User blog comment:ShadowX52/The Neccesities/@comment-24430858-20140117004645

To make characters realistic, use words that show that the character is confused and scared. Using this is effective in pastas written in 1st person. i.e.: "What the hell is going on? This cant be real, how can this be real? I...I just don't want to die, oh god please DONT LET ME DIE!!