Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27027028-20160119193623/@comment-26723520-20160120035317

What was the point of the gun in the bag? Who killed the sister was it a ghost? the parents? You need to really explain and give more story to this I mean the ending made no sense they get some sticky notes and then the sister dies. It had no build up like maybe I don't know after the notes appear omnious things start happening overtime or something.