Talk:Brother's Treasure/@comment-24689049-20140818203057/@comment-25319190-20140819055902

Thanks, that actually helps a lot. At the moment, I'm at a loss on how to fix it. this isn't my usual righting style. The story came out of no-where at 5 in the morning. I just got into Creepypasta, so i thought I'd see what you all thought. I usually do romance, so this is a huge leap. If you think of anything, i could use the help. And i know, my grammar and spelling are horrible. It's a curse.