Talk:A Small Piece of Lead/@comment-3393943-20180319074733/@comment-24101790-20180319161745

I'm glad that Reignbot introduced you to one of my stories. She narrated this one and a section of Black Hole Sun and both turned out pretty good.

As for editing, a majority of the changes are things that I feel improve the story (removing redundancy, clarifying points, removing unnecessary detail), but it is interesting to look through a story's edit history to see how it evolves and what an author thinks are important things to focus on.