Talk:Insanity/@comment-4993676-20141107030401/@comment-5007956-20141127154550

Hi! Thanks a lot for the critique, it's the only way for me to improve as a writer and I really appreciate the people who put this much time into commenting on my stories so maybe I can clear up some things in your comment and the lovely commenter bellow.

The entire idea of this was an insane person telling his therapist what makes an insane person insane. It's a recount of his own experiences.

"A daily routine repeated every month, over and over. I couldn’t take it anymore. Instead of doing what most grown men do, simply changing a small thing to keep them going through their miserable lives, I decided a change of lifestyle would suffice."

In my opinion, the definition of a story is way too loose to be able to draw a line but that's personal opinion. Plus the mindless gore is what some people want, and it's in my opinion enjoyable to write, so that's again personal preference. His motive was he was crazy, and again when he's talking about what makes a person insane, he's taking it from his own experience. But again, the entire point of the story is mainly violence so if that isn't your cup of tea then you most likely won't enjoy it. Regardless, thanks again for the critique.