Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25169949-20140723235610/@comment-25148755-20140724003801

I personally agree with you that an appeal could be in order. I actually liked this a lot. The puns were a little much at times but I think that was the intent.

There's some spelling errors throughout (nothing a good proofread wouldn't catch) and a little bit of awkward phrasing/run on sentences especially near the beginning. Reading it to yourself aloud will fix most of this.

I'm curious if the mod gave you any reasons for the deletion. My only thought other than the grammar/punctuation (which again really wasn't that bad) was if they thought it was too derivative of Tales from the Crypt. In my opinion it isn't but if that's the case I'd definitely post it to spinpasta.