Talk:Miss Mosaic/@comment-27553469-20160208161752

This story was a complete mental sore to read. From the straining of the practical importance that the show contained no "gore and grotesque demeanors", and deliberately braking that line when Miss Mosaic transformed into a creature with an overall decent horror creature. However, the atmosphere wasn't there--especially when you were trying to captivate something more than just a "regular old lost episode" feeling.

Not only that, but the fact that kids over the age of eight or nine would watch a show like this is completely redundant. That's like saying a seventeen year old should reside in a daycare for the time that their parents are away at the grocery store. The "young children" should be around the ages 3-9 at most to make it much more realistic.

I understand the core concept you were trying to achieve, but it just didn't work out with the arousal of poor details jumbled into everything. Especially the blunder of overriding the one thing you claimed wouldn't make this a generic lost episode pasta.

Pretty unimpressed, but as I mentioned, you had a nice concept. 2.5/10.