Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28088262-20140705153743/@comment-24077689-20140707164757

I'm unconcerned with author's notes, typically. Granted, they do clarify your intentions, but they don't do much beyond that. I'm here strictly to review your story on quality and merits. I appreciate the core idea, it's a mistake, etc. etc. but it still doesn't make a whole lot of sense, and this one little part does nothing to change the overwhelmingly cliche nature of the rest of the story.

Having read the other things you've posted here, I'm a bit disappointed in this.