Talk:Blue Light/@comment-26106642-20150309203906

Great story about the horros of nuclear weapons, but a few things. One is there were no 2 story building in Nagasaki that could withstand the force of a blast, almost all the homes were made from wood and paper.

Nagasaki was bombed second, so the narrator wouldn't have seen another blue light. Also, the two cities are far enough from each other that you couldn't see one detonation from the site of the other.

Just some technical aspects, but I enjoyed your story.