Talk:Pokémon Blue/@comment-26441375-20150528024857

just a few problems I want to get on my back

1.i get lost and bored very easily it took a bit to get to the scary part which really wasn't that scary to me you talked to much about what happens in the game instead of the scariness

2.the ending I'm just lost what happens to this boy does he die does he go crazy I'm just very lost on it

but it is a pretty good creepypasta I would rate it 8/10 good job