Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28428152-20181023045654/@comment-9041013-20181023103228

So, you wrote chapter Seventeen at the top there...

Anyway, it's good... I have nothing to complain about, the story is consistent and it just progresses properly. If it were on Reddit, it'd be the only series I'm reading. Everything seems in place. Now you've presented us with an interesting plotpoint. One has to look into the Book of Agony to get the shits, what happens if they dont? There is a clear end to the Nameless' patience. What happens if you somehow avoid reading the book until he gets tired of you? (Could serve as a good future comedic story tbh).

Anyways, there's like a couple of punctuation errors but that's about it.

I shall be waiting for the next chapter of my book to unfold, from within the shadows, young one.