Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25002432-20180705054434/@comment-9041013-20180705212325

Awh this subject has been done for so many times.

Make it a short story first, then flip the "my room mate's ghost haunting me" to something less obvious, you could go and say they were missing, you could say they were missing and you and a small group of people knew they were dead, you could say there was a big fight between you two and they left only for you to hear something convoluted about your roommates possible death (accident, we don't know who died, we're looking at the possible identities)

This is just not working the way it is.