User blog comment:ChristianWallis/A Review of Jozsa's Grove/@comment-24101790-20161124174818/@comment-28266772-20161125163249

Turkey comas are the best comas unlike those that arise from bullet wounds to the head, car accidents, and brain tumours.

And to be fair Jozsa's Grove is a great story. While I speed read a lot of the stories I edit and it leaves no room for comprehension I still try to read at least one story a day with care and attention. I think critical reading is an important thing to do as a writer and I learn a lot whenever I break stories like this and Ned down. Like I said to Mike; I'm happy to do this now and again because it's a valuable learning experience.