Talk:Heartless Hailey/@comment-30664473-20170314123809

Its a damn good story. The only problem i might have is the part about her reading a random article and losing her heart because of it. It just feels a bit random that this whole time the reason for turning into sociopath is because she read a random article and the nature of the cause meant that it was very hard to really tease or hint at such a cause. I really like the subject nature though and you can really feel(ironically) Hailey's character in the sense that her motivations are fleshed out and intriguing nonetheless. I don't believe im exaggerating when I say this but Heartless Hailey might be my favourite character out of all the characters from the creepypastas I've read so far.