Talk:Withdrawals/@comment-10789912-20150924233748

I do not know if it was your intent to write a micropasta from the start, or if this was meant to be a fleshed out story at first.

I certainly feel like this was a concept which was meant to exist as a large story, but shortened. Perhaps I could be wrong on that. Allow me to explain-

The lack of details, which should be expected of any short story, really take away from his suffering. If this would have been a full length story, I feel it could have affected the reader a lot more with his struggle, and even make the plot twist more effective.

I do, however, think for what it is, it is good. The low-key attitude the character has towards his actions really make the story solid, and hold it together.

Creativity- 3 Story- 3 Execution- 4 Creepiness- 2

12/20 If that looks like a low score, keep in mind 10/20 is a completely average story. This would be equal to a C+ in school.