Talk:The Afterlife Can Be an Unusual Place/@comment-9041013-20181023111159

K so, you've written "bled" instead of "blood" in the nightmare sequence, and it's Asocial for a person who's not good with people, Antisocial is not good with holding up to societal group standarts (Psychopaths and the like). That's a nice story you got there, but I think the boredom would drive the ghost man nuts far before he could get to the haunting stage, people seem to not really care about their own need for stimulation whenever writing such stories. Judeo-Christian Heaven is the worst fate one could suffer. It's an eternal sensory deprevation treatment, with ''good intentions. ''Your purtagory-like room fits the same bill.

Anyway, it's nice how he has a change to his character, and ends up causing the death of the kid whilst trying to give him (and himself) some good time only to regret that. Then again, between Halloween and Halloween, he should go nuts and become creepy as fuck as a result of  his spiritual mental strain.

Oh well.