Talk:I Swear I'm Not Forgetful/@comment-25089239-20140812031239/@comment-25170312-20140812035038

I'm honestly not sure why that reason was given, considering it could be easily fixed. It really should have been 'Marked for Review' instead. But there's other issues as well. Personally, I'm a little disgusted by the use of child porn / masturbation in the plot. I'm not sure how appropriate it is, and it isn't quite the kind of shocking that creepypastas are known for. I would honestly go in and fix all the grammar and run-on sentences, but the reveal just makes me not want to. Other than that, how did the guy eat if he was up in the attic the whole time?