Talk:The All-New Improved Universal Beverage and Snack Machine/@comment-28360473-20160505054553

Awesome!

The concept was original, and oh, so horrifying! Aside from some wording issues (which I fixed, by the way), the writing was great.

Not to mention the Candy Crush, giving an added layer of realism. Hehehe, just kidding.

Yeah as Ruckus said, the intro could've better.

Otherwise, you did magnificently! Now go drink a coffee or something. Or don't...