Talk:Something Is Wrong/@comment-26193563-20150412200020

Overall, the concept is unique and original, something I'll give to the author. But the development of this pasta is a bit weak and should need some strength in it.

Also, how did the narrator know the kid had Down Syndrome? It never mentioned that he/she had medical training or on-spot recognition.

The title doesn't match the story perfectly, but it's alright.

I have to say, SnakeTongue237, this is your better works. Apparently you put effort and focus onto this story, and I'm satisfied enough. 7.5/10

Good job.