Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-32320806-20170620075150

'''This story is gay. Not gay as in bad, it's literally gay.'''

" This anger for example, he could almost taste it. It felt like thick, sweet syrup, stirring around in him. Of course, he knew the extra ingredient that would complete the flavor. That satisfying joy he’d felt when he had Randy and his friends on the ropes the day prior, that mixed perfectly with the anger, to create some intoxicating product that Jeff almost craved now. He fell asleep lying on his bed thinking abou t that syrup, that thick, viscous that seemed to work its way into the very fabric of his soul. He wanted it, yet he knew that it was destructive, and that nothing good could come from sampling it again."

It's more suggestive than Jeff getting a burning and tugging feeling in the original.