Talk:Red Rose/@comment-26326346-20160430060020

I enjoyed this pasta and it was great like all of your other works. The description of the girl-at-the-top-of-the-stairs was particularly chilling and well done.

One problem I had with the story is that it doesn't mention what happened to the two kids that went in and disappeared before the main character went in. I suppose they could have chickened out and went home as one of the kids speculated, but it sort of begs answering since the main character saw the- girl-at-the-top-of-the-stairs that was presumably Rose. If the main character saw the girl, then wouldn't they have as well? If they did, then did they survive? I feel that if you do decide to address it that a line toward the end of the story about finding out how they had chickened out and left through a back window would be sufficient.

I may have totally missed a statement regarding those two kids and if so I apologize. This is a good pasta all in all, don't let my one issue with it make you feel weighed down. This is a good story with a strong ending :)