Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20160223234242/@comment-4849011-20160330150320

That was just a made-up example, but it does sounds like the kind of film he'd make, doesn't it? As for the sentence, no, I wasn't suggesting that you remove "A lot of people snuck in." It's just that that part of the quote wasn't relevant to the correction I was pointing out. To save space I cut out parts of quotes, that's all. I don't want you to remove any text (except to correct typos).

I should have the thoughts on parts nine and ten tonight, but in the meanwhile here's that story from Juwanna Man. Miguel A. Nunez, Jr. and Vivica A. Fox were on a show promoting it and they told this story. One night the catering company brought a bunch of shrimp. Vivica didn't have any because it didn't look properly deveined to her, but Miguel scarfed down a bunch of it. The cast left and then the crew left. Before the crew left, they turned off power to the fridge that held the leftover shrimp. In the morning the crew returned before the cast and turned the power back on. The cast came and Miguel went to the fridge with the shrimp. Thinking it had been refrigerated all night, he polished off the rest of the shrimp. Later they were filming a scene with him wearing a dress & shoes and getting out of a car when he got sick. He reported that he threw up all over the fancy dress and pumps. Let's hope this crew never works on an action movie with a lot of death-defying stunts because there will be a lot of fatalities.