Talk:The Gym Teacher/@comment-26027160-20150508124833/@comment-26030957-20150508192617

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I do wonder what you mean about my grammar, though. I am a bit of a grammar geek. Do you mean my use of m-dashes? I've noticed not many pasta writers use them, but I love them and feel they can lend a sense of rhythm to the prose as well as give the reader a feeling of inclusion in the details of the story. As for character, I am of the opinion that all drama, horror included, is more powerful with well developed characters. There has to be an emotional investment, otherwise, who cares?