Creepypasta Wiki talk:Deleted Page/Jeff the Killer/@comment-28926895-20131103194021

I felt lied to.

You hear about this one creepypasta, about this killer, hear about people saying it's amazing, hearing about the crazy spinoffs and fandom....

And this is what I get?

It was okay at the start, his whole instinct to kill was alright.... there are gramatical errors, but that's not the point.

Then the kids, it's okay, some people are dicks.

Now the arrest is where I lose faith.

So, despite not having a trial, the gang already being known, and the only wittness what after the event, they simply arrest Liu with no fair trial, nothing from Jeff, no witness report, just arrest. What about how they were already armed and had ownership of someone's wallet?

The fight scene was already ranted about how unrealistic the injuries from the previous was, or the fact of no adults stopping it. my only word about it is:

"Wow, adults are useless and gun control is wild...."

But why would you release a young child who has a streak of violence, killed two people, had been horribly scared and needed painkillers and skin graffs, is released into the open, even after his insane outburst.

I was also confused on why would he kill his brother, the one he loved, the one who he killed two people over.

I won't give a mark, but I felt that the story could've been done better.