Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24169760-20151230212838

 One Storm night 2 teens called Steven and mike. They were starting a sleepover at mikes house. His house was small it had one bathroom, one kitchen, two beds, an attic. They decided to sleep in the attic for their scary story time! Before going to sleep mike decided to play a game of his childhood called animal jam? Steven hated that idea and said ’’ this is the dumbest idea ever!’’ mike answered. ’’ Come on just this one night?’’ he begged. Steven replied ’’alright fine let’s play this kids game!’’ so they turned the computer on and got on animal jam. But his animal character was gone? Steven said ’’well I guess we have to create a character?’’ mike was surprised to see that his character vanished for an unknown reason. But they both created a new character. It was an arctic wolf his name was ‘colonel arctic ruler’ it was the original white color. The character was not a member. His den was the small house? Steven said ’’well I guess we have to earn gems?’’ he said disappointed. So mike started to earn gems by playing in the arcade room 1 hour later he earned 567 gems. So he started adding some Christmas items in his den like some lights, a Christmas tree, some gifts. Suddenly a jammer called general major beast appeared in his den. He was completely red with some red horns and red and white eyes. And a metal chain on his neck. He typed ’’hello loser’’ mike was mad about general but he ignored him shortly after. Then general typed ’’answer me you baby!’’ mike locked his den and general was gone! Steven said ’’I hate these type of players they will never learn!’’ mike replied ’’ well I forgive?’’ so he started visiting more dens but then he saw general on top of MT shivers alone… then mike typed ’’dude are you ok?’’ general turned around and typed ’’YES LEAVE ME ALONE!’’ mike typed ’’ dude calm down I will help you?’’ at that point general was staring at mikes character and said. ’’What a shame!’’ and he showed the sad emoticon and then vanished. Mike was confused and he didn’t know what to do next. Steven said ’’what happened?’’ then a text box appeared saying dear jammers we are sorry for the occurring random words we are going to repair it as soon as possible? Then mike said ’’oh that’s why!’’ so he got back to his den. But his den was empty? Then his character started moving on himself! Mike was staring at the screen in shock. His character was dropping tears and his den started burning up in flames! General appeared behind him and started following him. Mikes character was burning in flames! And there was a picture of completely dark wolves surrounding his character chanting these words the flames are the melted blood of the demonic general major beast may he eat our remains and consume the souls of the living. And the screen went dark and a red text appeared on the screen saying. WhAt A ShAmE! And the game closed up by itself? Mike turned the computer off and said ’’ I’m going to have nightmares for years!’’ Steven was in some kind of trance as he chanted the same words as the dark wolves in the game? He started to go outside into the forest! Mike followed him. But he lost him in the center of the forest all he found 2 minutes later was a burned corpse grinning at a tree writhen thanks for playing with me mike?  