Talk:I Am a Big Boy/@comment-33089254-20170916004919

'His head shatters into a thousand little pieces' - a really beautiful turn of phrase - almost poetic! My friend, you have surpassed yourself with this mini-masterpiece, and your mastery of language is, au fond, astounding - such a wordsmith extaordinaire, when mere mortals might have been tempted by 'His head shatters into myriad fragments' you opted for 'a thousand little pieces'. The childish, pedantic exactitude of the amount was nothing short of genius. I bow to you, oh storyteller, and the ending was really, utterly unexpected! 2/10.