Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31283382-20161126153105/@comment-31283382-20161126183018

Derpyspaghetti wrote: Could I suggest something?

Since I know you're not gonna answer me soon, I'll just say it. Run your story through a spelling and grammar checker (There are a lot of free ones online) before posting it here. Will do.

But I need to ask; how do you like the overall story?