Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37482493-20190306030931/@comment-39202917-20190420171947

There are quite a few spelling-errors here, but all of these have been covered above.

My main problem is that there isn't really a purpose here or any reason to keep reading. You start by telling us pretty much everything about the titular "firenewt", but then there's basically no more development after this is over with. Also, the details are weirdly specific for a creature which is supposedly as mysterious as this "firenewt".

I'm also not entirely sure about the "firenewt" itself, primarily to do with the fact that it's a giant newt that carries a "saber" and leaves a trail of fire. I don't entirely know what the desired effect of such a creature is on the reader, but it does sort of seem like a joke.

(If this piece was intended as a parody then I actually quite like it, but in that case, I'm not sure it belongs on this wiki.)