Talk:Jeff the Killer 2015/@comment-35245036-20180408133034

My god if this is a story that won first place then I would hate to see the other ones. This is one of the worst creepypastas I've ever read on this site. The plot is just as bad as the original story, the characters feel one-dimensional, and the ending makes this story total fanfiction (bad fanfiction at that). Overall, the story feels lifeless and you really don't give a shit about any of the characters in this story. A good story would make you feel something towards a certain character, but this doesn't do anything but bore you to keep on reading until it's finally over.