Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36358996-20180728160817/@comment-35711173-20180728165352

O0FallenMasks0o,

First, please listen to what EmpyrealInvective said. That's a good and accurate description of what I saw as issues.

As noted, you have a lot of grammar/punctuation/spelling issues. You need help so I am going to give it to you. Please click on the link below and read it. Then try using the tools listed. They will flag many of your errors. They aren't perfect but are 90% or more correct.

https://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:DrBobSmith/Basic_Spell_and_Grammar_Checking

It takes TIME to cook good creepypasta. This isn't instant mashed potatoes.