Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26572345-20160410175507/@comment-26572345-20160414182609

Derpyspaghetti wrote: I would like to say that people may be slightly put off by the legth of the pasta. It might be an idea to edit it so it's shorter, but I haven't read it. I'm pretty sure I could knock it down by a couple of hundred words, but I made sure that whatever's necessary in the story is in place. I'll see if there's any waffle that can be removed, thanks for commenting.