Talk:Clown Dogs/@comment-25383866-20150123001243/@comment-26030957-20150123034616

After my last reply I re-read the story and yes, that sentence did seem a bit awkward-I'll let it stand. Thanks. I also noticed you took out my scene breaking ******s. Are these not used in pasta? Like I said, I'm new here and appreciate any criticism.

By the way I checked out your art and it's awesome. I also started reading your pasta and really liked it. Did you take that great photograph in When The Lights Went Out? The mix of media in this creepypasta stuff is just great. Did you see that movie in Necrosleep? Amazing.