Talk:The Last Day of October/@comment-25941663-20150426171609

This was more of an introduction to a novel that a creepypasta. I don't know how to feel about that.

If I was to judge it as a creepypasta, it wouldn't be good, to be honest. You give us an insane amount of backstory/lore in the first half, while the second half isn't that creepy.

But if I am to judge it as an intro to a novel, it would be fantastic. It certainly got me interested and I would really want to know more about the world.

Sorry, I couldn't be of much help, I haven't read anything like that in the wiki. If you wanted this to be an intro of sorts to a larger series of stories, it is very good. If not, it needs work I'm afraid.

PS: I like how you toned down the fancy wording in this story.