User talk:PatriciaShane132

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 * As a quick review, I want to say that the story was not badly written, even though it had a couple of grammar/technical mistakes (reading your text through will usually clean them up). I'm afraid though the plot itself is hard to pull off in such a short story. We don't get to know the characters and the plot is character-centric, so I'm afraid it falls flat.


 * Keep practising with different plots/storylines and eventually you'll get there. You definitely have potential, so if you keep at it, I'm sure you will do great in the future. MrDupin (talk) 11:58, August 4, 2017 (UTC)