Talk:Rumpelstiltskin/@comment-25941663-20150306091322

I found this: "barely able to walk she was so sick", shouldn't this be "barely able to was; she was that sick" or something? The sentence as is doesn't flow so nicely, but maybe that's just me.

In the source I found that you had put three spaces in front of some sentences. Did you mean to do that, or did you want to make a new paragraph? I have listed the sentences below. By the way, it doesn't matter if you put one, two, three or a hundred spaces between words; in html everything turns into one space.

The sentences:

"Though he was known as a smack dealer..."

"As long as she didn’t know his name." (the last sentence)

I also edited the asterisks, as they appeared as little boxes. To fix that, you simply put   around the asterisk.

Finally, I added the 'Reality' tag. I think it fits, remove it if you don't like it.

I will write my review below, this is getting very big.