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I wrote a university dissertation that partly explained why Jeff the Killer ought not to work as a creepypasta. For one thing, the story ignores the time-honoured rule of 'show, don't tell' in favour of sentences like "Now he was left as a crazy killing machine, that is, his parents didn't know". For another thing, the dialogue is so unrealistic as to become unintentionally hilarious: " No one interrupts or guts will fly!"  Those are the main two points I'd fix.