User blog:Antenna Hound/Learning Experience

I've got writer's block at the moment. I was working on two stories that had such big ideas and seemed promising but I'm now stuck on them. So I've turned back to writing short little stories to get the "creative juices" going again and it would be very helpful to get a little feedback on these stories so I can hopefully get some new ideas or new ways of writting. Any critique of the few things I've posted on here would be immensely helpful. Thanks!! Oh and does the idea of human decendants of Death sound like a good thing to build a story about?

~AH