Talk:Curiosity Killed the Rat/@comment-24040907-20140918061607/@comment-4893169-20140919021345

So it probably wasn't a problem with the script, rather with the director and actors themselves?

Yes, please do. I could really use the constructive criticism. There's not enough it going on the Writer's Workshop Forum where I also submitted this story.

There's a much older Curtisville story called "The Visitor From Curtisville" which someone surprisingly gave a 7/10 rating even though I consider it not one of my very best stories due to its rather confusing and disjointed plot.