Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24918243-20140612053158/@comment-24918243-20140620063237

You raised some interesting points, and I have been thinking about how to make it all work out.

I guess the main tension here comes from the fact that as far as Kyara is concerned (and it might well be true) is that no one knows that she has the imp.

As far as her father is concerned he might be aware of it, given his background, but strange as this may seem to normal folk, does not consider it enough of a threat until things really get out of hand.

Even when it does, he handled the situation with such ease, that it makes you really wonder if his daughter was in any danger at all.

At any rate, I have addressed some of the inconsistencies already, but I am going to proof it a bit before I post the new version.