Talk:The Couch/@comment-24466828-20170501002409/@comment-24466828-20171207001138

It might be a bit unnerving if this happened to me in real life. However, that doesn't change the fact that this story didn't unnerve me at all when I read it. Not everything which happens in real life has the same effect when represented in forms of art. I'd be unnerved if someone in a Spongebob costume jumped out from an alley and said to me "Would you like a Krabby Patty?", but if I read that in a horror story, it would be laughably bad.

Well-written books don't contain details like the ones in this pasta. As for the section of the pasta I highlighted, the author got carried away with the descriptive words. Now, don't get me wrong, imagery is, of course, great to have in works of literature, but the writer went way too overboard with them in this pasta. When describing an object, the writer would often put several of them together, most of which were unnecessary and, more often than not, distracting. Like I said, they made the writing in this pasta feel awkward.