Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25056485-20140616015157/@comment-25050660-20140616020419

That story is so creepy. The title is creepy. The picture is even creepier. I really enjoyed your story. I liked the sarcastic replies the clown says. The part when Frederick and Robert had to kill each other just to survive was spicy, but it reminded of something from one of those SAW movies. But, I liked the clown's mantra. He and the Joker could have been brothers.

You had just enough description and dialogue to make your story alright. Good job.