Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31073921-20170204180253/@comment-31073921-20170204185427

YawningLion wrote: ThisIsLucid wrote: YawningLion wrote: That...wasn't bad. One thing I'd advise to make the first person part another, smaller paragraph so it stands out more. Also, I'm not sure if this is a creepypasta or a short story, because it's good, but not scary. Alright, well thanks! I'll edit it to make the first person part smaller. And, I can;t really think of what'll be if its not a creepypasta, because after editing it 2-3 times it made me shiver Eh, I guess different strokes for different folks. I can see where the horror might come in, I guess I just personally aren't scared by it. Maybe someone else will feel differently. The real question is if Empy likes it, because if not then its back to the writers block, I mean writing board.