Talk:7 Ordinary Days/@comment-5978469-20141218023138

He edited a computer file which just happened to control reality itself, and his edits fucked up space-time? ...but only for a week? And every year, for some reason?

The concept is interesting, but you've executed it very poorly. I know that disorientation is part of the concept, but you should make an effort for us, the readers, to see a pattern where the character(s) cannot.

As it is, I want to like it. But it's not very clear what's going on until about 4/5ths the way in, and the significance of the computer program is only mentioned in passing.

Also, waaaaaaaaaay too many ellipses. Give this story some heavy editing and it could be great.