Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25418786-20140915092409/@comment-25170312-20140915235327

I'm guessing this is just the beginning. Here's what I think so far:

1. "I regret splurting those three words from my mouth" - I assume you mean "spurting". Also, all they did was tell you that they can't tell you. Why do you regret asking? They would need to be saying something shocking or horrific after you say that for it to make sense. Plus, if they weren't going to tell you, then why mention anything at all? To scare you? Bad parenting if you ask me.

2. "As I turned my head I saw....nothing. Absolutely nothing. I was so angry at my parents, they made me scared of nothing!" - This makes no sense. So you turned around and there was nothing, and that means nothing has been following you? Seriously poor logic.

3. "They probably didn't want me to go outside because they were jealous of me wanting to hang out with my friends instead of them." - Again, this makes no sense. Parents aren't like this. They either want you to leave the house so they can have some peace and quiet, or they want you to stay home and do your homework and keep an eye on you, etc. It's rare that they would be jealous of you hanging out with friends unless they are having mental problems.