Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28088262-20140704151238/@comment-25144454-20140707001922

I was wondering if you could build up on each character, make the loss more scary as the characters seem more normal. Have the nurse be a bit off, but not so this could ever justify her actions would make it seem much creepier. Explain the old man and give him some reason to live, as well as good traits that the nurse might recognize. Then, have her get a little stressed, only a little, and beep... Beep... Beep...

I don't know, I'm a little new here. Anything sound good here?