Talk:Happy Valentine's Day/@comment-32158652-20190121183146

Came by to tell you how much I love this story. This one and one of my own are candidates for PoTM for January, and I voted for this one. In a quarter of the space I used, you managed to convey much deeper emotions that leave a far greater impression upon the reader.

As somone who has watched loved ones waste away due to demetia, I felt this piece really moving. I wasn't sure at first that it was actually a Creepypasta, as good as it is. It was only when I stopped and pondered the characters and the situation that they're in that I realized that this story invokes fear of something more real than any Pasta Monster: the fear of growing old and feeble.

This is real. This really happens to people. It is terrifying to realize that it could happen to me, to you, or to anyone reading. To be trapped in a haze in your own mind; to not know the year or your location or even members of your own family; to be at the mercy of your own deteriorating gray matter is a horrifying prospect.

You've managed to frighten without resulting to cliches such as "Jeff the Killer showed up and my web history and files were erased when I tried to prove it and that's when I realized we were all already dead. Slenderman!"

Really well done.