Talk:The Cycle/@comment-26883349-20150812164632/@comment-5085906-20150812211727

Thank you. This is actually my second pasta and I didn't expect anyone to like it. Even from my point of view, it feels rushed.

Also, the pasta's lengthy because I tried to add as much stuff I could so that I could distract the reader from the plot twist. I believe they're called 'red herrings' in this case. I don't really know how much it worked.