Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24768939-20140403082514/@comment-9780519-20140415164239

So the guy who adopted her, you know the guy that was legally established as her guardian, found out about her death through the news. Then Tammi's return just seemed so random. Tammi was there, she was bloody, and she had a *wait for it* chainsaw! And this has nothing to do with the story, but I'd scrap the picture. Having a picture with MSPaint blood stains drawn on it looks super-cheesy. Oh yeah, and the proverbial "if you don't want this happening to you" ending.