Talk:Davey/@comment-25170312-20150719025239

Started out good and then fell flat. First of all, the journal entries don't seem like they were written by a serial killer. I mean, would someone that cold and calculating really start sentences with "anyway"? And it's pretty obvious that Sean would take the journal to the police (calling 911 was a little weird, could have just taken it to a police station), so why would the killer be that stupid? Unless he wanted the police to find the journal, but that wouldn't make much sense. The writing isn't bad, though.