Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24059312-20140626180605/@comment-24304936-20140626192203

Lots of spelling mistakes (it's "followed", not "fallowed" for example).

But even the spelling mistakes don't take away from the fact that this story is just another run-of-the-mill school murder/revenge story. Really nothing scary about it. Maybe Sammie killed Mike. Maybe not. I really don't care, just because you never gave me the chance to sympathize with the guy.

And all we get is the fact that Sammie hates liars at the end? Sorry, this story is all but unsavable.