Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-33388104-20180816000153

God this is bad.

Overstays it's welcome by being way too bloody long. Seriously, no story should look at Borrasca + V and say that's their goal length.

Plot is dumb and filled with unnecessary details. It's basically JtK but with extra steps. 'Liu gets separate from Jeff, but rather than dumb cops it's because his dad works for Randy's dad and Liu and Jeff need to get separated for punishment'.

The reason for Jeff's messed up face is worse, because at least with the fish face, you could say 'Maybe this is a universe where infections don't exist'. But this is just some kid with no depth perception, how does he kill anybody? He's automatically always at a disadvantage because one of his eyes doesn't work, and before you say 'It's scary, ignore that', I'm not getting spooked because this isn't a horror story. It's a bad fanfiction.

Also,

>rigging your own poll

Bravo.

Signed,

-Brad 'Chickenheart' Vickers