Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-4955311-20160118141006

Now that I've had time to adjust, I decided to take some time to take another look at things.

This is an okay pasta. It's okay as a stand-alone, and it's even okay as a revamp. Here's my biggest problem: WHERE'S THE RAGE?

This is Jeff the Killer, a CP icon! He was set on fire, mutilated himself, and went on a killing spree!

Here he was shot by a flare and stabbed his parents.

Where's the anger? Where's the insanity? Where's that thing that'll leave a pit in my stomach after I read it?

Banning's a great author, and obviously the original jtk was not like the  Atlas Shrugged of CP writing, but this, while not a bad pasta by any means, is certainly not my pick for how JTK lives on.

7/10