Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20141227231837/@comment-25769703-20141229024215

One factor, you forgot to mention was 'the fear factor.' I want you to read over your notes or whatever and if it scares you or a friend then you are on the right line. In my Pastas i usually have sleepless nights considering what i had written and weather or not it is suitable for the sight 'usually it is' unless it's a really graphic pasta.

You're setting is in a 'CAMP' be careful not to steal things from 'Jason' other then that it should do fine.

Good luck