Talk:Implanted/@comment-5000412-20150217053038

I greatly enjoyed that. The narration style with both the protagonist and the chip blended together well, which grew to a very chaotic climax and ending.

The crude, aggressive personality of the narrator was also enjoyable, but felt a bit overkill at a few points. The jump to the later portion of the story was rather sudden as well, and it took me a few minutes to adjust to whatever time skip occurred. Still, I've yet to read a pasta like this in a long time, and it may very well have my vote.