Talk:Squidward's Suicide/@comment-44767370-20200102040756

I don't give a crap if you're keeping the story on the wiki for "historical archive" reasons. The grammar is mediocre, it uses to replace actual scares and horror, there's no build-up of tension, it swaps tenses way too much and without reason, the main character is barely a character, the topics it brings up is not reserved at all, It uses hyper-realism incorrectly, and the cherry on top of the shit-sunday is that It went on to inspire waves to even crappier stories like this, it even went on to inspire Sonic.exe which itself inspired other .exe creepypastas. Take this story off the wiki.