Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27007772-20150602054247/@comment-25037895-20150603002903

Here:
 * "Natalie, get in the house."(needs to be a comma, not a period) he barked, seemingly in shock. (other quotations where the speaker is identified in the next sentence should have a comma.) Like this one:
 * "Must have been a prank. No one is on the other side." He (he) said, rather distracted...
 * The silence was broken when a (needs to be removed) the other side of the door gave way to a voice.