Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25288358-20150118104155

So I have wrote a creepypasta!

Did a few edits before it got posted.

I never thought this was going to happen to me...You see he calls it the 'Fate Game'.It's where 5 girls that are teens are chosen to make a wish with it. It could be anything that they could wish for...But in return...They have to become 'Magical Girls' and fight off these Evil Witches...These witches hide behind barriers away from the cruel world we live in and create their own Nightmares.

If a person got behind these barriers they would have no chance to survive or to get out, however a Magical Girl can defeat the witch and escape with its 'Grief Seed'.The Grief Seed can be used to purify her Soul Gem which she uses to get her Magical Powers.But what happens if you leave it for to long without purifying it? Well... He controls the game so you only have a certain amount of time...To play it...It all started when he came to us in our dreams and no he is not a human, more like a white,albino creature with arms coming out of his cat ears. These arms have gold rings around them and his tail looks like a foxes tail and his eyes... They were soul deceiving...Glowing a bright red...He chose me and 4 other girls that I didn't know and that I had no clue what they were going to do to me or react or what...

He then said 'You 5 can make a wish with me and play my game. However you will all have to become Magical Girls in return.' However there were no rules on what wish you could make...I wanted to say something but I couldn't say anything... I knew something was fishy about this...But it was like he knew that I knew something was wrong...The first girl made her wish then the next girl and then it was finally my turn. I said with a deep breath

'I wish that I could meet my dead Father again'.

Then I felt pain in my stomach as if he was pulling something out of my body but when I looked down again I saw that my whole body was actually intact and no damage had been done. But instead in my hands was a Soul Gem as he described it... It was glowing a bright Purple and had star symbols on it.

He said 'Now you will have to work together, you now get to know each other to solve the puzzles I am going to put in your path'.We all transformed and looked at each other...

'Umm...I'm Olivia.' I trembled (Sorry I'm quite shy...).

'Nice to meet you Olivia! I'm Cadence I feel so good after making that wish!'

'Hello Olivia I'm Beth. Wait are you a bit shy Olivia?'

'Yeah I'm quite shy... I mumbled

'Hmph well I'm Plutonia and I'm stuck with you losers...'

'Hey Plutonia you picking a fight!?'

'Who are you!?' Plutonia snarled harshly...'

'I'm Kayaka'.

Things started getting weird at that point...We were warped away from the creature into a awfully dim lit room... There were minions of Witches in the hallway just outside the room...The other girls seemed a bit cautious except Plutonia.She ran out into the hallway and started attacking the mutant creatures but she was badly injured as they ran off...

'Oh god... Is she ok!?' Cadence gasped.

I spoke out of the blue...' She's fine... But her Gem is turning from a bright Red to Black...'

Plutonia stood up looking at me. She seemed to hate all of us. But all of a sudden her Gem was completely Black... Beth tried to grab her but she had vanished in to thin air.

'What just happened!?' Kayaka was to shook up to speak afterwards...

'How did she...' 'Oh my god..' Beth looked like she wanted to get out of here...

I just froze there thinking... 'why did this happen?... We did nothing to her...

Well...Well...That's one down 4 to go...She looked too eager...' The creature giggled.

'What the Heck!? What Did You do to Her!?' Cadence screamed.

'She met with her fate...You know its called the FATE Game?' the creature smirked...

It teleported us to the next room this time we had to go through a maze filled with thorns and spikes... It didn't look nice but how else were we going to escape?It appeared again and said

'Last person to get to the centre loses...You have 15 minutes...Good luck...Hehe...'

We were all separated so that we could not cheat. I heard the other girls running for their lives from something however it turned out that I had the shortest route...Lucky me...I hurried past all the spikes and thorns I could see sometimes even banging my head into the thorns it felt like Hell...

I was the first to reach the centre but Cadence ended up being last...Her Gem was the same as Plutonia's...

She had also vanished...' 3 to go now...You girls are very lucky aren't you? To make it this far I presume...' the creature smirked.

'Stop you evil thing! Your just causing us pain! Do you enjoy watching people suffer!?' Kayaka screamed.

'Guess you'll have to go as well...Your not following the rules Kayaka...Your gem is black now as well...'

'Wait what...?......no...no...nonoNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'

Kayaka had vanished...

'KAYAKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!' Beth cried.

'2 to go...You'll have to battle each other...' the creature explained with a mechanical grin on his face.

The arena was dark and looked abandoned. Rust had succumbed the dead walls while ivy had consumed the crumbling floor.

'Olivia do me a favour... Kill me...' Beth growled.

'I don't want to lose you as well... please Beth don't make me do this!!!'

'Just do it please!!' she begged as if she was going insane.The creature stole my sword off me and put it behind Beth's back.

'Goodbye Beth...' It grinned.

'No please... Don't...Beth...Don't kill her...Please...' I shivered.

I was the only one left... 'You won...Very impressive Olivia...' It smirked...

'What happens now then?' I questioned...

'Its time for you to wake up...this is only the beginning for you...' It laughed.

'This is all a dream then?' I laughed.

'Its only the first part you haven't really made your wish...' It smirked...

I woke up from the nightmare only to find the creature tapping on my window with its soul deciving eyes...

The last thing I ever heard it said was...

'You've won the FATE GAME... Lets make a contract...'

While it said that I saw the souls of the 4 girls with a blank space in the middle,they were all crying and covering their eyes...

AM I NEXT?  