User talk:EmpyrealInvective

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Thank you for your advice. I appreciate it. It was my first story so I wasn't expecting good reviews. I'll try harder next time. --VxAbbyNekoxV (talk) 07:29, April 16, 2017 (UTC)Abby

SCP
So emps, I found this thing called the SCP Foundation. You may or may not have heard of it, (Here's the link), but it's sorta like the holders series, different authors and all, but they are different beings that have been found in the "Secure, Contain, Protect Foundation". So far it has about 4000 in all - so with your permission and theirs maybe we can move 'em over.

Do you hear that? That's the sound of forgiveness  Carl that's the sound of people drowning   That's forgiveness - screaming and then nothing   15:56, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Hey
Would you please delete my blog posts? I don't want them exposed anymore. Thanks.  James  Chapé  22:04, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Review
Hi Empy, always loved your reviews. Was wondering if you could review a story I've had sitting in the Writer's Workshop for some time that I'm still not entirely satisfied with. I'm not entirely sure if I can link something written on the Writer's Workshop but I will go ahead and try  The Unknown Chronicles: Happy Birthday (Needs Review). It IS part of an ongoing series, right now I'm mostly doing an origin story short for each of the members before delving into the entirity of the story itself. I think it's a more fun introduction to the events 

Thanks in advance, I'm not sure what it is that I dislike but you have a penchant for finding those flaws. 

-Icarus88 (talk) 20:43, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for reading and editing my story. I felt though that it belonged in the creepy pasta wiki but I see that you see otherwise. I know that there were some punctuation errors, such as capital letters being where they weren't supposed to be. I had this story edited by a friend of mine, he is a writing teacher for high school seniors, but I see now that we both missed some punctuation errors. Thank you again.

-Mj

Well crap, im sorry, it was the only Bambi Creepypasta i've ever seen, and i thought it would be pretty cool. And also, most creepypastas have shock value. So, can you guide me and tell me, what kind of creepypasta i should make? Those "Lost Episode" Creepypastas are pretty much my favorite genre so yeah... Is there anywhere else, related to Creepypasta of course, i could post it? And i want your opinion, was it atleast any good? NichProductions (talk) 23:57, April 20, 2017 (UTC)NichProductions

Skeleton Draft Up for Review
Hi Empy. So a few days ago, I completed a plot outline (skeleton draft) for a story I'm writing called Sunny Hill Farms. I had Raidra take a look at it and she seemed to like it. I was hoping to get more feedback on it before I write the actual story though. If you're interested in reviewing it, here's the link to it: (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pXUJ5XymCEICUFbPXYizAdLP71gJciNsKQN0aZOzNOY/edit?usp=sharing)

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  22:32, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reply to "I'll See What I Can Do" Message
Take all the time you need. I can always work on other things while I'm waiting. So just to be clear, what I sent you is basically a rough outline of how the story might progress so if there's anything that you feel needs to be changed, don't be afraid to tell me.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  23:14, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Oh... Fine, i will stop trying. You showed me that its a bad Creepypasta. Wow, incredible how i thought it would be good. Im never trying to post any creepypasta here again. I don't have the proper grammar for this site. Im such a dumbass. Im sorry, don't worry, you will NEVER hear of me here again. Sorry for wasting your time and this wiki's time, goodbye. NichProductions (talk) 00:35, April 22, 2017 (UTC)NichProuctions

Bubbles rework
Hi, (I'm still working out how all this works, so hope I'm using the right format for this comment...) you recently helped me out with some tips after my story Bubbles was deleted. You pointed out that the whole 'come and look at the haunted painting' thing was overdone as well as some mechanical and writing issues. I've taken it away and rewritten it, making a big plot change and (hopefully!) fixing the grammar issues. I've popped the revised version here http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:581038 If you had some time at some stage I'd be very grateful for your thoughts, & if you thought it might be up to a deletion appeal? Thanks for you help. --RandomShivi (talk) 09:44, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reply to "My Feedback" Message
Thank you for your feedback, Empy. Funny enough, I actually had an idea on how to give insight into his death, though I'm not sure it will be enough. So when the protagonist is at the grave, they will mention seeing a small plush teddy bear wearing a shirt that reads "Mothers Against Drunk Driving". It's a small detail but I think it would be a nice idea to include because graves will sometimes have things like flowers or little trinkets either on top of or around them.

"You might want them to do a phone interview or something before giving them the job to make it a bit more realistic." Thanks for suggesting this. I didn't really think of it because the job listing was on Craigslist so I didn't think things like that would happen with that site but maybe there's something I'm missing. After all, I've never taken a job offer on Craigslist before.

"Rabies isn't instant-onset so the protagonist can't know if Zack is infected or not. It actually has a period where no symptoms manifest until a few weeks after infection. Additional fun fact, rabies is almost always fatal once symptoms manifest as the damage has been done." Holy crap! I legitimately didn't know that. Though I think what I was trying to do with this was make the protagonist look like they weren't too farm savvy.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  16:39, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reply to "Who Was That Guy On The Phone?" Message
I remember selling an RCA tablet on Craigslist. I had a guy who was interested in buying for 25 dollars (the range I listed was 25 to 30 dollars) and I thought it was a good deal. We exchanged a few emails and I even talked to the guy on the phone and he seemed rather nice. We met in the parking lot of a supermarket and the exchange went down without a problem. To this day, it's the only thing I sold on Craigslist.

I decided to have Becky do a short phone interview with the protagonist. Here's what I have:

(4. They decide to respond to the post via email and send the poster their resume with their home address omitted for safety reasons. A couple of days later, they get a phone call someone named Becky who claims to be from Sunny Hill Farms. She says that she and her husband Roy liked the protagonist's resume. However, she says she would like to ask them a couple of questions. The protagonist agrees and Becky starts asking away. One of the questions she asks is, “Now I have a stack of other people’s resumes sitting in the office right now. So why should I hire you over all those other people?” The protagonist responds with, “Because I’m talking to you and they’re not.”

Becky then decides to move to the next question. The question she decides to ask is, “So a typical work day for us starts at ten in the morning until seven at night. Is this going to work for you? If so, will you be able to get to work on time?” The protagonist says that the hours will work for them and that getting to work on time wouldn’t be an issue for them, as they live right down the road from there. The phone goes silent for a few seconds as Becky thinks over their answers. Becky comes back on and asks the protagonist if they can start tomorrow. The protagonist says yes and Becky replies by saying that they’ll see them tomorrow.)

I based one of the answers on a speech some guy gave at my brother's award ceremony that I went to on Thursday. The actual exchange went something like this: "The man went to his filing cabinet and pulled out a stack of resumes. He put them on the desk and looked me in the eye and said, 'This is a stack of all the other applicant's resumes. Now tell me, why should I hire you over any of them?" The speech guy's response to the question was, "Because I'm here and they're not."

I might add more questions to that part if I think of any more but for now, I think it's good. Once I get to writing the actual scenes (not summaries of them), I'll show you them bit by bit.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  17:37, April 22, 2017 (UTC)



Okay
Okay i think i get something this time I corrected the messy one, if i do again have mistaker in my story i now corrected  i now know its not "Water" but "Winter clothes" i corrected that, so, if you find other errors it will be corrected has i said  for real this time no more arguing.|Solonor1987

Thanks
Okay i will see it thanks and i will correct. Solonor1987

Question
Is there a certain template or process that is recommended to users when they want to flag a pasta that does not meet the QS so that an admin can quickly find it?

Colouratura (talk) 04:02, April 23, 2017 (UTC)

Little fact
Well like i said i can't change the name of my character in the story because the same is said as English as well but without the "É" from the french word who mean "Élisa" translated in English its with a "E" for "Elisa", i also do the story on the french one it came out pretty well i didn't that i can find out that well i will see what it will done.Solonor1987

Hello, I'm new to writing for Creepypasta. I submitted my story last night, Zoology of the Island, and it's been deleted. May I ask what I did wrong and if there's anything I can change to try ot resubmit it? I'd really like to add my style to the community. :)

Ursidae97 (talk) 18:20, April 23, 2017 (UTC)

Hi! I didn't see another way to contact you (or I'm extremely blind so I'll do it through this.

I am quite a new narrator and I found your story "post-apocalyptic solitude" through some googling and was wondering if I could read it (and maybe more stories from you) for my channel? links will be given to both your story and your profile ofcourse and anything else you might want tot add to it.

Thank you in advance!

Khostic (talk) 12:18, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Heya. My story that was deleted a while back was probably riddled with mistakes (i was young) and i am not sure if i posted in the deletion appeal thread with crass or being rude. Sorry if i did -

However, little me was seemingly v. upset and deleted it off where it was written first on word. Is there anyway to get the story back or is it gone for good? (i would quite like to edit it)

thank you very much!

((I forgot to sign prev. message))

Hello- i added a story to this wiki a pretty long time ago, and was "little" when i did so. Id quite like to edit said story and was wondering if there was anyway to get it back?

Also, i apologise if i was snarky/rude etc on the deletion appeal, i was upset as i thought my story was good (dont we all) and i put a fair bit of effort into it. So, id really like to rewrite it (probably not for this wikia, though) if possible?

Stella Von Trott (talk) 20:49, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Stella