Talk:You Will Be Mine/@comment-25975226-20150120072704

I finally got around to reading your last story. I have to be honest, I left it for last because the length kind of put me off haha. But as soon as I began to read I was hooked, as I am with your other stories :) I could tell reading it that it was your first pasta, am I right? There are a few grammatical errors in it e.g. you wrote 2 a.m. instead of 2 p.m. but nothing that couldn't be overlooked. A really good premise and creepy to think of what the thing could be. I'm normally not a fan of the stories where the protagonist dies, but you handled it well. I'd give you a 7/10 for this story, and only because I don't like grammar errors (especially when I make them!) but I really enjoyed reading this.