Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20150725025222/@comment-26723520-20150725033148

Well it was average for a story but once they connected the whole "Mama had a baby and its head popped off" thing to the kid's mother having a baby recently the ending got pretty predictable that the babies head was gone/detached.

Also Owen should have been introduced as his friend or something just weird when you throw Owen at us without even stating he's a friend or such. Also wish the dandelion thing went into more detail then just using the reference to that saying.