Talk:We R Leejun/@comment-25947144-20160908194904/@comment-24101790-20160908203910

Yeah, some of the drinking dialogue could use some revision. I also tried to keep the main characters relatively blank (until their stories started bleeding through).

As for a complete infection, there are different branches for this. Parasite Steve is strikingly similar to Leech Man from the Resident Evil series. Leejun itself is just a hive mind parasite factory. I would say that Vampire is patient zero as the most effective parasites/sicknesses are the type that manifest without symptoms (as the infected are more likely to transmit it if they're feeling normal/don't know they're sick). I would just say that they're different manifestations of an entity. Leejun is recruitment, Parasite Steve is more for combat, and Vampire is the true incarnation as she's able to infiltrate and infect without being detected.

It is however an evolving parasite; at the start of infecting people (who haven't been a host to it for years), it really doesn't have complete motor control of them but after some time, it slowly adapts and becomes more effective at binding with the hosts (hence running zombies/body snatchers/vampires/mummies/wolfens/etc). So the more time it spends with a host, the more it'll manifest.