Talk:What We Think We Want/@comment-35711173-20180730063830

To the author: Take this story to the Writer's Workshop in the forum.

You can learn how to use the correct case in a title here: https://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:DrBobSmith/Proper_Case_in_Creepypasta_Titles

I spot checked this and saw a half a dozen spelling errors and at least a dozen punctuation and grammar errors. These are easy errors to fix but you need to proof check it. Here is a link to how to do it: https://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:DrBobSmith/Basic_Spell_and_Grammar_Checking