Talk:Demon's Den/@comment-34596491-20180205153447

Wow, I don't usually read long pastas, but this was totally worth it, it was just the right amount of creepy. Though you could have elaborated about Maya, like why and how she got interested in tantra, may be you could do a prequel to the story. Also I spotted some grammatical errors, though nothing that would put a reader off, so worth proof reading it. 8/10 from me