Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28936201-20161118221348/@comment-24101790-20161118221523

I suggest actually posting the story here if you're looking for feedback. Please read the forum rules before making a post like this, if you want to talk to Mr.Dupin, you can use his talk page (http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_talk:MrDupin) as well.