Talk:A Touch on the Sole of Your Foot/@comment-5733573-20180525223841

This started out as a cool idea, but it's too unrealistic. No one is going to stay in bed after realizing that the sensation isn't just a fluke, let alone through a violent attack like striking. REM sleep is not a stage you can "approach" while you're still awake. You have to have already been alseep for quite some time before you enter the REM stage, and it's impossible to be conscious of doing this. "Clack" is not a sound associated with the tearing of flesh. Speaking of which, in order for something to tear this guy's foot off, he would also have to be held down securing from the other end. On a related note, supposing a foot has been ripped off, the last thing you're going to be aware of is what sounds are coming in from outside. Your focus is going to be on the pain and literally nothing else. All of this made the story really hard to enjoy.