Talk:The Abalone Thief/@comment-25148755-20150217025619

Excellent. For one, I don't think I ever would have guessed reading about aquatic snails would be so entertaining and informative. The story itself was very solid work; I could see it at home in a Writer's Write Lovecraft Mythos anthology (probably have to throw some "Phtagn Cthulu R'yleh" in there but that's easily done.)  The dreams, the cults, the underwater Things...HP would be proud of the tribute. I think your most impressive feat, however, is that you successfully established not one but three distinctive characters. To have even one character that feels like a real person is something of a rarity on this site, so bravo. I greatly enjoyed reading this and look forward to your future stories.