User blog:BENSGirl97/My Take on "Jane the Killer"

This is my review and perspective on Jane. ***WARNING*** THIS IS JUST MY EDUCATED OPINION. I HAVE BEEN WATCHING REAL LIFE MURDER MYSTERIES AND STUDIDED SCICOLOGY IN MY FREE TIME FOR AS LONG AS I CAN REMEMBER!!! I DON'T MEAN TO MAKE A JAB AT THE WRITER OF THIS STORY.

Firstly, the scicology on the character and how Jeff reacts is WAY off.

1. Serial killers DON'T have battles and they certainly don't make they're turf wars public-even the proud ones. Just look at Jack the Ripper: He sent letters to Scotland Yard, BUT the letters were more puzzling and secretive. And until now his identity has been a mystery. Only idiots would allow they're crime to have that kinda of publicity and to be that open with her identity. In my opinion her first move was INCREDIBLY stupid and unlikely.

2. It's against a murderer's normal behavior to have ANY kind of relationship. Epecially someone who is that out of it. Even though the relationship between Jane and Jeff is hostile it's STILL a relationship. (The writer has also subtly put in a kind of 'I love but I won't tell you and I'll act like I don't like you at all feeling all through out the series.) Unless the broken behavior is put into a calm environment the subject will never be able to communicate correctly again. (And even that takes time and has a small chance of working at all.)

I think that if he or she re-writes they're story (without as many cliches) I think it will be much better. Maybe even better than the fanfic I'm writing right now :3.

Love the story though! --You've Met with a Terrible Fate Haven't You? 20:56, July 9, 2012 (UTC)