Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-2240864-20140612220044/@comment-5564808-20140613012204

The original Jeff the Killer story overuses ellipses and the words "ominous" and "weird," so that might be a good thing to bear in mind and change, were the story to be rewritten. I'd suggest some plot changes too, but many others on this thread seem to have already covered a great deal of the plot's flaws (many events' plausibility or lack thereof, unnecessary characters, etc.).