Talk:Flicker/@comment-6684440-20140213151802

Woah...Where to begin...This was a GREAT story and I loved how the guy didn't understand until the end, I kind of wish you had made Gabe slightly more active, such as coming to his house only to run away after seeing the flickering light, and with the flicker..oh boy that flicker. "'Nuff said".

Punctuation/spelling/grammar 10

Overall creepiness                  11

Detail                                      10

Total:                                     31/30. Great Story brah, keep it up =^-^=.

-Astral