Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26365586-20150514035325/@comment-26365586-20150514182754

If I had done more and more tests, would'nt it be a bit more lengthy than it already is? I figured no one wanted to read me droning on and on about the science behind him, or the detailed descriptions of the many other scientists involved, and I had believed that I had to shorten my story. Maybe it would'nt be too long, but many of the pastas I have seen are no longer than 3-4 pages. EmpyrealInvective said nothing about the tortured child complex, although I see your point now and I will definitely take your advice to heart. Thank you for your constructive feedback! Since i've been actively using the site for about two days, do you know how I can alter my revised version in the workshop?