Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37197096-20181116050426/@comment-9041013-20181116210213

Jesus Christ, is this Amy Rose talking to us the audience through a Sonic game or something? I have no freaking clue what you were trying to get across in this.

Sega isn't a small company, it has its roots in the forties, it was made into  the de-facto gaming monster we know today in 1960. Let's say the story takes place in the sixties or even early seventies, Sega was big by then. Might've been not so segnificant, but still a big company.

This whole thing is like another "look this is the darker side of the Sonic frenchise" story, it won't fly, it's not really any good. I suggest you come up with a different idea really. You can obviously keep the "family goes wrong" scenario... we've had a plenty in the real world, read up Chris Benoit for example.

Whatever you do, keep the bloody console games out of it.