Talk:Spider Cannibals/@comment-26856830-20150806055528

The title doesn't make any sense. The creatures would have to be eating each other to make them cannibals. A more appropriate title would be "The Killer Spiderman Goblins from Hell". And why is there an entry entitled "Sunday, 20th January 1998"? Is the kid a time traveler? I'm pretty sure he got the diary in late November of 1998. He also should've just taken pages from the back of the diary to cry on like a baby instead of from the middle so he doesn't screw up the timline like an idiot. Even when he tries to explain the lost pages he gets the day wrong. He says it's Friday the 19th when the header clearly says it's Saturday the 19th.

At the end when there are no obvious human remains it makes me think that the campers turned into the monsters, which would be kinda cool maybe, but I don't know how that would work. I could read the sequel and find out, but nah.

Overall the story was boring and not scary. 9.4/10