Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28088262-20140705101316/@comment-28088262-20140705142138

Yeah, I think I tried to hint it as best as I could at the beginning rather than at the end by saying 'I know it works,' and so it wouldn't sound forced...and the 'ill health' thing too.

How would you suggest making it clearer? Can't really think of any other ways I could do it without making the whole thing lame...help me plz