Talk:My Parents Came to Pick Me Up/@comment-26048015-20150307082645

Eh, it's been done before. The twist was predictable, and most kids wouldn't assume someone pulling up in a white van would be their parents if their parents don't actually drive a white van. Especially if they're wearing masks and doing something they don't normally do; kids aren't that dumb.

The writing isn't anything spectacular, but it shows promise if the writer works on their writing skills in the future.

It was a good attempt and I see what they were trying to go for, but there's a lot of room for improvement.