Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25253035-20140821065641/@comment-25037895-20140821074555

Overall I think the storyline is technically cliché.

Justifying murder by making the main character seem like a "nice guy" done wrong. He is extremely victimized by society or "god."

The ending did not particularly pique my interest either, I would say there's a lot of work to be done on this story.