Talk:Darkness Song/@comment-2002606-20140213031225

I really liked this pasta and it's good bit of violence. The part where Liz's chest was getting ripped apart sure sparked my gory imagination!

It's easy enough to understand and well written with a creepy and "likely to die" ending. Love it!

The one thing that bothers me about this pasta is how sudden the monster appeared, with no apparent incitement besides watching a VHS tape. Other than that, I really enjoyed this pasta. Good work!