User talk:Glitchma

http://i.imgur.com/sSeJYfx.png

I read it.

Well, it is a nice start. From this it isn't clear what the plot is about, so I conclude it'll be a relatively long story. Good!

You have an interesting writing style. You use words that aren't used that often, but are words people know. It is descriptive, nice, and creates a whole scene.

Keep writing!

The triangle Read was born was actually three angelic death goddesses scissoring. (talk) 15:38, October 16, 2013 (UTC)