Talk:The Wendigo/@comment-33337578-20171012065625

Just a few critiques to take away for future stories:

The plot advanced way too quickly for me to become invested in it

The fight scenes were very out of the blue, Im no professional but it usually takes a lot more before grown adult friends beat the heck out of each other

For people who go camping regularly they didn't seem to know anything about camping

They wouldn't leave the friend behind because then he'd either get lost or have to run to catch up and be even more out of energy

The guy turned to a brief spout of cannibalism way too quickly, it had only been a day

I was at no point scared of the Wendigo because there was no real build up to it appearing

Sorry but I have to give the story in its current state a 2/10, it has the very basic foundations for what could be a good Wendigo story