Talk:Desperation Steak/@comment-24381191-20140710184124/@comment-25041416-20140710210137

Actually it's pretty helpful.

When you're trying to write something in a format like this, you make decisions about what things to leave unsaid in order to keep the story short and make it flow. Knowing the ways it falls flat/the stuff the reader can't glean from the way it is presented is exactly what I need if I revise it into something longer that I publish somewhere else that I take a little more seriously. I know English isn't your first language but I also know you're smart and a good reader, so knowing the things that didn't make sense to you is really helpful. Thank you :)