Talk:NES Godzilla Creepypasta/Epilogue/@comment-27287227-20180119213915

well, i'd have to admit that this wasn't my cup of tea (could just be because godzilla was never really my Thing, but that's prob why i actually appreciated the guy interjecting godzilla facts into the story lol). but i do appreciate the effort that was put into writing/creating the screenshots for all of this!! i can definitely see why this is considered a creepypasta classic.

i think the only critique i REALLY gotta give is... explaining why Melissa was in the game to begin with. like it totally felt like she was shoehorned in there last minute. if it was mentioned that she was also a godzilla fan and played the same game beforehand, then it would've made sense to me as to why Red was torturing her to begin with (and also probably how they met and started dating to begin with). so that's my only two cents on that.