Talk:Channel 4 Interruption/@comment-29507836-20161018111759

I honestly think that this is a nice pasta. Not great, but not bad either.

I think that radio or tv interruptions or hijacks or whatever you want to call it are pretty basic, and you stayed basic, which was something I did not like. You described it well, and I can't really judge you on the character development with such a short pasta. However, the scare factor is a little bit low in my opinion, too low. I also think that you could've explained more of what happened. Instead, you left readers in the dark without enough information to actuall use to find out what really happened and why it did happen.

I rate this an ok 5/10.