Talk:Cry Baby Lane/@comment-29269864-20160808095519

"The pupils were completely black. The rest of the eye was normal."

There are far more substantial criticisms of both the narrative and the writing but I think they've pretty much been covered and this honestly threw me out of the story the most. Like... mate... all pupils are completely black. That's what the pupil is, it's the black part in the center of the eye. Alright, maybe they meant iris, but even then having eyes that are such a dark brown they look basically black really isn't uncommon.

I just... this story just tried to freak me out by describing a pare of perectly normal eyes and I'm finding it funnier than I probably should.