Talk:Ted the Caver/@comment-25169506-20140712120647/@comment-19977532-20140717185245

The suspence exists, although looking back it could've been better. As they dig the hole, and even as Ted progresses further into the cave, more and more bizzare things begin to happen, such as the shrieks, the dog, and the messages in the cave. (The messages are useless in the story and really should've been cut out, I can agree there.) Even if the suspence isn't the best, it does exist.

I believe that others should be allowed their own opinions (as long as it doesn't affect others, like anti-abortion believers.) But the facts you back them up with need to be researched.