Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26027160-20150226095604/@comment-26102121-20150302104606

RPMGAMING wrote: Richmxnd wrote: I wouldn't call it creepy but I think it does have a place here. The only part I didn't like was Iron Maiden and the only reason for that is because it make me think of the band. Maybe use a different metal? But all jokes aside it's good. Like he said, it isn't really *creepy*, but it is pretty good. You can't really change the metal, since that *is* what it was made of. I love it! I completely forgot to think of the torture device. But yeah it is a really good poem man keep it up!