Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24248644-20150115223237/@comment-25500640-20150119031419

good plot idea, certainly needs a bit more to the story. Besides just fixing the grammar, you just need a bit more to the story line. be very descriptive, it is the description and story that will set this apart from the stories that kids tell eachother and just have a twist ending, and the stories that give adults nightmares and leave them too scared to turn the lights off