Talk:The Darkest World/@comment-26129088-20151111155817

At the risk of sounding like a jerk, I have to say that this definitely wasn't as good as Self Preservation. While I personally have grown tired of the over-glorification of zombies in popular culture, I'm not adverse to a creative pasta that brings originality to an otherwise unoriginal concept, like how these "zombies" are reluctantly consuming living creatures simply to delay the effects of the alien bacteria. Still, this pasta could have been much better.

I would venture a guess that English is not your first language. However, if I'm wrong, then I apologize, but there was a rather large number of misspellings and grammatical errors that even the several edits still haven't caught and they made the pasta more difficult to read.

There were also a few inconsistencies. The main character is 16 years old and in 6th grade? Also, when the main character finds his dead mother, there seems to be a three day gap before he reacts to it. Am I missing something?

I don't rate pastas. Either I like them or I don't. Unfortunately, I did not like this one.

Don't let this discourage you, but help you better your writing. Good luck.