Talk:The Gym Teacher/@comment-25901301-20150507231900

(omg) So Ive been back up to reviewing pastas again, and this one was an emotional roller coster.

The character Danny was really well thought up and magnificent in a way. I kind of felt the ending and Danny's "revelation" so to speak, was really raw. How it all comes together, how in the end he really loves his family. How his fantasy of these romaticized serial killers he's thought of all his life as fascinating and cool, are really sociopaths and horrible people!

One thing I loved was the whole dynamic of the story, that werewolf reveal took me in for a spin and it definitely shocked me. (the blow was great since i felt like i was going to vomit) I also thought the moment when Melissa and Danny share a moment, when Danny shows a little bit of compassion before the inevitable.

When you add in the descriptiveness of your writing, this turned out to be a great pasta!

Well done, you get a 100! (Extra points for the hints you dropped)