Talk:U.S.S. FEBRUARY/@comment-25941663-20160915195739

Very nice work. I really enjoyed this. It started off slow and I was worried it would just be The Thing in space, but I'm glad I was wrong. From the halfway point onward, it was a chilling read. The slow transformation was very creepy. I think though it could have done with a bit more description. Like, how exactly did the slits open? Give us more details. Maybe the skin started crawling, then a searing pain and then a cut.

This was a great read, but I believe more description on the transformation would have made this an epic homerun. Great work though, very impressed.