Talk:The Choosing/@comment-24996913-20140812054202

I really really liked this concept. Very original as far as I know. But, I think you could have expanded it a bit more. You could possibly explain how the game was found and if there were other people forced to play this seemingly evil game. I'm just throwing out ideas, but I did very much so enjoy this story as is. I've fixed a few grammatical errors for you also.