Talk:Skype/@comment-4510818-20150219021451

It's good to have a description of your killer, but better still to have a more original killer. The mask was a nice touch, but the outfit seemed unnecessary, especially without further context. What, am I supposed to use my imagination?

Aside from that, this was pretty good. It would have been nice to know what was in the envelope. I actually enjoyed the ending. I think it's better to leave some mystery than to ruin a potentially good story with a shitty ending. This is something incredibly easy to do. While I wools have liked to know more, I'm also grateful that the whole thing wasn't butchered by the last few paragraphs. Again, this is a disturbingly common phenomenon.

It wasn't badly written, and the killer was the only unbelievable part. It seemed a fairly realistic story other than that: Watching someone get killed over video chat is probably one of the worst ways to watch someone die.

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