Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26828540-20150816165406/@comment-26475800-20150816173046

Give more details about the hotel, where is it, what is so strange about it, make it creepy. Hotels are creepy places to begin with, you can build a good amount of suspense from just that one area. It will also give details about what is happening with the person and why he starting drinking blood.

Little things like that will make a story so much better.