Talk:Never Go into an Old McDonald's/@comment-25334673-20150331202233/@comment-10222945-20150331212020

The improvements definitely raise my rating; I'm going with 7.5/10 now but that's mainly just because my tastes run toward mood, atmosphere, intensity, etc. and I sort of felt like your main goal with the state of the McDonald's was to make me want to throw up before revealing it's haunted. You do write well, and I thought that the first time around. Should have said so.

Actually, the more I think about it, making Oroska a near ghost-town adds to the layer of fear. I find the implications of that far scarier than the ghostly Ronald at the end. This...presence...that's haunting old McDonald's restaurants has taken its toll on this town, driving away those who managed to escape. Too many children missing; too many employees driven insane or posessed.