Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24686540-20140321223038/@comment-24686540-20140322070742

Hey man thanks for the reply. This was pretty much just written half-assed and I didn't really edit it much; and I agree I need to get back into reading more. The whole idea of the creepypasta was simply a whole heap of redraws of concepts I kept illustrating, and wondering how it'd turn out if they all fit together like a jigsaw puzzle. I'll try rewriting this in my normal prose; third-person instead of first person. Anyway I appreciate the review :P Thanks for taking your time to read through it; let's hope the second draft turns out better, eh?

- TheDeadlyFly