Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27246594-20151119020222/@comment-27039545-20151119180525

Again, I'll be blunt;

Sometimes it's best to start of "not-so-scary", then move towards "heart-stopping" slowly. Though heart-stopping is quite hard to reach. If the above was your goal, you hit the nail right on the head - the Pasta has very little scary content, but anyone could tell it has potential. And, let's be honest, potential is what everything and everyone needs.