Talk:BEN Drowned/@comment-3541151-20150209125236

The famous/ infamous BEN Drowned. A BIG one, a story that dares to push the envelope with video games being scary, and to think this was pre-FNAF. Ha Ha! In your face Freddy! You overrated sack of...

I digress.

I'll admit, this one was pretty scary. Well... that is the "Footage" is scary. Any credibility the story is given is due to the efforts of the video more than the writing itself. And due to Creepypastas being "Literary Art", I'm gonna have to deduct points, rather than give them.

Now...


 * BOOM!

Did-?! Did one of you fuckers throw a grenade? LOOK! If you want me to rate the video game footage, I'll do it, but I'd have to do it seperately-

Audience:YEAH!

OH MY GOD...

Looking at it without the charm of the videos...

Well it's unique... at first....

The story's MYSTERIOUS....at first....

It keeps your attention....you-see where this is going.

AT FIRST it's fun and inventive, even if you don't understand the references.You can pick up it's a demented video game that has nothing right about it, and it's evil prescense shows more to it. So at first it's a great concept, the unkknown and the statue are embodiments of Ambiguity, and I think THAT'S what the story is about. And that was really fun ... at first...

The story becomes WAY arrogant of itself and ends upwritibg of BEN more as a jerky older brother, than a villain!

The mysteries are thrown away by the midst of the arrgance, and ignorance and it's replaced for tedius reading. Ben's more interested than teasing the main character...

Oh! Because he's a kid... Wow. That's... that's actually brilliant! And because it's so subtle, you don't get that the first time reading. In the end, doesn't that make up for the stale second half?

No, no it doesn't. 6/10