User blog comment:RedNovaTyrant/"Cruel Fate" Writing Contest/@comment-44778745-20200201204928

https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/The_Tower Done. I'm hoping i posted it correctly. I'll learn all this stuff eventually. But for now tell me what you think. And feel free to really tear into it judges and readers. Its my first so i gotta know what i'm lacking in order to make that good pasta.