Talk:The Devil's Chord/@comment-5269370-20140730091531

This was pretty good, although I think some of the vital scenes, especially the last paragraph, could have been done a little better. Like, rather than the piano admit defeat, have it do something just as unexpected, but that's still going to terrorize mourning Mrs. Rand. Well, it's not my place to tell you what to do with your story. I did enjoy this. :)

6.8/10