Talk:Looks Like We Got a Live One Here, Boys/@comment-25024572-20150203223043

That was a good story. The only real criticism I can level is weird italicizing at this part: The monstrous creature leapt over the refrigerator and Calendula had just enough time to think to himself, the shotgun is under the bed and the shells are in the closet (Yarrow refused to allow him to keep a loaded gun around). "Are in the closet" isn't italicized, the rest of the thought it, along with the words in the parentheses. Other than that, it was great. Good job.