Talk:Hanging Man Hill/@comment-3508932-20140324130456/@comment-24486291-20140324175315

Thank you. I have already had a few people tell me that it felt a bit rushed, and I'm going to change that in my next pasta. I appreciate all feedback.

As for my imagery? I totally agree. That may sound like I'm just preaching myself up, but since this pasta is based on a real story, envisioning my friend in that manner was upsetting me to have to write that. However, I knew that if I wanted my pasta to be as good as it seems to have turned out, I had to be as descriptive as possible.