Talk:Burā'ī/@comment-27593652-20170226222245

Heck yeah, i found this by the "Random pasta" link, and i'm so happy about it. Loved the story, the plot was interesting the antagonist (well, antagonist in the last paragraphs, at least) had a sad and understandable motivation. The narrating voice is really good, and the writing is pleasing, even if it felt a bit rushed in the beginning, maybe just for my desire to know more.

Great story! 9/10.

Keep it up!