Talk:The Expressionless/@comment-26100710-20160619070255

It could have been creepy. As if, it's like an attempt at a very short story that falls flat. I like the idea, but the delivery is just....Lacking. It's hard to really be bothered or unsettled about anything because you know absolutely nothing about any of the characters, so it's like well, damn. Sucks those dudes died but...I wasn't attached.