User blog comment:HumboldtLycanthrope/Any black metal, crust punk, or viking metal fans out there?/@comment-26027160-20150324212612/@comment-26030957-20150324220122

I fixed it. How does this sound?

"all of Midgard, was once Ymir, born from venom. Father Odin made the earth from the flesh of Ymir and the ocean from his blood. We truly are the sons of Odin.”

Better? Or do you think I should also add, "We truly are the sons of Odin who crafted creation from Ymir." It just seems to lose something that way.