Talk:Miss Mosaic/@comment-24938044-20150216053436

I did not like this pasta. The concept had potential, the story was developing well. The one think the irks me so much when reading pastas is when I see "My pasta is better than all the other pastas because this cliche thing didn't happen." GRRAAAAAHHHHHHHH! Just focus on avoiding the cliches and stop saying "No, this didn't happen for all you people who jump to conclusions". There were minor grammatical errors, but I'll ignore those. Also, where does the bottle of pills come in? Somebody please elaborate on this. Overall, not terrible, but not good either. 5.7 spoopy television sets out of 10.