User blog comment:Gearzz/Post deletion/@comment-24101790-20150722040706

Your poem was deleted as it failed to meet quality standards. Poetry is a hard topic to address and your attempt proves this fact.

There was a lack of punctuation in the poem. Please look over other poems to see what to do. (They should read like sentences with commas and periods used correctly.) It should also be formatted into stanzas if following a rhyming pattern (ABAB, ABBA, etc.). I'm unsure if you were intending to write in free verse or not as you dropped the rhyme scheme you had formed midway through.

Rhyming scheme: you used a lot of slanted rhymes (night/flights, coming/things, done/comes, etc.) You also start out with a rhyming pattern and abandon it mid-way through the story.

Capitalization issues: "and (And) He can see all the bad you've Done (done)(punctuation missing" A majority of starting lines are left uncapitalized: "and He knows what has come", "and He can see all the bad you've Done", etc.

Story issues: the poem is very generic and the 'you're next' style ending is cliche. "But that shouldn't be your worry(period missing) He will follow you for life." Our standards for poetry have become much more stringent due to the fact that a lot of users have submitted poems recently that have failed to meet the bare minimum standards for this site.