Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26210141-20150315210035/@comment-26210141-20150319201814

Hi there Shadow!

Thanks a lot for your reply,

It is true that one can only review the full version of my story. Still though, I posted this for feedback on my writing style, I was wondering if it fits the creepypasta style (and of course if it is a good read).

When you wake up, you aren't dreaming anymore, the only thing left is you and your imagination. When you think you see or hear stuff at that time, it is you imagining things. At least, that's my take on it. I'll surely have to elaborate it, thanks for the tip!