Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-38184988-20190116012530/@comment-35711173-20190117011835

You have started the first part of being a narrator. You did one.

Good Parts:
 * You chose well in stories. I don't just mean that it's a great story (I am prejudiced here) but it was a very suitable story.  The length made it easy.  It fit your voice and accent.
 * It was authentically creepy. Somehow it sounds like a little kid telling their life story.
 * That's a great background picture. It added to the creepy farm atmosphere.
 * The music fit, theme wise and by duration.

Growth Opportunities:
 * You need to bring up your voice. It was tough to understand you in parts.
 * You need titles.

I don't know what your equipment is, but I know you can get free audio and video editing software for PCs. That even includes blending in effects like echoing.

You may want to make your video "Private" first, which would let us give you feedback on it before public release.

Now that people know what your voice sounds like, I think they will be able to give you better suggestions for stories as well.