Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26399766-20161007144510

This was a sonnet I had to write for English II, and I feel like some parts are clunky and don't flow well.





My time has begun to fade into night

The cool embrace of the stars and the moon

The feeling of my home is no longer light

Some might cry it was not my time, too soon

And at first I will feel that way, too true

In time I know acceptance will be had

And those who loved me no longer feel nlue

I will join my family, Mom and Dad

As I release my grip upon this realm

I feel myself drained of all myfeeling

I sigh at the emptiness overwhelms

It is too late to begin healing

I shall take my last, my final breath

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;">It is time for me to accept my death

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> <ac_metadata title="Night (UNREVIEWED)"> </ac_metadata>