Talk:Not Entirely Alone/@comment-29507836-20161111010129

Like it quite a lot, and I'll explain why.

The plot is original, the description is quite good and consistent, the flow of the sentences seem to be splendid, and the character felt real to me. My only problem with this is that you have left out too much information to let the ending come clear to the readers, as pointed out by Scaryismything7.

I rate this a quite high 8/10.