Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26251513-20150416231159/@comment-26251513-20150421194106

Doom Vroom wrote: The concept interests me, the monsters moving into abandoned buildings I mean. I'm confused as to why they are addressing us (humans). Wouldn't they like to have a home to move into, so why warn us? Do they want us to stay away and if so why?

I see a really interesting story in the following lines "If you ever abandon your home. Lock your doors are shut your windows." It made me initially think as to why someone would bother locking their doors if they were abandoning their home: vacation. You could maybe do something to where a family goes on vacation and comes back to find that monsters have moved in thinking it was abandoned.

I'm not trying to tell you what to write, I just saw that in there and thought it might make a good plot (something that you seem interested in).

As Jay Ten has said, you seem to have a good imagination, but your grammar needs some work. You might try to word it differently, but I've no idea how. Hang in there and don't give up! :)   Kay, thanks for the help :)