Talk:The Doll in the Red Dress/@comment-5733573-20180804171626

This was a fun story. I wonder: did you actually have a teacher that told you something like this? It reads almost like a direct transcription of such a story. It's cool either way. I enjoyed that you didn't take the obvious route and have the doll be in the icebox. Reading between the lines makes the source of the sounds even sicker and more terrifying, so nice job there. Your use of description is also really great and vivid.

Reading through this, there were a few grammar and punctuation errors. I suggest brushing up on punctuation and how quotes are written before your next story. Otherwise, it was very well done and I enjoyed it immensely.