Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31608989-20170327015246/@comment-31218306-20170328043416

Something blatantly antagonistic.

XDXDXD Just messing. Please don't ban me. Anyway, Shorty, your story does have great potential. However, I personally feel it's a bit short and unprofessionally written. Grammar and spelling is everything, in my opinion. Your story, while promising, has a lot of grammar sins. It's not *quite* as bad as a number of sad stories I've seen on my travails through the web (some of which are deadly weapons against English teachers), but it's not up to scratch QUITE YET. Just work on it, ok? And go listen to Shakira's Try Everything if you ever get discouraged. :)