Talk:Buyers Beware/@comment-25326117-20160807015844

1) The pair exchanged numbers and agreed to a 10 a.m. delivery.

2) It was almost ten minutes before he dared trying to stand on it.

3) How dare this man come and try to take it from him! 

4) He carried the items into his house: one rusty, stinky, and heavy load at a time.

5) They said they would be there in ten minutes, and urged him to stay on the line.  He couldn't do that, because his most prized possession was in danger.

6) He was ten feet tall and walked on cloven hooves, his serpentine tail swaying back and forth behind him.

7) No, this was a man of control and strength and power; a god walking the mortal earth.

Overall, that was a pretty good story with a few errors that I listed. It was really sad that Alec was driven insane by that godforsaken piece of furniture!