Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25160824-20140814201358

ok I need to know if I should to continue writing stories. So here's my first story or... The first story I'm going to reveal. I need advice on a name for the story and somebody to tell me if this is a good story, an ok story, or a stop writing you arent good at this story. (warning this is very short)

a man was found dead in his house holding a small notebook this is what was written inside:

She whispered "Give me a story." So I started writing.

She whispered "Make the boy fall in love with me." So I continued writing.

She whispered "Make the boy go insane." So I continued writing.

She whispered "Make me kill the boy." so I continued writing.

She whispered "Finish the story." So I finished writing.

She turned to me smiling, and whispered "Thanks for giving me my story"

In a diffrent handwriting was written:

He gave me my story so now I'll finish his.

After I thanked him for giving me my story, he tried to reply, but before he got the chance to open his mouth to say anything, I whispered "You are the boy." 