Talk:Coradeen's Candelabra/@comment-11366536-20150227174829

I'm going to summarize my review in three parts due to the length of this story.

Beginning : The Auther recalls an old children's show he was never able to comprehend until now. The Explaination is alright, and the Grammar is good. There aren't any cliche's I can think of at this point, so the beginning is alright.

Middle : The Show's Episodes are described as a family that abuses their daughter. I found it very shocking that the Father would yell at here like that just for playing Make-Believe. Everything is more or less alright here.

Ending : I was also shocked by the revelation that the Father had raped Coradeen. The Blood is kind of cliche', but doesn't really mess with the story that much. The ending was really creepy, and freaked me out a lot.

All in all, it's an Excellent Creepypasta.

Verdict : 9/10 (Excellent)