Talk:The Number of Darkness/@comment-26112985-20150729021510

Woah... as usual I find myself pretty blown away by your work Humboldt. I found this pasta to be a great addition to your steadily rising collection of stories (The Long List is still my favorite though).

I loved the characters in this pasta. They were very beleiveable and real, especially that of the reverend (probably because he is a real person, Hello BlackNumber). Even if what they were doing was wrong in some cases, you could still understand them, which is great.

You did a great number of things right. It has a great plot, the research is spot on and its extremely well written as a whole.

One thing that kind of bothered me was the ending though, not because it was bad, but because I wanted more, and felt it was a little abrupt.

Other than that, this is really awesome stuff. You're such a talented writer, and for that I give you a solid 8.5/10.