User blog comment:Lightning bolt creator guardian/I don't know what to do anymore../@comment-24101790-20190712194039/@comment-24101790-20190712200952

I give the generalizations of things to look at as not everyone wants a page long summary of a lot of the errors in their story without first asking and the deletion message gives links to follow for more clarification they can follow.

(i.e. "Your story has been deleted because it doesn't meet the wiki's quality standards. Read the Deletion FAQ and our Style Guide for Writing for details on the 'what' and 'why' of the deletions we make. Read this guide and these blog posts for further details on how you can improve your story/stories to make them meet our quality standards. For additional help, submit your story to the Writer's Workshop for feedback." with the links which you tried to remove.)

As for advice on how to improve: I would suggest taking it to the writer's workshop as there are a lot of instances where you forget to properly spell words, correctly capitalize sentences (see the info boxes for the largest examples), punctuate sentences/dialogue (inboxes and the story itself), your text is riddled with coding that makes text difficult to read (An example of this: " Instagram user  Lightning bolt Creator Guardian  aka Lichtningbolt created Peacekeeper back in June 24, 2016 on a small note block." ), and plot-wise; there are a lot of issues here.

The story/backstory is told almost entirely in a passive voice that renders a lot of it bland and un-involving as there's little to no detail or attention spent on plot. Additionally the story itself subscribes to a lot of the generic tropes of other OC stories. Finally, just looking at a spreadsheet of the character's skills doesn't make for an involving story. Convey those things organically to the audience. Those were a few of the errors I spotted, but the largest problem is that in trying to introduce your OC, you're neglecting to tell any real story for the audience to read.