Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26416562-20151216231519

It's been three weeks since I've set foot here, so I have decided to come back with a little something. It is a short one, but I got lazy. I know I probably repeated It''s alot, but I try to minimize the use of that word.

You dash through the woods, attempting to escape a monster. It's seven feet tall, slimy with thick goo rolling down It's wrinkly skin. The creature smells like sewage, and it has claws. You swat at bushes in an attempt to get away, and little by little, the monster gains on you. Then the savage beast sprang into the air, debris and dirt flies from where it launched. It lands three feet in front of you, and you run into the huge body of this foul creature. One look at those eyes sends a shiver down your spine. Those putrid, bloody eyes that peirce you.

The face was the most disturbing part as you come to realize you are helpless. The face, beyond human, was twisted  and wretched. Saliva dripped from It's mouth as that gross, long toungue licks those thick, dirty lips.That's when the beast turns in attention towards another portion of the woods, the woods you are currently stuck deep in. That is when something truly terrifying happened. The thing that was chasing you, that disgusting, horrendous, whatever you call it, ran away.

It takes you a second to realize why that's a bad thing, but you realize it when you go to turn around and run home. You realize that something much bigger is breathing behind you, something much bigger than that other monster.

Will be checking on grammarly. I know that it jumps from place to place but yes, there will be a few details. Note that there will not be many add ins as this is meant to be short. 