Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35711173-20180714055429/@comment-34823985-20180714071906

Hey, this works. The twist was pretty creepy. Why'd ya have to kill me, man? Being as this is the WW, I'd like to get a bit critical, but I got nothing.

However, it might be interesting as a writing exercise (we all want to get better, right?) to try writing this in third person to see what you come up with. Dialogue, gorey details, and all that jazz.

I do it quite often, and sometimes I surprise myself. Categories... hmmm... got nothing, so I guess weird will work.