Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37138398-20190226191619/@comment-9041013-20190226235956

Writing a bunch of stories in a couple of hours will most likely get you nowhere. Try to expand on the topics and themes you want to explore and talk about in your stories.

Now this feels like some edgy kid got superpowers and set out to be a "bad boy". Don't do that. You want a character who has a "guardian being" and gets to have his way? sure... make the encounter less wooden, make the character round - first sympathetic and later less, perhaps on the brink of sanity as part of their new found power. Give descriptions, maybe make this being murderously rebelious...

Expand on this thing.

Work on that thing... put some effort.