Talk:Shadow the Plush/@comment-24301220-20131216185321

GoodbyeForever is right. you are using way too much of what other pastas have used, and thats kinda dumb. I mean, a SHADOW DOLL? you might as well have been having a party with Slenderman and BEN, whom of which was fashionably late. it would be better if

1. explain more. put everything into somewhat good detail.

2. use some original things.

3. dont read anymore creepypastas and use those. that gets annoying to me whenever i read those kinds.

anyways, follow these steps and i can BET that people will #like this pasta.

Good Luck!

LucarioDarrison