Talk:The Open Trunk/@comment-5733573-20180421171934/@comment-35353892-20180421202850

Thank you for the feedback! The mechanical errors were a stylistic choice, I tried to write the narrator with a down to earth feel to them, hence the shortened versions of phrases that they use. I do admit that I have to work on building tension in shorter stories; it's not much of an issue when I write longer stories, but it's something I hope to work on and eventually perfect throughout my stories here on the site.