Talk:From Above

...What the hell did I just read?!
Ok, let me get this straight: The father flipped out because he thought he saw a doppleganger of himself, but the narrator doesn't react at all? [He/She] just brushes [his/her] father's move to an asylum off like it's a minor incovenience! We don't know these characters enough for them to just throw away their fathers and just go, "Welp, got to work tomorrow!"

Also, what's with that one line in the third paragraph where the narrator just blurts out something about aliens? There was nothing in the rest of the story to make us think ANYTHING was even remotely related to something extraterrestrial, so it just ends up sounding out-of-line and cliche.

It sounded like it could of worked in the first few sentences, but then it got really confusing.

MooseJuice 17:46, December 30, 2011 (UTC)