Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26572995-20150704172407

A little girl is singing in her room. She loves to sing. Her name was Kirsten. She was only 10, but she was very talented. It was a full of yoj day until her mother entered her room. She was yelling at her.

-Kirsten how many times I told you, there's no singing in my house! It was your last warning young girl!

-Okay mom.... - She said with a sad face. She loved her mom, but not that way, she always took away that thing what maked Kirsten happy. But she had a lovely brother and a father. They always helped Kirsten. Her mother loved her too, but one way she hated her too.

Seven, Kirsten grew up to a beautyful young girl. Her brown hair was over shoulder. Her beautyful glowing brown eyes was the most beautyful thing that the school saw. Her favourite outfit was a brown hoodie with fur on it hood. The fur was hazel. She loved her black pants and her black shoes. She almost wear that outfit everyday. Kirsten was super happy everyday with her friends at her school. Her boyfriend Joshua walked to Kirsten's house.

-So tomorrow right?

-Yes.- Kirsten said

-Bye Kirs!

-Hello Josh- and she walked in the house. It was evening. Kirsten does not liked her mom very well.

-Hi mom..How are you?- Kirsten asked her mother with a trustless look.

-Umm hi honey.. How was it your day?

-Good...-and she walked upstairs to her room. Her father is taking a shower at the moment. Ken, her father was wanted to come out from the shower he slipped and he banged his head to the wash bowl. He broked his nech and his skull. The mirror felt to him. Kirsten heard the mirror fracture and ran to the bathroom. She saw her father with a blooding body and started to yelling.

-MOM! COME! HURRY!- her eyes was full of teardrop. Her brother and her mom ran to the bathroom.

Next day Kirsten was in her room. She was still crying. Her mom went to her.

-Come Kirs we are visiting your father.

-Ok mom..

When they arrived to the hospital her dad was in a horrible status. They went to the room where her father was.

-Dad! - she said - how are you?

-Fine. - he said very quiet. - I just want to tell you....

-What? Dad? Please don't die! Please!!- she almost started to cry.

- I love you Kirs....- And that was his last word. He died.

-Dad...don't you....- and she and her brother both started to cry really hard. The only life force, Ken died. The full of yoj life is ended. Her dad left her and her brother with that bitch. Kirsten at the school started to feel worse and worse. She can't even listen to her teacher's. She was yelling to everyone. She blames everyone for a little thing. Then one day her friends, started to hate her. She went to Sara.

-Hey Sara how are you...?

-Umm Kirsten, we are sorry but, we don't like you anymore...sorry - and she left with her friends. Kirsten lost all of her friends. Her boyfriend Joshua too. He said that he don't want that girlfriend who yelling at everyone and act like a psycho. They broke up. When the class was over she went home. Alone, with no friends. She blamed herself. She think that her dad died because of her. But that wasn't true. It was just a mishap. When she arrived home she ran to her room without a greeting or without a hug. She locked her room and started to cry. She heart that her mother is yelling with her brother.

-Ah I wish that you will die you little fucker!- her mother said with a strange voice. Kirsten was scared because she knew that her mother is that worse to kill her brother. She does not wanted to loose her brother. That will be the end of the world for her. She heart that her phone is ringing. It was Sara.

-Hey Kirsten... I am soo sorry for being mean in the school today... please forgive me.

-Hi Sara. It's okay.. I was the mean not you.. You have to pardon me...... Im sorry too.. still friends?

-Sure, forewa sis. - And the call is end. Kirsten closed her eyes. She saw a bunch of dead bodies and a lot of blood. But the worse was that, she saw herself like she was that who killed all of that people. She had a two bloody knife in her arms. Her outfit was bloody too. She opened her eyes and gasped.

-Is it for real? - she said in herself with a worried voice. - Am I crazy? - But she started to smile. Like a psycho. - No, I'm not crazy. I wont going to insane. I will be alright... - Then she felt asleep. The next day at the school Everyone forms a circle. There is happened something. When she saw that. It was her friend Sara. She get killed. Kirsten felt  disapointed, but that was liveable. That day the school is closed. She went home. When she arrived she saw her brother's death body and her mother with a gun. She felt super sad and angry at the both time.

-MOM!!!! Why did you did that?!! - she screamed when her mother shot her in the right eye. That was the end of her. But not that easy. Three weeks later she woke up in a hospital. She had a knitting in her right eye. She felt a lot of pain but she was alright. The doctor is came in.

-Oh, Miss Wagner this is impossible that you are alive! You almost died dear...Only miracle saved you from the death. Are you feel any better now?

-Umm, yeeah.. I feel perfect...- but that was wrong, she felt dizzy. She asked when she can leave the hospital. But the doctor said her status was not good to move home. She planned to escape this night. But this is not going to be that easy. A little later her doctor was sitting next to her and speaking to her to calm her a bit down. Kirsten said that she just want to go home now. But the doctor said thats not possible right now. Kirsten became angry and hooked up from the bed and knocked over the doctor.

-Wha-what are you doing Missy? You can not be up! - the doctor was scared now, for what will happen. He screamed for help. Nathalia grapped a big knife and said.

-I am not supposed to do this but if you won't afford me home I will kill you!

-Put that thing down Missy! Now! - the doctor was really scared now and he does not know what to do now. Kirsten heard that someone is coming quickly to the room he killer the doctor. The help was here. They saw Kirsten with a bloody knife and a dead doctor they shocked.

-Missy you are insane!- the another doctor said and grapped a knife to protect himself. Kirsten noticed that the room is only on the first floor and the window is open she jumpen off. She was alright. She ran as fast as she can home. She felt a little pain in her arm because the another doctor tried to catch her. But it was nothing to her. She arriver to her house and slowly walked in. She saw a stranger man and her mother.

-W-What? Kirs you are alive? - her mother said.

-How you still here bitch? - Kirsten said with really angry voice. The stranger man said:

-Okay... I won't bother you two ...- and he went upstairs.

-I am a bitch? You are still alive you wierdo half eyed!

-You did this to me mom! Now answer me! How did you still here?

-I hurted myself. The police believed me that the family got attacked.

-You.... I'm going to kill you!! YOU KILLED OSCAR!! MY ONLY FAMILY!!! - Her mother shocked and set back a little. -This is the end for you! - she was just like a psycho killer in a horror movie. Her mother punched her in the face and she fallen down to the ground. Her mother tryend to run to the phone, but Kirsten got up and knocked over her mother. Kirsten clamped her mother's neck and told her:

-What is your last word? You bitch!- then she started to smile. - This is the end for you! - her mother said quietly - Go to hell...

- she almost choke, but Kirsten released her neck and said. -Im already in the hell. - and she stapped the knife in her mother's heart. That was not enough so she stapped again and again her mother. That middle aged women is dead. Kirsten started to laugh like a psycho. She never felt any better than this moment. That stranger man looked to the downstairs and he saw the dead body and Kirsten. He started to scream and tryed to hide somewhere. Kirsten ran after him and grapped her head and banged it to the table. That man fall down to the ground. Kirsten said:

-Whar is your last word? - then laughed even harder. The man screamed louder. -Calm down, this is won't hurt a little. This is going to hurt like hell! HHAhahHAhaHAH- the psycho girl said. Then she killed that man too. Now no one will call the police. She walked upstairs to her room. She saw a photo that depicts her and her brother.

-B-bro...- then she took that picture with her. Now Oscar will be for ever with her. Then someone is ringing outside the door. Kirsten looked out on her window and she saw Josh.

-Ah shit.- she said. She went down and opened the door. -Hi..-she said.

-Umm hi Kirs. I just heard that..-and he notices the blood on her. - What the fuck?? - he said. Nathalia grapped him and pulled in to the house.

-You broke my heart you little fucker! -then she killed that poor boy. She took the dead bodies to the garden and said

-Bye bye little poor sould. HahHAhahHa! - and she set on fire them. Kirsten just watched the fire how it burns, then she went to the kitchen and grapped another knife. Then she left the house with the burned bodies.

No one knows where is she, or is she alive. Some neighbors says she moved to another city some one says she died in the hospital, but no one know that she is the killer.

If you see her you better run for your life 