Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25332942-20140823180840/@comment-25558572-20140823222537

Okay, here's the mistakes you need to fix.


 * Don't use ellipsis (...), except in speech. There's no reason to pause miday through a sentence if you're writing something.


 * You need to space out dialogue. Every time someone speaks, indent to make a new paragraph. It's really hard to read if you don't do this and I see it a lot.


 * Don't use more than one exclamation mark at a time. It looks very uneffective if you do.


 * Put a space between each comma and word. Like this, not,like this.


 * Indent for a new paragraph every time the focus of the story shifts, a new person speaks, or you want to go in more detail on a subject.


 * The second-to-last sentence is a question, so it should be finished with a question mark instead of a period.

To catch most of your grammar and spelling errors, try typing this out in Microsoft Word and running through a spelling and grammar check. Still, you should know how to properly write on your own if you want to make a pasta or poem.