Talk:Dad.txt/@comment-34882712-20190211163046

5/10, it had great detail, but a lack of creepiness and sadness in the father's suicide note. I feel like the vocabulary wasn't fully in detail and the fact that I didn't feel any sort of scared until the suicide note, but it was a great story though! You need to improve on the creepy side of things and to make the story more detailed. ^-^