Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24248644-20150924060915/@comment-27018487-20150925205124

It's pretty good, but I would suggest having her face / body knitting itself back together in the end. As well as plant little hints that her survival was more then luck in the story.

As well, I would skip the "...". Just a regular period adds just as much, if not more, emphasis.

I would offer help with spelling / grammar, but sadly I have dyslexia, and someone else would probably be much better then I.