Talk:The Viennese Ghost/@comment-32802129-20170808092101

Quite like the idea here and the finish, but unfortunately some of the sentence structuring makes it harder to read and be immersed in. Also, if the whole thing is told by the ghost, should it not be in 3rd person? The first person narrative doesn't really suit the twist at the end. Great idea, but maybe seek some help from the Writer's Lounge getting it more eloquently on to paper.