Talk:Repetitive Dreams/@comment-27553469-20160229185035

There were only a few errors with this story. First, there was the matter of fact you'd dubbed a fourteen-year-old young teen a "little boy". This is inaccurate description--unless there was a detail that elaborated the matter of fact that the boy was short, then it seems like this detail was rather confusing with the actual age.

There were only a minor set of errors, and I think it'd be safe to let it slide under the rug. The story wasn't the most original piece I'd ever read on this site, but it was a fluent and flowing story that overall seemed pretty solid.

5.6/10.