Talk:The Bloat/@comment-25052433-20150606235121

This was a great story. My only real issue came at the end when the police laughed at the guy over the phone.

Stuff like that really doesn't happen, since the department would be held liable if an emergency were called in the cops laughed intsead of sending someone out to investigate. Not to mention, even if they thought the guy was crazy, the fact that he would have reported firing his gun in the woods would have likely brought an immediate investigation to see exactly what he shot.

Since the dead body of a fellow cop was also being investigated in that area, there is no way they would have just laughed it off. If you were to fix that one little error, even if it's just to have the cops come out and find nothing again, that would greatly improve the over all story.