Talk:Sever/@comment-33937557-20180619113903

Heartstrings = Majorly Tugged. I think I should be dead right now.

I just can't. Cannot. There, I said it.

Every single place you talked about, Miami, the Cold Northern United States, even the Hospital, I could picture them all and made a visualization easily because I've been in locations near, or similar to, those. You used the topic for this contest in subtle, quiet ways, and this surely works with the criteria. (I'm not a judge, so my word isn't law.)

The characters were interesting, I thought, individual. You finely accentuated the feelings between Sever and Vic: there was romance, pain, anguish, awkwardness and moar! The final lines had a big impact on me, for sure.

Though I can't properly reward it, I believe this story deserves several shiploads of those gold stars you could get in kindergarten when you did something right.