Talk:Hello, Sinner/@comment-26326346-20160417183952

This is a good story. The descriptions you used are particularly strong and gave me a clear picture/imagery of everything throughout the story. The note is disturbing on the level of we don't know if it has some sort of power or if Christian simply went insane. If the note does have some sort of power over those that sin and forces them to kill themselves, then everyone that comes across it is screwed because it is impossible for a human not to sin and that makes the story chilling, the inescapability of it all.

Again, great job. I liked the openness and ambiguity of the ending. My personal interpretation is that the note is making her go insane and that's why she found him in the closet even though she saw him buried. I'm going to go check out more of your work :D