Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25297457-20140822031108/@comment-24101790-20140822032115

Jason Michaels was deleted as it was not up to quality standards. There are a lot of capitalization errors (Names and the start of sentences need to be capitalized.) punctuation (closing punctuation goes inside the quotation marks, commas are missing at points, and apostrophes are lacking where needed. 'He's', 'it's', 'let's', etc.), grammatical (it's=it is, its indicates possession, their/there/they're issues.)

Then there are the numerous phrasing errors ("One day he went a army shop he swear that he wouldn't talk because of the gas Jason bought a gas mask", "...down the stairs to find he was going throw the safe he found a another ax but it had the name Jason on it.", etc.)

There are a lot of issues here that showcase why the story isn't up to quality standards