Talk:Greed/@comment-15034692-20131226034216

You can't just assume that everyone reading has a closet. I don't have one! You know what they say about assuming don't you? Makes an ASS out of U and ME. Also, adding a tie to Slenderman doesn't make it scarier. Please, improve how real this pasta is. Read over it and fix the bits that are inpossible. And change the character. I like the concept, but I have 2 problems with the overall story.