Board Thread:New on Creepypasta Wiki/@comment-6388890-20130211035209

My first creepypasta is 'Akarui Mirai'. . . I don't know I thought it was good at the time but now I'm starting to think it's pretty cliched. Not to mention it sadly kinda loses a lot of the creepiness towards the end. I don't know, I just want someone to look at it and give their opinions?

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Akarui_Mirai 