Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26873355-20151122233343/@comment-26399604-20151123232454

Hi SmidgetTheMidget,

I would like to say that the story was very well written. You did a good job describing the setting and the emotions that the character experienced while having the dreams. I will note that the story hovered more around being a FeelsPasta than a CreepyPasta. Despite this, I did enjoy it. Awesome job!

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I did note one discrepancy. I will note the area with the correction contained in the "[]":

+ I'd wake up in my bed, surrounded [by] the cruel darkness of midnight, and even though I knew it was just a dream it still felt so real.