Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24405954-20150312162926/@comment-26169026-20150322052146

I applaud you  I applaud you. It leaves me wanting more... which is exactly what any short story (hell, even novels) should. Also, the fact that English isn't your first language isn't apparent... which is wonderful. I'm not saying there weren't spelling and grammar mistakes but they were few and far between that as a reader, I just assumed you were making a few typos. Please continue to write... and please finish this story. I like the idea of the candy being drugged... and I also like that this doesn't seem to be about any type of being or whatever... that it's about real humans. Correct me if I'm wrong, though. I mean, it's not like we have the ending. Haha. 8/10 (I'd give you a ten on this if it was finished)