Talk:Here Sits a Man on His Soft Couch/@comment-5733573-20181005145455

It's okay. I really wanted more from this. You build up this rhythm, but then it kind of doesn't lead to anything. It ends up just being the same thing over and over, and kind of plateaus after a while. In addition, there are some grammatical errors and awkward wording. Overall, it's an interesting idea, but not enough by itself.