Talk:Tobit: Hiya Toby and the Unwashed/@comment-25024572-20150627220625

Since I started reading the Tobit series, I've had high expectations for it. And, once again, they are met, if not exceeded.

Everything is on point. The characters are great. The plot is engaging, interesting, and somewhat suspenseful. The dialogue works well. Really, it's all great.

Plus, there are new good parts. The "Hiya Toby Show" was pretty dark, kind of like a demonic version of "The Children's Story" (not in that it's scarier. I mean that instead of being brainwashed to worship a state, the kids are being brainwashed to worship a demon being). Speaking of brainwashed kids, that whole part with the show made me wonder if that was going to happen to Soka, and she'd turn on the Unwashed.

Like the rest of this series, this story is great. Honestly, when you finish, you should turn it into a book or something. Maybe add a bit more to make it appealing to those who've read the series (because why buy the book if the content exists for free online?). Just a thought.