Talk:The Puppetmaster's Regime/@comment-24077689-20140307164805/@comment-30906514-20170120040256

To NoothGrush-

" The descriptions here could use some ironing out. It seems to ramble, the narrative reminds me of how a car moves when one of its tires blows. It's not smooth, it limps, some of these descriptions run into each other and distract from each other..."

I liked this aspect, as it all came from different people, different sources. Of course there will be some inconistencies, no two people remember anything exactly the same as eachother.

However, I won't say that I don't see your point. I ejoyed this a bit, even if it does need some polishing up

to The Bitter Cold-

"... when Morietur vomited even though he had a "lack of" a stomach; how does one vomit without a stomach?"

The stomach is located more in your ribcage than your lower abdomen, which is taken up mostly by your large and small intestines. It makes a little bit of sense if you think about it, although before I realised this, it made no sense to me either.