Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31111342-20170128030448/@comment-30771515-20170128062245

The whole movie trailer intro is a bit cliché, and the story reeked Lovecraft.... the plot and setting was too common, but other than that you're a good writer. I too am trying to create my own mythos-like world in my upcoming pastas haha and that deity you thought of is very unique. Keep applying it to different settings/situations/stories and it will succeed and prosper