Talk:The Gym Teacher/@comment-25024572-20150503214607

This story is...interesting. It's well written and has interesting characters and a surprising twist (also, the "Clown Dogs" reference was kind of cute). However, it also kind of grossed me out, for lack of a better term, on occasion. I don't know, reading about some kid jerking off to corpses, necrophilia, or things of that nature just isn't my cup of tea (and probably would've made me put down any cup of tea I had been drinking). That being said, I think that disturbing/grossing out the readers was the point of that, so I shouldn't complain.

Now, the twist was pretty unique, since I kind of figured from the beginning that Mr. Kirby was the killer, though it feels like it kind of came out of nowhere. Also, the explanation seemed a bit weak (though maybe I misunderstood it). So because the teacher was into very depraved types of sex, he became a werewolf? Ok. Odd, but ok.

However, I do think this story is good. The main character, while a bit bratty on occasion, is still well-written and understandable. None of the characters feel flat or underdeveloped, and are, like most everything else in the story, well-written. The plot is interesting, and does throw in a few twists (like the one I previously mentioned) that don't feel Shamayalan-esque. Really, this story is good. It's also weird and kind of gross, but it is good.