Talk:Three Friends Diner/@comment-26464600-20151019140351

This was cliche-filled. Character with a hoodie? CHECK! "It's just a prank/coincidence/my imagination? CHECK! No motive for two-dimensional "villain" to kill? CHECK! Impossibly perfect deal? CHECK! Moronic protagonists? CHECK! Also, "Impossibly-detailed." Don't even act like you weren't trying to say "hyper realistic" because you were.     On the subject of literary devices, the buildup was slow. I found myself skipping some paragraphs because I was bored.

Overall, I give this pasta... 2/5