Talk:Out with a Bang/@comment-26568697-20150703102952

Not a bad story. The descriptions are detailed, but relevant. Many other stories have blood in them just because 'blood is scary'.

It's a bit short though, and I find it strange that while specific moments are extensively described, the entire background of the character is barely mentioned. Who are Johnny, and Laura? I would've liked it better if there had been a little more background to the main character in this story. While it might not be directly relevant to the essence of the story, it still makes it easier to empathize with the main character. Now I feel like I barely have any idea of who this guy (or girl? It's not even mentioned?) actually was.

Nevertheless, I kind of like this story.