Talk:The Expressionless/@comment-34926804-20180515105236

This is just awful. Not enough details to be frightening in any kind of way, lacks description and is juvenile and cliche, ripping out a jugular with sharp teeth and choking in blood is just eh, juvenile. And "I am god" is cliche as all hell, and sounds like something an edgy teen writes for his story and just ruins the rest of it. Too edgy.