Talk:The Lonely Stars/@comment-33177671-20170822184553

So beautiful and the plot twist was amazing. You can see in the past if you're far away enough from Earth but everything else being in the future was a truely amazing idea. I have only one criticism, and that is the lingo and terms might be hard to understand. While this made it more authentic and well researched, I'm not sure that most readers will understand. Everything aside, this is one of my favorite existential pastas.