Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180929001741/@comment-9041013-20180930102242

Okay, so I've read it. It's nice, don't see much fault with it, although I initially thought it's going to be one of those happy ending stories. They suck... Luckily that's not much of a case in your piece here, because Scratch is interested in conducting more business with Brian Sawyer meaning, he's stuck with Scratch, possibly.

Love the ambiguity.

This part feels somewhat rushed compared to other ones where there's a single climatic thematic scene whilst here you have the big talk with Scratch and the ending itself, but oh well, it's up to you and it's not much of a deal anyway.

Good job overall :)