Talk:The Choice/@comment-25524353-20150529110559

It wasn't bad, but it had a few flaws. after a few days the skeleton just kinda shows up, you need to build things up rather than just having him come out right away. second...I'm sorry if this sounds mean I liked this pasta but, a fucking skeleton? really? it's kinda genaric imo. it did leave an erie vibe and I like how you structured it. 6/10