Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25329900-20141119082320/@comment-25329900-20141119184459

SOURCECODE01 wrote: "Writing style is fine, and grammar is very apropriate, but the ending is wayyyyyy too predictable... Now that we have the grammar out of the way, the main point looms like a dead man hanging on the gallows. The ending. This story shows that you know how to write, but I get the sense that you don't quite know how to be creepy without resorting to gore... seems like you know how to write, but do not know how to write creepypasta. I sincerely hope that you elaborate on this story, but please change the type of ending...the ending destroyed the rest of the story, sturdy and strong as it was."

'Thank you for your critique and view SOURCECODE01 it is very much appreciated. Pray tell what gore though? I don't recall writing any gore in this story. I hope you are reading the story "Advice From A Salesman" and not some other story by mistake or my older posted story "The Embrace" which I have replaced with the "Advice From A Salesman" story.'

'Perhaps take a moment to reread the story just in case CPWikia.com is busted or something and not showing you the correct story? Maybe I need to delete this page and redo it all over again. Perhaps updates are slow on this site even have you hit apply changes and save? '

'Thank you for your compliments though about my writing skills, grammar, spelling, and other such things. I do my best.'