Talk:Journal Entries/@comment-25573768-20150406000928

I lost interest in the story due to its incredible length and segmentation. It lacks any real suspense or motivation to continue reading. I'm honestly quite disappointed that this won a PotM, since its length is truly just artifical filler with a little bit of strange parts intermixed. Maybe it gets better later on, but I honestly couldn't bring myself to read through a strange list of journal entries with no recognizable names or recurring characters.