Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-17834624-20140426163254/@comment-9967354-20140518104804

To be fair, all zombie apocalypses start off with 'the virus', 'the military tried to fight it but failed', etc. like it were some sort of Resident Evil fanfic. but this was nicely written, as it gives the character a background and a personality of his own. You should add a bit more, (perhaps another short zombie apocalypse tale?) so the story has more to it that it seems. I didn't get the ending, though. Sorry.