Talk:It Came from Blood Point Road/@comment-17646692-20131106130102

This creepypasta has a lot of potential, but i feel that the ending screwed it up. It seemed rushed up a little bit to much. The creepypasta could be written longer, more detailed and better. The part until the night the main-character woke up and saw the hand, was so far so good, but the rest was just not detailed enough and the creepy atmosphere that was starting to build up all sudden disapeared. It's a 4.5/10. Write it longer, more detailed and make sure that the creepy atmosphere is there and i might give you 9/10. Good job though =)