Talk:Cousin Tommy/@comment-25340844-20140904233529

I liked this quite a bit. My favourite part, I think, is when Tommy disappears only to be replaced by the scarecrow. Gave me the chills. It was also a little sad, which I always appreciate in a pasta.

My only complaint is that I couldn't quite warm to Tommy. he seems like a bully. I understand that maybe he didn't realize this or that's just how people carry on in certain parts of the world, but it still made me dislike him. This means it didn't bother me all that much when he was taken. I'd have felt much more strongly if it had been the narrator who was abducted.

This one gets a 7.5/10 from me.