Talk:Clifton Forge Underground/@comment-25469647-20140927083318

Nice build up and thoroughly chilling anecdote. Pictures are a huge plus and the shirt tug will haunt my nightmares. A little slow but it builds up to an intense degree. Simple in style but that works for it since it is a true story. Minor clichés like "mind racing" as well as the note section break the flow. However, this story is believable despite its overdramatic ending because it naturally builds up to that extreme. It gets my score of 8/10.