Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25148755-20140715033608/@comment-9967354-20140719100419

The story was pretty damned amazing. I had to read it twice to firstly understand it better, and secondly because it was worth reading twice. I don't think it requires any changes. It's got a good plot, excellent expression and is frankly terrifying. At first I was about to suggest another ending, but this is perfect, now that I've thought it through.