Talk:The Sweeping/@comment-24903785-20141017233619/@comment-24281984-20141021194001

Neither did I. As some pointed out, the premise seemed unoriginal, but I was bothered a lot more by the writing itself. It reads like a gigantic summary of the events instead of taking the time to intoduce characters with names and personalities. It's supposed to be a story, not a newspaper or encyclopedia article, which is what reads like. Maybe it's just me, but I don't believe this deserved POTM at all. It doesn't really have anything going for it in my mind.