Talk:The Hell Inside My Head/@comment-29982731-20180923054052/@comment-26444017-20180923065555

Hey, my man. Just got through the narration. I have a few thoughts to throw your way, if you don't mind.

I'll start with the negatives. Don't worry, they're few, far between, and ultimately tiny. There's a mic clip at around 6:45. The SFX that accompanied the hallway scene was a bit loud relative to your voice, but it wasn't so loud that I couldn't clearly hear you, so no biggie. Beyond that, just a few words out of place, but they weren't a huge deal either. Finally, I found the pacing a bit odd. This one might just be me, but I felt like there were spots that could use a bit of space between dialogue. This did do something good for you, however, which I'll get to in a moment.

Now, onto the good, which is far more overarching. Your narration, of the three I've listened to, captured the emotional tones of the main character best, hands down. I really feel the anxiety, fear, and even the anger toward the end. The musical undertones were very strong, and I'm a sucker for ambient piano music, so the ending was awesome for me. Your 45 minutes of work were well worth it, because you not only gave the shadow an awesome voice effect, but you also transitioned back to Dr. Marcus more smoothly than the other narrations I've listened to. Seriously dude, that's some kick ass work right there.

I will definitely be adding this one to the page. The pacing thing is the most glaring issue, but it's negligable when you consider the music, the tone, and the voice effect. Thanks for the read man. :D