Talk:MARIO/@comment-24988543-20140621231707

This is the added one *Sigh* I liked the original. This has way more cliches. My ratings for this:

Story in general: 3/10

creepiness: 1/10

Rating in general 4/10

here's the original on the original website:

Story: 6.5/10

Creepiness: 4.5/10

Rating: 6/10

(I'm not creepedout easily. you're lucky if you get 4+. C:)

So The one on the Forum is way better.