Talk:The Old Bridge in the Park/@comment-5733573-20180517041026

This was absolutely brilliant. I loved every second of it. The way the other children view Eleanor kind of reminds me of cousin Marilyn on The Munsters.

I agree with Zarinaaa's criticism below. I would also say that you don't been to remind us that the town's name is being censored at every possible moments. The first two kind of make sense, but the underscore instance just feels a little forced, like you're saying, "Remember, this town's name is being left out!" Also, I'm not really sure why the name is being censored. It doesn't really add anything to the story.

Even with this minor confusion, your story is highly enjoyable as both a work of horror and humor.