Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25132122-20140715045107/@comment-25148755-20140715053211

Yeah, like I said, I think the idea itself is classic ("The calls are coming from INSIDE THE HOUSE!!!!).  All horror requires some suspension of disbelief, obviously, but if it is too much it'll be distracting.  My personal opinion is you need something more there...like if Francis watches for so long he eventually starts to nod off and the man is gone when his eyes snap back open.