Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5413761-20150204221140/@comment-26027963-20150210150955

I love the ending, I think it was by far a good one, but the first four paragraphs sound like the first chapter of a long novel, and I think you have the potential to be a great pasta author, but you must have the beginning start with suspension, or have the first paragraph the information that is needed to know, but I think you can have the most amazing pastas, with a little more practice, I hope you didn't take this review the wrong way, but good luck with your pasta career! :) --Love watching all of you scream, CrazyWords 15:09, February 10, 2015 (UTC)CrazyWords