Talk:WWF: Cancelled in Your House PPV/@comment-31179891-20170627124935

this is a quite interesting concept of a lost media pasta, based on wrestling of all the other things

while there are a few clichés and unnecessary details such as "Except one.", the mention of south carolina's weather, and the "i was about to find out." cliché these are easily ignored and dont halt the progression of the story

a quite adept use of structuring to create some sense of tension to the story, instead of just simply describing the details is a refreshment from many other pastas of this type. during the whole climax of it when the match begins, a lot of subtle details are added such as kane's entrance song being slightly lower. while it could be argued as a cliché i feel this is less a cliché than just a common effect.

the gory details are usually overdone or not done at all in pastas, but this one sticks itself in the middle, edging towards the overdone side. theres not too much emphasis, though the addition of mankind's hair being singed, exposed tissue and bone loses a point for me.

the way mankind's backstory is described isnt too excessive in details or aimless plot devices, it's simply told that mankind was just a noname wrestler before foley replaced him after his death and how it was a coverup as the unknown wrestler looked like foley. while believable and logical, the slight lack of research shows as there was no wrestler before foley, only foley himself. if some polishing was done to the story in that regard and some details were also cut down, this could be great

7.3/10