Talk:Its Red Grin/@comment-5269370-20131225220916

Aside from a few punctuation errors (commas where there should be semi-colons and missing quotation marks) this was an absolute joy to read. The plot is amazing, the characters are so well described, and the alternation of narratives and setting (The diary from the sixties, the leap of 3 years from when the parents died and when he went to college) makes this very interesting to follow. Also,l the last few lines are quite thought provoking as to how this truly ended, and leave it open for interpretation. Very well done.

9.1/10