Talk:The Mountain People/@comment-24983065-20150216043720

This would have been so much better if you'd used quotation marks to denote speech rather than

Me

Julia

John

For me that really ruined the flow.

The pasta itself was okay, mediocre at best. You focused too much on the insignificant details, like taking a photo with the sign to prove you'd been there.

Overall, a 5/10