Talk:Nana Razor/@comment-25091096-20140628053310

Sorry for posting this late. I had some technical difficulties with the computer all day.

This was a really good read. I am most impressed by how you described the abuse from a child's point of view. You have a real talent for wtiting from a child's perspective. Even though there weren't any detailed descriptions, you still managed to get the point across quite effectively. It's very heart-breaking ( I have a real soft spot for children, especially the abused). So needless to say, I was rooting for Ally from the get-go.

A creepypasta monster that actually has a heart... AND also strangely likable. You really don't see that everyday. The nursey rhyme being made from scratch puts a nice touch on it too. The whole concept with the teacup gets points for originality. At this point, I'm pretty sure it would be a cold day in hell before I see a cliche written by you. Keep it up.

God, how dare you leave Ally off on a bittersweet ending like that? I don't know whether to feel happy or not that Ally is in a "better place". Toying with my heart, man. How dare you?

The revelation of Robyn actually being a subordinate of Nana Razor, nice little twist to keep the adults with especially less than pure intentions in check.

This wasn't the scariest story (I was mostly happy that Nana Razor was giving the dad the works), but that does not change the fact that this was a good pasta. Nice job and thanks for notifying me to read this.