Talk:Tension/@comment-31525529-20170318111301

The wording's and grammer were excellent however i failed to understand what happened towards the end.Did some sort of entity trick him, Was the entity living with him for the last few day, Was he suffering schizophrenia,did his mother die that day.Correct me if i am wrong unless it was a entity a person suffering from ocd doesn't really hallucinate and ocd is generall a ilness which makes it rather hard for a person to ignore thoughts that may otherwise never  actually occur in real life eg:I just finished using pesticide i get the thought what if i dont clean my hand good enough and as i am serving my family food they get poisoned hence I will continue to do it even though i thoroughly cleaned my hand these thoughts tend to keep flooding in.Your description only states that ocd makes a person want to keep everything in order that confuses the reader with the protaginist being a perfectionist rather than someone suffering from ocd i am diagonsed with ocd hence i would know. otherwise a excellent cp