Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25987771-20150215194920/@comment-26112993-20150215200312

You've got my attention so far. I'm interested to see exactly what the "cleansing" entails, but I think it also might help if we got a few more details about U's life and surroundings so that it's more of a dramatic shift when he gets "cleansed". Still, you've got an interesting setup (what does it mean to be truly clean?) and I'm looking forward ot reading the ending whenever it gets published. Nice work!