Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20190525194703/@comment-33904527-20190527234752

The second draft is up on the writer's workshop if either of you wish to see it.

Changes made -

1) Ending has been re-written. 2) "Rough and incomplete sentences" altered. (if you have any specific examples of sloppily-written sentences still remaining in the text, please point me in the right direction.) 3) Some plot points altered slightly so that the story makes more sense. 4) More detail added to Mark's healing process.