Talk:Plane/@comment-28938497-20150220235208

Tense and emotional are words to describe this pasta. Creepy... not so much.

Also, there were sod many grammar issues it is not worth even trying to masked a list.

This actually quite good if looked at as a shot story written by somebody who's first language isn't English (I'm assuming), but as an entry to the finals of a creepypasta competition, I feel I have to give this a 56/100