Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20190722204241

My name is Alice I am about to tell you what happen to me when I was a kid my parents was very abusive and always tell me they doesn't love me You are a stupid girl why do we keep you instead to give you to an orphanage! Says my father always shouting at me my mother wasn't any better as she beat me and see me crying without caring Aww cry all you want no one love you she always says these words to me.

I always felt so alone in my own house since I wasn't loved by my own parents who hated me every day and nights, Why this happen to me What do I do wrong?'' Asking myself why my life is miserable I wasn't sure if people like me because some think I am a weirdo, but since sometime its some voice inside my head who's telling me to kill someone same if I didn't want to do this.

When summer came my grandparents came to my house and took me with them for some vacations, I love my Grandfather and Grandmother because they we're the only one who really understand me when we go to their home my aunt and my cousins was also there one of my male cousins glared at me Well its that, not awful Alice!!! Says my more elderly cousin I hated that guy he constantly bully me like some people of the village and I was really angry at this remark.

I was walking in the village going to the beach when I heard one of my female cousin talking behind my back Do you sees that ugly dress she has why is she wearing that awful thing? She asked her friends her friend nods and laugh This so unfair I was thinking because like some girls like know its ignore the bullying, of course my parents came to visit not because they missing me or want some news they we're just happy to not have me at home more to my dismay.

Everyone's while I stay with my grandparent beat me up I was really saddened and run to the forest to cry then someone approached me, it was a man but he has no eyes or nose just ahis mouth and he was tall with a green flat cap kaki buttoned shirt with blue short sleeves shirt gray pants a with purple shoes on his feet.

The strange man begun speaking Don't be scare my name is Old-time Man and I want to help you get revenge, I was suspicious why this creature want to help as he have the same voice I heard in my head How will you help me? I respond to him he looked at me and says You see and take these objects he gave me a knife and a mask he also telling me to wait the night fall.

Going home I was not feeling really well since that encounter I was also tired so I went upstairs to my bed and sleep a weird dream then appear and the man I saw was there his voice was deep as he says Kill them I feel myself waking walking to my desk and take the mask and the stabbing knife, the without warning I enter my cousin's room as I walk over they still sleeping then I feel the knife stabbing as one of them woke up screaming the ohers do the same and I totally black out.

The next morning I heard my aunt screaming in horror I run out my room not knowing what happen, until I saw the blood on the floor and look threw the door all my cousin's are dead much to my shock as I see the blood on my hands I run to the forest because I didn't want someone to accuse me, but it was sure that my parents we're about to know what happened me I feel great as I put the mask back on and have my stabbing knife in my pocket.

Note from the author: I try to corrected it the best I can and use less ponctuation but some my narration on scribens and i am sorry that its not perfect  but like I says I try the best I could if  the phrases are not well its because my computer doesn't understand the quotes maybe if someone can help fix  my mistakes.

Maybe my story or one of them will work and be accepted. 