Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-40151278-20190715115832/@comment-35711173-20190715145630

Creepyfreakshow,

I second Ned Wolfkin's review. There is a minimum standard for a story to be acceptable for the main creepypasta Wiki. The story was deleted from the Wiki because it didn't meet that. There is a minimum standard even in the Writer's Workshop for people to take it seriously. You're not making that.

You should start using the free tools that are available to help with your composition. I suggest trying https://www.grammarly.com to start. It points out 39 "basic" errors, and almost all look to be correct. It also says there are 36 "premium" (you pay money) errors. We can show you other free tools to help you compose your story, but you need to spend the time to use them to get the benefit.

Even if you corrected all the English errors, your story is of an extremely common and "trope" type. We call it a JTK after the story "Jeff The Killer" that did it first many years ago. A teenager suffers abuse (teasing, social isolation) and then rebels and starts killing people.