Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25980873-20160214220341/@comment-26326346-20160216021901

Although I have read the bible it has been quite some time, so I'm fairly unfamiliar with most of the individuals mentioned (assuming they are from it), however, I do remember a Saul and I believe this might have been the same individual from the bible. With that disclaimer out of the way, I will say that it was very easy for me to read with my limited biblical knowledge, so that's great! Great is actually the word I'd use to describe this pasta.

I read it from start to finish in a single sitting and was pulled in because I was interested in what would happen to the king and the Ark of the Covenant. That tells me that the characters were well written and the story was one worth reading. Another excellent and unique pasta from you for the main site! I am eagerly awaiting its addition :D

Because of my limited knowledge of the subject matter (bible) I don't have any suggestions for you. Those mice though, truly gruesome even though I saw it coming XD