Talk:The Cats of Juniper Valley/@comment-28494448-20160810233654

I do like a good monster story every now and then with my horror. Some of your sentences are a bit fragmentary and would be stronger when combined, but I personally like slow builds. It paints a picture and a world for the story to exist in. You open up with a short introduction about the aftermath, the cleaning up of the creatures, which gives us enough of a taste of what's to come to color the rest of the story. We already know something is going to happen and taking several steps back isn't a hardship. I really did enjoy reading this story. I wanted to let you know that I made a narration of it too.