Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5321651-20150125235547/@comment-26030957-20150127044912

I personally thought it was great and way better than a lot of pasta you see out there. What was good about it? It fits the creepy pasta genre in that it is "found" evidence. It was mysterious with no real answers. It was violent and even gory but never gratuitously so. Spice it up with some gnarly pictures. Man, if you made a video to go with it, it would be really hot stuff. Classic pasta in my opinion, just needs an iconic picture to go with it.

As for grammar, it seemed pretty tight. There are some compound sentences that could use a semi-colon; but, you know, that is often an optional style thing.

Let me know on my talk when you post it-

HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 04:49, January 27, 2015 (UTC)