Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26210141-20150315210035/@comment-25148755-20150317180334

Decent concept although it won't really work until you get us all the way to the end (since you've already told us the ending, it doesn't make a whole lot of sense yet.)  My main concern is that you are trying to equate dreams with imagination...daydreams sure, but imagination implies a certain level of control whereas the whole notion of waking up means that it was your subconscious mind acting. That's to me any way.