Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25835580-20141209001230/@comment-24510644-20141209231706

Follows the 'Jeff Formula' (look it up), which is a pretty common cliche

Also, a few bits of the writing are a bit casual, like "Forever, or until her she died from the whole nail thing."

And there is no way she could live 7 years with blood continuously flowing from her fingernails