Talk:Headed South

So, this is my first "real" OC, not counting stories I wrote that were added by other people. I'd enjoy some feedback on the pacing, which feels a little awkward to me. I'm otherwise happy with the goofy tone and ambiguous ending, since that's my preferred kind of horror.

I wasn't sure what kind of categories to put the story itself...it's not exactly a "monster" story. The narrator is loopy at this point but the headless "apocalypse" is unambiguously real, so it's not really a dream, nightmare or insanity story either. It's just an inexplicable, apocalyptic phenomenon.

Bogleech (talk) 04:05, November 29, 2012 (UTC)