Talk:The Showers/@comment-24000293-20131002180521

Not really sure why, but kind of a meh story for me, not that it was bad! I'm very sure lots of people love it. But I just hate loose ends. A bit of a concrete thinker myself, I have difficulty with kinds of stories that leave it up to imagination.

Seemingly sporadic, rusty showerheads in a cramped place leaking unknown liquids. Dirty, hungered children in pajamas out to get you while you can't get away. A barn in the middle of nowhere in pristine condition. Such delicious, excellent ingredients in this pasta, but you didn't tie it all together.

Metaphorically, you beautifully prepare all the ingredients, then give it to me and expect for me to piece it together when YOU'RE the master chef.

All in all, 7/10. Would've been perfect ten if there was more closure.