Talk:A Promise of the Heart/@comment-26444017-20160802014918

No question. 10/10. Every single thing is perfect. The rhyme, the language, the pace, the story, the ending. Pure beauty. In truth, I found that this poem is much like the fallen bride. Beautiful and elegant, yet dark and brooding, all driven by the ring, and a promise unfulfilled. Seriously, the best story I've read thus far on the site. Very, very well done.