Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29275171-20181111051520/@comment-29275171-20181111060421

Sorry, the story was originally entirely bolded, so I suppose when converting it I left that o out. Otherwise, the grammar is all easy fixes.

Plot Wise I suppose there is nothing I can do about that, what is scary and not is a thing left to interpretation. And these aren't necessarily superpowers, just a sheer dominance over the world as a whole, that in his delusional mind is equivalent to superpowers. And I am well aware of those contraries. And I have yet to have read Sonic.exe, so I know little of that quote but I will take your word on that, as obviously I do not intend for a memetic result with this piece. As for the flood, it is largely Simon's fault as to why these floods are occurring, his brutality and tyranny are what results in the flood's beginnings. Rather than Noah's situation, however, the world is at this point an armageddon. God then sent this flood to start the Earth a new. The reason Simon isn't killed is up to interpretation, but it largely matters not since he ends up dying anyway due to his betrayal. I know this is a lot of context not said within the story, and that could be attributed to laziness, but at the same time, I was largely unaware of how to properly integrate that into the plot from Simon's pov. But thank you very much for the feedback, every bit helps, please let me know if there's anything else.