Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31433243-20170302230422/@comment-24101790-20170302230756

Oswald the great wrote: NOTE. I do know there are grammar and spelling errors

Then why haven't you corrected them?

Also the story feels really rushed with the lack of characterization, description, and it's very unfinished nature. Also the frequent capitalization, punctuation, spelling, and wording issues don't really help it much.