Talk:For the Best/@comment-25380061-20140914175145

I expected a plot twist at the end something like proving that the father was a good man after all so I thought that it was a refreshing change from the regular pastas.

I thought I had seen some grammar mistakes, but I`m not so good with english that I could be a judge of that and i can relate as I make tons of them when I feel like I have a burst of creativity.

All in all I found this pasta enjoyable and exciting although I would have liked some more backstory development (for example mentioning that they are living on a farm earlier) but that`s just my preferences. On a scale of 10 I would give it a 7 probably.

P.S. Nice handling on the blood and gore scenes, you didn`t put too much emphasis on it, so it doesn`t serve any stereotypes. Keep up the work !