Talk:A Day Like Any Other/@comment-7673575-20171209125910

Good piece, except two things:

Hanging a picture on a mirror kinda kills the whole point of 'made it look like a suicide. Shower head is rarely strong enough to support a weight of a man, even if he is in his teens, so it's unlikely that anyone could kill themselves that way. And slit wrists (God, I hate writing those words) are by themselves enough for suicide, so hanging would be obstinate (unless you are going for Yesenin's death, but then you have to hang yourself to a radiator pipe). That part could use a little work.

And second: who the hell is Carrie? Also, the sentence where that name appears ('I left a picture of her coated pigs blood, much like Carrie') is kinda confusing: what does it mean?