Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20181007040949/@comment-9041013-20181008170739

Alright, looking pretty decent, how the fock did it not affect Canada though? some rural communities or something? An impact of this magnitute should've covered up the whole planet in a cloud of sooth. Anyway, honestly, I think it still needs some more meat to be truly great. I'd like to see more to this and if possible a conclusion where he finds that there are no real "unaffected" areas breaking down as his hope crushes around him.

It reminds me both of Chronicles of Shannara and Marilyn Manson's "Last Day on Earth" a blend between a post apocalyptic world where humans still hold their ground and the suffering of said apocalypse etched on the psyche of the first generation of survivors.