Talk:Cure for Cancer/@comment-25952879-20150208184732

Honestly I don't know how this ended up a pasta of the month.

Pros: Started off with a good concept. The Albino female and the rich genius who lost his parents to cancer and developed a cure for cancer...

Cons: Terribly confusing ending which litteraly made this story crash and burn. The ending was so abrupt that I got Lost. For example: There was once a unicorn that was immortal... it died the end. What about the beginning? What happened to him trying to kill her? This honestly needs so much work. Final Grade: 2/10

Helpful hints: Slow down the ending so that people don't get confused. Also try to explain what happened at the end. CreatureOfNightmares (talk) 18:47, February 8, 2015 (UTC) Also if anyone reading this wants to read my story here: Your Shadow