Talk:What Haunts the Fields/@comment-26326346-20150608062547

I enjoyed this. The descriptions were great and so was the characterizations, the twist at the end certainly surprised me. If I'd been Jonas I'd have left during the day, instead of staying to deal with that creature.

I say that this deserves a 9 out of 10, as I was a little bit confused about where the woman came from (I'm guessing she was a hitchhiker, but why would the creature have picked her up when it already had Jonas? Came up a bit short in that aspect, in my opinion).

Other than that small gripe, I really enjoyed the pasta and am looking forward to more of your work :)