User blog comment:Nathanation/motivation/@comment-25052433-20150509013330/@comment-25052433-20150509015537

No worries, like I said, we are here to help you out. So, if you are aware that grammar is your weak spot, that's actually a great start. I mean, you are aware of the areas where you need help, and that level of self awareness is going to work large in your favor.

Now, I certainly don't have time to give you a full on grammar lesson on a blog, but some of the errors that I notice are pretty simple fixes. Easy example, we'll use the first sentence in your reply:

Thanks i never intended to be an attention whore i just grew up around tough love you know?

Okay, that should look like this,

''Thanks, I never intended to be an attention whore. I just grew up around touch love, you know?''

Easy enough. Remember, I is in uppercase when you are referring to yourself. Commas should be inserted as needed for pause, and avoid those run on sentences.

Now, here is some easy advince. Don't ever actually write your story in the Creepypasta Wiki virtual editor. That thing will crash if your internet goes out and all of your progress will be lost.

Instead, write it on a MS Word document and spell check the shit out of that thing. Word is pretty good about catching grammar mistakes. Once you get that done and you feel like it's ready, paste it into the Writer's Workshop feature here and let the community have a crack at it. We are only interested in getting the best possible version of your work posted. Sure, sometimes you'll come across a user here that doesn't have the best bedside manner when it comes to giving critiques, but ignore the users that slam you work and pay attention to the actual wise advice that will come through.

I hope this advice helps, and I look forward to see some of your writing. Best of luck!