Talk:50 Foot Ant's Fourth Story/@comment-25214669-20150404102356

I love the series so far. It is definetly one of my favorites. This segment of it didn't really fit so much. I know it was suppose to take place between Ant's First Story and Ant's Second story. I did notice several errors, like towards the end before they are rescued, you mentioned that Shelly died, but after you kept saying he was getting better. I think you meant Artain who had a stomach wound. I am also not a fan of the lizard thing. It would be one thing if it had been brought up before, but to have it come up in this one, doesn't make a whole lot of sense. Also, the story needs to be proof-read. There are several spelling and grammatical errors. Please don't take this wrong. I am going to stop now and read number 5. Thank you.