Talk:Ronald McDonald House/@comment-24241281-20150316100241/@comment-29992049-20160917103357

You are absolutly right. This is an overrated piece of shit. It takes the idea of Abandoned by Disney then adds knife weilding clowns, stupid crucifixtion, some weird time travel shit and then to show that it's still taking stuff from Abandoned by Disney a mascot being creepy with a picture to have people get spooked. Nothing in this story is coherent and you are left with questions that hinder the story. Hell if you watch Midnight Marinara's Undercooked Analysis of this it even points out that the story immatates Abandoned by Disney in multiple points. Honestly just watch the Undercooked Analysis of this story because they go on to say how shitty this story is.

Though I have one thing to say to CreepyPastaCritic567. DonkeyPuncher has ALL the right to critisize here, just because this may be one of your favorites you need to look at it from a true Critical perspective (which by your name shows that you "Try" to do.)