Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25825682-20150723152004/@comment-26813047-20150723181707

Well, this seems to be a "creepy poem." I guess they exist.

Overall, it looks like you did a good job editing. I do have two editing comments: Remove comma from “a mass, of numb seas”

Don’t capitalize “Meadowlark”

You would capitalize the 'm' in "Meadowlark" if you were referring to the personification of it, but you would not put the word "the" in front of it in that case.