Talk:Security Cameras/@comment-27905100-20170121023829/@comment-30924662-20170121175821

Thank you for the feedback. The jaw thing was meant to come across as a way to show that what ever it was that the narrator saw (I leave that to be decided by the reader), it's angry and doesn't forgive everything as well as Barry himself seems to. I guess I shoulda chosen a more direct method, and a voice told me that might not be the best choice and yet I didn't listen. I'll think about those decisions more carefully in the future. Anyways, sorry about screwing up the credit link, I hope its all good now.