Talk:The Shadow Girl/@comment-27623698-20160217011014/@comment-5101683-20160817002647

Maybe what တရားသူကြီးကို တစ်ဖက်သတ်အစွဲ	meant is that it could have been more original, even though the protagonist would have been harder to write (which is where the aforementioned "greed" comes in?) Also, the demon forces the girl to kill things that she does not want to kill, even though there are horrible people elsewhere, and the reason for this isn't explained.

However, I don't think that she would have been able to procure things from the hospital, as she was near-immobilized and dying. But if the protagonist had survived, and then killed both people years later without aid from a demon, and possibly even had a normal life, I think that would have been more memorable.