Talk:Necromantic/@comment-28266772-20181113141737

I enjoyed this. The prose, in particular, is really well done. It might not be to everyone's taste, but I liked it and thought it qualified as creepy. It reminded me of an Emily Carroll comic in the sense that it was romantic, timeless, and felt almost like a fairy tale with a nasty end. A lot was implied, never shown, and I thought you walked that fine line very well. The biggest drawback at the moment is that every now and again your writing takes a tumble. An error in the formatting, a spelling mistake, a missing word - mechanical errors like this are common enough and easy to fix. Have another read over it yourself and try to correct them. I'll have a look myself tonight.