Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25073641-20151031060700/@comment-27012445-20151031073735

You did a really interesting thing by bringing tension to a chatroom. Very impressive. Ironically I think the weakest character is God. When he speaks it should stand out. Sorrow or anger should be pouring out of him, he came off as flat and did not merit the uncomfortable feeling the others were verbalizing