Talk:The Doll Named Lil' Nancy/@comment-30402176-20161103163837

Hmmmm... Interesting concept. But I think you could have improved it somehow. Supposing you indicated at the end paragraph something that could have indicated he actually was responsible for what he did? That would unsettle people too. The only other thing I'd say is that dolls kind of feel like an awkward commodity in the 21st century, where computers, electronic toys and smartphones are all the rage.

Nonetheless, I enjoyed this read. Spooktacular!