Talk:Sunset Dawn/@comment-28428152-20180320232752/@comment-29192496-20180321011329

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. The grammar is a mix of my own notions on writing and my near one year absence from it. No excuse but it's a touch rough cause of it. The tenses is again my own notions on writing but I see the complaint and I get that one a lot. Um, again thanks. The overarching style is a fletching idea born from H.P Lovecraft. His horror comes from a mix of raw talent and his personal fears, something I can't copy. As such I've tried the same, to liquidate my sense of fear into a abstract concept, to in some ways, make my audience feel uncomfortable. I am, again, new to this so I apologize for how downright loose it is but rest assured I intend to iron out my thesis. If you do not find my work too painful I hope you'll see the day when I get this sorted. Again thanks for the comment and have a great day...or night