Talk:Chronic Insomnia/@comment-25068867-20140616073851

6.5/10

When I got a diagnosis of ADHD, I was put on stimulates. Over the next year and a half, I was gradually upped to the highest dossage. At that point I was unable to sleep, and given sleeping pills. (stimulates in the morning, depressants at night. American medical system. I stopped takeing medication a few years back) and I can say that this would not be a typical reaction. His reaction seams a little on the extreme end, and dosent seem very plausible.

On the other hand, I liked the originality of the story and your writing style. I wish you would have expanded a little more on the evil corporation vibe at the end. All in all, a decent story.