Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-7673575-20180403225507/@comment-9041013-20180403231857

"best thing about them" really? really? REALLY? Come on, you could do better than to mess up plurals.

Kill the "insert username here" and just make it a one sided dialogue, a genuine one.

As for the piece itself, it's like dark humor right? well, it's too dry for me. Honestly, you've had better works, brother, I'm starting to think you're becoming a Croat.