Talk:My Last Sleepover/@comment-35470545-20180502154454

I don't know how old this is, so you might have already realized this, but I'll say it just in case.

It's quite well written, and satisfyingly set up, but there isn't really anything new or different to it. The beats and elements are all executed well, but they've all been done before.

Like I said, though, I don't know how long ago this was written, so you might have already realized this and my comments are unnecessary by now. XD But, anyway.