Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-24243627-20131204002405/@comment-24077689-20131209153939

Aloner wrote: I actually think it doesn't use violence as a cliche. Most of the stories here have too much blood, but Abandoned By Disney uses a much more powerful tool to scare the readers- The whole idea of a haunted, dark place, with things that shouldn't be there. It's like a ghost story, but way more clever. Actually, as much as I enjoyed the story, the premise is kind of cliche. Guy goes to abandoned place, guy finds scary thing, camera equipment destroyed, guy runs away, guy writes story.

The pacing, the writing, though. That's what makes it a good pasta.