Talk:My Baby/@comment-5643552-20131206214729

Gorgeously written. It's rare to find a writer on here with such a talent for descriptive language. Although I didn't find it that that creepy, it's such an excellent piece of writing that I'm considering nominating it for pasta of the month. The only thing I would fix is the comma/semicolon usage; it's a bit sloppy at times, sometimes to the point of disrupting the flow of otherwise beautifully-constructed sentences or passages. This is minor enough to where doesn't detract from the overall experience, but it's so easy to fix that you might as well. A little polishing never hurts.