Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4849011-20160604033711/@comment-25569708-20160616024424

Hey Raidra, sorry that it's taken a bit of time for you to get some criticism here. I'd like to give you feedback, but I see that this story is part of a series of yours. Would I have to read your entire series in order to fully understand/evaluate this piece? I'd be happy to do so if it's required to review this.