Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30771515-20170123074702/@comment-27905100-20170206040946

Hey, Reary. I've been wanting to review this for a while, so first off, here's my promise.

Secondly, with the dates, I could show you a lot of ways to make it so that they don't appear in a black box, if you want.

Anyway, I'll make a review below. I'm sure it'll be fine, though. You're a really good writer (if I were you, I might start omitting the workshop phase, bit by bit, or even altogether).