Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20180622074808/@comment-35911608-20180622112923

Now this, this was good. I had a feeling of that twist coming, but it was presented in an amazing fashion. Description is perfect throughout the entire story, and it seems like you either know or did your research on the inner tech workings of a news channel.

I don't have anything to say that was actually "bad", minus a few grammar errors but we all pass over those while writing. If you wanna lengthen THIS concept alone, maaaayybe add one more murder, and THEN reveal the twist after the third, but hint at it during the second I suppose? But even then the concept might be stretched a little.

If you wanted to extend the story, and this is completely up to you, what about a copycat killer who gets our main character at the end, and HIS death is reported? Just an idea.

But overall really nice job! I also liked how you took note of the MC's behavior, he certainly felt like a real person.