Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27012445-20171102144354/@comment-24101790-20171109210849

KillaHawke1 wrote: I am always so very appreciative of any feedback. I also just learned that I should get my $60 back from Grammarly I've been paying then every four months. They should've picked up most of these mistakes. LOL. Anyways, I am very pleased you like it. I am still considering how to take the story. I do like the Alien model though. Giggle was a straightforward horror. Tabitha was an action story like Aliens. Of course, if I follow that train of thought, I should stop here. After Aliens, every movie since then sucked. LOL

Yeah, Grammarly can help some, but in the end, it's going to overlook some issues (especially with typos that become other words Cornered -> corned).

You should just "Prometheus" it now, that'd truly be scary.