Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33696343-20181115144801/@comment-36393004-20181115150408

The paragraphs are poorly formatted. There are over two dozen spelling and grammatical errors. This would never meet quality standards just based on that, not to mention the story content itself. I think the idea was to put a spin on the typical 'road ritual pasta' but it did not hit the mark. It almost reads as trollpasta.