Talk:How to Become a Nightmare/@comment-29708047-20161204035611

The story that you have made here is very fascinating. I love how you managed to make it look as if they were actually talking, not just speaking in the most significant way possible. And also, it is quite enjoyable how you make everything seem almost human, like this really could and/ or has happened to someone. Very creative. i cannot find very many of these on this website, so congradulations. In total, i would give this story a 8/10. a way that you could get a point more is perhaps making the ending a little more... realistic... you wouldnt have to do much, just dont make it transition from being almost a true story to complete fantasy. But overall, this is quite an amazing story, especially for one that is found on this website. I hope that you could and may continue to write may other stories on here ( i would very much like that, bu im not forcing anyone) and sorry if this little "comment" (at this point its a paragraph, a very poorly written one)  ran on the long ish side, but i couldnt help it. May your worst nightmares follow you into your reality and take over you as a prson ^-^