Talk:Playing with the Wolf/@comment-27007772-20150220195435/@comment-26011836-20150224015328

Oh yeah, i noticed some of the grammatical errors in this story as well but i think they're fixable and I don't feel like they interfere with the story too much except for the "I'm Still Hunger" line. I also find the concept to be rather interesting. I feel like it does a good job of putting a twist on a classic fairy tale by switching up the prespectives and even though I don't find this pasta to be pants shittingly scary, I still like the dementedness the story is going for. Overall, I found this pasta to be a rather decent read for what it is.