Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36357228-20180811202950/@comment-9041013-20180811235141

Is this satirical? I mean, I probably don't find this funny at all because I actually work with a sad clown like the one in your story "Oh Im so badass, Oh Im this and that and this and that and this and that... don't believe me? FUCK YOUUUUU I WILL FUCK YOU UP" These kind of people make me want to punch em' but then I remember how long of a self esteem they have to make up this stuff and I feel bad for them.

All the random cursing is just random.

Bob also mentioned a few grammar and punctuation issues. Take care of that.

A super duper cool man isn't relatable, a Killer needs to have something appealing about them so we'd like to read about them. This, well, it's just not.