Talk:12 Minutes/@comment-4794104-20150521035617

I wasn't ever planning to comment on my own story, but I felt compelled to.

I want to thank everyone who has pointed out all the glaring grammatical and narrative errors this story has. I wrote it in one sitting and posted it with minimal editing. I am humbled and eternally grateful to everyone who has read it, commented, shared it and even done readings of it on youtube. I never thought this would, in any way, take on a life of it's own.

But I also want to make a special point to thank those who have been fair in their criticisms as well. It can only help me improve my writing in the future. Thank you.