User blog comment:LunaPrincessNinjato/Well I tired/@comment-25558572-20140916081006

Use the Writer's Workshop forum for criticism on your work so you can understand exactly what was right and wrong with it.

Don't give up because of a deletion. I've had two or three of my earlier works deleted because they were below standards as well. It's not a final grade on your ability as a writer. Try again with a new pasta and I will review it if you wish.