Talk:The Island/@comment-31940541-20150629125759

6/10. The story is great but the writing is dry in spots. I think it would be creepier if you either did the beginning of the first story from Jack's perspective and the last parts as a newspaper clipping or something or you just did the whole story like this but let Jack make contact with people off the island or leave a note somehow. The first idea would have the advantage of keeping that scene with the boy.