Talk:The Girl with the Stitched Lips/@comment-24450775-20150426194434

Short, but to the point. The protagonist is fairly believable, and the Stitched mouth girl was creepy. Not really anything I would change about the narrative or writing, so good job there. The one thing I did not get was the part about the old family's daughter being a teen when she disappeared. Perhaps this is signifigant, but I'm afraid it is lost on me.

8/10