Talk:Tobit: Theory of Two/@comment-25024572-20150528134925

You know, I think the words "I like this" and "This is good" (or variations of said words) are starting to get rather commonplace in regards to your stories. However, it can't be helped, since I do like this and think it is good.

Some of your previous stories seemed more character oriented than plot oriented. In other words, we focus more on the characters than the plot. And that's fine, since multi-dimensional and interesting characters are good. However, this one seems more plot oriented than character oriented. That's also fine, since I would like to see where this story ends up going. It's even better since, like previous chapters, it's good and enjoyable.

Honestly, the only complaint I have about the story (other than you not having commas before someone says someone else's name) it the title and how it ties into the story. I don't know, the whole "theory of two" thing, while logical, felt a bit...corny. Maybe that's just me.

Either way, it's still good, and I look forward to reading the next chapter.