Talk:The Silent Audience—A Historical Note/@comment-26030957-20150320160740

Wow, you have developed your own complicated realm complete with strange new creatures. Impressive. I really love the old timey flavor you evoke in this piece. In the beginning when you describe the old story teller missing the can when he spit tobacco, that simple little detail just brought the whole scene to life. Your descriptions of the professor with his pale skin and thick glasses made him seem so English. Anna Crabtree is a great character and your descriptions of her really brought the Gerdin people to life. The sense of dread that arises with the Lontaqas was quite powerful. Great metaphors as well.