Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10319977-20151014231140/@comment-25428589-20151015164547

ColorlessAngelz wrote: As for "A Buffering Movie", you said you agree with Grizzly, but I can't see their comment. Uhhh... yeah, you can. Search a little harder.

A Buffering Movie: This one is better than the first two, but I still think it doesn't quite meet the standards. Just a "spine-chilling" scream as the scare factor is pretty weak, and although it's pulled off in a rather clever way, that doesn't make the story hold up. Also, you really should try to be more creative with the titles you're using; making direct lines of the story as a title is pretty ineffective.