Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27443491-20151221164621/@comment-27443491-20151222123030

Thanks for the advice! Actually, the first one wasn't a draft.. Well, I changed some things before I posted it here, while the second one is a draft. I'll try re-writing the first one soon, and see if it will be better than my first re-write.

Oh! If you don't mind, can you please give me an example (or a story) that has a child-like view, but it can also be considered as a creepypasta, so that I can get a rough idea of how my story should go?

For the second one, I have a similar story like that, and it's about to reach its climax. I'll try posting it here too, and just delete the idea of the "she loves me; she loves me not". It's pretty similar anyways.. Or just delete that, and start with this. I like this one better.

I have another creepypasta in mind, and I hope that you'll be able to review it too! I recently just started writing again, and this is actually my first time receiving actual criticism (because my friends are too kind for that, and I never actually let my family read any of my works), so I hope that I'll improve in the long run..

Again, thanks for reviewing! *gives another virtual cookie. And Reese's. I love Reese's.*