Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180619073009/@comment-35711173-20180619232734

Thank you both so much for the reviews. I will be checking over many parts. But that is what drafts are for.

The last paragraph failed. I will need to rewrite it. You won't believe it but it is based on a true story that I saw. But now I have to separate unbelievable fact from fiction. Toning down that last section ... got to decide what doesn't make the reader think the guy was Jewish to begin with.


 * convert to being Jewish
 * become a priest or a protestant minister?
 * become a lawyer - too many nazi lawyers
 * become a teacher or some doo gooder profession?

Would him thinking, wondering if he were a reincarnated nazi, help? He would then decide to reject that path.