Talk:Disintegrating/@comment-25428589-20181002182829

I quite like this, you manage to evoke a lot of ideas in a very short time. There's just the right balance between ambiguity and clarity. I'm not sure if it was intentional, but the occasional alterations between referring to the automaton as "it" and "he" were a pretty subtle way to point to the blurred line between objects and people when we talk about the experience of emotion, even if it read a little awkwardly. Nice one :)