Talk:Hiding in Plain Sight

Found using the Random button. The intro is very strong (although I get the impression that someone with training in child psychology might take issue with some of its claims) and it needs to be pared down or split up so as to preserve a logical flow, instead of all running together as the reader searches for a point. I like how intensely thorough the instructions are about direction and position, and that several alternatives are given for inconvenient steps. It gives an impression of "I could really perform this". Javer80 (talk) 02:28, August 29, 2012 (UTC)