Talk:The Crow and the Golfer/@comment-9584883-20150221005638

Baron, I realize this was a difficult subject you likely knew nothing about. Considering this, I felt you did a great job with character build-up. I do feel you could have constricted more of the story within this. If you were to finish it, it could turn out really well. You had the right idea bit need more research on the subject of revenge. They are usually brutal. I found myself wishing We had extended the word limit so I could find out what sort of revenge Henry took out on his killer. 70/100