Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25901297-20141221131514/@comment-25170312-20141221171517

Skimming over it, the writing doesn't look so bad. There's a lot of other problems, though. First of all, too many ellipses (...), and some aren't even three dots but instead two or four. Completely unnecessary and will usually help to get your pasta deleted. Next, you have to make a new paragraph when people are speaking. It's not supposed to be in the middle of another paragraph. Next, that box in the middle. It's a formatting error that can be fixed by editing in source mode.