Talk:The Window in Front of Me/@comment-5733573-20181008151430/@comment-37126294-20181008214900

To be honest, I completely agree with you. I worked so hard on the beginning and the end was just me at 3:00 AM trying to rush a conclusion. I wasn't even happy with what I wrote overall. I'm going to try to rewrite it, and thanks for your review. This is my first story, and I just want to get the hang of story writing.