Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26411767-20151019105715/@comment-26326346-20151020062208

I liked it and I really enjoyed the twist. I found it to be well written and attention grabbing. I was going to criticize Tony not recognizing Amelia's voice, but it sort of makes sense due to him not having talked to her in months and it could just go to show how little he thought of her.

Keep up the great work Violynn, I hope it gets a lot of attention. It was really good for a first attempt at a creepy story :)