Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20160707162915/@comment-28266772-20160713133744

Hey, so I've updated the introductory letter to give the framing device a bit more cohesion. Could you guys let me know if you think this letter is a bit better?

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Michael,

I’ve been at Mum’s the past few weeks sorting through everything. It’s a bloody colossal job but I thought I’d give you this letter I found in one of her old cabinets. I didn’t want to read it because it’s nothing to do with, but I thought I’d pass it on to you because it was dated 1969, the same year you were born, and was surrounded by pictures of you as a baby. I thought you might like to open it and see if it tells you something you never knew about yourself.



Anyway, let me know how it’s going in Asia when you get a chance to write back. Like I said on the phone, I’m very sorry about Jack’s behaviour at the funeral, please don’t hold it against him.

With love from your sister,

Sarah Nettleworth