Talk:Ted the Caver/@comment-26409942-20150518170543

This was fantastic, it's the best I've read yet.

I'm going to give it 9/10...I've knocked the last point off just because I felt that there could have been a bit more of a satisfying ending. It still feels like there should be an extra part...even if it's drifting into found footage by someone or something.

It was definitely long and a slow burner. But it worked. It reminded me of the start of Silent Hill 2....a really long, quiet path to get to the town, half of you is getting impatient and wants it to go quicker, the other half of you is appreciating the tension it's building, and the sense of isolation that makes it scarier. It's a nice tactic.

Brilliant use of the tight squeeze passages....frankly, the idea of being in such a tight squeeze like that is horrific in its own right, that's without any supernatural element, so it was a nice scare before the real scare, if that makes sense. I also loved the pictured that went with it. Not only did it lend authenticity, it also helped visualise the description.