User blog comment:Tiololo/CREEPY ART CONTEST September 2015/@comment-26858830-20150823010456/@comment-24463401-20151010013008

JUDGING

Creativity/Originality: 25/50

The paragraph was pretty interesting, but I didn't really see a lot of those ideas shown in the piece itself. Showing her singing of using some sort of instrument would have tied the two together.

Aesthetic: 20/25

The clothing that the girl is wearing looks nice. The black and white color scheme adds to the atmosphere of the piece. I just think that it looks a bit empty and that there could be a bit more there.

Effort: 20/25

It does look like you put in a fair amount of effort, judging by how well colored in it is. The sky could use a bit more coloring in, though.

Final Score: 65/100