Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25382490-20140904213956/@comment-25394259-20140910030349

This was really well written, but everybody besides the girl, her brother, and the nurse were cartoonishly evil. Also, I know a spinoff is going to take some liberties, but having slenderman have a change of heart because some old hag did what he was going to do anyway didn't really make sense. It was difficult to focus on those issues too much, however, because it was a very well made creepypasta, if a bit long.