Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28060931-20160506143219/@comment-28060931-20160519141255

Thanks for the review! The charecter did not want to make a lethal cure, no. I just assumed that with him being in dismay with all that was happening, he would most likely mess something up. I will try to clarify that.

As to the language, It seemed right considering the main charecters background, and I thought that with him feeling guilty he would, subconsciously, try to make himself seem smart, ot at least try to make himself believable. But I will change that in my next draft.

So thanks for all your help.