Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33364812-20180126154459/@comment-28428152-20180128221818

I would recomend revising some of the descriptions, as they're often very awkward. I'd also cut out the epilogue, as it's very campy sounding, and also gives the impression that this is from an actual urban legend, but I couldn't find any tales of an "Old Man Winter" variety from Sioux City, so I'd also just leave the name of the city out of it.