Talk:I Am the One/@comment-23901932-20140619202739

Very good and up-climbing in atmosphere; but suddenly... *POOF* "maybe I am the one who is haunted."

I don't know what that means, but that just shut off all your work... No explanation came up for anything and Alotta Potential stayed in Potential -state. So the Story really sucked in the ending, but was very lovely at the other entirety...