Talk:He Waited For/@comment-11545155-20160828125625/@comment-31077845-20170211023057

I hope you know reacting immaturely to criticism does absolutely nothing but turn people against you and your work.

And you seem to be confused here as to what causes people to have "fun". Reading stories that are all over the place is not "fun". It is confusing and boring. That's kind of the basics of literature and what separates good writing from bad writing, "bad" here meaning "people don't like to read it" and...I...well, I doubt someone like you would ever have experienced this to know what it's like, but it's like trying to explain a basic social concept to someone with autism.

I agree with Mrepic, and judging by both your writing style and your responses you sound like you're probably fairly young, so maybe just give it a few years and you'll look back on all this and realize why it's no good.