Talk:My Father's Box/@comment-5269370-20140707221823/@comment-25070750-20140708210002

Thank you so much! Your input, which was real, honest and direct, is exactly what I was looking for. I was originally taking the story line in a different direction, and as I wrote, I found it difficult to keep heading in the direction I wanted. So I ended up switching it up a bit, and that's why it probably appears rushed. Because I got off track and couldn't figure out a way to bring it back together. Thank you again for taking the time to read and critic it for me. Much appreciated!!