Talk:Hellhound on My Trail/@comment-25340844-20141007151323

What stood out to me about this story is how repetitive it is in places. Some of your various descriptions of the weather, for example, are very similar to one another. This makes the story quite boring to read.

And I agree with Kreeper96 - open-ended stories are fine by me, but this really just stopped all of a sudden with no effort made to address any of the questions the reader might have. Hint at some of the answers, at least.