Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25941663-20150918143924/@comment-25941663-20150919105538

JohnathanNash wrote: The vampire idea was good, and the idea of bad dreams was nice as well. But there is something that seemed a little generic about this one.

When the mom appeared I knew she was going to be evil. At the end it wasn't much of a surprise that the child had been transformed into a vampire.

Sorry if that sounds harsh, but that is what I got from this one. Thanks for the feedback. I understand how this reads as generic.

Although, I have to say, the story doesn't necessarily have to do with vampires. As a matter of fact, it didn't even cross my mind readers would think this had to do with vampires. That's interesting, Oaura thought the same.

Anyway, thanks again for the feedback. It is greatly appreciated.