Talk:Small Town, Big Heart/@comment-24996913-20140912100332

That was an intense ending. I like the storyline, definitely is creepy, but I do think the ending was a bit rushed. The last paragraph is when all the "creepiness" happens, and that usually isn't enough to pull the reader in. I love your descriptive work though, but I just wish it was longer and had a more keen insight on the psycho/stalker guy. And perhaps how the event took place. Did he wait for her to leave work, confront her, kidnap her, whatever? These are things I'd like to suggest just to fluff this story up a bit more.