Talk:Bad Day at the Midway/@comment-9967354-20140523065309

I love the fact that the story was as to-the-point as it could possibly get without sounding abrupt. The bit with the clown seemed like a scary twist even know I knew it all along, for the same reason. To be fair, big words don't make a story, they just make it hard to read. This was easy, and yet, not-so-light a read. My rating? 8/10, which is pretty flippin awesome because it's me.