Talk:Your Body and You/@comment-26007602-20150612071906

Saw this in the Writer's Workshop and found out you already posted it. I rarely comment outside of the Workshop and just wanted to let you know that I thought this was a pretty damn good story. I'd nominate it for PotM if it wasn't NSFW (And I don't think it really is). The main character was great and the whole story behind Charlie Baker was quite intriguing. At first I was disappointed at how the VHS didn't play into the story more and then I realized that the story isn't about the VHS. The whole "Seeing the Devil" thing was a bit... meh, but other than that, I thought this was fantastic.