Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180705051303/@comment-26444017-20180706090355

I think the dismemberment tag is probably fine for this.

I'd suggest running through and getting everything straightened up, for lack of a better term. Some of the phrases are a little odd, and there was a repeated line that you should find pretty easily. I wouldn't have the Queen of Shiba explain how the transformation happens. It isn't really necessary and just comes off as odd.