Talk:You Will Follow/@comment-31073921-20170220150820

Good job, here's a review.

Your grammer is very good an on point, and you did a good job with the oddness of the creatures directions. The ending was vauge, but again mysterious. The gore part was... detailed. Overall great story, a good example of what a creepypasta is.

Scare : 8.5/10

Thrill 8/10

Twist : 8.5/10

Overall : 8.3/10