Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33937557-20180617200122/@comment-35711173-20180618170554

SoDaft Potato wrote: DrBobSmith wrote: Yeah! That's getting more like it! Do I take this as a sign, o Wise One, that you liked my edits? I think you can improve it still but we have creepiness.

Edit mercilessly. If anything that is three words can be simplified to two then do it. If an idiom is unusual or generational tben rewrite it. Then make sure the grammar is perfect.