Talk:Exhausted/@comment-PixCity-20161009030849/@comment-Anarchic Operations-20161020085001

Thankyou for reading and enjoying this story! It's good to see that the whole diary-entry format worked well, as I was originally going to write this in the same first-person narrative I usually write in. I was also a bit worried about the car and whether it would come across as scary or ridiculous. I think it came across as a bit of both and to be honest I'm pretty happy with that outcome.

Thanks for clearing up that spelling error. As for Keith remembering everything so vividly, I suppose it is more a matter of how such a horrifying event has stuck with him to the point he remembers it like yesterday.

Once again thankyou for the review!