Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180808214225/@comment-36393004-20180809155214

Most of my stories have drawn from personal experiences. This one is just the opposite and I wanted to see if I was headed in the right direction. Sometimes I feel like I am too descriptive at points and not enough in others. I am still working on finishing it but I thought I would see what the community had to say first.