Talk:A Lonely Soldier/@comment-1671931-20140715122345

Not bad, not bad. A bit short and not really scary. This would be better on a paranormal forum that here (Beside the fact this is clearly fake). Thinks that could improve this story, is more details about the place where she took the photos. (As I know Ypres, I should say it the Great Market (De Grote Markt) ), and continuation of the story. The girl who photographed the ghost, being haunted by the man (Hauntings seems cliche but when done properly, can still be very creepy and powerful), she actually having a connection with the ghost (He's german, she might be British, based on her name; you can figure out yourself what I'm steering at).

Your timing is good, since the great commemorations for 100th aniversary of the beginning of the Great War in Belgium, but you did nothing with the story as a whole and that is disappionting, I'm sorry.