Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-5034925-20140409181725/@comment-9780519-20140409223914

Agentskintaker wrote:  Their kind of like the aristocrats joke accept as a horror story.

And you know that sole purpose of the aristocrats was to fill the story with as much shocking material as possible, but not to worry about having an actual story. That's what this is, you just try to be shocking but you really sound like a little kid that just learned dirty words so you're trying to show how cool you are.