Talk:Dreams of Inner R'lyeh or How I Discovered the Apocalyptic Behemoth that Killed the World/@comment-25941663-20150125140019

I think I found a punctuation error, but I am not sure. In the 9th-10th paragraph you are writing "awe-inducing scape". I think it should be "awe-inducing scale" instead. Also, further down, you write "I’d stop examine" when it should be something like "stop to examine" or "stop and examine".

I would fix those myself, but I think it's best to leave it to your judgement.

Apart from that, that was a very immersive story. I really enjoyed it. Well done.