Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181020224417/@comment-36393004-20181021140011

Ok, I guess I read this after you made your changes and I like it. I think adding the tidbit about the Wyrm was a great idea. I'm really liking where this is going. My only squabble is the part where Mike throws the book at Janice. I really don't like parenthesis used like this. Not when it could be written out just as easily and look so much cleaner.