Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20160729155428/@comment-25569708-20160802014235

Sorry for taking so long. A possible error for the Witch:

"dementia--he didn’t really believe her—but". You use two hyphens, then switch to an em dash.

So I've just read The Witch so far, and I really liked it. Flowed well, you didn't waste any time, and got right into the... interesting character of Mrs. Wyttick. I read that you were concerned that she was "over the top", but I don't think she is. I really enjoyed her cantankerous and obscene personality, and hearing about all the weird shit she's done over time was pretty unsettling. Just a real effective character, not exploitative or anything like that in my opinion. The company sounds interesting so far. Not any suggestions I can think to make. I'm gonna read The Jay ten--I mean The Fatso tomorrow (I get those two confused). Nice job here.