Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10502460-20180709044901/@comment-9041013-20180710002214

Well sounds like an old video I have in my favorites about some woman being hunted down by something "demonic", it's pretty nice but not too unusual for it's theme.

As for your story, there are so many "strange" video/game/object stories that it literally kills my ability to suspend my disbelief for the story. Perhaps make the setting of the video more casual... Also, shorten the introduction or expand on the plot itself :)