Talk:Elevator Safety Guidelines/@comment-25052433-20140806004801

This one is really hard to critique, since it isn't really a story. However, I really enjoyed it.

What went right:

-I really liked the way you mixed up the mundane rules with the bizarre rules. Really kept you guessing.

-I also really liked the rule that suddenly shifted to present tense, the one about how help isn't coming.

What could have improved my experience.

-Nothing. Honestly, for what it is, it's perfect. A creepy list of elevator rules.

10/10 as far as elevator rules go. Can't really score it as a story though.