Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4127458-20150509020105/@comment-6548012-20150523145931

Bearycool wrote: Lol, I usually pick up on that humor, sorry :(. Been in a tired mood.

I believe you're right honestly. The more I look at it, the more wrong it is. The entire micropasta needs to get a bit reworked. No problem, my sarcasms aren't so easy to get though - but when people do (or don't, but admit it), I love it - otherwise I understand :)

Sadly, not all the readers can get some subtle points, which is understandable, though you should leave said points as those little things that make the overall just more awesome. It happens to everyone at a point or another, you're changing opinions, you're growing more aware of it, and that's something good, to a certain extent; if you need to rework the micropasta, feel free to do so, that's how literature starts, after all :)