Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26543178-20150628015542/@comment-26490050-20150628033958

Considering It was the view of the victim and not the cop, I ignored the whole how did the cop know question when replying. I think an ending to handle that would be to switch to his point of view our end it with the authorities just taking the body away without telling there victim what it was. That would've left a great mysterious ending. It would've also left room for Part 2. These possibilities are endless.

I think you picked out the things I missed.

P.S. LOVE Cinemasins and the Everything Wrong series.