Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26512885-20150702125659/@comment-26460235-20150702143223

Hey! So I like the reports so far, they sound professional. Although I think they could be elaborated on. I would do research into how they're setup and such to give the reports even more realism, but that's me. Is it all going to be reports or will there be more to the story? Oh yeah it should also be "piercing the lungs" instead of "piecing". But good work so far.