Talk:Elysium/@comment-25226524-20141023021912

I've probably read less than a hundred poems in my life, so I can't really critique this, as I have no knowledge of the technical aspects of poetry. I will say that the concept of this was amazing. The philosophical angle was very well done, and very true, in my opinion. I used to drink a lot of Elysium, until I finally decided to accept reality.

Elysium = Alcohol (Kinda' fits if you think about it.)

Keep up the good work.