Talk:She-Wolf in Sheep's Clothing/@comment-7673575-20180225191228

I really looked forward to this entry.

Let's see if the hype was justifed.

Review time.

 GENERAL QUALITY:  A few minor typos scattered unevenly, and somewhat frequent misuse of commas. However, this was mostly compensated by the fact that the author gave the effort and used special signs in places where it was necessary (cliché instead of cliche, façade instead of facade, usv).  Score: 19/25 

 HORROR FACTOR:  I have to admit, this story really kept me on the edge, because, in all honesty, the bad guy flag shifted between Jeff and Alice many times, so I wasn't exactly sure who was the bad guy until the end. Also, I have a feeling that all that "sacrifice to my dark lord" deal has been slightly overused by this point, which kinda killed the mood, but the gore was enough to mostly compensate.  Score: 20/25 

 LYRICAL INTERPRETATION:  The song was implemented fair enough, but I have a feeling like the author took it a bit too literally. Still, the "evil fucking women" that Dave said were the inspiration for this song was welded inside without much seams.  Score: 19/25 

 ENTERTAINMENT VALUE:  Honestly, I'm a bit leaning here: it was a good read, but it felt like a bit of heavy cliché at the very end, which was a turn off: like the last bite of a savoury cheese pie that someone filled with sugar instead (man, I'm good with analogies!).  Score: 17/25 

 FINAL SCORE: 75/100