Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140916233219/@comment-25226524-20140919002832

This one is definitely out there, but I like it. The thought of being trapped in that last situation is cringe-worthy to say the least. You did a good job at bringing the character to life in this one. The tension was very well done, I was definitely uncomfortable imagining this poor sap in those situations. I'm a bit of a germaphobe (mysophobia) myself, but not to this extent thank goodness. The ending was perfect, their own personal hell.

There were a few things I might have worded differently here and there, but nothing really worth mentioning. I think this is another good story in my opinion. I do think this could be made longer, but it works well as it is. Good work.