Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10319977-20151014231140/@comment-26326346-20151015015606

I apologize if I come across as rude here, but, in my opinion, all of your micropasta seem like pitches or concepts for full-length pasta. What I mean is it sounds like you are coming up with concepts and just ending it there instead of actually exploring the concepts, so basically they come across as incredibly short story summaries to me.

I feel like it would serve you and your micropasta better by making them into full-length pasta (I recommend shooting for 500 to 1000 words if you aren't comfortable writing short stories yet).

The ideas sound interesting for the most part, but we never really get to see them build up, things just happen and are instantly explained to us.