Talk:Hole in the Ground/@comment-5825217-20140610014205

That was...unexpected, I guess. And surprising. Maybe it's just me, 'cos I've never read Alice in Wonderland, but I wasn't expecting that ending at all xD

Try writing something original (i.e. something that is not a pasta-ization of the beginning of Alice in Wonderland). I don't intend sarcasm or insult with that remark; I intend encouragement. I think you could do quite well at writing a pasta. All it takes is an idea.

(By the way, paragraph 2 was what reminded me of that song in chat. I should've just put up a YouTube link, but I did not. Instead I did something terribly stupid.)