Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25519076-20141012224518/@comment-25226524-20141013173219

Proper paragraph breaks may not be important to a lot of readers, but the main issue is that very large paragraphs, aka walls of text, are hard on the eyes, especially on this site with the black background and white font. I know it doesn't seem like that little space could make that much of a difference, but I can assure you it does. Finding the perfect place to break the paragraphs isn't as important to most people as the space itself is. I wanted to fix it because a lot of people will see the format you had and not even bother reading it.

Lastly, I promise if you finish this, it won't be a waste of your time. Even if you're not happy with the finished product, the fact that you finished it will give you a sense of accomplishment. I'm not a great writer by any stretch of the imagination, but when I compare some of the first things I wrote to what I write now, my early work was laughable. The only way to improve is to practice, and as I said before, if you put in the effort with this story, the next story you write will be better and easier to write. Good luck.