Talk:To the Moon/@comment-26030957-20150725222945/@comment-26475800-20150726005411

I was under the impression that most people don't want to read long pastas. This is also one of the reasons I have been writing a lot shorter than I normally do. I want people to read what I write and because of that I have shorted my stories and in doing so left out somethings that shouldn't have been left out, most of the time it is the development of my characters, which is one of the thing I can omit while still keeping a story rather scary.

Thanks for the advice, I will take off the not at the top of the page and may even do some editing, but that won't happen today.