Talk:1155/@comment-24148388-20140622205609

Hey, this is great! Really got nothing bad to say about it, but I'd rather you used a bit more of a detailed explanation of the monster.

Here's a tip: Use all five senses - sight, hearing, smell, touch, taste. When some are impossible, you should of course avoid them. In this case, that's taste. The rest can all be very neatly detailed, enough to make people shiver in their skin. Other than that, very good. 9/10