Talk:Cattle Mutilation on My Husband's Great Grandfather's Ranch/@comment-24281984-20141223211232

Although I did like this story, I feel like it could have been better. We never did get much of an explanation as to what happened to the cows, which was kind of a let-down after all the odd things that happened to them and even to the ranchers. The writing, while not great, was decent enough to keep me interested throughout and the gore wasn't too excessive. I think a bit of a rewrite by the author is a good idea, but as is it's still a pretty good pasta.