None of the above.
This is idiotic enough to look like bait but still looks like it could be serious.
Go over there and ask them.
Hating your parents because you wanna fanboy about Jeff. This truly is peak underage creepypasta fan.
I really can't tell how these are based on any sort of eclipse event. I think it could do better to convey that connection.
Unsettling enough to get some pointed questions directed at you.
Don't know if you figured this out, or already knew, but Jupiter is a city in Florida.
How is it "joke's on admin" for your story getting deleted?
I used it 10 times and got a different story each time. It might be a freak incident, or something involving browser cache?
I did it hours ago but got 8/12. Doesn't seem bad for my relative inactivity over the years.
I don't get why people make these posts. "Come look at my story, it's so bad lol"
Rules are just one part of it. You still need to make a good story.
Also, I'd recommend Pastebin instead of whatever you're trying to use to upload these. It doesn't have the formatting like you might want, but neither does this wiki.
Yes, I know that "Tenshi" means "angel" in the language, I was asking why. Japanese names just for the sake of it isn't cool, it should have more meaning.
Bro dropped a whole essay. Even I know it's just some dumb kid picking up shit and taking it as his own, doesn't need a wall.
First one isn't very good, second one I don't have access to.
With your first, it's lacking in substance and doesn't come off like it's written as someone who is 7 years old. What's the motive anyway? MC misses them, but had decided to murder them prior, and somehow accomplished it?
For a more personal gripe, why is it important to note the name of Tenshi? Why is the character named Tenshi anyway?
Downgrade tbh, Icydice did something of a fix/follow-up already anyway.
https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Red_Mist:_Loose_Ends
Not to say you can't try your own, but an unfinished rewrite that's some attempt at an in-universe diary isn't leaving a good impression.
"It's not theft I found it"
Lol
Let's see that hold up if you're ever confronted about it.
Ah, theft.
You figure it's because it's a fake screen that's meant to get attention?