Talk:All Depart From Here/@comment-25471033-20180814205232

This is one is pretty good, the ending is thought provoking and it's not terribly long. There could have been a little more detail, and there was some parts that had three or four descriptors for one thing (like his gaping, deranged, smiling mouth). As for the creepiness, I'd say it's not really terrifying, more slightly unsettling. There isn't much of a creepiness factor in it, despite the questions I have for the sign. Are they dead souls departing to the Next Life, or were they all sentenced to death or something like that, and everyone was to act clueless? 8/10