All posts by CrystalMaryrose

<div class="quote"><i>Enough30 wrote:
@Crystal <p>You can't just make a few changes and think that it's enough. This is a reading website, quality is an important priority in every way. </p><p>These people tried to help you, and you blame them. There's no reason to report anyone. Nobody did mistakes, and honestly, you're the one who's giving more trouble than needed. </p> </i></div>
<p>I never blame anyone yes they are helping me if you can read what I just said I had my friend to help me </p>

I'll just write up report and move on with my story unless you want to give me a reason

<div class="quote"><i>EmpyrealInvective wrote:
<div class="quote"> <p>CrystalMaryrose wrote: </p><p>
</p> <div class="quote">EmpyrealInvective wrote:
It was deleted because the copy you posted was the same as the one uploaded here. You made little to no changes and it was deleted for a number of reasons that the people on this forum mention had already warned you about...</i></div>
what you want me to do really its done there no need to be change</div>Welp, just trying to elaborate why your pasta was deleted. I also wanted the people who helped review and gave their assistance to know that their advice wasn't faulty in any way.</div> <p>Still don't what you saying there no report that its bad or etc you just deleted because I copy from this? where is the rule you can't copy this its my creepypasta I did not copy anyone..... There was no reason to delete it just because I copy from this which is my creepypasta if you want change say it or this reason is bullshit </p>

<div class="quote"><i>EmpyrealInvective wrote:
It was deleted because the copy you posted was the same as the one uploaded here. You made little to no changes and it was deleted for a number of reasons that the people on this forum mention had already warned you about...</i></div>
<p>what you want me to do really its done there no need to be change </p>

<p>my creepypasta got deleted :| </p>

Its live now if anyone want to read it feel free

Fixed the end so its not choppy I think this is ready to go

<div class="quote"><i>Johnathen stuart wrote:
Ah... Well... that make me look like a bit of a jerk then, doesn't it? Sorry 'bout that.</i></div>
<p>Its fine it doesn't hurt me if you still rated 6/10 its fine but if you want to change it feel free i'm just looking for if this is ready or not </p>

I fixed everything thanks to my friend now you can check

<div class="quote"><i>Johnathen stuart wrote:
"Later that day the police find that she was killing herself they take her to crazy room where people try to kill himself or killing others. After checking on her the police was shock that she was dead." <p>Tell me crystal... did you review your story before submitting it? Or do you simply not understand the use of proper grammar? </p> </i></div>
<p>I did read it myself and I have my friend helping me with English just fyi my English is poor and its not my frist language but thanks for rating tho </p>

Finish with the story let me know what you think now?

<div class="quote"><i>WaveDivisionMultiplexer wrote:
This was just another vigilante ghost going around and killing bad people. The reast of the story might be good, I do not know, but right now I'm a bit put off by the murder scenes. It's obvious by the first line that this was the so called <i>murder woman</i>. There's really no point in progressing a story when the reader knows just what is going on. The other characters, in such cases, just come scross as <i>thick headed</i> for not seeing through it. <p>But I havent read it, so I'm most probably wrong. </p><p>its only first part that shows histroy later you will know whats going on and really who the murderer is </p> </i></div>
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<div class="quote"><i>Johnathen stuart wrote:
Um... is this... is this supposed to be a story?</i></div>
<p>No I'm going to redo it now </p>