Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31966463-20170614025802/@comment-31966463-20170620032601

Ayy, forgot to thank you for reviewing my previous submission. Really glad you liked it even though I can't help but think it was pretty weak. So thanks~

And yeah, I agree with a lot of what you said here. I'm really embarrassed by how lazy this short story came out. I'll redo this whole thing when I can. I just don't think these suggestions alone would be enough to save this story. I'll keep them in mind though. Thanks again!