Talk:The Toadman/@comment-9801519-20130913184623

I read this perhaps six months ago, but I never published my thoughts on the wiki. I have to agree with 3alex on your originality; you've managed to create a villain whose features aren't cliché. As Cymbal said, the heads dangling around The Toadman's belt is an interesting addition. The quality of diction and the amount of detail you managed to fit into a story of such brevity is impressive.

I do have one bone to pick, though; if The Toadman was blown apart, then how would he still be waiting for you [the character]? I cannot help but imagine a necromorph from Dead Space, assembling itself from the bodies of the deceased. Maybe this is explained in the prequel, which I also read but have since forgotten. Other than that, this is an excellently written story. 9/10

P.S: Lesler looks high in the police sketch.