Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34750757-20180321224231/@comment-9041013-20180323155519

So this is like a poem about a person who is so mentally screwed by the death of his mother that he has developed some idea that he holds a superspeed kind of super power? Hmmm... that's cute, but not enough creepy in it.

Also, the "ITS JUST SOME KIDS POEM" section, kind of murders the whole thing for me. Maybe add something to this section that would indicate one way or another. Does he have superspeed or does he not?