Talk:7 Gates of Hell/@comment-36711908-20180826160058

I like the ending but the entire rest of the story was disappointing. It sounded like the entire story was rushed. As if someone was holding the author at gunpoint saying 'Write a medium length story or die'

To make it clear the grammar was horrible. I will take it into consideration that your first language might not be English but you have to learn and use correct grammar if you want to write an English story.

I'm giving you 3.5/10

3 for the ending and 0.5 for the potential, keep on writing.