Talk:Gassed/@comment-4849011-20170105000100

This is one of my all-time favorites. It’s well-written and avoids using clichés. Instead of relying on blood and gore, it uses atmosphere and evocative details. There was excellent use of description throughout, especially with the mask’s appearance. The narrator was personable, and his describing his issues & personality traits made him honest and relatable. I also love the idea of a ghost turning out to be a protective, comforting figure.