Talk:The Sweet Shop

Facinating!
What I really liked about this is how you molded it with classic history, making it a Nazi based idea really brings realism to the pasta, realistic pastas don't need to have some kind of entity to be creepy because people can be just as frightening and well Nazi's were terrifying from their era. As usual your descriptions are great which really well sets the scene, the pasta is highly well written to a great standard, I like the twist although I'll be honest, I did kinda see that coming ;) I also noticed you used flicked between using mum and mom, so I suggest you pick one :D  A. Nightfire (talk) 19:25, June 3, 2013 (UTC)