Talk:Eyeless Jack/@comment-25112831-20141108225100

Why do I find it so amusing that the doctor just sort of went 'aaaaand your brother is dead. Soz.' As if it was no big deal?! XD Whoo, my lawd, that's sort of funny... XD Ok, ok, all in all though, this pasta isn't amazingly written and there are a fair amount of plot holes, maybe a few things that seemed a bit wrong and out of place which made it feel less real but I love this story! It's just a typically cool, creepy short story that for me, is quite memorable xx Nice :)