Talk:Why Sarah Never Sleeps/@comment-25472902-20140928000532

Great pasta. Loved the rhyme! The thing with the dreams was really creative. Lizzie was great, because she's so mysterious. That was innovative. 9/10 because it was really great, but slightly hard to follow at some moments.

I especially like how you used the door, because everyone either has a door like that, or knows someone with a door like that.

My friend used to live in a house that had a door like that. It was in the corner on the second floor. We were kids when he lived there. His parents didn't let him go in the door. I think it's because they thought it was creepy. He told me that he opened it when his parents were out, and it was completly empty, but there were scratches on the door as if something was trying to get out. I went over and he showed me, but the scratches weren't very deep, so it was too hard to tell what happened. Maybe Sarah was in there, hahaha!