Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28229401-20160417195512/@comment-28229401-20160421023059

Unfortunately did it end up going into that cliche with the demon. Certainly,  that I could stand the rewrite.

I actually wanted the stranger to have that "fall from grace" because everyone has their limitation and I wanted to explore that in terms of writing out this story. However, yes you do have an excellent point of having the guardians making the townsfolk have a ill fate due to the rest of the Guardians, I wasn't about going into that direction, I wanted to focus more one statue that was crafted in the forrest. I didn't want the entire town to suffer an ill fate. THOUGH, if they all did suffer from a fate save for a few the story could take another wonderful direction than what was laid out.

Thank you so much for you review, if you have anything else to add please let me know!