Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24976741-20140602212852/@comment-25020348-20140603235721

I agree with Resident DeVir, it's a pretty good story, but I wanted to address something that struck me as slightly confusing: perhaps you could state the age when your protagonist first started going to Dr. Peyton's early on in the story, to establish a better sense of time elapsed. Can't wait to read it when it's finished!