Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181128205448/@comment-36877863-20181129142825

While the story needs a little work, I think the main concerns are more specific than "this is boring." It is somewhat drawn-out, and there is a certain overemphasis on the competence of the Waheela without sufficient explanation. But these are fixable issues, and they don't merit a sarcastic, unconstructive "eh, not interesting enough."

My suggestions: Cut down on length by removing some unimportant stuff, describe the Waheeli in more detail, and come up with a reason as to why they're killing people. Also, if you want a "false hope" moment, I suggest that the characters could find some kind of fatal weakness of the Waheela in the book, which turns out not to work. Don't worry about realism compared to real-life predators- if I wanted sound science, I wouldn't expect to find it here.