Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-12343352-20150627165558

This is another attempt of writing a good pasta. One of my friends, one that likes these stories, made it in for a murder story that wasn't even long enough (The Teacher Assistant). He got inspiration from when I tried to write a pasta on this board, but it got declined (Furby.EXE). Here it goes. _____________________________________________________________________________

Three friends are walking out of a school; Jerry Petroleum, one that likes scary stories, Alex Sausage, who likes meat, especially steak, and Zach Broccoli, a vegetarian who is a YouTube star. All three of their buses happened to break down at the same time, at the school driveway together, at 2:32 PM on Friday, November 13, 2014.

They walk down a spooky road for five minutes until they see a bus stop. The bus rolls by 10 minutes late, and it doesn't look too safe. It was broken down, rusty, and was driven by this alien frog beast with an extra flipper, three eyes, sharp teeth, a hole on it's tummy that it used to ingest passengers with teeth on that, and it could talk.

Zach suggested that it was not a good idea, but the other two of his friends were already on board, so he had no choice but to hop on board to protect them. Five minutes into the ride, Alex noticed that the bus wasn't even in the right direction. They were going in the opposite direction of a One Way street, to a McDonalds. The mutated frog grabbed all three of his passengers to the McDonalds and prepared to grill them. The huge toad prepares to eat Alex, but sees all the food. He stops to eat all the burgers and French fries before continuing to eat his passengers.

In his stomach, Zack sees the bones of several of his fans before being digested. The frog beast burps very loudly, before proceeding to eat some of the customers which ran away to the sight of the giant amphibian.

_______________________________________________________________________________ The trio were based off my real life friends, but were given fake last names that reflect who they were based off. The first names were completely random, though.

The original climax involved a cell phone ringing, which extended it, but then I realized "If they had a cell phone, then the plot wouldn't even have happened."

Please give me your opinions. 