Talk:Stitchy/@comment-24813681-20141010170950

Too short, I see the concept, a creature going around the woods killing people, but you didn;t flesh it out enough, there was no suspense, it was just THERE, if you are going to makes stories like this, here are some tips:

1:Start with a larger group, this allows your monster to pick them off one by one, as the others grow suspicious of one another.

2:Give your creature something truly alien and unique, but possible,and useful in an evolutionary context, (Such as eyes attached to tentacles, or spikes along the back of your monster)

3:Don't 'skip' too much time, give your creature a long time to act.

4:Don't show your creature completely, leave the reader to imagine the rest of it.