Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27582895-20170203080538/@comment-31111342-20170203123842

It's just the protagonist rambling about almost nothing relevance before she's bullied and then murders the guy at the end. Not scary, nor is it an interesting or creative story. Maybe we should have known her brother was insane before the guy randomly brought it up? Or maybe, since she gets attacked anyway, just skip it since it clearly doesn't mean anything for the story except to make us feel bad for Robyn?