Talk:Apartment 403/@comment-26054278-20150302025958

This reminds a lot of a very short version of Vincent V. Cava's "Little Black Bugs", which is a very interesting but rather long story that also uses bugs and other elements. However, that one was much more effective in being scary, had compelling and interesting characters, and other various things.

This one is of course a short story, so character development is not always needed if the purpose if just to scare. However, I kind of feel like the "twist" at the end really isn't much of a twist, and there are just some awkwardly worded sentences.