Talk:The Shredder Monkey/@comment-26391155-20160501162522

This is pretty good. the biggest things wrong with it in my opinion were 1 it's kind of confusing, but it is different from other pastas iv'e read, and the other is you forgot to capitalize Ariana's name near the end, but other than that it's quite good 8.5/10 (sorry if my grammar is poor)