Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20180930033305/@comment-35711173-20180930101026

Bloody Spaghetti,

I have been freezing cold in the high desert snow in the USA. I do mean FREEZING.

What's a Berlingo?

"Making sure there were no cars in sight, David took one of his hands off the wheel and looked at his watch, it showed a quarter to Eight P.M" What are the rules with capitalizing times? Would 7:45 PM be clearer and shorter?

"through the speakers of his vehicular stereo." The word Vehicular sounds strange here. Suggest "from his car's stereo." Speakers are implicit.