Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35817505-20180705041420/@comment-9041013-20180705211955

Uhhh this whole thing is over a ghost of a cat, or very misrepressented psychosis? Either way, it's not good, it rather distracting from what could be a scary story. If you want Breanna to be the insane character, look up how psychosis works and write it down in your story, if you want it to be about an actual supernatural cat/cat ghost, I suggest you take up on a cat like character that would be based on the Japanese Bakeneko yokai. It's said to be a cat spirit that can spit fire, speak in human tongue and usually has two tails.

The rest was kind of tackled by Wizard, so I won't go on further.