Talk:Operation Stingray/@comment-30898741-20161230164403

This was terrible. It sucked. This was a clusterfuck on a page and it presented very little. There were quite a few plotholes that were sloppily patched, if patched at all. There are so many places this pasta could have gone if the author had any writing skill besides knowledge of a few big words. Back to the plotholes part, LaFarge said the rays have a range of a few hundred feet. Then later, he said the user of the ray needs to be in close range for then ray to work. A few hundred feet is very fucking far. .5/10