Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26011836-20170701180236/@comment-4849011-20170710223540

Pros- I think the first paragraph works well at setting the scene. I also like the crunching sound effect used for the statue turning its head and the description of its/her neck angle.

Cons- The end feels abrupt. A vague ending works well at times, but I think this comes across as a little too sudden and vague (That's just me, though).