Talk:The Magician's Game/@comment-24466828-20150917221300

This is a pretty good story. I loved the ending and it is truly a very creative story. Also, I didn't catch any grammar mistakes. The grammar was very good. Also, the word choice was pretty good too.

However, I didn't feel like this was too scary or tense. I felt pretty calm when I read this (even near the ending) and I didn't feel any sort of fear at all. Most of this is because I felt that this shoud've been longer. However, I guess that this story relies more on creativity and absurdity.

However, this is still greatly written. Overall, I'll give this an 8.5/10. Keep up the good work, Grim.