Talk:Blueberries/@comment-26045820-20150213153132

Ah insanity, it is to the creepypasta what non euclidian geometry is to Lovecraftian horror. It's the glue that holds together the "Weird" category, and that's why I love it so much.

This pasta is really strange but it is very cohesive as the reader always seems to know whats going on. Though I do wonder why the guard wasn't doing anything the entire time after he took the hammer away. Probably just awestruck that he's watching a man eat a desk while muttering to himself how much he loves blueberries.

I also like the little attention to detail that they give about the pain he is enduring. Adjectives like "sour blood" really bring a very tactile feeling and give the pasta...texture, for lack of a better word.

9/10