Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25383866-20141021090212/@comment-25425104-20141023202345

Ah, I for some reason thought you were talking about the main character.

"The manager watched him go, his smile fading. He could hear the water lapping on the shore somewhere behind him, tasting the earth with its liquid tongue."

Apparently I thought you transitioned from one character to the other in those two sentences.