User blog comment:Zumokiworks335/CREEPYPASTA WIKI IS FOR PRO'S/@comment-6548012-20160713141417

My name... is Wolverine, I'm the best there is at what I do, xcept if i turno ff autocorexion :(

Oh, and just because I want to, I present to you; proof that you are far from an author:
 * You do not know the difference between orthography, grammar and conjugation.
 * You only sometimes proof-read, and the day you submit anything with that amount of work to an editor is the day you get called all the names.
 * You don't capitalize the first person of the singular, nor your own name - how can you get published if you don't write your name right?
 * You have the same English level I had when I was ten years old, and English isn't even my native language, nor have I ever been to a country where it's spoken, yet you're a 17-year-old Californian resident and I haven't even dared to write anything here because of my shitty level today.
 * You write fanfiction, and if even E.L. James knows that fanfiction isn't getting you published anywhere, you should.
 * You can not describe basic stuff, such as role-play, (cf. your wikia) whereas most people learn to do that before middle school.
 * You do not understand what is wrong with spelling errors.

And, to please you, I'm going to give you arguments as to why your pasta was deleted:
 * Your first sentence introduces two big mistakes - An unnecessary ellipse, and no caps after an ellipse, because yes, you put caps after these, those are the basics of punctuation. But that can be forgiven, after all, it can be edited later on, it's not a big deal.
 * You directly used numbers' characters instead of writing them down in letters. Again, can be excused.
 * You repeat yourself too much, and that can't be just wiped out, it's actually very important, your vocabulary conveys your message, but, since your page doesn't have any message, and the words are always the same all the time, it gets quite annoying very fast.
 * You've inserted yourself in the story. Even fanfictions don't do that, so let's just say it's very unprofessional.
 * You have a pacing problem, you bring up something and let it go in the same sentence, but you keep going on for ages whilst saying nothing. It's like Busta Rhymes, he keeps saying more or less the same shit, but at least, his vocabulary compensates.
 * You fail to write composed words, plurals and to conjugate verbs. It's not hard to put a dash somewhere instead of a space, a “s” at the end of a word or to learn a few styles that are pretty much all the same, especially when claiming to be a writer, which you would know, implies that you are published, except, well, you're not.
 * You also fail to use grammar and express possession. Even if Curtis ends with a “s,” you put an apostrophe after it, and “to” doesn't describe quantity&mdash;“too” does.
 * You write entire paragraphs of worthless information.

Note that all of these errors come from the first paragraph of your story only. So imagine what there is to say against the rest of it&mdash;for the most part, it is useless. Oh, and, you lied about proof-reading, you don't do that. If you did, why did you leave out errors that you didn't make while writing this rant?

I'm giving you constructive criticism because whining on your whining isn't gonna make any advancement&mdash;so, if you're aiming to become a real writer, and a skilled author, I suggest you take that advice into account. It's not the best, as I don't master English and I haven't written one story here, but it may be quite important for your professional future.