Talk:The Forgotten Spider-Man

Right off the bat, this was a pasta based off a comic book. Somehow, this made the gore seem a bit more disturbing, as anyone can make a creepy video game mod, but only a select few have the skills to illustrate a comic book. Now that I've got that over with, I had a small issue with the pasta- it wasn'ttoo significant, however. It was the fact that the author resorted to cliches for the main bulk of the story, such as the owner giving things out for free, subject of the pasta (in this case Spider-Man) not looking/behaving like original, and, of course, gore. This issue was nullified by its writing, unique setting (I mean, Mario is one thing, but Spider-Man is another), and dark atmosphere. And, of course, the ending. The ending could have used a bit more build-up, however- maybe the author reads a newspaper headline at the beginning, forgets it, and at the end it comes back to haunt him? All-in-all, a great pasta. 9/10 Alcatraz? That's your name? Alcatraz... Destiny's a bitch, huh? 09:34, March 11, 2013 (UTC)