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Not long after Max came to on the escalator an 'everyone floats down here' vibe began to creep over me. I read that book at too early an age and it still works on me in creepy ways. I enjoyed your story immensely. The pacing was good, and I didn't feel your wording during the action scenes was too clunky or mechanical. Sorry I don't have more insight to offer. I'm new to the sight, but you seem to be quite active around here. Well, keep writing. I'll certainly check out more of your stories.