Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10502460-20180410032524/@comment-10502460-20180412031317

Icydice wrote: Oh i mostly agree with bloody here. I honestly found this pretty interesting and chilling, but I wish it was a bit longer. I'm not sure what I would do to make it longer though. Maybe bloody is right with foreshadowing it a bit.

Right, I need some kind of interluding event to connect the beginning and end of the story and introduce more information. But what?