Talk:Hell's Harvest/@comment-1787373-20140509085343

You might want to edit this. You kept jumping between saying Ian and Ben. I think you were trying to say Ian. The ending came out of nowhere so it was a little confusing. Maybe more of an explaination would have helped. After all it was Ian's birthday, right? Maybe have it have been a right of passage. that the creature was really his mother and this was his "coming of age" trial sort of deal. This just seems like a sick little kid who stumbled across something, not even sure what it was, and just killed the girl he liked and the girl who liked him.