Talk:Dumb Luck/@comment-26030957-20160102180031

Awesome! I just love this pasta.

You took a pretty basic concept and twisted it up, made it so dark and edgy. Little details like the demon's " massive throbbing erection . . . leaking out spoiled yellow mucus," give such a macabre touch.

The writing was top notch, very well executed.

And that ending. Ah, man, to be stuck in eternity, holding your naked, retarded mother on a leash. Whoa, gruesome. Fucking, killer story, bro. Good job.