Talk:Looks Like We Got a Live One Here, Boys/@comment-25975226-20150225110230

Very, very nice. 9/10, I just have a few grammarish things to get out of the way.

"Calendula shouted, stomping about, kicking the scattered boards, searching amongst the debris for maybe one living chicken-  let it be Bonny." - Earlier you refer to the chicken as Bonny.

" The rain had stopped, the clouds blown away, and the full moon shown its light into the rustic kitchen, illuminating it perfectly." - I believe you meant shone.

“Goddamn stupid fucking saskwatches.” - I'm okay if you don't change this as it may just be another way of spelling it, but the more common way is Sasquatches.

Overall this was great and I couldn't stop reading. You are truly up there with my favourite writers ever. No joke. Loving your stories. :)