Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5170510-20190918022535/@comment-9041013-20190919000633

I don't have much of a criticism for this one, it's pretty solid as it is.

However, I'd like to note that I kept thinking "it's a spin on Wendigo" because of the setting and the emphasis of folk tales in the stories. So, if you are going to expand on the lore and plot of this story. In the case of this being a complete figment of your imagination, make sure you establish it as if it is an actual legend or something of the sort.