Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20141231040024/@comment-25825682-20150106062555

I haven't seen much of the show of late, but it is creepy how happy he stays.

"Anyway I saw a few mishaps, As my "weird sisters" gleefully explained to me as they helped me packed," instead of "packed," try it with "pack," or an alternative "get packed," either would do.

The other is "they decided to lock up the twin in a nearby bomb shelter," this is just my opinion, but I think "fourth sibling," would better replace "twin," since you stated they're quadruplets.

Besides that I like what you added on to the story thus far, and sorry I wasn't responding much as I had gotten sick and still am.