Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24169760-20151230212838/@comment-26007602-20151230214925

For the record, haunted video games are blacklisted. You manage to hit most haunted video game clichés as well, which doesn't help your case. Additionally, the story is a huge wall of text and absolutely riddled with grammatical errors. I don't think this story will ever be accepted, even after an extensive rewrite, due to the content.