Talk:Voice Messages/@comment-27623698-20160129000611

Storytelling: 8. Scarefactor: 4. Thrill Factor: 6. Twists: 7. Heres a review is it good yes, is it great yes, is it scary as hell no, or a masterpiece no. Thought the title would give the story away but it didn't. If it was about a creepy voice message I would probably be angrily ranting no stop to myself and possibly you. The twists were great. The crazy patient thing was okay, him being crazy was a little shocking, the possiblilty of his wife being a monster was a tad bit scary. Alone these twists are worthless, but together they keep readers guessing. Which is the goal of any story. This story is great but not terrifying but I don't think your goal was to scary me but to entertain me would make a hell of a thriller.

Overall Score: 6.5

Don't be angry. That is good if you check the chart. If you scared me enough you would have got a seven, if you made it seem like a story that needed a movie you would have gotten an 7.5. An 8 is very unlikely. 9 and 10s never happen. I have not given that many stories this grade.

Reminder, 6.5.