Talk:Dreams of Inheritance/@comment-25941663-20151010215146/@comment-25148755-20151010230511

Ha thanks. This was my entry for the short story contest. I was running up to the 300 word limit so needed an ending that wouldn't take more than a couple sentences. I agree the ending wasn't perfect ... I generally consider "its all just a dream" to be a huge cheat. Here though I'm hoping it makes the reader wonder if it really all was just a dream. Any case, thanks for the read and review!