Talk:Forgetful/@comment-25403885-20140910032023/@comment-24313563-20140923171310

First: There was no need for you to spam caps

Second: The fact that it was your first pasta does not give it the abillty to avoid reticule. While I see no terrible grammatical errors, the story was short, and lacked any sense of plot. I think you have potential to be  a good writer.