Talk:A Strange Glow/@comment-25941663-20150922235730

This produced some very creepy moments. I especially liked the use of the chair in the first part of the story. It made my mind race and I was filled with question marks. There were also some other moments that stood out, but this was the most powerful one, although I would have liked to see it drawn out a bit more.

Generally, that was the problem with the story. It is too short and quick. Everything just whistles past the reader and it is difficult to get a grasp of what's going on. Stories like this need to be longer.

All in all, I'm on the fence about this one. I'm afraid it just barely meets the QS, simply because it is too short. It's a shame, because it did produce some very strong and suspenseful moments.

It is a very good effort nevertheless, so well done.