Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20150720015632/@comment-26475800-20150720035535

Okay, scratch that. I think I am just going to abandon this one. But just to answer some of your questions, the story is based on a real legend in magic. The Indian Rope Trick is about a boy who climbs the rope and vanishes at the top, body parts rain down and put in a basket to have the boy heal. Some of the stories say the magician climbs the rope and cuts him up because he is mocking him, others say he gets cut up by the Gods who are at war.

That was the inspiration for the story, maybe I could have made it shorter and it would have been better. I may still mess around with it, but I have other things to work on and with there being so many errors, I not going to fix them all right now. I may pick it up down the road when I do a look through all the stories I have on my computer and save what is good and get rid of anything that is just rubbish.

Most of the stories I write aren't that poorly written so I normally don't spend much time on fixing them. If they are it takes a little time here and a little time there until they are workable, but I am over this story now and working on something a little more up to speed for this site.

Thanks for the feedback though.