Talk:Candles/@comment-27577055-20160109113852

I get the general gist of the story; forces not to be reckoned with were summoned by ignorant kids and this the tale of it going horribly wrong, but the problem is the formatting.

It's very hard to keep track of what's going on, who's where, and what's happening to who. My advice is just revise for clarity. I mean, I THINK everyone died, but I'm not 100% sure beyond stuff went wrong to people in a confounding manner.