Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20140923012345/@comment-4893169-20141004005251

I've heard of that show, but I haven't watched it. I've heard of the game Fallout, but I haven't played it. I'm trying to do my own ideas without getting too influenced by other stories from popular culture, but it's really difficult, especially the post-apocalyptic themes.

I've added some more to this draft and I'm wondering if you can spot some typos and improper use of grammar. Also what is your opinion on me shifting the action to another scene where that Marc kid from "Curiosity Killed the Rat" is attempting to finish the memorial letter that his babysitter, and finds there's no third page and instead he finds a series of gory pictures of dead people inside the fallout shelter?