Talk:Necrosleep/@comment-3541151-20150123195116

LOL I played Rockin around the Christmas Tree to the December parts. I like this story becoming known, it is inventive engaging and fun. I enjoyed the concept most of all, a mysterious malicious site. Now, the ONE thing I have a problem with, is that the publisher said it took place in the future. For Found Footage type, realistic stories like this, that ruins the immersion. I know we're supposed to know it's fictional, but for stories like this, that believability has to be in play. Examples, Marble Hornets, Blair Witch Project. The other thing that bothered me was the use of You-Know-Who was a bit cliched, at first anyway. In the end, especially the use of logic in you-know-who's substance, was quite unique and interesting. And how his demons worked was also interesting to read about. My favorite thing, in the begining anyway, was the main character. He was the most relatable individual and Reed's loss is a tragic one.

                                                                     Now, A proper funeral:

                                                                                   RIP

                                                                                -Reed

                                              Unspecified Birth - November 27TH 2014

With so many demons in life, may the Lord hold you now. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GmXeJlJFSXs

So I enjoyed it, but found that it was a bit bland at times, but I enjoyed it enough to say it was really good, overall. And to give it a good score. 7/10