Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180912183148/@comment-36393004-20180913173236

DrBobSmith wrote: L0CKED334,

IMHO, it's not bad but you can do better. Go through a careful editing.

There are so many similar water nymph legends. Rusalka come to mind. Also the Lorelei. I did a quick search for the two you mentioned and a general water nymph search. The Rusalka and Morgens seem closer to the creature I have described. Not really sure how to incorporate that into the story without completely rewriting my ending and I kind of like my ending. I will go through it again though.