Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24376783-20141228170610

Allen was walking down the street towards school. It seemed that it would be another boring day, with another boring class, and more boring classmates. He let out a sigh before looking up at the academy. It wasn't really that big, but it was supposedly one of the best in the state. Allen only saw it as a joke. Sure, he wasn't the smartest in his class, but at least he knew what he needed for what he wanted to do.

He headed into the building and felt a tingling down his spine. He looked around, but didn't notice anyone at first. He shrugged and continued walking. He still couldn't shake the feeling that something was off. He took another look around, this time being more keen. He noticed an unfamiliar female student looking right at him through a crowd of other students. Boring students, but the girl seemed different. Allen shook off the feeling and proceeded to class.

He headed into the class room to see the female student from before sitting two seats back and left one in relation to his seat. He was utterly confused as to how she got to class without going past him. Something didn't add up, but being the anti-theist that he was, he down right denied that it was anything as stupid and unhealthy as supernatural. After having his irritation levels raised several notches, he sat down in his seat and glowered at the teacher.

The teacher started righting complex math problems up on the board that no one would ever actually use in their life. He didn't even have to look to know that the three students in the back of the room to his left were most likely already asleep. He also knew that the blonde next to him didn't do anything but doodle in that ridiculous notebook of hers. Everyone else either didn't get it, or didn't care.

The teacher suddenly asked someone to come up and solve the problem. Allen was about to get up, thinking no one else was going to do it, but the new girl suddenly stood up and walked up to the board. She wrote down a series of numbers and equations that she used together to solve the problem. The entire class stared at her. Even the teacher was rather astonished that the girl managed to so quickly find a way to separate the problem into simpler section without breaking it. Something was definitely different about this girl.

After class, the girl headed to the lounge and started reading a book. Allen couldn't see the title, but he went over to another table and set himself up to do some self-studying. He became so immersed in the study, that he didn't even notice the girl walk over. "You got change for a ten?" Allen's head jolted to look at her. She raised her eyebrows. "Jumpy much?"

Allen pinched the bridge of his nose and sighed. He then gave her change for the ten dollar bill to use on the vending machine. She headed over to vending machines and bought something. Allen didn't really care to watch as he continued studying. The girl came back over and handed him a drink. "The machine spat out two on me. Hope you don't mind taking one." Allen gave her a confused look at first, but decided to take the drink. The girl then headed back to her seat.

Allen looked at the time. He got up and headed to his last class. The girl seemed to be in the same class again the moment he got there. He didn't even see her leave the lounge. What exactly was going on. He sat down in his seat and looked at the girl, trying to figure out how she managed to get here before him. Class then started and it went pretty much the same way. Everyone one was falling asleep, not getting it, or just not caring until the girl did something intelligent that was out of the ordinary.

After class, Allen started heading home. He felt that tingling down his spine again. He looked behind him, but there was nothing there. He continued, walking a bit faster. A shadow flew above him and he jumped back while looking up. The fact that it was just a bird wasn't even the worst part. He knocked someone to the ground. A feminine yelp sounded along with a thud. I turned around to see the female student. She looked up at Allen, straight into his eyes.

Allen instinctively held out a hand. The girl took it and pulled herself up. She smiled at him. "Mind if I come over to your place to get patched up from the fall?" He noticed a bit of blood on her hands from catching her fall on the cement. He nodded slowly and took her home without so much as a second thought.

After patching her up, the girl kissed Allen and pressed her breasts against his chest. "Care to be my pain killer?" Her voice was as seductive as her actions. It didn't take long for Allen to bring her to the bed room.

Neither Allen, nor the girl showed up to school for several days, nor did Allen check in with his friends and family. The police showed up at the door and knocked several time, but got no reply. They eventually got the spare key from the parents and went inside the house. Everything seemed fine, until they got to the bedroom. Allen's limbs were tied to the bedposts. His tongue with ripped out and his torso was opened up. All of his organs were laid out neatly on the study desk in a circle. The only thing missing was his heart.

The girl was now in another state. She sat in a dungeon-like room in a beautiful, yet grotesque form. Wings sprouted from her back and her left hand was mutated with long sharp claws for fingers. She was completely naked and holding a jar full of liquid and a heart in it. She placed the jar on a shelf with several other hearts. She then changed back into a human form and got dress in a new uniform for a different school. She then left the room. 