User blog comment:Creepybros/help me make a pasta/@comment-24101790-20140901040447

Just a few pointers. There were a number of misspellings ("camafolge", "pery"/prey, "pyrimads"), punctuation, spacing errors (You story was condensed into a single paragraph and needed to be broken up.), phrasing, and grammatical issues. The story also feels really rushed. Here's a link so you can review it, (http://pastebin.com/K7hScsZk) but as it stands, this isn't up to quality standards.

I would strongly suggest going to the writer's workshop for more in-depth feedback, but in order to re-post this, you need to make a deletion appeal and revise a lot of these issues and flesh out your story some as it really just seems to be a description of the monster and no real eye-witness accounts/narration. (which detracts from the overall quality.) Uploading the story without going through this process can get you a warning or even banned.