Talk:The Tale of Robert Elm/@comment-38857469-20190319032125

This was a decent story. I liked the initial sacrofoce scene, but once Lombard held Robert captive it seemed to fall apart. The exposition was weird and some of the holes (the fact that hed been there almost a month and people still didn't know who he was, a book about the cult's beliefs just out in the open, the non-hasty eacape) made it hard to suspend my disbelief. 6.5/10