Talk:Daddy's Little Princess/@comment-31452012-20170318114759

Absolutely loved your writing style, paced beautifully. Also, your transitions between the two main protagonists was incredibly smooth. Giving the reader two character's interpretations of the situation thus giving more depth to them both and the flow of the narrative.

The story itself was very entertaining and I'd love to read more of your work. Despite the supernatural element of the ecstacy of 'vampirism', there was a basis in our contemporary society's reality. The 'grooming' of a young, innocent girl. The preying on her adolescent  needs as a way to gain absolute trust and adoration...all a sad reality. The mother character confused things a tad, but perhaps that's just me, not seeing her place in the storyline. To further fuel the father's desperation perhaps? Regardless of that minor confusion, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. 10/10 for both story and writing style.