Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180827215503/@comment-36393004-20180829220025

Reworked my spacing and reworded a few things. I am thinking I need to add something to the end to bring a sense of urgency to his search for information about his father. This might tie in the last segment, add more creep factor, and overall spice to the story. Maybe have Brian dream about his father? I will think on that tonight and see what I can come up with.