Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32764586-20180522211853/@comment-33937557-20180522221232

Icydice wrote: SoDaft Potato wrote: There are some grammatical issues, but it's still very good. What a grisly demise Max met, eh?

In this sentence: "So many of his plans had withered away and died, reduced to nothing but grey patches on the ground," is it "plans" or "plants"? Just curious. Ogee, that's meant to be plants, sorry! It's alright, it's alright! Didn't ruin the experience at all.