Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20160105003601/@comment-4893169-20160206051058

''Raidra wrote: I meant that there were two spaces between the comma and the word rattling when there should be just one. My computer showed there was an extra space when I copied it onto my word processor the other day for review, but when I tried it again tonight, it didn't. Sometimes I think my word processor is losing its dang mind. Since there wasn't an extra space after all, I apologize for the confusion.''

Okay. Well, I didn't need to change that. The thing you mentioned in your previous comment about ancient Egyptian story which described souls condemned to weave ropes which were constantly being eaten by donkeys, thus preventing their task from being completed, that reminded me about an English story I read about this evil magistrate named Jan Tregeagle who was inadvertently called from the grave during a dispute in court, and was condemned afterwards to a series of tasks including spinning ropes from sand at a place on the northern coast of Cornwall.

Here's a link to this story> http://www.cornwalls.co.uk/myths-legends/jan-tregeagle.htm

Also do you think I should get rid of the word Captain in front the guy's name since I already mentioned earlier that he was a captain?