Talk:Tying the Knot/@comment-34746990-20180227104500

This pasta was a little confusing, and kind of all over the place. Perhaps a little more clarification is needed in the beginning about the main character's gender, as the initial impression is that it is a man, right up until "Now how could my loving husband say no to me?" After that, the story is kind of all over the place and clipped.

Over all, 4/10