Talk:Justine/@comment-26285530-20150523215611

Final score - 7.5/10.

I know that the story was supposed to be enigmatic, but no closure does NOT equal mysterious. Without an explanation of the books, or even what they found after following the map, this leaves me (the reader) more frustrated than anything else.

I liked the creepiness, but this also suffers from the fact that nothing ties it all together. WHY did she go crazy? WHY was eating a squirrel's limbs normal for her? For that matter, WHY was the squirrel so eager to just come up to Justine and just sit on her lap? Throwing scary things out there with no explanation for any of it doesn't make a good pasta.

Good story, but there's too many WHYs for the ending to be satisfying, or even mysterious. That's my honest review.