Talk:Nezhyl/@comment-26414993-20150701164816

There's a fine line between literature, and Disney channel worthy twilight nonsense. When you make repeated comments about a characters physical appearance without relationship to plot, it gives you a nice tug in the largely undesirable teenage fanfiction side.

Furthermore, were I to write about a place, I would at least look up where it is located. Chernobyl is certainly not in Russia, therefore the guide being Russian just comes off as wildly ignorant.

Otherwise, the story is quite cliche, the ending was a beacon seen from a mile away. I won't rate it, as I don't think it falls into a category where rating it would be fair to better writers on this site.