Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30771515-20170214100658/@comment-30771515-20170215052510

Banned In CP wrote: I think that the switch between conversations should be indicated, and some punctuation errors need to be fixed along with smoother dialogue but this is a pretty good pasta I think Can you specify which conversation switch? And can you give an example of smoother dialogue? And thanks, this sub-pasta was created to reinforce its main pasta which is the Bubble Bros