Talk:The Second Casket/@comment-5733573-20180808182222

I like it. One criticism I have is that I wish there was more of the paranormal aspect. It just doesn't feel like there's enough of it, and that makes the ending feel tacked on. Apart from that, the story is quite good. I loved the description of the dead body and how it felt to interact with it. That part was so relatable to me.

Grammar-wise, something to remember before your next story: the first letter after a semicolon is never capitalized unless it's a proper noun. Apart from that, always be sure to proofread.

Even with its flaws (every story has flaws), I quite enjoyed this story. I'm eager to see what you come out with next. Nice work!