Talk:The Final Fate of Mary Ford/@comment-26399604-20170117044254

Well done with this piece.

I enjoyed how the story revolved around the protagonist as a ghost. Since we understood her character when she was alive, her actions as one made sense; she didn't just haunt her family for no reason. I'm quite baffled at a few comments where they found it weird or so sudden for the character's revelation. Other than the explanation at the end, you foreshadowed hints throughout the story of mild internal conflicts. It wasn't at all too abrupt or strange to me. It definitely redeemed her character into a solid conclusion.

This was well written and I really enjoyed this. Great work!

Also, there was one spot I think could be corrected. Please see the []:

+ Its light began to [bathe] Jacob's body in an eerie glow.