Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31073921-20170421134103/@comment-24101790-20170421135147

There really isn't a lot of story here (it's mostly bios) and this feels more like an attempt to write an SCP report than an actual plot.

It kind of just jumps into the story without really setting up any of the scenes or giving background information. This works with the SCP stories as they have a lot of entries that flesh out the backstory in small bits, but here it's just a seemingly random report that doesn't really describe the entities with effective detail.

I would say that you should try and flesh it out and take it to the SCP wiki if that's what you're going for as it would likely be deleted from this site for failing to meet quality standards due to a real lack of driving plot, mechanical issues, its tendency to feel like this is copying the SCP-entry style (a spinoff violation), and description that needs a lot more focus ("T1 most likely had consumed them with the 8 teeth like limbs on the side of it, and the 2 tendrils inside used for bringing prey closer.").