Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37554505-20181121225755/@comment-9041013-20181123002648

Alright, so let's establish something clear here - time is a dimension... we live in a 4D universe.

Other than that, I kind of don't see why should I take this story seriously, "there are things that could eat you out there", Okay cool... what's next.

How about showing us a bit of whats there in detail? Just a little "trip"

Also, Bob is right, why this specific person and who's talking to him, obviously the reason can be "randomly..." "just caught my eye..." stuff like that, mundane... makes humanity seems a little irrelevant in the grand scheme of things like you intend the story to do.

Also, from a point to a line... and again from a point to a circle... an infinite number of dots in all directions.