Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31532017-20161202075151/@comment-25947144-20161202151208

Well, the only grammatical issue I could find was in the very last line: "this person didn't even had (have) his pants or any underwear on."

Punctuation: I'm not sure if the semicolons you used are necessary.

Mechanical issues: Your use of of words like "till" or "dunno" makes it sound...awkward. Also, your phrasing seems a little odd to me here: "A gigantic catfish, well at first I thought the guys were pulling my leg again. Till I regrettably saw the front end of its tail; two legs were protruding from its wide gaping mouth."

I personally think it would sound better if it would be written like this: "A gigantic catfish. Well, at first I thought the guys were pulling my leg again until I regrettably saw the front end of its tail. Two legs were protruding from its wide gaping mouth."

Bit of advice: read the story out loud to see if it sounds natural. It helps a lot.

Overall, I'm not sure if it fits as a creepypasta as it seems to be more comedic than creepy. You may have to ask an admin if it works.