Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10319977-20151014231140/@comment-25170312-20151015011626

If you want to know why "Best Friend's Suicide" is unoriginal, it's because first you say your friend killed themselves, then it's revealed that you did it. I've seen that done before in a million different ways. It's basically been beated into the ground. Also, why wouldn't you clean the knife?

As for "Life of Lies", again it's something I've seen many times. Someone thinks that they are having a nightmare they can't wake up from but really it's reality. It's an interesting idea only when it's completely unpredictable, which it isn't.

And I'm sorry, but "A Wall is Broken" is not good just because you claim to have broken the fourth wall, because you didn't break it. To break the fourth wall you have to address the audience after previously acting is if there is none. You didn't do that.