Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475017-20150615214339/@comment-26475253-20150616183035

2 things: Small grammatical problems, like 'I' being uncapitalized, and technically the dialogue should not be in the same paragraph if it's going back and forth. Ex: "Baby, I want you to be careful," said Mary, gazing into her eyes, "promise me". "I will be careful mommy, I promise."