Talk:Journal Entries/@comment-24629507-20150414121009

This pasta has taken me several days to read and I have been awfully disappointed. I want to feel frightened when I read this sight, but this just drew out suspense way too long. The sheer length of this pasta made it difficult to read. I do, however, praise the structure, and it did keep me guessing on the bigger picture, unfortunately, it was a long and tiring read and I lost enthusiasm after the relatively frightening parts just fell off into trying to create a suspenseful atmosphere.