Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44746972-20200205042734/@comment-33904527-20200207233945

It's a nice premise, but I feel as if you could've done more with it. Maybe instead of the story being focused on one singular event, you could tell it as a collection of tales from the perspectives of the workers in the 'steam pipes'. You mention something about a mysterious owner that know one really knows, perhaps that'd be a good starting point?