Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20151017211423/@comment-26411767-20151019111356

Good and creative story with nice twists, but there's only one problem. Some of the verbs are in present tense when they should be in past tense.

'Due to the nature of his nocturnal escapades he wants as much privacy as possible, which is why he always stops in rural areas.'

'Wants' should be 'wanted', and 'stops' should be 'stopped'. They should be past tense because he is dead/paralyzed by now and unable to go on these escapades.