Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20180824132506/@comment-35911608-20180826131414

DrBobSmith wrote: You got to get them to stay with the story long. A dry opening three paragraphs into the story isn't the way. This is no novel. It isn't a novella or a full size short story. You can afford to take the time to build rather than do a quick fact dump. Besides, do 100,000 word novels start like that? To be fair, he did post it in its original form. I'm certain he'll improve it.