Talk:But I Came to You/@comment-24616329-20140304032656

AMAZING! This story started out slow, but it was totally worth it. 9/10! I love the constant action in the middle, and the ending twist gives the whole thing a confusing yet captivating thought. Trust me, most slender man stories are horribly written, and I was a bit reluctant to read yours. I was proved wrong though, I guess... My only criticism: The swearing deterred me a bit; it added nothing to the story, but I'm not going to dictate what you can and cannot do.