Talk:My Grandfather's Dog/@comment-4715955-20190119071732

It's an engaging and spooky concept, but doesn't have too much of a story. The dog catches many weird creatures no one ever sees for some reason, until it eventually kills him. That's it. No real sense of tension or intrigue, no repercussions for the dog's death (now who's gonna kill the weird beasties lurking nearby?). Just "huh, well that was one weird dog."

And I find it very hard to believe even a farmer wouldn't have the remains examined, or at least wouldn't have a really good reason to hide them. Even the hillbillies in Lovecraft's works knew when something was not of this earth.

Really could be an interesting thing if it's expanded or revised a bit.