Talk:The Wendigo Gun/@comment-4849011-20170904165128

Sorry I'm late! I approve of the changes you made from the draft. I enjoyed the descriptions of fear (as well as the house) and thought you did a good job filling in the background (Natalie's reflections were brief, yet told the readers what they need to know). The part about the underwear made me think of that Drew Carey episode in which Drew crashed a party and asked, "Who wants to see me turn my boxers into a thong?" This story shows that if you go on a ghost hunt/urban exploration trek, you should do your research first (since apparently only Natalie knew about the curse and murder) and not bring along any bratty friends.