Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25686546-20141115221231/@comment-25686546-20141115223348

EmpyrealInvective wrote: There are capitalization issues, the "behind you" cliche and some pretty big wording issues. (heared, " pain, Your (sic) scream will most likely increase.") This isn't really up to quality standards. Thanks for the advice! I'll keep this in mind when I redo it. Quality standards isn't what I was aiming for though, As this is rough and I need to know what I should do with it