User blog comment:AGrimAuxiliatrix1/Requests for Reviews Revival/@comment-26399604-20151030153139

Hi AGrimAuxiliatrix1,

I've written a great deal of pastas but have only submitted two to this site so far. I'm pretty harsh on my own work and wish to submit what I feel is the best version. With that said, I always believe there's room for improvement and wanted to get another set of eyes on the pastas I have submitted.

+Here is my very first Pasta which has five parts. Being the first, I know this one will probably need the most critique: The Church in the Woods

+Most recently submitted Pasta: The Great Occam Cobb

Any and all feedback will greatly appreciated. Thanks!