Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24169760-20151228220142

Three teens were having a sleepover. There was Jason, Zack and maxim. Maxim had some souvenirs of a game called animal jam he wanted to play it with his teen friends. However he wasn't sure if they would like it. Zack said ’’maxim stop thinking about that game!’’  Maxim replied with ’’ you don't understand it was my favorite childhood game!’’ they backed off from Each other in frustration and started eating shrimps for their late supper. Jason came at the table with a friendly smile and said ’’ we are going to play that animal jam game later ok maxim?’’  Maxim replied ’’ok thanks man.’’ maxim was the youngest. he was 14 years old. Jason is the oldest he is 17 years old. Zack is 16 years old. Maxim was a joker pulling pranks on his friends. He is friendly but really sad… Jason is the friendliest of the gang he is always happy. Except for when he loses his stuff! Zack is mostly grumpy and angry because of his experimental family. Though for some odd reason they were wearing the same bold red shirt but Jason had glasses on and grey pants and Zack had a green hat on and blue jeans. But Maxim had brown pants. So after supper they went on Jason's computer to play the game. Maxim logged in. his character was a dark wolf and he had lots of rare items and his eyes were black and white. but he was wearing nothing. His membership was for 3 months. His den was an ice castle. And it had 3   ice statues. But nothing else! Zack said ’’ why are we playing this kids game!’’ Jason replies with. ’’ We are doing this to make him happy’’ they changed computers to go create their own characters. Suddenly another jammer called general major beast appeared in his den. General had a silver chain necklace and long horns and he was completely red. His eyes were red and white. And he was a wolf. Maxim righted. ’’ Hi there how are you doing?’’ general didn't answer for 2 minutes but when he did he righted. ’’This is all going to vanish what a shame’’ then maxim righted ’’ what do you mean’’ general didn't answer instead he disappeared from the den! Maxim was confused and out of nowhere the screen shacked with the sound of an earthquake in the background. Maxim’s teen friends both appeared as white wolves with small dark eyes. They had the same name as they're human names. Jason righted. ’’That’s an awesome den you have here?’’ maxim didn't know what to wright after what just happened so he got a 3 minute break. The Jason righted ’’ maxim why aren’t you answering?’’ three minutes after. Maxim came back and righted. ’’ Well I saw a user called general major beast’’ but a loud scream made him jump.

It was coming from Zack's room maxim ran up to his room and saw Zack in panic! Zack said

’’ I saw the devil! I’m going to die ’’ Maxim replied with. ’’It’s just a game don't worry’’ but then general major beast appeared on screen he stared at the screen! Everyone looked at the screen in shock. Then general started to smile. His teeth were yellow and broken and they had stains of blood! Then major righted. ’’ WhAt A ShAmE!!!’’ then he ate Zack’s character starting with his stomach. Eating sounds were heard in the background. Then the game froze! But something appeared before the blue screen was shown! it was a picture of general in front of three skeletons he had red glowing eyes and was smirking at the screen before everything faded to black.  