Talk:In the Circle/@comment-24381191-20140805204756

Great story, Watcher, especially good for someone who is new to the world of creepypasta.

I don't get how the people thought the movie was scary. Maybe it was because of the candy part?

I spotted one grammatical error 'They were quickly replaced with alternates, and the remaining alternates were hurried out of the room by the large men in black t-shirts, Dawson had apparently hired to keep us orderly.  '

There shouldn't be a comma after 't-shirts.'