Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35911608-20181127145453/@comment-35911608-20181127153850

L0CKED334 wrote: Ok, I did not see any glaring issues with the story itself but I will take another pass over it. I do love the idea you have here and it makes you think. This is just as plausable as any other legend about Father Christmas, which makes this whole thing even better. Good work. Yep, go right ahead. I'll take any amount of review to get this story right. Thank you very much