User blog comment:TheEternalExodius/Horrid Beginning/@comment-4643170-20140705152419

As one of the admins here, although I'm most definitely the laziest one, I will suggest running whatever you post through spell check, or perhaps putting it in pastebin for others to review. I'm sure that some people would be glad to give you some pointers as  to what you can do to improve your story. Be sure to look at our Quality Standards, while you're at it. They should help you out a little bit.