Talk:Tryps/@comment-25947144-20161021211450/@comment-24101790-20161021212458

Thank you kindly, I have noticed a bit of a pattern with my apocalyptic stories that this one shares as well. Yeah, I tried to ward off that plot hole by mentioning that veins don't necessarily bleed once the hole reaches that deep just as a little way of addressing that issue so maybe the body continues with those injuries until an outside force influences them (like a hand in the chest). I know that reason probably doesn't hole-d much water, but the deeper I got with Tryps, the more I realized that it would be a relatively short affliction if I didn't tinker with the idea some. Finally, I really wanted to use deterioration and hollowness as a theme in the story so I'm glad you picked up on it. Thanks for taking the time to read it.