User blog comment:Bountybear/It has come to my attention.../@comment-24381385-20140323201628

My stories aren't the greatest, but they didnd't get deleted so they're not bad I guess.

All I can say is write something that feels natural to write, but also feels natural to read.

If it doesn't read easily change it, untill it feels natural and easy to read.

Just assume that the average reader does not understand the story, and change it to something easy to digest, if that makes any sense.