Talk:Nonexistence/@comment-44837739-20200114074105

(My critiques are my thoughts on the story, and not an attack on the authors that make them.)

Eh?

You know, any writer can touch upon something real world and personal, it's what you do with it, that makes it worth while? This - isn't worth the read. Not much of a story, but a spooky shower thought, mixed with a scenario that could've or rather should've been expounded on, to be qualified as such. I'm not saying that this premise would be remarkable, it would kill the gravity of the death concept, but it would qualify as a story. Does that make it worth, the concept, though? Should it take another route? I'm already putting in too much thought, and words, more than the writer.