User blog comment:Underscorre/Jeff the Killer Rewrite Contest!/@comment-25052433-20151015061018/@comment-5973399-20151015204619

Uh, was there any real point to having Williamson turn up? Because the scene in which Matt berates Jeff could easily be edited slightly to include all the plot devices in that one instead of basically repeating the same scene with small diffrences. All Williamson did was inform Matt of Jeff's crimes, and Randy's dad did that anyway.

Just saying you could probably use that word count for something more important.