Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26459137-20150604195425/@comment-26459137-20150605073725

I read it with attention, thanks for telleng me what is wrong with the storry this will help me a lot :) . Now that I'm reading it with your advices I can understand my fails and work on it. Thanks a lot (and I'm not sarcastic I swear) ...And for the schysofrenic people it isn't true in the storry, it's an excuses that people gave because they were afraid for this culture but I telld not much about it so it's normal that you don't understand I have tto work on It to. Thank you