Talk:Three Friends Diner/@comment-25170312-20151004005717

Fantastic! Really well written and engaging from start to finish. You did use two of my most hated cliches, however: a mysterious person wearing a hoodie, and "this is where it starts getting weird". Also, when the main character figures out the whole "three friends" connection, it didn't feel as "oh snap!" to me as it did to him. I was kinda like, "Okay. So it wanted three people. And...?"

Even with my complaints, I loved it. Really, I'm just nitpicking because that's what I do, lol. It definitely deserves the PotM and maybe a win.