Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25679985-20141113225701/@comment-25679985-20141114010732

thank you for the advice and i shall work on it, i do agree that it is a bit confusing but being the writter i know what I want in the heads of the read i just have a hard time describing it out. thank you for the time and effort you put into reading this and helping me out, i thank you for this! i can now work to correct those grammar mistakes and fix up the wording.