Talk:I Was Fourteen When I First Killed Myself/@comment-9041013-20170113204851

Ahhhh well it's completely unrealistic in the sense that it makes zero sense because people do dream in third person and out of body experiences can be something like reliving a "new" version of ones life. Same goes for NDE... So the pratagonist has a supernatural ability which is based on a real life phenomena and it has no explenation.

Constantly repeating how bad is "real" life is did not make me feel anything, Im sorry but I guess a large amout of people in this community probably expirienced some form of trauma in their life, so saying writing "my life sucks so bad" does not work, specially because well I'm sure some readers lost parents, siblings etc and learned to deal with the pain or it will simply irritate them.

If any choice creates a new reality, why is there a reason to sympathize with this pratagonist? the realities he'd been destroying equal to those he had been creating, therefore nothing significant happened. You may say that for this reason everything has a far bigger meaning than in it seems but for the same reason it may be that nothing has an actual meaning as all is just as repairable as it's breakable.

All in all, it's aesthetic and all, but storywise - didn't do anything by me.