Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26112985-20151113225617/@comment-26112985-20151115170558

I'm planning on changing quite a bit on this creepypasta (including that one paragraph) and once I'm done with the whole thing I'll go ahead and release it. There are a few plotholes and ending issues I need to clear up. As I mentioned above, the ending seems to be one of the things that people complain about, so a new finale seems called for. Thanks again for your time.