Talk:Necrosleep/@comment-5769187-20150116223539

until the middle of the text, i was loving this pasta. but, "the second middle" of the text was a little disappointing to me, because that part insert in the story some cliches which i have seen in other creepypasta.

anyway, i give it a 8/10. a very interesting idea missed.

(sorry for my bad english, i speak spanish and i only can read english in a good level)