Talk:Lies in Static/@comment-25052433-20150312235510

This story has a strong foundation of potential, but I found several plot holes that, if addressed, would dramatically improve this tale over all.

-The main character's actions seem a bit outlanding. His friend invited him over, his friend who the main character already knows is a bit of drunk, yet the main character resorts to breaking and entering just to find out. A little more filler would have made that all more believable. It just isn't realistic that someone would go over for a casual get together, and then resort to climbing in through the windows just because the guy didn't answer the door.

-This would have worked better in 3rd person than first. Since the main character falls victim to the trance at the end, how did he write the story?

-More explaination would be nice concerning the actual event. What lies behind the static, and what happens to the people that vanish.