Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24608253-20140410010736/@comment-24608253-20140410020347

Sloopernicus wrote: If you broke that up more, it could probably be a poem. But for something to be a micropasta, I think I read that there has to be two different events that occur in the plot. This doesn't really have a plot. It's just a mortician describing how he's lonely and wants to be the with dead people, or something. Darn. Hmm. I'll just ask it to be taken down, then. I'm very picky when it comes to my poetry. It has to be superb for me to show it off anywhere. Thanks for the feedback!