Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20181111004641/@comment-9041013-20181111182704

I don't really have much in a way of critique for you here, it does quite suit my own personal tastes what you've got going on here. I'm not sure the British WWI conscription started in 1916, my guess would've been that it started earlier, but I am not sure.

Now me wonders what could scare this man so much in war, unless he took part in a military conflict before....