Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181005011936/@comment-36393004-20181005133250

Ok, a couple things: "Ben" isn't capitalized a couple times and I don't think pitbull needs to be capitalized.

Also: "After the bus driver had pulled Ben away, he’d patched the kid up and made them sit separately in the front two seats after bandaging the kid’s nose with a first aid kit until we reached the school, the whole bus upset with Ben for making them late to get home."

You kind of repeat yourself at the beginning and it sounds odd when reading it. Otherwise, great job.