Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20170201195638/@comment-9041013-20170203193911

Diexilius wrote: Thanks for the critique. The first was supposed to simply be a quick, straight-forward read and I think it fit its purpose. As for the second, I don't really remember reading other drug-type stories having gory monsters, but then again, I didn't read that many. Also, I wanted to create an atmosphere of slowly drowning and had to incorporate "evil smile" and the creatures seemed to be the best option. Thanks for catching that error. No problem! I do see why you wanted to create this atmosphere. Ive had this idea in my head for the longest time of what Hell is like for me and it is in a way an environment of drowning or just being stuck in liquid with teethy monsters