Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180813062343/@comment-35711173-20180814054653

Bloody Spaghetti,

I removed the MS13 bit and rewrote that whole end. I also toned down the diagnosis part at the end.

These aren't the demons of Goethe or Dante Alighieri's travelogue. Lucifer sees himself far more like Odin than the red guy with horns. I always read the Norse mythology as the Lucifer's side of the story. Think of the whole Valhalla and Ragnarök story as Lucifer's take to the end of the world.

The quote boxes are an experiment. I am trying them instead of three asterisks or some such to separate Matt on the screen from our lecturer.

See if this is improved.