Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25687586-20141230135657

I never did want to dream this again or have a nightmare,i always dream about Creepy stuff,or some horror thingy,and i always loved it!,but this one Nightmare happened......

Me and my friends were about to enter a super creepy abandoned place that no one has entered yet,When we entered it,some creepy noise started to play,and we said

Me:What the heck was that?

Jeremy:I don't know,how about you Mike?,did you hear that?

Mike:*Shivering* I-i think we should get out r-right now

Me:No!,Don't be a scaredy cat

Then,We explored the place,and the place really looked messed up,but then i realized that sound kinda sounded like a whisper,so i said

Me:Did you guys realize that the sound we heared earlier was like a whisper?

Jeremy:Uhmm,no it didn't sound like a whisper to me

Mike: ....

So we explored more until we found a 2 big rocks with a medium sized in the entrance,so we are trying to sneak up and then we heard someone cutting a meat.

and my curiosity goes all the way up to take a sneak peek.

and then i peeked...............i see a monster like with a human body,and his appearance looks like haven't eaten something for a lot of days and his shirt looks torn up,So...I was so shocked when I see what he is holding and what he is cutting,I saw that he was holding a butcher knife and cutting a lot of human body meat,and then i suddenly stopped peaking and was so afraid,and then my friend whispered to me

Jeremy:What did you see?

Me:Yo,Let's run Outta here!

Mike:Why?

The Monster:*Evil Voice* Don't even bother,You can't do it,all of you will be dead

Then we heard that the cutting sound stopped

Suddenly we were all shocked; so we were now trying to run

We can't say anything but to run so fast,and then we heard the monster is near.

Our andrenaline boosted up so we ran faster than normal,Mike is about to cry while running

So i said "We shouldn't have come here"

Jeremy:You're right

Mike:I said to you!

And then i suddenly realised that I'm the only one who is running now,and i stopped.

I kept asking "Where are they?" and i said "Guys!,Where are you!,Don't prank me!"

and i found their body..................they were dead

and then The Monster is about to attack me and then i said "Fine,kill me,i have no hope now"

and then when he was gonna chop me my dream suddenly ends,and when i woke up

there's a black figure the suddenly leaves,and i suddenly saw,it's like the monster from the dream

From now on i realised that the monster is out,about to kill everyone,even bullets can't stop him

I'm the only one can save them,And Save all of us before we all die  