Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26416562-20150531040250/@comment-26193563-20150604005147

It seems as though you just added extra to the story, not working from the insides. Now, don't give up all hope, it can be a good story, but the ending part was a bit random. And obviously, how did the paper write by itself? Magic? Advanced technology? These points don't add up.

Pretend that you're the narrator. What would you do? How would you react? What would you ask? The situation has to have some logical reasons in it.