Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-1186783-20141229015738/@comment-25170312-20141230033010

Well, the first thing I would do is change the second victim to someone other than his cellmate, or add in another victim. You should establish that he has long range killing abilities before the senator. He mentions wanting to be in solitary because he's afraid of the other inmates getting suspicious, but maybe after the first two deaths they could leave him without a cellmate. Then he could kill someone in the prison remotely which would show he's more dangerous than they thought. They might think he has some kind of power, but they won't know it has anything to do with the mirror. Maybe they put him in solitary thinking it would stop him, but then the senator's death proves that he can still kill as long as he has something shiny. I can't really come up with a way for him to have something shiny in solitary without it being unrealistic, but maybe people can suspend their disbelief. How big does the object have to be? Maybe he could sneak something off one of the guards before they throw him in the cell like a badge or a buckle.