Talk:The Pier/@comment-26054278-20150827002911

Wow, this works really well. I mean, you should write more poems, because I like this one a lot. Some great, great imagery is exemplified here. Even though the length of the lines varies, the poem moves along at an excellent pace. The wording and everything works very well.

Sure it isn't exactly creepy or scary, but I focus on quality over scares. Well-written and beautifully crafted stories are much better than ones that simply go for scares. Nicely done.