Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29791712-20150518040934/@comment-26413251-20150519000927

This story was preety good.You obviously put a lot of detail into this story,and it does pay off.However,on occasion,it got into a bit too much detail.If you cut back on some of the unnecesary detail,this could be a great creepypasta.Overall,i'll give this story a 7/10.Good work,and i'm looking foward to your work in the future.