a 3 out of 10.