Talk:The Shower/@comment-26326346-20150812050753

I've starred at this pasta for a few minutes trying to poke holes in its logic and found none. Despite its shortness, I really like this pasta due to its creativity and twist. At first I was going to nitpick about how the mother should have heard the screaming and known better, but that assumes that the mother isn't deaf and/or that the shower isn't very loud (I used to live at a house where the pipes would get loud in the other room when the shower was running, so it is plausible).

The theme of how people have a tendency to overlook things is great (the mother overlooking the screaming and the main character assuming that it and the staring is normal).