Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25930029-20150107115747/@comment-24304936-20150107125959

First of all, it's "inform" not "imform".

Secondly, there's no story at all here and what is here makes no sense.

A couple having a discussion about yesterday. Guy breaks up with the girl via phone then says "Hey, come over so I can do it again!" Girl says "Ok!" The end.

There's no build-up. You don't give me time to get to know the characters (or care about their plight). All in all, you have a ways to go with this until it can be on the main site.