Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25558572-20140709014159/@comment-25558572-20140709030805

Hum, it's hard to say. Maybe distracting the reader? You could make it so the reader thinks that the story will lead somewhere -Marc'll become crazy/ It's Rain's turn to have a centipede in there...- and then twist it so he's mesmerized with the discovery of a new egg in Marc's uterus. Thanks for the advice. c: I'll try not to use those exact ideas.