Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26893881-20150804114957/@comment-26893881-20150804183406

Thanks, mate.

Favourite is spelt differently in the UK, same goes for colour.

The spacing was just an accident that happened while I was inserting the picture.

The comma thing was my mistake, so I'm sorry.

But, I'll go through it again.

Other than the mistakes is the story better or worse than the last one?

Andrew