Talk:One Final Text/@comment-31077845-20170315043205

BUT WHO WAS PHONE?!

I'm going to use all my available willpower to not make fun of the idea of a 16 year old who has decided that a guy from 4 states away who she plays videogames with and skypes with sometimes is her "soul mate" (damned teenagers, I swear) and just say that the grammar was very wonky. Aside from that the story itself was uh...well, "mysterious text/call after a person's death" has itself been done to death (thus "BUT WHO WAS PHONE". When a trollpasta gets made about the concept, it's safe to say it's probably pretty trite). I try my best to include at least something positive, but all I can do is say the story wasn't, like, heinous or anything, it just wasn't really at all remarkable.