Talk:The Song/@comment-24101790-20150629013019

While it was interesting to see old-school mythology of the sirens get put to good use in the story, it felt like the story could have been a bit more fleshed out. Jack and Harry’s relationship was a bit too distant for the murder to have any real impact. I would have liked to see how the siren slowly poisoned their interactions.

You definitely tied the song “Blood, Milk, and Sky” into your story, although I would have liked to see it progress a little further beyond the siren reference as the song build up some pretty interesting imagery and I can see the lyrics being used/referenced in the story itself.