Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-37090617-20181006214715/@comment-37090617-20181008071156

Maybe something like this

"I couldn't pay attention to my test, just some aura emitted from the man. In my head, I thought it's just how he looks, and the good side of me said not to judge others by looks. Anyways, thing is that this guy is freaking me out. I started to rush my test to leave the classroom, but then I looked up and due to him facing the other way, I was able to see he was watching something through his laptop. I almost let out a gasp when I found out what it was. What kind of sick freak would watch people getting tortured? I tried to tell myself that maybe he's watching a show. Through my peripheral vision, I saw something huge in his bag, and I could see an almost hidden knife. The tip was red, and I could see the red go down to some parts of the knife near the handle. I jump to conclusions, and I'm glad I did, that this guy is a psychopath."

Through that I can revamp the story and at the end, maybe say that one of the characters family members mentions a news report about a dead body found of a substitute teacher, which was the character's teacher? I appreciate that you told me this, I can definetly see my creepypasta being somewhat better with some english errors fixed and revamping a bit about the substitute.