Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-10319977-20151014231140/@comment-6548012-20151016140500

That's good, I just have an idea, tell me if you like it: “I sat down in front of my laptop and clicked 'Play,' resuming the horror movie as I put on my headphones, when a loud, dry wheezing forced its way into my ears and caught me off-guard as I had set down my snacks.

Only then, did I realize that the video was still buffering.”

I just tried some different wording, keeping in mind an aloud lecture of it. But I'm not sure if it's the best, since, well, I'm not a creepypasta writer at all, but a good reader.