Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25422233-20140916031016/@comment-5021425-20140916035615

I don't know. I'm getting a HUGE Abandoned by Disney vibe from this story. The story is wordy and it's very easy to figure out what direction it's going in.

advice is, if you're going to do a formula that's been done before, make up for it with creepy details.

The ending though...idk, it's just so...Creepypasta.