Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29270351-20160610104449/@comment-28266772-20160613111725

So I can't see any more particular issues that I would recommend fixing. I suggest you either contact an admin directly on their talk page and ask them for feedback on this thread, or try submitting the story. However, I don't know whether they'd actually accept the story, because it's up to them. If you have previously tried submitting this story you would need to go to deletion appeal and put a link to this thread and highlight how you've improved the story.

If you would like to know more about submitting a story there are a lot of guides, but these are my recommendations.

- When you go to the site and click contribute, go to source (not visual) editor, then do your pasting.

- Put this story into MS word and remove all formatting so that it's just plain text. Then go through and insert paragraphs with two line breaks. You need to do this because when you paste form MS word into the source editor it removes one line break, and creates a giant wall of text. By adding two line breaks in MS word, you make sure there will be one line break still intact when you paste into the source editor.

That should resolve formatting issues. Remember though, only do this if you haven't already tried submitting this story. And if you do submit it, know that there's no guarantee the admins will accept it.