Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28476010-20160517211554/@comment-28476010-20160517215438

"How exactly is Carter doing all of this? How is he managing to do all of this? How can a twenty-year-old student transfer to multiple schools, torture students, and then flee without being caught? This becomes especially awkward when you consider the fact that he has a huge arsenal of torture weapons, some of which being hard to obtain items like Medieval weapons. Additionally how exactly does he escape interrogation? If you're trying to base the story in reality, it feels odd to shoe-horn supernatural elements in at the end." The "Carter" character is more of an entity of sorts,similar to what the cenobites were in the Hellraiser series.He's like a cenobite,but in a human form.You are right,I didn't mention that the character isn't human.He makes up fake identities to keep himself a mystery.I'm sorry,but I will need the full text with grammar fixed made by someone,because I'm kind of busy.I will add in more sentences to make it look like "Carter" is not a human,but an entity.