Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25216044-20140723152542/@comment-24957984-20140723163501

Wow... so many wrong things on this piece of text.

First of all, it's a wall of text. It's annoying and almost impossible to read like this. Please, create paragraphs after a certain even has finished and a new one has started.

There's also some weird phrasing, and the text seems to be corrected by an automatic spellcheck. Proofreading would solve this.

The plot is just a bad mix of demonic stuff and Pokémon. It's laughable and this plot will never be accepted on this wiki, especially now that Pokémon pastas are no longer accepted anymore.

My comment right there is just a summary about the story, there's some more things to talk about, but just that is enough explanation. Think about something else if you want to post a story here or in the main site.