Talk:Dogscape/@comment-25389658-20141028210607

I take that 100/10 back and make it 50/10 after analyzing and looking over the story. There are what seem like never ending paragraphs and typos and who types when dead? (Log Fourteen) is it like a documentary found by someone in the dogscape? And did he move and take his diary with him to write? Also is this story switching back and forth between people or changing characters OR staying focus on one person? I found one spot that had repeated two words twice. You should reread after you type it. I don't really what to seem mean or rude if I offended you but I still think the story was well thought out. I don't want to seem like a big jerk, so I am sorry!