Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10950063-20140714192528/@comment-24918243-20140715010722

I think the part in the beginning helps set the mood. The fact he keeps sending these photos makes it obvious he is not your run of the mill kidnapper. I would definitely keep that. I'm curious to see where all of this leads. I found a couple error here and there, but I'm sure that is because you don't consider this finished yet.