Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28655343-20160605031527/@comment-27838637-20160605121639

I was getting the feeling that the story was going to have a huge twist at the end, and that the twist was that the 'monter' was depression. I think that this idea could be reworked a little to make that twist a reality. It's just a thought, and I believe it would turn this story from an average monster-torments-child story into something that is deeply emotional and thought provoking.

A_O.