Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25272701-20150221200237/@comment-25148755-20150222020429

I would change a few words: from "my wife has been trying to be very supportive" to "my wife has been trying to be supportive"

"and practice some mediation [sic]" to "and practicing some meditation"

"i'll just wake up a few minutes into the night" to "i'll only/always wake up..."

"I should have listen [sic]" to "i should have listened"

"as i tried to get up" to "as i try to get up"

"wooden bored [sic]" to "wooden board"

"as my eyes adjusted" to "as my eyes adjust"

"pounding on the wooded [sic] door" to "pounding on the wooden door"

"I could barely move given with how little space I had, but I banged my fists until they started bleeding. Tears ran down my eyes and I kept screaming in my prison until I lost my voice." change to present tense "I can barely move given how little space I have, but I bang my fists until they start bleeding.  Tears run down my face and I keep screaming in my prison until I lose my voice."

Hope this helps!