Talk:Gliomas and Graves/@comment-25569708-20160531212553/@comment-24101790-20160531214038

Thanks for the input. Originally I had the revelation that he was the killer put at the end of the story, but I felt like I was telegramming it too much throughout and it might be a bit too common of a twist. I will say that describing his glioma diagnosis and impending death likely made him seem like a bit more interesting rather than jumping in and explaining he's a stalker/killer.

I came up with that ending (#2) after thinking about the protagonist some and really what his mental state was at. The first ending seems to be focused on what Camille would have likely wished to happen to him and the second is what he wanted. As for Chomps, he was too good for this world. R.I.P. Chomps.