Talk:The Raffle/@comment-26326346-20150521054821

I do agree with SoPretentious about you using excrements instead of shit, the politeness is out of place. The storyteller just killed its friend without remorse, so I doubt it'd give a care about being polite. Despite that statement, I have to say that this story is very creative and refreshing. The descriptions and unique atmosphere (the raffle) made it for me. I came in expecting a human killer (and then a society of human killers) and left pleasantly surprised.

I'm looking forward to more of your work GreyOwl, keep it up!