Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-27582895-20170121175641/@comment-29196722-20170122023815

Wait how did you type all of this if you were dead?

The grammar is good so lets skip that but seeing as rooms connect to hallways how did you only see a Freddy mask? Unless the whole house is cut off their whole power someone would at least check what happened and seeing as their mom was in the house(I'm going to guess she was)I'm going to guess she knew what was happening and would check on it and find Freddy and if she did die

1)How does a mother lose to her child?

2)How would he kill his mother without her screaming being stab? Stabbing someone isn't instant(unless it's in the head but there's a bloody skull and last i check skulls were built to be strong).

This was a little too force like why was the brother insane? Define insane if you can and why? And if Freddy is her little brother then she could just literally kick the shit out of him and Freddy is holding a cellphone(I'm going to guess)playing Toreador March so he has only one hand just kick him and if he wasn't holding a knife then tackle him! There's two of you don't act horror movie cliche and just die because you were useless.

Goodness I'm an asshole.