Talk:Tempest/@comment-5306249-20200221033632

As per your explanation: ‘realistic’ stories are not usually my thing. But I do appreciate the effort into making starkness of reality mix with dreamlike struggles to create a story with turbulent progression. However a few things bumped the experience which left me feeling slightly robbed, in particular knowing after the fact that everything was hallucinated, particularly the avatar of Death. While not inherently undoable, the sequence of bad dreams is something I’ve come to identify as predictable, so the scare effect wasn’t as impactful. That being said there are some aspects I identified with, which I feel ambivalent on.. For the troubled and lonely, this story will leave its dark mark.

Style: 4/5 Horror: 2/5 Entertainment: 3/5 Theme: 4/5

Total: 13/20