Talk:The Crayons/@comment-12521892-20140620011550

A Decent story. I'm not too big on ghost creepypastas but this one is pretty good. The ending however is horrifying. However one complate is some plot holes. 1 is, why would the kid write on the walls when he/she must obviously know she can't see it. 2 is where is the kid's bones. However I guess that last one isn't really a plot hole as the mother most likely let he/she out. Over all a good story 7/10