Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24821182-20140604134100/@comment-24608253-20140606014633

tI hope my comment doesn't get deleted, but I must say that this is really good, and I think you should post it up. There are comma errors which you might want to look at, and if you want specifics I will go back through and tell you what exactly needs to be fixed.

It has philosophical reasoning (which I am always fond of), mental illness of the strange sort, humor (if it is unintentional, I apologize), a nice opening to what has happened without giving too much away, and a good dive into the man's head as a journal.