Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33488654-20180822020522/@comment-33488654-20180825041320

Jdeschene wrote: DrBobSmith wrote: Do the best you can with it and then when you REALLY can do no more you can go to the next story. If you want it to not disappear within hours then you will need to keep on working. And I think there's value in keeping a practice story around, you know? Maybe you never post this to the wiki, but working on it could still be valuable and an opportunity to learn and grow. I think we all have stories like that in our personal collections. It's just part of being a writer.

Steven, you are already on a good track. You're receptive to criticism and you clearly want to learn and improve. Even if you scrap this story, that's a great way to be. I look forward to more from you! :-) Alright, I shall do my best to give more.

And I am indeed open to criticism, after I'm not a schmuck like JC the hyena, I want to improve as I writer, I care about real horror.