Talk:Grass

Review (3/5)
Well, I can tell that the author gave an honest effort in making this, I mean, it is a clever pasta. There's some points that tend to veer the story off as a bit abstract, as plants can't really feel pain and such, however, I'll skip that part of the review. As for grammar, nothing really jumped out at me as bad, so I'd say that the story has good grammar usage. Next, the creepiness of the story. The story isn't really creepy, but it is one of those ones that makes you think, so I think it can be excused. On to length. One of the things I tend to nip at is the length of a story. I know there really wasn't really that many ways you could have made this longer, so I think I can excuse this for the most part as well. The story/theory was pretty enjoyable, and I think i'll give it an overall 3/5 stars.

Dburch111 (talk) 01:38, October 22, 2012 (UTC)Dburch111