User blog comment:Elizabeth The Killer/I'm VERY pissed off now./@comment-24678691-20140316194207

"I've written 1 pasta" Chill out. The first ones are never the best.

"it didn't have any flaws in it" It got deleted, so obviously it did have flaws.

"It was short" Now, don't get me wrong. Some pastas are, what, FIVE scentences long? But that's because those five scentences were all they needed to be scary. Take "Vengeful Child", for instance. One of the creepiest ones, and it's only a couple lines long!!!! Maybe your story needed to be longer to be scary. Keep writing. Don't be discouraged. Nobody can get it right the first time.