Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28420405-20160816123509/@comment-28420405-20160816161948

Christian! My friend :) Thank you so much for reading through this. I wrote it when I was in a dark place this week, and I think that's why I had trouble ending it (because I'm not quite out of my own tunnel yet). I very much like the idea of "doubling down", and that should add some girth to my story ( I feel it's a bit short).

I'm glad I made you thirsty! I just love knowing I can trigger some real feelings in my audience.

I just updated my ending. Do you mind having a look-see when you have time?