Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180822171446/@comment-9041013-20180823101255

So, you have a bunch of technical issues in the story, like confused words, "where" instead of "were", "Suite" instead of "Suit", "Site" instead of "Sight" etc. Work on that, personally I think plotwise this does not have any issues.

It is not my cup of tea, it's kind of uhh... too calm of a horror story? I don't know, I didn't feel it. It's written pretty well anyway, so it's just a personal taste thing for me. It's not in any, way, shape or form not good. It is very good. I think that once you fix the technical aspect of it, you could probably post it without any issues to follow.