Talk:Dog Children/@comment-26823574-20161013210031

Umbrello, I absolutely adored this. I love how you paint this seemingly innocent, American town and slowly let the dark underbelly surface and come to light. Oh, and by the way, you used the one thing that really does scare me...animal masks. The same way people scurry away from clowns is how I feel when I see people wearing those masks, or creatures such minotaurs (human body, animalistic cranium.) I don't know, there's something sickening about it. I adore how you made almost every child different. In my head not one of them were identical. I guess my only problem with this story is the reference to the protagonist saying it looked like cake. If they were cannibals, I would have stressed that it looked like strawberry short cake or red velvet cake, because I intially thought the children were playing in feces, you know, given the rancid smell. The ending is great, although I though they would be wearing feline masks before it said horses.

In my opinion, it doesn't deserve a rating... it should just go straight into the classic Creepypasta archives.