Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26926430-20150825131056

Shivering through my dark hallway walking slowly, scared, alone. The only sound came from my parents downstairs watching TV, I walk towards the sound but I couldn’t there seemed to be something stopping me from making any progress in walking down the dingy hall. Then it happened again the walls cracked, the smell of damp and mould cloud my nostrils and stop me from being able to breath he was here again the one I feared the most, to my parents it seem irrational.

To me he was big, he was really big, he was scary with sharp teeth that looked like the tip of a pyramid as if the Egyptian shaped his teeth to look like this on purpose. I run to the bathroom lock the door and duck in the bathroom behind the hamper and wait for my parents to come upstairs. A deep demonic laughter and slowly turn around to look at the shower curtain and see a large dark shadow, claws like a sabretooth tigers teeth. I just froze as I see his nattering jaws opening and closing with laughter as a slash rips through the shower curtain, he swings at me. I unlock the door and sprint down the hall to my room. I think to myself “How can my parent’s sim him as being so innocent and sweet.”

I made to my room no lock so I hide under the bed, I knew he was coming and he would get me. I look from under the bed and see the door handle twist and I slide back under the bed and hold my hand over my mouth to silence my breathing.

“RAWR!!!”

The door tears open his rawr was like a bee in your ear terrifying and loud. He begin to look around the room searching for me and he goes towards the bed and is about to lift the quilt to see me when “THUD!” something in the closet drops and he turns around to see what it was he tears the doors of the closet open and sees nothing. I scramble from under the bed and run to the door he turns round and pounces me throwing me at the door. When I first got him I didn’t expect this to happen I loved him he was soft and cuddly but then he gained confidence and began to come after me.

My teddy bear was a monster, the monster that hunted me and became my capture.

He came over and picked me off the floor and pinned me up against the wall, he then extends his arms back with his claws spread wide when he plunges them into my chest and splits my heart. The last thing I hear is his laughter, the last thing I see is him leave through my bedroom window licking my blood off his bloodied claws.

My eyes shut and I my breathing stops, the teddy bear I loved became my capture and my murderer.  