Talk:The Club/@comment-25446881-20141231082241

Good story. I agree with the others - you should have presented a reason why the protagonist didn't help the girl. Other than that, I have just one complain: My dad is a freemason and a very decent man, probably the one really good person I know. You should take the freemasonry symbol out of your story. I don't know what they do in their meetings and I never will, but I'm pretty sure raping each other's daughters is not one of their activities (I would know...) In fact, women are absolutely forbidden from joining freemasonry or attending their meetings under any capacity.