Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-40164173-20190718014418/@comment-35711173-20190718053737

Uncle Paco,

I am glad to see that you are continuing your story and that you are bringing the next installment to the Writer's Workshop before posting it.

My generic first suggestion is that you take your story to http://www.grammarly.com and correct the dozens of errors it spots. Then take your story to http://www.hemingwayapp.com and correct the errors it finds. Actually, http://www.hemmingwayapp.com likes your story so let's focus on Grammarly for the moment.

Ned Wolfkin made a good review of your story. I definitely would listen to it for the next draft.