Talk:The Final Fate of Mary Ford/@comment-17095038-20150727230756

  Excellent story! I noticed this line,

"some unknown force kept bound me to that place",

and I'm not sure if it's just awkward to me, or if it's supposed to be a certain way since you wrote things with an old timey feel, or if it's a mistake, but I thought I'd bring it to your attention :) Again, this story is really great, I like the way you bring the character to life (pun intended) and the way you keep the theme going throughout the story.