Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26869801-20160513230203/@comment-26869801-20160514223003

Thanks for your help! There are a lot of errors mostly because this is a translation of a story I did in Portuguese a couple years ago. I'll work on them.

The "scary part" of the story would start on the next update, that would probably be around June. My idea was to write that I've tried to ask that friend of mine about the origins of the website and he would always say he couldn't tell me, and I tried until he stopped answering at all. Then I found out he had been murdered and there was a note next to him with the numbers that make the web adress of that weird website. So I find out everything's connected and start investigating.

That kind of the plot, knowing that the story is made by 5 entries on this "blog" 'til the narrator dies. (yeah, he dies at the end)

If someone can please help me writing this story well so it doesn't get deleted and sticks around 'til its end, I would really apreciate that.