Talk:Penpal/@comment-3541151-20141230001131

It was well written. I like the characters, stories intertwining, mysteries and development. That said....

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STOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I know the critics like it, I know through their powers combined they made a novel about it, but Fuck. It. Anyways. ALL that build up, all that story telling, really good story telling by the way, led to a story we all... HEARD  BEFORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And I hear you, the writing IS good, the story IS engaging, but all that matters is what the fuck it wraps up to. If I told the story and ended it with, his childhood favorite show stalked and murdered his friends, that would still be a shitty wrap up and ruin the story. It would actually be better, but when you end something good, in a TERRIBLE way, you ruin the whole experience. Who would by the book, the story can only drag at this point. I was gonna give this a good rating if it had anything creative at the end, but even the parting words SUCK 5/10