Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-1671931-20150312192911/@comment-25975226-20150313124533

I seriosuly was going to read this, I tried really hard, but no one has the energy or willpower to read a story with paragraphs that massive and so long at quarter to twelve midnight. I really hope someone reviews this for you. I might check it out again in the morning. In the meantime could you break up your paragraphs please???