Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20181007040949/@comment-9041013-20181008172209

L0CKED334 wrote: BloodySpghetti wrote: Alright, looking pretty decent, how the fock did it not affect Canada though? some rural communities or something? An impact of this magnitute should've covered up the whole planet in a cloud of sooth. Anyway, honestly, I think it still needs some more meat to be truly great. I'd like to see more to this and if possible a conclusion where he finds that there are no real "unaffected" areas breaking down as his hope crushes around him.

It reminds me both of Chronicles of Shannara and Marilyn Manson's "Last Day on Earth" a blend between a post apocalyptic world where humans still hold their ground and the suffering of said apocalypse etched on the psyche of the first generation of survivors. The Canada thing is a false hope scenario, just rumors, he really has no idea what to do. Mainly because he's still young, Collin is only 16. Definitely reads like Shannara gone wrong without the fantasy aspects of the book series. I like it. I need more of this.