Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27286688-20151125184333/@comment-27287681-20151125185746

this was pretty good, could be expanded but i'm sure that's the idea

it would be cool if mabey it had more about the other people in the story, and less out in the open about how crazy she is.

it would probaly be a good idea to focus more on the stalking part.

keep doing what you're doing, it would be awsome to know more about what happened

(sorry for bad engrish)