Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29270351-20160517115525/@comment-28477544-20160517212230

It's not a good idea to make stories in parts. It wouldn't work in the form it's in right now. There is not much story flow. There is also some grammar/spelling problems.

"...I do not really know if I can send his name here."

You would want to change the send here to another word, like put or place.

"...so me too can stalk him."

You should change this to either "so I can also stalk him" or "so I can stalk him too" or something related.

Good luck with the story.