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Bakuhatsu 666

Bokuwa, Bakuhatsu.

I am being executed today. I think. I got arrested. A year ago. I think murder was the crime. Yes. Now I remember. I killed Hatsuo. He was a bully. A bully throughout his life. Even though he was a bully, he had good grades. He went to one of the best universities in Japan, Waseda University. He had good cars. He had a family. He had a life. I, on the other hand, got bad grades, never went to university, lived with my parents until I got kicked out, and became homeless. While Hatsuo stayed in Greater Tokyo, I ended up moving to Osaka. As I was homeless, I had to live in Kamagasaki, better known as the homeless village. Then Hatsuo came. He came to destroy some parts of it. My house was in one of those parts. When he saw me, he started to bully me. I mean, after all, he is richer than me. He owns a construction company named Kensetsukaisha. What do I own? A tent. Not so much. As you see, his bullying pissed me off. So I blew him up in his capsule hotel (Owned by him of course). I placed C-4s around his room and blew it up. He and five other people died. How did they find me? Well, some of the soot and blood was on me, and they checked me up. The DNA of the blood matched Hatsuo's, so they arrested me. At the trial, I was sentenced to death. I was sent to an international prison. Here, there are prisoners from all around the world. It is called Tartarus. I am on the 13th floor, block 13, and cell 666.

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Bokuwa, Bakuhatsu again.

I am to be executed in 666 days. That is about 1.82 years. I will be here a while. Here, we are not treated so badly. I made a few other friends. My new friend is Jason "Goku" Lim, a Singaporean Secret Society member and druglord. He was arrested on murder and drug charges. According to Singaporean law, he will be executed. His date is in three months. This means in three months I lose a friend. I lose a friend! A friend! However, at that moment, I met another dude. A huge dude. His name's Mov. He is Russian. Or Soviet to be precise. He loves Communism and everything Communist. He was frozen in time after World War 2. After getting awakened, he went into rage mode. Destroyed the village he was reawakened in. He hates the new world and wishes to live in the past. During his time. We have also bonded. The world has screwed us over.

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Bokuwa, Bakuhatsu.

I found the weirdest thing ever. Like it is really weird. I was cleaning up my prison block because of the prison chores system, and I found a dead body. A body. I did not think too much of it. After all, prisoners get executed here all the time. But then six more bodies were dumped. That was weird. Let me just tell you, the guards have the weirdest habits ever. They apparently make wishes on both 11:11 AM and PM, and they also only seem to play Phasmophobia. According to Goku, they have phases in which they play scary games. They only broke this when they were in an Among Us phase. He said that they also wished all prisoners dead. I am starting to think he is right. After all, he has been here for two years. I have only been here for a week.

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Bokuwa, it’s me Bakuhatsu again.

I have not been telling the whole truth. But those of you wondering, Why are there only three entries (This is the fourth entry, but there were only three before that). Firstly, the first entry was written before my trial. The second, a month after the trial, in the prison. The first day there. The third was a week after. This entry comes the day after the third entry was written.

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Bokuwa, it’s me Bakuhatsu again.

I have not been telling the whole truth. But those of you wondering, Why are there only three entries (This is the fourth entry, but there were only three before that). Firstly, the first entry was written before my trial. The second, a month after the trial, in the prison. The first day there. The third was a week after. This entry comes the day after the third entry was written. I find even more creepy things as the minutes have by. Today, a prisoner named Rustav Suravi became insane. Like very insane. I saw him try to break the glass in his cell, which of course failed. Then he started to bang his head. The guards came and killed him. I secretly followed the guards. Then I discovered the shocking secret. I found them put the body in the freezer. Once they were gone, I opened the freezer. Here, I saw more bodies. After a while, I saw a screen that said, “666 bodies in total, next execution tomorrow.” That shocked me. Then I saw another screen below that. It read, “Next mass funeral in two years.” That shocked me even more. So any prisoners that die will get locked here. Funerals in years. That fact made me sick. It implanted my mindset for the years to come.

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Kon’nichiwa baka!

I have this urge. This urge to kill. I do not know where it came from. But all I want to do is kill. I want to kill those weird guards. Those executioners. All I want is for Tartarus to get destroyed. This urge is growing stronger by the minute. Just imagine, escaping my execution and starting a prison riot. Imagine cheating death and turning him on the guards. Imagine saving Goku. Just Imagine!

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Bokuwa, Bakuhatsu.

I have that urge. I have it. But I need to keep it quiet. It can get worse over time here. Now it has been a month in Tartarus. I have been talking to Goku and Mov, and they are ready to help me incite a prison riot. However, the creepiness of the prison can also be attributed to its location. We do not know where it is. My guess is that it is in the Arctic, the Antarctic, or maybe the Pacific. I think I can rule out the Pacific. Same for the Antarctic. All I can say is this could be a modern Siberian Gulag, made for international prisoners.





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Tbh, it has awkward wording, bad grammar and punctuation, improper capitalization, repetition of sentences which I guess is a typo, and lacks a huge chunk of explanation. I saw you added explanation but some of it is just so hard to understand. This needs a ton of redoing, polishing and explaining. If you actually post this in the main pasta section this will get deleted again, and by the way what do you mean by bokuwa and the other Japanese words, I think there is a rule that states you cannot post pasta's that are in or have some parts of it in other languages.

Don't click here. There is nothing to see. 05:30, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

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