Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20181027120725/@comment-36393004-20181027161344

Ok, I really enjoyed your description here. It really paints a picture with words. I do have issue with a couple of things and maybe you can clear them up for me.

1) I thought an Obelisk was like a pillar or something, I don't quit get the name considering it's a mask that transports someone to a place of torture.

2) How does this random girl know what is going on when the shopkeeper has no clue?

3) If you were looking for scary Halloween decorations why go to an antique shop? I mean, maybe antique shops are different where you are but I have never seen anything particularly "creepy" in one here. I guess it depends on the wares.