Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24785169-20140408195938/@comment-24785169-20140409070203

Ouch... Hey it's my first ever creepypasta of course its going to have mistakes. I have tried to remove most of them and its not supposed to best the best story ever. it might be shit in your opinion but to a lot of others its much better than most others that are on here. as for taking the plot from another story, i have not even read that story so i wouldnt know. and its not supposed to be perfect. All i wanted was a short pasta that would either give someone a few chills or something interesting to read so... Screw you. the critisizm is welcome. the harshness of it is not.