Talk:The Russian Sleep Experiment/@comment-24103274-20131028153750

This was a good, well written pasta. It's almost like a report of what was done and what happened, just told like story. I like the mysteries around this story. All we know is when it happened, which country it happened in, but we get no names. Not exact place, name of the gas that was used, or what kind of gas it was, the doctors, subjects and soldiers are anonymous. I really like how mysterious it is.

I also like how we follow the transformation from human to beast, and the conclusion that we all have a slumbering beast inside of us. Which we tranquilize by sleeping. The story twines fiction and reality in a nice way, which I think works very well. We are all monsters after all.

Even the end is creepy, the story could be creepier. It has the potensial to give chills and/or make me frightened or creeped out, but unfortunately it didn't. And to recieve top score from me, I'd like to feel frightened or creeped out. But the story was still good and I enjoyed it alot.

9/10.