Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24933431-20140512150400/@comment-24933431-20140512161255

thanks for the advice, ill work on it and see what i can do. I'm still new to the wole writing portion of creepypastas, this was my first attempt at one, along with 2 more i was going to post soon for similar feedback, one is a bit longer, adn the other is rather short. Again thanks, i'll try and work on a revision when im not busy.