Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20140917224907/@comment-24821182-20140922121417

First of all, you really should proofread one more time. I also think you need to put the letter's writing in cursive or quotation marks. Adding lines between change of perspective to make the transitions easier would also be good.

Explaining why Constance left him the letter would be great, and making Marc just a wee bit more child-like would help the immersion as well.

Anyways, with a little fine-tuning it could definitely work.