Talk:Squidward's Suicide/@comment-43584085-20190822090033

My God this story is the worst story i have read in my entire life. But lets explain why i think this story is the literal deffinition of shit.

1) The beginning. Ok at the beggining it automaticly has a cliche. the I was an intern cliche which is pretty self explanitory so after that they do a test screening or something for the fear of the krabby patty and in that paragragh it uses a huge arse coppout by saying " Now, given that it isn't final yet animators often put up a mock title card, sort of an inside joke for us, with phony, often times lewd titles"

2)The Episode. Ok you thought the biggening was crap well this just turns the story into bad into shit. Ok the first bit of the episode is Squiddy boy here doing a concert and then he loses i think, but after that they use the most cliche descriptions in the cliche book "hyper realistic".  Now the second bit is the most distasteful descpription i have ever read in my life ok, after squidward goes home he sits on his bed and cries but its realistic OOOO yeah get out here hyper realism. But then an image flashes on the screen our protagonist rewinds and then we are greeted to a dead child i repeat a dead fucking child in a gorey fasinon to get shock value even though dead children and animals are the worst way to get people to be scared and just comes off as torture porn. Ok sorry i just hate when CHILDREN are exploited for shock value anyway after that another image flashes on the screen of another dead child and then squiddy has red realistic eyes and then heres a voice and blows his head off.

3) The end Well the end is quite short and can be explained as hilenberg gets pissed and the children aren't identified.

So there that is why i think this story is the worst "creepypasta" ever if you want a real lost episode creepypasta go se either dead bart or candle cove. But if you like it its ok because there will always be people who are wro- i mean have different opinions.