Talk:Best of Luck/@comment-25094472-20141019115921/@comment-25383866-20141019122813

It started with promise, but many errors in spelling and punctuation made it very hard to read. I fixed all of them that I could find.

It was very creative and specific. I liked the idea of calling upon gods of luck or whatever the faces are. I also liked how they're not explicitly there to help you or harm you. I enjoyed the aspect of responsibility that the practitioner of the ritual has to take on. Your life is in your hands.

i liked that you didn't go into detail on why the faces must be bound to the mirrors. There are enough silly gore-pastas on the internet already, let's have some subtlety.

Overall, it was not that bad. After editing, it's much easier to read; I suggest you look over the edits and compare them to your original post so that you can see what was changed and why.