Talk:The Ersatz Cat/@comment-27012445-20160916054350

Levi has just set the bar, and it was set very high. Not only did he write an excellent story incorporating the cliches brilliantly, but submitted a story that screams, "narrate me!"

The dialogue and characters are nicely realized and hold the reader's interest. Now I do agree with Shawn that the ending does get a bit confusing, and it took me slightly out of the story due to its sudden change in style, but not enough to overshadow what I liked. However, an ending like that opens up an infinite number of possibilities to put some creative spins on the delivery of a narration.