Talk:O Holy Seer/@comment-35911608-20200221010253

O Holy Seer - by BloodySphgetti (#2, The High Priestess)

A very interesting take on the card you were given. Not the deepest intereptation, but one that led to a satisfying and still haunting story that kept me thoroughly entertained. The descriptions of the boy’s fever were very convincing, and I liked the guardian spirit’s forms, cool descriptions that come around again before the end. (YOU WILL DREAM OF TEETH AND NOTHING ELSE - an item description from Destiny) I think my favourite part is that you teach the reader about Prince Oleg and the legends about foresight with him, and then incorporate that into the story itself. My own stomach churned when the “spirit” asked if young Oleg listened to his gut.

While I thought it was fine, the use of theme wasn’t super significant (although you had already notified me that this one would be difficult for you). Otherwise, I liked it quite a bit. Nice work.

Style - 4/5

Creepiness - 3/5

Enjoyment - 4/5

Use of Theme - 3/5

Grand Total: 14/20