Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24721086-20140814193929

First step: fear 

Although it was dark the full moon was high above my head. It was bitterly cold in the skirt I wore tonight. I could hardly see my two friends in front of me. It had been Marks idea to follow the party invitation in the middle of the forest. Mara and Mina were still laughing, but my mood became better when I finally saw the old fabric halls, and a lot of other people. It seemed it was true a lot of people had followed the invitation.



When we arrived I looked around and saw just people of our town. It seemed like everyone was here even a lot of the people who normally wouldn’t go to such parties. Some how I felt calm now knowing that we wouldn’t be the only ones who followed an invitation in a stupid forest. The forest was scary enough by daylight and it wasn’t better when the only light came from the moon above and the fabric windows. Slowly we walked over to the giant entrance. The first odd thing I noticed were the two women on the door, who checked the invitations letters. I couldn’t see their face because they wore half masks. The left with blond hair wore a blue silver fox mask and the other with the brown hair wore a red and golden cat mask.



Looking over to Mark the only think he noticed was the fact that both woman had plunging necklines and that there black dresses just barely covered their ass. It didn’t take long to get inside the two women at least could do their job and didn’t just look good. The inside of the building was stunning. There was a giant dance floor, two big bars on both sides and a sitting are with tables and sofas. But the most amazing thing was the big stage in the back with the fire shows already starting. Getting closer I could see the lead singer more clearly. Forget what I thought before, even when he looked like some pirate demon freak, he was really handsome. With his darker skin colour and his black hair. The only fact that gave me the creeps was his two different eye colours. One was green while the other one was blue. Even his pirate like outfit with the black coat with the dark blue fur, the white half destroyed shirt and the black spiked boots some how fit to his deep voice. The only thing I disliked were this golden ram horns he but on.



Suddenly I felt a pain in my side. “Hey Lucy, you do not need to stare at him like that. Let us go dance.” With that said I looked over to her and followed her to the dance floor. The music was amazing and I felt like I never did something other than dance. I didn’t noticed that after some hours that my feet started bleeding and so no one else noticed when there feet hurt and bled. No one seemed to leave the dance flour but I was sure that I saw different people on the bars. But the truth I didn’t know was that nobody was on the bars or in the sitting area. The other thing no one noticed was the time that passed. It wasn’t anymore just hours only but days that went by unnoticed.



“My dear guest could I get your attention for a moment? Thank you really much. This will be the last song for this week.”

Back then I didn’t noticed what was wrong with this comment of the lead singer called Mephilis. His voice was deeper now but even that I didn’t notice. This last song was calm and no one danced anymore, every singe one listened. The song itself seemed beautiful but then the refrain came and all changed.



“I am going to kill someone

 I am going to kill someone

I am going to kill someone,

Someone.”

<p class="MsoNormal">Somehow everyone looked shocked. It sounded so different to the rest of the song. Then I saw who he looked at. He directly looked at Mara. I didn’t understand but then I heard what came next in the refrain.

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<p class="MsoNormal">“Maybe someone who is little and nice

<p class="MsoNormal">Maybe I am going to do it twice”

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<p class="MsoNormal">I couldn’t even saw how fast he had been, but one moment he was one the stage singing the next he stood next to me and I felt blood on me. But it wasn’t just Mara next to me anymore. Mark was between him and Mara. This Mephilis look was extremely could and I felt more fear in that moment than I have ever in my live. It was on one point the fear for my friends, but the point I was standing next to a psycho in an old fabric in the middle of a forest let me fear for MY live. Then I heard the others scream, Mephilis just pulled his sword out of Mark. I saw how blood dripped out of his mouth, but he didn’t care. He also didn’t care about the blood, which came out of the wound in his stomach. He just turned around to see if his girlfriend and my best friend Mara where fine.

<p class="MsoNormal">But just in this moment she collapsed. I just heard a loud scream when we both noticed that this crazy psycho had pierced through Mark AND hit Mara directly in the heart. Then I screamed, I screamed when he cut of Marks head just if it was nothing. I screamed when Marks head rolled in front of my feet and I screamed when I saw my feet and the feet of everyone else. They all were full with blood and bruises.

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<p class="MsoNormal">But when I stopped I saw how Mephilis had returned back to the stage. But his face was no longer handsome. It was full of insanity. His eyes, his smile, the way he sang all of this has changed. Now it gave me this strange feeling between helplessness and pure fear. When I looked around me I couldn’t find Mina anywhere but know I saw that the woman’s with the strange masks stood around us in a close circle. No one had noticed how many they were because the separated in the different parts of the disco. But know they were standing one next to the other. When a boy tried to push past them one of them cut him with a sword in the back, which she had hide behind heir back. Something told the other that every single one of them had a weapon behind them but their stood to close to see. Then I heard the refrain again.

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<p class="MsoNormal">“I am going to kill someone

<p class="MsoNormal"> I am going to kill someone

<p class="MsoNormal">I am going to kill someone,

<p class="MsoNormal">Someone.

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<p class="MsoNormal">Maybe someone who is old and can’t run

<p class="MsoNormal">Maybe I will have a lot of fun”

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<p class="MsoNormal">This time it was a boy anywhere to my left, he wasn’t old but he was a lot older than many of the others. The scary thing was that he had bent his foot earlier. So he didn’t run when Mephilis came slowly over to him. For once everything was quite, no one dared to interfere. I thought he would just stab him like he had done before. But instead he started with cutting off both his arms. Then it looked like he was aiming for his neck, but instead he just cut off his necklace. First I believed it was an accident and then I saw how he picked up the fake tooth. It was a five cm. I heard him starting to laugh. It was a crazy laugh. The laugh of a mad man.

<p class="MsoNormal">Then he stabbed him with the tooth. The singing started again. Even crazier than the last time.

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<p class="MsoNormal">“I am going to kill someone

<p class="MsoNormal"> I am going to kill someone

<p class="MsoNormal">I am going to kill someone,

<p class="MsoNormal">Someone.

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<p class="MsoNormal">Maybe someone with blue eyes

<p class="MsoNormal">Maybe I am telling lies.”

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<p class="MsoNormal">I heard one again girls scream but this time I turned around just to see how he was smiling his crazy smile. His gaze wandered over the whole crowed. There were enough people with blue eyes. Not that I wanted him to kill another person but something told me this wasn’t over. I could still see the fear in the eyes of the people surrounding me. It was like it was enough for him in this moment to see the fear in the eyes of all the people here this night. Night? It wasn’t even night anymore. There was sunlight coming through the windows. In the new light the fabric lost his shine it had when we arrived.

<p class="MsoNormal">In the new light I could see another thing. This time I screamed, the half masks the women were wearing were no Masks at al. It seemed like they already were part of their faces. When they grinned the others and I saw the shark like teeth. No one noticed that he had started singing again.

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<p class="MsoNormal">“I am going to kill someone

<p class="MsoNormal"> I am going to kill someone

<p class="MsoNormal">I am going to kill someone,

<p class="MsoNormal">Someone.

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<p class="MsoNormal">Maybe someone with blond hair

<p class="MsoNormal">Maybe this is not fair.”

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<p class="MsoNormal">This moment I couldn’t move anymore. Fear took controlled my body. Like a deer when, it looked at the eyes of a car driver and can’t run. I saw how he looked at me and for once I cursed my blond hair. When he run towards me I already could feel how he cut of my arms how he cut of my legs and neck. But no pain came. I looked behind me. There he was. This time he didn’t used a sword. He used the long blond hair of the girl to strangle hair. When I heard her whimper I remembered who she was.

<p class="MsoNormal">She once went into the same class as myself. Her hair wasn’t truly blond, all the years she had red hair, I remembered how he was mobbed because of it. A few days ago she had decided to dye them blond. Somehow I felt this strong urge to stop him.

<p class="MsoNormal">With all my strength I rammed against him. It was far away from knocking him of but still enough to loosen his grip on her hair. He then looked in my direction and with an blink in his eyes I remembered what I just did. I tried to fight against an psycho in a place you can’t run of. It didn’t madder that outside was beautiful weather or that the fabric was just five minutes away from town. There was no escape. I felt his hand close around my neck like it was nothing and he lifted me of the ground like I was a feather.

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<p class="MsoNormal">When I looked in his eyes, it felt kike I was facing my biggest fears at once, it felt like going though the experience of getting raped, like running away from a murder through endless corridors, like the pain of losing your family and your friends. It felt like he cut me into small pieces or like burning alive. Getting eaten by some kind of insects, small bite by small bite. When there was something you could fear I had the feeling I would go through it in a blink of a few minutes. I heard me screaming in the distance. Then I felt the floor. Some one was holding my arms behind me. Then I saw him in front off me.

<p class="MsoNormal">I heard him whisper: “ There is something I want you to see.” Then I felt a terrible pain close to my eyes. He cut off my eyelids; I could fell how blood was running in my eyes.

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<p class="MsoNormal">Behind a curtain of red I saw how he went to the girl from before. Once again he started to strangle. I heard her first whimper than I heard her trying to breath. Then one last time he pulled with all his strength and cut through her neck with her hair. Then He turned away one more time and song his song of beauty and death. Once more it sounded like when he started. Some thing in the air changed. I wished I could see more clearly. Then I could have sawn how the others got closer together and how some clung to each other.

<p class="MsoNormal">And a last time I heard this refrain.

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<p class="MsoNormal">“I am going to kill someone

<p class="MsoNormal"> I am going to kill someone

<p class="MsoNormal">I am going to kill someone,

<p class="MsoNormal">Someone.

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<p class="MsoNormal">Maybe someone who is just like you

<p class="MsoNormal">Maybe the policemen will have no clue. “

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<p class="MsoNormal">The last thing I heard before everything went black was the cutting of the necks of all the people who still lived. How their body fell to the floor.

<p class="MsoNormal">Then there was darkness. The darkness wasn’t cold and I welcomed it.

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