Talk:Aggressive Acting/@comment-26520218-20150622051216/@comment-1671931-20150623215354

Never apologize for the length of a story, if there is no filler in it, it is as long as has to be. That said, did I enjoy your creepypasta. Actually, I have mixed feelings about it, personally I don't like slasher stories, due to the fact they are pretty cliché and sadly enough, this is no difference here: setting, motive... You have good ideas but for it to be scary, it didn't needed to have such a high bodycount (three would already have done the trick), you put lots of effort in describing their motives and the actions, with a pretty ending and all but that makes it feel like horror-slasher-teen-drama, not a creepypasta (can be just me though), but I do like who the killer is, nice touch. If I have to put a score on it, a 5/10 (but don't let that discourage you, I have rated hollywood production far lower than this)

Tips for future creepypastas:
 * Proofreading: you made a few mistakes with names or words that you should notice when you proof read it.
 * Don't go for a high body count: it doesn't make your story scarier.
 * No happy endings, this one is way to merry. Disturb me, scare me, remind me this is horror!
 * Try to avoid cliches: from the first kill we kinda knew where you were going with this.
 * Read other creepypastas: best way to