Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25913561-20150118101537/@comment-25913561-20150118225355

Hello Whitix,

Firstly thank you very much for your feedback :) This story is currently a drafted idea, it is incomplete and more the beginning of the idea which I plan to elaborate on much further.

I did not intend the first two lines to rhyme, my usual writing consists of poetry and therefore my rhyming may occur without me realising XD Thanks for pointing that out :)

I truly appreciate your opinion and I hope it will guide me as I develop this story further :)

RynaTheBush,

Sadly I am failing to pick up on the rhyming of the general story, if you wouldn't mind pointing out if/where these instances are an issue I would greatly appreciate it :)

Thank you both for taking the time to read my story and offer your feedback :)