Talk:Fifty More Shades of Darkness/@comment-4849011-20161214005226

It's cool how the frame story (I apologize if I've used the wrong term) both connected the two-sentence stories and connected to some of your other stories. The descriptions of the old sewing machine and the souvenir "mermaid" brought back memories of things I've seen and/or read about. I also loved terms such as "hardly enough to dust a fiddle", the idea of a parrot family having a nautical history, and the descriptions of the pictures of the growing parrot brothers. As for the actual stories, these were worthy successors to those found in the original. One of my favorites was number 23. I noticed that there was no 39. Each of these pastas has a missing story; were the prologues the missing stories? Either way, the creepy ending was great. This is another great one!