User blog comment:Magical Toddler/Second Person Perspectives - Why They're Hard to Write/@comment-25052433-20170817023814

I've never written in 2nd, and I don't really enjoy reading them. There have been maybe one or two good ones, but honestly they usually ruin themselves by destroying the suspension of disbelief. For example, a line like "You walk down your stairs and see a clown..."

Well, I don't have stairs in my house, so that ruins a huge chunk of the story. Honestly I'm a much bigger fan of 3rd person for most of my writing. I've dabbled in a few 1st person stories, and they work if the main character if very strong, Otherwise, 3rd person is my go to.

The tips you left above though are great, and if I ever decide to cross into the 2nd person style, I'll refer to this blog.