Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24976741-20141222014014/@comment-24281984-20141222044758

SilverDarkCureXZ wrote: YAY! I always love having these little discussions! You know I find it funny how I just have the luck of getting shat on constantly by people everytime I come here not even a single break inbetween. Maybe they were right when they said I was a total piece of garbage.

First off about the spelling errors, yay I wouldn't usually have too many of those, but coping the story over into here when I'm finish writing it usually gets me ripped on by a lot of people because for who knows what reason the format changes, so I wrote it in here.

Like I stated I started lossing my inspiration part way through and it dosen't exactly help when people constantly barge in every 5 minutes yelling at you to do something for them.

Seriously though I agree with you, I wanted to punch myself in the face as hard as I could of so many times when writing this because of how utterly rubbish it sounded through out the story, but I just couldn't seem to think of a way to fix those parts at that time, also the above statement doesn't exactly help this case either.

The story was "suppose" to be some guy that murdered his whole family, then ended up in the woods, finds a house and probably some stupid monster (which by the way caught the whole sounding like slender thing too when writing this, wanted to hit myself because of that), then compares the family that used to live in that house to his family which BTW if you didn't catch it they were killed by him, then runs or something (for all I care at this point I could have died, my mistake he could have, but I'll keep the me part to, it sounds good), ends up on a park bench with some stupid note (now that I think about it it does sound stupid) and the end.

Oh ya the whole writer in the woods thing, that was both a metaphor and literal statement for when I thought of this, I don't have an actual name for the story was just going to think of one when someone actual says that I did a good job, don't want to waste the effort like usual.

But for real thanks for the advice, really appreciate it. Now if you excuse me it's about 10 at night, I'm going to go walk to the woods with a notepad and a flashlight without a coat. Seriously though, I am going to go do some field work by experiencing it first hand myself, also am bringing a coat and maybe a hand gun or my metal baseball bat, see ya in a couple of hours. 1. Don't be so dramatic. Gettong quality critique is not "getting shat on".

2. If you don't want harsh feedback then don't post your work here.