Talk:Notches/@comment-26936390-20151012173022

I feel that the monster at the end could have used more details. It would have been so much better if you had put more description about the beast. Maybe something like, it's goopy sime shined in the moonlight as it almost seemed to struggle upwards ready to make it's last cut. Other than this it was great and had a good plot. Although wouldn't you seem a little scared if you found out that some had cut your doors, you'd be a little bit more suspicous, just saying.