Talk:A Window of Better Days/@comment-25941663-20160831212135

A nicely written pasta. For a short read, this is quite good. The language and vocabulary use created a nice atmosphere and the idea of a window in a random place is novel and intriguing. As the other commenter said before me though, the idea is nothing new and we have seen many, many stories of the same ilk.

Still, this had enough going for it to stay interesting the whole way through. A nice, short read.