Talk:Penpal/@comment-25064879-20140615052409

One of my favorites. Beautifully written, avoided cliches very well, cleverly tied together. Great 'real' story. Honestly, I don't really have a bad thing to say about it, which is rare. Even made me a little teary at the end.

A couple of things I didn't understand: 'You left' and '15 or 16', but other than that it was all brought together beautifully. Considering how long it is, I'm surprised at how well it held my attention, and I sorta feel this story will stay with me forever. Moreover, many stories seem great for a while, but end in a way that disappoints, but the ending here didn't disappoint me.

Great job. 10/10