Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-4665292-20180608193616/@comment-5733573-20180609012317

DrBobSmith wrote: The idea that there was a rapist going after his daughter and that he didn't arrange for physical security to prevent it. My first thought was that if anybody tried to rape my daughter when she was in that age range the dogs would tear them apart. Three big police/military type dogs.

Then when it was him being a physical rapist that child protective services hadn't put him away years before.

Some parts confused me. It sounds like either he didn't know he was a rapist or wouldn't admit it to himself.

The story became conflicting. It felt like some teen aged girl with daddy anger issues wrote it. My wife was sexually abused as a child and the way she reacts and refers to it is completely different.

A minor moment of weird was where he killed himself. If he was that kind of jerk he would run, blaming others. Never his fault. She did it. All her fault. You know the type. I think you completely misinterpreted the story. The daughter is being repeatedly assaulted by an actual literal demon that he can't see until the moment when he percieves the demon to be in the room with them. This, it's revealed, is the same demon who fathered the girl, his "daughter," through his wife. Hence, she's not his own daughter, but the daughter of the demon.