Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30861466-20170903175422

'''​PLEASE NOTE: This is a remake of one of my older pastas and this only the first part. I am currently taking a break in order to gain fresh ideas for part 2, if anyone has any ideas for me however please feel free to leave them below. Also if any improvements should be made for part one in any way again feel free to let me know.'''

​Thank you.

​Part One:

Mental wealth, a popular commercial for Sony’s well known console which I personally don’t care for myself, but this advert in particular has an important significance to me.

There always has been something off about the ad and considering what it was advertising it never seemed like it made much sense.

I mean come on someone must have thought this ad was off right? Some odd looking Scottish girl blabbing about some inspirational message even though she’s advertising a game console?

The reason why is because the ad has nothing to do with the console in question. The real video is an interrogation of the girl.

As said by one of the most common theories the girl was in fact an alien; she was discovered by a mysterious organization I was the former CEO of known as DH7, apparently they found the girl in an unknown location building some sort of contraption.

Upon this discovery they knocked the girl unconscious and took her into  facility.

It was here that my team informed me of their new discovery and I arrived in the room along with the camera guy who we had positioned in front of her.

I asked the question we all wanted to hear.

“Are you a friend or foe?”;  she didn’t reply, she only sat their smiling.

“What are your motives for coming here?”;  again nothing, only a slightly wider smile.

“What are you?”  I continued, slowly losing my patience only to have a soft giggle be the closest thing I got to a reply.

I was about to lose it with her before she finally spoke.

“''Let me tell you what bugs me of the human endeavour. I’ve never been the human in question, have you? Mankind went to the moon, I don’t even know where Grimsby is. Forget progress by proxy. Land on your own moon. It’s not longer about what they can achieve out there on your behalf, but about what we can experience, up here. It’s called mental wealth.” '' she said, before doing that same stupid giggle again.

Despite at least getting a response I was unsatisfied and confused, what did she mean? Why did she ask if I was human when I clearly am? What did all of this gibberish mean?

Whilst in my distracted state she grabbed the contraption and used it to destroy the camera causing our camera guy to get knocked unconscious.

“If you want me to talk then please don’t put a camera near me again.”  she said before tossing the weapon back onto the table.

“Y-You know what a camera is?”  I asked in shock whilst cautiously moving the weapon.

<p align="left" style="margin-bottom:0cm;font-weight:normal;line-height:100%">“My world is not underdeveloped, as a matter of fact it’s much like your own and yes before you ask we all do look like this facial wise.”  she told me.

<p align="left" style="margin-bottom:0cm;font-weight:normal;line-height:100%">“''Okay then, wasn't going to ask anyway, but now let's go back back on topic. Why have you come to Earth?” '' I asked.

<p align="left" style="margin-bottom:0cm;font-weight:normal;line-height:100%">“''My motive for coming here is nothing more than expanding my own ambition. You see I was exiled from my own world due to my rather violent experiments; because of this I decided to use this exile to my advantage, I have been travelling through various worlds for the past six years in an attempt to conduct more experiments throughout each world, my research is to find the deadliest possible substance I can use to power my machinery.” '' she explained.

<p align="left" style="margin-bottom:0cm;font-weight:normal;line-height:100%"> ​I came to the conclusion that she was a clear threat and I ordered my team to keep her contained within our walls, awaiting furhter questioning.

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