Talk:Beware the Good Samaritan/@comment-25041416-20140701231406

You're a hell of a good writer. I don't like this particular piece that much, because I'm not a huge fan of facile justice-porn style plots where everything is lily white or black as midnight. If that's your thing, though, you're pretty good at it.

The dialog could use some punching up. At least try to make the judge sound less like the first draft of a Charles Bronson character with supernatural powers.