Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20181027034711/@comment-9041013-20181030002301

Still not feeling it... just not feeling it.

Tony is still waaaaay too innocent, he comes off as a guy who'd see a kid who's used as a suicide bomber wearing a huge jacket to cover up the bomb and will think that kid is legit cold, in the summer, in the middle of a desert. Seems like he wasn't really messed up by the loss of Colin and being a "wild child".

You do know you could use corpses as biological weapon and if not as a psychological one (in the case here it could've beeen used to harden the trainees into shooting the most lifelike targets without actually having them kill anyone)? so not shooting "innocent" looking corpses isn't a reaction of "better insticts". Also, the fact that Tony never showed suspecision towards the use of corpses makes him seem like a very inefficient well "survivor".

If you don't wonder about something unusual and at least suspect it a bit... you're not fit to make it out there.