Talk:City Boy/@comment-25471033-20190325215352

I liked this a lot. The vocabulary was great, the detail was *just* enough that perfectly described the scene, but not too much to get in the way, and same with the twist at the end. There was enough turns and small changes in detail to show that something is happening, or about to happen, but not too much where I don't understand what's happening and why. The only small thing I noticed was small word-usage: In the beginning the narrator mentions that he's dangling from his window. Does he mean that he's literally half way on his window, hanging from it, or like he got hit and fell on the window? I don't know, I guess just a different word might help here instead of "dangling". 9.5/10

My one question though: When they talk about the "rig" at the end, do they mean the truck that hit him, or like the "heaven" of sorts that awaits him after?