Talk:Looks Like We Got a Live One Here, Boys/@comment-25226524-20150203174726

Well that was devastating. It was also delightfully deviant and bizarre. Character development, scene description, and plot were all very well done in my opinion. I'm a sucker for anything involving crazy backwoods characters due to me being a fan of Ed Lee (I would recommend reading some of his work if you want to get a real good knack for writing in backwoods slang, plus they're fun reads). I don't think I've read any of your work before, but I'm glad that I did. Often times longer pastas such as this one tend to feel like punishment to complete, but I had no problem staying interested. Keep up the good work.