Talk:Apparition/@comment-5101683-20180515022831

Good on you for changing the ending. I think it's well-written, and even though I've seen this storyline before, it doesn't feel worn-out. Maybe it's because nothing is revealed about the ghost, not even that it is a ghost except for that category.

The reason I commented was because I realized a. that you changed the story so it became better and b. that this disproves the assumption I had that the reason stories were bad was because they were clichéd; this story is original in the correct places, and so it does not feel clichéd.