Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37336038-20181030152145/@comment-35711173-20181030191810

Normally, one posts the story in the forum, not a link.

This mentions creepypasta, jeff the killer and the joker. Too much, I think. Pushing spinoff/ fanfic.

I believe you need to work on your paragraphs. Some were rather large.

Clean up your draft and post it here. Get the admins to decide if the concept is acceptable.