This is a good pasta. Not particuarly creepy, but well-written, and more substantial than most of these stories told from the narrator's perspective. I wish the story wasn't just one big paragraph, but other than that, I approve. Mdcowboy 06:18, February 14, 2012 (UTC)Mdcowboy
That last line was clever. DAMNED KIDS! 20:57, April 18, 2012 (UTC)