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SoPretentious wrote: As for what Guy said, I didn't know it's a rule to identify the speaker in dialogue. Now I do.

My last example may be wrong, so I'm taking it off of the OP. I was trying to demonstrate a list sentence which identifies the speaker, being separated from the commas in the quote.

And here would be an example of breaking dialogue into incomplete sentences for effect: (this one I believe to be correct.)
 * "In. Your. Dreams."

As Guy said, that depends on the stylistic choice.

I've made some edits to change the post. Is there anything I missed?

Do you want me to take out the last part entirely? Because I will. I just believe the remaining example is correct. I may be wrong.