Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33756381-20181118212057/@comment-9041013-20181119112434

Usually, stories that are unrelated and are written within a very short time span from one another come off as not really well thoughout.

Anyways, you should get paragraphs in your entries, it makes the story seem more real, like you were actually writing a diary. It helps a lot to the readers and is the proper way to write stories.