Talk:New Stepmom/@comment-24996913-20140901085508

I adored reading this. As the below comment states, you wrote this very well and writing it in the help seeking style you did, really intensified the mood within the story. Let's just say... every woman has a breaking point, but this lady... she took it to the extremes. One thing that struck me though was the fact she knew he was shaking with the bathroom door closed? Was he against the door and she could hear it? Of course, a child is going to shake when terrified or in shock, but that struck me as odd. Still, great story and great job with the prose of this pasta.