Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24101790-20151017205338/@comment-24101790-20151018023814

Likferd is right, I'll turn in my internet privileges tomorrow. As for Solonor's message, I explained the issue with having another author writing a story for you and having you post it on the deletion appeal and on Bennings' talk page.

Made some changes to try and remove the college thesis stat-overload feel of the Jerimiah's final message and clear up some of the confusion. I couldn't find the tense swap so if you could point it out, that'd be helpful.

If anyone has anymore suggestions on how to improve this, it'd be greatly appreciated.