User blog comment:Caravanoflives/Help with editing/@comment-28575580-20161114085326

A few tips:

Not "I will appreciate any help" but "I would appreciate any help." There's no need for future tense.

"Majors," not "majours."

Supernatural does not require capitalization.

The best way to improve your own writing is to read real quality horror fiction not creepypasta written by authors from major pubishing companies or from past eras when craft, style, and content mattered much more than they typically do today. Creepypasta, for all its mainstream popularity, largely is rushed, cliched writing with little value in the logical or literary fields. Real writers do more than tell a story about a series of linked events; rather, through events, they discuss deeper matters like social issues, politics, sexuality, religion, personality, the nature of man, philosophy, etc. Touching on these subjects through the lens of horror is what real writing should be all about. While you or I may never write like an H.P. Lovecraft, King, or Poe, immersing yourself in the best will only improve your craft.