Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27558833-20160108143319

Day 1

My name is Kris. I am in charge of the case people call the necro file. The file itself contains photos and documents of a murder, the photos aren't picture take, they are drawings of it. We had witnesses describe who or more like what did this. From what we have gather from the witnesses and other sources, we are calling it "necrostalker" because of how it looks. This... thing, I cannot give details but I will show you one drawing to look at.

now that you know the basics of this situation, i should tell you about the victims. The first victim was terribly mutilated, one arm and one leg was ripped off with nothing but brute strength. One of his ribs was removed and pushed into his eye, and parts of his face was eaten. We know this because we found teeth marks around the wounds.

The second victim, they where missing there head. There stomach was ripped open and both of the victims eyes where on he guts. All of the limbs where missing as well,  I'm not going into much detail because the third victim is whats important.

Now the third victim, no limbs where taken but there eyes where removed and placed in thee mouth and all of there teeth where removed as well. Had three claw makes that broke the skin on the stomach. but we found some sort of black liquid in the wound. We sent samples to the lab to see if they can figure out what it is.

anyway you should head home, its getting late and you should get some rest. your job starts tomorrow. (it's still a work in progress but i would like to know how it is so far and if i need to change or correct anything) 