Talk:Keep Me Safe/@comment-25941663-20150216110038

I loved how smoothly the story flowed, it was amazing. I also liked the concept of a guardian angel slowly going 'rogue', it was very creepy and unsettling seeing a figure that inspired safety turn into the villain.

I think the ending was a tiny bit underwhelming, but it was executed very nicely. Despite not being to my liking, though, I believe it fits perfectly with the rest of the story.

This is a story well done, keep it up.