Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28629333-20141221013957/@comment-28629333-20141221054834

Alright thx for the reasonable reply I will fix it. The plot is that this kid stays with his grandfather but he has a heart attack and starts to have paranoid hallucinations because he did not give him the pills. I will fix grammar mistakes and spelling I just don't got enough time to make sure all the I`s and I`m are spelt correctly.