Talk:Link's Awakening/@comment-25471033-20180713195321

This one was really good. I liked how it didn't mention or give the hint that the game is probably haunted, and it's just some twisted person who simply hacked it to scare the shit out of you. I also like how you wrapped it up, it didn't seem rushed at all, and the amount of detail you used was perfect, it gave a picture, but it wasn't a wall of text describing a room. The only possible thing I could see is fragmented sentences, maybe combining a couple by using the right words. 9/10