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One of my favorite creepypastas.

Malcolm McComb (talk) 19:33, February 18, 2013 (UTC)Malcolm McComb


Wow, this was pretty good. Could use a bit of work, but otherwise, it's nice.

Moustacheman11 19:26, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

This genuily creeped me out. No wonder people give Christians a bad name... Thedeadwalk2nite 21:13, June 1, 2012 (UTC)


When I saw the picture, I got a horrible feeling in my body. :| It genuinely scared me. THEN WHO WAS PHONE? 19:24, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Well Done. I would like to know what the head was saying.

It would probably ruin it if you knew what the head was saying. Whatssocreepyaboutpasta (talk) 05:42, July 20, 2012 (UTC)


First good one I have read in a while. Very unique and disturbing. TehKarui (talk) 22:08, September 22, 2012 (UTC)


I agree, really good pasta! 8/10! Lolwhut13375 (talk) 03:24, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

I adore how this made me sick to my stomach.

Probably because the whole unborn fetus thing. Simple, indeed. Very nice.LeahRawrzzz (talk) 03:46, September 29, 2012 (UTC) I actually adore babies ._.

Was the head saying "The light of God calls us"?

FokkerTISM (talk) 13:48, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

This deserves PoTM status. Easily one of the best Creepypastas out there. 100/10 Good morning. And, in case I don't see you, good afternoon, good evening, and good night. 09:21, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Gotta say, I'm pretty happy to see how much people are enjoying this.RoboKy (talk) 16:40, March 1, 2013 (UTC)

Nice. My baby sister walked in when i looked at the head. Gave her nightmares for weeks. But good pasta! Cpl. Peas (talk) 19:05, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Wow! That head gave me nightmares! Very creepy. 9/10. Sex and death. Two things that come only once in a life. But at least after death your're not nauseous  (talk) 6:06, June 6, 2013 (UTC)

I loved this pasta! One of the best I've read in a while. 10/10 SElliott765 (talk) 21:34, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Cool pasta with a decent setup, though it could have done with a better payoff - the all-out gorefest ending was a little tiresome. MeltingObject (talk) 10:34, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Score.

8.0/10 - CrashingCymbal Talk Page 11:21, July 31, 2013 (UTC)

Pretty good

7/10. Writing style and pacing was good and the gore at the end was not exaggerated but still disgusting. Story definitely has good elements but is all super cliche. Didn't we have "Lost Episodes" as pasta of the month in March or something? I, Da Cashman (talk) 04:27, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

Also, if it isn't clear to people, the head was clearly saying what the guy at the end was repeating. "The light of God calls them." Meaning that the subliminal messages were convincing one of the parents that the unborn baby belonged in heaven more than Earth. And how do you go to Heaven? Die. I, Da Cashman (talk) 04:29, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

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