Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-24996913-20151211185218

So I took my time with this one. I read it three times to see whether the people below are justified in their opinions. And I've got to say, I don't understand the backlash whatsoever.

I thought this was a DEFINITE improvement from the original. I was never EVER a fan of Jeff the Killer, and I'm not going to lie, I didn't want to read it because of that. But, because you wrote it and you're hands down my favorite writer on this site, I had to give it the benefit of the doubt.

First off, it's written beautifully. I love the imagery and I love the dialog.

The mom, Sheila... Oh, I hated her from the beginning. A mother more concerned with her appearance to others than her child isn't a mother, and I absolutely wanted something bad to happen to her. The dad, Matt, was the type of dad I despise. One that doesn't stand up to his wife when she's wrong. I absolutely felt Jeff's pain and liu's. They only had eachother.

Those kinds, randy in particular, deserved their own end in my opinion, and that was the only thing I would add to this story. Being a kid that was bullied relentlessly, I could relate to the anger Jeff felt and the betrayal he felt towards his own parents.

This was beautiful work, so don't let anyone tell you different. You made a bland story relatable, and you also kept me on the edge of my seat, craving more and more.

I believe your character development was perfect for this story because it's about JEFF. I believe you gave just enough for us to decide who is good and who is bad. And although Jeff is a killer, I almost believe he was justified. Haha.

Anyways, enough with my insanity. Once more, you've impressed me greatly and I will definitely be reading this again soon. Amazing work!