Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-9041013-20190213101433/@comment-9041013-20190214212131

DrBobSmith wrote: BloodySpghetti wrote:

In regards to translating The GSK into this story, I'd have to double or triple the length just to make him more lifelike, in this case. sorry that it disappointed you. Thank you regardless. Bloody Spaghetti,

I'm sorry for not phrasing my feedback clearly. I didn't mean to ask for a translation of the GSK. I was trying to say that I didn't have the feeling of the horror or the craziness of the GSK. You don't need to translate that whole long list of rapes and killings. You couldn't - almost all the killings happened after the guy was sacked from the force.

Dr. Bob Hmm... I think that in order to translate his sadistic tendencies in their full "glory", I'd have to detail something that is bound to be deleted from here. I'll see what I can do, perhaps incorporate something into another story, or this... We'll see.