Talk:Modification/@comment-26326346-20150531012735

This was very unique and a fun read.

The third paragraph bothers me a little bit though: "Benny grumbled to himself about how annoying John could be, but John ignored it as he pulled out a small torch. Upon turning it on, he began to descend down the metal ladder."

If it's a torch, shouldn't it say "Upon lighting it" instead of "Upon turning it on"? I didn't change it because I didn't know if you meant a traditional torch or some sort of electrical torch. It's just a minor nitpick.

I really enjoyed the pasta and it becomes more scary the longer I think about it. I wouldn't want someone to be able to erase my memory, that'd be worse a fate worse than death T_T

Keep up the good work, Grim :)