Talk:Which One Is the Big Dog?/@comment-6702838-20131212160406

Wow, this story leaves me with so many questions, the main one being, "what the fuck?" the story is confusing, but intentionally so. It's basically begging to be read more than once, and I think it deserves it. The writing is great, barring a few minor errors. Word choice is concise and fitting, but confusing, although that's the point. Throughout the text, it had me feeling confused and slightly disturbed, and that is a very good thing indeed.

7/10, worth reading more than once.