Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20150728223911/@comment-4849011-20150804232340

What can I say? This was another good one! I liked the youngsters describing their encounter and Kes realizing that the beast described was what she had come across earlier. There's also a sense of dread from the very beginning, and it's attention-grabbing that creatures that we would normally call monsters are so terrified of this thing. As always, I love how you blend the fantasy elements and real-life elements so well (such as having these creatures talk about old comics or mention modern TV shows). At the same time you add human touches and insert factoids such as how kobold children grow their hair.

Also, for the record, the computer game Castle of the Winds portrays kobolds as some kind of dwarfish miner-warriors. I'll have to see if I can find an article.