Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27281416-20151221024950

 Antinanco



-          -  Jessica, please come to my office, we need to talk.



I let a sight escape my lips as I rose from my chair.



 I wonder what he wants this time. I’m working as a journalist for a smaller company.



We are not that big just because we research paranormal graves and houses well overall anything haunted, it’s not something that falls in most people’s taste.



On my way down to my boss office I got a funny feeling about this. He never calls on me unless it’s something really important, I opened the door and walked in and sat down on a old tree chai, i removed my curly brown hair from the face.



-        -    Good that you came. We have an extraordinarily case for you, Brian and Lucas.



<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  What is it this time then?

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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">        -    Well I need you guys to travel to South America and review an old resting place of a tribe.

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">       -     And can you tell me more about this resting place of this tribe? I don’t feel like travelling that long without any details.

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">         -   People have mysteriously disappeared there and also it’s said that a ghost or an entity is walking around there.

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">       -     Do you have any files from this disappearances I can read about?

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">My boss grabbed a bunt of paper and gave it to me, I started to riffle through the pages until one case caught my eye.

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">January 12th 2001

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle"> The worst case we have seen so far.

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Man around 20-25 years, blond, height ca 1,87cm ''

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Brutally slaughtered and impaled on what looks like a spear. ''

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''This man has been dead for 1 week or less. ''

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''We don’t know what has caused this, since we can’t find any DNA or other clues to this case. ''

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''We will come back again and research more on this. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">I took out some photos of the crime scene, and analyzed them.

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">The man’s middle long messy blond hair was painted in the red color.

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">The spear pointed out of his mouth, you could see that he had tried to scream before he died.

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">His whole back was ripped apart and his spine was removed, when I glanced at the face again, I could see that one eye had popped out also.

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">I could feel how a tear ran down my chin, this was just too much for me to handle. I looked up at my boss chocked, I felt like I needed to vomit.

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;line-height: normal;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-         -   You said it was only disappearance not slaughter of innocent humans! I snapped at him and gave him a furious look.

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;line-height: normal;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-           Well what did you think? And if you travel down there and make this story about it, I will promote you and your companions. And even so maybe our company will get bigger.

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:normal">I glared at him while he spoke. Shall I take it or not? I really need this money after all and a promotion would be really good too. I gave a quick glance at the photo of the male I held in my hand and then looked up again him.

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">         -   ''Fine, we’ll do it. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          ''Good. You’ll will be traveling tomorrow morning there. And when you have reached your destination, some people at the airport will come to pick you guys up. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''And after that we took each other’s hands and shook goodbye. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''On my way out I began to think if I really made the right choice when accepting this. The picture of the blond male popped up into my head and I instantly tried to shake it off. ''

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''The next day I slammed really hard on my clock as the alarm went on. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''Today was the day, it’s going to be both exciting and scary at the same time. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''We had never traveled that far before, so it’s a new experience. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''But at the same time I can’t stop thinking of these pictures I saw at the office. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''Poor boy, I let a sight escape my lips and got out from bed to dress myself. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''It’s going to be cold on the plane so I think thin sweatpants would fit, I looked through my wardrobe and found a black hoodie. “This will work fine”, I change when we are there. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''I called Brian that he could come and pick me up, I had packed my bags and fixed myself up and was ready to go now. ''

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''-This is Brian ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''- Hi, it’s Jessica. You can come and pick me up now so we can go to the airport. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''- Okay I’ll be there in 10 minutes. And then he hung up. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''Hmm, what should I do with my last ten minutes home? I walked around my apartment searching for something I could do before he comes. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">'' I looked at myself in the mirror and noticed that I had forgot too brush my hair. I took out my comb and brushed it. When I was done I sat it up in a ponytail. ''

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''Sadly I found nothing more, so I walked out to the kitchen and made me some coffee. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''I sat down at the table and looked out the window, New York is so dead in the morning, I could see a couple holding hands and chatting, The fountain from the park glowed as the sun reached the water. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''In the middle of everything my phone rang, it was a message from Brian that told me to come outside. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''I drank up my coffee and washed it off, then I took my bags and left. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''It was pretty cold out here in the morning, I could even see my breath so cold it was. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''Urgh I hope it will be warmer soon, or at least in South America. I searched around for Brains dark blue range rover, until I found him outside and waving to me.''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">'' ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">        -    ''Good morning Jessica, have you slept well? ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''Morning, Well no not really. I had nightmares about those pictures I saw at the office. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''Oh. I saw them too, I can’t believe he is sending us out there. Brian said and spitted on the ground ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">         -   ''Well, we get promoted if we succeed with the mission. And those pictures were from 2001-2007. Its 2009 now you know. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">        -    ''And so what? What if that person is still out there when we are coming? Brian gave me a hard stare ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''No I don’t think so, maybe they have captured the murderer now? And how are you so sure that it’s a person? I asked and tilted my head. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''Hmm, I don’t think so. Brian looked at his watch. Sh*t we need to go now, The plane is going in 3 hours! ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">        -    ''How long will it take to the airport? ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''Maybe 1,5 hour, Jump in the car now. ''

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<p class="MsoNormal">''And I did as I was told, I threw my baggage in the luggage and walked in and sat down in the front seat. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''The warmth of the car stroke my face, it was such a nice feeling after we been out in the cold. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''Brian jumped in and drove away. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''I still had an unsettling feeling about this trip but I can’t think of that now. We chit chatted about everything on our way to the airport, until one thought strike me. ''

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">         -   ''Where’s Lucas? ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">       -     ''Oh, he didn’t tell you? ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">         -   ''Told me what? I asked confused ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''He’s not coming. After he had seen the pictures of the grave, he backed out. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">       -     ''What! He can’t just leave us alone there! ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''Well he did. But when we reach South America we will have a guide and a translator. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''Why a translator? ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''We are going to ask around some tribes of the haunted one to gain information about it. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''Oh okay. But I’m not going to forgive Lucas for this. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''Don’t care about him. He is missing a big opportunity. Brian said and gave me a fast glance before he continued to concentrate on the road. ''

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">        -    ''Well yeah, I guess so. I looked out the car window and rubbed my hands in annoyance. ''

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<p class="MsoNormal">''After a while we had reached our destination. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''Brian gave his car keys to the airport worker and we took our luggage and walked inside the airport. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''The plane takes off in 50 minutes, so we sat down and ate some breakfast. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''It began to tingle in my stomach as the thought of the plain is soon lifting. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''We sat in silence and ate as I inspected the people who passed by. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''A mother is stressed out and is holding her son in a firm grip as she rushes over to her port. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''A man is sitting on one of the couches and is really drunk. The alcohol is stinging as the horrible smell reached my nose, two guards comes and removes the man from the couches. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''He must be homeless, the smell of sweat and musty passed us as the guards dragged the homeless man out. How much time do we have left before we lifting? And as I thought that, a woman’s voice was heard through the speakers ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''Plane 2033 has arrived. Please go to port 20, the plane lifts in 10 minutes. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''I looked at Brian and he just nodded back to me. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''Now was the time for us to leave. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">'' On our way to the plane my stomach began to tingle again, I was really excited and scared at the same time. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''This was my second time flying, and soon panic started to build up inside me. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''I’m going to fly for 6 hours to a place where people had been brutally murdered, and we don’t even know if it was a human that had killed them or a spirit or whatever it could be. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''As we stood in line it felt like I was going to pass out. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''I tugged Brian’s t shirt and let him lead me inside the plane. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''We search for our seats number and when we found them I was not happy about it, our seats were placed by the window. “Oh lucky me” i thought and said to Brian that he could take the window place. ''

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<p class="MsoNormal">''After 10 minutes they went through the security and showed us the exit if something were about to happen. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''The sign showed us to put on our belts and then we took off. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''The feeling was horribly when the plane went into the air, my stomach felt like it was going to turn inside out and my ears struck lid, after a few minutes the plane went straight. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''I looked at Brian that had just started to watch a movie on the small panel in front of us. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">'' I watched with him a little while and felt how my eyelids began to be heavy, and soon I drifted away to sleep. ''

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<p class="MsoNormal">I woke up by Brian nudging me 

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">         -   ''We’re here now wake up sleepy head. He said and gave me a big smile ''

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<p class="MsoNormal">''I rubbed my eyes and unbelted my belt, and followed Brian out. When we got out from the airport a guide came to us and introduced himself. ''

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''Welcome to South America, you must be Jessica and Brian right? My name is John and I will be your personal guide here and over at the camp. Over at the camp you have more people to greet on. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''John kept talking on the way to the car, it was a big white Jeep Wrangler Sahara, without a roof and doors. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''This was going to be a scary ride to the camp, since it's slippery from all the mud and we are going deep into the forest. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''John took our luggage and threw them in one of the backseats. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Brian and i got in and then we drove away. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''It was beautiful in South America, we drove by a lot of different animals, we even stopped and looked at some chimpanzees, and the jungle was so colorful with all these birds, it smelled so fresh here, and rain but that’s not weird since we are in the rainforest. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''After a while we arrived at the camp, from the car I could see a huge big tent in the middle, and a small campfire. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''When the jeep stopped we grabbed our luggage and walked after John, it was very warm and damp here, but at least I got what I wished for. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''The path was small, muddy and slippery and I almost tripped because of that. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''When we came closer I just stopped and stared, the white tent I saw earlier was just amazing! ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I walked up to it and peeked inside, I saw old tree chairs and a long rectangular table, no carpet was here or a floor, just grass, in the ceiling hanged a large lamp and some mosquito traps. This must be where we eat. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I walked around the tent to see if I could find something more. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Behind the large were two wooden cottages, I walked over to them to see what it was. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Within two meters I could see small signs on the doors, this was the bathrooms, on the right was the girls room, and on the left the boys. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I walked inside the girls room and were amazed how big it actually was in here, it was two shower, and four toilets. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''The walls were painted in a faint pink and the floor was white. It’s so pretty in here! ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I walked out from the bathroom, and over to Brian again that stood there with an satisfied look. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          ''What are you looking at? I asked and tried to see where he was staring ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Brian pointed up to the sky as a flock of birds flew above us. ''

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''It looked like waves from the ocean were above us, it was truly amazing to see this! ''

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I could only smile at this scene, and so did Brian. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''After a few minutes we heard a voice from behind, I turned around to meet a short, black haired man. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast">''Brian turned around and looked at the short little guy. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''               He came up to us and introduced himself. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''His name was Alawa and was half Native American. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''He told is also that he was our translator, he was really nice and always smiled at us when he talked. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''He seemed like a really sweet guy. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''The day went by fast, They had showed us around the camp and a little bit outside of it. ''

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''It was amazing here. I could still hear all the animals sing in the forest, and the beautiful birds flew by us. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I really like it here, I wish I could stay forever. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''After the supper, Brian and i walked to our tent to sleep, they stood on the side of the big main tent, and were small yellow ones. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''We chatted for a moment before he went to sleep, I took my chance and changed till my blue pyjamas pants and a regular black t shirt. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Then laid on the mattress besides Brian and listened to his snoring as I thought of tomorrow. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Tomorrow are we going to ask around three different tribes about the haunted one. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Also we are going to check it out tomorrow, after I’ve been thinking for a while I could feel how I became dozy, after a minute I fell asleep. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''An hour passed and I woke up to a rustling sound outside the tent. “what the?” I thought for myself ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I sounded like someone was searching for something and I could hear plates and boilers being slammed down on the ground. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I sat up and nudged Brian to wake up. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''But nothing, he continued to snore even louder and turned around. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I sat there in panic and listened to the noises from outside. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Seconds passed but it felt like hours, and then it went all quiet. I pulled up my knees to my chin and waited for something to happen. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''It was still quiet, almost too quiet. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Even the animals had silenced down, not even the crickets were playing their beautiful song. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''*smash* ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I jumped up at the sudden sound from a glass being crushed, and a roar was heard. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I couldn’t describe the roar but it was deep and loud and somewhat it sounded to be furious. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''A shiver went down my spine as the roars echoed, then the most disgusting rottening smell filled the whole tent, I couldn’t describe how nasty it stank, i grabbed my blanket and pressed it over my face, trying to hold in my vomit. ''

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<p class="MsoNormal">''I glared in disgust at Brian and slapped his face still holding onto the blanket, and prayed to god he would wake up. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''Brian snorted and flew up, and yelled at me. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">        -    ''Don’t scream for fucks sake! I growled under my blanket ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">        -    ''Then why did you hit me! And you do you press your plaid at your face? ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Brian tried to yank the blanket off, but I slapped his hand away. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''He began to laugh, and I pressed one hand against his mouth ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          ''Something is out there Brian! I-I heard it breaking stuff and roar! I stuttered as I listened to the footsteps coming closer ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I pointed then against the tent door and Brian went silent. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Whatever that was out there it was furious, aggressive and mad. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Brian crawled to the tent door and was on his way to unzip the tent door, but he jumped back as a huge thing smashed against our tent. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I tried as hard as I could not to scream and pulled Brian back. He was speechless. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''We looked at each other and whispered. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''What was that? I grabbed Brians arm and began to sob.''

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">      This was too much for me.

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">       -     ''I don’t know, should I look for it even if something hit our tent? Brian said and was on his way up again. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">       -    ''No, please don’t! Just wait until it’s gone! I stuttered under my breath. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''But? ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst">''*crack* ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Brian went silent ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Someone was walking behind our tent, a stick snapped, and the disgusting smell were even stronger than before. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I pressed my blanket harder and began to gag ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''How could only I smell this? My eyes went tearful and another gag came. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I jumped closer to Brian and he pressed me against him and held me hard. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I heard a roar again from the creature outside. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''I held my breath so hard I thought I might faint at any second. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Minutes passed and everything was quiet again. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">''Brian whispered to me confused ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">        -    ''Do you think it’s gone? ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">         -   ''I don’t know. I answered miserable. ''

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<p class="MsoNormal">''After we discussed a few minutes, Brian had enough of me and began to crawl to the tent opening. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''I plead Brian to stay but he wouldn’t listen to me. When he began to pull the zippers I could hear footsteps again. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''I tried to scream to Brian, but that disgusting smell pierced through the blanket and I began to cough and gag again. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''Brian peeked outside, and suddenly he flew out screaming. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''I froze up and just listened to his screams from outside, seconds passed and everything went silent ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''-B-Brian? I stuttered and dropped the blanket and crawled to the unzipped tent door. Shivers ran down my spine as I heard something rustling from outside. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''I crawled backwards and started to panic. The sound came closer and closer and something began to shake the tent. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''I screamed so loud that my throat hurt and tears streamed down my cheek. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''I could hear the sound of heavy breathing and then something flew in the tent. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''By pure reflex I kicked it and I could hear a voice? ''

<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''What was that for! ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:18.0pt">''By my surprise it was Brian, anger boiled inside me and I gave him a hard bitch slap. ''

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">         -   ''Are you stupid! I thought it had taken you and you just goes around here and scares me? ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">        -   ''I’m sorry Jessica, but you must have imagined it. It’s nothing out there. ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraph">''I glared at Brian as he crawled besides me. I was so mad at him right now that I began to shake and cry. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''I gave him another slap, and he just laughed at me. ''

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">          -  ''Hey take it easy! and rubbed his cheek ''

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<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0level1lfo1">-<span style="font-weight:normal;font-stretch:normal;font-size:7pt;line-height:normal;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';">           oh also I found something behind the tent I thought you might like it 

<p class="MsoNormal">''Brian began to dig in his pocket, I looked at him and waited for him to take out that thing. ''

<p class="MsoNormal">''Carefully Brian reached out his hand, and he held a feather. ''

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