Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27736087-20160205011027/@comment-24101790-20160205011859

Feels like you tried to take a lost episode premise and make it a lost comic pasta. As we don't really allow lost episode pastas anymore due to the fact that they really follow generic plots and tend to focus on pointlessly injecting violence into a non-violent episode/comic. Here is a list of other content that is blacklisted for future reference.

This story doesn't really work due to its lack of description. Especially when considering the comic already has a darker story to it. I'm sorry, but if you're planning on taking this to Spinpasta or another story submission site, I would strongly recommend fleshing out this story.