Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27218970-20151115014328/@comment-24101790-20151115015204

The story was deleted because it is well-below our quality standards. Starting with the basics, a large portion is just a wall-of-text. A typical paragraph is five-ten sentences.

There's numerous capitalization (not capitalizing "I", not capitalizing proper nouns, incorrectly capitalizing words in the middle of sentences, etc.), punctuation (commas being used incorrectly, apostrophes missing from possessive words, etc), wording issues (numerous typos and misspellings) and story issues. The story feels like a spinoff of Club 33: A Dark Secret and the Abandoned by Disney series.