Talk:Left/@comment-15034692-20130913145357

Really good for a first pasta. It's creepy. Way better than my first, but, I might know how to improve it. I was thinking making it more horrifying, Like nothing happened. Some creepy thing came in, then left. Maybe make a disapearance or something? I dunno. I'm not good with pasta's. It's just an idea :D Other than that, it was nice.