Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26519347-20150621221720/@comment-25037895-20150621224418

Capitalization issues: "i" should be capitalized when alone. "Cabin Leaders" should not be capitalized. "Cabins" should not be capitalized.

Spacing issues: A new paragraph should be started for different speakers. Examples:
 * "Ty! Where are the kids??? You don't think.." Tanner panicked. "Nah, they cant be that stupid" Ty said calmly
 * "Hey dude, we should do that on Friday." "Yeah".

Punctuation issues: Dialogue should have a comma before the quotation and at the end. Examples:
 * "Nah, they cant be that stupid" Ty said calmly
 * Every kid screamed "Annie! Annie! Annie! Where are you!?",
 * All he could mutter before he croaked was "She has moved to the new Cabin".
 * "One night, they were doing role call and the cabin leader yelled out "Abbie? Here. Josh? Here. Annie?" (Different speakers need separate quotations and new paragraphs)

Question marks should not be followed by commas in quotations:
 * "Annie! Annie! Annie! Where are you!?",
 * ANNIE! WHERE ARE YOU!?",

Spelling issues/punctuation missing from contractions: (iv, I've), (Cabins, cabin's), (cant, can't).