Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150422165839/@comment-26326346-20150426183337

I bookmarked it the first time you told me, I'd actually looked over the style guide right before I joined the wiki when I went over the rules. The thing about commas is that I'm really horrible with them and the knowledge regarding splices and fragments tends to drain out one side of my head after going over it. I promise I'll work on that. :)

I'm going to wait a few more days and see if I can't get some more feedback (if no one else has anything to add, then I'll submit it), I don't want to get by on just good enough if I can help it. Your faith and kind words mean a lot to me, especially since I'm filled with a lot of self doubt. I'll be sure to give the blogs a look. Thanks again for all of the help!

Yep, that's what I meant. I agree that it finishes better without it, I was worried about confusing readers without the line (I'm not good at knowing how other people think). I'm going to leave it out, but I might put it back in if lots of people end up confused after reading it.