Talk:Judgement Day/@comment-35071950-20190522013335

Im not sure which I like better, this or "Just Us And The Trees"! It's a brilliant and amazingly well-written story, dude! 8)

I loved the ending, it has to be my favorite part.

'''“To tell you that judgement day has arrived. To tell you that poetic justice has caught up to your lying, cheating, sinning, and murdering at last. You shall pay, Aspenclius. You shall meet your fate. Oh, you shall meet your fate." Aspenclius blinked and Alexandra was gone.'''

'''Just beyond where Alexandria had just stood, the brilliant lights became closer. Now he noticed that it was not a farm fire, because the lights were moving and they were climbing up the palace's hill. Aspenclius could see the lights were torches, and the mob carrying them was marching by the thousands. The fire roared and united with the mob's singular chant in a beautiful cacophony of smoldering rage. This unity rang out, shouting one clear word.'''

"REVOLUTION!"

This part is so flipping well written! You're gonna become a great writer.