Talk:Come, Little Children/@comment-6684440-20131216201730

Woah...I really have nothing negative to say about this at all! I saw few (if any) grammical errors, spelling was correct, punctuation was used properly, story was creepy

Grammer/spelling/punctuation  10

Overall scary feature                10

Used proper literary elements  10

Overall score                            10\

Great Job!!!! ^-^