Talk:The Proprietor/@comment-24675373-20140324162911

I greatly dislike pastas with the "you" narrative and I'll tell you why-

No, I do not wake up at 5 am for work. No, I would not have reacted as such to the new world, let alone call it hell then correct myself.

It ruins that suspension of disbelief being told what Im doing over hearing the tale happen to a third party, the narrator. Then it becomes a story of "...this could happen to me, too." over "....yeah, none of that happened or will happen."

Interesting concept, narrative should change. 6/10