Talk:The Climb Out of Hell/@comment-25052433-20150815220623

The only failing for me with this story was the fact that you decided to portray the devil as a teenager. Of all the terrifying imagery you could have pulled on, you went with a kid. Nothing against young folks, but in general, they do not conjure up a sense of terror in literature, especially when placed on par with Satan himself.

Otherwise, the story was pretty good. I can't say that it ranks in the best, but it was well written and held a good plot.