Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27008899-20151227110154/@comment-27008899-20151228122059

There are subtle hints through out. The blue jump suit, the head injury, the fact the ship crashed as an alien was sorting through her memories, I also tried to make it seem the man was much taller than her. To clarify: Erica is dead and the MC is an amnesiac alien that retained only her memories from the crash. I agree with you on the tense as I always have this issue with first draft. The dialogue is supposed come across a little weird as it is an alien talking, but I see your point. Thanks for the feedback.