Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26220663-20151018045621

This is the story of a girl named Sandra, she's going to the fair with her friends Mary and Clarah, but the two girls brought their money to buy food, when Sandra brought her own lunch. So, when her friends left to buy their lunch, sandra sat on a bench and eat her food, when a strange man approaching her in his black coat and hat and he was an african American man.

"Hi" said the man to Sandra he continue "May i sat there with you"

"Of course!" said Sandra who accepted that the stranger sat with her.

Her parents told her to never talk to strangers, but this man was nice that she can't refuse to talk to him, she wasn't scare by this man who seem weird at the same time, but she was thinking why he's wearing a black coat in summer time.

"Why are you wearing that coat?" demand sandra to the man.

"Well, i won't answer you for now" he said to the girl who seem a little bit confuse.

The man looked at Sandra like he wanted to say something else, but nothing  came out from his mouth, they still sit on the bench looked at people passed by. Then the man got tired of stay sat all day, and finally told the young girl.

"Do you want to walk with me?" he said to the girl.

"Sure!!!" said Sandra, and they go walked togheter.

So, they left the bench, and they walked in rhe park without noticed the people around them, they continue without talking to anyone in the amusement park, sandra was not know that her friends was probably at the bench and might be seen that she's gone.

"Where we going" said sandra to the man.

"You will see real soon!" said the man.

Sandra wonder why he said that, because she was sure that she ain't going anywhere, but see all the rides around her with people waiting for their ride tour. She was really far from the bench where she was, and wanted to leave to see if her friends were looking for her.

"I shall go to the bench" said sandra about to leave.

"You ain,t goig nowhere!" said the ma grabbing her arm.

"What!!! Don't touch me !!!" said sandra now scared.

"You go with me" said the man and he make a evil laughter, still pulled the girl arms.

"Someone help!!!" scream Sandra, but no one can hear her scream.

They arrived to a corner, it was very dark with a little bit of loght from the sun, the man pushed Sandra on the wall, when she turn around the man approaching her.

"What are you doing? Stay away from me!!!" said Sandra who doesn't know what to do.

"Well i show you what am i doing" said the man, he was taking off his coat, but keep his hat on.

"Oh my god!!!" said Sandra, who see the man was with a black pants and t-shirt had four arms, and it was he last word.

Sandra went missing for three weeks now, her frieds were thinking rhat she had returning, so they left the fair, but when the police interogated the employes from the fair, someone told them that they see a man wearing all black clothes walking with a girl.

Then, the police continue to investigated and go see on a corner who seem very dark, but with a little bit of light, they walked in and they found Sandra body with strangulation mark on her neck, for the man who killed her it was no traces. 