Talk:It Won't Matter If I Kill Him/@comment-25558572-20140806043847

So am I supposed to be scared by this?

Good vocabulary does not a good creepypasta make. And not even the most effective vocabulary can disguise what I see as a generic, perfectly predictable premise; murder for murder's sake. Yeah, life is a meaningless struggle. I get that. But to show that, you give us two characters, one of which is torturing the other with the intent to kill him. There isn't even a story here. It's just senseless repitions of how much the world sucks and then how it's therefore okay to take a human life with no coherent explanation. Even if the protagonist is the most nihlistic human being imaginable, how on Earth does he brutally torment an innocent man without batting an eyebrow?

You'll probably get more opinions, but I find this to be a poor pasta. The vocabulary was somewhat overdone and the premise was far too typical for me to raise an eyebrow. The lack of plot here seems almost enough to put a deletion label on this, in my eyes.