Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24982950-20140927211501/@comment-25170312-20140927234430

I'm having a hard time making sense of this pasta. The main character had a friend, though I guess they loved eachother but never said so? It doesn't say they had a relationship, so I'm assumed it went unsaid. Then I guess that friend died and finally said "I love you" from beyond the grave. The problem is that it all happens too fast and nothing is explained. We don't know how the friend died. We are hardly really told anything. The cryptic conversations between the characters don't help much to fill in the blanks. Really, it's all blanks and nothing else. It's like a burger with no meat. Just lettuce. It's a lettuce sandwich.