Talk:Vesper Service/@comment-32764586-20180108180450

This was pretty darn good. I liked the innocence of the kid, and you used it to hide the truth from us till the end. Once I realized what was going on I was genuinely surprised. There were nice clues sprinkeld around building up to the end though, and now that i re-read it it's almost obvious. Great story. I need to read more of your work.

9/10