Talk:The Faceless Man/@comment-25052433-20140821050305

I saw a man the other day with no face. There was, something there though. Not a face, something worse, far more horrifying. It was....a review!

What went right:

-This was a good, solid, traditionally told and constructed horror story. No gimmicks, no haunted computers or devious garage sales, just a straight up, well told horror story. For that, I thank you.

-You built the suspense up beautifully. You set the scenes and placed the characters, and really pulled me as a reader into your environment.

-You mastered some good creepy quips, like the brother waking up, still feeling choked. That was a good line and excellent fuel for a frightening setting.

-This story reminded me a lot of a 90's Made-For-Television movie called 'The Haunting.' It was based on a true story, and I remember it scaring the hell out of me as a kid. You captured that same feeling in this story, very well done.

What should have been left without a face:

-Really...I got nothing.

Honestly, I don't have much in the way of a critique for this one. Everything, in my opinion, was executed very well. Normally, with a story that I really like, I'll wish it was longer or had more detail. Honestly though, with this one, it was just about right with length and plot tempo.

10/10. Well earned.