Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25067835-20140617055617/@comment-9967354-20140617150618

If the diary entries have been written by the (spoiler alert) ghost to record how he stalks this person, why is he (or she) expecting the person to be able to read? Why is he apologising for writing rude things out of anger?

The story itself? I think it's not bad. Maybe you'd want to be more subtle when you hint that the writer of the diary is a ghost. That way it's a bit of a real surprise when the exorcist shows up at the end. I like the fact that the story can get to the point without sounding abrupt or absolutely rushed. And that story creates a bit of a plot with disjoint scenes, because diary entries tend to do that.