Talk:Crime Scene Photos/@comment-26112985-20150410222528

Good job Rinskuro, this story was not predictable at all and had a nice little twist and the end. I was also impressed that you went and got real photos to put in the pasta. My complaints, on the other hand, are this. Some of the conversations seem a bit off, and I can't help but question how the leather jacket could prove that adam was the murderer.

Overall- 7/10 (well done)