Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-26169026-20150304202536/@comment-26169026-20150310021439

I could make that work. This is actually the second draft. The first one was more bland so I added some dialogue and descriptions in areas that needed some. I hated this story from conception, but I can't start something without finishing it. I'll probably work on this one some more. I may not. I wish I didn't hate it. Really, I do. Your thoughts won't go unheeded, though, if I do another draft. I'll keep you updated.