Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26399604-20160324185524/@comment-26399604-20160403210218

Hmm...interesting. You make valid points. I do notice wavering in the dialect in certain areas; I'll see if I can tighten that up.

The story could benefit with a twist ending. I'll have sit back and think about it, but overall that sounds fun. Thanks for your pointers and for taking the time to review this.