Talk:Teeth.jpg/@comment-25605686-20141117142005

This screams Poe, and not at all in a bad way. It resonates with short story 'Berenice' (which is about a man obssessed with teeth), and with the fact that he wrote the first detective stories in the western world. This is an excellent (even if unintended) homage.

Having said that, I do think it was a little long (another Poe resonance!), but I suspect I may have read too many pastas tonight and that might be affecting my judgement (and patience).

9/10 - but will read again, and score higher if warranted.