Talk:To the Moon/@comment-25052433-20150618234527

So, as requested, here is a bit of feedback for To the Moon.

Honestly I liked this one a lot. It is long but it kept me pretty locked in from start to finish. I cleaned up a few grammatical errors, but nothing too major. All in all, this was really well written with a very cool plot.

Your character development was spot on, and I enjoyed the character conflict that you introduced. The characters all felt real, and their actions and reactions felt organic to who they were supposed to be.

The setting was creepy, as most Space Pastas tend to be. It's one thing to be lost in the woods or some strange town, but when you strand your characters in the void of space, or drop them on the bleak and dark surface of the moon, you introduce a new level of fear and isolation.

All around, you did an excellent job. This was a fun read and a great addition to our library here.