Talk:White with Red/@comment-31077845-20170218151707

Figured as much. I feel like the reveal that it was her eye could've been pulled off somehow that was a little more...graceful. Relying on characters just explaining things for exposition should always be a last resort, I figured she was going to slowly pull back until he realized it was an eye (obviously that would be laid out in a much more suspense-building fashion). Still, short and gets the job done.