Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26893881-20150807012746/@comment-26512885-20150807022009

ah okay. Ive read over it again and it I think all it would take would be a few minor edits to help the story flow and help hold the reader's attention. For instance:

I woke up the next morning riddled with complete confusion and surprise

could become:

I awoke the next morning in a state of complete confusion and surprise. I made my way to the spot where the vehicle and entity had stood

I look forward to seeing this finished =)