Talk:Bumblebee/@comment-9846738-20140210002610

Although this story started out interesting and kept some sort of suspense over the time reading it, it ended with too many questions unanswered.

(at least for me) it was perfectly clear pretty early on that Bumblebee was dead and/or got killed. I'd guessed her murderer would have been someone from the bar who supposedly knows the pasta's protagonist and managed to get away with everything by making him to be the suspect.

But were the last few sentences (i.e. "It was such a pretty dress....") suggesting the protagonist himself to be the murderer? I mean that wouldn't make any sense at many points, like the SUV moving away or the Snapchats in the park, or was it supposed to be some Fightclub-like Multiple-Personality-Disortder thing?