Talk:A Demon Cured My Son of Autism/@comment-35711173-20180528061545

As the father of an autistic son - damn good! You captured a lot of my emotions and that's the apex of this game.

I caught a couple of things I question. "He carried a straight solid oak cane. Shaped liked a distorted human face, the top of it drew my attention." This seems awkward. I think you can phrase this better.