Talk:NES Godzilla Creepypasta/@comment-24754078-20141220005210

The creepypasta has a great build, it knows how to make you feel what it WANTS you to feel in the right moment.

The curiosity towards the start and the creepyness in the middle was amazing. The fact it lost a bit of credibility (due to the cliché "lol hell with demons" level) is minimal and I'm not counting it since in this story Red was supposed to be some sort of demon. Then the epicness and the tension of seeing if the protagonist would survive or die could be felt. You did a great job at creating this character and his personality, keeping the mystery uncovered which was the kickstarter for keeping the curiosity in.

I give it 10/10.