Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20190212235854/@comment-9041013-20190213110355

This one is definitely better than "Dunes". If you want to go with one of them, use this.

I suggest making the transition from "human" Roger to "Robot" Roger a little clearer, maybe have the robot say something that clarifies the situation or something.

Also, I think there should be quotation marks around "So lonely" as it's a quote.