Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26479721-20171215005702/@comment-31708656-20171215014447

There are too many cliches, it sounds like gibberish to someone who knows next to nothing about Yo Gabba Gabba, and the protagainsts take a childrens show way to seriously. I know the main character is ten. But what ten year old kid would willingly watch a Yo Gabba Gabba episode, then EMAIL THE STUDIO. Keep writing, but avoid the cliches next time.