Talk:Sarah's Coulrophobia/@comment-9102267-20140925070700

Very long. It needs paragraphs. It killed my eyes to read, only read half of it sorry.

It seems good, but it definitely needs paragraphs, some words are also misspelled which can be a problem (however I see alot of pasta's with mistakes so that's not a biggy for me). If you sort out the paragraphs then it will looks better, if not, it might get deleted for not meeting quality standards (I don't delete them, I'm just saying the site ADMIN's might, I'm not an Admin)