Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20190210010145/@comment-9041013-20190210214059

1. You could compare conspiracies to Jeff the Killer, rather than the Supernatural, both are ridiculous. They both tend to defy logic for reasons unclear

2. Uhh sure.

3. "You're better than the rest..." is what gave me "the chose one" feeling about Daniel.

4. I was talking about Eric's lack of emotion, which he stated, I think... so how can he say he has no emotions left while still have plenty of em' left?

5. Again, talking about Eric, could paraphrase that

6. you have all the knowledge you could ever want (in character) and you have the tools, and yet you come up with a poisonous pill? Use your imagination ;) - In general.

7. We know nothing about Eric, so he's out of the whole picture. Uncle Terry could fake some issue, donate all of his wealth quote and qoute and ride off into the sunset. SWAT controlled by the gov't doesn't do shit when there's no command. Which is something I guess I've missed earlier.

8. You mention nothing of him getting upset to the brink of insanity by the sight of corpses, you mention him going into suicidal mode after he hears people he cares about die... so...

But yeah, your story, run with it as you see fit :)