Thread:TheKillerCat/@comment-10950063-20140224195341/@comment-24304936-20140225142654

Maybe you should post your story on another site that is your native language and that has never heard of Jeff the Killer. Or not. Whatever.

The point here (as Cal and Guy have been trying to hammer into your conscious) is that, no, your story is not original. It reeks of Jeff.

Any writer who can weave a decent tale has an element of originality that makes them stand among their peers. That's fine that you are new to writing and I hope you develop accordingly, but I don't think this site is for you right now.