User blog comment:Elizabeth The Killer/I'm VERY pissed off now./@comment-1631480-20140307062014

Okay, I think you need to re-evaluate your thinking. I skimmed over your pasta and It really does need work. I know it may be hard to believe, but I think the mods might have made the right decision. For a first pasta it's fairly normal to be crap, but don't let that get in your way. Take a more mature approach, and consider what the mods meant when they deleted your story.

Few tips; don't use emoticons in your story. Don't use capslock (for anything). Read lots of books (I recommend a novel called Watership Down), and practice in your spare time. Also, you're allowed to spend months on a short story.