Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20150728223911/@comment-26475253-20150729015035

Um. Hmm. Well. I didn't understand quite a bit of that. Make the talk such as if an urchin was saying it, not like it's a long lost language. Not really creepy, this seems to me more like a fantasy novella. Also, I assume that, by kobolds, you mean... the little dog things, yippy fellows, big packs, yada yada? Roight. I assume part one shines some light on this, as I have no clue what's going on in here.