Talk:Sleepover

Well done... However,
I think this could use a bit more. It seems too plain to me. It doesn't really bring out terror or disturb me. Then again, I have been spoiled by video games such as Fatal Frame, Silent Hill, and Resident Evil. Not to mention countless horror movie (Paranormal Activity, why must you elude me?!) so in my case pay no heed to me. I seem to remember though reading this same story in fourth grade from some book... I don't remember the exact name but I do know it was something about either horror or terror. It had one of those on the front... I'm not particularly sure...