Talk:A Life in Chains/@comment-27448924-20160410051856

The story is very good, although there's one thing I picked up on. When the story states that the Aunt's neighbor is feeding the... Thing. It is never clearly stated that her name is Lydia, you might want to fix that. Apart from that, I loved the story. Although it wasn't all that creepy, it was wonderful.

Well done. 8/10