User blog comment:Olivia-Bal/I have a creepypasta but i gotta wait for it to be uploaded./@comment-25170312-20150117214105

I looked over your pasta before it was deleted. I think what you're really waiting for is just an explanation of why it was deleted, so maybe I can help with that. It was really messy. The grammar was way below standards. When the speaker changes in dialogue, you didn't make a new paragraph. There was way too many sentences in all caps. You don't have to show us that the character is angry. We'll understand by what they're saying, and maybe an exclamation point or two. I can't comment on the plot of characters because I didn't read it thoroughly, but the technical errors are more than enough to warrant deletion. If you can fix the grammar, spelling, and formatting, then put it on the Writer's Workshop and we can give you some advice on the rest of it.