Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24169760-20161002033151/@comment-24101790-20161002034236

I'm sorry, but the fact that you don't capitalize proper nouns and sentences properly, while ignoring proper punctuation, with basic grammatical issues, doesn't really make me want to continue with your story. This seems like it was written hastily and that you spent little time in the overall focus/editing of the overall story.

The plot seems very rushed and the numerous misspellings really don't make for an involving story. I sincerely hope you revise your story before seeking help and revision as there are a lot of issues here.