Talk:Razor's Edge/@comment-6684440-20140213003318

Woah...Where to begin...Well first off, I was so impressed with the grammar, I saw no mistakes at all! This was a pretty short one, but definately one I enjoyed. I'm very impressed of the creativity (especially towards the end..ah what the hell, what else is NSFW for? ;D) and I liked how the main choice of weapon was far from cliche. Also the ending really made me happy (No i'm not a psychopath) how she killed herself instead of trying to kill Razor or Razor killing her.

Punctuation/spelling/grammar       10

Overall creepiness                        10

Detail                                            10

Total:                                            30

Great job! 30/30 for my score! Great story and I look forward to reading more! ^-^

-Astral