Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28060931-20170218205203/@comment-28060931-20170220121628

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I'll gladly fix the errors by myself, the pasta isn't that long but I appreciate the offer very much. I think I'll try to salvage the story, sorry I didn't edit this as much as I should but I have a free week and working on dead-end stories wasn't the top of my to-do list. Thanks for taking the time to review.