Talk:Dancing Down an Indian Hallway in Darkness/@comment-26266349-20150503113057

Good story! Being an Indian and staying in a hostel myself,i am spooked.There are some minor details you need to attnd to though


 * the waking up part seems unrealistic ,i mean a girl is lying dead in her bed and they wouldn't just let her roommate stay sound asleep next to a dead body(being in India and all)


 * the title could be a little more catchy

other than that the story is cool.

(and this is like the perfect length for a creepypasta,please dont mess with that)