Talk:Mischief Maker/@comment-35911608-20200221010413

Mischief Maker - by Kolpik (#1, The Magician)

Cool story? Certainly. Creepypasta? Not so much. I like the idea of releasing magic back into the world, and the whole process of Tiffany doing so was interesting. Although, it feels far more fantasy than horror, with a few surprise moments here and there. I wasn’t really terrified at all throughout the story - maybe a bit concerned during the ritual, but that’s not the same thing (quoting Princess Bride there). Some good jokes here and there though.

The writing itself is solid, I liked the prose a lot. I love how you included parts of the Magician’s card appearance in the ritual, I thought that was neat, and the card’s interpretation was well handled.

Style - 4/5

Creepiness - 1/5

Enjoyment - 3/5

Use of Theme - 5/5

Grand Total: 13/20