Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27726836-20160511005750

So my story was deleted(My computer cut off the storys beginning and middle also it didn't meet a few quality standards)... So i have to rewrite the beggining and middle... i have 2 ideas for a beggining which should i use? (No this is not a genetic experiment creepypasta)     I woke up in a strange white room, a window was above a blue bed with one pillow and white sheeting. Next to the bed was a nightstand with flowers and pills. "Beep......Beep.......Beep....Beep Beep!" Went some kind of machine my heart was pounding that sound gave me a fright. I looked around me, Arthur my best friend and little brother was lying on a long grey couch next to a nurse? I realized i was in a hospital. Where is my brother, Henry? I tried to get up and look for Henry but i fell, as i fell the machine beeped faster and faster. "Beep......Beep...Beep..Beep. Beep Beep Beep Beep-" I was caught before I fell. "Back to sleep child.." A old man said and injected a sleeping medicine into my arm. V.S I woke up to a strange constant beep, i looked around and knowticed I was in a white room with a plain bed and a nightstand with flowers and pills on it. "Where am I? " I thought to myself. Suddenly a child with blond hair,green eyes,blue jeans, and a green shirt with a picture of Mario on it came running at me. "Arthur! Your awake!" The kid yelled cheerfully I recognized them as Henry my brother. I realized i was in a hospital after Henry's remark. "Why am i in a Hospital?" I asked. "Arthur... Don't you remember?" Henry said with a grim look on his face. I knowticed there was ash in Henry's hair a odd detail. Henry started crying. "Henry... Why are we in a hospital." I asked again.  