Talk:Tom and Jerry Lost Cartoon/@comment-26514045-20150622065745

Not executed well, sorry. Was there even a plot? The only thing I got out of it was the owner trying to keep Tom away from the basement while beating him for attempting as Jerry kept trying to. There was a lot of detail left out to, the imagery just really wasn't there. For a quick example: " Jerry picks up a knife that was lying around and stabs the owner in the leg, quite graphically", the lack of creativity in that scene is written everywhere. This would have been more acceptable: "As Jerry found a knife that the owner had recently used on Tom, Jerry had snuck up on the owner and stabbed him through the knee. Blood gushed and squirted out from the knee, the now crimson red blade poking out of the other side of the knee dripping with blood as the owner soon collapsed to the ground before squirming in pain until he lost concsiousness". Overally, it was not well planned out and seemed rushed: 2/10.