Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181005210030/@comment-28428152-20181006165704

BloodySpghetti wrote: I smell slugs... Interdimentional slugs... with many Tentacles... They are doing business, what? How? Ugh... Someone needs to get a hold of Dr. Strange.

Anywho, good piece overall... It makes me wonder, where do you get the time to write these, unless you're just uploading existing parts, which would make sense.

Good job on tying the various parts of the story together, it comes off as a very violent dark telenovella kind of thing... that's very good.

I also like how you brought in the whole Multiversed facet into this, mentiniong a certain Michael Uriah Eriksson... That pesky good spirit thing that needs to be flayed (or defeathered, whatever they call it). I do wonder though, is the Nameless a pawn-level kind of being compared to the Wyrm and the Good Spirit? Otherwise, his fear of the owl makes it a little weird.

Props on coming up with a last name that makes sense for Mohamed too, it means "Of Aleppo"

You keep on forgetting to capitalize the name "Ben" sometimes, there were a couple of punctuation errors and Pit Bull has a space between the Pit and the Bull.

That be all. Nah, I'm writing these fresh, mostly. I do have an old rough draft that itself had been revised a couple of times from 2015, and since I've planned out the plot changes, and with nothing coming up in school, it usually just takes me a couple of hours to get a chapter done. Don't worry, I still have a social life, haha.

And the bigger picture I'll leave to be unveiled as it goes along