Talk:An Exorcism of Sorts/@comment-10789912-20160921171854

This story is, simply put, bland. The plot and cliche usage (Super-strength possessed child, role reversal between good and bad) were both, simply put, predictable.

The technical side of this story is where it fails the most. Punctuation issues, especially when ending dialogue, are plentiful. Empy has so graciously given many examples of this, so I will not do so as well. Speaking of dialogue, that was another let down. It felt void. It lacked expression and emotion. The entire story felt monotonous and failed to hit some of the notes I can see you strived for.

In fact, that's the best way I can describe this story. Void of emotion or expression. Monotonous.

The "twist" of Satan and the son of god was at least interesting and broke some of the predictability, but it was very short lived.

5/10- bland.