Talk:Red Butterflies/@comment-4518745-20141115195734/@comment-5606226-20141117054217

The ending was the hardest thing for me when I first wrote this. Originally, it was going to end with her having already cut her butterfly so she would have been dead during the whole narration, but I was advised that would've been in bad form. I suppose I should look at my own work again. Thank you for your input.