Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26113663-20150202113616/@comment-26113663-20150206083751

TheGamingSponge wrote: -TheRuckus- wrote: Caruche wrote: This has grounds for a really good idea. Unfortunately, as TheGamingSponge stated, there are basic words missing. It seems rushed. Perhaps it only needs one more paragraph and you have it. Maybe research doppelgangers? Mainly give the story a polish and a good proofread. Your idea of doppelgangers are different in mine. Doppelgangers are supposed to look very differently than their originals, but mine was... just like a clone or somewhat. However, I still like your tips, and I just thought of some new ideas, and I might include yours and mine. Uh... Not quite sure where you got your definiton of a doppelganger, but a doppelganger is literally someone that looks identical to you; a clone. Oxford dictionary says this:

"an apparition or double of a living person" This is based on my own opinion, but doppelganger have a slight different (sorry about my term before), almost unnoticable, diffirence between their originals. Yeah, something like that, but it's not exactly a doppelganger. To make it look different, I'll modify some of the story elements.