Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25380741-20141119031023/@comment-25477067-20141119174737

Zach and Seth seem to switch attitudes midway through. The descending dots are uneccesary, although you should do something like it. Tenses are a minor matter  but I did catch a few wrongly places tenses, such as have instead of had.Other than that, all of it is pretty good.