Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28229401-20160421051427/@comment-28229401-20160422223932

Thank you so much! I appreciate the advice and the pointers! I will be sure to do more proofreading and have a friend go over it as well. I'll weed out some of the information that doesn't add to the story to make it more concise and focus on the things that would be most memorable.

Again thank you so much for the time you've taken to point me in the right direction!