Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25024572-20160718205611/@comment-24101790-20160720022627

I'm sorry, but this really falls into the same territory as the "Demon Summoning: PSA". While you do have some scary elements (possessed cannibalism, animal sacrifice, blood messages, etc.) They're almost all handled in a comedic manner that's more focused on making light of them than actually being scary.

Lines like: "Then that ghost possessed her, and she ate our five-month-old son alive. Boy, was her face red after that!”", "I said, ‘What? No.’ I just thought the dog being hung by its intestines on the chandelier was just the kids pulling a prank.", etc. are themes that would be scary, but it's more driven to tell it in a comedic fashion (nonchalant husband recalling the murder/cannibalism of their child as if it were a small issue, father being blasé about pet's murder as 'kids being kids' under the whole infomercial manner.)

In the end this feels more like a parody of haunted house/possession stories and that really makes it more of a comedy than a horror. There's a sub-section of trollpasta that focus on stories that are written to be more comedic (and not poorly written) if you're looking for a place to post it other than your website. Back when this site was a creepy pasta/trollpasta site, this story likely would have fit in and been categorized as a TP, but now it would be like a movie rental shop (I know I'm old) advertising Poultrygeist and Scary Movie as genuinely scary.