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My Idea: I sort of adapted this from a couple of the ideas I saw. Story takes place in 1978. Jeff is a kid who was always picked on by kids in his neighborhood. He lived in sort of the slums of his town, but he was a smart kid so he went to a good school in the city. Jeff had a kind family, but many of his aunts and uncles had moved away due to the recent gang activity in the city. One day Jeff is dropped off by his bus and met at the stop by his brother Liu, and is approached by one of the gangs and they tried mug him. Jeff flees wth his brother and hides in someone's backyard. He helps his brother escape the gang and eventually gets away too. Jeff befriends a girl in his neighborhood then they get romantically involved. He asks her out on a date and when she was about to say yes, it turns out she was actually in a relationship with the leader of the gang. The boys chase him into the alleyway and beat him half to death and mutilate him. When Jeff dies, his spirit meets with the devil and offers him revenge and his life back in exchange for 30 years of service. Satan says he can't save his form before the mutilation so he would keep his scars from the mugging. Jeff agrees and is brought back to life as an agent for satan. Jeff loses controll of his body for 30 years and was forced to kill his family and girlfriend. The only one who escaped was his brother Liu. Liu made a family and had two kids. Jeff escapes Satan's control and has to kill to keep his soul on earth. He goes into Liu's house and kills his whole family, then leaning over Liu as he says "Shh... just go to sleep."