Talk:The Charlatan/@comment-25170312-20151003040500/@comment-24463401-20151003042954

Thanks for the review. I agree that some of it was a bit unnatural or parts may have been left out, but I wanted to focus more on Drake's character arc than his profession. I was trying to make a lot more distinguished and unique characters in this one than I normally do. The headband guy was more trying to be an avatar of death than just someone who wanted to die. He's denying himself death because he wants to spread it to the most people possible. I know there isn't much in the story for you to get to that conclusion, but that was motivation when writing him. I really appreciate the review, though. Thanks for taking the time to read it.