Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26333177-20150422164741

I'm not the best at writing but I thought I'd give it a go. The first creepy pasta I posted on here I wasn't too happy with, but I didn't think it was that bad. It ended up being deleted almost straight away. Underscorre, are there any basic changes that I can make to get it undeleted or was it just not good enough?  