Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31966463-20170614025802/@comment-24101790-20170620032947

Sweetbred wrote: Ayy, forgot to thank you for reviewing my previous submission. Really glad you liked it even though I can't help but think it was pretty weak. So thanks~

And yeah, I agree with a lot of what you said here. I'm really embarrassed by how lazy this short story came out. I'll redo this whole thing when I can. I just don't think these suggestions alone would be enough to save this story. I'll keep them in mind though. Thanks again!

No problem, best of luck with the revisions when you decide to re-work the story. Have a good one.