Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29015383-20160712171950/@comment-29015383-20160714085543

Thank you for your time and the points you....pointed out! I will definitely make the changes/fix the errors you mentioned as soon as I get home from work. Thanks for catching that typo btw.

If you have some story related advice, do feel free to share them, especially in regards to making the vampiric element work since I made changes since the first completely unreviewed version (I mostly worked in some vampire related parts in the first part of the story). I am still learning and would love to hear multiple points of view.