Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26075816-20150206212844/@comment-24101790-20150207070207

I would suggest reading over your story and pretending like you were reading it for the first time. Imagine how plot points and twists might be received and what they may find issue with. Other than that, the best advice I can give would be to post your story to the writer's workshop for feedback if you are unsure of it.