Talk:NoEnd House/@comment-6862307-20140202173723

This was a good pasta. It was well written enough and had some good ideas, and was genuinely creepy - though there were some quirks, mainly a sense of repetition in the writing, which was otherwise fine. I'm mainly talking about the continuous use of phrases like "This was the worst room" but then saying "If only I knew what was coming next." It works as a good, suffeciently creepy omen - but only once. When you keep using them over and over, it defangs the sense of dread a little in my eyes. Beyond that, this was a good story.

8.0/10