User blog comment:TheClassyKiller/First pasta finished!/@comment-4750363-20140813011047/@comment-24101790-20140813013042

I deleted your story as the story had little build-up especially as it is barely over a paragraph long, there were spacing issues especially after using commas, the second person narrative is extremely hard to pull off and does more harm to the story than good, additionally the premise (Waking up in the middle of the night after hearing a strange noise) has been covered so many times that any rendition [seems http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Taps_on_the_Window] [trite http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Tap_Tap...Tap_Tap].

I would really suggest using the writer's workshop with your next story as there are a bunch of talented writers/editors out there who can point out the issues in order to strengthen your story/talent