Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-32864316-20170815172509/@comment-24101790-20170816203253

MarjoleinB wrote: After Monty has written down the second dream he doesn't return to his diary.

So, should i change it to the he/she/it form from that point?

Would that be a good idea?

Given that the entire story is written in past-tense first person perspective with nothing to suggest that they're no longer cataloging these events, that does create a lot of issues given the ending.