Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20190213101433/@comment-35711173-20190214214133

BloodySpghetti wrote:

Hmm... I think that in order to translate his sadistic tendencies in their full "glory", I'd have to detail something that is bound to be deleted from here. I'll see what I can do, perhaps incorporate something into another story, or this... We'll see.

May I respectfully suggest something? Use a filtered/censored reading of a police report in the squad room by Bishop and have the internal feelings and reflections of Connor that are such a contrast to his politically acceptable replies.

Dr. Bob