Talk:In the Long Run/@comment-26507513-20150814014751

I actually really liked the start and the follow through of this guys' day but I must admit that the 'plot twist' was a massive let down and I was really hoping for something like he and his wife were monsters and went hunting that night (or something along those lines) It's well written but the end was boring, you started off strong but coped out of a good pasta last second. 5/10