Talk:Empty House/@comment-3524611-20140829153628

7.5/10 I liked your story because of its uncommon setting and suspenseful ending. However, the beginning and the middle paragraphs may give the reader an impression that the story might be one of those cliched stories where a few high school kids go to a haunted place just for fun and you know the rest... Due to that, it may drive away some potential readers. Aside from that, I have no further complaints. I look forward to reading more of your stories. ^_^