User blog:Coyote and his demons/Did I Mess Up Again?

So a little while back I stuck a pasta into the writer's workshop for the perusal of those in the know there. Unfortunately I think I may have messed up again as I left a comment afterwards with notes on a couple of specifics I was looking for feedback on and, though marked as "unreviewed" I'm worried that gave people the impression it'd already been looked as because nobody's given me any pointers for it yet. Anyone who checks these things out able to let me know what the procedure is if one has done this and would still appreciate the feedback on a story they've written?

On a side note, and in order to ensure that this really should pass as a blog post, I shall soon be posting/offering some of the darkened and twisted nursery rhymes from a book I shall soon be publishing on the Kindle store and, hopefully, in print. So yeah... keep an eye out for that. I'm just hoping I've managed to alter them enough to class as "parody" and avoid infringing any sort of copyright.