Talk:Wednesday Night/@comment-26007602-20150711174901/@comment-26054278-20150711181201

The first draft had the exact same build-up up until the part after Mr. Bolinski drowns. After that, it had Christian become enveloped in murder a lot, lot more. I toned it down in this version. Then, it rushed through a bunch of paragraphs just for the twist to be that Christian was in fact the writer of the story. It didn't make too much sense and was rushed, and, despite being exactly what I wanted, I ditched it and rewrote it to make it much improved.

Yeah, I wasn't really going for horror here. More of a drama with slight horror elements, which is what a lot of my stories end up becoming.

I thought the information about Peg meeting Mr. Bolinski would probably make the most sense just because of how much Christian did idolize her and would remember things related to her.

Despite the boat being a bit of a convience, I actually have interacted with several motorboats that do not require keys to work, so I thought I wasn't taking too much of a leap. I'll probably go and more heavily imply that the boat was in fact there for the use of the lifeguards, therefore providing a reason for it to constantly be on the beach.

Thank you for reading.