Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36013915-20180629060821/@comment-36013915-20180629081057

Thank you for that comment. I was actually still thinking of expanding it in a way. Regarding the cliche concept I actually still wanna run with it and I just want to follow one character cause I feel like it's gonna be hard for me to fit more characters in the story. I will also add more to it I am thinking of expanding the story where my main character actually stumbles acorss something that is related to the shirt. Maybe somewhere in the middle would work, or maybe after the part where the character is 23. I would also like some suggestions where the story is heading. I also really want the ending just to be ambiguous, I really want my character to question themselfves and the shirt, but I don't know how to write that in. Thank you again for the comment.