Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-2240864-20140612220044/@comment-24918243-20140612230630

Oh man...where do I start?

The whole bit about his skin being white because he got burned with bleach is dumb and unrealistic. Cutting off his eyelids is another gripe of mine, since anyone without eyelids would go blind...

Then there is the whole 12 year old bullies talking like Batman villians bit.

Actually, maybe it would be easier to jast talk about what to keep:

The line "Shhhhh. go to sleep" and maybe the way he looks. Other than that, trash it all.