Talk:Abandoned by Disney/@comment-32381372-20170624203415

This story, where do I begin? This pasta is very popular, but what do I think? It this story as great as everyone says it is, or is this story overrated?

*My opinion (yes, suddenly this is ace attorney)* ---

First, the story: up to the custard Mickey (yes I know, I'm ripping off Bad creepypasta, but I love that show and I want to show my love), I would've give this 6 to 7/10. It was okay, keyword there, *was*. When custard Mickey showed up, it went to 3/10. That custard Mickey was such a stupid reveal, and there was other problems, like how the main character didn't run when a python appeared or when they heard whispering. Story: 3/10

Second, grammar. Let me say this, it sucked. The 1 sentence paragraphs was just bad, and yes at the beginning of this review I did that as well, but as a title. Grammar: 2/10

So is this story overrated or underrated, the answer is overrated. I mean seriously, why do people like this story? How overrated is it, well not Jeff the Killer level of overratedness, but is still overrated. -2 for how overrated it is.

Overall: 8/20 (or 4/10 and 2/5 would work as well).