Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26416562-20150530031455/@comment-26326346-20150531051548

This would benefit from being longer. Not to be rude, but all of your stories that I have seen are really short and I feel that they'd be a lot better if you spent more time expanding on your ideas and descriptions. There's no need to rush, take your time. No one is going to take any of your ideas if you come up with something original.

But, enough about that, I have a suggestion for you regarding this story: Make it about a parent who has a kid that insists there is a monster under their bed. After the parent checks and doesn't find anything, they leave the room and shut the bedroom door. After the parent shuts the door, they hear a voice telling the child that they should worry about the monsters in their closet and then the closet door can be heard opening.

I feel that if you focus on what I suggested, you could potentially turn this story into something really scary. Don't feel pressured to follow my suggestion, but I do think it could help. Good luck :)