Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-2240864-20140612220044/@comment-24782842-20140616221011

I would redo the picture, make the story longer, fix the grammar, etc. So many things to do. But my #1 favourite thing to do would be to redo the characters' personalities. The bullies I would make more dimensonal. Jeff, well, I don't really know. He's somewhat dimensional. Liu, I would give more purpose. But, all in all, it would be fun to rewrite the Pasta.