Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29458657-20160908131851/@comment-29458657-20160927155018

Okay. First of all, thanks for coming back to my story. I'll try to think more about it. I imagined the idea of nobody being scared of the girl (besides Sean)  meaning that the kids were already mentally affected by the place.

Why Sean transforms:

I imagined that the place is haunted by spirits who take people to their realm where they are dragged under the sand and eaten alive. The souls of the people killed are trapped there, but they get out of the sand as the blind girl and they have fun by attacking the newcomers before the spirits take them away.