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I was actually thinking of maybe making the girl very much underaged (like, 12 or 13) but I was hesitant to put that in. That, as well as adding in some more disturbing touches such the cabin idea might give the story more of a punch. Just have to make a note to the comfort zone that says 'fuck you'.

Thank you for your feedback and I'll take a stab at the stories you mentioned!