Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20150608042120/@comment-25170312-20150608203656

I added to the end. Also, I'd like opinions on whether to change "If her husband were here" to "If her husband were alive". Should I not make that part obvious? Also, should I remove the line "Peggy has a problem... and it's not going away any time soon" since it is no longer the last line? And finally, should I remove the sound of the doorbell? Please advise, thank you! :)