User blog:Eureka2000/My First Pasta

Okay, so I've run into a bit of a predicament. I've just posted a pasta. It's called The Sender. I made some boo-boos which got it on the delete now pile. I have fixed the wall of text part, so that's good, but how else is in poor quality? Unless it's the wall of text part that made it poor quality, so in that case, it's all fixed. Okay, so this didn't turn out as well as I had hoped. Hopefully I'll be able to notice issues before publishing.