Talk:Jeff the Killer/@comment-24970491-20140523021053

..... To describe this in a few words, This is a mediocre fanfiction for me. It's not good, It's not bad, just average. That is all. The story suffers from so much unexplainable plot holes, and lack of character description, like, Who the fuck is the bullies?! They just come out nowhere like an unwanted comedian. What I like about the story is the detail, It's well detailed, thus give us some creepy parts of the story. Another thing I like about this pasta is the ending. That's all.... can't say much about this one just disappointing, and plain average...

Final Verdict= 5/10