Talk:The Thing with the Swirly Eyes/@comment-24313563-20141010192442

Ok. The idea of the veiwer experiencing the story through the news is pretty interesting, the wrighting was imaginitive, and the organization was pretty good. I did, however, notice one fatal flaw: "Hundreds of people have died from a mysterious creature no one has ever seen" The term 'died' in this context is a little vague. And how would they know a mysterious creature killed them if they were found deceased, and no one's seen the creature. Maybe a little more detail on that would help.