Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26459137-20150604195425/@comment-26459137-20150605124115

I think one of the biggest erors I made was that I thinked it like a movie so this gave me proplemes with the narration so it gave me problems if I wanted to make a script way...And can you please telle me what you think I must keep ( in general of course not in details^^)if they is something to keep