Talk:Squidward's Suicide/@comment-19745127-20170412233743

Ah, Creepypasta Wiki... how you're such a cruel mistress. Giving us good stories that keep others awake for days on end, filled to the brim with fear- AND this shit. This is not a good story, as someone who's been raised on horror I'd hope other people would know the difference. My grammar isn't that good but I know how to stay in the same tense. Unlike this person.

Acttual adivice to the person who made this. Work on basic writing. Write short stories and move on from there. Never tell the reader how to feel, make them feel it through context. Also, underage violence and murder is a serious thing, make sure you have a good reason to use it. Plus, interns would not be in this situation, as soon as they saw the child the cops would be called immediately.

This story needs a lot of improvement, but you're not the worst on the Wiki. But you got a long way to go before being really good.