Talk:76 Draper Street/@comment-25471033-20190408210330

I thought this was really well done, the way the author wrote was great, I couldn't find any grammatical errors that messed with the story. The concept was scary but kind of predictable, I personally kind of figured there was going to be a humanoid corpse in the cellar. The twist at the end is what I liked though, even though you could tell he was being watched since the beginning, still thinking about seeing the corpse and then hearing the stairs gives me chills. I guess the only thing I would suggest is lose the predictability, I'm not sure how, but if you could have made it less obvious (poor word choice) that there was going to be a person in there, that the narrator was being watched, or gave the corpse more of a flare (get it?) I would think this is a near perfect story. 9/10