Talk:The Queen's Guard/@comment-29454058-20170327172400

Can I just point out, being English myself, that when you start a story "I was in the English army" but then go on to say "My mom" it really kills the story, may I suggest changing that to "Mum" (being an English term and all) and may I also suggest changing " English  Army" too, since we don't actually have an " English  Army" army anymore, haven't since 1707, in 1713 "The British Army" was founded and it's been the same ever since. Just a couple of things you may want to consider (-: