Talk:The Asylum/@comment-17646692-20140130221858

But what about him? In the end there *spoiler alert* she said that it took the guys 5 minutes to open the door and that he was.... Before she starts crying again and that makes me really wonder "what about him???"

Details: 6/10 please read last part of this commeny for the reason why. Length: for people with short to medium atention-span. Also well made compare to length 9/10 Atmosphere: 7/10. At the peak of the story, it was creepy as fuck, but you could maybe pulled the atmosphere a little longer? Please, pretty please? :) The creepy: it was creepy, but a little to vague. Was to much of the part where he faints and the struggling. The amount of that would be okay if you also added some other creepy-factors. 7/10

Overall-points: 7.5/10 Overall, it was a entertaining creepy-pasta which may make me sit and think about it for a while, but it could be improved at some points.