Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-39126362-20190414202138/@comment-39126362-20190416204830

Alright, second, ideally-thematically-clearer draft is up. I'm considering making it longer to build up suspense, the plot, and the various relationships a bit more, but I hope this made the themes more clear and gave a better picture of what I was going for (of course, that's a bit fuzzy for me now, haha).