Talk:Heavy Rain/@comment-31890536-20170501180002

I made an account to comment on this pasta. this is honestly one of the best storys i think ive ever read. unique, leaving just enough unanswered to keep you thinking, dreading for days to come, but with enough filled in to leave you satisfied and wanting more.

if i had to offer one critisism, the ending felt a bit rushed. the world still feels open enough that you could easily write a few more storys out of it, either pre-rain or post-rain. i'd be super interested to see more from you!