Talk:Flower Eyes and Needle Teeth/@comment-30103649-20160930021931

It wasn't very "scary" but it was a very well paced story and frankly, I'd love to read more. There's something about your writing style that is very suited to writing horror/creepypastas. I like that we don't see solid proof to back up the protagonist's claims. Unreliable narrators are my favorite trend of pastas because of all of the possibilities. It let's the reader really read into the story and decide how terrifying it is; some may think that our protagonist is correct but he's the only one who knows it and everyone is doomed, but others might think that our protagonist is hallucinating and just wants to justify his killing spree. Anyways, this was a very concise, exciting story.