Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-2240864-20140612220044/@comment-24344071-20140613045339

I love the original! I think it is creative, but if there were to be changes. I agree with what everyone is saying that their needs to be more of a background to the story. I think that instead of taking out the "go to sleep" that we should add it to like a memory or something that made him go crazy. I think that they should have made it to were he witnessed the murder of his family or something along those lines that made him have a mental breakdown.