Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27012445-20180822012506/@comment-27012445-20180822062337

I see your point. I am still ambivalent on whether I am going to post this one. It might not be right for the wiki. The beginning of this story is exactly from my thoughts and feelings back then. It was a nostalgic trip that I treasured and thoroughly enjoyed taking. I was attempting to share that with the reader. To me, the beginning is just as important as the end and can't be removed, but if i am unsuccessful in keeping the reader engaged, then it just doesn't work. I have no problems admitting it :)