Talk:The Bloodstained Willow/@comment-5733573-20180427203141

I didn't like this, unfortunately. I wanted a lot more from it. It doesn't seem to say anything. The willow tree's anthropomorphism is never explained in a satisfying way, which I think is a big missed opportunity for extra tension and creepiness. Also, there are too many unnecessary details and not enough suspense. Everything is just kind of handed to the reader. I would love to see what this becomes if you develop it more.