Talk:Don't Eat the Sandwiches/@comment-34680017-20180516021413

New ending. “Cmon, are you sure you aren’t hungry?” She asked. “N-no.” I said obviously shaken. Suddenly, one of my cousins, collapsed. I looked around, and ran. “I need to tell the police.” I whispered to my grandfather, as I went by.

“Hello? Hello sir?” The man at the desk looks up to me, stunned. “Yes?” He says. “I want to file a report on a, uh, cult.” He put down his coffee. “I’ll be with you in a moment.” Suddenly a woman steps through the doorway. “What’s up Larry?” She looks at me and then him. “He wants to report... what was it?” “A cult.” I say. She looks at me and motions for me to come. “Do you have any information on this... cult?”

“You must be hungry.” She says. “Actually, yes I am!” I say. She puts a plate with a few donuts on the table. I grab one hungrily. “Mm... these are good, where are they from?” She smiles. “My sister makes them. She’s pretty popular where she makes them.” I suddenly stop chewing when I notice a small opal cut ring, in the shape of a moon. “What’s wrong?” She says innocently. “Lose your appetite?” She smiles creepily.

10/10 Great concept and good writing.