Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24099053-20150807032411/@comment-26425680-20150807081908

Is this the story that caused you to rant all over your blog? I think it is. My first impression of this story is that, well, it's not for everyone. Its apparent lack of a fully connected plot is going to turn off a lot of people. That said, I believe there's a place on this site for this story (unfortunately for you I'm not an admin). I see it as being more like a painting than a traditional written work. It puts a very strong image in my mind, and forces me to come up with conclusions, explanations, and reasons. Usually when a story leaves this many unanswered questions, it's because it's poorly written, but in this case the mysteriousness is intentional. I didn't read your earlier edits, so I can't tell you if this is better than what came before, but as is, I have to say I liked it.