Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24723624-20140409081135/@comment-24723624-20140410070630

LOLSKELETONS wrote: I lightly edited this to correct some of the more noticeable grammatical errors and make the tense more consistent (I noticed it kept switching from past- to present-tense).

Other than that, this looks fine. Go ahead and post it. Just make sure to credit the original author. Thanks so much for the help and giving me permission to post this! You're awesome!!! ^__^