Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27975952-20170212042128

Dear Katherine Wilter

This is a message regarding your sons mental health. Today in class we held an exercise where the children would write about their grandparents and what they do for them. This is what your son wrote:

My Grandmother

My Grandmother is the best Grandma ever! My Grandmother wakes me up every morning and helps me make breakfast and reminds me to brush my teeth! My Grandma helps me decide which clothes I should wear to school (She says I must get all the girls with my green and red overalls). Grandma says goodbye to me before mum drives me to school. My Mother says I must be going crazy.

My grandmother packs my lunch for school. Grandma likes to hear all about my day at school, and what I have learned that day. My Grandma even comes all the way to school, just to check if I have drunk all my water. My friends say I am strange.

Grandma says that I am the bravest and strongest boy in the world. Grandma says I am the greatest grandson in the world and she is very proud of me. I love my Grandma very very much.

It is very sad that we didn't have enough money to get a proper burial. She has to live in our backyard with my dog snowball.

I really suck at writing, however I really want to be a better writer. I feel like I have good ideas but I can never execute them. Please leave feedback. Thanks :) 