Talk:The Kiss of Avu N'geelub/@comment-26475800-20160107043949

This was a great story, I really enjoyed the monologue, it was a great way to tell the story. It also left enough of a cliffhanger to ensure that I will read the next installment as well. However, if I was going to nitpick, it would also be along the lines of the ending. I like that you left it so vague, but you also cut it at the most interesting part of the story.

Anyway this was a great story, you did a damn good job.