Talk:The Journal of Carter Pormon/@comment-24474339-20141014132138

While i must say, this is a great pasta, but it seems like their could have been more than just the average pasta ending like, "i killed it, but there it is, not dead" maybe he could have actually been insane the entire time instead. The development is great, keep that up, and, overall, i have to give this a solid 8/10. Nice job.