Talk:The Chanting in the Woods/@comment-24547371-20140921041359

This pasta was very good although i do understand peoples criticism of the last paragraph it sounds like a cliche.

"There is just one thing I still couldn’t figure out. Why is it, that no matter where I go, when I’m all alone, in quiet places, in the dead of night, Why can I still hear them chanting that unholy sermon that I heard so long ago in the woods when I was nine?"

I mean really sounds kinda dumb personally i think this story is a 7/10.

  SCP-1471    04:13, September 21, 2014 (UTC)