Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25945479-20150102012649/@comment-25945479-20150102071605

Lusium wrote: Personally, I enjoyed this little entry. Especially the paragraph about the creature. Though I would have liked a little more detail about what Chris looked like after his apparent death. (like what condition it was in, were limbs missing, what looked to have happened pretty much)

In all, I give this a 8.9/10

Thank you. Please take a look at my page, this is part of a series I have been working on for some years. For my original entry on the creature himself please refer to 'Death' which was the original 'evidence' of this creature that intrigued our narrator Chris. Both stories have been published and can be found on my page.

Perhaps when I make the final installment I'll give you exactly what you're looking for, hm?

Keep it up!