Talk:What Happened at Maple Grove High/@comment-36877863-20181107172513

So, this fails at the first hurdle of a journal-type piece, which is "Why is the writer, writing?" The kid  is pretty sure that he's about to die, and he takes the time to type out "I left my jacket in the hall." If this was all from his perspective, it'd be a decent story, if a bit cliched. But the way it's narrated makes no sense.