Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25682745-20150218132812/@comment-26027160-20150218181949

Well, I liked it. It is gross and scary. Congratulations.

I especially enjoyed the word play. But I don't really get the "they" on line 20. Who? The 2nd identities? "Demons"? Psychopats? Jekyll and Hyde??? >)

If you would have specified, this "they" wouldn't just be an empty word, but actually refer to something scary. This would make your creepypasta even more gross.

Another thing is the formatting. I'm not sure about it (more experienced editors, please comment), but I think the last paragraph shouldn't have a larger font.