Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-1671931-20141122175434/@comment-1671931-20141125194231

@Johnathen stuart, thanks for the support, I'm pleased you like it (7/10 is a good score, especially for someone who isn't a native speaker and with the grammar issues (I really have to something about that).) As for your review being bias... Your review is fair, I can understand your critism (not completely agreeing with it, It wasn't meant to be scary, just unsettling/ disturbing but that's personal taste and expectations but for example for the plotline, things getting worse and worse, I do realize that it might be a bit cliché.)

@EmpyrealInvectice, I understand that due to grammar issues, the story is denied but just one thing that slightly annoyed me, was the claim that it was cliché for the use of hyperrealistic. Normau