Talk:I Don't Know What to Do/@comment-26491466-20150623172541

Knowing this is a creepypasta, I do agree that this is a great story. The only change I would make is to give us a little more buildup to the final moment, for the simple reason that by the end, I was bored. I had seen this twist ending cliche in many other stories on the creepypasta website, namely the "writer of the story did it" cliche. This made me unable to be frightened, but other then that, this is a very well-built story.

- +1 for good grammer

- -2 for inability to frighten

- +5 for solid story structure

- -1 for inability to really build the tension

7/10