Talk:Daddy's Little Princess/@comment-43652219-20190830061706

Apparently everyone else seemed to really like this one. But I'm not impressed to say the absolute least. The writing was not only weak but was also outright offensive at points. The way this was written, I couldn't help but view this story in the lens of "overposessive misogynist dad doesn't like that his daughter does porn" while trying to frame the daughter as the bad guy. Aside from the drugs and the fact that Laura was underage (which was surprisingly downplayed in the text), there was no way to signify that Lars was a bad person other than the color coated "Satanic imagery" that serves as a very lazy way of writing a character. Considering that Frank authorized some shady nutjob to abduct his own child and left her emaciated in the desert base based mostly on the fact that he saw a pornographic video of her's, it's no wonder that she formed a connection with someone like Lars; because she certainly wasn't getting it from her father.

Maybe that was the point, but the sheer fact that "SUPER SCARY EDGY SATANISM" is treated as worse makes this come across as a very confused piece of work that feels like it's trying to say something, but I genuinely can't tell what it is going for.