Talk:Camera Nine/@comment-4849011-20150211201023

I found myself disappointed by the ending (though there is an element of mystery and dread there), but I enjoyed the story overall. You made the character seem very human, and I enjoyed the descriptions ("...trust fund kid doing a line in the bathroom," "...shamelessly coping a feel before straightening the blouse that it wore," "He should have been relieved, but the disparity just unnerved him more," etc.).