Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30557941-20191228010317/@comment-33904527-20191230190206

It ends a little abruptly, but it's a nice electronic twist on the whole "character unwittingly reads a book that they realise is leading up to the end of their life" trope. The fact that the 'book' in this pasta is replaced with a podcast adds a new kind of dimension about it.

In terms of a title...maybe something simple like just naming the pasta after the podcast? "The Lost Cases" doesn't sound like too bad of an idea to me. Or, if you want to keep it really simple, just call it "The Podcast".

How did you manage to get the text black? I don't even know how that can happen. You should fix it, it makes the pasta harder to read and is generally distracting.

All in all, good pasta, but I think the ending could be expanded a little. And get rid of the black text.