Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27007772-20140924023138/@comment-27007772-20140927213652

The Cyborg Pie wrote: Huh. A bit brief. Maybe more suspense, or a reason, or childhood memory etc. to give possibilities or explanations some context? This is 1/5th of the full pasta. The full story is available on my profile, under "Horror Revised" (Scroll the the bottom). It addresses the issues you pointed out.