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It was a usual day for Lauren, her face was concealed in textbooks and scribbled essays. she was still trying to feed her brain some knowledge, Like a toddler refusing to eat spinach. She was still resting in bed, her back was laid against the pillow. The stuffed pillow was the only comfort she could find. It was almost time for High School when Lauren heard a knock on the door.
She quickly threw the textbooks in a heap on the floor, got up and went to the hallway. The knocking was gradually getting louder as she slowly walked each step of her foot. Before May 6, Lauren was in her Classroom, sitting in a blue chair while her Spanish teacher was lecturing her hungry students. When the bell rang, she got and reached for her lunch bag in the backpack nestled against her seat. She zipped open the backpack and extracted out her lunch bag.
She formerly re-zipped the bag and stepped out of the classroom and into the line. When the class reached the cafeteria, Lauren took a seat next to her favorite friend, Dezzie. "I hope you got your homework," Dezzie addressed. "I did," Lauren responded. After lunch, she quietly buried herself in her seat. Hoping for school to end.
The knocking became more powerful and frightening when she was walking to the door. The sound finally finished off with a heavy bang. She quickly reached for the doorknob and unsealed the door when she got greeted by a gust of wind. She felt stupid and decided to turn back when a powerful huge force picked up Lauren and got pinned to the ceiling. Lauren's lungs were full of screams, trying to escape the eerie grasp.
Suddenly knives from the pre-opened cabinet flew into Laurens's mouth. Blood gushed out from her lips as she screeched for help. When the force went, she sank onto the floor. the bloody knives went penetrating into the back of her head, Piercing her. The last thing she saw was blood dripping and soaking up the floor.