Talk:7 Gates of Hell/@comment-25471033-20180104220109

The ending was a nice little twist, and the concept, in its essence, was pretty good but that's as much as I can say. There was a lot of repetition that was absolutely not needed, one that I fixed where you said something like "He spoke. He spoke with..." at the beginning but there was even more that I couldn't help but notice. As MuSaMa said, even though this is a really cool concept and it's evident that it's supposed to be a quick read, add a lot more detail and take more time with this. 5/10