Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35522711-20180507234134/@comment-9041013-20180508090921

Does anyone even bother reading the bible anymore? Like seriously, doesn't anyone know that Angels are walking nukes in (mostly) humanoid shape? I mean, sure, you've the celestial beasts who look like Lovecraft came up with their visual concepts. Four heads, multiple wings, shiny, huge and so on and so forth, then you also have the wheels, which are wheels, within wheels with eyes, creepy and all but they usually look somewhat human. You also have the Archangels, God's literal helpers, it is said Michael will end up fighting the big guy himself.

Yeah, also, demons, according to Christianity are a bunch of deformed fallen angels, so your story makes some sense.

I do like how angels are trapped inside demons, however, how about going in a direction of making angels turn into demons?

It's rather short, feels weirdly pased, and somewhat unrealistic (how does a simple human kill creatures physically superior to itself so easily), grammar needs some work.

You could do a lot of it, but you'd need to work on that.