Talk:The Expressionless/@comment-24957024-20150522235754

The story wasn't really scary. I mean, yea terror is in the eye of the beholder but this just wasn't scary if you think about it. Why did she go to the hospital?

Another point: The writing isn't that well done. I mean, you missed the question every author needs to answer: Who's telling the story?

Faceless narrators are all well and good, but is this from the female doctor? The Expressionless themself? Third person limited still requires some sort of vantage point.

Over all: 4/10