Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36110136-20180707150934/@comment-35711173-20180707170219

PCmaster214,

With all due respect, it is not ready for posting. The story would very quickly be deleted from the Wiki pages. Fortunately you posted it here first.

Your first problem is that you have one giant block of text. You need to break this up into coherent paragraphs. It is impossible to read at this point.

Once you do that, we will tell you what you need to do next.

Are you composing it off line in something like Microsoft Word? If so, make sure you double space between paragraphs.

If you aren't composing off line, please start doing so. There are so many reasons why. One is that if your story is deleted from the wiki you still have it so you can take it to the workshop and improve it.