Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29343970-20160814025428

Could I get feedback on this?

One day I decided to go to the library. I walked to the mystery novels shelf located next to a wall at the far side of the fiction section and examined it for an interesting book. Being a mystery novel maniac, it took me over 30 minutes to finish picking a good novel. I pulled out a paperback copy of Hound of the Baskervilles and met eyes with the person on the other side of the shelf.

I checked out the book and left the library.  