Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25547916-20150824145827/@comment-26399604-20150826031536

This was rather...creepy I have to say. This was an a interesting story, revolving around a sense we heavily rely on and sometimes take for granted, which is sight. I did like how the character was still connected to their own eyes and how you did not reveal the creature's appearance. It does beg the question as to why it does these acts, but that's an unknown factor that adds to the story. I also like the last question asked. Good Job!