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Disney's Hidden Depths

A couple of years ago, I discovered Disney's "club 33." Basically, from what i found on it, it's a club for a bunch of rich people that has a waiting list that goes on for literal years. My name is Garret. I'm a 20 year old grad student at Nothern Arizona University, majoring in paleontology, so naturally I don't have the money to waste on a Disney club. I got interested and started digging around as much as I possibly could. Sadly, I never really found much on it because of the whole "what happens in Vegas stays in Vegas" sort of rule of the place. What I found off though was that no matter what form of social media, webpage or forum I loked around on, I couldn't find a single person that had been inside or expireneced it. Or more acurately, people had chose descression for some reason or another. Anyway, the farther I dug, the more curious I became. The more curious I became, the more frustrated I was with the lack off information I had been recieving. Luckily, I had posted on a few forums asking about the place, and asking if there was anyone that had been in there. One of these various posts actually got a reply. I still talk to this guy today and we have become good friends since then. So, for disgression purposes, let's call him Noah. Noah had sent me an email that shot my hopes up high. He said:

From: Disneychan32@hotmail.com

To: Cretaceousrex@gmail.com

Subject: The Club

Hey Garret!

I saw your post on Quest for Answers. The reason you're not getting very much information on this place is simple. Disney has the power to take down URL's and links from search results, allowing them to cover anything they don't want being seen. In fact if anyone from Disney saw even your question, then it's probably off the forum by now. Anyway, if you're ever out here in L.A. I'll sneak you in behind-the-scenes stlye. (at this point he gave me his phone number and said his goodbyes.)

So I emailed him back:

From: Cretaceousrex@gmail.com

To: Disneychan@hotmail.com

Reply to Subject: The Club

Hey Noah,

Thanks for the information man, I'm heading out to L.A. with some buddies in about a week or two, so I'll hit you up then, alright? (I gave him my phone number and said goodbye.)

At this point you're probably thinking: wow this guy is stupid to be making plans with strangers he's just met. Right? Well I didn't care. I was too carried away with excitement to even think about it. Anyway, fast foreward two weeks. I got my plane ticket, Met my two friends, Eren (19 years of age, female) and Zack (19 years of age, male.) We get on our plane, stow our carry-on items and buckle in for take off. I took a melatonin to send me to sleep. I'm a bit of a nervous flyer, plus it helps for the long flight. The reason the flight was so long was because I was staying with Zack in Milwaukee, Wisconson for a while, so I could take a break from school. Anyway, I'm on the airplane with some stranger sitting next to me, Zack behind me, and Eren across the isle. I shut my eyes, and fall asleep. I woke up somewhere in the middle of the flight to a loud screaming sound. I looked towards the source of the sound and there stood... There stood a Mickey Mouse suit in the middle of the isle just... screaming. My heart dropped when he pointed directly at me. Everyone on the plane started staring at me like a madman. I started to panic. I felt trapped and claustrophobic. Then it happened. Everyone started to scream, point and stare. They were all just screaming at me. All I could think to do was to get the hell out of there, but my seatbelt wouldn't unbucle. That Mickey walked over to my seat and started giggling in my face. "You've got nowhere to go!" It said in a hush, raspy, almost demonic voice. Although it had those traits, I could still hear the actual Mickey portion of his voice still in tact. He reached for me and that was when I hear: Garret. Garret! GARRET! I awoke with a startled gasp. I felt cold sweat running down my face nd neck. It had all been a dream. Thank god. Zack was trying to wake me up to tell me we would be landing in about five minutes. We landed, got off the plane, rented a car and headed to our hotel. On the drive there, Eren turned to me while I was driving and said something like: What where you dreaming about back there on the plane? You were thrashing around a lot and you scared the hell out of the dude next to you." I gave her a brief summed up version of the dream and she stared at me like I was insane. She continued to inform me she had a dream a few nights ago where she had been in a shopping mall and everyone was just standing around, screaming. I shrugged it off as coincidence. The next day, we set off towards disney land. I gave Noah a call and he said his shift was later in the day around 10:30 P.M. Just barley after the World of Color show. Eren, Zack and I, entered the park with great nostalgia and excitement. We made a direct line towards Adventureland. If you are unfamiliar to the layout of the park here is a map:

(usually there is a map of Disneyland here)



This area of the park contains rides like the jungle cruise, Indiana Jones (which is my personal favorite) and the treehouse attraction from Tarzan. We went on the rides, and moved over to New Orleans square and rode Pirates of the Crribean. We stopped to eat lunch at the Blue Bayou restaurant, which is connected to the inside of Pirates of the Carribean. After lunch we screwed around for a while taking our time towards river countrty. When we arrived, we all made a bee-line straight for Splash Mountain. Surprisingly, the line wasn't too long and we got on relativley quick. As we rode through though I kept thinking I saw something out of the corner of my eye. We rode through all the cheery animatronics and started to ascend the large hill leading to the drop. At the very top, as we were about to drop down, I swore I saw a humanoid figure move out of the shadows towards the boat for a split second before we dropped. We, got off and I thought it best to keep what I saw to myself in hopes it was just my excited mind playing tricks on me. We headed back towards Frontierland where we went on the classic Thunder Mountain Railroad ride, and ate turkey legs. We moved to Fantasyland, skipped all the kiddie rides and went on the Matterhorn which Eren hadn't been on before. So when we reahed the part with the Yeti, she was scared out of her seat. By this time, we had been exhausted from walking around, standing in lines, and riding rides. We sort of dragged ourselves to Tommorrowland. We rode the Autopia cars and made our way to space mountain. Finding Nemo and Star Tours were closed just like every other time I had been. We waited about an hour and a half before we finally got on. By this point in the day it was significantly dark, around 9:00 P.M. and we knew that meant we needed to make our way to the meeting spot with Noah soon. Space Mountain is a decently dark ride for those of you who have never ridden it. So it was to my surprise when about halfway through the ride, we stopped and I could see two yellow lights just below the track. I studied them fora moment and my blood ran cold. They weren't lights. They were eyes. The eyes started moving closer to our cart but I was frozen with fear. I couldn't say anything. Just as I thought whatever it was was close enough to reach out and be able to grab me, the ride stared back up and we rode the rest of it without incident. I said nothing to anyone about what I saw because I felt as we didn't have much time and we needed to meet up with noah. I knew who to look for because I had been texting with him back and forth for about a week prior to my visit. We had exchanged eachothers social media so we could identify one-another. We headed towards New Orleans square again, as that's where club 33 is located. I spotted Noah near the door. I walked over to him and introduced my friends. We all had small talk for a few minutes and got down to the good part. We made a plan to sneak in using the secret tunnels around the park. As he was explaining I got very excited. I've never heard of the tunnels up until this point. I wanted to know more, and to see these tunnels for myself. I wanted to know how everyone could get around the park as staff and be unseen. I now wish that I hadn't been so naive. Curiosity always ALWAYS kills the cat. I was nearly the cat. We left the entrance of the club and went to the designated meeting spot right next to the secret entrance of the tunnels. Sure enough, Noah opened a hidden door and beckoned for us to come towards him. We were in. I couldn't believe it. We were actually in the underground corridors of DisneyLand. We started walking towards a map directory as we passed mascots and people doing their daily jobs at Disney. We headed near New Orleans Square to the secret entrance to club 33. I felt slightly claustrohobic walking down the narrow corridors. I felt like the walls were closing in on me. That was when... Noah stopped and took a glance around. I could see panic and worry in his eyes. I asked him if there was something wrong. He looked me directly in the eye and said in a worried quick almost whisper of a voice: "I have no idea where we are. I've been this way millions of times. But it's not right. it isn't the same." We all exchanged looks of horror. Eren was pure white as if she had seen a ghost. She was staring straight ahead into the corridor behind us. We all turned to look in a moment of pure panic just in time to see a humanoid figure standing about 9 feet tall just as the lights made a popping sound and burst. We all got the hell out of dodge and booked it in the other directions. Over the sound of our panicked pants and beating hearts sick with adrenaline we could hear heavy footsteps just a few yards behind. We turned a corner and sprinted to the nearest door we could find. We slammed it shut, but not before I got to turn and glance at our perseur. I wish I hadn't. Just behind me stood a tall horrifying Mickey Mouse. His "fur" had been torn in placed and was coated in thick blood. He had a good chunk of his ear missing and had that damn goofy grin plastered on to his face. The door had been shut and we were frantically searching for a light switch. Zack shouted something to the effect of: "Found it!" I heard the flicking of a switch and the lights turned on. For a second it buned my eyes until they adjusted. That was when I noticed... Eren was gone. Just then I heard a loud scream outide the door and a loud crunching of bone and the squelch of flesh. I recognized the scream. It was Eren. She was dead. I was sure of it. Noah turned and threw up all over the floor and Zack was so white that I swear he had been drained of his blood. I examined the room for possible escape routes. I saw our escape. A vent in the side of the wall just barley large enough to crawl through. I told them we needed to move and so we did. We removed the panel and started to crawl. I used my phone's flashlight as a light source. As I was crawling I noticed something scrawled into the wall: "They shall be made to crawl on their bellies, into the kingdom of darkness." I knew what that meant. According to some mythology these were the inscriptions to the gates of hell. We kept moving for our lives. We started to crawl into an even tighter space. This section however, was different. On the bottom of the vets where we had been crawling on, there were slits, most likely for air. We moved over these with caution to not break them. This was when there was a loud bang and a large hand smashed though one of the slit areas, completely destroying part of the vent and grabbing Zack's leg. Zack screamed as he got dragged backwards through the vent and out the hole. We heard a scream, a crunch, and then silence. Noah and I frantically moved through the vents until we reached a panel we could break off. We kicked it until it came off and dropped into the room. This room was illuminated. There was two leather chairs and about eight computer monitors on a wall. On the other end of the room there was a table with a coffee maker and a couple mugs. This was the security room. We looked for the creature on the monitor but it had been nowhere to be found. Just as we were about to give up, I spotted something. On one of the monitors there were two yellow eyes in the far right corner of the screen. The monitor suddenly became static. One by one the monitors all became just static. Noah and I both knew. It knew exactly where we were. We ran from the room, down a long corridor. At the end there was a sign labled: Mainstreet. We threw the door open and slammed it behind us. We fled the park and ran to the parking lot. We stopped to catch our breaths. He had parked near where we were standing so he gave me a ride back to my hotel. On the way back we said nothing. Just silence. He dropped me off, I thanked him, and he left. The next day he quit his job. I tried telling Zack and Erens parents what happened but they all claimed they never had a child. It was like they never existed. Only Noah and I know what happened and know of the lives that had been lost. Only Noah and I knew of the true horrors behind Disney's hidden depths. 