User blog comment:Eyelessjack1080/Goals/@comment-24101790-20160708040438

Just a few tips, building an OC or self-inserting is almost always a terrible idea. Feel free to look over this guide for a more in-depth analysis of the issues of building a character first and a story later.

I'll only mention that your previous story featuring Discord was deleted for having a lot of cliches involving CPC stories (bullied protagonist "We played all sorts of games. “Force Larry into a dog cage and roll him down the stairs”, shoot at him with a bb gun for amusement”, and my personal favorite, “turn Larry into a pit dog and make him fight the other kids”, winner gets fed. They abused me for eight fucking years!", super strength "So I simply threw a chunk of cement i found in the driveway. It flew 20 feet and hit him in the back of the neck. He dropped immediately.", random cameos "You see, when that son of a butch carved out my still beating heart and offered it to that demon, zalgo. He didn’t make an offering of a sacrifice, he made an offering of a proxy, me.", etc.) I would strongly suggest getting feedback for your story before attempting to upload it.