Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36772767-20180902231010

I am still developing my other story, but had been kicking around this other idea floating in my head. It's based off a true crime story of an arsonist fireman. Saw it on Cold Case Files or American Justice, I can't remember which tv show. Once again, I appreciate anyone who views my work and all feedback.

 FIREBUG EULOGY 

The sun beamed brightly through cream colored clouds. Foliage sways back and forth, thrashing like chlorophyll ocean waves. The church soup kitchen also known lovingly as “The Greasy” is holding their annual chili cook off. Mayor Tom Brannigan takes the stage behind a small wooden podium.

“Today is a blessed day, but also one of mourning. We pay tribute to community firefighter Tom “Sir Thomas” Brown for dedicating his life to the job of protecting our families” said Mayor Brannigan of Unwanted, Conn.

He began life as a humble son of a farmer and homemaker. As an only child, he was doted on by his mother who also gave him a strict education. Soft, yet firm, his father taught him the ropes of farm life.

They were successful and generous benefactors to the beautiful surroundings of Unwanted. As a boy, Tom would bring a wagon into town with food for the homeless and others he knew that were less fortunate.

1975

Private First Class Tom Brown was drafted by the United States Military and went to Vietnam. He was honorably discharged and enrolled at a prominent University when he arrived home. After spending much time in his studies, he grew tired of the day to day rat race of school and missed the rush he used to get as an infantry soldier. He felt a sense of duty to the local community and joined the Firefighter’s Academy.

Just as he had on the farm, in Vietnam and his new job, Tom excelled and received numerous accolades for his heroism. The adrenaline, praise and fame overwhelmed this young man’s ego as the job provided more danger.

He believed he could do no wrong. His lust for a fast life caused him to think the unimaginable. Our beloved Fireman Brown became the most ravenous arsonist in the country. He thought he could control the flame and still be a hero.

One night would completely end Tom’s horrific reign of terror. After finishing a bottle of bourbon and malt liquor six pack. He thought it would be fun just to start a fire for no reason other than being absolutely wasted.

Ripping a piece from his flannel, he stuffed it into a brand new bottle of whiskey. Once it soaked, he lit the end and hurled it towards a dumpster. A man completely engulfed by the painful glow, jumps from out of his sleep. Like a demon leaping straight from the fire of hell. Tom was totally startled by the ghastly sight and just took off running.

His luck finally ran out. Several people saw him flee the scene and made a citizen’s arrest. Tom wouldn’t be tried in the court. Death is an automatic criminal sentence in Unwanted. He would ultimately serve out his gruesome punishment at our fine local soup kitchen.

“We will honor his service with our thoughts, prayers, to care for his family and a big bowl full of fresh 5 alarm chili. It’s brought to you by the great folks at The Greasy. It isn’t much, but it’s a little piece of Fireman Brown we can keep inside us all”

 