Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26502770-20150620165909

Jack woke up in a location unkown to him. It looked like a hostpital room. He was completely naked, the room had paint torn off the walls. Jack was feeling dizzy and sick in his stomach.He got up and noticed the pipes leading out of the room. There was a bed beside him with his cloths on it, but it looked like a wild animal had gotten to them first. When jack noticed an oily liquid on the ground vomit came up jacks throat and out of his mouth. His vision started to get blurry and he balckedout. Before he regained his consciousness he saw himself at a party drinking. Then he heard a gunshot and a woman's scream. He woke up and gathered enough courage to exit the room.

As he slowly opened the door he felt a feeling of dread, horror and confusion. He peaked left and right he only saw a long corridoor with thick fog reaching up to his knees. The place looked like a run down hospital with white walls and countless doors. He decided to go down the corridoor on the right side. His body was shaking as he walked down the corridoor. The walls were covered in moss and there was a nasty smell of ozone. He didn't go in any of doors becouse they dident have a green with the word exit. Jack constantly looked over his shoulder becouse he felt eyes on his back. Them he finnaly reached an end of the hallway a strong metal door.

He struggled to get it open but when he did the other side looked like a waiting room, there was alot of old metal chairs and a wooden desk. There was a chandelier dangling from the ceiling. Jack carefully continued looking for a exit. He entered the next room wich looked like an operating one a operation table in the middle. There was an tray with a bonesaw a scalpel covered in blood a syringe with a green fluid inside it. It made jack shiver he HATED docters, surgery's, and surgical tools. He felt a presence behinde him he slowly twisted his head around to his horror there was a man in a business suit and combed black hair. He looked normal except for his red sinister eyes full of despair and pain.

"Hello, jack" he said in an normal voice

"H-Hello" Jack said in fear.

"Um......Do I know you?'Jack mumbled

"No but I know you, jack" He said

"Im know by many names but the most common one is satan"He continued

At this point jack nearly released a shit into his pants

"W-Wa-What do Y-you want from me" Jack shivered

"Dont you renember" After the devil said that jack renember the day he walked into his own room just to see his girlfriend fucking that priest in the ass. He renember drinking and grabbing the revolver and shooting the bitch.

"Yes you killed her in my name know im here to rewared you, see jack a life for another life. Tell me a name and you will watch them die" He said

Jack raised an eye brow his evil nature was coming out. His sister bullied him since three years old and she tricked him into selling his house. He lost everything and HE WORKED 11 HOURS A DAY to rebuild everything. He could not take it anymore not after his girlfriend is dead.

"MARY WHITEHILL" he shouted

The devil smiled and he snapped his fingers and his sister apeared on the operating table a invisble force held her down.

The prince of destruction grabbed the syringe and injected her with it and then she screamed in agnoy. He continued by picking up the scalpel and cutting her from her weist to her neck. Lastly he cut her limbs off with the bonesaw, She bled to death.

"Its done" He said and snapped his fingers and jack was standing there with the bonesaw in his apartment. The police were knocking on his door. 