Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25024572-20160610170146/@comment-25569708-20160613204433

No problem, Dork. As for your Riffs, I will definitely check out Johnny when I get the chance. Well I don't mean "check out," I'm just saying that I would really like to get a good look at Johnny. Okay, that's wrong. What I'm really trying to say is that I will eyeball Johnny soon. Shit, that's bad too. I know my name is Frank N. Furter, but that doesn't mean I'm... You know what, nevermind.

Now for your new draft, I can see you have definitely cleaned up the Jeremy and emo kid (oops, I mean Draven) part. I also like the new ending, though I can't really imagine why the director/producer would think the pun was "fucking stupid" but not all the rest of the zany stuff here. I guess I'm just explaining the joke here. Not much else to add here since they're just small edits.

Anyways, good job here again. I'm not really sure if I can think of anything else to say here rather than "good job and good luck," since humorous pieces aren't really my forte and I think I've said my part. So... good job and good luck.