Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26525489-20161115004342/@comment-26525489-20161118004110

Thank you for the review! As I mentioned, this is a new style for me and I was really struggling with the ending. I very much enjoyed what you said and I made some edits to the story to reflect your ideas. I also cut out about 700 words or so and hopefully it'll flow a little better because of that.

I made a few other minor edits on things I caught in my re-read, but it feels pretty finished to me other than that. If you have any other ideas, I'd love to hear them!

I'll wait a few days and give it another read to make sure it's working for me, but after I should be ready to post. Any ideas for a better name?

Thanks again!