Talk:Broken/@comment-21086298-20140509093025

BloodMonster's mechanical writing skill is good, with better spelling and punctuation than the average creepypasta, but the violence is always described in the same way that makes me unsympathetic to the people dying. He uses overly long and obscure words, frequently in the wrong way, and describes gives the same "gore porn" descriptions to the tragic deaths of his own family that he gives to the fictional deaths of characters he writes for the sole purpose of killing. Also, I did google "Larson McCormack", and nothing came up about a him breaking into a house and killing people, except for the first results which were links to this pasta.

Finally, what's with the "animals" tag?