Talk:The Mangrove Mirror/@comment-29432816-20160804141323/@comment-9305294-20160805052416

Thanks for both the critique and nice comments, I'll certainly keep them in mind when it comes to anything else I write or any possible further edits of this for the future.

Strangely, the real life apartment that inspired much of the story did indeed have a slightly odd landlord (although a little more gangster-like than supernatural) but with this being my first outing I was unsure as to how long it should be or where it would end up if I added too many elements, but I did toy with the idea of having the partner mention that they picture seen on the return to the flat looked exactly the same as it had always done to her, and had never actually noticed the original mangrove painting in the first place... Room for some addtional concepts to play with certainly.

Thanks again though, I really appreciate the feedback :)