Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25458443-20140929014241

I wrote a creepypasta called "You Just have to Wonder", where a narrartor slowly describes why hearing your name being called in the back of your mind means that you wish to be a slave. He does so via the repeations of the phrase "You have to wonder...". The story was deleted due to a lack of substance and some mild grammatical errors. along woth other things. so with that concept, I need some kind of help making a story with someone deducing that we all want to be slaves.

so could someone help brainstorm an idea for that? 