Talk:The Truth of Fear/@comment-247250-20150401223029

Awful. Without evidence, claims of supernatural monsters can be dismissed easily, despite what the "story" claims. Drawing on common experiences only works when the author doesn't outright assert that the reader has experienced something that they may not have.

Anyone with anything more than a tenuous grasp of human psychology would see the problems with your assertions about fear of the unknown "taking over your body."

I think the strongest thing going for this is that it's short, and I'm not being sarcastic here. There are far too many stories that try to make the reader think about things that just go on and on instead of leaving the reader with the kernel to keep thinking. It's just a shame that this kernel doesn't really make sense.

2/10.