Talk:The Elder/@comment-26054278-20151011015951

All right, I'll go ahead and take a look at this story as I was supposed to so long ago. Maybe it will draw more attention to it? I should hope, because this is a really great story.

If there is anything that the author of this pasta excels at, it is both their overall technical writing skill combined with their ability to write characters (except one). Seriously, these characters ooze personality. I'd call them some of the most fascinating and well-written characters when compared with any of the pastas in this contest.

This story, of course, also has a genuine "creepiness" factor. Not the most chilling, but there is enough here that I did consider myself kind of scared. The elements of creativity present likely added to this, only to be elevated further by this brilliant writing. There are some grammar errors, however, which aren't too big of a problem when compared with how great the other things are.