Talk:Through the Scope

I hate to be the one to cry predictable, but really, it's a horror story and there are two targets. Great writing, though the paragraph starting with "The man must be" has some clumsy wording choices and tense switches. These are rather precise guesses for Wyman to make, based on absolutely nothing. I liked the description of the shot. Javer80 (talk) 23:56, August 29, 2012 (UTC)