Talk:Brother's Treasure/@comment-25153204-20141203020455

I'll comment. I give it an 8/10. Minor grammar and spelling errors throughout, but the overall story was well written and thought out. Not an original concept but definitely an original take on it. I found the younger brother's thoughts on things far more interesting than the older brother's, but his side of the tale was a welcome and refreshing way to answer my questions. I'd love to see a sequel. Proof read, have other's proof read, and proof read again but continue writing author.