Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32764586-20171031210650/@comment-35251736-20171102173152

All around I liked it, just some minor wording things I saw:

1. "It will call, and some will answer its ring." Here you may want to remove "its ring" and have the sentence say: 'It will call, and many answer.'  I just feel like less is more in this case.

2. "Maybe the could be a doctor...: small typo, missing 'y' in they.

3. " I give "discipline" those who are evil..." small typo, 'discipline TO those' just missing to.

But like I said, all in all its great!