Talk:Van's Nightmare/@comment-5269370-20150820192924/@comment-4849011-20150823030946

Thanks! I appreciate your feedback, both the positive and the, well, not really negative, but not as positive.

I can understand your criticism. Sometimes reading my pastas can be a little frustrating because I often have scenes that are parts of larger narratives- narratives that are largely unwritten (If you haven't read it yet, "Dawn's Notebooks" is an example). I'm glad you and some other readers care enough to want more details. I don't want to be like those people who make movies which set themselves up for sequels, only to have audiences say, "Nobody cares! Boo!" As for Daniel, I have some good news. I have an idea for a story in which some of Daniel's past just prior to his rescue is revealed, and hopefully it'll explain some things and be chilling.

Thank you for the compliments about my descriptions and the series in general. :-D I'm glad you liked "Kumiho" and found yourself looking at the character in a new way. That's part of what I wanted to do- take this tough, at times arrogant, character and show him being vulnerable and reflective as he gets his life back together. Also, thank you for correcting the typos you found in "The Houseguest" and "The Binding Mask". I try to proofread, but I'm only human. I'll let you know when I have new stories in the series.