Talk:Can You Help Me Find My Cat?/@comment-34534666-20180321121501

This isn't a scary story but I did enjoy reading it. I don't know why it's on the creepypasta wiki but, a nice story about a kind harted boy helping an unfortunate soul. If you want to make it creepy I suggest making the ghost be a one that seduced it's victims and then when she kisses them their soul gets sucked away or they follow the girl into a place where they freeze to death. Just a suggestion. As a creepy story you get a 1/10 from me but as a short, wholesome story you get a 6.5/10 from me. Great work!