Talk:A Stalker or Two/@comment-25941663-20150203161621

I enjoyed this one. It is one of the most unnerving stories I have ever read.

I liked how the story is separated into two parts. Each part could have easily been a separate story, but together they make something truly special.

The description of the reproduction scene is one of the most vivid and terrifying descriptions I have ever read.

If I were to suggest something, I would say it could have been better if during the stalking part (essentially the first half of the story) you added subtle hints that the stalkers weren't the same person. Like, you could say 'I saw him stalking me, with his green vest' and later 'I saw him stalking me; hands into his coat's pockets'. I hope you understand what I am saying.

Nevertheless, that is a tiny nitpick that I would have liked to see, but in the end, doesn't really matter. The story was amazing and I thoroughly enjoyed it. It is certainly one of my favourites on the wiki. Bravo.