Talk:The Legend of Ol' Mother Cleaver/@comment-35911608-20200221012726

The Legend of Ol’ Mother Cleaver - by Shadowswimmer77 (#11, Justice)

That was a good ol’ fashioned folk lore story. The Justice she delivers makes perfect sense, and what makes it more terrifying is how she asks you a question during that drowsy state between being awake and asleep. Well implemented. Your writing style is also very, very good. It kept me engaged for the entire story.

As for the horror factor, it wasn’t super strong. The confrontation near the end and hearing about Ol’ Mother Cleaver was kinda frightening, but the rest was rather mundane (in regards to creepiness, I should specify. The constant reveals of information throughout the story really pushed the plot along handsomely). It was told well, but it didn’t illicit an underlying dread of some sort for me. Other than that, it’s a good creepypasta.

Style - 5/5

Creepiness - 3/5

Enjoyment - 4/5

Use of Theme - 4/5

Grand Total: 16/20