Talk:How I Fare in the Afterlife/@comment-27905100-20170226055436

Still haven't done mmpratt's fuuuu-

This was a pretty good story. The afterlife was definitely well used as a prompt. I enjoyed the character in this immensely (perhaps because I can identify with molestation of famous people), but it seemed to lack anything dark about it. Strange thing is, the dark humour of this that was the afterlife was described so mundanely for such an immense topic.

My major grievances with this are the grammatical errors that were present and that sometimes certain parts seemed out of context (such as the launch codes) but all in all, this was pretty good.