Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5005634-20140731013908

I stared deeply into the decapitated corpse of my friend.... what happened? I wanted to scream in fear, I wanted to so bad. I couldn't. It was like someone cut my tongue off. I was paralyzed. Blood was pouring out; I couldn't see the head anywhere. I hoped it was a nightmare. I hoped so much. Please just be a nightmare! I closed my eyes and opened them again. Why couldn't I wake up?! I want to get out of this nightmare. Let me out this nightmare! A tear dropped from my eye. I just couldn't bear it. My best friend, dead. I had already lost someone I love. Why another? Please just please let it be a nightmare. I buried my face into my hands and cried. Why?! Why did they only take him? Why not me?! Just please tell me why! I heard a faint whisper, it sounded like a familiar voice but it was so twisted. I thought I heard it say "....do you....still love me?" I was so confused. What was it?! Why was it asking me that?! I tried asking it but nothing came out my mouth.... was my tongue there? I stood there, I couldn't move. I was paralyzed. All I wanted was to get out this nightmare. Please let me out. I heard the voice call out again, louder "...do you.... still love me?" Why was it asking me this? I saw a quick flash of a red light, my eyes felt like they were burning. Where did that light come from? I looked back at the decapitated corpse.... where did it go?! I had to go tell someone, but I couldn't move or speak. I felt my heart pounding as I felt nauseous. I heard again "...do you...stil love me?" It was from right behind me. I felt someone breathing down my neck.... it felt cold. The whole atmosphere around me was so eerie. The room's temperature suddenly dropped a lot. I was shaking. I couldn't tell if it was fear or how cold it was... It was like a mix of both. I used all my strength to turn around but nothing was there... My room was pitch black, I went to feel for the light. I was feeling the wall till I found it, I turned the light on. I looked around my room. Everything looked normal except the disappearence of my friend. I knew this must not be a nightmare. But it seemed like one, I really couldn't tell. I wanted it to be so bad. Please let it be. the light flickered on and off. I was startled by it, I felt a breeze fly past me. I don't think the window was open...The light stopped flickering and it turned red. My heart pounded again. The voice said "....Do you... still love me?" I gulped as I was shivering. I stuttered "...w-who are you?". The lights turned off. I heard laughter. I ran to the door trying to open it. The door wouldn't move. As if it wasn't a door. and just a door knob attached to a decorated wall. I tried getting out, I kicked it I pulled the handle as strong as I could. I heard the voice again saying "....why are you leaving me?" I felt as if another person was in the room, I gingerly turned around.... I saw two red balls glowing. I stared right at them. I felt paralyzed again. My eyes slowly adjusted. I saw the two red balls were eyes on what looked like a figure. It seemed to be wearing a cloak, it had both its hands out and seemed to be holding something in each hand. I asked "w-who are you" my voice was quiet. The figure said in its twisted, insane voice "would you like to see my face". I was quiet for a few seconds... Did I want to see its face? I had to be prepared for anything. "Y-yes." The figure laughed at me as it dropped the two things in its hands and took off the hood of its cloak, the lights turned on. It had glowing red eyes, dark,long messy hair and it's face was covered in a strange black liquid.... it looked like blood but it was the wrong colour. I looked towards the objects it dropped, the objects were heads.... human heads.One of the heads was of a girl from my school... I then realized. One of the heads was my best friend... the one who died moments ago. I looked so shocked, I felt lightheaded as if I was going to faint any minute. The figure made a psychotic smile as it said "...do you....still love me?". I started hyperventilating. I was trying to work up the courage. After a minute I was finally able to ask. "Why?! Please just tell me why!? Who are you?!" The figure stared straight at me. Its twisted voice said "...You forgot me..." I looked confused. Who was it. Why did they say they forgot me? "..N-no. I didn't forget. I just can't tell who you are..." I shaked as I said that. Why was it saying this to me? The figure gave a grimace. It screamed "YOU FORGOT ME". I truly couldn't feel myself move, it was as if invisible chains tightly binded me. It came closer and closer to me, it took the head of a girl and put it to my face. I had time to look at its pale, scared hand. The figure's psychotic smile returned as it said "I did this for you". I finally realized the head that was. She was a girl from my school that I helped in a lesson and for some reason she touched my hair, but why does the figure have her? "I DID THIS FOR YOU" the figure screeched as the chains I felt binding me grew tighter. "w-why did you kill her for me?" I asked quietly, I felt so scared. I did not want to share the same fate. It dropped the poor girl's head. The figure stared right at me coldly as it said "She tried taking you. No one is taking you". I stared horrified, I stared into its eyes. I couldn't look away. It came closer straight up to me, it smiled. I felt more and more scared, I didn't want to die. I just didn't. I cried, tears came flowing out my cheeks became wet with tears quickly flowing down. The figure looked at me. I felt lightheaded. Much more than I did before. It just smiled at me. I  watched. It stepped closer and closer. From the corner of my eye, I thought I could see a dull dagger in its hand. I was trying to see what it was, but I couldn't. My eyes were fixed onto its cold, sadistic smile. Why couldn't I turn away? I suddenly felt a pain in my body.... I looked down. A dull dagger was pulled out my side, it was soaked in blood, I saw blood come gushing out my side... The figure took the knife and licked the blood off it as it said "I...love....you". Why?!?! Why did it tell me this?! I don't even know who it is! The figure threw the dagger at a wall, it said again "I....love...you" I just couldn't understand. Why was it saying this?! The dagger on the wall just disappeared. The figure had it in their hands.They held it up. Please don't stab me again. Please. All I want is to live. Just please don't let me die. It took the dagger to its face. It started scraping off the black liquid while laughing and chanting "I love you".The black liquid all came off making a puddle on the floor. I looked at the figure. It had a feminine face, the face of a young girl. it's red, glowing eyes were bleeding the black liquid from them, it had scars going down its face. The blood from the dagger was dripping down its mouth, it wiped the blood off. "I love you" It said to me. I heard chanting... It sounded like nonsense what was it saying? I felt like my throat was closing. I couldn't speak. It started to ache. Was I suffocating? It said a strange word. Was it a backwards message? I thought. I tried to think what it was the other way around. Then I realized. It was her. My friend who a week ago committed suicide... But why did it say her name? I felt as if my throat was open again. The figure laughed and said "Keep on going". I finally realized. My friend. She wanted us to be more than friends. I never realized. But when she died. She must've just became a corrupt Spirit. I turned around to ask it. The figure disappeared. I noticed the dagger had stabbed me again... I never realized. There was a puddle of blood below me. As I noticed I passed out. Everything became a blur. I then woke up in the hospital. According to my parents I was brutally stabbed in multiple places. I asked about my friend. They said he wasn't real. Was it a dream? What happened? Why does no one remember them?! Why?! Just please. Tell me, was it real or not? Was I really visitted by her.... or did I just hallucinate that... 