User blog comment:Kyle Meadows/I Want to be a Writer/@comment-24101790-20170507010448

"If anything, I'm more afraid I'll die before I get ten ranks in my social links than death as a concept." Beating a Persona game without maxing out everyone's links is a fate worse than death to some people.

Jokes aside, welcome to the site. I always recommend the writer's workshop as a means of getting feedback. People might be able to give suggestions on making some dialogue feel more natural or how to approach certain conversations that may be too expository. Other than that, I'd recommend familiarizing yourself with the site and seeing what kind of stories we host and what you want to bring to the table. We do have regulations and are no longer accepting certain stories without an appeal first (due to those stories tending to re-hash the same plot points ad nauseam), so I'd look into it before trying to post.