Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24686524-20140315101350/@comment-9967354-20140316063812

ooh, I like this. It's got a few grammatical errors but those can be fixed easily. I still don't know why you'd name your pasta 'the great fairy', but I haven't read the whole thing yet, so I cannot judge.

Also, don't mix up "its" and "it's", they're different. it's=it is. its=something possessed by another thing. See the difference?