Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36815674-20180919161410/@comment-9041013-20180919173843

The idea isn't bad at all, but it needs to be re formated and polish quite a lot. It's not a very original one, but nonetheless whenever executed wisely it's still a good one. Now you'd have to find a way to make it seem less forced. It just feels like you didn't do your "reaserch".

I think you should go over the most successful ghost stories in CP universe and check out what makes them tick for you, from there on come up with a nice way of putting on paper.