Talk:Psychologist/@comment-25274362-20140806234712/@comment-5269370-20140807161709

For the scathing review you gave, 4/10 almost seems like a blessing :P haha.

Anyway, the points you gave about the way the story was written, I fully agree with you. That first line you mentioned "YOU DESTROYED SO MANY MEMORIES OF MINE!", I cringe every time I see it. As for the description of the house, the paragraph about never being sick, and the last point about the writing in general, you're right, it's not at all thought-out, and much of it doesn't create much suspense or atmosphere, and doesn't fit well into the story.

As for the plotholes, it's a good thing I managed to half-assedly try to cover them in the prequel. Although the scurvy thing is new, I'll give you that :P

Anyway, thank you for your harsh honesty. Trust me, your comment was a huge wake-up call.