Talk:The Devil's Jaws/@comment-24155491-20140211213754

The opening few paragraphs were really awful and the story has its weak points, but the involuntarily nature of the thing makes for a cool twist. That said, as a "true story" it fails because the warning doesn't actually help anybody in the absence of a make of phone so there wouldn't be much point -- if any -- to the unnamed narrator writing it which makes the story intrinsically flawed.