Talk:NES Godzilla Creepypasta/Chapter 2: Pathos

Compared to Chapter 1, Chapter 2 is a vast improvement, no longer pestering you with little peeks at the creepy that resides in this Creepypasta. It opens the plot up- but not too much. Remember how I said in my Chapter 1 overview that I was afraid of cliches? Nope. Nope, all gone. All of it. Everything fits together in one dreadful symphony- the HUD gone, the monster, the cave- Chapter 2 is not only great compared to Chapter 1, it's great as a pasta.

Overall, if the rest of the pasta was like Chapter 2, I would be very, very happy to know that someone had written a pasta as good (or even better) than Jvk.esp.

You're tearing me apart, Lisa! 10:49, May 6, 2013 (UTC)