Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24469683-20180509140642/@comment-28266772-20180509151708

Just to let you know but the wikia doesn't allow pokemon pastas (we were inundated with them). That said, you get the mechanical stuff largely right (although there are still errors you need to proof) but there's just nothing to this story. I don't really get it, and recommend you put your time in writing something with more meat to it. As it is all I see here is the outline of a story, and not really a story itself.