Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24475920-20150307005910/@comment-26148164-20150307012708

Wow.....

I have no words....

Well this certainly deserves the 'creepy' in creepypasta. You take the fear of a student failing exams and in life something that I do fear myself and blowing it up into a messed up reality.... I feel so sorry for her she really believed that she would fail.....

Well done. You got me hooked from the start and I read it to the end.

In terms of paragraphing I suggest that in the last paragraph you seperate it from "She had done the world a favor tonight." Then make a new paragraphy for "Tommorrow her parents...".

But apart from that you have done an amazing job :)

~Flame