I liked this story. It wasn't enough to be creepy, per se, but it was morbid. There was great attention to detail, but there were some grammar and spelling mistakes (I can't edit them). All in all, this was a great story. Cjs812 23:45, January 9, 2012 (UTC)
Good story. I kept expecting it to turn out to be the wrong girl.Grassrunnerdaughter (talk) 03:39, January 10, 2012 (UTC)