Talk:An Attempt of Sanity/@comment-24724507-20140624021515/@comment-17834624-20140624030437

Sorry, my laptop ran out of battery and I had to rush for the charger

Of course I don't mind you asking! It is the part the kid's father come and shoot the hollow's (If I may call him that way for a while XD) arm off, it deserved it for killing two kids.

That's fine, don't even worry about it. It's a natural crisis.

I appreciate your telling me in what you liked. I decided to incorporate consequences for the deuteragonist of the story, unlike most people. I mean, if someone killed two kids in reality, he'd probably be killed himself or sentenced to life in prison.

I do not mind your calling him Hollow, I intended for the deuteragonist being extremely resembling of the Hollows. Tattered and ragged clothes, and veins over where the heart would be.

"The set of veins located over-top my heart." - story.