Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25975226-20150313125009

So I tried this whole poetry thing again. It's very short and I would like some constructive criticism before I continue on in case I'm heading in the wrong direction. Thank you!

I Went Into the Woods Today

I went into the woods today, Just for a pleasant stroll, No one was there, to my dismay, Not even one lone soul.

I went into the woods today, The trees blocked out the light. For peace, ‘twas a small price to pay, To lose the gift of sight.

I went into the woods today, I felt a sense of dread. Scared of what? I could not say; I dared not go ahead.

I went into the woods today, And then I heard a shout. “Sounded quite like me,” I say, I did not come back out. 