Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-39326334-20190502114806/@comment-35711173-20190502161913

Puglover1890,

I most strongly suggest that you spell and grammar check your work first.

Register on http://www.grammarly.com and fix your story up so that it passes Grammarly first. You have many other problems with the story, but basic spelling and grammar is a prerequisite.