Talk:A White Horse/@comment-25383866-20141019112407

Holy wow, that was intense. The writing hooked me immediately; I love the way you started it out, by engaging the reader. There's always a chance for failure when doing it that way but you pulled it off masterfully.

There wasn't a wasted word in here. Everything was relevant, and made the story move forward. I liked how little dialogue there was; it can be painful to read sometimes, but your sparing use of it made it shine here.

As a personal aside, I love stories that delve into the human mind, the way people react to strange situations, and human nature, so this one was a winner from the start.

I do have one question regarding the character's desired title: "Analogical Therapist." Is that a real thing? Or did you mean "analytical?"

Overall, it was really good. One of the few stories I've read on here that made me want to read all the way through to the end.