Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5952769-20171126053731/@comment-5952769-20171208114036

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

I read that succubi were once thought to be the cause of nocturnal emissions. That was the seed of this story. Succubi in folklore weren't tentacle monsters with pheromones, of course, but that's just artistic license.

I'm not sure what you mean by "the pacing and the narrator are very confusing." The story is supposed to be six journal entries posted on social media (I don't know what teenagers use now instead of LiveJournal). Is that the confusing part?