Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25975226-20150401085748/@comment-25000365-20150403010417

Most of the stuff on the writer's workshop is crap, but this is actually pretty good. You really caught me off guard with the ending, which is a good thing because I believe that the ending is a major factor in a good creepypasta. The only tiny thing that I didn't like is your overabundance of ellipsis (...). You should definitely upload this story though because it's pretty good. 8.5/10

P.S. The last thing I would say to my mom is "what the hell." She doesn't like it when I do that.