Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24841964-20141109212641/@comment-25634501-20141110034836

I really liked the premise. The writing was actually really well executed too. I didn't see any significant errors in your writing and by the end it had me thinking.

I love how his punishment was to be reborn into his own personal hell which was in fact a potentially perfect life.

Dialogue is excellent and not rushed at all. Great pacing. Overall, you should consider publishing it on the wiki officially. I think others would enjoy reading this as well.