Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27838637-20160426151716/@comment-28060931-20160510154219

Anarchic Operations wrote: Jake888: Thanks a million for the feedback. Never doubt the quality of your reviews in the future! It may not be as in depth as a more experienced writer, but it is a review nonetheless, and it will help me improve my creepypasta!

Before I wrote the story I was concerned about the fact that Mr. Tyrell dies at the end, and wondered if it would detract from the quality of the story. But there is something called 'Broadcasting Theory' that makes it possible forfirst-person past tense narrators to die. It is really quite interesting and you should check it out.

http://thewritepractice.com/narrators-die-pt2/

The other points you mentioned have been noted, and I will try to integrate them into my story. In an answer to your question; I did write Max to exhibit werewolf characteristics, and his decription is very animalistc throughout the story thus implying he may be one. However, I wanted to leave 'what' he was unanswered. He may well be a werewolf, but we don't know for certain. It's really up to the readers interpretation.

A_O.

I'm glad my review helped. I re-read the story a few minutes ago qnd realised I missed the animalistic charecteristics because I didn't have much time while intionly reviewing this. Now that I have gone through it once more, I see more cleary as to the charecter of Max. I really enjoyed the Lovecraftian 'Fear of the Unknown' element in the story.

I definetly will check the article out, since these things do interest me. Thanks