Talk:Jessica/@comment-9089721-20130923155119

Wow... This is without a doubt the best Pokemon story I have ever read... I am shocked beyond words at how emotionally gripping the ending of this story is, it made me actually feel genuine emotion for the characters here like Cameron after accidentally breaking the game cart but especially Jessica, who for years had thought that her best friend and trainer destroyed the game on purpose. I have never seen that much emotion portrayed in one of these stories before and I really enjoyed reading this. The detailing was perfect, the one gore aspect nearing the end was placed brilliantly. Hell, even the part where Jessica physically contacted the player through the games text boxes, which is generally viewed by the reader as a typical and cliche aspect found in stories like this was so well done and not overdrawn! Definately not cliche in this story!

Overall if I were to rate this story outside of the site It would be a sure fire 11/10. I'm very impressed at the quality of this story and there's so much more I could say about it but the words just escape me... Amazing, Just amazing! Very well done here.