Talk:My Perfect Body/@comment-26336673-20170207072652

Hm...

I'm not really engaged into it. The most exciting part is the ending, and even that isn't too much of a thriller. Though I will say that I do feel some sympathy when she cuts herself down a LOT.

Perhaps it's because this fits the stereotypical psychopath. Similar beginning: bad family, people insulting from everywhere, mental breakdown, blood. Many people are doing this, and it's, quite honestly, getting to me. I just want them to stop. It's getting annoying.

Try to take a more original tone, and try to stay away from the psychopathic area.

3/10.