Talk:Amazing World of Gumball - The Grieving/@comment-25043790-20140609220231

5/10. It started really spooky. The background information and part about staying up watching Adult Swim was believable but The odd title and opening were really unnecessary and seemed to try to rush the fear. Without the weird beginning, the early sad scenes would've been subtle enough. From then on, the build up wasn't bad. The Gore was decently descriptive and everyone seemed to be in character. After the vomitting, everything went downhill. Calling the brother and the TV being unresponsive really tried to hard, as if you were asking the readers, "GAIS, AM I SCARY, YET?! GAIS?" from then on, the story got worse and worse, feeling like the screenplay of a terrible horror movie. Also, the episode has no timeline. Nicole and Richard go to the school during the day, Gumball is there at night and they're somehow there at the same time (also, the whole Gumball part is unnecessary and doesn't connect to the rest of the story). Overrall, It started with potential to be scary but in the end, unless you're easily frightened, highly dissapoints.