User blog comment:MasterT95/Lying no more/@comment-5227285-20140411204846/@comment-24787553-20140412073242

Admittably not my best piece of literature, I've had this idea floating on the top of my mind for awhile and I needed it written out. Unfortuneately, the story stemed from the line, "I haven't gone anything. I've just stopped lying," and usually when my stories come from a single line, Ifocus a little too much on that part and blur the rest. The creep factor wasn't meant to necessarily be in the stabbing so much as the fact that the insanity speard to the actual protaganist and Robert got away. Also, since they were a few miles from town and it only took a few minutes for the chase to stop, Robert easily could have gotten to his house before the ambulance arrived and they wouldn't be concerned with finding him at the moment allowing for a rather easy escape.

Clearly I have a few edges to even out in my pasta writing style, I'm used to writing stories with slightly less psycho factors to account for. I was always more of a super hero and novel person than creepypastas. I'll incorporste your advice and run my next story through the Writer's Workshop before publishing this time around. I guess I was a little too hasty, and if pastas aren't for me, then I'll content myself with reading them and writing other things in the future. Thank you.