Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25686546-20141115221231/@comment-24101790-20141115223642

GoodAuthor wrote: Thanks for the advice! I'll keep this in mind when I redo it. Quality standards isn't what I was aiming for though, As this is rough and I need to know what I should do with it If you don't meet QS, your story won't be allowed on the site. Remove the Bloody Mary references (been done too many times before) and the "right behind you." cliche. Also the story needs quite a bit of fleshing out on top of the capitalization/punctuation/wording issues.