Talk:Holder of Fortune/@comment-24127622-20131104215947

I would recommend adding a little more risk into this challenge; many of the objects have immensely difficult challenges (many which focus on luck) and have little payoff from the object they receive, or even facing consequences.

I would also recommend that this holder impart some truth of life/reality/humanity after the seeker asks aquestion (as has been done in the others). Have the seeker ask some question of the nature of the calamity and the nature of Them. I would do some research as to what may be asked, due to the enormous amount of these stories and it would be quite easy to repete one on accident, then have the holder respond with something along the lines of "he then spoke of the many fortunes lost from games of chance; lives ruined, families torn asunder..." to fit with the themes of the rest.

Not quite ready imo