User blog comment:Mikemacdee/Creepypasta Riffs/@comment-26030957-20150321015327/@comment-26030957-20150322152829

New Girlfriend is definitely not bad, in anyway. Great characters. The way you slowly let the reader know what a bitch LIz is, so that the ending seems justified. The spooky vibe your well written prose gives as the sex doll comes to life. It's great. Simply great.

As for my stories. I don't think The Long List is terrible at all. Administrators are calling it one of the best pastas they've read and Cleric of Madness himself gave it a 10/10. I just think it is so dark and bleak that Dorkpool's comedy really shines when juxtaposed against that blackness.

The reason I would like to see a riff on New Girlfriend is because the idea of a sex doll coming to life is a very funny concept that could have a lot of jokes made about it. Let's face it, sex jokes are some of the best jokes out there. I don't think a story has to be bad to interject some humor into it. As long as it is not mean spirited or taking personal swipes at the author. What Dorkpool did to my story The Long List was genius. My wife and I laughed so hard we fell off our chairs. But it wasn't mean and he never said my story was bad. As a matter of fact he said the opposite.