Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25277570-20140807185600/@comment-25558572-20140807185811

BVBGIRL23 wrote: so basically I made up my own  creepypasta story a while ago. I know it needs tweaking and all, but since its one of the first ones I'm gonna start posting online, I'm gonna need some advice. any tips? Show me the story and I can give you some feedback. We can't help you out if we can't see your pasta.