Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26694342-20150715012527/@comment-26694342-20150718152448

Not So Quicksword Irene wrote: As Empy stated many of the problems with the story and you asked "so someone else did this story?." What he meant by that is the stories premise has been covered multiple times, making the whole plot cliched in almost every sense of the word. Most gaming creepypastas follow the same format, player buys a game, it's haunted there is typically blood/gore thrown in, ghost/monster comes out of game, and finally the player dies in the end. I suggest you redo this story and make it longer so it's not as rushed, use spell check or have someone proof read it for you, and finally add something special and unique into the story that every other gaming creepypasta doesn't have. the player does not die in the end and i will make sure the next time i write a creepypasta i will proof read it