Talk:In the Woods/@comment-24974354-20150622042742

i loved the twist of dark humor it took at the end. however, for an "educational" anecdote for his children, the father does make mike swear quite a bit more than i would think a parent would. although, in this case, i guess parental abilities could be called into question regardless.

the pace of the story seemed awkward at first imo, but made sense at the end upon the realization that it is a tale spun from father to kids. even so, there are a few more difficult words thrown in that feel a bit out of place concerning the general casual tone of the story ( "sepulchral" for one ).

overall, it was a worthwhile read with a clever, humorous twist, even if not particularly creepy or scary.