Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-6591982-20141016124321/@comment-6591982-20141017033000

Ruleofnine wrote: I feel like whenever I comment on anything I always say "This was interesting." or some variation of the phrase. So I will get to that.

This was interesting I enjoyed it, and to be 100% honest if you slapped a period at the end of that final 'utterance' I would not in the slightest be surprised if you called that the end. Mainly because a lot of creepypastas do that, and sometimes it works. Not saying you should do that, but that is a spin you could try. Well maybe if it wasn't a dream.....unless all of it was a dream "MIND BLOWN" but I digress.

If he had actually found the house and it wasn't in a dream, then it ended I feel like it the choice of ending their could have its own deeper meaning. So in conclusion, it was quite interesting as per my trade mark, and I would like to read the conclusion at some point. First off; thank you very much for the feedback! It is so hard to actually get feedback from intelligent people these days and i really apprciate it.

And as far as the ending goes, i actually do have my ending planned out, which could be bad, but theres a lot of subliminal messages within the story itself already which will be realized once i have written the whole story. I'm aiming for the mind blowing ending and hope i get that effect.

Now the problem is ive been working on it for 2 months or so now, so im not to sure when my final product will be posted, but hopefully it will be finished within the month.

Again thank you and I hope you read the story when it is complete!