Talk:Beyond the Light/@comment-24859608-20150121213804/@comment-26030651-20150122184342

Cheers for the feedback. The concept came to me when I found myself blinded by headlights whilst driving at night, and the light/dark mode thing was a happy accident.

This was my first attemt, and my first attempt at short story writing in general. Would it be asking too much if you could point out exactly what you think could be edited out to keep the story on track?