I love this one. Creepy. ~Kibaxyru "No one leaves the darkness behind." (talk) 03:22, January 10, 2013 (UTC)
I want to be scared by this, but the style of writing makes some parts really hard to imagine. Was there a trailer, a cabin, or both? Etc. The B (talk) 16:24, July 10, 2013 (UTC)
I don't get the hotdog part. Could someone go over the wording of that so that it makes more sense?NoSoup4U (talk) 20:58, July 23, 2013 (UTC)
It kinda sounds like he wanted a friend but didn't know how to not creep out your group.
This is legitimately terrifying, the whole stilted-speech thing whilst banging on the door, I could definitely feel that terror. A great read! WeegeeBored (talk) 13:54, August 13, 2013 (UTC)
Attempting to prevent myself from falling asleep tonight. This is a very good start. Werewolfoverlord12 (talk) 03:06, August 14, 2013 (UTC)