Talk:Somnambulism/@comment-35711173-20190809164145/@comment-35711173-20190809173454

SilenceoftheShadows,

I would definitely put in an ending. I'd pour on the creepy sauce. As is, it seems like a routine diary of a severely mentally disturbed daughter of a dad who got busted doing some heavy drugs - until a cop peeked through the door of her room and shot her for no apparent reason.