Talk:The Smell/@comment-24996913-20140902080533

First off, this is really disturbing. The description of the bathroom scene was extremely intense and vivid. It's even more disturbing because it happens in the real world. I like that you incorporated such a damaging event and added a creepy twist to it. I actually loved this pasta. The in depth description, the complexity of it, the realism... It was all done tastefully. Excellent work here.