Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32289854-20180308164744/@comment-34823985-20180320221535

Ok, so the wall of text is an easy fix. There are a few punctuation, etc. issues that I'm sure you will notice in your final edit. I still feel that Carl and George are a bit too casual about getting run off the road, but that could just be me. It works well as it is. I think you're ready for a final edit. I hope to see it on the site soon. :)