Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37123481-20181102131658/@comment-36627132-20181102140441

Abaloanious wrote: Thanks for the feedback! I appricate it! I'm a roleplayer, so I tend to think people will be forgiving when it comes to typos or misspellings.

I felt like I should've introduced my cousins properly. I was planning on deleting it because I wrote when I was half-awake. I was thinking I should've added more descprition and build up. Also my story was kind of unfinished, but I have plenty of time to fix it.

Once again, thanks for the feedback! I'll try to make my story better. You're welcome and thank you for being open to constructive criticism.

And while typos are ok during RP, they should be avoided at all cost on a literature site such as this.

Good luck on your next story, hope things go smoother.