Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30891328-20170402004727/@comment-24101790-20170402142101

Punctuation (punctuation improperly used: "I tried to fit the pieces of this ginormous puzzle together by thinking that when the man in the mask finished mudering the family he'd must have hated keeping the mask on because it maybe felt uncomfortable, but when he had dropped it, and now he's somehow stolen it back"), spelling ("Today I saw in the newspaper that a few months ago the mask the police from the family muder was missing from the station's evidence locker."), wording (run on sentences/awkward sentences: "I grabbed an old baseball bat I had, and slowly walked down the hallway to where I heard the sound to see that my window was broken, and I noticed a rock on the floor", etc.)  and story issues.

I'm just going to copy/paste my previous comment to save myself some time: "I'm sorry, but this story is rushed, has formatting, spelling, awkward wording, a real lack of description, and the plot feels really generic without any real impact. A last piece of advice, please read and take feedback into account as you seem to be repeating a lot of the same issues here and that is no way to improve as an author. The writer's workshop is for feedback and improving, so please put some time in with your stories or they will keep on being deleted/negatively reviewed."

I really suggest you put some actual work into your writing as repeating these issues ad nauseam isn't really helping you improve.