Talk:Daddy's Little Princess/@comment-25947144-20160111125635

Read it in class. People think I'm terrified of math (ironicaly true). Anyway liked it, although I would've liked if it was a bit longer. Liked the possible connections to Clown Dogs and the clever use of lyrics. My only problem is how quick the brainwashing was. One second she was a smart girl who loved philosophy and a minute later she one of Dracula's brides. It could've been a little more gradual or maybe she could've at least kept a part of her personality. Overall 9/10