Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9967354-20140809061543/@comment-9967354-20140810160048

My idea was to distract the reader for just long enough to drop Olivia through a sort of portal that was the streetlight and then into another world entirely, before one could figure out just what happened. >_> maybe it worked? Maybe it was a bad idea.

Also, even I don't know what the frogs are. I've left that to the reader's imaginations, aside from a lot of other things. If you cut out half the story that doesn't add to the plot in any way, it's a girl who finds a fantasy place, I guess.

Thanks a bunch for the feedback. I don't know what kind of changes to make, though. I'll rewrite the last bit to make it less confusing somehow.