Talk:Containment Project 2 I - Nora/@comment-37657808-20181130043752

This was an interesting point of view, and I think if you cleared up spelling mistakes and format a bit, it could have much more potential. I personally did enjoy it, but I had to read through certain things 3-4 times to properly understand it. Of course, I do understand the general idea, and I think you have a future of writing. I read briefly through your other pasta’s, and I think your writing style for these is very interesting and could be continued. I do find that you carry it out a tad long, but that could just be me being impatient. I did enjoy your idea though. Just some tips, and truly sorry if I offended you in any way.

Format: 8/10

Creepiness: 7/10

Wording: 7/10

Overall: 8/10

~Sky