Talk:Native Fields/@comment-31077845-20170215094500

This was good, but the ending felt...idk, unfair? He tried his best to save his two nurses and barely survived, the character was brave and cared about both his patients and his staff and overall was clearly someone we were supposed to be rooting for, and he was just shot down like a cornered animal. No heroic end, the suggestion that with police cooperation he's never going to be found, the mayor and his killers will never face justice, those around him will never see closure. Oh, and the main expert on this mysterious disease is now dead. I'll mention I'm confused about the glass though...

Plus, as far as things that didn't make sense, sending all but 2 people home seemed awfully contrived and unlikely, it was never really explained what happened to the Sarah girl. It would seem she's supposed to be behind the power/phone loss and locked doors and all, but she's a little girl, and one with a disease that screws with your brain function, when even a normal adult would probably have no idea how to do any of that in some unfamiliar hospital. And even after all that, hospitals have auxillery power sources as they kinda need electricity. And the mayor's reactions really don't make much sense, as nobody would want their sickly daughter around people exhibiting symptoms closely resembling one of the most contagious and deadly diseases known to man, and killing the head doctor would help nothing. Idk, like banning said, the ending just seemed sort of rushed and like it didn't really fit.