Talk:Radio Music/@comment-25941663-20150307100617

This certainly had its creepy moments, but overally, it had its fair share of issues too. While character development was decent, sometimes character interaction and behavior felt unrealistic, especially towards the end.

I was also disappointed that you used the word 'demon'/'demonic' twice in your description of the creature. I honestly think that if you cut both words and replace them with proper descriptions, this will be much, much better.

I found this sentence: "It made a huge bloody splattering noise, with blood everywhere." This doesn't make much sense and feels wrong; consider revising it.

Synopsizing, this was definitely creepy at times, but it still needs some work. But nevertheless, good job.