Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24101790-20150808171231/@comment-24101790-20150809224603

Jay ten wrote: I was just spit-balling with the idea, but I have to say, what you wrote there is spot on. I would think on whether listening to any of my suggestions is wise; I can likely derail a good story like I derail threads.

'''Emp suddenly adds in a side-kick that spouts the catch-phrase, "Take that bastardus!" at the behest of Jay.'''