Talk:Camping Trip/@comment-35711173-20180818054654/@comment-36625461-20180819171333

Hello, I am the author of this creepypasta and I thank you. This was my first real attempt at writing, so I appreciate the editing.a few of the things you corrected were meant to be there though. The “page numbers” you mention were actually there to divide the story into sections. The grammar and punctuation were my fault though. Thank you once again.