Talk:Run My Sweet Little Child/@comment-26105248-20150213163841

Um... No immersion, no investment in the characters, absurdly short, and the shock value of a girl being murdered by her father isn't enough to score points in a creepy pasta. I like his little display of insanity in telling his daughter to run, but it needs more. The author clearly put no effort into writing it.

.5/10 Next time write an actual story.