Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-1186783-20141229015738/@comment-1186783-20141230025717

Ok, what would be some better ways to drop hints? And is there anything shiny he could have gotten his hands on in solitary?

The thing with the Senator was supposed to indicate that Frie knew he was dead, despite having no means of getting news.

When I first wrote it I knew I was going to need to up the body count, but I'm not sure by how much. On the one hand, if it's too low the prison guards look like paranoid lunatics. But, if it's too high (say, if he killed a person every day for a year), they look like ineffectual buffoons.