User blog comment:JustinG98/Tell Me why I can't make a creepypasta/@comment-5097333-20131211225530/@comment-5097333-20140102235432

Aww, can't take some honest criticism? Time to grow up, little man. If you're going to put your work in a public forum you must learn that not at all feedback will be positive. Your original blog post shows very poor grammar, so that's likely how you write stories here.

I was serious, look at my corrected version of what you wrote. It's not perfect, but it's a helluva lot closer than yours. Make an effort to understand *why*. If you don't make an effort to write a story, why should anyone make an effort to read your story?