Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26268104-20170624213913/@comment-26268104-20170627211546

Question, Grim: What specific aspects of the protagonists should I explore more? Right now, what I have explored is his intial desire line (to get a purpose beyond survival), his psychological weakness (guilt over his mistake), and his skills of planning. (demonstrated by being able to make a plan to defeat a group of bandits armed with machine guns) What other information should I reveal? Keep in mind, I have to save the most important parts (his full backstory and moral weakness) for later so there isn't the issue of too much information being revealed too quickly.

In case you're wondering, when I say psychological weakness, I mean a weakness that only affects the person who has it, and a moral weakness is one that affects at least one person besides the one who has the weakness.