Talk:12 Minutes/@comment-25037895-20150506222842

I think this article should be unprotected, as it needs slight fixes still.


 * 1) There is no punctuation on any of the quotes. When speakers are paraphrased, or directly quoted, there should be commas before and at the end (or a period at the end.)
 * 2) There is numbers in place of written out words. The channel name and dates should stand out from references like, "20 minutes".
 * 3) after the studio cancelled Reverenced Sachs' show and had already begun to fade| This sentence is in the past tense, like the whole story is, so, "begun" should be changed to "began". Begun should be used for something that is happening in the present. Example: The games began. The games have begun.
 * 4) He made copies of as many tapes as he could before they were wiped and took them to see if he could find anything else in them that might to point to who did this or why they would.| Wording issue. The second "to" should be removed, and there is a missing comma.