User blog:Ecuinach The Liar/Help with a story, "Starlight"

Okay, about two weeks ago me and the Hooded Werewolf began a collab for a full length spinoff to my micropasta, Eons. He has not been online in a while, and I don't want to abandon this story, so I will post a link here. This is just the begining of the outline and the backstory so far, and I need help https://docs.google.com/a/k12.sd.us/document/d/1D-gxQym9YSZsOv8TN1-8cdq3QaUG9DoDYKYfAEidhS8/edit - Starlight