Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30402176-20170915192232/@comment-24101790-20170921151108

ARedgrave wrote: Emp. Thank you so much for this. You must have taken a great deal of time reading this to point out the errors; and I will adjust the story accordingly. As I said earlier - this is going to be either a 2/3 part story; do you think I should upload parts 2 and 3 on the workshop as well?

No problem, I would say that posting to this thread might allow for more feedback from the reviewers on this site to help smooth out any wrinkles or issues in the story.