Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25160824-20140814201358/@comment-25226524-20140815014624

You're welcome. I actually really like this story. I think its simplicity is what makes it what it is. I can't guarantee that it will survive on the site, there's just no way of knowing what the admins will think of it. It's up to you if you add to it or not, but I like it as it is.

A few possible titles could be; "She Whispered", "His Story", "The Boy", "Whispers"

I'm not sure if you like any of those, I'm just throwing things out there. As for your opening comment, I think this is good and you should keep writing.

In the fourth line you didn't capitalize "so"