Board Thread:Writer's Showcase/@comment-6822927-20190324172709/@comment-6822927-20190325033609

NedWolfkin wrote: I mean there is no excuse for disrespecting his mother. Anyway he is disrespecting Winslow behind his back which is just as bad as being disrespectful to his face.

As for making it longer, I strongly advise against it. As Bloody and I have said, this story is already longer than it has to be. You did notice how his mother doesn't really give a damn about him? He also drops the being disrespectful to Winslow thing pretty fast.

How long do you think this story should even be? There's a lot here I really like and wanna explore, but I should probably stick with a single concept and plant the seeds for those later ideas.