Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25900635-20141221231439/@comment-25959111-20150102225010

Very good story in my opinion, no writing errors as far as I could see. However I agree with the others, 'expiriments' may not be the best usage coming from his time era. That aside, I really liked the autopsy, It gave a sense of realism that you just don't see anymore. :)

On a separate note, this is astounding writing, but as far as I am concerned, it isn't very creepy. Please reply if this was not your intent, good luck writing!