Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20170201195638/@comment-9041013-20170203191519

Diexilius wrote: Dude, it's not that hard. It's literally just clicking my name and scrolling to "Shit I've written". Anyway, here it is: Predicting Something and Gray Steam. "Predicting Something" was a little obvious nonetheless lovely however.

"Gray stream" was a nice read but I dont really get why everyone who writes about hellucinations and drug use has to get them monstahs gory... oh and you had this little error there mentioning the sound of a breeze and later mentioning something might have been the first sound of the hellucination