User blog comment:Underscorre/Jeff the Killer Rewrite Contest!/@comment-27095900-20151019164923

Can I make Jeff his middle name? I had this idea that in addition to "The Killer",  he becomes Jeff at the end of the story (as if it were a split personality in a way). I was also changing Liu so that he's the older (by 7 years) brother. Don't worry, Jeff's still a kid; I just felt like it'd be more dramatic if Liu was the older "Detective Reid" investigating his brother's murders.