Talk:Amy's Video/@comment-5733573-20180825111237

It's okay. It feels a bit rough, like a better-than-usual first draft, but a first draft nonetheless.

"I can’t tell you, dear reader, what unspeakable acts took place on camera, what atrocities were committed to film."

This basically translates to, "I was too lazy to write the part of the story you've been waiting for this whole time.  Psyche, suckers."

The idea's a bit compelling, but the lack of detail combined with a bizarre xenophobic bent (as if terrible stuff only comes from foreign countries) just make this a subpar story for me.