Talk:The Hand Print

Awesome story. It's cool how you restricted yourself to just a few pieces of evidence, using those to hone in on a sketch of the visitor. A very illustrative example of letting the imagination go to work. There are some tense inconsistencies, and the ending begs the question of why the narrator's friend apparently never noticed the extra handprints all over her own house. Maybe they disappeared? But the oil on skin doesn't normally just fade away.

Anyway, good work. Javer80 (talk) 06:43, October 8, 2012 (UTC)