Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29270351-20160610104449/@comment-28266772-20160610142154

Not sure I understand what you mean when you say "redo pasta"? If you mean you'd like to repost it for me to give more feedback, I would definitely be up for offering more feedback. If you do choose to do this though you must make sure you post your story back here, in this thread, as a reply. Do not create a new thread. I'm not an admin, but I do know that sort of stuff is frowned upon.