Talk:Củ Chi/@comment-26007602-20151213182520

Alright, so this is pretty powerful, but I'm not entirely sure it belongs on the wiki. Sure, it's all about the horrors of war, and maybe that's what some people are looking for, but I wasn't too intrigued. That said, it was definitely well written for the most part (The first paragraph and the grammatical errors being the exceptions) and flowed nicely. I sort of guessed the ending where the voices turned out to be friendly soldiers, but that didn't hamper its impact in any way. The connection between the narrator and Jack was well put together and every scene had nice description, so the story as a whole was built well.

Criticism-wise, I don't know if I have any. Besides the grammatical errors (which I tried to fix), the story is well done. I would go on about its lack of creepiness or tension, but that's not too fair since the story isn't meant to be like that. I personally don't find these historical fiction pieces too interesting, but that's only a personal preference. Maybe that's why I don't have more to say.

Sorry, wish I could offer more, but I hope my praise is enough.