Talk:Joe the Creep/@comment-27670640-20160124232443

The good: Great visual imagery, believable dialogue between characters and perfect length. The bad: Heavily clichéd with the disturbed-for-no-reason employee, dark basement etc. And it's severe flaw is the obvious FNAF ripoff.

One thing I'd change: I personally believed Narrator should of found the diary with "Mike said (insert rhyme here) did not apologise" and the narrator high tailing it after that would of been a better ending. Instead of the generic ghost apparition that happens at the end of 99% of pastas.

Exemplary writing and storytelling turn a passable pasta into something worth a read once, outweighing the been there done that story itself. 7/10