Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34541920-20180228234724/@comment-25926760-20180301040344

ThatStalinLeader wrote: Aeternum Nox wrote: Couple quick tid bits I can offer from reading arguably almost every damn ritual pasta posted. (I'm a fan, and I'm not embarassed to say I've tried at least some of them). Also, as a devout follower of the Celtic and Norse pantheons, this strikes a bit close to home.

Renaming it a bit can help clarify. If you're only contacting Loki, reference it in the title.

ADDENDUM POST SCRIPT: Wow, that was more than "a couple quick tid bits." Sorry if I triggered some sort of flash back (forward? I don't know) to high school English/Literature classes. It was a decent ritual pasta. Keep working. The more you write, the better you get. Right then. I'm using a mobile device to write this pasta, (it's shit), so the capitalising of the word god may be just cause of autocorrect. Also, I know about the four tileds :l

I'm actually Swedish and have been living in America for a few years now, so that was kinda my persuasion.

ThatStalinLeader (talk) 03:58, March 1, 2018 (UTC)(ThatStalinLeader) Loki Welch Sorry for any redundacy to your knowledge then. Just didn't seem it. My bad! I can understand the usage of phones/tablets/etc when writing pastas. Just as long as you correct it before posting, then you'll have a stronger chance of the story being well received.

Please don't take my criticism as harsh. It truly is an enjoyable concept, and a ritual a younger me would have tried the day after I read it. I just hope some of my suggestions helped.

And my belated welcome to the US! Apologies that our administration has gone south. Cheers!