Talk:That Moon of Mine/@comment-26030957-20171031191029/@comment-26326346-20171031231629

Thank you for the in-depth review and for holding the contest! I am really glad that you enjoyed it; and enough to give it 9's across the board at that!

Confession time: Generally speaking, I hate Westerns. I'd argue that, in general, they are all basically the same film. You've got one dude that wrongs another dude and they must duel at the end, then the good dude wins the duel with one-shot and it ends rather anti-climatically.

I had a couple of different ideas for this contest, but I settled on this one when I thought about how I might be able to do something different with the western setting, and - like you - I have never come across a Werewolf Western before XD

Yeah, by "unsettler" I meant one who unsettles, or unnerves. I didn't think it was a real word, but I felt that it got the point across and knew I wouldn't be repeating a description I had given earlier if I used it. I shall correct those grammatical errors, thank you for pointing them out :D

Haha, yeah. It wasn't really creepy or scary. I relied too much on the mine as the scary part of the story and then under-did it on some of the description there. I meant to have a part where the werewolf that sunk with the boat swam after Clemence, kind of like an homage to Jaws, and maybe that would have done more for the creepiness. I also wanted to do a chase scene through the forest with a different Werewolf (remember the one that jumped into the hole in the ceiling of the mine). But, shoulda, woulda, coulda XD I'm happy and overwhelmingly satisfied with your reviewing and scoring of my work. I now know something specific that I need to work on to become a better horror author (the horror element, lol), thank you~