Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24965033-20140720234702/@comment-25198101-20140721020130

I've encountered a problem. In paragraph three of the original rough draft (above), the main character states that he no longer had any nightmares. However, he never mentions having nightmares in the first two paragraphs. At the end of paragraph two he/she also mentions that they never remembered the nigh before, so even if they were having nightmares, how would they remember? I don't need an answer right away, but the sooner the better. I'll try and work around it.