Talk:Anansi's Goatman Story/@comment-5935787-20130914041945

The swearing was very overused but other than that I liked the story. Personally I didn't mind the ending all that much and at least you admitted in the story that it was lacking a bit. Just one word of advice, and that's cut WAAAAY down on the swearing. A lot of people find that it takes away from a good story when half the story is just made up of curse words.