Talk:Brown Bear/@comment-35071950-20190621211323

Hmmmm. Not sure about this one.

The overall writing was pretty good, but it wasn't great. I couldn't envision everything.

Not only that, but I don't have the slightest clue who Brown Bear is.

Also, the way this pasta is leaves no explanation as to what was even happening. I mean, for some pasta's that's a good thing, but for this one, it isn't. The whole thing's just too vague.