I like to thank you for taking the time out to give me a nice thought-out review. I appreciate your feedback and for catching those embarrassing grammatical errors. You did note that the ending was vague and that is my fault. When copying and pasting the file to here, I left out the last few words. This is in fact the "end of part one" of several other parts. I only submitted one part first to catch any feedback which turned out to be highly necessary. Thank you again for reading my story and I hope you along with others will be interested in reading the rest later.

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