Talk:Mister Smiley/@comment-28528008-20160531041947

I honestly like this story, It was writen nicely and it wasn't too lengthy with unnessasary details or anything that didn't have to do with the tale you had written. But, I think you could have made the story better. For example, why did Mister Smiley eat the children? Or perhaps you could have made his motives more clear. Other then that, I enjoyed this work of art. Good job