Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180624062817/@comment-35711173-20180630061755

TheWizardOfTheWoods wrote: I couldn't find where the changes were. Can you point them out so I know?

The basic events didn't change because that's the way it was. The date and the scene and the people haven't changed. But I have gone through it several times. In the editing process, a lot has changed.

I think this story may be far beyond what I can do now. Also, I really think I have just blanked out so much. I am debating just posting it as is and hoping that they don't delete it.