Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25825682-20151102034829/@comment-25825682-20151104041906

I appreciate your review and the fact you spotted my grammar mistakes. The style I wrote this story was a bit different, but not too far away from my usual. This was my first attempt at a first person POV, so I was a bit sketchy on how it would turn out.

Anyway, I'll fix the grammar fallacies probably tonight or tomorrow, and then see if it'll be published. Thanks again.