Talk:Hungry World/@comment-25052433-20140921052215

Let's all go to the zoo. I asked the monkeys to write me something, and after days of typing on the keys, they came up with this review. It's actually far superior to the one I wrote originally.

What went right:

-A lot. This was actually a very well written, heartfelt story. It got me in the gut with the feelings a bit towards the end. Picture this poor man, silently going about his rounds, alone but still dutiful, with his beloved animals...well, if that doesn't get to you a little bit, you might be dead.

-Normally I don't like zombie apocalypse stories. I used to, then everyone and their grandparents began to write them, and not I am kind of over them. However, you kept the zombie concept in the very rear of this story, just as a plot modifier, not as a plot driver, and you did it very well.

-As I said before, this one was gently emotional. The man, being forced to go about the mercy kill the animals that he had cared for so long, it was just moving and disturbing. This blended together well though.

-The ending. He gave his life so that his beloved lions could live a little longer. Touching and appropriate. Well done.

Honestly, I don't have much of a critique here. I wouldn't change a thing. Excellent story.