Talk:Journal Entries/@comment-26260451-20150418190310

I apologize if I seem rude, that is not my intention here - just some constructive criticism. Well.. This honestly stumps me on how it scored potm; even the writer himself got distracted and stopped making any sense. My biggest example (and the reason I couldn't even finish reading this ridiculously long story) being; I thought this was from his BROTHER'S journal..was he some confused, nine year old having a gender identity crisis? Or was it simply so long and drawn out that he got distracted and forgot it was an older "brother"? SENTENCE: "It's pretty shocking when you're a proper nine-year old lady like I was". This pasta is overcooked. 3/10