User blog comment:Underscorre/Jeff the Killer Rewrite Contest!/@comment-25547916-20151007014246/@comment-6554265-20151007211112

Also forgot to mention that I love how the bullies are actually reasonable and realistic. If anyone else, especially the original author, was writing this, their reactions to Jeff's obvious mental decay is "Haha, look at that freak!" or something unrealistically cruel like that, but you manage to construct a reaction that actually gives them much more depth.