Talk:Pale Faces/@comment-4523370-20130928205512

This is just fantastic! I read this one a few months ago and found it again just to reread it. Every time I do I think I understand it a little better. Anyway. There were a few typos but not anything I couldn't figure out. But the descriptions were great and I could almost picture myself in Jack's shoes. Wonderful! The thought of a parasite in us is frightening without a whole story attached so this is just ... great! 9.5/10