Talk:Three Friends Diner/@comment-25052433-20151003235958

Are you trying to win PoTM? Because this is how you win PoTM!

Amazing story. This kept me locked in from start to finish and I loved every word. This was well written and clearly well researched. This story oozes the very fabric of a properly researched and executed short story.

The chills were present, but the real success of this one comes not from the scare factors but really from everything else. The pacing was great, as you had a lot to explain but you did so without dragging on too long in one area. You kept things vague enough to be mysterious, but gave away just enough to engage the reader.

Your character development was on point. In the short time the reader spent with the characters, you did a fine job of making them feel real.

Excellent job all around with this!