Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44618871-20191208070334/@comment-33904527-20191208125422

Not bad, but I feel as if the build-up could be extended a little, maybe to make the link to Satanism more reasonable. Maybe the daughter could've been reading Satanist texts, which would explain the sudden drop into insanity.

The spelling and grammar is mostly intact, but there are a couple issues here and there. The main plot is also a little cliché, though the idea of the 'blame game' is somewhat unique.

Overall, I would advise drawing the pasta out a little more, maybe by putting in a few more entries or by making the entries longer.