Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33904527-20191208013000/@comment-33904527-20191225231518

BloodySpghetti wrote: I don't see much of a point to the closing statement really, it doesn't add anything for me. The revalantion of this being a dream is a good enough ending as it is. It's very lackluster as it is, it either negates the previous statement, "you better wake up" or just sticks out like a sore thumb. Was this a dream or not? This question isn't one of interested wondering, it's more of a questioning of your endgoal as the writer, at least from me. You seem to be missing the underlying theme of the pasta. Try to take a step back and look at it a little less literally.