Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36877863-20181130182930/@comment-36877863-20181130203856

Thanks for the advice! Those were all things I had an answer for in my head, but I hadn't realy made them clear. I've edited them out (or in, or whatever.)

- The time limit is because time is a finite resource. They can't give him extra time because they're not really giving him that hour as it is- it already belongs rightfully to him.

- The Hell thing wasn't serving its purpose, so I took it out. It was a stretch anyway.

- The odds are actually quite good, because it's not that they've been trying to get at him for that long- they just didn't have a way to get at him. Anthony is the first time they've had any chance at all.

Any suggestions on version 2.0?