Eh, Good but needs pepper[]
Tasty pasta, it just needs some pepper or seasoning.
Wooh! 17:33, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
Actually, that was a very good pasta. I enjoyed it thoroughly and can't find very much wrong with it besides some assorted grammar mistakes that can be cleaned up easily. Well done. Never underestimate a writer. 20:07, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
Loved it SamiiSuffocate 20:10, March 6, 2012 (UTC)SamiiSuffocate
Really great pasta LiesTellTruth 10:12, June 28, 2012 (UTC)
I agree: this pasta has simply huge potential to be something even scarier, but it doesn't expand on that. Instead, it manages to be a decently-creepy pasta. Anyways, I'm just going to go quick on this one: pretty good pasta, read it if you haven't. Space! 06:31, May 27, 2013 (UTC)