User blog comment:Dorkpool/So You Want To Write A Creepypasta/@comment-26011836-20150718045325

So speaking of lost episode pastas, I've had a chance to work on my pasta and here's the latest version of it: http://pastebin.com/UiVCk9gd

Feel free to give feedback on it. By the way, I gotta roadblock. So after the part where I describe the family moving in, I want the girl to talk to her mom about the move. But I don't know how the girl will feel about the move. On the one hand, she can get excited about learning a new culture, exploring the land, and discovering animal species she hadnt seen in America. On the other hand, she can be anxious about not being familiar with the laws and language and fearing that she won't fit in with other people in the country.