Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28756492-20160714152200/@comment-29015383-20160715084142

Honestly? I don't really care about the original. THIS is the story as it is now, this is the story you posted in the workshop, so this is the most important one and thus the story I reviewed. If there are still pieces of advice you have yet to work in....go at it! Update the story and I'll read it over again (and again) and give more feedback, no problem.

I'm not saying this to be mean or rude, so if it come over that way I apologise.