Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20180727065223/@comment-9041013-20180728202049

TheWizardOfTheWoods wrote: The third was the intention. No malice on the part of the main, just a lot of grief with a touch of haunting. I'll see what I can do with it. Oh that could be cool.

I'm not against the supernatural route, but I have a feeling you're going for a more realistic scenario. Definitely should detail a bit about the living baby, the loss of the baby and the grieving process before revealing the ending.