Talk:An Old House/@comment-25326117-20160604002357

1) It's very tone made me scrunch my face in discomfort.

(I added an ' between it and the s since it's a combination of it and is).

(This was very good.  I am thinking that whatever was in that house killed Peter and took his shape.  It would nice to have a sequel.  Maybe, the brother could venture to the house before it was being torn down and finding Peter's skeletal remains).