Talk:Why I Became an Atheist/@comment-29935423-20160910200031

Not gonna lie, I think this is pretty good. It's well written, it's tense, and kind of heartbraking. I only have one problem though, and some might say it's a big one. Despite being a very good story, I don't find it all that scary. Nothing ever happens except the branding of 666 and the dog's death. However I don't find it scary, I just find it sad. I think that if this story was scarier, it could be one of the defining creepypasta's of its genre. It could do what 1999 and candle cove did for tv pastas, or ben drowned and nes godzilla to video game pastas. As it stands now, while I think it's a good story, I dont find it all that frightening.