Talk:Paralytic/@comment-4849011-20140315141157

I agree that this is a good story. Partway through it I thought, "I can see it coming. The monster's going to kill Emma and the police will think the narrator did it." The actual ending is much better than that cliched ending, and I honestly didn't see it coming. That's refreshing. I do have a couple questions, if you wouldn't mind. 1) Was this inspired by a version of a Wendigo legend? and 2) Why didn't the creature return to human form after killing Emma? Was it because it could only do so after killing someone it had targeted (as opposed to just coming across during an attack)? In any case, good job! Raidra (talk) 14:11, March 15, 2014 (UTC)