Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180430095534/@comment-5733573-20180506213233

EmperorinYellow wrote: Maybe don't say Invasion of the Body Snatchers outright as that could be too much foreshadowing. The title of the text already makes reference to the year, so go to stating something about him going to the movies and stuff. I don't think the average creepypasta reader is going to have Cold War paranoia on the brain, nor do I think Invasion of the Body Snatchers is the big reveal. To me, you need to know exactly what's on the boy's mind in order to understand the story.