Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27123040-20151028190837/@comment-27008899-20151029113627

This might be more interesting from a first person pov. Try writing it as from Vincent's perspective. There are many directions you can take this. Revenge, murder, hypnotism, these are all viable for a story like this. Also, don't include the sleeping cat picture. The thing with inkblots is we dont all see what you see.