Talk:The Cropping of Life/@comment-26007602-20151210062724/@comment-26326346-20151211064023

Yeah, I can agree with that and get your point. I'll see if I can't come up with a bit more hesitance and inner turmoil for Richard at the start of the story.

I'll see about about toying with the description as Richard runs through the cornfields. This story was a bit of a quick write and came to me all at once and I feel like the description suffered a bit as a result. It took me two writing sessions to write this (around 4 hours) which is really short for what it usually takes me to write.

As for the alien culture, well, I might elaborate more on that in the sequel. The main focus is what happens when someone "wins" against the Uventral and let me tell you, it isn't pretty. Their culture is a sick and twisted one, but their logic is very different from ours as well.

Thank you for reviewing this per my request! I'm glad that you found the read to be a good one :)