Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36013915-20180629060821/@comment-36013915-20180630060102

So, it's like the shirt is not gonna leave him? A really neat idea for the ending. I am having second thoughts on the shirt's look though. I still need to think how will I tell the story about the shirt also.

I really wanna make the shirt look like any old shirt you can find, but it having some sort of a curse  while my character's mental state deteriorates. I still think that the idea of him being attached to the shirt 'cause it is so perfect a much better idea. I want his personality to be split in a way where the shirt is kind of controlling him in a way while he tries to stay sane through out. Also the idea of the shirt being "glued" to him will be kind of hard for me to implement onto the story. I'll still have to think if I want to include that or just write it out. I just want the shirt to control him while he thinks it is benifiting him in a way. Also I still want to implement dreams into the story.