Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4843510-20180710162721/@comment-9041013-20180710235947

It could be classified as a Creepypasta, obviously it has some creepish horror factor to it.

It needs a lot of work though, I'd say.

First, make the whole "evil sentient forest" thing a little more smooth, I don't know, just think of how'd you experience a sort of telepathy with trees and how a tree would have "sentience" and put it on the paper.

Also, this story is kind of all over the place, I had no clue what was happening at different times and had trouble maintaining focus. It just shifts too much.

Also, whenever a different character speaks, you start a new paragraph...