Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27029037-20151001153933/@comment-26411767-20151019071729

Maybe make it a tad bit longer, e.g. 'I woke up in the middle of the night to the sound of screaming coming from under my floor. I was about to go and check to see if it was my mom in need of help, but as the fog of sleepiness left my brain, I remembered I do not have a basement.'