Talk:Never Judge a Book by Its Cover/@comment-25543631-20141020224059

I really like this story. Re-reading it for the second time through is creepier by far. =] I think one thing though where it says 'letering across your front' that seems to get sort of contradicted by you saying she has a name tag later on. But instead of lettering across her front, maybe it could say something like gold, gilt lettering. Because then it would not be a contradiction and it would be more reasonable and logical phrase considering he is actually talking about a person.

Also, i dunno but i think i would spell her name 'Diarie', i think there is enough metaphor to mis-spell Diary and have the reader still think of her as a book for the most part of the story. Diary just isn't a persons name in anyway, and i found it a teensy bit silly to call the girl that,  but Diarie sort of looks like it could be a girls name.

Just my two-cents anyway. The concept is excellent and really origional. x x x I thought it was great.