Talk:The Gray Cove/@comment-25922165-20150307215449

Well you go into this knowing he lived, so the feeling of dread you should have with his journal is gone. You're left with the feeling they perhaps took his memories of the events...but why? It also would have been most odd for a woman, even a widow to go off with a strange man. Further what happened to the idea of touring Chicago? If the city conditions put them off it should be stated. It's not a bad story, but maybe could be much better.