Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26241846-20150331234447

Hey guys, I've started writing a pasta called The Fox, and I just wanted some advice on what would be a good avenue to go down next, this is a short summary of what i've got so far...

So basically, this is an anonymous blog post by an unknown user who wants to tell his story, he has edited his identity and the identities of his friends because he is scared of what the outcome might be, whether the entity that he and his friends went to look for would somehow know what he was saying and come for him. The user and his friends live in a town named Penrose, about a three hour drive from the Belango State Forest where several people have been reported missing over the decades. The user and his friends have been completely obsessed with this rumor of something in the woods from a young age, as it has been used by parents as a scare tactic against their children. The mystery of what exactly lies in the woods is shrouded my mystery and folklore, some say a witch, some say a paranormal entity, some say a man in a child like fox mask stalks all who enter his forest. Those who are bold enough to go looking for it never return, any attempts by police or rescue parties are met by extremely harsh, eratic and sudden weather changes and are forced to retreat.

Thats all I've got so far, please feel free to comment with any advice or pointers.

Cheers! :) 