Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20180317200228/@comment-9041013-20180317214103

Icydice wrote: So I actually really did like this. You tend to overuse commas a lot, but that's okay. As for the story I really enjoyed it. It like a little action in my horror story and this gave me a huge thrill. This may be my personal opinion, but after you clean this up I'd consider this trilogy to be better than mine. Great job on this Bloody!!! Awww, thanks man. (Now I just need to make it as famous xd) I did fix the comma issue.