Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-14155875-20150216135432

A homeless man is begging to come in a house with people in it. Deadly dogs are about to kill him. When he comes inside, the homeless man quickly comes inside and shuts the door, leaving the adult, who is trying to babysit the kids, left out there. The homeless man listens outside, to make sure that he was dead, and the dogs ate him. The homeless man turned around and he sees two kids cowering over each other in the corner of the house. The man slowly walks to them. Then he heard a slam upstairs. He slowly creeps up the stairs to find nothing. He came downstairs to check on the kids. They were standing like statues, and were looking outside the window that led into the alley. The homeless man slowly creeped towards them. He noticed that they weren't moving at all, and their souls were making his heart beat faster when he got closer. He finally got arm's length towards them. He goes in front of them. He jumps back. Their eyes were gone, blood slowly dropping out. He screeched louder than an air horn. He goes to call 911. The phone was dead. Instead of no sound, he heard kids crying. He puts down the phone, turns around, and sees a very tall, shadowy figure behind him. It comes straight after him, and stabs his chest and rips out his heart. There, lied a man, who's heart was dog food...

Created by: Eric Nieters

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