Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20190526125216

Well I think Scribens and Grammarly will never tellme its okay same if I corrected my mistake because they told me different things and its difficult same if I traduct in my own language heres my story hope someone will try to help or say its a bit good.

My name is Sebastian my story is not out of the ordinary, you see I was the kind of guy who was really shy and I never have a lot of friends since some people bully me. I was more like the reject of the group nobody wanted to be around me and one day I meet this girl Natasha she was the only one who came to talk with me Hi she says Hi I replied back I was feeling my heart beat fast.

Natacha look at me with a beautiful smile and tell me I organize a party for the fourth of July and I want you to be there as my date, I Can't believe that she invited me I was overjoy and replied Of course, I will be there and she left as I walked home I was really happy that she invite me still in my gaze I forgot that I should cll my mother about fundraiser.

When my mother came home, she scolded me about it I am sorry mom I was somewhere else, My mother look at me and says You should be sorry, that was important and you forgot it because you still dreaming,  Aww come on he say he was sorry give him a chance to explain.

I talk to my parents about the party of the 4th of July they didn't want me to go, but I insist to go and they accept so I Going to my room to change for bed still excited for the big day. The 4th of July finally arrive I put my casual clothes on with my hat as my parents gave me a ride to Natasha's house I hugged my parents and join the party.''Good look who finally show up. Say Natasha as someone says.Ready for the party , I nods because everyone was ready for this party as everyone was drinking dancing and laughing I heard some people talking about me I can't believe that clown  says Tyler as his friends Malcolm and Felix says Yeah why she invited him .

Hey guys. I says walking toward them they then whisper something I think we will have some fun guys says Tyler as I approach Hi I says to the boys Felix then tell me with a smile Well we were speaking if you're interested to come to the woods with us and Natasha for installed some firecrackers, Of course,'' I replied because people love firecrackers when it explode and watch all the colors in the sky.

Later Natasha,me, Tyler and his friends are gone into the woods for put the firecracker in there, I was a bit Anxious about it and says Hey guys, where should we put it to light it up that's where Tyler decide to hold one face to me and says Well were going to use them with you as he smile, I tried to escape and scream Nooooo Please as the other grabbed me I still try to scream and try to kick them, but they hold me tight and put the firecrackers around as they run the firecrakers exploded.

When I woke up and gets up I was feeling that me flesh burnt and that I wasn't the same anymore like the air was cold and can't even feel anything, that's where i see someone on the ground thinking he might need help Hey are you okay' I says to the boy as a came to him then I froze realizing that it was me on the ground like I was sleeping and not moving.

I was shock then I remember everything that the gang did, I was so angry They will pay  I says with an evil smirk on my face thinking of my revenge. One year later the 4th of July came some footsteps is heard in the dead leafs it was Tyler and his friends, one year I did wait for them to come back as they put some firecrackers I then hide and break a branch, Did you hear that says Felix to his friends, Its probably some animals says Tyler the others think that he might be right.

But then I walk to them Well Well look who's there I says with a cold glare and smile, the boys see me and back up That's not possible you're dead says Tyler in fear, Because of you and now youy will pay for this I says taking a firecracker lighting it with my bare hand , Wait it was just a joke we didn't meant to do it we are sorry please let us go says Felix afraid I shook my head and says Its too late for that now its you're turn to feel the fire of this' I says as the firecrackers is unleashed all I heard was the three boys screaming in pain as they burn 