Talk:Perdition University/@comment-35711173-20190523111456

It reminds me of my own story Damnation 101 and I like it, but you have some definite issues.


 * You made up categories Devil, Hell, and Demon.
 * You have more than one speaker in the same paragraph, a mortal sin in English.
 * You have committed numerous sins against the English language in spelling, grammar, punctuation, and conventions.

Please, please take this story to the Writer's Workshop in the forum. There people will help you get this story to reach its full potential.