Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20160126073921/@comment-26326346-20160127005133

Geez, my grammar didn't get any better! That's disappointing to me. Thanks for the read and review! I'm glad that you found it good. I included a lot of symbolism in the pasta too. For example: the small beam of light shining down on him and then closing up was symbolic of Heaven being closed to him. Furthermore, the Devil saying "I too fell" was a reference to him having fell from Heaven.

I actually ripped the Hell scene from an earlier work of mine which this is not a sequel to, but a part of the same universe of. That was the best I could come up with when I thought of Hell's environment and eternal suffering. I have not heard of that song before, no. I'll be sure to check it out later :)

Thanks again for the feedback! I'll make the corrections in a little bit (getting ready to eat and get around for the night).