Talk:Clown in the Woods/@comment-5733573-20180819165641

This needs some work. Firstly, why should we fear the clown? So he catches people and harms them somehow, but what else? You need more here if this is going to be scary. Clowns as a trope are overdone, so what can you add to this that's new and exciting?

Second, the inconsistent metre is really a problem. It's jarring and inhibits the reader's ability to immerse themselves in the poem.

I strongly suggest you do some work on this and improve it. That will increase its chances of staying on the wiki.