Talk:Dinner Is Served/@comment-26487130-20190502092146

It's just too short IMO, there's no real reason for me to feel anything for the people in the story sorry.

In fact, I feel like they were a bit foolish. Yes, there was food with it, but eating something when you genuinely have no idea what it is is a bad idea. Also, most people would suspect they were ashes I'd think, given how ashes are, even if they didn't know it was human remains.

I hate to be that guy, but I honestly found their foolishness more funny than creepy. It's structurally well written, but it lacks any sort of heart-strings pulling or creepiness factor to me.