Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32144326-20170529153039/@comment-24101790-20170529155251

Darknessismybuddy wrote: I've been fucking working my ass off 6hrs a day typing poems it takes 1 and a half fucking hours typing them do you fucking care bastard

I can see why your story came out looking like that after only putting in one and a half hours to writing it. I suggest actually spending more time on them and proof-reading. That being said, if you have no intention of improving, then I'm likely going to shift my focus to another author who is actually looking to improve their writing.