Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28794220-20160629154218/@comment-28420405-20160629181728

This story has multiple errors and lacks plot. Regardless of your colloquialisms or your regional dialect, there are pretty clear errors when it comes to grammar and spelling. I am not going to point them out, as the poster before me did an excellent job of painstakingly highlighting the more glaring issues.

This is not to say that you should not try again. You should! Drafts and reworking are all part of the process. However, this may take some major salvaging to get approval. I wish you the best of luck. Re-reading your work goes a long way, particularly if you read it out loud (though I know this is not always an option). Reading aloud helps pinpoint some of the more awkward phrasing in a piece. Just a suggestion :)