Talk:Forbidden, Not Forgotten/@comment-5733573-20180705235323

Right up until the end, this was an okay story, even if it's messily written. The ending, however, is laughably silly and kills whatever scare factor this story had. I'd love to see it cleaned up and without the note on a stick at the end, because this story had some good things going for it like a spooky ghost, an unnerving setting, and some very believable character writing.