Talk:He's a Lucky Man/@comment-31740189-20180411193348/@comment-33093888-20180412163224

Thanks for the feedback! This is actually my first story here, so I'm just getting my feet wet and am appreciative of any pointers I can get!

I considered your criticism and did another review, editing what I felt could be improved based on your notes. Feel free to take a second look and see what you make of the updates if you'd like!