Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5100161-20140728125526/@comment-9967354-20140728135922

1. There's barely any difference in the contents of any lost episode pasta and 'hijacked episode' pasta -a term I just came up with. I'm pretty sure this is still against the rules.

2. You've got some issues with your tenses. Sometimes you narrate in present; sometimes you don't.

3. The story isn't very well written, sorry. It's mostly just a character dying and screaming whyyyy, etc. It's a bunch of clichés.

4. You do not need to use so many ellipses and caps to express yourself. THIS DOESNT MAKE YOUR POINT ANY MORE CLEAR......

5. Your expression will probably qualify this for deletion if the blacklist doesn't.

Sorry for being harsh; I'm just being honest here.