Talk:Ole' Broken Bones Pete/@comment-4849011-20141016013455

There are many levels to this that make it scarier and more effective.

1- Charlie had a lot to deal with before he even got to Lytle (I'm glad you were able to escape!)

2- The cruelty and inhumanity of the attack on Pete and his family, and the hypocrisy of the man who turned out to be the ringleader

3- The house is still standing, as if the townspeople who want to ignore what happened are prevented from destroying the building which serves as a reminder of what happened

4- Jason's callousness and denial

5- Joey's visions about Charlie's fate

For me the most intense parts were the attack on the Robinson family and the aftermath and Joey's guilt-ridden visions of Charlie suffering and dying. This was another good one. By the time I reached the last three paragraphs I was dying to know how it ended.