Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-14992725-20160116203527

Ok I had mixed reactions about that but I think this creepypasta isn't as good as I realised before. 1. Why did you change Jeff's parents' names? They are called Peter and Margaret in the origin! 2. Where's famous Jeff's glasgow smile? Jeff without it isn't Jeff the Killer! 3. Too much changes. I could rewrite this pasta without changing all plot. 4. Flare? Really? He alived? He should die! 5. And what was Jeff doing in this bathroom? Shouldn't he cut a glasgow smile? 6. But despite of that you have got talent to writing creepypastas. You can write long descriptions. And you can descripe feelings. But this pasta isn't scary.

I don't like those changes. I prefer the old one version. Don' t hate me. Everyone has the law to diffrent opinion. Sorry for eventual mistakes. English isn't my first language :p