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This is pretty cool. I liked the "skipping" from thought to thought, like a literary jump cut. There's probably a name for that . . . But, it added tension and made the narrator seem unstable. [[User:Javer80|Javer80]] 00:26, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 
This is pretty cool. I liked the "skipping" from thought to thought, like a literary jump cut. There's probably a name for that . . . But, it added tension and made the narrator seem unstable. [[User:Javer80|Javer80]] 00:26, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
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This isn't Archimedes, this si Socrates, the crow.
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[[User:Moustacheman11|Moustacheman11]] 21:27, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

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Archimedes! No!

This is pretty cool. I liked the "skipping" from thought to thought, like a literary jump cut. There's probably a name for that . . . But, it added tension and made the narrator seem unstable. Javer80 00:26, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

This isn't Archimedes, this si Socrates, the crow.

Moustacheman11 21:27, April 28, 2012 (UTC)