Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37041992-20181004223948/@comment-9041013-20181009192127

Still needs work, why did he stay hidden when he saw that it was some scrawny pale kid in his house, perhaps he wanted to get out of his hiding spot and beat up the intruder and then noticed the knife that made him hesitate...

hmmm

Also, it's your belly that hurts when you have a "stomach ache" for the most part, rather than the actual stomach. The belly is the area below the chest, the stomach is an organ that is a sack filled with digestive fluid just below the ribcage. What hurts is around the guts, for the most part.