Talk:The Tower/@comment-5306249-20200221033619

This read was effective and engaging, in particular the metaphorical nature of the fortune teller's dialogue. Its strongest point is most definitely the tarot theme, which single-handedly carries the progression leading to a clever visual conclusion. Unfortunately a few typos and run on sentences brought down the otherwise eloquently-worded dialogue, and I almost feel I could have seen more interaction between the nicely variable characters. But for the length and somewhat challenging theme, I found this entry particularly enjoyable.

Style: 3/5 Horror: 4/5 Entertainment: 3/5 Theme: 5/5

Total: 15/20