Talk:He Knows/@comment-5733573-20180409044208

Sorry, I don't get it. What are you trying to say in this story? The last paragraph just throws the whole thing into confusion and the ending isn't clear at all. Also, I hate to be this person, but there are several grammatical errors here. For instance, semicolons have a specific purpose and can only be used at certain times. Overall, this story had a good idea, but it needs a lot more development and better execution.