Talk:What's Your Name?/@comment-7673575-20190713114118

Ah yes, the story that went through several drafts, but came out on top, nonetheless.

I like it how you smoothly replaced the Holy Land Crusades for the lesser known Northern Crusades, and how Maria became a Dane hunter (almost resembles Grendel in that).

Dialogue and monologue is still a bit bumpy in a few spots, but it's an improvement over the first draft.

Nice touch with Kievan Rus, although I'm about 90% sure that they never had language of such name.

Overall, it's a good piece, and a fine addition to your collection.