Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20140905054214/@comment-25170312-20140905211847

Hmm... any suggestions on the ending? I actually wasn't sure how to end it. I guess it should end right on something creepy, instead of snarky. I almost thought about ending right after "This time, he put them down at his sides, and the light in his apartment went out." I'll try and think of a better way to end it but I would really appreciate any ideas anyone has. Thanks!