Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30771515-20170123074702/@comment-30771515-20170129150147

RaptorKillerX-Venture wrote: I haven't read the story completely yet, and it seemed interesting; but the spacing extra between each chat members which I find to be a hindrance, and should be dealt with pronto.

Besides that, I have no clue what the term "MHS Class" meant though. However, given the nature of chat rooms; this story overall did felt somewhat like a chat room.

Though I'm highly inexperience in this type of pasta; as such I recommend that you should inquire someone else's thoughts on it; especially Empy as he's written over like 60 stories.

Well this is just about I say 1/3 of the story, I haven't even read the story completely yet and derp was kind enough to show me a template that lets you single space instead of double space, I'll be sure to include that on my second draft.

And since this is a chatroom I'm not going to be explaining anything about its contents, I thought people would be able to make the connection (Miltonville nostalgia chatroom/Miltonville high school)

And hopefully the great empy takes a bit of time off being a chatroom genius to lay some advice on this prototype.