Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190207081051/@comment-36393004-20190207215910

I think the scary gets bogged down by the scientific jargon in the beginning and I actually agree with Bloody about the idea of it being rabies coming too soon. Let the events unfold, show the result, and let the explanation be the big reveal once the paramedics get involved. Would be far creepier that way.