User talk:Living hoody

Re: Criticism
Pointing out flaws in a work is the basis for criticism. Failing to carry out even the most basic of writing rules established in grade school is not a good start to sharing your stories and is going to open you up to harsher criticism that is more pointed if you don't work to improve. I'm not attacking you as an author, I'm just pointing out the numerous flaws that will lead to your story being deleted should you try to publish it here. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 17:22, December 28, 2017 (UTC)