Talk:Lies in Static/@comment-26508355-20150618222333

Most flaws have already been pointed out but I want to mention one that nobody ever realizes: there's a difference between "happened" and "reported happening". You're reported missing only when someone notices your absence and calls the police - and that could be multiple weeks and even months after you've actually gone missing. In this case, the protagonist probably wouldn't be reported missing until a couple days later his girlfriend returned from the trip. Also, could people please stop using "...and then I died" endings? 5/10. 3 for the idea, 2 for the attempt.