Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27837645-20160325180322/@comment-28055451-20160326024117

I am not sure. A giant mouse may be too *Ahem* Cheezy... Get it? lol!

But seriously, a mouse man is a little odd and slighly laughable. Perhapse a skull-faced man with rats litterally pouring out of his eyes/mouth? Or maybe just rotten face with mice. That would help merge things together. I meant for you to correct 'he was a baby.'  in your story to,  'he WERE a baby', because that is the proper tence. (I believe)