Talk:Its Red Grin/@comment-5886533-20140216230250

Such a great pasta. You switched seamlessly from one narrative to another with the journal (a hard skill to master) and accuratley portrayed what a place like the farm would be like in both the 60s and modern times. The main character even reminded me of myself in the begining. Your characters were well-developed and you had very few gramatical errors. My favorite part was the ending. It was an amazing twist, and worded in just the right way. 9/10