Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24949812-20140522004339/@comment-9967354-20140522140957

Binary0 wrote: Thank you everyone who offered their constructive criticism, I can honestly say I will take every point made into consideration for my second one. I won't edit and repost this one, It's already out there, instead I'll get something more fresh going.

I really appreciate everyone taking the time to read my pasta, the next one will be better.

Wait, you put this up even after your pasta was posted? You know that is against the WW rules, don't you?