Talk:The Shoes/@comment-25340844-20140919000027/@comment-25340844-20140919164951

Jesus. Cool your fucking tits.

I wasn't being rude or insulting the story. I was just pointing out a small mistake. When a member of your family goes missing and the police come to speak to you, you do not assume anything. The information you give them could be vital in finding the missing person, so it's important you tell the truth.

I don't know how to check the author of a pasta, but from your reaction I'm assuming you wrote this. People make mistakes, you know, and you don't need to swear at someone just because they point out one of yours. That's a pretty immature response to valid criticism. Plus, mine was the first comment to actually refer to your story. The rest are about some stupid cookie bullshit. Which would you rather receive?