Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180506113215/@comment-34823985-20180507061333

Thanks for the feedback. I have some other parts to this story, but I haven't figured out how to slip them in yet, if I even will. I posted this prematurely, but I wanted to see if my ideas on time shipping could hold water. You've given me some good stuff to work with, much appreciated.