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FIXED THE PAGE[]

This page has now been cleaned up to perfection. All paragraphs are in sections which are well labeled and a spellcheck has been performed on the whole page. The only unrecognised words that were ignored were EXE and Creepypastas. Grammar was fixed in some places it seemed wrong and the page is now good enough to remain here. If anyone notices any other mistakes that I somehow missed, please leave a message on my talk page and I will fix them. Typing up the article took a long time and formatting it did also, so I don't want to miss anything and have the page deleted within 3 days. 

Thank you.

Ghostseek (talk) 20:39, December 3, 2012 (UTC)


Goldstarfornotbeingcrap

Meh, the pasta's decent, but it's nothing we haven't all seen before. SLENDY, MY PEBBLES! (talk) 13:10, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

A good contribution[]

The pasta is good and sends a few shivers up my spine. The layout is nicely done and the grammar and punctuation seems to be spot on. My criticism though is that parts of it lack originality. I feel like I've certainly read bits of it before in other pastas. Also it's a tad bit short for my liking. The mystery of how and why it exists though is pretty good and nicely told! 6/10 CrashingCymbal (talk) 15:52, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

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