Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190207081051/@comment-35711173-20190211001859

Bloody Spaghetti,

Rabies vaccine isn't normally given out like flu vaccine. It's expensive and has a higher risk of side effects. Some people (like animal control officers) get it, but not most.

Question:

Your phrasing comes off weird here and there, like in; "She wondered why the priest here in Texas wanted to give Easter Mass so nobody could understand him." Shouldn't it be "in a way that no one could understand"?

Are you saying my English grammar was wrong or are questioning the kid's confused because of her sudden exposure to a Latin Mass? I think the former but am not positive.

Thanks again! I really appreciate the help here.

Dr. Bob