Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27905100-20160416233305

Hey, It's me, I've just wrote a short poetry pasta that has been (heavily) based off of the events of The Shining by Stephen King, but I've tried to remove all copyrighted material from it, as well as tried to make it flow as well as possible. Thanks for reviewing this, as it is quite short.

The Spirits They come To feed Off of some Of my thoughts

I try To resist, Ball my hands into fists, They come.

The hedges, The rooms, The priceless Heirlooms, They’re full of them

The spirits, They know That I have to grow, Before I fully understand

Lots of them Are coming They’re taking Over Dad, They all seem so real, It’s making me so sad.

The boiler Room is Getting hot, And Daddy’s Coming fast. Let’s hope that today isn’t Mine and mommy’s Last.

The snowmobile’s Driving away, We need to get out now. Mommy... and I Have survived, But I Don’t Know how.

Thanks -Derpyspaghetti. 