Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26235915-20150406135951/@comment-25825682-20150412063027

I thought the poem was interesting, although some parts threw me on the set-up.

1. On the third line of the first part "Oh great Satan," great wasn't capitalized like the others I've read.

2. "You are it now, so they will see," I'm not entirely sure, but I think "soon," could replace "so."

3. On line three in the fourth part you wrote "Your," and I'm not sure why the "y," got capitalized since I don't think is a title.

4. The last line in the third part has "Hail," with a capital "H," instead of lower case.

That's all I got for now, I hope this helped in some way :).