User blog comment:SlickGR/Most Strict Wiki Ever/@comment-24101790-20150619224347/@comment-24101790-20150619231639

A direct quote from the M4R page: "Anyway, this category can also be used to tag pages that you believe may not meet the wiki's standards. For this reason, do not to remove this category from pages on the grounds that the grammar/spelling is fine, because the story or content may not be."

As Umbrello and SoPretentious' criticism has pointed out. "Too much of this is just telling us what happened. No connection is made between what's happening and the reader. You don't give us much to relate to in terms of how this is truly affecting the protagonist. If you are going to go the disturbing video route, you have to either be original or get the reader to connect emotionally with the protagonist. The music angle was a little different, but wasn't enough to justify the lack of any real story or character development. You also used the really tired cliche of warning the reader."

As it stands, the story is awaiting another admin to weigh in as I was on the fence about it due to the issues mentioned above. As a final note do not add this category to your own stories as mentioned here: "THIS IS NOT FOR MARKING YOUR PASTAS TO GET FEEDBACK. PLEASE GO TO OUR WRITER'S WORKSHOP FOR THAT."