Talk:BEN Drowned/@comment-26193563-20150428232352

This story was not easy to read. It should be wriiten so that even if readers don't play "Legend of Zelda" they can still understand the story clearly enough. For example, take "NES Godzilla Creepypasta," on my profile page. I sure as hell never played that game before, but it is written/digital imaged in a way that I can understand how you play/progress in the game. Can't say the same for here.

Other than that, it was actually okay, as I legitly wanted to know more about BEN, which the story never explains. And since it didn't do that, it means it's almost unfinished, which means 6/10 for this pasta.