Talk:Blobster/@comment-27838637-20160808130349/@comment-26475800-20160809034158

Thank you for your review. I can understand the aspect of not understanding getting drunk, and that it seems they were more disinterested in the find. I really don't have anything to say to that, it was just how the story written itself. The people in the story are, to a greater or lesser degree, excited and at the same time, upset that they have to work through the night. I know, well maybe not to the extent that I showed in the story (I hardly ever drink and gave up drugs a long time ago) that I would be partying if I made a career defining moment.

As for the characters, I never really give physical appearances, unless it is important to the story. Take Raoul for example, what I think an attractive guy may look like, you may not, and I wanted him to come off as looking hansom to everyone. To me, his name is enough to give an idea of what he may look like. He has a Hispanic name, so he will most likely look Hispanic. But I do understand that is a weaker point for me, but without writing a full novel, I really don't focus on what people look like.

As for it getting confusing, I can understand that if you don't really have any idea of what the person looks like. But I tried to get enough of their personalities through their dialogue. Most of what I had cut, was dialogue and thoughts for each character, because that became really confusing.

I'm glad that you enjoyed it enough to give it the rating you did. And thanks for giving me your feedback.