Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31790225-20180123025328/@comment-9041013-20180324225813

Im sorry, but this is not original nor scary. You played into every possible trope of the Satanic image the church tries to feed us. So first of all, I wonder how can a child of a gigantic three headed, multiwinged beast look like a human kid.

If he is a century old, why does he still look like a kid considering he's as old as we had agriculture?

Why would anyone be even stupid enough to try and summon this monstrosity after you confirm of only how dumb it is to do so?

Acording to Dante, Satan is stuck in the deepest part of hell, in a giant lake of ice made up by his own tears and wings flapping, so he is not upon the earth tempting humans. Why would he even do that? he probably hates them as a jealous being who sees how much God loves them.

I know you've tried getting away from the ritual pasta formula, but you couldn't and I assume this is exactly the piece Owl was talking about elsewhere.

This is just plain ol' Satanik loar. It's just almost lazy with how unoriginal it is.