Talk:Laser Tag/@comment-5129003-20140504170911

Amazing creepypasta! Some things were a little weird, the details on the time of day it is based in was not very clear, so it was a little harder to make a picture in my mind. I really love the misderect where you think nick just got kidnapped then you switch to the death, very interesting.

I would have liked a little more detail, but other than that great story.

9/10