Talk:Don't Forget Me/@comment-4849011-20150313162407

First off, thanks for going back and adding your name and the story title to your review request. Without the name and title I'd have to figure it out using the Recent Activity page and your "My Pastas" section. You asked me to review your story and at first all I could do was wonder, "Who is this?" ~laughs~ We've all overlooked things at times.

In any case, there were some grammar issues, but I cleaned those up for you. It's not the best I've read, but it wasn't bad. With the sister being insane you have to wonder if the comments she made about their father were true. Of course, maybe they were true and finding that out was what drove her over the edge.