Talk:Bhangarh Fort/@comment-34996269-20180314123917

This is a fine piece of writing. Good plot, fine characters, great location and a steady pace. You had me gripped till the very end. I don't want to sound nit-picky, but I felt like the Bride should have had a major role to play, like why did she choose Rick? Was it to teach him a lesson? may be you can do a prequel about the Bride, or a sequel about how Rick tries to save his first born. Lol, I am a sucker for a good and delicious pasta. 9/10 from me.