Talk:Paternal/@comment-247250-20140903191342

Not a big creepypasta fan here. A lot of the stuff on this site is, in my opinion, complete shit, and I mostly browse for the hilariously bad stuff. This story, however, is an exception.

Signed in to leave this review, because this is excellently done. The mirrorism, the diction, the pacing. Love the tone of this story. Really, genuinely phenomenally well done. Gripping from beginning to end.

My only complaint is the diary. The transition to the entries getting hostile to the mother could have been more gradual, and I think the tension would have been ramped up ever so slightly. Everything else was really top notch.