Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24561345-20140721091813/@comment-24957984-20140721224534

So far, the story isn't bad, but not stunning, but overall, decent. I though the story was pretty creepy, and I'd be happy to see more of it.

However, you should proofread and use a spellchecker on the parts you've done so far, and when publishing the story, avoid placing periods and too much space beetween paragraphs, it's painful to read like that.