Talk:The Pacing Man/@comment-25941663-20160921184301

This followed the classic formula of the boogeyman. A bit too closely in my opinion. I'm afraid it's nothing original, you didn't own the story.

The wording and description is the saving grace of the story. This was simply good enough to barely pass the Quality Standards and avoid deletion. I would like to see more originality and new ideas instead of common tropes. You certainly can write and I didn't notice any grammar mistakes (although there were a couple of capitalization issues).

Happy writings!