Talk:Rut/@comment-25425104-20140923204958

I didn't at first understand the concept of him hallucinating, nor did I even at first know he was mentally unstable. So that being said, I was really thrown off at the ending until I had you clarify it to me. It was a well written Pasta besides my confusion, excellent choice of words through out the entire story. In my opinion, this story would have been better if it were written as diary enteries/ journal enteries. Due to my confusion, I'd have to give it a 7/10.