Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25949604-20150330021622/@comment-25000365-20150330112630

It's not terrible. However, for the love of God please be more creative when starting the story. Most stories that start with "I'm about to die" or "I don't know what to do" typically get deleted. Also, your writing could really use some work. If you haven't already, you should check out the writing workshop on this site. It actually has some pretty good advice on writing a good story and basic grammar rules. And the ending is also not too great; you could (this is just an example) maybe have the doctor tell the patient that he did as he's dying or something, but don't make the ending too ambiguous. However, I really like the idea. It's genuinely different than most of the stuff on here. At its current state, 5/10.

P.S. Who would put Ethylene Glycol into pill form?