Talk:Tap...Tap...Tap.../@comment-25291276-20140813092154

Hey I genuinly didn't see the twist comming! maybe if the story is competely remade to add character development(nothing that would give away the twist) and some more time to show how annoying and maddening the tapping is, this could be really really nice. the ending with the cop is just silly, though. Maybe tie him in in some other way, like replace him with a mad scientist that was conducting an experiment.

Anyway, it's a good 5/10 just for that twist.