Talk:START TRANSCRIPT/@comment-4470175-20160807020115

First thing, great concept. I've never seen a creepypasta displayed like this before, and I like it. This layout seems to have the potential for something truly scary. However, I'm afraid that's where all the positives end, as nothing really makes sense. Why did James want to communicate with this machine? How did he get access? What on Earth is the machine saying? And most importantly, what on Earth does the ending imply.

An amazingly original concept, overshadowed by the convoluted plot.

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