Talk:Take Your Medicine/@comment-25170312-20140815034239

Hmmm... kinda interesting. At first, I didn't like the style it's written in, but then it grew on me. I liked the sudden transition to him being off the meds, but then there was no real explanation to why he was on them. I'm assuming it was to keep him in some kind of fantasy where he thought he was a college student. His 'roommate' kept telling him to take them, but if he really wanted him to, why didn't he force him? The ending leaves you wondering if or why the 'roommate' was keeping this guy as some kind of prisoner, and what parts of him are considered 'materials'. It mentions teeth, as if he's about to eat the main character. Until that point I was wondering if he was possibly in a mental hospital. Then I thought that maybe he was hallucinating and that's why he was on the meds. I'm all for ambiguity, but in this case it could use a little more clarification. With all that said, I still enjoyed it. It was even a little bit humorous. Wow, this comment is becoming way too long. This is the last sentence.