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NskUniverse wrote: K thanks for the professional reply, not making me feel like a total failure :( but ya it was supposed to be a sweet, little story that you read when your not much of a big reader. anyways ya ill do that now so i know what too do if i decide to write another one :) I'm certain you're not a total failure, with a bit of work on your grammar, and a bit more focus on characters and plot, you could produce a good story. It just takes practise, that's all :)