Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475410-20150609192614/@comment-24101790-20150609204322

Additionally your second one was almost identical in premise to WritesYourNightmares. Their starting line: "I woke up one night to the sound of a muffled baby's cries and wails." I'm not saying you copied them, just pointing out how many times that story has been told before. Its overuse is now bordering on generic.