Talk:Dead Eagle/@comment-35711173-20190908075631

With all due respect, I don't like it. Hunters and shooters are too easy a cliche to pick on.

The protagonist's reaction at the end was illogical. He wasn't a part of a murder. He should have just pulled out his phone and called the cops. "Hey, I found something really gross at my creepy dead Dad's old place. I think it may be a human body."

The protagonist is very distant from any of this. He doesn't live there. The frightening people are dead. Any involvement happened when he was a minor. There is no direct tension or threat. It's creepy, but not horror.