Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25763427-20150817145329/@comment-25037895-20150822000605

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"have forgotten the fight me and her (her and I) had on Friday."

"raccoon who must had (have) gotten"

I think the storyline works well, but it could use some more events, it seems a bit rushed and the plot is a bit predictable.