Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5239282-20140807153534/@comment-5239282-20140807193232

In regards to the scheme: I definitely see what you're saying. But in all honesty, I'm fucking terrified of writing free verse, haha. Somehow, having limits brings comfort to me (over-description has affected the coherency of my stories before). I can certainly rewrite it, but I can't guarantee the quality once it's redone. This'll be my first.

Thanks, though. I'm gonna see how it goes, and hopefully go from there. Onto the rest of the points:

As for when I publish this? Due to the size, I wanted to have a separate page for each poem and simply link each one to the next in line. But dividing it may not be too bad. Thanks for the idea.

I really just wanted this poem to be descriptory, like some of you pointed out. Similar to Paradise, I used the imagery to justify the protagonist's feelings in later entries. So it's pretty much wasted when I condense it. I'll upload it all, in fact.

This morning I practiced doing ABAB and it turned out just fine. I think I'm either gonna settle on that or just do straight freestyle. It'll be fun, haha.

Thanks for everything.