Talk:Necrosleep/@comment-5239282-20141210021420/@comment-25762407-20141211220256

Thanks for the feedback. Since it's my first pasta I expected there would be plenty of blunders, and I'm glad you clarified them for me.

You're definitely right about the Wikipedia excerpt; with more time and effort I could have made it match the factual, impartial standards of Wikipedia.

As far as the occult contexts go, the faces and demonic voices were purely illusory, and the fact that the Ukrainian Institute of Occult Medicine is essentially a Satanic cult doesn't mean there was really anything supernatural going on in the story. I admit the way I implemented that idea may have been a bit sloppy.

I also agree with you about the climax. I regretably rushed the latter portion of the story just because I was excited to finish it. Bad move on my part.

Thanks for the compliments as well. I'm glad you enjoyed parts of it, and I'll keep your advice in mind for my future works.