Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25701413-20141117013826/@comment-25226524-20141118221027

Great addition. I think you took care of the issue perfectly. I feel the need to say, especially due to the speed and quality of that edit, that I see an abundance of potential in your ability. You have a great writing style, and when I see this kind of potential, I just have to say something. I encourage you to keep writing, study different styles and systems, and just keep at it. Every story you write may not be good, and maybe people will like very few of them, but you definitely have talent, and it needs to be used and developed. You never know what you might create. Good luck.