Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-39505261-20190519043249/@comment-9041013-20190519173042

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There isn't much plot here, it's just a bunch of things happening consecutively. It's rushed, it's happening for the sake of happening, at times it defies logic and the laws of nature in a way you shouldn't.

There's some sort of an urban legend about some sort of animal and there's this guy who decides to stop the animal even though said animal if taken into account as a real life animal usually stears away from humans. Yeah, Wolves tend to dislike humans and stay away from them. Now if your OC doesn't believe in the supernatural, getting a flare gun should be enough to deal with a single wolf.

Also, encountering a hellhound and surviving because the plot demands isn't very good.

There's not enough meat on this to make me care about the story as well, give me more details, give me time to build a connection with the characters... give me a reason to invest in this.