Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25329900-20141119082320/@comment-25701413-20141120100526

I feel the need to warn you that, due to the connotations surrounding the term "D" your new title is a reference to large male genetalia. An alternative way of referring to divorce would definitely be for the best.

In regards to the story itself, I like the changes. The shorter format of a journal entry definitely helps, as well as making the more personal comments the woman makes reinforce the idea of a sweet older lady having a bit of romantic difficulty.

I feel that, in regards to the creep-factor I'm unable to comment this time as I already know the spoiler, though the idea of a harmless sounding old woman casually referencing hiding her husband's dead body has a definite ring to it.