Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20190829215235/@comment-4893169-20190903033131

DrBobSmith wrote:

''Thou for singular, Ye for plural. I see only one person setting up this Wiccan ritual.

Make it clearer for the reader then that this is some Wiccan wanna be witch who actually believes that made up nonsense. Also, what old gods is this? I know of Ovinnik and Li Shou, but neither one of those farming gods seem related. Bastet? No, done to death.''

Is this more correct? “The old gods are not to art mocked. Thou cannot deceive us, and we wilt not permit thou to mock us withal pretended instead of real services.”

May I have your permission to use the phrase "Wiccan wanna be witch?

I figure Ovinnik in his more destructive form, according to the Russian and Slavic myths.