Talk:Gateway of the Mind/@comment-26474527-20150607185731

I've read this pasta at least five times over. The plot wasn't rushed or anything of the sort and it almost seems plausible, for this to have happened at one point in time. This is a brilliant idea, and it seems to explain everything all in while not dragging on. What made it creepy though, was the line the man had made at the end. ((ie. “I have spoken with God, and He has abandoned us” )) And the previous description of how he perceived his newly lost senses and new knowledge made a tingle go down my spine.

10/10