Talk:If That Dress Could Talk/@comment-24281984-20141119190555

There were quite a few errors before I fixed this, but it was written in an interesting way. Still, after reading it over a few times I'm not quite sure just what happened to the woman in the red dress- she just seemed to disappear. Did the men in the bar harm her? Was she a ghost the entire time? I feel like this is a bit rushed and needs to have a bit more of an explanation of what was going on. It was entertaining to read but too vague to be really frightening.