Talk:Dark Fears/@comment-25326117-20160524034201

1). This is the first time that I heard the name Lindy.

2). Backing my backpack, I think you mean packing my backpack, right?

3). Camping with friends is one of the best ways to spend a hot, and lazy summer. 

(I added the and because it helped the sentence flow better).

4). "Lets get going already!" I swung my backpack over my shoulder and followed her.

(You might consider adding a comma in Let's because it's short for and Let us and you might consider adding it into the sentence.  "Let's get going already!" I swung my backpack over my shoulder and followed her).

5). We stopped by my aunt to fetch Samson.  

(You might consider adding another ' since aunt in this case is possessive since they are going to her aunt's house).

''We stopped by my aunt's house to fetch Samson. ''

6). We said goodbye to my aunt and, with Samson, we were ready to go.

We said goodbye to my aunt, and with Samson, we were ready to go.

7). Waiting for us was a nice little lake house.

Waiting for us was a nice, little lake house.

8).We quickly collected the wood I had dropped. But I still felt a small sensation of being watched.

(I heard you should never start a sentence with but).

We quickly collected the wood that I had dropped, but I still felt a small sensation of being watched.

9). (Why did you combine lake house in one of the sentences, yet continue separating the two words in later sentences? Well, in this sentence anyways: ''We set up in the lakehouse, playing around as we did so. A small sound from behind made me jump, and I dropped the wood, fleeing back to the lake house). ''

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