Talk:The Cure/@comment-21086298-20140529091504

I couldn't get into this due to the second person writing. Since it uses a made-up character, it would be better if he was just given a name and described in third person instead of trying to shoehorn the audience into his role. Stories describing the monster killing "you" instead of the main character remind me of all those troll pastas ending in "YOU'RE NEXT!"