Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26382371-20150531004443/@comment-25037895-20150602220208

A few specific examples of the punctuation and grammar fixes needed:
 * ”(quotation faces the wrong way) Its (It's) ok, your mom is asleep.” forever, Raven thought.(thoughts can be italicized) Raven brought her knife above her head and said,” (spacing issue, the quotation mark looks like it's part of the wrong sentence) you(starting a quotation, first word should be capitalized) betrayed me, so I’m here to return the favor, Nighty-night.”
 * .” (again, the quotation mark is misplaced) Why am I doing this?", (there's a question mark, so no need for a comma)

Also, when there's a new speaker, start a new paragraph. There's a few longer paragraphs that should be shortened, maybe aim for less than 10 sentences. Additionally, there's no need to have double spaces between paragraphs. Headers like "Three Months Later" should have two equal signs on each side.