User talk:Doom Vroom

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Archive 2 Besmirched

Archive 3 Japanese

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Archive 5 Endless 80

Reply to "Mystery" message
Ok. I think that could work. Maybe Erika or Hunter or both of them could barge into the protagonist's room to see what happened. I'll have you and a few other people look at it when the chapter is finished. I'm worried that I will have to explain who the thrower is though since people might be like "Who threw dat rock man!? Was it Rockman? Or a rock who happened to be a man?"

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  01:07, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Request For Critique
I have just completed the latest chapter in The Last Day of October series. If you have time to review this story, I would very much like to hear some feedback from you. The Last Day of October--Short Hoggers

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 01:49, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Kirby" message
As the creator of the Twister game doing an M. Night Shamalayn impression: What a twist!

So, I should still keep the thrower a mystery then, right? Ok then!

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   05:01, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Internet Troubles
So as of today, the modem at my dad's house has died. The only devices that have internet access are me and my dad's desktop computer. The wireless part of it doesn't work. I'm getting a new modem from my uncle tomorrow but that's only if he can find it.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   22:01, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

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Reply to "Internet" message
Well as of today, my internet has been fixed. Turns out the router was complete crap. Then again, my dad had it since 2005 so that might explain why it crapped out all of a sudden.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  19:53, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Burial Ceremony" message
Yeah we had a graceful ceremony for it... We threw it in the garbage can. The modem and router were crap so my uncle got the modem (exact same model and brand as our old one) and the cable company replaced the router, which has 8 or 12 channels on it.

I'm working on the outline for chapter 13. Should the samurai appear in the chapter since I have an idea of making the samurai even stronger as night gets closer.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   04:27, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

I did it!
I wrote a Trollpasta: http://trollpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Nixon.book

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   07:08, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

16-1-9-14
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Re:
I already looked into the coding of it, it qualifies as either spam or roleplaying (I went with the shorter ban) due to the fact that they messaged it to five users in the span of twenty minutes for little to no reason. If left unchecked, it would likely have become a nuisance. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 05:45, October 25, 2015 (UTC)


 * Yeah, as soon as I saw the string of numbers, I figured they were using a code of sorts and looked into it (after warning them). EmpyrealInvective (talk) 05:52, October 25, 2015 (UTC)


 * Always interesting to pick out patterns, although it was fairly simple. It wasn't a nonary game like I was hoping. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 05:59, October 25, 2015 (UTC)


 * Yup, it's a puzzle game, but it has a pretty involving story that I played through during the Peace Corps (helped get me through training). Let me know how Fallout 4 is as I'll probably wait until it's in my price range to buy it. (i.e. being sold by a shady guy at a flea market who promises it's 'totally not cursed'.) EmpyrealInvective (talk) 06:09, October 25, 2015 (UTC)


 * Nope, I'm pretty old school. I'll probably just bug you about it once the game drops later for your opinion. Semicolon closing parenthesis EmpyrealInvective (talk) 06:18, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

RE:
I've seen and studied and written about (ans writing in) ciphers before—Caesar, Atbash, Voynich, Pigpen, you name it—but this one... it's something I've never seen before!

But I'm trying my best. Who knows?

 Ruckus Q uantum   06:12, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Beginning of Chapter 13
Chapter 13

After that scene played out, I noticed that my room became dimmer. I turned around to see that the sun was starting to set as it turned my room orange. While this seemed beautiful to look at, it made my head throb and I quickly shut the blinds.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   14:33, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re:
I've just finished your latest story and I'm messaging you rather than leaving a comment because I didn't particularly like it. I'm not a fan of giving negative feedback unless something really stands out, but this story just didn't feel right for me. It was a bit hard to keep up with who was who and what was happening to each of them. The flow just wasn't there. I also felt like there were a lot of very unlikely things occurring, especially when they were exiting the cave (face-metal rolling past them that sounded like marbles/confusing a clawed tentacle with blood splatter/etc). The creature also came off as a bit cartoonish for my taste.

Now there were some good things though: I liked the setting and felt you did a good job of developing it. I had no trouble visualizing myself in a blizzard on the side of a mountain, but I'm not sure there was much more for my taste. Consider finding more innovative ways to identify the speaker rather than a direct identification after their line (some direct ID is ok, but too much ruins the flow/vibe). I think the biggest problem I have with the story is that it's way too short for what it is. This concept with this setting had a lot of potential, and I think it would have benefited from being two or three times its current length. Regardless of what I've said, thanks for contributing your time and work to the wiki. I hate giving this kind of response, but I also believe in complete honesty. Hope this helps you in the future.

Jay Ten (talk) 15:48, October 27, 2015 (UTC)


 * The characters needed to be more developed, so yes, interaction would help, but I'm not sure if that alone is the fix. At least one of the perspectives needs to be expanded to avoid the scattered feel (you can swap perspectives, but that requires further development for each). The whole thing just escalated too quickly.  I really needed more build up for this particular type of story.  I think you understand what I mean when I say I had zero connection with any character.  I understand the setting and events were more important to this story, which is fine, but I still need a minimum understanding of who the characters are. Keep in mind this is all just my opinion.


 * As for the Yeti, I realize you were going for something outlandish, but I couldn't get on board with it. The "black tentacle-like appendage with three sharp prongs" made me think more of an alien or something from Resident Evil.  I really like the fact it was wearing the bear skin: that showed intelligence as well as physical dominance which definitely adds to the horror.  If it was a completely original creature or a more generic one like an alien or a monster under the bed, then you could do whatever you want and it would be fine, but when it's something like a yeti that already conjures up a fairly familiar image, you have to be careful straying too far.  And just so you know, I by no means suffered while reading it - I simply felt there was plenty of room for improvement in what could potentially be a great story.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 21:30, October 27, 2015 (UTC)


 * Just for clarity, I'm not saying that stories shouldn't be that short, but rather that this particular story felt like it would've benefited from added length (I have a lot of stuff shorter than your story). As they say, a story needs to be as long as it needs to be.  A story should always be as short as it can be, but sometimes that means a page and other times it means a book.  Hope that makes sense.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 03:33, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Hey!
How are ya? I'm bored and a bit lonely... :(

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   03:04, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "No way! Me too!" Message
I have two possible explanations as to why the protagonist is afraid of leaving the window open at night:

"That's not the only reason I closed the blinds and windows. You see, when I was about 9 or 10 years old, my mom would tell me to close my windows and blinds at night so that way, people would be less inclined to look into my window or break in or something like that. Ever since then, I have NEVER left my windows and blinds open at night. Even during sunset, I still closed them anyway."

"That's not the only reason why I closed the windows and blinds. When I was around 7 years old, I stayed up and watched horror movies with my brother. The movie we were watching was one of the Halloween movies. I was only a bit scared but my brother was the only person who kept me from out right panicking. However, there was one scene that I just couldn't handle. It was a scene where Micheal Myers was looking into a window of another character's house. Maybe it was because I was sitting next to a window that had the blinds open but all I remember after that was breathing rapidly and shaking. I also cried a bit as I hugged my brother."

If there's anything I should add or take away, let me know.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   00:26, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Odd Advice" message
I see. I kind of like the first one too but Radia said she liked the second one better since it ties in to the lost episode genre thing.

As for the advice, I didn't know what was a good age to tell a child that so I might change it from 9 or 10 to just "When I was a kid". I am still conflicted on which one to go with. Might ask a third person, play eenie meenie miney moe, or flip a coin.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   02:40, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Do What You Want" message
By the way, I'm working on a new Haunting Hour review. It's part 1 of the season 1 finale. I think it's one of the more popular episodes of the series. I have finished the introduction and summary part of the review.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   16:56, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Got That New Review
When you get a chance to check it out, here it is: http://littleazusblog.blogspot.com/2015/11/every-haunting-hour-ever-21-scary-mary.html

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   06:12, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Scary Mary" message
OK! Will do. Also I finally got post an update on my pasta: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:TheAzumangaDaiohFan/I_Finished_Chapter_12_of_My_New_Pasta!_11/2/15

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   05:17, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Behold! A New Haunting Hour Review!
http://littleazusblog.blogspot.com/2015/11/every-haunting-hour-ever-22-scary-mary.html

By the way, I got a case of writer's block. I don't know what should happen after the protagonist closes the blinds. I kind of want to have something fly through the window but I also kind of want to establish her room as a safe zone. Though the pole in her closet fell down so I don't know if that's some kind of danger.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   04:23, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Not Very Nesescary" message
I will say that while I did find the episode to be a bit pointless, I do think it had some good things to offer. Just like with the first episode of season 1, the first episode of season 2 will be a two parter. I'll have to watch it when I get a chance.

As for the pasta, maybe the DVD can be the reason why the protagonist's room is safe. When It's playing, the Samurai doesn't show up. When it isn't playing, that's when it appears. I don't know if it will work or not but it's a start. If I'm going to have the room be safe from the samurai, maybe I should scrap the brick being thrown through the protagonist's window or have it happen in another part of the house.

I think after the protagonist closes the blinds, she could go back to watching the episode or something.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   03:23, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Keep that Brick" message
So I got a bit further in chapter 13. This is what I wrote:

"As soon as the blinds and windows were shut, I went back to the daybed and grabbed the remote. Just as I was about to hit play, I heard a ear splitting crash come from the window near the bunk bed. I then saw a red, rectangular object flying towards me and I jumped off the daybed and onto the floor."

After this, the brick may land a couple of inches away from the daybed.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   14:56, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "DVD Reason" message
Should I put that explanation at the end of the story or would I have to rewrite an earlier part?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   18:50, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Ending" message
Ok. Here's how one of the endings will go: When nighttime hits, the Samurai will be fully powered and instead of traveling on the walls, it can now freely travel where ever it wants. It uses this ability to chase after the protagonist. The samurai chases her outside, where she, thinking that shadows can't swim, jumps into the algae infested lake and swims as fast as she can to the other side. On the way there however, she passes out (presumably due to exhaustion) and ends up in the hospital. While in the hospital, Erika asks the protagonist what made her jump in the lake. The protagonist tells Erika that the samurai had chased her and that The Haunting Hour DVD had stopped playing, thus ended its protection against the Samurai entering her room. Erika tells her that she hasn't heard of that series, let alone own a DVD for it. The protagonist asks how Erika doesn't own it if she has seen it.

Ending 2: When the samurai is fully powered and forces entry into the protagonist plays the DVD from the beginning to get rid of or at least weaken the samurai. When that doesn't work anymore, the protagonist scrambles to find something that defeats or slows down the samurai. She eventually finds a music box/jewelry box hybrid that plays "It's a Small World" and runs back to her room. She cranks up the music box and at first, it seems to work. But when the music stops playing, the samurai crushes the music box. The protagonist starts to panics since she doesn't know too many weaknesses of a shadow. She then runs out of the house with the samurai in pursuit. She then tricks the samurai into going into the lake, where it disintegrates.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   17:36, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Endings" message
I'm glad to hear your feedback! I really want the story to pass spinoff appeal too and I'm willing to fix either ending if possible. If not, one or both will be scrapped.

As for the first ending, making it all in her head was my original intention and I think if I add a bit more explanation, it could work a bit better while keeping some ambiguity. I need to find a way to try and do that though.

For the second ending, I'm not too familiar with the weaknesses of shadows. Would fire be a good weakness or do you have something else in mind?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   06:57, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Ending Take 2" message
So I fixed the first ending. I included more of an explaination of the protection and made it a bit more clear that it was all her imagination: "Alternate Ending 1: Towards the end of the episode, the protagonist starts to think about what has happened all day. When this happens, she catches onto a pattern. The samurai only seems to appear when the DVD isn't playing. However, when the DVD is playing, she is protected from the samurai within her room. The protagonist decides to test out the pattern by opening her door and pausing the DVD. She waits a few moments until the samurai appears across the hall.

She repeats the process except with the DVD playing and the samurai doesn't show up. She also concludes that, based on the brick incident, the closest the samurai can get to entering her room is by forcing objects through random entry points like a window when powerful enough. While the DVD is playing, she takes a moment to get a drink. However, the episode ends sooner than she expected as she sees the samurai running after her. She drops the drink and starts sprinting out the door. She heads towards the lake and swims as fast as she can until she passes out from exhaustion.

She later wakes up in the hospital where Erika asks her why she jumped in the lake. The protagonist tells her that the samurai started running after her and that thought that she could swim to the other side successfully seeing as how the distance didn't seem that far. The protagonist also tells Erika that the samurai from earlier was chasing her. Erika shows concern for her and tells the protagonist that she found a DVD from her collection in the protagonist's room while gathering some of her belongings. The protagonist immediately asks if its the DVD for The Haunting Hour. Erika gets a confused look on her face and loudly says "What?" and tells the protagonist that she hasn't heard of the show, let alone own a DVD for the series."

As for the second ending, I need to work on it but I need to know a possible weakness for the shadow.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   03:26, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

I got a bit farther in the pasta!
So when the brick lands in the protagonist's room, she goes to the window to find out who threw it. However, she doesn't see anyone outside. It may not seem like much but I'm happy I got something. Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   00:54, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

New Reviews are Up On My Blog!
http://littleazusblog.blogspot.com/2015/11/every-haunting-hour-ever-23-creature.html

http://littleazusblog.blogspot.com/2015/11/every-haunting-hour-ever-24-creature.html

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   23:43, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Kill la Kill
Hey Vroom Vroom, do you watch Kill la Kill? Wondering if you had seen it. --Jojo risin&#39; (talk) 22:28, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Update
Thank you for the compliments! I'm glad you like my style, and I appreciate your interest! As a matter of fact, I am currently working on some stories. I have a story called "Fu Manchu's Serum" which has a couple of the characters from The Houseguest series. It's ready to go; I just have to post it. I'm also working on a "Choose Your Own Adventure"-type addition to "The Melon Head Illustration" so readers can choose between the original ending or one of three alternate endings. It already had infinite possibilities, so now it will have infinite possibilities plus three possibilities! ;-) I'll probably post those in a week or two. I've partially written a pasta called "The Dead-Eyed Dog", and after that I have ideas for a couple more, including a new chapter in The Houseguest series.  I'm thinking of adding some more to "Kumiho" too.

As for "The Watch on the Arm", I can understand your criticisms. It was meant to be a variant on the theme of someone having a dream that forecast something that wound up happening, or that otherwise had an impact on someone's life. You know the kind. A woman dreams that her husband is dying. She finds him seemingly in good health, but hours or days later, he dies in real life exactly how he did in her nightmare. I suppose it is a leap to get so scared because of an eerie dream and a superstition, but keep in mind that George had been on a downward slide for a while. Jeff realized that George wasn't in good shape, and while George didn't like the direction his life was taking, he hadn't really acknowledged that he had a problem. The nightmare and superstition forced George to realize that the path he was on could lead to devastating consequences, and the comparison to a real-life event made Jeff alarmed because it brought to mind what alcohol abuse could lead to. They both had fears about George's health, and the nightmare brought them to the surface so they could start doing something about them. In any case, even though you didn't care for it, thanks for the feedback! I appreciate your courtesy, and I hope you felt for the characters even though you didn't think much of the story. Do you think it would help if I made it clearer that George was in bad shape (like depicting him getting seriously ill after the night of drinking, describing a change in his appearance, etc)? I'm glad that overall you like what you've read. Raidra (talk) 02:51, November 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * I just noticed you have the Special Containment Perfectionist badge. Congratulations! Raidra (talk) 02:55, November 17, 2015 (UTC)


 * That sounds like it'll be an interesting story. Hopefully it'll capture the flavor of a communal campfire story.  A couple of the alternate endings for "The Melon Head Illustration" will be similar, but hopefully people will enjoy all of them.  If they don't like all of them, well then, shoot, that's the purpose of "Choose Your Own Adventure", right?  In any case, your additional feedback does make sense.  I'll leave it as it is for now.  I thought late last night that at least you were commenting on things that actually did happen in the story.  I say that because one time someone criticized something that didn't happen in one of my stories. I had a story and at one point I described the murderess taking out a bouquet of flowers and smelling them.  Someone left a lengthy criticism which included a rebuke that to create a memorable killer I had to have something other than the gimmick of them leaving flowers at the crime scene.  However, this never happened.  Like I said, the killer merely sniffed a bouquet of flowers.  There was absolutely nothing in the story to give the slightest support to the notion that she had left the flowers anywhere.  The reader just jumped to a conclusion more than George and Jeff ever could. }:-/
 * I do watch some anime. I wish Naruto was on at a time when I could watch it easily, but then again I could always reserve the DVDs at my library.  I haven't seen or read Fate Zero, but it sounds interesting and different.  As for the edits congrats, thanks!  I started to go for the year badge, but I had to quit for some reason.  Maybe someday I'll try it again.  Good luck to you! :-D Raidra (talk) 21:14, November 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * What made it worse is the critic never replied to admit she or he misinterpreted that part (Well, out-and-out invented an interpretation is more like it). I believe that if you misinterpret something (because you were tired, or didn't read it right, or whatever) and you either realize it later or have it pointed out to you, you should have the courtesy to reply, "Oh, my mistake!" Sometimes people do, but when they don't it's frustrating because that's really showing they don't care.
 * I've seen a little of Bleach, but one reason I haven't gotten into it is there's so much you have to learn about, like Reapers, Hollows, Vizards, Arrancars (or whatever the term is), Quincies, etc. I don't have enough interest to learn all the jargon and backgrounds.
 * Normally I'd say I'd archive my talk page myself, but I'll take you up on the offer. Thanks! :-) Raidra (talk) 01:09, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re:
Welp, good to hear it's made some improvements since FO:3. It seems like it's going to be tougher this time around with irradiation being more harmful and my character's tendency to frolic in large irradiated bodies of water. I'll be excited to learn how I'll probably get the worst ending imaginable. I assume it'll probably involve my character accidentally murdering a massive part of the world's population due to a choice I made arbitrarily earlier in the game. (Oh... you chose an left-handed character, well hope you enjoy genocide.)

Seems like it's got a bit of gameplay and side quests to it. I'll probably wait to see if the price drops between now and Christmas before I decide to pick it up. Thanks for taking the time to play through it and write a bit of a review for me. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 04:56, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Archived It
Thanks! The same thing happened when I archived it the first time.

I can see that, though it doesn't say much for the critics that they'd make accusations/insults and then run away. I mean, what are they, first graders?

I don't think you were being an elitist snob or anything. You told how you felt without maliciousness or arrogance. I thought you made some good points. You think, "Oh, come on! How many sets of powers is this guy gonna gain and lose?" Speaking of Bleach and Naruto, there's a famous meme. It appears to be a screenshot from some kind of message board thread or social media page. Someone asks, "Is Naruto better than Bleach?" and someone else, either jokingly or out of ignorance, replies, "I've never used Naruto. Does it make your clothes white?" X-D

I have seen and enjoyed other anime shows, but I'll have to talk about that later because there are things I need to do. I found out, though, that a show I watched as a child was anime. I never would have guessed because it was done in such a Western style. It adapted Grimm's fairy tales and aired on Nick Jr. in the late 1980s/early 90s. When I'm able I'll find an article about it. Raidra (talk) 00:14, November 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * Here they are- http://weknowmemes.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/04/which-is-better-bleach-or-naruto.jpg, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grimm's_Fairy_Tale_Classics

Yeah, I remember Face. I was lucky enough to be around when they had good shows like Grimm's Fairy Tale Classics, David the Gnome, The Little Koala (I think that was the name), and (later on) Papa's Beaver's Storytime.

~laughs~ Wow, that guy sounds like a jerk! The examples of that meme were funny, though. Thanks for the link! I'll check out the site when I can. For some reason it's been a strain lately to go on the Internet and do things (as evidenced by my just now responding to your post). I watched Pokemon and some Yu-Gi-Oh too. I was into the first two or three seasons of Digimon, but I lost interest after that because they changed too many things and it wasn't as good ("This is the real world and Digimon are fictional, except, no, wait, they're not! And the world is dark and scary!" :-/). I used to watch some G-Force and Voltron too. I liked Voltron better, perhaps because it was similar to Mighty Morphin' Power Rangers (G-Force creeped me out at times, really). It'll be interesting to see how many more I come up with after looking at that website. In any case, I'll stay away from those discussion boards. Thanks again! Raidra (talk) 23:47, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

New Tobit Story
Hey,

New Tobit story is posted: Tobit: The Lady and the Maiden of Knowledge. Please check it out!

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 02:35, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Anti-Spam" message
Well that is indeed a smart strategy. So it's been awhile since we talked and in that time, I had SnakeTounge look at my pasta. He hasn't given his review yet but I'm extremely nervous as to what he/she will say. I think it's because he/she said they'd definitely dish out some constructive criticism on it. I can accept criticism but I'm still quite nervous that they might have me rewrite the story from the beginning.

Remember that movie on Cartoon Network called "Re-Animated"? Remember how a lot of people didn't like it? Well while I'm thinking of the next event for my pasta, I've been attempting to re write the movie. Here's what I have so far:

"Sarah Kneeland is not a fan of cartoons from any country. To her, they just seem to be something for kids to be babysat by and she claims that she is too old to watch them. When it comes to TV shows and movies, she seems to prefer it when there are actual people on screen since it seems to make the situation that the characters are in more believable. She also believes that live action entertainment has more thought, focus, and effort thrown in than anything that has been animated. Because of this, she becomes frustrated when her little brother Jacob asks her to watch cartoons with him.

One day, while walking home from baseball practice with her friends, everyone except Sarah keeps praising a new cartoon series that seems to be appealing to kids and older audiences. When her friends ask Sarah if she has seen the show, Sarah politely says no and tells them that it's not her thing. The friends try to respect her viewpoint but they question how she can judge something without seeing it.

As the friends are talking, a car comes speeding down the road and hits Sarah before she could fully avoid it unlike the rest of her friends who jumped in the bushes that weren't in the car's path. Sarah is then taken to the hospital where it's revealed that while she did survive, she has 2 broken ribs, a broken leg, and some brain damage that rendered certain parts of it unusable. To fix the brain, they use fully functional parts from a man who died of a heart attack 5 days ago. The surgeons work effortlessly to fix her brain as well as her ribs.

When Sarah comes to, she sees her father and Jacob standing at the end of her bed in the post op ward and they ask how she is feeling. Sarah says she's okay but is surprised that she's still alive. She also wishes that her mom was there to comfort her. Sarah's father says that if were up to him, she wouldn't have gone overseas to get away from him.

As soon as Sarah gets home, she goes upstairs to her bedroom while using crutches and watches TV. While watching TV, she hears something coming from underneath her bed."

If you want me to link you to some information on Re-Animated, I can certainly do that.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   06:50, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Feedback?
Hey, I was wondering if you could give me some feedback on a story I uploaded. Here's the link: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:512103

Thanks in advance, --SmidgetTheMidget (talk) 23:50, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "KND" message
So... That's a yes on linking you to info on Re-Animated? OK then.

Link: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Re-Animated#Plot

I hear they might do a reboot of KND but I'll have to research that more.

So I'll call the re write of Re-Animated "Toonified". That's the title I'm going with unless I can find a better title.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   18:22, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Teen Tits Go...To Sleep" message
Let's just hope they don't screw it up or else we'll see a legion of CN fans taking to the streets and raising hell and cattle!

I think Toonified is a good title for the project. Maybe the cartoon characters can help the main character appreciate animation again.

Sarah, the main character, has no way to contact her mother after the mother had divorced her father. The mother is overseas furthering her animation career and she had no luck winning custody of the kids.

Because animation reminds Sarah so much of her mother, it's too painful for her to watch any kind of animation.

That's some of the character ideas I have. I also started a new wiki. Link:  http://reanimated.wikia.com/wiki/ReAnimated_Wikia

 Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   23:24, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

My Tablet Thought It Was Tuesday!
So did I... Thanks Tablet! > : (

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   23:30, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

On Tobit
I won't give away who the leader of the Unwashed is quite yet, you'll just have to keep reading to find out. As far as there being two more stories, honestly, I am not sure anymore. When I first started the series, I honestly anticipated there being 3 installments, not counting the two prequels. Then it sort of just kept going, and now I'm all the way up to 8, so who knows? I would like to say that I could wrap it up in two more chapters, but in all truth, I never know what direction the story will go until I really sit down and get into it.

As always, thanks for reading and for leaving me the feedback. Your support is always greatly appreciated.

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 05:55, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Sorry Cartoon Network!" Message
If there was something that you could do to fix Cartoon Network, what would it be?

For me, I'd take TTG off of the air, give Amethyst: Princess of The Gem World its own series with full 30 minute episodes, and try to look at what the network is doing right and use that as an example to improve the network.

I don't know if I sent you some additional details that I added to Toonified but here you go:

" The noise moves from place to place, which makes Sarah want to follow it. The noise eventually leads her to the guest bedroom, where she finds a group of cartoon characters that yell "surprise" in unison as she enters the room."

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   18:26, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "What's TTG" message
TTG stands for "Teens Titans Go". Every time the full title is uttered, a kitten explodes. (Sees news report about exploding kittens) Dammit!

Amethyst: Princess of The Gem World is a short that aired in the DC nation block where viewers would vote to see which short CN should turn into a full series. Unfortunately, everyone voted for TTG. Ugh! If only they knew the horrors that would befall them with that choice. The Gem World was based on a comic of the same name and in the short, an ordinary girl gets sucked into a game world that she has to save.

I fixed the detail in Toonified:

"The noise moves from the floors and proceeds to jump from wall to wall, which makes Sarah want to follow it."

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   17:26, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Fixed Toonified Even More!
"As soon as Sarah gets home, she goes upstairs to her bedroom while using crutches and watches TV. While watching TV, she hears a thump coming from underneath her bed. The noise moves from the floors and proceeds to jump from wall to wall, which makes Sarah want to follow it. The thump eventually leads her to the guest bedroom, where she finds a group of cartoon characters that yell "surprise" in unison as she enters the room."

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   21:02, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks
Thanks Vroom, I appreciate it. Happy Thanksgiving to you too. MrDupin (talk) 23:40, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Ugh!
I really need to motivate myself to start working on my pasta again! I might change a few things in the chapter outline first.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   21:33, November 27, 2015 (UTC)