Talk:The Chernobyl Experiment/@comment-24040907-20140410035503

Excellent story. This one had its ups and downs:

Good: the beautifully realistic depictions of the monsters could make even Lovecraft say "oh hell no"

Bad: "Cut.Off.Their.Limbs" Okay...thanks for the tip there, Isaac Clarke.

Good: Finally! A pasta about Russians without the cliche "Vladimir, Dmitry, Chekov" names!

Bad: Our protagonist spoke with the mannerisms of a twenty-something American in this sentence and a few others; "this is going to suck"

Good: Gorgeous buildup

Bad: You stated that the radio had no power...yet the characters attempt to contact HQ with it anyway...

Good: moderately accurate descriptions of the effects of radiation exposure

Bad: The story is about a research team...who just so happens to come armed to the teeth with "AKs" and have a vast knowledge of various firearms.

All together we have an entertaining read that is well worth it's salt, and earns a 7/10