Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26364774-20150502211753/@comment-25226524-20150503210453

This is a great look into the damaging effects of guilt. The slow trip into insanity was very well developed and very suspenseful. I love the use of the all-seeing eye manifesting itself everywhere she turned as a symbol of how we can't escape our actions and the guilt caused by them. I started to just read the first few paragraphs so I could tell you if it looked good enough to post, but I felt compelled to read on. This is a great piece and is definitely ready to post. I hope to see more from you in the future. You've got talent.