Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27838637-20160727122520/@comment-27838637-20160806132837

Thank's very much for the feedback gentlemen! I know it hasn't been at the top of yur priorities so I am extremely grateful  that you guys have taken the time out to review the story!

I'll try to smash out a few more reviews for the contest and when I get some time I'll give this a bit of a rewrite. Those "mechanical errors" shouldn't be too much of a problem for me... But the ending I will probably scrap and rewrite the last two entries to add a little post-hair mayhem and make the grand finale a tad more 'grand'.

A_O.