Talk:An Infinite Expanse of Arid White Clay/@comment-25941663-20191214222808

This was such a great read, one of my faves on here, well done!

You pulled the desert/desolation aesthetic off perfectly, especially the sections where Anx finds the bones and "exhibits" of the desert. If anything, I was hoping that section was slightly longer. It is a cliche, but I so was looking forward to a temple buried in the sand segment.

Overall, I really loved this. Great imagery, great suspense, terrifying (especially the part with the old lady). Excellent work!