Talk:The Hollow Horde/@comment-35711173-20190303182824/@comment-38695084-20190303193148

Thank you for taking the time to comment your feedback. I do have my stories in the past, or at least avoid putting anything in them that would be to modern, to give myself an excuse to use that kind of language; I think maybe I am too self indulgent when I write. Thank you for pointing out my mistake of leaving the protagonist unarmed and thank you for the point about the story's overly nightmarish quality. I'll bear your words in mind next time I write.