Talk:Dry Eye/@comment-7673575-20180718170235

This was... different

Use of silence - highly underused. Silence is a plot element, but here it seems as important as what brand was Samantha's phone. However, that which has been used has a certain impact, which cannot be over looked - 60 points

Originality - once again today, I'm taken aback due to originality I've witnessed. I mean, sure, I've seen some vague similarities to other works, but those are negligible - 100 points.

Fear factor - kinda lacking, really. The paranoia when Samantha starred being haunted by the Leejun (I'm calling them like that: deal with it) was good, but the fear was otherwise intangible. I don't even know what I'm supposed to be afraid of here. The happy ending was nice, but it left me on half the spear - 50 points

Bonus points - Happy ending, yay! - adds 10 points

Malus points - Samantha is so damn annoying - removes 10 points

Serious Bonus points - the judging system is too vague to this story justice: it's really well written - adds 10 points

Final Score: 220/300 (73.3/100)