Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-26399604-20180331140500/@comment-9041013-20180331161749

I don't have any complaints in perticular about the story, so cheers to you, me boy.

Here's what I found hilarious, your xenophobia! Why do you have to portray midwestern/western townsfolk as hicks? "Fulton", really?! Mind you Sawney Beans real first name was Alexander.
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You also missed forgot to type the word "the" in one sentence in the prefinal section, "he grabbed two by the necks"