Talk:Off the Highway/@comment-24890120-20160912004041

Actually not bad. I only read it once, but I liked it. Perhaps that's because I had some creepy piano music in the background. It had a decent buildup with two relatable, ordinary characters going about their trucking business. The characters aren't exaggerated and aren't entirely dislikeable. I can partially relate to this because when I was eleven or so years old, I took a piss on the side of a very dark highway whilst interstate between the Carolinas. I was already scared so when I heard a high-pitched opposum or whatnot, I ran free-dicked fast as I could to my parent's car.

But enough of me. Good job on this, 8.5/10 I'd say.