Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-8674030-20141030052726/@comment-25590539-20141031055805

i cant help you with grammar since mine is horrible

but the story was great i liked it but the ending was a bit too kind for a creepy-pasta i mean they just died and they are going to heavean? just like that? it would be better if there was something else on the other side. maybe it wil take him back to the past to relive the events until he snap