Talk:Tobit: The Lady and the Maiden of Knowledge/@comment-25947144-20151123201607

A little dissapointed since I thought this was going to be the grande finale. But this one really had me- I can't remember the last time I enjoyed readind about dreams with antropomorphic animals. I liked getting a backstory in Tabitha's character, tough you may want to change the dates. The average human can barely survive around 6 days without any water (just imagine a teenage girl) and even then with severe conditions of dehydratation. Still, this seemed very enthralling and I loved the way you managed to put yourself in the mind of a little Japanese girl and work your way though it. Overall 9.5/10