Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181005011936/@comment-28428152-20181005154449

Damn. Tbh I used the last name Bacchus from this guy in high school I talked to a couple of times because I thought it was a badass name, but I guess his dad must've been Greek or something. Thanks for letting me know!

And yeah, I'm gonna go back and check for all the grammar and punctuation, I'm mostly trying to catch plot holes, awkward wording (thanks Locked), continuity errors, pacing problems, stuff like that. Figured it'd probably be more likely for that stuff to be criticized if I post each chapter individually, rather than posting all the chapters at once and just hoping somebody might take the time to read through a novella-length post just for the Writer's Workshop (usually posting giant multipart stories on WW doesn't work in my experience)

The criticism is much appreciated, you guys!