Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-39490652-20190604014624/@comment-35711173-20190604191526

TheDarkCat97,

It's "In all due respect."

It's got a good build-up, from ordinary to creepy to supernatural. The people seem pretty fresh. Sometimes the dialogue in a creepypasta is HORRIBLE. The furry thing seems to work and helps build character.

Once you learn to harness the power of the English language, you can go someplace. You have imagination and creativity. You can learn proper English, and you will have to know it for College. Every good creepypasta that passes muster here will put you closer to being able to write a Biology 101 report.