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Halloween Decorations is a pasta I wrote I think about two weeks ago. I like the basic premise I put in, but I feel like it's missing something. It seems like it's build, build, QUICK SCARE, and then...nothing. I'm a little disappointed in how I ended it and would love some advice on how to improve it. 