Talk:25, 26/@comment-25148755-20151224192946/@comment-25148755-20151224202848

Adjusted your score for writing/grammar. On further review the misspellings I noted were simply English alternatives. The motivation is there, regarding the papers, but the idea is really underdeveloped. I realize Andrew wouldn't be privy to what his father is working on, but this really feels more like a prologue to a scary story than the story itself (which it kind of is.)