Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28420405-20160816123509/@comment-28266772-20160817131836

Loved your ending! Did the narrator piss on Robbie's corpse or was that just me!? Not to say anything against it, it just shocked me so much I wasn't even sure!

But yeah I really liked this story. It's a great evolution of your style and it's nice to see you get into something a bit gorier as well. It's dark, and nasty, and it succeeds. It's a great story. Also I liked the changes you made to the intro! Much approved.

Other than that I have no more recommendations. Great story!