Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26537256-20160716142055/@comment-24101790-20160717083030

Cappka wrote: No, I just don't think you get it since you never finished it. I'm just pointing out a section that might help you understand.

Seems odd that three separate people would misread this story (Me, Jay, and Christian), but it's still an audience issue rather that an issue with the story itself. I think this should tell you something (and it's not that your David Lynching us with an involving story and rather that you're not doing a good job at explaining/building your story.)