Talk:Please, Don't Look Away/@comment-26381643-20150509164939

I think this pasta is phenominal! It was very well written, and I love how the author is a regular user on this website! He ws expecting something, having read pastas before (obviously), only to be suprised himself, and practically breaking the fourth wall by making the reader a victim themselves! Another clever thing the author did was set up the story to take place how many of us are now: scrolling through the wiki, possibly with friends, with our phone by our side. Also, in response to others saying it's too brief, the whole point is to end abruptly as the pasta the narrator was reading did. Great pasta, 9.5/10.