Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29454058-20160805085241/@comment-27748929-20160806032828

well I'm having alot of mixed feeling about your story. It's not terrible but their are some spelling mistakes. Also this is a spinpasta which is a shame because this story has alot of grown to stand on as it's own story. I enjoyed the candle cove refence in the begining of the story. I can't wait to see what stories you'll right in the future good luck. 5/10 which is good for a first try.