Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9584883-20141218151039/@comment-4849011-20141219010732

Whoa, don't I get a say in this before you continue? ;-)

The "Scarypasta" made me smile too. It's very tongue-in-cheek, sort of a wink, wink, nudge, nudge to the audience. Chris cracking jokes and interacting with his partner reminded me of Detective Lenny Briscoe (Jerry Orbach) on Law & Order. This has horror and slice of life elements. All in all I think it's a good continuation of what you posted earlier. Here are a couple typos to be corrected. "Looking strait ahead" should be "looking straight ahead" and "heroine overdose" should be "heroin overdose".