Talk:The Night I Chose to Remember/@comment-5278102-20140208222738/@comment-3103575-20140209042521

Great story Marg! I noticed a few mistakes (one of them seemed to be the missing of an I; but I could be wrong): “ but at the time was just a happy kid.” Regardless, you’ve shown to be very good at keeping track of different tenses (past, present, future), minor example: “I was probably seven or eight, considering my sister was able to walk at the time and is about five years younger than me.” Also, I don’t remember any spelling or grammatical errors after reading, just a few instances of not including a certain word or letter. I can tell you are also a very intelligent writer, as you incorporated advanced ideas and theories into this story with incredible ease. It’s been a while since I’ve read anything that wasn’t from a professional author (unless you are one) that impressed me this much. I look forward to more from you. Thank you; this was a beautiful read.