Talk:A Disturbance in the Garden/@comment-25101672-20140802070020

It's okay. You should build up a little bit, give us the background story and everything, and also make a bit more 'realistic'. I mean, who'd sleep in the porch again after seeing someone there?

I liked it a lot, but as I said, if you build up a bit more, it can be a 5/5 :)