User blog comment:DoctorBleed/A Million Little Things of Bleach: On Rejection, Disappointment and Contests/@comment-24101790-20151122071028/@comment-10789912-20151122201425

"but then we'd be running completely off of opinion and personal experience, which isn't what a debate should be."

That's "You're speaking from my own experiences as if they're gospel truth that applies to everyone?" Saying personal experience and opinion is void, is somehow enforcing personal experience and opinion? Stop being so melodramatic. You're actively trying to turn a debate into an argument.

Also, you then follow up criticising the use of personal experience and opinion, with your own personal experience and opinion, as if it is fact. 10/10 logic.

Also, as Empy pointed out, the story has issues with changing tense. It might not be every line or so, but that doesn't matter. You could have easily fixed that with a single read of the story before publishing. You had two weeks until the deadline, when you uploaded it.