Talk:Connect Two/@comment-3541151-20150221225856

If saw were romantic... Aw! Or should I say, Saw!

I actually liked this one, but I'll Critique it with fair comedic hate. The story is kind of rushed into the plot. Why are you doing this? Just Because! Who is funding this? Rich Folk! Why is this legal? You signed a contract!

Not real subtle loose end tying...

The story offered an interesting look on psychological horror, and the philisophical defense of the villains motives. Now that I think about it, the opening lines need to take laxatives, because they are FULL OF SHIT.

It's all about the philosophy of LOVE and CHOICE and MORALITY, and the story contradicted that point. As much as I liked this story, that takes points off.

The writing is enjoyable but some things feel unneeded in the wake of the deeper aspects, and mostly seem to be unneded build up. Honestly, I can't say I'm satisfyed with the villain's cumuppance, because it's cartoonish and would never work out.

Above average but flawed. Connect Two is a great story, with too many errors. 7/10 Play me out, Daffy! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PwpD3USKEKw

THAT'S ALL FOLKS