Talk:The Bronze Image/@comment-25941663-20171128141441

I have mixed feelings about this. On one hand, it had amazing build-up, but at the end it all fizzled. That ending, I am afraid, was a huge disappointment. I was awaiting something terrifying, and I was left with the image simply being using as a missile against an assailant.

Everything else is great, the atmosphere and language reminded me of Arthur Conan Doyle, which is amazing. The ending though really drags this down. I would like to see more of you, as you seem to have great potential!