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I have not attempted one of these in a while, so help would be appreciated. This is not the whole story, just the beggining. There aill be edits and I will add on. I would appreciate it if a more experienced member could give me some advice. I have no idea what to call this as of right now too.

Clarice: “Hello doctor Cornelius, it's nice to meet you”

Doctor: “Hello, Clarice I presume?”

Clarice: “Yes, that's me.”

Doctor: “Nice to meet you Clarice. Thank you for coming. Now, you said you wanted to bring your daughter in to me?”

Clarice: “Yes, she has been unwell recently and I was hoping maybe you could shed some light on the issue. She has been so paranoid and delusional, I'm worried sick.”

Doctor: “I would be happy to help your daughter feel better.”

Clarice: “Ok. Yes, that sounds amazing. I brought her diary with me, so um, if we could take a look over it together that would be great.”

Doctor: “Ok, her Diary certainly could help with five insight. What was your daughter's name again?”

Clarice:“Oh, sorry. I forgot to mention that. Her name is Sasha.”

Doctor: “Alright, thank you. I'll review this diary to see what was going on.”

Clarice: “Thanks, I just want her to be well again.”

Doctor: “Don't fret. I will get results.”

THE DIARY

Dec 20, 2014

Oh my god I can't believe it's almost Christmas. Not only is it christmas, but I'll tun 12 as well! I'm so lucky those two days are one in the same. It's gonna be so much fun!!! I'm getting my mommy her own tutu, and daddy is going to get a baseball. I know how much he loves sports. Anyway, I wonder what I'll get. It's been almost a year since I learned the truth about santa, but it'll still be a fun time. I can't wait

Ps: Dinner was great, mommy made mashed potatoes sprinkled in bacon bits. So delicioussss.

Dec 22, 2014

Today was the final day of school before winter break. I decided a pair of jeans and an ugly sweater would be appropriate for the last day. It was red mostly with green vertical stripes, and Rudolph the rednose reindeer stitches into the background. It was a gift from my aunt Cassie two Christmases ago, but I'm still short and haven't grown much. People sometimes pick on me because I haven't reached five feet yet. But the joke's on them, I can won't ever be asked to reach anything at the top of a shelf.

I didn't write much in my diary last time because it was such a busy day and I was very tired most of the day. On the most part I helped my dad make spaghetti for my family. We usually have get togethers in our family near Christmas time. We all make dishes and bring them to enjoy. In the evening we went home and later had dinner. But I got to spend all day playing with my cousins, which is great for an only child like me. It can be lonely sometimes…

Anyway, back to today. In first period math we had a pop quiz, followed by some math crossword puzzles. Ms Steven said this was good for us. In her mind I guess it was to keep our brain running during break. To be honest, it seems to me teachers forget what the word break means. Ahem, not work. It was all worth it though, because In the end she passed out peppermint candies and jolly ranchers. I chose a peppermint, jolly ranchers suck.

English was a double block, taking up second and third period. For all of second our teacher, Mrs. Hawk, gave us DEAR time. It's an acronym that stands for drop everything and read. I chose to read Harry Potter And The Chamber Of Secrets. It's a long book, but I want my reading skills to be the best in the class. I may sound nerdy but, reading is one of my favourite hobbies. It's so incredible and I sometimes even wish I could live in a book. The spectacular scenery, the captivating story. Almost any book can get me hooked. I'm so addicted to reading I didn't even hear third period bell ring. Mrs.Hawk had to force me to stop reading. In third period we had a party, and Mrs.Hawk brought in chocolate chip cookies. We all sat down on the rug in the center of the room and partially watched the polar express.

FYI: Best Christmas movie ever

Fourth period actually lasts an hour compared to usual forty five minute periods in a school. Thirty minutes are for lunch, and the other thirty are for recess. You can choose them in any order you like, but I usually choose lunch first. I got in line and had my usual meal. Ya know, chocolate milk, carrots (baby carrots duh), Apple slices, and ham with cheese. I pick up a packet of mayo and mustard just incase. I found my besties Ashton and Lily. I laughed hard when I was them. Lily was wearing pants that literally look likes stockings you hang by the chimney. She too had an ugly sweater. It was dark green with red horizontal stripes on it, and snowflakes were etched into it. Ashton just had normal sweatpants on, and a normal sweater. But he decided to take dozens of candy canes onto his sweater. I'm glad I didn't drink any milk, or it would be everywhere right now.

Lunch was fine, we talked about Christmas and what we wanted. I played soccer at recess. By the time seventh rolled around I was pretty tired. Basically we played a few Christmas games and did crosswords (of course, just HAD to be more crosswords. The bus ride home was fun. Actually, the bus was pretty empty. Since it was the day before winter break, most students didn't even bother trying to show up. I mean, it's not like we did any work. I'd rather sit home and play minecraft myself, but my parents had me go. Plus I guess if we did have work it would save me the trouble of makeup after break I guess. So played it safe. I'm just glad there are no projects we have to do over break. Maybe I can finish my Harry Potter book in peace.

When I got home I walked in, went to my room, and sat on my bed. I was shivering cold. I took off my jacket and backpack and went to the kitchen. There I found mom making hot cocoa. She already had me a cup just the way I like it. Warm, but not lava. And marshmallows put in a few minutes in advance so they melt in the liquid. Dad was at work at the time. He is a college professor. He teaches people economics, however I'm not quite sure what that means. He's tall. I always told him he could play basketball, but he likes teaching better. Its for the best probably, both my mom and dad are forty and probably can't play with the young guys.

Dad finally came home at eight pm. Mom didn't have anything planned, so he got Wendy's for us on the way home. I like their bacon cheeseburgers.

Dec 24 2014

CHRISTMAS EVE!!! The day before Christmas has arrived. I'm so exciting for this day. Nothing is more splendid than opening the first present. In my family it's tradition that each member opens one of their presents on Christmas eve. Sadly… I have to wait. My parents don't wake up until around noon. Understandable, they spend a lot of time at work. They like sleeping in for once. But it means I have to wait until they get up to open my present. I walked to the fridge and grabbed a flapjack out of the tinfoil. I put it on a plate and set it in the microwave for one minute. I drenched that thing in maple syrup afterwards and ate it. Soon i'll be guest starring with Gordon Ramsay (lol). Yup, livin life. I waited SOOOOOO long for my parents to wake up. They actually got up at one. Now they have to eat brunch. Sucks to be them I guess.

I was allowed to open my present first. Inside was a Nintendo 3RD XL. It also had a cartridge. It was Super smash Bros. I was so hyped I was gonna blow up. I mean cmon, WHO DOESN’T want a 3DS XL? It's only the coolest thing in the world ever!! I have always been a huge Nintendo fan, and this is like a dream come true for me. It was like Ralphie from A Christmas Story when he got his BB gun. The feeling is unreal. I gave both of my parents elephant sizes hugs. This day is gonna be great. I handed my mom a present dropped off by Aunt Rose It was a sculpting set for beginners. One of my mom's many hobbies is sculpting. My dad got a Eli Manning football jersey from uncle Larry. That's my dad's favourite football player.

I spent all day playing on my gameboy, trying to quickly master Smash Bros. I did have to put it down to do my chores and eat meals, but I was addicted to my new world of fantasy. I even put aside my Harry Potter book for a while. It eventually for pretty late, and dinner was ready. Nothing like egg casserole on the night of Christmas eve. I was sent to bed by ten, but I couldn't sleep. I was too excited for Christmas. But eventually sleep overcame me.

Dec 25, 2014

Again, my parents are gonna sleep in until the end of the universe. Welp, woke up at six of course. I couldn’t fall be asleep of course. That sucks. But you know what didn’t suck? Christmas of course! The best day of the year. I couldn’t wait for this day to go forward. I made myself honey nut Cheerios and cut the T.V on. I spent a good amount of time watching the parade. I went outside and saw the snow. We were gonna have the best shot Christmas ever. I was bouncing off the walls. The levels of excitement were off the scale!!! Our front porch is covered in snow. The wooden railing no longer wooden, but ice and a powdery white. The blue house now had icicles dangling from every window. The red painted door was glazed over in a thin sheet of frost. It truly was a winter wonderland. I go inside and my parents are actually up early. I'm not complaining, the earlier the better.

This Christmas was alright and all, but, um. There is one gift that stood out. 