Talk:The First Admissions of the Eye/@comment-25962917-20150111130725

A very good story, not creepy, but i really like how you developed the main character. I give it a 10/10

I especially like how you changed the angle of narating from first person to third, when the protagonist was describing the murder. The detachemnt from the act gave very nice psycological grounds for the remorse that comes later.