Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20150404142525

I make this video game story on spinpasta but they refused why i doon't know i tried my best in my own language i do not understand but my story cannot be reposted by me on spinpasta.

I went to the market with my parents, because I wanted to buy a game of Grand theft auto, but my parents do not like this kind of gangsters' game. Then, while I walked I see a strange stand of video games, I approached it to see.

When I approach finally I see a disk of game written in the marking ink Grand theft auto V, I say to myself here is finally the opportunity for which i waited to be able to buy the game. The seller arrived at this moment, I asked him how much this game cost, he tell me that to make a friendly price, that the game would cost me only thirty dollars.

I decided to pay him and took the game without knowing the rest, when finally I went back home with the game(set,play), to be able to play it quietly, by coming down in the basement I put the game in the PlayStation. Then, that the introduction shows the characters I see something strange, because I saw as a character staining with blood with bullets holes in the body.

The game seemed started correctly, I saw nothing abnormal during the beginning of the game, but nevertheless it is after i see something abnormal. In this gamethere were many gangs, when i heard one of the characters to speak about Shootes Malik, I did not understand too well. Which is this Shootes Malik, thus spoke the character why the characters reacted strangely suddenly.

When i understood finally who was the young man who was called Shootes Malik, because every time a gang fired at the character I see a boy stained with blood with bullets holes has appear, in the course of the game i understood that he had been already alive, but that he was kill by a gang which entered its house while it played the same game. He was kill without being able to end the game, because one of the members had erased his saving.

He wanted to have his revenge, and it fell on me he approached the camera and looked at me, the fear took me suddenly in all my body. I did not really like it, this boy seemed not at all innocent of when he was alive. Then, I see a hand going out of the screen of the television, I wanted to run away, but the ghost of the young man caught me by the leg.

I defended myself against this monster, unfortunately he succeeds again has to catch me and pulled me towards the television, there i see him with his dark and empty eyes, that it was aggressive and threatening, he took out something of his pocket I see him with a rifle in the hands. Then, he pulled the trigger and fired a shot in all my body and I closed my eyes. 