Talk:Family Portrait/@comment-24922211-20131103222713

9.3/10

Well done, this creepypasta genuninly creeped me out, and the ending really got to me. Grammar was great except for once, but it was small anyways. Near the end was a bit cliche, especially the "YOU ARE NEXT" part. But i could really feel the adrenaline that Abigail was feeling, and i really loved it. I hope you come up with more creepypastas like this.

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