Talk:It's Gone Now/@comment-29326682-20160918195410

I don't necessarily like this. The idea is pretty weak, lacks thought, horrible writing, and way too much cursion. As the reader, it wasn't as intriguing as I thought it might be. The ending is trash, and not to be harsh or anything, needs to be rewritten. I didn't understand a single thing happening, besides the fact that there is this "creature" banging at your door, which is the equivalence of way too little details and descriptions. Can use some work as a story.