Talk:Walking My Dog/@comment-5501102-20140425045228

The ending is pretty good, although it tells more than it shows. Another issue is that the weird guy the protagonist seems to see isn't show to have anything to do with what happens with the dog. It would have been better if the dog got unsettled by the tall guy and the protagonist didn't, or something like that.

I did feel a nice chill when I read this, though. I'd say this is a healthy 7/10.