Talk:Ashamed/@comment-25471033-20181214211612

This pasta was pretty good. The only unsettling thing about though unfortunately was it killing itself, which is kind of disappointing. Also, I feel you need to be more consistent with your names. Did you have a Pidgeotto or a Pidgeot? Was Charizard's name Flame or Flare? You also used "though" a LOT and I would try to refrain from using that word as much as you did. On the other hand, it was a nice thing to read, even though it wasn't scary by any means, the way the story was told and the amount and quality of the description you used made me want to keep reading. In all, I'd give it a 7/10