Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140811072625/@comment-25226524-20140812213624

I see. This isn't the first time I've misinterpreted a story, and it won't be my last : ) As I said before, I do think this is a good story and well written, but I had a little trouble keeping up with everything.  I'm sure once you tweak it a little, it will be good to go.  Thanks for the story.  Keep 'em coming.