Talk:Tap Tap... Tap Tap/@comment-24162900-20140904041831

For a short story, this was very well done! It was an excellent use of articulation and a sense of time.

However, I felt as though there was little urgency coming from your first person character. Maybe it's just me because I typically write longer stuff in order to over-emphasize certain things, but I felt like we could have known more about the fear that your protagonist is feeling and their relationship or history with the monster. Other than that, this was very good! Keep up the good work!