Talk:The Trespasser/@comment-13625147-20140329215741

Hi there, I edited your story because unfortunately, there were a lot of things to fix. Luckily they were easy. I just want to let you know so that the next time you write a story, you know how. So first of all, your two paragraphs needed to be split up more. And every time a new person talks, they get their own line/paragraph. And when you are starting a new sentence, don't double space. Anyway, just thought I'd let you know so that your story didn't end up on the chopping block. :) I like the story though, very eerie.