Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20181024015838/@comment-36393004-20181024022430

Banned In CP wrote: I liked this one has the air of a classic, though the sentence “Don’t be sad, now you don’t have to divide your love. I can be the only son.” seems a bit advanced for a three year old. A few minor mistypes here and there, nothing too major. I am a bit confused about the end, though. Was he about to push Jacob off the bridge? And is the choice not to the one he references in the last sentence? I will work on Jacob's quote. I had trouble with that and wasn't sure how to put it. Yes, he was going to dump Jacob into the river to keep him from killing again but decided not to.