Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35911608-20190530141440/@comment-35911608-20190530170923

DrBobSmith wrote: I tried to see this with fresh eyes, and I got lost. There's no timeframe. I don't know who these people are, and I don't have enough info to be emotionally invested at all in them. I sympathize as much for the guy snooping in as the rebel or the woman.

The rebel is an idiot. Of course, the place could be bugged! Of course, there could be equipment that monitors it from the outside and hears everything inside. That's 100% off the shelf hardware today. You monitor where you are supposed to not be monitoring. That's where people would go to talk. Fair enough. The only idea that got me going on this was the first person view reveal, but you are correct. Anyhow, thanks for the read, much appreciated :)