Talk:A Noel in Black/@comment-25941663-20151221215145/@comment-25941663-20151222000918

The scene with the werewolf and the priest was too fast to build suspense. Sure, as an image it is scary, but in the world of horror stories you usually need more than that. The priest wasn't developed much as a character (and there was no need to) so we didn't feel scared for him, there was no sense of mystery as we knew what was coming and the suspense building part went by too quickly.

All of these fit the story perfectly, but they just didn't add creepiness to it.