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We can't really give you too much feedback on a story's premise alone. How it's written also matters a great deal; even some cliche elements can make a good read if they're well-executed.

This kind of sounds more mysterious than scary, to be honest. But the plot feels pretty complete, with an established intro, climax and conclusion. I would say that you write this down into a story and put it in the Workshop for evaluation.

It's not really cliche. Most cliched LE pastas focus entirely on the episode itself, but this one shifts away to the people involved in making it, which is an interesting twist. But like I said, we won't know for sure until it's done.