Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24714617-20140530224759/@comment-9967354-20140531065457

I like the way this was written, and it has that eerie feel to it that a good story does. I really have nothing to say for it. Maybe you could check back for malapropisms, because I see a very extensive vocabulary here. It's this thing where you mean something and use a word that doesn't express what you mean. She was crying profoundly to she was crying profusely, because the first sentence doesn't make sense. That's a true story.