Talk:Survival Instinct/@comment-24612144-20160613020037

7/10

The story is handled very well, and the concept is quite simple. Though I would have enjoyed a little more conversation to build up Mick's character, maybe something that would have made him seem a better character to the reader and to Jimmy. However, the way he speaks and the events they went through works well enough to set up his character. The ending is written well, adding in a curse word to instantly change the tone. I enjoyed it!