Talk:Eye Surgery/@comment-24596774-20141124224943

Wow, great story! It's a shame this story isn't well known. The story had a very good buildup and I wasn't expecting the ending. I guess the only problem was how the main character is recalling the events when he is dead, well at least I'm pretty sure he is. Let me know if he's supposed to be.

So, overall, great story. 8.5/10