Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20190119214558/@comment-35711173-20190120020709

Solonor1987 wrote:

Well  I did a bit of pratice ,  I think its  a bit fair,  but i am still praticing  and still  want to improve it, so I am sure it would be great  after I will pratice more again.

You made about a dozen basic mistakes in your use of English. These really make it difficult to enjoy the story. We have to stop at so many errors just to figure out what you mean.

Please read Basic Spell and Grammar Checking. It is a guide to using free tools on the web.

Dr. Bob