Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25095856-20140625064121

Thank God! Alone, finnaly, alone! My parents and my 9 year old brother left! It's his birthday and he kept bugging me for 3 weeks. Now they left to some aqua park a couple hours away.

My cat is sleeping and I lay on my leather couch watching TV. I took a look at my laptop: I left my Facebook open! Oh god, what did my brother do again? Nothing! Thank God! Outside it's raining and the TV is freking out, same with the internet conection. I ussualy have a pretty good connection as I'm in the Bucharest, the capital city. I close the laptop, then the TV. And hear a knocking on the door. It's Anton, my uncle and godfather. He is a pretty happy person, sometimes creepy, but I like him. He is keeping a white tissue in his hand. When I ask him what's up with it he tells me he caught a cold. We're in the middle of summer, but I don't care much. He comes close to me then covers my face and mouth with the tissue. A sweet smell comes into my nostrils.I start shaking and free myself. In a fit of anger I shout: "Anton,what the fuck?" He then puts hisn strong, cold hands around my neck and starts suffocating me. I barely hear him saying "You will be the 51-st!" as I black out.

 ** "Weeky, weeky, motherfucker! I love hunting, you know, but ... animals are fucking stupid and hunting humans is much more goddamn fun." I could barely mouth two words "Fuck... YOU." "Don't be rude, child. As animals ussually have only one chance, you will have one. So.. wake up and rise, sunshine. Is that the saying? I don't care. I got up, I felt dizzy.He hit me and I fell back down. He dragged me into his car, an old Skoda.He would ocassionaly stop and hit me a couple times, then he would go on. After fuck-knows how much time he stops and throws out of the car and down a hill. The soil was slimy and wet. There were a crap tone of insects around me. I tried to get up and get out of there. I was full of bruises and scratches. After some time I started crawling because I couldn't walk anymore. Suddenly, I saw something. It loked like a pile of burnt meat, without bones. There were burnt clothes too.I puked. Maybe that is going to be my fate. I moved as fast as possible. Something broke the silence. Thesound of a cracking branch, then a silent "Fuck!" was heard.I dragged my body under a bush and then I saw him. The stupid son of a bitch that brought me here. He was having a hunting rifle. His flashlight blinded me, and he said "Gotcha, you son of a bitch!", then he dragged me out of the bush and knocked me out.

 ***  I was in a strange place. I was bound to a pole. There were trophies everywere. Sick trophies. There were moose antlers and normal shit, but that was the beggining. There were the faces of some kids, a collection of hands,legs, bones, and... skins... a lot of skins. "I see you woke up. Do you like my collection?" Then he showed me a boy. He was 13. Same age as I am. "I want to teach you how to get a trophy from something you just hunted. First, you skin it."And he did. He skinned the poor guy. I will never forget his screams."If it does't want to be skinned and fights, you must cut the limbs off." With a chainsaw he cut yhe boy's hands and legs. "Now, let's finish skinning." And he finished skinning. Ocassionaly, he would give the boy a shopt of adrenaline. He then decapitated him with the chainsaw. He hung the boy's face with the others. And the turned around. "Y'know, I'll give you one more chance. And he untied me and gave me a shot of adrenaline. I thought that the sick searching game will begin again, but he took the skinning knife and approached me. I dodged the first hit barely, rolled between his legs, took another knife and stabbed him in the back again and again. He took the chainsaw and hit me in the hand. He was weak and he dropped it. I picked it up and sent it between his legs. He fell twitching..                                      ****  I awoke in a hospital bed. Anton was castrated by the chainsaw and I'm proud of myself for doing that. He received the death penalty.

This is my second pasta. Please don't hate and give advice.  