Talk:The Exodus of Krähendorf Felsen/@comment-5733573-20180604215445/@comment-34090365-20180605045353

Thanks for the feedback mate! I'm gonna address the points a bit out of order. I kinda expected the wording to be a problem, as I'm not the best with words. The victorian outfit for the goatman was intentionally put in the wrong era to make it feel unnatural (the reason for which may or not be revealed in the second part), but I should have worded it as "the best way someone in that era would" instead of the explanation type thingy with the child (whoch was supposed to act as not only a "funny" little detail, but also a riff on stories like Origin of Laughing Jack that clearly didn't do much research). Perhaps I should've left out that detail and reveal in the second part, but I guess it's too late.

The thing about the way people reacted to the "artifacts" is (somewhat) justifiable (but only like 12%, I dunno) as I didn't want to elaborate on too many details... This was a bad choice. I should've put in more details, elaborated on the happenings, as it seems like the reaction in the story was their only one.

As for it being too much, there's another story called Disappearance of Ashley, Kansa, and I felt like I had to add a lot so that people didn't think I just blatantly copied it. I though of this story, then I learned about that story, I was like "Oh shit, people might think I copied this!" so I scurried to make sure it didn't seem that way, lol.

Anyway, I assume you saw my comment saying to criticize my story as relentlessly as you want, cause I meant it, and it seems you didn't hold any punches. I'm glad for that, as restrained criticism is, in my opinion, the weakest form of criticism. Cheers mate!

CreepyGojiToasta (talk) 04:53, June 5, 2018 (UTC)CreepyGojiToasta