Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190813084030/@comment-35911608-20190813124228

I enjoyed it, but I'm not sure about the creepy sauce myself. I will abstain from saying yay or nay, and let someone else decide if it's ready or not.

One grammatical issue I came across:

''"Stand here," she said. After inspected him, she handed him a harp.''

It should either say: After inspecting him, she handed him a harp.

Or: After she inspected him, she handed him a harp.