The haunted Library in Paris (unreviewed)[]
It was late June in the year of 1940, The Nazis march throught the streets of Paris the buildings and bakery no longer had the flag of France, the beautiful banner of red, white, and blue. It was now replaced with a banner of black, red, and white. It had a red background, white circle and a black swasika. The Nazis were proud of what they did, they defeated Belgium, Netherlands, Luxembourg, Poland, Norway, Denmark, and France. They made British Empire, a powerful country run away.
Hitler sits in the war room, in his bunker.His bunker had a table of Europe, posters, flag of Nazi Germany, and even markers to plan out their next invasion He is confident he will restore Germany to its former glory and get back at the Allied countries for humiliating Germany at the end of World War 1, ww1 ended in 1918. Then he heard the door open, it was General Hans Krebs, he had a smile on his face. General Krebs walked into the room and closed the door behind him. He did the Nazi salute and said, “My fufher… we have defeated The low land countries, Poland, France, Denmark, and Norway!”
Hitler then laughed, he didn’t know that the allied countries were this weak, they thought they would be a bit stronger like in World War 1. But he remembers that Germany is at war with Britain. He then looked up and asked Krebs, “What about Britain, we are at war with them too.. They are the only allied country left other than China!”
Hans Krebs said, “They retreated and left France..”
Hitler then said, “Ah okay, we will deal with them later…”
Hans Krebs then cleared his throat and asked, “What are you going to do in the occupied countries?”
Hitler then said, “Well, we will enfoce laws we enfoce here in Germany… we will also clear out the undisaiable people and station more troops there.. Just in case the Brits are coming back for Round 2. We will also burn books that contract our country's laws and values.. And books made by undisairable people!”
Hans Krebs said, “Okay…”
Hans Krebs grabbed a walkie talkie from his pocket and said, “Nazis soldiers… burn books that contract our country's laws and values… and made by undisaiable people… and stay put.. Britain might try to attack us!”
There was a battallion of Nazis in Paris.. One of the German soldiers, Fritz Johnson said, “General told us to burn books that are against our countries values and laws.. And made by undesirable people!”
Then Sergeant Fritz Johnson had an evil smirk on his face, then pointed to the library behind them and said, “We’ll start there!”
There were four Nazi soldiers in that group. Sergeant First Class Fritz Johnson, a 5’0 man, had yellow hair and blue eyes. He was conscripted into the German army a day before Germany invaded Poland. Also, there were red stains on his uniform. He was born, grew up in Colonge. He is very upset by the loss of his father in WW1. He is proud that he got his revene, he remeber killing three Allied soldiers, with knives or guns. He can remember the screams, cries, and moans of them. He smiles as he remembers it.
The second Nazi was Private Wolfgang Schmidt, he had black hair and black beard. He had blue eyes, both his parents and descendants had black hair and blue eyes, except his great grandmother who had green eyes. He was born in Krefeld.
The Third Nazi in the group was Max Miller. He had yellow hair and blue eyes just like Fritz Johnson. He was 5 '7, and he joined the army in 1938. He was born and grew up in Hamburg. He has a wife and a baby girl who is 9.
The fourth Nazi soldier in the group was named Hans Jackson. He had yellow hair, he had blue eyes. He worked as a zookeeper for 10 years and was conscripted into the army on May 26th 1939. He enjoyed taking care of animals like Rhinos, kangeroos, and Green forest frogs. He was born in Munich.
The Four Nazis were about to enter the library. Then, a man who was 5’4, had yellow eyes, a white jacket and black pants, he had a yellow beard. The man said, “Where are you going?”
Wolfgang then said, “We are going to the library… we’re removing books that are made by undisirble people and books that are against our laws and country’s value. Get out of the way!”
The man in the jacket said, “You might not want to go in there…”
Fritz then asked, “Why not?”
Then, the man said, “Well… I used to work there… before getting a job in Switzerland, I came back here to see my parents… I always hear voices and children giggling.. I also saw figures waving at me and running. I saw a book being thrown at me, it missed.”
Fritz then said, “Sure dude!”
The man said, “You wouldn’t survive a minute in there…” Then, the man facepalmed and walked away.
Fritz moaned, “Okay, we will keep an eye out.”
The Nazis entered the library, the doors were still open. It had many bookshelves, a drinking fountain, three green couches, a checkout counter, borad games like checkers, and battleships. The library smelt like cinnamon, there was a blue covered book in the middle of the library floor which was orange. The Nazis scitdaddle, Fritz goes to a bookshelf and makes sure the books were not breaking Nazi law and values. Also the books were not made by undisirable people. One of the Nazis, Hans, goes upstairs. Then Fritz grabebd a book and examined it. It had yellow cover and red words written, “Chemistry for nerds by Robert Willaims
Then Fritz put the books back, then after a while, a bunch of books were on the ground next to him. Many books had red, blue, green, pink covers. Then the lights were flickering, Fritz said, “Guys.. stop playing with the lights..”
Wolfgang Max then said, “We’re not playing the the lights!” They then went back to work.
Hans then said, “I was in the bathroom…” he then adjusted his pants and said, “You do not wanna go in there..” He then walked away from the bathroom.
Fritz had a confused look on his face and said, “The lights.. were flickering, my comrades didn’t flicker the lights so who played with the lights?”. He then rolled his eyes and continued what he's doing. The sun was then leaving the sky, the sky had a light purple hue and some stars were in the sky.
Then, Wolfgang heard breathing behind him, he then turned around and asked, “Who is breathing on me?” He then saw a black figure running across the room, it was black with red eyes. Wolfgang yelled, “What was that?”
Max then walked up to him and asked, “What?”
Wolfgang said, “I saw a figure with red eyes running across this room..”
Max then said in an angry tone, “Stop using drugs.” he had an angry look on his face he then walked away.
Then, the Nazis couldn’t see anything, not even each other. Then the group heard a scream belonging to a man. Then, someone turned on the lights. Then, in the middle of the library, there was a body, the body had massive red stains on the uniform, the body had yellow hair and blue eyes. They were missing an eye, and there was a puddle of blood under the body.
Then, Hans took another look at the body, he then pointed to the body and yelled, “Fr-..F- Fritz! Fritz is dead!”
Wolfgang said, “Oh.. poor him…”
Then, Max looked up and saw something on the wall. It was written in red, icky blood. It smelled worse than a fart. He pointed to it and asked, “What’s that?”
Hans then read it, he then said, “It reads Get Out… or else..” he was about to laugh until Max turned to him and was about to say something.
Max then said, “You think this is… a prank!” He is shocked by the death of Fritz but also thinks this was a prank.
Hans said, “There is no way that this is a prank, if this is a prank.. The blood under him wouldn’t smell like fart it will smell like tomatos since ketchup is made up… tomateos!”
Then, he saw all the windows around him scatter, he heard nothing, he saw nothing break the windows. He then felt something growing inside him.
Then, Wolfgang said, “I- I am just gonna head out.. I don’t feel comfortable ab-” before he could finish his sentence he got a heart attack, then his eyes slither like snakes out of their sockets he then ran away from Max and Hans, then the welcome to the library sign fell down and the two nazi men heard a huge boom sound at a distance. Wolfgang is on the ground, he isn’t breathing, his short pink tongue is sticking outside, a pool of red substance is under him.
Max and Hans look at each other then the dead body of Wolfgang. Max then whispered under his breath, “What a cunt.”
He then heard screaming belonging to a woman from a distance, he grabs his rifle and moans, “Who’s there?”
He then saw a dog run up to him but befor eit could touch him it disappeared into thin air. He then heard footsteps and an axe chopping something down.
Hans ask, “I think we are seeing things, we haven’t slept since we arrived to the Western Front.. For some reason we are also not dead from exhaustion.”
Then, an axe swipe, two things fell on the ground, a head and the rest of the body. There was a THUMP! Sound. Hans’ head and the rest of his body. Blood was flowing from the head and body. Max was the only one left, he looked around, he fired a few bullets.
Then he felt something in him, it was growing, it was growing. Then, Max yelled, “Viva La France, down with the dumb Nazis!” He then ran towards one of the shattered windows, a crack sound can be heard in the neighborhood. Max was flying and was about to land. He landed on the street, he was massivly hurt, he had a broken nose. A car put him out of his misery.
No one had the balls to step inside the library after learning about what happened to the battalion. Not even the liberating Allied soldiers or the Soviets.
The ghost of the dead French soldier whispered into the dead Nazi soldier’s ear, “Death is a bridge we inevitably have to cross.”
Thanks to God for helping me make this.
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HopelessNightOwl (talk) 02:04, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[]
This draft has the same composition issues (spelling, punctuation, tense hopping) as all the other drafts you have posted so far. I suggest you spend some time reading other stories on this wiki until you get the hang of these things. These categories would be a good place to start.