Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5614678-20180105235611/@comment-32764586-20180106000647

Whoa, that was intense and utterly mortifying. The detail was amazing and I had a clear picture of what was happening. It's been a while since this has happened, but I actually shivered a bit while reading this. This was quite well written as well, so well done!

My only complaint at all is that you seem to use the phrase (not unlike) while comparing things. It's a bit repetitive. Other than that, I really liked this.