Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28199808-20160413142412/@comment-28199808-20160426072355

Hi Christian

Thank you so much for taking the time to give me feed back, if I'm honest I thought people would find more wrong with it. This is the fiction I have ever written and is also the only draft, I didn't write it out on paper first or anything like that. I will take on board what you have said. I have another instalment written on paper and will post it in next couple of days.

Again thank you