Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26077248-20161028164942/@comment-26077248-20161028165857

I've put my story through several spell checkers and they all tell me the same thing I've gone through and fixed the spelling errors they pointed out. I'm not sure why it's doing the wierd box thing in the middle when I paste my story. Also Desirae is in fact a name, not something miss spelled. I purposely spell it that way cause my sister's name is spelt that way and Dizzy is what my family nicknamed her. Froot Loops is also a brand name as you probably know. I'm not the best with sentence structure but I love writing and have always been a top of the class writing student. So Please, if you can, help me to understand and give me advice on how to critique and fix the problems with my story. :/