Talk:Don't Blame My Cats/@comment-24410237-20140111155834/@comment-24390414-20140111211132

Thanks for the critique. You are absolutely right. I just could not do the premise justice. I do think there is a lot of potential in this story but really struggling to pull it all together. Tried to force some "creepiness" in at the end and it totally sucked. I'll keep thinking about this one and hopefully can come up with a better version. Look for an edit soon and thanks again for the comment!