Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24982950-20140927211501/@comment-24982950-20140928080617

Bros, I thank for the actual feedback, (recently I've hated this wiki) I know the story needs more detail 'cos it makes sense to me because... I'm Sparky. Apart from his death and his partner being female, that stuff happened. I'm gonna try and full length this and keep my fingers crossed someone finds it scary and original. ReadingThis I just couldn't see where the story was going.I do now. Watch this space, guys.

Seyonara!