Talk:Protect Me/@comment-9041013-20160410183430

Well its a lovely story but in all honesty it isnt much of a scary creepypasta albeit being a good story overall. The picture creeped me out a bit though.

Honestly, some parts with Kyle made no sense, how he beat up the girl and her mother hadnt noticed, or actually all her fights with him were unnoticed. Also this girl having a boyfriend is a miracle in itself with so many issues so... if you're planning on writing something about a girl again make sure to tune down the anxiety and mental issues.