Talk:The First Snow/@comment-5306249-20191206220454/@comment-44524533-20191206232459

Agreed. Perhaps you can write, "Cherryshrub was blanketed in deep beds of frost." Precipitation is unnecessary. Good, otherwise. Interesting! I don't like anyone to feel discouraged when little things are pointed out about their writing, so that's why I often mention that "Fifty Shades of Grey" started on a website like this, with feedback from fellow readers/writers. Always listen to feedback. =)