Talk:Canis Latran's Jungle Story/@comment-23901932-20140315221701

I haven't read something this scary since "Ted the Caver", this was very scary! However, I dislike it being small, and you only see man-faced twice (Not see, more like feel it's presence). And I had loved the idea of it so much and expected alot of things, including a time in which you would use the bad ass cliche of being badly damaged and rather numb is waling, which puts me in a mood I don't feel very often.

I don't know what to say is bad and good, so I don't know what 10 consists of. If I remove a 1 with each mistake, then this pasta deserves:

9/10

Also, love the badass-ness you made me feel in your potential.