Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25569708-20161210024323/@comment-25569708-20170203034312

Okay, the story has finally been updated to include the new paragraphs/changes that were suggested by my gracious reviewers, and at this point I'm just deciding on the final few sentences. I've been kind of stumped on what exactly I want the ending to be (I've got a couple ideas), but at this point I've chosen to quit stalling the project further, so I'm letting everyone see the now complete (except for the very ending) work.

Please enjoy and let me know what you think, and of course my apologies for the very annoying delay.