Talk:The Charlatan/@comment-31940541-20151009175051

I really like this story. It's got strong characters, a well developed plot and great writing. Drake is complex and hard to pin down. Sherry is a bit less developed (at least what we see of her) but is nevertheless very likable. I enjoyed the about her feeling of relief at the rising sun.

The threat in this story is largely untangible which in itself adds to the creep factor. I do think you could have done some very disturbing and creepy things with the nightmares. All in all this a really good pasta. My biggest problem would be a few places where there are typos or a slight lack of clarity or repetitive language. For the most part the writing itself is very impressive. 7.5/10