Talk:Shadow of Pestilence/@comment-25477067-20141217172847

The tenses,Oh the tenses! Not bad for a first pasta, but I have to say that this falls into lots of cliches. Slender/Satan, and a graveyard? really? Also the whole "nobody believed me" is getting old.

I am currently listening to the Dance Macabre and it makes me laugh to imagine someone scared to this song:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YyknBTm_YyM&channel=DistantMirrors

Although I have to give you points for doing your research.