Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-12217886-20140607071622/@comment-24918243-20140611164025

My advice is ditch the "wikipedia" section all together. Even though it's interesting, the whole switch from talking about Baba Yaga to talking as Baba Yaga is just too distracting and kind of smacks of amaturism.

You have to find the voice of who is telling the story and then tell the points tha have relationship to the story in  their voice. Be that of a narator, Baba Yaga or her victim.