Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-40022501-20190712212238/@comment-40022501-20190714081605

First off Thanks DrBobSmith for the review, but I think you might have mistaken some things.

First, I totally agree about the grammer issues, thanks for pointing some out for me.

Second, The most of the story takes place in Louisiana, Only a small portion takes place in Alaska, and none of the story takes place on Kodiak Island. This should explain why Shelby was carring a 1911, Also should explain the comparison of Louisiana and Alaska.

Third, I agree the MP40 isn't a good bear gun, or any sortofhunting weapon, but Jake was refering to the M40 snipers rifle commonly used by USMC Scout Snipers. (link [|here])

Fouth, I agree, "Exotic wild life biologist is a far better term.