User blog comment:Banningk1979/Writing Advice for the Solid Writer/@comment-26373253-20150512002626/@comment-26326346-20150512044847

If you are open to advice/recommendations from anyone then what sort of situation is your character in? Or rather, how and where does he/she die? You can message it to me on my talk page if you want to avoid spoiling people here.

You might be able to switch it to where someone sees your main character die through a security camera or you might switch to first person for who or what killed him. That's something I regularly did back when I wrote in first person.