Talk:You Never Visit Anymore/@comment-25699447-20140712113108

Thank you, it's really nice to get feedback on my work. It's a story I've wanted to write for a while, and I could have done it more dramatically and more creepily... but it just turned out that the character voice was sad, rather than creepy.

I'm not sure about the ending, it may be a bit too abrupt, but I also wanted the reader to have their own reaction to the gore and creepy message, rather than pressing the mother's emotions onto them.