Talk:Simply Nervous/@comment-24768441-20140403122825

If you don't mind me saying, I disagree with the other comments. I think the short format is suited for the purpose of the story. It works to tell a tale of everyday life, as the protagonist/victim only takes on a short role. Every now and then adding a story with a role like this brings out a little realism, as most people would not be able to survive the psychology that is used in so many stories; a short tale like this mixes the aspect of a main character up a bit differencing away from the constancy that is encouraged. That being said, I don't think the last line is cheesy, but quite clever. I enjoy the implication of Charlotte reading the bottom of the mirror and having the realization of the words meant. It's not a huge shock, but I enjoyed the brief realization of that line that I also received. I think it also gives the story some re-readability, which the length assists to encourage. I apologize for the length of my post, and my opinion given. If a post like this is not appropriate for this site I understand and will not make anymore.