Talk:Walk Through the Forest/@comment-24536106-20140212054749

This was really cliche. The 'news report' killed it. It wasn't even a creepypasta. Just some guy dying of dehydration and a rant of atheism.

I feel like only 5 minutes of effort was put into this with little basis or concept; 2/10, try formulating it out more and probe into the fears and relations of a believable character and a human mind.