User blog comment:Bella1115/About Me/@comment-28428152-20180416061153

Welcome to the party! Damn, how many people stumbled into this community during middle school (I did myself back in 2013). And for what it is, I'm Scared Mommy was a pretty solid first story. Writing does take some time to really hone down the craft, and even then you're still always improving. I would suggest watching Terrible Writing Advice to help you get some insight into what makes good writing.