Talk:His Eyes at the Bottom of the Well/@comment-26037362-20150124020919

Honestly, this story was a bit too cliché for my tastes. I wish the writing was more advanced, the overall format was a little stale. Other than that, I liked this story. I really enjoyed how the 'thing' came into his room. I have to give this a 5/10 I can't wait to read more of your work as you continue to improve! -Marzia :3