Talk:The Smiling Man/@comment-29249491-20160724060425/@comment-29326682-20160827132757

When a writer puts little to almost no effort in writing a story, in this case a creepypasta, the horror or the thrill that comes with it decreases. This creepypasta is poorly conceived, there is no denying that. The overuse of the "very's" cheapen this work of fiction (I'm guessing), for the reason of not being in the right place. You use "very" when trying to specify something, such as "This very tree", not something like "Except he was moving very, very quickly." But, you know, opinions differ, right?