Talk:Brother's Treasure/@comment-25319190-20140818195259

Okay, I'm new here, so I had one HELL of a time getting this up. I posted it under Brothers, but I couldn't find it, so I had to re-post it. I did this one better anyway. Before that, I messed up twice trying to get it up. This is my first Creepypasta (obviously) so tell me what you think! Criticism is always welcome, but please be kind...