Talk:To the Moon/@comment-26054278-20160314212230/@comment-26475800-20160315004104

Thank you for that very in depth review. I can understand what you were talking about and you do make a lot of valid points. And, as most people do, I have an excuse as to why the ending seemed a little awkward.

When I was writing this, it was for a mag which had a word cap at 5,000 words. The story is just shy of that, and when I was coming to the end, I noticed I was so close to the word limit that I rushed and pumped it out. It was exactly at the "Two Week Later" part.

In retrospect, I should have gone back and fixed those issues, and I plan to. But that is the reason why it seemed rushed and incoherent.