Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190427100713/@comment-35711173-20190430082157

I've done a much more minor revision tonight. The purpose was to add to the creepy sauce factor.

The title comes from a gun I have. Somehow, that gun and the voice from one YouTube video just resonated in my head and came out as the original draft. It doesn't fit this story anymore. Any advice for finding something suitably "clickbait" that does fit?