Talk:The Kind Old Man with a Bike Path in His Yard

My First Story
My first story, hope everyone enjoys it and please let me know what's off about it and what could be better. Also, it's 5:40 AM and every time I go back to read it, I notice little flubs here and there. Please excuse them and let know about them and I'll fix them up after I charge my biological batteries. Thanks! http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/l490/Kristopher_Starliper/SIGGYround_zps777c81d9.png 09:41, June 15, 2013 (UTC)