Talk:50 Foot Ant's First Story/@comment-24817640-20140423223704

This was awesome. I need to read your other stories now. Could have used a little proof-reading to be honest, but something about this just stuck with me. It's so goddamn visceral, and the characters are so real, so intense, so deep. I absolutely love Ant, Bomber and Nagle. I caught myself holding my breath while reading this because it as so suspenseful and raw. 9.9/10 (minus .1 points for seeming like a rough draft.)