Talk:The Scariest Thing to Me/@comment-24281984-20160128224620

This was a good read, but I think it could have been better. It feels a little too long, and although the repetition was unsettling, it did start to wear out its welcome before the story ended. And the ending itself wasn't really satisfying because we never learned what was making that noise. The unknown can indeed be frightening, but I have a pretty good feeling the danger here wasn't the MC's vivid fantasies of knife-brandishing madmen coming for him.

But on a positive note, I did like the humor and the writing was good enough to make me want to continue to the end. I usually like smaller stories that I can relate to, and this was definitely one of those. I probably won't read this again, but I'm glad I did once.