Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26572345-20160117234247/@comment-26644104-20160121035457

This was a good story. I wanted to keep reading to find out what it was going to lead to and I was not dissapointed. I thought he was going to overdose at first but the image of his neck is now burned in my mind.

I found you misspelled Counselor in the following sentence:

"The school’s councillor had told Mom and Dad that Joe’s behaviour was disruptive and that if he didn’t change his attitude towards Whoosh Man and settle down, he would face the risk of being removed from the school."