Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27008899-20151016034929/@comment-26411767-20151019070224

I had to read twice to understand that the 'monster' was a truck and the main characters were the sasquatches, but I guess that was just me not paying attention. It's a good story, not very scary per se, but still suspenseful and with a good twist.

There are two misspelled words.

'The woods are quite during this time.' Quite should be quiet.

'The would often wonder off to explore.' Wonder should be wander.

Anyway, great work.