Talk:The Cell Phone Game/@comment-24189079-20150316004941

In spite of my previous venting, I will now give this a legit review Conceptualy, I thought it was a pretty good story with a lot of potential, however there are a few major flaws that make it much more frustrating than enjoyable 1. Plot holes 2. Lack of explanation 3. Bland and unlikeable characters 4. Excessive violence 5. Pandering to teenagers 6. Bringing race into it when it really dosen't need to Sorry, but this story dosen't do it for me. It's not something I would read again 3/10