Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140731003959/@comment-25226524-20140731015914

I like it. I think you need to be more descriptive, especially concerning the shadow man. You don't need to go crazy with it, but a little visual usually helps with the creepiness. Throw in a metaphor here and there. Good concept, good format, just needs a little extra kick. That's my opinion, nice job.