Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31073921-20170129155943/@comment-31073921-20170130124138

EmpyrealInvective wrote:

ThisIsLucid wrote:

Emprpyreallynegating said: Are you writing these in one sitting ''... ''Boy have I been waitinf to say this. Yes, sadly. Mostly its because my writing is like forcing thoughts out of my brain onto the paper. When I "try" to revise it I see my flaws and complete errors. But, mostly i post them here to see what people think of it so far. Almost all of my stories ar far from done, but if you are really wanting to see some revisioned work, go look at Snowland (Yeah no duh im xXLucidNightmareXx also). I really have to concentrate to edit and revise my long and short stories, because ideas just get crammed in my head through my ear. (I've written 8 unfinished stories and about 15 others I didn't post here). So yes, thanks for reading this and Please if you respond, tell me one thing. Which story that I;ve written has the most potential and I should start ot edit revise and rewrite (Snowland, Lost Episodes research, The Unknown virus, or this one). Anyway once again thx for reading my babbling on and on. :D I'm sorry, but of the three you've suggested about re-writing, Lost Episodes should be dropped outright as it's rushed, has a lot of errors and likely will not pass the spinoff appeal. Snow land has a better chance of being re-written into something if you flesh out the entries and try to get more into the protagonist's mindset, as well as remove the trope of "I don't have much time to write this because I'm gonna die soon" ending. The Unknown Virus has a lot of issues, a majority of which I've covered in my review of the story that is going to require drastic re-writing. A final note, I locked your old account as you shouldn't have two separate accounts on this wiki. Snowland is an old copy, I had my friend review it, and added more. The "Ending" was scrapped because I made lots more. I'm going to post into writers workshop. Here you go Snowland revised somewhat.