Creepypasta Wiki:Deletion Appeal/Archive 3

The cutie mark
Why the heck would u guys delete it, please give it a second chance I will make it more scary, more Grissom, more anything just please undelete please Idk why u would delete it!

The one: Part 1.
First off, I would like to thank you for noticing that something was wrong with my pasta. However, I am new and would like to know what I did wrong. I tried not to copy anyone with my writing. If there is something you want me to change please tell me because I will change it, I just want to know what I did wrong so I don't do it again in the future. I was also planing on making this a series, if it is the title then I can change that. I noticed someone else had a story called "The One". So please just inform me if you can. Thank you have a good day. ~Mr River


 * Deletion appeal is too backed up to spend time on appeals that don't follow instructions for making appeals. If you fix this, your appeal will be looked at again. --ImGonnaBeThatGuy (talk) 14:50, December 31, 2013 (UTC)

Sonic 3 - What Happened to Tails?
I really don't understand why my post was deleted. I think it was rather well thought out and unique for the most part. I also think it was realistic enough to believe and has just the right level of eerieness that doesn't go over the top. I even included a picture to accompany it. I put a lot of effort into making this, so I'm curious to know what's apparently wrong with it. I understand the deletion of creepypastas that are too similar to another or are too trite, but yet I'm still seeing countless takes on the Tails Doll and other things that are done to death. It doesn't add up to why mine got the axe. --SubliminalOvercast (talk) 06:25, November 17, 2013 (UTC)


 * It was a Sonic.exe spinoff. I'm afraid we don't allow those here. - 15:25, December 30, 2013 (UTC)

Mutilated Martin Creepypasta:
Mutilated Martin:

Was my Pasta too cliche? If so, I've made quite a few improvements. Or, maybe, It was badly written? May I please have you either undelete it, or let me repost it on here? If not, can you possibly tell me what was wrong with it? I really actually liked this pasta, and thought it was well written, but then again, don't all people think their stories are well written? Anyways, will you please send me some feedback?

For somereason my pasta was deleted. I dont know why, either because it sucked, or it didnt seem original, but i'd just like to have it back to share with some friends.

ZuriathonZuriathon (talk) 04:20, November 19, 2013 (UTC)


 * Iamlegend, your pasta was deleted because it was a Jeff the Killer spinoff, and I'm afraid we don't allow those. Also, could you please sign your posts next time? Thank you. Zuriathon, you need to post a new section here with the title of your pasta so that we can review it. - 15:19, December 30, 2013 (UTC)

NIGHT
NIGHT was my first story and unfortunately I lost its backup file. I want to know why it was deleted. And I was also looking forward to showing it to my friends. Please tell me why it was deleted.

Adamwalker (talk) 02:27, November 21, 2013 (UTC)


 * I'm sorry, but it was a Sonic.exe spinoff. It pretty much follows the exact same format as that pasta. - 15:15, December 30, 2013 (UTC)

Another Life
Sorry if I'm getting annoying ^^;

I can understand why you deleted it the third time,I failed to capitalize the title correctly.

However,the first two times it was capitalized as the quality standards state,I don't think it was a wall of text either time and I tried my best when it came to the grammar since English isn't my first language.

I would love to know what I have to change for it to not get deleted.

Julcek (talk) 06:07, November 22, 2013 (UTC)


 * Personally, if you were to fix all the punctuation errors you have in your story, then I wouldn't mind it being here. That means you need to PUT SPACES after each full stop, comma, and quotation mark. - 15:27, December 30, 2013 (UTC)

Welcome Home, Ellie.
Honestly, I've worked hard on rewriting the story. It took hours, and I've shown it to others, and they found it worthy of this wiki. If not though, I'd be fine with posting it somewhere else. Just stating that effort and time was put into it, and I find it to be good enough for this site.

Rose Hallows (talk) 16:40, November 24, 2013 (UTC)


 * Recommendation: You need to work on building the suspense in your story, and shift the focus away from seemingly pointless cringe and gore. Why exactly did the protagonist peel off his skin and cover himself in hot, burning plastic? There seems to be no real reason for it happening. - 15:40, December 30, 2013 (UTC)

Rayman GBC GAME OVER
Hai SKELLY. I know, I haven't been here for a while and I know things have been odd involving me and, well, DOING STUFF, but I would like to ask exactly why this was deleted? Because, it's not the problem that I want the story back (I saved a copy... On a computer that is broken... Hrrng...) but I didn't seem to find a reason as to why. It simply said it was deleted. Is it the title? Because it IS almost all caps... Anyways. I just want to know WHY first, then I'll see if I actually want it back on here. Thanks for bothering to read my shit (seeing as no one does XD).

Your faithful... Umm... Acquaintance,

The Choke
I'm wondering why my pasta was deleted, I read the rules about it not getting deleted which were correct your story, learn how to tell a story and do you know how to write. I'm pretty sure I did all those in hoping that pasta wouldn't be deleted. I've always like Creepypastas, i read them all the time, I just thought it was time for me to make one of my own.

Xxgrizzxx115 (talk) 01:46, November 27, 2013 (UTC)Xxgrizzxx115


 * Lack of plot and detail. We don't find out why there are ghosts tormenting this poor chap. Also, at the same time, it's not mysterious enough to be considered creepy. Sorry - 15:47, December 30, 2013 (UTC)

Guys' Night Out
My pasta "Guys' Night Out" was deleted, even though it met the quality standards. It was NSFW, but I marked it as such. Could you provide a reason as to why you deleted it, and whether I could put it back up?

Dubiousdugong (talk) 18:39, November 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * It violated Wikia's Terms of Use (this, specifically). LOLSKELETONS (talk) 00:24, November 29, 2013 (UTC)

Update
Update: I removed all sexual activity from the story. Is it acceptable to repost now? Dubiousdugong (talk) 21:43, December 8, 2013 (UTC)


 * You have to show us a copy of the story.
 * The story is just flat out bad, I'm sorry. Nothing creepy happens and it's borderline misogynistic. Removing the rape wouldn't change a thing. LOLSKELETONS (talk) 05:17, December 30, 2013 (UTC)

You Will Suffer
(i can't get this to work :/ ) so my story was taken down... could it be put back up i thought it followed all the rules. Scoutpie (talk) 11:17, November 30, 2013 (UTC)Scoutpie


 * "Followed all the rules" does not make a good story. Your pasta was beneath our quality standards and will remain deleted. LOLSKELETONS (talk) 09:22, December 30, 2013 (UTC)

No Escape
I don't see why my second version of the pasta was deleted. It wasn't a wall of text, it was original, not a spin-off. I don't see how new pastas have a chance. But could you tell me why mine was deleted please? I realize that there was one written in 2011, deleted by Cleric. I wrote the one that was uploaded on November 30th, 2013 IWillGertrudYourSoul (talk) 23:28, December 1, 2013 (UTC)


 * You're banned globally, so. . .--ImGonnaBeThatGuy (talk) 15:05, December 31, 2013 (UTC)

CORALINEMOVIE.ORIGINAL
You probably remember me, but just never had time to check the updated version of CORALINEMOVIE.ORIGINAL. I'm guessing that my pasta either didn't meet up with your standards, or it was too cliche'. Either way I fixed mine and I would like to publish it. I'm sorry if this was the issue but I believe that I corrected it. Here is the updated version http://pastebin.com/nMxu4wi0 Can you please allow me to post my improved pasta? Blake2 (talk) 16:30, December 2, 2013

Return The Slab
Hey, my first post "Return The Slab" got deleted.

Was it because I had no comments on it, meaning that no one had seen it?

Or was it because I had poor structure (which I will admit to), I'm new to editing things via wikia.

I just would like to know and ask that it be undeleted please.

(Shadowcrawler93 (talk) 11:23, December 3, 2013 (UTC))

A Nation's Life
I'm not exactly sure why my pasta A Nation's Life was deleted. I worked pretty hard on it and tried my best to make it effective. It was supposed to be a type of psycological horror complete with it ending in a way to where you know it's an eternal loop story, something that personally terryfies me. I will admit that it's not one of the more scary stories, but it is still creepy, Right? If I could at least get the reason why it was deleted, I won't mind. But I'd really like it back up. Dark Brichan (talk) 21:23, December 3, 2013 (UTC)Dark Brichan

The Basement Stairs & 5:42 Deletion Appeal
The Basement Stairs and 5:42

I'm confused as to why my stories were deleted. I was blocked attempting to gain a badge by uselessly adding categories, and I was stupid for that, I know (I will not do it again, I'm actually embarrased I did those stupid things). But immediately following my blockage, both of my stories were deleted for "clean-up". I am unsure of what that means, and I would like to get help understanding why these two pages were deleted. On top of that, believe it or not, I didn't write the stories down in something else before writing them in Creepypasta (they aren't saved anywhere) because I was just sort of writing them on a whim and seeing what would come out. Therefore I have no extra copies of these stories anywhere (the deleted pages were all I had of them). Could you please undelete them if possible, or if you do not want them back up because you thought the quality of writing was bad, can I somehow get extra copies of the stories? If not they are truly lost forever. Whatever you can do would be helpful and greatly appreciated. Thanks!

Ringman97 (talk) 01:17, December 4, 2013 (UTC)ringman97 (Griffin Olis)

The Diary Pages
I am wondering why it has been deleted? I did make like just a few spelling errors for fast typing. Is that the reason it got deleted? I spent like 1 hour thinking about how this pasta should flow like and 20 - 30 minutes typing it up. (I was thinking about if it would be okay if the pasta flowed that way.) If its not the spelling mistakes then, I have no clue why it got deleted.

Please List:

Icestar36 (talk)--TheEyeofDarkness (talk) 00:19, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

Alright, there are some problems. One, as you admitted, the spelling errors. There are several. However, it is the least of your problems.

By example, the total lack of ending. Ending the story like you did is a pretty cheap way to end something. It was reaching the climax, the strong point of the story, and suddenly OH HEY IT IS OVER.

If you could fix that, it would be great. Because that is what mainly ruined the whole thing.

For now, it is DENIED. --&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 21:35, January 7, 2014 (UTC)

Elaine
I was wondering why my CreepyPAsta was deleted, I recreated mine with a different name because I felt that my previous CreepyPata name, The Queen of Darkness was dumb, so I wanted to stick with Elaine :) I put a lot detail into it proof readed it and i had comments saying it was good, Please reconsider, But the first time I posted my CreepyPasta it came out pretty jacked up so may I please make remake it or you undelete it :) (Elaine)


 * Please format your deletion appeal correctly. It's difficult for me to find your story when I don't have a link to your profile. Look at the top of the page to see how to sign posts. --ImGonnaBeThatGuy (talk) 19:59, January 15, 2014 (UTC)

Gasoline (a.k.a. GASOLINE)
Why did 'Gasoline' got deleted? There were no misspells nor compromising images. I don't know why it got deleted. : (


 * Please format your deletion appeal correctly. It's difficult for me to find your story when I don't have a link to your profile. Look at the top of the page to see how to sign posts. --ImGonnaBeThatGuy (talk) 20:00, January 15, 2014 (UTC)

We'll Have So Much Fun.
I am wondering why it has been deleted? Honestly if you just answer and say it was horrible or its too cliche I'll be on my way. If there was another reason I would be happy to fix it. I worked hard on this and all I would like is the reason for its removal.

Arcane-Emtae (talk) 21:52, December 17, 2013 (UTC)Arcane-Emtae

Alright, first, there is the matter that it is what can be called a 'wall of text'. Meaning it is a text with no paragraphs. Other than that, there aren't really a lot of problems with your story.

I'd say to revise it, give it an even spacing, and re-upload it, but in its actual state, it won't be accepted.

--&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 23:57, January 7, 2014 (UTC)

Penny For The Guy
I am not sure why my story was deleted 5 seconds after I put it up. As far as I can see, it violated no rules. I don't even care if you put it back up, But I need to know why it was deleted. PENNY FOR THE GUY (talk) 17:05, December 20, 2013 (UTC)PENNY FOR THE GUYPENNY FOR THE GUY (talk) 17:05, December 20, 2013 (UTC)

I personally see no problems with your story. It is kinda senseless, in the sense that the whole mask thing didn't really have much significance besides being kind of the killer's trademark, unless I missed something. But other than that, I'd say it would be okay to have it back. --&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 00:02, January 8, 2014 (UTC)

Grindr
can you please repost my grindr story? The only reason why i deleted the old one last year was because i didn't know how to edit it or make it better. so can you please put it back up?

User:JoeWinko (a.k.a. "Joe the Creeper") (talk) 01:27, December 21, 2013 (UTC)


 * Please format your deletion appeal correctly. It's difficult for me to find your story when I don't have a link to your profile. Look at the top of the page to see how to sign posts. --ImGonnaBeThatGuy (talk) 20:01, January 15, 2014 (UTC)

Omen
Hello Skelly, Justin here, you may know me as one of the VCROC members. May I ask why my pasta Omen was deleted. I don't think it was a blacklisted subject, was it due to poor grammar? or is it because we don't accept poetry pasta anymore? What is competition? I&#39;m trying to raise the bar high (talk) 19:25, December 21, 2013 (UTC)


 * Falls below our standards. We have more than enough bad poetry on here, and I am unwilling to allow any more to be posted. LOLSKELETONS (talk) 23:08, December 31, 2013 (UTC)

Thank you Skelly for answering, I appreciate your input. Do you have any guides to write a poetry pasta that's up to par? Success is not measured by how amazing you are, but it&#39;s measured by how much will and fiery spirit you possess. (talk) 23:58, December 31, 2013 (UTC)

95.txt
This pasta was deleted by LOLSKELETONS on November 21st. I'm not exactly requesting that it be undeleted, I'm only wondering WHY it got deleted. The delete log only says "QS", which I assume is referring to Quality Standards. Was the pasta deleted because of the file extension title? Or was it because it just sucked? As far as I know there was nothing wrong with the grammar or spelling. Again, I'm not demanding that it be undeleted, just looking for answers.

ElemCha0s (talk) 04:29, December 22, 2013 (UTC)

Well, QS does indicate problems with the quality. Saying 'it sucked' is really blunt, though.

Now, I just took a look at your story. The problem with it is that it uses concepts already overused in hundreds of other stories of the same genre. There isn't really anything differentiating it from other stories, and kinda falls as generic.

I think that sums it up nicely.

--&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 00:12, January 8, 2014 (UTC)

There And Gone
Hello, I was wondering why my Creepypasta, There And Gone, was deleted. It said that it was because of quality standards, but I looked over the story many times before submitting it, and that can't be correct.

My Pasta wasn't a wall of text, and it contained no gramatical or spelling errors.

I am aware that there had been a Creepypasta with the same title in the past, but it was deleted due to not meeting quality standards, and I only found out about it after I published my Pasta. If this is the reason, I'd be fine with changing my title.

If the reason for the deletion was the use of "What Does The Fox Say?" by Ylvis, I was not aware that Creepypastas based off of songs weren't allowed.

I should let you know that this whole Pasta was a nightmare that I had. I was scared for a few days after it occured, but then I got over it and I now find it funny. If the reason it was deleted was because it was considered a Trollpasta, I really didn't write it with that in mind.

ThePastaStalkers (talk) 14:07, December 22, 2013 (UTC)ThePastaStalkers

Now that is one curious thing. A story based on that song? Wow, can't say I really expected it.

So, quality reasons. That is the reason put by the two people who deleted it. I suppose that they mean that the story lacks something, plot-wise. Remember: Who/What, How, Why, When and Where. A story needs, preferably, four of those five questions answered. Does your story meet that?

I personally think it lacks a few on Why, and How.

Keep writing!

--&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 00:19, January 8, 2014 (UTC)

THAT THING IS NOT YOUR PET
Um hi, I would like to know what was wrong with my story, "THAT THING IS NOT YOUR PET"

I tried not to do a cliche, and it seemed like it had proper grammar. May you please respond and tell me what I did wrong. (also if you won't republish it, can you at least let me copy and paste it, I don't own microsoft word)

ATSStalker (talk) 16:38, December 22, 2013 (UTC) ATSStalker

Oh no. It got paragraphs fused all together. It isn't a wall, but it is pretty ugly.

Now, leaving aesthetics aside: I'm kinda confused at the plot of your story. I can't seem to find the pivotal point of this, and at the ending, I can't really say what 'it' is. A vague story can be excellent, or it can confuse and push readers out. I'm afraid yours does the second.

Please, try to give a bit more to detail to the plot of the story. The pieces look disconnected, and one can't really see the whole picture.

--&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 00:25, January 8, 2014 (UTC)

Abstract Edge Killer
im not here to ask for my pasta to be re-submitted i just want an answer why was it deleted what was this spinoff crap? the content i created was original and all created by me i mentioned no creepypasta monsters it was my own story and the grammer and punctuation was spot on what was the problem?


 * Please format your deletion appeal correctly. It's difficult for me to find your story when I don't have a link to your profile. Look at the top of the page to see how to sign posts. --ImGonnaBeThatGuy (talk) 20:02, January 15, 2014 (UTC)

Father
I am the writer of the Creepypasta "Father". I believe that my pasta should not have been deleted as it contained no grammatical errors, did not hold a giant "wall-o-text", and was not overly long. I have read your terms and rules regarding pastas and believe that my story did not violate any of these. I vigorously proof read the document and made sure that everything ran smoothly. It was only up on the site for a good hour before you deleted it, so it did not even have a chance. If you could please repost it, and if failing that, tell me what rules it violated, I would greatly appreciate it. --Shanato4 (talk) 01:22, December 25, 2013 (UTC)Shanato4

I don't really see why it was deleted, to be honest. It seemed good enough to me.

--&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 00:47, January 8, 2014 (UTC)

The Korean Comic
I would like to ask why my creepypasta, The Korean Comic, was deleted. I put it up, and then it was deleted, and I guessed this was because I had not put the story in the User Submissions, and so fixed this and reuploaded it, however it was taken down again.

Benredbomb75 (talk) 21:25, December 29, 2013 (UTC)Benredbomb75

It is because your story isn't much beyond a description of The Korean Comic itself. It is unneeded.

--&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 00:49, January 8, 2014 (UTC)

Opal's Last Moments
I know you get a lot of these. But why did you delete my story? I followed all the guidelines, my story had nothing cliche in it, and I liked it a lot. It had correct grammar and spelling, and had added it to some catigories. Thanks in advance, Jett Cyber (talk) 00:47, December 30, 2013 (UTC)

Alright, let's start. You say 'nothing cliché'. Your story starts with "IT IS REAL". The cliché-o-meter is already through the roof.

That phrase by itself is a deletion reason.

--&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 00:56, January 8, 2014 (UTC)

Blind Wanderings
You noted the content of the page. However, I am unaware of what the problem with it was. I understand it wasn't a story, but I haven't heard it can't be a poem. It was also not a wall of text, it had no grammatical errors, and I think it generally avoided cliches.

You also noted I was the only contributor. This is true, because I wrote the poem, so I contributed it.

However, I am new, so if their was a problem with it I am not aware of, please tell me. Doctor VII (talk) 22:28, December 30, 2013 (UTC)


 * Despite your claim that it has no grammatical errors, I see that you consistently used "their" wrong. Since we have more than enough bad/mediocre poetry on here as it is, I'm afraid I'll have to decline this. LOLSKELETONS (talk) 22:41, December 30, 2013 (UTC)

My mistake. I can fix the grammatical issue with 'their'. Is there anything else I can fix? Doctor VII (talk) 22:47, December 30, 2013 (UTC)

Chastisement
Hey there. I'm not very active and I just came back on here after almost 2 months and I noticed my pasta was deleted. I'm aware it was for a NSFW cleanup in November, but I wanted to see if it could still be brought back up again; maybe delete a few paragraphs that prevent it from coming back up or something? The King of Waffles (talk) 01:13, December 31, 2013 (UTC)

Already talked with the author. Nothing left to do with this.

I would like my creepypasta undeleted, I can understand if it is because of quality as it is my first one but please tell me what I need to change to get it undeleted.

I don't get why it was deleted but am willing to change anything if it will get undeleted, it was my first pasta so if it was quality I'm sorry but just help me get it back up please.

The Drop
I'm sorry if it was deleted for quality reasons it was my first creepypasta but I will change anything to get it back up there. --Kai-Nu (talk) 06:35, December 31, 2013 (UTC)

Welp. The 'Go to Sleep' at the end is really hinting a Jeff the Killer thing. It isn't doing anything in your favor.

--&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 01:01, January 8, 2014 (UTC)

About the Grebefoot story
Why did you delete it? can you please give me a reason? Rummy00 (talk) 08:43, December 31, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry for posting for the 3rd time

But can you please give the reason why you deleted it? Maybe I can fix it

LordCanos story
Dear Fatal Disease,

A few reasons why I think my story should be undeleted:

1. It is the story of my profile character. It was kind of a backround story for people who (maybe) look at my profile.

2. I really would like to have my own pasta own here...

3. I put time and thought into all of my writing. (I actually write stories that impress even my laguage arts teacher. I do admit this was not my best work I have ever done.)

4. I will fix any problems with it as soon as possible.

Thank you for taking time to read this.

LordCanos (talk) 19:54, December 31, 2013 (UTC)LordCanos a.k.a. Jake

Plantitus Chapter 1 Alien Plague it never even gave the reason WHY it was deleted there is nothing wrong with it and if there is tell me and bring it back up so i can fix it, also its not an unfinished pasta its part of a series of pastas (if thats the reason its deleted) so please bring it back up and tell me if there is anything i need to fix, thank you.

Dinowolf was here (talk) 13:48, January 1, 2014 (UTC)

The haunted little girl
This story is true events that happened to me and im really sad that my first creepypasta was deleted then i make another one and that gets deleted i think this story was well written and is pretty good and  means alot to  me please bring my creepypasta back it took ages to write and i will fix mistakes please i love creepypastas and have being watching all the creepypasta channels i even made my own this is a bit annoying because if you dont bring it back m next one will proably get deleted please it would mean alot to me i also want show to  my family thank you for reading please bring my story back from the grave.

(:

i was wondering why you deleted it? can you please tell me exactly what was wrong with it and i will try to fix it...because i really love this creepypasta and i want others to see it :(

hello! i was wondering why you guys deleted my story? please tell me EXACTLY why so me and my editor can try to fix it

20:57, January 1, 2014 (UTC) Yunama

Thanks for your time.
==

Hello, sorry about the Page talk mistakes and im hoping im doing this right, im new to computers in General. my creepy pasta "Witch's Ghost" was OC. I just was wondering about why its deleted and if I entered it wrong help reentering it correctly. If it was just bad i understand. Also if i entered this to the wrong place please forgive me.

Sea Man Knows
I was just wondering why my story Sea Man Knows was deleted? I can't exactly think of a reason why it would be. I know I'm not the best creepypasta author ever, but I did put some effort into it and, in my mind, I didn't think it was that bad at all. OptimusPrime27 (talk) 20:42, January 2, 2014 (UTC)

The Aldronia Chronicles
You hate me, don't you? That was my second pasta you just deleted! There was nothing wrong with it as far as I can tell. Did you just get rid of it cause it was bad? WELL THAT'S A MATTER OF OPINION. You should mark them for deletion first before just getting rid of pastas without permission. Jett Cyber (talk) 02:49, January 3, 2014 (UTC)