Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25078903-20140624034803/@comment-25074573-20140625134346

Very well written pasta. But this is a creepy pasta and since we all expect some kind of plottwist, its kind of a letdown that the most obvious "The object is a person" twist ends up as the right one especially because you motivate the reader to think further by putting in the "no legs" passage.