Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180912183148/@comment-36393004-20180913123412

DrBobSmith wrote: If it is based on Greek mythology, would moving it to the Mediterranean help?

Yes, merciless editing always helps. I usually delete a third of what I wrote before it even hits the workshop. I wanted to bring the idea of a Siren without making it a Siren. If that makes sense.