Talk:The Wicker House/@comment-25675554-20141113110627

This was a wonderfully-written, haunting story. I have very little in the way of constructive criticism to offer, although I would like to note that some of the adjectives that the narrator uses remove him from the role of researcher of the events and hint toward him being an active participant in the house's search. As an example, "Glistening blood dripped from the cruel altar," removes the reader slightly from their suspended disbelief, as the patrolmen would hardly have described the situation so artfully.

In the end, the story was still fantastic and I'm pulling up your next as I type this.