Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35911608-20180619020904/@comment-35911608-20180619180413

Just making some notes in case someone points these out, which I will fix for the third, and hopefully final, draft:

The whole thing about how they hired Adam - why would people be skeptical about the job if everyone was interested about the project at the same time? Inconsistent. Also the random hiring is strange (probably gonna go with it as like a "contest" of sorts, letting someone from the outside get to see the garden).

There's also some more grammar issues I skipped over, gonna take care of those too