Talk:Alone in the Void/@comment-5619531-20141005161747

After reading this, I think this is alright.

One thing that I noticed was when you talked about the food. In the beginning the narrator says he went without food for weeks, but in the fifth paragraph he talks about being force-fed. I don't know how long the narrator has been in this void, and neither does anyone else who reads this. But the thing that'll pop up in peoples' minds are "Wait... he said he didn't eat for weeks, but he was force-fed?"