Talk:Angler - Horrors of the Battlefield/@comment-35711173-20190523021449/@comment-35711173-20190523053101

You have about two dozen errors in your use of the English language that were detected by Grammarly. In the "free" alerts in Grammarly, two were spelling, one was in your grammar, and one was in conventions.

You can find the "Premium" errors in Grammarly if you have the patience. I will go through the story one paragraph at a time, then one sentence at a time.

You have more errors that Grammarly didn't find. For example, you don't start a sentence with digits as you did in "15 minutes later, Bravo squad reported finding a small dwelling that had been broken into half a click east."

Scribens can find a lot of errors, but it can also cause them if you are not very careful. Never copy back from it into your document. Duplicate the change manually.

Scribens shows twelve run-on sentences as well as an awkward sentence and some other issues. Use the click on radio buttons on the left side.

You will get much better support in the Writer's Workshop.