Talk:On Christmas Fathers Hide/@comment-5733573-20181221225110

This is a seriously low quality story. It's riddled with dropped words and shifting verb tenses, and some word choices are completely wrong. "Eating the literal ribs?" Was he supposed to eat the figurative ribs instead? What does that even mean? And these are just the surface issues.

The plot just makes no sense and the conversation between the (randomly 6'7") kid and the Krampus is laughably silly and destroys the reader's suspension of disbelief.  You've really missed the boat again with this one, unfortunately.