Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24982950-20170318105927/@comment-25458443-20170318132711

"Yeah I contributed sometthing"

I finished reading it, I liked it! Not sure what other people would think but if I saw it on the site I wouldn't really go "Wait a minute is this actually worthy of this site?" I'd probably just read it and like it alright and move on with my life.

I like how you quickly give the setting as well as quickly explain the situation the main character is in very effectively. If that first paragraph wasn't so strong I don't think the story would work whatsoever.