Talk:Jessie Mack/@comment-10950063-20131124003424

Man, I was really drawn into the mystery of this story, but it ends so limply. I really wanted to know what was up with Jessie Mack. It's fine to end stories vaguely, but I think this was a little too vague. There's pretty much one hint at who they are, but that's it. No real explanation of how Nate got this way or why the name is so powerful.

Still, I wanted to keep reading it, which is more than a lot of other writers on this site can do.