Talk:EmpyrealInvective's Collection of Short Stories/@comment-6548012-20151011183647

It alternates between efficient writing (Wishes, Notes) and cheap twists (Dunwich, Thank God for Familiar Faces.) Overall, I liked it, but some wasn't really that shocking and scary at all, though I think you can improve on that easily. I just may not understand He Is a Monster, for all I know.