Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25587118-20141027072421/@comment-24304936-20141027131653

This is just another cliche "something tapping on my window", "oh no, I'm going insane" story. That compounded with the fact that the story is completely unbelievable. Seriously, I don't get these stories that have these horrible things going on, and the person keeps a journal; shrugging off the events as if a stray dog is repeatedly shitting in their yard. Tapping and puddles of blood? Time to get the f out of Dodge. This story could use an event like that to breathe life into it.

You also have some spelling and punctuation issues, but fixing those won't fix this story.