Talk:The Veteran/@comment-26916489-20151126154304

Woh... this is an amazing story! I have to say this creepypasta scared me! Brilliant use of ghosts. The Veteran's description sounded like it could actually be real and not like other descriptions I have seen (like it being bloody or like it being pale white). Chilling ending and I liked the use of the warning at the very end. Ill give this pasta a 9/10. I didn't like the bit where you said that "it was the shy kid; he was found dead in his room with what seemed to be knife wounds in his face" for me, it sounded a bit to grouse. Great pasta though!