Talk:Pasta Noir: Dames, Slugs and the Hatchetman/@comment-26341219-20150428141308

Amazing story! 9/10. The references and just all together story makes it really fun and entertaining, as well as thrilling to read with all it's mystery. One thing, though, that put the score down from a full 10/10 is there was quite a bit of purple prose used in this; though I assume it's to be expected, since Noir-themed stories seem to be the Father of Purple Prose -- Lord of the Rings, it's Mother -- but I believe that's just a bit of a pet peeve on my behalf. Good work! I can't wait to read more of your writing.