Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29076144-20170602060324/@comment-26425680-20170603081414

The story itself is pretty good, but you have major issues with typos. A sample of your errors is down below, with the corrections in bold. Note that this is only a small portion of what I saw, it would simply take too long to list everything. If you do a thorough clean-up, I dare say that I believe this will pass the quality standards.


 * This was a given as I used guns the least, but it didn’t stop them from laughing when I missed.
 * Sal did some time with us to go on a walk through the woods.
 * The sky became streaked with waves of purple and orange as the sun began to set,
 * But as he turned the knob, flipping thorough the channels, our eyes widened with shock.
 * “We have to go back, we have no idea what’s going on out there,” Rob was sitting on the couch, and frantically looking around at all of us.
 * Not to our surprise, the radio once again only played static after he started up  his truck.
 * The only thing we could do now was wait until her grief left.
 * We were all tired of eating fish that night, and Rob suggested bringing them out and making them over a small fire.
 * Plus, the coyotes had gone silent since the moon turned red.
 * “This sounds crazy, but I think I saw my family.
 * (Start a new paragraph here) “Not a lot, I've been staying up, keeping watch on us.
 * “Alright, tomorrow we’ll head to that convenience store area.
 * Me and Jerry decided to keep our promise of going out and seeing if we could find anyone. We almost had to at this point.
 * “We’ll be back in a few hours, just be careful buddy,”