Talk:Electric Funeral/@comment-24872430-20190704042136

General Quality - 15/25 - It's serviceable, but that's about it. Many sentences are either vague or blunt to the point of being boring, and while the majority of the story is fine, it just feels a bit impersonal.

Horror Factor - 5/25 - It's not scary. I'm not really sure how else to put it. The themes in the story have the potential for scares, but aside from some light dips into imagery, it doesn't deliver much.

Lyrical Interpretation - 18/25 - To be fair, you didn't have much to go on with the lyrics of the song, which were ripped from Revelations. So, high enough of a score. It could have been expanded a bit more and taken to some logical conclusions that weren't reached.

Entertainment Value - 10/25 - It's just... boring to me. Sorry. I was able to read up to a certain point, but then I just felt heavy. Total Score : 48/100 The story takes the themes and backstory of the song and runs it's course, but doesn't do much else. It's politically-driven, which is fine, but a lack of detail, build-up, or setting really takes it's toll. For what it is, it's a nice enough reiteration of 1984 with a modern capitalist twist; but as a horror story, it fails to deliver.