Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24982950-20141019132552/@comment-25546552-20141019204609

Made their way? But I think maybe you should have just kept this in a text document and came back to it. At least put unfinished in the title if it is.

For some reason I was just waiting for the punch line, unaware that it was unfinished, I was like okay so his partner is the murderer when is it gonna say it.

Also the name Sam is rather bland, maybe like Detective Samuel or officer, something that doesn't make me think its a 10 year old playing cops and robbers.....

Unless he is!