Talk:Mom's Ghost/@comment-25919098-20141224210955

Hate to be the bearer of bad news, but I actually think this is a mediocre story. It starts with a somewhat original concept, (despite the fact murder is not an uncommon subject, however husband murdering wife is NOT a common subject.) but as the story goes on, it becomes the generic ghost story you would expect from something like this. You can either write a short story and make it amazing, or write a short story and cram too much into a few paragraphs. The son was way too calm, and how did he not see his dead mother at the bottom of the stairs? Why didn't the dad see her ghost until the son pointed it out? This story was not good, and needs a profuse amount of work for it to be considered a creepypasta. 4/10