Board Thread:Site Questions/@comment-27390636-20170818063140

Found a subtle error in my pasta, The Brooding Star. In this paragraph, “shield by eyes” should be “shield my eyes”:

“Before I could ponder my options deeply, the scorching sun peeked over the horizon. I raised my arm to shield by eyes from the harsh twilight which put me on my knees, knowing deep down that its harmful rays were indeed harming me.”

A fix for this absolute grammatical catastrophe would be appreciated. Amazing how it snuck by after a trillion proofreads by my obsessive compulsive eyes—those dang “bys” and “mys” can be real buggers!  