Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28088262-20150602144727/@comment-26512885-20150709014623

Hi, this is probably my favorite pasta I have read, great idea, well written and an ending which came as a shock as well as a nice twist. I think, being slightly unhinged myself, I could really connect with the characters, making it all the better.

You say its unreviewed so I'm assuming no one has looked at spelling ect, bar you. My spelling isnt great so I'll leave that to someone else.