Talk:The Macbeth Curse/@comment-28428152-20180228025916

The idea of using the Macbeth Curse is an interesting concept. But, why would doctors bring in a priest? Doctors don't believe in demonic possession, much less exorcisms. In fact, most priests don't even deal with exorcisms. Not to mention that Judeo-Christian demons are a bad trope to use on here. Also, ease up a bit on the exclamation marks. Nobody gets that excited, unless their a little kid, which is kind of how the protagonist sounded. I'd also throw in some contractions, it feels a bit stiff when nothing is contracted. And it's not necessary to explain what Macbeth is, either. When making literary references, it's more professional to just assume that the reader knows what it is, especially with something like Shakespeare. But yeah, good concept, definitely unique. I'd just go back and maybe polish it up a bit.