Talk:The Ghost Pilot

The prose is very gray and repetitive. The big revelation, this woman suddenly seeing an apparition of her dead father years after her death, is given about the same treatment of dread and excitement as buttering a slice of toast. Three-day-old wheat toast. And you're out of butter, so you wind up just eating it dry. Javer80 22:31, September 1, 2011 (UTC)