Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20180724081137/@comment-35711173-20180727192218

Venting where? If you can have establish it as venting to his last true friend, his vodka bottle, then you may be able to do it.

As long as you can establish an atmosphere that is reasonable and keep us there. The problem is that you didn't have either atmosphere. We didn't feel a confession and we didn't feel prayer. What can you make us feel and smell?