Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26054278-20150307173939/@comment-26054278-20150308163449

Spoopy Christe wrote: Hi! I enjoyed your story, I only noticed one thing.

In the first introduction of Darunu you phrased him as Daburu? I'm not sure if that was intentional or not. You also phrase him as Daruru. Ah, so there is where I made my mistake. I wanted to go with Daburu because it has an actual meaning ("double") when you look it up. However, it was about 12 in the morning when I was writing it, so I kind of messed up the name and never noticed my mistake. Thank you, and I will fix that when I post it.