Talk:Teeth.jpg/@comment-6862307-20141106112245

This is a very good story! I will admit that on first glance, I didn't find the image itself all that creepy... there's something slightly comical about it to me, but that's merely my own feelings - but the actual story behind it is quite terrifying. The final words of this story were probably its most chilling, and there's good buildup through the story overall. A few grammatical errors are present, but nothing too distracting. 8.9/10