Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20160818160039/@comment-28266772-20160819143252

I get the overall jist of this story (I think), and I kind of like the sentiment. But I think it's trying to go for something grand and romantic and I'm not sure there's enough there to actually support it. Basically, I think this is a little too vague. I assume it's something to do with angels - satan's wife perhaps?

I'm not sure. I think it needs a bit of clarification, or just more content.