Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24911072-20140605222503/@comment-24911072-20140605234052

Im going to fix it soon, again sorry for it, i truly not sure about spacing

Ps: this is the first story that i started somewhat in the beginning and then started at the end and went up, so its not as good as any other of my stories ^-^ to me it sucks, but my friends say its good, so i wanted to make sure, thanks in advance for the feedback