Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25136879-20140703232416/@comment-24381191-20140704110516

The first reason would be paragraphing, have you realised how blocky this is? First, every time you wirte a dialogue, new paragraph.

This is from the Style Guide for Writing:

You use paragraphs (breaking up the text onto a new line) in the following instances: Fix the paragraphing and repost it in the Workshop.
 * 1) After someone speaks.
 * 2) Changing speakers.
 * 3) Transitioning from one subject to the next. (Talking about a murderer and then talking about something else)
 * 4) To break up long PARTS OF text based on idea transitioning. (When writing a long bit about one thing, make new paragraphs to emphisize different parts of that one bit..