Multipul paragraphs help readability alot.
That's just the face from the band disturbed?
I have to admint, this is one of the only pastas that genuinly scared me! did there used to be a picture at the bottom? Henry.galley 08:53, September 5, 2011 (UTC)
Where's the keyword? How can we be affected if we don't see the picture and read the word? Otherwise it's a decent pasta. Enzd 23:04, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
- The keyword is "Desperation". The last word in the pasta. StringCheeseAnonymous (talk) 23:05, November 23, 2012 (UTC)
If you dont want us to read this, then why post it at all??? CreepyStoryTeller 14:27, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
i think that is actully the face from disturbed. WTF?
I don't think thats the disturbed face, but it's very similar Kill1mes 15:01, June 4, 2012 (UTC)
Know we know who owns smile dog, LOL
Very nicely written, but the pasta just falls short of being creepy. The monster, or being, or the Grinning Man, is never actually there. It is just his acts. A story about corpses a murderer leaves behind is not that scary. A story about the murderer and the corpses he leaves behind is scary. Overall, 8/10. 41488p (talk) 08:07, November 4, 2012 (UTC)
Did you have to choose the cockmongler?
It was an okay pasta. Power of suggestion comes to mind when reading this. Non est ad astra mollis e terris via (Seneca). (talk) 23:07, January 11, 2013 (UTC)
One more goddamn day when I know what I want, and my want will be considered tonight! XD WeegeeBored (talk) 10:12, July 29, 2013 (UTC)