Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27018401-20141110173203/@comment-27018401-20141116184428

Storm-Darchon wrote: you said you thought formating to be the reason it got deleted? well it may be because this could be mistaken for a "haunted file" pasta or a "haunted game" pasata both of which are blacklisted and not allowed.

also there are several points where you could change the tense and the word would fit, I.E. "I tried to shot him" to "I tried to shoot him" there are several of these kinds of mistakes that can easily be fixed and by fixing them improving not only the flow of the story but improving the quality as using the correct tenses could qualify as grammer and that can get a story deleted. Indeed.I fixed all the gramatical and punctuation errors in the MS Word document,hmmm i didn't take the haunted file thing in consideration since i'm kinda new in the creepypasta world and Wiki's in general and i'm not very good with this kind of stuff.Thx for the feedback!