Talk:Matchsticks and Cigarettes/@comment-5733573-20180501173625

This was so fresh, original, and exciting! I was stunned by the ending, as never at any point could I have predicted where this story was going. There are some grammatical and verb tense issues that need to be addressed, but those are easy fixes. Once those are out of the way, this story will be damn near perfect! Really good stuff here!