Talk:One Second Before/@comment-26399604-20160321161822/@comment-24859608-20160322140039

@Vingel,

So do you think I should separate the two, because I've already got a good idea with that. Sort of looking at it as an indirect comparision...Separating it properly. I'll fix some of the incoherency, because it throws you out of the story...Especially considering that I'm trying to be deep, not necessarily terrifying.