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Saying this needs editing would be an understatement. The spacing is WAY off, grammar errors run amuck and the spelling is abysmal. My suggestion would be for you to put this in Microsoft Word to change some of the basic spelling and grammar errors. From there you may be able to redeem this pasta.

Don't lose hope though. The plot has some real potential.