Talk:Harvest Season/@comment-24821182-20140529171051

I had to read it twice to understand the story, and it was totally worth it. It managed to keep me entertained throughout, and while I'm usually not a fan of narrative digressions, I think they actually affect this story for the better.

I'm a little confused at two words you use, hoecer and brutaland, which I can't seem to find in any dictionary, but they might just be jargon that I'm unfamiliar with.

Anyway, great story.