Talk:A Noel in Black/@comment-24833538-20151218054201

Hmmm.....So if I understand correctly, you want everyone to feel like they just took a hit of acid. Well done then haha! Overall though excellent story, although at first I thought it would be a vampire. Also I love the use of Christmas Carols as switching points. Two things I wanted to ask: 1. Isn't it supposed to be "Deck the halls with boughs of holly" ? and 2. How would the Ghost of Christmas Present know what would happen to the girl? Wouldn't that be knowledge that the Ghost of Christmas Future would know?

Anyway, always great to read one of your stories! Happy Holidays!