Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20170322074930/@comment-26326346-20170424002721

I revised it a second time and trimmed it in spots, while adding new content. My goal was to make it seem less ranty and sarcastic in nature. Overall, it is pretty similar to what I started with, but hopefully with more of an eerie feel. I think it's about a line shorter due to the new content I added.