Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27905100-20170321143754/@comment-5038030-20170325140119

Few Wording Issues

 * [I flicked on the light, the sharp buzzing startled me, knocking me off me feet, before scrabbling on the hardwood floor to regain my balance.]
 * [He had wanted to be a singer growing up, and it still showed, even though it has been more than a decade since his last voice lesson.]

Insights: Enjoyable to indulge upon; looking towards its finalization.