User blog comment:EmpyrealInvective/So You Want to Make Valuable Edits?/@comment-4715955-20160509081449

I would suggest revising the first "Do" to remind visitors that dialogue and oral-style narrative aren't always grammatically perfect by design. People don't tend to use proper grammar when they talk, so trying to fix something that was intended to be broken (like half of my narratives and all of my dialogue) hurts the story rather than helps it.