Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150430062138/@comment-26326346-20150506165620

I agree that the Government angle is overdone. I'd have to give them a reasonable purpose for having the snake modified/created (attempting to improve the ecosystem). They also wouldn't have to have been the ones who created the snake thing, rather they were drawn to the reporter because word reached them about a new snake and they believe it to have been created by terrorist(s) to mess up the ecosystem. I don't know. I'm still trying to figure out how to play things without making it come of as corny or cliche.

Your response was great, don't worry about it :)