Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37319763-20190120192812/@comment-24101790-20190120193736

I included your story and I'll also point out the issues I listed on your talk page:

Capitalization (""you're next".", "now, let's start.", etc.), punctuation ("I tore one's heart out, and put them in a robot body.", "I tore one's (ones) eye out, then put a clock there.", etc.), spelling ("I am a pshycho maniac."), and story issues (It's very rushed, feels more like plot points than an actual story, and violates our spinoff rules, as well as being pretty cliched (see last line and our cliche page)).

Those were a majority of the reasons (although that is not all the issues present) why your story was deemed to not meet our quality standards.