Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44497737-20191124235005/@comment-36627132-20191125011039

Lost episode stories have been banned from this site for years due to the fact that they are almost always the same thing, and this story is no exception.

Ignoring the blacklisted subject and use of cliches, this story is lacking in detail and hurriedly summarised. We are told this happens, then that happens, but we aren't given enough detail that paints a picture of what is going on.

This story has severe spelling issues. It is riddled with capitalization errors, lacking proper punctuation in many places, spaces in the wrong places, there are a lot of run on sentences, and on a final note about the spelling ellipses are supposed to be three periods and a space (and quite frankly are overused in this story). There are spell-checking programs out there that might help with your next story.