User blog comment:BenFugman/Working through heckin' rewrites of KATD.../@comment-24101790-20170512040214/@comment-31705823-20170514030016

That is exactly the goal of the re-write I'm working on is to say more about me, and explaining my state of mind on that day and maybe more about my fear of the dark that influence how I felt leading up to waht happened,  anf especially making the introduction more engaging.

Essentially I am trying to follow your advice, but I appreciate your attitude less and less the more you repeat yourself, and the more you copy and past my comments into yours without displaying even the most rudimentary understanding of their contents.