Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26548430-20150713202605/@comment-26548430-20150714131137

Whitix wrote: If you were reading Romeo and Juliet and some serial killer burst through the room when Romeo and Juliet were banging, you wouldn't say, "Oh, what a surprise that is." You'd say, "where the hell did this come from?"

Lmfao thanks again for the detailed reply. But be honest: Do you think that I should try to salvage this with a rewrite or just scrap it and try something different?