Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9967354-20140702062156/@comment-9967354-20140702122428

Well, it's actually about a tree with a real heart beating inside it. It is what keeps them alive. (It lives, we live...) And it needs a living sacrifice to keep itself alive. The bit with the limbs was about how nightmares can distort stuff. I supposed I'll work on making that more clear.

Also, that bit is a disjoint sentence. It's basically: I want to see the tree's heart stop, and the 'blood' bleed (bit of a pun:plants 'bleed' during injuries) into the soil. Then she goes back to the fact that she has to go home soon. I'll work on adding something there, too, to make stuff clear. Thanks a bunch.