Talk:Beady Black Eyes/@comment-35711173-20180805222515

I went through it. This story isn't that bad English wise. I could change it to remove some of what I see as issues but it may change the author's intent. I'd rather see this go through a pass working together in Writer's Workshop than risk changing the author's intent by a rewrite to my tastes.

I would put this story in ghosts and objects.