Talk:Ash's Coma/@comment-31248264-20160929173247

"The Pokémon in Ash’s team, however, serve the purpose of displaying his issues and aspects of himself. For example, Charmander represents his sex drive (not his sexuality, like Brock)."

I think that "not his sexuality, like Brock" should be "not his sexuality, unlike Brock".

Overall, the creepypasta is good. 8/10.