Talk:Haunted By Purity/@comment-35711173-20180901181436

I don't want to see your story marked for review but you have several English grammar errors.

This is my best correction for the sentence with the question mark about five paragraphs down.

The voice continued to sing for a couple of seconds.

You have many more I would suggest going through with a native English speaker. Your spelling is UK English. I know USA English. Try to find someone who knows UK English to help you if possible.