Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35826115-20190629165428/@comment-35711173-20190629211235

Vvmaxplays,

You have so many fundamental English errors with that paragraph you just posted that it's extremely difficult to figure out what you're trying to say. If we don't know what it is, we give up.

If your story isn't "clean" with correct paragraphs and sentences, it will be deleted. That is a hard and fast rule of this site.

Remove the unnecessary period after "Lynn Carter." Run it through scribens again. It will indicate that almost the entire paragraph is one run-on sentence. Grammarly will point out a couple of very basic errors as well.

Please remember that passing a very basic computer spelling and grammar check program like Grammarly doesn't mean the story is clean. Read it out loud to yourself several times. If you stumble over any section, so will a reader.