User blog comment:Zeroboy5555/My Stories/@comment-25477067-20170123170049

Hello and welcome! I'll happily give you feedback on your stories, just be sure to post them in the writer's workshop before posting them. Just a small warning, in the future, make a topic for your blog posts, or have a subject that you talk about. Generally blogs should be longer than 4 short sentences. Otherwise, it could be seen as pointsgaming.

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