Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180828001306/@comment-35911608-20180828111320

Ahh, very nice. Very nice indeed. This was always one aspect of immortality I thought about, glad to see it written out in a story, and written well on top of that. I'm not entirely sure myself how I feel about the devil appearing at the end? I liked it and at the same time didn't seem to like it? I'll let it sink in a bit and then decide. But yeah, definitely a keeper.