Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31073921-20170308131720/@comment-25941663-20170318115145

I'm sorry but this does not meet quality standards. It's not that it's badly written, but it doesn't have much going on. A maniac talking to their victim cannot constitute a story on its own, unless it is done very, very well. I'm afraid this reads more like a segment in a larger story than a standalone pasta.