Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181020071418/@comment-9041013-20181020105820

Hm interesting, shit starts happening, I'm gonna guess it's another appearence of the sin nombre. Not bad.

The story's coming along nicely, you do show maturity as a writing, coming up with realistic characters. In the form of Daniel and Joe, along with the people in Jan's story.

I dont have much to add.

I'll be waiting for the next one