Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-35545940-20180510160005/@comment-35545940-20180518190741

Resdraon wrote: You're missing a lot of filler words that actually make the sentences feel whole. This is a story, not a text message. This honestly seems like a jumbled up mess, and while I get the idea of what's going on, none of it makes sense. The grammar is also beyond horrible. Yes, I understand problems. The grammar is horrible, because, I don't know English very well)))