Talk:Dream Death/@comment-31017496-20170113180116

This story's got one major flaw: it's too short. I mean, come on, surely you could have written more than 3 small paragraphs, right?

Apart from that, this story is really good. It's got a different, crazy concept, but not so crazy that it's hard to believe. Most importantly, it deals with the unknown. I think it's the unknown that people fear, not knowing what's going to happen to you, or how to stop it. It leaves you feeling so insecure. This story makes perfect use of it, although it doesn't really deliver that punch- in-the-stomach sort of feeling.

I'll give this 9/10