User blog comment:Witnessme/Creepypasta Short Story Contest/@comment-27068878-20151012032258/@comment-27012445-20151012155041

Here is something for you to consider. Instead of using the basic psychosis encountered with the insane make it connected to theme of your story, like the mother experienced post-partem psychosis when the children were born and for some unknown reason years later the hallucinations and delusions have returned. You can give a decent back story without needing to go in alot of details and it ties in nicely with your end