Talk:Into the Psyche/@comment-37138398-20181009024358

Amazing. Extremely descriptive, the imagery was nice, and it was genuinly scary (I'll never see mirrors the same again). The only problem I had with this is the fact that the narrator makes comparisons with stuff he knows, not stuff that we know. For example, the quote "It turned to face Norman, scowled at him like his third grade teacher, Mrs. Viscol, did when a student was misbehaving" is fine, and I had a general idea, but if you wrote something more comparable to our standpoint, like (It turned to face Norman, scowled at him like a mother scolding a misbehaving child," then the reader could sympathize more. Or I could be pulling all this out of my ass, and I don't know shit. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ . Congratulations of Pasta of the Month, and I personally rate this a 10/10.