Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26525489-20160929232742/@comment-26525489-20161023162345

Thanks a bunch for your responses, guys! I know this is a lot to read so I really appreciate the reviews!

I made edits to reflect a lot of your suggestions as well as a few little word changes to pacify my hypercritical mind. I can't believe I messed up with Insta/Intra... Super embarrassing. I'm still not totally happy with it (to be fair, I don't know that I ever will be) but if it looks okay to you guys I'm ready to considered it finalized.

@Creepy Thomas O. I really like that idea! People can feel free to use him as a tie in however they'd like. My goal for this individual story was to make the ending ambiguous so the reader could decide whether or not they thought he was crazy. The fact that he references Hank and Martha (who we know to exist) lends him a bit of credibility as an actual PI so it might be nice to have another story lean towards him being crazy to balance it a bit. I would honestly be so flattered just having another author mention him that they could probably say whatever they wanted and I would be fine with it haha