Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32807959-20170808223841

Once there was a boy named Robbie Richards. Robbie was always fascinated with electronics since he was a boy. He loved building mini circuits. He first built his first circuit when he was 12. The other kids didn’t appreciate him very much. He was always so different. Every day at school the kids would make fun of him. He’d bring different gadgets to school.

Like little robot spiders. Everyone called him a tech nerd. He’s a very smart kid. When he turned 14 he began working on a smart watch. This smart watch will be very unique. This is because it will move. Literally. It would be connected to a mover. But not literally. It would walk via remote control. It would be wireless. It would walk and place itself in the watch socket by walking into it.

It would be a big watch and he didn’t have a lot of money. But he succeeded in building it. But he decided the watch is too big and no one would want to buy it. But he knew they might like it because of how cool it is. So he sold it and he made 20,000 dollars in just two weeks. His parents are so proud of him.

But of course, there were rivals. Rivals included more than just mean kids.They included buyers that decided the watch needed more stuff. So Robbie thought awhile. He pulled out the other design. He began working on a mini heater. This new design got him interested in the weapons business. He began working on a mini heater. But first it began as a mini heater on the watch. To add the heater, he would have to expand the length of the watch in inches. It took him one and a half years to add the mini heater to the watch successfully.

You would have to select the heater on the watch by turning it. Then the petit heater cone would begin heating something up. It works a lot better than a microwave. But he finally finished the design of the heater on the watch. When he shared it with the experts, they began producing it publicly for 4000 dollars a piece.

Soon, Robbie had more than 800,000,000 dollars. He became rich. He also began competing in Robot competitions for minors. But when they examined his robot it was too advanced.

So they put him with the 30 and older. He almost won. So he competed again and he won the next year. This year his robot looked amazing. His robot stood 12 feet tall and fully mobile like a movie.

Nevertheless, his competition postponed and this made Robbie, now at 23, mad. So Robbie took time off and competed in battle bot tournaments. Robbie is too advanced so he tried not to win automatically or he would be disqualified. So he was careful and he won with ease. Then one morning, on his way form shopping with his friend, he got jumped. They jumped them hard. “Oh shit I can’t believe those guys did that to us”, said Robbie. “Yeah! We can’t just let that stand!” said his friend. What they suspected is that the last competition they were in, the competitors ordered a hit on them. Oh they plan to get them back of course. Robbie is almost finished with his force field design. So they began to plot revenge.

They decided to build a robot together. A special attack bot in case an incident happens like this again. So they began home together. The form of the bot would be circular.

It would contain six mechanical stretchable arms. It would take a while to produce a large heating ray. But they started on the original structure first. They built its structure well. They formed it out and took their time. They heated and made the outer plates stronger. They added more electronics inside. After adding the brain chip parts of the main brain part, they made it so they could connect the heater. The heat ray was a challenge. It took a while for them to enlarge it properly.

But they ended up accomplishing it of course. After they inserted it, they began working on the final layers of the attack bot. The bot was circular in form. It has six outlets where the arms come out of. Two on the left. Two on the right. And two on the top. The top two will be mostly for attacking.

The outer outlet for the heat ray looks like a dragon eye. Each of the arms you could say are about 25 feet long. The first two on the left and right contain three major metal pincer like grabbers. So opened you have a hand. A hand with three metal pinchers of course. But it also contains an imprint of a circle.

These are the outer outlets for just heaters that can reach high temperatures and can burn flesh. The circle turns red hot when in action. On the sides of the hands are outlets that shoot razor stars fast close to Mach speed. The objective of Robbie and his friend is to scare the bullies into craziness, not to hurt them.

The top two arms can coat themselves in electricity. 120,000 volts to be exact. Also, the arms open up into holes that can blast shotgun shells. So the day came. It is finally complete. The killer battle bot. Robbie and his friend praised and praised. But when night came, Robbie’s friend snuck into his house and re activated it’s brain with an evil chip. So Robbie and his friend hid behind the curb. “You got it?” asked the friend. “Yeah, if they try to come by us they’ll pay”, replied Robbie. “So where is it?” asked his friend. Robbie looked at his watch. “I don’t know, it should be here!” said Robbie. “Oh here it is”, said Robbie.

The heavy truck arrived. It’s like a large moving truck. The bullies began walking down the street to them. “Look what we’ve got here, these little punks”, said the bully. “Right on time”, said Robbie. Robbie pushed the button. The back of the moving van opened. The bot stepped out. It stood in front of the bullies.

A grin spread across Robbie’s face. But he first bully slashed out to a bully and ripped him open. His intestines and insides fell onto the floor on the road. The others tried to run but the heat ray burned them slowly.

The bot let the third one’s leg burnt crisp. The bot grabbed him and ripped his eye out and burned the flesh of his face. One more bully remained. The claw of the arm opened up and shot the stars at the last bully. They zoomed through him and went through his lungs. Blood squirted out. He died instantly.

His friend stood behind Robbie. On his face was a grin he couldn’t resist. A pure mischievous grin. Robbie looked forward. His mouth hung open in shock and horror. The bodies lied, butchered and burnt up. A trial was held in account for Robbie’s friend.

Robbie’s friend was proven guilty and put away. Robbie continued living up to his name. Soon he was asked to join the scientific jaunting business. He accepted and started working with jaunting scientists. He worked with them for several years. Soon he became famous. He became famous for controlling the jaunt stats.

When people jaunt they go through a time warp. So when they get to the other side more time has actually passed. But only to them. Robbie made it so that people’s lives can last longer. He became very famous for that. He’s already stupid rich. But he can even get more rich than that. He also extended the jaunt method by creating portals.

The year is 2034 and Robbie is an official jaunt officer. He’s pretty high in the ranks though. By then he has created a portal machine. He created his first jaunt machine in 2021. One day he was at work. He has his own special portal machine down in his official laboratory. He looked to the left and then to the right. He smiled. He set it up and everything. He set up the special code and aligned the frequencies. He opened the portal machine. He stepped into it. He smiled and pushed the teleport button. He teleported.

He was taken to a place with a rocky surface and the portal ball spit him out onto the surface. He got up and walked forward. He turned around and looked at the portal hole to make sure it was still there. He knew it wasn’t going anywhere. He knows how this works. But human minds always wonder. You can’t blame them. He continued to walk forward. A little spider thing stepped out. It has no eyes and only slobs forward like something completely made up.

It sort of looks like one of those squishy toys with the noodles sticking out of it. Except these noodles are curved down. They are bigger than you’d expect and are normally formatted on it. It’s head stuck out from the side and went.. Dreep… dreep… The head is just barely visible, black surface that barely showed itself. It’s face opened up and a needle appeared. Robbie took caution and moved away. It started whistling and Robbie ran away.

He moved along the rocky surface. Robbie took it easy and walked slowly into a formation. It consisted of rocks stacked together on each side. At the bottom is an entrance path. More of a path going down. Robbie walked into it. He heard some digging. He paused. Looked left and right. A head poked out at the left. Robbie glanced up. Then he continued moving forward. Robbie heard a sound. He turned around. A creature stood before him. It’s head is in front of its shoulder structure. It moved on six set of legs. It stopped. It let out a low growl. Robbie stepped back. Robbie ran back to the portal sphere and jumped into it. He was back in his machine

."Wow”, he said. This is Robbie’s little secret. No one else knows about it. So an hour later he went again after setting up the teleporting machine in that special order.

He went in. He teleported. This time he was on another rocky surface more like that of earth with a blue sky. Not a purple one like the previous dimension. And there’s a huge waterfall that is right in front of him. “That’s an easy way back”, said Robbie grinning. Then he saw butterflies fly out of the water un wet. Then a fish slithered by Robbie’s feet.

Much like a snake. But still with the same length. Robbie stayed for about 13 minutes. He got bored and walked back into his sphere. He appeared back into his machine of course. He re started the teleporting machine normally. Then an official walked into his lab. “Are you ready for patient #112?” asked the official. “Yes, I was just reviewing the comps”, replied Robbie. So the next day came and it was almost time for the patient.

Robbie has a plan to call his most recently trusting friend after the patients jaunt. So the time came. He jaunted the patient all the way to Japan. It worked perfectly. 100% conditions all stats. So Robbie called his friend. “Come over here pronto, I’ve got something you need to see”, said Robbie. “I’ll be right over”, said his friend. His friend also is a jaunt officer. But of lower rank of course.

Robbie told his trusted friend the secret. “Oh wow that’s really gotta be something”, replied his friend. “You gotta let me try it”, said his friend with excitement. “Tomorrow I have some time off, we can go together, wanna try it then?” asked Robbie. His friend nodded in agreement. The next day came.

They excitedly approached the teleporting machine. “You ready for this man?” asked Robbie. “Ready to explore? There’s so much more than what meets the eye”, said Robbie. “Oh I’m hella ready. Let’s do this!” exclaimed Robbie’s friend. Robbie set the teleporting machine to a special order. They stepped in. It pulsed and they were off.

When they arrived they stepped out of the portal sphere. Robbie smiled. His friend opened his mouth in astonishment. The area around them is sky blue with a special light sphere above everything. Bubbles floated around. In the bubbles are different groups of people. It’s also groups of buildings. They walked forward. “Woah!” exclaimed his friend. He put his hand under the bubble. “Can I pop one? It won’t affect our world will it?” asked his friend. “No, everything here is completely different and un related”, replied Robbie. So his friend crushed the bubble.

Robbie popped some too. Then they left. They arrived back in the machine. “Let’s do it one more time!” said his friend. “I agree”, replied Robbie. They did it. This time it was a black sky. A brown rocky surface as well. Elephant creatures with eight legs moved along. As one moved along, a piece of a rocky fixture morphed into a giant sucking worm with serrated teeth. The mouth acted as a tornado like whirlpool with serrated teeth moving at Mach speed. The elephant thing was sucked it.

The other elephant creatures got splattered with blood. Even the ones that weren’t as close. At that second the boys decided to split. But at the last second the floor turned into a worm and sucked Robbie’s friend in. Robbie made it to the sphere as the worm came up and sucked his friend in.

He made it to the teleporting machine. But blood and pieces of his friend splattered onto him during his trip back. When he stepped back out of the teleporting machine, blood and guts covered it and him. He knew he had to clean up before anyone sees this. He has a disoriented sort of shock, terror, horror on his face with his eyes widened.

A few days later he went back. But just one more time he promised himself. So he went and he had a normal trip. But this time the aliens were hybrids. So he enjoyed it and returned.

Only this time he felt different. The world around him is the same. He looked at his hands. But deep inside, he knows he isn’t human. Not as once before. So he dwindled our earth and feels the need and desire for human flesh. Knowing it was wrong he knew he had no choice. He can no longer contribute to mankind. At first he was depressed. He gutted himself to find out his insides were normal. And more surprisingly it didn’t kill him.

He realized he didn’t need them. But because of his new circumstance and his plan, he might need them for disguise. Cause he has a plan. Oh boy does he have a plan. He soon figured out as a young boy finds out about his own semen, that he can produce a larva out of his center body and stab it into his victims to turn them into his species. Of course he needed sustenance so he would have to choose his patrons.

He intended in making a community on earth. All over the globe. Of his species. Those who are already the species can reproduce with another partner. And it’s not by the genitals. They’re not humans. So it wasn’t until after 90,000 victims consumed that he started to change. Everyone changes once they reach that amount of flesh consumed. But they respect him. They can tell it’s him cause he’s evolved more and he has the mark when he gutted himself. The species are practically invincible. So except your new life. Sit back relax, and bon apetit. 