Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180813062343/@comment-25428589-20180814081159

DrBobSmith, you could try using the tag for visual separation instead? IMO it's a bit nicer to read, since it doesn't monospace everything.

Here's an example of how it would look:

"The freeway on Matt's commute home was slowed by construction. I whispered in his ear to make them move by honking. You can see him tailgating the semi, pounding the horn and cursing. Did he change the behavior of the truck ahead of him?"

"The screen cut to the cab of a big rig. The driver had long white hair and wore a T-shirt with 'Psychedelic relic' on it. 'Born to Be Wild' pounded from the truck's stereo."

"He can't see Matt and can't hear him. Matt's anger achieved nothing, except bringing him closer to me. When he did get in, I kept him miserable by telling him that everyone should have seen who he was and let him in sooner. This is a key point. Never allow a human to be grateful. Always maintain the illusion that their petty actions cause everything."