Talk:The Fishing Trip/@comment-5632489-20150425022632

First things first, and this is purely a personal gripe, I'd remove the reference to Miskatonic University in your first scene. I love Lovecraft too, and I also love Lovecraftian writings (as everyone knows), but I'm not fond of the "Cthulhu Mythos" especially when people namedrop his original creations. That's just my opinion, so make of it as you wish, but I just thought I'd get that out of the way.

As for the story, I definitely enjoyed it. Though it all happened rather quickly (a bit too quickly at the end there I might add), the rich description helped to balance it out and I can tell a huge amount of effort went into this story. I also loved the train of thought of your narrator and his growing tensity as things on the ship get more and more grotesque.

I'll give this a 75/100. You obviously know what you're doing, and you clearly have great talent. I look forward to reading more of your works.