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 * 1/ Penpal (By )
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 * 2/ He Was a New Man (By )
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 * 3/ Finally Awake (By )
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 * 4/ Ad Nauseam, Ad Mortem, Ad Infinitum (By EmpyrealInvective)
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 * 5/ The Shadow Girl (By )
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 * 6/ To Kill It (By )
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 * 7/ Innocent Souls (By )
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 * 8/ Flower Eyes and Needle Teeth (By )
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 * 9/ I Think My Son Is Going to Kill Himself (By )
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 * 10/ Emily's Basement (By )
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 * 11/ Fog (By Josef K. )
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 * 12/ Nana Razor (By )
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 * 13/ Scenes from a Metropolitan Garbage Truck (By )
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 * 14/ The Light and the Little (By )
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 * 15/ The Baseball Boy (By )
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 * 16/ Out with a Bang (By )
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 * 17/ Comfort in Numbers (By )
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Rating Info
Scare Factor Overall creepiness, depending on the atmosphere, setting, tone, concepts involved, and originality.

Transition A rating of the pace, timing, and sentence flow. Missing context will negatively impact this rating.

Composition While figuring this rating, I consider if there is realistic concepts/events; and whether they fit in with the storyline, or seem out of place. Also I consider if they are distinct; and whether they draw interest, or fall flat.

Description A rating of how well the characters/events are described. Going overboard in imagery (commonly, with adverbs) will negatively impact this writing. Not giving enough details, when not leaving suspense, will negatively impact this rating also.

Conclusion A rating of how well the conclusion fits with the rest of the story. If the ending is too abrupt, predictable, or drawn out, it negatively impacts this rating.

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