Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26287994-20150914153430

Day one:    I see this thing watching me across the street this thing is watching me. I don’t fell safe I don’t like it. I tried to think to myself, is it a friend or maybe some idiot I pissed off? I can’t remember anything I have constant amnesia. He just stands there all I see is shorts and a big head. I typing this on my mac laptop and he doesn’t see me typing it. I’m watching him from the window curtains. He doesn’t look right, he looks sick. Every day I will update this information keeping a log on any changes.

Day two:      I’m searching the web about this thing that has been watching me for the last two days and as he has gotten closer to the house. His appearance seems bald and gray. There is a website about this hand written diary from a scientist, this is what he wrote,

Page 316:    We hired this cool test guy to test out are new S.S.S.H.H.H. chemical. His name is Billy Gatsoma.

Strong

Speedy

Stretchable

Healing

Human

Hero

                   He is great! Now we will have Billy sign a contract and we will pay him $10,000 dollars to try the chemical with a clear understanding of his risk of death.

Page 317:    Ok so now Billy just signed the contract and he’s going to do the test in 12 days. So in that time we will prepare for the test and take notes observe has new powers. He might have to be placed in area 51, what ever happens will not be my problem.

Page 318:    We finished are preparation for the test, it has worked fine on monkeys, plants, bugs and other life forms besides humans. We spent $50,000 dollars on this experiment with the hope that it will work well.

Page 319:      ok we are waiting for him to come into the lab so we can start the experiment.

2:15 pm- He seems to be fine, now we can continue with the experiment.

2:30 pm- He appears to be bored. We have been watching him for the past 15 minutes and still nothing has taken place.

2:46- pm The strangest thing has happened, his skin has turned light grey, we asked each other “is that suppose to happen?”

<p class="MsoNormal">2:54 pm- Time has passed and his skin is now gray. We can not help him because it will interfere with the test.

<p class="MsoNormal">3:00 pm- His legs have turned black; this is looking very bad.

<p class="MsoNormal">3:11 pm- Oh shit! His legs fell off and his cheeks are black, this seems to be getting worse by the minute.

<p class="MsoNormal">3:23 pm- He is screeching and his cheeks appear to be turning into black muck oh my God they fell off! We see his teeth appear to be gray and his tongue along with his insides looking gray, it is definitely a strange reaction.

<p class="MsoNormal">3:35 pm-His eyes were a radius of 2 centimeters and now appear to be a radius of 2 inches.

<p class="MsoNormal">3:43- His arms appear to have grown to a length of 3 ½ feet long.

<p class="MsoNormal">3:52 pm- His arms appear to now grown up to 5 ½ feet long

<p class="MsoNormal">4:00 pm- He appears to have 56 sharp teeth and those extra teeth appear to be replacing his missing cheeks.

<p class="MsoNormal">4:10 pm- He appears not be changing anymore but is rather rotting

<p class="MsoNormal">4:30- He appears to still be fine now. In an hour we will perform an emergency surgery on him.

<p class="MsoNormal">5:00 pm- We are starting the surgery on him with the hopes of giving him wooden legs connected by electric wires to help him move around.

<p class="MsoNormal">5:45 pm- We are placing him horse shoes on his feet to help him walk better. We plan to dress him with short pants to hide the wires exposed on his thighs.

<p class="MsoNormal">6:00 pm- We are done we can’t do any more changes to his body at this time without the use of plastic surgery. When he wakes up he will have to decide what he wants to do.

<p class="MsoNormal">7:00 pm- As he came in to settle on our agreed payment, he attacked my partner killing him and I escaped with a fractured rib. My partner suffered all his ribs broken by the experiment’s horse shoes. As my partner screamed in agony the experiment used his horse shoes to crush my partner’s skull and squished his brain killing my partner instantly.

<p class="MsoNormal">Page 320:     I saw on the news the next morning he had burned down the lab with my partner’s dead corpse. My partner’s name is Dill Gaspat. He escaped without the money meaning he was out there. Now I have no job and a broken rib. I scared as shit because his death was brutal and we are dealing with a human that is sick. If I took that S.S.S.H.H.H. chemical I might die or become him. Imagine my brain being exposed my skin blue and my throat huge. That’s an instant knock out with my throat. So if I stay in town he will kill me, but if I leave he will kill everyone else. I need surgery out of town and to come back to town.

<p class="MsoNormal">Page 346:    I finished my surgery I have a metal rib and I must go back to town. They almost sent me to the crazy house but then realized I was a scientist and let me go. I didn’t find a cure and don’t think there will be one at all.

<p class="MsoNormal">Page 354:    I’m back in town but notice I’m being watched by someone I think its Billy but I think I’ll call him Bewithering. I want to call him that because he is gray, rotting, sick, crazy, is a mutant and is trying to kill me. So I walk to the roof of my apartment with a gun to scare him and if he try’s to kill me I take fake shots then real ones. I will stop here and write what happens on page 356.

<p class="MsoNormal">Page 356:              doctors notes: are patient suffered a fall from a three story apartment and survived it he had been shot in the ribs with a five seven and then fell off onto a retired cop named James Gredo. We performed a surgery on him and when he woke up he kept saying B. . . E. . . W. . .   I. . . T.. .H. . . E. . . R. . .I. . . N. . . G and kept repeating it in that order. So we wiped his memory for the passed 24 then the week then the month. Once we did that he was back to normal and informed him his memory was wiped and he keep repeating letters spelling Bewithering. So he went home and we gave him this book.

<p class="MsoNormal">                   The conclusion of the information diary was very informative. I thought this was a very productive way to keep detailed information on the experiment, using drawings to describe every short input that was unable to be copied and pasted.

<p class="MsoNormal">Day three:    He broke in the house and was looking for me. All I hear is horse shoes clicking around the house. He’s stupid because I close the door (it has no lock and opens when not near) he walks away but comes back. He walked out the house and saw me at the window clearly so he returned back into the house. At some point he dropped a note next to the door. I grabbed it quickly after he left the house and it says,

<p class="MsoNormal">Doctors notes:     Are patient suffered an exposer to chemical know as the S.S.S.H.H.H. chemical. The chemicals have 10 contents in it chemical X, steroids, blood from a rhino, blood of an unidentified snake and 6 unidentified chemicals. The scientist in charge of the experiment states “there was only 8 chemicals but someone put in steroids and that unidentified factor. I think its Jack Mernoty, he put in 2 extra factors after we fired him because he didn’t get a raise and raged destroying $2,500 worth on the lab. We got money from the U.S.A government with a contract that says if the experiment goes well they will take it and use it for the solders in the U.S.A.” Are patience also suffered I big growth in arms, eyes, his head and teeth a removal of legs, cheeks and hair. Are patients skin turned gray and so as his insides. Are patient has rotting flesh and his voice box is weakened so he screeches when he speaks. we performed a surgery giving him wooden legs and shorts with wires underneath. We also we preserved the body so he can slow the rotting. His legs have horse shoes so he can walk better. He should be fine in an hour.

<p class="MsoNormal">Day four:    He was breaking threw the door so I blocked it with a dresser. I’m searching in my room for a knife or something and found a diary in the dresser with my name on it says diary of Darwin Finnson DO NOT TOUCH that’s my name and wrote that book, but I don’t remember shit about that. If that is true he wants revenge for the test. so I tried to open the window but its locked and the key is in the kitchen draw. He broke threw the door using his head while screaming, then stormed his way into the room. I dropped the book then grabbed my lamp and broke the window and jumped out. He was angry and tried to grab me before I jumped out. All I saw was him screaming a smacking his fat belly. All I thought when running was I have no home, he’s coming back for me and he has all of my data. <ac_metadata title="BEWITHERING (unreviewed) (FIXED)"> </ac_metadata>