Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20141018083456/@comment-24996913-20141018201031

Banning- I'm definitely going to provide some more backstory and why she ran away. I'll also probably add in a scene as to why she participates in mma. Thanks for the in depth feedback as always.

Rule- I have nightmares all of the time, but this one really got me. It was downright awful, but thanks for your feedback. I do want to say that she was transforming back into her original form. She ran away from her mate who happened to be the lake monster of Lake Erie. Hope that clarified some things.

Jay- Thanks for pointing out the errors. I actually prefer what you've suggested. I will add more to this story, as it may be confusing to those who did not envision it as I did last night. When I'm done, I'll probably resubmit it on here just to be sure it's well done.