Talk:Smile Pretty for Me/@comment-11386456-20140417145221

I really liked this creepypasta. I know the Glasgow smile is something of a cliche in horror nowadays and yes, Jeff the Killer (who I find to be one of the lamest creepypasta monsters, at least of the popular ones) has one as well but here, it really works and makes perfect sense within the story. I found the scenes with the bullies to be tense and unnerving and it builds to a nice payoff when ghost Chelsea finally appears. By the way, it's clever how her name is Chelsea and the Glasgow smile is also called a Chelsea grin. I rather appreciate that kind of thing. Also, I like that she appears normal at first and it's only when she smiles that her scars begin to show. Instead of most other creepypastas where she would just show up like "BLAH!!! JUMP SCARE!!!". I think a lot of writers could learn from this story about building atmosphere and suspense and I for one hope to follow its example. Also, it kind of reminded me of Last House on the Left. 9/10!