Talk:On Deck/@comment-25345289-20140830060515

Oh, you were so close to being amazing, it's such a shame! You had a fantastic head of steam going when it was all mysterious, letting the curiousity of what the cat could possibly be sensing build and build, and then... what, evil sea monsters are attacking people who live on islands? I... what?! It's a nice nod to all the classic eldritch abominations beneath the sea, like Cthulhu and Dagon and his ilk, but this would have been AMAZING if it had built up on the mystery of what this could possibly be... then stopped just as it started to open the door.