Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24859608-20140515170937

I am having writers block, I want to make the ending really scary, because i certantly got the build up for it. But I am not quite sure how to go about it.

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**Continuing from the introduction**

Thursday was just a fun day, I relaxed, slept, and went outside and explored. Then came Friday, the time of flare is estimated to about 8:20 pm. Luckily, I bookmarked the page that updated the flare's status, so I didn't need internet to view it. That's when I noticed something quite peculiar, but miraculous at the same time.

 Friday morning, and I got an app that kept track of the flare. So I didn't need internet.



“''Never Before Seen! Aurora Borealis is expected to reach as far South as Cuba! While Aurora Australis is expected to venture as far north as Jamaica! Possible Hybrid Aurora, Once in a Million, no Billion years does a phenomena happen so godly! Look what Jesus Did!”''



I don't believe it, and I had almost a bad feeling. I guess I was just worried, but I should not be. It's just the closer that clock ticks to 8:20 the more I feel anxious. Not excited, but almost dread. The clock just struck 8:20. I quickly looked out the balcony window, nothing happened. Then scientists confirmed, that the flare hit at 8:22 pm. We didn't believe it, we thought it was a hoax, nothing happened at 8:22. Then the status update, said



“''Scientists have just concluded that we may experience major earthquakes, and lose all power between 8:30 and 8:32. If you haven't felt anything yet, it's because the Sun's light and energy takes 8 minutes to travel. You have about 5 minutes to find some safe ground, please read your earthquake safety manual to know how to prevent a situation.”''

 It pissed me off, it was 8:26, and I had no internet. I couldn't even see the link, I guess with no service, links are just left blank. I bet you there was some good information, and now I have to figure out how to survive this myself. I have experienced worse after all. It would be a difficult task, but I think I can pull it off.

 About 4 minutes later I get another update.

“''1 minute left, and the time is ticking. More and more hazards are being predicted. Anyone within 10 latitude from the equator will be dead almost immediately. The hybrid of the Aurora's magnetic field the poles become stronger, so strong that they will break there path, with the earthquakes most likely destroying...We have a problem”''



One minute later we realized that although the solar flare happened, it was a hoax done by the world leaders. They issued emergency with 2 seconds before informing us it was a practical joke. That was sickening. Although strangely enough, the Auroras did cross. I bet you it looked awesome from space, however, nothing tragic had happened. When they did cross however, it made a ball of the mix from around the world. It was the coolest thing ever.





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