Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29969337-20161104130817/@comment-29969337-20161113224211

Seems that even with that feedback taken onboard it doesn't match the quality standards. Any more thoughts on how to get this up to scratch for Mr Dupin? I'm afraid I've not had any feedback so I can't tell you what his issues might be with the story.

MisterStuff (talk) 22:42, November 13, 2016 (UTC)