Talk:On a Hill/@comment-25798693-20141202140453

10/10.

I must admit, this was one of the best creepypastas I've ever read. Even though it took me an hour to read all of it (on a smartphone), I believe it is a wonderful short story. It's not made of lots of cliche elements, just like many others, and it doesn't have to do with the usual ghouls, monsters and ghosts.

I especially liked the plot developement, and quite enjoyed the fact that the main hero decided to check the church out himself after John's tale. Furthermore, I liked that the cause of the paranormal phenomena was, overall, the population of an entire settlement, as well as the implication that, apart from the ghosts and ruins of this population, there also supposedly was an actual... presence.