Talk:The Shelter/@comment-24587808-20140224195407

I loved where the story was leading sort of near the first quarter. He finds an abandon old shelter with a diary. Yet we never covered some parts of the diary which ultimately could have made this the best post ever put on creepypasta in my eyes. Kenneth speaks of being in bed and seeing this boy laying in bed over him or living in the shelter. I would have much preferred if in some way Kenneth was a ghost or the main character was some how entering the past when he went in the shelter and thats how Kenneth noticed him. The Indians with the alien like beast didn't quite fit this. If it was a personification of his thoughts then it should have definitely looked more like a mad mand then monster, and not be able to react with other people. Instead it spoke it him of murder and made him commit these acts against the girls and his parents. How this would explain the past events I don't know. But a story ending with a little mystery is always a bonus.