Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32071678-20150509215902/@comment-32071678-20150509233839

Doom Vroom wrote: I spotted a single error when I read through it:

Paragraph 4, sentence 2: "I’d much rather prefer a know Devil,"

I think that know should be known.

That said, I'd wait for more feedback regarding grammar, because grammar is one of my weak points. I really liked the story, it painted me a concise picture and was very detailed. It fits my definition of hell perfectly, being alone and doomed to repeat suffering. I'm looking forward to more of your stories :) Okay, I'll make sure to fix that. I'm also really glad you liked this, thanks for reading it!