Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24914789-20141009172011/@comment-24821182-20141009193925

Naitsirk7 wrote: Thank you for the advice. I just wanna tell you that what you just read has actually happend to me i did't feel anything more then pure terror. Well, if that's true then I'll have to admit that's pretty damn terrifying, and I'm sorry you had to experience that. My point still remains that this isn't a good CP, but maybe you could add some more to the story and use your unique experience to really do something incredible with this idea. But seriously: remember to proofread.