Talk:Don't Know You from Adam/@comment-30402176-20170108170944/@comment-24101790-20170108194454

Thanks, I'm always looking for feedback and believe that any perspective can be a beneficial one. I'll try to give everything some thought and see if I can't re-work anything. I liked the idea of him leaving notes as that put him at a closer proximity than a telephone or email. Anyone can call someone from anywhere, but to leave a note in their mailbox personally kind of makes it a bit more tense as it implies he knows where they are, is aware of their schedules, and is brazen enough to walk up to their house. While I understand the issue with the notes being written, it does imply a bit more romance/delusion as the guy isn't likely thinking about the police getting involved and is more focused on winning her heart. Although I'm not sure if the police would have everyone's handwriting documented/would be able to devote the time to comparing everything to track down this person.

I actually tinkered with the idea of the guy escalating up to calling the house, but I was worried that might create a bit of a plot hole. If Olivia knew what the guy sounded like, she might be more likely to piece the whole story together when she finds the body and realize that the man she thinks is the imposter is in fact her husband just by his voice. Without having heard the other guy talk, she could mislead herself into assuming that he sounds like Adam and had killed him.

Thanks for the feedback, I'll give it some thought and see if I should alter anything and what I should clear up.