Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24675373-20140925213006/@comment-25425104-20140926000546

I am desperately eager to find out what happens in the continuation of this pasta. It's not really creepy in my opinion, but pretty much odd. There's a lot of grammar mistakes and misspelled words as well, but you already clarified that you had the intention on fixings those. It's original and includes vivid detail. Good look with the remainder of it! 7/10