Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33077235-20180911001124/@comment-35711173-20180911033038

Ned,

I suggest having the author focus on one issue at a time, starting with that deathly wall of text. Let them show the initiative to learn that much before giving them the next assignment.

You're right. Even cleaned up, this would be removed almost instantly as trollpasta. If they really are a troll, there's no point in feeding them. If they aren't then they have a lot of learning ahead.

Dr. Bob