Talk:Life Is Short/@comment-24103274-20131030221519

Lots of potential in this story. It's freaky to hear something or someone watching through someone's whole life. Someone or something who have a different sense of time. I do like mysterious characters, but I do wish this story gave some more hints to what this someone or something is.

This story is freaky, and also rather creepy. It's not creepy enough, though. But I still like it.

7/10.