Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-1186783-20140817151538/@comment-1186783-20140819200245

@Banning: Thanks, your reviews are always helpful, and I'm already starting to get some ideas. I think I can expand this first, then go back and see what can be easily removed.

BTW: How big do you think the Dawson family should be? My brain tells me that Peter also has a daughter, but I'm not sure what to do with her, so I kept the reference vague. I'm also tempted to give Peter's father a story, but I'm not sure how far to go beyond that. Part of my brain says "the Dawson family is a huge and powerful family," but I'm afraid I'll get into sequelitis by the time I get into aunts, uncles, and cousins.