Talk:Unknowable/@comment-24663162-20150405052126

The fluency with which you write is fantastic. Absolutely glued to the story every moment. One miniscule point is that there were a few unnecessary commas. Replaced with and, or, a colon, semicolon, or not there whatsoever, this would have been wondrous.

9.5 Supine (A word that I had to look up, to my chagrin.) Figures/10