User blog comment:Jake888/Why I Think We Like to Shit our Pants./@comment-26268104-20170204221442/@comment-26268104-20170205002405

If you're going to write a blog post advising people on writing sex scenes, one tip I would say you should include is that according to "How Not to Write a Novel," a common mistake is that "the sex scene is drained of the sex." This is when authors, afraid of describing the scene, use words that a doctor may use, like "copulate." The problem with this is that it isn't engaging.