Talk:Es Fließt Frei/@comment-24570519-20140702110154

The story is quite cool, but as a German I have to say that "Es fließt frei" and "Ich bin noch nicht fertig mit spielen" doesn't sound like the murderer is German at all.

It sounds, well like an English-speaking translated it :D

"Es fließt frei" would sound better without the "frei" changing it to something a German speaker would say.

"Ich bin noch nicht fertig mit spielen" translates to "I'm not yet finished playing". In german it sounds like it comes from a child who isn't yet capable of speaking proper German. Perhaps it's intended, then it's ok.

Nonetheless "Ich will weiter spielen" (I want to keep on playing) would sound better making it to something an insane, little bit childish murderer would say. It just sounds more sick and crazy :)

7/10 because of the translation stuff :P