Talk:Exhausted/@comment-Jimmy gr-20160820103947/@comment-Anarchic Operations-20160829092709

Thankyou again for the kind words. This was my first attempt at a journal-style story, and I really enjoyed writing it. As for the story sometimes feeling a little over-explanative, I think that really boils down to personal opinion. I actually wrote out the main plot in dot points before I put myself in the writers shoes and wrote those plot points down in journal-form. The story is written how I would have written in a journal. I suppose the only real explanation I can give to the description being quite detailed is that Keith can not really tell anybody this in person, so he goes to great length to write this in this journal similarly to how he would tell another person. At least - that's how I write in my journals. I guess you could also say that he was writing in extensive detail in case he decided to read over it again in the future, or if there came a time somebody would want to read his journal. Thanks again for the comment and stay tuned to see more of my stories in the future, as you seem to enjoy them! Bold textItalic textA_O.