Talk:The Sea Witch/@comment-24612144-20160613015404

8/10 - This story is well written. The suspense at the beginning is a good foreshadowing for the events to come, and the sort of Siren song with the eyes was a great touch to the creepiness. The ending wraps it up nicely with the very simple advice, and leaves the reader reflecting what they have just read. I enjoyed it!