Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20190122221206/@comment-35711173-20190123233906

Who is the ghost? I get a long description of incidents, and frankly the baby by the creek would send me packing. But no real engagement of the ghost. Was that the first house on the land? Did the previous owners or neighbors know anything? Is there a local legend? How about a police report? Or you can pull out something like Indian graveyard or mental hospital or the farm of a civil war widow who along with her family and house slaves were gang raped and then burned to death in the old plantation house by Sherman ... well you can come up with one.