Talk:My Dear Alyna/@comment-26234559-20150704213311

Really enjoyed this Creepypasta. To be honest, this story had me intrigued throughout and I love the different interpretations the story had.

Like somone said below. I believe that the Father had a vision of killing the doctor, nurse and his  daughter when the doorbell rang.

Had a few mistakes, that I fixed, throughout the CP but other than that, it's an 8/10 from me. Great job! :)