Talk:Tobit: The Bleeding Sky/@comment-24101790-20150204023117

Once again, I find your stories to be a breath of fresh air from some of the other stories I read through on a daily basis. Thanks for that.

If I had any suggestions, I might ask you to bold the journal headers to differentiate them from the rest of the text, but that's a relatively small thing. I enjoy the backstory you are connecting with The Demon Tobit of Delphia and joining them into a good narrative.