Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-39874510-20190628000721/@comment-35711173-20190628213154

Nightwell,

I listened to "Floor Zero."

Two observations. First, that wind just doesn't fit inside an elevator. Creeking mechanical noise maybe, not howling wind. In all my life, I have never been inside a windy elevator to a basement. Since the sound is so out of place, it distracts and hinders suspension of disbelief rather than building tension.

I don't know the details of your accent, but when you say "Elevator," you don't pronounce the "t" and I am not sure if you pronounce the "R." If you spoke in Received Pronunciation, it would be easier for me to understand you. That may be completely unrealistic for you to do.

The organ music at the end really distorted and drowned your narration for me.