Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190621084611/@comment-35515534-20190621183030

As the man who wrote the original story: that you took inspiration from...

I find this story to be lovely. A mix of suspense, and 'why did that happen?' only moments later from the twist. I shivered at this story, great read man. Just find a title, that's it of my criticism. Great read!