Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30771515-20170123074702/@comment-31532017-20170129140120

I haven't read the story completely yet, and it seemed interesting; but the spacing extra between each chat members which I find to be a hindrance, and should be dealt with pronto.

Besides that, I have no clue what the term "MHS Class" meant though. However, given the nature of chat rooms; this story overall did felt somewhat like a chat room.

Though I'm highly inexperience in this type of pasta; as such I recommend that you should ask inquire someone else's thoughts on it; especially Empy as he's written over 60+ like stories.