Talk:Don't Open Your Eyes/@comment-26029160-20170610024812

Good, scary, and effective. After reading this story, I was afraid to sleep with the curtains open and I would always check if the curtains were closed thinking that "something" mentioned in the story will get me.

The mystery presented is superb, you do not know what these "things" are, what they look like, and why they're preying on people who keep their curtains open while they sleep. The author even mentions that he doesn't have a clue what happens to those people who do open their eyes during this situation. To be honest, this story deserves more credit for actually trying to scare the reader in comparison to those shitty lost episode creepypastas winch rely on blood, gore, and satanic imagery rather than prey on the reader's fears. Hell, this story worked for me! This story should be used as a teaching tool on How to write creepypasta section.

Scary and just fantastic. 9/10