Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24359178-20141010183018/@comment-25226524-20141010192139

A side-note, in dialogue, when you refer to the speaker after what's been said, you should use a comma instead of a period. For example: “Have a nice day.” She said, handing me the bagged up rope. It should read: "Have a nice day," she said... . You also don't capitalize the letter of the first word after quotes when it's a all part of one sentence, unless it's a word that is always capitalized (this applies to any quote if the content following is part of the same sentence, even if it ends in a ? or !.)  For example: “Is that all?” The girl at the cash register asked me, putting the rope in the bag. It should read: "Is that all?" the girl at... . I haven't read the story yet, these are just some things I noticed at first glance. I'll try to give it a read later.