Talk:Burn in Hell/@comment-27391865-20151213124538

The writing was good. A little confusing at times, but certainly not bad. I didn't find the story too interesting or creepy however. There was little character development, making me not really care about the murder at the end. The drama came way too quickly, which made me feel confused, and the conclusion came too fast.

There's a lot of potential however, and I have seen so much worse, so keep it up.