Talk:Mr. Bones' Wild Ride/@comment-27553469-20160304201522

Could have used a better ending after the whole build-up. I can clearly recall some fond memories of RTC from when I was young, and this story started out with a great port entail, but eventually slid downward from the point in which it takes a bit of a dis believable turn, which eliminates a lot off the creepy factor. Not to mention at the end, it was fully butchered by the matter of fact that there was a whole cliché of resorting to the typical "And then karma came back to nip me in the butt" sorta thing. Not that having everything that was cranking up the story imploding back in our antagonist(s)'s face(s) is bad, just the matter of fact that it was God awful in how he managed to find Mr. Bone's Wild Ride outside of a cheap game mod.

Had great potential, and I'll cut you some slack for the great idea. Not to mention the picture that you'd attached along with the story gives the reader(s) a great perspective on what this allegedly fatal game mod is.

Here's a solid 3/10.