Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20160223234242/@comment-4893169-20160328224504

Thank you Raidra for checking Ch. 1-3.  I think I got everything that was pointed out here  About the sentence on Chapter 3

Gregory shrugged. “Who knows, maybe they’re all asleep? Maybe she’s trying out some new magical defense that specializes in attack book.”

He's griping as well as speculating on why Twicky's pets are so quiet as we as the reason why she collecting magic books.

That's interesting that you compare the ominous clouds in the beginning with the Grimm's fairy tale "The Fisherman and His Wife" where the clouds reflect the wife's greed. Some of my stories seem to resemble Grim's fairy tales.