Talk:The Great Occam Cobb/@comment-26177862-20151024035210

Probably the only creepypasta that made me feel an emotion towards a character; Cobb, in this case. The story is long, yet it never gets boring. I would still suggest doing a complete proofreading of it because there are many typos and grammar mistakes that went unchecked. Other than that, it's s imply fantastic.

SPOILERS (my opinion):

'He chased his dream of learning "magic" so relentlessly, he missed the point where he had to stop, and went too far. After Jonathan turned his own words against him, Cobb must have finally realized he was no longer "fulfilling his dream"; he was no longer doing his acts out of his love for magic, but merely performing them for the sake of saving himself from the Teneborsi.'

'He knew his "dream" died when he decided to walk the path of dark magic. Even though he was willingly committing such terrible actions, he was still a good person at heart, suffering a lot because of this.'

'It only makes sense that in the end he turns himself in to the creatures after finally accepting he wasn't living for his dreams and ambitions anymore. Regardless of how things seemed to have gone wrong somewhere along the way, he did truly love magic after all.'

All in all, I loved the story and the characters. Great work.