Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25024572-20150322233449/@comment-32071678-20150323230115

I wouldn't call this a creepy pasta but it wasn't badly written. Overall I found it to be a little meh, and if I were to rate it in general it would be a 7/10. The concept itself though is very unique, and maybe you could take the concept and do something with it, like branch off of this pasta or maybe do a bit more elaboration. Like, taking a certain aspect of this and making it seem a little darker and creepier. That would probably make it pop a little more and give it a better edge to help it linger with readers.