Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26502770-20150616223928/@comment-24101790-20150616230545

I'm sorry but this story is riddled with grammatical (your=possession, you're=you are, its=possession, it's=it is), spelling, capitalization, and punctuation errors (apostrophes missing from contractions, periods and question marks incorrectly used.) Please use word next time so you can proof-read before posting.

As it stands, this is not up to quality standards.