Talk:Very Sweet Dreams/@comment-5733573-20180520195521

This was a lot of fun. The narrator has a great voice and sense of humor, and the "Freddy" shout-out was a very nice touch. Instant points from me if you can cleverly reference my favorite slasher series.

My criticism would be the same as with World Peace. I would have liked better formatting and paragraph structure, but again, this doesn't harm the "meat" of the story at all. You're a very talented writer and, in this piece, you managed to take an idea that could have gone way, way off the rails and made something unique and fun out of it.

I'm excited to read your other stuff!