Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24768939-20140403082514

Just remeber to say yes.

Tammi was 3 years old when her older sister, Anneliese, died of a comma and her mother and father died by a drunk driver. She had to go to an adoption center for 5 years. she always asked,

"Do you want to play with me!?"

The other children would always reply "No."

Tammi would always hide in the corner. She hated being around all the other kids. All of them hated her. They all said they were too old.

When Tammi was 8 she was finally adopted by a man named David. He ended up abusing Tammi. Tammi would still always ask "Will you play with me?" David would always answer "No" like the kids at the adoption center. Tammi would always hide in her room. If she was hungry or thirsty she would sneak into the kitchen and run back into her room so she wouldn't get attacked by David.

When Tammi turned 16 David said he would go take her to a special place for her sweet 16.

"Thank you father!" Tammi said.

"Whatever." said David.

David blind folded Tammi and put her into his car. After 15 minutes of driving, David finally came to a stop. He kept the blind fold on Tammi and helped her out of the car. Tammi stood there. 3 minutes later she heard a car engine, and a car drive away. Tammi took the blind fold of. She was in the middle of no where on a deserted road. Before she could turn around, Tammi was hit by a car.

1 week later David decided to turn on the telivision and watch the news.

"16 year old Tammi Reviland went missing 1 week ago, and just today we found her dead on the side of the road." David leaned toward the TV and smiled. "We put her in a coffin and we were going to have a funeral for her today for her cousins and aunts and uncles and all of her alive family members. Wierdly, 2 team members that were helping with the funeral put the coffin in the church this morning, and they opened it real quick, they turned around for 1 minute, and when they turned back around, Tammi was no where to be seen." David's sat up straight. He was scared half to death. Then heard a roaring sound behind him. He looked behind him just to see...

Tammi was standing right there. Her blonde hair was covered in blood. Her white funeral dress was also drenched in blood. Her eyes were missing, and they were bleeding. She was holding a chainsaw.

"Come play with me!" She smiled an evil, bloody, huge smile. The chainsaw started to roar and she ripped up David into a million little pieces.

Jamie Dyliana was one of the mean girls at the adoption center.

"How did that freakshow Tammi get adopted before me! I just don't get it!" Jamie yelled at her friend Kyra. Kyra shrugged her shoulders. Then her face expression changed from bored to scared. The bloody Tammi was behind her. Kyra started to back up. "What the hell is wrong with you!?" Shouted Jamie. Kyra pounted a shaky fingure behind Jamie. Jamie looked behind her and saw Tammi's bloody figure.

"T-Tammi!?" Jamie said silently.

Tammi tilted her head. "Come play with me!"

Tammi started the chainsaw and stabbed Jamie with it 100 times.

Next time someone asks "Do you want to play with me?"

Say yes.

or else. 