User blog comment:Igotsthechills/my 1st storyy/@comment-24101790-20180302183415

I'm sorry, but looking over it, I can see a massive amount of errors that would likely indicate your story failed to meet the bare minimum quality standards for this site.

You forget to punctuate sentences and capitalize them (and proper nouns) correctly. I would strongly suggest using the writer's workshop (I believe there's a link in the deletion message on your talk page) as there are a lot of things you need to work on for your next story.