Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26220663-20151002151539/@comment-27029037-20151002182605

Pierre1987 wrote: I tried to rewwrite this story the best i can but i am not sure.

"Oh come on! You're not afraid of ghosts, are you?" , "No? why i should be afraid of ghosts?", said two teen boys of 14 and 15 year old Joshua and Carter. The two boys decide to visit the place of an old burned farm, because Carter was thinking it was fun to make a scary ghost story before halloween, but Joshua was so scared of ghosts because he hated when he was watching horror movies with ghosts who kill people. The two boys then challenged each other, as they wanted to know who will go in the farm first. So Joshua said he will stay in the farm all of the night. "Because if you're a pussy" Carter said as he taunted Joshua, "I am not a pussy!" Joshua snapped back. "You know what! I'll stay at the farm for a whole night!" Joshua added, "I don't believe you" as Carter taunted Joshua, so Carter told the story of the old burned farm. Revised first paragraph.