Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25301975-20140902065241/@comment-25301975-20140903161124

Thank you, CassistRabit, for your advice. I will take it and do much more with the story. I completley understand where you're coming from, and completley agree. I did find the characters to be dull when I reread it and his "condition" could use some more detail. Thank you for your lengthy reply. I will take it to make my story better.