Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26924905-20141215010554/@comment-25880794-20141218162020

I think this pasta is good and has a lot of potential, in fact it could be drawn out more; let the unease and creepiness of beautiful21 be felt as he mentions various details that only someone watching the other chatters could know. Perhaps before he comes online detailing some of the odd chats he has had before in order to warn the other chatters? I think an air of menace would definitely make this creepypasta even better, I like it and I think it will be an amazing pasta keep it up!