Talk:The Long Night of New Year's 2015/@comment-31580487-20170331171405

This was confusing, to say the least. I sort of liked the first half. It was decently written and the "normal" conversation between the friends held my interest. It wasn't creepypasta, but decent enough. Ironicaly, once the "creepy" part happened it became too disjointed to be effective, both mechanically and as horror. I think it needs an anchor, something that links each paragraph to the rest of the story. (6/10)