User blog comment:Tiololo/For All You Pasta Critics/@comment-25941663-20151228001645/@comment-28088262-20151228100114

I agree with your point of grammar as a technical thing and that bad grammar can be distracting. I also think pacing is important as the delivery.

The idea of each story's own identity is interesting. I have also seen stories that seem well developed until the author tries to fit in a twist ending which just doesn't work.