Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10319977-20151014231140/@comment-10319977-20151015004439

I do love that Exam story, however, the same thing that has been said of my stories can be said about it: it doesn't give all the information to the reader. I feel that my pastas are being judged harshly for not spelling everything out, such as with I Slit My Own Throat Once.

That one sentence manages to tell the story of a parasite who is going from person to person, making them kill themselves only to do it again, and not only that, but it's eerie in the sense that the teller of the story is currently infected by the parasite, and therefore it is the parasite talking to you.

I must say, out of all my stories, this is the one I'm most proud of. I honestly feel it's the perfect combination of words for a micropasta.

About A Buffering Movie... I struggled to find the words for this one. I'm not sure what else I could do for it other than try some alternative sentences. I'm not fully sure what you're expecting to see out of it. Since others (admins and regular users alike) enjoyed it I feel it might just be your personal preference.

As far as Grave Robbers goes, I'm willing to remove it if need be, but I think a lot of people miss that this isn't a typical "o no! theres a ghost in my room!!1" story. It reveals that there's actually some creep in the room holding up his mother's corpse.

What of the other stories? Do you approve of them? I haven't heard anyone speak at all about the last two stories.