Talk:The Cabin with the Red Light/@comment-35711173-20190401230931/@comment-23938996-20190401235755

She means her husband's heart. She describes him as a heartless bastard, but the last thing she saw before retreating was the creature ripping out his heart and she saw the irony. I'm glad you liked it and found it so quickly, most of my work is ignored. Interesting that you point that out, as I am very much a male but my writing comes across as feminine in many cases. How is that exactly?

I use Grammarly in all that I do but I don't have premium so it won't show me all that's wrong with it. I generally write in Google Docs but even with it directly in Grammarly it can be hit and miss. I did read it aloud, but I've always managed to miss things no matter how many times I do so. If anything, the more I read it the more I seem to ignore/miss things. The best way for me to edit is to leave a story be for a long time and come back, but I wrote this in the space of a few hours as a personal challenge to get out of my writer's block.

I always wondered that too, I think I generally follow APA.