Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27905100-20160930173247

This a new work of mine. It's very short and bare bones, but I've been thinking about fleshing it out. I may also want to change the setting, but only if the you don't like it.

“Hello.” … “How long have you been down here?” “It’s okay. You can come out now.” “Please come out.” … “The monsters are gone.” … “You should come out and eat. You’ve been here so long.” … “I can’t share mine. I’m starving too.” … “No. I can’t. I need to run, and if I don’t eat I might be too weak.” … “Here, come with me, and I can take you back to the camp.” … “There’s food there.” … “Please…” … “... Today the monsters came.” … “They were horrible. These ones were blacker than the night, and daddy had to grab the shotgun.” … “He told us to run, so I ran. I ran and ran and came here…” … “I’m sorry. I don’t want to make you sad too.” … “I guess I’ll go on.” … “Where are you hiding?” … “Please?” … “I’ll look, then.” … “Oh! It’s you!” … “I remember you… I remember what happened.” … “Could you come out? Please?” … “No? Are you sure?” … “Please? I would love to see you one more time.” … “Okay. Please find me when you’re ready.” … “You know where I’ll be.” … “Okay, but make it soon, bro. I’ve really been missing you since you died.”

Thank you for reviewing. 