Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25519076-20141012224518/@comment-24675373-20141016204945

Having his name repeated over and over is a little much, imo. Pronouns arent scary =]

I agree with earlier comments, nothing really happens. What was the blurry figure? Why did his music cut out? Who left the post it note and why? Try answering those within the story over starting from scratch