Talk:The Fear Hormone/@comment-24040907-20140410033813

I'm going to say "well-written" but I don't mean it in the same way as the others. I'm beginning to believe you may know German grammar or even speak German, because this story is written in the very same way it would be had it actually been translated from German to English. There was a distinct Germanic style there, especially the kind exhibited in world war 2.

However, the grammar wasn't nearly the best part. The story itself was a fresh twist on a generic genre (a genre that I adore, by the way) it's always interesting to read stories about the mysterious experiments of the two world wars.

However I did have a giggle at two things:

1. The photograph of the test room had to have been taken when the Americans discovered it in 1944 like the story says. That's a pretty high quality picture for a '44 camera ; )

2. The Nazi Doctor said "What did we do to deserve God's vengeance?" Really? Really.

Anyways, lovely read; 8.09/10