Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24077689-20140321204230/@comment-24841494-20140404192847

You are an amazing descriptive writer, but plot is your downfall. I just couldn't get into the story. It might just that I have read similar stories, or the way you write, but I can't get immersed. You have a lot of talent though, keep writing. Writing a good story is just as much of a learned skill as writing some great imagery.