Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30514640-20170121223355/@comment-24101790-20170122021342

If you want me to give it a rating outright, I can. I prefer to give reasons and feedback rather than numerical values (as numerical values don't help an author much). I'd say that if I had to rate the story, I'd give it a 4/10. There are numerous mechanical issues, the characters don't quite feel believable in their responses, and the story feels like it's been addressed a number of times before without much new in the way of content. It's not 'the worst story ever', but it does have its flaws that prevent it from being interesting/involving.

Aso for the story being deleted so quickly (I believe 5-10 minutes was the range), most admins are able to read and identify if a story is good or has issues in a relatively short time. For example, the admin who deleted your story is the founder of the wiki and has spent a good 6-8 years reading/writing creepypastas so they have some experience with it. I won't say that admins will always be right, but having two separate people weigh in and point out issues does tip the scales. I'd also recommend taking your next story here before posting as it's a good place to receive feedback.