Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180714064900/@comment-34823985-20180716125210

Thanks for the feedback Jdeschene, DrBobSmith. My notes on this one are starting to clutter together. I swear I fixed this already - "The decision to forego heading back to retrieve it was made when he stumbled over a raised bit of sidewalk."

Oh well, back to the drawing board. :)