Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150423072004/@comment-26326346-20150424163447

Alright, thank you very much. The feedback is appreciated :) I'm toying around with a bit of a rewrite. I was just struck with a few ideas that I think will make it better.

+I'll have him note the photo as you suggested

+I'm thinking of having the thief hide in the corpse pile and seeing the killer who is searching for him before being locked in the basement.