Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25428589-20140916200543/@comment-25436364-20140918213836

I, too, thought that you were going a cliché route with HF=patients, then the twist that the nurse was insane, then another twist that there is a cover-up. There's a lot going on here! Way to keep us on our toes!

Couple of small critiques, though. Using "their" instead of "there" twice kind of threw me off. Second, I question why a nurse would have a scalpel in his pocket--normally, surgical tools would be sterilized and stored. Then you mentioned him living in London--is this important? If it is, why didn't you mention it before?

Thanks for sharing, hope this helps!