User blog comment:Cameron Glynn/what makesw a good enough pasta/@comment-24304936-20141014170546

Just glanced over that deleted "Jonathon" story of yours. Several reasons it was deleted.
 * Run-on sentences. Lots of them.
 * Typos.
 * "Your" indicates possession. "You are" indicates an affirmation. Learn the difference between the two before you write something.
 * Apostrophes aren't to be used when a person/something is speaking (there are exceptions, but you didn't present any of them in this story). That's what quotation marks are for.
 * Why is "bastardized" capitalized?
 * The story isn't scary or in any way riveting. Sorry if this sounds harsh, but it's the truth.

I didn't read your other work, but the "Jonathon" story seems like it might be a precursor to other issues.