Talk:Seeing Is Believing/@comment-7673575-20170918124009

This one is more creepy than most stories on CPW, because it depicts something that actually might happen or has already happened. From the point of Melantha, there is that overwhelming feeling of weakness: being accused of a crime you did not commit, and didn't even know it took place. And then the anger kicks in. As BloodySpghetty would say, "it's the simplicity of this that makes it work."

It's a good read, but I'll mark it for review because you switched places of exclamation marks and apostrophes in the dialogue.