User blog:GhostlyFerret/Update on Not Safe

So, after getting a review from someone on the writer's workshop, I started to work on fixing the story. I will be rewriting the first paragraph, fixing all spelling/grammar mistakes, and just polishing the story up in general. I will be making the story more of a fairytale-esque sort of thing. Anyway, I just thought I'd keep you all updated on how things are going.