Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24843061-20140924030155/@comment-24821182-20140924190529

It seems slightly cliché. The whole "child blames things on doll, doll turns out to be evil"-thing has been done to death. You even gave it a very basic, unimaginative name: Dolly. Already while reading the third paragraph, I felt like having seen the whole thing before.

You should probably add more substance to set it apart from other similar stories. The current version seems more like what you'd get if you took one of these possessed doll stories and boiled it down to its most basic components.