Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-5990607-20130113234459

I have recently clicked on "random pasta" and I got to your creepypasta. I read it and it is a decent story as-is, but i personally think it can use some additions, like going into detail about the man and the war against the imperial guards, or his family, and how they were killed. I am not going to hate on it because it was a verbal story, and as you said, you only heard it once. but make some stuff up. Thanks for reading my two cents about this story, and after all, it is quite scary. 