Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29633972-20160815171550/@comment-28718262-20160815205707

This is the origen (original)story of Jack The Killer. He was born in kentucky where he was constenly picked on by his fellow class mates at springfeild elementry(fast paced maybe elaborate). He was only three foot four so everybody called short stack even his own started calling him short stack. This name stuck until he was sixteen years old by this time he snapped. On July 23 1987 jacks mother had been laughing at him all day since he went to the doctor and had his height. He was still on four foot two. In the middle of the night he went to his fathers gun closet picked up his twenty two revolver and shot both his kidneys his mother rushed him to the hospital where the doctors did everything they could do to help but jack didn't make it. Ten days after jacks death his mother was still devastaed. So she called upon the power of the high witch of the south.Now theres a witch?She said she could bring her son back for a price. The witch said if she brings her son jack back he would not be the same. He would be a bit odd said the witch. That night her son arived at the door with the gun he used to shoot himself. He burst through the door shot his mom in the gut and burst to his fathers room picked up a twelve gage shotgun and blasted him in the thigh and then in the head.'''why? Why not the bullies.''' From that point on he roams the world killing people and eating their kidneys it is the only on he can survive. He will come to your house if you wake up at twelve forty five exactly. So try to sleep tight and dont let jack bite. Good night

Despite the typos and lack of reason i think this has potential. For most of these things you need to ask why. What was it that made him this way. (i'm pretty sure someone can give a better explaination or critique than me on this point...so if you want to ignore me and wait for a helpful person go ahead.)