Talk:The House That Death Forgot/@comment-26030957-20150127222133

Very nice indeed. I'm giving it a 9.8/10 instead of 10/10 because I didn't like the final death scene. She just runs into the knife? And it goes "through, out the other side". The other side of what? Her eye? Her skull? The story was just this slow build up and it seemed when the money shot came it was a bit too rushed. But overall excellent. The first couple of paragraphs give you a great feel for this character Melinda so that you have a vested interest in the story.