Talk:Children of Mirth/@comment-30716938-20161212060539

It started so strongly! I loved that opening. It kinda plays with the mental sickness situation, and it certainly leaves you unsure of anything.

The ending, however, was a let down. Why did he actually claw his eyes out? He just seemed to become a rip-off Jeff the Killer. In my opinion, the scariest option is to always go with the unkown and uncertainty. Definitely play off of the possible mental illness. Otherwise, it's an alright story.

7/10