Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25763427-20150416210004/@comment-25763427-20150418042538

SmileyShoes wrote: SmileyShoes wrote: Beetle bub wrote: SmileyShoes wrote: The only thing i can really say is that: It's okay. You should publish it, it isn't pefect or anything. It's sorta a grey area for me! If its mediocire then should I add more? Try to add some more distrubing imagery or bilud up, I'm fien with just publishing it, but I don't want it to bore anyone. Also, if you have a better idea for a title then I would love to hear it. I'll publish it tommrrow otherwise. Thankk you for the feedback! Sure, i'll give you a new title! It will called "What happends to abandoned homes" Or just plain "Abandoned" if that's alright with you

That title doesn't make much sense in context to the story.