Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26399604-20151203055419/@comment-26399604-20151209134210

I admit rendering the right descriptions/settings is something I'm trying to improve. I've gotten a lot better since I first started out, but I know there is still a great deal of room for improvement.

I think your suggestion for the using the appropiate simile/metaphor is great advice. I'm not sure why I didn't think that before - it's definitely a prime example for the need of a second opinion. I will also take a look at the stories you mentioned to get a feel of the right direction. Thanks again for your input.