Talk:Something Is Wrong/@comment-27012445-20151115042726

What really draws me to a story is its voice. When I say that I mean, as I read along, do I clearly hear the voice of the narrator or characters. For me, that is necessary to be immersed in the tale. This story absolutely accomplishes that! As someone who is also continually working to improve his craft, I also look for those stories that contains those little seeds that I can then take and grow into my own unique creations; in other words, inspiration. This too is met with great success. Great story. vivid imagery. Creepy journey. That's all I have to say.