Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-6591982-20141028120643/@comment-25570256-20141029021633

That was excellent, it was creative and had an interesting twist! Your formatting is well maintained, although the grammer could use some work. For one thing, whenever you use a [...], you have to capitalize the 1st letter of the next sentence(...Potato). Also, "its" is usually "it's" here to show possession. Besides that, this is a very well written pasta, enough sauce and enough noodles!