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The body of once missing Riley Jonshon was found in the park of North Ridgewood. Yesterday at 10:13 A.M by Ally Prescott. As Ally states "Riley was like my mom. I just can't believe that now she is gone". More of the story in section C5.

"Ally get down here right now." Ally's "mom", Mary Smith, called from the kitchen.

As soon as Ally heard her she rolled her eyes and replied with a simple "Yes Mom" Every single day Ally just wanted to hurt Mary for everything she did to Ally.

Ally didn't want to be yelled at by Mary again so she got out of bed.She wished she didn't. She felt the pain shot up her foot, so she looked down and a laptop power cord sticking out from her foot. She cursed inside of her mind when she took it out. She put it back on her nightstand.She walked to her bathroom to get toliet paper. Then she walked back to her room.

"Why is blood such a pretty color?" Ally said to herself. She always liked that color not knowing why. She walked to her bathroom agian to throw the blood filled piece of toilet paper in the toilet.

She limped down the stairs into the kitchen. Mary looked up from the newspaper and saw Ally standing in the hallway."So this Riley was almost like your mom? And why were you at the park at 10 in the moring?"Mary had a look of digust on her face.

Ally wanted to lie but couldn't."Yes Riley was like my mom, and why would you care why i was out at 10 yestarday?" Ally couldn't help thinking her cover was blown.

"Oh my baby i am so sorry come here", she held her arms out wide wanting a hug from Ally, "I am sorry but there is a killer on the loose and i dont want you to get hurt." Mary had some tears in her eyes.

Ally thought"HAHHA thats a hug fucking lie."

Mary doesn't give two shits about me, so why is she caring about me? "Mom can I go take a shower then go the mall with Jessie and Mitch? I won't spend a lot. I just want that sky blue dress I've been dying to get for my prom. Can I go please?" Ally asked.

"Yes my dear just read the paper please" Mary told Ally. Ally wished she never did.

The paper talked about how the killer is at large and dangerous."HAHAH if they only knew". Ally thought.

"Baby i want you to be careful", Mary gazed into Ally's hazel eyes," Promise me you will."

Ally was shaking how can she do it tonight she couldn't hurt mary even is she wanted to.

"Damn it why is she being nice? She is never nice to me if she had her chance she would have killed me a long time ago." Ally thought."I will be careful mommy I promise." Ally said to Mary.

Ally ran up stairs and took a shower. After she got out of her shower she got dressed. She looked inside of her closet at the sword her mom gave to her. She then looked at the picture of her mom on her nightstand.

"My mommy was to young to die." Everything came back to her.

"She doesn't deserve to live not after what she did to me" Ally said to herself.

As Ally pulled up to the mall she saw her boyfriend,Mitch, and her bestfriend,Jessie.

"Hey guys, who's ready to shop for prom?" Ally ased both Mitch and Jessie.

"We are!" Both of them said excitdly.

"Do you not see that mullet dress I bought? Its pretty isn't?" Ally asked Mitch and Jessie.

"Yes girly that dress color suits you. That sky blue mullet dress with the white flats. I am so jelous" Jessie said in a tone both Ally and Jessie knew they were lying in, but Ally didn't say anything.

"I truly love it of course you could be wearing jeans and a t-shirt and i would still love it." He started to get red in the face," Before I say anymore stupid stuff you look very very beautiful in that dress."

"Thank you baby" Ally replyed.

by Ally Prescott. As Ally states "Riley was like my mom. I just can't believe that now she is gone". More of the story in section C5.

"Ally get down here right now." Ally's "mom", Mary, called from the kitchen.

As soon as Ally heard her she rolled her eyes and replied with a simple "Yes Mom" Every single day Ally just wanted to hurt Mary for everything she did to Ally.

Ally didn't want to be yelled at by Mary again so she got out of bed.She wished she didn't. She felt the pain shot up her foot, so she looked down and a laptop power cord sticking out from her foot. She cursed inside of her mind when she took it out. She put it back on her nightstand.She walked to her bathroom to get toliet paper. Then she walked back to her room.

"Why is blood such a pretty color?" Ally said to herself. She always liked that color not knowing why. She walked to her bathroom agian to throw the blood filled piece of toilet paper in the toilet.

She limped down the stairs into the kitchen. Mary looked up from the newspaper and saw Ally standing in the hallway."So this Riley was almost like your mom? And why were you at the park at 10 in the moring?"Mary had a look of digust on her face.

Ally wanted to lie but couldn't."Yes Riley was like my mom, and why would you care why i was out at 10 yestarday?" Ally couldn't help thinking her cover was blown.

"Oh my baby i am so sorry come here", she held her arms out wide wanting a hug from Ally, "I am sorry but there is a killer on the loose and i dont want you to get hurt." Mary had some tears in her eyes.

Ally thought"HAHHA thats a hug fucking lie."

Mary doesn't give two shits about me, so why is she caring about me? "Mom can I go take a shower then go the mall with Jessie and Mitch? I won't spend a lot. I just want that sky blue dress I've been dying to get for my prom. Can I go please?" Ally asked.

"Yes my dear just read the paper please" Mary told Ally. Ally wished she never did.

The paper talked about how the killer is at large and dangerous."HAHAH if they only knew". Ally thought.

"Baby i want you to be careful", Mary gazed into Ally's hazel eyes," Promise me you will."

Ally was shaking how can she do it tonight she couldn't hurt mary even is she wanted to.

"Damn it why is she being nice? She is never nice to me if she had her chance she would have killed me a long time ago." Ally thought."I will be careful mommy I promise." Ally said to Mary.

Ally ran up stairs and took a shower. After she got out of her shower she got dressed. She looked at the picture of her mom on her nightstand. All of her hatered to Mary came back.

"She does't deserve to live not after what she did to me" Ally said to herself.

As Ally pulled up to the mall she saw her boyfriend,Mitch, and her bestfriend,Jessie.

"Hey guys, who's ready to shop for prom?" Ally ased both Mitch and Jessie.

"We are!" Both of them said excitdly.

"Do you not see that mullet dress I bought? Its pretty isn't?" Ally asked Mitch and Jessie.

"Yes girly that dress color suits you. That sky blue mullet dress with the white flats. I am so jelous" Jessie said in a tone both Ally and Jessie knew they were lying in, but Ally didn't say anything.

"I truly love it of course you could be wearing jeans and a t-shirt and i would still love it." He started to get red in the face," Before I say anymore stupid stuff you look very very beautiful in that dress."

"Thanks you baby" Ally replyed. "Do you think you can pick me up at 10:00 tonight? I've got some things to take care of at home."

"Yea I can" Mitch said nodding his head.

"Thanks agian I guess I'll see you tonight?" Ally asked Mitch

"Yep" Mitch replied as soon as Ally went to her car.

She didnt go back home yet she went to the cemtery where her mom was burried.

"Mommy I miss you so much. I promise you'll get what you deserve. She will hurt just as much as you did." Ally started to choke out the last few words before she started to cry.

"You said you wouldn't spend to much! You've fucking lied to me, and with that you don't get to go to prom. Go get the dress and flats and return them to the store NOW" Mary yelled at a already shaking Ally.

"Yes ma'ma" Ally couldn't contol her crying. She ran up her stairs stumbing over the last few steps. She ran to her closet to get what used to be her prom outfit and her mom's sword along with her phone.

"Hahah like I would ever get rid of this." Ally thought to herself. She ran down the stairs past a yelling Mary, to get to the park where her mom always took her.

"Damn that girl got futs to spend $150 dollars on a dress and $60 on flats." Mary said right before the power went out.

"Oh Mary guess who here. The girl who fucks up everything. The spolied 17 year old. THE SCREW UP! The girl who also killed before" Ally yellled from the kitchen as Mary walked in with a flashlight.

"I've never said that",Mary was pleding but Ally had enough of Mary's shit,"Please baby don't do this. You killed Riley Johnson?."Mary said as soon as Ally pulled her sword from the sheth.

"Oh Mary you've said it enough times to where I will never forget.God for a woman who tells lies daily you don't recgnoize when I lie. I find that funny." Ally yelled at Mary.

"What have I've ever done to you? Mary was scared, but she saw a knife inside of the sink and took it and hid it in her pants pocket.

"You killed my mommy. YOU LIED TO ME FOR YEARS! You've taken away everything I loved! I'll take away what you love." Ally walked up to Mary and whispered in her ear "Your life."

"Oh baby i don't love my life I love you." Mary lied to Ally and she knew Ally knew it.

"THATS A FUCKING LIE!" Ally screamed at Mary

"Why it is, but this pain isn't" Mary said as she brought down the knife. Ally caught it with her sword. Mary cut Ally's cheek

"You pissed me off now" Ally laughed, and pushed Mary to the ground and kept her foot on her.

"Fuck you bitch." Mary pushed Ally off of her chest and stood with the knife away from her.

"Mary its time for you to say goodbye to your life." Ally smiled.

"What the fuck did" Mary was scilenced as Ally took her sword and stabed her in the heart.

"I told you too say goodbye to your life bitch." Ally took her sword and let the blood squrit over her face, dress and shoes.

"You got blood on my prom outfit" Ally pouted. Her hatered was bolling. Ally knew what Mary had just became her new toy.

"What i did was wrong and i am sorry...my baby." Mary bearly got the last part out.

"What have i done" Ally sunk to the floor crying she knew she couldn't waste anymore time on the bitch that took away everything she love. She had to get to work.

Ally's phone started to ring two hours latter from Mitch saying he's out front. She ran upstairs and got the picture frame that had her mom's picture in it, and Mary's wallet. She went back downstairs and took one last picture of Mary, before she vinshed with Mitch and Jessie forever.

The dailynews

The body of Mary Smith was found in her kitchen at 10:30 last night.Her heart was puntured,her head bashed in. There was a note was on her body it said "I deserved to die, Signed Mary Smith". Her daughter Ally Prescott was missing along with Mitch Thomas and Jessie Brown. We are on the look out for Ally Prescott, Jessie Brown, and Mitch Thomas. We belive them to be involed with the death of Mary Smith. More of this story in section C5 