User blog comment:HandsomeJackass/Least Favourite Pastas?/@comment-24101790-20140405043855/@comment-24101790-20140405055653

I'm referring mainly to dairy/journal entries where the main focus of the story is creating an atmosphere of realism (The sign of a good fiction, IMO, is where the audience can suspend their belief in the story not being real and take it at face value.) and when the last couple of sentences are how the protagonist is getting dismembered/butchered breaks that illusion.

That breaks immersion in the story, how can you say a story that has focused so hard on realism and in the last paragraph shatters that atmosphere is illogical?