Talk:Canine/@comment-25054213-20140612163948

Eh, 3/10

Unsure if it's supposed to be scary, as it's not

Some of the details are a bit off- Bertha must have had a ridiculous amount of blood if it was all over the floor and still spurting out of her body.

There's quite a bit of repetition,

And far too much detail in things that don't matter, sentences like "It was a female Golden Retriever of just a few months old, and she was examining the vastness of the world as her journey progressed to the front door." aren't needed.