Talk:Insanity/@comment-26936411-20150910121955

This didn't exactly have any gore, sure it mentions a couple things and cuts out a tongue but that's it. Gore isn't stabs or the long story short of what occurs! You need to think over, ponder about every organ and how they react to certain methods of torture. Also I personally feel more plot is needed. Plot and Gore mix in surprisingly well if you cover the right points. Over all this needs more effort and thought put into it... It may seem like it won't be worth it but some people will notice and admire you far more for putting the time into it! I see so much potential, even the greatest writers have their bad days. 4/10