Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180619073009/@comment-35711173-20180620083416

Jdeschene,

Thank you so much for finding those errors, especially that failed final paragraph. I rewrote it. Your English is better than mine. I can't find the remaining errors.

BloodySpghetti,

Hilda is the name my wife gave one of our dogs, a Doberman Pinscher. I considered naming her Gretchen after a German Shepherd but she's a real doofus who would just lick people. Thank you for the correction.

The local Slavs in Ukraine did get better treatment than Jews. The Nazis only wanted to kill half of them so there would be some left to shuffle and pick cotton for their Aryan overlords. There were even Ukrainians serving in the Nazi armed forces.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ukrainian_collaboration_with_Nazi_Germany