Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37554505-20181121225755/@comment-37554505-20181122151729

Thank you both for the advice, NedWolfkin and DrBobSmith.

So, do you think I should remove the 2nd person POV altogether or try to improve on it? I also think I could make my story longer, therefore giving more exposition and build-up, hopefully enhancing the ending. I'd be happy to hear what you think about these decisions.