Talk:S'aghatoth/@comment-27909525-20160901160907/@comment-26444017-20161115222341

Firstly, I want to say that I loved the concept. Lovecraftian stuff is always interesting to me.

I went ahead and did a fair amount of editing to the story, mostly just to make it flow a little better. Honestly, I could have just left it, and it would have been fine, but I figured you didn't mind changes, so why not. Hopefully you like the updated language.