User blog:SnakeTongue237/Can someone take a look at some of these pastas?

Hello there Creepypasta Wikia! I have a request to make of you guys today.

It's fairly simple really. I just want some more comments on a couple of my pastas that have not gotten that much attention. If anyone can find it within their cold black hearts to humor an aspiring writer, I would be extremely grateful. The pastas that I would like to have more comments/critiques/reviews on are listed below, as well as their storylines so that you may dismiss anything you are not interested in.

I realize that this is pretty selfish of me, and I apologize, but the fact is that if I do not get feedback on my stories, then I am never going to improve as a writer. So by all means... type away! Give me your thoughts and opinions on the three stories listed below!

Revival- A college bound couple find themselves walking home alone at night on an abandoned country road. They have a disturbing encounter with an eerie monster that they may actually know better than they think.

Crucifix- A recently orphaned boy moves into a foster family of devout christians. He develops a fear for the crucifix that is in his bedroom.

Broken Mirrors-  The life story of a disfigured man who has had to endure several hardships as well as loneliness that aches at his heart. This is the longest pasta I have written (and I completely understand if you do not want to read it given the fact that it is a bit longer than the first two). It was inspired by real life serial killer Jeffrey Dahmer.

Thank you!