Talk:My Baby/@comment-5269370-20131216132406

This is definitely one of the most beautifully written stories on the website, if not the MOST well written. The only issue I would have is that I fear a few users may not be able to keep up with the plot because of the volume of writing here. I myself had to re-read a few sentences to help catch up with the plot because I was so entranced with the writing. Other than that though, the last few paragraphs really hit home and wrap up this beautiful pasta really really really well. Amazing. Well done.

9.5/10