Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25581534-20141214041230/@comment-25581534-20141214230724

Thanks for the response. I had all of the correct indentations and spacings in my original writing, but as soon as I copied it over here it decided to chunk everything into one mass of text, sorry about that. As for the lack of imagery, I'm aware of it. I wrote this almost two years ago and my writing back then was less satisfactory than it is now. I don't actually plan on submitting this specific story, I just wanted to receive any sort of advice I could about what I should make sure to improve upon in any new writing I do. I appreciate the advice on the ellipses, I will make sure to refrain from using those next time. I will agree on this writing being very generic, and I am positive that this is going to be the only story I write that revolves around a plot as basic as this one. Again, thank you for the advice.