Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180903225131/@comment-10502460-20180905001125

DrBobSmith wrote: OK, I will delete that line. How is the rest of it?

PS, I firmly believe that they covered up the Business Plot. It was just too outrageous for public consumption. Military coups weren't something that WE did.

I liked it enough. The background info about men having colonized the solar system is something I could take or leave, and it might be better to just mention a year that the story is set in (like maybe a release date for this game), but it's not a big deal.

So you were referring to the Business Plot, then?