Talk:They Were Not Bears/@comment-32802129-20190802121219

I feel that this would be WAY better as a first person telling of an actual encounter or hunt for these beasts. Right now, it reads like a log of what happened, rather than delving into the emotion and fear. It's hard to fear a matter of fact account of some paranormal monster, as it is too distant from reality. Understanding the primal fear, however, of a character facing these things would make for a good read.