Talk:Haunted by Insomnia/@comment-35071950-20191031015832/@comment-35071950-20191101012051

I apologize for writing this comment in the rude way that i did.

The pasta was great, well written, used good descriptions, and was quite spoopy and unsettling. However, the story itself should've been fleshed out more and added upon, instead of it just being "I saw bloody ghost girl one night then I had nightmares then a year later she killed me the end"