Talk:Alternate 21328/@comment-31077845-20170218013318

Very good continuation to the story, and I'm glad it affirmed what I believed about Stephanie which is that the other guys who called her a bitch sure sounded right. I have no idea if the author intended it to sound like it in the first story or if maybe they based her and the original narrator's relationship off of a real one they observed, but nothing she did sounded cute or harmless, and really came off sounding like the acts of a selfish bitch filtered through the eyes of an insecure guy who never had a girlfriend and thus believed she could do no wrong. These may be works of fiction, but unfortunately relationships like that definitely aren't.

However, being as this has no marked author and I recall reading this YEARS ago (like, definitely more than 5 years ago) there's pretty much a 0% chance the author's going to see any comments and thus any comments are pretty much for our benefit.