Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27190570-20151111231520/@comment-25226524-20151112003624

With a quick skim I see a lot of punctuation and capitalization issues with your dialogue. Reading over our Style Guide is a good place to start (pay close attention to the "fun with punctuation" section). If you need to edit the above post when you realize some of the issues, just hover your mouse over the the bottom right corner and a little button will appear.