Talk:Something Is Wrong/@comment-1062460-20151202235555

I really really like this story because it's different from most of the stories I've read on this site. It might not be anything that I've never seen before, but it's a well-written story. You gave all the characters a suitable voice and the way the cousins acted was realistic for someone in their situation. The thing that disturbs me the most is the thing that I like about it. It's not a story about some unknown horror from the ether or eldritch abomination. This is a story about something that very easily could, and I'm sad to say, really does happen, even if it probably doesn't happen in the exact same way. I also like that the ending is kind of bittersweet rather than completely sad. The monster is gone and the children are probably in a much better situation now, but...she's till out there. Very well done. Keep up the good work.