Talk:Looking for an Exit/@comment-25947144-20170212145434

Hmm, this was pretty good. A decent storyline with a consistent pace, perhaps a bit hasty at the end, with a well-done first person perspective.

There are a few things that I didn't like much. Firstly, it feels way too exposition-y for my tastes. Perhaps it could be intentional, but still feels over the top. The second thing is that only the end really seems comedy (good one nonetheless) and I'm not sure if it's that dark.

I'll give this a 75/100.