Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25672620-20141113025720/@comment-24101790-20141113030402

http://pastebin.com/LNXxC8kz

Here is a copy, do not reupload your story without completing it. As it stands, woman finds her dad's diary detailing a location, she goes there. Story ends. This is not engaging or long enough to be a standalone. (No one that reads that story is going to be satisfied by the cut/lacking ending)

Additionally there are some punctuation/formatting/capitalization errors in the story that need revision. I would suggest uploading the completed version to the writer's workshop first for feedback before uploading it to the main.