Talk:Whistler/@comment-25226524-20141103013335/@comment-25226524-20141103024257

Well that makes it that much more creepy knowing that. After I re-read it, I can see it. I'm not sure if there's a way to indicate that a little better or not honestly. You could try to slip a little something else in, but there's also the risk of adding too much. Others may have no trouble getting it, as I saw it clearly the second time. The only thing that pops into my mind, is maybe instead of ending the paragraph with, "What could-" you could maybe say, "Does it want me to-"  I'm not sure if you should change it, I just wanted to throw that out there for you to decide. Just so you know, I read a lot of great stories on here, but RARELY do I actually find them unsettling. This one did it for me though. I added a story awhile back if you wanna' check it out sometime, the link is on my user page(it's kinda' out-there) Again, great work on this.