Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37261931-20181126193445/@comment-9041013-20181128205436

Well it comes off a little too literary, as if the Captain is telling a story rather than sharing his own emotions... it needs to be more down to earth. More how would you feel? thats what I do. I kind of method act my bigger characters for that part. See how I'd react, exaggerate that and here's my character development.

As for the story, look up weird animals, better off aquatic and use that as a base for your monster.