Talk:Please, Don't Look Away/@comment-25308174-20150416001222

This is good, but seems unfinished. You paint a good picture, but maybe you should explain why the authpr wrote 'don't leave me'. Did a write die at their computer, or did a demon of the internet want some attention? A little more to the story would be nice. I do like how you wrote the 'please don't leave me' at the end. A classic horror story cliche, but not tacky. I hope this helps you out a bit.