Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30741304-20161213135509/@comment-30741304-20161216125917

I thought that, when writing dialog, if the character who is saying the dialog is obvious/evident there was not a need to specify which caracter is speaking? My apologies for that, when I get my next chance to revise this piece I will tie up the unfinished sentences, and fill in the gaps that are lacking.

Thank you so much for your time, and stopping by to answer some of the questions I had. I will come back to fix some of the errors you notated for me, but it might be a few days before I get around to it.

I hope the rest of it explains some of the lack of focus on anything in the beginning, and I hope you enjoy the read.