Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25226524-20141006023230

I'm not sure about the ending of this one, it may be a little too abrupt. Let me know what you think. __________________________________________________________________

"Get in here Ma, you're gonna' wanna' see this!" Jeb squealed, as he continued pulling the chain hoist. He'd captured himself a real fine specimen this time. A big muscly fella' he was. Way too big to handle if he hadn't been shot up with enough tranq to take down a baby elephant.

"What's all the fuss you crazy jackasses, I'm tryin' to cook ya' some dinner," Ma said, wiping her hands on her apron.

"Found this fella' a few miles down the road. He was hitchin' a ride, so I darted him, and gave him the ride of his life."

"Shoowee, he sure is a purdy thing. Got muscles on top of muscles this one does.  Ya' did good boys."

Jeb knew Ma'd be proud, she loved these big fellas. He'd do anything to make Ma happy, even if it were a bit risky dealin' with a big bastard like this. He'd dealt with a many bigguns in his time, but this here was by far the biggest. As he continued lookin' him over, he figured he had to be at least six foot four, and probably two fifty, maybe more. He'd have to make sure he was chained up tight, and keep a small dose of tranq around just 'ncase he got too squirrelly.

"Well whatcha' waitin' for? Get his clothes off so I can gets a good look at 'em."

Jeb started cuttin' his clothes off, while Dale just sat in the corner sippin' his cold Coors. Jeb didn't even bother gettin' pissed off, he'd just come to accept the fact that Dale was as worthless as tits on a boar hog. He shucked the biggun's clothes off, down to his drawers. He could see his ma was gettin' all hot and bothered, so he decided to go 'head and yank off his briefs too.

"Lord almighty, this boy's built like a shit-brick house he is," Ma said, as she appraised her new toy.

"I jus' knew you'd like him Ma. I told Dale you'd be beside yerself when you rest your eyes on this here piece of meat."

"Well you thought right my boy, I love you boys so much. Yer the best boys a mother could ask fer."

"Awe Ma, ain't no need in gettin' all mushy on us. When's supper gonna' be done?"

"It's almost there boys. You just go on and make sure this here Romeo is tied up good n' tight, then get yerselves in the kitchen.  Mama made ya' somethin' extra special tonight."

Jeb's mouth watered at the thought a what Ma'd cooked up. Hope it's some of that world famous coon stew she cooks up on special 'casions. Jeb made sure the cuffs were all on tight, and threw on some extry rope for good measure.

"Can't you do anythin' 'cept sit on yer fat ass Dale? You could at least help make sure this big bastard don't get loose."

Dale just stared as he threw back the rest of his beer, crushin' it in his hand before throwin' it across the room.

"I don't know whatcha' all are so worried 'bout, he's got so much dope in 'm that he ain't gonna' wake up fer hours."

"This is why you ain't in charge Dale, a big bastard like this, ya' never know what t' expect."

Dale gave a tug on the chains and rope, "Good enough fer me, let's eat."

Jeb shook his head as he double-checked the cuffs and knots. "We sure are gonna' have some fun tonight," he whispered to himself.

Jeb and Dale sat down at the table, as Ma hefted the boiling pot from the stove.

"I know this is usually just fer special 'casions, but I just knew you boys'd bring me a real treat tonight, so I made yer favorite coon stew."

"Whoowee Ma, I thought I smelled coon stew, but I wudn't sure. There aint nothin' in the world like yer coon stew Ma."

"Ok ok, say your grace and dig in boys, we got lots of fun t' have tonight."

Jeb and Dale bowed there heads and mumbled a few words before racing to the ladle. After about three bowls of stew, they were ready for the night's festivities to begin. As they walked back into the living room, the biggun' was holdin' his head up, lookin' confused.

"See, I told ya' Dale, he's already awake. These big superman types can handle one helluva dose a' tranq.  Just imagine if we'd only give 'em the normal dose, he'd broke our necks 'fore we got him home."

Dale just shook his head, and sat back on his couch with a fresh beer. Jeb knew he'd have to be the one to get this party started. He knew Ma liked to watch for awhile before she got involved.

"Ma, come in here and take a seat, the show's about to start."

"Alright alright, don't get your panties in a wad, I'm here."

Ma sat down in her recliner, only a few feet away from where the muscled man was hoisted.

"Where should I start Ma? You want me t' take it slow, or get straight to the nasty stuff?"

"Bein' that this big bugger's already comin' to, I reckon ya' better get right to it 'fore ya' have to shoot 'em with another dose a dope."

"It's yer night Ma."

Jeb walked up to the massive man, and buried his mouth into his chest. After gnawing around for about ten or fifteen seconds, he pulled his mouth off, the hulks nipple dangling from his teeth.

"Woowweee boy, you sure know how to get your ma's juices flowin'. Don't stop now, I think I see a little fire in 'is eyes."

Jeb looked up into the big alpha's eyes, he was lookin' right at him. Jeb didn't like this feelin' one bit, so he punched the man right in his chiseled jaw.

"How'd ya' like that biggun'? Ya' wanna' stare me down again?"

The man gave a slight smirk. For some reason, this sent a chill down Jeb's spine. He knew there was nothin' this man could do in his position, but he couldn't help to be a little unnerved.

"Oh ya' gonna' smile at me biggun'? Ya' think this is funny?"

As these words escaped Jeb's lips, the hulk began to snicker. Jeb hefted his size eleven boot and kicked the giant man right in the groin.

"Still funny ya' big dumb bastard?"

The man's chuckle turned into a full-on belly laugh as the chains began to creak. Jeb couldn't believe his eyes as the links began to snap, and the man started pulling the cuffs from his wrists. Jeb turned and jumped for the dart pistol, but Ma already had it. She shot one in the monster's neck, then reloaded, and shot another in his cheek.

"Let's see whatcha' can do now biggun'. You got 'nuff dope in ya' now to kill a hippo.  I bet ya's gettin' pretty sleepy right about now aren't ya?"

The man just pulled the darts out of his neck and cheek, then continued pulling the cuffs off his ankles.

"Dale, get the shotgun, this guy's a real freak!"

As Dale started out of the room, a chain wrapped around his neck, violently jerking him back onto the floor. The man just stood there, smiling, stark naked. Jeb took a swing at him, and he instantly regretted it. The man threw his arm up to catch the blow, shattering the bones in Jeb's forearm. Jeb fell to the floor screaming.

"What the hell are you mister? You some kinda' steroid freak or somethin'?"

As the doors and windows turned into solid walls, the whole family just sat there, paralyzed in fear as the man spoke.

"Why are you so surprised my friends? You spoke to me just moments ago."

Jeb had no idea what this crazy fella' was talkin' about. There hadn't been a word exchanged between them at all, not even when they picked him up. They'd just slowed down and shot him with the dope, no conversation whatsoever.

"Confused? It's understandable.  Let's see if I can clear this up a bit for you, since I know you are a bit slow."

Jeb and Dale just hugged onto their Ma's legs like a couple of frightened children. Ma patted there heads, trying to assure them everything would be ok.

"I like to come down here once a year, on the holiday you deviants tend to run wild on. I don't know what it is about this "Halloween" that makes you psychos all get so active.  I like to come down on this holiday, this holiday that celebrates everything I'm against, and set a few of you straight.  Still confused?  As I said, you talked to me just moments ago.  I'll give you a hint, your head was bowed when you spoke to me."

The family just looked at each other in disbelief.

"Yes, that's right. Not quite what you were expecting I'm sure.  As I said, I come down once a year, to release some of my anger onto the vile creatures that cause it.  I get so sick of watching you terrorize the innocent, so it brings me pleasure to watch as the tables are turned."

Jeb and Dale gripped there ma's leg with a death-grip as the chains began to slither across the floor. They kicked and screamed as the chains wrapped around their ankles and began to drag them from their ma's grasp.

"No no, not my boys! They're all I got, please!"

Ma's pleas quickly turned to cries of terror as the chains wrapped around her ankles as well, jerking her violently to the floor. All three of the family members were now hoisted in the middle of the room, where the man had been hanging only moments earlier.

"Now you will get to see what it's like. It won't be completely the same, mind you, since you deserve what's coming to you, but you get the gist."

As they swayed slowly, they began to see figures appearing behind the man. Some of them looked strangely familiar. There were dozens of them, all wearing the same maniacal grin.

"After tonight, they will be at peace, and so will I. Goodnight lost souls, and remember, this is only the beginning." 