Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-26248899-20150327040540/@comment-26248899-20150613184443

SoPretentious wrote: The reading is rearranged just so, that it reminds me of another piece of work entirely made up of someone else's ideas. A "narration" should match the story. I've seen narrations with a word out of place here-and-there, but not with whole sentences out of place, with added phrases that aren't in the story. Just my two-cents.

Now I see where the confusion lies. I asked Cava's editor for permission to read the version that was linked to the wikia. Cava wanted me to read the official version found at: http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/531059, which is more complete. Hope that clears everything up.