Talk:A Story Told by an Elementary School Student/@comment-5733573-20180527160412

I loved this! Did you actually develop this from an elementary school student's story? If you did, this puts you on par with Alvin Schwartz in my book. Great stuff.

I think there are a few typos, so this may warrant a second pass for proofreading, but the plot and chill factor are certainly there. I also love that it's told from the horse's POV. Nice work!