Talk:That Wretched Grin/@comment-25941663-20161208205643

The moment when the narrator saw his son hanging from the ceiling was very powerful, mainly because of the execution. It was like a punch, no buildup. Very nice work there.

As a plot though it wasn't that good though. It certainly had moments of unease, like when the child told the parent the book was changing. Overall it wasn't that good, as plots revolving around pop culture items rarely do well.