Talk:Crucifix/@comment-25052433-20150915045111

Okay, so, let's take a look at Crucifix.

This is by far one of the more original stories that I have come across here. You did an excellent job of taking something rather mundane, a crucifix in a religious household, and making it into an incredible center-piece of horror. I will admit, crucifixes used to give me the creeps a bit when I was a kid too, the idea of seeing a man strung out dead on a cross, despite what it may represent, is still a bit morbid, when your really think about it.

I liked the characters, as they all seemed real enough. Even Susan was likable in her own right. At first I thought she was going to be a christian fanatic, dogging Craig about his atheism, but she actually took it well and seeminly did all she could to welcome him into the family. The twins were creepy, as I would imagine they would seem that way to a foster child being pushed into a new family.

All around this was a great story, and I certainly look forward to seeing more of what you've got. I might very well binge read your stuff tonight, you never know.

I made a couple edits, nothing major. I also removed the "places" category, as it didn't really apply, and added the "mental illness" category. I later read in a comment below that you removed that category in the past, so if you don't feel it fits, feel free to remove it again.

Excellent work, this is a fine example of a Creepypasta, and certainly sets the tone for your obvious talent as a writer.