Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28420405-20160816123509/@comment-28420405-20160817114539

Raidra wrote: I was going to say that part of me liked the first ending, but this new ending has really grown on me to the point that I think I prefer it even though there's gore. Of course, you didn't go overboard, telling enough to convey the full horror of the situation. In any case, this was a chiller. I liked the richness of the description. You conveyed horror without going over the top, and you made the characters relatable and sympathetic. Most of the teens there may have misbehaved, but they weren't bad people until they were pushed over the edge. Good job, and good luck with whatever you're dealing with.

Wow! What kind words! I appreciate it! I'm in a much better place now -- just had a lot on my plate and I needed to express myself somehow, and writing is my usual outlet. Thanks for the well wishes! I appreciate it.

I'm glad you liked the new ending, and that it wasn't too over-the-top. I'm hoping others like it as well! I may post this as-is, but I'll see if anyone else has anything to say about this new version before I commit to posting.

Thanks again for taking the time to read and review!