Talk:Womb Tree/@comment-5733573-20180717143735

This story has some issues. First, there is absolutely no good reason for race to be part of this story. Period. Secondly, there's no suspense whatsoever. It's all just kind of flat and not very engaging. If it were presented more like a story, it would be more interesting. Finally, there are some gramatical and sentence structure issues. Watch out for those next time to look at this or write a new story.

Overall, the story was disappointing, especially after seeing such an interesting title. I hope you do more work on this.