Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26365586-20150514035325/@comment-26365586-20150514170249

Indention? I shall look into it! and thankyou! I've proofread it with five different people, one being an english major since posting it, so hopefully it is less awkward sounding, although im keeping it alittle weird since the guy's in an asylum ^^  Thankyou very much for your critique!