Talk:Restrained/@comment-24550863-20140506085911

What I think:

1) Grammatical errors, which I can help edit. :)

2) The story is adrupt. It does not give a lot of information, but in this case it fits well.

3) I feel that the ending is not good, but not bad. I think it's be better if you changed the ending to one where the main gets locked up in there forever? Or at least until he slowly perishes and rots.

4) The concept is a bit strange. All of a sudden a dude wakes up in a basement, is tied up, has no memories and in the end dies by banging his own head into the wall. If there were some flashbacks it would be better. At least more would be known about him.

All in all, 9/15. Good job though, I'm a bit harsh on judging. :p