Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-39231004-20190506020151

One day a girl named Jesse and her parents went on a trip to a place called “Train Woods”. Jesse’s parents said the place was apparently built right beside an abandoned train station.

They had just got there an her parents were checking them into a cabin in the woods. Jesse observed the place and literally nobody was even there, except for the old man who was getting them a key for their cabin. It was like a ghost town. Her parents got a key and they got their luggage and went to their cabin. Jesse asked her parents why it was like a ghost town and they said that not a lot of people came there because it’s off the map. Jesse could tell why, it was a total dump.

They got to there cabin. It had a sign that said “0” on it. Jesse thought it was just the number of the cabin. They went inside and it smelt like a horses rear end. There were two bedrooms, a stinky bathroom, and a small kitchen. Jesse went to her room and unpacked her stuff. She then got on the bed and it felt like a rock. She grabbed her phone out of her pocket to text her friends but then there was no reception. She got mad and put her phone on the bed side table. She lays down and falls asleep.

Jesse finds herself in an open field with a train track in front of her. She started to here a train horn howl at her. It was so loud! Louder than a tornado! She covered her ears but it didn’t help at all. There was ringing in her ears. Jesse then sees a train coming. It starts to pass her but then it stops and so does the horn. Then the train cargo’s door slides open. Jesse looks inside and only just sees a dark, tall, bony man in a uniform. The man leans over, bending down over Jesse. The face of the man hideous! It was lifeless! It looked like the man had been dead for decades! Jesse was terrified! Then the man’s long arms starts to reached for Jesse slowly. Jesse tried to run away but she couldn’t move. The man then grabs her and pulls her in the train fast.

Jesse wakes up shaking but then is relieved it was just a nightmare. She grabs her phone to check what time it was and it was 3:00 am. CREAK! Jesse jumps! She shines her brightness on her phone all around the room. She sees nothing. But then she’s sees on the walls bloody hand prints. She then sees the man again. She tries to scream for her parents but nothing happens. The man starts coming towards her but then she jumps out of the bed and jumps out of the window.

Jesse keeps running until she finds the check-in place. She goes to where the old man was but he wasn’t there anymore. She shouted for help but nobody came. She then goes to the car and try’s to open it but it’s locked. She then turns around and sees the man. It keeps staring at her with its dead eyes...... . . . . . . . . . Jesse Woods Tim of death: about three weeks earlier Cause of Death:??? . . . . . . . . Jesica Woods Time of Death: about three weeks earlier Cause of Death:??? . . . . . . . . . Carlos Woods Time of Death: about three weeks earlier Cause of Death: ??? . . . . . . . . . 