Talk:Latrodectus/@comment-6064672-20150622235736/@comment-26054278-20150722005200

All your points are invalid since this is a work of fiction, it's not meant to be perfect.

So you can't criticize a story because it is a fictional story? Do you realize how little sense that makes?

This review has a lot of nitpicks and really should have focused a lot more on saying what the problem is, showing the example, and maybe explaining how the example proves that this problem is indeed a problem. Here, it just comes across as you nitpicking and even insulting the author, which you really shouldn't do in a review. In other words, never mind how you feel about the pasta, this is not a good review.

Personally, I don't like this story either, but I'm not going to nitpick every little detail and insult the author as a person.