Talk:After the Fall/@comment-9041013-20181011201111

Well the story is very good, it's a lot like the movie, "Logan" where the main character goes on a journey to secure the future generation pretending to be on that journey for his own sake as well whilst really knowing he's not going to make it. It's not explicitely displayed in your story, but it's very clearly foreshadowed by Collin's outburst his whole attitude towards himself.

Someone uses a long range weapon which is not a gun? Yes! Good! Probably would be the more common option in real life too. Though in order to draw a bow for a good, distant shot you'd need a lot of upper body strength. So your archer can't be a tall wimp, he'd have to be a powerful lean person. A bow's draw weight ranges from anywhere between 50lbs and north of 200lbs.

The ending as simple and common as it is, is still powerful which is a testament to your ability to describe these fragile situation relatively well.

I think there are some issues on the technical side like "drug" instead of "dragged" and some punctuation issues here and there. Give it another proofread.

Also, I'm gonna guess you put it in the weird category cause nothing seemed to fit... to bad we don't have a "Dystopia" category or something similar.