Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28344087-20160530230414

Note: I am not the best at English, or good at spelling. I am also not the best at writing good plot lines which I want to be good with. A four year old girl named Luna walked down the dark and long hallway. Rain poured down from the night sky. Lighting buzzed down. The sound of thunder cracked down from time to time. Stars shined in the night, being nothing to people nowadays. Her parents left for a  trip after they remarried. Her sister, Jade, was appose to be babysitting her for two weeks. Jade, being the teenager she always was, threw a party where almost everyone in her class was invited. Now the party was over. Jade and a small group of her friends giggled and gossiped. The snores of drunk or passed out teens were louder than ever. The sound which could only be making out was quiet. Music was sigtly played. The only reason why Luna was awake because her favorite stuff animal was gone. The name of it was Celestial Arrow. Luna loved it because of how it looked. It had a snowy white pelt with pale icy blue ears, tails, and paws. The eyes were like the ocean. One eye was a dark blue bottom, while the other one looked like a human eye, but flat. It was a cat. Luna thought that one of the teenagers had it. Luna paused. She heard footsteps, whoever it was, it was carrying something heavy. Luna walked quietly. The footsteps were heading towards her mother's sewing room. Luna gasped quiely. She walked a lot faster. She soon found herself in the sewing room. She looked up, about to shout in anger, but instead she gasped and froze in horror. She saw Celestial Arrow, the stuff animal smiling, holding a dagger that her father downstairs, out of reach for her. "Oh deary, it looks like this will be easier than I thought! I'm only good with children, not with those drunk and bossy teens." laughed Celestial Arrow, in a craoked and scrawny voice as if it hasnt spoke in a while. Luna tried to run, but the door was slammed close. Luna started to panic, confused how the door could close with no one there. It couldnt have been Jade or her friends. She turned and looked at what was her favorite stuff cat. "Oh, about your other toys. You see, I have special friends. That was Midnight Pooly, but that's really important. Oh well!" Celestial Arrow explained. Luna stepped backwards, wanting to run, but stuff animals stepped out of the shadows, which made Luna's young body freeze. There was a black fox, gray mole, pink dog, green dragon, and a golden lioness. They all had a dark shade of brown. They all lunged at Luna. Luna was to weak and hunger to fight back. The torn up old stuff animals were pinned down. A teal faclon waddled up to Celestial Arrow. The falcon nudged a needle and a string to thread to it. The faclon then helped to pin down the little girl. Celestial Arrow went down, leaving the dagger on the table. "This is my pack of friends, and its time to make you join us. We have to take your heart and other important insides for this, but we'll have to check you first." chuckled Celestial Arrow as she got the needle and thread ready. Celestial Arrow sewed Luna's mouth close with the help of a white monkey. Luna tried to scream for help, but the skin around her mouth only stretched, about to rip, but Luna kept on screaming for her sister. Soon a silver tiger had to come and help. The stitchings only tore. Celestial Arrow only looked angrily at Luna. "I guess we have to hurry up with this before the teenagers come" it muttered as the monkey brought the dagger to Celestial Arrow.  