Talk:Red Water/@comment-31349391-20170220024833

I loved your story the first time I read it so I decided to narrate it as well. I would appreciate any feedback. I hope you can continue making great stories like this. >(｡✖ ᆺ ◕｡)<

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9NRFq14tPRo&t=57