Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20181027034711/@comment-9041013-20181027165021

L0CKED334 wrote: BloodySpghetti wrote: L0CKED334 wrote: Now, to address the first comment. The entire military force is not comprised of children. Tony has been placed in this group because they are of similar age. The boys are to be trained and prepared for the day they may be needed. The older men are the active force in this story but since they have yet to have any bearing on what is going on with Tony, have not been introduced yet. Alright then. So Spartan society modern day Apocalypse edition Pretty much, but there there is more to the Apex Predators than that. I intend on setting a large scene. The U.S. and Canada took heavy damage but the rest of the world is fairly untouched. Allies of the U.S. and Canada  want to help but with communication being spotty (from the damage to global satellites) they feel it could be risky sending forces. Mexican forces are marching on the southern states (lucky Tony got out). American enemies are preparing to invade across the globe. America is going to be a cash grab for the world and Tony is at the beginning of it, even though he does not know it yet. It stops being a horror story past the first part and more of a dystopian thriller or adventure story. So, I don't know if you should put it here or carry it on elsewhere.

The idea is pretty awesome nonetheless