Creepypasta Wiki:Deletion Appeal/Archive 7

I Am Anger
So my story I Am Anger was deleted, and I want to strongly appeal it. My story is about a new serial killer, who turns out to be anger in a form of man. Anger only comes to remove people from humanity when they get so angry they take it out on themself, others, or property. We see the story through the eyes of a victim.

I think my story should be put back up because it is honestly not a bad read. Also, not only is it not inspired by anything for once, it also follows every rule in this website. I hope you take my story into consideration. Sacrid7174 (talk) 02:19, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

They Can See You
Hello, me again, I would also like to state that two days ago (sorry for the late appeal) I made a pasta called "They can see you". It was deleted mere seconds after posting, no lie, and it was really unfair considering that it wasn't even up long enough to be read

The Black Knight Satellite
Hello, my pasta "The Black Knight Satellite" was (in my opinion) unfairly removed. I was told it did not meet quality standards and had little story. Basically, The Black Knight Satellite was a pasta I based upon a phenomenon, which had minuscule story due to the "Telephone" effect (being retold a lot, if unclear), so I stated as much story about it as I could before writing the pasta, which itself was plentiful with story. Also, it was tagged with DELETE NOW, which, after clicking, I learned was a tag reserved for "Trollpastas, spam pages, "COMING SOON" pages, and pages that violate the no-spinoff rule.", my pasta abides to the rules and is none of such pastas. --Lekar (talk) 06:40, August 28, 2014 (UTC)


 * For one, the Delete Now category is for use of any story needing deletion. Not just what's been listed.


 * For two, it's unrealistic and grammatically awkward. Humans doing things and somehow that affects the entire universe? What? Generally, also, the narrator seems detached and makes a mockery of the reader, and this is an idea that I would say, to be successful, would need a lot more elaboration and work. Dashie  ~20% Cooler~  06:45, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

The Bum Fiddler
I am here to contest the Deletion of my story, The Bum Fiddler. First of all, I followed the rules stated by this site. If deletion was because of spelling errors, then I should have been allowed a warning so that i may fix the errors, as i had set the story through a spellcheck prior to publishing and had found no errors. There was nothing in my story that was in violation of any rule that I read, and if it had been, then I require proof of said violation. I would like to hear any reasoning behind the deletion of my story, as I see it as unfair and unfounded on any set rule of creepypastawiki. On a personal note, this story took me a little over 4 hours to write and polish, and had I not accidentally left a copy of it in my word processor, those hours would have been wasted. So once again i ask for the reasoning behind the deletion of my story, and if said reason is not legitimate and founded apon the rules of this site, then i demand its undeletion.

CaspertheMighty


 * Automatically denied for failure to properly format appeal. Your pasta was deleted for failure to meet the quality standards. LOLSKELETONS (talk) 02:36, July 20, 2014 (UTC)


 * I read through your story and noticed there are still a number of capitalization (Failure to capitalize "I"), punctuation errors (issues with commas, periods missing from titles like Mr., Mrs,. Det.) typos ("Apon", "heardf", etc.), grammatical errors ("Im", not using apostrophes to indicate possession .), and wording/malapropisms. (Residing/Presiding).


 * These issues are notable, but the major issue I see is with the story itself. The story of a detective investigating a murder/series of murders has been done a number of times (see The Case of Stitch (Part 1)) and your story glosses over the details. The whole thing seems rushed and the creature's appearance comes off as anti-climactic due to a lack of description or sense of peril. Additionally the quote "Im(sic) the bum fiddler and I'm about to fiddle ya Bum(sic)!" does not really help the image of the creature as something sinister/intimidating and just comes off as comical. (I half expected him to do pratfalls as he attempted to flee) I agree with LOLSKELETONS that this story isn't up to quality standards. If you want a copy of your story back to review these errors, I can send you a copy, but as this appeal is denied, you can't re-upload the story. (If you do so, you will be given a one day ban.)


 * On a final note, I recommend using the writer's workshop for more in-depth feedback. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 02:49, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

Pocoyo - Todo termina ahora
Could I please request for this to be undeleted and then moved to the Trollpasta wiki? I would normally request for this to be fully restored, but I don't think I did such a good job on it, and TBH, it's beyond rescuing. --KoopaGalaxain (talk) 10:42, July 20, 2014 (UTC)


 * If you want to add it to Trollpasta Wiki feel free to. Here's a pastebin link: http://pastebin.com/GdTJBQmd LOLSKELETONS (talk) 11:03, July 20, 2014 (UTC)
 * Okay, thanks for the help! --KoopaGalaxain (talk) 11:11, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

The World Destroyer
My creepypasta  The World Destroyer was deleted due to being "Haunted Gaming" and "Generally not written well". The other reason it was deleted was due to being a "wall of text" which I was in the process of fixing. No offence but there are many creepy pastas on this site that have way less paragraphs and are still pretty bad stories. I believe my pasta, which I worked very hard on should be undeleted and not critequed so harshly as others have not been. DAsniper 03:42, July 22, 2014 (UTC)


 * Looking over your story, I can't help but notice punctuation (commas missing from sentences that could use a pause, quotations missing from written words "Breaking News." "Car crash." You forgot to use an apostrophe a number of times to indicate possession "friends (sic) mother" or words that are conjunctions "whats" ) grammar (it's=it is, its=possession), a number of typos.


 * Additionally there were a number of cliches in the story: "Ironically, heh that was my name." "In the game I entered the house with the gun that seemed more realistic than the actual game itself." (hyper-realism/too advanced graphics), author writing the story as he's dying (via strangulation), and a police report conclusion.


 * I have to agree with Guy's decision to delete this story. It relies on way too many cliches, has a number of grammatical, punctuation, and spelling errors. Additionally it is a haunted video game pasta which is a blacklisted subject. (Mainly due to its rampant cliches and cookie-cutter or formulaic plot.) This story really isn't up to quality standards. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 04:00, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Do you know what True Fear is?
I'm here to contest the deletion of my creepypasta 'Do You Know What True Fear Is'. I am aware that when it got deleted I made the mistake of assuming because i'd fixed things up in the source box it would appear how i wanted it to on the page, which was a rookie mistake. I quickly went back and tried to change it, but by then I now realize it was too late. I'm also aware that I failed to properly capitalize the title, which again was a rookie mistake i should've noticed. I hope i've done the formatting of this appeal correctly, i've never been that great with HTML. I do feel my story was a decent one, and would like it to be reinstated, but if it still fails to meet standards i'll just have to try again to improve. I'm providing a link to a pastebin where I have uploaded the properly formatted version of the story, although please bare in mind that normally each of the 'screens' text is bolded and italic. Thank you for your time. --TheWorldsWorstSwordsman (talk) 08:25, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
 * Accepted under the condition you put up the pastebin version. Also, it will be marked for review as it has a few things that need fixing. Other than that, it was a pretty enjoyable read.
 * Mystreve (talk) 12:10, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

They Are There
Hello this is to address a deletion of my story "They Are There" I fully understand that my story has been deleted and there isn't really much I can do about that now. Be it I did just practically sit down and throw together what I thought would be a mental gripping pasta that gave you a lump in your or at least the feeling you were being watched. I did a proof read and I believe I had no grammatical errors. I'm not sure if it was a formatting error or the way I had the text set up but I am genuinely confused. I read over the quality standard and what not and I'm not exactly sure what I didn't live up to. If it wasn't in your respectful opinion a "quality" pasta, I understand that and some feedback would be greatly appreciated if I cant reacquire my pasta. I don't want to ask for it back to get the text on Microsoft Word or something because I seemingly made the mistake of being confident that I would have no troubles posting this story. I also understand that a request like that will be met with a "No". Thank you and please get back to me as soon as you can. (apologies for not following the format the first time) --TribalD86 (talk) 17:18, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
 * First off, you have needless spacing. Why do you use a space between each sentence? Also, I'm sorry, but this story is very cliche and has very little scare value.
 * Mystreve (talk) 17:34, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

Ritual for Everlasting Beauty
To whomever it may concern in the Deletion Appeal process,

My first pasta, "Ritual for Everlasting Beauty", was deleted immediately. This makes absolutely no sense to me, other than my having issues uploading it in the first place. I know my formatting, grammar, and spelling are correct. I wrote a pasta much better than many I have read on this site. I played on the element of the unknown, creating dread, and pulled in two personal psychological elements of asking if you are capable of carrying out whatever your imagination has filled in the blank with. It had a hook in the beginning that came full circle in the end. It's psychologically unnerving, rather than gore or cheap scares. This is well-written, and an attempt to create something missing from the genre of Rituals. Please let me know exactly why I was deleted...I have read all the guidelines and I meet them all. Why am I not being given a chance to post my first pasta? Please let me know what to fix or at least give me a reason! (I hope my formatting of this post is finally acceptable, this entire system is very un-user-friendly)

Blackcattattoo (talk) 11:34, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
 * Your formatting isn't bad. Neither is the writing, really. It doesn't focus so much on the ritual part as it does on what it takes to start the ritual, as you said. I just ask that you change the words "bath water" toward the end of the ritual itself, since obviously the participant isn't in water in the first place. Other than that, consider your story restored.
 * Mystreve (talk) 14:03, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

Do It
Good afternoon, I find myself here to contest the deletion of my short pasta 'Do It'. I admit my story was very fragmented but thats the way it was meant to be writted and read, with an air of not being able to think straight. If you found it confusing I would be willing to revise and edit. This pasta should be restored because I believe it was a good concept and believable, I actually wrote this for a project in English class and everyone there seemed to enjoy it. I thought it was pasta worthy, I put a lot of thought and effort into trying to make the reader second guess themselves if they had ever considered the thought of suicide or knew someone who had gone through it. I found it chilling that there could be things (angels in this case) that could cause someone to kill themselves, and also the fact that it spread and multiplied with each person creating more and more angels invading minds and forcing death and conversion. Thank you for your consideration.

Serenalurvsyou (talk) 17:27, July 24, 2014 (UTC)serenalurvsyou
 * Yes, it's very choppy as far as your wording is concerned. I understand the plot, but at the same time, I feel like you dumbed it down with the awkward phrasing. I would suggest revising it and putting it up on our Writer's Workshop for review.
 * Mystreve (talk) 17:37, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

The Victims
Hey, I noticed that my first pasta "The Victims" was deleted. If we can't get the original back on the site, is there at least a way I can go back and edit the pasta to fix what I did wrong? Conker64 (talk) 17:43, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

Sure, allow me to pass you the transcript of your story

http://pastebin.com/gMZdWjXU

--&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 17:53, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

FYI, I enjoyed your story. Post it in the Writer's Workshop, I'm sure we can bring up up to quality standards.--WatcherAzazel (talk) 17:59, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

Some Adventures Just Aren't Worth It
Hi there! Yesterday I posted my first pasta here titled "Some Adventures Just Aren't Worth It" and it was deleted within an hour by you. I had spell-checked and proofread the story twice and had divided it into separate paragraphs. It contained one line where all the words were capitalized but according to the quality standards that much should be permitted. So since I did meet most (if not all) of the posting standards, I just wanted to ask that was the story that bad? I trust your decision but I just wanted to rule out the grammar factor if that was the cause of deletion. If you didn't like the story itself, then I completely understand. --Shantam777 (talk) 08:31, July 29, 2014 (UTC)
 * Your spelling and grammar seem up to par. However, your paragraph separation is pretty bad. They read like walls of text. You also need to change paragraphs when you have dialogue changes, which you didn't do. As for the story itself? It felt kind of stale for me at the ending. So there's some thing keeping up with the brothers. That's it? That was kind of a disappointing ending. I would make a better ending, then post it to our Writer's Workshop for review.


 * Mystreve (talk) 12:09, July 29, 2014 (UTC)
 * Ohh, I see it now. Thanks for giving such a detailed insight on it. It really helps. I'll try my best to improve on it :)
 * Ohh, I see it now. Thanks for giving such a detailed insight on it. It really helps. I'll try my best to improve on it :)

--Shantam777 (talk) 14:47, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

I was Only 8
Hi, my post "I was only eight" was deleted within 5 minutes of being posted, due to "not meeting the quality standards" (or so called) I might be wrong, but I felt that the story was quality enough, especially in comparison to "My little pony, FlutterShit dies" which I see every five minutes. I felt that my story was of high enough quality to remain on the Wiki, and would appreciate if it was looked at again.

Thanks

Dfwb98 (talk) 01:30, July 30, 2014 (UTC)


 * To be perfectly honest, there are a LOT of issues here. Your story is one massive paragraph. (A no-no) punctuation issues (comma misuse and a lack of apostrophes to indicate possession, phrasing problems ("It was what seemed like a man" and "As I made that realization I heard the two things that I couldn't have wanted to hear less, the sound of bumping from inside the cabinet, and, the sound of Andrews (sic) fathers van door slamming in anger.), capitalization issues (Dialogue and sentence openings aren't properly capitalized.)


 * The story feels rushed as if you typed it in one sitting and didn't do any revisions. It is an interesting concept (A young child dealing with the atrocities a parent is committing.) that has been done a few times, but this story really needs some fleshing out to build the boy and father's character. I agree with Callie on deleting this story because it really isn't up to Quality Standards with the numerous punctuation, capitalization, grammatical, phrasing, and the rushed nature of the story. It needs some pretty heavy revision. I suggest visiting the writer's workshop for some further assistance.

EmpyrealInvective (talk) 01:46, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

The Grotesque one
I would like to know why my pasta "The Grotesque One" was deleted. i didn't see any grammer or spelling errors, nor did I see any major cliche's.
 * Automatically denied for not following the deletion appeal guidelines above. Redo your appeal the correct way, and we will take a look at it.
 * Mystreve (talk) 18:43, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Bootube
I understand why this pasta got deleted, because I gave it a bunch of tags before it was properly reviewed, a lot of its concepts have been seen in media Pastas before, and it uses a lot of horrible puns.

But I think it's got its own unique merits, like the mix of pulpy EC-comics-style horror and gritty; realistic horror, or the commentary on horror-as-voyeurism or even the sociopathic; sadistic character of the puppet(?) host himself, and I think it's at least a unique twist on the media-pasta concept. Thus I submit it for review.

Here's a link to a cleaned-up Pastebin version: http://pastebin.com/p9SL2w8h. I hope it's befitting your standards.

Tbok1992 (talk) 22:09, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
 * I liked the story. The puns added some humor to the otherwise dark content. You can post that pastebin version up, but you might want to re-read through and make sure your context is okay. Maybe I misread, but I think you might've put "he" where "she" should've been or vice-versa? Not sure. Comb through it, and post it back to the site. Anyway, way to go. I liked it.
 * Mystreve (talk) 14:09, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Bethany
XXMUSICstar120Xx (talk) 16:19, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Dear Princess Callie,

My name is Aaeesha Carbon. You most likely know me as XXMUSICstar120Xx, the creator of Bethany. It came to my attention that you deleted my story on this website.

I am writing this letter to ask you why my story was deleted from this wiki.

I would like to state that Bethany was well written and well composed. It has a plot and story line that is perfect for this website. Bethany was a story that I worked very hard on, and I truly believe it was a mistake to delete the story.

If you could send me a reply stating your reason for originally deleting my story, that would be wonderful. I would also like to ask that it be undeleted from the wiki. It made me very sad when the news of its deletion came to my attention.

Thank you for your time.

Sincerely, Aaeesha Carbon


 * I read your story and while it doesn't have too many issues: a few grammatical, malapropisms, some punctuation issues, and phrasing issues. "For a final touch, she wrote the words ‘YOU’LL BE NEXT’ (Cliche) on the wall in his blood before she walked out of the door and into the woods, never to be seen again." (Until she is seen again literally one paragraph later.), there are other issues that led to deletion of this story.


 * The story was deleted because it subscribed to a lot of Cliches. These cliches don't help the story in any way and make it really predictable and, sorry to say this, boring. A teenager gets abused by one or both parents (Bonus points for alcoholic/sexual abusers.) and then snaps and murders one/both of them graphically with almost super-human strength. We get dozens of pastas like this a week and they all are almost carbon-copies of each other. Yours was slightly better written than the others, but it still used the same cliches ad nauseam. We are trying to curb these types of stories as they are all almost exact imitations of each other. I would suggest moving onto another story and making use of the writer's workshop if you are concerned the story may not be up to Quality Standards


 * EmpyrealInvective (talk) 18:01, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for being honest with me. I appreciate it. However, I do not understand what you mean by "Chiche". I have not read any other stories like this, and Bethany isn't a carbon-copy of ANYTHING. I wrote this story PURELY from my own imagination. She started out as just a drawing; then she became something more. I hope you know that you made me CRY when my story was deleted.


 * Welp, click Cliche and then read point one (Bethany has cartoon-ishly abusive parents (Alcoholic and sexually abusive)), point twenty (While your character didn't deform herself, she still has enough strength to overpower a grown man and cut his heart out through his ribcage), and possibly point twenty-three. It's a shame you cried over your story's deletion, but it's important you understand that we receive these types of stories on a daily basis and while you feel the story may have come from your imagination without any influence, (Apparently there are many others with like-minded imaginations who are uploading the same stories.) that doesn't change the fact that we have an overabundance of these types of stories and are no longer accepting them. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 22:06, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

I cried because of the fact that Bethany is the first CreepyPasta story I've ever posted. It took me a long time to try to post it, create my own account, and then try to post it again. Once I had it posted, I was really excited... Then jerks like you guys go and delete it. I apologize if it seems like I'm being rude, but I'm stating the facts.

I Can't Take It Anymore
Hello, there. My name is Mr. Anonymous Poster. I am here to consult the recent departure of my creepypasta. Now, I just recently found out that any creepypasta on this wiki with capitalization for the title of the pasta must be kept to a minimum. I deeply apologize for this, I am new to this wiki, an I didn't think that that would be a rule. So, I was hoping that you could bring the pasta back up, but with its name slightly altered, so it doesn't look like I'm trying way too hard to get it noticed. If not, its perfectly fine. I can always come up with other stories, so this doesn't need to go through. Thank you,                                                                         Mr. Anonymous Poster (talk) 23:29, August 5, 2014 (UTC)


 * Denied. We don't accept unfinished pages. Your story was clearly unfinished. Dashie  ~20% Cooler~  00:12, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the information, and sorry it looked unfinished. I will try harder next time to deliver a story that isn't an unfinished pile of filth.
 * Thanks for the information, and sorry it looked unfinished. I will try harder next time to deliver a story that isn't an unfinished pile of filth.

TRESSPASSING
I don't know why my Pasta was deleted, I'm pretty sure it was because of a few grammatical errors, but please, undelete it.--0Wonder0 (talk) 15:57, August 7, 2014 (UTC)

Hmmmmm...

From what I see, the story was deleted because it lacks a lot of content. What I mean is that the story lays a concept, such as that shadowy figure, does an action that lasts a few lines, and then the story ends. It goes way too fast, with no background or anything that could at least let the atmosphere settle. I recommend that you rewrite it, but focus not only in that moment. Focus on what happens before, meanwhile and after. --&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 16:16, August 7, 2014 (UTC)

My post of "Warm Dirt" was deleted. im not mad. I'm simply asking why it was taking down, and asking if you could put it back up. I will make any changes neccasary. This was my first pasta. all have been taken down by you for no reason, Give me back my pasta or tell me how i did something wrong

Lady Nicklebotten
Why do you keep deleting my request? Are you afraid, bitches? Afraid that you approved my pasta and the n deleted it after a month? LOLSKELETONS, I know you're there, stop hiding by deleting my requests.

How I'ma get my pasta back, faggot? You fucking sonofabitch, you should quit your job and be a troll.

Empyreallnvective approved the pasta, because it was finished and improved in grammar, and this FAPSKELETON deleted it on July 13, because it "was publised again under the same name". What? You mean, if my pasta gets deleted, and I improve it, I can't publish it on the same name? What the fuck of a rule is that? EVERYBODY WHO IS READING THIS: Don't post your pasta here, post it on the original site, this people are trolling you on maximum, so if you don't wanna be trolled, listen to me.

Fuck you, fuck your trollwikia, and FAPSKELETON, Empy was nice to tell me what isn't good in the pasta, but you, fucking shithead, you even have the balls to delete my requests and to not respond either.

If it was published again, why didn't you deleted it after a day or so? IT WAS AFTER A MONTH YOU FUCKING BULLCRAP... AND IT WAS APPROVED!

Go! Go on the original site! Or let's make our own blog with these! Don't let those bitches stop us, because here, you only find trolls.... And yes, I won't stop bitching about it, because I worked on that pasta about 3 days or so, it was my first pasta, and yes, after correcting the mistakes it was approved, but mr. POO POO SKELETON decided to troll me and delete it... Well, that's it, I know I'm not gonna get my pasta back, so go fuck yourself Skull, you can ban me, I don't give the biggest crap about it, but at least let the people open their eyes about this wikia. So stop deleting my messages, I want to open people eyes, to see the true "horror" of this site, that they can't publish their pasta, even if it's good,

because "it doesn't meet the requirements", or it was "published again under the same name"...--Cascaval13 (talk) 06:52, August 8, 2014 (UTC)


 * Well, first of all, I haven't removed any of your requests. Looking through this page's history, it looks like they were removed by other admins for being excessively offensive/incendiary.


 * Second of all, I don't recall Empy explicitly approving the improved version of the story on deletion appeal or otherwise. (Anyone else, please correct me if I'm wrong here.)


 * Finally, I'm denying this appeal for basically being a blatant attack on me and not an actual appeal. Next time, please make a proper appeal and maybe I'll reconsider.


 * LOLSKELETONS (talk) 07:07, August 8, 2014 (UTC)

Please Help
Hello. I wrote a micropasta titled "Please Help" and had posted it here but it got deleted because it had quite a few grammatical errors and the story needed more refining. EmpyrealInvective told me to post it in the Writer's workshop and take suggestions from the guys there and make the necessary edits. I have made those edits now and would like to make an appeal regarding reposting it. Here's the updated pasta :

http://pastebin.com/LCqED2wj

Do you think it's up to the standards now? Also, should I post it again or you guys will do it yourself? In any case, thanks for considering my case!

--Shantam777 (talk) 08:11, August 8, 2014 (UTC)
 * I'd say you are good to go here. Feel free to put that pastebin version up on the site.
 * Mystreve (talk) 14:35, August 11, 2014 (UTC)
 * Yay! Thank you! And thank you EmpyrealInvective for helping me bring it up to the standards!
 * --Shantam777 (talk) 15:42, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

My one dream
Hi. I was wondering about why my pasta was deleted. "My one dream," was it's name. Can I have a calm and nice explanation to why it was deleted, please? I spell checked it and proofread it at least four times. Get back as soon as you can, and thanks!


 * I read you story and didn't notice too many issues, there were some punctuation, formatting, spelling errors. ("Oppisite" "strangly"), malapropisms ("manor"/manner)


 * The real issue I see is with the story itself. The premise needs a lot of re-working. The protagonist is telling us this dream they had when they were younger... Why are they telling us this now? Did something remind them of this dream? What triggered this narrative? Additionally the ending could really uses some re-tooling. You seem to be building up to some sort of climax, but the ending is lackluster. "I probably won't ever know, either. But hey, just the imagination of a kid, right?" ...That's it. You seem to brush off the stories' end without any real conclusion. This would be an effective form of literary irony if the reader was aware of something the narrator was not aware of, but as it stands, it just seems to end like A Memory without the poignancy of the reader realizing that this dream may have actually been real. I have to agree with the admin that deleted it. The story really wasn't up to quality standards. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 04:06, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

Pasta deleted immediately after posting titled: The Raffle
I wouldn't appeal a story I didn't feel was a good story. I corrected many errors prior to posting and I also posted it on the writers workshop and received good reviews. Naturally, I'm a bit confused as to why my story was deleted literally immediately, the person who marked it for review honestly couldn't have read it in less than one minute. I can say I have no idea how to use these features (I'm a noob) so if I'm posting this on the wrong thing please let me know.


 * I don't see where you're getting the idea that it was "deleted immediately". It was up for about two hours before it was deleted, which is more than enough time for admins to review it. Also, by the looks of it, you only got one review in the Writer's Workshop thread, and while it was positive, that isn't necessarily indicative of quality. You probably should have waited for more people to review it before trying to put it up on the wiki.


 * I deleted it mainly because I don't feel it works as a creepypasta (it has no real horror) and it seems kinda rushed / underdeveloped. Maybe if it was fleshed out more it could make for a better read, but as it stands I don't think it's up to QS.


 * That said, I'm going to leave it up to another admin to accept or deny this appeal. Just to be fair. I'll admit I was on the fence with this when I first read it over.


 * LOLSKELETONS (talk) 07:26, August 9, 2014 (UTC)


 * I need to know which story to review, GreyOwl. You had quite a few there. Please let me know on my talk-page which story you are appealing, so I can take a look at it. Thanks.
 * Mystreve (talk) 14:31, August 11, 2014 (UTC)


 * Disregard. The story is in the title up there and I didn't notice before. Reviewing now.
 * Mystreve (talk) 14:37, August 11, 2014 (UTC)


 * I'm accepting the appeal and restoring it. Although the ending was kind of bland, the story itself was kind of cool. There were a few minor mistakes though, so I am marking it for review.
 * Mystreve (talk) 14:52, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

The Ice Cream Man
Hi, I'd like to request a repeal to a pasta I made that was deleted (Pastebin here: http://pastebin.com/bK7zfacE). I looked over the minimum standards and such previous to posting it, and to me it appeared to meet them. However, I did not receive any criticism on the piece. Thank you for reading this and have a good day. --RickFinley (talk) 06:14, August 9, 2014 (UTC)
 * The story just reads like some newspaper article about a serial killer that got caught. Really nothing scary about that at all.
 * Mystreve (talk) 15:22, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

"The Treehouse Club" Mystery
I am here to contest the deletion of "The Treehouse Club" Mystery. It was falsely taken down for being in the "Lost Episode" category. The character in the story finds a torrent file with "lost" unreleased episodes of the show he was researching, making it fall under the category "Lost Episode". Therefore making the reason for deletion invalid. I hope you decide to put it back up, I have been working on this pasta for a couple of days and put a lot of work and effort into it (The Creepypasta: http://pastebin.com/uAuRm1Z2)
 * We don't allow "Lost Episode" pastas anymore per the rules.
 * Mystreve (talk) 15:01, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

That one dream
Can you find out why my pasta was deleted, please? I worked on it all night. Someone named Empyrealinvective deleted it and hasn't replied.


 * Can I at least have the final version back, please? I want to keep it. You can send my pasta on gmail to lunchbox531@gmail.com
 * Here you go. http://tny.cz/efdb63db
 * Mystreve (talk) 15:06, August 11, 2014 (UTC)


 * What is wrong with my pasta, though?


 * Massive wall of text. Spelling errors. Needless ellipses. And that was just a quick glance at it.
 * Mystreve (talk) 17:22, August 11, 2014 (UTC)


 * If you were to tell me my spelling errors, could I fix it so that it gets uploaded?


 * What spelling errors? Huh? Tell me. Give me a list. Tell me everything I spelt wrong. You delete stories for no reason, yet you will call us unprofessional?


 * I put my reasons for deletion on your talk page, read it and use the copy that Mystreve left above to review and find the errors we mentioned. Also your appeal has been denied, stop posting messages as it clutters up the page. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 04:28, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

The Haunting
I know that my pasta sucks, but can I have another chance? I rushed, I know, but, please let me try again. I'll fix it. It's my first one. Can I fix it then reupload it?


 * I re-read your story and notice a large amount of punctuation (Misusing commas/not using them when needed.), you don't capitalize "I" a number of times, there are grammatical errors (it's=it is, its=possession), spelling errors ("las tnight", "forhead", "wlked", "approched", etc.), and phrasing issues.


 * Additionally the story needs major revision. (The title "The Haunting" when there seams to be no mention of ghosts/haunting, " Meet at cabin 59 for a meeting." (redundancy), the revelation that is was a dream at the end is both a cliche and letdown. You try and turn it into some premonition, but then that invalidates the opening: "I will never forget the weekend my dad and I went camping at Salt Lake." (Because you haven't gone yet.) All-in-all this story seems way too rushed, there are a lot of mistakes, the plot/exposition is problematic. Sorry, but perhaps it's best to move on with other ideas and make use of the writer's workshop to improve your craft. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 04:39, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

My creepypasta Barbie Cakes was deleted after about 10 seconds after I made it for no apparent reason...
 * And now your appeal is denied for not following the appeal guidelines above.
 * Mystreve (talk) 11:50, August 13, 2014 (UTC)
 * And it should be noted that I left my 'apparent lack of a reason' on your talk page... EmpyrealInvective (talk) 11:55, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

Who Walks in the Night
My pasta/poem, "Who Walks in the Night," was deleted for not meeting quality standards, although it (to my knowledge) contains no grammatical or spelling errors and is both original and descriptive. An explanation is welcome so future contributions may be less ill-fated. Sæclum in Favilla (talk)


 * A good creepypasta poem is a hard thing to accomplish. As we get a number of poems submitted to us, we have more stringent rules about it, which results in stricter standards. Doing a free verse poem is even harder.


 * Going with a free verse style is an interesting choice, but a lack of rhyming scheme, forces a deeper focus on the lyrical quality and flow of your poem. Unfortunately, reading your poetry aloud showcases the issues with flow. Free verse is known for having a rhythm/lyrical quality that when spoken sets a flow and unfortunately your poem needs some work on its style.


 * Additionally there were punctuation issues (Mainly on concluding lines) EmpyrealInvective (talk) 02:06, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Appeal Request: Rayman 4
I can't find the deletion log for my pasta, but I assume it was because it was a video game related pasta. I posted Rayman 4 almost two years ago, long before the "no video game pasta" rules. It was

Sure, it's got scared game characters in it, but it's not the typical "hyperrealistic game characters better than any graphics would allow" trope. The graphics were simply listed as high-end for the system. There was nothing about seeing individual beads of sweat on Rayman's face.

Yes, it's got the "main character is attacked by something in the game" thing in it, but how would any media-related (games, diaries, movies etc.) pasta work if something in the game didn't interact with the main character? Otherwise, it would just be a scary and unnerving game. Someone might be terrified while playing Amnesia or Slender, but posting about their gaming experience is not a creepypasta.

Furthermore, most gaming pastas do not have characters from the game transitioning over to the real world. I know that can be a tired fan-fiction cliche but I took extra pains to make it not seem forced and to work wiithin the story's mood. (Contrast my story with the much more common, "Globox popped out of the TV and dragged me in to the Rayman World" type of thing.)

I just don't understand how my story was on here for over a year and then suddenly deleted, even after I had mods tell me how much they liked the story and that it was a refreshing change from most gaming pastas.


 * Denied. No signature. Dashie  ~20% Cooler~  01:40, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

The Scariest Story Ever; Working Title
This was deleted when I had tried to submit it, which I imagine was probably due to it mentioning some creepypasta cliches and the filters stopped me. That said, I think my story should be posted here because while it does mention them, it doens't actually use them. Omny87 (talk) 02:55, August 15, 2014 (UTC)


 * Even though I like the concept of your story, it wasn't really executed well. The story didn't really invoke any surprise when I got to the ending. I felt like it was a cheesy twist with no real foreshadowing hinting the ending. It was just abrupt and choppy. Like I said earlier, I like the concept of the story, but it wasn't so well executed as it should have been. I could do a complete breakdown of the story if you like, and add some input to make the story better. -- Sloshedtrain  Talk   Contribs

00:50, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

The Worlds Truest Science
About 50 seconds after I posted this, it was deleted. I am very confused because it met all the standards. UPDATE: There was no punctuation because that was not for the STORY, that was for the email in the story. Wow, do people even properly read my things?


 * There are a number of punctuation, (Sentences lacking commas where pauses are needed. Also the title is missing an apostrophe as it indicates possession), capitalization issues, and wording issues.


 * To be honest, the plot seems nonsensical ("I knew the Obama part meant Barack Obama and the Osama part meant Osama Bin Laden." "I must of (SIC) passed out or went unconscious somehow, but when I woke up, I was in my bedroom and I had a new computer. It worked perfectly.") The story lacks any real build-up and feels rushed. There is no tension as there is little to no explanation of why any of this is happening to the protagonist. I agree with Callie's decision to delete it for the issues mentioned above. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 02:51, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Five Nights At Freddie's
So it first got deleted,and for logical reasons,but I made it better,MUCH better,but it got taken down so fast whoever took it down didn't even read it. Sacrid7174 (talk) 02:09, August 16, 2014 (UTC)


 * First things first, here is the latest copy of the story so you can follow along http://pastebin.com/Ku09Ajwb . The issues I mentioned are still present, this is not spaced at all. (If you look at how I write this, I put a space every couple of sentences/topic change to help the flow and make it easier to read. This wall-of-text effect results in it being hard to read and can get a story deleted very quickly. (Which explains why it was deleted so quickly.)


 * Onto the other spacing issue. Here is an example: "...pay,so(SIC) I went over there to get my job.They(SIC) told me if I worked 5 nights,Monday-Friday,I'd(SIC) get $500.So(SIC) You corrected a few of the spacing issues, but most are left untouched. (I can also see in your deletion appeal you do the same thing. This is not the correct way to write and should be improved on.)


 * Finally onto the adapted ending, "here.If(SIC) you want to see sort of what I went through,I(SIC) got so freaked out I made a game about this called "Five Nights At Freddie's", until then guys." I think you can find a better way to tie-in the game. This seems really anticlimactic and the overall errors still make this pasta seem undercooked. Additionally as you have uploaded this pasta again and only made the deletion appeal after it was deleted, you are being give a two day ban. (Second offense, fourth warning). One more thing, stop posting messages at the top of pages by blanking the first thing. You removed the archive on the deletion appeal, the video player on WhyAmIReadingThis's talk page, and mine.

EmpyrealInvective (talk) 03:19, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

LittleBigPlanet 2: Clive's suicide
I contest the deletion of my page. I have followed all of the rules of writing a creepypasta. This pasta was also really popular in LittleBigPlanet, so it's worth leaving it on the wiki. If undeletion is not possible, can you please send me the pasta text because I lost it?

DFDF SHOWING IT UP YOURS (talk) 10:04, August 16, 2014 (UTC)


 * The pasta follows the traditional, tired formula of the average video game pasta. The story had abundance of clichés and that I would won't list here, because the story has many of them, but I'll link you to the cliché page. The pasta does violate some blacklisted and quality standards rules, hence why it was deleted, especially strict guidelines we have on video game pastas. Just because it is popular within a certain community, doesn't mean it is actually good (Sonic.exe for an example).


 * I have posted your story on Pastebin here: http://pastebin.com/csXPeTNP. I'll also message you the link on your talkpage. -- Sloshedtrain  Talk   Contribs

22:21, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

You are What you eat
It was tottally not fair how my story, "You are what you eat" got deleted. There was nothing wrong with it at all. Can you please post it back up?

User:JoeWinko (a.k.a. "Joe the Creeper") (talk) 18:52, August 24, 2014 (UTC)
 * The formatting is really goofy. That was probably the reason that it got deleted. I'm upholding the deletion just because the formatting does need to be fixed. To be honest, I'm kind of on the fence with the story itself. It's not that bad, but I would suggest putting it up on the Writer's Workshop for more comprehensive critique from other reviewers (after you fix the formatting, of course).
 * Mystreve (talk) 20:26, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

Project Sofiya Part I
Hi, I don't understand why my story was removed. It was a complete chapter of the story I am writing. So it's a finished part. Considering there is going to be 4-6 long parts, if the finished product is all on one page, it'll be exceptionally long. Additionally, that's a lot of work to put in if I don't even know if people like the first part. I do have my heart set on uploading it here, and I know you are not obligated to, but if there is any alternative location where I can post this part that you can think of so I can get feedback, I would really appreciate it.

Thanks

AlVic (talk) 19:54, August 25, 2014 (UTC)


 * Even though there's nothing wrong with your story quality-wise, we can't accept it because it's an unfinished page/story. I highly recommend posting what you got in the Writer's Workshop to get some constructive criticism on your pasta. When you plan to upload the full story, I recommend splitting it up into sub-pages (I'll message you more about it). And maybe we can work out an arrangement when uploading your story into parts (similar what we are doing with the 1999 pasta) if you are willing to complete, but I highly prefer posting the full story in one page (with subpages) at once. -- Sloshedtrain  Talk   Contribs   █  23:00, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

Ice Bucket Challenge
Hey. All of my writtten creepypastas have been deleted. And for those creepypastas, I can understand why. However I put alot of time and effort into this creepypasta (Believe it or not) And I believe it should be restored. It has a nice sort of reality and good bulid up. It is based off the current Ice Bucket Challenge craze. And no, I do not hate the people who started the Ice Bucket Challenge. I just thought it had SOME potenital in it.

So please restore it. And if you don't, just tell me why.

Thank you.


 * Denied for not leaving a signature.
 * Mystreve (talk) 18:59, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Ice Bucket Challenge 2
Hey. All of my writtten creepypastas have been deleted. And for those creepypastas, I can understand why. However I put alot of time and effort into this creepypasta (Believe it or not) And I believe it should be restored. It has a nice sort of reality and good bulid up. It is based off the current Ice Bucket Challenge craze. And no, I do not hate the people who started the Ice Bucket Challenge. I just thought it had SOME potenital in it.

So please restore it. And if you don't, just tell me why.

Thank you. -Spyro.exe

ps. Sorry for reposting, also sorry for taking extra time. I apologize for any inconvenience. But last time I didn't put a signuture, but I am now. Please give me another chance.
 * Denied again. Do yourself a favor and read the Deletion Appeal guidelines above. Thanks.
 * Mystreve (talk) 19:20, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Hand Eye Coordination
I am here to contest the deletion of my pasta, Hand Eye Coordination.

I understand that there were a few typos, but those, as said on the "why we delete" blog, those can be fixed. I wrote the pasta down and have a copy if I get permission to upload it again, but as I understand it, that will be taken care of if this is accepted. Now, I'm not one of those people who.l think that everything Is "fair" in life and that I have "rights" and "freedom of speech" on this site, but I do ask you to please accept this request.

Thank you for your time,

......……………… 20:16, August 27, 2014 (UTC)TheEmptynessAroundYou


 * I re-read your story and noticed there are quite a number of typos ("RepRepeat", "intinto", "ion/in", "rreplaced") some malapropisms (plain/plane), capitalization errors (You capitalize a number of words in the middle of sentences that don't need capitalization.), and punctuation errors. (Commas used incorrectly.)


 * Onto the story, there are some plot issues. First off, the eye has little to no blood in it. (It has vitreous fluid) If it had blood in it like you suggest using a syringe to draw out, the person wouldn't be able to see as blood isn't clear.) The story feels rushed and focuses on the ritual and doesn't address the consequences you mentioned at the end. ("But at a cost...") There is a real lack of description (Of the mysterious man especially) and the ending should be a little more concrete. Looking over everything, the story really isn't up to quality standards.EmpyrealInvective (talk) 23:40, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Alright. This is my last post about appealing Ice Bucket Challenge's deletion. No creepypasta is perfect. Sometimes we make a mistake and our pasta gets deleted. But i'm not here to be mean, I'm here to get my pasta back.

It's a short pasta, has some nice bulid-up and realsim. I'll be honest, one of the reasons I made this so it can get a narration on it (though I doubt it ever will). But that's not the only reason. I have been a fan of Creepypastas. Whenever I get the chance, I'll read one. So I made this creepypasta to contribute. But every one of my pastas have been deleted. And when this one got deleted, I was upset. I put time and effort into this pasta and it just got deleted when I refreshed the page. All I want is for this ONE creepypasta to be put up again.

Thank you for reading.

Ice Bucket Challenge
Spyro.exe (talk) 19:46, August 28, 2014 (UTC)Spyro.exeSpyro.exe (talk) 19:46, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

I just read the story, and man, I see what was its flaw.

The ending came as quick as if I myself had been hit with a block of cement. And its logic was as firm as water.

I know that creepypastas aren't an example of the wonders of logic, but this story stretches it beyond any limit.

First than all, the bucket was heavy. That's to be expected, it had cement. However then the main character and his friend helped him to carry the bucket. Do you see where I'm going with this? How two people, carrying a bucket, wouldn't notice such thing as a block of cement in it?

And not only that. Later after that, the main character is standing there, and one of the friends is recording it. If mere seconds before the bad friend needed a lot of help to carry it, then how after that he was able to lift it over one's head, by himself?

And last: why the hell did he put a block of cement in a bucket, in front of a witness, in something to be recorded? If it was an intentional murder then it really is the worst plan I have seen.

Those three flaws in logic are in the climax. I think I don't need to say that this doesn't make your story be above the quality standards.

So yeah, I'm afraid this appeal is denied --&#34;You know why he&#39;s here? Why he&#39;s investigating the broken rules? He&#39;s not paid or anything. He likes it. He gets off on it&#34; (talk) 19:58, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

You Have To Wake Up
So I made a creepypasta called You Have To Wake Up, and it was inspired by a game trilogy, but I made it completely original and didn't take anything from any of the games. Also, I got a comment on it rating it 9/10, and it still was deleted. Also, I haven't gotten a message on my talk page saying why it was deleted or who deleted it, which I should get, if your gonna delete my story after it's been undeleated for 30 minutes, than gets deleted, and then the guy stays anonymous. Please when or if you read it, please make sure you read it through and remember, your general rules state that the story can be unrealistic as long as it all comes together at the end. Take care. Sacrid7174 (talk) 22:36, August 29, 2014 (UTC)


 * I deleted your story. You can view who deleted a story by searching for your story/looking up the title You Have To Wake Up. (Simply click there.) I deleted your story for quality issues and it features the monster from the trilogy Deep Sleep. ("...plain white eyes and a deep black body with deep black arms and legs")


 * Onto the quality issues themselves. There are a number of issues with grammar (Your=possession, you're=you are) spacing after commas ("ring,which"), punctuation (specifically with apostrophes and commas: " ...the guy(')s advice...", "At that moment I then understood") The story also needs a lot more build-up to be effective. The monster appears, attacks, and vanishes in three sentences with very little description/build-up. The ending is fine, but the climax is weakened by the overall rushed nature of the story itself. I stand by my decision that it wasn't up to quality standards.


 * Finally, I have warned you once about posting messages at the top of a page and blanking the header/first message as you have done twice on this deletion appeal, on my talk page, and on the talk page of WhyAmIReadingThis. I am giving you a one day ban as each time you do this, someone has to undo your changes and re-post your content and it's getting to be a problem. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 23:25, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Tomodachi Life
This pasta is a gamepasta which arent banned only haunted games and the only mention of the game being haunted is when the main character is speculating what could be happening. The only other "paranormal" thing is creepy dreams and the video game talking to him which isnt paranormal. It is a main function of this game. The game is not haunted it's just a life simulator that is a...little too realistic.My friend 1nsanity (talk) 22:11, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

The Weirdo
Hello, I uploaded my story about an hour ago and it was deleted. I am appealing because I feel my story was unfairly deleted (for not meeting quality standards). Stylistic choices regarding tone are likely to blame, but I wrote my story with the intent to be a more light-hearted and not overly serious story, as I find many stories on the wiki to be. I want to clarify, if it was not clear, that the story was not intended as a troll, merely a way for my character (an unfocused teen) to express his experiences in a way that I felt would be realistic for a teen.

My story was also intended to be a first person exploration of my character, a sort of rambling, boastful teen, which shows in the fact that he is something of an untrustworthy narrator (note the "embellished" fight and sardonic tone). As a teen telling a story, it would be natural for him to exaggerate his own role in the events that transpired, and each person's vocabulary is unique to both their culture and station in life, and I wanted my story to impart a sense of uncertainty with regard to the narrator's honesty, but also be somewhat informal and at times humorous.

If my story didn't accomplish these goals, and you still feel my story doesn't meet quality standards and could not be fixed to meet said standards, then so be it. But I believe that quality standards should not be an impediment to writers using unconventional style choices and should instead be inclusive of stories that fall outside the norm. Thank you for your consideration.

Blanktester (talk) 12:26, August 31, 2014 (UTC)


 * Reading your story, I can't help but notice a number of grammatical (your=possession, you're=you are), punctuation errors (commas missing where needed and periods/closing punctuation needed in dialogue.), and wording/phrasing errors. ("I crawled between his legs and got away, and I was thinking, man, this is too fuckin weird." A little bit of an understatement, "It was nice getting to smell the fresh air and grass and shit." Redundancy (and), typos ("unconscience").)


 * There are also plot issues. How can there be a man without a name in prison (it's protocol to identify occupants so they would have his name and aliases. "His name is unknown, but he has become known as "Mr. Death.") and then there's the ending. "I just hope I don’t see that fuckin weirdo ever again(.) OH MY GOD WHAT IS THAT OUTSIDE MY WINDO-" This really raises a lot of questions. As the protagonist was surprised by seeing him, the story would just end, but he actually typed out the sentence. That is not a typical/believable reaction. (Killer outside my window??? Better finish this story up, then make the necessary revisions, then upload it, and then deal with the rampaging lunatic.) As the final sentence cuts off mid-word, we can assume he was killed while typing, which begs the question, who uploaded it?


 * You could argue you were going for a Lovecraftian feel (ala "Dagon"), but that seems out of place for the tone of the story and the narrator in that story was aware of the oncoming danger and had no sense of urgency whereas your narrator was surprised by a killer who could easily enter the room yet somehow managed to find the time to edit and upload the story. I liked the change in pace with a arrogant/cocky character, but his dialogue was cringe-worthy at times and it got a bit grating.I think all of these issues really dull the effectiveness/unconventional style of the story. I'm afraid I have to turn down this appeal


 * EmpyrealInvective (talk) 18:40, August 31, 2014 (UTC)