Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24059312-20140516023504/@comment-24821182-20140516041216

I much prefer this version.

My main gripe now is just the grammatical errors here and there, but that's really about it.

As for the operator, she has already sent the police to Mike's house, so if the admitted murderer is still there, they can take him then. I don't see how else she would react to a murderer's confession, other than wanting to keep him on the line long enough for the police to come pick him up.