User talk:DoctorBleed

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CrashingCymbal (talk) 12:53, January 3, 2014 (UTC)

JtK: Personal Judging Results
As the Top 5 for the JtK Contest you entered were announced, you may have been wondering as to why your story did not quite make it into the poll. While I cannot speak on the behalf of the other judges, I can show you some of my short, personal notes that I took for each story. They are as follows:

I think that the problem with this one is just it hasn’t been proofread real well. There are plot holes and grammar mistakes, but honestly, the approach and sympathy for Jeff’s character and the fact that it does come from the viewpoint of one of the bullies gives it a more fresh feeling.

Hope this helps. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 22:17, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

You know what would have really helped? If this weren't the way I found out I wasn't in the top five. Ugh.

Huge disapointment, I really loved that story and I had a lot of fun writing it. I knew there was stiff competition but I didn't think a few grammatrical errors (which is an editoral problem, not a writing problem - you can feel free to disagree and I'm sure many here do but that's my view on the situation.)

You mention plot holes but don't say what they are. I would like to know so maybe I could avoid those pitfalls next time I write a story or even try to explain how they're supposed to be interpreted.

If I come off belidgerent or rude just know it's because I just now find out about this after waiting two months for the contest results on top of what was already a really bad week for me. I'm quite livid, but I'm still trying to be polite. DoctorBleed (talk) 05:24, November 22, 2015 (UTC)