Creepypasta Wiki:Spinoff Appeal

Here is a system in which you can get your OC (Original Content) spinoffs, prequels, sequels, and stories on the forbidden subjects added to this wiki. Here's how it works:

Post your story offsite, and add a link to it below, along with a brief description. We admins will review your story to determine if it's good enough to be added to the wiki. If it is determined that your story is good, we will add the story ourselves, and add credit to you in the footer section. We will also add your story under User Submissions under your username. If the request is fulfilled, your post will be deleted.

Here are some places you can upload your story for it to be judged: Pastebin, Spinpasta Wiki, Zelda Creepypasta Wiki, Minecraft CreepyPasta Wiki, or Poképasta Wiki. You can also upload your story to Deviantart.

Keep these things in mind:


 * Your story must be original content (OC).
 * Your story must meet the Quality Standards in order for it to be accepted.
 * Try to use as few Creepy Clichés as possible.
 * Stories (this includes stories written the format of a diary or journal) must be complete. No "COMING SOON!" pages or half-finished pages.
 * You can add multiple stories in your request, but you have to put a description for each one.
 * If you don't want to give away any "twist" you added to the plot, just mention in the blurb that there's a twist that we should find out for ourselves.
 * Don't use this page to troll.
 * Don't get too upset if your request is denied!

Admins: If you reject a request, give an explanation why (bad spelling, bad grammar, too many clichés, too generic, Mary Sue protagonist/antagonist, poorly-written, etc.)

And please remember to sign your requests with four tildes.

Mandatory Fun
This a story I submitted a few months back. It was pegged as a spin-off, and I sought to appeal it, as it is not based on any pre-existing pasta that I am aware of. That was the last I heard of it, so I thought I might try again. It's a haunted artifact story, of sorts.

It can me found here: http://pastebin.com/ajtZRHb8

Mr. Mendo talk

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 * We can post this, as it wasn't really bad. The cliches were pulled off well, the grammar was good, and the story as a whole was interesting. - WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  14:27, May 16, 2014 (UTC)

It's All It Took
http://pastebin.com/AsmFpE0S

This is actually a story I wrote quite some time ago. I brushed up on some of the grammar and corrected some other writing mistakes. It may seem like your every day, haunted videogame pasta, but there's a twist at the end that's supposed to make up for that. Yes, it's cliched, but on purpose, for some dark humor.

I have posted this on the Someordinarygamers wiki, and have gotten some great reviews from people. I didn't link the SOG wiki version on here, simply because that's the unedited one, which still has plenty of errors. However, if you would like to read the reviews on my pasta, then click this link: http://someordinarygamers.wikia.com/wiki/It 's_All_It_Took

Refreshing Demise (talk) 21:03, April 19, 2014 (UTC)


 * Not a bad idea at all, and this shouldn't be against the spinoff rules as the game was not haunted. What's stopping me from accepting this, however, is that the pasta could have been written in a better way. Maybe you can cut the last paragraph because the date is a good ending itself. And maybe you can elaborate a bit; add some detail to make the story seem realistic. Otherwise, it's good enough and will probably be accepted anyway. -Are you happy now?! (talk) 05:02, April 20, 2014


 * Edit: Quality standards -Are you happy now?! (talk) 09:02, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * First I'd like to thank you for taking the time to actually read the story. I understand what your reasons are for rejecting it, and as I said, I wrote this quite some time ago; hopefully I'm better at writing now than I was then. Maybe I'll fix it up a little more and give it a shot later. Thanks anyways! Refreshing Demise (talk) 00:53, April 25, 2014 (UTC)
 * First I'd like to thank you for taking the time to actually read the story. I understand what your reasons are for rejecting it, and as I said, I wrote this quite some time ago; hopefully I'm better at writing now than I was then. Maybe I'll fix it up a little more and give it a shot later. Thanks anyways! Refreshing Demise (talk) 00:53, April 25, 2014 (UTC)

By The Fire's Light
It can be read here: http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/By_the_Fire%27s_Light or here: http://www.creepypasta.com/by-the-fires-light/

This Slender Man pasta was my attempt to shake the accumulated debris off of Slender Man and strike back at his original roots from the Something Awful thread it was originally created in with the Victor Surge posts. It deals particularly with the Slender Man's meta nature (our belief in it making it real) and the Slender Man's realization of its meta nature and what lengths it would go to stay around as it is.

It is actually part of a six part "saga" I wrote and had published on http://www.creepypasta.com but the first story was originally written as a stand-alone and can stand-alone (as can most of the six stories actually). If this one is accepted I would link to the other five for permission to have them posted here. Otherwise, there doesn't seem much point in trying to make you read that much! Star Kindler (talk) 01:43, April 6, 2014 (UTC)


 * It was rather thoughtful of you to decide to post this one at a time, and thank you for that. However, while the end of your pasta induces some thought provoking ideas, the beginning puts the reader off. It reads like an old horror movie, where one is being followed by the camera and suddenly there's splashes of blood everywhere. It also follows along a very popular cliché where someone doesn't believe something is haunted, then gets in and gets killed. Then there's the bit where the main character is recovering. I know this isnt the writer's workshop board, but perhaps you could start with that? And then hints and bits about the past. Gives a sense of mystery to the whole endeavour. I'll read the next parts for reference and get back to you if you don't see this, but for now it's denied. The first part, anyway. - WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  15:34, May 16, 2014 (UTC)

Justinian
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Justinian

This Pokepasta is about an actual game-breaking glitch that occurred after my best friend and I had a Link Battle in Pokemon Y. I won't blame you if you read it and don't believe me at first (or even at all). If I read about something like this, I would most likely be skeptical too; besides, reading a creepypasta is mostly about quality and creepiness, not how much the reader believes in what the narrator is saying. Medella (talk) 01:41, February 24, 2014 (UTC)


 * This was a good pasta, yes, but it simply wasn't scary enough. I have to admit I was rather confused when it came to deciding whether to accept this. But, really, we can have better Pokemon pastas. -Are you happy now?! (talk) 08:14, April 22, 2014 (UTC)

Stranded Town
http://pastebin.com/xDwkW10J

I made this creepypasta as a change of pace from the usual Minecraft creepypastas, they are usually based on Herobrine and what happens when a player encounters Herobrine. In this pasta I have decided to based it off Steve, and to not mention that the pasta is even based of minecraft. In a way it is a Mindf**k creepypasta... You will have a better nderstanding of what I mean if you read it first. The Hidden Valve(talk) 05:40, January 20, 2014 (UTC)


 * It was rather cliche, despite being well written, besides the blank-faced NPCs and desolate towns. -Are you happy now?! (talk) 11:14, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

Repercussions of Evil Spinoff
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4067416/1/Doom-Repercussions-of-Evil-Mark-II Written five years ago, based on Peter Chimaera's Doom: Repercussions of Evil fanfiction. Read it for yourself and see the reviews. Loocodnom (talk) 05:46, December 12, 2013 (UTC)


 * Bit like a hero's tale in space, but it meets the quality standards. I haven't read 'Repercussions of Evil', though, so I might have to get back to this after I do. - WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  15:56, May 16, 2014 (UTC)


 * Repercussions of evil, now that I've looked it up, I know, is not a creepypasta. Your story is like a longer version of it, and perhaps even a better one, but as a whole, this was a space adventure. A good one, in all conscience, but it does not belong here. -- WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  07:41, May 19, 2014 (UTC)


 * Isn't Repercussions of Evil supposed to be a trollpasta? LOLSKELETONS (talk) 08:38, May 19, 2014 (UTC)


 * I didn't know it was on the wiki! I found it in know your meme. And yes, it should be, now that I think of it, (>_>) because the ending is evidently not supposed to be taken seriously. Well, most of it isn't supposed to be taken seriously.

Aura.exe
I just wanted to add some edits that make the story much better.

Here's the paste bin of the work I did.

http://pastebin.com/vuyPe1YJ

Originally supposed to be an edit but I got re-directed here. I added content to try to improve the original piece (Showing Here http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Aura_._exe). It's about a guy who discovers an illegal copy of a game that was banned from reproduction and sale due to the fact the creator was insane. Ninjas-in-a-box (talk) 23:24, October 30, 2013 (UTC)Ninjas-in-a-box


 * As a video-game pasta, this was a bit cliche. There were gruesome images, crazy hallucinations, a guy who refused to sell the disk and another guy who stole it; it's not really anything new and intriguing. The idea that the game was created by a religious nutcase wasn't too bad, but the rest of the storyline went straight downhill, not to mention that sudden changes in the tense by the end made everything confusing. Even so, the story when pasted on the wiki would have produced severe formatting errors. -Are you happy now?! (talk) 06:01, April 20, 2014 (UTC)

Collin Farrior: The Proxy Of Death
A Slender Man Story I Wrote which tells the tale of a FBI Agent who survives a Night with The Slender Man and His Death Dealing Proxy Named Collin Farrior here is the Link: http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Collin_Farrior:_The_Proxy_Of_Death Stormtali (talk) 01:30, October 19, 2013 (UTC)


 * There were many errors here, which includes randomly capitalized words and sudden changes in the tense, but that can be fixed. The story, however, was not up to the mark. It all sums up to a couple of people dying because of slenderman (and his new minion) and only a single person returning to tell the story. The plot was rather weak, and the bits with the notes were not exactly intriguing. The characters were rather characterless; it was as if they were destined to die, and there was not much about what slenderman is actually about: the slender syndrome. If anything, I'm surprised the narrator survived. I'm sure we can have better slenderman spinoffs. --Are you happy now?! (talk) 15:51, April 19, 2014 (UTC)

Pokemon Golden Yellow
My third and probably final pokepasta. Here's the link: http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Pokemon_Golden_Yellow  Pokemongreen3867 (talk) 04:15, October 12, 2013 (UTC)


 * So the pasta in a nutshell is a hacked version of a Pokemon game. Sounds a bit 'Pokemon black' to me, but I think we can accept this, yeah. -Are you happy now?! (talk) 08:42, April 22, 2014 (UTC)


 * Edit: Deleted. 'Too Cliché'. --Are you happy now?! (talk) 14:17, April 22, 2014 (UTC)

Pokémon Fuchsia
I wrote another Pokémon pasta. This one is also very well written and different from my previous entry, "Pokémon Dark Green". Please read it and give me some sort of feedback. Here is the link: http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Pokemon_Fuchsia Thank you. Pokemongreen3867 (talk) 00:02, October 5, 2013 (UTC)

Pokémon Dark Green
I wrote this pasta months ago. I know it's another pokemon pasta, but I feel that it is well written and deserves a chance on this wiki. It has a similar feel to lost silver and strangled red. At the very least I would like it to be reviewed and for me to get some sort of feedback. Here is the link: http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Pok%C3%A9mon_Dark_Green  Thank you. Pokemongreen3867 (talk) 02:03, September 30, 2013 (UTC)


 * This has been up for a while now, actually. LOLSKELETONS  ([ Leave a message ]) ( My contributions ) 05:20, October 5, 2013 (UTC)

Herobrine Spinoffs
I specialize in writing unexpected and very creepy Herobrine spinoffs, almost always based off a concept that has never been used before. I am quite good at writing, and I have several stories planned out, with major twist endings, and I have 2 already half written out. I just would like my pastas to appear here, for publicity. Here is a link to my quotev profile, I have the two stories I mentioned included in here: http://www.quotev.com/Allibrine Also, I would like to point out that while the "Allibrine" pasta may seem like a spin off, it is sort of an introduction to another character, who will feature in some of my stories. So please leave it up, it is very important to peope who want to have an understanding of the character.

Allibrine (talk) 07:36, June 1, 2013 (UTC)


 * I honestly can't decide on this. It's well written, and I like the idea of it being narrated from Steve's point of view. But it read more like a fanfiction than a creepypasta, and it introduced new concepts. I think I'll accept it, though. Herobrine was a shallow concept anyway. There's a chance, however, that admins will disagree. -- WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  07:07, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

Could you Add My Story for Me?
www.spinpasta.wikia.com/silence- Aight. This a rather...short background story about Milo Asher's background preceding and during Tribe Twelve. Also describes Firebrand's reactions. Just put it up, and add me in the footer like you guys usually do. That is, if the answer's yes. -Snap Flash (talk) 06:13, March 3, 2013 (UTC), March 2013


 * This pasta sort of lacked in much-needed description and expression, like the skeletal structure around which a story is made. The ending was a bit... Predictable? I'm sorry. - WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  09:16, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Can you add my story please?
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Pok%C3%A9mon_-_Death_is_welcome I have worked very well on this and would like it to be on this website. I put it up thinking that it has good story, creepy atmosphere & well writen but it was put as a spinoff. So can you add it please? Thanks Ryan russell13579 (talk) 20:39, April 8, 2013 (UTC)

Falls below quality standards.

 Sloshedtrain  Talk   Contribs 21:26, October 2, 2013 (UTC)

Blue Eyes
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Blue_Eyes - A story about a girl who gets bullied and abused a lot and eventually goes insane. Some people thought if it as a spinoff of Jeff the Killer, but it wasn't intended to be. It was taken off of CPW because of that reason... So please put it up. ~Hoodie (talk) 06:02, March 23, 2013 (UTC)


 * This does seem Jeff-Inspired. It's a story about how a person was bullied and became a killer with a special name. The story itself is not up to quality standards and the expression is rather blunt. -Are you happy now?! (talk) 05:29, April 20, 2014 (UTC)

Spinoff Incoming (Squidward's Suicide: Rewritten)
I recently rewrote Squidward's Suicide, erasing the clichés while trying to keep the story good. I passed it around to two or three users, all of them replied positively besides pointing some spelling and grammar mistakes, so I think that it should be good to make it a candidate to be one of the few Spinoffs that gets added.

Link. WhyAmIReadingThis (talk) 21:03, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * Hmm... Some grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing a little editing won't fix. I think we should post it on Spinpasta Wiki before considering putting it on this site, but overall, I think it's a pretty good candidate. Why do they call it the funny bone? Because obviously people are laughing at your pain. 00:03, March 13, 2013 (UTC)


 * Grammar mistakes. Oh. I'm sorry. Sure. I'll add it to the Spinpasta Wiki after I'm done with the grammar mistakes. Thank you for the response, Skeletons. I&#39;m not an actor, I&#39;m a distractor (talk) 20:19, March 13, 2013 (UTC)


 * Added to Spinpasta, as suggested. Also couldn't add the Red Mist /Squidward's Suicide category there. I&#39;m not an actor, I&#39;m a distractor (talk) 21:25, March 13, 2013 (UTC)


 * If we do add the page, what do we call it? SS rewritten? Or do we blank out the original page and replace content? --Are you happy now?! (talk) 09:12, April 20, 2014 (UTC)


 * Ugh. I almost forgot about this. I'm really not sure if it's a good idea to have two of the same story, but it was better than the original (do not beat me up for this). -- WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  12:40, May 23, 2014 (UTC)

This is my appeal
I've wrote a creepypasta about the Darkrai's ability to create nightmares and making people suffer since it. Its main character is Red. It has some elements from the game since Red is the character from the game. It's start involves the misterious package you get with the Darkrai event in Diamond, Pearl and Platinium. It also appelas to hardcore pokémon fans as it plays with the fact that you can only wake up from Darkrai's nightmare with Cresselia's scale.

Link:

MTVirux 22:59, April 1, 2013 (UTC)


 * We don't really accept Poképastas anymore, and this specific one is not quite up to QS. Not really because of the story, but for the lack for a writer's unique expression. It reads like a fairy tale. I did not understand most of the references myself, because I'm not a Pokemon fan. So this didnt quite resonate with me, sorry. The ending sort of put me off, too. It's something I've seen before, in horror books. You think it's over, and then, all of a sudden, a skeleton pops out. - WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  08:12, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Story Appeals
OK, so these first two are about Slenderman, BUT, it isn't the OMGITISSLENDERMANBBQ type of story. It is verry subte for both of them, usually being found out at the end and not playing a huge part in the rest of the story, in terms of relating to Slenderman.

Why I Don't Laugh
http://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/p1lgg/why_i_dont_laugh/Has a bit of a twist ending I guess, nothing major, I basiclly turned a joke into a Creepypasta and never really said it was Slenderman.


 * Not a spinoff exactly, and that's good enough. However, the narration is rather mechanical, and the story as a whole was a bit shallow. I'm denying this because it might be deleted on the grounds of it not meeting quality standards. - WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  09:37, May 17, 2014 (UTC)


 * Gave it another read, and I think it's not bad. Has a bit of a mystery element too. - WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  10:06, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The Guardian:
http://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/wd12g/the_guardian/ I actually actively refraim from naming Slenderman in this one till the end. It is still a bit of a twist I guess, but nothing too major.


 * This sort of messes up the idea of a creepy slenderman. I know it's a bit of an extension of the first story, but I'm sure that one can survive without this. - WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  10:06, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

My Own Hell:
http://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/yg674/this_is_my_own_hell/ OK, so I can't say what this one is, and I do appologize if it gives you the "oh no, not another one," feeling, but although the subject is overused to death and beyond, the way I tell it is more or less original. There is a journal at the end, kind of, but it is more for the reveal/twist, not really the format.

Dr Remag (talk) 17:41, April 6, 2013 (UTC)


 * Your story "My Own Hell" has the wrong link. Did you mean this? TerribleFate64 (talk) 21:06, April 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, sorry about that. I changed the link to "My Own Hell." Dr Remag (talk) 22:14, April 6, 2013 (UTC)


 * Good story, but we simply don't accept Pokemon anymore. - WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  10:06, May 17, 2014 (UTC)


 * I wrote another story that got good praise. It is based on the holders, though not in the holders format and uses one of my original charaters. The story is called The Last Object: http://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/1bx27e/the_last_object/ I may have broken the canon, but at the same time I stuck, more or less, to the canon of the original holders story and have a pretty large twist to it. This one is more of a mindfuck then my past work I think, unsettling with the smallest bit of suffering for flavor. Give it a read and tell me what you guys think.
 * Dr Remag (talk) 16:08, April 8, 2013 (UTC)


 * Goes against the original holders rituals, and kind of ends them, destroying their purpose. Good fanfiction, but the website isn't for fanfictions. - WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  10:06, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna work on fulfilling these appeals soon, it's just that I'm working on a couple of sketch requests for friends on DeviantART and FurAffinity so it might take awhile. Just letting everyone know that I haven't forgotten about Spinoff Appeal. A huge battleship FURBEARINGBRICK is approaching fast! (talk) 15:31, April 10, 2013 (UTC)

Dyers Eve ✅
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Dyers_Eve I've had this story available on the Spinpasta Wikia for a little over a month. The story intertwines 6-8 different previous pastas, with verbal allusion to several others, which is why I figured I would post it on the Spinpasta wiki primarily. The story follows "Peter" in his journal. He was one of the original scientists who was involved with the Gateway of the Mind project. Five years later, he is re-assigned to The Transcendence Project, which is essentially "take two" and taken directly from Godzilla: Replay and the preceding NES Godzilla pasta. Their first human test subject is a boy named Benjamin. Peter is dealing with becoming overly attached to Benjamin and his past regrets, which drives him to insanity. He sneaks under "the facility" one night to find a chamber that holds Heaven, which he drowns under the influence of another demon. There's also two twists at the end, one of which is pretty predictable, the other I find somewhat clever but that might just be me. I'm personally proud of the pasta and was curious if it could be uploaded here. (I'm so damn good at making my descriptions brief, guys.) I, Da Cashman (talk) 03:25, June 2, 2013 (UTC)


 * To be fair, this was a long read and it really took me a while to think up a review. In your story, which is a spinoff of almost EVERY.BLACKLISTED.SUBJECT., you've restricted all creepypasta characters in a single chain of events. A single universe, if you will. It was like the little comic we have on jeff the killer and his pet, you guessed it, smile dog. But it was very well written, which is the reason why I cannot bring myself to deny this. I'm sure users will be rather excited by this, as they can relate to other stories they've read before (OHMYGOD THE GUY MORPHED INTO SLENDERMAN), and I'm sure they'd love it. So, yeah. Good job. --Are you happy now?! (talk) 07:59, April 20, 2014 (UTC)

My Pasta
I wrote this creepypasta here: http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Origin_of_Scrowstalk in hopes that it would be published here. I would really like it to be a real thing, please critique my work :) UnknownExistance (talk) 03:24, May 20, 2013 (UTC)


 * Good expression, but bad spinoff. I couldn't really picture any of that, and when I did, it all seemed a bit comical. You can express emotion well, but here, we're discussing Slenderman, Jeff, and the scarecrow. Not really up to the mark. --Are you happy now?! (talk) 08:40, April 20, 2014 (UTC)

Perplexus ✅
Perplexus is a creepypasta that may fall under the 'haunted file' or the '.exe file' category. Although the story is not centred around an executable file, or is in fact truly haunted, it may still be rejected because of this. To ensure I did not simply have my post deleted, I thought it best to link it here for review and possible acception. The story follows one man's interest in an encoded file that has gained popularity in the media, and the dark meaning behind it. Pastebin link is here: http://pastebin.com/hr0mZNGs

Tigerhallam (talk) 15:15, June 9, 2013 (UTC)


 * Good pasta. I don't think it's against the spinoff rules. Perhaps you can improve the poem, but the main idea was intriguing, and the ending was unexpected. I thing this can be accepted, yeah. Also, it seems by your time stamp the this has been here a long time. -Are you happy now?! (talk) 16:06, April 19, 2014 (UTC)

Operation: Alpha
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Operation:_Alpha

Look, I don't want to spoil the surprise (because it's one of those mind-fuck pastas) so I'd like you to read it so you know why it's on the Spinpasta wiki. Now, I know there are alot of HORRIBLE pastas in the general subject, but at least it's not a .exe/haunted game like 99% of all the others. I didn't see any creepy clichés in it, there may be 1 or so, but I think it qualifies to pass Spin-Off Appeal. It's my first and best pasta I wrote, so uploading it here would be a huge achievement in my story writing.

Your's truly, that creepy guy who stalks people in chat.

Operation Top Dog: A Government Creepypasta ✅
a http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Operation_Top_Dog:_An_ORIGINAL_Government_Creepypast

My so-called creepypasta is about the government. I can't really give anything else away. It took me about 4-5 months to write it (Still open to edits). I DO admit it was inspired by MKULTRA and Polybius, though. It's just not a spin-off of them.

User:Pupdude (talk) 21:47, June 17, 2013 (UTC)


 * Possible: If you could cut down on the caps as they arent needed in thhe story I think it could be greenlighted as it isn't actually a haunted game or file.

20:43, July 4, 2013 (UTC)


 * I'm guessing you meant the all-caps parts.  Replaced all of the all-caps with italicized lowercase.  Hopefully, that solves the issue you had with it. User:Pupdude (talk) 03:42, July 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * I still need a verdict on my creepypasta.  Could someone help me out? User:Pupdude (talk) 18:40, September 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * I think this is okay, and it's been hanging here for quite a while now. --Are you happy now?! (talk) 08:48, April 20, 2014 (UTC)

The Origin Behind Squidward's Suicide and Red Mist
http://www.booksie.com/horror/short_story/thewalkingcreepypasta/the-origin-behind-squidwards-suicide-red-mist

I'd like to add this story because this isn't even a spinoff. It's a prequel story on how the Red Mist and Squidward's Suicide came to be. Please take the time to read my story. TheWalkingCreepyPasta (talk) 18:30, July 6, 2013 (UTC)


 * Other than being a wall of text, this fell way below our QS. -Are you happy now?! (talk) 09:44, April 22, 2014 (UTC)

Abandoned For Life
A long maplstory pasta  invo lving events that lead to the house in the swamp to be abandoned. Not that many cliches my freind went over it..

http://alexs-spinoff-appeal.wikia.com/wiki/Alex%27s_spinoff_appeal_Wiki

3alexbalex (talk) 11:32, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Falls below our standards. LOLSKELETONS ([ Leave a message ]) ( My contributions ) 01:46, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

Doctor Hate
It starts out kind of cliche talking about how I get the game, but the game is not haunted or possessed. The game itself is original. It's meant to teach a lesson, and I mean for the reader to take the lesson to heart as well. I'm fully willing to let this pasta be anonymous, but I want for it to be meaningful to whoever reads it.

http://pastebin.com/utSv8qHz


 * You're a good writer, and that's the main reason I'm disappointed that this section wasn't signed. However, as a video game pasta, this wasn't really scary as much as sad. Besides, quite a few pastas (mainly Pokemon) use the same idea (vaguely). There's your character, a bunch of his loved ones slaughtered, and his being given options of which either one leads to the same fate. I think I'll ask an admin about this, but for now it's denied. -Princess of Insufficient Light, Ruler of Heck.  (We Handle The Small Stuff)  14:15, April 26, 2014 (UTC)

Copys
This is an original story based on a dream I had. This video game, which is practically brand new, was bought for the boy who owns it. It wasn't found or given to by some weird dude. It's also not a haunted game, but practically a snuff film turned into a video game. The cutscenes are real footage, which is the part that makes it disturbing. I've gotten GREAT reviews on it from peers, even my best friend who does NOT like creepypastas. If any of my stories should go on the Wiki, it's this one. An admin denied it with no explanation. "It was denied, end of story." The rules say I need a fair explanation, which I can't think of a good reason at all. The title is original, the content is original, there are hardly cliches, and the ones that ARE there work with the story. Trust me, I've read video game pastas. A comment I got from a peer was "FINALLYY! a video game pasta that's GOOD!" No hyperrealistic blood here. So please let me put it up? Also, the game "Copys" doesn't exist.

http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Copys

ReitannaSeishin (talk) 18:45, August 24, 2013 (UTC)ReitannaSeishin

It's meets quality standards and the pasta itself is pretty good. The gore is pulled off correctly and had minimal clichés. To be on the safe side, I will add this to NSFW. --  Sloshedtrain  Talk   Contribs 22:41, October 2, 2013 (UTC)

Set Me Free
-Set Me Free=

Yes, another Slenderman story, but this one will be different. It goes into more of what the Slenderman is, why he does what he does, and so on. I have not completed it yet, but I can tell you it will be a more original take than 'kidnap kid, terrify parent, no survivors' breed of Slenderman stories. The only cliche is the number 13 used once, and if I remove this it will be of no consequence to the story. http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Set_me_Free Not finished yet, but I will finish it if I get approval to put it on this site. I believe it lacks grammar errors, and uses the proper spacing and title capitals.

It does not actively state the name 'Slenderman' but uses the same description - tall, thin, and faceless, as well as using the operator symbol. The basic premise: A historian is invited by a collegue to Cornwall, to examine a centuries old book with the operator symbol on every page and a hidden message. After viewing this, the symbol starts to crop up around his life, and he begins being stalked by a being that begs him to 'Set me Free'.

I think this gives Slenderman a slightly fresher take than 'omgfacelessmanisgonnakillme' and will, later on (I have not written this part yet) deal with more unique themes about him.

Tenzinkendrick (talk) 18:45, September 1, 2013 (UTC)Tenzinkendrick

I like it, it mets up to par and doesn't follow serious clichés. Though, it does have some grammar errors, but I'll deal with it.

 Sloshedtrain  Talk   Contribs 21:46, October 2, 2013 (UTC)

Pinkie Pie's Blood
Yeah, yeah. I get it. MLP creepypasta is not scary. Look, I think it's fine, I checked for grammar issues, I don't see a problem this not entering the site. If it doesn't meet the standards, oh well. I guess it'll just stay on Spinpasta. I thought Cupcakes was real good. Why not make one myself?

w:c:spinpasta:Pinkie Pie's Blood

Just another grimdark Cupcakes spinoff. Brings no new ideas to the table and is of below-average quality (for creepypasta in general; for a MLP grimdark, it's pretty run-of-the-mill).

LOLSKELETONS ([ Leave a message ]) ( My contributions ) 01:46, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

Wilderness
http://someordinarygamers.wikia.com/wiki/Wilderness

Posting this for a friend who didn't want to go through the spin-off appeal for some reason. That user is Stormlilly and I have their authorizaton to do this.

The Fantastic Flaky~ (talk) 04:12, October 6, 2013 (UTC)


 * The idea was pretty great, although the narrator (the one giving the presentation) didn't seem like a very approachable person. Like a murderer who enjoys his little jokes. But, really, some parts were legitly frightening to think of. -- WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  07:30, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Education
I am not really expecting it to be allowed, but here it is anyway. Mostly as a challenge to myself, I decided to try to write a short pasta each day of October. To keep things fresh I have been experimenting with subjects and styles. This one is actually a Pokepasta, hence not really expecting that it will be allowed.

The basic plot is that a kid grows up with his pokemon and they are best friends (understandably, this line made you cringe.) When he is old enough to begin training his pokemon he decides that the system is violent and cruel. He then sets about on a vigilante quest to make the other trainers understand what the duels feel like. In retrospect, the synopsis doesn't really sell it.

Mostly I am submitting this in case it is acceptable, but understand that it is a really played out subject that is difficult to find a new angle to approach.

http://danatblair.blogspot.co.uk/2013/10/always-together.html http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Education

Danatblair (talk) 00:23, October 17, 2013 (UTC)


 * Eh... I think I'll pass on this one. You're obviously a good writer (if your other works are anything to go by), but this one just seems like a dud. It isn't particularly well-executed (most likely due to it being rushed) and the main idea behind the story ("Pokémon battles = animal abuse") has been done already. Perhaps not to the extent of other Pokémon clichés, but enough to make it feel rehashed.


 * LOLSKELETONS (talk) 02:02, October 17, 2013 (UTC)


 * No problem. Thanks for being so prompt about it.
 * Danatblair (talk) 03:32, October 17, 2013 (UTC)

Katamari Damacy
A video game pasta, based of a game called Katamari Damacy, not sure if it will get accepted. http://pastebin.com/6qUthEWb

--HiGuysI&#39;mAwesome (talk) 21:15, November 1, 2013 (UTC)


 * Your pasta was about a haunted video game where the main character is forced to kill, etc. I cannot say it uses minimal clichés, because of the whole idea of the game not shutting down, then talking to you, then not getting destroyed. It also lacks story/content in a way; the person simply has to clear some level by getting to the goal (in this case, size) before time runs out, and running over people as you do so. -- WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  09:51, May 5, 2014 (UTC)

VidioGamrX appeal
I made a pasta and a filter claimed this is a spinoff. THIS IS OC! link is here at pastebin and the title is spelled wrong on purpose, read the pasta to understand --Sachman (talk) 00:10, November 9, 2013 (UTC)


 * uh, no. This was rather rushed and did not follow any storyline at all. -Are you happy now?! (talk) 08:30, April 22, 2014 (UTC)

Es flieBt Frei
As an update, I revised the story that I wrote. I went to put up the new version to prevent deletion, but now I have the spinoff filter telling me that I can't post it. As it is literally nothing more than an expansion of what I wrote previously, i am going to admit that I am starting to get a bit annoyed.

http://www.reddit.com/r/DarkTales/comments/1qlnhb/es_flie%C3%9Ft_frei/ Danatblair (talk) 07:29, November 14, 2013 (UTC)

edit: In retrospect, I realized that it is entirely possible for an admin to get this that has no clue what is going on. here is a better summary. This story : Es Fließt Frei. was deleted. I won the deletion appeal, on the grounds that I rewrite and improve the story. The catch is that the spinoff filter is blocking me from replacing the old version with the new one. So I am not trying to add a new page, just trying to put the version from the reddit link on the existing page. If you do not feel the revised version is appropriate, go ahead and delete the original page. Danatblair (talk) 10:05, November 19, 2013 (UTC)


 * skelly already replaced the contents of that page.--Are you happy now?! (talk) 12:07, April 20, 2014 (UTC)

Zombreon
It's my first time trying this out. But, I made this pasta, and Pokemongreen3867 told me to try getting this appealed. It's a pokemon creepypasta that has zombies... I guess. Ralzor123 (talk) 16:20, December 4, 2013 (UTC) http://someordinarygamers.wikia.com/wiki/Zombreon


 * I'm not an admin, but I believe they don't accept new Pokémon pastas anymore.  Poképastas have been done, worked over with a sledgehammer, raped, murdered, tried in court, and incarcerated to death for a while now. User:Pupdude (talk) 05:52, February 27, 2014 (UTC)


 * Meh, the wiki isn't sympathetic towards Pokemon pastas, and this one had quite a few cliche elements like 'ear splitting screeches' and 'It was really creeping me out'. Lastly, the story as a whole wasn't very appealing, and the final battle with the prof. was simply dramatic. Sorry. -Are you happy now?! (talk) 11:38, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

Jeff The Killer Returns
I worked really hard on this pasta and its the first pasta that I made that I thinks is epic. Please respond soon! http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Jeff_The_Killer_Returns


 * Falls below our established quality standards. --Are you happy now?! (talk) 12:02, April 20, 2014 (UTC)

Short Jeff the Killer Story
http://iddybiddysquish.deviantart.com/art/Short-Jeff-The-Killer-Story-411980252 This story was originally something I handed in for a school assessment. It's pretty basic but I think it's good. I wouldn't say that there were any twists. Thank you for viewing it :) (User talk:Lil Squish)


 * Can't view it; mature filter is on. Post it somewhere else and link it here. -Are you happy now?! (talk) 05:19, April 20, 2014 (UTC)


 * Finally joined Deviantart and read the story. It had many grammatical errors, mostly random changes in the tense for a few lines. The main story was rather bland minus the many legnthy descriptions. Besides, Jeff the killer is being considered a troll pasta. - WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  08:14, April 28, 2014 (UTC) Sorry.

Mental Dan (Rewritten)
Hi admins you might be awawre of my banned creepypasta so i know the character sounded like a ripoff of jeff but now i edited it he now has a chainsaw instead of a knife :D and i fixed punctuation and spelling please tell me if there is anymore problems please. link to Paste Bin: http://pastebin.com/Vs5bxDc4 ive also noticed that it sounds alot like jeff the killer so can you please tell me what to take out to not make him sound like jeff? and also he didn't turn into a serial killer he has been a serial killer/ escape mental patient-insane but if someone finds out he has to kill the person basiclly this has been my dream to make a popular creepypasta like jeff, jane, toby, ext. but i understand if its complete garbage just PLZ PLZ dont send it to crappy pasta site at least tell me its better than a crappypasta! i it isnt my dreams will come crumbling down before me!!!(who really cares. :/) i its bad at least said its better than a crappypasta (this whole thing is completly my fault i never knew i would need to write a story should have done better at writing :/) thank you.


 * Falls below our standards, drastically.

23:34, February 13, 2014 (UTC)

A Night of Fright
Link to the pasta: Pastebin

Written back in October as a contest entry and recently revised. Based off of the One Man Hide and Seek pasta, but in story format rather than a how-to. Was too worried about going against the rules to post.

EDIT: Forgot my signature

EDIT: New pastebin link since the old one is about to expire.

FragmentedDetective (talk) 14:20, April 16, 2014 (UTC)


 * That was well written. However, it was simply a recreation of the One Man Hide and Seek ritual. I don't want to deny this just yet, because the pasta as a whole was not bad at all. I think this could use another reader's opinion. -Are you happy now?! (talk) 16:35, April 19, 2014 (UTC)


 * I think I'll go with denying this because there's no point in having the same story be retold in different ways. Not unless you replace the original, which we cannot do. -Are you happy now?! (talk) 11:41, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

Next Jenn
http://sta.sh/01nv5vk8wrm3


 * This is a spin off between Jeff and Jane the killers, it is more over the possibilities of a child (due to Jeff vs Jane story). I worked pretty hard on it; please I do understand there are more than enough ripoffs and none-original ideas out there, but i have always worked with extras and expanding ideas. I'm not saying i am a better writter or imaginive person than others, I would just like a good look in my writting, all I ask is for hopfully a good attitude tword this consept. I promise i wrote in a different way then what we all must be used to reading :)

I feel I may be able to add more if you think so (I feel endding may be a little lame but "megh"). In other words It is not completely finished. I will appreciate any and all feed back, Thank You!! KanashiiBara (talk) 22:07, May 8, 2014 (UTC)


 * This isn't badly written, but really, the Jeff fandom is shallow enough. Now that you've established a whole family for him, it destroys the purpose of the original Jeff the killer pasta. Besides, the fact that Jeff got busy with his nemesis is not really believable, mostly because he is supposed to be demented and Jane is supposed to hate him. It's like the Bartimaeus fan fictions, where they ship Nathaniel and kitty. Or rather, if you're not familiar with that, it's like ArtemisXHolly (the writer was responsible for that, actually, but it left me shocked nevertheless). Lastly, if you feel you've got unfinished work to do, you must complete it, because we don't accept unfinished pastas. Don't get me wrong; it was a bit unique compared to Jeff fanfics, but the idea can put readers off. - WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  04:29, May 11, 2014 (UTC)

Game Coding: Rewrite


This story is inspired by an old gaming creepypasta that got deleted. It was called "Game Coding," and it featured a person from the real world being sent into a video game world. After that, the original pasta just had him faint and wake back up in the real world, which was a huge disappointment, and made me want to see a story that used the idea of a real person in a video game world used for horror instead of the usual action-adventure romp. This also loosely follows the plot of the original, and the villain has the same name, but it would be easy to change some names if it would improve the story Blarble Blornets (talk) 11:45, May 23, 2014 (UTC)

Well, that was a fun read! I did like it a lot. I think it would be good to have it around, yes, although it's based on a rejected story, your use of the concept is actually novel and refreshing.

Approved. In a moment I'll put it into a page for you. --&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 12:36, May 23, 2014 (UTC)

N64 Animal Crossing Beta Map
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This story is about someone buying a rare N64 game from her friends game shop (that she had already played on an emulator), deciding to try and access the game's beta testing menu, and discovering a twisted version of the town she had made on her emulator months past, and uncovering the tortured souls of her past villagers mourning their town's deletion. I'm only assuming it got rejected because it was supposedly a "haunted game" pasta, but I disagree as not a single part of this story mentions it being haunted, cursed or anything more that just a creepy hack, or something totally not supernatural that's just messing with me somehow. --MoshiFreak04 (talk) 06:00, May 30, 2014 (UTC)


 * This story looks like it's got a lot of format errors, but that can be fixed of course. However, the story itself is clichéd, and is not terribly well written. Sorry. Every paragraph is a single line and sounds abrupt. The last bit was not really scary; mostly because it's how video game pastas normally end minus the gore. I can see why this was deleted even though it wasn't a haunted video game. -- WaveDivisionMultiplexer  (Talk)   (Contribs)  15:39, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

The Magic School Bus - Original Pilot
http://pastebin.com/yXDAYZTi

Uh, hey. I wrote this pasta, actually, in 2013, but only now found it. I think it's good enough to bypass the blacklisting, but honestly, the author himself isn't the best one to decide that, so I'll let the experts decide. Be honest, I'm going to start writing for now on.

--I am Homah Blampsiin 05:57, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Hmmmmm...it had a weak start, to be honest, but it did get progressively better the more one read. I'd say it's accepted, yep! --&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 23:22, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Dissolute (Fire Emblem Fanfic)
Good evening. This fiction in question takes place in the Fire Emblem universe, but it should still be comprehensible if read by someone unfamiliar with the series. It is a bit long, but (hopefully) intense and shocking, but should be rated NSFW for a mature scene. I'd love to know if it's safe for this wiki, and if not, thanks anyway.

It can be read here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10443190/1/Dissolute

Thanks in advance, CassistRabbit (talk) 04:06, June 12, 2014 (UTC)CassistRabbit


 * I'm not to sure about the nsfw content, but I will accept due to the quality of the story. Dashie  ~20% Cooler~  00:56, June 13, 2014 (UTC)

Jeff the Killer's True Origins
This is my own version of Jeff the Killer's origin story. Jeff, in this story, doesn't go insane from one fight, instead, his life slowly goes to shit, and then he snaps. Also, Randy, Troy and Keith are older. Jeff also has a sort of paranormal element to justify him not bleeding out or going blind. http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer%27s_True_Origins --Sykokillah (talk) 15:06, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

BEN Theory
This is legitimately a theory that I came up with for the BEN Drowned story that the BEN and Majoras mask fans should see. I took quite some time into this theory and i hope you guys like it enough to where it can be placed onto the theory page or even in the Zelda pasta page. ~Spyroryan64

http://zeldacreepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/BEN_Theory?venotify=created

This pasta is a hypothetical origin story to a certain creepypasta entity whose identity you may have already guessed. I won't spoil it any further since the twist is most of the fun. Enjoy and tell me what you think.

http://pastebin.com/NrwU5sTj