Creepypasta Wiki:Deletion Appeal

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Lloyd_Freeman113 is following you
Hi there people of creppypasta wiki. I wrote a story called Lloyd_Freeman113 is following and posted it on September 9 2014. The first time I posted it, it was deleted, so I tried again. I received a message that my story has been officially deleted, and I can't re-upload it. I personally am proud of my story. Although maybe it needed more work, and maybe I was too excited and I posted it prematurely, I believe it is a original idea, that was not taken from some of your other more famous stories like "Jeff the Killer," and "Ben Drowned" etc. I didn't use anything offensive, despite a few curse words but not many, and I feel that although it's not the best story in the world, (and I hope to write others,) I think people will enjoy it. I read your policy and I believe the disclaimer for poor grammar at the start was the reason why it was taken down. After I read that I proof read the story and made corrections but it was taken down again. So may I please re-post my story. If not please give me a reason why so I can fix it.


 * Looking over your story, I notice a number of issues with changing tense from past to present in the story, punctuation issues (Not using commas correctly and not including them where needed) spacing issues, (Not spacing especially after an aside in parenthesis.) a number of malapropisms, (both in texts and in the story itself like: where/were, know/now, etc.) and grammatical issues.


 * The story itself also really could use some revision. You do a good job building tension, but there really isn't any sense of escalation (Until the final text) or peril. Lloyd is electronically stalking the protagonist, but there are no real instances in which Lloyd comes across as intimidating. Additionally towards the end, the story seems rushed. The police become involved (Which would be a good opportunity to emphasize Lloyd's dangerousness) and then the protagonist receives a twitter message from Lloyd. (It comes off as a bit anticlimactic without impending danger or peril.) I agree with Someguy123's decision to delete this story. I would emphasize the importance of visiting the writer's workshop for more in-depth feedback/assistance with your next story. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 01:14, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Picture deletion request (disregard)
**post deleted**


 * When you contact wikia staff to delete your account, tell them what you just told me. They can do everything in one button-push I believe. Also, this is the place for story deletions not "nuke everything" deletions. I'm deleting this post since this wasn't the right place for it.
 * Mystreve (talk) 15:54, September 12, 2014 (UTC)