Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25825682-20171229192845/@comment-25825682-20171230214430

Thanks for the feedback. I was worried it would come off rushed or too short, but I thought I'd try something new and see how well this version would go first before adding more things. Anyway, adding more details won't be a problem though.

I'll add a few more scences to draw-out the plot and interactions. Hopefully, the right connections will get conveyed.

My revisions might be a while though, being sick and all, but as I said before thanks. I'll start the new draft as soon ss I can. :)