Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27012445-20171102144354/@comment-27012445-20171109210510

I am always so very appreciative of any feedback. I also just learned that I should get my $60 back from Grammarly I've been paying then every four months. They should've picked up most of these mistakes. LOL. Anyways, I am very pleased you like it. I am still considering how to take the story. I do like the Alien model though. Giggle was a straightforward horror. Tabitha was an action story like Aliens. Of course, if I follow that train of thought, I should stop here. After Aliens, every movie since then sucked. LOL