Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33488654-20180916191751/@comment-33488654-20180917104155

BloodySpghetti wrote: Ugh, this is more of a comedy skit about the collab than it is anything else. I don't see it flying here unless you make it into a more serious story.

Why is the staircase guardian a Shiba Inu werewolf by the way?

You need a lot of meat on the bones you've given us here, seriously, this seems just rushed and well, lazy. Also, maybe leave aside the staircase theme, focus on just being stuck in a house like structure with each floor representing a different obstacle for the pratagonist. It will be similar enough, yet still independent from the collab and other similar stories.

Add more descriptions, make us care more about the pain of the pratagonist.

For now you basically have an idea, not a plot. Oh, I understand.....