Talk:Blacking Out/@comment-5374729-20150619064140

Definitely a tragic story considering what's become of the Caleb, however there's very little time to get to know him and what he's like before the blackouts affect him. If there had been some sections detailing his growing alienation from his friends and the world around him, a few extra lines of dialogue when he snaps, it would've given his descent more weight. Still, a good start.