Talk:The Fermi Paradox/@comment-26054278-20151230025709/@comment-26373253-20151231173619

Man, it's nice to see a full on review from you, because your critique is as good as always. I see what you mean quite well, and there is only so many ways you can show the world ending, but I wish to expand more into that concept sometime in another story, perhaps in a more creative way.

My greatest fear was that I was repeating to much, perhaps trying a little too hard to get the idea going, so I guess that's why you should always go with your gut as an author.

Who knows, maybe one day I'll expand on this story as I did plan it out rather quickly. Who's to say you can't improve on a story? In something like this, there's always something you can add, as long as it doesn't stray to far off and take away from what was originally there. (This idea can't really be used for a different type of story to be honest.)

Good review as always, and I await the Project WILD review.