Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-1186783-20140708011643/@comment-25159182-20140710172134

Hey! Saw your message a bit late, just got to reading this (damn timezones and all of that mumbo jumbo). Sorry. On to the story.

As a fellow classic horror afficionado (Although I do prefer Family over Cigarette Burns) this was absolute candy (groan!). I'd have liked to have less, but longer, paragraphs. The short sentence style of writing always ends up being read...Choppily? The premise was very interesting, although a more in depth explanation of the acctual movie would have been appreciated, especially after setting it up with " the most terrifying thing they had ever witnessed."

All in all, an enjoyable read, and I'll happily read your next one!