Talk:The Expressionless/@comment-24466828-20160215155456

The ending to this story kills this. What the hell does "I... am... God..." mean? It's corny and it feels very misplaced. I was disappointed after it ended because I thought that this story would be very great. Instead of impressing me, it just ended with a typical "they were killed" ending. It did have some interesting buildup, but none of it paid off so I'll give this a 2.5/10.