User talk:EmpyrealInvective

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Thank you! I'll be sure to do that next time, I appreciate it!

Firsttoleave (talk) 21:25, June 26, 2015 (UTC) Firsttoleave

Clown Doll story concern
Hello! I am brand new to start writing creepypasta but have been reading over 100 creepypasta, I realize that although I am probably a noob at this so maybe my story was cheesy or something, but as far as I can see my story has NO errors in spelling

My story might have random words in it like kitchen or something because my auto correct is extremely screwed up and loves to change things so that's why my story might be weird, I also realize yourself has writin good creepypasta too, but if you only excluded my story I worked my butt on for a solid 3 hours straight because only YOU think my creepypasta wasn't scary then you should be ashamed for that, if not, please sent me a copy of my story with corrections that show where the errors are, thank you.

Mr.HattyHattington (talk) 22:06, June 26, 2015 (UTC)Mr.HattyHattington

Re:
Thanks and I understand if you don't have any time.

Classical Retard ==&gt; Dammit, you're cold. 23:06, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

I completely understand...

...

Completely.

UNWASHED PURITY ==&gt; HIGHLIGHTS OF THE SEASON 23:12, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Okee. ;)

UNWASHED PURITY ==&gt; HIGHLIGHTS OF THE SEASON 23:14, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

what do u what commenting on my account bra

what do u what commenting on my account bra

Thanks for deleting it, I realized I bent some rules.

You deleted another one of my pastas...
Seriously? AGAIN? Do you know how long it took to type it, read it, and revise it? And now you just delete it within seconds? I'm getting fed up with you. I actually tried. TELL me what's wrong with it. TELL ME. It violated NONE of your stupid little "quality standard" shit. What the fuck? SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 02:37, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, I see how it is. Fuck you too. What kind of fucking cocksucker lives on a Wiki site and can't get past a few grammar mistakes? You? Oh okay. You're a pathetic loser who manages a pointless Wiki. Go ahead, ban me. I don't care. BAN ME!!! I'll be HAPPY to get banned from this shithole. Fuck you.

Fuck your signature.

Actually, I don't care anymore. At least I have a life, unlike you. What kind of fuckhead spends all of his time on a meaningless website? You, of course. Goodbye.

Again, fuck your signature.

Disney World 2012
To be honest, assessing myself on the errors of my pasta will get me no where. I would like to know why my pasta was deleted, since the site said I should ask to receive specifics. You say it might be obvious but that could also be a matter of perspective. So If you could please tell me what was wrong with Disney World 2012, I'd be most grateful.

Unnaturalist (talk) 05:07, June 27, 2015 (UTC) Unnaturalist

Again another comlll
You know, why the hell do you even get to be admin if you just troll people for fun by deleting there accounts?! Thats f***d up!!>:(

The formatting, grammer, punctuation, and pretty much everything was just bad on that story. Separating the story into paragraphs properly, using proper capitalization and punctuation will help loads. Also, no one deletes accounts here. I don't know what you're on about there. ClericofMadness (talk) 06:11, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

This Page?
What exactly is this page? And why is it a user's subpage? MrDupin (talk) 13:12, June 27, 2015 (UTC)


 * About a year ago Nick deleted it, but Skelly undeleted it, so I'm not gonna' mess with it.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 14:05, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Deletion- "And as their blood lay on the walls"
Hello. Like many others, I am here because you deleted my story. I looked at the list like you suggested, and I could not find a reason why my story was deleted. I had a fairly long title yet that was obviously not the reason for deletion. If it was grammatical errors I have to point out that I was writing a poem and some necessary but different grammar to regular stories was included. I got a message saying that "no edit summary was given" so I'm wondering if that had anything to do with deletion. I am not sure if it was clichéd or not. Somebody else said that many poems were getting deleted recently, and I would really like to know why. Is it your personal preference against poetry? Or is it just me? I came back here after a year of being inactive and now I know why I stopped writing pastas on this site. Please reply soon as I have a very short temper and I am doing everything to suppress it right now.

--Harobinson (talk) 14:15, June 27, 2015 (UTC)harobinson

Hi, Thank you for spending time on that response. It means a lot. I was about to go full caps on you but I took a walk and thought about your constructive criticism. Thank you for helping me improve myself, --Harobinson (talk) 18:00, June 27, 2015 (UTC)harobinson

P.s. Do me a favor and don't review my next piece.

I cannot believe you.
Ever heard of patience? No? Thought not. I was EDITING MY STORY WHEN YOU DELETE IT! YOUR GODDAMN QUALITY STANDARDS COULD NOT WAIT FOR ME TO FINISH, HUH? I TRIED BEING CALM. I TRIED BEING NICE. BUT TIS IS ABSOLUTELY RIDICULOUS! YOU DON'T MISS AN OPPORTUNITY TO DELETE SOMEONE'S WORK, DO YOU? MY POEM WAS TERRIBLE, I KNOW, BUT DELETING A PAGE WHEN I WAS NOT FINISHED WITH IT YET? THE ONLY REASON YOU HAVE ALL THOSE BADGES IS BECAUSE YOU WILL STOP AT NOTHING TO DELETE MINE- AND OTHERS- PIECES! THIS IS WHY THIS SITE IS NOT MORE POPULAR THAN IT IS! PEOPLE LIKE YOU DELETING EVERYTHING YOU ENCOUNTER. IT IS AMAZING HOW FAST YOU CAN PRESS THE DELETE BUTTON! YOU MUST BE A VERY SKILLED HIMAN BEING! YOU DON'T EVEN GIVE PEOPLE A CHANCE. I THOUGHT THE SO CALLED "ADVICE" YOU GAVE ME WAS ACTUALLY TO GENUINELY HELP ME! BUT NO, ALL YOU CARE ABOUT IS CLEANSING THIS SIGHT OF THE FILTH! YOU ARE LIKE A KKK MEMBER, AND MY WRITNG IS A CROWD OF BLACK GAY JEWS! SHAME ON YOU, I HOPE YOU ARE HAPPY. NOW I KNOW WHY I DID NOT VISIT THIS SITE FOR A YEAR! BECAUSE OF PEOPLE LIKE YOU! Maybe I will return in 2016, and by that time I hope you are beat to death with the ban hammer. Get a job, --Harobinson (talk) 20:33, June 27, 2015 (UTC)harobinson
 * "YOU ARE LIKE A KKK MEMBER, AND MY WRITNG IS A CROWD OF BLACK GAY JEWS!"
 * Very mature. 20:39, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind
But I've posted your stories here. Just figured I'd tell you that, so you'd know. Senjumaru Shutara 22:59, June 27, 2015 (UTC)


 * No problem. Senjumaru Shutara 23:08, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Please Ban Me.
Please. I'm sick of you. Just do it. SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:21, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

I Apologize
I have realized that I have let my temper get the better of me. For that I'm sorry. I still am a little ticked off, but I guess it's OK. I could see why you deleted them now. The anger has cleared up and I made a mistake. I'll remove the negative stuff I've said from my profile.

SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:36, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Ah! Once again I'm sorry for my immature temper tantrum. I do have one question though. How do I get my story back to put in the workshop? SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:46, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, so I've finished revising my story. I believe it's good enough to upload, but your opinion may differ. Check it out? SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 06:46, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

You're Doing A Good Job
Hey, I saw those mean, unnecessary comments on your page and would personally like to thank you for keeping the site up to par. :) Surprisingly enough, the rants were pretty well written, with little grammar and spelling errors. XD But anyway, you're doing a good job.  4 for you, Empty. You go, Empty.

TaylorE628 (talk) 01:37, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Chat
Can you hop on this chat real quick? I was hoping you could give me a quick run-down on a story I'm writing. It's not the finished product. Senjumaru Shutara 21:10, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Justvlad (talk) 21:25, June 28, 2015 (UTC)justvlad

I was wondering if you could post some criticism on this post about that story that you just deleted :D i'm new here but i like to write alot and i'm more than happy to learn new things !

Delete these?
These are unused pictures, would you delete them?

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/File:Hi_lol.jpg

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/File:Yoloswagger.jpg


 * Ok, right on.  Inside there is thunder in your heart   01:34, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   00:41, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Talk Page
Hello. I've noticed that you have restored my talk page. I don't mind, but I'd prefer that it would be erased. At LEAST the "troll" parts of it, such as the Tupac one, and the block that my little brother gave me. Thanks. SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:24, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

EDIT: I guess you put a message on my wall as I sent this one. It's pretty unfortunate, but I can live with it. Thanks SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:25, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

But is there any way that I can save myself from the embarrassment if a user comes on my talk page? It really hurts my reputation to see that I've been blocked for "racism" (even though it wasn't me) and the poor-quality "Tupac" troll pasta.

SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:28, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Ah. I completely understand now. And the KKK guy was ridiculous. I want to punch my past self for leaving that stupid message on his page, actually agreeing with him. Hopefully users don't have time to read the list of negative talk-subjects on my page. Thanks

SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:45, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

A Quick Question
Geez, I feel like I'm spamming your talk page :(... but I do have one last question.

Is my pasta changed enough to post, or does it have to go through the deletion appeal process?

SBPTSAngryGermanKid (talk) 01:47, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Redirect pages
There's these pages which only contain links to the properly titled page. I know you sometimes delete these. I don't know if you always delete them or what. I leave a redirect for pages more than a week old, I move a lot of pages, so if I should stop leaving these behind, let me know.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Down_By_the_Bay?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Talk:The_Vainity?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Vainity?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/What_Is_Love?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/My_Ex_is_Haunting_Me?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Chess_no_Kira_-_Chess%27s_Killer?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Talk:3AM?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/3AM?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/She_Found_Her_Way_Into_My_Home?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Talk:What_If?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/What_If?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Talk:Just_Like_Everyday!?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Just_Like_Everyday!?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Talk:Knock/Full_Story?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Knock/Full_Story?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Talk:This_Is_a_Test?redirect=no

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/This_Is_a_Test?redirect=no

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   02:31, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the help. I really appreciate it. Nosaelg (talk) 02:42, June 29, 2015 (UTC)Nosaelg

Put it on trollpasta, empy? It was a mere joke anyhow Joshlouski (talk) 02:44, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Help on my story?
Hey man, I made a little story called The Real Hell. I saw that you didn't exactly enjoy it, but I'd like to know why and know how to fix it. Thanks.

Demonunicorn (talk) 04:40, June 29, 2015 (UTC)Demonunicorn

Thanks for suggestions/feedback!
I read your suggestions and it really helped me a lot. I'm letting you know I'm resubmitting the pasta tommorow, but it is revised, so it would be unjustified to suspend me.

ComDev wants to host a writing contest on Creepypasta
Hey, I’m reaching out to you and ClericofMadness because you are the most recently active bureaucrats. I’m part of the Community Development team and we wanted to do a promotion with you guys. Would you be interested in hosting a writing contest? You wouldn’t have to do any extra work, we would just host it on this wiki. We’re partnering with people behind the upcoming sequels to Paranormal Activity and Sinister. They want to sponsor a horror-themed writing contest… which would be good publicity for them, and good exposure for you guys. No word on prizes yet, but at the very least it would be cool to reach a larger audience. We’re asking you guys first because this wiki has a really strong community, but we can ask other wikis if you guys are opposed. I’m just gauging interest right now. I need to hear back ASAP. - Billy Arrowsmith (Talk), 23:31, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

I'll point the Community wikia profile does seem to indicate this has some degree of authenticity. I'm just an Administrator but I think this is a nice chance for the wikia. --&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 00:00, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

About We Go Bump Volume 3
Hey, Empy. I haven't been on the site in a while, but I was wondering if Cleric ever posted a follow up to this thread http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:412810. Thanks!

The Damn Batman (talk) 00:28, June 30, 2015 (UTC)The Damn Batman

Thanks, I appreciate it.

The Damn Batman (talk) 00:33, June 30, 2015 (UTC)The Damn Batman

Writing Advice Blogs
I noticed the project page was protected. So I'm passing this to you to review. Also, can you change my section name on there?

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Senjumaru_Shutara/On_the_Subject_of_Character_Development

Senjumaru Shutara 02:01, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

I love this guy here, this Travis, Empy, dude, and I don't care who knows it. I also think this wiki is the best goddamn creepyasta site around--period
Just checked my skype. I think you are reading me way wrong, bro, let's talk   HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:18, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Hello sir. I am here to ask a few questions that I shall get to right away.

1. Could you maybe give me a few pointers to helping me write a good story?

2. Have you written any stories?

3. Would it ever be a requirment to insert "...s" 24/7?

Please ignore that last question. That was pretty stupid.

What?: Chat
What happened to the chat in the wikia? I was sure this wiki had a chat. Also it's gone in some other wiki's too. Something happened?


 * Done  Inside there is thunder in your heart   05:29, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

LizzyZeDarc (talk) 05:23, June 30, 2015 (UTC) LizzyZeDarc

Tied by a Red String of Fate
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:477436

Mind giving an opinion on this real quick? Senjumaru Shutara 05:54, June 30, 2015 (UTC)


 * Anyways Empy, if you're still on, I'd like to ask you something over at my sandbox wiki's chat real quick. Senjumaru Shutara 07:33, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

JamestheYeti's message
Hey sorry about the quick upload after deletion, I am unfamiliar with editing Wikis. I know perfectly well that my initial upload of the story was an unreadable table breaking mess, and was in the process of trying to work it into an acceptable format when you deleted it, and bla bla bla. Anyway, If I upload a different one that is not a table breaking mess, is that cool? Also I will be posting in the writer's workshop and gleaning what I can from the forums. Again though, my bad, new with editing wikis

James The Yeti (talk) 06:26, June 30, 2015 (UTC)James The YetiJames The Yeti (talk) 06:26, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Request For a Critique
I would like some feedback on this beginning sequel I have for The Last Day of October--Bookstore Horror, especially about this particular character's accent. Should I just stick with standard English?

Still Untitled Sequel

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 17:04, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Vandalism
This user just vandalized something > Mysteriouspinkfluff

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   00:11, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Vandals at the Gate
Not a big deal.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   00:42, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Just ran across this quote, thought you'd like it:
"Hanging is too good for a man who makes puns; he should be drawn and quoted"--Fred Allen

Can you tell me why my story was deleted? As far as I saw there were no grammatical or spelling errors and it wasn't unoriginal. Just want to know Flutters 021 (talk) 01:46, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

QS Page
It says "not too much so that it doesn't halt the story line." That should be changed.

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   01:47, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Crappypasta?
What do I do if I find a story that is, or may be, a crappypasta? Boadicea the Warrior Queen (talk) 21:58, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Chat Again
I need to run something I'd like to propose by you. I'd just go straight to proposing it, but I don't feel it's in my authority to do so for this particular thing, and even if it was, I feel it isn't my place. Same place as always. Senjumaru Shutara 22:52, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Nightmare Rose Deletion
Hi, I'm Dark-Nyan-Kitty, as I'm sure you can tell by my username.

I attempted to write a Creepypasta story directly on here, which was probably a little stupid of me for not doing it in Word or a website that will show me when I accidentally misspell something or make a grammar mistake.

My story was called "Nightmare Rose" and after uploading it, it was immediately taken down. A friend whom I sent the link to was able to get it up right before you took it down and said they liked it. That's not my point here, a bit obviously.

I only wrote it on here, so I can't get it back. Again, I say this is stupid of me.

I'm asking for a deletion appeal mainly so I can find what's wrong with it and hopefully fix it.

I've gone through a lot of the links to see what it was that got it banned. And I think I know the reason. I believe it was because it was trying to introduce a new character? Or maybe something I'm overlooking.

I guess what I'm asking for here is a more direct explanation as to what was wrong with it, and hopefully a way to fix it.

If I can't get it back up, could you please send me a copy of it or something? It was literally the only copy.

Thank you for reading this far if you have. I guess I really am an idiot, though. Not properly proofreading and making up a character is probably what dragged me down.

Anyway, I better get off of this message before I start typing in hysterics.

Thank you if you are able to send feedback and such. I really just would like a copy of the story back to build off of it.

Dark-Nyan-Kitty (talk) 23:13, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

I sent Emp ten puns hoping one would make him laugh
No pun in ten did  HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 00:47, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

They don't call me Punboldt for nothing. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:09, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Editing
I wanted to start editing on this place, but what counts as a proper edit on this Wiki?

 Skepolo 01:37, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

A little help
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:478605 Senjumaru Shutara 07:13, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Redirection)
Roses Are Red < unused redirect. Would you delete it?

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   12:04, July 3, 2015 (UTC)


 * BEN Drowned: "gist" is spelled as "jist". Would you fix that?

 Inside there is thunder in your heart   12:08, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the advice. I actually tried there first but kept getting numerous errors whenever I tried to upload. The site looks pretty empty which is why I tried here. I think I'll just keep the Holders stories for me and put out some original stuff instead.

TeslanTeslan606 (talk) 12:18, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry
Ages ago, I noticed LOLSkeletons added some picture to one of my pastas (i.e. an electric chair). So from then on, I thought users were supposed to add pictures to any articles they could as 'good editing' stands.

Anyway, thanks for letting me know.

LUCAS THE PERVY DRUNK CAT  ➾ babe let’s get high together ➾  18:21, July 3, 2015 (UTC)