Talk:The Girl and the Deceitful One/@comment-24040907-20140928074109/@comment-24040907-20141001031914

The plot of the story unfolds in such a way that the reader only knows exactly what they're supposed to know at any given point, while also filling them with a sense of satisfaction, a sense of "Yes! I can see it all, crystal clear in my head!"

I would be delighted to review a sequel if you should craft one. Speaking of diverse views, consider Arishana's Caretaker, if you will. How exactly does the Caretaker put up with her, if she's quite the diabolical sort? Just a peculiar question that drifted through my mind upon finishing this story, perhaps one that shall be answered in a potential sequel!

Also, fret not about my Dishonored references. I make vague references all the time as an amusing way of building bridges between ideas that are seldom noticed by others. It's a quirk I have.