Talk:Weak/@comment-MrDupin-20161124155322/@comment-Anarchic Operations-20161216140402

Thankyou verily much for the feedback sir. I'll fix up that redundancy and I'll be sure to keep that advice in mind for future readthroughs.

As for the second-person narrative, I thought this tale was much better off with it. I think th audience would be more inclined to immerse themselves in this story if they imagined themselves as the protagonist. I understand where you are coming from, but I don't think the story would have achieved what I wanted it to if it was written any other way.