Talk:Madness Returns: The Other End/@comment-24660353-20140309062445

As a lover of American Mcgees Alice games, I gotta say that this story is pretty good. This twist is something that I could somewhat believe actually happening as like a secret ending you get for complete some special challenge. While not exactly scary, it is creepy especially if you are a fan of the series. Actually when the fourth wall was broken by Alice I did get a good chill down my spine and unlike most of the other videogame creepypastas (i.e. Sonic and Mario) it wasn't written like a fan of the games got trapped in a room for 2 weeks with a book silly spooky stories and a large supply of poprocks. All in all nice job. 9/10.

Oh, just wondering, what do you think you would've done if you had included the Hatter, the Caterpillar, And the queen of Tentacles in the story? I would've asked about the Duchess but she seemed pretty determined to her diet.