Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31680792-20170406100757/@comment-25941663-20170406105349

The main reason I deleted this was because it is cliche and we have seen this a lot. A crazy Nazi scientists conducts experimental research trying to come up with a powerful weapon, but it backfires. All while the Nazi scientist is keeping a short diary updating the reader.

There are some positives though with the story. First of all, it was written nicely. You have good grammar and your writing was clean. You have the basics down, and that is very important. Also, at the end you tried to twist this into something different, with the creature having feelings of melancholy, but ultimately that attempt fell flat. It was too little too late. The story is too short to make this emotional arc work.

All in all, this did not meet the wiki's quality standards. We have seen the story a lot and it has gone stale, unfortunately. I would suggest you move on to something new.

Happy future writings!