User blog comment:Lord-Astaroth/Are you happy you didnt turn the light on story help/@comment-24101790-20140531025717

Take this to the writer's workshop if you want help. Posting the story into your blog typically gets the blog deleted. Side note: A lot of misspellings, capitalization, grammatical, and spacing errors in this story. If you posted this onto the wiki, I would probably delete it outright for not being up to quality standards. This needs some serious revision. Take it to the workshop.