Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25357157-20140828214432/@comment-24957984-20140830004725

Dentacles wrote: About the first point: So even if it was a true story, I shouldn't say it was? I also don't know what you mean by 'I also wonder when does this really starts', sorry. As in when the actual story begins?

Second point: Noted. I wrote it all in Notepad and copy/pasted without editing, will edit it more next time.

Third point:  At no point did my 'character' think, the whole thing was basically just one big thought/journal entry sort of thing about what happened to me as a kid. Also you said I should put QUESTION marks when my character is thinking. Did you mean Quotation marks?

Fourth point: I do understand it's not that scary, I guess I can add some made-up stuff to it to try and make it all make more sense and such.

Thankyou for the notes :) Yeah, I meant quotation marks. Sorry, my head sometimes don't get things right :b

About the true story thing, yes, I don't recommend placing it there, it makes teh story feels stupid,and I wonder where the story beings. Like, does it start after or before the "Now to the story of what actually happened part"? It seems like the thing before it is an introduction of the story or something.

And I do recommend that you put more content that makes more sense as well.