Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26248322-20150327010136/@comment-26248322-20150329205636

To be or not to be is a line from ones of shakespheres plays where the actor is committing suicide. I just like the way it sounded, and since the story is technically an assisted suicide, I found it somewhat fitting. Sometimes people do silly things like that in real life, just a human oddity :) the killer is in the house because he is waiting for someone else, which I tried to express in the first paragraph whe he says I hadnt known she had children. I will definatly include that in the rewrite, thanks so much for your feedback