Talk:What Does the Dinosaur Say?/@comment-24281984-20141218180505

I liked this story. Sure, I think you'd be better off removing the first introduction paragraph or two, and I did have to fix a number of spacing and punctuation issues, but the writing itself was decent. It didn't take too long to get interested in the story and the ending, while not necessarily making sense, was still satisfying and unexpected. I'm not sure how well the title fits, but my small complaints aside, I really did enjoy reading this story, so good job!