Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30891328-20170128035958/@comment-30891328-20170129201119

YawningLion wrote: HDhunter360 wrote: YawningLion wrote: Get rid of the blocks of text, because it's really tiring to read. There's also a couple grammatical mistakes, though that's not really what I want to focus on. Like Reary said, you should add a lot more details. Stretch the story out longer; don't add anything that's unnecessary, of course, but don't just dive into the meat of the story. Make us feel the atmosphere, and explain more. If I get rid of the text blocks I'd be breaking the rules, and most creepypastas have mysteries that remain unknown even in the end. What's unnecessary in this story? I never said anything is unnecessary. I said you need to add more details. About the setting, about the characters, about why we should care. You don't need to detail what's going on or what the monster is, but let us experience more.

And how would you be breaking the rules? Just curious. I mean breaking the rules of story editing, they're on this site.