Talk:Tobit: Brothers and Sisters/@comment-26326346-20150819220411

I liked the tie-ins and how action packed it was, it felt like the best paced one yet. It was good to have things happening and getting a little bit of information fed to me at the same time. Also, thank you for adding "fuck trophy" to my vocabulary, that word may come in handy some day XD

I have a bad feeling that Gregory and Clair are going to be the only ones left that see things through to the very end. Trevor comes across as too careless and Derrick too impulsive, although he does have the habit of being calm and collected when he needs to be. It has been very interesting to learn about the characters and see them come together.

There were quite a few grammatical errors that I went through and fixed, I'm blaming your autocorrect for them as it was things like: to instead of too and you instead of your.

Great job as always Banning! I'm looking forward to the next chapter (or really whatever you work on next).