Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28060931-20161116004550/@comment-28060931-20161122181235

Thanks. I'm sorry for the errors; I never wrote a pasta this size. I spent a two hours a day for five days editing my usual lenght of story. So I think I got really careless with this because I thought micropastas(I know this a bit longer than a typical micropasta) need little editing. Sorry for that. I'll definitely be careful next time.