Talk:The Rapture/@comment-26030957-20160111004815/@comment-24828288-20160111095352

Thanks a lot for reviewing the story. This was one of my very first Pastas so I guess there'll be some little flaws. And because I was writing a journal, I believed description wasn't really of importance but thanks for suggesting it. I'm planning to write some more Pastas in the next few days. I will take your advice for further stories. I notice I seem to have started with journals then gone into stories. But thanks again for suggesting improvements.