Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25982182-20150107143931


 * 1) I'll make the intro short and sweet, Clear Creek, Golden, Colorado. Along the side of Clear creek is a highway that leads to Central city which has a bunch of casinos. Across the river dividing nature from the highway is a house, it's a little blue shit shack. I'm not going to waste my time looking for it, because this story isn't about me wasting my time on google earth, it is however, about that little blue house.
 * 2) I'll cut the shit and say that years ago I was REALLY in to camping, I'd skip work to camping with my pals, every weekend I would go with the same people, this went on for months and months. Living in Colorado meant I only had to walk 10 feet to hit some trees, so it was pretty much a free time wasting adventure. Eventually I drove up to Central city from Golden to go hit up the casinos with my buddies, one of which was having a birthday, so we said fuck it. I was in the passenger seat as we drove up to the casinos. Everyone in the car was screaming and drinking and having a good time, I wasn't drinking because I was going to get up the next morning go walk around the mountainis areas. On the way there, I noticed the little blue home, it was dark out but it was light enough to be able to see. The house was slanted, windows were fucked, and it was obviously abandoned. It really sticks out when you notice it seeing as it's in such an odd place. Obviously this thing was around for a long time, no roads touched it, I doubt there was any sort of power running to it, along with a lack of gas and water. This thing was ancient.
 * 3) Regardless, I took note of where it was and thought me and my buddies might go check it out tomorrow. Obviously that didn't happen, because they all got shit faced, one of my friends touched a bartenders boob, and we got kicked to the curb at around 5 in the morning. My buddies went back to their hotel room, and I decided I was already up, might as well go look around. Curiosity got the best of me, and I headed over to the blue house. I walked along the creek and as I walked the mountains seemed to surround me, if you have ever been in an area with a creek, you most likely know what I'm talking about. The light fades away, and you start to only notice the running water and splashing. When you walk through the woods you hear things, branches cracking, crickets, the usual. Now keep in mind it was still 5 am or so, and being the winter the sun was only starting to rise, barely though. Being darker than it would be if I wasn't being engulfed by the mountains, I pulled out my flashlight that I carry with me on my car keys. It's a tiny little thing, but it gets the job done. As I followed the creek for about a half an hour I as about ready to turn back, I had gotten lost in the soothing sounds the forest makes, and time flies when you're in that trance. As I was about to turn around though, I spotted a pile of dead rabbits. There had to be a least 10 bunnies dead laying there. I decided before I turned back I would take a look at them, why I did is a mystery to the both of us. The closer I walked and the brighter it shined, the easier it was to see this rabbits where torn in to, organs ripped out and blood all around. I figured it was just Coyotes or even a Mountain lion, who knows. As I shined my light back up, however, I noticed the house was there. Either I was going blind or hallucinating, because I know that house wasn't in front of me when I was checking out the carcasses. I felt my stomach drop, and shivers went up and down my spine. When things that don't make sense happen, you freeze with fear, and that sums it up perfectly. I was about ready to bolt, but I had to do it, I had to look inside. Each footstep was accompanied by the loud gritting of gravel beneath my feet. Eventually I hit the wood porch, and I stood there for 15 minutes. I was under some kind of mind control, I HAD to see what was inside now.
 * 4) I slowly turned the rusted handle and opened the front door. I felt it right then and there, as the door creaked open, I noticed the house was much bigger than it looked from the inside. I knew that there was something else lurking in this house though. As soon as I opened the door I heard a soft guitar playing, I walked further in to the house gripping my flashlight, then the sound of a piano startled me, the front door slam shut, and my flashlight shut off. Just as that happened though, the sun peeked through broken sharded window, and then an object in front of me jumped. It was just a shadow, but as it loomed closer, the sun shined on it's face, I was in complete disbelief of this monstrosity, and without hesitation, it jumped in front of me and said:
 * 5) Welcome to the blue house Hello from the small mouse Things to do Fun for you Howdy from the big bear Want some fun Here's where Just for you All is new in the house of blue Lots of room in our house Catch the moon at our house Kitchen's here, Bathroom's there Attic full of stuff here Pillows full of fluff here Woopy-Do Just for you in the house of blue. 