User:Wolf fang45

This is the story of two mlp characters Derpy Hooves and Apple bloom and is based off of the popular fan fic Muffins so are story beings with are friend derpy it was a warm and sunny day the flowers were blooming and the birds where chirping a grey Pegasus with cross eyes and a yellow mane was resting in the grassy fields it's derpy then two stallions come walking to derpy and begin to throw rocks at her one of the rocks hits derpy and she wakes up and says stop that hurts and one of the stallions say oh "sorry did that hurt" and then they begin to laugh at derpy which made her cry then the to stallions start walking around derpy saying cross eyes cross eyes derpy has cross eyes doing this enraged derpy and she asks the two stallions to stop saying that but they ignored her and kept on saying that so then derpy snapped and then she charged at one of the stallions knocking him down doing this enraged the two of them one of the stallions said "you just made a wrong move derpy now you'll pay for that" and so one of enraged stallions attempted to buck derpy but missed her and derpy countered by hitting the stallion in the side  but the other stallion managed to buck derpy in the side knocking her down and causing  some of her ribs to break the stallions took this opportunity and then  started kick and punch derpy everywhere leaving bruises and cuts and internal bleeding  and causing derpy to cough up small amounts blood one of the stallions had bitten down on derpy's right and broken the bone connecting the wing to her body by twisting it then one of the stallions said "stop I think she's had enough this is what you get for hurting me derpy next time you hurt me i'll kill you" and so the to stallions walked off and left derpy a few hours had passed and derpy regained consciousness she tried to fly but couldn't because her wing was broken so she limped back to ponyvile  she managed to make it back to sugercube corner and she walked in to the bakery where she had met the eyes of pinkie pie and Mr and Ms.cake they had asked derpy if she was ok and who had done this but before derpy could respond she had collapsed on the ground and immediately all the ponies had gasped Mr.cake said "pinkie get her to the hospital" and so pinkie had gotten derpy on her back and the slowly walked to the hospital when pinkie got to the hospital she yelled "I need a doctor" and immediately all the ponies stared at her the pony at the counter pushed a button and said "I doctor here asap" derpy had went in to a coma and about weeks her past and she had woke a nurse was in the room unaware that derpy was awake and so derpy had said "excuse me nurse what happened to me" the nurse looked over and seen derpy away and said "my your finally awake we thought you weren't gonna wake up" and just then Apple bloom and some other ponies had walked in the room and said "oh thank goodness your awake"