Talk:Love Doll/@comment-25941663-20161111141632

I'm afraid this has many plot issues. I understand that this is fiction, but any suspense of disbelief is broken from the unrealistic events in the story. Nobody can cut of their parts one by one without dying, and also having to stitch in new, doll parts. Maybe if the work was done by a third, like a deranged surgeon or even something magical (say, the box contained a goblin that cut her down and stitched her back up), it would have worked.

The only reason this is not deleted is the writing itself. You have a knack for writing short stories out, but the problem is as plots they need work.