Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25701413-20141117013826/@comment-25477067-20141117202717

creepy, and awesome, but It totally needs more detail. the stoy can stand by itself like this, but I crave more, in a creepy sort of way! No grammar or puctuation errors that I can see, and this post is my favrite newbie pasta so far. I can tell you spent a lot of time on this, and the only worry I have is that when you turn around you won't be happy to see my grinning face about to let this work of magnificent art die