Talk:The Black Friday Incident/@comment-31179891-20170507122457

this was a pretty good idea that wasnt too oversaturated (which is hard to come by in the world of shit that is the lost episodes category) with a backstory based on a somewhat true incident, but the execution is very questionable.

it just features the typical "out-of-character children's animation production company employee" and "dizney did something sp0kyl!!1" cliché with the mind-numbingly forced repetition of "NEEEDZ MUR EDGE!!!!!!" and the pasta ultimately falls into the "violent version of a kid show/film with blood and out-of-character characters and shit, also one of the producers die" cliché at the end, which makes the reader wonder if this is straight out of trollpasta wiki or if the writer is actually trying

the only thing that saves it is just the barebones idea and the first few paragraphs, 4.5/10