Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26535147-20150715233120/@comment-25037895-20150716025628

There's multiple issues at first glance. Spacing issues: ("the plastic,dead eyes", "raindrops,(a period to replace the comma)"it was just a dream" ", "wizzed my pants,pinched myself", "did that night.I sunndenly (suddenly)", "old flashlight,dim as hell,but", "thought to myself,"it didn't", "that a glitch,it originally", "and faster,and faster", "response;"Hey dude", "bed,with my brain", "and joy,unfortunately", "toy maker,he", "graffiti;it was a real", "nobody was even there,they", "due to bad luck,being")

Punctuation issues: ("it whispered "don't (Don't) replace me..." ", "an old mans (man's) voice whispering "please (Please)", "clown would make, "oh (Oh) god (God), help me",(comma not needed)", "since my dad said "Son, its (it's)",)

Other issues: ("surly (surely) not dreaming", "what I looked at wasn't, it was it, (wording)")