Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5170510-20190918022535/@comment-35711173-20191005203431

Mr. Evans312,

As I said, the English is a problem but isn't the biggest problem. You've got a tell and not show problem.

Could you get it kept up on site with only minor fix-ups? While I am not an Admin, in my opinion the Admins wouldn't delete it. It wouldn't be a strong Pasta though.

Grammarly does a lot of very useful analysis in the free mode, but there are other apps out there that offer additional tools. For your case with your long sentences and large number of adjectives, I suggest trying http://www.hemingwayapp.com on your story. It's 100% free, and will help with the clarity of your writing.