Talk:Bloody Snow/@comment-25041416-20140701170730/@comment-25041416-20140701174850

I actually quite liked the story, and action/survival stories are normally not something I get into. You did a lot of things really well especially in terms of plotting. The pace was very good. I was happy the cats survived and wish them well!

Squabbling over disposing of the cat poop was a nice touch. Actually you could even have played that up more for comedic effect.

This is a good piece I think and well worth working on.