Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25891880-20141218232455/@comment-25891880-20150110013029

Okay obviously a first try never works (no that wasn't supposed to be a joke) I'm going to try to write a better one and with better care. I took your advice and now what I'm writing seems to make more sense, hopefully it goes good. Thanks for the advice

And no, this creepypasta was terrible, I'm not rewriting it.

I almost seem a little embarrassed about my story here, too. @Umbrello @Bettercriticals (I have no idea if you can tag people I'm just trying it at this point)