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Welcome to my talk page ! How goes the ? Just make sure  doesn't bother you too much. You know what I always say, " ." Also, don't let your long-standing fear of  get the better of you. Feel free to leave a message and sign it with four tildes (~) Like this: ~ Also note, keep messages civil. If you leave an acerbic message expect me to respond in kind.

I just wanted to apologize for the multiple times I reloaded my deleted story. I am brand new to this site and I thought my story was being deleted accidentally, and I didn't realize there was a talk page where admins were trying to get in touch with me. Again I am very sorry. It won't happen again. I will review grammar and spelling and hopefully get my story correct. Have a great day! Spacecattt (talk) 21:56, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

I don't wanna throw a pity party, but I'd like to know why my pasta was deleted, please. I figured going to the person who deleted it would be the best way. If it was a formatting issue, it's because I foolishly posted it from my phone, and I do apologize in general for wasting your time with a substandard post. Also, I'd like a copy of it, because I couldnt find it on the wiki in time to copy and paste it before it was deleted. Thank you.

Cpatterson205 (talk) 22:02, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Fairytale
I have just written the sweetest little fairytale. It is just charming. Enjoy hehehe Rumplestilskin

HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 22:17, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Alright point taken
I'm at least still fixing the misspellings. BedrockPerson :D  23:11, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

TRAVIS :D
Sorry, lol. I've been gone for so long, and so much has happened. How you've been? I know this isn't the place to ask questions like this, but I'm just wondering.

Howdy Ho! (talk)

I saw! I'm so happy for you! And you deserve to be a b-crat. Like, I wouldn't have wanted anyone else to be one that's on this site besides you, if a camapign was did for it. You're just, cut out for it. lol What happened to the chat?

Howdy Ho! (talk)

I went on spinpasta recently looking for a few individuals, actually. In a way, I am happy the chat was taken off. However, there is no way to PM people unless you result to the sister sites. Which takes effort. Well, I'm persuing my dreams of becoming a roll backer. Talked to SOMEGUY about it yesterday, and he agreed that if I can get my article edits up and be active for a month or two, it'll make up for the months I was abscent. God, I hope so. I'd really hate to run, to just have my hopes and dreams crushed by a bunch of ugly "-" signs. I think I know the rules pretty well around here, though. I obviously still need work, but I'm sure I know the good, the bad, and the ugly.

Howdy Ho! (talk)

Won't be an issue for me, I never do bad edits. The only downfall is, that I over do it because I sniff out anything bad in the pasta. It's whatever though. It was nice talking to you Travis! I'll stop blowing up your messages now. Talk to you soon! Ciao! P.S. - The top of your Talk Page introduction has a minor grammar mistake, but I thought you'd want to know about it. (Also, don't let you(r) long-standing fear of)

Howdy Ho! (talk)

Re: Warning
OMG that's so friggin' weird o_o. The first time I tried to edit, I hit "Preview" and it showed the entire thing as one ¶, and only some of it, the rest was gone! But, I went into Visual and made sure it was fine, which it was. When I hit Publish the page looked fine. Sorry, it didn't show up for me .-. BedrockPerson :D 23:16, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Damn your fast
Thanks HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 23:38, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Dubage
So just a random question.

Since you live in Colorado do you smoke weed?
 * Inb4 Empy changes his profile pic to this. 20:29, March 6, 2015 (UTC)
 * Well played sir, well played. My avatar could also use bloodshot "Squidward's Suicide"-esque red eyes. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:31, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Please inform me why my story was not up to quality standards. I worked hard on it, and wish to have it published. Thank you.

Simmer2001 (talk) 22:53, March 6, 2015 (UTC)Simmer2001

Always happy to help
Trav,

I am more than happy to lend my assistance in maintaining the Showcase, especially since I was one of the early supporters for the idea.

Just give me a quick bit of info on what I would be expected to do, and of course, how to actually go about doing it. (I don't know how to move articles at the moment, so I would a crash course in that.)

Thanks,

Banningk1979 (talk) 23:46, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Sounds good
Yeah, I'm in, so go ahead add the promotion so I can start feeling it out.

Thanks for the oppurtunity!

Banningk1979 (talk) 00:27, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the precise help, but I was wondering if by any chance, the story could be allowed to be accessed so I could get the story I worked pretty hard on. Thank you!

Simmer2001 (talk) 02:13, March 7, 2015 (UTC)Simmer2001

can u tell me why mines was deleted? and how can i go back and edit it?04:29, March 7, 2015 (UTC)Yuki sane (talk)

Military stuff
Hey, happy to help, but not sure how much of it you'll be able to fix. First off, I love Catch-22, unfortunate that I didn't catch that reference.

So a few things: being in the airforce, he'd be an airman, not a soldier (minor thing since most people think of anyone in the armed services as a 'soldier'...really it only applies to army.)

Larger issues: He wouldn't be out of the military that fast. Now, since the character was born in 1985 and is a first lieutenant, I read this from the view of the current war in Iraq/Afghanistan. The homecoming is unrealistic...in reality you come back on big planes with the rest of your unit. Once you get home to your post there is a big welcoming ceremony and then over the next weeks you go through a battery mental tests to determine if you have anything that rattled loose over there. If they do determine you have something wrong with you, you get a crap ton of help (there have been some issues with vets who are out of the military having their benefits delayed, but somebody like this guy would have been getting seen from the second he set foot back on American soil.)  Bottom line, there's no one month cut off to mental help. And if he'd been identified as having mental issues, it would have probably taken them at least a year to get out of the military (assuming his time was up...as an officer there would be less likelihood of this happening...guys that fly get time added to their contract since they have to go through two years of flight school, meaning they are going to be in for at least 5-7 years.  Currently, a commissioned officer makes 1LT around 1.5 years and captain around 4.)

Lastly, (and this is probably the biggest as it's most essential to the story) he wouldn't have been able to see that kind of detail on the old man. The idea of bombers "swooping in" as you have him in this story is a thing of the past. Now pilots have laser guided munitions that they drop from a looong way off. An RPG wouldn't be taking down a fast mover like this (maybe...maybe a stinger missile) but instead would only be effective against helicopters (but those don't carry bombs). All that aside, there is a black and white thermal camera feed that pilots use for targetting. You can see all kinds of stuff on it, as far as where people are moving around and such (because thermal) but in reality its no more personal than waxing aliens in a video game...you can't see facial expressions or the like  Also, we didn't tend to bomb population centers in this war...really the only times were if guys on the ground could identify a building enemy was holed up in, they can call in a plane with a precision JDAM that would absolutely obliterate the building it hit, but not cause (too much) collateral damage around it.

So anyway, like I said, this was the sort of stuff that kept me from fully immersing myself in the story but, as a lot of it has to do with what makes the story have a point, I'm really not sure how much of it you can fix, lol. Hope that helps!

Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 21:13, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

My S*itty Mistakes
I've done goofed Travis. And I need help with undoing some really crappy edits if you're actually up right now as I am typing this.

Edit #2: I'm sure there's more to come (many many more) but here's this one for right now. (It keeps saying conflicting edits or something, then it just redos what I undid...?)

Mistake 1, Mistake 2, Mistake 3, Mistake 4 Mistake 5 Mistake 6 Mistake 7 (Not really sure if it's a mistake, you be the judge.)

Howdy Ho! (talk)

Possible fix
So I was just thinking about it: if you change the time/location of your story a lot of the stuff would fix itself. The biggest issues (help for mental issues/getting out that soon after redeployment/not being able to see the man up close due to technology) would be fixed if you changed the setting to Vietnam or earlier because we didn't have a good understanding of the mental trauma issues back then, the rules of engagement allowed for more atrocities, and the targeting tech was a bit more up close and personal. Also, if you set it back in WWII, it would fix the title, since it wasn't until the 50s (I think...it was after WWII anyways) that the Air Force became a separate branch from the army...so "soldier" would work in this case. Hope this helps!

Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 03:24, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Questions Concerning my Health on CP
I've really blown up your talk page within the past week. This is one of the reasons on why I wish there was chat still, but it's also a good thing it's gone I suppose. I'm going to reread the entire rules again; I don't think anyone on this site is feeling as horrible as I do. I feel like I owe this site now, although it has been taken care of. Is there any way at all to reset my edit stats? Because my article edits are false, as we all now know. I'm beginning to question what all is going to happen from here on out concerning me becoming a roll backer, I obviously don't know what I'm doing. If you read the conversation between me and Under, you'd know I did talk to SOMEGUY about this. A question I asked him that he didn't get time to reply to was what all do you need to do to a story for it to be considered a "good edit"? How much of it do you need to do? Thank you so much Travis, you have no idea how much of a help you are.

Edit #2- I'm not sure if you remember Maulle, but apparently when she/he applied to become a rollbacker, it was denied because she/he made poor edits. I'm confused on what she/he did wrong, and I'm scared that I'm prone to make the same mistakes. The Application

Edit #3- Alright, thanks. It means a lot, it really does.

Howdy Ho! (talk)

Formatting help?--Bakedbreadjen (talk) 07:39, March 8, 2015 (UTC)
Hello! This is my first time as an author and I just published my story. Except I'm not satisfied with how it's displayed/formatted and I have no idea on how to make it come out the way it exactly is like in the Visual Editor. any help/advice? It'd be much appreciated, thanks! ````

Story marked for review
Hello.

I came by to leave a message because of a story I wrote being marked for review. I understand the paragraphs were kinda liong and needed to be spaced out a bit better, but my question is as follows.

How long will it remain marked for review? I don't want to tell all of you how to do your jobs or anything, but I want some assurance it won't spend eternity in the "marked for review" category. Also, I see you did edit it and reviewed the changes, which made sense. So, how long will it spend in marked for review? Any idea? If you don't know exactly im fine, but I just wanted to know. I'm not upset or anything, I just really want to get it out there again soon. good day.Lilahdog568 (talk) 20:24, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Hello. My name is Travis (AKA Ninjatsl) I was just wondering why you deleted my Creepypasta 'Suits'. I got I didn't meet the 'Quality Standards' but if you could give me some more information about the deletion, I would really appreciate it. Ninjatsl (talk) 22:08, March 8, 2015 (UTC)Travis

So sorry
I'm so sorry about that, Empy. I don't know how that happend and I frankly feel foolish and embarassed. Is it possible to get you to just erase all my comments? That won't happen again, I can assure you. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:11, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

I saw on Humboldts page that one of the reasons you didn't want to erase his comments is that it would leave me speaking to myself. If it has any affect, I completely understand getting angry and saying shit you regret later- it happens to me a decent amount. If Humboldt still wants the messages gone, I obviously allow you to erase mine as well. ShawnHowellsCP (talk) 16:15, March 12, 2015 (UTC)

Category
Having trouble erasing the "Monster" category from In Torment. Mouse literally won't even click it, no clue why. ShawnHowellsCP (talk) 01:56, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

re team pasta
Thanks as always, Empy. Yeah, I can type 85 words a minute and my grammar ain't so bad, but I readily admit I just suck with programming. So, what do we have to do to get more people to contribute to the collaborative cliche pasta? I'm thinking about hitting up some talk pages. I can't believe Jay hasn't contributed - YES, I KNOW YOU ARE LISTENING, JAY, SO PLEASE CONTRIBUTE! HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 02:46, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Message
I was wondering if I am able to remove that message you sent me on my talk page. As said on the reply I originally sent on my talk page, I did not intend vandalism at all and I was really just curious about the Abuse Filter, seeing if it could catch 'fazbear'. Apparently it did not, so I deleted it as soon as my fingers could make the mouse click to undo the edit.

So, is it ok to remove that message, as it makes my history on the Wiki look bad, and I did undid the mistake before anyone else could possibly click on the page and find out. Once again, I was not intending anything to harm the page, it was just a test and mistake gone wrong.

Thank you.

MyWorld (talk) 03:14, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Acutally i saw something strange. go onto nercosleep.net/backdoor it acutally works.

Ricards322 (talk) 12:26, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Cliched Pasta
Hey Empy. Remember how you sort of participated in that "Cliched Pasta" that HumboltLycanthrope started? Well, I have completed a pasta of my own that is cliched as all hell and I would like to know where to post it. My blog doesn't seem right since we aren't supposed to use blogs for feedback and the WWorkshop is wrong too, because I am not trying to get it posted. Is there anywhere I can post this?

Here's the link, just in case you want it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JJpy4oAZ8bWNWPq78jRCsNWiD1zZTZ7WWKWlFgM7U4U/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks, SOURCECODE01 (talk) 17:38, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Interview Date
Mike wants to know when we're doing the interview. He is busy the weekend of the 21st. Would the 24th be okay? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 17:41, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

yee
yee --&#34;The good mean well. We just don&#39;t always end up doing well.&#34; ~ Isaac (talk) 21:29, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Why did you delete my pasta?!
I know it doesn't have story, but that's the point. If you're about to be executed and need to type something supernatural, you would rush it! That's what makes it seem more realistic!

Wait maybe you deleted because that's the truth!... ok no I'm just over exaggerating. Those were pretty good reasons.

New micro
I just wrote a micro. 300 words. It's a silly little thing but I thought you might want to read it. The Fearless Vampire Killing Brothers   HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 19:00, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re Creature of the Night
Hahahaha- thanks for that! HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 20:37, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Archived Blogs
Out of curiosity, when a blog becomes archived, can it become un-archived? Alstinson (talk) 23:39, March 10, 2015 (UTC) That's a good idea, though I don't want to rush into it. The Blog is fine the way it is, for now. Alstinson (talk) 02:08, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

why did you delete my pasta im angry give it back? why houlr you delete my pasta you jerk give it back

Ninja'd
Hehe, sorry 'bout that. And thanks, I am glad I can be of help. MrDupin (talk) 21:00, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

Interview Questions
So I've got a rough draft of questions to ask Mike. Can I e-mail them to you so that you can review them and tell me if I am on the right track? HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 16:07, March 12, 2015 (UTC)

Hey, I wanted to know why exactly creepypastas cannot be large? Or is it just the style that you write it in has to be interesting? I really want to upload some of my customs. Jinpai (talk) 22:57, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Made another mistake
Not sure what happened, but the story vanished for me and I can't undo because it said I was the first one to edit it..http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Imp

Favor
Any chance you could walk me through archiving my talk page? It's starting to get out of hand.

Shadowswimmer77 (talk) 23:13, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Too easy. Thanks for doing that, and the info.

Hi...so something glitches on We R Leegun page. Had to read the end in reader mode which doesn't let me see or post reviews.

So you get it here. And this is an honest question. Why was I not reading that on my kindle after paying $2.99? Maybe this site is fulfilling enough. But Gods what about the people who don't read here?

Anyway great story...loved all the refrences I got. The ending was sad but in an honest way. Not just fucked up for the sake of it.

Take care...kris Kase519 (talk) 00:11, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for telling me what was wrong, I feel it will really help with my future pastas. Jinpai (talk) 00:44, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

I've seen weirder things on kindle. Trust me. Honestly I do hope you think about publishing some work...it can be much more simple than you would think. I have not finished the other zombie novella. But prob will tomorrow. And I would give up any grammar I had going in to write as well as you do. I didn't go through just your's one after another so I had plenty to compare them to. Your writing along with a few others really sticks out.

I also think you would be very cool to hang out with. :-)

Favorite? It's so hard to pick just one. I loved you peace corp group. And I like how you tackle war. The cost is almost always higher than the reward.

As someone who enjoys refrences have you read Ready Player One? I'm guessing you may be a bit young to get them all but it is a great read.

Take care...kris Kase519 (talk) 01:24, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

User page story
This user posted a story on his user page. MrDupin (talk) 13:33, March 14, 2015 (UTC)


 * Problem has been sorted by Lolskeletons. MrDupin (talk) 13:43, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

The Buzzing Story Revision Problems
I made The Buzzing back in February, but I checked today, and somebody appears to have changed sections and made it a huge text wall. I'm not sure how to get rid of those revisions, so do you mind fixing for me? Thank you. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 21:42, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Mystery Science" message
I love the riffers in Mystery Science! I also enjoy rifftrax as well and I have been looking more into it through avaliable free online footage... "I'm just a poor girl... I have no big money!" How's Colorado, by the way? I heard it was very green out there!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 21:58, March 14, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 21:58, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Rifftrax" message
I recall seeing previews of various Rifftrax episodes on their website and I remember that you'd have to pay to see the full episode which sucks for me. I can get you the link to this site as soon as I can.

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 22:47, March 14, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 22:47, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blog Questions
Thanks for fixing that, and I'll do what you suggested in the future. I do, however, have a question as to how I would be able to make a page that consists of certain reviews I have done, and be able to update it as I create more. I'd appriciate it if you could tell me as to how I would do this. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 22:51, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

RE: Critique Page
I'd personally prefer to just create the page like the latter option. I'm perfectly fine with informing people that I've made the page/promoting it if I want to. I'm assuming I would simply copy/paste the reviews I want in there, but if I'm wrong, please tell me. Thanks for the help. AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 23:18, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reply to "Broke" message
No Kidding! So is 99.9% of the American Population!

American Economy: Only the 1% may enjoy Rifftrax!

Hailey Sawyer (talk) 23:51, March 14, 2015 (UTC)Hailey SawyerHailey Sawyer (talk) 23:51, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Critique Page Up
I went ahead and made the page. Thank you for telling me how to do it, and here is the link:

My Critiques  AGrimAuxiliatrix1 (talk) 00:13, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

If I come off as rude or angry, I apologize in advance. I had created an account quite a while ago and uploaded a story, which was deleted several hours later. Then, a few moments ago, I tried to log in again to upload a revised version of the story but was unable to login. Stupidly in irritation, I created a second account and uploaded the revised story. That was deleted a few minutes afterwards. Please could you explain why this happened as I am very confused and slightly upset. Consciously Insane (talk) 00:50, March 15, 2015 (UTC) Consciously Insane

I'd like to congratulate you on nearing 50 stories on this wondeerful website. I would also like to ask your permission to read your story "A Small Piece of Lead" on my new creepypasta youtube channel. I will be sure to link this account page in the video also linking the story. I will give full credit to you as it is due. You really do wright some marvelous stories.Dontay127 (talk) 12:33, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Hello http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:EmpyrealInvective. I just joined this last night and I posted a pasta "Ajax Verruck Colons"  and it keeps getting deleted. What am I doing wrong on it that keeps it from being posted?

I heard it from a movie, I didn't realize about my act of plagiarism. EXTREME sorryness

RisingFusion (talk) 21:37, March 15, 2015 (UTC)RisingFusion

thank you for deleting my story  i'm not mad or anything it was short i know but anyway thank you

Hello

I'm typing this becuase I want to find out specifically why my Creppypasta "The hooded man" was taken down so I can avoid doing the same misake is the future.

Alen Rocks! (talk) 22:00, March 15, 2015 (UTC)Alen Rocks!Alen Rocks! (talk) 22:00, March 15, 2015 (UTC)