Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20180409180650/@comment-35353892-20180422025721

I'll admit, I didn't see that coming. I expect Kyle himself to get ambushed by a killer while hiding in the dumpster or something. The story itself works fine enough, but like the previous comments said, it lacks the punch. This story reminds me very much of the old "Tales From the Crypt" comics, where people would die in the most over the top yet fitting ways. This death is very over the top, and may catch some readers off guard as it did me. You can use that to your advantage and make it a hell of a lot scarier through descriptive language and suspense building. Best of luck to you.