Talk:The Janitor/@comment-25052433-20150607234720

This was a really well executed short pasta. It really brought the reader into the mind of the janitor, showcasing his feelings of being judged and mocked at his place of work. The repeated mantra of being nice today worked perfectly here and created the perfect tempo as the story went on.

The ending was masterful. This is a great pasta that I am sad to see had gotten so little exposure. This deserves more attention and I certainly hope it gets it.

Excellent work, keep writing!