Talk:Cloud Beneath the Sun/@comment-35911608-20200221013949

Clouds Beneath the Sun - by EtherBot (#19, The Sun)

Ah, a poem! The last style of entry I’d expect, but kudos to you for doing it! For the interpretation of the Sun, possibly the hardest card to do a creepypasta for, and then to do a poem in place of a story, you did well. While the horror aspect was lacking, it made for a nice read and a great change of pace. The rhyming scheme was different to me, but I liked it. Not a whole lot else for me to say - it was unique and I enjoyed it. Thank you.

Style - 5/5

Creepiness - 1/5

Enjoyment - 4/5

Use of Theme - 3/5

Grand Total: 13/20