Talk:Clara/@comment-5733573-20180513172429/@comment-5733573-20180520150142

Hi there. I didn't get an update about this in my email for some reason. I usually do, so maybe the system fell asleep that day.

I really like the murder sequence! The biting especially came as a surprise. In fact, all of your edits make the story a lot richer and stronger. Really nice work!

I hope you keep writing and reading. You'll start to develop your own process and, before you know it, so much of it will become second nature. I'm really looking forward to what you come out with next!