Talk:Teeth.jpg/@comment-26992667-20150917190408

Eh the story was alright but lacked in realism. First of all the protagonist and Josh emailed to say they were sick but if they discovered Lilly was missing on a Friday, why would they need to call in on Saturday? How was the picture already on Daniel's laptop before he got home from mutilating Lilly? Why didn't they call the cops as soon as Lilly went missing? I also would have loved it to be longer and help build up Daniel's creepiness. Right now it seems like he went nuts for no reason.

5/10