Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34296765-20160502035408/@comment-28360473-20160503091930

Incredible! Some great historical fiction; you really managed to capture the feel of being there... and the shock therein. If only there were more historical fiction works on the Wiki, as it makes for great settings. The writing is pretty much flawless (though you mispelled "too" on the paragraph with the second bit of evidence).

Overall, it's pretty much ready for the site, I think, (though I'm pretty new), and it's awesome.