Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25242831-20140730050315/@comment-24957984-20140730164229

There are a few thing s that makes the pasta not meeting the Quality Standards.

First of all, it's a wall of text. It's painful to read, and this will never be accepted if posted as an article. Please, make paragraphs

Second, I see barely any plot here. This feels like a huge summary that you can find on Wikipedia. It's not fun to read, and not scary at all.

Also, the references you put on the pasta might be already a spinoff alert, and makes this sounds like a trollpasta.

I think you need to put more effort on it if you want to post this as an article.