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I'll edit the post to match your grammatical corrections.

The voices caused by LSD were the voices I was referring to at the end. I should probably clarify that.

Also, this story is based off of a friend's idea. "Gwendolyn" is a being of immense power, and she implimented her voice into the protagonist's mind early on to use him as a servant.

Why she waited until then is a mystery. Do you have any ideas as to how I can make it not a mystery?