Talk:Hyperion/@comment-24872430-20190704044237

General Quality - 20/25 - Very good work. Very few issues.

Horror Factor - 18/25 - EHHH. It's good! Good build up, good imagery, the skip factor was used to good effect, but I just felt like something was missing. If it were longer, if more time was spent painting a mental picture, it would be higher up.

Lyrical Interpretation - 13/25 - The very basic elements are there, but it just doesn't reach its full potential and exploration in favor of the original direction the writer went for. Commendable in some respects, but it deviates too much for me.

Entertainment Value - 18/25 - Despite the flaws, I was actually pretty drawn to the story. Well done!

Total Score : 69