Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31532017-20161130072138/@comment-31532017-20161203035050

No worries my brother, I'm now more than willing to get my story up on the site. Though I have to fix the issues presented in the story like you mentioned.

"Kinda obvious actually, like most intelligent lifeforms they've adapted numerous writing systems. Not an impressive feat you might consider, but take a good damned look. You might notice several of their writings appear to be written in a form of storytelling, quite similar to what our father does.

The tremendous amount of effort they're willing to undergo to write out a story instead of speaking it is simply astonishing. Perhaps what they've written aren't perfect but they constantly strive to portray it as accurately as possible. Nothing I've seen before has ever exhibited such a strange nature. I couldn't even begin to imagine the time it takes to produce such magnificent content."

I believe this was part where the narrator's voice was inconsistent right? Also which part need some clearing up?