Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26891332-20150819204902/@comment-27063803-20151129200850

First off, I really like the concept of the story. It's nice and refreshing, and shows the negative side of social networking.

However, the story is a bit on the short side, there are some grammatical errors, and some parts don't seem realistic enough for the setting. Either way it's a pretty good story.

7.5/10