Talk:Amara/@comment-26054278-20160428012947/@comment-26054278-20160428021429

It is good to hear you appreciated it; as I am not entirely familiar with reviewing poems (I believe this is only the second one I've ever done), this was a very different thing to approach and I had to think about general poetic flow.

I saw that there were some moments where it was trying to heighten the drama (the beginning and ending are the most clear points of that), but I'd say that love is a powerful emotion, and that much of poetry is much more dramatic than this pasta. There are many epic love sonnets and compositions about heartbreak, and in comparison to some of those, this isn't especially dramatic, so I didn't take much issue there.

I must apologize for how late this was review was. For the past few months (if not longer), I had kinda slowed down with school coming back and then everything just became a mess to juggle around, so I feel an apology is necessary (as you requested I critique your story back in 2015).