Talk:Senior Year: The First Saturday/@comment-24791240-20140408165749

The end really does grip you. What I can't understand, however, is how your writing is so flawless once you get into the climax of the story. The buildup had a great number of grammatical errors, but once you get to the heated aspects, your writing feels much more natural. Try to channel that interest into the beginnings as well, even though they hold less interest, they set you up for that great reveal.