Talk:NoEnd House 3/@comment-26409942-20150518213815

Hm...I liked parts 1 and 2, however in this part I think it's a mistake moving away from writing in first person....this part has been written in third person narrative instead and it takes away that immediate feel, and it also stops it from being a creepypasta with a feeling of authenticity and that pretnce of it being something that could be a real account...instead, it's now a straight forward fictional story. I'd recommend rewriting it in the first person as you did parts 1 and 2.