Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20150608042120/@comment-26030957-20150608211807

Well as a lover of Shakespeare's Macbeth I thought that was great. It kind of reminded me of what I was trying to do with Joyce. Take a theme of literature and warp it into a poetic type of micro-pasta. I think you are on to something here, Umby. Maybe throw in a hint that she has killed someone. Remember Lady Macbeth may have saw imaginary blood on her hands but she was guilty of being a murderess. So, like, throw in a line about an ex-husband or lover who is no longer around, or something like that, real subtle and short. This is good stuff and I think more pastas should make references to classic works of literature.