Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25073641-20151031060700/@comment-27008899-20151102124812

I really like the idea of a chatroom being the plot for a pasta. Sp much so that I too had writen one in the past but was not pleased with it. My only issue is the theme of the apocalypse. This seems a little much for a chatroom based pasta. Something of this magnitude would not be confined to just a few people in a chatroom. It is a decent story, but the best pastas tend to have a bit of a believability factor to them. Dont get me wrong, many will like this for what it is, but for me the overblown theme kills the plot. I would take it down a knotch. Good concept though.