Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27697299-20160330030638/@comment-27697299-20160601000322

i actually wrote the story in Microsoft Word, but i will run a grammar check. I will deal with the reference and try and fix the flow. i had always thought the first sentence needed fixing so that wil be my first little clean up. Also i believe no one is harsh when it comes to reviews, you can only help.

Kind Regards

Phil Raptor