Talk:The Walker.../@comment-10950063-20131103224519

I fixed a good amount of the grammar in your story. Here's some things to remember:

-Always capitalize "I" when the character is refering to themselves. "I see it every time I close my eyes" not "i see it every time i close my eyes."

-Get the difference between "it's" and "its" down. Sometimes it seems like you know it, but it's really inconsistent. "It's" is the contraction of "it is." As in "It's coming for me" or "It is coming for me." "Its" is possessive, refers to something that a thing owns. So, "Its fingers are long."

Those were the biggest issues.