Talk:The Old Bridge in the Park/@comment-26410564-20180624092653

Ha! I like it! Doesn't take itself too seriously for what it is, and gave me a chuckle in a few places. I really can't think of any real criticisms for this sort of story, as it clearly isn't meant to build a massive narrative or deep, meaningful characters. It's a lovable little story about the "smartest girl in town" dying for the dumbest reason imaginable. The [REDACTED] seemed a bit out of place in this otherwise tongue-in-cheek story, but that's hardly anything to get worked up about.

Solid!