User blog comment:Chambergambit/The Never Ending Pasta/@comment-5689653-20121114164841

Just write something you're happy with writing. If you think it's creepy, that's a good first step. If you have at least some mastery of basic writing skills, you've got a good start. If you think the story does what you're aiming for, then good job! It doesn't matter how long it is, just that it fulfills the purpose you have for it.