Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-17739056-20140704170557/@comment-17739056-20140709171437

WatcherAzazel wrote: This story isn't bad, the real problem is that it lacks anything to set it apart. We don't need an explanation for the mosnter, but we really do need something to set it apart from every other monster that could jump out and say "boo." Don't really know what you mean, but I'm gonna work on a new idea for it that I think will be pretty good. Thanks for your help. :)