User talk:The King of Maggots

A Heads-up
I read your story and I enjoyed it. I liked the dialogue clashing between the characters and the Richard's inner conflict driving the climax of the story. I just wanted you to know that I made a few changes to the format (if you don't put a full paragraph between paragraphs, the wiki formatting joins everything together in a large paragraph) as well as properly leaving dialogue tags uncapitalized ("“Dammit!!” he yelled out loud"), and altering the category of the story. Currently the category of "ghosts", "Beings", "Demon/Devil", etc. are standalone and shouldn't be used for the same entity. If you meant it more as a ghost story (ala "An American Werewolf in London") you can switch out the beings category for ghosts.

Welcome to the wiki. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:08, May 22, 2017 (UTC)