Talk:Summer Break/@comment-4849011-20170430225058

First off, I apologize for the delay. I meant to do this much sooner, but it slipped through the cracks somehow.

Elfin-airships taking out your tree houses and pesky fire witches- two of the many inconveniences of modern life. Seriously, though, I once again have occasion to praise the richness of your description and the interweaving of your various stories. The description of the monster resembling soiled rags and jellyfish slime was one of those great graphic moments, and the description of the children being made to look like elves was creepy (Apostle Paul talked about being all things to all people, but that's not remotely what he meant. For that matter, one is not supposed to use the Holy Lamb Book the way Jane was). The references to the New Jersey Devil and the Weird Sisters were great. Shoot, there are a lot of great references (from Oiwa lanterns to Looney Tunes). The ending is one of those that makes you go, "I don't know what this means, but I know it's bad!"