Talk:The Magician's Escape/@comment-5374729-20150713022512

Ending is a bit abrupt and not that well telegraphed. If strange things had been happening during the game (like the narrator's friends becoming more aggressive in their actions and speech as the game continued, suggesting the monsters they were playing were taking control), or even some strange visions/sounds, it would have strenghtened the idea of the haunted game more. Good premise, though.