Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20190526125216/@comment-35711173-20190526154941

Solonor1987,

Please read this story: La Bruja. Not only is it an incredibly marvelous story and one of my all time favorites, but there is a lesson in it.

Scribens will tell you that almost the entire story is composed of run-on sentences. Grammarly reports 31 "Non-Premium" errors. Since you have both, I emphatically suggest that you use them. Start with Grammarly. Correct all those non-Premium errors. It should take only a few minutes to go through Grammarly and see if Grammarly's recommendations are correct or not. Almost always, they will be.

Then read this blog:

How to Not Make a Wall of Text

Read it until you understand the ideas. Then try to correct the run-on sentences. Run it through Grammarly again.