Talk:A Stroll Down The Park/@comment-24155491-20140613082944/@comment-8789017-20140613140905

Yeah I'll admit that with the exception of my first story, this and the last were written to pass the time, as for the ending, yeah I should've spent more time on it. As for the mother, yes and no, her being a slut has nothing to do with anything, it was just something to add to the main characters life in the small town, having to deal with this and that because of it. As for something going one between her and Mr. Thomas, they had some scuffle the last they meet, but she didn't kill him, he sorta did that to himself.

I'm well aware that this, and especially the third, aren't the best written. I'll admit that I wasn't all that focused when making these, writing CP's isn't on the top of my to-do list, so I am open to critisism.