Talk:Lost Episodes Can Be Found Again/@comment-43289800-20190726171624

I registered to thank the comments section for comparing this to who is phone. So I can hopefully read something worthwhile.

Weird pacing. Tons of narrative that just doesn’t need to be there. Entire chapters that don’t need to be there. You also need an editor, many of your sentences don’t make sense.

The culling of much of the story could also alleviate the plot holes that riddle this. Otherwise this comments section looks suspect.