Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20181005100218/@comment-34823985-20181006005201

It's a bit repetitious at times. There might be other examples of this, but lazy me will leave it to you to check it out. 1) I opted to respond by simply asking what is he talking about. “What do you mean, Tommy?”, I responded. 2) As I was about to respond, he typed again but I’ve decided to ask him what it had to do with my dream, “So, what does it have to do with my dream?"

Typo? Being impatient I dragged the stream pointed a little further down its line to a point where my screamed showed a transition slide effect in the video.

I'm not too fond of this story, Bloody, but I see how plenty of people could get into this. I don't have much to say about it other than the few issues I mentioned above. Maybe I'll have more to give on a later draft of this. Good luck, man.