Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20181121135933/@comment-35711173-20181121172652

Solonor1987,

You need a lot of work with your basic English. Your biggest problem is your use of paragraphs. Read the blog entry below and see if it helps. Then correct your problems here in the Writer's Workshop. Don't post it on the main site until you have fixed all your problems here first. As is, this story would be marked for deletion within minutes. User_blog:Fatal_Disease/How_to_Start_a_New_Paragraph_Or:_How_I_Learned_to_Not_Make_a_Wall-o-Text