Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25246956-20140731022248/@comment-25148755-20140731044754

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You have a few grammatical errors throughout, verb tense etc. Nothing too major and a proof read or two should fix most of it.

I was surprised by how effective this story was. You did a good job setting up the isolation with the island and establishing the back story. I got an honest-to-god chill when I read the last paragraph, even though it was pretty obvious where it was going. Overall, 8/10.