Talk:Exhausted/@comment-Jay ten-20160814130755/@comment-Anarchic Operations-20160815125931

I did comment on this earlier but it appears that it never sent through...

Thank's for the review, and I'm glad you enjoyed this story alot more. Venomous was a little experimental for me, as I intentionally made it a little unnatural and disjointed in an effort to make the atmosphere a little more creepy. But nevertheless I still took your advice to heart and ensured that I corrected those mistakes in this story, I'm glad to hear that it paid off.

I'm sorry to hear you didn't like the ending as much as I hoped. If you could be a little more specific as to where it went wrong, I may be able to modify it before the story gets much more attention. I do want the ending to pay off, as previous endings in the drafts didn't really work out either.

Hope you get better soon! Having a sick mind is enough for you to deal with ;)

A_O.