Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26440595-20150527221320

A Friend who was an Enemy

(If you could point out flaws/and or positives I would be thankful

We did everything together. We went to school together,we went to the same college,we had the same friends,we even had the same job. So that's why I didn't expect it. The day started off as every other day did. I woke up at 7:30,got dressed for work,took an hour commute. We greeted at the door as we usually did. But at the time I couldn't tell,but now i'm certain that he had seemed off. His pupils seem to not be focused. They looked as if they were seeing a different world then they were actually in.

I checked in as usual. As I worked I noticed more and more signs of something being wrong with my friend. At one point I thought I noticed him chanting something that resembled a broken form of latin. When I asked him what he was saying he used a lame excuse and said "He was just mumbling to himself." As day turned to night I was more then worried about the well being of my friend. I felt better when he asked to walk home with me. We walked out the door and was about to take a turn when he suddenlly bursted out in a sprint. I didn't know what was happenning,but I did as I turned my head.About 50 feet away from me stood a tower of a man(if you could call it that). He looked as if he was ten feet.Viens protruding from his arm like a beating tank. A savage grin on his face that showed his mangled teeth with what looked like flesh.And his eyes,the eyes of a demon.

I rushed after my friend as fast as my feet could pump me. I started to feel like my feet would burst from the pressure and everytime I looked behind me the demon seemed to be closer than before. I found my friend in what resembled a dark alley. My vision was blurry and my heart was beating violently. As I looked up there seemed to be a smile on my friends face. I felt an odd aura around me. I started backing away from what I called my friend. "Sorry for all the work I put you through. I couldn't let HIM have all the fun." he said as he inched towards me. "You see,sometimes,your friend may turn out to be your worst enemy" he spoke as he launched on to me. That was the last thing we did together as friends. Now where one. With all the other souls he tricked into being his "friend". 