Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36012429-20181019074237/@comment-9041013-20181020105943

SpiritVoices wrote: A narrative! Ah, yes, this might be the problem.

Now that you mention it, I do understand that being a common theme here (or at least from the poems I’ve read thus far on this website). Unfortunately, I haven’t written a narrative poem in my entire life— mine all tend to be scenes rather than stories.

This certainly isn’t my best poem... buuut it is the only scary one I have, unless you count the beach and natural disasters as spooky. :) I just assumed because it was about monsters that it ticked the boxes, lol.

Anyway, I digress. If narrative and plot seems to be an issue, I’m alright with reworking it. It may take a while, but I’m sure it would be fun. :) Thank you for the insight! There's EAP posted here, so natural disasters would count as somewhat of horror.

Anywho, always glad to help, hope to see your improved version soon :O