Talk:The Grinning Man/@comment-28463881-20160530055442

Mkay, first of all, you started off with a cliche. "Don't read this, I'm begging you!" As an author, you should try to persuade people to read your work. I know it's a way to create suspense, but it doesn't work 90% of the time, but when it does work, it's glorious. So good job on that, making it work. You used a few other cliches, like the cursed picture one, and the ever so overused "Please help me out of this mess" one. Still though, it was a good story, and I'm glad you were able to show evidence of the picture existing by actually posting it. Thanks for adding that image for a bit more realism. 8/10