Talk:Penpal/@comment-3541151-20150111232521

I guess I'll re critique this, if that is indeed a word. The story has interesting  mysterious and a dissapointing payoff. You predict that going in from the strange Pen pal concept. The stories are interesting and hyper realistic, and that more than makes up for what I consider a lousy ending. I guess it wasn't as much a mystery as I initially thought, but the general ending is still very predictable. Its overwhelming in both nauseating and disappointment. Its well told even at the end though, despite being dissapointing it was interesting. I can't let my disappointment fuel my critique, I'm a fair critic. While I hate the wrap up, I give credit where credit is due. A weall told stranger danger saga. Albeit too long and complex for it's wrap up. 8/10