Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25490017-20191114095746/@comment-9041013-20191119113306

This is really good, I've to say. The name "Rica" is kind of weird, but that's fine.

I like how she's consistent in her being a germophobe. The climax is unique and rather original. This is fairly good storytelling you don't see here frequently.

It's overall pretty tidy and nice but you've got some grammatical issues and your person of speech changes randomly in the middle of the story. Proofread it again and then it should be fine.