Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25519076-20141009172634

Before you’s all read this, I would just like to say that this is my first post on this forum… I literally just made my account 10 minutes ago. And this is my first ever Creepypasta that I had written back in 2013 about this time of the year. I know it’s not the best, so please be kind… But I do welcome any kind of feedback as it will only make me better. I have a few more stories to finish then I’ll hopefully post them too.

The Soul Catcher

The picture here was left from a crime scene, It was supposedly left by a woman named linda. To explain what is in this picture we will have to go back and look at what happened that night. Linda was cleaning up her room, She was debating weither to make dinner or wait a while. Normaly she would eat dinner, Clean her cutlery, Watch a bit of TV then go to bed… But no, not this time, This time she decided to go a walk as she was planning to be healthier. She always says she’ll do this but make the excuse of “not having enough time”. But anyway, She got her Hat, Coat and warm cotton gloves on as it was a cold night. While she was out she kept feeling as if someone was with her, Something mysterious, something chilling, Just something she didn’t want near her. It was making her uncomfterble so she decided to head home. She started to get pains in her chest as she walked, Holding her chest as she carried on. people asked her if she was okay, She would just respond with ” Ye it’s just that Heart burn working up” and carried on walking.

She finaly got home and decided to make dinner, Her plan was just to go to bed after that as it was later by the time she got home. While she was having dinner she had that feeling again. But this time it was different. It was almost as if the thing was inside of her. She kept feeling dizzy and slight moments of vomit coming up in her throat. She decided to ignore it and carry on eating her dinner. Then suddenly… BANG. Linda had fallen to the ground and smacked her head of the wooden floor. There was no explanation of how this happened at all. Moments later linda woke up, Or so she thought she had. She then realised it was a dream she was in. But this wasn’t any dream. The dream felt realsistic to linda. Whenever a breeze went by, She could feel it, It sent shivers down her spine. She carried on to proceed down this tunnel, It felt like it would never end.

Linda then started to hear voices in the distance. She couldn’t make out what it was saying. But none the less she carried on walking. She was so scared she had started to run, But it was getting her nowhere! She was terrified, She couldn’t make out if it was reality or not. Then suddenly, She reached the end of the tunnel. There was nothing there, Just empty space.In the distance she could see some sort of glow, It was purple, And some sort of figure waving to her. From what linda could see it was skinny and creature like. she couldn’t make out who or what the figure was. Suddenly the figure turned around the other way, Chrouched down and started to hop away. As the figure hoped further into the distance it began to fade away. Then suddenly, It just vannished, Just like that. Linda turned around to see if there was any other way to get out, Then suddenly she got pushed. She was falling, And falling, And falling. It was as if the floor had just dissapeared! She screamed the whole way, Innocently not knowing when it was going to end.

As linda fell she could see this sort of purple glow much stronger. It made her feel uneasy, She then started to vomit as she was falling. No longer could she scream, She was just in shock. These strange Creepy looking sort of tentacles started to reach out to her. She tried to avoid them as much as possible. One managed to get a hold of her, And before she knew it Another five were wraped round her, Squasing her, Not giving her room. They were slimy and left scratches all over her, These scratches were purple, Just like the glow she kept seeing. The pain was getting worse. And she then started to beleive it was all real, There was no way she could feel pain in her dream.

Linda had finaly landed, She got up and looked around. She was in a cage, For prisoners.Then suddenly a figure appeared. She couldn’t tell if it was the same one as she had seen earlier. It was crouching just like the last one. As it got closer, She could smell this really bad rotten smell. It smelled so bad she was about to vomit for the third time. It began to stand up right, It seemed to be wearing a trench coat. It’s body looked like a humans, Just modified to look scary. Linda was terrified and began to scream yet again. “Shhhhh it’s only a dream” said the creature with a husky, Dark voice. “You’re with me, My master needs you”. The creature said. Linda broke down into tears shouting for help, “What do you want from me, YOU BEAST” linda said with a terrified voice. The creature responded with “Just your sould, nothing less, C’mon give it to me, Give it to Mr.SouldCatcher”! Then suddenly the creatured vanished. Linda ran around in her cage screaming, Looking out for the creature. Then suddenly it appeared out of nowhere, It brought out one of it’s tentacles hidden behind it’s coat. BAM… Straight into the back of Linda’s throat. All of what linda had felt was rushing out of her body.All emotion drainded out of her face, Her body was becoming more and more pale. While all this was happening all the creature could do was giggle into himself. Linda nealed down giving up holding her ears from the giggle. She couldn’t bare it!

Then linda suddenly woke up. She was standing in front of her old fashined mirror, Just like the rest of her house. She couldn’t move, Just standing there looking at her self in the mirror. Glazing into the side of her was the creature. It was just standing there smilling at her. She closed her eyes and wished for it to stop. But it wasn’t untill she opened her eyes and looked into the mirror that she realised why the creature was laughing. Her face was rotten away. She screamed and screamed and screamed for her life, But yet nothing changed. The creature carried on smilling… But this time waving, Just like it was doing when linda thought she first saw it. ” Join the many souls with me, Me, Mr. SoulCatcher.” said the creature. Linda could finally move, But the first thing she did was run to her old fashioned wooden chair. She sat down while parts of her rotten face fell off, She was still screaming.

Then silence just went threw the house, Nothing heard. Linda was dead, Her soul gone, Nothing left of her… But her rotten body. The creature went over to linda, To stroke her on the forehead ” Good night,, Your soul is ours now”!

(Picture goes here... Just use your imagination for now!)

-Written by Mythnotagious  