User blog:Cornconic/In relation to two posts I made on the Writer's workshop...

So, recently, I posted two stories onto the Writer's workshop: Dunes, and A Lonely Machine.

These stories have the same setting and same characters, only with names changed and a different sequence of events for what actually happens within the story. The stories are not related to each other in any way, apart from the things I just mentioned. They are both quite short.

I thought up the idea for A Lonely Machine as I was re-writing Dunes, but I shortly realised I wanted to keep the idea for Dunes as well. So I'm making this post as a way of letting people know that I'm in need of some constructive criticism as to which story is better and why, and which story I should try to improve to get published on the site.

The stories are here:

Dunes (unreviewed)

A Lonely Machine (please read blog post about story relating to Dunes)