Talk:The Dark Breathes/@comment-25941663-20151010205504

That was a great piece. I enjoyed it greatly. The atmosphere, the suspense, the pacing, everything was perfect. I also loved the language and tone you used. They really added to the story.

The plot itself was creepy and scary too, and the ending was just perfect. It left a bitter-sweet taste, and I loved it.

Well done, one of my favourites.