Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190621084611/@comment-9041013-20190621123836

I've one thing to say... Find a name for this piece.

Otherwise I think it's cooked pretty nicely and should be served the the public. (Perhaps run a final check on the technical aspect of the story, but plotwise I don't see anything that needs to be changed).

On second thought "the monster face" maybe should become "disfigured face"... As it's not exactly a monster.