Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180613055407/@comment-5733573-20180614025650

DrBobSmith wrote: Jdeschene and BloodySpghetti,

Thank you for your reviews. I will be taking the story apart and hopefully fix the problems. Sometimes it's difficult to break past your memories of an actual incident and make it into a story that flows. I can understand that, but I think it's important to remember that you're writing fiction. If what you need is to recount your memories in order to process them, it may serve you better to post them on Reddit or somewhere similar. I wouldn't want you to get so caught up in trying to write a good story that you don't actually process anything.