User blog comment:DeeDust/Worth trying, worth doing....? Something like that./@comment-4715955-20160522051716

Your reading ability itself is pretty good, unlike most people on youtube who stammer and mumble their way through a lazy one-take reading. You enunciate, try to get into the voices, and come off like you actually rehearse before recording.

I'm calling A Fresh Grave your best because you don't do the typical youtube reader sin of playing inappropriate music in the background during the reading. Instead you use ambience that fits the setting and makes it easier to get drawn into the story. That's what you should be doing with all of the readings: don't use music, use ambience or silence. Somber, melodramatic melodies don't enhance a scary atmosphere, and I don't know why so many youtubers think otherwise.

Apart from that one criticism, you're doing pretty good. Keep at it. You can read any of my stuff on your channel if you like.