Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20180730155919/@comment-26444017-20180812074956

To clarify, I didn't 'give up' on helping out. I read through the story again, and left you feedback on your talk page about what I found needed to be done on a story level before cleaning it up gramatically. You either didn't see it, or didn't heed my advice, and so here we are.