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BREAKING NEWS: Haunted House Murders Survivor Missing! If found please report to local police immediately!

It was mischief night, the day before Halloween, and finally! Halloween is on a Friday this year. 17 year old, Blair Parkers, has been waiting for this to happen for years. This year, Blair is going to a haunted house with her friends, they all love to be scared. And the fact that they are going on Halloween night, makes it even scarier! As she waits in school the day before, her thoughts trail off to thinking about the next day. She’s thinking about everything, the candy, the scares, and her costume. Every year, she goes as a female magician. She does this because she is a magician herself. Well, sort of. She can do simple tricks, like card tricks and the most common tricks with a fake wand. Her friends like to be entertained by her small and fun magic tricks. Even though they are quite simple ticks, she is particularly good at them. In class, Blair is still spacing out in her thoughts, she suddenly feels something touch her, bringing her back down to earth. She gasps, “What the?!” Then, she realized it as just her friend, Julie. “Blair,class is over, c’mon, lets go!”. Blair tiredly rubs her eyes and slowly stands up. Then they meet up with their two other friends and they walk to the bus together, discussing their plans for the next day. Once she got home, Blair put on her costume, she's wearing a white mask that only covers the top left part of her face, a top hat, and a velvet purple shirt with black sleeves and white pants with thin black vertical stripes on them. And to finish the look, a black cape with a velvet inside, and a smooth gem where the cape holds together to stay on. She wore the costume all day until she went to bed.

Once she finally fell asleep, she woke up the next day excited. She jumped out of bed, ate breakfast and put on only the cape, since her school doesn't let you wear your costume, but just a cape is allowed. She wore it all day. And finally, school was over, she got home, put on her full costume and her friends picked her up and they were on their way to the haunted house. They have to leave a bit early because it was a few hours away, and they want to make sure they can still make it there, but it will be dark. So, Blair was in the car with her friends. They were singing popular songs on the radio to pass the time. But, occasionally, Blair will do a few tricks, too. A few hours pass and finally, they arrived at the haunted house. Excitedly, they got out of the car and stood in line, hearing chainsaws and screams from inside, Blair was doing some magic tricks and showing other people in line with them while waiting to get in. They waited for about an hour, then they were in the next group. They were happy to finally go in, and a few steps in, someone already popped out and one of them screamed. The others laughed at her and they kept walking with the group. more pop-outs and dummies scared them all a few times, and they could hear the chainsaws coming up. That is he part that scares them the most, even thought hey do know that the chain is off of it, but still. More people popped out, scared them, and they laugh afterwards. and they arrived at the part with the chainsaws.

They walked in the room, and they can see many people with running chainsaws in their hands, The group keeps slowly walking, and suddenly, a man with a chainsaw puts one near their faces, they screamed and walked faster. more chainsaws scared them the they were finally out of the chainsaw area. They were paranoid now, from being scared but still kept walking. Fast. More actors jumped out and scared them, and they entered another room, but they didn't see any actors, just a bunch of dummies. Then they heard someone, another chainsaw. They saw man carrying it, coming pretty close to them,. He was running at the group, they screamed. he didn't stop at them, he ran at them fast, holding the chainsaw high, and he got up to them and attacked them. He lowered at and it cut part of one of the friends arms off. They all screamed even louder in sheer terror. The man killed the girl and moved on to the others. He killed every one of the friends except Blair, he did manage to scratch her up a little bit though. Blair was horrified and ran back, sorry that none of her friends could escape with her. She finally reached the part where they entered, alone, terrified, covered in her friends’ blood, and screaming. A man who works there saw her and came up to her, asked her what happened, why she’s all bloody, and was scratched so badly. She told him what happened and he called the cops and Blair was sent to the hospital to treat her wounds.

At the hospital, her parents were called there, and trying to comfort her. Doesn't help much, knowing all her friends are all dead, Blair will probably never be calm again. A few days later, she did get a bit calmer, but not in a good way. Since that day, Blair became very depressed, and barely ever comes out of her room. Her parents wouldn't let her go to the funerals, too much pain. She rarely ever talks now, and started really hating life, and everything about it. Saying nothing is fair, and life is horrible. She started secretly cutting her arms every day.

Then one night, she became so depressed, she wanted everything good about her life, gone. While her parents were asleep, she snuck out of her room, put on her costume again, and went to the garage. In there, she found her dad’s old saw. She took it and went back inside then went upstairs quietly. She reached her parents door and opened it slowly and quietly. She silently tip-toed in, still holding the saw, and snapped. She took it and raised her arm above them, and sawed their heads off. They screamed in horror and pain, then were silent.

Blair then took the bodies and saw, and carried them back into the garage. There, she found an old magic trick box, the one where you pretend to saw someone in half. But this isn't pretend. she took her headless parents and one by one, put them in the box, and sawed their headless bodies in half. And leaving them that way. She escaped and later that night, a few more people who knew her, were found the same way, but the box was missing from every scene, and so was Blair. Police searched everywhere, but she was never found, they presumed her dead. And moved on.

BREAKING NEWS : Survivor of multiple homicides still missing! Blair Parkers, age 17, still not yet found, last seen in a magician’s costume, holding a bloody saw. If found, please report to your local police station with the details. 