Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37810803-20181231231243/@comment-35711173-20190101171059

Ned,

It sounds to me like a nightmare written up. They almost never work as a pasta because the brain in a dream state makes associations that don't work in the waking state. That's why the whole thing doesn't make sense.

Could some elements be extracted and then built upon? Probably, but this is would have to be considered just as source material for constructing a new entity.

Dr. Bob