Talk:To Whom It May Concern/@comment-24927388-20140521010222

It was an interesting read. I felt the dragged out beginning was a bit much. Saying over and over that he didnt have much time and he should tell the story, only to say he didnt have much time and needed to tell the story another three or four times before actually telling it. I tried to look past that and see the point of view of someone on the verge of death, with their thoughts ever winding. I could see some one talking in circles in that position, but I dont think it helped the story at all. It was well written, but more of a sci fi than a CP. 8/10 for writing. 5/10 for creepiness