Talk:NoEnd House 3/@comment-30201479-20161011190240

For everyone complaining about the negative comments:

If the author gets so easily dismayed by criticism than they're never going to be much of a writer. When you put something out there to the public, you're tacitly giving perhmission for the public to judge it. That's all part of it.

And considering the rapid decline in quality for each consecutive part, I think negative comments are important. Not just the story went downhill with each installment (as tends to be the case with horror when more and more explanations get added to the mix), but the quality of the writing in a more general sense did. The dialog continues to feel less and less natural, and more like forced exposition, the descriptions are less vivid and feel more cheesy, and it just generally started feeling more amateurish.

I hope the author takes the criticisms in these comments to heart, but not so as to quit writing. They showed great potential in the first installment, and I'd love to see that potential fully realized.