Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33470154-20180607103709

The story can be found here, it was getting a little long: https://pastebin.com/SNEgUr65

The background of the story is based on urban legends I heard during a trip to New Jersey. The story is about something called a Blue Hole, which does exist in NJ. People said that Blue Holes would swallow swimmers, but I wanted to one-up that by having the Hole somehow transport monsters in to attack the main character. Since the theme was silence, it’s said that Blue Holes are unnaturally quiet so I knew I had to use that in the story. I hope you enjoy! 