Talk:Private Detectives

I gotta say, overall it was pretty good, but the ending felt really rushed. Way too abrupt to leave an impression. The whole chain of events makes sense, the problem is we never actually get to see the build-up to the final moment. The way it's told, the protagonist goes from a more or less "normal" person to a psychopath in literally one sentence. I feel it could've been much better if the author included some sort of an insight into the protagonist's feeling at the time he first visited the cellar.

Jurrak (talk) - Good, bad, chalk, cheese... 14:52, February 23, 2013 (UTC)