Talk:Sandstorm/@comment-24040907-20140711050133/@comment-24040907-20140713082405

You know, it's a sign that you're a good writer when you're never satisfied with your work. That's good. Never stop improving! But just know that it takes a good writer to also be proud of his/her achievements. I loved all of the themes and ideas behind this story, and I think they agreed with each other nicely, and I think this story would be even better if it were longer. If you want to read a story with clashing themes, check out Samsbury Blues (I think that's what it's called) on this site ;) If you do happen to make a revision, just drop me a message and I'll come check it out and write a revised review : D

P.S. I wouldn't say my critique is "valuable". Perhaps "mediocre" or even "rudimentary" ;)