Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-8893293-20140808061218/@comment-24381191-20140808104513

Post it in the Writer's Workshop first. Your grammar seems kinda bad and barely legible. So is your spelling. The 'unfaithful narrator' clliche you mentioned can work effectively when pulled off really well by an experienced writer, but I don't think that this would count as an unfaithful narrator cliche.