Pasta has a good concept if you eliminate the "reality" and "explanation" concepts although the ending doesn't make sense. You should probably change the ending to something like "You will be forced to play the pipes until the next piper comes to play them" Celticfrost80 10:12, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
Actually... the ending does make sense. If you don't return them... you'll be trapped with the dead forever.... Werewolfoverlord12 (talk) 02:22, October 10, 2012 (UTC)