Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37197096-20190121073935/@comment-9041013-20190121153235

Well you could just make it a story about a person with a regular doll who has Schizophrenia and ends up nearly killing someone because in their delirious mind the doll is prompting them too.

Youd have to make the schizophrenia very convincing though, which will require some research on your behalf.

You could also have a story where the person is sure that their doll is some monster and goes as far as to harm themselves for failing this doll. Think of a person throwing themselves on their back on the floor because in their mind the doll punched them. This again would require to look up how delirium works.

You can also have a regular psychopathic killer who claims a doll forced them to kill. Like an interview with the killer when he's in prison and the interviewer is unaware he's being told false information until after the interview it's revealed that the killer enjoys lying to people.

Something like that, the doll doesnt have to be a real character; merely a plot device. It does not need to be the focal point of the story.

Your English, on top of it all, needs some work too, your tenses are a tad bit jumpy and it ruins the immersion.