Talk:Clown Dogs/@comment-25024572-20150123141919

That was actually a pretty good story. That being said, I do have a few minor nitpicks about it:

I feel you kind of went a bit overboard when making it clear the "protagonists" were shallow girls. It did work though...except for the part where Alyssa started humming a Justin Bieber song. I'm pretty sure most girls around, say, high school aren't fans of his. Maybe middle school, but not high school. I don't know, it's a really minor nitpick.

Also, shallow teenage girl who hums Justin Bieber songs knows how to use Photoshop well enough to make people think a girl likes doing naughty things to dogs. I don't know, it just seems...odd.

Like I said, very minor nitpicks. But I'm nitpicky like that. Other than that, I thought it was pretty good. Good job.