Talk:Jeff the Killer/@comment-24962859-20140520024934/@comment-24987614-20140526173359

honestly i really dont think so. this story shifts from present to past, and is written in third person. if a person were able to really know if this storyy was real or not, in order for them to have made it believeable, they would have to chenga a few things.

1: The grammar had a good amount of mistakes that i missed a few times

2: If this story begins with "Mystery murders" then how does it go from Mystery to them knowing it was Jeff?

3: if this story was to be believable then they would have to somehow see jeff killing the people and hear jeff saying what he did. how exactly would they do this when jeff was in his house at late night with his family and all of them were killed except for jeff? i understand that it could lead to the conclusion that jeff killed everyone, but how could the writer have known if it was really jeff? in order for that to be known, they would need more evidence. For all known, jeff's family could have neglected to lock the doors and a person walked in and stabbed everyone and jeff was reluctant enough to live because he found a good hiding spot