Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-25226524-20160813125543/@comment-25569708-20160909183314

@Christian - Thought I should tell you two things: One, I am going to review your second section tonight. Two, I just realized that something in my story could possibly reference the setting of yours. In the beginning of my section, my main character is listening to Johnny Cash's "Dark as the Dungeon" (Which is about working in a mine, take a listen to the lyrics) on his car radio, and the lyrics will appear in the story. Looking over your new section in the WW, I've noticed that it indeed partially takes place in a mine! Now I don't know if it matters too much, but I figured I'd mention it, as depending on the order of sections in the finished collab, the lyrics could either be a reference to your part (If yours comes before mine) or maybe my character could mention an incident long ago at the Hollow Roots mine (if the incident somehow became public) to his children as the song plays. That could spur the reader's interest as to what happened with the mine, and obviously your story would follow after mine at some point, thus filling the reader in on what happened. But yeah anyways, I'd like to hear what you think of the lyrics.