Talk:Ronald McDonald House/@comment-29992049-20160917111722/@comment-4849011-20161002001353

I agree. This was ridiculous and tried way too hard. I don't understand what the newspaper meant (Time-travel?) or why the laptop was there (Why would tormentors/killers want people to be able to write about their experiences?). In addition to the plot holes and confusing content, the narrator turned me off right off the bat when he described his former families. There are a lot of ways to make a juvenile delinquent protagonist sympathetic, but they won't be seen here. Finally, why on earth would one write a horror story in relation to a charity proven to help others? What's next, a horror story related to the Salvation Army or Make-A-Wish? If you want to besmirch a corporation, besmirch a corporation- not a charitable branch of a corporation.