Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44482918-20200208012805/@comment-36627132-20200208024727

Ninja wolf is tops wrote: Looking for feedback Sometimes it takes a while before someone can look at a story.

That aside, this is just barely a concept with so little detail that it is incoherent. Try posting a story to the workshop next time.

As for the story itself, it is lacking in reason. What is the point of this building? Who made it? And why?

There really isn't anything creepy here. It's just a bundle of non-threatening concepts.