Talk:Normal Porn for Normal People/@comment-24569600-20140220041123

This was a very good Creepypasta with a nice kinda morbid macabre feel but not too out there...until the end, i think that a better ending would have been to slowly build up to a crazy video like useless.avi, instead of the sudden jump. Also, this may sound strange, but i think it had to much porn-like things. All-in-all i'd say 4 stars, good job Cosbydaf.