Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25941663-20150918143924/@comment-26475800-20150919014929

The vampire idea was good, and the idea of bad dreams was nice as well. But there is something that seemed a little generic about this one.

When the mom appeared I knew she was going to be evil. At the end it wasn't much of a surprise that the child had been transformed into a vampire.

Sorry if that sounds harsh, but that is what I got from this one.