Talk:Eyeless Jack/@comment-24985364-20140526235723

This creepypasta to me is average. It's not bad, but, it's not good. it's just right in the middle.

1. The lack of the vocabulary, which overall is pretty basic

2. The lacking in the character's description

3. It was too short, it just jumped right into the climax of the story

4. There were a lot of clichés

5. It was hard to read in some sentences due to vocabulary (as stated above)

I could go on, but I'll sum it up here. This could of been better if it was more planned out. This story was trying to be a "try hard" in being scary; which didn't go as planned just by reading this.

4.5/10