Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-6064615-20130122220342

I'm really confused by this... I would think that because so much detail went into making the screen shots for this creepypasta, that the story would be equally detailed... the ending falls flat on it's face though. The mother's reaction seems so tame and unpassionate, considering her child disappeared, and it ends up feeling vague, and unsatistfying, to the point it feels like someone who didn't like the creator edited a shitty ending in.

I'm not trying to take a jab at the authorer, but I really think you ought take another crack at it if anything, this seems to have a lot of potential. 