Talk:7 Gates of Hell/@comment-28776256-20160617211138

6.5/10

I know it's a long while since this has been posted but I still feel like leaving a few arguments here.

There wasn't a proper structuring of the paragraphs and the story escalated very quickly from the beginning, how did he come aware of the ritual and what has the spirit of halloween exactly got to do with the tortures of Hell?

The detail of the torture is very minimalistic, probably good not to scar someone's mind with gruesome images but creepypastas are the writings meant to invoke those images and fear.

I see this is meant to be a short story for quick frights but I think if it was longer and more time was given to it (and suicide bombers weren't mentioned, it kinda made me chuckle in a maniacal way) it could have been an amazing story, right now it seems like a missed oppurtunity.