Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35515534-20190605053523/@comment-35515534-20190607145459

TheDarkCat97 wrote: I have mixed thoughts about this story, I'm not going to lie. But I feel like it's way too short. And the protagonist killing the monster? *Slowly applauds* Good job. G-Good job, you didn't let the monster attack the protagonist like many other CreepyPastas tend to go out. Good job you get a medal for that.

But anyway, I just... I just don't know to be honest. I feel like going "What the fuck?" and shaking my head at this. But... I don't know. Another draft is in the works, and I'm spending more time on it then I did on this.