Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25024572-20150322233449/@comment-25024572-20150324181257

HumboldtLycanthrope wrote: I have to agree with Christine. It's good enough that it deserves more work. A little more background, sometimes even a sentence or two is enough to give the reader more insight into the character. What were his powers and how did he lose them? Was it sudden thing or a slow change? Why exactly did he lose faith and become so bitter? Maybe he lost someone dear to him, or just saw too much evil. Also, a bit more descriptions of the scene. Little things, don't go oveboard, like, the scent of the alley, a scar on one of the antagonists. Just enough details to give it a sense of realism. Keep writing, buddy, its looking good. Thank you. As for the how and why he lost his powers, I've got some ideas, and I just realized that maybe saying why and how he did could help show why he lost hope. In the world of comics and superheroes, losing powers isn't exactly a rare occurrence, and is usually quickly rectified. However, if he completely lost his powers and never got them back, yet hoped for a while they would, then it would explain why he lost hope and is so bitter.