Talk:Bloodied Trees and Bright Lights/@comment-27142711-20160720133038

This story definitely has an eery and unsettling atmosphere to it. It's just lack lustre in virtually everything else. It's not bad, far from it, it just requires refining: more fleshed out characters, a more developed mythos (although sometimes ambiguity can add enormous effect to works like this). The writer has a rather unique style of writing and that could certainly be manipulated to improve the story even further. But at the moment I'm afraid it's a middle ground story: not bad, but not particularly fantastic either.