Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26611765-20150709143917/@comment-24101790-20150709202958

It was deleted for not being up to quality standards and having formatting issues. That link and this one should explain most of the issues that were present with your story.

Then the story was deleted again for being reuploaded. (Don't do this.)

Glancing over your story, I see a lot of wording, punctuation, grammatical (it's=it is, its=possession), capitalization, formatting (multiple characters talking in the same paragraph. Paragraphs being blocky and difficult to read due to being multiple sentences.), and story issues. I have to say, I agree with Sloshedtrain, this story is not up to qs. Please take the time to proof-read your story. We are working on cleaning up low quality stories on this site, so please don't post them.