Talk:The Pet/@comment-4519961-20141223171313

Interesting story to say the least, though I do think it's weird how the narrarator of the story went from being a limited third person viewer as he descrbed the actions of all the cast, but then suddenly went inside the mind of the pet. It was incredibly out of place of the story and then went back to being the limited view again. Other than that, I didn't have very much issues aside from some slight pacing that isn't really too much to worry about.