Talk:You Never Fed Me.../@comment-24996913-20140901045227

I corrected plenty of grammatical issues and I still honestly have no idea what's going on. To be honest, I'm beyond confused by the cow holding the cleaver, lol. That was comical (I'm sorry if that isn't what you were going for.) As a creepy pasta, it's really not too fitting. I mean, perhaps in real life I'd be scared if a cow could talk and held a meat cleaver, but that's just not possible. You get points for originality though. I've never read anything quite like this.