Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20180908140952/@comment-9041013-20180909093537

Hmm now it seems different, I don't know if I'm losing my mind here or if the author had changed it.

Anyways, it's a loop within a loop where the pratagonist because the antagonist before turning back into the pratagonist again because Parallel universes are fun like that.

Did it scare me? Nah.

It's certainly somewhat odd enough to be here, on the site.

It's definitely not my cup of tea, but whatever, if people like it go on with it.

Keep the ending, I like it, it add some oomph to your story.