Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20150414041052/@comment-25477067-20150414163700

While I admire your ability to use big words a proper grammar, it sounds like you are strangling a thesaurus. It makes immersion hard when you constantly use large words that take most people a few second to figure out. I understand most of the words you used, but I am not interested in spending 5 minutes trying to translate the story before reviewing it objectively. I am not sure, at that point, I could review it objectively. Please, put down the dictionary and write in a normal manner.

As for the story itself, the gist I could glean from pouring comprehensively over this piece of prose was one of unearthly presence in this spiritual weald that strikes terror in the hoi polloi that shirk the warnings and the rules. I could not discern anything else from my scrutiny of the manuscript considering the labyrinthine nature of the idiosyncratic scrawling of the...of the...screw it

Hope this review helped! :P