Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24859608-20140508204501/@comment-5619531-20140509162641

Again with the grammar issues. You misued "your" as "you're" in your sentence.

Overall, I'd say that this was pretty decent. I kind of feel like that this has a vibe of Inception in it. The outcomes got a little bit weird towards it. Because people have different fears (like mine with loosing someone that you truly love in life).

Although, I do say that this was a decent reality article. Just change up on some of the stuff, like grammar issues, misusage of words, ect.