Talk:The Unknown Pilot Journal/@comment-5733573-20180513124626

This was fun! I don't usually like WWII pastas, but this one really gabbed my attention and held it.

One thing, though. Calling the main body of the story "The Pasta" kind of takes away from its plausibility in a way. Maybe use a more general term?

Otherwise, this was great and I enjoyed it immensely.