Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-35071950-20190616002349/@comment-35071950-20200115001309

I apologize to anyone that had to read this awful comment I made last year. Back then I barely had any intuition on writing, and thought this was a good piece because of the decent descriptions and mediocre-yet-almost-non-existent character development. Now, reading it again, I see that there's many flaws in it.