Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26924905-20141210000607/@comment-26924905-20141213042414

Thanks man, I appreciate the review. I would like to tell you some things, don't find this as spam or anything:

I based this off of me, as I am in fourth grade, and witnessed some kid trying to strangle my friend. I have also received some strange videos...need I say more? Also, I realize the paragraph thing, sorry. I am new on here, and I am trying to become a better writer. Thank you!