Talk:School Event/@comment-30664473-20170228135329

It had great potential but ultimately fell flat. I prefer rating pastas for their story over the writing and it has a nice story to it but a lot of the writing and plot is just too unpolished. To be honest, I think thats what makes this story a bit more appealing than others though. That unpolishedness that you don't really see often here. However, if i have to give a rating though, i'd say........................................... IT'S GREAT,(not really more like a 5/10)