Talk:Solifuge/@comment-35071950-20191024033512

Grammer could've been better in a couple parts, but other than that it was pretty good. However,

1: Why would the father tell his son such a violent story, especially when he was suggesting it was true?

2: How does the son remember every exact word the father said? Either the perspective could've changed for the actual story-telling part, or the son could've given a summary of the father's story.