Talk:Laughing Jack/@comment-25655620-20141227172335/@comment-25655620-20141230153606

My reply to your counter-arguments.

1:Here is what the police can do. Or even just bring them to a police station for the night.

2:???

3:Scarier for a character =/= scarier for the reader. Also that's not an excuse for having a character randomly die two second after being randomly introduced.

4:I don't really get what you're saying so I can't really say anything. I think what you're saying is: To show that jack isn't just a real life monster but also someone who can become imaginary. And if that's what you're saying, then my response is: That still doesn't make sense storywise. It could have worked if maybe happened something scary before the dream, but it didn't.

5:"I knew it wasn't true. All doors were loked and no windows were open, whatever came to my house, it didn't came from the outside". Solution? Stay in the same fucking house were the scary thing happened! Genius! Also she still doesn't know Jack has powers.

6:That was just to start the other list.

1: For fun...... yeah.............it's so fun to give a kid candies after all.......that doesn't make sense.......I guess you don't have to explain anything about a character if you just make him insane.

2: I agree with this one, sure it could be hard to actually pull of, but i guess it could be an explenation.

3:The point still remains, why the fuck does the kid become friend with Jack? Isn't he scared? He should be.

4:What is that supposed to mean? I know someone wants to think about this stories as supposedly real stories, but this isn't really the case, this things are counted as litterature, so your statement doesn't really count here.

Also you forgot the most important issue in this story: this is just a giant shitty build-up to a grand finale that doesn't pay off. This the central issue and all the others are just minor.