Talk:The Witch & The Fatso/@comment-25941663-20161005130856

This was an exceptional read. I loved it from beginning to end. Particularly the first half. I don't think I've read such a portrayal of a witch before. Demented, crazy and talkative. A scary combination. Her dialogue was top-notch work, chilling stuff. Honestly, you hit every mark when writing her dialogue. Personality, tone, volume, attitude, disposition. It was all so vivid, like it was happening right in front of me. I'm in awe.

I could go on and on about that half, but I would run out of superlatives. All you need to know is that I found it perfect.

The second half started of great. The conversation in the car was fascinating, and again you gave the witch a unique voice. Thoroughly enjoyable, that part was. The background info given there was paced well too, and it piqued the reader's curiosity and interest. It's exactly how background should be laid out.

The twist that the girl would eat the witch too surprised me. Then the ending came, and boy was that creepy. Great descriptive work to make it all click to really punch it in. Great finale, great buildup and overall great story.

A fantastic read, one of my favourites. Well done.