Talk:Will's Park/@comment-25042509-20150527125346/@comment-31077845-20170211020411

I don't know, maybe you aren't old enough to quite get creeped out by the idea of someone abducting a child, but being as this guy was clearly either A) completely insane or B) not entirely human the notion that his child could've been taken by him, or it, or whatever that was (since normal humans generally can't take that kind of a beating while continuing on their merry way) and notions of what he'd do to the child I'd say it was fairly creepy, and I'm not even a parent. I know for a parent the idea of being there helpless and unable to save your child as you watch them being taken away from you would be terrifying.

Although gotta be honest, I'm almost more on your side than I was originally after reading MartinVang's response. So author, someone didn't understand your story. Don't sit there and try to hide your hurt widdle feewings behind some facade of maturity and reason. The person did give feedback; they didn't get what the point of your story was or why it was supposed to be creepy. I don't really agree with them, but they have a right to their opinion. Then you personally insult them in a particularly idiotic fashion (we're uh...writing. Nobody's voice is involved) which makes me think maybe any cleverness or originality the story possessed was accidental.

So even better, how about instead if you lack the emotional maturity to handle criticism or the idea that not everyone is going to like your work, you don't write?