Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26308279-20150413133602/@comment-26308279-20150414055956

Author here. Just a side note, this is my first pasta to work on and it started as an idea of an innocent child eating "bread". Well, looks like the replies show plot-holes and no grammar corrections. Is that true? Just to confirm. I'm wondering at which part exactly was the cause for my pasta's deletion. I do intend to save my work but not to upload it to this site again.