Talk:Crushed/@comment-25471033-20181214224031

As per usual with these pastas, it's really hard to read the ending. I feel like leaving the story at "how does it feel to be" and then blackness would be better than the whole "the game was messing with me in real life" cliche. Besides that, and the "game talking to real u" cliche, it was pretty good and the concept was kind of creepy. 7/10