Talk:Brock 305/@comment-24229645-20151121145620

1. It's miscategorized.

2. It drags on pointlessly, with unnecessary details about everything from the protagonist and his living arrangements to the behavior of his cat, which is never linked to anything to support the internal logic of the story. Actually, there is no internal logic to support.

3. It isn't creepy at all. It'd tedious and formulaic. It reminds me of something written by a kid whose teacher wanted the class to write original stories, and who finds an obscure book in the library and copies a story from it rather than doing any original thinking.

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