Talk:Burā'ī/@comment-25941663-20150303113147

I liked this; somehow it felt very real. Although the 'shadowy silhouette stalking you' plot isn't the most original and most of the time makes me cringe, this was executed superbly.

What I didn't like though is the ending. I would have liked the cab lady and the shadow man to have a connection, of sorts. As I was reading it, I thought that the reason the cab lady originally gave up on her dream was the shadowy man, who now moved on to his next victim, our narrator. I think the current ending is a bit... disconnected from the story.

Other than that, it was a nice, short read. Well done.