Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31424920-20180701234008/@comment-9041013-20180702231501

Dude, this is waaaaay too long for me to read right now. It's actually 45 pages long. Holy hell....

Anywho, I ran it through word and there are a bunch of grammatical errors, a bunch of punctuation errors and so on and so forth. Nothing too bad, but there are quite a few of them. Fix your styling and technical side a bit, and we'll proceed to the plot itself afterwards.