Talk:Revolt/@comment-25191202-20160730160005

Wow, I honestly just looked this pasta. Definitely a 9.9/10. It sounds very realistic, and the story pulled me in right from the start. Although, I think you overused the bluescreen of death in this pasta. Don't get me wrong, I love pastas that relate to computer viruses and all, but a bluescreen on a tv? That part was a little unrealistic, but the rest was great.