Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20141118060220/@comment-25623211-20141125135038

Mmpratt99 deviantart wrote: Do you think I need put a  definition of the word at the begining of the story or should I just leave it mysterious? I wouldn't bother explaining it. People can find out easily if they're that curious. Also I read the story again and noticed that you're still putting too much explanation into characters and appearances. Less is more, let the audience figure out some things on their own. Spoon feeding can ruin a good story. Also is the aunt necessary to the story? I didn't see much need for more than a few sentences about her unless the witch stuff comes up later in relation to her.