Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25114042-20140702211801/@comment-28088262-20140702213801

Oh it's you again, ^_^ haha

I think it's a good poem, however it lacks plot and as Cassist said, poetry is a difficult way to write in. I didn't find it too scary, so I would suggest that you develop the storyline more. Good job, glad to see someone writes for fun rather than trying to get loads of comments on pastas!