Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25535144-20141013223937/@comment-25425104-20141014023145

In the forth paragraph this contradicts itself, "Summer went by quick, and I left for university tomorrow". I really enjoyed this and think it would be a top notch Creepy Pasta, However, I think detail can be added as to how the basement was the school house, and not the top floor? Wonderfully written, I can't say anything more, besides that I loved it! 10/10