Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24651624-20150502011143/@comment-25891880-20150503023658

I'm sorry, but I can't take this story seriously because it's like you make every sentence a paragraph. Do you mind making 15 paragraphs into like 4-6? With the current state it is in, it just seems like I'm going to be reading for hours. So cram em' up, and I will read it. I promise.