Talk:"Hate"

I thought it was pretty darn good...the idea and plot are fairly original, and with a few minor edits and revisions, your story could add a lot to the pasta monster world.

Overall, I rate it a 4 out of 5, but only because of some minor syntax and spelling errors, as well as a few sections that could have been worded slightly better.

Keep it up, and make sure to check mine out, too, like you said in the forums! Noughtshayde (talk) 04:00, June 11, 2013 (UTC)