Talk:Arizona/@comment-26823574-20160822230417

The reason I like the pasta is because it doesn't need an explaniation. Usually I would be annoyed by that, but it's done very well. You pretty much did to writing as David Lynch does to film, and that's not easy.

Again, I love that it doesn't need to be explained. Are they aliens? Are they demons? Are they ghosts? Are they beings from an alternate universe? Did they travel into an alternate universe? It's never answered, and you made it flow.

My favorite thing about the story, and it still hits me, is when it talks about how the sky was black and lacked stars. Idk why, but I love it. The only critique I have against this story is that it starts way too quickly. That's it.

9 / 10