Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25067835-20140617055617/@comment-25050660-20140617215210

The story and plot was interesting enough. I liked it. However, at the beginning I thought the MC was alive, not a ghost, so that really confused me at the end though. You're story has good details and description and is filled with emotions and understanding as if I'm reading an autobiography. I really liked it. It kept me biting my finger nails through out the whole story asking this question: what's going to happen next?

It was awesome.