Talk:Fine Russian Cuisine/@comment-24077689-20131206200422

I've been seeing this pasta for the past couple weeks and kept putting off reading it and now I'm glad I finally did. It's good.

I'd probably work on some things, like when you say "no sign of life... yet at least." that seriously takes away so much of your build up and so much suspense. It's a set up for failure. By saying "yet at least" we already know what's gonna happen.

Great job, man.