Talk:An Ode to Carnage/@comment-24872430-20190704044446

General Quality - 20/25 - Not much to say, some grammar issues here and there, but otherwise fantastic.

Horror Factor - 17/25 - Does well depicting the gory nature of slaughter, and the ideas and imagery given by the monstrous descriptions of the massacre are done well, I just wouldn't call them THAT scary.

Lyrical Interpretation - 15/25 - Ehhhhh. The song ends with Thor defeating the World Snake. This opts for something much different and glum. Props where they're due, but nah, I can't give it anything higher than a 15.

Entertainment Value - 20/25 - I had a lot of fun reading it! It was put together well, the descriptions were vibrant and visceral, and kept my eye.

Total Score : 72/100

Put simply, a very good fantasy story, with very well done imagery and depth despite the length. While it took a slight deviation from the song, it does what it needs to do very well, and has left a lasting impression. Very, very visceral mental images; very well done!