Talk:Hollow Heart/@comment-25226524-20150221014848

You are quite the wordsmith. This was beautifully written, and your style is quite the anachronism. I have a soft spot for this style of prose, and I think you are truly gifted in the art of description. You did a great job of provoking emotion, which is almost an impossible task with me as your audience. There were a couple similes in there that really caught my eye, and I found myself reading over them a few times before moving on. I truly enjoyed reading this and very likely will read it again to make sure nothing went unnoticed. I hope to continue seeing your contributions. Good luck with the contest.