Talk:The Grinning Man/@comment-28495040-20160519224821

The photo looks like a mascot for a scary video game or movie, and doesn't even have a word on it unlike in the story. The story also never mentions the "keyword," which seems like it's essential to the plot. But otherwise, interesting concept; a keyword triggering homicidal blackouts all due to an image. The grammar is just fine, and the ending left me feeling for the narrator. 7/10.