Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25217349-20140723205724/@comment-25217349-20140723220341

CassistRabbit wrote: The-high-priestess wrote: Fixed the text to be more easily read, thanks.

I'm not sure what you mean about the paragraphs, specifics would help (i.e. I was intentional about paragraphs). Specifics about spelling errors would help too. I use a spellchecker and I've read over it multiple times and haven't seen anything misspelled.

Your fourth critique makes me think you actually didn't read the piece, because there's nothing in the story that deals with friendship vengeance.

Thanks anyway. I did read every word of it, as a matter of fact. Responding to a critique by saying I'm basically wrong in what I said is not a good response, by the way. The post you quoted was to the poster before you, not to you. It seemed like you skimmed over the story because you said something about sisters when there are clearly no sisters in the piece, and there is a reason the abusers face is deformed. Thanks for your feedback though, parts of it were helpful.