Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36957522-20180927160401/@comment-9041013-20180928115205

ArcOfRuin wrote: BloodySpghetti wrote:

First, if their Legal names are Lyra, Autumn and Jacob River their last name should be capitalized, and second, you shouldn't repeat their last name every time you mention them. Once is good enough. To be honest, I don’t think that the last names were really necessary. If I were the original writer, I would consider taking them out altogether. True, but if she went for it, once is enough..