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I was very new to the whole thing yesterday. I was planning on writing a second part. Thanks for all the feedback. I really apreciate it. Hahaha i love the whole thing of him being a pokemon :D very funny. In my mind i had him menicingly breathing it. I wanted an almost, "heres Johnny" type thang. As to the "Listen to me you little bitch" i wanted the reader to get the impression that Pinky is almost schizophrenic. Her gagging is a natural response to what Pinky projects being close to him is a nausiating experiance. even though Mary has seen him before she is unable to become accustomed to his presense.

Mary has a big bathroom. in my head there would be arround 12 children at max in the bathroom with her. Maybe i should have said small village rather than town...