Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20160413174929/@comment-4893169-20160426052206

You're welcome Raidra and thank you for the further feedback. I find that hard to believe that there are people that think that lightning bugs are not real. Where do they live...the city?

Also I'm going to leave Ralphie ignorant of real life vampires since his parents are rather protective.

Do you agree with Mr. Dupin's comment that the characters's train of thought should be trimmed?