Talk:It Breathes, It Bleeds, It Breeds/@comment-26075314-20160317042452/@comment-24101790-20160317043308

Thanks, I did quite a bit of research and used a little bit of personal experience to write this one.

I typically read them aloud to myself to catch those issues, that being said, I was flagging about halfway through and took a break before continuing which likely caused me to miss that clunky wording. I fixed up the issue some and will look for other problems.

As for the medical terminology, email me if you have any difficulties pronouncing and I'll write out them phonetically. Can't wait to hear how your narration turns out (for this and "The Spoonman".)