Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35911608-20190508225431/@comment-35911608-20190510183307

-- ABOVE IS FOR DRAFT 2 -- Note: to those who have read the previous draft, the story is the same up until the Saturday morning section, if you want to skip to where changes were made. For those who did not read the last version, I still have that version saved, so if you wish to see that draft, let me know and I will send it to you. Thank you for reading, and I look forward to your feedback.