Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27882718-20160306224038/@comment-24101790-20160306224914

Just a heads up, you can use this template: POEM to form stanzas.

That being said, this poem is not really up to quality standards in its current form. Here is a more in-depth guide to poetry that'll give the broad strokes.

You really should break your poem into stanzas of four lines with a rhyming pattered (ABAB, AABB, etc) As it stands, you tend to rhyme in threes but later drop the rhyming scheme completely. "Bring back the sugar. Bring back the hooker. Unless you want the horror," Additionally some of the rhymes are pretty stilted or forced. I would suggest looking over other poems that are on the site for approaches that work when combining horror and poetry. I'm sorry, but this needs quite a lot of work.