Talk:Vents/@comment-26932599-20150827191000

I didn't notice any grammar or spelling errors and the story gets straight to the point. However, you had stated at one point that there was blood seeping through the creature's holes where the legs should've been, so shouldn't then there be any residue of blood left on the ground? This was the only part which was pretty confusing, other than the part where you suddenly address the creature as a "he." Overall great work, this is one of my few favourite pastas! 8.5/10