Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26027963-20150509234956/@comment-26027963-20150510020833

EmpyrealInvective wrote: There are still wording issues here. Mainly involving you're=you are and your=possession "Your starting to feel safe", too/to "to fast for me to grab you."

I really feel like this could still be fleshed out some with having the shadow being more threatening/ever-present, but for a micro pasta, it gets its point across. Thanks Emp!