Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28938497-20150922195005/@comment-24976741-20150922224208

Cyanwrites wrote: Yeah, I'm really out of practice writing this much, so I think I've gotten sloppy. Plus I didn't redraft. I usually redraft the final story but not the WW version as other people might spot something I don't. Completely understandable, I know the feeling. I'm sort of out of practice too myself, other than having to write a paper literally two days ago ya out of practice. I just find myself more capable of pointing out others' mistakes for them and what not. Ya but anyways I think other than what I've pointed out all you need to do is reword it a little bit and try to make it smoother and your set to go and hey, I'll be on the workshop if you need me.