Creepypasta Wiki talk:Deleted Page/Jeff the Killer/@comment-28926895-20131103194021/@comment-28926895-20131105173059

On realism.

Mainly because apparently Jeff is Bruce Willis: The fight scenes don't feel like ones that violent children will have, more like something from damn Die Hard.

Or again, you can't expect stabbed people to make a quick recovery. 2 weeks for a minor(which this must be, unless it penetrated deeper). Or a broken wrist.

And can work a gun well.

That is what I mean by realism, the thing is more or less like a mix between The Killing Joke and any generic action movie.

Half of the damn MCs die in these.

Or how they know where the hell Jeff was at the party.

Confessing to the Crime IS NOT the same as a guilty plea. Once jailed, you either represent yourself, hire a lawyer yourself or get a public defender in most states.

A recent case had the perp turn himself in, and he was still trialed.

Well, then the doctor really is stupid then. Even then, I am just saying, that should be a priority during rehabilitation(after the 24 day stay), which the fic seems to skip( he had full body burns, so scars over joints and such would need physical therapy to reduce stiffness, or to make sure he can wear clothes properly).

Also, it then doesn't quallify as a creepypasta, and more of a normal fic.

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