Talk:Abandoned PokéDoll/@comment-26441375-20150528023641

some problems I want to go by

1.too short no one wants to read a short story

2.doesnt seem much of a Pokémon creepypasta someone could alter it and change it the only thing that made me think its a Pokémon creepypasta is the title and some words that's it

that's it so I would rate it about a 4/10 improve it much and it would be a great creepypasta