Talk:Basil/@comment-30157838-20170703233304

Very interesting concept! The old 'I'm writing this and about to die' cliche could use some tweaking, but an cuncontrollable spread of common plant life big enough to swallow a home definitely sounds like something that could be turned into horror.

Maybe attempt reworking it from a third person perspective? The unnatural nature of the planet should be laid out in further detail, and done right, I could see the plants themselves being just as much a character as the author. If you wanted to play with the idea a little more, the other plants in the garden taking on similarly unnerving growth could add a little meat to the story's bones.

For a first effort, though, well done.

6.5/10