Talk:Beneath the Garden/@comment-24958115-20140519205725/@comment-25153204-20140714190150

I don't believe Patrick was criticizing the author at all, merely pointing out that on a website clearly filled with people who haven't yet reached maturity or formed a firm understanding of what a good piece of writing is that some will be offended. I rather liked the use of language. It gave depth to the character, an insight into his mind. 10/10 this was well written and well executed. The gore wasn't glorified for shock value as is common here, and the tale was riveting. The ending was surprising but not in such a way that it didn't fit the story. By far one of the best reads I've encountered here.