Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26425680-20171018131639/@comment-26425680-20171019150917

@Suomynona - Thank you very much!

@Vngel - Thanks... I went ahead and edited that side-scrolling error out already. I didn't even notice it before. I'll fix the rest of them when I complete a final draft.

@Shadow - Your criticism actually echoes some of the thoughts I had when writing this. Yes, it's pretty straightforward, and maybe too much so. I might change the advice that Karl gives to Victor, making it a little more cryptic, but only if I can think of something that fits the story.