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So I'm not the only one who likes licking the salt off of their plate? Woo hoo! I also use the fingertip method to pick up the salt.

I also added a few more events to the Johto Quest Episode 3 outline (http://pastebin.com/7PcDeFdx). Yeah I managed to work in the Kimono Girls. I think I might have them wear different coloured Kimonos that correspond to which Eeveelution they have. For example, Kimono Girl Zuki owns an Umbreon. Therefore, she will wear a black kimono.

Not only that but I trued to correct the plot hole in the second episode you mentioned. Here's what I got:

(She grabbed the ball off of the machine and just as she was about to hand it to Emily, she noticed the bandages on her arm.

"Woah! What happened to your arm?" the woman gasped.

"Um... I'd rather not talk about it." Emily said meekly.

"Oh... Um... Okay then. But if it's anything like what happened to Gerald..." Before the woman could finish what she was saying, Emily cut in.

"You know the Gerald story too?" Emily asked with astonishment.

"Yeah. Martha told me about it." the woman replied quietly. She then shuddered and froze for a few moments. These moments soon turned into minutes as she continued to stand behind the counter without moving. Eventually, the egg shaped creature opened the door behind the woman and waddled over to her, carrying Eddy in its arms. The creature called out to the woman but unfortunately, it got no response. It tried tugging on the woman's lab coat but she just continued to stand there and do nothing. At that point, the creature placed Eddy on the counter and stormed off into the back room, slamming the door behind it.)

I noticed that your talk page had been archived. My talk page needs to be archived soon.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  20:31, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

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Them getting the Pokemon names wrong is so embarrassing and unforgivable. I could forgive the wrong moves and moves having effects on types that they shouldn't since it is a show, but getting the names wrong is just horrid. Hellsing Ultimate does have a lot of philosophical moments and even a couple of moving ones. Thank you for being cool about it and for planning on checking it out! I'll get back to you on strategic moments later on tonight if all goes as planned. For now I have to try to get something figured out lest it drive me crazy XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  20:52, January 19, 2017 (UTC)


 * I don't want to spoil anything, but Joseph Joestar does a lot of sneaky, sleight of hand things to win. I think during the fight with Straizo he did something with reflections to make Straizo think he'd been hurt or killed, that's childs play compared to what you'll see him do later on :D Ironically, Ash turning on the sprinklers so that Pikachu could electrocute Brock's Onix comes to mind as well. 91 Days has a really good part (it's about the Mafia).


 * There are these two brothers in the crime family that the anti-hero protagonist has joined, one's named Nero and I don't remember what Nero's younger is named, so I'll refer to him as NYB. The protagonist wants them all dead because the head of the family killed his father when he was a child, so he's orchestrated the deaths of many of the heirs to the Mafia Family. Anyway, NYB has been manipulated by another crime family and is convinced that if he kills Nero they'll be left in peace and he can rule. Well, Angelo (the protagonist), storms the room with Nero and corners NYB at his desk. Angelo spots a gun on NYB's desk and picks it up off the desk for Nero to see, he then slams it back down on the desk and leaves the room. NYB picks up the gun and tries to shoot Nero, but is too slow and is shot and killed by a crying Nero. Outside of the room we see Angelo dump empty bullets out of his pocket into a potted plant; he'd emptied the gun before placing it back on the desk. Nero thought that Angelo had put the gun back on the desk so as to test his brother's loyalty, but in actuality he just figured NYB would grab the gun and try to shoot Nero and would get executed. 91 Days is a really good and psychological anime because of things like that.


 * The difference between the Hellsing series is that they are just different ways of telling the story. Hellsing Ultimate is newer and over higher quality in both terms of story, animation and art. I think Cat-boy is actually named Schrodinger, but I won't swear to it XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  05:13, January 20, 2017 (UTC)


 * Would you please email me at DoomVroom@writeme.com ? Can you put 'Raidra' as the subject as well? I want to vent, and receive advice if possible, about something private. I'd appreciate it a lot. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  08:05, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

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Sure you can send that list of grammar errors and whatnot. I suggest posing it on my talk page. Sorry I haven't messaged you in a bit but I've been busy working on my plot outline for the third episode of Johto Quest. If you want, I can send you the latest version of the outline.

You know what that whole living underground thing reminds me of? The Under from Pokemon Colosseum. Basically, The Under is an underground city that was once a mining town but has since abandoned the mining idea in favor of a plain old city. That's just the cliff notes version of it though. Here's the article about it if you want more information (http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/The_Under).

How did you manage to sneak in a cake, punch, and a whole bunch of other things into a church without anyone noticing? I'd imagine that would be nearly impossible to pull off. But anyways, that was a nice thing you did for that guy. I bet he was really happy about it.

For the Cape Cod pasta, I'm trying to figure out what comes after this part: ("Hai." the woman replied. The two had parted ways as Kristy just sat there smiling, staring at her newly acquired yen. She quietly slipped the cash into her pocket and walked away from the bed to go find her mother.)

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  10:49, January 22, 2017 (UTC)

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Wow! That is a lot of spelling mistakes! Then again, it is a long episode so that's bound to happen. I'm not sure if you brought it up in your latest message but did you want to look at the outline for episode three? I can put it into pastebin if you want.

"I do wonder why Kristy's mother didn't notice any of this, though" Here's my answer to that. You see, when Kristy finds her mother, the mom can explain that when Kristy fell asleep, her mother went over to find an employee to help them move the bed to the checkout counters but had to walk all around the store to find one since they were apparently understaffed.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  05:24, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Warning! This might make you hate ice-cream.
Ice-cream is a feeling (NSFD)

I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 20:11, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

The first two were the best. Though, if you thought those were disturbing, I have something terrifying

I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 21:22, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

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So today, I started taking an online class through my local community college. I'm actually taking two classes from my college but I'm going to alternate between them. One class is for HTML/CSS and the other is for general computer programming. I did one assignment for the HTML class and almost finished a project for said class.

Okay so here's the outline for the third Johto Quest episode as of today: (http://pastebin.com/LfBFAhVd). Speaking of outlines, here's something completely unrelated. I plan on watching videos about lost media to reinvigorate my interest in writing the Cape Cod pasta since my mind has been focused on Pokemon lately. Though I will try and correct those grammar errors in the second episode tonight if I can.

[https://68.media.tumblr.com/a54288660f9fdca367837f2e1b6187e2/tumblr_o6zqis7KCu1ql31zxo1_400.gif Click Here to See Something! Number 7 Will Shock You!]

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  03:08, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Steeling the Show
Just wanted to let you know that a new Forged in Fire comes on History tonight at ten since you said you didn't know when it was on. Hope all is well.

Jay Ten (talk) 02:09, January 25, 2017 (UTC)


 * I don't know about that. It seems to me that the commercials wanted simply to do something very disturbing to bring more attention and stand out. I mean, seriously, the only ice-cream brand name I know is Little baby's Ice-Cream. And Nirvana, but just because I like the band. Fun fact: 1. The first commercial is the most disturbing when you remove the word ice-cream, and 2. "Ice cream is a feeling." is my new motto.


 * I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 16:23, January 25, 2017 (UTC)


 * For the full effect of what I described, watch this video (at about 30:30). The tone of the narrator is everything. Tension builds when his voice growls at "I love my life" and I swear to God, I get shivers every time he finishes the last sentence with "feeling". It sounds like he has a ragegasm. The channel itself is pretty weird, when it's not creepy videos...it's this.


 * As for baby oil, like hot-dogs, it's better when you don't know.


 * I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 16:59, January 25, 2017 (UTC)


 * Today in some places you could get charged with hate crimes for calling someone the "wrong pronoun".


 * My Romanian and History teachers made great jokes constantly. I remember one particular time in History class, the teacher was drawing Romania around WW1 and at the time it looked...like a penis. Obviously, as simple-minded teenagers we all started laughing for about three minutes. He finally got sick of it and told us, "I'll show you how little you know about your own country". He gave us a test and only I and another kid knew that on December 1 1918 Transylvania united with Romania (the others wrote "The Romanian Country", which is incorrect). He made all of them write 6 times, on the board and in their notebooks, "My country's name is Romania." I think they remembered it after.


 * Also, I just realized I put the wrong link in an above message. Go | here (I'm pretty sure it's right this time) and go to 30:30.


 * I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 13:28, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

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Damn it! How did I forget the 'W' in wringer? Ugh! It's the same with the word "opossum". You see, this is what happens when you have silent letters!

I've been doing some work correcting the spelling errors in the Johto Quest episode. But holy shit are there a lot of errors! I'm at the part where Martha is telling Emily and Eddy her backstory. I'm not sure how long the correcting process is going to take but given how this episode is longer than the last one, it's going to take a lot longer. On that note, I finished my next Haunting Hour review yesterday.

Speaking of The Haunting Hour, I added a new part to the Cape Cod pasta. Here it is: ("Hai." the woman replied. The two had parted ways as Kristy just sat there smiling, staring at her newly acquired yen. She quietly slipped the cash into her pocket and walked away from the bed. As she was walking away, she looked around and noticed that her mother was nowhere in sight.) I'm not sure how Kristy will react to this. Will she be scared because it's like the nightmare she had earlier? Or will she have a completely different reaction?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   21:30, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Hello!!!
Hi Raidra, how has everything been? Is your mother feeling better? Did you eat any chocolate recently? I hope everything is going okay with you! Luigifan100 15:16, January 27, 2017 (UTC)

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So I recently watched the HBO documentary Beware the Slenderman. In short, it was both informative and emotional. Not only that, but there were a few other surprises besides how informative and emotional it was. So in the documentary, there was this scene where they took all the videos that was on either Morgan or Anissa's Google Plus page and one of the videos featured was an UltraHypnosis video. This was a big surprise to me because I watch UltraHypnosis videos like almost every single night! I mean holy crap! That's like the last thing I'd expect to see in a documentary on Slenderman.

I'm going to work on correcting more errors in the second episode of Johto Quest tonight. That is if I don't get the urge to sleep. I know that the Face Bank can eat coins but can it eat paper bills? Honestly, I don't see it. I feel like it would shred the bills.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   22:50, January 27, 2017 (UTC)

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From what I saw, Anissa seemed to show the most emotion during her interview with the cop, which leads me to believe that she must've had some remorse for her actions. Of course, she could just be a really good actor for all we know. Also, I have to give the documentary serious kudos. For the most part, they didn't try to blame Slenderman or Creepypastas in general for the girls' behaviour, which would've been really easy to do. Honestly, I might watch the documentary again.

If somehow, one of my stories ended up on the Creepypasta Wiki (one of the most prestigious sites on the web by the way) I won't put a disclaimer on them because, in my eyes, Creepypastas are no different than scary stories that were around before them. Not only that but I don't think the author should be responsible for the actions of their readers. I'm not sure about a trial but I can link you to the Wikipedia article about the stabbing and this article from the Washington Post.

So I made up a plot outline for the Sunny Hill Farms pasta and put it on Google Docs so I can work on it on any device no matter where I am. Right now, I'm currently brainstorming ideas for scary things that can happen on a farm. So far I have two ideas. One, either a farmhand or a farm animal getting attacked by a wild animal like a coyote, and two, accidents with farm equipment. I never lived on a farm so those are my only two scary farm things I have so far. But maybe as the story progresses, the couple, specifically Becky, becomes more unnervingly attached to the protagonist. Not only that, but the protagonist also starts to learn some of the dark secrets that the farm has to offer, such as the fact that they don't use anti-biotics on sick farm animals so that way they can remain "organic" as per the law.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  21:42, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

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There was yet another interesting tidbit in the documentary. At some point in the documentary, I think someone had said that one of the girls recalls seeing Slenderman at about age five. In 2014, both girls were in the sixth grade, which means that they were around twelve or thirteen at the time. So in 2007, they would've been five or six years old. However, Slenderman wasn't a thing until about 2009 so my theory is at one of the girls might've seen something similar to Slenderman at that age.

For the second saftey sign you showed me, I guess we can call the guy in the sign a (puts on sunglasses) benderman! (The Who screams YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH!). So in the outline, I've added the following events:

(22. Once all of the cows are hooked up, Becky says to watch the cows until the milk flow stops, which will be indicated by a beeping sound, followed by a flashing green light. She then says that she’s going to go attend to something else and gives the protagonist her number in case if something goes wrong.

23. When Becky leaves, the protagonist looks around and finds a milk crate to sit on. After that, they sit down, pull out their phone, turn on their data, and starts watching a video.)

After this, the milking process will be successful but when the protagonist tries to unhook one of the cows (mainly Mary), she gets spooked from the way the protagonist removes the udder tubes and moos loudly. After that, I'm not sure what she'll do. I guess I'll have to do some more research on how spooked cows behave. I did hear that a spooked cow might charge at someone, but I'm not sure if Mary would be able to charge if she's partitally unhooked from the machine.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   04:37, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Corny Death
Everything is better with Squidward! I went in expecting L to have Spongebob's voice and Light to be Squidward XD

Yay! You've put your idea to pen and paper :D I like the idea of a shapeshifter assistant; normally the shapeshifter would be the one in charge and manipulating things! I approve of this shift from normalcy~

It's going okay. I hope yours goes well! Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  21:55, January 30, 2017 (UTC)


 * Hehe, You've got to be brave and crazy to prank call L! I like there being different modes for the shapeshifter. You ought to have him shift to blend in with his environment during a fight, totally an environment blender XD I like Stealth, Attack and Aquatic the best; those are my favorites! Everything is shaping up great :D Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  02:17, January 31, 2017 (UTC)


 * One of the Metal Gear Solids had a suit that let you switch camo on to match the environment, it was really neat. Now I want a Desert Batman action figure. Come to think of it, I believe I do have a Forest Batman action figure XD Funny story! Whenever Carrie Fisher had people over at her house and wanted them to leave, she'd play the Holiday Special and she swore that it worked every time :D Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  00:44, February 5, 2017 (UTC)


 * An auditory mode?! That's so cool :D I remember reading about him having a different costume for each day of the week. The need to do that with modern Batman and have each costume get progressively terrifying (Sunday's costume can be Bruce Wayne because that is God's day). Gozilla vs Batman! "Yeah, Batman could take Godzilla, easily!" What's funny is that 'The Holiday Special' never got an official physical release, all copies are bootlegs! XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  00:56, February 7, 2017 (UTC)


 * Or.... :D it could go like the following:


 * Officer (heckling)- "Batman, you smell awful! You should change into your Wednesday suit!"
 * Batman- "No, it's Tuesday."
 * Officer- "Yeah, but you small awful!"
 * Batman- "I was in captivity for two days. And I don't have to smell nice, I'm Batman."
 * Officer- "W-Wait... If you were in captivity for two days and you smell awful, then how are you in your Tuesday suit?"
 * Batman- "I'm Batman."


 * I saw! Congratulations :D I need to read more of your stories, it's been a while! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  03:44, February 7, 2017 (UTC)


 * The movie sounds funny and I never expected that from a Lego film. I remember a commercial for it going something like this:


 * Someone- "Why does the Batmobile only have one seat?!"
 * Batman- "Last time I checked, I only had one butt."


 * Haha! Thank you u.u I hope so too! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  06:47, February 7, 2017 (UTC)


 * You did miss quite a bit, but that's a good thing in this instance XD I've tried a few times and could never get the link to load (might be my internet) :( I put my new pasta on the Writer's Workshop! I think it turned out good, but I'm interested to see if I did a good or bad job conveying what happened. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  05:18, February 8, 2017 (UTC)


 * I got it up now! Yay! I've seen him drive the Batmobile across walls in some tellings, maybe he parks it on the roof? I like the disposable vans idea! Oh, thank you! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  18:35, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

Fred is a really good driver, way better than I thought. Batman would have drove through that fence though XD I shall strive to drive as many vehicles as possible in the hopes of coming across a Transformer. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  19:37, February 8, 2017 (UTC)


 * Hahaha! Wow, that was a lot of digging on your part XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  22:56, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

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I will never get tired of these Slenderpuns! Mwahahaha! Also, my talk page needs to be archived.

I finished correcting the grammar errors in the second episode of Johto Quest. Woo! I'm going to try and upload it some time today. I also added a lot to the episode three outline as well. There's a pretty funny scene in there with Officer Jenny.

Speaking of cows, Miltank. That is all.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   17:18, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Message from a time traveler
The header practically means that I only watched the "Top 15 scariest animated YouTube videos" now...after a month. Jesus, I have to make a program. Anyway, while the video didn't meet my standards of scary (not saying much, most horror-things don't) I found it very interesting. It kinda reminded me of "Haunted car", the first jumpscare video I ever watched and the only video that nearly gave me a heart attack. To anyone who came up with that idea, go screw yourselves!

Anyway, the two that got most of my attention were the fisherman one (most likely because of the philosophical message derived from seeing a creature regurgitating its flesh-eating babies inside someone) and Backwater Gospel. Because I'seen it before (as can be observed here) and everything about it is so badass.

I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 20:07, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

The bird thing becomes even nastier when you realize that the exact thing happens very often with some species of cuckoos. Interestingly, if the mother is intelligent enough to realize that the cuckoo baby isn't hers and kills or abandons it, the cuckoo family go after her. Yes, there is a cuckoo mafia.

As for the horror video blog, I feel like even with the recent release of Resident Evil 7 and things like this, there is only enough gore for me for a good period of time. That being said...I don't know if you've seen Rick and Morty, but there was a secondary character in there called Mr Jellybean who is, simply put, a pedophile. Believe it or not, the origin material is even more disturbing (Warning: Highly NSFW)

I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 09:25, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

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So yesterday, I uploaded the second episode of the Johto Quest series which you can see here: (http://theofficialpokemonjohtoquestsite.weebly.com/episode/pokemon-johto-quest-season-1-episode-2-on-our-way-to-the-lake-of-rage)

Not only that, but I also decided to make a TV Tropes page for it (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/PokemonJohtoQuest) in order to promote it and hopefully get more people to read it. The page needs a bit of work but I'll let other people add to it.

Hooray! We have some insight into cow behavior! Maybe Mary can kick like a donkey, squirm, and moo loudly when she is spooked.

Here's the latest version of the episode three outline: (http://pastebin.com/HtNMJv9E)

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   05:25, February 2, 2017 (UTC)

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Ugh! Spoilers! Well that's an episode I'm going to skip! Though I wonder what happened to that Litten from episode seven. I hope it comes back. So I found this picture of a real life owl next to a Rowlet plushie and I've been wanting to send it to you go a while but I keep forgetting about it. Here's the image:



So you know that TV Tropes page I made for Johto Quest? Well I think it was one of the best decisions I've made because it's definitely drawing attention to the series. Not only that but, the TV Tropes page also shows up when you search for it on Google. How cool is that?

Sorry to hear about Doom. I was just about to send a message to him. Should I send it and wait for a response or wait until he's resolved the problem to send it?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   06:42, February 4, 2017 (UTC)

You've Been Showcased!
You were selected for one of my random writer's showcases, you can read your own showcase here

EtherBot (talk) 09:56, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

That suicide thing reminded me of something funny
I'm not sure if this is your kind of humor, but here are two videos (by the way, the second one is somehow 50% depressing and 50% funny).

Side note-did you notice my last message (other than this one, of course)?

I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 17:21, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Which of the videos?

I have to say, my favourite parts were the singing parts. The commentary was funny by itself, but the singing parts make me laugh out loud. As for the people in the video, I think my favourite was the tweaker. Poor guy had to have balls to just stay there. If I saw a dude climbing down a building after staying on top of it almost naked I'd run the hell away. Apparently the abs guy is actually pretty introverted in real life, through that doesn't make the videos any less...cringy (I hate that word). For some reason I thought the moment in the second video when Ethan (the host) literally threw the noodles in the microwave was absolutely hilarious.

I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 18:51, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Hmm, most of these shows actually look like they'd rather either make me laugh or feel bored. The part that made me remain in disbelief was the puppeteer basically being a pedophile. I mean, it just seemed way too obvious to be true. One of my favourite creepy videos on YouTube is The Cat with Hands. Don't worry, it's a bit creepy but not super creepy. If you want something very creepy, watch the video that comes right after it.

I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 20:29, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

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I think it would be pretty interesting to see Ash use a Stoutland on his team. I wonder what kind of moves it ones and whether or not Ash will ride it.

Honestly for me, the worst Pokemon anime series is the Unova series (Best Wishes). Not only was it unnecessarily made into a soft reboot (hence why Ash acts like an idiot in that series), but it was apparently so bad, that the writers of the series got fired. Am I saying that the Sun and Moon anime is perfect? No. However, if given a choice between watching Best Wishes or Sun and Moon, I'd pick the latter. So I have added more to the episode three outline. This is it: (http://pastebin.com/9xZMbTz2).

I'm trying to picture how this battle will play out. I want Emily to be able to use the Houndour she caught in episode two but I don't want to have a "Pikachu Loses to Level 5 Snivy" type situation to do it. Here's what I might do:  So Morty sends out Gastly first. When its HP is in the red zone, Morty will tell it to use either Hypnosis or Night Shade. However, Eddy will dodge it successfully. Thinking on his feet, Morty tells Gastly to use Curse. A nail appears and strikes through Gastly, making it faint. When he sends out Misdreavus, skulls with purple aura around them will fly out of Eddy's wool and in turn, reduce his HP. This happens as he is battling the Pokemon until Emily calls him back and uses a Potion on him. At first, it seems to work and Eddy is able to dodge an incoming Shadow Ball. When he lands on the ground however, the skulks fly out again and the HP goes down. Emily tells him to use Thundershock but before he can do so, more skulls fly out and he is hit by a powerful Psywave, knocking him out. How does that sound? Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  02:18, February 6, 2017 (UTC)

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So today on Wonder Trade, I got a Snivy and a shiny level 100 Golbat with Pokerus. If that's not amazing luck then I don't know what is!

I'm not sure if they'll actually bring back Litten and Stoutland. There's a good chance that it might happen given how Stoutland is a Ride Pokemon in the games but that's not guarenteeing that they'll show them in the anime again. Speaking of Ride Pokemon, that's one of the things I strongly praise about the game. I like how they function like TM's (i.e Tauros is smilar to Rock Smash, Lapras/Sharpedo are similar to Surf, Charizard is similar to Fly, etc) without being forced to strap moves on your Pokemon that, to be honest, weren't all that great (save for Surf and Fly). If I were to make a sucessor to the Pokemon Ride system, I'd say make the HM's items. Here's what I mean:

HM01 (Cut): Axe

HM02 (Fly): Emolga Suit

HM03 (Surf): Surfboard

HM04 (Strength): Machoke Suit

HM05 (Flash): Military Grade Lanturn or Flashlight

HM06 (Rock Smash): Pickaxe

HM07 (Waterfall): Rocket Barrel

HM08 (Dive): Scuba Suit

I took some inspiration from Pokemon Origins when it came to the whole "built-in Pokeball drawer" thing. Not only that but, one of the most intriguing things about the Pokemon Origins special was how a gym leader uses different types of Pokemon depending on how many badges the challenger has. I really like this idea because it gives the challenger enough of a challenge but not to a point where one side is overpowered. Another idea I had for episode three was that Morty would have a limited ability to read minds. Here are the strengths and weaknesses with this ability:

Strengths:

1. Can read the minds of children.

2. Can sense the emotions of people's thoughts.

Weaknesses:

1. The mind reading ability drains a bit of his energy every time he reads a mind.

2. Cannot clearly read adult's minds as they seem rather fuzzy to him.

I'm not sure how well I can implement this into the episode without pulling an info-dump about it on the reader.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   05:29, February 6, 2017 (UTC)

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Oh damn it! How could I forget about the Machamp?! I like how the player character looks up at the Machamp as if they were the sexiest thing they ever saw.... or something. Now that I think about it, a few ride Pokemon have been featured in the Sun and Moon anime so far such as Lapras, Sharpedo, Tauros, and Charizard. So having Stouland as a ride Pokemon in the anime could happen in the near future tough like I said before, I'm not guarenteeing anything here.

So Dr. Frank gave me some feedback on the latest version of my Cape Cod pasta and I thought it was pretty good. There are some things about the story I never noticed until he pointed them out such as overuse of the word "had". I might try to either cut out some unesessary usage of the word or replace some of the hads with synonyms.

"You also had Lt. Surge and his Raichu beating up on Rattata and Caterpie." Honestly, I'm not sure who's to blame here. Lt. Surge and Raichu for beating up Rattata and Caterpie or people using the Pokemon in a fight with Lt. Surge.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   21:20, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, exciting way to start the day!
I actually woke up today to the sound of my phone's emergency broadcast alarm. There were several tornados around the southeast part of the state. New Orleans East got hit really bad, luckily though my area of the city was largely untouched, just a lot of rain and wind, no damage.

Thanks for checking in!

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 07:56, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

Ki to the Series
What about Super Human as the title? Super Human - he's got superpowers, but he's incredibly human and often falls short. He tries really hard and that's what puts him above the average human, thus making him a super human - If you don't like that one then I'd say that Superhuman is my favorite of the bunch since it's pretty much the exact same title as what I suggested XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  04:24, February 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * Yay, glad you like it. Ew, snot beans? I remember having Bertie Bott's Every Flavor Beans once, most of them were pretty good: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CtwABtCqecA Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  05:54, February 10, 2017 (UTC)


 * Oh, it was just me making a Bertie Bott's joke, but then I later ended up linking to that video for reference. I was just trying to imply that Ki takes Bertie Bott's beans instead of Senzu and since the beans are green they'd be snot/booger flavored XD They used to sell really world Bertie Bott's beans(don't know if they still do) bean flavors included booger and earwax. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  21:33, February 10, 2017 (UTC)


 * Ew! Ew! Hmm, Ew might just sum up this whole conversation. Baby wipes to snot beans D: Thank you for reviewing my Creepypasta. I think it is going to my second to last one for a looooong time. I've got one more in the works which is being written in first person point of view and then I'm going to focus on writing my Visual Novels. I had one that I'd shared with you, but I ended up deciding to shelve it for now because it is going to be really expensive for me to make (I'd have to hire someone to make a ton of different backgrounds and character sprites). I'm going with something that is a little bit more scaled back/contained, but something that I'll be really proud of. I plan on slowly building up my profits and using those to eventually make 'Ikari'. I plan on still poking my head in on the wiki, so I won't be gone, just no more of my stories for a while, maybe. Thank you for being supportive! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  03:49, February 13, 2017 (UTC)


 * Haha, that is horrible XD I'm happy with two of the ideas that I am exploring right now! I'm planning on having something finished within 3 months (writing wise). Good luck to you as well :D Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  03:50, February 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reply to "Way Past Perfect" Message
Holy crap! I didn't know the word "had" was in the perfect past tense category. Heck, I didn't even know there were different types of past tenses. Well, I guess you learn something new everyday! I was also not aware of the Officer and a Gentleman movie.

When I think of Lilly from Pokemon Sun and Moon, I think of the Nebby memes. What's a Nebby meme? This: (http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/get-in-the-bag-nebby) Speaking of Tauros, as a kid, I always wondered where Ash got his Tauros from. When I looked into it years later, he got them in an episode that was banned in the U.S for featuring guns. I'm surprised they didn't replace the guns with something silly like a hot dog or hell just painted the tips of the guns orange in a dubbed version.

So yesterday, I got both a Rilou and a Charmander on Wonder Trade. It took me hours to get those mons but when I got them, I was excited! I also traded a Kadabra for a Machoke which evolved into Machamp when it arrived. Speaking of Kadabra, there was once a guy named Uri Geller who claimed Kadabra was a parody of him. Other than the psychic powers thing, I see no other connection between him and Kadabra. That's like me saying, "Um... Sirs and madams of Game Freak, this Mareep character is clearly lampooning me. This not only ruffles my ridges, but it also gets me triggered!"

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   06:23, February 9, 2017 (UTC)

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Lol! I would love to see the headline "Trump Sues Nintendo Over Mongoose Pokemon Lookalike: America Now a Laughing Stock!" I mean, if you're getting triggered over a Pokemon even remotely similar you, maybe you should go to the corner and think about your life choices.

To me, the ability to bend a spoon, read a person's mind, and whatnot sounds really cool. However, just because it sounds cool, doesn't mean it exists in real life. Case in point, Charizard. Yeah it's a dragon that breathes fire but that doesn't mean you're going to find a Charizard in the real world. Not only that, but if psychic powers were real, I think you'd see the headline, "Psychic Wins Lottery!" a lot more often. "What about twin telepathy?" I hear someone in the background say. Well, from what I've seen, there doesn't seem to be a lot of scientific evidence to back it up. Instead, the evidence is mostly anecdotal.

Speaking of Pokemon controversies, there's also Lenora in the anime. So in the games, Lenora is often seen wearing an apron or smock of some kind. My theory as to why she does this is because in the games, she is not only a gym leader but an archaeologist as well. One of the things an archeologist does is excavate which means that they're down the dirt and digging stuff up and when you're in contact with dirt, you get dirty. So my theory is that Lenora wears the aspron/smock to keep her clothes from getting dirty when excavating. The apron/smock also has pockets to possibly hold tools and/or small artifacts. I'm not sure what she does in the anime but in the English dub, they decided to have her not wear the apron/smock in fear that she'd resemble a mammy archetype. While it seems a bit silly, I can kind of understand where they're coming from.

So when I first played Pokemon Diamond and Pearl, I thought Fantina the gym leader was a guy with a really weird fashion sense. Then I found out they were a girl who has a French accent (in various versions of the game save for the French and Japanese versions). This leads me to believe that Fantina was from Kalos, a place that got the ball rolling on the whole "you can change your clothes" feature.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   21:32, February 9, 2017 (UTC)

Dark humor entry
Hey,

I wrote a story for the dark humor contest. I'd love if you'd check it out and leave me your thoughts.

Dinner with Vivianna

Thanks,

--K. Banning Kellum (talk) 23:05, February 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reply to "Detective Trump" Message
You know, this whole "Gumshoos looks like Trump!" thing is very odd to me. On the one hand, I kind of see where people are coming from when they say Gumshoos looks like Trump. On the other hand, that's pretty much all they really have in common. If people are going to compare Trump to a Pokemon, then I think Mr. Mime might be a better choice. Think about it. Mr. Mime is generally disliked, has silly hair, and like to create walls. The jokes pratically write themselves!

Before I forget, I uploaded my new Haunting Hour review today! Now it is a little shorter than I'd like but it's just one of those episodes that I can't really talk about without analysing it scene by scene. Don't worry. The next episode I'll review doesn't seem to be like this. Yay!

Regarding hypnosis, Penn and Teller: Bullshit did an episode on hypnosis and have touched upon regression hypnosis in other episodes like their alien abductions episode. In their hypnosis episode, they brought up this military program that was designed to hypnotize people to pull the trigger on Castro (spoilers: the program was not very effective). Not only that, but they also mentioned that when people are regressed, especially if they are regressed to their childhoods, the subject is simply "play-acting". For example, the language they use is still adult language but with "baby" pasted over it if that makes sense. Don't get me wrong. I like using hypnosis, especially the hypnosis videos made by UltraHypnosis, but I see them as more recreational than theraputic.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   20:38, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reply to "In a Past Life, I Was a German Guy Who Speaks English... Somehow" Message
You know, it's one thing to pretend you were a Japanese princess in a past life, but pretending to be someone who went though the Holocaust is really pushing it. I mean, really? That's the best past life you could come up with?

So I'm currently looking around the internet from some scrapped R.L Stine works to get me in the mood to keep working on my Cape Cod pasta. Recently, my interests have been focused on the Johto Quest series and story outlines like the one for Sunny Hill Farms. I already read about Goosebumps Gold but from what I understand, this guy has a massive bibliography so there's gotta be more than just one scrapped or lost project amongst his work.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   02:48, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Rax
Hey,

When I was a kid we had a great restaurant down here called Rax Roastbeef. I looked them up recently and found out that they are only functioning in the Ohio/Kentucky area. I was just writing to see if you have one near you and if it's still good?

Best,

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 06:00, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Pervert on the Loose! Unstable, Unarmed, and Unclothed!
Just dropping a line to tell you I recently uploaded a story with a rather nasty title and, although I know you're easy-going about these things, I wanted to apologize as well as warn you because I respect your desire to avoid certain things. I think you know I'm not nearly as insane as I appear, but I am very open-minded when it comes to writing and the title simply picked itself, just as the story wrote itself. This was probably all unnecessary, but I often do pointless things. Hope all is well.

Jay Ten (talk) 15:21, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Warning: If you do decide to read it, grab the fluffiest plush animal you can find, a warm blanket and the number of a good psychiatrist.

I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 15:27, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

~checks Jay's user page with a healthy sense of dread~ Ohhh... Well, sure enough, that title will let you know if you want to read it or not! Thank you for the heads-up on that one! That was a cool thing to do, and I appreciate the warning from both of you. I'm going to avoid this one, but just remember, only a clown can turn a frown upside-down (This was a reference to a segment on the 1990s Nickelodeon show Roundhouse. I tried to find the clip on YouTube, but instead I found creepy clown sighting videos. Dang it, pranksters...). Raidra (talk) 01:10, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reply to "Smells Like Teen Bullshit" Message
To add to your list of ridiculous past lives, has anyone ever claimed to be Laurence Olivier? You know, that guy from that Hamlet movie that was seen in Last Action Hero that the protagonist was watching in class? Also, has anyone ever claimed to be Christopher Lee in a past life? Speaking of Lee, here's his awesome reading of The Tell Tale Heart: (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aeZrRENgXmY)

So I did some work on my Cape Cod pasta last night. I've corrected some of the errors that Frank mentioned. The ones he specifically quoted involved me putting a period where a comma should be. I also started cutting down on the use of the word "had". I think what I might do is remove the word "had" in places where it doesn't seem necessary. That's the best option I got next to learning about different past tenses.

Besides Goosebumps Gold, I haven't had much luck in finding scrapped or lost R.L Stine related works. I guess he's just one of those authors that's very adamant to scrap or lose something. Either that or no one has discovered any more works like that. I guess my next best option is to read some Goosebumps books and review the next Haunting Hour episode. Speaking of the Haunting Hour, I decided to end chapter 15 at the part where the woman says yes and have chapter 16 begin with Kristy trying to find her mother.

This is what I have for the beginning of the sixteenth chapter: (The two parted ways as Kristy just sat there smiling, staring at her newly acquired yen. She quietly slipped the cash into her pocket and walked away from the bed. As she was walking away, she looked around and noticed that her mother was nowhere in sight. She walked up and down a few aisles as her head darted from side to side. As she walked down more aisles, she slowly increased her walking speed and held her breath for at least several seconds before letting out a huge sigh.)

Latest version of the Johto Quest Episode 3 outline is here: (http://pastebin.com/CQRajYS2)

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   16:17, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Looked 'em up
Awww man, I am super jealous that you still have an Uncle Alligator cup. When I was a kid we actually had a Rax in New Orleans really close to my apartment, so my mom would take me there sometimes. I had a ton of the alligator cups, but sadly, time has caused them to be lost.

I looked up their Ohio locations and there are 3 Rax located in the state:

Circleville, OH, West Union OH and Bellefontaine OH. Not sure if any of those areas are near you or not. Anyway, thanks for joining me on my stroll down memory lane!

Best,

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 04:50, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

Re: Currying favor
''[That terrible moment when you forget that Raidra posted on your talk page like two weeks ago and you end up not responding like a total @#$%&?! poopyhead!]''

Yup, it's true, Tim Curry was the puppet-fighting, showtune-singing pirate captain in Muppet Island. And you may think that Curry's fling with Miss Piggy is noteworthy, but have you seen Tim and... Him? Now there's an inappropriate man/puppet relationship!

" Girls will run around in your head ,  till you wished you liked boys instead !"  01:14, February 14, 2017 (UTC)


 * I'm not sure how I'd react if I got to converse with a miniaturized puppet version of myself, but I think I'd have that same exact poopy-eating grin Tim's wearing there.


 * If someone was thinking, then Tim Jr. is probably being kept in storage somewhere, being prepared for his spot in the inevitable Tim Curry Residential Library. One can hope.


 * " Girls will run around in your head ,  till you wished you liked boys instead !"  03:19, February 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reply to "This Guy Reveals a Shocking Secret About This Other Guy! Historians Hate Him!" Message
Last night, I got a Tyrunt and Ralts through Wonder Trade! Though, I had to sit through a bunch of dud trades to get them. These include (Trade X Pokemon and get a Wingull, Pikipek, or Yungoos).

Good news! The outline for episode three of Pokemon: Johto Quest is almost finished. However, I'm having trouble with coming up with the narrator's ending dialogue. I came up with this: (With her first badge earned, I'd say that Emily is certainly moving up in the world! However, this is just one step in her long, eventful journey. What else will happen to Emily and Eddy? Find out next time on Pokemon: Johto Quest!)

It's okay but I feel like I could do better. Here's the latest version of the outline to help you put: (http://pastebin.com/U5i6LUK5) I'm going to look at transcripts of Pokemon episodes to get some inspiration. I'm going to start with the Indigo League because they have some really famous episodes like I Choose You and whatnot.

As for that Shakesphere story, I actually saw that on an episode of Mysteries at The Museum. I'm not sure why there aren't too many scrapped works of Shakesphere. I think it might be due to two things. One, Shakesphere's works were written during a time where there weren't as many ways to preserve content like putting them on flash drives or uploading them to a storage cloud. Two, he was such a good artist, he never needed to scrap anything (highly unlikely but who knows).

Hoaxes.org? Never heard of it before. Seems rather interesting. It's kind of the Snopes.com but has a bit of a simpler design.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   02:18, February 14, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Disturbing Films that are Old
Just recently got around to watching that video you sent me concerning disturbing films, and, to my absolute horror, I've not seen quite a few of them.

As a side note, "A Dog From Andalusia," or, "Un Chien Andalou," was my favorite film out of those mentioned that I've seen. It's so wonderfully strange that I can't help but love it.

SnakeTongue (Nelson Smith) (talk) 22:18, February 15, 2017 (UTC)