Talk:Digression of Will/@comment-4740494-20131112051748

This is my first attempt at a creepypasta, kinda. This was originally a history project that I made in a rush and made some edits to before posting it here. I know there's a lot of cliche's and the grammar and literacy itself is poor but any and all feedback is appreciated, I doubt there is but if I did do anything right then it would be helpful to knoe. It's really the only reason I'm posting this. I do have a real pasta in the works that I promise will be much better than this one, even thought that's not really hard to do with this one considering how bad it is. Thanks to anyone who actually gives this a look :)