Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27628405-20160213200702/@comment-4715955-20160214055122

Craneknewitt wrote: Why don't you turn this into an actual story? It'd be better if he/she makes it more effective as a micropasta first, I think. Then if they want to flesh it out into something longer, they can likely do so with a bit more finesse. As a micropasta it could work fine, it just needs more rewrites.