Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-40022501-20190712212238/@comment-40022501-20190714213525

Well Everyone, I think I corrected most of the grammer problems using grammerly.com. If you see more let me know.

DrBobSmith, Yeah the m40 is quite a heavy gun, but then again it is what the character Jake is used to using, so its what he uses. It's about like my neighbor went on a antelope hunt with a 375 H&H when a 30-06 or something similar is much more practical, but he is used to his rifle so... Yea.

And as for why a Alaskan guide would fly down to Louisiana to hunt this thing, I suppose there is several reasons, but I really thought it was showing his sense of adventure more than anything. I wrote this story with a series in mind, Basic outline of this team/group travels around hunting different monsters etc. If that helps clearify

They did also hire a local, the character named Shelby is a local that was hired for this reason.

Thanks again for the advice, as a first-time writter I really appreciate it.