Talk:Username: 666/@comment-34090365-20180607062224

I fucking love the video by nana825763, but the story? To put it lightly, it's trash! It's boring, ignores common logic, and just an overall waste of time. The video works because it has buildup, and it's made as if YOU are the one experiencing it! The visuals grab a hold of you, and everything happens so suddenly and so fast that it genuinely becomes unnerving! Plus the animation style is SO DAMN UNIQUE! Was anyone given some serious Madoka Magica vibes from animation style? Cause I sure was!

Turning it into an urban legend of sorts was kinda the best way to go about writing this, but in my opnion, this was done so poorly! The title alone is cliched, the "characters" do not follow common sense (why couldn't he just, turn it off, and if that didn't work, just unplug the damn computer, anyone would think of that! And if that didn't work, that'd be a great oppurtinity for some spooks, and establish that shit just got real! Plus, why the fuck did he mail his eyeballs to Youtube HQ?! AND HOW?!) and, as I mentioned, is just a boring, uninteresting snore! This would've worked if it was a story based OFF the original video, and use the example I gave earlier. Perhaps you could have the channel spread on his comouter like a virus, and then it affects all of his electronics. Show how this effects him psychologically! That's just my two cents!

0/5 "What is this?"