Talk:Doyle's Game/@comment-35711173-20190716034940

I cleaned it up some because it isn't the typical JTK. The story actually shows some hope.

Is it now up to minimum quality standards for the Wiki? I'd vote yes, marginally. I also think that it stands as a story by itself? Yes, I do. This could be installment one of a series.

Unclepaco26,

I strongly suggest taking your next work to the Writer's Workshop in the forum before posting it to the main Wiki.

Dr. Bob