Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-1186783-20140708011643/@comment-24304936-20140708132141

This is a neat story. Very well told. In the beginning of the story, I was expecting yet another "I was online searching for something scary" bland and cliche creepypasta scenario, but the story took a very nice twist after that. Maybe change the beginning so it doesn't lead people astray like I almost was? If you don't want to, I still don't think it's that big a deal.

You do needlessly space too much between paragraphs and I did notice some spelling errors, but those were the only mechanical things that I noticed. Which can be easily fixed.

All in all, I think you have a nice short story here. Very worthy of being on the main site after the minor fixes i suggested.