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Someone in the house[]

It was a dark night, and I was playing minecraft on my computer. I saw a message pop up in bright red letters on the screen, near the side.

“UnknownEntity.exe has entered the game.”

“UnknownEntity.exe has left the game”

Weird. I kept playing until about 2:30 AM, then I started to get tired. I yawned and stretched my arms, rubbing my tired eyes. A message appeared on my screen afterward, in glowing red letters. The message read: “Someone is in your house. : ) “ I thought this was just a prank played on me by one of my friends, so I ignored it. A few minutes later, another message appeared.


This is when I started to get a little paranoid. There was no one in my house besides me, because my parents were out at a party, and my sister was at a sleepover with her friends.

I was alone.

I shut my computer down, in case it was a glitch, and went upstairs to maybe get some sleep. As I went across the room, in the hallway I saw a shadowy figure staring at me. They turned around to look at me, and I saw two glowing silver eyes. I stood, frozen. “Someone is here” It said, its voice distorted and glitchy. I turned around and ran as fast as I could up the stairs. The figure stood still and watched me run, as if fascinated by my movements.

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Te (talk) 20:08, 1 December 2021 (UTC)[]

Howdy. So, there's a few things I gotta say here:

First of all, you can not post this story on the Creepypasta Wiki. If you check out this link you'll find that Minecraft is a blacklisted subject.

That said, this story could be appropriate elsewhere. In the case you do decide to post it somewhere else, I think it needs a bit more detail. It could also use a some proofreading, but to be honest, there's no such thing as too much proofreading anyhow.

If you do decide to post this story here, it will swiftly be deleted by an admin, I'm quite sure.

Anyhow, good luck with your story. Sorry to bear the bad news. When in doubt, always check the rules.