Talk:Arkangels/@comment-26527238-20160331021414

wow. wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwowowowowoowowowowowow

A first-rate pasta, filled with brilliant imagery and pacing. However, the dialogue between Samuel and Saul -- I felt was very different and somewhat out of place with words like "childish" etc.

Regardless, still very well written and hope you make more of these.