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Reply ro "Leprecahn" message
Thanks! I was trying to covey that line as if she was saying that while angry. Did you get that vibe? If not, how could I covey it better?

-- Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  21:30, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "I got that" message
Well I'm glad that I made it adaquate enough for the reader to understand that she wasn't a happy camper.

So I went to an event at my local art museum that had an "Alice in Wonderland" theme where one of the activities was to use patterns from other pieces in the museum as things you would trace onto an image of a tea cup, saucer,rtc. They had other activities going on in other parts of the museum that were also fun.

As you can tell, I'm an Alice in Wonderland junkie who can't get enough of the story! I joined a book club at one of the libraries in my state. This month's theme is fanfiction so I chose the story "Down The Rabbit Hole" as my piece of fanfiction.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  05:17, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to 'Random Stuff' Message
Okay, so first things first, I'm so sorry if I'm posting this wrong. I'm insanely new to this, and I seriously have no idea how to do most of the things I've seen around here. I'm sorry for the late reply, but as I said in my introduction blog, I get scared about doing things if I think I'm doing them wrong.

To answer your first question, no, I haven't read On Writing, but I would be interested in doing so. I'm really glad that people are supportive here, because I've found it hard to find people who don't care about my sexuality. I don't get it, I mean this is 2015, why can't people just accept that we all aren't the same?

Yes! I sound like a mouse when talking to a stranger. Hell, sometimes I get quiet when talking to someone I've known for years, but haven't seen in a while. I'm like this with even my family, the family from out of town at least. It's sad, really. That I can't even talk to my own sister because she's lived out of town for a lot of my life. Though she's been back for three months and I can at least have some conversation with her. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 22:17, September 18, 2015 (UTC)


 * That's my plan! I'm not good with coding as it is, and I really can't find in-depth articles explaining how coding works here. I do, but not a very awesome one.


 * Hm, I might just search it up and order it. When I get the money that is, which is very hard to come by. I literally can't work and when I try to explain the reason why to the people around me, they just say 'get over it' and 'move on' which isn't fair to me at all.


 * I agree completely when it comes to people not liking those different from them. I've always been one of those people who doesn't care what you look like, or who you love, just treat me with respect and we'll be good. Although, maybe the fact that I don't talk and I hide is what scares people off, who knows?


 * It does make life so much harder than it needs to be. As I previously said, the whole 'get over it' thing, it's not so easy. I don't think many people get that it's literally a sickness that takes time to over come with just one person. I may get used to a person in time, but if you just throw me into a crowd of people and tell me to 'get over it' I'm likely to have a panic-attack that results in a heart-attack.


 * Anime? Oh my, you have no idea. I discovered Anime when I was twelve, and I fell in love. The first Anime I ever watched was Naruto, which will always be considered my favorite. I don't get the hate it receives, but I guess everyone has different tastes, eh? I've never seen WataMote, but I would definitely give it a chance. Any other suggestions? I've been meaning to make a list of must see Anime, because I've seen so many already. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 05:09, September 19, 2015 (UTC)


 * Recently got my prepaid Paypal if that counts. I haven't had the luck of using it though, as you need money on the card first. Yes, I mean my Social Anxiety. It has been my demise in the whole job department. Though, then again, maybe it's not just that... I once made it through a job interview, I managed to talk and smile, I played off my panic-attack swimmingly. You know what stopped me from getting the job? My weight.


 * The guy who interviewed me must have thought I was out of ear-shot, but sadly for me, I wasn't. It was the first job interview I ever had, and I guess it just made everything worse. Oh, crap. Am I talking too much? I do this a lot, just let me know if I'm giving too much detail on things you don't care about.


 * It's not dumb, believe me. It's something that helps you, and I think everyone with Social Anxiety needs something like that to help them too. Maybe I can find some way, like you did, to make it easier. If I do that, I can finally do something with my life. While I want to be a writer, it isn't paying the bills right now.


 * I actually made an account, cecekisskiss, to be exact. Of course that was like ten minutes ago, but it looked interesting, and I couldn't resist signing up. Hm, I've never heard of My Anime List, but I'm definitely signing up for that when I get the chance. It looks like it keeps things organized, and I really need some organization in my life right now. I am the least organized person I know. I once mixed up a twenty chapter book I wrote. Chapter ten was on top, and the last chapter was chapter four. It literally took me at least two hours to sort through. Haha. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 06:18, September 19, 2015 (UTC)


 * Yeah, I've noticed that a lot of people who hire, are the same. They're pretty mean about things, and think they're above people. I don't believe anyone is better than anyone, simple as that. Maybe I'm better suited working in the back, like running inventory or something. I didn't finish high-school, sadly, so there aren't many options for me.


 * Yeah, my middle school locker was a mess. I remember when my brother opened my locker once, it wasn't pretty. My teachers hated the way I organized, literally hated it. I remember a lot of my teachers calling me out on it, some even yelled. I'll go and check that message now! Thank you for the recommendations, by the way.


 * I have a question for you. It may seem stupid, but it's one of the reasons I haven't made any edits to any creepypastas yet. How does editing work? By that I mean, can I edit any story that I see mistakes in? I get that this is a place to edit and make improvements, but I feel as though I'm intruding. More so, I don't want to get in trouble for doing something wrong. I'm sure it's covered somewhere, but it would be nice to hear from someone personally. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 08:36, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine if you don't reply to me right away, as you've said before, we have lives. Besides, I'm a patient person and I don't freak out if someone doesn't talk to me right away. I haven't really met any nice people who hire others. I remember calling after giving an application and I was chewed out for calling the wrong number. It was the number I was given by them to call, if I wanted to check up. Needless to say, I didn't call again. I'm indifferent about things anyway and if I get cussed out and hung up on for one little mistake, that is not someone I want to work for.

I'm actually making my list now, and once I'm done, I'll give you the link to it. I hope they do! I love watching new Anime, but I'll admit that I have a lot of tastes. Some Anime that I like, other people seem to despise. It's weird really, but it's fine, I love what I love. :) Don't worry, I come from a lot of communities like that. People from the outside would probably run from some of the sites I've been on. Only they run because they think no one is friendly, whenever the people on the site were only joking around.

Okay, good. I was wondering that before I started editing things around here. It's weird though, I commented on that new thread about the JtK contest and my text is grey while all the other text is white. Is that what it looks like only to me? I've read everything I've needed to read, but I don't think that was covered. Sorry if I'm bugging you with questions. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 23:33, September 19, 2015 (UTC)


 * I wanted to do that so bad, but I couldn't get the words out. My sister took the phone from me because she wanted to, but the woman hung up before she could say anything. Exactly what I ranted about the minute it was over, which caused my sister to fall into a fit of giggles. She enjoys when I rant, because I rant pretty hard. I curse, and I mean I curse a lot. Mostly when I'm angry, not so much in a more professional setting. Thank you, and I want to say the same to you. Some day, maybe we can concure Social Anxiety, at least I hope so.


 * I'm the same way! I'll try anything, and if I don't like it, I'll simply move on. I also love romantic comedies the best, but I've always been a fan of romance. Probably how I escape the torture of not having a relationship of my own, but maybe that's wrong, because I've loved romantic comedies since I started watching Anime. That was when I wasn't even interested in dating. Haha.


 * That's good to hear, because while I can take teasing, I can't take flat out hate. Breaks a person down, even the strongest of people can be brought down by the pain hate brings.


 * Good thing, that. I thought I did something wrong and started to freak out. I thought maybe my comment was removed and only I could see it or something. Good to know that I didn't do something wrong.


 * I always knew that writing wasn't the easiest thing in the world, but man, I never thought I would have this much trouble writing a Creepypasta. Did you have trouble writing your first one? PastaMeCreepy (talk) 01:28, September 20, 2015 (UTC)


 * It's funny, but I'm the same way. I don't exactly watch romance movies, per se. I read romance novels, and romance Manga. The only romance I usually watch is Anime, or it it happens in TV shows. Don't get me wrong, I'm one of those people who ships two characters, but I don't go over board with it.


 * Good, it's better to eliminate the problem if it occurs more than once. I would have done the same thing, because while I don't believe in banning people for the heck of it, being hateful is a good reason to do so.


 * I'm glad, because I've had my problems with admins in the past. Of course it wasn't on Wikia in the slightest, but I've run across a lot of admins who're power hungry. If someone disagrees with them, it's a ban. If someone says something they don't like, it's a ban. If someone believes in something different from them, it's a ban. There are more examples, but too many to write here. I'm really glad we don't have admins like that here.


 * Well, in the beginning I was going for something like this: Someone has been taking girls out of a small town called 'Bodge Township' for three years, but hasn't been caught. The events that took place were being told by the best friend of one of the victims. That was as far as I got with the idea, and then I scraped it because it didn't feel good enough. I've actually decided to use my own fears as ideas: Children, spiders, losing people I love, being alone, crowds of people, and being invisible. Not all in one Creepypasta, but I do want to use my own fears against me.


 * Maybe that's stupid though, but I think it's worth a try. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 03:49, September 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Museum" message
Really? I didn't know you could rip off a museum What is it a rip off of? The Louve? New York Natural History Museum? Or do you mean that it cost too much? Anyway, I'm stuck on transitions after the scene where Kristy becomes nervous about the roads being narrow. After that, she starts to increase the pace of her walk, her breating increases, and the music starts to build up to a jump scare. When the jumpscare happens, Erika will knock on the protagonist's door and she screams a bit at the same time Kristy does.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  16:55, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

Good questions
Honestly, considering the proposal passes, I think what's going to be sought after is a quality re-make, not so much a spin-off. With that said, think about Rob Zombie's remake of Halloween, or the re-makes of Nightmare on Elm Street and Friday the 13th.

Those movies took much of the existing content and filled in questions that were never resolved from the originals, or patched up errors and cliches. I would believe that this is what wil be looked for in this contest. (I plan to submit an entry myself, so this is by no means "my contest") and I think we'll have a much better understanding of the expectations once we decide to go live with it. In fact, we still need a few judges to step up and volunteer.

Right now I would say go ahead and take some creative license, but keep in mind, the idea isn't for a spin-off, but rather to produce a quality telling of the story that could be housed here on this site. I know you're up to the task, and I have full faith that, should this contest happen, you'll bring your best and give everyone a run for their money.

Banningk1979 (talk) 01:12, September 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Explanation" message
No dinosaur bones? No dinosaurs? No clips of Rob Walker from the Nostalgia Critic saying "I'm a dinosaur" either? That's one terrible museum!

So for the transition, I want it to flow but I don't want to use a transition word or phrase that I already used previously ( i. e As, When, Then, After, At that time/moment, etc). Maybe something like " Kristy had immediately hastened her stride and the background music was becoming louder and faster."

I've been trying to cut down repetitive transions in the story.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  03:51, September 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to 'Story' Message
Thank you for the tips, those are questions I'm going to ask myself everytime I write. They're important, and while they aren't those questions exactly, I do ask myself certain questions after I'm done writing something. And if one of the answers don't add up, I usually go back and read the whole thing, making major edits as I do.

Hm, that's a good idea, actually. The Quality Standards are quite intimidating, so I keep scraping anything I write. I can handle the Creepypasta being deleted, believe me, but my goal is for it not to get deleted.

I'm thinking about making this Creepypasta happen, but I know it's going to take time. I'll most definitely post in the Writer's Workshop before adding it to the main site, as I want all the help I can get. I just know that a lot of things are considered cliche here, and it overwhelms me sometimes. What if something in my story is a little too cliche?

I'm going to check out some of your Creepypastas later on tonight, because they seem really interesting. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 05:01, September 20, 2015 (UTC)


 * Believe me, I used to be horrible with grammar. Sometimes I think I still need to work on it, but I'm glad that it passes as good. :) I'm happy about that, because I was thinking the same thing. Cliches are pretty much everything, and it just takes talent to make them unique again. Thank for the advice and the offer! I'll be sure to take you up on it, don't worry. :) And it's no problem at all!


 * You know, I'd like to thank you for messaging me in the first place. It was honestly needed at the time, because I was seriously feeling a little lost. Who knew a simple message could make you feel more at home.


 * I think the only thing I'm really going to suck at is titles, because I really suck at making up titles. :) PastaMeCreepy (talk) 06:37, September 20, 2015 (UTC)


 * My titles are usually one or three words, and I try to keep it that way. I found a story that gave the whole story away in the title. I didn't read it, because I already knew what was going to happen. That is what I try to avoid, honestly.


 * Oh, and by the way, this is the link to my anime list. http://myanimelist.net/animelist/cecekisskiss Don't laugh, some of my interest are those of a child. Then again, I may be out of my kid years, but I think I will always be a child at heart. :) PastaMeCreepy (talk) 06:04, September 21, 2015 (UTC)


 * I think I remember trying to watch The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya once, but it was when my computer had to be in the living room. No one in my family at the time understood my love for Anime, so all they would do was harass me because of it. Which resulted in shutting the computer screen of in the middle of an episode, or anything else they could think of to distract me and laugh when I got mad about it. I have mean siblings, though I love them.


 * I'll put it on my plan to watch list, though. I remember being interested, but by the time I was allowed to have my desktop in my room again, I forgot all about it. I was pretty dumb about the internet when I was younger, because I believed every one about everything back then. I wasn't dumb, I was flat out stupid, which is why I wasn't allowed to have anything close to a computer in my room. Hah, so glad I grew up and started thinking about things in a smarter way.


 * I thought the default style of the list was boring, so I investigated the forum area. One thing I've learned from forums, is that most of them have a creative corner for people who like to design graphics. You can use a premade or you can create your own using CSS codes. And because I don't understand CSS, I simply used a premade that someone offered up for free. It's pretty cool, actually. If you want, I can send you to the place I got mine from. They have tutorials on how to get a premade up and running, but if you would rather make your own... I wish you luck on your difficult journey. Haha. :) PastaMeCreepy (talk) 06:45, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

To this day my family still finds it childish that I watch Anime, even though I don't watch Anime in front of them. Though my mom did say that she finds it adorable, but I think that's because she doesn't want me to be grown up. She likes that I love something that she believes only a kid would love. Haha.

That's great! I really loved WataMote, it was very realistic. I caught myself saying "that's so true!" a lot while watching it. Though I will say, even when they tried making her failed attempts funny, I couldn't help but feel a little sad. That's normal, I guess, when you relate to a character so much. Though I did laugh a few times.

I'm currently on episode 19 of Toradora! and I must day that I'm quite happy with the recommendation. It had me laughing within the first five minutes. I've noticed a lot of people going off because of how violent Taiga is toward Ryuji, but I find it adorable. Their relationship is cute, and I love how they bonded so quickly. If they do end up together like I'm suspecting they will, I'm really glad it happened slowly. You rarely see it nowadays, two people becoming friends first and then slowly falling in love.

That's not to say I'll be mad if they don't end up together. Even if they don't, the way they are and interact right now is fine with me. Usually I get mad when the two people I want together, don't get together. Guess it's because I'm a huge fan of romance, who knows. It's weird though, because I would be totally fine if they remained friends. Haha, there I go rambling again. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 17:47, September 21, 2015 (UTC)


 * I will admit that I was almost one of those people who gave up in the middle of WatoMote. Which was because it came really close to describing my life spot on. Only I have a few friends, but it took a me a long time to actually make them my friends. It's almost impossible to make friends when you're suffering from Social Anxiety and I've had a lot of people ask me why.


 * "Why?" I would ask, and then I would explain. "Because who would stick around everyday, until someone had the ability to say more than to words to them? Even if they came back everyday for a week, it could take a person with Social Anxiety weeks to months to even manage more than a sentence." After that, they would kind of drift on to other conversations with other people. Online of course, because I highly doubt I would get all of that out when talking to someone.


 * Tomoko is one of the most relatable characters I've ever seen in Anime. The show isn't cruel, it's honest. Which is why I'll be sure to give the Manga a try. If I loved the Anime, I'll most likely love the Manga as well.


 * I actually finished Toradora! around 3:00 PM yesterday. and I loved it! You're right, I didn't mind, because it could have went realistically either way.


 * The ending was beautiful in my opinion, because Taiga learned that she needed to make it on her own. Honestly, she did rely on Ryuji a lot, but given the ending, she also learned a lot from relying on him so much. At least, that's what I get from it.


 * Ami grew the most for me, though. At first, I couldn't stand her. But by the end, she turned into one of my favorite characters. Yes, she was still a kid, but she was more mature by the end of everything. I noticed she stopped living a double life when it came to her personality, and I'm glad, because I really hated the fake side of her.


 * I guess I should point out, that I am one of those people who grows fond of not just the main characters, but the side characters as well.


 * Toradora! is now one of my favorites, so I thank you for recommending it to me.


 * By the way, I got K-On! and Golden Time from the forum area of MyAnimeList. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 22:05, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Transitions" message
Ooh! That sounds good. I might try that and add a couple of things to it.

No pictures on the walls either? What's the name of this museum? Murica's Museum of Not Giving a Fuck?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  14:13, September 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Hometown" message
Lol! It should be. So I took your description and modified it a bit. Here's what I got:  "At the thought of being run over by a car, Kristy hastened her stride and the background music became more audible and gradually increased its tempo."

I think that's pretty good for what I'm trying to do.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  17:35, September 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Sounds Good" message
I have another part of the story I'd like to share with you but it's on my tablet and I don't really have much time to get it since I'm going to a doctor's appointment in a bit. Maybe when I come back I can do that.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  15:49, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Archiving Troubles!
So my talk page is getting pretty long. I tried archiving my talk page in visual mode and it said that it was spam. I tried doing it in visual mode. Said it was spam again and that they had to close down the site because of it. Could you take care of the archiving because something isn't working right on my end.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  20:11, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Deed" message
Oooh! I think I know what happened. I used source editor instead of the source mode tab. Whoopsie! Anyway, I got a bit further into my pasta:  " At the thought of being run over by a car, Kristy hastened her stride and the background music became more audible and gradually increased its tempo. The music kept building until Kristy got to an open gate where a figure had leapt out at her and let out a thunderous roar. At the same time, I heard forceful pounding at my door, which made me jump up from the daybed and release a tiny yelp."

I heard there were a lot of exe games. Has anyone come up with a Full House. exe game yet? If not, someone should make that. Or The Brady Bunch.exe!

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  22:26, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

Anime 2.0
Exactly! I can't count the times my words have came out jumbled up. Then I have these moments where I talk like Yoda, it can get pretty embarrassing. I know, right. We're just going to make it seem like Character A and Character B are going to end up together, but leave it all open-ended. You're welcome. No, just no.

Toradora! is one of those Anime where the characters stand out so much, that you remember them years later. That's one of the things I love most about it. Taiga and Ryuji are my favorites, but when it comes to side characters, it would have to be Ami, hands down.

Rewatch Toradora!, you should.

I actually noticed that about MAL yesterday. There are some nice people there, but the overall community is just, I don't have the words to describe it. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 00:21, September 23, 2015 (UTC)


 * I remember when I had a crush on a girl and she tried to talk to me. Nothing I said made sense, and by the time I was done, she had already walked away. So I get it, it sucks not being able to get the right things out.


 * It's the same way with TV shows, though, the TV shows are way more annoying. They break people up after one episode of dating just to make the fans angry. They do the whole on again and off again thing, which is annoying if done too much. It seems a lot of shows just do it to give the characters a reason to lash out or something. Bleh, who knows. I agree though, it is their creation. Though, sometimes, I think they do certain things just to make us mad. Haha.


 * Ah Robot Chicken, I used to sneak and watch that when it first came out. I believe I was eleven or twelve at the time, and my mom didn't want me watching it. I might just give that a chance, it's good to take a break from the drama and have a good laugh sometimes.


 * Sometimes I think that people believe they're better than everyone else because of their own tastes. I like girly Anime, but I don't judge people who don't. I like weird things, but you don't see me going off on someone for liking normal stuff. I don't know, maybe it's just me. I just don't think anyone is better than anyone, we're all human, some of us just suck at things other people are good at. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 06:23, September 24, 2015 (UTC)


 * That is what I prefer, someone who would have enough patience to at least stick by me. This has actually happened a couple of times. Once with her, and twice with a guy. It sucked pretty bad, to be honest.


 * It was the same when it came to Futurama and Family Guy. My mom was worried I would turn into a mean person or something because of some of the jokes used on the show. She failed to see that I wasn't the kind of person who would let something influence me like that. Haha.


 * No, it's fine. Any recommendations from you are appreacated. You are the reason for me finding Toradora! after all. :) I'll give it a chance, I highly enjoy Anime where the main character is a magical girl.


 * Believe me, I agree on all that. I do believe I'm better than Pedophiles, woman/man beaters, murderers, you know, along those lines. Other than that, I'm not better than the next girl. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 08:00, September 24, 2015 (UTC)


 * I don't mind it, really. The recommendations are great, even if they came in at a 3.2.1 speed. XD If you ever think of any, just let me know. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 16:32, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Awesome, I'll check them out soon! :) PastaMeCreepy (talk) 05:05, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Is this a good chapter ender and starter?
End of chapter 8: Just then, a familiar voice had rang out. "Hey sis!" My brother said. "Could you come down for a second?". I paused the episode and went downstairs to see what the commotion was about.

Chapter 9

When I got to the bottom of the stairs, I saw a small boy who seemed to be younger than 12, sitting on the living room couch with Erika.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  04:37, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Full Context" message
Sure thing buddy! Here's the pastebin link:

http://pastebin.com/rSv5fSw7

About the exe games, I was talking about making them into actual games that you can play on your computer, not pastas. Sorry if I didn't make that clear in the previous message.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  05:26, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "This Looks Good" message
I might have the boy be the "thing" that Erika and Hunter think the protagonist saw. This becomes debunked by the protagonist saying that the window ias too high up for him to reach let alone cast a shadow within the house.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  05:37, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Message on EmpyrealInvective's Talk Page
There's two matches on the wiki for "Mount Everest", both of them only mention that term once, and neither of them mention yeti at all. Kinda surprising actually. You can type a word or phrase into the bar at the top of the screen to see how many times that phrase shows up on the wiki. The more words you search at once, the more results you'll get because it searches for all instances of each word inputted. For example, when I searched "Mount Everest", it searches for "Mount" and "Everest" individually, and the closest matches are at the top. Once the results start show just "mount" in bold text, then you know there's no more matches for "Mount Everest".

 SoPretentious 07:54, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Connectivity" message
Yeah Aladdin, Pingas, and just about everything has a playable exe game so why not Full House or The Brady Bunch? I heard they were doing a spinoff of Full House which I have no idea if it will be better or worse than the original show. To be honest, the original show really wasn't that great. The only parts I remember enjoying were Kimmy Gibbler, Bubba the Turtle (Who was in one of the early season one epsiodes where the guys had to clean the house), and that episode with Urkel when Stephanie gets new glasses and is afraid to wear them.

Speaking of connectivity, I might have the protagonist encounter the samurai again but this time reveal more details about its appearence though the encounters until it becomes a full fledged samurai. I also had another possible twist ending. When the protagonist is in the hospital for passing out in the lake when she's swimming away from the samurai and alge related rashes, it was revealed to be an episode of a TV show some person was watching. I think the other twist about how the protagonist is in the hospital from trying to swim from the samurai who might be a figment of the character's imagination might work a bit better but who knows.

While people are making spinoffs of 80's-90's sitcoms, here's my idea for a spinoff! Kimmy Gibbler and Bubba The Turtle: Adventure Buddies! A show where they go on adventures for treasure, lost movies, and a whole bunch of other things. It's like Ducktales without the ducks!

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  15:41, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Good News!
I'm as bored as a wooden board. Now what do I do?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  05:12, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Mount Everest
Certainly.

 SoPretentious 05:42, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Comet" message
Holy shit! I forgot about Comet. Perhaps he could get a spin off where he was a chameleon scientist who was observing the Tanners as part of a secret project to better understand humans and possibly take their place as the dominant species of Earth.

As for my pasta, I'm pretty much done with chapter 9 but I'll let you look at to see what you think: http://pastebin.com/ic92QKmJ

You know what sitcom should get a spinoff? Alf! It could possibly address and explain what happened after the cliffhanger finale in the original show.

In the right lighting with the right music, I find stop motion to be quite scary especially in silent horror movies. I guess it's because it's actually there. If Warner Brothers is making a FNAF movie, please let the animatronics be ACTUAL animatronics. No CGi please, OK! Pleeeease Mr. Warners!

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  06:49, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Boring Job" message
Ah! I see... Gotta get in the spooky scary mood for the reading, huh? Don't worry, I write my pasta when it's nighttime. I feel like this time of day gives me a lot more inspiration than the daytime.

As for stop motion, I think there are a few recent films that have been using stopmotion such as The Boxtrolls. Thank god that it's still here and being used by somebody. Out of curiousity, If you've seen any, what are your thoughts on Japanese horror movies? It can be one film you've seen or all of them in general.

The animatronics at Chuckie Cheese used to scare me as a kid because they would stare at me all the time and I'm not very good at maintaining eye contact. Let's hope Warner Brothers isn't like "Uh duh! Cee Gee Eye is Butter cuz it makez maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanies!" when it comes to the FNAF movie.

Could you inform me when you finish it? That would be great. So um... I heard that scrapped projects and ideas can be great inspiration or a great base for a lost (insert thingy here) pasta from another Creepypasta related channel called SomeOrdinaryGamers. It was on their reading of a pasta called "Pocket Monsters Alpha" that's related to Pokemon's original name "Capsule Mosnters".

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  00:00, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

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Wait... you can fly? (cuts to a scene where Hailey is riding on Doom as if he was Falcor) Hailey: NeverEnding STOOOORYYYYYYYYYYY!!!

I think there were two versions of animated Chuckie. One was where he was dressed in purple and green 90's garb and the recent CGi one that looks more like a real mouse in design and size. Which one are you refering to? Just curious. I think they still have those animatronics at the Chuckie Cheese's I've been to. Though the last time I went there was when I was 8 or 9 for a birthday party.

Regarding Japanese films, I've only seen J-On (The Japanese Grudge) and I liked how we got to know the characters a bit before they were killed off and  liked how the story wasn't entirely spoonfed to the audience in the sense that it's told out of order, thus requiring the audience to pay attention to understand what's going on.

I'm on Chapter 10 of my pasta and I hope people don't mind the novella length of this pasta.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  01:39, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Record Breaking Pasta" message
Hmm... That could make the pasta more ground breaking. What's currently the longest pasta on this wiki with how many parts/chapters?

However, I'm confused. What are your thoughts on chapter 9? Is it good or does it need tweaking?

About Mr. Nightmare's videos, I'm into his true Craigslist stories because it's hard to tell which ones sound real or which ones sound like a bad Creepypasta, much like urban legends.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  02:41, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

My dreams wrote a pasta!
So last night, I had this bizzare dream that screams "Creepypasta" material. Here's the pastebin link: http://pastebin.com/PvLYUddP

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  22:13, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Any Tips?
So I have the basic plot I want for my first Creepypasta, but I'm having a little trouble with it. Do you have any advice and or tips on how to set the mood from the beginning? I'm horrible with writing beginnings, which sucks.

That and I tend to go into detail about things that don't matter, and little detail in things that do. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 07:45, September 27, 2015 (UTC)


 * Okay thank you, I'll try to figure something out. I have a beginning wrote out, I just don't feel like it's good enough. PastaMeCreepy (talk) 07:11, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

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I don't recall eating any cheese that night. I also heard cookies and pizza can give you weird dreams too.

I'm glad to hear that chapter 9 works with the rest of the story. Chapter 10 is going great! I'll have to work on it later today.

Do you think it might be possible that this story could save the Lost Episode genre? Will people be like "Thank you Haunting Hour pasta for saving this genre! Here, have a Cyndaquil!"

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  16:33, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Milk" message
Yeah something did seem off about that Miltank milk I bought in Canada. Anyway, I know about the spinoff appeal and I haven't seen too many lost episode pastas being submitted, let alone approved. I have no idea when the pasta will be finished but maybe it will be done sooner than expected.

I'll look at the spinoff appeal submissions list to see if anything happened since the last time I checked. If there's anything new, I'll let you know.

I got an image of what the boy in the episode would look like:



Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  14:27, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Flow" message
If the story needs flow, I could add in Flo from the Progressive Insurance commercials. (starts singing) Let it flow! Let it flow! Or else the pasta will suuuuck! Let it flow! Let it flow! The reviewers will run amuuuuuck! I don't care if I have a Care Bear stare! Let the pasta flow ooon! The text never bothered me anyway!

Good news! I'm three paragraphs into chapter 10! I don't know how long this chapter will be but I'm getting there! Does "Followed suit" mean the other character did the same thing as the first person afterwards? I might use that term in my pasta when describing Kristy introducing herself like the boy did.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  15:31, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Definition" message
Oh thank god I was using it in the right context! So I got a new haunting hour review up on my blog! I'll send it to you now. Here's the link:  http://littleazusblog.blogspot.com/2015/09/every-haunting-hour-ever-16-wrong-number.html

I don't know if you read my review for episode 15. If not, I'll be happy to send it to you. I finished the review of the 17th episode and currently working on the 18th.

Here's episode 15: http://littleazusblog.blogspot.com/2015/09/every-haunting-hour-ever-15-my-sister.html

On a side note, I've been getting into Honest Trailers videos.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  04:48, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

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I'm glad you liked them! I might upload my next review today. That is... If I don't forget to do it.

My favorite type of dog has to be the Beagle  because they're cheerful but are laid back at the same time. I never had one of my own but I knew a few people that did and they were adorable.

I have a new paragraph in chapter 10:  "Hotaka told Kristy about the truck and she had responded to him by saying that her family had just moved in. "So you're the new neighbors, huh?" Hotaka asked with enthusiasm. "You know, my family has been wanting to meet you and your family but they were busy with other things." Kristy told him that she would be more than happy to visit his house since she was out anyway. She called up her mom and let her know that she was going to be a bit late getting back from her walk."

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  14:51, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re:
Will try to give it a read when I get some time. Right now work is being... abominable. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 11:42, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Beagle" message
Due to my small stature, I get run over by big dogs a lot. I heard some dogs are so big little kids can ride them. Especially the Great  Pyrenees in Azumanga Daioh that was ridden by little Chiyo Chan.

For the Jeff contest, you might want to give the bullies a bit of depth too. For example, one of the bullies had a father that blames him for the death of his wife and the boy takes out his frustrations on Jeff. Maybe one of the other bullies had raised himself due to his parents being kidnapped and never heard from again after his birth. Maybe one of the other bullies is often overshadowed by his older sibling so much that his parents often forget about him, like Helga from Hey Arnold. I'm surprised the original author didn't think to give bullies depth.

Chapter 10 is done and I'm now on chapter 11 where Kristy and Hotaka are at his house talking about the legend of the samurai girl. As soon as Hotaka starts talking about the legend, the episode will cut away to Kristy's reaction to the story.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  14:17, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Jeff the Jiffy Peanut Butter" message
Hmm... That sounds like an interesting idea for Jeff the Killer: Super Sexy HD Remix version.

Can you believe it? More than 11 chapter in my pasta! That's gotta be like a record. That must be longer than 1999 and Godzilla NES combined! :O Woah!

What if I made a show in Canada that was a horror anthology series... That was animated!? Someone should do that.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  19:56, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

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Huh? I didn't notice that my reviews were shorter than before. Don't worry, I'm still taking my occasional breaks. My review of episode 18 is all done. Now all I need to do is upload it on my blog. I think you'll love this review.

Ren and Stimpy is Canadian? Huh... I had no idea. That might explain why the show is so zany.

I'm two paragraphs into chapter 11 where Hotaka invites Kristy to join in a game of Kokuri San with him and his friends later in the week. I might have the Samurai appear in the protagonist's house again but I'll see if I can work it in.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   05:58, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Contest Judging
Good to be back on here for a while, haven't had time to do much because of school. I see you've upped your edit count by quite a bit!

So regarding the judging for the art contest, all the details on how everything's being judged is in the blog's designated section so make sure you read and follow the criteria carefully. We have about eight days. Please put your critique in the form of a comment replying to the original submission labelled clearly  JUDGING. I've done a few already so just copy and paste the source for ease.

Make sure you mark fairly. Happy judging! Rinskuro13 13:02, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "#PresidentSamurai2016" message
Ah! I see. Well that clears everything up about Ren and Stimpy. I think Are You Afraid of The Dark was made by Canada but that was live action. Regarding what type of animation the show might be, I think they should do half traditional half flash. (Hugs Canada) Please Canada senpai! (looks at Canada endearingly).

I'm currently working on the samurai part!

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   14:33, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

New Haunting Hour Review!
Here's my new review of The Haunting Hour and boy does this episode suck the big one! Link: http://littleazusblog.blogspot.com/2015/10/every-haunting-hour-ever-18-pool-shark.html

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   20:31, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

RE: Stuff
Hey, man, if you want to re-write Jeff go for it, I don't want to be responsible for stopping you. I kind of feel silly for making such a stink, honestly. I've been in a weird headspace lately with personal issues, and the whole thing just triggered something in me. Honestly, the thing that kinds of irks me is that one person is going to be chosen by a couple random judges to be the new face of Jeff the killer and be given a narration that nearly a million people are going to listen to. So, one writer gets a million new fans and every other writer is then just ignored. How is that right? It just seems, I don't know, hmmm, biased?

What's the site you are working on?

My Facebook page is pretty mellow, a few times a week I post links to writing contests and workshops, and share interesting articles on the horror genre.

HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 16:36, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

RE: JTK
Your ideas sound fabulous and original. You should go for it. I'd love to read this concept you've come up with. Are you on Skype?HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 03:56, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Did you get my messages?
Yo! Doomy, what's up? Did you see the last messages I sent on your talk page or was it lost in the RIPWiki redirect fiasco?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  05:59, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Saw" message
Cool. I'm glad to hear that! As for chapter 12, I'm trying to figure out how to start it. Should it start by the main protagonist resuming the episode or pondering whether or not she should continue?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   14:25, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Bat" message
Sorry I didn't respond earlier but editing on this wiki was locked for awhile.

Anyway, I think having the main protagonist watch the episode right away is a good idea. I might save the pondering thing for much later in the story.

Man, a lot of weird things have been happening to the wiki this week, like the ripwiki redirect glitch and the locked editing. What's even weirder is that it's not even Wednesday!

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   14:10, October 6, 2015 (UTC)

JTK
"it'll be a new character and not a Jeff remake"--that's the reason I think you should do it. A lot of writers around here use skype not as a web cam (I wouldn't force you to look at my ugly face, trust me) but as a live chat device for sending messages back and forth. No promises, but, if I can squeeze it into my schedule, I'll proofread your story and offer some suggestions. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 14:14, October 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Haunted Pasta Account" message
Well... Thank god the issue has been cleared up. Anyway, I got the first past of chapter 12 done. Here's the pastebin link: http://pastebin.com/GpXzh9v6

If you need to read chapter 11 first, please let me know and I'll send that too.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   14:32, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

RE:
I've run it through Tineye and ImageRaider (the former of which is generally considered to have a better algorithm for this kinda thing than Google does), as well as running it through Google Images again (you never know, personalized results can be weird) and I can't find anything. I've also searched some relevant terms, and I couldn't find anything in that either. As far as I can tell, that image doesn't exist anywhere else on the internet.

Looking at it, the character models look less like those that are found in Afraid of Monsters, and more like those you might see in Roblox. To me, the picture seems to have been created by the artist in a separate game (using the same kind of tools you might use in Roblox/Minecraft) and screen-capped from there. Given that it's unlikely the artist created the textures used, and they certainly didn't create the game engine, I'll leave it up to you to decide whether or not it's the artist's original work.

Also, don't worry about taking your time to approach me about this, it's fine. And your message didn't come off as rude :)

19:57, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "I'll Look at it" message
Oh cool! I didn't know you were writing a pasta aside from the Jeff one. Or is it the Jeff one I'm referring to? I'm going to keep on working on my pasta. However, I can only seem to work on it at night. Maybe that time of day gets me into the spooky scary mood.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   23:36, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Sequel" message
Um Doomy... I hate to tell you this, but the link to What Humanity Reaped is bleeding. Is it having its time of the month?

Anyway, I recently listened to the whole Sonic Lost World soundtrack and I gotta say, it may be one of my favorite Sonic Soundtracks to date. As for the game itself, it's a lot more bareable and fun than Sonic Boom because you just play as Sonic and run from level to level with a bit of experimental elements here and there. It's a mixed bag but I'd rather play that game than Sonic Boom any day. I played the game at a friend's house as I don't own a Wii U or a decent enough PC to run a Wii U emulator.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   01:18, October 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Linked" message
I played Sonic 06 and... I still think it's a lot more playable than Sonic Boom. They should remake Sonic 06 and this time around, DON'T... RUSH... GUYS! Plus the game did give us one of the funniest lines ever uttered in a Sonic game. "It's no USE!" ~ Silver The Hedgehog. Why didn't Silver get a spin off game the was similar to Psychonaughts? That would be an AWESOME idea. Though Shadow the Hedgehog did ruin sonic spinoff games forever. (Goes to an image of a Shadow the Hedgehog cover art and flips it the bird).

I have a couple of ideas for Sonic games, both of them will have no stupid gimmicks like swords, rpg elements, werehogs, etc and instead the gameplay will emulate the modern sonic stages from Sonic Generations.

One of the ideas I had was a game called Sonic in Wonderland where Sonic has to navigate through various zones of Wonderland (i.e River of Tears Zone, Mad Tea Party Zone, Resizing Forest Zone, and Queen's Court Zone). I think Wonerland is an excellent basis for a Sonic game because the world of Wonderland lacks logic and thus anything goes. This means that the game developers could really strech their imagination with the zone design and have Eggman be The Queen of Hearts. C'mon, Eggman in a dress?! How can you NOT laugh at that idea.

The second idea I had for a Sonic game was a game called Sonic and The Forgotten Worlds, where Sonic journeys through zones that were cut from various Sonic games. Just like in Generations, you can play as both Classic Sonic and Modern Sonic. I think this is a great idea because it explores the forgotten side of Sonic and gives even more insight into the history of Sonic. It's the same reason why I love the Epic Mickey series. Speaking of Generations, it could be a possible sequel to that game.

Did you get a chance to read what I sent you? It was the first part of Chapter 12.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   01:35, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

New Parts for Chapter 12
" The episode showed an establishing shot of the outside of Kristy's house before shifting to the inside of it. The moment Kristy walked in, her father was calling her name in a rather ecstatic tone of voice. "Ohh! There's my girl!" Kristy's dad said as he gave her a big hug. "Hi dad." Kristy replied as she released a sheepish chuckle. Kristy's dad asked her how her day went and she told him she had met with a neighbor, to which he immediately lit up. "Well would you look at that! Not even one day into our residency and already my girl has gotten to know the others." He then moved his hand around Kristy's hair and ecstatically announced  "Way to go, honey!"

Kristy's muscles started to stiffen as her eyes widened and her mouth turned into a frown that showed the upper half of her teeth. "Uh dad... You feeling OK?" Kristy asked in a shaky voice."

I have an alternate take of the father scene where he basically acts like an energetic little kid talking about an awesome movie they just saw. The mother implies that he's basically drunk. I cut it out because I felt like it was a bit too over the top for a Haunting Hour episode. That's saying a lot because there's a few over the top moments in the show. If you want to see it, let me know.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   22:11, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Contest
I'd leave a message with both and try to get a response. I wouldn't announce the winners yet without having reached a consensus. (It would only cause issues down the line) I'm sure the participants would be willing to wait a little while just to avoid any confusion/conflict. If they don't respond in a couple of days, we can start to talk about other options. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 22:45, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Jeff" message
I think this contest teaches us the lesson that if you have an idea, put effort and passion and thought into it otherwise nobody will like it and then we have to remake it.

By the way, I can't wait for the Goosebumps and Peanuts movie. I wish I could go see them. The movie Pan came out but that sucked so bad it's kind of good. Though it's nowhere near Tommy Weiseu's The Room in terms of entertainment value.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   23:01, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Creepy Art Contest
Thanks for reminding me. I just left my scores on the blog.

The Damn Batman (talk) 01:33, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Room" message
Oh my god I saw the NC's review of The Room. "Oh hai mark!" "You're lion I nearly hit you! You're tearin me apat Liza!" "Can I get a dozen red roses please?"

What accent is Tommy Weiseau speaking in anyway? Is he trying to do a Christopher Walken accent? I guess we'll never know.

Should I explain in the pasta that Kristy's dad isn't a very energetic person as a reason to why she's anxious about her dad's greeting?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   02:02, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Winners
Good work vroom, the winners blog is out! Check my latest blog for details.

I currently dont havd access to computer so editing is difficile but I will organise things on monday. Dont worry about anything tho cos i already asked tom to inform the winners and stuff. Talk to you on monday, and well done for your hard work and critical eye! This competition was a great success!

Rinskuro13 16:20, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "New Youka Heeeere!" message
Really? When I think of Italian/New York accents, I think of Mario or JonTron.

Regarding Chapter 12, I think it might be a good idea to leave it up to interpretaion but I'm afraid people would be like "ER MEH GURSH WHY IS SHEET LEIUK DAT? LOL!" But... since the twist ending may be left up to interpretation, I don't see why this decision would be bad.

I'm stuck a bit too. After Kristy's father greets her, do you want me to just skip to later in the week or show the family celebration that Kristy's mom talked about in chapter 7?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   01:27, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Don't Skip That!!" message
For the bad thing that will happen during the celebration, I have a couple of possibilities for what it might be.

1. One of the family members could have an allergic reaction to a certain food (i.e Squid Ink Pizza, Natto, etc)

2. One of the family members ends up choking and the choking member almost doesn't make it out of the ordeal alive.

3. A bird or other animal that turns out to be someone's pet, could burst in the house and cause a ruckus. For that, I'd have to research common pets in Japan.

That's all I have for now. If you think any of these suggestions are good, let me know. If you have some other suggestion, explain it as in depth as possible.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   03:42, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Raccoon" message
I was actually going to have the samurai appear after the kids do the game of Kokuri San. Instead of summoning Kokuri, they summon the samurai girl. I'll try to fit the raccoon in that scene and maybe have it tie into the samurai girl. Perhaps the telling of the tale leads to bad things for both the listener and the teller.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   05:05, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re:
Unfortunately I haven't. I saw you posted to the site. I'll try to get to it today after work. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 11:49, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Hey! How are you?
Hi Doom! I'm up to the part in chapter 12 where the dining room is shown.

"Once Kristy and her father got into the dining room, I noticed that it looked very differently from other parts of the house and other parts of the episode for that matter.

While the room did have sliding doors and reed floors, the table had thick but tiny legs and a thin rectangular top that had a bit more width than the average dugout bench. Despite its size, the table was able to have room for two bowls of what looked like slimy beans on top of white rice and three black boxes that had five compartments in them. The chairs had plush, white cushions on the back and on the sitting area. However, these chairs had no legs which I assumed made it nearly impossible to pull them out easily. The strangest part about this room though was the fact that it had a computer generated look to it. Considering that The Haunting Hour was a live action series, this room didn't seem to fit in at all."

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   14:44, October 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Halloween" message
Great to see that you're making progress on your pasta! I bet it will turn out great.

As for Fate Zero, I hear that show has a female King Arthur. Is that true or am I mistaking it for a series with a similar title?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   20:52, October 14, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you
Appreciate the praise. Yes, it was brought to my attention today that the story is over the word limit, however, I am hoping that they change the rule on length. I told Underscore to do whatever he felt was best, since I don't want to get any special treatment. I suppose I could chop the story down to 10k, but I worry it may lose some of its value if I do that.

Either way, I'll adjust and overcome. If they accept it, great, if I have to shorten, I'll find a way to make it work. Again, thank you for your support and appreciation, as I really enjoyed writing that one.

Best,

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 01:17, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "History" message
I'll have to check out the series sometime. I've been watching a film called Problem Child which according to Rotten Tomatoes has a lower score than Underdog (14%) and Pixels (17%). It's score is 4% on Rotten Tomatoes. While it's not a masterpiece, I do think the film has a fair share of funny and heartfelt moments. It also like how it feels like it has total freedom to do what it wants. I feel like this has a lot more effort thrown in than Pixels and because of this, I don't feel like Problem Child deserves the 4% rating.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   01:24, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Winning pasta wins!
Thanks again, your words really mean a lot to me. I actually looked at chopping the story down today, and even by removing the parts about the reporter, and sticking straight to Jeff, it still was well over 10k. Hopefully we can re-work the rules a bit.

I also appreciate your appeal in the blog comments. I think that goes a long way in showing the general appreciation of the work. Like I said before, I enjoyed writing it, and I was very pleased with the end results. If it does come down to me having to re-work it, I'll be sure to let you know. Luckily, all the frame work is there, so it would just be a matter of trimming out parts. But like you said, all the content seems necessary to the story, so I am not quite sure where I would even start chopping.

Once more, thank you so much for your support,

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 01:52, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Shortened version posted
So, I went ahead and edited out just about half the content, bringing it down to right at 10K. Take a look at the new one and let me know if you think it still stands out as well.

And again, thank you so much for being such a strong supporter, I do appreciate your effort.

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 06:28, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Unreliable Scores" message
Perhaps that Rotten Tomatoes and Metacritic have higher standards than the two of us. I mean, those sites said that Hotel Transylvania 1 and 2 were the death of animation. Honestly, the Hotel Transylvania movies are funny, smart, have some of the best 3D animation to date, and are good movies to watch around Halloween.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   13:57, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Trailer" message
Ever since the trailer for Mr. Peabody and Sherman came out, I no longer judge movies strictly by the trailer because a movie could have a bad trailer and the actual movie could be fantastic and vice versa.

I've just finished a new Haunting Hour review and I plan on uploading it soon. Speaking of that, I only have 3 episodes to go before season 1 is completely reviewed. After that, there are 3 more seasons to look at.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   22:44, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Seasons of Show" message
Actually, the show has about 4 seasons. So if I finish one season, I have three more to go. Though, Season 4 has only 10 episodes so I don't know if it can actually be called a season.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   15:22, October 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Chugging Along" message
Speaking of The Haunting Hour, I got my new review up: http://littleazusblog.blogspot.com/2015/10/every-haunting-hour-ever-19-lights-out.html

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   19:58, October 16, 2015 (UTC)

No rush
Cool, get around to it when you can. I look forward to your feedback.

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 06:24, October 17, 2015 (UTC)

Back to school
Yeah, I miss you too Vroomie. School gets in the way of things, but I'll sure be on here 24/7 in the holidays to do some catching up. As for now, I'll only be on here at most once per week, perhaps even less.

Good luck for the coming year my good friend, and look after yourself :-)

Rinskuro13 12:55, October 17, 2015 (UTC)

Hey There!
I finished Chapter 12 of my pasta. I'm not able to send you a pastebin link right now since I'm not on my tablet, but I will do so as soon as possible. By the way, every time I use visual mode in Microsoft Edge Browser, it makes the headings reverse as I type. Like this: "!erehT yeH". Are you having the same issue?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   17:06, October 17, 2015 (UTC)

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I have to be honest. Windows 10 is one of the worst OS I've ever used. When my mom first got it, the disk drive dfidnt migrate from Windows 7. This means that the shortcut didn't appear anywhere on the computer. I think the issue is fixed now but I'm not sure. I also find it to be really slow, especially Microsoft Edge! Ugh! I'd rather use Windows 8 than Windows 10.

I also have a wonderful idea for a horror anthology series. Here it is:

Scary Stories from Silver Creek Overview

This series is about a collection of horror stories that all take place in the fictional town of Silver Creek. The series will have at least 5 stories per volume that entertain the reader while also building the town of Silver Creek. The series will let the author experiment with different types of perspective, horror genres, and character types.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   14:12, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

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I honestly think the series could go either way. I think it all depends on the execution of the stories. I got a pastebin link with chapter 12 when you get a chance to read it.

Link: http://pastebin.com/Erf6XugX

Here's a sample story I wrote for the series when participating in a writer's workshop activity at one of my state libraries. I had to write a story based on a one sentence prompt. My prompt was "The scary child turned her head and stared at me." Here's what I came up with:

Too Many Eyes (Best title I could think of at that time)

Alex always had trouble making eye contact and this day way no exception. He was on a school trip at the Winthrope Mansion, which had artwork from all around the world. They all had one thing in common though. Their eyes would seemingly follow Alex everywhere he went. For a majority of the mansion tour, he found himself shaking and breathing heavily. He also kept his head down except when the tour guide had something to say.

The next thing Alex knew, he got himself separated from the group and found himself in this echoy gallery with a bunch of statues. His eyes darted around the room and his breathing became faster and heavier. Suddenly, Alex heard a loud crunching noise. When he turned around, he saw a statue of a little girl staring at him with big eyes and her neck turned at an impossible position. Alex then heard a loud thump and everything went black.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   04:34, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

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Lol I think for each volume, one or two of the stories will consist of things that I'm afraid of, like eye contact, insects, small spaces, etc. That way, I don't run out personal fears to write about too quickly.

Regarding Halloween 3, I thought Micheal's soul was transferred into the masks after Halloween 2 killed him off. In that way, I see it as a Micheal movie.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   16:29, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

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I didn't know they were making another Halloween movie let alone having Micheal Myers being killed at the beginning. I thought they stopped making those after they realized the sequels were like vaccums in how much they sucked.

I might start off chapter 13 by having the main protagonist notice that the sun is starting to go down and that maybe something might throw a rock or brick through one of the the windows. Just an idea for now. Before I start chapter 13, I want to know your thoughts on chapter 12.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   19:52, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

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Hey,

Thanks for reading the shortened version and leaving some feedback. I actually took your advice with the starting and ending point on the edited version, and I think it came out clean enough.

Again, thanks for taking the time to check it out...twice,

K. Banning Kellum (talk) 04:34, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

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That's good to hear about chapter 12 having good pacing. So... do you think the idea for the beginning of chapter 13 is great or would you like to suggest something else. I still want to keep the idea of the sun setting in there.

Ever since 9am, these lawnmowers have been annoying me. They're still at it at the time I'm writing this message. One mower got so close to my window that I thought it was going to crash through it. Now they're onto using bush trimmers which of course have to be louder than a person opening chips at a music concert.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?  16:11, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

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I love Watamote because unfortunately it is so realistic and portrays Social Anxiety(and my life) perfectly lol.



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Ok. So I'll first have the main protagonist close the blinds and windows due to her fear pf someone looking in her window at night, which is a personal fear of mine. After she does that and resumes the episode, a rock will get thrown threw her window. I might have it be one of the neighborhood kids that does it or maybe keep the thrower a mystery. It depends on which one will work better within the context of the story.

Yesterday, I think it was some landscaping service hired by the condo complex I live at with my dad that used those lawnmowers. It doesn't happen everyday, but when it does, it can be very frustrating. Especially when they work in the morning. Who thought that was a good idea? Did they ever think that maybe there's some people who are still sleeping?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   15:39, October 21, 2015 (UTC)