Talk:Cure for Cancer/@comment-4828681-20150201224558

Great story, but this doesn't belong on creepypasta. There wasn't a single element about it that was scary or creepy, not to mention, when it seems like the author used an encyclopedia and/or thesaurus for every other word, it totally takes you out of the immersion of the story. Still though, it was a good read and a nice story, but belongs on a different website. 6/10