Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20190521172649/@comment-36393004-20190521183609

That's why I posted it here. I wanted to see if what I had going in my head and the subtlties came forward enough. I wanted to hint at what happened without telling.

The boy was taken to his aunt because the authorities assumed the father killed the mother and then commited suicide. I don't think I brought that point across, especially the suicide aspect. I will go back to that.

The boy has been placed in confinedment and the doctor is a child psychiatrist. The boy commited the murders.