Talk:A Salem Seance/@comment-35711173-20180728170122/@comment-35711173-20180729073716

EmpyrealInvective,

My feelings exactly.

First, I didn't get in the first few lines describing the characters that they were ghosts. Quite the opposite, in fact. Sandy had a brochure in her hand, a physical object. That isn't in keeping with ghosts being disembodied spirits.

If you take it as a bored living couple or a bored dead couple, there is no creepiness. They seem comfortable with themselves and their circumstances.

There is no horror I see.

I'm not saying it isn't a cute story. I just don't see anything that makes it a creepypasta horror story.

Doctor Bob Smith, MD, Specializing in Proctology. (talk) 07:37, July 29, 2018 (UTC)