Talk:MARIO/@comment-26409942-20150524222733

Really liked this one...nice pacing, nice creepy messages with a dark suicidal theme. What more does a creepy pasta need?! I agree with other comments here though....the ending should be edited as, when you read the original thread, the one with the biting nails was a completely different user jumping in with a bit of fun....and then continues to write as part of the convo in the thread later on, fully well and healthy, so it's not an 'authentic' part of the pasta.