Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25340097-20140823163745/@comment-24957984-20140823165444

This would probably get deleted as soon as possible.

There's barely any plot going on, and the nearly invisible plot is weak. Just by mentioning the words "woods", "knife" and "gun" (and by the way, they're improperly written on the post you made) I was expecting something predictable, and I unfortunately got it right.

Maybe you still have a chance to post here as an article though. Try proofreading and make the story much longer than it is now.