Talk:The Pink Monster/@comment-30340894-20170117081959

7/10

I mean, it had a nice concept, I liked it wasn't something 'super scary', but one thing flaws the story.

'This really happened guys, really!'

I'll give you a little advice. Don't put the sentence 'It really happened!' into the story, try to convince the reader the story is real by the writing. A lot of pastas fail miserably on that part, however, if it's done right, it's the best way to scare the crap out of people. Make them paranoid.