Talk:The Vanishing Thicket/@comment-5733573-20180419212523

I liked this. The characters are likable, including the monster. If I had any criticism for this work, it would be that there doesn't seem to be a reason behind the telling. For instance, it might be interesting to see it framed as a warning to future campers. As it is, though, I really enjoyed it and found I could never at any point predict what was going to happen. Nice job!