Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26399604-20160803202244/@comment-27008899-20160804184633

Made through chapter 2. So far not bad, a little dragging in chapter 1, but 2 made it a little more interesting. You have a few tense issues about a quarter of the way into chapter 2. I would like to see more description, I want to see what you see. I will finish the rest later.