Talk:Grandmother Knows Best/@comment-25234423-20140720010541

This is a great story, but there's a couple things I would like to say.

1.Lack of evidence of Anya's dissapearence, oh come on, the ending was a bit rushed.

2.Monster grabbing feet, now this is a problem too me, even though it's a bit intriguing. It's overly used. Perhaps you could've used something else.