Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31073921-20170308131720/@comment-25458443-20170318131311

I disagree I thought it was neat! Disturbing and weird and you catch enough of the story through what he's saying anyway, his dialogue clearly has enough exposition in it that it'd feel kind of clunky if you had the story happen and then have him tell you the story after the fact. I personally think the concept of crazy people who kill and torture you just because they want to scary enough on it's own when void of context and this breaks that down to it's bare essentials and delivers it in an interesting way! Certainly not a tale but still genuinely uncomfortable and I think that can constitute enough for it's place on the site...