Talk:Mother's Love/@comment-26007602-20150131205455

I'm honestly baffled why everybody else disliked the ending. The unknown aspect of it is executed very well. It doesn't bring closure to the story, but it doesn't really need to either.

Now, I normally hate second person, but it was strangely fitting for this story. Probably because the character's reactions (or mine, I suppose) are fairly logical and straightforward; that way I don't disagree with how "my character" acts. Well done.

The only problem I really have in this story is the description of the mother; it's not bad, it's just not too original (I realize there are only so many different ways to make humans unnerving; long skinny limbs are a popular choice). It's also fairly similar to the lady of your other pasta, "Thief." But, that's just me trying to find something you can improve on, as the rest of the story is fairly well done. It's not worth changing, just something you should shy away from in future stories.

I don't believe in numerical scores, but I'd have to say that the story itself is well written and enjoyable for the quick read it is.