Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26953391-20150902222802/@comment-26953391-20150909190744

Thanks for the kind words! One of my major concerns was that it felt too disjointed or long, so I'm glad to hear that it was fluid enough to be enjoyable. Outside of that, I feel like I may've been too vague, to the point of not really describing the appearance of the character and kind of summarizing the majority of events outside of the ending and the meeting with Gellding. That and the fact that the ending could be easy to see coming if I messed it up. Either way, thanks again.