Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-27433290-20151221044401

Knock Off

''A story about a boy who meets his doppelganger; or rather, the closest thing he has to one. Travis Burke and Thomas Blake don't just look alike; they are similar in almost every way, but never quite the same. The two become fast friends at first, but Travis soon begins to realize that something is amiss. Thomas seems better than him at everything, despite the fact that they're near-identical. How can this be?''

''Perhaps Thomas isn't really better, though. Maybe he's just pretending.''

Hey everyone; I'm Lannin, just another writer looking to improve his craft. I've been an avid fan of creepypasta for a few years now, but I've never actually written one until now. So, here is my first pasta for you all. Any critique is more than welcome! Hope you enjoy~ 