Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26399604-20160324185524/@comment-26399604-20160326205042

Hi NathianelDogget,

Thank you for taking the time to read and respond.

I did want to clarify that story's "soap-opera" like dialogue was intentional. I wanted the character to speak with a sort of style. I understand if it comes off rather strange. Knowing this now, would you say it still works?

Also, it might have been misinterpretated - an error probably on my part as well. I wanted the story to start with the initial feel of a stalker, but as it continues, more information is revealed and you learn that the "stalker" is actually her assigned Guardian Angel. He's not insane (not sure how it comes off as that, if so I'll correct it), but he does fall in love with her.

All in all, I wasn't really going for a "creepy" vibe, but a story holding elements explaining a plausible scenario on what happens when people ask to be protect their loves ones or curse others in anger.

Thanks again for feedback!