Creepypasta Wiki talk:Deleted Page/Jeff the Killer/@comment-24125190-20131103071622

After seeing the image all over the place and being thoroughly creeped out and then realizing he had a name and seeing all the hype "Jeff the Killer" was getting, I was excited to read through it, expecting it to make me as uneasy as the picture did.

Honestly getting through this was an absolute chore. There was no build up, the writing is very weak, the story is all over the place, and my skills of criticism aren't great but it seems like there is way too much going on that the author tried to cram into one story. Everything is extremely cliche, there are a hundred other horror chracters who are just like Jeff, and I agree with what another user said about him being very "mary-sue"-ish and the fact that these young children have access to things like guns and get away with everything. (What the heck are the adults doing??)

It's a shame that such a great and chilling picture is associated with such a mediocre story. I would love for someone to take the picture and write a new story to go with it. One that's actually scary. This is definitely the worst non-troll pasta that I've ever read.