Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-24186298-20131119081909/@comment-24186298-20131120072850

1. I had them broken up into a few paragraphs before, but they looked all weird when I wrote the whole story, so I put it in a whole wall. Sorry, I'll fix it even if this now-known monstrosity is accepted.

2. Can you tell me what all the error's and show me a few ways to notice them and correct them?