Talk:I've Been Living Inside My Ex-Boyfriend's Body for Five Years/@comment-35711173-20190801165213/@comment-35711173-20190801203310

Fairy7Local,

Whether Grandma decided to be young and healthy instead of old and dead or Joey decided to "transition" to a different gender, the story doesn't go differently. I don't know the original Joey or Grandma. All I know is the Gemma that is currently residing in Joey. If Grandma knocked off Joey by body-snatching, I the reader don't know Joey enough to care. Maybe Gemma would, and I think it would increase the horror to know that the person in her body in effect murdered her boyfriend. That would drive emotions, and possibly a desire for action like revenge.

I could envision a strong and dramatic story going down that twisted revenge path. But, it's your story and yours to do as you choose.

Dr. Bob