User blog:Arrownin/Second Story; My Second Day of Pasta-ing

Just finished my second story for the wiki! Hopefully I can improve a lot more in my writing, it would be great to start making stuff that my friends would know about in the future and I can say that I wrote it. (They can promptly say that I'm a dirty liar and that I am going to hell... lol). Any critque is accepted, and I love to get feedback, it will definently help me improve. Thanks guys!