Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27008899-20151118051531

"What did this schmo do anyway?" Vinny asks. His thick Jersey accent always made Mike smile. Mike slows the sedan to a stop as the light turns red. He looks over at Vinny and says shrugging, "I honestly have no idea. Not my business, the boss said take him out, I don't ask questions." Vinny lights a smoke and rolls down the window. He coughs and snorts then promptly spits the accumulated mucus over the rusty hatchback and onto the sidewalk in front of Lasordo's Deli. The corridors of the dark silent city echo the sound as it splats on the ground. Mike rolls his eyes and shakes his head in disgust at this. "Ya know, if you stop that shit maybe, just maybe, you wouldn't have all those sinus problems." Vinny flips his ashes out the window as the light turns green. "Yeah, ya think? And maybe you should shut the fuck up and drive before I put a bullet in ya." Mike laughs at his friend's idle threat and proceeds through the stop light.

The car slows to a stop in front of the New York apartment building. The pile had no windows and is barely standing in the middle Brooklyn. "Which one is it?" asks Vinny flipping the half smoked cigarette from the window. It strikes the ground leaving sparks trailing as it rolls to the center of the road. "215." Mike says pulling the slide back on his .45 caliber Smith & Wesson. It slams forward quickly as he lets go. "Too damn noisy" says Vinny as his switch blade opens. The street lights reflect off the razor sharp blade creating a strobe of light as he rolls the handle in his fingers. "And what are you gonna do if the he has a gun dip shit?" Mike asks mockingly. "That's what this is for." Vinny replies pulling the right side of his black trench coat from his chest to reveal a sawed off double barrel shotgun attached to the inside with a string through the trigger guard, and the barrel resting in his inside pocket. "Jesus, you're a crazy fucker." Mike said turning his head to look up at the single dimly lit room on the second floor. Vinny smiles at the back of his head as he pulls the latch to the door. The metal creeks as it swings open.

The two men make their way to the front door of the building with Mike leading the way. He grabs the handle and gives it a quick turn. "Shit, it's locked." he says as his hand slides around the knob only slightly moving in both directions. "Maybe there's a fire escape." Vinny says looking down the dark alley between the building and an abandoned factory. "You wanna go down there?" Mike asks.

"Not fucking really, but we ain't getting in through the front."

"God damn it. Can't we come back in the morning?.

"Don't tell me you are afraid of fucking ghosts."

"Fuck you Vinny, I'd rather not find out is all."

Vinny puts his hands in his trench coat and begins walking down the ally. "It's just the dark asshole. Same shit there that's in the light." he says as his steps echo in the darkness environed by the buildings. "Did I ever tell you how much I hate you?" Mike asks following his friend into the void. The two men come to a fire escape. They can barely make it out through the dark cloudy skies of the night. "Give me a boost." Vinny says lifting his foot. Mike laces his fingers and places them under Vinny's fine Italian leather shoes. Vinny forces himself up and grabs the ladder. It easily falls free with a screech.

Vinny starts climbing the ladder, but quickly realizes that Mike is just standing there looking at the old factory. Biting his bottom lip he lets out a low whistle and says, "Ya coming or do I get your half of this job too?" Mike says nothing and just stares for another few seconds. Then, as though waking from a day dream, he replies, "Uh, yeah... I'm coming." Vinny reaches the top of the first level as Mike begins to climb. "What is your fucking deal?" Vinny whispers as he crouches down in front of their targets window. Mike finally reaching the top responds, "Can we just do this and get the hell out of here?" Both men peer into the dimly lit room. From each side of the window.

The room contained little more than a dirty rotting couch and a worn coffee table. Gently, Mike reached down and began sliding the window up. It provided little resistance as he pulls it open. Mike slowly steps through the sill and pulls out his pistol. The apartment silent enough to hear police sirens clear from Queens. With no signs of life anywhere, the two men creep from the window on separate sides of the near ancient couch. A single door stood in the corner, presumably leading to the rest of the apartment. As they approach it they hear a yell "Don't come in here!" Both men look at each other and laugh. Mike replies "Well I guess we should leave then!" Both begin laughing even harder at the derisive statement. Two loud bangs strike the wall followed by a scream of, "Fuck you!", "So much for the element of surprise. Man, fuck this guy. Lets go in hot." Vinny says ripping the sawed off shot gun from the inside of his coat.

Vinny grabs the knob and whips open the door. Suddenly the thug's entire body lifts in the air. Struggling he reaches for Mike, but before he can reach him Vinny disappears into the room behind the door, with it quickly slamming behind him. Vinny was gone, as though he was inhaled by the adjoining room. Mike stood in shock just looking at the door. It seemed to him to be an eternity in his own mind trying to rationalize what he just saw, though it was merely seconds before he let out a cry of, "What the fuck! Oh my God, oh my God, oh my God." He approached the door and began lightly rapping on the poorly painted slab, "Vinny? Are you in there?" his voice noticeably shaken at what he witness just seconds before. Dead silence was the only reply. Mike began pacing the room rubbing the back of his neck with his unarmed hand. "I gotta go in, I.. gotta finish the job. Vinny, Jesus, fucking Vinny man, I gotta go in." say Mike frantically. With his heart racing he walks over and stands in front of the door. His skin begins to feel as though millions of needles were all over his body as he grabs the knob. Mike slowly turns the knob and pulls until the door is ajar.

He peeks inside through the crack to see nothing but darkness. Pulling the door open further he is met with a cool gust of air. "Vinny?" he cries out peering into the void. His echo answers the same. Mike pulls the door open until the knob is touching the wall. He lifts his weapon quickly as though it could defend against the fate that befell his friend just moments ago. The cool breeze subsides as he cries out once again, "Vinny!" The hitman stares into the dark abyss as sweat begins to drip from his brow. His hands tremble as he places his foot into the blackness. He reluctantly brings his other foot into the darkness and stands ready for anything. "Vinny, where the fuck are you man, quit fucking around!" he screams. This cry is punctuated by the door slamming behind him.

Gripped with fear Mike lunges back to the door only to fall to the ground. The gun fires a single round into the darkness as he lands face first. He stands up and reaches out for the knob, but feels nothing. "Holy fuck, holy fuck, holy fuck!" he screams, as he steps forward, searching for his escape with hands stretched out before him, not that he could see his hands in front of him. After a few steps Mike realizes his exit is now gone. The thug turns around and around waving his pistol about the blackness. His now sweat soaked shirt clung to him as though it too was afraid of the dark. "He...hello?" he said, praying in his head for any response. This again is met with silence. It was then he notices a light in the distance. Barely more than a pin prick, the goon began making his way toward it. Slowly at first, but with fear at his back his pace quickly turns to a jog, then a full sprint.

Several minutes past and Mike seemed no closer to the light than when he began. The exhausted thug slows to a stop. Breathing heavily, he kneels down gasping for air. His knuckles white from holding his weapon for what seems an eternity. His tired hand releases his grip, and weapon disappears into the black. It was gone; lost into the abyss, just like Vinny, just like himself. Mike sat down with his legs sprawled out and leans back, supporting his upper half with his hands. As his breathing calms he began to faintly hear a sound. At first he thought it was in his head. He remembered all the stories he heard about people going crazy in sensory depravation. But it grew louder and louder, and before long he could make out the faint words, "Mike." It was that voice that always made him smile, the voice of his partner calling out to him.

Mike quickly jumped to his feet and roared into the darkness, "Vinny!" He could hear the footsteps drawing ever closer. "Where are you ya bastard?" Vinny voice was nearly on top of him now. "Here." Mike says just as Vinny runs full speed into him. "Oh you stupid son of a bitch." Mike says from the flat of his back. Both men crawl to each other laughing and embrace. "I never thought I would find you." Mike says fighting back the tears as he cradles his best friends head. "Where the fuck are we?" Vinny asks, his face barely visible in the aphotic world they now reside. "I have no idea, but there is a light over there." Mike says pointing in the direction of minuscule dot, but quickly drops his hand as he realizes from his elbow down disappears into the black. "Look, just take my hand and follow me." Mike says sternly to his friend. "I'm not holding your greasy fingers." Vinny says pulling his hand from Mike's with a jerk. "Ok, do you want to get the fuck out of here or not?" Vinny reaches his hand out and the two fumble for each other's for a moment before taking hold.

The two thugs walk hand in hand through the darkness toward the light. As hours pass both begin to get weary of the trek. Neither had said a word for at least an hour when Vinny chimed up, "Lets stop for minute. My legs are killing me, and I think I have blister on my ass." Mike snickered and let go. Both sat in the darkness just listening to the silence for a moment. "Worst job ever." Mike said.

"Yeah, you ain't kiddin." "Where do you think we are?" "Space ship? Dead? Your mothers vagina?"

Both men laugh, then Mike asks, "Where did you go when you got sucked in?" Vinny paused placing his hand on Mike's shoulder. "In here. In fucking here.," Vinny's voice grew louder, "I got sucked into this god damn place! This place where there is nothing!" Mike hears Vinny stand as his voice became enraged. "This fucking place! This god forsaken place and there's nothing! No map, no people, just nothing!" his screams echo as he began struggling to remove his coat mid rant. "If we're dead, why doesn't someone fucking tell us? I at least want to know how!" Mike hears the trench coat flap against the hard ebony floor. Another moment goes by when Mike says, "The bangs on the wall." Vinny calms down and Mike feels him sit close to him. "Jesus, your right. That dirty piece of shit shot us clean through the wall. Ha...I guess he wasn't kiddin about us not coming in." As the men sat and laughed, a they began to hear a sound in the distance. "Shhh" Mike asks, "what the fuck is that?" Both men go quiet and listen hard. "It, it sounds like, it sounds like a baby, crying." Vinny said in a confused tone.

Both men jumped to their feet and saw the white speck begin to come towards them. As got closer it became larger. The baby's cries grew louder and louder as the once tiny splotch began moving moving in their direction. "Come on, let's get the fuck out of here!" Mike yelled gesturing with his now visible hand. The thugs began running as fast as they could, fighting to stay ahead of the terrible cries. Mike looks back to see the light now upon them. He stops in his tracks, mesmerized by the glow. "Mike come on damn it!" Vinny yelled grabbing for his friend, his voice nearly muffled by the baby's cries. As Vinny took hold of him Mike's body began floating off his feet gently. Vinny's hand slips from his companion's and he watches him float up into the light. Vinny burst into tears and falls to his knees screaming, "Don't leave me! Please Mike! Don't leave me."

It wasn't long that Mike completely forgot about his friend on the other side of the light. He would even forget his own name in a short time. David was the name his mother chose for him. At a young age David began having dreams of a man in the darkness. At first he was afraid, but began to feel as though he had known the man for a life time. His thick Jersey accent always made David smile. 