Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27941134-20160309214835/@comment-24101790-20160309220702

There isn't much to go on here. You basically set up the premise without anything else to really go on. The punctuation and capitalization errors that were present when I originally deleted it are still here. The story's only progressed a few sentences from the point where I originally deleted it so I can't really tell, but it feels like it's going to be an "explorer comes across something spooky while looking around" story that's been covered quite a lot before.