Talk:From Hell I Write/@comment-25052433-20150719033622

Alright, let's get on down and talk about From Hell I Write!

Creativity: This one was full of creative concepts from start to finish. I loved the fact that you built such a rich environment around the story. The main character's family and life, the cultist and their wicked ways, the outcome and everything in between came together to form an amazing plot and a very creepy story.

Quality of Story: Not much to say here, this is one of the best I've reviewed in the contest yet. You combined a lot of very powerful concepts together, from the family base, to the eerie family and sinister house, to the strange ritual and the stalking of the character, all the way up to the final encounter. The fact that this was also told from the burning pits of hell just made it all that much more satisfying.

Quality of Characters: Out of all the stories I have reviewed so far, this one has the best cast of characters yet. The main character and his family were well written, coming across as human and real. The villains were exactly what you'd want them to be, menacing and evil. Their actions and reactions to what is going on around them all felt organic and well executed. Excellent work.

Creepiness: This had demonic rituals, sadistic families, dark magic and one of the best stalking scenerios I have read on this site in a long time. You achieved perfect creepiness on this.

All in all, this was excellent. I will award 80 points, and with Grim's 83, that gives you a total of 163.

Final Score: 163 points.