Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25825682-20150104021947/@comment-25825682-20150110010452

Thanks for the review Zann, this helps me a lot. To explain the quickness of plot I was worried the story was too long for a short story, so I cut out some of the backgrounds. As for the fire... that does seem weird if the lighthouse is full of water now that it was pointed out. Anyway I'll work at fixing things.