Talk:The Sad Reality/@comment-44458305-20200115043051

Too much repetition at the end of it, and it feels incredibly bare bones in places. Phrases like "we were fine" don't make for a interesting story. I do, however, love the idea of a person symbolizing a monkey's paw, but do feel it could have been done with a little less direct intervention. (I may actually write my own based off of this one, for the first time!) 7/10 for story, 9/10 for concept and inspiration.