Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27724716-20161113002641

So, this is a remake of my creepypasta "Conker: Fateless," which did not meet this wiki's requirements. So I finally decided to get around to remaking the story, and learned from my last mistake to just get the story reviewed first. So without further holdup, here's the story.

So, I was exploring ebay not too long ago. I was searching for another copy of “Conker’s Bad Fur Day,” as my brother ruined the old one by spitting in the cartridge constantly. I was browsing for quite awhile, seeing as all of the ones being sold were somewhere around the price range of $300. I was just about to give up, when I saw the preview picture of a rather large Nintendo 64 cartridge, of course this caught my eye. I had heard about copies of “Twelve Tales: Conker 64” being like this. The cartridge was blank, but the seller called it “Conker Beta Game.” It was around the same price as all the other games I had previously saw, but if this was in fact Twelve Tales, I could easily, double, triple, heck, maybe even quadruple my money spent.



The package arrived about a week later, my mom had gone to a Parent Teacher Conference with my brother, which meant I got the big TV in the living to play on. I quickly hooked up my Nintendo 64, and put in the cartridge. I turned on the Nintendo, and picked up the controller as I made my way to the sofa. There was no menu or even a start up screen, it just went straight into the game.



I started off as the original Conker, the more cheerful and child friendly one from Twelve Tales and Diddy Kong. Except he didn’t look very cheerful, he looked sad, and frightened. His eyes darted left and right, as if expecting something to pop out from any corner. The setting was much better either. I appeared to be in the Windmill zone from Twelve Tales, except it was night and all the usually dancing flowers were sitting still, staring at the ground.



There didn’t seem to be any objective. I walked around and explored the area. None of the loading zones worked, there was nothing to interact with whatsoever. I mainly just walked around and looked at all the things to look at. But then about three minutes in, the more recognizable Conker, the one from Conker’s Bad Fur Day, came out from a corner looking angry with a chainsaw, then sawed up the Conker I was controlling. After that, he simply said, “Yeah, that’s better.” the game then lead to a simple “Game Over” screen, with an all black background and the Game Over displayed in a simple red font.



I rebooted the game, and walked around again. At first I thought I might’ve triggered something in the game, causing the other Conker to appear. But apparently not, again around three minutes in, the other Conker appeared again and sawed up my Conker once again. I tried other and other, but this ending appeared to be the only purpose for the game. Hell, one of the times the other Conker even came when I sat still the whole time. No matter where I was, where I went, the other Conker always appeared coming out from behind something, and killed my Conker.



<span style="font-size:12px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">This ending simply puzzled me, “What did it all mean? Why did the other Conker kill mine? Why would Rare make this?” These were a few thoughts that swam through my head, then it occurred to me. This game was the end of my Conker, the original Conker, and the start of a new one. <ac_metadata title="Out with the Old Conker, in with a New One. (Needs Review)"> </ac_metadata>