Talk:Penpal/@comment-26811548-20150807201225

I have mixed feelings about this. Even though I liked it, and the ending was amazingly good, there were a lot of twists that were too predictable, like Boxes "being" the walkie talkie, the stranger who sat at the movies being the stalker, the "I love you" message not being from the stalker, Josh having disappeared when Veronica said "I don't know", etc. Honestly at the end I wasn't really bothered by those because I enjoyed the read nonetheless.

8/10

I was SO expecting the stalker to be the narrator's dad, or at least someone mentioned in the story.