Talk:Poor Little Babysitter Is Dead/@comment-25052433-20160329225432

This was a very good pasta. You built up the suspense and overall situation quite well. Honestly, the only complaint that I could give here would be the cliche nature of the last line. It falls into that whole, "you're next" concept that has just been done to death around here. Otherwise, this was a great story and an enjoyable read from start to finish. Excellent work!