Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32289854-20180308164744/@comment-34823985-20180404190234

The 'there and gone' storm was a nice touch. You've taken care of any issues I had with the story. It's a good addition to your growing list of stories on the site. I found a couple easy fixes. -1- We hit a ditch and stopped. Everything was silent there was no rain, no thunder. -2- but the ground was as dry as ever. I remembered that I needed to check on Gorge.