Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26112985-20150821003552/@comment-26112985-20150821113520

Vngel W wrote: Once again, you have provided an assortment of outstanding selections to enjoy! I found 3:21 AM, Text Messages, and the Foreboding to be my favorites. Your work I admit, is worthy to be looked forward to each time. Until the next time!

--- Also, I did note two misspellings I wanted to bring to your attention. I noted the errors with "[]" to easily locate.

(The Foreboding) Original: +When we made the same turn once more I began [to ten] to twenty miles an hour over the speed limit, constantly looking behind me and at the rearview mirror.

Revised: When we made the same turn once more I began to [accelerate/go] ten to twenty miles an hour over the speed limit, constantly looking behind me and at the rearview mirror.

(The Bed) Original: This time when it happened, he [started] awake.

Revised: This time when it happened, he [startled] awake. I'm glad you found these pastas enjoyable! I will certainly fix the errors you noticed!