Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10502460-20170813194316/@comment-32802129-20170818003452

My mistake. In that case though, I feel there needs to be some more development of a plot in this particular letter. As readers, we have been told that there is a feral dog problem (seeing as this is Creepypasta I think we all infer something slighty more sinister than just dogs) but we haven't been told much about anything happening. You've told us about the fact that a couple of people and domestic pets have died, but haven't really developed a plot besides telling us of a few events in limited detail.

I might be alone in this opinion but I feel that there is not enough description here to be creepy as a stand alone story (but I'm no novellist so feel free to disagree).