Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25975226-20150130075107

''I was thinking of posting this really short creepy story but I wasn't sure whether or not it would meet the quality standards. Please feel free to give me your creative criticism! (I don't mind if you don't think it's creepy enough and that I should scrap it, it's just been stuck in my head!) :)''

Here it is:

'''The Pennsonvale Fair had just come to town, but the only way you could enter or exit was through a turnstile at the entrance to the main tent. Three meter high walls surrounded the entire fair, so nobody could get in without being counted. The turnstile had been put in place in order to count the amount of people who entered and left the fair that day, and to make sure enough people had come through in order for the fair to have made any money.'''

Considering that the only way in and out was through that turnstile, it greatly unnerved the staff to find that 3,307 people had entered, yet 3,308 people had exited... 