Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20180724081137/@comment-9041013-20180724085256

DrBobSmith wrote: You have creepiness, horror and disembowelment. All very good things in a Creepypasta.

It is late here. I don't see anything obvious to complain about. It's your best work that I have read. The truest terror isn't from monsters but ordinary people. I used a combination of the checker apps you suggest for people to use. Pretty useful.

Here's the thing though, I know that the truest terror is in ordinary people, but have you read for example my Sorry, Love, But You Are Going to Die? That is a hundred percent possible scenario for someone to go through. Compared to the one here, it's miles ahead in my mind.

Thanks for taking a look at it though anyway.

Maybe someone else will find something off with it to help me fix it and get rid of this doubt. I'll wait a bit more with this.