Board Thread:Administration/@comment-25393922-20140920015249/@comment-24101790-20140920015715

The story has a number of inconsistencies and plot issues that detract from the overall plot. Like flammable bleach, burning off eyelids and not going blind, burns magically bleaching skin, and a number of others.

Additionally the catch-phrase “Go to sleep” seems out of place. (Why is he fixated on that quote so much that he drops it every single time he kills some one? Sleep is only mentioned tangentially in the story and seems like a non-sequiter the author decided to shoe-horn into the story. )

Finally, I feel like deleting this story would set a strong stance that we do not accept Mary Sue (Overpowered OC character is bullied, deforms themselves, and becomes a killer story.) Even after blacklisting this subject, we get one or two of these a day. I think it’s time we retired this story and allowed the fanbase to view it elsewhere like the Jeff the Killer wiki.