Talk:Sweet Revenge

Good read.
I liked the simplicity of the story. The way it was worded had me pulled from the rest of the world and into the character's mind. That's good. Admittedly, it didn't give me that chill, or creep factor, but that is because I am highly desensitized from all of the creepypastas I've read. It would take more to scare me. Good work and keep it up. YakuYabai  ∆Talk∆  07:01, May 5, 2013 (UTC)