Talk:The Lunar Being/@comment-35911608-20190509144333/@comment-35711173-20190510195534

HikikomoriGod2,

I would suggest trying https://www.grammarly.com to check the story. It found two issues. Also, try https://www.scribens.com/. It found a run-on sentence and an awkward sentence. There's no substitute for reading the story out loud to yourself a few times though.

The Writer's Workshop is a wonderful resource. Feedback from the writers there has been invaluable in helping me develop.

Dave