Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32764586-20180915172138/@comment-32764586-20180915190227

NedWolfkin wrote: No offense but is this really what this site has sunk to: stories about people diddling themselves?

I'll admit though that I skimmed through the first part because it was boring. The horror parts (no pun intended) themselves weren't really scary.

The whole diddle-yourself outline kind of feels like a Trollpasta, laughable and not at all scary despite the twisted fantasy.

This story is a lot less scary when you know people who actually find this stuff erotic.

Thanks for the feedback, however I'll take it with a grain of salt from someone who called "Cry baby Lane" one of the scariest pastas ever, with all due respect.