Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37409514-20191118025756/@comment-5306249-20191119162931

So I’m guessing the protag becomes the demon after sleeping too long? I feel that you could add some more sequencing to everything that takes place outside of the bedroom/when the two entities interact that make the transformation more obvious. The rules in general don’t seem to be consistent, like when the creature can specifically hurt/possess the protag.