Talk:What's Never There/@comment-26425680-20160416022534

A good start for an aspiring pasta writer. This is probably the best of your three posted pastas, btw. You paid attention to your spelling and grammar, so kudos, because that puts you far ahead of many others who attempt to post here. As far as your stories are concerned, I think you'd be better off trying to write something longer and more intricate. You've shown that you can write a basic scare tale, but I didn't see anything among the three stories that really separates them from countless others that have come before. In the future, take some time to construct a unique plot. Flesh out your antagonists, and know what all of your characters' motivations are. Personally, I might spend months (off and on) thinking through a story, so don't rush things. Just try to let it come to you naturally, and be patient.