Talk:A Tape from Treasure Island/@comment-24762095-20131214052028/@comment-24234625-20140216102623

No offense to the writer but this isnt better than the classics those perfectley grow in suspension and fear throughout the story. This story just brought the antagonists to abruptly to a point it felt rushed. How old are you? This isn't an insult to the story but back when I was 10-11 I enjoyed movies/stories just because the amount of disgusting descriptions they have instead of how the story rolls. I give this Pasta a 4.5/10 sorry man.

Too similar to Abandoned By Disney Series and as before to abrupt. Suggestion: think of another area just abandoned such as