User blog:ArcOfRuin/What are your thoughts on “They’re Listening?”

I was browsing through random pages, and I found a page called “They’re Listening” along with some of my comments from November 2017, when I’d just created this account (I’m old I know). Anyway, I found my old comment detailing the cliches and Trollpasta/meme references throughout the article, and updated it to include everything I’ve absorbed in the past 3 months.

Anyway, onto my thoughts about it. The idea itself is fine, although overused and cliched in itself. It’s probably a reference to the Grad Night pasta about the guys who spend the night in the Haunted Mansion in Disney, come to think about it; I’ll have to edit that in after this is posted. Once they get into the hotel, though, it becomes a cliche riddled mess. The characters have a bunch of cliched, overused things happen to them, for lack of better words. As I stated earlier, I’m keeping a list in the comments.

So, what do you think? Is it good? Should it even be allowed to stay?