Talk:Connect Two/@comment-25477067-20141202203058/@comment-21418328-20141202212454

Admittedly, this is the soft intro to a series of short stories that will tie into a novel depicting the many controversial experiments of V. Some of them will be more psychologically scarring to the subjects than others. I intend fully on posting more that will tie into eachother revealing the mystery behind the organization. This one was intended to make you think about different core concepts that could potentially be considered taboo. I wanted to stimulate a psychological reaction in my readers. I can assure you, SourceCode, that if you stick around for the ride it will take you to VERY disturbing places. I also want to note that I don't engage in outlines or rough drafts, what you are seeing is raw writing. The only edit I made was in regards to the last line because I wasn't quite satisfied with it. Thank you for your criticism my good friend, I have considered these things already though.