Talk:Outside Lights/@comment-26193563-20150412200554

This story is a bit run-down of the pasta where a truck follows this car home. Also, there is pretty much no reason why the protagonist should be called "Hope," and the sentence "...and her throat had been torn into by a vicious blade...she was dead." I personally find it hard to stay alive when my throat gets cut, but that's just my opinion.

Overall, I'd say you tried, but almost failed.

6/10

Meh...