Talk:Pale Walkers/@comment-25148755-20140719012844

Very nice. I like the effort ot maintain the cadence throughout, minus the appropriate break in the second to last stanza. Also like the way you tied it to slender and rake (although I'm not sure 'caretaker' really fits.)  Really my only complaint is the double use of 'denizen' in the fifth stanza although I think this was done intentionally. 9/10