Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10319977-20141226134502/@comment-26113663-20150131041823

ColorlessAngelz wrote: Due to my impatience as well as lack of feedback, I'm going to go ahead and try uploading my previously mentioned micropasta (with some modifications).

In the meantime, I'd like critique on this new micropasta that I've quickly whipped up:

"Many people call me crazy, but you know what I say to them? At least I didn't die by the hands of a schizophrenic."

This one partially seems like a joke, so I'd like a second opinion or two.

Edit: Sorry, but my impatience is kicking in. Seeing as how I've gotten no critique on my last pasta attempt and appear to be on this site at the deadest time, I'm going to post both and see if they qualify for the site. Still, I'd like critique. Okay, I'll be honest, that look's like a big joke.

About your previous micropasta:

No need to worry about deletion, it's a very genuine micropasta. I'm sure that it will not be marked as a spam.