Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20180206062846/@comment-26475800-20180208201641

Thank you guys for your feedback. As Mr. D was the only person who seemed to get what I was really focusing on, I think I’m going to ditch this story in favor of a new one. Anyway, thanks for the feedback, and if I cannot get another story written, than I’ll be submitting this and most likely losing the contest. But, I’m glad at least one person got what I was trying to do.