Talk:Night Lock/@comment-25052433-20141120191044

Well, I am by no means an expert on poetry, so reviewing a poem will be a new area for me. I'll give it my best shot though.

The premise of the poem, which essentially tells a story, is very good. The imagery is well done, as the poem directs the reader though the subject's perils. I had no trouble picturing what the subject was explaining through the course of the poem.

The over all tempo of the writing flows well also. This almost had a Poe-The Raven, kind of feel to it. This would probably sound a lot better if it were being read out loud, as I sensed that it was a piece of work, that, like The Raven, was intended to speed up and slow down as the plot ebbed and flowed.

As I said at the start, I am not really well versed in poetry, so I cannot promise you that this review will be that helpful, but speaking strictly from the seat of a reader who read the poem, it was enjoyable, well executed and something that I would recommend to others.

Well done.