Talk:The Gym Teacher/@comment-7317707-20150523224831

Glad you recommended this to me! As usual it was very very very well writen and the plot was done at the perfect pace (albeit slightly predictable: I knew the gym teacher would some how come back into play). The descriptions of the explicit sexual stuff was a bit too much at times for my taste, but that's more of a matter of personal preference. As for character development, I think you characterized you main character extremely well. I enjoyed the story for the most part, even though I'm still trying to clear the images of maggots and werewolf erections xD. 8.5/10