Talk:Boulder City Prison/@comment-26364137-20150513180018

This was an interesting read, indeed. Even though I expected the ending (but seriously - after reading alot of creepypastas, you just automatically start thinking about finding a twist. A very bad trait to have, so this is not a critique of your story, but rather to me as a reader).

I totally agree with Banningk1979, it is a very fresh and dark setting that had me intrigued all the way through. The story is not too long either, which I really enjoyed, not dragging it out like alot of pastas do. I really can't seem to find something to criticize, in order to give some constructive advice... so the only thing left for me to say is: good job!