Talk:The Pass/@comment-5269370-20131229180226

As expected from creepypasta.com (not the wiki), it's a very professionally written story, with a great, gradual progression of character development. It never became too ridiculous, and its realism and construction does reflect this professionalism. The problem is though is that it's never really daring, or it doesn't evolve much beyond the investigative narrative, which I'm afraid to say the reader (at least me, anyway) does expect more than just that from the beginning again.

However, this is still a really well-written pasta with a good-standard plot to match. If this writer were to try something much more ambitious, I would definitely be up for reading it. As a way for this person to maybe try that, I'm going to include this in my recommended reading for January 2014. Anyway, great job. I did enjoy this.

8.2/10