Talk:Children's Games/@comment-24463401-20140511230532/@comment-24101790-20140512010606

Thanks, (Useless fact: this story was an odd one for me as I almost ended it in three different places. I almost ended it when he asked the second question. "Do I know you?" and I almost finished the story on the second to last paragraph. The protagonist hearing the familiar sounds.)

Don't know why I decided to divulge that little bit of minutiae. You got any suggestions on how to make it better?