Talk:Scratch Marks/@comment-30649724-20161214122017

Meh. Great story, awesome premise, but the ending left me feeling betrayed and angry.

First of all, please do not end a story with "THE END" unless it's a line of dialogue or a place or something along those lines because it just seems so abrupt and ruins the mood of a story. Second, maybe extend the story and explain why his dad doesn't recognize him: had his physical appearance been altered, did the being interfere and erase his father's memory, what happened? While mystery is always a wonderful aspect in the horror genre, making anything so vague leaves much to be desired - mostly answers. Other than that, great pasta!!!