Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24803140-20140411143441/@comment-24803140-20140411164016

Dreems wrote: Good pasta, short but good, I think you should have given more description of that old world for the readers, but personally this pasta is interesting

(Next time if you want criticism post your story on the Writer's workshop ;) ) Nah. I want the readers to make up details for themselves. Their imagination is capable of creating things way scarier than I can come up with.

Oh and as an aside - I swear that I made a page for this already. What happened?