Talk:A Life in Chains/@comment-9600371-20131129132328

Good story! Not necessarily creepy, but it's a beautiful story. It does it's job. And the last line of the story is amazing. Although due to the fact it is not so scary, it comes out like this.

Grammar: 10/10

Creepiness: 4/10

Plot: 9/10

Characters: 7/10

Formatting: 10/10

Overall: 4/5