Talk:Alone/@comment-31077845-20170117235313

So wait, that meant TV tropes still worked, didn't it? In that case years could go by and I'd probably not even notice everyone had disappeared.

And before I forget you pull the "I don't know why I'm writing this" except by the end of the story ascertain that that world with nobody in it was, in fact, a dream if I'm not mistaken.

Oh, also your story doesn't make a lot of sense; it's almost like it's moving in a positive direction then "Then uh oh the monsters got him the end". Like what are these things? Why do they give a crap? Why was he in this strange place with no people? Was he actually in a dream? How is anyone around here (and I mean here as in this site) supposed to get better if they all just drool, pat them on the head, and say "hurr nie ow ten" when this was more like a 3.5/10 for managing to piece together a gramatically coherent story and the imagery of a world with nobody in it with litlte beyond that? And I'll have you know I made this account just so I could say this was not, by any sretch of the imagination, andy better than maybe a 5.5 at best. Keep working at it though. Writing is a noble passion.