Talk:Hanging Man Hill/@comment-24869113-20140430054306

I though it had a strong beginning, solid middle, but the ending fell a little flat. It felt like you were tying up loose endings, just to tie up loose endings. The marshmallow senctence in the end, while a nice tough to add a momento to remind him of that night, but I wouldn't have added the sentence. Otherwise, it was really wel written, it felt like it could be one of those stories from Scary Stories to Tell in the Dark series. Iw was very enjoyable, and savory in the best way.