Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9967354-20140702062156/@comment-9967354-20140703132227

Hmm. I think I'll go ahead a rewrite this to make it shorter, clearer, and less 'singy-songy'. Also I've been kinda fond of line breaks in poems. ;-; I suppose I should change that, too. The bit about impregnating sisters was so that the people live on. Because declining population growth curves and stuff. I guess.

@Terror: use this: text instead.

Tree on life sounds good. Thanks!

I'll get back to this once I'm done rewriting it.