Talk:Wall/@comment-4470175-20160702004837

The creepypasta is very cleverly written, and I really enjoyed the concept of it. You used all the correct words at exactly the right moment. It feels like it could lead into a truly brilliant and creepy story. The problem is, for me anyway, that there just isn't enough to form anything. While some may find beauty in its short length, I think that if you add more to it, the reader will get a more complete feel of what the creepypasta is triyng to say.

It feels like one very short passage from a phenomenal book. Please write more, what you've written so far is great.

7/10