Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25414153-20140913230130/@comment-25170312-20140915054538

Pretty good so far. You might want to mention that the main character is an author earlier in the story. It seems shoved in there when it talks about his novel all of a sudden. And in the sentence "It felt like a new beginning of a new life for me", I wouldn't say "new" twice. Maybe say "the beginning" instead of "new beginning"? There are a few other technical things, but I'm sure you are more concerned with feedback on the writing style and plot, which I think are good.