Talk:Eyeless Jack/@comment-24105170-20131028225022

It's an alright pasta, not nearly the scariest pasta in the world. Now im not saying it's bad, but it could be better. It seemed very rushed and it didnt give me nearly the amount of chills that BEN drowned or Jeff the killer did. On the plus side, I like the character design, BUT, theres no explanation on how you knew his name and wasnt very long. My main letdown is that, you barely metioned "Eyeless Jack" in the story and you really only encountered him once. So overall, nice creepypasta (Though the way i ripped it up it didnt seem like i thought it was) but needs inprovement.