Talk:Tobit: The Bleeding Sky/@comment-25941663-20150208165735/@comment-25052433-20150208170841

Thank you for the review. The science writing was the most challenging part for me, since I am not a scientist. I did research on the different ages, but a few wikipedia searches of course cannot account for actual scientific knowledge, so I sort of had to work around that the best I could.

Whitehall Place was the intended wording, as it refers to a specific district in London.

I plan on starting the second installment of this story next week, so look for more clarification on certain aspects of this story that were left a bit shadowy.