Talk:The Nice Guy/@comment-5239282-20140826134949

For something that was nominated for PTOM, there were a lot of errors and format inconsistencies that detracted from the story (before I edited it).

I also don't understand the purpose of the first few paragraphs. Was it to build character? They came off as instantly unlikeable.

The ending was incredibly foreseeable, too. You could tell something was going to happen.

In my opinion, this doesn't deserve POTM. Its redeeming qualities are its unique concept and execution.