Talk:Aamurutiinit/FI/@comment-31077845-20170302030329

And here's an english review; when you're going for a twist ending, you can't accomplish it by giving directly conflicting descriptions. He describes his wife as "sleeping" and that she's breathing and mentions her not noticing his morning routine. He says his children are sleeping as well.

Then he suddenly says they're dead. Even if some kind of mental illness angle is involved, does the narrator think they're sleeping or do they think they're dead? You can't have it both ways, again, for the sake of a (nonsensical) twist ending.