Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44610077-20191223024945/@comment-5306249-20200119031244

It's getting better. As an aside, if you're using repetition to build suspense you can also shake up the language you use and its syntax. Ie, saying:

"It was now 12:05. Something felt off."

"2:12. There was that same unshakable feeling."

"And then it was 3:15." And so on, so forth.