Talk:The Country Road/@comment-27593652-20170222143053

Well... not sure what to say. It would be a pretty good story, but it kinda feels rushed, i really didn't care for the protagonists, since i never had to know them. Also, a couple of quotation marks are missing. The story has an interesting and relatable introduction, but stuff goes downhill from there. With a rework this could be a really scary story, but the fast pace doesn't really bring much to the story itself.

Overall, i can't say this is a bad story, you clearly put effort into it and are trying to correct your mistakes.

Pretty "Meh" pasta, but i appreciate the effort, 6/10.