Talk:Butterfly/@comment-25026735-20140906190410

This was well-written. It wasn't overly long. With a little more fleshing out of the main characters and the addition of one or two more, this would make a great movie for the Lifetime Network. That isn't a knock, because suspense/thriller writing is just as hard to do as scare the %*#\ writing is. I like my scary pasta to make me not to want to go someplace in the dark, and I'm over fifty years old. I want my pasta to make me think, "that could never happen...or could it?". I'll look for more of your work. Keep goin'...