Talk:Daddy Isn't Very Good at Cooking/@comment-5733573-20180726184538

There's a lot to like about this pasta. First, though, I want to get the criticisms out of the way. It is fairly predictable and, dare I say, it's not the most original thing I've read. There.

All that being said, it was still highly enjoyable. The narrator's voice is so charmingly innocent and, even though it's light on description, I still felt like I could vividly imagine every part of this story. Also, the pacing was just right. It never felt rushed or awkward. What makes this story really stand out for me is that it seems terrifying plausible. Really nice work here.