Talk:The Pillowcase/@comment-26030957-20150221194907

That was fun. You paint a nice (is that really the word I want to use?) portrait of an appocalyptic world. The image of a naked albino man with a long white beard is way creepy. Maybe have this cool character more a part of the story? Maybe not, it might take away the shock value if you over play your hand. I would seriously consider taking out the part about the earth having ceased spinning. The sun would just roach the one side and the other would freeze.