Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20160628193135/@comment-28420405-20160628222237

Firstly, forgive my formatting or grammar and spelling as I am on my phone.

Dont stop using either, those punctuation marks are good ways to break up a sentence that could technically be two.

Alternating punctuation is a tride and true way of helping a story flow. Semicolons break up two thoughts in a sentence, as do dashes, but a dash is usually followed by a shorter thought, therefore being a bit more "quick" in pace.

My suggestion would be to alternate between the semicolons, dashes, and periods. This will avoid too many long sentences, and can exentuate the flow of your story.

Again, I really enjoyed this story! Excellent work.