Talk:Daddy's Little Princess/@comment-11345660-20160111033818/@comment-11345660-20160117203635

I'm just offering some constructive criticism. I realize you worked hard on this and you want that struggle to be appreciated, but while I do--I really do!!!--I look at the writing first and I gave you my nitpicks. I don't want you to take this as an attack on your writing side (as this other guy was doing, which I find quite unprofessional and rude). I want you take it as one reader's opinion. You don't have to agree. It just would be great to consider it. And to be clear, I like this story! I think it's very interesting! And I am looking forward to what you have for us next. But I think criticism is part of the process.