Talk:I Want to Show You My Song before I Kill Myself/@comment-33904527-20190113135922

This is just kind of lazy. It's riddled with clichés, and the writing is often bland and repetitive throughout the paragraphs.

There's barely any attempt at a narrative, explanation, or even any kind of detail. It's just a bunch of spooky happenings sewn together into some kind of strange lost tape story.

The characters aren't developed in any way, so I don't feel sad or creeped out when Jared dies. Maybe next time try to flesh them out more.

So, yeah, this is more of a jokepasta than anything else.