Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27838637-20160707143147/@comment-25569708-20160710013003

Anarchic Operations wrote: If you don't mind me asking, how does this stack up compared to 'Please Be Careful'?

Hmmm, that's an interesting question. After looking over Please Be Careful again, I'd say your stories are actually a little similar; except that Please Be Careful is from the POV of the victim and this one is from the POV of the killer. Even though I enjoyed both your stories, I would have to say I liked Please Be Careful a bit more because the story feels more fleshed-out and involved. But as I said earlier, I think that if you were to flesh this one out more, it would make for a better read (And probably tie this one up with Please Be Careful in my view). If/when you add more to this story I'd like to take a look at the additions. In my view I think it would help (Not adding useless filler, but just describing things more/perhaps adding what the killer is thinking). You don't have to add anything if you don't want to; it's up to you my man.