Talk:Atrophos/@comment-25471033-20181219194759

This was a pretty neat pasta. It utilized the Greek or Roman (I don't remember, even though I just googled it) myth, but it wasn't in an obvious way. I had to look it up because I was pretty sure the title had something to do with it. The concept was pretty cool, but it was lacking a creepiness to it. Maybe if you could somehow mention that she was going to be cutting his string sooner rather than later or something. Overall, it was pretty nice to read and wasn't too lengthy, and I'd say it's worth 8.5/10