Talk:Penpal/@comment-24312872-20131219184506

Well, this sucks. I wrote such long and descriptive comment and I lost it.

In short, love this story. Disappointing ending (or is it?)

- I was hoping it would be the narrator he woken up at the exact same spot before. But it doesn't fit the story. It would have been shocking though.

- Mrs. Maggie role is very important, contrary to some believes. She established that she has TWO sons. Chris and John, and husband, Tom.

- What if Chris and John were inisde Mrs. Maggie's house all along? These two psychopaths could have been living there without anyone knowing because neighborhood moms tell their kids to refuse Mrs. Maggie's invitation. These two psychopaths could have been watching kids swimming in the lake and ask their mom to invite the kids in.

- There's no way in heck Josh's dad would bury an open grave in middle of the woods with 7 foot wooden box in it.

- Someone else buried the Josh and the maniac.

- It was either Chris or John who buried the two.

- Another psychopath is still out there. (remember the text "See you again. Soon.")

- One for Josh... One for Narrator...