Talk:Sleep and Death, Two Sides of the Same Coin/@comment-27553469-20160322180607

The ending was predictable by a mile beforehand once I'd started reading the story. Though, it was interesting to say the least. There's also a few misspelling errors as well, and the ";" is used much too often -- I'd noticed you'd even replaced various commas with semicolons instead. The story buildup was good, always keeping the story moving, but the end was most definitely expected. Though, there's a bit of a good writing style that is depicted within the story that gives it bonus points in the all-in-all; which is what I'd say would have to be about a 7.5/10.