Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20141227231837/@comment-25769703-20141228100741

Take the certain bits i said were good. Such as the reference to the rich. Play on that abit. The idea may be cliche however this is your first Pasta i believe so there is always room for improvement. I have spent almost a month on my Pasta and i still have not considered publishing it because i too, heavily critique my work. If i were you i would re-read your work and consider that it could potentially have 10million people read it. Your audience is the whole world, essentially. You don't want a crappypasta for them to laugh at.

If you scrap the idea I would consider that you enter another discussion with an Admin on the chat for example and discuss your ideas.

Because they have read i would say 1/4 of the pasta's on the site they will tell you when it's good or even worth starting.

I'm not being harsh its just, i like quility, i like to read. And furthermore, i had just as bad of a response to my first pasta it was 'terrible' now that i look at it. It was a complete load of 'shit.'

Keep up the work if you have a passion for horror then keep working at it.

Lastly, horror is by far the hardest genre to write even attempting it deserves praise.