Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26416562-20150605200508/@comment-4849011-20150606222949

TheSIlentKiller wrote: Hm, that's not a bad story. It certainly piqued my interest. I liked it, but of course I spotted several grammatical errors while reading. All in all, it wasn't all that bad. I definitely enjoyed how he doubted whether he was still hallucinating. It was really creepy! I feel pretty much the same way. At one point I thought, "This seems disjointed," and then I thought, "Well, it's coming from a brain-concussed narrator who doesn't know what's going on, what's real and what's not." It has an unreliable narrator which leaves the reader to wonder what really happened, and in this case I feel that's not a bad thing.