Talk:In My Sleep/@comment-3541151-20141210053227

It's a decent short pasta. I like the writing and the perspective of the character/victim. It's a what-would-you-do story, that's it's strength. However, I don't particularlly care for the cliche of the all-powerful boogeyman, and I felt that it was kind rushed. I also felt it was too dramatic about the scenario, this atmosphere is more enjoyable when tension isn't set too high. That being said, I still liked this one. 6/10