Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26364137-20150607001347/@comment-25037895-20150607013944

Here:
 * [“Are you okay? Where is Vanessa?”,] Remove the comma.
 * [“M… Mandy?”,] Same issue.

Also, when it comes to the ellipses, remove the commas after the quotation marks. Check out this page for help with quotations.