Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25980905-20150405222804/@comment-25975226-20150405235850

I've never done it before either and I'm entering. The only thing I can think of is that I'm sure we agreed on the name Indigo Valley, rather than Indigo Falls. As you said, better description of the graveyard and possibly the insane people to make it creepier, but as this is I really liked it. Well done.