Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24976741-20140524195924/@comment-24976741-20140524211330

Laughing Jake wrote:

Its pretty good, the end is a little confusing. Was she just being paranoid and it was actually her cats eyes? Or was it one of the creatures in the form of her cat, or possibly that had taken over her cat? I guess it could be left up to interpretation, I personally think it would be a great story if the cat was really a creature, but I dont know how you would incorporate that into the story. Over all I feel it was well written, and has potential.

To elaborate more on this bacically the insomnia was a huge part of the story. When I had put in the part of it being 3 weeks ago that was a random number, but when coming up with this I had look up insomnia that actually is a sleeping disorder that usually last for 3 weeks so I put 2 and 2 together Ex:the bags under her eyes. As for the cat it was for her paranoia after lossing so much sleep mixed with the fact that the darkness could make anything cute, sweet, or innocent looking vicious or terrifying.