Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25000262-20140529215857/@comment-24976741-20140530032722

One more thing I forgot to mention due to a friend on skype blasting mlp at full blast making me loss my concentration was that the tunnel scene seemed a bit rushed as if the tunnel was on a couple of inches long which if that was what you were going for then that is ok, but it just seemed blan with no real description at all.