Talk:SAM/@comment-25326117-20150629064334

1) Did you mean 'that I once knew?' 2) (part Beagle, part Boxer and part everything else). 3) (load of bullshit if you asked me). I hope that helped. 4) This might be a suggestion, but maybe using past tense in your creepypasta would help i.e. checked the living room. 5) You could also use commas for the following sentence: I checked the living room and the dining room, but still no dog.

Did Sam caused Matthew's madness? I think the story can work, but I don't know if I am the only one tired of the cliche of the character going to a mental institution, in this case a psych ward.