Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37197096-20181116050426/@comment-37197096-20181116070119

NedWolfkin wrote: Cpastamaster wrote: Thank you. Although, I do have to say...most of this is wrong. Really? NoTimeCreepy seems to agree with me, and I'm sure others will too. Also what was I wrong about it?

Cpastamaster wrote: Most of it is Bias and opinionated. Biased against what? Or who? And as for "opinionated", the whole point of the Writer's Workshop is to get opinions.

My advice is to learn how to take criticism, no story is immune to it. As a writer you will find criticism to be a helpful tool in improvement. "Matthew, splattered in blood, with red eyes." blood and red eyes are a cliche"

True, but not a bad one, and nothing worth noting, since most of the ending is going to be changed anyway.

I also love cliches if theyre used well....ooops....

""There was a rumor; if you die, you have a 2% chance of rebirthing, but less than 1% to rebirth on earth." that's not even a real theory."

It's a story, creepypastas are meant to be streched out and unbelieveable. If you think all creepypastas have to be real or believeable...that's DEFINITELY not what I want for this one.

""Come now, everyone. Let me tell you the story of Amy Scarlett." that seemed kind of pointless. "We're looking into this currently, but the suspects are-" how can a possession have suspects?"

No, no. The beginning is not useless, it's a good opener, I actually thought about it more than a lot of other things. :/

And also, it's talking about the suspect that the posession basically "possessed". Those are just a few Bias opinions. Like I said, not all of it is bad, but you seem really stuck up about people not accepting your ideas.