Talk:This Isn't Life/@comment-28266772-20161101145814/@comment-28266772-20161101160009

It's cool, I was just far more hesistant to edit a poem due to my inexperience with them. I'm glad I did bring it to your attention rather than wing it because I would have clearly gotten it wrong. Either way, I enjoyed the last one and I really enjoyed this one. It's super hard to make poems work but you did, congrats.