Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180828001306/@comment-9041013-20180901113750

Well, the story literally suffers from the same base problems.

We have a Batman without A Batman backstory, which makes him impossible.

We have a man who has PTSD without PTSD... lovely...

And again, why does Batman become a sloppy Batman when he becomes immortal? because pain seems to be a none factor even though it is.

Instead of going the way of Wolverine (in body and mind) you go the way of "What if nobody ever trusted Dr Manhattan"

Also, why do we go for ugh... Paradise Lost version of the Devil? Why the Devil... you could just as easily go for Baron Samedi, the Loa of the dead, if we are about Loas anyway.