Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34279639-20180424162349/@comment-9041013-20180424171305

Well this is literally a very basic "spook" story. It has all the basic horror tropes in it.

Its unoriginal, and uninspired.

Everything is easily predictable and known.

You do build an atmosphere well enough to misdirect a bit.

However, I think you just need to read a bit more horror to catch up to what people find scary, perhaps something awesome will come out of that in the future, for the meantime, it's just so very basic.