Talk:The Mouth of Truth/@comment-29507836-20161028075756

Very nice and a good read for its length. It's not that descriptive, however.

The wording is great and I didn't see any mechanical errors which is always splendid when I stumble upon a story like so. I also liked the plot being based around lies, however I find that the scare factor is eerie but not scary at the most. I also think that a plot twist could've been added, but that doesn't really matter much for me since you implemented the ritual essence perfectly.

Overall, 8/10.

P.S. What if, say, I push myself off a high ground directly above the "mouth of truth"? I wouldn't be able to stop myself, so what happens? Do I suddenly feel like not jumping off or...?