You're doing it right.[]
I really enjoyed this. The sense of hopelessness if you were to actually awake to it, you made it seem so real. Very nicely put. ~ Avenging Angel 19:43, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
THIS IS GREAT[]
one of the best creepypastas ever
I know, I know, it's a creepypasta, but the sun can't go supernova; it's not massive enough. It's even worse when you consider that the story (correctly) portrays the sun entering its Red Giant phase, which makes me wonder why the title was chosen considering it isn't exactly honest about what it's describing (and isn't a trollpasta). I might get back later to fully reviewing this story. Oh the (Habitat for) Humanity! 20:24, October 27, 2012 (UTC)
nice[]
this is very....interesting. the title isn't all that accurate though but other than that great story. now that i think about it the sun, if a white dwarf hit it, could actually explode in a manner similar to a supernova.
Shakalaka96 (talk) 15:55, October 31, 2012 (UTC)
My God, Guys. Thank you.[]
This is apparently a good story. I found recordings of it. MY FUCKING GOD, YES. Let's go for PoTM, guys!
—Preceding unsigned comment added by Wolfenmaus (talk • contribs).
Awesome[]
I like the way you portrayed the helplessness, and generally the way you smoothly ended and began the pasta. I need to read more of your work.
_Kill1mes • TalkContributionsEdit Count 12:13, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
Super[]
This one is kind of a diferent one from you wolfen. It is quite short, but sends a good message. I specially like the imagery used in this pasta. It allows the reader to know what is going on and gives you a sence of impending doom that is quite nice. I can't really say, again, that it stands out amongst the major creepypastas, but its a good one indeed. I give it a 7 or 8 out of 10. Peter, the magical turtle (talk) 19:37, July 8, 2013 (UTC)