Talk:The Journal of Don Carter/@comment-26054278-20160214183758/@comment-24466828-20160215215215

Thanks for reviewing this. I do agree that I could've improved on this one. I might just leave it on here though as I could learn off of what I did wrong here to improve on my writing skills in the future. I am currently in the process of writing a new story. I already have part 1 up on this wiki and I'm working on part 2. After I finish it altogether, can you do a review of it? I'll give you a message if you want me to.