Talk:Cure for Cancer/@comment-26144360-20150226102100

I think this story was really well written. Even the complex wording and medical terms give it more of a sense of reality. I guess it's not "creepy" in the traditional sense, with no ghosts or demons or supernatural elements, but that's what makes it stand out. The characters are well developed with a story line that supports itself. The ending is slightly ambiguous. It seems as though her breath and their embrace is giving him cancer, which he gladly welcomes, but then saying the cure took hold of him kind of ruins that. I'd say 8/10