Talk:Kagome Kagome/@comment-24265961-20140426180341

To be honest, This isn't one of my favorite Pastas. I enjoyed the Concept; It was promising, I also liked how neatly is was written and that it was well-explained, Though some of the facts are scattered about (By that, I mean untrue; Incorrect) which made some of the story seemed scrambled. Some parts seemed chessy such as when they said (Zagolnic, Almost) and the scary mood the story had setted was ruined when it said "By this time, if you haven't soiled your pants, You really should, to save you the trouble later." The Highest I can give is 5.5/10