Talk:Your Loving Fan/@comment-26605596-20150708232538

I actually really like this! The way that he shows a perfectly normal person slowly becoming obsessed for no apparent reason, and then loops it back to the beginning is incredible. It has been done before, but it was done well enough that I'm not mad at it. The loop implies that he is reading the very story that we just read, which leads us to believe that he will discover that there is an obsessed fan in his home, and that some kind of harm will befall him.

The only improvement would be for her to go into WHAT she's going to do to him before the author executes the loop.

Overall, I very much enjoyed it. 8/10