Talk:Blank Thoughts/@comment-31077845-20170209001522

K, that made no sense. I think you fell back on the "'I can't live without you...so we'll be together forever in death!' Says the crazed lover" cliché, but kinda forgot to include the part where their partner actually had any plans to leave them. See, that's sort of a necessary component. The girl is sitting there still thinking adorably girly thoughts about building a house in an idyllic field where they can live together as she just lies in a field with a guy she repeatedly says she loves. So he has her killed in a fashion that clearly results in a fair degree of distress on her part for...what reason exactly? And I won't even bring who these "friends" into this. One crazy guy is one thing, but where did he find this whole group who's totally complicit with this brutal, pointless murder/suicide?

For all of the stuff that I hear about getting deleted around here, some awfully silly stuff winds up getting through. This story relies on what I'd call a definite cliché (and clichéd stories supposedly get deleted) and it can't even manage to pull the cliché off right.