User:Tiololo/My Critiques

I've given a few users reviews on their pastas.

I don't have an English degree or anything, so don't expect extremely in-depth analysis, but I can give a vague outline of my thoughts on the pros and cons of a story as I'm a frequent pasta reader. If you'd like a critique, drop a message on my talk page and I'll get it done as soon as possible.
 * Review for 'The Abomination Man' by User:Karategirl1925
 * Review for 'The Number of Darkness' by User:HumboldtLycanthrope