Talk:Afternoon Tea/@comment-31456558-20170719235816

This story is wonderfully shocking, with few grammar and punctuation errors, from what I can tell, as I am a very poor person with them both. I got less chills from it and more shocks, and while some parts were predictable, like with the corpse, other parts were wonderful, like most of the story in general. The plot has never been done before, and I honestly wish that you kept on writing. This greatly deserves to be the spotlighted pasta, and you have created an amazing story.