Talk:Gravel.com/@comment-25135737-20140706213234

I liked this, I thought it was a well-thought-up story. The writing can always be improved, but that's okay! The story was better than the construction, but I know if you keep working on your writing tech than when your brilliant mind gets another idea, the composition will be better. That's how life works, my friend: you will get what you want if you work hard enough for it.

I'm not saying it will last forever in all cases, but I do know that much. Have a lovely day, 8/10.