Talk:Ignorance or Bliss/@comment-25340844-20141026000232

This was a very enjoyable story with a pretty unique plot. Dialogue between the characters had a genuine feel, which can be hard to achieve.

The only problems I had with it were:


 * It struck me as odd that Vince was so eager to take part in such an obviously questionable show. I'd have thought he'd at least be a little suspicious of the whole operation.

I wondered why they'd leave him unsupervised in a room with an escape route. I know he was badly injured and the window was difficult to access, but if I were orchestrating a game show in which contestants are brutally tortured and eventually killed, I wouldn't take any chances.

I can't fault any other aspects of the story. 8/10.

P.S. I like you, OP. You respond well to criticism.