Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26268104-20160224211827/@comment-24101790-20160224213352

Creeper50 wrote: I was trying to imply that the kid turned into a rat from being bitten by one. Anyway, thanks for your critique. How can I imply that he was turned into a rat without outright saying what happened to the poor kid?

I'm sorry but I didn't even get that you were implying he was turned into a rat. This type of premise needs to be fleshed out into an actual story as there are little to no ways to connect the two in a few sentences.