Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27012445-20151221232335/@comment-27012445-20151223045140

Thank you so much for your feedback. I am really pleased you liked the story. I think your idea about the picture is brilliant, I worried the medicated treatment instructions would be confusing in how it introduces the sections of the story (identification and Treatment). The good news is part 2 is almost done. It is the ritual, summoning and confrontation. It is where the creepy and horror come into the story. By the way, if you enjoyed What is Your Please, a narrator Stephanie Swan Quills did a beautiful and amazing reading, I would highly recommend checking her out. You will be blown away at what she did to the story. She was the inspiration for the character too. https://youtu.be/2mCRUBqHC-M