Talk:Her Red Right Hand/@comment-25226524-20160116023821

I see the dark side has the tips of its claws around your ankle. This was nasty, and I loved it. It was also so damn intense I actually started reading a bit faster than usual. Puts me in the mind of Messenger by Ed Lee (check it out sometime). I honestly don't have anything to say as far as improvement goes. There were a few little technical issues, but there was no way I was stopping to fix them. Just couldn't spoil the read. This is my favorite of yours. Maybe you're just getting better or maybe it just suits my tastes, but I could read book after book of what you've got here. You really let loose with this one, and I think it suits you well.

Come over to the darkness, my friend. We're waiting ; )