Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20140713012004/@comment-25070750-20140714073312

I loved it. I thought it was short, to the point, and very creepy! Excellent work I'd say for your first pasta. I'm no expert though. I've only written 1 pasta so far too. It's called My Father's Box. You should check it out as well. =) But I'd give this a 8/10!!