Talk:Thirst/@comment-26206049-20150315015839

Seemed a little to unrealistic to me, which ruins any creepy, unsettleing feel I felt. I think the concept is very inventive, but the one thing that really make's any creepypasta creepy, is the fact it could happen in real life, any time, which this lacks. I mean, eating the President? Talk about unrelateable. Besides that, I do enjoy the idea and the ending, were the water bottles contaminated or not? That's what you want to do. Making it so the reader will think of it and hold the fear factor even after they leave the computer and return to reality. Good job, and hope to see you improve 4.5/10 ^.^