Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20180908140952/@comment-33904527-20180909170010

BloodySpghetti wrote: Hmm now it seems different, I don't know if I'm losing my mind here or if the author had changed it.

Anyways, it's a loop within a loop where the pratagonist because the antagonist before turning back into the pratagonist again because Parallel universes are fun like that.

Did it scare me? Nah.

It's certainly somewhat odd enough to be here, on the site.

It's definitely not my cup of tea, but whatever, if people like it go on with it.

Keep the ending, I like it, it add some oomph to your story. I've read The Smiling Man, and I don't remember that ever having a time loop in it? I see what you mean about the whole "walking alone at night" premise, but past that, I don't see any further resemblance. I haven't changed it since it was posted, either. I'm still going to post it properly though. Thanks for the feedback.