Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150505190955/@comment-26326346-20150506065046

The only one I was able to change was the first one, but I don't know if it would be considered better or not:

1. Armed with only his flashlight and knife, Isaac descended into the darkness below.

I spent a lot of time trying to come up with ways to change the phrasing to where it was more interesting, but couldn't come up with anything. 2, 3, and 4 are necessary to the story as they give information that helps for a clearer picture of what is going on, so I don't feel like I can cut them out.

Any suggestions on what to change them to say?