Talk:Brother's Treasure/@comment-25153204-20141203020455/@comment-25319190-20150602031203

Thanks! Sorry, I haven't been on in a while so I just got to read this. I've made some major renovation of this story, but I think it's still is lacking in the grammar and spelling department. I happen to really suck at both if you could't tell. But I'll be posting my new version in a minute, if you're interested in reading it.