Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26118346-20150613161226/@comment-26475800-20150614070423

I agree with Whitix. The grammar alone made it such a hard read. It seems like English isn't your first language with the phrasing and structure of your story. I have to admit I have never read the Slenderman stories, but I know enough about him to know that you were alluding to him in your story. The biggest problem I have with the story though was the grammar. It was far too distracting, making the reader have to check what he had just read over and over. It was work reading this story. Next time you put up a post read it over at least once before posting it and that would most likely fix some of the biggest problems. Hope to see some more from you though and you should keep working on it.