Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33488654-20180922022507/@comment-36393004-20180922040732

NoTimeCreepy wrote: It's funny when u read other people's work and notice the problems compared to your own writing. I hate doing this but i read the whole thing and didn't feel a thing. I see where you are going with it and all. It definitely needs more to it. The infection has spread and you will become a true pasta writer because of it. Seeing you write this actually brings a smile to my face. I am looking forward to what you make of your recent revelation. As for this story, it reads like a news report of a historical event and not a story. You need to use this information to make story, not give us details about something we can read on google.