Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33803324-20191017132724/@comment-33803324-20191104160825

I just want to start by saying both "wow" and "thank you" - this was incredible constructive criticism, and I didn't think anyone could go into as much depth as you did with just one Google Doc page of an introduction.

I more-than appreciate your comment, and I will definitely take everything you said into account. I honestly think I have a couple issues in my writing style, one of which being that I have been inspired by the Silmarillion by JRR Tolkien - where he clearly goes into the depth that I have here, but I definitely agree that it can get boring. I believe I'm also trying to pad out the story's length artificially without realizing it - and hopefully I will be able to correct this now. I'll keep the workshop updated with more once I get there!