Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25975226-20150401085748/@comment-25975226-20150403034218

TheMajorAlex wrote: Most of the stuff on the writer's workshop is crap, but this is actually pretty good. You really caught me off guard with the ending, which is a good thing because I believe that the ending is a major factor in a good creepypasta. The only tiny thing that I didn't like is your overabundance of ellipsis (...). You should definitely upload this story though because it's pretty good. 8.5/10

P.S. The last thing I would say to my mom is "what the hell." She doesn't like it when I do that. Yeah me too! I actually thought about that when writing 'what the hell', and how passive the mother was about it, to demonstrate the desparation of the situation. If that makes sense. And yeah I'll get rid of the elipses I usually don't use that many haha!