Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44987001-20200205043454/@comment-36627132-20200205044702

NedWolfkin wrote: First of all, you should only post stories on the Writer's Workshop instead of asking questions on how to improve.

Second, you have been given advice time and time again, and I'm going to tl;dr what we have been saying. Improve your spelling, try to be original, try to make your stories actually scary, follow the site's quality standards. I'm also going to advise you to take more time on your stories.

I do have to say though that your The magician is an improvement over your other works so far, so you are definitely doing better. Keep at it.