Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35911608-20180819032430/@comment-35911608-20180820120522

Oh no, I like the twisted duality of Darcy's mind/reality that you're presenting. I just didn't do it cuz it seemed a little cliche, but I think you're right in saying it would make it more interesting. And yes, I think the arrest would compromise the loop of the story where it starts and ends in silence, the sirens in the distance sounds good.

Yeah, making him undetected is going to be the difficult part. Like I said, gonna have to rework it quite a bit, but since I have nothing else to do right now, may as well try. I'll see what I can do.