Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20151119034611/@comment-27080023-20151121184455

I am not very good at feedback in terms of how it is written and stuff, but I enjoyed reading it very much. I thought her seeing the boy in the car was really creepy, it always scares me when the "thing" follows them and messes up their lives afterwards. So yes... it is good in my opinion.