Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24303740-20140605172803/@comment-24303740-20140605180305

Thank you for your feedback does he learn his leason ? I never really answer that question was it dream ? it may or may not be was it a premonition ? or is he reliving this nightmarish reconstruction of his ways ? I agree it needs work and I will definately perfect it this is actually 3rd draft lol the first one I didnt even bother posting it hear cause it would have been deleted definately it was only a paragraph long and little to no detail but I agree it is still lacking in some things I will work on it further and update it. once again thank you for your input.