Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-33696343-20181115144801/@comment-33696343-20181115180410

L0CKED334 wrote: The paragraphs are poorly formatted. There are over two dozen spelling and grammatical errors. This would never meet quality standards just based on that, not to mention the story content itself. I think the idea was to put a spin on the typical 'road ritual pasta' but it did not hit the mark. It almost reads as trollpasta.

You need to take your basic idea back to the drawing board and try to make it sound less hokey if you want it to be taken seriously as a story. The character doesn't even seem that scared, considering what occured to them. So what do I need to fix?