Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-2240864-20170728235145/@comment-2240864-20170729181104

Hey, thanks for the feedback! I've worked out the excessive repeating of the repetitive repetition, and have tried to fix all of the issues you had (albeit I haven't added any really additional info; that I must mull over) and think it's much stronger so far for it! Also, yeah, no, the mirror was the prison and the story has been updated to reflect that (no pun intended).