Talk:Faulty Love/@comment-9041013-20180408231224

"There goes my valentine again... soaked in red for what she said.... AND NOW SHE'S GONE...

Uhh, this is so lame, all you did was mention a really real, boring, real life issue here... uhhh.... fgt!

I'm just kidding.

As a general story, that's great. That is a very real thing, a very real problem and this "Max" guy is a very real type of person. I have to disagree with Diexilius here, this theme has become a trope because it is so prelevant and so reoccuring in real life. Yeah, people with the cluster B personality disorders (the dramatic type) ei narcissists, anti socials, histrionics tend to be manipulative and cunning. They come into your life and use you for whatever their goal is.

"You could have been all I wanted But you weren't honest Now get in the ground You choked off the sorriest of favors

But if you really loved me You would've endured my will If you're just as I presumed You're a whore in sheep's clothing" (Welcome Home by Coheed and Cambria)

That being said, this isn't much of a horror story as it is just a tragedy. pure and simple, and tragedies in the classic sense tended to be kinda bloody to begin with. It kind of fits here.

Now, aside from you pretty much getting the whole idea of a manipulative partner as realistically as it gets, I hate your formating. Seriously, "this is the tale" are you telling a fairy tale? What is this lad?!

And, please, for the love of an AI god who planned to murder any and all that is human, stop USING CAPS TO DISPLAY ANGER, IT'S SO FUCKING STUPID OKAY? Use exclamation points instead :D

Also, even though I think Romeo and Juliet represents one of the more disgusting and ridiculous aspects of late middle ages life, I like how you aludded to it here.

Good job, sir.