Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-27154832-20160801002039/@comment-27154832-20160803015333

Well you certainly wrote a lot here and I appreciate that you read this and gave it a review. I will take this critisim into serious consideration to help write better stories. I will admit that after reading it over and over agian I do understand what is wrong here. The story has alot pronouncing and spelling errors, plus the horror elements are really forced in. I will defently not put caps into my stories ever again unless necessary. I will also make sure the plots in my story make sense. Thank you.