Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190621084611/@comment-35711173-20190621205959

I've given it a title - "Deadline." It's not a word I use in the story, but I think it has double meanings related to the story. How does it sound?

Again, thank you for the reviews. I started the story in the third person and then went to the first person. I thought I had caught all the first person instances, but it looks like I missed a few.