Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20150217025844/@comment-4893169-20150221232234

Thank you so much for your straightforward critique. If you're wondering about why people found the Lurker threatening was because it was so different in shape--resembling a horrifying Kraken thing with a lot of  serpentine tentacles. If it was somewhat humanoid in form, it probably wouldn't be as scary.

The McKeley Brothers first appeared in this story> The Canaries

Hopefully, it would clear some things up if you read The Canaries first.

Tullugaq is a last name. Kevin Tullugaq. He's parents are rich enough to own a fancy tree house campground as well as send him to some neighboring dimension to attend a foreign school. No, he's not mentioned in the prior story, although it takes place in the same universe, and it happens the same year as this story.

Yes, Russel McKeley is rather bitchy because he's a mega, show-off, athletic jock who has this mocking and sarcastic attitude toward 'dorks,' especially toward his little brother Nate who's into MLP (something Russel really despises).

I tried to make him realistic and more like someone you would know from real life, even though you might not find him very likable.

I guess if the tree house is close to the ground, s centaur can get in and out of it okay.

Summer Break

Korrigan--Wikipedia

Dr. Doodle