Talk:The Scariest Thing to Me/@comment-24281984-20160128224620/@comment-24101790-20160128225921

Thanks for the review, unfortunately I never really did find out what was making that noise so I can't really give a concrete reason for it. I gave a few theories in the story, but I never really experienced that sound again so in the end, they're just theories. I'll try to think up a way to give the ending a bit more of an impact, but I'm kind of limited by my memories of it.

I'll try to look over the story this weekend and cut back on some of the repetition towards the end when I get a bit more free time. Once more, thanks for the criticism.