Talk:God's Mouth/@comment-24970491-20140621122655

I might as well give you my opinion of what I think of this story.

And to be honest...

It's good, really good to be in fact!

But what ruins the whole experience is that it's written in first person. Now the reason I'm saying this is because of the ending. The ending doesn't make any sense. How can the main character died amd wrote this pasta? That's the biggest flaw of every creepypasta. What I might suggest is to change it to a third person, or like a document. Then, we get a amazing pasta!

If this was in third person, or in document, I would've given it a 8.75/10

But that mistake was too much.

Overall= 6.75/10

Not bad, just needs some tweaking.