Talk:Wendigo: A Terrifying Story/@comment-28216377-20160415140032

I am sorry to say, but this story can use some improvement. I mean this in the nicest way, but it doesn't really make sense. Why does the Wendigo haunt him? Why doesn't the Wendigo eat people like it is suppose to? What is up with the street lights and the time passing by so fast? It had a good beginning, but was later lost. Another question is how the heck his friend Enrique went to school and how no one but the narrator realized something was wrong with him, even though it was painfully obvious the kid was not right in the head. I like the overall idea of the story, but it could use some more revision and attention to detail to make this a really good story.