Talk:Tobit: The Grim Sorority of Tabitha Shaw/@comment-25148755-20150417181249

Interesting follow up. The character studies and juxtaposition of the two personality types made for a good read.

I really only had one issue with this which was a general lack of polish. There were some misspellings and such throughout and I think you used the word lovely as an adjective three times in the first couple paragraphs. It just seemed a bit rushed. Other than that nice work and I look forward to seeing the confrontation which will (I assume) take place in the next entry.