Talk:An Ode to Carnage/@comment-7673575-20190703154738

Berserker vibes are so strong, my hair and beard are braiding themselves.

General Quality - I have to say, I found a good bit of errors. Mostly a lack or surplus of commas, but also some misused words ("Yielding" a flaming war-axe when it should be "Wielding") So, the score for this is

Horror Factor - You really went all out, Doom Style on this one. The fact that you shredded it into episodes made me feel like I'm watching a film. Demons were creative, scenes of slaughter were deliciously disgusting. Good job. 25/25

Lyrical Interpretation - "If he wasn't going to hit Ragnarök, maybe he would deliver the non-existing Greek version of the end of the world myth". So had I hoped, and was honestly let down a bit. The whole song is no more and no less of Thor's confrontation with Jörmungandr, and the dawn of the Twilight of the Gods, and while this piece ticks in the same doomsday type scenario, the uncertainty is murdering me. Where did the Dark Portal open? Did the demons go a-killing just for the sake of it or is there a higher purpose? So, overall, it's 17/25

Entertainment Value - We Wants Moar, Precious! The way that this story is written is similar to Doom series: no need for overanalyzing or thinking: just Happy Tree Friends mixed with Goblin Slayer. Mindlessly entertaining and blood-dripping. The subversion of expectations was done very well when the Knight was disemboweled: I really thought he would survive, but then comes along Mannoroth and turns him into a pile of Guts and I'm just like. Overall, for being this mad fun, I have to give it a pyure 24/25

Final Score: 85/100