Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27404992-20151215193321/@comment-26512885-20151219013406

I quite liked this, it reminds me of a short horror film I saw on youtube. Currently Its particully chilling or scary, not sure how this could be improved though, maybe another user will have some ideas.

As for a title, if you want a bit of a horror reference your could call it 'It' or maybe something less assuming such as 'late night reading'. ( im not the best at naming ;) )