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I'm still new to this forum, so I'm learning a few things the hard way. I finally got my story posted in the writer's workshop after a few tries and I would appreciate any reviewing you all could help me with. It's still very VERY rough, but I pushed myself to at least get a draft finishing so I could start editing it. It's like 6,000 words (ugh, I know. It's supposed to be a SHORT story) I apologize in advance.

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