Talk:Threads/@comment-25477067-20161011155939

Eh, could do without the police report at the end. Everything up to that has been wonderful description of what's going on, then all of a sudden, it's like you ran out of steam and decided to just say what happened to him in a really cheap cop-out. Hehe, you see what I did there?

Anyway, other than that horrible ending, the story is pretty good. The writing is nice, albiet a bit cliched, and the repetitive line breaks are nice.

Overall, about a 7/10 normally, but the ending jarred me a lot, knocking it down to a 5/10