Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25610621-20141101201840/@comment-25610621-20141103170558

Ok, I think everything has been fixed. I read through it a few more times and didn't notice anything (but again, don't hesitate to correct me if you find anything else wrong with it.) Sorry it took a while, I had to fix the indenting and organize the paragraphs again. Feel completely free to critique/inform me of things I could fix or do better on as much as you want. After all, what is the workshop for? Thanks again. =)