Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25922165-20190328214355/@comment-9041013-20190331094318

Well, this seems like it couldn't happen. There's just too many plot holes for this to actually have happened. If you had a thing like this in the real world existing, everyone would know about it. Even if not in full detail, we'd know about the kid that cannot eat anything at all (other than human meat... because it's somehow special...)

The fact that there are no names to the characters further makes it distant and not emotionally invoking, it's like I'm not reading about real people.

Also, the ending, yeah, nah... doesn't work. I'm not some serial pedo so I'm not conerned with this lad.