Board Thread:Questions and Answers/@comment-5922240-20121230185940/@comment-5944256-20130103150115

I read the story and thought it was a cool concept. I noticed switches from past tense to present tense. Also when it said it sliced him in half I thought it was pretty obvious the guy was going to be dead but it seems he goes over to check him or something. However, it was simple and striaghtforward which I liked. That made it unpredictable.