Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140820070051/@comment-25226524-20140821185819

Wow. Well, you certainly went in a different direction than what I was expecting. The story is so much more complex now. I really like it.

I would break it down for you, but I don't really see any problems that stand out. Being that you really surprised me with this one, I look forward to seeing what comes next. Keep up the good work!