User talk:Tiololo

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ImGonnaBeThatGuy (talk) 15:52, January 18, 2014 (UTC)

"You know when I feel closest to our Maker? When I see suffering, pain, and anguish. That's when the true design of this world is revealed." 08:35, January 19, 2014 (UTC)

Please don't add pages to deleted categories. Here I refer to 'Death', which was deleted a while ago: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Category:Death

-- Detonator Coil, suitable for a small nuclear device    (Leave a message here)  08:02, March 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded story Please don't re-upload your deleted story; it's against the rules. If you really want your story back so badly, make a case on deletion appeal instead. If you re-upload a deleted pasta again, you will receive a 1-day suspension from editing.

LOLSKELETONS (talk) 13:53, March 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re:
No problem. I just saw it was floating to the left a bit and decided to fix it up, since it makes the page look horribly ugly.

P.S. For your custom signature, it would be helpful to include a link to your profile for easier communication. To make the code work, put this in the custom sig box: Rinskuro13 LOLSKELETONS (talk) 20:09, June 26, 2014 (UTC)


 * If you put that code in the custom signature box in your preferences (make sure "I want to use wikitext in my signature" is checked first), it should display the signature and time stamp when you type four tildes. (Note that three tildes ONLY displays the signature, so that might have been what you did.)


 * LOLSKELETONS (talk) 21:41, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Just Finished!
I know you asked for narrative advice, but in all honesty, there is little I can give at this point. You're considerably better than I am at the 1st-person perspective. I can't really offer anything other than making your future stories a little bit shorter if possible- both stories were excellent, but I feel they could be slightly shortened. Also, when you are separating a single sentence from a paragraph, do so very sparingly, and I advise against that entirely if you are writing from 3rd person.

CassistRabbit (talk) 22:01, June 29, 2014 (UTC)CassistRabbit

You're Welcome.
I think you could ask an admin to critique it, and mention the fact that I think your sequel was Suggested Reading worthy. See what they think.

If you're going to read something of mine, at this point, I'd rather have your input on my latest WW post (Should I Use This Plot? NSFW) It's an idea for my next story, so if you don't mind relatively NSFW content, let me know if I should change anything about the idea.

Thanks in advance, CassistRabbit (talk) 23:14, June 30, 2014 (UTC)CassistRabbit

Friendly Message
OK, I get it. I'm sorry if I offensed you too, I misunderstood. I hope we can get to know better properly :)


 * hendshek*

FrenchTouch (talk)

Yay!
I hope so :)

But don't worry, I know that the chat isn't a massive chatroom and that it has big problems. When I'll have ideas, I'll contribute, be sure of that :D

FrenchTouch (talk).

Bloody Snow prequel
Idk if you remember, but you read a story of mine, Bloody Snow and I'm working on a prequel for it right now. I've posted a part of it on Workshop, would you please check it out? Here's a link:

White World

Sykokillah (talk) 15:33, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

White World
Thanks for all the feedback. The legible thing was a mistake, dude, I typed that in by accident, so don't laugh too much; I know what it means -_- I agree with you on the short sentence thing, though. I have severe writer's block right now. The past-to-present thing was intentional. The writer didn't care much whilst remembering the events that took place.

I agree with you on the paragraphing too, when I sit down to write, I'm like 'I'm gonna write paragraphs that are at least five lines long, har har har' but when I write 'em it's like this. (._.) The story is short because it isn't finished yet so double -_- Thanks for making sooooo many edits on it.

Sykokillah (talk) 19:59, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

M4R
Please don't remove the M4R tag from stories, as only admins may remove it. If this happens again, I may have to issue a block.

08:24, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Helpful template
When marking a story for review, you can use this template at the top of the page that needs review: This helps us out when we're looking over the story by telling us what we should focus on. For example, the page you last put down for review, there were some wording, nor punctuation, and a really thin-spread plot, but I can't be sure what issue you found with the story. With that template, it'll help. Thanks. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:06, April 6, 2015 (UTC)
 * No need to apologize, it actually helps that we have readers looking over stories and helping us do QC on them. The M4R template is a relatively new, but helpful creation. As for spinoffs, there are a number of older stories that are grandfathered in and are excluded from the spinoff rule. (For example, we have a 100+ poke pastas and Zelda stories despite the fact they are now on the blacklist) So really anything from before 2013 that is a spinoff is typically alright to stay on the site. That being said, if you come across a spinoff/blacklisted story that you feel is not good quality, don't hesitate to mark it for review.


 * The "delete now" template is more for stories that are spam, abysmal quality, or is a recently posted story that violates the blacklist. On a final note, I saw the message you left on Mystreve's page. He is unfortunately out at the moment, but if you're looking for feedback, I read Spider Cannibals and enjoyed it. My only real issue was the shortness of some of the entries as well as journal entries not being conducive to a more action-oriented story (It seems like a more passive method for telling a story). That aside, I enjoyed it when I read it back in June (did some minor edits too). EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:37, April 6, 2015 (UTC)


 * Unfortunately Steve is on a bit of a hiatus with RL issues. I hope he'll get everything together and come back soon. I will try to read the stories if you link them, but no promises on responding today as I just got in the door from work and I have a few other things to take care of before I have a bit of free time. Additionally if you are insecure about the overall quality of one of your stories, before posting it, you can submit it to the writer's workshop for feedback/assistance. In fact, last month's PotM started out there. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:01, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

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10:13, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re:
As it is a series, and not a continuation, I might suggest reworking the second part, fleshing it out some, building, and differentiating it from the original (because when I read it, I assumed it was the same person as in the first one.) and giving it a new title. For example, I have a few stories that all have similar themes that are all joined under a series name, but have different titles. I understand the idea of the feeling of defenselessness while in a restroom, so I think it's an interesting idea, but numbering it (Public Toilet 1, 2, 3) seems to imply a continuation of the original story instead of using a motif (if that makes sense). It also allows for a little more creativity and helps identify stories from one another.

As for the deletion reason, we unfortunately only have a few set reasons we can give when selecting an explanation. As your story wasn't spam, a spinoff, lacking story/content, the reason was likely subsumed under the quality standards reason. We can write in our own reasons, but we really don't have much space to go as in-depth as we'd like. I assume if you asked him, he would point out a lot of the things I covered in the deletion appeal as he had a good twenty-thirty minutes to look over the story as opposed to most Quality Standards deletions which are usually issued within five minutes of the story being posted. You can ask him if you want, but just know that he's probably a bit more busier than I am and might not give you a paragraph upon paragraph response due to the fact that he's also one of the few (beside me) that are attempting to make the site run smoothly. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 18:25, April 7, 2015 (UTC)