Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20190829215235/@comment-4893169-20190902210636

DrBobSmith wrote: It's those last three words that stop me. "swallowing her whole." Either one of those cats became elephant sized or she became the size of a mouse. If that is really what you want, then you have to specify it. "Eating her up" could work. Less specific and not blatantly physically impossible.

I'm going to be expanding the story a bit so the cat has a legitimate reason for getting back at the main character. Also there's a reasonable ending that might work.