Talk:Amazing World of Gumball - The Grieving/@comment-4552545-20140619220632

7/10.  The disturbing factors were all there, home alone, watching an unintended (and disturbing) broadcast in the wee hours of the night. But the one thing that threw me off was the slow decline of logic towards the end of the story. Like, paranormal oddities happening during something like that is one thing, but it seemed very blatant. It was weird to me how suddenly out of the blue the doors were locked and you couldn't get in, your TV not being able to turn off even after unplugging it, and on top, some insane coincidence that you dropped your phone in your soda. And it seemed that you tied in the bit about your little brother suddenly going missing after seeing a traumatizing video clip on television too loosely; there could've been a little more development in that. And lastly, of course, you can't write 4 paragraphs in a tweet. Other than that, fantastic job.