Talk:The Stray/@comment-4470175-20160806012906

I like the concept. It is, for the most part, well written. However, I do have a few issues with it. The first being that the story doesn't explain why all the neighbours were really excited about the new people. It set up quite a scary feel to the pasta, but all the tension was diminshed once the dog came in. I also have a few problems with the whole plot of the creepypasta. How did it get into the house? Why did it want to get into the house? To eat the people? Why wasn't the rifle loaded?

The climax was clever and made the story feel whole. But I don't think this entirely makes up for all the unanswered questions left at the end.

7/10