Talk:The Under/@comment-4659257-20130924024219

Well... To say the least, it was very awesome. Then, I could sense some small cliches, none too important though. Whatever, this is just the kind of things that I love, I find these better and more interesting that other fantasy-filled shitfiction. I enjoyed this one verry much, never got too much into detail, which adds mystery, but at the same time it doesn't give the readers what they want. That could be seen as both a positive and a negative thing, but I personally really liked your creepypasta!