User blog comment:ShawnCognitionCP/In Torment is Remasterd/E-Book Announcement/@comment-26030957-20160516023420/@comment-10789912-20160516033507

The rewrite is actually finished! If you look at the In Torment page, it's a completely remade story of far better quality. Added scenes, better character development and flow, and far superior dialogue. All that's left to make is Mantle, the final (and eighth) story of the entire series.

14 months ago you wrote that it was a highly ambitious story with much potential, but with errors (mostly grammatical). I'd like to know if over a year later, I finally tapped into that potential in your eyes.