Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26475800-20151011060730/@comment-4893169-20151013062349

Okay, well, here's my very small review. Aside from a few grammatical errors, it has good potential. Like SoPretentious and others state, you need to build up a little more suspense. Maybe take out the bit about the Haitian zombies and focus more clearly on the main character's role and thoughts in this apocalyptic crisis.