Talk:Dogs Dos and Don'ts/@comment-3437860-20131110001032

There should have had more buildup on the don'ts. Like it should had started with something mildly off, then to something disturbing, and only then to something outright wrong. When the first one is "a dog being pulled inside out through its anus" it's too abrupt, and you really can't top it off. (On another note, that one was really just comical...)

Then ending was great, though it was a lost opportunity. If the don'ts were from different people, with different qualities or glued-on photos, etc, you could have made it so that the don'ts were made from different readers, as in everyone who checked the book contributed to it.