Talk:"There's Something Wrong with the Basement"/@comment-25471033-20180104213619

This was alright. The detail was pretty good, I was able to read all the way through while also understanding everything that's going on. The ending didn't have a clearly defined answer on how or why or by who she died, which is kind of nice in a creepypasta. The only problem I see is the lack of the concept, something or someone that was either in the basement, attached to the basement wanted this new old homeowner to kill 3 people for no reason. If she even killed them at all, the story never explicitly says that she took the kids except for maybe very subtly when it says that Mrs. Anders felt blood that was not her own. 6/10