Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-6822927-20190324172709/@comment-36627132-20190325033937

"You did notice how his mother doesn't really give a damn about him?" Yes I did notice that. Still no excuse for disrespecting elders, especially your parents.

"How long do you think this story should even be? There's a lot here I really like and wanna explore" if you want to add to this, I suggest cutting a few things out.