User blog comment:Lightning bolt creator guardian/I don't know what to do anymore../@comment-2007196-20190713003426

I would suggest you take your story to the Writer's Workshop Board before you post it as a page on the site. Most stories need to be ripped to shreds before they come out decent, and the Writer's Workshop is full of people who will rip your story apart. Remember that only the best parts of your story will survive this process, similar to smelting the dross off of a piece of ore.

As for your story in particular, just from reading your comments I can see some basic problems. You assert you called your story "PK originnail creepypasta character" so that people would know that it wasn't a rip-off. It's worth noting that telling people that your character isn't a rip-off is at best unneccesary. If your character is not a rip-off or spin-off, readers don't need to be told - they'll read the story, and the character will not strike them as a rip-off.

It's also worth noting, this wiki is not like, say, The Vampire Diaries Wiki or something, where it's formatted as if it were wikipedia and these were real people and things. Creepypasta Wiki is stories. Most pages should be formatted as a story in one form or another, not as a plain statement of facts about a character or thing; the pages should be focused on stories, not characters.

You said that you've read the rules three times, but it's clear that you didn't understand them. You should not post a story that you are "planning on improving" to anywhere except for the Writer's Workshop Board. If you are planning on improving it, then you can do that before you post it in the main pagespace. You mention that you looked at another creepypasta, specifically Jeff the Killer to see how a page should look. You should absolutely not do that. I'm 90% sure that we only keep Jeff around as an example of what not to do. Also, you said you didn't know it was not okay to blank a message from your talk page, but it's right here. If you had read the rules three times, you would know this.

That said, you can always get better. Take your stories to the workshop, get them shredded down to their barest core, and build them back up. If you need help with grammar and spelling, Purdue Owl has an excellent series on it, and so does Khan Academy. If english isn't your first language, Duolingo has an english program, A4ESL offers some minimally CPU intensive grammar resources, and so does Dave's ESL Cafe. All of these resources are free for use (though I believe that Duolingo has a premium membership with extra features) and I would suggest you make use of them! It never hurts to improve your skills.