Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26013902-20150228085549/@comment-26013902-20150228102011

1. regarding your last comment i wanted to say that the rich person, was headed to someone you hate.

2.The bold letters were actually sth i wanted to test. I would edit this anyway

3.The phrase in the end, was sth like a twist of plot.Cause my story seemed to be like a cliche adventure/horror story so i thought the twist was good

Thanks for yourr opinion chronobunny