Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190813084030/@comment-35711173-20190816080340

Thank you to all who have given me help.

Bloody Spaghetti, I have gone back and forth between Miriyam and Mary more times than I can remember. As "flute" is a very common Irish idiom for penis, I used it. I also considered "schlong" (sounded funny) and shillelagh (possibly too obscure).

Jdeschene,

There are a couple of words in Revelations 14: 4-5 that I thought had irony as Walsh could recite it but not live it. As for delaying the payback, I know the story is quite short but I haven't figured what is needed to drive the ideas forward that isn't there already.

Dr. Bob