Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20190305214046/@comment-33904527-20190309220607

NedWolfkin wrote: In my opinion it lacks rhyme and reason. Why is he holding them hostage and forcing them to pretend they are a sitcom family? The fact that there isn't really a beginning which explains why, and really much of an ending to tell us rather or not he kills them all or gets arrested.

I would also like to add that you should probably give us a complete story, rather than a concept, as reviewers may not want to check back to see if you've added anything. Likewise, you can write a good section of the story that is presented and have the rest fall flat and publish it on the grounds that the small section was well recieved. Did you read my comments? Of course it has no explanation. It's a concept. I wanted you to rate it as a concept. Because it's a concept. Not a story. I'll give an explanation when I actually write the story.