Talk:The Expressionless/@comment-26490050-20150613163121

I think the creepypasta was pretty good. The description of the Expressionless was good. The statement, "I am God" was a good idea. The only problem was that it left the readers wondering what it meant. Does the Expressionless believe she is God because she is efficient in killing? Is it a delusion? Was it a fear tactic? We don't know.

Also, the kitten in the beginning was good foreshadowing, but why a kitten? I assumed it was a stray she attacked in her travels. Also, why did she go to the hospital? Was she targeting a specific person? Or prey in general?

The point of view is third person omniscient, but limited may have been a bbetter choice, specifically in the survivor's point of view. Also, how did the female survive? Does the Expressionless only prey only men? Or did she just run fast enough?

Overall, pretty good concept, decently written, but a few questions are left. 6.5/10