I like this story, the concept is really interesting and the story flows nicely until the end, which is kinda letdown (I can't see how the guy could slam the door shut and escape it tbh). Also, I didn't like very much what happened to his girlfriend, she didn't have a good characterization and it felt like she was in the story only for the shock and gore value towards the end of it. But it was a nice pasta imo. 7/10

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