Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26502770-20150617190235/@comment-25037895-20150621230108

This change had a mistake. "started sweating" instead of "stared sweating".

Changes that need to made:
 * "W-Who are y-y-you(?)" daniel (Daniel) whispered
 * The first paragraph has a few sentences that need a space at the beginning.
 * breathing softly and observing The (the) night sky not taking notice that...