Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-6822927-20190104215501/@comment-6822927-20190105043620

Honestly, whatever version of Grammarly I used doesn't pick up on the spelling errors described. I firmly believe something is wrong with it.

I wanted to first give a feel of the main character and who he is before he goes into the woods, showing how he comes back to this place of his childhood only to find something there that ruins his memories of it.

As for the creatures, I was actually going for the Fair Folk, with the first one being non-malicious while the second is actively trying to hurt them. When they leave his land, he shows himself and lets him live. I totally should have included something about the old stories of Ireland, just to imply that.

I also agree, maybe I could have compressed some parts down. I wanted this to be a story about a boy and his dog whom he and his family neglects, not out of heartlessness, returning to a childhood haunt of his but finds that things have changed completely and he is no longer welcome.