Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31507371-20170320131723/@comment-26399604-20170327171448

You should re-post the story (in the same thread) in source mode so that it appears in the wiki's font format.

Also, I recommend breaking up the paragraphs because as is, it is very difficult to read through. It appears more like a block of words and can cause strain to the eyes. The last time I attempted to read a story presented like this, it gave me a headache. Now, I normally avoid them and this format can often cause others to do the same.

I thought I give you a heads-up on this. If you fix it, this might invite more people to read and review your story. Hope this helps.