Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20190406223732/@comment-35711173-20190406233533

Hi there,

I read your story.

English: You have a number of grammar and conjugation errors. These can quickly be fixed up. I suggest running it through http://www.grammarly.com.

Note: The Packard Clipper, L.A. detective clothes and other notes make it sound like the protagonist is from the USA. Yet, the other character stopped a few "metres" away. Not yards, which is what an American would say. Not even "meters," but "metres."