Talk:On the Bus/@comment-7706473-20131013074947

Lovely - I usually like using vague protaganists so that the reader is most optimally frightened (since I have the creeping suspicion that most writing serves only as escapism to the reader, sob) - but this is why a defined protaganist can be the most effective narrator around. I feel a huge ramble'd actually do dishonor to the story - if you've read to the comments and haven't read it yet, please do. A chillingly effective read, and one excellently written.