Talk:The Puppetmaster's Regime/@comment-26536319-20150815012719

Now, this was a great story, but one detail in there kind of shattered my willing suspension of disbelief. One of the testimonies (Billy's, I think) mentions that he saw the musical version of Carrie several years after seeing The Puppetmaster's Regime. It's stated that the Puppetmaster play was done in 1934, and Carrie wasn't a musical until 1988... that's not several years later, that's over half a century later. If you want the story to seem more plausible, because you did an excellent job of making it seem that way otherwise, I recommend you edit that detail. Overall I'd give this an 8/10, even with the error, but it'd be a 10/10 if it were fixed.