Talk:In the Bleak Midwinter/@comment-34823985-20181226072431

This sentence seems off. [I bowed my head until the wait of my task.] It seems like maybe you meant to say, "under the weight."

Excellent story! I'd like to see more of the protagonist. Perhaps, in another story? I feel like she needs a name. I shudder to think of some of the other awful tasks she's been weighted down with.