Talk:Telephone Line/@comment-25941663-20150213104421

This is a heartfelt tale with surprisingly good character development for a short story. I really cared about the protagonist and his fiance. It was very nicely written.

But... I didn't understand the last line. I know it is supposed to be open, but I think this went a bit too far. There are far too many possibilites and that confuses me.

Other than that, it was very well executed. Bravo.