Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27842609-20160221193037

(Creepypasta)   BASED ON A TRUE STORY

I have a question?

This is why I am posting this. Well anyways here's the story.

The Nightmare:

A couple months back I had a weird nightmare so I am going to tell you about said nightmare. What I'm trying to get to is that after I moved into my new house in August I had the weirdest dream or say NIGHTMARE scarier then any Five Nights At Freddy's jumpscare could ever be. It starts out something like this... I wake up in a house that is my own. I go downstairs to find the light still on. I thought that was perculiar since it was late in the night. Even weirder my best friend was there well, I think best friend it might've been some old relatives. Anyways my best friend or relative had a noose around his neck he or she walked off my table and suffocated via noose. Then the cross in the living room turned upside down. Immediately I knew what was happening. I ran out of the house so I wouldn't get caught in this demon's trap. The nightmare ends. I wake up sweating super hard and shake it off.

After:

After the nightmare I got up in the morning check my downstairs and it's nothing like it was in the dream. A month later I went to bed with my laptop left on. I woke up. My laptop was off and what I thought I saw at the end of my bed was my mom her eyes wide. Psycho eyes I call them. Staring straight into me. I try to fight the childish urge to put the covers over my head, it dosen't work though I take the covers off and the eyes are dangerously close to my face. Who knew eyes could freak me out so much. Later since we are part indian I ask my mom to help me burn sage around the house. Since then I felt better, in other words this is real.

This is my first shot at a creepypasta if I could have some help editing parts improving the story in any way I would be grateful Thanks <3  