Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10319977-20141226134502/@comment-26113663-20150116165806

Hellhound iscariot666 wrote: Ladeedah wrote: Cyanwrites wrote: It's really hard to convey a truly original idea in so few words.

To be honest, I though that last one I did was crap, and far worse than my marionette one. I was just trying to emulate the OP a bit more, because people seem to like his, and I don't get why people don't think my marionette one is better than his. His is a very broad idea, while yours isn't really something that makes you think. Honestly, I don't think either are necessarily creepy, but that's just my opinion. It could use more work, maybe becoming more of a creepypasta rather than a micropasta. I should agree. Conveying a message in few words would be a difficult job. If these things won't work in any way, it's good idea to turn this micropasta into a whole new creepypasta instead. As an entire creepypasta, it will give clearer and more specific details about everything to the pasta.

About the marionette thing, I will be honest, but it actually won't work.