Talk:The Snag/@comment-24387379-20150831185234

This wasn't terrible but it was rather clichéd as well as being exceptionally predictable; I knew there was a body in the tree as soon as the tree was mentioned and I figured the guy was the one hanging from the statement that he didn't feel tired from running. Furthermore, I couldn't sympathise with your characters due to their lack of humanisation (admittedly hard to have in so short a story) and overall I didn't find this story either sad or in any way scary - good try though.