Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26538751-20150628001546/@comment-24101790-20150628003135

The story was deleted for not being up to quality standards. That means that unless this appeal is passed, your story cannot be uploaded. Unfortunately you've made no improvements to your story. Starting with the basics. There are coding errors Virtual Diary entry 567 that are on every line of the story.

Punctuation issues: "Today my freinds (sic) were really mean to me while we were playing borderlands 2 ("Borderlands 2".) they (They) said I wasn't the funniest person they've ever met and I think they weren't kidding which is messed up,(should be a period.)Also" Punctuation missing from multiple sentences. " found this on virus website called virusmarket.com the only reason I was doing this and was okay with it was because my brother set up this cool thing I didn't really understand how it worked at first but it's like and extra computer inside of my computer that I can just close out of so anyways I didn't find this website on the deepweb you know the thing thats like all rapists and perverts no offense because I was too scared I would get caught by the goverment so anyways when I clicked on the website it was just all black and in giant dripping blood red letters there were the words supervirus I clicked on it and it went to a full black page and the download started in the bottom of the screan so I just emailed it to all my friends a few seconds 'lol I got them'."

Capitalization issues: " i'm (I'm) going to pay them back with viruses", "tetris", "Bot", "Hyper" etc. Wording/spelling issues: "relly good", "freinds (sic) were found", "belive", "reasponded", etc.

Story issues: " friends (sic) were found with extreme liquified brain syndrome" is not a real disease, describe it as opposed to making up an illness. Then there's the ending. "are liquifidng meh braindfffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff". How is the author writing this and how have they posted it? The entries have a lot of issues and the plot has a lot of issues. I'm sorry, but I'm going to turn down this appeal for the reasons listed above.