Talk:Peace/@comment-24281984-20141120000030

I liked this one a lot. The idea behind it became apparent quickly, and while perhaps not the most original inspiration, it was still exceptionally well-written and genuienly frightening and gruesome to read. I didn't see any mistakes (unless the "her" pronoun is meant to be capitalized) and it doesn't use any cliches that I can name. Very well done, deserving of a nomination and I hope you get more feedback in the future.