Talk:Nobody Loves Tragedy

Loved this Pasta! Only critique is that the last paragraph could be cleaned up a bit. You did a great job of hiding the truth about the ghost and over explained everything the reader already knew in their head in the last paragraph...knowing that fact i'd say have some more fun with it to titilate us more! Excellent pasta though. One of my favs!

StupidDialUp (talk) 07:45, January 5, 2013 (UTC)StupidDialUp