User blog:Ye Ole Fire Chief/I just made a new story!

Hey guys! I'm a new user on this site and I've made two stories that I hope you'll enjoy. I'm an aspiring writer and I'd like to know how to improve my stuff. The first story is about a man trapped in a witches dungeon, which has been an idea I've had in my mind for a while. I'm a huge fan of fantasy, so adding it to horror is kind've accomplishing a dream of mine. I want to continue making stories like that so I can have a fairy tale type of book put together that mixes the two genres. I appreciate any feedback that anyone can give so I can Improve my story telling and really give people chills.

The second story is a very different story that kind of mirrors my life in a couple of aspects, it deals with loss and music together and I wanted to poetically intertwine the two subjects. It isn't the best written story I've made but I'm just getting a feel for the style I could be making.

Thanks for reading, and if you can give me feedback anywhere, please do!