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Thank you for your feedback! Looks like I need to work on giving my stories a satisfying ending some more. That's two out of three that fizzled at the end.

Per your suggestion I read Bae Wary. Really good and unnerving in my opinion, and I like how it's from a different perspective than my own. Something like that tends to help my creativity quite a bit.

I'm going to rework the ending to make her seem more helpless without him. The idea was indeed that Edward got arrested by the cops for domestic abuse. Initially I had the idea that they also took her away to a safe location, but I think I'll skip on that. She's still in the house.

I actually just tend to look at common English names if my character is from England or America, and Edward popped up....the moment I saw that I too had to think of that little sparklebug and decided to take his name cause you know...abusive, controlling asshole got what he had coming for him!