Talk:The Akh/@comment-26030957-20150324174347

Very nice work, Natalo. I especially enjoyed the beginning where Horbaef is slapped for mourning his father who was a pariah in the village for being a coward in battle. That slap reverberated through the rest of the story, resulting in Horbaef not praying properly. This, of course, is his undoing in the end. The zombie like return of his father, but not his father, was well written and creepy as hell. And no mummies or pharaohs? Good choice keeping to the prolitariat and avoiding the obvious.