Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25890122-20150611214940/@comment-25170312-20150611231438

Forgive me, but I can't tell if this is serious or not. Example: at the end it says "maybe the world will know my name" but you called the thing Schlitt, and then you called it hisawzqzssqsqs. So basically, we don't know the thing's name, and the names you give it are silly. Plus, you let it out of a garbage can and immediately recgonize it as the living embodiment of anger, chaos, and fire. That makes no sense. And why would it ask you questions? Why would the living embodiement of anger, chaos, and fire bother to ask a human anything? Nothing makes any sense in this pasta.

If this is indeed intended to be comedy/horror, then you might have something if you could make it funnier. Again, forgive me if it's supposed to be 100% serious.