Talk:The Eyes/@comment-24996913-20140831230440

I like this a lot. Interesting concept of a ghostly school full of hanging children that howl. Creepy. That imagery alone was powerful and added greatly to the story. I will say, I think this could become a series of sorts. You could easily make a part two, explaining what the significance of the red eyes happen to be (maybe the protagonist is some sort of clairvoyant and needs to help the ghosts of the hanging children?) All in all, this was a great and well written story. I did see a few punctuation errors, but those are easy fixes.