Talk:Hymn of Valor Cove/@comment-26410180-20150518003226

Hello there sir. My name is Amy and I am new to Creepy Pasta but not to the horror genre. I stumbled upon your story by accident but I really, really enjoyed it. However, as some of they other commenters have mentioned, there are some grammatical errors that seem to take the reader out of the story while reading it. Most of the errors would be easy to correct and wouldn't change the context or essence of the story. If you would like, I'd be more then willing to edit your story for you. I've recently begun freelancing as a proofreader and editor for people just like you, writers who are self publishing, blogging, or simply adding their talents to websites like this but lack the ability to properly edit their work prior to publication. I'm in need of examples of published items that I've edited to add to my portfolio and I feel that this story would be a wonderful addition to that. If you think that's a good idea and would like me to edit this story, please email me at texasgirlamyk@aol.com. I really hope to hear from you soon. Amy