Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-2240864-20140612220044/@comment-24997185-20140614012816

I would:

- Make the characters older, they are like... Young for that. ._.

- Change the guns with knives, seriously.

- Make the parents less brainless, seriously, "My kid is in jail, let's go to a party!"

- Make the "Bullies" more "creative", making them enjoy and laugh at Jeff's reactions; his screams, his pain. Also making them do weirder things, maybe making them the ones that gave Jeff that smile?

- Make a deeper backstory and make Jeff more human, not "I almost killed him, my brother went to jail, I kill him with my overpowered self, INSANITY YAY!"

And probably more stuff...