Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24651624-20150501042417/@comment-24651624-20150501194430

hey thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it. I did appeal the deletion but I dunno if it will be allowed back. ^^;

also I appreciate the feedback you're giving me. It is really helpful and gives me an idea on what I need to fix. Thank you for this. I think I can work out the problems with a bit of rewriting. Ican add more tension early on too. I'm surprised I didn't notice this myself since I tend to do a lot of writing. I guess I should have read over the story a few times first.

anyway I appreciate the feedback, like I said before. It's useful. Yeah I should have done this first.