Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20170913043428/@comment-4849011-20170917020840

You're certainly welcome! Taking a quick look at the old story, I also like how you replaced "frequent magic use" with "extreme wealth" as the source of the Chanterelles' arrogance. That's another realistic touch that I think audiences will respond well to.

"Maybe that would mean Madam Mosley was a descendant of nobility, although of the more healthier bloodline." I take it you mean a bloodline that wasn't corrupted by the dark magic of wealth and that didn't practice inbreeding. If you want to add a picture of a silver toothpick, just Google "silver toothpick UK" and you'll find plenty of examples.