Talk:Bottle and a Gun

First, wow. Being a former fan of Hollywood Undead until they became sell outs, and a fan of Deuce and his newest album, I am displeased.The story had good details but the plot was terrible. As a fan of Deuce I feel like you were making fun of him the whole time. I read half the story and hated it. Making fun of anyone in a story ruins it and I am sure not many people will like the story as if they are fans of Deucen they may feel as if you we insulting him. Write better things not about real people.Charles Elliot (talk) 00:55, September 10, 2012 (UTC)