Talk:The Pale Emperor Gave Me Life Advice/@comment-36393004-20181123210031/@comment-9041013-20181123231440

Why thank you for taking the time to read this :)

As for the things you've pointed out, the elipses come only in quotes, if I'm not mistaken. And as for other mechanical issues, mind point some out? I'm currently under the weather so I'm probably not going to be able to focus for long enough to find them D=

And the second point you made, throughout the story, Death makes points by showing Benjamin various deaths, the one bit with the bus was "caused" by Death capitalizing off the driver's reckless attitude on the road. He drove them through Alaska on purpose.

I hope that makes things a little clearer.