Talk:Gravel.com/@comment-25056896-20140613052636

I liked it, but I don't think it was very scary. I think it could've been better if there had been more between the friend leaving and hearing about his death, like if he'd been missing for a day or two before it was reported, a search was started, and then his body was found under the gravel. The ending was a little predictable and it's very short, but the idea was neat, 4/10 pasta.

But 10/10 pun.