Talk:My Christmas Tale/@comment-9041013-20181129223822

K so... Icy... you have failed me again, my son :(

I was expecting a Santa Claus reveal, but instead it's that goat man thing everyone's raving about, Krampus... Dang you!

All jokes aside, that was a nice little story. Couldn't say I was too surprised, I did this the evil twist coming from some distance and I was expecting some plain Dark magic Santa... thing... but you pulled of A demonic(?) saint Nick with undertones of Lovecraft.

The execution was perfect, pretty much, maybe you missed a comma or two... but other than that the story works about perfectly to be honest.

I know you're gonna ask me about the Lovecraft part, so here goes, the Deep Ones are a fish humanoid creature in his universe that stroke a deal with some town, after shit went sideways they owned the town and started mating with humans a lot, half breeds grow up human and after a while become fishlike too. Which I was reminded of when it said "Maybe I fear that I will become like him someday." kind of made me think, yeee.... you get demonic super powers for Christmas yeet.

Most importantly, it keeps Santa CPs fresh, haven't seen THIS exact take on the idea of a "bad" Santa being who is also mostly human, so kudos on originality.

This gave me an idea, perhaps I'll use it in the next years holiday season ;)