Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-43391742-20190804183542/@comment-36627132-20190804210108

Spelling and Grammar Issues: Here are just a few things I noticed. The "Ive" in "Ive always loved flowers" should be "I've". Remember I'm, I'd, I've and similar words require an apostrophe. Similarly there are many instances where you do not capitalize the word I. The word "leafs" should be "leaves". You should always start a new paragraph when somebody speaks and when changing speakers. "and the leave" that should be "leaf". "and you will fill us" the word "And" should be capitalized.

Plot: There really isn't much to the plot. It is lacking in substance and very little happens. So this person is supposed to be a huge fan of flowers but brushes it off when something seems amiss. The ending line "I guess I'm stuck here now." sounds like a joke. This character is being devoured and he/she is all like "Well, this is happening". Kind of kills any seriousness.