Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140918223710

So I thought up this idea as I was chewing gum at work. It sounded like an amazing idea at the time, and I hope it transfers over well with you guys. Enjoy.

I have a small obsession. Most days, regardless of whether I ate or not, I chew gum. Seemingly, it isn't a big deal, right? Plenty of people chew gum consistently, wasting away precious dollars that could be spent on a number of things that would benefit them.

But I'm not plenty of people.

I don't have limited money, and I don't chew gum just for the fun of it. My parents seemingly passed this trait down to me, bestowing a gift no sane person would accept, due to its destructive tendencies. I can't even talk to people in class because all I do is chew the gum, endlessly. Sometimes I forget to breathe as the teacher in front of the class begins lecture, unknowing of my absence from reality. There is never a time I'm free from my addiction. Even as I lay in my quarters, closing my eyes for a hefty slumber, my jaw is silently chewing the gum, restlessly as my eyes fall to a close.

I have no friends because of my condition. People think I'm strange. Various boys my age attempted to talk to me, infatuated by my beauty, but no sooner than they mouth a simple greeting, they stand awkwardly as I remain silent, chewing my gum. Quickly, the word spread around the campus, speaking of the strange girl I was labeled to be, but that changed when we came back from winter break.

A new student had arrived in my class, confidently she stood towards the bottom of the lecture hall and introduced herself. Almost as if we were being pulled towards each other by a magnetic force, our eyes met. She sent a simple smile in my direction, immediately causing me to stop chewing in order to smile back. Once she received my smile, she made her way towards me, swaying up the staircase to the empty seat beside me. Her stare caused chills to run up my spine.

"Hey, I'm Alexa. What's your name?" she asked, extending her hand out to me as she took her seat.

I fought the urge to begin chewing again, but her icy blue eyes detained all trepidation.

"Elizabeth," I spoke, tucking my gum to my right cheek as I spoke.

Once her hand met mine and a gentle handshake ignited between us, Alexa seemed to study me with her captivating eyes.

"Beautiful name for a gorgeous girl. I'm guessing you're of Greek descent?" she asked.

I nodded, heat forming at my cheeks.

"That's cool. I'm Greek, too. My parents didn't want me to come out here. They say there's too much danger in the city. They're very superstitious," she said.

I tilted my head slightly at her words, but the curiosity quickly faded from thought when she stretched a smile across her face.

"Well, I don't want to bother you anymore. If you ever need anything-," she said, writing down her number on the corner of a blank page she ripped from a piece of paper, "call me."

I accepted her number quickly, sliding it down my jean pocket with ease, before beginning to chew my gum once more.

From then on, Alexa and I became close. Weeks had past, and everyone around the campus seemed to change their opinion of me. Because we were so close, and displayed such love for each other, I picked up a reputation I had never thought I'd receive: popularity. Guys argued with one another just to get close to us. It was a sight I was used to but only temporarily, as I was labeled strange early on. Something about Alexa and I was intoxicating. I couldn't tell if I was in love with her or if I was just in love with the admiration I received from others because of her.

But our love was put to a halt one afternoon.

As we had done countless times in the past few months, I invited Alexa over my parents' place, as they were out of town on a business trip, for a sleepover. Everything was peaceful as usual, our constant laughter filled the barren house, making the cold of the air not so cold anymore. Alexa perched up on her knees, leaning over to the pack of gum resting on the ledge of my nightstand, and grabbed ahold of it. Like any other night, I allowed her to do so, clenching my jaw as she opened it, but this time it was different.

There was only one piece of gym left.

My parents' had forgotten to replenish our stock before leaving for their trip. I could not let her have the last piece.

"Give me that," I said, reaching for the gum, only for it to be pulled away violently.

Alexa seemed confused, but a playful smile invaded her face. She thought I was joking.

"Elizabeth, what the hell? Calm down," she said, moving the gum in all directions as to avoid my grasp.

The unrelenting urge began eating away at my conscience, ripping it to shreds with every tease imposed by Alexa.

"I'm serious! Give it to me!" I shouted, lunging at her.

It was too late. She had already opened it, stuffed it into her mouth, allowing saliva to begin to pack within it.

"What's the big deal?" she questioned, laughing as if what she did was funny.

I couldn't control what happened next. I told her not to. I warned her. Instead of listening, abiding by my simple rule, she laughed it off. I couldn't laugh it off. The... thirst fell over me like a blanket of desire. My eyes began pulsating, blackening with each blink. My claws extended from my fingers, ripping away the nails and flesh as they exploded out.

Alexa stood there, trembling as I towered over her, growing tall with each passing second. Because she stole that last piece, because she forced me to become what I was born to be, I lunged at her, slashing her neck with one swift movement...

As I drank from her, her eyes and mouth fluttering frantically, I pulled the gum from her mouth. Once my desire was satiated, I opened my mouth, threw the gum within it, and began chewing. 