Talk:Nemo/@comment-26391779-20170107205402/@comment-5109976-20170107211542

Thank you so much! I really felt it when I wrote this piece, unlike the other ones I've done so far. You're on point about the ending feeling rushed - it wasn't, but I never got it to convey quite what I had in mind. At some point I want to come back and give it a really solid edit, but I have other projects that I'm currently working on, and this one still feels good as it is.