Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24918301-20140508180623/@comment-24918301-20140516120136

I like the critisism you gave here, and i agree to nearly everything

1. My overall grammar could be better, but i wrote this story overnight, the "it's and its" thing is something i know, but i wanted to write this story during the night, and load it up ON the same night, meh.

2. sexaholics is something the "student" said, not me. -I- know that sexaholic is a word.

3. censoring cursing is not a form of "not giving a SHIT". It's a form of style. As i said, i'm a storywriter, not a creepypasta writer, i did this one for a great friend of mine, and he loved it. (ah yes, and that "great friend" of mine is 13, so another reason to censor the bad language.

Overall, thank you for your review. I do think i'll keep it to regular stories 'w'