Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26468745-20150603002951/@comment-25037895-20150603010629

There's an unnecessary title at the beginning.

[Blood gushed out of the cut, but the (then) kept going...]

[Strangely enough, I wasn't phased (fazed) by this...]

[mask and began to sow (sew) it on...] Sowing should be sewing.

[city I would find my prefect (perfect) match...]

[Myles must have owed the man a lot, because he replied “If I can keep...]

[I could now seem (see) his muscle underneath...]

[He soon stumbled right in front of me, and I proceed (proceeded) to swiftly snap his neck.]

Replace the signature on the bottom with this:

As far as the story goes, I think it is decent. It certainly is very macabre and unsettling.