Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-40022501-20190927044821/@comment-40022501-20190929050445

So, Do you guy's think this story is worth fixing, or should I just scrap it and start over? I do agree with Bloodyspgetti on the ending after reading again and I totally agree with ChristianWallis on the fact that it really needs cleaned up,(more character datails etc...) but at the end of the day do you think it has the potential?