Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29454058-20160805085241/@comment-29454058-20160805220413

Markrugman wrote: At the end, I think the guy on TV (I presume is meant to be the captor?) should say something along the lines of - "Hey kids. Don't forget, 'Bad kids don't eat all their greens', and if you want to come and play with me, write to the address below...." or maybe a litte twist with "good kids eat all their greens"... That's literally one of the only parts I can't change as it's a quote from another CreepyPasta, all will make sense if you read my reply to Bandit King Jack (Two replies below)