Talk:Writing Home/@comment-26487130-20150911223231

It's not well written story wise, there's no real subastance to it, it doesn't really make sense, and personally didn't interest me. I feel like you're capable of great writing, but that this itself lacked substance so much I'm not sure I'd call it a story and not just random rambling sorry. Hope to see more work of yours, I'm sure you will ((or even have)) made some gret things.

Don't let my words deter you from trying either, it's as they say just my opinion man.