Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32807959-20181213134809/@comment-36627132-20181213140248

At first I thought this was going to be a Jeff OC because it follows the I-was-abused-and-bullied trope. Even though it didn't turn out to be a Jeff rip-off, it still has the my-bullies-got-what-they-deserved trope.

The story is too far fetched even for a Creepypasta. Ok, so the grandparents for some reason come back to life, walk through the streets without anyone noticing, they go to Johnny's house and attack the parents (something they should have done while they were alive), Johnny revels in it, he commits cannibalism, the grandparents casually go back to their graves (assumably), and Johnny uneventfully goes to a foster home without being accused of committing the crimes or being interrogated by a therapist?

I really don't see this getting past quality standards.