Talk:Documented Insanity/@comment-24166078-20131114110941

I felt the build up very much, but kept waiting for the suspense to lead to something. It just kind of ended without resolution or big finish. You alude to the fact that the friend Henry may not be who he's supposed to be, but I wish you'd gone just a little bit further with it. Well written and lots of good detail! Liked it. 7/10