Talk:My Mistake/@comment-4849011-20161202235706/@comment-26326346-20161204064738

Thank you so much for doing the grammar check for me :D I am grateful that you found it refreshing! I'd thought about not stating the victim's motivation at first, because it would likely lead to such a conclusion, but then I decided that I wanted the storyteller to be (potentially?) the first in a never ending chain of killers who are killed. Maybe the other way would have been better? I'm unsure. I wanted this to be the starting point of a potential chain reaction.

I'm plan to ramp up my writing quota, so stay tuned maybe? :D