Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26197675-20150312205305

So while doing some searching around youtube i stumbled across these strange videos under the name donshivvers.

The thumbnails all looked like something you would find on normal porn for normal people and all the titles were really vague. They just gave me a brief overview of what was really going on behind it, but being an avid creepypasta fan I just clicked on it hoping I would find something interesting. And I did. The videos are quite short and filmed in black and white, this adds to the fact that as a viewer we are supposed to believe they are poor. Overall as the videos progress the story gets darker and darker. The videos centre on Pete a schizophrenic teen who's mother passed away several years before and is narrated from his dad's point of view. Pete loves his mothers wig and is always seen with a gas mask.

In the first video entitled strangedrawings.m4v the dad comes home to find a series of dark, eerie drawings scattered on the floor of people being tortured and stretched. The dad follows the drawings and comes to find Pete in the bathroom crying or something the video then ends. In the second called peteneedshelp.m4v the dad comes home to find a Pete in a room picking a hole in his shoulder, Pete pulls the tendons out and sticks his finger in the hole he has made. We see Pete from the back because he is facing the wall this makes it even more unsettling. In the third of the series entitled Petesburns.m4v we see the dad walk in to see his dead wife's wheelchair in the middle of the room he brushes it off and pushes it against the wall. He walks into the kitchen to find Pete boiling hot water in a kettle. He asks him what he's doing but Pete doesn't reply, he then picks it up and walks down the stairs in order for him to sit down and pour the water all over himself. The camera then shows a shot of a mans face and the video ends. As the videos progress we find out that Pete is intact scitzophrenic and that his dad abuses him. We watch his dad slowly descend into madness and take his anger out on Pete from feeding his vegitarian son meat, tying him up and treating him like an animal to making him stand outside in the snow.

Overall the videos are really unsettling and leave us wondering what we have just watched, by the time between uploads and the gradual insanity from both sides something just doesn't feel right. 