User blog comment:DirectCombination346/How i started making stories/@comment-9967354-20140601123352/@comment-24101790-20140601124320

It is a delicate balance, too much detail can be cumbersome (No one wants a paragraph long analysis about the viscosity of the monster's drool.) and too little can make a story seem vague. (The monster was monstrous, like a monster.)

As for Direct's story, it was unfortunately posted incomplete as a "to be continued" tale and had a number of capitalization, punctuation, and grammatical issues. For those reasons, it was unfortunately deleted. I would recommend visiting the writer's workshop for some tips and pointers.