Talk:Kagome Kagome/@comment-5173931-20141121135207

To be scary, creepypasta must be believable. "Kagome Kagome" is not. While I could overlook, let's say, removing all the senses in "Gateway of the Mind", there are so many different things that kill this story for me. Anatomical (cerebellum IS a part of a brain) and historical errors (Nazi and Soviet scientists working together? Seriously?) just scream "I haven't done any research!". Also, mixing an experiment and ritual pasta doesn't work well.

The cherry on top, however, is claiming that the events in the story really happened. As I said, this creepypasta isn't believable at all. Using such a crude method to make us think it's real simply gives an opposite effect.

Oh, and in "Gateway of the Mind" it's said that the experiment took place in 1983. Again, lack of research...