Talk:The Showers/@comment-24107881-20131031140313

Not my faveourite but it is worth reading, some parts feel long and drawn out which at times took away from the story as i personally felt they we unnecessary while others went too quickly which I personally felt needed some more explanation. Over all this is an amazing story and I would recomend it, it did have an unsettling feel to it and the character wern't flat and boring like in some stories they tend to be one tone and not interesting at all, your teacher character was my favourite.

Overall I ould give this story an 8/10