Talk:Moonlit Memories/@comment-25941663-20170704112600

Despite my disliking to romance stories, I quite enjoyed this. It had a strong Poe flavor, intentional or not.

The only thing I didn't like is the ending. When you write "this post" it broke my immersion. For this kind of tales, it is best if we leave them to the realm of fantasy. Breaking the fourth wall like that leaves a bad taste to the mouth. I think it would be much better if you changed that last sentence to something different.

Good read though, despite the little misstep in the end. Bravo!