Talk:Jennifer's Furby/@comment-5886533-20140521142029

7/10. Jennifer's story is sad and the narrorator is genuine, making the pasta more believable overall. Plus, the idea a Furby could mimic her words like a parrot is believable, too. But I'm not very creeped out. Some of your sentences can be re-worded to flow better, but other than that your structure is good.