Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32686563-20190625122426/@comment-32686563-20190625222454

Yes. I was unaware of the Writer's Workshop when I posted to the main site, I seemed to have skimmed over that when I looked through the rules and guidelines and such. But a bit later, I had found this and thought I should probably post it here to get feedback. I figured it didn't matter too much, and that if my story was for some reason not up to standards then it would be deleted off the main site anyway. I assume that might happen soon. Sorry about that mistake on my part.

Yes, grammar; another good reason this would be the best place to post this story. I have found some admittedly pretty obvious of my grammar mistakes and, I believe, fixed them. I was unsure about some other things, but changed them a bit anyway. I wouldn't be surprised if there are some things left, but I believe the majority of them, and the most noticeable of them, have been edited out.