Talk:You Never Know What's Out There/@comment-35711173-20181001225009

Jdeschene,

First, I want to say I really like your use of English. It's conversational and believable, full of color but without a wasted word. I've read your story over and over admiring it.

The guy starts off rather flat. He lacks motive. This isn't even simple rape.

The women do seem defenseless and stupid, but so often I do see women doing high risk activities like this. Most of the time they get away with it. Sometimes, they don't.

You put the story under category Cryptids. Is that supposed to be a Sasquatch that rapes humans? Would monster be more applicable? Perhaps it is, leaving the reader wondering which monster you are referring to.