Talk:Click/@comment-25471033-20180531201013

7/10.  Being thrown in the story so suddenly is hardly ever a good idea, as it allows the author to be vague, and they take it and run. On top of that, the constant "why did I ever did this" is such a widely used set of words that it hurts to look at these days. However, the concept was really interesting and a little terrifying. Just knowing that your friends and family are going through this and there's nothing anyone can do, because nobody can see what's wrong, must be hard to deal with. What's with the click though? we get no significance of its symbolism, and it's the title of the story. Like FNAF said, even though this is an alright short story, take it day by day, and let the descriptions of each day and the build up of the story be the scary part, and let the "click" be more understandable.