User blog comment:Chemicalassassin/Is this a bad pasta idea?/@comment-16771274-20140207213907

Ehhh, well the ideas sure are cool, but for the older readers who are more into science and know what actually causes the feeling of heartbreak, it might be a little less easy to get scared from.

But heartbreak can actually do heck on your mental state, since villians and killers of all kinds usually have some sort of back story about something terrible happening to them which caused their corruption. Heartbreak can cause many health issues, maybe you should do a little research :) I doubt if a girl/guy got dumped or something it'd kill them, but there are many very realistic things that could in fact take place if the amount of trauma was great enough and it's something that causes them much stress. Believe me, once you start worrying enough, it makes your life a lot harder and can lead to many health problems. Memory loss, social anxiety, those are only a few. While demons can be a cool idea, you should also consider a more realistic plot that have elements that could really happen. After all, it's what could happen that scares us the most >:) Keep toying with the whole demon idea, sounds cool. But even if you stick with that, throwing in a few real mental illnesses never hurt in making things more interesting XD It's a great idea to use inspiration from experiences you've had, since you can make it more real sounding, just have fun with it and listen to some scary music as you come up with your story >:)