Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140730060157/@comment-24996913-20140731044156

I was actually thinking about connecting a few dots with the mothers death. I thought it would be too descriptive as I have a problem giving too many details. And I agree on the the past tense/present tense comment. I do switch often and have to remind myself to go back and change it. Your advice is golden because I don't get much feedback and I enjoy hearing other writers perspectives. Thank you.