Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25095856-20140624120643/@comment-24304936-20140624132303

The psycho doll plot is a tired one. Hell, it even felt tired when "Child's Play" came out in the 80's. In short, it isn't scary. I would brainstorm for another subject to write a story on.

You also have several spelling mistakes. You really should proofread before putting a story up; even here, on the Writer's Workshop.