Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26512885-20150619214216/@comment-26502770-20150619221752

It was good but not realistic wich is important. First of all a doctor wouldn't give antidepressants for just something like this. The brother grabbing the shotgun made me laugh and there was no explanation to any of this. Even though it was a good story well writen it was not scary or realistic if you fixed something's and added  more it would be a good creepypasta and an explanation of some form is required it doesn't have to be every thing explainea though.