Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5614678-20180904175226/@comment-9041013-20180904233457

So, this is a very much typical experiment gone wrong recorded CP/SCP... It's just dull.

Honestly, if you can come up with a character who is similar to lets say Jean Gray or Cable from the X Men in terms of abilities, turn it dark ( for example; character wanders around, seemingly homeless, gets arrested, starts doing Telepathic/kinetic stuff, shit goes sideways) and boom you could have a terrifying sci fi plot.

Right now, this is kind of, well, not much in the way of a good story.