Talk:Funnymouth/@comment-30315955-20150421144931/@comment-26054278-20150427151353

I don't see that as a major problem mainly because nearly every 1st-person pasta has this problem. The main character dies/goes insane and it leaves open this plothole in a lot of these 1st-person stories, but I don't mind mainly because I can enjoy it for the story that it is.

Also, I believed that this whole story was from the mind of this person and what he was seeing as opposed to him writing it all down. The beginning seems to be conveying the story to the audience and pointing out this creature before it delves into his mind and his eventual insanity.

Personally, I wouldn't have liked the stalker element quite as much because that was literally the whole point of the pasta earlier. I would have saw it as more of a letdown as opposed to being a creepy ending. Alright, so he is being stalked and his jaw is broken by some creature. Where do you go from there? I see it as not only being not too scary/creepy (as we already knew he was being stalked), but also as being way too open-ended.

The insanity ending works because it shows the effect this creature has had on the psyche of the main character and how this character really is effected by the constant stalker around him. You can say the creepy part is him being stalked, but it really doesn't go anywhere if we don't know too much about how this main character is effected by this. He was angry and horrified earlier, so having him angry and horrified at the end wouldn't have been anything new or really anything of substance.

Just my thoughts. If you still disagree, then you are completely entitled to your opinion.