Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34824034-20180226023657

Hello! I have just written the first chapter of a series of pastas that i will call "404"

They are based entirely on an archive from a chatboard with seemingly no end, and the protagonist (JamisonFed212) is trying to get a 404 error, and view a mysterious admin's account history.

There is a lot of swearing in the pasta, i will now paste the pasta below for tips, and possible revising and editing, thank you!

404- Chapter 1

Post archive from 1/21/15 Boardname=questions_to_be_answered

JamisonFed212-I just got on this and would like some assistance CocaFreak76- What do you mean? JamisonFed212- I just wanted to know if there was a FAQ page. CocaFreak76- Nope... Sorry. JamisonFed212- U an admin or something? CocaFreak76- Yeah... JamisonFed212- U ok, m8? CocaFreak76- No, everything's fine, I just have to work with this guy. CocaFreak76- He's freaky... JamisonFed212- What's his accountname? CocaFreak76- I don't remember... CocaFreak76- Sorry, i just don't JamisonFed212- Wanna take this to private_password? CocaFreak76- Ok. END ARCHIVE

Post archive from 1/21/15 Boardname=private_password=123sesamestreet

JamisonFed212- So... This guy JamisonFed212- Do u know anything about them? CocaFreak76- Nothing much JamisonFed212- What does he do that makes him creepy? CocaFreak76- He is like emotionless. CocaFreak76- You would go to his office area thing, and he would be either staring at his screen, or you. JamisonFed212- Seriously, what's his accountname? CocaFreak76- I DONT FUCKING KNOW! CocaFreak76- Look, all i know is how to get to his account, but it's virtually impossible. JamisonFed212- tell me. CocaFreak76- Ok, all you ave to do is get a 404 error on this website. CocaFreak76 have*** JamisonFed212- Seriously? CocaFreak76- YES JamisonFed212- Ok... it's obvious that you're lying CocaFreak76- I'm not! JamisonFed212- Have you done it before? CocaFreak76- I HAVE FOUND NO WAY TO GET A 404 ON THIS WEBSITE JamisonFed212- Boy, do i want whatever you're smoking CocaFreak76- If you are not going to take this seriously, then fuck off! END ARCHIVE

Post archive from 2/1/15 Boardname=main_chatroom

DickChocolate02- Any freaks out here? JamisonFed212- Oi DickChocolate02- Do you know how to get a 404? JamisonFed212- Don't tell me u listened to that crackpot! DickChocolate02- Who? Cocafreak? JamisonFed212- Yeah, that fella DickChocolate02- When did he make contact with you? JamisonFed212- Wtf, why you asking? DickChocolate02- I'm asking because he just straight up dissapeared on january 2nd JamisonFed212- Dood, i chatted with him day before that... DickChocolate02- He told you about the 404? JamisonFed212- Yes DickChocolate02- Only his name? JamisonFed212- His name is 404? DickChocolate02- Ding Ding Ding JamisonFed212- Sounds like some edgy 12 year old who plays shadow the fuckhog on a daily basis DickChocolate02- Lol but DickChocolate02- Do not try to find him you'll be just digging your own grave JamisonFed212- Why JamisonFed212- HEY STINKY CUNT JamisonFed212- fuckin hell END ARCHIVE 