Talk:Things in the Woods/@comment-26444017-20180809000856/@comment-6822927-20180809002515

I deliberately made an effort not to describe the beings, because I love letting people use their imagination for a story to make it really scary. But in hindsight, I forgot to add a reason why the narrator didn't describe them.

The story mainly takes inspiration from old folklore about the Fey. It was going to be about the melon heads but I changed it midway.

I agree I could review it again and see what could be fixed up, then published an updated version.