Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25381229-20141111161921/@comment-25381229-20141111164958

Underscorre wrote:

King Irving wrote:

Underscorre wrote: Surely if the exit was destroyed, you'd still be able to get out? Since an exit from a building is basically just a hole with a door, how could you destroy an exit in such a fashion that someone would be unable to exit using it?

Other than that, I thought that this was a very good ritual pasta - one of the best (newly posted) ritual pastas I've read for a while. You don't have to sacrifice much to be able to get to the money, but the risk of taking too much and getting trapped levels out the reward. I didnt necessarily mean the exit as the door. I meant exit in general. The ceiling above the entrance of the safe could drop down and force you to remain in the vault.

The stairs could have broken down and made it impossible to climb up unless you're Spiderman's offspring. OK, thanks for clearing that up. That was really the only major criticism I had with this pasta, so I think that it's great. :) Thank you, I very much appreciate that.