Talk:Do Not Read This, I Beg You/@comment-26285530-20150523213222

Alright, to get straight into my review. Final score - 3/10.

This reminds me of those chain mails that you need to "forward to 10 people in 30 seconds" or some crap like that. Either way, this is not very good.

It could've been at least a 6/10 if you had thought of some better way to quell the inner "beings". But really? A drop of a loved one's blood? C'mon.

My other big problem with this pasta is that you're telling the reader what to do constantly - no one likes that. Speaking of which, did you REALLY excpect anyone to listen to your instructions?

To summarize, I see one thing in this pasta - wasted potential. You had a chance, but you failed to capitalize. That's my honest review.