Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28770958-20160916100725/@comment-28266772-20160916200122

Sorry if you feel that way. However, I pointed out that you have a talent for the aesthetic, it's just overloaded. If you get the basics right you'll have a great story on your hands. You are not a bad writer; you just seemed eager to put a lot into this story and the plot suffered as a result.