Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32864316-20170815172509/@comment-32864316-20180826145326

Hi, sorry for not giving any updates in almost a year... I have been verry busy with my studies (chemistry) and was unable to fix the story. So instead I asked my english teacher to help me out, so here is the new version. I hope that there are no issues anymore with the story. I now am going to start with making the ending longer if that is still needed ofcourse.