Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25825682-20150408043526/@comment-25825682-20150416131026

CrazyWords wrote: Terror Beneath Review Part 3

I read the whole thing, and saw the usual stuff, punctuation, and a little bit of spelling. One plot hole: How can something with no hands text? With Arnold it didn't have hands, with Alex it didn't, but it left a hand print. So there's that.

Other wise, I love it. I think you should have chapters though, just to help with the organizing.

Please send me part two when it's done!

--Welcome One And All! 12:53, April 16, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords Chapters sound like a good idea, and for the plot hole I covered that in the second half.

When I get a better writing program or new computer, which ever is first I'll post part 2 for you.

Your reviews helped me a lot. I'll work on the punctuation errors and finishing part 2 in the meantime. Thanks for the time and the help!