This was an amazing story, and the sequels were even better. I felt for the characters, it was long, and detailed, but still able to be understood by the younger Creepypasta enjoyers, which I find quite rare in a lot of the Creepypasta's, so for anyone about to write one, remember to make it to where like a 13 year old could read and understand it, and I think Rainbow Factory did a really good job of that...and can I say..the plot was phenomenal! I find that in some Creepypasta's, it seems to drag in, but in Rainbow Factory, I was clinging onto every word. As a teenager, I crave to have shivers, and be scared, and Rainbow Factory did a good job of that. Now, one thing I will say, is it didn't stick with the usual My Little Pony style, it was far more mature, and I can understand that, but to make it more believable, it would have been nice for them to have acted a bit like how they did in the show [Excluding Rainbow Dash, she is the main antagonist in this, therefore, she is excluded from that. But maybe don't make her swear? Just a thought.] In general...this was amazing.
Now, my ratings:
Age Rating: 14+
My rating for the story: 10/10!
Would I allow my child to read it?: Absolutely not :D
Sequel Ratings: 9.5/10
If you haven't read it, and have stuck around this long, you should go read it :D