User talk:ScrewYouDinkleberg/Archive 2

Your Talk Page
It was getting annoyingly long, so I archived it for you.

Mystreve (talk) 18:00, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re: Something useful
Thanks for the advice. I may make a mistake the first time I try it, but I'll give it a shot. When you get the VCROC rights, I'll definitely keep that in mind. I accidentally created that page because I was trying to not lose all the work I had done on editing it, since another user edited (a much more minor edit) and published it before I was finished. At the bottom of the page it said to copy my version and post it in the box above (this was obviously not the correct procedure), but when I did, and published it, it created that new page. Lesson learned. Anyway, thanks again.

Jay Ten (talk) 19:33, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Hey, thanks for the help on my story! It's much appreciated!--Masters 20:10, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

For the 'colorful' message
It takes a little while for the color scheme to kick in it appears. VCROC(K)s have green text I believe. (I don't know, I use a different format and don't see names in color... Or I have recently gone color blind...)

EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:14, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

Aye, "keeping up" sir.
Yeah, I noticed the thread where you applied for the rights, so congratulations if you get it. I'm glad you're saying you will help in editing the wiki also, thanks.

SoPretentious | Talk 00:11, August 20, 2014 (UTC)

The Doll That Know's All
Hey I noticed this page is incorrectly titled. "Knows" is not a possessive term or contraction. And I'm not sure if "That" is supposed to be capital or not but I don't know. Would you rename the page?

SoPretentious | Talk 08:14, August 20, 2014 (UTC)

Your Changes on my story "The"
Hi, you edited my story, "The", but some of the edits you made actually changed the point of it. Some examples:

•You forgot to close the first set of italics completely. As a result, almost the whole story is in italics...

•You changed "You paused. To show The terror? You look back, thinking you spotted a capitalization error..." to "You pause. To show the terror, you look back, thinking you’d spotted a minor capitalization error, but now “the” is lowercase." The "To show The terror" part is a direct "quote" from the story inside the story. It's meant to be something that's thought by the reader/narrator, to emphasize the capitalized "the". By changing it, you changed the context and meaning.

•In a later paragraph, the original went like this:

“''She bared her teeth as she hissed at him ... cowered in fear ... raised The dagger above her head ... let it fall, clinking against The ground ... spat in his face ... on The ... after The ... but The ... and The... The… The... The...''”

You changed it to this:

“She bared her teeth as she hissed at him, cowered in fear, raised The dagger above her head. Let it fall, clinking against The ground... Spat in his face... On The... After The... But The... And The...”

The "..." are meant to show there's a break between each line, to show the reader is skimming.

•Another line you changed: “''She glared down at him, her emerald green eyes cold and filled with fury. Her brown hair seems to float as the wind blows past her, her ribbon whipping rapidly—''” You changed it to "rapidly.", no —, but with a period. This is actually meant to be a copy of an earlier line, using a different description: “''As his words jab at her, sinking deep in her brain, something snaps. Her trembling ceases as she abruptly stands, her fiery red hair waving wildly around her as The wind–''” The first line is meant to have the — because it's an incomplete line, showing how the reader abruptly stopped reading.

•Finally, at the end, you change "the start of a new story..." to "a new story." I had three periods to show that it was open-ended, giving the reader a sense of work.

In short, I feel like some of the changes you've made actually take away from the integrity and context of the story. For now I'm leaving it untouched, but I thought I'd just leave a message so we can discuss this. Please respond soon!

ValentinesDayGreen (talk) 19:21, August 20, 2014 (UTC)

Youtube channel
Excuse me sir, would you possibly consider checking out my creepypasta channel on youtube and giving me feedback?Fearitself1821 (talk) 19:35, August 20, 2014 (UTC)Fearitself1821

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCulFPCoy3wTN58h71mXxmqA this is the link to my youtube

Deleted story
Can you please explain why you deleted Gallrund?

I'll try and make it better, I just need to know what was wrong about it.

Congratulations
Congrats Thiago, you have been promoted to VCROC(K) Lemme know if I can help in any way or if you have any questions.

EmpyrealInvective (talk) 01:46, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

VCROC
I hereby grant you VCROC rights *queue heavenly chorus*. Please use these rights for the benefit of the users, the community, and the wiki. -- Sloshedtrain   Talk   Contribs   █  01:50, August 24, 2014 (UTC)


 * I believe it's EmpyrealInvective (talk) 01:51, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

Deleted stories
How come my creepypasta "John Avenue" was deleted?

Mc creeper (talk) 17:01, August 24, 2014 (UTC) mc creeper

Something about something
about the BINARYSTEP.EXE thing that I posted on my wall saying about me going to die after 5 days just because I copied the binary from the story to the binary translator... they say I'm going to die in 5 days now thanks to them I got really really scared, please tell me they are just joking, I want to live I don't wanna die, I want to have a lot of things in life that I want to do... please tell me they are lying and they are joking because I don't want to be dead by Friday/Saturday... I hope those 5 days will pass and I will be alive because I have school starting next week and I really want to be on my school and being with my friends... I don't want to be dead in 5 days!!!!

About the BINARYSTEP.EXE post that I posted, people start saying that I'm going to die in 5 days, I'm so scared about my life! please tell me those people are joking because I don't wanna die I wanna live!

--Oded.zeituni.56 (talk) 15:17, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

About the BINARYSTEP.EXE post that I posted, people start saying that I'm going to die in 5 days, I'm so scared about my life! please tell me those people are joking because I don't wanna die I wanna live! can you please tell those people to stop scare me even more and tell me the truth!

--Oded.zeituni.56 (talk) 15:18, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

Deleted story 2
Firstly, why was my story deleted, specifically? It says it doesn't meet your quality standards, but which one?

Second, why do I have a warning for re-uploading my story when I didn't? I uploaded the story and then left the tab to that story open for so long that when I refreshed it to see if there were comments, I had been logged out. And deleted of course.

Dentacles (talk) 05:05, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

The Face Of Raveness
Would you move this page please? I'm pretty sure "Of" should be un-capitalized.

SoPretentious | Talk 09:37, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

RE:I know that this might sound stupid, but...
It looks fine. I approve the image for the template (if you're planning to add it on the template). I'm pretty sure VCROC can edit protected pages (correct me if I'm wrong). -- Sloshedtrain   Talk   Contribs   █  23:25, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Review request
/Can you review my Reality Check pasta, no one goes on writers workshop anymore ;O

NathanLeachman (talk) 03:19, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Blogicles
The new graphic is good. I don't really get why that template is admin-only, but I would assume it's to prevent confusion about rules. (For example in one message you mentioned that spam pages were a one day ban... It's three)


 * The spam page is a catch-all for troll pastas now as they are typically poorly written and painfully-unfunny.

EmpyrealInvective (talk) 03:28, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Headers
Honestly, I never took the time to create a header, but thanks for that pointer. I'll use one from now on to make things neater. GreyOwl (talk) 03:53, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Hell's Sinking Formatting
Hi, I noticed you broke all of my paragraphs into smaller paragraphs in my new story, Hell's Sinking (http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Hell%27s_Sinking). May I ask what was wrong with it as it was?

AlVic (talk) 20:58, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Acknowledgment
Thanks for telling me about the  unfinished pasta rule, won't happen again :)

Shadow Of Darkness (talk) 00:27, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

ok, I wont use admin/vcroc templates
I won't break the rules again. I didn't know what I was doing.

SoPretentious---Talk- 01:22, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

RE:Re:Paragraphs
I take it you will give me a chance to fix the formatting, instead of deleted it if you find too many errors?

AlVic (talk) 06:42, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

RE:
Okay? I'll do as you wish. Don't really know what you want me to do this but okay. -- Sloshedtrain   Talk   Contribs   █  23:51, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Done
Done. Side note: I'm assume you have your VCROC abilities and everything is back in order? EmpyrealInvective (talk) 23:24, September 9, 2014 (UTC)


 * I don't see your name on the roll back list... EmpyrealInvective (talk) 23:30, September 9, 2014 (UTC)

The Light's Will Go Out
The title of this page needs to be corrected. "lights" is the correct punctuation. Would you move this one? The Light's Will Go Out



SoPretentious---Talk- 02:47, September 10, 2014 (UTC)


 * Ninja'd! EmpyrealInvective (talk) 02:50, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re
Undelete "stuff"? You need to be more specific.

Mystreve (talk) 17:55, September 10, 2014 (UTC)


 * VCROCs don't have the ability to undelete. That's user-specific to admins. Let me know what you want done and I'll get on it.
 * Mystreve (talk) 21:17, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Deleted story 3
Hello I wanted to know why my story was deleted I'm new to making storys and I wanted to know why my story was deleted so I don't make the same mistake a second time.

Dead man walking 01:15, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

story
Your story "Hallucinations of an Artist" was blanked, but I undid it. Just thought I'd let you know so you can handle it, unless another admin sees it first.

Jay Ten (talk) 03:24, September 13, 2014 (UTC)


 * Ninja'd! EmpyrealInvective (talk) 04:25, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Deleted story 4
Hey! I wanted to ask why you deleted my story. I checked the guidelines and I think I match all of them. So, if you could tell me why, I'd be happy to fix it. Classic Raven Horror777 (talk) 15:22, September 13, 2014 (UTC)


 * If you don't have a copy for reference: http://pastebin.com/b576WCf5 EmpyrealInvective (talk) 15:30, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

lol
U r a fast one m8. I was going to put it in market for review within 10 second  of the pages replicas apparently but it was already deleted! lol Pootis Man (talk) 22:10, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

thanks
Thank you for the affirmation, but I'm gonna' hold off for now. I might do it in the future though. Thanks again, I appreciate it.

Jay Ten (talk) 01:18, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

Deleted story 5
Hey admin you deleted my story for not meeting the quality standards 10 seconds after I posted it... Could you tell me what was wrong, I'm kinda new here and if I formatted something wrong I apologize, But I need to post this within 2 hours to enter it in the Damn fine Pasta contest.

I thought..?
That they got rid of the article listing?

Nommehzombies 15:55, September 14, 2014 (UTC)


 * Oh, I was just confused because when I tried to remove the old template it got rollbacked? I mean, are they leaving those alone or something? Nommehzombies 18:02, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re: 6 Notes
Thanks for the input. I'll definitely work on it. One problem though: you deleted my only copy. In the future, I'll start from a Word Document or something. So, if you could, could you please give me a copy? I will be make sure to do some edits and if you want, let you know when I'm finished. Thanks again, Raven Horror

Re:
The altlang category looks good. I google translated a number of them (except the spanish which I did on my own.) so if you feel like helping out with the Portuguese pages, Thiago, that would be great. (I inferred a little when translating those ones and some of the sayings may have been lost in translation. Keep up the good work. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 04:25, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Gotcha
More than understand, take your time. RL things take precedence. Have a good one. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:47, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

My Absences
I'm sorry if I haven't been on skype for the past few days, my boyfriend's family is away and I'm helping him out with chores. I'll try to be on tomorrow, and if not, I'll be back by Thursday. Thanks for your patience, and I hope you're doing well. c: A picture is worth a thousand words, but I&#39;d rather write a thousand-word story. (talk) 01:34, September 17, 2014 (UTC)