Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26090392-20150209004635/@comment-25383866-20150210065456

So- I have no idea what to make of your story here. It certainly makes me uncomfortable, so that's good, but otherwise, it's confusing and formatted super weirdly. I guess it's a ghost story? Whose ghost? His mom's? His girlfriend's? What?

The writing is fine; there's nothing super wrong about your usage or anything, but it's too minimalistic. I have no idea what's going on because you're not providing enough information. I need context to understand the situation, why your character is writing this stuff, why they're writing it the way they are- i.e., one sentence a day, once or twice a year, for 18 years.