User blog comment:A-Lord-Over-Birds/Well, this is interesting./@comment-24573916-20140224020445

Being overly concerned about writing something suspenseful is obviously the problem, of course this a reason due to my own experience. Instead focus on something that is personal to you that is frightening or creepy, so you are bringing in a sense of realism in direct relation to your personal life make it far easier to write. These are just some ideas that you might find useful but then again it is just what works for me. Hope this helps if you have any other questions or concerns I am gladly willing to help whatever I can.

Gore