Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25083225-20160414225804

So hey there! I realized I haven't written anything for almsot a year, and that makes me sad, especially considering that I've had far more experience with drawing, developing, and writing characters and backstories. I've been working on a story I call Cubism. I'm working on it right now, but I want to know whether what I have could make a good story or not.

The story is a first person narrative about the (Currently Unnamed) main character who finds himself in a dark, mazelike gallery. There he is greeted by an exhibit guide with the nametag "Emily Scopais" who introduces and explains a few of the many portraits on display, but after awhile the main character starts to notice a pattern and even a story in these pictures. The context given by the tour guide makes abouts the artists only add to the melancholic narrative that the art tells.

I've started the work from the middle, so I haven't really given time to characterize the protagonist, but that will come later. Give me your honest thoughts so far: