Talk:Jacko the Very, Very Bad Clown/@comment-26992667-20150919063256

I'm reading all the pastas nominated this month to decide who to vote for and while I did like the pasta, I felt like it was missing something? Some sort of suspence to keep me invested at the beginning. Also there were some cliches such as the protagonist being the bad guy, the awful childhood/bad parents, and such. I didn't understand the 'clowns can't be hurt' thing. But clowns are scary so good job on that.

7.5/10 for me!