Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20190418144550/@comment-35711173-20190420013055

Solonor1987,

Did you click on the "Check" button?



Each check program has advantages and disadvantages. Scribens detects run-on sentences. You have far too many.

All proofing tools like https://www.scribens.com/ will do is tell you what sentences you need to fix. Even if you don't have any access to any such apps, you can fix your story. The mistakes are very obvious. The link below explains your problems.

https://thinkwritten.com/punctuating-dialogue/