Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181003190023/@comment-9041013-20181004231629

Banned In CP wrote: L0CKED334 wrote: Ok, caught up on what you have posted so far. I am really getting into this and will try to keep up with the coming entries. I really want to know what happens with Ben. As for any critique, I would go back over the first part of this. There is a few times where you don't capitalize Ben's name, words at the beginning of a quote, and there was one or two points where the word was supposed to have "ed" at the end but had "es" instead. Just minor things. Damn, Grammarly let me down Cross it with another corrector xD