User talk:H240

so hey
I noticed the story was in the Marked for Review category. Little things like using ellipses between each letter is really just misusing the ellipses. It is very commonly misused. An editor may notice this and give a biased review of the story just because it is poorly expressed. As I mentioned on the edit I left the ellipses in the journal entries. If you must include them in the actual plot of the story then I would advise focusing them to one particular section of the story (and not throughout) to show that it was intentional and part of the character-building. Still, a comma would suffice in most circumstances.

SoPretentious | (talk)  03:44, July 8, 2014 (UTC)