Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25389996-20140918210915/@comment-5619531-20140919005000

Bill Cipher The Dream Demon wrote: That wasn't mentioned Well then it's vague, and I assumed that Bill came to life and killed the narrator. I would change the ending to make it not vague or else people like me will think "Yeah... um... I'm gonna think this, rather than think what the author really intended." I would also try to eliminate the other cliches that you used (like using violence and blood as a scare tactic, the eBay cliche, and a whole lot more). It may take a lot of work on it to get rid of it (why, possibly a whole theme change). If you cannot, then I would suggest scraping it. It's not the end of the world on it.