Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20181013052639/@comment-34823985-20181013202205

DoctorBobSmith, your assessment of the ending is correct. You seem a little unsure, so is there anything I can clarify in the story to make that more obvious? Of course, I'd rather not come straight out and say Mr. Withers has died.

"It's a very gray line between who's the villain and who's the hero, as both central characters serve both roles. Great job with that type of writing." Thanks for that, Bloody. That was exactly what I was aiming for.

Locked, I really like the old man's inner monologue, but I can try to condense it. There's a small hint earlier in the story that he's been living alone for around forty years, so I hoped the monologue wouldn't seem too out of place.

Thanks guys. I really appreciate the feedback. I'm surprised nobody has mentioned the length. LOL.