Talk:Tricycle/@comment-24344379-20131231030150

It was very descriptive and it felt I was there watching everything happen. I enjoyed it. Cold chills went up my spine, and I got sweaty. This is my new favorite. I know I all ready mentioned something like this, but the very first sentance to the last, it was detailed. It was also very well written, and it was well organized. A little bit of it wasn't very origanal, and a little bit predictable in some parts. I think it was absolutley AMAZING! 10,000/10 Keep up the good work!