Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25922165-20190328214355/@comment-35711173-20190328233018

Interesting. I enjoyed it.

I wasn't surprised by it. If it were my story, I would have gone into some details for the mechanism that requires it and why Uncle Theo knows everything.

The paragraph starting with "We left in a hurry one night" verges on a wall of words.

That's a REALLY quick read. More later.