Talk:Memoirs of a Cam-Girl - PART 3: Enid's Logs FILTERED/@comment-24966092-20150606215846

This has gone from "had potential" to "absolutely fucking ridiculous." The first two logs were legitimately hilarious, and "I'm coming" is funnier than it is scary. The fact that your main character is going to "save his girlfriend and kill some fucking monster" after having a steak quesadilla shows that this writing is irreverant and pointless. Your writing becomes more irrelevant the more I read of it. The fact that MCP read your first story was nothing more than luck and there is no way that he will read the rest of it if he respects himself and his fans.