Talk:Dogscape/@comment-7712458-20140514154542

I'm gonna be quite honest here: I did not like this story

It was not scary. It was just plain weird. The point of view with characters seemed to switch from entry to entry so I had no idea if Dok was still talking or if it was someone else. I also did not like the misogynistic themes present in here with the women. Grant it, I understand the fact they needed the women was to repopulate, but with repopulation in mind they seemed to forget that the women were human too and the way he referred to the woman he found as "My Woman" upset me and angered me, even WITH the context of everything that was going on. Maybe that was the intention? I just didn't really like it, Dok or whoever that was could have easily treated her like he would if he were to meet another man plus be lovers. He didn't need to rape her or treat her like an animal. I think this would have been alot better as an actual story rather than journal entries. It also could have done without the misogyny.

4/10