Talk:Beyond the Necropolis - A Nihilistic King/@comment-26399604-20180424185159

You jumped around a few times in tense, so I wasn't sure if you wanted past or present. If you want it in present feel free to change it back (I made it past), but make sure you grab the other spots too so they reflect that as well.

In regards to the story...

I'm a sucker for space stories, so the first part does pull me in, especially since there this guy is a supposed "God king" -- very interesting... I was supposed to read this earlier in the month, but the time-frame I had projected was just too hectic. I'm curious to see how this plays out. Off to the next part!