Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27013113-20150923230939/@comment-27012445-20150924042835

I'm sorry. I didn't like it at all. Its seems to just be a series of convenient plot devices put together in order to force a story to be told. I really didn't know what was going on or who anybody was. There was no realism at all that came even close to being eerie. If a kid had died at my school a year ago; it wouldn't be just some rumor. The ghost of girl in the bathroom stopped being scary with the fourth Harry Potter book. The coward guy literally jumped out of nowhere (no pun intended) in the story. The Japanese setting really didn't work for me. Sorry