Talk:Crescent Forest/@comment-25941663-20150527115320

This was a nice read. It had just the right amount of detail and description.

The guy was also surprisingly creepy. There was something off with him.

We didn't see any character development though. I understand that not all stories need fleshed-out characters, but in this case it was hard to feel anything for the travellers, as the only info we got about them was that they were travellers and lost.

That wouldn't have been a problem though if the story was a bit more 'hard-hitting'. I had to re-read most of it to understand what happened and that isn't good, because it means the story didn't 'touch' me. I still have no idea where this pasta was going.

The intro was pretty good, you set the tone of the story nicely. But after the middle point it wasnt' as good. The pacing was a tiny bit off and the plot was hard to understand. If it wasn't for the creepy man this would have been an average story.