Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26364137-20160515084117/@comment-26364137-20160625171401

First of all - I just want to say thank you for spending so much time with my story and going through it so thoroughly as you did! I really appreciate that.

I absolutely agree with you - many of my sentences are awkward in this story. I've had some troubles with that ever since I rewrote it (previously being a 666 word story), so that you have given me so many pointers to where to look is really helpful!

I will start looking at your remarks right away!

Again, thank you so much for all the help - and thanks for the kind words about my story.