Talk:Breath/@comment-27893643-20161213155249/@comment-27893643-20171027000659

Actually no. If done right, adding more would have actually been creepy. If there was more to back up this concept, if there was more elements included. Hell it doesn't even need characters or a plot. Ever heard of such stories as "You're Not Scared Right?" or "The Diary of Mr. Welldone". Those had no clear characters. There was no plot. But they're still scary. Why? Because the writers actually put enough in to creep out the reader. This does nothing. Besides this isn't even a story. It doesn't have enough elements to be considered a story. So no, this isn;t just because "it's a micropasta". Micropastas still have enough substance to be considered stories.