Talk:Willy Wonka Beta Tape/@comment-32492816-20180322025400

I have to admit I’m disappointed by this. There are definitely creepy elements to the Willy Wonka story that would make a hell of a creepypasta. But instead, what we got here was strange, confusing and cliche. None of the various elements seemed to make sense. The sexual and scatological/toilet ‘humor’ elements were bizarre and out of place. Making Charlie effeminate doesn’t really make sense either, as it isn’t creepy, nor does it imply anything sinister about the story. This had potential, if only it had been original and focused on actual creepy elements in the original text rather than sloppily slapping a lot of weird elements together that just didn’t work.