Talk:As the Rain Falls/@comment-25562312-20141021091250

Alright, this is my first story that i've posted on here. There may have been some formating errors when i converted it onto here, so let me know when, or if, you find any. Also tell me if there are any grammar errors or misspellings.

Regarding the story, i felt that the ending was rather rushed since I didn't have that much time to finish writing. This is one of the stories that i've twisted and turned the most with story wise, so sentences may have come forth a tad strangely formed. Tell me what I could impove. I love constructive criticism.