Talk:Outside Lights/@comment-26030957-20150314001113

For his third addition to the creepypasta wiki, SnakeTongue delivers a tale of a young girl home alone. His prose in this pasta is excellent and spot on, without a single grammatical mistake or an awkward sentence. His pacing is great; as the tension rises and the story unfolds the reader is drawn into the drama and wants to know what exactly is going on with the strange lights shining in through the window. I personally would have liked a slightly gorier description of our young protagonist’s corpse, feeling it would have been the payoff to the finale. It ends with a nice little creepypasta twist. This reviewer found this simple little story to be short, sweet and an all around fun ride.