Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-26816722-20150724175604/@comment-5973399-20150724210805

A massive wall of text in black font on a black background. Yeah, my retinas were gone by the time I finished this.

The idea of a protagonist being trapped by a ghost who, after many years of imprisonment, falls to the same level as the original ghost and trapping somebody else in their place is actually a fairly interesting idea, as it goes beyond portraying the baddie as "I'm a ghost who's evil because why not" to one that motives which are both selfish and yet understandable.

However, this is ruined because most of the story is just a generic ghost story and we hardly get anything about actually being trapped.

Anyway, if this family lived in the days before law enforcement, how the hell did they get a portable camera?