Talk:The Polished Man/@comment-25954350-20150111123620

Thanks, Underscore. I've tried to rectify the issues to with plot continuity, and I think that I have succeeded.

I also made a small insert in the line in which the narrator describes the estate agent contacting him, saying that he took the recording on the computer. I'm not really sure if that is satisfactory for a reader - or unsatisfactory - but I think that it is appropriate. I didn't want to make too many additions to spoil the originality of the story.

Thanks, really, for taking the time to review.

Baron Brixus.