Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24929924-20140511161513/@comment-24929924-20140512051700

CassistRabbit wrote: What parts of this did you write? I wrote all of it except for the last two quotes.

I want to say thanks to you all for the feedback, I really appreciate it. I can definitely see what you guys mean about the flowery language and everything. I was trying to give it a sort of aged feeling, but I guess I overdid it a bit :P

Funnily enough, I actually didn't know there is (or was) another creepypasta named "The Journey." I didn't check the wiki beforehand, which seems kind of dumb of me in hindsight.

I'll continue to post revisions, if anyone's interested. The story's only about halfway done at this point, but I'm making good progress:) Thanks again for the great comments!