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Not bad, not bad at all. You have the facts for good horror. You deliver them neatly. The idea is good, and it hasn't been done to death.

I don't know who "I" is. I feel young, but not gender. Not enough emotional reaction. I think if you had subtle clues to gender and then had a reply that is appropriate it would deliver emotion. A girl may show embarrassment and outrage. A guy is more likely to have rage and a desire to break the pervert's face. Either way, make us FEEL it. Explore your own feelings, and use those emotions.