Talk:The Wanderer/@comment-4470175-20160731012257

It had potential, but I think overall the pasta just lacked effort. It didn't feel engrossing in the slightest, in fact it felt rushed, as if the writer wanted to get it over and done with. The pasta's biggest flaw is the lack of detail that has gone into it. If this was written by an enthusiastic writer who was willing to put effort into fine detail, this could be a truly unsettling creepypasta.

4/10