Talk:Rose Red/@comment-25184942-20150606190857

"Cry on my white rose White rose, red always there to be with you always there to be with you sad".

For me, the last line seems a little forced.

The rest is perfect. I am surprised that it was not read by many people. It is a simple story, but has a good style.

9.5/10

Note: Could the last line be "Always there when you are sad"?