Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36299239-20181118023254/@comment-35711173-20181119000823

Second person stories are hard to pull off. They remind me of a type of text only adventure game I saw in college. "YOU ARE IN A MAZE OF TWISTY PASSAGES, ALL ALIKE." (Anyone else remember those?) It may work better in first or third person.

However, I get kind of lost as to the how and why right at the end. How does this undead thing keep everyone?