User blog:ShawnCognitionCP/(First half of) In Torment, Now Available

Hello, Creepypasta Wiki users. If you've followed me, or seen me around at all, I was probably mentioning In Torment, a story series I've been working on. The story focuses heavily on time twisting and phobia abuse, so I thought I would let it go out for a spin.

This is sort of a beta. I have released the (early stage) first half of In Torment, the first story in the series, inside of the writer's workshop, looking for criticism and responses. Keep in mind the first half of the story is subject to being changed before the full release.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:434821

Have fun reading, if you care too!