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I liked the pride in the killer, but I feel like this story isn't complete? It'll probably only be more cliche to add more history on the killer or something of a motivation (especially since the pastas I've been reading lately are usually one/both parents dead, child abuse, or drug/alcohol abuse). The character is set off from the readers in that he doesn't justify his actions and instead simply acknowledges them and his own personality. I thought that was a very interesting portrayal for sure. Towards the end, it felt like he was a little detached from his own 'the world owes me' attitude which almost makes it seem like someone else is narrating his life and not him. Still a good read; I liked the part of him messing with the coroner.