Talk:Boulevard of Broken Dreams/@comment-25065936-20140929154839

"My name is Lauren and this is how I died at Walt Disney World" Nope. Just nope. This was okay, albeit the horridly gross spelling errors, until this sentence. It utterly fails to capture the reader's attention, as every creepypasta reader has seen the generic disneyland intro sevenfold already. and the dead author cliche just isnt as good at the start as it is at the end. 5/10.