Talk:The Observers/@comment-24019084-20131015151343

Awesome concept!

Only little critique is right at the end. 'If you read this you might be a threat...'

Isn't this supposed to be a spoken message on someone's answering machine? Later transcribed by the person who received it? He shouldn't be talking about reading something that hasn't been written down. :P

Other than that I loved it. I like how it has the air of being something that could have really happened, as it wasn't put on the internet by the victim himself.

Well done~