Talk:Dawkson's Cave/@comment-25306758-20141014225056

Not bad. But, "Dawksons Creek"? Lol that sounds like a parody of Dawson's creek. Still, pretty solid story and I enjoyed reading it, despite the overdone skeleton thing. Skeletons still creep me out pretty bad, as they were a recurring theme in the horrific and vivid nightmares I had as a kid. Creeped me out pretty good, nice job 8.5/10