Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44861696-20200128180701/@comment-44948705-20200129004456

hmm what to say well its a good start I wonder about this maw entity more than the dream and nightmare after all naming a entity like that is bound to get more attention but what else well I think that if you can somewhat flesh out these two yin and yang twins it would be good but first decide which of the two will get the most work you cant over work yourself trying to give both character development so try and choose one also make them as distinguished as possible from the maw as it gives them their own identity as from what I read I feel these two are the literal split incarnation of the maw so that would be another good focus to look into other than that I actually enjoy these little thoughts