Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190702085504/@comment-35911608-20190706125538

I'm with Locked on the dialogue in the river. The rusalka sounds very modern, until they're underwater that is. The rest of the writing is good as always though. Otherwise, I might add to the pain of drowning, increase that threat level a bit. I wasn't uber scared by this piece, so I'd advise making the peak just a little stronger. And the name works well.