Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-13937974-20140407204809/@comment-24788305-20140407224041

Hello! I read through all of this essay (well the part you posted anyways), and I found it rather entertaining. I don't really have much to say on your question on whether or not this was a valid creepypasta, but I did want to say that it was a great story!! I'd read more. It did have a slight creepy, melo-dramatic feel to it. Some advice? Improve your flow! :)