Talk:Ixodida/@comment-26475800-20160703162310/@comment-26475800-20160703171041

Those thing's that I've pointed out are more or less opinion. Just little things that I caught which either made me question or took me out of the story a little bit. Nothing too major, just little things. As for the story being muddled, I don't think you really have anything to worry about with that. It flows smoothly enough. In fact, this story is leaps and bounds above most of the stories I've read on this site (some of mine included, but thankfully I deleted a lot of the bad stories I've posted.)

Anyway, look forward to seeing how we all do.