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(I know its not Halloween yet, but i take me one week to do that story and tried to find what all characters would say.)

The night of Halloween 1915, a baby boy was born in the hospital, his mother has him in her arms has she looked at him with a smile, she see that it was a beautiful boy, since he was born on the night everyone that think it was the night of demons and monsters, his father look at him with a disgusted face and look at his wife before saying.

"This baby is a product of the devil and will be a demonic man eater!" that was the word of his father who was still look at the baby with angry eyes, but the wife responded "No he's not, i think he's a beautiful little boy" she said smiling at her baby, then her husband said "What???, are you out of you're mind dear???", but the wife shook her head and her husband then sigh, the mother look again at her baby boy and said "I will call him Derek" she said to her husband who look at her in disbelief.

In 1920, Derek then grew up has a wonderful little boy, when he got five year old in after his birthday, he was walking threw the park with his mother since his father refused to came with them and he see a other boy. Derek then walk toward him and said "Hi, i'm Derek and you?", "I'm Oliver" said the other boy, "Do you want to play with me!" said Derek with a smile and want to make a friend, Oliver answer him 'Of course!". The two boys were playing togheter has their mothers look over them, when a few hours passed it was time to go home, Derek take his mother by the hand, of course his father wasn't too happy and said "Where did you both go???", Derek look at his father "We went to the park" he said. "Again you desobeyed Melissandre" said his father to his mother in anger, "Duncan uor son need fresh air and make some friends" said his mother trying to get his father to calm down, "I told you to not let that cannibalistic demon child out!!!" said his father in anger and his mother then anrily said to his father "Duncan that's enough!" and she go to her room has Derek go in his room to avoid his father stare.

Of course Derek has wonder why his parents are always argue to each other like that, he didn't have the courage to sleep because his parents was still arguing, the next morning he was still going to see his friend, "Hi Oliver" said Derek with a bit of sadness in his voice, "Hi Derek, you look sad are okay?" said Oliver to his friend and Derek shook his head,. "What happen???" said Oliver to him with curiousity, '"Well my parents are always arguing to each other, my father doesn't stop treating me badly" said Derek has some tears in his eyes, "I am so sorry" said Oliver trying to comfort his friend, the two boys then play togheter Derek knew Oliver was his only friend because he didn't make other friend since him and decide to return home. Soon has he enter his home his father who was drunk ounched him in the and said "Where were you little demon cannibal freak", Derek look at his father with tears droppingdown his cheeks and answer "I was just playing outside with my friend", "Well you get you're mother worried, go to you're room and don't get out you little monster" said his father in more angry tone.

While still sitting on his bed Derek has wonder why his father was always against him, why he's he see him has a monster while he's not a monster at all, the door of his room open and his mother enter his room, she was holding her belly has it grow because she will have a second child, "Where were you been???" said his mother with worry eyes almost with tears, "sorry i was just playing with Oliver in the park" said Derek in tears and crying, "You're father get rough on you, right!!!" said his mother holding him, Derek nods has his mother tried to comfort him and said " I promise, I will not let that evil man hurt you again i am here to protect you!".

Well a few months later while his mother was taked to the hospital to gave birth, "I can't wait to see my baby brother!" said Derek to his father in the hall, but his father look at hin with angry stare and said "I told you to not thinking about seeing him", Derek then look at his father wondering why he doesn't want him to see his brother, the nurses then tell them to follow them to enter the room. Then Derek's father said "You stay there, I don't want you there to hurt him you hear me!" has he go in the room, Derek sigh he knew that his father never let him do what he want to do, but his mother then call him much to his father dismay, Derek enter the room and smile has he see his brother, "Derek this you're baby brother Joseph" said his mother in her bed has Derek come closer to look at his brother.

Years later in 1930, Derek was fifteen year old and Joseph was nine year old the two boys play each other, "Catch me!" said Joseph running front of Derek who tried to catch him, "You'll will noyt escape me for long" said Derek trying to catch him, has his father look threw the window and said to his wife "Look at those two, they prefer playing instead of work", Derek and Joseph's mother who heard it knew her husband was sarcastic and said "Leave the boys alone Duncan and let them play". Derek then catch Joseph and said "I'll go to tickle you!", then Derek tickling his brother and both boys laugh has Derek continue to tickle his brother.

During diner Derek was a bit lost in his mind, Joseph look at him and said "What's wrong Derek?", Derek look at his brother then said "Nothing I just tried to think", "Yeah think to why you're were born you demon!" said his father to him has everyone look, "Dad stop it!!!" said Joseph to his father who get more angry and put a knife at Joseph, Derek get up has his mother look with fear, "Dad don't dio it !!!" said Derek to him, "You stay out of it" his father said while pusing him. Derek grabbed his father arm, but his father then punched him in the face and said "Did i told you touch me, stay away from me and go to you're room now, Derek go to his room has Joseph go to his, his parents then arguing to each has Derek didn't find a way to sleep has he got tears in his eyes.

The next day he go his friend Oliver, because he need to talk to him about what happen and it was almost Halloween, after going in the house of his friend and talk to him, in the middle of the night Derek decided that he's going home,  has he arrived to his home his father was drinking beers again. Then Derek ask his father "Where's mom and Joseph???" , his father refuse to answer him Derek tried to see what wrong with his father, but his father get up and then beat him harder that he decide  to dragged him in the forest and continue to beat him, Derek was in pain has his father smashed Derek head on a rock and left him to died. Derek's body was discover the next day after his mother and brother see that he didn't came home, then everyone told the police that his father dragged him in the forest and killed him and Derek's father didn't denied it and got arrested.

On the night of Halloween a group of boys enter the forest where Derek was killed, one of them then said to his friends "Hey guys what you want to do tonight???", one of his friends then said "Well what about ghosts stories!", "I know one" then said a other boy to his friends has they look at him, "Well tell us how it begin" said the last boy looking at them ahas they sat on rocks and make a camp fire. Has they look at their friends, "Did you heard about Bloody Derek" said the boy to his friends and they all shook their heads, "Well he was a teenage boy just like us, but he was killed by his father who has believed that he was a cannibal and demon, so, everyone think that if you call his name he will attack you and eat you" said the boy to his friends, "Aww comeon you don't really believe that its true that's only a legend" said one of the boys in disbelief, has they still talking they heard footsteps and look around.

"what was that?" said one of the boys who jump down the rock, "I don't know" said the other boy going on his side and look a bit afraid, has someone show up front of them, they all see it was a boy who seem to be a teen like them, "I knew i heard voices" said the boy who just appear the other boys look at each other relief to see it was a teenager like them, "what are you doing there???" said the boy to them has they tried to find a answer, "Well we are a bit lost" said one of them to him has he was looking at him carefully. "Well I am glad to find you there, my name is Derek by the way!" the boy finally said by introducing himself to them, "I am Joshua and this are my friends" said the  youngest boy to him, "I am Malcolm, nice to meet you!" said one of the oldest boy, their two friends said nothing suspicious of this boy, "Well if you're really lost let me help you find the way" said Derek to them has they walking and Derek wanted to learn more about why they were there.

"I can ask you, what you're actually doing in this forest?" said Derek while he was still walking with the group of boys, "Well we decide to came here to tell stories" said Joshua to him has his friends look at each other while they walking, "What kind of stories?" said Derek looking at the boy curious to know, "Ghosts story!" said Joshua to him has they continue to walk in the forest even further, but they see that they were still in the forest and it was dark and then the boys started to panicked. "Wait, that's not the way of the village???" said Joshua to Derek has they realize that they might not get out of the forest, "Where are we?" said Malcolm terrified and lost, "Well you did came there and tell my story, didn't you" said Derek to the boys who all look confuse, Derek then turn around and show his true self and said "I am the demon of this forest waiting to get revenge on my father", the four boys look in fear at the creature who then replied "and you all will not make it out alive ever again" that was his last phrase has he he attacked the group of boys who scream in terror. 