Talk:The Number You're Trying to Reach/@comment-25428589-20150221122622

85/100

Very interesting take on the subject you were given, you kept me guessing throughout the whole thing. Unfortunately, the ending was kinda cliche and has been done before, so I give this 90/100. Even more unfortunately, however, is that this was submitted late, so I have to subtract 5 points from that previous score, giving you 85/100. Still, this is a very good story with realistic characters, and I think it's excellent considering the time frame you had to work in.