Talk:The Zebra/@comment-31077845-20170308031830

The premise of the story is good, and maybe this makes me a bad person but I kinda like the fact that the protagonist for once wasn't really the victim or the perpetrator, but rather just a bystander. I...guess that means you could kinda say he WAS a zebra, but that's besides the point. I do suppose the ending was rushed now that the others mention it, although I lack any specific, worthwhile advice on how to improve that. So good, and I guess this video must only work on children since it didn't make the police go crazy.