Talk:Twin/@comment-23970366-20131002091836

The biggest problem with this pasta is that it has no build-up. You can't just throw the reader into the scenario, at least not without building up a safe and normal atmosphere first. If you started out with the ordinary life of the protagonist first and THEN set up the stalker story step for step, it surely would've been much better. I'm not an expert, but a good build-up is the first step of writing a good creepypasta. Maybe you could consider rewriting this one.