Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180303032925/@comment-34823985-20180310162236

EmpyrealInvective, thank you for the review. I based this story on an experience from my childhood. In reality there were four little red footprints that trailed under the bed. Rest in peace little Meatball. I'm a bit ashamed about some of these errors. I proofread the crap out of my stories, but something always gets by me. I've learned my lesson about submitting half boiled stories, so I appreciate your insight. You've giving me a lot to work with.