Talk:Bad News/@comment-26326346-20150422162749

I really enjoyed this story. Circling the newspaper made it really original. The main character had some really bad neighbors though, shame on them for seeing the serial killer and not warning him. I nearly considered that a minor plot hole, but I'm not going to since we don't know if the main character was liked by his neighbors or not (that would certainly be a good way to get rid of a bad neighbor).

The ending was perfect. My first thought was that he should run out the front door, but then I thought "What if the back door is a diversion and the drawing was a lie?" :O

9 out of 10. I'm looking forward to more of your work, Cyanwrites. :)