Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180827215503/@comment-35911608-20180829124407

Quite enjoyable. Building up some interesting mystery, a hunt for the devil sounds cool. This part wasn't particularly creepy or scary, where the first part had an air of paranoia, but I definitely felt it when Brian got to the letter his father had left for him. Maybe this part doesn't necessarily need that factor since it's a series though.

There's a couple of grammar errors in there that you'll want to fix as well. Overall well done.