Talk:Hydrosis/@comment-25425579-20151012175754

Not too bad! There was a myriad of small little grammatical and punctuation mistakes and such, but I fixed the ones that I could find. Another thing you might want to change is the transcripts of audio recordings are a little bit too vague, at least for my taste. A little less "....um..." and "ahh..." and a little more substance or vivid description of the attackers would help make the hydros more threatening.