Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33696343-20181119134615/@comment-9041013-20181121002110

You flay humans, not skin them.

Also, the whole idea of CPs being based off Urban legends is kind of bad because you cannot come up with a solid urban legend as a single person. It has to have bits and pieces from various people over a period of time to be an urban legend that actually has something to it. Give it mystique, make it a tad absurd, like legends tend to be. Especially Japanese where the culture is kind of not kid friendly with their spooky crap unlike in the west.

Also, being the sole survivor for the sake of plot is kind of silly, especially if survival is rare with the flayed man ghost thing.

You also don't really give much detail, how does he try to flay people... why does he see his murderer in humans? usually ghosts are pissed at everyone indiscriminatorally as a result of their unfortunate passing. He just takes everyone in vengence... it sounds like an actual legend, because it makes less sense.

This whole thing needs tons-o-work.