Talk:09/17/10/@comment-29507836-20161022142458

Very nice story! I'll keep my review short with this since such a great story wouldn't need much of my opinion when many others have already given theirs.

Gore was alright, could be increased, but I feel that it is at a good level. The plot is very original in a sense, but at other parts it was not. The buildup was good, the description and wording was splendid, but the ending was very disappointing. No point of revelation, no reveal of truth, just a plain boring ending that made it seem like you rushed it.

Overall, I rate this a modest 7/10.