Talk:The Girl with Golden Hair/@comment-26475800-20161128045725

I agree with what Humbolt said, in that you could have started the darker stuff a little earlier and maybe hinted at more darkness to come. All in all, this was a very well written story and rather enjoyable. Normally when I see something that that is NSFW I expect either a bloodbath, or a horribly written story (more often than not it's both.) So this was far beyond expectations.

There were a few places where I would have thrown in a comma, but other than that, I don't really have anything to say about the writing style. I liked the period feel to it, and the fact that the killer was female, and it touched on the victim being gay. It added more depth and development to the story. But best of all with those two things, the twist wasn't that someone was gay.

Overall, this was a good read. Thanks for sharing it.