Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4499225-20150301064232/@comment-26141044-20150301065550

Provider92 wrote: Fair point. The beginning should be easy enough to rework, anywhere else you feel needs less description? So you are going to make an already nonexsient story even shorter and with less detail? I would suggest either expanding this further to where this would be an actual Creepypasta or scraping this.