Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-17793895-20170526204832/@comment-24101790-20170530212831

Rebeccatrimmer wrote: Hi, thank you for the feedback. I really appreciate it. Would it help if I remove the word "rake" and just say "creature(s)"? Forgive me for asking a stupid question, but am I allowed to fix my story and repost it on this website?

Not really as it doesn't really resolve the anticlimactic ending and just removes a single issue where there's multiple problems. This is going to require quite a bit of re-working.