Talk:A Room/@comment-25773844-20141128211715

10/10, I sincerely enjoyed this! Minus some grammatical errors it was very well written. Although I would've enjoyed a more clearly defined conclusion & could have done without the "creatures". The one individual creature would've been fine like if John had imagined it, that would have been totally understandable, enjoyable even, but I don't think this story needed a paranormal twist. I personally would have enjoyed it better without one. Even though more of an explanation would have been great this story was so well written & captivating I found myself caring more about what was happening to John in the moment than his past or all the how's & why's, which is an amazing & rare experience for me as a reader. I sincerely loved this story, very well done!