Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30861466-20180505175756/@comment-9041013-20180505195511

I can't give you a constructive piece of criticism since this virtually has nothing going on for it. "My dad had sex with a vampire and became a vampire himself" followed by "bad occurrence in my life caused by my monster dead" repeat the last thing a few times. "lazy ending statement"

So, yeah, you've nothing here. Just a silly bunch of words with nothing related to good storytelling, horror or humor.

This is just empty.

And 40+18=58