Talk:Her Red Right Hand/@comment-26030957-20160118170049/@comment-25148755-20160118202946

Appreciate the feedback! Yeah there was a definitely a Se7en going on. About Paul being the son in law, it's really not that important until the very end, so I really don't think there's a problem if people don't immediately pick it up in that initial conversation since, as you mentioned, it's explicitly stated later.

Regarding Lisa's 'fuck' eh. She's a career cop's daughter married to a cop and her husband is stonewalling her after she's been home pregnant with their young kid all day. It felt natural to me. I'm not really trying to garner sympathy for her anyway, more for John. He's already stated he's concerned for his mental health watching thirty seconds of the Red Right Hand performing on total strangers. How much worse on his daughter and grandchild...