Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20150521160433/@comment-25052433-20150612031121

Honestly I think you're good to go. If you dig too much more into it, you may end up over thinking it and messing up your story. I think that if you feel satisfied with your product, then you should trust your gut.

It looks good to me and I think it's ready for the site. You have put a lot of work and effort into this, and it clearly shows with this great story. Excellent work!