Talk:The Seven Deadly Songs/@comment-5157098-20131201012408

Hey, Anyways, to my comments.

1.Great pasta, well written. 2.There could be a bit more on Janice, that kind of stuff. 3. There are a TON of grammar and spelling errors. You can figure them out by context, but it just ruins the, insane, powerful, feel to it. 4. Beyond this. Good story, it gave me a nice read, also, I agree, it'd make a good movie.