Talk:Clock Tower/@comment-27971822-20160508113311

First of all:

Gore doesn't make a story scary. OK? get it? Good.

Second of all:

What in the world happened? They just simply turned into Zombies? Keeping some things secret is OK, but you should at least give us some information to work on.

Third of all:

No grammar mistakes at first glance. So kudos.

OK. That's all i have to say.

if you really want to write good creepypasta these rules (especially the first one) are a must.

If you want more advice, go read some good creepypasta for inspiration. Good luck