Talk:For Love and Hot Chocolate/@comment-26414993-20150610201635

I was very disappointed with this, compared to the previous story. It was trite and boring, the dialogue didn't seem convincing to me. I felt as if I were reading a story, and that's an unforgivable error for a writer.

All in all it's an excellent story. Far higher than the majority of short stories I have read.

And kudos for the Dixie shoutout ;)