Talk:Venomous/@comment-MrDupin-20170220221909/@comment-Helel ben Shahaar-20170312193328

Really, MrDupin?

The story was good; the protagonist is way better than the most I've seen on this site. They are nothing else than the derranged slashers that kill for fun, and that my friend, stopped being even remotely creepy years ago. This protagonist however, has a permanent motif; he kills to avenge injustices done to nature. He admits that he is sick, which is also the boost. He also states that he doesn't want to do it, but feels obliged.

Killings were original. Your average Michael Myers would simply slash them up and leave a gory mess. This killer is far more predatorial. He stalks, and he makes sure that the deaths are clean and seem like accidents.

I enjoyed the story. Not as much as some others, but the concept is really great and original.

Therefore, I award this tale 8/10.