Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26946495-20150901005357

Marina is just a normal girl at the age of twelve, but the different thing about her is that she has the ability of seeing ghosts, ever since she was born. Her family members thinks she is crazy because of her schizophrenia and she is just seeing things. Nobody ever understands her.

Marina was walking after her school ended, she stopped to see a abandoned house. She wonders what's inside? So, she look both ways to make sure the road is safe. She jaywalked her way to the abandoned house. She have a bad feeling about entering the house, while using all her strength and her courage, she opened the door.

Marina saw what looks like the inside of the haunted house from horror movies, and she hates horror movies. The rug was ragged and shredded, the windows are dusty and blurry, curtains are also shredded and what appears to be blood on the curtain. There are stairs that leads to upstairs then it stops to have two stairs, one on the left and other on the right.

She guess there are two stairs that leads to different directions with different rooms then there is a hallway that goes across two hallways linking together in the room like a balcony just in case you don't have to go to stairs to head to the other side. Marina walk on the rug and there's a short clingy sound of a chime like something shiny was dropped on the ground. Marina moved the rug to find out there is a rusty key. She kept it in case of emergencies.

Marina thinks heading up the stairs would be a smarter idea because going downstairs there would be a monster lurking around downstairs as she heard from horror movies that monsters started chasing the protagonist downstairs. As she goes upstairs, she heard something from the room to the left. A creaking sound was made when a door in dark room opens by itself.

"Coome inn~" The voice says it in a singsong tone. It creep out Marina. As she did what the voice says, and went inside the room. The door made the creaking sound again as it closes the door shut. She sees nothing but darkness, her eyes started glowing green as she saw a face with a creepy smile. It has one eye because its other eye is missing, and his smile is stretching high with normal teeth that of a human being. The eye was red on the outer parts with yellow eye color glowing in the dark. Marina ran out of the room and closed the door and lock it with a rusty key she found.

Banging sounds are heard from the other side, Marina backed away from the door with a scared look on her face with tears in her eyes knowing that she is going to die. Marina ran downstairs to find a weapon to kill the monster. She grabs a machete lying on the counter. "Who keeps a machete lying on the counter." She thought as she took the weapon.

She went back upstairs to check on the monster and saw that the wooden door that is holding off the monster was shredded holes that looked like claws caused the accident. She turn around seeing the monster heading towards her,but it wasn't running or walking slow like a zombie. It was spin around like Kiba's Beast Human Clone move coming towards me. She run as fast as she can and headed to the bathroom and locked the door behind her. Marina throw some salt at the front of the door.

Marina sat down and started whimpering about the end of her life and started to think that committing suicide with her machete at her neck and split it open, but she stopped before picking her up her machete, she heard the banging at the door. Marina's pupil went small after hearing the banging on the door. "No..." She whimpered. "This can't be happening..." The banging at the door continues and continues. She started crying and shouting go away at the monster banging the door but it continues.

Marina tries to calm herself but repeatedly saying "Don't go insane" multiple times that she lost count. Tears started flowing like two waterfalls on her cheeks. After a bunch of banging, Marina thought that this is enough and she is totally done with this shit. Marina grabs the machete right besides her and hold onto the handle of the door and then she started counting.

"One...Two...THREE!" Marina opens the door fast that the monster didn't predict her move and she lunged at him stabbing him in the gut with the machete. She continually stabbing the monster by moving her hand up and slashing him down with her weapon. She stopped and looked at the dead body.

Marina felt something piecing her gut, she looked down to see the nail of the monster putting his plasma inside her. Marina started smiling and then laugh hysterically as she stabs her gut repeatably. She continues stabbing herself laughing then she loses her strength and fell to the ground then she got up laughing.

Mary, Marina's friend started knocking at her friend's door. Marina's mom opened the door worried. Mary wonders what's wrong with her. "Where's Marina?" Marina's mom asked. Her brother,Drew answered saying that Marina went inside a abandoned house. Marina's mom told Mary to go to the house and find Marina. Mary agrees and went to the abandoned house.

When Mary is here, she knocked the door. Mary was shivering because she was a scary cat the door started to automatically opens. "Ahhh!" Mary screams. She stopped screaming and went inside quietly. She looks around for Marina and started to shout her name. "Marina!" She shouted,so Marina can hear it. "MARINA!" She shout louder until she heard a voice that she is familiar with.

"Maaarry..." Marina says. She was hiding in a wall, because she doesn't want Mary to see her in a bad state. "Marina, don't be shy...we're friends, right?..." She asked. "I guess so." Marina said. "Sorry, Mary, but..."

"But, what?" She wonders. "CoMe OvEr, HeRe...I'll hAvE tO kIlL yOu..." Marina says as she shows herself bleeding in the gut with plasma dripping out of her mouth like she coughed it out. Red liquid also coming out of her eyes like tears and Marina's eyes are red instead of green. She charged at her friend, Mary tried to run away, but Marina killed her in the process. Mary fell down on her back bleeding to death while Marina laughs crazily.

<p data-p-id="3ac1976f415f95a06c6d3a57213fe610" style="box-sizing:border-box;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:24px;font-size:18px;font-family:'SourceSansPro','HelveticaNeue',Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;line-height:24px;color:rgb(85,85,85);">"HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! YeS, bLeEd To DeAtH fOr AlL I cArE. HAHAHAHA!"Marina continues to laugh until she ran out of blood to bleed and passed out lying in the ground next to her former friend, Mary. They can finally died together. The monster's plasma bleed out of Marina and stopped controlling her, these two friends lying together is best thing Marina hoped for.

<p data-p-id="86106a5808d188f68b82715e1ecfff43" style="box-sizing:border-box;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:24px;font-size:18px;font-family:'SourceSansPro','HelveticaNeue',Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;line-height:24px;color:rgb(85,85,85);">"...Together...forever..."

<p data-p-id="a3da95d6ae38fbf45b73803cdf825d16" style="box-sizing:border-box;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:24px;font-size:18px;font-family:'SourceSansPro','HelveticaNeue',Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;line-height:24px;color:rgb(85,85,85);">Those were the last words of Marina before she closed her eyes and died with Mary.

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