Talk:Booty Call/@comment-28306197-20160519195717

It wasn't my favorite.... Didn't really scare me at all and was kinda clichè. It started out with someone going on about how special they are... Not to mention that it used the term 'emo trash.' I kinda get that we were supposed to hate that Zoe girl, but it just frustrated me. But, since it was your first pasta, it is okay to make some mistakes. Plus, you did use descriptive language and really create the feeling of the story. Keep writing and reading pastas, I think you have some great potential. ;)