Talk:Abandoned PokéDoll/@comment-37217072-20181219031943

Ok. I'm going through all of these things and reading them, and reviewing.

First thing, this seems rushed. For one, how would Bannette grow CLAWS? How would it get up anyway? Why did it have to be JUST as she was going to be a pokemon trainer? Why did she throw it away? WHY DID SHE CARRY A CREEPY POKEMON DOLL EVERYWHERE!?!

That's like a little girl carrying a little spider toy everywhere. WHAT GIRL WOULD CARRY A SPIDER EVERYWHERE!?!? Makes no sense.

Hardly no though was put into this.

2/10.