Talk:Dogscape/@comment-33904527-20190329221603

This story definitely isn't perfect. The grammar is somewhat inconsistent, it's not very well-specified whenever viewpoints are changed, and there are quite a few notable plot-holes. However, it's still a completely unconventional and mostly well-written pasta, and the terminology and general themes are very well-done. Perhaps with a bit more polish, this story could be a true masterpiece.