Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181019010044/@comment-28428152-20181019184018

L0CKED334 wrote: Ok, finally was able to read this. I did not see any glaring errors but it does seem rushed compared to the other installments. I like that you are bringing in the other characters and opening up the world. I like knowing there is a bigger picture (even though it's still hazy at the moment). This was just interesting enough to make me wonder how this all started and why. I liked it though, just like all the others. How does it feel rushed? Does it need more details, or is it just that it's shorter than most of the other chapters?