Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27838637-20160727122520/@comment-27838637-20160727144601

Thankyou very much for the feedback. Looking back I can definitely see the issues, and it'll be great to fix them and keep the critiques in mind for the next half of the story.

If I get off work early tomorrow I will try to get the rest of the story completed!

Also, if you had any better ideas for a title, I'd be glad to hear them!

A_O.