Talk:The Chernobyl Experiment/@comment-26160987-20160218104742

Sudden ending is actually one of the best parts. Although by this point, I think someone in that situation would have shot themselves rather than jumped off a balcony, where they might not die.

The only suggestion would be to include more doubt and lack of lucidity and implication of just how tired he was; the phrasing sounds tired and with so little sleep, people start to not act like themselves. To jump from "to end this nightmare," to "a beautiful balcony" is awkward in mindset.

I actually think the ending is strong to leave it open, to not even describe a death or ready to jump or anything. Much stronger than if it wasn't mentioned at all or if the character died in narration.