Talk:Moderated (ecrowe)/@comment-8249807-20131022034842

First off, FUCK, I was not expecting that ending!

That said, I rather enjoyed this, though I will note there were some parts that had me legitly confused with the order things happened in. Like the paragraphs shortly after our protagonist's first night of drinking with Jason, it starts out talking about the next day at work and then randomly cuts back to the previous Saturday...?

But, damn, that ending...and here I was thinking Tim was an FBI agent investigating the snuff film production or something, and legit warning the guy about them...