Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25825682-20150408043526/@comment-26027963-20150416125344

Terror Beneath Review Part 3

I read the whole thing, and saw the usual stuff, punctuation, and a little bit of spelling. One plot hole: How can something with no hands text? With Arnold it didn't have hands, with Alex it didn't, but it left a hand print. So there's that.

Other wise, I love it. I think you should have chapters though, just to help with the organizing.

Please send me part two when it's done!

--Welcome One And All! 12:53, April 16, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords