Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31532017-20161130072138/@comment-31532017-20161209073110

MrDupin wrote: Hi Raptor. Please make new threads for other stories of yours. Also, update the original post with your newest version. It is simpler that way. Right now I don't know what is the latest story I should review. Thanks. Well, based on Jay and Empy's responses; I've salvaged this story into two different pastas. Though I don't know which is better, that's why I decided that perhaps you could take a look at them. Either way I shall update the original post with the latest drafts.