Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-23872426-20150304203858

Greetings! I'm Typing Penguin, and I am here of course to get you to read my story Anesthesia, which is my most recent tale. I wrote the story a few months ago and have been anxiously waiting for opinions on it, however I've only gotten one serious review and that was when it was in the writers workshop. It would be of great help to me if I got some more critique on the story, as I'm about to start up yet another story.

The story is about a man named Elliot who has underwent a simple operation that requires him to be put under anesthesia. When awakes he finds himself in a dark, nightmarish realm that seems void of anything except for a strange camp where he is subjected to cruel punishments and huanting figures for reasons unkown to him. 