Talk:Birthday Clown/@comment-30256934-20161017225945

Good story, but I feel the ending is a bit lackluster. Here's my idea for an alternate ending:

The manager was a skinny man in a tie. He looked to be in his late 40's and had big bulging eyes.

"Why are you even doing this?" I yelled.

He didn't answer, just laughed in my face. Two big guys came out from behind and began moving towards me. He smiled at me and motioned his goons to hold me in place.

"Do you love your family?" he asked.

"Of course," I said, "That's why I'm here!"

He handed me a notecard with an address on it and a large pink bag.

 Then, grinning ear to ear the manager laughed and said, "Knock 'em dead, Bonko!"