Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-43858604-20190918224749/@comment-9041013-20190919114014

To be honest, I couldn't understand what was happening in the story from the way it's written. We know something is wrong but we have to piece everything to make out what it is and even then, it's not garanteed we'd get it right.

Also, that's not how Schizophrenia "acts".