Talk:My Baby/@comment-24821182-20140520044137/@comment-24077689-20140521174427

Granted, my usage of metaphor does go into the excessive.

I was hoping that I had conveyed that the ghost girl was a manifestation of his wife in the formative years of their relationship, which is why she's in her early teens.

I'm not really how I could possibly be more vague or use metaphor at the end of the story without leaving it overly open-ended. My hope was that it'd be subtle enough that you were unsure of what he does or what she does or if there even is a ghost at all. I'm trying to think about how I could fix this set up.