Creepypasta Wiki talk:Deleted Page/Jeff the Killer/@comment-9287827-20140103140527

This story has so many plot-holes I just can't take it seriously:

1. I'm pretty sure fire doesn't cause your hair to turn black, it burns it off.

2. Liu was sent to Juvy for breaking some kid's wrist yet Jeff killed three people and wasn't arrested? I'd believe that like I'd believe that Slenderman is fat.

3. They're kids! Kids don't act like that! While randy was beating up Jeff he was talking like some wrestler I'm surprised he didn't say "YOU WANT THE HOSPITAL OR THE GRAVEYARD PUNK?!"

4. Where the hell did Troy and Keith get guns from?! They're kids! Also one of the kids pulled a knife on Liu just for standing up? Well that escalated quickly!

5. The fact that Jeff burned his eyelids off pretty much means that his eyes will dry up and he'll eventually go blind. I know Jeff is crazy but is he stupid too? sorry Jeff but your plan to burn your eyelids off so you could forever see yourself might not have gone according to plan.

6. Do Jeff's parents keep industrial-strength bleach in their house? Normal household bleach doesn't burn people.

I know it's just a story but I just think there should've been more effort put into making this story believable.