User blog comment:SnowBallCreepypasta123/why did my story get taken down/@comment-33470154-20180224212216

I have to agree with Hopeless. The character himself is flawed. The name HooDIE is somewhat of a cliche himself, and seems to act like an average supernatural killer. He just doesn’t pop enough. There’s nothing overly memorable about the character. He has little to no backstory, and is really just a large cliche. The idea of a killer in a hoodie is also somewhat overused, as they can be used to obscure the face or hide physical features. If your profile is HooDIE, then it’s even more of a cliche because he’s wearing a hockey mask, like, I dunno, 50% of cliched serial killers. I’d read the page on creepy cliches and create a new OC removing the overused content, and with a more decent backstory.

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