Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20190131005118/@comment-9041013-20190131223228

Are there any serial killers named Samuel? Cause this was lit lit lit lit! as the kids would say.

Over all, it's probably the most realistic disturbed kind of, uhhh Psychopathic killer stories (or rather, backstories) that I've seen. (Better than my "A Letter for a Devil with a Hat)  It really has that Ted Bundy vibe to it, mixed with more disturbing attributes from the likes of A. Fish and J. Dahmer. And even a tad of Odd ball Eddy (Gein).

It doesn't rush with the plot and the lack of explicit imagery (both physical and mental from a characters' stand point) only adds to the creepiness of the story.

I have no idea if this was intentional but again, it played off as if someone was trying to document the life of a prolific serial killer for a script or a fictional book. Down to the "old van for the bad guy" and "he's just an odd ball" tropes. This is good.

The whole thing is pretty good. I don't like the title in perticular because it does not apply exactly to the story. His hunger is more of a desire to do extreme stuff for the thrill (first from being a rockstar type kid in school and later on in darker ways). It's a minor thing though.

I have this idea for a detained serial killer interview where he pretends to be full blown bonkers as an explanation for his actions. Might use Sammy here if you don't mind... (I'm also open for collab projects ;) )