Talk:Dr. Xander/@comment-37138398-20181108003634

Too quick. The storytelling was too fast-paced. Add some backstory, like why Xander's parents hate him so much. Also, the way he got insane was terrible. I makes it better storytelling if you say that he steadily got more insane the more his parents abused him. Finally, what was up with the super strength. It takes a lot to break restraints meant to hold down Dwain Johnson-sized people, not to mention a physically-17 year old kid. 2/10. Please fix and clean up.