Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26325197-20150418210532/@comment-25226524-20150419155759

I spaced it out for you. When typing out the story in your word program, be sure to hit enter twice between each paragraph, then copy and paste it in Source Mode. The editor removes a space between lines for some reason, so you have to have two spaces (not double spacing, but hit the enter button twice); that's why yours turned into a wall. One thing I noticed while spacing out the story was that you used the word "suddenly" way too many times. Good luck.