Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4750363-20150630000327/@comment-26475253-20150630054317

You fiddles up only a few things, although that does not mean it was lacking. Fix small phrasing issues and I think you're clear. Why the sounds affected the bloody neighbor more is beyond me, and it does leave questions to doubt, but it was still pretty good. Worth the time to review it, at least.