Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20150217025844/@comment-4893169-20150222235447

Okay. I'll probably have to go through one more rewrite of this before it makes reasonable enough sense.

Would it be much better if the whole flashback thing with Russel's parents was taken out and replaced a brief history of this diapidated old treehouse and why the kids decided to hold a sleepover party there in the first place?