Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20161112234251/@comment-25148755-20161113000216

Overall idea is fine although you don't really have much to go on here...it's really just all setup. We don't see anything the monster is doing, no description of it really at all. Not enough to say "yeah go for it" but so far it seems like it could work. One thing I will caution is using so many apostrophes at the end of words. Nothin', shaken', writin' etc. I know you're going for an accent, but that's the thing about journal entries...people don't write with an accent.