Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34596229-20180328131831/@comment-34596229-20180403083415

Kolpik wrote: I enjoyed this. A mother's blind devotion to her child. I found this comedic, topical, and frightening. Examples of parents enabling their kids can be found everyday. The results aren't usually on level with unleashing the Anti-Christ upon the world, but the behavior does trickle into society's water supply, so to speak.

The last line (other than the typo or whatever in the beginning) is great. The mother still doesn't really seem to get it. It read to me like she's sad that her son has grown up and won't need her anymore. I do think you should consider changing the title or the child's name. Maybe it's just me, but it seems a little... off (yeah, I'll go with that). I hope to see this on the site soon. Wow, you just nailed it. This was exactly what I wanted to convey through this pasta. I agree, the name does sound a bit off now that I think about it. I'll come up with something. Thanks for reviewing it. Appreciate your feedback. :)