Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20160228043611/@comment-4893169-20160405052245

Thank you again Raidra for the huge edit help. I got a question though about sentences such as this one--“Come on, Olive! You win, we give up!” another voice yelled. “Olly olly oxen free!”--where the sentence is interrupted midway by an unknown person speaking. You have to leave the speaker's sentence un-capitalized?

I don't remember that scene from Adventures in Babysitting, it's been a while since I watched that movie.

Was that Antique Roadshow where you saw the vampire hunting kit?