Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31277882-20170212011103/@comment-24101790-20170212011843

Newnny wrote: I feel like this would get deleted  o3o

You are right, there are numerous spelling ("I got exited because"), punctuation ("IM not really a cheap person", " a couple bucks wont hurt", etc.), capitalization ("of jane's love for animals and plant life."), wording ("On the right side of the cabin some vines or maybe mushroom’s were growing on it"), and story issues (the plot is very unfinished and there's not much else to go on here other than pointing out the errors that are present in about 8 sentences).