Talk:The Shadow Lady/@comment-31077845-20170302023713

So why exactly did her children take off originally, and/or randomly decide to go ahead and drown in a lake? And what would swimming out and grabbing a kid's shoe do? Any normal person would, at most, assume they swam across and thus run around the lake because there's already stuff that'll bite/pinch you in lakes. And so there's...two paranormal things going on? If her spirit was the one drowning people then what exactly grabbed her and dragged her into the lake, and how did 15 children disappear without anyone ever checking before this specific kid died?

Somewhat short and seemingly kind of slap-dash in general. I generally try to leave at least something positive, but this didn't make a lot of sense and didn't seem terribly inspired. It sorta just seemed like a pasta written for the sake of it which, as I I've said before, I don't understand. If you don't feel like you have anything really valuable and worth your time to write, then why write?