Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24797046-20140411023034

I would like feedback, good or bad, and a title suggestion for this story. Thank you!

02:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)02:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)02:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)02:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)02:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)02:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)02:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)02:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)02:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)02:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)02:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)02:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)02:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)02:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)Crazy Whovian (talk)

April 1

Today I was playing minecraft. Then I looked down over a feild. DONT TRY TO HIDE was printed in the ground with red wool. I don't have red wool.

I will find you, hacker!

April 2

Today the words DONT TRY TO HIDE were in my yard. It's like the grass was spray-painted red all of a sudden. Weird. I hope this is some sort of sick joke.

April 3

Today I woke up and everything red in my house was arranged in the words DONT TRY TO HIDE. I am wondering what I shouldn't hide from.

April 4

My clothes have actual blood on them. I'm really freaked out. I mean, what do I do?!

April 5

I am so freaked out! Those words, they are on my wall!

April 5, night

I can't sleep. Those words are everywhere, written in blood, everywhere! What's that shadow...



The last thing the police saw in this journal they found while searching for murder evidence was the words DONT TRY TO HIDE written in blood. 