Talk:Stalk/@comment-32685199-20170726021607

Good story. Hits the right notes for a stalker story without hitting every cliche - like beating his boss but not killing him, like stereotypical stalkers would kill everyone in their way. I like the cleverness of changing addresses on the credit card. The general romanticism of Paul was a little endearing and made it an easy read. I thought, when he walked into the basement, I thought she would be there or would find him quickly. I love that she's a monster in how she loves, much like Paul is, though she takes a far more direct approach. Well done pasta.