Talk:Couples Camping Trip/@comment-1787373-20140421040954

I kinda liked this one. So far a lot of the pastas haven't been living up to what they're trying to be. While it does take a lot to scare me I do get those chills up my spine. This did deliver on that, mainly because I'm a camper myself. The part with the twist at the end, I did sorta see that coming. When Fred was telling his story I was thinking that the little boy was him, that he watched his father being killed. Don't feel bad, I'm always figuring out the twists in stories and movies. It's hard to scare me or fool me. I am happy that while reading it the story did seem to flow, and that I didn't see many if any typos. Some people just don't know how to use spell check or read over their work.