Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24918243-20140521180447/@comment-9967354-20140522064400

This story was pretty damned good, to say in the least. I love the fact that I can picture it, even without your describing too much -that just gets boring. You've managed to take the important and interesting parts of the scene and enhance just those, and it's somethig I can almost ~connect with~. Also the but where this monster walks in like a normal person was terribly intriguing.

The ending was short and to-the-point, just like the story. You've obviously got a knack for story telling, and I'd love to read more.