User blog:Fronkensteen/New(Ish) Pasta

I wrote this story about a week ago, but I wanted to get dirrect feedback. Is it good, is it bad? I'd love to know. It's featured below.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Star-Children,_Project_1a

Here's a summery, it may contain spoilers so be warned, but still. It's about a horribly malformed child. He is the last survivor of a decade long experiment  to track the development of human beings in space. His disabilities are the result of his intersteller upbringing. When the child potentially posions itself, an aging doctor responsible for the experiment finds that he has a choice to either destroy his failed creation or to save it.