Talk:Resemblance of Photos/@comment-26921684-20151102032907

Wow, that was pretty bad. Your other work doesn't seem that bad, so I don't know what the fuck happened here.

Let me get into why I didn't like this story.

1. Bad grammar- There are 7 total paragraphs in the story, and on paragraph 3 there is a massive grammar mastake. Not only did you incorrectly use a semicolon, but the whole paragraph is one huge run on sentences. I could split that into 3 sentences easily.

2. What was the point? There was no real climax or payoff, the story just ended. So you just moved on and never thought of it again? Did your brother become paranoid after the event's? Did your grandmother's spirit live on to haunt you guys?

Overall I give it a 3.5 out of 10. The only thing saving it is that it is short and that the grammar isn't that bad.

Keep on making stories and don't let the opinion of some wanker stop you.