Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28629333-20141221013957

Hello I`m trying to make creepy pastas I want to know if you can understand the plot from the writing below I will fix the grammar errors there is just too much. Tomorrow I`m going to my grandpa`s house for a few days then these things happen, Far beyond words i can assure you. After 3 hours driving to the country side i got to my grandpa`s house i got out of the car i stretched until i heard that relieving crack sound. I was done so i got my things ready to go. I went inside the house and I sat on the sofa and we talked about if we done or got anything new. The clock hit 9:30 so i got my things to the guest room and got settled in. I fell to sleep, My alarm i brought with me rang. I hit the thing so it would turn off and got up to awake my grandpa. At 11:30 Grandpa told me that he has a bad heart so he gave me some pills so i could save him. He has another bottle but if he cant reach it he needs me. So i replied Okay, But then shortly after i asked him how he was going to alert me. He said I have control of your TV and I can reach the remote 100% of the time and he knows im delicate to noises when im asleep so it would help me. I ate breakfast,lunch,dinner and we talked a bit more and it turned to 9:30 i got to bed. My TV turned on so I ran as fast as I can and gave him the pills. This happened every night until I got used to the TV`s noise so i did not wake up, He died... I called my parents and I said, That grandpa is dead. Then I saw the words YOU`RE USELESS, YOU`RE A DISCRASE splotched in blood for a second. I fell to my knees filling in dread as I sobbed quietly then a shadow figure that looks like my grandpa said, You`ve tried.

Ninety years without slumbering, Tick, tock, tick, tock, His life seconds numbering, Tick, tock, tick, tock, It stopped short Never to go again, When the old man die 