Talk:Clockwork/@comment-24868505-20140829194100/@comment-24079115-20140830150357

Thanks for the feedback! I agree that I definitely strove for too much with the ending. Looking back the whole "realized he was dead" may be a realization the reader reaches, but I didn't entirely write in the train of thought in Mr. Nell that would lead to that realization. As for the end, I was trying to reach for a symbolic ending relating to the inevitability of death and whatnot, but again, the excution of the final part of the story seems more juvenile than symbolic. Thanks again for the feedback!