Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37408328-20181105181059/@comment-9041013-20181106131117

NedWolfkin wrote: BloodySpghetti wrote:

Also, how the hell could the girls' mother afford school but not decent housing conditions? I mean, living in a slum sucks... so... no one would want that for themselves. Public school would be the obvious guess (she wouldn't care enough to pay for lunches), but that wouldn't answer how she got the required supplies. The way that sentance was structured, it felt like the author was saying this was the first time she ever went to school (which in itself would have come into question). it woddled in the right direction before going Jeffy all over