Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26966435-20150907155228/@comment-26966435-20150907202615

Thank you so much, this is the first time i tried to write something like this, and your criticism will definitely help me. I agree with you, i got a little lost during the process, i kept getting ideas and they all got mashed up. Thank you so much, to be real it's the first time i ever posted a story online and someone actually tried to help me improve it. It's so important to people who are starting to write to get this kind of criticism. So thank you, i will surely read it again and make some changes.

~DannyRJ