Board Thread:Pasta Ratings/@comment-6886750-20130305013106/@comment-6953497-20130306040956

Ok first this was amazing I loved it and I believe you hava talent but I do have some critisicm towards it. First it is really original I gotta admit but I study psychology and I can tell that for a person to have changed from zero to serial killer is impossible so maybe you should write about what happened that changed his mind to become a serial killer. And lastly I think the end was a bit rough I mean yes its cool that the building had fallen and all that just overall I think it wasn´t such an original idea. On the other hand if you ever wish to create a creepy pasta with someone else I am always available (message me if interested). I also encourage you to keep trying you have talent writing. Keep on it! Good Job!