Talk:Fall Asleep/@comment-28578739-20160808150534

While I don't consider it new as I've seen this exact theme before on various platforms, I still think it's an eerie thought (I personally had many surgeries as a kid/teen due to a congenital kidney ailment. In which case I also find you described the pre-surgery feeling and environment quite well) and you did a solid job writing a short story, which isn't easy to do.