Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31073921-20170202153809/@comment-31111342-20170202155928

It was random and hard to follow, but I might have just read it a little fast. IDK. The humor seems like you're trying to force it a bit (and again, it doesn't fall under dark humor), the grammar is still kind of messy, and it really just reads like it's a trollpasta.