Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26814449-20150724020710/@comment-26814449-20150724041946

Ok, first of all thank you very much for being specific in the issues. I honestly didn't think this story needed to be changed but I might be able to improve it. Now, there are some things that confuse me. I didn't get your point when you said "Your wording is awkward at times and confusing at others. read of this any you will most likely find things that either don't sound right or don't make any since." I sincerely don't know what you mean by this. I didn't have any problema reading, nor did my friends who read the story. I really thought the grammar was good, but if it isn't please tell me where exactly I committed those mistakes. But if you reply to me I will definitely fix the story. Also, "This seems like it is written as a journal, is that correct?" I have read lots of creepypastas with this exact structure and most times it works very well. I won't change this. Oh one last thing, there were some things you said that seemed more subjective than objective in your comment. I think there are lots of ways to write a story and just because one doesn't like this story, it doesn't necessarily mean it is badly written. I have read dozens of creepypastas here and most of them were really bad, I don't know if this site was update but last time I read a creepypasta here people were less picky and would let us post stuff even if it wasn't 100% perfect. Now just tell me one thing do I need to fix ALL the issues you said? Because if I do, I better just post my stories somewhere else instead. Thank you for understanding