Talk:Shellshock/@comment-25941663-20170319210622

This is a very good story. The imagery in particular is chilling, you painted the visuals with a beautiful use of language. You also portrayed the dissonance of war perfectly, with the jagged cuts and transitions from scene to scene. I don't know if that "noise" and confusion that followed the piece are intentional, but they worked perfectly.

The ending was very chilling to. All in all, very nice work.