User:EmpyrealInvective/Archive 12

Welcome to my talk page ! How goes the ? Just make sure  doesn't bother you too much. You know what I always say, " ." Also, don't let you long-standing fear of  get the better of you. Feel free to leave a message and sign it with four tildes (~) Like this: ~ Also note, keep messages civil. If you leave an acerbic message expect me to respond in kind.

HI
I had mostly intended to check up on wikia for some reez and found meself participating in the freestyle contest and stuff (for which my entry is here I'm pretty proud of it) and I'm doing super well! As far as well can go while my exams are two weeks away I guess. Any who, it was really nice to hear from someone, especially you, when I just made a coupla edits.

I do hope stuff's good with you, too. I won't be around much of course, but now that I'm getting blown away with every distraction I find, I'm not so sure. >_>

Also, I have better knock knock jokes now.

--Knock Knock (talk)

Want in?

Ok I realize I asked you in the beginning however, although I haven't gotten a response from Cyanwrites yet, Underscorre and I agree we need one - two more panel judges. I am officially inviting you. Would you like to be on the panel?

Blacknumber1 (talk) 13:37, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Hey,

You recently deleted my latest upload for not meeting the criteria, which is fair enough. I did discover a few errord with punctuation and grammar that i believe I have remedies, is there anything else that needs doing?

It's intended as a shortpasta/micrpasta

Cheers, there's a lot of stuff to remember and I've only just started doing this.

Ginger Bagels (talk) 14:32, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Advice on how to proceed
Hey Empy, I've just deleted Has Anyone Seen my Son, as it bears a striking resemblance to this, which was posted on Reddit quite a bit earlier than the story was posted on this site.

Could you advise me on how to punish the user who posted it? As you may be able to see from my talk page, I've misjudged this kind of thing in the past and don't want to slip up again.

Hoping you're well, « Under Scorre » 21:46, February 9, 2015 (UTC)
 * I've been looking through their contribs, and this thread seems to suggest they had no idea about the original story, so I think that you're right about them just not properly understanding how to credit the original author. «  Under Scorre   »  22:50, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Hello, My name is Clay and I wrote a short story called The Kindly Old Man. Could you please tell me why it was deleted? I'm new to this so I need tips and help if you are able. Thanks for your time.

-Clay

Yo. I noticed that you took down my creepypasta called "The Truth Behind Pac-Man". What is wrong with it?

re
Thanks Empy. As usual I don't know what the hell I'm doing. I tried to make a link but when I tested it it showed my Facebook info, which I didn't really want out there. So I just took the link down. Thanks for asking.

oh yeah: HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 03:41, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

New Critique
LOL You HAVE to see my new critique at some point. Alstinson (talk) 06:52, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Would this get deleted if submitted?

This is a CP that I wrote in the workshop. http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:422091#2

I would like to know if this would get deleted if posted.

No idea if you've seen this
But Nick's requested that he be demoted for a few months. « Under Scorre   »  20:11, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Can you tell me exactly why my creepypasta was deleted from the wiki?thank you

Pjnave123 (talk) 21:24, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Questions And Concerns
Hi, Empy. I have seen your warning(s) and I have a couple of different questions for you.

First of all, I may have a different layout from you guys because I have a laptop. I bring this up because I still have to idea mow to add any sort of categories to pages in a single edit. I have to edit several times to get both the story and the catagories in there. I am pretty sure that if an uninformed admin saw this, they would think that I was edit-count inflating. If you have any sort of tutorial page about this, kindly direct me to such

Second, I am slightly OCD and all the warnings on my page are bugging the crap out of me. I understand the point of warnings is to be read but I have read all recent warnings. Do I really have to just put up with this or is there some way to change this?

Thirdly, How are you supposed to use the blog function? Is it like an actual blog or what?

Fourthly, I have noticed an uptick in low quality pastas from the freestyle competition. Are we supposed to M4R these if they are really bad or do we leave them alone? If we are supposed to leave them alone, then you will sadly need to remove a M4R and Delete Now template from two recent pastas: School Lunch Lady and one other I forget the title of.

Fifthly, How does the deletion process work? I have submitted some pastas to this site that have been deleted while Shapeshifter and other works of such poor quality remain. Are these merely unnoticed or is there is something I am missing.

Sixth, How do you close threads on the Writers Workshop? I have about three to five threads that are in need of closure because they are so old.

Seventh(and finally), What happens when you are banned? do you still have access to your account but are unable to post or edit, do you get locked out of yur account completely, or *gasp* the ENTIRE site?

SOURCECODE01 (talk) 23:15, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Hello. Moments ago you deleted my short creepypasta 'School Dinner Lady" and I'm curious why. I know its not the greatest story on heaven and earth but I feel it does meet the mininum requirements for this wiki. Besides that, I wrote it for a creepypasta contest which has a time contraint.

Your thoughts?

King Hadas (talk) 23:50, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I can't argue with the grammatical and punctuation errors. Those are things I simply didn't notice but can easily be fixed.

As for plot issues:

'''"I grabbed a tray and began sliding it down the empty lunch bar, pretending to put food on it." Why is he doing this again if not to only set up the shadowy figure's actions? You shift in time without really dealing with consequences.'''

He's doing it because he has a childish fixation on being served school lunch. I believe I set this up in the first paragraph but I suppose I could have gone into slightly more detail.

'''"I wouldn't see the sun again until four months later. Morris and Teddy were eating lunch when I appeared literally out of nowhere." A teenager has been missing for four months and there is no talk of missing person's cases and the parents resolve to send the protagonist to a boarding school without any real reason. (Also where was he for four months where no one else would come across him as you never discuss him being taken anywhere?) Additionally what are the friends doing all of his encounter with the lunch lady? They are in the vicinity and they were the last people to see him before he vanished.'''

The fact that he literally reappeared out of nowhere and in the exact room he disappeared from implies that he was taken to another dimension. There's no talk of missing persons because that's not part of this story. The main character is the only perspective and he was elsewhere during this time. His parents send him to boarding school because he's been missing for four months and offers no explanation why. What do you do with your child in that situation? I thought a boarding school made sense. Maybe not the best parenting but it made sense. And his friends are busy messing around in the girl's locker room.

I guess I could have emphasized certain details more but all in all I feel the story is coherent and I don't agree with it being deleted.

King Hadas (talk) 00:49, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Chat
Why is there no more chat?

The Duke Is AWSOME!!! (talk) 02:59, February 11, 2015 (UTC)MCGPY

K
Ok, thank you :)

The Duke Is AWSOME!!! (talk) 03:04, February 11, 2015 (UTC)MCGPY

Luke.
Thanks!

--Luke who? (talk)

Just for Clarification
Just to clarify, command would look like this for the first story of a series  or are the brackets not needed? Same goes for the second story  Haha and it looks like that question answered my question

/x/
If a story says it's from /x/ should I tag it with the Reddit Pastas category? I've came across a couple that said that and wasn't sure. Thanks.

Jay Ten (talk) 01:17, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Asking a question
Hi. You recently deleted my Creepypasta submission- "Don't go out with strangers". What could I have done so that it didn't get deleted?

DJH2036 (talk) 04:53, February 12, 2015 (UTC)DJH2036

Clear case of plaugurism
Hi, Empy. I have found a blatant case of plagurism of the pasta "Masterpiece." The person reposted it with the title changes to 5:00 a.m.

Here is the link: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/5_a.m

Also, I am apparently using the beta VisualEditor so if this erases your talk page, I am SO sorry.

SOURCECODE01 (talk) 17:04, February 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * Page has been deleted. To be honest, I don't see much point in taking action against the poster - - since s/he hasn't logged in for almost a year anyway, although feel free to ban them if you feel otherwise, Emp.  17:14, February 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * I've taken a quick look through their contributions, and there only seemed to be one other - Bitten, which I've redirected to the page it was duplicated from. Dibbuk does turn up some results which come from before the wiki was created, but it appears to be an urban-legend type thing, according to Wikipedia, so I haven't taken any action. Other than that I couldn't find anything, but it is possible I've missed something. 18:17, February 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * As a heads-up, Under, you can block the user yourself. No need to consult a crat about this. Mystreve (talk) 18:30, February 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * I've had trouble in the past on deciding what is and what isn't plagiarism (see User talk:Underscorre/Archive 2), so I'm just trying to ensure I don't issue an unfair ban. 18:43, February 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * A ripped-off story is a ripped-off story. But, that's fine. If you needed a second opinion, I understand. Mystreve (talk) 18:45, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

What's Up?
Hey Empy! How are you doing? So I sent my Creepypasta to a couple of other people for peer review. So far, I haven't heard back from them yet. The only thing i know is that one of the people i sent it to replied back to me saying that they got the email. Hopefully they can send me a review of the pasta as soon as possible but hey everybody's schedule is different and some people may be busier than others. I'm still looking for ideas for Chapter 5 by the way.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 17:29, February 12, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 17:29, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Premise" message
I can try and send the pasta through Pastebin but i will need a link to the site or location in order to do that. If there's another method that will work best for you then tell me and i will send the pasta there.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 18:47, February 12, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 18:47, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Pastebin link" message
Ah thanks! Though i'm worried that other people besides me and you might see the pasta and it may spoil it for people who were waiting to read the pasta. Nevertheless, i'll give it a try.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 23:07, February 12, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 23:07, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Grandmaster
I can't believe you even ninja while you eat! You will rue the day! Thanks for the template though : )

Jay Ten (talk) 02:05, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

I want to know why The Special One was deleted. It was better then a lot of the stories on here. I do not see the problem with it.

Look dude, u should relax, maybe get laid sometime, like, why should I not comment? Y u no get laid?scott adkins 12:46, February 13, 2015 (UTC) proudly, scottadkins

Ah, okay, sorry for being rude earlier

I Sent The Story To Pastebin
Ok. I took your advice and put the story on Pastebin. Here i'll link it to you so you don't have to spend much time looking for it. This is it: http://pastebin.com/y0NCZ1uP

Hope that link works for you. If not, I'll try and send another message to you with JUST the link and not a whole lot of other text.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 20:30, February 13, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 20:30, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Blog Comment
There was no reason to delete my blog comment, you could have simply replied to it saying that you had removed it.

Also check the admins place on the Category:Content thread.

Shining-Armor ( talk ) 21:53, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can you?
Can you please remove the notification off of my profile please? It is not something one would want everyone to see, is it? I have read it enough and yes, it is visible by anyone. Please just blank it out already.

Lorgerthar (talk) 22:37, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Whoops
Sorry about the thing with the red text. I keep forgetting that wikitext is parsed in the blog previews. I have no problem with you moving it. 22:51, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Sad Noises
TRAVEES I MISS YOU

~I LUV U DAWG~   00:13, February 14, 2015 (UTC)


 * I have been well. Rather depressed lately. I missed you tho.


 * ~I LUV U DAWG~
 * It's okay. The company of such a fine specimine such as yourself is always a mood up. semicolon closing parenthesis. (Oh god... now HE'S sad.)
 * ~I LUV U DAWG~

I Did It!
Empy! You won't believe what just happened! I actually found a pasta WORSE that Douglas&Donald1! It's called "Lost at Disney". Why is it bad? Well here's my review of it (I also left this on the story page as well):

WOW! Just... Wow! This gives Douglas&Donlad1 a run for its money! This is the kind of pasta you'd see on the Trollpasta wiki. Alright here are my main gripes with this pasta:

1. This story is nothing but a big ol' wall of text. I can see why the "No Wall of Text" rule is in place. Not only does this show extremely poor grammer skills, but it also makes it hard to read and see as well. Look, i'm not saying you should space EVERY SINGLE sentence like a paragraph. What I am saying is that every 5 sentences, make a paragraph. This will make it easier on your reader's eyes and will actually help them follow along with the story better. Which leads me to my next point.

2. I don't even know what the story is about. When I first looked at the title, I thought it was about a little kid getting lost in Disneyland and capturing the fear a little kid might feel being seperated in a big place like that. However, when I read the first part of the story, I thought it was going to be a Five Nights at Freddy's scenario where the animatronics come to life at night and try to attack somebody. As I kept reading (by the way, thank you for the headache Mr. Text Wall!) it switched to something different. If this was one of those "Anthology" stories, I could at least understand. If that was the idea however, I think there should be some sort of indication that it's numerous stories rolled into one. However, from what I understand of this, that doesn't seem to be the case.

3. The amount of grammatical errors. OH MY GOD! Where do I begin? I don't know because pretty much the whole story is nothing BUT these! Peer review, Word editing softwares, hell even GOOGLE should've been used to check for errors like these! If there were one or maybe a couple of minor spelling errors here, I could be a bit more lenient on this pasta's grammer but... Oh... God! This is just a mess! If I were an English teacher and a student handed in an assignment with THIS many grammatical errors in it, I'd probably do a couple of things. A) Have a heart attack. B) Turn into a raging fire goddess. C) Both A and B.

Sorry if I seemed angry but... this story is just... UGH! I can't believe I actually found a story WORSE than Douglas&Donald1. At least with that story, I could understand and follow along with the plot ok! I can now understand why this story is up for deletion!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 03:54, February 14, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 03:54, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Something Interesting
I just wanted to make sure you saw this. I just thought it was something you might want to see (or not). I googled it and it's true (well the name matches anyway).

Jay Ten (talk) 02:37, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Hey, did u make Abandoned By Disney? If you did well done I love and hate it becuz its so creepy. I love creepy but I hate it. :DDDDXTwighLightZonex (talk) 18:08, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

I would like to know why my story was deleted, I don't understand what was wrong with it, if it is too short I can easily add more to it, at least give me a copy so I can add on to it thank youscott adkins 02:49, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Please tell me exactly what was wrong with my story. I was in the midst of writing it and needed to break and next I check its gone. I look through story regulations and find nothing that was wrong with it (that I saw of course). I would like for you to be specific on what was wrong. Was the plot not consistent (it probably was)? Was there grammatical errors (also probably was)? I don't know any else that would have been wrong. Along with the fact I put non-existent categories in so that was probably the biggest thing. But anything other than that I need to know about?

K. Thanks. Probably going to trash it anyways... But if I continue I'm going to up her age a bit. Most likely not going to continue though. But anyways thanks for clearing that up.

Voting question
Hey Trav,

I know we are not allowed to nominate our own work, but if one of my stories is up for vote for PoTM, am I allowed to vote for it?

Banningk1979 (talk) 16:37, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Polls" message
Well good to hear. I thought the glitch happened because i divided by zero and triggered the blue screen of death!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 17:36, February 16, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 17:36, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Dysonater15 (talk) 17:37, February 16, 2015 (UTC)The Dysonater

Problems
Hello, for some reason, on the False Positive page [], my signature is not working, and any templates show up when I try to post my appeal, and if you have time, after looking at these, can you see if my pasta actually has blacklisted themes. Thanks! --Love watching all of you scream, CrazyWords 19:52, February 16, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords

Hi, I would like to know why my pasta Moccus has been removed and if you can state the flaws and if there is any way it can be edited so i can post it again for others to enjoy..Thanks :) (Bish .whut (talk) 00:01, February 17, 2015 (UTC))

Hey,

Looks like you deleted a story of mine after I left a poorly worded authors note at the end that made it seem unfinished. Truth was that was the end of the story, done, finito, in all of its underwhelming glory. I was just gauging a reaction to see if anyone was interested in seeing the follow-up that I was already working on (which is the same character but a different story/setting that just refers back to the first story in passing.)

Sorry bout that.

Damian

Uninspired-Imaginings (talk) 22:38, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Check this
I found The Baptism on tumblr-here. I added the credit template to credit Micah, but it was removed. Odd thing is, there was a picture in the original if you look, and the picture said By Micah Rodney, but it has since been removed as well. I'm guessing this is attempted plagiarism that got all mixed up. I just thought maybe you could sort it out.

Jay Ten (talk) 23:44, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

my bad on that sir (- -)

I'm Confused
I am here to ask a question. Why was my story deleted as soon as I submitted it? I read the quality rules but I am still unsure of what I did wrong. I'm kinda new to this, and I can't see what I didn't do rule wise. Please help me understand what I did so I can fix it. Thank you.Airia166 (talk) 03:00, February 18, 2015 (UTC)airia166

An apology for rule infrigment
I was not aware tha editing the talkpage was against the rules but I checked and it is. I will be rereading the rules so I do not make any more mistakes. I apologize. I haven't been very active here at all. I just wanted to post this if its alright. King Gigabyte talk 04:59, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the clarification. I wasn't aware of the cliches in my story and how confusing it got at the end. I would make a better version of it now that I know but I think that is against the rules. Also, I sort of was introducing my character because I wanted to help the reader understand her past a little, but I see where you are coming from. I hope when I write another creepypasta that it isn't as bad as this..Airia166 (talk) 05:41, February 18, 2015 (UTC)airia166

Could you please explain why The Henderson Murderer is not up to par with your quality  standards?

King Irving (talk) 10:36, February 18, 2015 (UTC)King Irving

Nevermind no Re-editing Here
After reading the oc guide I think I won't re-edit it because I know it won't be a very good creepypasta even if I did. I just wanted to create a character, I guess I didn't choose a good way of going about it. Sorry to have wasted your time.Airia166 (talk) 22:33, February 18, 2015 (UTC)airia166

May I ask, Why?
You probably get this a lot, I know, but I want to know why it was deleted so I can fix these mistakes.

Yes, there were a few spelling errors, but I've fixed those with this pastebin. Sure, it might be violating example 21 of the Creepy Cliches, but honestly, it doesn't show any of the examples, just a picture of a distorted man, and it was opened up by clicking an icon.

So, why was it actually deleted then if it doesn't violate most of the except maybe the no Cliche rule? The link is the pastebin of the pasta: Creepy Pasta with Spelling Errors fixed.

Thanks and if you can, message me back.

RioK9 (talk) 02:05, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Typo
On this locked page, there is a part (Others... Spongebob cartoons, episodes of iCarly or whatever, those shows came long after I'd made my break with Sid, but the style was all too familiar.) that does not capitalise the first "B" in SpongeBob. Because this is how it should always be written, I'm asking you if you could please capitalise the first B.

Thanks,

TheGamingSponge 07:38, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Alright, thank you. I'll try not to rush it next time.

Hey, I recently posted a creepypasta and it was deleted, from what I read, it didn't meet standards, it was called "Telephone" can you explain why it was deleted? Please and thank you

RipTideGx2 (talk) 22:17, February 19, 2015 (UTC)RipTideGx2

Telephone
You recently deleted my post "telephone" I understand that it wasn't the best story and that my iPad screws up capitalization and grammar, but I was just wondering why my post was deleted and what I can do in the future to improve it? Please respond and thanks for your time.

RipTideGx2 (talk) 22:24, February 19, 2015 (UTC)RipTideGx2

Thanks, but one more question
Thank you for taking time out of your day to explain why my stories were deleted, and giving me advice, I really appreciate this and will try harder in the future, but I have one more question. I was told that if I reupload my story I would be banned, cut could I change it up and make it better and then reupload it? Thank you for your time

RipTideGx2 (talk) 22:43, February 19, 2015 (UTC)RipTideGx2

How to Play Alone
I saw that this was disqualified for possible plagiarism. Has anyone found out if it was actually plagiarized? Just curious.

Only A Lemon (talk) 23:17, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Question
I promise to always be honest in my reviews, but is it breaking the rules if I try and be entertaining with it and treat it like a web show? And is it against this sites rules to advertise my blog on other sites?

Sorry if the answers were obvious, I'm just not sure, thanks. Alstinson (talk) 19:25, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Pasta Error?
I have tried multiple times to upload a new pasta that for the Creepypasta Freestyle Challenge, and every time I get an error that says, "The modification you tried to make was aborted by an extension hook." I have uploaded 4 pastas before this one, and all of them were accepted the first time I submitted them. Do you know why this happens and if I can fix it? Thank you. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 19:32, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

How do i get rid of my creepypasta account?Containment breach (talk) 17:49, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Points?
Hi i was wondering what the points are for?

TheIrishFandomChick (talk) 21:19, February 21, 2015 (UTC)TheIrishFandomChick

Points? Cont.
Thank You!

TheIrishFandomChick (talk) 21:25, February 21, 2015 (UTC)TheIrishFandomChick

Thank you for clarification
The story seemed fine, and I almost hated to mark it for review, as it was well written. Just wasn't sure if the Slenderman addition made it a Spinpasta or not. Thank you for clearing that up.

Best,

Banningk1979 (talk) 00:03, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

?
When you get time, I was wondering if you would remove my story from the WW. It says "removed" beside it, but it's still there for some reason. Thanks.

Jay Ten (talk) 01:41, February 22, 2015 (UTC)


 * Ha, nice subject line. Yeah, it's gone now. Thanks.  I also didn't know that about rollbacks still being able to see them.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 01:58, February 22, 2015 (UTC)


 * Lol. And a mysterious bright bold link appears on the front page titled "From the man that brought you Princess Pete, I give you the new classic 'The Vomit Hound' by Jay 'How did he make it through middle school English' Ten"


 * Jay Ten (talk) 02:21, February 22, 2015 (UTC)


 * Ha, that does have a much better ring to it. I'll be sure to consult you for future self-deprecating titles.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 02:32, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

READ THIS!!!!!
Hello,

I just realized that you've deleted my poem, Preminition, and I now think it's time I need to talk to you guys about something. I've already got into some trouble with my other poem, XANANTIA, that was deleted a year ago and now I let that go, but now you've all crossed the line. Why does horror or chilling tales have to be such long stories in your perspective? To my side, chilling tales can come in any size even if it is just a poem. This poem was based on true events that occured this week including the sighting of the crows on Tuesday and my grandfather dying on Friday. Does a scary tale have to be long as a book? No, it doesn't at all. There are several short horror poems made by several famous writers including Piano by D.H. Lawrence or Acquainted with the Night by Robert Frost. Just look up some short horror poems and reply to me later. Thank you...

-BloodyBlake44

Need some help
Hey empty, I need some help on finding some writers workshop or something to improve my pastas. The last one was deleted by LOLSKELETONS, and do you have any advice? I'm fairly new to the 'creepypasta' thing. Clamber (talk) 04:13, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Review Request
Empy,

If you get the chance to check out my new short A Bad Night I'd appreciate some feedback. Thanks!

Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 06:27, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Heyya
Hey Empy, if and when you make the time, I'd love a review of my lengthy novella up on the WW. http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:431180 Much appreciated if possible. Thanks in advance. K0R0M0

New story
Hey Travis. I finished a story tonight that I rather like and I'm hoping you'll like it too. Go and read it when you get the chance. Walk Amongst the Living--GarbageFactory (talk) 09:18, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry
Sorry about blocking without warning first for RP. Maybe we should remove that from the commenting policy if we don't immediately ban? 22:12, February 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * That makes sense. Have a good day. 22:18, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Interview
It'd be easiest for me in text form I think, so maybe Skype Chat. I use the same name there, so whomever the interviewer is can try adding me to their contacts list. I should respond within 24 hours if my name was typed correctly.--Mikemacdee (talk) 23:57, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blacklist
What exactly does blacklisted mean? Does it mean not allowed? Or, does it mean that you just can't post it? Niteday (talk) 00:23, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry if I'm bugging you or anything, but if you could tell me what reason the creepypasta I had made was deleted, I'd be greatful.

Again, sorry if I'm bugging you at all.

what is your profile picture?

hitler?

dawg
Hop on SPWC, dawg (or skype) &#34;The good mean well. We just don&#39;t always end up doing well.&#34; ~ Isaac (talk) 01:31, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

I understand now.

am staring. so I try to do better.

well, this pasta was more of a joke. the more I think about it. there really weren't a point to this pasta. the grammar was very poor, I can agree on that. It make sense to have serious rules. because shit like sonic.exe can not be taken seriously. and it make it an embarrassment to creepy pasta. I just cant take creepy pasta seriously now a days. all of the popular one are dumb,and not scary

Hello, can you please tell me why my first story was deleted? It would mean a lot because i can't see why it was deleted.

Ok i see how you would see it to be one big block of words, but can you tell me how to indent so i can put in new paragraphs? and also you can post a story in parts? i was going to puplish them in parts since i was going to make it a long story.

Thank you so much for telling me the reason why it got deleted, i will continue to use this site accordingly to my schedule. I may also post more in the near future.

Hey there,

About the pastas like BEN and Slenderman.. I don't know if i could tell you but.. About Ben, 2014 ago cleverbot is weird.. Nope, not "You've met with a terrible fate, haven't you?" and not "You shouldn't have done that" replies from cleverbot.. and Cleverbot replies different.. Not normally.. I suppose i could ask permission of posting to cleverbot picture first, i might get banned.

About Slenderman i got a video on school searching the whole building for ghosts with Dave, Kenneth and Dawn. I'm gonna show you the video if you want.. I think they are real.. Yet, in the video there was like a faceless man.. I hope you'd reply.. Creepypastagirl20003 (talk) 13:08, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blog
After I wrote and published a blog post, I realized the next day that I had accidentally disabled commenting. I think people had seen it when I posted it, but they weren't able to comment. Am I allowed to reblog this post? I would really appreciate comments on it, and I feel like there is no other way for it to recieve attention except for it to show up on the Wiki Activity. If you don't think I should reblog it that's fine, but I'm just wondering.

The coolest lemon around (talk) 23:57, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

The title of the blog is Writing Tips. Thanks.

The coolest lemon around (talk) 00:27, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sucker
Ha! You've found my one true weakness. "But Ma, they were callin' me a weenie!!"

Jay Ten (talk) 04:00, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry about that too, and no, I'm not making them real and all but i understand. thank you Creepypastagirl20003 (talk) 09:33, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks!
Thank you for the hint about the templates! , right?

Atonal Anthem (talk) 21:55, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Nice to meet you!
BTW, do you have any other accounts than this one? (DeviantART, Youtube, etc)

HelenaScarlet (talk) 23:55, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

RE: RE: Nice to meet you!
Good.

Well, I just wanted to contact you, due to the future creepypasta I am making, and once I am finishing it, I am going to get some creepypasta readers to tell me where the errors are and help me to fix it, then get some creepypasta admins (In other sites) to tell me more errors and to fix it even more, and once it gets accepted at the Writer's Workshop, I'll publish it to this wiki. That's my strategy. ^^lll

HelenaScarlet (talk) 00:25, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

RE: RE: RE: RE: Nice to meet you!
Okay then. (I'll try my best to not break the site rules. I accidentally did one post with no work but I quickly deleted it myself. I'm an airhead sometimes.)

So, I'll think about it. I'll try to have the guts to contact with the Creepypasta admins, as some critiques may be harsh, but I keep telling myself that critiques do not HAVE to be nice. Because I wanna see the errors there to fix them before I publish them. ^_^

Re
Hey, my friend. I apologize for my inactivity (and let's face it - my profile should be in the "Ghosts" category on here), but between finding new work, school, and kids it makes it difficult. I guess I'll just come out and say "I will be inactive on here until my life stabilizes a bit". Since you're a crat here, I guess I can say "I said it" - you being among the ones in charge and all ;). Lol.

Anywhatwhohow... as far as the collab thing...yes, I still want to see it carry on. However, I haven't perused the comments (I know the community has been itching for it to start again, but I just haven't had the time to look at them all). The fact that the community wants it so bad should make it a top priority, which it still is. If you want to grease that particular gear, by all means, get it going. Also, the Writer's Lounge. Mr. Mcadee is our next interviewee and he asked me what's going on with it. Since I'm so spotty, you mind putting the feelers out for an interviewer? We can push it to April if need be. Just curious.

If this is too much, let me know. I'll try and do it. Life has me by the short and curlies now though, man. Real life stuff demands my attention. Let me know, Travis. Thanks, brother.

Mystreve (talk) 00:51, February 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * Any of the interviewers you mentioned work for me. I honestly would like either Jay or Black to do it, since I know they are both passionate about writing in general and are both in love with our site and what we stand for. Not a snub to the other two (especially Under, who has been nothing but a great admin here...the other? don't know), just going on what I know.


 * I would recommend they somehow swap email addys (via SPW chat maybe?)...the interviewer sends a document with all questions and the interviewee fills in the blanks, then the interviwer makes the finishing touches. That method worked pretty well when I spoke to Slimebeast. You know how to do this though, so I won't insult your intelligence :)


 * Once again, I am sorry for my inactivity as of late. Please let Skelly, Cleric, and Sloshed know I haven't forgot about our dear site...just my RL stuff I have to take care of. I still love this site, our users, and the creepily awful (in a good way) stories we get from other amateur writers from around the world.


 * Mystreve (talk) 01:34, February 26, 2015 (UTC)


 * Hey Empy, I just wanted to let you know I responded to this possibility on Myst's talk page. I really am sorry and slightly embarrassed, but I just have to be honest and say I don't think I'm cut out for it.  Thanks again for the vote of confidence though.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 01:38, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Newest Tobit installment
Hey Trav,

My latest addition to my Tobit series, Tobit: Blood and Obligations is published. If you get a chance, please check it out and leave me some feedback.

Banningk1979 (talk) 07:43, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Interview
Wow thanks man, I'm honored! I've actually thought of interviewing somebody. If it were somebody I knew of, I'd happily say "yes". Unfortunately, I don't know Mike's work at all. Never even read his POTM. I briefly checked out his pages. He has alot of work and I know none of it. I'd hate to pretend that I really know his work. Unless there is a set template of questions to ask. I'd likely do it over email. I know you need an answer right away but is there is a way to do this with out me really knowing his work? I might read a couple of his stories though. Have you thought about maybe HumboldtLycanthrope or Raidra? Blacknumber1 (talk) 16:12, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

RE Interview
Wow, Empry, I am honored you would ask. When is the interview? All those stories and two novellas, I wouldn't want to interview him without really studying his work. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 16:24, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re
So it is to be posted in late March- when would the actual interview take place? If I have 3 weeks I can read all his work and have questions readyHumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 16:45, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

If I have until the last week of March I will definitely do it. And thank you so much for thinking of me, I'm glad you enjoy my blogs. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 16:57, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

I darkcaptor dont see how my story doesnt meet the standards it makes no sense to meDarkcaptor (talk) 19:31, February 27, 2015 (UTC)Darkcaptor Probstfeld

My story, "Man in the Woods" was deleted, I was talk because it was deleted because of standards. I'm not sure what I did wrong, or what standards were not met. -blm95tehe

wow I didn't know the format came out that way. I copy pasted it from a google doc I had it in, so that might be why it came out that way. Also the story was ment to be a first hand account from a reddit account (Which it was). I just don't see this as a reason for deleting, because its based off of opinion. But I do see why it was deleted because of formatting.

alright, it wasn't my story so I shouldn't complain really, I just thought it was a nice short I found on reddit and thought people would enjoy it, I'll just take the idea and try and make somthing better then the original writter.

How much is it ok to edit?
Hello again!

I'm wondering about how much it is "ok" to edit on a existing pasta. I know that punctuation (add a comma) and spelling (like thiws) is always welcome to be corrected. But what if a sentence is grammatically wrong, and (or) several words have to be replaced? What if these mistakes repeat throughout the text? Do you simply point them out in the comments?

Thank you!

Atonal Anthem (talk) 22:55, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Hello! Could you take a look at this?
A couple of weeks ago I made a blog post about how I think several points of the Quality Standard's rules on poetry are poorly-worded or are not applicable to all kinds of poetry. I have yet to have any admin's opinion on it, and was wondering if you agree or not with some or all of my proposed changes and would be willing to enact them. ~ Avenging Angel (talk) 23:04, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Hello thank you for the heads up! you seem very nice...

whats youyr favorite pasta?

XxsoullessxX (talk) 23:02, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

My story that I published 2 MINUTES AGO was just deleted and I have no Idea why. Betrayed Angel (talk) 00:01, February 28, 2015 (UTC) Betrayed Angel

In Reply: Unfinished Pasta
I'm sorry about that, Travis. I've been working on that story at home for a while and decided now would be a good time to post it. I'm new to the wiki, and I've been inspired by pastas like 1999 and candle cove so I'm eager to spread some of my Ideas. I guarantee that I ALWAYS complete my work, but I do enjoy leaving my readers in suspense. TheGardenOfEvil (talk) 02:36, February 28, 2015 (UTC)TheGardenOfEvil

RE:RE: Unfinished Pasta
Solid Copy on that, thank you for your assistance. I'm debating on an ending at the moment. Thank you for your support, and keep up the good work!

RE: Story Deletion
Hello. I am writing to you because I do not understand why my pasta did not meet the requirements. AdamTheMop (talk) 02:49, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

I agree. Not completely. But I agree. It was rushed and yes I did word somethings wrong. But hey, that's my writing style.

I am sorry for publishing this story onto the wiki without proper thought. AdamTheMop (talk) 03:07, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

I will and thank you. I tend not to take things so harshly, so I am sorry if that came across that way. AdamTheMop (talk) 03:14, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

I just want to start off by saying that I apologize for re-uploading the story, I didn't notice the message until I reuploaded it. Also I wanted to know why exactly was my story was deleted, the closest thing I could find would be the wall of text but I want to confirm with you. Lastly, is there away to edit my deleted page so I can fit the quality for the sight.

Mesodax (talk) 04:11, February 28, 2015 (UTC)Mesodax

Hey, I wrote the story Broken Toys and I was wondering which of the quality standards I didn't meet, please and thank you for telling me if you can.

AvidHorrorFan (talk) 04:47, February 28, 2015 (UTC)Huner or AvidHorrorFan

Thanks for the tips, I am new to this and didn't know about the workshop yet, I posted it to maybe get some constructive criticism so I can steadily improve it. Sorry about the typos as well, I wrote it on google docs and I couldn't copy paste from it so I had to rewrite it from there. Plus the keyboard on the laptop I am writing keeps jamming and switching to other languages.

Thanks again.

AvidHorrorFan (talk) 05:49, February 28, 2015 (UTC)Hunter or AvidHorrorFan

Thank You
Thank you for deleting my page. It was a bit embarrasing to me, so thank you for getting rid of it.DJH2036 (talk) 06:19, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

And the winner is...
Congrats on PotM my friend. It's a great story and truly deserves to be on the front page.

 *Casually stands up and begins slow clap--realizes no one else is in the room--keeps clapping* 

Jay Ten (talk) 00:32, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

My talk page

Alright seriously I learned my lesson about troll pastas, I contributed quality work to the wiki, and the only infractions Ive had are for messing with the talk page warnings. Could you pleeease just get rid of them. There and eyesore and whenever I get bored I like to mess with them and then I'm get banned for a day. I promise I won't purposely break any wiki rules if you get rid of them. At least replace it with something like I'm watching you 👀or say the NSA monitoring your account. At least try to make the messages staining my talk page more creative. Make a story out of the warning or make it creepy, add jeff the killer into it. Please do something if you don't get rid of this eyesore. If you haven't by the way, read Oh Cee Dee it has a great twist.

BM (ha, lowbrow)
I just noticed that you changed your "what I'm reading" status and discovered you were reading Blood Meridian. It's a gritty, painful read isn't it? I'm not crazy about the awkward, vague synopses at the beginning of each chapter, but it was an enjoyable read.

Jay Ten (talk) 01:42, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Hi I made a creepy pasta by the title of "Little China Cat" I was wondering why did you delete it ? Please respond as soon as possible. Thank you --Gaming Alien (talk) 04:17, March 1, 2015 (UTC)Gaming Alien

PSA
The NSA would like to commend you on behalf of the CDC for taking the necessary precautions to prevent the spread of susceptibility to death, without resorting to the tier 1 BAN class Ballistic Anarchy Nuke.

RE:
No problem man. I haven't managed to read all 49 of your pastas yet, but if they're of the same quality as the others I've read then I can't wait to read them! Also, thank-you for all your hard work towards the wiki. Seriously, I don't know how it would've survived if you weren't taking care of it. You're the best! Have a good one, 08:34, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Hi,

You're a fantastic writer. I am looking to connect with a strong writer to develop a story for a project I'm working on. I was curious if you were available for freelance? If so, please let me know.

Alheck (talk) 15:15, March 1, 2015 (UTC) Al

Thanks man.
lol Couldn't resist making fun of you guys.

Just doing a little experimenting for something, not trying to mess up anything

Ahh thank you. I couldn't remember the colors and stuff so I was comparing mine to the one I was trying to do. Ill use my talk page from now on sorry. By the way how do you get the signature to be a cewrtian color all the time?

Okay yeah sorry about that, thanks for the info. I probably took up enough of your time already so thanks and goodnight.

I have no idea what just happenedShadowHawk5 (talk) 03:53, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re:
Fantastic,

If you could, can you PM me and we can start a conversation via email or skype about the project. Lots of details and I'm not crazy about the email features on the site.

Hey, man maybe I'm missing something but I fixed everything that was wrong with my story yet it still was deleted. If you could tell me why I would be very thankful.

Paragor (talk) 13:25, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Can you help me with my creepypasta? Please, because I have a story but I need help writing it, I don't know how to not make it a cliche and how not be deleted. I read about how to write a creepypasta, but, still, I think it is still a cliche...

ShadowCookie123 (talk) 15:40, March 2, 2015 (UTC)ShadowCookie123

The Thing Meets Frozen
Hi, Empy. I know that you, like me, are a huge fan of John Carpenter's The Thing, so, if you haven't seen this already, I thought you might get a kick out of this http://youtu.be/dooAjI6yOhg   By the way I am loving Mike's work so much and am really looking forward to the interview. Catch you later HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 21:16, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Thing The Musical
That was hillarious, thanks HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 23:07, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you.
Hello,

This is G. Preeb here. You recently critiqued a story I put through the Spin-off appeal called "Plagiarist". I would like to take this moment to sincerely thank you for taking the time to read my story and to leave an in-depth review. I personally found myself nodding in agreement as I read through it.

There was one thing that surprised me however; you believed the murder took place at the store. I actually intended it to happen at Harvey's personal home. It's perfectly okay if you were led to think that. It simply means that I would have to write a better transition between the store and the home. The only other thing that also stood out was, "higher heir of conscience" That phrase literally means, "condescending" I know that's a strange way of putting it. I was intending to make the protagonist seem smarter, but there comes a point where style can get in the way of good sentence flow. Again, I agree with the review.

Thanks once again for reading and reviewing. A second set of honest eyes are the best way for a writer such as myself to improve.

G. Preeb (talk) 00:31, March 4, 2015 (UTC)

That was just a thing of beauty
HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 05:21, March 4, 2015 (UTC)

Blanking Warnings From Talk
Hi. I know this seems like a minor concern, but the user Davenze has blanked his talk page from the warning you or another admin gave him. Since he seems to have aabandonedhis account, I was wary about mentioning this but I think I should bring it to you attention.

Thanks, SOURCECODE01 (talk) 17:12, March 4, 2015 (UTC)​

So I just read your pasta, the more recent one, the one with the ghost...

I imagine you had some contact with psicography? There are hundreds of books that describe the reality you mention in your story.

About how the soul degrades according to one's actions, about how other dead people can influence you, about emotional affinity... the standard astral stuff...

You did a good job with it. Simple and concise, yet true.

It's funny how people finish reading one pasta and become terrified that it's real, but now that you describe the reality of what awaits us, no one feels threatened by that idea...

anyway congrats

you found a real goldmine

psicography can be an endless source of creepypasta material

hey bitch
ay get your ass on skype, i got some daaaaaank memes to show ya you feel me bro? &#34;The good mean well. We just don&#39;t always end up doing well.&#34; ~ Isaac (talk) 00:31, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re helpful hints
Gotcha. Will do. Thanks, Empy  HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 00:41, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

stidE
1,666 EDITS SINCE JOINING THIS WIKI OCTOBER 20, 2012

^ me

omg!! --&#34;The good mean well. We just don&#39;t always end up doing well.&#34; ~ Isaac (talk) 02:07, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Special Review Blog?
I was thinking, you should have a special place on the home page for staff picked reviews. For instance Hooded Werewolf's movie reviews are fantastic, but because they get little comments they are soon lost in flurry of incoming blogs. As you may have noticed I posted a blog with a review of Stephen King's new story and it was quickly lost in all the fun and silly blogs that were getting comments. It is just an idea, but you know, a quality review section on the homepage would add a classy touch to this wiki. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:53, March 5, 2015 (UTC)