Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26567235-20150702231659/@comment-26567235-20150703160412

Maybe add an introduction to why the protagonist of why he's writing this?

Hm, I'll have to look over the formatting and emotions

I don't know much about cliches of Creepypastas except for the ones told in the video by Hoodohoodlum, so I didn't know about the 'out to destroy civilization' cliche.

I'll look over the things you mentioned. May I ask, how did you feel about the image, does it add to the story, or should I get rid of it?