Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10789912-20151008060113/@comment-10789912-20151010024343

I changed some of the wording (revealing heights is no longer as formal and exact, and added some more fluent thoughts in his head).

Also, this has been added to the end of the prologue. I believe it shows more of all of their characters and personalities, solving that issue.

"Finally working up the guts to stop being a simple observer, Michael stood up, and walked over to Joshua, gripping his drink with both hands. When he got to him, Joshua didn't wait to try and get Michael hyper. Josh knew how he was, and he knew how to get him to let go and relax.

Throwing an arm over Michael's shoulder, he tilted Michael's beer into his mouth, pouring it in. Only when Michael went into a coughing fit did he stop and let it down.

Before Michael could say anything in anger, Josh began rocking back and forth, singing along with the song above.

"You're so fine, and you're mine, make me strong-"

He stopped and pointed towards Michael with his other hand, expecting him to continue.

"Don't act like you don't know the words, everyone does, no matter how embarassed you are!" Josh said.

"...yeah, you make me bold!" Michael threw out, in a small burst of courage.

"There you go!" Melody said, following it up with heavy laughter, as her face turned red.

Michael let go completely. He didn't think about his image, his looks, or any other issue. He was with his friends this night. No matter how much he preferred to keep to himself, and how uncomfortable gatherings like this made him, he was happy now.

The two continued the song, and laughed through the rest of the night. Vincent even had fun, picking song after song until it was time for them to leave and rest."