Talk:It Breathes, It Bleeds, It Breeds/@comment-27516784-20160314205605/@comment-26030957-20160604154750

"I'm not trying to start a pissy-fight with you here"--really? 'Cause it sure feels like it.

Empy is my good friend, I told him I liked the story. He asked what other stories had parasitic twins, I told him. He asked what could make the story stronger. I gave him my opinion.

"I think if we are to continue this conversation we must take it to our talk pages. We have already said everything to say about the story"--you always have to have the last word don't you? I've seen you pulling tactics like this before. Telling people "If I see this "discussion" continued, I'll start deleting comments. If you want you can take this to your talk pages. And that's the end of it." Are you even an administrator? What gives you the right to talk to people like that? You can't just order me around as you see fit.

When you critique my stories you say things like, "I tried really hard to find some points I didn't like" and "I just feel every writer should be recieveing criticism" then follow it with ridiculous statements like "You gave too many names about drug substances" (it was all the same drug), and "I found this: "barely able to walk she was so sick", shouldn't this be "barely able to was; she was that sick" (what on earth are you talking about?), and "it wasn't that creepy/scary/suspenseful".

But when I take the time to offer real and legitimate advice to a writer WHO ASKED how to make his work stronger, you jump all over me and then try to end the discussion by imposing your will on me. It doesn't work like that. Everyone gets to say how they feel. Not just you.

"I think though that your opinion is solely based on the fiction classes you took" Listen, dude, I didn't just take some fiction class and start spouting nonsense. I have a degree in English Literature from the University of Oregon. I have studied under many writers and continue doing so. I write on a number of different sites and some of them even pay me.

If you are looking for members who overstep their boundaries, troll, and write criticism that is forced and of a illegitimate nature, then I suggest taking a look in the mirror.