Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34823985-20180303032925/@comment-9041013-20180315203427

Nope. You shouldn't scrap this story, and if you make it a little bit more realistic (the bowel being there for so long and perhaps adjust the premise of the creatures a bit) it should fit the bill of this site.

Also, American Psycho is a dark comedy technically speaking, so that's not an insult.

As per the millennial part, it's in the spirit of millennials, without a serious tone to it, not bad just not my taste :p