Don't grammer police me just yet still not yet in final faze but I started writing this and it almost turned into a novel but then back to a short story originaly the bird has going to be a demon and kill him sort of thing them the demon was going to be something eles but I didn't go through with it. This is the final thing not grammer wise but story wise. I have a problem with sometimes chaging the plot multiple times in the middle of my story.

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