Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10319977-20151014231140/@comment-10319977-20151015010122

I've explained I Slit My Own Throat Once in depth above. To simply answer your criticism of how it doesn't make sense, it is the parasite's ego, the belief that he owns the human he is control of, therefore making their throat "his" throat.

I completely agree and thank you for your criticism of Grave Robbers, except for it not making sense, that is (see my explaination above). I wondered about the excess wording while I wrote it, but never recieved proper criticism on the wording until now. This is one I'm willing to scrap if patching it up won't suffice.

I'm unsure how the last two pastas seem unoriginal. Please elaborate.

MGN being silly is an opinion. That doesn't reflect it's quality. I personally don't find it "BOO!" scary so much as unsettling, as it prays on one's fear of aging.

A wall is broken breaks the fourth wall, so it's supposed to be more than an oopsy.

A Third Batch is uninspired, but I am still looking to see others' thoughts on it before I scrap it.

In addition to not blindly trusting positive feedback, I'm not going to blindly follow negative feedback either, so I'm still keeping an open mind as to what needs to be fixed on/ the quality of these pastas.