Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26100502-20150421194113

There was always a time where people had a fantasy of seeing how long they could survive in the wilderness, or in a dark place, or anywhere not normally safe. Well in this story, we go into the lives of three children, Hank, Bill, and Clinton. So without further a do, let's dive into this tale.1:00 PM September 5th, The First Night. "H..Huh? Where am I?" Hank said as he woke up. Bill and Clinton were still sound asleep, and as Hank was searching around the house he remembered that his mother hasn't returned in months. So after Hank cooked and ate a fresh burrito and while Bill and Clinton were still sound asleep, he left the house only to find fog everywhere around him. "(Cough, Cough) Gee what's with all this fog, and where is it coming from?" Hank asked himself. Hank then saw a woman strangled on the ground as he then approached a man in a yellow jacket, "Why your just in time, but your poor mother has already met her fate." The man then said. "Wh..... What did you do to her!" Hank then said. Hank then was crying and jumped on the man, viciously attacking him in the process. The man threw him off and kicked him hard in the stomach, "I'm sorry boy, but I'm afraid our little game ends now!" The man then said. The man then pulled out a pocket knife and shanked Hank in the stomach, as he then fell down on the ground bleeding in the process. 2:00 PM September 6th, The Second Night."H...Huh?" Bill said as he woke up. He then looked back at the bed he was sleeping on and asked himself,"Wait a minute, where's Hank?" He then also left the house eating nothing in the process of leaving the house, he claimed he wasn't hungry at all for some reason. Anyways Bill then left the house and he saw the same fog, "Cough, Cough, Cough, Why's all this fog here?" He asked himself. The fog then immediately faded out,"Well that was fast." Bill shortly said. He then walked on the road, realizing there were no cars at all."That's strange?" He then said to himself. "There's always cars on the parking lot." He then continued, and went down the main street, with still no cars in sight. He then continued walking down the main road, as he then heard a voice say "Reach For The Sky!" He then raised both of his hands up in the air as he saw a mysterious shadow figure on the other side of the road. "Good boy, now just stay there and don't attack me like Hank." The mysterious shadow figure said."Wh..What? How do you know about Hank?!" Bill replied. "More then you think." The figure responded. He then vanished as Bill then heard mysterious whispers and looked at the right corner of the other main street. But while he was looking at that direction and still listening to the voices that he kept hearing, a black car as black as the shadow figure with the shadow figure riding it was driving fast on the opposite direction of Bill and then ran him over with Bill's now dead corpse lying on the sidewalk. "This is why you always stay on the sidewalk when walking in the street." The shadow figure then said.3:00 PM September 7th, The Final Night. "Ugh........ Huh? Where is everybody?" Clinton said as he woke up. He then got up and ate some breakfast, Clinton then heard a voice in his head saying stuff like "Enjoying your last meal?" And"You should have saved them when you had the chance." Clinton then got outside and saw Hank, shanked in the stomach and bleeding to death. "Who did this!!" Clinton then said in sadness over the loss of one of his brothers. He then heard a shadow figure dashing quickly and then he heard it saying,"Come with me." Clinton then followed the figure and went on the sidewalk. He was running as fast as he could down the sidewalk to follow the figure in his tracks."You killed Bill too!!? How dare you!!" "He, He, He, He, He, He." The figure giggled as if he enjoyed the torment he was giving Clinton."Oh, your dead!" Clinton exclaimed. The shadow figure was once again running fast, as Clinton then followed behind it. The figure led him all the way to Clinton's school, and then mysteriously vanished. Clinton then stopped and slowly opened the door into the school, as the door locked him in mysteriously. Clinton was then confused, and tried to get back out, but it was no use. He then lied down and put his head on his elbows, crying about what he just saw, 2 of his brothers were dead, and there's nothing he could do about it. Clinton then saw 2 glowing red eyes in the far distance, it then came closer to reveal itself as a 60 foot mutated lizard-like monstrous being. It then came rushing towards him, as Clinton tried with all his might to unlock the door, but it was still no luck. And by the time he gave up trying, he heard breathing noises behind him, he then looked back and saw the creature right behind him. "Ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Clinton screamed as the creature impaled him through the heart, and split him in half, blood then splattered on the windows of the doors as the creature went back in his sanctuary. 7:50 AM September 16th, Night ..... "Kid's I'm home!" A man came in and exclaimed. He then looked around the place and saw that no one was home, the same black mysterious figure appeared behind him and said,"Your too late John, they are all dead. I killed them all!" "Ok first of all who are you? And secondly why did you murder my kids!" John replied. "It's me, your old friend Ted. The one who you used to do everything with before your kids came along, you paid the attention to them, and they paid the price. You left me in the dust you idiot!" "But you never text me, or talk to me." John replied."You dropped my phone in the toilet on purpose you idiot don't you remember?!" "Ughhh.." John shrugged in confusion. "Well It's too late now! You should have hung out with me when you had the chance!" The figure then pulled out a stick of dynamite and it exploded the whole house. The last words that Fred said was"R.I.P. My used to be buddy, John...." 