Talk:The Number of Darkness/@comment-5269370-20150818190317

So I got around to reading this, as you had recommended it to me, so here's my verdict!

This was probably the quickest that I have ever had to read a long pasta. I didn't find myself having to reread any of the sentences, as there was nothing here that I didn't fully understand on first read. Everything flowed really well together.

The characters were well introduced and very well developed. Each character had their distinct feature that made them unique. Charles had his As well as that, the dialect of the 1860s America dialogue was a great finishing touch. I also loved the contrast shown in Bethany and Joesephine's "unclean" dialogue compared to their mannerly

8.2/10