Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30891328-20170205153734/@comment-30891328-20170205192734

Derpyspaghetti wrote: Okay, so here we go.

There is nothing grammatically wrong with your story. Props to you for that. Most stories I see here have too many grammar errors to count.

That is not to say that I think this is up to QS, however.

First of all, you would need to post your story under the spinoff appeal, so it would be judged harsher than usual. Just something to watch out for when writing this type of story.

Okay, now onto the stuff that wasn't good.

The story: This is just a storyboard for a pasta, and nothing else. There are no descriptive passages or anything to clue us in to anything about anything. We aren't attached to anyone, why do we care whether or not they get spooped?

Story Two: You also just copied Candle Cove, and took the creepy bits and forum part out, and then put it 'on netflix'. I'm not sure that's gonna fly here. Also, don't you think some Netflix screener would notice it's just static?

Also, did you really think we wouldn't notice that you basically ripped off Candle Cove?

Post this on the spinpasta wiki if you need to place it somewhere, but next time, try to come up with an original idea. Thanks, even for the pointing the good things. No, I didn't think you'd not notice.