I'm thinking of making a creepypasta series

Ultimasaurian·4/4/2024 in General

It's based on a show called primeval which based around a secret government organisation called "The ARC" dealing with rips in time called anomalies that cause creatures from all different time periods to be sent to different time periods and sometimes the present

The series will be called "The ARC files" and will be about multiple incidents where anomilies caused incidents that caused human casualties it will mostly be about incidents that could have been possible in the show or be about incidents based on existing episodes however being about incidents that could have happened but not be shown like possibly some attacks of the labyrinthodontias which had apparently been ongoing for years or events that were told to have happened in the show but we never saw like Sarah's death

Leave your thoughts on this concept and I'll make the first part soon

Squidmanescape·4/5/2024

I think this might work, because it isn't inherently based on the show and you would theoretically be able to understand what's happening without prior knowledge. That said, I think basing the stories directly on existing episodes is a really bad idea, because it could get into the territory of plagiarism.

I saw the first part that you mentioned. I think the main problem with it right now is how short it is. If it were longer and went into more description about the monster and the attack, I think it would definitely stay up.

You also sometimes have trouble telling where sentences end and make spelling errors. That said, I think those problems are sort of minor in the grand scheme of the story staying up, and other people can fix them (though I hope you also work on that).

(Edited by Squidmanescape)

What do you think?