Board Thread:New on Creepypasta Wiki/@comment-3182855-20130311070506

Well, my first short story available to the public I suppose. Like many writers, I'm very self conscious of my skills. Since I'm working on an actual book, I felt the best start would be to write a few short stories to help me really get out of my comfort zone and get into the swing of things.

I'd love comments and criticisms alike. I am trying to improve, so let me know if you think it's bad or if there is something I could improve.

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