Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44618871-20191208070334

Constructive criticism is appreciated

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Entry 1

Hello, journal! I'm gonna start a diary to keep track of what happens every day. Not much today, but maybe tomorrow!

Entry 2

Hello! Today didn't get very well. My little brother knocked over the vase and mother blamed it on me. I wasn't my fault he pushed me! Dad even grounded me and defended my brother. It's so unfair!

Entry 3

hello, journal. Ms Croka sent me to the printer to grab her worksheets at school today, and it wasn't working! The principal blamed on me and suspended me for the rest of the week. I didn't jam the machine! I didn't even touch it!

Entry 4

Hello again, journal. Our dog past away today. My mum blamed me for leaving the door open, causing him to run out and get hit by a moving van. I didn't do it. Mother opened the door. I only stood by it. It wasn't me. I didn't do it. It's not my fault.

Entry 5

It's not my fault.

Entry 6

It's not my fault.

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<p data-parsoid="{"dsr":[1317,1355,0,0]}">The game of blame you should not play,

<p data-parsoid="{"dsr":[1357,1390,0,0]}">Or in cold blood, you will decay.

<p data-parsoid="{"dsr":[1392,1464,0,0]}">________________________________________________________________________

<p data-parsoid="{"dsr":[1466,1489,0,0]}">News Article:

<p data-parsoid="{"dsr":[1491,1737,0,0]}">Recently a family of three have been murdered, with one daughter declared missing. The said daughter was not found in the resident, unlike her other family members. The bodies were discovered in their respective bedrooms, covered in their blood.

<p data-parsoid="{"dsr":[1739,2019,0,0]}">They were stabbed in the chest a dozen times, along with horns carved on their foreheads. The killer had supposedly carved the words "It's all your fault" on the walls with the murder weapon. The daughter's room was tidy, leaving the police to believe that the murder was planned.

<p data-parsoid="{"dsr":[2021,2291,0,0]}">Police and crime scene investigators recovered a journal kept by the missing daughter, which contain highly unsettling notes that could link her as the murderer. We highly encourage you to stay indoors during the night, and please report any behaviour deemed suspicious. <ac_metadata title="Scapegoat (unreviewed)"> </ac_metadata>