Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20140923012345/@comment-4893169-20141002002305

Hhhmm, Dark Flow. I never heard of that. I've heard of Dark Matter, but this seems like something completely different. I'm kind of reminded of that movie called Event Horizon centering around this prototype ship that was capable of faster-than-light travel by creating an artificial black hole to open a portal from one part of the universe to another, and it came back after being missing for eleven years with something evil onboard.

I don't know that could be connected to this Dark Flow you mentioned in your critique.

Thank you so much for giving me a new idea for my next upcoming story.

I have two questions though. The first is if the conversation is realistic enough and the second one if it would be better if I made the Nye-Am people mentioned in this work as a more enhanced race of human or just make them a Faerie people? I'm trying to contrast the folies-ridden human (hume) race with the much more enlightened Nye-Am.