Talk:BEN Drowned/@comment-24466828-20150103214447

"10/10 best creeypasta ever" -commenter. Okay people let's settle down for a second. This is a good story as a whole but you guys keep on overlooking its flaws.

While this story provides scares the first time you read it, it loses its scares the second time you read it. I read it a few years ago and it terrified me greatly (probably because everything scared me at that age) but now when I read it I can tell that it has lost it's touch. That's the same with the footage. The footage looks convincing but It's really not that scary if you break it down. It's just a montage of photoshopped glitches.

Plus a long story isn't always a good story. In order to write a good long story, you have to keep it non-repetitive, not linger on a subject too long, and make it look like the story continues to progress as it moves along. Most of this story suffers from these problems. For example, the nonstop retelling of incidents that happen in the game get really old. Sometimes this isn't that much of a problem considering how the story words it but in this story, it just feels too tame. Besides a few tense moments, not much in this story made me jump out of my seat and it didn't give me the lasting impression which NES Godzilla did.

You guys need to stop wih the 10/10 ratings. This story doesn't deserve anything higher then a 9/10. I'm not saying this is bad. I just think it's overrated.

I'm not saying you have to obey what I say but next time you review this story, try to acknowledge my points and see if you agree with me. No one in this comment section has been bringing up these points. That's why I decided to do it.