Talk:The Gristers/@comment-27628405-20160213195239

4/10. Some parts were amazing, yet most were horribly executed. I feel that the cat's murder was there for shock, the people found in the building were also used for shock. Not to mention the story feels like an ad to stop people from reading creepypasta. I will give you some credit though, it is an amazing original idea, and the grister species seems like it could be a type of tulpa, or self induced hallucination. Overall, I feel the story was more contrived than it could have been with the animal violence and John's death, but it is an original idea, and a must read for anyone starting on creepypasta