Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25421326-20160519214557/@comment-25421326-20160522173025

Demuerto wrote: I like the idea, but my problem with this is there are too many loose ends in the story. When you say "get my friends back" are you refering to the other voices? Yes, that was it.

I like the end, but I'm still not clear why to protag was on the window ledge. Even in an LSD induced stuper there would be a reason, seen or thought, real or fake, a person would be in that situation. If I missed that please let me know. I believe he was on the ledge because he was trying to get away. Regardless, I understand your point.