Talk:Something Is Wrong/@comment-27209236-20151117115955

I like this pasta, it has all the elements needed to be a great pasta, is coherent and has a nice theme, drawing away form overused horror clichés, good job on that. My only gripe would be the number of paragraphs and new lines used, it makes the pasta look a little piecey, but that's just my view of it. Nicely done! 9/10