Talk:Baby Alive/@comment-24618087-20140320161546

Good story, original as far ad I know, but it doesn't seem believable. When the doll started acting up, you said your father blcamd in yelling, but that doesn't make much sense, as if it were another, he'd most likely come in upset or worried. The difference is the intensity of his mood. Also, he said he'd read the note, but also said that you had to kill it, but the note says you can't, implying he hadn't actually read the note, and instead just noticed the scratching and bleeding when he came in yelling for no reason. Then the dad had apparently hung the doll by a rope, not clear where, he removes the batteries as that's the only way to kill it, and then he shoots it?

But yea, it's still a good read, just needs some tweaking.