Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190702085504/@comment-35711173-20190708111353

I have listened to your feedback, and have rewritten that whole middle section of Hermann and Maria. I think the dialogue is better. The story is around 500 words longer, but I've eliminated almost all of that dialogue.

This is being far harder than I thought it would be. It is the first creepypasta I have written that takes place before the 21st century. While I thought my knowledge of history was above average, clearly I don't know enough to bring it to life.

Bonus points to anyone who figures out what I used for inspiration.