Talk:One Last Test/@comment-5733573-20180516040504

This is a fun one, and very scary. I liked the idea and the visuals a lot.

Your descriptions tend to be a little awkward. There are several places where you use a lot of words to convey what you could with one or two. For example: a simple handshake doesn't need that much language.

Apart from that, though, I really enjoyed this. It's nightmare-inducing.