Talk:If You Must Know/@comment-36168301-20180810140755

I loved this story it had tension and wrapped up nicely. You may have a real future in this kind of thing, this may be one of my all time favorites and i would love to see a sequel or anything really that pertains to this idea. How you came with it? If I must know, THE DEVIL SHOWED YOU! In all seriousness keep up the good work, this story wasn't to dark or filled with pointless violence. It was creepy and sent chills down my back. I am very young but am very serious for my age. I know I shouldn't spend 5 minutes on a comment but here is some constructive criticism.

1. You need more depth to the secondary characters

2. The part right before the ending was very fast-paced and out of nowhere

3. Nothing else to say it was just so good.