Talk:Blasphemous Comfort

Apart from the grammar and punctuation issues, the main problem with this story was that the first part seemed completely irrelevant to the rest of the story (the dreams didn't seem to be connected to the murders at all). There also seemed to be some inconsistancies due to an early line suggesting the narrator was the only survivour despite there only being 2 deaths in the story. Also, the reliance on gore didn't help in regards to the overall scariness due to so many stories relying on it. Tempest-Fennac