Talk:Laughing Jack/@comment-26303456-20150412184014

So much for all the allcaps -_- The origins story is way better. This looks like someone tried to recreate "It" from Stephen King. I don't know why it has so many fans. I'd give a overall 8/10, simply for being creepy;

A small recommendation: Instead of allcaps (THIS) use Italic (This) and an exclamation point. Such as, using an example from the allcaps part in the story:

"Then I heard it again, the soft desperate moan. James was still alive!"

Again, I'll just leave this here: 8/10