Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-27905100-20170119051716/@comment-5614678-20170120191251

I understand MrDupin didn't have much good source material to work with, but other people in this contest wrote better stories than this one, so that excuse doesn't really work.

MrDupin's a great writer, and there are bits and pieces of this story I really like. But when it's all put together, it just doesn't work.

I'll be writing a nice, long review for this story on my blog stating all my thoughts on it clearly and concisely. For now, I just wanna say that even though I adore MrDupin and this story has some great moments, it just isn't good.