Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5952769-20171116113024/@comment-24101790-20171208132353

Floyd Pinkerton wrote: Thanks for the critiques. They're both helpful.

You pointed out shifts I hadn't noticed in the style of writing. It's always difficult to write in a different "voice" without reverting to my normal style.

When you say I should include "a little bit more on the giants," do you mean more backstory, or more manifestations?

I meant more in backstory to tie it to the events occurring within the plot. If I were looking to make an addition, I'd probably do it here: "It makes sense though. The tribe that used to live here believed their ancestors were Giants." by adding a line or two just to flesh them out a bit more.