Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26097514-20150210225459/@comment-26023482-20150217042456

Effort writing is always best. No matter how hard it may be, putting in effort will make it a beautiful, disturbing piece of art. Moving on, I like the idea, and the vagueness is a nice touch, but I think the last couple lines my be what killed it for the first reviewer. Perhaps rewording it would help a bit. I'm sorry to say I don't know how to exactly make it better, but I love your idea. Keep up the good work!

(Note: When I say disturbing, I mean it in the best possible way.)