Talk:To Whom It May Concern/@comment-26198418-20150324211107

Not much of a Creepypasta at all actually. I thought the story telling and the ramblings were a bit too long for a man losing oxygen. However, the good qualities without a doubt outweigh the bad ones. The dramatic effects were brilliantly executed. Though the plot is not the most original, the contents of the piece give it life. It was certainly depressing, but in a different way than a pasta about a kid with an abusive family or something like that. I probably loved the suspense the most, and the technical language just hammered the terror in. I rate this pasta a well deserved 9/10.