Talk:The Nice Guy/@comment-24304936-20140826192649

This story could've been done a lot better. What boss tries to "break" an employee whose blazing a trail of productivity? Someone higher up would've taken notice of the manager's many inept characteristics and he would've been fired within days.

The ending, although having a decent (if not predictable) twist, I saw coming from a mile away. You should've egged us on more with Kirby not possibly being the being, monster, or whatever he is.

4.5/10