Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27018487-20151014020233/@comment-27072320-20151017051016

This was a really great story, I scrolled through it before reading, thinking I'd be bored by it before I got to the end, but you really kept me hanging on every word. About the spelling and grammar, there are only a few things I could spot, like or > once or twice throughout maybe a few mispells, if you put it through a spell check it should fix those up though. Great job!