Talk:Plastic Man/@comment-29507836-20160921103853

As pointed out by MrPotatoDead, you used "..." a lot of times in the story, and that there were a lot of cliches. I agree with everything he said, but I also think that it was less than alright. The detective was a nice add, but it was executed poorly due to the fact that it is unreasonable why a detective would write "..." many times in his little note. I also think that this isn't even scary at all, and that 'tis just one of those "internet myths". They never turn out to be scary, but this was desperate with the gore it added in. To be honest, the gore wasn't even described perfectly. Overall, I think you can improve, but for now I'll give it a mere 3/10