Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27206683-20151113055917/@comment-27206683-20151113184008

Demuerto wrote:

AGumpSD wrote:

Demuerto wrote: Major problem you will have with this is there are so many pastas already that are almost exact duplicates. You should change the story to detail one of the jobs, this should set it apart. Can you please elaborate more? Give an example of what you mean. If you can I'd be very grateful. http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/I_Love_My_Job

This is just one example. I see I redid some of the story since your last post see if that is a little better and thanks again. - Gump