Talk:I Am a Professional Exterminator/@comment-5733573-20180718153615

Nice. From the start, I thought I knew where it was going, and I was very pleased to find that I was only half right. There were parts of this that came as a complete surprise, so nice job there.

I'm not sure you need the quotation marks, but if you want to keep them, I fixed them up a bit. I would also argue that the story is more effective without the impalement picture, but again, this isn't a big deal.

Overall, nice work. I love the "narrator is totally cracked but such a nice and normal guy" trope. Good stuff.