Talk:Ability/@comment-17758905-20140402055940

This pasta deserves at least a nine from me.

The story seems to be hilarious at first glance, but you have to reread it again, or remember past details to understand what the scary part is.

Heck, it's something so easily missable, I missed it the first time I reread this story. Then the other commentors revealed the twist for me.

With very little written, you have made a much better story than some who write twenty paragraph stories with each paragraph longer than five sentences.