Talk:Looks Like We Got a Live One Here, Boys/@comment-25383866-20150204114842

I liked this. I really enjoy your descriptions of the natural world. I couldn't help but cheer a bit when the parents bit it, because I've known people just like that up here in Oregon, and this is secretly what I wished would happen to them. So this story is like hippie-hater wish-fulfilment.

Only problem I found was some weird italicizing but it doesn't detract from the story at all.

Good job, Humboldt.