Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24841494-20140317225654/@comment-24841494-20140318183427

@Nooth Holy shit thank you so much. I didn't realize how much I didn't get. I plan on doing a lot of research on these things now. I will also simplify it a lot. About the bit where humans have not evolved, they have, but I really wanted to make them recognizable, so it is easier to connect. I mean IMO if they are not human anymore and basically aliens, then its "oh its aliens who cares". I had a minor idea that genetic engineers had found a way to prevent a species from changing via evolution, one too make it easier for them to make changes that wouldn't disappear, but humanity also was attached to the "human" look and did not want to evolve, basicly. I don't plan on going into as much detail as in the background in the story, tbh. I have a habit of over describing things and how they work to myself. I was going to mention in some dialogue that humans don't evolve, basicly and be done. You are right about the food thing, I need to fix that. I don't mean anarchy as in the "yay no government do whatever" type deal, I meant there is literally NO government, and no functioning society at all, because of the chaos caused by the end of the universe. Thank you for all the constructive criticism, bro. I did not intend for such a large story, I am just obsessed with creating backgrounds for myself, because I can't write if I don't know why everything is that way.