Talk:Dating Game/@comment-2012468-20191101063751

You don't know a goddamn thing about storytelling, don't you?

I've been through at least seven different breakups as a teenager and I am currently 19 years old. I'm fucking fine. This piece of shit is 32 years old, and despite having a family and a job, she decides "oh! killing people for no reason whatsoever such as my family is the best way to go about it!" No. Fuck you. Fuck you and fuck your stupid ass "pasta".

This is an actual disgrace upon the word creepypastas. Creepypastas used to actually fucking mean something, until you and your talentless gimp ass showed up, among the hundreds more like you.

Literally no character in this story is likeable, developed, or memorable, and if they ever are developed they are the single most immature little shits imaginable, for example your tryhard edgelord ''murderous main character. ''Jeff the motherfucking Killer looks tame compared to this shit. In fact he is a deep character compared to what's-her-face here.

There is zero story. There is none. It is just a series, of worthless, pointless, unnecessary, disgusting fucking shock value strung into one disaster of a story. Nothing but gore and baby murder, oh and also you're walking on them because I somehow put them under cement. Fuck. You. You piece. Of shit.

This is the worst creepypasta I have ever read. Virtually every single other pasta at least tried. Even trollpastas tried, in some way, to be funny. This was just a load of shit. It isn't scary, it isn't funny, it's just fucking nauseating. It's fucking gross, it's childish, juvenile, and it's just pigshit.

Go and binge-read some rejected shit at Trollpasta or something. Sonic.exe, Bound to Death, any of them. They are shit, yeah, but they would be ten times better than anything you see in this goddamn mess. This pasta, right here, is trash. No redeemability, no potential. It's a load of fucking wank.