Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25155011-20140728180852/@comment-25148755-20140731013731

Absolutely agree about the ellipses. They're distracting as hell.

Pretty much agree on all points with Screw. Cliched, nothing super original, but nothing really bad about it either. You did have some sentence fragments at the beginning that made the writing seem sort of choppy. Also, I didn't really like the name BoogeyBoy, unless you were going for some humor. 6/10.