Talk:Abaddon Tenebrae/@comment-5496321-20150827170114

This is a pretty decent story. However, i'm not fond of the protag being thrown into the hospital. I feel like there was a lot of potential in the story and Abaddon in general, however I feel you rushed things in the end by making the demons 'real'. If you had let it drag out a bit more and developed things then I would have enjoyed it a lot more.

Still, good job.