User blog comment:SOURCECODE01/Creepypasta Writing Rules/@comment-26030957-20150303233504

Hey, everybody! Check out my new micro-pasta:

“The power of Christ compels you,” the white haired priest bellowed at the child who reared up and violently ripped the rosary beads from the old man, firmly inserting the crucifix into his eye. With a loud slurping noise the priest’s eye popped forth from his skull. The old man staggered back, a fountain of gore erupting from the barren socket of his eye. The demon child clutched the severed eye in its trembling fingers and licked greedily at the orb as if it were a lollipop. In the darkened distance, hidden in the shadows, Jeff the Killer and the Slender Man applauded the demons efforts.



Did I use too much grammar?