Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24859608-20140515140357/@comment-24821182-20140515143915

Okay, that sounds all right. If you could take these descriptions and make them part of the story, make the wonderful sun and the clean, white snow relevant to the setting, it would be very good. Make the character experience all the wonders - and necessary evils, such as cold - of the environment have an effect on him.

In my experience (which is to say, very little) the writers who can make setting and plot intertwine, so that one cannot exist without the other, usually always spin good fables.