Talk:Reality/@comment-25226524-20140814014950

It's pending deletion because it had massive paragraphs, a.k.a. walls of text, and someone added the delete now category to it. I broke down the paragraphs for you, but you may want to go back over them to make sure they're broken up the way you want. For future reference, you can post a story in the writer's workshop before you submit it so something like this can be avoided. In the workshop, people will give you advice on what needs to be changed to make sure the story meets the site's quality standards.