Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25383866-20141021090212/@comment-25383866-20141023114759

Ohhh. I see. The main character isn't turning off the sign, the manager is. Why would the protagonist do that? It doesn't make sense lol. I don't think I can make it any clearer that it's the manager doing it. There's the interval where I focus on him for a couple paragraphs, then we go back to David outside.