Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20190204231042/@comment-34823985-20190205224850

I'm only through the first part. I'll try to find some time later to finish it up. So far, the character development and dialogue have me hooked. It's an intriguing story. You definitely have me interested in just what is going to happen and what will come of this family.

I'd check with Wikipedia but I don't think the word maroon came about until the 1700 or 1800s. --Though, the most intriguing description I’ve heard is that they appear to be great insects covered in [maroon] leather, with strange devices that show letters on them.--

I'm not too confident of a reviewer and this is quite a long tale, so maybe you'd be willing to meet me half way. I'll try my best to answer any questions you might have about how I feel about this part or that part.