Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25987771-20150109031711/@comment-25987771-20150110215849

Thank you for responding! I'm glad you enjoyed my story and I appreciate your criticism.

Part of the reason why I added scenes of violence or gore was to try and keep the reader on their toes and make sure the story never lost any momentum. I see what you mean, and I was hesitant about the whole first episode thing too, to be perfectly honest.

But this has given me confidence to iron out the kinks and present this as my first pasta. Thanks again!

...If you don't mind me asking, though, what does MC mean? When I first saw it I thought "Mr. Creepyspasta."