Talk:City Boy/@comment-25052433-20140906081621/@comment-24996913-20140906104753

Yeah, he's a wandering spirit so I figured that was a small hint that he was dead, as no human greatly injured could hike through the wilderness for miles. I appreciate your feedback, and I agree I did sort of ruin the element of surprise early on. I've always had a problem with holding back details, as I'm always eager to get to the action of a story.