Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37878098-20190109205918/@comment-9041013-20190109233847

There isn't much going on in this story, how about actually describing the levels? Make them appear as haunted locations as possible while reassuring the readers that's just a game show.

Also, Ned's right about the "blah blah blah" part and the last sentence, it makes it appear less serious than I assume you'd like it to be percieved as.