Talk:The Beta/@comment-25471033-20180807195341

To me, this is just the fall of man with gore and a spire of knowledge instead of an apple. The description was impeccable, everything was an image in the reader's mind, and it was really easy to sense the fear of the characters, and what they heard, felt and saw. However, on top of the lack of originality, it also seemed like the entirity of the story's "scariness" was based off of the description alone, and not the story itself. 7/10