Talk:Reflect/@comment-28428152-20180127224947

My only issue with this are the flaws in sequence. After several days of being in this body, why was it just at the end that he finally saw his reflection? He'd already driven a car before then, and would've seen it in the rearview mirror, not to mention the mirror of a bathroom much before then or his reflection in a window (car window or otherwise). However, if his appearance had suddenly changed, then maybe that could be made clearer. Other than that, a very interesting read!