Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24859608-20140515140357/@comment-24821182-20140515142803

I think that starting your CP with straight up politcal commentary is a bad idea. If you want to affect people into caring more about the environment, make it subtle. Make it part of your story, for that matter. Have an antagonist who's a greedy bastard and doesn't care about the environment, or depict the tragic scenery of the beautiful Arctic reduced to a toxic wasteland by human pollution, and the subsequent effects it has on life in those areas.

The idea of paranormal things happening when the Northern and Southern lights intertwine could potentially be great. I find it slightly reminiscent of what happened in the second season of Legend of Korra, though, but that could just be a coincidence.

Anyway, I'd like to read it.