User blog comment:Death.jpg/Writing tips...?/@comment-25558572-20140921232748

I agree with everything here except for point six. You don't really need to describe character appearance unless it's important to the story, and their personality should come out through their actions rather than just a description. Using phrases like "Jack was always getting into trouble..." or "Angie wasn't a very nice person..." are pretty much flat unless we have some examples to know that these characters do have personality traits. Aside from that, good job!