Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33937557-20180617200122/@comment-33937557-20180617230314

DrBobSmith wrote: SoDaft Potato,

You have a creepy circumstance. I am just wondering on the suspension of disbelief in terms of HUNDREDS of famished rats taking his brother down and nobody in the family has done anything about them previously. Is that sort of rat numbers reasonable?

If the creepy gotcha claims to be in the real world domain then it has to be credible throughout.

DrBobSmith (talk) 23:01, June 17, 2018 (UTC) Right. What would you recommend I say instead?