Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475017-20150616185333/@comment-26007602-20150616203931

AMarbleHornet wrote: I agree with several plot holes listed here, but this comment even could have been worded better and has several grammatical errors. Keep trying. I'm writing on my phone; apologies if it isn't up to your "standards". Only trying to help. Perhaps instead of reviewing comments, you could apply those skills to the story and help the author.