User blog comment:Astro-chan/RANT: They deleted my story/@comment-6548012-20150901102931

I have read the pasta too. I couldn't read after the first paragraph, then I just rushed it, rushed it like your writing, it seems. One, the text is way too big and dark gray on a black background, plus there are just, all the clichés, and it keeps on painfully going, and you know everything that's happening, and the only thing that scares you in the story is that there is any more stereotypes to be confronted to after. I'm sorry to be harsh, and maybe you'd even consider me rude, but that's what it is.

Good fiction is hard to write, yes. But you're rewarded if you take that time to bring new ideas, I know this won't be easy and it will keep getting harder, but instead of acting angry and pissed off and just completely ranting about anything, you could have written a premise for a better story. Plus, the sole idea of writing blood in crimson red is just horrendous.

If you want to make the administrators react, write something with so many details and so rarely flaws that administrators won't have anything to say about it. I can't believe I have to explain that, when I haven't written a creepypasta ever, and I've thought about it for years without doing so.