Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10319977-20151014231140/@comment-10319977-20151016192417

LOLSKELETONS wrote: Removing a few stories and taking a few words out of another isn't actually improving anything, though.

And you're still doing nothing but arguing. That's two strikes, three strikes and you're out. Getting rid of excess wording is an improvement. Besides, that's not all I did (see improvement offerings for a buffering movie and in my second comment on this thread as well).

As far as the "two out of three strikes" thing goes, you need to learn that, no matter how much you want them to, people aren't going to always accept/agree with everything you have to say and will, in turn, put up an argument. I'm being respectful. There was no reason to block me recently and there's no reason to block me or close this thread right now.

With that said, I WILL try to make these longer so they can work. That doesn't mean I will give up on my desire to get the shortest pasta on this wiki though. Let's start with two of the most controversial micropastas here: I Slit My Own Throat Once and A Buffing Movie.

I want to focus on these right now because it appears to me that they have the most potential. Aside from simply wanting to see them expanded, what exactly do you want to see out of I Slit My Own Throat Once? I'm asking for specific criticisms here.

As far as A Buffering Movie goes, no one aside from French has even touched my latest attempts to fix it. I would still like feedback on it.