Talk:A Bedtime Story/@comment-25226524-20150831234500

I enjoyed this Sal. I actually like the style and find it fitting with the emotional and tragic tone. Your descriptive work transported me into a vivid visualization, as always, and everything flowed smoothly. The only problem I found was that some of what the being was reading seemed a little repetitive, but perhaps that was your intent. All in all, I think it's a solid story and I'm glad I had the chance to read something new from you.