Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24759772-20141011033308/@comment-25546552-20141019203114

This was a very interesting story, as DeVir said the concept is quite good and isn't really something seen in Creepypastas.

For some reason I was thinking a good ending would be after it said siimulation is over and all of that right at the end something else happened to him and again it said simulation is over for a second time. It seemed like it would be an interesting twist, because a lot of twists happen really close to the end.

All in all it was very good.