Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24946232-20140601131432/@comment-24821182-20140601134058

I think all the story needs now is for you to proofread it, and then it'll be ready to post.

In 11/06/13, you misspelled "I'd" as "id".

In 14/06/13, it should read "Ben and I", like I said on the last thread. It should also be "affected" and not "effected".

In 21/06/13, you capitalize the word "town" when it's uncalled for.

In 23/07/13, you add a hyphen in "real-estate", which is perfectly acceptable, but earlier on in the story you wrote "real estate" without a hyphen.

In 04/08/14, you forget to capitalize the b in "Bible".

These are a few errors I spotted while skimming it through.

The story itself is good, and you could definitely post it.