Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25305839-20161104031725/@comment-28060931-20161104114637

Before I start: I am fully confident that you were joking with the "Kill myself" part, but I just want to say no one on this planet should be upset becouse they are a bad writer, or painter, or what the fuck ever. And you admit that you're not the greatest by saying you want to improve. Shakespear, Dickens, King. All them started out as horrible writers. Just do me a favor, don't ask people to be nice to you; that's not what critism is. If you can't cope with harsh opinions, get some thicker skin, or reconsider asking for honest feedback.

Stop fearing the darkness and what lurks in it. People who fear the dark use nightlights which is(are) a waste of electricity and a waste of electricity could result into(in) society collapsing because we run out of energy.(That's highly unlikely. Nightlights don't use that much energy, if they did, they'd be off the market. Besides, it'll be aeons before we run out of electricty.)

Stop fearing Gays. Their feelings will be hurt and it will want them to get revenge and have a war that's between straight and gays, which will end up with lots of people dying.(I... Well. I don't think anyone half-sane fears gays, homophobic people just don't like them.)

Stop fearing spiders. People who are afriad of them would try to kill them all. If they succeed, it will end with bugs and other invertebrates will be all over the place since their are no spiders to eat them. With so many bugs, they will destory our crops and there will be a lack of food for the 7 billion people in the world. Parasitic bugs will kill off our livestock and other domestic animals and disease-filled bugs like mosquitoes will spread deadly diseases, killing off humanity.(What kind of fucking genocide will lead to that many dead spiders.)

Stop fearing mice and rats. Just like spiders, people who fear them will try to kill them all. If they succeed, scientists wouldn't have anyother(another) animals to do experiments on(While this is grammatically correct, something like "...to experiment on" would sound better.) so they can find cures for deadly diseases that could wipe out humanity.

Stop fearing tight, enclosed spaces. If we want more room, we will eventually use up all the land on Earth and all of the ecosystems will be destroyed from the construction of building more bigger houses and buildings. Most of the life on Earth will be extinct. Without the animals and planets, we won't have air, food, clothes, and other vital resources to live. Humanity will be extinct. Also, after all the room being used up on Earth, it will get crowded which will make day-to-day life difficult and if there are still people with claustrophobia in the world while it's crowded, they will panic and go insane and, depending how severe their phobia is, kill themselves to end their agony. (You do know phobias take a lot of time and effort to cure?)

Stop fearing it all! Fearing keeps us alive but trying not to die will kill us or make us go insane. It's time to face your fears!

The previous guy said it best: this could not happen, ever. There is no way hetrosexual people would wage actual fucking war with hetrosexual people. Sure, men and women died becouse of their sexuality, but war is way over the top.

As to the bugs, we could all go on a spider killing spree and still we would not wipe out half of the spider population.

People who fear encloses spaces won't start demolishing forest so they could build huge mansions, and if crisis did come, humans main priority would be making homes on and under water.

Look, my point is this is very unrealistic. It's a good idea, a seiries of scenerios that can destroy the world when in effect, but the problem is that this has no build-up; it's just a super short essay. You need to provide stats and facts to make a theory pasta realistic. If you want to write a story, make a couple of charecters and have them witness the world getting rekt by insects, or something