Talk:I Had a Friend Who Lived in the Air Vents/@comment-26399604-20170210173922

This was a nice little tale of a child having to deal with a new baby arriving to the family. It was a fun read with nice pacing and I enjoyed it from the beginning to the end. From the title, I was half-expecting "the friend in the vent" to be something else but I'm glad that it didn't take that route.

I also think that the verbiage of the protagonist (being a child) was done well. Most times, I've seen writers give their young characters words a little too sophisticated for that age or a little too 'child-like'; this was done on a nice even level and wasn't distracting.

Nice job!