Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25024572-20150322233449/@comment-26169026-20150326010335

I enjoyed it. I have to agree with the above comments that it wasn't necessarily creepy... maybe if you went into some detail about the other men, ... their looks. Maybe WHY they were robbing him. Stuff like that. Overall, I like the concept... it seems like something that you could do A LOT with... and I think you should. You do have talent, don't waste it.