Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28420405-20160715142937/@comment-28420405-20160715195225

Firstly sorry if thus is all fucked up because I am on my phone.

But, lmao oh goodness I loved reading your review. I didnt spend much time on this, so I certainly plan on cleaning it up. I was trying to tap into the fear I feel when a roller coaster starts, because I always, for a moment, think it will break and we are all gonna die. It would also suck for that to happen and you make it but your friends dont, so that's where I was going. I honestly dont even know if this is worth saving? Let me know and I will see what other people think too.

And, what?? You mean it wasn't clear they were in a park? Lmfao ;P I am going to crack up as I edit this