Talk:Girl of My Dreams/@comment-6684440-20140213035233

Woah...Where to begin...Well first off, I was so impressed with the grammar, I saw no mistakes at all! This was a pretty long but it was VERY GOOD. This has to be one of the best creepypastas I've ever read, I really got to give you credit on this one since it's so endulging, original, detailed, and life-like. I also wonder weather losing everyone I love would be worth eternal true love.

Punctuation/spelling/grammar   10/10

Overall creepiness                    20/10

Detail                                        10/10

Total:                                        40/30

Best I've ever read =^-^=

-Astral