Talk:I Work in a Facility for Long-Term Coma Patients/@comment-25052433-20140813191737

This was really good. The concept was original, the deliver was suspenseful and the ending was unnerving. This is a picture perfect pasta.

Honestly, I usually try and give really balanced reviews with pros and cons, but this is excellent. I wouldn't change anything in the plot.

You may wish to consider adding quotations or maybe italics to Bill's response during the story, just to make it pop out that this is what he is communicating to her.

Other than that, this is a homerun in my opinion. Excellent story all around.

10/10