User blog comment:Underscorre/Jeff the Killer Rewrite Contest!/@comment-28938497-20151006220402

Would a sane Jane Arkensaw minor role/cameo break the 'No Jane the Killer' rule? It'd be nice to at least acknowledge her existence as her story runs parallel to Jeff's and crosses over in a few points. (or if we didn't mention her by name but get a scene where Jeff is preparing an apology note and a porcelain mask or something.)

If not, then would shifting the narrative to Liu's POV be okay? I know he's not the main character, but he should have been the narrative eyes of the story in the first place imo. Jeff's the villain as much as he is the protagonist. The old story had to impartially narrate a lot because he's not an identifiable or reliable POV.