Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20190502213544/@comment-9041013-20190503232556

That's a nice sci-fi story that does use sci fi properly for the horror. The scares are not some crazy aliens but rather real human fears. So good.

I think you missed a word somewhere there "his" and then it trailed off into another part of a sentence.

Also, falling into a black hole would be a really painless death. You either get torn apart before you notice so you won't be able to scream or you just freeze in perpetual darkness where you wouldn't feel anything so again, no screaming in pain.