Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20151210060738/@comment-26475800-20151216052254

Thank you guys for your feed back. I will be reworking this and editing it before too long. There is a lot of work that needs to be done with it, as you have pointed out, and there were things which I had started to think about the day after I put it here. So, I will fix it up and add a bit of things that weren't really in the story before to make it a better read.