Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20170422195410/@comment-3563804-20170422214210

well i tried in some point oh wait i see the mistake i made in this i will correct that So she decided to go see who was there, but when she went to the tree nobody was there, so she go in the cabin to go finally find the fire wood, but after she went there she heard the same footsteps, someone was in the cabin with her, she believe it was her older brother Florian or Talia her older sister who tried to prank her, but when she turn around she see a man with a hatchet in his hand, Elisa was now trapped the man seem to be in his twenty year old and very young in his winter clothes but he has jeans.

okay that's one umm where again i make a little bit better but like you saidf it might be not perfect where should in correct next.