Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20160729155428/@comment-27838637-20160805144920

Well...

I really enjoyed it! I've been thinking of critiques to give, but I just can't think to say anything that Jay and Frank haven't already said. I do agree that the story is a little confusing at times, but not to any real fault. A little clarification would mke it an easier read, but just ensure you don't spoon feed us.

Other than that minor gripe, I enjoyed it. The violence and sickness was handled well, and the flow and pacing was near perfect. Really good job. Sorry I can't really provide much more feedback, but Jay and Frank kinda outclass me and they have both given exceptional reviews to this exceptional story, and there isn't anything more I can add.

A_O.