Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27037434-20151206022045/@comment-26399604-20151209151402

Hi Awjeezrick,

The first red flag for your story is its presentation. Most people will not attempt to read the story because of how it appears as a "wall of text." This can be a bit of a strain to the eyes and distract from the its content. If you separate the story into smaller paragraphs it will allow readers to focus on the story's content.

Here's a link to Quality Standards to help.