Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20181027034711/@comment-9041013-20181030131951

L0CKED334 wrote: It was less about shooting corpses and more of the fact he did not think the boys who beat him up deserved to die then be desecrated in that manner. He needs to be a leader and a survivor but he's still trying to be human. It's a tough balance, I know but it's coming. I appreciate you reading though. It still comes back for me to the point of him being too innocent, him not wanting the boys to die is good, but him still caring about values like "honoring the dead" is well less good, it just shows how much he still cares. It's unusual really in his case. You keep on mentioning how he cares about Colin and all that stuff but on the other hand, he seems to be like the regular kid who had never been exposed to anything traumatizing. It's a tough balance but there is something off to a person who's had that kind of experience.