Talk:The Cell Phone Game/@comment-25969533-20150105035531

Predictable for Steph, overall i loved the twist for Rottenbatcher ;). Well written, but i got confused at the protective item parts, a little fix?...

Was expecting the ending to end with a "Welcome to the game." On Jack's phone ;), with one of his friends tagging him. (While still alive, and Jack not informed.) However the twist was far better than my idea ^-^.

7/10