Talk:Nuviews dot org/@comment-25383866-20150121175037

Oooh. Usually I don't like conspiracy stories because they're too set on talking about their theory rather than telling a story but you managed to do both very well. Although, I think a little more ambiguity in the ending would've made it better. The whole time I was questioning whether the narrator was crazy, and was a little disappointed to be told outright that he was not. Overall, well-constructed story.