Talk:An Exorcism of Sorts/@comment-27012445-20160926061831

Hey JFSindel, you did such a great job with the cliches and the entry overall. While the issues have already been adequately discussed, I would just like to say, that I would highly encourage you to not give up on this story. With a bit more time and attention, I think you could have a very nice story here. You've built the foundation and framework for your story, now you can take it to the next level.