Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20160413174929/@comment-4893169-20160430015523

Raidra wrote:Mmpratt99 deviantart wrote: My mom wouldn't even allow me to go to the Safe and Sober Graduation Ceremony. My younger sister has more confidence than me!

''That's too bad, though I like to think your mom's heart was in the right place. As for the story, I don't think I have anything to add at this point.''

Once again, thank you for the review and feedback.