Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33756381-20181118014419/@comment-36815674-20181118212323

Always post your story in Writer's Workshop first so that people can make sure everything is good. Once everyone has given you the green light then you are good go. Pretty much every author uses https://www.scribens.com/ or https://www.grammarly.com/ to check their grammar.

About your story, I would make the fortune cookies more scary. Maybe you heard a story in the paper about how Dangerous they where due to where they were made at. OR someone cursed them. You get the picture where I'm coming from.

Make sure to remember that your first few lines are the most important. Thats your one shot to grab the reader, if you fail the reader will not go on reading.