Talk:A Howling Dust/@comment-5269370-20131118143401

Great story Flaky. Good plot development with short effective characterization of the humble town and their attitude towards a different race. Description was nicely done as well. I especially liked the imagery of "musk of alcohol and opium."

I know that emotional depth in your story is your strong point, but I would recommend that you start becoming a little more experimental in your stories. Not that it's getting old or anything, your stories are still strong, but it would be interesting to see you write about something explicitly disturbing or unsettling. I, along with others, would be very curious to read this :)