Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25561579-20141020164913/@comment-25561579-20141020171110

Basically I have a few questions.

1. Is this cliche? I do not believe so, but who am I to say as the author? 2. I need a name. I'm always awful at choosing a name and I could use some help in doing so. 3. Overall feedback is wonderful. No matter how harsh it is, I could use it. 4. Is the detailing fitting to the story itself? I don't go to in depth with the characters, and that's a trend of my writing style.