Talk:Please Leave a Message/@comment-26475800-20150730012111

This is a good story, it just needs some more meat to it. Add some back story, add what he was sorry for, if it wasn't for kill his son. If it was put that in the end. Add a relationship between the farther and son, as he is dialing the number he can think of good times and have the thoughts grow stronger and worst leading to whatever it was that forced them to not talk to each other.

It would give more depth to the story and make it stand out from other stories like it. That is the only thing I can think of to get this story off the M4R list.