Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25839052-20140927050701/@comment-24101790-20140927150717

Vampire385 wrote: EmpyrealInvective wrote: Minor edit to punctuation, I would still hint/allude to the object's power/ability. Other than that, it seems like it would fit into the other Holder Pastas Where is the punctuation error? I corrected it, but when a character speaks, there needs to be a comma/colon. Por ejemplo: Immediately ask him "What will happen when they all come together?" I fixed it last night.