Talk:Grandpa's Back Room/@comment-6702838-20131216150932/@comment-5946174-20131216181436

I do agree with you on how needlessly long it was and that several paragraphs could have been omitted, but I can't say I share your annoyance with the description of the children searching the house, or the dialogue between the two of them. A rewriting of the story couldn't hurt, though.