Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26522811-20150720030826/@comment-26522811-20150720033639

Thank you very much for reading. I'll definitely change the grammatical errors immediately. I debated even using names for the characters, seen as nothing about their character changes. The problem is it that there are so many of them and even I lost track of which character was talking before I gave them names. While I disagree with fluffing a story, I have noticed that a recurring theme with me is that the stories are too short even for short horror, and should be padded to add depth. Thanks again for reading and I will take what you said into consideration.