Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24487239-20150127224138/@comment-24487239-20150127230506

I have no idea how I missed those obvious errors in my rhymes. Those are amatuer mistakes I made, and It is clear why it was removed now. I should have taken more time to proofread and read it aloud.

I'm very glad that you, the admin that removed it, decided to give me the specific parts you found to be not up to snuff. I really do appreciate the honesty, and you are right, poetry is not easy at all. I just learned that even if it sounds good in my mind, it really takes practice for it to be up to the quality established on the wiki.

Thankyou for your time and critique.