Talk:True Fear/@comment-25052433-20160818021311

This story does do a somewhat successful job at striking into what real fear may feel like. I appreciate the fact that it stuck to a fairly basic concept. No demons or ghosts, just a simple idea of a home break-in by violent individuals. It was short and moved along at a perfect pace, making it a quick and enjoyable read.

The only flaw I could find is the choice to write it in 2nd person-ish style. I doubt many people would hide under their covers in the event of escaped inmates protentially breaking in to their home. Not when so many other far more logical options exist, such as attics, closets or any other location that could be fortified. Still though, the general appeal is not lost, and this was a great micro-pasta. Well done.