Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25114042-20140702211801/@comment-25114042-20140702222057

Rinskuro13 wrote: Oh it's you again, ^_^ haha

I think it's a good poem, however it lacks plot and as Cassist said, poetry is a difficult way to write in. I didn't find it too scary, so I would suggest that you develop the storyline more. Good job, glad to see someone writes for fun rather than trying to get loads of comments on pastas! Hai. :3

Yeah, I couldn't exactly stuff plot into a poem like this. :T It doesn't really have a story, and i had to rhyme every last word. XD And I don't think its scary either, lol. It is very hard to write scary poems. Even Edgar Allan Poe's poems weren't that scary. ;D Thanks for the feedback!