Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150819194513/@comment-26399604-20150820035324

This was an interesting story with a different outlook on the topic at hand, and I enjoyed it every well. The quality of your writing reflects exceptionally in your story as well.

One thing to note, you might want to re-adjust the white line you used better, maybe tab it more to fit the word onto the next line simply for cosmetic reasons, but other than that well done!