Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27755241-20160327023501/@comment-27755241-20160327211539

Improvements, i think up so far

- Add more to the section, when father comes home - let him notice things, that happening around, only to be captivated by the TV.

- Add part, when father goes to seek new TV, once his and Karen counterparts parts ways - maybe add some mention about him dying later on, but only in passing.

- Add part, when they dispose of Bobby's body, while Karen watches it on TV, seeing Booby as a lump of trash - cue Karen slipping out of the influence, only to be put back, either accidentally or forcefully.

What do you think?