Talk:Choke.exe/@comment-25361316-20141105225401

I dug it. I really like stories that make good use of location-I had a great image of the house in my head by the time it was done, and the tension mounted nicely while the narrator was on the computer-a solitary computer in the basement is a weirdly eerie image.

This is where I thought the story was going: the computer in the basement wasn't the narrator's father's: it belonged to a stalker of some sort who had taken up residence in the house unknowingly. I think that might've made for a slightly more satisfying ending, but it's not my story, and I thought it was great for the most part.