User blog comment:HumboldtLycanthrope/The 666 word pasta write off!/@comment-24101790-20160408002601/@comment-24101790-20160408170343

My big issue is execution. Stories I write tend to be on the longer side and I tend to be pretty hyperbolic so the likelihood of my protagonist spelling his own doom would come pretty quickly. This was actually a premise for my short stories, but the premise is hard to enact and would end up limiting what little writing talent i actually have. Thanks for the feedback, I'll try to look over your story later today and give a response.