User talk:Bliwiker

I deleted your story as the plot could use a bit of development/fleshing out. There were also a number of wording/phrasing issues present in the story. "As I type this I'm kinda thinking if I should type this.", "Slowly I began to be forget the incident", etc. I would recommend taking this to the writer's workshop and getting some more in-depth feedback (I can provide a copy of the story if you don't have one.) Then if you want to post it you can submit a post in Deletion Appeal. As it stands the story was deleted as it wasn't up to quality standards.

EmpyrealInvective (talk) 03:47, June 28, 2014 (UTC)