Talk:TV/@comment-27553469-20160224182400

The story has an interesting hook at first. Kind of overrated toll to it though, as many are comparing it to Candle Cove. Not only that, but you seemed to have an error in your story. You'd claimed that the children affected were 5-12 years old. Then, we focus on a boy two years over that limit being exposed to the nasty effects of the box. I'd recommend you change that in the story. Maybe it effects children 5-12, AND young teens 13-15?