Talk:Drought/@comment-33792842-20171127215031

it's a nice spin on the non-averted end of the world. unfortunately, it has many glaring and awkward vocabulary and vernacular mistakes, as well as hilariously ridiculous real-life consequences. brother yelling out "bullshit" felt silly and broke the flow up to the climax. which kid says "would you like to barter?". what are these, the middle ages? the cartridge getting really hot could've been left out. it almost breaks into that shitty "Lost Silver" territory. otherwise, the plot is solid. it's a 7/10 from me.