Talk:U.S.S. FEBRUARY/@comment-25941663-20160915195739/@comment-27012445-20161115022415

Thank you very much for the feedback. So the story behind this was I was trying to create a story centered around the song and eventually for a narration. Basically, I wrote a story specifically for a narration. In doing so, I was restrained by the song's length and had to keep a quick pace with the plot, but I think you are right. I definitely am going to re-visit this and flesh it out more and make it a proper story. The ones aspect I didn't get to explore was that at the end, the connection between the narrator and the Thing actually went both ways. He was able to see its thoughts and catch glimpses of its past and history.