Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28607815-20160604093132/@comment-28607815-20160607064227

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I thought it didn't work as a standalone story as well. It was just something I wrote for fun while working on the other stories. Maybe I'll rewrite this into an actually story in the future. Rhyming isn't my strongest, so I guess it would be noticeably repetitive. I'll do better next time.