Talk:The Reverend/@comment-24101790-20150629013003

It’s not everyday that I go into a story by a relatively new author and find myself loving it. Congratulations are in order.

There were some minor capitalization and punctuation issues, but they were so trivial that they didn’t detract from the overall story.

The protagonist is believable and relatable (Maybe even more so for me as I found myself moving a lot when I was a kid.). You do a good job building the relationship between Trevor and the protagonist and it makes their eventual fallout that much more impactful.

You also do a great job of incorporating lyrics from “God’s away on business” without making it seem like you’re shoehorning them into the story. The ending also leaves enough mystery to pique the readers’ attention without being too vague. I would have liked a bit more elaboration on the Reverend’s history to bring some intent/motive into his character. Great job, I will be very interested in any future stories you may have.