Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180330113553/@comment-34823985-20180330203637

Hmmm, not sure what's up with the brackets. I somehow missed that in editing. He props his feet up and takes a nap, so he's actually dreaming after he gets the washing machines going. I guess I need to clarify that. I figure they'd use his corpse as a nest after he leaves the message on the front window or just eat him. It doesn't really matter. He'll be dead. I saw the whole "I am a hollowed out nest" thing as a way of exerting power. "You will be whatever we want you to be, do whatever we want you to do. You have no will. You only serve." Yeah, I'm a little lost on how to clean this story up. I'll have to brainstorm and come up with a plan. Thanks for reading, Bloody.