Talk:Test Chamber 319/@comment-11791428-20140425030009

Seemed like it had some potential but it fell rather short. First of all, as others have said, how did Anouke manage to kill arm guards on her own with no weapons of her own? Also the way the story is paced out lacks the proper build up. We never know anything about what the tests were. Also Aurore said early on that she would not risk using her real name yet later on she starts using not only her name, but the other girl's as well. In general though, and there are several other things as well that don't make this seem very believable.

Unless by any chance this was an actual diary that was recovered, which is hard to believe based on the style of writing among other things, then I would say this was a rather underwhelming effort although not bad. 6/10