Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44482918-20200205062759

I have a plot here for a story that I need feedback

after not being eaten for 3 decades  all the vegetables rise up and fight humanity here is a sene of that

"sir"screamed the private disparate for an answer but there was no answer then he heard it he was not alone in this bunker he picked up his gun.

He ran towards  the safe room but then it lashed out at him pulling out his knife the private stabs the corn in the back the veggie falls to the ground and stays there.

The private breaths a sigh of relief and opens the safe door just to be attacked by 25 peppers hiding the safe room. 