Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25012337-20140519232346/@comment-24918243-20140520053934

I agree with everything said above.

Especially about the proofreading.

One example that particularly stood out for me was "Nowadays,it’s impossible to go there,since every possible entrance is blocked nowadays." You begin and end the sentence with the same word. Do yourself a favor and read it outloud. You will catch many such mistakes.