Talk:Skinwalker/@comment-28094476-20160330213010

It would have been much more believable if you knew anything about the outdoors. Deer don't have dens and you don't hunt coyotes with a .22 or a shotgun. Tornadoes don't tend to happen in the woods too often either and why was there a schoolhouse in the middle of them? I liked the story but some work on setting and research should have been made to make a much better pasta.