Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26113663-20150202113616/@comment-26113663-20150206075426

Caruche wrote: This has grounds for a really good idea. Unfortunately, as TheGamingSponge stated, there are basic words missing. It seems rushed. Perhaps it only needs one more paragraph and you have it. Maybe research doppelgangers? Mainly give the story a polish and a good proofread. Your idea of doppelgangers are different in mine. Doppelgangers are supposed to look very differently than their originals, but mine was... just like a clone or somewhat. However, I still like your tips, and I just thought of some new ideas, and I might include yours and mine.