Talk:Suicide Note/@comment-26399604-20160824141120

I'll admit I wasn't expecting the story to take the direction based on the title. Once I started to read and as it progressed, I was expected a man to confess his dwindling love for his wife and the world, but on the contrary, he plans to "preserve" the two loves of his life.

Did I enjoy the story? Yes, I did. The story in fact sounds relatable (not the killing part lol) as I knew someone who put on a mask and did not let their respectable partner know the "true" them. In the end, it drove them apart. I think you captured that well in this story.

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I will note that in the following statement, it felt like it was touching upon love in a universal sense prior to specifically addressing Sabrina:

+ Someone gives you the key to [their] heart, and exposes all of [their] weaknesses and scars. At any moment, you can decide to hurt that person, abandon [them], and never return. Sabrina left herself vulnerable when we fell in love. Even with these consequences, she chooses to trust and care for me through thick and thin.