Talk:The Showers/@comment-25944304-20150101191424

Good pasta! Extremely well written and executed. It was very chilling! The one thing I didn't really like is how the protagonist is building all this horror up, like "THE SHOWERS WERE SO SCARY DON'T GO THERE EVER PLEASE!!" but at the climax, it was just him seeing a disturbing girl and freaking the frickle out. I mean, it had great intensity, but the suspense was pretty short-lived. Maybe draw out that ending a little longer, have a few more children or just something creepier at the ending. But overall, it was a great story!! I rate 7.5/10