Talk:No Running in the Hallways/@comment-24281984-20150125182237

This story was good, but a little disappointing. It was pretty well-written up until the climax, which felt rushed and underdeveloped. I would have liked this story to be longer, to expand upon the interesting concept and let the readers get immersed in it before surprising them with a jarring climax. As is, it's a good pasta, but I'd like to see it expanded upon.