User blog comment:JusticeDemocrat666/Why did my story not meet the wiki's quality standards./@comment-7064562-20170730212351

I thought it was pretty boring, cliche, and needed better, more interesting wording. The twist at the end was fine, and nice that it wasn't the mom's story for once, but it needed more build up and explanation. LIke, it's an antelope, tf is it going to do to an angsty 13 year old girl?