Talk:Red-Handed Hunter/@comment-25425104-20141027093556/@comment-24325593-20141027100621

I tried to make the story as the character would tell it. I tried to make it sound as though that would be how someone would talk. Being as I'm in my teen years myself and say for example I was a deranged killer telling some form of creepy story, I wouldn't specifically talk about it to someone with great detail, more, I would be very simple and straight to the point instead of dragging it along but that's just my own opinion.

Thank you for your critic though c: