Talk:The Strangest Security Tape I've Ever Seen/@comment-1272213-20131101062003

"By the time I grabbed it, he was gone, just as soon as he had left."

Shouldn't it be "...just as soon as he'd appeared."? I mean as it is, the sentence doesn't make any sense. I've narrated the story reading it this way and several others have also done it this way and none of us have made sense saying it.

I think if I was to reboot the story I'd fix it but I just wanted to tell you about it. It looks like a typo but if it's not, could you explain it?