Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26535938-20150626230942/@comment-26425680-20150701014150

Whitix has written a pretty good assessment of your work, so I don't have too much more to add. The one thing I'll say is that pornography addiction and child pornography aren't creepy, at least not in the right way. Your subject matter crosses the line from creepy fun to something else entirely. If you want to write a story about someone slowly getting drawn into an online world, choose something besides porn.