Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181005011936/@comment-9041013-20181005094928

Well again, seems like nothing should really be said about this one. It's doing great. The plot is moving foreward.

Here's something I wanted to address since the first part but kept on forgetting, why is Mohammed named after Dionysus as his last name? Bacchus is a Greek name, if anything.

Also, wasn't Ben ten in the previous installment?

Seems like you didn't run by Grammarly this time, though, you've had a couple misspelled words, like "Complemtary" instead of "Complimentary", a few punctuation errors and the like, nothing too major.