Talk:Dead Eagle/@comment-35711173-20190908075631/@comment-10502460-20190916064926

>Hunters and shooters are too easy a cliche to pick on.

Respectfully, I don't really consider that to be a valid criticism. Keep in mind that several of your stories feature "cliched" antagonists as well, such as the military, the government deep state, and mega-corporations.

I'm very pro-hunting and pro-Second Amendment. The father in this piece represents poachers, not all hunters, and not even all poachers at that.

I understand why you take issue with the ending, but keep in mind that he had just discovered his father was a murderer, and his mother was possibly/probably complicit as well. From my perspective not everyone would respond in the strictly logical way given the emotional stakes involved.

Thanks for your feedback in any case.