Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37197096-20181014231222/@comment-9041013-20181015000426

Well, first you've to finish the story, these "cliff hanger" endings aren't cliff hanger endings they just make the focus of the reader fade away quicker. It's not a good tactic to "sell" your work to an audience.

Second, from what I gather this is going to be filled with ACTUAL cliches, people will find this discouraging and quit on your story quickly.

And third, seems like English isn't your thing.