Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-4893169-20140917224907/@comment-4893169-20140924044240

That's fine. I did a bit of change though, not a whole lot to the part just before he finds the letter. Instead of having immediately get up to go to his clother drawers, I have him still cowering against the wall in a huddle. Then he thinks it's just a dummy, not a real body hanging out there and recalls a trip to Walt Disney's Haunted Mansion where he freaks out at the sight of the body in the elevator.