Talk:Turn the Crank/@comment-25122088-20140706015416/@comment-10108414-20170914081446

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. However, looking back all these years later, I feel this story was way too detailed and beat around the bush a little too much. I've been trying to improve that in my writing over the years. I actually recently returned to the creepypasta community with a (hopefully) better story. It's titled "The Hoarder" and is listed under the Diary/Journal section. I'd love to get your feedback and see if I've improved. ^^