Talk:The Stoned Corridor/@comment-25020907-20140616051121

Hello everyone which reads this!

I would just like to say thankyou for reading my first creepy pasta!

If anyone has any comments/suggestions of where I could go next, improve this story, or my writing in general, please let me know!

As this is my first pasta, I know there are places I could improve, so please lay them on me, positive or negative, I want to learn and grow from this pasta, and maybe even make bigger and better pasta's for everybody's entertainment.

English is my second language, so if there are any spelling mistakes or grammatical  errors, let me know and I shall fix them ASAP!