Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24821182-20140604134100/@comment-24821182-20140606045231

JulinGrol wrote: tI hope my comment doesn't get deleted, but I must say that this is really good, and I think you should post it up. There are comma errors which you might want to look at, and if you want specifics I will go back through and tell you what exactly needs to be fixed.

It has philosophical reasoning (which I am always fond of), mental illness of the strange sort, humor (if it is unintentional, I apologize), a nice opening to what has happened without giving too much away, and a good dive into the man's head as a journal. Thank you so much for the review. I'll proofread it for incorrect or missing punctuation and for any other errors I happen to spot.

The humor is in fact intentional, and it's sort of present in most of my stories. I love the instability it causes when you mix the ridiculously absurd with the horrifying, and I enjoy looking for that fine line between legitimate horror and straight up comedy. I think CPs in general have a habit of making fun of themselves by attempting to scare the reader through a series of clichés rearranged into something slightly unique.

Most CPs are redefinitions of the same old campfire stories; at least that's how I look at it.