Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-24282774-20131213051504

After a few hours of editing, and a very patient and helpful writing partner, here is the first part of story I wrote while on trip to Pripyat a few years ago. Could you tell me how well it meets quality standards? Before i finish editing I would like to be sure that this is not confusing or hard to read. http://pastebin.com/rCkcv4R8 