Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27206683-20151113055917/@comment-27186445-20151113150135

You are definitely getting closer!

The first paragraph seems to be repeated. "I love my job! I love. My job!"

This sounds a little awkward and I think just one "I love my job!" would do, but if you really wanted to put two this might flow a little better: "I love my job! I love. my. job!" or "I love my job! I. love. my. job!"

"Think about it, driving to a house a place you’ve never been;"

"Think about it, driving to a house or a place you’ve never been;"