User talk:EmpyrealInvective

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Thank you! I'll be sure to do that next time, I appreciate it!

Firsttoleave (talk) 21:25, June 26, 2015 (UTC) Firsttoleave

Clown Doll story concern
Hello! I am brand new to start writing creepypasta but have been reading over 100 creepypasta, I realize that although I am probably a noob at this so maybe my story was cheesy or something, but as far as I can see my story has NO errors in spelling

My story might have random words in it like kitchen or something because my auto correct is extremely screwed up and loves to change things so that's why my story might be weird, I also realize yourself has writin good creepypasta too, but if you only excluded my story I worked my butt on for a solid 3 hours straight because only YOU think my creepypasta wasn't scary then you should be ashamed for that, if not, please sent me a copy of my story with corrections that show where the errors are, thank you.

Mr.HattyHattington (talk) 22:06, June 26, 2015 (UTC)Mr.HattyHattington

Re:
Thanks and I understand if you don't have any time.

Classical Retard ==&gt; Dammit, you're cold. 23:06, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

I completely understand...

...

Completely.

UNWASHED PURITY ==&gt; HIGHLIGHTS OF THE SEASON 23:12, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Okee. ;)

UNWASHED PURITY ==&gt; HIGHLIGHTS OF THE SEASON 23:14, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

what do u what commenting on my account bra

what do u what commenting on my account bra

Thanks for deleting it, I realized I bent some rules.

You deleted another one of my pastas...
Seriously? AGAIN? Do you know how long it took to type it, read it, and revise it? And now you just delete it within seconds? I'm getting fed up with you. I actually tried. TELL me what's wrong with it. TELL ME. It violated NONE of your stupid little "quality standard" shit. What the fuck? SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 02:37, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, I see how it is. Fuck you too. What kind of fucking cocksucker lives on a Wiki site and can't get past a few grammar mistakes? You? Oh okay. You're a pathetic loser who manages a pointless Wiki. Go ahead, ban me. I don't care. BAN ME!!! I'll be HAPPY to get banned from this shithole. Fuck you.

Fuck your signature.

Actually, I don't care anymore. At least I have a life, unlike you. What kind of fuckhead spends all of his time on a meaningless website? You, of course. Goodbye.

Again, fuck your signature.

Disney World 2012
To be honest, assessing myself on the errors of my pasta will get me no where. I would like to know why my pasta was deleted, since the site said I should ask to receive specifics. You say it might be obvious but that could also be a matter of perspective. So If you could please tell me what was wrong with Disney World 2012, I'd be most grateful.

Unnaturalist (talk) 05:07, June 27, 2015 (UTC) Unnaturalist

Again another comlll
You know, why the hell do you even get to be admin if you just troll people for fun by deleting there accounts?! Thats f***d up!!>:(

The formatting, grammer, punctuation, and pretty much everything was just bad on that story. Separating the story into paragraphs properly, using proper capitalization and punctuation will help loads. Also, no one deletes accounts here. I don't know what you're on about there. ClericofMadness (talk) 06:11, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

This Page?
What exactly is this page? And why is it a user's subpage? MrDupin (talk) 13:12, June 27, 2015 (UTC)


 * About a year ago Nick deleted it, but Skelly undeleted it, so I'm not gonna' mess with it.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 14:05, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Deletion- "And as their blood lay on the walls"
Hello. Like many others, I am here because you deleted my story. I looked at the list like you suggested, and I could not find a reason why my story was deleted. I had a fairly long title yet that was obviously not the reason for deletion. If it was grammatical errors I have to point out that I was writing a poem and some necessary but different grammar to regular stories was included. I got a message saying that "no edit summary was given" so I'm wondering if that had anything to do with deletion. I am not sure if it was clichéd or not. Somebody else said that many poems were getting deleted recently, and I would really like to know why. Is it your personal preference against poetry? Or is it just me? I came back here after a year of being inactive and now I know why I stopped writing pastas on this site. Please reply soon as I have a very short temper and I am doing everything to suppress it right now.

--Harobinson (talk) 14:15, June 27, 2015 (UTC)harobinson

Hi, Thank you for spending time on that response. It means a lot. I was about to go full caps on you but I took a walk and thought about your constructive criticism. Thank you for helping me improve myself, --Harobinson (talk) 18:00, June 27, 2015 (UTC)harobinson

P.s. Do me a favor and don't review my next piece.

I cannot believe you.
Ever heard of patience? No? Thought not. I was EDITING MY STORY WHEN YOU DELETE IT! YOUR GODDAMN QUALITY STANDARDS COULD NOT WAIT FOR ME TO FINISH, HUH? I TRIED BEING CALM. I TRIED BEING NICE. BUT TIS IS ABSOLUTELY RIDICULOUS! YOU DON'T MISS AN OPPORTUNITY TO DELETE SOMEONE'S WORK, DO YOU? MY POEM WAS TERRIBLE, I KNOW, BUT DELETING A PAGE WHEN I WAS NOT FINISHED WITH IT YET? THE ONLY REASON YOU HAVE ALL THOSE BADGES IS BECAUSE YOU WILL STOP AT NOTHING TO DELETE MINE- AND OTHERS- PIECES! THIS IS WHY THIS SITE IS NOT MORE POPULAR THAN IT IS! PEOPLE LIKE YOU DELETING EVERYTHING YOU ENCOUNTER. IT IS AMAZING HOW FAST YOU CAN PRESS THE DELETE BUTTON! YOU MUST BE A VERY SKILLED HIMAN BEING! YOU DON'T EVEN GIVE PEOPLE A CHANCE. I THOUGHT THE SO CALLED "ADVICE" YOU GAVE ME WAS ACTUALLY TO GENUINELY HELP ME! BUT NO, ALL YOU CARE ABOUT IS CLEANSING THIS SIGHT OF THE FILTH! YOU ARE LIKE A KKK MEMBER, AND MY WRITNG IS A CROWD OF BLACK GAY JEWS! SHAME ON YOU, I HOPE YOU ARE HAPPY. NOW I KNOW WHY I DID NOT VISIT THIS SITE FOR A YEAR! BECAUSE OF PEOPLE LIKE YOU! Maybe I will return in 2016, and by that time I hope you are beat to death with the ban hammer. Get a job, --Harobinson (talk) 20:33, June 27, 2015 (UTC)harobinson
 * "YOU ARE LIKE A KKK MEMBER, AND MY WRITNG IS A CROWD OF BLACK GAY JEWS!"
 * Very mature. 20:39, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind
But I've posted your stories here. Just figured I'd tell you that, so you'd know. Senjumaru Shutara 22:59, June 27, 2015 (UTC)


 * No problem. Senjumaru Shutara 23:08, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Please Ban Me.
Please. I'm sick of you. Just do it. SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:21, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

I Apologize
I have realized that I have let my temper get the better of me. For that I'm sorry. I still am a little ticked off, but I guess it's OK. I could see why you deleted them now. The anger has cleared up and I made a mistake. I'll remove the negative stuff I've said from my profile.

SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:36, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Ah! Once again I'm sorry for my immature temper tantrum. I do have one question though. How do I get my story back to put in the workshop? SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:46, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, so I've finished revising my story. I believe it's good enough to upload, but your opinion may differ. Check it out? SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 06:46, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

You're Doing A Good Job
Hey, I saw those mean, unnecessary comments on your page and would personally like to thank you for keeping the site up to par. :) Surprisingly enough, the rants were pretty well written, with little grammar and spelling errors. XD But anyway, you're doing a good job.  4 for you, Empty. You go, Empty.

TaylorE628 (talk) 01:37, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Chat
Can you hop on this chat real quick? I was hoping you could give me a quick run-down on a story I'm writing. It's not the finished product. Senjumaru Shutara 21:10, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Justvlad (talk) 21:25, June 28, 2015 (UTC)justvlad

I was wondering if you could post some criticism on this post about that story that you just deleted :D i'm new here but i like to write alot and i'm more than happy to learn new things !

Delete these?
These are unused pictures, would you delete them?

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/File:Hi_lol.jpg

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/File:Yoloswagger.jpg


 * Ok, right on.  Inside there is thunder in your heart   01:34, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   00:41, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Talk Page
Hello. I've noticed that you have restored my talk page. I don't mind, but I'd prefer that it would be erased. At LEAST the "troll" parts of it, such as the Tupac one, and the block that my little brother gave me. Thanks. SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:24, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

EDIT: I guess you put a message on my wall as I sent this one. It's pretty unfortunate, but I can live with it. Thanks SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:25, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

But is there any way that I can save myself from the embarrassment if a user comes on my talk page? It really hurts my reputation to see that I've been blocked for "racism" (even though it wasn't me) and the poor-quality "Tupac" troll pasta.

SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:28, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Ah. I completely understand now. And the KKK guy was ridiculous. I want to punch my past self for leaving that stupid message on his page, actually agreeing with him. Hopefully users don't have time to read the list of negative talk-subjects on my page. Thanks

SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:45, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

A Quick Question
Geez, I feel like I'm spamming your talk page :(... but I do have one last question.

Is my pasta changed enough to post, or does it have to go through the deletion appeal process?

SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:47, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Redirect pages
There's these pages which only contain links to the properly titled page. I know you sometimes delete these. I don't know if you always delete them or what. I leave a redirect for pages more than a week old, I move a lot of pages, so if I should stop leaving these behind, let me know.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Down_By_the_Bay?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Talk:The_Vainity?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Vainity?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/What_Is_Love?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/My_Ex_is_Haunting_Me?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Chess_no_Kira_-_Chess%27s_Killer?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Talk:3AM?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/3AM?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/She_Found_Her_Way_Into_My_Home?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Talk:What_If?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/What_If?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Talk:Just_Like_Everyday!?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Just_Like_Everyday!?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Talk:Knock/Full_Story?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Knock/Full_Story?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Talk:This_Is_a_Test?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/This_Is_a_Test?redirect=no

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   02:31, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the help. I really appreciate it. Nosaelg (talk) 02:42, June 29, 2015 (UTC)Nosaelg

Put it on trollpasta, empy? It was a mere joke anyhow Joshlouski (talk) 02:44, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Help on my story?
Hey man, I made a little story called The Real Hell. I saw that you didn't exactly enjoy it, but I'd like to know why and know how to fix it. Thanks.

Demonunicorn (talk) 04:40, June 29, 2015 (UTC)Demonunicorn

Thanks for suggestions/feedback!
I read your suggestions and it really helped me a lot. I'm letting you know I'm resubmitting the pasta tommorow, but it is revised, so it would be unjustified to suspend me.

ComDev wants to host a writing contest on Creepypasta
Hey, I’m reaching out to you and ClericofMadness because you are the most recently active bureaucrats. I’m part of the Community Development team and we wanted to do a promotion with you guys. Would you be interested in hosting a writing contest? You wouldn’t have to do any extra work, we would just host it on this wiki. We’re partnering with people behind the upcoming sequels to Paranormal Activity and Sinister. They want to sponsor a horror-themed writing contest… which would be good publicity for them, and good exposure for you guys. No word on prizes yet, but at the very least it would be cool to reach a larger audience. We’re asking you guys first because this wiki has a really strong community, but we can ask other wikis if you guys are opposed. I’m just gauging interest right now. I need to hear back ASAP. - Billy Arrowsmith (Talk), 23:31, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

I'll point the Community wikia profile does seem to indicate this has some degree of authenticity. I'm just an Administrator but I think this is a nice chance for the wikia. --&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 00:00, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

About We Go Bump Volume 3
Hey, Empy. I haven't been on the site in a while, but I was wondering if Cleric ever posted a follow up to this thread http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:412810. Thanks!

The Damn Batman (talk) 00:28, June 30, 2015 (UTC)The Damn Batman

Thanks, I appreciate it.

The Damn Batman (talk) 00:33, June 30, 2015 (UTC)The Damn Batman

Writing Advice Blogs
I noticed the project page was protected. So I'm passing this to you to review. Also, can you change my section name on there?

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Senjumaru_Shutara/On_the_Subject_of_Character_Development

Senjumaru Shutara 02:01, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

I love this guy here, this Travis, Empy, dude, and I don't care who knows it. I also think this wiki is the best goddamn creepyasta site around--period
Just checked my skype. I think you are reading me way wrong, bro, let's talk   HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:18, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Hello sir. I am here to ask a few questions that I shall get to right away.

1. Could you maybe give me a few pointers to helping me write a good story?

2. Have you written any stories?

3. Would it ever be a requirment to insert "...s" 24/7?

Please ignore that last question. That was pretty stupid.

What?: Chat
What happened to the chat in the wikia? I was sure this wiki had a chat. Also it's gone in some other wiki's too. Something happened?


 * Done  Inside there is thunder in your heart   05:29, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

LizzyZeDarc (talk) 05:23, June 30, 2015 (UTC) LizzyZeDarc

Tied by a Red String of Fate
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:477436

Mind giving an opinion on this real quick? Senjumaru Shutara 05:54, June 30, 2015 (UTC)


 * Anyways Empy, if you're still on, I'd like to ask you something over at my sandbox wiki's chat real quick. Senjumaru Shutara 07:33, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

JamestheYeti's message
Hey sorry about the quick upload after deletion, I am unfamiliar with editing Wikis. I know perfectly well that my initial upload of the story was an unreadable table breaking mess, and was in the process of trying to work it into an acceptable format when you deleted it, and bla bla bla. Anyway, If I upload a different one that is not a table breaking mess, is that cool? Also I will be posting in the writer's workshop and gleaning what I can from the forums. Again though, my bad, new with editing wikis

James The Yeti (talk) 06:26, June 30, 2015 (UTC)James The YetiJames The Yeti (talk) 06:26, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Request For a Critique
I would like some feedback on this beginning sequel I have for The Last Day of October--Bookstore Horror, especially about this particular character's accent. Should I just stick with standard English?

Still Untitled Sequel

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 17:04, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Vandalism
This user just vandalized something > Mysteriouspinkfluff

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   00:11, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Vandals at the Gate
Not a big deal.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   00:42, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Just ran across this quote, thought you'd like it:
"Hanging is too good for a man who makes puns; he should be drawn and quoted"--Fred Allen

Can you tell me why my story was deleted? As far as I saw there were no grammatical or spelling errors and it wasn't unoriginal. Just want to know Flutters 021 (talk) 01:46, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

QS Page
It says "not too much so that it doesn't halt the story line." That should be changed.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   01:47, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Crappypasta?
What do I do if I find a story that is, or may be, a crappypasta? Boadicea the Warrior Queen (talk) 21:58, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Chat Again
I need to run something I'd like to propose by you. I'd just go straight to proposing it, but I don't feel it's in my authority to do so for this particular thing, and even if it was, I feel it isn't my place. Same place as always. Senjumaru Shutara 22:52, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Nightmare Rose Deletion
Hi, I'm Dark-Nyan-Kitty, as I'm sure you can tell by my username.

I attempted to write a Creepypasta story directly on here, which was probably a little stupid of me for not doing it in Word or a website that will show me when I accidentally misspell something or make a grammar mistake.

My story was called "Nightmare Rose" and after uploading it, it was immediately taken down. A friend whom I sent the link to was able to get it up right before you took it down and said they liked it. That's not my point here, a bit obviously.

I only wrote it on here, so I can't get it back. Again, I say this is stupid of me.

I'm asking for a deletion appeal mainly so I can find what's wrong with it and hopefully fix it.

I've gone through a lot of the links to see what it was that got it banned. And I think I know the reason. I believe it was because it was trying to introduce a new character? Or maybe something I'm overlooking.

I guess what I'm asking for here is a more direct explanation as to what was wrong with it, and hopefully a way to fix it.

If I can't get it back up, could you please send me a copy of it or something? It was literally the only copy.

Thank you for reading this far if you have. I guess I really am an idiot, though. Not properly proofreading and making up a character is probably what dragged me down.

Anyway, I better get off of this message before I start typing in hysterics.

Thank you if you are able to send feedback and such. I really just would like a copy of the story back to build off of it.

Dark-Nyan-Kitty (talk) 23:13, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

I sent Emp ten puns hoping one would make him laugh
No pun in ten did  HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 00:47, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

They don't call me Punboldt for nothing. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:09, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Editing
I wanted to start editing on this place, but what counts as a proper edit on this Wiki?

 Skepolo 01:37, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

A little help
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:478605 Senjumaru Shutara 07:13, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Redirection)
Roses Are Red < unused redirect. Would you delete it?

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   12:04, July 3, 2015 (UTC)


 * BEN Drowned: "gist" is spelled as "jist". Would you fix that?

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   12:08, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the advice. I actually tried there first but kept getting numerous errors whenever I tried to upload. The site looks pretty empty which is why I tried here. I think I'll just keep the Holders stories for me and put out some original stuff instead.

TeslanTeslan606 (talk) 12:18, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry
Ages ago, I noticed LOLSkeletons added some picture to one of my pastas (i.e. an electric chair). So from then on, I thought users were supposed to add pictures to any articles they could as 'good editing' stands.

Anyway, thanks for letting me know.

LUCAS THE PERVY DRUNK CAT  ➾ babe let’s get high together ➾  18:21, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Grammar question: If a pronoun is used in place of a noun...
....is a proverb used in place of a verb? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 19:08, July 3, 2015 (UTC)
 * A little bit of knowledge is a dangerous thing.
 * LUCAS THE PERVY DRUNK CAT  ➾ babe let’s get high together ➾  19:20, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Writer's Showcase
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:433392

I think that thread's OP needs added to MediaWiki:Forum-policies-and-faq. Copied verbatim or just summarized, whichever, but it seems like a good idea to do so since they are the rules for that board. That's just my opinion, though. Senjumaru Shutara 00:43, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

The point of my pasta was really a lack of understanding. It's that moment where all the meaning in your life just goes away. It's probably about experimentation or mental illness but I didn't think making it clear would do anything for the story. I felt that the not knowing would have a stronger effect. I don't mean to anger you only to explain myself.Nosaelg (talk) 02:19, July 4, 2015 (UTC)Nosaelg

You're right. I'll expand upon the story in order to make it more clear. I'll try and have an improved version up in the next few days.Nosaelg (talk) 02:28, July 4, 2015 (UTC)Nosaelg

Gonna run this over to you
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:478920 If you could, give your opinion on the issue that thread addresses there, please. Senjumaru Shutara 03:13, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Writer's Showcase & Writer's Workshop
I made a couple template pages on my sandbox wiki. I'm sending this message to all the active admins to see how it is received. It is a slight alteration to the nav-bottom template, which I have named with the Special:RandomInCategory feature. Check it out here. The link is at the bottom of the message. Click either "Writer's Workshop" or "Writer's Showcase", which will take you to one of three test pages I've set up for each side of the template.

This template could be added to the front page if that's what the plan is, or the recent activities page if that is the plan, or both, even.

If implemented, it would also include the user adding either one of the categories to the post they wish to be included in this feature. Stories could be filtered out of either category after a week or two, keeping the categories small, which would raise the chance of each post getting hits. Whatever length of time would work best for each post to stay in the either category, I could take this on myself (or jointly with other users), removing the categories from the posts that have already been featured for a while.

Just to be clear, the categories "Writer's Showcase" and "Writer's Workshop" would need to added (or if other names for the categories are more fitting, I could easily change the template to reflect that). And, lastly, the categories would only be added directly to the posts on the Writer's Showcase or Writer's Workshop, and not the pages themselves (this will keep the feature limited to original stories, and promote activity on these boards.)

Check it out, let me know what you think. Any suggestions/additions to the feature would be appreciated.

http://horrorstorysandbox.wikia.com/wiki/Template:WS%26WW

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   06:52, July 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * Update on this, by the way, since the original version wasn't actually working, I've remade this with Javascript (it's still at the link above). The use of Javascript means that no new categories would need to be created. 14:13, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Question about uploading someone's story?
Hello Empy, I just have a simple question about uploading a story.

Now, I believe I have discovered a story on Tumblr which would be interesting to have on this site. It is pretty much up to Quality Standards, just with a little strange plot points here and there.

You can find the story here: http://searchformarianasweb.tumblr.com/

Now, would this be suitable to upload to this website? Do you think it actually belongs here?

Also, I don't believe it is possible to get in contact with the author, as it has been inactive for sometime. Would I even need the author's permission for uploading something like this?

Please respond back and tell me if it would be a good idea to have this as one of our stories, thank you!

Tin77 (talk) 17:46, July 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * By the way, the "legal stuff" page on that site states, "You may not use or reproduce this work elsewhere unless with written permission," so I doubt we can have this one. 17:49, July 4, 2015 (UTC)


 * Alright, I'll see what I can do to get in contact with the author. Tin77 (talk) 17:51, July 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * I've found the author, by the way - w:c:thefearmythos:User:Tigerhallam. S/he last logged in at the start of January this year. 17:52, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Advice Blog 2: Return of the Advice Blog
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Senjumaru_Shutara/The_Mystery_Approach Anyhow, I had a little more difficulty getting to where I wanted to go with this one, so feel free to add anything if you can. Senjumaru Shutara 22:44, July 4, 2015 (UTC)


 * No prob. Senjumaru Shutara 22:49, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Repetition
okay, ou deleted repetitin, i just want a basic explanation of why

thank you AhjayGar197 (talk) 22:55, July 4, 2015 (UTC)AhjayGar197

Flag War
After noticing that you had put the M4R on Flag War due to its similarities to A Game of Flashlight Tag, I decided to go ahead and compare the two. They don't seem just similar to me - Flag War seems to be a watered-down re-telling. It may be just me, but I have the sneaking suspicion that it's a blatant rip-off. Too many of the events seem to be the same.

Basically: It could be just me, but it's what I'm seeing after comparing them side by side. Senjumaru Shutara 01:06, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) A bunch of kids play a game
 * 2) There's a forest
 * 3) Some stranger sees the main character
 * 4) Said character tries to keep people out of the forest
 * 5) Some kid goes in anyway
 * 6) Said kid isn't found despite being looked for
 * 7) Said kid is found dead.

Twilight And Sparkle Deletion
I'd like to ask you to elaborate more on Plot issues and unrealistic naming mechanics. What exactly were the plot issues? What was unrealistic about the naming mechanics? I'm just trying to understand so that I can change it if necessary. I appreciate you must be busy, and any and all input would be appreciated, thanks. OVERemphasis (talk) 03:03, July 5, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, well I can get your point about the indenting (Didn't really know how to change it), and I see the missing punctuation even though I didn't at the time of proof reading. But, the apostrophes for speech were deliberate, to distinguish proper dialogue from dialogue taking place in her head. Some of those capitalisations were to put emphasis into the words being spoken, though not all of them. But seriously, what's wrong with Midnight and Sparkle dude? It's obvious they're not human, so why would I give them ordinary names? Have you heard of an illness named Schizophrenia? Lexi is short for Alexis, and I never replace her with Sparkle or vice versa. It seems as though you just didn't like it to be honest. I'm not criticising, just doesn't seem fair if that's the cause of your confusion. I also struggle to grasp how the murder of her entire family, followed by her arrest and obvious mental health concerns, don't fully explain how she ends up in a Psychiatric Hospital (Mental Asylum is insensitive). Midnight is a Hallucination, which is irrational, what motivation does he need? He didn't do anything, She did...Anyway, I'm grateful you pointed all of this out, especially the missing punctuation. Looks like I need to make my story more transparent and a bit longer if I want it to be published here. Do you know a way to remove the paragraph indent in MS Word 2010? It's not my computer so I don't wanna go messing around with the settings if I don't know what I'm doing. Thanks for taking your time to reply. OVERemphasis (talk) 09:16, July 5, 2015 (UTC)

Hi again, I have finished my GCSEs and am back to writing (albeit 8 months later). I was wondering if you wouldn't mind looking over my old story now that I taken your advice and edited it?

--The-Harrowed-Waiter (talk) 11:59, July 5, 2015 (UTC)

NSFW Criteria
Hey, I just came across this pasta that had been marked NSFW and made a few edits on it: House of the Eyes Apart from the fact that it's not very well written, I also noticed that it was not very much NSFW; they'd only used the words 'sex' and 'fuck' about five times, and that was pretty much it.

I'm just wondering, does it need to be removed from NSFW or is that the author's choice? And does NSFW apply to extreme gore/violence as well in some cases? It would be useful to know for reference in future pastas I write.

LUCAS THE PERVY DRUNK CAT  ➾ babe let’s get high together ➾  12:49, July 5, 2015 (UTC)


 * There was actually a thread about this almost a year or two ago. But honestly, I don't think that a story that simply says the words "fuck" and "sex" is NSFW. I think that there needs to be some amount of gore, violence, or sex for it to classify. The answer is really pretty obvious as to what the standard is. Senjumaru Shutara 18:49, July 5, 2015 (UTC)

RE: Advice
Thanks for the advice. Nosaelg (talk) 18:10, July 5, 2015 (UTC)Nosaelg

Email
expensiveferrari -at- gmail.com

Thanks very much for the competition. I certainly enjoyed it, and now I have a new song in my playlist. Looking forward to more in the future.

LUCAS THE PERVY DRUNK CAT  ➾ babe let’s get high together ➾  19:12, July 5, 2015 (UTC)

Song Competition Reward
Hey man Swagmaster Chad here. Thanks again for awarding me a prize in the contest, I'm over the moon that my first story got some recognition.

My email address is chadwarden9001 -at- gmail.com.

I'm new to the wiki so my apologies if I get the tilde stuff wrong.

Swagmaster Chad (talk) 22:08, July 5, 2015 (UTC)Swagmaster Chad

Any way possible to Give me tips on how to fix my deleted post?

Or was it just that bad of a Pasta...?

Garry's Dead

I apologize for asking but may you please explain how my Creepypasta entry "Garry's Dead" did not pass basic quality standards and was delete?

Da Knite (talk) 03:58, July 7, 2015 (UTC)

Hey There!
So I already read through the page to explain why a story might be deleted and I'm still not sure why my story "Recursion" was deleted. So I'm just curious as to why it was.

Jd2456 (talk) 04:06, July 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Hey There!
Thanks for the feedback. That was my first time attempting a story like that and I see I failed pretty badly. I find it kinda funny though that the cyclical ending feels out of place because that was the idea I started with. Anyways regardless of whether I try to improve this particular story and try to get it put back up or not I definitely will use this as an opportunity to improve my writing, and I hope to provide better quality stories in the future. Again thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it.

Jd2456 (talk) 04:29, July 7, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah I can see how that doesn't make sense. Honestly when I was writing it I saw that problem but I just didn't know how I could explain it. Jd2456 (talk) 04:56, July 7, 2015 (UTC)

Hello there! I am fairly new to this Wiki, so I have come for maybe a suggestion or two?

Greyscale The Creepypasta (talk) 06:28, July 7, 2015 (UTC)

Very Serious Matter
Are you proud of me?

LUCAS THE PERVY DRUNK CAT  ➾ babe let’s get high together ➾  19:22, July 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * Heh heh. It's the seductive color combination - that's the secret ;-)
 * LUCAS THE PERVY DRUNK CAT  ➾ babe let’s get high together ➾  19:38, July 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * Ah, okay. But that one did have title capitalization errors, obviously.
 * LUCAS THE PERVY DRUNK CAT  ➾ babe let’s get high together ➾  19:41, July 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * But wait, if it's in a rare language, who checks whether it's up to quality standards or not?
 * LUCAS THE PERVY DRUNK CAT  ➾ babe let’s get high together ➾  19:48, July 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re:
The range of languages among bilingual admins is pretty impressive. I'm fluent in Mandarin Chinese (I'm quarter Chinese, and I was born there); I don't think there are any stories written in Chinese on here, but I know creepypastas are a trending topic on social networking sites such as Weibo. Plus there are tons of people in China, so it's bound to happen someday.

Anyway, if you ever come across a story written in Chinese on the site, don't forget to drop me a note!

LUCAS THE PERVY DRUNK CAT  ➾ babe let’s get high together ➾  20:28, July 7, 2015 (UTC)

Story Re-Upload Question
If you recall, I requested my story, "Wednesday Night", to be deleted. I meant it to be a story based on (how I saw) Stephen King's stories: Great build-up with little pay-off. Of course, within an hour of uploading, I realized that it was a stupid idea to (essentially) intentionally screw up the ending. It also didn't help that I didn't specifically state that it was meant to be based on Stephen King's stories and that I didn't really go with Stephen King's actual writing style.

Therefore, if I was to re-upload the story with a different ending under the same title, would that be allowed? I only ask because I know the wiki's policy on re-uploaded stories, but since mine was passing the quality standards and was requested to be taken down by myself personally, I wasn't sure if that would apply here.

Thank you. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 20:33, July 7, 2015 (UTC)

Help please
Nevermind I found the reason I missed it the first time, next time I will not put cliches, To be honest I didn't even notice the cliches so thank you though, I have plenty of ideas for creepypastas :) Lost Forever0 (talk) 21:46, July 7, 2015 (UTC)Lost Forever0

Re:
Okay, I went ahead and re-uploaded it. It is still called Wednesday Night. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 23:33, July 7, 2015 (UTC)

I hope you can find it in your heart to forgive me for what I am about to write
Mahatma Gandhi. Gandhi walked everywhere he went, barefoot, so his feet were very calloused. He ate a strict vegetarian diet of mainly beans and sweet potatoes so he was very frail and suffered from very bad breath. So, you could say, Ghandi was....

a super calloused, fragile mystic hexed by halitosis.

Fine, fucking ban me! I don't care. Do it! Fucking ban me, man. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 23:42, July 7, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry that I took up your time with my creepypasta. I just started writing them and my writing is kind of rusty. Thank you though I will make sure to look over my stuff and be more careful. Thank you Lost Forever0 (talk) 01:15, July 8, 2015 (UTC) Lost Forever0

My previous story 3 rooms was deleted and I would like to know why and if I can get it back, no to reupload but just to keep it. It doesn't really give me a reason why and I'm quite upset that I can't get it back unless there is a way how. Lost Forever0 (talk) 01:29, July 8, 2015 (UTC) Lost Forever0