User blog comment:Time2Gam3/Creating my new story please help out/@comment-4001425-20120517150400

I wasn't butthurt so much as amused by the numerous bad writing decisions.

Here's some of my suggestions:

1. Like the others said, Spellcheck is your friend.

2. Less is more when it comes to monster dialogue. Avoid "You're next" and other cliches if this next story involves dialogue from the antagonist.

3. Read the good pastas and learn what they did right.

4. Furbearingbrick did a really nice article on cliches that you might want to check out.