Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24101790-20140514034832/@comment-24101790-20140514192805

Thank you for the input! I had originally intended for the rag man to speak a little more informally with some colloquialisms, but was worried it might make him appear friendly which in contrast with his story would be drastic. ("Come on y'all! Sit by the fire while I spin you a yarn." ~ actual intended introduction *shudder*.) I wanted not only his clothes to be run down to rags, but his personality as well. (This is why I sometimes wonder if I am being pretentious.)

Thanks for helping me through this, I'll probably put this story up Sunday. (I have a tendency to fall into a bit of a schedule with posting stories...) If you think of anything else that bugged/annoyed you about the story, lemme know.

Also Bandy-Legged Beasts was a good read!