User blog comment:MrJ1999/ENTRY 007/@comment-16771274-20140207002941

Hmm, interesting, but the idea seems like it needs a little work. I haven't read it myself, so I can't judge just from a brief review of it, but a guy sleeping around and a girl going psycho...eh. I've always kind of considered most pastas to be somewhat relatible to all who read it, or just really creative. Honestly, a guy who's sleeping around would probably have something bad coming to him anyway. It's more about twists in my opinion. The idea honestly isn't too creative, but could work. I'm sure it's good, but still, the idea just needs work.