Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-39592845-20190527064653/@comment-39592845-20190527120531

Thank you for your feedback! I'll keep that in mind when I want to revise. This is just the first draft after all, mistakes were bound to happen.

I'll put more thought into it though. I'll take what you said and try improving on it in the second draft, whether or not I stick with the ritual I chose for this pasta and the poetry format because I don't think I can exacute it correctly at this time.

Thanks again!