Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24859608-20140512172328

Ok, so I am not sure if I should go ahead on and write this, because it feels cliche, but I have not read a story yet, quite involving a similar incident. So I need you tell me if I should go ahead and write it, or that it is a piece of shit and don't want me to write. I broke it down, so I have a more organized flow of writing, but I need some more opinion as to why or why not I should write about this.

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 The Hacker – Prewrite



General Idea:

This story is based on three smaller stories, to make up a murder incident known as “The Hack”. The first story is from a first person perspective. It is the story of the only survivor, that was victim to “The Hack”. The second story is the story of the murderer who is going to kill try to kill the people in the house the victim lived in. To give this a little bit more of a unique touch, I am going to make this story told in third person. The last story will be instructions on how to survive this, told from the victim. The victim knows when he posted this he was going to die, because he had nothing else to live for. However because the killer is still monitoring the victims move, and the killer can easily trace the location of someone who clicked on the link, he gives you instructions on how to save yourself.

















Structure: 

With such a weird writing style, this is how I am going to organize it. I made up 4 segments, and 5 paragraphs in each segment, as well as an intro from the victim only were he warns you. And basically this is how it works.

Victim Warning/Intro:

Segment 1:

<p align="LEFT" style="border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">Paragraphs 1 and 2: Victims first person story

<p align="LEFT" style="border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">Paragraphs 3 and 4: Third person murder's story

<p align="LEFT" style="border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">Paragraphs 5: The part where the victim warns you, and helps you survive by giving orders. These will be based on paragraph's one and two.

<p align="LEFT" style="border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">And will repeat that structure four times.

<p align="LEFT" style="border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">Characters:

<p align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom:0in;border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">* Antagonist(No Named Killer/Hacker)

<p align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom:0in;border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">* Protagonist(The Writer)

<p align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom:0in;border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">* The Reader

<p align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom:0in;border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">* Lucy(Protagonists girlfriend)

<p align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom:0in;border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;"> Steven(Protagonists & Lucy's Kid)

<p align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom:0in;border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">Hotel Manager

<p align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom:0in;border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">Bell Boy

<p align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom:0in;border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">* Important Character in the story...

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<p align="LEFT" style="border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">Setting:

<p align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom:0in;border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">Throughout the story, there are multiple settings. Two take place through May 5th, through May 10th. The other doesn't have an exact time of date. But the settings vary depending on the story..

<p align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom:0in;border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">For the victim, it takes place in his neighborhood, in his house, one portion on a boat. And around town a few times. Their house address is 761, Segmented Ln. While they their city address is Nordic Port, Maine. This town is only 20 miles south of Canada. They get a lot of cloudiness in this wooded area. The town is also sort of an island, it requires a draw bridge to get to, and you can see the see water unless your blocked by the pine trees.

<p align="LEFT" style="border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">

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<p align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom:0in;border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">The killer lives in a small town, in the large island of Newfoundland Canada. But after the first few paragraphs, he will on the road to the victim's house. So there are a lot of changing locations.

<p align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom:0in;border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">In the last paragraphs of the story both settings are very similar.

<p align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom:0in;border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">

<p align="LEFT" style="margin-bottom:0in;border-style:none;padding:0in;line-height:100%;">And the instructions story setting varies.

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