Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10319977-20151014202612/@comment-10319977-20151015175053

Thank you for your input. Lately I've been almost completely lacking motivation, so even coming up with and posting this story was pretty forced/uninspired.

Still, I would like to see it improve as well. I'll most likely wait until I'm motivated again to come back to this. In the meantime, anyone offering any other criticism or helpful ideas is more than welcome.