Talk:Christmas Eve Night/@comment-35711173-20190104064810/@comment-37366948-20190104230931

Thank you for the feedback. It's not so much issues with my English, as it is that sometimes when I write I base it off of how it sounds when I read it. When I read a story that's supposed to be horror-related, I add pauses when I read to give it more dramatic effect. I guess it rubs off on my writing, too, since I tend to add more commas than I should.

I used the second website link you provided, and though there were actually no run-on sentences despite your words, it did assist me in finding problems of the story that I skipped over. I plan on adding more to the story in order to have more of an impact as well, in order to make it more enjoyable.

Again, thank you for the feedback, and have a great day.