Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20160621031515/@comment-26475800-20160621160749

Thank you for your feedback. Trust me there will be a good number of strange things that pop up while reading this, I haven't even started editing it yet. As soon as I finished writing it I posted it here so you will some things like nitrogen being changed to hydrogen. I wanted to get a feel for how well received it will be, but if you want to help me edit it by pointing out things I'm not going to complain.

Thanks for taking a look at it and I look forward to how you feel the story is overall.