Talk:Walter/@comment-25941663-20170517122541

This was a refreshing little tale. Short and to the point.

I liked the little nod of the "this is not a murderous AI tale" thing. It was a very nice touch that fit the story and the tone perfectly.

The main problem is that it doesn't have much of a horror punch to it. It is nicely written, but as a plot it is not that creepy. I was expecting a little twist to shake things up, but it never came.

The ending also is problematic. It dragged on for too long. The story is short, and about 1/3 of it is the ending/resolution. That is not good. It seems like the narrator in the end rambles on and on, and that leaves a sour taste. A lot there could have been cut and the story would have been better.

Overall though, it was an interesting little piece with a nice voice. Apart from the lack of horror and the long ending, this is good. Kudos.