Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4976667-20150618135531/@comment-4976667-20150618140144

I'm trying to kepp the original intent intact, while complying with quality standards. The title better represents the state of mind I'm trying to purvey, which is a chaotic and symphonic love between a murderer and his driving force which is his former love turned victim. If there are areas to which I can improve, I would greatly like the input, and if it is deemed satisfactory I'd like to post it again.