Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27675561-20170102062555/@comment-27675561-20170103073419

Resdraon wrote: pathetic

Well, seeing as you called me pathetic because you didn't think I could and ole' Empyrealinvective up there deleted my reply, I made revisions and fixed some plotholes and revised the story. Still based on a true story. I added more to it to help it feel complete and hopefully not boring.

Thank you for your input, any more that you may have is certainly appreciated. Even if it's in your Gordon Ramsey style.