Talk:NES Godzilla Creepypasta/Chapter 8: Finale (Part 1)

I've read through the entire pasta and, to be honest, I won't bother to read on when this thing will be continued/finished.

When I got through the first chapter I actually thought that this pasta had a lot of potential and originality. Even the screenshots looked legitimate at first, I mean okay there have been some graphical errors (too much colors per sprite, using colors the NES doesn't even have, changing resolutions) but these mistakes weren't that much of a problem at the beginning, but as the pasta went on the author took WAY too much artistic liberties, and turning it into some ZOMG ROFL HYPER-REALISTIC nonsense. And mentioning the game exceeding the NES' technical capabilities won't make it any better.

But the main reason why this pasta has turned into a letdown for me is the overuse of bad creepypasta clichés. While the first chapter got by without using a single cliché, they stacked as the pasta proceeded. Heck, it even felt for me like the author wanted to stuff in as much bad clichés as possible on purpose. On top of that, he used the worst and most overused clichés out there (game getting hyperrealistic, game knowing your name or past events of your life, game having supernatural powers). And I am afraid the cliché galore won't stop when the pasta will be continued.

But like I said, I highly doubt that I will continue reading when this pasta will be finished.. as I noticed how it turned into an unoriginal letdown there probably won't be a great finale anyway. He probably will beat the final boss, his paralysis and any other supernatural mumbo-jumbo will come to an end, he will destroy the game, The End.

Sorry, but for me this pasta wasn't worth the time.

Orlait17 (talk) 21:29, June 2, 2013 (UTC)