Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24662533-20141220153720/@comment-5643552-20150301092737

Reposting 's comment on "Guys' Night Out" shortly before it was deleted because I feel it's key to understanding why the story was deleted: ImGonnaBeThatGuy wrote:

Well, this is extra unpleasant.

I know (and hope) your intention was to show how horrible this kind of thing is, the ol' "humans are the real monster", but it doesn't work. This comes off as just gratuitous rape and violence against women. There's nothing else to the story except for that. No larger context, no motivations, it really just comes off as, "Hey, isn't this fucked up?" At points you seem to be on the side of the men and that's a really, really uncomfortable and alienating vibe to get.