Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44987001-20200204234537/@comment-24101790-20200204235913

Your story was deleted as there were widespread capitalization (failure to capitalize dialogue properly), punctuation (failure to punctuate sentences and dialogue), awkward wording, spacing (you don't space after punctuation and your story is one large paragraph), and plot issues (the plot is rushed, lacks effective story-telling, and generally needs a lot more revision and addition) which result in it failing to meet our bare minimum quality standards.