Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26142236-20150308133143/@comment-24234841-20150308184920

Atonal Anthem wrote: This is more confusing than creepy. If this is a draft for a pasta, it needs tons of work. I agree. You need to fix the spelling and grammatical errors, then write clearly about what you're trying to say. Was the girl at the bus stop? It's very confusing.

It needs to be longer and with more detail. If you post a story that's only a paragraph, it's considered a micropasta and very few people can write good micropastas.