Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26512885-20150702125659

I recently started writing this, and would like to know what you think and any changes/improvements

Name: Emma Harvey

Race: white

Date of birth: 23/04/1990

Date of death: 29/06/2015

Case #: 1024

The victim displayed multiple lacerations across the torso and arms, as well as a large I carved into the right shoulder. Although it appears this was inflicted postmortem. The victim's throat had also been cut with near surgical precision, which was the cause of death.

Name: Anna Hardy

Race: white

Date of birth: 12/5/1989

Date of death: 01/07/2015

Case #: 1025

The victim displayed several deep puncture wounds around the chest area, piecing the lungs. The victim also bears some similarity with case 1024, in so much as the throat has been cut using the same technique. Victim as two large gashes on the right shoulder, resembling the Roman numeral II

Name: Leah Adams

Race: white

Date of birth: 10/8/1991

Date of death: Sometime next week 