Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28754051-20160615072326/@comment-27008899-20160615115953

I agree with Christian, need the rest to determine how good it really is. It is well written, and there in lies the problem. With journals you do not really want them to sound like a narrative. The description is good, too good for a journal entry. With a journal you want it to sound more spurt of the monent. With a few tweeks this could easily be turned into a narrative. Great job so far though.