Talk:Glitchy Red/@comment-4911577-20140814194625

That's a modest creepypasta. One advice: ease up on the swearing. Nobody gets scared when you start calling the game a "fucking game". You cursed too much, so much that you ruined the story with all of your "fuck this" and "fuck that" and "fucking viridian".

3/10, had huge potential, but you "fucked" it up.