Talk:The Shadow Girl/@comment-27623698-20160217011014/@comment-27238778-20160518142309

Umm, how is that beeing greedy exactly?

I just thought it was a really good story but you took your anilization waaayyyyy out of the circle of acceptable...

Like, what does DeadPool have to do with this?

and as for the creature going to the girl, easily explained. She wanted revenge desperatly, and the monster was drawn to that desire....

How is anything of this story drug out?

I loved it, I tought it was very well written and seemed compleated.

10/10 :)