Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26891332-20150819204902/@comment-25052433-20150827012903

This is a great groundwork for a pasta, but I feel that you should go deeper. What we have here isn't much in the way of a Creepypasta as it is a crime pasta. There are so many elements that I feel you could add here to really make this one stand out.

For one, the idea of revenge porn is a good concept for a pasta, so stick with that, as it isn't something that I think I've seen done around here. However, after that, the entire thing feels a bit mundane, as this is something that likely could happen in real life, and doesn't have much of a horror theme.

Perhaps consider introducing the "deepweb" into this story, as that is a concept that is pretty interesting right now. Add in some elements of stalking and fear, cryptic messages and threats, strange phone calls, people ringing the doorbell and vanishing in the middle of the night. You know, really ramp up the suspense before going right in for the kill.

I would consider fluffing this a bit more before adding it to the main site.