Talk:No Way Out/@comment-26296007-20150509144538

Okay, this was good. Not gonna lie. I loved the twist ending! Just a couple tiny issues:

-Grammar. You kept using "breath" (the noun) instead of "breathe" (the verb)

-You changed the girl's name from Hannah to Amy. You may find it wise to go through and make sure she's either always Hannah or always Amy.

Overall, a very nice pasta, and a very good read. 8.5/10!