Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27132971-20181113165025/@comment-36393004-20181115041235

NedWolfkin wrote: You could always do some research about the war online for free.

Personally, I would scrap this story as there is too much wrong with it for it to be fixed. Not trying to be argumentative but that is entirely up to how much work the author is willing to put into it. The basic idea could become something great, despite how common the topic is. There is always room for a new perspective and I am always eager to see one. I enjoyed the story and I know it isn't perfect but it is far better than a lot of the submissions here. Don't give up, whether it's this story or another. There is a story in you and I can tell.