Talk:Dudley/@comment-25226524-20141026210740

Just a heads up, the edits Rhialto made were correct, and what you put them back to is incorrect. I'll leave it up to you to put it back, since it's your story, but I can assure you, they were correct. Any time when you identify the speaker after the quote, you don't capitalize the first word, unless it's a word that is always capitalized. This applies even if the quote ends in a ? or !, and you never use a period in the quotes if you identify the speaker right after, a comma is the correct punctuation. I just thought you should know for the future.