Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25795480-20151017225417/@comment-26475800-20151017230216

It depends on how it is done. The idea of being watched isn't new, it is used as something to make you feel creeped out in many different stories. But, if you base the entire story on that idea, it may not be bad, it would be even better if you can get the person reading to feel like someone is watching them.

Like I said, it is not a new idea, and if the kicker is that the thing is behind you, you will be ridiculed for it and it will be deleted. As for the story, no one could really say if the idea is good with such a vague concept, manly because of how common it is. Or maybe that is just my opinion, maybe this is a grand idea.