Talk:The Endeavor/@comment-25052433-20150719225242/@comment-26326346-20150720020254

I'm sorry that the twist fell flat. The twist and the ending is an important part of any pasta for me, those are the things that I always want to be the best of the best in particular. I had hoped that referencing that pen and pad in the beginning would have made the twist feel less forced, I had also hoped that Matthew being able to talk his way out of losing could have accounted for a twist in and of itself as talking the Devil out of something is a feat that I can't think of any character managing.

That said, I thank you for the praise :) I'm also glad that you had a good time with the rest of the pasta. In a lot of ways, you helped this story exist, because it would literally have never existed without the contest as the contest itself was what gave me the idea, so thank you for that.