Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25169949-20150510065309/@comment-26007602-20150510184813

Have you posted the "All Roads" story before? I swear I've read it before.

Anyways, although the link to the first story isn't working, it won't be accepted as it violates the no spin off rule. You could probably take it to Spinpasta and post it there.

I really like the second story, although the main character comes off as far too whiny for my tastes. I'd personally tone down his swearing as many readers will be turned off by it.

The third story, while not bad, didn't seem creepy to me at all. I'm not sure it's creepypasta material. It's Tron. I don't think Tron can be that creepy. Maybe someone else can give their opinion. Or you can just post it. There's really no harm in trying; it seems well enough written.

The fourth story certainly has a lot of personality, and I'm not sure I really understand it. I'd change the name before posting it though as punctuation doesn't go through.

As for the fifth story, what I did read didn't make much sense to me, but I don't see any reason not to post it.

All in all, these are all pretty unique and well written; I think they'd do fine.