Talk:Necrosleep/@comment-5239282-20141210021420

The Wikipedia excerpt came off opinionated, nebulous and unfactual. Also, they don't typically use parenthesis. A bit unrealistic. ;p

The entries dragged on after a while, and didn't really add much. You could easily condense them. Also, the ending felt rushed and unsatisfactory, like you resorted to cheap gore just to end it. For instance, I'd have preferred the unique brain parasite approach. You also didn't do much with the occult contexts aside from a few 2spooky face-in-the-darks.

However, the early-to-mid halves were developed really nicely and developed suspense and anticipation. They were really good. Like, really good.

All in all, a sublime buildup and singular premise that gives away to a subpar climax and washout ending. 7/10 I'd reckon.