Talk:Penpal/@comment-26494636-20150614023358

The length of this story was a bit off-putting to me at first. I don't normally read pastas nearly this long, but I'm glad I stuck with this one. I was enthralled. I was utterly gripped. It's one of those stories where you just can't put down.

This story was, quite simply, brilliant. I literally said "wow" aloud several times. The out-of-chronological-order format and whole story like little snapshots that become woven together and start to make sense in your mind simply added to the effect. It was a roller coaster ride of emotions. Of course, there are flaws and some minor plot holes I found, but overall, truly a masterpiece and definitely worth reading, albeit lengthy.

9/10!