Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5101683-20180718232328/@comment-5101683-20180719003341

TheWizardOfTheWoods wrote: I think the main question to ask yourself is whether this is a creepypasta or not. As it stands, I think this is more of a fantasy story than a scary campfire story. I think the problem might be that there's no connection here to reality, and the only way I know how to write horror is in a battle between the mundane and the aberrant. When everything is strange, it just feels rushed and confusing (because it was rushed).

I'm going to fix the problem and repost this under a different title.

Also, do you think it's a good fantasy story?