Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180714064900/@comment-34823985-20180714170148

Thanks everyone. Lots to work with here. I haven't been happy with any of my attempts at a ghost story yet, but I think I'm close. Your combined efforts have touched upon all the issues I had with the story and then some.

I'll try to write less 'Yoda-ish", Bloody. LOL! Thanks again y'all. :)