Talk:Art Warehouse

Well, your story isn't too bad, but it needed quite a bit of editing. No pararaphs, spelling errors, missing punctuation, unused templates, etc. I went through and fixed as much of this as I could, but I left the picture and video templates alone, as I was unsure whether you would be adding additional content or not. If you aren't going to use them, please remove them.

As for the actual story, it's alright. It has that classic "urban legend" vibe, but it lacks detail. We don't really get a sense of who our characters are, and although the setting is creepy, not enough happens. Try to work on expanding more on the events that transpire. Mdcowboy, Grammar Nazi of the Third Reich (talk) 12:50, March 3, 2013 (UTC)