Talk:Cartoon/@comment-25052433-20150123231352

At first I was a little on the fence with this one. However, upon completion, I have to admit, it's very original. The grammar and spacing could use a bit more polishing, but as far as the story goes, it scores well in my opinion.

You spoke very true about young kids and their relationships to cartoon characters. In some children, their favorite cartoons become almost an emtional crutch, which clearly happened in your story here. Couple that with unbridled imagination of a child, and you have a good recipe for a horror story.

You kept the plot here very simple, but it worked well for you. No over the top theatrics, just a simple murder based on a kid's warped sense of reality.

Length and tempo were good as well, making this an enjoyable read. Good work.