Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26111839-20150623191924/@comment-26007602-20150623195329

Ah, perhaps you should indicate that the two stories are linked, as I haven't read your other story. It may give this story more substance, but I'm pretty sure that all stories on this site, sequels, spinoffs, or whatever, still need to stand on their own. As a horror story, this doesn't stand on it's own as there's no creepy substance to it. There still needs to be something more here than a list of experiments in these domes. You could try having a person come across this list somehow and give their reaction to it or maybe stylize te list so it looks like a more formal document. I'd expand upon it with preliminary results and data from each experiment to give a creepier aspect of how the inhabitants of each dome react to the experiments.