Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26981815-20151014040429/@comment-26981815-20151015064648

Oh, that part might be coz English's my second language. So I guess I didn't see I've written grammatical issues. Could you point out some so I could fix 'em? Or if you want, you could fix them yourself so it saves you the trouble of listing all mistakes (The story is The Ghost With Red Pupils)