Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24381191-20140904164608/@comment-25112831-20140905143336

Yeah, np, it's a really good pasta, and it is probably a really good idea to get some other people (maybe a little more experienced than me :P ) to review it - a few different opinions is always helpful :3 And I do agree that extending this story by any length would be a difficult feat and keeping it reasonably short will give you the best result x Hope I was helpful, I do really like this pasta :P Coolio x