Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-31532017-20170215123526/@comment-24101790-20170216040453

RaptorKillerX-Venture wrote: Hmm, I thought the dialogue alone would indicated that he was terrified to have the conversation; thus he tried to sweet talk away from having the liaison. Would him also having to show his nervousness while talking, be enough to fix all those issues? For the hand part, guess I'll change it a bit.

It still feels like there's more that could be done to make this premise more effective.