Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27838637-20170128143905/@comment-27838637-20170129163411

Thanks mate that feedback will be put to good use. I want the story to be effective and edgy, much like my favourite NSFW stories on the site like Jay ten's monologues and The Gym Teacher. I wanted to create a character that is a horrible human being, but has a somewhat sympathetic past. To see what it takes to turn someone into a monster - as a matter of fact that statement is also going to apply to the victim, but I must say no more.

Anyway, I'll try my hardest to balance the shock value with the actual narrative. One of the most terrifying movies I have seen is Antichrist, which has a woman masturbating a man until he ejaculates blood, but whilst the film pushes boundaries, it actually has an intriguing and scary plot (in my opinion at least).