Talk:A Golden Sliver/@comment-25947144-20170220200307

A very fascinating piece. After finally adjusting my understanding of the story (only about a third into the story I realized it's sliver, not silver) it went into an interesting direction. The characters seem relatively simple, other than the protagonist, and fit well in this kind of story.

The only thing that might be considered negative is that the ending is not very original, as I've witnessed the "hallucinating someone as a monster, killing them and then hiding it" scenario a few times before. Other than that, I loved it. Well done.