Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25825682-20141214014003/@comment-25825682-20141219091705

I know this sounds stupid, but I accidently deleted your response, my video cards weird. Anyhow thanks for the advice, but this plot is supposed to be weak as it carries over to a second story, which explains a lot of what "it" is and why its attached to Alexander, however advice to shorten or help the plot will be nicce, while I fix errors.