Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-38024081-20191117141536

I'm not sure if this concept sounds too similar to some films I know or is too cliche. Someone is out and they get in an accident. They wake up in hospital and when they get to their apartment it's filled with dead bodies. Then, someone comes out and kills them. They wake up in hospital again. It keeps happening in different ways until until they break the cycle. It has kind of draws insipration from Happy Death Day (what i know about the film) and Yesterday. I may make it like a diary, but I'm not sure. I just need reccomendations on how to make it beter more than anything. 