Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27569420-20170404180556/@comment-31477126-20170420181901

I definitely liked what you're going for with this one. I do think it kind of unravels towards the end, the teacher and taylor saying they'll reveal your secret? It doesn't make a lot of sense. Maybe if you built up more malevolence towards Taylor by saying she had a better voice than you or something along those lines. Maybe it's just my personal preference but aside from the teacher it seems like the ghost has not a lot of motivation to kill the others, especially once he realises he is a ghost. Hope that helps!