Talk:Charlotte's Tale/@comment-25941663-20150210120256

This is really a haunting tale. I particularly enjoyed the character development (although I would have liked to know why the protagonist hated Charlotte so much) and the last few paragraphs were very nicely written.

My only complaint is that the story dragged on a bit in the middle. I would have liked the pasta to be a bit more 'to the point'.

Overally, I enjoyed this a great deal. Well done.