Talk:I Am Sorry Paul!/@comment-5705600-20140116153500

That really was a well done story. 9/10. I like how the lapses in English in certain areas are done in such a way that it almost seems too real that this was written by a person more foreign to English. It, for me, is what really helps drive the believability of the story, along with the lack of supernatural occurrences. Overall, very well done and believability is high.