Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26169026-20150326002354/@comment-26245108-20150326024436

Pretty good so far, but the only thing I gotta say is that it needs a little more of a story to it.

The concept sounds a little interesting, but sometimes stories need a little bit of a hook to get the reader's attention.

Like the stories I've tried writing, there may be a few elements missing.

I'll say for this one: 3.5 out of 5 knives