Talk:Dating Game/@comment-24103274-20131028121042

I quite enjoyed the first part of the story. Nice build-up. But I must say, when she didn't want him to enter the basement, I saw the rest coming. It was quite predictable. Also, I think it was an easy way out to just letting the password for the files fill itself out. I can understand that she planned all of this, but if she did it wouldn't be a point to protect the files with a password.

After he watched the first video, I'm surprised he didn't inform the police about this. At least after he watched the second. I guess it can be mesmerizing, but daymn.

I also didn't find it quite believeable that she could take four lethal injections. I could go with surviving one and dying of the second. But four?

All in all, I think the story had some flaws, but in the end I enjoyed reading it. 6/10. Keep up the good work!