Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190427100713/@comment-9041013-20190429104717

Well this is actually better, interesting idea for the angels' appearence.

You did make a few mistakes there this time, at one point you mention how a narrator thinks he has an advantage wearing hiking shoes and a few sentences later he's speaking about wearing cheap show off type of boots.

"My daddy had taught me a prayer he had learned boy from his Daddy back in Czechoslovakia, and with all the might I had I prayed it now." Should be "learned as a boy" (though Im pretty certain Czechs were never too religious compared to their neighbors).