Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37007182-20190927113511/@comment-35911608-20190927115029

This is not a story. This is a two paragraph prompt for a story. There's no meat on the bones, one could say. It's "hi I've been having nightmares about a monster that scares me then I woke up." I need a reason to be invested in Emma's plight. This is just stating a few events and then BYE! Take your time, lengthen it out, and build a story around it. There are also many grammatical errors throughout, but those can be found and fixed with any grammar checker online.

On top of that, this prompt is making use of another author's intellectual property, which is a spinoff and against this wiki's policies. Based on your recent blog entry as well, this is a self-insert about yourself vs. The Rake. That may also fall under fanfiction, which is also against our rules (see previous link).