Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26112993-20150215195456/@comment-26112993-20150215211529

Thank you for your kind words! It's good to hear that you think this is ready for posting - should I just delete this and post it as a pasta, or can I leave both up at once?

I had Julio find the box first so that I could have the "recycling" plot twist as well as the revelation about where whimsy-boxes come from. Julio did put it in a bag, which is the one that burst. I think I'll make that clearer on my next revision.