Talk:A Figure in the Fog/@comment-25975226-20150428030205/@comment-25975226-20150429070408

Wow, you are definitely right about the ending. I didn't notice it until you pointed it out, but I did like the fact that Jamie was still alive somewhat and his father was killed. As for the abuse, if that's what you set out to do you definitely did succeed.

The only thing I mentioned the abuse not coming back into it was how Jamie kept on saying he was going to kill his father, and then seemingly never did. But I assume at the end it is in fact Jamie murdering his father amidst the fog rather than Lady Wicker.

I really did like reading this, and I have no doubt you could take the abuse further, as can anyone take any aspect of horror above and beyond reason, like the gore in the story Ingrown. Don't check it out if you're squeamish. I'm glad you stopped when you did, though. I don't think it would've been easy to read any more.