Talk:Periodic Nyctophobia/@comment-29507836-20161013071611

Very nice! It had me on the edge of my seat, as I was waiting for what I thought was going to be a plot twist. I guess, sometimes, having no plot twist is the best plot twist of all.

The story was very descriptive and had a very nice essence of fear to it. The scare factor is high, and the character development is so good for such a short story. The suspense is real in this story, and I also love the originality. The plot is so simple, too, and yet it surprises me that it was so perfectly executed that it didn't even seem simple. Kudos!

One flaw I see in this, however, is the fact that the incident had just the perfect situation; candle with no lighter, no flashlight, waking up late at night, all during a power outage. It seems so unreal. Other than that, I see nothing else that is wrong with this story.

All in all, I rate this story a good 8.5/10.