Talk:Knock, Knock, Knock/@comment-26030957-20150124045016

I am a big fan of short and micro pasta. I believe that extremely short work lends itself very well, and in some way even defines the art of pasta; but, I can't help but to feel that this one just fell flat. Personally, I just think there has to be a little more: a hook, whether it is a great character or place or even narrative gimmick.

 In the end this piece had a nice tone and there were no spelling or grammar mistakes (big pet peeve of mine-people please proof read) but it just left me wanting more, and frankly, feeling a little cheated.

Unfortunately I was unable to get the video to play, (internet time has run down: my son just down loaded a game called  The Awakening of Ctchulhu, the apple doesn't fall far from the tree)  as I do really love the multi media elements of pasta, I will try to view it later.