Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24693653-20140419023325/@comment-24693653-20140419142926

GraydonL wrote: You seriously put that BDSM joke about Ecuinach in there? Hahaha. Anyway, it turned out pretty good. I would go into more detail on certian parts, though. That and the ending feels rushed. I did put the joke there, I thought you and I would get a kick out of that. But as for the ending, I wasn't too sure on how much to give away, as well as what you were going to do for the second part. I wanted to make it easy to follow, by giving subtle hints as to who you were at the time. But yeah, I see what you mean, I'm gonna be in the docs on google drive that we made.