Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36957522-20180927160401/@comment-36957522-20181002133352

DrBobSmith wrote: NedWolfkin wrote:

BloodySpghetti wrote: this has to be re imagined It would take a lot of reimagining for this to not only meet Quality Standards, but also to escape the over-used tropes.

UPDATE: Actually, I don't think any amount of reimagining would save this. No matter what is done it will stay a bullied-teen-OC-turned-killer story. Ned,

There is only so much you can polish a turd, but you can use it as fertilizer.

My story Damnation 101 started out as a story about a bomber. I think I kept one line.

My story Night and Fog started out about computers that reach singularity, and a small side section took life as the rest went flop. I kept the town of the principal character and I think two paragraphs.

So I sincerely believe that if the author applies that kind of editing they can turn this into something.

But yeah, 95% of the story isn't usable. well at least some of it has a chance. thanks for all the help everyone who tried.