Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20180905233106/@comment-35711173-20180905235950

I agree, make it into a poem. It feels to me far more like a poem than a story.

Either that or have Mars or some other war god personified doing the thinking, perhaps talking about when war was between a few hundred men who faced each other, smelled each other, etc.

But it does feel a lot closer to poetry than anything else.