Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32327824-20170619135100/@comment-24101790-20170619140313

This feels more like a plot draft than an actual story. If this is a complete story, then there are a lot of issues here involving an un-engaging plot, a lack of character progression, and a generic plot (it feels like a typical OC story complete with an alienated protagonist, writing in blood, and random murder). I suggest actually writing out your next story as giving us a synopsis really doesn't work.