Talk:Whispers in the Wind/@comment-10789912-20160923200734

The writing style was grand, though there were errors dotted throughout the story. These range from seemingly missing words, to simple errors in sentence structure. These, however, did not deduct from the phenomenal writing and construction of this story.

The story was simple, but it served its purpose well. The characters had practically no time for proper development due to the 10k word limit, but you managed to add some soul to them. Some quality. You created characters with flaws that you could sympathize with in such a short amount of time. Also, kudos for using homosexuality without making it a hashed in detail for no reason other than some sort of difference from other stories. It had reason here, and it had substance. I loved it.

The creature concept was also very nice, reminiscent of both The Blog and The Thing.

Overall, I would consider this actually your masterpiece- tied only with The Charlatan.

9/10