Delicious poetic pasta!--"Let go of the tangible mass of your mind. It is only an illusion." 03:27, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty good I must say.     Contr        KOROMO        Talk      00:30, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Very tasty. It has enough spice, and a tiny tad more sauce than needed, which makes it even better. However, a little few adjectives. 9/10 Hellur chap, wanna hear a creepy story??? 16:55, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

This sounds like the Rake. Jester of Sorts 17:28, July 8, 2012 (UTC)Jester of Sorts

NiceIwillkillyou333 (talk) 22:57, November 26, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, the Random Page link is finally redirecting me to some quality pasta. Bravo, sir; this was such a well-written story. ArrestRose 23:59, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

I agree it does remind me a lot of the Rake, but it is a very decent poem, one of the better ones on the site. Kudos! don't yell it gives me anxiety (talk) 23:36, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

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