Talk:Deceased/@comment-25425104-20140921152303

"We’re talking really, really…well…old" I didn't find it nessecary to put this so, drawn out the way you did. I like this story, in all honestly. Very creepy, gives off a supernatural like affect. I hope you continue the stroy, it was written with a good idea. If you could add more detail and emphasize on the main character's feelings, etc more, this story would be superb. 6.5/10