Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30402176-20170915192232/@comment-30402176-20170921145538

Emp. Thank you so much for this. You must have taken a great deal of time reading this to point out the errors; and I will adjust the story accordingly. As I said earlier - this is going to be either a 2/3 part story; do you think I should upload parts 2 and 3 on the workshop as well?