Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26842200-20150731210346

Now I have a  story which makes me fear the dark when I was 10 my name is Jackson George and here where it starts.

I was about going to bed at 8:30 after playing with my friends on roblox. I was heading to my room when I saw on my labtop it said "I know where you live". I was thinking it was a cheesy joke from my little brother,but then I saw something darkened down it said  "I see you at the corners of your eyes" and it was cheesy too. I dont know what was happenning my brother doesn't know how to darken things down. I went back to bed and slept at 10 pm and had a nightmare of what happened for no reason. When I woke up I told my friends what happened they said it was probally a hacker prank. The rest of the day was normal but at 5 pm I was heading to my friends house. While I was riding my bike for a moment I saw something by an abandoned house. It was in the shadows and looked like two white eyes in darkness. I saw in millions of of horror movies and the idiots always go in a spooky places and die so I just pass it. At my friend's we played the Xbox and then we went on a hike and I told her the story of when I was coming to he house. She said we should check it out and I was like no way,but sadly we had to go and we saw something in the warehouse.end of part 1. 