Talk:The Wicker House/@comment-25170312-20140716063509/@comment-25170312-20140716065250

well, the only thing I was going to complain about was that it could use more commas. But I didn't say it because I've always had trouble gauging the rhythm of long sentences and end up having to read them multiple times. Perhaps that's why I write such short ones, lol. So yeah, it might be me and not the story that has a comma problem.