Talk:Fictional Friend/@comment-24434528-20171030051208

Being raped by Leafeon was random. REALLY random. Like, Vince wanted to be her friend and pet until right there at the end, what the heck? And it wasn't just a kiss, people, since she kissed her teacher, and the story specifically said she lost her virginity…The story could have done without that, is what I'm staying. Still good, really good, but that part went too far in that it came out of nowhere. 8/10.