Talk:Of Aliens and Pricks/@comment-26399604-20160824141518/@comment-26326346-20160825011932

Thank you! I tried my best to make it humorous at parts and Tio did too. It was really great to see Tio put this whole thing together and start chipping away at it. He really went at it and came back to me with, like, 5 whole pages within day after his proposing this pasta.

I am so relieved that the scenes meshed together well and the writing did too. I did my best to write like him and it was really hard because he prefers proper English spelling, while I prefer Americanized XD

I wanted to make the character more of a dick, but Tio convinced me otherwise, and I am glad because I think this meshes better (though I still regard the main character as one, hence the title).

I don't know if it would effect males or not, we never had that discussion, unfortunately. It is a very interesting idea though. I'd say that it effects the males in the same way if you want it to (that's my answer to any questions asked that I can't answer since I don't know what Tio's stance is and that'd by what all the answers I gave would be; how I want things to work).

Thank you for catching that, it does sound awkward. I went back and changed it to what you suggested. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I thank you for taking the time to leave me feedback :)