Talk:The Choker/@comment-5733573-20180428011359

This is a really cool idea, but there are some significant plot holes. How does the narrator know the choker had anything to do with her mother's death. Also, if she knew this, why on Earth would she ever even consider putting it on? The third sentence even reads, "I don't want to wear it." What could possibly entice her to do such an about-face? These answers are going to need to be questioned in order for this story to make sense, but the idea of a piece of jewelry that attracts a monster is a good one.