Talk:The Brotherhood/@comment-26253657-20150329153608

I found this Pasta gripping and original. A unique read with a very eerie tone behind it. It could be better if you described the characters a little better; I get that Joshua is insane and the other guy is normal but what do they look like physically? And what is the narrator's name?

Another pointer to show how good this Pasta was is the way it begins. It starts in the middle of conversation and you think that Joshua is normal, just a guy who loves card tricks. It all seems quite fine and yet, as it is posted on the CreepyPasta Wiki you know that something will happen. But when that thing does happen and the plot unravels it's fantastic, gripping and spine-chilling. Someone who had appeared mentally sane is actually quite disturbed and very, very clingy - but not in a good way.

9.5/10