Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28088262-20140704151238/@comment-24304936-20140711154632

First of all, it's "in my ward", not "on my ward". Second, I think some more buildup would be nice as well. I'd like a cool backstory somehow linking the patient with the otherwise good-natured nurse. The ending just kind of fell flat for me.

Third of all, I think I should apologize for Exile's idiotic trolling. Him taking personal shots at you was inexcusable. He used our Writer's Workshop as a mastabatory tool to stroke his own ego. Complete idiocy. You won't be hearing from him for a while.