Talk:Pink Jeep Tours/@comment-5619531-20140719203835

It started off very good, and I was very interested by it. The only thing that makes the whole story bad was that the narrator is the ending. The car plummets off the edge, making the scene critical for the narrator. As the narrator was about to die, a black humanoid figure takes his life, which was the thing that controlled Natas. Now his job is being a Jeep tour guide, but actually kills people by driving off the road.