User blog comment:KilalaTwotails/My Nightmare/@comment-25558572-20140808053150/@comment-25558572-20140808185001

The moment someone calls themself a writer when they think grammar is not a vital factor, or treat it like a chore, is the moment I cease to take them seriously.

I looked over your story (since you started an entire wiki about it...) and found it to be rather bland. You have a lot of issues with your grammar; sentence fragments ("Only finding that the front, back and ask the windows were open", "Dark circles around her eyes") and your overall premise is cliche and unrealistic. How on earth could your protagonist write the story if she was killed? And why did the monster want to kill her? Unanswered questions can add to the mystery of a story, but not if there's so many that the story makes no sense.

If you want to improve your writing, practice. Try writing something based off a prompt or first-line generator. I did that last night and got a pretty funny result. Judging by your writing style, you also seem to need to read more.