Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20190829215235/@comment-35711173-20190830044240

Mmpratt99 deviantart wrote: Wow, that's pretty depressing! Would that make for a more fitting ending than for the cat swarm to simply engulf her?

I think it's more a matter of what won't work, and that's having a household moggie swallow her whole. My style would be to have it go to the very end when she lost consciousness, screaming in frenzied agony. That doesn't have to be your style. You can choose what works for you. That moment of realization that this will turn into the end soon because she can't defeat that many housecats and is already suffering injuries might well work.