Talk:The Arcade/@comment-27553469-20160222170729/@comment-5891178-20160223023948

No worries, feedback is always appreciated!

For the kid with the slit neck playing the arcade game, he was supposed to be a previous victim of the creature whose "spirit" or what have you is stuck there in the "other world" version of the arcade.

The knife man's dialogue grammar was actually done intentionally, although reading it now the whole "monster speaking in broken English" thing works better in film than in writing.

Agreed with it being somewhat confusing at the end, I would like to think that came more from my attempt at leaving some mystery about whether anything supernatural actually happened. That is am angle I would drop in a rewrite, honestly.

Also, I definitely consider myself better at the idea stage than the actual "getting things done stage" haha.

Thank you for reading, and for the feedback!