Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26525489-20160720175420/@comment-27008899-20160720182116

I really like the concept and structure. Great choice of wording and minor gramatical errors (mostly spelling) carry this well. I take issue with the story itself. While it does draw you in, the ending is a bit of a let down. There is little to no precurser to why he is so drawn to the sound. I am also not a fan of the cliche ending of newspapers and reports. Your writing ability has great potential and I think placing the limit, as you said, really limited where you could have taken this.