Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33488654-20180828005908/@comment-35911608-20180828011434

Ok, I like the idea of the child growing inside a woman telling said woman to kill stuff. But this needs more. I'd definitely stretch this one out, make her go more crazy over time, blur the line between whether the baby is actually telling her or if she's just plain nuts. Also, as Dr.Bob said, the growth and conception timings seem a bit weird. I'd look into them a little more.