Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27697299-20160130012702/@comment-27697299-20160204004436

I undesrtand the problem about the description of the beings, i would prefer them not described, but if you think it's a problem i can fiddle around with the beings a little more. As for the warning, i can make it even more obvious if you wan't, it's supposed to be a warning to everyone. Letting them know about the beings. I can work on the News Excerpt with a friend. She's written it on a notebook, which i can try write in their.i will work on the visualising with a friend for specific reasons. You notes are understood.