Talk:The Tale of King Ramses/@comment-6293335-20151211183239

The idea behind the story is good but I would recommend you to edit and revise some parts. I would have been better to say that the episode was based on a series of strange events that surrounded the discovery/disturbance of Ramses' tomb (something like the stories about King Tut's curse). I like how you are saying that Ramses was a real pharaoh who had a cursed slab but I think the story of Ramses needs more too it then what has been stated. Also, instead on claiming that the episode was an exact retelling of an actual event, say it was inspired by a event that would later insflunce the episode. Overall, its a fair creepypasta.