Talk:To Become God/@comment-25170312-20180306171959

I didn't like this one as much. The first two were compelling and thought provoking, but this one was completely different. It relied mostly on exposition and dialogue, and the dialogue was pretty bad. The third AI came out of nowhere, as did the child AI's sudden change of heart. Just because his dad says he loves him? A strange way to end this type of story. It has loads of potential but I feel you rushed it.