Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24115679-20140606204320/@comment-24115679-20140622075659

Thanks for the feedback. I've thought about the key ring problem as well. For me, what it comes down to is the precise wording of the song lyrics ("a jinglin and a janglin"), rather than the sound implied by the monster's actual name. It does bother me, but it doesn't bother me enough to seriously consider renaming the creature "Jingler-Jangler" or something silly like that. I also sort of like that the connection between Rickety-Click and the grandpa is a little tenuous. I didn't want the parallels to be too over the top.

I'll be sure to check out your pasta!