Talk:The Horror in the Trench/@comment-25170312-20140815030238

Well, this didn't scare me much, and I have a phobia of the ocean and the creatures that live in it. With that said, it's written pretty well, and the set-up was good. But in the end, nothing really happened. I would say the most notable problem is when you describe the monster as something that two other famous writers might have conceived (bad idea). Then you say a few things about the creature that don't really tell us much other than it has tentacles (which we already knew), a large body, and a sail-like fin. It's just not scary. I'm deathly afraid of sea creatures, so I was really disappointed. C+