Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4789783-20161029114911/@comment-25941663-20161030105905

I'm afraid this does not meet the quality standards. It is simply a conspiracy theory with the skin of a horror movie. I suggest you move on from this project on to other ideas where you can better showcase your talents.

I also suggest you read these advice blogs and go and take a look at these stories to see what we're looking for in a pasta.

Happy writings!