User blog comment:Mikku3/Deleted Pasta (not a story)/@comment-10950063-20140724215803

No.

First off, your story was a wall of text. Secondly, it seems to just be fanfiction for this game. We don't allow fanfiction. I'm assuming this is fanfiction, because I don't know anything about this game and the story is absolutely incomprehensible. If it weren't just straight fanfiction there would be some human element that would be understandable.

"  Things are a little bit weird in Bismark, i saw even more terrifying and more dangerous baby creatures that give more exp. and Didney World has no door... Things are fucked up. fucked up i tell you." Later, he did not go to zone 3, he got to the room. "Okay, i'm back at the room, however i am now fighting against an evil baby called Hugo. He can't even attack, so i'm gonna beat him very easily." "

Poorly written, no description, everything is glossed over. Things are introduced for seemingly no reason. Is there a plot? Ellipses everywhere for no reason.

The Batter used Add-On help

The Judge lost 27 HP

The Judge used Ultimate Power Mock Obey attack.

The Batter lost 100 HP

The Batter used Kick, PUNCH!

The Judge lost 178 HP

The Judge used The Most powerful attack ever.

The Batter lost 1600 HP

The Batter used OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

The Judge lost 1000 HP

The Judge used Dude, What the Fucking Fuck Fuck Fuck?

The Batter lost 100 HP

Adversaries Purified

Why? Is this supposed to be funny? If it was, it would ruin the tone of whatever you were trying to do.

So, no, your story isn't coming back. Also, in the future, take responsibility for your own work. Don't post it until you've finished editing and write in a word processing program.