Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36012429-20181019074237/@comment-9041013-20181020194951

SpiritVoices wrote: Oh, good! :D Yes, I like to pay special attention to rhythm— I was worried it just didn’t translate.

Does this change anything in terms of correction, then? I was thinking of narrating it as a backup but I’d like to make it as good as I can. Well, reading it outloud makes it a lot better and things are rhyming in ummm similar sounding none rhyming words... which is common in songs rather than poetry, but still works.

I don't know... I guess it's good to go!

(maybe like add a notice that it has to be read outloud when it goes on the main site :P)