Talk:Just Say No/@comment-26054278-20150206201257

I enjoyed it quite a bit, but my only problem (even though it is kind of minor) is that I never actually saw or read anything (besides the title) that implied that drugs were involved until Jason takes the drugs about halfway through the story. It just kind of appears in the story at the halfway mark, which, to the credit of the story, shows that people who take drugs can act like completely normal people and be unexpected. However, while the pills were foreshadowed early on, I would probably have enjoyed it a tiny bit more if Jason's problem was very subtly foreshadowed early on (unless I missed it).

Also, Jason's struggle isn't exactly him not saying no to anything (even though that is a good message). It is more "Just Don't Do It" instead of "Just Say No". However, it is a good lesson to teach and kind of ties back to the story a bit, so this is more of a nitpick.

Anyway, I would probably give this something around 9/10. After all, the story is clever, and I actually really love the ending. Great job, and if you have other works or are planning on making other works, I would love to see them.