Talk:Soft/@comment-30552846-20180603103500

I liked this, you're a very talented writer. At first I thought it would be Reggie who'd end up at the basement with Dylan instead of Cole, I don't know if it would have made the story any different, probably not. I can't find any particular flaws with this, so good work all around.

Also, I found it odd that he would draw a picture of the man he was so afraid of, but later it paid off so it's cool too. Also, the sex offender character was genuinely frightening, I don't think this would have worked at all if he was just a child killer so a smart decision to make him a molester too.

Btw I fixed Dylan's mom saying "Keep my posted" into "Keep me posted".