Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20170422195410/@comment-24101790-20170422212116

Solonor1987 wrote: i am the contrary for some shy and friendly having fun is common sense grab is a gesture  but for the other thing i will correct that maybe with some help  but it will not happen because nmy story are always denied  i know you just do your job, but its not always easy with refusal of help and other tried to help me without success.

Your stories are denied because you don't have a good grasp on English and your writing suffers because of it, I've pointed you numerous times to the French Creepypasta wiki where you'd be more likely to get help and have the benefit of writing in a language that you're actually able to speak in fluently. As it stands, I really don't see this being accepted in its current form. There are far too many mechanical and story errors here that it would be unfair to accept your story and not hold other people to the same standards.