Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26572995-20150704172407/@comment-26007602-20150704173836

First off, read this. It explains all of the OC tropes and why the general plot of your story won't be accepted. I strongly urge you to read it. Your plotline is very cliché: happy, wonderful child/teen is abused by a needlessly cruel parent, is in some horrible accident that disfigures them in some way, and then snaps and kills everyone. It's been done to death so many times and won't be accepted here. Your ending, "If you see her you better run for your life", is also a clichéd, "You're next" style ending that has been used so many times, it has found its way onto the cliché list.

Additionally, this story is absolutely marred by spelling and grammatical errors, so many that I'm not going to list them all. You need to proofread your stories and should probably put them into Word or another word processor so you can catch spelling and grammatical errors. For future reference, dialogue needs to be in quotations as well.