Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20160902203638/@comment-28266772-20160907162646

Jake888 I was wondering if I'd be able to find out which story parts, in particular, were slow? I'm considering cutting out large parts of this story (much more than 100 words) and I'd like to know whether you thought the beginning (before he gets to the mine), the middle (as he navigates the offices), or the ending (the chasm in the mine) are the slowest parts?