User blog:Archergirl131/I need a bit of help...

Hi guys! I have a story that I am not sure weather to post or not. canyou give me some help? here's the basic idea:

 You can't trust anyone:    A boy is trapped in his basement after his stepfather locked him down there for misbehaving. He soon discovers that his abusive and cruel stepfather is a murderer after opening a closet filled with dead men and women, including his biological father. He needs to escape before his dad gets home or else he fears he will be his next victim.

please state your opinion.

thanks!