Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-27971822-20160509115630

I have to say:

You made everyone even more of a dick now. I mean I actually started to feel sorry for Randy and then BOOM. It was gone.

But I'll give credit where it's due: it's OK. However you can't fix a shitty story with good english. To make Jeff the Killer better (if that's possible anyway) you have to rewrite everything. Also, I notice you gave a lot of attention to the names, which is OK.

In a nutshell it's MUCH MUCH better than the original. So kudos to you