Talk:Hyper Cola/@comment-24881569-20140507224459

I liked this story I felt bad for those testers. I am a little confused because you wrote they were more active but then they began to die. Was it a combination of ingredients that caused this because it is a little confusing. Although you could make a sequel maybe change the POV to one of the people who made the drink and really get imaginative with the tests. Nice Pasta.