Talk:A Month of Rain/@comment-5501102-20140426050828

Pretty good. The prose wasn't great and it was sometimes hard to follow the flow of events, especially toward the end, but overall it was pretty good.

I also feel like it would have been better to not mention the bony handprint on the ankle, and just leave it open as to what was in the water. It also may have been better to not kill off the cops and so many other people, as that took me out of the terrifying possibility that this may have happened.

Overall, this is a nice 7.5 out of ten. Good job.