Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140908044311/@comment-25226524-20140908232125

Once again, I have to agree with everything Banning said. I really enjoyed this one, as usual, and love the concept. The main thing I agree with him on is the protagonist's emotional state, but I see you're already planning on adjusting that so the point is moot.

Due to the level of creativity shown in all your work, I can't help but wonder what a longer work by you would look like. Just something to consider, maybe a side project you can chip away at over time?

Anyway, this is another good piece, and as always, keep up the good work.