Talk:Ticker/@comment-25464062-20141119095443

This is lovely. I find the diiferent meanings associated with the word "ticking" interesting. The story is ratehr complex, in a good way. I like how helpless the man is in the face of the beautiful girl. The way that he sees her, even with her otherworldly facial features, and suddenly nothing else matters. There are one or two odd sentences placed here and there, but overall, it was well written.