Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26153435-20150301010738/@comment-25975226-20150301071614

There are quite a number of errors in this story. Silly mistakes, and mistakes that can be fixed quite easily if you read over this again thoroughly.

Examples: sentences that are way too long - "  Lucian stopped his crying and looked at his father almost pleadingly not to do it but he knew it was a fruitless attempt because he saw that blood thirsty look his father would exhibit whenever he was out to kill the animals that live in their farm."

Misspelt words - "percised" (precise), "carcuss" (carcus), "cry's (cries), etc.

Missing apostrophes and words - " Lucians thick black boots" (Lucian's),  " the horse inhabited majority of the space" (the majority).

Please go over your story once more and fix up these errors. 