Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31482346-20170309155630/@comment-31482346-20170314193938

EmpyrealInvective wrote:

SentinelKnight wrote: okay ill try but since im kinda new to writing I might miss some issues Which is why it's a good thing that you can edit your post here and get feedback as you go along. also quick question. Is there anything good about this story? or is everything about it bad? Id just like to know