Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27080023-20151015114153/@comment-27080023-20151117142703

Thank you shadowswimmer77. I have re posted it and I used the source editor, but it didn't show any code, just my story? I hope I did it correctly. I certainly am going to write more along these same lines as I enjoyed writing this despite the stress of getting it up to par :) I would appreciate any edits to the story that you feel would improve it.