Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25150178-20140707151921/@comment-17739056-20140707154804

I surprisingly found this amazing. Great amount of build up and suspense. It's a little strange since you say you've never been much of a writer, but I won't say that you ripped off anyone's pasta or anything. I guess you're just naturally gifted at writing? XP I'm even a little jealous considering your first creepypasta was good and my first (witch is still in the writer's workshop as I had written it a few days ago or so) was a bit meh to me, but I'm still working on it. XD

The only thing I think you have to change is whatever is chasing him. I don't know, it just sounded too much like Smile Dog to me. So try to come up with a more creative design for the thing, and I'd give it a 9/10!! :)