Talk:Gain/@comment-30307610-20170912172944

Im with Emotrashboy on this one. Was great buildup but lackluster ending. I kind of was hoping there wouldnt be any creature. Its not really needed. Before the last entry I thought that maybe the perforation is what had caused it. Like that the food she ate was just building up inside her chest cavity. I think it just fell into the "creepypastas need a monster" trope and I was hoping it wouldnt, even with the nightmares. Overall very well done though. Good buildup. 5/10