Talk:Pale Luna/@comment-5886533-20140331142626

9/10. This is the best video game pasta since BEN! I never saw the "dead girl" part coming. I knew it would be something bad, but not that! I've read hundreds of terrible pastas, most of them being video game pastas. But this, sir, was amazing. It's believable, it's pacing is amazing, it's ORIGINAL (something that gaming pastas NEVER have) and it's intriguing! Great job!