Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20180915053007/@comment-26444017-20180915055425

Well, this may end up being an independant story down the line, and I wrote it with that possibility in mind. I think that's why I went with that sort of beginning.

I did notice the whole 'the house changes' thing, and I kind of incorperated that. I wrote the description of the house before that comment, but it still works, since this story uses a town house, as opposed to some of the other entries that stage in more exotic locations (especially Helel's upcoming second entry).

The gatekeeper is my biggest issue right now. He may need to change drastically depending on what story ends up preceding mine. I'll handle that, and his attitude toward the start, once I know what I'm dealing with.

In any case, thank you for the kind words. This damn thing took me way too long to get done. I got so lazy at some points, and I'm glad it came out good.