Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10502460-20191109053116/@comment-5306249-20191125003052

I’m really enjoying the ending, its a nice little “oh shit” moment on top of the already grim consequences, if I understand it correctly.

My only real gripe is kind of how the protagonist, and for that matter everyone involved, can’t remember the contact info for Sam the Safety Dog yet can vividly remember almost all the events that transpired leading up to and after the incident.

It may just be a case of “reality being unrealistic” and me having to suspend disbelief, since this may be better narrative if he doesnt find the info afterall. I could probably believe the phenomena has some obfuscating effect on children and adults like anyway.