Talk:The Darkest Shadow/@comment-24921048-20160708230735/@comment-26439792-20160715134213

Yeah at points he just ripped off Ben Drowned. I believe it's ok to draw inspiration from someone else's work (that's how Christopher Paolini started), but litteraly using the exact same words ruins this story's paper thin plot. To author: it's a good idea to try not to be vague when writing something. If you pack inspiration, try reading a book/story of the genre to get done help, but try to focus on the way the story is written, not what it says, as then you will have trouble explaining what you want without using another persons words. 5/10, try making characters not overreact that much (e.g. Cashier from store)