Talk:Infanticide/@comment-26835140-20161105041235

Also, i'm sorry if my comment came across as rude for I had no bad intentions, But I do think it would be a good idea to just peep the workshop for a bit and make sure that you are able to explain this story a little better. Once again I didn't mean to offend you with my comment but i'm sure it may have seemed that way, but like I said you have great general writing skills [which you should be proud of] and don't let haters like me get you down ;). Just progress your story a bit more and possibly develop your characters!