Flesh and Bone: Episode 1[]
The sound was getting louder and louder as whatever it was got closer and closer to where they were hiding. The door slowly began to open. When the door was completely open it revealed no one was there but yet the sound still was there. A scream ripped through the silence as a wet splat sound was heard nearby but when they went to see what happened nothing was there. The door behind them slapped shut and when they tried to open it they found that it was locked. They were trapped in the same room with whatever was making the sound. Swish…swish...was heard close by but when they looked all they could see was a knife floating all on its own. The knife dropped to the ground. the door to the room flung open but not to the house they were before but someplace else entirely. In the doorway, someone or something was standing there with a long, sharp, bloody knife. The knife had been used recently and was going to be used again. A wailing was heard and then the creature vanished from sight. They began to explore the building. noises of screaming, moaning, chains rattling, wailing, and more came from everywhere but they could never find the source. They began to walk up a long staircase that emptied out into a dark hallway. The walls were smeared in blood, the floor was scoffed, and something black and slimy dripped from the ceiling. Finally, after what seemed like days, they reached the end of the hallway and at the end of the hallway was...A dead body hanging from the ceiling. they could see bones sticking out and flesh torn in some places. Behind the body, there was a door. Slowly they open the door. What they found in the room changed their lives forever.
Stayed tuned for episode 2 of flesh and bone to found out what was in the room
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ZugZuwang (talk) 22:53, 7 April 2022 (UTC)[]
This is a wall of text, and uploading this to the wiki is going to get it removed, so I'd advise separating your paragraphs from each other.
Named after the bottled water brand, AQUA— *dies* (talk) 18:33, 12 April 2022 (UTC)[]
I'm going to start this off by saying that no one will probably read this if it's just a giant block of text. Please separate some of your sentences for better readability.
There are also many grammar and technical issues that would make the story much better if they were fixed.
Finally, the overall plot has many obvious holes in it. For one, making the creepypasta in episode form is probably not the best option if the episode in question is going to be short and have no substance. If you still want to keep this as an episode, you would do well to at least give some sort of exposition about who "they" even are, or why they're in the situation that they're in. Right now, I have almost no information to go on.
Thank you for your time, and good luck! (: