Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29015383-20160712171950/@comment-28266772-20160713140426

I refer to this Good Sir to confirm that you should only drop the 's' after an apostrophe if the word ends in 's', not 'x' :)

And I think if you went back and made the ending a bit more solid that'd be great - you're clearly a good writer so I wouldn't worry or feel insecure about pulling it off. Even if the host just 'pretended' to be a vampire in such a way that everyone just thought it was part of his stage persona I think it'd do enough to make the audience feel that it was earned. Plus it'd make his little "I fucking love the internet." even funnier because this is a vampire who, thanks to the cynicism of the internet age, doesn't even have to hide being a vampire! But whatever route you ultimately choose I think you'll be able to pull it off. I'll make sure to offer any feedback on your updated versions.