Talk:Dog Slaughter Falls/@comment-25169949-20150516102042

The concept kinda reeks of "teh furry," though my sensitivity to such things has perhaps been heightened perhaps by all my years online, but the idea of the Woltage is interesting, and the buildup and lack of explanation works well, but I do feel that there's a bit too much focus on the human characters. Sort of like in a horror movie, we don't give two craps about these schmucks, we care about the monster and the mystery behind it.

You may want to edit this as a "second draft", but otherwise it's a pretty good start. Also, how can the second journallady be that dumb?! If I read that shit and saw the Woltage, I'd be NOPE-ing out there lickety-split!