Talk:Did You Fall?/@comment-25458443-20150225225009

This sorta shit always bugs me in stories and I was pleasantly surprised to see someone actually do it WELL.

Most people use "What if you are dying" As a sort of cheat. A free card to scare more jittered readers unlike myself.

But you took the concept and exeuted it in such a way that it actually reminded me of back when I first read on of these annoying tropepastas.

So kudos to you, for a GOOD story, about asking reader how dead they are.

7/9