Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20190201203454/@comment-36815674-20190202061217

I liked the concept of the story but I felt like the beginning dragged a little to get to the point.

What if you made it instead of her scrolling, she was studying and a message popped up on her screen, like a virus or something opened the spam mail and it took off from there. Just a thought.