Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-7482321-20140516010250

Hi, this is my first creepypasta, just something I thought up one day. All feedback is appreciated.

THE LUMP ON THE BED

A boy comes home after school and goes into his room.

As he walks in, he sees a lump on the side of his bed under the blanket.

He lies down on the side of the bed and rests his head on the lump.

He listens to his only pet, a cat, breathing under the blanket.

He soon falls asleep.

When he wakes up, he sees something down the hallway beyond his door.

It inches closer as his heart begins to race.

He is home alone, anyway.

He hopes his only guardian under the blanket notices.

Finally he can make out the shape of something.

His cat. 