Talk:A Moonlight Drive

I'm not entirely sure what happened. Certain things seemed to be of no consequence, like the snakes that strangled him for a while, then stopped. And the seemingly random 'all was dark' or 'all was light' mixed in was just a little confusing. It certainly made me uncomfortable with the torture, but not necessarily scared. All in all, it was good, just didn't quite make sense to me. FRay 18:37, April 9, 2012 (UTC)