Talk:Wear/@comment-26030957-20171101173218

WEREWOLF CONTEST SCORE RESULTS:

An interesting and surreal story that takes a very thought-provoking look at the nature of shapeshifting.

NARRATIVE HOOK/INCITING INCIDENT: This would be finding the dog and meeting the strange neighbor. I think it would have been much more effective if done on the first page, or maybe even the first paragraph or first sentence. It’s pretty buried and doesn’t happen until the fourth page. 8

ORIGINALITY: The concepts were actually quite original and not cliché or stereotypical at all. 9.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: Pretty well-rounded characters. 8

DIALOGUE: Some nice little exchanges in there. 8.

EXECUTION: If felt the story could have been gotten to earlier. Parts felt a little rushed and awkward. But there were no noticeable spelling or grammar mistakes. 8.

ENDING: It felt a little rushed. But I loved the strangeness. Great last line. 8.

OVER ALL CREEPINESS: Some pretty creepy stuff in there 9.

TOTAL SCORE: 58 out of 70