Talk:Saturday Night: Eternity/@comment-24181055-20131121143658

I enjoyed reading this! However the end felt somewhat rushed. Other than a few grammar issues it was rather well written. It wasn't "scary," however most of the best pastas are those that tell a good story as opposed to one that makes you cry and pee all night. (Ew I used however too much) Anyway... Well orchestrated 7/10