Talk:It Came from the Stars/@comment-43940019-20191226061214

For a story like this to claim such a great cheesy scifi title, I was severely disappointed in this. Full of run on sentences, punctuation errors, massive grammar errors, and repetitive/redundant words. There are ways to portray desperation of the narrator without confusing the reader. Also the story seemed to give little attention at all to the titular 'It', preferring to focus soley on the 'last man on earth' trope.

1/10 - Good title, but start over from scratch