Talk:Your Body and You/@comment-25170312-20150617022411

This is certainly one of the best VHS / video pastas I've read. I kind of wish Charlie was driven by something more mysterious than the Devil, though. The Devil conjures up all kinds of stereotypes that could potentially lessen the impact for some people. I think you missed an opportunity there to really push it over the top into scaresville. Even so, it's very creepy, disturbing, well written, and entertaining.