Talk:Tobit: Hiya Toby and the Unwashed/@comment-26030957-20150626165541

This one is definitely one of my favorites. There was a lot going on here, many seperate plot threads that worked themselves together into a nice cliff hanger. I enjoyed how so many of the other chapters were fused into the story. This one is definitely not a stand-alone piece.

Your writing was excellent and there were quite a few phrases that really stood out. The tone and pace were consistent and uniform, making it a joy to read.

Fun, fun, fun. Keep up the good work. I can't wait until the next one.