Talk:The Number of Darkness/@comment-25148755-20150710191210

Your ability to write historical fiction never ceases to impress and amaze. You obviously put a lot of effort into your research and it shows. This reads like a classic possession tale...I could see it playing out on a show like American Horror Story. It will definitely be a strong showing for Banning's contest (and of the one's I've read, the one to beat) my only concern being the NSFW elements which might be frowned upon since the winner will potentially be on the front page (although, honestly, there are fewer of them than normal for you.  I think you could take out a few key descriptions...the whole menstrual 69ing for example...and bring this within acceptable parameters pretty easily). That aside, I think it is a very good story that works marvelously. A pleasure to read as always.