Talk:Funnymouth/@comment-25798693-20150411171233

8/10.

Good story development. More or less realistic. Quite interesting. But, I don't really get how you can go from impersonal internet communication to very personal nightmares. I mean, the 'distance' between the funnymouth character and Charles was too great for Charles to experience terrible nightmares directly. Maybe some other form of milder infiltration into Charles' private life initially would have been smoother. Also, what was the meaning of the worms? Were they in any way related to funnymouth?