Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24101790-20161008211233/@comment-24101790-20161011203123

Diexilius wrote: I'm afraid I'm not a good enough grammar Nazi to do this, but this surely deserves a review. I think it's pretty good with the "I'm not crazy, am I?" take, although I don't like the ending that much, could have been done a little better.

I'm trying to leave it ambiguous, but I'll try to think up a way to strengthen the ending. Thanks for the review.