Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-25763427-20141126052126/@comment-26113663-20150128101526

Umbrello wrote: I like Candle Cove because it's short, lol. But seriously, I felt AbD took too long to get to the climax, and the ending didn't wow me. I remember thinking the yellow ooze was silly. Candle Cove had a better ending, in my opinion. People say AbD is written better, but I find it long-winded and overly descriptive. Actually, I like longer pastas. Already read NES Godzilla Creepypasta? It was long, but worth the read. I personally think that longer pastas are more detailed than the short ones. I also like Candle Cove, but I think AbD is much better, since it's gradually increasing the amount of horror as you proceed to read. After I read AbD, I also read A Few Suggestions and Room Zero, which was also worth it.

Even some parts are veri stupendous, like the photonegative Mickey mascot, and the yellow oozing blood-like thing like you said, but the overall was pretty great except the two. I don't see it as an overly-descripted set of sentences, but rather a well-detailed pasta, although I still I agree everyone should avoid overwriting their pastas, which has been a general rule since before. I still find AdB better than Candle Cove.