User blog comment:ShawnCognitionCP/Anti-Cliche Creepypasta Contest/@comment-26027963-20150506015201/@comment-27007772-20150506183251

The story is not without imperfections- "Her was suffering from Alzheimers"- such as these typos.

Your spin on the "Lost in a foggy forest" cliche was nice, and I assume I should have expected a twisted fairytale take on it from you, seeing as that seems to be your sweet spot.

The writing style was refreshing, and the use of a cold draft to match the fog was something I wasn't expected.

6.8/10, would skip to grandmother's house again. Above Average.