Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33698957-20190119144005/@comment-37197096-20190121231405

This is great. However there are different approaches you could have took: what if instead the worm led him to ACTUALLY go deaf instead of seeing a doctor? That did, kind of dull down the story, and I think even better that the voices would have led him to homicide or suicide. Of course you need to research what people like, and people like the most generic, boring stories (just look at anything in what's featured) so you can't be original without getting your head bashed into the wall, but I must say, this is one of the best pastas i've read on the wiki.