Talk:An Attempt of Sanity/@comment-25471033-20190501214642

Typically, when I go through the comments and find positive words from GreyOwl, I know I'm in for a rough story, and this was no exception. The concept was amazing, i loved every detail behind the narrator. The way the story was told was also exceptional, there was no confusing when the next scene started and when the last one ended. I didn't see any grammar and spelling at all. As for any issues I found, it's hard to say, but I guess maybe giving a little more character development: why was he so angry with not being scary, when the exact opposite happened beforehand? 9.5/10

So, is this creature normalized? It seemed like it with the mother's reaction. I also gotta say that I love the fact that it seems like this thing is on a mission that it is purposely trying to fail. Ugh, I actually just found I really like this story.