Talk:Hands of a Living God/@comment-26409942-20150519175326

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Seriously though, I loved it. This was a really great way of using a third person narrative (ish) but it still feel plausible as a pasta and possible real story because of shifting from the first person through to a retelling from someone else. I feel like I've heard the snakes in a religious cult thing before, but I can't put my finger on where. But that kind of just adds to that feel that this could be real and the idea of the a legend. Very well written, descriptive and strong characterisation in such a short space.