Talk:The Profile Picture/@comment-34426047-20180122014913

So I'm going to add my two cents in three points.

one, The beginning was ok. a bit silly but it was ok. I enjoyed it, but eventually the ~ thing came along and I just though " erm? wha t ? This is kinda stupid. "

Two, in the ending of the begining it slowly began going into a cliche copypasta of ben drowned. You know, the begining was diffrent but eventually it went to copypasta, hacking spirit/spirit take over or whatever and the " I can't escape this, w h a t " move in a story. Which is to be expected in a Creepypasta story, that's ok, it's just a little worn and torn. Also, I've heard of something like this a while back with a youtube channel that would mess up your computer or whatever.

three, the ending was a bit silly. I felt like it was written quickly, like a deadline was coming up and you just had the " aw screw it " moment and wrote down whatever first came to mind. It felt rushed and kinda dumb, and I'm sorry for saying that, but I feel like that needed to be said. All around this story was kinda silly to me, yes I kept reading in interest of what was going to happen, but eventually it started to feel rushed and repetitious.

TL;DR: The entire story was filled with emojicons and silly copypasta stuff that, although well written, felt cliche and repetitious. Which is a shame, because I thought that this story was a cool Idea at first. I hope you take my advice into consideration when you write your next story and won't make the same mistakes.

Epimetheus : The name of the story sounds like it could be a smile.dog type story, with the same kind of ideas and such, and what I mean is that a cursed image is spread around and the people who don't ' spread the word ' die. :/ which is dumb and stupid and kind of a good idea, which is what made Smile.dog such a significant Creepypasta poster character ( along with Jeff, BEN, 3 Jacks, Sally, Slender, and so many many more ).

Although, Smile is an older character and now I am thinking that the name could have made a story like Smile.dog, as the oldest comment goes back around 2013. The oldest comment I could find on smile.dog was the same year, just months earlier. So as an afterthought on the name to someone in 2013 just a couple months after smile, could be thinking it's playing off of Smile's story? I don't know. This comment is really really long and I'm sorry. ( I heard some writers enjoy these types of comments. )

MintyMoony (talk) 01:49, January 22, 2018 (UTC)MintyMoony