Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180719080645/@comment-35711173-20180720051529

Bloody Spaghetti,

Thank you for the review. I really appreciate it and I intend to do some revision.

The welding outfit was for going outside about 10 hours after the burst was over. It was only for protecting against ultra-violet light, not gamma rays.

Yes, the e-mails look raunchy. Something is wrong with my formatting.

I like the giant's underarm bit. I may work it in.