Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26846606-20170123215253/@comment-28428152-20170124021426

A good brief read, though I agree that the last sentence is a little hokey sounding. Maybe you could leave it off at the text message, or maybe just reword it, or maybe even have it cut off mid-sentence (be sure to use two dashes, like this: Bob ate the coffee cake and--).