Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30959528-20170716195837/@comment-30959528-20170717150352

After taking into consideration some helpful reviews, I have changed some things.

Although not explicitly stated in the first rendition of the story, the streetlights were two eyes. This was why the protagonist knew he was being watched. Since I agree that isn't that obvious I explained it in the new draft.

In some queries regarding the POV changes, the story was originally in third person. When I published the first draft to here I didn't notice that I forgot to change the POV in some areas.

I added a comclusion to the end also.