Talk:Occupied Chimney/@comment-4849011-20161216001202

Hey, what's wrong with Mega Bloks? Building block equality! Seriously, though, I enjoyed this. You set the scene well and had great description throughout. I liked Audrey puzzling about what on earth was happening in her chimney. A lot of people asked to write a story about that topic would have channeled that old urban legend about a fake Santa being found dead in the chimney, but you decided to go in a surprising and innovative direction. I genuinely didn't see that ending coming. At one point near the end I thought, "Wow, Johnnie's insensitive!" Then you revealed that she hadn't seen what happened to her mother and I thought, "Oh, never mind!" It's cool how you derailed that train of thought. Great job, and good luck in the contest!