Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25535144-20141013223937/@comment-24821182-20141014043945

This is a brilliant, original story. This could definitely be posted as an article. Apart from some misplaced punctuation, I noticed just two errors:

- On the other page, it showed a very old women. It should be "woman".

- "Now, now, Mrs. Sneed, Take those safety scissors…” the word "take" shouldn't be capitalized.

Correct these and then try posting it to the main site.