Talk:The Good Ole' Days/@comment-24996913-20140831020419

I did like the story. It was well written, though I did find and correct a few punctuation and grammar errors, but, for a first pasta, it's much better than many others I've read. Good work. I will say the ending did sort of fall short. I too wonder why he automatically thought of another dimension when he didn't mention dimensions at all throughout the story.