Creepypasta Wiki talk:Deleted Page/Jeff the Killer/@comment-23973243-20131001204508/@comment-17356115-20131001221051

I find this story rather bland. It lacks an exceptional amount of detail and common sense, also the writing style of it isn't all too good either. So to be quite frank this story is a let down to me. Keep practicing though, and hopefully you'll take our comments into consideration to better your writing skills.