Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24987453-20150120222622/@comment-4849011-20150121011050

I agree that the shift at the end is confusing. It appears that the scene is in the mind of a mental patient, but is the flying man in the dream supposed to be him or someone else? Though I understand that it's a killer ranting before flying and beheading people, I think the fourth sentence could use some more punctuation.

As for the part about thirty, forty, etc., I'd say it's miles per hour (or maybe kilometres per hour.  For all we know this could be in a place that uses kilometers) since speed was mentioned just prior to that, but clarification would still be helpful.