User blog comment:Blacknumber1/1ST EVER CREEPYPASTA FREESTYLE CHALLENGE - Official Page/@comment-26025256-20150210223009/@comment-25949140-20150211002702

For what it's worth, I read your pasta and thought it was perfectly fine. The tag suggests dialogue, punctuation errors and 'weak plot'? The hell's that about? It's a 24 hour pasta contest not the novelization of The Shining.