Talk:The Figure of Porthleven/@comment-8818633-20141005190651

This is just my opinion, but there isn't really much meat in the story. Like, there needs to be more. I'm not going to sugercoat this. This needs more story, it is not scary or mildly eery. I'll try and explain. From what I get, some guy felt like he was being watched but it was really a dream but he woke up and was being watched by what was in his dream? It would have been scarier if there was more 'meat'. Try better next time!