Talk:The Ultimate Hunter/@comment-25112232-20140627183050

I'm going to agree with DuncanAernisMaleron on this. The story, although done to death (puns!), is decent. It needs more of a flare, though. The best part of writing a story is knowing that your readers are enraptured by the characters and events taking place, and that they are emotionally invested in the story in one way or another.

6/10