Talk:Abandoned Servers/@comment-24803880-20140412114508

I'll admit, I'm impressed. This is definitely original, and you even got ME nervous throughout the first part. I like how you exploited the general outlandish and unnerving nature of an empty server on populated games. I also know that strange nervousness one gets when wondering through areas that you would normally be busy mingling with others alone in a videogame, and it's surprisingly creepy for such a minute difference. However, like others in the comments have stated, while the beginning was quite wonderfully written, the end severely lacked. It seemed like an attempt at a shock ending of some sorts, but it just didn't work, it's quite unfortunate, truly. It is a blemish on an otherwise decent story. 7/10 abandoned servers.