Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36393004-20180911211556/@comment-9041013-20180912113303

Well.. this just gives me too many vibes of a bad Michael Myers impersonation. Sure, I know the feeling, I've been there myself. But come on, he's out right "evil" mental because it suits the plot.

Disonance does not make you evil, it makes you uncomfortable, so he exploads, reasonable... but why is he almost clearly enjoying his new found "neurotic rage mode" if the cause of said situation is something that makes a person uncomfortable.

The ending pretty much kills the whole thing for me.

Please forgive me :(