Talk:The Exodus of Krähendorf Felsen/@comment-34090365-20180604213520

This is the first part of a trilogy, and it isn't my first pasta, but it's my first on the wiki! I once wrote one on Deviantart, but I deleted it because I felt it didn't meet my own standards. But hey, if you got some criticism, let me know! Oh, and you guys can be as harsh as you want! Take care ya blokes!