Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-17739056-20140704170557/@comment-4643170-20140705153855

The ending is pretty vague, and whenever you have time, I'd suggest changing it. Maybe the reason for it existing is found out after enough nosing around? And the sword is a bit much, considering that this sounds more like some kind of monster instead of something capable of using a weapon, but I am going on descrption alone. Teeth and claws should do the trick well enough.