Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4976667-20150617184026/@comment-4976667-20150618122159

Alright, I understand that it doesn't seem to be well formatted, the sentance structure itself is a representation of the chaos between love and and betrayal. I tried leaving a forward to help with the confusion but there is a deeper meaning. The man is a monster, through and through he thrives on killing, as apparent by the comment of the lost souls being soothing to him, and by the lost souls it means the people he has killed due to his love following him constantly playing a sickening melody that causes him pain as it reminds him of what he lost, the one he lost is the ghost that follows him and she forces him to kill as she only stops when he kills another. The more he kills the more he heres from the choir. The title guilt and harmony is the pain he feels from the killing of the woman following him as it was a bittersweet feeling, he regrets but is pleased by it. Theres also a hint of love from her as she smiles as much as he does when he kills another. It was supposed to feel as though it were going along with a flow that can't be heard, but because it's a feeling not many people know it had to be in a format that isn't abundandant in the genre. I understand that it can be considered not to be poetry as I tried top combine short story element telling with poetry format as it wasn't meant to be long, but it was supposed to invoke critical thinking and in depth analysis on those some people generally view as evil or monsters. It was supposed to show the chaos in the hearts of those who feel they have no choice but to follow what they truly feel, no matter how sinister it may be. It's primarily a story of love and betrayal, but it also has a lot to do with how love and true purpose is. I apologize if I mislead people by putting it in the poetry category, and although I did fairly well in english ansd what not, it has been a while since I've actually written anything, which is my fault for not researching stanza's and what have you. But I wanted my first post to be an original take on somehting that I view could do without tradition (the expression of oneself through the written word) and maybe bring in a new type of genre. Ideealistic, possibly, but after reading backwards and upside down, 60 presidency? election? apocalypse? I don't remember, I wanted to try something new. I apologize for the long rant, I'm just very passionate and defensuive about what I write.