Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-29791712-20160321044649/@comment-28055451-20160326033042

I read yoiur story, and I really didnt get any spook. It also has some slight ressonance (sight, mind you) with The Jeff Formula. Slight because your protagonist never went on a killing spree and mutilated herself. But she did have a freakout after an abusive dad, and wierd grandad. But I am probly being a bit too anylytical. this is by no means a major issue.

But I still didnt feel any spook. Just a narritive about an eccentric grandad and a kid that disses their grandma. Overall, not fantastic.