Talk:Strawberry Syrup Is to Die For/@comment-25000365-20171020185141

Overall, it was pretty well written. I really liked the choice of words and the descriptions in this story, notably the phrase "symphony of agony." However, I could tell the ending coming when the character Drake noted the "metallic taste" of the syrup; I could tell there would be some sexy times involving blood.

Overall though, it was an enjoyable read. 7/10