Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24841732-20141010150639/@comment-25439157-20141010161251

I like the ending. That was a good ending.

The story is well written, and I don't have much to say about it (but for the bit with the mutilated people on the screen. That bit put me off. Maybe you could just have their pictures? You pushed it a tad too far.) But mostly I like the fact that it's [i]short[/i] and gets to the point quickly.