Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34853659-20180913215844/@comment-9041013-20180914175659

I am sorry but I have to agree with NedWolfkin.

I am so so sorry, but the police make no sense, the demon thing is just too big, the ritual is well, silly.

If you want it to work, go for a less dramatic monster, make it smaller, get more realistic cops and instead of having it grow when shot - make it pissed off... now when fire arms don't work, go for an occult solution the likes of John Constantine that does some crazy macabre ritual to banish it to hell or kill it, or even worse, trap it inside a person, like the Hunger Demon, Mnemeth.