Talk:The Chicken Wrangler/@comment-247250-20141209103701

The story wasn't poorly written... but the ending seriously killed it. Just lose the ending and mention that they never found out who did it or why.

The whole premise is a bit silly though. If I were reworking this, I'd probably do something more akin to people having chicken beaks and shit attached to their faces and feathers all over their bodies. Feathers in the neck just isn't scarier than other options you had, and it brings up questions that aren't that exciting to think about.

Before the ending, 7ish/10. With ending, 5/10.