Talk:On the Bus/@comment-24692889-20140318160223

Having the You as suppose to represent me made the entire story feel like soneone telling someone ells that some things happened to them... Basically, A RP game, with the game master, and ehatever rsndom character you choosed.

So, that made me feel like there is no specific ptotagonist, and that I'm heavily detached from mr.no one in particular.

Then he gets on the bus, and never leaves.

But... I simply felt there was no one there, just some guy telling the other guy his jouney in collumbia...

So, due to the narrator-protagonist relation, it gives an odd feeling that the looping situation eventually came to either a stop, or that it's indeed a non-evolving RP game story...

Nha, that You bit trashed the experience for me...