Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-39126362-20190414202138/@comment-39126362-20190419012830

Thanks again for the feedback!

I already have Grammarly on my Chrome, and I ran it through Scribens. I've tried to write each of the previous two drafts in one sitting before, which probably resulted in rushing and hence the errors (though some of the ones Scriben found were intentional writing moves on my part, though their usefulness or quality is certainly up for debate).

You have a good point about motivation. The next draft will aim to add that and also allow the story to follow it's own flow and help set that Dad's reasons up.

However, it might be a bit before that gets posted; school and such are getting a bit hectic and I'd like to try and give this story some time to breathe.

You've helped a lot and, as you said, taken time off from your own writing. Thank you a third time, haha. I hope the next draft comes out more in that correct direction.