Talk:Razor's Edge/@comment-5269370-20140201181349/@comment-24085584-20140227231051

Thanks a lot.And you are right, I was writing this at a coffee shop on my computer. The ending was a bit rushed because it was getting near closing time. I am impressed that you were able to pick up on that just from reading it. When I started the story, I had a completely different idea in mind. But as I sat down to write it, it strayed and became something completely different from what I thought it would be. Thanks for the feedback. :)