Talk:Disney's Catacombs/@comment-25372245-20140922063436

Perhaps it's because I am unfamiliar with the parks having been to Disneyland only and each trip being years apart but sneaking back onto the grounds after hours doesn't seem like a crime punishable by "Disney Jail". Like the Mascot Area in 'Abandoned by Disney' that read like a Goosebumps book for me. I would have preferred if these guys had tried to steal something or operate a ride.

Something else that didn't sit right with me was how the storyteller states somewhere at the beginning of the eeriee events that he assumed the failure of the officer to return to them a scare tactic designed to keep troublemakers away from the park. Since that thought was never reconsidered as it reached the climax it's what the reader is left with and it gives it the image of being heavily theatrical.

Though the character pursuite actually felt more like a nightmare sequence.

Here is what I did like about the piece, the room numbers being Walt Disney's birthday and the pace of the story. Though it was long everything properly set up the main events and it didn't lag getting there. This was exactly the ideal pace which I critiqued 'Room Zero' needing.

3/5 stars

- ShardsofaSoul