Talk:The Testimony of Robert Landridge/@comment-25226524-20140821225101

It feels like the end of this story is missing. The writing is done decent enough, and you managed to keep my interest until the end. I was anticipating a nice twist or some kind of revelation, but it just stops. If there is supposed to be some subtle implication, I'm afraid it doesn't show. I think that the build up is intriguing enough that you should save this story by giving it a real ending. If I ignore that last little paragraph, I consider this to be a pretty good unfinished story.