Talk:A Window of Better Days/@comment-4470175-20160803010222

An interesting, and for the most part good read. The pasta is well written and the story is good - quite clever the way it turns out. However, the pasta severely lacks detail in a lot of places; when describing the silouette, the void, the ending etc. They were all lacking in terms of description and detail, and it left the story feeling a little empty in places. The other problem I have is the lack of originality - I've read so many pastas of a watcher, watching over someone, and that someone eventually becoming the watcher. It's tiring.

A good example of a tired genre.

7/10