Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26017882-20150118030216/@comment-25913561-20150118103023

So far this is actually really interesting. I've always enjoyed a good zombie story :D

For a first attempt it's pretty good :D

Don't worry too much about liking your own work, it's common for artists to question the quality of their work even when they are praised for it.

It is certainly a good start to a creepy story, or even just a short story.

If I had to nit pick, it would be this; "Now I know what you’re thinking right about now you’re thinking “Anon there’s nothing out of the ordinary about this at all!” and you would be for all intent and purposes correct that there is nothing ordinary about the fact that I was going through my daily routine"

I was thrown, so I'll point it out; first you say “Anon there’s nothing out of the ordinary about this at all!” but then say "there is nothing ordinary about the fact that I was going through my daily routine"

you said "nothing out of the ordinary" but then stated that "There is nothing ordinary" it's inconsistent and tripped me up XD I know that you meant to say "Nothing out of the ordinary" both times, and that your eagerness to get your thoughts down probably made you rush through it and forget those few words.

Happens to the best of us XD

But as it made me do a double take I had to put it out (I'm somewhat of a "Grammar Nazi" lol)

But aside from my little complaint there, I enjoyed this :) looking forward to seeing future works from you :)