Board Thread:Site Questions/@comment-26512885-20150708001005

Hi,

I'd like some advice on making a pasta scary and avidoiding it getting flat and boring. I dont have any trouble thinking up disturing/scary things but when I put pen to paper it always winds up...... mediocre at best. It might just be that writing isnt my thing.

I'd really like your advice on this, I'lll leave the two stories I have writtien thus far so you can see where Im going wrong, thanks in advance.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Rats

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Coroner%27s_Report 