Talk:The Expressionless/@comment-26056034-20150129184742

I'm sorry, guys, but this is the most poorly written, unrealistic drivel I've ever read. AND I'm pretty sure I've seen the photo that accompanies this story on an old Twilight Zone episode from the 60s. Aside from the obvious cliche "I...Am...God..." garbage (why would God start killing kittens and people?!) there are the other glaring amateurish contrivances:  Why would this thing walk into a hospital and collapse if it's God or a demon or supernatural? People fled in terror but no one called the police? This thing was covered in blood! Why would it allow them (the hospital staff) to clean it up and change it but take sudden umbridge to being sedated? It was so enraged by THAT part that it started killing people! Oh, and it "cracked" it's neck on its shoulders to look at the doctor? I imagine a fakey "The Grudge" girl here. And the smile is cliche and pointless. This isn't scary! It is every bit as contrived and over-the-top as any B-flick horror movie with the same ineptitudes and inconsistencies in storytelling. I don't think I need to mention it because it's clearly fiction but it's all over the internet now and people are starting to ask just how real it is. IT IS COMPLETELY FICTION! There are no names, no real date or time, no records to back the story, no newspaper articles. This is a complete fabrication for any who might be thinking it's real! Sorry for trashing your story, whoever you are that wrote it, but it really is horribly written and cliche and contrived to the point of nausea. That was the part of the story that made me "vomit" and "flee in terror". Sorry.