Talk:I Went into the Woods Today/@comment-26027160-20150322115850

I'm quite sorry that I didn't catch it in the WW (had an extremely busy week), but I like the final result. I still see some small puctuation errors here and there, but nothing fatal.

The rhyming is okay. The plot confused me at first (you jumped a bit back and forth and had many events occuring at one time), but is overall understandable. The "shout" part in the final stanza was the one that puzzled me the most. To be honest, I still don't get it.

You also have a formatting issue that I'll fix right now. If you won't like the new formate, just remove the "poem" template and re-space the lines.

Otherwise, good work! You've improved a lot!