Talk:The Sweet Shop/@comment-5000412-20140925191618

An excellent read. The story was well constructed, and while I could predict some areas of the plot before they arrived, I was still left surprised by most of the ending truths. As a minor complaint, the "Anyways" at the beginning of some paragraphs are rather meaningless, but I may think this after seeing them in so many stories before. They didn't take away from the great storyline and writing, though.

Thank you for this enjoyable work. :D

-E