Talk:Kenosis/@comment-25170312-20150301021815

Overall, I thought this was excellent. The writing was superb and varied between the different main characters. There were parts that, even though they grossed me out, reminded me of the manga/film series, Tomie, and film director Takeshi Miike. Were they at all influential on this pasta?

My only complaint is with the Devil. His dialogue seems a little too straightfoward. And at the end when he says "I am the Devil", it's kind of a let down. I feel like he should speak more metaphorically.

If it wasn't for the very adult content, I would nominate this for pasta of the month (which I have never done before).