Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26111839-20150623191924

'''The following story I uploaded and it almost instantly got removed. I've checked spelling and grammar, all is well there. I don't see anything wrong with the 'story' presented. I'm kind of stuck for words. So I come here for advice concerning what may be wrong with it; '''

Dome 001 - 1883 / England - 'Endure'; this has no effect on the occupants, but certain occupants are chosen to carry on the survival on humanity somehow, how they do this is not of 'The Supervisor's' concern.

Dome 002 - 1884 / Unknown - The 'Evo' Acceleration; Evo-13 is placed into occupant's food and drink, speeding up evolution rate by 30,000 times the natural human speed. Occupant's actions and appearance within the Dome are then recorded.

Dome 012 - 1895 / Sweden - The 'COM' Virus; gas is pumped through the Dome's ventilation system causing powerful hallucinations and paranoia. Occupant's actions within the Dome are then recorded.

Dome 026 - No Recorded Date / Australia - The 'Forget-Me-Not' Influence; occupant's memories of the war are wiped completely. Occupant's actions within the Dome are then recorded.

Dome 047 - 1930 / Iceland - The Ideology Principal; specific occupants with different political ideologies, Capitalist and Communist, are selected for Dome 047. The Dome is 'separated' with Communists on one side and Capitalists on the other, however occupants are informed that only one party can have overall dominance of the Dome. Each side is given different sorts of weapons and technologies. No 'Supervisors' are to have power in Dome 047. Occupant's actions within the Dome are then recorded.

Dome 053 - 1935 / Unknown - The Subliminal Modifier; various posters, sounds played through the speakers and films are used to modify occupant's behavior. These are used to make occupants constantly hungry or thirsty, have aggressive acts to others, constant paranoia or/and have the urge to self harm or commit other rash acts.

Dome 071 - No Recorded Date / England - The Era Paradox; occupants are put into a state of being unaware of the year, month, day, hour, minute and second. Occupant's actions within the Dome are then recorded.

Dome 099 - 1982 / Russia - The 'Turning Tables' Affect; events brought into place by 'The Supervisors' which cause occupants within the Dome to lose trust in one another. Occupant's actions within the Dome are then recorded.

Dome 112 - 1995 / America - An artificial environment depicting "normal life" with very obscure changes that suggest it's fake. They will test to see which subjects notice these obscure details.

Dome 114 - No Recorded Date / Africa - 'TDTM'; each occupant is placed into a small, dark room alone with nothing but a red and a white button on a table in the middle. Both of the buttons are marked 'Yes', the red will cause the occupant to live for the rest of their life with The 'COM' Virus being pumped in the room, the white will cause the occupant to live forever through a constant amount of gas being pumped into the room to keep the occupant alive. The occupants are not told which one has which effect. Occupant's actions and appearance within the Dome are then recorded.

Dome 173 - No Recorded Date / Unknown - The 'Correct Perception' Interest; on a weekly basis, each occupant is ordered to come to a room known as 'The Correctional Room', the room consists of a chair, table and TV. The occupant is strapped to the chair, and the eyes of them are forced to watch the screen of the TV. The occupant is in the room for exactly 55 minutes. Once out, the occupant has lost memory of ever being in the room, however their personality has completely changed. Occupant's actions within the Dome are then recorded. 