Talk:Hyperesthesia/@comment-4849011-20150222002003

This was a good story. I liked how it's a continuation of your previous entry, and I thought it was funny how mundane elements (tabby cats and bicycles) were woven with the fantastical (neko-mata and jinn whirlwinds). Although this story didn't make much use of the topic, you still wrote an intriguing and whimsical story.

Your score- 78/100