Talk:Video Camera

Pretty good story. The 'wait, she never left the closet!' plot twist has been done before, but it's a classic and works well here.

The only two problems I have with it is that it seems a little out of place for these people to shout 'OMG' instead of saying the words out loud, and the ending is a little cliched. But other than that, good story, and keep up the good work!