Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20181007040949/@comment-28428152-20181007065346

A good rough draft. The mention of the bandits coming out at night kind of left me expecting something to happen in relation to them. I'd also do some research on fallout, and definitely look into the after-effects of Hiroshima and Nagasaki, and looking at bomb testing from the cold war might help, too. Definitely feels very bleak, though. Like it