Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25378619-20140904225230/@comment-25112831-20140905130942

ok, cool Bro, I think this story is actually pretty awesome. What I said is just advice and I'm so glad it helped but I think you were doing really well with out me so, yeah, keep writing, I look forward to seeing any other writing you do in the fututre! :3 And also, I think having a flashback to develop the character is actually a really good idea and i know what you mean by the wall of text thing :P Good shout xx i look forward to any advances in this story, good work :D Coolio x