Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30861466-20180505175756/@comment-30861466-20180505200009

BloodySpghetti wrote: I can't give you a constructive piece of criticism since this virtually has nothing going on for it. "My dad had sex with a vampire and became a vampire himself" followed by "bad occurrence in my life caused by my monster dead" repeat the last thing a few times. "lazy ending statement"

The dad isn't a vampire, he's just immortal. It's literally in the title. The one night stand thing is a one of reference to him being immortal and having a lot of different things (like Dorian Gray if you will).

And honestly your attitude here stinks. If you could simply say you didn't enjoy it rather than downright insulting it I'd actually appreciate your feedback. So, yeah, you've nothing here. Just a silly bunch of words with nothing related to good storytelling, horror or humor.

This is just empty.

And 40+18=58