Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27838637-20160426151716/@comment-25569708-20160515071324

Congratulations! It looks good, except you just might want to put the "BANG!"s in italics, as well as what the signs say. Also, I noticed that Mr. Tyrell says "I don’t give a flying aeroplane if this Standard English, Advanced English...". Did you mean to include an "is" after "this"? It may be a good addition. And now that I think about it, the C.A.R.E.F.U.L. rules should probably be italicized too.

The admins seem to be a little occupied tonight/today, but I'm pretty sure your story will be accepted just the same when they return. Good luck!