Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27707962-20160202051723/@comment-24101790-20160202060556

CreepyJon wrote: Frankly, I'd be happy to change the entire story to the same tense if it matters that much, but I feel like it adds a layer of meaning to the story and removing it would lessen its impact

Let's leave it as is for now and let some other people weigh in before making a decision. I just wanted to point out the issues I found so other users don't spend a lot of time pointing out the same issues.