Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-28266772-20160513154707/@comment-27838637-20160516041701

I believe his story was longer than two sentences, and in my opinion ChristianWallis is a pretty good writer.

You must have missed the link to his already published story on the wiki, also called 'Give It Everything'. The one sentence was simply a short overview or 'blurb' to his main story.

But great work Christian, I can't really provide any feedback as the story you have is well developed and well written. There is not much more you can add to it. Maybe it will even get CreepyPasta of the Month!

A_O.