Talk:Negative Energy/@comment-24281984-20141208153156

While this was a fairly well-written micro, it just wasn't very scary or creepy. I'll admit that the thought of my computer breaking down is pretty scary ;~; but with just a kind of ethereal "negative spot" as the culprit it didn't make much sense. The idea could've been better explained if it was a bit more realistic and less vague. But that aside, I did enjoy the solid writing and only needed to add a few commas here and there, so this was a decent story overall.