Talk:Alternate 21328/@comment-9600371-20140116132443

Story: 10/10

Characters: 10/10

Creepiness: 9/10

Pictures/Videos: 0/10

Grammar: 10/10

Overall: 7.8/10

This article is in need of at least a picture or a video. As for creepiness, it was suspenseful, you got that down, but there wasn't actually a part that was truly creepy. That doesn't mean the story wasn't scary, it just means it could have been better.