Talk:The Goatman Is After Me/@comment-35711173-20180710025046/@comment-36134524-20180710155127

Any particular places where the grammar is especially awful? I had to teach myself English and focused on expanding my vocabulary as opposed to understanding which tools of punctuation, so I used some online resources to check my grammar (at least the first 600 words).

As for the "big reveal" being based around the final two paragraphs, I'm not really sure on how to change it. I felt as if by that point. Perhaps the issue stems from me writing the end of the story first (although the preliminary version ended with the line "There's just one issue... I don't have a dog..." which I concluded was too cliche to leave as was). My intention was for it to be obvious that the Goatman was obsessed with the author by this point (hence it telling him the story of the goatman on the hiking trip, sneaking into the car and staring at him for the entire journey, and finally dropping him off home in the form of a policeman, although I left that one ambiguous), and for the ending to just be a short shock to end the story, implying that the author is about to die/already dead. Any further feedback is much appreciated though, seeing as this is my first adventure into the horror genre in quite some time.