Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25248589-20150107072920/@comment-25148755-20150107174217

Like the idea a lot. Noticed some capitalization errors throughout and a few missed punctuation marks (mostly apostrophes to indicate possession.)  Several misspelled words as well, especially in the last paragraph.

Absolutely think this could work as a series as you mentioned but honestly, I would just use this as your author's notes. Generally work the details of how the roads function into your stories but don't just give them to us, the readers, on a silver platter like this. For one, it takes the thrill of discovery out of the actual story and for another it can somewhat hamstring you during your writing since you'll be forced to abide by the rules you've already set down and given to everyone. It's not impossible, but it will definitely restrict your freedom of movement.

In any case, solid read. Not particularly creepy but you've certainly outlined some areas where the creepiness could drift in.