Talk:Meek/@comment-25634916-20141107023912

Wow, I really enjoyed this very unique creepypasta!! It was very intriguing and descriptive. Let's get into details.

The description was absolutely magnificent. I was listening to this rather than reading it because I had another tab open, but I had to close the other tab and close my eyes so that I could feel like I was actually there. Everything about how you described the revolting and messy scene was perfect.

The storyline was very well done as well. I liked how you didn't make anything supernatural, making the story even more realistic. I have to admit, it wasn't the greatest I've read, but I've read a lot. The twist at the end concerning the mother and daughter was genius, and the way Meek dismissed the issue and turned to his computer truly brought out the monster which formed in him.

There's one problem I have with this. The description was vivid and enthralling, as I mentioned before, but I think you used too much of it. For example, you wrote a big paragraph about the bathroom even though the significance of the bathroom was small (just a glance at it from Meek). Try not to make too much description; you can do just fine without it.

Overall, an awesome creepypasta which scores high on my charts! 9.5/10.