Talk:Funnymouth/@comment-30315955-20150421144931

Okay, this pasta was great, except for a major problem.

The entire jist of pastas is to make people believe that they are real, most people cheaply achieve this by using death threats and saying you're going to die soon.

But sometimes you can just have a creepy ending. What I don't like about this, was this was an anecdote, and you should have ended it with him realizing he's being stalked and finished.

But, if you do end it with, he turns evil/insane, how is he writing this? It removes all credibilty.