Talk:The Seven Deadly Sins/@comment-26577524-20151007235110

Pros:

Short story, but detailed +1

Eerie +1

Perspectives have both different meanings +1

Cliffhanger (a good kind) +1

Mysterious father backstory +1

Suspense was done pretty good +0.5

Seems somewhat realistic on Greg's side +1

Seems realisticly spiritualized on the father's side +1

Cons:

Sloth wasn't executed well +0

Cliffhanger (in general) +0

Total: 7.5/10