Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27905100-20160505171337/@comment-27905100-20160508015628

Thanks a bundle, Frank (If that's your name). I imagined the mouths as I have now described them in the story (scars). These were actually based off of dementors in the Harry Potter series more than anything, and the size was no different. As for everything else, I've addressed it, so I think it should be fine.