Very nice! This story hit pretty close to home for me, since I'm working on computers all day. It was the first pasta in a while to really make me shudder. I am, however, confused on how the malicious 'virus' was from the dark web, considering that it wasn't a website at all but in fact a WiFi. That small little inconsistency was bothering me a bit, but otherwise a solid story. I'd give it a 8/10, after you finish the inconsistency! :)

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