Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25947144-20170211182210/@comment-25947144-20170211204853

I will try my best to fix the issues you presented.

As for the fitting part, I actually tried (and seemingly failed) to hint that the "child" (that's part of the reason I kinda stopped calling him that) had been developing in a tube for several years. I'll try to make that clearer. As for the paralysis risk and modifications in the muscular/vocal processes, I'll figure something out. Thanks for the review.