Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27008899-20160521013843/@comment-27008899-20160521104455

Not harsh at all. I ask you read the debate one last time. The plot twist is there in the conversation. This was my first attempt at the unreliable narrator, I disagree with your tense evaluation. These are all things that he knew ir saw previously. However, I will review a for rewording some things. Thanks for reading.