Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-38762367-20190310005945/@comment-36815674-20190310062026

Ok so the story was good over all. I give it a 10/10 for being good.

Now for being a CP in my book 2/10 I didn't get any kind of creepy factor out of it.

It needs more what's the word, POP to it. Needs more meat to it to make it more creepy, scary, teeth chattering etc.

Take this with a grain of salt. A lot of stories these days are not as creepy, scary etc compared to the ones back then. I'm not sure if new authors are out of ideas because all the good ones are gone or what. Stick with it and add to the story to make it work.

I'm sure someone else will come on here and say one of two things, it was ether scary as hell to them or they will agree with me. Build onto what you have now.

I hope to come back and see what you have done with story.