Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25208426-20140721203603/@comment-24957984-20140721220155

1- Gaming creepypastas are not accepted anymore, because of the unoriginal and easy-to-make plot.

2-This is a HUGE wall of text. You need to make paragraphs.

3-Not knowing English well is no excuse. You coul've used a spellcheck tool on Word or in other websites, at the very least.

4-Even though it doesn't have the gore cliché, it's still not scary, and like most theory pastas, the story feels weak. However, you can give this pasta a try on | this wiki, after fixing the entire story.