Talk:Just Rats/@comment-24085584-20140410020726

Wow! Not bad! I like the presentation of this story a lot. The build up is really good, although I must admit the climax was a bit lacking. It started out really creepy, then just wasn't so creepy anymore. It wasn't bad, and I get the feeling that you were trying to make the end "touching". But it just didn't quite do it for me. Still a great read. :)

4.2/5

Keep it up!