Talk:The Scientist's Monologue/@comment-26084396-20150628062627

I would have to agree with the marked for review tag on the article. While the descriptions are very well detailed, they don't seem to connect together. The story is too vague to understand what it is your talking about. At first I thought, with all the talk of God, the narrator may have been someone like Dr. Frankenstien, but then saying you moved the creature's eyes from its head to its hands. It made me think you talking about the monster from Pan's Labyrinth. Furthermore, the ending does not make anything clear. so I am left scratching my head at this.