Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36012429-20181009201641/@comment-35711173-20181010212737

Bloody Spaghetti,

You're right. From what I read it's a good, solid story. I didn't spot anything wrong with it. That said, I have always felt that SpiritVoices takes pride achieving the best and really wants to learn and improve. Jdeschene's reviews have always been invaluable to me, and as this has the same ring of subtlety I thought that if there was something my tired eyes couldn't spot then Jdeschene could tell how to really make it pop.

The emotion shows. I was just giving my best wishes of sobriety for whomever was the inspiration. What could be wrong with that?

Respectfully,

Dr. Bob