Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31532017-20170215123526/@comment-24101790-20170216034119

No problem, best of luck. It does seem odd that after seeing her like that and it having that much of an impact that they'd still be carrying on normal conversation. "“I shouldn't be doing this Thalia,” said Dwayne as he moved his hand, right over hers.". “Yes, but,” Dwayne sighed before continuing, “it's complicated.”". Just saying that seeing someone's rotting/mutilated face in a mirror enough to precipitate a freak-out could use some focus on why he's behaving that way after the fact.