Talk:Jacko the Very, Very Bad Clown/@comment-5269370-20150828165202

I really enjoyed this, it was excellent. The setting of the story was absolutely top notch. The description of Jacko and the clowns has this weird and simple eeriely sad build-up, which is topped off absolutely perfectly when Uncle Woody tells Jacko how clowns can never be hurt. Then there was the killing, Jacko finally snapping after years of sadness and transforming into the clown he had always wanted to be. Excellent stuff.

The one thing I didn't like really was the ending. I find the idea of Jacko then turning into an evil/(mentally ill?) clown a little cliché. I mean, he tried for years and years to not be a bad clown (so to speak) and then accepts that he is one at the end. To be honest, I thought the idea of him now being happy and normal after committing such an act to be quite creepy, but this is just my view. Despite this, I did really like this. Well done.

8.2/10