Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26479942-20150609134554/@comment-25466944-20150611175831

What? I don't get it, what's creepy about this, he just says  he's schizophrenic and it just ends. It needs to be longer, maybe you could make the poem about the experiences of schizophrenia. That could work. If you do plan to do this, then you need to do some research on what being schizophrenic is actually like.