Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20160112194657/@comment-26326346-20160113022806

Thank you for all the corrections! I'll get right on them, I really appreciate it! I can never remember with the quotes, so I try to do half of it commas and half periods, that way it's at least half right XD Not the way grammar should be handled, I know. Hopefully, I am set straight on that for good.

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it, I wasn't sure how the story would flow when broken into days like that. Speaking of Batman comics, Clyde killing with the pry bar was inspired by the Joker beating Jason Todd (the second Robin) with one XD

I'm not familiar with the Batman comic or character that you described though. I got the idea of him getting shot in the gas station and in the head from the film 'Regarding Henry', in this case the bullet had a completely different effect and made for a very different story (at least as far as I know, never got to finish watching that movie. I need to go back and do that one of these days).

Thank you for all your help!