Archimedes! No!
This is pretty cool. I liked the "skipping" from thought to thought, like a literary jump cut. There's probably a name for that . . . But, it added tension and made the narrator seem unstable. Javer80 00:26, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
This isn't Archimedes, this si Socrates, the crow.
Moustacheman11 21:27, April 28, 2012 (UTC)