Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-6267173-20130725163917

I really liked it. I only saw 1 spelling flaw but it wasn't a big deal. The story had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. It was very long and descriptive which I enjoy. I've also always been kind of afraid of Ronald McDonald so great job adding that fear in the pasta. Overall I would give it a 9.5 out of 10 so excellent job! 