Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25024956-20140728123400/@comment-9967354-20140728140525

There's an error in the spelling of sulphur, I think, and in the last bit, which should be:

Its voice betrays the grin on its face as it speaks in a musical lilt.

Pretty much it. The story itself is pretty cool for a micropasta. I don't have much to say for it.