Talk:1999/@comment-31616022-20180302054129

At first I was stunned, but unfortunately, the more I dissected this, the more I saw the flaws popping. Some choices from the author made for a less-frightening story. In my opinion, it had the potential to be amazing, and don't get me wrong, it is a good pasta, but it fell short on some topics such as enclosure (the pasta could have been wrapped up long before the moment it did) and wordplay (there are phrases that really don't add up to the story, and some that give the fear away for free).

It is a 5/10 for me.