Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25980873-20160718233750/@comment-25980873-20160730135814

Jay ten wrote: Just to clarify, the words I mentioned (deactivated and proceeded) are fine words to use. I simply didn't like them where you used them. I know you probably knew what I meant, but I prefer safe over sorry. Yeah I read them to myself and they sounded robotic as you said. I realize that nobody "proceeds downstairs" or "deactivates" their alarm clock in the morning, unless they are in fact machines.