User blog comment:DeadCogTheProxy/Any tips on writing a creepypasta?/@comment-26054278-20150328233625

I see you changed it a lot.

I don't mean to come off rude, but this sounds like a bunch of random information for the sake of random information. Why do I need to know all this information? Why is all of this information important? How does the exact details of her boots contribute to the story?

I know that you are probably setting this up in order to get some ideas around this character and his personalities, but there are certain details that just really don't need to be in a story.