Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29015383-20160926093727/@comment-25226524-20160926201640

This is going to probably sound lazy as hell, but honestly, Travis summed up my feelings nicely. I think it has potential but does need some work. Overall, I enjoyed it and think it could be a pretty solid story with a bit more effort. I used to have a recurring nightmare of something similar to this, so it definitely made me uncomfortable.