Talk:A Party in a Church/@comment-28494448-20170316132158/@comment-29419724-20170513200300

Here is my creepypasta if you could not find it here it is i really need a narrartion for this creepypasta lol anyway's here it is. The Smiling BoyThehightemperedgirl ok so i have been trying to make this pasta but you guy's keep banning it.Please i wan't it back no matter if it has bad grammar i want it back it took me so long just to put my story together and im pissed about this please make my story back up.

I wake up unto a warm and cozy bed, my eyes are still closed. The air is filled with the scent of caffeine and old house's odor. I open my eyes and I see the wooden boards that makes the ceiling. They're grey, which means that I'm inside of an old house. I try to rise to sitting, but I feel weak and exhausted only by moving my arms. Now I notice the classical music, which plays on the background. "Hello?" I ask. "Is someone there?". I saw a boy, or teenager, or man, he ran after me with a boeing knife, i tryed throwing the hammer's and other thing's but it didn't hurt him at all. He grabbed me by the neck and stabbed the boeing knife into my arm and then he kicked me. I passed out and I woke up I never saw him again.

Michael and his family the boston's haved just got 600 dollar's from a lotterty. Michael has 1 brother his name is Jackson he had a sister but she was adopted when he was 5 michael had been depressed ever since then and he had feeling's he never had before like a kill feeling and he alway's laughed when he talk's about it.It was odd for his mom and his brother but they tryed to help him with everything they could but nothing worked so they just gave up for no reason. Michael went to the bus stop he saw a new student just sitting there reading a book "Hello?" Michael said "Who are you?" "I'm new here my name is Rubin" "My name is Michael.." michael sounded nervous.The bus just pulled in and michael said "bye.." as he went to school he has a invation for a party at pizza street he sighed "Why is everyone going to pizza street? like what the hell it's not even that popluar like it used to be." Then he heard a voice it  wasn't  like a normal voice it was a deep demon-ish voice it said "Michael...It's my turn.." Michael got a little more nervous he thought it was his imagation as he went home no one was there he thought "Well good time for me or lucky me heh.." as he wen't to the kitchen he saw a boeing knife he picked it up and it was shiny he tryed to do some cool move's with it as his mom pulled into the driveway michael hid the knife in his pocket and said "Heh jackson is asleep he won't know what i have in my pocket." .The next day.Michael bring's a red marker to school and he wrote on his locker "Smile for me!" he knew it sounded creepy and that's how me liked it.The party was tomorrow and he was not ready for it all he had was a black long sleeve shirt and blue jean's he was not ready for the party.It was just gonna be the kid's and no parent's there but michael didn't mind he was in highschool but he thought again "Why pizza street? we are in highschool can this shit get any worse?.".The party. Michael had his shirt on and pant's he was sitting alone and drinking a Budlight then after he wen't out of the building he saw this dark alley he never seen before he thought he should go down there to see what is going on.Then these 3 people aim gun's they demaned for money micahel did not know why as he started agruing with them the 'Gangster's' were threating michael "Give us the money or we shoot you little shit." michael said and ,said he had no money they shot him michael did not know why but he felt his body getting cold and blood getting hot. An hour wen't by he woke up feeling like he was possessed he kicked he screamed blood was streaming down his mouth. Then with a creepy long smile and black eye's and red in the center of them he forgot he had his boeing knife in his pocket.He wen't home and walked up to his mom's room and said "Smile for me!." then he stabbed her in the stomach and cut 'tsb' into her back his brother jackson was still awake and michael busted the door and said to his brother "You are a disgrace to this family you ugly peice of shit." and then stabbed him 7 time's.After that michael ran out of the window breaking it and ever since then he has been a mass killer. The reason why michael turned into a killer is because he was possessed by a demon that crave's the soul's of innocent live's sorry if i have missed a couple of word spelling's but please atleast give me a second chance if i fail this one.