Talk:No Escape from Reality/@comment-25301975-20140819221117

Thats a pretty cool pasta. I liked the ending, really got me thinking. Is the person in a dream at the end or was th person in a dream before? See what I mean, keeps you wondering. I would however work on the sentencing, most of the sentences seem a little to brief. Unless that is what you were going for, in which case, good job. Anyways, I enjoyed it.

If you wouldn't mind giving mine a look, that'd be pretty awesome. Its called Reality