Talk:Peter's Shadow/@comment-24371463-20140306203300

I find the 'based on a true story' bit a little unneccessary.

The dream with the desert- I liked the idea, but I thought it could've been put differently. Also, the term 'hacking' would not have been used in such an everyday manner in these times, and as other people have said, someone Facebooking on their phone just wouldn't happen. A little work on your continuity wouldn't go amiss.