Talk:Ultimatums/@comment-30924662-20180322001710

7 out of 10. Good atmosphere, escalated at a good speed. I will say that I saw the end coming a bit too soon, and even before the ring came up I just knew Alex was going to die somehow at some point. It’s also hard to be emotionally invested in a cheating husband as the main character, but I feel you went deep enough into his feelings on both women and how he felt about his actions that it works well enough. Not a bad read.