Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29826537-20160901145558/@comment-24101790-20160901231656

A.L.Mourgan wrote: Alright, thanks for the feedback, I'll start working on a redraft when I have time. Hopefully I'll find a way around the plot holes.

The annoying thing is no longer than an hour after I posted this story here I read up on dialogue formating, if I had just read it sooner there would be far fewer mistakes. Ah well, it's my own fault for assuming I knew it all.

Thanks again, it's a huge help. No problem, that being said, this wiki focuses on the plot itself as mechanical issues can be corrected by our crack(ed) editing team, but story problems can really weigh down a work.