Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26502770-20150621191143/@comment-26475800-20150621200106

Agreed with Whitix. If you like this story a lot, you can incorporate it into a different story, this would be good filler for a story about your fear of spiders or something like that. Also don't ever put yourself down, if you think your story isn't up to par, either don't post it, or put it on the writer's workshop for feedback, like you did. There are a lot of people who will like something even if you thought it was pure rubbish, look at how many people like Twilight.

But this would be a great way to build tension in a longer story, so if you can think of something that would be work well with this story use it there.