Talk:The Last Day of October--The Unquiet Past and Present/@comment-4893169-20150718052400/@comment-26054278-20150718193042

Not really, it was fine.

My only real problem with the story was (as I may have talked about this previously) the "written accent" of one of the characters. It didn't invest me any more and it actually made me stop reading in order to try to understand what that character was even saying.

Still, everything else was quite well done.