Talk:Home is Where the Heart Is/@comment-25326117-20150225000859

It was alright. I thought the gore was a bit excessive. Maybe, you should have just stuck with him killing his wife with an overdose. Ripping out the heart just seemed to be overkill. But, then again, that's just me.

You could have had him bury his wife in a  wall or burning her body. Maybe, he does something with her ashes, which allows him to carry them wherever he goes, but then again. I don't know how that'll work out. I don't know how you would get him to look normal with the fact that he carries around his wife's ashes.

Tanner didn't seem to mind the moving so much, so I don't know why the wife said he missed his old life. You were spot on with Sarah as being a daguther of a soldier is often hard. My mom's dad was in the military and they moved around a lot, which is why she dropped out, but that's another story.

Does the husband go on to kill his kids when they come back from their grandma's? Stories similar to this usually have that. Maybe, he does the same thing with his wife to his kids. It would be pretty genius of him to make the things that he carries his kids and his wife's ashes around in, to not stand out. Those were just some ideas, I have a dark mind.