Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24841732-20141010150639/@comment-24841732-20141011233046

On a reread, I definately see where you are coming from with the choppyness. I don't know why i didn't notice that before. I'll work at slowing it down a bit as well. I really appreciate the advice. There are so many stupid things I miss untill other people point them out. Thanks.