Talk:Conquest/@comment-5733573-20180818052323/@comment-9041013-20180818085559

Sorry but that, "but it's not really a poem and doesn't really benefit from being written in this format, especially since your individual lines aren't particularly poetic. " made me laugh.

Anyways, thanks for looking through this thingy and giving me some critique. I did not find the word "atop" in there... just "stop" and stop means cease his actions in these case.

Also, you read it literally, didn't you? 'Tis but a poem about Time. I do specify there that "Conquest" isn't evil, it's just there... like time. Also, mentioning how it will take over the Gods and well everything else...

It's not a being per se, it's just a personification, a creepy personification of time.

Second stanza is a play on the phrase "Your TIME has come"

Thanks nonetheless :D