Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20181115065841/@comment-35711173-20181115205307

The guy's wife cheated on him and he didn't sire his daughter. It sucks but it happens. So why is he taking it out on his daughter? I hate to say it, I feel pissed at the guy. Some of her genes coming from someone else isn't her fault. She didn't do it.

It's a fantasy trip, but I can't see someone losing it mentally for a long period over an animal attack. OK, it's a mess. You call the insurance company and you get it resolved.

It comes off as a "I hate my Vegan relative" story. Maybe that's the intention.

Coyotes aren't pack animals.

I don't see the reason for the title change. I don't like the title and think you can do MUCH better, but having another story being 50% of the title for yours is coincidence, especially when the stories are so different.