Talk:Blood Red Nails/@comment-26507513-20161017051645

This is a very well written story and the sex scene is very exciting but the story itself lacks depth and plot. How could a normal girl suddenly become a bloodthirsty killer just by applying some nail polish? I understand it is implied that the nail polish is actually blood but how does that change a person? I think the sexual description is the only thing that saves this story. 9/10 for writing but a 3/10 for the plot.