Talk:Funnymouth/@comment-25078903-20150427051154

I wish the typos and grammatical errors could be fixed. Plus this story would have been really good if it was written by the Jorge guy's point of view. A crazy person could not have written it, so it makes it seem silly and unrealistic! Plus... OMG there are WAY to many commas!!!! I hate, it, because I, can't read, it, correctly :) This pasta had a lot of potential, but sadly that's all it really has.