Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31919033-20170504210826/@comment-24982950-20170505160540

Take out the child-rape, if you want change the 'unbuttoned pants' to a 'removed belt' and remove the dad's moans but keep the kid's wails and that bit can become open to interpretation. Otherwise there are grammar errors but I do like how the Wii itself isn't cliche and evil, just brings up repressed memories.