Talk:Pasta Noir: Dames, Slugs and the Hatchetman/@comment-9584883-20150115194248/@comment-25774437-20150414222129

Loved it, loved it, LOVED IT. Aside from grammar errors (which being a bit of a writer myself I assume stem from writing late at night while very tired because you JUST CANT STOP YOURSELF) it was beatifully and articulatly constructed and character structure was just solid to say the very least. Absolutely schway. I do feel that as opposed to running into a wall, Chris should've hit the brakes, swung his head to the side, and snatched the gun from the baddie (seemed more like his character despite his desire to die and join his family) but the death he faced in contrast was more fulfilling. But I shouldn't tell you how to write your own Pasta you're CLEARLY capable of that on your own. And the references to music! My God! NIN, Crüe, Metallica, and The Clash! Not just talented in writing but also well versed (and with GREAT taste) in kickass music. You sir, have acquired my respect with this piece. I'd say this is by far your best having read your others as well. It really caught me unlike your other stories. Keep this sort of thing coming.