Talk:The Viewer

Where to begin...

The depth and set up of the story was pathetic, there were certain little things I couldnt help but wonder, "Why was a kid out in the woods at 3 after an argument with his parents, why did they fight anyways, why doesnt he want their shit."

The sentence structure was horrendous, the periods after every word killed the flow of the story. The grammar was also bad. Also the story was short and very anti-climatic. I give it a 4/10 &#42;insert clever sig here* (talk) 00:58, April 12, 2013 (UTC)