Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24763727-20140402010417/@comment-24763727-20140402021234

Well, I was trying to convey that they came back with the last sentence. Part of what alerted Sarah to the fact that something was going on with her sister was the sound of the window opening, and then when she says, "I think I just heard my window open," it was supposed to show that they weren't just going to leave the rest of them. Does that make sense now, or how would you recommend I make that more clear?