Talk:Annex/@comment-25930029-20150107003306

Honestly, this didn't scare me. Like, at all.

You are a good writer, however, creepypastas don't seem to be your style. It looks like you write a lot of Sci-Fi. Good. I enjoy your work, though this should be a regular Sci-Fi story rather than a creepypasta.

You also have lots of grammatical issues such as, "Mr.Thompkins." -to- "Mr. Thompkins." "I said do it" -to- "I said do it." There're a few more as well. Please edit your pasta before posting it, and please do a grammar check.