Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20150309053023/@comment-24686384-20150309204324

Solonor1987 wrote: yes  my story  gta can be scary because it can be  the ghost of a gang member then will be  scary because in this game we see some gangs so what du you think of my sugestion now is it more inresting or is a poor choice i remplace by i am the protagonist. omg, im going to say this for the last time,ITS NOT THE SCARY ASPECT ABOUT IT THAT HAS ME WORRIED,it tis the choice of pasta,wording and sentence structure.