Talk:The Freak/@comment-25131502-20150509202526

Great pasta. The only thing I dislike is you keep saying people are being diagnosed clinically insane...it's vague and informal and the only time the word "insanity" is used anymore is in court. Doctors do not use it. People can be diagnosed with a certain kind of psychosis, or with specific mental illnesses - I know it's nitpicky, I don't mean to be, it just pulled me out of the story because it makes the author sound...very young and unprofessional. If you plan to write more, just keep it in mind. The plot was great. That phrase just kept me from getting completely into the story is all :-) 8/10