Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24378883-20140411073403/@comment-24378883-20140412035629

The Bitter Cold wrote: If your pasta is based on a dream, then that would explain why it's incoherent. The question is why are you trying to provide a rational basis for the story when it's clearly not based in reality? It's not. I got the idea from a nightmare, and spiced it up a little bit. If you need a rational basis for why somebody can lose their freaking mind, then you've got alot more searching to do.