Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24926116-20160306194052/@comment-24101790-20160306202019

There are frankly a lot of capitalization (proper nouns not capitalized, start of sentences, random words capitalized) and punctuation (punctuation missing from line breaks.) Even if you're treating this as a poem, you still need these things (even in free verse). If this is a poem, the meter and rhythm need a lot of work. Right now this doesn't meet the bare minimum of quality standards for the site.