Talk:Ronald McDonald House/@comment-5547824-20140508063625

Something about this story just bugs me. I wouldn't say it's bad, I just don't get it entirely. The buildup to get to the building was great, but after that point, I felt like it was just kind of throwing unrelated spooky things at the reader in hopes that some of it would stick. Yeah, stories like this aren't supposed to explain everything, or even anything at all if the writer wants, but I have no grasp on what exactly the Ronald McDonald House staff are actually doing. They're kidnapping troubled kids and locking them in a prison/hospital/asylum. OK.

But why? Why are they killing them? Why are they killing the people they know? (By the way, wouldn't killing everything the kids know draw more attention to fact that the kids are missing? Plus, there's a bit of a plot hole there: they killed the caseworker because she knew who the kid was, but the caseworker claims to have dropped kids off there before and wasn't killed those times.) What are they doing to the kids? What purpose does the "bleeding cruficixion" room serve aside from being spooky? What the hell even happened at the end? Is it 1992? How and why did the main character end up there? Like I said, I understand that you can't expect answers to questions like these in a creepypasta, but usually the story will be kind enough to leave you some kind of hints so you can try to piece something together. As it stands now, it's just a bunch of random spooky things that don't make any sense.