Talk:The Man Called Skinny/@comment-25907694-20160428154426

I think in the beginning, it would be better if you could add how the grandma was semi-mean, or potentially cruel (which would explain why she told the story in the first place). Just a suggestion though, the grandma might be telling it to the main character to warn her.

Some might say that excessive gore for the sake of just being gore is wrong, but it was allright. If it's good it's good.

Overall though, it was a sorta plain story.

Also it was kind of weird how jerry commited suicide as a kid, doesn't seem believable, but i dont know, it could happen. I guess it's hard to picture.