Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25558572-20140709014159/@comment-25155143-20140709025202

CassistRabbit wrote: Predictable? That makes me a bit nervous. Is there anything I can do earlier to make that ending less predictable? Hum, it's hard to say. Maybe distracting the reader? You could make it so the reader thinks that the story will lead somewhere -Marc'll become crazy/ It's Rain's turn to have a centipede in there...- and then twist it so he's mesmerized with the discovery of a new egg in Marc's uterus.