Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26031397-20150122181444/@comment-25226524-20150122183852

You need to break this up into paragraphs before anyone will read it. If you don't know how to edit your post, just say so in a reply and I'll explain it. I can also tell you at a glance that you don't need to put a period after something in quotes. The punctuation goes inside the quotes alone. Also, always use a new line or paragraph when you change between speakers. Do these things first, then maybe some people will be more willing to give it a read. If this is how you submitted it, it's a big part of why it was deleted, but not necessarily the only reason. Good luck.