Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25907694-20150129194914/@comment-24957984-20150131104545

i'm afraid to say that Part 1's plot is cliché. It's pretty about a haunted TV that shows footage of something personal from the character and later "Ooooh death, so scary!", so I think the plot does not meet the QS there.

Part 2 suffers nearly with the same issues, and Part 3 seems to be somehow more interesting at the end, except for the part where you mention "The TV loves to torture me." it's unrealistic and stupid. Objects do not have the capacity to show something for its own entertainment.

About the grammar and spelling, I don't see issues by my eye, so I won't point out.