Talk:Whistler/@comment-25226524-20141103013335

Bravo. This is a perfect example of how to build tension. You took something as simple as whistling and turned it into one of the creepier stories that I've read in awhile. I noticed almost no technical/grammar issues, so good job on that.

The only thing I'm not sure about is near the end when the narrator says, "Oh, of course.  I understood." I might just be missing something, but I don't really know what that meant. Maybe you meant for it to be ambiguous, but it kinda' sidetracked me, since I tried to figure out what the narrator had realized. That may not even be an issue, just something maybe you could answer for me. Other than that, I think this story is borderline perfect, and I hope to see more from you in the future. Keep up the good work.