Talk:Silent Feet/@comment-25941663-20160828123931

This was reminiscent of the older creepypasta style. I'm not particularly fond of it, but here you executed it well enough to make this meet the Quality Standards (in my opinion).

Even though the ending was predictable, the air of mystery around the beings left just enough to the imagination to make this a satisfying ending.

Also, you had a few misspellings/grammatical errors. Not enough to detract from the experience, but enough to notice.

All in all, a good effort, but the story I'm afraid is average.

Nevertheless, happy writings!

PS: If this isn't an email, why did you put "To: Suzy, Subject: The silent feet" at the top? This isn't something you find in a letter. I removed it. If you want it back, re-add it.