Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20141224181745/@comment-24381191-20141225154026

Wouldn't Timmy's parents be the least bit worried when he said he was being stalked? I mean, I know they never believe him, but still, your son claiming that he's being stalked is nothing to take lightly.

Also, why did the masked man want to help Timmy? Who is he and how does he know that his parents never believe him? Is he really... ohh, he's a stalker, isn't he.

That's cool, but how do Timmy's parents not suspect how he knows all this?

That's all I have to give, probably my shortest review ever but I don't know what to say about this pasta.