Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444401-20150715024759/@comment-26723520-20150718204630

Well the whole half-sister part was somewhat unneeded because it went no where and I felt that Ghost Dad should of done more scary stuff instead of just sending random messages and appearing with red eyes as a shadow (could of done without the red eyes). Last thing I can comment is the fact that the writer dismissing strange messages from her pal David as a "brain fart"