Talk:Sun's Revenge/@comment-24040907-20140928074958/@comment-24040907-20141001033545

It's difficult to write for this website because everyone is expecting a big twist. What is the surprise behind the outcome of the creation of the universe? The Earth's product of humanity, no doubt. You cleverly incorporated the twist this audience craves, but the twist was the fact of reality. We are here. It's the simplicity of it. I think that is the real beauty of the story; it empowers the reader at first (I will one day become a Celestial Body and dominate Space itself!) but then it causes a deep, eerie worry to arise in the heart of the reader. There will be turmoil, maybe even war, when the Sun decides to strike. You are right, the anxiety of knowing who exactly Earth is, and her fate would be unbearable.

It would also make a kick-butt movie, don't you think?! It should be called The Knowing.