Talk:The Shambling Guest/@comment-26425680-20181030142907/@comment-35612663-20181030165446

Thank you very much for your feedback, you are absolutely right, I had TONS of ellipses, as I was reading them as pauses in my head, and I should have taken them out. I have since addressed that issue, along with general grammar construction, and will work on my run-on sentences and unnecessary details as well.