Creepypasta Wiki talk:Deleted Page/Jeff the Killer/@comment-28926895-20131103194021/@comment-24104596-20131115111549

Etritus, this story is terrible. Not only for the guns, but for various other reasons which I've already clarified in an earlier post. Horrible dialogue, grammatical errors, poor storywriting, stuff that doesn't make sense (kids with guns, parents not caring, vodka at a childs' birthday party, Lui getting arrested and sent to juvi without a trial, list goes on) to name a few. The picture was scary though.

You're entitled to your opinion, and Biozim98 to his. Although, I have to say you seem kind of desperate trying to justify all of the outright ridiculous events in this pasta with an almost aggressive attitude.

Jeff the Killer is mediocre at best in a lot of peoples' eyes, deal with it.