Talk:Six Million/@comment-1186783-20140710195343

I'm a little confused by what just happened, but I suppose that's the point. You have a great eye for detail.

I almost didn't keep reading because of the opening paragraph. You shouldn't tell us so offhandly that he's a Nazi. Build up to it. If he talks about the war, the Fuhrerm and the Jews you don't even really need to say it at all.

Also, the comment about the political right not admitting they're wrong really killed the flow of the story. Up until then the story was third person limited, so why are we getting a perspective that the character wouldn't agree with, on a group of people you acknowledge he knew nothing about?