Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10789912-20160822181355/@comment-25052433-20160825020458

Well, I am a bit late to the party, as it seems that all the good advice, anything that I would have likely pointed out, has already been noted. I will simply reiterate that I have enjoyed this series of yours, and am happy to see that you're still working on it. I think that once you address the issues that have been pointed out above, this will be ready for the site. Excellent work, as always.