Talk:The Call of the Revenant/@comment-26160987-20160216065640

Problems with this pasta (other than historical inaccuracies):

- I, too, love the Crimson Elder from Resident Evil Remake. C'mon.

- I forgive a great deal when it comes to diary/journal/letter style writing, but this is excessive and should have been with less detail as someone recalling memories would write it or intermittenly be spliced with past event detail versus it being "written" out.

- More importantly, style of speaking and slang usage. Especially considering the era. Have you ever seen any sort of letter from a soldier during this era? Have you watched or read anything historical from this period before? I will assume not.

- To further nitpick, why would he give all of these specific details to his sweetheart? Considering, it seems like a dangerous letter that would put her in danger. Less is more in this case and would have made a more effective story.

2/10, but only because I love Resident Evil. Otherwise I'm kind enough to give 1 for the effort put into it, but clearly not enough. You tried.