Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35911608-20190527170905/@comment-35911608-20190527183825

DrBobSmith wrote: My pleasure.

FYI, a saiga is an antelope. Many weapon names are from animals. Colt the manufacturer made the python, cobra and anaconda. Taurus the manufacturer makes the Raging Bull line. There are plenty of others. That might work into your masks if you are into it. The AK-47 type weapon is nicknamed "Goat Horns" in Mexico. While that's a very fun idea, I don't think I want to get too into the details of the weapons in this story, since it's from the POV of just some normal bank teller, and I want the narrator to be more broadly relatable/understandable to the readers, as to make them feel more like they're the one in the situation, rather than just reading about a character.

But I'm jotting that fact down, it may come back someday. Thank you for sharing it and reviewing this. I've been editing the draft as I waited for a response, so the second draft may be up shortly.