Talk:The Fear Hormone/@comment-26076394-20150429132309

I liked it. I'd say 7/10. One thing you could have done better was explain the chemical being administered to the subjects. If it was an actual experiment documentation, the experimenter would want to be as accurate as possible. It's common throughout the scientific community to detail these things so other scientists can replicate the experiment, which makes the findings of the experiment more credible. Even though the experiment went horribly wrong, the experimenters didn't know this. More scientific detail would just make your pasta that much more believable. Other than that, nice job.