Talk:Playing with the Wolf/@comment-25941663-20150223161423

Your prose had many errors, that I am afraid at times broke my immersion with the story. You should proofread your stories more in the future.

Overally, it was a nice read and I didn't expect the twist at all. Kudos for that. It wasn't really creepy, but it was certainly entertaining.

I will post my official rating when I read the other entries. Good luck.