Talk:Can You Help Me Find My Cat?/@comment-27415978-20170907005035

Here's how I'd make this story creepy.

"As she turned to look at me, I saw a grin splitting her face. Her cheeks were violently perforated by holes that were filled with reddened ice. Her teeth were jagged and clear, as if made of glass. She told me everything that would happen in my life, and as she did so, I felt true fear as the apparition told me my worst fears and my worst failures, and every detail. As I stood there and listened, the background changed as the story went on. As she finally finished, I found myself awake, at home.

I looked to my feet and saw a small kitten mewling at me. The window suddenly flew open, and the cat leapt from the bed, into the night.

Can you help me find my cat?"