Talk:Broken/@comment-25269744-20141002151907

I actually REALLY enjoyed this pasta. Yes, it was very gorey, but every now and then we need a good gorefest and I think this one was done pretty well. It was nice reading something that wasn't as cliche as many of the pastas on here. The fact that it was based on something that could truly happen to any one of us made it all the more appealing.

The usage of some words was incorrect or unecessary, but I think this story still made it out the other side as a good pasta.

9/10