Talk:Meek/@comment-25558572-20140711235737

I can't even give much criticism here. Did this make Pasta of the Month?

In analysis, you have all the elements of a creepypasta covered well. The plot worked out well, and while it was perhaps a little unbelievable that Marie and Kristina died (how exactly did that happen? Did they become trapped inside the room?) it was still a very impressive story. The description was perfect; used in the right amounts and conveying a strong image despite not pausing the story.

Meek himself was an intruiging character. I actually cringed at a few lines that showed his interest in getting back to the game was so important, and how he never reacted to the filth around him or even the bodies. This story is one of those pieces of literature that is done so well, I ask myself if 'Maybe it really happened?" and that is an extreme rarity with creepypasta.

With this, there is almost nothing to improve on. Setting, plot and character are all there and they are all well executed. In short: ''We need more stories like this. ''