Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33488654-20180822020522/@comment-26444017-20180822044827

Okay, now there's some explanation. While it's a little loose, it's something to work with.

Now, restructure the whole thing so the new part is integrated with the old part, telling one story.

If you would like some assistance with that, I'll be up for another hour or so, and can get you on the right track.