Talk:The Man on Channel 61/@comment-25170312-20150718025346

This doesn't make much sense. I'm all for leaving things unexplained, but there's no hint as to what the numbers mean anywhere in the context. I'm assuming it's a date, but there's nothing for us to even loosely connect it to. I also think the all-caps words in the beginning are a bad idea. It makes the character seem like they're overreacting. The last line is weird, too: "...Looking as pale and horrified as I imagined." When did you imagine yourself looking pale and horrified? Do you mean you expected yourself to look that way considering how you felt? It's unclear as to the significance of the line.