Talk:Don't Swim on Sundays/@comment-32092872-20170723233107

One of the worst Pastas i have ever read I was laughing so hard at how stupid it was the beginning seemed ok I thought it was starting to be great but then took a u turn on to the side of bland and terrible writing and story. Why would the grandma tell the kids such a story that would send them nightmares did she forget they were children and told them a terryifying story to them it seems out of character for a grandma. Also how was the story told when the kid died and the fish disappeared. This also predicts the ending like totally no kid would jump in the water and get eaten by a fish HOLY SHIT he got eaten by the fish how could I see that coming (I love being sarcastic) How was the story told appearently the had a laptop beside him and the fish has wifi just a stupid pasta. Atleast the couch tried to be good this was just awful and horrible 1.5/10