Talk:Squidward's Suicide/@comment-25181615-20140715064347

2/10 for a workable idea. But like others have said, 0 build up, straight to the point, uninteresting.

Over-explanation of obvious events in a 'blood-was-bloody' fashion.

But most of all, if you use the phrase "hyper realistic," "hyper realism," or any variation; your story is shit. Knock it off.