Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35251736-20180219220109/@comment-32764586-20180221033717

Overall I really enjoyed this! The writing was awesome and I felt invested in the story. Sorry for taking a while to review this. I found it interesting though. While a knight making his way through darkness into the light has been done before, but you did it very well. I think my main complaint is that the ending felt rushed in a way, but I haven't checked the words on this so it may be a result of the word limit. I have yet to listen to the song, but I'll do it in a minute. Was fairly creepy and entertaining. I thought the writing was good.