Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27675561-20160126210241/@comment-27675561-20160128195938

I don't know if the Admins here can see this, or if they get notified, but this story here was recently deleted. I let it sit in the workshop for a few days to see if there would be any complaints or not but it looks like it was deleted. Punctuation, formatting, ellipses overuse, wording issues... I guess I need some help getting these pointed out, here.