User blog comment:BlackLights666/Um poor quality???/@comment-25558572-20140904052359

I tagged it for deletion because it was very poorly formatted and punctuated. You never capitalize "I", your sentences were choppy and awkward, and the description you used was very basic and bland. The ending was heavily cliched as well and didn't seem to make much sense. I pretty much predicted it very early on.

Use the Writer's Workshop forum next time for feedback.