Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-33470154-20180224210439/@comment-34090365-20180601032929

No, this isn't good! In some aspects, it's even worse than the original! It's so forced an contrived, and very well deserves to be on the Trollpast Wiki! You are a dumbass for thinking that it's good. I'm writing several of my own stories (a fair number of them being original Creepypastas). Just look at these videos as for just why this story is shit (as well as a look at a --somewhat- better version of the story)!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EY8ptXkh42I&t=4494s

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cW04Lr7S298

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yCDkriGdVMc

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IxU9sh-zknQ

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dt7dHOzV8qY