Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32802129-20190802094520/@comment-32802129-20190803030901

Dr Bob, thanks for taking the time to review my piece. I must admit the word use mistakes you pointed out are embarrassing, but that's the advantage of having a second set of eyes read it over!

I will redraft based on your suggestions. Bloodyspghetti, I appreciate the feedback. In my mind, the story was not about not remembering dreams, but about a very specific awareness of being in this "Nothing" when we sleep. Maybe I failed to articulate the concept clearly, I will bear this in mind when re writing.