Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25019793-20150714232127/@comment-26723520-20150718210411

Well this never really came off as scary/tragic since the girl and monster were a bit generic. First why does the monster just become all cruel and nasty to the girl with no rhythm or reason maybe instead the monster changed because the girl was drifting apart from him. Secondly this proud independent girl did not even stand up to the monster letting herself be abused.