Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-30891328-20170419015716/@comment-30385427-20170424015834

HDhunter360 wrote: EmpyrealInvective wrote:

HDhunter360 wrote:

EmpyrealInvective wrote: Seems like you're just repeating the same (punctuation, wording, and story) issues from your three previous stories here. Are you just trying to get me to give up using the same insult? And don't just say, "No.", with some excuse, because I'm not playing your games. Nah, I'm trying to get you to actually improve your writing instead of half-assing it. I mean, how lazy do you have to be to ignore multiple people giving you advice on multiple occasions?

As such, you have one hour to make a valuable edit to this article. If not, this post and the next one that shows the same errors will be automatically locked to prevent people from wasting their time on you. For one, I have OneNote which corects my spelling and grammer, so you can't say that I'm doing those wrong. For two, I'm not Ignoring you guys, I just wish you guys would stop only pointing out the bad stuff and start saying the good thing two. For, three people aren't wasting their time on me, Jack the skeleton seems to like my stuff, just ask him, here's his page

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_talk:Jack_the_skeleton Sorry to intrude, but:

1. You are. While I couldn't find any "spelling" errors per se in this one (man reading that whole thing was an eyesore), there were plenty in the older ones.

2. Pointing out the bad things is what makes criticism criticism. Even if it had good things, it still has a lot of errors and to be honest, reading it is, sorry to repeat myself but, an eyesore. There is barely anything "good" about this story's formatting. I didn't feel anything, and it's obvious that you're not meaning to make a trollpasta.

3. One fan doesn't mean your stuff is 110% good and solid. It's really bad, but opinions are subjective, so people can like your stuff even if most don't. But again, it doesn't mean your stuff is 100% good.