Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32764586-20180916054602/@comment-32764586-20180918174526

L0CKED334 wrote: I honestly think this is the grossest thing I have read on this site. I actually felt the urge to vomit at one point, so good job on that. I don't know why but I don't like this part:

"And then I screamed, and screamed, and screamed."

It really threw me off, like I had to read it twice then paused and thought to myself, "That just doesn't seem right." But at the same time, I don't particularly know why it bothers me so much. Then again, I didn't sleep well and am having a hard time keeping my eyes open here at work...so there's that too.

All-in-all, it's an interesting idea, gross, and a horrible scenario for any man. I could see people enjoying this as long as they came stomache it.

Hey man, thanks :)

Pst, P.S, your typo which says "as long as they CAME stomach it" is unintentionally hilarious