Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25825682-20150606141940/@comment-25825682-20150801003947

Thanks for the review and the advice. Although, I will say there were minor hints of the Viser family being Dutch (the lighthouse description is Dutch architecture, the name Viser is a Dutch family name), but I'll clarify it earlier that they're of Dutch lineage.

Now I picked Dutch because I did research and learned the Dutch had moved into Seattle years ago (plus I used to live there). In addition, I chose the name thing because I got sick of the whole technology transference reason, but I'll probably write some new way since I got a better idea.

To explain the abruptness, I was tentative on writing too much. Anyway, like I said thanks for the feedback, the edit and review might be a while as I have a lot of projects to do before the semester ends, considering we were assigned it late.