Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5614678-20180329110224/@comment-9041013-20180329183801

You went lovecraft all the way eh, even to the historical misconceptions. Philistines adopted the worship of Dagon from the canaanites which they were not, and they werent really destroyed by the Judean kingdom. So switch it somehow to make it more historically correct, I guess. other than that, 'tis fine.