Talk:Mirror Man/@comment-24110254-20140122031650

This is insofar as I've read the ONLY effective "I am the monster" pasta. Most of the other ones come off as lame, but this one actually manages to build tension and suspense.

But at the same time, it's got some grammatical errors here and there that make it a little hard to read, which really takes away from the suspense. Stumbling over a sentence kills flow.

But with edits, I think this could be one of the strongest pastas around, maybe even a PotM with some tweaks. Overall, great ideas, great read, just needs some polishing. Solid 7/10 effort, keep at it!