Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25980905-20150201123313/@comment-26027963-20150213042700

I think you should add more suspense in to it, I mean it feels like the same classic story, knocking at the door, but no one is there, I really, (and I apologize for this) didn't feel scared at all, I'm sorry, but you should consider a re-write, or completely start over. --Love watching all of you scream, CrazyWords 04:27, February 13, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords