Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33077235-20181122011853/@comment-37261931-20181123204043

This might just be me personally, but I'd imagine an insane man wouldn't call themselves insane. I don't even think the voices would call them insane. I imagine a genuinely insane person would basically just be irrationality at it's peak (beliefs, concepts, etc) and wouldn't make much sense to other people, hence being labled as insane but in their pov you'd probably be the insane one. I also think the voices in their head could line up with what they believe in, such as maybe a voice of a being they believe in or a higher power, this can make the dialouge between the two make more sense and create a more interesting story because as of now, not much of it makes sense.

TL;DR Makes little sense, you may say "But that's the point!" but this is a story not real life, you need to make it make sense or have at least some sort of point because right now, it's just random things being said with a man arguing he's not insane which is sort of an insane person trope.