Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25389683-20140907073134/@comment-35711173-20181124224057

DontpKaniC,

If a story isn't readable, people won't read it. When it's tough to read, fewer people read it. E-mails in that form are hard to read. When that much of the story is nonsense material, I flip to the next one.

Every time you put **** instead of a name, it stops you. That kills suspension of disbelief. Why not put John? Oh, it's censored and redacted. No, that doesn't work well here, especially SO much of it for basic information.