Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24101790-20180515144449/@comment-24101790-20180515211920

Resdraon wrote: I was worried about the amount of "He's" and the characters name in my own story, but after seeing all the "I"'s in yours, it made me feel a lot better about it.

First person stories do tend to use "I" quite a lot, it's a bit like how third person stories rely on pronouns and character names. There isn't much workaround (that doesn't add its own wrinkles).