Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24839054-20140418075605/@comment-9967354-20140418082039

This is alright for an 'Alice in wonderland'/'through the looking glass' theory, this seems okay. Maybe if you read the book and add more to the story. Also, it isn't exactly creepy. The first bit was cool. But the rest could be modified without elements like 'rabbit with no eyes'; I don't like the bit where things get gory for the sake of it. You can go ahead and design a wonderland, really, and I'm sure we'd be okay with it as long as it's well written, got no cliche elements, and is a credible theory for the book itself.

Bottom line: good 'nuff