Talk:White with Red/@comment-25418133-20140914025219

Sorry, got to be critical here. If the apparition was close enough to the key hole that the man would see nothing but her eye, she would be too close for him to see color. Color is dependent on light reflecting off of (or being scattered by) a surface; she would be too close for any light from her room and the man would be too close for any light from the hallway. He would see nothing but black, redish-black at best.

Otherwise, can appreciate the shortness and creepy ending, but "Where Bad Kids Go" has the same concept with a better delivery; in fact it's one of the only creepypastas that has actually gotten to me when reading it.