Talk:Glitchlett/@comment-26383550-20161127211848

ummm.......... this was alright I guess. not my favorite. not really close. 5/10 ? I dunno, writing wasn't bad, there was spelling errors, many cliche's for a pokemon creepy pasta, kinda glad the Lavender town theme didn't show up (you kinda saved your butt there), and it was over all a little bit of a..... work in progress. I would love to see a more heavilly edited and revitalized version of the story. It was decent for a short story and I think you did an okay job at bringing the magic of Pokemon Red Blue Yellow and Green glitches into the whole "Demonic entity" style of pasta.