Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190326080033/@comment-36877863-20190327132553

I'm no expert on story structure for this kind of work, but I did notice that it looks like there's a line of dialogue missing entirely, right after "...The person who is most involved with this decision." and before "There is." From context, I think it's probably supposed to say "Isn't there a way we can keep hem alive?" or something along those lines?