Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44482918-20200204124042/@comment-24101790-20200204124823

There are widespread capitalization (failure to properly capitalize sentences and randomly mis-capitalizing words), punctuation (punctuation missing from almost every sentence), spacing (failure to properly space after the rare instances where you do use punctuation), awkward wording ("I decided I’d sell it when no one bought it I thought I better smash it smashing my hammer though it but it somehow repaired itself"), run-on sentences, and plot issues (the plot is extremely rushed, overuses cliches common in this genre, and the descriptive elements of the plot need fleshing out) which resulted in your story failing to meet our quality standards.

Since you published three stories that lack basic capitalization, punctuation, and proof-reading, it should be noted that posting another will result in a temporary ban as per our site rules. I suggest spending a lot more time proof-reading and working on your story rather than uploading three stories in rapid succession with massive errors present through-out them.