Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24169760-20181124220608/@comment-9041013-20181124225852

Well it's mostly akin to Jack The Ripper lore if it was cannonized but at parts it fills like Jeff The Shriller, it comes off a little cartoonish here and there. Maybe try to get a tad longer and give it a darker, more elaborate tone by having the cops chase around the guy who leaves clues like Joe Doe from Se7en. Having Jack confess at the end or pretend to confess only to kill one of the people could also add to this story.

You could have him monologue about what drove him to kill in the cult.

Definitely expand on the cult, make it like a real big deal for those who came up with, give it some meat.