User blog comment:SnakeTongue237/A Story in the Writer's Workshop/Uncertainty./@comment-26326346-20160118182435/@comment-26112985-20160118222444

Thanks Doom! I look forward to your immenent review.

Yeah, starting with the phrasing would probably be the best idea. The goal when writing this story was to pretty much shock and disgust the hell out of the reader (even though there's really only one part that's overly gross), so predictability may not be such a huge flaw as I first thought after all.

I couldn't agree more with you about cliches. That's part of what makes horror such a hard genre to write in: there are so many damn cliches.