User blog comment:Fireflowerman/What's Going On?/@comment-24101790-20150222202951

They were deleted for not being up to quality standards.

Starting with the obvious issues, your story had formatting issues.

"It was late afternoon, 4:00 PM. I was driving my car with my kids out into the woods to go hiking. When I got to the exact spot

I wanted to park in something was off... I checked inside my car to see what was wrong. All I saw was emptiness showing that "

Capitalization issues: "During the entire Hiking (hiking) trip the kids didn't say a word,(.) Not", "I opened the door for my kids, They went immediatly (immediately)", "working. 2 (Two) weeks have passed, but still no talking.", "Well, Uh.....", "What..Is..It.. this time(?)", ""I don(')t Know (know) OK! ", " i (I) went In (in) her room." You over-use capitalized phrases and dull their effectiveness. ""YOUR (you're) GOING NOWHERE ELSE THEN WHERE I'M GOING"

Punctuation issues: "and A (a) sharp, rusty, old, combat knife. "Kid's (Kids)!" I exclaimed. (Quotations missing) What Is this doing in here?(quotation missing)", ""WHAT IS THIS DOING IN HERE(?)!" The kids once again said nothing. (")ANSWER ME DAMMIT!!("), "I replied. (")Now If you'll excuse me I need to go back to my work.(")", "I can(')t stand this anymore.", "parent(')s house"

Wording issues: ""Well how is (are) the POLICE going to help us!(?)", "I don(')t know, maybe THEY can (sic) the ambulance."" It's=it is, its=possession "it's face", "It's souless (sic) eyes, with It's souless (sic)". Your=possession, you're=you are. "YOUR NOT MY FATHER,", "YOUR.. MY FATHER!"" "I then saw a bloody ghost with no legs and completly white and bland (blank) eyes"

Besides the obvious rushed and grammatical issues, the story additionally has problems. Dialogue needs to be spaced out so multiple speakers aren't on the same line. You overuse ellipses (and use them incorrectly as 'dramatic pauses') and capitalize way too many phrases. (15+ times) The description (or lack thereof) also weakens the story well below that of our quality standards. Might I suggest using the writer's workshop next time as your stories need a lot of work.