Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5870811-20150527020432/@comment-25226524-20150527021047

Please read the Style Guide. The dialogue needs broken up, and the punctuation goes inside the quotes. You'll have a hard time getting anyone to read this until you fix the formatting issues. To edit, just hover your mouse pointer over the bottom right corner of the post and click "More" then "Edit". The style guide will tell you everything you need to know as far as formatting goes. Good luck.