Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30692969-20170210184322

So I tried writing something in which every sentence started with I watched. It was... interesting to say the least. I can't say it's my best work, but I guess it's pretty okay. Anyways, here ya go.

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I watched, waiting in the shadow as the man standing under the streetlamp light a cigarette and blow a few puffs of thick smoke from this nose. I watched him pull out his phone and check the time. I watched as the black van pulled up beside him. I watched as he struggled against the masked man pulling him in. I watched as the door slammed shut on his ankle, bending and twisting it in an inhuman way. I watched as the van started moving, sluggish at first, but then gaining speed. I watched as the van disappeared into the night. I watched as another man took his place, the new man looking eerily the same as the old. I watched as the small station wagon pulled up beside the new man. I watched as he got into the car and kiss the other man’s wife. I watched as they pulled away, the wife completely unsuspecting. I watched as an imposter stole another man’s life. 