User blog comment:Shadowswimmer77/Shadow's Story Contest/@comment-27369650-20151210203006/@comment-10789912-20151210204607

Fast word of advice: Upload it to the writer's workshop. People can help you, there. I, myself, can do so, if the story isn't extremely large. The story might be able to be fixed and placed in working order, thus eligible for this contest, if you do so.