Talk:Lust for Pain: His Hell/@comment-24101790-20150629012937

The song you were assigned flows wonderfully with the protagonist’s dream and Kathrine’s letter to him. (I am listening to each assigned song as I read the story just in case anyone was wondering.) There were some slight wording errors, but you corrected them as they were pointed out.

I could have done without the cyclical dream portion as it feels a bit out of place when viewed in context with the rest of the story. In summation, you did a good job with the song assigned to you and created a story that definitely feels inspired by the source material.