Talk:The Other Network/@comment-26525922-20150624162551/@comment-3581271-20160703002027

And despite those errors in technology, it is still better than most creepypastas. I would agree more with removing those sentences as opposed to over-editing it to correct the problems. Adding all that fluff would just drag it down, make it longer than necessary. We're here for a story, not to study for school.