Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24169760-20171229214014/@comment-33470154-20180406175247

Something stuff people have glossed over but still bothers me - the protagonist has cliche eyes (black w/red pupils), the protagonist “broke” the handcuffs with a knife (I don’t think that’s possible, correct me if I’m wrong. Maybe make him pick the locks with something?), the Satanic cult could be a little more unique (pagan group rather than Satanists, etc.), the character was randomly found in a mental asylum (just doesn’t make sense), and the story itself is barebones and rather short. Could use a little more body.