User blog comment:Rmtj/Help!/@comment-24101790-20161004163423

There are quite a lot of mistakes present in your relatively story. There are frequent typos and misspellings (check the title, "I call he the expressionist.", "all their love and umanity.", etc.) spacing (you should properly space after using commas), wording ("Oh well,where once time they should have been", "Many mouths dripped red,others missed nose, eyes or even the full face.", etc.) punctuation errors ("He s the master of art..."), and a relatively generic plot.

The biggest issue I see is that this story has been told quite a number of times before without all the issues listed above. There are so many stories that involve a 'self-proclaimed' artist or sculptor butchering people that it's practically a trope. Additionally the ending: "And maybe,you will be his next masterpiece." found its way onto our cliche page for generally being a relative weak ending for a story.