Talk:All Roads Lead to Rome/@comment-23790968-20170418182712

 - How well did I tackle the emotional aspect of the story; which was supposed to be a big part of it.

 Well enough.

 -Was it clear that the protagonist was supposed to be an asshole?

 Yes.

 -Did you get an idea of which character I was using as the main "villain"?

 Some sort of Eldritch Abomination? "The Shadow over Innsmouth"?

 -After finishing it, what did you think was going on?

 Some surrealist transformation caused by a "The Shadow over Innsmouth"-type of situation, mixed with metaphors about citys.