Talk:Three Friends Diner/@comment-27201897-20151112160501

Really great Creepypasta! The beginning really helped create a anxious mood even thought the ending was revealed. One thing that should've been included was more incidents. Like more gore or such, more scares, etc. The hooded figure should've haunted the main character too instead of only Michelle once. My favorite part about this is the name. I didn't figure it out until the main character did, and that was a really nice detail. One more thing that should've been included was more about Bessie and more Bessie incidents. Overall 8/10 Creepypasta! Good job!