Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30535075-20170904013731

My story:

Don't read this, just turn off your device, and run to the nearest hospital quickly. I don’t know how or why this happened to me, but as far as I’m concerned, it’s not safe for me, or for you,. Don't read this, I warned you.

Get in your vehicle or use public transportation, I don't care, just get to the nearest town or city, and look for help, because I don’t know how much longer I can hold it here, until this thing comes around for you, {{USERNAME}. Let me take my breath. Now, i'll tell you what happened.

On September, 03 I was lay down on my bed searching the internet on my phone. I wasn't doing much. My house was small and the TV from the living room was on, a Harry Potter Movie was on. On my bedroom there was another tv and it was line with the one on the living room. It was 7:33 p.m. as I saw shadows moving in front of the TV with the cornered of my eye.

Everything seemed normal, except for that. I shocked my head sideways, it had to been the side effects of Vistaril, I was taking anxiety pills. Are you afraid of dying, ? Is hard living your everyday live thinking about it. I had beeen dianosticated with Thanotophobia.

But while I was reading this creepypasta online, I noticed something odd. No. It wasn't the tittle "He's Out There Still" it was the trees outside. My bed was placed next to the windows, four in total. Walking out of the neighbors yard a figure approached my house.

It was dark now, 7:44 p.m. He or she was about the same height as me, its skin was pale white, completely naked, for sure I noticed, it had boobs, and had very long arms.

And I mean ...still with me, ? Don't reply yet. Listen. She walked slowly, and hunched. Her hands were hanging next to her.

As she took a step, I noticed that she walked like a zombie. Each step seemed to point out a drug addict who had an overdose. It wasn't far fetched, most of them walked in the area at night. The houses were ten meters apart, so she was very close, and when she finally raised her face, I saw her eyes were two, glowing red marbles, popping out from her eyesockets.

Her little nose had snake-like shape, and her lips were missing.

Her mouth had stretched in a very wide grin, and her teeth were very large. I almost forgot about her long, jet-black hair that almost touched her waist. God. It was a humanoid creature ressembling those 80's "Critters" from outer space. What the hell am I talking about, ? There's a demon, in front of my house!

She had a soft panting, when she began to get closer to the house, fear and adrenaline quicked in to me, I ran quickly to close the bars door from the balcony, which also had bars since we lived in a bad neighborhood. I put out the lights, grabbed a machete from the kitchen and hide in my bedroom. I looked out my window put she wasn't there.

The creature had now walked up the frontyard stairs, hide between the small trees, it made it to my house.

I waited terrorify in silence, the only noise coming from my quickly-beating heart pounding. Shit, remember when I told you that I suffer from Anxiety? Yep, it began. I was ssuffocating, I couldn't breathed. I don't know how it did it, but the creature was standing on the living room, not even two meters from me.

She looked at me, with a widened smile. I looked away from her terrible sight, and she knelt down next to me.

At this point, I was too frightened to do anything, I just sat there, and clenched the machete in my hands.

I felt her sticking cold breath against my face, which smelled of asufer. And then, to my surprise, I had stab it.

A chilled cold went down my spine, I stood in horror, my anxiety was getting worst and it's blood rain over me. The last thing I remmebered was the creatures body falling next to me.

..., remember what I told you was the truth. Listen carefully to what happened next.

I had lost the track of time, there was noise outside, I could heared the sirens.

"Sir, stand away from the body."

Two cops stood before me, they had black eyes and there guns were out, pointing at me. I smiled. It was as if the body I had seen last night had never existed.

It might as well have been my imagination, when I looked down, the body wasn’t the creature's, but my uncle's. I forgot to mention, I was living with my uncle, he was supposed to be on his room on bed. He was a very sick person, I was taking care of him.

I stood up, to walk outside. It never happened. One of the cops shot me on the leg, and I duzzoff.

There was no evidence of any of last night’s events on my testimony. It was all caused by a gas filter in the house mixed with the effects of my medications. Yeah, that had to be it. It had to have been a hallucination; I was frightened and out of answers, so I accepted the official report.

To this day, I keep telling myself If only others knew the truth, this tragedies would be avoidable. Now tell me,, is your nearest hospital, a mental hospital? You'll need one ... "She's Out There Still"

Was deleted. I'm new here and I read the rules, so was the deal? What's wrong with my story? 