Talk:Redacted/@comment-7673575-20180226172948

Oh Boy II Oh Man, this gonna be gewd.

Review time.

GENERAL QUALITY: Couldn't find much aside from several miscaps and typos. Score: 24/25

HORROR FACTOR: Kinda lackluster. The concept was good, but the story just isn't that scary. Score: 14/25

LYRICAL INTERPRETATION: The only true botch of this entry. It appears to me that the author based almost entire story around theses verses:

Careful what you wish, you may regret it. Careful what you wish, you might just get it! However, the main focus of the song is warning against greed; the unspecified 'King Nothing' has spent his entire life hoarding material riches, ever seeking to expand his wealth. But in the end, he sees that it did him no good, and that when all cards were down, he had nothing, and was "absolutely nothing." Score: 9/25

ENTERTAINMENT VALUE: It was good. The concept was new and vaguely gross. The only thing that stops me from giving this a better score is that we are left in the mist regarding the true nature of the mysterious man and what sin has our protagonist committed. Score: 16/25

FINAL SCORE: 63/100