Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180619073009/@comment-33937557-20180620124014

Read the last draft, the first, and didn't review because I knew I couldn't do it justice. I thought it was a great concept and well executed, though I did notice the errors pointed out previously.

You really fixed them though, and I like this new ending paragraph. It's stronger and doesn't feel comical, which I thought the last draft's "I'm thinking of becoming a Rabbi" quip was meant to be.

Really liking the title, too. Clever.