Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30771515-20170123074702/@comment-30771515-20170129181439

YawningLion wrote: Not bad. It does remind me a lot of Candle Cove, which isn't necessarily bad but it takes me out of the story. And towards the end, I got so used to seeing their screen names that having real names just confuses me.

But I am interested to see where this goes, and it is certainly creepy. True, I shall smoothly transition the change from their screen names to their real names. And I already thought of half the ending, it will be pretty good. (It might be very good, I just don't like jinxing it). Thank you for the feedback, it is extremely appreciated. Version 2.0 will have your advice implemented.