Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5973399-20150808143449/@comment-28088262-20150808190834

I read that as 'failing', lol. Don't worry, it's not a pun for anything.

The point is that your ending is very unoriginal. There are so many similar twists that end up with the author speaking from the afterlife. If you can't think of a better one, at least put some more description in. What the author is feeling as he is falling is a good one to start with.