Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25114042-20140702211801

I know they aren't accepting poem pastas anymore... but.

I decided to make on anyways.

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Something in the rain.



There’s something in the rain.

It sounds in so much pain.

There’s nothing I can gain,

In trying to explain.



There’s something in the rain.

I question if I’m sane.

It’s walking with a cane.

On it’s neck, a jingling a chain.



There’s something in the rain.

I’ve stepped in its domain.

I doubt it has a brain.

No pulse ran through its veins.



<p class="MsoNormal">In cold blood, it was slowly slain…

<p class="MsoNormal">My first attempt, in vain…

<p class="MsoNormal">The second was brutal, inhumane…

<p class="MsoNormal">There’s nothing in the rain…

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<p class="MsoNormal">What do ya think? :D

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