Talk:Cartoon/@comment-17758905-20150123214820/@comment-24931562-20150124212929

Thank you very much for editing my comma abuse and run on sentences. And her story was rather predictable, I moreso wanted the way she became a killer to be intriguing. And may I ask you sir, who would suspect a child? And who knows at what time her father would get home to realize there had been a murder within his household? I'm sorry it didn't suit your tastes.