User blog comment:Zumokiworks335/CREEPYPASTA WIKI IS FOR PRO'S/@comment-27859657-20160713181246/@comment-27859657-20160713190633

thanks, I appreciate the review of my story and the anime terms you used, that was funny as hell I still can't stop laughing. I do agree that it's too long, but that's probably because that everything before being in an asylum is actually true, and that's really why I had added that part, there is no doubt that the grammar is bad...

being apart of the anime community, katisu rodosu  or  kawii sempai, lol  was actually my name translated in Japanese, but it was done with google translate so no telling if it was correct. then I had the name changed again near the end to kyoki or desu-desu, lol... because I thought its was a Japanese word that Ment sanity , I was wrong  it actually meant insanity. I'll be honest my true goal here was to make a psychopath who's sanity was still intact. this story was not meant to be some amateur, OC, shit it was meant to be a real creepypasta, but I suppose  I need to make it better...I tried making it realistic by putting myself in the story and thinking out as to how I would react to ever situation I put in the story... being told that I was most likely to be put into an asylum I thought it would be a good idea to put myself in the story... K Y O K I. isn't something I want to let go. I want to make it better somehow...