Talk:The "I Love You" Murders/@comment-27374673-20151210025225

This story wasn't great, but it wasn't horrible. First off, the author did bring up  that the murders didn't get a lot of media coverage. This is a somewhat cliche, but barely acceptable way to acknowledge that the reader wouldn't find any information about these murders. Although, that does raise the classic question, 'How does the author know about this?' That question is never addressed.

Anyway, the concept of the story is decent and intriguing enough, and the execution is done well for a short story. The ending is very predictable though, Different, usually vital human parts have gone missing from several women. Putting this together with the fact that everyone killed were women and the note, makes it too simple for the reader to figure out the ending before it even occurs.

As for the 'scare factor,' I found this more interesting than creepy or scary.

I would give this story a 7.8/10, and I would say that the author is very likely to create a great story.

(This is just a side note, but since I'm a reader akin to the works of some other 'famous' creepypasta authors, I will commend the author for not writing everything in purple prose or overusing elipses.)

-RIPS