Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-6813369-20140330024314/@comment-5643552-20140330062655

GraydonL wrote:

Why was this deleted? It is very good, great grammar and spelling, and amazing story. The only thing "wrong" with it is the semiweak ending. It was mainly due to extreme overuse of ellipses, which is noticeably absent from this version. There's still some awkward sentence structure, but the story itself seems fine. I'll consider this for undeletion.