Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30084820-20161026195347/@comment-5101683-20161215053019

What kind of ISS are you in?

Also, I'm sorry that you can't talk to many people. I hope that your girlfriend can come back to you and your life gets easier.

I think that you can make well-written stories if you work at it. I suggest taking 30 minutes to revise the work afterwards, and fix any erratic punctuation or spelling, or to read it out loud in your head ~30 minutes after you finish. If you are already doing that, I don't know what to say. I'm sorry.