Talk:Deepweb/@comment-25907761-20141222080524

Yeah.. Just like everyone said, McAfee kind of ruins the professionalism of the creepypasta. The dialogue seems kind of unrealistic also, Hard Drives can't be "crashed" by the government or whatever agency that is. It's an interesting concept however, but is not believable at this point of time. Perhaps, in the future.

Nice pasta if you are just starting off however. Keep working at it.