Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190813084030/@comment-35711173-20190813162557

Jdeschene wrote: I think it's better than your response implies. All it really needs is some tuning followed by a surface level edit of the mechanics.

One thing I forgot to mention: I don't think it's necessary to include Rev. 14:4 - 5 as 1 - 3 are totally enough for your purposes. I understand what you're going for here, but it doesn't quite add as much as it needs to in order for that to be effective.

Thank you very much. I appreciate that.