Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26118529-20150217135351/@comment-26097843-20150217173209

a couple spelling errors. allyou could do about that is maybe watch your fingers and slow down and constantly scroll through the sentence you just wrote to check for spelling. and it gets more creepy towards the end but why would he do that i mean was he always like this? did he just go insane? maybe just add a little more. also keep in mind who you're writing about and how old they are and what time period because i have never heard an eighteen year old say "oh yes,". but other than that i enjoyed it a lot.7/10 which is a good rating fo r a first try. (but keep in ind everyone's opinion is different and i hope youkeep this in mind next time you write a story) good luck.