Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4715955-20160102052146/@comment-26399604-20160103165637

Hi Mikemacdee,

I did manage to read your story and I have to admit that it was quite the read. It’s rare to see people post stories pertaining to Sci-fi, fantasy, or in between. I do love them and appreciate their rarity which aids in the anticipation to read one when they appear.

Anyways, the sample piece you provided was very enjoyable. The story was not dull or boring. You provided rich metaphors to relay the descriptions, allowing smooth visualizations. I love the usage of the Norse mythology; it adds a nice touch to compliment the world the reader is being immersed in. The characters are diverse and stand out more than just names on a paper. In just the just few pieces you provided, I was able to distinguish the personalities of each character you introduced.

Overall, this is a nice sampler piece and seems to be a very interesting story. I think others will enjoy it just the same. I would love to finish the final product whenever you finally decide to release it – much luck to its success!

There was one last thing I wanted to ask. The last blog you posted about C.S Wilde How I Write, you had a picture after one of your questions - a woman with an eyepatch holding a knife. I was just curious to know if that picture was supposed to be Juno from this story or not?