Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30741304-20161213135509/@comment-30741304-20161218013958

Thank you all so very much. I intend to do a fresh rewrite of this same piece soon, just because since I have written this I have been reading quality information on grammar/tense. It is starting to click, and I think my writings are soon to improve.

Thank you ChristianWallis for taking the time for the small errors, and great advice at the end.

Thank you as well ResDraon for the clarification on my question! What a fantastic add-on, thank you so much.