Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25316027-20140825110309/@comment-24304936-20140826165605

As it stands now, no, you can't post this to the main site. There's no real ending or explanation with investigating this virus. You build it up well, but it just winds up going nowhere at the end. You also need spaces between your paragraphs.

I noticed you said you were going to insert diary entries later. Will that expound on this and make the story go somewhere? Hopefully it does.