Talk:Requiem for Morning Star/@comment-5733573-20180604173726

I completely missed the note at the top when I started reading and found myself thinking, "Gee, this would be really nice set to music." Lo and behold....

I like this one. My favorite thing about it is that the speaker, whose identity is pretty clear, is a sympathetic character, such that his murderous desire at the end is understandable, if not forgivable. The wording is a little forced in places, and the punctuation is flat out wrong sometimes, but overall this was very enjoyable and immersive.

And listening to the melody that inspired this piece adds a lot to the experience, so thanks for that link.