Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20150728223911/@comment-25941663-20150820171736

The story had nice pace and flowed smoothly. It was also a quite suspenseful read at certain points, and I also liked the atmosphere. It was vivid and, in a sense, warm.

I've said it on other posts by you, but I'll say it again. These types of stories would be better suited as a novel and note as short stories. The world you have created is very intriguing and interesting, but at times it gets overwhelming when you read it in short chunks.

Anyway, this was enjoyable, so well done.