Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180319132312/@comment-34823985-20180321023304

I guess I wasn't too clear that he was seeing things from another plane. I was going for more of a possession type thing. He wasn't crazy until he went into the mental health facility. Not being much of a horror fan means I am going to commit some clichés occasionally. I'm trying to figure out how to write scary. Trying to add another angle to my writing. I appreciate that you read my story. My take away from your comment is that I need to clarify what's really happening to the character. Thanks again for not holding your punches. It infuriates me (just a little), but it also gives me a different view on my stories. It beats 'that's good/that's bad' everyday of the week, so... thanks.