Talk:Hands of a Living God/@comment-26340001-20150527143828

9.5/10

This was great! Everything was amazingly written, the scenarios, the flashback... But I feel like the ending quite done correctly, like there's something missing for an overall massive impact on the reader. I don't know what it is, but I just feel like there is. Moving that aside, the flow of the story was quite smooth, starting out from being natural, to suspicious, then knowing something was wrong then all hell breaks loose.