Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36013915-20180629060821/@comment-36013915-20180629091618

Thanks for the advice. I cannot really ask my teachers at the moment 'cause it is summer where I am. Thanks anyways, this project might span several days though. I just wanna keep my story short cause I am not thay good at making very long stories yet. Also the suggestion of the shirt being bagged up and it not being discovered later on is great. I think the reason why my story is more of concept is cause I thought of it before I went to bed. I do hope my story will be more fleshed out in the future. I do have an idea that my character is writing this like a blog. Like after the final paragraph of the story there will be a continiation of my character discovering the shirt again. I don't really want it to be a spirit though. I want my character to still be unsure if the shirt caused it all, and they wear it again. I still want my story to be grounded in reality, but it still having more of a psychological approach to it with a hint of the shirt kind of being a work of some sort of curse or spirit. Also I don't really how I can write in the neighbor character though. I was thinking of him being a mysterious character, so I can focus on my main character