Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20180908140952/@comment-35711173-20180908174539

Most of the way, I like it. It's the last few paragraphs where I think it loses it. If there is a doppelganger cycle, where does he fit in it now? When do his eyes turn milky white? How did he get teleported to his house?

I think there are punctuation errors but all in all the mechanics look pretty good.