Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26112985-20150720213348/@comment-26193563-20150722041042

I sort of read stories too fast, so I very often skip small but important details. Sorry for that. Since I also don't read too carefully, would you mind if you pointed out that detail?

James' character is a bit unlikable, due to his drug use. I think it should be fleshed out somewhat? You should ask other users for different opinions, as my solo one isn't really reliable.

I don't have any new pastas in mind yet, but if I ever do I'll be sure to notify you. :)

Anyways, story is still going strong, pretty enjoyable.