Talk:Foryeti Me Not/@comment-26007602-20151210064730/@comment-26326346-20151211050830

Thank you for taking the time to review this for me, I really appreciate it :)

I'm glad you enjoyed what I did with the Yeti, I've had some mixed reception on that (which I understand).

There was a scene where the "wind" blew him over and he couldn't get back up because it kept him down. The wind was actually the beast knocking him over during the blizzard and the reason he couldn't get back up was because it had knocked the wind out of him. It was actually the Yeti which had used its prongs on him. They weren't able to notice it until they got back to the tent because of the blizzard. That's what I was going for with that.

The marijuana scene was pretty much there just because. I also thought it might add another dimension to Gil and Orwell. I see where you are coming from about it being unneeded and out of place. I'm planning on a bit of a re-write in the far future after I finish some more stories and I'll take that out or change it, in addition to some of the feedback that Jay Ten left for me :)

Thanks again, I'm glad you enjoyed it and found it a bit unique! I hope a couple of the things I stated make sense.