Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20150414041052/@comment-4849011-20150423000332

Hey, sorry I haven't visited in a couple of days! At first I was going to say the first paragraph needed to be tweaked a little, but reading it again I think it's fine. Sure, it jumps right in, but that gives it a "Once upon a time..." type quality, if you know what I mean.