Talk:The Straight Lines/@comment-25189687-20150731224854

I did a reading of this one, which can be found here:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mWX7DQLXBSE

I liked it. A bit predictable perhaps, but well written, which can overcome any predictability in my book. I'm one of those "in it for the journey" kind of creepypasta fans.