Talk:Not Tonight/@comment-35911608-20200221013934

Not Tonight - by Glisario (#14, Temperance)

A very interesting perspective to take on the card of Temperance. Intriguing. While the premise doesn’t grab my attention strongly, it certainly fits the card you were dealt. The way you wrote each scene was also well done, though again it feels just a touch cliche in my own opinion. The creepiness is there, and you culminated with the last line brilliantly. I don’t really have a lot to say on this one; I didn’t love it to death, but I certainly don’t hate it either. It’s a simple horror story from the perspective of a mad man trying to keep the balance between his life and his desires. Good job.

Style - 3/5

Creepiness - 3/5

Enjoyment - 2/5

Use of Theme - 4/5

Grand Total: 12/20