Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-7064562-20170706155016/@comment-7064562-20170708180559

Yes, I actually asked an admin about it, I think empty but I'm not sure, and they said I can post any story I want here for feedback and what not but that he's not so sure how others will react to it. As most sites don't really allow feedback for others, but rather just let you post a story that gets lost in 2000 my little pony fanfics. I've already got more that I will post once I get them oiled out more, but as it stands right now I'm eating pizza.

The story itself actually does turn into something that could be called a creepypasta, as it gets heavier in the later chapters, however, the story ended up doing an 180 on me and it doesn't get as deep/dark as originally intended. A big part of it is because I was limited to 25k words, but I'm actually working on some other stories atm for publication so I don't think I'm going to be hammering out another 25k word into this to make it longer.