It was a practice
Read: ice cold revenge, jeff the killer, the ice cream man, btter candy, good luck, the kissing chair.
Please tell me what I should change! It is still in the works~
Octane -creepypasta OC- STILL IN THE WORKS by reveriegguk on @DeviantArt
Oi oi! This is my first post, I'm just here to update you guys on my character and also on their story! I'm expecting some constructive criticism so please, no need to be sugar coating with me~ anyway, here is what I was thinking for the design (face only for now, clothes will come later) and uh, I was heavily inspired by junji Ito on this character but I will change some stuff up! I will write the backstory and traits later today~ what do you guys think?
Jeff is sitting on the floor thinking a little to hard
Jeff: if life gives you lemons can’t you just... give them back?
EJ: the fuck is up with him
Jeff: beds are chargers for our bodies
Slender: he has been like this since he woke up from the hell hole he cane from
Jeff: we cant be vegetarian because animals eat meat so when they take a shit and use that as fertilizer and the plants grow we have meat plants
Jane: does this mean I can kill him
Slender and EJ: NO DO THAT LATER
Me: *dying of laughter in the corner* this is the only time you’ll EVER see Jeff smart
I asked Ben (Ben drowned) what Jeff hates because I needed to get revenge on him he said he hated bleach and fireworks and anything like that Jeff screamed Ben! I said okay can you teleport me to a mall and get me Jeff's wallet what Jeff said what?! I said okay thank you see you in a few hours. A few hours later I came back and told Jeff to go in his room he walked in and screamed shigaraki! (They call me that because tomura shigaraki is my brother.) Jane said what did you do in excitement I said oh nothing just put the bleach (the anime) posters all over his room okay just come on let's go outside the whole crew went outside and there was something set up I pushed the button the areas fireworks just screamed and went in his room.
Best dream ever am I right heart it if you liked it and tell me comments tell me what you felt like when you're reading this thank you!
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