Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26581765-20150707055637/@comment-26581765-20150707065203

My apologies for seeming cliche. I could see how it is cliche in a way. Like I said, this is my first time, so I really, really apologize for my lack of experience. What do you believe I could do to make it a little less cliche? Not like a full blown idea that would consider me breaking the rules, but things that I could replace?