Talk:A Figure in the Fog/@comment-31533956-20180924192448

I have some positive and negative ideas about this story. I want to say before you read the rest of this though, that I did in fact enjoy it.

The good:

I felt actually worried for the characters, and I was interested in why this was all happening. The idea that the spirits were entirely malicious I was totally on board with. Overall, I really enjoyed it.

The negative:

I felt like there was a few points you could elaborate on. Also, it was quite cliche. My final grief with this story, was it's general unrealistic-ness. Granted, it is a fictional story about people being possessed by spirits, however I still feel like the characters you layed out for us would not have done some of the actions that you had them do. Even still, it was a good story.