Talk:A Promise Fulfilled

The "promise" here seems to cause a problem, and that is why I don't like this story. "Until death do us part" means that when a person dies, the vows are abolished. Because they are now parted. By death. "Have you forgotten" implies that they aren't living up to that. In short, I think it's stupid. Change that section a bit and this story is great. Harmonex (talk) 22:33, July 10, 2013 (UTC)