Talk:The Shower/@comment-25941663-20150812114547/@comment-24101790-20150812122249

I believe it's something in the shower staring at them and not the shower itself. That being said, it seems like the author is burying the lead a bit. It's like the joke of the man who goes to the doctor complaining of a splitting headache and when the doctor asks why, the man calmly replies that he was shot in the head a day ago.

Why would the protagonist complain about the sound to his mom when there is something in the bathroom staring at him? (Seems like a more pressing matter) I think the lack of build-up and tension really weakens the story.