Talk:The Stairs and the Doorway/@comment-25288654-20140909155248

Not too bad but I have two thing I had problems with

one, in the story, first he was trying to keep his head low, getting B's and C's, hotever, later he commented hhimself as being a straight A student.

Also that part where he didn't have fear opening the door, if he din't eel anything then why was it meantioned, that could have been skips and I thought it sorta went against him being scared cause the light bulb broke.

otherwise it's good, think you could have skips some background story, but that didn't ruin anything.