Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180703025727/@comment-26444017-20180703032534

I should have probably picked up on you living in Hawaii form the last story of yours I saw. This one really solidified that for me.

This story is, as you said, far more light-hearted than the usual stuff, but I think it's pretty good. The writing is almost exactly where it should be. It's not overly long, and that helps, since the real action of it is also relatively short-lived.

Pretty good all in all, in my opinion.