Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36815674-20181014182908/@comment-9041013-20181014233921

Well its, I don't know. It's kind of not doing anything for me. Random killer, random death... oh well.

I don't know, it's just not really interesting or special.

So yeah, give us some more detail for starters, make the killer less "well Im gonna kill someone", give him a motivation, give him a reason, make the chase more detailed.