Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27012445-20190116025745/@comment-35711173-20190116194600

Killahawke1,

According to https://www.scribens.com/, you have seven run-on sentences as well as several other errors worth investigating.

HOW did this happen? Even towards the end of the Carboniferous period, when oxygen levels were about twice the current level, spiders couldn't grow that big. The largest of their class was perhaps two feet in diameter, leg tip to leg tip. The identification of this creature as a spider was overturned and now it is classified as a sea scorpion. If oxygen levels were as high as the peak of the Carboniferous period, they still wouldn't be sufficient for THAT kind of mega spider. They would be high enough to cause fires everywhere.

See https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Megarachne

A spider with a body the size of a dog wouldn't be a major threat to people. You could easily kill one with a pistol. If they are immortal resurrected creatures then how did it happen?

Check out this image: