Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5101683-20180722190535/@comment-9041013-20180722232840

Squidmanescape wrote: So the criticism so far is:


 * 1) The paragraphs are too long.
 * 2) The ferret is not scary.

Would you say that this could go onto Creepypasta Wiki if the paragraphs were fixed? No... because... Ferret... they're tiny, sure they hunt larger animals, but not human sized...