Talk:Pale Luna/@comment-5993694-20141219233237

8/10. I liked the numerical symbolism whether it was coincidental or not(with the 33 tries to get to the new screen, 6 copies of the game). Something was disturbing (and I don't mean creepy, but something was not that good about this story) but I can't put my finger on it. A minor correction would be the command USE SHOVEL instead of DIG HOLE/FILL HOLE because it would make more sense for Michael to guess the "use item" command. All in all, I'm just rambling and this was a yummy pasta.