Talk:Leaves/@comment-34823985-20180710100408

My take on this is she died, but somehow slipped reality (maybe due to her meditation) and unwittingly plucked lives before their time from the tree of life. Enlightenment is fine and dandy, but what good is it if you reach it before you're ready for it.

Well, I don't know what you intended, J, but that's what I took away from it. I suppose it could use a bit more clarity going by the Wizard and the Doc's comments, but I quite liked it. I'm all for vague, 'what do you think happened?' kind of stories. I found it descriptive and beautiful until you dropped the hammer in the shape of a drowned protagonist.

Feel free to drop a message on my talk page if you want to brainstorm or whatever. I've got a busy few hours coming soon, but I'll try to be available later. :)