Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26924905-20141215010554/@comment-25428589-20141216071335

SnkEydKrisice wrote: Underscorre wrote: ... Don't be sorry for your honesty. I love it when people actually tell me what they think rather than a, "dis sucks ass bro." Honestly, this didn't have much effort as I was just practicing my writing with this story. But thanks, these reviews actually help me to improve. :) No problem :)

I can definitely see potential in this and I would advise that you keep working on it because it seems like it could be an extremely good pasta if you fixed a couple of the issues.