Talk:The Open Trunk/@comment-5733573-20180421171934

I found this really interesting. It almost sounds like it could have really happened, which is unsettling. Still, I wish there had been less build-up with grandma (even though it's very wonderfully and vividly surprised) and more time spent with the car with the open trunk. I also feel like the story needs some kind of tension, which just isn't there at the moment. Also, I wasn't clear on whether the mechanical errors (such as "sorta" and "y'know") were stylistic choices or not. Still, the idea is a really chilling on, and its plausibility is enough to give me pause the next time I'm on the highway.