Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36263224-20180720234005/@comment-35711173-20180721000510

I love dogs. I had a German Shepherd that was the most wonderful thing on four feet. He was like a king, a sheer force of nature. He took down one intruder and ran off another. I still mourn him.

Even so, I am not sure if this is enough for a creepypasta. On the paragraph "I stared in shock" - fourth from the end, you engage Rusk not being what the kid thinks it is.

The end of "Bad dream" - while I can see it I am not enthused by it. Yeah, I know I have used it myself. But ... can you give it more? They say this kid is talking to a dead dog. Maybe the ghost dog being there? Maybe the ghost dog doing something important and then falling apart, like he had done his last mission?