Talk:Bandy-Legged Beasts/@comment-24101790-20140514190511

So, I read the story and I loved it! You managed to avoid the pitfalls journal entries usually have. I like how it is a slow deterioration towards the harvesters as opposed to introducing them in the second or third entry. ("Dear diary, today I saw something creepy standing o my street at night.") it helps build the characters and keeps the reader wondering and invested.

I enjoyed reading this and hope you let me know when some more stories come out.