Talk:Alligator Girl on Channel ASK-Y/@comment-5133616-20140621115011

Overall, this was a very well-written creepypasta. Great build up, nice imagery, and pretty creepy. One thing I didn't understand though was how you were creeped out only by the man's stare and not by the girl being mutilated by an alligator...I would be more disturbed by that than some guy's soul piercing stare. Besides that. It was pretty good: 8/10