Talk:Smile Dog/@comment-24825398-20140503225243

THIS  WAS ASTONISHING! it gave me shivers, what made me even more timid was that after i finished reading my door creaked open a bit ( hopefully it was just a fluke) i give this pasta 10/10, it's not immature and gorey such as squidwards suicide, it also gives you a sense of suspense. you didn't even have to use much gore to make this scary, you also gave this story a support and purpose. AMAZING <3