Talk:It Has a Rather Lovely Ending/@comment-30716938-20171025033724

The story has rather lovely grammar...

Other than the grammar, and the kinda cool premise, there's not much here. I want some punch behind it, more than just a premise. This feels empty. We all experiance the usual Facebook game from our moms/aunts/cousins/friends. It's a typical thing, but you can't just give a premise.

I made a read of this creepypast, I'll edit when it's uploaded.