Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20190725195444/@comment-33904527-20190727233919

SigmetAlpha wrote: I like it, I feel this is a unique piece and the format really suits the story being told. My only suggestions relate to continuity; in one sentence it says that the Lunar Strike completely vapourises the ship, however wreckage and bodies are found later?

Well done though, I found this quite engaging. Thanks, I'll try and fix any continuity or formatting errors before I upload the final product.