I listened to Lance Creepy Reading this evening! What a cool guy. I listened to his narration of God's Mouth, and even read it here right after that.

I thought this story was going to be this typical "lost in a cave story", but I wasn't expecting a supernatural twist to it! The cave was actually like going inside a mouth, and it ate the couple who went inside it. Shit! That's kinda messed up and creative in a disturbing way. I feel kinda silly since it's called "God's Mouth", so it was kinda ironic, and it would have some form of a predictable ending. But nope, it caught me off guard.

What are your thoughts on this story?

I think I give this story a... 5/10.