Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24962525-20140522051052/@comment-24962525-20140522213236

WaveDivisionMultiplexer wrote: This was just another vigilante ghost going around and killing bad people. The reast of the story might be good, I do not know, but right now I'm a bit put off by the murder scenes. It's obvious by the first line that this was the so called murder woman. There's really no point in progressing a story when the reader knows just what is going on. The other characters, in such cases, just come scross as thick headed for not seeing through it. But I havent read it, so I'm most probably wrong.

its only first part that shows histroy later you will know whats going on and really who the murderer is