Talk:The House That Death Forgot/@comment-25064879-20140615052734

Well written for the most part, and the idea was great, but the ending doesn't fit. I understand the lead was panicked, but it just doesn't seem to fit in with what I already knew of her character for her to just run out into a knife.

So, because the ending lacked, 7.5/10. Decent, but the ending doesn't sell, and that's probably the most important part of a story.