User blog comment:EmpyrealInvective/So You Want to Write a Long Pasta/@comment-26011836-20150711180742/@comment-26011836-20150711185327

(hug) Well... It's here if you want to see it! I started going around a sprucing up the grammar. I'm also going to try and make a story outline for the next set of events in the story. Who else would you recommend going to for peer review?