Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33698957-20190117192604/@comment-35711173-20190117194445

NotIsaac,

The first issues are formatting. You have to get rid of the bold in the body of the story and all those extra space. Double space is good. Quadruple is too much.

Just edit what you wrote above. If you hover your mouse in the far lower right of your post, you can find the More button and under that will be Edit.

Dr. Bob

Dr. Bob