Talk:NoEnd House 2/@comment-32678417-20170725093040

I have to give this story 3 out of 10. There were a lot of grammatical errors and some parts felt redundant. Example : "The rocks formed a number. The rocks formed a ‘5'." A better way to write that would have been "The rocks formed a number, it was the number 5." It is not as bad as Jeff the Killer or Sonic.exe though. In my opinion I don't think making a sequel that reveals some of the mystery was a good idea. To quote a master of horror "The oldest and strongest emotion of mankind is fear, and the oldest and strongest kind of fear is fear of the unknown." -Lovecraft. So basically what I am saying is when you explain the horror in your story, you lose some of that fear or horror. Just take some time to hone your craft and I know you will make another masterpeice like your first story. ^>^