Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24699189-20140707101659/@comment-24352864-20140707130821

Not really a story but that aside, it's a bit meh... to me. It's basically a summary about how a ritual is done. No events actually happen, no characters and no plot.

This kind of gore is also something that I don't really like. It's scare value has already worn off. Also, as far as I know, people will die within 3 or 4 days without water making the whole point of this torture pointless. (It is said that the victims aren't allowed to drink anything else.)

No offense but, unless you can find a way to incorporate this into a well-written story ,I don't think I can like this thing.