Talk:A Love to Die For

A minor plothole here, a typo there. The one thing I would say I'd like to see changed about this story is, instead of a elementary to middle school transition, a high school to college transition would've made more sense. Other than that it was a great premise. Well worded througout and there was never too much downtime between major events in the story. The moral dilema at the end was very tasty indeed.

7.5/10, will eat again.

I wonder if I could saw through my own neck... with this comb. 12:35, June 20, 2012 (UTC)