Talk:Funnymouth/@comment-25944304-20150102220624

The ending was kinda morbidly funny, which I liked. If you're going for a seriously creepy story, I would put a bit more transition between lemonlimeskull's going crazy. It seemed he woke up and was insane. But, I liked the story as a bit of a creepy silly thing. 7.5 (or maybe 8) / 10