Talk:What Have I Done to Deserve This?

Well done
For your first pasta, this was great! I reccomend you make them into paragraphs though, So it'll be a lot easier to read. There were a few grammar errors in there, but nothing serious. But one word of advice I can give to you- Don't make some of the sentences that short. Like where you were describing the "Grim Reaper". But I'll reiterate, for your first pasta, this was great. Good job :) --Trxce (talk) 15:38, August 14, 2013 (UTC)