Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30771515-20170214100658/@comment-30771515-20170217014406

Cody6669 wrote: I like the creepynies to the story as we didn't know what happened to Phoebe's mother before the ending and I like the fact that it builds tension as we don't know if Phoebe's mother was going to find her. I could only think of one cliche and that would be the "Parents worshiping the devil cliche." I also like the fact that the gruesome bit's were done so well in a manner where it creeps the reader out but doesn't make them want to throw up. 9/10 They do not worship the devil. Lel-Kwavzza eats the devil for breakfast. And read The Bubble Brother's Happy-Happy Funhouse if you liked this ome