Talk:Die Before You Sleep/@comment-3541151-20150130133257

A childish take on real death. The story had build up, but the payoff was amazingly shoddy. But even the build up was hooky and not all THAT great. The morbid concept really helped solidify the bad writing now that I think about it, and it doesn't help the payoff, the concept falls apart at that point. I give you few points, because you did tell a story, it just wasn't good. 2/10