Talk:The Silent Audience—A Historical Note/@comment-24040907-20141227000115

I liked this one. The story begins with relatable characters, and slowly builds up the mystery (and of course, the dread). The more we learn about these mysterious people, the more we want to know.

At first, the style of the story (weaving between Alex reading the papers and the experiences written therein) made me a bit worried. You see, if the girl in the story that Alex reading died in the end (as is alluded to) how are there papers documenting her experience in the first-person. Or did she survive, and is actually Anna? That part was unclear to me.

Toward the end of the story, though, this style paid off, as realization slowly dawned upon both Alex and the readers as both stories came to a close. A good way to end the story is to make the readers wonder just what exactly happened after the curtains close; we see that here. Good work. Rating 6.3/10