Talk:The Cold/@comment-25941663-20161108105202

This was an excellent story. Very unique and original.

Probably the first time I see all-caps used that well. It added an "umph" to the text. Also, the rapid fire of sentences and words and images was a great touch. You perfectly created the feeling of "thought congestion", where one is so tired/sick that they can't hold their thoughts from bouncing around their head.

This is one of the best portrayals of madness on the wiki. Truly phenomenal work. One of my favourites.