Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4849011-20180321014712/@comment-4849011-20180322172624

BloodySpghetti wrote: ...but it's very taste specific.

The thing about fetishes- uh, I mean... ~clears throat~ ;-)

Thanks for the feedback. Out of curiosity, do you think there's a better place for it to end? In my opinion the first place it could potentially end is the scene with the underclothes. It would leave things unresolved, but it's a "What the blazes is going on here!?" moment, and it leaves it open for readers to write their own ending. As for the explanation, I was going for a cold, clinical approach, but I get your point.

All in all I have to say that someone reacting, "Meh, it's not terrible," is better than the reaction I was afraid I'd get. I don't like to post mind-control stories for fear some nutjob will claim, "This is a true story!" Sure, I'm really a supervillainous scientist from a comic book and I have a building full of subjects I'm experimenting on at my leisure, but I've decided to jeopardize that by bragging about it on the Creepypasta wiki!