Talk:Violets/@comment-15888551-20140329134711

It had a sort of mildly eerie feel about it? Mostly the entire story made me feel really sad. But this is "Creepy Pasta Wiki", and creepy this was not. There was good potential for creepyness in the "illness", but it was never explored.

Two scores are nessicary:

1/10 - Creepy-pasta-ness. Not scary or creepy at all. I would have liked to have gone more into the "illness" and it's cause.

7/10 - General writing. It just had this really sad feel to it. Apply this writing style to something that's actually creepy/scary and it would make for an amazing pasta.