Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5960805-20150209043823/@comment-25477067-20150209193848

Long, but good. A bit more detailed than needs be, but the detail doesn't nescessarily detract. It doesn't rhyme, which for me, and probably only me, is a stumbling block. I assume this is a poem? It shouldn't be an AABBCC rhyme scheme, but some rhyming would be nice.