User blog comment:Banned In CP/Common Flaws in CP Writing/@comment-25170312-20180208172837/@comment-25170312-20180210172708

@humby: I finally got that to sink in, but my problem now is deciding whether to combine two sentences or not. I have an awful time making decisions lol. Hey, you should check out my new pasta in the wriiter's workshop: A Tear in the Wallpaper. It's pretty short. I could use some critical eyes.