Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32157706-20180510160443/@comment-33937557-20180510234224

To story I say this: why would I even try it in the first place?

Also, the fact this story is like an instruction manual, or what NOT to do at a stoplight, ruins it for me. I wasn't spooked, and nothing much really happened. There is some potential in here: just develop it more and please, PLEASE change the last line when you do!