Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25477067-20150302182845/@comment-26017819-20150320223910

Hey! I'm from AZ! I don't live as close as I'd like to, to the rez, because my tribes aren't in AZ, but I have heard about the legends of Skinwalkers. So @Chronobunny has a point.

The pace does indeed feel rushed. What I would suggest is to put in a space for a paragraph or two, and then give yourself a day or two to see where you want to go in the middle of the story. make an outline, of sorts.

I like what you've done so far, but an odd little detail to me is how did the sense of familiarity come over him? Did it seep in, did it dawn on him, and how did he react to it? i feel like the dominant personality was rushed in, but that's a sweet idea you've got there.

I like what you've done. Try a stepping stone outline maybe? it'll help you work paragraph by paragraph, and work with the details a little more.

Good job.