Talk:Behind You

THEN WHO WAS CALLER? But seriously, this pasta was undercooked. Robert looks at a note for 18 hours that says look behind you, falls asleep, wakes up and finds a dead body so he continues to not look behind him, then he dies and his tombstone inexplicably has something as impersonal as “He died because he didn't look behind him." What the hell kind of a family prints that on a loved one's tomb? Not "here lies Robert, the best son who ever lived" or "RIP Robert, he was a kooky sonofabitch and we hate to see him go." Also who's this mysterious "caller?" Was it that in an earlier revision of your super awesome story he's called instead of note-bombed? Seriously, take some writing classes and learn how to boil spaghetti, 'cause this shit is crunchy as fuck. --David Knott 03:31, February 13, 2012 (UTC)