Talk:Suicide Note/@comment-29507836-20161020112157

Very nice! I enjoyed reading it, although I sort of figured out what will happen to them both a little too early. Still, I loved the way you captured the essence of love in such a scary pasta. It had very descriptive words and I just love the way you worded your sentences; it made the pasta much easier to understand.

I loved the development of both characters in such a short amount of events. It takes true writing skills to have that. I also love how appropriate the length is for the story; some people rush their pastas just because it has a short sequence of events, and I love that you avoided that. I also like how you implemented a common murder weapon instead of something less believable, like a butcher knife, as pointed out by ChristianWallis.

I didn't notice any technical errors in spelling and grammar, which is pleasuring to a reader like me. I also didn't notice any cliches, so you have that going for you.

I rate this a very high 9/10. Very nice, I will look into your other stories if you have any. Message me if you want me to review any of your other stories!