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Mmpratt99 deviantart wrote: I got a question though about sentences such as this one--“Come on, Olive! You win, we give up!” another voice yelled. “Olly olly oxen free!”--where the sentence is interrupted midway by an unknown person speaking. You have to leave the speaker's sentence un-capitalized?

Oh, my mistake! I thought it was all one person, one quote. No, you capitalize it. You could even make a new paragraph. You could have it like this if you want-

“Olivia!” a faint voice shouted through the trees. “Hey, Olivia! Where are you pipsqueak? Come on, Olive! You win, we give up!”

Another voice yelled, “Olly olly oxen free!”

Do I have it right? I apologize for leading you astray there.

It's been a while since I saw it too (though I found that scene while flipping through the channels). I just recently found out that Vincent D'Onofrio played "Thor" in that movie. I thought, "Are you serious!?" The next time it's on I'll be sure to try to catch that part!

Did they have one on Antiques Roadshow? That would have been cool! No, I saw it on Pawn Stars and Auction Kings (which I wish they'd bring back). What I found interesting was that people would have a kit for the home and a smaller kit for the coach. Yep! Travel-sized vampire killing kits!