Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26981815-20160126064453/@comment-26835140-20160208021636

In defense of Tobias's narration he is a young kid and he could be having fun with it, playing pretend or something. And I personally thought a tape recorder was a great alternative to something like an iPad for a child his age, whether he be in Australia or not. and the mothers initial reaction was a little extensive. I think changing Tobias into a ghost is a great idea and i'm sad i didn't think of it lol, could this possibly mean that Tobias would be hostile to the father? potential plot points? we don't know. but what we do know is that after a lot of revisions, we have made a GOOD story. Sorry for going dormant for a while unholy lord, I have been busy with some things recently, but i think i'm here to stay.