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My name is ashley and I was told by a man called steven all that stuff... then he nearly masturbeted my even though i was only 13...

BRAVO SIR!

You have just made my day with this amazing pasta! Enjoy your spot on my favorites list. ~ Avenging Angel 17:15, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

It's not bad, but....

The NSFW stuff in here is incredibility badly written, it makes the whole thing awkward to read rather then emotionally jarring. Try to use language that is more emotional then clinical, though there are PLENTY of guides online for this kind of thing, check them out.

HOLY--

Jesus, Mary and Jerome, that was epic. THEN WHO WAS PHONE? (talk) 05:53, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

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