User blog comment:HumboldtLycanthrope/The 666 word pasta write off!/@comment-26425680-20160407232350/@comment-26475800-20160408170246

This was a good concept, but one thing that stood out to me was the boy's kidnapping. I don't really see how that fits into the story, but maybe I misread something. I would say if that one part wasn't in the story it would make it better, we could get some more information about the father and son which would make it more emotional.

This is just something that I noticed and is kind of an unanswered question. If the kidnapping was planned by the father, that would make sense, because he didn't want his son to suffer the same fate he had to. But other than that, I don't really understand that one aspect of the story. Otherwise, well done.