Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10502460-20180410032524/@comment-10502460-20180410065216

Banned In CP wrote: It feels a bit rushed, honestly. I feel like there should be more of s rising action instead of jumping straight from introduction to climax to resolution. I like the plot, but maybe flesh it out some, add some extra steps before the parent realizes that the show was being filmed in the same area

Good suggestion. I did consider adding some foreshadowing in that way, but it's hard to think of a way to do it without giving away the reveal.