Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28467653-20160515214806/@comment-28467653-20160516182037

Thanks for the long review!

I've actually aimed for ambiguity in my story, seems I've taken it too far, I'll keep that in mind next time. Concerning language, my native tongue is not Spanish, I'm actually Hungarian, and we don't really have an active community based on creepypastas, so I thought I'd try myself out here. I've written this story based on the things I've learned from reading a few novels and short stories in English, but I'll admit, I have a lot to improve in this area. As for the annotated version (a small part or the whole story, whatever), I'd really appreciate it, I'm sure it would help me out big time. :)

Anyway, thanks for your review, I'll try to learn from it the best as I can!