Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27246594-20151119020222/@comment-27246594-20151119180106

Thank you! Yeah, this is SUPER rough so things like paragraphs/grammar/title will develop, but this is different style of writing for me so I felt like (as you noted) I was having trouble getting the scary going.

I have a rough idea in my mind and i am having difficulties on how to translate that and how quick to develop bad things happening. Also, i feel like i need to use more descriptive words.

Thank you for your feedback though! I really do appreciate it.