Talk:Username: 666/@comment-25990240-20181012082258

Hmm, story is okay, not really my type so I might be a bit biased, but really.

I'll be honest, this grammar is terrible, just, terrible.

English isn't a first language here and it's only used in business and trading and shit but I swear my 9-year-old cousin has better grammar.

And it's really not scary, I know not all creepypastas are made to scare the living fucks out of you, but I felt this should've leaned in towards the scary side.

2/5. I'm outta here.