Talk:Sorry/@comment-7673575-20190703093205

This was truly something.

General Quality - Impecable. I did however, notice that you initially referred to the gun as the Desert Eagle and then as the Desert Storm. Not sure if this was your intent, but I'll have to chip you off a bit for the inconsistency. 24/25

Horror Factor - It's a-good. Really so. You get into it almost straight away, and I like that too. The suspense is established and maintaned firmly throughout the bigger part of the piece. The Cleanser is portrayed as a cruel, almost sadistic entity, and his design is interesting. However, subjectively speaking, the punishment of eternity was too much for someone who technically was getting in the better. 19/25

Lyrical Interpretation - I must say, you took a bit of a blind swing here. It hit, but it was really more of a flesh wound. While the theme of a man punished for his past could be what the lyrics meant, the band members, however, lay it out as it really is:

That taken into consideration, I unfortunately cannot award you more than 15/25 Entertainment Value - Saying I wasn't entertained would be a filthy, shameless lie. The story was good, and I enjoyed it immensely for the greater part of it. But again, I have to return to the motif of eternity in the punishment. Aside from making me feel really uncomfortable, it was like a hammer to the face after all the sneaking and paranoia. I mean sure, Murph did some nasty shite but also suffered dome nasty shite himself. Really not worth the eternity in his own personal hell. Not to mention I can't realize why didn't the Cleanser just wipe him out of existence (which would be a far more economical way of dealing with it). 18/25

Final Score: 76/100