Talk:The Toadman: Origins

This story as a prequel was rather short, but gave a good premise to the "sequel". It has amazing imagery and avoided dragging on what we knew was inebitable. I just feel like it went a bit downhill after his execution as it wasn't really clear where he was being talked to by the spirit thing. Again overall it was good but again the ending could have been a little better. I give this pasta a 6 or a 7 out of 10. Peter, the magical turtle (talk) 18:48, July 7, 2013 (UTC)