Talk:09/17/10/@comment-32452679-20171019101454

The conclusion of the story just makes the entire pointless,"I guess Ill just leave that to the police" is such a lazy ending and a insult to the reader who sat through this and was rewarded with that bollocks ending! Also why even mention or describe the man in the flannel jacket at all,if he has no revelance and your just going to sweep any connection he has to story under the rug at the end anyway.The story is not scary at any point,the only praise I can give it is that it didnt have many spelling mistakes. In conclusion a possibly interesting premise for a story is wasted because of lazy and lackluster writing, while the ending leaves you with more questions than answers.