Talk:Tranquility's Bounty/@comment-9041013-20171013215816

Convoluted story, seemingly pointless. The point is to provide a bunch of perspectives and related events into one story, but that just confuses the reader. I don't really care what the astronauts on the moon thought or felt, or what they were thinking of the bible at the moments they were in orbit.Its virtually pointless.

Jumping from conversation at the present in the story to memories in the story from sentence to sentence is bloody confusing, it is aimed to clog the random confusing holes that could've been avoided in the first place but it does nothing but create more confusion, could've told us Freida was dead, then later make a mention of it being killed over the Lycanthropy issue without all the flashback stuff.

So Cecil is basically Dean Winchester with the mark of Cain trying to be a good huntah.Why kill Ida if she's becoming dog food? Oh yeah because she might turn... just might...

And then comes the realism in the form of psuedo science fiction, "Asteroids don't usually get to earth itself, but when they do, they go all nuke on our dna and turn us into wolves" First of, why specifically wolves? Why only humans get affected? I mean radiation exposure does to other mamalians the same it does to us. Here's the funnier thing though, you'd have to come in contact with these little piece of space rock for them to actually take affect (otherwise whole cities would be overtaken by a speck of space dust) and throughout recorded history we have only about 35k mentions of collected space material by humans. If these hunters existed since well the fall of Rome even in the seemingly organized way it does in the story, Lycanthropy should've been far gone before the 20th century.

So yeah, convoluted story with too many perspectives, very little useful plot points and the typical "Im a psychopath but not really psychopath" main hero.

Christ.