Talk:Blobster/@comment-4715955-20160701112941/@comment-26475800-20160702143127

Although that would most likely be a good training exercise, I don't feel like this is a terrible story. I enjoyed writing it and feel like I had gotten most parts of this right, more so now that I've edited it and removed about 10% of the story. So, thank you for your advice, it has helped me to know what I need to keep an eye out for things when editing. That is one of the best things I could hope for, because that has always been my weakest aspect of writing.