Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190515084101/@comment-35711173-20190521190852

Bloody Spaghetti,

Thank you for your comments. I will have to comment on how to build up the horror. Perhaps my dystopian world is too mild, too close to the world we really live in.

L0CKED334,

Yes, you are correct on that sentence. I changed it. Hopefully that is clearer.

Dr. Bob