Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27887213-20160229001238/@comment-24101790-20160229001551

The story was actually deleted not because of the format (simply adding an additional space between the paragraphs would have resolved those issues.), but due to the fact there are multiple punctuation (commas missing where needed, punctuation incorrectly used in dialogue, etc), capitalization (dialogue improperly capitalized at times, words improperly capitalized, etc), awkward wording, and story issues (incredibly rushed, lacking build-up, plot holes, etc).