Talk:The Gentleman of Baltimore

Magnificent
Incredible pasta! The story is very well told and structured, you described the characters and their actions very very well. The idea is original too and you use the mystery technique to incorporate horror into your story. The bodies dissapearing and the red rose just lying there is a fine example of breaking the Fantasy-Realism bridge. My one slight issue was the ending. Just a tad predictable in my opinion. Other than that this has been a fantastic read! Very good job. 9/10 CrashingCymbal (talk) 21:10, March 24, 2013 (UTC)