Talk:Jeff the Killer/@comment-24039141-20140302180126/@comment-24626788-20140303183748

I should like to preface this comment by saying that I am not a creepypasta alum, and until today had never heard of this site, and still don't one hundred percent know what it's about. I entirely came across this site by chance, and this happened to be one of the first couple of stories I read.

This story is not well-written at all. The idea is interesting, but the execution is sloppy. The tenses used are inconsistent, the holes in the plot are pretty glaring, and as a whole it's extremely unbelievable. Not to mention that it is unnecessarily long. I will concede that a great deal of fiction requires at least a modicum of suspension of disbelief, but this story is beyond the pale. If a piece of work is good, you shouldn't have to "imagine" that laws of chemistry are vastly different than in the real world that it is set. Admittedly, this isn't a published novel or someone making money of their writing (or at least, that is not how I understand Creepypasta to work in my limited interaction). Mistakes are OK, and it doesn't have to be perfect. But in the same respect, getting angry because people aren't as impressed with it as you are is a tad absurd. Constructive criticism is far more productive than blind praise.