Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27163285-20151105110603/@comment-27008899-20151105123451

Good concept and written well for your age. My first suggestion is to read the greats: Edgar Allen Poe, HP Lovecraft, and Jules Verne. This will help you out with wording. Next, watch some of the greats such as Vincent Price and Alfred Hitchcock. This will help you out with story continuity and how to build tension as well as continuity. Your best writing is ahead of you but the best writers read and research as much as they can. Keep writing and rewriting.