Talk:White with Red/@comment-5278102-20140820072350

This is actually a bit overrated I feel. The characters in the story behave very out of the ordinary, they have little justification for their behavior. The woman acts like these customers were nothing special and the whole situation is just some silly situation she can't be bothered with. There's literally a MONSTER in her workplace, wtf? The man also acts abnormally, who gives that much of a care what is in the room? He just staying at the hotel to stay at a hotel? He didn't have anything to do like, I don't know, vacation?

The concept was good, and the ending was something I really appreciated, but the style of writing relies far too heavily on a narrator applying good tones to it. 7/10