Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26425680-20160812035939/@comment-26425680-20160812172025

Thank you Christian. I'll keep all those pointers in mind when I complete the final draft. As far as the flat tires, yeah, I was definitely thinking that the cause of that could be an event from someone else's chapter. The inspiration came from the idea that Ruckus might write about a renegade Mercedes. Whether he ends up doing that remains to be seen, but it's something that can easily be molded to fit a different scenario. I'm also thinking that Carl, running down the road with his bloody hand, could be used as a plot point in another chapter. Maybe he can serve as a distraction to the characters that helps move the plot along.