Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26112985-20150728001331/@comment-26112985-20150728230654

AMarbleHornet wrote: Alright, it's a pretty well written story. I think the use of Death is a bit of a cliché, but nowadays it's hard to think of purely unique creatures, so no points deducted on that. It's much better than a lot of the prattle you can find by selecting the "Random Pasta" button, so it's my pleasure to review it. I must say this, I would like to read the ending, should you decide to finish this project. The one thing that struck me was that it isn't all that uncommon for a seven year old to have an imaginary friend (I believe that people start to kick them at the latest of eight) so the mother's reaction was a bit much. Besides that, well done. Thanks! I fixed the error about the son being only seven years old as well as generally making the story look better by spiffing everything up. Would you like me to notify you whenever I get another segment of this pasta up? Its not something I intend to abandon.