Talk:Room Zero/@comment-25372245-20140921234232

Since the title of this pasta is 'Room Zero' there needed to be more focus there, it took far too long to get to that point. The portion about the water slide was unecessary.

There was also something about the ending that didn't make sense. Ida had said:

"They're still down there with whoever that was."

I'm assuming the park guests in the shelter had been buried down there alive and eventually died a numver of possible ways from running out of oxygen to going mad and killing each other but the story teller, Ida was said to be down there as well. So how did she come out alive? And who is this "whoever that was"?