Talk:Make a Liar Out of You/@comment-24996913-20140819031803/@comment-25309182-20140820023258

honestly, this story is a vent of mine based on real life events of the last year. The "Grey Man" is guilt and karma in a sense. he latched onto the main character because the main character was a liar, putting on a false facve, and the Grey Man was there as a way to try to make the character see that they were gdoing wrong. Every time the main character lies, the Grey Man acts like karma by causing some of their lies to become true, which leads to the brother's death.

When the main character slanders their brother and spreads lies, it hurts the brother. The boryher no longer wishes to live, having lost everything. The Grey man makes true what the main character says, relvieving the brother of his life, and making the brother literally heartless.

I kinda wanted to make this longer, but as I said it was a vent. I guess it's just a short lesson of being careful what you say.