Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25381229-20150217145747/@comment-26027963-20150217202229

Absolutely, besides minor grammatical errors here, and there, I think that this was a pretty good pasta. I think it very well able to go on the site, but only with a couple more prof reads, just to sort out the errrors. And at the beginning, it also seems a little rushed. Thanks! --The Greatest Stories Are Never Told, CrazyWords 20:22, February 17, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords