Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27941134-20160309214835/@comment-24101790-20160310001649

""Sup, Eric." Mitch said.", ""Hey, Eric." I said.", etc. as you're continuing the sentence. You also forget to space after using periods a number of times. "beginning.My name is", "drove off.I planned to explore around", "house."Sup,"" etc.

"the ride to north (North) LA to south (South) LA took about 30-45 minutes" As directional regions are treated as proper nouns. ""Um, Dan? do (Do) you have anything to eat?"". Additionally, the original version posted randomly capitalized words (just something to keep an eye out on.) (Like: ""Sorry, Liz, All I have are some chips, but those are for me.""