Talk:The Noble Purple Town/@comment-4722650-20141017232740

I'm going to be completely honest about my thoughts on the story.

This story feels like it was made just to catch into the trend of LTS and that's not supported by the bland plotline, everything about the story feels really predictable since quite a few other LTS stories follow the plotline of "I listened to Lavender Town, I liked Lavender Town, someone else close to me came over and listened to it, now they're dead."

It honestly doesn't help either that this pasta was written at the same time as quite a few pastas that follow the same plot with different people. You listened to the spooky song and you had someone over, they listened to the spooky song, they're dead and it's all Lavender Town's fault.

The main problem is just in the plot, but the story's length is also really, really short. You could have dragged it on a little bit longer, the story sort of just jumped from place to place for no apparent reason when you could have filled lots of gaps between parts of the story with... well, actual parts of the story.

I'm not sure whether the pasta was good in it's time and just hasn't aged well or was always this way, but as I just said, it hasn't particularly aged well and now it sort of just seems like another LTS story in a long lineup of others and it doesn't stick out as much as it could.

TL;DR: The plot is too predictable and jumpsy. Not exactly that unnerving at all.