Talk:After Death

&nbsp - This was my first creepypasta and my first attempt at writing any horror. Hope you folks like it. Also, if you think this could be improved somehow, please let me know, preferrably via e-mail at [mailto:tomitkahkonen@gmail.com tomitkahkonen@gmail.com]. Also, feel free to write up a sequel if you feel like it. i've been thinking of writing more of the portal, but thus far have not had any ideas that would warrant a proper sequel without removing originality from this one.WHAMtheMAN 12:48, October 18, 2011 (UTC)