Talk:HB Kay/@comment-25802911-20141206200404

This is insanely long for little to no payout. Author tried to sqeeze in 10 dollar words in a 2 dollar story. Stories are supposed to have a ebb and flow to them and this just felt... off. You have moments where you come off like a psudointellectual and then you have paragraphs where you sound like a tween. 2/10