Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24956612-20140518204844

             It’s a stormy night again at home. You’re searching through the creepy archives, looking for something interesting. A Paranormal story you think? Nah, too complicated. Let’s see, there’s slenderman again… it’s getting kinda old.

“Hmm… Nothing looks good anymore, not even the old stuff. Wait, what’s this. “Don’t turn”? Guess that’s fine.”

             You click the link.

“You… Take a look around you… see that object right there? Yeah, it looks out of place doesn’t it? What if I told you it is there for a reason? It might seem crazy, but its all about perspective. It wanted to be there, to be used, to be adored, to be comforting. Have you touched this item yet? Good, don’t do it! Like I said… it’s there for a reason… its reason. It’s been watching you. Go ahead, look around, don’t be scared. It can’t hurt you… yet. If you were smart you would know that it should not be there, but you only noticed now… But why am I telling you this? It’s because I didn’t listen. I should have told myself to stay away from it, but common sense said otherwise. Now I’m looking at death straight in the face with the object right beside me. Once you touch it, it doesn’t matter if you let go or not, that thing will be standing there. Its gruesome form, begging to be noticed, flesh dripping of its carcass like a melting popsicle. Should you have touched it, don’t keep staring at it, because it gets more eager…waiting for you to find it. That object will be the death of you. Oh god.. it’s coming now! FINAL WORDS: DO NOT TOUCH THE OBJECT, DO NOT FALL FOR REASONING, AND DON’T TURN-”

             The message ends with a picture taken from a webcam of the creature with the writer’s forehead slightly underneath. The picture terrifying, your endorphins rush to you head. You start to feel lightheaded. After you catch your breath, you begin panic. The power goes out. You look straight at the object. As you head the writer’s words, you decide that it’s best to stay in the dark.

''This Was my first short but sweet one I wrote after looking up some guides online. I'm not sure if I'm completly inside the range of unsettling or unease the audience would find sutiable. Any helpful advice would greatly appreciated. Thanks!'' 