Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26921530-20150925022019/@comment-26921530-20150925220845

I never been good at dialogue. >.<

Anyways, I appreciate the critique and didn't really expect a positive response anyways. I realized after posting this that the dialogue was too mean spirited and the parents acted like puppy kicking villains. So I changed that later on. I kind of felt like CreepyPastas had to be extremely short so I practically killed character development. All in all I will re-write this shortly and thank you very much.

[To be honest. Reading the review kinda felt like ripping off a band-aid. It ended up hurting, but later on it was worth it.]