Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26662685-20150712142534/@comment-26715482-20150718031514

Many grammar/spelling errors you definitely need to run this through spell check a example:"he shrunk to a skinny humanoid and went on to his all fours then stood up but again but he legs look broke" It would sound better if you wrote it as "He changed himself into a skinny humanoid before going onto all fours, he rose up again his legs looking as if they were broken". This pasta needs heavy correcting and as for the plot it's below average. It seems cliche to me because it follows this; kid meets monster, monster does something to the kid, and monster proceeds to follow kid for what I will assume the rest of their life it's been many done many times before.