Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-36815674-20180904000312/@comment-26444017-20180907230352

I liked the use of music, and the accent especially helps with the first story. If I had to pick something to criticize, I would suggest pausing between certain lines. For example, at the end of dialogue, you can leave a little dead space before the story picks up again. Same thing for teh twist lines at the end. Just an extra second of quiet would really make 'em pop, I think.

Still, I enjoyed the narrations, and will be adding them to the stories proper. Keep it up.