Talk:Nana Razor/@comment-24304936-20140618123436

I too, apologize for the length of time it took to get back to you. Also, in the future, leave your signature on people's talk pages.

Now, onto what I thought.

First, I fixed a few errors I noticed. Nothing major, just some light spelling issues as well as some fixes to your phrasing.

The story itself, while not the next Stephen King short-story, was a cool read. I liked the twist at the end; the fact that Nana used Robyn as her sort of "minion" made it a bit of a surprise. You were able to draw me into Ally's peril, and I actually was rooting for her toward the end. It made it that much more upsetting that she had to disappear, but well, this is creepypasta. Good mix of drama and horror. I liked what you did with this.

6.7/10