Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35973449-20180625160812/@comment-35973449-20180626191212

Thanks for the review Bloody, um even though it's not your type of story. It's hard to review a subject you don't find interesting or aren't drawn to.

Are you talking about Kevin's shouting when the window shattered? Or when the nurse touched him? If so, I could attempt to explain a little bit more in the story about why he doesn't want to be touched? I think it was a little obvious though the way the character talked about other people.

Imagine feeling that way and then someone touches you...

I did write the story to be a bit vague. I'm fine with it being a little predictable. Do you think I should add a little bit more reality to question his sanity?

I don't understand your Robot refference. Could you elaborate please?