Talk:Hollow Heart/@comment-27007772-20150221002538/@comment-27007772-20150221031003

I didn't deduct from the score for the "no leg soldier" thing. It's just something I thought was odd, seeing as I made the (wrong) assumption you took the original tail and made it take place in real life.

The held my attention VERY well, and you are a very skilled writer, the issue wasn't with either of those. The issue is that by the end, I was saddened by the story than creeped out.