Talk:Both/@comment-25458443-20180919052230

Pretty damn effective!

A few lines are shaky, grammatically, such as "I know that all she has said to convince me has been a lie." It's hard to square out exactly what that line is trying to say.

In general though, it's an enjoyably macabre read. I like the ways you incorporate 'both' into the theming. I'm also a fan of both ambiguous endings. Pretty neat for a first start,