Talk:Covering Tracks/@comment-25170312-20140722030043

I find this to be very awkwardly written. A good example is the sentence "About ten inches forward was the thing". I wasn't creeped out at all because nothing challenged my imagination. Plus the part about him 'raking' your clothes off and the name 'The Razor' make it seem like a rip-off of 'The Rake', except with rape. It's like 'The Rapin' Rake' or something. It would interesting if the main character got preggers.