Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25945479-20150102012649/@comment-25955988-20150102070222

Personally, I enjoyed this little entry. Especially the paragraph about the creature. Though I would have liked a little more detail about what Chris looked like after his apparent death. (like what condition it was in, were limbs missing, what looked to have happened pretty much)

In all, I give this a 8.9/10

Keep it up!