Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25089042-20140621133819/@comment-25089042-20140623103446

Edit:

-removed Mr. Martino eating the note; replaced it with something crawling under his skin

-removed Dad from the climactic showdown

-followed Xezbeth's recommendation (thanks, I owe you one) and drew out the encounter with the Mom

-Changed his name from Joseph to Kevin because I like the nickname Kev.

-Improved formatting and some grammar errors

Trivia:

-Mom pinning down Kev parallels the first nightmare I had when I was about six years old. In my dream, my mom was a vampire who was about to eat me alive. I was saved by a priest who exorcised her with a glowing cross.