Talk:The Baby Monitor/@comment-10357069-20140327144626

.....And? Seriously, what a weak ending. I liked the premise and you had good buildup, the twist was a little predictable but still good, but why did you have to go and end it like that and ruin it? It's so vague, like "oh yeah, he saw some stuff. scary stuff", you really just shot your story in the foot there. Rework it and make something actually happen at the end, and you'll have something good here.