Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29742724-20160824153259/@comment-28266772-20160826135254

So looking at this it's clear you write to a very high standard. There's no real feedback to be offered, although at times you do, once again, struggle to make things clear. Nonetheless this story is a great read, and goes above and beyond the quality standards of the site. I could not see any mechanical errors, but it might be worth re-reading it yourself to verify that since I'm not exactly Sherlock Holmes when it comes to detail. Beyond that the style, plot, and structure all work and do not require further feedback.

I hope you find this a bit more encouraging.