Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24037587-20140911164319

I posted my first draft and after some greatly needed advice I have updated it with more details and showing how my character changed. Please let me know if there is anything else I should add before trying to upload it on here thank you.

here is the current updated Story -> http://ladymelodyuchiha.deviantart.com/art/It-s-Insanity-Now-Rewrite-481107298 