User talk:ChristianWallis

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Defecating all over your clean admin page
Exactly what the title says. So, how does it feel now that you're officially a tyrant? Just wait 'till your first "i hte u for delete my storie,I SHIT ON UR FATNES!!" message. Also, any particular reason for the lack of "Check out these stories (nudity included)" blogs?

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 12:30, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

* Our self-titled 'protagonist' is getting very annoying today. *

Hey there, again. While making a comment I discovered that you have a narration for The Shimmering Tree (great story, by the way). Yet, you haven't linked it on the story itself nor your page. Is it a simple case of bad memory? If yes, I can relat- Oh, wait, I was supposed to take the hooker out of the- ah, ruined my dinner.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 19:51, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re:Naming
Hello.

I received a message telling me that I needed to change the title of my history. I'd suggest "Down to the bone" if it's available.

Thank you and bye for now.Frederick Barbarossa (talk) 20:01, December 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * Thank you very much for editing my story. Sorry for the title mistake but this was my first creepypasta. I'll try to read the site rules better next time. Until next time.Frederick Barbarossa (talk) 20:11, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Uh... I noticed something
Hey Christian, I noticed you left the '[placeholder name]' in your story, Lamprey spider. Just thought I'd let you know.

Also, I noticed... uh... you decided to clean up around here. Hold on, I bet there's an echo!!

an echo!!

echo!

. . .

Nice.

'[http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:Derpyspaghetti I'ma gonna getcha! ] [http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_talk:Derpyspaghetti I'ma gonna getcha good! ] ' 00:56, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

Good!

good...

. . .

Congratulations
Congratulations on becoming an admin.

TenebrousTorrent  Talk 05:35, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

Story thoughts
I know you're busy with your new admin duties, but was hoping you'd take a look at my story Father's Love when you have a chance. It's one of my personal favorites that I've written but has gotten very little love from a comments standpoint. Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 18:42, December 14, 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it

Congrats
Hey Chris, guess I'm late, either way congrats on getting your admin's rights. By the way, I have a question; it is a wise decision to go from 3rd perspective into 1st perspective. Back and forth so on? RaptorKillerX-Venture (talk) 14:50, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

I see, thanks for the response. RaptorKillerX-Venture (talk) 15:00, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Username Link
Hey Christian, you can link to one's username by writing this:. See ->. It's a useful little template. MrDupin (talk) 19:08, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Be sure I'll never let go. Also, are you sure it wasn't because you wrote it as ShadowSwimmer77 instead of Shadowswimmer77?

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 19:15, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

I have no idea what you just did to trigger that thing, but that was awesome! I have teasing material for years! Years baby, years!

But seriously, at this exact moment three username links are broken. I never had that problem, here's what you should: use the preview mode as much as possible (but I'm sure you already do that) and if putting the username between –  still doesn't work next time, try doing it like Example.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 19:21, December 15, 2016 (UTC)


 * Beforehand you had written this: ShadowSwimmer77 . This tells the wiki to link to the page User and the text appearing on the screen is ShadowSwimmer77. You can link to Swimmer's user page like this: User:Shadowswimmer77, but the text displayed is User:Shadowswimmer, which is kinda ugly. One way to work around this is to write Shadowswimmer77 , but you are writing too much. A better way to do this is to write , which does the same as the previous one, but you write less.


 * A final way to link to a user is the one you used, where you write MrDupin . The first part is the link, and after the space you have the text appearing. You can test this yourself in the editor, to see how they work. MrDupin (talk) 19:36, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

tis the season
We don't do much for Christmas these days, but I've been stressing over my final project for comics class and my newfound social life has been distracting me too much (and making me broke). Thanks for posting the review! I should be able to actually read and write again soon, now that finals are over. Thank god.--Mikemacdee (talk) 05:54, December 16, 2016 (UTC)

Review Request
Hey, I wrote something and I wanted to see if you could review it when you get a chance. I don't know if it'd be considered NSFW, but I think it's alright. Considering it's mental illness and you study psych, I thought I'd ask you about it. If you get a chance, could you review it? Here's the link: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:565345

Rhyveee (talk) 14:47, December 16, 2016 (UTC)

Favor
Hey, Christian. Could you do me a favor and delete one of my older stories? I feel it doesn't meet my personal standards (low as they may be) anymore.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 21:01, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

christmas contest mistake
It was just pointed out to me on the work shop that I used the wrong prompt. It was a total mistake on my part, I read the message on the page wrong. I have the story up on the workshop and would still like to add it. If this disqualifies me from the competition I understand. Being this close to Christmas I don't think I could write another story in time.

Nowhereman0828 (talk) 00:13, December 18, 2016 (UTC)Nowhereman0828

Re: Mistake
Ha ha. I'm willing to let it slide, but will mostly likely doc some points for it.

JohnathanNash (talk) 13:51, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

Question About The Rules
Hi Christian, I had a question about the rules. What are the rules regarding competitions? I had an idea, but I don't really know what the rules are. So does one have to have a specific rank or something to make one or what would I have to do? I wanted to make a competition in which the writer would use part or all of the song lyrics from Nightcall by Kavinsky. I thought it'd be a good idea since the song is rather dark if taken out of context. Thanks, Rhyveee (talk) 18:10, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

IHABAM review posted
I finally read and reviewed I Have Always Been a Monster, and it was easier this time because there doesn't seem to be as much to deliberate about with this story. Basically of the three stories you asked me to review, Ixodida was the good one.

Also, Happy Holidays!--Mikemacdee (talk) 22:13, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

Shady practice
Hey man. I noticed this user last night. I think he's most likely some kind of troll and should receive a warning (he did create a spam blog after all).

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 09:56, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Uhm, did you just happen to mix me up with Derpy or? (this would be a really embarrassing message otherwise)

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 10:39, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

"made me thing it was him"? (couldn't help it, I'm a terrible person). Anyway, don't worry. Just be sure to be up for Christmas, all that white bright heroin won't blow itself.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 11:26, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

So THAT's what that was about
I was wondering what that message was about. I guess it's pretty easy to get two idiots confused, huh. (Luckily for you, I'm leaving today and have to sign off until just before new years in a little while.)

Anyway, in regards to the user, I think it might be that he's just... weird. I mean, he didn't do much other than create a spam blog and add a pasta to the category 'edgy'. I don't know. I'll leave it up to your judgement.

And in regards to the category message, I shot first.

 I'ma gonna getcha!  I'ma gonna getcha good!   13:18, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

behavior
i apolagise for my recent behavior. i have only returned after a year of forrgeting. I will try to be less abracive in future.

The Right and Honerable King Of rapture, SonOfRyan (talk) 13:46, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Entries so far
Hey Christian,

So I was going to add a list of all the entries so far, but it appears that I don't have the ability to edit that blog, so here are all the people I've found, I cheated a little and used the list that by Squid:

If You Hear Sleigh Bells by Ramunetan The Santa at the Mall by Derpyspaghetti Occupied Chimney by Doom Vroom ChristmasDay by Nowhereman0828 Santa's Other Workshop by Killahawke All is Calm; All is Bright. by Levi Salvos

We should put that list in the blog so we don't have to search through the entire thing in the upcoming days. Can't wait to read these stories, holding off until the end of the contest unless anyone is going to change anything. At least that's what I'm telling myself to make me feel a little better about not reading any of them yet. Christmas is really hectic at my house this year, and it doesn't even feel like it. God I hate Florida.

JohnathanNash (talk) 04:17, December 23, 2016 (UTC)

Technical difficulties
Hey man. I think this page has some serious formatting issues. What do you think?

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 13:20, December 23, 2016 (UTC)

Alright. Sometimes I can become really paranoid when doing an edit like that. For some reason I thought that if I fixed it, it would somehow differ from how the author wanted it to look like so I preferred not to risk.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 13:43, December 23, 2016 (UTC)

Boxing Day
Here's hoping no one crashed any Boxing Day events- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vKoAlpWD_Lg. Raidra (talk) 00:16, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Hey
I haven't had a chance to really get any reading done in a few days. I'm in the middle of getting my house ready to sell, so that's been taking all of my time. If I would have known that I would have to rebuild half of my house, I wouldn't have become a judge. Hopefully, I'm going to be done today or tomorrow though, and I can get back on the ranking.

JohnathanNash (talk) 13:53, January 3, 2017 (UTC)

Lamas.
Hey, what's your opinion on killer lamas? This is imporant as I have to write something on a talk page to get an award so I'm just using you like a cheap dollar store whore. (But feel special!)

Resdraon (talk) 18:37, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Contest
Hey Christian,

Sorry, but I'm too swamped with doing repairs to my house and getting everything ready to move to judge the rest of the stories. I wanted to let you know this before everyone got upset about no winner being announced. So you can announce the winner, and I'll hold up to the reward and review the winners chosen stories.

JohnathanNash (talk) 22:02, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Diversion
Taking a break from our war, I'm hearing users that use only numerical ratings really grind your gears.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 11:55, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Since you're online, could you respond to the question I asked Emps?

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 13:02, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Badedit
Damn I had no idea my bad I just added like a comma and two words bc it didn't let never leave a comment on the fandom wiki... I was gonna say good job I'm sorry

Reary77 (talk) 12:24, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Sure will man thanks for the heads up and for being understanding!

Ugly Christmas sweating
That's all right. Oh, that's rough! I'm glad you're better. We had to delay our gift exchange, but thankfully we did have a happy Christmas and New Year's. I don't know a lot about Gaiman's run, but I've read about Moore's take on Miracleman. That's one run that readers can either praise as a dark yet innovative take on the genre, or gape at in shock for being a chamber of horrors. Have fun! Raidra (talk) 04:03, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

My Story
I'm wondering what you think of my story as an admin. I have worked very hard on all thrity chapters of this story and I would like to know what exactly you think of the first three. Its called Raising Hell and I would like to get some feedback from a guy that has probably seen his share of terrible pastas over the years. Also I havent forgotten about that time you deleted my pasta three years ago which is part of the reason I decided to come back and try again. Now that you have accepted my new pasta I feel like its not getting the attention it deserves. So I want to know how do I make a popular pasta like Jeff the killer or SlenderMan? If you can tell me how I would appreciate it.

Love AmazingLover96 (talk) 14:14, January 12, 2017 (UTC)William Schoene

Editing Request
Hey Christian,

So I convinced my friend MoonClaw to post something on the workshop and it's been up for a bit. I've told them to ask someone, but they keep refusing to do anything about is, so I've told them that I'd ask for them. So, this is something that I collaborated with them on, so I want to see it up on the site just as much. It's called The Angelmaker and we're both pretty proud of it. It was originally part of a short book/long short story that we wrote and scrapped last November. I edited it yesterday after they put it on the workshop, confusion ensued and now the edited one is the actual post. I was just wondering, if you get some time, if you could look it over. Here's the link if you decide to give it a look: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:568254.

So anyways, have a nice day!

Rhyveee (talk) 14:56, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

I do have the entire story written but I just wanted to post it Part by part because I just wanted people's opinions on it and to leave them hanging as well. I thought leaving people hanging would make people like it more but I see that's not the case. If you want too I can post the story as one but let me tell you that it is going to be huge.

Short stories were never really a thing for me I just enjoy giving people a good full experience with a long story. Anyway if you want to go ahead and delete the three parts and I will post it as one down the road.

Review Request
I was wondering if I could get a review for my story Of Pigs and Monsters?

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:566838

Sorry, If I am being rude by requesting your attention like this.

ToxicAvarice (talk) 19:23, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Review Request
Hey, Christian. I just posted my second draft of "Accident Prone" and was wondering if you could spare some time to review it. I totally understand if you don't. Thanks and have a good day,

Jake888 (talk) 16:38, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

I could kill myself with that humiliation
You sir just became my new mentor. I mean Jesus fucking Christ, that wave of destruction could even humiliate me and I'm the hardest person to insult known on the bloody continent. I hope one day my vigilante acts will be able to compete.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 15:21, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

Continuing the slaughter
Statistics vary from different sources. It is a general consensus that black people commit crimes disproportionally. It's worth mentioning that it's mostly black-on-black violence, so most black people are killed by other black people. If you ask me if I think black people are violent beasts by nature, of fucking course not. I will bring up this point again in a minute, it's about the culture and environment. Black people live on average in very poor areas, ghettos basically, and crimes becomes more prevalent in poorer areas. There are also many bad attitudes among the black community: Snitches get stitches, gang mentalities and "white devils" mentality. I don't see why you would just jump to the conclusion that countless cops are incredibly racist. My explanation is, they get shot more because they do more crimes.

It is possible that Tamir may have been a victim of racism, but you seem to take it as the only possibility.

Those weren't technicalities. A race represents a category of people with several specific physical characteristics. You can't say "they are all brown". Mexico is filled with people of multiple different races, it isn't an ethnostate. Similarly, about 10% of Arabs are Christians, which is more than all Jewsish people, who coincidentally are of a single race, and about 5% of Muslims are white. It may not seem like many, but keep in mind that Islam is an extremely popular religion.

I don't think it's a naive dream. I think that humanity will eventually reach a point where it becomes united, but it isn't possible now or in the near future. Why, you might ask. Well, as I said a few paragraphs before, differences in cultures and environments. But to a bigger level. Hundreds of different languages, dozens of religions, sects and ideologies, dozens of different lists of laws and Constitutions. In one big state, who will decide which will be the official language, laws and Constitutions? By vote, so the countries who didn't vote the winning choice are forced to learn a language they don't want to? To respect laws they don't want to? To be deprived of rights they wanted? And if there will be multiple of them, what's the point of uniting? This created a problem in Canada with the concept of multiculturalism. Several different groups live segregated among themselves, all only speaking their language and following their traditions, never mixing with others. The only thing they have in common is the name of their country.

And you want people to unite people against Russia? I understand that you don't like Putin, but what did Russia's citizens do to deserve having nations work against them? What could they do, they're under a communist regime, which is fucking horrible. Romania was once under a communist regime, and is still shitty after 27 years of freedom.

And do you think that Hillary supporters and leftists are faultless? I could easily give you several examples of racism, sexism and stupidity on their side.

Hey. So, is a Pokémon creepypasta okay if it's not a hacked game one? Like, a creepypasta set in the world of Pokémon. They got helmets on they heads - BUT I GOT A WATAMELOAN INSTEAD! (talk) 20:11, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for taking the time to compose such a thorough review of my Christmasy-Christmas story! It means a lot that you put such thought into reviewing the submissions, and I though I'd mention that I greatly appreciate it. I don't know how the hell anyone manages to judge competitions; there's always so many solid entries. I'm glad you seemed to enjoy the story despite your mentioned a-religious stance. Frankly I was a bit worried the story was pandering to religious fears which was never my intention (I'm an atheist myself, although that doesn't count for much). So, eh, thanks! Levi Salvos (talk) 23:48, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

RE: GYM TEACHER
I just finished reading your review. Wow, that was fabulous. I'm so glad you picked up on the deeper thematic elements. I think I need a minute to digest it before I leave a comment. Thanks, mate. Looks like I owe you a couple of pints and a pack of crisps.

HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:07, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

I see that you have deleted my unfinished story, "Kyle and the game he haunts". That's all right. I have also seen a warning not to try and re-post it. Please understand that when I re-upload it, it will be finished, and refrain from deleting it.

Wewser Lethal Dude (talk) 05:23, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Hey, can you review this thing for me?
Hey Christian,

So I wrote a thing that's up on the workshop. If you could give it a look it'd be much appreciated.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:570670

Thanks,

Rhyveee (talk) 18:38, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

Hi

Front Page
Hi Christian, How have you been doing? I just wanted to check to see if I was still going to get a spotlight spot for winning the contest this past December? I was just curious if that would happen. Either way, I am ecstatic about it coming in first place regardless. thanks and have a good day

Thank you for all the support. I've been on a longer hiatus than anticipated because of family reasons, work hours, and other personal problems that have sapped all the writing spirit out of me for several months.

I'll be making an effort to get back into the swing of things, in part due to the Spotlight and from the support I received from this community in the past as a whole. I'm sorry if I made things inconvenient, especially in regards to the Collab, and I thank you for your guidance and patience.

Hope to see you around.

-Munch

Hey bro, It totally not a problem......for me......but I think Pepe is pissed. LOL. Just kidding, I completely understand

A small step for man
Don't thank me, mate. Thank Milan. He's been doing most of the work till I got here.

I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 09:09, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

Hey dude. So, when I see a page with no credited author should I assume by default that the one who created the page is the writer?

I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 17:13, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I should have been more careful, especially since no one self-nominated in months if not years.

I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 17:35, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

ChristianWillis, I would firstly like to apologize for the chaos that was wrought by me last night. I was led to believe that conducting my social experiment on this wiki would not make anyone angry and that the wiki was dead. Obviously that was not the case. I would like to be able to submit an apology to all of the authors whose pages I vandalized and a thank you letter to the kind people who fixed them. And please, give them cookies. They put up with an idiot and lived. I am sorry that I ruined their days, yours, and unneccessarily and uselessly edited so many pages for what turned out to be nothing. Just in case you aren't sure who I am, this is Nay Nay the Narwhal, coming from a different computer. Do not worry, I've not done anything else crazy. Again, please understand I did not intend to cause anyone harm. I am not requesting an unblock, just so you know. I screwed up and I doubt I'll be welcome on this page again anyway. Please accept my humblest apologies and have a wonderful, vandal-free day. 23:30, February 7, 2017 (UTC)Noo Noo the Crazy Badger (talk)

Help with an outside opinion?
Hey there. Just wanted to let you know I have the first part of a larger work in the Workshop, 'The Three Muses of Henry Coville.' You don't need to look it over, of course, but since it's been a while I figure you might like to see what I've been working on.

I hope you enjoy it, I believe the imagery used in this one to be something special indeed.

If you do decide to take a look, thanks. :) Means a lot to me.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:572101?useskin=oasis

Appreciate it.
Thank you for reading over my piece in the Workshop, I had actually done some fat trimming of the first part over last night and this morning, but the changes didn't take, unfortunately. Suppose I'll have to dig back into that again when I have the time.

Nevertheless! Your suggestions are always appreciated, and I'm glad you find them worth critiquing. I'll try to finish the second and third muses once the beginning is tightened up a bit.

Hi you deleted my story cats got your tongue and i want to have some feedback and know why thank you

Horrorstories666 (talk) 10:21, February 14, 2017 (UTC)

Regarding the '16 Collab
Hey boss. Just wanted to let you know that Jay posted recently on the 2016 Collaboration discussion page, and he said that when all users involved in the project had okayed their sections as 100% done and proofread, the collab could be made into an article and would go up as the March front page story. So I was just checking in with you to see if your three sections involved were totally finished or not. They look mostly complete to me (except for a couple placeholder names) and I remember reviewing two of them in the WW, but I wanted to make sure you were done with them.

Hope things are going well for you.

" We could have been so good together ,  we could have lived this dance forever ..."  17:46, February 21, 2017 (UTC)


 * Not a problem, hope you enjoined your birthday party (I can only imagine the number of innocent maidens slaughtered...). Since you're done with your sections I'll be messaging the others involved in the project and see what's up with them. Thanks.


 * " We could have been so good together ,  we could have lived this dance forever ..."  20:11, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

Hey Christian

I saw that you deleted my story The Invisible Killer'.

I uploaded the story to the workshop, under the same name, and I would appreciate it if you reviewed it/give me some insights into why you deleted it.

If you want to, can you give me some tips in what I can improve, since I really like to write stories and I really want to improve.

J3ss00again (talk) 14:53, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Tried to edit No Name Land
Hey - I made an edit using the stuff you suggested in it. I added a bit more too, so I'm wondering if what I did made it better or worse? Here

Listen to your heart  Listen to your paint   Listen to the voices inside your brain  15:04, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

RE :

Okie dokie. Just wondering if hits the Empy Satisfaction range. Did I say Empy Satisfaction? I meant Quality standards. (Ha! Making fun of empy always being on is fun!) Listen to your heart  Listen to your paint   Listen to the voices inside your brain  15:11, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

Vandal scandal
Hey Christian, I just wanted to make sure you saw this ingenious act of system-bucking that I reverted a while ago. Just in case you didn't happen to spot it.

Thanks.

" We could have been so good together ,  we could have lived this dance forever ..."  09:24, March 8, 2017 (UTC)

Hey, made an acct to tell y'all this. I was there during the NayNay scuffle and you guys missed a few NayNay's in some articles. RandomVandalWatcher (talk) 23:20, March 12, 2017 (UTC)


 * ^ Christian, I went ahead and removed one left-behind instance of vandalism I found, hope you don't mind. I personally couldn't find any more. Thanks RandomVandalWatcher.


 * " We could have been so good together ,  we could have lived this dance forever ..."  23:56, March 12, 2017 (UTC)

Hi Christian,

Many thanks for the quick reply. Heading to work now but I will take your advice and post to the workshops once I get home tonight. Many thanks for the heads-up.

-C.J.

I'm not
That's not agtangising them. There is zero reason to state it's your 2nd language. You want it posted, it's going to be judged just like someone who's first language is english. You wrote it in english, you posted it on an english thread, and you want it on an english wiki, no one needs to know its your 2nd lanauge. Excuses don't help you improve. It's the same as randomly putting in your transgender as many others like to do for some reason, though that one is by far more unforgiving. I have given them a more detailed responce and why its not a cool thing to do.

Resdraon (talk) 15:24, March 27, 2017 (UTC)

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:578503#12 You should have used this one as the example instead. Though while that can be counted as agantising, the author clearly didn't read the gudielines of the wiki and there story is about a undertale influced yandre game, but they havn't did the reserch into undertale and said they dislike it...So..ya...I do give people honest reviews/help most of the times, but as the workshop produces things worse then wattapad in most cases, my helpfulness for people writing video game yoai and wanting to be let down easier then a new born infent has fallen.

Resdraon (talk) 15:30, March 27, 2017 (UTC)

yeah im actually not going to appeal for delete on that one, it was pretty cliche now that i think about it. Completely failed at 2 sentance story XD BatWolfStories (talk) 16:09, March 30, 2017 (UTC)

Thank you Christian! SittingScared (talk) 20:49, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Yet Another Review Request
I hope you had enough of a break from me. Well, that doesn't matter because I'm asking you to review yet another story of mine (I owe you a lot of big ones, man). I understand if you're not up to it, I didn't feel like writing or reading for two months. And because of the break I wouldn't expect miracles from the story, which is found here. Thanks in advance.

With kidnly love I mean manly regards, If you&#39;re depressed and want to die, I&#39;m here to help... you die (talk) 20:50, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

is it cliche if a person is telling a story of some killer or something to his friends but he actually turns out to be the killer and kills them? BatWolfStories (talk) 16:28, April 4, 2017 (UTC)

oh, i thought blogs were for updates on stuff like stories, can i post the stuff in the about section of my profile? BatWolfStories (talk) 16:28, April 4, 2017 (UTC)

Question
Greetings Chris, I was pondering. Am I, at the present moment obliged in constructing a, somewhat detailed blog in regards to modern-day literary crafts in general, maybe even more? Despite, not bearing forth any works of mine as of yet. Bringer Of The Light (talk) 15:33, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps, I've overdone the peculiar style of mine. Unfortunately, things didn't sailed smoothly as anticipated; the changes in my writing style kinda illustrate that, in a way. Bringer Of The Light (talk) 16:15, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Hello,recently my second atempt at submitting a story to the wik iwas deleted. My first was deleted in about 10 secands by another admin but I decided not to do anything because it was admiteddly rather crude, but for this one I gave some more though into making it and even used a spellchecker(english is not my first language and im still learning). Luckilay I saved a backup of it that can be read here: https://pastebin.com/gqyEFUUy

Basicaly what I want to ask is what was wrong with it and if I can do anthing to improve it. Thanks in advance FancyHats7782 (talk) 17:09, April 18, 2017 (UTC)


 * I answered their writer's workshop post giving some feedback. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 03:26, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Relieved
"Relief is what you feel when your mum fails to notice the bag of weed on your bed. Release is the feeling you get when you take a shit after holding it in for 2 hours."

Something to confess, Christian?

I'm the Hand of God. The one where he holds the spear 13:52, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Re: Wording
Hey, no problem as to my story; I'm busy lately, too. And as to the wording, I just didn't think "release" made any sense, I thought release is a verb, not whatever an emotion is. Maybe it's because I'm not too good with English, but I thought release didn't make any sense. Anyway, sorry about that, I'll keep it in mind next time.

--If you&#39;re depressed and want to die, I&#39;m here to help... you die (talk) 18:43, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Asking a Pro.
Good evening, Mr. Wallis. I noticed that on your page you have a very useful link called "Stories That Need Attention". I coppied it to my page (I hope I didn't do anything bad; I'm sorry if I did), but I think it's faulty. It displays differently than your own. Also, I would like to add link to "Uncategorized Pages". I humbly ask you to explain to me how to do this. Thanks in advance.

 The Star is falling  Greet the First Dawn!  19:31, April 20, 2017 (UTC)


 * Thanks for answering that one. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 10:58, April 25, 2017 (UTC)

:O
Oooh I understand, my mistake! I was trying to edit a few words because it sounded slightly out of place. Thanks! Luigifan100 18:31, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Hey I hope you like my story's I'm trying my very best to right one but no one cares to read it hope you like it

Jay padin

I hope you like my story I tried really really hard on it

Re: Threatening Behaviour
I'd just like to say I appreciate you sticking up for me. I just noted to Diex that I don't know what that mess even said because I don't plan to use Google Translate. Using Google Translate would involve me caring about what that schmuck had to say, so that's not happening Raidra (talk) 23:36, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

new site thing
Hey CW, thanks for the heads up! I emailed Jay (I think). Everything's been...well, going I guess. I'm hoping to put out a couple more books before the year's up. Hope things are going well with you.--Mikemacdee (talk) 03:25, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for the heads-up. I was trying to make it several layers deep, but I'll trynot to RP again.

skin taker (talk) 15:51, June 2, 2017 (UTC)Noctevoire

story
I'm pretty sure there already is a copy on the WW; unless someone deleted it

Tide16 (talk) 15:56, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

are you there?

Tide16 (talk) 02:21, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

woah woah, your first edit makes no sense. SUre, shotuins is done aloud. But you know what else? talking. There's a difference between talking loudly and shouting somehting with a an angry or surprised reaction.

Tide16 (talk) 14:11, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

also I'm on mac. IS there another sthign I can use besides word?

hmm how does thunder rolling sound. I'm putting this in another work, btu Ic an back to that short story too. Like

"I heard thunder roll through the clouds."

or how bout

"thunder roll through the sky. "

This kind of paints a pciture for me like a bowling ball rolling down a lane, making that same sort of sound. Or maybe a big semi-truck going over a bridge. Also just for me it brings me back to when I was a toddler, and my mother used to tell me that thunder ws the sound fo angels bowling.

Tide16 (talk) 05:55, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Oh what abotu crashing? that sounds cool.

"Thunder crashing trough the clouds,"

and

"Lightning dancing across the sky"

Tide16 (talk) 06:02, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

"The lightning danced across the sky like swords clashing." that sounds like ti belodng in a fantasy book. Yeah I wrote that one way back ind ecember, I've improved a lot by then. How bout this

The hyperelasitic lightning flashed across the hyperealstic sky in the hyperelasitc storm, while i was trying to get some hyperealistic sleep in hyperealistic bed.

Tide16 (talk) 15:00, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Need critisism
HDhunter360 (talk) 23:00, June 14, 2017 (UTC) HI ChristianWalls! I've heard of you from Squidmanescape. We've made a story together in the Writer's Workshop, and we need some criticism. Can you leave some comments for us please?

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:583775

-HD

No? you don't like my jokes. Damn

Tide16 (talk) 23:02, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

It will be a long time i'm about to be gone for two weeks

Tide16 (talk) 20:08, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

story
Can you please take a look at http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:585355?useskin=oasis and tell me what to improve on. Thanks. Skyrim90000 (talk) 06:22, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Hello its me lowisland123, I made  a creepypasta on the game San Andreas. It did not meet the stanards for whatever no idea why. But I lost the only copy of that creepypasta on the page and I want to put it in a docs. I'm not trying to get the creepypasta back on the wiki but I wish to have the page back or the pasta back so I can get it. I'm not even sure you will be able to help but I want to ask you. The creepypasta is gta san andreas alter something like that. I need it back can you please help me? If you can't then thats alright, I hope to hear from you cause I really think I can work on the creepypasta and try to get it popular on some other creepypasta wikia or wiki please help.


 * I'll get them a copy. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 01:34, June 21, 2017 (UTC)

RE
Oh, yeah. Slipped my mind. Sorry about that. Will do, sir! HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 15:24, June 21, 2017 (UTC)

story
While i'm working on the other one I tthink this is ready to be posted on the wikl. Would you take a look at http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:585138 and give me some feedback. Skyrim90000 (talk) 00:30, June 23, 2017 (UTC)

Thank you
Thank you for reviewing my story. I think I am going to look into getting Grammarly. So thank you have a good evening.--DraculaBathory (talk) 18:06, June 28, 2017 (UTC)

hey faggot stop taking down my spooky stories

Hay ChristianWallis I and my family can't see any problems with A walk through the endless maze can you please tell me what is wrong with it.

And did you see my comment please follow it and help me.

Hay ChristianWallis I and my family can't see any problems with A walk through the endless maze can you please tell me what is wrong with it.

And did you see my comment please follow it and help me.

The abnormal stick man (talk) 06:35, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

I am the creator of Adeline, I would like to ask what I did wrong so I can fix it. LizBritos1 (talk) 10:56, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Hello,

I'm messaging you because I would like to delete my account and all the stories with it. I've been told I need to talk to an admin for deleting stories. Do I go through you to delete my account as well or are there steps to to it directly? If you can help me, thank you very much.


 * Got it. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 16:52, August 3, 2017 (UTC)

Hello. I hope your day is going well. My story on writers workshop was reviewed by two people but they tended to say the exact opposite thing about how the ending should be. I thought to clarify what I should do and get a third opinion from someone like an admin and I saw you were online. I would greatly appreciate it if you could help me out.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:589762?useskin=oasis

Have a great day

--Icydice (talk) 13:01, August 7, 2017 (UTC)

Hey
Hey man,

How's the Garden coming along? Can't wait for the rewrite.

JohnathanNash (talk) 20:11, August 9, 2017 (UTC)

2nd Draft of "The Wendigo Gun" is complete for critique
The Wendigo Gun

Also I like your mention of the Mari Lwyd legend, sounds really terrifying...more so than any other Creepypasta monster. Are you going to use it with your story prompt idea...cause it sounds really unique and horrific?

--Mmpratt99 deviantart (talk) 01:53, August 23, 2017 (UTC)

Garden
Hey, I haven't been on either of those sites recently, but I did notice that it's up on the circle. I'll get to it shortly, hopefully.

JohnathanNash (talk) 17:36, August 31, 2017 (UTC)

The Rake
Hey, I’m Bryan Somerville, aka slosifl. The Rake is my story. I like that it’s often uncredited (except in monetized YouTube videos) but don’t like when it’s incorrectly credited. Leave the part up to the Something Awful forums but remove the reference the the user, whoever that is.

Thanks! Creepypasta is my jam.

RE: Collab Rules
Good point. Dropped it. Thanks for the heads up. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 08:49, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Vandal
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Puppeteer?diff=1292754&oldid=1054916

Minor vandalism by this guy. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 09:00, September 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * No problem. Your Friendly Neighborhood Toddler (talk) 11:46, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

New Wicker Saga Story
Hey, Christian! If/when you have the time, hoped you might check out my new Wicker Saga story Sins of the Father. Thanks in advance!

Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 13:24, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

Garden
Hey Christian,

Sorry it's taken me a month to get a review of your story. I didn't have much time and didn't want to get you a halfassed review. There could still be some things that I've missed, but we can keep editing it until it gets to a good point. Furthermore, your story is now back at the top of the circles message board and maybe someone else will get to it and you can get some more opinions. But, it's up there now and I hope you'll find some of my suggestions helpful.

Best,

JohnathanNash (talk) 15:49, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Goood Morning!
Sooooo, I may have come crawling back here....and I'm now saying hi to some peeps who seem to still be around and MAY remember me. So....yes....Hi! How you doing? Did you miss me? Did you see me new story in the workshop that I want more people to look at before I do a publish of it? :P

Nachtrae (talk) 07:33, September 25, 2017 (UTC)

Bah, excuses. It's less than 700 words. Do you expect novels of me or something?!

Take your time and don't let work murder you in your sleep!

Link to the workshop: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:593772

Nachtrae (talk) 08:41, September 25, 2017 (UTC)

ace reviewer
Hey man, it's been awhile, probably cos I don't really write horror anymore. I was remembering your gifts as a reviewer and analyst and I was wondering if you'd be down to write up amazon/goodreads reviews for my first two Winter Agent Juno novels if I were to gift you copies. If you're too busy, that's fair, but I'll send you digital or carbon copies if you agree, whichever you prefer. I also just joined the discord chat so hope to see you on there one o' these days.--Mikemacdee (talk) 10:37, September 28, 2017 (UTC)

re: book reviews
You sir are a saint and a gentleman. You didn't have to buy 'em, but I appreciate your support. If you want me to read and review something in return, I'm at your disposal after mid-November.--Mikemacdee (talk) 05:55, September 29, 2017 (UTC)

Smile... Creepypasta
I've been searching for this page: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Smile For about 4 hours. I finally found it and shared the link with another friend that has been looking for it, but they just contacted me and told me that you had taken it down? Wtf??? The reason doesn't make any since either. There is literally nothing wrong with that line. It's as if this community is targeting this creepypasta specifically and trying to make it disappear. What is with that? I want to learn about this creepypasta, so why are you and others removing the pages about this one?



--ORainKnightO (talk) 23:58, October 7, 2017 (UTC)ORainKnightO

Ganymede DOES smell
Thanks for the heads up and the review, Christian. I'll alter the description as you suggest: maybe I should just go bold and broadcast the premise like you say. Also I agree that Helios is slow to start, which is one of my own criticisms of the book: before the fourth edition it was REALLY slow, so I went back and overhauled it. Hopefully your version says Fourth Edition on the title page, otherwise something is rotten in the state of Amazon.

Kingdom of Famine is definitely the better of the two books I think, and doesn't spend as much time lollygagging as the first. At the very least the plot is more straghtforward, and there are more violent confrontations sprinkled throughout. I guess part of the trouble is knowing how to establish the setting in the first of a series. This november I'm finishing the third book for sure, and it's more of an action extravaganza with spy shit thrown in. Should be a fun read when it's done.

Where did you review it anyway? I don't see it anywhere yet.

EDIT: I added this to the description and I think it makes it punchier: "Enter Midgard, a nuclear winter dystopia ruled by a fascist matriarchy, where men are stored and treated like cattle, and several madwomen fight for supreme dominance. At the center of their power struggle is a young boy who misses his father, and an ex-commando searching for her last chance at redemption." --Mikemacdee (talk) 03:54, October 24, 2017 (UTC)

Genny-mead
Just found it and loved reading it. Thanks again for your support! It IS odd that amazon uk doesn't cross-post reviews on amazon us. I dunno what they're thinking with that setup. Hopefully it doesn't get you flagged or anything.--Mikemacdee (talk) 17:41, October 24, 2017 (UTC)

Hi,

Can I please have my story Synesthesia back to post in Writers Workshop?

Thanks,

The Riddle. (talk) 19:20, November 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * I dun did it. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:43, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

Another story
Hey man, I have another story in the writer's workshop that hasn't been reviewed. It's called 'I hope I never see that house again'. Can you please check it out?

HDhunter360 (talk) 16:03, November 21, 2017 (UTC)

Did Want To Join Crazypasta?
Yes/No

This Place Is Funny And Safe.

Crazypasta

Troll/spam pasta
The following user has removed my delete now template on two of his stories which are very clearly troll/spam

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:UsernameXD

Custom signature? pfft, as if I were that creative (talk) 16:41, January 4, 2018 (UTC)

My pleasure of course. Always lookin to help out.

Hey, I know you're probably busy as hell but I was wondering if you could do me a small favor by the way. I normally don't like asking for this, but could you look at my story All Too Human? It's 4,000 words and I consider it the best story I've written as of late. I was just wondering if you could maybe review it before it gets lost in the many pages of this wiki? I'd appreciate it a lot. You don't have to do it today of course, whenever you are open and it's convenient for you of course.

Hello again
Hi, I've uploaded the story as All Too Human, so that's why the workshop thread is down. As for the email, I copy and pasted it and nothing showed up.

--Custom signature? pfft, as if I were that creative (talk) 17:23, January 5, 2018 (UTC)

Alright, I typed in the direct email and sent it to you. I hope it shows up.

reviews and such
What up? Haven't talked in awhile (granted I've been away awhile and got a job in the meantime). I'm publishing a paranormal comedy called The Amityville Nuisance on valentine's day, set in the same universe as a radio play I'm writing with David King, front man for Midnight Marinara. Pretty exciting times all-around.

Did you ever get around to posting your other review? I'd love to hear your thoughts on Kingdom of Famine. Hope your own writing projects are coming along better than mine, since I've been in a bit of a slump apart from editing Amityville.--Mikemacdee (talk) 15:11, January 11, 2018 (UTC)

buggered out
Yeah mine's wiping me out a lot of the time too, although I still find enough energy for a few edits or some game design bs. It's a miracle I get any sleep at all.--Mikemacdee (talk) 03:45, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

Vandalism
Hi Christian. This user blanked the entire page of 1999

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:Dacreepymaster

If you look at the 1999 history you will see it there. I just undid his edit.

Custom signature? pfft, as if I were that creative (talk) 20:13, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

Hey Buddy
Hey Christian,

How's it going man? It's been a long time. Finally am starting to get back on my feet after a bunch of shit happened, and figured this would be a good place to start getting some inspiration to start writing again. Anyway, I saw something and I don't know if you're the best person to talk to about this, but I also wanted to say hi.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:602962

There isn't even a story on that page, and it's on the WW. Just figured someone should know about it.

Best,

JohnathanNash (talk) 03:55, January 17, 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for the response, this helps me a lot. There is one thing, however, that still bewilders me: how do you "show" a story, exactly? The Scotter (talk) 19:40, January 17, 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for the response and information. I will use your advice and try fixing my story's inconvenience. I will give you the edited version and let you review it, if you will. Thanks! The Scotter (talk) 20:02, January 22, 2018 (UTC)

Sif Smells too
Thanks man, it's great to know you loved KoF so much. I like it more than the first book overall, which seems like a common theme in a lot of book series anyway, so I'm not too worried about it. It really helped having everything set in one location with one faction of villains, too. The only downside was that I felt I had to give the gang members names and personalities so they stood out from one-another, and then after the next action scene i'd be like, "Shit, who's left? Do I need to invent more gang members again?!" That's where Jezebel came from: I killed off so many named gangsters I needed to add more, and then weave them into the story so they wouldn't come out of nowhere, and Jezzie sorta came to life and became one of the capos.

I'm trying to turn my Doom mods based on the books into a commercial project, and I'm still trying to finish the third book, Last of the Ghost Lions. I'd love to get your consultation on it since right now it's a mess. I'll keep you posted when it's done for sure. Thanks again.--Mikemacdee (talk) 07:30, January 23, 2018 (UTC)

editorial commission?
So I was debating whether to have the first act of my current novel released for free to entice people to buy the rest of it. Could I commission you to give it the treatment you're so good at and help me polish it up? It's a pretty self-contained flashback sequence, about 40 pages.--Mikemacdee (talk) 01:15, March 10, 2018 (UTC)

re: commission
Cool, but you'll have to send me your email again. I can't find it in my contacts.--Mikemacdee (talk) 03:01, March 11, 2018 (UTC)

email sent
Hope you like it, if nothing else!--Mikemacdee (talk) 03:25, March 12, 2018 (UTC)

Bhangarh Fort( Please review)
Hi Christian, I have made the suggested changes(to the best of my knowledge). Could you please take the time to review it? I'm not posting this to the writer's workshop since you have already reviewed it once. I hope this one makes it to the site :)

I’m Richard Daves, a second generation Indian American and an ex-internet celebrity.

I watched a ghost hunting show and it was so false that it inspired me to make a show just like it, but where we busted the haunting and didn’t just fake it.

All excited, I created a teaser on youtube where I spoke about how the Business of Scary is a billion-dollar industry and how they fool people by advertising their movies as true stories. I went on for another 10 minutes about how I plan to visit the most haunted places in the world and prove that ghosts don’t exist and it is all just bullshit.

I was overwhelmed by the response I got. People loved my idea, and even offered to sponsor my adventure, and thus started my reign as an internet celebrity. It lasted a good 5 years. I won’t go into the specifics of how I got my crew, as that would digress me from what I want to tell you.

We had successfully released more than 400 episodes on youtube, and never once did we encounter anything remotely supernatural. Though I’ll be honest, we did include jump scares to keep the audience entertained. Don’t judge me, I was now part of show biz after all.

I had returned from Connecticut after filming an episode, and had fixed myself a nice lunch. I was just about to bite into my club sandwich when I heard a soft knock on the door. I was too hungry and too tired and was going to dismiss it when the knock turned into banging. So much so that I thought the door would come off its hinges. I didn’t open the door right away, and peeped through the key hole. I saw a woman’s silhouette just for a split second. I opened the door to catch hold of her, but there was no one there. I even looked around but didn’t see anyone.

I dismissed it as some kid playing a prank but then my gaze fell on a neatly folded red head scarf lying at the door entrance. I picked it up to investigate. The fabric was smooth and it had detailed gold embroidery on it and looked quite expensive. I undid the scarf and a piece of paper fell out of it, on which were the words ‘भानगढ़’. I knew it was Hindi, but I didn’t know to read in Hindi that well. I used Google Translate and it translated to Bhangarh.

I understood Hindi, and could manage to speak broken Hindi, but I didn’t know what Bhangarh meant. Again Google came to my rescue. Bhangarh is a village situated in India. It is famous for its historical ruins, and Bhangarh Fort is considered as one of India's most haunted locations. This brought a smile on my face. I had shot all my episodes in America till now, and had been planning an overseas adventure for a long time. This was the perfect location. I forgot all about how fatigued and famished I was and made some calls.

Within 2 weeks of getting that piece of paper, Mike (my cameraman) and I set out on our journey to India. I had been to India a couple of times with my family, but had never been to Jaipur. After a really long and tiring flight we landed in Jaipur in the evening and slept 16 hours straight. We set out to Bhangarh Fort the very next day.

We had hired a car to drive us around, and Bhangarh Fort was a 2 hours’ drive from our hotel. The plan was to reach Bhangarh at around 4pm and stay back surreptitiously till it was dark and then begin rolling the cameras. I say surreptitiously as no one was supposed to stay in the precincts of the fort at night, per a notice board put up by the Archaeological Survey of India at the entrance. There are guards who come looking for adventure seekers and force them out before dusk. But since the fort is huge, it’s not too difficult to hide from them.

Our driver Ravi told us a couple of spooky stories about Bhangarh Fort on the way. He left us outside the Ajmeri entrance of the Fort (there are 3 more), and promised to pick us up at dawn the next day.

On entering the fort, we saw many temples and palaces, but they were not in the best of condition. We explored the place for a bit and decided on a hiding spot in the fort just before dusk. No one came to check. It seemed like the difficult part was over, now it was simply rolling the camera and recording. I was so, so wrong. If only I knew of the horrors that awaited us.

We were in one of the many rooms of the fort when it became pitch dark. I knew it was a full moon, so it shouldn’t have been that dark. Even Mike was thinking the same thing.

Mike sounded scared, “Rick man, I have never seen a night so pitch black, I can’t see a thing. This doesn’t seem right.”

I tried to sound reassuring.

“Relax Mike, I’ve been to India before, and this is how it is here”. I didn’t sound too convincing, but Mike didn’t argue.

“Do you realize that it’s not just dark but there is literally no sound, either of the wind or the crickets or anything for that matter?” Mike sounded irritated this time. “Or are you going to say that in India wind is mute and there are no crickets and insects?”

I had no reply to his question. He was right. It was eerily quiet and unsettling. It felt like the temperature had dropped almost by 50 degrees.

“Rick, could you at least switch on the fucking flashlights? It feels really creepy in here.” Mike shouted.

I couldn’t agree more, even I was spooked. This place was giving me the creeps. I fumbled the flashlight out of my coat pocket, and pointed it in front of me and clicked. The light fell on something that was mere 2 feet away from us. It was a two-headed huge and savage rabid dog, rather a beast. His teeth, eerily incandescent, emitted a strange purple glow and were as sharp as a fine diamond sword. What fur there had been was tufty and thin, providing no protection to the elements at all. It was looking at us with red hate filled eyes. Both me and Mike were paralyzed with fear.

Our trance was broken by its angry growl. We regained our senses and bolted out of the room. I could literally feel the beast’s breath on my neck. We must have run for a good 10 minutes before we sensed we had lost him. We were out of breath and panting heavily.

After gaining his breath Mike said,“Fuck dude, this is not happening. I can’t do this. Let’s get out of here. This place is indeed haunted.”

“Just because you are chased by a dog doesn’t mean the place is haunted. Stop being a sissy.” I snapped. I was not going to give up so easily and ruin everything I had built in the last 5 years because of some rabid dog.

Mike sounded angry, “Fuck man, you are crazy. How many 2 headed dogs have you seen in your life, huh? Did you see the teeth on that thing? Did it look normal to you? I don’t care if you want to stay, but I sure don’t. I’m calling Ravi and asking him to pick me up. You can fly solo on this one.”

Before I could argue with Mike, we heard an ear-splitting scream. It sounded inhumane. Before we could react, it came again, and this time it was louder and closer than before. I didn’t need any convincing this time.

“Mike, let’s get out of this godforsaken damned place. Whatever cursed creature is making that noise would be upon us in no time, let’s try to get to the main entrance and then call Ravi.”

I didn’t get any reply from Mike, so I shone the flashlight on him, and what I saw filled me with dread.

Mike’s mouth was sewn shut with what looked like human hair, and he didn’t need words to describe the horror and pain he felt as it was evident in his eyes. Towering above Mike, as tall as a double decker bus, was a creature straight from the very depths of hell, an abomination. The leathery skinned creature was the most hideous being one could lay their eyes on. It began to emit a series of squeaks and clicks. It reeked of raw sewage and rotten fish. I will never forget the look in its evil eyes, it was grinning from ear to ear and it was the ugliest grin.

It was holding Mike with its clawed hands. Drool dripped from its mouth, and phlegm oozed from its nostrils. It didn’t need an expert to guess that Mike was the monster’s meal.

I am not a coward, but I’m not stupid either. I knew I couldn’t save Mike. Just when the devil was about to take its first bite of my friend I made a dash. I could never forget Mike’s dying screams, sometimes I wish I could though. I ran as fast as my legs could carry me. My heart and lungs were burning and after running for what felt like forever, I fell face forward on the cold floor. I didn’t try to get up, I couldn’t even if I wanted to. I had run so far, still I was in the fort and nowhere near the exit. It seemed like a loop I could never get out of.

I cried like I had never cried before. I felt so helpless, I had just left my friend to die in the worst manner possible. I was responsible for his death. All this happened because I didn’t believe in the supernatural, and now the supernatural came to bite me. This was so ironic. Despite the circumstances, I started laughing and then crying and then wailing.

This went on for what felt like hours. I finally mustered the energy to stand up on my feet. I had lost the flashlight while trying to escape, but still had my mobile phone on me. With renewed hope I unlocked it to call Ravi, but fate was not on my side. There was no network. I tried moving around to get at least a single bar, but in vain.

I checked the time on my phone. It was 3am, that meant I had to survive 3 more hours before the sun came up, and this nightmare could end. This filled me with new hope. I tried to access my surroundings to see if I can spot a window or another possible exit. There were none, this was a torture chamber. There were chains, shackles, manacles and whips of all sort. There was a sword hanging on the wall opposite me, and it had fresh blood on it. I had seen enough to know better to run for my dear life, when something tugged at my ankle.

I looked down and from the light emitting from my phone saw a partially decomposed being, which could have been a man once. He was cut in half, the part from the waist down was missing. His eyeballs were hanging out of his eye sockets. The room smelled like rotten meat. The man was dragging himself towards me while make gurgling noises. It sounded like ‘Bachao Baabu’, which is Hindi for ‘Save me Sir.

I kicked at him and bolted out of there. I ran for a while before I tumbled down a flight of stairs. I heard my bone crunch, and an immense pain shot up from my left-hand to my shoulder. I clutched my hand and cried out.

Just then my cell phone rang. Despite the pain I got excited, what if it was Ravi checking up on us? I reached out for my phone to answer the call. Mike’s name was flashing on the screen.

With shivering hands, I answered it. It was Mike screaming, which was followed by the inhumane screams. I threw my phone away and it hit something hard and broke. I cried again and wished for this to be over. I had lost both my cell phone and my hope of escaping alive from this place. I decided to just stay where I was and await my impending doom. There was no point fighting now.

I must have been still for what seemed like hours when I heard something in the distance. It sounded like anklet bells. I knew this sound as my grandmother too wore those. I briefly decided to run, but what good would that have done in the dark? I would fall again and suffer. Instead, I closed my eyes and waited.

Nothing happened. I finally opened my eyes and standing in front of me was the most beautiful woman I had ever laid eyes on. She was dressed like an Indian bride, in a bright red saree. The material of the saree was the same as that of the scarf I had found left on my door the other day (I realised this much later though). She had a lot of jewellery on her, and smelled like jasmine. She was holding an oil lamp in her hand and was smiling at me. After all that happened, I should have suspected that the devil was playing tricks on me. But she didn’t scare me at all. She was like an oasis in the desert, an angel. I forgot all my woes, and smiled back at her.

All exchanges between me and the bride (I never learned her name) happened in Hindi, but I’ll keep it simple and mention it in English.

“What are you doing here? Are you hurt?”. She sounded concerned.

“Yes, I think I broke my arm.”  I replied.

“Do you want to get out of here?” She asked.

“Hell yes, who wouldn’t?” I sounded excited. She chuckled at this.

“Ok, follow me, I will help you escape. But no matter what, don’t look behind you.” She said.

I obliged.

While we were walking I heard my name being called many times, one time it was my mother, another time it was Mike calling out for help, pleading me to save him. But when I didn’t respond he cursed me and called me a back stabber and a coward. I was so tempted to turn around and explain myself to Mike, but I knew he was dead. It was the devil trying to trap me.

We must have walked for about 20 minutes in silence when I could finally see the exit. I was so thrilled. The bride looked at me and said in a serious tone.

“Remember this Rick, he wants a life for a life. Because I’m setting you free, he will come to get your first born.”

It didn’t make much sense to me then, all I could see was my freedom from this nightmare. I could see the first rays of the sun. I turned around to thank Bride, but she was nowhere to be seen.

The next couple of days were a blur. Police never found Mike’s body or the camera. The case was closed as a missing person. I obviously couldn’t tell the truth, no one would have believed me anyway. I cut all ties with my crew and deleted all the videos from youtube.

I never forgot about what happened to me or Mike. I still carry that guilt, but life moves on. It’s been 4 years since that incident, and since then I have found a decent paying job, found love and got married. Life got back on track.

But today my wife told me she is pregnant, and I’m very scared for my child.

MonicaMishra0607 (talk) 13:40, March 13, 2018 (UTC) MonicaMishra0607

Posting story for feedback on writer's workshop too
I am also posting the story to writer's workshop to get early feedback. Thanks

MonicaMishra0607 (talk) 13:41, March 13, 2018 (UTC)

expanded version
Hi Chris. I figured out one thing that I didn't like about the section I sent you, and it's that it summarizes too much. I thought it'd be more interesting to show a lot of that stuff happening rather than explaining it in exposition, so I've been expanding the first act of the book to flesh things out better. Would you like to wait 'til I finish that version and send it to you? Or stick with the short version I sent?--Mikemacdee (talk) 10:08, March 19, 2018 (UTC)

re: expanded version
You can still help me out if you have feedback already for the short version. I'm trying to figure out how to flesh it all out, and I'm kind of in a rut. What, if anything, did you want to know more about given what you've read? Relationships or concepts you want explored and why, etc.--Mikemacdee (talk) 01:15, March 23, 2018 (UTC)

extended version sent
it's in your inbox now. I'm hoping some of the issues you mentioned were already addressed since i spent a little time introducing the two named males beforehand. looking forward to any futher notes you have! --Mikemacdee (talk) 10:56, March 23, 2018 (UTC)

Hi sorry to bother you but it seems as you have removed my creepypasta Dead Law. I have posted it to the writers workshop and would like you to tell me what was wrong with it so I can put it back up. Thank you in advance.

Rexile+Apocalipsisgamerfoxy (talk) 23:08, March 28, 2018 (UTC)Rexile+Apocalipsisgamerfoxy

Thank you
Thank you for deleting my creepypasta,like i now think of it and it included a version of a character i don't want to be noticed to the public at all,thank you,no sarcasm in this.

Randomdude67 (talk) 15:01, April 17, 2018 (UTC)Randomdude67

A Figure In the Fog Narration
Hey dude you’re just the most recently active admin I saw. Any chance you could add the new narration of A Figure In the Fog I just put on my author page to the story page? It’s locked as a former PotM winner. Thanks in advance!

Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 20:42, April 26, 2018 (UTC)

ChristianWallis Hello, Mr.Sir. Sorry, about abusing unwritten site rules, Sir,Mr, Youra sincerely, Mr. Unwritten, Sir,mr,sir Mdme.Sir,Dcsd

I'm Sorry and, also, some questions
Sorry about my shenanigans before, I now have a better understanding of the rules and will adhere to them more strictly.

I would like to ask a question though, I'm meaning to start contributing to the wiki, and would like to make a blog post just saying hi to everyone and introducing myself... would that be allowed? I wanted to keep it simple just for that sake, talking about some of my interests and what I like to see on a creepypasta and so on, so would that be ok? Could I also comment on some of the recent books i've been reading, leave some recommendations?

Also, I would like to delete the stuff I posted before, and I don't know how to do it, could you give me some instructions?

Again, sorry for my recent behavior, it won't happen again. I'll read the rules again to be safe. It's nice to know you all take the wiki very seriously.

EmperorinYellow (talk) 19:43, April 30, 2018 (UTC)EmperorinYellow

Producing Narrations of Hallowroots
Hello, Mr. Wallis. I've made my first contribution to the Wiki. An Alert from the Future. Hope it is up to wiki standards and would like some feedback about it, if possible. I want to improve my writing skills and help grow the wiki as best as I can.

Regards EmperorinYellow (talk) 17:02, May 9, 2018 (UTC)

Hey Christan, Why do you delete my stories. My story was good for the one hour I spent on it. Why do you keep deleting my stories?? Please reply on my message board.

KanoKreator (talk) 15:39, May 10, 2018 (UTC)KanoKreator

Hello!

I and a team of friends/narrators are trying to do a fully voice acted rendition of Hallowroots. It's primarily going up on my podcast but I'll be posting it on my YouTube page as well. Here's the first episode of said podcast as it was released this morning! I hope I did your intro and Vernian Marble some justice. Also voiced Carl in Moonlight Inn. Hope you enjoy! https://soundcloud.com/cheshirehat/twisted-teatime-207-hallowroots-part-one

Regards,

The Mad Catter

Hey Christan,

Remember me? Well, I just am writing to say im sorry for what I did. I was just trying to complete a dare by my friends to find a story copy it and upload it here. You are just trying to make me a better person on this wiki and I respect that. Well I just want to leave on a happy note, Come check out my new story that I will write!

KanoKreator (talk) 15:17, May 14, 2018 (UTC)KanoKreator

You know how roblox cant be scary and its a blacklisted subject on this wiki? Well the retards at the roblox creepypasta wikia think it is if you put effort into it and im all against that bs.

TheAmazingTractor (talk) 11:09, May 30, 2018 (UTC)

I am Back my dude
Hello this is my new account so yeah I am back and I hope you see this message and I hope you know that I will countinue to spam you and others this will not stop after this account is banned I will create more with different name I am not TRIGGERED I am just having some fun so watch out on some stories GG M8.

Hecca Bad Boi 2 (talk) 16:24, May 30, 2018 (UTC)Hecca Bad Boi 2

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Hope to see you soon and good bye my friends XD

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Chrsitian Wallis,

Mah boi, first off, when the hell did you warn me before? I didn't have any way of knowing to stop "harassing" people. Speaking of which, am I not allowed to state  an opinion and share it with those who disagree? I do admit that I was very harsh, but I'm a very harsh person when it comes to Creepypasta (and horror in general, I'm very passionate about it). However my harsh attitude comes from the fact that some people on here have the dumbest mindsets-- but only some people-- as there people who think that some Creepypastas are real stories. Also, I didn't know those comments were very old because I didn't see (or more acurately I didn't check) to see a date for when the comment was written. I don't want to seem like an arrogant asshole, because really, I'm not that kind of person. My apologies, I'll (try to) be less harsh in the future... But, you can't stop me from being critical, as there will instances where there's a bad story and I want to help the author grow, and we don't want another JCTheHyena from them thinking their bas story is a masterpiece.

Cheers!

CreepyGojiToasta (talk) 20:36, June 4, 2018 (UTC)CreepyGojiToasta

am not here to hate am just saying there are some people that liked my story, please just don't go deleting peoples precious time and actually tell them what they can improve on

Nightmare Fuel Page 11
There is a Nightmare Fuel Page 11 which doesn't have a link on the main page. Can you please fix this?

Thank you, Squidmanescape (talk) 00:05, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

Story
Why did you take down my story?

User:SickFizz

Thank You
I just wanted to express my appreciation for your swift anti-troll action.

J. Deschene (talk) 18:48, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

May i can do an page, for creepypasta there is an creepypasta since 2014 about an mmporg game 'dofus'

Christian Willis,

Thank you very much for fixing the error with the naming in my story! I really appreciate it.

DrBobSmith (talk) 08:33, June 22, 2018 (UTC)

I Am Somewhat Confused
You highlighted a page which I had not edited correctly. I had inserted commas; I now understand that I shouldn't do that. However, I also changed a comma into a period and changed some things in the past tense into the past perfect tense. Are these also undesirable edits?

Unsure,

Squidmanescape (talk) 14:32, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

Question Regarding the Community Tab
What do the stories marked under the 'Expand These Stories' header actually need? I want to contribute, but I also want to make sure I don't goof it up or do something that could cause problems.

TheWizardOfTheWoods (talk) 02:06, July 4, 2018 (UTC)

Ignore this. Question answered.

TheWizardOfTheWoods (talk) 06:49, July 5, 2018 (UTC)

Re:
Thanks Christian. Hopefully I still have a gif or two that won't violate the ToU (No promises).

" We could have been so good together ,  we could have lived this dance forever ..."  19:54, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Request for a Review
Can you please review Lies and Walls and Beer?

Thank you, Squidmanescape (talk) 22:35, July 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re: I Have No Shame!
Yeah, I was actually in the middle of writing a small blurb to tell them the errors I remembered in their story which likely would result in the appeal being deleted when you beat me to it. I'm doing alright, just have a little free time in-between class so I thought I'd see what's going on with the site. How's life on your end? EmpyrealInvective (talk) 16:42, July 25, 2018 (UTC)


 * I understand those feels. I get outta class most days and have little time to divide between studying, eating, sleeping, and come up a bit short on writing myself. I'm hoping to have something by October to contribute to the wiki that's given me so much, but I don't know if I will. I hope I'l have something in October, but I also realize that there are other users who'll be more than able to pick up the slack and submit quality content that's better than what I could have come up with. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:27, July 26, 2018 (UTC)

Sarah O'Bannon
Hi ChristianWallis,

can you please add the German and Spanish interlanguage links to the article Sarah O'Bannon? I would do it myself, but the article is protected. The links look like this:

Sarah O'Bannon Sarah O'Bannon

Greetings, --http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j64/mtr9110326641xrqw/5216941064440zdfll_zpsey5gm81j.png Klappi (  D  |  B  ) 17:32, July 31, 2018 (UTC)


 * Hi ChristianWallis,


 * German Link: http://de.creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Sarah_O%27Bannon
 * Spanish Link: http://es.creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Sarah_O%27Bannon


 * Greetings, --http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j64/mtr9110326641xrqw/5216941064440zdfll_zpsey5gm81j.png Klappi (  D  |  B  ) 13:40, August 1, 2018 (UTC)

Testes
I'm new to the wiki

Hi, I'm new to this website because I was inspired by alot of creepypasta readings. I've never used this website before and I'm not sure if I published my first story properly. I published it before I saw your message and I'm not entirely sure if what I did was right. I'm sorry.L.W.Wanderer (talk) 19:16, August 7, 2018 (UTC)

Hi, this is Lost. About yesterday's story, I had a re-read of it and I noticed how poorly it was written and after some more reflecting I don't think the story fits as a creepypasta, I'll have to re-evaluate the actual story if I want it as such. Anyway since then I have started writing a new story which I think fits being a creepypasta much better. I'm still not entirely sure how to format it but I do think it's better I have the draft saved  on a document instead of accidently uploading it. It is, however, turning out much longer than I expected it to be but I think it is sounding better than yesterday's disaster. I will admit I was just doing it in the spur of the moment and everything was just rushed. When the story is done I'll send it to you? For feedback? If that's okay. It will be very long though so if you are intresed or have the time it would mean the world to me but if not I completely understand, it is long and I havn't made the best impression with my first story.

Many thanksL.W.Wanderer (talk) 13:56, August 8, 2018 (UTC)

Comment
Thanks bud. I was hoping I didn't come off as mean spirited, but I had to let out my frustration for once. LOL KillaHawke1 (talk) 12:06, August 9, 2018 (UTC)

Request for a Review
Can you please delete Lies and Walls and Beer and Bone Dave Isn't What He Seems To Be?

Also, thank you for your review. I was able to read it.

Thank you, Squidmanescape (talk) 20:05, August 14, 2018 (UTC)