User talk:EmpyrealInvective/Archive 25

Thanks NukaColaMan (talk) 06:46, January 8, 2016 (UTC)

Andrew
So why was "Andrew" deleted? It seemed like a perfectly good story. Yeah, it probably wasn't the best out there, but I'm confused as to why it was deleted. Supersatan25 (talk) 04:34, January 9, 2016 (UTC)


 * Well, after somehow accidentaly deleting your message and replacing it with mine on my own page, I wrote this:

Alright, well I get the capitalization errors and the misplaced quotations but as far as the sentences, it was supposed to be spoken from the point of view of Andrew at those points. He's young mentally so he doesn't speak all that well, that's why it had the short sentances. Well, I take that back. He's writing, not speaking, but it still is supposed to show at least his mental age.

Thank you though

Supersatan25 (talk) 05:01, January 9, 2016 (UTC)

RE: notice
I was only deleting a message I ment to send to you and not myself. Having my own message to someone else, on my page isn't needed.

Supersatan25 (talk) 05:11, January 9, 2016 (UTC)

I would like to know why you deleted my pasta. I can understand if it is cliched as i have only seen the cliche list once. But if this is not the reason, I'd like to know.

HRAF (talk) 19:37, January 9, 2016 (UTC)

Formatting issues
Can you give me a hand? Every time I go to edit Daddy's Little Princess it does this maddeningly irritating thing where it removes all the line breaks. I can see that it's going to do it because there's no spaces between paragraphs in source, then, when I hit preview, sure as shit, it's just one big block of words. I've had this happen before and just came back later and the was no issue, but I've been trying for hours now and it's pissing me off to no end! Ack! Any suggestions, bro? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:23, January 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * COWabunga, dude. Thanks for trying to STEER me in the right direction, with Dupins help I was able to MOOve some words around. I hate to be ClOWning around so much, but did you hear about the weather in Mexico? Chili today, hot tomale. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:51, January 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * Well played, sir. I am no matador and don't wish to wave a red flag, so I will leave the bull in your ring. HuanmboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:00, January 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * Oh snap! Get out the grill because Emp is on fire! Maybe we can meat later and have a few beers and burgers. They say meat is murder, but it's really nowhere near as fun. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:08, January 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * Dairy: milking it for all it's worth I see. This is leaving me udderly exhausted. If I curd find a whey out I'd take it, I'm not acheesing much here. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:22, January 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * Sir Loin, Holy Cow? My God, man, what are you on and where can I get some? You are a cut above the rest.  You are like a stampede, you've butchered me with your prime cuts. My hide is certainly raw, yes, a raw, raw hide. Move 'em up, head 'em out, I'm going to get my doggies rolling as I see no victory in sight here, home on the range (the range top where I'm grilling up some t-bones). HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:38, January 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * I concede, you've slaughtered me most unmercilessly. Take me to the market and make soup from my bones. Just remember that no man is a ribeyeland :noose: :gun: :bloodwhistle: HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:54, January 11, 2016 (UTC)

I beg your pardon, an aneurysm? I believe you  meant to say an angusism. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:51, January 11, 2016 (UTC)

Sand Dune Incident
Hi,

You deleted my piece "The Sand Dune Incident" - I'd be grateful for a little more explanation on why you didn't like it. It had been up for several years and never got any negative criticism. I'd hate to be misusing the site in some way without even realising it.

Many thanks ForgotMyUsername (talk) 20:10, January 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * And thanks for deleting my double post - bad internet connection, sorry! ForgotMyUsername (talk) 20:20, January 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your quick response. ForgotMyUsername (talk) 20:37, January 11, 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I am confused as too why you deleted my story "The Virus". My best guess is that it was technically about a haunted computer file. It was not. The story was about a design flaw that made it exit the computer and kill. I will edit and attempt to repost unless you object. Thank you! Meowhead9 (talk) 00:57, January 12, 2016 (UTC)Meowhead9

Why not re-review my story?
Hey, why not come back to re-review my story like I asked? It seems like you have the time, and I've made a good amount of changes since your original reading. I'd very much like feedback, which I am sparsely getting.

Here's a link for your convenience: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:519002  ColorlessAngelz (talk) 09:01, January 12, 2016 (UTC)

Hey i'm new here and plan to make more pastas. I was just wondering why my story "The spirite in the cellar" was deleated. I'm always up for criticism and would like to improve my overall quality J.C.Hinds (talk) 22:00, January 12, 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for replying quickly. This story was a test story so i could understand the site and get some feedback from my friends. If i did heavy edits exspanding and changeing the story drasaclly would that follow the rules of the site? J.C.Hinds (talk) 22:22, January 12, 2016 (UTC)

Document Zero: The Classifieds
Well good evening!,

I'm confused as to why my story submission, "Document Zero: The Classifieds" was deleted. It seemed decently solid aside from it being a wall of text. Please let me know what I can do to change it and get it back out there to share with the rest of the creepypasta loving community!

-- Api3ceofTo4st

03:18, January 13, 2016 (UTC)

I apoligize for reposting my story I was unaware that was a problem. I though you were aloud to re edit and post. However I have re edited it and feel it is of a standard to be published,J.C.Hinds (talk) 03:42, January 13, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry I am confussed I tried to write an appeal but i didn't know where to write it and I think I did what I did accidentlly. To that I apoligize. I am new here also I tried to use the workshop but it didn;t let me post J.C.Hinds (talk) 04:08, January 13, 2016 (UTC)

User Page Story
I believe posted a story on their profile. MrDupin (talk) 15:54, January 13, 2016 (UTC)

Hello. I remember my creepypasta was deleted since it wasn't done. I wanted to know is there a way to save a pasta without uploading? It would be helpful. And I ran out of time, and needed to go to bed. Sorry I didn't meet the standards (again) so can you help me with this? Thanks. BonnieFan (talk) 23:46, January 13, 2016 (UTC)

BloodOrgy666.com
It looks classier like that, right? Without that YouTube link there? You can still access the video through the website.

What did you think of that video by the way? I shot it in my barn, draped everything in black plastic, sprayed fake blood everywhere. The next day some hippy kid showed up. "Clean up the barn," I told him, "and don't ask any questions." Ha ha. True fucking story.HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:57, January 14, 2016 (UTC)


 * I know you were hoping for a nipple. Do you think I should put any kind of disclaimer or anything on it? Saying it's just for novelty purposes? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 05:08, January 14, 2016 (UTC)

Don't tell anybody, but we like to get fucked up and do fucked up things.

The Little Man
Hi,

Can you tell me why my story "The Little Man" was deleted? 

JobyD2000 (talk) 01:24, January 15, 2016 (UTC)JobyD2000

Howdy
You seem to be the most recently active admin, so I'll report my minor grammar pickiness of the site policies to you for the moment. The policy page (site rules hub): "Welcome! To the Site Rules Hub (insert username here somehow)!"

I know there's a line break, but "to" doesn't need capitalized, "Welcome" doesn't need an exclamation point, and there should be a comma after "hub." Not an emergency, but figured I'd let someone know since the policy pages (I'd imagine for obvious reasons) are locked from editing. Bandit King Jack (talk) 00:08, January 16, 2016 (UTC)

Thanks. I'll try my best. Bandit King Jack (talk) 00:20, January 16, 2016 (UTC)

Hello. I am Randy McMillian and I would like to apologize for reuploading my story "Struggle" on January 14, 2016. My internet connection is not very good at the moment, so I thought the the story had simply not been posted due to a connection problem. I hope that this incident has not negatively impacted the admins' impression of me.

Also, I am currently working on a reworked version of my story and will apply for an appeal when it finished.

--RandyMcMillian (talk) 03:42, January 16, 2016 (UTC) RandyMcMillian

Thank you for your understanding, and I will most definitely take it to writer's workshop.

--RandyMcMillian (talk) 03:50, January 16, 2016 (UTC) RandyMcMillian

Insanity's Requiem
Why was "Insanity's Requiem" Deleated? Everything seemed to be in order when I looked it over prior to posting. Did I miss something?

Mister Nightshade (talk) 04:00, January 16, 2016 (UTC) Mister Nightshade

Hey, so it's great to be on here finally. So my creepypasta I hope you will like, cause I put a lot of effort to get it finished. If u don't put it on the wiki, I would understand.

Thanks, DarkestNight1

I can now delete comments
Hi Empyre. I wanted to let you know that the rights to delete/edit comments were given to me from the great beyond. Was that intentional, or did something break? MrDupin (talk) 22:24, January 16, 2016 (UTC)


 * This was added to forum moderators in the latest Wikia update. You can find more about it by visiting Community Central.


 * ᐃᓐᓂᕈᖅᑐᖅ 22:32, January 16, 2016 (UTC)


 * Got it, thanks. MrDupin (talk) 23:06, January 16, 2016 (UTC)

Writing Advice
Is that writing advice blog page an admin-only thing? I'm asking because I'm thinking on taking a crack at it myself, if that's alright. Bandit King Jack (talk) 00:16, January 17, 2016 (UTC)

Ah, I got you. I'll write something up when I've got the chance. Bandit King Jack (talk) 00:23, January 17, 2016 (UTC)

Mwah ha ha
So...much...POWER!!! I'll try to handle it responsibly. Is there any particular criteria for what warrants deleting a comment? Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 01:50, January 17, 2016 (UTC)

The Hunter's Handbook
Why did you delete my page "The Hunter's Handbook"?

Digitama (talk) 18:14, January 17, 2016 (UTC)

I have read the guidelines on the wiki, and yet I have no Idea on why "The Social Outcasts" was deleted, I would just like a simple explanation, as I put time, effort, and a small amount of research into it. Shmeklemykekle (talk) 08:37, January 18, 2016 (UTC)Shmeklemykekle

I checked the removal reasons, yet, I still don't understand why my story, "The Social Outcasts" was removedShmeklemykekle (talk) 08:56, January 18, 2016 (UTC)

a recent post....
Hi, i just posted a story and it didnt meet quality standards, so i checked out the link and i didnt find any problems in my story, if you could please let me know what to do to fix this problem, i would appreciate it.

FNAFFANF (talk) 09:21, January 18, 2016 (UTC)FNAFFANF

I've only uploaded two stories and you've deleted them both in less then 5 hours of posting when all i aske for was a chance for people to read them and for criticisms? Why do you not listen to my wishes and give them a chance to be read? I'm not angry. I'm just sad that they get deleted so fast. I'm a new writer and i'm sad about this. What about my stories is so bad in your eyes? Ruby-Alphastar (talk) 03:44, January 30, 2016 (UTC)Ruby-Alphastar

thank you.
Ok, i'll get back to work on it. I've always had a problem with run on sentences. thanks for the feedback, and i noticed that i'd be banned if tried to reupload the post, so if i were to revise it then how would i republish the revised version?

one last question
OK, and how do I publish work to the workshop? And do you have any tips to indicate pauses in dialogue?

FNAFFANF (talk) 09:50, January 18, 2016 (UTC)FNAFFANF

night
Alright, thank you for all your help and have a good one. FNAFFANF (talk) 10:02, January 18, 2016 (UTC)FNAFFANF

Hi, may I ask why my story Stress Toy (http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Stress_Toy) was just deleted? I've read the quality standards a few times now, and I thought I'd met all of them. Could I have some advice on improving my story?Tiponi (talk) 17:34, January 18, 2016 (UTC)

Hi, it's Tiponi again. Sorry, I'm not really sure how this wiki works yet (or any wiki, for that matter,) so I'm sorry if this wasn't the right place to post this.

I just wanted to apologize, regarding your reply to my last message. If I did what you described, re-posting a story with minimal constructive changes, than I am sorry for wasting your time and I'll try harder in the future.Tiponi (talk) 23:14, January 18, 2016 (UTC)

Hey.I noticed that you deleted my story "I Thought I Heard Something".Although i'm sure that you did so for perfectly reasonable,and valid reasons,I just wish to be informed on the specific reasons as to better improve the uqality of my stories.I'm fairly new to this ite and learning quite a lot each time I visit.I apreciate your criticism, as it will imrpove me as a writer.Keep doing what you're doing.Thanks.

Sincerely,DrMafia

Thanks
I just wanted to say thanks for reverting the edits made to my story, "The Melon Head Illustration". I think Eureka2000 meant well, but what Insane Genius did was completely nonsensical and uncalled for. I think the admins should keep an eye on Insane Genius and LMTyo13. Why LMTyo13? If you look at I.G.'s talk page, there's a message from LMT saying, "Hello! Thks for your edit- makes the pasta more understandable in my opinon". Yeah. /:-\ Raidra (talk) 13:48, January 19, 2016 (UTC)
 * It was LMTyo13 who left the note of praise on Insane Genius's talk page; Eureka2000 was the one who added the "Places" category to my story. I can understand why he or she added that category, but yeah, it's not a great fit.  I found that LMTyo13's talk page has a note from SoPretentious warning about needlessly changing wording in pastas, which makes me wonder.  In any case, I appreciate you and the other admins- the first line of defense against really bad edits! :-) Raidra (talk) 00:06, January 20, 2016 (UTC)
 * Will do! Raidra (talk) 00:17, January 20, 2016 (UTC)

hi bb jw why this was deleted http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Pain_the_Reaper wrote it back in 2013, haven't been on this site in over a year, not sure if anyone remembers me. old chat-goer. just came back to check on it because a friend asked to read it, saw it was RIP. ty in advance -- Necrai 06:40, January 20, 2016 (UTC)

Story
Yep, I completely understand. Thanks again, haha. Been 3 years since I wrote this, I've actually improved a lot since then. I might improvise it, not sure though. Anyway, I'm off for another year. -- Necrai 07:16, January 20, 2016 (UTC)

Vandalizer
vandalized a page (link) and created a spam page (Funny bone). MrDupin (talk) 14:52, January 20, 2016 (UTC)


 * Done.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 16:21, January 20, 2016 (UTC)

Creepypasta "wall of text" help!
I am new to posting on this website and don't really know how to get my pasta to meet the quality standards. That was my first real pasta and it was deleted instantly. I know that it shouldn't be a big wall of text and that might be why it was deleted, but I do not really know how to fix this. I am not writing an appeal to get the pasta unbanned, I just want to know how to fix this in the future. Thanks!

--https&#58;//www.youtube.com/user/KnotSnappy (talk) 18:31, January 20, 2016 (UTC)

Creepypasta "wall of text" help!
Thanks for the feedback!

--https&#58;//www.youtube.com/user/KnotSnappy (talk) 19:21, January 20, 2016 (UTC)

Puppetry
Hi Empry, My story "Puppetry" was recently deleted for not meeting quality standards, and I after reading over the deletion guide, I am still not sure why. I didn't get a chance to look at the page before it was deleted, so if it was a formatting error, I apologize, this is my first time using a wiki. If the issue was with the story itself, could I trouble you for an explanation of what was wrong? Thank you in advance :)

Intestinal-parasit3 (talk) 00:58, January 21, 2016 (UTC)

Unbelievable
Dang, I thought that one would work, I previewed it heavily and ran it thru a spell checker... Sorry for bothering you much, but could I know what I did wrong this time? Sorry, for wasting so much of your time again... Intestinal-parasit3 (talk) 01:50, January 21, 2016 (UTC)

Thanks
Thank you for the feedback on my two stories, since I can't edit my talk page, is their a way I can just delete my account along with it? Having two deleted stories is kinda embarrassing, and I use this username on a lot of sites. If you can't help with that, sorry for bothering you.

Intestinal-parasit3 (talk) 02:20, January 21, 2016 (UTC)

Ugh...Dude
PLEASE change your fucking profile pic on here. It looks so bad. And totally unbecoming of a person of your stature (I mean it, Travis). Ugh. Anyway... XD

Mystreve (talk) 03:39, January 21, 2016 (UTC)
 * Ha. Good. You're paying attention. And I wasn't banned for poking a b-crat in the shoulder.
 * Mystreve (talk) 03:59, January 21, 2016 (UTC)
 * You really think I'd exploit personal fears to a gifted horror-writer/head-honcho of a worldwide horror-story site?


 * Well..maybe. Got a couple bucks?
 * Mystreve (talk) 04:09, January 21, 2016 (UTC)

Ban?
Used my new powers to delete a troll comment from user Marc2427. Based on his talk page it looks like he's been warned against trolling before. Not sure if it warrants a ban or not. Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 13:46, January 21, 2016 (UTC)

Apology and Questions
I apologize for having constantly changed my status everytime I judged a story. Can I do it everytime I judge 25 stories for example. 25-50-75-100-125-150. Please tell me if you would prefer it being counted by another number. I am also sorry I did not see your previous warnings. Maybe I was careless. Also could you please tell me why someone left me this message. Stop, why do you commit these crimes. Are they talking about me having constantly changed my status everytime I judged a story. Basically, I am asking if you could specify which crimes they are talking about. တရားသူကြီးကို တစ်ဖက်သတ်အစွဲ (talk) 20:11, January 21, 2016 (UTC)

တရားသူကြီးကို တစ်ဖက်သတ်အစွဲ (talk) 21:42, January 21, 2016 (UTC)

Thank You
တရားသူကြီးကို တစ်ဖက်သတ်အစွဲ (talk) 21:53, January 21, 2016 (UTC)Thank for explaining what she meant. The reason I did not notice your post was because it was inside a previous message leavers heading. I assumed that each time a new post is adderd a new heading would appear. Which I found out myself after trying to send you a message and it being added to another person question. I did not realize that you have to put a heading in manually and that it is not done automatically. Next time I look in the previous headings. Also I was wondering what does this mean. (+689)‎ "in green" What does that number mean

DMCA
You may have seen the recent deletion by Brandon Rhea of a file due to a DMCA request.

The file in question was uploaded by Jabronis and was used in the Creepy Images/Page 8 gallery. The file in question that was removed can be found at the copyright holder's Flickr.

I have also sent an email to the photographer of the image asking if there is a way that we will allow the use of their photo on the wiki once more.

ᐃᓐᓂᕈᖅᑐᖅ 16:30, January 22, 2016 (UTC)


 * The email has already been sent so there is really nothing left to do but wait. Perhaps they'll allow the use of the file provided that the photographer is actually attributed as opposed to a blank file page.


 * Who knows though, a 50/50 chance at least.


 * P.S. If you leave a reply to a message could you please use the header Re: DMCA instead of just Re:. I ask this so that when I scroll through the ToC I can get a sense of what a thread is about.


 * ᐃᓐᓂᕈᖅᑐᖅ 17:46, January 22, 2016 (UTC)


 * [[File:Implied_facepalm.png]]


 * Jay Ten (talk) 19:48, January 22, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry for bothering you, minor question
Every Story I Critique I follow to keep count and to keep up to date. Why do some turn red saying page does not exist. Were they delted by the user or because they were not original material or something by the Admins or people in charge? I know probably a stupid question. Curiosity killed the cat. Stupidity has killed hundrends. If I annoyed you, I apolgize.

တရားသူကြီးကို တစ်ဖက်သတ်အစွဲ (talk) 23:04, January 22, 2016 (UTC)

Question
Do you at all have an issue with me asking that you use more detailed headers when replying to messages using my talk page?

If so then I would like to apologize for demanding rather than asking at first even though I did not intend to demand that you do anything. If you would rather just leave a generic "Re:" for whatever reason then that's fine and I'll flesh it out on my own time.

On another note, can you intervene on my talk page as at this point I feel that the discussion is going nowhere and is just going to dissolve into more bickering and arguing from both sides.

Thank you.

ᐃᓐᓂᕈᖅᑐᖅ 16:12, January 23, 2016 (UTC)


 * I did not mean for you to add a new header per reply but one per thread. Instead of just leaving "Re:" you'd leave "Re: DMCA" and all replies to "DMCA" thread on your talk page would be put under the "Re: DMCA" header on my talk page. This way if someone is tracing the replies you left to the DMCA header on my talk page it would become very apparent as to where they are.


 * ᐃᓐᓂᕈᖅᑐᖅ 16:47, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

This is too complicated... ugh... how do I use forum edits?... or whatever u said...

Billy cougar (talk) 21:54, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

Hard ASS FUCK! But I'll try to make it dat way. I'm just not used 2 this shit, mang. Sorry.

Billy cougar (talk) 21:59, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

So I suppose my story "Within me" was using a cliche? (You could at least leave messages telling people WHY you delete their stories.) I would provide a link, if I knew whether, and if so where, deleted pastas can be looked up. Missy went Missing (talk) 22:00, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

It pains my heart to see that the wiki . ..
. . . has lost a great work of art and one of the most disturbing and profound love stories ever written. Oh, well, nothing lasts forever. : (

On a lighter note: congratulations on completing your novella manuscript! Knowing your quality standards it must be quite polished. Are you still in the qurery stage or have you found representation? If you would like to do a beta reading trade of query letters I'd gladly take a look at yours. I've been revising my query forever. I've workshopped it twice and am still not happy with it. My manuscript is still not completely polished (after two years of work), but I am rewriting and revising as we speak and hope to have it done within the month. I've got an agent who wants to give it a read as well as the independent bizarro publishing house Broken River Books. I'm also going to take it to the San Francisco Writer's Conference in February and shop the hell out of it. Honestly, I just want it finished so I can put it behind me and move on to a different project.

Best of luck, brother. I am very excited for you. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 17:19, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, I think the brick with a synopsis wrapped around it is the most imagainative and perhaps the most effective form of querying I've ever heard. You always dazzle me with your keen insights. I was also thinking of coating the letter with some sort of mind altering drug. Hey, man, just to give you a heads up,  I'm taking a class on writing violence with splatter punk pioneer John Skip. He's a best selling horror author. I went and took the initiative to ask him if he'd let me interview him for the Writer's Lounge. Sound good? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 18:58, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

thanks
I really don't know how I keep forgetting to put the author template on posted cp's. -_- BedrockPerson :D  18:36, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry to get in the conversation!
Hey, I see you have contacted publishers. Is it a book what you're trying to publish? If so, then I recommend you go for an agent instead of directly to the publishers. An agent can already get in with the publishers, while the writers have a bit of difficulty on that.

It's worth a try! Of course, be wary of anyone who asks for upfront payments. Agents tend to get their pay according to the money you earn, as far as I know.

So yep! --&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 19:42, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

Um, I remind you again to be suspicious of any agent who asks for payment as soon as when you meet them. Getting your file read should cost nothing at all, but of course for that to happen you need to give a good speech to convince the agent to give your work a try. --&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 21:37, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

^^ Just to reiterate what Nick is saying, you don't pay an agent, they just get a percentage of your profits and querying them is free. If you can land one, not only will they broker deals with book publishers, they will also work to sell your short stories and articles. I've taken several classes on query letters with actual literary agents, so if you want any advice or for me to give your query a beta reading, just let me know. You can always email me at humboldtlycanthrope at gmail dot com.

I couldn't help notice you tried to self-publish with Amazon and it didn't work out. How did they know you had your novela on the wiki? Did you tell them? So weird that Leo was for sale on Amazon and up for PotM at the same time. Do you think they knew about that? What was the process like? (sorry, I've got lots of questions about self-publishing, it may be something I finally resort to, the market is so competitive) Thanks. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 00:17, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

What is the difference between a ban and a block?

♥Rhettski-spooker (talk)Rhett

hi umm i think something ain't right because i think i follow the rules now so i don't know why you closed my discussion story, can you reopen it please.

John Skip Interview
He said yes to the interview. The class ends in two days and for once in my life my big mouth is at a loss for words. Got any suggestions for questions I should ask him? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 00:57, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, good ideas. I was going to approach it from the angle that the site is full of aspiring horror writers, and since he teaches now to try and get his advice. At the risk of tooting my own horn, for what it's worth, this is what he said about the story I wrote: "this one's OVER THE FENCE, AND OUTTA THE PARK! You can pull up a hammock and enjoy the frosty cold beverage of your choice. That was a fucking home run, man," which really made my day. :) HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:20, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

I contredict my story its perfect so no its not poor its  not so  why do you still believe its poor its not not not not dshould i write thhat too manny time.

Category Question
Hello, Empyre!

In the rules it states that Demon/Devil, Monster, Ghost, etc. are mutually exclusive. However, I posted a story in which there was a Minotaur and the Devil (both are prominent through out), so would I be able to use the monster category as well or should I just stick with the Demon/Devil category? I am assuming that the rule meant that a single creature can only have one of those categories defining it, but I thought I'd ask to be sure. Buckle up  I'm going to be popular  04:48, January 27, 2016 (UTC)


 * Cool, thanks! I'll try to mention it in the edit history and see if that helps. Buckle up   I'm going to be popular  04:52, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re:Bump
As for the as-of-late editing, I was trying to respond to a comment and I thought I could cheat the 30-day archive system by disabling & re-enabling comments or editing. I wasn't actually trying to bump, but whatever. BedrockPerson :D 12:41, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

I'm Out
Sorry, my friend. I was really having a hard time letting go of the issue with Mike, and when I saw Skelly giving kudos to his whiny shit, I realized this just isn't the place for me. Sorry I couldn't give more notice.

Jay Ten (talk) 14:40, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

What exactly did I do wrong for the laststall knocker to be deleted? Thanks.

NicholasGryczewski (talk) 18:03, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Antonio's Affair
This isn't so much a deletion appeal as I get that it didn't meet quality standards. I'm just completely fried trying to figure out what specific quality standard(s) I didn't meet so I can continue the Dorm 14-A series without this continuing to be a problem. I know that I tried once with another pasta that was a bit cliche as a fourth wall breaker so I won't be doing that again, but after a year of racking my brain for a way to continue the story, Antonio's Affair was what I came up with. Do you suggest sticking with that route and trying to meet whatever quality standards I missed or changing the direction? Nyxson (talk) 10:14, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

Um, hey.

As you know (or might not, since you're an admin and probably is very busy lol) you put my pasta The Ghost With Red Pupils marked for review. With the reason of 'A large number of coding (view in editor mode for examples), punctuation, capitalization, wording, and story issues.' Anyway, there's a slight problem that English happens to be my second language. Sooo I kind of have some trouble spotting and correcting some grammar mistakes :/

Mikemacdee suggested I left this message asking for you to remove the 'marked for review' tag so readers can help me fix the mistakes (http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:523105#4) since as I said, I might be unable to do so.

About the story issues, he gave me a few suggestions that I will use when editing. I'm a bit busy today though, but I guarantee an edit by tomorrow night (about 24 hours from the time I finish this message).

Could you do that for me, please?

Thanks a lot!

Oops, forgot to leave my signature on my last message.

Unholy Lord (talk) 10:26, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

Excuse me, Admin? Is it OK if I post a character bio in a blog post. If not, is there anywhere on this wiki besides the off-topic section where I can post it? Thanks.

Creeper50 (talk) 18:51, January 28, 2016 (UTC)Creeper50

Thanks for letting me know why my story was deleted.Keep doing what you're doing.Anyways,have a nice day.

DrMafia (talk) 19:35, January 28, 2016 (UTC)Dr.MafiaDrMafia (talk) 19:35, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry
Was there something wrong with my creepypasta? Can you explain what I did wrong? Crying Nate (talk) 01:50, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

reasons for deleting story
ok so tell me why it was deleted and how  do i mak e it better Stan &#39;psyco&#39; cooper (talk) 07:25, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

RE: story
have you ever read the murder of roger ackroyd. how was that story published. this is a question of style. so i suggest you handing it over to a another admin before making decisions.

Stan &#39;psyco&#39; cooper (talk) 08:23, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Hello

I'm wondering if theres anyone i can use to check a sory i wrote and becasue your an admin i though you might know everyone who uses this website. If not i can just get some friends to check it for me.

Thanks

Phil Raptor

RE: just read
Look buddy, any punctuation errors in the story is because of your site. i frankly do not have the time to sit and edit once more on your editor and check whether any punctuations have dissapeared or not. i know this because my dad is an experienced writer and has won many competitions. infact he owns a creative arts company and is the head writer. so as a request i ask you to check your site cause my dad does not miss punctuations.

Stan &#39;psyco&#39; cooper (talk) 09:05, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Writer Workshop Mandatory
I think you should make the writer's workshop mandatroy and then give admin approval for when someone can contribute a story. I think this would cut a lot of clutter and make more sense. It would also make it more clear on when a pasta is safe to submit or not. I think they all need to go through the "filtering" process until it's a pure piece of literature. I like the policies and the quality standards, I feel it helps people become better writers.

It would be cool if all pastas were to go to the workshop first and then when an admin gives an approval, you can post it. That would be cool. I like that idea.

♥ ♥ 18:45, January 29, 2016 (UTC)Rhettski-Spooker 18:44, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

♥ 19:01, January 29, 2016 (UTC)Rhettski-spooker

Thats unfortunate that you can't force it. Really, it does seem mandatory. I also know from reading on another page that if you attempt to post the same pasta again, if puts you on grounds for a ban. What if it's edited? It says that you need admin approval. It kind of feels, though, that this site had a rough mechanic like other creepypasta sites do, where it's supposed to show you the rules of the site at sign in and then when you create a pasta, it automatically gets sent to reviews first - And will be posted later if the reviews on it go well.

Only on this site, it seems instead of coding the site to do what the rules need, (since it's a wikia) you've instead instated rules for users to follow and do this instead. (And I actually like this, it's a more social approach and I think it's more constructive.)

♥ 19:01, January 29, 2016 (UTC)Rhettski-spooker

Well... I appreciate what you guys do, because I do see what others do. Like the guy that commented that i'm wierd, for example. And I've watched how people act on other sites. They genuinely don't care about quality, and they cause a lot of trouble. I've downloaded the wikia app and I know what other wikia apps and sites i've visited have a really professional quality, like when I was playing Skyrim and I needed some playthrough advice when i'd call uncle and give in to a few things. It didn't look tacky. ''At all. ''And that's pretty cool. So... Whenever I post, my own personal rule of thumb, I'm putting it in the workshop first. The creepypasta.org site that I found does that- It has to be reviewed first before it's even posted. I have no idea what they do after that, but thet would be a lot of work for people doing site maintenence.

My signature is all goofed up. i don't know why it doesn't look normal anymore. Sorry for that.

♥ 19:17, January 29, 2016 (UTC)Rhettski-spooker

There we go, I fixed it. It was because I had a heart stamp ♥ as a default signature in my own defaut preferences. It was throwing the code off. I could probably do the four tildes as a default instead, maybe.

I'll try to put more effort into the writers workshop. As a guy having an art background, I leanred that it's really good to pay attention to everyone's work. And also, I am able to take critiques and such very well. Art and design can be really redundant. You draw and draw and draw and draw until the clinet is satisfied with something you put out. It can get maddening. The site http://chrisoatley.com/ is one that I joined for his magic box program and he has a similar forum that's full of critique and help and such. I'm familiar with the environment and such.

Rhettski-spooker (talk) 19:52, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

I don't see an issue with a story being a big wall of text filled with grammatical errors when it's written that way to give the story more realism. My story is supposed to be written from the point of view of a disgruntled man who is venting his frustration and asking for help on a Yahoo Answers page, so I don't see why he would take the time to make sure that every single bit of text in his inquiry would be grammatically correct. I'm going to re-upload my pasta because I feel like it's written just well enough to be easily read and understood, so there should not be an issue. If you could not delete my stories in the future, that would be much appreciated.

Gabesenberg (talk) 20:50, January 29, 2016 (UTC) Gabesenberg

Hey good buddy, saw this one thought you might like it
Old Man Dracula forgot to put his teeth in one night, and so had to come home hungry, with a sort of "nothing dentured, nothing veined" look on his face.

Ha ha. I give it an 8.5 on the pun scale.

Looking for something to read? Check this out: Tall Girl a wry tale of ventured love and compromises, by yours truly. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 00:59, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

Congratulations, Don Carleone! That's great and I'm sure you will be a really fun godfather. Tell that baby that Humboldt says you are a lucky kid. That little one is going to be hearing a lot of jokes growing up. Did you have to renounce satan? I'm sure you had your fingers crossed. I hate to make a mountain out of a molar hill, but I loved your toothiness. You're a tusk cookie. Fangs for that. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:54, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

They Can See You deletion


Good day, my fine sir (or madam). I have noticed that you have deleted my creepypasta called They Can See You and was wondering what were the issues in the pasta that have led to such a decision and how can I fix them. Any input would be more than useful. Thank you in advance for the response.

Sincerely Jonathan DeLacuso (talk) 11:07, January 30, 2016 (UTC)Jonathan DeLacuso

Thank you for the response
I thank you so much for your detailed analysis. Some of the issues happened because I was rushing a bit through a story (an issue I seem to have far too often), so I will attempt to retouch the ones you pointed out and repos. on a sidenote, do you, by chance, know where I can find the original pasta and redo it?

Sincerely Jonathan DeLacuso (talk) 19:52, January 30, 2016 (UTC)Jonathan DeLacuso

Once again, I am very thankful for your quick response. I have seen the mistakes and have fixed the spelling errors (for now), but I still have a way to go before I can get it out there. Once again, thank you for the help. This deletion seems to be the best that could happen for this story and I couldn't be more grateful for it.

P.S. Is there a way I can submit this story (like in a GDoc file or something akin to it) without posting it directly to the wiki?

Sincerely , Jonathan DeLacuso (talk) 23:05, January 30, 2016 (UTC)Jonathan DeLacuso

Alright, I'll fix it up and send to the Deletion Appeal for approval. You have been most helpful and I am sorry if I had bothered you too much with these constant question.

Sincerely Jonathan DeLacuso (talk) 23:29, January 30, 2016 (UTC)Jonathan DeLacuso

Quick question: Is there any other thread I can post my revised story to for some feedback? I added the They can see you like a few days ago to Writer's Workshop and had no comments thus far. I know this might be my paranoia talking but I am just wondering if there are any other threads (or groups) to have my story reviewed. Thank you in advance.

Sincerely Jonathan DeLacuso (talk) 14:35, February 4, 2016 (UTC)Jonatha DeLacuso

It helps a lot actually, thanks. You have been very thoughtful and helpful during this process. Again, sorry for bothering you, it's just tht this is the first time I got my story deleted and I wanted to take this to learn how to minimilaze my chances of it happening again. i wish you nothing but the best in life and I thank you from the bottom of my heart.

SincerelyJonathan DeLacuso (talk) 21:23, February 4, 2016 (UTC)Jonathan DeLacuso

Categories
Sorry about the categories violation. That wasn't intentional. I'll take a look at the rules. I'll fix it asap.

User:DarthWeezer1994 20:13, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

Ok thank you, that makes perfect sense. I was focusing more on the "woman" so thats why I put "Beings". But I see the rules about those categories be exclusive. Thanks for fix.

User:DarthWeezer1994 20:18, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

Weird Question
If someone leaves an unmarked post on my talk page is there any way to know who they are. Don't need any stalkers. If this is a stupid question I apoligize.

Thanks Again.

တရားသူကြီးကို တစ်ဖက်သတ်အစွဲ (talk) 00:31, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Why did you delete Graham's Journal.................?

Please explain why you deleted my pasta, The Wolf People CreepyJon (talk) 04:33, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

You don't have to reply. But I wanted to know why my story Anonymous was deleted. If for grammar please tell me where I messed up, if for for quality tell me what parts made you want to cringe etc. Natural gta hunter (talk) 06:58, January 31, 2016 (UTC)Doge "I Really F***ing Want To Change My Name To This" Vader

Well I am just being honest. What are these 'quality standards' and why are partas that are about the same quality as mine are up while mine get deleted? I mean it's like nobody can upload anything because as soon as you do

EMPYREALINVECTIVE HAS DELETED YOUR STORY

Every time.

Can we at least have a chance to put our stories on the website rather than writers workshop?

Treecko666 (talk) 18:23, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

I have managed to do the alteration you have suggested
I am off to post it in the deletion approval. I have to say that I did a few modifications and I think it should be better now. Fingers crossed.

SincerelyJonathan DeLacuso (talk) 18:43, January 31, 2016 (UTC)Jonathan DeLacuso

Alright, i'll post it to writer's workshop and see what happens. Thanks once again. You have been most helpful in this time.

Sincerely Jonathan DeLacuso (talk) 19:00, January 31, 2016 (UTC)Jonathan DeLacuso

May I please know why you deleted my story?

ER111303 (talk) 16:41, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry to keep bothering you, but I would be interested if you believe that I could be able to turn a generic idea into a good story? Something similar to Lost Episodes? ER111303 (talk) 17:05, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

My story was deleted
My story titled Midnight Chase was deleted. The reason being because of "quality standards". Can you please be more specific on what was wrong with it. CreepyCloset (talk) 22:56, February 1, 2016 (UTC) CreepyCloset

Zog reply
I see. Thanks for clearing that up now you mention it that's sort of a cool template. It was just confusing to be seeing my name on his page, I generally try to avoid trouble on here.

User:DarthWeezer1994 05:24, February 2, 2016 (UTC

A Simple Thank You
Thanks for the tip. I'll check out the Workshop.

Honestly, I've been writing for about 6 years, but that was my first horror attempt, so I didn't know what to expect.

Enjoy your pasta! -Sam (talk) 18:27, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

Hey!

Look, you said you'll delete The Ghost With Red Pupils tomorrow if it isn't brought up to the quality standards.

I'm currently having some internet issues, but I am already working on a new ending. If I don't get to post it by tomorrow (like I said, internet issues), can you please extend the limit time a bit? Not much, just a few days to get to post it.

Thanks a lot! (Btw, can you give a review on the current story after people have edited it, and whether it's close to the quality standards? And if not, what can I do besides the ending to bring it up?)

Unholy Lord (talk) 00:54, February 4, 2016 (UTC)

Hello. So after getting a three day ban I decided to look back at my original pasta Evolve. I have edited it, and I've now realize that my story was a hot pile of trash. The reason I'm sending this message is becuase I'm wondering if I can resubmit my story. Thank you and have a good night.

Yeah, the 12th is great. And I completely understand if you are too busy to read it for now :P

Thanks a lot, again :)

Unholy Lord (talk) 02:52, February 4, 2016 (UTC)

Now that my story, "Crime Hazy" was deleted, I took time to proofread it and re-read it. At the time this message is being left to your page, I have 100% proofread everything I could find in the story. Now, I adress, I want to know the problems with the plot. Please, I really would like to see the problems with the plot, because I like to see how I can improve my stories and how they can be better, so please, show me your thoughts on the overall plot, rather than the grammatical errors, misspelled words, ect. Chemical Cats (talk) 03:16, February 4, 2016 (UTC)

Plagiarism
This may be in the category of stupid inquiries, but I want to cover all my bases. I am currently developing a pasta that takes place in biblical times. I am taking a Bible story, and making it into a fictionalized horror story. However, since the Bible is a published work, I worry that any attempt to fictionalize a story could be viewed as plagiarism, or at the very least "fan fiction," and I don't need to be given a ban. Being a religious text, I'm not sure what copyright rules there are. So basically, I'm just seeing where the administration stands on such matters before I attempt to write the pasta.

Thanks,

User:DarthWeezer1994 03:53, February 4, 2016 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your response to my querie. I'll check out the link you posted. I do plan for the story to be original and not just a retelling (that would be really boring if it was, at any rate). User:DarthWeezer1994 04:27, February 4, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Story Deletion" message
So I noticed that the micropasta I tried to upload got deleted. Don't worry, I'm not upset about it. See, what happened was that I showed the story to Raidra and she told me that I could upload the story without having to submit it to writer's workshop first. I think she told me she uploaded a micropasta right on the site (presumably without submitting it to Writer's Workshop first) with no issue. I jumped the gun a bit too quickly there. Sorry for any trouble I caused and I think I learned a lesson here today.

What Azu learned: Submit ANY type of horror story to writer's workshop first before uploading it on the site for real.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   05:43, February 4, 2016 (UTC)

Category Confusion (possible spoilers)
First I would like to apologize for adding Land Meets Sea to the Cryptids category when it was already in the Monsters category, but as the pasta deals with a mermaid, I feel like it should be in the Cryptids, not Monsters. Please explain.--TheExtraPiece (talk) 13:13, February 4, 2016 (UTC)

Message received and understood.--TheExtraPiece (talk) 13:17, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

a little note for a friend
you porbably do not remeber me or you do why do I care? so to the question at hand.... why am I writing this i have absolutley no idea. maybe because I have a heart.....

I am writing this to tell you that for a person who is ranked number 3 on the most trusted creepypasta site on the net. You know close to nothing about grammar spelling, well basically english. elipses have ONLY three dots the fourth is a full stop. you know that dot at the end of evry sentence. also if start a dialogue with a comma or a full stop it has to starrt with a capital letter no matter what.

Agatha Christies book who murdered roger ackroyd is a best seller for the TWIST AT THE END.... I suggest you read the book before passing comments. oh and I sincerely hope that all this gets into your thick skull because I do NOT want to be the one has to pop the bubble that is your ego.

Finally, I suggest that you delete stories not out of spite, dont bother lying to an expert liar. Because all the errors you pointed out are completely wrong read a REAL book buddy and you shall know. man, and dont even get me started on the spelling mistakes I found on YOUR page. and the grammatical errors. i really dont wnat to tell you. I suggest proof reading your own page before reading other stories.

you act like a fucking grammar nazi but I'm sure even Hitler himself will kick you out for the amount of English you know....

And with that I leave you with a quote from Rudyard Kipling if you know who he is " Never the Twin shall meet"as I   feel it suits this occasion....

as this is goodbye,

your friend  and  follower

Stan &#39;psyco&#39; cooper (talk) 16:15, February 4, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Advice" Message
Thanks for the advice Empy! I've never wrote a "Flash Fiction" (Lovely term by the way) before so I had no idea how to do it. The way you layed out the advice really made it easy to understand what doesn't work about the story. The more I think about what you said, the more it makes sense and I think I'll save the idea for a rainy day and maybe expand upon it in the future.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   16:44, February 4, 2016 (UTC)

WHY DID YOU DELETE MY STORY?!

Hmmm, I wonder how many people I have just offended now.
No sense makes sense. Got to break down those walls. In love there is no wrong. Do we have fucking fun around here, or what? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:25, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Re: Story
Thank you for the feedback. But you thought there was a problem with the phrase, "the light of day's hot radiance"? What's wrong with that? Isn't that showing not telling and imagery? Was there a better way I could have executed the phrase?

Everything else I can use as constructive criticism. Thanks again.

Crying Nate (talk) 02:04, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, I noticed when you cut me off right before my best joke!
Oh, well, police going to be policing. It's cool, I hit old French Touch up on his talk page. That dude is fun!

I don't think we were rubbing salt in anyone's wounds, though. Not at all. Seriously, as bat shit crazy as I am, I would never want to be cruel. That is not me. I will tell it like it is, but I'm a really nice guy. If anything we (you included punstigator) were demonstrating what witty, intelligent, fun-loving, creative, literate, hilarious, talented, inspired, awe-provoking, mystifying, morally-devastating, wild, free, limitless, lawless, tasteless, extraordinary, profound, and, above all, humble, people we are.

HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:38, February 5, 2016 (UTC) What the hell's going on around here? First off let's take it from the start Straight out can't change what's in my heart No one can tear my beliefs apart You can't bring me You ain't never seen no one like me Prevail regardless what the cost might be Power flows inside of me You can't bring me Never fall as long as I try Refuse to be a part of your lie Even if it means I die You can't bring me You can't bring me down! Who the hell you calling crazy? You wouldn't know what crazy was if Charles Manson was eating fruit loops on your front porch Time out-let's get something clear I speak-more truth than you want to hear Scapegoat to cover up your fear You can't bring me You ain't never seen so much might Fight for what I know is right What up? you got yourself a fight You can't bring me Stand up we'll all sing along Together ain't nothin' as strong Won't quit We ain't in the wrong, You can't bring me You can't bring me down! Bring me down You can't bring me down! Bring me down You can't bring me down, no! Bring me down You can't bring me down! Bring me down You can't bring me down You can't bring me down! Tell them what's up Rocky! You can't bring me down! Bring me down You can't bring me down! Bring me down You can't bring me down, no! Bring me down You can't bring me down! Bring me down You can't bring me down, You can't bring me down! So why you trying to bring me? Well you can't bring me down No, no, no, no Can't bring me down No, no, no, no, no, no Can't bring me down No, no, no, no, no, no Can't bring me down No, no, no, no, no, no So why you trying to bring? Well you can't bring me down Just 'cause you don't understand what's going on Don't mean it don't make no sense And just 'cause you don't like it, Don't mean it ain't no good And let me tell you something; Before you go taking a walk in my world You better take a look at the real world 'Cause this ain't no Mister Roger's Neighborhood Can you say "Feel like shit"? Yeah maybe sometimes I do feel like shit I ain't happy 'bout it, but I'd rather feel like shit than be full of shit! And if I offended you Oh I'm sorry But maybe you need to be offended But here's my apology and one more thing Fuck you! 'Cause you can't bring me down! Bring me down You can't bring me down! Bring me down You can't bring me down, no! Bring me down You can't bring me down! Bring me down You can't bring me down! Bring me down You can't bring me down, no! Bring me down You can't bring me down, no! Bring me down You can't bring me down! You can't bring me down! Can't bring me down! Can't bring me down! Can't bring me down! Can't bring me down!

Strangest Thing
Often a lot of the stories I review are erased later on sometimes in the same day, or even in the same 20 minutes or less. Is it because a lot of those stories are rip offs of other stories. Because I thought you (admins) decided what was accepted before it was posted on the website. I could be dead wrong about that. I hope I don't sound moronic or paranoid. တရားသူကြီးကို တစ်ဖက်သတ်အစွဲ (talk) 23:33, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Well
I visited the salt mines. Sad isn't it. Well I just wanted to make sure I wasn't to get tons of misspelled bad insults in all caps from people. I hope they understand I have nothing to do with their stories being deleted. Glad I don't get all those annoying angry message, but eventually it will happen, for that is life. Also pretty sure admins do more things than delete stories. From helping people, giving input, warning people when they make an intentional or unintentionial. Not trying to waste your time. Well back to doing things for no reason except (cut off). No need to explain why I do things. (Silently hopes the admin doesn't think I'm a stalker or a mental case) တရားသူကြီးကို တစ်ဖက်သတ်အစွဲ (talk) 00:23, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

I think I'll try the Off Topics Board
Not bad when I get bored, no points or acheivements. I don't do it for that but for strange morale reasons. Now I will stop bothering you for a while. I guess I talk to you more than other admins because we have talked before. I don't know the others ones that well and they ocasionially fight with each other.

တရားသူကြီးကို တစ်ဖက်သတ်အစွဲ (talk) 02:53, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Myrkr Manlíkan
Hello Empy. About 2 days back, I posted a pasta titled "Myrkr Manlíkan." You deleted it a few minutes later, and understandably so, due to the "Spinoff" rule. So I went back into my story and changed the creature of choice from Slender Man to simply an unexplained shadow. So, confused and unsure how I should post and state that I'd changed the creature, I posted the pasta once more, but updated with a new monster. I'm not sure whether there is a some sort of function where you can go back and look at the 2 pastas so you could compare and contrast, but I'd just like to know why the second pasta was deleted. It was a matter of seconds when the second posting was deleted, after it had been updated.

TheJangoLegacy (talk) 16:43, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

If I rework my story and improve upon the specified elements, do I bring the story to you for review?

TheJangoLegacy (talk) 21:21, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

'Imma Plagiarize Your Page
Hey, Empyre. Is it cool with you if I copy the way you have your inspirations page set up (with my own content where applicable, obviously)? Kinda lazy, but I can't think of a better layout for it. Also, if I were to do that then would the proper web address for it be: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:Doom_Vroom/Inspirations_and_Credits

I've been wanting to do that for a while now and the blog made me figure it best to stop dilly-dallying. I mean, I doubt I'll ever be accused of plagiarism, since I try to make my stories as original as possible, but I'm always nervous about the remote possibility of a misunderstanding/chance stepping in (I was actually really worried about this when Jay had told me that my pasta, Boulder City Prison, had a plot sort of similar to one of Edgar Allen Poe's stories. I don't remember the name of said story and still haven't read it, but I should because I really enjoyed 'The Pendulum'). I also think that some of my inspirations might be found as interesting to some XD Buckle up   I'm going to be popular  06:17, February 7, 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks! I figured it wouldn't be a big deal, but permission can't hurt. I've desperately wanted to talk about some of my influences in particular stories, but could never find a viable way to do so. Hilariously or unfortunately (take your pick), I never thought of making a blog about that :T Ah, the subpage is fine as is (I got the address how I wanted it. I thought that might be correct, but I haven't messed with wiki subpages in a few years). It's getting late, so I'm going to put it off until tomorrow. Thanks for the quick response and sorry for the delayed one on my end. Buckle up   I'm going to be popular  06:52, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Question
Are pastas made in foreign languages ( like Kızıl Leydi ) allowed here?

Marc2427 (talk) 13:43, February 7, 2016 (UTC)


 * Also, are you allowed to blank your own pastas?


 * Marc2427 (talk) 15:49, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

I was completely blind to the fact that you user who started the thread Thread:5http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:525115 had taken the content. I should've realized from the difference in users but sadly, I'm not the smartest. Thank you so much for bring that to attention, it means a lot to me that this was pointed out. Sorry I fell for it, I feel awful for it.

Douche-Nozzle (sarcastic)
Don't smite me or send me to the great Salt Mines. A comment can be considered pointless. (Rage breaks plays GTA 5 for 50 days and ransacks the local liquor store ) But in all seriousness I'm am not angry or frustrated. A little suprised but I'm okay with it. Why am I even sending you a message about this. Why did Lake Placid need sequels. The answer to both of these questions I will never know

တရားသူကြီးကို တစ်ဖက်သတ်အစွဲ (talk) 17:15, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Want to Post
So I put a story on the writer's workshop that I really want to post as a creepypasta, but it seems like no one wants to help out with this. Do you think you could? Sorry if I'm bugging you.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:525192

GhostlyFerret (talk) 17:48, February 7, 2016 (UTC)GhostlyFerretGhostlyFerret (talk) 17:48, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Thanks Empy
It's no big deal if you need to pull it down. Just happy for the opportunity to make the front page. Any chance you could add the 'contest winner' tag when you have the time? Appreciate it. Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 20:07, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re
Thanks for wanting to get to checking my story and thank you for deleting that. I had no idea and I felt so bad that I hadn't noticed the clear problem. Sorry, I thought it was their writing.

GhostlyFerret (talk) 23:20, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Hello, i was wondering about my recent pasta that got deleted, and i know i'm not allowed to re-upload it, but i was wonndering, could i re-upload it, but add in some changes and maybe extend the story, and fix the grammar? please let me know,sincerely, cheekyisundeadCheekyisundead (talk) 16:31, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Hello MY Name Is Troy Boyer I Have Recently Had A story Deleted For An Unknown Reason I have Fully Read The Rules And My Article Was Not Over Gory Over length Or Under Length I Worked 2 Hours on The Story that has Been Brought Before You And That has Been Deleted So I ask Please Restore The Story And I Will Be Grateful For It Thank you Deathsblood (talk) 19:55, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

BETTY WHITE
How dare you insult the great Betty White. Oops always asumed it was Cathy Fisher, please don't vanquish me Betty White. I'm pretty sure candle cove viewer, the acheivement is rigged. Since it resets even when you don't miss a day of contrbuting. Is everything rigged. Great Scott. Damn, Damn, Damn. We will find out in the next Back to the Future film. Loved Jaws 19.

တရားသူကြီးကို တစ်ဖက်သတ်အစွဲ (talk) 01:24, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

A Strange Question
Hello sir, had a question for ya.

So, awhile ago, I made a contest proposal, but there was already a contest scheduled before mine. Seeing as there aren't any active contests at the moment, I was going to ask for the go ahead, but then I had a different idea.

I want to do something unique. I thought it'd be kind of cool to do an alternate reality game of sorts with the community here (I assume you're familiar with the term? I'm sure you can Google it if you're not). I thought it'd be an interesting way to tell a story and inspire people to write (there'd be some contest-esque portion of the ARG). I've seen this community and while I myself may not be the most active member, I'm fairly certain at least some of them would be receptive to the idea.

Now, I don't have a specific storyline yet, and I'm still in the planning stage. Before I go any further, I wanted to ask an admin (and seeing as you're the most active) if this would violate the role playing rule. I realize the purpose of the rule, and since hosting an ARG will probably require a fair bit of acting on my end and a suspension of reality on the community's end, I wanted to ask if it would be allowed.

I wouldn't do anything too major (like pretend Slenderman is real or something), but probably something more along the lines of: an organization has sent a representative to promote an ideal through the community (that's a grossly simplified idea, but the point is that the ARG would be fairly moderate). I could send you a draft of the idea to get a final OK if needed.

So what I'm asking is this: would an ARG break the no role playing rule? I have a general idea of where to go, but before I spend too much more time on this, I want to know if it would even be allowed. I didn't want to make a blog post only for it to get deleted, you know? Perhaps I could put a disclaimer at the top? That would partially defeat the purpose, but it could remind everyone that the content is fictional.

I know this is a place for writing fiction, but I thought it'd be cool for users to participate in fiction. Maybe this isn't the place for it, but I thought I might as well give it a shot. Thanks for reading regardless! Whitix (talk) 03:50, February 9, 2016 (UTC)


 * I understand. Those are valid concerns.  While I have faith in the more active members of the community, I can see how it could be derailed fairly quickly.  I thank you for your time. Whitix (talk) 04:04, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I appreciate that you edited Kurt's Wrath, but I was wondering if you could delete it for me? My reason is because I feel like it closely resembles American Horror Story: Murder House. No, this was not my intention to copy it or be like American Horror Story. The reason I used the miscarriage plot is because I needed the wife to have a reason to kill herself, and I wasn't thinking about the coincidence of it being similar. Also, I want to change the name from Kurt to Sylvia for this same reason. In AHS, Tate Langdon likes singer Kurt Cobain. No, this isn't why I chose to name the storm "Kurt." My reason was because I have a crush named Kurt who likes mermaids and the sea. Plus, the whole ghost aspect. I am explaining this so you know my reason for wanting to delete and to address that I'm not a AHS plagerizer... I just don't want my writing to come off as piss-poor fan boy sort of thing. Ya know?

RE:ToU violation
What exactly violated the terms of use? I only had it for like 10 seconds before you deleted it so I know you didn't read all of it. South Carolina (talk) 06:33, February 9, 2016 (UTC)


 * Oh, okay. I'll ask them I guess. Besides that, since you are the only person that read any of it, do you think I should continue it and post it on another site? As it, was it garbage or not? South Carolina (talk) 06:46, February 9, 2016 (UTC)
 * Ah yes, the dialogue was intentional. I kinda knew it wouldn't be a crowd pleaser, just wanted to try a throwback to the dialogue writing style of The Road. But thank you, a retelling was one of the main things I was aiming for. And I understanding not getting enough context from it since it's highly unfinished and I haven't advanced into the horror elements yet. South Carolina (talk) 07:03, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Hey how come you took down my page "The Tulpa Diary" after like an hour what did I do wrong?Numanoid97 (talk) 21:37, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Okay
Just like acheivements on the Xbox or trophys on the Play Station. They serve no purpose other than to make some one frustratingly try to get one for a week than rewarding them with nothing. Sound like a great plan. "But why did you make them?" To make them play the game and feel accomplished even though they did nothing and get nothing they can really use in return, which saves us money." "But isn't the game incentive enough?" "Not really our games are horrible, and there is no reason to play them except to get all the acheivements which most people won't even do and the one's that did wasted their life playing our game." "But isn't Aliens Colonial Marines a good game?" "I love how easily manipulated you are, its people like you that make us money." Forget the Illuminati and monsters, nothing is more terrifying than that story. Lets get it published. Yeah, your right that's a horrible idea, but I bet someone right now is planning on posting the same idea. I officially mark this bad story with copyright. Because someone is stupid enough to publish it.

တရားသူကြီးကို တစ်ဖက်သတ်အစွဲ (talk) 00:24, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Enquiry
Hey I was wondering why you deleted my pasta. I'd like to know why so I can improve my future pieces to better fit this site's quality standards.

PolaroiDoe (talk) 15:48, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Excuse me, Empy, I made this blog and since many of my blogs have been against the rules in the past, could you take a look at it to see if it is allowed?

Thanks.

Creeper50 (talk) 21:10, February 10, 2016 (UTC)Creeper50

Writer's Workshop Redirect
Hey, Empyre! I'm having an issue where the Writer's Workshop redirects me to Undefined when I try to post my pasta, 'Fungus Among Us'. I've tried it twice as that and once as 'Fungus' to see if I could get around it. I was wondering if 'Fungus' might be a blacklisted word. If not and I am unable to get it to submit to the Writer's Workshop in a couple of days, would you be fine with me posting it on Pastebin and submitting it to the Writer's Workshop on my behalf? If not, that's cool (I can ask someone else, I know you've been busy and putting up with a lot of nonsense). I was mainly just stopping by to see if the site was glitching or if I hit a blacklisted word. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  23:48, February 10, 2016 (UTC)


 * It worked! Thanks, I appreciate it. I've seen some wikis do weird things before, so maybe that was just one of those times. Honestly, I kinda figured that everything I posted might redirect me to Undefined or I would have waited and tried again later. Thanks again! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  00:00, February 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * Oh, that's good. I was worried that was Wiki's way of telling me that my story was garbage XD Do you remember if they were able to post again or not? Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  00:07, February 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * That's good news. Maybe I glitched it by trying to add another story so soon (though I don't think that'd really be a thing). Personally, I blame TOM :P I'll give it some time before trying to add another story and we'll see. Thanks again! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  00:16, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Lavender
Unfortunately, I posted that comment on the wrong story. Yes, it is one of your stories that this same person commented on, but it was not Lavender. It was A Night in the Hospital.

Here is the Wattpad link that has the changed title: https://www.wattpad.com/69557182-spookypastry-the-guy

Sorry for the confusion.

EDIT: Apparently it's not just A Night in the Hospital, there's also Ad Nauseam, Ad Mortem, Ad Infinitum, not to mention this one on Wattpad is incomplete and not cited that you are the writer.

https://www.wattpad.com/181194583-101-horror-stories-ad-nauseam

UPDATE: It seems that the publisher of the anthology in which "A Night in the Hospital" was included in has removed your comment asking her to give you credit for the story.

Hakuna matata, what a wonderful phrase and it's no passing craze. (talk) 19:26, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Come on this time im actualy trying im sorry i added a genre but i had everything played out for 3 parts and im not trying to get on your nerves or anything but its my first story and it really hard but im rambiling thank you for taking time to tell me what is wrong with my stroys :)

Deathsblood (talk) 20:05, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Just to tell you i accidentaly added that unfinished story i was trying to save it on my computer so yah sorry

Deathsblood (talk) 20:09, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

This Plagiarism Thing
Sorry if I might be stepping out of place here by getting involved, but plagiarism tends to be a fairly touchy subject for me; so when an accusation comes up, I tend to fact-check it.

Now I'm going to be a bit blunt here; the Imapat guy accusing you is either insane and doesn't know what he's talking about, or he's lying his ass off just to get at you. First, same as you probably did, I ran up a few google searches. Came up with absolutely nothing.

Come to find out he apparently took down his stories, but the problem is, anyone with sense wouldn't. Anyone who does and finds out later would try to get their stories back up so they have some proof that it's theirs.

And here's when he shoots himself in the foot. I looked at his talk page, and he mentioned some mysterious "M." and Reddit. Neither of these things came up before; but if they're important to the situation, why weren't they brought up in the comments? He also claimed that ClericofMadness deleted his last post, but I never saw a record of it.

All this said, I wouldn't bother continuing to request evidence. He doesn't have it, pure and simple. I'd wager he's a sockpuppet of an account that was recently blocked or had their story deleted. And again, sorry if I'm stepping out of place. Just figured I'd throw in what I've found and the conclusion I've come to on this end. Bandit King Jack (talk) 05:00, February 12, 2016 (UTC)


 * Not just incredibly unlikely; downright impossible, really. That said, it's more than likely that. Best way to take someone down would be to expose them as a hypocrite, particularly on a serious issue like plagiarism. Fortunately, it tends not to work on innocent people. Bandit King Jack (talk) 05:22, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Are you the only one that edits cause there are alot of creepypastas worst than mine mine i just read one that was only 5 lines long but thats probably realy ineffective on you Deathsblood (talk) 17:03, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Cant you just let me have a pass? i mean i highly doubt any peopelare going to be like "I cant read this the comma's not in the right place." or "This story is horid for not having proper punctuation, Filth" and my storys slip past the smaller things like its isnt it's or Trinity wasnt capitalized im mean its kind of tedious can you just overlook the smaller things?

P.S. are you an AI?

Deathsblood (talk) 18:46, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

bien bien, gracias por su ayuda ¿Cómo accedo a taller de escritores Deathsblood (talk) 19:20, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Hey, just wondering why my story was deleted (Its completely mine, I made it for an english class)

LightNoch (talk) 22:45, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

First off, you're a legend, second, it's crazy to be deleted by a legend, but it still sucks. I was in the middle of editing and you deleted me. Apologies are in order. I'm new, and I'm just posting my pasta. Some tips would be great. About posting, not writing, I've got that covered. Is LOLSKELETONS her too? CreepySean5235 (talk) 05:26, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Seriously, I just finished reading all the faq about deletion, and my story A. doesn't fall into any of those, and B. wasn't finished being edited. I hate to say it, but you need to apologize, really. Because of that, I can't repost it, and hope that I get through editing before some asshole deletes it again, or I'll be banned for a day, which is kinda stupid. What's your problem. I'd really like to know. Why did you delete it? Is there no way to see when someone is still putting something together?

CreepySean5235 (talk) 05:41, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Ok, please explain to me how it didn't have an edit summary. I clearly left one before saving the page. There's A Girl In The Garden, I added the Title, I added the Story, etc, I know I did it, because I literally JUST DID IT! I swear, if you don't stop, I will put in a complaint. Not joking. This is harassment. You can't just bully me like this. trust me, I have a ton of stories to post. How many can you delete per second? ^_~

CreepySean5235 (talk) 06:09, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

No summary is a bullshit reason, and you know it. You know full well that I did give an edit summary, so you can fuck off. I can post that all day, and you CAN'T stop me, so just leave it already.

HAHA YOU CAN FUCK OFF DICK!!SeanMorgan5235 (talk) 06:47, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

re:Fallout 4
[Insert obligatory hateful message here]

Haha, no worries! I've only completed it three times. Honestly, now that I've had some time to think on it, I find it inferior to Fallout: New Vegas, but superior to Fallout 3. I just really dislike the protagonist being voiced and I feel that it hampers the replay value a bit, because it's really hard to roleplay an insane character with the voice acting. If you haven't played New Vegas, then I'd recommend that as you can get the ultimate edition with all the dlc off Ebay for $10. It had better dialogue, dialogue/skill checks, and an optional survival mode to where you had to drink, eat and sleep every so often or you would die. I will say that I felt 4 got factions right, but again, I felt that New Vegas handled them better. I also wish that the hubs/cities in 4 had more life to them and variety. I'm praying that Elder Scrolls 6 doesn't have a voiced protagonist (just imagine all them different playable races and only one male and female voice actor, lol). Let me know which ending you get! Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  20:05, February 13, 2016 (UTC)