Talk:A Dream of War/@comment-24047219-20150130002330

You have an interesting concept, but the execution could be much better. For starters, in the middle, you pulled the whole "this isn't a creepypasta, its real! I'm just posting it on the Creepypasta Wiki," Schtick. I also have a hard time calling this creepy. I like the idea of humanity driving itself to extinction, but this just feels like a huge clusterfuck. I'm sorry if I'm sounding harsh, but I'm gonna have to give this a 4/10