Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26326346-20150421064845/@comment-24450775-20150428152518

The first thing I thought about was alien abduction. If you subtlely added that it might make it stand out. I like it as is, I'm just going off Whitix comment about it being similar to other sleep/dream Pastas. I have not read any of those myself, so I can't comment in that regard.