User blog comment:RofusDofus1232/Annoyed as shit/@comment-25226524-20150503010021

I'm assuming you have a copy saved. If you want, you can post it in the Writer's Workshop so we can take a look at it. The workshop is just a place to post stories before submission so you can receive advice on what your story may need to bring it up to quality standards. This will also help in identifying the error.