Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33077235-20180922174343/@comment-33077235-20180922195138

NedWolfkin wrote: Simon Slaughters wrote: This is why your amin and not me,lol. Ok so I see the qutation problems I'm not seeing the tense issue. Maybe elaberateing more would help. I'm glad there's less problems to fix your good at this. First of all, I'm not an admin (I'm assuming that is what you meant), I'm only a user.

Now here are a few tense problems.

The videos shift from past to present tense. (I.e. happened vs happening / grabbed vs grabs)

"I’m ready to click off" should be "I was ready to click off".

"I stay to listen." should be "I stayed and listened"

"In a less cracked voice, but still deep, he starts to talk." should be "in a less cracked voice, but still deep, he started to talk."

"I go and look for my recording so I can turn this site in, but I freeze" should be "I went to look for my recording (application?) so I could turn this site in, but I froze."

There are probably a few I missed. I see now yeah scewed up on that.