Talk:The Beast of Genov/@comment-24040907-20150226225833

This one is really, really sweet. It touches the reader’s heart in a way that is seldom found in Creepypastas. It made me smile the entire time.



I liked that the creature was benevolent instead of evil.



I especially like paragraph 5, where you describe Ruth falling ill while James recovers. The transitions between descriptions of one character versus another were done very well.



Although the story was short, the imagery and pacing make it feel nice and long. Toward the end, one begins to wonder how Ruth survived. Did the Beast of Genov only plan on giving her the sickness for a short time, or did her fearlessness and devotion to James keep her alive? And also, what caused James to fall ill in the first place?



Although I do have questions about the story, most of those questions are drowned out by the lovely sense of closure in the last few lines. Excellent work!