Talk:The Zebra/@comment-30402176-20170109194358

Ahhh. I like the premise behind this story - a mysterious video that takes over the minds of an entire class. But personally I think it could have ended better, if we were left on a cliffhanger of sorts - say for instance if we were left to puzzle over the contents of that film, and knew less about it. That would be great. Also, yes I must agree that the story's ending was rushed; the denouement was spilled out in such few words, with such little detail, that it detracted from the overall credibility.