Talk:Cryin'/@comment-26475942-20150609072851

3.6/10

1.Using "monster" doesn't really make it scary, it's better to use creature or something

2.The story is pretty short

3.Creepypastas are usually weird but it what makes them creepy sometimes. I'm basically saying you should make it more disturbing

my option is that u should read other Creepypastas