User blog comment:Doom Vroom/4 Pastas in 20 Days Challenge/@comment-26326346-20160214031149

It's three hours until Valentine's Day on my timezone and here are the end results:


 * Corruption of Youth
 * http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:525756

So, 2 out of 4, sort of. Shawn and I agreed that Fungus Among Us wasn't as great as it could have been, so I'm holding it back and reworking it a bit. I didn't get very far in my Egypt story due to hitting a bit of a snag in it, but I believe it will be a sad and compelling story once it is finished. Furthermore, I wrote a poem to completion, but I didn't like it and felt that the flow was lacking.

The poem was about humans turning them into machines, while super computers made themselves bipedal, each group thought they were inferior to the other, though the machines had it right and humans were superior before uploading their consciousness (this is because machines are subservient and committed to a set of functions in nature; not to mention stationary). I will turn the poem into a Creepypasta called Evolution in the near future.

I have admittedly been goofing off for the most part and I had I not, I might have completed my own challenge (curse you, Hand of Fate and Sunrider!).

Any thoughts on all this?