The Sun Comes Down[]
Imagine a scenario in which the sun crashed into the Earth, how every single lifeform would be obliterated instantly. Here is narrated scenario (excluding the 1st chapter) of that situation itself.
2001, December 27 3:42 PM, Eastern Daylight Time
Report of Temperature and Gravitational Changes
One of our satellites at NASA have reported not only a gravitational shift, but also movement coming directly from the sun hovering towards Earth at least a kilometer away from its original location reported. Satellite codename: "SP-412" was destroyed, the last recorded footage was a beam of what can be described as a "thermal beam" striking before communication with the satellite was lost. December 28th 1:43 PM, Eastern Daylight Time
News Reports
NASA at this moment has informed the government about the current situation, though widespread panic and civilians worldwide have been reporting the sun "growing" larger in the sky, presumably getting closer by the days pass. NASA and its engineers are dumbfounded, and some employees have gone on rants on how "the sun is against humanity" and "the end is coming." News reports have detailed the following situation and large riots are soon to be expected in countries largely impacted by the scenario, aside from an addition of global warming.
Danger Close By
Emergency Alert Systems in some countries have activated, the sun keeps getting more closer as the planet as the atmosphere starts to burn away. The water becomes hot and boils away. Riots occur and cities and wide-spread panic rampages throughout countries worldwide. NASA has lost loads of employees due to this situation, nothing can be done. Not this time.
Lifeforms Cease
100% of lifeforms are now gone, nothing is left now. The world is now a burden of apocalyptic cities, no noises. Just the remainder of the ignited souls floating through space, never to be recognized or seen again. But what remains of what we call "Earth" is now coated in flames, and the ashes of the poor souls who were wiped out.
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Macciata> (talk) 20:26, 28 May 2023 (UTC)[]
Imagine a scenario in which the sun crashed into the Earth [Most observers would describe it the other way around -- that is, the Earth crashing into the Sun -- in the same way that we usually refer to a baseball approaching a catcher's mitt, and not the catcher crashing into the ball], and how every single lifeform would be obliterated instantly. Here is a narrated scenario (excluding the 1st chapter [what do you mean? Is the first chapter missing, or are you saying that the first part below is not narrated? Because... it is.]) of that situation itself.
2001, December 27 3:42 PM, Eastern Daylight Time
Report of Temperature and Gravitational Changes
One of our satellites at NASA have has reported not only a gravitational shift [What do you think this means?], but also a movement coming directly from of the sun hovering towards Earth, at least a kilometer away from its original location reported.
[The Sun is roughly 4,370,000 km around, is large enough to contain approximately 1.3 million Earths, and contains over 99.8% of the mass in the Solar System. A single kilometer of change in its position relative to Earth wouldn't really be detectable.
I emphasize "relative to Earth" there because I have to assume that's what you mean. The Sun's "original position" is a completely meaningless phrase; it, along with the rest of the System, is constantly moving around the center of the Galaxy at around 720,000 km/h, along with various other vectors of movement such as the motion of the Galaxy as a whole and the ongoing expansion of space itself. Even its position relative to Earth is continually fluctuating -- twice in the course of a year, our elliptical orbit carries us from roughly 147 million to 153 million km away from the Sun.]
Satellite codename: "SP-412" was destroyed. The last recorded footage showed was a beam of what can be has been described as a "thermal beam" striking before communication with the satellite was lost. [Where was this satellite? How did that satellite, out of thousands, get destroyed by a "thermal beam" without damaging anything else? What about it did the satellite pick up that enabled anyone to identify it as a "thermal" beam?]
December 28th 1:43 PM, Eastern Daylight Time [Why are the first two sections timestamped but not the latter two? How much time elapses in the rest of the story?]
News Reports
NASA at this moment has informed the government about the current situation, though there has been widespread panic already, and civilians worldwide have been reportinged the sun "growing" larger in the sky, presumably apparently getting closer by as the days pass [The government probably didn't really need to be informed by this point]. NASA and its engineers are dumbfounded, and some employees have gone on rants on how "the sun is against humanity" and "the end is coming". News reports have detailed the following situation [Which situation? The events of the next header?] and large riots are soon to be expected in countries largely impacted by the scenario [All countries would be impacted equally], aside from along with an addition of global warming catastrophic atmospheric turmoil as the planetary temperature soars.
Danger Close By
Emergency Alert Systems in some countries have activated [Only some?]. The sun keeps getting more closer as to the planet as the atmosphere starts to burn away. The water becomes hot and boils away [At this point all life on the planet has ceased]. Riots occur and cities and wide-spread panic rampages throughout countries worldwide [Or not, since everyone is dead]. NASA has lost loads all of its employees , along with every other Earthly organization, due to this situation. Nothing can be done. Not this time.
Lifeforms Cease
100% of lifeforms are now gone, nothing is left now. The world is now a burden [I don't know what word you meant here, but "burden" makes no sense.] of apocalyptic cities, no noises mass of plasma and a few traces of heavy metals dispersing into the substance of the Sun. Just the remainder of the ignited souls [Souls are flammable?] floating through space, never to be recognized or seen again [Souls cannot be seen anyway]. But what remains of what we called "Earth" is are now coated in flames, and the ashes of the poor souls who were wiped out completely vaporized.
In all, you don't really have a story here, only a very loose sketch of an outline of a series of events. There isn't enough information given in your draft even to say whether it's accurate, but given what's there, it appears as though you are operating under the assumption that the Sun is a relatively small object "suspended" in the sky, which could somehow just drop "down" onto the Earth and get close enough to burn away the atmosphere without vaporizing the entire planet within seconds afterward. Again, though, I say "appears" because there just isn't enough substance in your text to convey more than a vague impression of your intentions.