Talk:Farmhouse/@comment-31630921-20170331120112

There's no detail.

But there's not many spelling mistakes, at least.

Really bland and seems rushed though.

Things like "my camera that I had brought" are unnecessary. You could have mentioned grabbing the camera before leaving the house, but at any rate, the fact you're grabbing it once you get to the farm tells us you brought it, so obviously you don't need to say so by that point.