Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-26399604-20180331140500/@comment-9041013-20180331190920

Vngel W wrote: A little extreme to call it xenophobia, eh? Only one character has a really strong accent, the innkeeper. *Felton has more of the universal standard of how people talk -- dropping the "g" at the end "-ing" words and saying " 'er " over "her". Hell, that's how I talk and I don't even have a solid place of origin to pick up an accent -- never stayed in one spot long enough.

Regardless, thanks for reading it and for your feedback. I honestly didn't think anyone would look at it given the length, but sometimes I get lucky with a read or two. Also, good catch on spotting that missing word I'll be sure to address it. I was just kidding, I wanted to comment on the story itself, but the site kept saying I have to relog. ​​​​​​So I did it here. Felton, sorry, I was stuck on Fulton, its a wrestling thing, it is reoccuring here it seems. (I'm pretty sure you're from a anglophone country anyways, so how can you be a xenophobe to others like yourself? pff)

Yeah, it was long, but sometimes it's worth the read, in your case it definitely was.

Here's another nitpick though, I'm just throwing it in because we've already kind of developed a conversation here. Why "Gaia" and not a Native american "thing" of similar position, I dont know, Waccan or something? I mean, I get it, it's known, but still. It's kind of amusing to think about especially since you broke out of the usual "monster" mold.