Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30861466-20180505175756/@comment-28266772-20180509153901

This is a shit show of a thread. Saying that can we refrain from comments like the top one. Loolveus has every right to have his story critiqued without being overtly insulted. And considering how upset some people get when their stories are critiqued by others I don't think anyone here has the right to be so rude.

Do not comment on a story if you aren't willing to offer the author ways of improving it.

As for the story itself, Loolveus I respect your commitment to revising the story and working hard to improve it. But you should  bear in mind that this is a learning curve, so don't hold your breath hoping this story will one day be added to the wikia. I think you should take what you've learned to so far and move onto something new. It takes time and persistence, but it's worth it. Every story is a new learning experience and you should embrace the chance to start anew. I look forward to seeing more of what you write, and you should always feel free to message me if you want feedback. I'm not gentle, but I do put a lot of work into my feedback.