Talk:Walk with Me/@comment-26027963-20150418021341

I got your message on the talk page.

Pros:

1. The plot - I love it. The way you had us thinking it was a crazy officer.

2. The characters - I love how you kept it simple, but enough so we could see why all this was happening

3. Setting - The way you were able to have a simplicity of a situation, but still have an aapproipriate style.

Cons:

1. Plot - a little cliche

2. Length - I feel like this could've made this longer, and that would've made it better. A sequel or a prequel would make it better.

Thanks!

--Welcome One And All! 02:13, April 18, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords