Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26606222-20151209045252/@comment-6548012-20151210173531

In essence, magic doesn't really exist, it's more of a distraction skill than anything. The problem is not the development of the character, but that the OC is the center part of the story, which has a tendency of making it not very scary. But if you think you have good ideas, and when your story is finished, you may want to have it reviewed through the Writer's Workshop.