Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20181201165951/@comment-9041013-20181202111348

Well, usually less is more but in your case it feels like it's a little too much "less". I don't know, it's way too open for me, it comes off as dry and lacking in a way. Is the corpse of a bad guy or not? Is this the first time he does this? Why doesn't he care?

I guess it's a little too many holes to fill for my mind in one story.

Some people might like it, I'm not a fan however.