Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-25477067-20150203231831/@comment-25477067-20150204182330

Thank you for the criticsism and I will fix a lot of these problems. The computer file and that whole problem is defienently a big part of the story and as such, cannot be posted here. However, I thought that the reviwing capabilities of this site could help me get it published on other sites.

The audiotape not reading like one is a problem that I did not forsee, I will admit, but I know now and am better informed to deal with that problem. Thank you for that as well.

My name, is unfortunately the byproduct and a young, excited person impatient to get the registration process over with and post his obviously superior story. I have mellowed with a few failures and now wish I could change my name. Alas, some things are not to be. :)