Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26981815-20160126064453/@comment-26981815-20160208060642

Nah, email is fine. Email me at: henriquesarmentogoulartaguiar@gmail.com

Just like your story though, my pasta is on the line; it's to be deleted on the 12th unless it gets up to the quality standards. And yet, quite a few people have edited it and EmpireReal (or whatever the hell is name is, I'm too lazy to look up his profile :P) said he hadn't had time to reread it yet to see if it's good. However I am changing the ending by both building on to Jessica's death (not going just '6 MONTHS LATER, SHE'S DEAD' - suggestion by LMTyo13) and also change Tobias into a ghost (suggestion by PERFKNIGHT).