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Clean Talk Page - Ruined!
Ha, S.F.W. would definitely be a strong contender. I forgot about that part from Men in Tights, but it cracked me up remembering it. And yeah, I had a feeling the Eskimo blood would likely bring more problems than it fixed, but that's what the public school system gives us these days. I knew I should've taken that Blood Doping 101 course in college. I think the professor's last name was Armstrong or something like that.

Have you written any new stories during my absence? I really need to get something new going.

Jay Ten (talk) 00:46, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

American Graffiti
Yeah, I'm feeling quite a bit better :) My neck just throws itself out for no reason at all anymore which usually results in a headache. Yes, you understand! You know, that was kind of the problem with the Dark Knight trilogy, "I'm Batman and I'm going to beat the evil out of you."

Yep, you can't see one of the legs because it is behind the alien (I don't even know if leg is an appropriate term since they are all one connected mass, lol). One thing that you can't see about the blue alien is that the back of its head is flat and has little tendrils that I made with my fingers and pushed inward. Thank you :D

I bought myself this bad girl today: http://www.bestbuy.com/site/asus-desktop-intel-core-i7-8gb-memory-1tb-8gb-hybrid-hard-drive-gray/4669600.p?id=1219794344234&skuId=4669600 She's a really top of the line model. My only wishes are that she came with Windows 7 64bit and 16 GB's of Ram instead of the 8 GB's. She should last me for a very long time as she's up to date. I ended up spending $1,204 by the time all was said and done; will be worth it when she gets here in 11 days and I go on a buying spree for all the games I missed out on XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  02:47, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

Oh, I got some work done on Ikari tonight and thought I'd ask you for some feedback: http://pastebin.com/yY5YHP7L What do you think about it so far? I'm trying to never describe her sword, Phoenix, as a sword, but rather as a bird. Buckle up!  I'm going to be popular  06:35, April 10, 2016 (UTC)


 * Maybe I ought to started drinking a glass of milk every day in the hope of building stronger bones, but that would really mess with my water diet (drink a glass of caffeinated pop and nothing but water a day).


 * Lol. It's the least I could do. Thank you for all the feedback that you have left for me :D


 * I had accidentally listed it as private instead of unlisted. Well, Ikari could have been considering it cut off with her floating down stream XD Yeah, I was wanting to highlight that the sword is special to her. One thing of note is that the story doesn't take place on Earth, but rather a place really similar (the first line hints at it). It should be view-able now: http://pastebin.com/yY5YHP7L Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  02:01, April 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * I finished coloring my drawing of Ikari. Sorry about the quality, it's the webcam again. I took shots of the top half and lower half so that the quality would be higher. I'm going to see about using a scanner for it in the future. It's probably hard to see, but her coat has yellow accents, patches and cufflinks on it. I'm not sure yet, but I'm toying with the idea of sending her to the thirteen colonies (alternate universe pre-United States) which would match her coat's colors. Hey, maybe her coat came from there? Ikari_shot_1.jpg Ikari_shot_2.jpg You might not have got the opportunity to read the message above this, so I tried to put it on the same line.  Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  20:36, April 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * I dislike water for the most part, but it tastes a lot better to me than it used to. What's your favorite milk, juice, and soda? My favorite milk is chocolate, my favorite juice is orange juice (preferably without pulp), and my favorite pop is Mountain Dew Code Red.


 * I'm glad to hear that you liked the story and the drawing. There was this one guy whose name I can't remember, but he went through utter hell and survived. I remember reading about how he placed his leg on a maggot-infested log so they'd clean the rotten skin off. The whole story is going to revolve around Ikari trying to track down and retrieve her stolen sword. I think that everyone she kills won't be killed by a sword, though I might troll and make it look like they are going to and then have something else happen XD Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  01:16, April 12, 2016 (UTC)


 * I love Strawberry milk too! I haven't had either of those other kinds, but I find regular milk okay as long as I don't have to drink it all in a single sitting. Yes, that's the good stuff. I don't like pulp though, whenever I get some with pulp I drink through my teeth to filter it out. All juice is really good with the exception of tomato. Oh, Root Beer (when done right) and cream soda is real good too.


 * He was early American, maybe back when it was still just the thirteen colonies. I don't remember what happened to him exactly, but his group left him behind when they thought he wouldn't survive. He then got mauled by a bear, crawled for 100's of miles, and eventually found Native Americans who helped him back to health (I might be accidentally making that last part up and they had actually been what attacked him in the first place. I can't remember for certain). He ended up hunting down his former party members and was going to kill them, but then decided that they weren't worth it (and let's face it; they sort of had it coming). I really wish I could remember where I read about him or at least remember his name; one of the toughest guys of all time. Thanks, I hope so. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  03:17, April 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * That's gross. I used to stock Clamato on the shelves at walmart, yick. I don't mind the taste of pulp, so much as it is the texture that bothers me. I don't like drinking and having something solid slithering down my throat.


 * I have not seen The Revenant yet, but I've only heard good things about it. But, I guess it was real XD


 * I think that's the one that I saw part of last Christmas. The cast was all different and Ralphie was a teenager. It is funny that hardly anyone knows considering how ingrained in pop culture A Christmas Story is. Buckle up!   I'm going to be popular  03:45, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "How NOT To Depict Demintia" message
There's actually a blog dedicated to reviewing every single episode of Full House and the founder of the blog, Billy Superstar, is currently reviewing every single episode of Fuller House which I think is a sequel to the original series. It's quite a funny blog and I recommend giving it a read. Here's a link to the blog: https://therealfullhousereviewed.wordpress.com/

Since he reviewed every Full House episode ever, here's the links to his review on the Disneyworld episode:

Part 1: https://therealfullhousereviewed.wordpress.com/2013/01/25/season-6-episode-23-the-house-meets-the-mouse-part-1/

Part 2: https://therealfullhousereviewed.wordpress.com/2013/02/01/season-6-episode-24-the-house-meets-the-mouse-part-2/

Thanks for filling me in on Dementia. I didn't know that much about it so I was a little confused. Now I have a better understanding of the situation. THANKS RAIDRA!

I was talking with Doom about another idea for a pasta. Getting separated from your group is a terrifying experience especially in a place like Disney World. How about I write a Creepypasta about a little girl who gets separated from her father and brother at Disney World and throughout the story, she is trying to find them. Along the way, she encounters people in mascot suits who are trying to grab her (which the girl interprets as kidnapping but in reality they're trying to help reunite her with her group), gets bumped around like a pinball amongst the crowds, and all sorts of other misadventures. I think getting lost somewhere is a very realistic fear because it can happen very easily whether because someone gets distracted and wanders off, gets lost in big crowds, or forgets where everyone is.

I started developing the idea and I've been researching the Disney parks about their lost child protocols and I think I have a good understanding about how they work. Doom recently suggested that I make up a Disney park but I kind of want to keep it as real as possible. Though, I will keep the suggestion in mind.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   16:29, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

RE: paper weapons
Wow! That's amazing. Just the mammoth list itself is impressive. I don't think I've ever seen such a comprehensive list of weapons. It could actually be a great resource for writers. If I ever write a martial arts or Anime inspired story I will definitely return to your blog for weapons Intel. My ten-year-old son is a Naruto fanatic and he got a real kick out of it, too. Thanks so much for sharing. :) HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:01, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

National Paper Shortage Now Explained
Wow... that is a lot of blog... and a lot of paper. I'm actually unfamiliar with paper weapons, but it appears I've been given a comprehensive list of every piece ever imagined. It's definitely interesting. I'll be giving them a look over as I can. I admire your commitment. Very impressive. Thanks for sharing.

Oh, and yeah, I think "The Smiling Man" is pretty great. It's not a masterpiece or anything, but it is so simple and yet it works so well. I think it's a great example of how less can be more if done properly. I actually had a rather minimalist story on the site a while back. It wasn't the same type of minimalism as TSM, but I was also hoping to show how it's possible to do more with less. Maybe I'll bring it back up sometime or send you a pastebin link to see what you think (just in case you already read it, it was called "The Brown Spot"). Even though I don't really care for the story itself, I do feel like it was a decent example.

Jay Ten (talk) 01:43, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Abandoned by Distracted People" message
For this Disney pasta, I had to do a lot of research on Disney World parks, especially about how the cast members handle situations where a child is lost. Here are a few sources I looked at:

1. http://guff.com/16-secret-rules-for-disney-employees

2. http://www.lolwot.com/15-shocking-secret-employee-rules-disney-doesnt-want-you-to-know/6/

3. http://cp.disneycareers.com/en/onboarding/fl/working-here/disney-look/overview/overall-guidelines/

4. http://www.overentertainment.com/secret-facts-about-disneys-rules-for-their-employees/10/

5. http://emgn.com/entertainment/15-secret-rules-disney-employees-arent-allowed-tell/

6. http://diply.com/different-solutions/disney-employee-rules/150512

I also started working on my Pokepasta again. Here's what I added:

"Before I was able to figure out what happened next, I suddenly found myself inches away from a dark blue door with a black bar running through the middle of it. I leaped up and hit the black bar with all of my might. To my surprise, I had enough strength to open the door just wide enough for me to get through. The door lead to a room with dark blue walls where the paint had seemed to be chipped away in certain spots. The floor was made of solid grey concrete and unlike the linoleum floors in the hallway, I was no longer having trouble keeping my balance. However, the sound of my footsteps seemed to be amplified as they echoed throughout the barren room.

A few moments later, I made my way towards a small staircase and grabbed the thin wooden handrail beside it. I slid down the rail like a penguin with my arms and hands loosely gripping the rail."

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   05:27, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

Mark My Words: A TP Shortage Will Be the Cause of WW3
Yeah, I actually clicked the pictures and saw they were models. From what I could see, they looked like some nice artwork. Still, you could likely papercut a small town into submission with that arsenal. I'm sure you're on some sort of government watch-list now (welcome to the team!) I've actually never seen Class of 3000, nor had I even heard of it until you mentioned it. I'll try to give it a watch sometime if I ever get the chance.

As for my story "The Brown Spot", it's most certainly not NSFW. I actually tend to write more extreme pieces, but I also like to write 100% clean pieces as well. I actually knew you didn't like to read NSFW from reading some earlier exchanges (my memory is like a steel trap when it wants to be - other times it's like steel wall). I only have one of those on the site right now, but definitely stay away from it. It's not pointless gore, more of a confused philosophical rant from a rather unstable individual who's keeping a woman in his basement, but I'd hate to lose your respect after reading it, lol. Ned the Nihilist: A Misanthropic Monologue is the story, so if you ever see that title, please skip it. I actually want to look over and possibly alter TBS before I put it up (which may be later today), but if you want to read another one of mine that I just put up, it's called The Woman in Red. It's another one that is 100% clean, but it's not like TBS in style. The old version is on creepypasta.com, but this is a heavily altered version that works much better in my opinion. Check it out if you get the chance. People over at cp.com seemed to like it and find it chilling. It's a very simple, storytelling writing style. I'll let you know when I put up TBS.

Welp, I'm off to the chiropractor. Have a good one!

Jay Ten (talk) 11:12, April 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * I went ahead and restored The Brown Spot. I might rewrite it later, but I just got some crap news from the hospital and don't feel like messing with rewriting it at the moment.  Nothing serious, but they're just delaying my finding out if I have cancer by making me go to another doctor before they'll do my biopsy.  I think they want me to go insane so they can put me in the system forever, lol.  Anyway, whenever you're in the mood, feel free to give those two stories a read.  Hopefully you enjoy them.


 * Jay Ten (talk) 16:11, April 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Breakin the Mouse's Rules!" Message
Really? I never really noticed that on those sites. Which specific sites that I listed show that? Because I'm really confused right now.

What I showed you occurs after a flashback that occurred while the protagonist was running out of their room and into the hallway. Here's what I have so far: http://pastebin.com/QDYfzdxy

Thanks for the link about Alzheimer's and Dementia by the way.

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   19:52, April 13, 2016 (UTC)

"This Doesn't Look Good, No This Doesn't Look Good at All...
...My nephew drew a picture of me. It doesn't look a thing like me. Look at the nose, it's all wrong!" - Dr. Hartman.

I've seen that one you're talking about too. Definitely feels like that sometimes. As for elephants and mice, I'm choosing to continue my fantasy that elephants jump around on their tip toes and scream at the sight of a mouse and also that the mice get a huge kick out of this.

Thanks for making copies of my stories to read. I appreciate it. And definitely don't feel like you need to review them or anything. I'd just be happy knowing whether you enjoyed them or not. I mostly just like knowing that they're being read. One of the reasons I rarely ask people to read my work is because I hate the thought of someone feeling obligated to leave some lengthy feedback, when all I really want is just a simple two or three sentence response. I actually just uploaded a new one that is also family friendly called The Diary of Regina Roberts and the Diamond Tree Mystery. It's another one of my stories where the horror is mostly implied and even unanswered to some extent.

Hope all is well.

Jay Ten (talk) 02:10, April 14, 2016 (UTC)


 * LOL. I remember that one too. Dr. Hartman is one of my favorite characters on there.  I used to watch Whose Line a lot, but there were so many of them I think I missed that one.  I'm definitely not a pushy person.  It takes a lot out of me to ask even the tiniest favor.  I'd never make it as a salesman.  That show used to get me rolling at times.  Anyway, thanks for being willing to give those stories a look.  Take your time.  If you ever have anything specific you want me to give a read, just let me know.  Have a good one!


 * Jay Ten (talk) 12:45, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

I'm Known on the Streets for My Love of Gravy
Lmao. I didn't even know they had new ones. I'm so out of touch. Speaking of MST3K, I just watched them do Manos: The Hands of Fate a few weeks ago. I couldn't hardly keep it together. I had always heard about how bad that movie was, but I really wasn't prepared.

Thanks for fixing those two mistakes in my story. It always amazes me how hard it is to catch those things when it's your own story. I've probably re-read that story 20+ times and never noticed those mistakes. Again, thanks for reading. I'm really glad you liked it. Hopefully you enjoy my others when you get around to them. BTW, I added another one today, lol. It's a first person, present tense account of a man who wakes up in the middle of the woods and has no clue how he got there. It's not so much scary as it is a story of complete despair. It's a story about consequences. All my stories are on my profile page now, so just pick through them as you feel like it (I would avoid not only the NSFW one, but the Slightly NSFW one as well). I just want people to read them when they're in the mood to read (hopefully) an interesting story, rather than just when I ask. You can take a month to read the next one and it won't bother me a bit, seriously. This medicine I'm on makes me ramble real bad when it gets late, lel. Goodnight!

Jay Ten (talk) 02:01, April 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reply to "Malcolm 10: The Inginging" message
Man, the Malcolm films just aren't as great as they used to be huh? I mean why would you make 10 films based on Malcolm In The Middle? They're totally unfaithful to the show anyway. I mean, why did they genderswap all the characters? Are they trying to make Ghostbusters 2016 look like a GOOD movie? Oh Hollywood, you so quirky! By the way, Malcolm in The Middle is a super awesome show that you should totally watch.

So Doom had suggested an idea for what should happen next in the R.L Stine pasta. Here's what he said: "I think you should continue your pasta by having Kristy go to the room that Hotaka is in and have them talk with Hotaka bringing up how the police officer ran off and then try to come up with something from there." I'm going to try and come up with a way to take that idea out of summary form. I've also been making a few changes to the pasta. Here's the pastebin link: http://pastebin.com/zwHaFT85

Are you liking the Pokepasta so far?

Heeere's Hailey!  Wanna Talk?   04:24, April 15, 2016 (UTC)