Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24101790-20141224185822/@comment-25170312-20141224193454

I liked it. Don't really know what else to say beyond that. I think there's a lot of similar pastas, where it describes something that seems sinister but then turns out to be some everyday thing we take for granted. Not bad at all, but doesn't exactly wow me at the end. Still, I can't find any real flaw with it.