Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31073921-20170125151600/@comment-27905100-20170125153644

This is a little grievance, as I have to go soon, but here it is:

Your writing is very dry. There is extremely little description in it, and this is the kind of story that needs a lot of description. Anyway, I can go into a lot more detail later, but for now, your writing is extremely dry and lacks any description.

Sorry for this being so short, I need to go somewhere really quickly now.