Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10789912-20160117093544/@comment-25052433-20160201050002

Another great series of reading in this series of yours. I apologize for the time it has taken me to finally come around and leave some feedback. Work has been a burden on me and it has reflected on my time available to spend on this site. However, I finally sat down and got to it, and I am very happy to have done so.

As for the pro's, as I have said before, I am very fond of this series and have enjoyed each chapter. This is certainly your trademark work, and it has a quality and unique flavor that sets it apart on this site. I like how you humanize the god-like beings, giving them a real feel. They speak and act much like regular humans, making them easy to picture and relate to as characters. Michael is also a great character in his own right. There is a large degree of torture that he carries within himself, and it shows in his actions and speech.

Not much in the way of cons with this series thus far. I might suggest streamlining some of the lore though. It comes across a bit overly technical is some parts. I am not quite sure what specific advice I'd give in order to fix that, as this is your project and is shaped how you see it, but that is the closest thing to a con that I can give with this, because otherwise it's one of my favorite series.

Thanks for asking for my advice, and again, sorry for taking so long.