Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33451975-20171023174304/@comment-33451975-20171112212829

Yeah I know it needs some work especially the dialogue. The story is actually supposed to be in the modern day. Also I'm currently redoing this story, but it's going to be very  different  from this plot kind of like an origin story about the magician and how he came to be. I'm actually doing some research and rewriting everything to where things are more plausible and realistic especially the dialogue. Once it's done I will reupload it here in the workshop.