Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28088262-20140704151238/@comment-19977532-20140704165906

WaveDivisionMultiplexer wrote: Actually Freaking Blood's idea doesn't sound terribly good. (Sorry). Giving the nurse a reason to kill him sort of ruins the main point of the story. For a rather short creepypasta, the build up really isn't bad. Adding the bit about the old man being evil actually ruins the build-up, and makes the story bland. seems legit.