Talk:Faulty Love/@comment-7673575-20180225180112

 * cracks ugandan knuckles*

I expected a lot from Icydice. And I have to say, he delivered!

Review time.

 GENERAL QUALITY:  I only managed to find few small typos here and there. Formatting is good, there are no walls o' text, dialogue is of realistic length.  Score: 24/25 

 HORROR FACTOR:  This is the only field where this story wasn't really satisfying. It's a real life scary, and it has that 'sickness' atmosphere, but there is little real horror in this. Still, I felt uneasy during the whole read, so it still had some horror merit.  Score: 11/25 

 LYRICAL INTERPRETATION:  Even in prologue, it can be seen that Icy did his research. I actually went out and googled for this event because it was written so convincing, I figured that it was a piece of real-life lore that I missed. I can really find no mistake here.  Score: 25/25 

ENTERTAINMENT VALUE: What makes this story work is because it is so docile: no slaughters, no monsters, no cryptic messages. Not your standard creepypasta, which is at the same time good and bad. I legit enjoyed reading it, but in the end it felt kinda empty. Score: 18/25

FINAL SCORE: 78/100