Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24709326-20140320024356/@comment-4750363-20140320032552

I feel that the in-depth explanation on the mechanics of sleep isn't fully needed in the actual state of the story. I recommend to reconsider if it is fitting.

Also hah, RBD. I can't really imagine anything else than that former mexican pop bnd each time I see RBD

So, leaving that aside, I'd say it's pretty much worth continuing. Keep writing! You have a nice start