User blog:Roman Hahn/Feedback is crucial at this point

I'm in the middle of writing another section of the story from the perspective of a US soldier, but I really, really need feedback on the other two stories I have on the Writer's Workshop forum. I really need to know if Lilith is alright the way it is and if the lack of plot in Mike is alright. ;-;

I'm also thinking of writing another section from the perspective of Erebus(the main creature) and Drake(the Demon), but that may not be until the end. I'm also thinking of adding a third member to Drake's group just to see where it goes from there. I may make a total of ten stories. Two in the very beginning, two in the 15th-16th century, two during the 20th-21st century, two in the 22nd-23rd century, and two at the end which may be the 23rd-24th century. I may make more or less, depending on how much detail I decide to put in the stories as far as describing Erebus, Drake, etc, and how they came to be. At this point, I think Cecil was just a pilot, so I'm not really counting Cecil as a main point of interest. I'm not sure how I feel about Alex either. Sure, "Alex" describes Erebus a bit more, but "Mike" kind of gives a feel for how Erebus behaves and what Mike believes Erebus thinks of humankind in my opinion.

Anyways, I really, really need feedback on those stories on Writer's Workshop, so if you can, please leave a comment on your thoughts of them on the forums. It would mean a lot. ;-;