Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20141118060220/@comment-25477067-20141118231002

It is a good start, but wayyy too many names for me. I just have a hard time with names so feel free to keep them if you want. You have a little to much detail for a Creepypasta, because the personal info s good but unless the TV is evil, I don't really care about Animal Planet. Try separating the bottom block of text into two paragraphs because I have to skip that otherwise my eyes would pop out of my head  :P

Keep going! I can tell you have experience as a writer so now become a Creepyauthor!