Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24881886-20140501211340/@comment-24077689-20140506161925

Actually, that's exactly the reason people post here. That's the reason this forum is even here. I've posted my stories here, for that exact purpose. I'm one of the top reviewers here and nobody has ever had a problem with my review style. That's just the way it is. This story could be improved upon. You're not going to be spurred to improvement if I coddle you and tell you that you did a great job just because you tried. Fuck that noise.

I'm unconcerned with your revision. My review is strictly for the original work. I won't give him too much slack over the language and grammar because English isn't his first language. But the story itself has some pretty major problems with it.

It doesn't matter what time of day you write your story in, buddy, because guess what? Most of the stories on this site were written in the middle of the night.

The base premise of the story is fairly sound, in fact, I kinda dig it. The whole thing where it's actually a head. That's neat, it reminds me of stories like The Screaming Skull. Which you'll have to google to find, I think, it's in an old horror anthology I have.

Don't tell me how to review, don't tell me I'm in the wrong because my critique was a bit on the mean side. That's why I'm here, that's my purpose for being on this wiki.