Talk:Herobrine/@comment-9600371-20140420013635

I am sorry for my criticism, and I know how popular this is, but I do not believe, endorse, or support the idea that he exists. First of all. Your base enigma, Herobrine. His name comes out of nowhere. No explanation for the idea whatsoever. Some people may say that makes it more believable, but it just doesn't make an ounce of sense. Second, even if there was a Herobrine, there could be several more explanations other than Notch having a dead brother. Notch doesn't even have a brother! Third. The fact that this just has no eerieness to it. How is this scary exactly? It's just a Steve with no pupils. Sure, you might be shocked at first, but how is it necessarily scary? Point taken, it's worth reading, but it's more so just an average urban legend that managed to get famous.

Plot: 3/10

Characters: 5/10

Mood: 7/10

Media: 4/10

Grammar: 10/10

Overall: 5.8/10

P.S: @Herobrine's Sister, don't bother telling me if I have anything rude to say, don't say anything. This is not rude, this is constructive criticism, and is ment for the author of the pasta to use and assist when he is making another pasta, in hopes that it can be better.