Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20181117043002/@comment-36393004-20181117152406

Thank you for the read. I like the beginning, not sure why but that's what started all this. I will look it over though. I will correct the items throughout the story though. I appreciate you taking the time to read it. As for the last paragraph and "protective cloth"...I only used that because I felt like I had used the word "blanket" a lot in the story...maybe I should try to find something...else. I completely agree that it sounds odd when reading it aloud. Again, thank you for your time.