Talk:1999/@comment-26253657-20150403111459

This Pasta had a good writing quality that was consist throughout. A few details were wrong or edited in places for example singles being listed and then plurals being used (eg tape and then Elliot sees tapes). Aside from that little detail I found this Pasta intriguing and good although the end with Mr Bear apparently writing a message was poor. Sure, it adds to a creepy atmosphere but if it were Mr Bear then it would be signed 'Mr Bear' not 'Mr B'.

Very minor mistakes are the ones I have pointed out. To improve I would suggest updating and giving it a 'proper' ending - eg solving the mystery properly - but that's all I can think of. An intriguing, realistic Pasta to really make you shiver. 9/10.