Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26007602-20150404230424/@comment-25941663-20150413154942

I absolutely loved this. I don't think it's a creepypasta, but it is definitely one of the best stories on the wiki (probably on my top 3).

I think that the beginning is perfect as is. Honestly, it hooked me right into the story.

The tone and voice of the narrator was also very interesting and unique. It added a lot to the story.

I could go on and on with the praise. Honestly, I don't have any critisicm for the story. It was perfect.

I would love it if you submitted it to the main site. If you do, I will write a comment describing what I think lies behind the story.