Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35817505-20181129015306/@comment-36627132-20181129041711

DrBobSmith wrote: Ned Wolfkin,

Well stated and precisely on.

CreepyCatGirl,

It comes of as a creepypasta parody of Humpty Dumpty. People don't even try to have suspension of disbelief in a parody of a nursery rhyme. They just wonder what joke will pop out of nowhere next. We just wait for the King's horses to get their chance to put the girls back together again.

Dr. Bob Thank you.

Also that bit about the King's horses made me laugh.