Talk:Hell's Sinking/@comment-25052433-20140905030539

If Hell is sinking, then this review is rising.

What went right:

-I really enjoyed this story a lot. It was dark, scary and really pulled me into it. Well done.

-The concept was fresh and original. Your use of setting and scene, slowly bringing your world darker while all around seems to decay, was very creepy. It was a slow burn that didn't stop satisfying.

Really, I can't find anything that I would change about this. The ending added a solid twist that made the overall story a truly satisfying experience. Well done from start to finish.