Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-4849011-20150305001912/@comment-4849011-20150305133248

To MrDupin- Wow, I feel like the pressure's on now! I don't know yet if I'll write a story using that theme (I'll let you know if I do), but either way I'm glad you found my description sufficiently creepy!

To Silver- Roger Ebert noted, "No good movie is too long; no bad movie is too short." As far as the WW goes, some stories really should be broken into parts for convenience. Then you can review the parts at your leisure to see how they are, whether they'd fit together as a whole, etc.

To everyone- That reminds me, has anyone else read any stories that could have been good, but they were doomed by a terrible ending? I once read a "Marked for Review" pasta about a girl with hurt feelings who ends up the prey of a rapist/killer. That part wasn't well done to begin with, but then it had a confusing ending that had little to do with the rest of the story. I corrected the grammar errors, but when I went to save my changes a message popped up saying the story had already been deleted.