Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44778745-20200102183947/@comment-44778745-20200107211138

Yeah i gotta rewrite alot here. And i think youre right about the overusing the popping and breaking. Maybe once or so then i just zoom through the rest as one description like "with every turn another joint twisting and pulling itself loose, another bone splintering underneath my skin." Its the mechanical errors bothering me i really thought I fixed em all