Talk:Napalm, Blood, and Demons/@comment-25052433-20140820014631

This was a really good story and an enjoyable read. I don't have too much to really critique on it, because overall, I felt that it was done well and changing anything might distort what is currently a solid pasta.

The only thing I noticed, and didn't edit because you may have intended this, was the interview with the former soldier. You used standard time instead of military time. I felt that, to really bring in the image of man, standing over in Vietnam, military time would have been a better tool. Your choice if you want to change it.

Other than that, great story. 8.5/10