Talk:On Deck/@comment-24996913-20140830070250

I agree with @Averystrangeplace in a sense, but, in another, I liked what you did with this. There's nothing wrong with stories that end mysteriously. I rather enjoy a good cliffhanger rather than knowing what exactly happened to the main character. But, it worked the way you wrote it as well. Either way it goes, this was well written and I enjoyed the read all the way through. But, like the below comment says, ambiguity would've made it a lot creepier.