Talk:An Exorcism of Sorts/@comment-25941663-20160926023037

I kinda liked this one. It was an interesting read with an unexpected twist at the end. What I liked the most is how the story had a campy feel to it. It didn't take itself too seriously and that made for an amusing read.

Shayton's dialogue fit him perfectly. It was a bit corny, but it was a great fit for his character. The exchange between him and the Beast was very entertaining.

The cliches were used nicely enough. I didn't expect the "child gains superstrength" to be used in an exorcism type of story. I think this one was hard to pull off and I commend you for the effort. The second cliche (good guy is bad) was also used well enough and in a way I wasn't expecting.

As far as plot though, the story is nothing spectacular. It had its moments when the parents rushed into the room and things begun to go down, but overall this was bland as a storyline.

All in all, even though this had a unique flavor, underneath it all it fell a bit short.

6/10