Talk:Of Aliens and Pricks/@comment-26399604-20160824141518

I have to admit this was an...interesting take on the use of alien "baby gravy" lol - it was an enjoyable read nonetheless. It doesn't seem too far-fetched either when given thought. Aliens might have curative properties in their bodies. Who's to say?

I also liked the comedic elements utilized at certain moments like during the initial examination of the alien (I'll admit I wasn't expecting it though and had to re-read XD). You really can't blame the main character to act as he did. It's clear anyone would have done the same.

In regards to the outcome of said "cure", it makes me wonder if the same would occur in males as well. It doesn't seem too far from belief in opinion.

Overall, I enjoyed the story!

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I will note that following sounded awkwardly phrased to me:

Original:

+I had expected the always awkward silence to accompany my words, however, something akin to a purr came from the captive.

Revised:

+I had expected the [usual] awkward silence to accompany my words, however, something akin to a purr came from the captive.