Talk:It Breathes, It Bleeds, It Breeds/@comment-25941663-20160603182716/@comment-24101790-20170504193649

@Allurei: You can try improving your stories and taking them to the writer's workshop. Looking over your latest one, I can see a number of awkward wording ("When they were nearly there, a drunk man that a girl named Sasha had paid to do this in a way she refused to talk about with anyone, especially her girlfriend, Maria.") and plot issues (the story feels incomplete and there isn't a whole lot of build-up to the events or effective story-telling here.) that really lower the overall quality of the story.