Talk:Headhunter/@comment-25291276-20140812144122

Ah well after re-reading your pasta, I'd say the detais and descriptions are overall good, they show quite well what you want to show and explain.

Reading my first comment, I realised I didn't include the little things I liked about your pasta; for example, the description of the creature toying with the child was rather well done. as well as the reaction of the protagonist to what he witnessed.

Basically execution is rather good, but concept and ideas need to be worked on ^_^