User talk:Icydice

YES!! I have made my first published creepypasta. More to come I hope.

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ClericofMadness (talk) 00:21, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

About story
Hey Icy, the best thing about editing is it makes you a god of the world you built. You can have anything and everything you want happen. The reason I suggested changing the ending is because it's too vague. I like to leave endings vague too, but there is a certain kind of story you can do that with.

Here are two examples one that has a vague ending, where the point is more to make the reader think then give closer. Another where a vague ending would ruin the story. Of course they're shameless plugs, but I guess I'll promote my stuff no matter what.

The first is Voice Messages. It has a foggy ending to make the reader wonder what is real and what isn't. Compare that to the story you've written and see if you can spot any differences in how the vague ending comes across.

The next is Spirit Bottles which has closer. That one was one I was going to leave open, but it wouldn't have worked. The story wasn't build for it.

Sometimes when you write something, it's great to have a confusing ending, but not to give the reader anything can also come across as a cop out.

Again, these are just things I've learned when writing and it's up to you on what you want to do. No one can make you write anything that you don't want to write. The concept is great and I'm sure you'll be able to make it one of the better stories on this site, so long as you work on it.

One last note, use the tiddles (~) to sign your comments. It will make it easier to get back to you. Just hit that key four times and it will let me jump right to your talk page.

Best,

JohnathanNash (talk) 16:33, August 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re: View
I'll try to get to it when I get a bit of free time tomorrow as I'm currently playing catch-up on the site after being out for most of the day and likely won't get time to sit down and write out a review until later. Sorry for the inconvenience. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 00:16, August 21, 2017 (UTC)