Talk:Eyeless Jack/@comment-24060825-20131018121845

Okay... First off, the second paragraph is a mess. Its redundant and full of inconsistancies. Also, why would you mention hearing racoons in the middle of the night to your brother?

Secondly, I literally had to stop reading when I got to the point where the doctor is all chill and nonchalant about the author LOSING AN EFFING KIDNEY. In order for a pasta to be superb it has to be believable. This lost any belivability it may have had right then and there, and I wasnt even able to finish it.