Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-17118109-20141223041417/@comment-24101790-20141223130135

The story reminds me a little bit of Your Very Own Robot Clone in the way the story is told through an ad and the horror is implied as opposed to being directly mentioned.

Here is a template to help with making those numbers into footnotes: Number It'll give it a bit more of the advertisement feel you are looking for. I also believe that specifically mentioned laws are capitalized. (World Law #94/#63/#42A)

In all honesty, I feel like this would be better suited as an introduction to a story which would then be followed up by a narrative of how this restoration has gone horribly awry for the protagonist and/or the restored person. By itself, I think it might be a bit polarizing to readers. (Some will like the inferred horror; while others might be a little disappointed with the more passive method of story-telling.)