Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31283382-20160702021804/@comment-31283382-20160702152658

Frankly, I've seen some stories here that were far worse considering grammar than this one. As for punctation, I am unsure how should it work in English language (Hell, I am having trouble with my own), and so it would take ages to make it right.

As far as paragraphs are concerned, I just don't know how to break them down any further.

Just consider this; in my original post, every line of dialogue was a new paragraph, and I just had no patience to divide them all here.

Still, thanks a lot for your survey. I'll try to set things right, and I would be most grateful if you would point out some specific major mistakes, grammar or otherwise.

PS: My version of Windows is outdated so it doesn't have a spell check. And even if it did, my computer is hardwired for Serbian (and no one knows how to fix it), so any word in any foreign language, or even simply in Roman letters would be treated as a mistake.