Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24919906-20140513031625

Um. I am starting on a creepypasta. It's the first ever one I'm gonna make. I already drafted it but haven't typed it yet. Its about a teenage boy named Michael who's family got killed one by one. His father was murdered, stabbed to death. His mother was burned alive inside their house. And her sister went missing in a camping trip, no one had ever seen her since.

Well, its like he was next to be killed, but then his killer saw something in him. He was tormented by the shadows following him, whispering and showing horrible visions. one day he couldn't take it anymore. He was willing to give up anything for it to stop. But you know.....

The Lord of the UnderRealm saw the success of his plan. ......

um, i think thats enough...

but, what do you guys think? 