Talk:Night Train/@comment-26444017-20180807062446

I like this one. The pace is right where I want it, and while the spook and twist aren't anything new, the way the story is told was a great way to set the atmosphere.

To be honest, I was kinda looking for an ending in which the corpse man was nothing more than a passerby, or even a spoopy ghost still, who helped the MC away from a greater threat. I'm not saying the ending disappointed me; instead, now I'm inspired to write a story like the one I just described. Well done.