User talk:EmpyrealInvective

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Apology
Hi! I just wanted to apologise for making the 'spam' page. I didn't mean it to be spam, but I would have also deleted it if I was in your place. Can I remake the page now, but with the story? I did have a story to upload, but I didn't because I was really busy that evening and thought that I could have an unfinished page. I would have just not made the page at that time, but there is a glitch on my computer that causes the creation page to continuously crash when I try to create a new page. Again, I'm really sorry. Bye. Elpop11900 (talk) 18:50, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Yes I have a wonderful, exciting message. I wrote my first pasta, and within literally moments notice, you take it down. Now, if it had grammatical errors, or something noticeably wrong that would impact the community guidelines, I'd be gladly asking what exactly I need to do, because who wants to read a poorly edited story, right? However, it's a bit more complicated than that, because I was given what I'd consider to be a poor description of why my story was taken down, and I'll just be polite and call you an asshole. --NukaColaMan (talk) 21:43, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Hey! You deleted another one of my stories, look, from what i can see, you are probably a troller who doesnt give almost any users a chance when it comes to creepypasta, anyway, I would like to say that (please dont ban me) will edit my deleted story: GHOSTIE.exe, Please also remember a quote that is a very famous one: "with great power comes great reponsibilty". In other words, please make sure TO PLEASE ACTUALLY CHECK PASTAS BEFORE YOU DELETE THEM. Ive actually seen pastas with a typo in every word, HTF (how the f****) did THAT GET PAST YOU???? huh? Im just saying i might not be your boss, but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, dont be a strict person. Because once again, "with great power comes great responsibiliy". Oh, the other pasta I posted the second time (Clown Doll) WAS PROOFRADED AND SPELL CHECKED, WHY DONT YOU START PEOPLE POSTING THERE PASTAS FOR A WHILE, THEN IF THEY GET BAD COMMENTS FROM OTHER PEOPLE, THEN YOU CAN DELETE IT. AND I HOPE YOU READ MY FIRST PASTA BEFORE DELETING IT, I WORKED MY ASS OFF ON THE FIRST ONE, AND IF YOU GIVE ME A CHANCE, I WILL RE-EDIT MY SECOND PASTA (GHOSTIE.exe). BY SPELL CHECKING AND PROOFADING IT, AND MAKING IT MORE SCARY. THANK YOU Mr.HattyHattington (talk) 22:22, July 15, 2015 (UTC)Hatty

Question
So, if my storys had multiple errors, the website that creepypasta linked to spell check dosent do anything, and if my clown doll pasta had errors, can you please send me a copy of the thing that shows where the mistakes are....?

Mr.HattyHattington (talk) 23:26, July 15, 2015 (UTC)Hatty

Question

Empy, would you happen to which pasta is the one that has the photo next to the link? For example, if you want into "wikia.com" and then typed in creepypasta, which pasta is that photo from? I'll give you the image http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/wikiaglobal/images/c/c1/Wikia-Visualization-Main%2Ccreepypasta.png/revision/latest/window-crop/width/180/x-offset/0/y-offset/24/window-width/640/window-height/427?cb=20140529120321&format=jpg

CreepsMcCreepy (talk) 15:13, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Removal
Wow, you must really have your hands full on this wiki with all these pastas. It seems like ever second a new pasta is created, and another one gets deleted xD

Gotta give you props for keeping up with all of them!

Incorrect3 00:53, July 16, 2015 (UTC)Incorrect33

New photo
This upload didn't work, would you delete this? http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Special:NewFiles?file=Fires_of_punishment.png

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   05:16, July 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * Done. 06:03, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Deleted?
My story, "The Bank", is ment to be short, similar to the length of another Creepypasta "The Crayon". I don't understand by unfinished. They are man Creepypastas that have very little content and still is a good read. I felt that mine is the same as the others. I am very devistated ever since I saw my pasta deleted over little content. And besides, It is a true expirience and I don't know how much there is needed to be put in the story. It is my very first pasta and I didn't think it was just that bad. Vencrolix (talk) 00:53, July 17, 2015 (UTC)Vencrolix

narration
I was unable to find the name of thw author to ask him. Do you know the name of the author? Lady-warrior (talk) 00:02, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you Lady-warrior (talk) 00:02, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

A thank you of sorts
Hello I originally came here to say that you didn't need to thank me for this "Thanks for your edit to the  The Unknown Giver", it was such a minor edit. If it was a automated thing it's fine but it feels odd for someone thanking me for something as small as changing one word. Until I strolled upon your user talk I noticed some of the harsher comments you have which I feel are unjust, I see you helping out and giving feed back to people who are writing their first pastas before I go off on a rant I just wanted to say keep up the good work.

Cya around

Not So Quicksword Irene (talk) 03:59, July 18, 2015 (UTC) Irene

My story is ready to re-upload. It's been spell-checked and proof-read.

AndrewTaylor1992 (talk) 11:43, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Blog Story
I believe this blog should be deleted. MrDupin (talk) 16:31, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

I did a lot of biblical research for The Number of Darkness and noticed the Bible actually mentioned tennis!
Check it out: "When Joseph served on Pharaoh's court." HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 21:10, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

I LOVE it. That was ACE. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 21:20, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for what I have done I did it by accident!

template update
I've updated the sock template, per this message. You can view the new version in work here. I've set the block time to 2 months on that test to demonstrate the flexible block times. The template would work like this:. If it's easier, I can update the template page, I just need the page unlocked. The new template is below.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   02:46, July 19, 2015 (UTC)


 * Np, I just edited this message slightly, to space out the template properly. Make sure to use the newest revision.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   02:50, July 19, 2015 (UTC)


 * Just changed it again slightly (I was writing the above message and editing the test template at the same time, I missed a few things). I removed the italics and "the following reason:" but either way is fine I guess.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart
 * Just to let you know Emp, I've updated our version of the template with SoPre's code (with some minor alterations, so that leaving out parameters doesn't cause the template to break). 06:42, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

How's my new version of the story, mate?

AndrewTaylor1992 (talk) 13:54, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

http://pastebin.com/J8MX1aMT

AndrewTaylor1992 (talk) 14:08, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your help and feedback. This is the updated version, http://pastebin.com/J8MX1aMT. The kids deactivated the handbrake in order to destabilise the car so they could move it. If the handbrake is up then it's impossible to move.

AndrewTaylor1992 (talk) 16:47, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Apology
I apologize for my poorly developed story and I honestly appreciate your analisys of it. I now fully understand my mistakes and I feel this has helped me grow as a writer. I would also like to ask if I am allowed to republish the story once it has undergone heavy editing? I am curently rewriting it entirely. The characters are the same and the general plot is as well but the perspective is now focused more on the main character and she developes at a slower rate. There are many other changes I am working on also. So would I be allowed to do this once it's completed?

Thank you for yor time.

Sincerely,

Autumn-rose235 (talk) 18:04, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Understood. Again,  thank you very much. Autumn-rose235 (talk) 18:13, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, I see
Thanks for letting me know. It shouldn't happen again. I'm not one for breaking the rules on here.

J.T. (talk) 23:58, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Editor
Hello. I have a question about how the editor works. I am creating a pasta that shares a name with one that was already deleted. I haven't read the original, nor do I know who wrote it, so if it is a different story altogether, and still keeps up with the quality standards, will it count as re-uploading a pasta? Thanks for the help.

Brotherkarthus111 (talk) 16:10, July 20, 2015 (UTC)

New Story
This is my new story an I think you'll like it, but could you check through just to see if it's up to scratch? http://pastebin.com/FCmbXHi3

AndrewTaylor1992 (talk) 16:49, July 21, 2015 (UTC)