Talk:I'm Worried About My Son/@comment-4470175-20150523204030

To be honest, not my favourite. It was a gripping read, but personally, I found it a tad unoriginal. It just seems like what you'd finish a story with if you were writing a horror story for school or something. The cliche "it was all a dream" or "i'm dead" or "he's a ghost" are all examples of typical horror story endings. The execution of the creepypasta was good - very well written. But the plot - depth - to it could do with improving. 6/10