Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26812290-20150805133346/@comment-26855964-20150806205618

It's a good concept, but try first person perspective, I feel like it would be better. (also is this even a creepypasta? From this first part it seems like an adventure novel)

Also "while large flesh eating plants try to eat us. At one point a vine wrapped around my right leg"

I think you changed from present tense to past tense there, sorry for nitpicking hehe