Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27012445-20180619163716/@comment-9041013-20180620175751

Ughhh, what can I say? Viva la Bruja... great latin american folklore.

It is kind of trippy and very salem witch trial like gone wrong (I kind of debbled in that too so), which is pretty decent. Perhaps ditch the Spanish though, just mention once she is talking in Spanish and from there on go with qouting her in English.