Talk:The Cat in the Hat Strikes Back/@comment-26241695-20150601182800

I'm sorry but its simply not scary. I'd try something like

"Oh god, what is it?!" The sad girl did scream. At the monster that haunted her worst, darkest dream. The cat simply smiled. "My dear, its a thing." And the thing then did pounce; the girls screaming did ring."

OR SOMETHING LIKE THAG