Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5034925-20140330031726/@comment-24841494-20140330053915

Is this the whole story? Either way, the first letter is way too short. He kills the kitten the end. Realisticly, he would go on more about it, and explain what happened afterwords in the letter. Then in the next letter he would talk about his first human kill etc. Also, I think it would make sense if it was all one big letter instead of several.