Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20170819212316/@comment-4893169-20170824195220

''ChristianWallis wrote:

''To Raidra--I've been meaning to do another blog and that might work. If I was going to do it though I'd do it on sentence structure as a whole which I need to read up more on.''

Also @mmpratt, I'll try to get around to reviewing your new draft this weekend (it's a bank holiday in the uk) but it's been a busy week.

Okay, I'm going to go ahead and follow Raidra's advice of changing the opening a little so it's Natalie's friends being whacked into of her family.

Happy Bank Holiday to you!