Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25150913-20140708185634/@comment-4832646-20140708204200

It wasn't deleted on personal preference. It was deleted because it almost, but not quite, passed the standards. Put in some more explanation: Why did she go that route so quickly? Give more character detail. How old is Erin and her husband? Also, make it seem just a little less like a bondage session, and work on the parts after her first cut - as stated, they're rushed, and you fell flat.

Having just one of these would help make it pass the standards. Answer some of the questions left to the reader. Did Erin have a mental illness? Are they hardcore druggies, scumbags, rednecks, or some other stereotype? Etc.