Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26466555-20150607220808/@comment-26460235-20150612052950

This does move quite fast, and the characters do need work. Specifically the teacher could be flushed out more. You don't necessarily need to write a thousand words about the guy's backstory but you could use that phone call to give him more personality. The way he describes the "cool kids" also sounds a little silly and more like the perspective of a student than a teacher. I understand that the guy doesn't like those kids and you could flush them out by changing those descriptions into specifics instances where they got on his nerves and such. I hope this is helpful and I'd like to see what you can come up with.