Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-28702181-20160609175522

My idea is a story with a humanoid creature as the main antagonist of the story.

Here are my "bullet points" of the story.

- Stories about Aokigahara and a creature who skins dead, or alive bodies and uses it for food, told to the protagonist

- Protagonist goes into the forest

- Protagonist finds the bodies after hours of searching

- Creature "traces"

- Hut (Where the creature "lives" in)

- Protagonist finding the creature

- Fight

- Who will win? (Should I let the creature, or human win? I'm not sure what will be better)

That's the basic summary of the story with how far I am. I came up with it yesterday after watching HoodoHoodlumsRevenge's video about the top 10 worst creepypasta cliche's. I'm also not sure if the protagonist would be male or female.

When I came up with the creature, I kinda thought of the Rake's appereance. So when reading this article, think of a similar creature.

Is the idea good, or should I change it? Please tell me. 