Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27707962-20160202051723/@comment-27707962-20160202063706

EmpyrealInvective wrote:

CreepyJon wrote: Can we at least agree that it has some merit? I still have my qualms, there really isn't a lot of breadcrumbs here for the audience to follow and I still think shifting tenses doesn't really convey the point you're trying to make.

I believe you meant "aren't a lot of breadcrumbs", see because breadcrumbs are plural, and using using "is" would be wrong here