Talk:The Showers/@comment-4715955-20140309230208

At times I was genuinely on the edge of my seat. Others I was wishing the narrator would get to the point already. In the end, what was initially terrifying (child-things in a basement shower kennel) was completely de-clawed (they're almost too weak to move, let alone hurt anyone). I don't understand why he was suddenly let out of the tunnel: this comes off less like a spooky mystery and more like a plot hole. So is the fact that he turns off his flashlight to avoid being discovered in the darkness, then immediately starts humming to himself! I was hoping that Jack would wait for Steve and take the rope exit with the things clawing at him -- at least then the children would still have been scary, like they were during Mr Mays's story, which was way scarier than the final payoff.