Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-6822927-20180929234814/@comment-35711173-20180930031506

KingSparta300 wrote: I do intend to expand more upon this, with the main plan being the guy simply views women as whores and has a strange obession with eyeballs.

A killer having an eyeball fetish is boring. It's not a motivation. You need to go deeper. Why did Zodiac do what he did? What about the Unibomber? What did they say about themselves?