Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25839052-20140927050701/@comment-25839052-20140928074356

EmpyrealInvective wrote:

Vampire385 wrote:

EmpyrealInvective wrote: Minor edit to punctuation, I would still hint/allude to the object's power/ability. Other than that, it seems like it would fit into the other Holder Pastas Where is the punctuation error? I corrected it, but when a character speaks, there needs to be a comma/colon. Por ejemplo: Immediately ask him "What will happen when they all come together?" I fixed it last night. Por ejemplo???? Is that Spanish for For Example? Well, off it goes to Spinpasta.