Talk:Ronald McDonald House/@comment-44037383-20191009004844

Honestly... not the worst thing I've read on this website (then again, that's not saying much. Afterall, I've had the misfortune of reading Sonic.exe/Round 2 and Clockwork: Your Time is Up), but its biggest draw back is the simple fact that it isn't scary. Clowns just aren't a very scary theme in a story unless your deathly afraid of them; and I'm willing to bet there are very few here who are afraid of clowns.

This story didn't have much potential as a horror piece, but you definetly have potential as a writer. Keep on writing and keep on improving, guy.