Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25477067-20141203160242

This is the second pasta I have created, since my first pasta was not accepted. Can you please read it over and review?

https://docs.google.com/a/muhsd.k12.ca.us/document/d/1Jz4oCoKTe3T-x-OZ3PXxkEqHHJoV7-Iqzxu32xaq5jk/edit?usp=sharing 