Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20150725025222/@comment-25170312-20150725034639

Hmm... well, I didn't really mean the ending to be unpredictable, just fucked up. Maybe I should add to the story so there's more than just a fucked up ending. I don't want to complicate it too much, but I'll give it some thought.

Basically, the dandelion field suddenly grew out of nowhere right around the time the protagonist's little sister was born. There's a loose, unexplained connection between them. Should I hint at that more? Should there be a reason for it, or have it just be unexplained? I kind of wanted it to be unexplained, but I'm not sure since I just wrote it and it hasn't sunk in yet.

I'm not sure why I omitted "my friend" in regards to Owen. I guess because this is the second story where I've included him, and I might end up using him further stories. I guess two little words to clarify things wouldn't hurt.

Thanks for your feedback! XD