Talk:Fleshgait/@comment-25947144-20161212215649/@comment-24101790-20161212220028

Yeah, originally knock-off Yessica and Evan (protagonist) were supposed to reach that level of connectivity, it just seemed like a really improbable that they'd do it when everyone was still around.

Thanks for the feedback, I was worried it might have some issues since a lot of it is in passive voice (mainly during the interactions with the 'flesh gaits' as otherwise it would be a dead giveaway for which of the group was one of them). Any areas where I can improve?