Talk:Phone/@comment-247250-20140904110647/@comment-247250-20150408151711

Just saw your response to my review. Will take a look at your other story.

Full disclosure, I primarily prowl the Creepypasta wiki for exceptionally, hilariously bad stories. I leave nice reviews for good stories, and scathing reviews for bad ones. Those tend to get taken down quickly (the stories, not my reviews).

I use 5/10 as my average, and upon doing a re-read of this story, I made a few minor edits (verb tenses primarily) and I'd change my score to a 9.

The ending isn't as abrupt now, which is good. That said, I think the dialogue at the end might be a bit awkward. Otherwise, very well done.

PS- I mentioned it before, but I cannot possibly give you enough credit for including some erotic themes without making me want to vomit from how graphic it was. So many stories with erotic themes have that problem.