Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32764586-20180420000442/@comment-9041013-20180420152447

First congratulations on the promotion.

Second, I kind of gave up throughout the second part of this thing, you write very well, your style is very descriptive and works well with fantastic fiction, but knowing it's a Minecraft fan fic basically (that could make for a good game plot, if it was a standalone thing) I just couldn't take it seriously.

Perhaps, come up with some fantastic novelette or novella post it here, but not freaking Minecraft, or any game that exists in actuality, it kills my ability to suspend my disbelief.