Talk:Down the Rabbit Hole/@comment-26011836-20150919035149

So I finally got around to writing a review of this story:

Pros:


 * While the story is heavily inspired by the original Alice in Wonderland and American McGee version, there are enough changes made to distinguish itself from them. However, the story still manages to be faithful to those versions in terms of tone and spirit.


 * The characters from the original Alice in Wonderland are all beautifully portrayed because everybody is still mad in their own unique ways. Even when this story added new characters like the rats and the shadow, I didn't mind them all that much because they fit into the world of Wonderland by acting like the rest of the residents of Wonderland.

Cons:


 * Whenever something happens to the main character, such as hitting a wall or getting knocked out, the author just puts the action word in bold as though this was originally supposed to be a comic book. In comic books, it doesn't seem too bad but when you put it in a format that's mostly words, it looks weird at best and awkward at worst. Honestly, if this is the WORST part of the story, I think the author is doing something right.