Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20180703003247/@comment-9041013-20180704000122

Alright, now Nathan feels like a real person. PDs come in clusters, you caught that one well. I would say that he is both Antisocial and Asocial to a degree, but that doesn't matter much now.

All that matter is this is a better version of the previous bits.

I keep thinking about Melissa Santos whenever I read about Julia's voice, it's all bombastic and powerful in my head.

Also, "wouldn't notice my oddity" felt kind of odd.

It's late, I'm tired, well, good job on improving.