Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27628405-20160118182315/@comment-24101790-20160118183742

I'm sorry but this is pretty generic and really doesn't tell a cohesive story. I'd suggest looking over this guide for tips.

Also this coding issue is on every line. " The stars are your thoughts " which tends to cause formatting errors. Using source mode when copy/pasting solves this issue.

Lines still need proper punctuation as well. Even free verse poems have to conform to the punctuation/capitalization rules of poetry. If you uploaded it in its current form, it would likely be deleted for lacking content and not being up to quality standards.