Talk:Mullaghbrack/@comment-25941663-20160613235737/@comment-28266772-20160614144344

Thank you very much for the positive feedback! And as for the middle I think you're right. I actually cut around a thousand words out which detailed their being trapped in more detail, but I was very concerned about keeping the story short. I tried to be economical, but I think I wound up cutting content which would have been useful to keep in, I think next time I won't let length bother me so much.