Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-2007196-20190706200104/@comment-35711173-20190707235853

AlixeTiir wrote: DrBobSmith wrote:

Was it a mix of dream elements? It sounds somewhat like that. You have to be careful with those. Dreams feel like they make sense, but often just don't.

that's exactly what it is. I didn't realize I was that obvious

It is that obvious. You need to weave those elements into a logical (enough) progression that we can follow along and see after it is over why each element was necessary to drive the story along.