User blog comment:DeadCogTheProxy/Any tips on writing a creepypasta?/@comment-26054278-20150326234632

Personally, I think this sounds cliche and seems to have quite a few plotholes. I'll go through a few:

-Why did she kill her parents?

-The parents have been missing for two years and nobody bothered to check up on them? Nobody noticed the lack of contact/taxes paid?

-Why are they putting her in the foster home if nobody has bothered to check to see if her parents are alive? For all they know, the parents could be perfectly alright in the home.

Anyway, this sounds like a rather poor JtK rip-off. Hate to crush any possible hopes you had about this story, but I think you should scrap it and think of something more original and more concise.