Talk:Your Train Leaves Now/@comment-25949140-20150302200650/@comment-26158862-20150304045917

thanks for the tips. if you haven't read my profile page, I'm still getting used to how stories are composed and titles and everything, because I'm more used to just writing supposed-to-be scary stuff the way I like it. so yeah, more things I have to learn, but tips are always helpful. any suggestions on a different title?