Talk:The Cropping of Life/@comment-26835140-20161105045424/@comment-26835140-20161105172751

Rethinking the process of how this story could play out would definitely be a big help towards its development. You have created a sort of 'canvas' with this story that can be capitalized on with later writing, now I'm not saying that you need to revise this at all for it is great writing! But you can definitely play on this later which would actually be quite exciting! And I will check out that micropasta for sure! I am in the process of writing a (I believe it's called a 'novella'?) pasta that I plan to be pretty lengthy. I am just a sucker for things like ghosts and being lost in places (cornfields for example). Anywho, good luck with that plethora of Creepypastas and feel free to throw me a message on my talk page once you get that December release done! I would love to be one of the first to read it!

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_talk:FNAFFANF

(sorry i'm an idiot when it comes to links on this wiki lol)