Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37090617-20181006214715/@comment-35711173-20181008195728

DankDoodles,

ALWAYS compose off line. Checking it in Microsoft Word is a very good start. Plus you still have your story when it's been deleted for not being up to Wiki QC standards.

What would happen if a substitute teacher were running around with a knife? What would be the school administration do? If you don't know, tell your principal that you are writing a creepypasta story and that you want a realistic answer for the story. If you're afraid of doing that, find out what other schools have done when there's a school shooter. There's cops all over the place. What do schools do when a student dies violently in school? It's not just quietly sweep it under the rug. They have counselors, end school for the day, etc.

You instantly and blithely capture the substitute teacher with the knife. That could be a whole lot of scary as the substitute teacher has this kid in a closet with the knife to his throat and there is a police SWAT team shooting up the place.