Creepypasta Wiki talk:Deleted Page/Jeff the Killer/@comment-24155807-20131111071241

When I read the intro, I thought it was maybe a little creepy, but not really. Especially with the face in the picture, it just looks stupid.

Once I read the story though, it was hard to keep from laughing at points. This is cleary written by a 13 year old.

Three twelve year olds roll up on two brothers, one who is thirteen with knives and demands bust fare. Lolwut? That's an outrageous plot to base your story off of so far. Also, Lui has a wallet? Why would a 12 year old carry a wallet to school? to hold his 2 dollars for lunch? And the dialouge is just silly. Maybe the writer was autistic, because he certainly doesn't understand social situations.

As the story goes on, it just gets lamer. The children have guns and none of the parents even try to stop them? Not to mention that they have a bottle of vodka at a child's birthday party and the kids seem to exute superhuman strength even though it's implied that they don't actually have any training in some sort of Martial Art.

The bleach and vodka fire... Like... Ugh. This story might have got me in the 3rd grade.