Talk:Tobit: Theory of Two/@comment-24996913-20150903190436

Seriously, I'm sure you're getting tired of me saying to you that your work is amazing. I'm actually upset it took me so long to read them, lol. Well, as usual, I couldn't stop when i started. Derrick is like someone I know. He almost makes me want to be less confident/cocky and avoid any impending doom awaiting me. Haha. I actually love the development with the other scientists like Alenns. I wasn't sure where that character was headed, but I had a notion he would be in the background mostly which was incorrect. I do like all of the action taking place. Usually I get exhausted when I read stories that seem to have many points of interest, but you wrote it so fluidly that my brain didn't check out after a few minutes of back to back activity. And because I seem to be the only person that loves the dark diagologue between a few villainous characters, I will say that I think you did amazing in that respect. Lacy is so love-able to me, which may sound odd, but she honestly livens up things, even though she's pretty damn crazy. Once again, I will end this by saying this was an excellent read and I will be continuing with the rest soon after. Give me a minute to soak this all in.