Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25448751-20141001052808/@comment-24381191-20141006131945

There are some tense issues, capitalization issues and some things that don't quite add up. Does breaking your jaw warrant your lips getting sewed together and how does he eat? Also, Charlie just dyes Jack's face for no reason, he's supposed to be a nice guy EXCEPt when he's drunk, right? Other than that, we can't accept this as it follows the Jeff formula.