Talk:Hyperion/@comment-7673575-20190703114616

Heavy Interstellar vibes here. Let's dissect this piece (too soon?)

General Quality - I did notice a few odd use of words and a few missing punctuations scattered here and there, but nothing major. 23/25

Horror Factor - Can't say it's the best I've read (I'm generally not much of a SF guy) but the way it's been narrated gives it a surreal feel. Almost like looking at a film through a prismatic glass while some soothing music plays in the background. The horror of time skip and the metal flesh was well implemented with the song's lyrics, and the time breaks, while maybe confusing at the time, can give quite a bit of jolt. Also, black holes. I hate those damn things, and this piece reminded me why. 20/25

Lyrical Interpretation - Not great, not terrible either. While the actual meaning of lyrics hasn't been hit, the literal has, and to a great degree, which works surprisingly well here. Still, it feels a bit too submissive: considering the song, I would almost expect Reed to go mad and commit a killing spree or become some sort of genocidal transcended entity. This way, it feels more fatalistic than doomy (hey, new word) as it should. 17/25

Entertainment Value - I cannot tell a lie, I enjoyed this. Not really much to tell: it was a simple pleasure that didn't require thinking on 17 levels. It flowed very well, and was overall a good read. 20/25

Bonus Points ​​​​​​- You referenced a band member... +10

Malus Points - ... but it was Ozzy. -10

Final Score: 80/100