Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27246594-20151206024334/@comment-27246594-20151206051021

The chapters were more of a reference point for me for editing when it was in an outline form. Thank you for the feedback. It's been a long time since I've written and never this style. I was worried about making it too long so i feel like i forced things? Also the wordiness i think was me adding it more descriptive words to try and make it 'feel' more, if that makes sense? I'll give it a re-write and post that and hopefully you will be around for some more feedback. I appreciate it :)