Talk:Visiting Uncle/@comment-26030957-20150127024822

9.8/10  Perfect length and a great surreal tone. Everyone has a creepy uncle and this pasta evokes that feeling with a dream like quality. It really reminds me of a Mary Gaitskill short story. Little details like monopoly money on the floor say so much about a family that has become dysfunctional. Some of the lines really stand out and just give such a creepy feel, like , “licking my face with his sandpaper tongue. ."- this line brings about a subtle incestual anxiety to the pasta but doesn't go so far as to be pornographic.