Talk:Abandoned by Disney/@comment-25246122-20140830021946

This creepypasta has been hyped up so much, and now I see what it's all about. The concept for this was phenomenal and was executed fantastically. I commend you for how much effort was so obviously put into the making of this story. Additionally, I greatly admire how you handled the point of view. The narrator is conveyed to have this almost teenager-like nature due to the bad words he says and his undying curiosity, which makes the reader feel comfortable and like they can relate to him. However, after a while the story ceased to be realistic and I found the ending was very far-fetched. The vocabulary used was brilliant and kept me intrigued. Very well done, it creeped me out, but I think it still has a few minor flaws. 8.5/10