Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27280438-20160114125758/@comment-2240864-20160114161152

This story is full of numerous mistakes, such as punction errors (spaces before a comma, lack of spacing between punctation/sentences), capitalization errors (and inconsistant capitalization at that), a total lack of paragraph separation, and several cliches like voodoo dolls and the "ultra spooky" 666 number appearing.