Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20181124050253/@comment-36815674-20181124062508

In the first paragraph - Daidí, brought back memories cause I'm from Ireland and that's a irish word.

5th paragraph

I had to find the truth. Fall break was two weeks.

Is it "Fall break was in two weeks" or "Fall break was two weeks long"

14th paragraph

Santa uncapped the bottle and took a long drink. “It early 2007.

Is it supposed to be "It's early 2007" or is Santa drunk and he said "It early 2007"

Other then that I like it. I felt like it was missing something but not sure what.