Talk:My Morning Bike Ride/@comment-27716587-20160202133942

Ending kind of came out of nowhere. -.3 What exactly happened? -.4 We don't know much about the main character. Where is he going? Why does he live in a crappy garage, is he homeless? I think it could use a little more fleshing out. -.5 Slight punctuation errors. -.1 Final Score: 8.7 I like the descriptive imagery in this pasta. I especially like the imagery of the house and it's garage. This would have been a great pasta if the ending wasn't so rushed. However, it's still a good one from the imagery alone, let alone the rest of its good aspects.