Talk:Rora/@comment-27007772-20150222172823

The concept was a good idea. You took the classic story most know from Disney and made it into a Creepypasta, without any major fallacies. The writing style was pretty much professional as far as the internet goes, and I couldn't find any major typos that broke the story completely. I wasn't awfully creeped out by the end, but it was a fascinating ride.