Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5462912-20170821101838/@comment-5462912-20170823200439

Helel ben Shahaar wrote: It's just a little inside joke. Nothing serious. Heh. So anyway. What do you suggest I do to make the points I mentioned above clearer? About the true nature of the story. Also, could the story use a different ending, or this one sufficient, for now?