Talk:The Doctor's Orders

This is amazing. It's pretty long for a creepypasta, though, so I guess I understand why it hasn't gotten more attention. Still! The description of the Unfortunate both before and after its incident were very well done, made it easy to picture the disturbing scene. The name itself felt like a piece of unfinished business, though - why would it have a title so grandiose as "the Unfortunate", consistently capitalized, and who named it that? I dunno, felt out of place for what was essentially a poor feral mutant. Javer80 00:41, September 2, 2011 (UTC)