User blog comment:ThatCatIsCool/Admins on this wiki./@comment-10950063-20141026191852/@comment-25458443-20141027152150

Maybe I'm Biased.

I write stories as if you're reading the train of thought of the protagonist. (In fact that's a plot point in a book I wrote recently.) So naturally I use a lot of lines. Making specific moments feel isolated.

So reading this felt normal for me. But hey, it was obnoxis.

I however did feel like it COULD have been chilling. I mean the concept is brilliant.

I also find the stories I write to not be that scary. Maybe somewhat odd, But not scary. Other people however tell me my pastas are pretty freaky sometimes.

IT'S AN OPINION!!

I would get it if you removed it for not having ANYTHING that made it seem like it was scary,

But it clearly DID. Like I said, the concept is pretty awesome. IT probably WOULD scare some people.

But formatting problems does make sense. So, Kudos to you.