Talk:The Sex Tape/@comment-5733573-20180625144231

The idea is nice and creepy, but the execution is terrible. There are so many awkward sentences and your verb tense is all over the place. This is why it's important to take your time while writing. When you throw a story down hastily, it can turn into a mess.

I don't mind the ending. Honestly, it's the least of this story's problems.