Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24872476-20140513023913/@comment-24872476-20140513234711

First off, I agree. It could, and should, be longer. I'll probably add on to it. The time span is a little long, and I could probably fix it.

Secondly, no. I won't explain who Cheryl is, or who the followers are. The narrative begins in medias res, and the narrator is unreliable/ out-of-it. I want the reader to be able to draw their own conclusions as to who/where/what everything is.

One thing I will say is that the narrator wasn't meant to be a child.