Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20190214004437/@comment-33904527-20190214225929

BloodySpghetti wrote: Oh... now that's a thing of beauty, but I think I know what was bothering me before. The word exoskeleton, I've heard how the US army is planning to apply these on a wide scale sooner or later, it's basically a metal frame that takes all the effort off of you (aside from carrying its weight) during action. Exoskeleton is the shell of insects as well.

So, perhaps "Android" would suit better? Not cyborg however, as Elliot is a cyborg.

The rest of this story is pretty much good to go on air.

So, see if you can switch that exoskeleton thing and shoot for the stars I've changed all the mentions of "exoskeleton" to "android" or something similar (I've done this with the version actually published on the wiki, not the writer's workshop version).

I'd greatly appreciate it if you were willing to nominate the pasta for POTM this month :), if you think it's good enough. It would be nice to get some exposure.