Talk:There's a Monster in the Treehouse/@comment-25941663-20161015085703

A nice little read. This was quite suspenseful for such a short read and the buildup was fantastic. Vocabulary and flow was also spot on. The ending was kinda creepy, but it was funny at the same time. A difficult balance to hit and here it could have been better. The ending is definitely not bad, but it leans more on the hilarious side than the creepy, while I think the story would have benefited if the humor was a bit more back-handed.

All in all, an enjoyable read executed greatly. Good job.