Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180921153801/@comment-36627132-20180921162242

L0CKED334 wrote: I will fix the quotation errors. Not trying to be argumentative but I would be scared shitless if I was stuck in a VR World, but that in-itself is an opinion much like your third point. I appreciate you taking the time to read it though. I am slightly disappointed that it wasn't your cup of tea. In all fairness it would make a good story (if a bit more work was done on it), just not a good a Creepypasta that's all.