Talk:A Story/@comment-24963841-20141020105807

Well that wad interesting. Could have lost the ones emptyhead moments based on spelling and added something like "What you have just read is a transcribing of a recording found in the home of (redacted) and (redacted) found murdered by their son (redacted) who commited suicide moments after police arrived," that would cause the style to make infinitly more sense. Final score 8.5/10