Talk:There Might Be Something Amiss/@comment-26113663-20150127141532

The ending was pretty cliche, but I like the way how it was well-written. The story unnerve me slight, effective enough. I suggest you to edit the ending, since it feels like it was rushed. But overall, it was such a great read. And welcome to the site!

8.5/10 | Cheers to that!