Talk:A Terrible Mistake/@comment-29417957-20171230215955

The story had an interesting beginning but immediately falls short as the story feels akwardly unfinished.

The protagonist goes to a haunted place, some people die, and its because of a book that Hitler wrote.

The ending left me with some questions:

1. Why did the protagonist survive?

2. If the entity in the book chose not to kill him, then why did it kill everyone else? Especially since their eyes turned black like everyone else's?

3. Why did the book transform everyone's eyes?

4. Is Adolf Hitler the entity behind the book? Since it was written by him?

5. How did the protagonist escape and tell his story if the door was forced shut?

I feel your story should be expanded and give more of an explanation rather than wrap things up quickly.