Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26197675-20150312205305/@comment-24976741-20150313010956


 * blink* *blink* k, so?

I honestly have to say that I found your story disinteresting and typical. First off, I'm sure Youtube would have probably caught that by some point, especially if the thumbnails were, and I quote "something you would find on normal porn for normal people and all the titles were really vague". (unless off course they were too busy harassing another famous youtuber over something that doesn't even break any of the rules).

Even then, I'm sure if you managed to find it (assuming that it didn't take you long to find it because of the way you phrased the sentence) then other people would have most likely have reported the video, the police would have been involve, and the channel would have gotten shut down.

Also for your own good I just want to point out that unless you want to get flack, that you change the description of the thumbnails for two reasons. The first reason, not so bad of a reason because it could mean that you are just pretending to have this type of knowledge, but how do you know what a "porn thumbnail" looks like, and the way you phrased it as a "normal porn thumbnail" suggests that you've been around that side of the internet quite a few times to know the difference. Reason two, Youtube suggests videos to you based on what type of content you watch (if you watch gaming videos, then you are going to get suggested gaming related things) so getting suggested this type of video begs the question, just what do you look up on Youtube?

Getting back to the main topic here, I'm sure the dad wouldn't be stupid enough to post these videos if he was beating his son in some of them, which is why we would assume why he didn't call the police about this issue to begin with. Just posting these videos alone showing the son hurt himself with the father just sits back and films it already shows how he is going to get arrested. He's basically making a problem that could have gone bad with the police alone to a problem that the whole world now knows.

Btw, gas mask just screams "future murder" the way you put it into the sentence. Also, please be more descriptive when it comes to telling a story, it just takes away from the scary aspect that your trying to convey.