Talk:The Fix/@comment-27560353-20160514225705

This is really original, but i think it would be better if it took out the part about "your wife called" and any other supposably personal terms, so that way the story could sound more like the author is speaking directly towards the reader. For example im 14 turning 15 within a few weeks; 1 dont have a wife. So, the "wife" part threw me off a bit. Aside from that I think it was an

interesting little pasta.