Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26112985-20150728001331/@comment-26475253-20150728024127

Alright, it's a pretty well written story. I think the use of Death is a bit of a cliché, but nowadays it's hard to think of purely unique creatures, so no points deducted on that. It's much better than a lot of the prattle you can find by selecting the "Random Pasta" button, so it's my pleasure to review it. I must say this, I would like to read the ending, should you decide to finish this project. The one thing that struck me was that it isn't all that uncommon for a seven year old to have an imaginary friend (I believe that people start to kick them at the latest of eight) so the mother's reaction was a bit much. Besides that, well done.