Talk:The Sightless Slaughterer/@comment-25771007-20160730203055

I loved it! Unique, but seriously, Becky is such a b**ch! She knows there's a murderer around in her friend's neighbourhood and puts on a horror movie. She knows her friend's neighbours were murdered and still puts on a horror movie. She knows the wires were cut (Obviously implying that a person was attempting to put them at a disadvantage!) but still pretends that she's been caught by the killer, just to scare her already everyday paranoid friend.

Anyways, good story, interesting plot, well written with little/no spelling errors. Only thing is the beginning is written as a monologue, speaking to a camera, but the rest is written like a detailed story, or a diary entry, not a spoken one.

Regardless, 9.5/10!