Talk:Queen Justine and the Cutest Little Shing/@comment-26326346-20150915065522

First off, I wanted to say that although I love Tobit to death, I'm glad you took a break from it and wrote something completely new. That might sound negative, but I don't mean it in such a way, it's just that you have so much creativity and are sort of limiting your possibilities by doing just the one series.

I really liked this tale due to its uniqueness. The interrogation and from then on really had me sucked in, I loved piecing things together as it went along. The other thing is that there simply aren't enough police centered Creepypasta, I tried to get one to work and simply couldn't so I'm delighted that someone else (especially you) was able to make it work.

I felt like the dialogue with his sixteen year old daughter was a bit weird in terms of him calling her princess and her dialogue came across to me as if she was a bit younger than that, but that could all just be me.

I'm wondering if you are going to leave this as a standalone or if you are going to do a sequel (I personally think it doesn't need one, but would absolutely read a sequel should one materialize). I had thought that Craig was going to wish that Drexler would die out of anger for him not checking up on the artist, but what you did was way more... punishing. It would have been sort of nice to have been able to see what those that die saw or didn't saw. I'm going to go crazy wondering if they could see Queen Justine or just air XD

Anyway, this was a marvelous read. As I always, I am looking forward to whatever you should happen to write next :)