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Ewan Lund wrote: Do think I should cut down on the fluffy stuff

Depends on what your definition of fluffy stuff is. You spend a lot of time building up the scenery/environment, but don't devote a lot of time to descriptions. A majority of the horror in your story occurs in the last few paragraphs rather than building it up throughout the story.