Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28963682-20160711021212/@comment-28963682-20160716015701

Thank you for the feedback!

I don't know why I mixed up the it's and its so much. I think I was using a different version of the story to edit (I have like 2 different drafts that are not exactly the same) and then just didn't notice.

Also yeah, I think maybe I'll relate the experiences more to anesthesia. I was thinking unnatural consciousness in general, like anesthesia and getting a concussion and things like that. However, maybe I could make it that the creatures don't want people to be saved or something and I'll think up of a reason why. Also thanks for the links and the info on anesthesia. I'll probably also think up of a reason as to why only some people get this dream even though a lot go under anesthesia.

Also the face thing is meant to sort of lure someone to the creatures or to mock then, I'll try to clarify that too.

Thanks to everyone for the feedback!