Talk:Blackouts/@comment-26030957-20150804220024

Short, sweet, ambiguous and creepy.

I loved this line, "His torso flung itself into motion, unbreaking itself. There were a bunch of horrible cracking sounds, the sounds of dozens of vertebrae locking themselves into place. He stood perfectly straight, looking directly at me. A patch of white materialized on his face. A smile." Clear, concise and quite unnerving.