Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25769703-20150116144443/@comment-25941663-20150123161044

That isn't creepy and I didn't really understand what was going on. It seems more like a very vague conspiracy theory than a proper creepy story. Also, there were some errors in your writing, mainly repeating words like "... was Europe was ..." and "... may of in fact of ...".

I suggest you try to proofread a bit more to catch those small errors next time.

Unfortunately, I cannot say I enjoyed it. But I have to admit 'theory-pastas' aren't really my thing. If I were you, I would try to come up with something creepier.