Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10869901-20140523042158/@comment-24784485-20140523223948

I agree with Booboo. If this 14 year old kid can kill a whole family, without getting any blood on him, and without leaving any trace he was there, than he must be some kind of trained assassin. This kid has no motivation besides the... "Urge". You might want to add a REASON that he kills people. Besides the "urge" I mean. Just reading the story now makes me feel like you took JtK and somehow made it worse.

Jesus.

I didn't even think that was possible.