Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32864316-20170815172509/@comment-25428589-20180826174318

MarjoleinB wrote: Thanks, and i know that i have to make the ending longer in order to show more of that information to the reader instead of telling them (I'll try to edit that part of the forest dream too btw). However Monthy jumps of his balcony in order to wake up. He thinks of the encounter with the dreamreaper as an other nightmare, so in order to wake up he ends his life because that is how most of his nightmares end. Yeah, I understand why he's jumping off the balcony, and that he actually dies instead of ending the nightmare. The issue is that you can't write once you're dead, but the story is told from the first person perspective. I couldn't sit down with you and tell you about a time I was choked to death, for example, because I'd be dead.