Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24546926-20140606211410/@comment-24381191-20140606213634

Ecuinach wrote: As this is, it is a short and unintresting. Not to mention that it is a wall of text, which is NOT okay. My advice would be to expand the story and add paragraph breaks, and find another way to "hide" the word, such as italics. What's the word? could you tell me?