Talk:Sonic.exe/@comment-24239424-20131201184319

Okay, so we need a critique here-

To be honest, we don't have good sonic creepypastas (not as compared to other games like Pokemon) and in the world of terrible Sonic creepypastas and trollpastas, this one has a chance.

This pasta qualifies for an average creepypasta and is rather famous among sonic lovers. This creepypasta is actually written very well (even though hyper-realiastic was used 4 times), which is why it brings a feel of creepiness in the reader.

Another thing is some unanswered questions, like 'How Kyle had time to write the letter' The letter is very vague. Then comes the gameplay, which is why it is famous among sonic lovers. This is VERY detailed, and that is why I was scared for a bit, I felt like I was playing it. However, between the writer's experience of Knuckles' and Robotnik's gameplay, his encounter with sonic was... absurd.

The end was very weak- they sudden appearance of a sonic stuffy (With blood stains) is very vague, this could have another, better ending.

Overall:-

Writing skills- 8/10

Creepiness level- 7.5/10

Game based on this pasta (http://gamejolt.com/games/platformer/sonic-exe-the-game/16239/)- 9.5/10

Starting- 7/10

Ending- 5/10