Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181002083401/@comment-28428152-20181003161346

I used the italics just since it's how you're supposed to format the title of a book, as I also did with the Harry Potter book he got for his birthday, though I get what you mean, I could indirectly reference it more.

And a very good point about his father's reactions, I'll jave to tone it down to wanting to heat him, definitely don't want to overshadow later events so early on