Talk:The Ersatz Cat/@comment-25941663-20160926024241

This was a masterpiece. A beautiful read.

The demon/cat was immensely amusing. The way it spoke, the way it behaved, it was fantastic. It had a very unique "voice", a personality that set it apart from the norm. He was a joy to read, and the interaction between him and the narrator was chilling and entertaining at the same time. Very nice work on him.

The things the narrator had to do were also chilling. Having to dig up his daughter only to burn her to ashes was a very creepy idea and it was executed to perfection.

Then, the narrator's wait around the coffin for the time to pass. What a great sequence that was. It build up suspense for the great reveal and hammered home the desperation of the father. It had me by the edge of my seat. Top notch work.

Overall, this really is one of my favourite stories on the wiki. You took the cliches in places I never expected and worked it into perfection. This gets a perfect score for me.

10/10