Talk:A Forgotten Soul/@comment-9089721-20131104045435

This story is actually quite well written, sure there are some wording errors in places but that doesn't matter. It's the story quality that does. I enjoyed reading this and I like that it actually has a genuinely creepy part nearer the end with the blackened Tom Nook following the player with the scratching sounds and such.

I would rate this pasta a solid 4/5 as It is enjoyable to read, it's well written and has a well played  progressively creepy atmosphere.