Talk:I Have An Intercom In My Room/@comment-26507513-20151026053939

Ehhhhh, this creepypasta was okay. It was well written but the story just dropped at the end, it started off strong but then the whole paranormal thing kind of put me off and then the "I'm so afraid to go alseep" part made me roll my eyes, it's not orginal and frankly it's just boring. As for the monster/ demon/ ghost I'm really confused on its' motives, I understand the thing appears because he provokes it but why is this thing playing with his intercom in the first place? He doesn't recall any hauntings he has had before or that the his house holds so this haunting is very random. Overall I give it a 4/10, it was well written but to be blunt- the story was boring.