Talk:Its Red Grin/@comment-23924544-20140219181100

Truly stunning as a pasta and a short story. A lot if interesting quirks and thoughts put into the story and it's paced perfectly. Although, there were a few times where things were said just for the sake of wing said. And despite the few punctuation errors here as there, I really enjoyed reading it. I would encourage everyone to read this, not only for a creepypasta, but as a short story. 9/10