Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27123781-20151026212944/@comment-27123781-20151028034950

Thank you so very much kind sir. I have my story completely edited to your specifications in Microsoft Word right now. I have to say I whole-heartedly agree with everything you pointed out. I actually noticed a few things on my own as I worked off of your suggestions.

As for the title, I may stick with it because I have grown attached to that being how it has always been. Now that you mention it, I believe I have heard the song you are talking about before, but I can't for the life of me remember how it sounds. So I might not listen to it to keep the name pure.

Do you think it is ready for another shot at the wiki now that I (you) fixed it?