Talk:My Last Halloween/@comment-5733573-20181018210013

I hate to be the wet blanket, but I think this story could be stronger. I didn't really find it scary and some of the execution is in need of a polish. Unfortunately, even if you cleaned up the execution, there still wouldn't really be enough of a story here. This is of course my opinion, and so take it as you will. Cograts on the narrations, in any case!