Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26873355-20160705234619/@comment-31073921-20170127012315

Alright, heres some constructive critisim

1) Take out every literly, lol, and haha

2) Make it just, more. If this IS real then its pretty good. If it isnt then... well just a random story thats not scary. But heres why people would think its not true.

Its named "THE DREAMS" (A generaly ominous title)

Its on Creepypasta.wiki.com (A website for horror stories)

Its on the Writers Workshop (Where you get reviews for stories)

3) If this is a real experence, then you don't have to make completely true

If you wanted make a Real section then a Story section to it. This is a site to post horror stories, and this truly has potentioal.

If you understood none of my blabbering and gibberish then heres a comparison

Your story is a half built house

Which if you build on it can be a great house

But, you can make it a really good, spaceship but you might want to keep it realistic.

If you understood none of THAT then here :

The house is your story

Buidking on the house is adding to the story

The spaceship is if you want to add on to it to make it a story not a personal expereince, if you wanted to keep it real it would be the good ol' house.

If you understood none of THAT

You're screwed and read this for nothing, and should go edit your story.

Happy Writings SmidgetTheMidget!