Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30581963-20161128155200/@comment-25226524-20161201140051

Well, I honestly don't have a lot to say. I enjoyed it and don't have any major criticisms. The only thing that I noticed was that you have a lot of comma splices. The commas that are between two independent clauses without using a conjunction need to be changed to something else (semi-colon, colon, period, em dash), or you need to add a conjunction. Look over our style guide if you want more info. Feel free to upload this whenever you want, but if you would like some more feedback I'm sure you will get some before too long. Hope to see more from you.