Talk:Legends of the Hidden Temple - Yellow Frogs/@comment-27563021-20160325015127

An interesting concept for sure, as soon as I saw the title I was drawn to it!! Unfortunatly, the story didn't live up to my expectations.

There were a few spelling mistake which I looked past, but the cliche events (water turning red, Olmec crying blood, no evidence, etc etc) were too distracting and ruined the spookiness. It would've been better to keep it more....subtle, and give the reader the feeling that something wasn't right. Still, it has potential and I'd like to see a revised version. 6/10!