Talk:Dark Side of Season Eight/@comment-29507836-20161012103031

Setting aside the supposed fact that Seth MacFarlane didn't write any content for the show ever since Season 5, I feel that your story is great! I loved it, and I will tell you why.

First off, you avoided the cliches that usually cloud the story, showing it off as a truly original idea and plot. It didn't have any violence or gore, not that I have problems with gore or violence, but it is just overused when it comes to Lost Episode pastas. Another thing that I liked about the story was the feeling of reality, the feeling that it could actually happen. There were no unreal explanations or overexaggerations by the narrator of the story. I also did not notice any grammatical errors or spelling errors, which is good to see.

However, one thing that's bugging me is the vagueness of "Steve", more specifically, the way you made him disappear. It seemed as if you wanted to end it in a rush and just decided to throw in the ending way too early. I also feel that the scare factor is a bit too low for a creepypasta; sure, Seth was going through dark times so the episodes got darker and darker, but as said in the pasta, it happened with other adult cartoons. I feel that it isn't very spooky at all. Other than that, I cannot see any other flaws in your story, so kudos to you!

I will rate this a good 8/10. Very good in my opinion, just lacking of the scare factor.