User blog comment:Underscorre/Jeff the Killer Rewrite Contest!/@comment-5614678-20151011132431

Alright, I'm ready to post my entry

http://pastebin.com/64W4ad13

I tried experimenting with the rarely used "first-person, omnipotent" narration style and I came up with a pretty good explanation for why. The story is written from the perspective of one of Jeff's (deceased) victims. There are allusions to the original story, but I tried to take the narrative in a completely different direction and style.

I hope you guys like it!