Talk:Villanelle for the Sick/@comment-24150179-20150824100702

Never thought I'd see a villanelle on here. In the second stanza, the first line doesn't follow the rhyme scheme, but you probably meant it that way, which is fine. I also wrote a villanelle before about an insane person but it wasn't that creepy. It was just this guy trying to convince the reader that he wasn't insane. But yeah, this is a nice villanelle. I especially liked the line, "''For crimson is her tomb, her bed." ​''