Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24037587-20140911164319/@comment-24841732-20140912003031

I may have been misunderstood. While the plot of the story itself is bad, the writing is decent, but could use improvments.

Things you can do:

-Avoid cliches. Original stories are more intresting.

-Lead your story in an intresting way. Make your reader WANT to read.

-Cut out unnecessary details. You don't want to bore your reader.

-Practice dialogue. This one is hard, so don't worry about it too much.

Everyone says we were being harsh, but it was just friendly advice. Sometimes a story just doesn't work out. Just drop it, and move onto a new idea. As a writer, don't get too attached to your work. I can't count the number of stories I got maybe halfway finished and never uploaded.