Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36772767-20180831051828/@comment-36772767-20180831202141

I definitely am taking all the advice in and actively working on a couple different pointers. Organization being a big one. For example, I decided to make the diary entry the jumping off point, so it doesn't break up the story and the timeline will hopefully make it flow better. Got rid of the unnecessary bullet points and a couple other things. Thanks again for reading!!!