Talk:Rainbow Factory/@comment-15082117-20131201165131

This story sucks.REALLY. The premice is pretty dumb to begin with,but it is develloped in a even STUPIDER way! The description is confusing,the dialogues are ridiculous,the events are crappy. The original Tune mentioned that the rainbow making was maybe darker that the pony world would make us belive.But it is still in Equestria! You REALLY think that NO ONE would ever miss are ask what happends or try to find back the failures at the test? And besides,WHO THE HELL WOULD AGREE TO PASS THIS DAMN TEST? They say in the story thay Fluttershy didn't make the test,and she have no problems! NO ONE WHO HAVE SENSE WOULD TRY A TEST WHOSE EVERYBODY IS SAYING ISN'T MERCIFULL TO THOSE WHO FAILS!!

Besides,if the rainbow factory was installed because Celestia couldn't handle Rainbows while making the cycle of moon and sun work...hey! LUNA'S BACK! She would have took back her responsability! And the explenation about how she let this happens are BAD.It's even DUMBER that cupcakes! And cupcakes was good because,even though it wasn't realistic that Pinkie could have killed that much people without anyone noticing,the written was good,and it didn't semt too much out of context for the character,because the writer really kept Pinkie as herself,and we know she's allready loony.That doesn't work with Rainbow Dash because she ISN'T LOONY AND RANDOM.And in the story,she is much too far away from what she is in the show.

I'm sorry,but it's just so bad.