Talk:Tobit: Hiya Toby and the Unwashed/@comment-26441750-20151020141642

This, to me, was an eye-opening installment in your series. You've introduced a great deal of content in spite of the fact that the storyline itself hasn't advanced very far. You truly do an amazing job introducing new characters into the scene.

What is notable about this installment is that everyone seems confident that they have things under control. The Rebels, Tabitha, and Lance all have their own ideas about how they will attain their goal. It surprised me that, as it turns out, Lance doesn't even believe in Tobit. I think that small detail makes the story creepier. We know that Tobit is completely fictional, but the possibility that some unknown dark force gives power to this cult just adds a small degree of realism that is particularly chilling.

The performance of the "Hiya Toby" show was incredibly well-described. It was easy to imagine the sights and sounds of it. On the note of realism, the show is a reminder that propaganda is a powerful thing.

I like how the sentence "Lance was no fool" appears twice. I'm not quite sure if it was meant to be ironic; however, it is clear Lance is an intelligent man who has gone so far out of the loop that he seems to belong in his own faction. He took Emily's concerns as sincerity without even suspecting that she is a Rebel.

Prior to this installment, I thought the bad guys were all in this together, but now it's apparent that even they are divided into their own little factions. They act in their own interests.

I apologize for taking so long to review this!