Talk:The Courthouse Figure/@comment-24281984-20141125213159

The ending was the only part of this story I didn't really enjoy. The setup was ahndled quite well- long enough to build suspense, but not so long I lost interest. The writing, aside from some punctuation errors that I repaired, was pretty solid throughout, although a few sentences here and there should be shortened. I would have liked a bit more explanation about the creature as well, but this story is still quite good as is.