Talk:Two Possibilities/@comment-25383866-20141225145556/@comment-24101790-20141231031758

Thanks for pointing those issues out, I believe I caught the ones you mentioned. Just goes to show how you can re-read something and miss those glaring issues.

When I wrote this, I did it over a period of time, which conveniently explains the inconsistencies with through-out/through out and redundancy with "shitting out my soul".

Thanks for giving it the once-over and picking out those issues. Feel free to edit my stories if you see an issue with them. I typically check edits more often than comments. It's nice to know that someone is out there reading through and finding the problems in my stories.