Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20150309053023/@comment-24686384-20150309060323

Im going to put this as lightly as i can...your chioce of wordig is a bit off and doesnt make any sense at all in any sentence unless you read through and desipher the sentence at the same time (unenjoyable). second is if your going to write a gaming pasta, be sure to be an experienced writer at first,which in this case (trying the best not to be mean) you clearly are not. by the way if your going to write a gaming pasta PLEASE choose a new topic other than "the game is haunted"....I bet not even LOLskeletons could tell you how many of those we have had on the wiki. Also try to pick a game that everybody can socialise with,old fashioned games usually give off the most fear, look at Ben drowned, it is frightening because a game that was so old (I do know they have remade it but that doesnt really matter) had been changed to what it was before and has some scary aspects about it (the game itself, not the creepypasta fueled version). GTA is a horrible game choice as for there is nothing "creepy" about it in any aspect at all.

I believe most people would agree with me at least about that last part.DONT GET YOURSELF DOWN THOUGH, just start with something simple and work your way up, and I liked that you posted this on the workshop and not directly on the site. Trust me it took me a few times to get a decent pasta on here so keep trying!