Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36157947-20180711195127/@comment-9041013-20180712103146

"We thought we knew everything_of course we did, we were young enough. Anyways, I- Martin Erikssön; and my brother Tyler, were lying about on a Saturday, twelve past noon; when our mom ragged on us for having'no ambition', I"  I quit reading after this, you have to make so many styling and formating issues to fix as a starter. After that, you'll have to probably fix the story itself as well, I guess, looking at the comments were left here.