Talk:Fluorescent Lights/@comment-28423057-20160713100728

Well written, but unsatisfying. Who put them in the room, and why? And why all of them? Why kill off his friends? Why did his light switch not work? What was the insignia supposed to mean? Maybe I'm just jaded, but I really can't stand pastas which don't at least vaguely explain or hint at the why or how of what's going on, anymore.

I also think the guy was a complete jerkbag for leaving the girl behind. Minds can be healed; there are quite a few people out there who have gone through experiences just as, if not more so, traumatic than what she did. Most of them managed to resume a normal life, with or without professional help.

And who the heck could sleep mere hours after watching their best friends, including the woman he loved, be horrifically killed or driven insane? I don't think I'd sleep until I passed out on my feet.

I really wanted to like this one, but it just doesn't suit my tastes. But again, it's really well written, and a lot of effort was obviously put into it.