Talk:Something Is Wrong/@comment-26030957-20150312043608

I liked this nasty, dark little piece. Great details and writing. I did feel that the narrator's moment of clarity at the ending when he realizes what has happened in the house, that paragraph, "Aunt Carissa, the perfectionis she was....." was a little too neat and easy. Maybe you should show a bit more here instead of just telling us. It just wrapped it up a little too neatly.

Good pasta: short, sweet and fun as hell.