Talk:The Shadow Girl/@comment-25037895-20150702074045

There was only one moment I was put-off reading this: when the shadow girl tilted her head up, it seemed like an unneeded cliché moment. It happens far too much in the world of horror. It did fit perfectly, and it was brief. But, still. This entire piece captivated me from start to finish. The Shadow Girl Scare Factor82Transition91Composition93Description96Conclusion88Overall90