Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20190309004843/@comment-33904527-20190309233158

You have clearly missed my point entirely. I'm not going to waste any more time arguing with you about this, because my points have quite blatantly fell on ignorant ears.

"You came here to be told this was perfect" The logic of your arguments are degrading rapidly. I wanted to be told this was perfect? Or maybe I just wanted fair criticism and not a paragraph of useless nonsense like "he's being overly-cautious" that benefits nobody. Why are you obsessed with these minute details? Why are they just so important to you that you just have to scrutinise them in everything I write? It's not useful. It doesn't help me in any way.

My point to you is that these tiny little imperfections do not matter. It has no bearing on the story whether the protagonist looks out of a window. You might as well be slamming your head on the keyboard and trying to make a valid point from the jumble of nonsense that comes up.

Maybe just because you can't get it through your thick, monkey skull why something is placed within a story doesn't mean it has no meaning or purpose.

I completely understand that this story has its flaws. Other users like NedWolfkin and DrBobSmith are good at pointing this kind of stuff out. Take a leaf from their page. Every story has its flaws. I will work on fixing these flaws. Your asinine remarks will not help this.