Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26828003-20160331004238/@comment-26828003-20160331125548

Derpyspaghetti wrote: Dude... Making a 4-year-old take drugs then explaining it's a shadow... This pasta is messed up... In a good way

But seriously, this pasta could have taken a whole different direction from what it did. I think that this way, without the murder and kidnapping, it seems a whole lot less cliche and quite a bit scarier.

Thanks! I really appreciate it! However, it was removed for "not being up to the quality standards of the wiki". Where could I be able to improve my story?