Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29740160-20160103145013/@comment-27190570-20160112011140

Pretty good man, I think the decision to write as a sort of essay was a good choice, I don't think it would have made a great narrative. Pictures and good word choice make the story even better. I'm not going to lie, the mental asylum tragedy and "super spooky road" are almost cliche's by this point, but I don't think they're overdone here. Overall 7/10. Well written, if a bit bland.