Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20151007031148/@comment-10789912-20151007035228

This story reminds me heavily of a small comic I read long ago, where the little girl has the father check the closet. Upon looking, he sees his daughter in the closet saying there is something in her bed.

Overall, for such a short piece, it was interesting. It could have certainly benefited from more details, and it didn't really hit the spot for me. It seemed pretty generic, as most "kid tells story" type stories are very similar.

I'd give this a 2.5/5. Pure base, not negative nor positive.

It does what it sets out to do greatly, but unfortunately, what it sets out to do is something we have all seen done in flying colors before.