Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20150305035847

This is an other story ii tries in my own language i hope no errors is found.

This is the story of a little boy named Joseph he lived with his two parents in Louisiana, this district had inhabitants of all the colors they rather get along well, Joseph and his parents live in a beautiful Victorian house near the lake. Then, one night Joseph had to go to sleep in his room, when he is finally in his bed and when he is lined, he fell asleep nevertheless during night something woke him(it) an unbearable smell made him go out of its bed and goes to see where it came from.

While he walked, the smell became stronger, when he arrived in the lounge, he saw a man or rather a teenager dressed in clothes of 1930, Joseph sees that the boy is stained with blood and had a nasty look, the little boy was very afraid and shouted having this boy to approach him. His parents were awake and found him in the lounge in tears, " Joseph, whom do you make there? ", the terrified little boy answered by crying, " I saw a boy, he was Afro-American and he was quite full of blood ".

His parents looked at him and say to themselves that he had doubtless had a nightmare, " Joseph, you only made a bad dream it is everything ", the little boy saw that his parents did not believe it, " I swear to you, there was somebody ", his father got angry and said, " Joseph there is nobody in this house, returns to tone and fast ", the little boy returned to his bed, but had difficulty falling asleep again this night.

For days Joseph had many difficulties to the school and he did not manage to sleep during night for fear of being able to meet the boy again. He knew well that nobody would want to believe it, all weighed that he had dreamed. Once again Joseph is woken by the same smell, he goes out of his room to go to see, the boy was in front of his door with a knife in hands, his parents took out of their room and found the boy in a corner and saw the knife on the floor.

They know now that something its in this house, " Joseph, tell me it is not you who took this knife ", the young in tears answered, " no, mom it was the boy ", the parents seeing that Joseph is terrified. Nevertheless, they never heard about ghost, in this house. While Joseph left for the school, his mother spanked the household in the cellar, when found old newspapers, speaking about a family Afro-Americans has been killed in the house.

After this discovery, she shows the newspaper to her husband, who cannot believe it. "How is it possible?", Says the terrified mother of Joseph, "I do not know!", says the father, he called the owner, who tells him everything and says to that they fast have to leave before a disaster arrives. But, the father of Joseph wanted all the same to spend one night in the house.

The night, when all sleep, the parents of Joseph are finally woken by a teenager's nasty laughter and a terrible smell. When they went out of their room, they discover with horror the ghost of the dead boy, he had taken hostage Joseph with a knife under the neck. The mother says then, " Get away from him, you monster ", the parents jumped on the ghost trying to catch the knife, but Joseph had been killed in the altercation. When the police arrived, they discovered Joseph's body and stopped(arrested) the parents, who left for the asylum knowing that the ghost would wait for another victim. 