Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24704197-20140318223200/@comment-24704197-20140318230308

WhyAmIReadingThis wrote: I feel that the end line of The Impersonation gives absolutely no closure, in the sense that it's very cliché and doesn't show any direction the reader's mind could take to fill the blanks. I recommend you try to give it a better ending.

Also, it's formatting is pretty awry! I can give a pretty good ending, but I wonder what's bad about the formatting. Would you care to be exact as to what is wrong the formatting?