Talk:The Abalone Thief/@comment-25941663-20150202134607

A masterpiece of suspense and mystery. Despite a slow start, the story picked up quickly and had me hooked even before the cult was introduced. I especially enjoyed the ending; I didn't expect it at all.

A few things that I didn't like:

1) Sometimes the pasta was too description-heavy. In the future, consider cutting down on some of the scenery descriptions, as they rarely add much to the story.

2) The story started out pretty slowly. The first quarter of the story dragged on a bit. In this case it isn't a huge problem, but I would suggest going a bit faster to the point of future stories.

Apart from those two points, the story was great. This is one of my all-time favourites. Really well done, bravo.