Talk:Reflection with a Mind of Its Own/@comment-27129274-20151127190553

Woah, now I'm terrified of sleeping while facing a mirror - great job to the author!

10/10

Also, I did a bit of editing & added a small section to paragraph 4...

Paragraph 4: before & after

Before my edit: "You are frightened and paralyzed, oblivious to what happened."

After my edit: "You are frightened and become paralyzed with fear, totally oblivious to what happened."

Section change is in italics - not in the story, but in this very comment.