Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20190501221723/@comment-35911608-20190507182108

I'm mostly of the same opinion. It's a great story and is well written, don't get me wrong, but if this were a meal, I'd be asking the waiter to take it back because it lacked in flavour. Needs more creepy sauce is what I'm saying if it wants to make it as a creepypasta. And a little more meat on the bone wouldn't hurt either.