Talk:Hyperion/@comment-25052433-20190703224713

Really excited about the premise. I love space related horror when it doesn’t fall into the Sci-Fi side of plot. This one started off reminding me a bit of Event Horizon, which is of course a huge plus.

General Quality: (23) The story was technically sound. The pace and tempo were well executed and didn’t drag too much in any particular spots.

Horror Factor: (16) The story starts off with tons of potential. The big reveal didn’t do too much for me on the scare factor, and the word count for something like this was just way too short. Everything had to be rushed and that hurt the character development a lot.

Entertainment Value: (17) Once again this one loaded all the substance up front. I was very engaged with this story during the first three quarters, but the ending became a bit convoluted and contrived. I did love the final scene though. Very heartfelt yet bitter-sweet.

Lyrical Interpretation: (21) Seemed to use subject matter.

Total Score: 77/100