Talk:Fate's End/@comment-35911608-20200221011325

Fate’s End - by Cornconic (#4, The Emperor)

Ah, a fun take on the contest’s intentions. I was thoroughly entertained with this one. I like the whole act with people’s lives literally being changed after receiving their fate, and the descriptions were quite fun. I really liked the snow globes in the Teller’s tent - the way you described the Tower and the Hanged Man were especially haunting hells to imagine.

However, there are a few issues I have. First, the meaning of the Emperor card was not used at all in this story, simply its image. While that’s an okay route, I would’ve liked to have seen some meaning from the interpretation thrown in there. The other was that, while I had fun reading it, it wasn’t necessarily scary. The only parts that were really terrifying were the snow globes and William screaming to escape his fate at the end. Very good plot twist at the end though, I did not see that coming in the slightest.

Style - 4/5

Creepiness - 2/5

Enjoyment - 3/5

Use of Theme - 2/5

Grand Total: 11/20