Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24498356-20140803220428/@comment-25148755-20140805023719

Agree with Cassist on all points. Also, unless that was a radioactive saw blade that gave April superpowers, he's too busy bleeding out to strangle his uncle. You'll need to explain how he managed that one handed anyway, since by the pictures you provided with the story he looks to weigh in at about 120 pounds. Apologize if this response comes off as overly caustic, I'm in a flippant mood.

@Cassist, didn't you see that one of April's dislikes is having his name being referred to as a girl's name? If you don't respond to this, I'll assume he already has you strung up somewhere.