Talk:The Boy in Man's Clothing/@comment-30664473-20170127113246

Not really a creepypasta but one of the most sad stories i've read in here. The twist that the man was actually his son was really well done and had me reading twice for it to hit me. The only thing I ask is that maybe having a sequel to this would be really good. The story basically felt like an introduction to Ben's character instead of a fully fledged story and if you could make it that somehow Ben survived his suicide attempt I could see a sequel being written. It just feels so unsatisfying just reading about the last moments of an addict's life ending so patheticly especially since Ben is capable of redeeming himself given the chance. Also would be a waste of Amber and Twigsy to end it here given how developed their characters yet having so relatively little involvement.