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This is a micropasta:

The Dream

In the dream it wasn't the rats leaping at his face that disturbed him. It wasn't that they scurried over his face with their tiny claws, desperate to enter his gaping, screaming mouth. It wasn't that as much as he tried to rip them from his head one rat would always managed to make its way into his mouth. What disturbed him the most about the dream, was the way the rat's whiskers itched the back of his throat.

Just wrote it right now off the top of my head. What do you think?