Talk:Queen Justine and the Cutest Little Shing/@comment-27007772-20150913063222

Art kills, does it not?

I must admit, Tobit is the flagship of your writing. That is not bad, but you know what they say about masterpieces- they're hard to follow up on.

Though, that aside, this was still an interesting read. It reminds my of the painting, of the artist painting himself, in a never ending loop for some reason.

The execution is what should be expected of you. Movie script level. I'm not a fan of using capitals to exclaim shouting, but that is just a preference. My stupid acquired preference aside, (seen to many stories written in half capitals), the execution was solid.

Character development is your sweet spot. Believable, if not lovable characters that progress naturally. This is your highlight. Your understanding of human mentality, and how they react to select stimuli. I think this story holds up here.

As for the story in general, it kept me occupied long enough to read it in one sitting, without any sort of break. Not even checking other websites, or my Emails.

Not as good as your series, but certainly not anything short of what I'd ask of you, in any situation.

8.5/10.