Talk:Forgotten Valentine/@comment-24246407-20131213125844

9.5/10 Brilliant! Some parts are a little bit over descriptive, but overall LOVED the story. I love how it has just a touch of creepiness from the live corpse - and that part was particularly well written - but the general theme is that the deceased loved one is still with him, and it gives the reader a number of mixed emotions. One of my favorite pastas.