Talk:Noah's Mill/@comment-25052433-20150503020140

This was a really cool story. I fixed some of the spacing issues, which should make it a little easier to read. It's important to skip some lines here and there, especially with dialogue. Other than that though, this was well written and full of English charm. I found it to be a bit dry, but that added to the element of English writing that I enjoy from time to time.

This was a very clever and mature story, which is a rare find around here sometimes. You relied much more on descriptive plot development then the traditional jump scares and gore, which made this a breath of fresh air.

Excellent work, keep writing!