Talk:What's Never There/@comment-26326346-20160424062855

Good job on your grammar and well done on another great story. You have an affinity for story-telling (they manage to suck me in and are well constructed) therefore I hope to start seeing you write longer stories.

I enjoyed this pasta and how it explores the human mind. It's absolutely awful when you get something frightening in your head and you can't get it to go away or it keeps coming back when you do, especially at night and when in bed and I'm glad that this pasta fed off that fear. It was really captivating and I liked how it ended without a definitive answer; the fear can strike again. I do have to wonder, what was rustling the bed sheet that was covering the window? Was the window open, the vent on, or... XD

I'm looking forward to more of your work. Keep it up!