Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24833538-20150912024003/@comment-24833538-20150915221910

I'm going to put this as a response to both Loki and Nash:

As far as paragraphs I do like to have short paragraphs but I probably could afford to add more sentences per. The indents were because I directly copied it from a word file and didn't fix it haha.

The main character is named Jacopo because I wanted the MC to have a unique name. It isn't a reference to anything really, but if it ends up being a distraction more than anything, I could change it. I will wait and see if anyone else has trouble with it.

I can say that the beginning line "Blue opened upon blue dashed with white" is referencing his eyes (which are blue) opening upon a blue sky, hinting that it's day time with a clear sky with a few clouds. I can also tell you that he is 23 years old and Daniel is his roomate. As far as what happened, you'll have to wait and see! ; )

Hope this clears anything up.