All posts by Cornconic
General boringness/predictability mostly. The dialogue also wasn't amazing.
The fate of all coneheads after tasting my righteous blade...
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Protest? How about you try reading the rules first?
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I suppose upon closer inspection that this doesn't technically count as a spinoff but I don't believe it passes the site's quality standards. It's similar to many haunted/dark videogame stories we've received in the past; gratuitious, overeliant on exposition, and derives its tension from melodrama. I just don't think the way Chris turns his game into a suicide note is written in an interesting way - the presentation of the extreme violence and adult themes is generic. His relationship with Lisa is never really given any proper context outside of edgy emotional statements made to the reader, which quickly become tiresome to read. If I were to write this concept, I think a slower, more subtle approach would work better to give us a real sense of this character and the people around him, rather than rushing to the shock element.
Obviously the admins at the time were involved in that they were the ones who had to run the vote, but it was left up to the community.
Considering this story is centred around a fictional version of PewDiePie's Tuber Simulator, it would have to go through our Spinoff Appeal before it could be uploaded to the site.
Deceit seems to be unique to the group in that it isn't representative of any one emotion but is more a tool through which emotion is carried out. It is interesting that melancholy used to be a sin, though; if there ever was an eighth sin, I think that one would slot in fine.
I agree. I actually stopped reading altogether due to the lack of jumpscares/cool music. And no gameplaying either? Booooriiiiing!
Gonna be a no I'm afraid. Having looked at the contest, it has nothing to do with creepypasta.
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