Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-25170312-20150228193257

No Right Turn on Red

Hey, I'm Umby, and I'm just another creepypasta author, bringing you just another creepypasta. I didn't get much feedback on this one in the writer's workshop, and I've only gotten one comment so far giving it a 7/10. I would really like some more feedback on it. Here's a little bit about the story:

'NO TURN ON RED' follows our protagonist as he/she disobeys a traffic sign and winds up hitting a little girl. But things aren't quite what they seem. Was she real or a ghost? Maybe it's all in the protagonist's mind. Find out, or don't, in this "what would you do?" style creepypasta. 