Talk:You Never Visit Anymore/@comment-25699447-20140712113108/@comment-7706473-20140713070308

Sorrow is a more enjoyable thing to read about, even then fear; or so I believe. I feel you did a fantastic job mixing the line between the two and melding them into a new emotion; a horror born of sorrow, a fear that comes from a mother's regret; I'd recommend against changing the ending as it worked perfectly for me; of course, if you feel strongly do as you like, but again I would like to say that this story clicked immensely.

You're very welcome; I like to think that the least we writers can do is leave good feedback. It's enough to write, but comments, good ones, make it even sweeter. Thank you for sharing it!