User talk:Tiololo/Archive 1

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ImGonnaBeThatGuy (talk) 15:52, January 18, 2014 (UTC)

"You know when I feel closest to our Maker? When I see suffering, pain, and anguish. That's when the true design of this world is revealed." 08:35, January 19, 2014 (UTC)

Please don't add pages to deleted categories. Here I refer to 'Death', which was deleted a while ago: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Category:Death

-- Detonator Coil, suitable for a small nuclear device    (Leave a message here)  08:02, March 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded story Please don't re-upload your deleted story; it's against the rules. If you really want your story back so badly, make a case on deletion appeal instead. If you re-upload a deleted pasta again, you will receive a 1-day suspension from editing.

LOLSKELETONS (talk) 13:53, March 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re:
No problem. I just saw it was floating to the left a bit and decided to fix it up, since it makes the page look horribly ugly.

P.S. For your custom signature, it would be helpful to include a link to your profile for easier communication. To make the code work, put this in the custom sig box: Rinskuro13 LOLSKELETONS (talk) 20:09, June 26, 2014 (UTC)


 * If you put that code in the custom signature box in your preferences (make sure "I want to use wikitext in my signature" is checked first), it should display the signature and time stamp when you type four tildes. (Note that three tildes ONLY displays the signature, so that might have been what you did.)


 * LOLSKELETONS (talk) 21:41, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Just Finished!
I know you asked for narrative advice, but in all honesty, there is little I can give at this point. You're considerably better than I am at the 1st-person perspective. I can't really offer anything other than making your future stories a little bit shorter if possible- both stories were excellent, but I feel they could be slightly shortened. Also, when you are separating a single sentence from a paragraph, do so very sparingly, and I advise against that entirely if you are writing from 3rd person.

CassistRabbit (talk) 22:01, June 29, 2014 (UTC)CassistRabbit

You're Welcome.
I think you could ask an admin to critique it, and mention the fact that I think your sequel was Suggested Reading worthy. See what they think.

If you're going to read something of mine, at this point, I'd rather have your input on my latest WW post (Should I Use This Plot? NSFW) It's an idea for my next story, so if you don't mind relatively NSFW content, let me know if I should change anything about the idea.

Thanks in advance, CassistRabbit (talk) 23:14, June 30, 2014 (UTC)CassistRabbit

Friendly Message
OK, I get it. I'm sorry if I offensed you too, I misunderstood. I hope we can get to know better properly :)


 * hendshek*

FrenchTouch (talk)

Yay!
I hope so :)

But don't worry, I know that the chat isn't a massive chatroom and that it has big problems. When I'll have ideas, I'll contribute, be sure of that :D

FrenchTouch (talk).

Bloody Snow prequel
Idk if you remember, but you read a story of mine, Bloody Snow and I'm working on a prequel for it right now. I've posted a part of it on Workshop, would you please check it out? Here's a link:

White World

Sykokillah (talk) 15:33, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

White World
Thanks for all the feedback. The legible thing was a mistake, dude, I typed that in by accident, so don't laugh too much; I know what it means -_- I agree with you on the short sentence thing, though. I have severe writer's block right now. The past-to-present thing was intentional. The writer didn't care much whilst remembering the events that took place.

I agree with you on the paragraphing too, when I sit down to write, I'm like 'I'm gonna write paragraphs that are at least five lines long, har har har' but when I write 'em it's like this. (._.) The story is short because it isn't finished yet so double -_- Thanks for making sooooo many edits on it.

Sykokillah (talk) 19:59, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

M4R
Please don't remove the M4R tag from stories, as only admins may remove it. If this happens again, I may have to issue a block.

08:24, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Helpful template
When marking a story for review, you can use this template at the top of the page that needs review: This helps us out when we're looking over the story by telling us what we should focus on. For example, the page you last put down for review, there were some wording, nor punctuation, and a really thin-spread plot, but I can't be sure what issue you found with the story. With that template, it'll help. Thanks. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:06, April 6, 2015 (UTC)
 * No need to apologize, it actually helps that we have readers looking over stories and helping us do QC on them. The M4R template is a relatively new, but helpful creation. As for spinoffs, there are a number of older stories that are grandfathered in and are excluded from the spinoff rule. (For example, we have a 100+ poke pastas and Zelda stories despite the fact they are now on the blacklist) So really anything from before 2013 that is a spinoff is typically alright to stay on the site. That being said, if you come across a spinoff/blacklisted story that you feel is not good quality, don't hesitate to mark it for review.


 * The "delete now" template is more for stories that are spam, abysmal quality, or is a recently posted story that violates the blacklist. On a final note, I saw the message you left on Mystreve's page. He is unfortunately out at the moment, but if you're looking for feedback, I read Spider Cannibals and enjoyed it. My only real issue was the shortness of some of the entries as well as journal entries not being conducive to a more action-oriented story (It seems like a more passive method for telling a story). That aside, I enjoyed it when I read it back in June (did some minor edits too). EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:37, April 6, 2015 (UTC)


 * Unfortunately Steve is on a bit of a hiatus with RL issues. I hope he'll get everything together and come back soon. I will try to read the stories if you link them, but no promises on responding today as I just got in the door from work and I have a few other things to take care of before I have a bit of free time. Additionally if you are insecure about the overall quality of one of your stories, before posting it, you can submit it to the writer's workshop for feedback/assistance. In fact, last month's PotM started out there. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:01, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Story deletion Your story has been deleted because it doesn't meet the wiki's quality standards. If you feel that it did meet the standards, please state your case on Deletion Appeal. Make sure you follow the instructions to the letter there, or your appeal will be automatically denied.

'''DO NOT ATTEMPT TO REUPLOAD YOUR PASTA. If you upload it again, you'll receive a 1-day ban from editing, as per the rules.'''

Read the Deletion FAQ for details on the 'what' and 'why' of the deletions we make.

Read this guide and these blog posts for further details on how you can improve your story/stories to make them meet our quality standards.

For additional help, submit your story to the Writer's Workshop for feedback.

10:13, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re:
As it is a series, and not a continuation, I might suggest reworking the second part, fleshing it out some, building, and differentiating it from the original (because when I read it, I assumed it was the same person as in the first one.) and giving it a new title. For example, I have a few stories that all have similar themes that are all joined under a series name, but have different titles. I understand the idea of the feeling of defenselessness while in a restroom, so I think it's an interesting idea, but numbering it (Public Toilet 1, 2, 3) seems to imply a continuation of the original story instead of using a motif (if that makes sense). It also allows for a little more creativity and helps identify stories from one another.

As for the deletion reason, we unfortunately only have a few set reasons we can give when selecting an explanation. As your story wasn't spam, a spinoff, lacking story/content, the reason was likely subsumed under the quality standards reason. We can write in our own reasons, but we really don't have much space to go as in-depth as we'd like. I assume if you asked him, he would point out a lot of the things I covered in the deletion appeal as he had a good twenty-thirty minutes to look over the story as opposed to most Quality Standards deletions which are usually issued within five minutes of the story being posted. You can ask him if you want, but just know that he's probably a bit more busier than I am and might not give you a paragraph upon paragraph response due to the fact that he's also one of the few (beside me) that are attempting to make the site run smoothly. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 18:25, April 7, 2015 (UTC)


 * The title doesn't have to be a variant of "Public Toilet, Bathroom, etc" Try to think of titles that might grab the reader's attention or lines from the story that you enjoyed. Taking a quick look over the story again, maybe something like "The Note Slid Under the Door", "Come out Now", "The Flickering Light" You can link the stories (As you did in Spider Cannibals and the sequel Return to Pennsylvania to let readers know it is a series.


 * Speaking of that, I re-read Return to Pennsylvania. I had done some minor edits back in June (Removing coding, minor punctuation.) I enjoyed the character development (focusing on the protagonist and Anne's relationship with callbacks) and liked how the story built on the premise of the original (Including the fates of the teenagers from the original.). On a side note: here's a template you can add at the bottom of a story to link to the previous/next entry to help ensure readers are going chronologically:


 * So on Spider Cannibals, you would put this: Hope that helps out a bit, let me know if I can help in any other way. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:48, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Notice
Sorry to have to inform you of this, but The Bund is a re-telling of the urban legend Birthmark (Which is already featured on this site.) Unfortunately we try to avoid having re-tellings or urban legends as they tend to accumulate. (We have a similar occurrence happen time-to-time with Licking and The Statue.) As such the page has been deleted. If you'd like a copy of your story, I can provide one for you. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:55, April 7, 2015 (UTC)


 * Yeah, unfortunately every now-and-then we get a re-telling of a popular story that no matter how good its quality, we have to remove as it's already been posted and we try our best to avoid having duplicate/similarly plotted stories. They tend to accumulate and a few months ago, we had to delete four separate reiterations of Licking / Humans Can Lick Too posted by different users.


 * As for Ad Nauseam, Ad Mortem, Ad Infinitum; I originally had it in three separate sections, but users kept reading it out of order and commenting to that effect so I consolidated it into one page. As "Public Toilets" seems to be more of a collection of stories rather than a continuation of the plot, I think multiple pages linked in some way would be fine. You could consolidate them all on one page, but you may get the dreaded "TL;DR" comments (as a few novellas here have gotten). It's your choice in the matter, I have done it both ways and each way has its benefits and drawbacks. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:19, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Advice
The "M4R" category is an exclusive category, meaning it should be the only category for a story. (It is a method of quarantining stories until they can be fixed or it is determined they are not up to QS and don't bleed over into other categories/sections.) Please don't tag categories alongside "Marked For Review". In fact, when you put a story "M4R" it is helpful to either remove the currently tagged categories or put the categories in this template: If you feel like the story will likely be fixed and put back into circulation. Thanks for helping. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:52, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Categories
Please note that categories like beings, monsters, ghosts, gods, animals, cryptids, etc are standalone as an entity cannot be both classifications. here is the category rules for clarification. I would also suggest looking over the definitions as places is fairly specific. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 15:42, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

1st Place
I really liked your entry to my contest. You got 1st place.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:BrianBerta/2_Sentence_Creepypasta_Contest

Congratulations and keep up the good work.

BrianBerta (talk) 12:46, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Banned
You are being banned for one day for reuploading a deleted story. The contest guidelines stipulate that BrianBerta will be making a page for the winners as well as writing this on the main blog: "2) Post all of your stories in the comment section of this blog. DO NOT post your story anywhere else." Please read the rules and guidelines next time or ask if you have questions. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:47, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * No problem, the story is up by the way. Congratulations on taking first place. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:21, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re:
The story has been deleted, unfortunately I am just heading out the door for work so I don't have time to critique it.

As for it appearing in search engines, it will likely link to the deleted page when they search the title, but after a few days it'll stop linking to the creepy pasta wiki page. (As of now it has the link to your page, but when you click on it, it goes to another story.with a similar title) Best of luck in the competition. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 12:21, May 26, 2015 (UTC)


 * I'd like to say that the quality of creepy pastas have risen over time, but we still have some ways to go before I'd call us a 'respectable form of literature' (Emp adjusts his monocle). That being said, I believe any literary site with users such as Banning, Humboldt, IGBTG, and yourself must be doing something right. I'd say any reference/experience is better than trying to go in without any. I wouldn't have gotten that video game project without my affiliation with the site so there's my two cents. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:52, May 26, 2015 (UTC)


 * Yup, I talk about my side project a little here in Koromo and my contest blog (in the rewards section). It's an interesting opportunity and I really can't wait to see how the game turns out. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 11:41, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

RE: Review Request
Thanks for the compliments.

I will give your stories a read, although it may take some time. I estimate that next week I will have a review up on your first story and maybe your second one. But after that it's exam time for me and I'll probably be unable to give a proper review for some time. But I'll get to it eventually, don't worry about it. MrDupin (talk) 10:03, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the heads up
Yeah, I noticed that too. Since only an admin can delete the page or remove either of those two templates, it will simply have to remain that way unitl one of the admins addresses it.

Thanks for the heads up though!

Banningk1979 (talk) 17:26, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Dirty Talk
Now that I have your attention :P I was wondering how you changed the wording on your signature. I'd normally just hit the edit button and look at the coding, but I can't do that in this instance. Doom Vroom (talk) 17:48, May 28, 2015 (UTC)


 * Thanks! So, like this: Doom Vroom   I'm going to be popular  I'm curious though, how do I get my posted time to stay and is there a way to make it permanent so that I don't have to manually type it each time? Doom Vroom (talk) 17:57, May 28, 2015 (UTC)


 * Saw your other message, I understand now. Thank you :) Doom Vroom (talk) 17:59, May 28, 2015 (UTC)


 * I got it figured out, here it is: Buckle up   I'm going to be popular  18:09, May 28, 2015 (UTC)


 * Thanks. I'd put you on a stool so that you'd be high, but I wouldn't want to see a drunk cat fall off :P Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular!  18:15, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Rollbacks
Rollback is essentially a junior admin, I guess that's the easiest way to put it. We can rename pages, remove previous edits, hence the name Rollback, and we also get these awesome neon green user names...lol. Typically when the admins are looking for their next candidates to promote to admin, they look through the rollbacks first, since we have experience with more complex editing and such.

The Showcase Mod is just an additional duty I volunteered for. It allows me to move or delete entries into the Writer's Showcase that don't meet the guidelines for being theer.

If you're interested down the line in getting user rights, such as rollback, check out this page, as it will give you an idea of the expectations. Promotion Guidelines

If you have any other questions, feel free to reach out.

Banningk1979 (talk) 18:24, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * By the way, I've just updated that guidelines page slightly, with regards to how RfAs are submitted, so you may want to check that again. Additionally, you should take a look at the requirements for each right. 18:32, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * All of our administrators are (currently) conforming to our inactivity guidelines - they have notified us of their absence and have good reasons for being inactive. We have, quite recently, had to have a discussion between ourselves about admin inactivity, which resulted in one admin temporarily stepping down, and another being demoted. This was after around 4 months of inactivity.


 * Rollbackers don't have to be as active as admins, but if they're going to not be on for more than a couple of weeks, it's generally preferable that they let us know first. We will always contact staff in advance before a demotion takes place, and even if they fail to become active after that, we will only demote after great consideration.


 * All work on the wiki is volountary, and rollbackers shouldn't be worrying about having their rights removed, as long as they let us know before going inactive for long periods and do good quality edits when they are available to do so.


 * 20:42, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re:Sig Colors
Geniuses think alike. I went with purple because I liked it and then I figured yellow would go good with purple (I nearly went with red, but I didn't want to be mistaken for an admin). Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular!  18:45, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, thank you! Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular!  19:04, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * Lookin' fancy! EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:28, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Colors
Yeah, it's for classification purposes, so that newer users can easily identify members of staff if they should have questions or concerns.

Admins have orange names and B'crats have red. Just keeps things running smoothly.

Banningk1979 (talk) 21:55, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

re
Thank you :) I have been wondering how to get that right, and now I know :D

Hope you have a marvelous day and, thank you for your writing it is awesome.

AzChe (talk) 06:35, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Sig
I'm currently at work, but I would check your signature page and see if you left those tildes there and it's just being added at the bottom each time. As I never really sat down and worked out signatures, I'm not to sure. You can ask Underscorre who has a fancy sig like yours. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:33, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re: A Query about a pasta
The intentioned meaning I had of the story was the mother's killer being the entity in the forest. When the boy skidded off the rock in the forest. And the note being written by the entity as well.

I don't remember a baseball being part of that pasta...

« So Pre te nt  io us » 21:47, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

No problem
I'll check it out today and give you some feedback.

Banningk1979 (talk) 19:02, June 2, 2015 (UTC)

For sequels
The best way to plot link sequels in my opinion is to find that good, soft ending for each installment. No really a cliffhanger so much as a soft ending, something that will give the readers a satisfying story, a good tie up ending but something that still leaves the reader really thristy for the next installment.

Banningk1979 (talk) 03:54, June 3, 2015 (UTC)

Well, if the twist is his wife has a knife or something..
.. in her hand then I got it. Is there something I'm missing? (love the picture of the cat with the Jameson bottle btw) HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 18:14, June 3, 2015 (UTC)

Yup, I got it
HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 21:41, June 3, 2015 (UTC)

Why thank you so much, I really appreciate that. :)  HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 21:56, June 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blog
Hey, it looks like you've broken your blog... Try going to Special:CreateBlogPage and seeing if you can create a new blog post to add to it, to see if it appears.

For future reference, you don't edit your blog listing directly, you go to the second link and create a blog through that.

18:05, June 8, 2015 (UTC)

Mo money, mo problems
I believe I don't need winners to have a bank account/paypal account. I think I am able to send it to people as long as they have an email. We'll see, but if there are issues, we can work them out as we come to them. The judging hasn't started yet so I can't say how your entry is fairing. Semicolon closing parenthesis EmpyrealInvective (talk) 18:16, June 9, 2015 (UTC)

Don't Worry
I haven't forgotten about your stories. It is just that I received a ton of review requests over the past week, and I wanted to read your stories one after the other. I'm pretty sure I will be able to review the first two in the weekend. MrDupin (talk) 21:26, June 11, 2015 (UTC)


 * I've posted my review on your first story. The review of the second story might take a while though. I'll try to get to it during the week, but I'm not sure I'll have the time. MrDupin (talk) 17:42, June 13, 2015 (UTC)


 * I'm not sure, handling a main character's death in first person is tricky. I think it may have worked if the last 'journal' part was written by someone else, recounting what happened during that time, like a report of sorts. MrDupin (talk) 14:13, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Hullo
Yeah, I just don't think it has much of a scare factor or much of a punch, to be honest. A second opinion should clear it up and maybe see something I don't see. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 21:01, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

I knew what the punch was, but I'm not quite sure if it was delivered quite well enough in the short pasta form. Also, I don't think it is an incredibly effective punch. Could just be me. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 21:15, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

Story deletion Your story has been deleted because it doesn't meet the wiki's quality standards. If you feel that it did meet the standards, please state your case on Deletion Appeal. Make sure you follow the instructions to the letter there, or your appeal will be automatically denied.

'''DO NOT ATTEMPT TO REUPLOAD YOUR PASTA. If you upload it again, you'll receive a 1-day ban from editing, as per the rules.'''

Read the Deletion FAQ for details on the 'what' and 'why' of the deletions we make.

Read this guide and these blog posts for further details on how you can improve your story/stories to make them meet our quality standards.

For additional help, submit your story to the Writer's Workshop for feedback.

21:16, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

RE: Signature
I'm not sure why it happens, I always assumed it was because people left their name after the four tildes (so they signed like  or  ) instead of just typing four tildes (like  ). That's the only real reason I can think of that it might happen. Sorry I can't be of more help. (By the way, if it is this that's causing it, just don't leave your name after the four tildes, they work fine without it)

06:06, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Editing
Just thought I would help you out, since you edit a lot. When you see a page with coding errors, open the editing window in a new tab, highlight the story from the non-editing tab, copy and paste it into the editing tab. Then go back to the non-editing tab, and click "edit" (yes, opening two editing tabs at the same time) and search the editing tab with the coding errors for headers, italics, or bold by using ctrl+f. Then add the headers, italics, and bold the same way they appear in the editing tab with coding errors. Also, if there's any pictures on the page, that would be the time to copy and paste them over to the editing tab without coding errors. That should save you some time, if you're ever fixing coding errors.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   20:01, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Title should be fine
Once a story is deleted that title becomes fair game again, so you shouldn't have any issues with that. If the wiki didn't reject the story when you published it, that means that title was vacant and it allowed you to create the page.

I will check out your story tonight and have some feedback for you soon,

Best,

Banningk1979 (talk) 23:25, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Promoting
I usually share my stories on Twitter and Facebook once I finish them, which helps to get a lot of exposure from people off of the CP Wiki community. I also post a blog whenever I write a new story with a link to try and get everyone to read them, and I send out talk page messages to people that usually review my work.

That's the way I go about promoting, and it works for me pretty well, so maybe you can try out those suggestions.

Best,

Banningk1979 (talk) 17:40, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Edits
Hey, just wanted to give you some tips on editing. I noticed you removed the sort template from a couple stories, but those should be left for alphabetical categorization purposes (I fixed them). Also be sure that what you're fixing is an actual mistake and not just changing things to a way you think sounds better. Grammar/punctuation/spelling are things to look for, but if a phrase is really awkward or doesn't make sense, then you can fix it so it's understandable. Another thing is when fixing spelling, make sure you're not switching regional spellings like "harbor" to "harbour" (unless there is a consistency issue). "Harbor" is correct in American English, and we allow for these differences, so it's really up to the author. We really appreciate your editing, but let's just make sure we only change things that are necessary. Thanks. Keep up the good work.

Jay Ten (talk) 19:57, July 2, 2015 (UTC)


 * Well those times the sort template disappeared could have been a glitch, as I've seen strange things happen from time to time, like someone edits a story and somehow all the line spacing disappears. I would suggest switching to our source mode editor to avoid certain issues.  To switch your editor, you can either click the tab at the top that says source when you're in editing mode, or you can go into your preferences and change your editor to source, which is really best.  As for what SP was talking about, he's referring to removing code from stories.  It's a little difficult to explain, but if you copy the story before you open it up in the editor you can paste that copy after removing the coded version and the code will be removed, if there was any, but it also removes all bold and italics, so it can be a pain.  You don't have to worry about messing with this if you don't want to, as it can be a bit confusing.  Removing it manually is fine, but he was just telling you a quicker/easier way.  Hope that helps.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 20:30, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Message on Jay ten's talk page
That would be a great idea, I have mentioned it on the forum before (everything there is the same as the message I sent you). The only thing about gathering all the info on editing coding is that that's the only thing you would really need to know about it. It might fit really well on a page that detailed a lot of different kind of technical editing stuff, though, I will try to put something like that together (although right now, that's the single thing I can think about that would fit there).

And "editing coding" is when there's a story that has something like  then there's usually a lot of errors like that splattered all over the editing page. If you're using "visual editor" on the editing tab of your preferences then I'm pretty sure you won't see those while editing. Let me know if you are wondering anything on the subject.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   07:17, July 3, 2015 (UTC)


 * I think that would fit great on a new page (on the forum or a blog) that includes information about templates that new users might not be aware of. I'll get started on that. If you have any suggestions once it is up (today or tomorrow most likely) feel free to send me a message.


 * Yes, but that can take a long time, removing each line of coding individually. Opening two windows at once (one with the coding errors and the other without, after highlighting the text from the reading page.) will allow you to find the italic sections, bold sections, headers, and pictures. Because after you highlight the story and copy-paste into the editing window, you'll lose those. Hopefully that makes sense.


 *  Inside there is thunder in your heart   15:24, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

RE:
I did. Maybe it was too complicated for me. Anyways, I haven't read any books of Stephen King. I'm into Dan Brown and Rick Riordan right now.

Check the forum too. You'll see a thread about a new project.

 Ruckus Q uantum   17:25, July 3, 2015 (UTC)


 * Well, booka here are pretty expensive, you know? And I don't have enough money to buy. Dan Brown's books are awesome, literally. Their full of conspiracies and thrills. Have you heard anything about "The Da Vinci Code"? I really recommened that.


 *  Ruckus Q uantum   18:26, July 3, 2015 (UTC)


 * The book is better than the movie, trust me. And let me spoil a bit, only a little bit: Someone dead is actually alive.


 *  Ruckus Q uantum   18:35, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re:Cat sort
It's for sorting stories that start with "The", "A", or "An". They go into the category listings under the second word of the title. On other wikis, you might need to use instead or create a sort template by creating a page titled "Template:Sort".

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   18:08, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Pictures
Please refrain from adding pictures to stories that aren't yours as some authors may not want photos included with their stories (or they may have a different idea for what the accompanying picture should look like.). You can message an author if you really feel like a picture works for a story. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 18:16, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Edit
Per this edit, make sure to add a space on each side of hyphens (-) unless the words are closely tied together, like low-budget for example. There's also the em-dash (—) for when you really want to go big.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   18:18, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Ellipses Query
There are sites that say there should be a space before and after the ellipses, and before the fourth ellipses if there is one. Also, there's sites that say a space should be used after each dot, weirdly (although I've seen that in books). The standard that I have seen on this site is three dots and then a space, or four dots and then a space. Generally, the ellipses should be avoided unless for omitting parts of a quote, or pauses in dialogue. A comma will serve the right purpose in most cases.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   18:34, July 3, 2015 (UTC)


 * Two periods is incorrect. Forgot to mention that.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   18:36, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Cat
Yeah, I'll give it a read :) Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular!  04:31, July 4, 2015 (UTC)


 * I'd thought about the possibility of the guy having been in the house the whole time, but figured you just meant the catbot was doing it. After looking over the last few lines again, I see that you were going for the guy being in the house. He'd had the catbot let him in. I was admittedly pretty tired when I read it, it was so close to bedtime. Didn't stop it from being one of my favorites though. The robot angle made it creepy for me. Although, I usually find myself chilled more when a protagonist ends up escaping danger by a thread and comes to realize what they had avoided. Yeah, be sure to tell me when you make another story. Great work :) Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular!  18:49, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re: NSFW
The story was not really NSFW. Stories that qualify for NSFW typically have sexual content, extremely graphic descriptions, or handles very mature themes. I removed that category. As for the overall quality of the story, while not the best, it managed to squeak by our QS. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 15:37, July 5, 2015 (UTC)

Congratulations!
Congrats put a message on my talk page and we'll try to set up a way to talk via Skype or email so you can receive your reward. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 18:38, July 5, 2015 (UTC)

Definition of NSFW
I personally think the definition of NSFW applies if you go into concrete details of what's going on. I mean, if you say it vaguely and without going into details it doesn't necessarily mean it's Not Safe for Work.

It's all in the level of detail. --&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 19:28, July 5, 2015 (UTC)

RE: Konichiwa
If I can find the thread, I'll link it to you. By now it's probably been buried under pretty much everything else in the world. Senjumaru Shutara 19:30, July 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re: PotM
I think it has a good shot if everyone actually reads it. I'm tired of seeing the same stuff nominated month after month, it's time for something new to have its chance in the spotlight and I believe that your story deserves it :) It was original and creepy. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular!  21:02, July 5, 2015 (UTC)

Hiding Categories
You go to Edit, and you write this at the bottom of the page:

Where Category1, Category2, Category3 you put the name of the categories the page is listed in.

Then, you remove all the categories from the page. If you don't know how to do that, ask and I'll explain.

Hope this helped.

MrDupin (talk) 15:06, July 7, 2015 (UTC)


 * <-Those little thingies are html comment tags. Anything that you write between them won't be displayed on the page.


 * So, by writing the categories inside those tags, they won't be displayed in the page. We put them there so that whoever lifts the M4R can see in what categories the page belonged to before the M4R.


 * They really do nothing more. That's why you also have to remove the categories manually. Does that make sense? MrDupin (talk) 19:25, July 7, 2015 (UTC)


 * In the Source Editor, on the right there is a little panel that reads "Categories". Inside you will find all the categories of the pasta. Hover over a category and next to the name, there will appear a small bin icon. You click that and the category is gone. MrDupin (talk) 20:34, July 7, 2015 (UTC)


 * No problem. If you have anything else to ask, don't hesitate. Have a good one. MrDupin (talk) 21:02, July 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re:
Looking good, you'll have to walk me through that one of these days with your user page. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:35, July 7, 2015 (UTC)


 * On a side note, we actually allow non-English stories on the site (see AltLang category) as long as they are up to QS and don't violate a site rule. (As that one did.) EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:39, July 7, 2015 (UTC)


 * Our admin team is even more amazing than you previously thought! A couple of us speak Spanish, Greek, and a few other languages. If it is written in a lesser known language (as we've done on the AltLang stories) we do our best to google translate and then fix up lost in translation errors. Not the prettiest system, but there are a few stories that aren't in English that are good. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:15, July 7, 2015 (UTC)


 * The altlang category is pretty barren as there are a number of sites that host Spanish, Japanese, Dutch, etc stories where users typically post as they have a larger audience there. I frequent the Spanish CP from time to time myself. If we get a story written in Chinese, I may enlist your help as google translate is shoddy and fixing up the translation itself after translating it is a bit of work. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:33, July 7, 2015 (UTC)

RE:
Haha, nice. The only thing that makes me laugh more than that song is the comments section on it. People get so protective over fictional characters, lol.

19:36, July 7, 2015 (UTC)

Adding M4R
Take the categories off the stories that are marked for review (or if you add the category), or add them between brackets (at the bottom of the page) that look like this:. This is because stories that are marked for review are isolated from the other stories while under review.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   15:06, July 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * Don't worry about it, and you might want to archive your talk page, let me know if you need help with that.

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 * Create a page titled "User talk:Rinskuro13/Archive 1", then copy-paste everything on this talk page to that one and blank this page. Then make a link to the new page and put it on this page. The table of contents will disappear until you get like 4 messages.

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