Talk:Jeff the Killer/@comment-25026735-20140605190601

This was the first pasta I read after going thru the troll pasta section. I wasn't sure if it was part of that section, if it was intentionally bad or something that slipped thru the cracks. I realize that many people like "Jeff The Killer" pasta, but this particular story was very uneven. It wasn't scary or creepy. The big fight scene had all the parents standing around while the two kids fought from the backyard to the kitchen to the living room. Never gonna happen, not if there's a mother around. By the time the fight reaches upstairs, most of the alcohol would've evaporated, so nothing would be left to burn. With Jeff carving a smile into his cheeks, I expected him to say "why so serious?" to his mother when she came into the bathroom. And his mother would've told her husband to call the doctor, not get a gun. This isn't a rant. Creepy pasta should make you want to keep the lights on at night or not to go outside after dark. This story did neither.