Talk:A Demon Cured My Son of Autism/@comment-5733573-20180518185602

This was great. The only thing I would say I missed is more time with the son's recovery. I would have liked to see that his soul was gone instead of being told. But even without that, this is a really well-concieved and nicely done pasta. The demon figure is very interesting. I like that he seems kind of theatrical in a way. Nice work!