Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37197096-20181116050426


 * Hey guys! It's been a while since I last updated my pasta, The Story of Amy Scarlett, so I decided to fix it up a little, continue it, and all that.

Of course, I still suck and am new at pastas, so any help is appreciated. I'm 14 years old, so don't expect me to be perfect please! Thank you for reading.

"Come now, everyone. Let me tell you the story of Amy Scarlett."

It was a long, long time ago, when Amy Scarlett, a young 21 year old woman, married Matthew James. She had married him at the age of 18. Matthew was a nice young man, with short black hair, shiny brown eyes, and a calming voice. Amy loved Matthew very much, and he loved her, too. But everything had changed...

"Honey?" Amy said. "It's time for dinner, come downstairs!" As Matt climbed down the stairs with a glum look on his face, Amy asked him what was wrong. "It'll be on the news tonight. Let's watch it after dinner."

During dinner, all Matt did was run his fork in a circle around the plate, over and over, whispering inaudible things. Amy couldn't put her finger on why, but he's never acted like he is now. After dinner, the couple sat down on the couch and turned on the TV.

"Ladies and gentlemen, in this city a strange presance has been in this town, almost such a possession. We're looking into this currently, but the suspects are-" The TV had been shut off by the ongoing lightning storm, as well as the power. As Amy headed to her room, she saw Matthew grab her shoulder.

"Honey, i'm not feeling too good, you go on to bed." As Amy left to go to bed, she heard a slam downstairs, but decided not to check on anything and fell asleep. The next day, she wakes up and goes downstairs, looking for Matt, since he wasn't in bed with her. He was there, but was shaking near the table, and as she asked him what's wrong, he let out a quiet; "Leave." She did just that, and headed to work.

Amy worked at a small company called SEGA--

''PAUSE! You, the reader, are going to get a hint about why she works at SEGA. And it's not gonna be in the final draft, so listen up! I've been getting into the sonic series recently, and also I thought it'd be cool to be like "Get it? Amy Rose? Amy scarlett-okay." So there's that. Back to the story!''

Amy worked at a small company called SEGA, and was a talented writer and artist. It was just a "normal" day at work, I say "normal" because things went wrong. Coffee spilled everywhere, code for their games was lost, and several employees quit. Due to all this, everyone was sent home early, to recover the lost damage. In any case, Amy went home, worried about her husband in particular.

When she arrived home, it was incredibily dark. While she wandered around, the farmiliar touch on her shoulder was felt, but this time, incredibily harder gripped. The hand threw her down, and she could see a figure with a knife in it's hand.

"Who are you? Matt?" In a deep voice, that not being Matthew's. "Aw, don't act scared, I've been looking for you for a long time." From the shadows came Matthew, splattered in blood, with red eyes. It barely felt like him.

"Who am I?" He asks, basically reading Amy's mind. "Before you married this F R E A K, I loved you more than anyone!"

It was '''him. '''Seth, your childhood friend, who had committed suicide after you rejected his confession. There was a rumor; if you die, you have a 2% chance of rebirthing, but less than 1% to rebirth on earth. He was the first one to rebirth on earth.

"Now then, I have you all to myself..." ''This part is definitely gonna be edited, but im tired, so i'll give you a general ending idea and polish this up in the next edit/installment. Maybe like, the last sentence or two. It's easier to you, the reader, to give me ideas or polishing tips, and easier for me to think about what to do next.''

So...there we are. I bet you're wondering; "How are you a witness? Who are you, Narrator?" To put it simply...

I am Amy reborn. 