Talk:The Long List/@comment-26409942-20150518234945

I really liked this story...it had depth in a short space and that's impressive. I'll say the same thing I have on others...personally, I prefer pastas written in first person pov as it makes them feel more real as an account, more authentic, but hey, that's just my taste. At the end there, is it meant to be 'the whole department for crack' rather than crank? Or is this a new thing I've not heard of?! LOL

I loved the subtlety of his madness. It's just that little hint with his wondering if Hamlet is really mad that plants that seed that that's what could be going on here too as the rest unfolds and you see what he's doing, and I really like how that was played. And starting with the focus on the girl and then moving the focus to the police officer was also a great way to through the scent a bit. Nice stuff!