Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-17384134-20150916105248/@comment-26475800-20151129163332

If the Prosector is the one to prep the bodies, then why did the students gather around him? Sorry, not trying to be argumentative just don't understand. It also doesn't help that prosector is not acknowledge to be a real word by my computer. I was able to find it in Websters so that is enough for me to believe it is a real word, but it is a good one that most people will never know.

Onto the story, it was okay. I was a little disappointed by the fact of it being a dream; there are a few things which will stop a story in its tracks, the twist being a dream is at the top of that list. I know the story was short, but even so a dream being the big twist, even if it was a premonition, is a huge let down.

There were a few minor issues with grammar, I've seen worse grammar on stories that have been put through the QS before. Perhaps the best advice for the future has come from Creepy Thomas, the used of arcane words doesn't always make a story better. It would be fine if you peppered the story with them, but with a story this short there is no need. It will have people either thinking about what the word means, or looking it up. Either way they are more concerned with the words you decided to use then the story you had wanted to get across.