Talk:The Solitude of Connor/@comment-4715955-20160111130323

The descriptions are quite vivid...but every paragraph boils down to "The narrator is evil," generating the kind of literary static that puts a more astute reader to sleep. Nothing happens in this story until the end, which we see coming from about three paragraphs in. It's just the mental processes of the makings of a serial killer with no plot or purpose. A bad story might at least be amusing in its badness, but not a boring one.

But it's fucked up, and that's good enough for everyone else to rate it a 10 I guess.