Talk:The Baby's Room/@comment-26936390-20151102184625

This article was one of the better ones on the site. Your use of the faint smell of baby powder was something you don't often hear in creepy baby stories. Than the mobile tunes was genius as well and how the friend and waved it off as a little music box was well thought out to. My only problems with the article are the hidden room, and how she had managed to become pregnant. When she bought the house, a three roomed house is a lot bigger than a two roomed house. It would make the story a little bit better if you found a way to make the room look suspicous before she finds out. After that, how does she get pregnant. Her boyfriend had left her and I can only assume that your were implying that she was about to seal up the room and let her baby die as well. Other than this, good job