Talk:Conquest/@comment-5733573-20180818052323/@comment-5733573-20180818090628

Here's where "atop" is: "If he calls upon your name, do yourself the favor and atop his blazing chariot - enjoy the ride!"

If you have to answer a critique by laughing and then explaining the meaning of the work, not only are you insecure, but the work itself is no good. Reading it literally or figuratively, it's just not a good poem. It's not clever. It's not orginal. And you put it on a public forum, so you're accepting whatever criticism comes your way.

Better luck next time.