Talk:The Seven/@comment-31077845-20170308033343

This drug on a little, and, well, I don't know how to describe it, but it just didn't have a very good hook I guess? There was nothing to draw the reader in. Honestly I kinda found myself skimming by the time I was only a couple screenlengths down; as such I won't do too deep a review as that would be unfair if I hadn't really read the entire thing, but I figured I'd at least point that out. Maybe find a better way to ease people into the story.

Oh and...gah, I'm trying to resist, but my scientific side can't do it. The 10% 90% thing with the brain reflects a serious deficiency in basic neurobiological knowledge. Yes, we do only use a small portion of our brain at a time, but that's because each section of our brain is specialized for specific tasks. You can use all 100% of your brain or those parts wouldn't be there, you just can't use all 100% at one time. It would be like having a toolbox full of tools and saying "I'm only using a wrench to unscrew these bolts when I could use EVERY TOOL!": not every tool can fit in there at once, and the wrench is the best fit for the job, kind of like the wrench will be fairly useless when you need a screwdriver.