Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25477067-20150108181105/@comment-25477067-20150111203911

Thank you for your critiscism, the archive entry I forgot to take off because it was originally a series. I had three stories about this, and then the "ban/high dissaproval of videogame pastas wrecked my chances with the first story and my third was lost in a power outage . I will takje that off when i post it, in the far future. I agree with a lot of what you said, and I think you are right about the gun.