Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181007064441/@comment-9041013-20181007162935

Well definitely seems like you should write a novel style story. I mean, you're already doing that.

The feels section of your story is well written, though did not make me well up, probably because of my own personal experiences in life, nonetheless it was good. This would work for most people I guess. Also nice how you tied in the Book of A g o n y to this part.

You keep on repeating the same mechanical problems, not capitalizing "Ben", some weird phrasing and repeatetive sentences (at the end).

All in all, still good, still fun.

Wyrms are fun.