Talk:Imprisoned/@comment-25893270-20150418034403

Two things, first, how could you turn on the TV if the power stopped working? Second, not a fan of the ending. It always bugs me when a story is written in first person even though the one narrating it is supposed to have died. I think taking the idea of representing depression as a prison and running with it would be far scarier and more satisfying than the M. Night Shamwow dead all along twist. Arbitrary #/Arbitrary Maximum #, the beginning was good and the descriptions of depression struck home, but the ending needs work.