Talk:Miss Mosaic/@comment-37698826-20181202221703

For feedback  the end is never explained. And saying it doesnt have cliché. Makes it a bad story because the heal sick people episode. Has gore i mean its a good twist but lieing about that makes it bad. And all the storys about the 13 and up people and the hide and seek makes it really cliché since it says something like a force? its doesnt make since