Talk:Wisdom of the Stars/@comment-31077845-20170228231221

Man, I don't care how hot a chick is (at least I'm assuming if a lady demon could make a human disguise for herself she'd probably make herself slammin') or how insane the things a demon person could probably do in bed were, being a malicious demonic entity capable of devastating entire cities? Definite dealbreaker. And they say just a woman being the primary breadwinner in a relationship can cause men to have self esteem issues...

Jokes aside, fairly poetic and well written, I do like the ending, only one thing; in the beginning she seems super human and acted and suggested she was traumatized by what happened the night before, but then she goes on ahead and seemingly without empathy goes and murders a whole bunch more people. She can't be both a poor traumatized young woman and a complete sociopath at the same time. And I guess my somewhat flippant original comments aside, seeing in her natural state she is seemingly an emotionless killing machine, what kind of "chance" could possibly result in a decidedly demonic demon lady meeting a guy and agreeing to date? Was he the only survivor of one of her attacks and figured "Meh, she may be a demon, but she's also the last living female within a day's drive and is pretty fine so I may as well ask her out. I'm not sure why an infernal entity would want to date a regular man, but you never know until you ask right?".