Talk:The Russian Sleep Experiment/@comment-5614678-20170125002812

The various spelling/grammar errors kinda took me out of it, and the rushed/simplistic prose didn't help. The ending was hokey.

But there are elements of this story I really, really like. I like that it's a historical piece, I like the weird government experiment stuff, I like the tone, the style and even the gore. It just needed some polishing.

Maybe that Novella adaptation address my issues.