Talk:Covering Tracks/@comment-26391779-20150518150101

I liked part 2 a lot more than part 1 and I think you really listened to the comments given there. The only thing I didn't really like about it is the last part. If you ask me, the sentence "I remember the foul beast raking my clothes into shreds." would have done the job perfectly on its own. To mention the penis seemed a little forced.

But apart from that I enjoyed it a lot. :)