Talk:Holder of Putridity/@comment-25219182-20151112202912

I certainly see where you're coming from and I can tell you had a lot of fun writing this, but I didn't see any clear motivation for someone to try this ritual, other than the fact that you told them to. It sounds way too risky with no payout or even a real cure. Just a "maybe" at the end... If you add in some incentive for stalking a receptionist and waking this foul thing up, I think the impact would be a lot heavier. Tell people if they risk their health for life, they get something so tempting in return that they seriously can't decide what they would do. It'll be fun.