Talk:The Enigma of the Deathbringer/@comment-26840706-20171203064435

In my honest opinion, the concept and writing of this story are both really good and It's fairly obvious you've put alot of effort into this story.

The only thing that bothers me about this story is the inclusion of several disasters that couldn't have been in a film from the time period.

Know that it doesn't kill the tension but the fact that it builds up to something so predictable is a major dissapointment.

I'm going to be nice and give your story 7/10 for the build up alone, keep going and I'm sure you'll write something that'll blow me away.

You clearly have a good enough imagination too do so.