User blog comment:Hsshall/PASTA WAS DELETED?!/@comment-25036236-20140610131910/@comment-5619531-20140610141916

Actually. Don't do that. Post it in the Writer's Workshop board. User's such as Guy, will help out a lot pointing out the stuff that's wrong. But for good reviewers, ask Noothgrush or Encuinach (dunno how to spell his name, but he's a chat mod, so look at my profile page to find him and go to his talk) to review it. They're great reviewers on the site, that I can think of.