Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4499225-20150318212318/@comment-3999760-20150321073147

This pasta is decent. It holds the mystic sci-fi and the unknown element. The twist at the end was nice but predictable. There are no severe flaws of the story of what I see, and it's meets the quality standards of the site. Overall, this story does a good job of describing the creature and shows the terror of what it could do.