Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26399766-20180204013133/@comment-34541920-20180205130418

TheExtraPiece wrote:

ThatStalinLeader wrote: This is a good story, it isn't too long, (really well executed,) and, as I see, just a few not placed commas. Is this your first story?

No, but it’s the only one that I actually submitted, and apparently not as bad as the first one. I see what you mean about the commas though. But seriously though, you have no idea how happy I am. I wasn’t sure if I should’ve submitted or not, but I’m glad I did now.

You are welcome!