Talk:Mr. Widemouth/@comment-25655620-20141129123655

Now this is a story!

Whit all the awful stories that get unreal praise it makes me wonder why this one wasn't more popular, I mean it is popular but not like jeff of eyeless jack.

Other than being perfectly written, the concept is really creepy, and the monster is very original, not being a semi-omnipotent killer that murders evryone.

I guess I like this story so much beacause it's very different compared to a normal creepypasta, the last part was what it really made like the story, it's not a twist but it does a perfect job at adding a creepy factor to the story.

But if I have to say what this story doesn't have, then that would be a real situation of fear, as the story or the monster aren't really that creepy, or at least in the eyes of most readers, but it doesn't really need to be creepy, beacause this story is based on a different kind of terror.

9/10

it would be an 8/10 but I have to add a point for the concept and monster.