Talk:The Monsters Who Watch Us/@comment-26244328-20150325185026

This story had some real potential, you had a good and kind of creepy idea going. However you just had to ruin it all by ripping off Russian Sleep Experiment. "Have you easily forgot about us Sergei?" That sounds familiar... Also there where a lot of grammatical issues that took me out of the experience. You really had something going here, and if you improved it a little than you could make a fantastic story. 4/10.