Talk:Necrosleep/@comment-24798963-20141218153205

I guess I'm just not getting it. It's an okay pasta, but not remarkable in any way. As Necrosanity pointed out, it sort of dragged on after a while. Don't get me wrong. Overall, I think it's a good story. But I think it could have been summed up in a few paragraphs. Lots of superfluous stuff that didn't really contribute to the plot. 6/10