Talk:Sign a Contract/@comment-24104596-20140619021000

First of all, the name "Mr. Satan" made me immediately think of South Park. Having that image in your head when reading creepypasta ruins some of the immersion, but that's no ones' fault but mine.

I liked how this pasta started out and I thought the concept was very original. When Snipes (the masochist) gets dragged down into the cellar however, I feel that it went downhill quite a bit. Very vague descriptions, odd/unlikely actions and the plot suddenly became extremely rushed. I also found the ending to be weird and somewhat confusing. While a really good pasta is shrouded in a bit of mystery, ending it like this just felt lazy.

But like I said, I really liked the beginning. 4/10