Talk:Empty Streets/@comment-24996913-20140831054811

You are definitely very descriptive with this story, which I absolutely love. The plot is very creative, and you made me want to continue reading to understand more of it. I did see a few shifts with past tense and present tense but those are easy fixes. I've corrected a few grammatical/sentence errors also. All in all, it was a good story. I do think the ending was super long and drawn out, though.