Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28794220-20160630174129

“I’m fine you know mam” said Jack, “no you’re not” replied his mam. His mam watched as he was strapped to the bed and wheeled into the ambulance, as he was he laughed uncontrollably. As the ambulance drove off a tear fell down her face, she walked inside and sat at the kitchen table. The next day some news crew came to interview her, the reporter said “what happened?” she replied “I was in my bed watching TV when I heard footsteps going downstairs. I got out of bed, thinking it was my younger son, but instead found Jack carving into the wall with a knife laughing. I said “are you ok son?” by the time I said this I realised that my husband had followed me down “son?” he said. Jack turned his head to us, he had a wide grin. He stared for 2 seconds then ran at us with the knife aimed at me, my husband grabbed him before he could do anything. The neighbours had already called the police” the reporter said “thank you for your time” and left.

Jack was put in a room with a boy called bill. He didn’t speak when jack came in, Jack didn’t either. That night they both lay awake staring at the ceiling, bill then said faintly “h hello”. Jack replied “hi, what's your name?” “bill, yours?” he said. Jack replied “I'm jack”  “what are you in for?” Jack said. “Attempted murder” Bill said, “I'm in here for five murders, all were my family” Jack felt a chill run down his spine. Nothing else was said that night.

The next morning they woke up to a bell. Someone walked down the cell halls shouting “get up, get up” someone came in and said “today you have 1 hour on computers, they are restricted to all social media and 1 news website is unblocked and we control what we want you to see. There is a gmail account where you can message other people in the facility your age”

They were handcuffed and feet chained together. They were brought into a room with about 50 computers on rows of tables and on the wall was a digital clock counting down from 1 hour. “1 hour” the person said. He locked the door and a red light on a CCTV camera went on. They sat next to each other and opened up google chrome. I saw him go on this weird site. Jack said “what's that?” “can you keep a secret?” bill said. Jack nodded. “It is a website that some guy here made, he's out now but it basicly is a black market. Say you wanted to kill someone, you could hire a hitman” Jack was intrigued. “Can you get a knife?” “yep” bill said. Jack went to the site and bought the knife. That night someone knocked on the cell door and slid the knife underneath, they heard a whisper “slide the money under the door” Jack got up put his hand in his pocket. He pulled out some money and slid it under the door.

The next day Jack had gone, bill knew he was going to escape, from the moment he met Jack. In the main office a woman was the only one there, It was early and most people who work there aren't in the office. She got an email, it read:

From: J [mailto:BGaligar17@gmail.com Galigar17@gmail.com ]

To: [mailto:SMadson@gmail.com SMadson@gmail.com ]

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14.666666666666666px;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">The woman thought some crazy person was in the computer room emailing her. She got up and turned around to find billy grinning at her. She said “J Jack, w what are y you doing?” “you have upset Jack” he said “and you must pay” a second later Jack drove a knife threw her chest. He yanked it out and ran out. He ran into the hallway and to the front door, when he opened it he saw a woman walking up the stairs to the door. She smiled at Jack(thinking that he was a visitor) and said “good morning” she then realized he was holding the knife, dread filled her face and she ran to the car. Jack ran after her and stabbed her in the back while she was trying to get into the car. He then proceeded to run into the woods.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14.666666666666666px;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">His mam was at home listening to the radio while she cooked. The music stopped playing and a man's voice said “we interrupt this song to bring you breaking news, a boy had escaped from the conways mental facility. Police are searching the town for him, we advise you to lock you doors and stay inside. Do not, and I repeat, do not approach this boy. He is a 14 year old male about 5 foot and has long black hair” his mam turned off the radio and continued cooking, all of a sudden, she heard a faint voice behind her “mam, why did you let them take me away” <ac_metadata title="should i post this, it is called the grin"> </ac_metadata>