Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9967354-20140702062156/@comment-25114042-20140702204731

Pretty good poem.

The flow is nice, but you might want to change a few words so the stanzas look neater and more square.

Also, ending a sentance in the middle of a line should NOT be done. It completely ruins the flow and cadence because you have to pause to read it.

A general stanza:

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The worms that crawl in,

Are small, and thin.

The worms that crawl out,

Are fat, and stout.

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Hope I helped!

Now I have a question for you. XD How do you write so theres not a large gap between each line?

^ Everytime i hit enter, a gap like that appears. ]: