User blog comment:Orfy666/Help me brothers/@comment-4738000-20111206155950

My tip? double check your spelling and grammar before turning it in. Muder isn't a word, and the lack of do in 'so you guys think you can help?' gives the illusion, at least to me, that there is no option in the matter. Anything else, I'll probably have to look up this poughkeepsie before contributing. Although there's something I must get off my chest: Isn't it considered cheating to get the basic plot of a story through outside sources, namely us? You yourself said that it is based off of someone, so I believe it would be best to do more research on said subject before coming to the internet for help.