User blog comment:WhitecheddaKoopichu/Just something I've noticed about many pastas/@comment-24101790-20150823021738/@comment-24101790-20150823024302

There are limits, 2nd person perspective can be effective, but it requires a lot of focus/work. Don't forget to check out Mikemacdee's stories (God, I wish I could remember the title. It doesn't matter, all of his stories are well-written.)