Talk:From Flesh to Stone/@comment-25052433-20150812234541

The biggest issues I had with this one have really been addressed already. Over done introductions, artificial dialogue and a rushed ending.

The premise here isn't bad at all, and I think that, had you taken more time and fleshed things out, this could have been a much better story.

Still, it's far from the worst that I've seen around here, so this is still something to take pride in.

Keep writing!