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Latest revision as of 03:08, 17 July 2013
Compared to Chapter 1, Chapter 2 is a vast improvement, no longer pestering you with little peeks at the creepy that resides in this Creepypasta. It opens the plot up- but not too much. Remember how I said in my Chapter 1 overview that I was afraid of cliches? Nope. Nope, all gone. All of it. Everything fits together in one dreadful symphony- the HUD gone, the monster, the cave- Chapter 2 is not only great compared to Chapter 1, it's great as a pasta.
Overall, if the rest of the pasta was like Chapter 2, I would be very, very happy to know that someone had written a pasta as good (or even better) than Jvk.esp.
You're tearing me apart, Lisa! 10:49, May 6, 2013 (UTC)
Where are the screenshots?
Where are the rest of the screenshots? The page registers an image, but i'm just seeing a big blank space. I like the text, but I would like to see the screencaps.
BladeCrossEXE (talk) 03:08, July 17, 2013 (UTC)Blade