Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140831004153/@comment-25037895-20140831101509

[The ones are grandfather's claimed they'd seen] -- "our" grandfather's.

I think the ideas in the beginning alter drastically to the ideas in the end. At first I thought the story was about the government. It seems as though, those two ideas aren't really connected.

I thought the alien figure was a government agent of some sort. I just don't think the story transitions well. But, with some work it could be accomplished.