Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-4665292-20180608193616/@comment-35911608-20180620162348

VerminGoat wrote: Jdeschene wrote:

To be specific, the one thing about your story that's clice is the first letter of reach paragraph. That's what I'm referring to at the moment. If that weren't a thing in your story, you'd have a better chance of it staying posted, So if I hadn't mentioned it, most likely no one would have noticed, and no one would care. But because I did, I now have no way to keep the story from being deleted without having to make changes to it that I don't want to make. Great. I don't think it would be deleted. But when you were explaining the story prior, you used the starting letters as an example of importance with the story, which just makes for hard reading even if someone notices but doesn't get it.