Talk:Fourth Wall/@comment-25955368-20150103040504

I really enjoyed reading this one. I'll nit-pick a bit though. I don't agree with how at the last couple paragraphs it drastically switches from 1st to 3rd person so abruptly. At least that's the vibe I got from it. Everything seems a bit obscure here...who is he? It never really explains the life this man, child, boy lived. The so-called man, who is that being? Nothing's really explained, just thrown out for you to guess what the hell's going on. Don't get me wrong, I like your idea on this one you damned batman you, so here's a solid 8/10. Great job Bruce Wayne!