Talk:Like Clockwork/@comment-5000412-20140321003551

I'm not sure if this story fits the quality standards, but I'll see if I can get a response out anyway.

It's funny how you hoped that I'd like the ending, as that's one of the few parts that I was disappointed in. I can say that I was engaged with the writing shortly in, which led me to anticipating the end. When the ending did come however, that's when it died for me, and not in a good way. The simple "I'm coming for you" ending isn't satisfying, even in the least.

The story was a bit too short for me to completely understand, but it was honestly decent until it got towards the ending, which doesn't even seem to fit the story itself. The quality of the writing was okay, at least in my eyes. I didn't see any significant errors, so maybe that's what kept me reading.

I hope my words my have given some insight, and I encourage you to keep writing.

-E