Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33954816-20180412231400

When you have a disease you will do anything to get rid of it. If you think that’s bullshit then let’s see what you’ll do when you have one and soon find out your about to die. My name is Rick and I had the aids a little while ago but it’s gone now. Now I know what your thinking. Yeah doctors found a cure for it. But I really wish I just kept it. Believe me the cure was much more scary than the disease.

I was standing next to my friend Max. We were chatting and talking about life and shit. Lots of people walked by us. “So are you free Saturday? I have a lot of great ideas for us to do.” Max said. “No” “I’m going to some type of festival dedicated to Stephen King. So I gotta go to that”. Max looked down. “Alright” He said. “Rick. This one” Max whispered. I went to open our car trunk and walked back. A girl walked by us texting in her phone chewing bubble gum and making that obnoxious smack sounds. Max looked around and noticed no one was in sight. I ran towards her tackled her to the ground and threw her into our trunk and I closed it Max got into the drivers seat and I got into the passengers. I yelled at him to go and he did. We drove around like nothing happened. And luckily enough we couldn’t hear her scream. That’s when it hit me. “Dude Max. She has her phone! What if she calls the cops?” “Relax she dropped it when you tackled her” Max pointed out. He lifted her phone and I looked at it and breathed a sigh of relief like when you got a 100 on a exam. We headed up to our place and got into our driveway and stopped the car. We lived in the middle of the woods so we were ok to do whatever we wanted. “Ok let’s get’er out.” I said. Max nodded and got out. I opened the He trunk to reveal the girl. She was lying down back to us sobbing. Max put his arms on her legs and began to pull them forward. I grabbed her on the other side and surprisingly, she didn’t fight. We carried her into our home and threw her into our basement. Max went first and I tagged along. The girl was screaming to let her go. Max grabbed handcuffs and tied her to the wall and put a chain on her legs. I’ll let you decide what we did after that. After we did that to her she smiled. “Why are you smiling?” Max demanded. “I’ve got aids”. I grabbed a whip and threw it at her cheek while holding the other side. I ended up getting her eye and it flew out of her socket. “Ew” I said. After that Max shoved the whip into her mouth and down her throat. She choked to death. “What now Max?” “We just did something horrible and now we got the aids! That’s what”.

I went to my hospital and told my doctor. He asked how I got it and I just told him my girlfriend has it. He told me theirs no cure for it. I cried. I was about to die. At least that’s what I thought. Then the doctor said something that lifted my head up faster then the speed of light. “We have one cure for it.” He said. “Really? What is it? I’ll do anything to get rid of this.” I said. “Are you sure you wanna do this though?” I said yes. I still wish to this day I just accepted my fate. The doctor motioned me to come with him and I did. We got in a elevator. The doctor pressed the 3 button. I asked him what it was but he just said I’ll find out. The elevator doors opened and we stepped out. I followed him into a hallway. There were door on the side of it on both sides and one door at the end. We ended up walking into that door. It showed a normal doctors office with the occasional don’t smoke posters and stuff like that. We typed in a code and the wall on our left fell onto the ground and behind it was a giant room full of blackness. “In here.” He said. I was confused. “But what’s so special about a room? And how did the wall fall ov-“ “No more questions” He said interrupting me. I shrugged my shoulders and stepped inside. “Lift your sleeve up.” He said. I did and he gave me a shot. “Now in order for this shot to work you need to go a little more in.” He said. I was still very confused but didn’t bother trying to ask because I’ll get the same answer. I looked behind me and my doctor was grinning. I knew this was trouble and charged to the door but I was to late. He slammed it behind him.

I looked around hoping to find some type of light but failed doing so. I kept screaming to get some sort of attention. I then noticed my doctor shut the walls and I couldn’t see anything but darkness. I put my hand in front of my face and if their was light I could be able to see where it was. Then a voice began bellowing above me. “Alright I’m going to guide you” it said. I looked around again and panicked. “Who are you? Where are you?” I yelled. “That doesn’t matter” it said. “Yes it does! Before I even start to trust you I need to know who you a—“ “Ok if you don’t shut up. I’ll send them after you.” I didn’t hesitate to be quiet because I didn’t know who ‘them’ was.

“Ok walk forward”. I walked forward as the voice told me. “Turn left”. “Now a right” “Forward and a Left” I did everything the voice said to do still wondering who it was or what it was. “Ok your done. Now jump.” I jumped and began to notice the universe around me was changing. Out of all the weird and bizarre things going on I wasn’t that surprised. It slowly started building a forest. When it was done I had the urge to look up. I lifted my head into the sky and noticed stars and blackness. It was night. “Now listen to my words. Whatever is out there in the woods with you. LET IT GET YOU” the muffled voice said. Now I was more confused than ever. No, not confused. I was frightened by what he meant by ‘let it get you’. 