Talk:Thailand - An Allegedly True Story/@comment-4715955-20160202090024

Suffers from "wash-rinse-repeat" syndrome. Every event is exactly the same: "Something weird happened, and we freaked out. We investigated, but there was nothing. We freaked out some more. Then something weird happened, and we freaked out again. We investigated, but there was nothing." It's so repetitive I felt like skipping entire paragraphs just to get it over with.

Also, this: "However, when we got there, we saw the most freaky shit of all."

Every pasta author needs to stop doing this. Ever have somebody open a joke with, "This is the funniest joke ever, guys. It's hilarious, omg!" And then they tell the joke, and nobody laughs. They oversell it, so the joke is never funny. The above quote not only causes the same effect with horror, but it also warns us that something "scary" is about to happen, so there's no tension whatsoever.

Stories like this can be effective without redundant events and "scare warnings" every paragraph.