Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24381191-20140904164608/@comment-24101790-20140906135628

I enjoyed the read, I think it could use a little fleshing out and explanation about what is exactly happening to the earth. (Additionally if you're looking to make the story a bit longer, you could delve a little more into the character and his emotional state.)

Not sure if "Pitiful; pathetic." constitutes a complete sentence and you misspelled piece ("peice"). Other than that, I don't see any real grammatical, spelling, or capitalization errors.

In my opinion, this story is up to quality standards and can be posted anytime you'd like. My only recommendation would be to make some minor edits to the aforementioned issues listed above.