Talk:A Game

The line about the narrator being the only one who can evade certain beings is kind of compelling; it makes me feel like this is only the endgame of a much larger story (and I can't say I completely understand even that bit). But there are small spelling and grammatical errors throughout. Also, unless the gray text is supposed to be absolutely necessary, I'd recommend standard white. Easier to read in low light. Javer80 (talk) 07:10, August 30, 2012 (UTC)