Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36299239-20190304064951/@comment-36815674-20190305075354

PernicketyPony wrote: Thank for taking the time to read and comment.

The use of horror story tropes was deliberate, but I'm disappointed to hear it crossed over into being cliche. Back to the drawing-board, I guess.

I might take BloodySpghetti's advice and do a spinpasta appeal, if just for the sake of hopefully getting some feedback on if and how this piece can be improved.

Cheers.

Good luck on the spin off appeal, I have not seen one get accepted yet.