Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25941663-20180803171503/@comment-34541920-20180803183353

BloodySpghetti wrote: Uhh alternate history is nice, but this is just a rushed thingy done seemingly just for the sake of doing.

It is way too rushed, lacking in details and has nothing in particularly scary going on for it. What is the creature, why did the Nazis try to kill their experiment beasts? Why does the Russian get along so well with none Russian locals

A lot of expension and overall writing has to be done to make something out of this. Thanks for this review, as it shows more of the things I messed up on

I plan to make a second draft, (hopefully it'll be better), so this won't be the final product

Again, thanks!