Talk:Sarah's Story/@comment-26030957-20150710234910/@comment-26030957-20150711004005

I like all your stuff, you're one of my favorite writers on the site. I just feel bad for the dad. Hell, the guy didn't even get laid. If you had put a hot little sex scene in it I might have like it better. lol. At least he would have gone out with a bang. (Cracking myself up now) But seriously, imagine if she realized he was possessed by Mr. Frank in the middle of their love making. Like, she's sleeping and he starts rubbing himself on her, and she gets excited and they start going for it, then she thinks, he never does it like this, then he gets real nasty, starts biting her and calling her all kinds of foul names, and she's like trying to push him off. Then the kids wakes up and sees it all. Then his face explodes all over them and a deformed midget leaps from his corpse as she struggles below the carcass, covered in gore, and the midget is all like, "I'm Mr. Frank, bitch! What you going to do now?" Too much?