Talk:Tryps/@comment-25947144-20161021211450

Finished. Heh, you really like apocalypse/disease themed stories, don't you? I think I've read at least five from you by now. Anyway, great job taking a seemingly simple, if a bit strange, phobia and making a full-blown apocalyptic scenario with it. Of course, the only thing that my brain was doing the whole time was finding implications of something like this (do their eyelids get holes, cause the eyes to dry out or maybe the eyeballs may get holes themselves, etc). Interestingly, the plot seems to fit the theme surprisingly well. And no, I don't mean it has plot holes. The plot descended in a way where, instead of much action, everything started to get more dull and empty until it ended. And I mean that in a good way. I'm sorry I can't tell you ways to improve, I usually tend to focus on positive aspects instead of critical analysis. Anyway, very good story, cheers.