Talk:I Need to Stop the Knocking/@comment-29502200-20160903232907/@comment-29502200-20160904000304

Thanks for the criticism Travis.

I purposely wrote phrases like "the shading luminescence of pure white fills this gender-less cube" and "a cube of pure quiet, that of which would mak ethe deaf suspicious." I wanted it to be very poetic and metaphorical.

There's a reason the ending is 'meh.' The original ending was: A kid was having a nightmare, and the knocking was his mom knocking on his bedroom door in order to wake him up. In my opinion that ending is just a smack to the face; and, it took me a long while to create a new ending.