Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27029037-20150929163320/@comment-26872762-20150929173507

Nice short pasta bro! I've never seen anybody write a FNAF creepypasta on this wiki in my life! (You are the first.) Anyway, the story was excellent, but only one thing needs to be answered: Why does the protagonist become Foxy? Is it because he transferred his soul or something? I don't know, but it needs it explanation of why he became Foxy in the first place because it doesn't make any sense. I also noticed a grammatical error in there (maybe even more), but so far your story is going well. I rate this a 9/10! (Maybe I should make a FNAF pasta too. I am not stealing your original idea BTW.)

LegoMaster2149 (talk) 17:35, September 29, 2015 (UTC)