Talk:Sever the Cord/@comment-25634501-20141110203423

The thing that makes Rituals fun to read is the number of requirements and actions one must take for the desired outcome. This story gives far too much purpose to the ritual, and yet makes it relatively simple to achieve.

More interesting rituals have specific times, places, and states of mind. All while at the same time going through the step by step process of where to be, who to talk to, what to say, etc.

Unfortunately, simply looking at the mirror with the lights off is just not interesting. Try and make it more specific if possible.