Talk:In the Woods/@comment-26054278-20150309195859

I enjoyed that quite a bit. Personally, the descriptions in this story are done very well. Humboldt already mentioned one of the best lines, but I also liked, "His heartbeat synchronizes with the rhythm of the forest and his breath joins the sounds of nature in the timeless chorus of life."

The story in all was interesting, and while not really that creepy, I personally prefer quality as opposed to something scary. The end was funny but still a bit weird ("mouth-hole" was an interesting bit), and I was glad you put it there.

You did a very nice job.