Talk:The Harbinger Experiment/@comment-5227285-20150802155347

I wish it had continued the sort of business casual thing it had at the beginning. It was too brief for me honestly. The mention of Tiny Tim made the story hilarious to me, as unlike with say Hal 9000 singing "Daisy, daisy" in his haunting robotic voice, the "Living in the Sunlight" was (as far as I understood) played from a record so it'd be in Tiny Tim's cheery falsetto voice. The story didn't scare me, it was a good enough read, but I feel it should've gone into more depth and the whole describing faces and such as terror stricken always seemed pastiche. I found the description of the faces and such to be laughable, not meaning bad just humorous. Something about describing something that's supposed to be terrifying as being terror stricken or the like is just bizarre. And experiment stories have never been my cup of tea, but this one was good because it didn't have its head up its ass (Russian Sleep Experiment), and remained a very formal business like tone. I just expected it to be scary. You're welcome for this meandering review.