User blog comment:Widward/Jeff the Killer rant/@comment-27838637-20180304125800/@comment-10502460-20180304201559

"yes, sympathetic villains can work hell that the reason why I like Mr. Freeze but you still need to make them be villains. But when you're making a serial killer story you can't really do that because they kill innocent there's no excuse for that. do want to know what makes serial killers fascinating we have no idea what their thinking Halloween and Friday The 13th understand this. since the story is in Jeff's point of view you make him less mysterious and less SCARY. your that saying that Jeff has a motivation. Can you tell me what it is? because the only motivation I seem to get from this story is"I got beat up by kids so I'm going kill everyone" that's a really dumb reason to start killing people, Imagine if Lex Luther only hates Superman just because he got beat up one day, would that be ridiculous? It will have much more weight if Jeff parents were likable. the depth I was talking about gave like Randy doesn't care for his gang and they just hang with him just because who's his dad was that would be interesting. It's just these flaws were enough to take me out of the experience."

Okay, see Widward, these are points you needed to bring up in your OP. These are all valid points, but we all should not have had to coax you this hard to get you to explain your reasoning as well as start using decent grammar. This is why people don't like your blogs.