Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25602744-20141031040537/@comment-25602744-20141102190308

Mr.Cold wrote: Sweet buttery Jesus! Your first pasta? That was amazing for a first pasta! You utilized a tool in horror that most don't use, tension. When I first read the bit with the girl in the rain I thought it would be some generic female ghost, but boy was I wrong. and also this was a police case? you should include that fact because boy oh boy does that leave a lot to the imagination. My opinion is the pasta feels like something is missing but after this I will never look at static spots the same again overall 8/10 a great read. Thank you very much for the feedback. I'm very glad to hear you liked it. I'm always worried that what I write is complete garbage so I'm glad to see this one isn't too bad.

At this point, after a few more grammatical sweeps, I guess I'll start the process of making it a CP on the main site. Is there anything in paritcular I have to do before I can make that happen? I've read the main set of rules and it seems as long as you've had it looked at in advance and it doesn't break any of the black-list subjects it should be ok, but I want to make sure I'm doing everything the right way. Thanks again for the feedback.