Talk:31/@comment-36393004-20181101023459

Ok, your last entry is so in depth that I fear there will not be many who read it. I know you were trying to set a scene of a small town that knows everything and has a secret. You accomplished that but also drove your reader into an endless string of needless information. Almost all of the first few paragraphs have nothing to do with the end result. Plus, with the documented dates it seems like a police report but police reports would not hae all this personal experience information if it was not pertinant to the case. It's entertaining for someone who takes the time to read it but I'm afraid you will lose most readers halfway through.

On a side note: You have done an amazing job bringing all these stories out a day at a time. I can tell that the first fifteen days were carefully crafted and after that it felt like you were struggling for ideas and rushing to put things out. This was a marvelous endevor but I would suggest taking a month to make one good story instead of 31. You have the talent to make something amazing in that time and I would love to see a month long effort. I would be proud of this too though, don't get me wrong, you have amazed me at every turn. This compelation should be savored and I can only imagine I will reread some of these stories for years to come. Don't be discouraged by what you have done. If nothing else, you can say "I did that" and very few people can. So, I pat you on the back for that.