Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20170212184930/@comment-31288135-20170214022732

First off, creepypastas are, at their heart, set in this world. Randomly throwing in fictitious elements that the story would do much better without simply detracts from the realism.

Next, the reason I brought up the name was because the part about the devil with the hat was used as a title when it had borderline no relevance to the actual story and felt kind of clunky. It's like if Smile Dog was named "Photograph of Evil Dog". It simply doesn't fit as well.

There's a difference between having your brain violently and forcibly scooped out versus being born with extreme brain abnormalities, and there's also the issue of his victim bleeding between the time where our antagonist takes the victim from the street to where he kills his victim.

First off, even if he kills with a purpose and rarely kills, the way he kills is still highly risky for him to get caught. Second, we DO know why Ted Bundy killed people: sexual pleasure.

Finally, if you're trying to write a creepypasta and you're NOT trying to make it scary, you've already failed.