Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28872097-20180713100940/@comment-28266772-20180713110451

Full text for those interested: I Remember Good Old Days, Playing Fortnite. What i Remember Most Is my Friend Andrew. Me And Andrew went way back. Before Fortnite, We were friends in high school and went through a lot together. We fell in love with Fortnite. We would play it For hours, Almost as if it was Modern Warfare 2 and we were 15 again. We played whenever we could. But Then Andrew moved out of state. So only way we could communicate was through social media and Xbox. Because Of that we played For Hours, Until one day He never got on again. I don't mean just Fortnite. He did not Respond to my Messages, not on Facebook, not on Xbox, not on Twitter. I Was Worried And Wondered What Happened To Him. Days of waiting turned into a month then month turned into a year. Still No Response.

Last Night I Was Playing Fortnite, When Somebody Joined My Game. "What the hell" i said. lobby was private and dude was not my friend so how could he/she join. I Kicked Him And Played solo. I Finished Playing when it was 1 AM. So i went to sleep.

I had a vivid dream. I was playing Fortnite with Andrew. He was using Raven skin. We had a great match and even managed to win. I danced to celebrate. When i looked over To Andrew, he no longer had raven skin. It Was His Actual Body, Decomposing. His skin was shriveled up, He had lost most of his hair and he was missing one eye.

Probably our greatest fear is loosing someone close to us and here i was not knowing where my friend had gone and wondering if my dream was a reality.

Next Day I Got Back On Fortnite. That Person joined my lobby again. I said hello. it did not respond at this point i was going to kick him but this time it did not allow me to do so. he was using Raven skin. Only thing i heard from his mic was static. OK I Guess i will play with this random dude, i said to myself. We Dropped in tilted towers and destroyed everyone there. It was as if this person had mods. That would explain why he was able to join my lobby even though it was private. When We Started To Build i noticed that it was trying to tell me. I don't mean mic like actual mouth of skin was moving. "Dude if you want to say something say it with mic". no response. It was saying 3 words. 3 short words. Before we know it, We are in 2 versus 2 situation. we end up jumping on launchpad sneaking up on unsuspecting people and killing them. We won. As i look over to my duos partner, He disappears. I suddenly felt Something cold on my shoulder. Room just got Colder. When i looked behind, It Was him. It Was Andrew. I finally Knew what happened to him. He was just like what i saw in my dream. Decomposing, Shriveled, Most Of hair gone and one eyeball missing. Then he finally said those 3 words.

YOU LEFT ME

Then he disappeared. I Was Sad. I realized that Andrew was dead. I remembered how we both dreamed about being like Ninja in fortnite. I Cried.

giorgi5552

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This is blocked because it references Xbox. All consoles are filtered out of stories just to catch low quality videogame pastas by default. If a story is good, but is being stopped, then we usually just ask the person to speak to us and we'll add their story then.

But unfortunately Giorgi this story falls well below our quality standards. At the very least, you're going to want to address the numerous capitalisation, punctuation, and spelling errors and, personally, I'd suggest you chalk this one up to experience and move onto a new story.