Talk:Gray/@comment-5733573-20180525141009

This is amazing! It's such a scary idea and so well done. My particular favorite sentence:

"I retched onto the crimson floor, making the stench in the room even more sickening than the hemoglobin-iron smell that fucked my nostrils mercilessly."

That's just good writing. But what takes this to an even higher level is that it actually has a profound message:

"Believe someone if they tell you that they’re afraid, and believe in what causes their fear, no matter how preposterous, no matter how gray."

There is something about this sentiment especially that makes the story even more chilling than it would have been without it. It makes you think about how much safer the world might be if we only took each other more seriously.

Really great story, and an instant new favorite of mine!