Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26067056-20170716174602/@comment-7064562-20170723004225

That's not what he's saying. He's saying you didn't caps it in some spots, and honestly it's best to not use the word I so much as you do.

I do this

I do that,

I did that

gets repetitive and watered down making your story appear as more of a list of events than a story.