Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5952769-20170125115538/@comment-28428152-20170331174754

I like how you've added the hints that the narrator is either the sculpture or somebody controlling the sculpture, a new possibility that you've added nicely along with other possibilities, a nice addition that keeps the mysteriousness present in the story. And it's a good start with just some suggestions on my part that I think could strengthen the story.