Talk:Coilscrew/@comment-35108476-20180325223732

This story has a weak plot and seems like it only exists because you had a cool idea for a character. There is no details on the creation of its main antagonist, no setting at all and the entire story is unbelievable from a logical standpoint. If there was a monster like this how would it roam freely and sneak into peoples houses? Why did it just convieniently break out when the storyteller got there? There’s nothing interesting about this story and it feels forced just to give meaning to your drawing. I liked your beggining because it actually focused on details and didn’t feel rushed, work on quality over quantity