Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29015383-20160712171950/@comment-28266772-20160714142433

Hey! Finished my exam early, and I have enough time to offer some feedback.

So I think there needs to be just a bit more to clarify that the gracioushost has a vampiric stage persona - but other than that I enjoyed your improvements and I think it only really needs one or two more explicit references to the Host acting it up.