Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20190622004216/@comment-9041013-20190622203012

Aww this was nice. I love how this was a sort of nod to the myth of Orpheus and how the Reaper is compasionate yet still abides by the laws of the universe. Kind of thought it was also about Cain or Utnapishtim or someone similar, cursed with immortality. It turns out that Satan is part of the Watchers who had erred with God by mating with the daughters of men.

Interesting.

Mechanically wise, Im not the best at poetry so I suppose we shall wait for more comments. It does seem alright to me, but then again, what do I, a mere unpoetic mortal know?