User blog comment:JohnathanNash/Editing and some things to look for./@comment-31111342-20170129013639

Another good thing to think about is varying the length of sentences. Several long sentences in a row can get tiring to read, and several short sentences can make things go too quickly. This also helps with dialog. If one character says something that takes several sentences, the person who replies can have a shorter answer. If it fits the scene and the character, of course.