Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27572556-20160108190549/@comment-24101790-20160108191002

The story feels rushed due to a real lack of plot and description. Since there's no real reference to what is inspiring the Devil, it comes off as fairly generic as well. For example, why is Lucifer writing a letter in the first place and addressing it to a website. (It'd be like someone sending a letter to the White House labeled "Dear Government")

Feel free to look at this guide for a more in-depth discussion of what was problematic with this story.