Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27002167-20150920061141

Hello!, im not a native speaker writer.

So, i have done my best efforts to bring this creepypasta alive for the english comunity (since, in my  comunity this creepypasta concept its pretty dead)

So, i beg you to inform me of any Misspelling/Writung/Structure issue.

About the duration.

Dont worry is a short one.

Here it is:

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Michael Swaladski (or Mike, as everyone called him) was a worker of a chemical plant, that for security reasons it was located outside the city he lived.

The route he takes to address the chemical plant is a long route, it takes about an hour and a half to reach the site.

The road led only to the structure and a gas station located halfway, (that would explain why the road was so empty since not many people went to the place).

It was aproximately 6:00 AM, and Mike was enjoying a hot coffee while going to work.

the road was covered with fog, which made sense since it was an autumn morning, however he noted that the fog was denser than usual.

He drove quietly thinking about personal problems family-related, as he drove, in the distance he saw a gray car

that seemed to be stuck in the middle of the road.

Mike rolled down the window of his car to ask if anyone needed help, with a slight concern he approached and proceeded

to get out of his car, only to realize there was no one in the mysterious vehicle.

Both doors appeared to be open, leftovers were around the passenger seat, which caused even more questions to Mike.

everything seemed to have been a very abrupt movement.

Mike considered calling the authorities, or at least a local crane service, but he had signal problems in the past, the signal was very unstable,

so he had to recur constantly the call.

Since he was a person who gets stressed out easily, he gave up making the call, and continued his route trying to forget the incident.

While Mike kept driving, he noticed something weird in the atmosphere.

Far in the distance he saw a small patch of mist that looked red with a darker tonality, as he kept advancing, the patch of mist started to grow and grow.

Mike immediately alarmed because this seemed to be an accident or leakage from the chemical plant.

he stood looking at the spot for a while, but did not seem to belong to any chemical that was stored in the plant.

There was something, something behind the red fog.

Mike panics immediately. he saw some kind of elongated humanoid figure of almost four meters, his skin was hairless,

Too thin to be almost skeletal.

Mike turns around and goes to the other side of the road, trying to escape the red mist cloud.

Several minuts passed before he started to reduce his nerves.

Then Mike slows the vehicle abruptly, and starts to cry out of nowhere like if he was under an extremly level of stress.

He saws another cloud of red mist... he knew he was cornered, the creatures and the mist also were on the other side.

He gets out of the car, shaking with fear, and starts running in to the woods in the sideroad.

Michael Swaladski never contacted with his family and was never seen again by the plant.

after a few weeks he was declared as a missing person.

Sadly, One can say that the last thing Michael Swaladski left, was a car in the middle of the road.

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