Talk:The Cabin with the Red Light/@comment-35711173-20190401230931/@comment-5170510-20190402024905

I mentioned her blouse later on, but indeed maybe more description of her clothing would make sense. You sound pretty experienced and knowledgable, I just write from the gut really so I guess this all makes sense to me subconsciously even though, if asked, I probably couldn't prompt these points.

I'll look into those tools, a writer must always work to improve!