Talk:The Nice Guy/@comment-25881926-20141219014433

This is one of the better creepypastas I've read. It was an extremely original concept, and it kept my attention the whole way through. I could see everything happening in my mind.

I'd like to point out that there were a few typos and one instance where you swapped tense. The way you had the man telling the news story speak was a little formal for a normal person, but I understand why you had to do it that way, and it really didn't detract from the story too much.

7.5/10