Talk:A Mirror and a Nursery/@comment-24996913-20140905075523

So the baby was possessed by the thing in the mirror? Immediately, I knew something was up with the baby, as it was mentioned right off the bat, which could be a good thing if done properly. I think you jumped the gun with the element of surprise. The story also seemed a bit rushed. If slowed down and extended, I think it could be much better. The plot of this is in the fog. I'm still not able to grasp it, but I can see its potential within reach. Deepen the plot, draw out the baby's possession, and you'll have yourself a good pasta.