Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4617036-20140729225021/@comment-4617036-20140731123537

Shadowswimmer77 wrote: Think you meant 2 AM in the middle of the story there. Overall...there's not enough here. The setup with the girlfriend (although slightly cliched) is good enough but the reveal of the scary thing really just doesn't do very much. Potential but it needs more fleshing out. Thank you very much Shadowswimmer.

Like I said above, I'm not planning to come back until I think of the perfect Creepypasta to make.

But thank you for the advice.