Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29970504-20161102154748/@comment-30399843-20161102211250

just saying u should make the title a bit more cachier. try something like "Daydreaming Or Not" to make the title interesting, dont just describe what happened in the title and dont make it so long. next time when u write, even if its not good u should still get it a pro-sounding title so u can get more views:P