Talk:Hands of a Living God/@comment-25306758-20141016180229

This is a great story. Excellent subject matter and plot, well written with good grammar and spelling, and I liked the end a lot, that last sentence was perfect. The only mistakes I found were a typo here and there, or a missing word. A few times you used the wrong tense as well, "Granny sits in silence as she finished the story. The night is dark now and the frogs sing in the pond down in the pasture. The watermelon had been long forgotten." Just small errors, nothing major, and it still gets a 9/10 from me