Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25239238-20140731094121/@comment-25148755-20140801052814

Much like The Leagues, what you have here is a pretty good opening paragraph or two that gets the reader asking questions and I would normally expect to lead into a rather interesting story. Unfortunately you are currently lacking the story (which I just now see your last line.) If you are wondering whether you could base a pasta off of this, the answer is yes.