Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25462519-20140925115135



This   sto ry in volves 5 mercenaries

Kyen Hyubate  Venko Ul lrich 

Tarren  Phillips 

Sheldon Wavery and DeMarco Young

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">This is a true story.

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<p class="MsoNormal"> <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">The following events are classified. <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN"> <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">Kyen is murdered by his 4 partners after the mercenaries are given orders to execute him after a botched attempt to sabotage a nuclear facility in North Korea. During the highly classified and covert mission to sabotage the pr

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">esumed inactive nuclear reactor in facility, Kyen was trapped inside not knowing that it would instantly activate from the presence of any DNA that entered the atmosphere of its confined casing.

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">Knowing that he was more than certainly dead his squad immediately evacuated the facility not turning back to look or even attempt to prevent their partners’ demise.

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">Inside of the reactor Kyens flesh melted off his bones like fresh cooked meat. His bones boiled like hot oil and he could feel every centimeter of pain. What lasted no more than a few minutes felt like hours, but that wasn’t the worse. Within days his body started to slowly regenerate within the reactor from his cells to bone and to flesh. This proved to be the most painful. He could feel everything but could not see, hear nor speak. He only knew pain. To him this was his eternity, this was his hell.

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">2 years passed by and Kyen is more than just a distant memory to his former squad. He has become a never ending night

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">mare. Venko Ulrich has sunken himself into a hole of liquor and prostitutes. Hoping that abusing the pleasures of drinking and sex could block out the image of Kyens death. Both Tarren Phi

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">llips & Demarco Young have become a two man Assassin team both with different views on what happened on that ill-fated day 2 years behind. One feels guilt and the other feels nothing. Sheldon Wavery like Venko found solace in a array of drugs an booze. He hasn’t done a job since that day and is constantly haunted by Kyens face. He has become a recluse with no desire for friends or the love of a woman.

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">They are all brought together by a m

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">ysterious caller who offers them a very large sum of money to take out a war criminal. After they all regroup and meet up at a rendezvous point given by the caller they are greeted with their worst fear. Kyen is still alive and is re

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">vealed to be the mystery caller that brought them all together. In shock and fear they fire their weapon on Kyen but as fast as each bullet penetrates his flesh he heals 10 times faster. Confused and horrified they grab Kyen and begin to dismember him piece by piece an place his body parts inside of a steel trash can and set them on fire. They then dump the can in the nearest river. Believing that their problem was solved they retreated to the nearest motel to make sense of what just happened. It immediately turns into a confrontation with Sheldon & Demarco blaming themselves and the squad while Venko and Tarren hold no res

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">ponsibility for leaving Kyen to die. During the heated argument Sheldon notices an open window that was once closed. In curiosity he draws closer to check it out. Suddenly decayed hands reach from the outside grasping his head and forcibly twisting it in a complete circle and ripping it off. As the others gazed in horror a dark decrepit figure clawed through the window. At closer observation they had realized it was Kyen. His body sloppily fused back together. Blood

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">oozed. Bone and vein intertwined into flesh. His eyes were dark and sunken in. As he slowly approached he maniacally muttered…

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%; font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";mso-ansi-language:EN">One down…three to go…

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