Talk:Pokémon Black/@comment-32883458-20170726170633

If this was a beginners creepypasta, then its a four out of ten. Good try, but really just one cliche. And you could have just picked another starters.

If this was a seasond creepypasta writer, then it would be 1/10. Boringgggg. You didnt even make it suspenseful. You were so frank. Really!