Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24248644-20160117031317

So I've been trying to write a creepypasta, but now I am stuck. At certain point in my pasta, there's a part where the two characters are having a short conversation, but I don't know how I should write it. Here are the two most common forms I've seen in writing.

Example A:

She ran into the store, breathing heavily. Curious, I asked her what was wrong. She answered that something has been chasing her and needed a phone to contact the police.

Example B:

She ran into the store, breathing heavily.

"Are you alright, ma'am?" I asked her curiosuly

"Oh my god, something has been chasing me and my cellphone is dead. Can I use the phone to call the police?" 