Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180915161121/@comment-5733573-20180918060436

I like it. It does feel like it rambles a bit and doesn't really have an ending. I'd also like it to be a bit more immersive than just telling us what happens. Still, I really enjoyed how clearly you thought about this. The narrator's character came thre really clearly. Fun read. :-)