Talk:The Pale Creature/@comment-10502460-20190521033025

Normally reviews aren't my thing, but since the author requested a review of this, here goes:

I'm not a big fan of the "childhood fear of the dark manifested as an actual being" trope, but as far as such stories go, this one is pretty decent. This story is pretty basic and fairly underwhelming, but it does show that you have a talent for writing and great potential to produce high-quality stories.