Talk:Sniff/@comment-28266772-20160615144240

This was a great story that was enjoyable, although a little long for my tastes. If I had to say I had one issue it's that I thought the character's frustration with his wife seemed a little odd. He warned her that the place was unnatural, and yet when she acts strangely he doesn't seem to consider it might be the very place he warned her against.

But these are petty problems - I thoroughly enjoyed this story.