Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28812725-20160621224207/@comment-25569708-20160623194307

One more thing to add, certain scenes here seem to be almost directly lifted from other well known creepypastas, including [http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Don't_Turn_on_the_Light! Don't Turn on the Light!] ("I looked above the mess, and saw "Aren't you glad you didn't turn the lights on?" in blood on the wall beside her bed") and also White with Red ("I felt myself walk to the strange door again, not sure why, and peeked in the hole again. This time all I could see was red. I calmly went downstairs and reported not the murder, but the room to the woman behind the counter, still not knowing why I felt so calm. She raised an eyebrow and cocked her head to the side and asked, "What room? We don't have an unnumbered and none of the doors handles are broken"). I just wanted to let you know that even if you did revise and fix all the problems within your story, your pasta would probably not be accepted here because of the very close similarities to other pastas within your story. Anyways, I just wanted to let you know that.