Talk:Deathbed Table/@comment-5886533-20140403025405

Woah. That was surprisingly good. 9/10! I went in expecting for it to suck once I saw how short it was. But in that small space you worked wonders! I loved how it was written as a message to the daughters. I didn't realize that until the end. And the ending was very unique! Pacing=PERFECTION. There are several grammatical mistakes in there, but nothing that takes away from the story too badly. Great job!