User blog:PrenatalCranialDeformation/"The Pale Creature" now updated!

The Pale Creature now has been updated to be a better story. Jon is now more of an articulate character, the roommate bit is now gone, and plot holes have been patched up.

You can visit the updated page here.

Don't let the bed bugs bite. --PrenatalCranialDeformation (talk) 15:19, May 9, 2019 (UTC)