Talk:Blobster/@comment-43694675-20190901151752

Other’s have mentioned how the beast lacked description, or it was too long, etc. I feel like this was a great story, but from your replies to others’ comments, it is clear you want some constructive criticism, so I’m going to attempt to point out some things I feel you might want to improve. At the beginning, I felt there was a lack of explanation of why Amber was on the beach. Also, I feel the telepathy ability of the monster was an incredible addition to the story, and I feel it could have been used against other characters. Otherwise, this was amazing!