User talk:EmpyrealInvective

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Archives

Apology
Hi! I just wanted to apologise for making the 'spam' page. I didn't mean it to be spam, but I would have also deleted it if I was in your place. Can I remake the page now, but with the story? I did have a story to upload, but I didn't because I was really busy that evening and thought that I could have an unfinished page. I would have just not made the page at that time, but there is a glitch on my computer that causes the creation page to continuously crash when I try to create a new page. Again, I'm really sorry. Bye. Elpop11900 (talk) 18:50, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Yes I have a wonderful, exciting message. I wrote my first pasta, and within literally moments notice, you take it down. Now, if it had grammatical errors, or something noticeably wrong that would impact the community guidelines, I'd be gladly asking what exactly I need to do, because who wants to read a poorly edited story, right? However, it's a bit more complicated than that, because I was given what I'd consider to be a poor description of why my story was taken down, and I'll just be polite and call you an asshole. --NukaColaMan (talk) 21:43, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Hey! You deleted another one of my stories, look, from what i can see, you are probably a troller who doesnt give almost any users a chance when it comes to creepypasta, anyway, I would like to say that (please dont ban me) will edit my deleted story: GHOSTIE.exe, Please also remember a quote that is a very famous one: "with great power comes great reponsibilty". In other words, please make sure TO PLEASE ACTUALLY CHECK PASTAS BEFORE YOU DELETE THEM. Ive actually seen pastas with a typo in every word, HTF (how the f****) did THAT GET PAST YOU???? huh? Im just saying i might not be your boss, but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, dont be a strict person. Because once again, "with great power comes great responsibiliy". Oh, the other pasta I posted the second time (Clown Doll) WAS PROOFRADED AND SPELL CHECKED, WHY DONT YOU START PEOPLE POSTING THERE PASTAS FOR A WHILE, THEN IF THEY GET BAD COMMENTS FROM OTHER PEOPLE, THEN YOU CAN DELETE IT. AND I HOPE YOU READ MY FIRST PASTA BEFORE DELETING IT, I WORKED MY ASS OFF ON THE FIRST ONE, AND IF YOU GIVE ME A CHANCE, I WILL RE-EDIT MY SECOND PASTA (GHOSTIE.exe). BY SPELL CHECKING AND PROOFADING IT, AND MAKING IT MORE SCARY. THANK YOU Mr.HattyHattington (talk) 22:22, July 15, 2015 (UTC)Hatty

Question
So, if my storys had multiple errors, the website that creepypasta linked to spell check dosent do anything, and if my clown doll pasta had errors, can you please send me a copy of the thing that shows where the mistakes are....?

Mr.HattyHattington (talk) 23:26, July 15, 2015 (UTC)Hatty

Question

Empy, would you happen to which pasta is the one that has the photo next to the link? For example, if you want into "wikia.com" and then typed in creepypasta, which pasta is that photo from? I'll give you the image http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/wikiaglobal/images/c/c1/Wikia-Visualization-Main%2Ccreepypasta.png/revision/latest/window-crop/width/180/x-offset/0/y-offset/24/window-width/640/window-height/427?cb=20140529120321&format=jpg

CreepsMcCreepy (talk) 15:13, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Removal
Wow, you must really have your hands full on this wiki with all these pastas. It seems like ever second a new pasta is created, and another one gets deleted xD

Gotta give you props for keeping up with all of them!

Incorrect3 00:53, July 16, 2015 (UTC)Incorrect33

New photo
This upload didn't work, would you delete this? http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Special:NewFiles?file=Fires_of_punishment.png

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   05:16, July 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * Done. 06:03, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Deleted?
My story, "The Bank", is ment to be short, similar to the length of another Creepypasta "The Crayon". I don't understand by unfinished. They are man Creepypastas that have very little content and still is a good read. I felt that mine is the same as the others. I am very devistated ever since I saw my pasta deleted over little content. And besides, It is a true expirience and I don't know how much there is needed to be put in the story. It is my very first pasta and I didn't think it was just that bad. Vencrolix (talk) 00:53, July 17, 2015 (UTC)Vencrolix

narration
I was unable to find the name of thw author to ask him. Do you know the name of the author? Lady-warrior (talk) 00:02, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you Lady-warrior (talk) 00:02, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

A thank you of sorts
Hello I originally came here to say that you didn't need to thank me for this "Thanks for your edit to the  The Unknown Giver", it was such a minor edit. If it was a automated thing it's fine but it feels odd for someone thanking me for something as small as changing one word. Until I strolled upon your user talk I noticed some of the harsher comments you have which I feel are unjust, I see you helping out and giving feed back to people who are writing their first pastas before I go off on a rant I just wanted to say keep up the good work.

Cya around

Not So Quicksword Irene (talk) 03:59, July 18, 2015 (UTC) Irene

My story is ready to re-upload. It's been spell-checked and proof-read.

AndrewTaylor1992 (talk) 11:43, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Blog Story
I believe this blog should be deleted. MrDupin (talk) 16:31, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

I did a lot of biblical research for The Number of Darkness and noticed the Bible actually mentioned tennis!
Check it out: "When Joseph served on Pharaoh's court." HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 21:10, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

I LOVE it. That was ACE. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 21:20, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for what I have done I did it by accident!

template update
I've updated the sock template, per this message. You can view the new version in work here. I've set the block time to 2 months on that test to demonstrate the flexible block times. The template would work like this:. If it's easier, I can update the template page, I just need the page unlocked. The new template is below.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   02:46, July 19, 2015 (UTC)


 * Np, I just edited this message slightly, to space out the template properly. Make sure to use the newest revision.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   02:50, July 19, 2015 (UTC)


 * Just changed it again slightly (I was writing the above message and editing the test template at the same time, I missed a few things). I removed the italics and "the following reason:" but either way is fine I guess.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart
 * Just to let you know Emp, I've updated our version of the template with SoPre's code (with some minor alterations, so that leaving out parameters doesn't cause the template to break). 06:42, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

How's my new version of the story, mate?

AndrewTaylor1992 (talk) 13:54, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

http://pastebin.com/J8MX1aMT

AndrewTaylor1992 (talk) 14:08, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your help and feedback. This is the updated version, http://pastebin.com/J8MX1aMT. The kids deactivated the handbrake in order to destabilise the car so they could move it. If the handbrake is up then it's impossible to move.

AndrewTaylor1992 (talk) 16:47, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Apology
I apologize for my poorly developed story and I honestly appreciate your analisys of it. I now fully understand my mistakes and I feel this has helped me grow as a writer. I would also like to ask if I am allowed to republish the story once it has undergone heavy editing? I am curently rewriting it entirely. The characters are the same and the general plot is as well but the perspective is now focused more on the main character and she developes at a slower rate. There are many other changes I am working on also. So would I be allowed to do this once it's completed?

Thank you for yor time.

Sincerely,

Autumn-rose235 (talk) 18:04, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Understood. Again,  thank you very much. Autumn-rose235 (talk) 18:13, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, I see
Thanks for letting me know. It shouldn't happen again. I'm not one for breaking the rules on here.

J.T. (talk) 23:58, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Editor
Hello. I have a question about how the editor works. I am creating a pasta that shares a name with one that was already deleted. I haven't read the original, nor do I know who wrote it, so if it is a different story altogether, and still keeps up with the quality standards, will it count as re-uploading a pasta? Thanks for the help.

Brotherkarthus111 (talk) 16:10, July 20, 2015 (UTC)

New Story
This is my new story an I think you'll like it, but could you check through just to see if it's up to scratch? http://pastebin.com/FCmbXHi3

AndrewTaylor1992 (talk) 16:49, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Archive page
I did something outside-of-the-norm with my archive page, I published it already, but if it's an issue let me know, and I'll change it back. Here's a link: Archives Page.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   23:27, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'll keep an eye out, and change it back if need be.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   23:36, July 22, 2015 (UTC)

First of all, sorry for managing to screw up right at my first attempt at submitting my story. Now, I want to say I am 99,99% sure there are no grammar issues with the story. I mentioned a name of a creepypasta character in only line, I read the rules of the site and I thought I was only not allowed to re-use common creepypasta characters. I had this issue with the "-" lines but I already fixed it. I also had other tiny issues, even though they were insignificant. I already read all the guides and rules and fixed all the issues in my story. Now, what am I supposed to do to get it posted? I know I must ask the admin in order to accept it again, but I don't know how to do that. I am very new to this site and I am afraid of making even more mistakes.

Thank you for understanding. Asuosogait (talk) 02:27, July 24, 2015 (UTC)

Asuosogait (talk) 02:27, July 24, 2015 (UTC)

here.http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:468518. I need a harsh critic--Christopher Michael Richardson (talk) 04:12, July 24, 2015 (UTC)

So i was trying to corrrect my mistakes, and when i was finished whit my story, it conflicted whit an other edit.

When i clicked publish it completly fucked it up. I did not notice this, and when i did it was deleted.

Good job m8

DBZGohuken (talk) 18:44, July 24, 2015 (UTC)

As i said before, the correction edit conflicted, and it became worse. The first one had minor issues, but nothing worse, however when this one happened, it just became a pile of words.

Don't even try to blame me for it, i was about to correct all, i even used spellcheck, and about the random caps lock, i only use them on important stuff or companies and stuff like: Google, and important stuff like Deep Web.

I would appriciate if you would tell me how to get my story back, because i really wanna correct every little mistake, and as i said, i was about to, but some really smart dude conflicted my edit.

DBZGohuken (talk) 19:23, July 24, 2015 (UTC)

Yes i understand, but when i said correction edit, i meant to edit all of the stuff you mentioned, primarily focusing on grammar and caps lock issues!

It would be great if i could repost it/ regain it, and correct it, though, i know its highly unlikely, but you have to understand, i never meant it to be like this. It was a conflict. Also i spent like 30 minutes actually correcting it. And about the same time writing it. And believe it or not, i may hate the mass text wall more than anyone in this wiki, because you can't really read it. Its like the scribbles of a madman.

DBZGohuken (talk) 19:32, July 24, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, i did what you suggested, now do i just wait? I am really new, and i dont really know what to do -.-

DBZGohuken (talk) 19:52, July 24, 2015 (UTC)

Template and profile cleanup
Since the unfinished category is no more, would you delete this template, and take the template off of ClericofMadness' Profile? Also, since it is not in use, do you think it's a good idea to remove the Needs Editing Category? If it is something that should be discussed, I could propose something on the forums. Although, it may not be fitting in this scenario. It's not really hurting anything staying up either, but if it's deleted then this template would need to be removed, and the template removed from ClericofMadness' Profile also.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   19:57, July 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * OK, I'm browsing those templates now (that is a neat page, and there's some useful and not so useful templates that are unused) keep me updated if need be.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   22:23, July 24, 2015 (UTC)

Punography
Ran across this little beauty and thought of you:

Enjoy! HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 22:57, July 24, 2015 (UTC)

TheIcicoolMan (talk) 22:43, July 25, 2015 (UTC)TheIcicoolMan

Why did you delete my Plate creepypasta, I wasn't even done with it yet.

TheIcicoolMan (talk) 22:53, July 25, 2015 (UTC)TheIcicoolMan

Can I get my article back? I will give it an edit summary when I edit it.

They're Back
Why did you delete my story? Superbattletoads64 (talk) 23:38, July 25, 2015 (UTC)

Hey, you deleted 'The cursed barn' by me a few days ago. After reading some of the deletion appeal, I am kinda curious about what mistake I made. I know it is kinda lame and I didn't spend too much time on that one too. But um...i don't know, tell me about my mistake when you are free :D.

Happy Birthday!
Hey, I know this is a day early, but if I understand what you've said on the admin forum correctly, you likely won't be around for a bit after today, so I thought I'd do it now. Happy birthday for tomorrow! Hope you have a great day.

*Tom now prays that Emp's profile masthead is correct about when Emp's birthday is*

07:18, July 27, 2015 (UTC)
 * Happy birthday, Emp.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   07:42, July 27, 2015 (UTC)
 * Another birthday wish. Hope your vacation goes well!
 * LUCAS THE PERVY DRUNK CAT  ➾ babe let’s get high together ➾  13:35, July 28, 2015 (UTC)

Question
It's your birthday? Wow, how old are you going to be?

Jokes pushed aside, how do you link to users? Page links are with those brackets, wut 'bout user pages?

UNWASHED PURITY ==> HIGHLIGHTS OF THE SEASON 21:25, July 27, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks.

But what the fuck, you're only 29? No way. Your picture looks like a forty-year old!

UNWASHED PURITY ==> HIGHLIGHTS OF THE SEASON 21:32, July 27, 2015 (UTC)

I can't believe it. A guy only twice my age is calling me a whippersnapper. I'm going to -burst-

Side note: Happy Birthday. 29 years ago you were just a small cute chubby baby in your momma's arms! How we would all laugh...

UNWASHED PURITY ==> HIGHLIGHTS OF THE SEASON 21:43, July 27, 2015 (UTC)

Ol' Man Emp
Just noticed the messages about your bday. Monobook almost robbed me of knowing. Anyway, happy birthday old timer.

Jay Ten (talk) 00:22, July 28, 2015 (UTC)

Caaake
Happy Birthday, I hope it is a good one with lots of delicious cake! I also hope that you enjoy your vacation. If you miss being cursed at and blamed for deletions, let us know and I'm sure we can work something out :P I'll try not to set the wiki on fire while you're gone. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular!  04:01, July 28, 2015 (UTC)

Happy Birthday!
Um, I know you're on vacation but I wanted to wish you a happy birthday.

Enjoy another year of life, bud! --&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 13:56, July 28, 2015 (UTC)

Birthday and vacation
Hi Travis, I wanted to wish you a late birthday, and I apologize for missing it, I hope it was wonderful. I also hope your vacation is greatm stay safe and have fun! Luigifan100 02:53, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

Hey, My friend Creepy Geeky was complaining about you blocking her. I looked at your account, and you are actually pretty cool. I'm trying to come up with a good story idea, and wanted to consult you first. I had an idea for another slasher story, but I want it to be different. I want the killer to be a girl, and to become a Proxy for Slender. I want her motives to be different, though. I was thinking she killed her family to protect them from a guy who would torture her family. She would be an anti-hero. If you can get back to me, please do. Thanks. (GeekTheQueen (talk) 00:15, August 2, 2015 (UTC))
 * Addressed.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   01:10, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

Proposal Thread About Quality Standards
Hey, Empy. Hoping your vacation is going well. Just wanted to let you know that I made a thread about a week ago about revisiting and/or editing the quality standards. I go a lot more in depth about it in the thread, but I just wanted to let you know. Maybe you can check it out when you get back. Thanks. Here's a link to the thread:

The Damn Batman (talk) 21:17, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

A Little help?
Hey. How can I import stuff I write in Microsoft word into the "Editing Page" Thing (The thing you use to create a new Pasta) Because i'm recreating "The medic on blu" (ok, im REVAMPING it) THanks if you replay, Thanks, and have fun User:Paper SMG4 From Steam

Sorry to spam you talk page with more 'whys', but I'm wondering why my story was deleted. Was it too short? a grammatical error that I missed? Confusing to the reader? No category? I haven't been here for a while, and I have completely forgotten how to submit stories. I'm also wondering which story it was. Thank you for your time.

About a Contest
Hi Empy. Hope you had a good vacation.

I, User:Doom Vroom and User:The Damn Batman are planning to hold a creepy art contest for September beginning this month. It has not been officially accepted yet, and I've spoken to some of the other admins about it. Most of them, and several other users, support the idea. Now the contest and its details need your approval.

I know it's something very different, but please consider it. I think it is a good opportunity for users to be creative in a different way, and for us to host something more colorful on the Wiki's front page.

Here is the contest blog.

Thanks

You have CAT to be KITTEN me right MEOW.  (^ⓛ ω ⓛ^)  14:29, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know whose message this is but it isn't mine ~Rinskuro
Dude! Don't remove my posts! I have them up to get help! I'm going to work with some people.

Re Contest
Thanks for the acceptance! I've opened the contest and made all the edits you required. You might want to check it again.

Also, will 2nd, 3rd and 4th place be allowed to be displayed on the wiki for a month too?

You have CAT to be KITTEN me right MEOW.  (^ⓛ ω ⓛ^)  17:38, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

PS. I made an app here. You might want to check it out.

Again, not mine ~ Rs
Can you please repost Gem of Rain Part1: The Beginning? I'm done with it now.LukeFabre101 (talk) 18:58, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

About the pasta I made.... The Room - it was not unfinished, i finished it and posted it, and the last sentence is meant to be like that, but if you wish, I can add some more stuff no problem. My question is can I reupload the same story again? (since it was finished)CptHrki (talk) 19:32, August 5, 2015 (UTC)Cpt

Not up to the QS??? WTF dude, you seem to really like to delete everything! Punctuation errors? I checked it ALL in Word! Plot problem? I proof read it, and it seemed OK to me! Please i'm beggign you point out the plot mistakes!

The point is, how do you expect me to do it any better?! I'm not exactly a professional writer! I proof read it, check the grammar and punctuation, and it still gets deleted.

Point out my mistakes so I can correct them please.CptHrki (talk) 20:44, August 5, 2015 (UTC)Cpt

Plagiarized
Hi, I found a story on this wiki that is plagiarized. It is called Finger Bones and is an almost word-for-word plagiarization of an Indie walk through, point and click game also called Fingerbones. A quick Google search for it will show you results. The author tried to claim the work as original content. This is terrible and should not be tolerated. Here is the plagiarized story in question: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Finger_Bones?comments_page=1

Thank you for the xplanation, but about the "story not making sense"... If you look at Salad Fingers (YouTube series) wich is a widely accepted creepypasta, the whole series and the events have absolutely no explanation nor do they make sense whatsoever, and it's still considered a masterpiece.

I tought this ending would be good because it's unexpected and surprising, unlike if I simply made him die.

What kind of ending would you make?

Anyway, I won't bother you anymore CptHrki (talk) 22:42, August 5, 2015 (UTC)Cpt

I'm not talking about Salad Fingers. The wiki in question has already been deleted, and it had nothing to do with any YouTube videos. I have no idea what you are referring to. ~OtterMoone~

I just wanted to upload stories for fun is that too much to ask out of you guys? ;( Updownradio's creepy side

next time keep your admins in their place and we won't have any issues