Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180915161121/@comment-36393004-20180918120520

Jdeschene wrote: I like it. It does feel like it rambles a bit and doesn't really have an ending. I'd also like it to be a bit more immersive than just telling us what happens. Still, I really enjoyed how clearly you thought about this. The narrator's character came thre really clearly. Fun read. :-) Thank you, probably going to completely rewrite this but I wanted to get the idea out of my head before it drove me crazy. I'm weird like that...