Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26114676-20150323234443

An attempt, at least. While rewriting much of 'Practice', I got irritated with it and started writing something else. This is what happened, and it's think it's kinda okay. But 'kinda okay' doesn't make a micropasta good. Should it be fixed? Should it be printed out and then burned? Eh...So here it is, tell me what you think.

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I love you so much; I want to be by your side forever. It hurts, I know. I can stroke your hair and whisper to you but I can’t take the pain away. I really hope you stop crying. Just look forward to when I’m finished stitching our skin together. We’ll never be separated. Isn’t that fantastic? 