Talk:The Child/@comment-25326117-20141014195329

'no around' isn't it 'not around?'

'and umbrella' is supposed to be 'an umbrella.'

'here it goes.' should be like this 'Here it goes,' a comma anot not a period to continue the same sentence.

'and old lady' isn't it meant to be 'an old lady?'

Yep, I kind of saw the protagonist dying. How did he get sent to the funny farm if he didn't mention the lady and the boy? There could have been better build-up to this.