Talk:Chased

First Pasta?
Well I must say your description is absolutely excellent. You use this to take the reader and feel the full experience of the terror of this monster. That is most definitely the most exciting part of this story. This is a very very well written story and I say a huge congratulations to that. It's a also a nice little terror ride as "faceless crowds seeing right through me" really sends shivers down my spine. It was slightly shorter than what I would've wanted, but for a first pasta this is immense. Congratulations! 8/10. - CrashingCymbal (talk) 16:24, May 1, 2013 (UTC)