User talk:Icydice

My pastas so far (more to come in the future)

Tick, Tock Oh technology, how could I ever live without you? Find out in this pasta.

A Silver Flame Entry for Humboldt's Werewolf competition. A take on the classic beast with an unexpected surprise at the end.

Reflective Thinking Mirrors show us our reflection. Nothing more right?. This is a micro pasta with about 550 words.

A Christmas Miracle  Wishes really do come true. Just be careful going about wishing.

Culicidae Bugs. They really suck, don't they? My fifth story on this wikia. Halfway to my own author caregory!

All Too Human Artificial Intelligence has never been so awesome to read about! Seriously, read this, you will probably like it.

A Helping Hand A short micropasta. Redundant? I know

The History of the Stars Space is such a cold, empty place. If only there was other life.

Fate Worse Than Death Worse than death? Yep. Worse than spiders? Probably not.

Welcome
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Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything!

ClericofMadness (talk) 00:21, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

About story
Hey Icy, the best thing about editing is it makes you a god of the world you built. You can have anything and everything you want happen. The reason I suggested changing the ending is because it's too vague. I like to leave endings vague too, but there is a certain kind of story you can do that with.

Here are two examples one that has a vague ending, where the point is more to make the reader think then give closer. Another where a vague ending would ruin the story. Of course they're shameless plugs, but I guess I'll promote my stuff no matter what.

The first is Voice Messages. It has a foggy ending to make the reader wonder what is real and what isn't. Compare that to the story you've written and see if you can spot any differences in how the vague ending comes across.

The next is Spirit Bottles which has closer. That one was one I was going to leave open, but it wouldn't have worked. The story wasn't build for it.

Sometimes when you write something, it's great to have a confusing ending, but not to give the reader anything can also come across as a cop out.

Again, these are just things I've learned when writing and it's up to you on what you want to do. No one can make you write anything that you don't want to write. The concept is great and I'm sure you'll be able to make it one of the better stories on this site, so long as you work on it.

One last note, use the tiddles (~) to sign your comments. It will make it easier to get back to you. Just hit that key four times and it will let me jump right to your talk page.

Best,

JohnathanNash (talk) 16:33, August 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re: View
I'll try to get to it when I get a bit of free time tomorrow as I'm currently playing catch-up on the site after being out for most of the day and likely won't get time to sit down and write out a review until later. Sorry for the inconvenience. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 00:16, August 21, 2017 (UTC)

Red and Green
Hello! I happened to see your message on Banning's talk page, and I think I have an answer. Unless I'm mistaken, the green numbers listed in the contributions show how much data was added for that edit and the red numbers show how much was subtracted. Raidra (talk) 02:02, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Review
I was going to get to it today, but you removed it. I'll get back to you on the story you recently posted later, when I'm not sick and can put in some concentration. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 23:21, September 22, 2017 (UTC)

Review.
I'll help you out man. I don't know when I'll get to it because I have a bunch of other stories I have to help with edits and reviews. I may bump you up closer to the top of the queue because you said it was short.

Best,

JohnathanNash (talk) 15:54, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Contest and Writers Work Shop
Yes, you can use the writer's work shop for your entry prior to submission. By all means, use every source you have for proofreading, plot hole searches, editing, etc. etc. I want stories of top quality and would only expect you to have everyone you know read them and offer advice. Best of luck. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 23:17, October 19, 2017 (UTC)

A Heads-up
Please do not post duplicate pages. I deleted the earlier one as it seems like the latter was the title you wanted. If you want a different title, you can request a rollback to rename it for you. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 16:18, October 21, 2017 (UTC)


 * No problem. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 16:24, October 21, 2017 (UTC)
 * What Empy said! I'm on this wiki most of my days, and should you ever need one of your stories renamed, I'm your man.  The Star is falling   -   Greet the First Dawn!  22:39, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

Re: Tiki
Here are all the stories of yours that were deleted. As for being the one to leave a message that made it onto the salt mines, I do not think that's the case as the account you provided hasn't left any comments on anyone's talk page. Have a good one. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 01:27, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Review
Hey Icydice. I'm afraid I was away yesterday so I didn't get to review your story. I will give a look tonight though. Apologies! MrDupin (talk) 13:55, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

RE: I don't know how wikis work, I do apologize
I'm the real deal, friend! Don't know how to prove it, exactly, so you'll have to take my word for it! Unless, of course, you have a better idea! :P

HoodoHoodlum (talk) 22:24, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Something, something, something
Heh, good to hear! Glad you like my stuff, and if I find the time I'll check your old stuff out :)

And I'm glad I could introduce you to a kickass band! ;)

HoodoHoodlum (talk) 22:53, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

Helel Says Hello
Well hello to you too, Icy.

I liked the ambiguity and to overal wat at the end of it. It's rather original, and I think you should upload it oficially.

Also (very important) please sign your posts in the future by adding four tildes (~) to the end of your post. Makes it easier to figure out who did the sending.

 The Star is falling   -   Greet the First Dawn!  10:24, October 24, 2017 (UTC)

RE Contest
Thank you for submitting! It was a truly creepy and original story. I'm so happy to hear my feedback was a help.

HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 20:50, October 31, 2017 (UTC)

Story deletion Your story has been deleted because it doesn't meet the wiki's quality standards. If you feel that it did meet the standards, please state your case on Deletion Appeal. Make sure you follow the instructions to the letter there, or your appeal will be automatically denied.

'''DO NOT ATTEMPT TO REUPLOAD YOUR PASTA. If you upload it again, you'll receive a 1-day ban from editing, as per the rules.'''

Read the Deletion FAQ and our Style Guide for Writing for details on the 'what' and 'why' of the deletions we make.

Read this guide and these blog posts for further details on how you can improve your story/stories to make them meet our quality standards.

For additional help, submit your story to the Writer's Workshop for feedback.


 * I am afraid your story did not meet the Quality Standards. First I will point out some few technical issues before I jump on the meat of the story.


 * "had many sides of hiself" - It's 'himself'.


 * "allows him realize" - Add a 'to' after 'him'.


 * "these men plauge" - It's 'plague'.


 * "their flesh charing and bubbling" - I think you meant to say 'charring'.


 * Now onward to the plot.


 * The main issue with the story is that it lacks focus. Your story is about how the devil is actually good, which sets it into the genre of "pastas-with-a-twist-revelation". This pastas work well when we get a revelation that makes the reader go "oh, that makes sense" or "hmmm, interesting" and then the explanation sheds even more light on the situation and cements the idea. (Of course, there are other formats, but this is the safest route.) Your story did not follow this path. You write briefly about how the devil is actually good and then for more than half of your story you write about some terrible people, with seemingly no reason.


 * In stories like this, every section needs to earn its spot. Think of it as a mathematical proof with some sauce on it. If something isn't part of the proof, you should take extra care when adding it in. Too much sauce and the story will feel bloated and the proof forgotten.


 * The idea of writing about some terrible people is great, but it should have been done in just about a paragraph. Be quick and to the point when mentioning them: "This guy was an animal, he did this and that. Look at him now, his flesh hanging off his ribs." Shorter sections like this keep the focus on the revelation while showing the work of the devil.


 * As a theory, this story is lacking a bit too. You write the devil is good because he is keeping bad people away, but is he really? These people died, so they can't cause any more damage. Maybe I missed it, but there should be something like "if everyone went to heaven, you would get bad people causing havoc among the good ones". This will explain the need for a hell.


 * Overall, I feel your story can get posted on the site with a few amendments. If you manage to condense the bad people sections, your story will maintain the focus on the revelation, which will be great.


 * Hope this helped, if you have any questions, feel free to ask. MrDupin (talk) 21:47, November 3, 2017 (UTC)


 * To be honest, it is trickier than that. The story drags on in general. Cutting these sections down will certainly help, but there is more work. I am also noticing a lot of repetition. For example, your first two paragraphs are pretty much identical to your last two paragraphs. You need to cut these sections down too.


 * I think this story can work only as a very short story and that means you need to structure it better. If I were to write the story, I would do it like this: First I would write about man being evil and stuff and in the second half I would say "and hey, you call me bad for taking these men away from heaven". This way at the end of the story the reader will be left with the revelation.


 * It needs some work in any case, but so far it is a good try. MrDupin (talk) 23:47, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Re: View
I'm currently working my way through the other unreviewed stories so it's likely I'll get to it in a week or so if no one else has by then. Sorry for the inconvenience. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 23:24, November 5, 2017 (UTC)

Workshop
Awesome, I will take a look tomorrow. MrDupin (talk) 01:13, November 6, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Writer's Workshop.
Hell-o, Icy.

I've looked into your issue: the problem is that you most likely just copy-pasted the story straight from Word, into Visual Mode.

Don't do that.

When copy-pasting over to Visual Mode, styles are also carried over, such as: colour of leters, font, size, alignment... When I viewed your entry in Source Mode, it showed me that it had incredibly complex code (longest I've seen to date) that determined colour, font...

If you want to copy-paste something, you must first switch to Source Mode, as it carries over only letters, without any stylistic changes. Hell, I'm writing this in Source Mode 'cause it's simpler that way.

I hope I was able to help. Remember: ask, and the Staff shal respond. Good luck.

 The Star is falling   -   Greet the First Dawn!  22:58, November 22, 2017 (UTC)

Xmas pasta
I like how she selflessly asks for help for her father and instead he gets murdered. That's going at the end, right? Would make a nice twist. One could even infer that the man isn't Santa and that he just intercepted her letter somehow. Though, a real person can't come down the chimney. Or can they? I had raccoons living in my chimney. Does that count? Umbrello (talk) 19:27, December 24, 2017 (UTC)

Signing Pages
You're looking for the by-user template. For you it would be ClericofMadness (talk) 02:08, December 25, 2017 (UTC)

Re: Template
I've only been on this wiki for the past few weeks, but I typically just type "Written by" in italics and then sign using four tildes. I see on my talk page that you have a custom signature though, so I guess that wouldn't work in your case. I don't know about the template.

HopelessNightOwl (talk) 03:28, December 25, 2017 (UTC)

Memories light the corners of my mind
Hello! Yes, that sounds familiar. I was about to log off when I got your message, so I'll try to check them out tomorrow. I'm looking forward to reading your Christmas story because I happened to see you've been talking with Umby about it. Thank you for stopping by, for the greetings and links. It'll be interesting to contrast the old and new styles. It's good to see writers who are able to take advice and grow instead of being salty about everything. Here's hoping you had a good Christmas! :-D Raidra (talk) 04:02, December 26, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Template Trouble
Go here, mayte.

 The Star is falling   -   Greet the First Dawn!  19:10, December 26, 2017 (UTC)

Pastas roasting on an open fire
You're certainly welcome. That's good because I had a splitting headache last night and didn't get around to it until earlier today. May the good-natured ribbing of old stories commence!
 * “The man never seen”- The fact that it opens up repeating the title reminds me of a YouTube narration (not a complaint, just an observation). Yikes, the man never seen has unsettling ways of showing his love, or is it that he loves kids like a dog loves bacon? “He takes you to learn to sew.” It’s nice that he teaches some practical skills. “Those who are aware of him threw this story di even sooner.” I’m going to di?! What have you done to me!? “He gets rid of those people nicely.” Oh, okay, at least it’ll happen nicely. The main problem with this story is it’s a string of horrible events with little else, making it more an attempt to be horrifying than an actual story. I have to admit, though, that you may be onto something with the ending. A monster transforming others into similar monsters is an old motif, but one that can be very effective and chilling if done properly. (Note- I reviewed these before those two new ones. It's interesting to compare and contrast this with "A Silver Flame", in which you did a much better job of exploring this concept.)
 * “I think im being watched”- “I made a terrible mistake not looking at his license plate number, because i wanted to call the cops on this freak.” Already this protagonist is smarter than most slasher film characters. This was better developed than the first story, but things still happened too quickly, and the ending was kind of vague.
 * “The arms”- This story reminded me of tales used to scare children (like the Japanese tale that if you tell a lie, a spirit will snatch out your tongue). The narrator talking about hating the night and having frightening dreams makes me feel that it would be better to explore a subject like night terrors or sleep paralysis rather than a bogeyman-like entity. That could just be me since I’m into psychological stories, but it’s something to consider. Different people are good at different types of stories, so all I can do is offer food for thought.
 * “High five nightmare”- “It makes them have extreme stomach aches and other sucknessess.” I assume you mean things like bronchitis and strep throat because I’ve had them, and let me tell you, they suck. This one tried too hard and was too far-out to be scary, but I feel the idea of something ordinary suddenly causing harm has potential.

I was going to say that I had left comments on your new stories, but then I got your message, so it looks like you found them already. You're certainly welcome, and I look forward to seeing more from you. :-D I think it's only fair that I share my deleted creepyastas, including the weirdest one I've written so far. Raidra (talk) 21:38, December 27, 2017 (UTC)
 * Sometimes you just feel in the mood to write a story about an arrogant football player inadvertently huffing laughing gas, right? X-D When it comes to my comics I've had weirder ideas than that. I am curious as to what your old account was because I have some memory of your previous time on here, but I'm having trouble finding the posts. "Anyways, this was a fun experience definitely." Awesome! :-D Raidra (talk) 04:21, December 29, 2017 (UTC)
 * Oh, yeah, I remember you! Thanks for the link! I'm signing off for the night, so before I go, I realized I forgot to tell you something- "Welcome back." :-) Raidra (talk) 04:47, December 29, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Thanks for the edits
No problem! Happy I could help. ^ ^

Vngel W (talk ) 19:19, December 28, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Hello
Hi Icydice,

Yeah, I occasionally do reviews in the WW -- it used to be the only section I lingered in when I first joined, but I got away from it.

Anyways, sure I can take a look at it for you.

Vngel W (talk ) 20:47, December 30, 2017 (UTC)

While you were away
I realized that your extended absence means you missed the memo about how apparently this wiki was going to bleed until there was no more blood left. See, when people aren't cool like you are, they tend to leave rants like this, which subsequently leads to spoofs like this (Warning: There is some inappropriate content here and there). Happy New Year! Raidra (talk) 00:29, January 1, 2018 (UTC)
 * Surprise! Ask Empy about his Salt Mines and how you can become a reformed member. Thanks for the well-wishes. :-D


 * It's not my area of expertise, but I do know two things. One- It means a pasta written in diary/journal form, not any story involving diaries/journals (I learned that when the category was removed from my story "Dawn's Notebooks"). Two- It's not good to end with something like, "NO, THE MONSTER'S EATING ME!!! AAAHHH!!!!!!" Raidra (talk) 01:28, January 1, 2018 (UTC)

sure
Sure, I can help, but I've never written a journal pasta. Umbrello (talk) 00:51, January 1, 2018 (UTC)

Re: Hello
Hi, thanks for the praise. I'm curious to know which of my micropastas you liked, as I have posted four of them in the past few weeks. Anyway, I've read your journal pasta draft and will probably give my input tonight or tomorrow.

HopelessNightOwl (talk) 01:21, January 1, 2018 (UTC)

RE: Spam
Hey, thanks for letting me know. MrDupin (talk) 15:41, January 1, 2018 (UTC)

RE: Hello There
Thank you for bringing this up. -- Sloshedtrain  Talk   Contribs   █  21:06, January 1, 2018 (UTC)

Re: Dilemma
I know how it is because I myself hate to lose a good story idea. I was going to say go ahead and send it, and then I saw you went ahead and posted a link, so I'll check it out when I can (hopefully tomorrow).

P.S.- Cool! Interestingly, Hailey also has the same birthday. While we ponder what mysterious force may be drawing people born on May 15 to this site, here's the video I find myself thinking of when people talk about birthdays. Raidra (talk) 03:24, January 2, 2018 (UTC)

Dickhead Patrol
Hey thanks for the head's up! I've given him a block. He was clearly being a bit of a troll ChristianWallis (talk) 16:48, January 4, 2018 (UTC)

Thanks
Hey, thanks, I really appreciate it :) I'm sad to go too, but I really don't have the time to dedicate to the community anymore. And likewise, best of luck in whatever you do.

Underscorre talk - contrib - log 18:41, January 4, 2018 (UTC)

RE: All Too Human
Thanks for the mention, but I think Raidra did more of the heavy lifting; I just fixed the spacing and format. Yeah, AI concepts are one of the topics I find intriguing, so it was pretty easy for me to gravitate to your story. It's fascinating idea and yet a scary one when you think about it: If AI was born would it lead down that route? It's a wonder how it would all pan out.

Vngel W (talk ) 19:43, January 4, 2018 (UTC)

RE:Hi
I'll tell you a secret... I'm not busy... I'm LAZY! That might not be a secret. I will try to read your pasta though in between playing Animal Crossing, watching Supernatural, and sleeping. #confessions XD Umbrello (talk) 20:18, January 4, 2018 (UTC)

Hey Icy, I would love to review your story. I'll get started on reading it right away. Thanks for personally asking me to do it, means a lot!

Feedback
Hey, if you drop me an email at wallis_cj@hotmail.com I'll send you my feedback. It's just I can't really post it as a 5000 word comment and the workshop thread has been closed ChristianWallis (talk) 17:15, January 5, 2018 (UTC)


 * haha, well man that's my email. Regardless of what the browser says. Just drop a quick email and I can send the feedback over ChristianWallis (talk) 17:26, January 5, 2018 (UTC)

Re: Thank You
You are welcome :)

A give credit where credit is due, for example, I wasn't to in on your "A Silver Flame", it was unique and does play a bit into my national folklore, however, it felt a little lackluster to me as a werewolf story. Nonetheless, it was written well and had a good feel to it as a thrill/horror piece, just not "werewolf"y enough. "All Too Human" was leagues above in terms of fitting the role it was meant to play.

(Plus, I've a bias towards stuff that is made by smart people for smart people hehehe)

Umm, as for you feeling honored, I dunno, just because I've been a memeber for long, doesn't mean I'm that good, you can see that by looking through the amount of the "deleted story" tags in my talk list, if you want to praise me, go through my works first :P

BloodySpghetti (talk) 15:06, January 6, 2018 (UTC)

HeLL0 BacK!
Hey, I just happened to be on the website! I'm doing pretty well, thank you; I hope you're doing well too. Wow, that's awesome! Let me know if he does. Like I said, you're certainly welcome. :-D Raidra (talk) 17:30, January 10, 2018 (UTC)

YAY!
Congratulations! :-D I can imagine how excited you must feel. I know I always feel honored and excited when someone narrates one of my stories, or even when someone leaves a glowing review in the comments section.

X-D I'm all right, thanks. How about you? Raidra (talk) 04:07, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
 * Ironically I'm getting sloppy with responding to messages. I apologize for that. I should probably put a disclaimer on my talk page. Raidra (talk) 17:01, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

Vandalism
Thanks for catching that! Given them a short ban. I really appreciate the help ChristianWallis (talk) 20:27, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

I assumed That's what you were going for. And i could certainly knock it up to biased opinion as someone who hasnt already accepted that humans are destructive and evil by nature may find this terrifying. I just think as far as fear factor goes it was very mild for creepy pasta. Please dont get me wrong though I LOVED this story. It clearly took a lot of thought and creativity. And like i said i loved how your swerved around the whole destroy all humans thing. I just try to always add constructive criticism. i.e. i still havent read the perfect pasta. But this was one of the best

Steamed Hams
Sorry, I tend to say I'll do something and then I don't do it. That's how the cool kids roll. Though, I'm in my 30's lol. Umbrello (talk) 02:43, January 19, 2018 (UTC)


 * Yeah, that's about when I stopped aging mentally. :P Umbrello (talk) 23:17, January 21, 2018 (UTC)

Thank you!
What can I say? You can mess with me, but don't mess with my peeps. Michael "Prison Mike" Scott, Jim "Big Tuna" Halpert, the one and only Nard Dog and of course Dwight "Recyclops" Schrute. Dwight has a lot of land out there on Schrute Farms... lots of places for people to just... go missing.

Take care,

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 17:45, January 21, 2018 (UTC)

For sure!
I'm about to leave for work here shortly, but I'll read it over tonight when I get home. Looking forward to it!

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 19:51, January 21, 2018 (UTC)

Thanks, University of Wisconsin!
I remember that one. Like I said, it wasn't a bad story; it just needed some correction and polishing. Believe me, I've read a whole lot worse, as seen from the following pages. For the threads you can wonder which is worse- the stories or the quote pyramids? Raidra (talk) 23:38, January 21, 2018 (UTC)
 * http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:408962
 * http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:438977
 * http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:465497
 * http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Darkshadow9735/What_do_you_think_is_the_worst_creepypasta_ever%3F)
 * Heads up- it looks like someone accidentally deleted the end of "A Christmas Miracle" while making an edit. Raidra (talk) 16:23, January 29, 2018 (UTC)

Icydice's historic first!
Hello and welcome! You remind me of how Jay would often besmirch my talk pages within minutes of them being cleared. ;-)

You're certainly welcome. :-D Raidra (talk) 01:49, February 1, 2018 (UTC)

"Hi, doggy"
Thanks for the heads up! "You're my favorite customer!" Umbrello (talk) 03:21, February 1, 2018 (UTC)


 * Just looked and wow... he called it "The" Dog Children... weird... That's like when he added a word at the end of "No Right Turn on Red". I don't know why he does this stuff. Umbrello (talk) 03:26, February 1, 2018 (UTC)

Noms
Thanks bro!

Fisto (talk) 17:09, February 1, 2018 (UTC)

Nominations Page
Are you having issues signing your nomination? I noticed some of the revisions you made on the page.

Vngel W (talk) 02:07, February 2, 2018 (UTC)


 * Nothing to be ashamed of. Signing the your nomination is same as signing on a talk page with ~


 * Vngel W (talk) 02:16, February 2, 2018 (UTC)


 * Awesome!


 * Vngel W (talk) 02:36, February 2, 2018 (UTC)

Re: Review Request
I will try to get to it Tuesday/Wednesday, since I have an exam this Monday. MrDupin (talk) 22:01, February 8, 2018 (UTC)

Re: your last message
Okay, I’ll try to take a look at it. It most likely won’t be tonight, it’s my last night in Vegas, so I’m going to waste some money. But, I should have time in the airport tomorrow.

Best,

JohnathanNash (talk) 01:05, February 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re:
Hello,

Thank you. I was unaware people still knew of my reviews, as I haven't been consistently active on this wiki for quite a while. Regardless, I appreciate your words.

Though I've been trying to not take as many requests as I used to when I first started out, I admit that I often can't help myself whenever someone puts forth one. Thus, I'll certainly take a look at your story at some point relatively soon.

Pasta of the Month? I'm intrigued.

AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 01:17, February 9, 2018 (UTC)

That's odd
I get the feeling that I should be congratulating you for something, and yet you haven't told me any sort of news about any sort of honor you may have recently been given. Hmm... Raidra (talk) 04:34, February 13, 2018 (UTC)

Most Valuable Possum
Possum of the month, whoo-hoo! Congratulations! :-D "...(thanks to you)." I wouldn't say that, but thanks; I'm happy I could help.

Speaking of possums, I always thought this cartoon was pretty funny. I also found this exclusive deleted scene from your now award-winning pasta. Raidra (talk) 03:25, February 14, 2018 (UTC)

RE: Hello
You're welcome and my apologies! I actually thought about changing the stabbing in Nanny Cam to something else. Strangling, maybe? Anyway, I'll try and check out your other thing. Umbrello (talk) 21:51, February 14, 2018 (UTC)

Don't get caught with egg between your toes!
I've always loved that cartoon because the hero is so likable and the situation is just so absurd. :-D I'm doing pretty well, thank you. I hope you're doing well too (and that people claiming to be dictators don't vandalize your page anymore). Raidra (talk) 00:29, February 15, 2018 (UTC)
 * That actually wasn't the first dictator to receive a block on this site, as seen here. Here's hoping you do well! Raidra (talk) 00:45, February 15, 2018 (UTC)

"All Too Human" Review is Up
Hello again,

I've posted the review. You didn't need to worry about me "ripping it to shreds" at all.

You can find it on my (continued) critiques page (here) or as a comment on your original story.

Thank you for the request.

AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 03:03, February 15, 2018 (UTC)

From Here to Two Days Ago
That title made me think of PhantomStrider's video of the top ten worst anime- "Konichiwa and howdy!" It's going well. I'm sorry to hear about your frightening experience yesterday; hopefully it won't happen again. Luckily I haven't encountered any more creepy people in restaurants. Raidra (talk) 00:56, February 18, 2018 (UTC)
 * I actually ended up taking a nap earlier, presumably because I hadn't gotten enough sleep during the week. I spent a couple days this week writing a draft I ended up not using because I had some issues with it.  I may eventually decide to start it over from scratch.  One of these days I'm going to do a blog about rejected creepy possums.


 * Dang, that's a shame. Some people are just plain inconsiderate (or they're lowlifes, one or the other).  No, it's fine.  If you were to read enough of my posts you'd find I'm an expert rambler.  Have a good one! Raidra (talk) 01:50, February 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re: Sequel
I personally would feel apprehensive about making a sequel to the story, but if you have a particularly brilliant idea or believe one could really work, then I absolutely support you creating one, especially if you're passionate about doing so.

Are you driven by intrinsic motives, external validation, or both? Feel free not to answer if you don't wish to. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 03:05, February 18, 2018 (UTC)
 * I see. Thank you for answering. I like seeing how the author feels about themselves.


 * Now that you've explained it, I think it is reasonable to simply go for it. Even if the sequel doesn't match up to what some readers may want, I don't see much harm in trying provided your intent stays clear.


 * You, as the creator, know what you want, regardless of the story's popularity, so to speak. What you write and why you're writing it is more important than what your reader is going to think of what you've written.


 * I was 13 when I started writing stories and reviewing Creepypastas on this wiki. Recently, I've had many an experience that I've felt compelled to write down without sharing any of them. My motivation was my own, and I knew I couldn't prevent myself. I had to let my words pour out to relieve the weight that was crushing me.


 * This is, essentially, a convoluted way of me saying that I believe I do understand what you're referring to, and that if you're relatively young, it only makes your passion and achievements that much greater. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 04:25, February 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re: View
Unfortunately I don't quite have the time. I'm in-between studying subjects so I figured I'd poke my head in and see what's going on with the wiki, but I don't really have much time to spare. Sorry. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 14:12, February 18, 2018 (UTC)


 * Thanks, best of luck with your upcoming story. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 14:14, February 18, 2018 (UTC)

Formatting
Hey, I forgot to mention the formatting on your new pasta. All the space between the paragraphs is because there's html coding or whatever that's not supposed to be there. You have to edit it in source mode and delete all the code at the beginning and end of every paragraph. Or an easier way would be to edit it, delete everything, then copy/paste the story fresh into source mode (as long as you didn't make edits afterwards that you would lose).Umbrello (talk) 20:52, February 18, 2018 (UTC)


 * Aaaaaaand someone else did it already. LOL Umbrello (talk) 20:53, February 18, 2018 (UTC)