Talk:Instinct/@comment-35711173-20180926062220

Please proofread this story very carefully. I see many spelling, grammar and punctuation errors, especially punctuation errors.

You often use the wrong words. (feint when you should use faint, for example)

You use UK spelling in places, but the story takes place in Connecticut, USA.

You get tense wrong. (begun when you should use began, for example)

I am not trying to get down on you. I am trying to help. If you don't know how to correct these, post it in the Writer's Workshop in the forum.