User blog comment:Underscorre/Jeff the Killer Rewrite Contest!/@comment-5973399-20151003224153

Well, here's my entry. Not sure if it makes Jeff too much of a dick before he even goes insane, or if the whole setup isn't very convincing, but it was worth a shot.

http://pastebin.com/9LPkB4TQ

Any comments would be appreicated. It's worth noting the orginal Jeff the Killer is one of my least favoite stories of all time, making me either the worst person to write this, or the best.