Talk:Its Masterpiece/@comment-24387379-20150831191031

Meh, I suppose it has potential. Though I cringed at the mention of the 'devil's pentagram' for being both exceptionally cliché and for thinking that a symbol of the elements and protection against evil would be scary. Also, the creatures description shared multiple similarities with other Creepypasta villains and the line "it walked like a caveman" with the follow up of, "but this thing was smarter than any caveman. It was aware of what it was doing" served to make your lack of knowledge of cavemen evident. Cavemen were not mindless, they were more primitive than modern man but they could utilise tools, strategise and communicate with one another. They were aware of what they did.