Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5239282-20140807152832/@comment-5239282-20140807153906

Itiscoming wrote: Well, it's sorta like a poem, but the end was very nice. The first half has definetly been done before, but I like were you're going with this. Yeah, I combined certain elements found in religious depictions of paradise.

What do you mean by, it's "sorta" like a poem? Makes me worry. ;p