Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20190324160434/@comment-33904527-20190324161013

Was wondering whether this would work better expanded or in its current state.

Oh, and BloodySpghetti: don't bother telling me that this story is completely invalid because Kelser Moor doesn't perfectly fit the definition of a moor, or something else along those lines that's totally irrelevant and unnecessary. Thanks.