Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20180410202237/@comment-33904527-20180410221232

Kolpik wrote: I would have congratulated you on an interesting story if you hadn't posted the comment telling me about, "The Stanley Parable." I looked it up and found the dream/Mariella ending. Your story doesn't seem to be based on this ending. It is this ending.

You changed Stanley, and Mariella's names. You changed around some of the details slightly... very slightly. This seems like plagiarism to me. 

GAME OVER! If you're saying that I should have made this less like the original, I'd agree with you. Looking back, I saw that ending and thought that it would make a good scary story, but my intent wasn't just to blatantly rip it off. If I were to go back and write this again, I'd take the concept and mess around with it, rather than write about the events that took place in the game.