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LafawndaPasta·12/20/2024 in General

Cupcakes rewrite I did about a week or two ago.

Now, I know I said I wouldn't be trying to appeal IP-based stuff here anymore, but that doesn't mean I'm not willing to at least show what I've gotten done in my spare time.

I never saw Cupcakes as a good story- actually, I never considered it a Creepypasta to begin with, even if it was promoted as one back in the early 2010s. I did what I could to give it some semblance of motivation, but I did end up having to take out a good chunk of the fundamentals. There are just some stories you physically can't fix without sacrificing important points from the original draft.

Anyway, instead of it being in-universe, I switched the viewpoint to be third person, and have it be an old video game instead! Not everything in this narration is exactly like the final draft, do keep in mind as I had to tamper with some very slight repetition issues, formatting errors, etcetera.

I was heavily inspired by classic horror literature, and some angsty fanfics I've gazed over in my time when writing the dialogue. That was probably the must fun part about all of this for me.

So here it is, it took me months of procrastination, continuously switching between ideas, and an entire day of video editing, but it was worth finally finishing this fiasco of a story.

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Rainbow Factory

Ladyluna1448·4/19/2024 in General

The Rainbow Factory Creepypasta: My thoughts

This was an amazing story, and the sequels were even better. I felt for the characters, it was long, and detailed, but still able to be understood by the younger Creepypasta enjoyers, which I find quite rare in a lot of the Creepypasta's, so for anyone about to write one, remember to make it to where like a 13 year old could read and understand it, and I think Rainbow Factory did a really good job of that...and can I say..the plot was phenomenal! I find that in some Creepypasta's, it seems to drag in, but in Rainbow Factory, I was clinging onto every word. As a teenager, I crave to have shivers, and be scared, and Rainbow Factory did a good job of that. Now, one thing I will say, is it didn't stick with the usual My Little Pony style, it was far more mature, and I can understand that, but to make it more believable, it would have been nice for them to have acted a bit like how they did in the show [Excluding Rainbow Dash, she is the main antagonist in this, therefore, she is excluded from that. But maybe don't make her swear? Just a thought.] In general...this was amazing.

Now, my ratings:

Age Rating: 14+

My rating for the story: 10/10!

Would I allow my child to read it?: Absolutely not :D

Sequel Ratings: 9.5/10

If you haven't read it, and have stuck around this long, you should go read it :D

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