Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35911608-20180819032430/@comment-9041013-20180821003819

Alright, can't complain about the plot anymore... I loved it, glad you like my idea. Hmm, now we've to see what others think about it. I did love how it's subtle as heck until the climax where we are thrown back into reality and the fantasy world and real world blend in together. It's better than trying to maintain an unrealistic illusion of a false reality which is overly consistant... happened on this site and people didn't seem to notice.

Uhh maybe you've some technical issues in there, but I didn't really notice cause I'm tired.

If you need help with the other scenario Dr Bob suggested, I have some ideas for that too :)