Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5143764-20141016020548/@comment-25546552-20141016200448

This is my first comment on here but I hope it helps you out. So, I quite liked it near the end. I will admit the begining was alright but it may have just been the tone of the narrator since they had already explained it multiple times from what we learn at the end so it seems alright enough to me. The end was quite nice, I flashed back to before in the story when it was explained how she was just staring at the door and that was quite creepy. But overal I liked it a lot.

And, if you really want to know. You should either:

1.) Open your window and run away, GOTTA GO FAST.

or

2.) Open the door and see what she wants because when you think about there's no way she hasn't heard you. She has been blind for a while and her hearing must be great.