Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444401-20150715024759/@comment-25755652-20150715062355

I think you have a great start here. I like the idea of a spirit being released from a container. I think that a lot could be done with that concept. Especially with the shadow entity that was released. Was it really the dad? A negative energy? Do all ashes have this energy? Is keeping jars in general bad ju ju (at least in the context of the story)? There are a lot of great questions this raises. You could set up all sorts of cool lores with the concept of ash jars and spirits that need rest or they become these shadows that plague people.