Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29791712-20150325032318/@comment-29791712-20150331004107

@Rainboh Well thank you for your advise, and I'll glady use it for this story and for future references. As for now, I have a lot of short stories I need to revise and edit, so this particular one I'm going to pass for now. But in the future I may revise it, and maybe others can read and give feedback as well. Anyways, thank you very much.