Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26020030-20150322163937/@comment-32071678-20150322232344

This isn't that bad at all, yes this kind of concept is used often, but I think the pasta was written pretty well and is straight to the point. I wasn't expecting the brother to have been skinned though, I was expecting both kids to be dead or something but that wasn't the case. So I think this is overall pretty good.