Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35826115-20190629165428/@comment-35826115-20190629193741

Done, this is the new version

Hermann T (Roller Coaster Tycoon 3 Creepypasta) I used to play Roller Coaster Tycoon 3, I had built a stable park, even winning a few awards here and there. Today started as a normal day on the game, Rides breaking down, people (or peeps as they are called in the game) visiting my park. I was about to try the 'play as a peep' challenge, looking at the entrance for a cool looking teenage boy to play as, No one came it was just older women and kids until I saw a bald, middle-aged guy, not what I was looking for but I am not trying to be sexist but I didn't want to play as a women or a kid as I've seen the woman and children don't go on as extreme rides compared to the teenage or middle-aged men that go on more thrill rides.

I looked at his items, as when I had seen the man I thought I saw a gun? But I checked his profile, his name was Hermann T and I noticed he had no items and he had a ginger woman beside him, thinking it was his girlfriend I checked her profile her name e was Lynne C. And I had waited and only Lynne had entered the park and for a couple of minutes Hermann was just standing there with no movement at all and it looked like he was just staring into my soul. I looked at his thoughts the game said "No thoughts" but soon after the man started to slowly, enter the park and catching up with his wife who was in the Motion Simulator queue line. I had pressed off the stats and looked at there movement in curiosity. They were acting like any other peep in a queue. Hermann started to tap his feet. I then decided to check Hermann's profile and I clicked thoughts and it said with a happy face next to it "I would love to kill Lynne.”

I was creeped out at this point and just went to ride one of my roller coasters instead and to my surprise, the roller coaster and all of the other rides and stalls were broken down, other then the Motion Simulator and all of my peers had gone but Hermann and Lynne. I decided to turn off my PC thinking it was getting a bit glitchy then but my computer refused to turn off and said in a speech box "Are you sure?" I pressed the 'Yes' button but another text box "Are you sure you're sure' I again said Yes and it started saying things like "You can't turn the computer off right now". Then I sent an email to Microsoft about this problem and a few hours later I received a message back saying

Hello, MaxTheNintendoGamer1988 I am sorry to hear that your computer wouldn't turn off today. This was because of the application Roller Coaster Tycoon 3 was stopping the PC to shut down we have automatically shut the program down. Yours sincerely, Hermann Terrence." I was a bit confused at this point as the guy who sent it was called Hermann T? My pc and Roller Coaster Tycoon 3 started to work normally again.

6 WEEKS LATER A report all across the newspapers that a Fast Food Worker named Lynne Carter. was shot and then dumped in a Target shopping cart, the murderer was eventually found to be a worker at Microsoft, named Hermann Terrence.