User blog comment:Fireflowerman/What's Going On?/@comment-24101790-20150222202951/@comment-24101790-20150223002551

The plot twist is fairly generic and the grammatical issues really overshadowed the telling of the story itself.

"The description (or lack thereof) also weakens the story well below that of our quality standards." = The story isn't that well-told and you seem to really enjoy using blood as a crutch in your descriptions. " I then saw a bloody ghost ", "She was bleeding, her hair turned grey, and she still said nothing", "I was bleeding everywhere, mostly In (on) my shirt and face. My nose was bleeding as well as my lips.", "His neck and forehead were both bleeding. along with his legs, his chest had a big bleeding scar on It."