Talk:Beetlejuice/@comment-5733573-20180721201717/@comment-35711173-20180722002204

Jdeschene, That is a very reasonable review. This is a "hard science" based story. There is no BS, no fantasy, no hand waving. It will happen, five minutes or a million years from now. If you are not into hard science then it's going to bore you. You have written a lot of stories that were out of the domain I live in and don't work for me but that doesn't mean that you aren't an excellent author. The way you write, if I don't like a story I just wait until tomorrow for the next one.

I'm very interested in your comments about the lack of the circumstances of the narrator telling the story. I debated having a paragraph at the top saying that the Steve was writing the event down in case it would help anyone and at the same time doubting that anyone ever will see it. What do you think?