Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20150223054547

I think this will be my real first story to be upload i tried this one for a scary fairytales contest on Chilling tales, but it was not chosen is based on Little Miss Muffet. Check if i mispell again i chage some words from my first try. Is the story of a girl named Sarah,she decide she was going to the fair with her friends Emilie and Lola. When her friends finally go some foods for themselfs after arriving to the fair, sarah bring her own an chocolate bar she wanted to eat, when a strange man with a blackcoat approaching her.

"Excuse me young Lady, may i sit beside you", "Yes of course" said Sarah to the strange man, she look at him and see it was a African American man with black clothes head to feets. She was a little bit curious about this man and wanted to tell why is he clothing all black, but said nothing for not upset him, so she was still eat her chocolate bar the man finally said something.

"Great sunlight this morning this day right ?","Yeah like useual all days", said Sarah, who didn't really care, because sge was not supposed to talk to a stranger like she learn at school, but she doesn't seem efraid that man seem nice to her. So the man bored to staying sit on the bench and said to Sarah, "You want to take a walk with me ?", Sarah look at him and said without hesitation, "Sure !".

So they stand up and walk awat when Sarah friends still away, Sarah wasn't scare at all by the man at her side, so she wonder why he never take his hat and coat off. They are still walking across the road between the rides, when Sarah finally tell the man something he never believe she will said. "So why are you all clothing black, it might be a little bit hot no", "I like be in my black coat, i won't tell you anything swo mind you're own business", said the man now heritated by Sarah. It seem the stranger has changing his attitude and wasn't friendly anymore, sarah doesn't like that because she he's now acting weird.

"I just tried to be nice", said Sarah now scare by his attitude, "I know, but i don't like this question", said the man again with agressive words, Sarah look Everywhere for her friends, but she didn't see them anymore. She was now scared and far away from the bench where she was, so she said to the man in black coat, "I think we should turn back!", the man look at her and said, "Turn back why ?". Sarah was more scared then ever, why he's won't want to turn back, what is wrong in his mind and what he's going to do to her. Sarah now know she's suppose to trust a stranger, same if a man is friendly and nice at first, well he can finally show he's not what he pretend to be, she now know it was a bad idea to follow this man.

"I should really go now !!!", Sarah wanted to leave the man grabbed her hairs, and force to still following him, "AAAAAAAAAAAH !!! what are you doing, let me go !!!". The man still pulled her hairs and force her to following him, Sarah wanted to scream for help, but the stranger doesn't let her go. When they finally arrive to a corner where nobody can see them, the man pushed Sarah between the wal and make sure she won't escape. The stranger look at Sarah and said "I was thinking if you are still interested to know about my secret !", Sarah look at the man with fear in her eyes and said, "What secret ?".

For answering her question the man finally take off his coat, sarah watching with horror the man have a black t-shirt and four arms, so he come close to her Sarah wanted to back up, but he's getting more closer. She tries to escape for running away, but he stop her and then he strangled her Sarah was screaming, but nobody came then she pass out and her eyes was close.

Sarah was now a missing person, her parents and friends looking for her everywhere, but they doesn't find her. So when the police asking her two friends Emilie and Lola they said they all go to the fair, when they do not see their friend they believe she decide to return to her home so they left, the police talk with the fair employee no one seem to have seen her. Then an other employe said he see a girl with a man all clothing of black, so they go looking for them when they arrive to the coner they found Sarah lifeless body with big strangle mark on neck, but the man who kill her disappear without a trace. 