Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180622233242/@comment-35911608-20180623235657

That was really good! Imma give some kudos to this one.

I guess if I wanna be the one to rock the boat, "fallen" and "shrunken" felt like a weird rhyme to me. But it's still great overall, so if you don't change it, I'm totally happy with that, along with everyone else here it seems :)