Talk:09/17/10/@comment-26409942-20150518225539

I loved most of this....good writing quality, creepy because it was realistic and could be true, very visual with a good build up....7/10 in total.

I dropped a few points for the ending. I hate to say it, but it disappointed me. There was no climax. The pacing was so good up until this point...but nothing. Where's the hunt to try and find this place....where's the being driven to not sleeping or eating because he can't get out of his head and just has to find out more for himself? Anything like that would have made the end more exciting.

I especially expected more at the end because of the set up at the start. With the man being described as relieved to get rid of the computer. It gave a hint that the same was going to happen here, that something would happen that would make the main character just as eager to get rid of the computer too....maybe some kind of 'chain letter' bad luck, or haunting, or someone going after him from what he knows etc. So it felt a bit empty when something like that didn't happen.

Up until that point, it was really good though. It was so visual and so well paced I could easily imagine it being a good little horror flick.