Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24714617-20150521212703/@comment-24356706-20150522191344

So i'm guessing that the while reading the paper the guy got sucked into another dimension...

This was honestly hard to read, I like the wording, but you don't have to saoud so proper.

Also Who is reading this, where did they get it from, and why... I'm not asking you to flat out answer these questions, I just want you to at least hint at them. All throughout the story I got the thought of why am I reading this, why is it important, I think at least hinting at the questions I stated above would desolve these thoughts.

I like the concept though, very interestion. If I were you I would try to make the story a bit longer and try to explain things a bit further.