Talk:Fleshgait/@comment-26399604-20161218002224/@comment-24101790-20161218005514

Thanks, I was actually getting ready to revise a section so I'll make those edits when I make the other changes. Thanks for taking the time to read the story and notice some of the (likely numerous) mistakes present. Speaking of subtly (I feel like I have to plug this as it's likely going to go unnoticed), I included a few times throughout the story where the Fleshgaits were present with the group and the author neglects to tell the audience there's one present.

I had done a bit of reading about Fleshgaits on Reddit and thought they'd make an interesting creature, but I wanted to add a new aspect on them as it seems like it'd be pretty easy to spot one. If you liked the concept of creatures that can tinker around with your memory, there's an episode of Rick and Morty that has a similar concept. In fact, it's what inspired this story so it's worth a check out. Thanks for taking the time to read it and leave a review.