Talk:After the Fall/@comment-28428152-20181104074812

I enjoyed quite a bit. I like how Duke was Collin's brother all along. Could use some more character development. I would also suggest that whenever you add more to this, making it a separate page, and maybe making a separate page for the chapters 6-10, since the plot in those chapters is significantly different than the previous chapters and does feel more like a sequel.

Did some light punctuation cleaning, but nothing invasive. I recommend getting the free version of Grammarly, it's pretty good at picking up little mistakes here and there

Excited to see where this goes

Also found the perfect song for Tony: