Talk:Wednesday Night/@comment-26030957-20150711223625

Thanks for that fun read, Grim. You write with a very clear, fluid and smooth prose.

Was the name Bolinski supposed to represent or bring to mind the great drunken-asshole writer Bukowski? I thought for sure the end of the story was going to be a million drunken mourners coming to the bar to lament the loss of this great poet and writer and Christian realizing he had just murdered this famous luminary of the literature world. It's kind of a crazy coincidence that I read this just now because I was thinking about changing my profile picture to Bukowski! What an ugly mug, yet he still had a girl fan army. Maybe there's hope for me yet. lol. I love Bukowski's work but every time I read one of his books I end up going on a bender so I have to be careful.

One little thing. "Alright" is not technically a word, and any real editor is going to make you change it to "all right". It's kind of a pet peeve of mine actually. I didn't change it because I didn't want to put my dirty, drunken fingers on your nice story, but if you want to look professional, always use "all right".

Hey, did you listen to Burroughs' Thanksgiving Prayer?