Talk:A Bedtime Story/@comment-25052433-20150901000256

First off, I am so glad to see a new story from you. It's been a while, but this was certainly worth the wait.

This was a great story. You did an excellent job of building up a slow burn, taking a very mundane setting, such as someone waking up, and gradually bringing it to a full head as she realized that she was dead.

You accomplished both a sinister cold horror, with the apathetic mind of the Grim Reaper, coupled with the vicous, souless mentality of the rapist. You combined that with Alexandria's innocent observations of the world around her, as well as her slow dawning to what actually happened, to create a compelling story with several emotional transitions taking place.

You certainly have a signature style of writing that I don't see from anyone else on this site, and your stories are easily among my favorites. As I said above, I am thrilled that your back and posting new content, and I look forward to your next one.

This was incredible, excellent job!