User blog comment:Underscorre/Jeff the Killer Rewrite Contest - The Winners!/@comment-24466828-20151212024830

I just read Banningk1979's entry and it was absolutely aamazing. It fixed literally all of my complaints with the original story. It fixed the plot holes, it had more believable bullies, it had a better reason for Jeff to go insane, and the ending was much better. Not a single thing in it didn't add up.

Warning: This next paragraph will contain spoilers for the ending.

One thing I really disliked about the original story was how Liu was killed because he never did anything wrong to Jeff. However, I loved how Jeff spared Liu and I think that it was a perfect way to end it and it made me think of how Liu is going to react in the morning. Also, I loved how Jeff's way of killing his parents didn't result in him having unrealistic super strength.

However, the only thing wrong with it is that it had a few spelling/grammar errors. However, since you had limited time to write the story, I can understand it. Right now, your story deserves a 9.7/10 from me. If you think the few spelling/grammar errors when you upload it here, however, I'll give it a 10/10.

Anyways, great work to everyone who participated in the contest.