Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25170312-20180208151323/@comment-25170312-20180211182934

Just thought of something: How about if the narrator is a victim of hypnotic suggestion? Someone set him up to kill the old lady as some kind of ritual or something. It's a stretch, because typically a hypnotized person won't do things against their nature, but one of my favorite films, Cure, takes the idea of hypnosis and mixes it with black magic to get people to commit murder.

Honk if you think it's a good idea.

If anything, I'm going to extend the ending so it's not as abrupt.