Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-43632659-20190826202857/@comment-43632659-20190828235901

bloodyspaghetti, Andrew smith once said that the "show, don't tell" thing was rubbish. also, I was telling it as if it had happened to me. if I were telling something that happened to me, i'd lay down the facts, clarify. I find it's scarier when it feels real. (right now, for example, i'm in my room which has a big mirror. i'm typing this facing the mirror because i'm too scared to have the mirror behind me. you know, that feeling were you feel like something's going to stab you from behind {maybe I should add that to the story.} I totally spooked myself.)