Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28060931-20160328173454/@comment-28055451-20160328185750

Pretty Good. I liked it. Ypu discribed things in good detail, but left out just enough for us to imagine. The only thing that slighty conserned me was the great detail you discrbe the village, especialy wen you state that it had 59 houses. Did you count them? That is definately an exact number. Maybe you were trying to symbolize somthing? Like the 59 houses in the village plus the 1 on the hill is 60, a satanic-like number? Maybe? Anyway, it was a great pasta and I hope to see this on the main sight.