User blog comment:CaptainCutler'sGhost/My First Blog Post/@comment-5067515-20120502113529

I loved Dream of Waking! Even though it seems you could use just a smidge more practice in writing as a whole (just to kind of get a feel for it and catch your stride) most people have the same "issue" going on for them, myself in included obviously. :) I really liked it and felt that it was good, it wasn't awful or anything. Basically just need a little more practice. :) No offence or anything!