Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140929054012/@comment-25458443-20140929065632

GreyOwl wrote:

EtherBot wrote: ...chills.

Plothole though... why din't they just call the police inbetween visits? but OH MY GOSH THIS FORCES YOU TO HATE HIM!!! Thank you for the feedback:) I do want to throw out there that the uncle isn't really a physical being. The family are cannibals and the protagonist is stuck in a haze as she is starving. I hinted at that a bit with the fact the uncle visits occasionally, and the late brother died of starvation because he refused to eat his friend. I'm happy you thought it was chilling though, haha. That's the goal. I MY GOSH IT MAKES SO MUCH SENSE!!! It's actualy creepier that way. knowing that just *SHUDDERS* takes the cake. I like how even WITH the uncle however, It just freaks you out. and really makes you hate him.