Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28718262-20161127124636/@comment-25941663-20161202103011

"and see they scrambling from tree to tree" - It's 'them' instead of 'they'.

"a small grove of trees is home to the whines and whistles of the wind." - This is a beautiful sentence. Well done.

"may come closer to where your weak" - It's "you're" instead of "your".

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This was a very lyrical story, with beautiful descriptive work. It is not very creepy or scary, but it was enjoyable nevertheless and it has a certain "aura" around it, something very rare. The vivid descriptions give this a character, and basically carry the story.

One other note, the first paragraph is centered. You should align it with the rest of the story.

Other than that, it is good. Feel free to post it on the wiki. Well done.