Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-38762742-20190310165055/@comment-9041013-20190312113431

Well yeah, it's short, but it's too short. It doesn't have enough oomph to instill interest or anything in what's happening.

Also, as Empy noted, there are a bunch of plot holes, you could have had your main character kill off his friend to save provisions or because that friend was injured or whatever, and follow that up with him beginning to cannibalize the friend or something. That still needs a lot of details and build to be any interesting or captivating however.