Talk:Hung, Drawn and Quartered/@comment-29507836-20160923130520

Loved it! The use of the first cliche was outstandingly executed, and I loved the way you expressed the emotions of Aldus. It felt real, and I am fascinated with the effect it had on me, the reader. I saw a few errors, but nothing to be too noticeable to really matter and affect the story. Overall, it was a great story. 8/10