User blog comment:ZRE/Wanna make a Pasta/@comment-9102267-20140423230434

Try to sometimes inlclude the ending in the middle kind of? I probably don't sound right, but e.g you had a man who was possessed by a demon 15 minutes early, and someone visited him during the possession, at the end like tie that in  to the ending but make it happen before e.g My muscles hurt now, I might go check them (and half way in the story you could go like : his muscles bulged) if you get me? Just a suggestion.