Talk:I Opened My Eyes During Prayer/@comment-39948640-20190627114542

Looks like this is your first creepypasta. There are some issues with it which I shall detail here.

First off, starting a creepypasta with "Have you ever..." is rather cliche. While starting a story can be difficult, there are plenty of ways to do it. (And it's not like the story cares what the answer is.)

Second off, as people in the comments have pointed out, there are people who pray with their eyes open.

And finally, there isn't really a reason for Jesus to act like he does. Why would he kill someone just for opening their eyes? (Not to mention the fact that Jesus is dead and has been for several thousand years, and his coming back is supposed to be some sort of huge event.)

This does meet the quality standards, but it could definitely use some improvement.