Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25825682-20150209205225/@comment-25825682-20150209214930

Thank you as I really had no idea if I was following all the websites guidelines on character development. And thanks for telling me about the caps part as I wasn't sure how to format a news story. As for the therapy part I actually did a lot of research on that for his condition. Anyway I'll add more edited parts to this thread piece by piece to fix exact story issues. :)