Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475253-20151016111637/@comment-26475253-20151016223224

Demuerto wrote: It is a good story but there is a problem. There are literally dozens of pastas already posted as well as on youtube about this subject. Combune that with the movies The Tooth Fairy and Darkness Falls, I dont think it has a chance. Keep the premise, change your title, maybe eliminate the fact it's the tooth fairy all together and I think it may make the cut. So. The idea is to completely annihilate any aspect of the story (change the title, setting anf antagonist) and it'll make it... So, essentially, make a story of a kid going through morning life and it will succeed. *Sigh*