Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37261931-20181126193445/@comment-36627132-20181126195858

Spelling and Grammar Issues: For the most part, the spelling and grammar are actually good. However there are a few problems. Some paragraphs are stuck to the bottom of their predecessors. You left a double space before "We’re not going down without a fight!".

Plot Issues: Before addressing any plot issues, I do have to say that I find the idea for a pirate-themed Creepypasta to be refreshing. It certainly isn't something we see everyday, very unique. Now on to the plot problems. I feel that a lot of this is just filler, especially the dream sequence. Although it is a good story, I'm not really sure if it works as a Creepypasta.