Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25839052-20140927050701/@comment-24101790-20140927060347

A few points: "Immediately ask him "What will happen when they all come together?". (Period not necessary as question mark is the proper closer.)

As for the numbers, I can't really help on that front. To be honest, if I was a massive fan of holders pastas, I would like to hear more details about the ordeals you have to go through to obtain the object and its effect/power on the holder.