Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-39126362-20190414202138/@comment-39126362-20190415222654

Thanks for the advice! I agree that the current style didn't turn out as well as I'd hoped; I think I tried to be too 'artsy' and short with it. I'm currently rewriting it in a more conventional style (though much seems to be changing with it), so hopefully that will look a bit better. Should I post it here as well, or start a new thread?