Talk:Insanity/@comment-26605596-20150726204715

There is plenty of room for improvement on this story. More backstory of the protagonist, less of the YUCK factor. I understand that sub-par writers use gore to keep the readers' attention, and SOMETIMES that is okay. But if all your story has is blood and guts, you're going to bore this audience. Scare us with something truly, deeply disturbing, not just a severed tongue. 4/10