Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25558572-20140428173645/@comment-9967354-20140518102211

This was an interesting read, and sort of reminded me of one of those descriptive stories that take place in the jungle, where there's a bit of a face off between a man and a beast. Take Ruskin Bond's story for an example (sorry, only link I found). It's simple, and yet you can almost picture every bit of it, and I think it the story is an excellent source of inspiration if you want to amend your story.

The gore was there; but not excessively. Over all, I'd say this is pretty well written, if not entirely creepy. Besides, this has been up for a while.