Talk:The Simple Man/@comment-26394749-20160109061312/@comment-1766527-20160109092312

Thanks a lot. I thought of killing him off but the point of the story was not to be so naive, so him escaping made sense as he learned not to be so trusting anymore. Besides, I wrote this as an entry for a writing competition, in Oman. And there people are sort of suckers for happy endings. I did get to be a finalist in the competition so t sort of worked :P. But I think the punctuation and paragraph styling I use needs work.