Talk:The Arrogant/@comment-24381191-20141112165546/@comment-25634501-20141112201109

Thanks for the feedback. It really helped me understand how I should clarify the concept. I went back and changed the parts where I had accidentally switched to past tense. (Hopefully I got them all if not most of them) and added a few extra paragraphs, rewritten lines, etc to include his opinions on diabetics earlier on.

One major change I did is on the final line. I tried leaving it open ended but so far I'm the only one who understands the actual concept so I went ahead and clarified it.

Your feedback really helped. I appreciate it!