Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181020224417/@comment-9041013-20181021121308

Banned In CP wrote: Ah, the unseen showdown: Mike Erikson VS The Nameless! Guess at how this battle between mortal and demon(?) turns out!

I'm not entirely sure what you meant by the random past perspective, though. Do I need to add more closure to the hospital scene, or perhaps something to leave the 2013 subplot on a cliifhanger? And yeah, Pabs' purpose is pretty much just to act as comic relief, while humor still lasts for them, so her antics will be pretty neglected.

And I do like the suggestion about making Mike indirectly referencing the Wyrm. It would definitely make a later reference more... dramatic.

Oh and the esxposition on Jan's background during the hospital scenes is mostly to fill in stuff that's happened after she was admitted, as Volume II will be up until that point Well, i meant that ypu started by giving out the main plot only during the interview, but now it just pops up