Talk:Run for Their Lives/@comment-29507836-20160912105321

I edited a few grammatical errors, if you don't mind.

Now, onto waht I think of the story. Your writing, whoever you may be, is splendid. The description is very nice, and the character development is good. The plot twist was expected but executed well enough to cover that flaw. As for the plot itself, I think it is unoriginal and a little bit like torn-up paper put back together again. However, I still think the story is, like I said, splendid. 8.5/10