Talk:Soul Severance/@comment-25975226-20150502083957

This deserves more attention. I liked it, well I didn't like it. No one likes stories about dead babies. But it was a good ritual pasta and concept, and pretty well written. I just didn't like the ending where the pasta took a turn and the author just seemed not to care anymore. Writing 'yup' in stories gives this impression to the reader. 7/10.