Talk:The Hissing/@comment-25975226-20150518060903

It's pretty good, and not a concept I've seen before. Obviously I saw you working on this in the workshop and I helped, but there are still things that could've been fixed had you thought harder :)

7/10 - Characters (they are sometimes a bit robotic in their dialogue)

9/10 - Plot (interesting to read, you want to keep going)

10/10 - Concept (the fact that you based this off a true story is really cool)

6/10 - Language (including dialogue and range of vocabulary)

Overall 8/10. It would be 7/10, but I gave you an extra point because you worked hard to get this one together :)