User blog comment:ImGonnaBeThatGuy/Help Me Focus (Or, What Should I Write Next)/@comment-5946174-20131211164952

"The Games We Play" seems like an interesting idea, but a person seeking shelter with a bunch of psychopaths after his or her car broke down has been done many times before. I wouldn't normally recommend writing a creepypasta like "Tyrma," but the descriptions used were simply excellent. If you were to post this, it certainly wouldn't be a bad idea.

"The House of Prophets" is about as unoriginal as one can get. In fact, the story Alarm written by CrashingCymbal sounds very similar to it. "Lord Love-a-duck" sounds more silly than creepy. "The Winter's Devil" sounds a lot like Beowulf, but with the Abominable Snowman. "The Movies my Father Made" doesn't look much different from "The House of Prophets," and "Keter by Horton Jupiter and His Swingin' Band" sounds mousy to me.

"Hollywood Babylon" looks pretty good, but "The Black Cow" is something that, in my opinion, should never be written. The cliffhanger of an ending the audience was left with in The Black Dog and Goat leaves one to his or her own imagination, which is really the best path to take. Honestly, Tyrma seems like the best choice.

TL;DR: I choose Tyrma.