Creepypasta Wiki:Spinoff Appeal

Here is a system in which you can get your OC Original Content (OC) spinoffs, prequels, sequels, and stories on the forbidden subjects added to this wiki. Here's how it works:

Post your story offsite, and add a link to it below, along with a brief description. We admins will review your story to determine if it's good enough to be added to the wiki. If it is determined that your story is good, we will add the story ourselves, and add credit to you in the footer section. We will also add your story under User Submissions under your username. If the request is fulfilled, your post will be deleted.

Here are some places you can upload your story for it to be judged: Pastebin, Spinpasta Wiki, Zelda Creepypasta Wiki, Minecraft CreepyPasta Wiki, or Pokepasta Wiki. You can also upload your story to DeviantART.

Keep these things in mind:

Your story must be original content (OC).

Your story must meet the Quality Standards in order for it to be accepted.

Try to use as as few Creepy Clichés as possible.

Stories (this includes stories written the format of a diary or journal) must be complete. No "COMING SOON!" pages or half-finished pages.

You can add multiple stories in your request, but you have to put a description for each one.

If you don't want to give away any "twist" you added to the plot, just mention in the blurb that there's a twist that we should find out for ourselves.

Don't use this page to troll.

Don't get too upset if your request is denied!

Admins: If you reject a request, give an explanation why (bad spelling, bad grammar, too many cliches, too generic, Mary Sue protagonist/antagonist, poorly-written, etc.)

And please remember to sign your requests with four tildes ( ~ ).

I will demonstrate with my own spinoff, Evil Never Dies. I haven't added my actual signature, because it messes with the coding of the page.

Sonic the Hedgehog: Fun for all the Family
Link

This is a story of a normal Sonic game from the eyes of Sonic. It's designed to be an alternative and twisted view of the old games. Since it is quite original and not cliched, especially for a Sonic creepypasta, I think it may deserve to get on here.

Thanks for the taking the time to check it out.

Laura Metamorphosis (talk) 19:21, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Pokémon Dead Channel 2
Link Created by the original author. It tells the story of who BRVR actually is while simultaneously being much creepier than the original. SuckMyPianist (talk) 05:23, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Repercussions of Evil Spinoff
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4067416/1/Doom-Repercussions-of-Evil-Mark-II

Written five years ago, based on Peter Chimaera's Doom: Repercussions of Evil fanfiction. Read it for yourself and see the reviews. Loocodnom (talk) 23:19, June 10, 2013 (UTC)

Herobrine Spinoffs
I specialize in writing unexpected and very creepy Herobrine spinoffs, almost always based off a concept that has never been used before. I am quite good at writing, and I have several stories planned out, with major twist endings, and I have 2 already half written out. I just would like my pastas to appear here, for publicity. Here is a link to my quotev profile, I have the two stories I mentioned included in here: http://www.quotev.com/Allibrine Also, I would like to point out that while the "Allibrine" pasta may seem like a spin off, it is sort of an introduction to another character, who will feature in some of my stories. So please leave it up, it is very important to peope who want to have an understanding of the character.

Allibrine (talk) 07:36, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Hagbags
vvvhttp://themagiccrafter.deviantart.com/art/Hagbags-Creepypasta-359321380 Sorry if this doesn't work properly, I've tried to paste links before and it never works.

Anyway, this is a creepypasta about a game maker file called Tagbags that the author is making until he goes out to do some shopping, when he comes back, he finds out someone has modified it while he was out. I don't want to spoil too much but heres the link, just copy it and paste it into the search box.

Please add my story
Evil Never Dies A rather interesting and different take on Jeff The Killer that proposes that he's a parasitic body-snatcher. -Furbearingbrick

Could you Add My Story for Me?
www.spinpasta.wikia.com/silence- Aight. This a rather...short background story about Milo Asher's background preceding and during Tribe Twelve. Also describes Firebrand's reactions. Just put it up, and add me in the footer like you guys usually do. That is, if the answer's yes. -Snap Flash (talk) 06:13, March 3, 2013 (UTC), March 2013

Can you add my story please?
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Pok%C3%A9mon_-_Death_is_welcome I have worked very well on this and would like it to be on this website. I put it up thinking that it has good story, creepy atmosphere & well writen but it was put as a spinoff. So can you add it please? Thanks Ryan russell13579 (talk) 20:39, April 8, 2013 (UTC)

Blue Eyes
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Blue_Eyes - A story about a girl who gets bullied and abused a lot and eventually goes insane. Some people thought if it as a spinoff of Jeff the Killer, but it wasn't intended to be. It was taken off of CPW because of that reason... So please put it up. ~Hoodie (talk) 06:02, March 23, 2013 (UTC)

Spinoff Incoming (Squidward's Suicide: Rewritten)
I recently rewrote Squidward's Suicide, erasing the clichés while trying to keep the story good. I passed it around to two or three users, all of them replied positively besides pointing some spelling and grammar mistakes, so I think that it should be good to make it a candidate to be one of the few Spinoffs that gets added.

Link. WhyAmIReadingThis (talk) 21:03, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * Hmm... Some grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing a little editing won't fix. I think we should post it on Spinpasta Wiki before considering putting it on this site, but overall, I think it's a pretty good candidate. Why do they call it the funny bone? Because obviously people are laughing at your pain. 00:03, March 13, 2013 (UTC)


 * Grammar mistakes. Oh. I'm sorry. Sure. I'll add it to the Spinpasta Wiki after I'm done with the grammar mistakes. Thank you for the response, Skeletons. I&#39;m not an actor, I&#39;m a distractor (talk) 20:19, March 13, 2013 (UTC)


 * Added to Spinpasta, as suggested. Also couldn't add the Red Mist /Squidward's Suicide category there. I&#39;m not an actor, I&#39;m a distractor (talk) 21:25, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

This is my appeal
I've wrote a creepypasta about the Darkrai's ability to create nightmares and making people suffer since it. Its main character is Red. It has some elements from the game since Red is the character from the game. It's start involves the misterious package you get with the Darkrai event in Diamond, Pearl and Platinium. It also appelas to hardcore pokémon fans as it plays with the fact that you can only wake up from Darkrai's nightmare with Cresselia's scale.

Link:

MTVirux 22:59, April 1, 2013 (UTC)

Story Appeals
OK, so these first two are about Slenderman, BUT, it isn't the OMGITISSLENDERMANBBQ type of story. It is verry subte for both of them, usually being found out at the end and not playing a huge part in the rest of the story, in terms of relating to Slenderman.

Why I Never Laugh: http://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/p1lgg/why_i_dont_laugh/Has a bit of a twist ending I guess, nothing major, I basiclly turned a joke into a Creepypasta and never really said it was Slenderman.

The Guardian: http://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/wd12g/the_guardian/ I actually actively refraim from naming Slenderman in this one till the end. It is still a bit of a twist I guess, but nothing too major.

My Own Hell: http://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/yg674/this_is_my_own_hell/ OK, so I can't say what this one is, and I do appologize if it gives you the "oh no, not another one," feeling, but although the subject is overused to death and beyond, the way I tell it is more or less original. There is a journal at the end, kind of, but it is more for the reveal/twist, not really the format.

Dr Remag (talk) 17:41, April 6, 2013 (UTC)


 * Your story "My Own Hell" has the wrong link. Did you mean this? TerribleFate64 (talk) 21:06, April 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, sorry about that. I changed the link to "My Own Hell." Dr Remag (talk) 22:14, April 6, 2013 (UTC)


 * I wrote another story that got good praise. It is based on the holders, though not in the holders format and uses one of my original charaters. The story is called The Last Object: http://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/1bx27e/the_last_object/ I may have broken the canon, but at the same time I stuck, more or less, to the canon of the original holders story and have a pretty large twist to it. This one is more of a mindfuck then my past work I think, unsettling with the smallest bit of suffering for flavor. Give it a read and tell me what you guys think.
 * Dr Remag (talk) 16:08, April 8, 2013 (UTC)

I'm gonna work on fulfilling these appeals soon, it's just that I'm working on a couple of sketch requests for friends on DeviantART and FurAffinity so it might take awhile. Just letting everyone know that I haven't forgotten about Spinoff Appeal. A huge battleship FURBEARINGBRICK is approaching fast! (talk) 15:31, April 10, 2013 (UTC)

Can You Add My Story Please
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Slender:Proxy_Story

It was deleted and I was told to put it on Spinpasta and make a spinoff appeal here.

Please sign your posts. A huge battleship FURBEARINGBRICK is approaching fast! (talk) 13:47, April 10, 2013 (UTC)

Zelda Story
http://zeldacreepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Goodbye

This is a little story I wrote up. I tried to make it special from other Zelda pastas, using no blood, no BEN, and subtle horror. Please consider adding this!

Please sign your posts. Also, could you rename to something else? There's already a pasta named "Goodbye" on the wiki. Once you rename it to a appropriate title, I'll add it on the wiki. -- Sloshedtrain 00:30, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Pink Wonderland (MLP Grimdark)
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Pink_Wonderland

That's the link to my MLP grimdark, it's not a spinoff of cupcakes or Luna.exe, but LOLSKELETONS told me to post it there.

Here's a brief description: A "pony" being haunted by the one and only pinkie pie. Trying to escape this nightmare, he does some bad choices. Hope you like, and please let this be on Creepypasta WIKI! TwitchyCake (talk) 01:56, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

Hmm... I not quite sure if I should add it on the wiki. I'm not a pony fan, but story has some potential if it was longer and more detailed.  Sloshedtrain 00:30, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

The Holder of Teamwork
I thought it was a while since we've had another Holder pasta, so I wish to present The Holder of Teamwork, I thought mental institutions are tired of people asking for some Holder, so I used a childrens summer camp instead. You will also need two Seekers to complete the task.

http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Holder_of_Teamwork

RGRminersRoss (talk) 16:34, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

I read a few Holders pastas here, but this seems qualified enough to go on wiki. This is greenlighted. -- Sloshedtrain 00:30, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Dyers Eve
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Dyers_Eve I've had this story available on the Spinpasta Wikia for a little over a month. The story intertwines 6-8 different previous pastas, with verbal allusion to several others, which is why I figured I would post it on the Spinpasta wiki primarily. The story follows "Peter" in his journal. He was one of the original scientists who was involved with the Gateway of the Mind project. Five years later, he is re-assigned to The Transcendence Project, which is essentially "take two" and taken directly from Godzilla: Replay and the preceding NES Godzilla pasta. Their first human test subject is a boy named Benjamin. Peter is dealing with becoming overly attached to Benjamin and his past regrets, which drives him to insanity. He sneaks under "the facility" one night to find a chamber that holds Heaven, which he drowns under the influence of another demon. There's also two twists at the end, one of which is pretty predictable, the other I find somewhat clever but that might just be me. I'm personally proud of the pasta and was curious if it could be uploaded here. (I'm so damn good at making my descriptions brief, guys.) I, Da Cashman (talk) 03:25, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

My Pasta
I wrote this creepypasta here: http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Origin_of_Scrowstalk in hopes that it would be published here. I would really like it to be a real thing, please critique my work :) UnknownExistance (talk) 03:24, May 20, 2013 (UTC)

Perplexus
Perplexus is a creepypasta that may fall under the 'haunted file' or the '.exe file' category. Although the story is not centred around an executable file, or is in fact truly haunted, it may still be rejected because of this. To ensure I did not simply have my post deleted, I thought it best to link it here for review and possible acception. The story follows one man's interest in an encoded file that has gained popularity in the media, and the dark meaning behind it. Pastebin link is here: http://pastebin.com/hr0mZNGs

Tigerhallam (talk) 15:15, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Operation: Alpha
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Operation:_Alpha

Look, I don't want to spoil the surprise (because it's one of those mind-fuck pastas) so I'd like you to read it so you know why it's on the Spinpasta wiki. Now, I know there are alot of HORRIBLE pastas in the general subject, but at least it's not a .exe/haunted game like 99% of all the others. I didn't see any creepy clichés in it, there may be 1 or so, but I think it qualifies to pass Spin-Off Appeal. It's my first and best pasta I wrote, so uploading it here would be a huge achievement in my story writing.

Your's truly, that creepy guy who stalks people in chat.

Operation Top Dog: A Government Creepypasta
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Operation_Top_Dog:_An_ORIGINAL_Government_Creepypasta

My so-called creepypasta is about the government. I can't really give anything else away. It took me about 4-5 months to write it (Still open to edits). I DO admit it was inspired by MKULTRA and Polybius, though. It's just not a spin-off of them.

User:Pupdude (talk) 21:47, June 17, 2013 (UTC)


 * Possible: If you could cut down on the caps as they arent needed in thhe story I think it could be greenlighted as it isn't actually a haunted game or file.

20:43, July 4, 2013 (UTC)


 * I'm guessing you meant the all-caps parts.  Replaced all of the all-caps with italicized lowercase.  Hopefully, that solves the issue you had with it. User:Pupdude (talk) 03:42, July 6, 2013 (UTC)

Mr. Game
I was wondering if Mr. Game, the continuation of 7 Years Later could be added here. When I first tried to add it, it said I couldn't because it violates the Spinoff rules. I believe this claim is false as I am the writer of both pastas. --Maybe it&#39;s made of chocolate. (talk) 21:40, June 23, 2013 (UTC)

Denied: If he has had this console and games for years then why are they all of a sudden haunted now?

20:30, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Slender Rising: More than a Game
Today I finished writing my pasta Slender Rising: More than a Game, the story of a boy who is shown the game Slender Rising by a friend, and weird events happen in-game. Then, his friend's sister shows it to the boy's sister. While playing, something happens that makes the girls dissappear. The following week, Ben (the boy) meets BEN, a new student, who invites Ben to a sleepover. That night, Ben's family dissapears, and Ben notices that BEN was never at his bed during the night.

I'm not sure why it was considered as a spin-off, but if it is, it's ok. I would love for it to be at this wiki, so please let me know what happens. Whenever Your World  Starts   Crashing Down  23:54, June 23, 2013 (UTC)

Denied: Not only is it a video game, it is a video game about slenderman.

20:26, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Roblox2.exe
This pasta is not really a spinoff but this is a really good Roblox pasta, I know it's a .exe file but it's a real good pasta and I don't get why is it rejected from the wiki. I wrote a lost episode here and it didn't get rejected at all. I also put alot of effort on this pasta.

Armordude91122cute (talk) 18:46, June 27, 2013 (UTC)

Denied: This pasta focuses on how people died from playing this game.

20:22, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Super Mario 666-4
A young man has a desire to relive the classics as he downloads an N64 emulator and a few roms, amongst them is Super Mario 64. Everything goes OK until he plays Super Mario 64, when he notices that something is off, then something goes terribly off (you'll have to read to find out what happens, I'm trying to be spoiler-friendly here). He leaves his house for a couple of hours, only to find that his next-door neighbour has been murdered after going to turn the computer off, but plays it and is helpless to defend herself. The protagonist continues to play, but even more messed-up things happen in the game (again, you'll have to read) In the end, he discovers that it is King Boo who is haunting the game and his computer. The protagonist tries to get King Boo to leave, threatening that he'll even smash the computer with a sledgehammer and trap King Boo inside, but instead gets more than what he bargained for. (read to find out the ending) http://thewalshinator.deviantart.com/art/Super-Mario-666-4-381504721?ga_submit_new=10%253A1372491057 Cheers TheWalshinator (talk) 08:10, June 29, 2013 (UTC)

Denied: Just like every other Mario pasta on this site.

20:25, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Please explain. TheWalshinator (talk) 06:58, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

Never Stop Running Trilogy
Never Stop Running: A young college student writes a letter to his mother explaining how his life started going horribly wrong after an encounter with a supposedly normal video game hack. (TWIST ENDING) http://someordinarygamers.wikia.com/wiki/Never_Stop_Running

A Terrible Fate: The twist ending from NSR leaves the mother numb and searching for answers to questions she never dreamed she would ask - every answer leading to more questions. (ANOTHER TWIST ENDING) http://someordinarygamers.wikia.com/wiki/A_Terrible_%22Fate%22

There will be a third one, but I haven't written it yet. For the time being, this is it. Enjoy.

Jr637 (talk) 20:23, July 3, 2013 (UTC)User:Jr637

The first is extremely cliche and shall not be allowed on the site. 20:13, July 4, 2013 (UTC)


 * The second is just a sequel for the first so it is also denied. 20:17, July 4, 2013 (UTC)


 * Okay, besides the fact that it's a haunted video game hack, (At this point in time. That might change in the third one.) what else did you think was cliche? Not trying to be argumentative, just trying to improve my writing skills. Jr637 (talk) 21:14, July 4, 2013 (UTC)Jr637


 * Another thing that was cliche. After playing the hack the character went insane and killed himself.
 * 21:53, July 4, 2013 (UTC)


 * You sure he went insane? Jr637 (talk) 22:29, July 4, 2013 (UTC)Jr637

The Origin Behind Squidward's Suicide and Red Mist
http://www.booksie.com/horror/short_story/thewalkingcreepypasta/the-origin-behind-squidwards-suicide-red-mist

I'd like to add this story because this isn't even a spinoff. It's a prequel story on how the Red Mist and Squidward's Suicide came to be. Please take the time to read my story. TheWalkingCreepyPasta (talk) 18:30, July 6, 2013 (UTC)

Abandoned For Life
A long maplstory pasta  involving events that lead to the house in the swamp to be abandoned. Not that many cliches my freind went over it..

http://alexs-spinoff-appeal.wikia.com/wiki/Alex%27s_spinoff_appeal_Wiki

3alexbalex (talk) 11:32, July 22, 2013 (UTC)