Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-44605280-20200204202423/@comment-44605280-20200206202738

Yeh thx bro I do respect the feed back though I kinda scraped this whole story idea and made a fresh restart it is not the rake but in includes the rake I ain’t sure how to explain it but I cajole find a way to show you what I have done on it and perhaps you can help me decide if it should be put in parts or the whole thing in one