Talk:The Colors of Insanity/@comment-24460632-20140313165505

Not bad! I do have to say this was pretty good!

I think some of my favorite moments in the pasta was the begining part. I though that the banter between the main character and the co-workers was done very well.

I do however, wish it was a bit longer. I felt as it could've used a lot more plot for his dream world. I think it would've added a lot more horror and it would've made the ending way more powerful.

Overrall, pretty enjoyable pasta 6/10