Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4143377-20180422180432/@comment-4143377-20180424010612

BloodySpghetti wrote: The plot critique on my behalf is purely my opinion, someone else might love it. I fell for the trick, in some spots along the plot. I do think once you work on the more technical issues it'd be a crazy-enough-to-work kind of idea.

The bi thing was mostly a joke, even though the mentioning of arousal as a result of the seductive Lacey zombie's dancing so I capitalized on it. Honestly, it's really funny how sensitive people are about the subject. Some of my closest friends are none straight, so I'm not against them or anything.

Obviously, I appreciate the obvious effort you put into this, keep up working hard :) Thank you so much! :)

And now talking about falling for the strangeness of the story feels pretty ironic seeing as I fell for the bi joke. Good one sir.