Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4617036-20140729225021/@comment-4617036-20140729234256

EmpyrealInvective wrote:

Fangirl4545 wrote: Alright! Thank you very much! I appreciate that!

Although, I don't think I'm cut out for horror stories. (Since this pasta got deleted) I think this is the last time I'll be contributing to the Wiki.

But thank you again for the feedback! It wasn't a bad first attempt. You just need to avoid the cliches We get a number of pastas that start with "Have you ever felt like you've been/being watched?" The plot could use some fleshing out to amp up the tension. Stories that rely on cliches just come off as cookie-cutter and we have a LOT of pastas that use that premise.

Also there are some minor grammatical/punctuation issues.

Thank you very much for telling me about this.

But, I honestly think that horror stories aren't meant for me. I'll probably come back to this Wiki when I'm more experienced as a writer.

Thank you very much for the advice!