Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24686384-20150609091712/@comment-26425680-20150609164526

You've got quite a few grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors.

1) Stores have aisles, not isles. Isles are small islands. 2) Wear and Tear, the name of a store, should be capitalized. 3) wasn't, it's, I've, hadn't... They all need an apostrophe. 4) It's "of course" 5) As I read your fourth paragraph, I realized that you spelled realised wrong. No, not because you used an S, but because you forgot the A. 6) "names' Darren" should be "Name's Darren" 7) Jamaican is spelled wrong and needs to be capitalized. 8) Start a new paragraph when a person begins speaking. 9) You have a tendency to use commas when you should actually use periods. Double check your sentences, and read them aloud if you're having trouble figuring out what goes where. 10) There are plenty more errors I could point out, but I'm really drunk.