Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36957522-20180927160401/@comment-35711173-20180927184942

666-Shattered-Glass,

You asked for help. I will try to give it.

This blog post is a section I copied off a trollpasta web site on how to write a trollpasta. User_blog:DrBobSmith/How_to_Write_a_Trollpasta

The "Jeff" mentioned is Jeff The Killer, a particular type of story where teenagers senselessly murder. Here is an example: Jeff_the_Killer_2015 In this equal opportunity age, we also have Jane The Killer. Here is an example. https://jtk.wikia.com/wiki/Jane_the_Killer

Please go through the list and see if your story has any of the Trollpasta features. Be honest with yourself. Then figure out how to fix it.