User talk:EmpyrealInvective

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Why was my "Carter" Creepypasta deleted? It's not related to the one's deleted by LOLSkeletons.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Carter?venotify=created

I've also want to have a grammar check and fix,if there are some grammar mistakes.

I wanted to thank you for your in depth analysis of my story "The Danse" You pointed out key details that I did not notice (obviously). You also pointed out wording that I thought was fine but pointed them out making me wonder how it was possible for me to miss them. I did however feel like you interpreted the ending wrong. I do blame this on myself because I left it to a few details that the reader had to catch and perhaps I should of put more to help the reader. If you did replace the arms race details you would get an entirely diffrent ending. The ending is supposed to be that everyone at the dance died. This is why the cunclusion of the story is the main character looking at a danse macabre (dance of death. The two men symbolize with pins symbolize, as well as the story, what could have been say a nuclear war happened. This is what happens at the end as the two men drop their jars (which symbolize the bomb) and everyone at the dance dissapears (dies). At the ending our main character ends up in a bunker, and sees the painting making him realize what he had just attended, a danse macabre. Let me make myself clear, I am not saying my pasta should have been published, but through the questions you asked in the edit I felt that they needed to be adressed. I am truely thankful for your in depth analysis of the pasta and it has helped me for future refrence

EvansNews (talk) 14:22, May 17, 2016 (UTC)Evans News

Something that concerns you and the whole damn wiki
Hey Empy, just want to let you know about this if you still don't know it. I've made a blog about it; you can find it here.

 Ruckus Q uantum   15:58, May 17, 2016 (UTC)