Talk:Max and Ruby 0004/@comment-9871514-20131115111519

I feel like "you" react too much in this. It detracts from the creep factor. The parts about the realism of the sobbing are especially over-described. Sometimes, less is more when it comes to scary things. However, if it were cut down a bit and had a few of the clunkier transitions fixed (the double space between the family leaving and the parents going out for dinner really isn't enough), I'd say this is the framework of a better "Lost Episode" pasta than quite a few out there. Most elements aren't too overplayed (other than the aforementioned) and it doesn't rely on some animator or executive losing it. In fact, I enjoy the ambiguous nature of the DVD's arrival. Conclusion: Not bad, but could be better.