Talk:Just a Normal Pie/@comment-27623698-20160227004557

So whats in the pudding rat poison, sulfuric acid, and Bleach, yummy. Well congrats you just ate a crazy old lady's husband who she poisoned and you may have gotten yourself poisoned too. Don't see a way out of this. Storytelliing: 5. Twists: 3. Scarefactor: 4. Cliche: 100%. Cheesy: 75%. Thrillfactor: 7.

Overall Score: 4-6