Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25633515-20141106215119/@comment-25547916-20141107154839

This story is pretty strange, and it's kind of difficult to review honestly. I suppose people might think that zombie stories are done to death, but this seems self-aware enough to avoid being a cliche. The ending capitalized on this well. There's a few blemishes throughout: the opening sentence was a mouthful, the story probably shouldn't give the exact date of the apocalypse, and the characters felt a bit flat. Overall, I'm not sure exactly what to think of this, the main idea is interesting and the ending is well-executed, but the story seems a bit bland everywhere else. I'm sorry I couldn't be more helpful; I'm really not sure what else to say about this.