User blog comment:EtherBot/I'm Writing a No-End House Rewrite/@comment-7064562-20180416055832

I honestly thought No-end house was rather horrible. I only found a couple of the rooms interesting, and the rest seemed more like cliche filler forcing things that should have been foreshadowed beforehand but due to lack of depth failed. As in, the rooms would have made sense if we had some depth, context, backstory, something with the main character, but because we didn't and it's a short creepy pasta, it just came off as edgy garbage like Jeff the killer and honestly seemed like the author couldn't think of more than two'ish creative rooms.

I also found the start of the 2nd part/chapter so bad it made me drop it at first and I Had to re-pick it up later. Just how the female/gf was introduced made little to no sense. Kind of like in a really cheap horror movie where the character, agisnted ALL logic shouldn't go downstairs, goes downstairs, and it makes the audience just roll there eyes.

Still, it wasn't that bad and it had all the materials in it to become a decent story, I just feel it needs polishing and to lose the unnecessary edginess and have more thought put into the house as a whole, so a rewrite might be a good idea.