Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9584883-20150101142648/@comment-25930029-20150101160145

Now, so far this is amazing. And when I say amazing, I mean amazing. I honestly think you should become an author. Seriously. There aren't many writers with the talents you have, to come up with all these names, describe scenes so brilliantly readers can actually see it in their heads, the ideas for this story is great. I don't even want to know how long you took on this, because judging how long and good it is, it probably took a long time.

Now, I did find grammatical errors, and uh, a lot of them. You should definately go through and edit once you've completed it, because even though it's wonderful work, editors only go so far.

I normally hate it when stories referance creepypasta in themselves, but I love the way you did the "Scarypasta" thing. Honestly, that's the reason I continued reading it, no offense. But as I advanced, I liked and understood the story more.

Your skills at writing continue to impress me. You are extremely creative with your writing. (Yay!)

-Creativity