Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36772767-20180902231010/@comment-9041013-20180903101508

Basically, this has to be completely re-written. It's just way too hectic, I'd follow Bob's advice on this one. Just go for a more detailed story or if you want a Micropasta.

Here's an idea, a Pyromaniac joins the Firefighting forces to hang around fires, gets so drunk over whatever reason, be it a party to celebrate an honor of his or something that he decides to light up a fire out of his Pyromania and ends up being burned alive himself by accident.

You could also throw in a sentence or two about how he was part of a cultist church that eats it's deceaded members as a point of dark humour, starting the passage with "to add insult to injury..." or something like this.