Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26872762-20150928173453/@comment-26872762-20150930173349

Ok then, I will try to make some revisions to the title and to the story, and this is my first time trying, and I know that it is something far beyond what I usually do, but I think it would be fun doing it anyway. (When writing stories, it is hard for me to think "properly", so it is hard to accept criticism from people. Also, logic in my stories sometimes don't make sense because I feel like I shouldn't have to bring a bunch of personal things up from the character if this is supposed to be a creepypasta, and I know that I put in some cliches, but if I put those in there, then I just don't realize that I put them in there, so sorry that I overuse terms, but I have trouble writing. And I want you to retract your quote, "It's no shame to admit you mess up.", because that just feels plain old wrong right there. Anyway, thanks for your review. LegoMaster2149 (talk) 17:33, September 30, 2015 (UTC)