Talk:Razor's Edge/@comment-24692889-20140319074348

I loved how every step she made was filled with hesitation, like that every motion is filled with unknowingness of what to find, even though it's just a small apartment in the middle of a busy town.

A random serial killer being was disapointing for me though... The perfect heavy atmospherical notion and general paranoia of the character themselves almost felt like there is something hailing from her going there, escaping from something that chased her, yet she could never feel safe from...

Random human eater felt... Out of place, like it blocked a much more extensive story being told.

Still, the fact my mind conjured allot more then what actually was, shows your writing to be awesome!