Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35958194-20180625143926/@comment-9041013-20180626094548

Srdjan Delic wrote: This story exists on Wikipedia, but not many people know about it. This story is about the origin of vampires. I'm working on the better version of this story. The story is real, and on Wikipedia, you can find a scientific explanation. The only thing that I want is to share the story and maybe scare the people a little bit. A lot of stuff on Wikipedia isn't real, and it's too long. I translated it myself and used some things from Wikipedia. The actual name of the character is Arnaut Pavle but in English people call him Arnold Paole. A lot of Serbian words can't be translated into English. Medvedja (Village where Arnold Paole lived), There is a name Milica. A lot of people translate that to Miliza. Also Hajduci. Word hadnack is from Wikipedia because I couldn't find another word for it. I'm Russian, so the words don't bother me. I am saying that the story is kind of dry on stuff, you could take an existing folk story about vampires and make it your own.

I've used the tales of Vseslav of Polotsk being a werewolf and turned into a World War 1 story. ​​​​​​