User:EmpyrealInvective/Archive 3

Welcome to my talk page ! How goes the ? Just make sure  doesn't bother you too much. You know what I always say, " ." Feel free to leave a message and sign it with four tildes (~) Like this: ~ Also note, keep messages civil. If you leave an acerbic message expect me to respond in kind.

hello, you recently blocked me for creating spam pages, and i don't believe i made any can you help me understand why i was blocked. thanks, --TheHenchman (talk) 01:45, July 14, 2014 (UTC)

the page i made that you blocked me for was not meant to be blank, i meant to cancel it not post an empty page. i was just unblocked today so dont know why it took more than 3 days.

Hey.
I was wondering if I could get the review that I made on The Internet Gateway to Hell. I didn't save it, nor would I actually like it so much. So can I, and I guess the article too? Because I actually would think that the review and the article would go perfectly on Trollpasta. Do you hear that? That's the grape roaring   04:43, July 14, 2014 (UTC)

sorry, for bugging but i was wondering what i could do to improve, i read the standards and such but I'm not quite sure on what may have been the cause for not meeting the standards here, could you kind of point out what is wrong with it so i could fix It, thank you.

Supercsilver (talk) 14:06, July 14, 2014 (UTC)Supercsilver

Okay, will do. And thank you for telling me what I did wrong,  and sorry about that.

Supercsilver (talk) 14:17, July 14, 2014 (UTC)Supercsilver

Sorry
oh, sorry about that i didn't know that i blanked it, i just sent you the thank you and apology message but that is about it.

Supercsilver (talk) 14:44, July 14, 2014 (UTC)Supercsilver

Better to Sleep
Hello,

May I ask why my creepypasta (Better to Sleep) was deleted? What exactly was wrong?

EDIT: Thank you for the reply.

I have some things to say. There was going to be a sequel (maybe a few more actually, depending on user rating) that would explain most of the mysteries that you noted.

I would like to request a copy of my pasta to fix up some of the grammar mistakes that you noted. Then, I can try re-publishing it.

Thanks,

Cany0udance (talk) 17:28, July 14, 2014 (UTC)Cany

Cany0udance (talk) 15:24, July 14, 2014 (UTC)Cany

Thanks
Thanks for the congratulation.

Oh, by the way, if you have the time and inclincation would you mind checking out a work in progress I post on the WW? I want to know if it's worth continuing: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:344156

ImGonnaBeThatGuy (talk) 20:26, July 14, 2014 (UTC)

Bloody Snow prequel
Hey, idk if you remember but you read a story of mine, Bloody Snow I'm working on a prequel for it right now. I've posted what I have so far in the Writer's Workshop.

Whit World < Here's a link, please leave some feedback.

Sykokillah (talk) 15:31, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks
Thanks for telling me. I will make a better quality pasta next time. Well if I get the ideas.

Blogs
Thanks for telling me about the blog. I am still quite new to the wiki. I will add content to the blog. Also how do you nominate pasta of the month.

HEY!
Empy. Can you bring back the images that were on Abandoned by Disney, Room Zero, A Few Suggestions, and maybe Candle Cove. Then protect those stories again, please. Thanks. Do you hear that? That's the grape roaring   02:59, July 17, 2014 (UTC)
 * I need to learn how to be more of context, and sorry for bothering you this. But the hidden images were there to hide the images, and I thought that they were deleted (but couldn't see if they were or not)... so, yeah... Mind, uh... fixing that again, since the images weren't deleted after all (hiding the images again). Again, sorry, and I thought I was in the correct context 3: Do you hear that? That's the grape roaring   04:41, July 17, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for editing! I found the wrong tenses in my personal copy, but forgot to edit them here. Thanks also for writing out the numbers! It definitely makes it seem more professionally written.

Tendorphin (talk) 23:36, July 17, 2014 (UTC)

Other pages
You know ComicKitty made a page on pasta monsters. I want to know if i can make a page on epic rap battles of creepypasta which is not a creepypasta story

Response to Uh Yeah
Okay sorry I never knew that, I now feel dumb. Oops Jfgoofy (talk) 03:22, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

Okay
Thanks for saying that I was worried Jfgoofy (talk) 03:30, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

I had an amazing pasta about Chad the Killer deleted before anybody had a chance to read it and that is crazy considering some of the terrible terrible things that dorks post here. Fix it.

Maddie Trollpasta wiki
I want a copy of the story put on the trollpasta wiki

hi. not sure if i am doing this right, but i clicked "random pasta", and this came up. http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Image_Galleries. is it supossed to be like that? also, how do i get my name in red, like yours? that looks so cool! Forlaina (talk) 15:47, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

My edits
Did you even look at my edits? That particularly page was grammatically horrible, with the tense constantly switching between past and present, and the penultimate paragraph horrendously redundant and nonsensical. There had been complaints in the comments about the article's poor grammar, and I fixed those errors. --JohnnyLurg (talk) 00:12, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the info.
Thank you for the message about the shock ending being removed from the categories. I was unaware. Sorry for the inconvenience, and thanks for the heads up!! Stacell (talk) 15:26, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

Adding picture to pasta
While I have your attention, and when you get time, can you tell me real quick how to add a picture to my Pasta? I wrote My Father's Box, uploaded an image I believe is saved under Father's_box, and can't figure out how to attach my pic to it. I'm a newbie, and looked around and can't seem to locate the instructions. When you get time, I'd appreciate the help. No rush. Thanks so much!

Sorry
Sorry, Thad image help question was from me. Stacell (talk) 15:42, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for the help!
Thank you so much for the help. I finally was able to add my picture to my pasta with your assistance. I've been trying to do that, and asking others for help for weeks! Much, much appreciated! Stacell (talk) 18:45, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

Hello! I wrote a short story: A Mid-Night Fright, and it said it was deleted but I don't understand why. Please answer Ember Down in Flames (talk) 02:01, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks Again!
Thank you Empy I'll be sure to Read them!

SilentKillerlurks (talk)SilentKillerlurks

Thanks for the feedback on my regional spelling fixes. I'll move that to a comment, and redid the typo edits seperately.

Angahareth (talk) 22:36, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

Greetings:

I attempted to post my creepypasta "What Is Hell?" but it kept triggering the "extension hook" error. Upon some research I found that this generally indicates that it is being blocked due to foul language or that it is under a blacklisted subject. I quickly reviewed the blacklist and my topic does not appear to be on there, but it is a story, as you may have guess, about precisely what "Hell" is, so perhaps it was deemed too cliche. I even tried removing all the words "Hell" and "damnation" from the fic to make sure it wasn't that. I was looking through the rules page and had trouble locating an admin review process, which the blacklist site mentioned (forgive my ignorance, new here). I was wondering if you could please direct/ advise me?

Thank you for your time.

FearAddict (talk) 23:05, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

Thank You
Thank you for your swift response. Per your instructions I have pasted the file to pastebin:

Here is the file

I believe the overall quality should be sufficient, though admittedly there may be one or two phrases in there that are a touch cliched. If this piece is acceptable, you posting it and quoting me as author would be perfectly fine by me. If not, I appreciate any criticism you can offer.

Again, I really appreciate the time and effort you are taking to review my work.

FearAddict (talk) 23:24, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re:Editing stuff and review request
You're welcome, dude. I'm glad to see I'm actually helping the site instead of just sitting on a chair, looking at random stuff. I'm really enjoying doing this, so I'll keep editing, and thanks for the template thing, I didn't know it exists.

Also, I know you're not really active on the Writer's Workshop, but I've uploaded a story there Saturday, and still nobody reviewed yet. Could you please review it or ask someone else to review?

 Marconi plays the mamba  Listen to the radio!  00:08, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Hey,i was wondering,am i allowed to re-post SHRIL666 if i do it the correct way this time???Santenoturtle (talk) 23:28, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Okay,thanks! And is it OK if i do the same story,but instead with a different site? Or change the words so that the site isn't listed??? And i know that the blog thing was wrong,i thought it was a category,i didn't get the message with the link to the rules until i was done wirting the pasta.

Thanks a lot!
Wow, I can't express how helpful you were when you posted the revised translation on my Writer's Workshop thread. I used pretty much all you wrote, except the character's name and I also added more content in the story. I already proofread and corrected as many issues as possible, and it might be ready to be posted as an article.

However, I'm not 100% about this. Do you think I should re-post the story again there?

 Marconi plays the mamba  Listen to the radio!  00:44, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks
I am deeply embarassed that I missed such an obvious spelling error, and would like to thank you for the correction.WatcherAzazel (talk) 23:02, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the edits!
Appreciate you going through and editing the formatting on the various parts of my story The Soldier. Haven't gotten feedback from anyone on it yet and was curious what you thought of it.

Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 06:30, July 26, 2014 (UTC)

Glad I could help
With your story. I like that it is truly recounting real life events rather than just "based on a true story." Thanks for the advice concerning the categories; I didn't realize how essential they were so I'll be sure to start including them.

Regarding consolidating the story, I've had that thought myself but I'm sort of two minds about it. Obviously ease of use dictates having everything on one page but, as we've discussed with your peace corps story, sometimes people will come across a piece of work and not even give it a chance if it's too long. By splitting it into smaller, easier to digest chunks I'm hoping it will avoid that. Also, by including the part number in the title even the most ignorant of readers should start reading "The Soldier: Part 3" and realize there are probably parts 1 and 2 before it. Then I've been including links to previous and subsequent chapters which should (theoretically) make it too easy to follow along. I suppose I'll have to make that call once I'm done. It's going to take slightly longer than I thought to get there because I keep coming up with stuff I want to add (I was originally planning on only six parts, but now it'll be at least 7.)  I'm planning on getting part 5 up tonight though, so I hope you enjoy it!

Thanks again!

Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 20:02, July 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re: Deletions and You
Thanks for letting me know it's okay to do that. I wasn't completely sure and I am always apprehensive of doing stuff like that without being absolutely sure it's allowed. I'll put the knowledge to good use. XD

Umbrello (talk) 23:51, July 26, 2014 (UTC)

Title
Hey there, could you please change the "15" from the tile from my recent pasta to XV? I forgot that the number of the place was named in Roman numbers.

 Get me to the doctor!  My heart goes bang, bang, bang, bang!  01:54, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

You deleted a pasta I posted recently. Could you send me a link so I can still read it? It took me ages to use all that effort.SpiritBird250 (talk) 16:05, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

If you all hate Lost Episode pastas so much, why do you even have them on this site? It doesn't seem very fair that some are here and the rest can't post any. I believe mine is a lot better than a lot of the existing Lost Episode pastas.

Lostepisodeswillreign (talk) 20:36, July 27, 2014 (UTC)Lostepisodeswillreign

RE: Template Madness!
Thanks for those templates. I will switch to those so it's more uniform with other pastas. XD

EDIT: Psst... Happy Birthday! Just noticed it. Mine is in 2 days. Leos rock, lol.

Umbrello (talk) 21:31, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

It feels good...
...to be a part of the site again. Thanks for your kind words, I'll do my best not to let you all down! :P And don't say that, there's a good reason you got admin haha. Thanks again. Anytime you need any assistance with anything just let me know and I'll help you as soon as I can.

- CrashingCymbal 20:53, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

Hello I am here to protest the deletion of my creepypasata. Let me go first off by saying I did correct everything on that creepypasta and even if I did not it was marked for review so that means that someone is suppose to put in the propercorrection (or at least that is what the wiki described the tag as), further more I don't have a saved draft of that creepypasta and I worked very hard on this one not to mention everyone who read the creepypasta had said it was great I got no bad feedback. I wish that you would please just restore it if not restore it can I at least get a copy of it so I can save it and do some editing or get someone to edit it to the wiki's standards even though it met the standards.

Hello I am here to protest the deletion of my creepypasata. Let me go first off by saying I did correct everything on that creepypasta and even if I did not it was marked for review so that means that someone is suppose to put in the propercorrection (or at least that is what the wiki described the tag as), further more I don't have a saved draft of that creepypasta and I worked very hard on this one not to mention everyone who read the creepypasta had said it was great I got no bad feedback. I wish that you would please just restore it if not restore it can I at least get a copy of it so I can save it and do some editing or get someone to edit it to the wiki's standards even though it met the standards. Amergall (talk) 22:12, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

RE:
Thanks for the nice message. I still wonder why my name is not highlited in the rollback template. I guess that's the "question" I have.

 Get me to the doctor!  My heart goes bang, bang, bang, bang!  22:59, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

Writing advice blog
I was thinking about making a writing advice blog about using the Source Mode properly when publishing a pasta, to avoid formatting errors and some other errors as well. I'd add photos to help new users to understand the process better. However, since I'm a rollbacker only, I'm not sure if I'm allowed to post one.

 Get me to the doctor!  My heart goes bang, bang, bang, bang!  00:27, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

look im new that why I didn't know ok

Hi, I wrote a story that didn't have a very positive response, I would like to delete it but I don't seem to know how, I would apreciate it if you would tell me how or just delete it yourself.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Beautiful_Voice

I will be writing again when I'm sure my writing is worth of this wiki.

Creepyduck (talk) 21:33, July 30, 2014 (UTC)Creepyduck

You recently deleted my story, Hope- Marcis, why is that? I'm wondering because its not trully spcified.

Legacy Storm (talk) 22:26, July 30, 2014 (UTC)Legacy Storm

Keep up the good work
I just wanted to say keep up the good work.Cursed Flower (talk) 22:46, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

RE.
I received feedback, I just don't want to leave a failed story in the list, feels like I'm waisting people's time, I would just like to have it deleted.

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Beautiful_Voice

Creepyduck (talk) 23:50, July 30, 2014 (UTC)Creepyduck

RE
Thank you very much, the lesson was well learnt.

Creepyduck (talk) 00:13, July 31, 2014 (UTC)Creepyduck

Holders
When did we no longer accept them? I passed one or two through the past week or so. I checked the rules. Didn't see that we don't allow them anywhere. If there's a link somewhere that says we can't, could you put it on my page? We'd need to update the site rules if that's the case. Thanks, man.

Mystreve (talk) 12:14, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Thank you so much for the welcome

this site is amazing, a lot of wonderful pasta

Alexandre596 (talk) 23:36, August 1, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the help
As I said, thanks for the help on my little story Searching for Lady Jane. I was wondering if you could help me on the matter of subject tags--I think it would fit in better in the "Weird" category, rather than the "Ghosts", but I can't figure out how to change it...

--Rhialto (talk) 17:29, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

And thank you, once again.

--Rhialto (talk) 17:40, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Hey
Excuse me, why did you delete my Creepypasta Sleep Tight Little One? I don't understand if it was the title or not, I'm very  confused >-< Sorry, I'm just new to Creepypasta wikia, all of my creepypasta's have been deleted, but I don't know if it's just because they have had titles with caps and stuff. I'm terribly sorry if I'm wasting your time. RagedRobot (talk) 19:56, August 2, 2014 (UTC) Raged

I'm Sorry!
I'm sorry for reposting "Sarcastic Applejack" I didn't realize they were against the rules until I checked. I really am sorry, I'm new to the site and I am trying to figure it out. I'm so very sorry!

Adding duplicate photos for different pasta's
Quick question regarding photos, if you have time to answer? If a pasta is lacking a photo, can you add any photo already uploaded on this site, if the picture is appropriate for the story? Wasn't for sure. Because that would cause some pasta's to have the same pictures. Wasn't sure if that was appropriate or allowed? Or do you just grab an image from the internet?? Sorry. Newbie here. Thanks! Stacell (talk) 03:02, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Thank you
Thank you for the help and feedback. You are one of the Admin's on here that is patient with newbies, always willing to help, and responds promptly and directly. I appreciate your assistance! Stacell (talk) 05:24, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

The Interview Torch
I ran with it last week. I now pass it to you for September (or whenever you want to do it). Treat her good. She may be hot, but she's a delicate one. Mystreve (talk) 12:06, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re: Interview
Let me know how/when you want to flesh out any details. I'll be happy to help you out :) Mystreve (talk) 00:33, August 5, 2014 (UTC)
 * Honestly, I'll leave who you pick up to your own discretion. But yeah, obviously, when you do pick who you have in mind, be up to snuff on their work and so on. Once you do that, tailoring questions specific to them should fill in the cracks with the questions you have already. That's pretty much what I did with the SB interview. And that's the first interview I've ever conducted. There's lots of sites you can check to get pointers on interviewing as well.
 * Mystreve (talk) 01:33, August 5, 2014 (UTC)
 * That's fine. Just remember though, although the Lounge was my idea, it is now the property of our community. ALL of us. That means you too. Select your author, read up on their work, use online outlets to interview them, and make it happen. I'm a big proponent of letting people with talent find their own way with things. You TOTALLY do not need your hand held with doing this, Travis. You're not only one of the authors I look up to (de-value yourself until you're blue in the face; you are a fucking great author) around here, you have a natural grace with words and advice. I'M looking forward to the next Writer's Lounge session with you and whoever you decide on. Seriously, man. Just go and DO IT! You have my support :)
 * Mystreve (talk) 01:07, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Block
Hi. So, recently you blocked me for one day after reuploading nonexistent categories. I have to inform you,  though, that it actually wasn't me. It was actually another user by the name of RagedRobot. If you look at the comment section of the pasta "I'm Sorry Master", you would see a comment by me telling RagedRobot that I was removing the nonexistent categories he added, and his reply saying "it was just something random for the moment". Thanks for taking the time to read this, if you did. Red.Hood (talk) 01:41, August 5, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry i uploaded the page without permission. I didn't know permission was required. May i upload my creepypasta again?

disturbing books you should read
Aside from the ones I mentioned in the forum, I would recommend;

I don't know if you noticed since I added it in later, but Clive Barker's Books of Blood are a must read short story collection. I know you've likely read them,  but I feel like it's my duty to make sure, they're that good.

House of Leaves by Mark Z. Danielewski. A very trippy read, but psychologically disturbing.

The Painted Bird by Jerzy Kosinski. Based on the experiences the author had while being a lost child in WW2 Europe. Very disturbing.

The Shoemaker by Flora Schreiber. A disturbing true story about a family man turned murderer with extreme mental delusions. She also wrote the book Cybil if you're familiar with it.

Hell House by Richard Matheson. This is a borderline classic, but if you haven't read it, you should. It's the best haunted house book I've ever read.

Survivor by J.F. Gonzalez. This one might push you to your limit, but I think it's worth checking out. It's about the underground snuff/porn film industry. It's by far the most disturbing one that I'm listing.

The Jigsaw Man by Gord Rollo. This is a good read, sort of a modern day Frankenstein, but very disturbing.

If you do happen to read any of these, try to remember to let me know what you think.

Jay Ten (talk) 04:22, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Well...
You've got a point there. But I don't exactly feel the same because I often fail my own expectations. Yeah, I have written some stuff that has surprised me, but none of it's really been creepypasta.

I think I'm trying too hard. I always try to make sure that every creepypasta I write is as realistic/original/believable AS POSSIBLE, but that's probably not the best way to go. I should give myself a little more room, and if I have serious doubts that what I make won't be good, then it'll go on my dA or Fictionpress instead.

And by the way... I also think I'm being too harsh on other users. Look at this pasta's comments to see what I mean. :/ That's why I'm doubtful about being VCROC. I may end up deleting quality material.

Just my thoughts. :) A picture is worth a thousand words, but I&#39;d rather write a thousand-word story. (talk) 05:04, August 6, 2014 (UTC) CassistRabbit

Re
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:356040

Done. Also, can you archive your talk page please? It is getting a little long. <strong style="color: #9ed9f7;">Dashie  ~20% Cooler~  05:11, August 6, 2014 (UTC)