User blog comment:Smiles4Miles/Movie Notification/@comment-24224008-20140103090119

That's interesting.

A few tips:

Make sure to do your research on stuff. You want to make it realistic enough so it makes sense.

I'd recommend changing the original story a bit. It's flawed, and what's the point in keeping something flawed?

Is this supposed to take place during the original story, of after?