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Hsshall wrote: I would change these 5 things:

1. Make Jeff less overpowered.

2. Make it so Jeff goes to Juvy, but Liu helps him escape in a different way.

3. Make it so the adults would stop the fight at the party.

4. Replace the guns that the 12 year old bullies had with knives.

5. Make it so Jeff doesn't kill his brother. 1. Obviously.

2. see 5

3. Hmm.

4. More reasonable

5. Does he need a brother? All that subplot does is drive the acid/bleach/whatever part of the story, and let's face it, does he need that bit? Does he need a brother limping along beside the main story?