Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10789912-20160117093544/@comment-25037895-20160124125551

Here's what I noticed:

"He could also see that the wall in from (front) of him."

"His confusion became hatred at the site (sight) of the door alone."

"It was you whom standed (stood) against him"

"Enki finds sentient life, teaches it and helped (helps) it grow, and once it develops, destroys it"

"The sharp sound of the wind was completely halted by the meat's distinct ripping sound (which/that) was only broken by the sound of the disconnecting spinal cord,"

In regards to the endings, I'm partial to neither. These chapters were great, riveting stuff.