Talk:The Flesh Market/@comment-5269370-20131219121723

It was a very well told pasta, the beautiful imagery at the beginning descending to the dark, grim imagery of the middle and end was beautifully. The idea of a "flesh market" is pretty good too, but I just felt that the plot didn't really... develop, or go anywhere, after a while, if that makes sense? Like fair enough it went through all the possibilities and outcomes of the "flesh market", but it just seemed to lack a little adventure, or something.

Other than that, it was a pretty enjoyable read. Good job!

7.6/10