Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10502460-20180328021546/@comment-9041013-20180328104900

Kolpik wrote: Sorry BloodySpghetti, but I don't agree. I'd be freaked out too if strangers showed up at my home after 1:00 AM. The prize showed up too quickly to be trusted. I'm not answering the door that late at night even if it's the Publisher's Clearing House people wanting to give me a giant check for $10,000,000. Especially if I'd just mailed my envelope less than 24 hours ago. That being said, HopelessNightOwl, I wasn't too crazy about the ending. I've read some of your other stuff and I think you could cap this off better. True, true. Here's the thing, The kid doesn't find this weird channel to be too weird no matter how whacky the circumstances are. So that's why I'm saying he just goes from 0 to 100, if he got a creepy person to knock on the door or something of the sorts, it'd be better.