Talk:A Deck of Cards/@comment-25941663-20150126221101

I really enjoyed this piece, despite disliking the ritual-pasta genre. I liked the attention to detail you put in this, congrats for that.

If I were to give some criticism, it would be that the last few paragraphs don't really fit in (the ones about the narrator's own experiences). It is a nice touch, but it feels out of place. I would have preffered it if the story just ended there, without the additional personal details of the narrator.

Anyway, that was very good. Well done.