Talk:The Harpy Crow/@comment-25954350-20150201181254

A nice little twist at the end, by the way. A great one, actually.

It's a well written story, but, and this is my own option, a story about a crow - which is a bird about the size of a human's head - with a human face is a little difficult to imagine, and kind of funny.

But the story's good and, despite the crow/human thing, quite creepy - as well as being original. Two things that you don't normally see in pasta's.

So keep writing!

- The Baron