Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-26248899-20150327040540/@comment-25037895-20150613072718

The reading is rearranged just so, that it reminds me of another piece of work entirely made up of someone else's ideas. A "narration" should match the story. I've seen narrations with a word out of place here-and-there, but not with whole sentences out of place, with added phrases that aren't in the story. Just my two-cents.