Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20170120131257/@comment-29196722-20170120135510

Nice story.

It's like the tower of babble but with a darker twist i guess and you nailed it with the free to go home part i remember reading a history encolypedia it said that African-American slaves who were forced to get out had no place to live and was pretty much homeless in the newland and all they knew was work.

The ending though doesn't mean a lot of sense, i can see you're being poetic but it's better than anything i can write but still how did he get the powers of Eppa? Still a great story.