Talk:As She Stares/@comment-25715451-20141118181524

I did not like the ending and as I see a few people didn't..... you mentioned the house is in the middle of a forest so maybe it could of ended with the boyfriend trying to get them to a hospital while Eliza and Jessy keep freaking out because they see shadows moving Jason keeps trying to reassure them they are safe then they hit something and have tricker kill them.... I know this is not my story but I thought I would give you an idea of how it could've ended just to be a little more satisfying to the readers you do not have to care about anything I say but you're a great writer and I would hate to se this writing go to waste because of the ending