Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20150624030749/@comment-26475800-20150624212711

Thank you guys for reviewing my story. I have learned a few things from this, namely, no matter how much I may not want to I should always, at the very least, scan through my story before posting it.

The ideas you have given me are well taken and will be used when I do the revisions. Many things will be cut from the story and some will be added; now looking at it I can see what you are talking about. Hopefully, when the revisions are completed and all the changes are made you guys would be able to review it again.