User blog comment:TheActuallyRealDinosaurGuy/The whole "being tortured 4EVUR" thing is a bit cliche, so let's add something new to the mix, shall we?/@comment-25052433-20150512213805

So we all go to the DMV when we die?

Well, sounds like you're describing writing in the 2nd person. It can be tricky, but when done well it creates great stories.

The biggest problem I find with 2nd person writing is when the story is too specific. If you're describing the character as a kid, then you've just lost all your adult readers, and vice versa. So, my advice would be to keep it very vague, so that as many readers as possible can relate.