Talk:The Cabin with the Red Light/@comment-35711173-20190401230931

I have to ask, had one what after all? At that point, I'm not even sure which "he" she is talking about.

I generally enjoyed it. The tone is VERY feminine. That goes fine with the contents, but there's this intangible that says that it wasn't a guy that wrote it.

You have a number of "minor" issues in your use of English. Like birdshot, a lot of little things can make distinct holes. Spelling, tense, grammar, punctuation, missing commas, etc. Perhaps two dozen. I suggest a pass with http://www.grammarly.com.

I suggest reading it out loud to yourself a few times. I think you will find some places that need a bit of polishing.

I'm not sure on the case of "with" in your title. I follow AP guidelines. They say it should be capitalized, as does the New York Times and the APA. The Chicago Tribune and the APA say it shouldn't.