Creepypasta Wiki talk:Deleted Page/Jeff the Killer/@comment-24067318-20131103011501

I used to think that image was awesome and it always made me jump when I saw it.

This story shit all over that. It's great you guys like it and all, but holy shit this is some lame ass writing. The grammatical errors, the super battling 13 year olds with guns ripping a house apart and killing each other while one could only assume the parents and younglings stood around, the lack of any sense of how law enforcement and the judicial system works, Jeff being of the Mary-est Sues I've ever read about, which goes great with the oodles of edgy violence and angst that composes this whole story.

Not for me at all.