Talk:No Homophones/@comment-4715955-20160702143915/@comment-4715955-20160703024432

Don't try to guilt trip me over this being based on a true story. You posted it on the 'net, I called it like I saw it. You ought to know by now that I target the work itself for what it is, not the author.

The problem is your character's mental health issues aren't conveyed as much by the panic attack as they are by the serial murder. That's what makes the character unbelievable: he comes off like he just went insane as a result of such a tiny childhood incident.