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Not Bad But...

This needs to be reviewed, it lacks capitals, spaces and basic punctuation, though it is rather informative. However the constant linking is annoying, and it has little to no structure.

Could someone please rewrite this?

I can do that. Hold on a minute. Dronian 20:49, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Thats more like it ;) Bushcraft Medic 22:51, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

While this is a good page, it really needs some revisions (could use better grammar, it's redundant at times, and some stories could be summarized in a better way). Factionnaire 22:04, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

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