Talk:Closet Monster/@comment-25052433-20150510012029

Great story and excellent job on proofing. I looked for anything that needed editing, and while I will never be known as the greatest editor in the world, I certainly couldn't find anything that needed my attention.

And honestly, it is that attention to detail that is going to set you apart around here. Sometimes taking the time to make sure all your grammar is in order is harder than actually writing the damned story, so big props on being both patient and accurate.

The plot was awesome. I rather like how you soft opened with an alien race visiting earth. It set a great tone that just kept going throughout.

Excellent work!