Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20181116105245/@comment-36393004-20181116154734

Ok, you are right about the tense swapping. It goes from past-tense to present back to past between the first and second paragraphs. Also, you don't have to capitalize seasons so, "Winter" should be "winter". I almost commented on the capitalization of "Stockings" because I type as I read sometimes but then I saw what you did and thought, "Oh, you cheeky bastard! I see what you did there."