Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33698957-20190117192604/@comment-33698957-20190119132013

DrBobSmith wrote: NotIsaac,

The first issues are formatting. You have to get rid of the bold in the body of the story and all those extra space. Double space is good. Quadruple is too much.

Just edit what you wrote above. If you hover your mouse in the far lower right of your post, you can find the More button and under that will be Edit.

Dr. Bob

Dr. Bob I wrote this on google docs. Turns out that leaving lines translates really weirdly. I only intended to do 1 line, but that happened.