Talk:In the Closets/@comment-27574376-20160509233238/@comment-27574376-20160509233727

Update: I read the story.

It wasn't bad, but it could use improvement. More details on why these messages and the screaming were occuring may actually give the reader a better idea of the story. It could also add to the suspense.

It was well written, and I liked the concept.

~6/10