Talk:Hospital/@comment-29507836-20161020114915

The story is too short, not much description, and the story is too vague. It didn't feel like you were leaving it to us; it felt like you were just too lazy to explain it to us. I think that the background on the hospital is ok, but it still feels rush. The wording was fine, but there was no character development. I also didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors in your pasta, so kudos for that small victory.

Overall, I rate this a 4/10. Way too rushed and way too vague.

(P.S. Sorry if my review was jumbled)