Talk:The Pastel Man/@comment-24274667-20150619080850

seems like the author accepting his death is too much of a noble ending...

if it was "semantics" that he kills the deal maker and instead just morally destorys him, killing or maiming all his relatives, etc, and it was a suicide note it would be more impactful. Although i dunno it might be too much?

good story tho, suspenceful and certianly interesting.