User blog comment:EtherBot/Random Writer's Showcase: SoDaft Potato/@comment-5101683-20180722082709

Thank you for writing this. It made me realize that my writing itself wasn't particularly well thought out and it also revealed someone who can aid me to some extent.

I liked Neon even though I saw the twist coming (which was probably dumb luck). Using the knowledge gleaned from this, I probably liked it because of the artistic writing. Also, I probably wouldn't have figured out the twist had this not been a horror site.

I also liked I Laughed at a Funeral. I didn't see the twist for that one, probably because the title could have went either way, as you pointed out. I actually thought it had been posted at an earlier time when I first read it due to its use of a twist and its well-written nature.

I think that the lessons I can take for this are twofold: 1.) I should probably read more of SoDaft Potato's work and 2.) I should probably look over my own work more, because I can.