Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24776950-20170412003723

Alex sow US Las Vegas 9:15 am

Alex sow sat on the steps to the hotel as he thought about what he had just heard on the news. He had just sat down for breakfast in the hotel lunge and the news was on. “This just in, we have heard rumors of a bomb in London, witnesses report that the bomb was moving into London and it was deleting everything in its path”. Alex did not believe it was true and when he first heard about it he thought it was some sort of aid for the news company to earn money. “Deleting”! The other news reporter shouted in shock. “Yes deleting said the first news reporter. “Everything the bomb passes just results in a void like ground, earthquake experts even went in to measure it’s depth but the machine just went haywire and showed random numbers and stuff”. “How very interesting, so we also heard rumors that London was nuked while trying to stop the bomb since anything the military sent in never returned at all”. “We had no choice the military general said in agony, if we refused we would have been mocked for not supporting the people in London”, “thank you general, on a more important note, the bears have tied with”- Alex sat there in complete shock, he got up and decided to go sit outside for some fresh air and try to think this over. He went outside and sat on the bench and looked up at the people walking by. How could he and these other people be living in a completely normal life when somewhere out there, London had been nuked to stop some sort of bomb that would destroy London completely if it wasn’t terminated? Alex’s head was hurting too. For the past 5 days his head had been getting worse and worse. He was highly considering going to the doctor to check it out. Alex went completely still. His head had been making a weird noise all day and it was slowly getting louder and louder. He had taken some painkillers an hour ago but it made no difference. He guessed the noise was a butterfly flapping his wings repeatedly back and forth. He could hear it now he realized, just a soft thumping sound but there was no mistaking it.



can someone plz put this into poper pragraphs and check it over  

'''                                Thump, thump, thump. '''                                   