Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-27210592-20151115200016/@comment-26280153-20151208123339

Hello there chap, and welcome to the community!

You were looking for feedback, and I have some small tips for you. I would like to point out that these are just my opinion (I'm not really a top-of-the-shelf narrator myself). First of all, try to slow down a little bit. I find this quite difficult as well, as it sounds to yourself as if you're speaking in slow motion, but it tends to set the mood for a horror story quite well. Linger on certain words, drop in some silences before continuing. It might be very counter-intuitive to what other content creators do, but I do it to really bring in the haunting atmosphere.

I really do like your intro, but you might want to cut the length of it in half and tone down the music a bit. Youth these days have no attention whatsoever and tend to click to another video in +-7 seconds. So you have to grab their attention with your content in those 7 seconds. That's why a lot of popular youtubers don't use an intro at all so they can get to the meat of their content way faster.

Oh, and as a final tip, if you click the little pencil on your youtube channel page right to your subscribe button, then click edit channel navigation, and then click the button next to "Default View" your feed gets removed and you can add modular playlists/last uploaded/most popular uploads etc like you see on professional youtube channels



The best of luck to you!

~Sir Ayme