Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20140923012345/@comment-4893169-20141007003235

Okay, I fixed what you listed that needed fixing. I'm still debating about the gruesome pictures in the letter part, it would seem that this Constance character, although well meaning, is not quite right in the head. Maybe it would have to do with her ultra-strict religious upbringing and that it might have aggravated an underlying mental condition.

What I have is that I don't mention the rest of the letter in its entirety and that Marc is looking at the pictures and wondering what he should do--send this to the police, go tell his parents.