Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25220801-20140724171616/@comment-25220801-20140724222035

Hmmm...I probably need to edit the following line like this to add just a little more clarity:

There was a knock at the door, and I turned as the Detective entered the morgue, his face a mask of professional concern.

There's hints along the way which make more sense on a second reading (how cold she is, the single blanket), but those extra two words would definitely help clarify at the end. Many thanks. :)