Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26278367-20150420020923

Tom Nitsch. He was a normal 8 year old. He played with his friends, He respected adults. He was polite. But all of that would change. It was the summer of 2011. Tom's older brother, Jason, who had gone off to college, was visiting him and his family. Tom couldn't wait. He had never met this brother before. He was curious just as any other kid would have been. Jason showed up 3 days after he announced he was coming. Jason was very nice to Tom. He treated Tom like he knew him his whole life. For the first two weeks of Jason' stay, all went well. Jason and Tom had an awesome time together. But one day, something horrible happened.

Jason came into Tom's room to wake him up that fateful day. “What’s up little bro? I have something excellent planned for today". He said with a smile. “Oh boy, what is it"? Tom asked. “It’s a surprise ". Jason responded with a demonic smirk on his face. “Let’s go to breakfast. Can't be tired for our awesome day!”. “Okay Jason". Responded Tom. Tom got up from bed, changed his clothes, did his hair, brushed his teeth, and went downstairs. “So Tom, I heard Jason has a special plan for you guys today" Said Tom's mother with a smile. "Yes he does. I can't wait". Tom said. Jason jumped into the conversation. “Of course I do. Couldn't let down my little bro now could I?" Tom finished his breakfast. “Okay Tom". Said his mother “ready to go play with Jeremy and C.J."? “Yes mommy". Said Tom “See you later Jason". Tom went outside and played with his friends until Jason called him in. "oh Tom, you need to take a nap before we go have fun"! "Okay Jason". Tom said. Tom and Jason went upstairs to Tom's room. "Before you go to bed, I wanna play a game". Said Jason. “A game, what's it called"? Tom said. “You’ll see". Jason said with a creepy grin. Jason took off his pants and underwear. “In order to play this game, you need to take off your pants and underwear as well Tom". Young Tom had no idea what was about to happen. He was just an innocent child who thought he was playing a game. He took off his pants and underwear. “You ready"? Jason asked. "Yup". Tom responded. “Okay turn around". Tom did this. Jason stood in front of him and moved toward him and bent forward inches in front of Tom.

Tom's mother noticed Tom wasn't himself. “Tom is everything okay"? She asked. “Ya". He responded. “Are you sure"? She said. Tom was silent for a few moments and told her what was bothering him. “I didn't want to play his game mommy". He said. "Who’s game" his mother asked. “Jason’s". Tom responded. His mother called Jason into the room. “What game did you play with Tom"? She asked. “Hey can we talk about this later? I and Tom wanted to go out to eat". Jason said. “I suppose so". Said Tom's mother. “but were gonna talk about this as soon as you two get home". "Okay Mom". Jason responded. “Let’s go Tom". He said. Tom and Jason went out to Jason's car and started off. “You told her about our game didn't you Tom"? Jason said angrily. Tom remained silent. “You said you wouldn't tell. You lied to me Tom. And lairs have to be punished". Jason pulled over and took out a knife. “Time to face your punishment"!

ONE YEAR LATER

A flier flew through the wind. Public search for Tom Nitsch ended. The boy is considered dead.

12:00 A.M. Johnathan Banks had just moved into a new house the day before. The night was quiet with a full moon. John was lying in bed when he heard a noise from the living room. A laughing sound. John thought maybe one of his brother's got up from bed. John went to the living room to take his brother back to bed. But instead what he found was a little boy. He definitely wasn't one of John's brothers. The boy was looking at a picture of some other teenager, stroking a bloody knife against it. He was chanting quietly, “I hate you, you hate me, now it's time to make you bleed with a knife up your ass and a bomb in your head, Tick tock tick tock boom your dead". Johnathan walked up to the boy nervously and asked " are lost little boy"? The little boy turned around. Johnathan screamed in terror. The boy was covered in blood and cuts. Clearly from a knife. “Lost? This is my house". Johnathan's eyes bulged. He couldn't believe this. “Won’t you play with me Johnathan"? He picked up his knife. “Forever and ever for all eternity"! 