Talk:Anansi's Goatman Story/@comment-10898937-20140904185341

The diction made the story. I know a lot of people complained about the swearing, but who wouldn't be frantically typing out a story with vulgar language if they were going to recount it to someone? Even if it was years later, I'm sure he would be anxious and it would become evident in his storytelling.

Also, I read this in a room with no sound. It helped set the atmosphere for the story (actually, it's a good practice for reading any creepypasta). When I clicked on the sound link and imagined the Goatman speaking in that tone, "with no cadence," I just about shat bricks.

10/10