Talk:Creature in the Closet/@comment-4665292-20180608201421

I really liked it! Don't take this the wrong way, but the description of the vampire's face made me think of the album art of Skrillex's Recess, which was a pretty funny mental image. Even with that as my first impression of what the thing in the closet looked like, the story still managed to be creepy, and that's saying something. It had real tension to it throughout and the wording was interesting and flowed well.

PS: There are a few typos: "therefor" and "heeled".