Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25109876-20140714200053/@comment-25558572-20140714225434

Final Rina wrote: ......Dude, gimme a break already. It's my first creepypasta for God's sake! At least say something nice about it! Geez! You put it here. I criticized it. Criticism may not always be nice, but it's intended to help. And I'm not going to easier on someone because it's their first pasta, sorry. That's just how I review.

I apologize if I upset you, but that was not my intention. I target the weaknesses of a story more than its strengths, and in all honesty, there were no real strengths in this story that I could name. Ask someone else to review your story, and they might have a different opinion; keep in mind, this is only one review from one person.

And I'm aware it's your first pasta, but would you rather have posted it to the site and have it deleted there without a peep? You did do a good job of putting it on the workshop, so that was on the right track.

You need to keep trying. Every writer has failures of some kind, and I'm no exception. I've had stories deleted as well, but that doesn't mean I should stop wriitng. I'd never do that, and neither should you.