Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26141891-20150224130330/@comment-26097843-20150224134228

i sorta liked it but i just kept running on and on and began to lose myy interest. also it slit not slitted. its slit. also how does the devil get in a few speakers? Where did the mom get the speakers? so many questions unanswered. not bad for a first try though. anyways i hope this helps you redo this story or make another one. good luck.