Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25329900-20141119082320/@comment-25477067-20141119173454

Writing style is fine, and grammar is very apropriate, but the ending is wayyyyyy too preictable. This shows that you know how to write, but I get the sense that you don't quite know how to be creepy without resorting to gore. i may be wrong, but as with others, this seems like you know how to write, but do not know how to write creepypasta. I sincerely hope that you elaborate on this story, but please change the type of ending. The rest brought me in, and the ending destroyed the rest of the story, sturdy and strong as it was.