Talk:The Origin of Laughing Jack/@comment-24963841-20141021135341

I wouldn't consider this cannon with the original story for a couple of reasons, 1 the deaths don't at all match what happened and 2 in the original he seemed (to me at least) to be targetting the father in the original. Other than that the tale is good. If you changed Jacks name and remove inaccuracies like the adrenaline shot it would be much better in my oppinion. Final score 7/10