Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26581765-20150707055637/@comment-26581765-20150707073841

One word for all that: Understood. I totally understand this and what I could've done to make it better. I do have to say though, this is a bit frustrating, and of course it is. I know, I am asking a lot of questions, but how could I incorporate his backstory without focusing on him? This confuses me, since Jeff the Killer seemed focused on to me.