User blog:User X50/The differences of a Creepypasta.

Okay, so here I have two examples of a small segment I wrote about how to identify a good and bad Creepypasta.

Bad Example:

okay, so  basically i am scared.why? because lemme tell you a story,bro. so i was in clas and i was messin aroun wit a calculator, i could spell hello and boobie :D so i looked out the window, and i saw someone standing therre, looking at me. and i was like holy shit, and i ran and ran but he came up. then it sliced me and i died.

Good Example:

So I was walking around in the park, and I suddenly had this odd feeling. Shaking it off, I continued. However, later on, the feeling grew stronger, and I got slightly paranoid. I turned and saw a lone figure in the bushes, holding a knife. Scared, I backed up slowly, and  started to break into a run. However, I ran out of breath soon, and I felt the hot white pain of something jabbing into me, and I faded off into a permanent sleep.

Do you see the difference? We need to:
 * Capitilize every sentence.
 * Always use spaces.
 * Don't group every word in one paragraph. Use multiple.
 * Have more horror than drama and humor in your  pastas.

Refer to the article on the home page.

Until then,

-User X50