Talk:Annie96 Is Typing.../@comment-4715955-20170123085609

Raise your hand if you think you could hold a conversation at length with a friend via text message or internet while hiding in your closet from a potential killer.

Yeah, I didn't think so.

The dialogue is stilted and unnatural, and doesn't read like a real internet conversation. The story's progression is rushed. The doppelganger idea would be a good one in the hands of a more competent writer.

I rate this a first draft in quality, and the heaps of praise it gets is another sign that creepypasta is a sinking ship.