Talk:The Carriage/@comment-25052433-20140829002918

There is a third person in that carriage, he is....the review you know!

-Okay, since this wasn't really so much a story as much a narrated concept, I won't use my usual review style.

What I will say is this, as far as the theory style pastas go, this one was on the money. It was just the right combination of brief and interesting to keep any reader locked in until the end.

The closing statement was simply superb, and gave me a good tingle of satisfaction.

Excellent work.