Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25945479-20150102012649/@comment-25945479-20150102033526

Shane Eyeless wrote: Second to last paragraph; "Nothing was eligible past that point,"

Looking at the context, I think you meant to write "legible"

8/10

Thank you for pointing out the error. I wouldn't have noticed it otherwise. I appreciate you taking the time out to read it. May I ask what you liked most about the story? I just like to know what appeals most to the people who give it positive critique for future reference when writing.