Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4849011-20160604033711/@comment-4849011-20160908013100

Look at it this way- it's a whole lot better then the critic who shouts, "YOU SUCK!" and then doesn't explain the complex reasons that led to their decision to make such a statement. ;-)

I'm happy that it looks good, and I'm glad you liked the descriptions and exchanges. Daniel has despair, but he's not entirely hopeless because he's ready to make a new start. Luckily for Daniel this will be the last time his loyalty and integrity will be brought up because I think I've answered the question. Daniel has his struggles and issues, but he has integrity, and he means well. He's like that friend who has been through some stuff and sometimes has a bad attitude, but he's witty and you like hanging around with him, and you could trust him to watch your money or valuables while you go to the bathroom. Speaking of sassy fits, I can imagine Devotee having a dramatic stare-down with some foes, then saying, a la Ted Knight from Caddyshack, "Well? We're waiting!" The last part will be a while because I want it to be good. I don't want it to be like some movie series where the last part is a huge disappointment because they did a rush job. For the record, the drug Missy gave Daniel was sodium pentothal- better known as truth serum since it makes people less guarded.

As always, I appreciate the feedback- even if it came with a disclaimer that there wasn't much feedback.