Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30338398-20161112150930/@comment-30338398-20161113185525

I understand, don't think I'm mad I'm just kidding around. So I would just like you to tell me your thoughts on this quick summary of the story.

It's about a guy called James, who is in love with a girl (presumably his ex-girlfriend) and feels sorry for the harm he's done to her in the past. The story starts out with him dressing up in a suit and picking up a bouquet of roses from the table. He heads out to her house on a rainy day and knocks on her door. When he finds out that there is no one home he feels mad and depresed by the fact. The runs off home in anger because in few days ago he found out she was seeing another man. Bla bla bla. Let me just skip to the end. In the end of the story he goes to her house blinded by his madness and jelousy, carrying a gun in his hand. He hears her call out "Tim" and is angered by the fact that she was indeed messing around with some other guy. He shoots her and sits on the couch next to her dead body. The story ends as the newspaper articles on the porch of her house reveal that infact this girl was a local celebrity who was being stalked for a few weeks by an unknown, insane man as James's picture is on the page.