Talk:Dark Angel/@comment-24565294-20140222021000

Not too bad, though, I think if you pressed the plot out a little more it would be better. And the main kicker, who IS the Dark Angel? Why did she kill Carol, and how did you know who she was? Was she in the story you told, or heard? Did you experience her before? Go into detail a little more. Other than that, It's pretty good! You should check out my pastas, I've written 2 so far.