User blog comment:TheAzumangaDaiohFan/I Finished Chapter 12 of My New Pasta! 11/2/15/@comment-4849011-20151104222657/@comment-4849011-20151106142947

I can understand that. I think a lot of writers on here should use the "less is more" approach. It depends on the situation, and I think it works for this one.

I think it would be good to have the samurai appear in this chapter. This is just me, but you could have a flashback to the story being told.