Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4202158-20141103051718/@comment-25616936-20141103052756

Continue working on this. Add more detail. In was dull to me and I honestly skipped parts because I couldn't get interested in certain parts. I'm also about to begin my first creepypasta. So, as an effort for both of us to do good, I challenge you to see who can create the better Creepypasta!