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 * -|Top Nine Pastas I've Read=
 * 1/ Finally Awake (By Kyoketsu)
 * Scare Factor94Transition91Composition84Description96Conclusion90Overall91


 * 2/ Ad Nauseam, Ad Mortem, Ad Infinitum (By EmpyrealInvective)
 * Scare Factor88Transition86Composition97Description91Conclusion93Overall91


 * 3/ Numb (By Bipolaroid)
 * Scare Factor94Transition87Composition84Description96Conclusion89Overall90


 * 4/ Innocent Souls (By DEFSeattle)
 * Scare Factor95Transition88Composition99Description89Conclusion78Overall89.8


 * 5/ Flower Eyes and Needle Teeth (By Hopefullygoodgramar)
 * Scare Factor76Transition92Composition92Description99Conclusion90Overall89.8


 * 6/ I Think My Son Is Going to Kill Himself (By SamMurduk)
 * Scare Factor90Transition93Composition91Description84Conclusion91Overall89.8


 * 7/ Patient Zero (By GarbageFactory)
 * Scare Factor87Transition97Composition85Description84Conclusion93Overall89.2


 * 8/ Nana Razor (By Booboofinger)
 * Scare Factor84Transition92Composition97Description88Conclusion84Overall89


 * 9/ Scenes from a Metropolitan Garbage Truck (By Mystreve)
 * Scare Factor87Transition92Composition95Description85Conclusion86Overall89


 * 10/ The Baseball Boy (By Robotkat)
 * Scare Factor93Transition84Composition87Description92Conclusion89Overall89


 * 11/ Out with a Bang (By XanCrews)
 * Scare Factor91Transition93Composition88Description85Conclusion88Overall89


 * 12/ Comfort in Numbers (By TerraRow)
 * Scare Factor93Transition91Composition85Description95Conclusion78Overall88.4

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 * -|Rating Info=

Transition A general assessment of the pace, timing, and sentence flow. Missing context will negatively impact this rating.

Composition While figuring this rating, I ask myself these questions: Is there realistic concepts/events? Do they fit in with the storyline, or do they seem out of place? Are they distinct? Do they draw interest?

Description A measurement of how well the characters/events are described. Going overboard in imagery (commonly, with adverbs) will negatively impact this writing. Not giving enough details, when not leaving suspense, will negatively impact this rating also.

Conclusion How the conclusion fits with the rest of the story. If the ending is too abrupt (as many are), predictable, or drawn out, that will negatively impact this rating. Edit Count Inquiry These are just the ones made by me. There's more writing advice at Project:Writing Advice
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