Talk:Thornton/@comment-17722390-20131021215317

Yeah it should be good now, I cleaned up the grammar a bit too. An admin should remove the needs editing tag soon (you can't remove it yourself, neither can I). If not, maybe leave a message on an admin's talk page saying the story is fixed so they don't delete it. It's not bad by the way, good enough for me to try to save it from getting deleted ;)