Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20170322074930/@comment-26326346-20170331070526

Thanks all! Okay, I decided to remove the smilies all together. I also chopped down the third paragraph a little bit in an attempt to make it flow more smoothly (it was hard to choose between two differing pieces of advice: "Make it longer" or "It is ranty, cut down on that". I opted for the second as I don't yet see a way to extend the pasta; both are certainly possible tho).

I'm going to let this sit a little bit more and perhaps wait until I have more feedback and move on from there, as I am still unsure what advice to follow.