Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20150725025222/@comment-26715482-20150725205219

The whole dandelions thing was quite interesting but I feel it should have been drawn out, reading your post the connection could be that a single dandelion starts off in the field and more grow throughout the mothers pregnancy until birth which would end up with the field being full of them luring the kids into the field or something to show why the field just magically popped up.

In short the noodles of this pasta are pretty nice it just needs a little more details added in along with the connection flushed out a little more if you do that I feel that it'll be ready to be served to everyone. (Food puns aren't I original)