Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32764586-20180206223252/@comment-35251736-20180212154904

I thought it was good read. The main criticism I have is maybe cutting down the description of the song's creation some and fleshing out Max's delve into madness. For example, why was he drinking so much? What caused his soul to be corrupted? All in all, its got great bones and you really turned my view of the song upside down!