Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25421326-20160519214557/@comment-27008899-20160521174007

I like the idea, but my problem with this is there are too many loose ends in the story. When you say "get my friends back" are you refering to the other voices? Too many cut ins by the voice causes confusion. I like the end, but I'm still not clear why to protag was on the window ledge. Even in an LSD induced stuper there would be a reason, seen or thought, real or fake, a person would be in that situation. If I missed that please let me know.