Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25941663-20170529112703/@comment-25941663-20170530184240

This was nicely written and it flowed good enough for an interrogation (I'm not too fond of the genre in general). You certainly have the basics down, something very important for a budding writer. You have the potential to become very good, if you keep at it.

The main problem with this is that it offers nothing new or creepy. It's the same old story of a group of agents entering a building and finding something unknown. You don't do enough to overcome this cliche plot, and the story unfortunately suffers as a result.

This is a case of a story not meeting quality standards due to its plot. I suggest you move on from this to something else. I'm sure you will find your groove with practice.

Another piece of advice that I can offer is to read good stories. On my user page I have a list of authors all of whom have contributed some amazing work. It would benefit you greatly if you read them and tried to follow their example.

You have the potential to be very good, but you have to keep practising and keep reading. Hope to see more from you in the future.