Talk:Thief/@comment-25052433-20150202170439

This was an excellent story and a joy to read. The writing was superb, and the tempo made the length of the story come out just about perfect. The action was blended very well with the suspense and horror concept, making for a great story indeed.

The characters were displayed very well, with good depth and development. The scenes were detailed in just the right fashion so that the reader was seeing essentially what you wanted us to see.

The setting was perfect for the storyline. A dark, musty old house filled with horrible ghouls and depraved maniacs, what more could I ask for?

This was a great story. Thank you for bringing it to my attention, as it was a pleasure to read.