Board Thread:Questions and Answers/@comment-10695111-20130610190001

Ok so a few months back a glitch happened with my phone and it was kind of disturbing in nature so I decided to write a creepy pasta about it. never having done so before, I'm having trouble with the ending, plus it seems to be missing something. If anyone would be willing to give it a read and give me feed back so I can fix it that would be GREAT!!!!! Also, any suggestions on good creepy pastas that the main character is female would also be appreciated 