User blog comment:Supersatan25/What Cliches Should I Avoid in a Monster Story?/@comment-25170312-20150408161123/@comment-26011836-20150420183027

I started working on more of my story and there's a part I want to add to chapter 5 but I'm not sure if it will be good enough. It goes like this: "As she ventured out to the samurai's base camp, she started to become quite anxious at the thought of seeming suspicious to the samurai. Despite the fact that she was dressed up as one of them, she feared that her voice might seem too high pitched to pass for a soldier. She then took a few deep breaths and tried to figure out a way to disguise her voice." I don't know If I Showed you the whole story yet. If I didn't I'll be glad to send it to you on your talk page. The story is on my tablet so I'll have to go get it and by the way, pasting things on the mobile version of this wiki is a pain since it almost never pastes where I want it to be pasted.