User blog comment:StormyTheKiller/What happened to my creepypasta/@comment-24101790-20160219013734

It was well below quality standards. The premise is incredibly rushed, there is little build-up/explanation, and it's nonsensical in portions. ("Oh, what's that sis? Oh yeah, I was just typing out my first creepy pasta." Why exactly are they typing their responses out to their twin in the first place?) The ending as well is extremely Cliched "Or she WILL come to your house and kill you!" and really makes for a weak story. Combine that with the grammatical issues "Their invisible." and you have a story that typically gets deleted as soon as an admin reads it through. I strongly suggest using the writer's workshop for your next story as there was a lot of issues here for a story that is a paragraph long.