Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5101683-20180718232328/@comment-5101683-20180720000008

BloodySpghetti wrote: Squidmanescape wrote: BloodySpghetti wrote: I have no idea what's going on in this story. Seems like an acid trip more or less... Thank you for being honest. Oh it wasn't much of a criticism, it was just confusing and crazy... you could do something with this. But what can I do with it?