Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10789912-20160117093544/@comment-10789912-20160201052155

Banningk1979 wrote: Another great series of reading in this series of yours. I apologize for the time it has taken me to finally come around and leave some feedback. Work has been a burden on me and it has reflected on my time available to spend on this site. However, I finally sat down and got to it, and I am very happy to have done so.

As for the pro's, as I have said before, I am very fond of this series and have enjoyed each chapter. This is certainly your trademark work, and it has a quality and unique flavor that sets it apart on this site. I like how you humanize the god-like beings, giving them a real feel. They speak and act much like regular humans, making them easy to picture and relate to as characters. Michael is also a great character in his own right. There is a large degree of torture that he carries within himself, and it shows in his actions and speech.

Not much in the way of cons with this series thus far. I might suggest streamlining some of the lore though. It comes across a bit overly technical is some parts. I am not quite sure what specific advice I'd give in order to fix that, as this is your project and is shaped how you see it, but that is the closest thing to a con that I can give with this, because otherwise it's one of my favorite series.

Thanks for asking for my advice, and again, sorry for taking so long.

Thank you for reading. As a note; the story is nearing completion. Just a very little bit left to write before I publish it.

I needed to get the impact out, and killing off one of the series' largest characters whom appeared in almost every installment (save two) by someone that was portrayed as both his best friend and servant for the majority of that trip in a teaser? I thought that'd certainly get the point across.

As for the con; streamlining the lore- I intend to have every question answered by the end of the next installment after this (the final piece), though complex lore is one of the things I take pride in when it comes to this series.

If there is a lore question you have that isn't clearly answered in the stories, feel free to ask it here or on my talkpage, and I'll clarify it. If I don't have the answer in this story, I'll work it into the story so that everyone can have it answered.

Thank you for reading. It means a lot.