Talk:Kelly Came Back/@comment-37541104-20181117212702

Thank you for giving me the link in one of our Reddit conversations. I enjoyed this story but for a portion of it I thought the daughter hadn't aged at all. Then I misunderstood how it was possible for the daughter to go 'missing' for 3 yrs and come back 15 when she 6 the last time the parents saw her. Also, the part where the mother was doting on the daughter didn't overly flow for me and the sentence about joking seemed to abruptly end. I know with this much spoken 'against' it, it's hard to see my enjoyment but I promise, although predictable, I did like it!