Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26500716-20150718032824/@comment-26007602-20150718040833

Let me start off by dying that since I'm at work right now, I can't give a fully detailed reason as to why your story was deleted. That said, read over this page. It explains the tropes of an OC story that your story falls into. The plot is extremely generic and has been done quite a lot: kid is in some accident, becomes mutilated, and then snaps and murders people. Your story is more focused on introducing a character instead of telling an actual story. While yours is a cut above the rest, it still falls into the same formulaic cliches of similar stories.