Talk:Confessions of a Somniatoris/@comment-24532164-20160408215228

This story is more proof that the Creepypasta community is the nicest community on the internet. Either that, or they're all the dumbest.

To the author of this story,

What did I just read? Sincerely, I want to know. I don't think this could have been any more of a drag to get through, and it isn't even that long. Every sentence is so simple, and so, frankly, dull, I almost quit several times. You have to include some artistry, and none of that is present here. There's no tension, suspense, and I certainly didn't care for the main character at all.

Grammatically this was atrocious. Your English teacher would smack you. Commas, run-on sentences, fragments, do any of those ring a bell?

You have WAY too much that you WANT to cover in a story that is about 1/30ths too small to convey any of the real emotion or complexity that a story of this premise requires. A premise, mind you, that is apparently the love-child of "Knowing" and "Inception", which could have been good. Key word: "could". A premise which, by the way, wasn't scary in the slightest. Nothing here disturbed me or unnerved me. What could have caused that? The lack of tension? Lack of stakes? The incredibly rushed and cluttered organization of the story? My boredom? Answer: All of the above.

Sorry if this seems harsh, but sometimes my patience for creepypastas runs out. Sorry if this offends you, but these are my sincere thoughts regarding this story. You can make it better. It just requires time. Think it out. Make it cohesive. Make it flow. Make it suspenseful. Make it longer. Make it fun to read. That's all.