Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25051266-20141103220158/@comment-25051266-20141103225226

Thanks for the reply, also I didn't really notice any problems in the way I use commas.

The plot of my creepypasta takes place in a world where a disease has broken out, affecting everyone the main character is close to. This disease even effects his brother forcing the mc to shoot him before the transformation begins. The transformation is the process in which the disease changes the human host into a horrifying creature. Every survivor not affected is forced to join the war, and there the main character faces many horrifying experiences including the discovery of how his father died years prior.