Talk:Retiring/@comment-24590886-20140325192616

Good pasta! I really like the fantasy setting of it, it's really refreshing. Also the whole thought of being "banned" from the sea or having all of these monsters parading around is alone terrifying. The construction of the pasta is quite nice. Short, sweet, and to the point. However I'm not sure how I feel about the ending, "Good luck" just seems a little cliche. Overall this pasta is going on my list. I must ask you however, did you have Davey Jones in mind when you wrote this?