Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20170201195638/@comment-25947144-20170203193326

Thanks for the critique. The first was supposed to simply be a quick, straight-forward read and I think it fit its purpose. As for the second, I don't really remember reading other drug-type stories having gory monsters, but then again, I didn't read that many. Also, I wanted to create an atmosphere of slowly drowning and had to incorporate "evil smile" and the creatures seemed to be the best option. Thanks for catching that error.