Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27974670-20160710070645/@comment-28266772-20160712134131

Hi,

thanks for the defence Jay ten - you're my night in golden-font armour!

And TheWilySpookster no worries! I appreciate that people are often in a rush - plus I have a tendency to be harsh and I know every one of us treats our stories like they're our babies, so no one really wants to give praise to the guy who criticizes their baby (this is why I'm no longer allowed in parks).

If you want you can either edit your current story above, post the new draft as a reply (this will have the benefit of bumping your thread). You can also leave a message on my talk page to let me know you've posted the update here and I'll try to get my feedback to you quickly. Although the workshop is pretty damned busy at the moment so it might take a bit longer than a day.