Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5614678-20160821073311/@comment-5614678-20160821163917

It's quite alright. You review was tough, but fair. I found it to be excellent, even if I don't agree with every point raised. For example, I think the exposition is necessary because I want to immerse the reader in the story's setting. But I think you're right in that the descriptions might benefit from being more personalized. If I don't change it in this story, I'll try to get that across in the next one I write.

And you guessed right, the town is indeed Innsmouth. The name is never said, but you can figure it out pretty easily.