Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24381191-20140930151008/@comment-24381191-20141009162914

Resident DeVir wrote: Sykokillah wrote: I guess I really need to proofread my work more. lol. I'll make these edits. What did you think of the actual story itself? It's not completed so, what I have of it. I'll have to read the completed version to make an accurate judgement, but so far I think it's pretty good. I want to know more about the asylum and the doctor's experiments, and of course it's always nice to know if the main character escapes his entrapment or dies inside the place. Thanks :) Also SPOILER, the experimentsa aren't really experiments, just torture.