Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30514640-20170121223355/@comment-30514640-20170125232352

I'll try to bring my next story over here to the Writer's Workshop board to avoid having another story deleted a few minutes after it is updated. I thank you for your criticism, and am glad that my story isn't the worst ever! I will try to improve my writing skills and am thankful that I have received criticism instead of just having my story essentially swept under the rug or worse, moved to Trollpasta wiki with me having no say in the matter.

Again, I will attempt to write a better story next time, and thank you for your criticism.