Talk:NES Godzilla Creepypasta/Chapter 5: Entropy (Part 1)/@comment-30544436-20181111115440

I'll be honest here, despite this being my favourite creepypasta of all time this is the point where I feel it begins to fall apart. As Melissa is introduced, the story takes a nosedive. My supension of disbelief begins to crumble here, as it goes from a gripping and eerie story about a haunted game with a distinct atmosphere and near-believability to a much more cliche tale involving out of place direct human-game interaction and real world effects that simply don't make much sense in the context of the story.

The physical effects the protagonist experiences such as (SPOILER WARNING) being unable to leave his chair during the final showdown with RED (SPOILERS OVER) and the coughing and feelings of dread from playing the levels just seem a little out of place. The story built up an atmosphere for four chapters then completely broke it the second this weird 'ghost girl protecting protagonist from pixellated demon' plot arrived.

Apologies for long comment, I just wanted to get this off of my chest.