User blog:RhinoBug/Creepypasta Idea

Hey! I'm slightly new to the creepypasta fandom, I've left and joined multiple times. But now, I think I'm capable to write a story! I've been planning to contribute for a while, and I think I'm ready now. My main setup is here:

>Main character will be called "Adrian", a successful individual with a fat paycheck

>He is on annual leave

>Family is on vacation

>Adrian is watching a video

>Finds top 10 about the most cursed objects in the world

>Adrian watches video

>"Mythical Gong" is one

>Thinks it's bullshit

>It's in a museum near the Philipines, around Manilla

>Goes out to find the gong

>He finds the Gong in the museum, and it's encased in glass

>Guy breaks the glass

>Bangs the gong

>Goes to leave

>Gets caught by security

>Gets into legal trouble

>Pleads guilty

>Pays the fine

>1 week later

>Nothing has happened

>lol they lied

>2 days later guy starts hearing a low, out of tune violin, but cannot locate where the violin is

>Adrian's vision starts going blurry

>Gets hallucinations of beings following, walking and floating beside him

>Adrian starts to panic

>He tries to tell people what's happening

>People start to get concerned

>An ambulance was called

>Adrian is taken away by ambulance to the hospital

>Gets prescribed to therapist to try and calm down

>Failed attempt, he runs straight out and tries to escape

>The room starts spinning

>It just gets worse and everyone speaking is just an out of tune violin

>Adrian wonders why no one will believe him

>Is now residing in a mental hospital, muttering nonsense to himself

All constructive criticism is accepted! If there's anything you consider something unrealistic or something should be added, I'll gladly listen! Thank you for reading this, and have a great day!