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"Why... Why do they all hate me... What did i ever do to them-.. To her..." Madison spoke to himself in a sadden tone as he sat there on his bed, His knee's brought up to his chest as his arm's wrapped around him while he buried his face into his leg's. He shiver lightly as if he was fighting back the tears that begged to be released. His hand's would grip onto his bright red jacket as he then slowly lift his head up from his leg's, He had been pale almost as if his skin had never once been in daylight, His hair had been medium length, only long enough to cover the back of his neck and his green eye's, his hair had also been black with dark violet high lights. He had his ears pierced twice and a lip ring onto the bottom right corner. As Madison just sat there looking in a daze to his wall, his head slowly tilted as he spoke still in that sadden tone "..Why...I-.. i never did- ..I Never did Anything!" His tone would start to tone to rage as he shouted "ANYTHING AT ALL TO THEM! SO WHY!? WHY ME!?" his head would shake a bit violently as he got up from his bed, his black and white converse high top shoes made contact with his floor and as he would take a step forward, though his leg had been caught onto his dark wood stained dresser.

He fell forward as the dresser had cut through his black skinny jeans and to his skin, making him bleed. He winced a little in pain as he pick himself up, looking back behind him to his now bleeding leg, he would frown. As he stood there, looking at the wound and then at the dresser, he stood there a good few minutes. His eye's and expression would be in raged as he would reach forward, grabbing the dresser and slamming it to the ground, making a large clashing sound. He panted heavily as tears started to then fall from his eyes, though his head only lowered as he would spoke in a soften tone to himself "..Even my home hates me." He tried to calm his panting though it was then the sound of his Family walking through the front door that got his attention. "Maddie! Are you home?" The gentle voice of a woman could be heard from the down stairs. Madison had flinched from that name though he knew his mother meant no harm from it. That name, that nickname, was used to always hurt Madison when he was at school.. Though he family never knew of the pain it brought him nor did he ever tell them. Another voice then could be heard "Maddie!~ Maddie!~" another female voice could be heard though it had been more cheerful and full of life, it was also young and was starting to come up the stairs. Again he had flinched from the name's but he would just remain how he was.

Soon his bedroom door opened up and a little girl at about hip height would stand there. She had looked around the age of 10 and she had on a pink fluffy dress that went to her knee's with a purple rain coat on. Her hair had been blonde, long enough to almost touch the floor and her eyes like Madison's, green. She would look at him, seeing him standing there and then seen the dresser that had been on the floor, She frowned a bit and then slowly took a step into the room "..Brother?" The cheerful and lively voice had shifted to a more concern and sadden tone. Madison had jumped lightly as if he didn't at all know she was there. He would reach up with his forearm to wipe the tears before he then would turn to face her. He smiled a bit after lowering his arm and he then would kneel down so that he was eye level with her, He had seen her frown and then he spoke with a gentle tone "Hey Amy, How was your day at school?" He would smile kindly to her along with a kind expression, almost as if nothing at all happen. Amy would keep her frown and then walk up to him, she reached up to lightly poke his nose "...Brother, Are you ok?.." she would pout as she her tone did not change. Madison paused for a moment while his expression went blank before he then would smile and laugh a bit "Of course im alright, Whats wrong with you?" His hand then lifted, placing itself onto the top of Amy's head and ruffed her hair playfully "You so silly, Amy." Amy's eye's would fallow his hand that then placed itself onto her head, her eye's closed as her expression shifted to an annoyed expression. She lifted her hands up into the air, swatting at his hand "Ah!- stop it big brother! Hah~" she would laughed.

Madison would laugh as he took his hand away, Amy then would lower her hand's as she opened her eyes and then smiled "Oh! i-.. I made you something Maddie." Madison would hold back a flinch as he held the smile "Oh? What did you make?" Amy would take a step back from him as she would grin "Nope! you have to wait until your birthday!~" Madison frowned as he laughed lightly "But Amy, that's tomorrow.. Do i really have to wait?" Amy laughed once more as she nodded her head "Silly big brother." she then would stick her tongue out at him. He smiled and then he would stand up though he had forgotten about the wound, when he stood up he winced and slightly stumbled. "ah-.." He would say softly as Amy's eye's widen "B-Brother! ...are-.. are you ok?" Madison looked at Amy as he then faked a smile and laughed "I am fine, Amy. Just your brother being a klutz like always."Amy would frown as she nodded her head "..Well.. Mom's making dinner soon.. Im going to go help." Madison would nod his head and laughed faintly "Always mom's little helper eh?" Amy then grinned "Well of course! someone has to look after you when mom isn't here." she teased a bit as she would turn and started to make her way out. Madison smiled lightly and then spoke out "Well ok then, Ill be down in a bit." Amy would shout back as she was now heading down the stairs "Okay, Maddie~" Madison flinched again and when his sister was gone, he then made his way to his bathroom.

He opened the medical cabinet and pull out some bandages. Once he had it set up he then would roll his pants leg up and he started to wrap the wound up, wincing though when he had finished he would walk over to the sink to wash some blood from his hands. While he was washing his hands he slowly look up into the mirror. He would just stand there with the water running over his hands while he looked at himself. "I-.. Really though she liked me.. But-" his gaze shifted away from the mirror as his head then leaned in, resting his forehead against the mirror."..She's just like the rest." He would close his eye's and reach up to turn the water off.

Even when he turned the water off though, it was still running. At first he just assumed maybe it wasn't off all the way so he would keep pushing the knob back but once he felt that it would no longer go back anymore and the water was still running, he opened his eye's. his gaze shifted down to the sink, only then would his eye's widen and he would jump back "Wh-! What the hell?!" he shouted. The water running was not water, but blood.

His hand's would tremble as he backed away, only to then to have backed himself up against the wall. Slowly his gaze then would shift to his hand's, seeing them covered in blood "..Wha-What's going on!?" He started to pant from panic and fear. It was then he would hear faint laughter, his eye's would quickly shift up to the mirror and it was then he would be frozen where he stood. He couldn't understand what was going on and now this, he seen his class mate's in the mirror. They were all staring at him, though he couldn't help but noticed they all had torn holes in they're chest where the heart was. He tried to speak but no words could be found, only then would his eye's slowly tear up and close while he thought to himself "N-No..NO! THIS ISN'T-... LEAVE ME- LEAVE ME ALONE!"

He would hear a voice... a kind and gentle voice that had belonged to the girl that he loved... his eye's opened only then to see her there in the mirror. Her long black hair pulled to the side while she wore a white dress. She would smile kindly to him "..Madison, What's wrong?" his head slowly shook in confusion and he would speak"..E-..Emily?" She would laugh lightly and then her head would tilt "Madison, Your so adorable.." Madison would go to speak again but then he was cut off by her when she started to laugh "It's so adorable that you think i would ever love you.. Your a freak." She would continue to laugh though it was soon a hysterical laughter.

His eye's widen hearing her, her laughter and words only stabbed themselves into hes chest. Slowly, his gaz shifted to the floor while he listen to the laughter. Soon then he could here the laughing from the other's along with calling him the name's they always called him. "Maddy-Faggy, Mad-Maddie" Even Emily would join in on the name's.

Madison's eye's slowly went empty as he would stand there and listened to them while he thought to himself"..Why-..Why do they treat me like this..". Though soon his empty and almost lifeless eye's would shift up to look at the mirror again. everything was silent to him, almost as if time was on a stand still. He looked at Emily as he could tell she was still chanting the name's, But then the longer he stared at her, the more lifeless she would look. It was then She would go silent, her eye's would widen as she would look down to her chest as it would seem like her heart was being cut and torn out. Tear's started to from in her eye's as blood would pour from the wound and from her lip's, only then would she slowly look up to Madison with eye's full of fear.

Madison just watch as a slow faint smile would creep to his lip's, almost as if the scene playing in front of him was something he was longing for and enjoyed. He started to laugh quietly and unsettling "Hah-...Hahah-.." He closed his eye's for a moment as he leaned against the wall and his hand's would come up to face. Madison would remain like that for some time, though when he heard a voice, a voice he alway's heard, he would lower his hand's and opened his eye's to look at the mirror, Only then to see himself.. Only... It was different. his head tilted as he looked at himself, only then seeing himself covered in blood, his mouth was stained in blood along with his hands and some stains here and there on his face.

After awhile looking at himself he then would lean off the wall to take a step forward while he spoke "..Are-...Who are you?" His reflection would smile, looking at him as he then spoke back with a cold and unsettling tone "I have many name's, But in the end.. Everyone call's me Mad-Maddie." Madison would freeze for a moment but then he smiled as well. The reflection then spoke again "Madison, It's almost time for you to wake up." Madison's head tilted as he then laughed unsettling and faintly. He started to then walk up to the mirror, lifting his hand up and placed it onto the mirror... His hand instead of making contacted, only phased through the mirror, almost as if he was pushing his hand through water. He would push his hand in more though it all ended when the sound of an alarm clock could be heard.

Madison's eye's snapped open as he then sat up quickly in his bed, Panting heavily as he looked around his room. It was then he would have seen the dresser was back against the wall with his alarm clock that glowed through the darkness, saying it was 6:30 am. He slowed his breathing as he then looked away and his hand would reach up to his forehead "..It-.. it was all a dream..". He paused as hes eye's widen for a moment while he would lower his hand "Wait.." He shook his head a bit as he then would pull the covers off, seeing himself still fully dressed and seeing the cut bandaged on his leg. He would then look over his bedroom for a moment "..Who-..Ho-.." . He was lost, to confused to find his words. He then swing his leg's over to the bed's side as his feet would make contact with the floor and he would look at the clock "..I don't understand, What-.. happen.. and why am i in bed like this.." It was then the sound of pot's and pan's falling from down stair's did he jump. He's hand's trembled for a moment before he then would head to his door, opening it and heading down stair's quickly, only to find the kitchen light's on and his little sister, Amy, standing there with a mess on the floor.

Madison would stand there looking at her as she frowned a bit "..Big brother, im sorry. i-.. i didn't mean to wake you i-" He shook his head as he would smile faintly "..Amy, What are you doing?" Amy would look away then as she spoke "..I-.. wanted to make you breakfast since.. it's your birthday.." His eyes widen for a second before he then would frown "..Amy, What happen yesterday?" Amy then would look up to him as she had a confused look"What do you mean?" Madison would shake his head "Amy, i don't remember what happen last night." Amy would just look at him before she then smiled a bit "..Silly brother, You came down for dinner though.. you didn't speak at all to me or mom.. and.. when you finished you just went back to your room with out saying a word."

Madison would just stand there looking at her, and slowly he then would look away.. He couldn't understand what all had happen to him, he couldn't make out if it was real or a dream. Amy would look at him as she seen him go into an almost trance and she would go to speak but then was cut off by they're mothers voice who was walking down the stair's "What on earth are you two doing?" Madison would jump a bit as he would look back at his mother who was wearing a night gown and robe with hair curlers in her thick black hair. She had a kind and worried expression though when she looked at Madison she would just smile a bit "..Nice to see someone's back. I was worried about you yesterday." she would step down from the last step and made her way over to him, only then to wrap her arm's around him and embrace him. Amy then smiled as she spoke "Mom, I was going to make Brother a birthday breakfast but.." she then looked down at the mess and then she would look over to Amy as she laughed and smiled "Well, look at my little helper trying to cook on her own.." Amy then would grin and Madison would just remain silent. They're mother would unwrap her arms from him and then take a step back as she then smiled"Birthday breakfast, huh?" she then grinned "Well, what would you like Madison?"

Madison would look to his mom and then he would look away as he would have spoke softly "..Um-..I-.. Im not hungry." His mother and Amy would frown and then his mother would smile a bit as she would lean over and kiss his forehead "..Well, Then maybe after school we can go out to eat... Happy 17th birthday." Amy would then cross her arms "Maddie, you better have your stomach with you when you get back home." Madison flinched lightly as he looked over to Amy, only then to lightly nod his head. His mother then looked over to Amy as she smiled "Well come on Amy, You need to go back to bed.." Amy would poke her tongue out before nodding her head and started to walk around the mess before she then stopped at her brother, turning to face him as she would hug him "..Have a good day." she then would smile as she would walk off and to the stair's.

<p style="margin-top:5px;margin-bottom:5px;color:rgb(255,255,255);font-family:verdana,arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small;line-height:normal;">His mother would smile and then she would turn to the stair's as well and spoke "..Before you leave can you pick that mess up?.." Madison would nod his head again and spoke lightly "..Yea." His mother smiled as she then would walk to the stair's "..I love you son, Have a nice day.." She then would head back to her room.

<p style="margin-top:5px;margin-bottom:5px;color:rgb(255,255,255);font-family:verdana,arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small;line-height:normal;">Half an hour had past, Madison had been out on the street's as he walked to school, it had been a rainy and cold day though while on his way to school, he found himself stopping out front of Emily's house. He stood there in the rain looking at the one lit window from the upstairs that had been her room and he would slowly go in a dazed look"..Did-..Why did she.." he then would hear that voice. The cold and unsettling voice, His voice "Wake up, Madison.. Take what belong's to you." Slowly his eye's would turn lifeless as he then smiled and lightly laughed unsettling"heh-...heheh-..heheheh." Madison started to walk up to the house, when he got to the door and grabbed the knob it had been unlocked. He slowly opened the door and he would walk in, looking around a moment before he then would see the kitchen. He grinned slightly as he walked over and he grabbed one of the butcher knifes, lifting up as he would then hold it up and looked at his reflection, seeing the same reflection that he had seen of himself last night.. Covered in blood. He lowered the knife and he would look to the stair's, only then to start making his way up them quietly.

<p style="margin-top:5px;margin-bottom:5px;color:rgb(255,255,255);font-family:verdana,arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small;line-height:normal;">Emily had been in her bathroom. She had just gotten out of the shower and dressed with a tower wrapped around her head to hold her hair as she would then smile and look at herself in the mirror. Madison had walked past a few doors before coming to the only one with light leaking out of a slit from not being closed all the way. Madison would ease the door open with the knife and then he looked into her room, smiling a bit as he then would step inside. Though when he stepped inside, Emily had then walked out of the bathroom. Her eye's widen as she then would freeze in her step's, looking at Madison "M-..Madison?!" He would look at her and grin as he spoke"Madison?..heh..Madison!? " he started to laugh hysterically while starting to walk up to her, Her eye's remained widen as she was blocked from running out of the room from him, she would try to run into the bathroom, hoping to be able to lock herself away from him, though as she would shut the door, He walked up and swung the knife into the door. The contacted made her jump, falling back and screaming a bit as she then would start to craw backward's on the floor. Madison open the door then after pulling the knife out and he would look at her, the grin stayed on his lips while his eye's remained lifeless and he then spoke "Come on, Emily.. Call me Mad-Maddie, you know you want to."

<p style="margin-top:5px;margin-bottom:5px;color:rgb(255,255,255);font-family:verdana,arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small;line-height:normal;">Her head would shake as tears formed in her eye's "Madison! Wh-What are you talking about!?" He laughed a bit as he would walk closer to her seeing her back herself up against the wall "Oh, you know.. I Gave you my heart and you just ripped in half.. Only then to laugh with the other's and say those name's." She would tremble in fear, not knowing what was going to happen but she could tell, something was off with him "M-Madison, I-.. I didn't mean-" Not letting her finish, he then lunged at her, getting on top of her as he then would stab the knife into her chest. Blood splattered onto his face and her's as she would try and speak but nothing would come out, she was over whelmed in pain and fear that she couldn't do anything but watch, watch as he would then rip the knife out, only then to stab it into her again and slowly start to cut into her chest, making a big enough hole so that he would be able to then pull out her heart.

<p style="margin-top:5px;margin-bottom:5px;color:rgb(255,255,255);font-family:verdana,arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small;line-height:normal;">The white floor's of the bathroom had been covered in blood, along with Emily being covered in it as well. Madison would stand up keeping the bloody knife in hand while his others held her heart and he smiled as his eye's rested on it "..I-..I have it now.." He would laugh lightly "heh-..I-.. I have her heart, its mine." his eye's would shift to Emily as she laid there dead and he would laugh a bit Hysterically once more "I love you Emily, I always have and always will.. N-No one will take you away from me now.." He then looked at the heart as he then put it up to his lip's, His lip's would part as he then would start to eat the heart.

<p style="margin-top:5px;margin-bottom:5px;color:rgb(255,255,255);font-family:verdana,arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small;line-height:normal;">When Madison finished he looked over to the mirror, only to see the refection that he had seen that night again.. but this time, it was how he looked. He smiled as he walked up to the mirror and he would lift his hand only to then write in her blood on the mirror. When he had finished, he would pull hes hand back and then placed it into the middle of the mirror... His hand then would phase through, again like he was just pushing his hand through water.. but this time, all of him went inside the mirror.

<p style="margin-top:5px;margin-bottom:5px;color:rgb(255,255,255);font-family:verdana,arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small;line-height:normal;">Later that morning Emily's parents had found her in dead on the bathroom floor. They had contacted the cops and soon it was on the new's, saying that Emily Coal had been murdered and the only clue they had was a message on the mirror saying "At Midnight, you will see me again. Look into the mirror through the darkness and you will find me." This had thrown people off, not understanding it. a week would have passed and soon another report was made.. Madison Jones had been missing since the day of Emily's death. Students then would have told the cops that the day before Madison had asked Emily out and she shut him down. This would then make Madison the prime suspect in her murder but no one could find him.

<p style="margin-top:5px;margin-bottom:5px;color:rgb(255,255,255);font-family:verdana,arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small;line-height:normal;">Another week then would go by and one of the kids had joked around, talking about that message Madison had left on the mirror and was picking fun on it saying things like "Im sure that freak will pop out of the mirror." others then would joke saying "Mad-Maddie's going to get you, his like Bloody marry." Later that night though, the same male went to his bathroom, he turned the lights off and he would stand there looking at the mirror. It hit midnight and he then smiled as he then laughed a bit though his laugh soon stopped as he would see something. He couldn't make it out but he leaned in closer to look. only then did his eye's widen as he seen Madison, standing there behind him with the butcher knife.

<p style="margin-top:5px;margin-bottom:5px;color:rgb(255,255,255);font-family:verdana,arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small;line-height:normal;">The male went to turn around to punch at Madison but right as he turned, the knife then went into the male's chest. Madison laughed lightly "Heh-..Look at what you made me do.". The male's eyes only widen more looking at Madison face to face and he felt his blood dripping down as he then could feel Madison ripping the knife through his chest, cutting the male's heart out and letting it drop to the ground. Madison would grin as he pulled the knife out and the male's body would drop. Madison lifted the knife to his lips to lick the blood from it, he frowned then and walk to the mirror "..So disgusting." He then wrote again the same message on the mirror and once finished, he would phase into the mirror, he was gone just like that.

<p style="margin-top:5px;margin-bottom:5px;color:rgb(255,255,255);font-family:verdana,arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small;line-height:normal;">One month later, Madison had still not be found though 6 students had been killed all in the same way, hearts cut out in the bathroom and a message on the mirror. It was clear Madison Jones was the killer. Students wouldn't joke about Madison any more seeing the situation had just turned bad, but they would keep the name Mad-Maddie because in the end, Madison did turn mad. As the time would pass, only the dared and foolish would look into the mirror at midnight to see Madison, but that only then would lead to they're short end.

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