Talk:Case File: 780092 - St John's Airbase, Louisiana/@comment-25052433-20150428003014

This was interesting. Being an Army Veteran myself,  I always enjoy these military themed pastas. Of course, to write a great military story, I think that a bit of research is due. Just a couple of things that I found off were the fact that a General is directly questioning a Corporal. I suppose it could be said that this conspiracy is so big that the general got involved, but in real life, there are so many subordinate commanders below a general that it is far more likely to be conducting the interview, perhaps as the general watches from behind two way glass.

Other than that, I see this as an interesting story with a bit of a short plot. I think you could expand on this and it would make a great story.