Talk:Dad.txt/@comment-31376722-20190109023846

1/10. I mean yeah its sad, but its not a creepypasta. And come on, the ending was doo-doo. "The document, which started off with things such as ‘I’m sorry;’ ‘I love you;’ and ‘Goodbye;’ was his father’s suicide note." Doesnt sound right. You're just writing down words!! Write what the dad would actually say, this just, bugs me so goddamn much. Overall, you need to improve your writing, and the title is so clichè.