Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20160209052643/@comment-26326346-20160209224209

Thank you! I'm happy that you enjoyed it :)

I meant for Percy to be a surprise and I tried to establish some history between them with their lengthy conversation after he showed up. That said, I could do a flashback sequence as I had a date made up for when he met Percy and took him under his wing, but I'd probably end up placing it after it is revealed who Percy is so that the twist isn't lost and seen coming a mile away, unless I can think of another way to do it, while preserving the twist.

Good idea! I have some ways I can elaborate on Abraham, so as to avoid confusion.

Thank you for all the corrections and feedback. Your feedback is valued and appreciated. I'm getting ready to head out the door, so it'll be a while before I can make the corrections and dress up the story a bit more. Thanks again :D