User blog comment:ChristianWallis/Tenses, Aspects, Mood and Voice/@comment-25226524-20161020220320/@comment-25226524-20161021141017

Yeah, I give the most basic feedback when people ask about story deletions now because I'm simply burnt out on it and have realized that nine out of ten of them won't make an attempt at improving the story anyway. If someone takes the time to put it in the workshop, then that's a different story, but even then it still gets old saying the same things like you mentioned. As much feedback as you've given I picture you either screaming or slamming your head into your keyboard multiple times a day. And yeah, awkward wording is something that's really hard to explain but is likely the most common problem I encounter.

P.S. - Is this your closest friend? - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jVeNr9aE8cU