Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9967354-20140523110415/@comment-9967354-20140524144939

Well, this was supposed to be a sequel to this story. It sort of carries on with steve as the main character himself. If you recall, the writer and Miranda hanged his bird from the fan. I'll put that in the Author's note, too.

Also, tell me if you've found a concept annoying. Tell me if there's any part of the story that could be improved, and I'd work on it. If you see an error (like ameteur, oh god why...) you can go ahead and edit the post. It's frustrating on some levels where your story is up for criticism and people are just like: oh yeah it's great just post it and stuff.