User talk:JaneCasketJeffsSister

Regarding "Jane Casket"
I'm sorry to inform you, but your pasta Jane Casket is on the verge of being deleted (It probably has already been deleted by the time that I have finished writing this). Why, you may ask? It had numerous problems that I will get into now:


 * No capitalization where it is needed (Ex. "bethany" instead of "Bethany").
 * No proper spelling (Ex. "shour" instead of "shower" (or "shout"?) and "nabour" instead of "neighbor" (American English)/"neighbour" (British English)).
 * Spacing errors (Ex. "Oh hey!BETHANY!!" It gets extremely bad at the very end.)
 * No use of the apostrophe where it is needed (Ex. "dont" instead of "don't" and "im" instead of "I'm").
 * "I" needs to be capitalized.
 * All caps to say that a character is screaming at the top of their lungs is a drama killer. You don't need to put stuff like that in all caps and with multiple question marks/exclamation marks.
 * Wrong use of "your/you're" ("oh your awake!" instead of "Oh, you're awake!").
 * Run-on sentences ("she heard the door open and figured she had left the door unlocked and then heard footsteaps (footsteps*) come behind her.").
 * "DO YOU WANNA KNOW OUR SECRET!?!?>!?!?!?!" This one is self-explanatory.
 * This is the biggie: THE ENTIRE THING IS A JEFF SPINOFF, WHICH ARE NOT ALLOWED.

TL;DR The pasta is an absolute mess, not to mention that it is a Jeff spinoff. Read the spinoff rules and I would highly recommend using the Writer's Workshop for a different pasta. If you have a problem with the points I made, consult an administrator.

Hakuna matata, what a wonderful phrase and it's no passing craze. (talk) 17:32, October 12, 2015 (UTC)