Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180531153309/@comment-35711173-20180604232236

I am considering restructuring the story to be three parts.

a) The deathbed scene of a narcotics boss.

b) Death and going to where he initially thinks is Heaven

c) The final and very eternal realization at the end.

I think I need that death scene.

I am torn between a North of the Border corporate boss producer of legal narcotics and a South of the Border cartel boss producer of illegal ones.