Talk:Requiem for Morning Star/@comment-9041013-20170727165219

Seems you enjoy focusing on short short stories and poems, and I like the fact that you stay to the source by mentioning that Lucifer is encased in eyes with his head(s) constantly in tears, there are some things that had fell flat here. I can tell your source material here is Dante's Divine Comedy, well in this book Lucy is described as a tri-headed beast with six (I think) wings. Thus nulling your poems claims he lost his wings, unless its a metaphorical one. Also, I know its never really that obvious but Im pretty positive Lucifer hates humanity because he was meant to kneel in front of Adam. You could've mentioned it, instead of randomly telling us he wants to it us, for no reason. I know its obvious to all of the possible readers, but you were giving a great and detailed description of Lucifer's condition, so why not go into the whole thing?

Overall quite entertaining :)