Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26268104-20170624213913/@comment-29417957-20170626031351

I admire your storytelling skills, and there were only a grammar mistakes, but in my opinion, I don't think this qualifies as a creepypasta. The story does not really have a "horror" feel to it. It feels like an action-filled, post-apacolyptic novel rather than a creepypasta.

The story plot feels awkward and out of place for a creeepypasta, as it's simply about a guy trying to join a town and kill enemies in the process.

The ending is ok, but you need to go into detail. How did the protagonist start the nuclear winter? What happened? What caused him to release the nuclear missles.

However, I am not an administrator, and the administrators here may have a different opinion, but I hope this helps.