Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24381191-20140904164608/@comment-25394259-20140908223440

Okay, I've only written one creepypasta so far, so I'm no expert. And I love the way you've written this; it drew me in and had a consistent tone. I thought it was great, but I'm not sure if it was that creepy. Now, having your entire planet blow up is pretty damn scary to experience, but when I'm just reading it, it felt more driven towards drama and/or tragedy. That's just what I thought, but I'm new to the wiki so maybe everything I just said is irrelevant.