Talk:Daddy's Little Princess/@comment-25975226-20160118111502/@comment-25975226-20160119061531

That 100% happened with one of my other stories. I planned the whole story around the ending, and then someone got the feeling I had rushed it. I don't know what it is. The whole killing and stuff is just...I don't know. There wasn't enough time to get to know the father/daughter relationship to make that bit believable that he would kill the man he knew was helping him...

It's still a marvellous piece of writing, don't get me wrong, I think it might just be a bit rushed in character or something.