Talk:29th Dragon/@comment-25471033-20181218221537

I gotta say I'm glad I decided to start reading the "Beings" categories of creepypastas because these are all really great stories, and this one is no exception. The way the story was told, the description of what happened was just enough to keep me interested, not too much to bore me, and also perfect for not being in the way. The concept of the story is terrifying, and how does Ming know that the narrator hears them too? I wonder what the narrator thought after that. It's hard to think of one, but I guess one problem I see with it is describing the mysterious light a little better. I can't tell if it's really just like a harmless headlight that let this thing see, or if it was actually a firy ray of death. 9.5/10, as there isn't many stories that are perfect.