Talk:Dream Death/@comment-27410724-20151216195405

....Ehhhhh, okay. I'll just jump right to it-- this story is not scary. Please, elaborate! We want to know more! I know sometimes short pastas can be powerful, but this offers so room for theories-- no food for thought! It just states it and gets it over with! No buildup, no story, no suspense! Surely you can right more than 3 paragraphs, right?