Talk:The Harbinger Experiment/@comment-25987771-20150113231846

This was built up as a hidden gem in the Creepypasta world, so I was pretty antsy to sink my teeth into this one. Let me say the good things first. A very good, claustrophobic setting a la "The Thing," professional diction, and an absence of cliches.

However, I had a few issues.

For one thing, Subject Three had an appearance that reminded me a little too much of beings like The Rake (unless it was SUPPOSED to be The Rake.) And the fact that his/its presence was announced by Tiny Tim seemed a little excessive. Is it the monster's theme song?

I still liked this one, though, but it needed a little bit more oomph to truly knock me out of my chair.