Talk:Don't Know You from Adam/@comment-30402176-20170108170944/@comment-30402176-20170108193131

Story wise? Haha - I don't know if I'm in a good enough position to be giving feedback to a literary admin!

But I do have a few questions - how was this stalker able to see the protagonist's tattoo in the first place? From what I gather, he'd either had to have been spying on her through the bedroom window at an opportunistic moment without getting seen, or he'd been in a relationship with her in the past. Also, just a minor point, but written mail does seem like an awkward choice for communication in this modern, digital age. I imagine you picked this so that the stalker could live within close proximity, and be in a good position to spy on her, (and of course, end up murdered in her garden) but realistically, this would be less convenient, since his handwriting could easily be traced by experts. Wouldn't there be other ways for him to reach out to her, like calling her on the phone, or perhaps by social media, or e-mail?

Just thought I'd throw that in there.