Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-38564973-20190218215450/@comment-38564973-20190219212246

Thank you all for your opinions. I will make sure to make better works, and even try to rewrite the story to make it better. Since I am a beginner don’t expect much from me, but I hope to improve, and make a great creepypasta. I also promise no hyper realistic in any of my pastas. I just want to say thank you again for seeing my errors and I will make sure to take your advice. Have a creepypasta day.