Talk:A Dream of War/@comment-26054278-20150130000949

At first I really had no idea how to feel about this pasta. Honestly, it feels more like an essay on a blog rather than a Creepypasta. I mean, there are some ideas for a Creepypasta (the whole section on the main character's dreams), but it seems more like a speech (except the paragraph on the foster home).

On the other side of the spectrum, humanity destroying itself could be a frightning possibility. However, I don't think the way it is presented here is scary, more so just a bad thing that we need to avoid.

Therefore, while it was sort of interesting to read, I don't really see how this could be a Creepypasta. Maybe it is just me, but I don't get it. Also, the foster home paragraph is incredibly out of place and probably should have been better integrated than just being a one-time paragraph.