Talk:Night and Fog/@comment-5733573-20180731000628

Wow. You really have it in for President Obama. Okay, then. Really not interested in hearing your reasons why, just remarking.

The story itself is decent. It's mostly clear until the very. I literally have no clue what that last line is supposed to me. There were also some spots where I would have liked a more vivid description of what was going or for more time to be taken with the details. Some examples of this are the initial kidnapping and the part with the dogs. Finally, there are a few sentences with misspellings or missing words, so I would suggest giving this a careful proofread.

My favorite aspect of this story is the dialogue. That all seemed very believably written and the characters' identities were very clear. Nice work there. Also, your explanation of what the ISI is smooth and organic in the way you wove it in.