Talk:Her Eyes Were Open/@comment-29507836-20161010121314

Very nice, the scare factor is quite noticeable in this one, even made me look at my reflection on the screen when I finished it. I also like the writing for the story, seeing as you wrote it like you were actually dreading her eyes. I also like the plot; it is quite different from the other stories about eyes. I also like how you made the plot twist casually appear at the end of the story, just letting things flow. The character also felt real, not like a heartless plethora of skin and muscles.

I also like how you made me picture something I see as every day as something story. However, it ain't the first time I've read something about eyes. It doesn't really affect how I see the story, though.

Other than that, I can't really see anything wrong in it, so I give you a "Good Job!" sticker and a rating of 8.5/10.