Talk:Dogscape/@comment-6862307-20140118133918

This is officially the weirdest pasta I have ever read, if not one of the weirdest stories period I have ever read. Yet I actually liked it a lot. At first I found it somewhat humorous and whimsical in a gross way, but as it moved on it did begin to feel genuinely just gross and legitimately creepy and increasingly weirder and weirder. There was a lot of imagination and effort put in this, and I definitely have to commend the author for finding a way to take a premise as inherently silly and outright bizarre as "The world is covered in dog parts" and actually make it convincing. You successfully created a believable world, as believable as you could with such a premise anyways, and it felt cohesive and that lended the story atmosphere and I found myself surprisingly engaged by the story despite all the "What the fucks?" lingering in the back of my mind. I did notice a fair amount of grammatical and spelling errors, but nothing so egregious that I think it damages the pasta as there are much worse examples of such errors out there and the effort put into the madness makes it easy to forgive such mistakes. I think my favourite part of the story was Log Eight, it was both a fun and terrifying task while sitting here in the dark trying to imagine what that creature would look like given flesh, imagine its scream and imagine it standing next to my bed as I read the pasta. I'm honestly surprised I'm giving so much praise to a story like this because this is a story that could have failed really hard really easily due to the absurdity of it all, but the author pulled it off. It isn't perfect, but it is a great piece of unconventional writing and undeniable imagination and certainly unlike anything else I've read on the site.

9.2/10