I'm gonna admit this right now. I saw the scroll bar on this pasta and almost didn't read it. I'm glad I did, because this was one of the best written pastas I've ever read. Thank you for sharing. The thing is though, i'd like to go through this and fix the typos. OCD FTW Undead.Phoenix (talk) 19:55, September 30, 2012 (UTC)
JUST A SMALL TOWN BOYThefameboy64 (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
Out of all the Pastas I've read, this one is my favorite. I find myself re-reading it quite often. Excellent job.Dragasaur 15:57, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
I can't get over how well written this is. Definitely one of the best pastas I've read. Well done. DreamsInDelirium 15:49, January 27, 2012 (UTC)
Not so much scary as it is an amazing story. I absolutely love this. Laceyyomnom 04:19, January 15, 2012 (UTC)Laceythekitteneater.
I posted this on 4chan's /x/ board back in April of 09. It's weird though. I read through this and I see all these terrible writing cliches and grammatical mistakes. I'm glad y'all are still getting a kick out of it. Danarcher 04:37, January 2, 2012 (UTC) Dan Archer
This is the most epic creepypasta ever. Maspa is the scariest person on this site 04:03, October 11, 2010 (UTC)
Nah, this is just a creepypasta for rednecks. Not really scary. A TRAIN WITH THE DEVIL AND HES HIGH.
And then a skeleton pops out!
The end.
I already posted this pasta as "The Train" at least a month and half before this version was posted. Love, Orange.Soda 09:35, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
This is a beautiful piece of art.[]
This is the best creepypasta I've ever read. Bravo!Princessa96 03:28, June 28, 2011 (UTC)
some might be saying this is cliched and such but honestly, this is a really beautifull work of art, a fantastic work of literature. You should try proffiting out of that bud.
forgot to sign my last comment Diffomega 23:03, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
Shit, this was AWESOME! CreationofUnease My goal in life is do the unexpected. 02:45, January 12, 2012 (UTC)
Riddled with the uncanny, its no wonder this pasta is so unnerving. very possibly my favourite story on this wiki BurnTheFool 00:48, May 7, 2012 (UTC)
This is amazing Kill1mes 13:57, May 23, 2012 (UTC)
This really is a nice creepypasta. It could even be a movie for me, if there was one, I'd watch it.
Never read one, that was keeping me like this one did.
UnknownXx (talk) 12:34, September 6, 2012 (UTC)UnknownXx
wow. that is one long Pasta you got there. 9/10 (-1 for really too much lenght)Nachokaese (talk) 05:26, January 1, 2013 (UTC)Nachokaese
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9.7/10 - CrashingCymbal (talk) 13:03, July 4, 2013 (UTC)