Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20181013052639/@comment-34823985-20181020080846

Thank you so much DrBobSmith for your help. It was only my intention to clarify Ricky's age and amend Mr. Withers death scene, but the story got away from me. That's actually quite common for me. I'm sorry the ending isn't to your liking. Thank you for your multiple readings of the longest story I've presented to the site so far. :)