Talk:Normal Porn for Normal People/@comment-27593126-20160112073720

Aside from some grammatical errors, the story is definitely unpredictable and seems very "blue-collar" or "campfire tall-tale" in a tachnologically evolved kind of way. I was, however, disappointed by the lack of utilizing the actual name: "normalpornfornormalpeople." It's obvious that this is some disturbing stuff, but there is a huge opportunity here for satire, analysis, anything-- but we literally get nothing. Cool concept, but as of now, under-developed. Maybe some folks think that's what's so creepy about it. I can see that. But I think the idea for this is so good that it could go even further.