Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20181027034711/@comment-9041013-20181030215823

Ah that's better, still needs some polish on Tony's mental condition, he is clearly messed up (finally), but still it's kind of one dimentional. Maybe look up ptsd, Idk.

Anyway, the beginning of this part felt kinda jumpy, first he gets to a new compound and then he's going to steal a truck, work on the transition.

FInally we have a proper case of a bad guy over here... I like that there's some factionalism here... hmm, keep it going.

We'll see what happens next.

Just smooth it a little here and there.