Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20151119034611/@comment-25170312-20151121185930

1nnocenteyes wrote: I am not very good at feedback in terms of how it is written and stuff, but I enjoyed reading it very much. I thought her seeing the boy in the car was really creepy, it always scares me when the "thing" follows them and messes up their lives afterwards. So yes... it is good in my opinion. Thanks! My main concern is if I overlooked anything like plot holes or things that take you out of the story, so it seems like you didn't find anything like that.