Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26042101-20150125122343/@comment-26007602-20150126145429

How do you expect to be a writer if you can't handle simple criticism? I'm not here to pat you on the head and send you on your way. I'm sorry to say that I don't care if it's your first pasta; I grade the quality of your work, not your writing experience. You don't win points for trying here. You asked for feedback and I gave you feedback.

You have no obligation to follow my review. As it stands, the story does not meet the sites quality standards, but that doesn't mean you can't share it around with your friends and family. However, it will require a great deal of effort to be accepted here. And with the current plot, I don't think it will ever be accepted at all. But that's my opinion; you are free to do as you wish.