User blog comment:Underscorre/Jeff the Killer Rewrite Contest!/@comment-25547916-20151007014246/@comment-25547916-20151007170847

Thanks for the feedback, guys! I admit the beginning is pretty dry, but I felt like I had already strayed enough from the story so I kept it pretty generic. Glad you folk seemed to like the original JtK insert; I thought it might have been a bit much.