Talk:The Way Through the Woods/@comment-25941663-20170405205420

Pretty good read. Great and vivid descriptive work, as always. Caelyn is a very well developed character and I liked her style of narrating.

The main problem I have is that you used too many characters who didn't do much in the story. I'm not saying you should be cutting down on characters left and right, but creating a ton of characters is confusing and at times I was finding myself scrambling for the names.

Apart from that, this was a nice read. The horror you went with is not much to my liking, but it was not bad. Well done, very nice work.