Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5969231-20140623182537/@comment-24077689-20140624183041

There's no indication of that at all. There's this crazy thing called context that we sometimes need.

Having just been through a major rough patch that's resulting in divorce, having seen friends and family divorce, I can tell you that's not how it is. Even messy divorces have more character than this.

If she assumed it was him wouldn't it appear strange that he was asking her? Srsly? Are you even trying?

The entire basis of the story is convoluted, weird shit appearing in the house, nobody knows what that's about, husband and wife cant seem to actually communicate, all the sudden bland twist ending.