Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36516270-20180809001802

'''Prologue: Nate was a ten year old boy the youngest out of his three siblings. Nate has brown short hair and usually wears glasses even though he doesn’t need them for anything. He was the nicest person in his family. Always polite, never did a thing wrong, and was weak according to his two brothers. His family consisted of. Two jock twin brothers both seventeen and a sixteen year old sister who ignored everything around her more focused on her life. Not to mention his parents who were barely ever home due to having to work all the time.'''

'''He decided to run away from home after the countless bullying from his brothers who constantly made fun of how he acts or what he did. When Nate was exiting he thought of where he could really go. He had no friends due to his family just moving there. He decided to go into the forest and live there. When Nate entered the forest nearby he noticed a run down looking house. Thinking his day or life couldn’t get worse he decided to take a look inside.'''

'''Apon looking inside he found out no one was there or it seemed like that. After looking through every room in the house he heard the front door creak open. Thinking it was just his brothers he ran to the living room to confront them so he didn’t get yelled at or hurt. After he headed out he noticed a old lady shutting the front door who started yelling at him for breaking into her house.'''

'''Nate ran out of the house before things got worse. Little did he know that old lady muttered something under her breath. The thing she said was a curse which ended up killing Nate, but not letting him go to heaven or hell instead trapping him in a mirror for breaking into her house. Nate is still in the mirror to this day.'''

Story:

'''A family is at a garage sale to pick up some new furniture. This family consisted of the Dad and the Mom. A ten year old boy named Jake, a fifteen year old boy Zack who was pushing Jake around, and A six year old girl named Elle. Jake was a blond long haired bot. Who enjoyed his life living it to the fullest no matter how hard his brother was making it. Jake ended up finding a small hangable mirror he enjoyed how it looked so he decided to buy it. “How much is it?” Jake asked the garage sale owner who responded. “Ten dollars.” Jake gives him the ten dollars before heading back to his parents van waiting to return to his home.'''

'''After returning back to his house he ran up stairs into the attic where he slept due to only having two bedrooms for his siblings. Jake hung the mirror on the wall of the attic looking at it for a moment before stepping away from it. “Free me..” said something. Jake looked around for where the voice was coming from. “Who said that?” he said seeming to talk to himself. He looked into the mirror again. Noticing a different looking boy in the mirror. “What the heck?” he said with shock at what he seen. “You can hear me.” the boy in the mirror asked. Jake nodded his head looking worried. “Please help me out. I was cursed into this mirror.” Jake looked around “How do I do that?” he asked himself as he heard Zack coming up the stairs to the attic knocking on the door loudly. “Oh Jake! You know what happens when Mom and Dad leave for work.” Jake quickly hid under his bed as Zack bursted into the room grabbing him out from under the bed by his shirt. “Fine take it Zack.” he said giving Zack the rest of his money. Zack slowly put him down and walked out.'''

'''Jake stood up and walked back over to the mirror. “Why did you give him your money?” the boy in the mirror asked. “He takes my money. I can’t stop him and when I tell my parents they ignore me thinking he is nice. Never mind me. Why are you cursed in the mirror anyways?” “I entered a old lady’s house without her being there. She thought I broke in when her door wasn’t locked.” he said looking a little down. “What’s your name? If you even remember.” “Nate. Just ignore your brother. I had the same problem with mine bullying me.” Jake looked at the time. “It’s time for me to eat. Sorry Nate.” he said running down stairs.'''

'''After finishing his food he headed back upstairs as Zack was asking him “Why were you talking to yourself?” Jake locked his door and sat on his bed away from the mirror. His parents finally got home as Zack stopped pounding on his door. Jake stood back up looking at the mirror. “He won’t leave you alone. Will he?” Nate said. “I try to ignore it. I’m going to get to sleep early. I rather not deal with my brother anymore tonight. Night I guess. I’ll figure out a way to break you free tomorrow.” he said heading to bed. When doing this Nate was looking outside the mirror thinking about how bad Zack was.'''

'''In the middle of the night Jake was awoken by the sound of a ambulance in front of his house. He rushed down stairs to notice Zack was being taken out by a stretcher shaking. Zack was having a major seizure which Jake knows Zack never had one before. Getting worried Jake headed back to his room looking in the mirror seeing Nate looking weirded out himself. “What happened?” Nate asked “You must of did something my brother is having a seizure. What did you do?” Jake asked looking worried. “If I did I didn’t mean to. All I did was think about how mean Zack was to you.” “So you must have sent him to that.” “What if I did it on purpose?” said Nate. “Then I will never help you out of that.” “Well I did it. He deserved it no brother should be bullying another one.” Nate stepped out of the mirror. “I was free the whole time. I possess your brother and caused him to have that.”'''

'''Now I think it’s your turn to forget about all this and join your brother.” as he said this he ended up possessing Jake making him have a seizure. Sense Jake couldn’t get any help at the time no one noticing him being gone. As Nate stopped the possession he chuckled “Goodbye Jake.” were the last words Jake heard before dying as Nate returned into the mirror waiting to pray on his next victim later that night.'''  