Talk:Jennifer's Furby/@comment-24955052-20140517232520

Descriptions were weird. Your paragraph on Jennifer being Goth needs reworking because it sounds kind of awkward. The idea was very good but Furbies don't creep me out, so it ended up being more silly than sad. If you could find another way to relay the mimicing of Jennifer in her last days, I'd like it a lot more.

4/10.