Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20151004213335/@comment-26715482-20151005033854

Umbrello wrote: You have a point. Maybe I should take out the part about it being a trap and just make it that he snapped when someone took more than just a few. Something like, "I can deal with kids taking two or three, but the whole fucking bowl? You make me sick!" Not those exact words, but something similar perhaps.

And yeah, I'm the Dandelions guy, lol. I shelved that story. Ah I knew it was one of your stories kinda dissappointed it got shelved but it's your choice. Also it wasn't a huge problem in the story but maybe have him mention visiting his friends for taking more than one also.