Talk:Fat/@comment-27593652-20170301153413

To be honest, i didn't really like the story. It's wel written, to be fair, but it's unrealistic and sometimes things happened that just left me wondering "Okay but why?" or "That doesn't sound like a logical thing to say/think". I honestly wondered for a couple paragraphs if this was going to be a JTK fanfic. On the good side it's, once again, well written and i kinda felt sorry for Mel.

Didn't really like it, but 5/10 for the writing.