Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25308679-20160704223755

This is a link to a story I wrote some years ago in a writing workshop class and posted on my Deviant Art page (I never go there any more, if you're wondering) and was wondering if anyone had some new drafting ideas before I submit it to this Creepypasta wiki. My initial thought was to add some more historical examples of dopplegangers, according to the rule of three maybe?

I also posted here before asking if anyone would be interested with the subject matter, but I didn't come back for some time and I have no idea where that discussion I started is.

Does anyone think this could be a good pasta? 