Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35327912-20180416215131

Late at night, deep in Yellowstone National Park, a group of teens were walking back to their campsite. On the way, their radios began to pick up chatter. At first in was very course, but slowly became clearer. "Attention, an unknown animal has been located near Old Faithful. All nearby hiking trails are closed until we can identify it. Rangers are en route to the area." The teens looked at each other. "If we continue on the road, it's at least a good hour back. The trail would be about 15 minutes." One of them said. Another one spoke up, "You heard the guy, the trails are closed!" Eventually, the others joined the conversation. All of them but one agreed to take the trail. "If you're killed, it'll be on your own fault!" One of the group yelled at him. The lone teen flipped him off after a chuckle. Back at the campsite, the teen waited for his friends. He waited, and waited, until he finally passed out. The next morning, his radio was going off. "''This is Officer Dubbs, I have four bodies here. I'd say early 20's. Looks like they were eaten by whatever wildlife got them. One of them has her entire head missing." ''The teen turned off his radio, bursting into tears.

Please give me any advise! Thx! ;-) 