Talk:Goodnight/@comment-4849011-20180906151431

I just saw the narration by NoTime and this was a great story. It does an excellent job of capturing the terror we feel as children when it feels that something is ready to prey on us in the middle of the night. I'm also glad you had the father be stern yet sympathetic instead of going with the terrible cliche of horror story parents who seem to hate their children. The ending was chilling, but I feel there's also a hopeful note since the protagonist now has evidence to prove that someone really was there.

By the way, now that's there's a narration of this, you should add the narration to the page and add the Videos category. You just go to "Edit", click "Add Video", copy and paste the URL of the YouTube video into the proper section, and adjust the size to your liking.