Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25263167-20140922134401/@comment-24821182-20140922135121

No, I don't know that feeling.

You spell don't and it's wrong. There's also grammatical errors like "...coming back the ways when we used..."

The story was too short and said so little. Also, it's not our "primal way" to kill without reason. I think it seems like a cool concept, to have some kind of being or higher power preventing humans from falling into despair and violent behavior, and you could probably write a good story about it. This wasn't a good story though.