Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35973449-20180625160812/@comment-35973449-20180626214405

RedNova,

Thank you! I've reworked this piece a few times and something always seems to be off. Like I'm almost but not quite there yet. I shared this piece with my husband and he helped me to find a few options. I'm going to add more to the story to give it the feeling of completion and set the direction I want it to go.