Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25941663-20150918143924/@comment-25941663-20150919110021

Oaura wrote: -comment- Thanks for the detailed feedback. It is greatly appreciated.

I've fixed the mistakes you pointed out. Thanks.

About the interpretation of the story, I have to admit I don't have a definite answer. I left it as open as I could, so anything is acceptable. Personally, writing this I felt like the monster was a shapeshifter who devoured its victims. I was even considering adding in a scene where the girl's body would be found, but that would close down the ending quite a bit.

Thanks again for the review. It helped a lot.