Talk:The Origin of Laughing Jack/@comment-3541151-20150112023325/@comment-26097460-20150210221245

In my opinion I think it's a pretty good story, though it was a little too gory to my taste... Anyway:

The writer never forgot that killing the cat thing. Laughing Jack wasn't violent, he just squeezed the cat too much, though he didn't know the consequences of it, plus Isaac laughed about that action so Laughing Jack didn't take it as a bad thing since he doesn't know what's good and what's bad. Also, the violent actions he witnessed were MUCH MORE worse than the incident with the cat.

I don't think Angels are able to read the future, that Angel just saw a lonely child and wanted to make a miracle out of it. It turned into a mistake but no one knew that would happen.

I agree with you in something: The story was too blood hungry at the end. But I don't think it sucks. I haven't seen better Creepypastas, and writing one is lots of hard work anyway. Can you write a better story than this one?

It's not a 10/10 story but it doesn't deserve a poor 3/10 either.

I give it a 8.5/10