Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26588881-20150708014508/@comment-26715482-20150717043017

I see a couple of problems with the story, first off is why did this diver go into the base? He ran out of gas and than preceded to go into this underwater base for no rhyme or reason that needs to be explained. Secondly is the cliche part of the monster/being knowing that you know about it and will kill you. Finally is this bit " Luckily the scuba diver escaped with the note but as soon as he placed the note onto his boat he disappeared into the depths below. The boat was found later that month, but the diver was no where to be seen." So how did the scuba diver escape the cage? also it's cliched that someone  conveniently leaves a message about a monster/being before going missing and or dying, also who the heck knew that as soon as he placed the message he disappeared?