Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24785169-20140408195938/@comment-5946174-20140409071707

I am aware that most pastas on this site are worse than this, which is why I said verbatim "... Room 109 is a step above most pastas on this site..." Please do not come here expecting to get a pat on the ass. If you want praise, your work needs to merit praise. It's clear that you didn't put a lot of effort into this story, as evidenced by the sentence "All I wanted as a short pasta that would give someone a few chills." I honestly think that you can do better than that.