Talk:As the Rain Falls/@comment-25383866-20141102111254/@comment-805698-20141102120943

That was going to be exactly what I was going to say. A few phrasings I would've changed but that's likely just righting style. The 'word' "untransparent" is really the only thing that's super clunky. Would definitely change to opaque, thick, viscous, murky, grimy, etc. Opaque being the best choice as the word with the closest direct meaning.