Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26479721-20171215005702/@comment-36627132-20191023212941

First and foremost this is a lost episode pasta, a subgenre that has been banned from this site for many years. Even if they weren't banned, this would be deleted because it is a cliche storm.

Here are all the cliches I spotted: Badly drawn DVD cover, unsure character, unusual DVD opening, inappropriate music, violence that would never be seen on a show, static, character throws up, foreign language text shows up, overreacting character, main character seeks the haunted show's origins, and finally character suffers trauma. That is eleven cliches.

In fact the entire story is built on one cliche after another.

Another problem is that Yo Gabba Gabba is a childrens show, and not one that holds any nostalgia factor. The only people who would be interested in such a story would be children who still watch this show. Teens and adults (which make up most of this site's userbase) would pass this story by without giving it a look.

The red highlighting make the story ugly to look at (no offense).

The spelling and grammar need a major brush up. Almost every sentence had something wrong with it. The story suffers from inappropriate capitalizations, poor grammar, and typos.

The seventh paragraph starts with "Ella popped the DVD into the Player." and ends with " I told Ella to eject the tape". This error is repeated "The DVD had no words, it just said "Yo Gabba Gabba!" with a Poorly drawn image of Brobee. Along with the tape"

"I told Ella to dial 911. She gave up, so we had to watch the whole thing then.' Not only does that feel like what happened earlier (the part about ejecting the VHS/DVD), but it is also abuse of calling an emergency hotline which is illegal.

"CGI wasn't reliastic with sound effects in 2017." That's just an error in itself.

On top of that a studio wouldn't even consider airing something a fan made. Most companies try to avoid doing anything fans thought up because, at least according to Nintendo, it could be a liability. That and fan stuff usually suck too bad to air.