Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-26285769-20150407000556/@comment-25148755-20150407001248

Is this a troll? It feels like a troll...

If it's not, then you really need to read the link Empy posted. Basically what you are doing here violates pretty much every section of the "how to write a good creepypasta" rule book.

My advice: come up with a story first, then figure out what characters are going to populate it, not coming up with OC (which is really just a name at this point) and trying to figure out how to fit them into a story. Once you have a good start, post it over on the Writer's Workshop forum so we can dismemb...I mean, give you constructive feedback and criticism.