Talk:Kagome Kagome/@comment-9233531-20131109133254

Pretty good. This pasta scared me entirely and was made even better that it claimed to be true. But if this was true the orphanage would have been destroyed in the Hiroshima bombing, and the tire tracks would most likely be gone. The only thing I thought took away from the effect of the story was the humour in the ending paragraphs about soiled trousers and door courtesy, with this in mind I give this a 7.5/10

But don't let this take away from your views, I am just giving a reader giving a critique...