Talk:Closet Monster/@comment-27905100-20170130041915/@comment-26326346-20170205003948

I'll happily settle for pretty good in this specific instance, since it's an older work XD What parts in particular struck you as dry, if you don't mind giving me a couple of examples? Was it the SWAT Team part? I remember getting a bit of an unfavorable reaction to the SWAT Team in the Writer's Workshop, but decided to keep it anyway.

I'm glad that you enjoyed parts of it, but am sorry that parts of it fell flat.

Ah, no need for apologies when it comes to commenting on my stories, even if the comments are entirely against my story. The fact that you took the time to comment means you read it and care. that's all I want (well, that and to become the best writer ever) :D