Talk:Easter Egg - Snow on Mt. Silver/@comment-27455497-20161118191334

Alright so I'll give it a 8.5/10 it was good, very good actually but I do have complains about it. 1 ok I get it the author is the bigger sister but by a year, the bro is 13 (if I'm right) so how does he get thrown in a psych ward but all she do is cry? 2 she kinda force the dead pokemons on us, I like a story with build up ok but if she just says like "when I check the pokemon they all were bluish grayish and limbs were torn off" she made that suddle if she waited a bit longer and the pokemon looked normal at first then slowly turn blue after they died then that would have been good. 3 ending, the ending was confusing and a bit of a turn off for me I mean "this was there hell and there under Mt. Silver and BLA BLA BLA" I just found it kinda of a turn off for me thats all. Anyways over all its a good story but I just had some pet peeves about it thats all so GG author GG you did a great job with this story.