Talk:Ascending and Descending/@comment-26437574-20150919230623/@comment-4138999-20150920144448

The narrative in this story isn't first person or the main guy telling it. I the writer am like a god in this story, I see and know all so I can tell the tale. I do accept your criticism though as I now know it makes the story less believable, although you could imagine the evil monks told the story to warn people.