Talk:As the Rain Falls/@comment-24207890-20141023045242

I'm really glad I found this pasta so soon after you apparently posted it.

This particular pasta reminds me of one of those unnatural disaster movies you might see like The Day After Tomorrow. It's written well enough that I'm able to suspend my disbelief and wonder, "what if?" And my acceptance of this reality makes it scary.

It's short and devoid of detail that would make it great. It's really good for a short blurb and a starting point, but I'd love to see you write more detail-oriented works in the future, if for no other reason than to see if you're a great writer or a blurber. After that, you can pretty much write what you want with an iron-clad reputation.

I didn't notice too many blatant grammatical or spelling errors. The format is also clean for the most part.

I definitely read worse on this site. Really nice job.

7.5/10