Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-30891328-20170419015716/@comment-24101790-20170424011517

HDhunter360 wrote: EmpyrealInvective wrote: Seems like you're just repeating the same (punctuation, wording, and story) issues from your three previous stories here. Are you just trying to get me to give up using the same insult? And don't just say, "No.", with some excuse, because I'm not playing your games.

Nah, I'm trying to get you to actually improve your writing instead of half-assing it. I mean, how lazy do you have to be to ignore multiple people giving you advice on multiple occasions?

As such, you have one hour to make a valuable edit to this article. If not, this post and the next one that shows the same errors will be automatically locked to prevent people from wasting their time on you.