Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25217349-20140723205724/@comment-25217349-20140723213952

Fixed the text to be more easily read, thanks.

I'm not sure what you mean about the paragraphs, specifics would help. Specifics about spelling errors would help too. I use a spellchecker and I've read over it multiple times and haven't seen anything misspelled.

Your fourth critique makes me think you actually didn't read the piece, because there's nothing in the story that deals with friendship vengeance.

Thanks anyway.