Talk:"The Kite" Game/@comment-30544436-20180830163328

6/10. Honestly, it was a fun read. It stayed much closer to realism then most in it's genre, and didn't use the 'game is talking to me directly ooh spooky' plot like many other game-based pastas do which was a breath of fresh air. However, that's about as much praise as I can give. Because of the detailed writing style, the narrator seemed to get sidetracked too often and I found myself skimming over some sections as I waited for something interesting to happen. Overall an intruiging concept that was held back by a disjointed, sometimes confusing writing style.