Talk:Bad Night Out/@comment-5733573-20180525135359/@comment-5733573-20180525144859

Ooh, I love it when artists do sets/series like this!

I see what you mean about mundane details, and looking back I can see where you put others. The reason that one sticks out, I think, is because it's not intrinsically tied to the narrator's monstrous nature, where the others are. See what I mean? Anyway, as I said, it's far from a big deal, and the only reason it stuck out to me was because the story as a whole was so well done.