Talk:Please Excuse Us/@comment-28938497-20150221105434

Things took a creepy turn in that story, but after the halfway point, I knew how it would end. Still I enjoyed it. I would have given this story an 84, but you were late by a few hours so I'm deducting 15 points. A large part of this challenge was what people could write in 24 hours or less. Overall, 69/100