It says the monster had dimly lit sockets where eyes once resided. But the picture shows him with eyes.That Turtle guy 13:05, September 11, 2011 (UTC)
- The pic is of Jeff the Killer, but the story seems like it was probably written with an original character in mind (burnt out eyelids with eyes still intact are kind of a key trait of JtK). Still, the Jeff photo is creepy enough that it works. Dr. Malpractice 22:07, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Loved it! Linkotan 03:34, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
Ohai Jeff. Don't go scare people now. :) Volkoronado 17:19, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Wow, I actually liked it. That's a first for a pasta in quite awhile, legitimetely scary at parts. Well done. :3 Never underestimate a writer. 15:59, October 25, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks Jeff! Didn't feel like sleeping tonight anyways!! ^_^"
This is legitamatel one of the best Jeff pasta's Ive read. I hear them coming 22:00, February 10, 2012 (UTC)
If you still had the Jeff picture, this would probably be in my top favorite pastas (mostly because I can relate with a lot of it, besides the ending, of course). I would change the part of where you describe his facial features and replace those with facial features of Jeff the Killer, because Jeff is sort of what made this pasta so great. 7/10, just because the picture at the end ruined it for me. Nice work though.
What if I told you.. that the earth was a giant dragon.. and what if I told you.. that I could TRAIN this dragon. 22:08, November 11, 2012 (UTC) ~The Real Critic
I'm barely in my bedroom today. So this creepypasta just turned against you. "I was just enjoying the show... Then I got shot in the head." (talk) 09:28, December 14, 2012 (UTC)
There's a pasta just like this somewhere on the site, except with a lot less detail. hehe. well done!!
LadyAnonyma (talk) 13:54, March 28, 2013 (UTC)