Water World: No Escape is one of the most painful reading experiences I've ever had, yet it is somehow still on this wiki. I mean, I suppose the grammar and spelling is decent enough, but the writing that is there is pretentious garbage.
I'd like to see some pasta written by 10 year old people that are apparently good, I'm rather curious.
Oh, and I'd take Jeff over Sonic.exe just for the sheer fact that it is slightly more competent. Both suck, obviously. I'd take a look at Dorkpool's comment if you want more of my own thoughts, he hit the nail right on the head.
Also, "The not so good day" is typical trollpasta quality stuff. Yeah, it is terrible, but I found some humor in it and it was fairly short, so I would say I'm kinda glad I read it.