Talk:Oothecae/@comment-30701428-20180403225757

7.5/10

Pros: -I liked the whole parasite ordeal -The ending was pretty cool and spooky -The setting was unique and interesting

Cons: -A tad bit hard to read -Some of it seemed a bit cliché -Formatting could have been done better -The first two paragraphs were kinda slow -The random humor in the first paragraph didn't fit

Overall, a unique and interesting story with a cool concept that can be executed greatly, but it has enough cons to take it down a few points. I personally liked it. Good job!