Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32289854-20180308164744/@comment-32289854-20180322182017

BloodySpghetti wrote:

Here's something I have to let out of my system, please bare with me, I'm sick of PC culture that has been running rampant currently all over, so this gay couple thing seems forced to me, right now, out of a personal bias. Not a bad thing, just needed to vent my frustration over social politicing.

Them being gay has nothing to do with the quality of the story, this isn't the place the vent about your personal opinions. This is a place to tighten up the writing and make it a better story over all. That being said, the rest of your comments are valid and something I'll keep in mind as I continue to tweak the story. I feel like I'm quickly approaching the final draft of this story.