Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26227439-20150330102607/@comment-26227439-20150330214846

I was my very first creepypasta so I knew it would get deleted. The reason I wanted slenderman at the end is because I wanted to make a creepypasta that combines Ticci Toby,Jtk,and slendy. I didn't really notice the bad grammer and punctuation. Also it isin't a article, it is a radio broadcast. I knew it would be a jeff the killer ripoff but on that story jeff isint bullied, he gets attacked by randy and his gang. Rick has been bullied since elementary school because he acts weird. Also when rick said "I am The DARKNESS" It was because when rick burned down the house he was captured by slendy and turned into a proxy and all he could remember was that word. I will try my best next time but I am glad that you pointed out the bad things in my story. I thought it was bad the first time I wrote it which got me banned for 1 day but I didnt know e rules because I didn't check the message u sent me. Then when I tried to make it better it took me 6 days to create so I thought it was really good. Also I wrote it on an ipad so thats why theres the sentence what your name.