Talk:Bedtime/@comment-9600371-20140522111756

Wow, you took a common phobia, and made it a chilling, satisfying story. Some pictures would have been nice, but overall, we grew attached to the character, and I loved the brief but sensible ending. Plot: 10/10 Characters 9/10 Mood: 10/10 Media X/10 Grammar: 10 / 10 Overall:9.8/10