Talk:The Monsters Who Watch Us/@comment-28263160-20160421024525/@comment-5931022-20160603224411

Thank you for your feedback. The launguage was actually one of my biggest downfalls in my opinion on this story, i didn't actually realize that until Murcas pointed out something about. I do dream about remaking this story, but i'm kinda busy with other projects. Anyways, thanks again.