Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25891880-20150503222200/@comment-25891880-20150503231455

Beetle bub wrote: You have a few grammatica errors, also the wording could be improved (like for instance, instead of saying "Today was the day I was going to apologiuze to my family" say "last night I had promised myself that I would confrotn my family, and apologiuze for the hell I put them through" and so on and so forth. This also isn't particularly long, you can improve the story by adding how the protagainst riuned his family's lives, mention some of the awful things he might have done/said. Alright, true, I'll work on it. Thanks