Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25100975-20140624174331/@comment-9967354-20140628122939

Close also your windows -should be also close your windows.

Other than that, I don't see any errors.

The rituals you described were very interesting! Especially the last. Maybe you could pay attention to certain details that might not make it possible for some people -imaginary people, I guess- to try it. For example, when you say 'close your doors only enough so a small force can shut it', maybe you should consider doors with old-fashioned locks. Maybe you should add more 'or's so the ritual seems more flexible.

Other than that, the first one didn't seem to be very interesting. If nobody's home, it must be something else that closed the doors. I thought it'd be something pertaining to the significance of doors in rituals.

Lastly, maybe you'd want to consider more scenarios when it comes to what'll happen at the end of the ritual. Branch out from there, and explain the significance of what just happened. Tell us why it happened. Readers need to have more of an idea as to why stuff is as it is, and you, the writer, need to have a clear idea to explain it.