Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-33077235-20180922002654/@comment-9041013-20180924115416

So a typical Red Room Creepypasta, not scary. I mean, sure, if I were to watch a Red Room, I would probably feel somewhat bad. This however, it's just so, "Read that... so many times"

You want a creepy character, how about something similar to the Golden State Killer, say your villain through whatever dark mafia style means puts hidden cams inside unsuspecting couple's house, breaks into the apartment at night, confronts the couple, forces both of them to lay in bed next to one another with the husband laying on his stomach looking at all times at his wife. The villain gets something fragile and places on the husbands back before putting a gun to his face and raping his wife in front of him all the while constantly reminding him that if he hears the object hit the ground - he will shoot the man.

Once he is done with his deed, the man address another camera just to clarify that he is capable of countless other terrible things and whatever.

This if done correctly, could be really good.