Talk:Knocks on the Window/@comment-6684440-20131217201757

Wow...Where to start... Anyway, I thought this was an abolutely AMAZING creepypasta, I noticed few (or none at all) spelling/punctuation/grammar errors, I really like how this happened, except I kinda wish someone would have died at the end :|. Of course that's my preference, I enjoyed how you made it creepy and detailed as if we were in that house.

Punctuation/spelling/grammar   10

Overall creepiness                    10

Detail                                        10

Total:                                        10

Great job! 10/10 for my score! Keep the good stories coming! ^-^

-Astral