Talk:Raw Latex/@comment-25000365-20150618190255

I really liked the setup, but the actual scare part was very short. You spent the whole story building up to a one or two sentence "punchline," so to speak. I think that you could have had spooky things happening that led up to the child's face in the mask. But the story really wasn't that bad, a lot better than a lot of stuff on this wiki. 6/10