Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26671016-20141103215408/@comment-25051266-20141103221112

Really interesting concept, like the idea of how it gradually builds up to chaos.

The characters in the prologue seem to be rather inntriguing so far, I also like how the boy has a deep rooted hatred towards the others who pick on him which could possibly foreshadow to later events.

The only worry I have is that the route of the story, from the prologue at least, appears to be somewhat predictable. I mean I already have a feeling that by the end of the story the main character will end up brutally killing the ones that picked on him. If I'm right then that is a serious issue, if im wrong then you can forget about this complaint.

Overall I like the idea, sounds cool.