Talk:Ted the Caver/@comment-26114676-20150724231251

I love detail, I do, but this was just overly descriptive on mundane things and it just became a chore to read. I had to keep stopping and do something else for awhile just to break the monotony of this story.

Yes, there are quite a few nice elements in this story, but not really enough to make it worth reading a second time- or even worth the couple hours it took forcing myself to finish it.

The 'scary' bit was literally them running like a bunch of preteens out of an abandoned house because they heard a -way2spooky- noise. The ending was pretty crap, as well (My own stories have crappy endings, so I know what one looks like when I read it).

TL;DR: This story is way too long and drawn out, the ending is lame and I've lost a couple hours I can never get back.