User blog comment:Underscorre/Jeff the Killer Rewrite Contest!/@comment-4138999-20151104113843/@comment-4138999-20151107230613

thanks for the review and I accept any criticism, but two issues with my story you pointed out I have possible explanations for, one is that the abandoned island was mistaken for a hotspot because of its strange nature causing headaches and bringing in the scienctists and liu is meant to be very smart so talks like that