Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20151007031148/@comment-27012445-20151007185425

The three hundred word limit is so much harder than I expected. I liked the story very much, but there is a bit predictability at the end. I was thinking of instead of taking the girl back to bed, the father remains where he is and is looking at his sleeping daughter's face filled with love and thinking how he would do anything to protect her. His thoughts are interrupted when the voice of his daughter comes from behind him and say, "Daddy, what are you doing? Who is that you are holding?"