Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27132971-20181113165025/@comment-27132971-20181113190756

NoTimeCreepy wrote: No one is going to read this. That has to be the biggest wall of text I have ever seen. Break that crap down into paragraphs.

Okay, Mr. NoTimeCreepy, I first want to point out that I actually did originally break everything into paragraphs, but Wikia apparently has some weird crap going on, because it still came out as a wall of text. So I went back and did TWO breaks per paragraph, and that time everything came out right.

As for L0CKED334's review, I can see what he means when he says that the first paragraph was unnecessary, but while I was writing, it seemed like the best way to introduce me and my family. I also probably should've put everything in a third-person view instead of in quotes, as that would've probably improved the story.

If there are any more reviews, please feel free to post them here.

Sincerely, Mr. Lumber.