Talk:The City from the Depths/@comment-14341590-20140524193714

Not bad. I was really impressed with the direction you took this pasta. I found the story interesting, there were a few errors. Then again, we are all make errors/mistakes. So... don't worry about that. I'd have to give this a high-rating. It suceeded in a compelling story with great build-up.

RATING:

8.5/10