Talk:Humanity/@comment-25383866-20150119091442

This article really rubs me the wrong way. The authority with which you speak about what happens in other people's heads is extremely grating coming after a statement about how the educational system is an indoctrination device.

It irritates me because it presumes to know me, and the confidence with which you leave the final line, "Sweet dreams," like you've just dropped a bomb, is sooo galling. It's like you're emphasizing a point that you didn't make.

The whole premise of your story is also very cliched, what with the whole "mirror entity that watches and hates you" thing being almost a trope now in horror stories on the internet.

The whole thing, taking away all the problems I had with it, just makes me go, "So what?" Who cares if I'm being watched my reflection?

You watch it right back, it can only see you when you're looking at it. 4/10