Talk:The Real Monsters/@comment-29507836-20161012103401

I liked it, however it is a little bit confusing and too vague. For example, why did the narrator have his "prisoners" in his basement? Who was doing the killing, the monsters or him? I feel that this is too confusing and needs more explanation to it. I liked the descriptive way you wrote the story and how you made it seem that the narrator was really afraid of monsters.

I rate this a 6/10.