Talk:The Cuckoo Conundrum/@comment-5269370-20140707093704

Really good, Empy. Written very well. The scene where the worm emerges from the fiend's chest and slithers into the infant's mouth really did make me squeamish.

Also, as the user below me pointed out, the deterioration of his mental health is done so over the course of a few months of isolation and insomnia, not just inexplicably overnight. Very good use of character development!

8.1/10