Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30891328-20170121204936/@comment-7064562-20170123010217

No. I will tell you why the text is black.

Every writing software or progam or ap, such as windows or google docs, have you write in black and have the background white like a page. Howver the wiki is grey and has white text, so when you copy and paste, your color text transports over with the story.

This is the new dolphin. See I went to docs and made my typing bold red.

As for the story, it's bad. First no explaination is given for the characters actions. If a character does something odd or a common thing nobody else does, you need to explain there thoughts. However after these odd actions, he does things normal people can't do like track a phone number he got. If he didn't think "I'm coming for you" was scary when its night time and rainging out, why would he give it a second thought and even be able to track a number to an adress? Next it changes between first and third person, hard to follow, no actual creative writing at all, it's like you just massed sentances in there, and it's over all boring and cliche and built on conquendeces casued by the main characters stupid actions. It's really just bad over all, best to scrap it and bash your head into the wall a bit hopening it will up your iq.