Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5170510-20191221011957/@comment-43940019-20191221064554

As someone who is unfamiliar with Schatzgraber, i would suggest beginning the story with what is so interesting about it. News of the discovery clearly grabbed your attention in some way, so use that critical first sentence (and first paragraph) to convince someone like me why I should want to delve deeper into the subject as you have.