Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4143377-20180422180432/@comment-9041013-20180423185814

The plot critique on my behalf is purely my opinion, someone else might love it. I fell for the trick, in some spots along the plot. I do think once you work on the more technical issues it'd be a crazy-enough-to-work kind of idea.

The bi thing was mostly a joke, even though the mentioning of arousal as a result of the seductive Lacey zombie's dancing so I capitalized on it. Honestly, it's really funny how sensitive people are about the subject. Some of my closest friends are none straight, so I'm not against them or anything.