Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24919906-20140513031625/@comment-24821182-20140513043707

It's hard to judge a CP by reading a few fragmented bits out of context. You really should have written more before putting it on here.

I am going to tell you what I think, though: It sounds incredibly cliché. I'm going to take a wild guess and assume that Michael grows up to be a murderer a la Jeff the Killer. We refer to such clones as OC (original characters), and they're not allowed on here anymore - at least not unless they're incredibly well-written.

Keep in mind that I'm making these assumptions based on what you've posted thus far, which is to say not very much.