Talk:Hell's Sinking/@comment-25630269-20141128160141

An intriguing pasta coupled with a few adrenaline rushed events. I love how the way the pasta was writen to describe the setting of the main character. However, there is a few flaws such as the way u personafied the weather conditions of the island. For instance, when the main character first awaken on the island, he was unsure about the weather being daytime. So it's kind of unsettling for the main character to depict the weather to be nighttime before the island crumbled in his successful escape, don't u think? Despite the flaws and the grammatical errors, the pasta was a tasty meal for my night and I'm looking forward to see more of your pastas. I would definitely rate it but i prefer to not disclose my results as I would love to see more of your work in the future and definitely I would like to see u include the "Project Sofiya" pasta into the wiki. Keep up the good work lad, and u might just be a writer someday !