User blog comment:Dorkpool/Creepypasta Riffs: Clockwork: Your Time Is Up/@comment-26245108-20150329154314

To be honest, the story sounded way too much like "JEFF the Killer" but with a variety of differences.

Jeff:


 * Male
 * Burned
 * Catchphrase: Go to Sleep
 * Bullied by 3 people (still wondering to this day, HOW THE FREAKING HELL DID THE BULLIES GET FRIGGIN GUNS?!?!????!?!??)
 * Had a strange tugging feeling going on in his mind

Clockwork:
 * Female
 * Not burned
 * Catchphrase: Your time is up
 * Abused by her father (physically) and her brother (sexually)
 * Has a clock for one of her eyes
 * Lived as some would say a "Hard Knock Life"

Both:
 * Kill people
 * Killed their families

And that's about it.

If people want a good a memorable character, they'll have to read the site rules and regulations, think of good ways to make a story more suspenseful without repetitive elements, and lastly to stop using the "Jeff the Killer" formula.