Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25458443-20190329084135/@comment-25458443-20190330140137

BloodySpghetti wrote:

You can also kind of work around the horror factor with this glassy man too, maybe his actual face being so scary it mentally scars people, maybe it's something under his coat, you know... it has potential. I strongly disagree with this, though. The creepiness of the bar guy is supposed to be simply in his still being there and never leaving. Giving him some kind of vaguely existential evil would make him too...idk, cryptid-y.