Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20160802003754/@comment-26444017-20160805185207

I think that the idea of expanding on starvation is definitely worth including. I'm glad you liked the alterations, and I will go ahead and fix those two grammar errors. I'm really glad you like it, and I think you'll like the other one I submitted. Similar idea, but taken a different direction. It's called I'm Sorry. I hpoe you like.