Talk:The Final Fate of Mary Ford/@comment-25941663-20150529132238

Phenomenal. Truly phenomenal. There are very few stories that can make you feel hatred one moment and sadness in the next.

If I were to described this pasta in one phrase it would be 'emotional rollercoaster'. I loved the intensity of the feelings you invoked in me and I loved how they alternated in such quick succession.

Reading the story, I had the feeling that Peter would at the last second save Jacob, but he would get run over by the train. That wasn't the case, and I was left wondering if killing off Peter would have been more hard-hitting.

Anyway, that doesn't really matter. The story was top-notch as is. Honestly, I can't offer any constructive feedback, everything just 'worked' on so many levels. Character development, plot, concept, execution, wording, flow... I could go on and on. Everything was perfect.

One of my favourites. Well done.