Talk:Demeyes/@comment-24040907-20150118231031/@comment-25975226-20150119004513

Hahaha thank you. I'm glad you liked it, as I'll admit this one isn't my favourite out of all of the stories I wrote. I actually based it off of a dream I had (not to go all 'Stephanie Meyer' on anyone) so I wasn't sure how to tie it all into a story. Thanks for the critique, and I hope my writing improves!