Talk:Sarah's Story/@comment-24196787-20151021175034/@comment-25148755-20151021200636

Wow, thanks so much for the in depth reviews both here and on Figure. You brought up some good questions and points so I'll try to take the time to address a few of them. First off, all of my stories are going to be connected (not just these two) so be sure to check out the others if you want more info. On to the comments:

I considered covering some of the 'intermission' period but it didn't pertain to the story I was trying to tell here. However, I am absolutely open to and considering exploring some of it in a future story (same goes for the blank spots in Morgan's history).

Regarding Lilith in this one, I didn't really consider her as the antagonist. Sure, she's the big bad behind the scenes evil, but in my mind the main bad guy here is Frank.

As for the black eyed children, remember this story takes place decades after Figure. If they aren't present, it begs the question "where are they?" Same with the fog, to a degree.

Thanks again for reading!