Talk:Apple Maps/@comment-25052433-20150805231009

Not a bad story. My only real complaint is that the character is using GPS to find his way to his own house. Now, I get it, maybe he's new to the area, maybe he was looking for new short cuts, but honestly, this would flow better if that was explained, even shortly.

Because why else would someone need step by step instructions to return to their own home? Plus, he mentions that he knows it's about 30 minutes to his house, which indicates that he is at least slightly familier with the area. I would think of perhaps changing a bit of that around, so it doesn't seem so strange.

Otherwise, this was really good and I enjoyed it. Nice work!