Board Thread:Site Questions/@comment-29196722-20170805110258/@comment-29196722-20170809100731

To everyone that said their answers I thank you.

Hmm maybe pitch and sell are poor word choices, what I was looking for was to make this Creepypasta sound actually like a Creepypasta but that's on my part.

@ChristianWallis Thanks for that.

Maybe I should go focus on the Creepypasta's stories more than how it should sound but thanks again.

@SigmentAlpha That is true, many Creepypastas like Mr. Bigmouth if I recall him correctly does not kill you but rather convinced you to do it yourself(Jonathan is right, I haven't read enough Creepypastas).

It does take away the point of making a Creepypasta or a charater to be specific if you say that they just need a hug. Thanks again.

@JonathanNash I say thanks a lot do I? It sounds repetitive and cold if I would say thanks but honestly your tip is more thorough, specific and very helpful.

I'll see what I can do though.