Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-24585682-20150823004148/@comment-24101790-20150823005510

Or.. It could have been deleted for the fact that it was not up to quality standards. Starting with the basics, the fourth paragraph is a massive wall of text (30+ sentences long), the title is incorrectly capitalized, and the fact that game titles are improperly italicized/quoted. (" the NiGHTS into Dreams games, "

Fragmented sentences: "Cold, and mysterious." Run-on sentences: "Writing this made me feel uncomfortable, and almost nervous, but I needed to get this information out there, and hope that many would take into consideration that they may be dreaming at this moment."

Onto the story issues: The story is lazily written: " It is impossible to tell whether or not one will dream in the (their) sleep they will soon enter, (awkward wording) and it's not like you don't dream, because if you think you don't, you're wrong.", the opening uses the cliched "This totally happened to me"." Additionally your story is rushed and fails to build up to any real sense of horror or tension. There's quite a number of issues present in the story that are directly tied to our quality standards.