Talk:Blacking Out/@comment-9041013-20150812122701

THIS IS A RANT, AND I DONT CARE WHAT YOU THINK OF IT 

I have to admit you made a pretty good job on this creepypasta, however I have to say that I think it's a bit lacking in spice. You could've elaborated a bit more on his blacking out episodes, I know a guy who claims to have this "blackout" problem in which he snaps and unintentionally causes damage to the things and people around him (Not that I ever saw him actually blackout, so i guess it's a lie since he never even gets mad even though openly admitting he has severe anger problems).

Also it doesn't really make sense that a person who lost his friends becomes murderous, blacking out, passing out, suffering from amnesia all these make perfect as a result of trauma. I guess even severe mental damage going as far as mental ailments but not murderous rage that drives a person to a suicide.

Also I think it would've been better if you made him find some better solution than suicide, he killed a deer, not a human. Should've run away or just snap completely and go fully mental.

~BloodySpghetti