Talk:World Peace/@comment-5733573-20180520194637

I love this! There is just enough information to tease at something terrible while leaving the rest to the imagination. Very well done!

If I had to criticize one thing, it would be paragraph formatting and structure. At the very least, there should probably be only one space between paragraphs, and there were times when I wished the existing paragraphs were split up into two. But honestly, these are such minor things. I found this pasta very exciting and refreshing.

Dare I ask if there's a sequel or series in the works?