Talk:Canis Latran's Jungle Story/@comment-24085584-20140306003658

Wow!! This is an excellent pasta. Did you write it, or find it?

I saw a few grammatical errors here and there. Like "your" instead of "you're" and others of the such, but overall the spelling is good. Punctuation is a little iffy here and there, but not bad. Detail was excellent.

3.8/5

Keep it up.