Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25458443-20171020114637/@comment-32764586-20171021042931

Hi. I wanted to point out that this story isn't creepy but rather quite comical. I'm not sure if you intended it, but the ghost of a ghost and the repeated murder had me chuckling. The plot itself isn't very creepy and seems more like a Loony Tunes episode. Not trying to offend, just my opinion.