Talk:Wear/@comment-33409403-20171026015111/@comment-33409403-20171026201953

I rushed out the ending. I think I'm going to add a bit more detail. So basically I didn't specify that the monster had run to the door to comfort Sarah after fatally wounding Tom. The line where he says that Max is his son was originally supposed to be literal (kinda like the twist in The Gift) but it seemed too cheezy for a short story, so now it's somewhere in-between. Whether Max is the monster's son or not doesn't matter, but if Max is the monster's son this is how it plays out in my head: The monster takes Tom's form when he's away at work and rapes Sarah (I didn't want to write that shit). Instead I made it more like the monster toying with Tom's head.