Talk:The Necropolis/@comment-37138398-20181008234716

Humans were always pack creatures. Even when they tipped the evolutionary scale and became humans, they are nomadic as a tribe. Humans always prefered to be together rather then alone. This takes it into account, and with the added gore, this makes this story a good read. Unfortunatly, this isn't creepy. The story relies too much on gore, and not enough on scares. It was sort of suspenseful when it came to the buildup with Leonardo, but after that there was no thrill that good creepypastas have. Again, great read, and keep up the good work, but maybe add something genuily frightening to the mix (perhaps an alien that completly demolishes the ship, the reanimates the dead to fight with it).

Final grade: 5/10 (gotta go for the scare factor)