Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26113663-20141222073904/@comment-25769703-20141222105425

I will return to give you a proper review...

Let's just say this reminds me alot of super volcano, 2012 and other similar movies. As well as this is probably written somewhere in a religious book itself.

'A long stairway spawned... this is not a pc/xbox/ps game'

I really think this is so similar to the religious interpretations of doomsday that i see no originality in it.

Sea,typhoon are all examples.

You also left out the point why? keep questioning yourself why is this happening?

And lastly, if the pasta is going to be called doomsday - i can't help but cringe at the thought of the DC character doomsday appearing to cause suffering on the world.

-Just Sayin- -It needs work-

Improve on the story, have a more dramatic build up. Have relateable characters, have dramatic monologues, have a picture it helps!