Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35911608-20190527170905/@comment-35911608-20190527184517

JohnathanNash wrote: This seems very much like how a video game pasta should be done. Not sure if that was what you were going for, but that was the vibe I got from it. It also reminded me of a story that I wrote when I first started here. This is much better than that one, but it has the same subject matter. A bank heist that keeps going on a loop.

I don't really see to much wrong with this story. You did good with this one man. I quoteth Hades: "YOU ARE CORRECT, SIR!"

It's up to interpretation (depending on whether the narrator is an NPC or a real person in your eyes), but that's where the original idea came from.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. However, I have a second draft done and uploading it now.