Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29275171-20181111051520/@comment-36627132-20181111060825

Galaxilord1954 EX wrote:

I know this is a lot of context not said within the story, and that could be attributed to laziness, but at the same time, I was largely unaware of how to properly integrate that into the plot from Simon's pov. When writing a story it is usually best to at least put a little bit of context in it.

Galaxilord1954 EX wrote:

But thank you very much for the feedback, every bit helps, please let me know if there's anything else. You're welcome. I wish you better luck on your next story.