Talk:Something Happened 63 Years Ago That Haunted Me My Entire Life/@comment-34032049-20180115202719

A very well written intro. But I cant give it more credit than that. Ambiguous endings that leave the rest up to the imaginiation of the reader are great..except for when it leaves the entire story up to the imagination of the reader. Imagine if The Lord of The Rings explained that there was this one evil ring that had to be destroyed, it could only be destroyed by dropping it into the Giant volcano in the middle of the Bad News captiol of middle earth, and that this unlikely hero would have to trek through miles of action and adventure to get there and save the world....and thats it. thats all the info you get. The rest is up to you.

Challenging the readers imagination is great. But you have to remember that they are the reader and you are the author. they came for a story.

you are a talented writer for sure. do something with it.

3/10