Talk:Tongueless/@comment-26326346-20150726044411

I like the idea of a killer who keeps the tongues as trophies. It works because they are really easy to hide. I also really enjoyed the dilemma of knowing where the killer's hideout was out, but not being able to tell. I also like how you loosely hinted at the father being the killer "he always came home tired".

I do find it a bit weird that he's likely going to kill his son in his own home though. I didn't like how the dog simply went away when the were in the shack or how the old man didn't follow the dog to the shack, although I suppose some woodland creature could have attracted the dog's attention and the old man could have simply not been there.

Just a couple of small criticism's that you can explain away/don't really matter. I'm looking forward to more of your pasta, keep up the good work :)