Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25971368-20150726043130/@comment-25971368-20150731164904

Hellhound iscariot666 wrote: I had a similar plot to 'Jeff the Killer.'  The story was called 'Popular,' it pretty much revolved around a girl named Jordan Gray that wanted to kill these two girls: Mally Koward and Kayla Reed. These two girls were the most popular at her school and the reason why Jordan wanted them dead was due to the fact that she saw a video on some website they ran. The content of the video had a friend of hers being killed one of the girls while the other one filmed, one of them later threatened Jordan that this wasn't a fake (I don't know if I included that or not).

Jordan went over to one of the girls' houses to kill them as revenge for her friend's death being exploited. She texted the whole thing on her cell phone, including the time she was getting riddled with bullets by one of the girls' fathers, the father was the chief of police.

The story ended with Jordan's little sister, Octavia claiming to be the mastermind for the whole thing, somehow. She had Mally and Kayla burn down her mobile home.

Yeah, my story sucks. I need to do some serious revision. And I'll reply to this too lol. The story is somewhere to start, and it's a better start than Jeff the Killer. But try to edit it a bit more, the thing about the little sister doing it all seems too "wtf". And were there motives for the two popular girls to kill the friend?