Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26505384-20150713120713

"... for the Demon Lord himself has cursed this eye, cursed to forevermore wander in lies."

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I jerked awake from my nightmare, drenched in cold sweat. Ever since a few days ago, I'd always be greeted with the same horrific nightmare whenever I closed my eyes to rest. I don't know why, but it really is creeping me out. Each time the nightmare would start with me being trapped in a room devoid of any light, and after a short while, a round shape would slowly advance from the shadows until it came into my line of vision. It's only then can I confirm the round shape's true identity: a glowing, bloody red eye with reddish-black veins seemingly engraved on it.

I would then be captivated by the eye's malicious glare, frozen to the spot. It gave me a chilling feeling when that happened, making it seem like the eye could gaze into my very soul and uncover all my deepest, darkest secrets. But really, that wasn't the most creepy part, because the true fright kicked in near the end when distorted voices could be heard in the background, chanting in a demonic-sounding language I couldn't comprehend.

It was downright creepy, and because of these nightmares, I was soon diagnosed with very intense paranoia and insomnia. Seriously, it's not normal for a 13-year old like me to already have such a shattered mental state... is it?

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That's all of the story for now. I wanted to see if majority of you liked it before continuing, so please say in the comments if it's good so far. 