Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26872762-20150814000949/@comment-26872762-20150816221845

Thank you. I just put the word crap into there because of the whole cussing issue, and second of all I'm not a good pasta writer, but that is about to change, thanks to your guy's feedback. Also, I feel like I rush stories a lot, so please pardon me for that. It's just a thing inside of me that wants to get this story done. Thanks for all of your feedback, and please continue giving advice! :D