Talk:Autopilot/@comment-25078903-20150427040606

The writing in this story is absolutely impeccable!... But I have an enormous problem with it. It is literally the defences story in the real life murder case of 22 month old Cooper. You literally took Justin Ross Harris's story straight from news reports, and his court case. All the way down to him getting an ice coffee and his defence was that he wasn't used to bringing his son to preschool, his wife usually did it... and that it messed with his "autopilot"! You did a good job recounting the defence teams story, but I think you should have changed it a little. There is nothing wrong with using the murder case as an idea and running with it, but all you did was recount someone's real life situation... Not to mention it is very likely that the real life man killed his baby on purpose. Still, I admire your writing style emensly and would love to read something that you used your imagination on a little more.