User blog comment:HumboldtLycanthrope/The 666 word pasta write off!/@comment-28164447-20160410012749/@comment-28164447-20160410102637

I knew when I posted it that it definitely had some of those flaws, and I'm not a young man of many excuses but I wrote this improvisationally and was rushed into it. You're right about the zombie assumption. I actually wanted to stretch the story out further to include more creep factor and more personality from the characters, which was my main focus anyway. But it was already nearing 666 words and I was in a hurry. Maybe I should try again now that I have more time to do so.