Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26425680-20171018131639/@comment-25148755-20171018204705

Nice job. As always your writing is eminently readable. If I had one criticism its that, despite the skepticism of the townsfolk, we the readers are never really in doubt that Wilhelm is the werewolf, what with his on the nose advice and (admittedly classic) belt. Not that it isn't a good story, but it seemed pretty straightforward and I felt lacked any real kind of twist. Part of me would almost like to see Victor actually turn out to be the wolf (and the belt actually just be a belt, the advice the ravings of a dying man).