Talk:The Buzz/@comment-27166382-20151105235806

Extremely overrated. I get that this is a "part 1" now, but it was originally framed as a standalone story, and something that requires this much reading better have a goddamn better ending than "oh look, something gross with no explanation".

It also didn't help that you have to shoehorn in a romantic subplot to fulfill your own fantasies. Really distracted from whatever spooky substance this might've had. I'm not saying part 2's explanation can't save this, but it's garbage on its own. Well written from a technical standpoint, though!