Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31073921-20170129155943

At first, I didn’t know what had just happened. Then in a burst it came back to me. The car. I heard it skid and looked just in time to see a man’s fearful eyes. Then, well here I am. Iooked around. I was at school. People walked by me, and it took me a second to realise that this was, middle school? I looked around, and just unconsciously started to walk. I came to a locker, and saw Jesse. “Yes?” She said. “Uhhh, what’s going on here?” She looked shocked and gasped. “Of course I will! Where are we going?” It took me a second, but then I realised this was the first time I asked Jesse on a date. She looked at me and smiled. “No way! Alright, see you then!” She walked off. My heart grew when I thought about her. The scene started to dim, and slowly when I looked away from places, they just disappeared.





Slowly, again the area began to form around me. “ What the… ” I thought, but before I knew it I was on my knee in a fancy suit. In my hands was an opened leather case. I looked up to see Jesse again, shocked. I remembered this too, it was when I proposed. “Yes,” She said holding back tears. Again, the scene began to fade. “Yes…” she said again, and hugged me. I hugged her back, then she disappeared. The scene changed to a football game, I looked next to me and saw my brother. I cheered on the team. I remembered this, it was the last good moment I had with my brother before he died. Fatal car accident when coming back from the game drunk. I was the only survivor of it. A tear came to my eye. “Heaven sure is great isn’t it.” I stopped cold and looked around me. “Wondering who said that?” I looked and saw my brother smiling at me. “BRO!” I screamed. I know that it was cheesy but I ran and hugged him while the winning touchdown was scored. “I love you Michael!” I screamed with teary eyes. “I love you too James.” The setting stopped.





“James?” The scene froze, and began to tear away. “Whoops.” The man smirked. It hit me Imediately after. “You’re not my brother.” I whispered. He said into a weird object, “Alrighty, I messed up, get all actors off the set and begin the loop.”. I looked at him in the eye. “YOU’RE NOT MY BROTHER!” I screamed. As the man began to disintegrate, I heard something from his device. “Again? That’s the third time this millennium!” The set flew back, and I suspended in space. I fell down, down into an abyss. A hole. I landed in a school “What just happened…” I mumbled. Then in a burst it came back to me. The car. I heard it skid and looked just in time to see a man’s fearful eyes...  