Talk:Ted the Caver/@comment-25150306-20140710150634

I really enjoyed this one. It was extremely immersive and well-written, apart from the constant grammatical error of placing apostrophes in words just because they end with 's'. Annoying!

It also seems that whoever altered the original text to prepare it for this website made a few mistakes. I think some paragraphs are wrongly formatted (some are italised when they shouldn't be and vice versa) and the image of Ted's depiction of the cave drawing appears to be a totally different image that isn't relevant to the story at all... ???

There wasn't anything particularly creepy about this story, but it was very tense and dreadful. That's all a good horror story needs. I love that all the gory and creepy details are left out.

I usually hate open endings but it works very well in this case.