Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31532017-20161002070732/@comment-14054617-20161004005710

I see you've retracted to rewrite. May I offer some non-critical suggestions? I would keep the extistential horror elements. God is dead, no hope, etc. I would suggest doing it first person with someone that was revived but that makes me think of "Gateway of the Mind." There's definetely an idea here though.