Talk:I Am Sarah/@comment-31067217-20170124221406

This sounds promising and has some ok aspects to it but I feel that it could use some work,I have a male friend named jaime and I'm going to show him this tomorrow lol no but seriously it's good and somewhat creepy but add more I don't know make us feel dredd for marty and Lara and although I like the monster it would of been better if say there were just 2 or more coffins buried on top of each other and this was a crazed serial killer twisted game of kidnapping people and burying them alive as some form of torture before death.