Talk:The Drought/@comment-24424227-20140623222510

I like this one. It starts out normal enough, seeming like just a normal story and then... the cause for the drought. You may want to describe the creature more, however, and add some suspense. Also, kudos for coming from Washington! I'd say 8/10 for this story, add what I previously mentioned and I would be willing to give you that extra two points. Keep writing!