Talk:Poor Despair/@comment-24040907-20150206214601/@comment-25907694-20150208034433

I agree with going into more detail. I wrote this thing in an hour a half, in full concentration mode. But, i think, when i become a better writer in the future i could go back into this story and do some modifications with it. Make it better. I'm gonna read books and try writing as a regular routine. I hit something with this story though.