Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150430062138/@comment-25975226-20150506134342

Again, really sorry for not getting back sooner. I think that the Government idea might be a bit cliched in my opinion, but if you can really make it something new and improved, go for it! However, if you know what I mean, there are plenty of stories where the Government is evil and yadayadayada... If you want your story to stand out you'll have to avoid those cliches. A news reporter who knows something about the snake's origins is veering from the cliches a bit, but make it anything you like and use creepy writing techniques, BOOM! You've got a great story. Sorry if this response wasn't great. It's 11:42pm here so I'm not functioning 100%. I hope this helped somewhat :)