Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20180730155919/@comment-35711173-20180730170130

Wrong words. He threw a park? A whole park?

Lots of spellung errors.

You need to correct these. I have some handy links on my blog page for correction of the English language issues. That is a prerequisite.

I am glad you are starting early for a Halloween pasta. The story is rather meh, dull. Ordinary, told before.