Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20150929021322/@comment-26715482-20150929033518

Well the writing was nice but the problem comes from the plot, it's pretty similar to a old urban legend known as High Beams or "Killer in the back seat". Now even though the stories are similar they have one piece left out of it which is the involvment of another person and skips to the killer in the back being arrested.

Now for your attempt at a story that sounds like a true one it's within the realm that it's believable, but leaving out some small details like if the area is rural or what not kind subtracts from the story. So in conculsion to this i'd say it's good but still needs some improvements