Talk:Killer Instinct/@comment-24534533-20140716215805/@comment-24595065-20141108024308

Why not? It won't help the author of the pasta at all if you just say, "I don't like it." You should say why you didn't like it. It might help the author on his next pasta if he/she writes another. In my opinion, it was pretty good. Not bad, but not perfect either. There were some parts I didn't understand like how sometimes he/she uses "I" or "Me" but other times he/she uses "He" or "His" but I'm guessing there was a reason to that, maybe it was the Schizophrenia. I don't know. I'm not trying to start a war in the comments or anything. I'm just saying constructed criticism goes a long way. I'd rate it 6/10 Maybe 7/10.