Talk:The Cell Phone Game/@comment-24189079-20140530203853/@comment-25538487-20141014172540

I have to completely agree with Skunky_72. This pasta reads like it was written by a 8 year old at best. Plot holes, undeveloped characters, illogical compassion for a really, really, shallow girl... I mean that's the underlying issue with just a overall poorly written story. Yes I read through the whole thing because I started it and intended to finish it, but not because it was well written, or I liked it. The fact that this got PotM, or that as many people liked it as did, I feel like I could put a monkey in front of a keyboard and get just a well received piece of drivel as this.