Talk:My Longest Drive/@comment-26439792-20160720183609

Awesome Pasta! Everything is described well and the reactions of the main character feel a bit paranoid but totally real. The only thing I have to say is the part where the mysterious man appears in his car relies on the claustrophobic feel created to express the tension, while it should have been the very man that caused, and said feel should just support the scene as something secondary. 8/10 from me, for a good pasta.