Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24982950-20140928111256/@comment-25458443-20140930004240

To elaborate, This isn't a bad story. I like the separate elemants you have so far. The use of Italics bothered me a bit, but the rest was fine. But i wasn't chilled or unnerved. that's a bit subjective, but it didn't seem to want to scare you.

but yah. this is a really trippy story.