Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20181020203434/@comment-9041013-20181020224526

Well, I'm terrible with poetry myself but this seems kind of fresh, because it speaks of a beast from within, be it an alternate state of mind or an actual beast within, ala werewolf or some other monster. Thats definitely unique. It's not a figurative monster for once.

Anywho, I'll let Banned handle the rhythmic issues.

As for aesthetic, you've definitely got it, rhymes and imagery are nice.

I guess it needs some work on rhythm but otherwise, it's pretty good :)