Talk:Jeff the Killer/@comment-25210822-20140722094310

This is one of the worst creepypastas out there. I mean, first of all, what kind of bully introduces himself and his friends before robbing someone ? "Hi, how are ya? I'm Bob,and this is Stephen and Lawrence . We're here to take all your money . No hard feelings." Also, in the beginning, the little boy who told his story. I don't know about you, but I've never met a little boy who uses the words "illuminating" or "ominous" .I dont even use those words (Not that most 15 year old girls do) but still. Come on now. Let's think a little. The police must have been to lazy to investigate any further. Oh, and I love how realistic that whole fight at the party was. Because 3 kids are gonna be dumb enough to attempt to murder somebody in front of a large amount of little kids and their parents. Because, the police won't care. Just tell them you didn't do it, they're too lazy to investigate it anyway. And last, but most definitely not least. After being bleached and set on fire, Jeff still manages to keep his beautiful , luxurious hair. But what's even better than that, it's now black ! Like his soul.

His ominous , illuminating soul.

That was maybe 2 percent of the problems in this story. And I'm sure everything I've mentioned has been mentioned numerous times before, but its 5 in the morning and I'm still not tired , might as well critique one of the most famous, (yet horrifyingly illogical) pastas I've ever read.

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