Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4138999-20150116202428

Hi this is my first creepypasta and its about aliens. I really was excitied about this one because I'm a big fan of the alien part of the paranormal and this story was inspired and has photos from a real case of someone sighting aliens in London in 1999, although mine is set in Indiana in 1995 and has lots of orignal ideas. It got deleted and an admin said I should put it here after I went thorugh it and revised it, doing things like removing anything that made it less scary and made the climax better. For example I changed "Riley joked to himself that he was going mad," to "with the horrible feeling of being chased by a mysterious presecne behind him." Here's the story, it does come with some really spine-chilling photos of some aliens that were part of the actual case but not in this copy of it, but I don't think they matter too much right now. http://nine.wikia.com/wiki/User_talk:Death4#My_creepypasta 