Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25132251-20140801160050/@comment-17758905-20140802001720

First of all: Be glad you haven't read JTK.

Second: This is really rushed. I mean, what the heck was with that random injury? And she just suddenly mentally snaps too. What the heck? Who goes "Huh, suddenly I want to murder some people" and then proceeds to do so?

I know you make it apparent that she is mentally ill or at the very least, unstable, but seriously? You really had to make this a story I literally read in three minutes (probably less)? This idea easily could've been expanded upon.