Talk:The Sweeping/@comment-25306074-20141022021520

That was pretty fuckin' awesome. I found the "America the Beautiful" thing a little trite, but I really liked it otherwise. It also helped that I read this while I was talking a walk on an October night, and it started raining IRL shortly after the black snow came down. This story is especially good if one's in the right mindset. 10/10 would bang.