Talk:1999/@comment-25180648-20150810010306/@comment-25633936-20150811011820

I agree, something "real" should have already happened at this stage of the story. Even "Happy Appy" (similar themed creepy, which also ended dragging to the point of being boring), at least had the protag already meeting the villain/monster at this point.

Things that could happen to make this creepy interesting again:

-Chikdren start dissapearing again, so the case is no longer a "cold and forgotten case". Even better if the child is close to Elliott for some reason.

-Someone suddenly attacks either  Elliott, hia parents or someone else he really cares about (best friend?, some kind of romantic interest?).

-Elliott catches a climpse of spying him at Mr. Bear.

-All the evidence iin the police station dissapear overnight.

......

Twist Endings:

- Elliott never existed and Mr. Bear really runs the blog, at an attempt on making his series more popular and to kidnapp more people (for example, it could end on Elliott asking for help and really be a trap to get people to "rescue" him).

- Elliott finds evidence that someone close to him was really Mr. Bear or related to him (the parent of a friend, old relative).

-Police officer is Mr. Bear or a complice. He helps to shut down every lead on cathing the killer.

-The story never happened as it, with the TV show, the bear suit and all that, just the crime. Elliott was a kid who survived the rituals because he helped the killer with them and became his apprentice. Later, his mind blocked the events and created Mr. Bear to separate himself from the killings. The police are showing him evidence because they want him to remember what he did (the crime on the video could have been his first solo kill). This is not really a "blog". This is some kind of diary (or mental diary) he keeps in the asylum; he doesn't interact with the commenters but he claims that people send him stuff, this people are really voices in his head.