Talk:Storage Unit: 438/@comment-31077845-20170213022834

Well that was awful. The writing itself wasn't very good, then there was some random semi creepy stuff that happened most of which were stupid cliches. It was mostly pointless and made no sense and really should've been deleted in my opinion.

I'd make my criticisms a little more detailed, but just by writing this tiny comment I feel like I've probably spent about as much time as the author did coming up with this entire "story" (quotations included as, again, this is less a story and more a collection of lazily thrown together cliches).