Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27379909-20151223023230/@comment-27403562-20151223085644

I rewrote a couple of sentences.

'So, then i cleaned the home button. After that it started spazing out, and I jokingly said maybe great grandmas haunting this. '

But then I started asking for the wifi but it was on but never worked

A better way to phrase that would be "I asked if the wi-fi was on,she said it was yet it still wouldn't work."

After that, my apps started switching all over, on thier own.

thier should be their