Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27012445-20180619163716/@comment-27012445-20180619193142

Thanks for the feedback. There is actually a story on why i particularly wanted some Spanish in it. I used to have lunch with my grandma every Wednesday. She would tell me stories from when she was a little girl including these old scary Mexican folktales. That is how i came up with the concept but I didn't finish it until yesterday. She was fluent in Spanish and would have loved this story. Unfortunately she passed away this past February and I didn't get a chance to give it her, but I wanted to finish it anyways. Having said that, I think your right. I don't like the flow at certain parts,but since this story is for her and something we created together, I can't remove the Spanish entirely. I hope that makes sense. She was always my biggest fan