Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180228235348/@comment-34823985-20180301062124

Your review gives me a lot to work with. Thank you so much, Aeternum Nox. I'm not against swearing. I just didn't want that to affect my story submission. Easy fix. I am a little disappointed to learn I flubbed the origins of duct tape. I really like that part. Reluctant fix. You're right, Evnis Slarn could use a few more ticks. Fun fix. I like Evnis much better than Elvis. I'll have to credit you for that. I figured my story concept had been done before, but I'm certainly glad you like my take. As for the tattoo ideas, always use caution when permanently marking yourself, lol. Once again thanks for your review.