Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35515534-20190605053523/@comment-35711173-20190605210550

Starman2012 wrote: DrBobSmith wrote:

My impression at the end is that the protagonist is insane and killed Tinkerbell himself. Is that correct? You are correct about the ending.

That level of insanity is something you have to work to get correct. Schizophrenics suffer the agony of the damned in their heads. You have to make us feel the torture and the bizarreness.