Talk:Becoming Cat/@comment-25169949-20141109083447

Was this intentionally meant to be a horriffic version of furry transformation fetish fic? Because, speakingas one who has read a distressing amount of such, it reminds me a whole lot of such.

My rating, 7/10, good concept, but needs some editing and expanding to give it more of that intensely visceral power that gives said TF fetish fic both its appeal but also the squeamish body horror that makes it disturbing so many times. The end captured that relatively well, but I think you could push it a whooooole lot further.