Talk:A Simple Saturday Morning/@comment-32788838-20140523081009

One of the better pastas I've read, definitely got me on a semi-emotional level what with what happens to the family. It plays on a father's fear for stuff happening to his brethren and kin and being unable to do anything about it, although nearing the end was kinda anti-immersive, I'll say. Overall, a good read, 8/10.