Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25216754-20140927165447/@comment-25379190-20140927184920

I actually liked this a lot.

While I can't say it was exactly scary, it was definately creepy. Although I am reading this when it's perfectly light outside, and this story would have much more effect at night.

I saw a couple typos and spelling errors, but nothing letting the story sit and reading over it a little later wouldn't fix.

I will say that I was slightly confused at the ending but that very well could just be me.