Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10319977-20141211171540/@comment-10319977-20141211171759

Just a heads up, DON'T list "lack of paragraph spacing" as a readon for this pasta being removed. As I breifly stated at the header, the second time I posted this, it had proper paragraph spacing, and it will next time I try to post it to the story list.

If I only need to go to the re-appeals section, just tell me so. I just don't have time to do that at the moment so I'm looking for critique while I'm away.