Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-25437636-20140919072920/@comment-24101790-20140919115654

Looking over your story, I can't help but see the large amount of capitalization (You really need to capitalize "I" and not capitalize words in the middle of sentences that shouldn't be capitalized), punctuation (Comma misuse and lacking from sentences that need pauses like: "Well i(sic) saw a dead birds(sic) body it looks multilated(sic additionally missing a period)"), and spelling errors. Two hours isn't sufficient time to catch these errors. Sykokillah is right, you should take advantage of the writer's workshop to help improve your stories and writing skills.