Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26705150-20150904010042/@comment-26705150-20150904033742

AMarbleHornet wrote: Decent idea, but it isn't well written, missing words in places or just not very good imagery in others. I believe with a little TLC this could be a great pasta, a dream pasta bringing a new concept to the game. Somewhat reminds me of the old show Eureka. Well done so far, now just to edit it.

What do you mean? Do you think there any major plot elements I should change or primarily just the way it's written.