Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37197096-20181014231222/@comment-9041013-20181015083627

Cpastamaster wrote: BloodySpghetti wrote: Well, first you've to finish the story, these "cliff hanger" endings aren't cliff hanger endings they just make the focus of the reader fade away quicker. It's not a good tactic to "sell" your work to an audience.

Second, from what I gather this is going to be filled with ACTUAL cliches, people will find this discouraging and quit on your story quickly.

And third, seems like English isn't your thing. ??? I don't see any cliches? Also, it's not xD. I use wayyy too much slang. Also, it'll be finished, thi is a WIP currently. You obviously don't see them, I see another Jeff the Shriller in the making with some elements of "Legion" (a movie). It's just not really original at this point.

And please work on your English, you have grammar correctors online like Grammarly, and others. Slang is fine as long as it fits the story (and in everyday speech it's fine as long as it's in the appropriate company).