Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-30891328-20170419015716/@comment-5101683-20170424022712

If you want good things, here are good things.

Reading over tee entire thing, it does feel like you're building up to something. The framework is good, so if you wrote more things in each part, the story would probably be good. There are some subtle comments that are integrated well enough. Those are all good things.