Board Thread:Questions and Answers/@comment-5922240-20121230185940/@comment-5852645-20130103182119

The second paragraph seems to be about looking out the window and seeing this 6-legged creature, but it ends with "I saw Carter chopping wood." You should move that, because it has nothing to do with the rest of the paragraph where it is. For example, you looked out the window and saw Carter chopping wood, THEN saw the monster, at which point start a new paragraph to describe the monster... or you saw the monster, then start the next paragraph with seeing Carter outside too.