Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36397055-20180731043846/@comment-35711173-20180731055406

Reading it, I had no emotional connection to it. I was not creeped out and I didn't feel horror.

You can recite the facts of people dying and have it be dreadfully boring. Without a connection, I was ... bored.

You need to achieve "suspension of disbelief." I didn't have it. It didn't fit. It's almost a "lost episode" story only it was a lost piece of music.