Talk:Ida and the Poppet/@comment-5733573-20180423221908

This is a really cool story, but it needs more polish. There are some grammar and style errors that need to be addressed, and the plot would be a lot stronger if you eased into the second trip to Ida's house. Still, I really like it. It reminds me of the kinds of stories I would read when I was very young to scare myself silly. Also, fun fact: my great grandmother's name was Ida, and I totally picture a young version of her in that role!