Talk:The Ash/@comment-25471033-20190501212131

This concept was pretty cool, I wasn't expecting a sacrifice of sorts. I wonder what the thing was. The writing was okay, despite the sudden shift of past-tense to present-tense. It starts in the the third to last paragraph, where you say that the tree fell to a pile of soot, and you catch some slight movement. Ever since, its all in present-tense. Other than that, I'd say it was a bit creepy, it was a good short-read. 7/10