Talk:Jessica/@comment-27086946-20151023085756

This doesn't qualify as a Creepypasta. It's more of a fan fiction and not a particularly good one at that. While I can say it is better in terms of grammar and spelling than say,  Jeff the Killer and Sonic.exe, it's still rather mediocre. The main character seems overly-sensitive; I may understand him crying over breaking a cherished item in addition to the grief he received in school but crying at the few messages in the game is just silly and unrealistic (even in the Creepypasta universe). Overall, it was neither extremely good nor extremely bad; just mediocre.