Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26179512-20150309170653/@comment-24976741-20150309205844

I hate you so much right now. I hate how you write, I'm not feeling great and all so sorry if I sound harsh, but you seriously need to learn proper grammar. CAPITALIZE YOUR WORDS AT THE BEGINNING OF A SENTENCE, it's not hard.

"my 7 years old daughter Melissa and my 6 year old son Joffrey. was playing in the playground with other kids." change first period with a comma, change was to were. Reword sentence.

Can I just say this, you need to learn when to put a period down, you also need to learn about the existence of commas.

Example: "Sam was always late home he came home so late that we just had a fight with each other." You need a comma between home and he. Btw, reword this sentence, please.

HEY, DID YOU KNOW AN EXCLAMATION POINT, THIS (!) ALSO HAS THE SAME EFFECT AS TRYING TO TYPE LIKE THIS, EXCEPT EVERYONE INVOLVED WILL HAVE LESS OF A HEADACHE.

"I Said worried to Sam Where are the kids Sam Said sarcasm back I do not know how would I know?" Capitalizing issues everywhere in this sentence. First off, when you put blank said or blank replied, make sure to put a comma down then put what they said inside of these "".

I figuratively have a gun to my head trying to read this. I can't... I can't even, I-I just can't. There is no way I can understand this story through this chicken scratch. This is just as bad as trying to read Lost At Disney. Please, just-just please don't come back until you have your grammar sorted out, I don't know if I could take this torture anymore.

I have three guesses, either you are trolling me right now, in which case this should just immediately be banished to the depths of troll pasta. You are a little kid that doesn't really even know grammar. Or you are illiterate, in any of the above cases, I just feel sorry for you right now.