Talk:Up the Spine/@comment-24207890-20141011015613

Since no one has commented on this yet...

Beautiful. Really. It's not the scariest story I ever read, but it stands toe-to-toe from a pure story standpoint with much of the upper-tier works I've read on here.

I couldn't believe how engrossed I was. That's the mark of terrific pacing, an eye for detail, and spot-on word choices that aren't more complicated than they have to be.

Nothing was over- or under-explained. You hit a delicate balance that novice writers can't hit, which results in maximum enjoyment on the part of the reader.

I could see everything in front of me. I was there with David. It's not the best thing ever written, but I'll be damned if it's not one of the best things on this fucking website.

9.5/10