Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24918243-20140607065334/@comment-24918243-20140609182720

Good point, Xezbeth. Thanks for bringing it up.

That little rhyme in a lot of ways is has been harder to zero in then the story as a whole.

In a way it's obvious from the begining that Nana, has the child's interest (for lack of a better word) at heart. But there is a point in the story where you are not quite sure if she intends to stop the suffering by killing the child or not. Then again, you are never quite sure in the end  if she did not kill the child as well.

Going to let it bounce around in my head a bit, and then see what I'll do.