Talk:Lovely Assistant/@comment-24996913-20140912222008

I like this. I think it could be drawn out a bit more, perhaps go in depth with the one eyed man's perspective, as I believe it could create a scarier atmosphere. We've all felt rejection at one point in life, which gives that aspect of relation amongst the readers. Again, I liked it, and think with some elaboration, it could be even greater than it is.