Creepypasta Wiki talk:Deleted Page/Jeff the Killer/@comment-24431621-20140117034412

Awkward pacing, terrible transitions, jumps of logic (12 year olds with guns? a 13 year old serial killer? really?) this was simply bad. A middle school fight is going to make you snap? Really? Also, there's a reason we have eyelids, our eyes would become non-functional without them due to them drying out. And it was basically a Joker fanfiction.

Love the image, hate the story.