Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25169949-20140821193235/@comment-25170312-20140821195413

This was extremely painful to read. So much so that I couldn't even finish it. I don't know how to say this in a nice way so I'll just be blunt. It's horrible. The writing is atrocious and annoying. The story is ridiculous and offensive. And I can't even comment on the ending because I thought I was going to scream if I had to keep reading. This would definitely be deleted if you submitted it. I don't know how you could possibly fix it to make it better. Please erase this story from existence. I can't stress enough how bad it is. I've never so passionately hated a pasta before. Hate me if you wish, but I needed to express myself thoroughly. You're probably thinking, "How can you say you hate it when you didn't even finish it," but like I said, if I had to keep reading I would have gone insane.