Talk:The Pure, the Truth, and the Ending

I think this could have been improved if the going insane thing was a little longer, and a bit more compelling. I mean, I don't know anybody that would be freaked out by a letter like that, then again, coming up with something convincing isn't easy, so if you're taking my advice, good luck. I think that, and the end need to be lengthened a bit. All of a sudden this guy goes crazy after reading a letter and came up with a family? It's a bit too rushed.

Everyone has the right to be stupid, although some people abuse this privilege. (talk) 17:20, June 28, 2013 (UTC)