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I can't tell if this would be following the "Jeff Formula"  I've never actuallly read Jeff the killer, though I have heard of it so please help me.



 Monday 07/29/14



 Day one, virtual diary. Hello I’m Vanessa Hall, I’m 14 years old. The reason I’m recording this diary is because strange things have been happening lately. The shadows aren’t acting right; they won’t talk to me anymore. I try to tell people but they think I’m crazy; they always have. I’m getting worried; they’ve never done this to me before.



 I try to tell my family that I think something’s up but they just ignore me. If it were anything else I wouldn’t worry, but the shadows have seen the future before. Its almost like they’re afraid, I try to ask them what’s wrong but they never answer.



 I think I’ll end this entry here. They don’t like to be talked about. Goodbye.





 Tuesday 07/30/14



 9:03am:

 Day two, virtual diary. I think I’m going to record throughout the day today. I just woke up a couple minutes ago with a pain in my ribs, I’m afraid to lift my shirt to see what it is. There’s a lot of blood on my shirt where the pain is. I’ll try to get back to you on that. Bye.



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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt"> Hi, so I think I need help. I’ve started having really terrible thoughts about killing people. I spend my entire day thinking of ways to murder someone. I know people have bad days and think of that stuff sometimes but I’m actually enjoying it; I even act it out in my mind or make animation videos to see how it would all go down.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt"> I freaked my friend out earlier because I almost carried out one of my plans. Some teenagers were bullying us so I tried to strangle one of them and then pulled out my pocketknife when they finally wiggled free. I don’t know what came over me, it was like I went on autopilot. Got to go, my chores are waiting for me.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt"> Hello again. So dinner seemed a little odd, everyone was just silently staring at each other. Our dinner table is usually filled with chatter. I don’t know what’s wrong but this doesn’t feel right.

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<p class="MsoNormal"> Also when I looked at the spot where my pain was this morning there was nothing there. I’m starting to get weirded out. Well, have a nice evening, bye.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt"> Day three, virtual diary. I finally did it I killed someone. I sliced them up, twisted them apart, pulled out all their hair, and ate their flesh. It was great! The taste of their warm blood splashing in my mouth, the muffled screams, and watching them squirm around until they died, I love it! I need more, more… MORE! (Hysterical laughing)

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<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:center;text-indent:36.0pt"> Sunday 08/10/14

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt"> Day four, virtual diary. This will be my last entry. Don’t be scared, I’m not going anywhere but this is all a waste of my time. So I’ll leave you with an explanation of my last work of art. She was so beautiful, but not to my tastes. So, I fixed her.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt"> I started by taping her mouth shut, she screamed too much. Then I broke her bones, it took a while but it was worth it. She passed out during that so I had to wake her up. After that I cut her into little pieces starting at her feet and working my way up.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt"> When I got to her head, I stared at her face. It disgusted me. I ripped both her eyes out, and then I took the tape off her face. I cut off her lips and cheeks so I could see her pretty teeth. The last things I did where rip out all of her hair and cut out her tongue. I took her remains home to store in my fridge; her now pretty face went in the freezer to keep from rotting with all my other works of art.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt"> Hmm… I think my fridge is running out of room, I’ll have to start eating more.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt"> This tape was found outside an abandoned house on Oxford St. London, ON. Fourteen-year-old Vanessa Hall is considered very dangerous. She was last seen wearing a black hoodie and neon blue jeans. We assume she was at fault for the murder of fifty-three people so far. We know not of any patterns with these victim and it is believed that she choses them at random.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt"> If you have any more information about Vanessa, please contact your police department. Thank you. <ac_metadata title="Is this considered the &quot;Jeff Formula&quot;?"> </ac_metadata>