Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25983492-20150107222220


 * This story was deleted, can I get some suggestions. - Diamondsforme

A jar in the microwave
Al noticed a little jar in the microwave. As he was taking it out, he noticed there was something off about his reflection, it's eyes were closed. He dropped it in horror and it broke on the floor, as the tiny "him" fell out of the jar.

The First Four days
On the first day, John began to regret his decisions. On the second day, he realized he'd forgotten to write a note. On the third day, he began to smell. On the fourth day, the police found him, dangling there.

Always Behind you
There is something behind you, it's always behind you. But it doesn't cast a shadow, appear in pictures, videos, or reflections. Only you can see it, no one else can, and it's always behind you. Out of your view. Waiting.

When he died
When the bullet moved towards Karen, Timothy thrust himself in front of it, Karen fled from the shooter quickly. The following day Karen visited a medium. "How long were you two together before he was hit by a car?" She asked.

Shower Curtains
The truth is, when you're taking a shower, and you get the feeling someone is on the other side of the curtain, you're right. But when they hear the water stop or when you thrust open the curtain, it goes back into the mirror.

Waiting to take you away
Every night, a large man sits down next to you and watches as you slumber. He comes back every night in an attempt to take you away, but he doesn't feel right about taking you while you're asleep. So he waits. Until one night, when you awake to see him, and he can take you away.

The Best
There is a guy I know, he's the best. He tells the funniest of jokes, gives the greatest of gifts, and bakes the tastiest of treats. But the only people who know my dear friend,  The Grim Reaper, have sadly suffered the same fate as I have.

Poor Career Choices
Those poor, poor, theme park mascots aren't paid much, you know? They don't get any credit for the stupid repetitive job they do, nor do they have any friends outside of the other mascots. But what really upsets them the most is that they have to be hung up on hooks at night. 