Talk:Apotheosis/@comment-38695084-20190303200917/@comment-24101790-20190303201723

I would strongly suggest using italics or page breaks/headers to separate the journal entries from the narrative voice as there were a few times when I wasn't sure whether it was the protagonist's recounting the tale or journal entries or Eve speaking at the end. You can do that using two apostrophes at the start and end of words/sentences/paragraphs you want to put in italics. Words you wish to put in italics