Talk:The Dentist Appointment

A very bone-chilling pasta. However, I do NOT like how it's referring to "You, you, you" the whole time. It should be about a person experience. Starting each sentence with "YOU" is very repetitive, and borderlines annoyance. Furthermore, I do like the descriptive details you give, specially with the breath, how you combined the elements of mint with the stale/rot of creepiness. It's really good!  Z mario  23:14, December 7, 2012 (UTC)