Talk:Chewy/@comment-25941663-20150302111423

That was really good. It was creepy and unsettling from beginning to end. I particularly liked how you turned an everyday habit (eating gum) into something sinister. I also loved the characters, they were very realistic and fleshed out, impressive considering this is a short story. Plus, they are Greek, something I don't normally see.

This was excellent, well done.

PS: In the second paragraph you wrote: "... of the class begins lecture ..." Shouldn't it be 'begins the lecture' or something?