Talk:The Rider/@comment-25941663-20170128123248

This needed more creepy sauce. Although I have to say this was an enjoyable read. There were a couple of grammatical errors, but despite that it was a nice, almost calming read. Even though the purpose of the rider was predictable, the mystery around him didn't fade away and carried the story along.

I don't know what to think about this. As a story it is average, but it has something special about it. You hit the sweet spot.