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You know, I liked this one. Sure, it could use a lot of work, it tries a little too hard to be self-aware, and it falls into some cliches, but the overall story was entertaining. I see a ton of potential in this one. |
You know, I liked this one. Sure, it could use a lot of work, it tries a little too hard to be self-aware, and it falls into some cliches, but the overall story was entertaining. I see a ton of potential in this one. |
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Serious Wall of Text issues in places. ClericofMadness 14:15, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
You know, I liked this one. Sure, it could use a lot of work, it tries a little too hard to be self-aware, and it falls into some cliches, but the overall story was entertaining. I see a ton of potential in this one.
I agree with Cleric, needs to be abridged. Otherwise, good, entertaining story.