User blog comment:BrianBerta/2 Sentence Creepypasta Contest/@comment-25636022-20150521182501/@comment-25226524-20150521185219

As Underscorre stated, this isn't going to work. You can't have multiple semicolons connecting independent clauses like that. You can only connect two independent clauses, then you must close the second one with a period/?/!. Compound sentences are fine as long as they don't become a run-on. I would just avoid trying to use semicolons in this contest.