Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24783096-20140406173455/@comment-24783610-20140406185924

~LegendOfZelda~ wrote: Yeah... This has poor grammar, the plotline does not make much sense, and isn't even scary. It didn't "Unnerve me, or shock me", as most creepypastas should, or are expected to. I believe she already knows this and there for is why shes aking for Help from more experianced writers as it is the smart thing to do when your just begining.

Once again i remind you two that she is asking for help not critiszm if your intention wasn't to help her then why even reply.If its not as nerve racking as you would like tell her what she need to add or improve rather than just plainly say 'This sucks'

If the grammar is bad tell her what she should put in and where its not gonna help any one if you just tell whats wrong with out really pointing out the main flaws that for one makes the writer feel bad and will in some cases make them stop.