Talk:Visions/@comment-25559874-20141205225547

Good, 9/10 but you need to remember about grammar.

In the beginning of your story; which is really good, just needed to be clean with the "you" word.

You are is, you're. Yout have is, you've. Your is owning something.

X3 other than that. It was a great Creepypasta.