Talk:The Walk Back/@comment-4470175-20160625000444

The creepypasta is very well written - VERY well written. It's almost too well written that it gets lost in its own eloquence and detail; it can begin to confuse the reader. The pasta's biggest strength is also its downfall. The eloquent and detailed language gives the pasta personality and separates it from the rest. However, it eventually reaches the point where no conclusions can be made. The ending didn't make much sense, and many of the descriptions within were crushed under the weight of their own eloquence.

The journey may look beautiful, but it's trippy, and ultimately leads nowhere.

7/10