Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20190307090355/@comment-9041013-20190307210022

Well it's a very heavy story. Might not be considered traditional horror, but it'll fly here as it suits the mold of Classical Tragedies (which are usually horrifying) so good job.

I feel like you could do away with a large chunk of this since the length might scare away some people but you don't have to because as it is it feels organic and real.

Might check your English one last time (didn't read it attentively on the technical level) just in case