Talk:A Story to Scare My Son/@comment-5813834-20150720164527

7/10 It is well written with good pacing and the dad is reminds me of my own. It is kind of creepy but thats kind of it. The twist was kind of obvious.

I think it not being scary more has to do with the fact that killers are just done so much that they're not really scary anymore. Extra points for not going hyper gore route though.