Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25036236-20140610152253/@comment-25558572-20140610180553

-Stop using all caps. Use italic text. Seriously, all caps are annoying and ineffective.

-Spell and space check your stories or else they will be hard to read and a candidate for deletion.

-Don't be so brief and bland when you describe violent or jarring scenes. Don't just say, "She took a knife and slit his throat." That isn't descriptive. What did it look like? What was the victim's reaction? How quickly did they die? etc.

-The pasta is cliched, predictable, and unimpressive. It probably won't scare anyone as is, but that could be changed if you revamp this completely.