Talk:Public Restrooms/@comment-5583506-20141112014822

Very impressive for being your first creepypasta! I really liked the atmosphere (something about public restrooms is generally a place for much discomfort, he he). Nice twist at the end you had there as well. The structure of the sentences and the language was good, but not as good as they could have been. They felt a little... I don't know. Sort of plain and a little bit mundane. But that doesn't have to be a bad thing. I'd rather read a text that is easy to understand than a complex one with a lot of hard and difficult words. Otherwise, very well done! 8/10.