Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24101790-20150201125302/@comment-28938497-20150201150216

I don't want to expand it beyond the ending, but if it leaves the story incomplete in a bad way, I will have to make the ending itself better.

And from your suggestion, I will give the Harpy Crow some backstory, either by Gary's telling, or the narrator actually tries to search online for more info and finds it.

The whole reason I wrote this story was to try a different approach at writing stories. Ideas weren't coming to me, so I went looking for them. I wrote down some common ingrediants in the formula of urban legengs, horror, and creepypastas (three seperate lists), and tried to write a story that used a lot of them. I'm particularly invested in this story, as I hope that the new process actually works. That may be why I'm reluctant to change key details myself.