Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26285493-20150526213549/@comment-26285493-20150527232247

Thank you for the grammer feedback that I did not notice nor did the others that looked at it. I put periods into the broken speech for effect and im unsure on how to fix that and still have that effect? Also im not sure where you are wanting me to put question marks? I have looked through and edited the story and I deleted and added a few things. But I did not see any area's that needed a question mark. Thank you in advance again.