Talk:Remember Me?/@comment-26054278-20150207005200

I read this pasta twice, and I have to admit that I don't exactly understand it. However, I assume that the writer left this up for interpretation. I would assume that the woman killed the man, which would be very odd when the story states that the man was sitting right next to her. That would be very odd if my guess was correct, but as the category says, "Mental Illness", maybe it isn't right.

Even then, I still have a couple problems with the story. I'm not a huge fan of the final twist, I just kind of figured that the woman had probably injured or murdered the man. Also, I don't find the build-up to this twist as interesting when I don't love the twist, as a story like this really needs to base itself on a great twist. While, yes, it was a good twist, I just thought that it wasn't as powerful or startling as it could have been.

Even with that, I liked the story (the build-up did keep me reading, and I am a huge fan of short stories), but I didn't really think it was great. 6.5 or 7/10.