Talk:Skype/@comment-25052433-20150201051205

This was a good story and deserved the spot light for this month. It was short and moved with a graceful tempo that kept me reading. I would have liked to have seen more though, as I think you had the making for a great pasta.

The description of the masked killer was spot on. The scene where he picks up the cell phone and tilts his head to the camera was very creepy and executed to perfection.

Where this one fails is the predictability. As soon as you wrote that she left the Skype running, I already knew what was coming. This could be solved by expanding the story to include a fuller plot or add a more detailed ending.

Either way though, this was a great story and deserves its place on the front page.