Talk:NES Godzilla Creepypasta/Chapter 8: Finale (Part 2)/@comment-9853405-20140716001153

Amazing story, i will grade the individual chapters and overall story. Chptr. 1: Amazing buildup and Imagery. 9.5/10. Chptr. 2: Great story, not very scary. 9/10. Chptr. 3: Still not scary, but amazing wording. 9/10. Chptr.4: First part that was somewhat creepy, outstanding wording. 9.5/10 Chptr. 5: Still have a sense of creepyness, great wording. 9/10 Chptr. 6: Slightly creepy, amazing wording, and convincing images. 9/10 Chpter. 7: Slowing down, little creep factor, great wording. 7/10 Chptr. 8: (all parts) Clićhe, not very creepy, great wording, better if you listen to First of the Year (Equinox) by Skrillex while reading it.8/10 Overall: Amazing Story with a small creep factor, outstanding wording, but somewhat bad images. 9.5/10