Talk:Come Out, Come Out, Where Ever You Are/@comment-5733573-20180604170721

It's not a bad story. It's a little rough around the edges, but enjoyable none-the-less. It's biggest problem is the funeral and burial of Rosalie on hospital grounds. These details add absolutely nothing to the story and keep it from being believable. Too a lesser degree, I wish the sentences and presentation were a little more polished. Even with these issues, it's a sweet and kind of sad, if familiar ghost story.