Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20180409000834/@comment-34823985-20180409032528

I have a strange and long up and down relationship with writing poetry, so I'm refraining from posting any to the site as of right now. Maybe that will change in the future. I like the rhythm of this and it tells a very clear story. I know very well how a poem's message can sometimes get lost in the hubbub of creating a smooth rhythm and rhyme scheme. That didn't happen here.

Short and sweet, but definitely not lacking in imagery. I have no issues with this. I enjoyed it quite a bit.