Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29165876-20160725164132

Ok, I was told my story had some grammar, puncuation, tense, and format problems, even though I dont see how, considering I went over the story muiltiple times, even reading it aloud to myself. I also had my stepfather read it, and one of the only problems he saw was that the characters need a little more characterization. Even so, I want to know where the problems stated are as I do not see them, and what to do, and how to go about fixing them.

here's the link to the story -->link 