User blog comment:That series/hay im new/@comment-24101790-20180806012527

I marked your story for deletion as it has a lot of grammatical, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, formatting, and plot issues (it's extremely rushed, lacking description, and not effectively told). I would suggest using the writer's workshop for your next story as the story you posted failed to meet the bare minimum quality standards for this site and your next story will likely be removed if the same issues are repeated.