Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24849089-20140508231335/@comment-24849089-20140509033327

Thankyou ecuinach. I`ll try to make heavy revision towards the story. But I need to say that English isn`t my first language, therefore the tons of gramatical errors. It would be great if I can get a help in this matter. But overall, thanks for the critics, it helped me realize things a lot. :-)