Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25024572-20150317165623

So I wrote a micropasta involving an idea I had for a bit. And considering how many stories I've Riffed and critiqued, I decided it was time for me to go through the same experience. Here goes:

I never was a big fan of showers. I think it’s because of the vulnerability I feel in there. The feeling that maybe inside or outside is someone who can and will do horrible things to me. I always expected someone to be there. That’s why when I saw the person standing behind me in the shower, I wasn’t very shocked.



So, what do you guys think? Was this story good? Was it too short? Predictable? Let me know so I can make it better. (And yes, I will Riff it when it's perfected.)  