User blog comment:Underscorre/Jeff the Killer Rewrite Contest!/@comment-4138999-20151104113843/@comment-25980905-20151108051904

Oh, were we not supposed to add short reviews on our judgings...? Oops. I was jotting dot points of what was great in each story and what didn't work as well. My bad. I'll share my notes on your re-write after the judging is over (it would be unprofessional to do it in this pre-final-judgement period).