Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26109347-20150214172104/@comment-26109347-20150215184545

Thanks for the tips. I probably won't continue with this story, it was the first idea I had and I just wrote without any plans. So, maybe my next idea will be better. And I'll try to focus more on horror, and maybe try what the writer of Frankenstein did: write about what scares me. Again, thanks for the tips and criticism, I'll hopefully do better with my next one.