Talk:Rumpelstiltskin/@comment-25941663-20150306091322/@comment-26030957-20150306164033

Hi, Dupin. I don't know why you didn't like that sentence. It makes perfect sense to me, but "barely able to was; she was that sick" makes absolutely no sense to me. As for the spaces, I usually put two spaces between sentences and the paragraphs are just the way I wanted them. I wrote this in one sitting, very quickly, which would explain the triple spacings. Why you would add a reality tag to a fairytale is beyond me, but, whatever.

I'm glad you liked this. It's what you would have gotten if I had received your assignment for the freestyle challenge, although I guess I would have had to omit the sex scene. No creepy elements, huh? Well if you don't think a troll stealing an infant to sell to a child porn and snuff syndicate in Tijuana isn't creepy then you are a hard nut to crack. Please read the original tale about a troll who lives under a bridge and demands a child for payment unless you can remember his name, I think the story will make much more sense to you then.

Yes, "unrelentingly" is a word.

Thanks for taking the time to read it. You know I value your opinion very much and I'm so happy you liked it.