Talk:Whispers in the Dark/@comment-25315262-20140817175307

It does suffer from a little bit of purple prose, but I thought that it was really fun. Not as scary as I, but sometimes, I think that people sacrifice plot and suspense for quick surprises and scares. Really good. I think that you could have gone into more detail with Sara's isolation and slow ecent into insanity to give this a bit more terror inducing.