Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25365080-20150415161651/@comment-25365080-20150415163444

Underscorre wrote: They come from indenting your paragraphs - this breaks Wikia's formatting. Thank you! Now that's one problem gone :)

Would you kindly give me some opinions about the story? I'm currently trying to revise it to meet the quality standards of this Wikia, and I could really use some advice. :) Thanks a lot!