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I'm trying to upload a creepy story unto creepypasta wiki but it says that it's blacklisted content. I don't know what I'm doing wrong here Here's the story:

Prologue
Ok, so you found your way to this story to get some kind of cheap scare. Well, thats the only reason why you people even visit scary sites like this one. Might as well give you guys a story that could scare you. Be reminded that this is my first ever creepypasta stories. As the title suggests, this story is called " The Shadows Curse. Be warned, once you read this you might want to keep your lights on or just keep your night light on. You have been warned. Oh yeah, I almost forgot to mention this is based off my "Jason Tyler and the ten runes" series that I may/may not have put out. There are some spoilers for the aftermath of the books.

The Story (Part 1)
Hello. My name is Jason Tyler. I'm a student at Endervillage High School. My friends (Jack and Matt) were always good friends of mine. They always had some good stories. After one Tuesday afternoon, Jack said "Jason, want to go to the forest outside of town?" I, of course, said "yes." When I got to Jack's house, he was waiting for me. Jack told me that Matt was already halfway to the forest when he last called. After a hefty briefing of what we were going to do at the forest, I, Jack, and Matt got all of our camping supplies (yes, we were going camping at the time), we went to a clearing in the forest. When we arrived to the clearing, it was very quiet. I mean very quiet. It was like you could hear the heartbeat of everyone there. Then the silence was broken by the sound of lightning. When the lightning stroke the place, I saw something that I could never believe. I saw my friends' eyes grow black, like the Void of space. They told me a secret. It wasn't even my friends! It wasn't even demonic or angelic. It was something called "Shadow." It told me "Jason Tyler, Time Traveler, you are cursed from the ten runes of Creation to be forever watched by the shadows." In truth, I time traveled to save my mom from hell. I never expected that the runes would curse me. I told them "Why? I just wanted my mom safe from death!" They replied "Really? Didn't you ever realize that maybe you saving your mom meant getting followed?" I told them no. "You humans will never cease to amaze the shadows on how you would risk your lives to save others." "Jason Tyler, we will inhabit these bodies without them knowing and we will watch you for the rest of time." I replied " Ok, but on one condition." They replied saying "What?" I said for them to never come out until the day my friends die. They said yes. The bad news? I can no longer feel unwatched, but I had tricked them. They didn't know that they could die from never coming out of a body after the body is killed. I couldn't die and I had a mark of a time traveler. Oh? You think the story is over? Nope.

The Story (Part 2)
After the camping trip, My friends went home feeling dizzy. I kept that secret to myself. The next day, they asked me that the camping trip wasn't cool enough and that if they wanted me to go camping again. I, again, said yes. We went back to the clearing, but what we found wasn't there before. We found a dead corpse, burnt and bloody. We were unable to move. I had seen a lot of crazy stuff in the past, but a burnt and bloody corpse wasn't one of them. I told them "I'm going to check this out, I wanna know who this guy is." Upon closer inspection, I found a note in his back pocket, and it was addressed to me! It said "Jason, dont run. My name is Kevin Andrews. I found a device that allowed me to time travel. If you found this, that means my body is kinda not alive and the device is gone. Last place I was at was inside of Aperture Labatories. I found the portal gun. Used it to get away from that godforsaken place. If it is gone, find it and use it to get out of here!" I had read the note, and turned around to see my friends tell me who was it. I replied " just an old buddy of mine from the 52nd century. I had told them that I was a time traveler because I showed them the Rune of History. Now that is another story. They said ok and we got our camping supplies up and ready. We had a great time camping, but one day, I got a phone call from Jack stating that he couldn't make it to school the next day. I asked "why?" He replied " Because someone broke into his house and murdered his little sister. I said " Hang on I'll be there!" I dug through my drawers and found my Rune of History and my Rune of Life. I went back in time to the time of the murder and found a horrid scene. No body, but blood every where. What was written in blood on the floor shocked even me. It said "Run, or they will kill you in your sleep." They? Whos "They?" I decided to ask my friend Jesus. I used the Rune of History to go back to Jesus's time to ask him something. I found Jesus at a carpenter's shop. Jesus saw me and rushed me to his home, asking " What's going on? Why are you here?" I replied saying "My friend Jack's little sister was killed and I need help." Jesus asked "You need help? Sure! What do you need help with?" I told Jesus that it would require him to come with me back to my present time for a quick run. "Ok. Just as long as I get back home ok?" I said yes. I took him back to the murder scene and he told me "Jason, this body, I cannot bring back." "Why Jesus?" "Because this body was cursed by the [Redacted]" "What?" Jesus told he to get him back home, so I did. After I got him back he told me never to let him go back to that timezone. I said yes.

The Story (Part 3)
I went back to the scene and Jack called me saying that I should get back to school at once. I had a bad feeling. When I got to school, I found a bad scene. Matt was *gulp* dead. This time, his body didn't explode. His body had a gaping hole where is heart was supposed to be. What looked like a murder, wasn't murder. I know what could do this to him. I decided to summon the Shadows. I used my phone and dialed 444-444-4444 and I got God on the phone. I told him to get me Lucifer. I wanted to talk to him. They sent my call to him and I got him. I told him " What the hell is wrong with you? Why are you killing my friends?" He told me that he or his demons wasn't doing it. So I hung up. I had one other source to check. This one I disliked the most. I had to call Slenderman. I called him up and Jeff The Killer answered. I asked "Slenderman?" "Nope, Jason. It's Jeff." "Jeff! Where's Slenderman?" "Out." "Where?" "He went home." "Jeff, listen to me. Who is killing my friends?" "Jason, I don't think you should know." "Who, Jeff, Who?" Jeff hung up the phone and at midnight, I got woken up by the police. They asked me "Why are you up at this time of night?" I told them because they woke me up. They said " Well, since your up, can you help us out?" "Sure with what?" "Someone died earlier tonight."

Story Ending Note
Sorry that I couldn't finish the story, but I will make this story into parts and I give anyone willing to make the audio for the video permission to make the video just as long as you link the story in the description and who made it. I will make more of the Shadows Curse series. I will publish the book version soon.

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Thanks for Reading!

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