Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10502460-20181206012011/@comment-10502460-20181206051132

I've read over the draft a couple more times and made about ten corrections, including a couple I was on the fence about.

As was brought up on one of my other draft threads, you and I have divergent opinions on what constitutes a run-on sentence. I did find a couple they may be iffy in their length, but I honestly am not sure what you mean when you say there could be a couple dozen. Unless you are referring to the missive by the priest, but I believe the sentences in that passage fit the kind of tone that would be used in a clerical piece, although I did break one up into two sentences and added a coma.