Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44746972-20200205042734/@comment-44746972-20200208000328

Cornconic wrote: It's a nice premise, but I feel as if you could've done more with it. Maybe instead of the story being focused on one singular event, you could tell it as a collection of tales from the perspectives of the workers in the 'steam pipes'. You mention something about a mysterious owner that know one really knows, perhaps that'd be a good starting point? Okay, I'll start working on that. Thank you for your feedback!