Talk:A Leak in the Ceiling/@comment-35911608-20200221010429

A Leak in the Ceiling - by Levi Salvos (#9, The Hermit)

This was an incredible story. The suspense was excellently portrayed through Rose’s dementia, and you kept giving us enough information during each “reset” so that it didn’t get annoying. While I think the use of theme was a bit literal, the Hermit is about isolation when you get down to it, so in that sense I thought it was incorporated well. The way that you cover self-reflection is also interesting, since we learn so much about what had happened, but Rose never learns a thing because she keeps forgetting.

This story was not horrific, it was creepy, and it was consistently creepy, which I loved. I just wish there was more revealed, but I suppose that’s a good thing (that and I am aware of the word limit haha). Still, a fantastic entry.

Style - 5/5

Creepiness - 4/5

Enjoyment - 5/5

Use of Theme - 4/5

Grand Total: 18/20