Talk:Clarabelle/@comment-24837952-20140419175039

I enjoyed the story.

The set up was enjoyable and sufficiently creepy while not bombarding the reader with exposition. The symbolism of the moth was also used really well, the scene where they found the last cache reminded me of the autopsy scene from the Silence of The Lambs and the twist to do with their significance was unexpected.

I do think that more could have been done when Clarabelle reveals herself. The horror of her attack would hit home even more if it was given a bit more description although I realise that this may be difficult due to the first person narrative.

I think the characters were well defined and Phillips bad knee was well foreshadowed without being too obvious. I liked the garbled message at the end, it reminded me of some stories with Slenderman which shows you've understood the genre.

This story gave me the shivers, so I'd call that a good Creepypasta