Talk:Who's There?/@comment-27059970-20161129063508

i saw the ending coming from not one, but 10 miles away. the suspense (or lack of) didn't help, and constantly saying "i didn't pay to much attention to it" only gives away the that the character should be paying attention to it. it also does not make the reader brush it off either, at least not a smart reader. this story is both bland and has been done hundreds of times before on the wiki. why does this stuff get to stay?