Talk:The Dead Poet's Game/@comment-24849549-20140903103215

7/10

Very interesting story, I like the mixture of third person and first person in this story. The usage of using evidence from several hundred years ago of a previous game to say what not to do in this is a very powerful trick that I believe you've exploited rather well. There is room for inprovement and personally I find the overall result a bit unpredictable but nonetheless it is still a very good story and I hope you keep up the good work.