Talk:Crush/@comment-30848999-20180916012053

I liked this story up until the end. It seems this story fell to what a lot of creepypasta authors think horror can only be: monsters in the dark. This story would have been way better if the mom had killed the crush and fed him to her daughter in the pie. That simple scene is 100x more horrifying than a supernatural monster murdering people because more people can relate to an overprotective parent doing drastic things to protect their children.