Talk:On a Hill/@comment-24740495-20140329014737

hmmm, wow, I love the way this was written, the style and wording was excellent! Though it is super long, I like pastas that have alot of development, but I think this one was way too long for me, though I did read the whole thing

I was kinda confused at how the point of view changes. How at first it's the main character, then it's to third person focusing on John, even though it's John who's telling the story, so shouldn't it have been from John's first person point of view?

well anyway, I'm no writer. Love the writting. Though content for me was not the best, but definately good :)