Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25259255-20140803175352/@comment-25259255-20140805033348

Thank you very much. Just needed my weaknesses pointed out to me here. I'll keep practicing, as this is the first story I have jotted down in a very long time. In future, I'll work with something a bit more interesting than me playing a game and having being popping out. I thought some place were indeed a little bit weak or plain, as while I do enjoy reading horror (I do love HP Lovecrafts' works), I have little to no experience with writing horror stories up.

Thanks again!