Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25121533-20140701061329/@comment-25121533-20140701183324

Thanks for your criticisms, I greatly appreciate feedback. I've been a writer for quite some time, but this is the first horror story that I've attempted, so it's going to have plenty of flaws. I thnk I was so heavily focusing on the story itself that I didn't put enough effort into actual sentence structure. Again, thank you for your input, I'll edit what I see fit to.