Talk:It Breathes, It Bleeds, It Breeds/@comment-25941663-20160603182716

Ah, the good ol' crawlies under your skin. How I love those stories.

That was sick. Sick as fuck. You are a sick bastard. Sick, sick.

This is a masterpiece. One of those stories that make you writhe and wince. At times I found it hard to keep going because it was too much, and that is the greatest compliment I can give. Easily on my top three pastas.

I could go on and on, but everything boils down to this: I loved the story to bits.

The only way I can see this improved is if you had given a bit more detail on the part where the narrator finds skin missing from his back for the first time. It is clear to him that he has been bitten. Why did he think that? That information would have lifted the moment into something gruesome, but instead you just gave us his realization. A little description would have done wonders.

All in all, a phenomenal. One of my favourites, bravo.