Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24946232-20140601011401/@comment-9967354-20140602114357

This is so much of an improvement of the previous version. I'm glad you've decided to give your protagonist a bit of information about the weird stuff happening and then begun with the blog. That's good; it gives the blog a definite purpose and you don't have to digress to try to keep the writer from sounding obsessed. There are a few errors here and there, but those can be overlooked. I'm genuinely intrigued, and I want to read the rest of this.