Talk:Pillars

It's an okay story...
...but I'm not sure about the setting. Are they Spartans? The round table bit at the beginning made me think maybe they're knights, but then it goes on to say they're from Sparta. With names like Krieg (German for 'war'), Julian and Joseph? Calling him 'Sir' like some post-17th century military?

It's all a bit confusing, and gets in the way of the story, for me.

4/10

Trismagestus 03:31, April 17, 2012 (UTC)