Talk:Photoslash/@comment-24996913-20140908073225

This one is a bit confusing. I get what you were trying to do here, but was it a curse? Was it a picture frame they had recently brought? What caused this tragic event to occur? What happened to the friends? They had no portraits in the home I'm sure so how exactly were they affected by the "curse" or whatever it is? I think you need to add some depth to this. I would suggest working on Sean's character development as well. I feel like this was rushed a bit. Slow it down, pinpoint what exactly caused these events to occur, and deepen the plot. I see potential if a few things are made clear.