Talk:Of Missing People/@comment-25947144-20170213104421

I must admit, unlike Derp, I read both this and Jake's (discarded) entry, as I was very curious. Being part of a series, I guessed there'll be plenty of parts I wouldn't understand. I was right, I'll probably get to the rest of the series after as I have to judge this one as a stand alone.

Short story: curious and entertaining. Long story: this was a fun and interesting ride through an alternate world that I appreciate you were able to turn into a part of the series. The characters felt pretty natural, as natural as any supernatural beings can be, and felt like a living and independent part of the story, not just walking exposition. That being said, an issue I noticed in both this entry, Reary's and Jake's former entry is the lack of dark humour, the theme of the contest itself.

This gets an 80/100.