Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20160624221243/@comment-28420405-20160628155550

My pleasure, truly! I always appreciate your thoughtful feedback.

I sometimes like a little ambiguity when it comes to "creepy", and like I said, I understood that there were multiple knots (at least the two from this story), but it got a bit muddled. Some cleaning up and a few additions could really make this great - hell, you might make me think there's a knot in my life! ;)

great story, very original. I'm excited to see any changes you make! Let me know when you're done updating and I'd be happy to give my comparison of the two versions.