Talk:War-Torn/@comment-28088262-20150530210921/@comment-28088262-20150531132758

Well, I‘m no Vietnam war expert, but from what I can see there are no obvious mistakes I can spot. Cleverly, you didn‘t include too much historic information, always a good idea when writing about something unfamiliar, but obviously it is best to write about something you have studied before when it comes to history. No dissing your story, which was handled well.

I do not feel it is disrespectful at all. The gore element merely displayed the truth about some of the horrific things which occurred during the war.

With the Iraq line, I think it was a good idea not to add that in, not because of the reason you suggested but because it is rather irrelevant.

Yes, and do add some gore to the birth scene. Describe as much as you need; description doesn‘t become excessive until you repeat things or mention irrelevant things. So spill it all out!