Talk:The Nice Guy/@comment-25045942-20140823045224

The interaction between the businessmen is very well-written, I only wish the story being told was a little more planned out. I love the idea of a usually happy person descending into madness, and I love the twist ending, but the supernatural elements didn't need to be there in the slightest.

Phil being turned into a demon or whatever is completely unnecessary, and the story would work much better as a whole if he killed the manager after his breaking point is reached and then escapes from the hospital. If just that little bit was changed, it would be a new favorite, but as it stands it could be much better.