Talk:You Will Be Mine/@comment-25975226-20150120072704/@comment-24040907-20150120234223

>Heavy Sigh< You’ve caught me. This is my first pasta. Do you see that idiot down there raving at the Administrator in the comments? That’s Baby Tyber. He’s such a loon. Come, we shall laugh at him together. Fortunately, I’m a lot smarter then I was back then. I like to think so, at least. It is really weird, to go around helping people with their grammar and then suddenly be told of a glaring error in your own works.



























Heheh. I’m kidding. That cartoon character above is me, or at least the way I draw myself.



<p class="MsoNormal">You know, I think that this story has something that none of my other stories have: good characters. In Protector, we get the protagonist, whom I love, but he’s just one guy. In this story, we get a whole cast of real, life-like characters that were fun to write, and even better to see in the complete story. I like the way they seem to be living their own lives, outside of the protagonist and his troubles.

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<p class="MsoNormal">I’m going to try to mimick this style in a pasta I plan on writing soon. I’m actually going to be posting a different one on Trollpasta this week, but that one only has one character in it! The narrator! Oh, what am I going to do?

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<p class="MsoNormal">Anyway, thanks so much for reviewing all of my stories. It’s cool to see your opinions fluctuate between stories, and I’m glad that your reception was overall positive. If you do post a new story to this site, let me know and I’ll review it right away : )

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<p class="MsoNormal">Have a good one!