Talk:Laughing Jack/@comment-26495901-20150614141133

Okay, out of ten id give it 6 maybe 6.5.

It is a good story, yes it has many horror cliches within it (maybe a bit too many) but ill overlook most of them. The gor is a bit over done. I, personally, wouldnt have included the grusome display of the dog (the dogs name "Fido" also irritated me a lot...because well...Fido...really?)

The asylum ending is nice, its simple, and although over used in many short horror stories i dont think that its a bad ending for this story.

I know a creepypasta is meant (or is usually) written in first person, which can be a bit annoying for me. But i didnt minus a point for that.

I like the use of the candy, that was clever and interesting to read but i would have liked to have seen more of that.

Best part of this story is the character of Laughing Jack, he is pretty cool. I love weird and strange horror characters and i like the way his character design looks.

I am new to creepy pasta's as i just got dragged here thanks to horror novels.