Talk:The Truth Box/@comment-29507836-20160925080200

A good pasta, with a little bit of gore splashed into it. The background of how his daughter knew the absolut truth is a little bit cliche; a magician does something wrong with his trick. Some grammatical errors were seen, enough to distract the reader from the story itself. I do love, however, the way that you showcased the little girl's knowledge of many things.

Overall, I rate it a proper 6/10.