Talk:Sunday Service/@comment-25941663-20150825112157

I liked this. I believe it should not be deleted. It wasn't perfect, but it had its creepy moments and overall I believe it was good.

The atmosphere was nicely done too. It was chilling and I could always sense that something was wrong, but I didn't know what. When it occured to me, it made for a very strong moment.

I have to admit though that the ending wasn't that good. From "I just don't know..." till the end it wasn't up to par with the rest of the story. I mean, it is pretty obvious what was going to happen, the narrator shouldn't have been that confused. Of course, you might say that he was in shock, but I would have preffered it if he came to some sort of realization.

All in all, this was a nice read. Well done.