Talk:Dogtags/@comment-25052433-20171124021325

Biggest issue with this story is the incredible amount of incorrect military jargon used. A couple Google searches would have cleared all the errors up. For example, every Soldier you mention is a Private of some sort. Is this a Ranger Team consisting of only Privates? Who's in charge there?

Second, a Ranger would not simply ignore some invincible enemy combatant and blame it on the heat.

Third, there is no such rank as 1st Private. What I think you were thinking about was Private First Class.

Otherwise, the plot is somewhat interesting. The journal style writing makes it easy to read and the core concept is frightening. Remember that research is always key!