Talk:Penpal/@comment-39589429-20190526002627

This story was pretty bad in my opinion the stalker seems to be fucking Superman or something, able to do all these things for years without being caught suspension of disbelief only goes so far. How did he get away with running over someone in public, How did he get away with killing some old lady he isn't subtle at all the also how did he steal the one girl at the hospital's phone. The structure of the story is all over the place we go from when he's 5 to when he's 15 back to when he's 3 It is just bad. The love story felt like a bad self insert and it was really cringy overall I'd say 4/10 not the worst I've read on here.