Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25177838-20140714160201/@comment-25177838-20140715000236

oh, and also if you can, you don't have to but would be greatly appreciated, if you also told me what details shouldn't and should be kept in the story, for future references. one more thing, is this story salvagable or should i throw it away and come up with something else? thank you for giving me your constructive criticism.