Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25036236-20140616230141/@comment-25039222-20140618193529

One thing that didn't make sense to me was why did she use a gutting knife? If she hunts, its safe to assume that she has access to knives that are better suited for her intentions. As others have mentioned, the story needs to be more drawn out. My biggest question is how does she not pass out or die from a loss of blood? She lost an eye and she lost a hand...that's a lot of bloodflow right there.

Anyways, it was a pretty entertaining read.