Talk:The Russian Sleep Experiment/@comment-25061731-20140614110337

1. "Russian researchers in the late 1940s kept five people awake for fifteen days using an experimental gas based stimulant"

2. " The commanding officer, an ex-KGB instead saw potential, and wanted to see what would happen if they were put back on the gas."

KGB was founded in 1954, therefore the commander couldn't be a member of it, and definitely not an ex-member.

Also, the ending is so unlikely that it makes it simply shallow. However, I think that if some facts were added and reinforced and some probably-sounding names were given, the whole story could have a much better effect.