Talk:Heart Break-In/@comment-25634916-20141205120546

I don't know, I kinda liked it. The flow was great, probably the best part of this pasta. The story was good too; the twist at the end is a little hard to follow, but good nonetheless.

However, this pasta wasn't really "creepy", just a bit shocking at the end. So it's not really what everyone's looking for when they come to Creepypasta Wiki.

Good story, but 5/10 for the above reason.