User blog comment:Banningk1979/Jeff the Killer Re-Write Idea/@comment-25170312-20150918220306

I think we should all discuss how to fix the plot holes. Like how does his face turn white? It obviously can't be from bleach, but maybe we could come up with something that makes sense. We could change the guns to something else and have the fighting less cray cray and out of the view of adults. We could have the parents react like actual parents and the cops act like actual cops. Just some examples. Then we could make an outline of all the changes and people could work together to write it.