Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26886981-20161220035938/@comment-28428152-20170124023531

I enjoyed the story, though I think some of the rhymes coupd be tweaked just a little bit, such as "reply" and "'sigh'". It sounds a bit off, so maybe something like "And nothing from the stove, and in confusion I sigh." Or maybe "And nothing from the stove- I don't know why."

Though why this would be removed baffles me.