Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37230542-20181018161859

''Hi all, could you please review my story! Thank you in advance''



Hi James!

Sorry about this really random letter all of a sudden, I just wanted a chance to get all my feelings written down so if this doesn’t make much sense, I am sorry. I’m your classmate Ebony, you know, the one with the purple bag. Anyway, I am writing this letter to you to tell you how I truly feel about you. I care so much about you! Like seriously! I know we don’t really speak much, and I think you only ever said ‘nice bag’ to me that one time but I just can’t get you off my mind. I can’t stop thinking about you. When I go to bed at night, you’re in my head. When I wake up in the morning, you’re literally the first thing I think about. When I shower, when I watch TV- when I even eat my dinner! You’re always in my head! You’re so perfect and sweet. Being in your presence alone sends my heart fluttering. Even when I gaze at your photographs on my bedroom wall it makes me picture us together. 

I just had a problem, and that was your girlfriend Kelly. I did think she was nice, she helped me revise for my science exam and I passed because of her! So please don’t think I hated her or anything because I could never hate someone! But I just didn’t think she was right for you and I wished you broke up with her sooner. She didn’t love you like how I love you. And she never truly treasured you; you deserve to be treasured after all! Because of how amazing you are. And I treasure you every day. You have no idea! I sometimes watch you from your bedroom window and just sigh as I am reminded of how much of a wonderful person you are. You complete me.  I like to watch you sleep. You’re just so peaceful and it’s such an adorable sight! I enjoy listening to the sound of your heartbeat as well! Your heart that I hope will belong to me soon. The sound is so comforting and makes me feel like I’m home. Because you are my home. You’re my everything. And Kelly won’t see that. She will never see that. You didn’t deserve her. You don’t deserve any of those girls or boys at school. You deserve someone who truly knows how special you are. And just to prove how much I love you and how loyal I will be to you, I’ve removed Kelly from the picture.

Don’t worry. I haven’t forced her to break up with you or anything. I’m not that horrible! I couldn't mess with a woman's feelings like that. But she definitely won’t be bothering us again. Ever. But I know that she meant a lot to you. Attached to this letter you’ll find a small parcel. There’s a piece of Kelly in there, something to remember her by. I’m not cruel, I wouldn’t make you forget about your ex girlfriend! I know that you liked her eyes so keep them! It’s my gift to you.

We’ll be together soon, James. I just know it. I love you so much. I hope you realise this. Nobody could ever love you as much as I love you. You’ll come to accept my feelings really soon. Kelly isn’t here anymore, so nothing is standing in the way between you and I.

When you are ready, unlock your bedroom door.

Yours and only yours

Ebony   <3    