Talk:Bodyshock/@comment-6862307-20141107053528

It's a decent story, quite well written especially for creepypasta standards but there's an awe of familiarity that keeps me from rating it higher. I've probably spent too much time with various sci-fi and horror tropes and a lot of the ideas presented here are ones I'm all too familiar with and there's also a certain rawness that I like in my Creepypasta that is missing here, this story having elements that have an almost Hollywood-esque sheen from Hendricks' slightly cartoonish villain role to the almighty master who bumps off his prodigee so that he "Can't fail again." But as negative as I'm sounding, I am overall positive about the story. Again, it's well written, well paced and it's a very fun read - not one of the scariest or creepiest out there, but it did have atmosphere and clever buildup with some knowledge of tension and suspense that managed to keep it engaging from beginning to end.

7.5/10