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The cop

A cop is driving in the streets at 1 am. While he is driving he sees a boy walking on the sidewalk. He was wearing a coat a cap with sony headphones and he had a school bag. The cop stops the car and calls the boy

"Hey boy!"

The boy didn't answer and kept walking. The cop gets out the car and walks to him saying

"Hey!".

The cop pulls out his flashlight and shined it on his bag. He sees that the bottom of his bag is dripping blood. The cop was shocked and stopped the boy, he said

"Boy what's in the bag."

The boy only said

"Don't look in my bag."

The cop grabbed the bag and put it down on the floor. The boy said

"Don't look in my bag."

The cop slowly opened the bag and saw a human head. The cop slowly looked up in fear and saw the boy's eyes was black with white pupils crying blood. The cop was terrified. The boy said

"I told you to not look in my bag."

The boy pulls out a knife and says

"You're Next."

The cop started running, but no matter where he ran he saw the boy and his white pupils. He tripped and broke his ankle, he turned around and saw the boy standing over him. The boy bends overs and smiles. He pulls out his knife and stabs the cop's eyes. The boy says

"Now you can't look in my bag."

The boy proceeds to slowly cut his neck. The last thing the cop did was release a loud scream. The boy has removed the cop's head from his body. The boy puts the cop's head in his bag then walks away.

How it Started

The boy was a 11 year old child who never talks to anybody. He always sat in the back of the class by himself. He never even talked. One day at school three kids came to him and tried to talk to him. One kid said

"Hey stupid why don't you talk."

The boy said nothing. They tried everything to get him to talk. They shoved him, they made fun of him, they even spat on him. The boy showed no response. The kid said

"What's in the bag."

The boy said nothing. The kid slowly reached for the bag. The boy quickly grabbed his bag and said

"Don't look in my bag."

The kid's curiosity grew wondering what's in the boy's bag. School was over and everyone went home. The boy was waiting for his parents to come pick him up. The three kids came and stood in front of him. One of the kid said

" Give me your bag."

The boy said

"No."

The two kids quickly held down the boy while the other kid grabbed his bag. The kid opened his and what he saw was terrifying. He saw a bloody knife and two hands. The kid said

"You're sick what's wrong with you!"

The boy said

"You looked in my bag now you're next!"

The kid took the knife and stood over the boy. He used the knife to shine the light on the boy's eyes. The boy starting screaming in pain the light was burning his eyes. The boy's parents finally came and the three kids ran away. His parent saw him sitting down holding his bag. They rushed to him and the boy looked up. The parents saw that his eyes were black with white pupils and he was crying blood. The parents were terrified of their son. They took the boy to the doctor and the doctor said that the boy has been traumatized. The doctor said

"Take him home and let's hope he breaks through."

Three days later the boy broke through. The parents were relief that their son has broke through. The parents said

"Do you want to go back to school."

The boy said

"No, not yet."

Kid #1

It's 1 am, the boy got up and walked out. He went to the 1st kid's house (the first kid to hold him down). The kid was in his room playing his video games. His mom yelled

"GO TO SLEEP!!"

The kid closes his game then the lights. The kid had a sudden urge to look out his window. When he looked out he saw the boy looking at him. The kid rubbed his eyes then the boy was gone. The kid proceeds to go back to sleep on his bed. Suddenly his mother screams so loud it woke him. The kid rushed downed to his mother's room. He entered his mother's room to only see his mother's throat slit and the boy standing over her. The boy turned his head and smiled. He said

"You're Next."

The kid rushed in his room and locked the door. He looked at his mirror and he only saw the boy and his white pupils. The kid lost it and jumped out his window. The kid passed out for a few minutes. When he woke up all he saw was the boy's smile. The boy said

"Good you woke up now you can watch yourself die."

The kid was hurt from the fall and he couldn't get up. The boy took his knife and proceeded to slowly cut off his arms. The boy said

"Now you can't hold me down ever again."

The kid started screaming in pain. Tears went down his cheek he cried out

"Please leave me alone I won't ever do it again!!"

The boy looked at him and smiled and said

"You're right you won't ever do it again."

The boy slit the kid's throat. Everything gone quiet. The boy picked up the arms and put it in his bag then walked home. When he got home his mom said

"What's in the bag son."

The boy smiled and said

"Nothing just stuff. Don't worry about it"

Kid #2

Next day it's 1 am. The boy is ready to kill his next victim. He left his house and started walking on the sidewalk. The boy sees the second kid that held him down on the street. He saw a shovel then he took it and started following the kid. As the kid was walking he started hearing footsteps.


 * tap* *tap* *tap*

The kid felt uneasy and started walking faster. But as he walks faster the footsteps got louder.


 * TAP* *TAP* *TAP*

The kid started running. But the footsteps got louder and louder, then suddenly it stop. The kid stops to take a breath. The boy then took the shovel and swing as hard as he can at the kid's head and the kid passed out. The kid woke up to only realize that he that he was chained up. The kid asked

"Where am I."

The boy walked out and showed himself. He said

"You held me down while your friend looked in my bag."

The kid started crying out

"I'm sorry, i never wanted to hold you down."

The boy shouted

"LIAR!! All you kids do is lie. You people always lie for no reason. You lie anyway not even caring how the other person will feel."

The boy smiles

"It doesn't matter anyway because you people are born with lies and will die with lies."

The boy took his knife and walked to the kid. The boy said

"Tell me what did you seen in my bag and I will let you live"

The kid screamed

"I didn't see anything!!"

The boy chopped off one of his hand. They kid screamed and cried in pain. The boy said

"I don't like to be lied to. Now I'm going to ask you again, what did you see in my bag."

The kid screamed

" Ok Ok I saw a pair of hands and a bloody knife."

They boy smiled and said

"Good you told the truth."

The kid said

"Will you let me live."

The boy smiled and said

"I lied."

The boy stab the kid's head, removed his head, and stab it on a pole. The boy smiled and walked home. When he came home his dad ask

"What's in the bag son."

The boy turned and smiled and said

"Nothing, just don't look in my bag."

Kid #3

Third day 1 am. He goes out to seek out his final victim. The boy goes to the kid's house. The light was on the family was still awake. The boy goes and cut the power off. The family screamed in fear. The boy walked in and one by one he killed each family member. The kid turned the emergency power on he saw his family all dead. The kid screamed

"YOU'RE INSANE!!"

The boy grabbed the kid and threw him against the wall. The boy slowly walked to him. The kid was to scared to move. The boy looked at him eye to eye and smiled. The boy said

"I'm not insane I'm broken. I'm going to tell you a story. Just to make sure you won't run,"

The boy chopped off the kids feet and hands. The kid screamed in pain. The boy said

"Ok here is my story. I was in love with a girl and she loved me we held hands and she even took my first kiss. She said we will be together forever. Few days later I saw her with another boy. I was heart broken. So I chopped her hands and put them in my bag. Those hands you saw was my ex's hands. This is why I hate liars, then can just die. That's my story, now my question to you is have you ever lied?"

The kid screamed

"No I never lied in my life!!"

The boy looked at the kid again and sighed. He said

"All you people are the same. You shouldn't deserve those eyes if all you see is lies."

The boy slowly stabbed the kids eyes. Then boy slowly cut his neck open and removes it. He put the head in his bag. He proceeds to walk home then he was stopped by a cop

And well you know the rest.

Thirst for Blood

The boy finally came home after killing the cop. The boy's parent was wondering what was in his bag. The boy went to his room sat down and thought about the kids he murdered. He loved it, it made him happy that he murder people. The boy proceeds to go to sleep after a long day. While he was sleeping he heard sounds of rambling. He awoke to see his parents looking through his bag. The boy screamed

"I TOLD YOU TO NOT LOOK IN MY BAG!!"

The parents were terrified to see that in his bag it contained human body parts. They were shocked to see that their son has became a murderer. The father said

"You... You're a monster!!"

The boy stood up and started laughing. He started laughing louder and louder then stopped. The lights suddenly closed and it was pitch black. The parents hear their son saying

"You're Next."

Everything goes quiet then the mother hear a scream from the father. The mother tried to run but she wasn't fast enough. The boy caught her and slit her throat. The lights then turned back on. The boy stood over his dead parents and started laughing. Tears of blood was going down his cheeks. The boy then started saying

"I want more..... I need more."

His thirst for blood grew more and more after each kill. He head out and started looking for his next victims. He attracts his victims by leaving his bag on the sidewalk next to a light. The victim would then have a sudden urge to walk near the bag. The boy would then walk to his victim and say

"Look in my bag."

If they refuse, the boy would start to stalk them. The boy would keep saying

"Look in my bag."

If the choose to look in his bag. The boy would look at his victim and smile and say

"You're Next."

The victim would start running. The boy laughed and said

"They always run."

He loved chasing his victims the more they ran the more he loved it. The boy would then knock out his victims and take them to his slaughter house. No matter how many people he killed his thirst for blood grew.

The boy has been spotted walking on the sidewalks at 1 am. If he ask you to look in his bag don't look. If you look YOU'RE NEXT 