Talk:The Dancer of the Night/@comment-25941663-20150510213552

The description of the dancer was chilling indeed. But I'm afraid the story doesn't have that much going on. For a short pasta, this is good, but if it was any longer it wouldn't have been enjoyable.

That isn't exactly a bad thing, but relying only on a description can be tricky. Overall though, it was a nice short read. Well done.