Talk:Blue Light/@comment-25868526-20150226140159

Really good. When the dad came home I groaned, expecting some sort of zombie or ghost twist, but no, that twist got me good.

The only thing that stuck out was the sentence about the monsters is kinda clunky, dosen't flow with the story very well.

Apart from that though awesome! The imagery was great without being the typical gore, and the connection between the father and son was done very well, especially considering the length of this pasta.

Good work:)