Talk:Eyeless Jack/@comment-24466828-20141102010735

Talk about plot holes...

Why did he think the most appropriate thing to do was to take a picture of the creature? How can he eat his kidney if he has no mouth? Why was the author allowed in the house after his brother was killed? He would have messed up the crime scene. why did the doctor do nothing to help even though he lost a kidney? Why was the body of his brother still left there? How come the thing only injured him the first night? He was asleep so the thing could have killed him on the spot. How did the police miss his brother's body? Why didn't he tell his parents about the kidney? Why didn't his parents notice the kidney he brought into the car?

For such a short forgettable story, it sure does have a lot of flaws.