Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26952862-20150904165525/@comment-25980905-20150905002848

This will be a short little review here, let's begin shall we?

Overview

This was a pleasant little story to read in all honesty. Your spelling was great, your grammar was great and, overall, the story had a flow to it (something I see rarely in the workshop). One slight piece of criticism however, it's quite unclear as to what has actually happened here. Is Anne possessed, insane or remembering aspects from her past life? The story is awfully vague around the topic of Anne's new medication and the story, although great in design, feels like it could be elaborated on more.

I especially loved the twist at the end, it was different. However, I feel as though I do not have enough context to fully understand exactly what did/will happen. Overall, the story wasn't creepy but it held true to those horror genre elements and stayed clear of most clichès. The way in which you positioned the audience creates a good atmosphere and the way you went about describing the characters (especially in that introduction) created a sense of mystery, loss and confusion. You have done well in hooking the readers with the first few sentences. My one complaint is that the story could be expanded and elaborated on more.

Anyway, I hope this review helps you in any way possible and I hope this story reaches the full potential I believe it can reach. Good luck and good writing.