Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34423991-20180301215058/@comment-31208224-20180302000058

Poorly written, bad grammar, tv pastas far too overdone, narrator doesn’t talk/write like a really person, not scary, not descriptive enough, and unoriginal. Do a few sentences describing the setting of the story, like the weather and maybe even how the air felt it or something, come up with an original and scary/creepy plot that makes sense and has creativity and is interesting, and read a new highly rated talking heavy pastas to get a feel for the writing style and how people talk and act in horrific/exciting situations.

Hope this helps!