Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24929924-20140511161513/@comment-24714617-20140512025622

It's good but if I were you, I'd get rid of the quotes and trim the text down a bit. As it is, it's a little verbose and can cause boredom in the more ADHD-inflicted individuals such as myself.

As for the writing, it's perfect. When I saw "my first creepypasta" while browsing the Writer's Workshop I feared for the worst but no, you write like a pro.

9.8/10