Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28420405-20160705203714/@comment-28420405-20160706140301

ChristianWallis wrote:

gaped -> I think this is meant to be gasped but I'm not sure

Also, nope, gaped is gaped: Gape - to be or become wide open, like the gaping maw of a fish out of water, gulping down air. The sentence I see as an example of the world reads as: "a large duffle bag gaped open at her feet" -- I think I'll clean up the sentence a bit, but I do like the word, so I want to keep it