Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-5643552-20150313132709/@comment-26027963-20150528005634

Hsshall wrote: I honestly think that the worst Creepypasta ever is Jeff the Killer. Yes. I just said that (I swear, some people at my school are OBSESSED with Jeff. We had to make a team for some quiz, and my friend suggested we be named "The Jeffs").

1. How often does Jeff go to the gym? He whooped the asses of three kids that are only one year younger than him! I guess if he had Liu's help, then that would make sense... but he didn't.

2. Is the bus driver blinded? He clearly should have seen the kids picking on Jeff!

3. Why are the police so gullible? Seriously, the 'I'll-cover-for-you" cliche was executed horribly here. Jeff even admitted that he did it, but the police said that they believed Liu! If the culprit is admitting to a crime, why would you not arrest him?!

4. Where the hell did the kids get GUNS?! This should go with no extra detail needed.

5. He was covered in alcohol and bleach, so yeah, I see how he caught on fire quickly. But he would not have turned pale, and his hair would not be black. It would be GONE.

6. How did he burn his eyelids out without damaging his eyes? He'd be blinded. No doubt.

7. The final nail in the coffin: The parents wanted to SHOOT HIM?! His mom told his dad to 'get the gun'. If I was Jeff's dad, I'd call the hospital if anything.

Overall, the story should DEFINITELY be rewritten. The whole entire thing had potential, but it just is poorly executed. Though, I haven't read many pastas, as I spend more time on the SCP Foundation... Dude, that story is off the wiki. A lot of people hate it.