Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24699202-20150223211235

Splash.

I had survived the fall

Broken bones and a will for life.

But it was too late for me

Going under, I took one final breath.

Panic

Everything was broke

Tried to swim but I couldn't.

As the lights from the bay left my sight

The dark depths dragged me closer.

Breath

My body couldn't take it

The fact that I was going to die.

I wanted it to be quick.

And my body wanted to breath.

Cough

More water was in my lungs

My eyes were burning and my lungs were on fire.

I just wanted it to be over

My body was starting to stop.

Spasm

As I went lower

My throat began to spasm.

Trying to block off the water

But it was to no avail.

Relax

At this point I was fading away

And my throat was now open.

Eyes were closed

And then I was gone.

Rise

My lifeless body went up

After a few days I was found.

They buried me near my parents

I'm above it all now.

YouAreNotYou (talk) 21:12, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

I want to make it how it looks in paragraphs, but It comes out in sentance format. 