Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27906217-20160401202519/@comment-28060931-20160401205357

First of all I think you should not write stories in the bold font. Second the story  was short which is okay when done right, but, This storie is cliché. You know with the ghastly figure tapping on your window and the fact that such a thing is impossible becouse you are located on the third floor.

I'm not gonna lie the story is bad. But it has potenial, for exampe:

You could use the death of the little girl as a source of greif for the protagonist and you could use that as a factor that caused the chcharacter to go I dont know. Insane maybe?

The storie at the moment is generic. It does not contain and new material nor is it scary. Considering the cliché some would, no doubt, call it comic.

So to finish it off I would like to wish you the best of luck with this storie. And I hope you get this on the main wiki after some work with it.

P.S. I would be a little descriptive.