Talk:The Oak/@comment-25567883-20141022111116

I liked the concept. The way the tree always moves IS creepy. I found the stylistic change weird though, how it goes from a semi-historic description of the tree to a present-tense narrative with characters who, while driving the plot to it's predictable conclusion, are still annoying. And the sudden jump from when they cut the tree to the police arriving after their deaths is jarring as hell. But I REALLY like the concept. I'd like to read a much longer version of this with more development.