Board Thread:Site Questions/@comment-33451975-20171025194105

Hello, I posted my story The Nightmare Magician on the Writer's Workshop a few days ago and I still have no feedback. I do understand that some stories may not have any feedback at all and some do, but this is my first pasta and I'm extremely  desperate to know if my pasta has any grammeral and strucural issues as well as what others think of my characters  and if my story fits the site's quality standards. I do know I'm supposed to be patient,but it's really hard. 