Talk:Don't Play with Fire/@comment-24996913-20140831221931

Right of the bat, I knew exactly what was going to happen. I'm not saying that's a bad thing, it works often in stories, but it would've been nice to have that element of surprise. Still, I think this is well written, though there are a few minor errors such as punctuation, typos, and a few grammatical errors as well that I have corrected. I like the concept of this, even though it is a popular one. :)