Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25886858-20141218205202/@comment-25428589-20141219130320

For some reason, the word "demons" always makes me think of Repercussions of Evil :)

Anyway, I fixed all the grammar/punctuation mistakes I saw, although I am kind of pressed for time so I may have missed a couple - here is the corrected version.

Please be aware that the writer's workshop is not intended for asking people to correct your story for you, you're meant to do it yourself. People will generally not correct errors for you, they'll just tell you that they're there.