<p class="MsoNormal">This short story is inspired by the idea that there could exist people who get involved in charity work just to see people in pain. I Think thats a very unnerving and scary idea. </p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I love watching insecure fat chicks at nightclubs. There’s an 80’s themed one that I really like in particular. It’s always filled with middle aged, fuck-ugly bitches. I stay sober; but I always rally up drunken arseholes to go and make fun of them.
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<p class="MsoNormal">I do this for the same reason that I joined UNICEF and the Red Cross. I like to go out and see people in pain.
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<p>Sounds like a good idea for a creepypasta. I never really heard of a famous CP pasta that focus in someone's pleasure of seeing someone in pain in charity stuff, so if you write well you have a chance of creating something new and good.
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how short is too short for a pasta?
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<p>As far as I know, there isn't a rule for CPs size. Some are really short. Short creepypastas are normally made when writing a poem, so my guess is that for a creepypasta with narration, less than 5 paragraphs is a bit short.
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so as it is: its too short?
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<p>Yes it is. Even though it's possible to understand the character's characteristics, it's not well developed, and it doesn't create enough atmosphere to consider it a complete CP. My suggestion would be making the story longer, at least until a point that can be considered completed.
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I agree with Enough. This story sounds kind of like a teaser for something. Unique Idea though... hope you make something worth reading about.
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