User talk:SnakeTongue237

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Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything!

EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:15, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:17, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Note
Please tag either "Beings" or "Ghosts" (which you feel is best suitable for your story.) as both those categories are standalone (meaning they should not be used in conjunction.) Here's the Category rules for a better reference. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 00:26, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback, the categories have been changed with your thoughts in mind.SnakeTongue237 (talk) 21:48, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Abandoned By Disney Review
Although I'm not completely sure if you'd like to see it, I have a new review up of Slimebeast's Abandoned By Disney. As you read both of my other reviews, I figured you might want to take a look at it. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 01:35, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

You didn't make your pastas accessible on your home page
Dude, use this template when talking about your pastas so that users can click on them and go right to them:   Story Title. After reading your horror blog I went to read your work but couldn't just click on the story and had to enter it into the search which is kind of a pain. Great blog! HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:19, March 12, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, I've fixed my stories so you can just click on them now, and I've added links to mt top 25 all time favorite Creepypastas as well. Thank you for helping me out and for your insight on my blog! SnakeTongue237 (talk) 23:28, March 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re Outside Lights
I'll give it a read here in a minute and leave a comment, but that will make three of yours I've read, so it's your turn. Rumpelstiltskin - don't read this if you are easily disturbed. This one won the freestyle finals: The Long List   HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 22:10, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

That's Rumpelstiltskin if it was in red when you looked. Also, I just noticed your message to me on your page. Dude, I won't get your message unless you post it to my talk page.

Re The Long List
Well, ultimately it is up to the reader to decide what is up with the little girl. But, as I see it, there really was an informant that told Standler about Diesel's meth lab, and he is hallucinating the ghost. If you recall I mention how his wife had a still born son and never conceived again. He wants a family and can't have one. Pulling that dead little girl out of the gutter, as well as severe alcoholism, have driven him mad, and now he is on a killing spree. Thanks for reading my stories, I appreciate it. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 22:45, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Sign your pastas
Hey, buddy. If you put this template  at the end of your stories (obviously with your name in it) it will tell readers who wrote it and give them a chance to click on it and go to your home page and check out your other stuff. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 00:23, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Hold on, let me fix that

     This should work. To be honest I suck at all this formatting and programming stuff and am just figuring it all out myself HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 00:26, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

I really am an amture. What ever, it's the template in the middle. Some administrator or rollbacker will probably come fix it by the time I'm done typing this anyway. I'm sure Jay is laughing his ass off right now. It's not funny, man!

Hopefully this will work 

Yes! Finally. Man, I'm just trying to help out around here not constantly look like a bat shit crazy ass.

Fresh pasta
Hi there, snaketongue. I have just completed my story for Koromo's mythology challenge:  Sons of Odin. I'd love to hear what you think. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 20:34, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Normal Porn For Normal People Riff
Since you don't like "Normal Porn For Normal People", I thought you might enjoy reading something where it's made fun of.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Dorkpool/Creepypasta_Riffs:_Normal_Porn_For_Normal_People_(NSFW)

The Goddamn Dorkpool (talk) 23:32, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

It doesn't take 5 minutes to kill a person.

It's a username template, so don't be shy.

Well, since you somehow found yourself to me (eww so dramatic), I guess now you do know me, yeah?

RisingFusion (talk) 17:20, April 5, 2015 (UTC)RisingFusion

Screamers
Do not post links to screamers. If it happens again, you will receive a week long ban. It was sorta acceptable on april fools day in an april fools blog, but it's seriously annoying & dangerous for people with photosensitive epilepsy.

11:44, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

WARNING
Warning:If someone comments on your blog, then it won't show up on your notifications! Thanks,

--Fear is always growing. 00:19, April 8, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords

M4R
Please don't add categories to stories which have been marked for review. We use M4R to sort of "quarantine" stories, and adding categories defeats the purpose.

19:11, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I now know you. You go around.

RisingFusion (talk) 22:03, April 8, 2015 (UTC)RisingFusion

RE: Crime Scene Photos
It has been written. Crime Scene Photos Beware the twist ending.

Cheers

Rinskuro13 22:05, April 10, 2015 (UTC)Rinskuro13

Mystery Commenter Revealed?
Are you the one who said that the site doesn't accept Lost Episode pastas? If so, you forgot to sign your post. (The Wa-Wa-Wa music plays while Azu shrugs comedically). Anyway regarding the pasta, I'm almost done with the 5th chapter of the pasta which involves the cold opening of the actual episode. I can send you the most recent version of the story via pastebin if you'd like. Let me just post the story to pastebin first! A link will be sent to you as soon as the story is on pastebin.

But here's some basic information about the pasta:

1. The show that the Lost Episode will be from is R.L Stine's: The Haunting Hour, which is like a darker and scarier version of the Goosebumps TV series.

2. The pasta will mostly rely on psychological horror, most of this coming from the protagonist as she's watching the episode.

3. The pasta will be separated into chapters for convinient reading since it may be a bit long by the time it's finished.

4. I understand that there was a Goosebumps: Lost Episode pasta and while it's one of the better Lost Episode pastas, I felt it was rather... meh. The protagonist also talks about how she doesn't really like the Goosebumps TV series in the opening, which kind of makes sense because it's also based on an R.L Stine work. She also talks about how she's indifferent to The Haunting Hour which may or may not be subverting the "Protagonist is a fan of a TV show" cliche.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 02:02, April 11, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 02:02, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Writing challenge
Well, at first when I recieved the title Shower Curtains I was at a loss for a story. But I decided to try and think like Humbold. I think it worked =)   I currently have a messed up story about a shower curtain (of sorts) and can't wait to show you (And hopefully Humbold too). I'll take advantage of the entire week and hopefully it'll blow you mind. Stay tuned!

Whoops! forgot my sig!

Supersatan25 (talk) 04:19, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Nope! Not it!" message
(Does best Homer Simpson impression) D'oh! Anyway, here's the most recent version of my pasta: http://pastebin.com/6N6gUsYF It's not finished but I would still want to know what you think of the story so far. I think signing posts are a good habit to get into because for one thing, if I want to reply to that person, I can easily click on their signature or the (talk) button. I also don't have to go on a massive hunt for the user on the wiki site. Though it may inspire someone to write a creepypasta about it.

Regarding Lost Episode cliches, one of the cliches that I have the biggest grudge against, aside from the "I was an Intern" one, is whenever these types of pastas use the term "Hyper- Realistic" or just "Realistic" to describe something. What agravates me is that when Lost Episode pastas or heck any other type of pasta uses the term, it makes the author seem like they don't have that big of a vocabulary to think of synonyms for these terms (i.e lifelike, truthful, faithful, etc).

If the author feels the nessesity to describe something as "realistic", they're better off using something like this when describing something like the animation for example: "The animation really took me by suprise with how lifelike it really was. In fact, I felt as though it made Winsor Mccay's Little Nemo look like Hello Kitty."

Anyways, Tell me your thought after you read it! I'm really excited to know what you think. (looks at story) I have faith in you, story!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 04:03, April 11, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 04:03, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Humbold
He left for a while because of an argument he got into with someone on here. He said he'd be back in August though

As far as the competition, I guess we'lol see who wins mwahahahaha!

Supersatan25 (talk) 19:51, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Your Thoughts?
Hey Snake! Did you get around to reviewing my pasta? Sorry to ask but I'm a bit excited because I really do have faith that this pasta may be a much needed boost for Lost Episode pastas. Still haven't found the mystery commenter yet... :(

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 22:15, April 11, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 22:15, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Potential" message
Thanks! I'm having the story peer reviewed by a couple of people to look for any mistakes I may have missed or any good things in the story I should do more of. I'm going to work on more of chapter 5 and hopefully have it one some time soon!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 23:20, April 11, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 23:20, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re: Crime Scene Photos
The photos were actually shopped ;)

Yeah, I know the middle part kind of let it down. Andy's leather jacket present was meant to be something about him taking off a bulletproof vest before putting on the jacket with tons more detail, but I didn't really have time (school assignment due...that's my excuse), so I quickly finished it off w/ a twist.

I enjoyed entering it, and good luck with the competition. Sorry I couldn't put in all the effort I should have. I won't be online for a long time after these next few days (life is a heck of a pain) so I will be looking forward to reading the winners' pastas when I return.

Rinskuro13 10:32, April 12, 2015 (UTC)Rinskuro13

When you finish the pasta, please inform me via talk page and I'll take a look at it as soon as possible.

The fusion is rising, and they have no supplement. Despairing, I emerge, awaking the last generation. 21:36, April 13, 2015 (UTC)RisingFusion

Like this?
Like this?

The fusion is rising, and they have no supplement. Despairing, I emerge, awaking the last generation.) 21:57, April 13, 2015 (UTC)RisingFusion

Under The Floorboards
It's all done, and better than expected. Under The Floorboards! Thanks!

--Welcome One And All! 03:45, April 14, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords

Under The Floorboards V.2
Here's the new link Under the Floorboards.

Writing Competition
SnakeTongue237, may you participate in my writing competition on my blog? I would be grateful and gratified.

The fusion is rising, and they have no supplement. Despairing, I emerge, awaking the last generation.)RisingFusion

Competition Deadline
Hey, I wanted to let you know that I'm having trouble with my story. Like I know what I want the main plot to be but I don't really know how to develop it without it becoming corny. So basically what I'm saying is that I might not make the deadline, so don't worry about it if I don't. But I hope to at least get it posted on here eventually.

Supersatan25 (talk) 21:01, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Topic
Your topic is: Abandoned Warehouse

I would prefer to post on the blog instead, but oh well.

When you are finished, post the link onto the comments section of the blog.

Good luck.

The fusion is rising, and they have no supplement. Despairing, I emerge, awaking the last generation.)

Are you still...
Are still reviewing pastas for the contest? It's nice to know if you still are. I see your still active, but Grim and I both have our pastas on the site, so...

--Welcome One And All! 15:27, April 16, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords