Talk:Anansi's Goatman Story/@comment-17135063-20130901042656

Sorry but this was very, very disappointing. Your grammar and constant swearing ruined it, and the ending was... underwhelming.

I didn't find myself wanting to continue reading, I actually skipped some of it towards the end but went up and read it due to the other comment left... but was not impressed. I just didn't find myself intrigued or being kept under suspense, which is what I look for when I'm reading these. Also again, it was written very poorly which didn't help at all.

2/10.