Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20190110203828/@comment-36393004-20190111130903

BloodySpghetti wrote: It's all nice and dandy, but I sense a tad bit of inconsistency here. If the Ew'ah drives people nuts by looking at them, how do the kids don't go insane while exchanging eye kisses every now and then throughout the story? Perhaps make it so that they don't get to see the creature in it's full "glory" thus sparing them their fate of madness. Well, that's the thing about fables and legends. They aren't always accurate. Plus neither of them got a clear look until right at the end but that was brief, because grandma stepped in. Prior to that it was at a distance and clouded by darkness or rain. I'm glad to see this was the only thing you found wrong with the story.