Talk:The Plague

Well, interesting. This gets me mixed feelings.

The beginning is awesome. Detail, good description, good usage of words! High quality!

But then...the pasta gets almost to the end. Then it starts rushing towards an end. Confusing stuff ensues! I got lost, trying to understand. Then the pasta ends in a very unfitting way, in terms that it feels incredibly rushed.

So, good effort, but...the ending needs a lot of work. I&#39;m not an actor, I&#39;m a distractor (talk) 00:17, April 4, 2013 (UTC)