Talk:Snuff Film/@comment-4470175-20160625002541

This creepypasta unfortunately falls flat, mostly due to the most predictable plot twist I've ever seen. The writer baits the reader with gore to keep them reading until the end, which is the point you've realised you've completely wasted your time. The writing isn't anything superb, it doesn't hook you. The plot goes absolutely nowhere, and uses an unoriginal, predictable ending to give a fulfilled conlusion (not that anyone cares about that at this rate.) It's also inconsistent, as the writer goes on about how repulsive snuff films are and then reveals he makes them. The structure also falters as every key point is placed in an illogical order in the 'plot' if you'd call it that.

Predictability and redundance at its finest.

2/10