Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29301999-20180812020140/@comment-9041013-20180812080640

I can't really take this seriously.

I mean, it's just a silly piece with nothing scary in it. Maybe you were trying to make a mockery of the genre, or maybe not. But if you did - Trollpasta wikia is the place for you.

I don't know, you just need to make it more scary and less a comedy cartoon for this to work.

All of this before the nonesense and the shallow characters and lack of a solid and reasonable motivation are even spoken about.