Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27569420-20170830150441/@comment-27569420-20170831061920

Thanks a lot.... Yeah, I agree, mechanical issues have always been a problem highlighted in my stories... I'll do all in my capacity to rectify those. As for the unnatural dialogues, yes, surely some of the dialogues I used didn't have the impact I'd have liked them to have, so that's another thing I need to work on. As for the ending, I really don't know, because when I finished the story, I thought this was perfect, but looking back, maybe I have been a bit sketchy with the post mortem procedures.

Certainly, this was far from my level best, and I really believe I've got a long way to go before one of my stories makes the cut... But if there's one thing I can say, this was something new I've worked on, and, I most certainly enjoyed the experience and the feedbacks.

Once again, thanks a lot for reviewing the story.