Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20180622074808/@comment-35911608-20180622121344

BloodySpghetti wrote: So this a Psychopath story, sure, it has a ring of Bundy to it but it lacks most of the stuff that makes a Psychopath so dangerous. I suggest you look at interviews by figures like Ted Bundy, Paul Bernardo and Edmund Kemper to see what I'm talking about.

Pay attention to their behaviours, the way the speak, the things the say.

Then come back with a better refined lead that could lead you into a better told story of a Psychopath.

It is far more than just "I have no feelings, and I can't control urges"

Yeah, I forgot to make note of that. It was a good STORY imo, but it wasn't that scary