Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27033114-20161024202310/@comment-24101790-20161024211812

Thedarkwtf wrote: thank you for your rewiev, it is my first time trying to write, i will try to improve my grammar too. I really appreciate it. thank you good sir/madam

No problem, I'll strongly suggest following my last piece of advice ("I would suggest using the workshop for your next story since if it has these many issues it will be deleted again.") if you're looking to improve.