Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181020071418/@comment-36393004-20181020155759

The only problem I have is when you switch back to the interview scene with Jan, your first comment from the interviewer should probably tell who is speaking because you have changed scenes. I know who is talking because I have read everything else up to this point. Someone who hasn't will be confused. I mean, I would hope they would read the previous entries first but you know how that can go.