User blog comment:Whitix/Critique Exchange/@comment-26054278-20150711031643/@comment-26007602-20150711175249

You've helped me in the past, and since you're kind enough to already donate your time to looking over the story, I went ahead and posted a critique on your story. I don't have a page for critiques like you do, so I tried to keep it brief (well, sort of) so it doesn't clog up the comments. I hope it gives enough feedback.