Talk:The Polished Man/@comment-25922165-20150218160718

This is a great story! Two small continuity errors throw me off. First you write he is working at a post office. Then a new agents with no transition between. The other is you write he arrived by bus then is trying to get to his car.

I also think it is unclear why he saw the being out of its territory.

But the over all effect is awesome! Very creepy.