User blog comment:DoctorWhooves/Hello. I'm new to writing creepypasta/@comment-10428762-20130811142325

don't use clichés!!!! They're so overused and will probably get your work laughed at (I use them accidently. Oops).

Also maybe, have the "thing" be based on your fears,as said, not like massive spidey, but fears that a lot of people have because you'll find that the human race has fears built in for some reason hehe