Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31007883-20170110091856/@comment-27012445-20170113204420

I will make this short and to the point. You need two things. One: A cohesive story to actually review...not pieces...not parts..a comprehensible plot that conveys a sense of what I am reading and keeps my interest, so I will keep on reading. Two: you need to show some manners and a little bit of gratitude that someone took time out of their life to read your story and offer you some advice with only the good intentions of helping you realize whatever story you are trying to tell.