Talk:NES Godzilla Creepypasta/Chapter 8: Finale (Part 2)/@comment-3244769-20131211191027

Loved this one; you didn't go overboard and make all your characters die, but instead you put up a challenge against this monster. I was also really impressed by the pictures, you seem like a great spriter, and I can tell how much time and effort you put into the story as a whole.

What bugged me a little was that the ending kind of ruined all that. Sure, the pictures were fine, but as Mr. Magi said, the whole "power of love" thing and the paraonormal stuff really changed the story from something original and creative into a clichépasta. Creepypastas are generally supposed to be scary, and you delivered that spectacularly throughout most of the story (for example, you took such a subtle and new idea as a quiz mode and changed it into a brutal place), but the ending took away from all of the scariness and nearly ruined the read. Nonetheless, I definitely enjoyed this and I would say that this is in my top 10 favorite pastas.

9.76/10