Talk:Reflect/@comment-5101683-20170210042301/@comment-25458443-20170210052328

The one thing I was worried about most was how little was explained. The thing I struggled with was the inate assumption that the reader would not like it if they were too confused but I wanted the narrator to be completely in the dark and I wasn't sure how to have my cake and eat it too. The thing I tried was to put hints in there so I could maybe lick the cake or possibly even gently carress it, but I didn't want to overdue it and make it too on the nose.

It's good to hear at least that the lack of explanation didn't deter the reader as much as I maybe feared it would. Thanks for the comment!