Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25947144-20150327133906/@comment-25000365-20150328043855

Actually, this is not half bad. In fact, I really like it. It's not common you find someone who knows how to write a good twist ending. There were a few minor issues, like in the first paragraph when I'm sure you meant to say "through" and not "though."

If the minor spelling errors get fixed, I highly doubt this would be deleted. But who knows, I'm not an admin.