Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10789912-20160117093544/@comment-10789912-20160125055538

SoPretentious wrote: Here's what I noticed:

"He could also see that the wall in from (front) of him."

"His confusion became hatred at the site (sight) of the door alone."

"It was you whom standed (stood) against him"

"Enki finds sentient life, teaches it and helped (helps) it grow, and once it develops, destroys it"

"The sharp sound of the wind was completely halted by the meat's distinct ripping sound (which/that) was only broken by the sound of the disconnecting spinal cord,"

In regards to the endings, I'm partial to neither. These chapters were great, riveting stuff. Thank you for your corrections. I have fixed these errors, and the story is in better shape as a result. I'm glad you enjoyed these three chapters. I was wondering if you'd be interested in leaving a review (using your scoring system) on the final product upon release?