Talk:Journal Entries/@comment-24972342-20150527002600

I really really enjoyed this pasta. I never am bothered by an extremely long pasta, as long as it is well written and keeps me wanting more. This pasta did just that. It took me part of last night and the last few hours to read, but I wasn't really disappointed. I loved that there were VERY few spelling/grammatical mistakes, and I especially loved that everything that happened wasn't too farfetched or unbelievable. The events that transpired are things that I feel like could ACTUALLY happen, yet they were still really uncanny or creepy. My only two issues with the story were 1) some of the characters were hard to keep up with, since their names were abbreviated down to one letter, and 2) I sort of felt that the end was very weak, although I guess maybe the ending not being huge and crazy added to the realistic factor, since not everything in life takes place like a novel. Otherwise though, I loved this. 9.2/10 :)