Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-1186783-20140817151538/@comment-1186783-20140820022934

@Banning: Had not considered the unknown relative. I had considered the non-evil Dawson, but I'm not sure how to make that into a horror story, and avoid producing an urban fantasy soap opera.

I think I finally know what to do with the daughter, though! (giving her the working name "Michelle Dawson")

Oh, and one thing I forgot to ask: was it obvious that the "agoraphobic" thing was an excuse to minimize the number of people Michael was around, and thus tempted to kill (which would break his sacrifice)?