Talk:Teeth.jpg/@comment-27059444-20151009190307

Sigh Yet another uncreative creepypasta and writer that goes along with mainstream storytelling and uses the damsel-in-distress/Stuffed-In-The-Fridge trope (in a particually disgusting manner), in addition to idiot protagonists and the'.jpg/exe' and 'murderous artist' cliché. Do writers not know that you can remove the ending thing when naming something on your computer? It just irritates me, and is an easy to for the reader to know 'this is going to be messed up' and not in a subtle, good way either.

Really, writers, is it so hard to change a few pronouns? Perhaps have a _female_ psychopath/sociopath (there are too many male ones), and two friends (one or both female) trying to save a _male_ friend only to discover his tragic fate? Not to mention protagonists who are so stupid they do not realize they should call the police and the missing friend's romantic partner? Well, at least I'm one of the few authors out there who are actually trying something different, who looks at common tropes and clichés and thinks "how can I make this different, even suprizing?). Yes, I know how egotistical I'm being.

You, the people like this story, and stories like it, would not know an original, interesting, non-sexist story if it danced around your head wearing a rainbow leotard. One would think that small works, uninhibited by what the media and drooling masses want, would have more originality. Well, there are those which are original, but they are few and far between. Hell, even though which are rather cliché can be interesting if done correctly.

The only interesting or good thing about this story was that it had a same-sex couple without shoving it down our throats or acting like the couple is special or different to opposite-sex couples. That's what I do and I'm happy to see another writer do so.