User blog:Time2Gam3/Creating my new story please help out

Ok I realize my first stroy was a darn let down that you all got butthurt about it so can you please help out with my second story I called it A Rock before you start talking here is the sypnosis....

Little TimTim is a lonely child he throws rocks for fun to remind him the pain he endured as a child untill one day he gets lost in the forest and finds a pit of rocks but what he doesn't realize he found the rocks that controll all the planets in his solar system and ends up doing something extremely terriable...... So please help out if you can contribute any ideas and thank you LOL CATS 23:10, May 14, 2012 (UTC)