User blog comment:Underscorre/Jeff the Killer Rewrite Contest!/@comment-26969809-20151002004131/@comment-26969809-20151002203032

Thank you for the review Fireworks888. I did kind of rush the ending mostly because I got tired of looking at this story. I usually write microfiction and this is longer than anything I've written in recent years. Figured why not take a shot at it. Anyway thanks for the writing advise.