Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35293419-20180413070100/@comment-9041013-20180413232911

It's not really scary, it's just a nightmare story which is simply a nightmare story. We all have nightmares, most of them end up being forgotten pretty quickly. Just like the one in your story... it's just dry like that. Also, the ending is a tad illogical, did the narrator not go to the mall because he remembered the nightmare or his mom actually reminded him of the nightmare with her suggestion to go to the mall? this is confusing.