Talk:Dead Bart/@comment-24608307-20151102085319

This story was just boring and very uninteresting to read.it had a very uninteresting concept of a lost episode from a beloved series,characters not acting right,HYPER REALISM,tried to be scary when it was just painful to read,the episode can predict the deaths of celebrities and the poor quality cliche

-A overused concept of a lost episode of a loved series

-hyper realism that would make Trollpasta's blush

-characters acting out of character cliche

-the episode can predict the future......that shit is not creepy

-tried way too hard to be scary

-it uses the episode had poor quality cliche

so overall i give this crappypasta a 2/10