Talk:Good Doctor Locklear/@comment-25471033-20180716203833

This was really good. The concept was outstanding, and even though it shifted a couple of times, it did so in a smooth way. I like how the entire time, you think he is an innocent man who did nothing wrong, and then you find out that he's not as innocent as you thought, but then you found out it was for a somewhat good reason. I also liked the amount of detail you used, it painted a picture, but it didn't go into gruesome detail about something that should scare you, like the gore, what the picture looked like. The only problem I can find is what looks like words left out. A quick read-through could fix it, thought. 9.7/10!