Talk:From Flesh to Stone/@comment-4750363-20150622050607

I personally think it...barely meets the Quality Standards and frankly it's for only one reason:

Last line.

Really, that came out strange in my opinion. So the girl got the family and the narrator? I understand the whole stone description is what indicated she did, and I think that's fine, but the way you worded that ending is...bad. I mean 'She's gotten my family, and now...She's got me'. I think it could be worded better, make it sound less melodramatic.

But leaving that aside I think it's a fine story and I think it's ready for the site, although maybe it'd be good to put a copy in the Writer's Workshop to try to gather some critiques.