Talk:The Snatchers

Seriously? 1/10
Best thing to tell you, that you should work on is listed below


 * Suspense: It's completely dead, try developing a situation first then lead it to foreshadowing then execute the suspense to scare your readers...which you failed at it to be honest


 * Grammer: You got some grammer issues on the first paragraph, you need to get that fixed.

--Dan67 (Talk) 17:31, April 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * Monster: the snatchers doesn't sound at all creepy nor life threatening rather you perceive them as the "good guys" and I thought slendytubbies was awful then this.