Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26507988-20150618162354/@comment-13181046-20150618193417

My problem here, is that there is no creepy factor to it. A creepypasta needs to be creepy. Make it however creepy you want, just, don't use this as a minimum. Also, there is no spacing between paragraphs, as there should be with any long story. Hope this helps!