Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27629228-20160131181918/@comment-24101790-20160131184002

Your story was deleted for being well-below our quality standards.

Spelling errors: "Now I am a collage student studying to master", "I had pricked his ulnar artery with the poisoned bard.", etc.

Wording errors: "Biology, I was always a science nerd and Biology was always my favorite unit.", " It was at one of the unorganized houses, the student taking residence there was always a party animal, but always invited people who got on my nerves.", "The jocks who make fun of the non jock" etc. Stating the same thing twice/using the same wording is redundant.

Wording issues cont.: There are also a lot of fragmented sentences here that give the story a very choppy/incomplete feel. "A fast acting poison at that.", "Spice things up you know?", "Party time."

Grammatical issues: their=possession, there=indicatory, they're=they are. " I came downstairs and nobody seemed to ask where there (their) host went. "

Story issues: The protagonist's decision to murder the host is without reason and unfounded. You don't even really try to explain what's going on in his head. The likelihood of him pricking him directly in the artery is incredibly unlikely and odd that he wouldn't feel the injection. (The artery is covered by skin and muscle to protect it). Finally the story is rushed and really doesn't go anywhere. The characters are unbelievable. The protagonists doesn't like parties yet goes to them constantly.

I'm sorry, but this story has a lot of issues with it and the attitude you've taken lately when called out on the lack of time/focus you put into these stories is not a good sign that you're willing to improve.