Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28501738-20160519231628/@comment-28501738-20160520102432

Dr. Frank N. Furter wrote: Hi TractorBud! I used to be a huge TF2 trader (I still have some earbuds and a Max Head in my inventory), so this story interested me. First I'll point out the errors here...

..."I hope that my feedback was useful to you and that I didn't seem to harsh. Good luck with your future writing! =)"

Wow, it's amazing what a good night's sleep can do to the brain, cause I see the errors, and there are a lot of errors.

It's time to step up my game, I guess.