Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44610077-20200119003257/@comment-9041013-20200122122348

This sort of plot needs more build, it happens too quick. Jared being forgotten, or even noticing he's "none existent" should take more time and a longer steadier build. This is way too fast to be entertaining in any way. Give this more meat.

Also, you could cuss if you want, it's okay, no need to censor "bad" words.