Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24381191-20141205223422/@comment-24101790-20141207005415

I like the additions. Will mention that you misspelled weird. "It was such a wierd creature" Other than that, I see no other issues with the story. Good job, I don't see any issues with it that would be cause for it to be marked for review or deleted. If you're looking for more assistance, don't hesitate to ask chat or me. (Although, I've given about all I can give.)