Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24859608-20160318190337

I had these reviewed a long time ago, some people said they were pretty good, but I'm not sure.

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 * 1

It's Friday, and I was packed and ready to spend the night at a friends house. It was late when I got there so they told us to go to sleep. We walked upstairs into his bedroom, so tired that I think I fell asleep before I even got to the air mattress.



I wake up, notice it's still dark, I had to use the bathroom. I turn on the lights so I can make my way to the mattress this time. It wakes my friend up.

“What are you doing?” he said, seeming very suspicious, like I had killed someone.

“Going to the bathroom.” I told him, and started to walk out of the room.



“Stop! Please Stop!” somehow, he quickly got out of bed and tackled me to the ground. It's strange cause, he wasn't even looking at me. As if he was charging someone else.

I push him off of me, kicked him in the face, then said “What's your problem dude.” and ran to the bathroom. Quickly locking the door.

After I'm done, I see he is in his bed. Didn't think much of it, till I saw these nasty marks on his bruise and face. I thought he may have hit something on the back of his head when I kicked him. I checked his pulse, but nothing.



I alert his parents and they quickly call 9-1-1. He was dead, but even worse, the autopsy showed that someone stabbed him not once, but multiple times in the heart.

That's when I realized I am not a  murderer.....

Because all I did was kick him.



And #2

Sleep paralysis is a scientific phenomena, which may occur frequently mistaken for Narclepsy. I do not know how to explain it in a scientific manner, but I am able to explain it in more simple terms.

Let me start off with an example.

<p style="font-weight:normal;margin-bottom:0in;color:rgb(212,212,213);font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">You have just woken from a sleep, but your still so tired that you can't move. This is because your REM(Rapid-Eye-Movement, which should only occur while sleeping), is still going after you've awoken. Normally, this issue will resolve itself in a matter of seconds causing you to fall back asleep before you even opened your eyes. When this issue isn't resolved, your body then gets into a loop-hole, causing it to shutdown..Forgetting your still concious.

<p style="font-weight:normal;margin-bottom:0in;color:rgb(212,212,213);font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">So for the next set of minutes, your viewing your body going into every little part of your mind in a panic mode, revealing horrifying hallucinations that you can so much as feel. You can't run from these, you can't speak to these, you can't even blink. The only thing you can do is wait it out. <ac_metadata title="Two Micropastas(Re-Review)"> </ac_metadata>