Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26500304-20150621173408/@comment-26475800-20150621181057

Agreed with Mcdon92. This story is rather incoherent when it comes to grammar. This story needs a lot more to it, even if it was just filler. Proofread your story and hopefully you could find some of the problems. Also, the story wasn't that strong, think about what scares you, ask your friends and family what scares them, then think with that. If someone is scared of ants, maybe think of a way ants could become huge, what they would do, how the people would react, etc. put all of those details into your story and it would make it much better. If a story is long it doesn't mean it is bad, in fact, a lot more data can be gotten from longer stories, where with a few paragraphs you are left wondering about a lot, both styles have their uses. Read more, write more and you will be writing some wonderful stuff in the near future.