Talk:My Friend, Ethan/@comment-24281984-20141118182840

I wasn't a fan of this story. The writing was a little bit on the weak side with so many sentences beginning with "then" and the sudden violence at the end. Why did that even happen? There wasn't much buildup and it was too abrupt to be really startling. I personally find digital pastas (computers, video games, television, etc.) to be on the weak side most of the time and this one unfortunately wasn't an exception. It's pretty forgettable despite being mechanically decent and will probably remain so.