Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30952484-20170105151913/@comment-30692969-20170105185743

I wanted to watch the season finale of Gravity Falls. Well, my experience was scarier than others. '' I don't think this forwards the "story" at all. It's too cliche. '' First, Bill succeeded in destroying the shacktron. Then, he was staring at me with a read eye. Next, he kill '' ... Umm... this can't be it. This has to be a troll. I know I'm kinda being a bit mean, but this is REALLY bad. Either you didn't finish it or it didn't post the full thing. Either way, I don't think you should quit your day job. IF you really want to write, look at style guides, try to expand your stories and actually put in real work into it. This is pretty much just pointing out plot points. Also, this is fanfiction. Fanfiction is against the rules. Try to actually look at the rules in the slightest before you post. ''