Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34853659-20180913215844/@comment-35711173-20180913231940

No. Your language is weak. Like I said, you have more work to do. This will take some time. I could do it myself in oh three hours. But you need to learn the process for carefully cooking your creepypasta. Remember, you must use the finest ingredients and you must be prepared to take the time to do it right. We aren't making instant mashed potatoes here.

The lessons you will learn here apply to any fiction. Almost all of them will also apply to essays, term papers, e-mails, web site content and reports as well.

Let's start with paragraphs. Please study this blog post to learn when you should use them.

https://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Fatal_Disease/How_to_Start_a_New_Paragraph_Or:_How_I_Learned_to_Not_Make_a_Wall-o-Text