User:Nikitas.votzakis

'28th of October, the day of my birthday, the day that I'll be 16 years old. Who could think that this is the day which everything fell apart.... I woke up at 8:00 P.M. because I was excited with my birthday. I didn't have many friends so I decided to have my birthday party with my family. It was Saturday, mum and dad where trying to hide my present while my sister was baking a cake, but I noticed something strange from the window. A weird man was in front of the house door. I told dad and he said that he is just the mail man. "Weird clothes for a mailman" I thought. Half an hour passed and my dad went to get the mails the weird mailman brought. After my dad came back he gave me a mail, pretty weird if you think,  a mailman wearing a black coat and have weird long curly hair. Anyway, I opened the mail and it was writing with red paint "Happy birthday Alan, have fun". Who could it be I asked myself...grandad or grandmum?....or my friends Tommy and Jake? I was confused. 21:00 A.M. The cake was in the table. My family was singing the birthday song to me, but right before I blow the candles the electricity went off. "I'll go and fix it" my dad said and he went to the basement. After 10 minutes I started having bad thoughts, like "He felt down from the stairs, or, he got electrocuted". After 15 minutes the phone rung. My mum run to it. The only thing I heard after it was the phone falling down from my mums hand. I asked her what's wrong. She answered with a "Basement.....". After that I found my self running us fast us I could to go to the basement. At the basement the floor was filled with blood so I followed it. It leaded to a red rusty door. I opened the door slowly cause I was scared with what was inside. I entered the room. I couldn't move for a couple of seconds until a scream came out of my mouth. My father was stabbed in every part of his face and his hands where stabbed in the wall. I couldn't see that sight. I closed my eyes, hoping that it was a dream.....it wasn't. I heard a whispering voice telling me to follow the path. I grabbed the most deadly thing I could find near me. I followed the path holding a crowbar. He didn't stop whispering "my name is the Creeb" he said. I reached the end of the path. The wall was writing with the same paint us the letter "Happy birthday Alan, fun ends here". I entered the room which was in the end of the path. I saw my sister crying next to the dead bodies of my mother, and suddenly the Creeb appeared. The man outside my house was the Creeb. We let a killer come to my house. I was ready to hit him with the crowbar but I wasn't holding any crowbar. I grabbed my sister's hand and we run. We left the basement....but...it was to late. The Creeb grabbed my sister. He grabbed her bead and he splashed it. I opened the housedoor. I heard again a whisper, the last whisper I heard from him "I had fun with you Alan, next year it'll be better (whispering laugh)".