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This is the final copy of "Left-Hand Jen"

The pasta:

Jenny was a 17 year old girl who actually had a pretty good life. She had dirty blonde hair, blue eyes, and an average skin tone. Her mother had really bad anemia, and she (her mother) was pregnant. She was hunting with her father one day, and they found no deer. They went back to their hunting cabin, and when they got there, her mother's friend was on the couch. Her father asked why she was there, and she said she had to tell them some terrible news from their mother. Jenny's dad told Jenny to wait outside. When the conversation ended, Jenny's father left the cabin and rushed to the car. He didn't tell her the news. They just went home and unpacked their things, and Jenny put her gutting knife on her bookcase, and never touched it since. They got back in the car, and drove to the hospital. She saw that her baby sister died of premature birth, because his mother's anemia couldn't fight off germs, so she became really sick, and the placenta, the umbilical cord, everything, became detached.

Her life went downhill from there.

She had more of a temper, she started swearing, her boyfriend dumped her, and worst of all, her mother treated her with 0% of love. She made Jenny do all the dirty work, she trashed the house to make it harder for Jenny, and Jenny would get grounded whenever she didn't do even the littlest things correctly. Jenny hated her.

One day, during church, the priest was saying his homily.

"If your right eye causes you to sin, gouge it out, and throw it away. It is better to lose one of parts then having your whole soul be thrown into Gehenna. And, if your right hand causes you to sin, cut it off, and throw it away, for it is better to lose one of your parts then have your whole soul be thrown into Gehenna."

Jenny thought about that line.

One week later, on June 14th, 2014, Jenny finally lost her sanity.

She woke up, and saw her iPod wasn't on its charger like it usually was. Assuming she just forgot it downstairs, she got breakfast, and went to watch some TV, when she saw her mom holding her iPod. She read her texts, and read out loud "My mom really pisses me off. I hate her." She looked at Jenny. She was pissed off.

"Jenny! Get your sorry ass over here! You better explain this to me!!" her mom said.

"Why were you reading my texts?" Jenny said.

"I suspected something going on in your texts. Now, explain this to me, young lady!!" her mother yelled.

"You piss me off so much!!! Ever since the baby died, you have become a complete asshole, and you treat me like a slave!!" Jenny shouted.

"Watch your mouth!!!" her mom yelled.

"You know what?! Go fuck yourself, mom!!" Jenny said, as she pushed her mother away.

'Don't talk to me that way!" her mom said.

"Shut the hell up, mom!! I am tired of the asshole you are!!" Jenny said.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">"You know what?! Go to your room! I have had enough of your hatred!!!" her mom said.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">"Guess what! I don't give a shit!!" Jenny said.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">Jenny took the iPod from her mother and threw it at her mother's head. Her mother yelped, and Jenny ran to her room and locked the door. She almost went insane, and cried. She was tired of her family. Her mom tried coming in.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">"I am sorry, sweetie" her mom said sorrowfully.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">"Shut the fuck up, mom! I hate you! I hope you rot in Hell!" she screamed.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">She continued crying, then she thought of the priest's homily.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">"If your right hand causes you to sin, cut it off, and throw it away."

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">Jenny thought for a moment, and started chuckling. She looked at the gutting knife on the bookcase, and picked it up. Her mom pick-locked the door, and she came in, and found her daughter, with her right eye gouged out and right hand cut off.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">"What the fuck?!!!" Jenny's mother yelled.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">"Mom, if the priest said 'If your right hand causes you to sin, cut it off, and throw it away.', then I pleased God by doing this! Hey, you have done the same. Wanna try? When the sins are off your soul, you'll look prettier spiritually and physically!" Jenny said as she reached out the knife to her mom. She started laughing ballistically.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">"Ok... Let me prepare myself..." her mother said, when really her mother was calling the police.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">"Hello? Police? My daughter has gone fucking nuts!!!" her mother told the police.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">Jenny just then came downstairs.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">"Why are you calling the police, mommy?" Jenny asked.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">"Jenny, you've lost your fucking mind!" her mother barked.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">"No, I am just fine!" she yelled.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">Jenny stabbed her mom, and picked up the phone. "Hello, police! I am all fine! Not insane!" Jenny said to the police. She hung up the phone. Her mother got back up and picked it up, and called again. "Hurry! Plea- GAH!!" "Mommy, you don't need them!" Jenny shoved the knife through her eye. She picked up the phone, and said "Hello! Sorry about that!"

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">"Who is this?!" the police yelled.

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">Jenny hesitated, and said "Left-hand Jen." and hung up. She left her home, and no one knows what happened afterwords. All people report, is a girl, with her right eye gone, and her right hand too, shoving a knife into the victim's right eye, saying:

<p style="color:rgb(212,212,213);">"You're free of sins..." <ac_metadata title="Left-Hand Jen (final copy)"> </ac_metadata>