Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-32696213-20170831182106

Hey, I'm relatively new to this, but I've gotten very nice comments on my last 3 reality-based Pastas ("The King of Miami", "My own private hell", and "serial killer'). I just uploaded this new story, Atropha, and I wanted some feedback as it was my first foray into horror fiction. Could someone tell me what they think?

Atropha

(NOTE: The title was supposed to be 'Atrophos', but for some reason I typed 'Atropha'. I must have gotten confused. If anyone can change it, much appreciated!) 