User blog comment:The Cat From Hell/Rant/@comment-26475800-20160118034046

There are a lot of stories that aren't famous on this site, in fact most of them are unknown by the general populace. As far as not understanding what the stories are about, well that sounds more like a personal problem. If you took the time to look up the definitions of the words you didn't understand then perhaps you would understand all the other stories.

Now, as far as the story that is linked below is concerned, there is a ton of issues with it. The most important is the poor concept that the story is based on. The entire story is about a girl killing someone, that isn't scary, not even really that creepy. It is just a poor attempt to get more gore into a market that is flooded with poorly used gore.

Most stories on this site have a twist ending, or some kind of twist in them, in fact I believe that is in the QS. Yours had nothing, it is obvious that the girl is going to kill her boyfriend from the second paragraph, unless you decided to put a twist right in the beginning, which wouldn't really be a twist, it killed the effect. In fact, you gave away that she was going to kill her boyfriend in the first sentence.

The characters were bland, there was little that really grab my interest where characters are concerned. The entire story is bland actually.

So those are just a few issues on this story you have written. I know it is hard when someone says you story isn't good enough for something, but it is part of being a writer. Everyone gets rejected, but you need to take it with a grain of salt. The most important thing is that you learn from what you were told when it was rejected. It appears from Empry's post that you are unable to learn from your mistakes and if so that will ensure you never make it as an author, or an artist of any kind. every kind of art gets rejected hundreds of thousands of times, get used to it.