Written by Mr.Zalgopasta (aka Aidan Gould)
Isn't that a Polish name, though Why are you still reading my post/contribution 03:10, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
The man in the room was Heron.
- Mr. Chewy33
If the man didn't talk, I might say he was Erich Zann.
Moustacheman11 03:48, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
It wasn't too creepy. It was more of a cool way to look at things, if this is a creepypasta it would be a 6. If you would have classified it differently I would suggest it as a 10.
It was alright, but it would have been nice to have more explanationsabout the old man.
I normally don't feel any emotion that i could really conect too, but when i was reading and my cousin was there with me he yelled "oh my god your crying!" i really feel so scared and i don't know why. Any ways my cousin enjoyed your writing.
Thank you very much :D. Also thanks for the constructive critisism guys. I know that horror is very subjective so stuff that scares me probably won't scare all of you guys. Mr.Zalgopasta 20:27, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
P.S. It wasn't Heron, Chewy, but I'm pretty sure they are in cohoots.
Unique concept, no overused cliches, and somewhat of a moral. But, I really enjoyed how realistic this story feels. Like it really could happen in real life. Well, it's a bit of a stretch at some points. But the way that almost all of this happens in his mind it what makes it so interesting. Congratulations for getting the creepypasta of the month! Shockman25 06:22, November 30, 2011 (UTC)
Thank you very much for the great feedback! I suppose all great creepypastas are kind of a stretch sometimes lol you can't keep it too earthbound. Also good on you for picking up the psychological element of the story. In most of my pastas the potential for a psychotic breakdown of the main character is either hinted at or directly stated :P. Thanks again.Mr.Zalgopasta 22:08, November 30, 2011 (UTC)
I feel that the old man symbolizes the audiance of "superstars". Zombie-like people who always demand that they continue creating new material for their entertainment. Charlie the Walrus (talk) 02:59, June 7, 2013 (UTC)