Talk:1999/@comment-26490755-20150717113325

this pasta is very lazibly written at times... making it seem the main character doesnt realize the most obvious things just for sake of the plot. it doesnt make sense. and it makes things very predictable. like oh i keep getting fake messages yet im going to post the one wich isnt the real mr bear clearly yet is still the only one that is notable for some reason not relating to the plot. that implement should have just been left out completely, like a lot of things, it kills the realism of the story.

so far it gets a 6/10