Talk:The Expressionless/@comment-33762406-20171125093018

Please don't tell me anyone ACTUALLY found this creepy.

The photo provided was unnerving and if the story ended at the 3rd paragraph (or rather if they added more detail about how creepy she looked before her walking out, maybe a story about a murder by a mannequin showing up in the newspaper a few weeks later) it would have been at worst disturbing and at best bed wetting, but they over did it so f***ing much that anything from it that was ever creepy became cringe worthy. Not only that but everyone praising the writing obviously had never read a book past grade 5 level. It's poorly written even for an internet story. Seriously.

I can imagine finding this scary back when I was 10 and believed every "repost or you'll die tonight" thing I saw. And the "I am God" line did nothing but remind me of "Who was phone" and "And then a skeleton popped out".

I'd have to give this a 1.4/10, and only a score that high for it's potential. A ruined potential.