Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-77.247.225.201-20130808191733

for fucks sake are you even trying? Work the story a little bit. How do we know what happened in the shack? How do we know how he hit the first man 11 times in the head, how do we know what were they saying during the struggle, how do we know what went on? Jesus fucking christ at least add some person who witnessed it and ran away to tell the story or something, this is not a creepypasta, this is just a cliché story about some guy who tortured someone. Absolutely boring. 