User blog comment:Xxthegirlonfirexx/Don't hate. Just don't/@comment-26210788-20140417135415

This is how critics say

"You had the story make no sense and too many grammar mistakes, it fucking sucks donkey"

Now the Amneisa way (i say it a bit more nicely)

"There is a bit too much description, it also didnt excel in the spelling bee. Adam, telling by his personality, wouldnt hurt that many people." (Adam is an example)

Please reframe from using somehting along the lines of hte top line, and more of the bottom line.