User blog comment:TheKillerInYourHead/Who runs this website?/@comment-24101790-20160202210213

It was all three of those things actually, which makes me wonder why exactly you would post the story if you knew it had these issues and didn't seek outside help for reviewing/proof-reading when we have the writer's workshop.

Your story is lousy with run-on sentences: "Think about how many faces you’ve seen walking down the road as part of your everyday life, that old woman on the cash register in the supermarket, you’ve memorized her face without knowing it, or the waiter that just served you, the one with the bow tie, yeah you’ve remembered his face." You forget to capitalize multiple sentences properly. "face. all those faces you’ve seen..." You forget to punctuate questions with question marks. "But what about those demons you’ve seen, those creatures crawling out of the deepest darkest depths of your mind." There are also a lot of instances of awkward wording here. Basically look at your post above and you'll see a lot of the errors you made there on your story as well.

Additionally your story is a slightly longer version of You Can Never Forget a Face. This line from your story: "You think you’ve never seen those faces, you just don’t remember seeing them, but your brain does, and it puts those faces in your dream." almost seems like you read the story and were inspired by it, but didn't want to cite it. Even then, you really just re-hash the concept a few times and really don't create anything new from it. This isn't a good way of writing and even got one user banned for plagiarism.

All this brings me back to my original point. You basically identified three large issues in your story and yet you didn't get help and chose to post it anyways. Why? It either says pride (which would explain this post) or laziness (which I'm really hoping it isn't.) I'm sorry if the fact that we have quality standards now so we don't get buried in stories like yours disappoints you. I doubt the rest of the wiki feels the same way.