Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30660757-20161205185508

"Owen! Time to get up!" It was Monday, during the winter, and it was time for school. "Coming." Owen ran down stairs as he put his shirt on. The smell of pancakes filled the room while he entered the kitchen. Owen ate his breakfast, ran outside, hoped on his bike, and he was on his way to school. He was 5 minutes late once he got unpacked and walked to his class. "Owen, this is the 2nd time this week, next time, you will have a lunch detention." This scared Owen as he said sorry. After lunch, a group of cool kids he really wants to be friend with. "Hey punk, we dare you to enter the empty room near the cafeteria, if you do it, I'll pay ya 50 bucks." This make Owen insrested, as because he needed money to buy his sister a gift for Christmas. "Sure, I'll do it" After school, Owen meet them at the back of the school. They sneaked in to the school, and walked to the room. "Get in punk!" He kicked him in and shut the door behind him. It was just a blank, dark room, with a bucket and a mop. He sat down on the damp floor in front of the door. "Okay...guys...I'm in..now let me out." There was no response. He tried to open the door but it was locked. He screamed help, but he knew it was usless. He decided to walk around the room to find that the bucket that was there was filled with blood, as well as the mop covered in blood. He backed up slowly as the door opened. It was the group of kids. "Sorry, the door jammed." "Oh yeah right, don't talk to me." Owen then went home with the memory trapped in his head forever

I know this story was rush and please tell me if there is any errors 😜 