Talk:I am Awoken/@comment-5025667-20130914145125

Holy shit this was actually pretty damn good. The use of repetition in the narrative was a really nice touch as it pounds words into you. I didn't quite get the ending though. By that I mean is the man insane and hearing hallucinations of his family or did they actually die over the coarse of the story? Either way besides that and how sentence structure could be changed in places, I really like this. A 9/10 even.