Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-38492903-20190522125748/@comment-35911608-20190524130518

Thatowldude wrote: Honestly, there isn’t that much cursing here, but i guess i’ll remove some F-bombs here and there. Thanks for the critique though, much appreciated! ''“Don’t fucking leave, please don’t fucking leave please!”

Weirded out, i asked him calmly what the fuck was going on back there. He quickly responded:

“There’s something in the fucking sky! It’s in the fucking sky and it’s gonna kill me!”

After he said that, he looked back in a window in the backround of his camera, and shouted “What the fuck do you want?!”. I snooped through the camera to see what he was looking at through his window, and i nearly shat myself again.

Through his window, there was what appeared to be this gargantuan shape in the sky. It honestly resembled those alien ships from Arrival, but it looked wispy, like if it was made from black smoke. There were also these octopus-like tendrils emerging from the central mass.

At this point, the partner’s camera was starting to glitch the fuck out, and i asked, with my heart pounding out of it’s fucking chest:

“What the fuck is that? Why aren’t you calling the cops?”

The guy looked back to his camera, looking more frightened than before, with tears rolling down his eyes, and said:

“I tried fucking calling the cops but they won’t fucking respond please fucking he-“

That was when i heard it through my speakers.

It sounded like a whale, but it had this deep tone to it. As i heard it, i felt a deep primal fear within me. Hearing it in my mind right now just makes me fucking shudder.''

I count 13 F-bombs in just that portion. That's a lot. It's really noticeable.