Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29791712-20150919045452/@comment-26399604-20150922023552

Thesplitpersonality710,

I did note a few errors. "[]" note where I found the errors and will contain the correction within:

+“[They] are not of importance, unfortunately. Listen, I can be in a billion places right now, but I cannot further waste my time and energy here...."

+But at the time I was too young to even comprehend what had gone [terribly] ill in my family.

The story provided a decent backstory with enough insight and it I felt like there was a well balanced layer of details throughout story as a whole. It's always interesting to see how people fare against demonic forces and if they are able to outthink them. Overall, I enjoyed the story very much. Continue to keep up the good work. Look foward to reading more of your work!