Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28088262-20140703164027/@comment-17739056-20140704142731

WOW THIS WAS TERRIFIC! DGLHGKHKUGHFGHDKO I LOVED IT!!!!

Very, very original pasta. It was also pretty engaging and also had a great ending and a decent amount of me not knowing what was going to happen next. Actually made me shiver, due to the fact that the descriptives were excellent and, again, had some suspense as well as the perfect amount of gore, a lot but not way too much thrown in there that it isn't even scary because there is no real "scare factor" like in most pastas. It was good that you saved the yucky part for the end, in that way it gave the pasta more bulid-up. Everything flows together, and again, I really liked the storyline.

8/10 Great job!!! :D