Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27838637-20160727122520/@comment-27838637-20160801083638

Finally got some days off so I'll hopefully have the rest of the story complete in the next 24 Hours! (almost had the 60 Days online achievement but I lost it)

'Exhaust' is actually a really great title. I hadn't put any thought into the title, so thanks for giving me the idea!

If you could also give me some tips on how to make the story more scary, I'd really appreciate it. I'm kind of lacking when it comes to 'scare-factor' so I'm hoping to make this story my creepiest/scariest so far.

Also, I've got the end-game of the story planned, but I'm just hoping it's not going to be lackluster. It's got quite a twist, but I'm hoping that it's not too predictable, cliche, or random. In short, I'm stressing out alot more than I should so it will be good to get this completed!

A_O.