Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31073921-20170202153809/@comment-7064562-20170202165205

Horrible. I'm assuming this is a troll pasta but it's even bad by thoese standards.

The jokes are bad

I have no idea why you can't break up the story correctly. When a new person talks, it's a new parhgraph, it's not that hard.

It's just over all bad, confusing, and poorly written with many grammer mistakes and bad pacing. There's no dark humor about it. Dark humor isn't making a "scary" story and throwing in a shit ton of bad poorly excuaited jokes. :/