Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30039312-20181221131246/@comment-36627132-20181221131710

I honestly don't see this making quality standards.

It is your typical gaming pasta with almost all the cliches: red text, distorted music, the game having effect on the real world. On top of that there is very little to this story, and it really doesn't offer anything in the way of being creepy.