Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-40099310-20190729152101/@comment-38434470-20190805063717

I cannot talk on behalf of everyone else. But for me, the story is just too long and pointless. It varely dares to change anything from the original story (which was flawed from the structure up to the grammar and everything in between, and yes, that was a rule for the contest, it's still a bad move.) Jeff is still barely developed, yet the writer wants the reader to empatize with him, so much in fact, that is parents are rewritten into awful people, still, they are not horrible enough to justify their inminent murder. There is even more, but I do not want to stretch this comment any longer than needed, so I will end with the fact that this CREPPY-pasta is not even scary in any way.