Talk:In the Burnt Tower/@comment-35359331-20180426194954

The story itself was great, and I'll be writing a full review later, but there's one problem: where it says ''"My meal is a freshly killed animal of some sort, and I rip the fur off with my gnarly mangled finger nails." ''there needs to be a comma between "gnarly" and "mangled", because as it is now, it suggests that the mangled is gnarly, which makes no sense whatsoever.