Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24169760-20190103201500/@comment-35711173-20190103234252

Good tails doll wrote: il change a phew of these but not all of them

You need to fix far more than just what we listed for you. We are spending time away from our writing to try to help you. Nobody is ego tripping or trying to bash you here. Each and every comment above is correct. As is, this story would be deleted from the Wiki.