Talk:When the Storm Came/@comment-5733573-20180502141951/@comment-5733573-20180502145043

I think it just needs a greater sense of personal importance to the reader if it's going to cause that delicious existential dread that creepypastas are famous for. Like, what is the nature of the storm, and could it perhaps happen again? Also, maybe delve deeper into what the trapped people are feeling or experiencing.