Talk:All Too Human/@comment-25471033-20180105055828

This pasta was a bit long, but the ending was a complete twist, one that I never would have seen coming. The concept was pretty cool as well, as a computer realizing it has a body and realizing it can become a god. The detail was also really in depth, and it really helps the reader understand the AI's shift in "character" if you want to call it that. As for corrections, when it said "a god" that was correct, however when it mentions the christian based God (which is pretty evident in the end), I would capitalize it to show which God or god you're talking about. 9/10