User blog comment:DontTouchMeImDrunk/This wiki is a piece of shit/@comment-24101790-20150705063623

"I waste hours of my day spending my time making a story on your shitty site and you have to delete it," ~ The most honest thing you've written...

It's almost like you didn't even bother to read the quality standards, and now that your story is deleted for not having met them you're basically getting pissy because YOU couldn't be bothered to spend the time on YOUR own story to make it a good story. You story was one massive paragraph, a majority of the actions felt like you were reading them from a checklist ("Once all the subjects "went to sleep", the officers went home to go to sleep too after they did, once they woke up the next morning, they came back to the police station to see three of the subjects laying dead on the ground with the other two subjects eating them, despite all the food uneaten right next to them, with the officers in disgust, they turned back on the "death in sound" to make them stop, they did. One of the officers asked the two other subjects why they did it, they both said "I like skin better than food" at the same time."). etc.

Punctuation: "they both said(comma missing) "I like skin better than food (period/comma missing)", "said(,/.) "he's (He's) in my stomach(./,)"". "They then sentenced him to execution, now before we tell you what happens next, just know this happened in the '70s. When he was at the electric chair, his last words were(,/:) "Be prepared for February 13(th), 1995, Max's coming for you." He (he) said to Frederick, the man controlling the electric chair.", "one of the officers said(,/.) "where (Where) did they go?", (comma not necessary) "

Story issues: Your story was basically three paragraphs you rushed through without bothering to build a coherent or involving story. You rip off other stories and expect us to treat it like PotM material because you spent two hours on it.

Wording: "The music is supposed to make people go so crazy as to attempt to kill themselfs," (sic)

I would type out the other issues, but in all seriousness, I refuse to spend more time critiquing a story than an author spends writing it so here's my advice, instead of shit-posting a pointless blog, why don't you sit down and try to improve your story? Take it to the writer's workshop, sit down and try to improve it rather than blaming other people when they point out the obvious issues...

Final side note, categories like: "Horror, Scary, Creepypasta, Project, psychotic project, Death, Coincidence, are not viable categories. If I didn't know any better, I would assume you didn't bother to read out site rules and are now throwing a temper-tantrum when someone calls you on your laziness. I'm sorry but your story had no redeemable qualities and at its best seemed like a rip off of science pastas like "The Russian Sleep Experiment" that you decided against creating an involving/interesting story for.