Talk:The Melon Head Illustration/@comment-5269370-20150730141928/@comment-4849011-20150805031421

First off, thank you for the feedback and compliments! I'm glad to know that you enjoyed it overall and that, at least for part of the story, I set the scene and conveyed the mood I wanted to.

I understand your feeling that I stumbled at the finish line, so to speak. Originally I decided to leave the ending unresolved so people could decide for themselves, but with the feedback you and Sadistic Siren left I'm tempted to add a new ending. Shoot, if I write one new ending, I may write two or three and let people pick their favorite (not as a contest, but like a Choose Your Adventure book).