Talk:A Lunatic/@comment-15999940-20150330183303

The transitional disruptions I was referring to really was that I felt like the origin of the lunatic (The paragraph about his family, or at least the first sentence of that paragraph) Should be reorganized to fit at the beginning of the story. Although I enjoyed the story, The sequence did confuse me at first. And, with Jim? though sometimes it is effective to add details such as that, it could have been reworded, or placed in the paragraph before "the lunatic" cuts his own flesh away and enters the putrid statue. (Or that was what I was assuming had happened.) Because, at least for me, reading it in that order, at first, caused me to believe Jim was "The Lunatic".