Talk:Arthur: Lost Episode

I do like the concept in the story. It's just that some parts didn't add up due to some poor grammar in the story, so I fixed it up slightly. If you make another pasta, you should try to make slightly longer and try to add some picture to give the story more credit. Overall, it's a good scary story. 8/10 Joshua Jeleniewski (talk) 00:59, June 12, 2013 (UTC)Joshua Jeleniwewski