User blog comment:MonochromeSaya96/The true element/@comment-24397565-20140125161049

Never use gore as a "shocking" device, at least in this page, the user will laugh at it more than get shocked. It's more valued a story that builds up with suspense rather than just plain gore, or demon stuff all around. Make them belive that the characters in your history is in real danger, or even better, make the reader simpathize with your character then stard adding thos little details that will make the reader get in the story to help him. Just some ideas, there is no need to use this a a guide or anything.