Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25014870-20140707115820

Hi, i'm John. I'm an ordinary person, except that I met with a terrible fate. Well, it has been 3 years ago after it happend. I'm still freaked out till this day.

It was an ordinary morning, in my apartment. Nothing special. I was ready for a job interview (I was fired from the last one). I was a bit nervous and unpatient. I dressed up and drove away with my bike. It wasnt alot to get there, about 20 minutes. I came here 7 minutes earlier. There were some 8 other guys, that I think waited for their job. But there was an anohter guy, who was compeletly covered in his coat. I couldn't see his face. He just sat there on the waiting couch.

Well, the time has come, and I was the 4th in line for my interview. Each guys before me needed about 13 minutes to finish the interview. Now, I came in the line. I entered the room, and sat on the chair before me. Behind the desk was a guy with glasses, grey hair, and a pretty fat body, not so fat. Well, he started to ask me qustions:

-"John Sethor?"

"Yes sir."

-"Do you have any interest, into the job your candidating for here?"

"Ofcourse sir!"

-"Good! Do you have any knowledge in finance, assistance, and landlording?"

"Ofcourse, doesn't that say in my bio?"

-"Yes it does, but I have to check that myself. Well, since we're talking about bio, it says in here you were fired 4 times. What was going wrong ine the previous jobs?"

"That is none of your business!"

-"Yes it is! Now if you want to work in this job, you'll have to answer."

"Well, I was said to be not inportant, and boss needed more workers."

It went on and on... until I wasnt accepted. I should probably not add that I was fired. Anyway, the Mysterious guy on the couch went towards the room for interviews. I just went back home and didn't mind his business.

In the middle of the night, I couldn't sleep. It was a thunder outside, and I mostly couldn't sleep when it was. Anyway, I had a strange feeling, that there is someone alse in my apartment. I heard something fell in the kitchen. I quickly went to look at what it was. It was just a bunch pots on the floor. In them was a red liquid. I didn't cook much, and I don't think I previously cooked something red, and the pots we're cleaned up after I cooked. It was strange, so I cleaned them again. The color was blood-like, but I didn't think it was such a disturbing thing. Next morning, I was awaken by nighmares. I dreamed, that some thing had giant nails, and it stabbed me into the stomache. Well, I was okay that morning. I drank my coffee and I felt like I was just reborned. Its a weird feeling. Anyway, I heard the doorbell. I opened the door, noone was before it. It was strange.

Well, I could a bit talk about my past now. I was raised by both of my parents in a house near New York. I was an only child. I left my parents when 20 years old. I wanted to try live on my own, and so I did. I rented an apartment, where I live till this day. I never went back to my parent's house. But I one day I planned to. The house, looked like, noone lived there for years. Walls outside were ripped and holled. It was like an apocalypse happend there. Well, I entered the house by climbing to the nearest hole in the wall. Inside were needles and smal bags. Looks like drug dealers were meeting here. I don't know what happend to my parents. Are they dead? I was scared about that. I was now investigating the house. Walls from the inside were full of graffitis, like: "Evil wuz here!" and some strange things like "1224345". I don't even know what that number ment. I looked around the house, and everything was empty. Wallpapers were ripped of the walls, and knifes with blood were on laying on the floor. It was preety creepy. Oh, and the smell, it smelled like a roting farm house. Anyway, I went into a room, which was suppose to be my room. In it there was still a bed and on it toys with blood on them. There was a giant teddybear which I dont remember, and it had a hole on the bottom. From it there was clearly a dried blood strain. Very creepy. I than looked around and found a hole in the wall. It was shaped like a door. i entered the hole and came into a room, I never thought existed. In it was a desk with some laboratory machines. There was dried blood everywhere. I also found a head under the table. I quickly hovered my mouth with my hand. And vomited. I also cried a bit. I wanted to calll 911, but I wished to continue searching. I opened some drawers, and in them were jars with, I guessed human organs in a liquid. It looked like my bioligy class from high-school, except the blood part. There was indeed one window in the room. I looked through it and saw the same Mysterious man in front onf the house. I barely saw his eyes. He than quickly walked away, just after I saw him. Now I wished to call 911, but there was no signal. I looked again around the room, and I found a folder in the table drawer. I opened it and saw weird, disturbing pictures. I was confused when I saw them.

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">On picture number 1, it was a dead body, probably a woman on the floor, and she was laying on a pod of blood. She was compeletly naked, and was laying on her stomache. Her back was looked like being tortured with a whip. And some parts of flesh was also cut off.

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">Picture number 2 showed a dead mans body, laying on his back, pictured from the same angle as the first one. The man clearly had no penis and testicales. It was very disturbing. His stomache was cut open, with no organs in it. Blood was all over his body.

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">Picture number 3 showed a woman, laying on a bed, tied up on it with a cut open jaw, with no gum in it. She had blood all over her mouth, and the picture on showed her mouth from close.

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">Picture number 4 was the most disturbing of all. It showed two bodies, opposite sex, and when I looked their faces, I thought they were my parents. The woman, had all limbs removed as well as the man had. Their backs war sealed together. And also their faces were cut off. I mean, their faces were flat with flesh in and blood everywhere. I was shocked, and almost began to cry. I took the files home.

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">When I came home I put the away the pictures, and looked at them one more time. I than saw a pieace of paper. It was probably written with a type writer. I read the whole thing and saw, that it is talking about an experiment, named "Mystery man". I said all of this>

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">''My name is Samuel F. Sethor. I am an expert in biology and psychology. I have started to think of an experiment like this, where I will kidnapp 5 people, and test them, mentaly and scientificly. I am calling this as a mission or project "Mystery man". What the goal of this project is to find a mysterious part on a human body, that doesnt feel pain. I'm going to inlclude my self also as a test subject. With me is going to be my dear friend Jack Efrat. He is also going to take the subjects pictures. I'm going to do this in a place somwhere in California, far from my home. I lied to my wife and child that i'm going on a long trip. I already have choosen those people. Jack is going to kidnapp my mother, and take her to the test facility. I'm no scared about it.''

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">''The first victim was a 20 years old woman, who will be inprisoned in a tight room, so we awake her claustrophobia. She will be in that room for 3 days. She spoke to her self and screamed and shouted to let her go. Then, when she will be taken out of it, she will be tortured with a whip. She as all of other test subjects, she will be compeletly naked. Then, we will start to search for the organ. We will slowly cut parts of flesh from her back. The victim couldn't take the pain and than died on March 17th.''

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">''Next victim was a 44 years old man. We will torutre her again as the fisrt victim, and than cut his stomache. The subject was crying and pleasing to go home in every of the test. He was crying when we started to put off the skin. He also died after we cut off his kidneys, and bleed out. Date of death is 23th of March.''

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">''The third victim is again a 23 years old woman, tied up on the bed. She wasnt tested with any claustrophoby, but was tied up on her bed with her mouth closed with a rag. She was screaming alll 3 days. After the days were over we whped her on her stomache. There war blood strains all over her stomache. We were going to cut of her mouth. So we removed the rag and she spit into my face and started to curse and screming for help. Noone outside would hear her. Next, we started to cut her mouth widely and had handles that wouldn't let her bite. We cut her mouth widely open, and blood was everywhere inside her mouth. It was indeed horrible. We than cut of her gum, and throw it away. The subject died again from pain and the loss of blood.''

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">''The forth and the fifth subjects were myself and my mother. We were seperatly tied on beds, well my mother was in a room for claustrophoby. It was horrible being tied up. It felt like a never ending prison. After three days, both of our backs were cut open so there we could see our spines. It was the worst pain in my life. I screamed after they cut opened it. Than they put us both asleep. I dont remeber what happend next, but I woke up with my spine and my back sealed to my mother's. I felt that after I tried to get away. Jack told me that he cut away her spine and conected my nerves and to her nerves, so we had a one connected spine. I lost all of my memory. I could barely move my legs. Jack than told me that my mother dyed, as a loss of nerve system and connecton to her brain. He than told me that, the back is the part that doesn't take pain after it is used. I didn't believe that. Jack than unsealed my back, and I became a quadropleg. I couldnt move my legs and my arms. I also didnt felt my body, only my head.''

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">''Jack has a mission now to find or create the Mystery man himself. I dont know what he will make.''

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">I was literally shocked when I read that. I didnt know my father was such an evil person. To test 4 random person, including my grandmother. He lied to me and my mother, as he said she died cause' of a heart attack. He killed her. Anyway, I still dont know what does he mean by creating a Mystery Man. What does he mean by that, and the Mystery man project isn't all of finding the myserious body part, but its a compeletly other project.

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">Now. It was 7 PM. I was a bit tired, so I went in my bed. I head a nightmare, I was one of the subjects. The same night, I woke up in middle of it. I looked towards my window, which was directly opposite of my bed. Before it was standing a scared man with sealed pieces of faces on his own. He steped towards me and put his burned hands on my throat. He was trying to strangul me. I was pulling his hands off my throat. And stand up. I punched him and he felt on the floor. I crowched and check if he's dead. He was unconcious. I quiclky called 911. The ambulance and the police came very quick and took the man away. I also told them about my parent's house, and gave them the file. They, took it as a clue for several suffacating murders. They also told me that he person killed my cousins. I was shocked about it and freaked out.

<p style="border-bottom-width:0px;border-left-width:0px;font-style:inherit;font-weight:inherit;margin-top:1em;margin-right:0px;margin-bottom:1em;margin-left:0px;padding-top:0px;padding-right:0px;padding-bottom:0px;padding-left:0px;vertical-align:baseline;">My dad was trying to create a killer monster, or was Jack trying to kill my family? This is the question that will be left unanswered, till I find my parents. <ac_metadata title="Mystery Man pasta"> </ac_metadata>