Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24991749-20140625165153/@comment-24918243-20140626200841

Cascaval13 wrote: Look, I'm narrating the story, because it happend in the past. The narrator is actually me 10 years after the incident. And you're right, there are still few grammatical errors, so I should correct them, I don't think I've made so much mistakes that you could comment something bigger than my own story. I should reconsider that. Edit: Also you didn't considered that, Mrs.Nicklebotten maybe talked with Gabriel about her husband when he was little, because as a teenager nobody would spend their time with a 86 year-old lady. Then you should convey that. Instead of saying heMrs. NIckelbotten told him he was a nice man. One thing you have to understand as a writter, is that it's your responsability to make things clear for the reader and that the reader has no obligation to make sense of what you wrote.

Again, like Empyreal said, we are not doing this to jerks. We are doing this to help you get a story that will not be deleted.