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A major overhaul of a previous post I made here. Anybody from Canada who can critique the dialogue, please do.

I can hear them…. They’re coming. Coming closer. Angry and mournful, ready to take me like they took the others, trampling in the snow outside. We were supposed to leave two days ago, I think. It’s cold, and there’s no food to speak of.

I think it’s been sixteen days since we first arrived, eager to spend two weeks away from civilization, to get back to our roots. We’d come—Earl, Mason, Ricky, and I—from the town of Andary, Manitoba, where the four of us attended university, myself studying English. Earl, I had known since we were young, both of us hailing from Maysburg, Tennessee and riding on full scholarships. It was also nice to have such a close friend as a roommate so far away from home.

We did not befriend Ricky and Mason, however, until our sophomore year, both of whom were from the local area. It became soon apparent afterwards that we all shared a passion for the hunt. It was for this reason that we decided to take up on an advertisement Earl had found online to rent out this cabin in the remotes of Saskatchewan for two weeks before heading back home for Christmas. It seemed like the perfect getaway we’d all been looking for, the chance to feel alive and masculine. The advertisement explicitly stated that the cabin had absolutely none of the modern luxuries the modern world provides for us: electricity, central heating, internet, or even any kind of reception, due to its isolation. The perfect vacation.

We reached out to the one who posted this opportunity, an old woman who summered here with her husband for a few weeks in June. The price was fair, and we all chipped in to cover the costs. When winter break finally came, we gathered our food, guns, and beer to make the long excursion into the prospecting wilderness.

That first night, we unpacked and relaxed around the fireplace with our ample supply of Labatt Blue, planning out the activities of the next two weeks. We planned on hunting, of course, though Mason was a little worried about us being caught by authorities, as we had not been able to purchase hunting licenses due to not being official residents of Saskatchewan. However, we all assured him that nobody was around for miles and that there was absolutely nothing to be worried about.

The next day did not go according to plan, though not to our displeasure. Instead of searching for small game, we decided to instead drink a copious amount of the Labatt Blue and eggnog (not the kind you give to small children), with not-so-legal herbal substances for dessert. We made a point to ourselves to make as much noise as humanly possible, celebrating the end of the grueling semester. Needless to say, we passed out in a drunken stupor, our positions more embarrassing than I would like to admit.

We awoke the next morning to find ourselves shivering and having eaten more than two days’ worth of food. Ricky, who was comparable in size to an elephant, was the main culprit for this, as he had dressed up as Santa Claus and decided to be the “Food Santa,” which in his intoxicated mind meant to eat everything he could get his hands on.

At some point, we managed to shake our hangovers enough to put on our boots and coats and set out in the early afternoon to try and shoot some rabbit or squirrel. We worked superbly as a team and bagged about four rabbits, three squirrels, and five birds before nightfall. We all figured that if we were breaking the law to begin with, that we might as well go all the way. And it felt good, too. We felt primal in those frigid woods.

We set out earlier the next day, though we had a little less luck than the previous night, as we killed about the same amount as the previous afternoon, though over the entire day instead of a few hours. However, it was not until the following day that we became really excited about our excursions, for after bagging more small game, we came across elk tracks at the northern border of the woods, about three miles away from the cabin. We followed them into spacious snow-blanketed plains and found a lone calf crying by itself.

“Shh!” I hissed as I crouched down and steadied my rifle.

“Hell, you ain’t gonna kill that cute little baby, are you?” Mason asked. I raised my hand to silence him.

“Tuck—”

I fired the gun, the bullet piercing through the calf’s hind leg. It shrieked, and I fired thrice more, finally bringing the beast down.

“You were saying?” I teased.

“Well, hell, I was gonna say we oughta leave him, but I guess it’s too late now.”

We all chuckled and swiftly snuck over to it to make sure it was dead. Sure enough, I’d knocked its lights out. Yet, it was then that Ricky pointed at the sky.

“Look!” he said while scratching his enormous belly. “Northern lights.”

We all looked up, and sure enough, the sky was beginning to glow with a deep green hue, the patterns slowly trawling over the starlit sky, while red flickered sparingly like splashes of blood.

“Looks like a Christmas tree, eh?” Mason admired. “Been a while since I’ve seen any of those.”

“Yeah, yeah, beautiful,” Earl grumbled. “Now let’s get this bad boy back to the cabin.”

We tied up the calf and carried it back, though we said little. I’m not sure if the others could sense it, but I had the feeling we were being watched by something lurking in the shadows. Despite this, we made the trip back without incident, while the red and green sky lit the snow beneath our boots.

We were correct, as about a mile and a half away from where I’d shot the calf, we found a handful of very large elk shambling along the next day, occasionally nibbling at the frozen ground. All of us save Mason killed one, though we brought only one back.

We partied again the day following that to celebrate our victory and also to take a break from the hunt, with Ricky, much to my horror, pretending again to be the Food Santa and demolishing any food in sight. At some point, Ricky disappeared only to come back with a pine tree that surprisingly fit well within the living room, for which we fashioned a star out of cut-up eggnog containers and hung bottlecaps and miscellaneous objects from it using fishing line we’d found in the closet. Besides that, though, there was little incident, and we once again passed out unevenly across the cabin. Yet, that night, I could not seem to keep my eyes away from the windows, as though something was subconsciously calling upon my attention. Earl, I also noticed, seemed to be eying the windows too, though we never mentioned this phenomenon to one another.

We ignored our hangovers when we awoke, our primal enthusiasm having been renewed by our day’s break, and we set out to the northern plains again, eager to find the elk. We found them about two miles away from where they had been before, now north-east of the cabin.

“Alright,” I murmured to Mason, “since you haven’t gotten one yet, you get to go first. Careful though, ain’t that many left. Be easy for ‘em to slip off.”

Mason nodded and slid to his belly, peering down the scope through the bushes we hid behind.

The shot missed, and they all scattered to the trees before Mason had a chance to fire again.

“Damn!” he cried.

“You fuckhead, now we gotta track ‘em down all over again!” I yelled with a kick of snow onto his back. He brushed it off and stood.

“We already killed three of ‘em, Tuck!”

Earl threw his hands up. “Well, shit, I wanna kill some more!”

“Hey!” Ricky bellowed. “Calm it down, eh? We’ve still got plenty of light. We’ll just go give’r.”

I said nothing, but instead began to stomp over to the trees, the vein in my temple pumping. The others followed, and we found that the elk had gone south. It was about a mile away when Earl piped up from behind us.

“Hey, there wolves in these parts?”

“Yeah, I know there’s some timber wolves,” Ricky affirmed. “Why do you ask?”

“Well,” Earl said while closely inspecting the ground, “seem to be what look like wolf tracks over here, and a big ole pile o’ wolf shit, too.”

I straightened my back and traipsed over to where he stood and inspected it myself. Having hunted them before, I knew immediately that he was correct.

“You guys wanna hunt some wolves?” I asked with a sly grin on my face.

“Aren’t they protected or something?” Mason quizzed doubtfully. We glared at him and he cast his eyes down in embarrassment.

We followed the tracks further south and around the cabin headed east, though night fell on us before we could find the wolves, and we decided to head back to the cabin, keeping in mind the location, which was a little less than a mile east of the cabin.

The next day proved to be colder than usual, bitingly frozen. But we persisted nonetheless, and after just an hour and a half came across the remains of small animals, and soon after that we came across a frozen pond with a large pack fighting over the corpse of a calf.

“Hey,” Earl whispered as we settled behind some brush, “I just noticed somethin’.”

“What’s that?” I asked.

Earl lowered his voice and cast a wary eye to the predators beyond the trees.

“I ain’t heard any howlin’ these past few days. And they’re fightin’ with each other right now, but they aren’t makin’ any noise.”

I brushed this off, though I could see that Mason scratched at his red ears.

“So?” I demanded. “All I care about is baggin’ me a couple o’ wolves. I could care less if they’re quiet.”

One of the wolves, a small grey runt who’d been nipping at heels to get a chance to eat, suddenly perked his ears and began sniffing in our direction. I held my finger up and readied my rifle. The others followed suit. I fired the first round, killing the runt, and the others followed. We each killed one, despite them having scrambled away in the blink of an eye. Ricky had managed to kill what seemed to be the alpha, a large monstrosity with its muzzle soaked in blood.

“Holy hot damn, that’s a keeper, eh?” Ricky guffawed.

“Sure is, pal,” Mason praised. “Mine’s no pipsqueak, either, though.” Mason looked over at my kill and scoffed.

“And you were getting your gonch in a wad over that missed shot,” he goaded.

“Go piss up a rope.”

Ricky slung his gun over his shoulder and sighed. “Shut it, you two. Let’s just bring them back to the cabin. God, it’s fucking freezing. Wish I had my mickey on me.”

Mason laughed and said, “yeah, you’d love to get pissed, wouldn’t you? Hell, you drank that whole two-four by yourself.”

“I’d rather you not,” Earl grumbled as he stuck a pinch of dip in his mouth. “Ate up half a damn shopping mall doing your whole Santa schtick, you fat piece of shit.”

Ricky playfully gave Earl the finger and grappled the dead wolf by its neck and began heading back the way we came. We all followed suit, and that night prepared a meal out of the small game we’d collected from the days prior.

“Hey!” Ricky bellowed from the kitchen, candles throwing long shadows across the walls. “Where’s my two-four?”

“You fuckin’ drank it, remember?” I replied as I whittled away at a piece of wood.

“Already?”

“Yup.”

“Well, shit. Any of you guys mind if I have a beer?”

“Yeah,” Mason said with a glance up from a book on Native American mythology. “Go ahead.”

“Thanks.”

We stared in silence at the dying fire for the next hour, each of us lost in our thoughts, not speaking until the flames finally died.

“Guess I’ll go ahead and get some more firewood,” Earl yawned. He stood up with a stretch and headed towards the side door, where he put on his winter layers.

Half an hour went by before I noticed that he hadn’t returned.

“The fuck did he go?” I slurred with a glass of eggnog in my hand.

“Dunno,” Ricky remarked. “Want me to go check on him?”

I nodded and finished the glass.

Ricky had been outside scarcely two minutes before he came panting back to the doorway.

“Guys, you better come out here.”

“What is it?” Mason asked.

“Ricky, he’s… he’s not out there. Saw some blood on the snow, and trails leading off into the woods. Grab the guns, too.”

Mason and I leapt to our feet and grabbed our rifles and coats, racing out to the woodshed, where we could see discarded logs and a copious amount of blood, while deep crevices in the snow showed what appeared to have been where he’d been struggling and dragged away, though the cascading flurries were already beginning to cover this. We gave little time to take in the scene before we charged off into the woods, following the bloody path.

We followed the trail for half an hour before it suddenly ended, with no trace of Earl in sight.

“The hell is he?” I gasped as the cold chewed at my face.

Ricky wiped his brow and replied, “I don’t know, let’s just look around and keep looking.”

We split up with our guns readied, all dreading what we might find. The snow was deep, and the wind yowled and yawped. Vaguely, I was aware that in the sky, blood-red aurora borealis danced, but I paid it no heed, for I was focused on finding my friend.

“Oh, shit!” Ricky exclaimed.

“What is it?”

He didn’t give a reply, though immediately afterwards I heard Mason curse and gag. Shaking my head, I trotted over to them. And I froze.

Lying in the bushes was the naked body of a man, torn and chewed beyond recognition, with the head ripped carelessly from the body.

“Can’t be,” Mason whispered. “Fuckin’ can’t be. It’s not Earl.”

“The hell do you mean it’s not Earl?” Ricky demanded.

“It can’t be. It’s gotta be someone else, I mean, Earl’s gotta still be out here.”

“Mason,” I said, “it’s him, man. Who else would it be?”

“B-but we don’t know that! There’s no clothes, n-no… head.”

“Alright, well I’ll uh, I’ll look for the… other parts,” I said with a pat on his shoulder. I didn’t know what else to do. It felt like my stomach had dropped.

Then I found it.

Lying in the bushes was a pile of bloodied rags, torn remnants of Earl’s attire. Holding my hand over my mouth, I reached out and picked up the rags, only to find Earl’s head underneath, broken and misshapen.

I could feel my body trying to empty its bladder, though luckily, I held it in.

“What?” Ricky asked, his face paler than the snow. I shook my head and pointed as I stepped away, doubled over in an attempt to keep the rushing nausea at bay.

“We need to get out of here,” Mason whimpered. “Man, we need to get back to the cabin right now.”

I nodded my head and hurried back the way we came without a moment’s thought. The trip back felt quick, and I could feel eyes watching us from the shadows, waiting for the next chance to strike again. But I ignored them, trying to keep the hot image of Earl’s head out of my eyelids, while snow pricked at my face. None of us said a word to each other when we got back.

We slept fitfully that night, and Ricky awoke us several times from downstairs, where he slept by the fireside. Neither Mason or I blamed him when we would come racing down, just in case the screams were more than nightmares.

In the morning, none of us felt eager for breakfast, though we did so out of concern for our health and warmth, as the temperatures were plummeting faster than ever. We discussed what happened and came to the conclusion that there could but one culprit for the murder of our friend: wolves.

In clear hindsight, it was foolish for us to do so, but we became enraged at this attack, blubbering and foaming at the mouth for retribution. And it was for this reason that we set off into the snow-covered woods that day, for we sought vengeance.

There was nothing spectacular to say about the excursion, other than that the tracks and blood had been completely covered by the snow, though we could feel a tension in the air, prickling at the backs of our necks.

It was not until nightfall that we again found Earl’s body, with only a finger peeking out over the snow. We had gone in circles all day, searching desperately in our memories for clues as to his whereabouts. When we did find him, Ricky took out a bright red rag and hung it from a tree branch, should we need to return to the spot later and find Earl completely submerged, though we’d cleared the snow around his naked body.

We then headed east, as we knew they could not be south, as we had come from that direction, nor west, as that was where the cabin was, and to the north were the plains and frozen pond.

The snow whipped at our faces as we blundered through the snow, and the deeper into the woods we went, the more skeletal and twisted the trees became, seeming to become frightful figures leering at us, plotting our demise. The terrain grew hilly, but though our feet were worn and sore, we persisted, fueled by a blinding rage.

It was late into the night when we found the wolves’ den. It was nestled under an overhang in the side of a hill, with roots spreading their fingers over the walls and floor of the enclave, with bones and carcass strewed about. At first, I took them to be shadows in the dark, but Mason was the one to notice their oddity.

“Are—are they sleeping?” he stammered.

I squinted my eyes and shook my head.

“Believe so,” whispered Ricky. “They should be huntin’ right now. That’s odd.”

I lowered my gun and tested the branch of a nearby tree.

“I don’t give a flying damn,” I growled as I began my ascent up the tree. “I’m gonna kill every last one of ‘em if it’s the last thing I do.”

They agreed and took positions in opposite trees so that we circled the sleeping wolves. I’d told them to wait for me to take the first shot, and to keep shooting after that cue.

I sighed and tried to relax my shoulders, but to no avail. My blood was boiling, and my fingers were itching to spill blood. I lined up the scope and looked for the biggest one. There he was, right next to the bones of a rabbit.

I fired.

The silent air exploded with gunshots and yowls and yelps as we fired at the unsuspecting beasts, their blood staining the crystalline snow. We killed about three of them and wounded two others, though they escaped deeper into the hills along with another one who left uninjured. Easy.

When we eased to the den to inspect the damage, Ricky gave a short gasp of surprise and inspected the walls of the inlet, the smell of flesh pungent.

“You guys see this? There’s drawings on the walls.”

We shined our flashlights to meet his and saw what appeared to be Native American symbols and drawings written upon the walls of the earth, depicting crude interpretations of owls, wolves, and another animal I wasn’t quite sure the nature of, though it seemed to be feline in nature. Looking up, I saw there were feathers and other decorated trinkets hanging from the ceiling.

“Thought nobody lived out here?” I breathed. I tore one of the trinkets off and inspected it—talons from what appeared to be an owl. I threw them down and left the den without a word, heading in the direction the wolves had escaped.

None of us said anything as we searched for the wolves; we seemed to be perfectly tuned in to each other as we traipsed into the night. The sky glowed redder than ever, casting angry hues over the land. I thought it odd that this phenomenon should be occurring so frequently, but my mind was elsewhere. I wanted only to kill these beasts.

We eventually, after grueling struggle through the snow, which was picking up despite the skies being clear, found the first of the injured wolves, whimpering and licking its wounds. We killed it and found the next wolf, an older cub, not far ahead. It was as we were searching for the third wolf, the one who’d escaped uninjured, that we felt it.

It was subtle at first, but soon there was a kind of electric static in the air, making our hair frizz and cling to our faces. The red sky blackened with clouds, and the snowfall grew into a blizzard. We had not been speaking before, but now we didn’t dare to. We could all feel it.

An owl cried from above, and I saw what looked to be a mangy animal slipping off into the bushes, yellow eyes glaring at us for a few moments before disappearing.

“Was that a cougar?” Ricky hissed under his breath. I nodded, and he swallowed.

“Thought they were supposed to be further east,” Mason mumbled. I put my finger to my lips and scanned the trees around us. Though the snow was heavier than ever, I felt as though we were in the eye of a storm.

We waited. We waited for an eternity in that windy silence. We knew not what we waited for, but we knew whatever it was, it was something to be feared. Mason had moved to make a run for it, but I grabbed him by the shoulder, not wanting to alert whatever was there with our presence, in the off chance it didn’t know exactly where we were.

Perhaps ten minutes had gone by, us planted into the cold ground, eyes raw and wet, when we heard the beasts. They howled—no roared from nearby, a deafening bellow that demanded flesh, and it came from all around us. Ricky bolted, racing faster than I could ever imagine him running back the way we came. Mason was on his tail, and I knew that I had better follow suit.

I could hear them trampling in the snow behind us, monstrous beasts snarling and stampeding after us. Blood pumped and rang in my ears, but my legs were numb, and I was perpetually urging them onwards, praying hard that they not tremble and slip. The snow to the sides of us erupted, and I could see shadowy behemoths racing alongside, though I could not get a good look at them, nor did I try; my eyes were focused ahead, and my mind was fitted with a single purpose: to flee.

They bellowed and howled, their noises ungodly and bone-shattering. Ahead, I could see the den with the dead wolves. As though in slow-motion, Ricky tripped over one of the carcasses and screamed. But neither I or Mason paused in our tracks. We could not afford a moment’s hesitation, lest those shadowy beasts come upon us, and we left Ricky behind. The sounds of his screams and breaking bones followed our ears, until they ended with a ghostly suddenness.

I don’t know how we managed to get back to the cabin. The creatures could have killed us with ease at any point in the race home. But I did not care, for the sight of the cabin felt like a godsend, and Mason and I barreled through the door and locked it tight.

The moment we came inside, the air grew silent again and the static seemed to disappear. Without a word, we went to other doors and locked them and then closed the shutters on all the windows in the house. Mason threw some of the heavy furniture in front of the doors while I relit the fire, eager to get rid of the cold biting at my flesh.

“What the fuck just happened?” Mason croaked. “What were those things?”

“I don’t know. But we need to leave as soon as possible. Though, we should probably wait until morning. I don’t wanna go out there again while it’s still dark out.”

Mason agreed, and we packed our things, after which we sat by the fire with our rifles in our laps and pistols loaded on the coffee table.

We listened intently to the night, not daring to sleep. At one point, Mason began to doze off, but I made him and myself coffee to open our eyes.

Around three in the morning, we were jolted by a din of screeching metal from outside. Fearing the worst, we ran upstairs and peered out the window.

Mason cleared frost from the window and cursed under his breath,

“What? What is it?”

“Just… come look.”

Nervously, I approached the window and peered out towards the truck.

“Fucking Christ.”

From what I could tell, the front of it had been ripped up, with shredded metal protruding liked gnarled teeth. I scanned the area for the beasts but could see nothing, not even tracks in the snow.

“Should we go out now, or wait until morning?” he asked, his eyes scanning the other windows rapidly.

“Definitely morning,” I answered. I didn’t want either of us to end up like Earl or Ricky.

Mason nodded his head and we went back downstairs and escaped to the warmth of the fire.

When morning came, we grabbed our guns and went upstairs to check through the windows whether or not the coast was clear. Fortunately, it appeared as such, though we were still light on our feet as we headed outside to inspect the damage to the truck, while the red lights in the sky still flicked under the sun.

“Hell!” Mason cried. “They ripped up the whole goddamn engine!”

It was true. The screeching metal we ‘d heard that night had indeed been the creatures ripping through the hood of the car and mauling the engine beyond any hopes of repair, the metal sliced through as though it was butter. Mason stomped over to the side of the truck and groaned.

“They took out the fuckin’ tires, too!”

“What?”

“Yeah! Come here and look!”

I walked over to him and screamed, bashing the palm of my hand against the side door.

“How in the fuck could they know to slash the engine and the tires?” I yelled.

Mason shook his head and ran his fingers through his hair.

“Only got one spare in the back. Besides, no way we could fix that engi—”

He turned his head towards the trees.

“What is it?” I asked, my voice hushed. I suddenly became aware of the sensation that we were being watched.

He scanned the woods with his eyes.

“Let’s just go back inside.”

We were quiet for the rest of the day, conversing and whispers and throwing hectic glances to the doors and windows, even though the shutters were closed and bolted tight. It was that night, too, when the howling began, if you could call it that. The moans were deep and hollow, yet full of fury and… lament. They were unlike anything we’d ever heard, and kept us on edge, as though we might slip out the door by accident and be devoured by those things, while the makeshift Christmas tree in the corner mocked us silently with its naïve cheerfulness.

Not having had a good night’s rest two nights in a row, I went upstairs soon after the howling began, hoping that sleep would be my sanctuary. It was as I was about to change out of my clothes when I first noticed the shadows on the ice, tucked away behind the trees. They were darker than the night and seemed to weave in and out of existence, merging and dispersing as though to avoid my eyes under the soft red glow of the northern lights. They were monstrous in size, too, though I could distinctly tell they were not in the shape of any large creatures local to the area.

I snuck back downstairs and whispered for Mason to follow me back up and pointed out the shapes.

“Don’t like the looks of those things,” he mumbled. “Don’t look natural, like they’re not made of anything. God, they… they must be as big as a horse, eh?”

I smiled grimly.

“We oughta keep watch,” I said. “Take turns so we can get some rest.”

“Well, I’ll take first watch, then. Don’t think I wanna know what my dreams will be like tonight.”

I checked my watch.

“It’s only six. Wanna do three-hour shifts, and wake me up at nine?”

He nodded and went back downstairs.

Neither of us heard anything save the howling, though around midnight, right as I was going back to sleep after my turn to stay up, the air became quiet, and stayed that way for the rest of the night.

Mason was rapping his fingers on the kitchen table when I came downstairs around nine, having awoken of my own accord.

“Anything new?” I yawned. He stared at the closed window, as though he could see the scenery beyond. “You there?”

“They did it again, Tuck.”

“What do you mean?” I asked. His face was still pointed at the window.

“They’re playing with us.”

“How so?”

He looked at me, and I could see that his eyes were raw.

“I went out to the icebox by the woodshed after the sun came up. We’re low on food, and I needed to see if any of the meat was still fresh.”

“And?”

“It’s all gone. The door’s ripped off and all of the meat is gone, every last bit. So we’re stuck with a few granola bars and coffee, because thanks to our wonderful foresight, we ate more than we planned.”

My throat felt dry.

“How much do we have left?” I asked.

“Probably enough for two days between the two of us. We were planning on eating the game for dinner, but… guess that didn’t go so well. All we’ve got are the snacks we brought. We’ll have to ration this. Guess we can get snow from the front porch for water. During the day, that is.”

I opened the pantry and counted a box of Pop-Tarts, five granola bars, and half a box of Ricky’s cookies.

“Goddamn Ricky and his Food Santa bullshit,” I hissed under my breath.

“I mean, we were all supposed to be leaving tomorrow, anyways.”

“Well, doesn’t look like that’ll happen anytime soon.”

I slammed the pantry shut and pounded my fist against the table.

“I swear, if Ricky were here right now, I’d wring his fat fucking neck.”

Mason nodded and pulled out a can of dip, which I recognized to be Earl’s.

“Gimme a pinch o’ that,” I demanded. Mason dumped a small lump in my hand and I stuck it in my mouth—a habit I’d quit the year prior. I thought hard.

“Guess we can still hunt some small game. They don’t seem to come out in the daylight.”

Mason’s eyes widened, and he jerked his head vigorously.

“Hell no, I’m not setting foot back out there if I can help it,” he said. “Just going to the woodshed, I could feel that… that feelin’ from the other night. Like the air’s sticky. Felt their eyes all over me.”

“Well, we’ve gotta have food,” I returned.

“Uh-uh. Not taking a step out that door so long as I can help it.”

“Well, I’m not going back out there alone.”

His eyes grew heavy and he hung his head.

“Tomorrow,” he sighed. “We’ll go out tomorrow. I just…. I need to prepare myself. Let’s just eat what we’ve still got today.”

I reached for a cup and spat into it, eyeing Mason down heavily. His eyes darted between my own and the floor.

“Alright. Fine. We’ll hunt tomorrow. Catch some rabbit. Maybe some bird. Cook it up right away. Just keep doin’ that until somebody comes lookin’.”

He nodded his head and hurried past me, going upstairs, where he remained for the rest of the day.

Out of both contempt and grief for the loss of Ricky, I grabbed his Santa hat and grabbed a beer from the last case, warm as piss.

“Pssh. Food Santa,” I grumbled later as I sipped on my eighth beer in a row. “Dumb fuckin’ bastard. I’ll show that fool what a Food Santa really is.”

Stumbling, I rose from the chair and grabbed the rifle and loaded it.

“I d… I don’t care what the hell Mason says, I want meat,” I growled. “Might catch a rabbit. Keep him…. Keep ‘im as a pet. Name ‘im E-Earl. Might keep another one. A fat one. Name that one Ricky.”

I shambled over to the door and pulled on my coat, still drunkenly grumbling nonsense to myself. But the moment I opened the door, I was smacked in the face by a whirlwind of blinding snow and… and that tension in the air. The same kind of static tension that we’d felt when they took Ricky. I tried to ignore it and took a step forward. My foot landed on something soft and squishy.

It was Ricky’s head.

I screamed and fell backwards into the house, scrambling to shut the door. For a moment, I thought I saw yellow eyes glaring at me from the trees.

“M-mason!” I cried, dragging myself back away from the door. “Mason, get down here! It’s Ricky!”

“What? Ricky?” I heard him fly down the stairs and saw his hand next to me, offering to help me up.

“Where is he?”

I blinked and gagged. “Outside the door. Wait, no! D-don’t open it! It’s not him, it’s his head! The damn things left it for us!”

Mason ignored my warning. He flung open the door and screamed just as I had.

“Jesus Christ! You coulda told me that instead of saying he was here.”

“My bad,” I hiccupped, doubled over.

“You’re pissed, aren’t you?”

I slowly nodded my head.

He huffed and said, “Alright, just come upstairs. Get some sleep.”

He put his arm around me and dragged me up the stairs, my boots thudding against the panels, softened by snow and blood.

When I came to, night had already fallen, and the howling had begun, closer this time. Mason sat at the desk next to the window, reading from his book on Native American legends.

“They’re still at it?” I croaked.

He jumped a little and nodded, putting down the book.

“They’re closer,” he whispered. “Look.”

I got up and went over to the window, the cold almost snapping my toes in half. Outside, the snow blew hard against the icy glass, but through it, I could see the dark shapes again, though they were now at the edge of the trees, circling around the house. One of them slipped into the moonlight, and I caught a momentary glimpse of it.

It was a wolf.

It was the biggest goddamn wolf I’d ever seen, and as Mason had said, it must have been as big as a horse. Its head was flat, and its back was sloped down like a coyote’s, yet the fur was a silvery shade of grey that seemed to glow against the snow when under the crimson moonlight. But in the shadows, they grew dark and obscure. Their movements were just as slippery as before, one moment being in eyesight and the next having seemed to merge into the shadows. Between the howling, I would occasionally see one bark and yelp at another of the giant beasts, as though speaking to one another.

“What the hell do you think that thing is?” I asked.

“Dunno. Trying to look in here for anything.” I looked behind me and he raised the book to me.

“To hell with that nonsense. I say they’re a bunch o’ damn werewolves.”

His eyebrows flicked, though I could not tell if they did so out of doubt or fear.

“I-I know it sounds crazy,” I hurried, “but what else could they be? They’re fuckin’ huge! And they’re smart, too. Knew to take out the truck. Knew to take the meat. And lookit! They’re talkin’ to each other!”

He gulped.

“Used to have nightmares about werewolves,” he chuckled, though his eyes were wide. “I mean, I guess it’s the only thing that makes sense. You think there’s any silver or anything? Any crosses? Maybe wolfsbane?”

“Might be a cross or two somewhere, but I doubt there’s any silver. What we need are silver bullets. But we sure as hell don’t have any of those in here. And the only damn things edible we have anymore are some piddly little granola bars and cookies. Definitely no plants.”

The window rattled with the wind, causing us both to jump.

“You think we could shoot ‘em from up here?” he asked.

I looked back to the window.

“Nah. Snow’s too thick. Can’t see them but for a second or two.”

He slumped in his chair.

“Shit.”

“I agree.”

I spent the next hour scrounging around the house, but all I could find was the silverware and an old Bible, none of which I had any clue as for what to do with besides set them next to the doors.

I didn’t sleep for the whole night, though once the howling stopped at sunrise, my eyes allowed themselves to rest. It was later in the morning that Mason woke me up, clutching the book in his hands.

“Tuck, I think I know what they are. And I don’t think they’re werewolves.”

“Wh… what are they, then?” I mumbled. My eyes itched and felt swollen from lack of sleep, and my tongue felt like cotton. Mason opened up the book and furrowed his brows.

“Uh, they’re called ‘Waheela.’ They’re supposed to be large wolves with flat heads, though in here it says they’re much smaller than the ones outside. And they have light fur. It says they’re from the Northwest Territories, but I guess we’re far enough north some could be down here, too.”

“I don’t give a shit about all of that,” I snapped. “Skip to the important part.”

He shot me a glare but continued on.

“They bite people’s heads off, Tuck. They bite them clean off your body.”

A chill ran down my spine as my heart began to beat faster.

“They bite heads off?”

“Yeah. I mean, while you were asleep, I just got to thinking about them being werewolves and all and thought it didn’t make much sense. I mean, it hasn’t been a full moon for these many nights in a row. And where would they live when they were in their human forms? Nobody’s around here for probably another ten or more klicks down the road.”

“Does it say how to kill ‘em?”

“No. And I dunno if guns work or not.”

“Well, we’ll have to just find out when we can see them better, I guess.”

“So, what are we gonna do?”

I laughed. “Fuck if I know. Lay low?”

The corners of his mouth twitched upwards, though only momentarily.

We spent the day doing absolutely nothing, as we’d been doing. And though our stomachs rumbled and growled, neither of us had the heart to step outside, away from the safety of the wooden walls of the cabin. We’d run out of firewood, too, and resorted to hacking apart the Christmas tree to keep the flames alight, while great tracks in the snow circled the cabin outside.

When night came, and the howls seemed to bellow in our very ears and the beasts roamed ever closer, Mason offered to stay up through the night, since I had stayed up the previous night. I did so, while the banging shutters and rustling trees fueled my dreams.

I awoke to gunshots.

Spiraling instinctively in the bedsheets, I grasped at the nightstand and steadied myself, whipping my head about. My eyes finally rested on Mason standing in front of the open window, with the rifle pointed down below while snow blasted onto his face and across the floor.

“The fuck you doin’?” I gasped.

“Trying to kill these sons of bitches. They’re closer.” He fired another round, the sound causing my ears to ring in the confined bedroom. “Snow’s too thick. Need to get a better view.”

Mason closed the window and reached for the door. I scrambled to my feet and quickly pulled on my coat and boots.

“You’re not going out there, are you?” I asked. He flung the door open, allowing it to crack against the wall.

“Yup.”

“You’re fucking crazy! They’ll rip your goddamn head off!”

He ignored me, and I raced down the stairs after him. He’d already moved the china cabinet away from the front door, but I wedged myself desperately between him and it. But before I could say anything, Mason pointed the rifle at my head, his eyes dead and stony.

“Get the hell out of my way, Tuck. Before I take your head off.”

“Mason, don’t be a fool. They’ll kill you the moment you step outside that door.”

“So what? They’ll kill us anyhow. Only a matter of time. You hear that wind? That’s the sound of Death, marchin’ right up to our doorstep.”

“We can try to make it out of here. We’ll leave in the morning. They don’t like daylight, remember? We’ll make a run for it!”

He gripped the rifle tighter and worked his jaw.

“You really think they’re scared of the sun? They put Ricky’s head on the doorstep in the day, didn’t they? ‘Cause it sure as hell wasn’t out there when I found the meat gone. They won’t give a damn about the time. They won’t let us leave. And if I’m gonna die, then I’m gonna take as many of ‘em as I can with me. You can hole up in here and draw it out, or you can come with me.”

Sweat trickled down my forehead as he glared at me, the gun still pointed at my brain. I said nothing.

With a jerk, he raised the gun and fired it just above my head and pointed it back down at me again.

“Get the hell out of my way,” he snarled. I stepped aside and allowed him to go outside to the front porch, quickly slamming the door shut behind him and dragging the china cabinet in front of it.

“I’m not letting you back in,” I hollered. “You know that, right?”

“I don’t want in, anyways.”

I heard the first gunshot, followed by another. I raced upstairs to the window, grabbing the rifle by the bed. But by the time I’d cocked it and pointed it out the window, his headless body was already being dragged back to the trees. I fired twice at the wolf dragging him away, and while I was certain both shots met their target, the creature was unphased.

The night was silent after that, with only the sounds of the wind and crackling fire to be my company. I didn’t dare look back out the window, and instead sat in the chair, tapping my foot and twitching my fingers. My mind was numb as I listened to the air and replayed the events of the past two weeks in my mind on a loop. The back of my neck prickled as the static encroached upon the house.

When I saw the first rays of the morning sunlight struggling to wriggle their way through the shutters, I eased my way upstairs, not wishing to disturb the electric silence. I made my way to the window to see that the sky was clear and red, and that Mason’s naked body had been dragged back out in front of the cabin, covered in blood and feces. His head was nowhere to be seen.

I quickly shut the window again and went downstairs to throw the last of the Christmas tree into the fire, complete with the star made of eggnog containers. I caved in to my hunger and ate the last of the food.

The remainder of that day was spent much in the same way as I’d spent the night, though I found myself being unable to sit still in the chair as the static in the air grew in intensity, making my ears ring like sirens. Every sound seemed cataclysmic, and every breath felt as though it were my last.

When the night returned once more, so did the wolves, their paws grazing mere feet away from the door, growling and crying at me, deafening the relatively peaceful silence. I tried to fire at them again with the rifle, but the snow and cold were at the worst they had been yet, and I could scarcely see their silhouettes below. Though, I think even if the night was clear, I would have seen that bullets do nothing.

Knowing that there was nothing more I could do except wait, it was then that I began to write this, in both the hopes that somebody finds it, as well as simply a means to keep my mind somewhat sane while death waits not twenty feet away.

I was surprised to find myself still alive this morning, though night has come yet again. I fear this is the last. For they have grown ever so closer, scratching and pawing at the walls.

They do not speak. I think they want me to hear that they have come. I can’t even see them outside, as the roof overhangs them. I’ve piled all of the furniture downstairs in front of the doors, and am now locked in the bedroom, where I have similarly barricaded the door with the beds and desk as I write this upon the floor, with the last candle nearly gone.

Just now, I heard the sound of splintering wood. I think it was the door. I have my pistol trained at the door with my left hand, while with my right I write this down. I know it seems foolish to do so, but it is the only way I can escape this horror in the slightest. It feels more like a story than reality within these pages.

The furniture is being dragged away from the door, the low grumbling of wood on wood shaking the floor. Innumerable claws slowly and methodically scrape and clack, while the low breath of these giants grows ever closer. They are climbing the stairs.

And now they’ve paused right outside the doo  