Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31461448-20170307142711/@comment-31461448-20170320180510

Heya, sorry taken so long to reply but I really appreciate all of the feedback that you have given. With my first pasta I know there's always gonna be things that need changing. I know my tenses are all over the shop but that is something easily rectified with rereading properly and just pacing and styles needs work but again thank you for all of the feedback 😊