Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24763727-20140402010417/@comment-9780519-20140402020008

One thing that sort of doesn't make sense was the fact that they didn't go after the rest of the family. You start the story saying how they're greedy, but they killl the sister and leave. If they were greedy, they'd want more victims. Plus the "Brains" gained everything each one of its victims knew. I'm sure it would have figured that the girl has a family and they should find/kill them.