Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20181203115538/@comment-34823985-20181205201208

Thanks again, DrBobSmith. Yeah, I have a hard time judging the level that meets NSFW standards. I suppose part of my misjudgment was the ideas in my head I decided not to implement. I'm not really squeamish, but I'm not entirely comfortable with this kind of subject. Still, I write what comes to mind.

One of my credit cards (the one I've used) gives you more purchase details online. You can also go on some store's sites and get a purchase breakdown. It's not mentioned in the story one way or the other, but maybe Desiray doesn't work and therefore doesn't have the cash on hand to make even Walmart purchases on that level. I don't think it sinks the story.

I'm sure a third draft will develop eventually. We'll just have to wait and see what floats to the top. I promise I'm not going to go rogue and just post it on the site prematurely this time. :)