Talk:The Slenderman Cometh/@comment-31084867-20170217191439/@comment-31084867-20180201093432

So to DemonsRmyfriends, I didn't pay any mind to this story and only came back cause this story came up in conversation. I just want to say this. First off, it wasn't discrimination. That word doesn't make sense in this context. It's constructive criticism. Second. Yes, he may have worked hard. That doesn't mean it isn't deserving of criticism. The story is cliche, it's constantly forced. I plan on writing my own story. If someone did the same to me like I did here, I would be happy. Because if I made any flaws in my story that I didn't see or fix before posting, then it should be pointed out. As well written as this story may be, there are many flaws with it.