Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26872762-20150928173453/@comment-26872762-20151001133233

It's ok, I thank you for bringing this up, and I see that must make more revisions, AGAIN. But anyway, I can see there are problems with some of the pieces of writing in this story, and I will try to fix it. Since this is my first pasta (although it doesn't feel like it), it is hard for a freshman in high school who is struggling in English I and Applied Literacy to write one and get it published for the first time. Thanks for the advice and I hope more will come soon! :)  LegoMaster2149 (talk) 13:32, October 1, 2015 (UTC)