Talk:Dogscape/@comment-32218435-20170607175312

The writing, the atmosphere and all the ideas rooting from the concept of a "dogscape" are extremely intriguing and mostly well-done.

That said, this isn't good in a story sense. This is just a kick-ass presentation of a silly idea turned wildly disturbing to me. One problem is that the fourthteen entry kinda breaks it, who write it if the man can't even move his hand? Same for fifthteen. And truth be told, as soon as it was revealed this is caused by an evil godly dog and an animal lover I just couldn't help a chuckle.

All that despressing raping, beastiality, smelly doggies gets on my nerves, but this story won't stick with me for long. It's a slice-of-life apocalyse story, reason for the apocalyse being silly evil pup love. Not saying I don't like it, the writing keep me hooked. But on a whole, this story doesn't mean much to me.

It seems this idea originate from something equally silly, it've definitely gone a long way to be as horrific as it is now.