Talk:Where Bad Kids Go/@comment-3541151-20150204062408

It's a discount 1999. That was my harsh, very basic review, here is a more in depth examination...

Well it is told well, but well writing, like sometimes love, just ain't enough.

The story and character lacked substance, the character as well lacked personality. Unless you call being scared of Lost Episode, a personality.

I wonder what the DVD of Where The Bad Kids go would have as a special feature. Probably behind the scenes of the tortue room... That reminds me, the twist is lousy because it's nit surprisng.

The stories strength, like a lot of Lost Episodes, is the believability that it could've happened, the twist is not the main priority in this story, and you show that by making the build up so lousy. But that begs the question, if the story itself is leading up to the twist, is the story pointless?

Well...

I don't hate on this as much as I do on other overrated Creepypasta, in fact, I think this one is worthy of attention just with how well the writing is. You can describe atmosphere really well.

It's just that the story lacked much else, depth, personality, effort and creativity.

I give you an F, that being said you could have done worse. I suggest practice writing, because, if this story succeeded in anything, it's proving you can write. 5/10