Talk:The Gym Teacher/@comment-26027160-20150508124833

That was... intense. Good character development, an interesting storyline and brief, but vivid descriptions made this story quite realistic and enjoyable to read.

Some grammatically awkward sentences were present, but otherwise the writing is neat and joyful to look at. I think that, due to the great character development,the "horror" factor became somewhat dull. Not that it bothered me (quite the contrary, I see why it is like this in this certain story), but it might be something to think about next time. Finding the balance between character development and horror is a great challenge, but I think you'll eventually come to it. Your writing style is flexible enough to do so.

Great job!