Talk:Mother Loves You/@comment-5321651-20150122113608/@comment-25462519-20150122120757

Thanks man. I appreciate the feedback. This was my first official crack at a creepypasta and It was completed in no more than 10 minutes I would say. I just typed whatever popped in my brain so I had figured there would be grammar errors throughout. I'm glad that it still managed to scare despite its flaws. My main goal is to have a youtube CP narrator to read it.