Talk:Bad Night Out/@comment-5733573-20180525135359/@comment-26298997-20180525142009

Thanks so much all your great and encouraging feedback.The uber bit was kind of intended a mundane and unimportant detail which I thought placing in the middle of  a story about a dead baby would help to highlight how little my character values human life. That said I'm of the opinion that it's reader interpretation that matters more than anything usually so I'll be careful of that kind of thing in the future. Btw I'm doing my take on the primary Universal monsters. This was my vampire, already did a werewolf so I just need to get to the mummy, gill-man/swamp monster thing and a Frankenstein type creature to complete the set.