Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25024572-20151218175352/@comment-26512885-20151219011243

I liked your style of writting and enjoyed reading it because of this. As for the story it isnt awful, but at the same time its not exceptional. I didnt really find it creepy but that might be because Ive read so many stories on this site now :p. Personally I'd have another go at another story. Though stick witht that style of writting as you do it well.