Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30320239-20161026081834/@comment-28266772-20161026120510

Right so I think the point that Raptor has made is being missed despite him putting together a fair, and in-depth, review. Here's the gist of it though:

1) This story is formatted like shit and it makes it impossible to read.

2) The grammar, spelling, punctuation and formatting is terrible. This is not a little problem. The grammar issues alone render this story unreadable. No one wants to read a story that's written like this.

3) In summary - just so there's no confusion (even though Raptor was 100% clear in his feedback), this story is unreadable in its current state.