Talk:The Text Message/@comment-27665184-20160124015444

That ending though!

Here's the things I loved about it:

- How you ended the pasta, had me on the edge of my seat

- How you set it up

- How the character reacted to the texts, it really sounded like he was frightened

'''- How weird the texts were. If I got those... oh my'''

- How you worded the pasta

10/10 Well done! :)