Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26891332-20150819204902/@comment-26908800-20150825190517

Got it! I stink with punctuation, but I didn't notice anything. The bit that stood was first sentence, second to last paragraph: "worringly." 'Ly' adverbs are a bit of no-no in writing. 'Sick/full of/filled with worry...' is how you avoid the -ly construct.