Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37412299-20181105034538/@comment-9041013-20181105122300

So essentially it's a typical ritual pasta to summon the devil? Why the devil? Mephestopholes wasn't the devil, he was a demon. The devil is kind of "God level" of Hell... so getting to buddies with El Diablo should be a huge deal which it isn't in your story.

Same issue Ned pointed out, how on earth would old devil worshippers get to good ol' Satan without modern means? sounds kind of way too convinient.

Also, why would he need your soul? He is an Archangel, he's like a walking a cosmic nuke. He doesn't need your puny human soul. Fff