Talk:It Breathes, It Bleeds, It Breeds/@comment-25941663-20160603182716/@comment-24101790-20160603183438

Thanks for the high praise. Usually when someone says it's hard to keep going with one of my stories it's because of the grammar. I enjoyed writing this one and seeing how it progressed. I had bit of a different ending in mind so I'm glad that it evolved into this one. A lot of inspiration for the stories goes to Junji Ito's "Tomie" series and its body horror.

I'll take a look over the bite scene and see what I can do to clean up that section and make it a bit more fluid. Thanks for the feedback.