Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24841494-20140320153917/@comment-24841494-20140331160910

GraydonL wrote: Mystreve wrote: Aside from some spelling mistakes and clunky comma usage, I actually like where you are going with this.

It almost has a dark fantasy meets David Lynch feel to it. Which really hasn't been done yet (that I've seen anyway).

But I feel there is a lot that needs to be done since so much is left unexplained thus far. This might have to be a long pasta in order to iron out everything you have here. Keep going though. I'm anxious to see how our little friend gets to where he goes :) Trust me, A lot more will be explained. This is going to be a fairly long pasta. TBH, I've had thoughts of making it a novel (Unlikely, though. If I did, I would want way more experience.). By the way, the assassin described in the beginning is NOT the protagonist. However, I may change that around a bit. The intro started as a little paragraph that I felt like writing, based on one of my drawings. Also, would you mind pointing out these errors when you get time? Thank you.