Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25361316-20141108230948/@comment-25361316-20141109000532

Thanks Jay. I was actually a little worried that the twist might be too obvious but I didn't realize it was as predictable as that ;-___- I got into a groove of writing that character so I figured I might as well roll the dice with it. Still, if anything there's a lesson there about keeping people's plot expectations in mind given the site on which the story appeared. I dunno if I'll try to reinstate the story but I think I'll keep working with this character. Ben Columbus (goes by Benji) feels like the right name for him for some reason. Again, thanks for the input.