Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33488654-20180822020522/@comment-35911608-20180823015628

Steven&quot;SpringBubba&quot;Savoy wrote: Lemme see, do you have any suggestions to increase the fear factor?

Hmm... with the way you're going with this story, atmosphere is what you wanna focus on. Describe the environment and the type of day more. How the air feels. How does the character feel upon seeing Cooper? Is the blood rushing through their veins, pumping so hard they can't hear anything but the sounds of their own beating hearts? Give us the feel of the world you're writing about. Right now, we're just kinda watching all that stuff happen.