Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24918243-20140607065334/@comment-24918243-20140609125708

Thanks Resident. I think the main problem with the last one was that the story shifted from Nana to Ally, which was not what the intention was.

Robyn set the story back on track. Maybe even opened up the possibility for a prequel explaining exactly how she became Nana's "spokeperson".

I'll go ahead and do the grammar changes today when I get home from work.