Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-1306136-20140418162555/@comment-24841494-20140418182922

Great, once again. Although, I am a little disapointted that you get the scene from the creatures POV. A monster is much more terrifing if you don't know its true intentions. The ending was fine, however. It offers some closure, and cemments the fact that this entity is exactly "evil" and is just doing its job. I would consult someone else for help with grammar, however. I'm not the best myself.