Talk:The Underdark/@comment-25052433-20150807001158

This was an amazing read. Perfectly written and executed, with an amazing blend of terror and wonder. The story was scary but it still lead the reader down the path of wanting to learn more. I really found no major errors in the writing. Of course, you used my dreaded "vomitting" trope that I hate, but given this circumstances of being under the ocean, perhaps he didn't just vomit from fear, but from conditions as a whole.

Either way, this was an excellent story. Please keep writing.