Talk:Album/@comment-26444017-20180704072934

Read it. Got it. Loved it.

Instant classic, imo.

One small thing took me out of it a bit, though. The narrator mentions that they are fifteen, but it's in parentheses. This could exist as its own separate sentence, or better yet, be incorperated into the preceding one. Would make that section flow a teensy bit better, I think.

But, like I said, instant classic. Good shit, man.