Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27612299-20160115010924/@comment-27612299-20160115035838

(Thoughts?)"N-no one believes me." Kagney would sob softly to herself, her head rested on the glass of her window having lost all hope in convicing her friends of what she saw. Having the oranged tipped ends of her black hair sink down to her chest she figured there could be no use crying and slowly lifted up her head to look at the grey sky outside. "Okay, I saw something, or rather 'someone.' She took a moment to recollect herself before turning back to her mother ,Cora;  who had been sitting on the edge of her daughter's bed with one leg crossed over the other. At this point of time Cora had assumed this was one of her reported shadow people incidents like always and was ready to reject the poor girl. "I just all went by so fast. I saw some sort of man leaning his head down towards my window." "He was kind of tall." At this point, Cora had arched her eyebrow and tied her black silky hair into a pony tail, she hummed and nodded to her pretending to have interest. "This creep had a white mask. Only two features stood out the most; that devilish grin and those empty eye sockets." She took a second to cup her hands together and twiddle her thumbs. Her mother's eyes would widen for a second having been worried for her own daughter's sake and herself, Kagney had never gone in depth about her apparitions. Cora replied to her bluntly:"Babe, are you sure it wasn't one of your silly shadow people again?" Her mother stood up from the bed and squatted down to reach for Kagney's shoulders, holding them in an attempt to ease her mind. She didn't want the idea of a home invasion to the both of them in their 3 room mobile home. Kagney nodded without hesitation. "I know what I saw." Cora couldn't help but to look over at the window and then back to her daughter. There were no police officers about patrolling around the mobile homes, nor a man of the house to make her feel at ease in her own home. All she could do is pray that she was only seeing things. "Let's sleep on the living room tonight, okay?" Kagney nodded to her and proceeded to gather her blankets and pillow to sleep on the carpet floor of the living room, while her mother had slept on the couch.---"3:30 AM" Kangey said in a hushed tone. Tilting her head up to see her mother who oddly had already been knocked out asleep. She rubbed her eyes with a slight moan and fixed her head to look at the 3 panel window that was in the kitchen. She squinted her eyes to focus on what would appear to be a hunched down male peeking into the window. The round black holes of eyes would be present on his mask as they were illumitanted by the lampost on the porch, black ink would trail from them to sink down to his ominous eerie jet black grin. The behemoth of a man would tilt his head slightly to the right, taking his leasurely time to look at the girl who had been paralyzed in her spot. It finally rose up to reveal his tall stature, plate metal armor, bracers, and dull grey wings that reached from the back of his mask to the bottom of his steel plate boots. Her point of view of the winged man had been cut off as it walked away from the frame of the window to the door. Kagney's eyes switched over to the door, she could hear heavy thuds outside from the wooden porch. *thud* *thud* *thud*. The footsteps came to a halt. Crickets could be heard chirping outside, along with the howl of the windy night outside. (Obviously added more stuff here, there could be more but i'm starting my eyes are starting to hurt.)