Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4138999-20150516213528/@comment-24821182-20150517165211

Death4 wrote: ok but im not sure about how to remove the part about the tape that seems to be the main focus. Its hard to find orignal ideas here, so I guess seeing the figures in a dream wouldn't work or anything like that. It might work. Maybe have Andy start visualizing the figures in his dreams, and then when he's awake, have them show up at unexpected times. Have him gradually become assured that they aren't just figments of his imagination. By doing this, you could even incorporate the idea about them coming from another dimension, as that would come across as a person desperately trying to prove he isn't crazy while the rest of the world thinks he is.

Maybe the impact of the meteor traumatised him, and the reader is left to wonder whether the figures are part of some neurosis or actually exist.