Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20150414041052/@comment-4849011-20150417163112

I know you asked me how to shorten this, but the thing is I like the introduction as it is. It doesn't leave any doubt as to setting or background. I loved the description as well as the touches of humor (such as the accident happening because the guy was drunk and the wolverine's folk song being "99 Bottles of Beer"). You could always split it into two parts and make the second part longer.