Talk:Ticker/@comment-4849011-20141119135404

I thought this was a good story, and I'm not just saying that because of Tyber's contribution. I like stories that make you wonder, "What is going on here?" (as opposed to being confusing and hard to figure out)  and build a sense of dread. How creepy is it that he cares so much about his wife and daughter at the beginning, and then by the end he looks at them as mere distractions from the clock girl's beauty, going so far as to call his wife "the dead woman on the floor"? Well done!