Talk:The Stone Man/@comment-1186783-20140710034201

I like the concept of this story, but the ending needs work. When the statue first moves, and the moss starts growing, that needs to be a truly shocker moment. Or, alternative, never let him see the statue moving at all  Just let him hear it, just out of sight.

And I'd definitely put in more detail. Why did the parents reveal that the grandfather's grave was there after this incident? If they didn't want to tell the kid before, I fail to see how this incident changed their minds.

And the cops found that the platform marked the grandfather's grave? Was it clearly marked? If so, why did the kid not notice it before? If it wasn't, then are you implying that the cops dug up the area? Why?