Talk:Town of Witches/@comment-25340844-20140920221551

This was quite good for a first attempt. Keep practicing and you'll see a huge improvement.

Some advice for the future; Please don't point out that your story is fiction. The majority of creepypasta readers are fully aware that these stories aren't true, but it's still fun to pretend they could be and let oneself get a little scared. Putting a notice at the beginning or end stating "None of this is real" makes it much more difficult to get into that frame of mind. Don't tell us "this totally happened" either - just tell the tale.

Happy writing.