Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180613055407/@comment-9041013-20180614083715

DrBobSmith wrote: Jdeschene and BloodySpghetti,

Thank you for your reviews. I will be taking the story apart and hopefully fix the problems. Sometimes it's difficult to break past your memories of an actual incident and make it into a story that flows. Ah, I do that too, but I usually don't go step for step just take a few details, or the actual premise of what I've been through and make it into a mostly fictional story. It's up to you what you are willing to do here, but yeah, don't be afraid to omit and add some details.