Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25947144-20150618220154/@comment-26510059-20150618221559

Umbrello wrote: Lady Margaery TyrelI wrote: tbh i got bored after the first sentence Please don't post in threads on the writer's workshop if you don't have any constructive criticism. That is what this section is for - helping people with their pastas. You comment is not helpful in any way. i am helping him, he needs a better first sentence