Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25253035-20140821065641/@comment-3580198-20140821082541

Major problem i see in this story is the bad use of British accent. It looked so fake it was laughable.

But overall it's a good story. The beginning and the middle drags a little bit, and you use too much pile of words and phrases. But what really struck me is the ending. It was confusing, but that twist ending about the drunk man being actually Stan was great. 8/10!