Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25383866-20141223201119/@comment-3999760-20141223232943

I like it. The story so far is very descriptive and has a good build up going for it. There are no grammatical errors I've caught, and the story seems to have a fluid progression. This is a great introduction, but can't judge it fully because it is unfinished. I wonder where the story could go from here, because it could go in many directions, and that is the main challenge I see here.