Talk:Call of Charon/@comment-24434528-20171030040332

…Is this pasta SUPPOSED to be bad? If it is, I would feel awkward about fixing all the atrocious grammar, as that would make it seem like effort was put into making it good. Ending a story with "the story ends here", in particular, makes me wonder if this was supposed to be bad, as you don't end stories like that if you have even an ounce of self-respect as a writer. What really baffles me is all the comments saying this is good; the only semi-valid reason I can see being cited is that it isn't about Lavender Town, which honestly isn't noteworthy anymore, people moved away from that a long time ago. Or is this pasta super-old? If it's old, that makes everything forgivable, I suppose…In any case, good if this was the first thing the author ever wrote, and I hope they learned from their mistakes.