Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27027028-20150928215342/@comment-27027028-20150929155143

like i said, way out of it when i wrote it. but i'm not right now. anothere thing there isn't really any dialogue in this. it's all being told from tom's view to you. i know it's cliche. but its hard to come up with a way to start. if you have any suggestions on how to start it out that'd be great