Talk:Village Trip/@comment-25547916-20141025064149

This is a pretty nice one. I'm not sure why no one else has commented, but whatever. The ending was pretty well done even if it's not too difficult to anticipate. The final lines by the police officer seem a bit of an odd thing for him to say. Maybe it's just me, but I had a hard time telling what of the situation, if any, was planned out by police and locals in regards to those final lines. Overall, this does a very nice job playing off a somewhat xenophobic fear of being in another country, particularly during the part when he's taken away from his family.