Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27611245-20160114215844/@comment-24101790-20160114224349

XEmoPrincessx434 wrote: So should I correct all of the errors and try making it longer???

There's a bit more wrong with it than that. It's a fairly cookie-cutter story that really does nothing beyond its original premise so it really doesn't engage the reader too much. Additionally, since we have multiple types of these stories on the site already, it really needs to be well-written or creative to get out of the shadow of the others.