Talk:Glitchy Red/@comment-10483109-20131106202633

This was a pretty good Creepypasta, but I found several things off.

First off, the raticate thing never seemed to go anywhere. It was just a reference to a theory that had nothing to do with the actual pasta. Also, Missingno. isn't harmful. It doesn't mess up save files, it just duplicates things and makes some stuff glitchy. So, I don't get why Red directly referenced that glitch instead of something legitimately save file glitching.

Also, the protagonist took too much time berating other Creepypastas and insisting that this wasn't just a usual Pokemon Pasta. Not necessary, just seems forced. Also, mentioning a pasta in an insulting way just feels like that the writer was striving to convince the readers that this Pasta is better than others. While it's true that this Pasta is really good, better than most, it's the actual story that convinced me that, not a narrator telling me that.