User blog comment:TheAzumangaDaiohFan/New Haunting Hour Review! (Episode 32) 4/8/16/@comment-4849011-20160411000350

Hello! I apologize for not getting here earlier. I meant to do it yesterday, but by the time I was done with other things it had either slipped my mind or I was tired.

That episode sounds mediocre in that it had a promising premise that could have been done more effectively. I read the first paragraph of your review and thought, "Wait, that's it?"

I read the newest draft and I like it. I can see changes that you made and I think it improves the flow. I have a thought that might be helpful. When Kristy comes home, her dad reacts awkwardly, to the point that she asks him if he's okay. Then later (when Hotaka visited) he seemed very on edge. Her father just seems to be acting strangely, with his emotions running high. Since you've already introduced that, I wondered if you could play off that somehow (like the samurai girl or something else is somehow affecting him).