Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36095001-20180822021904/@comment-33488654-20180822022648

Alright.

Lemme see, I am not a certified critic, but the first paragraph could use a little grammar improvement, and the middle of the night is more towards 12am.

That is all the criticism I can give tho, as I am not very good at criticism, so you shall just have to wait for a certified critic to respond.