Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20181117043002/@comment-36393004-20181119154333

Ok, I repaired most of the things that had been addressed by you guys. I still need to check on weeding out the multiple uses of "I" in my paragraphs.

Side Note: All my extra money is going to providing for my kids Christmas, a new monitor/keyboard/mouse will have to wait. I'm so broke right now.