Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5321651-20150124232553/@comment-5321651-20150125004249

Natalo wrote: Hahaha okay! It's good to leave the reader guessing. I think you were trying to imply that the red on the security cameras was other-worldy or something but then you said the wires had been cut and I wasn't sure if that was the reason or if it was paranormal. But aside from that, the rest is really good well done.

Also, if you could somehow make the ending into a twist ending, like the person writing the report types: We are now experiencing a black out. Investigation of the cause underway. Wait, am I even in the hospital anymore?

Or another twist anything you can think of would be refreshing for the reader!

I was actually thinking of working on a sequel. I know it doesn't it doesn't seem like a sequel could fit into the story, but I have a few ideas. I'll take that blackout thought into consideration.

Also, I'll take out that bit about the cut wires. I see now that it may have been sending mixed messages.