Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5430990-20141219162138/@comment-9584883-20141219185411

Some origional ideas. I do feel you have the talent to further develop this. You could have written more. For your first pasta, not too shabby! Keep reading and writing! Obsorb different writing styles and then mold your own. My first attempt at a pasta wasn't all that. In time, the more we read and write (practice), the more we improve. Keep it up!