Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30959528-20170716195837/@comment-7064562-20170717053627

It wasn’t long before I had to replant. Then I heard small taps at his window. Small, soft, gentle taps. It gave him the chills. My daughter, Mariana, got creeped out also. She didn’t feel comfortable alone in her room, and resorted to sleeping with me dad in my room.

So is the narrator the father, another guy, who is him, etc.

I'm confused af right now with all these tense switchings. They heard small tabs at his window.

Who the fuck is his referring to?

Small soft gentle tabs could be connected in that sentence and dosen't have to be its own as well.

It gave him the chills. Ok, so yet again you start it out with "My plants" so pick a view point...