Talk:09/17/10/@comment-26543484-20150630100225

Wasn't bad but here some things who bother me a little

-First of all, if the guy was so relieved of being rid of that computer, maybe it have been more intriguing if he had sold it at a very lower price, or even better if when he came to buy it he didn't had enough cash on him but the guy sold it anyway, like in a hurry

-here is what bother me the most... the camera. It was like someone had to handle it because, how it could just shut down when the stalker is away of it and then been back on recording mode, when nobody was even close to the truck when the person came back... Did i missed something and someone else was there? If yes, why the camera was laying on the floor of the truck then?...

And i've could really enjoy more details at the end or something who don't seems like it had been written in a rush to finish it.

However, i still give a 5/10 to it, because the plot, even if it seems a little cliche, was nicely intriguing and easy to read.