User blog comment:Dorkpool/Creepypasta Riffs: Hooked/@comment-25052433-20150228024156/@comment-25024572-20150228164459

I think “Jeff" is better and worse than this story in some ways. When it comes to spelling and grammar, I think this story is be. When it comes to originality, I'd say “Jeff" is better. Sure, it may be garbage, but it was original garbage. When it comes to stupidity, I'm not sure. “Jeff" has a character being set on fire and only having his skin bleached white, burning off his eyelids with no ill effects, and being able to beat people to death despite being 13, among other things (Like complete ignorance of how the law works). This one has that anagram, many unexplained things, and a tongueless character going to a public place for no adequately explained reason, among other things. When it comes to antagonists, this has a poorly written Satan, where “Jeff" has those bullies, or Jeff himself, depending on your point of view. Based on all this, I'd say they're about equal.