Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27028306-20150926010953/@comment-27028306-20150927221135

Thanks for the reply.

I will say that the dream sequences (except for the last one) are all jokes referring to an earlier, really shitty draft of this story. It'd be probably be a good idea to remove them to avoid the confusion you had with them.

Work has been getting done on expanding the story. It's never been planned for this to be the final draft and it's still a work in progress. This could help explain the almost bare bones nature of the story currently.