Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32807959-20181222171645/@comment-35711173-20181222203144

English: Very much below Wiki quality standard. Dozens of errors in spelling, grammar and punctuation.

Story: The boy wonder defeats the zombie fest using masses of military equipment. Even if this story were well written, I am not sure that makes it as a creepypasta. Gore doesn't make creepypasta. I get bored with one bone ripped off after another.

Immediate advice: Fix the English language. Nobody will read it and help you with the story with that many mistakes.

I suggest you read this blog entry of mine:

Basic Spell and Grammar Checking

Take it to heart.

You have too many paragraphs that are very close to what is called a "Wall of Text." Read this blog entry and apply its lessons. How I Learned to Not Make a Wall-o-Text

As you clean the story, edit it. This is way too much of the same stuff.

Also, consider two things
 * Turning him from Superman to human
 * Where the heck are they getting that kind of government only issue firepower?