Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26981815-20160126064453/@comment-26835140-20160208022443

My story was deleted yes, its kind of embarrassing how i didn't realize these problems before. I had like 50 run-on sentences lol. And i was in a big rush to publish the story because i knew i would be busy for a while, so i just came up with something and it was almost instantly deleted (for good reason, i got no hate empyreal.) it was just a bad ending with really good detail and i thought i introduced my characters well, but nothing happened until the end of the story and everyone died within like, 3 paragraphs. it was a dumb mistake and im gonna redo it and take the actual time to do it correctly.

if you want to, leave your e-mail on my talk and i'll personally e-mail it to you (i will probably cut out the second half of the story)