Talk:A Normal Halloween Night/@comment-25028403-20140821173001/@comment-25226524-20140821174153

No problem, you're welcome. If you want to post a story in the future, and you're not sure about its issues, feel free to post it in the Writer's Workshop first. This is a place where you can get constructive criticism and advice on your story without the threat of it being deleted. If you post a story directly on the site, it can be deleted for issues like yours had. It could still be deleted if the admins don't like the content or find it cliche.

Your story isn't too bad though. I think it's got a decent chance of surviving. If it doesn't, don't feel bad, just keep trying and improving. Keep writing!