Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475017-20150617192210

The body of once missing Riley Smith was found in the park of North Ridgewood. Yesterday at 10:13 A.M by Ally Prescott. As Ally states "Riley was like my mom. I just can't believe that now she is gone". More of the story in section C5.

"Ally get down here right now." Ally's "mom", Mary, called from the kitchen.

As soon as Ally heard her she rolled her eyes and replied with a simple "Yes Mom" Every single day Ally just wanted to hurt Mary for everything she did to Ally.

Ally didn't want to be yelled at by Mary again so she got out of bed.She wished she didn't. She felt the pain shot up her foot, so she looked down and a laptop power cord sticking out from her foot. She cursed inside of her mind. She walked to her bathroom to get toliet paper. Then she walked back to her room.

"Why is blood such a pretty color?" Ally said to herself. She always liked that color not knowing why. She walked to her bathroom agian to throw the blood filled piece of toilet paper in the toilet.

She limped down the stairs into the kitchen. Mary looked up from the newspaper and saw Ally standing in the hallway."So this Riley was almost like your mom? And why were you at the park at 10 in the moring?"Mary had a look of digust on her face.

Ally wanted to lie but couldn't."Yes Riley was like my mom, and why would you care why i was out at 10 yestarday?" Ally couldn't help thinking her cover was blown.

"Oh my baby i am so sorry come here", she held her arms out wide wanting a hug from Ally, "I am sorry but there is a killer on the loose and i dont want you to get hurt." Mary had some tears in her eyes.

Ally thought"HAHHA thats a hug fucking lie."

Mary doesn't give two shits about me, so why is she caring about me? "Mom can I go take a shower then go the mall with Jessie and Mitch? I won't spend a lot. I just want that sky blue dress I've been dying to get for my prom. Can I go please?" Ally asked.

"Yes my dear just read the paper please" Mary told Ally. Ally wished she never did.

The paper talked about how the killer is at large and dangerous. HAHAH if they only knew. Ally thought.

"Baby i want you to be careful", Mary gazed into Ally's hazel eyes," Promise me you will."

Ally was shaking how can she do it tonight she couldn't hurt mary even is she wanted to.

"Damn it why is she being nice? She is never nice to me if she had her chance she would have killed me a long time ago." Ally thought."I will be careful mommy I promise." Ally said to Mary. 