Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24881951-20150802101945/@comment-24881951-20150803003302

Jygilzo wrote: It's a very good story. I especially like the sudden switch. There are just a few issues.

I'd consider rewording the part where he freaks out after finding the corpse and it says he sees and hears "ghosts." I say this just because at first it looks like you're trying to add random ghosts to the story and it kind of threw me off. Maybe just changing a few words would help.

There are also some grammar mistakes and typos that you should be able to catch by going over it again, but I'll point them out if you'd like. Alright, I fixed the errors.

Thanks for the positive feedback. It's actually originally my dad's story, which he let me post here and I just edited a little. And the setting is in fact based off of my great uncle's cabin, so it's kind of interesting to me.