Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24410994-20140521140953/@comment-15152248-20140819040118

I liked the pasta and I didnt. It was I guess original so I liked that but other than that it sucked. And I know sucky pastas. Mine suck. I can't write anything scary or intense but I think mine work is better that that. It may have been one of my first pastas but it was awful. The only thing that remotely scared me was the "I am God" picture. Now that I look back o that I want to punch my past self for even finding that scary.

But I do have to say this. If the creator of the pasta went back and revised it. Spiced up the wording, got rid of some of the gore, it could become a pretty could pasta. They'd have to change the ending though cause god all mighty that was retarded.

As the pasta currently stands, its retarded, and should be either scrapped or revised. Also I still stand at my comment before. Sonic is more scary than Sonic.exe. Period. Until that idiot is revised into something decent he will be lower than Tails are the scare scale. One he passes Amy the I will deem him scary but that will never happen.