Talk:The Purple Balloon/@comment-26226146-20150320143804

A little review:

Strong points:

- No clichés. At least not many. There is one but that I'll discus later.

- Idea is original.

- Story ends with nice twist.

Weak pionts:

- Too short. Needs slower pacing and more build up.

- I might be not an expert but I don't think that somebody would let themselfs be abused so much.

- One cliché: Jesters "shadow with a horns and tail". It just sounds silly. Not enough to ruin the experience but enough to make me groan.

Score: 4 balloons out of 5.