Talk:On Mirrors and Dreams/@comment-5927167-20131206065500

Thanks for the feedback. I know that I rushed this but am unsure how to slow it down. Too much detail, I feel, would make the story tedious. Also, this was the first pasta I submitted here; I think at the time I thought all pastas were supposed to be short. I don't know. Anyway, when I am done tweaking Mr. Bones I will improve this one.