User blog comment:Dela livi/i need to vent/@comment-10950063-20140507220146

Do you know how hard it is to keep this site clean? The amount of time people volunteer to maintain quality? Did you ever go to someone and ask them WHY you story was deleted? Ask what you could do better? Go to the writer's workshop and let people comment on it? Did you take ANY initiative at all? If you can't take the time to ask why, why should we take the time to just tell you?

No, you never asked anybody. Instead you go to LOLSKELETONS and tell him how great of a writer you are. Allow to quote:

"I have to say, I'm a very excellent writer. I'm in pre-ap classes instead of regular 10th grade writing classes, have actually participated in a 50,000 word novel writing event, and and have actually had two of my writings posted on my English teacher's wall. I'm VERY appalled that you not only deleted one, but two of my writings in this wiki, and I'm sure that others feel the same."

I won't comment on that, I think your opinion of yourself and how you back it up speaks VERY loudly.

Oh, and before you go, "Well, I said something to him and he never responded!" It's because you didn't sign your post like the first line on the deletions page tells you to. Maybe you should focus on your reading skills.

Now, you want feedback. Let's do this. I'll even link to your stories so others can weigh in, too.

Bad End Night ( http://pastebin.com/zZK7f6N2 ) - This is basically incoherent. I'm sure in your head it makes sense, but it's a mess on this end. The reader can very vaguely infer a plot, but for the most part. . .Hold on. I just looked up the lyrics to this song to see how much you pulled from it.

http://www.animelyrics.com/doujin/vocaloid/badendnight.htm

You understand what plagiarism is, right? This isn't based on the song, this is the song.

Suddenly, I lost all interest in evaluating your work.