Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20150303214112/@comment-25148755-20150309000347

"The strand wasn’t a natural barrier" think you meant "stand"

"Over the years, many people had brought the Old Gardner Place" change "bought"

"Kevin managed to get nearly half the camp on the sleepover scheme" "in on the sleepover scheme"

" there were dozens upon dozens of these creepy painted devils doing various things of whimsical and silly fun" awkward phrasing

"Seriously, it was like something out of an 80’s slasher flick, all that was needed now was an ice cream truck playing that creepy circus music, over and over again, and being driven by that Pennywise guy from Stephen King’s IT, and the nightmare would be complete" make two sentences "Seriously, it was like something out of an 80’s slasher flick.  All that was needed now..."

"Evil Dead demons" those are called "deadites" if you care.

All for now!