Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26296007-20150412195108/@comment-25242837-20150415024639

Well, I think it's quite scary but I'm afraid of spiders so you might want to wait for someone who isn't to review it. I thought it was pretty good, but maybe you should add a bit more stuff like the hanging bodies to help it appeal to more people than just arachnophobes. It's pretty easy to freak us out whenever you mention a spider, so just wait for another review or two.