Talk:The Last Day of October--The Unquiet Past and Present/@comment-4849011-20150722165153

Much of this is repeating what I said on the WW, but here it goes. It's true that the accent is occasionally distracting, but I can follow it pretty easily. I can understand why others might find it irritating, though I think the dialogue gives her character. I think I've said this with other works, but it's fascinating how you blend fantasy with real-life horrors (having nightmares, living through wartime, etc.). I found the part describing the troll's childhood activities & fears during WWII to be just as chilling as the supernatural elements. The stories are beginning to connect, there's a sense of dread wondering what will happen next, and there are humorous "Oh, that's so true!" touches, like the description of the public pool. All in all it's a good addition. I hope the people who read this read the "Bookstore Horror" story too because you can appreciate them more together.