Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20180730155919/@comment-26444017-20180731060959

Solonor1987,

I think it would help to include the names of the parents, as well as the last name of the family. It's your story, so I was wondering if you had any preference for their names. I started the edit, and noticed this immediately, and I think it would be a good detail to include to help the story flow better.