Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20180423204707/@comment-33904527-20180423205011

Due to a lack of feedback I received on the 3-part trilogy that I submitted to the site, I will be posting all 3 stories on here, the Writer's Workshop, so I can hopefully get some more helpful advice, just like on my other pastas. If this one doesn't make much sense, read the next 2 that I will post. It will become much clearer as the story progresses.