User blog comment:Khandall/Looking for Submissions For My Youtube Narriations/@comment-25073641-20160608160359

Good day Khandall. Let me first say that I do like your voice, although I think your voice acting needs some work. First, you speak too rapidly to the point your listeners could barely register the words you say. And two, your listeners (including myself) couldn't discern any hint of emotion in your narration... It looks like you're reading it just for the sake of reading it, and that certainly is nothing good. Ever listened to MrCreepyPasta or CreepsMcPasta (or to Sid )? Give their narrations a shot and compare them to what you have... you see a lot of differences, I perceive.

On the other hand, your channel is mostly dominated by hentai porn review videos (violates the Terms of Use of this wiki and is still too NSFW), which certainly won't appeal to such an age-sensitive website like Creepypasta Wiki and the sorts. This wiki has users that are under the legal age of 18+, and everyone here can give you quite a list of users who are still wont to blow their 18th candles (and I might as well include myself, as I'm currently 14 and bound to turn 15 in the near future).

The point is, about 70% of the content of your channel is occupied by such adult videos, and as a literature website publicly open to people of all ages above 13, people (especially here) will instantly see your channel as harmful, obscene and inappropriate, and that puts you and your channel in a bad standing. And as a conclusion, I do think your channel does not make the fit here. There are other less-strict literature/arts website out there like DeviantArt (which, coincidentally, full of erotic artworks, stories, etc.), but as of now, your channel is deemed "bad" in this website.

If you plan to dedicate the rest of your channel to narrating creepypastas and things like that, I advise you to create another unaffiliated channel and post your narrations there... away from the adult videos and let's play videos you have establishd in your first channel.

I do sincerely NOT mean to hurt or offend you. That's just how I see it. Feel free to berate me if you find my points too sharp.