Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30426016-20170113140515/@comment-24101790-20170113141058

Dubstepmaster2016 wrote: Well im trying to make something off it u got any tips?

This needs a lot more fleshing out of the concept, it can be used as a premise for setting up a possible plot ( a person who discovers this reality and how it influences them and the world around them), but using it by itself as the story really doesn't work. Additionally the writer's workshop doesn't accept premises as it's looking for complete posts (see forum rules). As such, this thread is being closed down.