Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5239282-20140418233643/@comment-5239282-20140420013830

The Koromo wrote: This is good. It has an old-school feel, similar to Lovecraft or Poe, but in a modernized way. I'll give a longer review on this tomorrow. Quick question. Should I remove the section detailing The Mother's corpse? I feel it detaches too much from the story and it isn't necessary.

Honestly, I just went crazy with it. I couldn't stop till I was left w/ a full-body description.