Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-28266772-20160527194341/@comment-28266772-20160608123947

Yeah, character relations was something I struggled to balance, and in hindsight I should have just written in it a traditional prose format. It's just I was interested in taking the letter format of Give It Everything and pushing it to onto a more complex idea. I also think I should have given Andrew more significance, but I was very concerned it would give the twist away and I think as a result I downplayed him too much.

Also David Marshall was just a throwaway character - the father of the girl who was nearly abducted who, at one point during the writing process, was going to be a red herring for the audience.

Anyway, thank you so much for the feedback. I appreciate it a lot.