Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20190103071325/@comment-36393004-20190103234714

BloodySpghetti wrote: Uhh yes... It's a tragic story and a horrific one from the eyes of your character, but to us, it's kind of, well, "figure something out guys.... just place something scary in the blank spaces I had left for you there..."

The devil is in the details, Wizard.

What did the father do when he didn't leave the childs room.

How did he abuse and hit the child

The devil is always in the details. I would have to disagree, sometimes what you don't say is more powerful than any word. I am pretty sure everyone knows what happened when the father remained in the room.