Talk:The Raffle/@comment-25226524-20140820001752

Well I'm glad to see your story reinstated. I made a slight change to that one sentence we talked about before, the one about taking life. I think it read a little reversed of what it should have. It sounded like if you took a life first, then you had to take one of your own after the fact, when it's actually the other way around. Check it out, if you don't like it feel free to change it, I won't be offended. As you know, I think this story/concept is great, and hope you go through with your idea of making it a series.