Talk:NoEnd House 3/@comment-33473741-20171025004718

I feel as though most of these negative comments are right as far as critique and u should probably follow them to better this creepypasta or use it for the next part *if u make the next part. And finally, as just a piece of "friendly" critique, I like the girl however, she kind of made the creepypasta less frightening and consequently gave relief of that edge of your seat feeling which I think a creepypasta should always have. Although the addition of this new character is quite nice and interesting it would be more scary and interesting if u left it without an explanation for the house. Other than that this creepypasta was amazing; gave me chills *kinda kept me up at night*.