Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4617036-20140729225021

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Have you ever had that feeling when you sense someone behind you but, there isn't anyone there? I've felt that way a few time before. As a matter of facts, I still feel that way every now and then.

I remember when I first had that feeling. It was around the summer of 1999. I was going on a romantic date with my girlfriend to the lake in the middle of the woods. It was around 11:00 P.M. We were planning to have a little bit of 'Fun' under a tree.

While we were sitting by the lake on a rock she said that 'Nature is calling her' and she had to go. She gave me a wink with her hazel eyes and told me that she'll be waiting for me.

Me, being the idiot I was back then, I quickly smirked and followed her. Heh, I wasn't gonna miss out on the best time of my life.

Right when we got far enough into the woods, I immediately pulled her up against a tree and started to smash my lips into hers. One thing lead to another and it was 2:32 P.M.

We already fell asleep at 12:00 P.M. But than I woke up startled by the noise I was hearing. It sounded like footsteps but, the person was dragging their feet around making a lot of noise.

I turned around and I didn't hear the footsteps anymore and I didn't feel anything behind me. If only I knew that was only the beginning.

I dismissed the sound and the feeling I had and fell right back to sleep embracing my girlfriend.

Next thing I knew, it was morning and my girlfriend and I were ready to go to a local diner and buy ourselves some breakfast. After we had breakfast, I drove my girlfriend home and she said goodbye.

I didn't really feel like going back to my house so, I decided to go and visit my parents. To be honest, I did move out of my parents house just so my girlfriend and I could be alone without my mom or dad asking to come inside my room to get something they 'Left there'. But, that doesn't mean I don't love them.

Nothing really interesting happened so, I left after being forced to watch a soap opera with my mom and dad.

It was a nice and breezy night. The stars were shining brightly on this small quiet town. My parents didn't mind if I left my car in their driveway because, I wanted to walk home and enjoy the night.

Big mistake. If I had the chance to go back and tell myself to take the car instead of walking, I would do it.

While I was walking home, I once again heard those shivering, dragging feet behind me. I shuttered as I heard the screeching that was behind me. It sounded much worse then when I was in the woods.

I decided to confront this sound that I was hearing and face it head on. "Who are you and why are you making these noises!" I shouted to the sound.

I started to hear it again. But this time, it was able to say something with the screeching.

"It wont stop."

And for the rest of my life, I live in fear. 