Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9584883-20141218151039/@comment-9584883-20141218212141

Wow! I'm honored. Yeah, I should have caught that about repeating that metaphor. I will work on that. I do agree that it looses the sin city/pulp comic vibe. I need to go back and dig deep to keep up the theme. However, I'm thinking perhaps I could change styles. Though if I did, it would have to be done right. The first act, I took from personal tragedy. I need to tap into that again. The rest is me just trying to tell a story, which I feel I'm decent at. Thanks again! I'll post this when I'm done. I'm excited about finishing this one so I'll burn the midnight oil.