Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25462519-20140925115135/@comment-25462519-20140926053043

Thanks for the feedback. The story was more of a dream that Interpreted. I've been writing stories for an Anthology so this is still in its beginning phases. I pretty much wanted feedback on the "rough draft" if you will. I plan on rewriting and adding more detail soon but wanted thoughts on the base product. I envisioned it more in a movie form than a pasta.