Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29015383-20160810144309/@comment-25226524-20160812143819

I'm a bit torn on the new paragraph, but I can't really say it hurts anything. This time around, I realized I gave some incorrect advice on what I perceived as a tense issue, but you must have known my mind was off because you left it as it "was". You can upload this whenever you want.