Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25991290-20150113013043/@comment-24101790-20150113021403

You'll have to do a deletion appeal in order to re-post, but as I mentioned above, there needs to be more interaction between the mother/son and maybe a little more description of the mother's mental unraveling. The ending needs work. As it stands, the dialogue needs work and a reason for why they are writing this would help improve the story.