Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-13210154-20140415174716/@comment-9967354-20140518110443

Well, this was intense, and rather creepy. I suppose you don't really need an explanation as to why she's killing all these people because she had a dream about it, as that helps build up the mystery. I like the build up, and even though this didn't exactly have a story, it was an introduction to a concept that is this character. I'm also glad the murders aren't described profusely, because sometimes that just gets boring. Not sure what the rain has to do with it, though. It's a good setting anyway, so don't change that.