Talk:The Spasm/@comment-25162342-20150402184508

It's alright, but there's waaaaay too much exclamation marks. Seriously, every other sentence is pretty much an exclamatory one. That's my biggest problem. People randomly turning into monsters for seemingly no reason, I also don't see too much point in having him go to an old town, or the radio thing. A lot of odd bits and plot holes seem to be here. 5/10