Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32764586-20171121172937/@comment-25941663-20171125202003

I am not at all good with poems, so I can't give much feedback on poems that don't follow the normal structure. I suggest you look online for tutorials on how to get started with poetry, as this has some visible technical issues. For example, the poem has no flow, and one reason for it is the use of seemingly-random-length lines.

I'm sorry I can't give any more feedback. Google is your friend.