User blog comment:Snowfang00/Deleted Creepypastas/@comment-24101790-20161113031833

I think what's worse that getting a story removed is when someone completely ignores feedback and re-posts their story calling it 'revised'. It seems self-entitled and lazy to repost a story without even spending a little time fixing the abundant issues that were present or taken into account two people who commented and highlighted issues. Here's my comment for the sake of transparency (areas in a parenthetical are amended/clarification):

"Sorry to contradict you here (previous commenter), but this story has a lot of the overused tropes of CPC (Creepypasta Character) stories and is likely going to be removed when an admin reviews it: The excessive description of characters ("She found some bandages and a mask. This mask was grey in colour and had the shape of a wolf’s face with a muzzle and everything. She looked around her and found a can of magenta paint. Carefully, she painted magenta around the eyes, ear tips, cheeks and finally on the forehead, a love heart with only the left side filled in. The eyeholes for the wearer were back (sic) but see through as Zara put it on and put her hood over her head.") The cartoonishly evil/aggressive bullies ("She continued shoveling snow but the boy grabbed the shovel and forced her to look at him. “No useless bitch talks to me like that!” He said as he went to punch her.") and authority figures ("“Those boys… They were-” SMACK “Don’t lie to me! You attacked them didn’t you?!” She yelled.") And the protagonist who eventually snaps and begins murdering people. Couple the relatively generic plot with the frequent capitalization (random capitalization, capitalizing words improperly after dialogue, etc.), spelling, punctuation (using periods where commas should be used in dialogue), and wording issues (awkward wording) and you have a story that's likely going to be deleted soon for not being up to quality standards. Here is a guide on things to avoid when writing an OC/CPC story."

And here's your revised story. Feel free to look over them side-by-side. Seems counter-intuitive to bitch about the time you spent on it when you're too lazy to try and even re-work it or fix basic errors.