Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24868034-20140428213952/@comment-24550863-20140430163322

I love the idea but.. Needs more details about the characters and personality. The main and his co-worker seems very "flat". Also, I don't think you should use "I would soon be dead". Its a bit weird if the person thinks that way. In my opinion you could leave that part out. I liked the ending though, the usage of almost illegible typing to show how the main was having a hard time struggling to type.