Talk:The Fridge/@comment-25634916-20141129215155

Not bad, not bad at all. The realism was quite entertaining, and the storyline was good, too. What I didn't like was the beginning; it seemed a bit pointless. The night before the incident, getting ready for the party... you didn't need all of that junk for it to be scary. Also, the ending wasn't very interesting. Of course they found his body in the fridge! You gave away the ending a few paragraphs up. The ending should've had more of a twist for it to be REALLY interesting, like, "Johnny was found chained inside the fridge" or "The half-eaten corpse of Johnny was found in the fridge"...

It was pretty cool overall, though. 7.5/10.