User blog comment:Zumokiworks335/CREEPYPASTA WIKI IS FOR PRO'S/@comment-27859657-20160713181246/@comment-28266772-20160713183321

I don't think anyone wants you to feel as though you won't be welcome here. Everyone here is willing to work hard to help anyone improve, but we're also quite defensive. I hope you don't take these comments as too seriously. But if you're willing to put work in then so are we. Dorkpool has already offered a very detailed review of your story KYOKI. If you're interested a great way to improve your language skills is to read as much you can. This site has a fantastic list of 'suggested reading' pastas. And also a great list of helpful writing guides, and some very insightful writing blogs. If you want to produce a good story you need to consume good stories - and this won't just improve your grammar and spelling, it's a great source of inspiration for story ideas.