Talk:Tyler's Loop/@comment-25024572-20150402132201

There aren't many Creepypasta stories based around time travel, so it's nice to see something new. It's even better when it's done pretty well, like this one. But it's not perfect. It was kind of hard to tell who was talking during the second line, and in general kind of hard to understand what was going on at first (thought I guess that was the point). My biggest problem with the story is that I want to know a bit more background. What did Tyler do to make future Tyler kill him? Why and how does future Tyler meet past, possibly alternate, versions of himself? Those are things I'm genuinely curious about, and wish were explained.

So, while the story isn't perfect, I do think it's pretty good. It has an interesting concept that's executed pretty well (though it could've been better), is well written, and is very original. If I had to give a rating, I'd say 8/10.