Talk:Love Doll/@comment-28266772-20161214165451/@comment-28266772-20161214191110

They're not bad but they I noticed you posted a lot of stories in a short period of time and a lot of them had plot issues and certain other problems. Your prose is spot on and very good but I think you'd benefit from posting your story on the writer's workshop. It's a forum where users give and receive feedback and it's a great place to get lengthy and in-depth critique. If you like you can post one of your stories and I'll make sure to give more detailed feedback tomorrow.