Talk:Clown Dogs/@comment-25923890-20150825101301

Let's see...I wasn't too moved by this one on account of the ending being predictable but I did like the begininng and I thought it very comical how you tried your best to emulate a dumb teen girl. [Insert "like" here] xD But I dunno, the fact that the "popular dumb girl" could be good at computers is a little unrealistic to me, tbh. It would have been better if that Alyssa character made the speaker run the proxy so it would be even more of a "Oh shit, I played a part in her death too!" at the ending. 8.4/10