Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20150504195553/@comment-25052433-20150512215432

Well, I love Dungeons and Dragons and this certainly had the feel of a good DnD campaign setting. The way you blended all these different beings living among eachother in a modern setting also got me thinking about Ugly Americans, a great cartoon that just wasn't able to stay on the air. Then when you mixed all the modern world stuff in, this story began to feel like The Dark Tower series.

Needless to say, you combined aspects of three things that I love into one story, which certainly put a smile on my face.

Your writing was on point. Your descriptions were great and really pulled me in. Some parts of it read sort of slow, you may want to toss in some more interactions or dialogue just to sort of push things along, but otherwise, this was really cool.

This is an excellent fantasy styled story, great job!