Talk:Boulder City Prison/@comment-26364137-20150513180018/@comment-26326346-20150513193051

Thank you! I'm sorry that you saw the twist coming though as it dampens the payoff and impact of the story (which is what I go for in my writing D:). I have the same trait as you in regards to tending to figure out twists before the story ends.

I try not to drag my pasta on for too long because I'm afraid that I won't be able to keep interest or will blow the ending and waste the reader's time.

I'm glad that you like it!