Talk:The Beachwalker/@comment-25941663-20151213213201

This was great. It had a sadness to it, which surprised me positively. It was well written too and the tone was also amazing. I really like the strange "man" and how you portrayed him. At first he seemed weird and kinda vulnerable, but slowly you built him into a very fearsome and powerful villain.

Very well done, I don't have anything else to see.