User talk:HoodQuest

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 * Hey HoodQuest. I'm afraid your series on "Boogeyman's Barn" wasn't up to quality standards. I'm sorry it took as so long to get to it. You show great potential though, and I would like to see you write more. It's just that the premise behind the series wasn't that interesting.


 * One piece of advise I would give you is be more descriptive. Oftentimes in your stories we were left with pretty much no information. You need to paint a picture so that the story is more hardhitting. For example, when the narrator first goes in the barn, he says something like: "This is were kids went to kill themselves". It would have been so much creepier if you described what the narrator saw.


 * Hope this helped a little bit. If you want, I can give you more advice/feedback, but the series unfortunately is very hard to pull off. I suggest you move on. If you keep writing/practicing, you can become a very good writer. Also, don't forget to read stories. This will greatly help you in grasping what we're looking for. A great place to start is Category:Suggested Reading and the list of great stories I have compiled on my user page. Cheers! MrDupin (talk) 15:47, October 10, 2017 (UTC)