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I don't get though how the sound of keys would make the ''rickety-click'' sound. I imagine keys to sound more like ''cling-clank'' which is pretty far from the sound of creaking joints.  It's a minor thing, but it distracted me towards the end.
 
I don't get though how the sound of keys would make the ''rickety-click'' sound. I imagine keys to sound more like ''cling-clank'' which is pretty far from the sound of creaking joints.  It's a minor thing, but it distracted me towards the end.
   
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Also, you are a damn good writer and I'd love it if you'd be able to give comments on my own creepypasta. (Quid pro quo: I scratch your back, you scratch mine?)
 
 
 
<p class="MsoNormal">You are a damn good writer and I'd love it if you'd be able to give comments on my own creepypasta. (Quid pro quo: I scratch your back, you scratch mine?)</p>
 
   
 
<p class="MsoNormal">Here: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:331580</p>
 
<p class="MsoNormal">Here: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:331580</p>

Latest revision as of 04:59, June 22, 2014

In one word: creepy. Got chills on those last few paragraphs.

I wouldn't worry about the length; it had just enough build up imo. Any less might subtract from the creepiness factor the story holds pretty well.

I don't get though how the sound of keys would make the rickety-click sound. I imagine keys to sound more like cling-clank which is pretty far from the sound of creaking joints.  It's a minor thing, but it distracted me towards the end.

Also, you are a damn good writer and I'd love it if you'd be able to give comments on my own creepypasta. (Quid pro quo: I scratch your back, you scratch mine?)

Here: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:331580

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