Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28546665-20160525041810/@comment-28365084-20160528001012

NSirmountable wrote: When I first worte this the ending I put didn't show up.

I put it at the end.

Basically, what ChristianWallis said. Needs formatting and speeling mistakes (see what I did there,) and has tons of pointless gore. The plot twist is awesome though.