Talk:The Same/@comment-24077689-20140514164534

It's been said, but you've got some really awkward sentences and phrases. Things that just seem out of the ordinary. Pretty easy fixes, overall. Like the sentence "...run redundant everyday", the phrasing there could be fixed for sure, just a different wording.

I don't typically enjoy these kinds of pastas, that contemplative, depressive, kind of narrative but I quite enjoyed this. This is the reason I don't smoke pot.