Talk:Dating Game/@comment-26981815-20151003060512

Ok, the pasta is really good.

The part describing the murders made me think for a moment this was the creepier/scarier creepypasta in this site.

HOWEVER, I'm extremely dissapointed with the end.

I mean, COME ON, with all the suspence and horror building up during the videos, the narrator just threw that all away by giving a happy ending where the wife is caught and punished? Yeah, I know about the 'minion' thing, but that's NOT good way to end a pasta with so much potential.

Also, there are some minor plot holes (compared with the ending).

First, this story had a huge potential as a real story, which means no supernatural shit. I feel like that floating was just an unnecessary element that unnecessarily made it unreal, when it perfectly could've been. The password also shouldn't have typed itself in, it would be much better (not to say realistic) if he just tried til he got it.

Second, the narrator should've recognised his wife in the videos, especially when he knew her for so much time.

Third, what the hell is the matter with her? No one, and I mean, NO ONE, would say something like 'I'm a sick and twisted woman'. NO ONE. Have you any idea what is a mentally unstable person? They do not acknowledge and/or accept they are unstable. A serial killer DEFINATELY would not say they are sick and twisted.

If you corrected all that, plus the things people are pointing out in the commentaries, it could be an outstanding creepypasta.