Thread:DarkSlayer 3/@comment-24480175-20140222205049/@comment-24480175-20140226005044

(editing ideas)

Tabatha had (an emotionless) expression on her face. As I looked at her, (her deep, blue eyes hypnotized the remanants of my soul). (Outside of the cocoon formed by the trance she had placed me in,) the (seemingly muffled sounds of the) music box serenated us with a soothing melody, gradually removing the pain. The sorrows (that had plagued us) were gone.

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What will the overall story be?