Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20190324160434/@comment-35711173-20190326081701

BloodySpghetti wrote: [...]

It's all nice and dandy throughout the whole story, you've built it up nicely, you are making me interested in whatever this little ritual of theirs is but when it comes it generates a feeling of "Is this it?!" It's like you've been hyping me with the promise of a king's feast and in the end you offer me a measely chicken wing.

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Bloody Spaghetti,

I agree fully. Quite well phrased, except that you misspelled "measly."