Talk:My Sister Got Stuck in a Gap in Our House's Foundation/@comment-25471033-20171220202632

There was a lot of build up in the beginnning and throughout, but then you chopped up the sentences into their own paragraphs to make some sort of effect, and the ending was kind of cut off. Besides that, it was a pretty suspenseful creepypasta. I'd say an 7.5,8/10