Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26154067-20150806025332/@comment-26154067-20150814173943

AMarbleHornet wrote: I cannot read this. This has no respect for the English language in the respect of paragraphing, capitalization, etc. Please take a writing course or use our wikia's very own tips on writing. Also, perhaps try being a bit more... eloquent, poetic, etc. I am from the U.S.A i do write good, my other stories can be sometimes better.

But this one really creeped me out at the ending, the ending makes up for the mistakes just read it and tell me what you think at the end.