Talk:Malodorous/@comment-4849011-20150220193930

Okay, first off ~screams~

Now that that's out of the way, this was a well-written story with a horrifying conclusion. When I got to the end of part two I thought, "Well, this isn't going to end well!" There was good use of language and the interaction between the couple felt very realistic. You rose to the challenge well.

Your score- 93/100