Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26502770-20150620165909/@comment-26475253-20150620170639

Hard to read because of spelling errors and layout. The dialogue doesn't need to be separated based on sentence, but rather based on who's talking. Commas are where periods should be, and vice versa. Spelling errors include finnaly (Finally), surgery's (Surgeries) and satan (Satan). The 's marks a spot where it shows ownership, all names should be capitalized, etc. Also, I saw that spaces were missing on a couple spots.