Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24059312-20140514015018/@comment-24059312-20140514124817

I guess you're right on the newspaper article. I was thinking that but I didn't really want to change it until I got help with it. I was also thinking instead of news report I could do a police record. Unless you don't suggest that.

I guess you got a point there. I only did that because there's a few creepypastas out there that do that. But if you suggest I change it up I will. I actually never thought about him calling the police...I really need to start keeping an open mind to things. Maybe he could call the police, and as he waits for them to come the operator asks him exactly what happened. Then he'd tell her. Or does that just seem stupid as will? Of course I'll remove the detail of what they look like.

Also, so how would I make Mike seem like a real person? Should I make him kill her a different way, like she 'fell' off a cliff or down a steep hill? Maybe change the thing about him wanting to be famous?The whole thing behind Stitches is that she hates liars. And something has to happen to her in the past with liars. She also has to somehow have a reason to have stitches on her body.