Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-6822927-20190326201531/@comment-6822927-20190327014541

NedWolfkin wrote: Spelling and Grammar Issues: "his alarm clock began ringing." I suggest using another word than "ringing", it's not a telephone or a doorbell. "Please, tell me where I can a doctor!" you forgot the word "see".

Plot Issues: This story feels like a loose string of events about someone who wakes up with no knowledge of anything. No one is so plain that God will just forget them, He loves everyone equally. The ending sounds like a joke. In my opinion this is pretty lacking in creepy content. For the grammar issues, I have dyslexia so I knew I missed something.

I actually haven’t finished writing the story just yet, so that isn’t the ending. I should add that I am devotedly Catholic myself so I know full well that yes, God loves everyone equally, but it is meant to be a story about a man who wakes up to find himself forgetting everything and losing himself conceptually. Like, he’s being erased from existence piece by piece, and it isn’t a smooth process. I came up with the title based off a phrase I heard someone once say. I actually don’t want there to be a single explanation for this, as it’s basically someone have the worst existential crisis of all time.

I guess we have different standards of horror, as the idea of waking up with no idea of who I am terrifies me.