Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27628405-20160118182315/@comment-26927936-20160118193739

I have to agree with the review above, there really isn't a storyline here and this sort of work doesn't have much of a place on this wiki. It isn't at all scary/creepy or even have a dark theme. In fact, the poem doesn't even make much sense and lacks any real flow. My first suggestion would be to expand upon what you're trying to get across. Why are the stars your nightmares? What exactly is the truth? Then try to organize everything in a logical way that makes the poem flow easily when read aloud.