Talk:It's Just a Costume/@comment-25216989-20140812135700

Actually, the drive from Phoneix, Arizona to Orlando, Florida is about a day and a half.

It is very reminiscient of Abandoned by Disney (and its prequel A Few Suggestions and sequel Room Zero ), and if I wanted to to read them again, I'd go read them again.

The first half was good, but then as soon as we go into the mascot and the black liquid and stuff, it became a bit medicore. I'd suggest taking it to our Writer's Workshop in order to help it get better. Just saying 'my uncle then commited suicide' was lazy writing. Even if the speaker isn't entirely sure, we need a better reason than 'the mascot did something to him..'