Talk:Kagome Kagome/@comment-24686104-20140315055949

Hm. The concept is good, and the writing is good. However, it has quite a lot of facts wrong, and the ending in kind of "eh", in my opinion. The whole experiments thing had me going, but then it switched to this weird, Urban Legend format that felt out of place and unrealistic. First half felt like I was reading something that felt like an account of things that really did happen, second half felt like a campfire story. All in all, I give you a 7/10. Good, but not great.