Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180226141629/@comment-34823985-20180226155751

It seems my story doesn't meet this site's standards. I'm not surprised, not really. I certainly bare no ill will towards MrDupin. I'm new to the site and should have checked out the site more thoroughly before I submitted anything. Two one-sided conversations with no detail outside of dialogue does not a good story make, hehe. Does this story have potential or am I missing some bigger flaw? For all I know my story is some cliché I'm not aware of. It was only about a week ago that I discovered CPs. Curious to get some feedback.