Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36095001-20180822011625/@comment-35911608-20180822012337

Oh. Oh I get it. Red Ink. Yeah.

Sorry, bit of a yawn fest. It's just crossing the line from Telling to Showing, but it's still too listed: "I did this, then I went here, then this happened."

It wasn't frightening. I'm not even sure if game pastas are accepted on here anymore. Even if there's no rule against them, I think the community is sick of them by now anyways.