Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10502460-20180523023011/@comment-9041013-20180523092110

Well I found nothing really wrong with this story, perhaps aside from the fact that the climax is predictable. Even with the predictability, the story did it's thing for me. Maybe it was the kind of supernatural twist to it, how whenever the play was being aired - a cheating couple was murdered and a barn was burnt down, all full incognito.

Good job on that.

Do give it a second proof reading, though, perhaps I did not notice something while I was reading :p