Talk:Let Your Hair Down/@comment-26030957-20150220201650

"Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair, so I can climb up and get into your underwear!" -sorry about that, the Beastie Boys just came right out of me there. Seriously, nice take on this classic Grimm Brothers tale. The ending is great. I also found your metaphors fantastic: "as blood came pouring out of his stomach the way syrup glides out of a bottle onto fresh pancakes",   " cascade down the tower wall like a shimmering waterfall." Good writing.