User talk:STMSYFL

No
Your story is cliche, not scary, and unrealistic. Zillions of these "kids go into the woods, see a monster, blah blah" stories exist. None of them original or good. Sadly, yours is no exception.

The unrealistic part? A kid and a cop get brutally murdered behind a house and the mother and kids just kind of hang out in their house the rest of the night?

Come on. Just...no.

Mystreve (talk) 12:06, September 8, 2014 (UTC)