Talk:The Laughing Kangaroo/@comment-31864122-20170429042626

This story is hard to believe, and you lost me at

" The last image taken was a JPEG image of the kangaroo toy, yet it was disturbingly real and different. Its eyes were pure black. Blood poured out of its eyes and it was smiling with bloodstained teeth."

This sounded cheesy, cliche, and a bit desperate.

I think that this was a 5/10 pasta. It seems as though you tried, and that is awesome. :)

If you keep practicing, you will be even better!