Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180330113553/@comment-30701428-20180403230557

7.5/10 Pros: -I liked the whole parasite ordeal -The ending was pretty cool and spooky -The setting was unique and interesting Cons: -A tad bit hard to read -Some of it seemed a bit cliché -Formatting could have been done better -The first two paragraphs were kinda slow -The random humor in the first paragraph didn't fit Overall, a unique and interesting story with a cool concept that can be executed greatly, but it has enough cons to take it down a few points. I personally liked it. Good job!