Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27018401-20141110173203/@comment-25439157-20141117061938

TheDarkMaster99 wrote: Bubblegum 366 wrote: This is a cliché, actually. I've given it a brief read and it's got more mistakes than I can count and it's blatantly obvious that you didn't proofread it. I'm more than sure it'll be deleted in an instant if it is posted on the site.

It also has so many punctuation errors, and so many ellipses and exclamation marks it's not even funny. It's a blend herobrine, and 0)_(0 and all the haunted files/video game pastes ever made. And it's frankly terrible. I'm not gonna even try to fight back to this.My only question is: Can you do something better? You know,since you got some experience here and i'm a complete noob.... I don't think you can change it for the better. My point was that it's a haunted file pasta, isn't it? With demon rituals and a strange character in a video game who can kill people. There are quite a few stories on here that are just the same, which makes this one somewhat unremarkable, and even laughable to many. If you do want to post it, you'll have to go through Project:Spinoff Appeal.

Anyway, my advice is that you shouldn't post it at all. I'm not trying to stir up a fight, or ridicule you/your story. It's an honest opinion.