Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24841732-20141010150639/@comment-25439157-20141011082928

I like the fact that it told matter of factly. I like the fact that the tiny random details gave been cut out because too much description can ruin a story. Sure, anything sounds amazing when written well and described vividly but this story pulls it off, so why not? The bit in the middle sounds a little like the story is only leading up to a very boring ending, while the ending is actually rather good. So you wouldn't want anyone giving up on a story because it's too long, would you?

That's my argument, but it's the writer's decision. Ehh...