Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4499225-20150303231347/@comment-24976741-20150304002556

Oh man! This is amazing! I was actually making some guesses that she was a police officer or something, because this really did feel too easy and blan to just end up with him killing her.

You did this in a way to make something with a pretty obvious twist into an unexpected situation that any normal reader or someone who's been reviewing alot of help needed stories wouldn't expect. Got to hand it to ya, you did a good job with this. You also kinda portrade the inner mind of a pychopath and how they can easily be over confidient in themselves and used it against the guy.

One thing I do have to wonder about. Wasn't the back door unlocked, that's how he got in there in the first place, so shouldn't he be able to get out that ways to?