Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27012445-20190116025745/@comment-9041013-20190116230935

So the book of revalation is coming to life, alright. But let's talk a little science, the not VERY freshly dead just wouldn't rise. No muscle, no movement. Leave this bit aside.

Why is everything so sci-fi zombie like post ressurection? "Punishment from God to humans?" well The deluge was better. Plus, a few movies and series' have better ideas. Zombie giant animals are just weird, I think.

As Dr Bob said, bugs weren't dog sized even when their environment allowed them to be gigantic. Also, you'd be surprised to know that the most painful sting today comes from an Executioner Wasp or a Tarantula Hawk, the wasp is large, but still not as big as a bird eating spider and the Tarantula Hawk is kind of small for the punch it packs.

Anyway, it feels a little weird.

How about just making it a plague of locusts?

Your story feels kind of jumpy at points, like where suddenly a cat appears and knocks down the girl and her having a coffee as she's hungover (not to mention that the cup of coffee shows up out of nowhere).

Also, the story feels like an opener for a survival novel.