Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26259054-20150330040929/@comment-25000365-20150330111731

Honestly, if you uploaded this right now it probably wouldn't get deleted. But who knows, I'm not an admin. That doesn't mean this story is perfect, however. I think rather than straight out saying you're a hoarder, you could set the scene and describe what your homes looks like. Just call the piles of bodies you keep "trash" instead of bodies to build up suspense. However, don't kick yourself. You did a fine job. Plus, your grammar is impeccable compared to most people on this site who upload stories. 7/10