Talk:The Will of the Fates/@comment-35911608-20200221005206/@comment-26399604-20200221153150

You made valid points.

I did want to tease more of the Corrupted in the middle to reinforce the threat, but between the areas that I wanted to include while battling the length, I decided to take a hit for it. Nonetheless, I will take it as a learning point for future stories.

Thank you for the feedback and for reading!