Talk:A Figure in the Fog/@comment-24196787-20151021173340

Ok, that was quite the read, and it definitely has that creep factor that some CPs fail to procure or just miss entirely. Going back to the guts of the story, once the "monster" or "villain" was introduced as a fog monster (LOST, anyone?), it had my attention, because I tend to love CPs with a supernatural or un-natural figure as the antagonist.

Jamie, as a protag, seemed a bit shallow, with less character buildup than I'd hoped, but solid nonetheless. Lester is there as the annoying little brother, and the one who, in the end, gets caught, and makes our main character go back and get himself killed(?). Morgan I like, mainly because she's not there as the Daphne (forgive my archaic reference) of the group, and actually has a fairly major role in the story. Claire, as a rule, doesn't have much character in the story as she disappeared before the events within the story.

And on to my first reaction of Lady Wicker. I started to read this at like 5 in the morning, still pitch-black inside and out, aside from the small amount of moonlight leaking in. She's definitely got the creep factor going for her, as (my mind tends to be a little too imaginative) it actually felt as if someone were watching me as I laid in bed reading some random creepy pasta. And yes, that's the way I love to read them, in the middle of the night.

"A Figure in The Fog"

My rating: 11/10 - Would recommend to friends.