Creepypasta Wiki talk:Deleted Page/Jeff the Killer/@comment-5969715-20131005003546

This was a good pasta. But, the bad thing about it is, after this, all the jeff the killer stories were nothing like him. He is not a creepy hacker, like in "jeff is back", if he was, they would have at least mentioned it in this one. Also, in the other sequels, there was something about his personality, that just didn't seem like him. Like the way he acted in this one, he doesn't seem like the cussing type. They made him cuss in alot of jeff the killer stories.

There were some gaps in the plot..... he wouldn't be an unknown killer if it was official that his face got synged and bleeched. The doctors would have told this to the police. Right away. Especially because he was acting crazy publicly....

And I don't think bleach can turn your skin white.

I am not saying this story is bad, its just that there are alot of gaps in the plot.