Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31573726-20170322051025/@comment-24101790-20170322052003

I'm sorry, but the wiki no longer accept Sonic stories without going through a Spinoff Appeal and with the frequent capitalization (Dialogue missing proper quotations/capitalization. "With no hesitation I said no, I'm going mad, please help me mom.", "I got put in the loony bin but after ten years i'm out still on depression meds and PTSD treatment in my twenties."), punctuation (Punctuation missing/outside of dialogue. "“How could you over the years, torture me, put me in misery, I hope you're happy with your ways”.", "“I can’t take this” the voice said.", etc. Commas missing where a pause/sentence break is needed "I booted up the program when Tails was just there standing he looked up at the camera tilted his head and made an very demonic grin.") and story issues.

There isn't a lot of detail here that isn't bland. "It was a more glitched, duller version.", "he looked up at the camera tilted his head and made an (sic) very demonic grin.", etc. The story hits a lot of generic plot points common with sonic/haunted games ("I decided to play it off like it was another glitch in the youtube algorithm.", "I beat it then the command prompt opened. The computer said I had a virus but I played it off.", etc. I'm sorry, but this story isn't really up to our quality standards and likely won't pass an appeal.