Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20160902203638/@comment-26425680-20160907191336

Hey I gave this a quick read-through and I think it's great, especially the intro, which does a great job setting the tone. Like Jake said there's a couple of parts where it's a little slow, mostly with the descriptions of the mining company (navigating the offices). I don't have enough time right now to nitpick for errors, but A) typewriter is one word, and B) so is coattails.