Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-43331652-20190730155526/@comment-9041013-20190730205759

It follows the typical ritual formula which is already making it less interesting.

You were being unnecessarily overdramatic and even used CAPS which just isn't good in my book, use punctuation instead, Bolden or itilize important parts or use exclamations.

You've also had some confused words: ie "their" instead of "there"

Also the stakes are too high for what one could do with Google, these rituals never offer anything of actual value that requires making these sacrifices.