Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33531395-20180527223025/@comment-33531395-20180528213320

I see where the confusion is. I was using 'They' to give it an ominous feel,and I wanted to try something new with my stories by building it up to appear as if its going to be a paranormal story but then taking a turn and conveying the message that sometimes, humanity is the monster. The wording I tried using was for detail, but I can see the misspellings. If I had to rewrite this whole story, what would be yoir suggestions?