Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26336673-20170207073050/@comment-28428152-20170209040602

A more advanced poem than you usually see in this site, though I think that saying it's "slightly" inspired by Poe is a hit of an understatement. There are some places where the word "are" should be "is." I think you should also change the onomonapeoa to better fit the mood of the poem, because ding dong ding dong is a very cheerful sound.