User blog comment:Widward/I'm Done/@comment-26399604-20180224055804

I'm going to piggyback off Hopeless. Yes, you're welcome to stay here to express your thoughts, but regardless of the outlet (YouTube, DeviantArt, etc) you need to learn to elaborate on your opinion -- and that goes for any of the list you want to generate.

From past posts, I've seen you make bland statements like "Jeff the Killer sucks" and then move onto your next item. They're very close-ended statements and come off as a comment someone would make on YouTube versus the content of the blog/vlog. And that's just it, you want your list to spark a discussion, to see whether people agree or disagree with your opinion. If you listen, most established Youtubers will state their opinion in their video, and then at the end, invite users to continue the discussion in the comment section.

Take these blogs for example. Although they aren't exactly top ten lists, they do get the reader involved, which you can tell by the comments. Now, you don't have write to have something this lengthy as them for your opinion, but it should at least be enough to support your thoughts.

Right now, people are more focused on the fact that you don't expand on your thoughts instead of the topics you're trying to discuss. You're basically distracting people from the purpose of your blog (and any future vlogs, if you plan to go that route). Start small first and practice by studying how others do their blogs/top-ten lists or whatever and find your style. As you practice, you'll get better and you might end up with long pages like in the examples, but for now you need to get in the habit of expanding your thoughts past two sentences.

Last note: I recommend that you treat all your posts (comments, blogs, etc) like a paper you'd turn in for a grade: Always use proper grammar. If you don't get in the habit of writing properly then you'll never grow to better it. It's good practice and it'll become second-nature if you adhere to that principle everywhere you write. Plus, it'll make your blogs/vlogs more professional and allow people to, again, concentrate on the topic at hand instead of you mistakes.

Hope this helps.