Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25217349-20140723205724/@comment-25558572-20140723214727

The-high-priestess wrote: Fixed the text to be more easily read, thanks.

I'm not sure what you mean about the paragraphs, specifics would help (i.e. I was intentional about paragraphs). Specifics about spelling errors would help too. I use a spellchecker and I've read over it multiple times and haven't seen anything misspelled.

Your fourth critique makes me think you actually didn't read the piece, because there's nothing in the story that deals with friendship vengeance.

Thanks anyway. I did read every word of it, as a matter of fact. Responding to a critique by saying I'm basically wrong in what I said is not a good response, by the way.