Talk:In the Pines/@comment-26921684-20151114191130

Very cliched overall. The beginning was decent but then it turned into a funnymouth rip-off, with an evil entity infesting a chat room with non-sense. Not very well written, with much too many short sentences, and too many missed commas. The story is very "fanboyish" to me.

The only savior is the ending which was pretty good.

4/10