Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180816103412/@comment-9041013-20180816112205

Hey it's pretty decent. I agree with Wizard, there's no reason to scrap it.

Add a tad bit to it in the details and build department here and there to make it appear less rushed and everything should be perfect with this one. If you think it's not creepy enough, give the thing in the mirror some magical powers that it uses to mess with Norman in a creepy manner, play a little ghost possum or something to drive him crazy.

I do suggest you make the encounter seem like an accident that Norman suffers that knocks him out cold, or kills him, only for the doppleganger to reveal itself, but that's just me.