Talk:Burgrr Entries/@comment-5783934-20170124030147

If I were to write this all over again, I'd probably cut down a lot of the "video gamey" monster-fighting action toward the end, which was pretty much just padding. Part of me also feels like it's a way better, more legitimate horror story for just the first few entries before it gets all wacky, but the wacky Meat Factory Wonderland adventure was pretty much the original idea I worked backwards from.