Talk:Terra Lee's Journal/@comment-17646692-20141222232402

The story is good and has a ton of potential. You messed up the ending, though. I mean, the story could be WAY longer, as this could be the intro/beginning and i belive that it could be a brilliant story, if continued with a smooth touch of ( a few) more(2, maybe 3more) characthers.

I'm sorry if it sounds like i'm hating, I only tried a positiv/creativ feedback :)