Talk:Man on the Train/@comment-24524203-20150911105527

Good story. I enjoyed the vagueness of the whole thing, and the small repitition of 'It's impolite to stare' is rather chilling. This is just the kind of story that is best translated into a poem. In fact, it kind of reminds me of classic nursery rhymes, or those freaky stories parents tell their kids to get them to behave. On the other hand, the rhythm of the poem sounds a little awkard. That's my only complaint though. Overall, I really like this poem and the story. :3