Hiya. I don’t have any advice for you, other than to enjoy what you do as long as you’re not hurting anyone else or yourself. BTW, the Victim #1 photo is an edited picture of a cosplayer dressed as Kyo, singer of the Japanese rock band Dir en Grey.
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Yo are you okay? From what I heard, nothing good comes from reading Tomino’s Hell out loud. Reading it out loud is said to cause misfortune, illness, or death, in some unfortunate circumstances.
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@Cornconic Ah, I see. Thank you for letting me know.
The spin-off appeal is used to make stories based on your OCs/original characters.
Brilliant! I’ve heard about this story, and if I’m being honest, when I heard of it, I thought it sounded like shit. Thank goodness it was removed.
How did you get into creepypasta/Marble Hornets, Sally Face, and Yandere Simulator? How long have you been a fan of each of these respective medias?
It was removed because it didn’t meet the quality standards. I’m not one of the admins, but you have to meet those standards when writing a story, and there are very good reasons as to why.
Over the top gore and random jump scares every five minutes.
Yet another Mary Sue OC. Sorry, but I don’t like it. Good try though. :)
I really appreciate you going into a deep dive of this story. IMHO, the OG Jeff the Killer story from 2008/2011 deserved its removal from this site, and with good reason as well. The 2015 reboot is a hundred times better. And let’s not forget the amount of fangirls the original story spawned. Believe me, I was one of them, but I’m saving that for another time.
All in all, 10/10 analysis. Well done.
Suspense/tension build-up, creating an uneasy atmosphere, and ghosts and monsters.
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I’m sorry to say, but I don’t know if I’ll be able to find it. It probably doesn’t exist, or there aren’t much copies available.
@Fear02 “‘kin hell” is an old English term for “fucking hell”, where the first half is cut off to make it roll off the tongue easier. Plus, I was tired, and I didn’t know what else to put. Anyways…
I knew Peter Pan was dark, but not this dark! I had heard about a similar theory where Never Land is actually an afterlife for the children, hence why they “never grow up”. Besides that, I also heard of something about a woman who discovered the mummified remains of two dead babies in her house’s basement. The remains were wrapped in newspapers, and a copy of the original book was beside them. IIRC, the children’s mother also had the same initials as the book’s author, but was not J.M. Barrie himself. My guess is that the twins were stillborn, meaning that they had died at some point during birth. The mother most likely had the book placed beside the remains as a symbolical reference for them never growing up.
Anywho, have a good rest of your day. :)
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I think 096 would seriously annihilate Jeff if they got into a death match.