Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25418458-20140918045301/@comment-25558572-20140919184151

Tyberzannisultra wrote: Heaven, I've read your story and I must say I am impressed by your originality. The character you've created is both beguilingly intriguing and mysteriously haunting; a combination seldom seen in modern Creepypasta characters. You're story, mainly a description of the Leech, had ever present in it a beautiful yet unmistakable style of writing reminiscent of both French and Italian prose. Unfortunately, as is commonplace with this style, some parts of the story are difficult for the American or Englishman to understand. I've taken the liberty of editing the text, converting it into cleaner, sleeker English whilst retaining your original work of art. I hope you'll find the rendition to be suitable to your tastes. There was no need, at all, to use that kind of sarcasm. Please don't do that again.