Talk:Restrained/@comment-24281984-20141022022733/@comment-4998996-20141115214034

To address some things in the review. I know that footsteps is one word. The main character is not blind, he remembers absolutely nothing. The lack luster response with all the elipses is meant to show he is confused and dazed without the reading having to directly be told that as no one likes it when they have shit spelled out for them like they are stupid. Relying on sight in a story is a cheap way to do something so I like to use some other senses as well, such as touch, thus why he didn't look down to see what was restraining him.

You not understanding the puzzle of course is your own fault. The question that remains unanswered through out the entire thing, above all the other questions, is "Who/what is the main character?"

I am still chuckling at the fact that you thought the main character was blind when you yourself pointed out this particular section: “From what I could see of my body when I let my head fall forward, its skin that looked like it hadn't seen light in ages, a rather bony figure, no shirt and no breasts, so I am male, tattered jeans, and oddly, rather hairless everywhere.” The fifth word there is see, making it fairly obvious that he isn't blind.

As much as this isn't my best story, nor is it a fairly good one, I was trying something new. As for your overall reviewing style, you fail to point out anything you liked in both reviews you have done on my stories thus far. I think you need to improve on your review style even more then I need to improve on making puzzles.