Talk:Little Lamb/@comment-24381191-20140404100725

It's a pretty good story and I love the fact that you didn't show who was after the protagonist. I envisioned him as a werewolf because, you know, wolves eat lambs.

But I did find some flaws, the most noticable one bieng that the story changed from past tense to present tense and vice versa repeatedly, also you didn't describe what the voice was like, you could have said that it was gruff or raspy or shrill. Last is, from the part after you heard the voice the first time, the story seemed a little rushed. But, overall it was an entertaining read, so 8.5/10