Talk:Fine Russian Cuisine/@comment-5269370-20131217224021

This actually reminds me a bit of a pasta I wrote myself! But yeah. The short, snappy sentence structure makes it easy on the eye. The alternation between the tapes and the protagonist as a narrative was a clever way to tell the story, and while I would have liked to see maybe a little more suspense here, you wasted no time in getting to the middle of the pasta and displaying your writing skills with the horror here. The ending wraps up an all round, well made pasta. Nice one.

7.1/10