Talk:My Brother Died When I Was a Child. He Kept Talking. I Think People Should Know What He Said/@comment-29507836-20170827032004

It makes me dread my inevitable death. Dennis' last line hit the worst. "Please... don't ever die." The description for each scene was so... loud, as if it was deafening. It screamed at me each and every detail I yearned to learn. It's... magnificent.

However, I do feel that Dennis' dialogue could've been fixed better and assembled better. I do get that he's dead and he's just rambling, but the dialogue was slightly hard to understand at times. At a couple of parts, I had to re-read the sentence just to understand it. 9/10, no doubt a potential PotM.