Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24982950-20141205164752/@comment-24101790-20141206125312

The Cyborg Pie wrote: Ummm. I don't think fleshing out is a phrase. These are meant to be a series of some shorts with a few long stories to accompany them. I keep meaning to add more stories and sand off any rough edges. About the speech...(Ha!) This formatting can be a real pain, they are meant to be on separate lines. Yeah the 2nd perpective thing looks like its based on your opinion so...(Ha!) I think I'll keep it.

So yeah. Yours, TheCyborgPie

To flesh out something is actually an [idiom meaning to add more content or detail into something.

As for second person perspective being problematic, it looks like I'm not alone in my criticism of using it in a story.

I like how you just disregarded all advice and chose to ignore the issues with ellipses and punctuation or even attempt to fix the formatting issue by simply adding a few spaces. (Why even make a post on the writer's workshop then?) If you don't want to improve your story that's fine, just don't assume it will be accepted onto the wiki anytime soon.