Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29015383-20160712171950/@comment-29015383-20160715191324

Made some small changes in the last two paragraphs to better reveal that Alex had been there the whole time:

“And how did my special guest enjoy tonight's show?” GraciousHost mocked, crouching down to meet Alex' eyes. His fingers played with the picture he’d taken days earlier of the young man and had hung in front of the webcam once he’d lifted server security. “Nothing quite like a front row seat in person, wouldn’t you agree? Much better than from a monitor.” Alex instinctively tried to shrink away in the chair. “By the way, I believe I haven't thanked you yet have I?” Cold fingers gently brushed over the young man's cheek. “I am ever so grateful you delivered yourself straight to me after the last showing and then even granted me use of your wonderful basement for this stream. I know I have been a very poor guest but you needn't worry. It won't be long now.” GraciousHost's smirk grew wide, a pair of vicious fangs glinting in the white light. “Our next host is on the way, and next week I will make you a star.” Sharp fangs dug their way into Alex's neck. Seconds slowly ticked by as the young man felt himself weaken even further.

The sound of the front door being forced open made GraciousHost pull back and glance up. Faintly, a voice echoed through the hall as the intruder called out; “Come on out Alex, I’ve got a little message for you!” A cruel grin spread on the vampire’s face. “ Already here? Such a marvelous delivery service.” Silent as a shadow the creature left the basement. Before the door closed behind him, the barely conscious Alex heard him utter one last sentence; “I fucking love the internet.”