Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26990009-20170922081343/@comment-7673575-20170922085909

There are still plenty of errors. Please do as I said, and read some pastas from Suggested Reading category.

I've seen that you had plenty of your stories deleted, and mostly by Empy, which means that they weren't up to QS. And the first one was 2 years ago, which means you've worked little to none on your writing since then.

I'm telling you this out of best intentions. I can only show you the way, but the journey is yours to make. Read more. Educate yourself in the noble ways of pen.

Sure, I can help you fix some dents, but I can't rework your entire story for you. What's the point then?

Please, be patient, and take your time with your stories. Don't make the same mistake I did; it might not end up as good for you as it did for me.

Please, use the next 24 hours to rework the story (yes, again) and then post it here again. I'll review it then.