Talk:I Found a Lost Tape from Innsmouth, Massachusetts/@comment-36646785-20180819214702

You certainly got the Lovecraft writing style right. It adheres to the Lovecraft universe well, but I think the video could have been better, it was just a song the Lovecraft Historical Society made that was put over a video of some fire, it could have been a lot more interesting and much creepier. You could have had some chanting in the Deep One language or even some Latin. With a bit more polish, this story could have been truly terrifying, I hope to see more from you in the future Colbito. I could even help you with some spooky Deep One chants, anything to help you improve. Keep writing and keep getting better. Have a nice day.