Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20181228225151/@comment-36393004-20190102222908

Ok, added some, took some away, changed a bit and changed my spacing to help with reading smoother. For me it read smoother that way. This is a large college bash, with hundreds of people. It would be easy for as mall group to splinter off without being noticed. Most of the people here are intoxicated anyway.

What I did agree with as far as Bloody's critique is the fact that most crazy killers don't run in groups. So, I changed the ending to "human sacrifice" so you get the possible cult ritual scenario which would involve a group. Thanks for pointing that out.

I am glad RedNova pointed out the "virgin" aspect. It will play well into the "cult ritual" angle.