Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31073921-20170202153809/@comment-31111342-20170202182710

God. I don't like being mean, but I feel like my review was too nice. This story...what even is it? It's just random stuff happening with stupid "monsters" that equates to a failed attempt at being funny. For the sake of comedy you turned the story into nonsense and made it worse by just rushing it.

If you want my completely honest opinion, scrap this story and learn what dark humor is, or read some decent troll pastas so you can at least get it posted there.