Talk:Ticket to Heaven/@comment-29507836-20161112085451

Good, but I feel that it is not quite suited for this site much. It is on the brink. I love the originality. By the way, how did you even figure that out about the paper? Quite amazing, I tell you. Quite amazing.

Description was lacking, wording is improvable, and the two people didn't quite seem human to me, but that's barely.

Overall, 6/10.