Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24962525-20140522051052/@comment-24821182-20140522053045

I assume it's the grammar you're asking for help with. I'm going to put some corrections below:

"The file said that the man was 24 years old and had comitted rape."

"When the police broke into his home, they found nothing but a black liquid on the floor, and the man was nowhere to be found."

"What police saw was disgusting; the man had been hanged, stabbed, and his heart, liver, lungs, and all kinds of body parts had been removed. The police found his heart... but it was half-eaten."

"Three local high school football players were beating freshman students to death."

"The police rushed to the bathroom and saw the football players had been stabbed... but the blood wasn't normal. It was a black liquid. The police took a sample of the liquid, but it was unknown to the lab. They couldn't figure out what was in it, nor who did it."

"One day, a survivor and a detective are in a room, talking about the case of the murderer who murders bad people."