Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25357157-20140828214432/@comment-25357157-20140830003336

About the first point: So even if it was a true story, I shouldn't say it was? I also don't know what you mean by 'I also wonder when does this really starts', sorry. As in when the actual story begins?

Second point: Noted. I wrote it all in Notepad and copy/pasted without editing, will edit it more next time.

Third point:  At no point did my 'character' think, the whole thing was basically just one big thought/journal entry sort of thing about what happened to me as a kid. Also you said I should put QUESTION marks when my character is thinking. Did you mean Quotation marks?

Fourth point: I do understand it's not that scary, I guess I can add some made-up stuff to it to try and make it all make more sense and such.

Thankyou for the notes :)