Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30771515-20170214100658/@comment-31315220-20170216115339

I like the creepynies to the story as we didn't know what happened to Phoebe's mother before the ending and I like the fact that it builds tension as we don't know if Phoebe's mother was going to find her. I could only think of one cliche and that would be the "Parents worshiping devil cliche."

Anyway I am really blown awaybut the amazing work 9/10