Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25941663-20150104141246/@comment-25941663-20150105171853

I understand where you're coming from. Originally, the Lady was much more fleshed out (the Old Man gave more details). But I cut that part out, because I felt the Old Man's monologue was dragging a bit too much near the end. Instead, I left it open to the reader to interpret her as he/she wishes. But maybe it was 'too open'.