Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25114240-20140703214715

I wake up as I here my alarm clock saying and a ringing voice"time to get up..time to go to school sleepyhead." I get up lazily and walk to the bathroom. Im yawning so much I feel like my mouth is going to fall off. As I start to brush my teeth I head in my living room looking out the window. I start to think 'Man, I have seen no one enter or go near the door of that church' I finally notice that my parents are already at work. So, im home alone. I finish up brushing my teeth. I fight my lazziness by pouring cold water to my face. I Head to my room putting my school clothes on like a normal type of morning. I walk up to the kitchen. I open the food cabinet. 'Nope, no bacon in here' I grab the bag of bread and slap them into the toaster. I still see that church again. This time, I here someone yelling out the window of the church. "HELP ME!!! OH DEAR GOD HELP MEAAHHHHH OH GOD PLEA-" then there is silence. I feel my body trembling of fear. My heart beats like a big drum being beaten. My toast is ready. I set it on the table. 1 minute later, I cant eat anymore.

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As I leave my house, I walk across the church. I see a dark figure. And it looks like... some kind of person.. I gulp and try to ignore it. But my head says "no I want to check the figure!! Forget school!!" I ignore it as hard as I can...but I cant. I see my school ahead. But then I here some wailing. Its coming from the church. It seems like it says 'You cant hide...you cant run...' I get scared and I run to school

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My legs get tired, but luckily I get to class. But im late. "Gia, you are late. Why?" Asks my teacher. "Sorry Ms.Baker I got out of bed late today." I reply. She tells me to forget it and tells me to sit at my seat. The person next to me is always curious about my life. I always wonder why. "Why were you late?" She asks. "you know that church across the street?" I whisper. She replies with a interested nod. "I heard some screaming out the window of the church.... painful screaming.  She looks at me with her supriesed eyes of hers. I ignore the eyes and get my head's attention back to class. 5 minutes later cless is over. Time for recess.

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Day dreaming about that church all recess I tell my friends kyla and Ashley. The both ask "why?" I both tell them why. Kyla gasps and Ashley's mouth stays in one type of way: open. I both tell them "im going to that church even I it kills me or not!" Kyla stares at me and says, "im going with you". I nod and get to lunch.

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End of the school day has struck and I start to look for kyla. I find her and we run to the church. We both stand there, trembling of fear. "Are you sure this is safe?" She asks I reply with a terified trembling nod. Every step we take, is like one step to hell. We stare at the door. My hands shake as I bring my hands to the door knob. My head says yes but my heart says no. But I open the door anyway...

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As we walk into the church, kyla and I spread out to investigate. I see... skeletons...EVERYWHERE... "GIA HELP!!" Its kyla's voice! "WHERE ARE YOU!?!?" "HELP!! ITS BITTING MY LEG!! AHHHH!!!!!!" I run to her. I find her leg apart from her and she isnt moving. I stand there "its all my fault...ITS ALL MY FAULT!!!"

DIE is the only word I can think of right now. I sit somewhere and cry. I see a shadow in the other room. It looks like its holding a knife. I get in the room I see a person. His head turns to me. I am frozen. My heart stops and I run upstairs. I jump out of the window (like I never even cared) as I hit the cold hard ground, everything blacks out............................1 hour later I wake up in a hospital. The doctor tells me that I had heart surgery and I just need to rest. I start to sleep. It was all my fault about my friends death.. 