Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20180706200603/@comment-35711173-20180707012557

BloodySpaghetti,

This being some sort of reference to a real world disease is WAY too subtle. Isn't CWD a disease that deer suffer from? Yes, I read of the two monkies that contracted it and that is of course concerning, but so far it hasn't made it all the way into the human population.

You said

BloodySpghetti wrote:

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"it seems like we'd been cut off from the rest of the world; nobody has come from out-of-town for weeks now and none of us could the authorities for just as long."

The part in italics is extremely difficult to understand. I suggest that you rephrase it.