Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20180307152255/@comment-34823985-20180307204532

Ok, so I've read both parts. I'm liking the vibe of this story. This has put me in the mood to read Dan Simmons' Ilium/Olympos series again. I'm definitely up for reading more of this story. That being said, I don't know how many parts to this you intend to write, but it doesn't seem to me like much has happened yet. Hey, remember I said I like your story. This is just reading more like a novel than a short story. Whatever this story turns into and wherever it goes, keep writing it.