Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24982950-20170318105927/@comment-25458443-20170318131730

I haven't finished reading it but right off the bat I'd change " However, it was limited and groggily he attempted to gain a bearing of his surroundings." to " However, it was limited and he groggily attempted to gain a bearing of his surroundings."

Since "awareness was limited and groggily" is how that reads but I'm pretty sure that's not what you meant to convey...considering that doesn't make any sense.