User blog comment:Fightmebae/Bruh/@comment-27629228-20160204005548/@comment-6548012-20160205011248

Wow. It goes waaaay too fast and by that logic, you can't make any sense out of it, or you can't even be into the story that it's already ended. As for the rhymes, you can't rhyme "stood" and "could," and when you can't find rhymes in -ed, it's really terrible. The poem has no metre, no patterns, everything is chaotic, and not even in a good way. I'm pretty fat shit, when it comes to judging poetry, and that really didn't deserve to be on the site.