Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26671016-20141229210634/@comment-25170312-20141229212712

Well, I don't really see anything wrong with it. I usually hate poetry, but I don't hate it so it must be at least kinda good, lol. Maybe it was deleted because someone thought it was just a bunch of cliches all mixed together. Or maybe it was because it doesn't go anywhere. But I liked it because I didn't personify the dread. I read it as if it was all a metaphor for what dread feels like. Maybe the person who deleted didn't see it that way.