Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28060931-20161219211715/@comment-28060931-20161222140702

Thanks a lot. This is very detailed and you put a lot of work in to the review. Remind me to order some adderal next time you want a story reviewed.

Pacing is my biggest pet peeve. I have he mindset of streamlining stories to shit and beyond. My first attempts had more purple prose than H.P. Lovecraft in modern times. I thank you again for the review and I'll try to balance the description and pacing out. Cheers.