Talk:Girl in the Crowd/@comment-5886533-20140415135940

9/10! I knew what Jimmy was planning from the moment he started asking if the guys trusted him, but I didn't expect it to be the girl from the concert before. I love the characters. They're so well-developed, even the victim! And the ending made this story have a speck of realism (the way you tied up the loose ends with Twig and Stitch). Great pasta!