Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24784485-20140522014650/@comment-24821182-20140522040457

I thought the story was good, and I liked the narrator's development throughout the story. How he gradually loses his sanity, and how he turns religious when the Bible is all he has to kill time.

I don't really have much negative to say about it, except that you should reconsider using ellipses, as they have no place in a journal. The formatting issues need to be dealt with, and it would be nice if you separated an entry's number from the entry itself, so it reads more like:

"Journal entry #1

This is my first entry."

It would also be good if you made the story a little longer. If he's using the journal to fend off boredom, he should write in it more frequently.