Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27838637-20160727122520/@comment-25569708-20160805035519

Sorry for taking a bit to reply, I've been feeling pretty under the weather to be honest. I read your story and I'll be able to leave my thoughts tomorrow. Until then here are a few errors I found:

"On the dashboard was a large cardboard sign reading; "Look Inside" (add a period)"

"So, that's (add "what") the car said to me this morning."

"The News ("News" to "news") this morning shows that the robberies"

Sorry again, hope you can understand.