Talk:I Don't Want to Set the World on Fire/@comment-26381643-20150509163855

Very simple, and uses a different perspective than the usual in creepypasta. (First person perspective, I mean.) While it was a good read, I feel as if the characters could have gotten a little more developed. Azar, while he seemed insane, had to have some motivation behind his actions other than "wanting to light up her world". I'm getting the idea that the purpose of this story is to be short and sweet, (Please excuse the irony...) yet I feel that it's not enough, and that the ending was too sudden.

6/10