Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20160909215816/@comment-28266772-20161001183842

Thanks for the feedback. Sometimes it makes me laugh to see the strange accidental substitutions I make when writing. It's very helpful to have these things pointed out.

Also I attempted to tie the doctor, the baby and the feathers in together with the name Cuckoo i.e. the doctor's some monster that relies on humans to raise its child. Do you think if I have him actually mutate to look like a grown up version of the monster it would make the connection clearer? Or would I be better off just leaving it out and giving no explanation for the monster's presence?