Talk:Teeth.jpg/@comment-25630269-20141108142232

A brilliant pasta I suppose. However, there are some plotholes, as the story climaxes. Perhaps u could add in more detail how did the writer assume that Daniel was there in the ending. Moreover, there gore was a little bit unreal for Lily.

Nevertheless, it is still a beautiful masterpiece due to the creepiness that grips the readers' attention. A definite 8/10 for it and hope I to see more of your writes