Board Thread:Site Questions/@comment-4392766-20150404055022/@comment-24101790-20150404122159

The story was deleted as it had some pretty large issues and fell into a lot of old tropes for L.E. pastas. "Have you ever heard of..."

You also overused ellipses (incorrectly), an ellipse is used to indicate a pause in dialogue or omission of words from a quote (as seen above). It shouldn't be used for a 'dramatic pause' as that tends to make the story seem melodramatic. A comma or period serves the same purpose. Also 25+ times is a bit excessive.

There were punctuation errors. Commas missing where a pause is needed in the story. As well as wording issues: "It sounded like out of tune music box..."

I came across it while using the random pasta button. After reading it, I determined it wasn't up to quality standards and deleted it. I didn't leave a notification as you had been away from the wiki for over a year and a half by that point and seemed inactive.