Talk:Try to Forget/@comment-4470175-20160806011747

Fundamentally a very good creepypasta. Very well written and the concept is very good. I think one of its flaws is the lack of detail - this story would benefit from a bit more length and detail. The writing appears a bit rushed. Another thing to improve on is the whole mora/concept of the creepypasta. It takes a similar theme from 'Why Babies Are Born Screaming' and tries to use it to justify this. This could work, but the part about 'have you ever tried remembering something' was very short, and it is the foundation of the entire pasta.

8/10