Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25941663-20150110180031/@comment-25941663-20150110222745

I didn't aim to make this story creepy, I just wrote down my thoughts. I know this seems weird, posting it on a site called Creepypasta, but anyway...

About the visuals, I have to admit I had a lot of trouble wording it, but in the end I just wrote whatever popped into my mind. I guess what I was trying to picture is this:

The protagonist is under a bed (I don't want to say that he is under a bed), laying on his/her back. I write: ' You look at your right '. So, because the protagonist is laying on his back, he is now facing the side of the bed (from the inside). Extending his hand, he touches the part of the blanket that extends beyond the edge of the bed.

I really don't know how to word that differently, without giving away the ending.