Talk:Bloody Snow/@comment-23872426-20140806033424

A very entertaining story to say the least. There were a few parts that sent shivers down my spine, but they ended too fast!

The main problem was that once something scary happened, it was just dropped immediately.

The main one I can think of was when he picked up and killed the baby monster and killed it. Not only did that present a possibly dangerous situation, but it beautifully presented the questions of morals into the situation. I personally feel that you could have really gone off of the aftermath of what happened when he killed that baby monster, like the mother hunting them down by their sent.

It wasn't bad though. Very entertaining, though I do feel a little bit of the setting is blurred as well. But overall, great story. Defintely worthy of its nomination as Pasta of the Month.