Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25226524-20140908005526/@comment-24996913-20140908015630

I absolutely believe this is worth continuing. The descriptive work, the prose, the storyline, the anticipation of the next event, is enough to attract many other readers.

There are way too many unanswered questions I'm longing for right now. Who's the master? What "position" was the guy after? What did those people do to deserve death? Why on earth would anyone want to join in on a murdering spree? All of these questions provide you with boundless possibilities, which I would happily read whenever it's complete.

I also enjoyed the rage within officer Johnson. Even his small comical reliefs were entertaining. When he fantasized about biting the perps nose off, I nearly lost it. Amazing job with that. It surely added to the depth of the character.

The pace of the story was perfect, resembling the pace of the cops as they searched for the killer. The tone was eerie, I half way thought it was one of the cops who had done the devious deeds.

You set this up perfectly to hold the readers attention, as I've stated many times, this is hard to achieve especially for me due to ADHD, so that in itself is praise worthy. By all means, continue with this. Please do.