Talk:Daughter of the Reaper/@comment-25930992-20151108162737

I'm not really sure this is creepypasta material. All I really see right now is, at best, a diamond in the rough. It's not really scary, and it makes very little sense, like the decapitation of three people in once swipe from the driver seat of a car. Unless it's a car from a George Miller movie, I really don't see how that's possible.

Then there's the awful plot conveniance, the apparent abscence of the existance of blood, and the lack of emotion in any of the characters. This is also fairly barebones, with nothing really fleshed out.

Good attempt, but I wouldn't find myself giving like an 8/10 score.