Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25269564-20181112121018/@comment-33904527-20181112190218

Honestly, it's more than a little clichéd. I sort of hoped it might pick up towards the end, but it didn't. There really isn't much originality in a story about a man who kills some people for no reason. It feels more like a cheesy slasher from the 90s rather than a creepypasta. There's no real character development, it's not that scary, and the plot is too simple.

If I had to give any positive feedback, I would say that at least you bothered to make the spelling and grammar accurate.