Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37443256-20181108163108/@comment-35711173-20181109000529

This reads as a drug fueled hallucination, and not a particularly intense one. So what, ho hum, I know this is an acid trip before we start. At least you don't cheat by hiding it until the end.

Ned is right about the bolding and the paragraphs.

Personally, I think it is a weak idea. If you really like it and it sings to you, then I advise you to take out the bold and get that story's English cleaned up.

Read this blog entry for a good starting point.

User_blog:Fatal_Disease/How_to_Start_a_New_Paragraph_Or:_How_I_Learned_to_Not_Make_a_Wall-o-Text

Once you have the paragraphs right, read this one.

User_blog:DrBobSmith/Basic_Spell_and_Grammar_Checking