Talk:Sombrero Wearing Dinosaur/@comment-5946174-20131208191437

I'm not quite sure how to review a story like this. As with Dammit Gordon, I'm there isn't much to say other than it was bizarre and rather silly at times. You seem to have a problem with verb tenses, as seen in sentences like "Billy woke up in the middle of the night, awaken by one of his usual nightmares." The syntax is confusing as well, but it's possible you intentionally made oddly constructed sentences to create an atmosphere of insanity. In any case, this is a pretty good pasta. 7.4/10