Talk:Flesh/@comment-25170312-20150117013241

"The freezer came open and what came out? Me."

I'm really sorry, but that part is hilarious. As for the rest, it's sort of oddly written considering the context of a man writing in a journal. Sometimes it seems like he's writing as he goes, and sometimes it's like he wrote it later. The tense changes sometimes as well. Not bad, but could be better. The last paragraph needs to be reworked so it doesn't sound so silly.