Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35070221-20180926235136/@comment-36627132-20180927125412

Urncle wrote: What should I do to fix the plot issues? Mainly the 3rd one. And I need to know, is this story at least a good concept? I'm going to answer the final question first: honestly it does not really seem like a good concept for a creepypasta. It is a story about an animal going crazy (which happens a lot in real life) which ends with tragic results (which too hapens in real life).

As for what you should do to fix the plot: I really can't see it being salvaged. I don't want to sound rude or anything, but like I said there is nothing creepy or scary about it. It's more tragic than it is scary.

I hope I didn't sound rude or anything, I just don't see it working. Try again, though.