Talk:The First Time Hurts the Most/@comment-24460632-20140313162613

Great story! I usually get a bit thrown off if there isn't much character development and such but, there are some that just do better without and this is one of them.

Great detail to the story! It really set the ambience and legitmately creeped me out a bit.

I think the best part about this story were the depressive overtunes you used. It gave me (the reader) the sense of no hope and I believe, that's what carried the story.

I really enjoyed it! Nice work 7.5/10