Talk:Something Is Wrong/@comment-25052433-20150916043503

Well, I continue on my journey down the road that is SnakeTongue, and let me tell you, the journey keeps getting better. This story is by far the best one of yours that I've read so far, and it certainly left nothing to be desired.

The pace and length of this one were perfect. You kept me locked in from start to finish. The plot was fresh and fun, while still packing that mystery and gore that make a Creepypasta great. There were no big plot holes that I could find, and you did a fantastic job concluding it all at the end.

As for edits, there were a couple.

I fixed some very minor grammar issues. Category wise, I removed "places" as it doesn't really fit. This pasta wasn't so much about any particular place, as it was more focused on things that were happening in a particular place.

I added mental illness to cover the aunt's fall into madness, dismemberment for the bloody uncle, and disappearance for the uncle's vanishing. I think those will cover this story well in placing it where it belongs.

As always, your works are amazing and your talent stands out. I will continue to review your stories, as they have certainly grabbed my attention. Excellent job on this!