Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26360867-20160127055942/@comment-24101790-20160127063448

Horrorpony11 wrote: ok, sorry for bothering you :p

It's no bother. We have the writer's workshop for these things. It's usually best to use it before submitting to the main website for feedback. I enjoyed the reference to "The Little Alfred" experiment (although it could use some fleshing out in the story. Other ones you might want to look up are the Harry Harlow monkey experiments and of course the Milgram Shock experiment for sheer ridiculousness.