Talk:Darkness Creeps/@comment-26399604-20200205162621

Wow, this is really well written.

At first, I was unsure if it would be considered "unfinished" because you mention it was a prologue but I made sure to read in its entirety first, and it holds up on its own. I love the dynamic between the two characters -- it didn't take long to establish and understand their personalities. Also, the flow of the narrative and the description was seamless. I look forward for more from you. Please drop a link on my page when you expand this.

Great job!