Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20181203115538/@comment-34823985-20181206014436

Some good points. The chapters was a solution to a problem. I was basically being lazy. Separate parts allowed me to avoid changing the tense of the first part. I like it in that tense, but I felt writing the entire story like that would cripple it. I could have written it that way to find out, but like I said, lazy.

The girlfriend angle might be more relatable. More people dating crazies than marrying them. I'd assume so anyway. Thanks for your input, Bloody. I have some thinkering to do. :D