Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-7673575-20180403225507/@comment-32289854-20180403231248

There's a minor typo I've already pointed out to you; but over all, I enjoyed the story, particularly the twist -- was the whole thing written just so you could make a reference to the "Hand of Fatima"? I had to look it up so good job on that! I personally love stories like this -- they subvert your expectations in the most delightful ways. The formatting adds to it quite well. Can't wait to see it posted in the wiki proper.