Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25382945-20150926180900/@comment-25382945-20150927034935

I wanted to add a lot of detail into the story but when I did that it seemed very cliche. So i tried to add detail in some places and remove detail in other places. I know that a lot of the theme is being repeated. I'm working on balancing this out. Hopefully I can fix this in the next version. Thanks!