Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4955311-20160223155253/@comment-25941663-20160224165752

Why did you post a Pastebin link? You could have just copy-pasted your story in the forum post like everyone else.

Also, one day isn't long enough to get feedback. It usually takes 2-3 days. Be patient. Lastly, commenting on your thread to bump it doesn't work in this forum. People will think that the extra replies are review/feedback replies, so they won't bother with checking out your thread. Sorry.