Talk:The White Owl/@comment-25333834-20140827013228

The main issue I had with this was that there was really no background from the very beginning. There was also far too much irrelevant information compared to the story's word count. I still have no idea what this woman's occupation was. This story had so much potential too! If just a slight bit more research had gone into it and then maybe tweak the formatting a bit this would have been genius! I still really like this and would love to see some kind of rewrite.