Talk:Fog/@comment-25288835-20140814044530

That... was... GREAT!

The viewpoint of the narrator was well-crafted and grammatically pleasing. Unlike too much of the crap on here, which is lazily-worded and devolves into grimdark gore-fests far too easily, this story actually drew me in and kept me there, with just the right mixture of mystery as to the circumstances leading to the conditions of the crew and how the narrator remained unaffected.

I loved it. The author should post more. Seriously! Better than 80% of the stuff I've read on here, easily.