Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36162297-20180712172448/@comment-36162297-20180712202048

Thanks so much for bringing all of this to my attention! The mask similarity was NOT accidental, as the character will develop himself using the mask later on. So that part must remain.

He doesnt use his supernatural gift from the get go, as he sees no need for these people to be harmed if it can be helped. I will add in a nod to that.

I will have the interrogators try other methods before resorting to cutting.

Perhaps an aura will extend from the hostages kneecap to the womans, displaying a supernatural occurrence? This may help readers understand before it is directly explained.

I appreciate the feedback, let me rework this a little before i put a revised version up for critique!