Talk:How to Talk to Yourself/@comment-24896639-20160814003258

It had no logical progression to it. So, you saw a pamphlet as a child... okay. What would that be doing anywhere? Seriously. And, despite being on a sewer grate for God knows how long, exposed to the elements, it's still mostly legible. Strange. The pamphlet was meant to be off, but it progressed into insanity too quickly, and the story offered little in the way of explaining what was happening. Too many stories here rush the plot and hope that the random twist at the end can add enough to the story to make up for it. Like every other story like that I've read, the lack of answers doesn't make me more interested, it simply annoys me. Take your time to write a story or post it as a troll pasta.