Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180828001306/@comment-35711173-20180829203100

Thank you all so much for the reviews. Once again, the team finds what I could never see individually.

So much from each of you was right.

Why mention the smoking regulations? It was an attempt to date Henderson. That's another section I have to rewrite.

Why the grenade toss back? Those three stories right at the beginning are chopped back versions of three Congressional Medal of Honor citations, real world things that US soldiers have done. It may strain credibility though so I will have to evaluate that carefully.

Hmm, the Devil. I am open to suggestions here. I guess my own religious views and inclinations are showing here.