Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26268104-20161003223019/@comment-24101790-20161004204612

Creeper50 wrote: Not the technical part. The part of finding flaws and revising them.

I think you might want to work on the mechanical parts of your writing, read more stories (learning more about tropes, character development, etc.), and generally devote more time to reading novels outside of creepy pasta to pick up more on styles, methods, and approaches to writing.