Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140730060157/@comment-25148755-20140731045534

You bet. I know its tough getting constructive criticism sometimes. Feel free to reciprocate if you have the time and inclination!

As far as your "problem" giving too many details, do you mean that you find you give too much detail in your writing which bogs it down, or rather that you prefer things remain a little ambiguous so the reader can make their own interpretations? If it's the first, I wouldn't worry about it because you're style is smooth enough to allow a bit more detail than what you currently have. If it's the second, I completely agree (although I think you can give a bit more here and still leave that feeling of unknowing.)