Talk:Alone in the Darkness/@comment-25941083-20141230093527

This is a pretty good short story. It doesn't really have creepiness to it but more of a unveiling mystery kinda thing. However what let it down was that, when u were starting to talk about how people become monsters, I couldn't really understand how darkness makes them evil. I reckon if you explained the story just a tad more, it would have been a definite 7 or higher/10. Right now I think it should be a 4- 6/10. YES, sometimes U have to leave mystery for the reader to find out what you are really saying, but in this, I don't think a reader would actually be able to find out anything with the given info.