Talk:One Second Before/@comment-26823574-20160323195140

I like it and I don't like it. I love how the entire story takes place in one second, because it gives you the feeling that anything can happen at any moment. But I got lost at Tock. Also, maybe I'm being too picky, but "and your eyes will shrivel up to the size of raisins" I believe should rewritten as "and your eyes will shrivel down to the size of raisins."