Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27838637-20160605121157/@comment-27838637-20160607023032

Roger that Empy. I'll give it a bit of a rewrite sometime today.

KillaHawke, if you enjoyed this story, check out Please Be Careful. It is another one of my stories, but it is quite a bit longer and had a bit more thought put into it. It has the same first-person style writing and a pretty clever and menacing villain!

A_O.