Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25623211-20141107184522/@comment-24040907-20141110222512

Entropypersonified wrote:

Tyberzannisultra wrote: You're welcome, bud. Good luck with school and I hope to read more from you. I already wrote a story called ticker on this site and I have my own website for this sort of thing @ www.vivoloco.wordpress.com and I'm still working on this story as it needs to expand into at least a full short story, or the first chapter of a novel. Yes, I apologize for my lateness. I couldn't find Ticker on here, so I went and read it on your website. I thought it was good, well-written, and a bit scary. During my reading of it I thought to myself, "Oh, the ticking means he's insane, and tied to some clock-related murder." and from there I was able to predict that he killed his wife. I wasn't expecting the rest, though.

I liked the transition between "horrible ticking" and "glorious ticking" that occured with the introduction of the Clock girl. I have a pretty trippy image of her in my mind, thanks to your artful descriptions. Perhaps I could do some fan art of her, and maybe add it to the page as a little bonus for your readers? You'd have to link me to the page first, of course :)