Talk:Alone with My Thoughts/@comment-28716546-20170802100916

First Entry Ten years ago
 * thinking:

Also, they should've died from starvation by now. In 10 years, it doesn't matter how much food there is, It would've definitely spoiled by now. Even if it's in a refrigerator, they said that the power was out, so that wouldn't be any help.

I wish I could tell you my name and age, but I can't. I don't remember.
 * 1) It's only been 10 years, you wouldn't forget that.
 * 2) And if they know it's 10 years, why can't they go from that?
 * 3) AND if they've been writing in a diary for 10 years, wouldn't they think to write it down at one point.

I am walking through the Capital of the U.S. I can't quite remember its name
 * 1) If they forgot its name, how do they know it's the capital.
 * 2) Washington D.C is written all over everywhere in America, in TONS of book which could survive over millions of years, not just 10. If they're IN Washington, they wouldn't HAVE to look to see its name.

I guess the food does taste kind of bad now. Case in point.

that one guy… who was important… oh well it doesn't matter now does it? Thank god Trump is gone.

As I am writing this I am looking at Earth's twin moons Uhh... I'm gonna assume this is her insanity here.

I think a daughter is a kind of human but I can't remember DID YOU JUST ASSUME XIR GENDER

sideways triangle A sideways triangle is literally just a triangle.

President Atwood Did Trump get Trumped?

just look to the sky and you will see us right by Earth's moon This is a great Chekov's Gun with the twin moons bit.

Overall this is an amazing creepypasta which deserves to be famous. This review is designed to pick out the bad or meme-worthy bits, so don't let it get you down. Keep writing.