Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26447851-20160705140237/@comment-26447851-20160722043528

You know, I've never actually seen that movie but it sounds interesting. My views on government are my own, and honestly the government thing is just an idea. What I do when writing is I create checkpoints of events the character goes through in his development process and I simply "fill in the blanks" between them. My problem is that I am far from perfect when doing that. As for the character. He has weaknesses as he has a weak spot for family. Also, the stupid guards thing actually wasn't an excuse to progress the story. It was actually my attempt at a reoccurring joke to make the story less overdramatic. A stupid idea that seemed appealing at the time. For example in saints row 4 how through certain points of the story mode they have arguement whether the robot is power armor or a robot. The main reason I actually kept it was not only that I as an author actually seen no other way out of the room, but I also got a lot of positive feedback on it.

The Third thing I wanted to discuss was the hoia baciu forest chapter, the last one that actually saved. When I said I showed depth in discord as a character, I was referencing two scenes. *spoiler alert.* btw he kept mentioning that he left the mansion. He left because of the same reason that batman wears a mask. He didn't want to put them in danger, and he did. The war they talked about took place at the mansion, and he blamed himself. Of course I haven't written it down yet, as I deleted the original story in favor of this one. I thought his origin could be told in flashbacks. The original story was way different than this and can't be used because 75 percent of it is blacklisted.