Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5542146-20181031081309/@comment-5542146-20181102210143

So, basically what it needs is far less detail, which would cut down on the length. I need to give the monsters more personality as well, and write a better ending (I'm not good at endings honestly). Also, could you elaborate on what you mean by "nothing is shown" and what could be done to address the "no creep feelings" or "build up to terror"?