Talk:The Princess Named Mia/@comment-25169949-20150201140256

The twist works really well, except for the bit about the schizophrenia. Like, it's really trivializing and insulting to folks with real mental illness to make that the reason for the guy's delusional visions. That's not even how schizophrenia works, the halucinations from szizophrenia are mostly auditory.

Just edit it to make Princess Mia a "real" entity; a sort of crazy posessive mind-virus, that'd make that ending loads better. Plus, it'd leave it more open for sequels : )