User talk:SnakeTongue237/Archive 1

Welcome
Hi, welcome to Creepypasta Wiki! Thanks for your edit to the After Hours page. Please be sure to check out all the Site Rules, as it is important to follow them. Failure to abide by them may result in your account being blocked. Read some new pastas by checking out the article index or browse by topic by checking out the Genre Listing. Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:15, February 15, 2015 (UTC) EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:17, February 15, 2015 (UTC) ==Note== Please tag either "Beings" or "Ghosts" (which you feel is best suitable for your story.) as both those categories are standalone (meaning they should not be used in conjunction.) Here's the Category rules for a better reference. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 00:26, February 22, 2015 (UTC) == Abandoned By Disney Review == Although I'm not completely sure if you'd like to see it, I have a new review up of Slimebeast's Abandoned By Disney. As you read both of my other reviews, I figured you might want to take a look at it. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 01:35, March 11, 2015 (UTC) == You didn't make your pastas accessible on your home page == Dude, use this template when talking about your pastas so that users can click on them and go right to them:   Story Title. After reading your horror blog I went to read your work but couldn't just click on the story and had to enter it into the search which is kind of a pain. Great blog! HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:19, March 12, 2015 (UTC)  == Re Outside Lights == I'll give it a read here in a minute and leave a comment, but that will make three of yours I've read, so it's your turn. Rumpelstiltskin - don't read this if you are easily disturbed. This one won the freestyle finals: The Long List   HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 22:10, March 13, 2015 (UTC) That's Rumpelstiltskin if it was in red when you looked. Also, I just noticed your message to me on your page. Dude, I won't get your message unless you post it to my talk page. == Re The Long List == Well, ultimately it is up to the reader to decide what is up with the little girl. But, as I see it, there really was an informant that told Standler about Diesel's meth lab, and he is hallucinating the ghost. If you recall I mention how his wife had a still born son and never conceived again. He wants a family and can't have one. Pulling that dead little girl out of the gutter, as well as severe alcoholism, have driven him mad, and now he is on a killing spree. Thanks for reading my stories, I appreciate it. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 22:45, March 13, 2015 (UTC) == Sign your pastas == Hey, buddy. If you put this template  at the end of your stories (obviously with your name in it) it will tell readers who wrote it and give them a chance to click on it and go to your home page and check out your other stuff. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 00:23, March 14, 2015 (UTC)  Hold on, let me fix that     This should work. To be honest I suck at all this formatting and programming stuff and am just figuring it all out myself HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 00:26, March 14, 2015 (UTC)  I really am an amture. What ever, it's the template in the middle. Some administrator or rollbacker will probably come fix it by the time I'm done typing this anyway. I'm sure Jay is laughing his ass off right now. It's not funny, man! Hopefully this will work    Yes! Finally. Man, I'm just trying to help out around here not constantly look like a bat shit crazy ass. == Fresh pasta == Hi there, snaketongue. I have just completed my story for Koromo's mythology challenge:  Sons of Odin. I'd love to hear what you think. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 20:34, March 21, 2015 (UTC) == Normal Porn For Normal People Riff == Since you don't like "Normal Porn For Normal People", I thought you might enjoy reading something where it's made fun of. http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Dorkpool/Creepypasta_Riffs:_Normal_Porn_For_Normal_People_(NSFW)  The Goddamn Dorkpool (talk) 23:32, March 21, 2015 (UTC) It doesn't take 5 minutes to kill a person. It's a username template, so don't be shy. Well, since you somehow found yourself to me (eww so dramatic), I guess now you do know me, yeah? RisingFusion (talk) 17:20, April 5, 2015 (UTC)RisingFusion == Screamers == Do not post links to screamers. If it happens again, you will receive a week long ban. It was sorta acceptable on april fools day in an april fools blog, but it's seriously annoying & dangerous for people with photosensitive epilepsy. 11:44, April 6, 2015 (UTC) ==WARNING==Warning:If someone comments on your blog, then it won't show up on your notifications!Thanks, --Fear is always growing. 00:19, April 8, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords == M4R == Please don't add categories to stories which have been marked for review. We use M4R to sort of "quarantine" stories, and adding categories defeats the purpose. 19:11, April 8, 2015 (UTC) I now know you. You go around. RisingFusion (talk) 22:03, April 8, 2015 (UTC)RisingFusion ==RE: Crime Scene Photos==It has been written. Crime Scene Photos Beware the twist ending. Cheers  Rinskuro13 22:05, April 10, 2015 (UTC)Rinskuro13     ==Mystery Commenter Revealed?==Are you the one who said that the site doesn't accept Lost Episode pastas? If so, you forgot to sign your post. (The Wa-Wa-Wa music plays while Azu shrugs comedically). Anyway regarding the pasta, I'm almost done with the 5th chapter of the pasta which involves the cold opening of the actual episode. I can send you the most recent version of the story via pastebin if you'd like. Let me just post the story to pastebin first! A link will be sent to you as soon as the story is on pastebin. But here's some basic information about the pasta: 1. The show that the Lost Episode will be from is R.L Stine's: The Haunting Hour, which is like a darker and scarier version of the Goosebumps TV series. 2. The pasta will mostly rely on psychological horror, most of this coming from the protagonist as she's watching the episode. 3. The pasta will be separated into chapters for convinient reading since it may be a bit long by the time it's finished. 4. I understand that there was a Goosebumps: Lost Episode pasta and while it's one of the better Lost Episode pastas, I felt it was rather... meh. The protagonist also talks about how she doesn't really like the Goosebumps TV series in the opening, which kind of makes sense because it's also based on an R.L Stine work. She also talks about how she's indifferent to The Haunting Hour which may or may not be subverting the "Protagonist is a fan of a TV show" cliche. Hailey Sawyer (talk) 02:02, April 11, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 02:02, April 11, 2015 (UTC) == Writing challenge == Well, at first when I recieved the title Shower Curtains I was at a loss for a story. But I decided to try and think like Humbold. I think it worked =)   I currently have a messed up story about a shower curtain (of sorts) and can't wait to show you (And hopefully Humbold too). I'll take advantage of the entire week and hopefully it'll blow you mind. Stay tuned! Whoops! forgot my sig! Supersatan25 (talk) 04:19, April 11, 2015 (UTC) ==Reply to "Nope! Not it!" message==(Does best Homer Simpson impression) D'oh! Anyway, here's the most recent version of my pasta: http://pastebin.com/6N6gUsYF It's not finished but I would still want to know what you think of the story so far. I think signing posts are a good habit to get into because for one thing, if I want to reply to that person, I can easily click on their signature or the (talk) button. I also don't have to go on a massive hunt for the user on the wiki site. Though it may inspire someone to write a creepypasta about it. Regarding Lost Episode cliches, one of the cliches that I have the biggest grudge against, aside from the "I was an Intern" one, is whenever these types of pastas use the term "Hyper- Realistic" or just "Realistic" to describe something. What agravates me is that when Lost Episode pastas or heck any other type of pasta uses the term, it makes the author seem like they don't have that big of a vocabulary to think of synonyms for these terms (i.e lifelike, truthful, faithful, etc). If the author feels the nessesity to describe something as "realistic", they're better off using something like this when describing something like the animation for example: "The animation really took me by suprise with how lifelike it really was. In fact, I felt as though it made Winsor Mccay's Little Nemo look like Hello Kitty." Anyways, Tell me your thought after you read it! I'm really excited to know what you think. (looks at story) I have faith in you, story! Hailey Sawyer (talk) 04:03, April 11, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 04:03, April 11, 2015 (UTC) == Humbold == He left for a while because of an argument he got into with someone on here. He said he'd be back in August  though  As far as the competition, I guess we'lol see who wins mwahahahaha! Supersatan25 (talk) 19:51, April 11, 2015 (UTC)     ==Your Thoughts?==Hey Snake! Did you get around to reviewing my pasta? Sorry to ask but I'm a bit excited because I really do have faith that this pasta may be a much needed boost for Lost Episode pastas. Still haven't found the mystery commenter yet... :( Hailey Sawyer (talk) 22:15, April 11, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 22:15, April 11, 2015 (UTC)     ==Reply to "Potential" message==Thanks! I'm having the story peer reviewed by a couple of people to look for any mistakes I may have missed or any good things in the story I should do more of. I'm going to work on more of chapter 5 and hopefully have it one some time soon! Hailey Sawyer (talk) 23:20, April 11, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 23:20, April 11, 2015 (UTC) ==Re: Crime Scene Photos==The photos were actually shopped ;) Yeah, I know the middle part kind of let it down. Andy's leather jacket present was meant to be something about him taking off a bulletproof vest before putting on the jacket with tons more detail, but I didn't really have time (school assignment due...that's my excuse), so I quickly finished it off w/ a twist. I enjoyed entering it, and good luck with the competition. Sorry I couldn't put in all the effort I should have. I won't be online for a long time after these next few days (life is a heck of a pain) so I will be looking forward to reading the winners' pastas when I return. Rinskuro13 10:32, April 12, 2015 (UTC)Rinskuro13 When you finish the pasta, please inform me via talk page and I'll take a look at it as soon as possible. The fusion is rising, and they have no supplement. Despairing, I emerge, awaking the last generation. 21:36, April 13, 2015 (UTC)RisingFusion ==Like this?==Like this? The fusion is rising, and they have no supplement. Despairing, I emerge, awaking the last generation.) 21:57, April 13, 2015 (UTC)RisingFusion ==Under The Floorboards==It's all done, and better than expected. Under The Floorboards!Thanks! --Welcome One And All! 03:45, April 14, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords==Under The Floorboards V.2==Here's the new link Under the Floorboards. ==Writing Competition==SnakeTongue237, may you participate in my writing competition on my blog? I would be grateful and gratified. The fusion is rising, and they have no supplement. Despairing, I emerge, awaking the last generation.)RisingFusion == Competition Deadline == Hey, I wanted to let you know that I'm having trouble with my story. Like I know what I want the main plot to be but I don't really know how to develop it without it becoming corny. So basically what I'm saying is that I might not make the deadline, so don't worry about it if I don't. But I hope to at least get it posted on here eventually. Supersatan25 (talk) 21:01, April 15, 2015 (UTC) ==Topic==Your topic is: Abandoned Warehouse I would prefer to post on the blog instead, but oh well. When you are finished, post the link onto the comments section of the blog. Good luck. The fusion is rising, and they have no supplement. Despairing, I emerge, awaking the last generation.) ==Are you still...==Are still reviewing pastas for the contest? It's nice to know if you still are. I see your still active, but Grim and I both have our pastas on the site, so... --Welcome One And All! 15:27, April 16, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords ==Ny Score?==Hi, I noticed you didn't give me a score, --Welcome One And All! 23:16, April 16, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords  ==Contest Story== Left it in the comments of your blog but wanted to make sure you got it.  Hope you enjoy! A Figure in the Fog Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 18:19, April 17, 2015 (UTC) == Shower Curtains (Done) == My pasta is done! I await your reponse! Away-way-way-way! *Slowly fades out* Shower Curtains Supersatan25 (talk) 19:15, April 17, 2015 (UTC) =="Pay the Price"==I hope you're still working on your pasta "Pay the Price," as I enjoy reading most of your works. Please inform me if you finish writing it. The fusion is rising, and they have no supplement. Despairing, I emerge, awaking the last generation. ==RE: RE: Pay the Price==Alright then. Take your time. The fusion is rising, and they have no supplement. Despairing, I emerge, awaking the last generation. == Hiya, snaketongue == Would you be so kind as to give this tender and heart warming coming of age tale a read and tell me what you think? The Gym Teacher. Thank you so very much. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:21, April 30, 2015 (UTC) ==Unlocked Doors==I'm not sure if this meets up to QS, ans so sorry for bothering you, but can you check out the "Writer's Workshop" for the little story I put on there? "Unlocked Doors" is its name, and I'd hope you give me some feedback. If you do, thanks! R*I*S*I*N*G*F*U*S*I*O*N 02:08, May 4, 2015 (UTC) == Re: Just Curious == I have multiple points, as well as a few more logical points, to back that story up as being fake. 1. The image of Squidward given for the pasta is completely photoshopped very poorly. Now, this point isn't very strong, but I have to say if you examine any photos or videos presented as the apparent "real" video, evidence of (poor) photoshop is plainly obvious and can easily be examined by essentially any person gifted (or even not gifted) who sees it. This is a smaller point because it doesn't really deal with the story itself, so I'll move on. 2. There have been multiple claims by people to have written it and they themselves have stated that they made up the story. They could be lying, of course, so I'll move on once more. 3. The pasta itself is absolutely, 100% ridiculous and there is essentially no possible or logical way it could have happened. There are multiple supernatural elements in that story that are pretty much impossible to have occurred, some of which the author even acknowledges. For example: ''The eerie part is this sound, and Squidward's sobbing, sounded real, as if the sound wasn't coming from the speakers but as if the speakers were holes the sound was coming through from the other side. As good as sound as the studio likes to have, they don't purchase the equipment to be that good to produce sound of that quality.'' This is a supernatural element, and while it isn't quite as strong as the next example I am going to show, it still makes little sense when the author acknowledges that the speakers actually couldn't have possible produced that sound. ''The only theory we could think of was the file was edited by someone in the chain from the drawing studio to here. The CTO was called in to analyze when it happened. The analysis of the file did show it was edited over by new material. However, the timestamp of it was a mere 24 seconds before we began viewing it. All equipment involved was examined for foreign software and hardware as well as glitches, as if the time stamp may have glitched and showed the wrong time, but everything checked out fine.'' This is the most blatant part that shows that this story is impossible. Somebody edited it over merely 24 seconds before viewing. How did they get in there? How were they able to do it so fast? Most importantly, how were they able to literally create this whole cartoon with multiple elements and the entire voice cast? Yeah, one little thing people seem to overlook is the fact that the whole voice cast must have been there for the episode, as well as many animators. If the animators were drawing this stuff or if the voice of Squidward was randomly pulled aside by this completely random guy to sob into a microphone, wouldn't they get suspicious? There are just many instances of gaps in logic strung throughout the story. 4. Origin of the story. If this story is real, then why would somebody post it on Creepypasta or Reddit or 4Chan of all places? If the stories were meant to be taken seriously and meant to be completely real, then I see no reason why this person would post it on these forums without discussing it with people or talking with people about the possible way the event happened. Instead, the story apparently just popped up and that was it. This would make no sense because most people who share real, tragic accounts usually share it to talk about the event with people and be taken seriously, not simply to post it and then do absolutely nothing with it. 5. Internship. This is one of the most easy pieces of evidence to prove the story incorrect. The author says that the internship wasn't paid when, in fact, internships at Nick Studios are paid and have been paid since before this story claims to have taken place. Although a lot of my evidence is rather based around logic and people have tried to get around them, my last claim is the one that I feel proves my case completely. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 16:00, May 24, 2015 (UTC) ==New Story==I've just recently posted a new story, and knowing you as a reliable reviewer, would you mind checking it out or providing feedback in your spare time? It's right here. Thanks if you do. R-I-S-I-N-G-F-U-S-I-O-N 18:30, May 26, 2015 (UTC) == Watch the movie Serial Killer Culture == It's streaming on Netflix. You will love it. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:28, July 4, 2015 (UTC) ==New Story== Hey Snake, Just finished a new story for Banning's contest, was hoping you could take a look if you had the chance. Sarah's Story Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 02:12, July 7, 2015 (UTC) Thanks for the comment! Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 14:12, July 10, 2015 (UTC) ==You bet==I should be able to take a look tonight. Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 19:43, July 24, 2015 (UTC) == I'm new == Same birthdays MissyPerry (talk) 18:34, July 26, 2015 (UTC) == Re: Narration Request == Hey dude. When you say collaborate, do you mean we collaborate on one of your stories or just that I narrate one of them? I don't want to read Tongueless only because it has some pacing and arrangement issues that create a sense of disjointedness. Other than that, it's a good story, but would be difficult to narrate effectively. However, I wouldn't mind narrating Outside Lights if you don't mind. I'll tab it for narrating but it might be a couple weeks before I can get to it, just because of my current backlog. Lastly, you don't have to and shouldn't tell people that you're a "flawed and struggling writer". It tells me to expect poor quality from your work before ever reading a story. The reality is, writing is damn difficult. I've written four stories myself and barely anyone paid attention to them, but I enjoyed the process and I'll keep writing to improve myself. You have clear and obvious talent, it just takes a while to refine. So don't put yourself down; just tell people you're a writer and present them with your work. I'll let you know when your narrated story will be posted. Keep at it! --My Narrations 04:51, July 30, 2015 (UTC) == Hey there == Hey Snake, Was wondering if you would be able to give me a review on a story I had posted not that long ago, Spirit Bottles. Please let me know what you think. Thanks, JohnathanNash (talk) 04:12, July 31, 2015 (UTC) ==No way==Did you just delete two of your stories? Why? They weren't your best but they're still pretty nice! UNWASHED PURITY ==> HIGHLIGHTS OF THE SEASON 02:27, August 1, 2015 (UTC) == My List == I got my list up. Here is a link to it. Top 10 Most Terrifying Non-Horror Movies BrianBerta (talk) 16:45, August 1, 2015 (UTC) ==Re: Re:==I would say Broken Mirrors, as it is full of life and "love" and is detailed and complete. UNWASHED PURITY ==> HIGHLIGHTS OF THE SEASON 21:18, August 1, 2015 (UTC) ==Murder Category==Hello, I was snooping and I saw the message that you left on Jay Ten's page. I was originally going to let him answer the question since it was directed at him, but I changed my mind because I didn't want you to end up putting the Murder Category on your page. The Murder Category isn't an approved category. You can find all the categories in this list right here: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Creepypasta_Wiki:Genre_Listing   If you ever spot a category that isn't on that list, then please remove it right away (I removed it from that one story you linked to on Jay Ten's page by the way). If you feel that something should be a category, but isn't, then you can leave a message on User:ClericofMadness's talk page and he'll consider it. Happy editing and have a good day :) Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular!  07:21, August 2, 2015 (UTC) == Narrated your story == Here you go!  You can find the reading here.  Pleasure working with you, let me know if you write any more stories. --My Narrations 19:29, August 6, 2015 (UTC) == Have you heard of the Granny Ripper? == Check out this crazy old lady: http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-3185423/Did-EAT-victims-Serial-killer-Granny-Ripper-kept-diary-11-people-dismembered-cannibal.html    HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 20:17, August 8, 2015 (UTC) == RE Facebook == Oops.  Thanks for pointing that out to me.  I suck so bad at all this computer shit, man.  I've got a website and don't even know how to use it. Lol. I only got it so that I could put it on my stories on creepypasta.com so that readers would have a link to my other stories. Yeah, like me on facebook, I find some pretty cool stuff on the internet about literature, horror, other writers and story contests and post it. I try to only post really interesting things and only a couple times a week so I'm not blowing up people's profiles with stupid crap. Fangs again. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 19:55, August 12, 2015 (UTC)             It should be working now == Best advice == Well, the way I see it, you'd have two workable options with this. You could publish each pasta on a separate page, giving each story the appropriate category, or, you could create a hub page and link each of your stories on there, if you intend them to be some sort of anthology of sorts. With a hub page, all your stories are on one link, but each one could still have its own categories. Creating a hub page is as easy as creating any other story page, just title it as the master directory of sorts, similar to how NES Godzilla is structured, and then link all the stories there. Think of it as a digital table of contents. Now, you could always set up your profile page to simply feature links to all of your works, and use headings to explain things, such as how I have my stand alone stories separate from my Tobit series. Feel free to use my profile as a template if you like the idea. However, to answer your initial question, no, you can't use multiple categories for one page, as it would confuse the sorting process. People looking for a ghost story would wind up getting a link to your page with other stories besides just the ghosts. Hope this helps, feel free to write me if you have any further questions or concerns. Banningk1979 (talk) 23:08, August 16, 2015 (UTC) == Re: Pictures == Hmm, I'm not too sure what's going on. I just tried adjusting a picture and adding one to an article and I got no errors. Is the picture already uploaded to the site or are you trying to upload it and receiving the error? If it's the latter, send me the exact error message and I can try to puzzle it out for you. I know a while back I had issues uploading pictures to the site, but it was more due to a connection issue that cut off the image transfer midway through. If you think it's something else, you can try contacting wiki staff about it. Or, if the picture is already on the site and I'm not having issues, I could post it in the meantime. (If that's the case and you want the picture on now, you can drop the link to me.) Wish I could help more, but I'm not the best at trouble-shooting wiki issues. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:59, August 17, 2015 (UTC):I was totally not stalking Emp's talk page and I happened to notice this. How are you trying to add the image? Are you going through Special:Upload, or are you using the "add features and media" part of the Oasis editor? If it's the latter, try uploading the image through Special:Upload, then finding the uploaded image in the add features and media dialogue, instead of uploading it through that. 22:08, August 17, 2015 (UTC)::No problem :) 22:59, August 17, 2015 (UTC) == You're welcome == Glad that I could help. Feel free to reach out if you have any other questions or concerns. Banningk1979 (talk) 05:13, August 18, 2015 (UTC) ==Narration Request== Hello, I have a narration request for one of my stories. Historic Points of Interest--Ferrisville It's a bit long though. --Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 01:14, August 27, 2015 (UTC) ==RE: Hey there== Oh, my mistake, sorry.  Abysmi already did a story for me which was short. --Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 02:52, August 27, 2015 (UTC) == RE: Questions == It goes well in the state of California I suppose. The fires are all under control, no more smoke, and meterologists are all saying an El Nino storm pattern this winter is going to end the drought. How goes it for you? Where was it you were from? Virginia? I'd be honored to get a top ten list. Thanks so much. I will check out your story as soon as I get a chance. I'm writing Chuck a montage right now (do you like South Park or Team America? "We're going to need a montage!") but I hope to be done with it by tonight or tomorrow. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 17:38, September 7, 2015 (UTC) Well, I cleaned up your major punctuation mistakes. First off when using mom as a name it is capitalized as all names are. Semicolons are used to divide two complete sentences, just think to yourself, "If I put a period there instead would it also work?" If the answer is yes, then use a semicolon. Some pretty clunky writing in there. "right before the door that the twosome of boys had been in."--please don't end your sentences with a preposition. Also, how could they be in a door? Doorway, maybe? How about this, "right before the doorway in which the twosome of boys had been." "An attic window which he had seen getting out of the Social Services vehicle provided"--doesn't this sound like he saw a car with an attic window getting out of it? "despite his disliking towards it," this just doesn't sound right to me. Perhaps, "despite his dislike for it" would be better, or some variation. "blank, open pupils"--I don't think pupils can be open, they can be dilated. Do you mean open eyes? The whole thing felt kind of rushed and forced. About the story, I suppose it wasn't half bad for a creepypasta. It wasn't really scary, but it was creepy enough and had a twist ending. You had twins in it, which I find very creepy, but they never had a lick of dialogue. You never discussed their personalities or used them in any kind of creepy manner. That goes with his parents as well. Beside a brief mention that he used to help his mother with the cooking you didn't mention them much. You think he would see his mother's face at night while he lay there trying to fall asleep. Think of his dad and him playing catch, the smell of his aftershave, the roughness of his five 'o clock shadow when he pulled him in his big arms and held him. Maybe hear a song on the radio that had been a favorite of his mother's. You also had a lot of opportunities to examine a strange family that I thought were squandered in this piece. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:19, September 9, 2015 (UTC) == New Stand-Alone pasta == Hey, I know you've been waiting for me to post a new stand alone, so I finally pulled myself away from Tobit long enough to write one. I hope you enjoy it, and I certainly hope it's Top 10 worthy...lol. Queen Justine and the Cutest Little Shing Thanks, Banningk1979 (talk) 07:57, September 12, 2015 (UTC) ==Re:==Don't be touched now, because I expect many of your upcoming stories to be added onto other people's favorite lists. And of course, you're welcome. "In a war, it didn't matter how many lives I ended. It mattered how many of them I saved." 04:48, September 13, 2015 (UTC) == Thank You == I'm here to simply thank you for both deciding to make a Top Ten list of my stories, but also for nominating The Magician's Game for Pasta of the Month. I feel honored that you indeed are doing this, and I simply can't express my gratitude enough. By the way, I think I might nominate From Deep Within next month. I absolutely loved it. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 16:02, September 13, 2015 (UTC) == Crucifix--Mental Illness Category == Hey, just writing to answer your question that you asked before, as to why mental illness works for Crucifix. Personally, I feel that we need more categories on this site, as it often comes down to having to use one in a broad stroke to define or describe a range of possibilities. For example, the character in Crucifix is sane throughout, though he does begin to go through a mental breakdown due to the lack of sleep and stress. By the end, he is prepared to burn the house down to get rid of a cross. That, to me, is what qualifies it for mental illness. Although the character is not built to be crazy, at the end, he sort of winds up there due to the circumstances around him. Now, a better category might be something like "insomnia" or "breakdown" rather than mental illness, however, since this site doesn't have those as options, we have to use what we're given to best sort out the stories to where they belong. Is it the best system? Probably not, however, it's the system we have, so it is the system that we must use. All said though, it's your story, and the choice of categories is really up to you. If you feel that mental illness is just wrong, then it is your right as the author to remove it. Personally, from an editing stance, I feel that it works, but no one knows your work as well as you do, so it's your choice. Hope this helps a bit, please reach out if I can be of any further assistance. Banningk1979 (talk) 04:14, September 16, 2015 (UTC) == Archiving == Hey, have you considered archiving your talk page? It's getting kinda long. Let me know if you need any help doing so :)  20:48, September 16, 2015 (UTC):You'd just create a subpage of this talk (for example, /Archive 1), copy the contents from your talk into that page, save it, and then replace the contents of your talk with a link to the archive. I realise that sounds kinda complex, so if you want I can archive your talk for you, then you can figure out what I've done from there. 21:01, September 16, 2015 (UTC)