Talk:FELINE/@comment-31073921-20170520145651

Amazing. Really, this is one of my favorites. I'm going to go through everything about it on my scale.

SCARE - 8/10 Not many stories make you actually concerned for the people in it, but this truly did do it. I wanted the cat to kill the beast, and was scared when its ribs broke. Though I wasn't shaking with anxiety, the horror was very prominent.

Style - 11/10 The style really takes the cake here. It is just perfect, from the cat's perspective, and the ideas on how the aliens final form is weaker. I absolutely LOVED this part of it.

Pace - 4/5 There's really not much to say here except that it was paced well, but could have more with the cat and all. My only other ask is if you could do more with the crew, but still fantastically paced.

Writing - 13/15 Very well written, the descriptions or lack of them were timed well and great. I was a little confused with F.E.L.I.N.E. but really that didn't impact my total thought on it.

Twist - 5/5 The 'Twist' would most likely be it is "Alien" and from the cat's perspective. Done well, and if you don't include that then it was still very good.

Overall - 5/5 Very good story, my only ask is that it would be longer or have a sequel (Really please make a sequel).

TOTAL: 46/45, a "Legendary" story.

Keep up the good work, really. Because this was fantastic. Keep on writing!