Talk:The Rake/@comment-24103274-20131029201704

I like the style of letters and documents left, mentioning the Rake. It's creepy, because he's mysterious. I tend to repeat myself, but I think mysterious characters makes it more creepy. The less you know, the scarier it becomes.

I've been watching a lot of EveryManHYBRID on youtube, and their version of the Rake scares me shitless. It's so creepy and threatening. The lady's story also creeps me out, but I think it could've been longer. I find the father character unnecessary. He just wakes up, drives and dies. Maybe the little girl shouldn't have died this early in the story, and build the father and the daughter's character more.

But even so, the story creeps me out. The Rake is creepy as fuck.

Help. 7/10.