Talk:Jenna/@comment-10789912-20161116201421

This was very enjoyable for such a short read. The description of heroin use was dark and cold, hitting drug abuse on the head. The mood was disturbed and yet somehow peaceful. The minor twist at the end was completely unpredicted, which is a good thing. Descriptive, semi-peaceful, and dark stories are simply your golden ticket, as opposed to From the Ocean. Good job, Johnathan.