Creepypasta Wiki talk:Writing Advice/Unsolicited Writing Advice!/@comment-9801519-20130916003604

Good advice, but I noticed something silly:

"f I tell you a child looks dirty, you know the kid is unclean, but that's it. Now, if I tell you a child has torn, stained clothes, a face smeared with mud and they smell like piss and sweat you know the child is dirty and you have a much stronger image in your mind."

You're still using adjectives when you describe the child's clothes as muddy and his stench like piss.