Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26152295-20140503115234/@comment-17758905-20140506063051

Alright, look at the lost episode pasta Squidward's Suicide. What makes it work, what makes it tick, why is it not your run-of-the-mill lost episode?

The actual episode has plot.

Not only any plot, but one that isn't contrived, and has gore in the right places, minus the random shock scenes of kids being degutted.

The plot makes sense in and out of itself, both in and out of the episode.

Yours is random, and just has blood and gore, just to have blood and gore.

Also, what's with all the nazis and stuff, and Donald Duck? That literally comes out of nowhere. Absolutely nowhere.

Finally, that convo the friend and the narrator had is really contrived and unrealistic.

Tl;dr: Try harder, you hack!