Talk:The Last Day of October--Short Hoggers/@comment-4893169-20151019002950/@comment-26326346-20151024054321

I finished reading it and enjoyed it. I did find some of the transition scenes a bit rough and confusing as they occurred without warning and it took me a moment to realize what happened (like the flashback to the museum where she got her Langston).

I went "aw" when it ended right when the Pirate was going to tell the story, talk about being a tease XD

I feel like I understand your works for the most part, there are a couple of terms that confuse me because I'm not familiar with Pagan lore. Since your stories have a world, build off each other and use some lore that most people aren't going to be familiar with, I recommend making some sort of lore guide off-site (Pastebin?) and linking to it at the top of each story. I think it might draw in more readers and help dispel any confusion that may arise.

Great work, it takes a lot of talent to make a consistent world and build off it :)