Talk:Why I Can't Have Friends/@comment-26444017-20180806041125

The imagery is acceptable, but I found the story wandered, purposeless. Nothing tied back to anything else, and there was no explanation. Beyond that, it needs a once over for formatting and corrective purposes. I think if this were cleaned up, and the early sections revised to fit or maybe even explain the later sections, this could be really good.

Also, and this is more of a personal gripe, I'm not a fan of the name of the antagonist. 'Void' sounds like an anime villain name, not something a real person would name something. Again, that's my personal opinion on the matter. If you want it, you should keep it.