Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25169949-20150510065309

Hey y'all, I've got a few stories I'm not sure if they're suitable for the Wiki, and I wanted to run 'em past ya to see what you think of 'em, and how I can improve them.

Hollowhead, which got rejected beforehand. It was my attempt to make a non-shit version of Eyeless Jack, but I think there's enough originality in there to make it its own thing. Though, as a word to the wise, the entitie in the story isn't named "Eyeless Jane," as the person looking over it thought, but "Hollowhead"

All Roads Lead To Rome. My attempt at making a long-overexposed horror character fresh again, without ever saying its name in the text. Also, a character piece.

The Ride Never Ends/The Night Rider. May be the most 80s creepypasta monster ever.

. An exceprt from a larger work that I still think works as its own piece.

Rumors on a City Street Corner. My attempt at replicating the feel of the "Rumors" from the tabletop game Unknown Armies. Debatable how well I succeeded.

So, what's good about 'em, what's bad, and how do I fix 'em good enough for the wiki? 