Creepypasta Wiki:Spinoff Appeal

Here is a system in which you can get your OC Original Content (OC) spinoffs, prequels, sequels, and stories on the forbidden subjects added to this wiki. Here's how it works:

Post your story offsite, and add a link to it below, along with a brief description. We admins will review your story to determine if it's good enough to be added to the wiki. If it is determined that your story is good, we will add the story ourselves, and add credit to you in the footer section. We will also add your story under User Submissions under your username. If the request is fulfilled, your post will be deleted.

Here are some places you can upload your story for it to be judged: Pastebin, Spinpasta Wiki, Zelda Creepypasta Wiki, Minecraft CreepyPasta Wiki, or Poképasta Wiki. You can also upload your story to DeviantART.

Keep these things in mind:


 * Your story must be original content (OC).
 * Your story must meet the Quality Standards in order for it to be accepted.
 * Try to use as as few Creepy Clichés as possible.
 * Stories (this includes stories written the format of a diary or journal) must be complete. No "COMING SOON!" pages or half-finished pages.
 * You can add multiple stories in your request, but you have to put a description for each one.
 * If you don't want to give away any "twist" you added to the plot, just mention in the blurb that there's a twist that we should find out for ourselves.
 * Don't use this page to troll.
 * Don't get too upset if your request is denied!

Admins: If you reject a request, give an explanation why (bad spelling, bad grammar, too many clichés, too generic, Mary Sue protagonist/antagonist, poorly-written, etc.)

And please remember to sign your requests with four tildes.

Aura.exe
I just wanted to add some edits that make the story much better.

Here's the paste bin of the work I did.

http://pastebin.com/vKMaMTw4 My Username : ninjas-in-a-box

Originally supposed to be an edit but I got re-directed here. I added content to try to improve the original piece. It's about a guy who discovers an illegal copy of a game that was banned from reproduction and sale due to the fact the creator was insane. Ninjas-in-a-box (talk) 23:24, October 30, 2013 (UTC)Ninjas-in-a-box

Collin Farrior: The Proxy Of Death
A Slender Man Story I Wrote which tells the tale of a FBI Agent who survives a Night with The Slender Man and His Death Dealing Proxy Named Collin Farrior here is the Link: http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Collin_Farrior:_The_Proxy_Of_Death Stormtali (talk) 01:30, October 19, 2013 (UTC)

Pokemon Golden Yellow
My third and probably final pokepasta. Here's the link: http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Pokemon_Golden_Yellow  Pokemongreen3867 (talk) 04:15, October 12, 2013 (UTC)

Pokémon Fuchsia
I wrote another Pokémon pasta. This one is also very well written and different from my previous entry, "Pokémon Dark Green". Please read it and give me some sort of feedback. Here is the link: http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Pokemon_Fuchsia Thank you. Pokemongreen3867 (talk) 00:02, October 5, 2013 (UTC)

Pokémon Dark Green
I wrote this pasta months ago. I know it's another pokemon pasta, but I feel that it is well written and deserves a chance on this wiki. It has a similar feel to lost silver and strangled red. At the very least I would like it to be reviewed and for me to get some sort of feedback. Here is the link: http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Pok%C3%A9mon_Dark_Green  Thank you. Pokemongreen3867 (talk) 02:03, September 30, 2013 (UTC)


 * This has been up for a while now, actually. LOLSKELETONS  ([ Leave a message ]) ( My contributions ) 05:20, October 5, 2013 (UTC)

Herobrine Spinoffs
I specialize in writing unexpected and very creepy Herobrine spinoffs, almost always based off a concept that has never been used before. I am quite good at writing, and I have several stories planned out, with major twist endings, and I have 2 already half written out. I just would like my pastas to appear here, for publicity. Here is a link to my quotev profile, I have the two stories I mentioned included in here: http://www.quotev.com/Allibrine Also, I would like to point out that while the "Allibrine" pasta may seem like a spin off, it is sort of an introduction to another character, who will feature in some of my stories. So please leave it up, it is very important to peope who want to have an understanding of the character.

Allibrine (talk) 07:36, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Could you Add My Story for Me?
www.spinpasta.wikia.com/silence- Aight. This a rather...short background story about Milo Asher's background preceding and during Tribe Twelve. Also describes Firebrand's reactions. Just put it up, and add me in the footer like you guys usually do. That is, if the answer's yes. -Snap Flash (talk) 06:13, March 3, 2013 (UTC), March 2013

Can you add my story please?
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Pok%C3%A9mon_-_Death_is_welcome I have worked very well on this and would like it to be on this website. I put it up thinking that it has good story, creepy atmosphere & well writen but it was put as a spinoff. So can you add it please? Thanks Ryan russell13579 (talk) 20:39, April 8, 2013 (UTC)

Falls below quality standards.

 Sloshedtrain  Talk   Contribs 21:26, October 2, 2013 (UTC)

Blue Eyes
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Blue_Eyes - A story about a girl who gets bullied and abused a lot and eventually goes insane. Some people thought if it as a spinoff of Jeff the Killer, but it wasn't intended to be. It was taken off of CPW because of that reason... So please put it up. ~Hoodie (talk) 06:02, March 23, 2013 (UTC)

Spinoff Incoming (Squidward's Suicide: Rewritten)
I recently rewrote Squidward's Suicide, erasing the clichés while trying to keep the story good. I passed it around to two or three users, all of them replied positively besides pointing some spelling and grammar mistakes, so I think that it should be good to make it a candidate to be one of the few Spinoffs that gets added.

Link. WhyAmIReadingThis (talk) 21:03, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * Hmm... Some grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing a little editing won't fix. I think we should post it on Spinpasta Wiki before considering putting it on this site, but overall, I think it's a pretty good candidate. Why do they call it the funny bone? Because obviously people are laughing at your pain. 00:03, March 13, 2013 (UTC)


 * Grammar mistakes. Oh. I'm sorry. Sure. I'll add it to the Spinpasta Wiki after I'm done with the grammar mistakes. Thank you for the response, Skeletons. I&#39;m not an actor, I&#39;m a distractor (talk) 20:19, March 13, 2013 (UTC)


 * Added to Spinpasta, as suggested. Also couldn't add the Red Mist /Squidward's Suicide category there. I&#39;m not an actor, I&#39;m a distractor (talk) 21:25, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

This is my appeal
I've wrote a creepypasta about the Darkrai's ability to create nightmares and making people suffer since it. Its main character is Red. It has some elements from the game since Red is the character from the game. It's start involves the misterious package you get with the Darkrai event in Diamond, Pearl and Platinium. It also appelas to hardcore pokémon fans as it plays with the fact that you can only wake up from Darkrai's nightmare with Cresselia's scale.

Link:

MTVirux 22:59, April 1, 2013 (UTC)

Story Appeals
OK, so these first two are about Slenderman, BUT, it isn't the OMGITISSLENDERMANBBQ type of story. It is verry subte for both of them, usually being found out at the end and not playing a huge part in the rest of the story, in terms of relating to Slenderman.

Why I Never Laugh: http://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/p1lgg/why_i_dont_laugh/Has a bit of a twist ending I guess, nothing major, I basiclly turned a joke into a Creepypasta and never really said it was Slenderman.

The Guardian: http://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/wd12g/the_guardian/ I actually actively refraim from naming Slenderman in this one till the end. It is still a bit of a twist I guess, but nothing too major.

My Own Hell: http://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/yg674/this_is_my_own_hell/ OK, so I can't say what this one is, and I do appologize if it gives you the "oh no, not another one," feeling, but although the subject is overused to death and beyond, the way I tell it is more or less original. There is a journal at the end, kind of, but it is more for the reveal/twist, not really the format.

Dr Remag (talk) 17:41, April 6, 2013 (UTC)


 * Your story "My Own Hell" has the wrong link. Did you mean this? TerribleFate64 (talk) 21:06, April 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, sorry about that. I changed the link to "My Own Hell." Dr Remag (talk) 22:14, April 6, 2013 (UTC)


 * I wrote another story that got good praise. It is based on the holders, though not in the holders format and uses one of my original charaters. The story is called The Last Object: http://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/1bx27e/the_last_object/ I may have broken the canon, but at the same time I stuck, more or less, to the canon of the original holders story and have a pretty large twist to it. This one is more of a mindfuck then my past work I think, unsettling with the smallest bit of suffering for flavor. Give it a read and tell me what you guys think.
 * Dr Remag (talk) 16:08, April 8, 2013 (UTC)

I'm gonna work on fulfilling these appeals soon, it's just that I'm working on a couple of sketch requests for friends on DeviantART and FurAffinity so it might take awhile. Just letting everyone know that I haven't forgotten about Spinoff Appeal. A huge battleship FURBEARINGBRICK is approaching fast! (talk) 15:31, April 10, 2013 (UTC)

Dyers Eve
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Dyers_Eve I've had this story available on the Spinpasta Wikia for a little over a month. The story intertwines 6-8 different previous pastas, with verbal allusion to several others, which is why I figured I would post it on the Spinpasta wiki primarily. The story follows "Peter" in his journal. He was one of the original scientists who was involved with the Gateway of the Mind project. Five years later, he is re-assigned to The Transcendence Project, which is essentially "take two" and taken directly from Godzilla: Replay and the preceding NES Godzilla pasta. Their first human test subject is a boy named Benjamin. Peter is dealing with becoming overly attached to Benjamin and his past regrets, which drives him to insanity. He sneaks under "the facility" one night to find a chamber that holds Heaven, which he drowns under the influence of another demon. There's also two twists at the end, one of which is pretty predictable, the other I find somewhat clever but that might just be me. I'm personally proud of the pasta and was curious if it could be uploaded here. (I'm so damn good at making my descriptions brief, guys.) I, Da Cashman (talk) 03:25, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

My Pasta
I wrote this creepypasta here: http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Origin_of_Scrowstalk in hopes that it would be published here. I would really like it to be a real thing, please critique my work :) UnknownExistance (talk) 03:24, May 20, 2013 (UTC)

Perplexus
Perplexus is a creepypasta that may fall under the 'haunted file' or the '.exe file' category. Although the story is not centred around an executable file, or is in fact truly haunted, it may still be rejected because of this. To ensure I did not simply have my post deleted, I thought it best to link it here for review and possible acception. The story follows one man's interest in an encoded file that has gained popularity in the media, and the dark meaning behind it. Pastebin link is here: http://pastebin.com/hr0mZNGs

Tigerhallam (talk) 15:15, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Operation: Alpha
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Operation:_Alpha

Look, I don't want to spoil the surprise (because it's one of those mind-fuck pastas) so I'd like you to read it so you know why it's on the Spinpasta wiki. Now, I know there are alot of HORRIBLE pastas in the general subject, but at least it's not a .exe/haunted game like 99% of all the others. I didn't see any creepy clichés in it, there may be 1 or so, but I think it qualifies to pass Spin-Off Appeal. It's my first and best pasta I wrote, so uploading it here would be a huge achievement in my story writing.

Your's truly, that creepy guy who stalks people in chat.

Operation Top Dog: A Government Creepypasta
http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Operation_Top_Dog:_An_ORIGINAL_Government_Creepypasta

My so-called creepypasta is about the government. I can't really give anything else away. It took me about 4-5 months to write it (Still open to edits). I DO admit it was inspired by MKULTRA and Polybius, though. It's just not a spin-off of them.

User:Pupdude (talk) 21:47, June 17, 2013 (UTC)


 * Possible: If you could cut down on the caps as they arent needed in thhe story I think it could be greenlighted as it isn't actually a haunted game or file.

20:43, July 4, 2013 (UTC)


 * I'm guessing you meant the all-caps parts.  Replaced all of the all-caps with italicized lowercase.  Hopefully, that solves the issue you had with it. User:Pupdude (talk) 03:42, July 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * I still need a verdict on my creepypasta.  Could someone help me out? User:Pupdude (talk) 18:40, September 29, 2013 (UTC)

The Origin Behind Squidward's Suicide and Red Mist
http://www.booksie.com/horror/short_story/thewalkingcreepypasta/the-origin-behind-squidwards-suicide-red-mist

I'd like to add this story because this isn't even a spinoff. It's a prequel story on how the Red Mist and Squidward's Suicide came to be. Please take the time to read my story. TheWalkingCreepyPasta (talk) 18:30, July 6, 2013 (UTC)

Abandoned For Life
A long maplstory pasta  invo lving events that lead to the house in the swamp to be abandoned. Not that many cliches my freind went over it..

http://alexs-spinoff-appeal.wikia.com/wiki/Alex%27s_spinoff_appeal_Wiki

3alexbalex (talk) 11:32, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Falls below our standards. LOLSKELETONS ([ Leave a message ]) ( My contributions ) 01:46, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

Doctor Hate
It starts out kind of cliche talking about how I get the game, but the game is not haunted or possessed. The game itself is original. It's meant to teach a lesson, and I mean for the reader to take the lesson to heart as well. I'm fully willing to let this pasta be anonymous, but I want for it to be meaningful to whoever reads it.

http://pastebin.com/utSv8qHz

Copys
This is an original story based on a dream I had. This video game, which is practically brand new, was bought for the boy who owns it. It wasn't found or given to by some weird dude. It's also not a haunted game, but practically a snuff film turned into a video game. The cutscenes are real footage, which is the part that makes it disturbing. I've gotten GREAT reviews on it from peers, even my best friend who does NOT like creepypastas. If any of my stories should go on the Wiki, it's this one. An admin denied it with no explanation. "It was denied, end of story." The rules say I need a fair explanation, which I can't think of a good reason at all. The title is original, the content is original, there are hardly cliches, and the ones that ARE there work with the story. Trust me, I've read video game pastas. A comment I got from a peer was "FINALLYY! a video game pasta that's GOOD!" No hyperrealistic blood here. So please let me put it up? Also, the game "Copys" doesn't exist.

http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Copys

ReitannaSeishin (talk) 18:45, August 24, 2013 (UTC)ReitannaSeishin

It's meets quality standards and the pasta itself is pretty good. The gore is pulled off correctly and had minimal clichés. To be on the safe side, I will add this to NSFW. --  Sloshedtrain  Talk   Contribs 22:41, October 2, 2013 (UTC)

Set Me Free
-Set Me Free=

Yes, another Slenderman story, but this one will be different. It goes into more of what the Slenderman is, why he does what he does, and so on. I have not completed it yet, but I can tell you it will be a more original take than 'kidnap kid, terrify parent, no survivors' breed of Slenderman stories. The only cliche is the number 13 used once, and if I remove this it will be of no consequence to the story. http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Set_me_Free Not finished yet, but I will finish it if I get approval to put it on this site. I believe it lacks grammar errors, and uses the proper spacing and title capitals.

It does not actively state the name 'Slenderman' but uses the same description - tall, thin, and faceless, as well as using the operator symbol. The basic premise: A historian is invited by a collegue to Cornwall, to examine a centuries old book with the operator symbol on every page and a hidden message. After viewing this, the symbol starts to crop up around his life, and he begins being stalked by a being that begs him to 'Set me Free'.

I think this gives Slenderman a slightly fresher take than 'omgfacelessmanisgonnakillme' and will, later on (I have not written this part yet) deal with more unique themes about him.

Tenzinkendrick (talk) 18:45, September 1, 2013 (UTC)Tenzinkendrick

I like it, it mets up to par and doesn't follow serious clichés. Though, it does have some grammar errors, but I'll deal with it.

 Sloshedtrain  Talk   Contribs 21:46, October 2, 2013 (UTC)

Pinkie Pie's Blood
Yeah, yeah. I get it. MLP creepypasta is not scary. Look, I think it's fine, I checked for grammar issues, I don't see a problem this not entering the site. If it doesn't meet the standards, oh well. I guess it'll just stay on Spinpasta. I thought Cupcakes was real good. Why not make one myself?

w:c:spinpasta:Pinkie Pie's Blood

Just another grimdark Cupcakes spinoff. Brings no new ideas to the table and is of below-average quality (for creepypasta in general; for a MLP grimdark, it's pretty run-of-the-mill).

LOLSKELETONS ([ Leave a message ]) ( My contributions ) 01:46, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

Wilderness
http://someordinarygamers.wikia.com/wiki/Wilderness

Posting this for a friend who didn't want to go through the spin-off appeal for some reason. That user is Stormlilly and I have their authorizaton to do this.

The Fantastic Flaky~ (talk) 04:12, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

Education
I am not really expecting it to be allowed, but here it is anyway. Mostly as a challenge to myself, I decided to try to write a short pasta each day of October. To keep things fresh I have been experimenting with subjects and styles. This one is actually a Pokepasta, hence not really expecting that it will be allowed.

The basic plot is that a kid grows up with his pokemon and they are best friends (understandably, this line made you cringe.) When he is old enough to begin training his pokemon he decides that the system is violent and cruel. He then sets about on a vigilante quest to make the other trainers understand what the duels feel like. In retrospect, the synopsis doesn't really sell it.

Mostly I am submitting this in case it is acceptable, but understand that it is a really played out subject that is difficult to find a new angle to approach.

http://danatblair.blogspot.co.uk/2013/10/always-together.html http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Education

Danatblair (talk) 00:23, October 17, 2013 (UTC)


 * Eh... I think I'll pass on this one. You're obviously a good writer (if your other works are anything to go by), but this one just seems like a dud. It isn't particularly well-executed (most likely due to it being rushed) and the main idea behind the story ("Pokémon battles = animal abuse") has been done already. Perhaps not to the extent of other Pokémon clichés, but enough to make it feel rehashed.


 * LOLSKELETONS (talk) 02:02, October 17, 2013 (UTC)


 * No problem. Thanks for being so prompt about it.
 * Danatblair (talk) 03:32, October 17, 2013 (UTC)