User blog comment:PopziTawna/Some advice here - What should I do?/@comment-4715955-20160127013402

"Since I absolutely have NO self-confidence at all in my work..."

You're probably doing all right, then.

I wouldn't post in Trollpasta unless you made something deliberately terrible. Best thing to do here would be post it in the Writer's Workshop and hope somebody reads it and posts some useful feedback. Or join an online peer review group and trade critiques with other new and somewhat timid authors.