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EtherBot wrote: ...chills.

Plothole though... why din't they just call the police inbetween visits? but OH MY GOSH THIS FORCES YOU TO HATE HIM!!!

Thank you for the feedback:) I do want to throw out there that the uncle isn't really a physical being. The family are cannibals and the protagonist is stuck in a haze as she is starving. I hinted at that a bit with the fact the uncle visits occasionally, and the late brother died of starvation because he refused to eat his friend. I'm happy you thought it was chilling though, haha. That's the goal.