Talk:Phone/@comment-247250-20140904110647/@comment-25384205-20140904113614

Hello Anon!

Thank you for your comments! I will incorporate your suggestions at once.

This is the third story I ever wrote. My weaknesses are my tendency to switch tenses without noticing, my poor grasp of prepositions, and my stubborn choice of words(My favorite author tends to use 'bray' a lot instead of 'ring').

Your comments on tone break and moralizing are new and I'm really glad that I uploaded my story on CreepyPasta. It's a blind spot I didn't notice until now.

Your comment on Elena almost revealing her secret made me laugh. How can I be so stupid not to see that?

Yes, the ending is somewhat abrupt. I'll try to fix that.

Thank you for telling me that you liked my story and rated it 8.5. It means a lot to me.

Have a great day, Anon!