Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20160729155428/@comment-28266772-20160811140619

Thank you very much for your feedback! And sorry some of those mistakes persisted! Sometimes these things just slip my mind. I've posted the story now and would just like to thank all of you for the support and help in creating this story. It's sincerely appreciated and you can always count on me to repay the favour.