Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27569420-20170404180556/@comment-27569420-20170420180128

Thanks a lot for reading the story. Looking back, yes, I do think the description of the band was a bit unnecessary. Just what was suggested by others who read the story.

As for killing Taylor and Pringle, the thing is, yes, again, murderous ghosts are cliched. But then again, what I really liked about my story when I read it, was the parallelism it shares with my real life. Basically, I actually have this teacher who gets on my nerves, and I guess I achieved my desire of antagonising her through the story. And that's what exactly most of my friends appreciated when they read the story.

While I do understand that the murderer angle could have been avoided, I would really not like to take out that part, because that is a part I can actually relate to.

I will definitely try to get back on this story, but presently, I'm working on another one. Once that is done, hopefully, I will try to give this story some refining edges. But please, feel free to edit any part of the story you find boring.