User blog comment:SnakeTongue237/Why I've been inactive lately/Update (Warning: SHOCKING content.)/@comment-26054278-20160321015955

Oh dear, I had no idea. It is at least good to know that things are getting better now (even if there is a bucket full of makeup work involved), and it is quite nice to know that you are doing better.

"American Atheist" (not a big fan of the title; sounds like a hardcore, 80s/90s exploitation film) has potential, provided that the assassin has proper reasoning and motivation as to why he would want to become a Christian/why he would agree to spare the preacher's life if the preachers converts him to Christianity.

"Mother's Day" doesn't seem to make much sense to me; so a girl self-harms so that her mother will show that she loves her? Is the twist that the girl ends up killing herself? Personally, I can't see this story turning out too good; I'm not going to get attached to the mother because she is a drug addict who neglects her child most of the time, and I'm not going to get attached to the girl because she self-harms instead of actually talking to her mother or doing anything. Therefore, if you want to make the story work, make sure that at least one of these people (preferably both) are likable characters, with positives to add to their flaws. This way, the reader can get an emotional attachment.

"Gravedigger's Burden" is fairly unique and I actually quite like that one. I'd like to see what you do with it.

Haven't finished reading "Revival" so I'll skip "Cemetery Gates" for now.

"Ozzman and the Prowlers" sounds a little generic. Unless you are able to make the characters particularly interesting, or make the story quite dark/twisted, I'd recommend passing on this one in exchange for "Gravedigger's Burden" or "American Atheist".