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Bloody Spaghetti,

Thank you for spotting the Eric. I have fixed that.

Why does it remind you about Equilibrium? Emotions are the theme of this story.

What do you mean about Bob being in Batman shape? His physical condition is never described, except that he is dieting so by implication he is overweight. Do you mean that he sees himself as heroic and self-sacrificing? The greatest hands on individual mass murderers in history committed their crimes out of duty and love.