Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20190131005118/@comment-34823985-20190201032255

I'll level with ya, Bloody. The "meat" meet pun was a total typo, but I like it and you're the second person other than mua to dig it, so it stays. Some sort of subconscious flub-a-adub? I don't know, but some of the best ideas are mistakes.

It was my intention to kind of chronicle the beginning of a serial cannibal/killer. I know a little about Dahmer and Bundy, but not a whole lot. I remember, as a kid, keeping a few loose tabs on Gacey while he was going through the last days of his life. I watched the official announcement (as far as I remember) on the local news in South Carolina with my family. I was young, so I didn't understand the full blah, blah, blah, but I knew a clown was gettin' the needle. Kids in the floorboards or in the backyard? I don't fully recall.

Bloody, if you or anyone else reading this snit gives a flub, then send me title ideas. I'll totally consider any suggestions for a different title. I have a silly request, though. I have this idea to eventually cover every letter in the alphabet in my author's category. That's right, all 26. Here's the challenge: come up with a title using only these letters in the alphabet - A-G-J-K-M-Q-R-U-V-X-Y-Z. The first word is the focus. "The" doesn't count so go ahead and begin with it if you must. Help me out and I will credit you in the story (upon request).

I'm not aware of any clichés in this, but I don't give a snit about tropes. They happen! Sometimes, it's worthwhile to incorporate either or both. It can work out. Take a chance or don't, whatever. Flub those doofus d*cks that say, "Great story, but... clichés." Nuf sed about that.

Have I mentioned that I'm snit-faced right now? My brother is in town, so... seven sheets to the wind. That's funny because I sleep on the floor in a sleeping bag and have for over a decade. I sleep what? I don't have back problems anymore is all you need to know. Ignore what I just said, hahahahahahahahahahahahafuck!

Bloody, my man, feel free to run with Sam and his story or message me about a collab. I won't promise nothin', but I'd love to give it a try. I think I covered everything you mentioned. I'll read this again tomorrow and probably regret some of these words typed here, but...

I've already instituted some of Doc Smith's suggestions, but I intend to read the story a few more times (at least) and take a fair look at everyone's suggestianos. Thanks for the feedback, you and everyone else.

Word... to your... mother's killer. :)