Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25073641-20150514161008/@comment-28365084-20160528000610

It's almost perfect, but don't take advice from me. My only creepypasta got moved to Crappypasta Wiki. A few things though. Shouldn't stuff like [DOOR SLAM] be *Door slam* instead? Also, when the guy is under the bed, the blood on the floor doesn't seem to mean anything. I like to think of Don't Hug Me I'm Scared. The things that don't forward the plot still need to exist, but "then they're was BLOODz ohno" doesn't belong. Basically, If it only exists in the universe to scare, remove it.