Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25360281-20150111072646/@comment-27007772-20150111120125

This is not a creepypasta. I don't mean that in a rude way, either. It literally is not a creepypasta. It is a sob story.

Also, the over use of ellipsis (...) ruins stories. It does not add tension, it ruins the entire thing if overdone. Take note of that.