Talk:The Companion/@comment-25170312-20150603195124

A good story in terms of the plot, but there's a lot of errors and redundancies in the grammar (I'll go in and fix some). The part about leaving the laptop in the woods is pretty unbelievable, too. No one would do that. And would hail really break the crystal room? The crystal would be strong enough to withstand it, otherwise the house wouldn't be up to code. Maybe I'm looking at that part too logically.