Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24234841-20141101121559/@comment-25439157-20141101123021

I can tell why this was deleted. For one, there is no plot, hence, the tag saying, 'Lack of content'. This is a rather random turn of events, with nothing leading up to it at all. By that, I mean that the end is abrupt and has nothing to do with the first bit, which we as readers took some time to read. The very end is not shocking at all, while evidently, you've tried to make it seem like something the readers never saw coming. The idea itself isn't very original either, and the expression is unremarkable. So nothing could have saved your story from deletion. If you re-post it, it will happen again.