Talk:Cure for Cancer/@comment-25534311-20150219170800

I agree that this is not a creepypasta. Honestly, I felt sorry for Nicholas, and sorry for Marrisa because of what he wanted to do with cancer to get her to love him. Ending was a little rushed and just disgusting, which just might be good for this story. The idea, however, was great in my opinion. Using cancer and treating it as another life form, which it could if not for the fact it is an overgrowth of cells. It is still creative in its own way. I teared up in the beginning because Nicholas lost his parents when he was so little. I would rate it 8/10 for the imagination and the emotional impact in the beginning.