Board Thread:Questions and Answers/@comment-9281274-20130510152228

So I've been working on a debut Pasta and I need help with three things.

1. Length. This is a pretty long pasta about 7 or 8 chapters. Should I just separate the story into separate pages or just contain it in one page since I've multiple pastas with both styles.

2. The likeability of my main character. I'm trying to make my character less of a boring creepypasta protagonist and more of an interesting and bleievable character to read. I thought about making him more selfish and also adding characters that he's rather rude to. However I'm afraid that'll make him incredibly unlikeable in the process.

Is there any other thing I can do  in order to make him more interesting, believable, and likeable?

3.  Humor. I thought about slighlty implementing some deadpan humor into this pasta. Is this a good idea? Or am I stupid for thinking so?

Well those are the main things I need help with. I know they may seem weird but I want to my debust pasta as good as it can possibly be.  