Talk:Black, Black, Black/@comment-5932068-20140213024957

It's interestinf, caught my attention, definitely! Unlike other creepypastas, it doesn't have things like ' Earlier today I saw this story on this website and it said 'You're next.' I tried to ignore it.I turned on the tv to a cartoon but it had hyper-realistic blood and hyper-realistic screams. Then this black shadow came out of the TV and now my body is trapped in his. I have to continue the killing chain. I have to continue on to the after life. You're next.'

I like how it's not like all those normal creepypastas, but hey, for something I thought up in about a second, that's pretty good, right?

One concern- I wish you could add a little bit more to the end. About how he opens the door to the shadow? Well maybe the black shadow turns out to be his friend and his dad? One of those-I dunno- short little plot twists. I love those.

But, good job, I give it 7.5/10 burritos. :3