Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33263296-20171005171957/@comment-24101790-20171005172626

It was deleted due to a massive amount of mechanical and story issues. You forget to properly capitalize a number of sentences and proper nouns. You also forget to use punctuation properly in your sentences. There are also a number of wording issues.

"I lived by a mid sized Patch (patch) of wood in Michigan UP with my mom and step-dad. we (We) were pretty happy where we lived(comma missing) good neighbors and good school(comma missing) nice amount of work. we (We) were fazed by the stories we heard about a witch that lived in the middle of the wood like the direct middle of the forest (awkward wording). One day i (I) was hanging out with my friends and were going to the middle of the woods to see if the stories were true or not(period missing) It was the worst night of my life. we (We) brought 5 canteens (1 per person) a 22. (i (I) had a (an) apprentice license in hunter(apostrophe missing)s safety. my knife and a machete.) we set of after dinner to the woods. we hit the brush pretty quick which was pretty convenent (convenient) if you think about it. we were pretty scared shitlish when we saw a headless doll."

Onto the story issues. The story is clearly unfinished. On top of that, the content you do have is incredibly rushed through and there's little to no build-up here. The protagonist hears stories about a witch in the middle of the woods, but doesn't go into any more detail about it. It ends up feeling incredibly generic as there isn't anything to differentiate it from other stories. I'm sorry, but this is going to need a lot of work to salvage it.