Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25891880-20150429013838/@comment-25037895-20150502040000

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 * 1) more and moe |Should be "more and more"
 * 2) She said said that the only thing she ever made a noise of was |Two things: repeated the word "said", also "made a noise of was" should be simplified to "made a noise with"
 * 3) “ 'What’s in the chalkboard?' ” |Doesn't need the apostrophes.
 * 4) new one... thirty-two years its been here |Should be "thirty-two years it's been here". It's=contraction (it is) and Its=possessive (its hand)