Talk:Hypno's Lullaby/@comment-24957024-20150524181356

Unfortunately, the meter of the poem is way off on some lines. You see, it doesn't matter if the number of sylables match if the beat of which you pronounce the lines don't. For instance,

Those ropes, I know...

Your families...

Families flows while the comma after ropes interrupts that flow and, thus, the meter.