Talk:Mousetrap/@comment-24101790-20160327040104

This still needs quite a bit of work to fix up here. I corrected the punctuation, capitalization, spacing, and wording issues I came across, but there is still quite a bit to be done here. " By the time I left dockside I had become a local expert in mouse catching. Yet this mouse trumps that undoubtedly."

"A few hours later when I managed to calm her down I told Val I called her mother and told her what happened." (Redundancy)

"I barely manage to whisper as the creature reaches out its long, decaying arm and envelopes my face with its fist." (Awkward word usage)

I would revise this and review it as there're a number of typos, punctuation, wording, and tense changing issues.