Talk:Conspiracy/@comment-16747654-20141127045508/@comment-25306758-20141127175655

Its kind of a mini pasta. I have quite a few stories like this that are extremely short, and a little more bleak than creepy. I'm working on a much longer one right now that's actually based on a true story of an experience I had as a kid. Its considerably longer and creepier.

I appreciate the feedback. I might rewrite it soon with a longer plot and more scenes to add to the overall plot. I'm satisfied with the ending, but the rest could be drawn out a bit more.