Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30026473-20180708212945/@comment-33470154-20180708232434

DrBobSmith - here is a link: https://www.wattpad.com/598906656-twisted-fantasy-the-calm-before-the-storm

Madsummer - first off, who refers to their parents by their first name, especially at 17? I’d change that for authenticity. I see multiple punctuation errors, mainly commas, so you might want to use Grammarly to fox that. A few examples: “Reena giggled and smirked evilly(.)

‘Don’t worry Nadia, I actually thought of something a lot more fun to do today!’” “Mom, Dad Nadia and I are going to the forest to see if we can get some good pictures...” “Nadia look! Aww, they’re so cute!” ...and so on. As for the story, it seems fine for now but is currently unfinished. Also, it has tags for JTK, Slenderman, and Ticci Toby, so the finished story would violate this Wiki’s spinoff rules if you include them and would get deleted if you try to post it here.