Talk:Bedtime/@comment-5269370-20130912123951

This is absolutely fantastic. Your description is wonderful, a story filled with atmospheric adjectives and the similes really drag you in. I also love how you describe everything to the point of blingingly terrifying, apart from actually letting the reader visualize the monster. This allows the reader to imagine the scariest looking entity that they can imagine, which is pure genius if you ask me. Anyway, this is magnificent people, I definitely recommend this.

9.6/10