User talk:Vngel W/Archives/Archives 1

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Jay ten (talk) 19:51, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Your stories just uploaded
I'm adding navigation to the bottom of your stories so users can easily move to the next page without any extra effort. And I was wondering if it's alright with you if I change the title of the stories so that "Part 1" and "Part 2" are removed, it's clogging the title space, and I can add a note to the top of the second story indicating there's a prequel so nobody reads that story without knowing there's prequel.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   03:21, July 10, 2015 (UTC)
 * What do you think of removing the "part I", "part II", "part III", etc. from the titles of your stories just uploaded? I'm a rollbacker, I could change the titles right now.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   03:42, July 10, 2015 (UTC)

Hi, yes you can remove the "Parts" from the title, that's fine. (Vngel W (talk) 04:04, July 10, 2015 (UTC))

Thanks for leaving your opinions about my pasta, I will try to improve it later. :)

LegoMaster2149 (talk) 22:26, August 14, 2015 (UTC)

Crucifix
Hey there, I wasn't able to respond to your comment on my pasta in the Writer's Workshop because the thread was shut down, but I would just like to thank you for your kind words. Crucifix is now a page!

Who killed Mr. Boddy?! It was I, The Eccentric Bible Salesman! 21:02, August 16, 2015 (UTC)

I've actually fixed this story since then. You can read it here: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Blue_Headlights

Gabemcceldry (talk) 03:36, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Hey there
Hey,

I just wanted to say that you have some of the best art in the contest.

Best,

JohnathanNash (talk) 15:40, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Story Revised
Salutations!

I would love to write a secondary review on your story. I'm a bit clogged up in regards to work load at the moment but I'll be sure to read it in my spare time. I'll write you a review when I'm done. I'll see you then!

Oaura (talk) 08:49, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

Art Contest - Second Place! Hey !

Congratulations, you've won second place in Rinskuro's creepy art contest!

Regards,

17:24, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Thank You
I thought I would follow up with this thank you message, for the review on my Dark Corners of Mireworth story, and apologize for the length. It initially was not supposed to be that long, but it just ended up that way.

Thanks, again

A-3 Loki (talk) 04:25, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Hello Vngel w
Thank you for the review you posted a review on a short paragraph I submitted about  called "Broken city:Prolouge" Sorry it took me so long to reply,a barely get chances to use the wiki. This is going to be the introduction to a series of stories I plan to write called Broken City.I plan on writing this,once I have completed some short horror stories I am currently writing.One of the short stories is called "A trial In hell" However,when I submitted it,It was jrejected for not reaching the quality standard.I was just wondering If you would like to post a review for it,and tell me how I can change it to meet the quality standard.I posted it on the writers workshop.

Electrolord (talk) 17:23, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

sure!
I'll take a look at chapter 1 for starters, and see how it strikes me. Often I find issues in the first chapter that are also present in later chapters, and simply pointing out one or two instances can give you enough ammo to find the rest. I'll get back to you hopefully later in the week.--Mikemacdee (talk) 09:02, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Just finished my Novella.
A couple months back, you commented on the first chapter of a novella that I am now done writing (sort of.)

You requested that you see the new one when I am done, so,here it is!

I can understand if you don't want to read it though, it is considerably long.

SnakeTongue (Jack Crayven) (talk) 00:44, December 30, 2015 (UTC)

no problem!
Glad I could help.--Mikemacdee (talk) 11:00, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

The Sort Template
You have used the sort template improperly on this edit. It is used for stories that begin with the word A, An, or The. The second word of the title is inputted first, then the rest of the title, then the first word. It organizes the Genre Listing like a library, keeping those words from clumping and making stories difficult to find. For example, The Grifter would be sorted like this:.

 SoPretentious 13:19, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

Might I inquire your reviewing help?
I have seen your review on the Man in the abandoned building in the Writer's workshop and I must admit you pointed out the flaws of the story quite nicely and so I would like your assistance. You see, recently, I had my story deleted and, while I do agree with the decision full, have made some changes to it in order to eventually republish it. I would like to inquire your reviewing eye to go over my story, if you have the time, and help me iron out the flaws. Here is the link to it: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:524014. Thank you for hearing out my proposal. I wish you the best in life.

Sincerely Jonathan DeLacuso (talk) 21:34, February 4, 2016 (UTC)Jonathan DeLacuso

I thank you wholeheartedly.

Jonathan DeLacuso (talk) 08:04, February 5, 2016 (UTC)Jonathan DeLacuso

Thank you so much for the revision.
I've seen your revision of my story and I have to thank you. You have pointed out some problems that I didn't even consider before. I will surely rewrite it (again) and probably publish it. Originally I wanted to have him return to his child home, attempting to make him face his fears only to make him realize that he is not strong enough, but I never knew where to implement it. Also, his mother's cancer was the first thing to make him go over the edge. I'll try to add in some smaller scenes of nightmares that James had as a child and how his mother chased the monsters back into the shadows (which is what he reffers to them now). I will try to add more impact and foreshadowing at some scenes and resubmit it again. Once again, thank you a lot for the response.

Sincerely, Jonathan DeLacuso (talk) 15:48, February 10, 2016 (UTC)Jonathan DeLacuso

RE: Blog Post About Psychic Powers
Thank you so much Vngel W for this piece of advice you posted even though it wasn't on my blog. I'm really hoping I didn't screw up something while posting this blog post. I changed the Edit summary to 'Blog Post-Need Urgent Help' so hopefully that will allow other people to post.

I happened to have a character I'm working on that I'm trying to decide if he should have just perfect memory or some psychic abilities to see into the future.

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 17:49, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Hey, can you re-read my story..It's the first of a collection
I made some better changes, and I think the impact part has been a success.  Nathan Leachman  |  Talk  17:20, March 21, 2016 (UTC)

I had done a re-write of this in order to polish it up. Same plot, except there's a little bit more of a story there, but not enough...The hidden element is probably a bit more obvious though, but there's less ambiguity...Enough to be coherent. I folllowed the prose of the same...The first part...God/Bomb thinks highly, second part, Bomb doesn't think highly...I added a "Tick element" to ad to the immersion.  Nathan Leachman  |  Talk  17:14, March 22, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Dupin's Hat
I think it'd be better to just leave this as a fun activity rather than a sanctioned wiki contest as the scope is pretty limited (altering an avatar) and could result in issues if it were made into a full contest and tagged under staff blogs (especially since it's focused on one avatar/person). EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:21, March 31, 2016 (UTC)

Well well well...
Looks like Empty didn't give us a thumbs-up. That's so unfortuante, since I was expecting a bit lot. Really sorry...

Or maybe it doesn't need to be a contest, at all. Maybe... some sort of activity. A recreational activity, perhaps, where everyone is supposed to have a fun, not to compete. Things would be a lot, lot easier that way, and a lot, lot better. There'd be no rules, judges, limits, stuff, etc. etc. All for the gags, I guess.

So are you up? Would love to hear back from you before I make the blog.

 Ruckus Q uantum   10:44, April 2, 2016 (UTC)


 * I've done the blog. You can check it out here.


 *  Ruckus Q uantum   17:22, April 2, 2016 (UTC)

In Need of Advice
This time it isn't about a story, it's about digital book-making advice. If you can find the time, please check out my latest blog.

Looking For Advice On a Good Booking Making Program

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 16:34, June 5, 2016 (UTC)

Fingers and Keyboards
Hi, I was wondering if you are working on any new stories or projects in general at the moment. I haven't finished your Church in the Woods series yet, but I am getting there. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  06:11, June 7, 2016 (UTC)


 * I don't like my first story and cringe a bit when people read it too. My first story was actually something along the lines of being my 7th submission here (just wanted to make it available and was curious about the reception it would get) XD That said, I like yours and it has gotten better with each chapter so far (I've just finished The Book).


 * Ahahaha, sounds a lot like me XD I am pretty bad about trying to do multiple stories at once. I get all these ideas in my head, like you do, and then I get so excited that I want to start working on them. I've ended up telling myself to finish one before working on the others. I'm working on a "not Creepypasta" at the moment, because I have only been writing Creepypastas for the last year and a half or so. I've also found that switching things up can keep writer's block at bay. The thing that I am working on has a bit of an anime theme to it and I am wanting it to be at least 50K words long, but it'll end up being however long it ends up being (I'm not going to stretch it out for the sake of meeting a word count and risk hurting the story). It's only 4K words at the moment and is the second longest thing I have written, but shall soon overtake Became. You can read Ikarigatari here:


 * I'm wanting to turn it into a Visual Novel, but I need to buy a Wacom Draw Tablet first, so that I can draw character sprites and backgrounds on my PC. If it interests you, you can read more about my plans for it here:  (I borrowed the background art from Fate Stay Night and will have to change it later on. I got tired of looking at a checkered background with text).  Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  16:32, June 7, 2016 (UTC)


 * Makes sense to me, it's just unfortunate that it makes it take longer to put things out. I'd love to see them both for sure!


 * It is extremely easy to do so with Ren'Py which is freeware that you can download here: . I'd love to make a Visual Novel with a relationship points system that allows you to unlock certain dialogue if your relationship points are high or low enough with people and maybe have it effect which endings you can reach, that'll be for another project that I don't have figured out though. I'm surprised that I've never seen a Visual Novel do that before. But yeah, Ren'Py is my recommendation as a lot of Visual Novels that end up on Steam are made with it and it is both highly modifiable and easy to use (I suck at coding).


 * Wow, that web-comic is great. I'm so jealous XD Oh, speaking of talent, what all did you use to make your avatar and the picture of the angel in the "about me" section, if you don't mind my asking? Also, do you have a Steam? Thank you! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  18:38, June 7, 2016 (UTC)


 * True, but I'd really like to see the idea done sooner rather than later. I don't really care if I am the one that comes up with that particular idea, I'd just be happy to see more games that have high replayability and choices, you know?


 * I believe I am thinking of it. It's available on Steam right? Aren't the characters pixelated models, or can they be pretty much whatever? What I am most nervous about is making a trailer and doing character sprites. I feel like I have the music and sound effects figured out, but Audicity isn't recording things on my new desktop for whatever reason. It is either because the soundcard hasn't been put into their system yet (which is possible, because my PC is really new and top of the line) or the soundcard has a block on it that prevents me from recording audio that is played through the speakers (which is something that companies have been doing more and more and it is bs). I have some sound effects lined up that are open licensing, so it isn't like I was stealing, I had permission, boo!


 * I bet making games is exhausting! Oi, the thought of having to animate something scares me and sends shivers down my spine. That has to be so difficult, it has to. I'll probably have to figure a bit of it out in order to cobble together a release trailer though :(


 * I almost don't believe you. They look too good for paint! Perhaps paint and Microsoft paint are two separate programs? You are very skilled to have pulled that off in paint, my shaky hands always betray me with that program XD That's a shame. Laptops aren't reliable for gaming at all. You should definitely get a desktop if/when you are able to afford it. My laptop is on life support and tends to overheat itself. It's had a couple of restorations done, but I ended up just going out and buying a desktop that can do anything, because to heck with dealing with something that overheats all the time. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  20:48, June 7, 2016 (UTC)


 * Binary Domain gave me the idea. It's a shooter that is a borderline RPG thanks to it allowing you to upgrade your weapons and having a trust system between you and your allies. It's a really good game that flew under everyone's radar (including mine) when it came out and thus sold poorly. Really fun, you get to blast robots apart and the story is unique and fresh. Alpha Protocol was another game that is big on consequences and one of my all time favorites, though most people hate the game because they dislike the gameplay *shrugs*.


 * If it was a 2-D handdrawn style, I'd be all over it. It still sounds neat, but it isn't something that I want to toy with at the moment. I already have a whole lot on my plate and I don't know if I can finish it (the plate). I spent a good two hours googling and trying to find solutions before I called it quits. I'm just going to wait it out and hope for a fix before such a time comes that I need to install sounds. I'm not a fan of Windows 10 and hate digging around trying to find all the configuration settings and such, but it was either 10 or 8 (ew). If it doesn't work then, then I can switch back and forth between my two desktops (though it will be a pain, because I'll have to swap them out to use them both) or maybe my laptop, if I can get that to behave without overheating.


 * Yeah, and don't forget the music. All trailers have music, usually vocals :| I'm probably going to have to shell out some serious money for that, so that's why I'm trying to do everything else by myself and as free as possible. Oh yeah, not spoiling anything will be hard too. I don't want to mess up as badly as the Batman versus Superman trailer did.


 * No way! I've never knowingly seen something colored so well with that program (at least to my knowledge). I downloaded Gimp with the intention of using for trying to make character sprites, but I might try paint. I'm sure I can find a great YouTube video. I had just never thought it possible to do something like that with Paint. Runescape and Star Wars: The Old Republic are the only online games I've ever played, never played Hero Online. I can't really do online because my internet has been garbage for the last year, it often downloads between 40kb and 400kb, sometimes it can be really good, but it is rare. So I tend to not like online games for that reason.


 * I'll play anything, but I really like RPG's and Visual Novels the best. I love being able to make choices and change the world. I've been dabbling in a bit of grand strategy lately too; Stellaris, Crusader Kings II, and Hearts of Iron IV (all made by Paradox Interactive). How about you? I have you pegged as an RPG fan too, but that's just because you mentioned RPG Maker XD  Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  05:12, June 8, 2016 (UTC)


 * I had read about Microsoft doing that. They allegedly changed it back after some news outlets called them out on doing that, but I bet they'll get even more bold when the deadline approaches. I'd be angry if my laptop did that because it barely functions as is on Windows 7, that'd brick it. They're supposedly going to keep updating the security for Windows 7 until 2020 and Windows 10 is rumored to be the last OS and they are just going to keep updating it. Yeah, Hololens looks amazing! I hope they get it working right and it isn't just another gimmick.


 * I have a particular voice actress in mind who used to do musical theater :D Might ask her to sing for the sake of the trailer or do a narration for it. They either spoil or show all the best parts of the film, Batman v Superman managed to do both XD


 * Geez, so much talent! If you like Chinese Dynasty themes then you should check out the Dynasty Warriors series which is a beat-em up where hundreds of enemies fill the screen at once. I like the Empires spin-off because you get to make your own armies and recruit whatever famous officers you want for it, in addition to making your own character.


 * One great RPG that you may have overlooked is Kingdom of Amular: Reckoning. It was going to be an MMO, but got scaled back to being a single player RPG after the studio realized they couldn't secure funding for it. As a result, the world is massive and filled with quests. It's a really fun and exciting game, but unfortunately it was the studio's last because it came out around Skyrim and the studio head owed the state of Rhode Island a ton of money. Alien Isolation is the scariest game I have played by far. I had a friend come over to play it with me and we both were too scared to get through it. I'd spend most of my time hiding in lockers and trying to sneak around only for the Xenomorph to pop out and kill me XD Still haven't finished it, 3 scary 5 me. Resident Evil 7 is heavily rumored to be making an appearance at this E3. I think they ought to back to the series roots and make it all be set in a single location, like say... a prison. I'd love a horror game in that setting. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  16:51, June 8, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, when have companies ever released something free for consumer benefit? Their intentions aren't good, I can tell you that. Whether their intent is spying or being able to say "Look how great Windows 10 is doing! We have over 10 Million people using it and it has only been out for x amount of months!" at an investors meeting, it sucks that they are shoving it down everyone's throat. A lot of businesses are ending up with useless computers because business software is something that is always way behind, probably still on Windows 7.

I still haven't seen Psycho Pass, but I am planning on it. Here's a list of all the anime that I've seen, am watching and plan to watch: Warning, I've accumulated a total watch time of 49 days.

I haven't seen the first Conjuring, I take it is good? I tend to stay away from ghost movies, like Paranormal Activity, because they strike me as rather lazy with cheap parlor tricks (pulling things with a string to make it look haunted). Jay Ten told me about an indie horror film called The Witch. I'm really looking forward to watching it:

Empires 7 is the best in my opinion, but it is exclusive digital to the Playstation 3. 8 Empires lets you have children with other officers which is neat, but there isn't any spoken dialogue that recognizes them as your child or spouse on the battlefield. I haven't played the extreme or legends series, but I have been playing the main series since 4 and the Empires series since it came out at 5. If you have the moolah, the Empire series is always a great choice to dump money into XD

I'm wanting it, but I am also conflicted on it. I heard that they neutered a lot of the dialogue and character quirks to things that don't make sense when they localized it. Is it bearable/noticable? I really hate censorship and localizations that are done with the goal of censoring/removing things to make them more "region appropriate".

The save system is annoying. You have to go find a phone to save. That's my only complaint though. I wouldn't find it scary if it allowed me to be armed, but I am completely unarmed and I know that Xenomorph could be anywhere XD I liked the Aliens vs Predator game on the 360. I played some multiplayer on that and redid the Predator campaign a bunch. I'm assuming you are referring to the dreaded Colonial Marines though, ew. I can't remember if Isolation sold well enough or not, I think it did, but Sega is pretty dumb about handling sequels.

RE 6 was odd. It tried to capture 4 with the Leon campaign, CoD with the Chris Campaign, something new with Wesker's son and the more traditional with the Ada campaign. I got to play a bit of the first one when I was young and didn't get the opportunity to do so again until 5 (not allowed to play M games until I was 16). You might be in luck, they're remaking 2 right now, so 3 could be next. That'd be cool. Maybe the prisoners could be intended as test subjects and the government had brokered a deal with the Umbrella Corporation, so that's how zombies ended up on the island? It would work XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  20:28, June 8, 2016 (UTC)

Anime and Remakes
Fate Zero - To the Beginning by Kalafina is one of my favorite openings. It isn't necessarily because of what's happening on screen, but rather the music and lyrics: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eQDK1qhzf6o (couldn't find an english subbed version). I had thought I had Claymore and Samurai Champloo added, but I guess not XD Here's my list of things that you should watch: WataMote, Jojo's Bizarre Adventure, Fate Zero, One Punch Man, Toradora!, Spice and Wolf, Clannad, Daily Lives of High School Boys, and Gintama. Those are my favorites in order from favorite to last of the favorites.

Watamote is about a girl with social anxiety, but not everyone likes it because they find it too real, it's a personal anime for me (watch it subbed, seriously). Jojo's Bizarre Adventure is Bizarre with lots of fighting. It always finds a way to escalate (subbed). Fate Zero has to do with a war over the holy grail which can grant any wish, mages summon prominent warriors from history to help fight at their side. The first episode is the longest at 40 minutes and is all exposition/setting the conflict up, get passed that and you'll probably like it (subbed or dubbed). One Punch Man is a fighting show with lots of humor (subbed). Toradora! is about two people that join forces and devise a plan that'll allow them to date each other's best friend (subbed). Spice and Wolf has to do with a travelling merchant that brings a deity along for the ride. It's about economics in a nutshell (dubbed). Clannad is probably the saddest story ever made, enough said (subbed, the dub will make you homicidal). Daily Lives of High School Boys is a lot like Robot Chicken in that it is random funny skits with a core cast (subbed). Gintama is about nothing and everything, it is a comedy. Samurai and aliens (subbed)!

Oh, I might check it out then. I am familiar with James Wan (Saw). That's good to hear about FE!

You know, I have Outlast, but haven't played it yet. Looking forward to it though! They are making an Outlast 2. You'd think that, but Sega is dumb about making sequels and has a habit of not making the ones that they should :(

I can agree with that. Hopefully 7 is more focused and what the fans deserve. Hehe. I got like, three M games before I was 16 and I had to beg for days, maybe even a couple of months. Fable, Mass Effect, and, one of the worst games to let a minor play, GTA: Vice City XD The Final Fantasty 7 "Remake" isn't going to be true to the original and at this point should be considered an entirely different game based upon what is known about it (it is going to be episodic, ugh). Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  16:53, June 9, 2016 (UTC)


 * Sorry it has taken me so long to reply. I was out late last night and my neck was out so I was up all night and had to go get it adjusted. Started to reply earlier, but couldn't do it because I felt really bad, better now though.


 * I tried getting into the original Naruto years ago, but couldn't get into it. I may watch Tokyo Ghoul, but I've go a whole lot on my list before I can get to it (I always hear mixed things about it) XD I have had a lot of time to think about it and already had that list made, so take your time :P Since you like One Punch, I think you'd probably like Jojo's Bizarre Adventure (be sure to watch the one from 2011/2012) because it has a degree of goofiness. Also think you'd like Fate Zero, but it is more serious. That isn't to say that Jojo doesn't get serious though, it can get sad.


 * Sounds like a jolly good time! At least there won't be any aliens this time, right? RIGHT??? You take off your VR and find someone clutched in your hand with a bunch of bruises from you punching them XD I really liked being able to play Grand Theft Auto 5 in first person mode, so VR would be fun! Pokemon and war would be sweet too. I'd love a VR Star Wars Stormtrooper game.


 * Yes. I was so very excited for the new Hitman and then they announced it was going to be episodic and lost my sale and a friend of mine's sale. We're both waiting for the disc release, because episodic is stupid for that type of game. I chucked Destiny into the garbage been way back (figuratively XD) because of Bungie's nonsense with it. In my opinion, Star Wars games weren't that bad with the DLC as they were always fun and enjoyable, until Dice Battlefieldfront, but we don't speak of that abomination that taints the memory of one of the best franchises of all time. Instead, look at this beauty! Yes, the real Star Wars Battlefront 3 :D It'll probably get shut down because they aren't with Disney and don't have permission, but it'll leak onto bittorrent at that point, so it is a win for the fans regardless. Speaking of Star Wars games, did you know that Visceral, the studio that made Dead Space and Dante's Inferno, is working on an open world Single Player Star Wars game. It is rumored to be a Han Solo one, but I'm hoping that it is 1313, the cancelled Boba Fett one that was styled like Uncharted. Incidentally, they hired the lead from the Uncharted Series to work on it, so... :D


 * I could write a 10 page article on why I hate the direction that video games are heading and how people support those bad practices because they have no impulse control. It's really sad that my longest hobby is slowly, but steadily being ruined. FF 15 looks neat and I might actually get it! I've only played X2 and 13 (and hated both) which are the worst two in the franchise from what I've been told. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  21:08, June 10, 2016 (UTC)


 * I'm sorry to hear that. I hope it didn't also cause you to have a headache, those are the worst. It's like your body isn't content with just having an aching neck, oh no, let's hurt that head in sync with the neck >.>


 * Filler can be the bane of anything. I hate filler with a passion with exceptions to the driving episode in Dragon Ball Z and all of Gintama (because Gintama is entirely entertaining filler XD). I might check it out, it's just that there are a lot of things I want to see before I die, lol.


 * Would you please do me a favor and watch this episode and the next one: ? I realize I'm asking you to watch episodes 98 & 99, but it doesn't matter with Gintama because there isn't an overarching plot. It's a really funny arc that has to do with them waiting in line to buy a Wii on release night and another funny thing XD


 * This E3 has been a dud with exception to the PC Gaming Show and Ubisoft's Conference. EA completely dropped the ball and disappointed the hell out of me. They were like "Yeah, we've got these companies working on Star Wars games for us. Here's a video of our employees staring blankly off into space." It was lame and shameful. Anyone that had followed the video game news for the last 6 months would have known those companies were working on Star Wars games. Here's their pitiful presentation of Star Wars if you are interested: Reading in between the lines did tell me that the Respawn game has lightsaber combat and may be set during the prequels and that Visceral's game isn't likely 1313. Speaking of Dead Space, you should check out the trailer for Prey, it looks a lot like Dead Space to me.


 * I'm interested in FF 15 because of what they showed at E3 this year. So, like, here's what they showed that interested me: Watch Dogs 2, Tyranny, Vampyr, We Happy Few, Observer, Prey, Dishonored 2, Ghost Recon: Wildlands, and South Park: The Fractured But Whole. Sony's conference is starting in 45 minutes, here's hoping they show some new games and it is good. God did Microsoft drop the ball, they showed 10 or so games and only 2 of them were new titles (though Dead Rising 4 leaked a week ahead of E3). They also delayed and didn't show Crackdown 3, boo! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  00:14, June 14, 2016 (UTC)


 * It was unexpectedly relevant XD The whole series is goofy like that with no goal other than to make you laugh and fall in love with the characters. Even minor characters show up at least twice. There are a couple of serious arcs to break up the humor and those are the greatest thing ever. I'm glad you liked it. You've got lots of watching to do then, because there's around 500 episodes XD


 * I thought Days Gone was 'The Last of Us 2' as soon as I saw it, but it wasn't. I was really interested in it and looked into the studio that made it, unfortunately it will be a PlayStation Exclusive forever as the studio that made it is owned by Sony and has only put out games for all the PlayStation (not even PC gets the games they make) :( I also own an Xbox One and a desktop. I had started this gen with a PS4, but the stupid thing died after 11 months of ownership. Yeah, Death Stranding is what I believe the name is, it was weird, but at least that one is also coming to PC. Xbox One is getting Resident Evil 7 and it isn't VR only, thank god (or insert preferred deity/person here). I was disappointed by the Batman VR, because I would rather that RockSteady focus their talents on another game, like Green Arrow or some such.


 * I think Skyrim and Fallout 3/4 are mostly due for credit in terms of the surge of first person games. Those games had the option to switch to first person from third, did really well, and everyone noticed. Yeah and it's a shame. It's too early for next gen. I've seen them yo-yo on their responses for Scorpio so much already about whether or not it will have its own games and what it will do. As far as I am concerned, its existence is an admission from Microsoft that they release the Xbox One too early and is the start of next gen; they're just calling it an "upgrade" to not risk pissing off everyone. It'll be a slow and gradual transition to the exclusives, I bet. Nintendo did it with their "New 3DS" and got away with, granted there are only 2 games that it plays that the original 3DS can't, but it's still BS.


 * Thank you for taking the time to reply. I hope you didn't lose power. I always unplug everything when it starts lightning, so that nothing gets fried. I love rain, but hate storms, unfortunately both usually come hand in hand, lol. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  15:00, June 17, 2016 (UTC)


 * What is this outside of which you speak? I believe I may have accidentally ventured there once while playing Pokemon GO on a friend's phone. Time certainly flies by, doesn't it @.@


 * Haha, yeah! I've been watching it and nothing else, I'm on episode 135 and I am still not bored with it, so it has a lot of staying power and entertainment, at least for me. Your way would work too though XD


 * I saw that, it does look neat. One thing that I came to realize about the Sony conference is that probably only two of the games they showed off had actual release dates whereas what Microsoft showed is mostly coming out this year. Most of what Sony showed could be next year or year after next stuff. I feel you though, no reason to have an Xbox One when everything released for it can be played on PC going forward. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  19:04, July 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * I've been pretty inactive myself, so it has worked out for me a bit (doesn't make me feel bad because I don't feel like I'm leaving you hanging. This isn't a jab at you for leaving by the way, just wanted to clarify that because it could be taken that way). I saw, I've got it favorited and intend to leave some feedback, but I still need to review Banning's pasta first. I absolutely can, I have hit similar walls and cancelled numerous things in a row before, not a fun feeling to be sure. Good on you for cancelling them, instead of forcing yourself through and putting out something that you weren't passionate about, because something dispassionate will probably turn out bad, haha. It's funny how that can happen, but I'm glad it did!


 * First I've heard of it. So, one of the YouTube comments mentioned that only one person is working on it, wow! That's something that rivals AAA in terms of graphics and only confirms my long suspicion that more money can be bad for a project. I've been playing a lot of Starbound lately, which I've found to be really fun. It's a better and easier Terarria in my opinion. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  06:05, August 5, 2016 (UTC)

That's both and kind of neat and probably annoying, haha. I still need to finish The Church in the Woods series, I've just been so caught up in other stuff (not to mention depression, pretty over that now though).

When you have multiple people working on something then compromises have to be made at times and things may get watered down. Have you seen the film 'Deadpool'? There's a scene where Deadpool leaves his guns in a taxi at the start of the film and then does it again towards the end when he needs them for a massive gunfight, which ended up making things funnier and resulted in him swordfighting instead. This was done because of a last minute cut to the film's budget and it resulted in one of the best scenes in the movie; I can't even imagine a gunfight in place of the final fight of the film. When I heard that, I was really glad that their budget got slashed. People definitely get more creative when they have less money to work with, because they have to.

If you get it on Steam, we can play together :P It's really fun and fairly new. It's definitely worth the $15. I'm 18 hours in :D Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  19:17, August 6, 2016 (UTC)

Insula
Thank you for your patience. I just wanted to stop by and drop you a line to let you know that I'll be reading it either tomorrow or the day after. Gosh, it's been two weeks since I meant to go over it. I've been so caught up in things T_T Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  07:45, August 20, 2016 (UTC)

Re: Review
Hey, I'll happily review your story. I'll get to it tomorrow if that's okay. I'm always willing to help, and if you would ever like another review feel free to ask ChristianWallis (talk) 20:16, August 25, 2016 (UTC)


 * Hey, so looking at your story I'll have to say that I won't be able to offer feedback in the next day or so simply because of its size. But it's a long weekend here in the UK so I'll be able to read it piece by piece over the next two days, and then I'll write an in-depth review on Monday. Sorry about this, it's just quite long! ChristianWallis (talk) 16:12, August 26, 2016 (UTC)

Review Request
Hello, it's me. You may or may not remember me, but you reviewed my Mireworth story months back. Anyway, if you have the time I recently revised an old story and need some additional feedback before I progress wth it. It got reviewed thoroughly before, so additional feedback I believe will help in its completion.

Here is a link to that story, http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:468817

--A-3 Loki (talk) 01:10, September 15, 2016 (UTC)

Thank's for the review
Thank you for the review. I didn't mind it took some time to get to as it gave me free time to do other things. I'll make the recommendations given in your review, and I'm especially grateful for the advice to put those certain parts in italic, as I was unsure about whether to indent or put them in italic. As for the dialogue, I may add a bit more from the older version but will try to stick to the concept of the story being notes from the therapist.

A-3 Loki (talk) 01:39, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

Helios Legacy
Thanks Vngel! Hope you can find time to review it, and maybe reproduce the review on the Amazon or Smashwords page for the book. I'd greatly appreciate it, since the book has been pretty neglected on the 'net in general.

Empyreal referred to the Doom mod I made to promote the book called Project Einherjar. Check it out if you get the chance.--Mikemacdee (talk) 03:56, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

link
theres a link to my site on my profile. check under "doom maps"

And yeah, I'm working on a few follow-ups as we speak. I'm having Juno return to her home town in one of them so we can meet her sisters. --Mikemacdee (talk) 06:41, October 12, 2016 (UTC)

Story Update
Hi, I just thought it'd be sound to inform you of the updated version of The Terror Beneath story. I apologize for the delayed response to this, but I've been scouting for universities to attend, not to mention prepping for the courses. Anyway, the dialogue got added to some paragraphs that summarized the character interactions. If you have the time, or whenever's possible, to skim over and review some of the dialogue exchanges I'd appreciate it.

Here's a link to the story: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:468817

A-3 Loki (talk) 02:09, October 15, 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the reviews
Thanks for reviewing my story again. After I make the corrections and read it over again myself in a day or two, I'll try posting it. I don't know if it falls into any cliches, though?

A-3 Loki (talk) 06:09, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

Hey
Hey... I thought you should know that one of your stories, The Great Occam Cobb, was plagiarized. Here's one of two lists of plagiarized works with the plagiarism done by a single individual. You can find out more on this blog:. I saw your story on the list while looking for mine and felt I should tell you (because I'd want to know if it was me). I hope all is well disregarding that. Miss you! Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  03:57, December 7, 2016 (UTC)


 * I'm doing okay, just okay. Mhm, I don't get it either. I guess it is quick and easy? He's selling books (was) with stories he didn't write so he made money off not doing a thing. I don't have a paypal or a job, so no support from me :( I just thought I'd be upfront about that, because I don't want you or anyone else who goes up to court to feel like I am going to be financing you (that'd be rather cruel in my opinion). I do hope that it goes well and he gets sued into the dirt, maybe even not being able to have any books put out in the future.


 * I haven't got it yet, but probably will at some point. I hear that they are patching in "a better story" for it. I find that really interesting!


 * I've been playing Telltale Batman, This World Unknown, and Murdered: Soul Suspect. I just finished To the Moon last night. I'm eager to play Infinite Warfare, it sounds like a ton of fun in terms of its story mode. Likewise with WatchDogs 2. I've never been big on fighting games with exception to the Dragon Ball Z Budokai titles, those felt so right to me.


 * Me too! My friend had an extra ticket and invited me to go with him on opening night. I get to see it for free (minus drink and popcorn costs, lol)~ I think it will be good, but I also think that no opening crawl is a mistake. I'm not excited for the Han Solo Prequel, however. Still, yay, this and then 8 next December! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  20:27, December 8, 2016 (UTC)


 * I think they patched The Witcher 3's endings or changed some of them. Despite owning it since release, I will also never know as I still haven't beaten it XD FFXV sounds hella fun :D


 * I think it's their third best series (Borderlands being their best and Walking Dead Season 1 their second best). It's their own take on Batman, therefore some of the traditional lore is changed a bit. The lightest spoilery example, in Episode 1 you, as Bruce, stare at the movie theater tickets that your parents had on them when the were murdered. You can choose to put them back in the case you've kept them in or tear them apart and throw them down a pit in the Batcave. There are a lot of neat choice you can make that makes your Batman his own Batman. Episode 1 let you choose how brutal your Batman was, unfortunately, they seem to have dropped that as episodes went by :(


 * This World Unknown is a Visual Novel on Steam. I think it's good. I'm probably going to drop Murdered: Soul Suspect as it was free and is boring me to tears, plus I need the harddrive space on my Xbox. PS4 is how I started, but it died at 11 months old and I switched back to Xbox. I am jealous of the games I am missing out on.


 * They need to do a stand-alone Obi-Wan movie during his exile on Tatooine and maybe have him kill off Maul once and for all (Maul is still alive 2 years before Episode IV. It's going to be very interesting if he outlives Vader and the Emperor). I'm hyped as can be for Episode 8! I think that Snoke is Darth Vader: http://vroomvroom.freeforums.net/post/103237/thread Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  22:31, December 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * Yeah, Episode 1 was really strong in that regard. I played Episode 1 after watching my friend play it and at the very end of it I was referred to as "The Monster Batman" by the news, while he was simply referred to as "The Batman". I'm going to do a Batman playthrough where I'm completely silent as Batman. One thing I really liked about it was how there are certain situations in which you can choose to tackle as either Batman or Bruce Wayne.


 * I loved LA Noire with exception to the crap dive it took at the end of the game in terms of story and Murder is a bit like that in regards to game play, but it just feels off for reasons I cannot explain. I'd leave it on my Xbox One harddrive, but Christmas presents/games will demand that space XD Tomb Raider 2 is absolutely fantastic from what I saw of my friend's playthrough.


 * We're getting a Boba Fett solo film in 2020 :D Rogue One was super duper great. It's my 3rd favorite behind The Empire Strikes Back and The Force Awakens. Darth Vader was like a natural disaster in that he was terrifying. I'm very glad they didn't make him look like a fool or a loser as I had feared they would. I left a short spoiler free impression here: Cannot recommend seeing it enough! It has the greatest droid character of all time and can best be described as a dark war comedy.


 * Was that actually part of the skull or how Vader's helmet warped in the flames? I'm not trying to deflect and protect a potentially flawed theory, but am genuinely asking because I cannot tell. I've been behind Darth Plagueis is Snoke from day 0 as it would tie the whole story perfectly together, but Pablo (Official Star Wars Lore Master at Lucasfilm) has flat out stated that Snoke is not Plagueis; but what if he is lying :O I'd heard the Mace Windu theory too. I've also heard that he was Sifo Dyias and Sate Pestage. There is a dude in Rogue One that may be him, but I'm skeptical of it. The film does have a ton of cameos tho. I'm positive you'll like Rogue One :D Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  07:30, December 16, 2016 (UTC)


 * TR II was exclusive to Xbox One for a year because Microsoft paid for it to be that way. It just came out for PS4 in October, I think. The exclusivity agreement is why I don't own it yet. I have an Xbox, but I hate scummy practices like that and refuse to reward them. I'll buy it eventually XD


 * They are probably making the trilogy up as the go with only an ending in mind. I know that Snoke was one of the last things they decided and agreed upon. They had many ideas for him such as a female Sith, even going as far as to consider having him be Darth Talon (who is one of the most popular comic book characters from the old canon and has nearly appeared in a lot of projects lately): I still lie awake at night wishing that we had got that Darth Maul video game


 * They need to do a live-action Old Republic TV series. The Old Republic Era has so much to cover and it would take too long to cover it broadly with films. I wanna see that happen before I'm senile or dead, dammit XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  21:06, December 17, 2016 (UTC)


 * Microsoft did it in response to all of Playstation 4's exclusives and offered a few hundred Million, I believe. So Crystal Dynamics was like, "Ok, we can take all this money and hold it back a year and then make all the money we would have made anyway." I hate all of Playstation 4's exclusives because I miss out on them, but at least they are funding the projects and not paying them to hold it back a year on other consoles, that's malicious and a road video games should not go down >.> It is more profitable to have them across all platforms (except the Wii-U) because they have the same number of button bindings and power, no real tinkering required. The train of thought for exclusive games is, "Those Xbox Owners are really going to want this new Spider-Man game! Let's make it an exclusive so they are liable to buy a PS4 and a Plus subscription." It sucks hardcore, but alas that's the video game industry DX


 * Yeah, Rogue One has already nearly made its budget back, probably will today XD They ought to do Star Wars movies five years straight, take a two year break, make more for five years straight, rinse and repeat. As long as they put out good films, the fans will go see them. I've never heard of him before, but his channel has my interest. I think they should have had an adult Anakin in Episode 1 and have The Clone Wars break out at the end of that film, had a film dedicated to The Clone Wars and then have Anakin become Vader at the end of that film and end up in the suit, have Episode 3 be Vader ending The Clone Wars and killing the Jedi will in the suit. Padme also should have been a Jedi because then it would have gave Anakin even more anger toward the Jedi in regards to their no attachments rule.


 * No. There was a fan film I saw years ago (probably 8), but I haven't seen any recent ones. I'll check it out in a few days.


 * I wanna know what's going on with that Live-Action TV Series that was supposed to come out in 2010 and has over 100 episodes written for it >.> Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  20:38, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

The only exclusives I can think of on the Xbox One are Sunset Overdrive, Halo 5 (garbage) and Gears of War IV (haven't played). Too bad they killed Fable. Playstation 4 has Until Dawn, Samurai Warriors 4 and 4 II, Spider-Man (that makes me mad, screw you Marvel and Sony), Days Gone, and The Last of Us II; plus Danganronpa 3 and a ton of VNs.

Oh, let me know what you think/thought! I never cared nor needed to know where he came from, would have liked some mystery there. Plus, Episode 1 in its entirety makes me cringe hard D: We definitely need a Vader solo film with him hunting down Jedi and they should do it before James Earl Jones passes. You know what else would be really cool? A Stormtrooper live-action TV series!

It was dark, Game of Thrones dark, with prostitution, crime rings, drug deals, that sort of thing. That Star Wars 1313 game was going to tie-in indirectly, I believe. Here it is: It's one of the greatest losses of all time, not being put on the screen, I mean. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  21:17, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

I caved and bought Final Fantasy XV because Xbox Live had the premium edition on sale for $63. It comes with a season pass which is worth $24 among a couple of other things. I am now broke, but worth it(?)! It's sitting at 39% downloaded, so it should be done and ready to play in 2 or 3 days~ Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  06:21, December 24, 2016 (UTC)

Christmas!
Merry Late Christmas to you as well :D I totally celebrate Christmas ^^ I was tired and had a good time too.

You should look into Become Human: Detroit (not out yet). That's one that I am really dying for :(

I just saw it for the third time in theaters yesterday XD Everyone loves the "hallway Vader" scene! Easily the best scene in the film and it proves how much we need a Vader movie. Same here, except replace Darth Maul with Darth Maul's Double-bladed Lightsaber. Now I like Maul, but only because The Clone Wars cartoon fleshed him out and made him actually have a personality. I actually like Episode 2 better than 1 because it has The chase scene, Obi-Wan vs Jango Fett, The Arena, and Obi-Wan and Anakin vs Dooku. The romance scenes were hella cringe. Someone on Reddit pointed out that we, the viewers, only saw 20 minutes of that nonsense, but Palpatine had to deal with that for years, it's no wonder he is evil. I am suddenly sympathetic for him XD

The Rebels cartoon actually covers why they are terrible shots. The helmets are garbage and blocks their sight significantly. It's also worth noting, that in Episode IV, they were ordered to miss because the Falcon had a tracking beacon placed on it so that the empire might locate the Rebel Base. In V there wasn't a whole lot of conflict except with Luke and the troopers on Cloud City, therefore the Force was with him. In VI they shot R2 and Leia.

The two films Disney has put out are super duper dark for Star Wars. I'm not all that worried about them not following through with it based on that. It'll likely depend on whether or not they have a cost effective way of doing it (that's why Lucas didn't do anything with the scripts. He wanted each episode to be movie quality).

It'll be a while before I get to FF XV. I just beat Infinite Warfare and am now playing Watch Dogs 2! I have Dishonored 2 next and then I'll be ready :) Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  07:36, December 29, 2016 (UTC)


 * It's made by the company that made 'Heavy Rain' which is another PlayStation exclusive.


 * Haha, that's awesome. So, Vader's Castle on Mustafar, do you think Palpatine was like, "I built you a castle, Lord Vader. It's on Mustafar, where you got all your limbs hacked off. Now, every day that you wake up and look outside you will be reminded of your greatest failure." Because I could see Palpatine being an ass like that and that would very much explain the castle's location.


 * I guess because it was cheaper not to. When you've invested a ton of credits into two spacestations with the power to destroy planets, then properly outfitting your troops probably seems rather insignificant XD Netflix is actually in massive debt because of all the original shows they've produced, so I don't know if I agree with you there (they knew they'd go into debt and it was part of a long-term strategy on their part). I can't speak for HBO tho, never watched them because I don't have the channel XD


 * I'm getting there! I think I'm close to finishing WatchDogs 2 and then, after Dishonored 2, I'll be ready for FFXV :D


 * Star Wars 8 and Spider-Man:Homecoming are the ones I'm looking forward to! I still need to see Guardians of the Galaxy :( Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  21:58, January 3, 2017 (UTC)


 * Despite all of the BDSM heavy designs, I really want the cancelled Maul game, Battle of the Sith Lords ;_; Here's a new art dump: http://kotaku.com/another-look-at-that-cancelled-darth-maul-game-1791243648 I am a fan of the Stormtrooper designs, way better than the duck-billed helmets from Episode 7.  Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  21:27, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Editing
Thanks for helping out around the site with cleaning up some stories. That being said, I'd like to bring up some issues. Events that are on-going (a person's name, occupation, place of residence, etc.) do not need to be put in past tense. In fact, putting them in past tense causes issues as it implies that it's changed since then. ("My name was Susana." Now what is your name?) While it good to resolve tensing issues, you do have to make sure that the tensing is incorrect in the first place. If it's an event that may be ongoing ("I live in Washington" / "I work at a hardware shop."), it really shouldn't be altered. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 15:57, July 7, 2017 (UTC)


 * No problem, once more, thanks for the help editing recently. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 16:14, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

re: noticed
Hey thanks for dropping me a message about it, and for getting a copy! I'm hoping I can do two books a year for that series. Currently trying to finish the third, which is based on some of the stories I wrote for the promotional Doom mod Project Einherjar.

I'm more fond of the second book than the first, so I have a feeling you'll enjoy the hell out of it. --Mikemacdee (talk) 06:26, July 30, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks
Hey Vngel,

Thanks for fixing that link for me. It's been like that for a while and I haven't been able to get to messing with it.

Best,

JohnathanNash (talk) 04:33, September 25, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for the Fixes
Thank you for fixing up my contest entry. I misunderstood when the deadline was, so I ended up working on it for 5 1/2 hours after I got home from work in a desperate bid to finish in time. I usually go straight to bed from work, so I was dead tired by the time I finished and submitted it. No idea what kind of mistakes I had, even with three proofreadings of it. To be fair, I tend to be pretty horrible at grammar as is XD Thanks a ton, Vngel! Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  01:56, October 27, 2017 (UTC)


 * Thanks! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  18:05, October 27, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Edits
No problem. You did actually bring some errors to my attention, so thanks! MrDupin (talk) 14:23, October 27, 2017 (UTC)

Edits
Thank you for ediitng my story. I sometimes glance over minor grammar mistakes.

Hi. Noob here...
Hi, didn't know who to ask, saw you online and figured, where/how do you put stories in the "Article Listing" (I think that's what it's called)? I saw an alert saying you'll get banned or suspended or something if you didn't do that.

Thanks,

--D. Compton Ambrose (talk) 20:51, December 14, 2017 (UTC)


 * Answered it for ya. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:56, December 14, 2017 (UTC)


 * Thanks! Also, thanks Vengel W, the signing-out and singin-in worked! --D. Compton Ambrose (talk) 05:33, December 15, 2017 (UTC)

Insula
Hey just checking in... I started reading Insula but it's been a busy week. I haven't forgotten about the review I promised but it might be after the holidays. Creepy Thomas O. (talk) 00:22, December 21, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for the edits
Hey Vngel, I forgot to thank you for editing some of the stories I made a few weeks ago. I know that's a while back but I don't believe I thanked you so, here ya go :).

Custom signature? pfft, as if I were that creative (talk) 14:22, December 28, 2017 (UTC)

Hello
Hi, I don't want to sound desperate or impatient, but do you do reviews on stories in the we? I'm proofreading one of my stories (1,500 words). It's my first journal pasta and I'd love feedback because I'm sure I made rookie mistakes. I can link you if you want once I'm done proofreading, but remember it's just a request. It's perfectly ok to say no if you don't want to.

Custom signature? pfft, as if I were that creative (talk) 19:45, December 30, 2017 (UTC)

I've proofread the story twice now, but I'm notorious for being a bad proofreader. The story, incase you're interested. It's a short read.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:601474

Custom signature? pfft, as if I were that creative (talk) 19:57, December 30, 2017 (UTC)

Hi Vngel, Icydice again. I don't mean to spam your wall, but I wanted to thank you again for looking at my story in the WW. I made corrections today based around some of your suggestions. Again, thanks.