Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24918243-20140604064806/@comment-9967354-20140604125055

Oh my.

Sorry; this is a bit of a bland review. But seriously. It's short, yet it puts forward a point very effectively. And I did not see the ending coming. I should have, but didn't, because I was too engrossed in the story to care about trying to predict it. I just see like, one error, but I'll fix it.