Talk:The Garage Scene/@comment-25477067-20160222153033/@comment-29791712-20160222203416

You make some pretty valid points, so thank you for your comment. I tried to make this story as short as possible while still creating a decent plot and everything, so I'll leave the ending as it is. Personally I like it.

Also the reasons why I sort of hide away the friend's tension towards the end is to make the reader unaware of Espinoza's inevitable fate. As you stated, the ending could be predictable, so I really wanted to keep the sudden twist as subtle and as unexpected as possible. I may, however, make some quick edits in order for Michael and Mark to be more included.