Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24962525-20140522051052

"Don't do bad things kids or she will come for you"

1998, November 2nd the day that the man had been stabbed to death and dragged away. The file was that the man was 24 years old and had committed rape. When the police broke into his home they found nothing but a black liquid on the floor and the man was no where to be found.

2001, April 23rd the man who killed 5 people with poison gas was tracked down in a forest called Black Woods. What police saw was disgusting the men had been hung, stabbed, and his heart, liver, lungs, and all kinds of human body have been removed and police found his heart..... but it was half eaten heart. The police have not found the person who did it.

2004, October 11. Three local high school football players were beating up freshman students to death. No one knew where they were. One day a senior student went into a bathroom and ran away as fast as he could and called the police. The police rushed to the bathroom and saw football players been stabbed..... but the blood wasn't normal. It was it was replaced with black liquid. The police took a sample of the liquid but it was unknown in the lab. They couldn't figure out what was in it nor who did it.

One day a survivor and detective is in the room talking about The murderer that murder bad people case.

This story is not finish I had full story but it auto logs me off and lost everything so I have to redo it let me know if you like little beta story someone is helping me with the story so yeah. 