Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24861815-20141026071417/@comment-25582588-20141026071750

Okay, seeing as to an extension blocked you, I believe it was for a wall of text. Remember to make paragraphs and not just put the whole story in one big jumbled mess. Also, when characters speak, be sure to capitalize like you would at the beginning of a sentence. More sentence structure as well; use commas and periods wisely!