Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20151011060730/@comment-26475800-20151011062953

It is hard to build suspense in 300 words.

I am seeing if this one is better than another that I have written, if so I'll use this, if not I'll use the other. But thank you for catching those errors.

If I decide to use the other, which seems likely, than I will re work this before posting it to the wiki.