Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31315220-20170529041258/@comment-31315220-20170529052348

EmpyrealInvective wrote:

Cody6669 wrote: SNIP I'd suggest fixing a lot of the issues mentioned above and trying to post a revised version here for more feedback before attempting an appeal (as a majority of appeals with little to no changes are turned down). So I will start to fix the mistakes,I'll send you the story to check.