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Excerpt from page 142:
 * creepypasta in progress, please review my topic of "should this story have more" for a review of the original creepypasta that has inspired this one*

The quiet hall became almost like a monastery save for the sound of his own footsteps as he walked up toward the cell, half of his mind wondering why it was that John hadn't shown back up in order to question their client. After everything they had gone thru in order to catch this bastard it frustrated him more than anything else to have to face this psychopath alone. Calming his nerves to step into the interrogation room alone with the dangerous killer, the detective closed his eyes and took a breath opening the door and then feeling a cold otherworldly feel wash over his body. It was the best way to describe the horrific scene that was on display in front of him, the first thing catching his senses was the smell of blood that wafted thru the air. It had to be covering the entire room, sticking to the chairs, dripping from the table and all of it was coming from the same source; the dangling chain that waved in front of his vision almost felt like the pendulum of a hypnotists clock with the open eyes of his partner staring at him. The chain had a hook in it which pierced the back of John's skull going thru the bottom and to his mouth almost like a fishhook with his mouth open; blood dribbling out and down his neck. It was there that his body ended, the rest of the blood congealing and falling into a pool on the floor where the detective found himself looking now at the scrawled message as though a bone had been used to craft it.

Stop searching for me, before I search for you.


 * copied as best as I could from open forum on Clark's novels, this book is no longer in print after 1998.

It is speculated that this incident is similar to the death of John Seward as recorded by the Hungry Tiger in 95, although no evidence of this has been released since the video was taken off the web. Seward remains an open case file in Essex county to this day. 