Talk:Car Won't Start/@comment-25425579-20150825184751

I really like this pasta, mostly because it's realistic- although it would be rare (or nearly impossible, depending on your level of belief) to be attacked by Slenderman, ghosts or some other paranormal being, this kind of horror- being harmed and held captive by antoher human, is very, very feasible and actually happens more than most people would like to think. Therefore it's much scarier. I haven;t senn any of the grammar and spelling errors that others are talking about, so I'm assuming you've fixed them. The hitman's inner monologue of him second-guessing himself and his feelings of regret are a very nice touch. Good job on this story!