Talk:I Am a Big Boy/@comment-26054278-20150212012522/@comment-25941663-20150212141442

I understand what you are saying. This was the main fear I had writing the story. That people would focus on the uninteresting part and they wouldn't even bother with the ending.

But in the end, it was entirely my decision to make it this way. I wanted the reader to feel like this is nothing special; a bit weird, but nothing unnatural. Then, in my mind, the ending would have a much larger impact, seemingly coming out of the blue.