Talk:A Silver Flame/@comment-25941663-20171022210429

This seems much better than the first version. I didn't notice many technical issues with it. There were various cases of awkward wording, but with time and practice you will surely improve. A trick that I use is to read sentences out loud. It is a great way to find whether they flow smoothly or not.

As I said previously, I really liked the werewolf idea. It was unique and very creepy. Since you already have the imagination, you just need to read and write. Some great stories you can read are on my profile, under the "Favourite Stories" header.

Wish you all the best!