Talk:The Origin of Laughing Jack/@comment-3541151-20150112023325

Gory Stories aren't my thing, but I read most of it and certainly enough to critique it. For a while it was an interesting prequel, back story to Laughing Jack who had none was quite inventive and in the beginning added an interesting and explanation to the story. But this just quickly became a gorefeat, while the writing is okay it just becomes another Saw as far as I'm concerned. Laughing Jack's decent into madness can't be respected because he already KILLED a cat! Virgin to violent acts, did the writer forget?There are some annoying holes in this story, like how about the fact that the Guardian Angel is never explained. And why would an ANGEL of all fucking things give a learning magical being to a child that is a violent time bomb. Obviously not a lot of