Talk:Water/@comment-25052433-20140818064433

This one is short enough to where I don't need to give my usual style of review. I can keep this pretty simple.

A great, original story that really sneaks up on you at the end. While I was reading this, I kept waiting for the cliché 'dad killed the mom' type angle. So, let me tell you, I was very impressed with the way you flipped it on me at the end.

8/10. Excellent!