Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20150913212525/@comment-26475800-20150913225538

Wow, thank you guys for taking the time to look over this. Also, thank you for helping me with the editing, I was rushing this to get something written, it has been a couple of months or so.

I will make the corrections and read it over to see if I can handle some of the melodramatic issues. Thanks again.