Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475017-20150618021710/@comment-25037895-20150618132458

["You pissed me off now",Ally laughed,and pushed Mary] Sentences like this need a space after the commas, and the first comma needs to be after "now".

["Why it is, but this pain isn't" Mary said] Comma needed after "isn't".

["HAHAH if they only knew". Ally thought.] Comma goes after "knew" and remove the period.

["You got blood on my prom outfit" Ally pouted]

[Ally walked up to Mary and whispered in her ear "Your life."]

["I've never said that",Mary was pleding (pleading) but Ally had enough of Mary's shit,"Please baby don't do this. You killed Riley Johnson?."Mary said as soon as Ally pulled her sword from the sheth(sheath).] ''Commas go before the quotation mark. Then add a space after the quotation mark. Add a space after "shit," (before the quotation mark). Remove the period after the question mark. Then add a space after the quotation mark there also.''