Talk:Umbra/@comment-4849011-20170807180927

Oh, yeah, I remember reading this before! It was part of a competition, right? How did it do?

This was a good one. There’s some foreboding, and then things start getting weird! The thing I thought was freaky was how, at the end, she intended to say one thing, but instead said something completely different. How scary would that be if it happened in real life?