Board Thread:Site Questions/@comment-24531106-20140210212414

I just started to write my first pasta but i'm german. Even though I am pretty good in english (spelling, understanding and writing) my punctuation suffers quite a bit (at least i'm pretty sure it is). So if somebody would be so kind to just look over my first bit of work, give me some advice on punctuation and maybe could tell me if it's a good start so far or if I should just scrap it and start over with something new.

Thanks already,

Eric 