Talk:A Room/@comment-25170312-20140803000433

I just wasted an hour of my life reading this. Way too long, with lots of unneccesary descriptions. It started out interesting but then just felt drawn out. It started to pick up towards the end, but the ending wasn't satisfying. I understand that the 'ant farm' analogy kind of explains the story, but it doesn't redeem it. There's so many spelling/grammar errors that I would love to fix, if the story wasn't so long.