Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24935146-20140616161835/@comment-25050660-20140616173703

Your story needs more details, not just dialogue. Add some description to because you really don't know the setting if it weren't for the title of the story. Try using stage direction--the description of the characters' actions and  the scene To do this, use  parentheses. Also, try to display more emotions in the characters. People want to know how they feel or react in a certain situation.