Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25989964-20150109183145/@comment-25989964-20150114022638

Honestly thank you. That actually gave me several ideas on how to improve this. I really appreciate the imput and though I know having an overpowered smaller creature is a bit over done it's sorta part of the character. There's a reason why the smallest one is Jack's right hand 'man', because it's the strongest of them all. I was somewhat hoping that the fact that it could knock a door down on its own would make it clear that it was capable of more than any of the others on their own. I guess I could just make that my own secret and just have the others bash down the door themselves. Thank you again