Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28266772-20160624221243/@comment-28266772-20160628154923

Thank you very much for your feedback! Especially with regards to how I've worded some of the sentences.

And it's clear to me I need to do a bit more work to clarify the events of this story. The general jist is that Andrew actually sent a different knot to deal with Skit at the end, and that Toni has remained with Andrew in their peculiar relationship. I think to clarify this, I'll have Knot-Toni morph into a different girl the second Skit sits next to her, and then have her clarify that there are lots and lots of Knots around, and that despite their terrifying apperance they're motivated by nothing more than a sincere desire for companionship. [Well... that's what she'll say anyway. I'll intentionally work to make it so that there's no single definitive explanation for their attachment to us].

Overall I'll reinstitute some cut scenes, and try to clean up the wording. And again, thank you so so much for your feedback! It was much appreciated.