Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180827215503/@comment-9041013-20180831141018

L0CKED334 wrote: BloodySpghetti wrote: L0CKED334 wrote: BloodySpghetti wrote: Well, this was less entertaining than the previous one, but sure, the story continues. I guess, nice job to you. That's why I brought it to the workshop first. I am trying to work out the kinks of my general idea for the story. Kind-of disheartening to know it didn't quite make the mark. I am still working on it though. I think it has to do with the whole "I didnt get love from father, I hate father, oh no father was good father was care I love father" plotline. It's been done a lot. I'm only using that as a device to connect the two together. It won't be the theme of the series. I understand what you mean though. Yeah, that was my main point, I feel like this is mostly a glue piece in the series.