Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-39934715-20190706161054/@comment-35711173-20190706194442

Hi, I will give you some corrections of English errors.


 * Me and my brothers' bicycles wear in direct view now.


 * I and my brother's bicycles were in direct view now.

Although I would shorten it to the simpler and clearer


 * Our bicycles were in direct view now.


 * I went online and searched for poland paranormal legends.


 * I went online and searched for Polish paranormal legends.

This means paranormal legends of the nation of Poland.


 * There, laying in a sitting position between six jars of jam, was the scarecrow.


 * There, lying in a sitting position between six jars of jam, was the scarecrow.