Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26968151-20170621144444/@comment-26968151-20170622202749

Thanks for this review! Yeah, I guess I could've spent some more time proof-reading this story. Sorry, haha. I tried to make a shorter story that didn't really delve that much into character depth, and just gave a simple chill down a reader's spine. Now I realize that I probably need to expand a lot more if I want this idea to bloom. Do you think it would still work if I never fully explain whatever the gun is, or just imply the reason with subtle hints? I mean, it might make it creepier...idk. Or should it be absolutely concise as to why?