Talk:Willy Wonka Beta Tape/@comment-24941631-20140830045446

It was decent up until the oompa loompas. Having him say they were illegal african slaves was absurd and more comical than scary due to the fact that he just had to mention it's illegal. The way you recieved the tapes is extremely absurd and far fetched as well. The whole point of these lost tape episodes is you dont know if it's real or not. Squidward's suicide while being a poorly made pasta pulled this off nicely. Until someone reposted it with a sort of epilouge you didn't know where the hell the tape came from or why someone had done it which is what made it creepy. Whereas this is obviously the writers intent which takes away the creepiness factor. Also the ending had so much potemtial that was lost. You could've ended it with Charlie finding out Willy was using these tours to kidnap children and use them to make chocolate but instead you made Wonka a child rapist which leads to plotholes such as why it was neccesary to include the blood rive. Stuff like that is meant to be a foreshadowing not just thrown in there to sound creepy.