Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25239238-20140731094121/@comment-12626831-20140803163155

I actually liked it. Though it is a bit dissociated (dissociation is good sometimes, but not always) I liked the overall theme and ideas expressed, maybe because I tend to think of them myself. and like others have already said, 'The people that you call “insane” are actually the gatekeepers...' was a strong line. I suggest you to organize it; to make it sound more of a theory, not a mess of ideas. Here is a pasta which may not scare you, but may give you a hint on turning ideas to theories: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_God_Theory