Talk:Please Take Just One/@comment-4715955-20151107072819

I can't think of enough words to accurately describe how stupid this story is. Comes as no surprise that everyone and his mother is doing youtube readings of it -- if it were any good, nobody would pay it any mind.

Wish I could be more elaborate than that, but it appears to be so beloved in its current state that criticism is utterly pointless. I suppose I'll leave it at, "The ending deserves a better story than this."