Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37873341-20190808210100/@comment-35711173-20190809092152

SigmetAlpha wrote: I really don't get what's going on here. I feel 2nd person doesn't work here at all, and I have no idea what the twist at the end is meant to mean. There's no emotion in this pasta; no way for us to feel what the narrator is feeling.

SigmetAlpha,

That's just as I see it.