Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26464254-20171003030551/@comment-26464254-20171003133609

Wewser Lethal Dude wrote: Well, he is surely good at writing for someone who hasn't touched a pen in years.

It's great, overall. Not scary, though. I know it's not scary, and that's what irks me. Should I try making it scary, or just leave it as it is?