Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27582895-20170121175641/@comment-29196722-20170122024935

No i would suggest a new plot maybe.

If you can make sense of this then try to salvage some of them, a grown boy wearing a Freddy mask? I love Five Nights at Freddy's but because of the story and how did he get a freaking gun!

Try doing something like scream maybe or Halloween, try doing something where the killer tries to pick them off one by one.