Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25975226-20150401085748/@comment-26027963-20150402164120

Natalo wrote: Really? Thank you! Could you perhaps be a little more specific about the punctuation errors? :) Sure, on the first line, you need a comma between mother and because. You need to make sure you have commas anywhere where you could've had a new sentence, but just added on to it. By adding but, and, or or. Otherwise, I love that story, it's really good. Do you think you can review mine? It's only part way done, but I need to know I should countinue with it. Here's the link