Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5614678-20190710031103/@comment-9041013-20190710155033

The real issue with this is that it's predictable from the get go. I knew cannibalism was going to be involved from the start. Try to make it less obvious if you will.

Also, burning your face off in a boiling stew will hurt so much you'll probably be paralyzed with pain. That is because all the nerves in the head are awfully close to both the surface and the control center. That kind of amplifies the sensations they provide. The whole ending kind of makes zero sense.