Talk:"In the Broad Sense"/@comment-25941663-20151010133626/@comment-27012445-20151010145035

Hello, thank you for reading my story. I put quotation marks around the title to emphasize that it was the translation of the Latin word O. unilateris. If it an incorrect use of punctuation I will definitely fix. Would you have any suggestions for improvement to address the issue of getting lost during the read through?