Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35911608-20190324085328/@comment-35911608-20190325164248

BloodySpghetti wrote: RedNovaTyrant wrote: Draft 2 note: the ending here was changed slightly, only adding in the breaking of the umbra. I'm not sure myself how I feel about it, so let me know if you think it brings one last hurrah to the story, or if it can do without it - along with your other thoughts. I think it's better without it. The Umbra being around gives the world a reason to fall apart. Now that it's broken, it's kind of meh... "now they can rebuild... so what's the point?"

I think the previous ending was better Yeah, the more I read it, the more I came to the same conclusion. I guess I'll change that back, and then post if no one else is coming around to review.