Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-1306136-20140404154657/@comment-24841494-20140404183237

I was just giving him some ideas on what he could do, and I didn't put much thought into it. I just think the ending didn't really work well because the first part seems like it is something supernatural and unknown, then suddenly it seemed like it was just a person. I think a better description would be to just have the creature doing its job, appearing bored even, like it has done this a thousand times, and never have it speak or hear its thoughts, ect. as well as not having much description appearance wise. I also think Nooth's idea of making it seem ancient. Maybe to help build it up, he finds the said cover-less book in a dark decrypt section of the library (To contrast this have the rest be new and well kept) In this section there are hundreds of leather-bound books. Instead of my shitty new story idea, you could have a change of perspective to another librarian who finds Harvey's book.