Talk:The Black Wind Howls/@comment-25306758-20141105153612

I liked it OK, til the end. The ending was a bit cliche, and didn't seem to make much sense. In the beginning of the story, you say that you're dead already. Also, why would the cop who finds your body complete this pasta, and place it online? I'd venture to say if the ending was overhauled, this would be a pretty good pasta, but the ending kind of spoiled it. 5.3/10