Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36065010-20190105074419/@comment-36065010-20190105204259

Yes I know, and as said before in my post and to other comments the problem comes from the fact that translating from italian to English is more difficult than writing in English or translating from it. However you are right, the plot twist is somehow a cliché. But to be honest, I think this was the only end I could gave to the story since the entity followed the guys from far away for all the time without them realizing. Thank you for the feedback, I'll try to correct the grammar of this pasta as soon as possible; also probably next time I am going to write in English only to avoid any mistake(or the majority of them).