Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10319977-20141226134502/@comment-25326117-20150112075744

Ladeedah wrote: Cyanwrites wrote: It's really hard to convey a truly original idea in so few words.

To be honest, I though that last one I did was crap, and far worse than my marionette one. I was just trying to emulate the OP a bit more, because people seem to like his, and I don't get why people don't think my marionette one is better than his. His is a very broad idea, while yours isn't really something that makes you think. Honestly, I don't think either are necessarily creepy, but that's just my opinion.

It could use more work, maybe becoming more of a creepypasta rather than a micropasta.