Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25074573-20140625152329/@comment-24918243-20140625164904

Much better. But now about:

This strange man is chasing me, insisting he knows me, that he loves me. But I know that this is only a ruse and he's  trying to send me back to the nurses and the doctors. I won't let that happen."

You leave the love part out, but i think it helps establish that the man and the protagonist are related.