Talk:Tobit: Brothers and Sisters/@comment-25941663-20150904003226

That was very good. Especially towards the end, when the story picked up pace. I really liked how you continued fleshing out the characters. I feel invested in them, very good work. And even though the story kinda liked in creepiness, it was still a suspenseful read.

One thing that I didn't like is how much you wrote about Lacy being a short fuse/temperamental/psychopath etc. I believe you used at least three paragraphs explaining all that, and it got a bit repetitive.

Also, I loved the little easter eggs you snuck in. And I liked even more that only Lacy is tied to these easter eggs. Her personality allows for those cheesy little references, I like that.

All in all, this was another solid installment in the series. Well done, I'm looking forward to the next one.

Oh, and I don't know why, but I have a feeling Trevor will die soon...