Talk:My Dad's Ex is Not a Victim/@comment-35711173-20190429183045

Interesting, and for a first effort pretty good.

To me, a creepypasta has two elements


 * Creepy - that feeling of something is wrong
 * Horror

There aren't that many variations in addiction. I have seen plenty of people who did behaviors very similar to that Dad. So the emotion is more anguish than creepy for me.

There was no build up and great horror reveal about Linh. There is a sudden assumption based on information in a computer - in the next to last paragraph. This is pretty tame.

I know computers and have done all the stuff you describe, right down to using one of those boot cracker disks to blank the Admin password on Windows 7 computers when I didn't know the password. To me, it is routine and not of great interest. Non-technical people will find it to be technobabble that will lose them. I suggest editing that WAY back.