Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150430062138/@comment-26326346-20150511003232

I went ahead and released it because I couldn't think of anything else I could do with the story. I admit that I didn't account for such quick feedback, so I am sorry for releasing it while you were leaving me feedback (I feel rude for having done that).

I tried to build up the possibility that Patrick was a threat until I revealed that he was an FBI agent, I also tried to build him up as a nice man with a job to do. I'd hate to take that away by having him working with the Bio-terrorist. I've also been toying with having Patrick Stockman appearing in another pasta as a way to connect some of them together.

I've stated at the end that it wasn't the first time that Stockman had witnessed what was going on with Grenwalt which was a hint that more animals have been modified, released and killed people in the same manner before. It wouldn't have made much sense to have had him feeling and walking away out of disgust if he had done it. I don't know, I just like Patrick Stockman as a character even though he isn't that fleshed out at the moment. I'm actually starting to get some ideas for a sequel on this at the moment.

I do appreciate the feedback and suggestions! I'm sorry that I released it while you were leaving me some comments. I'll try to be better about that in the future. Thank you for all of the help with The Hissing :)