Talk:The Crawlspace/@comment-18181728-20130910040615

That was absolutely beautiful. I love how realistic it is, as though I truly saw through their eyes. It could've built up a bit more and made me feel more emotionally connected to the girls and I would've had more sympathy for their deaths, but other than that, it gave subtle hints that built up to a climax. Overall, it was very descriptive and the protagonist noticed everything. I rate it an 8.7/10