Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26447851-20160705140237/@comment-26447851-20160720033626

First off. Let me explain exactly what I went through with this character and why it is so complicated for me to make him scary. He started out as a self insert oc in the mansion, dating Jane and training beside her while hunting the rake for killing his family.

The last story I did on quotev took place two years after he became one of the fallen, I ended up giving the residents of the mansion so much personality and depth that they started to sound like they were the family from "the following". Then I set them up against the scp foundation for a dramatic cross over.

Third. The ideas above weren't solid, I was just brainstorming. If anything I might go the 3rd person route and tell it from the female perspective as the Jane the killer story did. Or a bunch of small encounters that bring people to the conclusion of an actual character, all telling the same description. Idk