Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26107461-20160624155133

Okay so a year ago I posted the story "The Truth About Dentists" and 30 minutes after that it was taken down because of "Mis spellings/Grammar" I was very upset when my pasta was taken down so I left the site for a short period of time. Now im back and the story has been check well and all the mistakes have been terminated. Now I would like some honest feedback on my story. I feel as if it is completely original as I have not seen any of its kind anywhere. Its fairly short as its a MindFuck Theory Pasta. Heres The pasta Below.....

Odontophobia is the fear of teeth or dentists. This means whoever has it has extreme anxiety when it comes to going to the dentist or even by looking at teeth. Me personally, I've only had very few bad experiences with dentists. Well... teeth on the other hand, that's part of what I'm here to tell you about. Recently on the news there have been reports of a parasite; this parasite develops over time and becomes more apparent. What this parasite does is grow on your teeth and create holes that grow bigger over time. These holes grow as large as possible and cause you to have severe tooth pains. When these holes are big and deep enough, they lay eggs and move to all your other teeth to repeat this process. When the eggs hatch they leave this black residue that causes tooth decay. The scariest thing about it is that when the eggs hatch, the baby parasites crawl out your mouth while you're sleeping and repeats the process with another host. If its not treated on time... the tooth decay will eventually kill you because of infection.

Dentists all around the world have released this parasite. What's the reason you may ask? Money. Dentists knew they would get paid a lot if people came in to get their teeth fixed. You may be wondering how they pulled this off? They have access to toothpaste companies. Here is what they do: They come in to "Inspect" the toothpaste and see if its "ready" to be put on shelves; they slip one of the parasites in a bottle of toothpaste; Then as an soon as an unsuspecting victim brushes their teeth, the parasite does its job. Why do you think dentists tell you to brush your teeth? Why do you think a lot of toothpaste has the label "Dentist Approved" stamped on it? Why do you think a lot of dentists are rich and successful? So think twice before you buy a bottle of toothpaste or go to a dentist. Dentists don't care for your tooth health, they want your money or your life.

It was quite easy, here's what they did: They simply ran a couple of experiments on toothpaste and parasites. They hired professional scientists to help with the operation. They told them if they helped they would get half of the profit they made, they accepted the offer and got to work. They somehow managed to find a parasite with the correct traits for the job. This parasite is black and is tiny enough to just barely be seen at all. They used black toothpaste to help it blend in and remain unseen. Who ever buys this toothpaste will brush their teeth, then as soon as the parasite comes in contact to teeth it will start to eat a very tiny hole in whatever tooth its latched on and do its job. If you use the Beverly Hills Formula toothpaste, you're going to have a bad time. You may be wondering how I know this, but that is because I'm a dentist myself. Why do you think I said, "I've only had very few bad experiences with dentists"? Those experiences were when I was a child. I want to rid the world of our creation, But its too late for that now....

This parasite remains in disguise, and has become extremely common in children.

This parasite has disguised itself as.....

Cavities....

Mr.CreepyPastaTheThird 