Talk:Experiment 84-B/@comment-25600224-20151030151304

It was a really interesting take on the Slenderman story, and I really enjoyed the concept for it. But, it could have been written in a much better way. The experimentaion scene needs to be longer. There should also be more about how/why he's so lonely. I felt like it was all just thrown at me really fast.

5/10 for this pasta