Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25024572-20170111231730/@comment-27905100-20170114061605

There weren’t many cops in front of the house. Just a cop car, and it had only one cop in it. That's a lot of Cops for one line.

Hmmm... I wonder how 'Clockwork: Your time is up' will be incorporated, if that little nod to it in your other story wasn't it.

Anyway, Great story. I really like the Jeff series you've got going. Hope to see more soon.