Talk:An Illegal Investigation of Ballintully Springs/@comment-24381191-20150921191215

This was a pretty great story and definitely creeped me out, although, personally, I was a bit unsatisfied by the ending, but that's just my personal taste. I did notice a couple of grammatical issues, though. One in particular was “THIS PREMISES IS PROTECTED BY KENNEDY SECURITY."

It should either be "these premises are" or "this premise is."