Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26011836-20170701180236/@comment-29417957-20170701230938

This pasta feels rushed and unfinished.

This pasta also raises several questions: Why are the paintings watching Alex? What knocked him out? What happens after he was knocked out?

I feel that this story could be improved if you expanded the story for more details and a bigger plot.

This story also needs to have a satisfying ending, as it just raises more questions. We don't know what happened to Alex after he was knocked out. Did Alex die? Was he kidnapped? Was he tortured?