Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26901754-20150819155057/@comment-26901754-20150820213922

Thank you very much, really appreciate you took the time too read it.

Levi, saw your point on the format, and i see the mistakes, will work on it. As to what the darkness is, i left a clue as to what it kind of is when i wrote about the hole on the hull of the captain's ship, and related it to something similar that had happened to the other ship, Pilgrim, but you could say it`s alien. Was that relation relatively easy to spot or not at all? Would appreciate your reply.

Seamus  thank you very much for your input, i see exactly what you mean, i will work on that, as english is not my first language writing is a bit harder.