Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140901015431/@comment-24304936-20140901024136

Although I'm a fan of your work, Grey, I couldn't go past the beginning without resentment. My son has multiple disabilites and Shelby's mouth-breathing idiocy made me stop. As I said, I'm a fan of your previous endeavors (I truly am), but stuff like this is a turn-off (for me) as a reader.

You are a gifted writer (I mean it), but maybe I'm the wrong person to review this. It tap-danced on a nerve with me. And not a good way. Sorry.