Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25095856-20140701141149/@comment-24352864-20140701161048

I think the sigils are some sort of carving or runes used to perform magic. I might be wrong though. Still, I think it's best to use a term that it more familiar to the casual reader.

The game in itself, wasn't too interesting. It's kind of like a gladiator match albeit with assigned roles and such but, the whole premise is odd. The main character gets dragged into some unknown stuff that was happening since he happened to be at the wrong place at the wrong time. Maybe it would have been better if he was already investigating the so-called games to begin with?

And the way this segment was ended, anyone might assume that this was an unfinished pasta. It is seperated into parts but, at least make it so that each part is able to stand as an individual story. You could make it seem like they were investigating the sudden disappearances, pick up a few developments and details then finally, head into the site and have this one occur at that time before cutting off at the part where the games begin. In a way, this whole segment can serve as a stand-alone story.