Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4849011-20160604033711/@comment-26326346-20160725081653

The grammar all looked good, I have no complaints. I really don't have a whole lot to add since I commented on the first part; I'm really interested in seeing more of Daniel's therapy/recovery. I'm still enjoying the pasta and I like being able to spot bits of you in it; the movie choices of Sleeping Beauty and The Muppets, and them watching the game show and heckling the bad players for example (see, I pay attention every now and then XD). Good job!