Talk:Gray Steam/@comment-28578739-20160923004415

This was really neat and pretty well written. Not sure if it was intended or not (my apologies otherwise) but it was a unique way of depicting drug addiction as a whole; something that can cause so much pain and suffering yet so much joy and stimulation, with the temporary latter overcoming the long former. And of course in this case, it goes beyond - something is actually vividly and violently eating you. That kind of subtle desperation is eerie.

Anyhoo, really likable story. Good job!