Talk:Give It Everything/@comment-25170312-20160701210951/@comment-25170312-20160701214555

Ah, I see. It didn't seem to be that cut and dry. But I think you could also interpret it as the dog being a metaphor for the main character's flaws and/or failings as a father, or even a mental condition. By not giving too much away you created a much more intriguing story than maybe you even intended. I always appreciate a story that I struggle to understand, rather than dismiss because of that lack of understanding. Good job. :)