Talk:Tobit: Theory of Two/@comment-26326346-20150517234848

Another great tale, well done! It's funny how both Clair and Derrick are heading straight for what would be worse for them. All the twos make the title work so well, I can't help but wonder if things will end up in threes by the end. I'm sorry that I don't have an criticisms, I haven't noticed anything wrong or disagreed with anything that you've done with any of the Tobit stories.

It is neat how Delphia has the odd effect of improving people's lives and then ends up taking it all back. Very demon-esque. I can't help, but feel like everyone is going to end up getting a bad ending somehow. I'm going to laugh if Tobit doesn't exist and that the council of Tobit is behind all the magic and sending people to the burning star. I'll also laugh if Tobit is something far different than what the cultists believe it to be.

Tobit is a very interesting individual and I can't wait to see where this all goes.