Talk:Wallflower/@comment-5239282-20140711012329

The only thing I disagree with is the usage of the phrase "sick fuck," especially when the rest of the article is a characterless, neutral POV. Felt out of place.

Personal gripe: Why does violence have to lead to more violence? I understand the concept of inflicting pain being the only way to cope, but it's a bit forced. I'd have preferred for the story to end up having a positive side in the ghost remaining entirely benevolent. That good can come from terrible violence is a seldom-taught and beneficial message for all of us.

9/10.