Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20151011060730/@comment-26475800-20151011221423

It is going to be a much longer story, I was trying to cram so much data into 300 words, and that just didn't work for this story. In my head I thought it would work, but it is missing far too much data. I have a feeling this story will be anywhere between 2k-5k for this story. I think that would make it much easier to get the point across.