Talk:Amazing World of Gumball - The Grieving/@comment-25252744-20140807181009

At first, I was confused because I like Gumball, and it is a great show. Then I started reading the pasta and found a few things kinda strange about it:

1: Most doors in houses (save for bathrooms, front doors and back doors) normally don't randomly lock themselves, or lock in general. Was confused by this point, but didn't impede my liking of the story, didn't deduct any points from the story.

2: If you supposedly sent the guy a message over Twitter, the only way his response could've been that long would be if he sent you an email response, which you didn't say anything about. Nothing bad with this, but if you could've specified, that would've been good.

Overall, a good story, not many clichés, and very well written. It was a great idea, and the third "Lost Episode" pasta I've read, and the 2nd best I've read (Squidward's Suicide beating it out by very little). Overall score? 7.25/10