Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5101683-20180722190535/@comment-35711173-20180722233259

Squidmanescape wrote: So the criticism so far is:


 * 1) The paragraphs are too long.
 * 2) The ferret is not scary.

Would you say that this could go onto Creepypasta Wiki if the paragraphs were fixed?

Squidmanescape,

That would be a start at repairing it. There are other issues. This is what Grammarly reported as problems with the story. Not all are correct but probably 80% are.



https://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Fatal_Disease/How_to_Start_a_New_Paragraph_Or:_How_I_Learned_to_Not_Make_a_Wall-o-Text

https://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:DrBobSmith/Basic_Spell_and_Grammar_Checking