Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180827215503/@comment-35911608-20180831162225

L0CKED334 wrote: Ok, so it's not bad. It just didn't pop like the first one. I think I am going to post it and move on to the next part. Maybe I can get to the meat of the story I am trying to unfold and it will help. Nope, not bad. Just as you said, not the same "pop" as the first part. But know that we'll be expecting a little something in part three since that is the case.