Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24946232-20140515225214/@comment-24927388-20140516021900

I really enjoy the way you write, you definitely have a way with words. I feel you should do an origin story of pinky pinky. A how he came to be type of story. I feel you could easily make this a 2 or 3 part story, with out it feeling over done. I think this would be a great intro for a series, not too informative, but enough to keep you interested. And if you write a second and third part you can delve deeper into the legend itself. But great job, it seems more like a story now, even if the reader is thrown haphazardly into an ongoing conflict. It leaves you to think about possible reasons he does what he does, and what will become of the kids. It also leaves you wanting to know more, I dont feel unsatisfied with the story at hand, but would love to see a continuation. If you wouldn't mind checking out my story Crystal Dreams I would appreciate it.