Talk:Shattered Bound

Review
This is a well written pasta! It's quite a relief from some of the stories I've reviewed today. I like the length, how there are no major grammatical errors, as well as the story it's self. This pasta deserves a 4/5 stars, and I think it's well earned.

Dburch111 (talk) 02:58, October 14, 2012 (UTC)Dburch111