Talk:The Afterlife Can Be an Unusual Place/@comment-35711173-20181023002525

IcyDice,

Kind of Halloween Scrooge, but where he didn't repent in time.

"Others weren't nearly as bad but still caused me to feel sick to my stomach, such as witnessing several life-changing moments in wish I pushed family away."

Shouldn't that be "in which I pushed family away?"

I suggest a careful proof reading just in case others remain.