Talk:It's Just a Story/@comment-25451666-20141111213411

this is amazing. i love the way the author made this, from just the right amount of nasty stuff (STOP JUDGING IM FUCKED UP OKAY??) to the fact that Donovain was talking about how it really is just a story, and he did it in such a way i actually felt guilty, as if i caused the womens murder myself, or even did it. i mean, yeah, theres so much blood and gore i was repulsed and i had to cover my mouth (which is a huge feat to make me repulsed, congrants, you actually deserve a medal) but it was written to make you think. the vocabulary, the word choices, the structure, and even the almost innocent personality of the person who killed the lady drills in your concience and grabs you, like "look at what you did. think about it, you sick bastard.". its amazing,really. in fact... its art.

9.99999999999999999999999999/10 (i dont give out perfect scores, but this is damn close.)