Talk:The Cell Phone Game/@comment-30103649-20161001031230

When I read "The first was to find a special protective item... it would make the bearer suffer in some way." I immediately thought of the armband, so I was a bit disappointed that that was the big twist. The plot is decent and this is a good starting pasta; it could easily be made longer or into a series. I enjoyed the read regardless of that bit of disappointment.