Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27246594-20151209082347

Here is a potential 'chapter' 1 rewrite. Any advice or feedback is appreciated.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10Vi-0x3Wbojpd2sWhHC5mIrRl6MxHxKmbmkFiY9i4Cw/edit?usp=sharing  