User blog comment:XxCircusMonsterxX/My first CreepyPasta/@comment-1631480-20140504025751

I could always try and help you with writing and link you some references that could help you improve?

The story concept (as far as I can tell) reminded me a little of Betsy the Doll. Sometimes twisting the story that may come across as supernatural and ending almost believeable and realistic can work; taking the opposite approach to starting off realistic and ending supernatural.