Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25899303-20141220153848/@comment-17385488-20141220182815

To be honest here, Grizzly and Syko are right. The story is impossible to read due to the amount of atrocious grammar mistakes that you made while writing. Also, you don't need to throw a temper tantrum when we are giving you constructive criticism on what you did wrong. Yes, the story has a long list blacklisted subjects. Yes, I do understand it is your first pasta, but that does not give the excuse for saying that we should "fuck off" just because we didn't like the story and to cover up the fact that the story is unreadable in the simplest sense.