Talk:A Haunting Most Mario/@comment-25048323-20140612171603

The writing is just terrible. Like I'm not one to be a good writer myself, but this is just terrible. The story is good but the way you write is awful. I'm not trying to discourage you. I think you have potential like all of us on here do. I just think you should try putting it on the writers workshop first next time. Besides this is creepy pasta and this wasn't even scary, it was rather funny