Talk:The Man Under the Street Light/@comment-28365084-20160512221706

I can't exactly score this one. It's well-written and uses barely any cliches, but it doesn't get to much. All we know is that there is a man that waits for a car and looks at you sometimes. I can actually relate to the guy, which isn't who I should relate to, unless you want to make it look like he is the problem.