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Nails[]

I woke up in a hospital bed. Thinking "How did i get here?", I got up from the bed. All i remember was somebody shooting me with a nail gun. I pulled up my shirt and was surprised to see no nail, and no blood on my shirt. The floor was as sharp as nails, and the walls were as bright as heaven. I found my phone, and to my surprise it was fully charged. "Huh, what a coincidence." I said, as i went into the hall of the hospital.





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William See (talk) 14:55, 30 May 2022 (UTC)[]

You need to have some semblance of a draft before uploading to the workshop. As it stands you’re writing it out from scratch, and there doesn’t seem to be a cohesive idea formed yet. Start on a google doc and then post the whole story when you’re done.

Tewahway (Talk) 13:37, 1 June 2022 (UTC)[]

Much as Billy said, there's not really anything here to give any feedback on. Some of the descriptions are a little... peculiar, and "I" should always be capitalized.

I'd recommend not writing from scratch on the wiki, as it lacks the basic grammar/spell check features you'll find in a word processing program, like docs or word.

~~bruh ~~[]

Grammarly works on here.

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