Talk:Breathing Exercises/@comment-25941663-20161104193139

A nice read. Perfect pacing with the "Breath in. Breathe out." sections keeping a "tempo" of sorts, moving the story forward piece by piece. A great touch.

Also, nice descriptive work throughout. Every single image you created was clear. Great work there, and great use of language. Without using "big words", you painted vividly what you wanted the reader to read, something very impressive.

The kinda-nihilistic and depressing atmosphere complemented the plot perfectly.

Overall, great work on this. Well done.