Talk:Squidward's Suicide/@comment-27159542-20181018082858/@comment-38574094-20190219105529

>The story has so many grammar mistakes such as some of the sentences are structured (?) and the amount lf tense swaps.

Yeah those structured sentences, really ruined it for me as well.

Don't even get me started on the massive lf tense swaps, it's a damn shame the OP couldn't reign those in, yikes!

Naw but seriously though - how can you write a sentence like, "due to an intern wouldn't be allowed", and still feel like you're in any position to judge the grammar of this piece lol?