Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-40138781-20190714042733/@comment-33904527-20190714134502

There's a nice little abstract concept you have here, and the writing style is quite pleasant to read, but past that, there's barely anything else. It's fine if you want to keep this "incomprehensible" thing a vague threat, but we need some more substance.

So, there's this strange, all-consuming thing that has claimed everyone around it, and the narrator is next. Good premise. Expand on it, give us more.