User blog:Crzyrbbt/new pasta

I uploaded a creepypasta today i think this is my best one yet, please let me know what you guys think the creepypasta can be found HERE. I think I might do a sequal to this one followin g the character of Jonathan Lestrade. after the events of this current story of course. As always I do want criticism on my works any of them. one doesnt get to be a better writer without critical analasys.

Thanks to all the people that have read what I wrote.