Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24281984-20151008181317/@comment-24281984-20151018174821

DontTurnAround.com wrote: What do you mean by "too edgy?" I mean it was too extreme as far as unpleasant content is concerned. Reading it again, I feel like the death of the girl was probably too much, and it would have been more believable if she was only injured instead of killed. Dying and death, in my opinion, are also pretty overused subjects in creepypasta.