Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26528249-20150714153935/@comment-26054278-20150717195335

Leaugeofdeeznuts wrote: Dude, it isnt done yet. I havent even worked on it much. Alod im going to include the pic eventually. It is going to be a longer story that starts getting more interactions later on, and ill be sure to split it into paragraphs. Then I recommend you work on your English and spacing, then post the full story on here. There is barely anything in this story to grasp onto and review other than exactly what Whitix said.