Talk:The Sneak/@comment-4665292-20170606101958

Pretty good, although the repetition of the word "door" got a bit, well, repetitive, as was the writing in general. I was expecting there to be something in the box the third time, when he didn't open it, and that whatever would be inside would get into the house as a result, which would've been slightly better in my opinion since then the box itself would've been more relevant and creepy. 5.5/10, I guess, since it was alright. Could've been more suspenseful, and the ending didn't really fit; I mean, it's a pretty huge overreaction to just run out of the house shirtless and get on a plane. They could've captured the thing on a bedsheet or something, or killed it, or called the police about an intruder or whatever, and that'd have been more realistic.