Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33979162-20190519031547/@comment-9041013-20190519171721

It's a Jeff The Killer rehash... that's not good. Nobody believes these "evil" teens exist or make sense. Psychosis isn't psychopathy. Psychosis is a disturbance in thought process and emotions basically "losing touch with reality". Psychosis may be delusions and may be hallucinations among other things.

What makes Cat evil? none of what she could possibly have makes people into Hannibal Lecter, so she is basically just "an evil teen for the sake of being an evil teen".

On top of the plot, the formating is bad and the fact that you've made this into a story made up of pieces of episodic content isn't really good. It's a bunch of A happens at time X B happens at time Y etc. Why should I care about what's going on? there's nothing connective this.

If you want a serial killer story, look up actual convicted or unconvicted serial killers and try to mimick their story, or draw something from them.