Talk:How I Fare in the Afterlife/@comment-25947144-20170225214133

Damn, I'm a lazy cunt. So, this is what I thought about this.

The humour style of the story, as it was the main focus, does seem to match yours in a few ways. More precisely, they aren't really my style (not necessarily a bad thing) and sometimes they seem kinda forced. That isn't to say it was generally horrible, but some jokes were too random for my tastes. Also, I'm not sure if the ending having nearly nothing to do with the rest of the story makes it better or worst.

Other than that, the plot-line was ok and the creepiness...nonexistent. An intriguing part is that, like Mike's entry, this does technically involve Dark huomur, but the dark part is...normalized. Like confessing molesting someone to a Catholic priest.

Overall I'll give it 75/100.