Talk:No Trespassing/@comment-26416326-20150611014424

Alright, as unnerving as this is, it is not very scary.Unknown shadows that flit across the walls? Fantastic. Creepy and deranged gardener? Love it. Anyways I am not hating on your style as it was very well written with small spelling and grammatical errors, But you could have done better. Anyways I rate this as 7/10 for the expertly suspenseful writing.