Talk:Forgive Me/@comment-4849011-20150210003218

This was a good story. It drew me in, and the climax speaks of the terrible things that can happen when we hold grudges and don't consider our loved ones' feelings. I do have one question. In one of the early paragraphs you mentioned a "Peter". Were you thinking of another character when you meant to write "Nathen"? I won't criticize you if that's the case because I've made mistakes like that too.