Talk:Ronald McDonald House/@comment-29992049-20160917111722

Fuck this story, fuck the people who are "lovin it" (pun intended) and fuck the author.

Ok maybe not the author and the lovers of the story but seriously FUCK this story. This is a non-coherent piece of shit that people seriously need to reread to see how utterally STUPID it is. Let's just start with the dumbest thing in the story, though there are WAY MORE stupid things in this story than just this.

The caseworker herself says that she has had a few cases with The Ronald McDonald house before, then when the main character enters in he finds out that they killed her. Thing is though. SHE SHOULD OF ALREADY BEEN KILLED! Why the hell was it when he goes in that she dies. Obviously all the kids that go in there have to "not exist" yet she knows all about them. It's BULLSHIT if the reason why is that they have a number of kids till they kill the case workers because the families ALSO were killed along with them.

Of course I have more to put in like the stupid time travel shit. The laptop working in the rain so this person could a crappy story. The fact that this was pretty much taking most of it's ideas from Abandoned by Disney. The fact that they just had to have a creature that was basically their version of Photo-Negitive Mickey. There is SOOOOOOOO much wrong with this stupid story, and the thing is people like it, which I'm fine with people liking it, but the fact is people are giving it 10/10s this deserves to BURN and be put in Crappypasta, thing is though it was written ok so 2/10 with me being nice.