Talk:Cambria: The BlackGuard/@comment-26936390-20150908170531

This was one of the better creppy pastas and I absolutely loved it. The end where Mrs Welsche entered the scyre was a litle wierd is how we thought the creaturer was dead and then magicaly it is presumed to be alive and going through the scyre. Not only this but the part where they found the two main characters names was cliche but still gave that cool effect where they are now a target. Other than those two things this was amazing and I look foward to seeing the rest of your work.