Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25151528-20140714203216/@comment-25151528-20140715012450

Ah. So thats what was wrong with it. I would be more than happy to fix this, but knowing the strength of the stories' flaws, I'm just going to have to abandon this story, and go back to the Gaming Community. I am totally sorry that this was in the story and can't do anything about it. This will be my last goodbye.