Talk:Infanticide/@comment-26835140-20161105041235/@comment-26835140-20161105170818

well, it's not that I hate your writing, it's that you didn't utilize your writing style. Your writing style is excellent! you use good, descriptive, and thorough detail in your writing. And the story of Dr. Coil is also quite interesting, but you told Dr. Coil's story in a way that had sort of made it dull. Revisions (some minor, some major) would help this story immensely and I strongly suggest that you go through that process (if you still care lol).