Talk:The Monk and the Maid/@comment-25052433-20150117004629

For a first edition upload, this was written very well. Usually edits are found here and there the first time or two it's looked over, but you clearly took your time with this and wrote it very well.

The plot was excellent. Just believable enough to be scary, yet not too over the top. My only complaint is the fact that you referenced Creepypasta in a creepypasta. There is nothing officially wrong with doing this, and I am sure some people find it creative to sort of break the 4th wall, but for whatever reason, mentioning our site in a story featured on our site sort to converts the story down, from a work of fiction to more of an essay as to what you think a pasta should be. Again, this is just my opinion.

Either way, cool story, good effects, nothing too cliché jumping out at the reader.

Well done.