Talk:Don't Forget Me/@comment-4849011-20150313162407/@comment-4849011-20150314002008

Thinking about it, I do see a potential plot hole. The police blame the narrator for the murder of Beverly and Isaac, but what about Amon? If the police found him dead in the store, and saw the surveillance tape, they'd know that it was one of the girls who'd killed him. That might be a loose end you need to tie up.

On another note, I do like the use of the statue (the one on the way to the store). At first I wondered why it was mentioned, and then I realized that it provided a sense of dread.