Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24927388-20140514233536/@comment-24859608-20140515163317

''Im from Central Oregon, and if you went to school where I did you would understand why he didnt get kicked out of school. Meth is a really big problem in my area, and a lot of people I went to school with, and used to be friends with were heavy into it by the end of 12th grade. I really am thankful you took the time to review my story. I will keep your advice in mind for my next story. Only recently have I started writing stories, so there are a lot of things I know I can improve on.''

Learning from the best, *cough*Nooth*cough*, I know that this is still wrong. Of course, it's good to base things from personal experiences, however, you can't just expect us to know what they are. How in the hell are we going to know that half the students in Central Oregon are meth heads. And that that a student won't be kicked out of school for doing meth. You need to add these things in your story, but other than that and what Resident covered, this was a nice story.