Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33077235-20180925204000/@comment-33077235-20180925230005

BloodySpghetti wrote: I say, first get your first story well and done and then come up with the second one.

Doing half of one story and jumping onto another, it's just meh... Not a good idea, the same problems show up here too... It's too skinny and lacks in oomph, it's just not scary, nor emotion inducing, nor thought inducing... it's just there... I gave up on the last one.