Talk:Sabbath/@comment-25947144-20180228003253

General quality: Hard to overlook amount of errors. I have to limit it to 17/25.

Horror factor: Torture and abuse are always nice in a story, but for some reason the otherwordly/afterlife part of the storyline feels much less threatening, mostly because there is literally not much to see to in it, being empty. 17/25

Lyrical interpretation: The story behind the song is pretty simple and straighforward, I feel the story has overcomplicated it into something else. I usually appreciate if authors can work these out in their series, but not when it's forced into the series. I judge stories as stand-alones, therefore this gets 15/25

Entertainment value: I think the song is bit over-explanatory and contains some unnecessary details, which makes it more difficult to follow. The Black Sabbath, leave more to mystery. 14/25

Final score: 63/100