Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31790225-20170423004837

Since I'm a member here, I need some advice;

1. Is this good enough for a Creepypasta read since the video became popular?

2. Does it need gore and dismemberment like in "Squidward's Suicide"?

3. Does it have the standards to go from comedic, to horrifying?

It's up to you if it's a good read, I'm just asking. 