Talk:Muuta/@comment-25326117-20170107012225

1) That the discoloration around the slight laceration on my forearm will prove to be my undoing. However I will die fighting the force that wishes for my mind to not be my own.  (I changed but to however since one should never start a sentence with it).

Overall, the story is pretty well written. I am confused as to what is happening. Is the character slowly going insane? Who is this you that she keeps referring to?