Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25089712-20140621173512/@comment-25089712-20140623211652

Yeah, I think I'll just try the first one and the use the other one as a back up plan. I'd like to try and get it on this site if I can. I am close to being done with the story, it has lengthened a bit and I have added/replaced several parts in it as well. Hopefully it is realistic and easy to follow now. Thank you again for your help, I hope the revised version does not disappoint!