Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31532017-20161130072138/@comment-31532017-20161205060955

I suppose I should explain the whole story in full detail to get your thoughts on how to change the narrator's voice.

Our lovely storyteller here and his siblings are the actual children of God. The almighty created the whole universe; technically nobody knows how he managed to pull that off (It shall never be explained). In a way, depending on your perspective we could be considered as his fictional work. After all, we along with any other life spawned from there.

Now the reason he done the act was because he wanted to show his children the beauty of life (Essentially our universe). But they never took actual consideration of his works and more less mocked him for it. He felt resentful about the whole situation and left (Never came back despite the cries of his sons and daughters during the worse time of all). <-- The event shall be addressed in a novella-based pastas.

A few actually liked the idea and they were eager to see what their father has created. And then they saw humans and other advanced lifeforms acting like the voracious animals like they are (Suffice to say they lost interest completely). But only one and that's our narrator has decided to scour across the universe in search of similar beings like them. <-- Shall be addressed during novella-based pastas; not the same as the above

He stumbled upon humans again and decided to do the observation once more (like he always did). Discovered an unusual behavior never seen before and then he went back to his homeland and delivered the message. (There, you know how it goes)