Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5034925-20140330031726/@comment-24739611-20140330175028

For me, the problem is the morbid curiosity. He just one day decided to kill something. A kitten, no less. His daughter's kitten. That tells me he wasn't "normal" to begin with and had psychotic tendancies from the start.

It would be so much better if he encountered like, for example a dying dog or deer on the side of the road, and instead of calling a vet, he ends its suffering, making it a moral/ semi-normal descision while at the same time adding to his bloodlust and thirst for more, starting his diversion FROM normal.

Oh, and " A friend from middle school told me that if you tie a rope to a cat’s tail. Then throw it out of a moving car while holding onto said rope. The tail should come clean off." Replace the periods with commas.