Talk:Three Friends Diner/@comment-26464600-20151019140351/@comment-25260464-20151025121706

Agreed. The wording,pacing,research are completely perfect in my opinion;but the only original thing in the story was Bessie. The rest is just a mangled ball of clichés.

Overall,it reminds me of a cake with perfect frosting,but really; there's no actual cake.

No powerful,realistic motive. No background on how the villain came to be. Hoodie. Really white,really pale skin. The protagonist can't catch up on how weirdly convenient the location/price is,also skips on how badly the place is introduced and just dips right on in. Moronic,as you put it. Sudden sounds,thumping,knocking on doors... Impossibly detailed=hyper realistic. Just a simple play on words--to avert being called out on,I guess?

...Yep,just frosting. But I'd give this a 5/10. There's no denying it's easy on the eyes.