Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20150521160433/@comment-4893169-20150527224010

Thank. I really appreciate this critique. The jump scare aspect just you mentioned seems rather like a cliche, especially when the monster turns out to be something harmless like a cat. I poked some fun at that in the recent add-on to this story, and you're also quite right about the difficult challenges that come with writing something as long and involved like this. It's even more complex than the previous sequel to this because there's more than one character now and they each have their own personality, including the monster which has a sort of Dissociative Identity Disorder, kind of like The Thing in that John Carpenter's movie.