Talk:The Lost Book of Yahweh/@comment-1198866-20170131144326

An interesting premise that sort of falls apart in the execution. While shooting God in the face was pretty BA, I have no idea why God would decide to become mortal or feel compelled to give this guy a "fair fight" and the story doesn't explain it. More build up about the protagonist would help this feel more organic, like if he was an exceptionally good speaker. So much goes unexplained too; the random bodies and blood that appear near the end and disappear just as suddenly, the attack that left him in this state, how and why he managed to take a gun with him to the afterlife... so many questions.