Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27628405-20160311234804/@comment-24101790-20160311235441

I suggest looking over this guide on poetry as it covers a lot of the issues present here.

Besides the punctuation and capitalization issues (remember that free verse still has to follow basic grammatical rules), there really isn't a sense of rhythm or flow to the verses and the reputation gets redundant really quickly. I'm sorry, but in its current form, this poem really isn't up to quality standards