Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4976667-20150618135531/@comment-4976667-20150618141627

Thank you, I have made the preferance change, and I hope it will help. The flow is a result of trying to mix between a short story through the eyes of a madman, and putting it in a way that is emotionally invoking, sort of like he's trying to tell it to the ghost herself. I know it's not ideal, and I'm trying to work out the kinks so it does have the natural flow, but I don't want to ruin the back and forth he has with his emotions towards the circumstance. I'll try reading others and see if I can get it further refined. Thank you for the input.