Talk:Historic Points of Interest—Ferrisville/@comment-4849011-20161021003459

This was another great story! :-D It was great how you combined paranormal & mundane elements and alluded to your other stories. Ferrisville was a true ghost town since hardly anyone knew about it, and because of all that weird stuff going on. There were a lot of elements I liked, such as the albino redwood tree (a strong visual), the epidemic (a frightening and realistic element), the blend of seriousness vs. hackey sack, the condemnation of special snowflakes, the Lovecraft reference, and the line about using rejection notices for worm food. I also thought the game showing the ghost town and the conversation using texts & emoticons were cool touches.