Talk:Almost/@comment-9967354-20140409093015/@comment-24079115-20150309223050

Thanks for the feedback! It was actually somewhat intentional that the woman being the robot was obvious to the reader, so that the suspense could be built up through the dramatic irony therein, but yes, the problem with short stories is it's difficult to tell the reader anything without telling them too much. Glad you enjoyed it anyhow and sorry for the late response (didnt get an email notification for whatever reason).