Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26705150-20160127065734/@comment-26705150-20160128050029

Thanks for the feedback. I tried to hint to the reader what was really going on all throughout the story. This can be seen in the TV broadcasts and the conversations between the main character and his neighbor, Jack.

I guess I can see what you're saying though. Maybe I'll consider toning down the "hinting" and let more of the bare bones of the story do the work. Yet, I feel like the that is a strong part of the story.

I'm actually not sure if you're referring to earlier parts of the story or just the ending, or both? That would be really helpful.