Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20190103071325/@comment-35711173-20190104192132

Bloody Spaghetti,

With the Wizard being severely handicapped by lack of a decent computer, I don't think we can read much into his notes above. I'm sure that the horror will fleshed out sufficiently without being detailed.

I can see a paragraph that deals with enough of the memories. The real horror is the father's fear of what he will do to his own kids. You don't need to go into clinical descriptions for a fear. You display emotions.

Personally, I would rather show than tell a psychiatrist.

Dr. Bob