Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20181124050253/@comment-35711173-20181126213113

BloodySpaghetti,

Thank you very much for the review. I appreciate the deficiencies list. Most are valid and will be repaired.

Elfs means plural of Macy's Toy Store elf. Elves means plural of mythological human sized elf. That's a very common fantasy novel convention. That's why I used elfs in one sentence and elves in the next.