Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31532017-20161223041039/@comment-31532017-20161223045734

EmpyrealInvective wrote:

RaptorKillerX-Venture wrote: Yeah I know, but what you listed was good enough to me. However I thought the camouflage, and the knelling posture was obvious enough. I understand, but something a little less nebulous like implying she's rendezvousing with a target, surveilling the area, etc. might help with her reasoning as she is seemingly there for a reason but leaves to pursue an nondescript scent which feels off considering her implied background. Luckily that will be addressed later on by somebody else.