Talk:Cold Water/@comment-9041013-20151223190948

The thing is exactly you make a bunch of things and it's well it doesn't have a clear or main point to pass.

The main character is having a dangerous habbit that affects both the body and the mind

The main character's partner/roomie is murdered by some entity

The main character gets into financial troubles

Nobody gives a rat's ass a person was murdered in an odd fashion

The main character says she wants to stop with her bad habbit and neither are an any way actually connected.

I mean I do understand that this piece is under the category "Weird" but this goes beyond weird, apart from the fact that to me personally the great detailing made this piece a little too romantic (in the litterary sense), it is plainly unorganized and somewhat pointless

but maybe I'm just missing something