Talk:The Fuik Incident/@comment-28092049-20160412124215

This is truly a very good twist, They are very rare and I really love it. The whole "This story looks so cliched, I am going to be let down and OH WHOLY S*** WHAT THE F*** WAS THAT" is really a sock-knock-off-er for me! The grammer was very good, and there were very well done decriptions in the right places. I was just wondering why 'you' said that it was too sickening to describe, and went on to describe it. (just a little thing) Otherwise it was really good 9.5/10!