Board Thread:Questions and Answers/@comment-11190391-20130623110845

I was wondering if a story I began writing last night would fit the standards of this site. The main problem is its length. I have already reached 508 words, and I am still only at the beginning. Also, I fear that it would be considered boring. It is about a person who decides that he needs to explore a strange manmade pit in the center of an otherwise empty desert. Does this topic sound interesting at all? I also fear that my writing style is a bit dry, so any suggestions on how to improve would be greatly appreciated! 