Talk:From Deep Within/@comment-26399604-20150826025134

Wow, this was a VERY enjoyable read. From the beginning to end, you captured the relationship between this father and his daughter very well. I loved how it went from simple a creepy moment to a crime scene mystery one without losing the aspect of the creepiness. Even with flashbacks or memories, the story contined to move forward, which can be challenging for some writers and was done properly here.

Just when I think you cannot top a previous work of yours, you surprise me again producing another wonderful work of art. Awesome job again!

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Quick note, I noticed two errors to correct The "[]" note the errors with corrections inside:

+“I love you dad,["] she whispered, and I let out a chuckle as I felt warmth spread throughout my chest and course through my veins, the kind of warmth that only your daughter can bring to you.

+She was so engrossed in her artwork that [she] didn’t even do so much as turn around.