Talk:The Strangest Security Tape I've Ever Seen

Plot: 10/10

Hooks you in and keeps you in. An interesting, creepy mystery.

Originality: 10/10

There are pastas about time travel, but not done like this.

Ending: 8/10

I have to admit- the ending DID catch me off-guard, but some things don't add up, like how at the start of the final update (the one the end of the pasta is in) the narrator mentions Jeremy but by the end he has no clue of who Jeremy is. However, this, and possibly the entire pasta, could be clarified in a sequel of some sorts. Or maybe we're just supposed to sit in the dark, thinking about the story and what it actually is (who is Jeremy?).

Writing: 6/10

The plot kept me in, and the writing merely dragged the story along. Not the worst, but far from the best.

Overall experience: 10/10

A great overall story. I'll probably have trouble sleeping tonight.

Final score: 44/50

Alcatraz? That's your name? Alcatraz... Destiny's a bitch, huh? 13:46, March 27, 2013 (UTC)

Final score: 44/50