Talk:Can You Help Me Find My Cat?/@comment-26562141-20151120172941

I thought that this was pretty good :)

It setted up a nice eery tone and made me feel untrusting of the girl. It did not go overboard with unnecessary detail and made me feel uncomfortable. I did feel like that the intro did feel kind of not needed, it mostly has to with my personal taste. I'm more the get to-the-meat-of-the-story-right-away type of guy. The ending wasn't nessecarily creepy, but it was cute. Still kind of eery, but cute.

8/10