Talk:The Stepmother/@comment-6684440-20131218035430

Woah...Where to begin...Well first off, I was so impressed with the grammar, I saw no mistakes at all! Although this story was short it still managed to pull off that factor that really makes you wonder, I really enjoyed how she saw the angel, and instead of some cheesy "The angel came to save me" story, it became a good 'ol fashioned horror story!

Punctuation/spelling/grammar   10

Overall creepiness                    10

Detail                                        10

Total:                                        30

Great job! 30/30 for my score! Keep the good stories coming! ^-^

-Astral