Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24181913-20150214223244/@comment-26007602-20150214225840

My best guesses: Levi as an anagram for evil is kinda lame. No serious demon would say something like that. The whole "protagonist is the killer in the end" is fairly cliche, and I saw the ending coming from a mile away. It's not poorly written, it's just very predictable. Additionally, having Levi explain the twist in one paragraph isn't very effective. Maybe if he jogs the narrators memory instead if saying "you were the killer the whole time" would work better.

But I think the clichéd premise is why it got deleted. It's just been done quite a lot.