Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10319977-20141226134502/@comment-25326117-20150107053808

Regularshowman wrote:

ColorlessAngelz wrote: I have a very short, 5 word micropasta in mind. I want the admins' approval on it before I post it to the site, though.

This is the pasta: "The world ends. We're born."

Alternatively, it could be six words. "The world ends. Mankind is born." A true shame that you had to scrap it. Perhaps you could come up with a few more micropastas like that and put up a collection. Also, "The world ends. We're born." is much better that "mankind is born" because mankind is something we're familiar with and not that afraid of. Also, it would be more confusing than creepy. The first one is disturbing because of implications, what are these creatures? Are they friendly? Are they vile? Are they cute? Are they hideous? Those questions make the first version the best version. And with something like that, I'm sure you could create more disturbing micropastas with this one word in mind: implications.

I guess it could always be re-worked.