Talk:A Haunting Most Mario/@comment-26111838-20150607060941

I do not care that this is a troll pasta, but this sucks. The English is horrible, and that's just the beginning. June 6, 1997 is a Friday, so points there, but I am removing them for Friday the 13th cliché. Also removing points for "you have to believe me / this cliché. "Also blast processing"? Dafuq? This part is contradictory: "It was super scary. But I wasn't scared." So many simple sentences or compound sentences make reading annoying. Who would want to read something that went like this: "I stood up. I walked to my light. I turned it off. I walked to my bed. I fell asleep."? How can a dead person write a story on the Internet? Caps make sentences scarier cliché. Drawing conclusions based on nothing. Unless you could see Princess Toadstool's facial features, the dead face may have been from one of your friends. A dead person goes to the flea market. The parents own a dead child, who can somehow go to a flea market. OMG!! No label!! Eek! No label cliché. Putting-a a-a behind-a every-a word-a gives-a you-a a-a Mario-a accent-a. DON'T EAT THE MUSHROOM!!! Going back to the 'believe me' cliché, why the hell would anyone believe a dead kid. Missing punctuation and capitalisation. 666 cliché. *666 is the loneliest number...* So... You walked up to Bowser, and then you're like "I win, now get out". Then Bowser leaves?? Kinda ludicrous story. Rating: - *insert infinity symbol here* / 0. This sucked so bad it got a divide by zero error.