Talk:What Does the Dinosaur Say?/@comment-24281984-20141218180505/@comment-5629281-20150525090049

Thank you for the critique and the editing, and sorry for not getting back to you sooner. I have to admit that this is my first creepypasta and I didn't expect such a postive review. I will go back and edit based on your suggestions. Thank you again, and if you have the time, please feel free to read my second story: An Occurrence in the Rhine Forest.