Talk:The Dark People/@comment-26444017-20180705051442

I think this one could do with an edit. Some of the wording was lacking for me, and I found the kid's knowledge uncanny. Specifically, how did he know that they only came out at night if he'd never seen them before? This isn't explained, and it bothered me a bit. So, a decent premise, in my opinion, but it needs to be touched up.