Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26535147-20150715233120/@comment-26715482-20150718155642

Mr.HattyHattington wrote: That's true,,,,Like don't replace me dosent sound to good, what if I changed the story so that the boy finds a doll in his attic,in a weird chest, and then he finds the doll, when you push the belly, it violently shakes and laughs in a distorted laugh, he finds writing on the back of the doll in a weird symbols,  and then he goes the next night only to find the dolls face to be showing, and then finally he says "What,dos someone need to die?" And the boy wakes up, all realizing he want, and he notices the weird scar that looks similar to the clowns, but then he looks up, and the clown doll is there, this time his mouth gaping open, sitting there laughing by itself.

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DONT CARE HOW CHEESY IT IS That still sounds cliche to me because the whole thing about a doll being possessed has been done to death. I think you should go back to the drawing bored and change up the story from a possessed doll to something else that hasn't been done many times before.