Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30692969-20161208122608/@comment-29890158-20161210204343

Seems like a decent story in my opinion. It could be made longer and explained more, why they started such a rocky roadtrip, and what was pressuring them to be rash, or some inner-monologue explaining what each of them is thinking about the other and why they came to this predicament.

Maybe a being sends them on the run before the car ride got started.

I think it would pass quality standards the way it is now.