Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-12339030-20141116170329/@comment-4519961-20141116173056

Also, on the topic of the "look behind you" ending. What if the narrator never picked up the journal or read it? Then the fact he wrote "look behind you" is stupid if it all depends on the small sliver of chance anyone happens to stumble across it out in the middle of nowhere.

On another note, I have no idea what im supposed to be afraid of. Is there some monster or supernatural force that is making this character go insane? Or is he just a dick who likes messing with people? Its very vague and doesn't make any sense in the whole ordeal of the story at all.