Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-6591982-20141016124321/@comment-25546552-20141017022002

I feel like whenever I comment on anything I always say "This was interesting." or some variation of the phrase. So I will get to that.

This was interesting I enjoyed it, and to be 100% honest if you slapped a period at the end of that final 'utterance' I would not in the slightest be surprised if you called that the end. Mainly because a lot of creepypastas do that, and sometimes it works. Not saying you should do that, but that is a spin you could try. Well maybe if it wasn't a dream.....unless all of it was a dream "MIND BLOWN" but I digress.

If he had actually found the house and it wasn't in a dream, then it ended I feel like it the choice of ending their could have its own deeper meaning. So in conclusion, it was quite interesting as per my trade mark, and I would like to read the conclusion at some point.