Talk:Ambience/@comment-32212319-20170605201154

A very nice pasta indeed, but I believe that it lacks proper build-up. It's more like a snapshot than a story, if that makes sense. Also, hide from what? The song? Maybe define it a little clearer, and if you do something like this in the future drop small hints in there for the reader/s. Lastly, plot conveniences. It just happens to et stuck on iTunes and then rewind? That seems like something that would happen on a physical record player as opposed to a virtual one, and it likely wouldn't just change song (then again, Spots is invading the life of the protagonast).

Despite that, this is a very nice pasta overall and I look forward to seeing you write again in the future!