Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25091096-20140622041640/@comment-25091096-20140624013054

Thanks for reading, Booboofinger. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I'm also glad that you got that it was Lilith. For a second there, I almost thought I wasn't bringing her character story out enough.

Yea, people nowadays are assoicating the apple with the original sin, so I knew people would think of Adam and Even when it was brought up. However, the "forbbiden fruit" title is also commonly associated and it's authentic to the bliblical story. So, "fruit" instead of "apple" it shall be.

I was hoping the 100 children bit would be a good first signal to the reader that the speaker isn't an ordinary woman. Then, I realized the part about her giving birth to an army was good enough to that by itself. The number of her children's deaths shall be undisclosed.

"your first wife, Lilith" ...Why the FUCK did I not think of that? You just made my life so much easier. I am definitely using that ending.

I honestly did not intend for that voice to come out. Even when reading over it again, it doesn't sound like that to me. I was going for a general "bitchy ex-wife" type of tone. Maybe it came out unconciously as I was writing? I tend to put myself in the character's shoes whenever I write. But hey, if it works, I'll leave it be.