Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-11981389-20150128120818

Ok, so I wrote this pasta: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I1FwDprQCmQD2XRtSE8B44o98aPlnXa6VN8z4WEXv6o/edit?usp=sharing

for a Wikia my friends and I started, called Picklepasta which was a blend of Troll/Creepypasta and pickles (link if you're interested: http://picklepasta.wikia.com/wiki/Picklepasta_Wiki). I feel like the one I wrote, picklesurprise.mp4 was decently well written, but I understand I would need to overhaul the content, but I'd like some specifics to change. Or just tell me if it's not gonna ever be able to make it on the wiki. 