Hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Lilly Cannibal. 15:58, November 24, 2011 (UTC)
This is one of the creepiest pastas I've read in a while.
I am impressed. Genuinely creepy without being too gory or violent.
Not bad at all Strengthandconquer 12:11, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
Excellent! Quite creepy. Could have stretched it out though. Make it so you haven't seen its face until like halfway through the story, just a shadow in the window for some time. Then an amorphous figure. Then it gains more shape as the story goes on. Just something to think about. Mattboy115 (talk) 04:58, July 8, 2013 (UTC)