Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20181016215053/@comment-9041013-20181016235020

So a bunch of ideas we as writers can relate to? well good job Locked! Honestly it clicked with me fairly quickly since I had created a monster in my own head by writing about one after I wrote Mr. Gopo, the original inspiration for it came from a dream but after I wrote it into a story, it kept popping up in my head, unpleasantly.

Honestly, I looked up this Gaelic term you've used and found nothing, so whether this is some lesser know creature from Celtic folklore or your use of fictional folk beliefs to reinforce the validity of your monster both in story, and out of the story is great. Good job on paying attention to such small details.

I do have to say that the monster isn't original, in it's more physical attributes, seeing as how a vague shape (albeit gigantic) riddled with judgemental eyes was used in some Apocryphal pseudepigraphical work regarding Moses to describe the archangel Samael, I've read a bunch of stories with a monster whose main attribute is eyeballs and even used one myself, regardless everything else around the beast makes it work perfectly. So no worries about that.

So yeah, I like this story. hope to see it on the site soon, I'm a bit tired now, so I don't have much to say.