Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33488654-20180822020522/@comment-35911608-20180824185736

Don't take it personally. As NeneBrah said, it seems like you're rushing to get the story out. I know what that's like, it's exciting to have your own story on the site. But it won't stay there if it's a bad story - it will be taken down. So the best thing you can do is take your time, work with it more, read more CPs similar to your own story and pull from what they did, and apply what you learn.