Talk:The Stone in the Yard/@comment-5733573-20180428003602

The ending of the story really made the whole thing for me. Throughout, I was wondering, "Where is this going?" There was just enough humor and humanity to keep me interested. The final line is horrifying in a wonderful way.

One bit of criticism: there are some recurrent punctuation errors. Many of your sentences need commas. I strongly suggest proofreading this work and adding them where they are missing.

Other than that, this was a fun read!