Talk:The Stairway/@comment-25941663-20151023130807/@comment-26437345-20151023142554

Thanks for the comments! Your review really hit the nail on the head, because the main thing I think I could have done better was suspense building. The little scares aren't that scary. But at the same time I didn't want to make the story even longer than it is.

Also, you're right about Astor being annoying. She was annoying to write.

This was the first "long" story that I've ever written and it was kind of grueling to write. I will probably stick to much shorter stories in the future unless I get a really, really great idea. And speaking of shorter stories, I (coincidentally) just wrote a very short story after about 1.5 months of no writing. It's my first go at historical fiction, check it out if you like: [Bringer of Death]