Talk:I Need to Stop the Knocking/@comment-29502200-20160903232907/@comment-24101790-20160904002736

Sorry, but this critique seems to feel the same on the SOG.wiki: [http://someordinarygamers.wikia.com/wiki/Talk:I_Need_to_Stop_the_Knocking/@comment-Urkelbot666-20160816023723?oldid=145626 "a lot of this feels unnecessarilly overwritten." and "Some of the wordings and descriptions kind of took me out of the pasta, and with something like this, I feel like I would want maximum immersion in the narrative."]

I would suggest taking criticism into account when someone reviews your story (that review was posted over two weeks ago) as that will help you improve your writing rather than trying to explain away the issues without really taking them into account (using the logic of letting the reader decide what a phrase means implies you could have used any word to imply anything as a descriptor which really isn't a viable idea.).