Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35911608-20190806185714/@comment-35911608-20190806205501

DrBobSmith wrote: It's lightly seasoned, but enjoyable. I think you could crank it up with noting how soulless all the Selfie Yuppies with their selfie sticks are. They don't just act soulless, they have chipped away at their own souls with their "me only" actions until there is nothing left.

This could quickly become genuine allegorical literature. Thanks :)

And yeah, Hel messaged me on the DM and I've thought of a couple of ways to improve on it. It was just meant as a micropasta, but a bit more meat on the bones never hurt anyone.

... except maybe Tolkien.