User blog comment:Fairly7Local/Interactive Story - YOUR OPINION WANTED/@comment-36627132-20190104130546

It probably would have been a better idea to post this in the Writer's Workshop instead of making a blog post. Not just because that is the best place to put a story for opinions, but because it would get more attention. Blogs are pretty much ignored most of the time.

I personally dislike the choose your own adventure game style. While it is an innovative fresh idea, it will be an inconvenience to anyone who is going to use the back button after reading all of it. On top of that it might encourage newer, inexperienced users to make their own, and if theirs does not meet quality standards, it will be a pain for the admins to have to delete it all. I think most people on here would rather read single page stories without having to worry about clicking the next part or decide what should come next.

As for the stories themselves, I will admit I did not read them because it is about dating a woman which, as a gay man, is something that does not draw me in.

Sorry I couldn't be anymore help, just giving my two cents.