Talk:¿Eso es Todо?/ES/@comment-26433339-20150525162751

This story was incredible, the details, the plot, and progression were great, the twist in the end was on point, and very creative, goes beyond the norms of cliché, overall this is what a creepypast should be like, not overly clichéd with the scare factor or gore, this story has all of that, just like the goldilocks forlmula, not too much scary/gory/ crap, and not to little, but just enough to add suspence, and effect to the stoy, it was beautifully crafted. but the english version was, not the best, the grammer could have been worked on. but i read the spanish version... awesome, 9.5/10 for the spanish, and a 8.5 for the english (mostly mechanical errors)