I've been working on a creepypasta story over the last few months for one of my newer characters. I did add some of my own personal experiences for accuracy in the story, as I would like it to be Semi-realistic with obvious indications of it being completely fictional. I have had two people proof read just incase since Grammarly doesn't really help me (it tries to put words in impropper places like this : insi"hello"de).
Some things I am going to ask for other's input is :
1. Should I add names to the bullies & stalker mentioned?
2. Should I avoid time jumps and add a full description instead of a small summary of the time jump?
I'm also very very new to this platform so I'm not very sure how the process of making a story would go and how it would be posted.
Thank you to whoever may be reading this and putting their own input.