Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27493054-20160608143034/@comment-28266772-20160608161212

So this is an interesting synopsis, but A_O is right, it's hard to assess something on just a synopsis alone. What you've written is interesting, but ultimately unbelievable, even if you do specify it as being classified that still wouldn't account for how no one noticed it. After all a lot of major astronomical discoveries were made by backyard astronomers with nothing more than patience and an expensive telescope.

If you'd like to post back with more info I'd like to give more feedback.

Best of luck.