User blog comment:PyroGothNerd/Cliches/@comment-24059312-20140513213819

Thanks for the tips. I'll try to leave that stuff out of my pastas.

Uh...how about how in some they make the character seem like they have no emotion? I always hate when they say nothing about the characters emotion or feelings in it. Like does he like killing? Does he/she wish they didn't kill this person? It's always left out. In mine I think it is... (mental note; add that in) It just doesn't give the character any realism. It makes them boring and it makes you have to guess. Sometimes they're just like, 'He laughed insanely...' But does it mean he actaully enjoyed it? Or does he mean he couldn't control it. I just hate having to guess sometimes on what the main character (mostly if their the killer) feels when they actually kill.

Though I admit quessing about the stuff can be fun if they give you hints and leads.