Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-17834624-20140721040440/@comment-17834624-20140721162627

Ah, I see! Thanks for clarifying the problems.

I'm a Canadian, so my grammar might be confusing to Americans. I hope that's not racist, but this isn't an excuse.

Okay, I modified the RTF file on my computer so that Seth actually confronts him about the disk being his lab report and needing help with it. I also modified where it said that he had given a USB and a CD to only a CD.

I removed the cliche "I was diagnosed with schizophrenia at four months of age." Is brain damage to also be held as a catalyst?

No haunted flash drives. No haunted CD. No haunted laptop. No haunted files. What I try to do is I try to stay as far away from haunted things as possible in my stories, I've got actually quite a few stories in my .rtf folder, and only one of them include haunted shit out of twelve files.

I'm not trying to make something that can just be passed off as "oh well that's paranormal, get an exorcist" but instead make something that can be passed off as "uh I think you might have to put everything you own and who you are up to auction, because your student isn't the one that's fucked up." Not sure if that's a spoiler, that's probably going to be put into an early part of the story.

I actually was thinking of making the chemistry teacher homosexual, yes, when I started writing the story. But the painful reality is that I intended to make it male, so I wrote down most of the story, then made it female considering most of the stories I write have a male protagonist/antagonist, and unfortunately left in "a man can hope." So yes, it could be taken that the narrator is homosexual. But that would mean that nobody would focus on the story and instead focus on ''that the narrator is homosexual. Oh my fucking god, holy crap. Call the cops.''

It's not much of a visual success at this moment, I can tell you that much. I don't feel very proud of it, myself, and I apologize for coming off snarky at first, I was just tired of not receiving any positive remarks about my stories that don't have gore in them, which don't get me wrong, isn't anyone's fault.