Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26018849-20150118105654

In the 1900s there was a small town called Haven. There was a guy named Shawn, he was twenty years old he had a good job, lived with his mother, father, and little sister life for him was well the best it can be. But people of the town did not like him all that much they were always assuming something was wrong with him. He always liked to keep to himself, he liked creepy and monster like things. He liked to draw monsters during his spare time, one day at work while Shawn was on break the priest's son Jack came up to him as he was drawing.

Jack asked him"what are you drawing?", Shawn said nothing and continues to draw. Again Jack asks "what are you doing?", still getting no answer he piers over Shawn's shoulder and sees a very disturbing picture of a monster like creature, Jack backed away scared of what he seen and ran home. When Jack got home he told his father of the drawing he'd seen of Shawn. The following day as Shawn was Drawing the Priest walked up with his son the priest asked Shawn "give me your drawings" he said nothing as the priest looked at Shawn and he seen the drawing of a disturbing image of some kind of demon. He thought a demon had possessed him and grabbed his arm, as the priest was yelling "begone demon leave this boy", the priest keeps yelling as Shawn knocks him back and runs off trying to get away from him.

One of the towns people stopped him and pinned Shawn to the ground making it to where he couldn't move, they picked him up and took him to a old mental asylum near the town. A few of the towns folk were standing outside the asylum as the priest walked Shawn to the very back of the asylum, he took him to a room with big metal doors. The priest opens the doors and pulls Shawn inside, the walls of the room were nothing but metal, there was only a table and chair in the middle of the room. The priest and two of the towns folk tied him to the chair with rope, as one of them pulls the table over Shawn looked and seen a torture device on the table. The priest put something on Shawn's mouth so he couldn't scream, they begin to torture him thinking they would free him of the demon, they tortured him for hours. But nothing seem to work as one of the town folk pick up a can of gasoline and began to pour the gas all over the room as the priest walks out of the room with the two town folk, he struck a match and threw it into the room.

The ground lite on fire and it moved slowly toward Shawn as he tried to get free, the fire moved up the back of the chair burning his arms and the rope as he gets free. He tried to find a way out but the room was sealed, Shawn bangs on the door trying to get out but couldn't as the fire died down and smoke fills the room making it hard for Shawn to breath as he drops to his knees holding his neck. His eyes close and he slowly dies laying on the floor. Two weeks have past and everyone has forgotten what had happened as the night fell Jack was outside playing, he heard a sound of something from a near by tree Jack walked over to it and seen a man standing there in a black hood and Jack asked the man "who are you mister?" the man replies "I'm a friend, I'm here to play" Jack smiled at the man "what would you like to do" Jack asked.

"Let's play a game, but not here I know somewhere we can play" Jack nods and smiles as the man takes Jack into the forest holding his hand and walks to the asylum, walks inside with Jack and asked "where are we mister?" the man said nothing as they walk to the back of the asylum and walk into a metal room the man asked Jack to sit down and they began the game. Jack sits down in a chair in the middle of the room and the man ties Jack to the chair, pulls a table over with saws, cutting tools and knives as the man puts tape over Jack's mouth. The man pulls his hood back his skin was ghost white, his hair was black, the man had razor sharp teeth, black and red eyes, his hands were burned black. The man looked at him "let us have some fun now".

He smiles, grabs one of the knives and then begins to cut the skin off Jack's arm, he began to cry in pain but can't scream with the tape over his mouth as the man cuts more of his skin off and smiling in enjoyment, he grabs Jack's face smiling at him "ain't this fun?" he then grabs Jack's hand and grabs pliers, then pulls Jack's nails and ripping them out. He smiles more seeing the pain Jack was in and seen tears running down his cheeks. He smiled big enjoying it he then picks up a skilsaw and sawed into Jack cutting him up, then he put the skilsaw down and picks up a rock climbing pickaxe "well its time to end our game" he hits Jack with the pickaxe and hits him over and over then cuts his guts out, when he was done blood was everywhere he licks the blood off his hand and picks Jack up leaving the asylum.

The following day Jack's father walked to his room "come on time to get up" the priest opens the door to find a shocking horror, finding his son dead on the bed dismembered, blood all over the bed, the window was open the priest dropped to his knees crying over the loss of his son, then later that day had a funeral for Jack. A few days have past and more people had been cut up, ripped apart or worst the priest was in his house praying to god for help as he was praying the power went out, as the priest got up and looked around, he lite a candle as he walked to the power box to find it ripped open. The priest looked around and backs up, then something hits him knocking him out.

Later that night the priest was waking up to fine himself tide in a chair, he didn't know what was going on then he heard a voice "well well, priest doesn't this seem familiar? Oh how much I wanted not do this" a man walks around the priest taking his hood off "remember me you tried to burn me alive!" he smiled with an angry look, the priest was shocked to see him "I am no longer, Shawn I am Shadowblade" he said picking up a knife and cuts the priest's fingers off one by one and he begun to laugh insanely as the priest tried to scream. But Shadowblade grabbed his mouth "shhh no screaming" he grabs the priest's tongue and cuts it out.

Then he laughs some more as he puts his fingers into the priest eyes burning them he then grabs his pickaxe and rips the priest apart killing him, he smiles at the blood then walks outside and cuts open gas cans. Pours them all over the town, as he stands outside the town lightning the gas on fire and burns everyone in the town alive. Years past after that day the town of haven is still there but no one knows what happened but only hear story's about the town being haunted by a killer name Shadowblade. Hope you guys like it 