Talk:Flicker

This pasta is written well, but the way that the explanation is given is a little weak. It's also not much of a reveal, after the main character starts to notice a pattern. It might have been better to have the character learn about the warning, then think back to realize that the message was "DIE" in morse code, and they were just ignoring it. That way the dialogue feels more natural, and so does the reveal. Dr. Malpractice 20:03, May 19, 2012 (UTC)