User talk:ThatCreepyGirlOverThere

This is a warning to all young men, aged 15 to 25. If you meet a young girl who is exactly what you want and seems too good to be true, don't trust her, she IS too good to be true. Here's the story...

Me and my best friend live together, I'm a girl, Tom's a guy, we're both single (just friends) and just finished college. Tom is a hopeless romantic and is always talking to me about wanting a girlfriend and what type of girl he wants etc etc. By now I swear I know every inch of his dream girl.

So we decided to go to the café to try and get him a girl. We still live on campus and the café is always full of college kids, newbies and regulars. I tell Tom where to sit as I go to wait in line to get our coffees. After about five minutes I go back to the table where there is an unexpected guest sat with Tom. "Um, hello" I say, confused. "Oh, Kat, you're back! This is Sophie, she couldn't find any free tables, so I said she could sit with us, if that's ok with you" Tom explained. "Oh, uh, sure" I reply cautiously.

A few minutes later I finish my coffee and I finally get the chance to study Sophie as she talks to Tom. There is something strange about this girl, she is average height, wears casual clothes, has long wavy brown hair, and a pretty little "I'm innocent" face. This is Toms dream girl, I know it is, she's just as he's described to me hundreds of times.

"Thanks for letting me sit with you guys, but I have to go now, I'll call you later Tom, bye Kat!" Sophie says as she looks at us. Then I notice something strange about her eyes. They are grey but seem cloudy, they have black wisps of mist in them, it's quite unsettling. She leaves and I can immediately tell that Tom likes her. He's gazing into space and is completely oblivious to the world around him.

Before I can say anything Toms phone flashes and beeps, she texted him, already! Tom explains to me that she wants to meet him at the park tonight at 9. Obviously I don't want him to go because I really don't trust this mystery-dream-girl-out-of-nowhere. I tell him to go and then decide with myself that I will go and spy on them.

It's 8:45pm and Tom leaves in his car, I leave 10 mins later. When I get to the park I quietly get out the car and stand behind a tree twice the size of me. Tom and Sophie are stood under a single lamp post which illuminates their faces, they are unusually close to the trees, away from the road.

I watch intently as I see something terrifying. Sophie leans closer to him and gazes into his eyes, I squint as I notice her eyes turn grey, no pupil, no white, just grey with black spiraling clouds. Fear takes over me as black mist seems to flow from Toms eyes into hers. When all of the strange mist has gone into her, Tom falls to his knees, mouth open in fear, eyes completely white. Lifeless, he falls to the ground as four mysterious black smokey figures appear around him and engulf him. When they vanish, he is nowhere to be seen.

I can't believe my eyes as they start to well up with tears. Sophie then changes, her hair gets shorter and turns blonde, as well as going straight. She gains freckles but keeps the sweet and innocent look of her face. As soon as she leaves I dash home, horrified by what I've seen. I cry on my bed when I get home, scared and lonely. Once I control my tears, I get the laptop out and do some research. I find something about a monster that feeds on souls and takes many different forms, it also uses it's victims souls to help it hide the evidence.

Shocked and upset by everything that had happened and what I had learnt, I decided to write this, in hope to save some innocent people from, The Soul Thief.