Talk:The Smiling Man/@comment-29249491-20160724060425/@comment-29326682-20160727203537

In the beginning, I didn't want to read this, but it does certainly point out several mistakes in the creepypasta. After reading your comment, I reread the story, and the 'very's' got annoying as well. Besides, it got a little less scary, though not entirely. Haha, how long did this take of your time? Damn.