Talk:The Barrier/@comment-25306758-20140929044317

This was actually decent, but the end makes no sense. More things need to be explained. How and why is the protagonist stuck in a time loop? Who left him the messages? How did they leave them? This story ties up literally no loose ends, and just raises all kinds of questions attempting to answer none of them coherently. 5/10 For lack of exposition. That's being generous, because it has room to be pretty great if its rewritten and given a better ending.