Talk:A Christmas Miracle/@comment-31769025-20171225022027

It seems a bit too predictable. It has an original idea though, to exagerrate Sarah's wishes. However, it has minor cliche descriptions ("ever so gently", "ever so slightly") and the scene where the large man trying to kill the father was either too vague, too quick or although was a creative way, wasn't very scary. There were so minor typos ("...brought it down to the father face") but those didn't really matter. All in all, I liked the twist at the end of the story about the wish.

8.0/10