Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31790225-20180123025328/@comment-32283485-20180409162952

Maybe it's just me, but as soon as I hit 'First thing you'll need is a set of spiced pumpkin candles' I lost all tension in the story and almost burst out laughing. It just seems like something supermarkets would try to market you at Halloween and not really on the same macabre level as blood and pentagrams and all that. Candles are eerie. Specifying pumpkin spice is hilarious.