Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20180727065223/@comment-9041013-20180727150841

Why do you insist on writing characters with a personality of Ted Bundy's last days?

I don't know what you could add to this, I honestly don't. It didn't really "get me" because I figured once the story said "my wife disapproved of my hobby" and a highly valued individual pieces was presented that something is wrong with said piece.

Can't say it was bad, but I really don't know what you could add.

Maybe expand a bit on who's in the chest, somehow...