Talk:Rumpelstiltskin/@comment-25941663-20150306091322/@comment-25941663-20150306091953

This was dark. Unrelentingly (I hope that's a word) dark. The worst part is, we knew where this was going, as you told us in the first paragraph (Rump was going to sell the baby). That made the story even 'heavier' than it already was.

I liked how you fleshed Rosemary out. Even though I wasn't feeling sympathetic for her, she was a very well drawn character.

Despite not having creepy elements, the story read very smoothly and I had no problem following what was going on. It was also very well-written and the bleak atmosphere you painted for us was very realistic and, well, bleak.

I think this is one of your best. It was sick and twisted and the realism added a lot to the story. Well done.

By the way, I have no idea what the original fairytale was. If I am not lazy (almost impossible) I will google it.