Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25716255-20141118200653/@comment-25477067-20141118230108

I really enjoy this pasta, especially the way it tells a different spin on the "zombification" therory and avoids the zombie cliches. I have to say, I personaly would have enjoyed this story more if you had done more in the laboratory parts, such as a running account or dialog between the scientist as they watch. Also, the nanobot things was a bit predictable, but not in a harmful way. An improvement would be to have this told from a different perspective. I also would like it to strech longer. It is over so fast I feel like I am missing something. An intersting tactic would be to copy WWZ (the book) and tell it as if you were a reporter interviewing surviviors of the disease. These are my ideas, and you can always ignore or disregard them all. Another promising start to a budding Creepyauthor's life :)