Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28756492-20160714152200/@comment-28266772-20160715084052

I don't entirely understand what you're saying - the critique given by Blizzardlemon and I apply to the story above, not something else posted on the deletion appeal so how is that even relevant? You can either take our feedback into consideration and apply it to the version you posted above, or ignore it. But I simply do not understand how the previous version of this story comes into play at all.