Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-43886227-20190922002906

'''One of the horrifying experiences at the hospital was when I died during surgery. They were trying to get a bullet out of my stomach. They took it out, but then the tray holding the surgical instruments went flying. The tools hit my heart and the scalpel cut it. I died shortly after. I got a glimpse of where the good dead people go. Then as I fell into the underworld, and was greeted by the devil himself. I was down there a bit, then I floated back to top and back into my body. I’m alive again, that’s good. But during that period, I saw a small group of evil entities and somehow followed me into the real world. They knew I was here.'''

'''I know who those certain entities were. They were a group of bad men who did horrible things when they were alive. I’ve heard about them through research for a school project and the news. I found out that the leader of this group was born on December 14th, 1992. That was the date and year of my birth. He passed on the day I died during surgery. I’m a part of him. They looked around the room. They didn’t care for anyone but me. I was spotted by them and wanted to do harm to me. The expressions on their faces meant they wanted business. Then their leader, a tall black figure manifested in front of me. He told them to attack me. “I just came back from the dead. You wouldn’t hurt a former ghost, wouldn’t you?” I said. But they didn’t seem to care. They ignored me and started making a mess in the operation room. I got out of there before the real trouble began. They saw me leave and they followed. I’m thinking they got mad at me due to when their leader made them take the blame for the horrible things.'''

'''Once I got home, the environment changed from calm to evil. The evil spirits followed me. They wouldn’t stop.”Just leave me alone” I said. “No” they responded. I lured them out and banished their leader. They came from hell and I know it. “Your leader is gone. He can’t return” I said cheerfully. That just made them really mad, and they targeted me, just me. They said “He’s not gone. You are a part of him”. They lunged at me, but they missed. So it was almost like a fight scene in one of those action movies. I got a priest to help me with this fight. Finally, we got the evil out of my home. He asked me how they got here and I told him that when I came back to life, these entities followed me and appeared behind the doctors, and they did not notice the ghosts. They probably didn’t even sense them, but one did and he left. He might have seen them. But I don’t know. Anyways they are all gone, the group and their leader are back in the underworld, waiting for a chance to get revenge. '''

'''It’s been a couple of years since they attacked me. I was confused that I was their leader, but he died 4 years ago on the same day I had my surgery and died during it. His part of the soul was in my body, and the other was in the black figure. I just wanted to work things out with them. After all, I was the real mastermind behind it all. My wife wasn’t my original one, that one died 1 year before my death. It was a little accident. Her spirit appeared to me, this night and said: “Why?”. Was I behind her unfortunate death? She was a young one. She then argued with me about why did I do it. I told her, my friends made me do it. I knew why I did it, my friends were the ones to encourage me to do it. I was innocent before I went into the world of crime. My half-soul cannot rest because the other half is in the underworld. I got to make amends with it right now. It’s time for me to re-enter the underworld to visit the other half of my soul again.'''  