Talk:Blue Tears/@comment-35165020-20180418163825/@comment-27104809-20181126022602

I was about to write a similar comment, but since you've already stated most of what was on my mind, I have to say I agree with all of your points. I'd add to the cliches the typical pokemon tower/lavender town, which is present in nearly every creepypasta.

Also, I have an issue with how the game literally plays itself. So the player watches for what, 15 straight minutes as Blue walked through the maze by itself? How he deprives the player of control no more than a few seconds after he regains it (and all he does is open the item menu) and 'equips' itself with the knife and 'battles' Red on it's own? Hacked game or not, the "I couldn't control it anymore" was overused, and it sounded much more like a video than an actual game.

And honestly, NOTHING that happened in this so called game was even remotely scary, so I really don't get why the player is so terrified, nor why he forces himself to listen to a loud song with his headphones on instead of simply lowering the volume, since apparently his gameboy is so loud that it can disturb his entire house. Does he and his family live in a car or something? Maybe in a box?

Truth be told, I see no redeeming qualities anywhere in this story. The plot was bad, the ending was terrible, nothing mindblowing happened and the player being a massive pussy all the time annoyed me beyond words. I don't know why I've read the entire thing, and I wish I could say it was worth it, but I'm not lying when I say this was a waste of my time. I hope whoever wrote this improves their writing skills and tries rewritting this, or comes up with something readable in the future. I didn't see the connection with another creepypasta that you mentioned, maybe because I didn't read it. Even so, this story is bad, to say the least.