Talk:Fear of Victory/@comment-4849011-20140308140915

I found this to be an effective tale. Not only did it have provocative imagery, but it also used the classic horror element of having something familiar go horrifyingly wrong. It had some unanswered questions, but that just leaves the reader to form his or her own conclusions. Being a B:TAS fan myself, I noticed that your story has the title of a genuine episode, which I assume is intentional because it'll throw people off the track if they try to investigate. I made a few minor grammar edits (I hope you don't mind), but overall it was well-written and affecting. Good job! Raidra (talk) 14:09, March 8, 2014 (UTC)