Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33077235-20190630005539/@comment-9041013-20190630093905

There is really no point in writing this story if you actually say "it loops, and every time it does, I have to re-write the notes". You basically tell the reader there is no way out for this guy; he's stuck forever and no one will ever get to read his notes since they are stuck in the loop with him.

You put yourself as a person who wrote the plot in a hole from which you can't escape, there's no solution to the conflict you've presented us with. Your story is pointless... It's just "well he's fucked" situation. You have to find a loophole for him to get out of this loop; or to get the notes out so someone could save him. You didn't do that. You just said, "it's a loop and he's forever stuck and there is no way out."

There is of course a way out of course, and it's pretty simple, but you'll have to figure it out. If you can't, well this story is doomed.