Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35973449-20180625160812/@comment-35911608-20180626192400

Ahh, good old shadow people, my childhood friends.

This was alright. It was an interesting premise, but it doesn't feel quite complete yet. I don't know how to put it exactly, it just feels like I'm missing some information that seems important to either making me scared or helping me understand the story. Keep working on it though.