Talk:Not Myself/@comment-29528783-20161217171127/@comment-28266772-20161219092624

The m4r tag referred to you not capitalising the title correctly. I decided to leave this story up after reviewing it because it had decent prose and I didn't see the ending coming, but next time please paste your story in using source mode and double check your story after posting to make sure its formatted correctly.

Also, from a stylistic point of view, tone down the ellipses. This many are sheer overkill.