Talk:The Quarantine/@comment-25198101-20141101212231

Amazing story! A very enjoyable read that kept me wondering as to how, or if, the characters would survive.

There were only two things I have a problem with:

- Why did the military leave? I mean, I know that Jennifer's body scared some of the soldiers away, but wouldn't the rest still be there after the court-marshal? It just doesn't make sense to me to have all of the military forces leave, especially if the infection is as contagious as it is made out to be.

- Some of the dialogue that the characters use, especially Andrew's, seems kind of generic: "more holes than Swiss cheese", “Incident?! Why don’t you just call it a whoopsie-daisy! We’re fucking surrounded like Butch Cassidy by soldiers with assault riffles and you’re trying to downplay it! Was it also an ‘incident’ when you lit up our calculus teacher like a Goddamn Christmas tree?! You must be a stupid mother fucker if you think that we’re going to eat this bullshit hook-line-and-sinker!”(That one cracked me up pretty good though.) But I'm just a stickler for that kind of thing, considering Andrew's character, they do seem like the kind of things he would say.

It was a great, engaging story and I don't regret the past couple of hours I spent reading it!