Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180613055407/@comment-33937557-20180615180844

DrBobSmith wrote: BloodySpghetti wrote: Ah now its better. Now it's hospital all over the place but makes complete sense, the situations are related and the hammnigger seems to be a more legit threat.

I do agree with Potato, what happens with the mother? I mean, not very important plot wise, but we want to know what happens to the mother... is she alive? Probably ran away. BloodySpghetti and SoDaft Potato,

You are both right. I have attempted to correct it. See what you think. I am satisfied with the edit. She doesn't just evaporate into thin air now!