Talk:Another Perspective on BOB/@comment-26704634-20150716021045

I was able to overlook your use of expletives where none were needed and had put that down to inexperience as the story was otherwise engaging. You lost me at "chinky". Frankly if you are unable to dislocate the way you think and they way you write, you are going to find maturing as a writer very difficult until you mature as a thinker. I am also as caucasian as they come and can find racism amusing when used in the very very rare circumstance that no one will be truly offended. I feel a bit disrespected as a reader rather than offended on the racial issue. I'm sure you didn't mean for that but it's something you want to be mindful of. I wanted to like it..

That said, well played to anyone who cooks pasta.