Would very like feedback !
https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Forum:The_Endless_Between
@William See hey listen man, as a capitalist myself thats not the issue
Its the contents of the water
Its in the water
Its in the water
Its in the water
Would very like feedback !
https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Forum:The_Endless_Between
@Macciata i totally agree with you
Uhhhh
Hi back, I’m dad
Well @Luna242 you can’t just post a story on the subject of a popular genre and expect it to get noticed a lot. It’s a lot like being a streamer, you have to dedicate yourself to it and work from not being seen all the way up to getting some views through it. It’s going to take time for your work to be noticed, and if you want it all to be noticed you have to dedicate a lot of time and a lot of work.
Probably some weird roleplay honestly
The doctor told him he’s medically a beast 🥶
I like this story, thanks
@Macciata i love the modern stuff, but I really despise early creepypasta. It aged about as well as dementia
Trust me, I have 5k on gmail :(
I’ve seen some rule breaking posts (I sound like that one kid who reminds the teacher about homework, sorry for that) and I just want to make sure people remember this rule-
Como estas hombre, how it do?
Oh, okay, I recommend using any site that helps the most without a paywall
I used grammarly, pro word tune, and grammar sapling, what did you use?
Trust me, I’ve seen a lot worse irl
@Cryptidhunter145 @Evil-and-stupid i read it and it’s not that bad, it was just slightly disturbing
@Winghay.tam.1 i really do appreciate the review, and I have taken small bits of it to my advantage, but I must say, I have put this draft through 3 different grammar checking sites, so it might not be the most grammatically correct story, but I sort of doubt it has a lot of issues, and the rewrite I saw you do also has a fair amount if grammar issues
If your to review this, please honestly give some revisions :)
https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Forum:Operation_Underlord
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