Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10502460-20180328021546/@comment-34823985-20180328104556

Sorry BloodySpghetti, but I don't agree. I'd be freaked out too if strangers showed up at my home after 1:00 AM. The prize showed up too quickly to be trusted. I'm not answering the door that late at night even if it's the Publisher's Clearing House people wanting to give me a giant check for $10,000,000. Especially if I'd just mailed my envelope less than 24 hours ago. That being said, HopelessNightOwl, I wasn't too crazy about the ending. I've read some of your other stuff and I think you could cap this off better.