Talk:START TRANSCRIPT/@comment-25941663-20160810135106

I liked how you built up suspense while CAIMEO was starting up. Displaying the components loading surprisingly built up suspense very well. Very nice idea and touch. And the ending, although melodramatic, wasn't bad.

Apart from that though, this doesn't make much sense. It is one thing to leave stuff to the imagination, and another to throw wild concepts and let the reader figure them out. Most glaringly, how did a bored teenager who wanted to have his homework done get in touch with a shutdown AI? You don't give us much to work with and anything the reader comes up with is just a mere guess. That detracts from the experience.

Anyway, nice effort, but in my opinion barely meets the Quality Standards of the wiki.