Talk:Her Red Right Hand/@comment-26030957-20160118170049/@comment-26030957-20160119173854

Ha ha, I see you have taken my advice after all. I really think it makes the story less confusing, you really don't want readers to have to stop and go back and re-read. Honestly, some might just stop reading all together. And taking that "fuck" out of there was smart as well. Nobody likes a girl who talks to her father with a potty mouth. Glad I could help.