Talk:In the Night Garden/@comment-25383866-20161024071923/@comment-30297391-20161024220727

I am trying to get back into writing, it's been a while, I have already had some insecurities about how I write, but thanks for the constructive critisism. It's been about a good 10 years since I really excersised my creative writing because of terrible personal circumstances. I'll read this over and try to pick it out myself I guess. Nonetheless. Thanks~