Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27246594-20151119020222/@comment-27246594-20151202191904

Not sure where to add this updated one but looking for advice again:

A) Opinions

B) The ending. I have two ideas that i will wait to post until i get a response, I dont have them written but the concepts are there. I'm worried one ending will make the story too long.

C) The 'Chapters' are currently for my own organization but i was thinking about leaving them and just naming each chapter, are these could spots for it?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CRUdXuUaBaNTiJQRxFRHEASJ4koZ1DcjDoqPq_QO20o/edit?usp=sharing