Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26277607-20150420021532/@comment-25037895-20150420024051

Here's what I saw:
 * (1) [lets] is a contraction [let's]. That's in there twice.
 * (2) ["No, Daniel"] needs a comma ["No, Daniel,"]
 * (3) [raspberry] is misspelled [raspberry]
 * (4) [They knew where Sam was, so they knew where we were.] I'm unsure why they would know where the shelter was just because they found a man dead in the streets. This is a glaring perplexity for me.
 * (5) [stituation] is misspelled [situation]
 * (6) The ending seems rushed, and makes the whole story seem like a Trollpasta a little bit, but it did make me laugh because the mom didn't know her son's name.