Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26444017-20191023053921/@comment-26444017-20191023072746

Thanks, my dude. My lack of a reliable computer is a severe hindrance to me. I'm looking to rectify that in the next couple months or so.

And, yeah, that was my biggest issue with the story as well. I might just change the line regarding her getting back out to a dialogue saying how well she did and inviting her backstage, or something to that effect. Also some clean up and additional whatnot here and there, but fixing that is the main focus.

Not sure what I wanna do with Elizabeth. I don't want her to seem too cartoony alongside him, but I don't know if her being an addict is necessary either. Something I'm gonna have to work out. I'm gonna toy with her being more serious and lucid, more aware, and see what I like better. It's a tough call.