Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-1306136-20140404154657/@comment-1306136-20140405094536

Wow! Thanks for the criticisms.

My first idea was to have the monster as an actual supernatural being, but after writing a bit, I found it difficult to remain consistent with that (especially in regards to the process of making the book and ending it). The way you suggest it should be though seems pretty interesting.

Thanks for pointing out the logical inconsistensies too, like the old library thing and the creaking. I admit I'm not very familiar with libraries, especially how they're done in the US. (No public libraries here in my country, as far as I know.)

And yeah, my diction is pretty bad and tenses are pretty bad. I just practically word vomit and just write what's in my head. I'll try to fix that up.

I'll come back in a few days and repost the revised draft.

I'm just happy you guys think it's a good idea. :P