Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35911608-20180823132725/@comment-35911608-20180824173909

L0CKED334 wrote: Example:

“The name isn’t the problem. The problem is the disease. Nothing is working. We need a new strategy before the CDC has to get involved,” the third doctor stated. “Otherwise, we’re gonna have a Black Death on our hands pretty soon.”

“Don’t joke about that. We’re almost all out of conventional treatments. So maybe, you two wanna pull your heads out of asses and think of something?” the first doc said.

I've updated that part, but I just realized that I failed to space those two lines apart. Regardless, it still flowed really weirdly, so I changed it just slightly.