Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25239760-20140729192147/@comment-24918243-20140730162630

I'll agree with Dinkleberg that this is really cliche. I don't think Video Game Pastas are blacklisted, but haunted games one like this one are. In a lot of ways this follows the Ben Drowned formula but leaving out the parts that made it arguably good. In all honesty, I think if I popped that game on my machine and all I got for 2 levels were dead bodies, I would quit the game there thinking it was a bad hack. Also, maybe it's me, but I do have a hard time finding Castle Wolfenstien graphics scary.

There are also lots and lots of grammatical mistakes. I understand English is not your first language, but if you are going to write in English, then your grammar must be correct.