All posts by SaladTopping

Fair enough, it just came off as a little... lazy? Idk

I am indifferent to Laughing Jack's story. I have heard a pretty decently put together rewrite of it (forgot where I found it; source = trust me bro) but I am not fond of the original. I do hold the mindset to separate the art from the artist, so while SnuffBomb is definitely a sh*tstain, I don't let that dampen the effect of the stories he tells.

Are you talking about Pastra's rewrite? If so, why?

If you're not willing to put in the effort of eagerly listening to the story, then how do you expect to put in the effort to make an actually good rewrite of one of the most controversial creepypasta figures?

Abandoned by Disney. I just can't get over how well put together it is despite being a pasta based off of a current IP, and its incredible theme of corruption in Disney.

Oh, of course! I'm just trying to nail down my writing style. I want to work on existential dread, but that can be very hard to properly build and execute. If you have advice on that, I'd really appreciate it.

At this point, I've scrapped the story so no thank you

Oh yeah, if I could have some help formatting it properly, that would be a big help too. I always suck at that kind of work.

Any kind of feedback is fine, as long as it's not destructive negative. Please, let me know your thoughts, maybe your gripes! I'm looking at you, @Cornconic :P

I'm so sorry, everyone, but it's taking a little longer than I hoped. The story will be out hopefully late tonight or early tomorrow. Please bear with me, this has been a hectic month.

Ah, I don't think pastas of IPs are allowed on here :/

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Your own short stories. How do I write bite sized stories like you did?

Got it. I just know that one sentence stories can exist on here, so is there any way to write that kind of story on here without it getting taken down?

Sorry, I was challenging myself to come up with a one line story. What did I do wrong to make it "a joke" to you?

What is you talking about? I are perfectly nurmal hooman!