Talk:Human Experiment Chamber 2/@comment-25941663-20150708171044

Just like the prequel, this was very well written. The story had a nice flow too, but this time there wasn't much happening. I believe you focused too much on the conflict between Gates and Allman and the story kinda dragged on a bit as a result. And to be honest, the conflict didn't have much 'meat' and left me uninterested. I don't know, it just didn't do it for me.

On top of that, the interactions with Bridges, even though they were handled very well, didn't add anything to the creepyness/scary factor of the story. If you had focused more on the subjects, and maybe on some paranormal happenings, this would have been good.

I'm afraid I don't have much more to say. This was written very nicely, but as a plot it doesn't capture the imagination.

Anyway, in about a week I'll come around to reading the last part. Looking forward to it.