Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27064985-20181021134649

Do you know the story of the window?

I'll tell you.

It all started when i was watching TV. It was midnight when this happened and i wasn't tired. It cut to commercial unexpectedly. "Ugh, i'll never know what happened to my-" I was interrupted by the sound of a man talking.

"Are your windows unsafe?" He asked. 'Is your home easily robbed? Well, i got the product for you!" A man in what looks like a business suit with a red tie came on screen. "Hi, i'm Wade Welsh, and i'm here to tell you about this exciting new product!" Exclaimed Wade, excitingly."The Window can keep you and your family safe! It even has a button so it can lock your doors!" He pushed the button and my door instantly locked. "What the hell?" I wondered as i ran to the door, trying to get out of my house. "You can never be safe outside. There are people that are trying to get you, alice." He said in a menacing tone. "How do you know my name??" I asked, nervous and scared.

"I have been watching you with other people. They seem bad." He said while he reaches out of the tv. He stabs me, and i bump into a wall. "Why are you doing this?" I asked, scared for my life.

"Because... I am trying to keep you safe."

What do you guys think? 