Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20180630041028/@comment-26444017-20180701202653

It's updated. Don't know if it's any better, but there it is.

On an unrelated note, I made an update to one of my longer stories in the Workshop a little while ago. Right now it's under the title Pasta Idea, Draft Number Three, Request Additional Review. Any help would be appreciated.