Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150529193644/@comment-26326346-20150530001257

Thank you for your honesty, the review is much appreciated :) This was my first attempt at a poem, so I really have no idea what I'm doing (which is why I posted it here) and expected it to be negative.

The poem was about a crazy poor person who broke into a home and started skinning an orange. The home owner walks in on the crazy person and gasps in surprise making his presence known. The crazy person kills the home owner and the eats him with the orange, because he's crazy and doesn't want the potential food (body) to go to waste.

I'll try to figure out how to change/dress it. Thanks again for the advice and feedback!