Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24996913-20140801224650/@comment-24996913-20140802061006

Honestly, I wrote this one way passed my sleeping schedule, so I definitely agree with you on everything you pointed out. Haha, I got careless. And, I wasn't really passionate about it as I am with the others. I see I have to rework some major things in this story as you suggested. Thanks a lot for your feedback. You're one of the few that I enjoy getting a reply from.