Very well written.
Nice, but the picture isn't really relevant to the pasta. SethOmega 23:10, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
hey, ashie here.
why on earth did you use the creepy cup thing spike created as the picture? it doesnt match the story. i love the story, tho. that was cool.
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"the luckiest man who ever walks this earth, is the one who finds true love." - Count Dracula 08:15, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
Like it. The idea of a winking moon instead of some stereotypical "damned object/creature" was both original and interesting. I think it also had some kind of sinister alure to it- how many of us at young age have been terrified of something trivial? I was beginning to write a great creepypasta, but alas, I died instantly- ObliterationoftheSelf|http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:ObliterationoftheSelf 16:43, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
I'm not sure what to think of this one. There's not a lot to say. What it lacks in substance it makes up for in the quality of the writing. JSilvis (talk) 00:24, September 6, 2012 (UTC)