Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5554608-20150702050515/@comment-5554608-20150702235718

I don't think I can fix the story. Honestly, I am not a horror person. I could never seem to write anything horrific even if I wanted to. Which I did wanted to.

My best genre is fantasy adventure. So I guess that answers your questions?

Yeah, I was thinking of removing "About the Characters" part. I do need to show more of their actions than just tell their actions. Thank you for agreeing with me to that.

I have read numerous of Creepypastas and I have watched Creepypastas on Youtube. Rpg horror, everything. As much as I love this genre, I could never do it. But I did written a Creepypasta a long time ago called "Irniq and Ila" and the "Past Puppeteer". They had morals and was somewhat creepy to people. But the 'Past Puppetee' was mostly liked because of the moral at the end.

The name Gemdiah is a something that comes from my fantasy story I published. So I was going for a fantasy horror story. And the 'they're apart the same world'.

Thanks anyway. I'll just love horror, but stick to fantasy adventure. Maybe the motivation for horror will come later in my life.