Well, I've seen a few pages that tell one story on here. You can find the other stories on my page, and I may end up doing what you say (gather them and place them all on one page). This is the only story I want to focus on Lilith really, so if you feel there's something I left out when it comes to Lilith, let me know so I can address it. As far as the demon goes, I'm thinking of writing his story later on and flesh him out a bit more. Right now, I'm writing a piece of the puzzle that focuses on what they will call "The First Encounter."
Addressed the areas of concern