Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34972536-20180411123142/@comment-33470154-20180412141346

ArcOfRuin wrote: Is this meant to be serious? So far, this story makes no sense. I know it’s a WiP, but there is no real body. Most WiP’s have at least some story to critique, but so far I don’t see anything at all. The grammar and wording needs help. It seems forced and doesn’t have much flow at all. Referencing Creepypasta is generally looked down on, as it ruins the immersion. Also, the Creepypasta is called Username:666, not User 666.