Talk:A Christmas Miracle/@comment-4849011-20171227212217

This was a chiller. A wonderful holiday scene gradually becomes corrupted and disturbing, and something which should be magical and reassuring becomes creepy and unsettling. One thing I thought was interesting was the father's drinking habit making Sarah unaware that something had happened. I also liked how you used definite yet subtle details to convey the abuse that had been happening (The line, “And on the floor beside the bed was a long leather belt, bloodied on the metal area,” and Sarah's reluctance to visit her father). You've come a long way the last couple of years.