Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24976741-20141218034625/@comment-24976741-20141218124353

Thanks Grizzly for the information, I did happen to read it over before posting and knew that there was going to be some problems at the begining with the whole introduction, although I just figured to keep it with several other mistakes since I was going to gather opinions and remake it anyway.

I not the first one to say that I'm not good at romance stuories, in fact this is my first one trying so I just based it off of some of the cheesy ones that I remember instead and was going to fix it afterwards by doing some actual research.

About the prelude of E thing, ya I also knew that it was going to need to be broken up in fractions, but didn't know what type of approach or even how to do it.

Most of my stories are written somewhere between 7 p.m - about 12 a.m but today I have finals so I was being sloppy everywhere and really just didn't have the time that I usually have.

I didn't know dialouge needed to be quoted.

About the doctors age, I just picked some random number and all, no research knew someone was going to yell at me and all, but it's not like I already don't get yelled at anyways.

Oh ya about the spacing, ya it was already spaced itself, but putting it one the workshop tends to add another space for some reason don't know.

Thanks again for the info probably going to spend my whole day and then some writing after I get back from school.