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The first story was great and all but I think a rewrite will at least make his story... Alright...

A couple of changes I'd make would be get him bullied regularly, make him psychotic when he sees his face, don't make him white make him look burned and please don't burn his eye lids off... The smile you can't get rid off but the eye lids... Didn't make sense to me.