Talk:The Couch/@comment-25590507-20141104032959

Ahh, interesting. The blades provide a way to think about how the lady may have died, or even better, that she wanted him to kill himself. Now, the hand itself, can be explained, but it might not always make sense. It was more likely an object that was moved around perfectly by an Animal, but that could be disclosed as you may have not had an animal, or one that small enough anyways.

7/10: The Story could use more suspense, and more information

KEEP WRITING, You'll do good some day