Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24463401-20150101223446/@comment-24234841-20150103002034

I like it. Very Inception-y. There are two typos I spotted while reading:

1. On the eighth line, you spelled "house" like "hose".

2.When the character is talking to his kids, you spelled "hoarse" like "horse".

Otherwise, very nice. Keep up the good work.