Talk:Hung, Drawn and Quartered/@comment-28266772-20160921140959

Great story. Thoroughly enjoyed it. I corrected some minor spelling mistakes but I also noticed the following,

"vision travels reaches the top" -> this didn't read right to me. I suspect either travels or reaches should be omitted but it's an arbitrary choice so I thought I'd point it out to you so you could make the choice yourself.

Once again though you show a knack for historical horror in a variety of settings. In particular your settings always feel eerily authentic. Great work.