Talk:Brian's Here/@comment-35711173-20180805092428

Jdeschene, My biggest issue is that I don't see any creepy or horror aspects until the very last paragraph. Even then, it isn't definite that it is a ghost. Actually, the hair is the only description clue we have. If he is a ghost he knows "gaming cards." The whole story of Brian going to live with his mother also seems perfectly reasonable in our current landscape of divorce.

I'm not even sure that Brian wasn't physically there and the father was there. It could be that there was no Father or that the father didn't see Brian because he could only see his own daughter.

As to be expected, the story was perfectly crafted. I just don't feel one bit of horror and only very moderate creepiness.