Talk:Chelsea Dearest/@comment-25326117-20141003021521

There were a few mispellings like 'regular basic'. I thought that should have been 'regular basis' of when the cop was patrolling the room where Melancamp got killed.

Second, isn't Alex supposed to have an 's' after it as in 'Alex's eyes?'

Is there really any need for the hyphen between 'unlucky' and 'Joe?'

The story could have been better. I would have liked to hear about Chelsea's backstory. How did she get acquainted with Death. Maybe, if the backstory was added, it wouldn't seem much like 'The Grudge.'

The story was very interesting though.