Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27838637-20160707143147/@comment-29015383-20160713112656

All I can say is that I really enjoyed the story! The manner in which the main character both prepares and executes his kills is very interesting, as well as nicely described without boring me. If there are stories where killers use venomous animals to perform their kills out there, then I haven't seen them yet so you get all the originallity props from me on that.

I also enjoyed the killer's annoyance at his schedule being a half hour off. Talk about major control freak hah. That as well as his carefully planned murders shows glimpses of his character beyond just 'must kill, must kill!'. Refreshing! His empathy toward animals also gives him some likeability despite the main character being a serial killer. Makes him human. A very disturbed human who needs to talk to someone, but still human. All in all, I'd love to see more of this character.