Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33077235-20181121055529/@comment-33077235-20181122032230

DrBobSmith wrote: Simon Slaughters,

http://www.grammarly.com - use it. You have dozens of grammar, punctuation and spelling errors. Grammarly is right a good 95% of the time. Revise your story until it pretty well passes without errors.

http://www.scribens.com - check your story with this next. You have fourteen run on sentences. Fix them.

Those are both FREE web sites. Yes, 100% free, as in you don't have to pay a nickel.

Go back and fix the story to the point where it passes the free mode of http://www.grammarly.com and no longer shows sentence errors in http://www.scribens.com. Don't post it on the main board. You have a lot more work to do so it won't be marked for deletion. will do ty im return tommorrow