Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-38272782-20190123111145/@comment-35711173-20190125051438

Story: The Gravedigger Had An Odd Conversation [Creepypasta/English]

Good:

I do like the picture.

You have a good voice. Nice pitch and speed, generally easy to understand.

Good audio mixing. The music didn't drown you out.

Bad.

You don't give a link to the story.

I don't see titles for the story, just that one picture.

You had several pronunciation errors, at least to American English standards.

I didn't feel satisfied by the story. It was like something was missing.