Talk:The Fisher Case/@comment-5733573-20180623154759

I like this. You wrote it very believably as a true crime report, which I love. I've been binging true crime videos lately, so this was a welcome thing to find.

There were a couple of sloppy grammatical errors which could have been caught with some proofreading, so be aware of this for your next story. I think I caught and fixed most of them this time around. Also, it's not really "scary" in the way that most things are on here, but honestly, I'm not all that bothered. Murder is pretty unsettling and this story is presented in such a believable way.

Overall, great stuff here. I wouldn't mind seeing more things like this, maybe with a little more creep factor thrown in.