Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26694342-20150715012527/@comment-26694342-20150716200928

EmpyrealInvective wrote: Sorry, but even if you fixed the formatting, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, spacing, and wording/grammatical (your/you're, there/their/they're) issues the story still has some pretty large problems. It's very rushed, there's little description, and the story has been covered multiple times before so much that's it's become generic. so someone else did this story this is crazy i worked hard its my first pasta