User talk:Dead Vortex

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You violated no rules (Although there were a few minor capitalization errors and phrasing issues), the story was mainly deleted for its lack of content/tension/description. (Ichabod basically is attacked in the woods, jump-cut in the story and he is possessed.) The story was lacking description which means there really wasn't any tension or suspense. You can rework the story and take it to Deletion Appeal (preferably in paste bin so as to not clutter the deletion appeal), but do not re-post it until you have another admin's approval.

EmpyrealInvective (talk) 04:08, June 26, 2014 (UTC)