Talk:Nana Razor/@comment-25326117-20150206180051

Isn't it supposed to be 'on the playground?'  Never start a sentence with 'but,' instead you should use 'however.'

'That lead to new round of beatings for her father apparently had never heard of Nana Razor.'  This may be a nitpick, but you left 'a,' which should be in the sentence as, 'That lead to a new round of beatings for her, father apparently had never heard of Nana Razor.'

'Tear that she had held back for way too long.'  I believe 'Tear' should be plural as in, 'Tears that she had held back for way too long.'

All in all, this is pretty well written. It's a lot more intense and terrifying than most Creepypastas that I have read on this website. I applaud you with your vivid imagination. I never heard of 'Nana Razor' before, but I have heard of similar boogeymen.