Talk:"There's Something Wrong with the Basement"/@comment-28575580-20170315011711

I disagree with the previous review's claim that the story was vague. I do know that I don't prefer the narrative style. It feels didactic, cold, and the narrative speaker feels too present in the text. The speaker should always feel invisible, or bound up within a first-person character. Right now, it jumps out and I feel like I'm being told a story; I dislike this feeling, as it interferes with me the reader.