Talk:John Frie/@comment-24381191-20150104212200

This was pretty good. It didn't really scare me but it is well written. One thing bugged me, you change tenses '  just holds the mirror up to his face, '

' the nurses just leave him alone, but they're all looking at him, just staring at that mirror.'

'But, eventually, we decide we have to put him in solitary, just to be sure. He doesn't complain.'

' lays this little tiny piece'

Most of the story is in past tense, but you switch to present in these lines. Other than that, it was pretty good.