Talk:Razor's Edge/@comment-25101672-20140629064454

I'm really really happy I found this one!

I liked a lot your writing and how you gave us a lot of detail. As for grammar, I found no mistakes at all.

The ending really surprised me, but as said before I felt a little rushed. But no worries, Amy killing herself made me happy. No, I'm not crazy lol it just was shocking and different. She didn't try the cliche of trying to kill the creature.

Also, I liked that you choose the fork instead of a knife.

I'll give this one 10/10. Keep on writing!