Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24946232-20140519105202/@comment-9967354-20140519154635

The second blog, I dare say, is better than the first. Now since you're focussing on Ben and whatever happened, you could base the whole blog on it. I'll stick with my opinion: you should let your character know more from the beginning. He should know enough to think it is worth his time to write about it. You should merge the first two blogs, since you evidently want to break the stories into entries. Now that I think of it, blogs are for everyone to read.