Talk:The Puppetmaster's Regime/@comment-24077689-20140307164805/@comment-5946174-20140308205818

I was going to write a review of this pasta, but you've already pointed out the main problems with it. To add to what you said, there are also quite a few inconsistencies in the work, like when Morietur vomited even though he had a "lack of" a stomach; how does one vomit without a stomach? All in all, it wasn't a terrible story, but I've seen much better. It certainly wasn't PoTM material, and I am rather disappointed that it was chosen over so many other good stories.