Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29015383-20160712171950/@comment-29015383-20160715050853

Thank you very much for pointing out all those little errors! I can't believe I missed them myself. I will now hang my head in shame..

I'm glad to hear that the vampire twist worked for you, as previously (you might've seen it in the offere other replies) it came out of left field a bit (or a lot). The chat was actually kind of fun to write, especially with trying to make up super corny usernames. All the l337 spira speak!

It seems that I still have a little to work on in the last part. Let me explain what happened for you at least: It is indeed a coincidence that Alex and Daniel live close together. However, Alex was never in the chatroom. All that was just the Host using little Alex' house as his play room. The one forcing the door is Daniel, unaware that he is stepping into a monster's temporary den. Essentially what the Host does is use the Deep Web as his personal shopping cart, and he is not afraid to lure in his own viewers. It amuses him to no end how much they can consider themselves monsters but when they stand before a real one.... They just wet themselves! That and he doesn't have to go out to find his food. It generally comes straight to him if he plays his cards right. He has been doing this for several years and hasn't had a problem with cops yet because he jumps from one location to another seemingly at random (to them) and they lag behind