Talk:Closing Time/@comment-26507513-20151112014510

This story wasn't that great for a creepypasta but if it was a true story then definitely creepy! It started off quite well but then it just kinda trailed off, I thought the noises may have been some insane butcher who "catches" his meat and the plit twist was the shop sold human meat. I was obviously disappointed. 5/10, I love your writing so try to create a better story :)