Talk:Abandoned by Disney/@comment-5784644-20150727135707

The beginning to the Abandoned by Disney trilogy is certainly a glimpse of what's to come for anyone who wishes to start this series. This story is very well written and presents and eerie tone. Throughout the whole thing, you and the protagonist are unsure of what secrets lie within this abandoned Disney attraction (which I'm pretty sure is real), and the atmosphere is great. I love how descriptive this story is and there are nice touches to make you question the Disney corporation's true nature and secrets (at least in their theme parks). The whispering comes to mind. Though some may find it a pointless scene just trying to be creepy and nothing else, I see it as Disney officials who are there to scope out the place in case that Nega-Mickey costume ever gets out of its pen. Speaking of the costume, the scene with that creature is very well-executed, not only managing to give us a satisfyingly disturbing payoff after all this buildup, but also managing to use gross-out effectively without coming off as out of nowhere gore (and thank you Mr. Creepypasta for adding in a Velcro sound for this part in your reading, that was totally necessary). The whole story is eerie, and creates seemingly its own lore about the dark nature of Disney, 10/10.