Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20180401195353/@comment-9041013-20180401200800

Sir, your rhymes make my panties rise. A HAHAHAHAHAHA

Okay, in all seriousness, content wise your poems are always good, but this feels like your jumping from a kind of Shakespearian english to modern english throughout this one. I might be wrong, because I haven't really read classic literature in 15 - 17 century english.