Talk:Herbal Blue/@comment-24872430-20190704042509

General Quality - 18/25 - It's well written, and while there were a few issues with formatting and grammar, the story reads well.

Horror Factor - 15/25 - It was good. Really good. Up until the cheesy drug-mixing, robe wearing cultists. Come on, now.

Lyrical Interpretation - 20/25 - Really faithful, and expanded on properly! Very high praise for the effort.

Entertainment Value - 15/25 - I was interested up until said cultists. Then it just got really, really sluggish and a bore.

Total Score : 68

Started off very, very strong, but became pretty cliche as it went on. Fitting the theme of drug addiction of the song, but not really keeping originality in the story, the pasta is pretty decent nonetheless. Written well, set up well, and the main character even, well, characterized well, this is a fine contender. Just, please, keep cultists with robes out of it next time.