Talk:BEN Drowned/@comment-24985364-20140527000435

Now, this is a pretty good Creepypasta! There's really no clichés, but the only one that bothered me the most was that Jadusable got the game from an old man. (I think that's how he got it :P) But, all Creepypastas are like that anyway. The vocabulary is great, and there's no lacking in the character's description at all. You could tell just by reading this, they took A TON of time in making this. In summary, this is pretty well written, and no big clichés! Well done!

9/10