Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25612295-20150325175932/@comment-25612295-20150326161406

Thank you! I agree with all of your edits. This was very helpful. Also I appreciate the compliment. <3

I'll be fixing up all of the areas you mentioned today. I do agree that some sentences are just too wordy; I feel like it's because my high school L.A. class has some pretty weird rules about sentence structure, and I'm getting them mixed up with normal writing. XP

Thanks again!