Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20180409180650/@comment-33904527-20180410201243

BloodySpghetti wrote: It got deleted because well, it lacks the punch. She knew this is familiar, we know her boyfriend's dead... but it's not scary, it's just an accident induced by a lack of thought.

If you'd have a description of him being crushed or something, or even her finding out its him, perhaps this would work better. That's simply not scary.

Also, that shouldn't even be possible, the cleaners need to set the dumpster on the truck and open the lid etc, thus, Kyle should've been found and stuff. Can I edit the story and re-upload it? Or would that be a violation of terms? Also, the reason why Kyle wasn't found was because the system that was used for emptying the garbage into the truck was fully automated. It didn't need human interaction