Talk:The Perfect Child/@comment-5239282-20131108122613

It could've been worse. I was expecting the Antichrist or something. ._.

Either way, the bulk of the pasta's perks rely solely on violence and gore, and you (the author, anyway) never really delved deep enough to translate fear and disgust onto readers, the main purpose for pastas such as these. Excellent premise and even greater potential; marred by poor execution. 6/10, as another said. ._.