Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25710298-20141118030622/@comment-25170312-20141118042017

Likferd wrote:

As a result, the narrative's conclusion feels disconnected from the rest of the pasta and leaves the reader in a state of confusion as the events from the beginning do not match up to those of the ending. I get why you deleted their pasta, but this part seems odd because I wasn't confused at all. The book got them interested in dopplegangers, and then they realized they WERE dopplegangers. It's kind of like the movie "The Broken". Though, the fact that this pasta reminds me of two different movies just validates your point about it being an overused plot.