Talk:Where Did the Cat Go?/@comment-5733573-20180607160759

Really good story. The idea and the plotting are great.

A couple of things: please consider cutting the last sentence. It just spells things out too much and adds humor where I don't think you want it. Also, its not "ok" but "okay." Finally, there are places where the POV shifts from the mother to the son and back again. I can't help but feel that this would be a strong story if you picked a single POV and stuck with it.

Apart from those things, this is quite enjoyable, and the pictures you pain are very clear. Nice work!