Talk:I Need to Stop the Knocking/@comment-29502200-20160903232907/@comment-29502200-20160904003456

One of these days I'll go back and write 'I Need to Stop the Knocking' v4 but after spending over a year revising it, i'm going to take a break from the story.

Thanks for the criticism and talking it over, I'll keep it in mind when I write future stories. Right now I'm writing a story about a man inside an abandoned prison, trapped inside a cell. I'll make it more 'blunt' (i think that's the word I'm looking for) when I write it.