Talk:Room Zero/@comment-6862307-20131108003329

Again, this really impressed me. I think that I found "Abandoned by Disney" creepier with its atmosphere and build up, but that's only a minor quibble since I'd say this is still pretty much just as good - not to mention I appreciate the new framing and narrative style. It makes it feel fresh, rather than just repeat the idea of it being our unnamed protagonists adventures in the park or another abandoned park you actually expand on the themes in a new and kind of interesting way.

I said this about the first part and I'll say it about this one:  There's a genuine sense of place here. The world feels somewhat anchored, which makes it creepy, and this story broadens its scope with how it deals with tales from other people who encountered strange things going on at Disney parks around the world and just like the use of the Treasure Island deal in the first part, making references to the Mickey Mouse Gas Masks that were made gives it that little pinch of reality that again, makes it have some nice call backs to reality which only make the subversion of said reality creepier.

I feel like you are building a mythos here, a strange one, but a good one. I'll be interested to see if you continue this! I think you should! Same score as before, 8.5/10!