Talk:Sorry/@comment-25052433-20190703224546

Not much to say on this one. It was fairly average with a long build-up and very little payoff at the end.

General Quality: (10) A lot of time was spent explaining that the main character was a drug dealer but honestly that aspect played almost no part in the story. He could have been anything with bad karma and the end would have worked the same.

Horror Factor: (20) This was the stories strongest aspect. The slow buildup of tension was well delivered. Sadly the ending fell a bit flat with the monster.

Lyrical Interpretation: (15) Elements existed and played a part in moving the story forward. Nothing overwhelmed though.

Entertainment Value: (10) The entire affair felt average. I wasn’t miserable while reading it but I wasn’t thirsty for more.

Total Score: 55/100