Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24897366-20160213221137/@comment-27697299-20160219095929

Bit confusing I would say, especially how you keep calling the word you, I like the idea of including the reader but you don't have to say it that much. A bit confusing, why would he won't to remember that day if it was that bad, makes sense if he had forgotten it then accidently stumbled upon the photo. other than that I found it good, keep working on it and it will be done in no time.

Kind Regards

Phil Raptor