Talk:Wallflower/@comment-28555055-20170930004619

I'm sorry, but this story is terrible. The protagonist, the Wallflower is a stereotypical quiet girl who's written in a way to already strike up sympathy before her murder, and the boy is terrible written. I'm sure a nercophiliac rapist would not be considered "cool" no matter how he acted, especially considering the fact he was already imprisoned once. Does anyone do fucking research? And the rape scene, that's just tasteless. He came on her face when she died? What's the point of that? Just to show how gross he was? Rape isn't used as a plot point, it's used as a jumpscare. It doesn't change the outcome, because he could've just murdered her and nothing would change. Rape is there just for sympathy. I don't comment a whole lot, but someone needs to admit, 10/10s is bullshit