Talk:Sandstorm/@comment-17385488-20140822145407

Modern society would see something like this and think to themselves "Ooh, a pasta named "Sandstorm"? I'm going to go to the comments section and type 'Darude - Sandstorm' just to see how many I can anger!" Of course, I'm not one of those people. Now as for this pasta, you had a great flow of events as the narrator explains what happens to him throughout the course of the plot. In particular, the ending was what really got me freaked. He heard the figure speak to him in his voice telling him not to fire, but he shot him anyways, only for blood to start flowing from his own chest.

My main concern that I have is "What would have happened if the narrator showed mercy towards the figure instead of just shooting him?" If that would have been answered, I would have given this pasta a higher score.

Final score: 7.9/10