Talk:Queen Justine and the Cutest Little Shing/@comment-24996913-20151117195442/@comment-24996913-20151117200130

Oh, and I forgot, I do agree with some of the people below when it comes to the narration. I feel it would've been a bit more personable if you had used a first person point of view. I didn't necessarily feel bad for Drexler because he didn't have too much dialogue other than saying "Craig's a nut" haha. I cared more for Craig because he did most of the talking. That's probably my only constructive remark. I still loved the read and think you did amazing work.