Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190725084302/@comment-5733573-20190804143910

I do want to add some positives to my review. The plotting felt extremely smooth and internally logical this time around, particularly the sections following the death of the captor. I like the way you took us a long for the decision making there. Your descriptions are also really vivid and clear this time around, so really nice job with that.