Talk:Unrest/@comment-26043031-20150811030132

Your writing is very exceptional with a good use of surprises and creepiness. What makes something truly creepy is when you can't explain how it happened, and this story is truly creepy. I was hooked from the first paragraph and thoroughly enjoyed reading your piece. The ending was great, letting the reader decide how he made it out. Overall, the idea is a solid 9/10 and the execution is a 10/10. Keep on writing. -Ben