Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20170208050517/@comment-27905100-20170208053255

Hey there. I feel like I haven't been active enough, so I'm gonna review an author whose works I know I will usually enjoy!

In 1933, many were suffering under the effects of an event that would become referred to as The Great Depression in 1934, but there were a few opportunists who adapted and thrived.

That sentence makes no sense

kiss ass.I think it's kissass, (like dumbass or smartass), but I don't know.

instead of open his mouth. 'Instead of opening''? or is that the way you intended it to be?'''

So. This is a pretty good story. I enjoyed the ending immensely, but am left with some questions (not necessarily a bad thing). The time loop thing is a clever twist, but I am wondering how people would mistake a man for Christoph if he simply wore the same shoes. Did you not say anything, or am I just stupid? Anyway, that's probably the only complaint I have. This was a fun read.