Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-28718262-20160806123657/@comment-28718262-20160814130408

Ah now, i understand where the too many characters comes from bit the game they play needs five. (besides the more gory murders I can have the more fun for me >_>) its also common for people to be in groups of about 5. (school students)

Okie so while i was out canping i did some drafting and character development. Still on my phone at the moment but i have a rough update. Apoligies for typos i dont normally use my phone.

-- ''it was just a game. A silly game. A meaningless prank...'' Or thats what Ellery mumbled in the flashing blue and red lights. As rain pattered down onto the dim london street.

''7th May 2015. They told me its best if i write it down. Get it off my chest for what it was worth. It can't hurt me anymore. Besides i dont have anything left to loose.

It was an april evening around 8pm when we rushed through the dim street of london rain lashing down onto our umbrellas. Jake, Izabel ,Jade ,Ethan and myself were on our way to ethans house. His parents were out for the weekend. Blobs of rain found their way on jakes glasses or in our eyes. When we reached ethans house his boney fingers fumbled in the rain to unlock it. "I'm cold. " whimpered Izzy. Jade sighed. Upon entering the Large house the lights came on and we put our umbrellas and coats in the coatroom. Jake being the first to enter after ethan was already raiding the fridge. "Quite a storm, eh? The blastered weather." Ethan grumbled. He never seemed to quite fit in london with his thick scottish accent. His family had moved here a few years ago to his disapointment. I can never tell if he still hates it here.

"so what are we going to do. We've got a whole weekend." asked Jade. "Sleep." i replied. "like marry a tree or sommet." izzy replied sarcastically. " I was thinking if you girls arent too chicken we could tell some scary stories and try to find some rituals to try online." said Jake stuffing a cupcake in his mouth. "Debunking online rituals to scare little kids." Ethan nodded "like you're the chicken!" izzy said. "Those things never work,Jake. " sighed Jade. She didnt beleive in the supernatural. She was far to down to earth and high class to beleive such silly tales in her opinon anyway.

'' There hopefully this is a little better for an intro.