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Also, in a sentence where they use "however" where they should use "but", can we change that or do we need permission? The sentence: "King Zhou replied that it was their bones, because a child's bones were more dense and therefore affected less by the cold temperature of the water, however an old person's bones were less dense, almost empty, therefore the cold would feel more painful."

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