Talk:Red Christmas/@comment-25148755-20151224192037/@comment-27043518-20151224220721

After reading the story over, I completely agree with you 100%. I focused more on the creepy factor rather than the plot itself, but the plot is just as important. I was planning on this being a prologue to a saga, the next part would have established the background a bit more. I feel like that was my mistake, looking ahead. Definitely not my best pasta.