Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25535144-20141013223937/@comment-25425579-20141014214635

WOW! This story was incredible and definitely unique. One small error I noticed was that in the 7th paragraph you say 'And judging by it's yellowing pages...', but 'its' does not need an apostrophe. Fix that along with the other mistakes people pointed out and you'd be good to go. I think this is PoTM material!