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Project “Inner Agent”

The following document and files were found inside an old Allies laboratory bunker south of Paris, France. A privately funded military group found it on 26 December 2011. Until today, the mystery of the document and what’s its about still shrouded those who ever read it.

This is the content of the document:

Experiment 2L1 no. F3 Project “Inner Agent”

Name	: Williem Müeller ( Subject 8 )

Origin	: German / Prisoner of War

Sex	: Male

Status	: Voluntarily offered himself as a subject in exchange of shelter and food

Age 	: 28

DOB	: 20 March 1916

Scientists in Charge : 1. Dr. Michael Whelps ( Allies / Head Researcher ) 2. Dr. Willman Arthur ( Allies )

3. Prof. Dmitri Ivanov ( Russian Deserter )

Purpose of Experiment: To create a super-espionage agent to penetrate through the Third Reich and manifest all secret projects done by the Nazis along with battle plans and battle tactics.

Other notes: Subject has been showing mediocre intelligent quality of 112 IQ points. Also has been noted, subject has limited English language skill but fluent in German. Subject also has a think profile, similar to almost every POW in Allies Captive.

Note from Head Researcher: This is Dr. Michael Whelps. The experiment will occur for 14 days using Russian pre-developed prototype chemical; “Serum X4T”, that was brought to Allies by former Russian scientist, Prof. Ivanov. The experiment will begin tomorrow per 12 April 1943; at exactly 1200 PST. NO UNAUTHORIZED PERSONNELS ARE ALLOWED INSIDE THE TESTING FACILITIES! All records and logs will be handwritten to prevent copies being made and to make it easier to be disposed and deleted in case of emergency

EXPERIMENT LOGS:

12 April 1943 ; 1230 PST

30 minutes have been passed after the first injection of Serum X4T. The injection will be given as daily basis; every noon and on the dosage of 7oz per injection as recommended by Prof. Ivanov. The subject shows no change at all, normal appetite and normal behavior, although subject seems to lost interest in speech, as he didn’t respond much towards questions given by the scientists.

13 April 1943 ; 0300 PST

A young scientist wakes me up and told me to see the subject. The subject developed strange behaviors. It’s looking to the one-way Plexiglas, standing still. Sometimes he is stuttering and having catatonic, sometimes he is muttering and whispering the phrase,“Bist Du”. I ordered officials to gas the containment chamber with sedative gas. The subject fall to sleep immediately after the room is gassed. At 1200, another dosage of injection will be given towards the subject.

14 April 1943 ; 1511 PST

Third injection had been given to the subject. Nothing much changed regarded to the subject since yesterday. He still has the same, normal human appetite and keep on doing the same strange behaviors. Only this time, sometime he speaks the phrase, “Ich bin mir nicht.” Both me and Prof. Ivanov agreed that this is just symptoms of frustration caused by the closed containment chamber and paranoia of the subject, but Dr. Arthur seems to be uneasy about it. The experiment will continue as it is. Dr. Arthur will be summoned tomorrow for injection and health scan along with inspections; somehow Dr. Arthur seems to be denying and afraid.

15 April 1943 ; 1307 PST

Fourth injection went smoothly without trouble, although several minutes after the injection, subject started to pace around the chamber aimlessly and humming some sort of sinister tone. He started to lose appetite on certain food such as onions and spinach, but favors cheese and meat. Dr. Arthur seems to be strange after giving the injection towards the subject. He seems… unsettled and nervous, keeping on muttering about “this is wrong, this is not right” and showing intention to quit or stop the experiment. His skin begins to turn pale and it is reported that he is refusing daily meals. Although the condescending event, me and Prof. Ivanov agreed to continue the experiment.

16 April 1943 ; 1400 PST

Willman bloody Arthur killed himself! That bloody wanker was found dead in his room this early morning. It was suspected that he shot himself in the throat, as of the P227 Colt handgun was found on his hand. Strangely though, a small parchment paper saying ,” I AM MYSELF ALONE. LEAVE ME!” was found near his body, soaked in blood. No other funny evidences were found. Everything leads to the case of suicide that bloody bastard did. As of the subject, he began to be skinnier and more slender than he already is. Other that that, physical examination shows that he lost his hair rapidly and started to have malnutrition due to his sudden change of food appetite. Other than that, nothing out of the ordinary is happening with the subject. Injection will be given as procedure tomorrow.

17 April 1943 ; 1210 PST

Some scientists resigned from the experiment, protesting about “being haunted severely in continuous nightmares.” Also, some scientists claim to see the “ghost of Dr. Arthur” lurking around the facilities’ hallways at night. I assume this is just as paranoia of them. As for the subject, he seems to be extremely exhausted as what he does was just lying down and curling up at the corner of the containment chamber. Sixth injection has been given and the procedures will be repeated tomorrow.

18 April 1943 ; 1320 PST

Insanity is infecting my whole crew of scientists. 6 out of 24 scientists left, including me and Prof. Ivanov. The rest resigned, some even committed suicide, claiming to have surreal nightmares and being haunted or seeing a being resembles the late Dr. Arthur. The whole facility is a mess. As for the subject, physical change has been observed. His skin has gone pale, along with hyper sativa occurring. His eyes grow pitch black and he got extremely skinny. His behaviors start to get stranger. He occasionally stood up in silence, looking at the Plexiglas. Sometimes wanders off aimlessly. He also keeps on muttering “Ich bin auf andere Realität” and humming sinister tone and cries. Injections were still given in daily basis, including tomorrow as procedure.

There are no recorded logs during the rest 7 days of the experiment were found. Only parchments of papers soaked in blood was found near a cabinet in the Panic Room.

The Parchment of Paper read as follows:

“I don’t what time it is, it could be day or night. I don’t know what the date is. God I haven’t got out from here since like forever!! He killed everyone, all of them!! He. Shapeshifted to be like everyone! I cannot trust anyone! He could be anyone he likes in anytime! Goddamn it! I’m hiding in the panic room, but I know he knows me down here. He keep banging on the door and chanting that, that evil sinister rhyme!! This could be my last day to live. I’m sorry for the world for created such a demon. –Unreadable- NO ONE! HE COULD BE –unreadable- …

The rest of the note was heavily soaked in blood or has been torn. But on the back page of the note, there is another writing, which seems to be written by someone in insanity state of mind.

The writing says: “ Doppelgänger, Doppegänger, Ich bin Ihr Dopple, Ich bin Du. Where are you, Where are you, come to me oooh I am you “

THE DOCUMENT WAS DENIED TO EVER EXIST TILL NOW. 