Talk:Brother's Treasure/@comment-25319190-20150602044341

So, I tried to edit this the best I could on my own. I know it's still lacking, so if anyone is willing to give advice or help edit it, I will forever appreciate it. I happen to really suck at grammar and spelling, and the tablet I typed them on to post doesn't include spell check. The new chapters added were written by hand, if you're wondering why they're so short. It felt much longer when I was writing them. I have also heard that people hate constant changes in point of views, but I really felt that it added to the story, so I did it anyway. I tried to make it as obvious as possible just who's POV it's in, so let me know if I did it right.