Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20190305214046/@comment-9041013-20190309181214

Oh look two madmen kidnapped a bunch of people to make a movie/TV show... because that's feasible. It's not a very good concept in terms of horror value. It's just not scary as it seems very unlikely, unless someone's planning to kill those people when they've served their purpose or worse. As it is, this concept isn't exactly scary or thrilling, or anything.

You should write down the whole thing first, hopefully with more character work and a hecka lot more motivations to make this whole thing work.

This whole interchangability of Arthur and Sebastian is really confusing too, it's like they're the same person and you just gave that person by an accident two names.

All it all, it needs to be completed and given more meat.