Talk:Of Missing People/@comment-4849011-20170213014351

Before anyone can ask, "How can you respond so quickly?" it's because I read and reviewed this on the Writer's Workshop.

This was another delight to read, especially in connection with your other works. This was like a very well-done campfire story, with its unsettling elements and vivid description. Fleeing rats is always a great device to show there's something horribly wrong (The reference to the rat king legend was another creepy touch), and once the reader gets to the part about the chair and shoes, they know something horrible is about to be found. The line about hover cars, winged beasts, and carriages sums up your work so well because it shows the combination of fantastic, technological, and mundane elements. There were also some humorous moments (such as the Elfin technology being no match for wallpaper). Overall this was a cool story.