Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25458443-20180720101448/@comment-35711173-20180721033703

Banned in CP,

I agree 100%. Not yet enough there. Let's hope the second draft is more complete.

EtherBot wrote: When you break your hand, you don't fix it yourself, your body does or "another you whose thought process you have no command over, nor insight into"

You can elaborate from there if you wish.

Etherbot,

When you're bleeding out you don't think of who will fix it. Either you do something within the next few seconds or you die. From that standpoint, you "fix it" immediately.

However, discussions on the semantics of bleeding to death are secondary to this draft not having enough to make it a creepypasta.