Talk:Hanging Man Hill/@comment-3508932-20140324130456

8/10- The story had a great premise and build up at the beginning. It wasn't until the last few paragraphs that I was left feeling like there could have been more. Perhaps the ending was rushed? The imagery you chose to depict Terry's death and Roy Terrance's corpse was ghastly. I could imagine the burnt husks that were their bodies.

My only suggestion would be to make it longer. Good job.