Talk:Journal Entries/@comment-25046567-20150422221438

Overall, I enjoyed reading this pasta. I found the entries interesting and I liked how they were all interconnected. I wish the author would've ended this differently, perhaps by having the little brother continue to investigate the sites mentioned in the entries or have his own encounters with "Weird Shit". It is a rather long pasta, but I was entertained throughout most of the story so the length wasn't a big issue to me. I really enjoyed picking up on the different character's personalities through their entries and entries about them. I'm also very inspired after reading this and I feel that it was deserving of POTM. Final rating: 9/10