Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28466248-20160515184326/@comment-26007602-20160516073943

The reason this is still here is that stories aren't deleted from the Writer's Workshop for being low quality. As long as it's a story vaguely written about horror, it'll usually stay here.

I'm assuming you want some kind of review (or not, since you apparently make "intentionally make your stories suck"), so I'll try and leave a quick one. First off, you need to space this out into paragraphs, as many will simply ignore it due to the poor formatting. Second, you could really do to proofread your work. Sentences like, "I had no clue why he wanted me to this and even asking he said it would smart to do so" do not make any sense and would most likely be caught if you read over your work.

This entire story lacks any kind of build up or suspense, along with any kind of flow. Events move too fast. Kid finds books, friend tells him to write about a murderer (for some reason? There really is no reason his friend tells him to do this), and then the friend dies and it was apparently the teacher all along. There's no description or time in between any of these events. The story makes no sense, and it ends on a "Since you've read this, you're in danger" cliché that is used countless times with zero effect.

If you actually want this on the site, I'd advise you try not to make your stories of intentionally poor quality.