Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25132251-20140801160050/@comment-24942872-20140801181902

Yeah, it does remind me an awful lot of JtK. The parts about having random thoughts of violence and then making things "beautiful," is pretty much exactly what happens in the story. I do think you had a pretty good start in the first two entries, but it is a bit over done for a character to start obsessing about murder. To be honest, I think the second entry could lead to a creepier and more unpredictable outcome if you worked with the unknown injury instead of the normal teenager-turned-killer formula.

You should read JtK so that you won't fall into the traps of making a bad creepypasta. It'll only take you maybe 10 minutes.