Talk:The Many Deaths of Me/@comment-25052433-20180105060237

There were a few clumsy parts in the writing in my opinion. 'Clearning' your teeth as opposed to 'brushing' your teeth felt strange. Perhaps its a regional expression for you though. The character also jumped from 0-60 very fast. Before even knowing what was really going on with the reflection, the character was already prepared to brandish weapons against the mirror. That just seemed forced to me.

Still though this was a fun little short story that did a good job of catering to natural fears, such as mirrors and strange phone calls. This worked well because those are elements that will make the average person uncomfortable.