Talk:Mammal Music/@comment-25037895-20150619234713

Since the website vanished that is listed #1 on the cliché page under "lost episodes". I'm not trying to say this story was anything like a lost episode, just that it does contain ideas that in other pastas. Also the noise distortion element (which is brought up multiple times) is listed #8 on the cliché page under "lost episodes". And "bizarre artistic suicide" is listed #12. And ending the pasta with "you can't find the video, and that's a good thing" falls into the same line as #17. For my next point, I'll quote the story:

"The scenes kept flickering to random shots of inanimate objects moving in a stop-motion like fashion as it kept cutting back to close ups of the man's wounds."

This actually falls in line with #16.

Even though this is not a lost episode in anyway. A lot of the same common clichés are the same when writing a story about internet videos. It has been done a lot of times, and there's something about it that makes it restricting. There's only so many routes can take with this subject. And also, the imagery in this piece didn't draw my interest. The description needed some flair in this one, and overall there was no "hook" for me.