Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20160707162915/@comment-5000412-20160710184226

There's something compelling about the mystery of the archives, but if you'd like to go into more, I'm sure you could make it work. This would be more important if you do decide to make it more of a collection,

And in regard to Sarah's plot line, you could go more into it if you'd like it to be a plot line. If not, then adding just a bit more context to her placement would be just fine.

Most of the questions raised lead to where you'd like the story to go, and I'm sure it could be successful either way.

-E