Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25073641-20150514161008/@comment-28266772-20160531145115

Great story. Really good. Picked out one mistake though.

"evidences that would prove what I heard true." should probably read, "evidence that would prove what I heard true"

Might also be worth adding 'had' and 'was', so that it reads 'evidence that would prove what I had heard was true'