Talk:Tobit: The Bleeding Sky/@comment-25383866-20150204123753

Two words: MOAR.

I edited out what mistakes I found. Mostly it was unfinished words, like scientist instead of scientists, or partially written sentences, where you forgot to write just one word, like "the house is fire" instead of "the house is on fire." That's not an example from your story, just a little anecdote. My only advice would be to not let your mind outrun your fingers; make sure you type every word you need.

Seriously though you've got my interest now.