Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37123481-20181102131658/@comment-37123481-20181102135733

Thanks for the feedback! I appricate it! I'm a roleplayer, so I tend to think people will be forgiving when it comes to typos or misspellings.

I felt like I should've introduced my cousins properly. I was planning on deleting it because I wrote when I was half-awake. I was thinking I should've added more descprition and build up. Also my story was kind of unfinished, but I have plenty of time to fix it.

Once again, thanks for the feedback! I'll try to make my story better.