Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20190621084611/@comment-35911608-20190621125758

Yup, I'm in agreement with Bloody. This one is good to go - after a few fixes and a title.

Blood had mixed with the bird poop on his truck's... This should be "my truck's".

"You following me! I got everything under control." Is that supposed to be a question mark instead of an exclamation mark? It just reads weird to me this way.

My last point of advice would be making the news article in italics or something else to differentiate from the rest of the story.

Otherwise, well done :)