Talk:Do Try

A fantastic pasta. The sentence structure is repetitive, but that actually adds to the tension - the narrator has very much a one-track mind, and whatever that mind is set on at the moment is all that matters in the universe. This. This. I need this. No, that. That. That. That. The description of the first high is wonderfully intense, because he talks about the experience throwing each of his senses - not just in one way, but three, four, five - into terrible confusion.

Blindness is a hell of a drug. Javer80 06:55, August 29, 2011 (UTC)