Talk:Empty/@comment-24655685-20140311025955

Okay I read both and they both had their good qualities and bad. This one I was able to feel alot of emotion which I liked but at some points in the story I was very confused as to what was happening where as in the other version I knew what was going on due to the great amount of detail into it. If you are able to combine both great detail and the heartbreaking emotion into one story it would be a 10/10 in my book :3 Happy Writing lol