Talk:Starving Dogs/@comment-27656235-20160122145934

Sorry, I could barely get through this. Just trying to read it feels like I'm straining my brain. You write in English and use flowery verbiage but there's grammar and usage mistakes in practically every sentence. Is English your first language? Your previous story had a few mistakes of this nature but was ultimately readable outside of a few cringe-worthy moments. You use words improperly often, like you don't really understand what they mean but they sound good to you. Tons of sentence fragments. Ok, you get the idea, I'll stop there. Basically unreadable.