Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26411767-20151019105715/@comment-24248644-20151020065019

The only thing I would change is the title. The word "Revenge" has been used quite a few times in the title. I would title something like "The visitor in the afternoon" or "A simple prank" (Idk, It's 10 min before midnight as of now and i can't think of any good titles)