Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180531153309/@comment-25941663-20180605094946

Sure, all these sound good. I want to point out though that stories with philosophical elements like the one you are going for, are very hard to pull off. Remember, you not only have to write about an idea that will make people think, but you also have to make it creepy. This is a very difficult combo to pull off and you need a ton of experience.

I'm afraid it is very probably edits of this will also be deleted. If you want, you can try to improve it for practice, but I suggest you eventually move on from this to something new. This is how all of us got better at writing, it just takes patience.