Talk:The Internet Story/@comment-25546984-20141023225902

1 - You try way to hard to make this sound like a dated horror story.

2 - The name makes little sense.

3 - The way you present the story is confusing.

4 - You don't even attempt to make it sound frightening.

Although

1 - A lot of effort was put into making this believable.

2 - If you fixed it up a little, it could work.

5.5/10