Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36218142-20180716213957/@comment-9041013-20180718154607

Ah... a Pokemon pasta... why have you got to do this? I am going to be kind of rude and skip on reading that since it's probably not going to get accepted here as it is.

I do have a suggestion, go for a Pokemon Go disaster story, apparently people died playing that game... because they were so caught up in the game. You could go with an opening where a character plays Pokemon Go until they slip into a sinkhole or fall down an old rusty-ish bridge or something and from there follow up on describing the character's attempts at surviving and failing.

That is all I have for now.