Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475253-20151105031857/@comment-27190570-20151111235210

This was really good. I caught a couple of grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing to serious. My only complaint is the he suffers from Asperger's. I know a few people with Asperger's and they aren't the kind of people to off themselves because thier girlfriend wants to break up.

overall: 8/10, fantastic writing, good ending.