Very interesting format for the story. The rhyming made it erier for me. Overall, I would say that it was pretty good. Neo glitchmaker 01:04, December 5, 2011 (UTC) hmm, not bad. Sloshedtrain 01:21, December 5, 2011 (UTC) Retrieved from "https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Talk:Birthday_Party?oldid=56642" Community content is available under CC-BY-SA unless otherwise noted.