Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33756381-20181118014419/@comment-33756381-20181118202713

NoTimeCreepy wrote: Grammar- You have a few problems which is easy to fix.

The story itself was kind of boring. It needs to be spiced up some. Nothing creepy or scary about fortune cookies but if you are going to go down that route need to go more in to detail. Question if I've already posted the story and it got deleted could I fix the problems you have mentioned and re-post it?