User talk:NoTimeCreepy/Archive 3

Thank You Very Much!
No Time Creepy,

Thank you very much for the narration. That was so good!

Doctor Bob Smith, MD, Specializing in Proctology. (talk) 17:04, November 22, 2018 (UTC)

Please Read
Hey I was wondering if you'd read over my story 100.6 The Abyss I made my Final corrections to it and thought maybe you'd read over it. --No Time Creepy (talk) 04:19, November 26, 2018 (UTC)Simon Slaughters

Holly Jolly Horror
Sounds good, just let me know when they are up.L0CKED334 (talk) 12:49, November 26, 2018 (UTC)

Everybody better be good at Christmas
So, I have a Christmas story for you, if you're still interested narrating anything my crappy self has come up with... I'll post it in the upcoming weeks... obviously for you to have enough time to work with it before Christmas comes. :P

There is too much Ketchuppa in my Spaghett (talk)

Take a Look!
No Time Creepy,

Take a look in the Writer's Workshop. How does it look to you? Ready to go?

Doctor Bob Smith, MD, Specializing in Proctology. (talk) 09:49, November 28, 2018 (UTC)

Officially Ready to Go!
No Time Creepy,

I am officially calling A Christmas Story as ready to go. Please keep me appraised of your progress.

Doctor Bob Smith, MD, Specializing in Proctology. (talk) 06:38, November 29, 2018 (UTC)

You have been invited to Horror tales Wiki It is a wiki that has 88 pages and many scary stories, pictures and videos it would be great if you could contribute by writing your own stories or posting pictures and videos!

Good tails doll (talk) 03:14, December 2, 2018 (UTC)

NoTimeCreepy's favorite author just dropped a story!!!
Hey NoTimeCreepy guess what?!?!?!?! YOUR FAVORITE UNDERGROUND HORROR AUTHOR just dropped a new story go CHECK IT OUT!!! :)))

A KRAMPUS CAROL  is OUT NOW!

Nightmares at 3 AM: Volume II coming 2019...

Work in progress
Well, it's up in the workshop, for perhaps final adjustments, feel free to drop by and add your cup of sugar to the mix too ;)

I guess it'll be up on the main site in a couple of days :)

There is too much Ketchuppa in my Spaghett (talk)

Image
HI i am League, where can I post a Cursed IMage at.

Where can I post a cursed image at *on this wiki* --No Time Creepy (talk) 08:03, December 5, 2018 (UTC)League Fighters

Storeeee
Hey there, the christmas story is finished and is up on the site. If you still want to narrate it, here it is.

On Christmas Fathers Hide

There is too much Ketchuppa in my Spaghett (talk)

Oh the honor... or perhaps not... Maybe I should apologize for making you work on Christmas O;

Well, I'll be looking forward to it anyway!

There is too much Ketchuppa in my Spaghett (talk)

Thank You for Your Christmas Gift
No Time Creepy,

Thank you for your Christmas gift of narrating my story. I appreciate it and enjoyed hearing my words more than you can imagine.

I think you could have differentiated Sean from Santa Claus better. At fourteen, Sean's voice would be a squeaky tenor. It wouldn't be as deep or earthshaking loud as the smoke-filled basso profundo of his sire's. A consistent difference would have helped. Everyone pictures Santa Claus with that deep "Ho Ho Ho" voice, and this Santa Claus would be more muscular than Arnie. It would almost be like a younger and older version of the same voice. When Santa was describing how he would kick Darth Vader's ass, you would expect him to sound all macho.

That's just a note for your consideration.

Thank you again.

Merry Christmas

Doctor Bob Smith, MD, Specializing in Proctology. (talk) 06:48, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

No Time Creepy,

I think you can improve it. I think you can make us see the two of them together.

Were you rushed? I know there's a lot of people who are jumping for you to get their pastas read by you. I know how anxious I was. It seems that you read quickly, too quickly.

There's a Christmas rhythm to a Christmas creepypasta. It's similar to the voice you use when reading a bedtime story to your kids. If you listen to a bedtime story or a Christmas story being read, the pace is definitely slower, with clear pauses between segments. Try listening to the classic Boris Karloff reading of "The Grinch Who Stole Christmas." Think of Cindy Lou Who meeting the Grinch.

I really think you can get it. My voice is pretty bad and I don't have a mike that's worth jack, but I'd try if you think it would help.

Doctor Bob Smith, MD, Specializing in Proctology. (talk) 07:24, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

No Time Creepy,

Thank you. I know, some days are worse than others for anything. I appreciate the work you do. How may I help?

(I am already writing two Valentine's Day stories.)

Doctor Bob Smith, MD, Specializing in Proctology. (talk) 17:57, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

No Time Creepy,

Would it flow better if I edited the story? Perhaps removing ''This was too incredible to believe. “You're telling me my mother is an elf?”through "Everything from Christmas shopping shootings over Walmart parking spaces to the government banning Jesus proved it?"''

Is that a weak spot disrupting the flow?

Dr. Bob

Please See My Poll
NoTimeCreepy,

I added a poll to the General section of the forum. Please see it. Your vote and feedback would be appreciated.

https://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:640949

Doctor Bob Smith, MD, Specializing in Proctology. (talk) 00:06, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Thank You Very Much!
Thank you for spending the time on this. I appreciate it.

Back to Valentine's Day.

Doctor Bob Smith, MD, Specializing in Proctology. (talk) 02:46, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

BIG Improvement!
No Time Creepy,

This was a BIG improvement! I think it was a bit of a stretch and you seemed a bit nervous for the first two paragraphs, but once you got past the physical description you seemed to get the rhythm of it and the rest was MUCH better!

Two similar voices, but you had clearly different people. Both the relationship and the difference was clear. Success.

Do you know any other accents?

Dr. Bob

Thumbs and Nails
Well it looks nice (though, I personally wouldn't write "Hide" in blood, the pun is there on purpose, you know... your artistic choice though)

I'm not sure I figured the easter eggs out. Is it the bowl and the twig (a little too obvious for me if it is) or? Idk.

There is too much Ketchuppa in my Spaghett (talk)

Narration
Hey there! You hit me up a while back about Admission and Bitter Cold. Are you still planning to narrate them? No pressure. Just curious.

Thanks!

J. Deschene (talk) 21:29, December 26, 2018 (UTC)


 * I see. Bitter Cold doesn't have an in-story narrator, so anyone can read that. You can also try: The Doll Maker, The Greatest Honor, December Bride, and Flaming Fruit, to name a few. Those are from male perspectives.
 * Thanks for your consideration!
 * J. Deschene (talk) 22:55, December 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * J. Deschene (talk) 22:55, December 26, 2018 (UTC)
 * J. Deschene (talk) 22:55, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

Authors
Gomez Capulet is one of my favorite authors on here. There's also The Hooded Werewolf and KillaHawke1. QuentinKing is great.

Sometimes, I pick a word at random and do a search and read whatever's first on the list. It's a good way to discover new stories and writers.

J. Deschene (talk) 05:45, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Parlour is a great author as well. Check out Wind Walker.

J. Deschene (talk) 16:59, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Hey, it's Parlour. Sorry if this format is off, I haven't had to really use my talk page and I'm still taking it all in. Just wanted to let you know that you have my permission to narrate Wind Walker. All I ask is that I'm credited for writing the story (gotta get my name out there somehow, right?) and also if you could send me the link to the vid when it's done, I'd love to listen to it! Again, sorry if this message turns out strange, not really used to using talk pages. But regardless, I'm excited to see what kind of work you can do for my story, and I can't wait to see how it turns out!

Parlour (talk) 04:14, December 31, 2018 (UTC)Parlour

Happy Valentine's Day
No Time Creepy,

My story Happy Valentine's Day has now been posted. I think it's pretty strong.

What's next? This year, Roman Catholic Easter is the 21st of April and Eastern Orthodox Easter is the 28th of April. Passover starts the evening of the 19th of April. Maybe there's something good in there.

Doctor Bob Smith, MD, Specializing in Proctology. (talk) 19:22, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

You absolutely can free to narrate any of my stories. Just link me the videos once they're posted.Gomez Capulet (talk) 06:36, January 4, 2019 (UTC)