Talk:Beware the Oak/@comment-4947667-20131128105600

Pretty enjoyable pasta! I agree with the story that old oak trees do have a strange eeriness to them. I always saw strange shapes and figures on old oak trees as a kid, most likely a result of projecting my imagination onto the varying appearance and order of the bark.

Anyways, I thought the imagery was great, but at the same time the story seemed to lack any build-up. Kind of felt like it was missing a few paragraphs.