Talk:Mrs. Cookiedough/@comment-25326117-20160613010632

1) “My parents won’t mind if I go over to your place Kyle they’ll know I’m okay,” all like one run-on sentence.

I think you can get rid of the apostrophe in parents.

Overall, I liked this story. It makes me wonder what happened to Carson. Did Mrs. Cookiedough spirit him away like those other kids in the old black and white photo?