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Thanks for the condolences. As for those tips I mentioned, you might be interested to know that they were common mistakes I made when I was starting out writing almost two decades ago a a young'un. Since I never shared my (frankly horrible) story with anyone until much, much later, I didn't realize these were mistakes until the story was over 100 pages long. I always think it's important to get and give feedback as there is no such thing as a perfect story or a perfect author and there is always room for improvement.