Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25659560-20141119022157/@comment-24281984-20141119025550

I know you said this isn't finished, but I don't think there's too much of a story you can expand upon from this. You need to proofread this because I see quite a few i's that need to be I's, some words like "Russian's" should be capitalized and you usually don't need to use ellipses (...) except in dialogue.

The story itself didn't seem to make much sense. If this is a letter, it's not a very convincing one because it isn't written in the way you would expect. Letters are usually short and to the point about the message they're sending. From what you have here, there doesn't seem to be anything that can create a full story out of. You may be able to work the idea behind the letter into a longer one, but it needs a lot of work as is both story-wise and grammar-wise.

I hope this was helpful.