Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-38492903-20190522125748/@comment-35911608-20190522141540

This isn't awful, I'll give it that. I was intrigued to find out what was going on with the guy on the other end. However, I don't understand how there could be no reports of something such as that happening if it was supposedly real. It's a bit confusing and makes me lose my suspension of disbelief how nothing at all could be found.

You will definitely need to run this through a grammar checker though. There are numerous capitalization problems, and writing in all caps when someone is screaming isn't necessary. We should feel just as afraid as him without big letters, so long as you exhibit the fear correctly.

Keep working on this. I'd like to see this come to fruition.