Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20190722204241/@comment-32802129-20190802101343

Solonor, have you read the Style Guide for Writing or How to Write Creepypasta that I suggested earlier? They are on this wiki, free to access, and have very good information about the kind of ideas that make good stories.

You can't just ask people to fix it because you don't have the Premium Grammarly, as stated above this story needs a complete re-write not just spelling and grammar improvements.

Please read those pages, it will help!