Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-1671931-20150312192911/@comment-1671931-20150313131356

Natalo wrote: I seriosuly was going to read this, I tried really hard, but no one has the energy or willpower to read a story with paragraphs that massive and so long at quarter to twelve midnight. I really hope someone reviews this for you. I might check it out again in the morning. In the meantime could you break up your paragraphs please??? No problem, I broke some paragraphs (there were I think you might have a point or where the text actually allows me to do so) and thanks for the tip and for considering to give it a read (althought I wasn't expected anyone to read this so late at night, that's the reason that I wrote that the story was 8 and half pages long)