Talk:Gliomas and Graves/@comment-25569708-20160531212553

I have to say, I really liked this story. The pacing was very well-done throughout and no matter what was being discussed, it was interesting to read about. I found it intriguing how this story expanded on the idea of a deranged killer, actually explaining the thought process behind a murder. For the first time in a while, I was able to understand why one person would kill another in a pasta. I also liked the twist there in the beginning where it's revealed that Robert killed Camille, it's mentioned so nonchalantly, almost as if it was an unimportant detail. The story wasn't to long or to boring either, so obviously that's a plus.

For the ending, I had to go with Ending 2. As much as I would like retribution for what Robert did to Chomps, I think the second ending was more memorable. The image of a nearly-dead, delirious maniac cuddling up with a heavily-decayed corpse in the middle of no-fuck-where stayed with me longer than the first one, where he's just simply locked in the coffin with the corpse. I think Ending 2 has the bigger emotional impact/creep factor here, so that's why I went for it. Good job with this story.