Talk:Tall, Thin and Faceless/@comment-27131953-20160215024651

Good creativity and usage of slenderman in the story. I really feel bad for the guy and one of the things that surprised me the most was that the guy actually fought slenderman, or the antagonist persay. I mean, there are almost no times in which the protagonist actually engages the monster or antagonist in hand to hand combat. That was an unusual yet unique addition. But something that really upset me was this ending. I mean, what does we were slender mean? It sounds like a high school kid trying to sound cool when comparing himself to somebody he knows. That was a very bad addition. But nonetheless, good job.

9/10