Talk:Never Let Go/@comment-25881926-20141218003300

This was rather interesting. While I didn't find it particularly creepy, it does have a large sense of ambiance as the main character (I shall refer to him as "Stalker" since that is basically what he turned into) drifts into a sort of madness that reminds me a bit of the Overly Attatched Girlfriend.

The flow of the story was normally well done, however there were at least five sentences that confused me and had me going back and rereading them. Three out of the five sentences never quite made sense to me, and it was probably due to a wording issue.

Stalker was a rather eerie character, seeing as he put so much effort into making sure the girl would stay his, going so far as to kill Steve. It wasn't the most captivating to read, but I do appreciate that there were not tense swaps and that there was a clear beginning, middle, and end.

8.5/10