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AscendingNooses wrote: I edited that post of the rough draft. To me, it looks a tad bit better now. "Tad" is giving yourself a lot of credit. It literally gives me a headache to read.

Your grammar is way out of whack. I'm not gonna tell you what to fix but I'll give you a hint for one: check comma usage in the first sentece. And also in every subsequent sentence.

This theory also doesn't make a whole lot of sense, the entire thing is just sad rambling.