Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25941663-20150307112211/@comment-24976741-20150307151014

I think you did a good job in both a horror and comical way. I think it pretty funny at the end note, it shows a real example of a story that someone else is tell, it's like storyception. Not really that many problems that I can say about it.

I do have to say that I liked how you change the line in the first story of joggers going missing into this "Inexplicably, people gradually stopped going there. All the better for Mike, who now can jog in peace." It's less suspisous and more reasonable for mike to start jogging there.

There were some problems with need of commas, just like one or two, but other than that, ya I think your set.