Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20190201203454/@comment-36393004-20190204133746

DrBobSmith wrote: Hi, I spot one run-on sentence. "He had unwittingly given a psychotic killer all the information they would need to end his life as well and that point is what Joe stressed repeatedly at the end of his post."

Note doubles in "I" in "I was almost jealous of her body, not that I hate mine but I I wished I had her ass."

You have about 30 missing commas with conjunction errors. I have grammarly running on my browser and it did not spot these...