Talk:A Letter from Hell/@comment-25052433-20141123080614

All around this was enjoyable, but it lacked the "umph" that a story of this concept could have delivered.

This is a good concept, though one that has been done quite a bit throughout history. I think most of us are very interested in the afterlife, and those of us that enjoy horror really would enjoy an in depth look into hell.

I would consider expanding on this. Tell us more about what this soul is experiencing. This story is total potential, just need to tweak the execution and fill out the plot.