Talk:Wendigo: A Terrifying Story/@comment-26275894-20150404043425

The story is well formulated. Unfortuantely, there seems to be two nitpicks to mention:


 * As said by the people below, the Wendigo has a Deer-ish like head with a rotting body. The images you have shown us makes this creature look more like The Rake: Even if it doesn't look exactly like it.


 * The ending seems to make this story a bit cliché: "My window gets knocked on" "But before it can possess me in my dreams, I always wake up". First off, if a Wendigo sees/discovers you, there's no possible way to run away/save yourself from it: If it gets you, your life's basically over.

With this said, it's a really great story. I'd totally look for more pastas written by you.