Talk:The Simple Man/@comment-28463881-20160722060001

Woah. That was great. I really enjoyed reading this one here, it seemed simple to begin with (ah, see what I did there?) but as I read through it, I realized how interesting this story was. I do have a few critiques on it though. First of all, work on your spelling and grammar. Knowing how to create a good story is one thing, but make sure you spell things correctly. Take 'sceptic' for example. It's spelled 'skeptic'. This isn't really a major issue, I mean, you have a great story here that readers can understand, but it just looks prettier if you spell things correctly. Second, try to be less repetitive. You said he Tairq was a father 3 or 4 times, and you don't really want to repeat information too often, it might make your reader feel like you're mocking him/her. Other than that, I loved it, keep doing what you're doing. 9.5/10

TL;DR: Great story, just work on spelling and grammar and be less repetitive.