Talk:Bugs/@comment-25052433-20140908085220

I agree with the comments below. While this story did feel a little rough around the edges in some places, overall, it served its purpose as a Creepypasta.

-There is something disturbing on a deep level about insects. People are just plain bothered by them. Understandably, a story concerning a man being covered by them in the night just added to that unnerving feel. Well done.

-I love how you used his lack of smell to compliment his apparent mental illness. Of course he didn't know there were dead bodies in his house, he couldn't smell them rotting. Very disturbing and original.