Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475253-20151016111637/@comment-27008899-20151016222019

It is a good story but there is a problem. There are literally dozens of pastas already posted as well as on youtube about this subject. Combune that with the movies The Tooth Fairy and Darkness Falls, I dont think it has a chance. Keep the premise, change your title, maybe eliminate the fact it's the tooth fairy all together and I think it may make the cut.