Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31682668-20180520202220

( since the consensus was three ill do a draft of that ) ( feel free to do a typo easter egg hunt )

draft one:

(( ending))

Alyssa sighed, " And then i lost my arm." You and Grace stared for a few minutes at alyssas prostetic hand. There was a extremely awkward silence inbetween. finally, Alyssa spoke up: " It isnt going to happen again." i got out the pond and ran away as fast as i could. youd think that the horse wouldve caught up and killed me on the spot, but, nope. it just, walked back into the pond. " You spoke up: " do you think it will  come back?" Alyssa took of her riding helmet. clearly she was annoyed by having to continue this extremely unpleseant topic.  "i just said it, its NEVER going to happen again. the thing is Gone. Dead probs. please quit talking about that dumb hors-" before she could continue, one of the trainers, Carol, called alyssas name. She grabbed her riding helmet and put it back on. " im going on a trail-ride, gracie, want to come? "  Grace broke out of her stupor: " no, im gonna help the new student here find the medicine for ned, " Alyssa grunted and walked away. You and grace went into the supply closet.  but before you closed the door, in the corner of your eye: you saw what appeared to be a horse peeking its head out of the pond. 