Talk:The Seven Deadly Songs/@comment-24249614-20140215220759

I was all prepared to read the pasta, and then I realized how long it was by the scroll bar on my screen. 11/10, as I'm sure the story in whole is great, although I skimmed through parts of it. This definitely has the potential of becoming a good movie or what could lead up to a sequel. Yes, grammatical mistakes were made, but a good read all the same. It's funny, I was up at 2:00 in the morning in pitch black, reading pastas such as these, and the only scare I ever got was the thought of someone watching me while I was distracted by these creepy stories, perhaps to become part of a non-fictional creepypasta horror story. Excellent masterpiece, I applaud you!

A little critique that I may be extremely far off on, but it seems that you drew too much on detail of characters (at least, in the beginning), which is unique. From samples of pastas I've read, you get a brief or hardly any introduction to character or setting (increasing the tension if used properly), and then the story continues on to whatever the conflict or storyline pertains to.

All things said, bravo my friend.