Talk:7:05/@comment-24365082-20140101090943

Pretty nice story, but like many creepy pastas, it has many many flaws...

Why doesn't he call anyone else for help, why does he deal with everything alone?

What is this supposed to be? Some kind of... time thingy, where he sent himself the messages? If yes, this is somehow the wrong way around... He already KNOWS that his own messages screw him over, why would he still send them? The "discovering of the time paradox" needs to come AFTER he wrote himself the messages. I know it would be weird that he wouldnt realize that he writes the same messages as he recieved, but knowing that the messages kill you, and still sending them to you, is even weirder.

8/10 for being pretty creepy, but having some logic errors like most pastas.