Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25913561-20141223131636/@comment-25913561-20141223235816

Hello Umbrello and Shadowswimmer77.

I am very grateful for your kind words and positive feedback. Thank you for pointing out what needs to be adjusted.

He is meant to represent the descent into madness. As mental illness and insanity can have similar symptoms/effects I decided that it could be the reader who decided which was the case here, has she gone insane or is she suffering with some extreme mental illness?

This pasta itself is very raw, I plan to edit it a little further, strengthening it and giving Him a little more potency, to really characterize what He can be like. I also made him male as to express how alien it can feel, like having someone completely opposite to you inside your head, thus the opposite gender to further represent that.

I'm very glad that my idea was one that you both enjoyed, I began and scrapped it multiple times, I'm glad I saw it through in the end.

I will revise this pasta and post and edited version. Regarding the rules of this Wikia, am I to post the reviewed version in the comments or do I replace the original post? Or make a new one altogether? I wasn't really clear on that part :)

Thank you both for taking the time to offer your opinions and guidance, it is very much appreciated.

Kind regards, Mutterings.