Talk:Big-Heart Helena/@comment-31077845-20170302142006

I liked the dialogue, it felt natural, but the narrative felt awfully...cliche-heavy. We have the creepy talking oddly prescient doll, some unnatural vomiting action, creepy little dead kid who, of course, has be obsessed with asking people to play with her and about the least inventive method of murder possible. It just felt kinda uninspired is what I'm saying.