Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30861466-20180505175756/@comment-7064562-20180509175830

ChristianWallis wrote: This is a shit show of a thread. Saying that can we refrain from comments like the top one. Loolveus has every right to have his story critiqued without being overtly insulted. And considering how upset some people get when their stories are critiqued by others I don't think anyone here has the right to be so rude.

Do not comment on a story if you aren't willing to offer the author ways of improving it.

As for the story itself, Loolveus I respect your commitment to revising the story and working hard to improve it. But you should  bear in mind that this is a learning curve, so don't hold your breath hoping this story will one day be added to the wikia. I think you should take what you've learned to so far and move onto something new. It takes time and persistence, but it's worth it. Every story is a new learning experience and you should embrace the chance to start anew. I look forward to seeing more of what you write, and you should always feel free to message me if you want feedback. I'm not gentle, but I do put a lot of work into my feedback. I'm pretty sure everyone here has offered ways of improving it. As for a being rude, I find it necessary in most cases, however, this thread seems rather tame compared to some others(mainly when Bloody is involved ;P)

It's only natural people would start to get ancy if an author keeps reposting stories with the same errors over and over again, as the critics'ers who tried to help on story one, are likely to get annoyed they are being ignored when they were trying to help.

I've read a couple of the stories so far. It's the same errors. I'll give him credit though for at least keeping the writing going, as most people bitch and post 10 blogs on "why their pasta isn't the next jtk"