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While the comment above yours adresses the rest of your critics, I'd like to focus on the "Hyper realistic" subject. The adjective itself doesn't mean somethig horrifying, neither it evokes "burning anger and despair". It simply means that the eyes were generated using a technique that made them look absolutely real, in contrast with the rest of the cartoon scene. It's just an expository bit, but the fact that you wouldn't expect that in a kid's cartoon adds up to the horror.

Just one more thing: clichés are artistic resourses that are overused and indicate a lack of imagination from the authors who resort to the. But, if you write a story before those things were clichés, you cannot be accused of lack of imagination. Instead, depending on how famous your followers are (those who will use the clichés you made popular), your clichés and set phrases may become a whole new style (just look at Lovecraft's work)