Talk:Metathesiophobia/@comment-24281984-20141220180947

The writing in this short pasta was good, better than most I've seen, but the story itself really wasn't anything that special or interesting. It's basically just a nervous person panicking and then noticing scars on their leg? I feel like with the good writing, this story would be much better if it was longer. Here there's not enough time to really enjoy it before it's over.