Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27127206-20151027181354/@comment-27127206-20151027182221

ClericofMadness wrote: >>It was a nice winter day. It was at least 32 celsius outside.

Stopped right there. 32 C = almost 90 F. It's not a nice winter day. It's fucking shorts weather there.

Also, your walls of text are so impenitrable that my eyes glaze over. Please separate the paragraphs!

Also also, this looks like a generic origin story for your OC Character. Ah, I was wrong with the degrees then. My apologies.

Sorry, I'll make sure to separate them.

Ehhh, yeah. I can't disagree there.