Talk:Reoccurring Nightmares/@comment-11791428-20140429050314

Interesting concept but the execution was rather shoddy IMO. I can see what you were trying to go for by interchangably switching out the words "him" and "her" to foreshadow the twist, but it just copmes across as awkward instead. Also I found the main storyline to be a bit rushed after waking up the first time, and I find myself not really understanding what was going on. It would have been interesting if the plot went anywhere else, but it didn't really go anywhere and just seemed like an excuse for graphic torture porn, which I guess was maybe the intention but it would have been nicer if handled more creatively. 6/10