Talk:Sheltered Life/@comment-25941663-20150209092000

From the moment I saw who the author was, I was sure this would be a hell of a read. But I have to say, I certainly didn't expect it to be that good. It is ridiculous that you managed to write that in less than 24 hours.

I loved how you didn't tell us anything about how the story ends, but instead you showed us. Many writers (myself included) forget that the best way to deliver a story is by showing. And show us you did!

This is one of my favourite stories. The writing and atmosphere were perfect. You nailed this, well done.