Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26407997-20160506030723/@comment-28060931-20160518180617

Hi, Elecrolord. This is going to be short since I agree with what mike said.

Some aforementioned issues that I pointed out in my previous review still stand:

Puncuation seems to be all over the place, so this is how a sentence should be structured. "Even though I was hungry,(space) I gave food to the homeless." There is a space after the comma, and this goes for anything: periods, commas, colons, semi-colons, etc.

There isn't a (space) then (comma, period, etc.) it's "The wind was raging outside, but it was warm, and cozy inside."

Also, spaces between paragraphs seem huge. So hitting space twice and leaving a minor gap is enough.

I hope this helped.