Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24927388-20140524203003/@comment-24927388-20140524205606

SilverDarkCureXZ wrote: It is a good story I only found maybe one cliche and that was the blood from the eyes part. The whole story makes sense after the last two paragraphs which I personally liked. The only problem is that they really don't want people posting video game creepy pastas here. Yeah I wasn't sure about that, that's why I posted it in the forum instead. Thank you for taking your time to read, and give me input.