Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9967354-20140809061543/@comment-24352864-20140810141644

Uhh... I'm not really sure what to say. In simple words, I like the prose but, I don't think I really understood the story.

I managed to follow through at the earlier parts before it kind of got confusing at the part where she mentioned the frogs. For me, I felt that transition was too fast.

Also, regarding the lights, was she waiting for some sort of brown-out? I'm a bit confused at the wording there. Don't know how else to put it.

It's still great though, abstract, in its own way. I just didn't get what happened when it got to the frogs part. Were they literal frogs or, people or, something else?