Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-43331652-20190730155526/@comment-43331652-20190731081202

Hi, thanks to all who have helped so far with my ritual pasta. As you have noticed this sotry is rushed and I did not check mygrmatical errors. I have noted all your suggestions and will keep the in mind in the near future. I am thinking of writing a new oorignal creepypasta rather then a ritual. I look forward to hearing more of your opinions in the near future. And I have one more questiton for you readers, what kind pasta truly terrifes you, or what in a pasta terrifies you? I am intresetd in hearing all your responses. I thank you for taking the time to read and criticize my ritual, have a good day.

Sir fear