Talk:Dreams of Inheritance/@comment-25941663-20151010215146

This was a nice read. Suspenseful and atmospheric. The ending twist in my opinion wasn't perfect though, but it wasn't bad either. I have mixed feelings about it. I was expecting the figure to turn out to be granny (confirming she was a witch) who would go on to kill/torture/do something bad to the narrator. Maybe that would have been a bit too obvious though.

I would have preferred a twist with the treasure.

Anyway, that's how I feel. Overall, it was very good and creepy, especially for a short story. Well done.