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Bon Bon A short story by CrazyWords

​“The letter was found the next day ​ I tell you! The next f***ing day! You can’t tell me that’s too old for this case!” I covered my ears. Daddy was yelling at his lawyer friend again. I don’t know what letter he was talking about, but I wanted to help. Daddy says if I help, then he’ll take me out to get ice cream! So for a couple days, when I get home from the bus, I’ll check the mail. If there was letters in there, then I would take each of them to my Daddy, and had him look at them. After about two days, he said I found it.

​I want my Mommy. I want her even more then I want ice cream. Daddy says “Mommy’s on a trip, she’ll be back soon!”, “When is soon?” I’ll always ask. He says “Soon is close.” His face gets a little sadder when he says that. I still want my ice cream. I think I’ll get peppermint flavored.

​Dad was yelling again, but all I did was ask for ice cream. I wanna know when I get my ice cream. Now I want it superman flavored. I ran up to my room and shut the door, like I saw Mommy do. I didn’t see what happened next, because Dad told me to clean my room, and that if I didn’t, he wouldn’t give me my allowance.

​I’m in my room, I’ve been in here for a while. I’m just laying on the floor, by my stuffed animal. Daddy still isn’t coming. I can hear him shouting at his lawyer friend again, about the letter I found. I’m scared. I hear him saying, “Fine! I’ll read the letter!” Then his voice became quieter and softer. I even started falling asleep. I was awoken by a sharp "BANG!"

​		I got off the floor, ran downstairs, and saw my Daddy, on the ground. His head had a hole. His pistol (he was a police officer), by his hand. I didn’t know what to do, so I looked closer. In his left hand, there was my letter. The one I found and gave to him. On the front, in curly writing, it was simply entitled “Bon Bon"

Thanks For Reading! The Greatest Stories Are Never Told, CrazyWords 13:11, March 27, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords 