Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26997268-20151002042845/@comment-25037895-20151002045254

Dialogue should be spaced so two speakers are never in the same paragraph.

The last paragraph is a little long, try to aim for ten sentences or less.

Some of the dialogues are missing punctuation (ctrl+f to find automatically) like this: " getting a towel to clean it up "I didn't drop it though" he said confused. " Check this page to learn how to punctuate dialogue.