Talk:Jeff the Killer/@comment-24597408-20140308015244

Good job, but:

- You need eyelids to keep your eyes moist, because every time you blink, there is a thin film of tears that keeps your eyes moist, so he needs eye drops to keep his eyes from drying out

- Also, the blood from the cuts would clot, thus giving him scar tissue where he cut his mouth

So, to sum it up, 9/10, good story, but you need to do a bit research first ;-). DO NOT TRY TO PROVE ME WRONG BY EXPERIMENTING ON ANOTHER PERSON! But enough with the critiques, really good story