Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33756381-20181118212057/@comment-9041013-20181118233646

Okay so, first you need to fix your English, do as Dr. Bob suggested.

Second, the idea is pretty good, you have the general archtype of a post apocalyptic scenario following a nuclear fallout. You can do a lot with it. Here's the kicker, during the first, I don't know, century or so? The radiation will cause radiation sickness and carcinogenic mutations. It won't create monsters it'll make bodies fall apart (Look here, for a poor Japanese men who had to endure 80+ days of Lethal radiation sickness - not pleasant to look at, at all) or will give them various defects, and mostly cancers.

Now if you go about the route of a nuclear war on a global scale, along with hints of biological and chemical war you could say that after centuries or millennia, evolution was influenced by these unnatural factor that lead to the emergence of "monster" species.

From there the story is limitless, obviously you'd have to give a catalyst for why suddenly these beasts attack the Bunker. Something like climate changing or a migration of another monster species... Something along those lines.

You can also add some tense political climate inside the bunker to tie into the story, but again, there has to be a reason, possibly something with the creatures outside going wrong or whatever causing unrest in the bunker.

Anyway, this needs a bunch of work, but you can make it into something great.