Talk:The Harbinger Experiment/@comment-29597457-20160816091121

Sub par writing, unimaginative premise.

I don't doubt the writer, assuming they continue(d) writing, will get better and make interesting stuff. But there's sooo much better literature and significantly better Creepypasta than this.

It wasn't totally bad though. I made it to the end without much more than a nod to the repetitive use of words within the same sentence.

Also to respond to the person in the comments; No, this shouldn't be compared to operation Stingray, because that pasta is infinitely worse.