Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-4676581-20130412110551/@comment-4676581-20130412155847

TDolphanz wrote: Ok, I looked and this is a bit serious. You're missing or misusing periods, commas, and quotation marks. I can help but I'm not here to fix the whole thing. Expect an edit in a bit, I'm on my lunch break soon. Damn i am bad off ;_: well in that case, do some edits and take your lunch break. if i fail then i won't make another creepypasta instead i will be chatting or particpating in the formus.