Talk:Revival/@comment-25052433-20150915052551/@comment-26112985-20150915203548

Hey Banning! I'm glad you took the time to come over and read some of my pastas! And I am especially pleased to know that you enjoyed this one.

I'm sort of torn on what to do about editing the ending. On one hand, you're probably right. Shortening the ending would boost the overall qaulity, but on the other, I've submitted this pasta already to Creepypasta.com, and it is pending approval, so I am a bit unsure of what to do.

Thanks for your edit on the categories. I think I will replace "Beings" with "Ghosts" as it simply makes more sense, and anyway, the "beings" category is overflowing a little.