Talk:The Church in the Woods/@comment-26326346-20160525220945

I'm interested in seeing where this goes. It started out as somewhat uneventful, but despite that, your descriptions were spot on and kept me from getting bored or losing interest. For future reference, I feel you are gifted with the ability to give off powerful descriptions, so definitely continue to use them to your advantage.

I jokingly thought of who the shooter was in my head because my brain can be sarcastic like that XD I was genuinely surprised when it ended up being true and I am really excited to see if that ends up being the reality of how things are or if it was really just a twisted dream.

I'd also like to give you kudos for how grounded the characters felt and plausible that the story could be. Not that implausibility is necessarily bad!

Great work, Vngel W! I am looking forward to reading the next story in The Church in the Woods series.