Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20180409042210/@comment-9041013-20180409122118

It is as you said, silly and rather pointless. While being rhythmically and aesthetically fine the content is lacking. It's just there and by the end it should be more annoying than terrifying to the protagonist. Why wouldn't he have someone else break that Jack? because the silly cliched theme wouldn't work.

Also an annoying toy a kid "tortured" himself (by not telling the adults) doesn't make you fucked up.