Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33937557-20180620224644/@comment-33937557-20180621012259

Kolpik wrote: I'd leave it up on the WW for a day or two to see what others might say, but I don't see any real issues with this. I like this a lot. I wondered why his place was so full of signs. Sure, some samples, a few that he was never paid for, and some general all purpose ones around the place to show off his craft would make sense, but there seemed to be far too many for a guy who was doing contract work.

Oh crap, my realization comes too late, now I can never leave!

I like the subtle mesmerizing defense lowering, blinking and flashing of all the colorful signs. This is the WW, so I feel like I should give you something to work on or improve, but I've got nothing right now. I may read it again later with a more critical eye to see if anything stands out. Great job on this! Thanks! I put a lot of effort into it, more than anything else I've written, actually (am I improving?). To answer myself, probably not, but eh, I try.

I just wanted to stick a lot of signs in there. I really like neon lights, even if they're not the best option sometimes.

Eh-heh-heh! You have fallen into my trap!

I will be ready for the cannon when it fires.