Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20160818160039/@comment-26444017-20160824015358

So, I decided to come back to this one, and modify it with the intention of eventually posting it. I want to keep the basic idea of a lock and a key, as I intended to put it under the objects category, and I though this would be a good way to do so. Keeping with that, what advice can you give me to make the story better? Anything would be good, really. You said that it would be too abstract for a micropasta, but do you think that adding more detail, or perhaps trying to write it in a different style, like poetry, would help at all?