Talk:The Origin of Laughing Jack/@comment-24201973-20150523173218

Honestly, as a person that feels pain when seeing/reading something being mutilated I felt not that much. I'm suprised nobody noticed the people going missing.

The story is quite long, and I don't think anybody would read it in less than half an hour.

The chair would be dubious with the skull and bones, and gore =/= creepy.

Isaac is     practically a knock-off of Jeff.

Excess gore clichés, woo!

And the list goes on...

An 5.2/10, the only thing saving this is the originality of Jack.