Talk:I Am a Big Boy/@comment-3541151-20150227094314

Mr. Dupin's imagination is a scary place. I didn't know it then, but I know it now. Oh, don't believe me?! Oh, he's a nice guy! He gave me constructive advice on here. He died for my sins, blah blah blah! I have proof he's a scary son of a gun, with my review of his Freestyle Pasta, I am a Big Boy. Let's get this freestyle started...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mAtj9Zos__M

So fathom that not only is this a part of the Nomination Marathon reviews, this story was a freestyle challenge. For

those that don't know, the Creepypasta Wiki freestyle challenge was a unique writing challenge/contest, where in the authors

were given a random subject and expected to write a story on it and submit in the contest forum... Seems interesting... in 24

hours. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F7aAIKc2Bhk

Yeah, that gives me even more respect for this one. Not only is it well written and scary, but it was written in 24 hours. FUCK. It could have been worse and I would have accepted it. "It wasn't great, but it was written in 24 hours, so..." I'll excuse an

underdone chicken in 24 hours... Bottomline, this is really good and it was done in TWENTY FOUR HOURS.

This has been a broadcast of the emergency DAMN system. We return you to your regularly scheduled critique.

The story itself starts out sweet and innocent. A family setting with a loving and friendly enviornment. The main character,

being a young toddler thinks of his brother and Nana who, and this is important to note, is fond of her rocking chair. There she

rocks him and his brother and finds peace from rocking comfortably there. The children are layed to sleep. However, as our protagonist wakes in the middle of the night, the story takes a dark turn. Hmm... a story on the Creepypasta website taking a dark turn? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kdhhQhqi_AE

I can't spoil it here, I try not to spoil stories in my critiques, the good ones anyway. I will say the boy gets out of bed, and

experiences a frightening side to his beloved Nana. Now this would have made a great, refer to last link, but the story has one

more trick up it's sleeve. And really, I won't spoil it for you. The endings too good to spoil. It's what makes it so frightening. Critique over! What, do I have to do everything for you?! Don't be lazy! Read the damn story yourself! I ain't asking your fatass to work out! Was, was that too mean? You should work out anyway, though. I would have given it a pass for good writing and the initial dark stuff. But the twist is SO unexpected, SO frightening and SO shocking, that I give it an A plus in TERROR. Mr. Dupin is talented, and I'd like to see more of his stories in the future. 10/10