Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5299148-20141030134954/@comment-24304936-20141030142257

''Decided to write a micropasta based on a few minutes of brainstorming. Usually I put days into a story, but I felt like writing something very small would train my story-telling and imagery. Did it work?''

No. What does the sweater have to do with smiling before being burned alive? This really makes zero sense to me.