Talk:Heretics/@comment-7673575-20190106184648

Well, this is one of those stories that make you trip on the pavement from the running start.

With the title as it was, I had high expectations for the story. And I was promptly let down.

GENERAL QUALITY: There were a few typos and misused commas here and there. Not negligible, but not major either - 24/25

HORROR FACTOR: This may be a story, but it isn't a horror story. The only thing that can in best case scenarion and generosity be considered even remotely horror is the description of death of Father Doug and the injuring of the bystanders, and that is simply not enough - 5/25

DEUS VULT: The priest is involved, and the Catholics are mentioned. However, the religious overtone itself is lukewarm at best - 5/25

ENTERTAINMENT VALUE: Here's where the first line I wrote in this tiny review comes into play. The buildup was there, and I excpected it to lead to something, only to have the story abruptly end and nothing actually happening. The story itself was not quite something, and I at least expected the end to pay off. It did not - 3/25

TOTAL SCORE: 37/100