Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28088262-20160304184732/@comment-28834987-20160304193502

Rins I think this is one of your best stories so far. I loved the shift Mel undergoes from prey to predator and despite it being a potentially sensitive topic this story is actually rather funny (I know, I'm going to hell)! It reflects the ridiculousness of teenage girls going anorexic to try and impress boys. Great story!!