Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-6822927-20190104215501/@comment-6822927-20190106160854

DrBobSmith wrote: KingSparta300 wrote:

I see. So, horror is dampened when the writing is of poor quality. YES! Very much it is! When your brain has to stop to pick out what a sentence is trying to say, you lose suspension of disbelief. You try to gain it back but when you hit another rough sentence you have to try all over. Soon, you give up entirely.

Your words shouldn't serve as a barrier to expressing your story. Thanks for the advice. I think the big problem is too much is going on at the same time and those there isn't much focus.