Talk:Raven Ranger

I love your reference to one Edgar Allen Poe in this story. Very nice I must say! The story itself now. For starts, I thought overall that it was a little too rushed, and that there was time excluded to go into greater detail about the town, the raven, the protagonist and others. The story just kinda jumps into itself if that makes sense? Other than that though you did use wonderful sentences and brilliant description. The concept as a whole is also well thought out I must say. So congratulations on that. There has been improvement from your other two stories and there is definitely evidence that you took great time to work on this, and you really are trying! Keep it up please. I look forward to reading more. 8/10. - CrashingCymbal (talk) 12:30, May 6, 2013 (UTC)