Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24101790-20140405020451/@comment-24101790-20140407053234

Thanks, that's kinda all I had because it was one of my experiences in Nicaragua. 'Bout ninety percent is my grandma's story and what I experienced afterwards is a true story (At least to her.), the ten percent that I'm embellishing is my grandmother's depiction of the carratanagua. (He was apparently just a skeleton, but it seemed a little too reminiscent of "and then a skeleton popped out!")

You got any suggestions for providing a little more closure to the readers? I'm kinda stumped on that part. Any help would be great.