Talk:Sandstorm/@comment-17385488-20140822145407/@comment-3999760-20140905061038

I'm currently working on a longer version of this pasta, so that includes a rework of the ending. Essentially, the main plot is going to be same with more elements added to mix. I'm currently trying to figure out a better, more shocking ending to this. So I'll keep this duly noted once I get to write the ending.