Talk:Too Much Snow/@comment-35071950-20190917023456/@comment-35071950-20190917042938

The story itself is good, it's just that there's not enough detail at parts. I found myself wondering throughout the story whether the game was 8-bit graphics or 3d graphics or what. There just should've been a liitle more detail when it came to the appearance and nature of the game.

Well maybe it was necessary given that line, but I still think that the story would be creepier and less-cliche without that part. Like, perhaps as if the video game is haunted and depicts the death of a real girl who was killed by the "Snowood Hobgoblin", instead of a manifestation of a hobgoblin that kills people after they play it.