Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25012337-20140523015807/@comment-25012337-20140523231059

Johnathen stuart wrote: Huh. Right. While I do stand by my earlier comments (I don't really see where this story is supposed to be scary, or how you would make it scary) I do apologize about the language thing. I've seen a ton of pastas written worse then this, made by people who DO speak English as a first language, so I jumped to the conclusion that this was just another one of those.

I also apologize for assuming that this was a full story. Usually people post the completed product on the writers workshop, or at least, teasers or ideas for one. I wouldn't like to discourage you from continuing to write it, but I would recommend getting to the scary part before posting it next time. As it was (and is) this story seems much more like a romance than a creepy pasta.

It was immensely rude of me to assume that this site was exclusive to the English speaking populace; It was a Korean friend who introduced it to me originally. I hope that my comments will help you to restructure the story for the better.

And once again sorry I accept your apologies. I promise the creepy part won't take long to arrive, and I'll try to make it as good as possible.