Thread:TheKillerCat/@comment-10950063-20140224195341/@comment-4832646-20140224211228

TheKillerCat wrote: irst of all, I am NOT lazy! and I am NOT acting like a whining child! I have english friends but who knows if they know grammar well!? I already planned to send the story, when I have a new one, to many of my friends to let them help me, and then correct it myself a little if I need to, and then send it through different friends again! But it is hard to make a good pasta, without so many things! What things are left then, which I am allowed to use for my own pasta? Big hungry flowers and a story about how the icecrem went off and no one can get new one!? Seriously, there are so many popular stories which already have taken the things to make a good pasta, and there are no good left, or at least no good which I can think of. I respect the site rules, but it's just not fair that a story has to be perfect! for me there is so much more work to do to make a story with  a good reading quality! I am still a student, and I am sorr that we dont learn english grammar very often at our english lessons, but I really wanna learn them! If I would know how and where I would start with it right now, but who knows if something like that even exists here! And dont think that I am being dis-respectful with the site rules, cause I AM. Also, to write a good story in english with perfect grammar would as hard as if I'd told you to write a perfect grammar story in german! I am trying to find as many help as I can get to get my grammar fixed, and I am NOT being lazy at such things! And when I'll have done a new story for "Lou", and got the grammar fixed (hopefully right) I will upload it here, for you to see if it is acceptable! If not, I'll have to find more people for my grammar. But just like I said, everyone makes mistakes, and if I make grammar mistakes it is not meqaning that I dont want to learn grammar! I love the language and  everything else about english countrys, and I am trying my best to get my grammar fixed. Try researching to see what's been taken. It doesn't take much to think of an original outside-the-box idea that wouldn't classify as a spinoff. The pastas I linked, those writers did it.