Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26393482-20150512174351

Chapter 1 - 



''Long ago there were two Goddesses of the Heavens. They were the highest level of the kingdom, so they became princesses. They have always been tested in ways of how many spiritual souls they have gathered in their bodies; but, only one has gathered more souls than the other princess. Her name is Mika, the sweetest girl around the heavens and the kingdom. Everyone supported her, polite with her, and shall always be on her side with any cost of danger. The other Princess is named Susuwa, Mika’s older sister, she mostly does not get attention from the people within the kingdom and the heavens, and they looked at her as if she isn’t even one of them, just some kind of creature. Susuwa is serious, quiet, and loyal within her quest. She is also the high level ranks in duels or survival battles. She does neither support nor loved Mika even though she is her little sister. She stays on track even though she does not have more spiritual souls than Mika has because she does not want to participate with such a pathetic quest. Mika tries to speak to Susuwa and get along with her; but, she always pushed Mika away or teaches her a lesson for interfering her. She is afraid of Susuwa at times, so all she can do is just leave her there and not bother her anymore. While dinner time, Susuwa also doesn’t get attention from her parents, only Mika does; but, she doesn’t seem to care less, so she just ignores and continues eating her dinner. Things became worse during the next day; one of the highest ranks of the Darkness World came to the Heavens and has walked into the kingdom. As they arrived inside the Kingdom they have ask for a request. ''



''“Show us the Princesses, so that anything cannot be harmed”, said the Darkness soldiers. ''



''The King refuses to bring them over; they grinned and spoke “Then you shall be the first to die”. ''

''They used their power that shot him through his chest, the Heaven soldiers screamed and Mika run to the King telling him to “get up”, as they known that Mika was one of the princesses they check inside her body to see if she is ‘The One’, the system failed, it was mostly impossible because she has more spiritual souls within her body but her levels in fighting is low and her rank of killing is 0 percentage. Susuwa walked to the room slowly and saw the devil soldiers; they glared at her as Susuwa approach to the room. ''



''“I see you're looking for something within this world, may I ask what it may be?” Susuwa spoke within a glare. ''

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;">''<span style="font-size:16px;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';color:#ffffff;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">The soldiers were shocked by Susuwa’s words; they felt a dark aura within her body and notice that she was “The One”. They slowly approach to her, Susuwa grinned and vanished between their very eyes, and they gasped and started to tremble as they felt her aura growing stronger through them. ''

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;">''<span style="font-size:16px;font-family:'TimesNewRoman';color:rgb(255,255,255);white-space:pre-wrap;">Susuwa finally appeared behind them quietly as she started to grin evilly and started a little laugh, their eyes widely opened as they turned around and saw Susuwa in front of them closely, she started opening her eyes wide and smiled as like she was psycho and quickly stabbed both of the soldiers through their chest by her arms. Mika and everyone gasped as they saw what Susuwa did to the soldiers, they felt frightened and started to tremble harder as they saw Susuwa took their hearts out of their chest.The Demons began to scream and has fallen to the ground, as they fallen they have finally died by cold blood within Susuwa’s hands. Everyone started to tremble and back away as Susuwa turned around and looked at the crowds, they were frightened, they started to scream with bloody murder. Susuwa started to felt dizzy and felt blur in her eyes, she finally gets down to the ground and blacks out, as she blacked out she begin to see terrified dreams that involves killing, screaming, terror, and darkness. She started to run away while she is still trap within her dreams, she screams louder and louder until her voice slowly fades, she tripped while someone grabbed her by the ankle. She turned and gasped, her eyes and mouth was wide open as she saw other self with whole black eyes with bloody tears flowing down on her cheeks. She started to scream and slowly fainted, as she heard someone calling out her name, she slowly opens up her eyes and she saw her sister and her mother. They felt relieved and hugged Susuwa, “Thank god that you are back” Mika spoke, Susuwa looked at Mika and looked at the ceiling, as she looked at the ceiling she saw her other self that was in her dreams, she gasped but doesn’t say a word, after that she began to grinned evilly with her eyes wide opened. '' <ac_metadata title="I am making a story so far called Demons vs. Goddess and I might just give one each chapter a day, I do not know this will be good. but please enjoy. &#10;&#10;Chapter one (Not that much scary yet)"> </ac_metadata>