Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25035532-20140628192430/@comment-25112831-20140702164928

It is a summary, yes, but I think you could do something really awesome with it. I wonndered if the second bit was a bit repetetive (with the princess of that time, king of that period etc.) but thats my noly main criticism! xx I can see you maybe blending the two together an starting to continue it into a longer, more despcriptive, quite cool story!!! It could be something pretty good, just maybe spend some more time working at it for a bit. Take your time, don't rush! It should be cool! xx Good luck! :P