Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-1671931-20141122175434/@comment-24784485-20141125013603

This story is good. It's well written, has a solid plot, and retains the attention of the reader. For a story that does so many things right, I almost find myself surprised that it was stopped by the spam filter. However, this story also follows a somewhat clichéd storyline, and has some grammar issues. Most of all it lacks any meaningful scares (although it manages to be plenty disturbing, which some might argue attains the same effect). for me, a guy not really interested in the videogame pastas to begin with, this story is only deserving of a 7/10. however, My review is likely slightly biased to my personal preferences.

Anyway, nice job.