Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26157212-20150301051859/@comment-25975226-20150301065521

Interesting idea. Though I think if a little china cat flew through my window I wouldn't be keeping it. Maybe she can find it on the ground, or in a store for free or something along the lines of that?

Please fix up the tense swaps, break up the story into paragraphs, use 'than' rather than 'then' when comparing two things, and develop this story further. Like Empy said, it needs work. Not totally terrible, but it needs work.