Talk:Choke.exe/@comment-16427349-20140718225421/@comment-25214505-20140723044554

While I agree with you on some parts, I disagree on how you said it should be changed. Your suggestions are extremely cliché. A black screen with "blood" dropping from the background? Just like most game related creepypastas usually include "hyper-realistic blood huurhuur". I felt that the author gave a nice presentation, but lacked the climax.