Talk:Children of Mirth/@comment-25105261-20140626151227

10/10 until the last paragraph.

2/10 for the last paragraph.

Seriously what the fuck

This twist was fucking awful. A wonderful new way of presenting a creepy story, a wonderful new look on things and in the end something barely mildly shocking, but more disgusting, illogical, and cliché. The creepypasta equivalent of. "I was in utter terror, but i gathered all my hope and opened the door, got on the floor, everyone walked the dinosaur"