Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150422165839/@comment-26326346-20150427171437

@ Punkfaye: Thank you for the kind words and your faith in the story :)

@ Jay ten: I bookmarked the page you posted and I believe I understand the colon (I'll take a test on them later, if I can find one). I took a test on avoiding comma splices before I went to bed last night; I scored 5 out of 10. I definitely need some work on commas. I know the last couple of sentences might seem random, but I just wanted you to know that I'm trying :)

I think the story is about ready. I'm going to wait a few more hours before I post it to see if anyone else has some suggestions/feedback.