Talk:The Curious Case of Rupert/@comment-25326117-20160603002952

1) He kicked, whined, spat, and would never sit still long enough to be easily fed by his mother.

(I changed the word spit to spat since the sentence seems to be past tense).

2) She felt worried that he might have ran off and perhaps gotten lost, but just then, she heard a rustle of leaves in the forest next to her.

(I changed run to ran since it's past tense for run and the sentence takes place in the past, right?)

3) The helper wanted to get out of the house altogether after that. It was starting to get dark, and she did not want to be asleep with Rupert in the next room after that experience.

(I added to since the sentence didn't make any sense without it).

4) The night dragged on, and the noise was gone for some time.

(I deleted a since I didn't see the need for it in this sentence).

(Overall, it's pretty good.  It makes you wonder why Rupert snap.  Was he really doing all of this or was something possessing him?  Did he kill his caregiver?)