Talk:The Silent Vixen/@comment-25771007-20160731175051

I agree with the other commentators: your title is like a bad superhero from DC comics.

Otherwise, I like the story! Seems pretty much original (I've read one or two stories of this kind but yours has its own twist.) and it kept flowing, unlike most starter stories where it drags on forever (you could picture a river for this one and others a smudge of dirt).

However, be wary of repetitions. For example, the word fox in the second paragraph. Make sure that you write one sentence with fox, then one without it to seperate the next one that has fox in it.

Rating, 9.5/10!