Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24929924-20140513162558/@comment-24859608-20140513165645

MOXCRunner1 wrote: Gotcha. How would you recommend making it creepy? Like I said, I'm still testing the waters on how to write scary stuff:P Your grammar is good, and you have high vocabulary. You just got to find the subject

Like I said your premise is good, if you found something to write about that would be scary(creatures, disease, menal-illness, just plain creepiness, death) they're is so many things you can find. Just try not to be cliche with your ideas, which is what makes ritual pastas so difficult. And base your story around something creepy, and  you got a micropasta.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Message - This is a micro pasta that follows your premise, it goes deep, then it gets realistic, then get's you right where the writer wants you, then plain out makes you scared. This is also a micropasta.