User blog comment:Creepy Creator/Creepy Creator new pasta/@comment-25052433-20150204223905

Yeah, I am going to have to echo Umbrello here, this one will probably be deleted within an hour.

The biggest flaws that I can see is that you are trying to create an OC with a story built around it, rather than creating a story that showcases an OC.

Also, the very fact that you are basing your OC off of an existing character is going to be seen as a lack of creativity. Make your own original character. Piggybacking off of an existing, popular OC will not get you far on this site.

We are all here to help though, and anyone on this site will be more than happy to assist you with advice for harnessing creativity.