Talk:Squidward's Suicide/@comment-25552648-20141018095941

This creepypasta is good for creating a bird's-eye-view for beginners. I admit, this pretty scared the soul out of me, and it gave me a slightly different viewpoint in watching Spongebob, since I loved to watch the cartoon.

However, I notice some points there.

The contents stated in the former are all part of the gore genre of entertainment, like those of anime like Elfen Lied, Corpse Party, and such. The pictures as stated may seem realistic and disgusting indeed. The reaction of disgust is there when one visualizes it. Yet the creepiness of the story only focused on the pictures of the children who met such morbid deaths by the atrocity of such a culprit. It's a cliche indeed. I think I also need to quote HonestPastaReviews' comment here which is. " ...the story tends to repeat itself ("Squidward's so sad, and look, dead kids!")..."

The word "Hyper-realistic" is but a mere exagerration. One could just say that "those eyes embody the burning anger and despair which could burn a soul." (Well, I am not sure that this description fits more perfectly.) The word gives off a feeling of curiosity, instead of creepiness.

Finally, the turn of events. It did not build up fear because of its ending. It was just a mere attempt of resolution of things that end up to be in vain. Disappointing, though. I expect this to be more creepy at the end.

Well, for the whole, this is a good creepypasta. The start already made an impact, and caught my attention. But since this is a classic, I could make a guess that this is one of the creepiest cartoon creepypastas.

OVERALL: 5/10