Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26900569-20150825232818/@comment-26900569-20150827224219

Underscorre wrote:

Ravioli Dragon wrote: Well, to just scrap something I've been planning on doing for months now is kind of harsh to say. Also, by the by, the whole site blacklisting Pokepasta stories was something that was completely unknown to me before entering this site, so how was I supposed to know that right off-hand? This is the Creepypasta wiki. I was pretty much expecting to actually WRITE a creepypasta on here, not a Shakespearean play, for goodness sake. However, I'm still going to write it. I clearly see after looking at your page you have a clear disliking for Pokepastas, so I don't think you would've liked my story, anyways, regardless if it were good or not.

Also, you say errors, but you aren't giving me any clarity or examples of those errors, and no, the whole story, summery, etc thing doesn't cut it. So you're basically saying that my entire summery is an error in of itself? I'm sorry, but seriously don't understand where you're getting at here. After reading through it, I do see some spelling and spacing errors here and there, but what about out it that disgusted you so much to warrent the WHOLE summery to be an error? I don't mean to be rude, but I feel your response this time was a bit...snobbish, at the very least.

One more thing, is that I suppose your guy's idea of a "unique and advanced" idea is a story about rape and revenge porn (in fact, the story I'm talking about is LITERALLY called "Revenge Porn"). Really...? I know it needs to be suspenseful and filled with dark elements, but a story about RAPE and PORN is considered a "unique and advanced" one? Uuugh... The criticism AMarbleHornet has given you is fair. There is no reason to call them "snobbish", or criticism their taste in pastas - you posted something in the Writer's Workshop, and you received a critique - there's no reason to attack the person who gave you said critique.

Additionally, for reference, this pasta would be deleted under our blacklisted subjects, so I would advise that you do not post it. At first, it was fair. However, he claims that their are several errors such as mispellings and grammar errors, among other things and doesn't bother to explain what they were or give a few examples, at least. And he also gave me little to no suggestions on how to improve myself (it can be about my writing style, too, not just about the story I'm writing) and then just blatantly told me to just not do it, period, without a second thought. How can I NOT think that way after a response like that.

Also, I don't appreciate you falsely accusing me of attacking him, because I wasn't. I was simply stating that I found his last response to be a bit rude and was expressing my opinion about it. That's all.