Talk:Daddy's Little Princess/@comment-26112985-20160218201757

Really enjoyed this one Humboldt. As usual, the writing was nothing short of phenomenal, and I absolutely loved the extremeties of the horrors you were able to depict here. The creativity was also quite evident, particularly with the transition moments when you switched from Frank to Laura's perspective. I don't think I've ever seen song lyrics being used as a means of transition in creepypasta before. You also managed to introduce me to a very good song by "The Cure."

I found it very easy to sympathize with Frank and Laura alike, especially Laura (I've always been somewhat of a social outcast). I actually really wanted to see Frank get his daughter back and have his happy ending, despite the fact that I knew it wasn't gonna happen and his methods were very questionable. This reminds me a lot of what Rob Zombie did to his Firefly Family in the ending to his film, "The Devil's Rejects," which I'm going to assume you've seen.

I'm pretty short on legitimate criticisms here. The only one I can think of was Laura's willingness to take drugs from and have sex with a known filmmaker of "Blood and sex." But seriously, great job all around.