Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-26293936-20150412034002

Greetings, fellow writers. I'm Nikiren27, an aspiring author who's decided to try his hand at writing Creepypastas. I was hoping I could gain some views/comments on my first pasta. I was hoping I could come here and talk to you all. Rose Hill Place is a small little place where residents dwell in peace, spending their lives away. Things start to change when a mysterious stranger is seen roaming the halls, taking an ill resident with him out and away. When another resident is killed by a mysterious monster, the residents of Rose Hill begin to worry. Is someone hunting them?

I hope it's worth your time, and I hope you enjoy. Thank you! 