Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-3563804-20170909034219/@comment-29652084-20170909062349

http://lmgtfy.com/?q=Basic+Writing+Resources

It's really not that hard. Read any story from here and then compare it (stylistically) to yours. Capitalize 'I'. Start a new paragraph when someone new is speaking in a conversation. Use a spell checker to help catch spelling errors (use your better judgment as well).

Creepypasta Wiki:Style Guide for Writing Creepypasta Wiki:Writing Advice

Read through those too. If you're going to write, you need to know how to write and have a basic sense of mechanics, grammar, and style.