Talk:The Seven Deadly Songs/@comment-24974354-20141011024432

overall, it was a good story. i tend to like the longer pastas, so this was quite nice. the characterization of andrew was nice, although i feel the other characters came off as a bit cliche.

the frequent spelling, grammar, and entire word usage mistakes distracted from the story though, and i got the impression that it was either written by someone very young or who speaks english as a second language.

also, i wanted to note that the image is of the ten commandments being given to moses, not jesus. also, it is mentioned that andrew goes to church, but you fail to describe that happening within the story.