Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25036236-20140610152253/@comment-25558572-20140610181325

Hsshall wrote: Ok, I will take all your tips EXCEPT the last one. Thanks!

If you're going to take my tips, take all of them in their enterity. I have been writing daily for about a year and a half now, I know what I'm talking about. And understand that I am not crticizing you as a whole, I am criticizing your work because it was a disappointment for me to read. It needs a lot of work. If you paste it as is, I can assure you that it will not survive.