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Nice that we can agree on that. Of course, if your suspicions turn out to be right, I'll be hunting his derier like a pack of hungry hell-hounds.

I'm happy for that and I wish everything turns out great for you. I was actually planning to do a Christmas blog very soon, more on the theme of Christmas and New Year themselves. Cheers!

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 15:41, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Network Wetwork
That would be a horrible way to go. One Piece, of all things, did a great job on highlighting the horrors of starvation. What twist did you have spoiled? I'm suspicious that I know exactly which one. I think I'm going to make a Twitter and start trying to Network in an attempt to spread my stories. I've finally made a Quotev to go with that Wattpad I made way back: I have mostly everything on there :D  Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  21:18, December 21, 2016 (UTC)


 * Oh dear, that's so crappy. I hope that is her last loss and that she recovers well and speedily. I would be mad too, especially at the bad timing of it D:< Your mom strikes me as very strong willed, so I am quite confident that she'll make work around it just fine. Still, it's really sucky.


 * Of all the spoilers to have, that is the least important/impactful one. Straizo was who I wanted you to keep an eye out for in Dio's castle. Most people that see that are like, "Wait, who was Straizo?" I think that's a good way to continue things tho. I really like the idea of having someone present and very minor earlier in the story becoming a threat later on. It's more meaningful than some random from nowhere that we've never encountered before. It depends on the story of course, but it's something really underused. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  07:17, December 23, 2016 (UTC)


 * I just looked up the Superman story on Wikipedia and read the plot description because I love Alan Moore's writing so much: . You were slightly off on the title. I'm not wrapped up in that or anything, but I just thought I'd tell you in case you wanted to look it up in the future. I like everything I read about it, especially Bizarro offing himself at the start, lol (I was reading that and was like, "Wow, Bizarro really is a surprising choice."). At first, I thought Superman depowering himself was stupid because his hands were pretty tied on killing, but I really like him settling in as a human and the ending is just perfect. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  04:23, December 24, 2016 (UTC)


 * That is great news! She got to enjoy Christmas at home :D Merry late Christmas to you too! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  06:24, December 26, 2016 (UTC)


 * That's a good way to look at it :) I'd watch that... Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  06:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)


 * I only liked the original and GX, but hey, they are making a film to end the original series: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7tmC0KE-ASs I'm super excited for it (I read the plot summary because I didn't know we'd get it dubbed and I can't stand watching something with different voice actors that I've watched before. The plot is actually really good and has to do with letting things go). Oh, my dad is doing fine and is back to work! Thank you for asking :D Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  01:21, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Yep, the school-based one was GX. In defense of the premise, the school was set up by Seto Kaiba (I can't remember if it is outright stated, but Slifer Red being the lowest rank (Yugi's God Card) and Obelisk being the highest (Kaiba's God Card) is pretty good hint of that. But when you're that rich, you can do whatever you want even if it doesn't make sense XD If I remember right, GX ended with the protagonist battling Yugi and losing, so it's set in the same reality/universe. Yeah, I skipped the ones after that. Playing card games on moving motorcycles is dumb, haha. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  08:12, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

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I'm so sorry to hear about that!! I hope she feels better soon! How have you been? Luigifan100 22:15, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

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Oh yeah! Planet Dolan definetly does. (https://www.reddit.com/r/PlanetDolan/) I've submitted stories there more than a dozen times. A lot of them don't get that much attention but I still submit them.

So I'm not sure if you want to see one of those writing prompts I created but I'll send one anyway. Here's the link to the dialogue prompt: (http://pastebin.com/G6r7Z40h)

Also, the latest edition of A Trip to Cape Cod is here: (http://pastebin.com/D0VzmbB2)

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  00:00, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Planet Dolan's Lonely Hearts Club" Message
Okay cool! I'm trying to figure out how's to make the first three or four chapters of the Haunting Hour pasta less formulaic. If I'm going to get this pasta on the wiki, I really gotta up my game. Though, if the plot of this story doesn't make it wiki worthy, I have another idea for a lost episode pasta.

So I submitted a story to their thread about embarrassing restaurant stories. Link to thread is here: (https://tw.reddit.com/r/PlanetDolan/comments/5i879s/what_is_the_most_embarrassing_thing_thats/?utm_content=title&utm_medium=user&utm_source=reddit)

Here's my post on the thread: (https://tw.reddit.com/r/PlanetDolan/comments/5i879s/what_is_the_most_embarrassing_thing_thats/dbj8i1c/?)

Sorry to hear about your mom. Hopefully she recovers. If it makes you feel any better, my uncle lost a couple of his fingers during a construction job awhile back and he lived though he's currently in rehab recovering from another stroke. He seems to be getting better though.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  04:40, December 23, 2016 (UTC)

Dampering
That's terrible to hear, especially around the holidays. I'm so sorry for that, you and your family have my well-wishes. Also, unlike Jay, who has a rather...interesting reputation, this might actually improve mine. I might look like I have split personality.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 08:44, December 23, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, exactly like the flight attendants (though I think I wouldn't look quite as good in a skirt). Also, I suppose a comment on that surprisingly popular blog would create more memorable quotes for my profile.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 15:29, December 23, 2016 (UTC)

Oh, but that is wonderful! It's like an almost-Christmas miracle. Welp, it's like they say: "it's the most wonderful time of the year". At least after the hangover passes, that is.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 11:50, December 25, 2016 (UTC)

Tobit vs Buzz
That is cool that the story has spread to where it's getting casual jokes on unrelated threads. I am actually partnering with the woman who does all the Tobit narrations as she wants to make some Tobit themed t-shirts. So who knows, Tobit fashion could be on the way!

As for your mother, I am sorry to hear that there was a step back, but at the very least you can take comfort in the fact that she is getting treated and is on the road to recovery. As always, I'll keep you, her and your family in my prayers.

Best wishes and hope you guys have a great Christmas!

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 17:50, December 23, 2016 (UTC)

Hello Raidra,

Thank you for the kind checkup message on me, which you might have forgotten because it has been about half a week since it was posted until it came to my attention today. I was pretty surprised since I was on hiatus for a long time due to school trying to kill me, but I believe that I can start involving myself here again. Again, thank you for the message, and I am fine.

User:MarioFan5050 (talk · edits) 23:44, December 24, 2016 (UTC)MarioFan5050

:D
You are most welcome!!! I hope you and your family have a wonderful Christmas!!! I also hope your mother gets some well deserved rest! Luigifan100 17:12, December 25, 2016 (UTC)

RE: Yule Blog
Hello, how are you?

Thanks for reminding me of that time where I called you dude about a dozen times and made obscure jokes, it's actually a lot of fun when I think about it (maybe not for you, you must have been really confused, sorry about that!) and in fact I didn't forget your mention of Woops! though I must say that with a more detailed article it becomes much clearer to understand.

Though, going back on the other blog post made me see your last comment which I did not notice, in fact, so, sorry about that again, but hey, better late than never; I really like the devotion and effort you put into these weapons, it's nice to see you've done some very extensive research before really trying anything, I can see a lot of pretty imaginative and fanciful plans, which is very cool and frankly quite impressive, so good job on that.

Thanks again for the notification and have a good day, Regards, FrenchTouch (talk)


 * Hi again, I'm doing fine indeed and I can't say I'm having a sad time so it's all good, thanks a lot, I appreciate you asking; Glad you kept playful, if not I can only imagine how bad it would have been (!,) but I'll make sure that next time we'll have an amusing and intelligently-phrased discussion, I swear I'll try, ha ha, but I can agree that it's better to be confused once in a while than have a constant influx of arguments, that's totally something I can dig, I guess that's apart of human nature?


 * I happened to look over your userpage while I was looking at the other blogs and I did stumble upon the one you just mentioned, so, again, it's very imaginative and there are lots of information fit within these ideas, which I really like, but I feel like you may have overlooked some practical points, but, if it's fantasy, it's not meant to be realistic anyway, so that's pretty nice.

FrenchTouch (talk)
 * On another note, I know it's none of my business but I'd like to say I'm glad for your mother to be back from the hospital for Christmas, or Christmas' Eve's dinner if my knowledge of timezones isn't so bad; that said, have a good one, and I'll see ya when I'll see ya ;)


 * Aye, some folk should definitely follow an example of how to behave here&mdash;not sure they'd understand but it would be worth it&mdash;anyway, I don't mind giving you advice concerning these weapons, but I don't really know how much you want to push the practical and realistic side of things into your work, so I'd like to know more about that first before saying something you're not even going to need :p

FrenchTouch (talk)
 * Fare ye well,

Hello, Well what you know may not be a lot, but at least it's true, so that's what matters most, aye&mdash;this may seem stupid but actually, yeah, shows like Mythbusters or just blacksmiths' testing videos on YouTube can be pretty helpful in understanding how this all works, but I conceive that would be rather zealous :p FrenchTouch (talk)


 * Oh, that's pretty cool, this helps you get some references and a little bit of expertise, which is nice. This article is rather funny indeed, but to be honest I wish there would be no reason for it to exist, unfortunately the ease that inexperienced people have to get themselves such weapons is quite present, but I'm glad to see someone actually interested in delving into information concerning that subject (which is rare enough to be commended!)


 * FrenchTouch (talk)


 * Nice skit, I'm sure there's been more than one situation similar to that, it must be a lot of fun working on customer service there&mdash;though I had no idea an ax-gun mix really existed, thanks for teaching me, that seems rather awesome, to be honest! Concerning your arsenals, I think you've done a pretty good job at that, not often do I see such dedication to try to write something one doesn't know well good.
 * You're welcome, thank you and have a good afternoon yourself, FrenchTouch (talk)

Well That's No Good
I really hate to hear that about your mother. I can't believe she had to go through that again. Hopefully this is the last time. Sorry for not responding sooner, but I've been dealing with some things and haven't been on at all. I really hope you had a great Christmas and hope your mother recovers very quickly. Merry Christmas!

Jay Ten (talk) 23:19, December 25, 2016 (UTC)

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So I finally finished Chapter 14 and started Chapter 15 of the Cape Cod pasta. Here's the pastebin link to them: (http://pastebin.com/nMp8CzVH)

Merry Christmas to you by the way! I'm glad that your mom is out of the hospital. As for me, I had a great Christmas! I finally got to play more of Pokemon Sun. Here's my team as of today:


 * Pete (Alolan Diglett)

Level: 13

Type: Ground/Steel

Moves: (Metal Claw, Growl, Astonish, Mud-Slap)

Ability: Sand Veil

Gender: Male


 * Jwittz (Magnemite)

Level: 16

Type: Electric/Steel

Moves: (Light Screen, Supersonic, Thunder Shock, Magnet Bomb)

Ability: Magnet Pull

Gender: N/A


 * Lexi (Growlithe)

Level: 16

Type: Fire

Moves: (Roar, Ember, Leer, Odor Sleuth)

Ability: Intimidate

Gender: Female


 * Cartman (Event Munchlax)

Level: 14

Type: Normal

Moves: (Tackle, Metronome, Amnesia, Happy Hour)

Ability: Thick Fat

Gender: Male


 * Darren (Trumbeak)

Level: 16

Type: Normal/Flying

Moves: (Pluck, Work Up, Echoed Voice, Brick Break)

Ability: Keen Eye

Gender: Male


 * Alex (Popplio)

Level: 16

Type: Water

Moves: (Pound, Aqua Jet, Work Up, Disarming Voice)

Ability: Torrent

Gender: Male

I also completed the first Alolan trial. Yay! As for the people at the Japanese restaurant, they might've thought I was joking and trying to reenact that scene in Elf where Buddy puts sprays that Passionfruit spray in his mouth and strongly dislikes it. I don't know honestly.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   02:12, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

is da holidayz
MEEEERRRRYYY CHRISTMAS YEEEAAAAAH

I literally just hopped on to look over my one and only pasta for ideas for a new one that I'm writing right now. I super impressed myself by actually catching your message so quickly. So yeah! I guess it's not Christmas anymore now though :(

But hey! Wassupppp

Indefinitesilence (talk) 05:10, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Great news to hear
Glad things are going well. Keep me updated!

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 02:21, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

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Holy crap! I didn't notice that! Is the title issue you're talking about in chapter three or four? If I can locate the issue, I can certainly fix it. I thought I got rid of all traces of the part in which I explained what the title meant.

As for this part: (I don't know why I didn't think of this earlier, but I don't understand why the disc was described as having some episodes from all four seasons. I thought with DVD collections the idea was to have all the season one episodes together, all the season two ones together, etc. Since there are four seasons in the collection, and I assume four discs, I think it would make more sense if you said the one disc had season four episodes along with the "lost episode".) I think the idea behind it was to imply that this was some sort of bootleg dvd box set though I could take your suggestion and split the one dvd into four (i.e disc one has the season one episodes, disc two has season two episodes, etc). I've seen some bootleg DVDs at my local thrift store sometimes and it's really easy to tell if they're a bootleg. Here are a few images of some of the bootlegs I saw at the thrift store:

1. http://imgur.com/a/fzkTd 2. http://imgur.com/a/0x1OS 3. http://imgur.com/a/eMJVP

Wikihow has this great step by step guide on how to spot a bootleg/fake DVD that I think you should check out. (http://www.wikihow.com/Spot-Fake-DVDs) For bootlegged DVDs that are part of a "complete series" or "complete season" collection, I've heard of anime series having bootlegged collections but I'm not sure about American shows. Maybe bootlegged box sets of American shows are more common in other countries like China or Japan. Speaking of bootlegs, here's something that made me laugh way harder than I should've:

(http://2.media.dorkly.cvcdn.com/25/38/e257c57164032266ef70aad38f749f9f.jpg)

So in the Monster From my Past story, this is the latest part:

(“What's wrong, Marek?” the teacher cooed. He told the teacher that I said I saw a monster on television. The teacher then turned her head towards me.

"Karina," the teacher said calmly, "I know you love to tell stories and all but now's not the time to do that. Understood?"

“But that wasn't a stor---” Before I could finish what I was saying, she cut me off and said…)

I'm not sure what the teacher will say to Karina when she cuts her off. I don't want to come off as too malicious though. Hmm...

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   04:19, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

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Holy crap! How did I let a line like that slip by me? Well now that I know which line needs to be fixed, I can go in and remove that little flub. As for the "Seems like a bootleg" line, I want to work something like that in there. However, I want to make it more subtle but still get across the same idea.

Here's the latest part of the Monster From My Past story:

("Karina," the teacher said calmly, "I know you love to tell stories and all but now's not the time to do that. Understood?"

“But that wasn't a stor---” Before I could finish what I was saying, she cut me off and said…)

I'm trying to think up a response for the teacher that's stern but not maliciously so.

I also found this hilarious bootleg.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   05:26, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

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My theory for why the cover looks the way it does is because it's a mislabled DVD that's actually supposed to be titled "Best of Bryan Cranston" much like how there was an SNL DVD featuring the best of Christopher Walken except it isn't tied to just one show.

For the Monster From My Past story, I think I came up with something for the exchange between the teacher and Karina. Here:

(“But that wasn't a stor---” Before I could finish what I was saying, she cut me off and sternly said, “Understood?”

“Yes ma’am.” I sighed.)

I'm not sure if this may come off as malicious but I think it's good for now until I can think up something better.

Dragon Ball Z also had its fair share of edits as well. In fact, Phelous made a whole video about it.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   05:28, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

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God damnit! How do spelling errors keep slipping by me like this? Ah well, I can always go back and fix them I suppose. Hopefully, I'll be more wary of errors when going through my stories.

So Dupin reviewed my I Don't Like What I See story again and while he said it was better, it still doesn't meet the quailty standards of the wiki. Here's what he means by that: "The story lacked in execution, so in the end it fell flat. The plot you went with is very interesting, but it is challenging to pull off. So by that I meant the story wasn't that good and would get deleted if posted on the main site." I think I'm going to leave this story alone for a while until I can find a way to improve its execution. I'm a little upset that the story still doesn't meet the wiki's quality standards but I'm not going to turn into a Gyarados and rage about it. You know what I am going to do? Keep writing and keep improving. Though, I'm really nervous about my Haunting Hour pasta now because it's a Lost Episode pasta and I'm afraid it's going to come off as too formulaic, even if it's going for a more psychological approach.

(It's not bad, but it seems a little abrupt. Maybe after the narrator replies, "Yes, ma'am," you could have the teacher offer to talk about it after class if she wants. Keep in mind my parents were both teachers, so I'm a little biased.) Nah, I don't think it's biased. In fact, I think it'll offer me great insight into how to write teacher and maybe even parent characters. I think I might've come up with something along the lines of what you suggested. Here's what I got:

(“But that wasn't a stor---” Before I could finish what I was saying, she cut me off and sternly said, “Understood?”

“Yes ma’am.” I sighed.

“Good. If you want, you can tell me more about it after class.” the teacher replied.)

I don't know if that fixes the issue but it's at least something, right?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   04:49, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

The legendary Alcohocean
Thank you! Nice to see that you had a good time. I spend my day stuffing myself with food and writing. The good stuff. The only bad part was that I had to carry conversations with a conspiracy theorist. Things like Hitler living to the age of 80 and being a pawn to make profit for America (!?!) and evolution working differently for white and black people. It did carry out as difficult as it sounds. Also, today I finally got another episode of Hellsing Ultimate Abridged (if you know what it is you'll know it's one of the most hillarious things on the internet, but takes super long to get made). Hope 2017 brings better and better things.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 00:41, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Great that you want to check it out. Before that though, a few notes: firstly, as the term Abridged implies, it is some sort of parody (though it still follows the same general plot, albeit much more fun; Teamfourstar [the creators] are great at this) so I might suggest to watch the original version, although it's understandable if not (10 episodes, 1 hour each). Secondly, either thing you want to watch I must say it's a very bloody (literally) anime. It actually inspires my humor on this wiki in many ways.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 01:22, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

HAPPY NEW YEAR
Hello, I've still got an hour more until new year's! I wish you all the best in 2017, with tons of good luck for you and your mother! :o) Luigifan100 04:06, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

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I've been doing some research on Lost Episode pastas (by that I mean I've been playing rounds of Lost Episode cliche bingo with as many Lost Episode stories as I could) and started playing a round of Lost Episode cliche bingo with my own Lost Episode pasta. While reading, I only checked off two spaces (not counting the free space box). One was for profainity (which was mostly from the main protagonist and even then it was quite light) and the death box (the samurai girl is implied to have been killed by the streak of light). I did fix those errors you pointed out but there are more changes I want to make for now. I'll list the changes I want to make chapter by chapter.

Chapter 1 :

Change 1: (After the trailer played, I decided to give the show a chance and check out what it had to offer.) After the words, "Check out what it had to offer" I may add "once it came out" to clear up any possible confusion that the original line may stir up.

Change 2: (I had seen quite a few episodes of this show and I have to say, for a kid's horror anthology series, it wasn't that bad.) I might change this line into (Long after the trailer had first aired, I had seen quite a few episodes of this show and to be honest, for a kid's horror anthology series, it wasn't that bad.) Like with the first change, I want to clear up any confusion that might arise and eliminate a tense swap.

Chapter 2 :

Change 1: (The house was located on a dead end street and there was a lake near it although I wasn't allowed to swim in it because there was too much algae or something as I couldn't quite remember the exact reason.) I don't like the way this line is worded.

Like, I think the line is supposed to convey that the protagonist isn't sure what the problem with the lake was. However, the wording is rather clunky. I feel like this (The house was located on a dead end street and there was a lake near it although I wasn't allowed to swim in it because, according to Erika, there was apparently an unhealthy amount of algae in it.) Not only conveys that idea but does a much better job of doing so. For the following line (All I knew was that the lake looked like it had a bunch of tall recycling bins with their tops floating on the surface. It was rather disappointing that I couldn't go in the lake since I grew up near the sea and loved dunking my body in the calm and refreshing waters.) I may combine it with the previous line to make something that looks like this: (The house was located on a dead end street and there was a lake near it. However, I wasn't allowed to swim in it because, according to Erika, there was apparently an unhealthy amount of algae in it, which might've explained why there were recycling bin tops floating on the surface of the lake.)

Change 2: (He also covered up the entire couch with as many pillows as he could find to form what he would've called a "marshmallow fortress".) I thought this would be a good way to give the brother character some depth but now that I think about it, there's gotta be a better way to do so because this line just comes off as a bit too silly.

Change 3: (A little while later, Erika came home and as soon as she went into the kitchen to put away some groceries, I asked her about the DVD I had found. Although... she seemed rather stressed out as she was putting away the groceries. The closest thing I got to a response was "Yeah OK, whatever honey!" Even with that said, she didn't really seem to be paying attention to me when she said it. This was rather odd because Erika was rarely ever stressed out. Don't get me wrong, I was unbelievably impatient on the inside and I did ask her about the DVD with a bit of aggression in my vocal tone. Nevertheless, it seemed like she may have been avoiding the question altogether. Though, maybe it could've been something else that made her stressed out. Was it a long line at the checkout? Did she have a bad day at work? Or was it a hectic drive home? I honestly had no clue. All I knew was that I felt really fraught around her at that moment.)

First off, Erika, for the most part, is a bit of an airhead but an otherwise nice person. This bit of frustration comes out of nowhere and is never brought up again so it feels kind of pointless. What I can do is rework this part into something like this: (A little while later, Erika came home and as soon as she went into the kitchen to put away some groceries, I asked her about the DVD I had found. However, she didn't really bat an eye and just continued to put away her groceries. I asked her again and she still didn't respond. When I asked her about the DVD for the third time, she finally stopped what she was doing and looked at me.  

'"I'm sorry. Did you say something?" Erika asked. '

'"Uh nevermind. I'll talk to you about it when you're not busy." I said."')

Those are all the changes I'm think about for now. I'll think about them for a bit to see if I really want to implement them or not.

Before I forget, HAPPY NEW YEAR! (Noise maker noises ensue)

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   05:43, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Here We Go Again
Happy New Year! That's really too bad about your mom's other toe. Sorry for the late reply but I've been busy with various early spring chores and New Year preparations as well my latest graphic story. I'm planning on submitting a blog about it with some sample pictures.

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 23:24, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

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RE: Here We Go Again2

It's already up.

Two New Year Questions For Creepypasta

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 00:39, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

Super
There's already 70 episodes?! I haven't watched any of Super yet, because I am waiting for them to dub it. I can't stand Goku's voice in the Japanese version. I'm glad they gave Yamcha some spotlight. He's actually really strong all things considered, one of the strongest humans! Krillin being the strongest, and Tien possibly being the second strongest. Hehe, heck if I know either. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  01:01, January 4, 2017 (UTC)


 * It's an elderly lady that voices Goku. She's been doing it for the last 30 years XD In his defense, I'd stop caring if I were him too. All the threats they deal with are extra-terrestrial at this point, and Krillin, who is better than him, can't even do anything to contribute. It beats showing up, dying and needing to rely on being wished back to life each time XD Yeah, he looks like he was made to be a baseball player. Heck, he'd probably earn more doing that than as a hero! Yay, congratulations! Don't you dare D:< If you do, burn them with fire or eat them because they are plant based.  Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  08:57, January 4, 2017 (UTC)


 * Hehe, poor Shenron being awoken for that constantly. Yamcha is usually there for emotional support now days, but him risking his life to get Goku to safety does speak a lot about his character. It's not that he's lazy or selfish, he just knows that things have escalated to the point where he can't doing anything in a fight, but he'll still jump in and contribute when he can.


 * Yay, you did it! :D Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  23:58, January 6, 2017 (UTC)


 * I think that there are a lot of people who feel it's completely okay to claim something without backing it up and that really frustrates me.


 * That's a story that you should definitely explore :D I can't think of a single instance of that theme being explored and it is something that would be likely to happen in such a world.


 * Oh, you got hit by a bus on day 364 last time? That's pretty specific, so I think it must be so ;) Good thing I called and had all the bus routes shutdown from day 363 onward for you this time! The companies understood how rare the badge you were trying to earn is and responded by saying, "We're no strangers to doing something 365 days a year. We are glad to finally have an excuse to take three days off. Thank you and good luck to Raidra!" Unfortunately I was a bit slow on relaying that message to you, so you never knew you had the full support of the United States Transit System, but maybe that's for the best because of the added pressure! Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  02:45, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

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Have you seen Sandshrew's Alolan firm? Its design kind of reminds me of an igloo. Though from what I understand, it's only available in Moon version. To be fair, Alolan Vulpix and Ninetails (which are exclusive to Sun) look great and definitely look the part of an Ice/Fairy type. Speaking of igloos, I'm going to let the idea of adding the line, "Pillows were stacked all around him and the pile seemed to resemble what he would've called an igloo." Roll around in my head for a bit to see if I really want to add it.

As I comb through more of the story, I might spot some other parts I might make changes to. In chapter 15, I'm trying to decide what should happen next. I came up with two scenarios. One, the manager of the store comes over to see what the problem is and discovers the employee is doing, pulls her away, and asks why she was doing that to a customer. Two, the mother hears Kristy and runs though the crowd. She sees what the employee is doing and tackles her to the ground and tells her to stay away from her daughter. The first scenario might seem less over the top but I'm still not sure which one to go with.

"I read an article recently saying that some school in Taiwan had a Hitler-themed event not understanding how offensive it was." Oh my god, really? Lol! How was that allowed to happen? That's like something you'd see in a Mel Brooks movie if it was made in modern day (it would be called Triggered and a group of college kids are trying to get people so offended that they'd have no choice but to laugh at how offensive they get.) Now I can't unhear bits and pieces of the song "Springtime for Hitler".

Dragon Ball Z Super? Never heard of it. To be honest, it sounds like the title of a bootlegged Dragon Ball Z DVD (though it will never top Break So Bad!)

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   08:12, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

Uselessness comes in again!
As I've seen that you happen the to be a DBZ fan through my stalking skills, I wanted to mention that Teamfourstar also made an abridged series based on DBZ. Here's the first episode (of 67) in case you want to take a look. Cheers.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 15:21, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

*Claps* Congratulations! You're now one of the four most active people here ever!

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 00:04, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

I just imagined myself getting an 100 years badge. Just like my pops said "I'm going to live forever!" (just before being hit by the asteroid).

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 00:14, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Heh, I've been there before. I've been here for precisely 2 years and 5 days and I'm 72, while someone like Derpy is 81 after only 8 months. Only my lack of self pride stopped me from going Edmund Kemper on him. And the true king and overlord will always remain Empy (Amen).

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 00:23, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Kemper banged many things in his life in various ways. Drums weren't one of those things.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 01:05, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

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You got the badge for editing the wiki at least once everyday? Damn! Now that's dedication. I can barely edit the wiki for ten days straight let alone three hundred and sixty five!

I've done quite a bit of work on the next episode of Johto Quest. I'm at the part where the episode shifts to Officer Jenny. So I'm other words, I'm at this part in the plot outline: (20. The episode shifts to Officer Jenny talking with Walter and Emily's mother on a cell phone as she rides on her motorbike through Route 49 towards Spring Valley/Cedar Village, thinking that's where she might find Emily and tells Walter and Emily's mother that she's nowhere to be found in Iroko or Basswood.)

I'm trying to figure out how to transition from this part: (Emily slowly got up from the couch and bid farewell to Martha as the two made their way to the Pokemon Center. For almost the entire way, Emily walked slowly and hung her head down. She stared at the ground, paying no attention to the beautiful sunset on her lefthand side. Pretty soon, the duo had reached the Pokemon Center.) To the part where it focuses on Officer Jenny. I'm thinking it could be something like:

(Back on Route 49, a woman wearing short heeled shoes, white gloves, and a cyan and navy blue police uniform was zooming through the forest on her police bike. All of a sudden, her cell phone started to ring and she immediately pulled over to answer it.

"Hello. Officer Jenny here. How may I help you?" the woman asked.

"Jenny, did you find Emily yet?" asked Walter.

"I just left Basswood and a couple of people said that while they did see her, they had no idea where she was heading." Jenny replied.

"Well I don't think she could've gotten far. Did you try looking in Cedar Village yet?" Emily's mother asked.

"Don't worry ma'am. I'm heading over there right now." said Jenny. She put the phone back into her pocket and hopped onto the bike.)

As for that Mel Brooks Movie, I'm not sure if Mel Brooks is still alive and willing to make movies.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   23:38, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

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That's really cool to know that even after all of these years, he's still alive and wasn't affected by the Celebrity Death Curse of 2016.

So yesterday, I beat Pokemon Sun and I'm trying to figure out what to do in the post game. I did get Magearna and catch a Litwick (I made it appear via Island Scan) and I might try catching other Pokemon.

I also did some work on chapter 15. See:

(Chapter 15

A few seconds later, Kristy quickly sat up in the bed and let out a brief scream. Everyone in the vicinity turned their heads towards Kristy and stared directly at her. Just then, a lady wearing a cyan polo shirt and slacks came rushing to Kristy's side.

"Anata wa daijōbudesuka?" the woman asked frantically.

"Huh?" Kristy said as she tilted her head slightly.

"Anata wa daijōbudesuka?" the woman repeated in a louder tone of voice.

"What are you saying?" Kristy asked.

"Anata...wa...daijō...budesuka?" the woman said, moving closer to Kristy's face.

"Ma'am! I can't understand you!" Kristy yelled in a shaky voice. The woman then proceeded to wrap her arms around Kristy and gradually squeezed her tighter and tighter. She sat there frozen, barely able to do anything but shake and pant heavily. Her eyes darted from side to side and sweat began to pour down her face.

"Get off of me! Mom!" Kristy hollered, trying to break free of the woman's tight grasp. A few moments later, a man wearing the same type of uniform as the woman, save for the loaded keyring clipped to his belt, pushed through the crowd to see what was going on. When he got to where Kristy and the woman were, his mouth hung open and he hut his hands on the top part of his head just above the ears. Seconds later, he called out to the woman.

"Sekaide wa nani ga okotte iru nodesu ka?" the man shouted.)

Milk Duds have been deemed offensive now? Great! What's next? Miltank's gonna be considered offensive to Plus Sized woman? (Article named "Miltank Deemed Offensive to Plus Sized Women" appeared) Damn it!

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   16:46, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re: Kick em again!
I wouldn't advise it. As they've been banned, they're likely moving on to another wiki. If they had like a main blog up or something like that, commenting there might although other people to appreciate your insight/'sick burn' (I know the lingos of today's youth, or as I heard they like to be called, 'ragamuffins'), but I doubt many people will ever look at that user's talk page after today so it'd be a lot of effort for little reward. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 00:51, January 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * Indeed, let me rap with you guys a second about how in touch I am with the youths (pulls up a chair and sits reverse in it while turning his Metamucil hat backwards). In the end, sometimes it's better to just ignore them and let them move on rather than have an epic internet slap fight as it tends to waste time. You feel me, homes? EmpyrealInvective (talk) 01:36, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

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Oh boy! I can't wait to see a news article titled "Mega Ampharos and Alolan Dugtrio Deemed Offensive to Bald People" on Macho Monthly! (rolls eyes)

So for my Monster From My Past story, I have writer's block. I guess this is what happens when you don't have a plot outline. Though I could write a plot outline now since I'm not that far into the story. In fact, I'm going to do that right now. So for the plot outline, I might do something like this:

[First Blog Entry (August 15, 2016):

The protagonist introduces themselves as Karina and says that she has been dealing with some troubling memories from way back when as of late, despite the fact that she had suppressed them a long time ago. She then says that the memories have been really bothering her and thinks that by starting a blog talking about them, she might run into other people who might’ve had similar experiences. Not only that but she also says that her insurance doesn’t cover visits to the psychologist and that even if it did, the nearest one would be an hour drive from her house. She then says that she would like to elaborate more on the memories but claims that it’s really late where she is and ends the entry by saying, “I probably won't be able to sleep tonight but I'll see how it plays out.”]

So word on the street is the American Ring series is getting another sequel called Rings. Because calling it The Ring 3 was too mainstream for them apparently. Slimebeast made a video where the music in the trailer is replaced with some other unfiiting music (it's not We Are Number One in case if you're wondering).

So the plot summary is on the same part as the current story is. Click here to see the plot outline. I'm not sure if you have any suggestions for what should happen next. I don't want the transition from the lecture to after class to be too abrupt though so I'm going to have to figure out a way to make the tranistion work.

I'm also trying to figure out how the woman will respond to the man's question (Man: What in the world is going on here?). I think I might have something.

(Translated from Japanese:

"I heard this girl screaming and wanted to make sure she was okay. I can't seem to get a straight answer out of her and I know I should've taken my English studies a bit more seriously and..." Before the woman could finish what she was saying, she ran out of breath and the man went over and patted her on the back.

"Look," the man said in a slightly annoyed tone, "I know you were just trying to help and all but if you had trouble with what they were saying, you should've just come to me. I wouldn't have minded.")

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   01:40, January 9, 2017 (UTC)