Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20150504195553/@comment-24101790-20150512233231

I enjoyed the Lovecraft references to Arkham, Dunwich, and Innsmouth, they really set the mood. As well as the Curtisville reference to your novella builds a nice universe for the story to reside in. I also enjoy mythology seeping into the universe.

I saw only a few errors, but I'll fix them as soon as I post this. (Some minor spacing errors.)

Banning is pretty much spot on with his review, the only piece of advice I can give might be to add links to mythological creatures (like the Wild Hunt.) for the uninitiated. You can break up the beginning some with interactions, dialogue/monologue, or the protagonist's sentiments to keep less-focused readers onto the story. It's a well-thought out story and I'm interested in reading the following story.