Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10950063-20140714192528/@comment-24881871-20140717031824

I'm not really sure what to make of this. You're clearly the kind of author who writes a rough draft and creates the final product later. I am not. I like the idea of an otherworldly entity that feeds on the misery of parents whose children have been abducted, and the phone calls and pictures really do help set the atmosphere of the story. The dialogue between Carl and David could use some work. I think the pasta has potential. Whether you continue or scrap the story is up to you.