Talk:Happy Sun Daycare/@comment-26412026-20150518164508

 This was stupid.... There was nothing creepy about this story at all. It was not well written and it uses some boring clichés. As soon as a dog was mentioned in the first few paragraphs I knew it was going to be about a werewolf. It's also clear that some of the commenters didn't even read the whole story.

 The janitor was a werewolf and his aunt made him a special medicine to keep him from turning into one. When she ran out of the ingredients he would turn and they would put him in the "grey door room" (insipid name).

 Several entire paragraphs should be taken out of this story. They are nothing but meaningless filler and do not help the story at all.

 There are so many holes in this story like: Why did the daycare workers feel the need to throw a child to the wolf after only a tantrum or minor fight? Were they really that nasty? Why didn't the wolf kill them? Why didn't the kids tell their parents?

 The final line of this story is boring, ineffective, and completely unnecessary.

 2/10 maximum, and that’s being very kind.