Talk:Squidward's Suicide/@comment-25899888-20150816150424/@comment-24532164-20150816151131

"Well written" stories don't change tenses in the same paragraph, or at all. They also know to let the words work for themselves, and not say things like "the eerie part was...". You DON'T tell the audience how to feel about your story...EVER. Also, hyper-realistic. It does not mean what he thinks it means. Videos can not be hyper-realistic, photo-realistic MAYBE, but never hyper. A painting can be hyper-realistic, but not this. It's horribly written. Listen to these guys and an English teacher explain everything wrong with this story.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OjL2bLWODF8