Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20180703065228/@comment-9041013-20180703234929

This one fell flat for me. It's too silly, I guess because it boils down to the kid either not understanding the bloody act behind the doll making or is just as mental as the parent which makes it "meh" for me. This is a horror story site, so I'm not expecting normalities here.

The drama is supposed to be about the kid if you involve one, for me that is, in this bit, it isn't. Also, "killing a baby"... yeah... no... not shocking enough.

Also, real eyes in a doll, they'll lose color or just "blob" out... so what a waste.