Talk:Birdhouse/@comment-25941663-20150228102637

This was creepy and unsettling. I liked the atmosphere and sense of mystery you built around Tobias. Having said that, I don't understand how the ending connects to the rest of the story. What does Tobias' story have anything to do with the abandoned apartment?

Also, how did the narrator slash the tires of a BMW of a family that doesn't exist? Is he some sort of ghost? That's the only possible explanation I can come up with.

Overally, it was a very interesting read and if you make the ending tie in with the rest of the story, this could be very good.