Talk:Rain Will Surely Fall/@comment-24077689-20140407201044

The writing here is sound, with a few mistakes here and there. But I don't get this, it seems more like a purely shock piece, no real plot taking place. Just grotesque details as entropy crumbles. And I guess I kind of dig that, but it's not good enough to be interesting other than a gross-out.

Which is unfortunate because I love the image you create "rain will surely fall" is a fabulous image. It's just that the rest of the piece doesn't stack up.