Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25418458-20141026004333/@comment-25418458-20141026034636

I was experimenting with the beginning I wrote this differently an while ago so don't worry. I had written differently a few months ago but I had to stop writing for a while because life. so thank you for the feed back I just wanted to see how the extra context work. I was much better a few months ago I don't know why I sound so terrible now.