Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35515534-20190605053523/@comment-35515534-20190608001904

DrBobSmith wrote: Starman2012 wrote:

BloodySpghetti wrote: I don't think that the "I've been killed and I'm writing this story post mortem" is a good idea. I agree, while I wrote it at the begging I thought of it as 'bad-ass' while now looking back. Re-reading it. I find it funny. This is the first pasta I've written; and I'm leaving "Tinkerbell" to slowly die off. As this was a first attempt, then a second draft, at a creepypasta. I'm currently writting a new pasta. That'll top this one, and be acctuly good; and creepy. Thank you for the feedback, and (all) this feedback sure has shaped my way of story-telling.

That is why you take your stories to the Writer's Workshop. The feedback here has been absolutely invaluable to me. Thanks