Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20140718014948/@comment-25170312-20140720221315

I think I'm all done with this one. I added a part where Jason texts Melissa about where he is, making it more plausible that she'd look for him in the woods and find the marked trees. I think it makes sense that she would follow them, seeing as how Jason said he was in a new spot in the woods that he didn't normally go, and she probably looked in the usual places already. I'll sumbit it soon.