Talk:The Crow Girl/@comment-25340844-20140905001657/@comment-25326117-20160310005333

Do you think that the opening phrase, "Too freaky too believe" seems a bit overdramatic and overused?

Isn't "northern" as in "Northern Ohio" be capitalized?

However, I do agree, those phrases "scared shitless" and "I almost shat myself" really do ruin the tension for us readers.