Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25410869-20140917053902/@comment-25170312-20140917200251

This is a fantastic story. I would suggest just submitting it and then letting another user fix the errors. There's one spelling error I noticed, some places where you should end the sentence and start a new one instead of using a comma, and a few other minor things. You could just post it, let someone fix it up, then check the revision so you can see what they changed. Then you'll know what the errors were. Again, great story!