Talk:The Bridge of Ends

Enjoyed
I hint a definite Aokigahara influence here. Well, at least I think I do! Anyway, I felt that you could have described these mutants better, and overall I think the story has got a lack of detail compared to that of Waking Child. However, haveing said that, I love the concept! This mysterious bridge and it's hostory is very menacing indeed and bridges always make great horror stories and you know it! The dialogue from the mutants is very well written too. "Feed us..." is a brutally fantastic thing for them to say before the protagonists loved ones plummet to their ill fate. It was very enjoyable. 7/10 - CrashingCymbal (talk) 11:24, May 5, 2013 (UTC)