Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24965033-20141025012011/@comment-28938497-20141026193125

I don't know. I liked the twist. It just needs a bit of editing, some better presentation, so that when we're told that the mother's standing in the doorway, we feel the shiver down our spine.

I feel a bit concieted using my own micropasta as an example, but...I'm going to anyway.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Strange_Reflection