User blog comment:Hetabites/A review for; Crescent Forest/@comment-25037895-20150616025911

Your review was spot-on. Well done. Looking back, the dogs seem a little out-of-place in the storyline. When I was writing, I was trying to make it seem as though a "red-flag" about the stranger that the travelers noticed but ignored. The names of the dogs, also, were supposed to stand out, and hopefully enough to start the reader wondering about what is exactly going on with this stranger (and his animals). It was one of my first stories, though. Thanks for reading.