Talk:Mummy My Hero/@comment-25052433-20151130040425

This was a really great story, lots of fun to read and well written. I removed the NSFW tag, because this story doesn't contain any specific content that would qualify it as NSFW. Secondary reason for removing NSFW is that such a tag prevents this story from winning PoTM or being spotlighted, and honestly I think the unique writing and point of view of this story could qualify it for at least a nomination.

Excellent and original. You dealt with some harsh topics, but pulled it off well. Personally, I would consider removing the pedophile angle all together, and have the men in black be clergy-members or demon hunters. That's more my style at least. Either way, this was great, keep writing.