Talk:Eleanor

Awesome. It was a little obvious when her first topic of conversation was food, but plot prediction varies from reader to reader. I was disappointed that the recursing nature of the exposition didn't go anywhere; it was a neat touch, establishing a few remembered facts and repeating them with progressively more detail. It hinted toward mental sickness - but, obviously, didn't lead there. Consider using that technique in future stories! =D Javer80 03:37, December 26, 2011 (UTC)