Talk:Edmond White/@comment-26507513-20160810024313

There were so many grammatical areas! I was shocked! I felt this story wasn't much of a story at all and relied on gruesome deaths to make it creepy, the implication that the baby would carry on the killings was predictable and boring. This story has so many flaws like did Edmond White have magical powers? If not then what was that spell he was doing? 2/10