Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-30338398-20161112165453/@comment-30338398-20161112170109

I'm sorry but I don't know how to delete a thread (If it's even possible) and I really need a review of this story fast. When I posted this story before something went wrong and the story was just one big wall of text. That's why I'm reposting it, since I don't know how to delete or edit the thread.