Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20160802003754/@comment-26444017-20160802172039

Thanks a lot. I agree with the mechanical issues point. They just aren't flagged by the spell checker, so they are easy to overlook, but I will be sure to correct them. The stylistic problems are understandable. I'll see about punching up the language a bit, and altering his attitude toward the events leading up to the ending. I went ahead and looked at the cliches (can't find the command for the accented 'e'), and I thought I avoided most of them, but the nature of the craft is such that you are going to hit a few.

By the way, just as an aside, I did write one other pasta that got accepted, titled I'm Sorry. If you are interested, feel free to give it a read.