Talk:It's So Cold/@comment-33089254-20170928212416/@comment-33185087-20171001140534

Well, as much as I enjoyed the story, I have to agree with Felix about your misusing the word 'alleviate' in that context - I had to reread the sentence several times to be sure I hadn't misunderstood something, but eventually realised that it was simply a grammatical impropriety. I'd edit it for you, but with respect to your ongoing debate with Felix I think it might be better that you concede the error and edit it yourself :)

Otherwise, good work. 8/10.