Talk:As She Stares/@comment-25340844-20140929004528

So, this guy arrives at a house after receiving a panicked text from his girlfriend only to find her broken and battered after being brutally raped by some kind of (literal) monster, right? He also finds a young girl who has been mutilated and traumatised by said monster. It's extremely clear that the monster is wounded but still very much alive. The guy's reaction is "You girls are fine, right? I gotta run - I have dinner reservations at this fancy new place. Catch you later!"

Can anyone tell me what is wrong with this scenario?