Talk:Airlock/@comment-38965498-20190329195935

Sounds like a pitch for a game. Needs way more detail. Did not feel intrigued, ended up skimming the last couple paragraphs to see if it got interesting. In my opinion, I prefer the gaming creepy pastas to somehow connect the virtual world to their reality in some way. This was just like reading the back of a game case. 2/10