Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20170208005947/@comment-30771515-20170208084108

You should categorize this as a micropasta. Furthermore, you should say "you can barely see or hear" instead of "you can't see or hear" since rain doesn't cause deafness nor blindness (well not that I've heard of ). Also, in my opinion, instead of transitioning from love to like, you should keep it at one word, which will emphasize your whole pasta concerning the woman's feelings towards rain, while also making the whole story smoother.