Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4832646-20140719051908/@comment-5619531-20140719060647

All that it talks about was about a person who meets his friend (who's a drunkard), and they go about on religous talk. One day, the drunkard tells the friend how he doesn't believe in God by getting stranded outside a town, someone picking him up and taking him to the town. He finds a cave, describes it, and that's that. It feels too vague, and I would have at least posted the final rough draft of this, rather than go blind-folded on it and expect people to give critque on it, when it just ends abruptly.

TL;DR It's unfinished, lacks story, or abruptly ends.