Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-5643552-20150313132709/@comment-24101790-20150321012602

AGrimAuxiliatrix1 wrote: Thank you, Empy, for deleting The Jungle Book VHS Cover. I'm keeping my review of it on my critiques page, but I agree that it doesn't deserve to be on this wiki.

No need to thank me, I finally got around to reading it. It was filled with purple prose which didn't suit the concept/theme. It also used shock value as a crutch (ineffectively) and just came off more as pretentious than scary. A note to other writers, you can over-write a story and this is a perfect example.