Talk:Human Nature/@comment-31722644-20170412224028

5/10, a little confusing in that the first thing he says is "Is this a joke?" when he is in the middle of nowhere, and then starts firing. Just seemed a little too quick to the point. A few grammatical errors and no explanation as to why it was him. Story has a lot of potential but fell a little short in my opinion. Keep it up though, you've got ideas.