Talk:God's Mouth/@comment-26134443-20150222044711

Dear people complaining about point of view; this is fiction. The person who wrote this wasn't actually in God's mouth. There is no such thing as God's Mouth. The "last meal" was this gentleman's girlfriend, so it ends before he dies, anyway.

As for the story itself,  I thought that, while not ut-wrenchingly terrifying, the plot followed a single string of (still fictional) logic, and the writing (sentence structure, etc.) was excelent. My only misgiving was the description of the head wound; that could have been better. Actually, I lied, I have two misgiving; I think it would've been better if events weren't described in the context of being in a cave (specifically at the end, when he's getting stabbed), but rather of actually being in a mouth. Rating, disregarding the website and the expectation of gore, 8/10. In respects to being on creepypasta.wikia, I'd drop it to a 7.5/10, but in any other situation, an 8 is appropriate.