Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28420405-20160518174633/@comment-28420405-20160520143602

Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I've changed some things around and would love a second opinion :) This is actually inspired by a true story, which made it hard to not wrap up neatly. I took a little more time to end it more "creatively". Would love you to take another look. And thanks so much for the compliments! this is only my second pasta, so I'm glad someone enjoyed it!