Talk:The Suit of Armor/@comment-25203895-20150512163215

Hey, author here. I just want to say thanks to anyone who's read/commented on this. I originally did this as part of my English exam, in which I had to take the title of a film and transform it into a short story, though this blossomed out of that. I know it's not the best (far from it!) but if anyone can give tips or critiques of this, it would really be appreciated. :)