Talk:The Things Behind the Door/@comment-5733573-20180524151651

I have to say, this isn't quite as strong as your other offerings. The suspense you create is good, and the description of the creature is really vivid, but the payoff seems to be lacking. Also, there is a paragraph in the middle that repeats the first paragraph verbatim. Not sure if that was intentional, but it was a little confusing.