Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25262559-20141201003920/@comment-25170312-20141202003804

I started reading, even with the ridiculous title. Some things that seemed odd were that you called something a "3DS model". You meant 3D, right? And why would they just play video games for three days and not check on the game files? Especially when they had only a short time to finish the game. Really stupid characters. As soon as it got to the part aboug opening the EXE file and the game started out normal, blah blah blah, I couldn't continue. It's just way too cliched.