Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20160707162915/@comment-29015383-20160714170613

I didn't think David should have said what he did -- I think this should be 'I dont thi'nk' because I presume she still thinks David shouldn't have said anything.''

And I wanted you to know that I'd like to try and fix things between us. ''-- Again, I think this should be 'I want you to know' as she wants it at the time of writing. (If I get these wrong myself, don't hesitate to smack me up the head)''

I do like the addition as it shows a glimpse of what the children have gone through. Perhaps a reason that Sarah didn't look to deeply into the letter is because she found the whole package (certificate, letter, baby toys, pictures, her long lost and misplaced carkeys, whatever you want to put in there :p) in a box that has Michael's name on it? I don't know what kind of personality you have in mind for the mother, but it could make sense that she stored it away with the boy's name so that she would know what it was if she ever got around to cleaning that attic. Just an idea.