Talk:Rape/@comment-24077689-20141007200812

This is horribly vague. And the idea, while interesting, I think, isn't fleshed out enough. I'd say take this to the Writer's Workshop for some advice. It's vague, but it's not good enough to warrant it being this vague. In fact, there's no point in this story that denotes that it even should be this vague. It's a rapist corpse? The character is a rapist? Dead rapist? Regretful serial rapist? What the fuck is going on? Clarify, expand on some of these ideas.