Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27859657-20161211233350/@comment-31020499-20170115225011

Like Squidmanescape says, it needs a consistent rhyme scheme. Or alternating between 2 rhyme schemes or rhythms. Please dare to drop the extra "filler" words that make sense when writing prose but are not needed in a poem: Off topic -- yes back to that thing was talking about

Poems break the rules of syntax, to honour the rhythm. Go for it!