Talk:Soulless/@comment-3541151-20150314063818

What a stress inducing read. Still, I found some of it creative, and some incredibly stupid. I think the clown is a mixture of Pennywise and the Libbrary Policeman. Regardless it only adds to the concept, and is ridiculous and fracturing to the story, overall. Any kind of demon would have been a better antagonist. The beginning alone was better, and THAT was stress inducing.