Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24838640-20150120185117/@comment-26037362-20150124040953

I truly wish that this story was longer, because I really, really enjoy your style of writing! The details in the first paragraph are simply glorious. In the last paragraph, you spelt the word 'realized' wrong several times. I think that maybe 'registered' or another synonym would have made it easier to read. I also don't really see this story becoming a 'famous' creepypasta. It's a tad underdeveloped. The curtains were still moving... it could've been a draft in the room. I think that if you made the story creepier, it could be quite brilliant. You're an amazing writer mate, keep up the good work! -Marzia :3