Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4715955-20160102052146/@comment-4715955-20160104012802

Thanks Vngel. And yeah, that was a drawing of Juno. IT was gonna be a comic originally, but comics take a lot longer to finish.

Any part of the chapter read too slowly or clumsily? Also, is the chapter end enough to make you want to read more, or does it stop the story dead?