Talk:Booty Call/@comment-28360473-20160528072948/@comment-27593636-20160613175545

Thank you for the feedback, and for giving the story I read! Very much appreciated. I'll definetly take your pointers into consideration.

In many ways I was trying to emulate what I'd seen done in other horror stories/creepypasts, whilst also mixing up the formula, so I suppose one of the biggest pitfalls of doing this is that I'll likely include a few too many cliche plot points in the process.

I'll admit I did jump the shark a bit with the ending. That's my bad.

I've since written another creepypasta called "The Peculiar Case Of Joyce Nilsson" if you'd like to take a look at my second work. That one seems  to have recieved a lot less attention, but I'm much more happy with it overall.

Thanks again!