Talk:Sabbath/@comment-27838637-20180228061725/@comment-25148755-20180228064528

Thanks for the review. You more hit what I was going for (not a retelling of the song or the motivation behind it but merely a story inspired by it.) That being said, entertainment, horror factor etc are all so subjective I really can’t argue whatever scores people want to give. If the story didn’t work for you it didn’t. No big. The grammar/errors thing though really gets my goat though, so if anybody would care to follow up with what that was. I’d be appreciative.