Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26285493-20150526213549/@comment-25037895-20150527013447

Here's a few issues:
 * Punctuation
 * " error page and said “why did you let us die”. " Sentences with a speaker (dialogue) needs punctuation before, at the end, and a capital letter at the start.
 * " “Wh.y…..d..id……..you..leave”. "Multiple periods are not proper, unless using three for an ellipsis, and the fourth to end the sentence.
 * Missing question marks.
 * Missing commas that are needed to help flow:
 * "I thought nothing of this at the time thinking that was he not wanting to kill more zombies that were people"
 * When I finally got to citadel or the combines main base if you want to say that. Also a wording issue, a citadel
 * Spacing issues - The paragraphs are very long, try to aim for 10 sentences or less.
 * Wording issue
 * "evil grin like the face had something in mind to put upon you."