Talk:The Tale of Robert Elm/@comment-25153204-20140808052435

I only have two things to say. To the author: brilliant. I implore you to write a novel. To the critics: it appears you have not read many pastas. Comparatively speaking, this was like finding an original Picasso in a collection of children's fingerpaintings. It was brilliantly excuted. Yes, some parts were short, but this is a short story afterall. To the one who nitpicked the pencil: I can assure you a properly sharpened pencil can indeed pierce cloth and flesh. As far as him bleeding out, bear in mind the his size. At an impressive seven feet, he could easily lose a substantial amount of blood (to us) before succumbing to it. And as far as giving the history? That's a cliché found in every horror tale ever worth telling, though I felt this one was executes nicely with several twists I'd never have guessed. So suck it :P