Talk:January's Shadow/@comment-27383608-20151220210646

Real interesting; mid-way I was thinking that the man could possibly be God, but dismissed it - that twist was good.

Seemed realistic - I'd give an 8/10.

It could do with some fixing, like the capital letter to start the sentence inside the brackets despite already being in a sentence. Also, the dialogue in the audio could do with fixing: "Man: (Another small chuckle) To spread the truth, Mr. Streets. Streets:  (An exasperated sigh) You can't elaborate any further on what happened that night?"

Separate the two sentences and 'switch' the bold for the second one.

Great work