Talk:The Wicker House/@comment-25558572-20140717204509

The good: The second half of the story was interesting, well-written and fairly suspensful. Throughout the story, I found the advanced vocabulary fairly comprehesible, but I do have to ask if it was really necessary to deliver the rest of the story. Vocabulary is good if used in moderation and I think you did go a little overboard here.

The bad: I feel like the entire first half of the story could be cut out, or drastically shortened. Very long stores have to be enjoyable and interesting throughout if they want to keep readers engaged, and let me say from experience that the longer a story is, the less likely people will be to read the whole thing on this site. .-. Sad, but true.

Still, it did suceed in being a creepy story. c: Although it does seem to be similar to Jack the Ripper...